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Title: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 09, 2020, 10:51:33 pm
Don't die on me.

Keep breathing.

Please. Not you too.

A fan lazily cuts the dry air above you as your vision comes to a focus. Every bone in your body aches, and a stitch in your side makes breathing difficult. You make to sit up, but the effort makes your head swim and vision blur, so you remain laying.
Instead, your fingers dig into the rough fabric of the bed beneath you, grasping for purchase against the spins. When they fade, you look around, taking stock of the room around you.

Its a small room, cut from unfinished wood planks, with a single grimy window that leaks in the waning light. The only other furniture is a flat metal table touched with rust and a crude lamp beside the doorway. A jagged shard of metal, the size of your forearm sits on the table. Its tip darkened with crumbling reddish brown.

You suppress a shudder.

Sounds of labor carry through the doorway. You tense, and your body gives a protest.

What's there to be done?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 10, 2020, 12:16:28 am
Welcome to the forums! :)

Looks like somebody's had to dig that shard of metal out of our side for us. We're in no condition to do much of anything, so we'll just have to trust out apparent benefactor for now...

Rest.
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 10, 2020, 12:39:04 am
You sit up, slowly, to ease the ache in your lower back.

A man bustles into the room, carrying a tray. Lanky, with a limp, he seems about middle-aged and hesitates when he notices you. He speaks in a low, placating tone, smiling with a bit of a downturn to his head. Deferential.
"Hey, buddy. How are you feeling? I'm Doc Mitchell. I'm the one who patched you up."

He sets the tray down beside you on the table. On it is a bowl of soup, some water in a cup, bandages, and a soft capsule. He hands you the soup, which you take with both hands with hesitation, and brusquely lifts your shirt above your bandages.

"Keep still- don't want to re-open your stitches, now do you? Be a good lass and eat your soup. Ain't nothing I haven't seen before." With that warning, he starts unraveling your bandages. He reveals a savage gash, wide as a thumb, and about five inches from hip to rib, hastily stitched.

"When they brought you in, I thought for sure you'd be dead by now." His eyes harden as he looks you up and down, hands deftly winding a bandage around your abdomen, "You had a severe skull fracture, more broken bones than whole ones and that shrapnel filling your guts. I couldn't even tell you how much blood you had left."

He gives the bandages a neat little knot, a hard look still in his eyes despite the smile.  The soup smells delicious, like [rosemary] and [thyme] and a host of other earthy, hearty flavors — chunks of [protein] float within, beans and nubs of browned [bacon].

"Can you tell me your name, lass? Any idea how you got into that state?" You shake your head, and Doc Mitchell sighs. "If a name comes to you, let me know, but I bet you have questions."

 


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 10, 2020, 12:57:51 am
"Lass". We know we're female, at least.

"No questions yet... thank you." Speak careful-like, so's not to hurt ourself with the talking.

We're safe here. No need for fear anymore. Finish eating, then let consciousness slip away for awhile if need be-- we could use the time to heal anyhow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 10, 2020, 02:08:14 am
"Lass". We know we're female, at least.

"No questions yet... thank you." Speak careful-like, so's not to hurt ourself with the talking.

We're safe here. No need for fear anymore. Finish eating, then let consciousness slip away for awhile if need be-- we could use the time to heal anyhow.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 10, 2020, 02:12:14 am
"Lass". We know we're female, at least.

"No questions yet... thank you." Speak careful-like, so's not to hurt ourself with the talking.

We're safe here. No need for fear anymore. Finish eating, then let consciousness slip away for awhile if need be-- we could use the time to heal anyhow.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 10, 2020, 03:00:55 am
"She's dead. I already told you. I'll get you your money some other way." Mitchell's voice carries through the thin planks of the inner wall. A shutter hides the window from the night, and something blocks the doorway out, but it's still bright enough to see. You shift upwards, slowly, expecting dizziness.

You turn your head from one side to the other. Then you shake it back and forth. Nothing happens. You run your hands over your arms, expecting the same ache that occurred previously, only to find the soreness gone now.
With a gentle touch, you prod the still clean bandage-- and wince as sharp pain lances through your side.

Everything can't be fixed so quickly, I suppose.

You rise to your feet, inching closer to the wall to catch more of the argument.

"Look, Mitchell...We had a deal. Anybody that can't pay your fees, you send to us. You haven't been sending many folks our way, friend." The other man's voice rises as he finishes.

"I'm sorry, I didn't know you wanted me to send you corpses." Mitchell snaps, "How about I send some of your men to you in chains? You never pay the damn fee."
 
The other man is silent, until, "Look, it's late. We're both tired. I'm going to come back tomorrow."

And that's it. The door slams, and you hear only heavy breathing from the next room, followed by something else slamming into the wall. You hear footsteps from the hallway.

What to do?

 


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 10, 2020, 03:09:13 am
Wait.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 10, 2020, 06:36:34 am
Mitchell starts when the light of the hallway lamp finally falls on you through the open doorway. The room brightens, but his expression does the opposite. His brown hair is a mess, his clothes crumpled, and a leather holster holds a pistol beneath his armpit. He tries to smile, even as he notices your glance, but it doesn't make it past his eyes.

You both stand in silence.

"You heard at least some of that conversation." While he speaks, he crosses his arms and sighs. His hand rests close to his holster, and he looks politely puzzled, giving you a small smile. "You really shouldn't be alive."

Then he begins to pace, in and out of the room, never really turning his back to you.

"I pulled six inches of solid steel from your guts. Your brain was leaking out of the back of your head, and your bones were in splinters!" His voice rises as he turns on his heels, facing you once again. "Do you know how long it took you to recover from that? Five days!"

His eyes gleam, and his scowl deepens. "This morning? That pill? Five times the dose to knock a two hundred pound raider on his ass! It makes you nap." He spits the word nap like venom.

"So, you know what I want to know? What -are- you? A [demon]? Some kind of [angel]? What the hell happened to you? Why are you here?"

Then, with that question, you notice it. The rambling speech with heavy breath. The hesitation in word choice. The way he keeps his trembling hand beside his gun.

"Well!?"




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 10, 2020, 08:16:57 am
Tell him the truth that we don't know anything about who we are or our past, also mention the head injury probably killed our memories.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 10, 2020, 06:25:42 pm
"I did hear that conversation, and I'm grateful for your aid.  Perhaps I can assist you with your situation in return?  It sounds like you could use the help.  Also, let me make this clear, I'm not a threat to you in any way.  I don't wish you ill."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 10, 2020, 07:09:46 pm
"I wish I knew." You weakly murmur, shifting awkwardly from foot to foot. You run your fingers through your hair and over the back of your head. Your short hair is shorn back further there, and for the first time, you realize that you must have an awful haircut right now. But there is no soreness, no tenderness. "I did hear that conversation, and I'm grateful for your aid.  Perhaps I can assist you with your situation in return?  It sounds like you could use the help.  Also, let me make this clear. I'm not a threat to you in any way.  I don't wish you ill."

"Damn right you will," But Mitchell sighs and rubs his face at your answer. He relaxes,  giving a simple nod at the answer, but he still has a hard look in his eyes. He gestures for you to follow and moves back into the main living area. Hesitantly, you wander after. Your first step is a little unsteady, but you regain your balance swiftly.

The small hallway opens up into a general living area, one made of curved, thin metal. A small wooden table with accompanying chairs sits in the corner, the surface covered with dirty dishes and empty bottles. A large bookshelf hides a wall, more books piled on the floor than within its shelves. The titles blur in your vision, before becoming apparent, and a vast majority of them are medical works. On the other side of the room is a cooking station, complete with a small fridge whose compressor labors loudly.  "Take a seat. I still have some soup on the stove."

You do so, settling into the creaking wood without protest. He pulls a spoon off the wall and scoops soup into a thankfully clean bowl, passing it to you without a further word. He settles in across from you, still staring. Eventually, he grabs a green bottle from the table and takes a swig.

The smell of the soup is still divine, and you don't eat it so much as inhale it. You drain the last of the broth and have to stop yourself from licking the bowl, hunger still rolling your stomach.

"I found you on my doorstep. A local farmer dropped you off for me to perform funeral rites. Clean you up and incinerate you. Hell, I nearly did. You were an awful wreck, young lady." He takes a swig, "I wouldn't've known you were still alive if you didn't spit blood in my face."

"After that, I did the best I could for you. Stitched up your side, making you comfortable, doping you up. I waited for you to meet your [creator, maker, Non-Empyeral diety], but you never did."

The man takes another swig from the bottle, alcohol fumes wafting across the table. He rubs the neck of the container, staring at you, "I would've put a bullet in your head if I were younger. Given you mercy, but--" He shakes his head, lapsing into silence.

You stay silent, still taking in the room. A coat rack sits in the corner, hanging with a heavy duster and worn satchel with crooked calligraphy. You blink as the symbols blur, and another imposes itself upon it — a bright red cross. A lamp sitting in the corner illuminates the room, its bulb glowing bright blue.

"I caught up with the farmer after you pulled through the night. Its a small town, and the man was telling everyone about how he found you." Mitchell gives a bitter laugh, "He said you fell from the heavens. He was locking up his [horse, steed, mount] and saw a light in the sky, growing brighter, until it blew up in one of his fields."

"Said it made him find the [creator, maker, non-Empyeral]. He went to the temple to pray for hours after dropping you off. Probably shot his mouth off to the priest while he was it, then went to go forget all about it with some booze."

"I wouldn't have believed it, except by the time I got back, you looked less like a pile of meat in the shape of a girl and more like an actual person."

"You don't remember anything? Anything at all that could answer this?"
When you shake your head, he sighs.  "I'm not one to believe, but seeing you recover is a goddamn miracle. Twenty years of being a doctor, and I ain't see anything like it."

"And now you're up, and walking around and holding conversations that aren't you gurgling blood. And now, we need to talk about my fees. Now, you were naked when you came in, so I'm sure you don't have any money. I've got an awful lot of work around the house I need doing, so you're going to help with that. Nurse work too. Two years ought to pay off what you owe." His eyes are hard and dark, and he states bluntly, "Otherwise, you could go with that slave-broker and work for the [warlord], but I'm sure you wouldn't like that, girl."

Something within you bristles at that, and you sit upright, fixing him with a glare as you snap. "If I'm going to be working with you, don't call me a girl like I'm a child."

He flinches at that, then gives a short laugh. "By the [maker], I thought your spine was broken."

Just then, there's a knock at the door, and Mitchell rises to his feet, walking over to it, the bottle still in hand. He pulls it open-- and flies back into the room, his chest exploding into gore. Mitchell's corpse thuds to the ground, his pistol clattering free beside him.

The sound of the shotgun drives you down to the ground, reverberating through the metal room with a deafening bang. Three men stand in the doorway, clad in dusters, face hidden behind [demon] masks. They look taken aback by your presence and hesitate.

Well then. What's next?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 10, 2020, 07:31:35 pm
Combat roll.
Grab the gun.
Open fire.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 10, 2020, 07:41:36 pm
...we just lost every single injury we had.

We ain't human.

Combat roll.
Grab the gun.
Open fire.


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Aim for the masks. If we feel any magic angelic powers or whatever coming on, use them.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 10, 2020, 10:43:51 pm
The hesitation doesn't last long. You move, diving for the pistol as heat washes over your right side. Pain burns through you, but only an instant before your grip tightens on the handle. You dive to one side as another blast destroys the table and the metal wall with a hail of red hot flechettes.

The other two have slipped their guns out, trying to take aim, but in one smooth motion, you flip the switch on the safety and lift the firearm. Anger, rage, fury, all build within you as you breathe in. When you exhale, a short, halting breath, so does the firearm, and it takes that anger with it. The gun shudders in your hand, the microreactor flaring to life with all the fuel cell can muster

And your anger becomes the sun.

The blast melts away the barrel, the grip, everything up until the trigger-gaurd. They dissolve into the air. And so does the trio of bandits, along with half the house. The books behind you catch fire, along with Mitchell's corpse. The pressure change blows out the windows and sends the fridge through the wall, burning papers flying haphazardly about.

And in the middle of this instantaneous hell-storm, you sit, uneffected.

And there you sit, until it becomes unsafe to do so, the structure collapsing around you. You drag Mitchell out the front, the stitch in your side unbearable as you haul the dead man out the door. His house burns, slowly, at first, then all at once, brightly against the night sky.

It takes you a while to notice that dawn is breaking across the horizon, a rising heat in the air that has nothing to do with the smoldering remains of Doc Mitchell's house. You finally drop the handle of the melted gun, its micro-display flashing bright red symbols of warning.

Mitchell was dead before the blast, his chest turned to mush in an instant by the first shot. You exhale a shaky breath and examine yourself. The second shot winged your shoulder. That was enough to gouge out a chunk of flesh the size of your thumb and singe off some of your hair. It doesn't hurt, however, and is already scabbed over. Your side burns with pain, and blood has bloomed on the bandages. But most pressing of all is how weak you feel. Your stomach constantly growls.

You are -starving-.

Taking stock of your surroundings, a path leads off into the distance, towards some lightly wooded hills in the north. Dry mountains rise far away to the west, and the beginning of a rough sandy plain lies to the south. The house is burnt down, a pile of metal scrap and smoldering lumber. A windmill and a few solar panels lie a few meters away from the wreckage. The fridge lies outside of the ruins, A few meters away from that sits a bulky, man-sized incinerator.

What now?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 10, 2020, 11:00:37 pm
...yeah, we're an angel. At least, that's what I'm gonna go with until I learn otherwise.

eat Mitchell
Search the fridge for edibles. Any edibles.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 10, 2020, 11:01:55 pm
...yeah, we're an angel. At least, that's what I'm gonna go with until I learn otherwise.

eat Mitchell
Search the fridge for edibles. Any edibles.

+1, but also search the ruins for any other items of use or of value.
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 11, 2020, 03:33:30 am
You ignore the voices urging you to eat Mitchell's body. Instead, you haul yourself to your feet and drag him to the incinerator. You unlock the door and pull out the table. The stitches in your side flare with pain as you heave him up on it. You seal the door behind him and examine the controls. The machine is a simple dial, and you turn it all the way up.
The inferno flares.

With that business done, you ransack the fridge. You devour whatever scraps and leftovers you can find.  A whole ham, four boiled eggs, a wide variety of vegetables later, your stomach still rumbles with hunger, but you feel your strength returning.

The building isn't hard to search, as everything is on a horizontal plane at this point. A few pieces of metal give you trouble but are easily lifted away. Unfortunately, nothing much is left of use. In the kitchen, you find a burnt knife. There's a pair of boots that fit comfortably in what was the master bedroom, and the heavy duster by the door was blown outside with only minimal charring.

Running your hand over the fabric, you notice the material is not cloth, as you imagined, instead a heavy kevlar blend. Pads of heavy, meshed plastic cover vital areas of the body. While it doesn't fit comfortably on your thinner, smaller frame, rolling the sleeves up and adjusting the bottom does much to make it work. Once brown, its been charred black, and the kevlar is no longer as smooth as it once was.

And now there was only you and a desolate world.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 11, 2020, 03:38:03 am
Scatter Doc Mitchell's ashes on the ruins of his home.  Say a few words to help him on his way to the Empyrean.
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Post by: King Zultan on February 11, 2020, 04:54:55 am
Scatter Doc Mitchell's ashes on the ruins of his home.  Say a few words to help him on his way to the Empyrean.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Failbird105 on February 11, 2020, 07:31:07 am
(I am so tempted to make a Sperm Whale Man)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 11, 2020, 10:32:13 am
So I guess angel magic takes a lot of calories to sustain.

In other news, I didn't notice before with all the excitement

Taking stock of your surroundings, a path leads off into the distance, towards some lightly wooded hills in the north. Dry mountains rise far away to the west, and the beginning of a rough sandy plain lies to the south.

but apparently we just kinda know which way we're facing on the compass. More magic? GM fiat? I dunno, but very useful regardless.

Scatter Doc Mitchell's ashes on the ruins of his home.  Say a few words to help him on his way to the Empyrean.
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After that, let's head down that path over the hills and see if we can't find something resembling civilization. Civilization means edibles!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 11, 2020, 10:35:02 am
So I guess angel magic takes a lot of calories to sustain.

In other news, I didn't notice before with all the excitement

Taking stock of your surroundings, a path leads off into the distance, towards some lightly wooded hills in the north. Dry mountains rise far away to the west, and the beginning of a rough sandy plain lies to the south.

but apparently we just kinda know which way we're facing on the compass. More magic? GM fiat? I dunno, but very useful regardless.

Scatter Doc Mitchell's ashes on the ruins of his home.  Say a few words to help him on his way to the Empyrean.
+1

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After that, let's head down that path over the hills and see if we can't find something resembling civilization. Civilization means edibles!

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 11, 2020, 11:41:31 am
(I am so tempted to make a Sperm Whale Man)

what.



The furnace finishes its cycle, and you pop open the catch. Inside is a multitude of ashes, more than you can carry, and more that can come from just Doc Mitchell. You end up scooping up a handful of ashes and awkwardly scattering them over the ruins of his house. Most of it sticks to your hands, and you end up rubbing Doc Mitchell all over your pants.

"From dust and ashes I have called you, and to dust and ash you shall return." Those few words are about all you can muster, a vague memory of sincerity and honor. Of shared pain. "Thank you for your help. I hope you are at peace."

You turn towards the north, contemplating. There's a slight pressure flowing, almost like a breeze, or small pulse of energy. You assumed this meant that those were the poles and didn't question it. There is no such energy from the east and west, except for what spreads from the north. You put it out of your mind, and with one final look at the charred remains of Doc Mitchell's life, you set out on the trail.

[5]The boots are uncomfortable on the rough gravel path, ill-fitting as they are. But the time passes quickly as you lose yourself in vague thought. Mostly about food. About half an hour later, or near as much as you can tell, you take a rest. Not out of any need to rest, you feel as if you could walk for a long time, but more to take in a view from one of the hills.

The land is a multitude of browns and light greens, broken by hardy [cypress-analogues] that stay crouched low against the billowing wind. A few small streams dot the country-side, flowing down from the mountain ranges, carving out rocky valleys from the rough, dark stone. The mid-day humidity is oppressive, and the duster doesn't help much. Clouds form in response to the rising heat.

[...]

The trail winds across the sides of hills, and you come to a crest of a valley.

Nestled around an electric well lies a small village. Most of the houses are metal and wood shanties, but a few more significant buildings dot the layout. The three structures all look similar, probably made from the same kit. The first has a bottle in garish neon, the haphazard scrawl adjusting itself for you to read 'Hausman's Public Haus." The second is a more somber structure. It bears no label or name. The third sits next to a mine dug into the wall of the valley. It belches smoke into the air, with laborers milling about their daily tasks.

The gravel footpath gives way to one sealed with tar as you make your way into town. A few people, dressed conservatively in browns and grey, give you a wide berth as you pass them. You realize that you stick out like a sore thumb in the duster. When you arrive at the village square, you notice the market, clustering around the well.

The big, unmarked building, you realize, is a church or temple of some kind. Its doors are lodged open, and the inside is brightly lit, but dull, consisting of wooden benches and motifs too far away for detail.

The market is filled with vendors, all clustering their stalls around immense beasts with bright white fur, four legs, and curling horns. The sizes vary from man-sized to absolutely massive, nearly as big as two stalls combined. The shopkeeps call out to the crowd, showing off their wares. Guns, food, spices, cloth, keepsakes, knick-knack, and brick-a-brack all abound. One thing that catches your eyes is a mask salesman, hawking off cheap plastic masks, demons and bugs-- you shudder.

The public house is further away from the square, but crowds of people surround it, mingling in tight, quiet groups.



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Post by: TamerVirus on February 11, 2020, 11:54:34 am
Enter the church and contemplate
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 11, 2020, 10:29:04 pm
The church welcomes you with open doors. Literally and figuritively. Within moments of entering, a young, bright-eyed man in a robe accosts you with a welcome. His robe bears a sphere upon its front. Upon that sphere is half a sapling, growing out of it, opposite that is a set of cogs. It catches the light, shimmering like silver.

You notice that in the center of the room, beyond a table, sits a plinth holding a gold and iron sphere. Writing of a religious nature wraps its way around the top to the bottom. You can understand it, you know, but it is too far away to read.

"I'm Brother John, it's a pleasure to meet you, miss...?"



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Post by: Superdorf on February 11, 2020, 10:56:32 pm
Ahh-hm, what's a fitting name here...

"...Phoebe."
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 11, 2020, 10:58:49 pm
Ahh-hm, what's a fitting name here...

"...Phoebe."
+1 ask about the religion of the church, if allowed, get closer to the sphere to read it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 11, 2020, 11:18:29 pm
"Pheobe." You reply, shaking the offered hand and giving him a smile. It has the apparent effect, his smiling growing. "It's a pleasure to meet you, Brother John. Could you tell me about the religion of your church?"

[|]The smile drains from his face, and he looks confused. "About, about our religion?" He forces a laugh, but there is concern upon his features. "You're joking, I'm sure."

When you don't burst out into laughter or give any sign of a jest, his concern only grows. His body tenses, brow furrowing. "Didn't your parents teach you anything? When was the last time a preacher visited you? Were you given first rites? Where were you born?"



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Post by: ZBridges on February 11, 2020, 11:28:54 pm
"Suffice it to say, I have lived a sheltered life.  While I of course am familiar with the basics, I was hoping to hear your unique insight on the matter as a religious specialist."
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 12, 2020, 12:44:50 am
"Suffice it to say, I have lived a sheltered life.  While I, of course, am familiar with the basics, I was hoping to hear your unique insight on the matter as a religious specialist." You lie through your teeth, still smiling.

John looks suspicious, but [15] nods. "That's fair, I apologize for jumping to conclusions, I'm somewhat new to the borderlands."

"Could you start from the beginning? I've only really heard parts and pieces, never the full story."

Long ago, the land was barren and cold. Until the Seed found it. It ripped off its wings, cut out its stomach, and fell to the earth. It [died, long-sleep, rest], but the world awakened. It grew forth great bounty. Soon, too soon, humanity awoke, and the Sleeping Seed spoke. It taught us many things, turning us from beasts into a civilization. It showed us how to work the land for food, how to work steel and gear, how to build and craft, and play music. It showed us many works of art it had dreamed of. Worlds that it crafted to test us.

Many, many things of wonder. We built a city upon its tomb and spread out across the land. But the further from its grace, the worse the earth is, so we must study what the Seed allows us to carry out his eternal work.


The globe is encircled with many words; "...steel, electronics, holy weapons..." It lists a great many of these things, but the gist is skills or complicated processes.

He pauses, catching your gaze on the globe. He smiles widely, explaining, "Ah yes, The Language of His Holy Scholars. I was taught to read it as an apprentice. It is a truly difficult scrip to master."

It's archaic, but you understand it better than the language upon the books at Doc Mitchell's house. It doesn't cause your eyes to strain that hard, or make your head feel like its humming. Going with the flow, you take the obvious bait, "What does it mean?"

"That is a shortened list of many things the Seed has taught us. We carry his concepts with us on our missionary work, so that all may realize what he has done for us."

Then there were the demons. The fell from the sky, cruel men and women who ripped apart the earth. At first, they pillaged and raided. Then they began to grow more and more wicked. They raised the dead,  corrupting the lands and themselves in the proccess. They destroyed much of the area to the west of the holy city, reaching the gates. But the Seed made his anger manifest, and this sacred avatar slaughtered the King of the Dead, a great serpent beast with twisting tentacles and wicked claws.

The battles lasted hundreds of years, sieges lasting literal generations.


You're close to crying by the end of it. Fleeting emotions that don't feel like they're genuinely yours. A mixed bag of anger, sadness, and regret. A cold burn of genuine hatred grows, lighting a fire in your belly. [0 vs. 20]

"And they were put to the fire. Scourged from existence with a burning hatred that wiped away every trace of corruption. Not even dust remained to interrupt the Great Work." You speak without thinking, finishing the priest's sentence.

"Your translation is off, but you have a good grasp of the scholar's tongue. Was it one of your parents? Odd they didn't teach you more." But he beams at you with genuine happiness. Only noticing the night falling on the town when the rain begins to patter on the glass of the high windows, "Do you have a place to stay, Pheobe? I can't deny the children of my siblings a place to rest for the night. I can make you up a cot near the fireplace with some of the apprentices."





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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 12, 2020, 12:52:19 am
"That'd be lovely, thank you!"

I'm beginning to develop a theory for the bracketed word-bundles that turn up sometimes-- [died, long-sleep, rest] [creator, maker, non-Empyeral], and some of the shorter ones like [protein] and [angel]. Could be wrong, but I think the brackets are used to indicate words that have no exact English translation-- implying that whatever we've been speaking, it's not English.

Perhaps we'll learn more about that later.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: VoidSlayer on February 12, 2020, 01:41:36 am
We can not stay here until we deal with the group that was bothering the doctor.  I have a feeling they will be investigating the fire and will possibly be upon us.  Best to move on a bit after learning some things.

Ask him about any rumors, news or gossip, this should give us information on things nearby without it making it look like we are ignorant completely.  Explain that we have been traveling for a while and need to keep going for a bit longer until we are done.  Thank him for the offer but decline for now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 12, 2020, 01:45:04 am
I think we can risk spending the night.  It'll allow us to be on top of our game tomorrow to deal with any and all threats that come our way.

"That'd be lovely, thank you!"

I'm beginning to develop a theory for the bracketed word-bundles that turn up sometimes-- [died, long-sleep, rest] [creator, maker, non-Empyeral], and some of the shorter ones like [protein] and [angel]. Could be wrong, but I think the brackets are used to indicate words that have no exact English translation-- implying that whatever we've been speaking, it's not English.

Perhaps we'll learn more about that later.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 12, 2020, 07:00:47 am
I think we can risk spending the night.  It'll allow us be on top of our game tomorrow to deal with any and all threats that come our way.

"That'd be lovely, thank you!"

I'm beginning to develop a theory for the bracketed word-bundles that turn up sometimes-- [died, long-sleep, rest] [creator, maker, non-Empyeral], and some of the shorter ones like [protein] and [angel]. Could be wrong, but I think the brackets are used to indicate words that have no exact English translation-- implying that whatever we've been speaking, it's not English.

Perhaps we'll learn more about that later.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 12, 2020, 07:04:54 am
"Suffice it to say, I have lived a sheltered life.  While I of course am familiar with the basics, I was hoping to hear your unique insight on the matter as a religious specialist."
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 12, 2020, 11:17:30 am
"Suffice it to say, I have lived a sheltered life.  While I of course am familiar with the basics, I was hoping to hear your unique insight on the matter as a religious specialist."
+1

...We said that already.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 12, 2020, 02:56:10 pm
"Suffice it to say, I have lived a sheltered life.  While I of course am familiar with the basics, I was hoping to hear your unique insight on the matter as a religious specialist."
+1

...We said that already.
No we didn’t, we asked what the religion was, this is the difference between asking what Norse paganism is and asking what they think about Odin or Loki
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 12, 2020, 03:00:38 pm
"Suffice it to say, I have lived a sheltered life.  While I of course am familiar with the basics, I was hoping to hear your unique insight on the matter as a religious specialist."
+1

...We said that already.
No we didn’t, we asked what the religion was, this is the difference between asking what Norse paganism is and asking what they think about Odin or Loki

To clarify, the action you added a +1 to has already been carried out (verbatim) in a recent update.  It doesn't make sense to say the exact same thing again in this context.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 12, 2020, 03:07:34 pm
"Suffice it to say, I have lived a sheltered life.  While I of course am familiar with the basics, I was hoping to hear your unique insight on the matter as a religious specialist."
+1

...We said that already.
No we didn’t, we asked what the religion was, this is the difference between asking what Norse paganism is and asking what they think about Odin or Loki

To clarify, the action you added a +1 to has already been carried out (verbatim) in a recent update.  It doesn't make sense to say the exact same thing again in this context.
Oh, oops. I will look for the update. Sorry for missing it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 12, 2020, 03:13:48 pm
I think we can risk spending the night.  It'll allow us be on top of our game tomorrow to deal with any and all threats that come our way.

"That'd be lovely, thank you!"

I'm beginning to develop a theory for the bracketed word-bundles that turn up sometimes-- [died, long-sleep, rest] [creator, maker, non-Empyeral], and some of the shorter ones like [protein] and [angel]. Could be wrong, but I think the brackets are used to indicate words that have no exact English translation-- implying that whatever we've been speaking, it's not English.

Perhaps we'll learn more about that later.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 13, 2020, 12:15:54 am
"That'd be lovely, thank you!" You smile at him, and he returns it. His posture is more at ease. The smile is almost joyful, and it reaches his eyes.

"I need to go consult the Mother. She has the final say, of course."  He leaves you through a backdoor in the church.

You rise from the pew and inch closer to the globe, going behind the table. Manuscripts lie across the surface, haphazardly strewn. You pay them no mind, getting closer to the orb. Its gold leaf over a hollow aluminum sphere. The steel previously seen is wrought around it in a tight chain of plaques and words.  You realize that were it not so cumbersome; you could probably carry it right out the front door. You'd be unlikely to find a buyer with such a thing having more cultural value than actual worth.

You start away as the backdoor swings open, and an older woman stumps out, leaning heavily on a cane. She walks with a pronounced limp, her eyes fixed in a stern countenance. Set on you appraisingly. You give a weak smile, and she does not return it.

"So this is the whelp then, John. She looks like some raider trash." She sniffs disapprovingly, coming to a stop very close to you, catching you off-guard. She has one of her gnarled hands in her pocket-- and you feel your eyes glance there-- [8] ah, too late to stop. Worse still, she notices.
"What, girl? You think a priest needs a gun?"

She wears an icy smile, looking you up and down. She reaches out, tapping the globe with her cane. It lands on a word there, 'vehicles.'

"What's that say, girl? And what does it mean?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 13, 2020, 12:55:31 am
Say whatever seems right. We should know this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 13, 2020, 02:28:07 am
Hmm.  What are the benefits and disadvantages of telling her what we know?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 13, 2020, 02:32:35 am
 “It says vehicles. Vehicle is a name for a large metal object used for transportation”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 13, 2020, 09:19:22 am
“It says vehicles. Vehicle is a name for a large metal object used for transportation”
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 13, 2020, 01:02:52 pm
Hmm.  What are the benefits and disadvantages of telling her what we know?

I ain't seeing any disadvantage right now, truth be told. If she takes a shine to us, we get a place to stay! Simple as that.

I'm not suggesting a particular answer right now, because I suspect there's some hidden meaning to this we the players wouldn't know. Still...

“It says vehicles. Vehicle is a name for a large metal object used for transportation”
+1

...if nothing more fitting comes to mind, we might as well say this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 14, 2020, 12:24:54 am
Would indicating innate understanding of highly specialized knowledge make her like us, or would it make her suspicious of us?  It's imperative that she not know who we are, as fallen angels seem to be adversaries in this religion ("demons").
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 14, 2020, 12:33:32 am
Given she's calling us "raider trash" at the moment, I think she just wants us to prove we've got a decent education. Should be fine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 14, 2020, 12:51:53 am
“It says vehicles. 'Vehicle' is a name for a large metal object used for transportation” You offer after a moment's hesitation.

[15]"Your translation is off." The Mother is quick to reply but taps her cane on another of the words. You describe it in the best possible detail. She does this with many, many words. There's a faint nod with each concept you state, and Brother John looks crestfallen by the end of it.

"You're a smart girl-- you've memorized more words than Brother John probably has." Her cold smile still twists her face into something menacing. She gestures at one of the words with her cane, and you glance at it. 'Vehicle.'

