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Title: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 06, 2008, 04:31:00 pm
Also written Zustashiger, this is a story-telling thread similar to Dreadfang's Dream Flame, except I'm not programming a game with the story, and there aren't many rules.

The setting is Zustashiger, meaning Ancient River in Dwarven. Whatever you do, the story must not leave this area. Meaning, creatures and things can leave, but until they return they cannot be written about. It is a wide, green valley with a flowing river in the center. It's about 2 miles around. At the start the majority of the land is rich meadows and thin forestry, and it is heavily populated by animals. Here are the details:

The area is quiet.
The river is unnaturally clouded, but not by dirt.
Plant life is light, and only weeds and gnarled shrubs grow. The soil is gray and infertile.
Animal life is sparse due to lack of plants.
Air is dark but clean.
Gravity and physics are that of Earth. (Or Dwarf Fortress)
The notable creatures are: Some scraggly wolves, and an occasional small animal. Sometimes evil creatures roam the soil, dark gnomes, kobolds, worgs. All the creatures are extremely thin and weak, most of them will kill anything for food.

Red's Tower
There is a fortress and tower in the south part of Zutashiger, many slave-workers live there. It is ruled by RED, a powerful construct of metal, hydra and Teeth flesh. A feast is being prepared there. A group of reakers are carrying the bronze statue back to the village with an apology. They are also carrying a huge barrel of ale.

A kobold, Kutarlin Az, has stolen a powerful soul-stone from RED's fortress and has gained RED's mental powers.

There is a group of dwarves living in ancient halls underground. They have begun to breed dogs and are mining. They could be regarded as an outpost. They are angered with the village.
There is at least one giant toad-like creature in the dwarven fortress.

There is a village in the heart of the valley, many human citizens live there. There are large farms in the community. The people are weak, however. Their skin is pale from the overshadowing clouds clutching the sunlight. Their eyes are sunken and sickness is common. They are angered with the fortress.


I stress you to keep posts on-topic, and if you have to say something out of topic mark it with OOC.

Write whatever you want! Feel free to add characters and creatures, describe their actions, and interact with other writer's creations. Have fun!
PS: I will be writing in this too sometimes.

Stats:
Writers: 6
Restarts: 1


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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 06, 2008, 05:47:00 pm
Over the hills a loud rumbling racket can be heard. Suddently a large weagon comes into view, followed by another, and another, and another, all pulled by oxen. At first glance they appear to have no driver, but closer examination reveals small stocky humanoids with bushy beards sitting at the reins. As the three wagons rumble down into the valley they begin to slow. On the side of the wagons some runes can be seen. To those skilled in the art of language it appears to read 'NPI'. Various animals are frightened by the sight and flee as the wagons stop near the river. The drivers get down from the wagons and more come from inside. Soon a large gathering of these strange humanoids have gathered, wearing their yellow helmets and pointing at bits of paper while yelling.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 06, 2008, 06:13:00 pm
OOC: In the beginning I will write quite a bit probably because Dark and I are the only ones who were in the last thread.

The humanoids begin to dig downward tunnels around the land. The animals are spooked and move farther away. One of the dwarves walks over and sits by the river, fishing. He sees something in the water, a dark figure, and he throws a rock at at it. Suddenly a shadow jumps out and latches onto his arm. "Looks like we have carp, folks." Says the apparent leader of the humanoids. The fisher manages to fling the carp back into the flowing waters, but he bears a nasty gash in his arm.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Armok on March 07, 2008, 08:18:00 am
The elven druid observes the humanoids from the top of a tree, careful not to be seen, "Dwarves!" he curses.
Then he goes to tell the community, leaping from treetop to treetop.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 07, 2008, 12:24:00 pm
A few humanoids (we could call them dwarves!) come out of the tunnels carrying axes. They move to the nearest tree and begin chopping it down. Soon it falls and they move onto another. A few other humanoids (lets call them dwarves!) come out of the tunnels now and begin dragging the felled trees into the tunnels. The process continues until 20 trees have been felled. Meanwhile it appears a large pile of stone blocks is building up outside one of the tunnels. What could these pesky dwarves be up to?
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 07, 2008, 12:44:00 pm
On the other side of the river (other side from the dwarves), a human appears, in black and white garments. He sits down, a few yards away from the river (in plain sight of the dwarves) and pulls out a flute. He plays for a while, when suddenly a log shoots out from one of the dwarves' tunnels and lands in front of the man. One of the dwarven woodcutter's axes flies away and chops up the log, before returning to the dwarves' hands. The dwarf is surprised, but continues to chop. The chopped wood ignites as the human plays his flute, and he stops playing to warm himself infront of the fire.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Armok on March 07, 2008, 02:51:00 pm
(You just invented(?) a brilliant magic system!  :D)
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 07, 2008, 02:53:00 pm
quote:
Originally posted by Armok:
<STRONG>(You just invented(?) a brilliant magic system!   :)
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 07, 2008, 04:06:00 pm
Another group of dwarves exit the tunnel. They were carrying a strange, long and hollow, drill type pipe carved skillfully out of nothing but rock. Another group rallied the oxen together. The dwarves and the oxen then gathered a short distance away from the entrance tunnels. The dwarves huffed and puffed to raise the pipe to a verticle position. Large holes were knocked into the pipe at the oxens shoulder height. The dwarves gathered up a large and sturdy looking branch and threaded it through the holes. They then tied the oxen up to the branch and set them walking in circles. Slowly the pipe sank into the earth, but eventually the branch broke as the holes were below the shoulder height of the oxen. The dwarves made new holes and threaded another sturdy branch through and repeated the process. They continued this process, breaking dozens of branches until finally the pipe hit something hard and stopped moving.

Various dwarves came out of the tunnels and started speaking with the drillers. Finally they left and more dwarves came back to start building supports for the pipe. Suddently the pipe started rising out of the ground by itself, though the dwarves didnt seem to take notice and continued building. After the pipe had risen two meters it stopped. A few minutes later the supports were finished and the pipe was secured in place.

By this point the stars were out, as the task was long and grueling. The tired dwarves led their oxen back to the tunnels. On their way they passed the pile of stone blocks. It had grown in size since the daytime.

(OOC: for those wondering about the pile of stone blocks, it's very near one of the tunnels and dwarfs were carrying blocks up there the whole time, I just didnt mention it for narative purposes or something!)

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 07, 2008, 05:14:00 pm
From his hollow under the old cyprus tree (It touches the river but is only is within sight of the dwarves tunnel) Dreadfang (The Changling) sees the hard labors of the stout dwarves, the large alluring pile of bricks, having never owned a brick he wanted one badly. Waiting till dark when he wouldn't be seen, he crept to the pile with an (to him) equal exchange, a solid gold chunk(as in a sizable peice). "I hope they will not miss the brick, as I will not miss the worthless lump of hard-rock, and shall they want it I will dishearten'dly give it back willingly," Dreadfang voiced to himself when replacing the brick. Crawling into his hollow he began stroking lovingly this worked treasure.

(OOC:Dreadfang is a changling, and as such has never made anything or used a tool of any fashion, to eat, wear, sleep on, or or use as weapon. and since you cant use gold as any of those in its unworked form it is just a hard-rock through which to dig his home.  Also his hollow is as low as the trees roots go and as high as the center of the tree's heart. If you want a comparitive think how a mole or prairi dog digs its home. He can speak all tongues, learn how to use tools and even to protect and serve. He dosnt care for worth and can change form to any creature or person he's seen and imitate it perfectly, and dont try to destroy his hollow for any reason, hes met with dragons and can deal incinerating heat to any attackers. If your post includes him please message/email me, it should be on my profile.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 08, 2008, 04:56:00 pm
During the night, smoke starts to erupt from the erect pipe, billowing thickly up into the sky. Nothing else seems to occur and slowly the sun starts to rise. The fisherdwarf who had not seen any more carp the previous day, came out of the tunnel to get an early start when he noticed the gleaming chunk of gold. His jaw dropped open and he dropped his fishing rod, grabbed the gold chunk and ran back inside the tunnel. Slowly all the dwarves were woken up and shown the gleaming gold, each gasping in turn. The dwarves didnt emerge from the tunnel that day, they seemed to be debating the gold, while a steady stream of smoke continued to rise from the pipe.

