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Author Topic: Darkest Garden [IG] Chapter 1 - What lies down yonder? [new 6/28]  (Read 52420 times)

Tiruin

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Re: Darkest Garden [IG] [Begin] Curiosity - ...?
« Reply #120 on: August 11, 2016, 08:45:16 pm »

o_o
Whoever said the elevator went into the plot, I think we crashed into it so hard that the scenery had to swap out to be safe from the impact.

> Listen to the tones! What do we think/what're our thoughts right now?

Always making it an imperative when we're unsure, to check our character's thoughts. They're important too! :D
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Re: Darkest Garden [IG] [Begin] Curiosity - ...?
« Reply #121 on: August 11, 2016, 10:40:30 pm »

o_o
Whoever said the elevator went into the plot, I think we crashed into it so hard that the scenery had to swap out to be safe from the impact.

> Listen to the tones! What do we think/what're our thoughts right now?

Always making it an imperative when we're unsure, to check our character's thoughts. They're important too! :D

It's the opening of one of your favorite songs. Helps, with the boredom while you're waiting to see-

Oh



Hello, imaginary friends.



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Re: Darkest Garden [IG] [Begin] Curiosity - ...?
« Reply #122 on: August 11, 2016, 10:43:05 pm »

Check the couch cushions for lose change.

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Re: Darkest Garden [IG] [Begin] Curiosity - ...?
« Reply #123 on: August 12, 2016, 06:25:04 pm »

Check the couch cushions for lose change.

Good idea, Mr. Beardsly! That should pass some time. Hopefully mama won't be too upset about messing up the cushions...



A quarter and a nickel!

That's nice cuz it rounds things out. Well, thanks for the good idea Mr. Beardsly! What to do now though? There's still some waiting... well, how have you been doing, imaginary friends?



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Re: Darkest Garden [IG] [Begin] Curiosity - ...?
« Reply #124 on: August 12, 2016, 06:29:29 pm »

good, Good, Now Why don't you Remind us about what's going on?
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Re: Darkest Garden [IG] [Begin] Curiosity - ...?
« Reply #125 on: August 12, 2016, 06:43:32 pm »

Yeah, can you remind us what we are waiting for?

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« Reply #126 on: August 12, 2016, 07:41:46 pm »

Yeah, can you remind us what we are waiting for?

Well, that's easy. We're waiting to see papa




Mama says we need to wait out here until she comes out though...



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« Reply #127 on: August 12, 2016, 10:52:43 pm »

Can you hear them?  Maybe we stand outside and look inside the room without going in.  We will still be out here waiting.  So, can you tell what you see in the other room?

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Re: Darkest Garden [IG] [Begin] Curiosity - ...?
« Reply #128 on: August 13, 2016, 12:15:34 am »

"would you remind us how long we have been waiting?"
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« Reply #129 on: August 13, 2016, 01:21:17 am »

I do believe the narrative has shifted as if its the character herself speaking, or y'know, thinking. That was my impression anyway when I came upon Mr. Beardsly--we may be less than 13 years old, too.
So I'm under the impression that we're not just suggestors, but THOUGHTS! :D
I mean putting it into perspective, our bolded lines do have a semblance of being in parallel with how one thinks with themself, so it's...quite subtle and creative. :P


Try to remember why we're here. Did our parents say anything about this?
Also this imaginary friend is curious about you, because she is forgetful! Who are you?




I need to brush up my writing more. :-[
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« Reply #130 on: August 14, 2016, 10:11:50 pm »

"would you remind us how long we have been waiting?"

Oh, well, um, about 5 minutes? It's been boring... and anxious... so it's felt longer. But that's what the clock says.



I do believe the narrative has shifted as if its the character herself speaking, or y'know, thinking. That was my impression anyway when I came upon Mr. Beardsly--we may be less than 13 years old, too.
So I'm under the impression that we're not just suggestors, but THOUGHTS! :D
I mean putting it into perspective, our bolded lines do have a semblance of being in parallel with how one thinks with themself, so it's...quite subtle and creative. :P


Try to remember why we're here. Did our parents say anything about this?
Also this imaginary friend is curious about you, because she is forgetful! Who are you?




I need to brush up my writing more. :-[
Oh, hello Auntie Yellow. Don't you remember? It's me, Samantha! But I guess it's been a while, huh? And this is my house!




But we gotta wait here to see papa. It's as close as we can get cuz mama said we can't go in yet.

Also, wow, that's a lot of words! Um, so I bet your writing is fine!

Can you hear them?  Maybe we stand outside and look inside the room without going in.  We will still be out here waiting.  So, can you tell what you see in the other room?
Well... that seems like it'd.... well, that's not wrong is it? I guess it couldn't hurt.









"...Don't worry about those dreams, honey..."
"They just get more and more... w... well..."
"Mi Corazón... shh... did you eat your graham crackers?"
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« Reply #131 on: August 14, 2016, 10:28:45 pm »

((Is it just me or is that shade on the person's forehead...suspicious.
Also the last 3 dialogue pieces--are we overhearing it from inside or-))


Do you hear that? Could we know who that's coming from? Have you been feeling alright lately?
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Re: Darkest Garden [IG] [Begin] Curiosity - ...?
« Reply #132 on: August 14, 2016, 10:38:08 pm »

((Is it just me or is that shade on the person's forehead...suspicious.
Also the last 3 dialogue pieces--are we overhearing it from inside or-))


Do you hear that? Could we know who that's coming from? Have you been feeling alright lately?

Huh? That's mama and papa, of course.



"...I..."
"You have to eat, dear."
"Y...yes. Yes. Of course, dear..."
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« Reply #133 on: August 16, 2016, 09:01:59 am »

Did you see where the creepy doctor went?  Like outside, through the front door maybe?  Can you look through the window?  What do you see?

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« Reply #134 on: August 16, 2016, 11:43:02 pm »

Did you see where the creepy doctor went?  Like outside, through the front door maybe?

Oh, um, just out into the hall. But he's probably on the way out. He never stays around very long after...

Did you see where the creepy doctor went?  Like outside, through the front door maybe?  Can you look through the window?  What do you see?



Well, out there's the garden, in the back yard...

"Sammy"



"You can come in now"




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