[13 vs. 12]Her blow catches you off guard, as she strikes you hard across the face with the cane. Anger follows the pain as you stumble into a defensive position, lifting your arms to ward away another blow as you square your hips. The Mother leans on her cane and watches in silence, the smile gone. "Know how to fight too. Keep your head attached."

"Mother Nicole, I must--" John begins, hurrying to your side. She cuts him off in an instant.

"Don't you Mother Nicole me," She spits, glaring at John, "We need tough people, not just smart ones. If she can't handle a love-tap from an old woman, then she won't be able to handle anything we throw at her. She's smarter than you, tougher too, perceptive, and a damn good liar. Don't patronize her with your sympathy."

You sit in stunned and surprised silence, and when you open your mouth to retort, she cuts you off too.

"I'd apologize, but let's call that sparring for now.  We'll deal with whatever petty emotional baggage you might have from that later. Let's talk business over dinner, Pheobe." Its the first time Mother Nicole uses your name.

Hunger getting the better of the anger, you silently agree.

They lead you to a backroom with a metal table set with food. Steaming loaves of bread, simmering stews and soups, and a warm, sweet smell from the center of the table overwhelm your willpower. You take a seat and get down to business.

The bread is soft, with chunks of potato mixed in. It's warm though, freshly baked, and tasting of heavenly salt. You plow through two loaves. The soup is softer still, but still has a delicious heaviness to it. You recognize the odd gamey, white meat as the [protein] you ate previously, as well as the beans and other herbs. It fills your belly after just a bowl.
Next, the carve you a section of the [apple] tart.  It isn't as sweet as you like, but with a heaping of sour cream, it crowns the dinner off wonderfully.

And it's after your thorough appreciation of their hospitality do they speak. Mostly Mother Nicole, while Brother John nods beside her. She launches into a spiel, one that she's told before, but you notice subtle variations and actual interest.

"I'd like to ask you to join the scholars. I can't promise every meal a feast as good as this, but you won't starve." She eyes your empty plate with the ghost of a real smile. She takes a sip from her glass, "Lots of bread and jerky, but you haven't eaten anything in a long time, have you?"

You grin warily. This morning was a long time ago, at least when it comes to food.

"Plus an education, and a trade. You're what? Fourteen, fifteen?" Something inside of you bristles, but you suppress the emotion. "You could reach elder status in the next ten years if that. Wouldn't your parents want that?"

"Surely, not ten years, Mother, it took me--" Brother John begins, only for her to cut him off.

"She knows more of the Scholar's tongue than you, and she's twenty  years younger." The reply is sharp, crisp, and carefully aimed. Brother John visibly deflates. "Would you be a dear Child and clear up for me? Thank you, Child John."

He looks a little sad as he begins to clear the table, leaving you and the Mother alone.

"I'm serious. The opportunities we can provide for you are endless. The dangers minimal-- " Perhaps Mother Nicole notices your disinterest, or perhaps its the wine talking, but she's grinning now. "Or maybe you're the type of young woman who wants some danger in her life. Wants to feel the rush of adrenaline as she struggles to survive. The McCreary Crusader Force can provide that."

"For what?"

"Secrecy. Loyalty. Your strengths." Mother Nicole looks amused, "You never teach what we give you to others without permission. You obey your superiors when we ask. You give us that strength of will and intelligence, and we give you knowledge and shared purpose. There's a contract you'll sign. You'll receive a last name to sign it with, usually the name of your sponsor. You'll take mine."

[6]She finishes with a gentle implication while grinning a wolf's grin, "It's dangerous out there for the lonely scholar. Raiders and slavers abound. Knowing as much as you know, if anybody was looking through the front door, they would have found a very valuable mark."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 14, 2020, 01:16:52 am
This seems to me like the best chance at a stable life we'll be getting any time soon! I'm inclined to go for it, but I want to know first what we're getting into.

Express interest. Try and find out more about the contract, the induction process... and what exactly our "superiors" would be asking of us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 14, 2020, 01:19:03 am
This seems to me like the best chance at a stable life we'll be getting any time soon! I'm inclined to go for it, but I want to know first what we're getting into.

Express interest. Try and find out more about the contract, the induction process... and what exactly our "superiors" would be asking of us.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 14, 2020, 05:11:43 am
This seems to me like the best chance at a stable life we'll be getting any time soon! I'm inclined to go for it, but I want to know first what we're getting into.

Express interest. Try and find out more about the contract, the induction process... and what exactly our "superiors" would be asking of us.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 14, 2020, 05:30:23 am
You express interest by ignoring the threat that makes your skin crawl and instead focus on the older woman in front of you. Her skin is browned by the sun and marked with old scars. She's hunched over with age, but her eyes are bright and hard as diamonds. A crooked grin curves her lips. There's something familiar about her.

"What does the contract involve?"

She pulls a paper from a nearby book, pushing it over to you.  Its a relatively simple contract, however deeply crouched in linguistic backflips it might be. You belong to the Scholars. In return, and commensurate with your rank within the organization, you will be provided with room, board, and food. After twenty-five years, you will be allowed to open a private enterprise or a new church, freed from your bonds, but still bound to secrecy about anything you've learned. You will be allowed to teach a certain number of individuals your skills. The legal jargon makes your head buzz worse than usual when you read it.

Failure to comply with a direct order, yadda yadda, may result in a punishment depending on the severity of the offense, up to execution. Jail time is also listed, as is being 'exiled from the blessing of the SEED.'

"As for the induction process, you'll be sent to one of the training academies. After two years, you'll be allowed to select a more permanent job. I'd like you to follow in my footsteps with the Crusaders, but a direct posting in the Capital would also suit you well. We'll talk more about it when it comes to your selection. We have time."

"What orders am I expected to follow?" You ask.

"Mine, first and foremost, and you'll keep them quiet." She sips her wine, watching you, "After that, the Elders, Parents and Elder Siblings can all order you around, follow the most highest-ranking order first, except where mine are involved. You follow mine first, no matter what. There are abuses, but the vast majority might be busy-work or major tasks. If you join the Crusaders, you will need to kill or risk your life, but you won't have a problem with that, will you?"

You furrow your brow, looking askance.

"Don't try and act innocent." Mother Nicole's voice sharpens, "You smell of blood and ashes." With a snicker that sends shivers down your spine, she continues, "Your pants are covered with them. Your coat is burned-- something is wrong with your side..." She sobers. "But the thing I noticed first? Your eyes. They never really recover. You've killed."

[6]You have no retort. Mother Nicole smiles across the table, staying silent herself. There's no warmth in her as she watches you intently. It gives you a distinct feeling of being sized up, and your silence spoke volumes.  Triumph. She's triumphant right now, and you, you're a mouse caught in a trap.

But you wonder if you should feel guilty. You killed three men just this morning. You didn't mean to, but you only feel satisfied by the outcome. You watched Doc Mitchell die, but his death weighs less on your mind than you expected. Eventually, Mother Nicole taps on the table, jarring you out of your quiet contemplation.

"Look, don't let it get to you, all that matters is that you're alive at the end of the day." She offers, attempting to be helpful, and you once again want to snap at her, but can't offer an argument. "Any other questions before you sign, Phoebe?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 14, 2020, 07:49:15 am
Are we sure we want to join these people, as the whole thing seems rather sinister or at least the old woman does.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 14, 2020, 07:49:51 am
”Why did you join? How did you end up here? What’s your story? Everyone has a story. A reason.”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 14, 2020, 07:58:35 am
”Why did you join? How did you end up here? What’s your story? Everyone has a story. A reason.”
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 14, 2020, 08:15:41 am
”Why did you join? How did you end up here? What’s your story? Everyone has a story. A reason.”
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 15, 2020, 12:11:28 am
" Why did you join? How did you end up here? What's your story? Everyone has a story. A reason."

[19] "When I was around your age," Mother Nicole begins, "[ the great plague ] ravaged my homeland. All-around me, people died. The local government did nothing. There was nothing to be done except to kill or amputate the injured. They failed at that, too. The Scholars, or rather, SEED, called a crusade — the twelfth great one. Every man and woman that could hold a gun fought. I got a peg-leg and enlisted. I was good at it, and they honed my skills, let me get what I truly wanted. Revenge for my leg, revenge for my friends, and family and the town I loved."

She sits, sad and deflated, swirling her wine around in the glass.

[15] "I got old. Couldn't lead or fight as the young could. I could whip any punk The Scholars sent me into line. Until I couldn't." She laughs, "That was when I hung up my armor and asked for a cushy retirement job. They gave it to me. I'm in charge of this Church and the Town around it. We'll be here for another fifteen years, then move on to a new assignment or new town. Until then, I drink and think."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 15, 2020, 12:14:46 am
Ask her if we can take a few days to think about it before signing the contract.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 15, 2020, 12:31:58 am
Sign the contract.

Hesitant +1... this lady seems on the level, and (though I'm leery of the obligations involved) this really is a solid deal we've stumbled on.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 15, 2020, 04:47:10 am
Are we sure we want to sign up for this, I mean we could explore the area a bit before we commit to this, we don't have to sign up for the first thing we see.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 15, 2020, 04:55:46 am
That's a good point.  I'm changing my vote to ask her if we have to sign immediately, or whether we can take a few days to think about it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 15, 2020, 05:16:18 am
Ask her if we can take a few days to think about it before signing the contract.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 15, 2020, 02:28:00 pm
Ask her if we can take a few days to think about it before signing the contract.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 16, 2020, 01:00:12 am
"Could I have a few days to think about this, Mother Nicole?" You ask, hesitantly.

[-] "Of course. I'd think you were a moron if you just jumped at the chance without thinking about it. But do remember this, Phoebe. I want to make -us- powerful, and I would do anything to help you out." She shrugs a shoulder, feigning disinterest, "I'd be giving you my name-- people might think we're related.  Treated very well. Just a thought."

"You have until tomorrow night. The apprentices leave the next morning."

She rises, calling to Brother John down the hall to guide you to the apprentice chambers. He hurries back and silently leads you into the room. It's filled with cots huddled against the chilly rain by the fire. A few apprentices sit and talk with one another. They go quiet when they see you, but begin talking again when you're assigned a cot. You fall into it gratefully, covering yourself with the blanket. You soon drift off to a comfortable sleep.

[1/1d3]

--

Fire sprouts itself from your back, into wild wings.

You bow your head to SEED, a great orb of metal and twining trees.

Something presses into your hand. A sharp, cruel dagger behind your back. But there's another — a knife in your side, pressing you forward.

SEED approaches you. And you stab at it.

--

"FAILURE." A voice growls. It rips your wings off, but you feel no pain — only the worse sense of loss imaginable. You feel empty. Ashamed. What would he say? Think? Do? Why isn't he here anymore? Weren't you following the plan faithfully? You followed orders, didn't they see that?

--

You open your eyes as someone jostles your cot.

"Wake up," A brown young man of fourteen or so grumbles, "Breakfast time."

His name is Eric; you come to learn over a breakfast of [grainmeal], raisins, and [apples]. He's a farmer's child, and, after receiving a strong cup of tea, tells you much about his life. You listen to the distraction, keeping him at a metaphorical arm's length when the subject turns to your childhood. You finish your meal, grace him with a smile that sets his face burning red, and leave the church, back out into the open market that surrounds the well. Everything is wet from last night's rain.

The stalls begin to open, hawkers calling their wares to the early morning workers trudging towards the factory. Brother John hurries past you without greeting, going the same direction, and carrying a toolbox.

The doors to the public house are swung open, and patrons begin to spill out into the street, a few still drunk from the night before.

What now?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 16, 2020, 01:16:36 am
Ah, cryptic dreams. The hallmark of all supernatural amnesiacs!
I daresay that's just about confirmed our angelic nature. More than that, I can't determine.

Let's go have a looksee inside "Hausman's Public Haus".
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 16, 2020, 04:11:58 am
Ah, cryptic dreams. The hallmark of all supernatural amnesiacs!
I daresay that's just about confirmed our angelic nature. More than that, I can't determine.

Let's go have a looksee inside "Hausman's Public Haus".
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 16, 2020, 04:24:11 am
Ah, cryptic dreams. The hallmark of all supernatural amnesiacs!
I daresay that's just about confirmed our angelic nature. More than that, I can't determine.

Let's go have a looksee inside "Hausman's Public Haus".
+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 16, 2020, 11:29:27 am
Ah, cryptic dreams. The hallmark of all supernatural amnesiacs!
I daresay that's just about confirmed our angelic nature. More than that, I can't determine.

Let's go have a looksee inside "Hausman's Public Haus".
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+1 Im curious why we tried to kill SEED, who told us to do so?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 16, 2020, 02:37:16 pm
 :)



The Public house is the same size as the church, but more fully furnished, with several independent tables orbiting around the main bar. There are few seats taken, most of the customers having left when morning came. A few lift their heads to look at you as you enter. A wiry, thin man greets you as you take a seat at the bar.

"Welcome, lass. A bit young to be drowning your sorrows in drink, aren't you?" Purveyor Haus asks as he pours you a drink regardless.

"I-I don't have any money." You protest.

"New faces get one free." He counters, but his eyes harden, moving away from you without another word. You're pretty sure he's ignoring you, as he spends time talking with every other guest but you.

The mug is dirty, but the beer within it is cold and fresh. A heady blend of yeast and hops that goes down smooth. Hints of cider, ethanol, and a faint buttery taste.

You look around the room, examining the crowd. The bar is full of a variety of men and women in light armor. Guns stick out of belts or strapped to backs — pistols, sawn-offs, full barrel shotguns, or, as with one gentleman, a massive assault rifle. Some wear masks or bandanas around their necks as they enjoy their drinks.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 16, 2020, 03:01:31 pm
Hey bartender! What does one do to get some money around here?
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 16, 2020, 03:02:29 pm
Hey bartender! What does one do to get some money around here?
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 16, 2020, 04:02:02 pm
[6] "Work, usually." The Bartender replies, glancing your way as you interrupt his conversation. "The factory is hiring. Other than that, I couldn't tell you."

[3]A few of the patron giggle at the scene, and they visibly relax around you. They focus more on the subject of their conversations and drinks. You do the same, emptying the rest of your mug and contemplating your next move.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 16, 2020, 05:09:09 pm
Head for the factory
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 16, 2020, 07:27:45 pm
You rise from the stool with a huff. Hunching over, you wander out the door and into the warm mid-morning. The heat has evaporated away the evening rain, leaving a lingering humidity in the air. People wander by, sweating in the heat, but you do not. Instead, you realize you feel nothing, except for a light breeze on your exposed skin. Passing by a merchant's mirror, you take pause. He tries to sell it to you for a fraction of the supposed cost, but you ignore him, fixated as you are by your appearance.

You're a tall, lanky girl, with a shock of bright red hair. Its unevenly cut, a portion of it hanging down past your ears on your left side. The rest is trimmed up high, and the back is shaved to your head. You're pale, far paler than anybody else you see. Almost translucent, with visible veins. The other thing you notice is an androgynous face, were it not for your long hair and the curve of your body, you could be mistaken for a boy.

"If you're not going to buy it, then stop blocking it!" The merchant screeches, and you take your leave.

[19] As you walk away, somebody grabs the back of your coat. You twist out of their grip, swinging around to face them, squaring up, ready for a fight-- with an old man, who huffs and puffs heavily. He leans on a cane, his hands shaking. Nerves or ailment, you couldn't tell, as he looks frightened.

"Wait, please!" He begs, lifting a hand, "I'm not here to fight! I heard you're looking for work. I can provide a job. Please, come with me back to my shop! I can pay you well!"

What luck.

You nod, following him back without expression. He leads you to a run-down building off the main sqaure, something that was once a gun-shop, if the signage is to be believed. You enter the dustry main-room, taking in the machines and lathes as he hurries to take a seat, heaving a labored breath. The building is a mess, filled with scattered appliances and dirty clothes, half-finished guns gathering dust. A small reactor hums in the back, a display listing a very large number. Several pistol magazines are plugged into it.

"You, you know how to fight. I can tell!" He begins, staring at you over his glasses, "I need someone like you. You're not with a merchant caravan, either. No attachments. I need someone killed, and you're my last hope." He carefully draws a gun out from a safe, more of a masterpiece than a firearm, he sets it gingerly on the table in front of you. "This gun and [five credits] will be your pay."

"Who?" You query, mind performing the math. [Five credits] will provide you enough to live on for quite a while, a loaf of bread costing somewhere between .03 and .04. A night at the public house was [.2 credits] for the suite. Its a hefty sum, for a place like this.

"I want you to kill the son of the warlord."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 16, 2020, 07:39:16 pm
Well... that sounds like an incredibly dangerous request. 

Ask him for more information.  Specifically, why does he want him dead, what areas does he frequent, and what level of security would be expected.

This sounds like a bad idea.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 16, 2020, 07:51:20 pm
You begin to ask questions, picking up the gun. He flinches, but begins to babble, answering your questions with painful honesty. He starts to cry.

"My Polly, my Pollyanna. He killed her. My dear daughter." He chokes, and whatever strength he has fails him as he cradles his face with shaking hands. "I paid three others. They died. He has a posse, his friends and brothers that he drinks with every night at the public house. They challenged him to a duel, and he shot them down in the main street. I don't care anymore if his father has me killed. I've no apprentices and have the shakes."

He shakes his head, lapsing into heavy sobs.

The gun is beautiful. Truly a masterpiece. The magazine holds twice the power that Doc Mitchell's did, and the coolant system looks like its been super-charged. Besides the technical skill that went into it, gold filigree in the shape of twisting [oak] leaves crown the handle, twisting into thorns on the barrel. ['For Polly'] is wrought in silver across it. It feels right at home in your hand. You try to extract the magazine, only to find it permanently attached. To help accommodate the sheer size of it. Five hundred shots before a recharge isn't too bad, however.

"I wanted him hung." He finally musters, "But I'll settle for him burning with her gun."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 16, 2020, 08:01:03 pm
”It’s a deal. What does he look like? What does he sound like?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 16, 2020, 08:04:59 pm
”It’s a deal. What does he look like? What does he sound like?”
There's also all sorts of different folk in the public house, You got a description for what the posse looks like?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 16, 2020, 08:25:33 pm
Vertigo overcomes you, and in your mind's eye, you realize that this may end in your death and the death of many others. Brief flashes of futures uncertain.

This is for careful consideration by all involved.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 16, 2020, 08:30:30 pm
I'm worried about the consequences.  A shootout in the public house could endanger innocents and directly lead to our death.  Plus, it would antagonize the local warlord, who probably has the resources to track us down.  Not to mention that this could jeopradize our chance to sign Nicole's contract.

Do the potential benefits really outweigh the dangers?  If so, how exactly?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 16, 2020, 08:33:35 pm
I'm worried about the consequences.  A shootout in the public house could endanger innocents and directly lead to our death.  Plus, it would antagonize the local warlord, who probably has the resources to track us down.  Not to mention that this could jeopradize our chance to sign Nicole's contract.

Do the potential benefits really outweigh the dangers?  If so, how exactly?
Fair point, we will probably get money via the contract too
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 16, 2020, 08:36:04 pm
We’re no where near ready for a task of this magnitude at the moment....
Maybe in time, when we’ve developed our skills more

I’m sorry about your daughter, but if this warlord killed three other people and didn’t suffer even one scratch, then I don’t think I’ll fare much better. I’ll think about this, though. You’ll get your revenge, in time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 16, 2020, 08:53:54 pm
We’re no where near ready for a task of this magnitude at the moment....
Maybe in time, when we’ve developed our skills more

I’m sorry about your daughter, but if this warlord killed three other people and didn’t suffer even one scratch, then I don’t think I’ll fare much better. I’ll think about this, though. You’ll get your revenge, in time.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 16, 2020, 08:58:27 pm
We’re no where near ready for a task of this magnitude at the moment....
Maybe in time, when we’ve developed our skills more

I’m sorry about your daughter, but if this warlord killed three other people and didn’t suffer even one scratch, then I don’t think I’ll fare much better. I’ll think about this, though. You’ll get your revenge, in time.
+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 16, 2020, 09:32:50 pm
There's a chance we could eliminate him more discreetly, but I still think we should refrain at the moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 16, 2020, 10:00:05 pm
"I’m sorry about your daughter, but if this warlord killed three other people and didn’t suffer even one scratch, then I don’t think I’ll fare much better. I’ll think about this, though. You’ll get your revenge, in time." You offer, setting the gun back down on the table. He dosn't take it, doesn't move.

Instead, he simply sobs into his hands, shaking his head back and forth. "Pl-please change your mind. I'll be here-- I'll be here if you do. I'll get someone else to try it tomorrow if you don't- don't come back."

With a final glance at the firearm, you turn and leave his shop, making your way to the factory.

The streets off of the main road are quiet, and you walk through them with a heavy weight on your shoulders. Your feet carry you where you want to go, and you arrive in the factory's main courtyard. Men and women bustle around, hauling parts, loading crates or feeding the ore into the hungry furnaces. Brother John is sweating buckets as he hunches over a machine, rummaging within soot-stained internals.

A man is walking through the courtyard with a clipboard, occasionally setting it down to help one of the workers, or to coach them on how to do something. It takes him a while to notice you, and you think. Your mind races through the information you've received about the assassination.

[19][1] Something clicks, and you begin to formulate plans within plans of combat, dueling, and ambushes. Your head begins to ache, however, and you snap yourself out of it by digging your fingernails into the palm of your hand before it can worsen.

"How can I help you?" The overseer states, arms crossing over his chest.

"Uh...I need a job." You mumble, awkwardly, glancing over the courtyard.

"Only one available is Loader. Ken threw out his back." The overseer stares at you and gestures you towards one of the loading docks, where crates of steel are being stacked. You follow, watching as he strains to lift one of these boxes up and on top of another. He gestures for you to follow suit.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 16, 2020, 10:03:34 pm
attempt box lifting
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 16, 2020, 10:46:38 pm
You reach down, lifting the box, expecting a high weight, and are shocked to find that it doesn't weigh much. Enough to have mass, but it doesn't make you strain. You set it on top of another.

The Overseer blinks and shakes his head. He reaches out to shake your hand, "I'm John."

"Pheobe."

"Pleasure to meet you. Get to work, the bell will whistle at the break, and I'll show you around." He leaves you without another word, picking up the clipboard. "Pay is [.1] credit per day. You did not start on time, so for you, it'll be [.075 credits.]"




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 16, 2020, 10:57:36 pm
Well, let's get cracking! Regardless of what we decide over the whole temple contract thing, it'll be nice to have a bit of pocket change on hand.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 16, 2020, 11:37:16 pm
Not exactly glorious work, but it's honest and it pays.

Well, let's get cracking! Regardless of what we decide over the whole temple contract thing, it'll be nice to have a bit of pocket change on hand.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 17, 2020, 12:36:49 am
Not exactly glorious work, but it's honest and it pays.

Also, we seem to be really good at it. Angelic muscle for the win! :))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 17, 2020, 02:57:00 am
[15]Taking quick stock of the situation, you notice four large poles on each point of a rather large square. There is metal beneath the boxes, elevated off the concrete. The platform itself has several points of entry on the base, extending halfway through, you would guess. The poles have lines painted with [stack to here]. A pile of crates lies flush with that point.

So, you begin to work. Pallet-jacks drop off more and more of the crates, and you focus on loading them up to that point. You have to clamber atop some of the other boxes to stack them up. The work, while not difficult, begins to take its strain, and by the time the lunch bell whistles, you've worked up a good sweat, your muscles burning with exertion. Your coat sits on a stump of concrete.

[18+1]Overseer John comes back, and you notice a faint look of awe on his face. You've filled the platform up about halfway, all told. The pallet-jacks have been coming too slow for you to continue working at breakneck speed, the backlog has cleared.

"I'm genuinely surprised. Come, I'll show you to the lunchroom and storage lockers. Meals cost [.06 credits], and are taken out of your pay if you decide to eat. An accountant will log you as being present during meal-time. The meals are filling but simple and salty. Drink plenty of water." He explains as you follow along, catching your breath with the slow walk. He brings you into a room filled with tables, centered around a large kitchen. A chef hurries from cook to cook, examining various pots, and directing the staff. The employees themselves dish out their food, filling plates, and rushing to a table.

An accountant notices you, glancing at John, who shakes his head. "Her name is Pheobe, but her meal is free today."

Food, glorious food! Free food, at that.

The meals are indeed simple — a pot of porridge consisting of [grainmeal] and various fruits. There's a gravy with ground chunks of [meat] and vegetables. You heap it over a batch of fried potatoes that drip with oil and salt. You grab a few plates, pile them haphazardly on a tray, and find an empty table.

You devour your meal, the Overseer watching with amusement. He takes a specially marked tray from a heating window and sits down across from you.

"We might have to charge you more if you continue eating like that. Just a warning."

His meal is far from simple. A beautifully trimmed center cut of [meat] loin, with a herby sauce, coupled with shredded potatoes and a heaping amount of vegetables. A small dessert sits on the tray next to him, something that resembles [jello], filled with chunks of fruit and topped with whipped sour cream.

[10]"So, you must work here for a week at the least, before receiving your first paycheck. After that, you will be allowed to draw it out whenever you'd like. If those terms don't work, you will have today's paycheck given to you, but no other. I'm still waiting on a replacement from the capital, so if you don't show up tomorrow, I won't hire you."

You shovel a spoonful of the [grainmeal] and fruit into your mouth and nod.

"Regardless of your plans for tomorrow, I expect you to work four more hours and assist with the Departure." He states bluntly.

You nod, rising to grab a few glasses of water, which you down in a hurry. Just like that, the bell rings out, and the Overseer hurries to finish his meal. You do the same, stacking the dishes up with the rest and heading back to your station. A bunch more pallet jacks arrive, and you're back to work.

[13] After the next four hours, you are breathing hard, leaning against a pillar. Overseer John stands nearby, looking at the platform. He seems disappointed, not in you, no, he pays you no mind. You suspect because the platform is only three-fourths of the way full of crates. But you had to loiter for an hour, unable to do anything else for lack of materials.

A hum begins to fill the air, and you notice a shadow approaching from the west. A large hover-ship, or something much like it, come to a steady stop overhead. A platform is dropped down slowly from the middle of the craft from heavy tethers. It's filled to the line with crates of foodstuffs, bags of grain, and gently thawing iceboxes.

Then the vehicle itself adjusts. And slowly, slowly, it begins to descend, small VTOL engines assisting with minute bursts of blue fire. Tethers drop-down, hovering over the poles of the full platform. They attach and begin to lift it into the sky. When it reaches the bottom of the hover-craft, mechanisms lock the platform into place.

The Overseer makes you back up, and the VTOL engines push out more power, kicking up dust. Then, its primary drivers activate, and it speeds off east-wards, eating through the rising clouds.

[16] Overseer John claps you on the back, and sets off, but not before pointing to a small building in the corner. "Accountant office is over there. You've worked hard enough today. Don't worry about helping with the unloading. I don't want to pay you anymore anyway."

He doesn't say goodnight, instead of helping to direct the flow of goods leaving into the town.  You notice employees forming up to buy [grainmeal], [protein], and various [vegetables], speaking with accountants. Prices must be better than going through one of the local farmers, then.

You slip your heavy duster back on and slide your hands into your pockets.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 17, 2020, 03:16:36 am
Let's cash out and return to the church.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 17, 2020, 06:50:12 am
Continue working ignore this, real vote here
Let's cash out and return to the church.
+1 Honest work, but we need a bit more excitement
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 17, 2020, 07:44:47 am
Let's cash out and return to the church.
+1 Honest work, but we need a bit more excitement
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 17, 2020, 08:06:11 am
Let's cash out and return to the church.
+1 Honest work, but we need a bit more excitement
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 17, 2020, 10:26:01 am
Let's cash out and return to the church.
+1 Honest work, but we need a bit more excitement
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 17, 2020, 06:16:25 pm
The compound's accountant hands you over a folded wad of bills. You count through it, your mind tallying it into units you understand, and yes, it is all there. You smile at her, shoving it into your back pocket, and head out into the streets. The humidity that made work so exhausting once again vanishes, leaving only a faint chill in the air that forbodes rain. Clouds above you support this hypothesis.

As you pass by the public house on your way to the church, you notice just how much of a crowd it has. More than half of the village seems to be in attendance, drinking away their problems and making merry. The amount of armed individuals has also increased more and more people openly wearing firearms. Even the locals seem to be carrying whatever they can. The whole situation feels a bit tense, so you hurry past.

The church doors are shut tight for the night, and you have to pound on them for a solid minute before Brother John pries them open. He glances down at you with a raised brow, before stepping aside and beckoning you.

Mother Nicole is sitting at her desk, contemplating a glass of wine and a pile of paperwork. The former with far more interest than the latter. She looks up at you when you enter, and gives you a cheerful smile. "Ah, Pheobe. Wonderful. I was worried you wouldn't show."

"Sign it Pheobe Gainer, or whatever you want your first name to be. Gainer is the important part." She slides the contract and a pen over to you.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 17, 2020, 06:19:38 pm
Read the contract. I don't want to sign something we've not checked for fine print first!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 17, 2020, 06:37:28 pm
We've already read the contract:

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She pulls a paper from a nearby book, pushing it over to you.  Its a relatively simple contract, however deeply crouched in linguistic backflips it might be. You belong to the Scholars. In return, and commensurate with your rank within the organization, you will be provided with room, board, and food. After twenty-five years, you will be allowed to open a private enterprise or a new church, freed from your bonds, but still bound to secrecy about anything you've learned. You will be allowed to teach a certain number of individuals your skills. The legal jargon makes your head buzz worse than usual when you read it.

Failure to comply with a direct order, yadda yadda, may result in a punishment depending on the severity of the offense, up to execution. Jail time is also listed, as is being 'exiled from the blessing of the SEED.'
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 17, 2020, 06:42:00 pm
Read the contract. I don't want to sign something we've not checked for fine print first!

Damn your eyes!  :P



The signatory hereafter referred to apprentice, is required to follow all commands presented by senior members of the Brotherhood, unless such orders are unlawful, harm the organization, or present greater than an average danger to the apprentice. Exceptions apply, to be examined later if such a conflict of interest is expressed to another superior [officer]. Insubordination is considered not following a direct order to the best of one's ability. It is punishable with the suspension of duty, flogging, branding, imprisonment, banishment, or execution, depending on the severity of the situation and any other factors to be determined by a tribunal of either superior officers or elders.

All secrets, patents, and procedures within the Brotherhood are to be held with the greatest secrecy unless permission is granted through form 12-b to apprentice or senior members. Failure to comply will result in death. If you have any doubts about the confidentiality of a particular concept or procedure, don't share it.

The apprentice is required to serve for a mandatory twenty-five years to receive full benefits, which include a pension, retirement posting, and comprehensive healthcare. Desertion is considered being absent without leave for longer than [1 hour]. It is punishable with imprisonment, banishment, or execution, depending on the severity of the situation and any other factors to be determined by a tribunal.

Apprentices, up until first posting, will receive food, board, medical care, and a salary of [.025 credits] per week, to be paid after the first week. Further benefits based on assignments and posting but generally include food, board, and medical care. Salaries are dependent on work performed, bonuses, etc. All further offers will be presented in new contracts with the apprentice.

I, Apprentice __________________________, promise to uphold my contract to the best of my abilities, accepting all benefits and punishments accordingly. I swear to promote the Great Work in all its efforts; to bring life to this barren world and to eradicate the [demons] that would seek to hinder it.