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 09, 2008, 12:15:00 am
Dreadfang having seen the uproar of the dwarves over, what he thaught was their missing brick, and the what he thaught they considered unworthy trade, desided that he should give more hard-rock(What dwarves would call gold) in exchange since he had more then enough of the useless matter. "I hope this will compensate them" he said grabbing a 'small' solid rock of gold about the size of bolling ball from a loose-ly packed filler tunnel(tunnel to put removed dirt)and hauling it to his enterance in the still dark surroundings. Having tired himself out while pulling the heavy hard-rock about 1/5 mile and unto the now very tall pile of bricks, he desided to take a short rest and spotted the abandoned fishing rod, wondering what it was (mostly what kind of plant grows into it) he desided to have a further look at it so he 'borrowed' it hoping that the "Small hairy faced things"(that one can consider a dwarf) would not be spiteful for its temperary loss. Crawling back into his hollow his thaughts were filled with 'I wonders'.

(OOC:For expressed definition a changling is a creature that can change shape at will as a chameleon changes color, generaly not evil(Depends of genotype) mostly just ignorant of alignments, in its true form it is much like a dwarf but with no hair/beards razor-sharp teeth and claws (that also act like digging tools) and the apperence of lifelessness and twistedness in its hide and flesh, its entire body is of the toughness unrivaled by armor and teeth and claws like that of adamantium weapons, their mating habits are strange and require a seperate host(such as a dwarf)to carry the child and raise it to maturity when it 'leaves' before dropping its mask of the host's race, since female changlings dont possess any traditional 'baby making' stuff she passes the egg to the male for 'stealthed'(WINK)'insemination'(WINK). Changlings are an off branch of primitive dwarven ancestry shared with trogladites, rock giants, and more close-ly to shape-shifters and molemen:ENDOOC)

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 09, 2008, 09:14:00 am
The whole dwarven operation had ground to a halt. As the sun rose once more into the sky, a large group of dwarves exited the tunnel, not noticing the missing fishing rod, but the large gold chunk. They swarmed around the pile of stone blocks and started squabbling, where did this come from, they ask. Perhaps a friendly spirit is simply offering them good fortune, literally. It took two dwarves but they hauled the heavy gold chunk inside the tunnels, meanwhile the other dwarves were still squabbling about this mystery. Thinking they would get more gold, the dwarves began work on more stone blocks, they would need them later anyway!
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 10, 2008, 04:39:00 pm
Having no clue what the fishing rod was or to its use, he desided to ask the dwarves, having not personally met a dwarf his ploy was so-so and wouldn't stand any sort of long attention, doing his best to keep size, hairyness, and bulk but having no idea of dwarven color, texture, or a good dwarven accent he formed the best he could. He desided that to get correct information he would either have to 'borrow' one dwarf for intense questioning, or inprove his mimic vastly. Taking the fishing pole in one hand and a chunk of shiny-stone(gems of assorted value) the size of a heart(minor) for the dwarves lost work time in the other he crawled from his hollow and twords the dwarven tunnel. Having picked a waiting spot for his prey(I mean Dwarf) he waited until he saw a lone dwarf searching for something by the river "Maybe he's looking for this", he said glancing at the rod. Jetting towards the river at what would appear Ultra-Dwarven speeds, he arrived at the river and the dwarf before even incressing his heart-rates. "What are you looking for", Dreadfang question with a extremly distinct accent of difference to any dwarf. "Looking for my fishing rod", the fisherdwarf said patting down some reeds, "You have an odd accent, what hall do you hail from", the dwarf said glancing at Dreadfang and spying the fishing rod said "Hey, thats my ...", but stoped when he saw what was gripped around it, darted his sight at the face of what to the unfortunate dwarf seemed to be his certain death, followed shortly by the total amount of blood draining from this stout dwarf's head(he passed out, poor dwarf), Dreadfang thaught this was quite a bad sirvival instinct from such a creature, but found it useful while carrying the dwarf to his hollow, leaving the Shiney-stone in its place will do for compansation.


(OOC:If you want to do the dwarfs role you need to message me first to get the details correct.:ENDOOC)

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 10, 2008, 04:56:00 pm
It was getting late before another dwarf exited the tunnels and looked around. "Fernhaght, were are ye? We're all hungry in here and this gold is worth naught till the caravan comes! Whats takin' so long? By now ye should have dozens a fish fer us!" The dwarf looked around again but could see no other dwarves in sight, but instead the small pile of gems sitting by the river. "Strange things be happening! Here where our fisher should be is naught but a pile of gems! Gems dont feed hungry dwarves!" Either way he took the gems back into the tunnels. The situation was dire now, wealth was comming out of nowhere, but if they didnt do something soon they would all starve!

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 13, 2008, 04:09:00 pm
Sorry for my absence, I was stranded without internet.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 13, 2008, 04:12:00 pm
-error post, nevermind this-

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 13, 2008, 08:07:00 pm
CRAP CRAP CRAP STUPID EDIT AND QUOTE BUTTONS!
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 14, 2008, 08:22:00 am
(OOC: hehehe, dont forget to add in the point about smoke rising from the drill-pipe.)
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 16, 2008, 04:54:00 pm
Behind a large oak a group of three elves armed with short-swords spy upon the dwarves. They seem know what the changeling has been doing, but only vaguely. They see the black smoke and scowl. They wonder why the dwarves must use such dirty machines. The leader of the three speaks to the other two, and the pair sneak closer, until they are mere yards away from a main tunnel entrance. A woodsdwarf comes out of the tunnel, apparently going off to fall a tree. The elves pounce on him, and quickly knock him unconscious. As other dwarves rush to the sound, the woodsdwarf is already far away, dragged by the elves.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 17, 2008, 10:08:00 am
The dwarves looked around in vain and tore at their beards. "Alas we are doomed! Our fisher is gone and now our farmer has been taken as he went to cut wood for our beds! Our only option now is to hunt for food." So the dwarves started arguing about who should take up the crossbow to go hunting. After much yelling a young dwarf finally offered to become the ambusher, despite his young foolishness. "Alas we have no choice! Send him off to hunt deer and rabbits then, for we musnt fail our mission here, or we will all be outcast from our jobs!" With that the dwarves went back inside to continue work as ever more stone blocks were placed outside, a hill of blocks became a mountain of blocks. Meanwhile the young hunter left to bring back some food.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 19, 2008, 10:32:00 am
(OOC: I cannot play this story-game by myself! Someone please save me from Helmaroc's desperate wrath!)
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 21, 2008, 11:32:00 am
Dreadfang having a quite incompasitated dwarf on his hands, desided to spy on the dwarves more and now noticed a gathering of pointy ear'd ones attacking the hairy faced ones, "I must helps them! they have the smooth rocks." Darting from the hollow leaving the dwarf unwatched, he crawled into a tree by a for the most-part lone elf, pulled it up without a sound and ripped it's head clean off, then whipped the corpse with such speed that it fell'd three trees before it exploded against a boulder, and sent sent sprays of blood gore and parts raining into the nearby river. "This should warn them!" Dreadfang said hurling the head towards the fort.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 21, 2008, 12:03:00 pm
A busy dwarf walked over to a tunnel, but he tripped on something strange. He looked to see a head of an elf! He screamed and ran in to warn the others. Soon another dwarf came out and took the head inside.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 21, 2008, 01:39:00 pm
The dwarves discussed the elf head for a long time and finally decided that whoever did this gave them the treasure too, and whoever took their dwarves were elves! So they stuck the head on a wooden spike and planted the spike outside the main tunnel, that should teach those elves! Meanwhile the marksdwarf came back with a deer on his shoulders and many rabbits tied to his belt. "Hurah! We shall feast on our victory today, we now have food, and the elf menace has surely been taught a lesson!" And so the dwarves prepared the meat and once the moon had rose they set torches and tables outside. All the dwarves had gathered at this large table where many meat dishes sat and steins of ale waited. Hurah they cheered as they began their feast, work would begin tomorrow!
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 21, 2008, 06:19:00 pm
OOC: It's spelled hurrah   :D.

The man across the river had been observing the dwarves, and he was awoken by shouts of joy. He saw the gruesome totem outside of their home, and grimaced. He pulled out his flute and began to play. The head of the elf was shot off the stake, and landed on the ground. Then, a neck began to grow from the head, and then shoulders, and eventually there was an entire body, not just a severed head. The body was limp, but in a moment or two, the elf rose. He was naked, but soon silver clothing wrapped around him. No one knew at the moment, but the elf who was 'created' had the same soul and mind as the beheaded one. The elf stood for a moment, shocked, before darting into the brush.