That's about the summary of it. Legal jargon, form references, table references, and local legalese cloud a lot of it, but you understand the gist of it.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 17, 2020, 06:49:23 pm
...or not.  Hmm.  A 25-year commitment is quite lengthy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 17, 2020, 06:54:27 pm
...or not.  Hmm.  A 25-year commitment is quite lengthy.

Timeskips will be employed through boring parts, for example, the majority of the academy, if nothing interesting happens. And so on!

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 17, 2020, 06:57:08 pm
I vote for signing it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 17, 2020, 07:03:11 pm
pension? Healthcare? Yes! What about DENTAL PLAN?
let’s sign
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 17, 2020, 07:10:45 pm
We've already read the contract:

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She pulls a paper from a nearby book, pushing it over to you.  Its a relatively simple contract, however deeply crouched in linguistic backflips it might be. You belong to the Scholars. In return, and commensurate with your rank within the organization, you will be provided with room, board, and food. After twenty-five years, you will be allowed to open a private enterprise or a new church, freed from your bonds, but still bound to secrecy about anything you've learned. You will be allowed to teach a certain number of individuals your skills. The legal jargon makes your head buzz worse than usual when you read it.

Failure to comply with a direct order, yadda yadda, may result in a punishment depending on the severity of the offense, up to execution. Jail time is also listed, as is being 'exiled from the blessing of the SEED.'

Ach, my mistake! Still, all seems in order.

Sign.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 17, 2020, 09:10:46 pm
Sign with Phoebe Gainer
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 17, 2020, 09:48:30 pm
You sign on the barred line. The contract is gently separated from a copy-sheet underneath and passed over to you. You slip it into your duster, looking back up at Mother Nicole as she passes over another paper after signing it.

I, Mother Nicole of SEED's Holy Steel No' 09, request that Pheobe Gainer is trained as both an Apprentice of SEED, and as a Representative of SEED's Holy Steel No' 09, as per Official Requirements for Increased Independence and Vassalization of Local Warlords as Businessmen. But also with respect to Cultural Demands and Allowances, permitting Pheobe Gainer to carry a firearm and local dress outfit, marked with the Brotherhood Symbol.

She is an outstanding youth, already understanding the basics of the Holy Tongue to the extent of a third level Brother. Reaction times, physical strength, healthiness to the level of a third level Crusader, and previous combat experience of up to two years.

Besides which, Pheobe Gainer is my grand-daughter, a respectable ward for SEED to possess to ensure continued compliance of all with his holy work.

Thank you for your assistance in this matter,
Mother Nicole Gainer, His Twelfth Holy Crusader, Chief Officer of SEED's Holy Steel No' 09,  and Mother of Seed's Holy Steel No' 09 Church of Knowledge

"This one too, darling."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 17, 2020, 09:57:49 pm
Ah, so that’s why you needed gainer
Sign this one too
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 17, 2020, 10:12:30 pm
She's really taken a shine to us.  We were lucky to find her, though the part about the warlord is a bit odd.

Sign it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 17, 2020, 10:25:24 pm
She's really taken a shine to us.  We were lucky to find her, though the part about the warlord is a bit odd.

Sign it.
+1 it’s talking about increased independence and the possibility of vassalling local warlords, this may or may not make it easier to kill the warlord’s son, if he is a vassal of us, we could tax him to the point where he will starve, if we are his vassals, he may underestimate our strength
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 17, 2020, 10:36:27 pm
After you sign, she nods to you and then hands you a few more miscellaneous documents. One after the other, you sign, as many of them are harmless or merely allowing yourself to be treated. Your wrist is sore by the end of it, and she gives you a nod. She reaches for the safe, drawing out a pistol in a holster, which she passes your way. It is a standard las-gun, with 250 shots before needing a refill. It gleams brand new.

"And here's this for you, sweetie." She offers cold kindness, the informal nickname sounding like venom in her mouth. "Now, here's what I want you do in the academy. Show off your physical abilities and gather a clique, a group; of boys and girls who respect you. Recruit from anywhere, but never tell them the full truth. Keep an eye out for opportunities concerning No' 09's interests. If you think you've found one, send me mail about it. Don't dishonor me, or call me anything but my title or grandmother."

"You're smart, but translations aren't your forte, I can tell." She finishes, smiling at you with a wolf's grin. "Now, tell me about your life so I can fit it all together."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 17, 2020, 10:51:58 pm
She brings us in to bring others in. Did we just enter a combat themed MLM?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 17, 2020, 11:07:47 pm
"I know this sounds strange, grandmother, but I truly don't remember.  There are some things I can recall, like the Holy Tongue, but the majority of my past is just... blank.  I think I suffered some sort of injury.  I hope to regain my memories soon, and when I do, you'll be the first one I tell."

"Here's what I do know, however: I am capable, and I will serve you well."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: VoidSlayer on February 17, 2020, 11:18:01 pm
Show the wound and explain about the doctor and the men who killed him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 17, 2020, 11:56:49 pm
"I know this sounds strange, grandmother, but I truly don't remember.  There are some things I can recall, like the Holy Tongue, but the majority of my past is just... blank.  I think I suffered some sort of injury."

Say this

Show the wound and explain about the doctor and the men who killed him.

do this

"I hope to regain my memories soon, and when I do, you'll be the first one I tell."

"Here's what I do know, however: I am capable, and I will serve you well."[/b]

and explain this.

Do not bring up the doctor's story of how he found us-- we don't need Mother Nicole knowing we "fell out of the sky". So too, don't bring up the two guys that attacked us back there unless we must-- and if we must, definitely don't go into the details of the fight. "We incinerated them with the power of our fury" is another thing that'd be better kept to ourselves.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 18, 2020, 12:25:57 am
"I know this sounds strange, grandmother, but I truly don't remember.  There are some things I can recall, like the Holy Tongue, but the majority of my past is just... blank.  I think I suffered some sort of injury."

Say this

Show the wound and explain about the doctor and the men who killed him.

do this

"I hope to regain my memories soon, and when I do, you'll be the first one I tell."

"Here's what I do know, however: I am capable, and I will serve you well."[/b]

and explain this.

Do not bring up the doctor's story of how he found us-- we don't need Mother Nicole knowing we "fell out of the sky". So too, don't bring up the two guys that attacked us back there unless we must-- and if we must, definitely don't go into the details of the fight. "We incinerated them with the power of our fury" is another thing that'd be better kept to ourselves.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 18, 2020, 01:19:52 am
[5] "I know this is strange, grandmother, but I truly don't remember. There are some things I can recall, like the holy tongue, but the majority of my past is just...blank. I suffered some head injury."

You lift your shirt over your side, reveal the old bandages that wrap around your abdomen, coated in sweat and grime. For the first time, you realize that you have a dull ache there, not feeling the pain anymore.

"A man named Doc Mitchell saved me, but he was killed that night by a bandit. I killed the man with Doc Mitchell's gun, but the shotgun caused a house fire, and Doc Mitchell's house burned down."

"Hopefully, I can regain my memories. When I do, you'll be the first one I tell." You duck your head in a slight, respectful bow, [20], but notice something off. Mother Nicole has both her hands under the table. Her eyes are cold and calculating in an instant, openly hostile.

"Did Doc Mitchell tell you how he found you?" She asks, watching you intently.

[17] "No."

[7+2] She visibly relaxes, her expression hidden once more. "A drunk said you fell out of the sky."

[6] "So let's do this. You don't tell anyone anything about my plans, and I don't tell anyone about you being a [demon]. Sound fair?"

[17] You hesitate, eyes widening as you look at Mother Nicole. Beneath her desk, there's the faintest of sounds, a reactor warming up.

[20] "Yes, Mother Nicole." It is all you can manage to stutter out those three words. She relaxes, giving the nod, the reactor of whatever firearm she has aimed at your lower body powers down.

"If there's an impulse for you to harm or maim somebody, don't act on it unless they truly deserve it. If there are voices in your head, do not listen. If you have an urge to sneeze or cough on a group of people, do not do it. Do you understand? If you break any of these, and I find out, I'll kill you myself."

"Yes, Mother Nicole."

"Good. Good. Tell people you have amnesia, remembering nothing but for your dear old gran. You stumbled in, half delirious from exhaustion and dehydration. I'll send you letters describing your family to you. Dismissed."

You rise, hesitating to turn your back. But, you do anyway. Mother Nicole had plenty of opportunities, yet she didn't. That's a form of trust.

...

Shutting the door to the apprentice rooms, you find your cot from the night before and slump into it. Sleep comes quickly.

--

[1/1d2]

You run, and run, and run, skidding down metal corridors that look like they want to devour you. Pain burns through your Body, a massive gash across one shoulder, the skin turning gray around the wound.

But you run as fast as your little legs can take you.

Not fast enough. You fall to the floor, a sudden, heavy weight pressing down on your legs. Snip.

It stands now on your leg. Blood booms outward, staining the corridor again.

A tentacle presses into your back, slicing through your flesh like a hot razor into butter. Its jaws wrap around your abdomen--

[20]

Fire erupts down the hallway, sending the creature flying with the smell of burning bug. The flames that lick at it are multi-hued.

He turns you over, lifting you into his arms and rushing down the hallway.

 "Medic! Medic! Its Alphira!"


--

When Eric shakes you awake, you feel incredibly well-rested. "Come on, Pheobe. You're going to be late." You notice that your duster is gone, replaced by a clean, brand new version, adorned with the symbol of the Holy Seed. Beneath it, you realize, is an [equation, involving carbon and iron, with a nine beside it]  A gun in its holster, you know, sits within. A newly folded, clean grey shirt, all sharp angles, a grey pair of formal pants, and a pair of new boots, trimmed with fur, all sit atop it. A pair of tight leather gloves and a hat sit nearby.

You nod to Eric, giving a glance to your clothes and him. He blinks, and then makes his exit while you change.

Inside is a note, "I'll keep the other duster for you. Love Grandma."

You rise, heading out into the lunchroom to grab a bowl of grain-meal and start your day.

Its mid-afternoon when your medical check is complete. The Sister Doctor treated you efficiently, removing your stitches and replacing your bandage. She tells you that your wound will heal within another week. You, more experienced with your Body, suspect a day or two.
She prescribes you an antibiotic, which you begin to take.

You are given time to straighten your uniform and say goodbye to loved ones or family. Eric's well-dressed father is here, gently patting him on the head, by his side is a young woman who continually smiles at Eric. Across from them is a tall girl, with blond hair and dark clothing, slouching between two massive bodyguards.

A blond man approaches them, giving the young girl a chaste hug and a genuine smile. [13] You focus, however, on the gun jammed into the belt of his duster. 'For Polly' is engraved on the barrel in gold trim. Ornate gold leaves coil into vicious thorns.

A miner sees off his son, beaming happily. There are others, but the variations are minute. No one comes for you-- or so you think until you feel Mother Nicole fussing with the back of your duster. You flinch, and she smacks you upside the head. "Sit still, brat; you messed up the seam."

"Be safe. A friend of mine will check in on you when you land. His name is Tyler Hop. I trained him myself. He'll be your contact." She murmurs, softly, "If anything is too juicy for mail, or you think it is, send it through him."

When she finishes, she leaves, then you trudge onto the landing pad, just as a ship touches down — a large passenger hover-craft, filled with teens your age or younger. A bubbling sick feeling rises within you, sense of hopelessness that you tamp down.

You take a seat, and Eric sits beside you, smiling dopily. You watch as the ground lifts away, the village following suit, and then you're soaring north, over the mountains. Farmland stretches out beneath you, and for the first time, you feel a little more at ease, being this far up, within these confines of a ship.

How do you approach the Academy? What are your goals going to be?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 18, 2020, 03:24:48 am
Nicole knows our secret, so it's essential that we comply with her request to form or infiltrate a clique of potential recruits, perhaps by showing off our physical prowess to attract attention.

We should also work as hard as we can to distinguish ourselves and succeed in training.  If we leverage our superhuman abilities, we can make it to the top of the class and have our pick of postings.

Lastly, we should make an effort to learn as much about the world and its history as possible, focusing on more recent events and closer locations.  Being more familiar with common customs and traditions will allow us to blend in more effectively.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 18, 2020, 06:37:26 am
Nicole knows our secret, so it's essential that we comply with her request to form or infiltrate a clique of potential recruits, perhaps by showing off our physical prowess to attract attention.

We should also work as hard as we can to distinguish ourselves and succeed in training.  If we leverage our superhuman abilities, we can make it to the top of the class and have our pick of postings.

Lastly, we should make an effort to learn as much about the world and its history as possible, focusing on more recent events and closer locations.  Being more familiar with common customs and traditions will allow us to blend in more effectively.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 18, 2020, 09:11:01 am
Nicole knows our secret, so it's essential that we comply with her request to form or infiltrate a clique of potential recruits, perhaps by showing off our physical prowess to attract attention.

We should also work as hard as we can to distinguish ourselves and succeed in training.  If we leverage our superhuman abilities, we can make it to the top of the class and have our pick of postings.

Lastly, we should make an effort to learn as much about the world and its history as possible, focusing on more recent events and closer locations.  Being more familiar with common customs and traditions will allow us to blend in more effectively.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: VoidSlayer on February 18, 2020, 01:14:27 pm
It would be best though to demonstrate peak human physical abilities rather then say... more then that if we have it.  Also not demonstrating our massive healing factor would be a good idea also.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 19, 2020, 12:43:27 am
Eric talks your ear off about his family's farm, about the expansions that they're going to make, about all the farmhands, and his friend Mary.
You think he's trying to impress you, so you play your part, paying him enough attention to keep him talking. By the end of it, he's beaming wide about his life. But then the smile crumples.

"But uh...wow. I would have never thought you were related to Black Nicky." He manages, looking at you with a strange mix of awe and fascination. Beneath that, though, is fear. You raise an eyebrow, and he corrects himself, "Sorry, Mother Nicole."

"Tell me about her. I don't remember much."

"Well, she was the twelfth Crusader. She led the purging of the Arcian region of the planet. We learn about her near the end of our history classes." Eric is hesitantly choosing his words, "She...she ordered a lot of firebombings. Entire cities were burned to the ground, sometimes still full of civilians."

You don't think you react the way he expects you to, as you shrug and go back to looking out the window. Instead, "What's the Infection?"

"Its a...plague. It turns people into monsters.  It infects the lands, buildings, machines. Everything it touches rots and dies."

[6] "Wouldn't it be better then, to burn everything?" You offer.

He flinches as if you've struck him. "Crusaders are supposed to protect Humans. Risking everything to try and protect as many people as they can!"

[7] He gets up when you don't reply, looking irritated. He strikes up a conversation with the Miner's Child instead of you. You inwardly sigh, rising to your feet as well. A certain blond girl has caught your eye, and you take a seat right next to her.

[8] "Yes, Sister Gainer?" She's blunt with her irritation.

[16]"You seem like someone interesting to talk to." You offer by way of explanation, "But if you're dealing with something, I'll leave you to it."

The blond shakes her head at you, shoulders slumping. "Sorry, that was rude of me. I'm Emma Thornton, my Father is William Thornton, and my brother is his Junior."

[19] "Pheobe Gainer, pleasure." You look at her blankly, however. "Who are they?"

[-] Relief pours over her, but it fades as she mumbles, "They....used to be the Warlord and Heir, but they're businessmen now."

You nod, and she begins venting in earnest. Things like, "I didn't even want to join the Scholars." and, "My brother tries so hard, but I just feel scared when I talk to him!"

By the end of her tirade, she seems exhausted, but relieved, smiling widely at you. "Thanks, Pheobe...I haven't had anyone to talk to for a long time."

You pat her on the shoulder, and she politely asks you questions about yourself. You feed her your 'life story,' and while she looks confused by a few things, she's still smiling, patting you on the shoulder.

A small display reads that you have three hours before arrival.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 19, 2020, 05:11:14 am


The hover-craft begins to de-accelerate until it slowly stops in mid-air. It adjusts by turning with micro-jets until it enters the long descent down into a large compound.

Three large, pre-fabricated buildings jut out of the ground, all single story, and all clustered around the only three-story building, with a bulky bottom floor. They're all made out of dull, grey steel. A few wooden sheds dot the landscape, and a target range is facing away from the civilization of a small town. A dense wall of cement and razor-wire blocks everything neatly in.

You stream out with the others, onto the field.

"Welcome to the Academy. Here, we'll teach you the basics of being a Scholar. That includes, and I list;" Someone begins to drone from in front of the crowd.

When she makes introductions, you learn they are the teaching body; a fitness instructor, a military instructor, three teachers for maths and sciences,  and five for language and culture. You note the military instructor's name is Brother Tyler Hop.

Everyone receives a schedule document, with a number on the back, and is dismissed after the speech.

Back at the barracks and your Siblings set to work quickly to make dinner, lest you fall asleep on an empty stomach. Somehow you burn water and, through a unanimous vote, are sent to setting the table. You protest internally, but resign yourself to your newfound reputation as an awful cook.  You eat no more of dinner than your fair share and help to clean more efficiently than you helped cook, earning back the respect of your peers.

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The entry examinations fly by, and you do well in all of them, excelling in particular with physical training and firearm handling. However, Translations are awkward, in that every concept you know is wrong, requiring this word, or this formula to be included. Writing is also tricky, as you end up writing in what you think is the proper language because it all looks the same to you. You have to -concentrate- not to translate everything into an underlying script, and the primary text itself feels alien to you.

At the end of the week, you receive a revised schedule, and you realize with dread that you have an extra hour of physical training in the morning with Brother Hop. The workout is far more brutal than the one the other apprentices go through. It exhausts you, as he seems to consider your...unnatural abilities in the training.

Eric attempts to and fails to show you up at every turn, while Emma tutors you in Translations. Days, weeks, months drift by as you learn, study, and exercise. By the end of the first year, you have dozens of people who would call you their friend, among them Emma, are twenty pounds heavier with muscle and can write and speak three scholarly scripts with ease.
 
...

You receive the first week of the second year off. The students are talking about spending the week in town, getting rid of some of their back pay. You're lying in your room, staring up at the ceiling. You ponder how to spend the first true bit of free time in a year off.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 19, 2020, 07:56:43 am
Send a basic status update to Grandma, then join our new friends in what they’re doing for vacation
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 19, 2020, 08:00:20 am
Send a basic status update to Grandma, then join our new friends in what they’re doing for vacation
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 19, 2020, 09:47:26 am
Send a basic status update to Grandma, then join our new friends in what they’re doing for vacation
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 20, 2020, 03:54:41 am
The letter to your grandmother is short, sweet, and to the point. You take a tongue in cheek tone with her as you update her on all your new friends, their names, ages, what they can do. You mention Emma again, how you two are close friends now. Brother Hop is your favorite teacher, and you're so damn happy for all the extra tutoring.

Emma has already sent the others ahead to the first public house they see by the time you emerge from your room into shared quarters. She starts walking out the door, and you have no choice but to follow.

During the brief walk, she fills you in on the petty politics of the clique, the general sentiment of each member, and any tutoring or assistance she had to organize. She also lists the promises kept, and fulfilled, and the ones where you have to intervene directly.

"McGee and James say you beat Eric up by the end of the week, in town. They have a point, though." Emma states, bluntly, mentioning two of your 'friends'. Two subdivisions of promises within the group. "He's been testing your patience on purpose for a year. They're wondering why. Mcgee thinks you're unwilling to break the rules. James is concerned about a secret."



The town opens up when you enter the market square. Vendors have set up shop wherever there's room, selling anything your heart desires. Makeshift cooking stalls leave the air aromatic with dozens of different foods. The three bars have opened their doors out into the street, signs posted up to advertise Scholar discounts.

With a regretful glance towards the food stalls that Emma giggles at, you enter the first one on your left, your friends are greeting you cheerfully.
You and Emma are passed a glass from the bartender, and you down your first drink of the night.

[7+1] You notice everyone is finished with their drink. Something about this bothers you.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 20, 2020, 04:29:17 am
"How many have you guys had?  It looks like I need to catch up."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 20, 2020, 06:35:00 am
"How many have you guys had?  It looks like I need to catch up."
say this, then start drinking
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 20, 2020, 10:13:46 am
"How many have you guys had?  It looks like I need to catch up."
say this, then start drinking
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 21, 2020, 12:37:17 am
"How many have you guys had?  It looks like I need to catch up."
 
"Only the Hospitality drink," Mcgee counters, with a laugh, "How many have you had?"

[4] Emma shoots him a dark glare, and he returns it with a smile. She calls the bartender over, "One round of [whiskey] for my friends and me, please." She nudges you with her elbow, looking disappointed, "On her tab."

[11] Your group of friends cheers, laughing to themselves, and Emma relaxes, giving you an apologetic smile. She leans in close as the bartender fills your friend's mugs with a carefully measured shot. "The boss always buys the first round. Its tradition. The cheapest drink is always accepted, but..." She cuts herself off, taking her mug and lifting it to her lips. "Heavier drinks can always cover a faux pas."

The group cheers you and Emma, and you empty your glass. The whiskey...is disappointing. It tastes like someone mixed pure ethanol and pine resin. James starts coughing, and Mcgee prods him with a taunt. Everyone, after that point, begins to order whatever their hearts desire. Ales, ciders, one young woman even asks for a glass of wine. They're tipsy, you can tell, but you feel nothing. You need a lot more alcohol.

[10] You buy the rest of the whiskey bottle at a discount, taking massive draws from it.[-.2 credits]

Emma purchases a bottle of wine, taking a seat at the bar next to you. Your 'friends' keep a respectful distance, instead of chatting with Emma and letting you drink. When you finally empty the bottle, you feel a little fuzzy. A couple of beers later, and you feel much tipsier than you can remember.

[1] Eric steps into the bar, at the head of his little group. They stop dead when they see you, already swaying from intoxication. Your friends go quiet. James and McGee are looking between the two of you, and even Emma rises to her feet.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 21, 2020, 12:41:17 am
Throw a salute! Offer to buy Eric a drink too.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 21, 2020, 01:05:50 am
Throw a salute! Offer to buy Eric a drink too.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 21, 2020, 01:42:09 am
[6]You lift a salute to him, widely grinning as you offer to buy Eric a drink. [14] You notice him tensing his shoulders, only to relax them a hesitation later. You notice that a few of his friends are looking at him, rather than the threat that may be across from them. You know James and Mcgee doing the same thing to you without having to look. Emma stares Eric down with pure hatred on her fair face. He gives a nod, smiling. You pick one of the nicer beers, and a serving girl takes it to him.

[1] He pours it out. "Sorry. Could you buy me another?"




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 21, 2020, 02:02:11 am
"Eeesh, waste of a good drink." Buy another.
"I ain't replacing this one, now!"


Yeah, that was an affront, and apparently our drinking buddies have been expecting us to beat Eric up... but then, Eric seemed kinda decent when we met him! I'd rather kill whatever bad blood is between us now than spark an all-out grudge match, if at all possible. Can't hurt to have a reputation for patience, so long as we set some real clear boundaries at some point of what we will and will not tolerate.

Anyway, 'tis better to be a happy drunk than a grumpy drunk yes?  :D
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 21, 2020, 02:07:41 am
"Eeesh, waste of a good drink." Buy another.
"I ain't replacing this one, now!"


Yeah, that was an affront, and apparently our drinking buddies have been expecting us to beat Eric up... but then, Eric seemed kinda decent when we met him! I'd rather kill whatever bad blood is between us now than spark an all-out grudge match, if at all possible. Can't hurt to have a reputation for patience, so long as we set some real clear boundaries at some point of what we will and will not tolerate.

Anyway, 'tis better to be a happy drunk than a grumpy drunk yes?  :D

Makes sense, though I suspect this will end in a fight.  +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 21, 2020, 02:15:35 am
If we fight, we fight-- but this way we at least keep the moral high ground!

...also now that I think of it, Mother Nicole did kinda tell us she'll straight-up slaughter us if we beat anyone up who doesn't really really deserve it. Best tread carefully.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 21, 2020, 02:45:38 am
"Eeesh, waste of a good drink." You purchase another. The serving girl looks annoyed, but complies, eying the two bands of teenagers with something approaching concern. "I ain't replacing this one, now!"

[18] With his glass refilled, a side-glance at the server, Eric downs it in a few gulps.  "Not worth bothering these folks for." Then without so much as a backward look, he leaves. His friends file out behind him, slow to leave and complaining to him all the while. Mcgee and James look confused, but say nothing to you directly.

[9] "Why do you keep letting him act that way towards you?" Emma asks quietly, sipping from her glass, having reclaimed her seat, "You could've put him in the grave by now."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 21, 2020, 03:18:55 am
"It's vacation week! I couldn't kill a fellow student on vacation week." (Grin.)

"Seriously though... I remember when Eric was a happy little thing showing me about the academy; I don't care to hurt him now for trying to get my goat. If he looks to really hurt any of us, then I'll consider breaking him a little-- not before! I know I could."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 21, 2020, 05:23:43 am
"It's vacation week! I couldn't kill a fellow student on vacation week." (Grin.)

"Seriously though... I remember when Eric was a happy little thing showing me about the academy; I don't care to hurt him now for trying to get my goat. If he looks to really hurt any of us, then I'll consider breaking him a little-- not before! I know I could."

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 21, 2020, 06:20:40 am
(Is this inspired by Paradise Lost?)

"It's vacation week! I couldn't kill a fellow student on vacation week." (Grin.)

"Seriously though... I remember when Eric was a happy little thing showing me about the academy; I don't care to hurt him now for trying to get my goat. If he looks to really hurt any of us, then I'll consider breaking him a little-- not before! I know I could."

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 21, 2020, 07:29:11 am
(I thought this was going to be a fallout game given the beginning, but now I'm not sure what its based off of.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 21, 2020, 07:35:47 am
(Is this inspired by Paradise Lost?)

"It's vacation week! I couldn't kill a fellow student on vacation week." (Grin.)

"Seriously though... I remember when Eric was a happy little thing showing me about the academy; I don't care to hurt him now for trying to get my goat. If he looks to really hurt any of us, then I'll consider breaking him a little-- not before! I know I could."

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regardless of the base, the game is fun +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 21, 2020, 02:05:52 pm
"It's vacation week! I couldn't kill a fellow student on vacation week." You grin at Emma, explaining yourself loudly enough for the others to hear. "Seriously though... I remember when Eric was a happy little thing showing me about the academy; I don't care to hurt him now for trying to get my goat. If he looks to really hurt any of us, then I'll consider breaking him a little-- not before! I know I could."

[20] Emma heaves a dramatic sigh, refilling her glass, and your's with the wine. "I can't stay mad at you." She pouts but doesn't argue. Neither do Mcgee or James, who resume their conversations, more at ease now than when the night first began. Emma is quiet as you drink your wine with her. She looks like she wants to say more, but doesn't.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 21, 2020, 05:03:45 pm
Relax! Socialize. Enjoy the evening. Try not to get too drunk.
Consider at some point: have we done something to make an enemy of Eric?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 21, 2020, 05:24:21 pm
Relax! Socialize. Enjoy the evening. Try not to get too drunk.
Consider at some point: have we done something to make an enemy of Eric?

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 21, 2020, 06:30:31 pm
<Eric associates Phoebe with Mother Nicole, who seems to have a polarizing reputation. He’s also got that competitive ”I’m better than you!” personality>
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 21, 2020, 08:12:24 pm
Relax! Socialize. Enjoy the evening. Try not to get too drunk.
Consider at some point: have we done something to make an enemy of Eric?

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 21, 2020, 10:51:12 pm
<Eric associates Phoebe with Mother Nicole, who seems to have a polarizing reputation. He’s also got that competitive ”I’m better than you!” personality>

Yeah, that's quite likely all this is-- still, I'd like to check we haven't done something out-of-the-ordinary to offend him. It's been a year, after all!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 21, 2020, 10:58:47 pm
[-] You do believe that he was upset with you for not condemning your grandmother for firebombing towns with civilians still within, to stop the spread of the Infection. He stopped talking to you after that. You also realize, after a slow draw from your beer, that if it weren't for you, he'd be the most physically fit person in the class. During the 'test of will,' an exercise wherein a heavy weight-bar is placed on your shoulders, you lasted a full five minutes longer than him...while staring him down. He was smirking at you when you both started in your defense.

[10] The rest of your time passes pretty uneventfully. You have a few beers, another glass of Emma's wine, and a shot some random classmate bought you. Mcgee, then James challenges you to an arm-wrestle, which you soundly beat both of them, while Emma drunkenly referees. You never get more than tipsy-- you probably have to drink a lot more to get drunk. Emma is another story; she's hunched over the bar, near the end, and, piteously asks you to take her home. Several of your friends snigger. They go quiet when you glance at them.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 21, 2020, 11:06:40 pm
Be a good friend and take Emma home
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 21, 2020, 11:08:20 pm
Be a good friend and take Emma home
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 21, 2020, 11:23:40 pm
[14] You rise, hauling Emma up with you. She brings her nearly empty bottle of wine, letting it hang from her fingers as you maneuver her out the door. That extra muscle you've gained helps considerably, as does Emma's thin frame. She stumbles along as you drag her, and you give a final glance back to your friends. None of them elected to accompany you, and you notice bills passed around.

You step out into the cold night air, Into a deserted town in the early midnight hours.

[1][12][11][11] Too empty. Something pricks at your senses, and you take in your surroundings as you walk down the paved path out of the city. You don't stop moving, though. You confirm your suspicions in moments—fIve people sulk in one of the alley-ways between a gunshop and a pawnbroker, on the way out of town. You feel the faint hum of pistol reactors from them.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 21, 2020, 11:29:16 pm
Take cover behind a nearby building out of line of sight, quickly if they start to move, but otherwise at a normal pace.  Determine whether flanking them or getting on a roof is an option.

Also, are any nearby buildings likely to be unlocked?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 22, 2020, 12:25:34 am
Take cover behind a nearby building out of line of sight, quickly if they start to move, but otherwise at a normal pace.  Determine whether flanking them or getting on a roof is an option.

Also, are any nearby buildings likely to be unlocked?


+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 22, 2020, 06:23:33 am
Take cover behind a nearby building out of line of sight, quickly if they start to move, but otherwise at a normal pace.  Determine whether flanking them or getting on a roof is an option.

Also, are any nearby buildings likely to be unlocked?


+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 22, 2020, 09:08:34 am
Take cover behind a nearby building out of line of sight, quickly if they start to move, but otherwise at a normal pace.  Determine whether flanking them or getting on a roof is an option.

Also, are any nearby buildings likely to be unlocked?


+1
+1
+1, take Emma with us when we go to cover/on the roof/into a building
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 22, 2020, 01:59:40 pm
[20]You slip into an empty building left unlocked, Emma in tow, and your would-be ambushers are none the wiser for it. You're sure they haven't noticed you yet. Emma mumbles something incoherent, looking more surprised than concerned. "What's goin' on? She manages to slur out with great effort. You settle her down in a corner, freeing yourself up.

[5]They're on the move now. The hum of their pistols prickling at your senses as they make their way towards your location.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 22, 2020, 02:16:48 pm
Speak low. "Trouble. Stay quiet."

Draw our pistol. Keep to the darkness of our corner; stay still, silent, and low to the ground. Should our would-be assailants enter the building, overcharge our weapon and incinerate them.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 22, 2020, 03:09:29 pm
Speak low. "Trouble. Stay quiet."

Draw our pistol. Keep to the darkness of our corner; stay still, silent, and low to the ground. Should our would-be assailants enter the building, overcharge our weapon and incinerate them.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 22, 2020, 03:17:33 pm
Speak low. "Trouble. Stay quiet."

Draw our pistol. Keep to the darkness of our corner; stay still, silent, and low to the ground.

+1
Ambush and shoot normally, aiming for the center of mass
<Using Overload would blow our cover and reveal ourself as a supernatural being. It'll draw way too much attention. It'll also destroy our weapon.>
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 22, 2020, 03:25:34 pm
I agree that we should avoid the overload, at least initially.  But I do think we should only attack if they enter the building.

Also, if possible without making too much noise, lock the door(s).
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 22, 2020, 03:47:53 pm
Speak low. "Trouble. Stay quiet."

Draw our pistol. Keep to the darkness of our corner; stay still, silent, and low to the ground.

+1
Ambush and shoot normally, aiming for the center of mass
<Using Overload would blow our cover and reveal ourself as a supernatural being. It'll draw way too much attention. It'll also destroy our weapon.>
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 22, 2020, 11:10:10 pm
You draw your gun and crouch low, cursing the same luck that allowed you to sneak into this building. It doesn't have a lock. Gently, you hush scared Emma, whispering the best you can, "Trouble. Stay quiet." To her credit, she does just that, crouching down low behind a crate and covering her head. She stares at you, a drunken mess of concern, worry, and fear. She's crying. You don't think she knows you can see her.

The group comes to a stop in front of the building. Then they wait. Their las-pistols don't move, after all. And you use those moments to take a look around. Two windows, facing the street and shuttered closed. A few crates litter the floor, Emma hides behind one. You hide behind another. The door doesn't have a lock, no, correction; the lock is broken. There's another door, out into the alleyway.

 After a few tense minutes, there's whispering from the group, followed by...

[6] "Emma Thornton, we know you're in there. Come on out before we visit your friends."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 22, 2020, 11:13:30 pm
Are las-pistols capable of shooting through walls or doors?

I think one option would be to take the other exit and try to silently flank them.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 22, 2020, 11:24:37 pm
Are las-pistols capable of shooting through walls or doors?

The las-pistols you and most of the people in this world have access to could maybe burn through a thin, metal wall, a glass window, or other thin material and retain their accuracy, under normal firing conditions. Thicker walls and structures would diminish or negate the blast, but 'drilling' is a common concept. I.e. Firing until there's a hole to shoot out of, but generally that isn't a stealthy approach.
There's insulated plastic plates within your kevlar coat-- it can stop most of a las-pistol blast.

[2] The walls are thick wood, but the windows and shutters aren't.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 22, 2020, 11:33:49 pm
<Emma’s dad must have gone and attempted to assassinate the current Warlord’s son. Now they got beef with her. They want to ‘visit’ ‘her friends’, which includes us. That sounds like a threat. That means justified self-defense. I’m not so sure how secure our cover is here...>

Block the door using one of the crates. Check the alleyway for cover and a flanking route
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 22, 2020, 11:39:19 pm
<Emma’s dad must have gone and attempted to assassinate the current Warlord’s son. Now they got beef with her. They want to ‘visit’ ‘her friends’, which includes us. That sounds like a threat. That means justified self-defense. I’m not so sure how secure our cover is here...>

Block the door using one of the crates. Check the alleyway for cover and a flanking route
+1, as long as the crate can be moved quickly and is sufficiently heavy to serve as a decent impediment, and as long as the door (only) opens inward.

If any of that is not true, try to quickly but silently flank the group through the other exit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 22, 2020, 11:48:32 pm
No need to waste time blocking doors-- better to stay where we are, and use the existing entryways as chokepoints for picking off our enemies,

Stay put. No words. Watch from behind the crate, and gun down anyone who tries to come in.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 23, 2020, 12:29:05 am
No need to waste time blocking doors-- better to stay where we are, and use the existing entryways as chokepoints for picking off our enemies,

Stay put. No words. Watch from behind the crate, and gun down anyone who tries to come in.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 23, 2020, 02:44:20 am
Maybe we could shoot them through one of the windows?  They're probably focusing on the door.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 23, 2020, 02:54:05 am
[1] One of the las-pistols breaks away from the group. You shift, to do something when the door swings open and two men, [7] one with a great-coat like yours, move to step in. They have the other two las-pistols, and they hum to life, safeties off.

[11-9] The one in the front takes a blast to the chest, staggering back into the other with a surprised look on his face as a portion of his chest vanishes in a splash of fire, then soft flesh gives way to steam of blood. He drops his gun, and the other man lifts his towards you, blocked by a portion of his former friend.

[6-19] His shot goes wide, arcing out over Emma's head with a soft hiss, cracking into the wood of the roof.

[9-12] You retaliate, firing again, but the pulse burns through the corpse instead of your intended target.

The great-coated kidnapper finally ducks out of the way, dropping his dead comrade to the ground and leaving your lines of fire.

[3][10-14]Something slugs into your shoulder, just below the plate, from behind-- the back door! Pain, horrible burning pain sears through beneath your back-- then, it's gone. The smell of burning flesh and plastic fills your nose. Emma screams.

[15-3] You roll out of the way of the next shot, dragging your pistol up, too slowly-- something is wrong with your arm. But the Ambushing Kidnapper is surprised by Emma, his gun tracking to her. You snap off a shot, and his head caves in.

[10+3]You hear movement from outside, but no one else enters. There's something definitely wrong with your back, and it's affecting your arm. You know you should be in great pain, maybe even shock at this point, but your consciousness doesn't fade. Emma is screaming your name.

Agression or defense?




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 23, 2020, 03:01:02 am
Does anyone know how many are known to remain?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 23, 2020, 03:12:16 am
[18]'3͔͔̮ͅ' Something within your mind offers through the fog, succinctly and calmly. "o҉̦nḛ̗ ̪͝ͅw̕í̬̯̲t̨ẖ͕̮̣ͅ ̯̫͝a͔̬̼͞ l̯͖̙̘̠̜̹a͏͍s͓̣͚̟̬͇̦-͕̳̥ͅp̙̖̩͙̼̞̞͘i͟s̪̣̘̣t̲̼̹̫o͕͕̠̬l͕̮,̯͎̫̲̫̰̘ ̴t͕̯̲̟́w̥̗͎̩̘̩o͏̲̞̹̤͇̘ ̶͓̟̰͚ͅoth̷͍͕̩̝̘̺e̥ͅrs̪̫̣̲͈̜ ̜͉̮p͙r̠o̺̭͘b̗̣̕a͇͚͉̥͖͎͈b͎͈̗̱͘ͅl̠͓̝e͖̮͘ ̸͎̟̱w͕i͚ṱ͈̫̥͍͈̤͡h͏̱̠ ̯͇̭̼̦͚̰n̡o͙̬̮ͅͅn̜-͇̹͉̰̱̦r̗̠̥͜e͉̜̠͇a̺̣̜̻̙͕̕ͅc͖̩͔̼̩̲t̫̫̯̭o̹̰͖̹͝r̛̞ ̖͇b̨̟̤ͅa̞̝̞̹s͕̗̗e͎͙ͅd̗͠ f͚͇̙̬̮͚i̴̤r͙̭̟̩̀e̺̤̘a͍̦̖̩̼̻r̝͘m͡s̖̫͓͕̹̰̪.̱"

[14] A few drops of dark, dark clotted blood drip from your nose, to the ground below. You have a lancing pain in your head, followed by the intense pain of your damaged back. Both are stripped away from your awareness in the next instant.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 23, 2020, 03:26:39 am
I suppose it's possible that they will be dissuaded by the casualties and leave.  If they don't leave, we still have two entrances that they can use to attack us. 

Maybe we should take the initiative and leave through the door that we didn't just hear movement near, with the intent of circling around the building?  We might suprise them, since they are (probably?) aware that we are severely injured and likely to be immobile.  That would leave Emma undefended, however, and she's the target of the kidnappers.

I think it's worth a try, though.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 23, 2020, 08:48:54 am
I suppose it's possible that they will be dissuaded by the casualties and leave.  If they don't leave, we still have two entrances that they can use to attack us. 

Maybe we should take the initiative and leave through the door that we didn't just hear movement near, with the intent of circling around the building?  We might suprise them, since they are (probably?) aware that we are severely injured and likely to be immobile.  That would leave Emma undefended, however, and she's the target of the kidnappers.

I think it's worth a try, though.
+1 Time for flanking!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 23, 2020, 11:15:10 am
Break a crate in such a way as to give Emma a sharp piece of wood for stabbing, move Emma behind a different crate, then
I suppose it's possible that they will be dissuaded by the casualties and leave.  If they don't leave, we still have two entrances that they can use to attack us. 

Maybe we should take the initiative and leave through the door that we didn't just hear movement near, with the intent of circling around the building?  We might suprise them, since they are (probably?) aware that we are severely injured and likely to be immobile.  That would leave Emma undefended, however, and she's the target of the kidnappers.

I think it's worth a try, though.
+1 Time for flanking!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 23, 2020, 11:29:26 am
We're hurt, bad. If ever there was a time to be more than human, this is it.

Call to mind the power we put through our pistol when first we woke, and channel that power through our broken back. We've shown ourselves able to recover from horrible injury in past-- now we must accelerate the process, and knit swiftly our ruined flesh.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 23, 2020, 11:31:49 am
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 23, 2020, 03:16:31 pm
Is that really necessary at the moment?  We just rolled out of the way of an attack, so our mobility doesn't seem to be impaired.  We should deal with our enemies before seeing to our wounds.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 23, 2020, 05:30:04 pm
[17][19] Rising, slowly, keeping out of sight of the door, you knock the fallen pistol of your foe to Emma. She takes one look at it, and snatches it up.  She takes a few potshots at the doorway-- you notice she's literally shooting the doorway, instead of out of it. Somebody speaks, but you don't hear.

[18 vs 12]Instead, you turn out the back door, into the cold night air. And bump into another Kidnapper. He blinks. You shoot. He falls back, a new hole in his chest steaming blood.

[3] [5 vs 15]Another Kidnapper moves into sight, noticing you before you notice him. He lifts his gun and you feel a hard punch to your chest as the bullet connects with an armor plate. A few more whiz overhead, beside you, as he empties his magazine.

[20 vs 17] He dives to the ground as you lift your las-gun, but you expected that, and shoot him twice as he goes prone.

[9-4] As you get to the end of the alley, you use the wall as cover, leveling your las-gun at the doorway-- there's no one there. The Greatcoated Kidnapper is running away from you. Las-gun fire still peppers the doorway in sporadic bursts, as Emma provides cover the best she can.

[1/1d2] Bloodlust burns in your veins as you lift your pistol and take aim. With careful precision, you neatly leave the man's leg a bloody mess, and he falls to the paved road with a cry.

[20] Now free to concern yourself with your injuries, you reach around, feeling the edges of the gaping hole in your back. You finally notice the trail of blood you've left behind you. Your right arm is hard to handle, and you notice a slight delay as your mind routes commands through more intact parts of your body. You're badly injured, there's muscle damage, to be sure, maybe even a broken rib. But, you breath, and begin to focus on it, on trying to knit your body back together through sheer will alone.

For a second, nothing happens. Then the pain returns, knocking you to your knees. It pulses with every heartbeat, and you feel your consciousness fading. Emma slowly emerges from the empty building, rushing to your side. She holds you up as you fight through the shock.

[10]Then its nothing more than a dull ache. Your nose is bleeding again, more of that clotted, dark, old blood. It doesn't stop as quickly this time. Emma seems horrified when you lift yourself to your feet with her assistance.

"You-your back--how..." She begins, but is interrupted by the sobbing of the kidnapper down the road.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 23, 2020, 05:39:42 pm
Interrogate the remaining kidnapper.  Attempt to determine who he was sent by, where that person is, and why someone wants Emma kidnapped.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 23, 2020, 06:01:59 pm
[17-5] You walk towards the injured man, and he looks up at you, trying to lift his pistol to take another shot. Tears run down his face, his hands shake with fear and pain.

[2-5 vs. NO CONTEST] The shot goes wide, over your head. You pull the trigger and mulch his wrist. He screams in pain, curling up around it. You press your pistol to his spine, leaning down over him. "Tell me everything."

[18-6 vs. 8+1] "Fuck you." He spits, still taking deep, ragged sobs of pain.

[20] "Emma, look away." You sigh. With careful hands and practiced movements, you peel away the coolant housing of your las-pistol, firing two shots into the ground that turns the element red. The Kidnapper takes one look at the red-hot weapon and begins to babble everything, his resistance fading. You bet he's seen this before. Brother Hop sure knows his stuff. You reassemble the housing with deft hands as he spills his guts.

"Johnny Moore sent us," He's a local 'businessman, a warlord given a pardon and the ability to consolidate his holdings legally, "He wanted a good deal with Old Man Thornton-- he heard Emma was in town with the academy. Leverage. I saw-swear we weren't going to hurt her." He's lying.

"Where is he?" You ask as Emma stands shocked.

"In-in his villa, of course." He gives you a vague location when you press more. It's in town, not too far from here.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 23, 2020, 07:05:11 pm
Finish him off, no loose ends. Check on Emma
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Post by: Superdorf on February 23, 2020, 08:44:03 pm
"Thank you; that will be all."

Finish him off, no loose ends. Check on Emma

Reluctant +1
I just don't see any way to keep this guy alive-- he's too dangerous to leave behind, and too mangled to drag with us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 23, 2020, 09:08:28 pm
He likely has more information that will be useful to us, but it's too dangerous to let him live, as he has seen our face.

"Thank you; that will be all."

Finish him off, no loose ends. Check on Emma

Reluctant +1
I just don't see any way to keep this guy alive-- he's too dangerous to leave behind, and too mangled to drag with us.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 23, 2020, 10:39:07 pm
"Thank you, that will be all." A soft hiss of steam later and the man expires. You lift yourself, glancing back to Emma, who stumbles from corpse to corpse, pulling out their wallet, stealing any money or valuables. Rings, watches, anything gold. Then she steps into the building, emerging with her wine bottle, her robes folded neatly up in her arms. [-] You, after a moment, do the same thing, peeling off your jacket and slipping your mesh up over your head. She ticks her head down the street, starting in the opposite direction of the academy. The bottle she trashes in the first another alley she comes to find, a shattering of glass next to a bar. She tosses bits of the jewelry and cash as she walks, losing it as you follow along.

"Are you-" You begin.

She shushes you, coldly stating, "We need to get back home, shower and sleep. You need the Doctor. I need to send a message to my father." She looks too exhausted and shocked for words, stumbling as the two of you finally start turning towards the Academy, down another back street.

You put your coat back on in a thicket of woods off the road outside of town, you and Emma lounging against trees, catching your breath. Your head continues to throb, painfully. "How did you survive that?" She asks, finally breaking the silence she imposed.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 24, 2020, 12:05:51 am
"Not sure. Don't want... don't want to think about it. Everything hurts."

We've got three options here: trust our friend with the truth (risky), lie somehow (and probably fail miserably)... or indulge in a little post-trauma exhaustion, and dodge the question. I'm inclined to go with that last, for now.

Consider: do we trust Emma to keep a secret?
Consider: who is "Alphir"?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 24, 2020, 12:09:44 am
That is our true name, "Alphira."

"Not sure. Don't want... don't want to think about it. Everything hurts."

We've got three options here: trust our friend with the truth (risky), lie somehow (and probably fail miserably)... or indulge in a little post-trauma exhaustion, and dodge the question. I'm inclined to go with that last, for now.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 24, 2020, 12:30:20 am
Ahh, had to go back a couple pages and poke through the dreams again-- thanks. Silly of me not to check.

Looking at that last dream, and the dream before... I've no idea at this point what we are. We're a little less than angel, it seems, but a little more than human. Mother Nicole thinks we're a [demon], apparently, and given recent events she may be onto something... but then, I don't know what that even means in this world! It's all leaving me very confused.  ???
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 24, 2020, 12:54:30 am
It's odd.  My guess is that we were some sort of servant to the heavenly "Empyreans," but we did something wrong, following the wrong order or something, and were cast down.  I think we'll gain more clarity over time, hopefully even regaining our memories.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 24, 2020, 02:48:05 am
That is our true name, "Alphira."

"Not sure. Don't want... don't want to think about it. Everything hurts."

We've got three options here: trust our friend with the truth (risky), lie somehow (and probably fail miserably)... or indulge in a little post-trauma exhaustion, and dodge the question. I'm inclined to go with that last, for now.
+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 24, 2020, 04:31:41 am
"Not sure. Don't want... don't want to think about it. Everything hurts."

[15] Emma nods at that, rising to her feet and offering you an unsteady hand. "Come on, let's get back to the academy."

You take the offered grip and pull yourself up. You take the lead as you navigate towards the Academy, cutting through field and thicket alike. After one final potato field, you move past the gate of the Academy compound in the dead of night. You hail the gate guard, who lets you through as soon as he sees Emma.

You stand in the protected courtyard of the Academy and feel at ease. Emma nearly slumps to the ground with exhaustion, but pulls herself up and drags herself back to the Living Quarters.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 24, 2020, 08:03:51 am
Hunger... Find food.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 24, 2020, 08:20:47 am
Hunger... Find food.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 24, 2020, 08:22:17 am
Hunger... Find food.
+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 24, 2020, 03:29:46 pm
[-]Food, glorious food. You heat up some leftover grain-meal on the stove, devouring it along with a spare loaf of bread and an [apple] you found. You don't think any of it will be missed. You're still a bit hungry, but eating any more food will leave one of your dorm-mates, or yourself, without breakfast the next morning. No one wants to be that person, not even you.

With that finished, you step into the showers, washing off the clotted blood from your back and your clothes. The shirt you replace, but the coat is going to need repairs. With a ginger hand, you reach back, feeling the wound on your shoulder. It's still sore, but a vast majority of it has healed. You lift your arm, not feeling that curious delay anymore as you stretch and go through the motions.

A massive bruise spreads its way across your chest, an ugly mottled thing of brown and blue. You figure it'll be healed by tomorrow, however, and make sure to wash it off.

Your nosebleed has finally stopped by the time you leave the shower, and you clear your sinuses.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 24, 2020, 03:33:28 pm
sleep. Perhaps sleeping will help our body heal
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 24, 2020, 03:39:05 pm
sleep. Perhaps sleeping will help our body heal

+1

Tomorrow we'll want to check in with Emma, find out what she knows of the people behind the attack, consider writing a report to Mother Nicole... but for now, rest sounds good.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 24, 2020, 03:50:07 pm
sleep. Perhaps sleeping will help our body heal

+1

Tomorrow we'll want to check in with Emma, find out what she knows of the people behind the attack, consider writing a report to Mother Nicole... but for now, rest sounds good.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 24, 2020, 04:13:14 pm
[13] You stumble into bed, climbing into it with a small sigh. Sleep comes to you as quickly as your head hits the pillow, not even your sore, aching body can stop you from sleeping.

[3] You dream half-remembered nightmares. Metallic insects rip and tear at your flesh, corpses rise only to twist and rend into abominations with far too many mouths and teeth. Your friends die, only to turn and attack you. Emma twists into a bloated aberration, all thrashing razorwire tentacles, grabbing at your throat as you scream for mercy. The fire never comes to save you this time.

[13] Emma, however, does. She shakes you from your nightmares, looking equal parts concerned and exhausted. She shushes you as you ask questions, helping to remake the bed you scrambled apart in your fitful sleep. As you drift back to sleep, she lays down next to you.

[-] You awake the next morning, emerging from your room into a crowded common space. Everyone is at work making breakfast, Emma and Eric working together to direct the flow of food and labor, as they normally do. No one gives you a second glance, and, grateful for the routine, you begin to set the tables and pour the water.

They don't let you cook anymore, not after you burned water during the first day.

Breakfast is simple and filling. A fruit-based grain meal porridge, with fried chunks of salted [meat] and a boiled, grey egg that someone brought home the other night from the stores in town. You're still a little hungry by the end of it, but you've come to accept that as part of your existence here. The food never fills you up.

Emma helps with the dishes and leaves quickly after that, heading to the communication's wing of the main building. You, on the other hand, head towards Brother Hop's room.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 24, 2020, 04:37:46 pm
Give Brother Hop a debrief of yesterday's happenings
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 24, 2020, 04:52:59 pm
Give Brother Hop a debrief of yesterday's happenings

+1

Speak with honesty, but don't detail the fight itself unless asked.
They may have taken us under their wing, but I still don't trust Mother Nicole and her underlings.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 24, 2020, 05:11:54 pm
Give Brother Hop a debrief of yesterday's happenings

+1

Speak with honesty, but don't detail the fight itself unless asked.
They may have taken us under their wing, but I still don't trust Mother Nicole and her underlings.
+1, Nicole's agenda is unclear at the moment and we should be wary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 24, 2020, 05:13:46 pm
Give Brother Hop a debrief of yesterday's happenings

+1

Speak with honesty, but don't detail the fight itself unless asked.
They may have taken us under their wing, but I still don't trust Mother Nicole and her underlings.
+1, Nicole's agenda is unclear at the moment and we should be wary.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 24, 2020, 09:13:50 pm
Brother Hop opens the door, blearily rubbing at his eyes and looking down at you. He sighs when he sees your coat, gesturing for you to enter. He claims the opposing seat after busying himself in the kitchen to produce tea for the two of you. Sipping his drink, he gestures for you to pass it over.

"Better be a good explanation, little [demon]." He produces a needle, some Kevlar thread, and a patch, starting to sew your armor back together. "Watch closely; you're doing it yourself next time."

You watch and give debrief at the same time. You and Emma Thornton were walking home from a bar when you suspected trouble. Five individuals tried to kidnap Emma and kill you. They wanted her as a bargaining chip for Emma's Father, Businessman Thornton. You killed all of them, one expiring after interrogation.

Brother Hop nods along, not looking particularly shocked or concerned. "And you got shot with a las-pistol, I'm assuming?"

You nod, sipping your tea.

"I would like to see your wound if you please."

You turn around and lift your shirt up over your back, showing him the small, healing crater in your back.

"If I didn't have to repair your armor, I'd say that was little less than a glancing blow. I'll let Mother Nicole know that Thornton owes us a favor." He sips his tea, gesturing you down. "Do you know what happens to people who get shot with las-guns and survive? Usually, they have a chunk missing from them for a long time. Most die of shock or bleed to death." He lifts the sleeve of his robe, showing you a crater not-fully filled in with flesh, a nasty, messy work of scar tissue. "I've had this for five years. Think on that, little [demon]. You're dismissed."

He shuts the door hard behind you, and you're left standing in the Academy's hallway.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 24, 2020, 10:43:41 pm
If we have some free time, one option would be to experiment and try to determine what additional powers are available to us, but only in a secure location where we would not be watched.

Otherwise, maybe we could use the opportunity to learn more about the world and its history.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: VoidSlayer on February 24, 2020, 11:10:59 pm
Yeah, I don't like the whole voices in the head when using powers after being warned not to listen to them.  Should maybe learn more about [demons] and powers before delving into weird powers without guidance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 25, 2020, 12:22:15 am
That makes sense.  How about this: try to learn more about [demons] and their capabilities (either from an expert at the Academy or from a book from the library).
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 25, 2020, 02:27:21 am
You head on over to the library, pausing to look through the index. [demons] are a scarce title there, many of them prayerbooks with no real information, warning the people about straying from SEED's Great Work and following [demons]. You find one military manual, an old thing, numbered edition twenty-five. Thumbing past the introduction, you see the first [demon].

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The next four [demons] resemble the 'King of the Dead' in the description, the only thing decreasing is the death toll and the size. Each one is slain by a 'Great, Holy Crusader of the Crusade'. The sixth is different, however.


 Three more crusades, spanning from 100-200 years ago, were waged on the Kin of the Steel Baron until they were exterminated, their leaders each being classified as a [demon], and they, themselves are also considered [demons], but of a lesser variety. Each Crusade has a great 'Crusader.' You, on a lark, begin to look up these Crusaders and find that the vast majority of them were hard-faced men and women who sacrificed much for the Great Work. Every one of them has a prosthesis, ended up in a coma, or had to let hundreds of their own soldiers die. They all retired to cushy, desk jobs, far from the war as they could get.

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 The book describes many battles against these [demons]. In them, numerical superiority won out; the threat neutralized via high casualties and organization. If the [Demon] retreated, wounded, it would return whole later, stronger, and more bloodthirsty than ever. Some reports mentioned great gluttony when these beasts were injured. Whole food stockpiles for entire towns devoured in a day. These creatures waged war on this planet on their own, destroying much in the pursuit of their own, mysterious goals. Some would scream and rant and yell insults, while others were dead silent in the throes of combat. The Twisted Wire begged for mercy as it lay dying. The rest of the book is a theological debate about what creates a demon, and you swiftly lose interest when pure theology comes into play.

One similarity, however, is that a demon always emerges from a comet of fire, striking the planet. Some of them, like the Baron, emerge from a cocoon of silvery metal.

Five hours have passed with your research into demons. It is currently noon of your second free day.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 25, 2020, 04:49:06 am
Very interesting.  We did emerge from a comet of fire... so we probably are a [demon]?  Maybe we should read up on angels as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 25, 2020, 06:19:01 am
Lets research everything!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 25, 2020, 06:20:55 am
Very interesting.  We did emerge from a comet of fire... so we probably are a [demon]?  Maybe we should read up on angels as well.
Lets research everything!
+1 to both
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 26, 2020, 12:22:23 am
With a restless shift in your seat, you rise, heading over to the Index. You scribble down a few books you think might have connections to [angels]. One is a book about the theology of the creation myth; one is 'McCreary, the Martyr of SEED.,' another is a world history book, and finally, one is titled 'Reflections on the VOID.'

[2] The first book is a compendium of debates by the great Elders of the Scholars; some of them are even directed toward the Pontifex of the Scholarly religion. It is a mess of organization, referencing works that the library you're in do not possess, quoting scriptures that have since been erased from the accumulated mess that is the Religion of SEED. There is one thing you learn, however. At the end of the book, many concepts that were brought up were struck down as unholy by the Pontifex, all of them receiving a direct refutation from SEED itself.

[20] McCreary, given that name by SEED, was the only [angel] you can find direct physical evidence off. Unlike the [demons], who, if you consult a map and have the correct material, you can plot their casualties and path. Which, you quickly notice, generally follow the same way-- all towards the holy city. Regardless, McCreary emerged from the inner sanctum of SEED, bathed in a golden light. SEED spoke for the first time in many years, pronouncing him the champion of Humanity, a grand [angel] to protect the people from the beast at the gate. McCreary tur the very earth into massive spears to impale the King of the Dead and his infected minions. It twisted and screeched, drawing down fire from the sky to strike the Holy City.

The battle lasted for days, the earth being ripped asunder from the forces involved, never healing, until the Great Beast was slain and its body burned. McCreary succumbed to his wounds in the Holy Chamber of SEED, his body preserved and in viewing.

[11] The world history book is dry, and dense, containing a complete rundown of a two thousand year history. With a glance to a local calendar, you notice it is ten years out of date. Man was created in year zero, demons first arrive a thousand years down the line, after the foundation of the great city and the scholars of SEED, seeking to oppose his holy work. A wide variety of Pontifexes came to power, were killed or died of old age, did great things, and the next generation reversed those works. The last one thousand years or so were the Crusades, a sporadic series of wars that lead to significant losses of human life.

[?] The next is a forbidden work, only for reference to deal with heretics, as the branding on the front states. You notice, after straining your eyes some, that it is written in a Scholar's Tongue that you would not have access to while attending the Academy. So, you do what any self-respecting scholar does, and read on. It supposes that the living SEED is not the true master of the Cosmos, but rather an ancient evil. That the true master of the universe is an entity representing the void between worlds, which even the SEED cannot conquer, despite its struggles. There's no evidence that it presents to prove this theory, and you cast it aside with a sigh.

"I didn't know you knew how to read," Emma calls to you, emerging into the library, arms crossed loosely over her robes. She seems hesitant. "I wanted to thank you for last night. I greatly appreciate what you did for me. Sorry if I was..." She trails off into silence, glancing over to you.


It is six pm in the evening, on the second day of your vacation.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 26, 2020, 12:33:49 am
Hugs. Now.

Once we've expressed proper gratitude and relief and all those warm fuzzies, ask Emma what she knows of last night's attack-- and more importantly, what (if anything) we're going to do about it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 26, 2020, 12:48:33 am
Hugs. Now.

Once we've expressed proper gratitude and relief and all those warm fuzzies, ask Emma what she knows of last night's attack-- and more importantly, what (if anything) we're going to do about it.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 26, 2020, 01:48:11 am
Emma's eyes widen when you hug her, and she returns it awkwardly, not accustomed to being hugged by you. When you pull away to reclaim your seat, she stares after you, confused by the affection. She smiles quickly, however, relaxing into a chair across from you. Organizing the books, and your jotted notes, you ask her if her father got back to her yet. She shakes her head, explaining, "We'll hear from him tomorrow, one way or the other. That's about how long it'll take for the family hover-ship to get here if he gets the message tonight."

"You'll probably meet my brother." She looks uncomfortable, before hastily amending "I'm sure he'll like you. Just be as respectful... as required... of our respective stations."

"My brother will take care of the situation." She finishes, after trailing into an awkward silence, "One way or the other."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 26, 2020, 02:26:49 am
"I think I saw him before I came to the Academy.  He has a fine weapon.  Is that a family heirloom or was it acquired in another way?"
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Post by: King Zultan on February 26, 2020, 08:33:05 am
"I think I saw him before I came to the Academy.  He has a fine weapon.  Is that a family heirloom or was it acquired in another way?"
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 26, 2020, 11:44:10 am
Am I right in thinking that Emma's family is the same "warlord" and co. that old guy wanted us to kill off?
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 26, 2020, 12:25:33 pm
Am I right in thinking that Emma's family is the same "warlord" and co. that old guy wanted us to kill off?
i think the guy you are talking about is the one the other posts are referring to
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on February 26, 2020, 01:11:57 pm
Am I right in thinking that Emma's family is the same "warlord" and co. that old guy wanted us to kill off?
Well they were Warlord and Heir at one point, but that seems to be a title. I think they were pushed out of the position by the current Warlord
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 26, 2020, 01:38:18 pm
Am I right in thinking that Emma's family is the same "warlord" and co. that old guy wanted us to kill off?

Yes, that's correct.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 26, 2020, 10:34:17 pm
"I think I saw him before I came to the Academy.  He has a fine weapon.  Is that a family heirloom, or was it acquired in another way?"

"He got it back from the person who killed Polly." Emma twists her lips into a rueful smile, "She was his girlfriend and a friend of mine. Apparently, the bastard that killed her stole it, and he finally got it back." [4] There's no hint of dishonesty you can discern. She sighs, looking across the table at you, "She was the only one I could talk to before I met you. I hope he didn't make it quick when he killed that bastard."

You offer her a nod as you consider the Thorntons in general. Mother Nicole sent you a message about them, explaining who and what they were when you mentioned being friends with Emma. In the region now known as  SEED's Holy Steelworks No' 09, they ran things as the local warlord before the Scholars, headed by Nicole Gainer, moved in. You know there was a brief conflict before the Thorntons legalized their operations beneath her, culminating in the Holy Steelworks No' 09 becoming an autonomous region just as you came to the Academy. William Thornton senior is the current family head, a brutal recluse of a man who reigned in terror for the longest time. His heir is William Thornton Junior, Emma's older brother, who's a chip off the old block. Just as crazy as the old man, if not more so. There isn't a Missus Thornton, as far as you know.