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 22, 2008, 04:01:00 am
Dreadfang having seen the risen elf, and the dark and light robed person blowing on the "Twig?", he fumed and flamed, and actualy lit the tree he was perched on on fire. Jumping from the tree and darting towards his hollow, he didn't note that he the foliage behind him was catching fire from his touch, leaving a trail of flames behind. Having reached his hollow and crawled inside he found to his frustration that the dwarf was gone, probably run off, and as if a last straw brake-ing he exploded into a torrent of fury and flames that erupted from the hollow in a extremly visible cluster pillar of fire around twenty feet surrounding and above the old cypris.


(OOC:If burning trees dont get elves pissed nothing will, dont worry its small fires like burning twigs, also to follow The Dwarfs Escape!)


EDIT DO TO RUSHED SPELLINGS.

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 22, 2008, 05:12:00 am
Fernhaght the fisher dwarf who had been held "captive" by the "Dragon faced beast" awoke to find himself in blackness and the warmth of mother soil on his back. "Alive...but where?", he said frustrating to see in the darkness, reaching out he touched somthing hard and fimilar, "My fishing rod, here?" Picking up the rod he stumbled around until he saw a peircing beam of briliant light, walking into this light, he noticed glints of gems and rare metals covering the rough hewn walls, "I got to get out of here, drool over treasures later." he said crawling out the hole, getting his berrings in the now blinding sunlight he rushed off towards the fortress and not halfway he looked back to see a plume-age of flames rising from the direction of the "Den" of his captor,
"That could have been me, I better go tell the others" Fernhaght mouthed as he started to run.

(OOC:Pick up on this if you want... If you woundering why I write like a book, its because I'm a bookwriter.)

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 22, 2008, 09:28:00 am
The resurrected elf had run back to his friends, and told them about the beheading and the flames he saw as he was leaving. The other elves were furious. "Prepare for war! No, not war...destruction!" cried the general elf. The elves suited up and gathered their weapons, then a small army of 80 marched out to the dwarven tunnels.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 22, 2008, 10:47:00 am
By this point the dwarves were all asleep inside their cave. As the sun rose shouts were heard from the tunnel and many dwarves came out carrying shovels. The young hunter left to catch more meat while the other dwarves took out various drawings and starting chattering to eachother. Finally they seemed to come to agreement. They took their shovels and began digging a small trench along the  valley all the way up to the river, then they began carrying blocks from the now massive stockpile and started laying them in the trench. They added more blocks on top of these and secured them with iron bars and glue. Slowly what looked like a wall was taking shape, leading from the nearby hills to the edge of the river. Suddently a dwarf called out, "Alright lads, its break time now, when the ale is gone we'll get started on the other side!" With that the dwarves returned to the tunnels, unknowing of the mean and angry elves.

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 23, 2008, 02:48:00 am
Fire, Fury, Anger uncontroled and rapidly escalating. Bellowing roars of pure rage. Dreadfang a once curious, confused, compasionate changling has all but vanished in this tremendous cascade of anger. "Elves!", "Dwarves!", "Humans!", he fumed these words clawing at the enterance to his hollow, fire-ing his gaze out the small hole he saw the last thorn in his side, "WAR!", He roared, and at this his last shred of conscious thaught was torn apart. What follows can only be discribes as "Hell breaking loose", Now Dreadfang earns his name because all that one can feel is dread. None are safe, From this beast from the blackness of anger, so powerful it turns the sky black in mourning for the deaths to ensue. With the power of fear and the weapons of fang, claw, scale, and flame, even a dragon of boldest stature would beg for life at the hand of this "Nightmarish Beast".


(OOC:Ok imagine a dragon, claws, teeth, scales, and fire. Now with this dragon in your mind imagine a warped and corruped perspective of a dragon at least three times the size of the first dragon with exagerated features, that would be Dreadfang's current apperance. He fly-ing around breathing fire right now.
Note that if the war doesn't end soon he will rain fire upon everthing outside.

Also the first post should be edited more into "The beheaded elf is now alive the dwarves have/are dug trences/built a wall, 80 elves now not 3 + how many dwarves are there exactly?   Oh and the Changling is flying around in dragonish form... the sky is now blackened and a large section of the forest near the river is charred and the river downstream from this contains fallen soot.
Also sorry for BIG POSTS!
:ENDOOC)

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 23, 2008, 09:52:00 am
The entire area was in havoc. No one was sleeping, all were either fighting, fleeing or dying. Except one. The human across the river was sitting calmly, smiling even. He pulled out his flute, played a sharp note, the beginning of a long song. The river began to boil and shake. Colossal humanoid mounds of stone and earth began to rise. Out of the burning fires men of fire started to sprint out and melt nearby creatures. The enraged changling attacked them, and burned down or shattered many of these elementals, but they did not stop. Out of the air rain started to pour, causing smoke and steam to flood all oxygen. All of the dwarves were dead, and not many elves were still alive, the ones that were alive had gone insane. The changeling was attacking anything that moved, even flying mounds of ash. Suddenly, the human's calm demeanor disappeared. He held out his flute, and snapped it in two, and with that, he vanished. But the elementals kept coming.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 24, 2008, 04:59:00 am
(OOC:Nice retort post exactly in the spirt of things!)

Dreadfang having destroyed everything, from dwarf to elf to elementals rised from the destruction, The forests were gone burned in his fury, the ground melted in his rage, the stone battered in his anger. Gone all gone.

With the land desroyed and the cause of the war between elf and dwarf and changling, gone. (Points at the wizard) the cause was pulled from the fires, figurativly. The fuel beneath Dreadfang's rage had gone out, but with the the imposing danger of the elementals still looming he had to remain dragoned out to survive. (His reason has returned) for three days and nights he faught the relentless elementals. Tired wounded and heavily bleeding he destroyed them...until suddenly they stopped (Magic Effect whole life). Dreadfang Roared a Triumphant bellowing howl, "Alive, But at what cost?" he said shrinking and returning to normal shape. Burning, destroyed, dead, ruined, all gone. Dropping to his knees and wailing crys of torment. Weeping there in the dust he saw a freeshly grown fire-bloom. "Even from Death can come life...life?", looking around he started gathering his memory of the risen elf. "If humans can do it so can I!" The sound, the stance, the energy. As he mused the wizard's action something unexpected happened that thrilled Dreadfang with joy, The plants near him were alive again, and when he directed the sound at a tree it to sprung back to verdancy. "Higher, louder, I will give life back." so he flew high above the clouds and began an erupting canter that would litraly "Wake the dead".

(OOC:Life is returning to the area the dead are returning to life, normal life. But for the far long dead who knows?   Hint:Zombie raisings. No whole magic  life on resurections.)

THE ORIGINAL DWARVES AND ELVES ARNT ZOMBIES!

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 24, 2008, 04:47:00 pm
Dreadfang continued to raise plants and animals. Then he began to 'clean' the ground my using magic to clear away ash and form new life in the soil. As he turned away from his first patch of cleaned land, it began to wiggle. A bony hand forced through the soil, and a moan was heard deep in the earth. Dreadfang did not notice, and continued to clean the soil and in turn, revive to ancient dead. They don't like to be revived.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 27, 2008, 04:52:00 pm
(OOC:considering the above post here is a re-write.)

Dreadfang continued to return life to plants and animals* and dwarves and elves*(while fly-ing high up in the sky). Touching down he then began to 'clean' the dust (using his wings) to blow away ash that had settled in to a heavy blanket. As he turned away from his first patch of cleaned earth, strangly it began to wiggle. A bony hand forced through the soil, and a moan was heard deep in the earth. Dreadfang did not take heed, and continued to clean the soil and in turn, return life to the ancient dead. Unfortunetly they don't like to be desturbed...

(OOC:If you are going to write actions with my character expect them to be "finalized", not to be obsesive but I like consistancy)

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 27, 2008, 04:54:00 pm
OOC: I don't see why you rewrote it, but that is fine with me)
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 27, 2008, 09:16:00 pm
I like suportive details.
/hug helmaroc
/cry for being mis-understood
/drink to feel better
/sleep on the floor after falling down drunk
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 28, 2008, 06:15:00 am
(OOC: we need Dark to post. Or another writer)
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Dark on March 28, 2008, 06:46:00 am
(OOC: Sorry, all this death and destruction kinda derailed the story I was following and I dont know where to start now. I supose I could come up with some zombie hunting uber dragon lord of awesomeness or something. Nah I'm just joking, I might come back if someone manages to fix the thread. Goodluck!)
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on March 28, 2008, 08:24:00 am
Dreadfang raises the last of the dwarves(from a distance)and they go about repairing their broken fortress.