It isn't that hard to realize the principle in which the regions around the Holy City were civilized in much the same manner. Local warlords and bandit bands are given an option-- become legal business entities or die. It saves time, but this gives rise to an entire class of people with less than legal outlooks on business, however.

"You okay?" Emma asks.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 26, 2020, 11:09:13 pm
"Yeah... just remembering."

"I had Pollyanna's father come to me last year, before I joined with the Scholars-- this was right after Polly got murdered; the guy tried to pay me to avenge her death. I was scared, turned him down... should I have taken the job? I don't know! But it's nice to hear he got his vengeance one way or another."

Sigh. "It's a messed up world we live in."
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Post by: ZBridges on February 26, 2020, 11:17:15 pm
"Yeah... just remembering."

"I had Pollyanna's father come to me last year, before I joined with the Scholars-- this was right after Polly got murdered; the guy tried to pay me to avenge her death. I was scared, turned him down... should I have taken the job? I don't know! But it's nice to hear he got his vengeance one way or another."

Sigh. "It's a messed up world we live in."

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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 26, 2020, 11:38:40 pm
"Yeah... just remembering."

"I had Pollyanna's father come to me last year before I joined with the Scholars-- this was right after Polly got murdered; the guy tried to pay me to avenge her death. I was scared, turned him down... should I have taken the job? I don't know! But it's nice to hear he got his vengeance one way or another."

Emma's eyes widen, and she shakes her head.

You sigh. "It's a messed up world we live in."

"Polly's dad had a rough time of it." Her face curls further into a frown as she explains. "He passed in a house fire-- not too long after we left."

You bet. A bell rings in the distance, but you ignore it. During a usual day at the Academy, it would call for grounds clear -- dinner time. Your stomach gives a growl.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 26, 2020, 11:59:13 pm
Hmm.  Hopefully Emma doesn't tell her brother about our chance encounter with Polly's father...
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Post by: Superdorf on February 27, 2020, 12:52:06 am
"Ahh, really? That's... I don't know what to think about that."

...

"Take care of yourself, OK? There's something rotten in this town, and I'm worried it's going to catch up to you one day."

...

"I'm worried it's going to catch up to us both."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 27, 2020, 01:20:54 am
"Ahh, really? That's... I don't know what to think about that."

...

"Take care of yourself, OK? There's something rotten in this town, and I'm worried it's going to catch up to you one day."

...

"I'm worried it's going to catch up to us both."

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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 27, 2020, 01:52:51 am

"Ahh? That's... I don't know what to think about that."

"I think it's just sad."

"Hey, Emma? Take care of yourself, OK? There's something rotten in this town, and I'm worried it's going to catch up to you one day." She once more seems to deflate, last night weighing heavy on her mind. "I'm worried it's going to catch up to us both."

[16] She looks hurt when you say that, and instead of responding, she glances out the full-wall window into the courtyard. "What the f--"

Startled by the usually refined Emma cursing, you follow her gaze. Standing in the courtyard is a tall, blond young man. He's arguing with the gate guard, and Emma rises to her feet, rushing out of the library and down the stairs. You watch from the window as she breaks up the argument and hugs her older brother. The anger on his face vanishes as soon as the gate guard does, giving way to genuine concern.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 27, 2020, 01:57:36 am
I think we should give them a moment to catch up, and then approach and introduce ourselves.
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Post by: King Zultan on February 27, 2020, 05:59:20 am
I think we should give them a moment to catch up, and then approach and introduce ourselves.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 27, 2020, 01:51:14 pm
You busy yourself with putting away your books and straightening up your notes while waiting for them to catch up. When your desk is neat and tidy, and all the books are replaced, you leave the library and drift into the courtyard. Emma bumps into you on the way down the stairs, smiling widely as she grabs you by the hand and drags you towards her brother. He gives a smile when his sister appears, one that doesn't reach his eyes when they reach you.

"Ah, this must be Miss Gainer." Introductions do not appear to be necessary, "Your grandmother told me all about you when she let us know the situation." He extends his hand out for a handshake, and you take it. You notice, with mild amusement, that he's trying to break your hand.

"It's a pleasure." You reply with a smile, not giving him the satisfaction of seeing you wince. "You must be William Thornton Junior."

"Please, family friends call me Billy." He responds, returning your smile. "Hey, I saw a good restaurant back in town, how about I take you both to out for dinner before I take care of this situation?"

Emma looks surprised. "Isn't that dangerous?"

"Only a little. We got a few squads in the area, and the local gangs know better now."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 27, 2020, 01:57:55 pm
"Very well-- Billy." Nod-'n-smile.
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Post by: TamerVirus on February 27, 2020, 02:32:34 pm
"Very well-- Billy." Nod-'n-smile.
+1
More food is always good
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 27, 2020, 03:10:29 pm
"Very well-- Billy." Nod-'n-smile.
+1
More food is always good
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 27, 2020, 11:12:01 pm
William turns, heading out the courtyard, and you find yourself following along. Emma trails behind you, apprehensive. He's taller than you by about half a foot, a slender youth who seems only a few years older than yourself. But there's a presence about him and his eyes. You know what Mother Nicole meant when she said you looked like a killer. You see it in William's eyes, a certain disregard.

A squad of six stands ready for William on the path out of the Academy. They wait a respectful distance away, clad in worn, thickly plated vests with battle-rifles on their backs. Even Emma seems surprised as the approach William, slipping one of these vests over his thin Body, tightening it. They hand him a rifle, and he flashes the two of you a smile, extending a heavy coat with a red thorn on it towards Emma. She hesitates, before trading her robe out. You notice that red thorn on everyone's vest, right on the shoulder. They surround you in a tight cluster, William at the head, defending you as they walk.

With a small nod, they turn down towards the city, everyone but William slipping on a helmet. When one of his squad offers him one, he shakes his head, waving it away. "They're supposed to see me, Gem."



 You come into a dead-silent town. The festival is over, or everyone thought it best to pack up. William approaches one of the restaurants, trying the door only to find it locked. He knocks twice, and a frightened server rushes to open it. He smiles at her and claims a seat as his squad spreads out to cover the windows and entry-ways. You take a place next to Emma, who gives you a weak smile.

The server hands you a menu, giving you each a glass of a light beer before fleeing back into the kitchen.

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[Barley-analog] stew, with soft white rolls
Stewed [beans] with smoked [veal-analog] shoulder, served with sweet honey rolls
Pureed [carrot-analog] soup, with freshly roasted baby [carrot-analog]

Roasted [ Large Insect] steak, with potatoes and assorted [vegetables], served with a [mead] vinegar sauce
Pan-fried [veal-analog] with a dried [fig-analog] sauce, soft [noodles] and sweet fermented [cabbage-analog]
[Butter]-poached smoked [fish] with assorted greens and young potatoes
Pan-fried [Large Insect] steak, topped with a honey-[wheat-analog] crust, served with a red wine sauce, assorted [vegetables] and mashed potatoes

"So, I speak for my father when I say that we greatly appreciate owing Mother Nicole a favor. Especially since she let us know there was an issue in the first place." William starts, giving the menu the briefest of glances, "I am glad Emma is safe. I'm also impressed that you managed to kill five people on your own."

"That's talent right there." He does a double-take at the menu, "Oh, they have fish. Have you guys tried fish? SEED just started distributing it. I hear it is a lot like [insect] meat, but softer."

"So, Pheobe, what does the Thornton family owe you for helping us with our problem?" He finally states, his eyes on you, a fixed smile curling his lips. " And would you like to help us more with it? I'd love to see you in action." There's a strange tone in his last statement, one that seems to annoy Emma, who shifts closer to you. "After all, wouldn't you want to get revenge on the people who tried to hurt your friend?"

"William," Emma warns bluntly.

The server returns, hurrying to your table with a pad of paper.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 27, 2020, 11:34:55 pm
Mmm, nothing beats large insect steak.  Definitely order that.

I'm pretty sure that if we don't agree to help, we'll be in great danger, probably greater than if we agreed to assist.  As for the reward, a higher-quality weapon or duster, or a large number of credits may be useful. 

Alternatively, we could opt to forego the reward for now, instead having a favor from the Thorntons that we can keep as an ace in our pocket.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: VoidSlayer on February 28, 2020, 12:16:59 am
Oh tell me how it tastes, I will have the Pan-fried [Large Insect] steak, topped with a honey-[wheat-analog] crust, served with a red wine sauce, assorted [vegetables] and mashed potatoes, and vengeance on the ones who made your trip here necessary.  I was going to take care of it myself the same night, but I thought better of inserting myself in a political situation I do not understand. 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 28, 2020, 12:58:14 am
Nod-'n-smile to the server. "The pan-fried [large insect] steak, please."

"Thank you for your generosity, Mr. Thornton. I'll not ask compensation now for what I did last night-- I'm just glad the both of us survived it!-- but perhaps I'll ask a friendly favor of you one of these days. If ever I need it." (Smile.)

"Now. I'm not a killer by choice, Mr. Thornton, and I'm not one to seek vengeance-- I've only ever fought to protect myself and my own. Last night, I fought to protect a friend." (Nod to Emma.) "Still... perhaps you might explain to me what exactly I'd be doing, should I choose to aid you further with this problem of yours?"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: VoidSlayer on February 28, 2020, 12:59:12 am
Nod-'n-smile to the server. "The pan-fried [large insect] steak, please."

"Thank you for your generosity, Mr. Thornton. I'll not ask compensation now for what I did last night-- I'm just glad the both of us survived it!-- but perhaps I'll ask a friendly favor of you one of these days. If ever I need it." (Smile.)

"Now. I'm not a killer by choice, Mr. Thornton, and I'm not one to seek vengeance-- I've only ever fought to protect myself and my own. Last night, I fought to protect a friend." (Nod to Emma.) "Still... perhaps you might explain to me what exactly I'd be doing, should I choose to aid you further with this problem of yours?"


+1 ignore mine
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 28, 2020, 01:30:39 am
Nod-'n-smile to the server. "The pan-fried [large insect] steak, please."

"Thank you for your generosity, Mr. Thornton. I'll not ask compensation now for what I did last night-- I'm just glad the both of us survived it!-- but perhaps I'll ask a friendly favor of you one of these days. If ever I need it." (Smile.)

"Now. I'm not a killer by choice, Mr. Thornton, and I'm not one to seek vengeance-- I've only ever fought to protect myself and my own. Last night, I fought to protect a friend." (Nod to Emma.) "Still... perhaps you might explain to me what exactly I'd be doing, should I choose to aid you further with this problem of yours?"

+1, but I would like to say "this problem of ours" rather than "yours" so that he knows we're on his side.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 28, 2020, 02:01:10 am
+1, but I would like to say "this problem of ours" rather than "yours" so that he knows we're on his side.

Wel-l-l, the thing is... we're not on his side. We're on Emma's side. For now, anyway. It's a subtle but rather important distinction. The instant we call this "our" problem, we've as good as bound ourselves to it-- and that's something I'm reluctant to do until I know what we're getting into.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 28, 2020, 02:13:37 am
Hmm.  I'll think it over.  I think we probably will need to deal with the rival warlord eventually, as he may be looking for the one who killed his men.  Having Thornton reinforcements and supplies would probably make the job easier.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 28, 2020, 02:17:36 am
Fair. If we decide we're taking this job regardless of what Thornton Junior says, we might as well be assertive about it.

...is it silly that we're spending so much time over this one word?  :P
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 28, 2020, 02:20:00 am
Probably.  I'm fine with "yours."  Better to look before we leap.  Hopefully he can keep his temper in check.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 28, 2020, 02:29:51 am
We... should be OK? We're being respectful, we're asking for further information, we've done these people a great service, and this guy apparently considers us at very least interesting enough (hopefully) to be worth preserving.

This whole affair has me on edge, all the same. I don't trust this family at all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 28, 2020, 02:33:46 am

"The pan-fried [large insect] steak, please." You order confidently. Emma orders the fish and William the roast. The server gives an awkward bow to your table, something you've never seen any server do, before rushing off inelegantly to take the order of William's men.

"Thank you for your generosity, Mr. Thornton. I'll not ask compensation now for what I did last night-- I'm just glad the both of us survived it!-- but perhaps I'll ask a friendly favor of you one of these days. If ever I need it." You smile at him, and his own smile twitches.

"You are Black Nicky's grandkid alright, she said the same thing. Almost word for word, too." He retorts.

"Now. I'm not a killer by choice, Mr. Thornton, and I'm not one to seek vengeance-- I've only ever fought to protect myself and my own. Last night, I fought to protect a friend." You tick your head to Emma as you speak. She looks a little deflated at that but smiles at you anyway. She's hunched over her mug, her eyes focusing on it as she squeezes her thumb with her other hand. There's nervousness in her body language. "Still... perhaps you might explain to me what exactly I'd be doing, should I choose to aid you further with this problem of yours?"

"Well, to be real honest with you, Pheobe, I don't honestly know." He drains his mug and leans forward, "My plan is incredibly complicated and needs to be rehearsed a day before the operation!" He claims, then laughs a hollow laugh, further explaining with a more serious look on his face. "I'm going to knock out that Ai-Ai turret of his and shoot the shit out of his compound from the hover-ship. Throw a few grenades, really fucking level the place. Loud. Noisy. Proves the point you don't mess with the Thornton family. I doubt he has any other real firepower to mess with us. The local gangs are pissing their pants after this afternoon, and the Crusader Squad in town is sitting nice and cozy by their fireplaces with their suitcase of money."

Then William poses a question, not directly to you, but aside to Emma, who responds only with a scowl. "Now where in that plan could I fit a firebrand of a girl with no real training and a talent for violence? Should I give her some vital task or just let her ride shotgun and shoot people? Or maybe I should throw her into the mouth of the [demon] and see what comes out?"

The server hurries to the kitchen. You can hear your orders being called out, and the sudden rush of activity from within. She returns, asking, quietly, "More drinks?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 28, 2020, 02:59:58 am
"Perhaps a water, please."

...

"I have to ask... why me? It seems to me you've more than enough firepower to handle this task without the aid of one more pistollier!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 28, 2020, 03:09:37 am
"Perhaps a water, please."

...

"I have to ask... why me? It seems to me you've more than enough firepower to handle this task without the aid of one more pistollier!"

+1.  I wonder if he actually has the intel to suggest that they have little in the way of firepower, or if he is just guessing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 28, 2020, 03:52:04 am
"Perhaps a water, please." The server looks bemused but nods her head; the confusion only deepens when Emma orders the same.

"Bring a bottle of something strong," William states, without looking at the girl.

"I have to ask... why me? It seems to me you've more than enough firepower to handle this task without the aid of one more pistollier!"

William laughs at that, leaning back in his chair. "Everyone dies one day, Little Nicky. Your grandmother. My father. Now, do you know what happens when Old Nicky dies? Her choice of successor gets respected because she's one of those Grand Crusaders. Biology dictates you. Do you know what happens when my dad dies? I get bumped up. Emma too."

Finally, "Honestly? I want to see what you're made of. I want to see if I can respect you, or if I'm going to have to break my sister's heart and put a hole in you."

[20] Emma flinches, but her scowl only deepens. She pulls a las-pistol from her belt, setting it on the table with her hand on the trigger-guard. William's eyes go wide, and he laughs. "Damn, she really likes you, doesn't she?"

He seems genuinely proud of the response he receives from Emma, who, you notice now, is staring ice-cold daggers at her older brother. With a smooth motion, he sets his own pistol on the table, 'For Polly' glinting in the dim light of the restaurant. The server wisely hovers out of range, and even the soldiers take note. They don't intervene, looking between Emma and William before returning to their gaze to their posts, pointedly looking away from the situation.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 28, 2020, 04:02:19 am
"I don't want to hurt you or your family.  I want to help you.  But make no mistake, I will kill you if you are a threat to me.  So what will it be?  Do you want me as your foe, or do you want to work with me to destroy our mutual enemies?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 28, 2020, 04:03:18 am
"Perhaps a water, please."

...

"I have to ask... why me? It seems to me you've more than enough firepower to handle this task without the aid of one more pistollier!"

+1.  I wonder if he actually has the intel to suggest that they have little in the way of firepower, or if he is just guessing.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 28, 2020, 04:20:51 am
Holy cow. We've earned ourselves some loyalty, and I have to say I'm surprised-- and pleased.

To Emma: "Thank you."

To William: "I can't say I expected anything less of you, Billy Thornton... your family is a dangerous one."

"You want I should earn your respect? Very well-- I'll help you with this. Your troubles are Emma's troubles, so I'll help you with this. I want to help you with this."

"But. You try to hurt me? You try to hurt me to prove something to her? I will ruin you."

"Have we an accord?"


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 28, 2020, 04:25:22 am
Holy cow. We've earned ourselves some loyalty, and I have to say I'm surprised-- and pleased.

To Emma: "Thank you."

To William: "I can't say I expected anything less of you, Billy Thornton... your family is a dangerous one."

"You want I should earn your respect? Very well-- I'll help you with this. Your troubles are Emma's troubles, so I'll help you with this. I want to help you with this."

"But. You try to hurt me? You try to hurt me to prove something to her? I will ruin you."

"Have we an accord?"


+1, sans the threat
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 28, 2020, 04:28:35 am
I think the threat is important.  Without it, we appear weak.  In my opinion, that proposed dialogue is too conciliatory.  Warlords respect strength and ahbor weakness.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 28, 2020, 04:42:13 am
I think the threat is important.  Without it, we appear weak.
fair, will edit
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 28, 2020, 07:55:20 am
Holy cow. We've earned ourselves some loyalty, and I have to say I'm surprised-- and pleased.

To Emma: "Thank you."

To William: "I can't say I expected anything less of you, Billy Thornton... your family is a dangerous one."

"You want I should earn your respect? Very well-- I'll help you with this. Your troubles are Emma's troubles, so I'll help you with this. I want to help you with this."

"But. You try to hurt me? You try to hurt me to prove something to her? I will ruin you."

"Have we an accord?"


+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 28, 2020, 02:01:19 pm
You murmur a small thank you to Emma, and she gives you a little nod in return, still staring at her brother. He returns the dark look with a twisted smile and drags his attention back to you when you begin to speak.

"I can't say I expected anything less of you, Billy Thornton... your family is a dangerous one." Emma snorts, and one of the soldiers gives an awkward cough. "You want I should earn your respect? Very well-- I'll help you with this. Your troubles are Emma's troubles, so I'll help you with this. I want to help you with this." You take a deep breath, tamping down on a wave of rising anger in your gut.

"But. You try to hurt me? You try to hurt me to prove something to her? I will ruin you." [19] Emma shifts closer to you, nearly leaning on you. She looks uncomfortable but doesn't rebuke you and your threat. William watches his younger sister. "Have we an accord?"

"Well, Em," William begins, "Do I have an accord with her?"

"You do, Billy," Emma responds coldly.

"I guess I do then." William smiles, leaning back in his chair and holstering his pistol in his belt. Emma hesitates but does the same. The server hurries over with your drink order, setting a pitcher of water between you and Emma, and a bottle of clear liquor in front of William. The kitchen bustles open; three cooks emerge from the back with plates of steaming food. They set your respective orders on the table first, then hurry over to feed William's crew.

The insect steak's topping is sweet and crunchy to the steak's natural sweetness. The meat, you notice, is cooked all the way through, but still soft and melty. The vegetables and potatoes are a little salty, but the potatoes especially, are crisp and delicious. The sauce goes well with everything on the plate, a slight vinegary flavor to offset the sweetness of the protein. You all eat in silence. At one point, Emma asks to try yours in return for a bit of hers, and you promptly trade.

The fish is incredibly salty and smoked, but not dry, tasting more of butter and fish than anything else. It too melts after you chew for just a moment, and a resinous after-taste fills your senses. You have to drink some water to further enjoy your meal, but Emma seems to have no problems.

"So," William asks, after clearing his plate, "What do you think you can do in that plan of mine, Pheb?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 28, 2020, 03:45:22 pm
This is it. This is the bit where we make ourselves look tough without making ourselves look supernatural-- where we earn respect without drawing undue curiosity. We could have a powerful ally here... or a terrible, terrible enemy. I am open to suggestions here people.

(no pressure :-X )

"Well now... I'm stronger than I look, quick on the uptake, and willing to kill." (Grin.) "Nothing special, but I imagine I'll keep pace with any of your hired soldiers just fine."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 28, 2020, 04:35:56 pm
This is it. This is the bit where we make ourselves look tough without making ourselves look supernatural-- where we earn respect without drawing undue curiosity. We could have a powerful ally here... or a terrible, terrible enemy. I am open to suggestions here people.

(no pressure :-X )

"Well now... I'm stronger than I look, quick on the uptake, and willing to kill." (Grin.) "Nothing special, but I imagine I'll keep pace with any of your hired soldiers just fine."
+1. 

I trust this guy the least I have ever trusted anything, but we happen to have mutual enemies.  I think we can work with him as long as we are wary.  One option might be to sneak in and attempt to assasinate their leaders while he's putting on that display of force, or simply assisting with attacking from the gunship.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 28, 2020, 04:39:54 pm
This is it. This is the bit where we make ourselves look tough without making ourselves look supernatural-- where we earn respect without drawing undue curiosity. We could have a powerful ally here... or a terrible, terrible enemy. I am open to suggestions here people.

(no pressure :-X )

"Well now... I'm stronger than I look, quick on the uptake, and willing to kill." (Grin.) "Nothing special, but I imagine I'll keep pace with any of your hired soldiers just fine."
+1. 

I trust this guy the least I have ever trusted anything, but we happen to have mutual enemies.  I think we can work with him as long as we are wary.  One option might be to sneak in and attempt to assasinate their leaders while he's putting on that display of force, or simply assisting with attacking from the gunship.
+1, time for sneaky killing
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 28, 2020, 04:48:10 pm
I'm reluctant to commit to a given course of action until we know exactly how things are going to go down... still, I can see an assassination mission working out for us. Most importantly, William wouldn't have the chance to watch us work-- we could do whatever supernatural stuff we feel necessary, and still maintain a certain level of secrecy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 29, 2020, 01:30:12 am
"Well now... I'm stronger than I look, quick on the uptake, and willing to kill." You grin, and William leans forward. "Nothing special, but I imagine I'll keep pace with any of your hired soldiers just fine." William raises his brow, then looks over between you and one of his soldiers.

"Maybe you could." He scratches at his face, unconvinced.

"Or, how would you like me to sneak in and put a hole in the head of your quarry before you level the place, so you know for sure he's dead without having to stay longer than you need to?"

That gets a reaction out of him, and he stares intently at you. He explains, slowly and deliberately, his permanent smile fading. "When Families like ours go to war, Phebe, we don't half-ass it. There are long histories of blood feuds that the Scholars never recorded. All because a family didn't have the guts to finish the job. If you do anything with us, I want you to remember this-- we kill them all.  Daughters, sons, babies, children. All of them. It doesn't matter. Tonight the Moore family dies out."

[1] William gestures at Gem, who draws out a folder from her backpack. He looks through it with a crooked smile. "Moore recently remarried. His beautiful young wife had a bouncing baby boy about two months ago." He peels the cork from the vodka, downing a slug and turning his gaze back to you. Emma shifts uncomfortably, looking down.

"Please don't." Emma murmurs, hesitantly, earning her a scowl from William.

"She volunteered." William retorts, "Blood for blood. She'll earn a thorn if she does. Daddy will be happy with you. too, Emma, having found someone to do what you could never do." Emma looks like she's just been struck, but doesn't say a word. "You take down the prominent members of the Moore family, and you'll be considered part of the Family."

[1] Emma doesn't say anything else, merely reaching over to squeeze your arm.

"It's a damn good idea, Pheobe." William states, taking another shot. "I can get you some Ballistic to help take the edge off the killings, too, if you need it."

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 29, 2020, 02:02:53 am
Good grief.

If we back down now, we're going to come off as weak; the Thornton family being as it is, weak probably means dead-- or at least, in tremendous peril. If we take the job in its entirety... we'll become a Thornton of the worst kind. I expect Emma would come to fear us as she fears her brother, in time.

I need to think about this.  :-\
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 29, 2020, 03:02:16 am
Same.  This is an important choice both in terms of the immediate consequences and in how it will define us as a person.  I wish I hadn't mentioned the assassination thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 29, 2020, 03:39:51 am
 :)



[8]Vertigo overcomes you, and you shift your weight to avoid falling from your chair. Your vision blurs for a micro-second.

In your mind's eye, a number of possibilities diverge from this moment into near-infinitesimal fractals of futures; some end in flashes of Gold, some end in Blood, some, in Fire. Fewer still are the paths that drift out from these, into the void of darkness. Your head throbs painfully as you try, and fail, to focus on any one point, and you're left behind by your racing mind, blinking at William as he orders the dessert.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 29, 2020, 03:57:40 am
I'm not prepared for Phoebe to kill an innocent woman and a freaking baby.  I wonder if we could smuggle them out somehow without the Thorntons knowing, and then claim we killed them.

Alternatively, we could attempt to use the favor we got from the Thorntons.  Tell them to spare the wife and son, but keep them under heavy guard.  Offer to kill them ourselves should they become a problem, and point out that they may be useful hostages.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on February 29, 2020, 05:58:25 am
Looks like we're in to deep, we might have to bite the bullet and ether kill or be killed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 29, 2020, 08:07:56 am
We already accepted, they won’t be a challenge
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 29, 2020, 02:29:08 pm
So, what's the consensus?

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 29, 2020, 02:39:24 pm
It will be done
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 29, 2020, 02:40:52 pm
Hold up hold up I'm writing a thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 29, 2020, 02:44:07 pm
"...The father. The father, I will kill. Not the wife. Not the child. I've done some killing lately, but I'll not have innocent blood on my hands."

"You want to do me a favor for helping your sister with those goons last night? Raise the child. Give him the Thornton name in my place, and take him for your own. A life for a life."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 29, 2020, 02:58:52 pm
I would support that with the following additions: indicate that the wife and son may be useful hostages and offer to kill them ourselves should they ever grow to become a problem.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 29, 2020, 03:08:19 pm
Right then, revised:

"...The father. The father, I will kill. Not the wife. Not the child. I've done some killing lately, but I'll not have innocent blood on my hands."

"You want to do me a favor for helping your sister with those goons last night? Raise the child. Give him the Thornton name in my place, and take him for your own. A life for a life. He'll serve as a hostage if need be, and I'll kill him myself if he ever raises a hand against you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on February 29, 2020, 03:08:53 pm
He mentioned a feud earlier, the other family is likely planning to kill off the Thorntons too
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 29, 2020, 03:08:59 pm
Right then, revised:

"...The father. The father, I will kill. Not the wife. Not the child. I've done some killing lately, but I'll not have innocent blood on my hands."

"You want to do me a favor for helping your sister with those goons last night? Raise the child. Give him the Thornton name in my place, and take him for your own. A life for a life. He'll serve as a hostage if need be, and I'll kill him myself if he ever raises a hand against you."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 29, 2020, 03:30:17 pm
He mentioned a feud earlier, the other family is likely planning to kill off the Thorntons too

And we're gonna wipe them out swift and brutal-like-- but the child isn't planning anything, is he? He's a victim, and I can't in good conscience be the one to end him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 29, 2020, 03:42:09 pm
I noticed you didn't mention what to do with the wife.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on February 29, 2020, 04:28:35 pm
I'll be honest, I'm not really sure what to do about her. Partly I don't know how dangerous she is (if at all), but partly I feel we're pushing our luck just trying to save the child...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on February 29, 2020, 08:04:14 pm
Fair enough.  She could very well be a willing participant and a major crime figure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 01, 2020, 12:00:03 am
"...The father. The father, I will kill. Not the wife. Not the child. I've done some killing lately, but I'll not have innocent blood on my hands."

"You want to do me a favor for helping your sister with those goons last night? Raise the child. Give him the Thornton name in my place, and take him for your own. A life for a life. He'll serve as a hostage if need be, and I'll kill him myself if he ever raises a hand against you.

[2] William stares at you, surprised and shocked by your reluctance. Then, he laughs. "Okay." He agrees, rapping on the table with his knuckles, laughing, "I'll raise him. I'll give him all the training a young Thornton gets. I'll be the person he looks up to the most in this world—the one he respects and loves. I'll give you plenty of time to bond and make friends with him, too. Then, when he turns sixteen or seventeen, I'll put a pistol in his hands and tell him who killed -both- of his parents. His cousins, the people who would have raised him." The smile is gone in a flash. "You. You'll take the blame for this whole operation in his mind."

"I'll wager he tries to kill you-- and fails. And you'll gun him down to survive. You seem to wager that he'll appreciate being left alive enough to forgive you. So, yeah, I'll take that wager with those odds. Will you?"

He slumps back in his chair, drawing two auto-syringes from his belt and tossing them on the table towards you. "The woman dies with her husband, and I'll take the baby in. Unless you decide you don't want to deal with that trouble. If the mother lives, and the child lives with her, this becomes incredibly complicated. My father will get involved. He doesn't have my kindness and sympathy."

"And hey, if the kid dies, well, that's one less problem -you- have to worry about down the line."

The server brings out the collection of freshly cut [fruit] and cheeses, three plates, one for each of you. Emma looks at it morosely, silently, before resuming her watch on you with a worried look on her face.

"I don't want him dead because I like killing children, Pheobe, Emma. I want him dead because babies grow up, and orphans are full of resentment."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 01, 2020, 12:22:01 am
I can live with that, but it may damage our relationship with Emma beyond hope of repair.  My tentative inclination is to take the job.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 01, 2020, 12:24:25 am
Sigh. "Deal. If that's what it takes to keep the child alive... then so be it. He'll have his choice when the time comes."

"Now, care to explain to me the nature of these syringes here?"


This compromise of ours stinks, and it's gonna mess up our life something awful down the road, but it's the only way I can see right now to escape this affair in relative safety and with a relatively clean conscience. The mother's probably got no hand in this, so that's gonna be straight-up terrible, but... a life for a life, yes?  :-\
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 01, 2020, 12:44:21 am
At least we're saving the child.  If we didn't intervene, they would probably all have died when he leveled the place.  I guess we can take some solace in that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 01, 2020, 04:23:05 am
I can live with that, but it may damage our relationship with Emma beyond hope of repair.  My tentative inclination is to take the job.
completely. All must die
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 01, 2020, 04:26:31 am
You seem pretty committed to killing the baby.  May I ask why?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 01, 2020, 04:31:51 am
Thornton mentioned the results. Leaving the enemy alive will not help
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on March 01, 2020, 08:48:30 am
Aw great, we’re gonna go create Batman now
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 01, 2020, 01:28:19 pm
Changed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 01, 2020, 01:43:17 pm
Thornton mentioned the results. Leaving the enemy alive will not help

It's not "the enemy". It's a baby. If the kid wants to get himself killed trying to avenge his relatives when he grows up, fine-- but he deserves to have that choice.

If we take this job in its entirety, our noble little [demon] becomes a [demon] in earnest. We wind up a Thornton of the nastiest kind, one more family figure for our friend to fear. I can't support that, not if we have anything resembling a viable alternative; hence, the compromise.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 01, 2020, 02:23:14 pm
Fine don't kill the baby.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 01, 2020, 04:25:43 pm
hehehehehe. I support you either way.



"It's called Ballistic. I'm sure the Scholars and our lab-rats have a technical name for it, but they're not in charge of selling it." He turns one of the auto-syringes over in his hands, the light catching the clear liquid within. The auto-injector is cheap plastic, little more than housing for the syringe. "It's a combat stimulant we designed. We're in the final phases of testing it before we ask Mother Nicole to let us sell to SEED. It takes about two minutes to take effect, we find. Minimal side effects."

Gem, you assume William's second, finishes her meal and approaches the table with a heavy vest and a battle-rifle. She drops them down for you, pulling three spare rifle magazines from her kit to set on the table. William draws a crudely drawn map from the folder, gesturing to a corner of the compound. "Before you do anything, I need you to disable the AA cannon on the eastern side of the compound. It will be under heavy guard. After that, we'll provide air-support until you are a safe distance away. Then we'll level the place, swing around, and pick you up."

[8] You notice they don't have any intel on the inside of the building, or on the specifics of the compound itself. Just on general distances, but, you familiarize yourself with the information as best you can. The map does have distinct buildings labeled, such as the Villa, various outbuildings, the generator room, etc. Committing them to memory, you ask very few questions. Something, however, catches your eye, a building labeled 'lab.'

[12] When you ask William about it, he changes the subject evasively. "I recommend taking a det-pack from the hover-craft for the cannon. It won't do any good if someone climbs back on it again. We'll give you a flaregun so you can signal us. However, you do it is up to you, don't forget to use that flare."

"If you die, or are heavily injured, try to find cover before five in the morning. That's your time limit. Any questions? If not, we should get ready to go."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 01, 2020, 04:47:52 pm
"Yeah, I'll be sure to find cover if I die." (Smirk a little.) "No questions. Let's do this."

Grab the syringes and gear. Don the vest.


I've probably forgotten something worth asking folks, so do chip in if anything comes to mind!  :-X
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 01, 2020, 05:04:27 pm
"Yeah, I'll be sure to find cover if I die." (Smirk a little.) "No questions. Let's do this."

Grab the syringes and gear. Don the vest.


I've probably forgotten something worth asking folks, so do chip in if anything comes to mind!  :-X
+1.  Nothing comes to mind at the moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 01, 2020, 05:07:26 pm
"Yeah, I'll be sure to find cover if I die." (Smirk a little.) "No questions. Let's do this."

Grab the syringes and gear. Don the vest.


I've probably forgotten something worth asking folks, so do chip in if anything comes to mind!  :-X
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 01, 2020, 07:23:42 pm
Emma helps you pull the vest on, and your mesh up over your face. Her hands are shaking, you notice. You give your rifle a cursory inspection, checking the mag within. The display reads a solid 500/500, and you slip the other magazines into your belt. The safety is on, but beside it is 'single,' '5-burst', and 'full.' Its housing is worn but well-maintained. The lens is clean and brand new. It still has the protective covering on it. Applying the same principle as the las-pistol maintenance class, you pop open the housing, examining the coolant and anti-radiation system for leaks or damages. There is none.

Gem gestures for you to turn around, and pulls hard on your vest when you do, double-checking the straps. She hides a stray strand of hair for you beneath your mask. "You're good." She murmurs brusquely.

With a nod of approval, William carefully slots the intel back into the folder, handing it back to Gem. He stretches out as he rises, nodding to Emma, who heaves a sigh, watching as he leaves. She waits until his back is turned, and the server visibly relaxes, before pulling a wad of bills from her coat. She tosses the pile on the table, leaving right behind her brother, you in tow.

Tonight faint snow descends on the town. The squad walks in dead-silence, keeping watch on Emma, who shivers in the cold. You, once more, are an after-thought. So, without direction, you copy the squad-mates, moving to body-guard Emma. William drinks as he walks, his smile a twisted, fixed thing on his face. More like a mask than an expression.

It takes little time to reach the Academy, and Emma hesitates at the gateway. With a defiant glance to her brother, she steps forward to hug you tightly, whispering in your ear as she does. [14] "Come back safe. That's all that matters to me."

[4]"I'll bring her body back if she dies, so don't you worry, Em." William calls out, annoyed. "We've got to go."

Any parting words?



William's squad leads you. The hovercraft is concealed in a dip in the hills surrounding the town. Crates and material surrounding the craft, and Gem peels one open, pulling out a square, plastic case with a timer on it, about the size of your palm. "Don't get it too hot now," Gem warns, softly. "Its shelf-stable, but extreme heat can still detonate it. Be careful."

William gives you a bearing and a compass to follow it. He looks unconcerned, taking a seat on a crate. "It's about a thirty-minute walk from here, over the hills."

[-]Shouldering your new rifle, you start your trek, only needing to glance at the compass on occasion, more out of doubt than anything. Your sense of navigation hasn't changed, and it's easy to differentiate where in the magnetic field you are supposed to go towards. Then you lay eyes on the compound. They didn't tell you it's built atop a low hill, or that there was a large cement wall surrounding it. Or that it was set dead-center in the middle of a patch of fallow farmland. A single pathway leads into it, and it looks like a cross between a personal villa and a military base. A beautiful, ornate house sits in the center, overlooking a carefully maintained pond and lawn. After that, several buildings that look like bunkhouses sprout out of the ground, the lab, and soldier's living quarters if you recall correctly. That large building there with the heavy reinforcement must be the personal reactor.

[4] Looking towards the eastern wall, you notice the AA cannon. It looks expensive and new. A short-barrel angled up towards the sky is all you can see of it—a countermeasure to the Thorntons. You cannot tell if it is actively staffed or not.

[1] You crouch hidden in the copse of trees, surrounded by fallow farmland.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 01, 2020, 07:36:41 pm
Parting words could be something like: "Emma... I hope you can forgive me."

As for what to do now, I'm not sure.  It may make sense to walk the perimeter and check for patrols, surveillance, and gaps or other defects in the wall.  However, there isn't any cover to hide us if we did such a thing...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 01, 2020, 07:43:07 pm
Murmur: "I'll do my best-- you keep safe too." Return hugs.

Unshoulder our rifle and set it to full-auto. Look over the wall from our hiding place; attempt to identify potential entryways.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 01, 2020, 07:54:11 pm
Murmur: "I'll do my best-- you keep safe too." Return hugs.

Unshoulder our rifle and set it to full-auto. Look over the wall from our hiding place; attempt to identify potential entryways.
+1. I would like to add to that: also determine if any suitable cover exists, or if the base truly is entirely surrounded by open space.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 01, 2020, 10:14:07 pm
Murmur: "I'll do my best-- you keep safe too." Return hugs.

Unshoulder our rifle and set it to full-auto. Look over the wall from our hiding place; attempt to identify potential entryways.
+1. I would like to add to that: also determine if any suitable cover exists, or if the base truly is entirely surrounded by open space.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 01, 2020, 10:43:10 pm
Murmur: "I'll do my best-- you keep safe too." Return hugs.

Unshoulder our rifle and set it to full-auto. Look over the wall from our hiding place; attempt to identify potential entryways.
+1. I would like to add to that: also determine if any suitable cover exists, or if the base truly is entirely surrounded by open space.
+1

Solid addendum. +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 02, 2020, 12:06:13 am
[3] Emma doesn't respond to your half mumbled apology or goodbye. She nods and hurries away. It's dark for everyone but you, so you're sure you're the only one who saw the tears running down her face.



The rifle reactor hums to life as you flip the safety switch to 'full.'

[11] You scan the surroundings of the Compound. The wall surrounds the entire thing, but you notice a blind-spot from the guard towers, in that they're a bit too tall to ultimately see the base of the hill on the western side. It's newly constructed as well, no places collapsing or falling in on itself. The gate or over the top are the only two options you can see.

[10] The farmlands surround it entirely, providing no real cover for you to lose yourself in-- or so you think, until you notice the irrigation ditches that run in across the field, intersecting and raising the land. Its a stretch, to be sure, but the walls aren't big enough to patrol on. The towers are your only concern. You calculate its better to be in a ditch getting shot at than on open terrain. With luck, you might be able to get to the wall before someone in one of the towers notices you.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 12:15:40 am
It looks like we should attempt to covertly make our way to the wall near the western hill via the irrigation ditches.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 02, 2020, 05:41:52 am
It looks like we should attempt to covertly make our way to the wall near the western hill via the irrigation ditches.
+1 if we still are undetected, let’s make our way to the AA cannon
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 02, 2020, 06:20:32 am
It looks like we should attempt to covertly make our way to the wall near the western hill via the irrigation ditches.
+1 if we still are undetected, let’s make our way to the AA cannon
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 02, 2020, 04:49:39 pm
...
:(


[20] With a grunt, you lower yourself down to your hands and knees crawl through the irrigation ditches. You're thankful for the night, and the lack of a moon in the sky. This is a perfect night. The snow covers your back in time, but you don't falter, continuing to drag yourself through the trench. At one point, you think you hear an alarm.

You freeze in place, not even daring to glance up for fear of a las-gun blast. But, there's no reply, so you crawl on. You get to the edge of the trench, and the edge of the farmland surrounding the compound, and with a heavy breath, you break across open terrain.

There's no response from the compound.


[20] Lifting your head up, to look at the tower, you notice something else-- there's nobody keeping watch. The realization hits you like a bag of bricks. They're not expecting to be attacked right now. You almost laugh at the stupidity of the situation. You calmly walk over to the eastern side of the compound wall. There's someone manning the cannon, at least, you notice because the barrel just tracked upwards towards a star, before being swung lower again.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 05:14:45 pm
I'm not sure, but I think it makes sense to sneak up on the cannon operator, plant the charge somewhere that isn't visible from the perspective of the cannoneer, and then silently make our way back to the western wall to take cover before detonating it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 02, 2020, 05:33:25 pm
How would you like to get pass the wall?

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 05:37:16 pm
Ah... Inspect the wall and determine if it looks climbable.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 02, 2020, 05:39:32 pm
Aw yes

I'm not sure, but I think it makes sense to sneak up on the cannon operator, plant the charge somewhere that isn't visible from the perspective of the cannoneer, and then silently make our way back to the western wall to take cover before detonating it.

Seems a solid plan-- only thing is, I'm wondering whether it's better to kill the cannoneer or no. On the one hand, if we leave him alive he could spot us and holler for the guards-- on the other hand, killing him might prove noisy of its own accord. Not sure yet what's the best course of action there.

Attempt to discern from our current position: is there any point along the length of the wall we could conceivably scale without specialized equipment?

EDIT: Ninja'd!  :P
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 05:40:34 pm
I prefer your action.

Aw yes

I'm not sure, but I think it makes sense to sneak up on the cannon operator, plant the charge somewhere that isn't visible from the perspective of the cannoneer, and then silently make our way back to the western wall to take cover before detonating it.

Seems a solid plan-- only thing is, I'm wondering whether it's better to kill the cannoneer or no. On the one hand, if we leave him alive he could spot us and holler for the guards-- on the other hand, killing him might prove noisy of its own accord. Not sure yet what's the best course of action there.

Attempt to discern from our current position: is there any point along the length of the wall we could conceivably scale without specialized equipment?

EDIT: Ninja'd!  :P
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 02, 2020, 06:01:05 pm
Is basically the same action with more words. Hence, ninja'd ;)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 02, 2020, 06:24:37 pm
[-] The wall is easily scalable with a running start. Brother Hop has made you climb more difficult terrain during your early morning training sessions. Your opinion only concern is noise. There are a few places where it's closer to a barracks or the reactor, where you -might- have some cover from internal guards.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 02, 2020, 06:30:01 pm
Pick a spot nearish to the cannon with some maybe-cover, and make our leaping scale! Try to be quiet about it, if we can.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 06:33:37 pm
If I may, first attempt to determine whether the charge would have sufficient blast radius (if placed on the base of the eastern wall) to either destroy the cannon outright or cause the cannon to collapse without the wall's support.

Just in case we could avoid the possibility of being detected.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 02, 2020, 06:50:41 pm
[17] After a furtive examination of the det-pack, you come to two conclusions. One, the det-pack is not meant for anti-personnel applications, designed more for the destruction of buildings and material. Two, it would blow a sizable chunk of the wall away and give whoever was standing on the other side of it a lasting taste of concrete debris and concussion.

[16] Your faint headache throbs, and you calculate that, as a very loud, flashy alternative, that overloading your las-pistol would destroy the wall and whatever is behind it with burning hellfire. It would take out the cannon, the crew, the wall, and a large chunk of the ground itself.

[13] You seem fine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 02, 2020, 06:57:44 pm
Overloading would solve this problem beautifully... but I'd rather save that for when we're dealing with something a bit more urgent. For now, let's just quietly make our climb into the courtyard from a covered location, preferably far from any potential guards.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 07:10:28 pm
Hmm.  I'm not sure that I agree.  Detonating the bomb will draw a lot of attention anyway, and if the range of the las-pistol is sufficient to allow us to retreat to a fair distance, we can still destroy the cannon at range.  At that point, we could retreat or take cover and hope to avoid detection until the gunship arrives to provide distraction, and then we should be able to jump over the wall without having to worry about noise and drawing attention.

We have a las-rifle, so even if the overload would destroy the las-pistol, we would still have a suitable weapon.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 02, 2020, 07:26:56 pm
Main thing to remember with the overload... we only get one shot. We'll almost certainly be too starved once we've used it to do anything else supernatural: no more overloads, no healing surge for if we get ourself mangled somehow, not until we've found food somewhere to gorge ourself on. That's fine-- if we don't have anything else real dangerous we need to do afterwards.

Did we want to go do our assassination thingummy soon as we've blown up the cannon? I'm not clear how that's supposed to go.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 07:33:40 pm
William did say "before you do anything, I need you to disable the AA cannon on the eastern side of the compound. It will be under heavy guard. After that, we'll provide air-support until you are a safe distance away."  So he wants us to disable the cannon first.

We could take our time on the assassination if desired, as long as we finish before 5.  However, it makes sense to capitalize on the air-support provided by the gunship.  You make a good point about the overload expending a lot of energy.  I'll think it over a bit and make a decision this evening whether to support or not.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 02, 2020, 07:41:24 pm
Overload would make this first task of ours real easy, I'll grant. We could perhaps try and find food inside the compound somewhere, if we had to.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 07:53:26 pm
Overloading would solve this problem beautifully... but I'd rather save that for when we're dealing with something a bit more urgent. For now, let's just quietly make our climb into the courtyard from a covered location, preferably far from any potential guards.
+1, makes sense, no need to expend ourselves unnecessarily.  Better to save it for a crux.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 02, 2020, 08:20:03 pm
[15] Circling around the perimeter of the compound to the reactor on the northern side, you take a few steps back, and sprint at the wall.

[13+2 vs 12] You grunt as the air is knocked from your chest, heaving yourself over the wall with minimal difficulty. No alarm sounds, and no one comes to investigate as you drop down on to the other side, just behind the reactor building. The closer you are, the more you can feel the faint hum of the fusion generator in your body. It's strong, much stronger than the hum of the pistol reactors. It makes your teeth ache.

[18] The compound is a motley collection of outbuildings surrounding the Villa, most of them are pre-fabs you notice, in various states of disrepair. The guards that should be patrolling are instead drinking by a localized heating system in the center of the compound. They laugh and joke, and you watch as they change out the guard on the AA gun frequently. No one even thinks to look in your direction.

[19] It takes you a moment to notice with the 'noise' of the main power supply, but the AA gun doesn't have a reactor. Instead, you notice a thick conduit of cables leaving the reactor building, snaking their way to the cannon. They have it based on an external power supply.

A calculation forms; these men and women are incredibly undisciplined. In a direct battle with the Thorntons, they would lose, but the Thorntons have to ship in much more material than the Moores. The AA cannon is the center of the Moore's current plan-- they have no backup plan as far as you can see. Whereas you noticed several mortars at the Thornton base-camp, sniper rifles and plenty of other guerrilla-style materials.

William didn't need to send you in for anything.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 08:33:24 pm
Wow... I was really expecting more from these guys.  Should we just cut the cables or sabotage the power source, or continue with the explosive?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 02, 2020, 08:41:22 pm
Wow... I was really expecting more from these guys.

A combination of gloriously lucky rolls and preexisting circumstances, methinks! I'm quite pleased. :))

Should we just cut the cables or sabotage the power source, or continue with the explosive?

I'm just gonna roll with the explosive plan, since we have to shoot off a flare gun anyway-- we can use the blast to cover our escape.



Tentative plan:

Keep to the shadows. Make our way slow and careful-like to the AA gun, keeping a close eye on any nearby guards (and the cannon operator); if one should happen to sight us, shoot him down before he can react. Place our det-pack somewhere it'll wreck the cannon real good, set its detonation timer to perhaps 60 seconds, and return to the spot of wall we scaled just now.

When the explosive goes off, assuming it totals the gun as it's supposed to, consider: are we close enough to the center of the compound to shoot down the guards with any modicum of accuracy? If so, do-- go full-auto on their sorry hides while they're distracted, then shoot off the flare-gun once they're dead and climb back out of the compound! If not, just use the distraction of the explosion to shoot off our flare-gun and make our climb.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 08:45:48 pm
Wow... I was really expecting more from these guys.

A combination of gloriously lucky rolls and preexisting circumstances, methinks! I'm quite pleased. :))

Should we just cut the cables or sabotage the power source, or continue with the explosive?

I'm just gonna roll with the explosive plan, since we have to shoot off a flare gun anyway-- we can use the blast to cover our escape.



Tentative plan:

Keep to the shadows. Make our way slow and careful-like to the AA gun, keeping a close eye on any nearby guards (and the cannon operator); if one should happen to sight us, shoot him down before he can react. Place our det-pack somewhere it'll wreck the cannon real good, set its detonation timer to perhaps 60 seconds, and return to the spot of wall we scaled just now.

When the explosive goes off, assuming it totals the gun as it's supposed to, consider: are we close enough to the center of the compound to shoot down the guards with any modicum of accuracy? If so, do-- go full-auto on their sorry hides while they're distracted, then shoot off the flare-gun once they're dead and climb back out of the compound! If not, just use the distraction of the explosion to shoot off our flare-gun and make our climb.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: VoidSlayer on March 02, 2020, 08:58:29 pm
Are we sure this is the right place lol.

Are we sure these guys are the ones the interrogation gave us?

Maybe set the explosive for a long time, it doesn't need to go off until later.  Then go into the house and see if we can get some information or see who is around.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 02, 2020, 08:59:12 pm
Sabatoge the power source
Could we shove the cannoneer inside the cannon and shoot it at the power source? Killing two birds with one stone
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 02, 2020, 09:36:02 pm
[-] You hesitate before unleashing hell on this seemingly unsuspecting compound. There's minimal amounts of compounds in the area, the town is about an hour's walk away from here...but the Villa that the Moore Family was supposed to be headquartered in was supposed to be in town, wasn't it? But William sent you in this direction, however, and showed extensive intel on this compound in general.

[2] The cannon is, unfortunately, not big enough to shove someone into. It also doesn't have the ability to shoot at anything lower than the horizon. You could probably use it to destroy several buildings if you so choose, but aiming it downward to shoot at people would be a difficult task.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 09:38:01 pm
Take a look at the guards.  What do they seem to have for weapons and armor?

We may need to perform some interrogation to determine what is going on here.  Very strange.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 02, 2020, 09:44:16 pm
[14+5] This is indeed a Moore compound. A large 'M' is painted in gold on the reactor and adorns some of the less drunken soldier's greatcoats. Most have rifles, some have shotguns, but all of them have at least las-pistols. You notice one gentlewoman drinking from a clear bottle, sitting next to a squad-based machine gun of conventional design.
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Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 09:51:13 pm
I'm not sure that we should just unload on these guys.  It looks like they could do some damage.  Should we perform the assassinations first, perhaps after disabling the cannon's power source, and then deal with the cannon in a more permanent fashion as a parting gift (only if circumstances allow)?  We could then use the flare and get out of here.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 02, 2020, 10:09:34 pm
I'm not sure that we should just unload on these guys.  It looks like they could do some damage.  Should we perform the assassinations first, perhaps after disabling the cannon's power source, and then deal with the cannon in a more permanent fashion as a parting gift (only if circumstances allow)?  We could then use the flare and get out of here.
wjat if we aim the cannon straight up, allowing it to effectively shoot itself? Let’s assassinate then deal with the oiwer
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 02, 2020, 10:25:25 pm
Best we keep to our assigned task, methinks-- partly for the air support, and partly to demonstrate to the Thorntons that if need be, we can get a job done fast. We're here mostly to prove ourselves, after all.

Still, I suppose it would be rather reckless to just open fire on an entire contingent of guards...

Revised plan:

Keep to the shadows. Make our way slow and careful-like to the AA gun, keeping a close eye on any nearby guards (and the cannon operator); if one should happen to sight us, shoot him down before he can react. Place our det-pack somewhere it'll wreck the cannon real good, set its detonation timer to perhaps 60 seconds, and return to the spot of wall we scaled just now.

When the explosive goes off (assuming it totals the gun as it's supposed to), shoot off the flare-gun and make our climb.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 02, 2020, 10:39:37 pm
If we shoot down one that recognizes us, we will immediately be fighting the whole contingent, though, assuming they don't run away.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 02, 2020, 10:52:24 pm
Revised plan:

Keep to the shadows. Make our way slow and careful-like to the AA gun, keeping a close eye on any nearby guards (and the cannon operator); if one should happen to sight us, shoot him down before he can react. Place our det-pack somewhere it'll wreck the cannon real good, set its detonation timer to perhaps 60 seconds, and return to the spot of wall we scaled just now.

When the explosive goes off (assuming it totals the gun as it's supposed to), shoot off the flare-gun and make our climb.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 03, 2020, 03:29:17 am
Wouldn't it be safer if we killed the people we came to kill first then blow up the gun?
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Post by: ZBridges on March 03, 2020, 03:53:17 am
The GM said the equivalent of "are you sure?" when we were about to engage, so something's up.
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 03, 2020, 10:27:02 am
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 03, 2020, 11:58:10 am
The voices deliberate, and you hesitate, sulking in the darkness.[1/1d2/now or later]

[7+2 vs. 7] You inch your way through the shadows, going around the long way towards the cannon. For a brief second, you almost bump into a drunken soldier stumbling back from relieving himself. He doesn't notice you, however, and you duck down lower behind the crate you're behind.

[10+2 vs. 10]The turret is tucked up against the eastern wall. The gunner on duty lounges haphazardly on the seat, occasionally adjusting the sight for no real reason. He looks longingly at the grouping around the heating element and takes a swig from a beer bottle. He doesn't notice you coming up behind him, either, lost in the bottle as he is.

[9+2 vs. 10] Despite being drunk, he twists when you step close, opening his mouth-- until you bash him in the face hard with the butt of your rifle. He goes down like a wet sack of bricks, his pistol clattering free from his hand.

[10] You fumble with the det-pack, switching the timer on and hastily shoving it into the targeting and control apparatus of the gun. It begins to count down, and you scatter, slipping back the way you came.

[5+2 vs. 6] A cry goes up from the guards. Somebody noticed something. Maybe you fleeing, maybe the det-pack, or perhaps the unconscious body of the gunner. It doesn't last long, though, before the det-pack explodes in a burst of concussive energy. You glance back, noting with satisfaction the shattered glass of the turret's lens and leaking coolant element.

[7+1 vs. 7] That sobers up the guards, who quickly sound the alarm, but its too late, you're back over the wall with a grunt of exertion. With shaking hands, you pull out the flare-gun and fire it into the air. The bright red light shines down over the compound, illuminating the panic-stricken guards. Commanders begin to yell orders, and you take a moment to move away from where you just shot the flare.

You, and everybody else in the compound, can hear the faint roar of the gunship in the distance.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 03, 2020, 01:02:39 pm
Beautiful.

Let the gunship wreck some stuff, then make our way sneaky-like to the Villa with rifle in hand! We've got an assassination to perform.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 03, 2020, 01:03:40 pm
Hmm.  I guess I worry too much.

Beautiful.

Let the gunship wreck some stuff, then make our way sneaky-like to the Villa with rifle in hand! We've got an assassination to perform.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 03, 2020, 01:22:00 pm
Hmm.  I guess I worry too much.

Hey now, the last time we rolled poorly in a fight we got half our spinal cord shot out from under us. There's a reason we've been worrying about stuff-- lasguns are scary!  :-X
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 03, 2020, 02:59:20 pm
Beautiful.

Let the gunship wreck some stuff, then make our way sneaky-like to the Villa with rifle in hand! We've got an assassination to perform.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 03, 2020, 11:19:41 pm
Weak las-gun fire strafes into the night from the compound as the gunship accelerates into view. None of the Thorntons respond, the ship a silent black omen in the sky. With no moon to illuminate the night, it drifts like a phantom, a ghost, until it comes close to the compound. Two shots from the front of the ship hit the southern wall and explode it into fine concrete powder. Guards scurry to and fro, trying to take cover- only to be cut down by high-powered conventional rotary cannon. It rains lead. Then, the doors swing open, and the excellent marksmen of the Thornton family begin to pick off targets from the safety of the sky.

William stands, illuminated by an inner light, highlighting his fair features and blond hair. He's smiling, laughing as he tosses grenades and picks off any who might try to stand and fight.

[8] You pause, appreciating the sight. William stands proud and triumphant, even as las-gun shots ping into the armor of the ship by his head. He never stops laughing, never stops shooting, and never stops commanding.

[12+1 vs. 17] You sneak around the wall, hopping over it near the Villa-- a las-gun shot cracks into the concrete beside you, and you fling yourself to the ground, swinging your rifle up and around.

[11+1 vs. 2] A young guard tracks her rifle to follow you. You're too fast, and spray her torso and thighs with automatic laser pulses. She still stands after a shot hits her chest. She has a thick vest on, but the ones that caught her thighs snap her back. You scramble up into cover as she goes into shock. You're sure she's bled to death by the time you check your fingers and toes.

Three others look to the commotion, noticing their fallen comrade.

[10] The attack ship takes this moment to hover nearby, blowing away two of them with concentrated fire. [17-2] The guards fire back, holding their position. One aims down his barrel to fire at you, rifle lifting--

[13 vs ...1]  Holes appear in the guard's chest in a burst of bloody steam as you hold the trigger down. He dies.

[15+2 vs 18][Hitloc:12] You're knocked back by a blow to your stomach, the wind knocked out of you all at once. You're stunned, but not enough to stop you from ducking back into cover to feel at the wound. A gaping hole has been blown in your vest and the coat beneath, cracks radiating outward from entry point. The bottom plates are shattered too, vaguely hot to the touch in that curious las-gun way. As for your flesh-- you aren't bleeding. The armor in your stomach area is compromised, however. Another shot will go right through.

While you were making sure your insides were still inside you, the gunship has killed the other guard in a hail of las-fire. You rise, tipping a salute to William. He nods his head towards the Villa.

[20] No other guards await you before you reach the wide double doors to the Villa. You find them locked and almost start laughing. [4] Blood is rushing in your ears as you lift your rifle and blow the lock clean off. You kick the door down-- and find two guards, looking stunned.

[5,1 vs. 5] One blinks, the other starts lifting his rifle the same time you do.

[20 vs. 10] You hold the trigger down as you lift-- he tries to line up a shot. That's the only thing that saves you. You kill both of them, their blood splashing on your rifle, on you, as you gun them down. You're sure they're dead-- no one can have that many holes in them and still be alive.

The Villa is open before you. The gunship provides cover at your back.

Somewhere in its depths, a baby begins to cry.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 03, 2020, 11:36:36 pm
Quick, if we can: reverse our vest back-to-front, so that the damaged bit is behind us. We're more likely to get shot in the gut than the back right now anyhow, and we've still got our duster on the right way just in case.

Advance into the villa. Keep our rifle up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 03, 2020, 11:38:42 pm
Quick, if we can: reverse our vest back-to-front, so that the damaged bit is behind us. We're more likely to get shot in the gut than the back right now anyhow, and we've still got our duster on the right way just in case.

Advance into the villa. Keep our rifle up.

+1.  I think it makes sense to proceed carefully and systematically, room by room, while keeping our ears open for anyone that tries to run.

Also, based on the status... we appear to be liking this a bit too much.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2020, 12:19:17 am
...
Creative!

[-] You duck into a bit of cover-- the first room you can find, and adjust your vest, pulling it around so the thick band that once protected your lower back now protects your abdomen. The vest now, however, feels a bit more encumbering to move in.

Rising, you lift your rifle, stepping down the ornately decorated and lavish insides of the Villa hallway. You check each room, and each room is more empty and well-furnished than the last. You advance up the stairs with careful steps.

[1/1d10][2 vs 2] A single guard stands at the top of the staircase. He misses you, you miss him. It's an awkward moment for both of you.

[13 vs. 1] The retort of your las-gun sends him sprawling for cover, shattering his vest and blowing a crater in his thigh.

[13] He scurries behind cover, breathing hard, and you sit still, ducking beneath his line of sight using the staircase.

[13 vs 13-3] You both exchanged fire again, his went wide, but your's turns his arm to mush and shatters the wood paneling. He drops his gun, and you rise, approaching the door he was guarding. The baby is continuing to cry, and from within you hear shuffling. The other door is open, and a man sits in a chair, highlighted by a bank of security cameras, which show the compound in all its devastation. He doesn't seem to notice you. Or chooses not to.

[8]The guard stares up at you-- and with his last breath, spits at you. You put him out of his misery.

[20]The man speaks when his guard dies and you catch him watching where you're standing through a camera.

"Ah, so I'm assuming you're the Thornton negotiator?" There's an awful lot of confidence in his voice as he addresses you. "I'm Johnny Moore-- what will tonight cost us, Thornton?"

Someone is desperately trying to shush the baby in the other room.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 12:32:42 am
If I was feeling vicious, I'd say "everything" and leave it at that. If I was feeling dramatic and stupid, I'd go on a little moralistic diatribe about how Moore hurt our friend, we'll hurt him, it didn't have to be this way, yadda yadda yadda-- all while he's readying whatever weaponry he's got available to him, I'm sure.

I've been playing Dwarf Fortress for the past few hours, so... I'm just feeling brutally pragmatic.

No words. Gun Moore down.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 01:05:44 am
Probably unnecessary nervousness, but inspect him carefully, as much of him as is visible at least, for something like a deadman's switch.  If possible, get a look at his hands.  If it all looks good, fire away.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 01:13:03 am
Probably unnecessary nervousness, but inspect him carefully, as much of him as is visible at least, for something like a deadman's switch.  If possible, get a look at his hands.

Eh, +1-- be quick about it tho, lest Moore prepare something in the interim. If we don't spot anything, shoot him down.

We could always shoot off our overload if we want him dead-for-sure. I don't expect we'll need it for anything else at this point.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 01:54:44 am
Hmm... I wonder if it would be good to determine, for sure, that these are the guys that tried to kindap Emma.  It seems like they lack the skill to even come close to pulling that off.

Gotta check for the deadman's switch first, just in case after we blast him the whole villa will go off.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2020, 02:31:00 am
[15] Moore sits at his desk, smiling smugly. He has nothing in his hands besides an auto-syringe, emblazoned with the letter 'M' in gold on the white plastic. You feel a gun reactor, beneath his desk. An assault rifle with the safety off, you figure, from how the reactor silently hums to you with energetic killing intent.

"Let me make an apology first. Going after your Family's Blood was wrong of me. A mistake. I'm sorry. You need me though, Thornton. I've got supply lines into the Holy City..we can pump this right through 'em."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 02:46:39 am
I'm not inclined to listen to this guy.  We can pump him full of holes.  Maybe dive to create a smaller profile and fire the assault rifle at the same time?  Or the las-pistol if the las-rifle is too unwieldy.  I'd agree to an overload as well.

We could probably fire the overload from downstairs as well, thus preventing him from being able to attack us with his weapon.