(OOC:Fixed XD)

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on March 28, 2008, 05:29:00 pm
With the life restored (though some of the dwarves are very tan) the place begins to regain it's activity. But, one day, a dwarf was out chopping wood, when something moved out of the corner of his eye. He turned to see a blank bony face staring at him. He yelped and hacked away at the being. After it was fairly diced, he realized it was a zombie. "I need to drink more," he muttered and ran inside to tell the others.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on April 01, 2008, 04:47:00 pm
The zombies of course, did not die, as they were dead. But, it is possible to stop them, by cutting off all their limbs and their heads so they resemble those strange statues that humans like. So, the dwarves did this, and made a large pile of squirming undead stub-lings. Once in a while, a severed leg would hop about, trying to find it's matching body, (and often attaching to the wrong one, or even something else, which explains the strange five-legged cow incident) but for now the undead were taken care of, and the life was fairly normal again. However, not all of the risen were simple humans. All kinds of dark beasts had died on Zustashiger soil, and now they are alive.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on April 02, 2008, 12:51:00 pm
Of the dark beasts included one Squeaky Wizzle Bottoms, the clumbsiest dwarf of them all, he promply tripped on his beard and rolled over three deer, "Ops?", he groawned, and started off to cause chaos to some random encounter...

(Ocasionaly will trip over things and destroy haplessly anything he touches)

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on April 02, 2008, 04:13:00 pm
OOC: ?
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 14, 2008, 03:14:00 pm
All of the sudden, a bright light filled they eyes of all the beings.
They felt something burning, and they were gone. The earth went inside-out. The river boiled. The trees split with loud cracks. Every living thing was killed, every moving thing stopped, everything ended.

For a day and a night this lasted, stillness. Nothing. Then something. A flash. A sprout. Grass grew, trees shot up from the soil, the river filled, and there was again life. But everything else was gone without a trace. Everything. The world was reborn.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Kagus on May 14, 2008, 03:19:00 pm
Do you think changing the thread title would be a good idea?  Y'know, so it doesn't have the weird character-pointers?  Here's the character it needs: ė


Awww...  Kinda cute, ain't it?

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 14, 2008, 03:21:00 pm
Done.

WRITE

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 14, 2008, 06:31:00 pm
All was quiet, but then from an area near the river, a shovel blade was shoved up from underground. It then disappeared back into the soil. Another moment, and it was pushed up again, forming a larger hole. After a few more shoves, a kobold hopped out of the hole. It glanced around, and hopped back in. About a dozen kobolds then surfaced, all looking alike. They quickly ran into the woods, later to return carrying rocks. They continued making trips like this, taking the rocks into their tunnels. After about fifty rocks were moved, they ceased to return to the surface.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Kagus on May 15, 2008, 05:55:00 am
From within the depths of reality, there came an imbalance.  This imbalance, forged in the time of creation, manifested itself in the form of a giant rose with a stem as thick as a tree trunk and petals of utter darkness.  Death, as palpable as smoke, swirled about the petals as the ground near the stem began to die and turn to ash.  As the Witherbloom sank its roots deeper into the soil and pushed its thorns farther out from the stem, pale grey clouds collected overhead to cover the witherlands in a shroud of gloom.

If left alone, the imbalance would twist the world into a charred mockery of its former beauty.  And so began the age of the Black Rose.  The Witherbloom.


There, a plot device.  Have fun.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 15, 2008, 07:03:00 pm
OOC: DreadFanG and Dark, my main writers, feel free to 'bring back' former elements. The changling didn't get to develop much in the story, and it would be interesting to have him/it? back.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Kagus on May 16, 2008, 01:02:00 am
I haven't seen Dark for ages, and from the sound of things when I last heard from him he's probably not going to be coming back any time soon.

DreaDFanG...  Well, who knows?  Hard to tell with him.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 16, 2008, 08:07:00 pm
Kagus, could you help keep this alive? I'm sure you can think of something. Please, the little children depend on it.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Kagus on May 17, 2008, 11:31:00 am
The houses in the hamlet of Torgrin's Dell began to warm as the morning sun crested the hill that flanked the Eastern side of the hamlet.  The farmers who made the majority of the population had already been awake and outside for some hours, in order to get as much work done in the fields before the sun reached its noonday zenith and made labor too hot to consider.  The straw hats that had earlier served to warm their heads from the pre-dawn chill were now fending off the heating rays of the sun as it slowly made its way up towards its rightful throne at the top of the sky.

They swung their scythes and threshed the grain, and all fell into the routine that had been practiced for years beyond memory in Torgrin's Dell.  But today would be different.

The farmers looked up as they heard the rumbling sound.  Their first thought was that of thunder, but the sky showed no storm signs.  They did not have long to ponder what the source of the sound was, for it soon made itself horrifyingly clear.

A veritable army of wild animals, their eyes white and their mouths frothing in sheer panic stampeded down from the hilltop and made their way blindly towards the fields.  The farmers tried to run, but few had the speed or even the youth to outpace the animal horde that fled the encroaching witherlands.

Most were injured, some were killed, not a one was left unaffected.  The animals stormed through the hamlet, crashing into buildings and entangling themselves into fences in their rush to get away from the unnatural wastelands that were still a few miles off.  Few of the townsfolk were outside at the time, but some of the elders had come out to smoke their pipes and watch the sun come up, and their legs were far too old and brittle to fully escape the horde as it passed through.  

After the creatures had passed and left behind only the dead or wounded who had broken their own necks or legs in the stampede, Torgrin's Dell looked  as though it had been through a war.  The townsfolk, now more awake than they ever would have expected to be at this hour, came out of their homes to survey the damage and see which of their own had been hurt in the chaos.

They bemoaned the tattered state of their village, but none could have imagined what would happen to Torgrin's Dell at the end of the following week, when the witherlands came.


Hrrmph.  This kind of loose storytelling isn't really my style.  Best I could come up with.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 17, 2008, 10:28:00 pm
Well, that is some good writing, but kind of unclear.
1. Where is Torgrin's Dell?
2. Where did it come from?
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Kagus on May 18, 2008, 08:42:00 am
1. Torgrin's Dell is somewhere.  It is vaguely in the direction of the Witherbloom, and is the bloom's first official conquest.

2. My imagination, ye daft git.  Do I have to do everything around here?  Pah!

Counter-question, where did those kobolds come from?  Eh?  EH??


Ehh...  Right.  Essentially, it came from a bunch of people who settled there several decades earlier, and just recently came into view.  By us, mind you.  It's not like it used to be some sort of invisible town.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 18, 2008, 11:38:00 am
Alright. So Torgrin's Dell is in the area of Zustashiger?
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Kagus on May 18, 2008, 11:44:00 am
Ah, hadn't read the rules before.  Yeah, it's near it, near enough for the women to do their washing in it.  Thing is, the Witherbloom most certainly isn't.  It was put in place to be a sort of "adventurer destination", something the other folks would write stories about trying to destroy.

Sooo....   I guess it's time for a godly weedwhacker.  The bloom's a bit to "big" to stay inside the boundaries of the Zustashigėr area.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 18, 2008, 03:19:00 pm
Ah, thank you. Now, to edit...

And, should the 'effects' of the Witherbloom spread to Zushtashiger? Or should they be weaker than I have posted?

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Kagus on May 18, 2008, 03:32:00 pm
Eventually, yes.  But certainly not until more people start to take an interest.  

Yes, Torgrin's Dell is a human town.  As far as the Witherbloom effects, they're fine.  If anything, it's more powerful, snuffing out all but unnatural life.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 18, 2008, 03:50:00 pm
Near the edge of the valley, where rocky outcrops scatter the ground, a small thing appeared from the mist. It was short, humanoid. It began to run at alarming speed towards the village. However, in the darkness, nothing seemed to notice. As it got closer to the lantern-light of the city, details could be made  out and assumptions to what the creature was. It was a gnome, shorter and slimmer than a dwarf, but hairy nonetheless. It quickly snuck through the walls and vanished in the dark streets.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: LeoLeonardoIII on May 19, 2008, 06:27:00 pm
They came at night. The bringers of death and destruction, the ones everyone blamed for destroying their little valley and causing so much hardship. At night the Dwarves returned.