However, I was thinking about saving both the wife and the child, and using it on Thornton if he becomes difficult.  I don't think he would dare cross Black Nicky.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 04, 2020, 06:58:32 am
Lets do one of those diving and shooting things and kill that guy.
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 04, 2020, 07:50:20 am
Kill him, I don't care how
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 12:43:14 pm
I... really don't want to get into a shooting match with a warlord. It's time to go nuclear.

Grab the rifle off the guard we just slew, and (provided we're in range) overload it in Moore's general direction.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2020, 01:06:08 pm
[17] The warlord hesitates when you reach down to snag up the rifle of his dead guard. He draws out his rifle when you aim down the iron-sights at him with his own guard's gun. His rifle hums to life, spitting out laser pulses that eat through the woodwork above your head.

[18] Moore doesn't get another chance to shoot at you. You reach into the magazine of your newly acquired rifle and pull out all of the energy you find therein, sending it pulsing into the micro-reactor all at once.  With that done, you shift your focus forward as the weapon shudders, quickly creating a barrier between you and the explosion of heat and radiation that lances out of the weapon. The room disappears in a flash of burning light as you unleash a full magazine of energy all at once.

[16] It takes a lot of focus, you realize, to Overload something. But you feel like you did better this time. The calculations (?) were more natural to do, something more than instinct finally taking over.

Nothing is left of the desk, the bank of cameras, or even most of the room. Or of the Warlord Johnny Moore. Fire licks at the wall behind where he once stood and a neat hole punctures the side of the house, letting in the cool breeze. The gunship swings around, lifting closer to the Villa, investigating the massive flare of light and explosion.

Somebody other than a baby is crying in the other room, you realize. The rifle feels heavy in your hands.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 01:38:04 pm
Heyy, we didn't expend as much energy firing off the overload this time! Wonderful.

...and now for the unpleasant part.

Time to go have a look-see at this baby and his mother.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2020, 02:26:39 pm
[10] You swing the door open into the main bedroom of the Villa. A pretty brunette stands there, between you and the bed. There's a shape on the bed that wiggles and squirms as it cries.

[18 vs. 13-1] She fires the Las-pistol haphazardly, and your instinct takes over. The pulse of the laser shreds into her vest, knocking her back. The pistol slips from her lose grasp, and you see bloody steam. She doesn't die, instead stumbling to the floor, half-supported by the mattress.

There's panic in her tear-stained eyes. And hatred. A rueful smile twists your lips in admiration at the defiance. She can't see it, hidden beneath your mesh as it is.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 02:35:29 pm
Aw man, of course she had a las-pistol. Was half hoping we'd get the chance to make a last-minute decision or two, maybe even consider smuggling the mother out somehow... too late now.  :-\

"The child will live. I will ensure it. I'm sorry it had to be this way."
End this, quick and clean. Be respectful about it.

Put the safety on our rifle, shoulder it, grab the child, grab the mother's las-pistol (for an emergency overload) and let's get out of here. Keep our stolen pistol out, in case we run into trouble on our way to the gunship.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 02:39:10 pm
"I have been authorized to spare you both.  Please come with me.  I will ensure that you are not harmed."  Do not shoot the mother.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 02:45:40 pm
"I have been authorized to spare you both.  Please come with me.  I will ensure that you are not harmed."  Do not shoot the mother.

Part of me wants to make this happen, but at this point... what good would it do? I'm pretty sure we just blew a hole through the mother's spine-- she's gonna die anyway; I figure all we can do now is give her a bit of dignity in death.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 02:50:09 pm
The damage to her person isn't clear.  I'd rather not kill an innocent.
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Post by: TamerVirus on March 04, 2020, 02:51:25 pm
Aw man, of course she had a las-pistol. Was half hoping we'd get the chance to make a last-minute decision or two, maybe even consider smuggling the mother out somehow... too late now.  :-\

"The child will live. I will ensure it. I'm sorry it had to be this way."
End this, quick and clean. Be respectful about it.

Put the safety on our rifle, shoulder it, grab the child, grab the mother's las-pistol (for an emergency overload) and let's get out of here. Keep our stolen pistol out, in case we run into trouble on our way to the gunship.

A contract is a contract
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 02:58:04 pm
The damage to her person isn't clear.  I'd rather not kill an innocent.

...I'm listening. Assuming the mother isn't paralyzed from the neck down right now, what would you have us do with her? If we're gonna try and save her somehow, we need a clear plan as to how we're gonna make that happen.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 03:03:09 pm
I think we can simply have her accompany us (or instruct Thornton to provide her with medical aid).  We can attempt to persuade William to spare her, leveraging our connection to Black Nicky, who is his ruler.  Plus, we just decimated a whole paramilitary, so that gives us some intimidation advantage.  Worst case scenario: we kill her in front of him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 04, 2020, 03:04:17 pm
Aw man, of course she had a las-pistol. Was half hoping we'd get the chance to make a last-minute decision or two, maybe even consider smuggling the mother out somehow... too late now.  :-\

"The child will live. I will ensure it. I'm sorry it had to be this way."
End this, quick and clean. Be respectful about it.

Put the safety on our rifle, shoulder it, grab the child, grab the mother's las-pistol (for an emergency overload) and let's get out of here. Keep our stolen pistol out, in case we run into trouble on our way to the gunship.

A contract is a contract
+1
+1, unless a plan for saving both is offered, which I don't have right now
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 05:02:33 pm
Bah, I'd so carefully worked myself up to this moment... ah well. You've brought me to hesitation.

Quickly assess the severity of the mother's injuries. If said injuries look to be fatal, speak our piece and make our kill as planned. If not... if not, I'm gonna have to reconsider.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2020, 05:42:16 pm
There's a two to two draw, by my count. Is that correct? If so character decides.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 05:44:11 pm
Naturegirl's support is dependent on there not being a plan to save them both (according to her post), but because I have proposed such a plan, her support is void.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 05:46:11 pm
I ain't making a move until I get a chance to discern the nature of those injuries we dealt. If we really did shatter this poor woman's back, I'd rather we just end her and have done with it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 05:47:02 pm
Hmm.  I would agree, unless we could restore her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2020, 06:09:48 pm
[5] The prognosis is grim. While the wound didn't penetrate all the way through, it did do considerable damage to her chest. By the way she coughs up blood, and the sucking chest wound...you could save her if you were a trained combat medic. Her lips start to turn blue and she tries to gasp for breath, scrabbling at you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 06:11:26 pm
Place our hands on her, and will her injuries to heal.  If that fails... I'm willing to shoot her.
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Post by: TamerVirus on March 04, 2020, 06:24:37 pm
Just shoot her
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Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 06:31:08 pm
Place our hands on her, and will her injuries to heal.  If that fails... I'm willing to shoot her.

...I'm sufficiently intrigued to give this a shot. +1-- take the pistol first tho, in case she gets her fight back.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 04, 2020, 06:39:34 pm
Place our hands on her, and will her injuries to heal.  If that fails... I'm willing to shoot her.

...I'm sufficiently intrigued to give this a shot. +1-- take the pistol first tho, in case she gets her fight back.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2020, 10:29:40 pm
 :D



[12] You reach out, putting a hand on the dying woman, and try to heal her using whatever the power within you is. For a moment, nothing happens, but your aches and pains flare forth into existence.

[3] They fade as your head pounds painfully-- you collapse to the floor, gasping for breath as your head feels like it's about to rip itself apart. It burns with the worse pain you can imagine. Memories flare like burning embers into existence, but you cannot comprehend them ,and they rapidly overwhelm your senses. Tastes, colors, flashes of images you don't remember seeing...all of them sear the inside of your skull in rapid succession. You don't fade into unconsciousness, but at some point, you realize you're lying on the floor. Stunned. Helpless as you watch the brunette take her last, painful, choking breaths. She dies slowly, and self-loathing stabs at your existence. A noise from the stairs puts your awareness on edge, but you cannot move to escape or defend yourself.

[14] Boots tromp into the room. Someone approaches, but all you can see is the brunette's bloody face. Something digs into the back of your head, and you realize its a las-gun barrel.

"BANG!" William shouts with a laugh, nudging your stunned form over. He pulls your mesh down, looking at the blood that drips from your eyes, your nose, your ears. He wipes what comes away on his gloves on his coat. "What happened to you, Phebe?" He asks, and you must be hallucinating because you can hear the concern in his voice. He 'tuts' and puts a las-gun pulse in the brunette's face in a smooth motion. He pushes her body over and makes his way to the swaddled form of the crying child.

"Don't." You manage, through the pain.

"I gave my word, Phebe. I don't go back on it." William looks down at you, trying to shush the child and calm it down. To your surprise, it gives a little whimper and goes quiet, sucking on its hand. William gives a triumphant smile, swaddling the child up in the blanket, and taking a seat on the bed.

"My crew is finishing up with this place." He announces, "When you're done with your nap, we'll leave."

[15] You are slow to rise, and when you do William nods. "Did you take the Ballistic? I've never seen that happen before."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on March 04, 2020, 10:31:57 pm
No Ballistic...Need food. Lots of food. Hungry...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 10:36:35 pm
"Nope.  I think it's damage from the concussive force of the det-pack.
There's no need to worry, though.  Pain is nothing more than weakness leaving the body, after all."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 04, 2020, 10:37:16 pm
No Ballistic...Need food. Lots of food. Hungry...
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2020, 10:55:02 pm
[19] "I saw a kitchen downstairs." William offers helpfully, offering you a hand and helping you up. The world spins, and you can feel bile rushing up from your stomach. He has to steady you with his pistol hand, looking briefly annoyed. "How close were you to that det-pack?" When you mumble a reply he shakes his head, pushing you on to the bed roughly and heading out the door with a firm. "Stay. I'm not carrying two damn babies in this place."

You, in no condition to fight, say nothing. He returns, sans baby, and helps you to your feet once more, providing support as you navigate the now treacherous staircase. He leads you through a dining room, into a well-furnished, well-stocked kitchen, helping you to settle down at the bar.

"I left the kid with Tommy. Him and his wife are trying for one, so I figure I'd give him some experience." He explains, examining the walk-in fridge with a practiced eye. He still has his pistol out, you notice, and isn't entirely comfortable. He pulls himself out a beer and you out a pre-packaged meal. It's cold, but you devour the food with gusto, and he watches you. He provides another, and another, all in silence as you gorge yourself. The world is still spinning, but the painful ache in your stomach is gone.

"I've only seen two people eat that much," William observes casually, smiling. 'For Polly' glints in the light as he finishes his beer and retrieves another, "Do you want one more?" When you shake your head, a monumental task, you slouch over the bar-top further. He nods, wetting a dish-towel in the sink and tossing it to you. An explosion echoes through the empty halls of the Villa, but William seems unconcerned.

"So, I'm assuming that Moore is dead, considering his room has a hole in it the size of a [cow] where he would be standing." William sips his beer, "And the missus is dead, that's for sure. Anything else to report, Phebe?" [10] You have enough sense left to realize that William is hinting at something here. He skirted the question previously in his own observation, but now it lingers unspoken in the air.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 11:04:19 pm
"Moore mentioned a drug he wanted to distribute.  He said he had supply lines throughout the Holy City.  I also got confirmation from Moore himself that he was behind the attempted kidnapping."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 11:07:40 pm
"Ah yeah..."

"Moore mentioned a drug he wanted to distribute.  He said he had supply lines throughout the Holy City.  I also got confirmation from Moore himself that he was behind the attempted kidnapping."

Say this. Maybe let ourselves slur it a little-- with this headache we've got, clear enunciation isn't gonna help us much.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 04, 2020, 11:09:13 pm
"Ah yeah..."

"Moore mentioned a drug he wanted to distribute.  He said he had supply lines throughout the Holy City.  I also got confirmation from Moore himself that he was behind the attempted kidnapping."

Say this. Maybe let ourselves slur it a little-- with this headache we've got, clear enunciation isn't gonna help us much.
+1, no need to get him even more suspicious
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 11:15:07 pm
I kinda suspect what Thornton's trying to figure out here is how we blew a hole through half the building, by the by... but then, I'm hoping to skirt that particular question for now anyway. This is better.

This headache of ours is real nasty. I'm tempted to try and use a healing surge on ourselves once we've got a spare moment, but seeing as we gave ourselves this headache pulling such shenanigans in the first place... probably best to just sleep it off when we get the chance? We'll see what happens, I guess.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 11:22:02 pm
Hmm... I think it's about Polly's father.  Spill our guts about that.  Emphasize how we refused to harm William.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 04, 2020, 11:25:02 pm
Hmm... I think it's about Polly's father.  Spill our guts about that.  Emphasize how we refused to harm William.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 11:35:47 pm
Hmm... I think it's about Polly's father.

I'm... I'm confused. Where do you get that?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 11:39:41 pm
This passage:

Quote from: update
'For Polly' glints in the light as he finishes his beer and retrieves another,

Plus, that's the greatest way in which we are currently a threat to William.  We know he killed Polly, and we know he almost certainly killed her father, too.  He wouldn't want Emma finding out the truth, as it would contradict his own story.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 04, 2020, 11:45:22 pm
Hm, I assumed that was just flavor text... guy's been showing off that gun ever since he met us, yes?

Didn't occur to me that Billy was the one to slaughter those two-- makes sense in retrospect. (I'm not sure Phoebe knows that, mind-- recall, she rolled a 4 on that perception check!) Regardless, I'd rather not dredge up that particular pair of murders unless Billy gives us a straight question... sounds like trouble we don't need.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2020, 11:49:14 pm
It was mentioned once in the diner scene, in the same update in which we came to realize the tension between Emma and William.  I think it's only been mentioned for thematic reasons.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 05, 2020, 12:14:37 am
Right-- and I'm inclined to believe it's thematic here too.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2020, 12:17:32 am
Specifically, the theme of hostility between the Thornton siblings, so if it's mentioned here, it is likely related.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 05, 2020, 12:32:05 am
...y'know what? Let's just ask.

"Ah yeah..."

"Moore mentioned a drug he wanted to distribute.  He said he had supply lines throughout the Holy City.  I also got confirmation from Moore himself that he was behind the attempted kidnapping."

Say this. Maybe let ourselves slur it a little-- with this headache we've got, clear enunciation isn't gonna help us much.

After the above: "Not sure that's what you want me to tell you right now tho. Not thinking too clear right now. There something particular you're trying to ask me?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2020, 12:40:56 am
...y'know what? Let's just ask.

"Ah yeah..."

"Moore mentioned a drug he wanted to distribute.  He said he had supply lines throughout the Holy City.  I also got confirmation from Moore himself that he was behind the attempted kidnapping."

Say this. Maybe let ourselves slur it a little-- with this headache we've got, clear enunciation isn't gonna help us much.

After the above: "Not sure that's what you want me to tell you right now tho. Not thinking too clear right now. There something particular you're trying to ask me?"

Alright, that seems fair.  +1.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 05, 2020, 12:54:37 am
Fun fact, in an alternate timeline he rolled a nat 20 and you rolled a 2-1.



[16]"That was our Ballistic." William laughs, scratching at his scruffy chin with the lip of the bottle, "He got the recipe from one of our scientists." He ticks his head out the door, "We leveled the lab, though. My only concern is if he sent the recipe to whatever businessmen he called his friends."

He laughs, "We also have those routes into the City. It's not hard to find a smuggler. It's funny how he tried to negotiate with that, though." He ignores you confirming that it was Moore who organized the kidnapping, not commenting, besides for a brief sour look that crosses his fair features. He's all smiles, seemingly satisfied with the day's events-- until you speak again, slurring together a disorganized sentence.

[15]"Well, there's the little issue of a huge freakin' hole in the wall of the upstairs office. You obviously used the det-pack on the cannon, so I'm just wondering how you did that. Not to mention you put away enough food for about three people just now...you ain't got a scratch on you, besides for y'know, the mystery blood leaking from every orifice of your face." William shrugs his shoulders, leaning forward on the bartop and setting his pistol down, "I'm a curious guy. Like to investigate curious circumstances. Currently, that's you." He lifts a hand, waving it away, "I think I have an idea, but I'd like to hear it from you before jumping to conclusions."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2020, 12:56:05 am
I... really overthought that.  I'm glad we asked.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 05, 2020, 01:13:10 am
Yeah, nice to put off that ugly talk for later. For now, we need to figure out how to satisfy Billy's curiosity without giving him the whole truth... lying about this probably wouldn't go so well. We saw what happened when we tried that with Mother Nicole.

Smirk a little. "Yeah, that's what I thought..."

"If you must know, I got one of their weapons to blow its reactor. Turns out those things have a lot of power in 'em, if you can bypass whatever makes them shoot off neat little las-bolts... stupid dangerous thing to try. Real pretty lights tho."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 05, 2020, 01:21:22 am
[2]"Can you show me?" Are the first words out of William's mouth. He's staring expectantly at you, "We've got a few buildings still standing for you to use as target practice." A smile curves his lips, "New tricks are always useful. Explain it to me? That'll work too."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 05, 2020, 02:00:00 am
That's... about the worst thing that coulda come out of Billy's mouth just now. Low roll.  :-X
If somebody has some weasel words to get outta this, great... otherwise, I'm just gonna come clean 'cos I don't really see any other options right now.

...Vague. Clean and vague.

"...I'll be honest with you, I don't know how I do it. I just know it makes my head hurt when I think about it too much. I'd show you, but what with the blood coming out my eyes frankly I'm kinda worried I'd kill myself if I tried right now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2020, 02:26:13 am
That's... about the worst thing that coulda come out of Billy's mouth just now. Low roll.  :-X
If somebody has some weasel words to get outta this, great... otherwise, I'm just gonna come clean 'cos I don't really see any other options right now.

...Vague. Clean and vague.

"...I'll be honest with you, I don't know how I do it. I just know it makes my head hurt when I think about it too much. I'd show you, but what with the blood coming out my eyes frankly I'm kinda worried I'd kill myself if I tried right now."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 05, 2020, 02:44:05 am
[-]"Pheobe! You've got to start trusting me more! I'm not a bad guy." He pulls two beers from the fridge, popping them open and handing you one. "You know my secret, and hell, I think I just figured out your's."

With a draw from his drink, he smiles at you over the top of it, a predatory grin that's equal parts triumph and giddy glee.

[15] William ignores you, but he begins to explain, never once directly stating the obvious, giving you room on purpose. "Have you ever heard of the Barons of Steel? Now, imagine this. Nine-foot tall men of metal, slaughtering everything in their path with burning hot las-fire. Wielding guns bigger than me."

"You kill one, through concentrated fire, and pop open its shell-- in it is a person. Well, more like a torso, hooked up to all kinds of machines in this shell. But, not a [demon], not some amorphous rending, tearing abomination. A man. Well, you ask yourself, how did this person get like this?"

He slips something from his pocket, setting it on the table, haphazardly wobbling it as he speaks. Its an auto-injector with a red thorn on the cheap plastic. "And you ask yourself, how do I become this? A monster with no pain, no feeling, no mercy. Just pure aggression and strength?"

"Now, what secrets could we learn from another [demon]? A willing participant, no less! Food for thought, right?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2020, 03:02:53 am
This guy is bad news...

"An interesting proposal, but a metal shell like that would limit the
versatility of the combatant.  Furthermore, pure aggression and strength, to the exclusion of all other qualities, even further limit the soldier's capabilities.  That really only makes sense for cannon-fodder with limited skills."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 05, 2020, 03:04:53 am
Somebody explain to me: what's this secret of Billy's we supposedly know? The business with Pollyanna?

Anyway, we're hurt. We're feeling kinda horrible about ourself. Now this guy wants to harness the worst of us to do something horrible. The time has come for sharp words.



"I will not be made a monster, Billy Thornton. Do not try to use me like one."

"Let me make one thing clear: everything I did for you tonight? Protection for a friend. Protection for myself. Nothing more. I want no part of the devastation you seem to have in mind."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2020, 03:23:07 am
I doubt this guy cares overly much about our feelings and desires.  He's insane.  My thought is that it is better to be coldly practical with him, try to convince him that letting us go and not experimenting on us is in his best interest.

The secret is that he killed Polly, his girlfriend and Emma's best friend.  He also killed Polly's father after the latter tried to personally seek vengeance against him.  William told Emma, however, that Polly was killed by someone else and he also told her that Polly's father died in an unrelated house fire.  He probably wouldn't want us to tell Emma what really happened.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 05, 2020, 03:27:58 am
[9] "You're right!" William beams at you, "Now, imagine losing the shell, keeping the enhanced reflexes and strength? Could you imagine say, a teenage girl, carrying the same weight that slows down a trained soldier, with ease? Hopping around the battlefield, able to infiltrate and lead in the destruction of say, a Family compound? You could send her to the Holy City with a rifle and the entire place could be destroyed in a week!"

He goes silent when you deliver your sharp rebuttal, the smile falling from his face. For a moment, he imitates a pet that's just been kicked, all pouts and small frowns.

"I never said anything of the sort, Pheobe, and it hurts me that you think I would do something like -that- to you. 'All a human wants to do is learn'," A wicked smile curves his lips, as he quotes SEED scripture to you, "Call it future protection for when the [demons] come back. I'm sure you haven't heard the rumors, but dark things are stirring in the west, Phebe. Outlander villages vanishing overnight, [insects] never seen before, with hard metal shells and ripping teeth."

[-]He hesitates, venturing then with trepidation, "How would you like to meet my father, Pheobe? You still have a few days of vacation. I'm sure he'd love to see Emma again, and her..." William pauses, searching for the word, teasing in an overly familiar way, "Friend? Lover? Sister?"

Then, much more somberly, "I'm not threatening you, or my baby sister, by the way, before you think badly of me. I love Emma, and I'd put a pulse in the old man's head before he touched a hair on her's."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 05, 2020, 03:43:54 am
The secret is that he killed Polly, his girlfriend and Emma's best friend.  He also killed Polly's father after the latter tried to personally seek vengeance against him.  William told Emma, however, that Polly was killed by someone else and he also told her that Polly's father died in an unrelated house fire.  He probably wouldn't want us to tell Emma what really happened.

Right, just making sure I didn't miss something. Thank you.



"I'm not threatening you, or my baby sister, by the way, before you think badly of me. I love Emma, and I'd put a pulse in the old man's head before he touched a hair on her's."

"...I believe that much, at least."

"I'll consider this visit of yours. For now, I need rest. You keep my secret, and I'll keep yours."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2020, 03:55:25 am
The secret is that he killed Polly, his girlfriend and Emma's best friend.  He also killed Polly's father after the latter tried to personally seek vengeance against him.  William told Emma, however, that Polly was killed by someone else and he also told her that Polly's father died in an unrelated house fire.  He probably wouldn't want us to tell Emma what really happened.

Right, just making sure I didn't miss something. Thank you.



"I'm not threatening you, or my baby sister, by the way, before you think badly of me. I love Emma, and I'd put a pulse in the old man's head before he touched a hair on her's."

"...I believe that much, at least."

"I'll consider this visit of yours. For now, I need rest. You keep my secret, and I'll keep yours."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 05, 2020, 06:50:46 am
The secret is that he killed Polly, his girlfriend and Emma's best friend.  He also killed Polly's father after the latter tried to personally seek vengeance against him.  William told Emma, however, that Polly was killed by someone else and he also told her that Polly's father died in an unrelated house fire.  He probably wouldn't want us to tell Emma what really happened.

Right, just making sure I didn't miss something. Thank you.



"I'm not threatening you, or my baby sister, by the way, before you think badly of me. I love Emma, and I'd put a pulse in the old man's head before he touched a hair on her's."

"...I believe that much, at least."

"I'll consider this visit of yours. For now, I need rest. You keep my secret, and I'll keep yours."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 05, 2020, 10:12:07 am
The secret is that he killed Polly, his girlfriend and Emma's best friend.  He also killed Polly's father after the latter tried to personally seek vengeance against him.  William told Emma, however, that Polly was killed by someone else and he also told her that Polly's father died in an unrelated house fire.  He probably wouldn't want us to tell Emma what really happened.

Right, just making sure I didn't miss something. Thank you.



"I'm not threatening you, or my baby sister, by the way, before you think badly of me. I love Emma, and I'd put a pulse in the old man's head before he touched a hair on her's."

"...I believe that much, at least."

"I'll consider this visit of yours. For now, I need rest. You keep my secret, and I'll keep yours."

+1
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 05, 2020, 01:17:27 pm
William nods, sipping his drink. He rises to his feet and offers you his hand. "Let's get to the ship; I'll drop you off closer to the Academy."



The dropship ride is short and sweet, the only thing interrupting the silence is the idle chit-chat of the squad, relaxed and at peace, and the occasional cries of the baby. The soldiers good-naturedly pass the child around, and there's a lot of jokes at Gem's expense when the baby falls asleep, tucked up against the hard plates of her vest.

William keeps his word, dropping you off fairly close to the Academy. The walk there still takes too long for your spinning head. A man in a great-coat waits at the gate, and you realize its Brother Hop in Crusader Scout armor.

"Late night parties with gentlemen suitors are the last thing I would expect you to be doing, Child Gainer. Pass me your gun and vest; I'll put them away somewhere for you." You obey, and William takes his leave with a nod.

"Say goodbye to Emma for me, will you? I've caused her enough stress, and I don't want to go waking her up at midnight to say goodbye."

Brother Hop leaves you to stagger into the dormitory alone. Once there, you find Emma curled up at the dining room table, sleeping. You nudge her awake. When she finally rouses herself, you can tell she's relieved to see you in one piece. You murmur an excuse, leaving her in the dining room and collapse into your bed.

[17] You sleep soundly, no dreams interrupting your slumber.

You awake in the middle of the third day with a pounding headache from last night.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2020, 05:47:00 pm
I'm not sure what would be the best use of our time, but I thought it might be pleasant to spend some time bonding with Emma and try to figure out how she feels about us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 05, 2020, 06:03:41 pm
I'm not sure what would be the best use of our time, but I thought it might be pleasant to spend some time bonding with Emma and try to figure out how she feels about us.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 05, 2020, 09:58:43 pm
I'm not sure what would be the best use of our time, but I thought it might be pleasant to spend some time bonding with Emma and try to figure out how she feels about us.
+1

Absolutely worthwhile. +1

Make sure to mention Billy said goodbye last night, if we haven't already.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 05, 2020, 10:56:20 pm
After last night, you entertain the notion of feeling directionless, of just laying in bed and doing nothing for the whole day. It lasts all of ten minutes, before the grumble of your stomach rouses you to rummage through the communal kitchen. You re-heat some leftover grain-meal as your silent, lonely lunch. You don't really want to find Emma, despite something urging you to, not right now at least. She isn't in the dormitory, so that gives you a great excuse to avoid this awkwardness for the time being.

Instead, your body protests your laziness, and you give in to its demands. You head towards the exercise section of the compound, taking in the cold noon-day air. You shed your coat and your mesh, pausing to stretch yourself out. Then you start jogging around the track. It isn't long before you're sprinting, pushing yourself harder and harder until your lungs burn and your legs ache. Next is the obstacle course, then another lap, then push-ups, until even your endurance begins to flag. You take heaving, ragged breaths, sweat dripping from your forehead as you rest against the concrete wall.

[11] Emma is the one to find you, in the end. She looks surprised when she notices you panting for breath, remarking with a wry smile, "I don't think I've actually seen you sweat before."

"It does happen, every now and then." You reply, evenly, giving a smile, "William said goodbye, by the way."

Emma nods, awkwardly. You sit silently, trying to figure out how to broach the subject with her.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2020, 11:34:42 pm
Uh...  Maybe...

"I wanted to apologize to you for the raid last night.  I know you didn't want me to go, but I was afraid that if I didn't act, they would try to hurt you again or hurt your family.  I couldn't risk that."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 06, 2020, 03:34:04 am
[1]"I understand." Emma doesn't seem swayed by your apology, but doesn't press anything. She smiles at you, after a beat, offering a hand to help you up, "Want to go get some dinner, somewhere? The festival in town is open again, and the Crusaders are patrolling a bit more heavily than before."

You, always game for free food, agree, heading out past the gates. You notice Emma is openly wearing her 'new' las-pistol now, right on her hip. It prompts an uncomfortable realization about her mental state; an increase in paranoia and fear. The town, while quieter than it was on the first day of the 'festival', is quite lively. Students are out in full force, taking in the night's food and drink. They huddle together in groups, tightly-knit but welcoming. The vendors themselves offer you great deals, especially Emma. A practiced, false smile curls her lips as she declines gift after gift. She lets you pick the restaurant, but, before she does, she pulls you aside to murmur something quietly.

"Hey, just remember that...sometimes killing isn't always the answer? Please?" She offers, haltingly. There's an accusation in there, you feel, but brush it off, simply nodding in return.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 06, 2020, 03:38:57 am
My vote is for the Smiling Bird Bakery.  We wouldn't be able to hear her at The Rising Glass, and I'd rather avoid the food poisoning at Peterson's Butchery.  Plus, with fewer people, it'll be easier to be wary of any potential attackers.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 06, 2020, 04:23:36 am
My vote is for the Smiling Bird Bakery.  We wouldn't be able to hear her at The Rising Glass, and I'd rather avoid the food poisoning at Peterson's Butchery.  Plus, with fewer people, it'll be easier to be wary of any potential attackers.

+1

Little strange to eat breakfast for dinner, but very convenient!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 06, 2020, 06:26:03 am
My vote is for the Smiling Bird Bakery.  We wouldn't be able to hear her at The Rising Glass, and I'd rather avoid the food poisoning at Peterson's Butchery.  Plus, with fewer people, it'll be easier to be wary of any potential attackers.

+1

Little strange to eat breakfast for dinner, but very convenient!
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 06, 2020, 06:31:05 am
My vote is for the Smiling Bird Bakery.  We wouldn't be able to hear her at The Rising Glass, and I'd rather avoid the food poisoning at Peterson's Butchery.  Plus, with fewer people, it'll be easier to be wary of any potential attackers.

+1

Little strange to eat breakfast for dinner, but very convenient!
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 06, 2020, 01:28:06 pm
The bakery does indeed have fewer customers loitering within its walls. For the most part, the mood is sedate, a calm stream of workers purchasing bread for their nightly meal. Emma and you claim a seat right beside the warm fireplace, taking in the heat radiating out from it in comfortable silence. A younger man breaks away from the back, dusting the flour from his hands and approaching your table with a list of local bread and pastries.

You both start with tea, looking over the menu while the young man bustles behind the counter to prepare your drinks. Several options have been crossed out as time as gone on, but it still leaves you with a wide selection.

Code: [Select]
[croissants]
[apple]/[fig] [strudels]
[fig] [strudel]
[apple] [strude]
[Beef] and potato meat pies
Deep-fried dough crisps
Cheese and potato pie

[Apple] cake
[Blackberry] wine iced [vanilla] cake

[Oat] Bread
[Potato] Bread
[Apple] Bread
[White Wheat] Bread
[Black Wheat] Bread

Emma sets down her menu, ordering the beef and potato meat pie, and the young server turns to you, flashing a smile your way as he waits patiently. After your order, he heads back into the kitchen to prepare it. Emma asks, idly, "So, have you given any thought to what posting you're going to try and do after the Academy?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 06, 2020, 03:35:06 pm
"Might join the crusaders. Might just take up a scholar's quill and live out my days peaceful-like. A peaceable life sounds nice right about now."

"How about you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 06, 2020, 04:38:09 pm
"Might join the crusaders. Might just take up a scholar's quill and live out my days peaceful-like. A peaceable life sounds nice right about now."

"How about you?"