They wore kitten leather skirts, and spoke with strange accents. One, obviously the leader, bullied the rest because he had a large nose, a metal cap, and a crossbow made from the bones of an Elf. They snuck in with their little wagon, crossed the tumbled-down Dwarven wall between the hill and the river, and found the old Dwarven hall.

"Urist, do you think this is it?" whispered one dwarf. She prodded a skull totem lying in the ashy dirt near the entrance.
"I do believe so, Urist" the leader whispered back. He whistled long and low at the entrance, lit himself a pipe, and sat down to think. In the overcast night his ruddy face was lit by the red glow of the match, until it went out. He puffed.
After a short time, the other dwarves got up from their break and started tearing apart the wagon. Barrels rolled out, along with some copper bars, a few blocks of green stone, a coil of rope, some bags, and one precious anvil. These things they carried inside, while the human town slept. And in the morning there was no indication what was going on under the earth.

But the silence was soon broken, for in the dawn a horrific shriek from across the river - "MY BABY! WHERE IS SHE?" - and a quick file of tiny shapes carrying tiny bundles jumped down into their hole near town.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 19, 2008, 07:18:00 pm
Screams and yells could be heard for days while the city ran about in confusion, many of the infants had disappeared. And no one knew how. Well, no one who would speak of it. The gnome appeared from the gates a few days after the incident, in a black cloak. He ran out of the city at extreme speed, and jumped into what seemed to be a hole in the fields.

Gliggrick snuck down the stone halls in haste, carrying a silvery dagger. He hid in every crevice in shadow available. Eventually, he came to what he was searching for.

OOC: Feel free to use Gliggrick the gnome in your writing.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: LeoLeonardoIII on May 20, 2008, 10:55:00 am
Picks rang in the distance. The sound of metal on stone, the Dwarven heartbeat, their cultural anthem. A dwarf hustled down the cool hallway, wringing water out of his beard. He came upon the rough stone door leading to the leader's office. It was ajar, swarms of puppies keeping it open.
The dwarf slipped through into the damp, bare office.

"So I see the guard dog breeding program is well underway" said the dwarf, pulling off his hat. He shined up the little metal gear symbol on the front, shook out the olms, smoothed back his hair, and put it back on.

"Mm" the leader replied. "Is the well built yet?"

"Sure thing, chief. The first well room flooded, so we had to dig out another one above it. That one flooded too, so we kept going. Lucky for us the well was right under the hill or we'd have to drink in a wooden shack."

The leader Urist grimaced. He well knew they were running low on booze. Their planter was working, but it would be a while before the Plump Helmets matured and even longer before they could be made into wine.
"And how about the entrance traps?"

The mechanic sighed. "Well, chief, the magma forges were all sealed off. I think they had to do it in a hurry, and their anvil was back in there. The miners are trying to dig a second shaft to breach magma again, but it's slow going. They keep-"

Suddenly a grimy dwarf covered in white stone dust burst in. Chalk-white and wild-eyes, he shouted "Sir! We've struck Mica!"

The leader coughed. "Praise the miners" he muttered half-heartedly. The miner's smile fell, in stages, and after a short moment he backed out of the office. Outside, a second miner frantically whispered "What did he say?" The other replied "Well, he didn't seem all that excited, but MICA! You know what we could do with mica?" The conversation trailed off as they breezed down the hallway.

The mechanic turned back to the leader. "Anyway, we don't have any weapons for the traps. I'm putting together a lot of stone mechanisms and such, and I can put up a few stone-fall traps. But until we get the forges up and running, I can't do much."

The leader well knew that the area had been deforested earlier. No wood means no charcoal for running a forge. They hadn't struck coal, and the landscape wasn't good for it anyway. They needed that magma.

"Get creative, Urist my boy. Stone-fall traps will have to do for now." The mechanic shrugged, and kicked aside a few puppies as he left, scratching his head. Something strange was brewing in his head, an odd plan. Something ... that he would keep a secret for now.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 21, 2008, 04:48:00 pm
Sorry for not updating as fast as usual, I was unable to get on the internet, out of town, blah blah blah.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: LeoLeonardoIII on May 23, 2008, 12:06:00 pm
A curious kobold crept along the river, sniffing the air. He smelled Dwarves nearby. He crept closer to the hill, where he found a rusty metal pipe covered with brush. A delicious scent wafted out, very mushroomy, with a hint of something sweet. All the kobolds had been eating were the bundles of grass wafers they brought from the homeland.

The kobold snuck around the hill. He spotted a kitten tied to a root, and the kitten spotted him. It mewed curiously. The kobold threw a rock and knocked it out. He crept onward, and saw a few other kittens tied up around the perimeter inside the old wall.

He sidled up to the old, scarred door. Bones littered the ground, both Dwarven and Elven, and plenty of animal bones as well. There were new footprints. And the lock on the door had been repaired.

Out came the kobold lockpicking tools: a few bent pieces of wire, a flat metal shimmy, a leather flask of oil for the hinges, and a thin knife. He worked the lock, hunched over it, and suddenly heard a noise behind him!

---

The Human villagers strode up the hill, angry, bearing pitchforks and shovels, pickaxes and torches. There was quite a crowd. Dogs ran up and down the mob, and a few agitators kept them moving. They approached the old Dwarf Fortress, past the old wall, right up to the door. They started banging down the door with their picks.

Suddenly the door sprang outward! The foot-thick stone slab smashed into four of the villagers, trapping two underneath and stunning a couple others. Then the snap of a rope, and a great crash. From inside the entrance rolled an enormous stone gear, 3 feet thick and seven feet across. The mechanism rolled straight out, grinding down two villagers before striking a rock and spinning out of control. The spinning Felsite mechanism struck many villagers, landing beyond the fallen door, directly on the mob's main agitator. His hand was all that stuck out from under the gear.

And in their panic, the villagers dropped their tools, some their hats and shoes, in their haste to flee the deathtrap. Of the angry mob that came, only a few stragglers left.

A short time later, two Dwarves wandered out of the entrance. They admired the nice door lying on the ground. But the stone mechanism was what really impressed them. It was completely carved on the visible side, with images of Tentacle Demons striking down Elves. The Tentacle Demons were laughing. When they picked it up, and scraped off the villager under it, they found the other side to be carved with a rendition of an image of a Dwarf eating cheese.

They rolled the mechanism back into the dark passage, and left it lying against the wall for the mechanic to reset his trap. By unspoken agreement they decided that the cheese engraving should be on the wall-side.

They went back for the door, to replace it on its hinges. But while they were bringing in the gear, a quiet shape slipped in and blended into the darkness.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 23, 2008, 02:45:00 pm
Gliggrick awoke, and silently slid out from under the bed. A startling 'Eiik!' came from above him, and he quickly silenced the young dwarf under the sheets. Remaining hidden, he crept out of the room and down the hallway. He continued until he reached a door that was shaking slightly, and loud barking could be heard from behind. He quickly opened the door and plunged his knife into the crack. A howl escaped the space before it was muffled by the door as it closed. Gliggrick killed all the dogs, but as he approached the door to leave, it opened.

A dwarf wielding a whip walked in, and immediately cracked it on Gliggrick. Gliggrick released a yelp, and jumped on the dwarf, after a while, the dwarf lay unconscious, likely to bleed to death, and the gnome quickly running out of blood from his many wounds. He began to stumble down the stone halls, but was quickly ambushed from all directions.

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: LeoLeonardoIII on May 24, 2008, 12:03:00 am
The puppies leapt on the gnome, yelping and nibbling. He shook them off, throwing them against the walls. He rushed onward, down the main corridor, down the stairs, down, down. At last he came to a wall recently breached, and beyond a torchlit room dominated by a great adamantite seal. Beside it, a lever also of adamantite.

The gnome ran forward, pulled the lever with all his might, and the seal began to open like an iris. He jumped through into darkness. Behind him, two dwarves ran in and frantically pulled the lever to close the seal. The gnome turned as the last sliver of light was cut away.

He was alone, standing in a dark room. The pungent stench of mildew emanated from the wet dungeon walls. He heard water running farther down. The walls were engraved with horrible carvings of giant toad creatures eating Dwarves, Humans, and Elves. And farther in were some horrific depictions of Tentacle Demons and their depravity.

The gnome crept forward, shaking with fear. Blood dripped from his knife and his many wounds. Suddenly from the darkness he saw two glowing golden eyes. The ... thing croaked, breathing out with one word and in with the next.

"Where ... are YOU ... going ... fleshthing?"

And then it laughed, a gutteral croaking laugh that was echoed from farther inside the now-sealed tunnels.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 24, 2008, 09:08:00 am
Gliggrick was shaking and bleeding, his  lack of energy prevented him from blocking the long tongue that wrapped around his arm and retracted, sending him flying into the giant toad's mouth. A few crunches, and a clink of metal falling on stone, and Gliggrick was gone.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on May 24, 2008, 01:39:00 pm
OOC:sorry I've been gone I thaught the thread died out, glad to see it though!
This is going to be weird but its actualy two separate things Dreadfang's continuation and an addition of The Collector.

DREADFANG
Having once lived in a blisful ignorance, until that fateful day of rage, now dreadfang lives in knowlegded fer of himself and of his powers, he has thus banished himself to solitude, deep below the land, in a lybrinth of stone, to be lost to all forever...or would he?  

(OOC: Dreadfang is now a Use-able character, but only if you find a way threw the lybrinth and its countless traps, pitfalls, and dangers.

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COLLECTOR
Gerald Red, was always curious about the ways of life.  In his youth he killed his neighbor's child to find out how the human body worked.  In his teens he killed both his parents to do comparitive anatomy.  As a young adult he killed an elf, dwarf, and gnome to find species simalarities. But only as an adult did he find his purpose in life, in the form of a wizard. Having beaten the wizard to death with his own arms, did he find the magical inclined creatures have a severly different body anatomy, a muscle stucture that can only be descibed as differnt, and a specialized brain structurage that is foreign.  At the age of fifty he was struck ill by a crippleing disease that gave him under a year to live.  All seemed hopeless until he met a Demon, that in exchange for its life gave him five extra years to his fading life.  In that time he looked for a Master of all trades, and found one in the far north, on a frozen island. Offering imortality in the form of a body of war, crafted using long forgoten techniques in a forge of dragon bone, over a magical fueled fire, blessed with countless spells and enchantments, and given conscous thaught by thrice cursing it with demon souls, permentently afixed to his flesh threw the anceint arts of fleshsmithing, necromancy, and soulbinding he has trancended to a level of power unheld by any but fleshgods.  For around a hundred years he has traveled collecting, exsperimenting, testing, and leaving a wake of death in his path.

Now RED stands on the edge of Zustashigėr, and has his eyes set on staying...

OOC:He is the size of a human, bloodrust colored, entirely covered in metal, completely evil, and is immune to almost everything, he is 154 years old, he carries twin wrist blades around 4 feet long, when sleeping or unconsous the armor takes over killing anything that threatens it, the armor is intelegent and super agile and can intercept attacks faster than lightning, and has other properties as well.

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 24, 2008, 03:57:00 pm
Alright, but the wizard is not currently in Zustashiger, and cannot be played until he arrives. And is Dreadfang under Zustashiger soil?

Oh yeah, and thanks for coming back!

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on May 25, 2008, 04:57:00 am
OOC:Correct but hes not a wizard...and the enterance to the lybrinth lies where the old tree use to...

"Perfect!", RED spoke threw the metal face, 'Indeed, it is a fine location for your dark fortress sire' the armor voiced in his mind, "Ee shel bein imeadiatly maser" said his Slave Master, who had gained the lisp by losing half his face in a fight ageinst eight kittens.  So his slave hoard began to build a majestic obsidian tower of stones carried from distant lava feilds, to which RED had traveled to 'Study' the native life, they build with fury and had dug deep into a cliff-face and had built the structurage to a tower in but six hours, and had the entire fortress built within a day.  Surrounded by a lava pit it stood a tremendous sight, errected in but a single day. At its top sat the throne room, and apon the thrown sat RED. "A place to call home." RED breathed, 'Of course, sire' the armor said to him...

OOC: this tower of darkness is in the south, the lava is artificialy made, and the tower is attached to the cliff-face that runs up about half way, the throne faces north overlooking the land, the cliff-face is in a V shape attached to the tower.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 25, 2008, 07:43:00 pm
Alright. I'm having some trouble understanding what you write, I'm afraid. Let me get this straight: RED is a man with magical power and armor? Please explain, I enjoy your ideas, they are just hard to grasp.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on May 26, 2008, 04:41:00 am
OOC:     :mad: I did it again...he's a semi-imortal magical human colosus, think along the lines of DF ironman and you'd be pretty close, its based on a little known cyborg comic called RED and WENDY... now that comic was brutal, too bad there was only three episodes.


"Scall!"RED roared at a ungod-ly volume to which he was allowed, and sent reverberations threw-out the tower. "Yec maser, hat iss att oua equir om ee?"The slave master gurged out, 'Man, I nearly forgot how bad that lisp was.'the armor joked. "send forth a small battalion of Reakers to that village, tell them if they meet resistance to subdue but not kill."Worded RED as he waved his hand towards the human town.


OOC:Reakers are like zombies on mind controling steroids, fast, agile, durable, obediant, but very dumb, tend to go dodging off cliffs, and smell like zombies tend to...really foul, but they can speak!

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Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 26, 2008, 02:41:00 pm
The battalion of about sixty reakers charged to the village, black figures in the night. The small field around the village walls provided a small warning before the army reached the gates. As soon as they did, they began trying to climb the ironwork gates. The gates, however, were not meant to defend, and had many foot and handholds within the ornate decoration. A group of spearmen were in position a few meters from the gates, and as soon as the first reaker hit the ground, "Advance!". The soldiers ran, spears horizontal, shields held close. An unnatural moan signified the first casualty, but many of the reakers had ducked under the spears, and were crawling along with their bulging arms and ripping the armored legs out from under the spearmen. In a few moments, all the soldiers were unconscious or dazed. The reakers continued their charge through the village.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: LeoLeonardoIII on May 27, 2008, 11:50:00 am
The town square was quiet after the brief cries at the wall. A bronze statue of a man on a horse, the horse rearing up on two legs, was in the center of a swath of grass. A zombie spotted it, and rushed forward. He sprang onto the statue, missing, and impaled himself on the decorative ironwork surrounding it.

---

The zombies charged forward, spreading through the town. Suddenly in their collective consciousness a blip near the village green: an enemy to fight! They all changed course and started gallumping toward the call.

In the center of the town the zombies converged. They attacked the bronze horseman, suffering numerous casualties and a few fatalities because they kept falling over the ironwork. Eventually they managed to break the statue, and it came crashing down killing four more zombies. They triumphantly carried the statue out the town gates, while under fire from the bow-wielding militia.

Twelve injured zombies returned that night, bearing the "subdued" statue and a watermelon they inexplicably looted.

---

Red was in his energy chamber recharging. The tower was quiet, the background hum and grind of hot machinery and the occasional squeal of metal on metal. But the faint noise was enough to cover the patter of tiny feet. A small canine (that's right, THEY'RE DOGLIKE) shape scuttled from shadow to shadow. The kobold hid in a dark side passage as a zombie pushed a cart full of stone forward and past him.

Finally the kobold found something strange: an enormous yellow diamond embedded in a ribbed pipe of some kind extending from the floor into the wall. Behind the diamond he could see a bubbly red fluid moving. The temptation was too great, and he pried it out.

Immediately a gush of hot red gas exploded outward, throwing the kobold and his prize back. He shook it off and fled, the diamond under one arm, the other shoulder broken. The gas filled the room as panicked zombies tried to plug the hole.

Red, in his sanctum, felt his energy dissolve. He could still communicate with his armor, but he found himself unable to perform any supernatural things. He was still quite durable, and able to move as a normal human could, and he could still command his zombies, but his personal qualities were otherwise no longer above average. He knew exactly what had happened: someone had stolen his phylactery, his Soul-Stone, the heart of his malevolent power. Red's anger knew no limit.

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And that someone crept painfully through a fissure in the lowest levels of the great fortress tower, eventually to pass back through the old Dwarven halls, up through the parts the Dwarves reclaimed, and hopefully out and back to his mates in the little kobold hole in the valley.

But as he moved from shadow to shadow, he felt stronger, more alive. His broken shoulder set and mended, his many scratches and bruises faded, and the carbuncle on his butt evaporated. He was now Kutarlin Az, Thief of Fate, Legendary Burglar, and possessor of far more than he yet knew.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on May 29, 2008, 04:40:00 pm
OOC:nice addition helmaroc and leoleonardoIII, the zombies(reakers) were very nice, and the energy room bit was cool.
heres a link of the tower X3 (just pick one) http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g44/badwolf535/REDtower-1-2.jpg  http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g44/badwolf535/REDtower-1-1.jpg  http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g44/badwolf535/REDtower-1.jpg


RED was beond rage, "Send out twenty battallions of Seekers, and have Tower Centurians ordered to kill intruders on sight!"RED screamed at his slavemaster, who just collaped under the tremendous power of voice directed at him.

OOC:Seekers are searching reakers with extra brains, they can find a pin in a haystack the size of the moon. A battalion is two with ten Reakers.
Tower Centurians are clockwork-powered robots that make giant cave spiders look cuddly.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on May 29, 2008, 07:14:00 pm
OOC: Nice sketch, I put the third one in the main post.

The seekers immediately started sprinting after the kobold's scent, and the reakers blindly followed, but with his new powers, he had little to worry about. A seeker caught a glimpse of him running through a gate, and all of the monsters started turned on their heels at the same moment and ran after the shape. As they approached, Az recalled the power the gem had stemmed in him and he shot a blast of invisible energy into the line, knocking down the first twenty. However, over the next hill, a Tower Centurion was rumbling through, huge mechanical legs pounding the earth and knocking down trees. It's scanning view caught Az's figure and it retracted one of it's giant fists, before shooting it forward. There was a crash and a huge pit was formed upon impact, the kobold inside, crushed. However, the large pulsing gem was still touching his hand, and slowly, power shot through his arm and throughout his body, renewing him.

He sprang out of the hole and fired a blast at the giant machine, knocking it back a few feet, leaving huge ditches in the ground. He ran into the night, blasting and zapping, until the last seeker died chasing after him, leaving dozens of reakers alone in the woodlands, lost without their superior leaders.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: LeoLeonardoIII on May 30, 2008, 12:47:00 am
"What ARE these things?" grumbled Urist the Mechanic. He aimed, and fired his light Dwarven Crossbow at a zombie shuffling down the passage. The bolt blasted right through it, struck the cave wall at the end of the hall, and bored eight feet in before being stopped by a pocket of orpiment. The bolt pierced the zombie's left armpit, his right eye, his right lung, and his third left finger. Urist shrugged at the mediocre shot and reloaded.

"That's the last of 'em," said the brewer trudging in from a side hallway. He wiped vomit and gore from his brow, and the tiny beer stein emblem on the front of his hat gleamed in the torchlight. "They were coming in through this crack in the silk tunnels. I jammed a rock in there, it should hold just about forever no matter what."

They both heard a crash from the kitchen above, and what sounded like something very heavy crashing down and rolling away. The two dwarves looked at each other in surprise for a moment, then bounded up the stairs.

Following them in the half-darkness, in the shadows, were tiny red eyeballs floating in midair. They watched the two dwarves run off, and stared at each other. They made tiny creaking sounds back and forth, then floated off away from the commotion upstairs.

They finally came to a room with a great adamantite seal in one wall and a lever next to it. One floated up, and bumped into it. The others creaked back and forth. The one at the door looked all around, and finally found a tiny crack where the adamantite mechanisms let a faint breeze through. The eye vanished into the tiny hole, and the others followed.

The back of the door was awash with fresh blood and unidentifiable chunks. The floating red eyes moved on. Deeper into the complex, with walls engraved in horrific murderous detail, they found a huge room with a glowing pit in the center. They peered down into the hole, and saw a large blue crystal engraved with spiderweb lines and ancient runes. It was bound to the four walls by great adamantite chains, suspended in midair a hundred feet below the pit room. They quietly creaked to each other. Then they left, back through the bloody seal, back through the kobold's fissure.

Back to Red.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on May 30, 2008, 06:23:00 pm
(OOC:Litrally my biggest post to date)


RED litrally flaming with anger, killing devout elven sacrifices to 'create' a temporary replace to his soul-stone "Dracanus-stoneth" (OOC:formed over thousands of years in the heart of a purebreed dragon, a heart stone) placing it within the stone setting, RED gradually began to regain his lost powers, "Damned theives, rotten brained slaves, I'll just have to find that stone myself..." RED growled as he sat apon his throne.

Several minutes later the armor spoke to him of a tremendous find hidded within the dwarven mines, "When was it found?" RED directed towards his armor, 'under the hour' it replied, "I picked a more perfect location then I thaught, to think a Leyuka-opetner gem here!"(OOC:Leyuka-opetner was an old dwarf noble who upon finding the rare gem named it after himself and used it to increase his magical powers and later got tricked into a dead-bolt room for outragous demands) "I must obtain it but first I will retreive my lost soul-stone to fully restore my powers." RED chuckled.

RED arose from his throne, "Slave Master!, get a battalion of Teeth ready to acompany me, I'm leaving the tower to aquire gems and stones." (OOC:Teeth are the most powerful footsoliders at RED's dispoil, created from RED's own flesh, they are conected to him at all times,covered in teeth, fangs, and the like,  these guys make triple dragon seiges seem fun)

Looking back at the tower RED saw that the entire structure of the tower was now being forced towards the center of the lava pool, "Thats the magnetic safty system, in action for you." (OOC: the tower is now floating several hundred feat above lava and at least fifty feet from the cliff enterance)

"Now to find and kill that Kobold scum, (OOC:When, not if, RED finds the kobold the healing power of the gem will be redirected by RED's presence)
and to get that Leyuka-opetner gem!"(OOC:The spiderweb engraved gem in the dwarves vault)

(OOC:RED is marching around looking for the Kobold theif, with fifty Teeth constructs)

[ May 30, 2008: Message edited by: DreaDFanG ]

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on June 02, 2008, 11:16:00 am
OOC: Sorry, I just can't think of anything, but Dark posted a while ago in the corrupt a wish thread, maybe he'll see this and return!
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: LeoLeonardoIII on June 05, 2008, 10:50:00 am
Yeah we get it, Red is super kewl and awesome and stuff, and his penis is bigger than anyone else's. Plus because he's evil he must be even COOLER right? And there ain't nothing gonna break his stride, ain't nothing gonna slow him down! OH NO! He got to keep on GROOVIN!

Look, I've tried, but interesting stories don't come out of invulnerable supermen. And every time someone shows a weakness in Red you come over and zip it up, piling on more badassery.

I don't think I can write in this story anymore! And I think I know why your source material for Red only went a couple issues: the author got bored and realized Red is a dead end!

C'mon. "Here's this evil character, who orders everyone around, and his minions are tougher than the most dangerous of anything else."
*Wind blows a tumbleweed through town*
"Oh and he's even more powerful on Wednesdays, too."

...

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on June 06, 2008, 05:07:00 pm
OOC: I gots an idea.

RED continued across the fields searching for the kobold and the gems. Suddenly, his Teeth, with their extreme sense, felt a presence across the valley. They turned to see a hydra, moving towards them. It was a legendary seven-header, deadly as hell. The Teeth far outnumbered and possibly even outmatched the lone hydra, so after a wave of agreement shot through their single mind, they charged at their racing speed towards the reptilian beast.

As the Teeth approached the towering monster, it reared it reared it's heads back, readying itself for the contact. The first Teeth (tooth, hehe?) jumped onto the hydra's stomach, to be torn in half by two heads both wanting a piece. As the hydra's heads shot all around hitting the Teeth, RED continued charging from the back of the herd. He drew his longsword and sliced off one of the heads in one fluid motion. The others, alarmed, all charged at once towards the metal man. They hit at the same time, killing one of themselves instantly. As their maws pulled against both RED and themselves, their fear instinct began to kick in.

The hydra was killing itself, with all the heads biting onto one another. RED's arms were each caught in a toothy maw, and his Teeth were jumping onto the mass of metal, heads and blood, creating a chaotic confusion. As the hydra's purple blood flowed into his joints, RED's anger was at it's maximum. But, without his gem-ridden power, he was not as strong as he would have been, and he was losing consciousness due to other-wordly magic pain. When your body is fused together by magic, and kept alive by magic, magic is also used to complete every normal bodily function, including nerves. So RED was hurting just as much as a very tough human would be if his arms were getting ripped off.

The Teeth were sending many thoughts into their base of mind, and their hostility was as dark as it got. They were ripping up the hydra, themselves, some even clawed at RED in the confusion. After about ten minutes of the screaming and moaning, the hydra fell on it's back, three heads gone, and the rest either dead or squirming. The remaining Teeth tore up the hydra's stomach, spewing purple blood and thick guts all over the field, the corpses, and RED. RED was at his utmost anger, he was in great pain, he was immobile, he didn't even have his stupid slave driver to help him. His Teeth could do little in the means of healthcare, as they were created to kill.

Kutarlin had overheard the battle from his underground hole, and he had watched it about mid-battle. He saw the towering Teeth and the hydra, RED and all the blood. He grimaced, and sent a powerful, anger-fueled blast towards the mass. RED, and his minions were killed by the power that created them. Of course, RED wasn't DEAD, as he couldn't die of course. But he had no construct, no body, except his head and a mass of mangled metal that had formed his body. He was an armless torso, and he was alone on the dark fields of Zustashiger.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on June 06, 2008, 11:41:00 pm
RED unconsious from the battle in which he was torn, ripped and slashed, to a pile of limbs blood and metal fragments, was josled out of coherence, and had a rather turning dream, of himself as a small child fighting his present self, a big metal monster, and with the recent damaging events the monster was weakened within him mind (OOC:split personalities for good and evil) giving the goodness within him to rise up and strike a blow to the heart of his evil self, awaking as a new pile of gore, RED is evil no longer.

"Final killed that demon of mine!", 'Master?' the armor begged for a anwser, "Armor, is that you?", 'Master, it is but we're kind of in a bad situation', "How so?", 'The body has been heavily damaged by a hydra and your teeth', "Armor, you should know better, animate the metal and gather any flesh you can and form it into a body so we can return to the tower."

Over the next several minutes, the chunks of metal, melted limbs and twisted fragments of body armor moved and colected onto RED's remains...turning, twisting and bending turned into a patchwork body, having to steal flesh from both teeth and hydra, RED's monsterous apperation finally began to return to the tower.

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Several grewling hours later after being followed by animals and the such, RED made it to the tower.

Upon seeing him a Reaker called for three tower centurians to carry RED to the throne room.

After being placed on his throne, RED set the Tower Centurians to carry all intruders to the dungon for questioning and set all reavers to be tower patrolers, afterwards he had several Reavers to return the stolen human statue, with an apologie and an invitation to attend a feast, to be held in the tower, to liven the villagers up, the dwarves are also invited and are being sent a big cask of Achient Dwarven Brew.(OOC:Warning this Brew is the strongest and even being in the same room as it makes one drunk, a untold boon to the dwarves)

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on June 07, 2008, 07:55:00 am
OOC: Great job DreaDFanG, sorry I had to cut him down with the hydra, but he just was too powerful even without the gem.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on June 07, 2008, 12:35:00 pm
(OOC:thats fine...but the ale is going to the dwarves, and a Feast is being held at the Tower.)

[ June 07, 2008: Message edited by: DreaDFanG ]

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on June 11, 2008, 08:46:00 pm
The guards saw the reakers coming, and their first impulse was to signal the town to prepare for another battle. However, they also saw the statue and the more perceptive of the guards may have noticed a single rotting watermelon as well, so they instead readied themselves in case and spread the news of the incoming party to the rest of the town.

OOC: Sorry, I'd write more but I have a horrid headache at the time and I can't think straight.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on June 11, 2008, 10:15:00 pm
Well I cant realy post anymore for now ...RED's just sitting around being fixed.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on June 12, 2008, 02:33:00 pm
The reakers marched through the opened gates, grunting in unison, and carried the statue to it's ruined stump. They also left the watermelon in the street. The leader raised the mangled sheet of parchment to the cowering messenger, who then ran to give the news of the feast to all the nobles. The reakers then exited the still town and returned to the tower. The nobles and lords regarded the invitation carefully, many turned down the offer in fear or pride. But, a few dozen accepted after some pondering.

The parade of the guests rode out of the gates on their horses, the thunder of the hooves on stone rattled down the street. They all brought at least a couple of servants and guards apiece, to aid the kitchens of the host, and guard the celebration, as was tradition, however, most of the guards were ordered to protect their employers rather than the rest of the guests and RED's faculty.

Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on June 12, 2008, 02:51:00 pm
Back at the tower the pool of lava bubbled, swelled and split to reveal several large flat magnetic plates that lined up and formed a bridge to the tower(5 DF tiles wide by 40 across)
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on July 13, 2008, 03:30:31 pm
As the guests arrived and escorted through the tower, something was amiss in the town. The large dead tree that towered over the graveyard had been stocked fully with crows. These however, were not ordinary. Their red eyes burned into the darkness. The really peculiar thing was that they were so close together. There wasn't an inch of space left on the branches, they were all packed together, all facing the same direction.

The cemetery was located on a hill, overlooking the town. The red eyes glared down at the cloaked figure by the fountain. The figure was pouring something into the fountain from a flask, before turning and running down the street. The crows simultaneously sprang from the tree, soaring after the figure. Not one of them was ruffled by another, they were in perfect flight.

They landed on the statue of the fountain, watching as the figure slipped to the well. He again poured something into the water, and again was followed by the flock as he moved on.

That night every water supply was tainted with the strange liquid. However, the figure's departure may have been the strangest thing that night. He ran about a half mile into the field, his cloak trailing behind him. Then, the crows flocked around him, covering him in feathers and eyes. Then, all of the squirming birds fused together, and there was a flurry of black upon the figure. The figure's cloak tore off, revealing the aberration.

Apparently, the figure had been humanoid of some sort before the crows formed this new beast. It was some sort of crow-man, his mouth was replaced by a crooked beak, his clothes fell and he sprouted feathers. His fingers writhed and crackled two nothing as his arms cracked and moaned, spreading behind him as wings. His shoes ripped as three talons forced their way out of his skin. His eyes glowed red, lacking iris and pupil.

There was an earsplitting caw, which awoke many across the town, and the beast flew into the blackness surrounding the mountains.



Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: DreaDFanG on July 13, 2008, 06:47:04 pm
Is it, could it be?

THE THREAD REBORN!

As the story goes Red is nearly fixed flesh of hydra removed, and most of his armor re-formed but in heavy disrepair, Red telling to his minions to tend to the villagers, for he has pressing other matters to see to...
(BUSY MINIONS! Reds all alone and weakened extensively)

Red have-ing just fixed part of his face-plate that had obstructed a vast majority of his vision, noted a dark shape near the village, but dismissed it as birds attacking a corpse. Looking towards the dwarven outpost, had seen the beer wagon had stopped about halfway trying to cross the river...

Leaving the throne area he heard a slight caw on the wind, but continued towards the the Tower's Mechanic Heart, having seen upon ariving that arragement of pipes, cystals, and components had been arraged in a fashion not intended for their origional use, and began taking steps to arrange it to its, "intended purpose".
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on July 13, 2008, 07:12:11 pm
OOC: Yep, every once in a while I try to necro it, sometimes it works and sometimes it sinks back into the darkness of OLD.

The next morning after the crow incident, many peasants were gathering their water for the day and for their chores. It just so happened that a young noble boy, Ferin, was the first to drink that morning. He raised the bucket to his lips and drank his thirst away. The bucket fell, hitting the stone, splashing the contents across the road. Ferin fell to his knees, and quickly lost consciousness.
 
A nearby housemaid soon found him and brought him inside. He awoke a few hours later, feeling tired but with no apparent afflictions. The doctors checked him all through the day, but there was no evidence of disease.

Many cases as such took place through the day, nearly a half of the populace was affected before word got out about the water. The town began a small system of retrieving water from the river, which was tested and proved fresh enough to drink.
Title: Re: Zustashigėr
Post by: Helmaroc on August 02, 2008, 09:40:53 pm
OOC: REZZED! I hope.

The town was peaceful. It was just another morning. Ferin awoke in his large canopied bed. It was quite early, only the farmers were awake and the sun was still hidden behind the blue mountains.

Ferin felt a little uncomfortable, he walked to examine himself in the large mirror upon his desk. His arms and back were irritated and itchy. Tiny black specks dotted the sides of his arms from elbow to his shoulder blades. He was supposed to call a nurse if anything was ailing him, but he knew what would happen. He'd go to the grumpy old doctor down the street and get checked out, usually given a week of rest, the doctor wasn't too fond of Ferin, many times he would find his knives out in the mud, often with traces of frog innards on them. Ferin enjoyed looking inside things. Living and dead. Instead he put on a sleeved shirt and hurried downstairs for his breakfast.

09/27/08 - I pronounce this thread DEAD! Unless some kind person decides to post here again, I will not check up on it. And, please note, if this were to start over, I'd likely need to start a new thread because since the forum change, the format of the first post is screwed up. If I were to edit it, it would be horribly ruined.