+1

Order the [Blackberry] wine iced [vanilla] cake.  That sounds amazing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 06, 2020, 04:56:06 pm
"Might join the crusaders. Might just take up a scholar's quill and live out my days peaceful-like. A peaceable life sounds nice right about now."

"How about you?"

+1

Order the [Blackberry] wine iced [vanilla] cake.  That sounds amazing.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 06, 2020, 10:51:37 pm
The young baker glances between the two of you, before dipping a respectful nod. He returns with your order a short time later. For Emma, he sets down a steaming hot pastry, dripping with gravy. Beneath the creamy brown jus is a fluffy crust that shines gold, dotted with a few dark spots where it was heated unevenly.

For you, he sets down a cake-stand, with an entire cake on it. It's only iced on the top, with a slightly melty, purple buttercream. Drizzles of what you assume are the wine, or a reduction of it, top that, along with preserved [blackberries]. The cake, aside from that, is crumbly and delicious, heated only a little. It tastes fresh, and sweet, with the preserved blackberries adding a sour finish to the experience.

Emma looks surprised, brow furrowing. "You'd consider being a Scholar?" You give her a significant glance, and she backtracks hastily, "I'm sorry, it's just...you're so good at…"

She gestures awkwardly, finishing lamely, "I don't know. My family wants me to get involved with Medicine while I'm with the Scholars. But they can't pull me out if I pick something else."

"A lot of people think you'll go Crusader. A lot of our friends say they would serve with you, if you went that way. They wanted me to find out this week." Emma admits, changing the subject. She almost seems excited, smiling across the table and taking another forkful of pastry. "Would you really be interested in being a Scholar?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 06, 2020, 11:20:16 pm
"It's like you said, killing isn't always the answer.  Too much death can take a toll.  Restraint is often a better path, and I do happen to be interested in theological matters as they relate to the holy SEED... and demons.  I haven't made up my mind, however, so either are still possibilities."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 06, 2020, 11:27:38 pm
"It's like you said, killing isn't always the answer.  Restraint is often a better path, and I do happen to be interested in theological matters as they relate to the holy SEED... and demons.  I haven't made up my mind, however, so either are still possibilities."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 07, 2020, 12:05:38 am
[17] Emma seems to relax at your response, some of the tension curling her frame fading. There's a brief flicker of something uncertain as she reaches over to pick at your cake. You, meanwhile, are on your second slice, and eyeing a third. "I didn't...really mean it like that, by the way. I hope I didn't offend you, earlier. The night before last was really scary...and you were the scariest part." She pauses, looking down at her plate, "I mean, your back-- it looked awful. I could see bone, but you kept fighting."

[19] "I think you'd be amazing at whatever you did." She offers, after a beat, smiling at you. "What um...interests you about [demons]? I noticed you were reading about them earlier."

[4][18] She pauses unexpectedly, staring across at you with sudden intent, a strange expression on her face. You've known Emma for a year, and you know that expression; its stunned disbelief mixed with a healthy dose of fear. Her fork freezes midway to her mouth, and she has to think about eating.

[6] "Do-- are you...?" Is all she can muster.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 12:10:24 am
Not sure if we should be evasive or truthful...  Here's a possibility for being evasive:

"Whether as a Crusader or a Scholar, my duties will include seeing to our greatest foes, the demons, should they ever return.  We can't defeat our enemies if we are ignorant of them, so learning more about them is a natural choice, if that answers your question."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 07, 2020, 12:33:22 am
[14] There's a moment of hesitation from Emma, and she dips a nod, smiling across at you. "I didn't know you were so faithful, Pheobe." She smirks, taking another bite of her food, "I guess it comes from your Grandmother, right? How is she? I've heard a lot about her from others, but never from you. And you never talk about your parents..."

"What are they like?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 12:39:36 am
I'm not convinced that lying is the best path forward, but if we did want to lie, here's a possibility:

"I don't remember.  They left when I was very young.  My grandmother is really the only family I have, but perhaps my parents are alive and still out there, somewhere.  As you would expect from such a controversial Crusader, she wasn't always as kind and understanding as she could have been."

"What are your parents like?  I don't think we've really ever discussed that."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 07, 2020, 12:56:19 am
I'm not convinced that lying is the best path forward, but if we did want to lie, here's a possibility:

"I don't remember.  They left when I was very young.  My grandmother is really the only family I have, but perhaps my parents are alive and still out there, somewhere.  As you would expect from such a controversial Crusader, she wasn't always as kind and understanding as she could have been."

"What are your parents like?  I don't think we've really ever discussed that."

im not sure this is a lie, since we really don’t remember how we were born. For all we know, demons reproduce via budding. The truth would be that we don’t remember our parents because we fell from the sky. That would raise more questions. +1 to the response, btw
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 07, 2020, 01:07:19 am
...


[20]"Ah, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to..." She trails off, picking at the edge of her pastry with a fork, brushing aside a burnt end, "I was raised by my brother and the house servants, really. I never knew my mother, and my father was always distant...he's...really ill, I guess you could say, but he has no one to blame for it besides himself."

"He's the one who made William like that. I got tutoring in how to hold myself and speak and all this stuff, and William got put into combat training when he was just a little kid."

"I guess you and him are similar that way, huh? Nicole must have put you through hell."

When you ask about her father's illness, she hesitates, looking across at you, "You're already mixed up in my family. He...he tried to take parts from a [demon] he found and attach them to himself. It...it didn't go right. He has to constantly take antibiotics and stay in a sterilized room. He gets sick a lot. I guess that's why he wants me to train in Medicine. I'm surprised he isn't dead yet, to be honest."

Wrly, she continues, "Too much to hope for, I guess."

"Hey, if its uh...possible, do you think we could try to go for the same posting?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 01:15:25 am
"I'd like that.  Do you have any ideas about where you'd like to serve?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 07, 2020, 01:17:27 am
...


[20]"Ah, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to..." She trails off, picking at the edge of her pastry with a fork, brushing aside a burnt end, "I was raised by my brother and the house servants, really. I never knew my mother, and my father was always distant...he's...really ill, I guess you could say, but he has no one to blame for it besides himself."

"He's the one who made William like that. I got tutoring in how to hold myself and speak and all this stuff, and William got put into combat training when he was just a little kid."

"I guess you and him are similar that way, huh? Nicole must have put you through hell."

When you ask about her father's illness, she hesitates, looking across at you, "You're already mixed up in my family. He...he tried to take parts from a [demon] he found and attach them to himself. It...it didn't go right. He has to constantly take antibiotics and stay in a sterilized room. He gets sick a lot. I guess that's why he wants me to train in Medicine. I'm surprised he isn't dead yet, to be honest."

Wrly, she continues, "Too much to hope for, I guess."

"Hey, if its uh...possible, do you think we could try to go for the same posting?"
”yes, that would be good” ((posting like sentry duty?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 01:26:25 am
((I think more like where we would be working when we graduate.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 07, 2020, 01:37:03 am
Your fixed-term job for the Scholars after you finish with the Academy. Crusaders are usually assigned to a platoon or squad, nowadays mostly guarding, with occasional forays against Outlanders or uppity warlords. Scholars are assigned to a library, a research lab, or even the Holy City.


Emma beams at you from across the table, happiness and relief all playing out across her features. She looks taken aback when you ask where she might want to go, "I...don't really know."

[15]"I was hoping to pick after you, so at least I'll have some idea of what you were going to do and could pick some place close." Emma looks embarrassed here, flushing a little. "I was preparing myself to become a communication operator or something for you, since I was sure you were going to become a Crusader. I guess I can relax a bit, since you're not so sure either."

"Hey, what's with you and Brother Hop? He seems really uh...interested in you? Did he know your parents?" She pauses, fishing for information, "You do go to his room a lot. And then there's that early morning training you two do."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 01:43:48 am
"He's a close friend of my grandmother's.  Nicole asked him to give me additional intensive training, and, sadly, he definitely takes that seriously.  I wouldn't say that he's a friend, because I always feel like I have to be wary around him, and I know that he reports my progress to my grandmother."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 07, 2020, 02:03:51 am
"That sounds awful." Emma takes a sip of tea, offering, "I"m just glad my dad doesn't have pull like that with the Scholars. I think I'd go insane."

The rest of your meal passes with idle chitchat about classes and scores, or about what your friends did, or what they're going to do. You manage to polish off most of the cake, with Emma watching with an amused smile. The baker returns, brushing off his hands and standing almost at attention in front of Emma and your table.

"Was everything good?" He asks, politely, and you both agree it was delicious and very well made. He gives a genuine smile, murmuring about how he made the cake.

"So, what do  I owe you?" Emma asks, with a charming smile.

"Nothing for you, Miss Thornton." The baker is quick to reply, glancing to you warily.

Emma's smile fades, and she repeats herself, letting her annoyance show. The baker stutters, providing a reasonable price. Emma pays extra, handing him a wad of bills she pulls from her cloak.

"T-thank you Miss Thornton."

Emma gives another smile and rises to her feet. You follow, giving the baker an easy smile.

"I hate that!" Emma vents to you as soon as you leave the bakery, stepping into the cold night air. Snow has started to fall on the town, but, you note with comfort, there's a patrol of Crusaders making their way down the street. Your fellow students are still on the streets, some drunk, some sober. "Everyone did that back home, too! I don't need free things, and they're attempt at respect just makes me upset."

"Now I have to deal with this here!" She pouts, brushing some crumbs from her robe and straightening it out. "Want to go get a drink or something, Pheobe?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 02:07:48 am
"Sure, sounds good."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 07, 2020, 02:24:16 am
"Sure, sounds good."
+1

((Not a suggestion, just thoughts: When are we going to tell her? The reason I didn’t mention our origin is because of the lie we told about not being a demon. I feel like the longer we wait to tell her, the worse it will be when she finds out, maybe we can tell her when we are alone, that way if she asks why we lied ad the bakery, we can tell her that it was because we didn’t want others to know))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 02:26:43 am
((In retrospect, I do agree that perhaps we should have been truthful about that.  Now we are entangled in lies.  However, the more people that know the truth, the greater the danger is to our existence.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 07, 2020, 02:30:56 am
((We might be able to ask her something like “if we were a demon, would you still be my friend?” Not a suggestion yet, I would like to hear your thoughts. Had I been here in time I would have suggested to tell her the truth))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 02:33:57 am
((The problem in my opinion with that is, combined with her previous suspicion, she would probably come to the conclusion that we are a demon if we asked that.  Maybe we could try to get that info from her in a more indirect way?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 07, 2020, 02:36:57 am
((The problem in my opinion with that is, combined with her previous suspicion, she would probably come to the conclusion that we are a demon if we asked that.  Maybe we could try to get that info from her in a more indirect way?))
((probably better. We need to think of an indirect way to glean the information. In real life I tend to be direct, so thinking of indirect ways of getting information is difficult, but I might have done so IRL at some point, not sure. If I have, I can apply a similar thought process))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 07, 2020, 03:41:52 am
Emma leads you to the first bar she notices, confidently striding in with you in tow. A few students are clustered around the bar, and there's a number of locals irregularly distributed across the remaining tables. A few glance at you, then at Emma, eyeing your hair, of all things. A few leave, at that, dipping respectful nods to the two of while hurrying away. McGee is the only student that greets the two of you, the others aren't your friends, and so only glance your way before resuming their conversation.

Emma takes one look at the students at the bar and instead claims a table nearby. Mcgee breaks away to greet you and exchange pleasantries, before returning to the other group with a small wink given your way. Emma flushes, but doesn't say anything, ordering a bottle of wine for herself. You, actually at ease despite the apparent nervousness of the locals, buy a bottle of cheap liquor to sip on.

"Rumor mills work fast, huh?" She offers, apologetically, a small smile gracing her lips. "Sorry about...all this. And for dragging you into Family business."

[5][2]"My best friend is safe, that's all that matters to me." You reply, giving her a smile. She returns it, and the two of you lapse into what you feel like is a comfortable silence, drinking your drinks. You start crowd-watching, having picked a seat perfect for watching the door and window. Locals come and go, talking, laughing, commiserating. The drinks flow from the bar, bottles, and cups being passed down and around. McGee gets in a fight with another boy, and before you can lift yourself up, he throws the other young man to the ground. The other student scurries off, and McGee celebrates with a chugged beer, laughing.

You note with pride that its a move you taught him during physical training. Shifting to one side, grabbing the enemy and letting their momentum be their own undoing.

"Do you like fighting?" Emma asks. "I never did. I always used to avoid conflict, when I was younger...but then no one really messes with my Family and lives, so maybe that was to save other people's health more than my own. I'm generous like that." She does her best haughty voice, brushing some hair over her shoulder in an exaggerated manner.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 03:48:41 am
((Ouch.  Shut down.))

"I see it as more of a necessary evil, something to be avoided whenever possible.  Violence is distasteful, but sometimes it's the only way to stay safe."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 07, 2020, 05:28:38 am
((Ouch.  Shut down.))

"I see it as more of a necessary evil, something to be avoided whenever possible.  Violence is distasteful, but sometimes it's the only way to stay safe."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 07, 2020, 10:17:04 am
[17] But you do enjoy it, you protest to yourself, gently. When your adrenaline is pumping and the only thing between you and death is your reflexes and wit, that's when you truly feel alive. You have a purpose in those moments. It feels wrong to lie about such a fundamental part of yourself...especially when it has nothing to do with your continued survival. "I see it as more of a necessary evil, something to be avoided whenever possible.  Violence is distasteful, but sometimes it's the only way to stay safe."

You sigh, admitting, "But sometimes I do enjoy it. That probably makes me sick, somehow."

Emma blinks, giving a small nod and sipping from her wine politely. She doesn't seem surprised or upset by your answer. The two of you lapse into another silence, watching the other group of students. "I don't think so." She finally offers, before turning back towards you, leaning on the table and asking, "What do you think the purpose of life is?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 07, 2020, 01:42:09 pm
"Honestly? I'm not sure yet. SEED has its plans, I'm sure... but for now, it seems everyone's just muddling along while they wait for the next [demon] to fall."

Smile. "It's nice to have a friend around for the muddling, at least. Maybe there's some purpose in that."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 07, 2020, 01:56:47 pm
"Honestly? I'm not sure yet. SEED has its plans, I'm sure... but for now, it seems everyone's just muddling along while they wait for the next [demon] to fall."

Smile. "It's nice to have a friend around for the muddling, at least. Maybe there's some purpose in that."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 07, 2020, 02:05:58 pm
[13]"I hope it doesn't happen in our lifetimes." Emma murmurs, lifting a toast, "To the future generations that have to fight."

You toast to that, draining half the bottle in a hard burning swallow. Emma lifts an eyebrow, giggling.

"I don't know how you can drink that much and not be drunk."

"Drugs just don't seem to effect me that much." You offer with a half-shrug.

"You could out drink William, I think."

You and Emma both finish your bottles at roughly the same time, and seem to both be just as drunk. You're not quite slurring, but you have a very pleasant buzz, and you find yourself focusing on Emma's robe for some odd reason.

"We should go." Emma rises, tossing bills on the table. You follow suit, paying for your drink and heading out the door. Emma leans against you heavily.

You don't think she needs to, judging by her steady gait.

It isn't until you're outside of town that she asks, softly, "Pheobe? What am I to you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 07, 2020, 02:22:10 pm
[13]"I hope it doesn't happen in our lifetimes." Emma murmurs, lifting a toast, "To the future generations that have to fight."

You toast to that, draining half the bottle in a hard burning swallow. Emma lifts an eyebrow, giggling.

"I don't know how you can drink that much and not be drunk."

"Drugs just don't seem to effect me that much." You offer with a half-shrug.

"You could out drink William, I think."

You and Emma both finish your bottles at roughly the same time, and seem to both be just as drunk. You're not quite slurring, but you have a very pleasant buzz, and you find yourself focusing on Emma's robe for some odd reason.

"We should go." Emma rises, tossing bills on the table. You follow suit, paying for your drink and heading out the door. Emma leans against you heavily.

You don't think she needs to, judging by her steady gait.

It isn't until you're outside of town that she asks, softly, "Pheobe? What am I to you?"
”you’re my best friend. Why do you ask?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 07, 2020, 02:24:36 pm
"...Kin."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on March 07, 2020, 02:27:08 pm
Give her a hug
You're someone special...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 07, 2020, 02:27:43 pm
"...Kin."
this is better than mine, +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 02:48:00 pm
((I'd rather not crush her hopes again.))

Give her a hug
You're someone special...
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 07, 2020, 03:20:58 pm
((I'd rather not crush her hopes again.))

When did we...?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 03:26:51 pm
((She has developed feelings for us.))

"Now. I'm not a killer by choice, Mr. Thornton, and I'm not one to seek vengeance-- I've only ever fought to protect myself and my own. Last night, I fought to protect a friend." You tick your head to Emma as you speak. She looks a little deflated at that but smiles at you anyway.
Emma leads you to the first bar she notices, confidently striding in with you in tow. A few students are clustered around the bar, and there's a number of locals irregularly distributed across the remaining tables. A few glance at you, then at Emma, eyeing your hair, of all things. A few leave, at that, dipping respectful nods to the two of while hurrying away. McGee is the only student that greets the two of you, the others aren't your friends, and so only glance your way before resuming their conversation.

Emma takes one look at the students at the bar and instead claims a table nearby. Mcgee breaks away to greet you and exchange pleasantries, before returning to the other group with a small wink given your way. Emma flushes, but doesn't say anything, ordering a bottle of wine for herself. You, actually at ease despite the apparent nervousness of the locals, buy a bottle of cheap liquor to sip on.

"Rumor mills work fast, huh?" She offers, apologetically, a small smile gracing her lips. "Sorry about...all this. And for dragging you into Family business."

[5][2]"My best friend is safe, that's all that matters to me." You reply, giving her a smile. She returns it, and the two of you lapse into what you feel like is a comfortable silence, drinking your drinks.  You start crowd-watching, having picked a seat perfect for watching the door and window. Locals come and go, talking, laughing, commiserating. The drinks flow from the bar, bottles, and cups being passed down and around. McGee gets in a fight with another boy, and before you can lift yourself up, he throws the other young man to the ground. The other student scurries off, and McGee celebrates with a chugged beer, laughing.

You note with pride that its a move you taught him during physical training. Shifting to one side, grabbing the enemy and letting their momentum be their own undoing.

"Do you like fighting?" Emma asks. "I never did. I always used to avoid conflict, when I was younger...but then no one really messes with my Family and lives, so maybe that was to save other people's health more than my own. I'm generous like that." She does her best haughty voice, brushing some hair over her shoulder in an exaggerated manner.

Also, note the (?) In the status for our relationship wit her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 07, 2020, 03:39:30 pm
Give her a hug
You're someone special...
+1
+1
@ZBridges
I didn’t notice Emma had feelings for Phoebe, I didn’t see those as cues
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 03:41:48 pm
[13]"I hope it doesn't happen in our lifetimes." Emma murmurs, lifting a toast, "To the future generations that have to fight."

You toast to that, draining half the bottle in a hard burning swallow. Emma lifts an eyebrow, giggling.

"I don't know how you can drink that much and not be drunk."

"Drugs just don't seem to effect me that much." You offer with a half-shrug.

"You could out drink William, I think."

You and Emma both finish your bottles at roughly the same time, and seem to both be just as drunk. You're not quite slurring, but you have a very pleasant buzz, and you find yourself focusing on Emma's robe for some odd reason.

"We should go." Emma rises, tossing bills on the table. You follow suit, paying for your drink and heading out the door. Emma leans against you heavily.

You don't think she needs to, judging by her steady gait.


It isn't until you're outside of town that she asks, softly, "Pheobe? What am I to you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 07, 2020, 03:43:36 pm
Yeah, I figured that out (or at least suspected) awhile back... never connected it to the "(?)" tho. Makes sense in retrospect.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 07, 2020, 06:27:14 pm
The current action of choice seems a little vague, what is the intent?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 07, 2020, 06:28:47 pm
My vote is for the intent to show that we reciprocate her feelings. 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: VoidSlayer on March 07, 2020, 11:03:10 pm
You are one of my best friends, and I really value that connection.  I am *very* open to exploring other possibilities though...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 08, 2020, 12:12:10 am
"You're someone special...You're one of my best friends, and I really value that connection.  I am -very- open to exploring other possibilities though..." You trail off, hugging Emma close, she stares in disbelief, then kisses you. You return it. Your first kiss is like many first kisses, awkward and short. Emma giggles, leaning against you as you two continue to walk.

"McGee and James are going to be soo mad." She brags to you good-naturedly, with a wry smile, "They bet me [.2 credits] each you weren't interested in anyone. I told them that you'd fall for me, in the end." She smiles shyly, "I"m really glad you did."

That explains that, but you walk along at ease, content, no, happy with your life. You part ways in the dormitory with another kiss, you heading to the laundry room to clean your clothes, while she collapses into bed. You aren't entirely surprised when you find Brother Hop in the washroom, washing his clothes. He nods to you, passively, and politely takes his leave.

"Gainer."

"Brother Hop."

You wash in silence, cleaning your outfit and clothes while relaxing under the shower-- until that shower-heads ration of hot water runs out. No one besides you showers this late, so you hop under another. You're not tipsy anymore. Alcohol leaves your system quickly when you don't inundate yourself in it regularly.

But you are tired, and your muscles ache with the strain of the last few days, whatever mental block you have in place falling away with the steaming hot water. You wonder if this should burn you, it seems to burn others, but it just makes you feel clean.

Your thoughts drift, coming to fixate on something that's been nagging you since you woke up, something that no amount of exercise or affection can entirely hide—the brunette mother of baby Moore, her last gasping breaths, her bloodstained face. You search for regret but find nothing. Fixating on the image burned into your brain gives you a brief respite from the sense of self-doubt, a self-inflicted scar to prove to yourself...what?

Are you a killer? A soldier? A demon? Most days, you don't feel human. Everything is distant, especially these people living around you. They fall into line without you needing to speak, following along with your plans and actions like sediment in a river. Is that your birth-right? To unconsciously sweep these people along with your whims and wants?

The water turns ice cold as you lose yourself in moments of self-doubt and reflection. Did William plan this? Did he know about this gap? Does he suffer the same?

You leave the washroom, feeling the bite of the night air. You try to focus on it, on trying to feel cold. But there's no point-- something in your mind notices those impulses of your nervous system and isolates them. The cold fades to..nothing.

You don't remember crawling into bed, instead wondering if everyone else doesn't bother undressing before sleeping. Your kevlar is more comfortable than any blanket, the tough fabric of your pants and shirts holding you close.

[19] You don't dream.



The dormitory is bustling, Emma and Eric directing the morning cooking duty with trained skill. You set the table and pour the water, joining in the conversations in your usual half-hearted way. After breakfast, Emma approaches McGee and James, laughing as they fork over the money. You laugh with her.

She wants to spend the day with you, and you wonder how you'll spend the next three days after that.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 08, 2020, 12:22:55 am
Interesting, a reminder that we are more or less than human.  At the same time, however, we don't seem to resemble any of the demons we read about, except in that we fell from the sky.  Strange. 

I'd be interested in exploring in further depth our abilities and limits during our free time if others are up for that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 12:25:56 am
Have a look at our status bar, too:

You are Pheobe͚͇ ̵̳͖͙͓͔̖͜A҉͠͏͖l̷͈̪̭̥̪ ҉̺̠̗̮̣͖̞G͏̶̜̻͕̫̮ainer.

We lost the headache. We gained this.
I suspect it's permanent.

At some point in days to come, we need to look up our own name in the academy library: "Alphira". The chances are slim, but there may be something there.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 08, 2020, 12:26:41 am
Have a look at our status bar, too:

You are Pheobe͚͇ ̵̳͖͙͓͔̖͜A҉͠͏͖l̷͈̪̭̥̪ ҉̺̠̗̮̣͖̞G͏̶̜̻͕̫̮ainer.

We lost the headache. We gained this.
I suspect it's permanent.

At some point in days to come, we need to look up our own name in the academy library: "Alphira". The chances are slim, but there may be something there.
+1

Hmm.  Perhaps the more we use our powers, the more we begin to remember our previous identity.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 12:37:01 am
It's either that, or trauma. I'm not sure which.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 08, 2020, 12:43:53 am
Have a look at our status bar, too:

You are Pheobe͚͇ ̵̳͖͙͓͔̖͜A҉͠͏͖l̷͈̪̭̥̪ ҉̺̠̗̮̣͖̞G͏̶̜̻͕̫̮ainer.

We lost the headache. We gained this.
I suspect it's permanent.

At some point in days to come, we need to look up our own name in the academy library: "Alphira". The chances are slim, but there may be something there.
+1

Hmm.  Perhaps the more we use our powers, the more we begin to remember our previous identity.
+1 to this and
Interesting, a reminder that we are more or less than human.  At the same time, however, we don't seem to resemble any of the demons we read about, except in that we fell from the sky.  Strange. 

I'd be interested in exploring in further depth our abilities and limits during our free time if others are up for that.
+1 to this
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 01:09:53 am
If we're going to explore more thoroughly what we're capable of, we need to know what exactly we're attempting.

Whatever we do, it'll have to be subtle. We're not on the field of battle anymore; we're on Academy ground and there's the distinct possibility that somebody could be watching us without our knowledge. To that end, whatever we do should furthermore (if possible) be low-cost: Academy food is portioned the same for everyone; we can't really afford to be burning up the extra calories unless we supplement that food from our own pocket somehow.

With that in mind, I'd suggest we head out on the track once or twice over the coming days and practice channeling power through our body as we run. Perhaps we can tap into our active reserves to make ourselves still faster, still slower to tire than we already are.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 08, 2020, 01:21:24 am
If we're going to explore more thoroughly what we're capable of, we need to know what exactly we're attempting.

Whatever we do, it'll have to be subtle. We're not on the field of battle anymore; we're on Academy ground and there's the distinct possibility that somebody could be watching us without our knowledge. To that end, whatever we do should furthermore (if possible) be low-cost: Academy food is portioned the same for everyone; we can't really afford to be burning up the extra calories unless we supplement that food from our own pocket somehow.

With that in mind, I'd suggest we head out on the track once or twice over the coming days and practice channeling power through our body as we run. Perhaps we can tap into our active reserves to make ourselves still faster, still slower to tire than we already are.
+1
Also, I’ve been thinking about why Healing Factor doesn’t work too well right now. I’m thinking it’s because we are beginners and maybe beginning healing works better on small wounds
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 01:30:57 am
Small wounds nothing-- Healing Factor straight-up knit our spine back together. That thing's amazing-- we just got a bad roll trying to apply it in a way we never had before.

Alas, I don't see a great way to practice it further. We'd have to injure ourself or someone else repeatedly, and that's a thing I'm... reluctant to do.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 08, 2020, 01:38:59 am
Agreed. How we learned what powers we had was so far just learned by attempting. I agree our current magic skills aren’t ones that can be practiced without causing damage
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 08, 2020, 01:43:00 am
I suppose we could volunteer in a hospital or something, but I really don't want to find out what happens when that power goes wrong...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 08, 2020, 01:46:59 am
You decide to spend the day with Emma outside of the Academy, regardless of your internal deliberation. You drift in and out of bars and restaurants, both of you spending your money equally. You both experiment with your affection for one another, happily. The night finds the two of you sharing the same bed, a high that any drug in this world could never provide you. At first, you were concerned you couldn't truly reciprocate her affection, but today proves that was an unfounded worry. You don't remember ever feeling like this about anyone.

You fall asleep with her holding you close murmuring softly to you, gently informing you that she doesn't mind the boundary or your secret, "Sleep well, my [demon]."

For once, it doesn't make you bristle to be called that.

[3][2/1d4][19]


The worlds change, but the battlefield is always there. Through ice and magma, smoke and brimstone, you fight on. There's a brother at your side, happily laughing as the two of you bring death upon your foes. The rifle feels good in your hands, the bloodlust freeing your mind from the shackles of nihilism that consume your down-time. Freeing you from the cold embrace of the too empty halls of your home. Here, there is change. Here, there is freedom.

Blood. There's so much blood. No one should bleed that much. His face twisted into a rictus of death as a silvery entity rips great shreds from his body. It drops his corpse with a sickening crunch, stepping on it with twisting, writhing claws, sending more of his blood splattering out across the cold metal.

You run, and it chases you--



Emma is pulling you closer, awakening you from the old nightmare. You feel her concern, and you nuzzle back into her in silence. She drifts back to sleep. You do not. Laying in bed and staring at the ceiling, you wait for morning to come like you always do, well-rested on just a few short hours of sleep.

You pretend to sleep when Emma awakens for her morning duties, only lifting yourself from the bed once she politely knocks on your door and calls your name. The routine is comforting. The thought of leaving the Academy to study what you can do once more comes up, and when Emma approaches you, you subtly hint that you have something to do. She's crestfallen but accepting, giving you a kiss and making plans with friends.

[-]The Library isn't quite open yet, but no one resents a Scholar for studying first thing in the morning, so you find it unlocked. You search the index for your...the name, but find nothing. A Book of Angels is your next bet, and you skim through the listings.

Code: (Examples from the Book of Angels) [Select]
Mcreary
McEntire
Node
Crusader of Peace
Tyler
Micheal
Wortsmith

You find nothing after searching for hours, the naming pattern not even close to matching 'Alphira'. The complete list of [demons] is the same, even the Barons of Steel don't have quite the same pattern, having far too many letters and numbers to remember.



Feeling frustrated, you take yourself to the track. With a soft breath and a borrowed watch, you sprint the mile as quickly as possible, coming to the finish line at a low six minutes. You feel no sense of exertion and catch your breath easily. Then, you do a two-mile sprint, and clock about the same average time for each lap. That's a little more difficult.

Then you focus, trying to use the same force that you use to heal yourself, a concentration of will.
[19] The two-mile feels easier, your muscles not even burning with exertion this time. On a whim, you keep the same pace, deciding to sprint as long as you can, as fast as you can. Your time doesn't improve, but your endurance does. It takes ten miles around the track at the same fast-paced sprint, before you even begin to feel the slightest fatigue start to build in your legs and chest. After the fifteenth mile, you begin to slow, starting to ache.

[18]You decide to stop after sprinting twenty miles around the track. You've been running at a full sprint for two hours, and only now do you take labored breaths, your legs feeling weak and chest aching to your satisfaction. You catch your breath on a bench, dripping with sweat. You realize you smell horrible, like cheap [pickles] and head to the showers for a quick wash-up and to clean your sweat-drenched clothes.

One and a half more days of complete freedom.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 08, 2020, 01:55:02 am
I'm not sure how dangerous it would be... but how about shapeshifting?  In a private area, attempt to subtly and temporarily change our appearance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 01:57:57 am
Mm-kay... we had a brother. We did a lot of fighting. We had... kind of a trashy outlook on life.
Healing Factor works wonders for our endurance.
Oh, and apparently Emma's figured out we ain't human.

Right then.

I'm not sure how dangerous it would be... but how about shapeshifting?  In a private area, attempt to subtly and temporarily change our appearance.

I'd be worried about a bad roll-- we could accidentally change our appearance permanently, in a way we very much hadn't intended. Could draw a lot of unwanted attention.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 08, 2020, 01:59:49 am
Maybe disrupting weapons at range, then?  That could also be useful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 02:15:07 am
Maybe disrupting weapons at range, then?  That could also be useful.

Huh, maybe... best not to test with an actual weapon, though; t'would be hard to do so discretely. Better to start with something small.

...Oh. Oh actually. This gives me a weird idea.
What if we could substitute something else for caloric intake?

Obtain somewhere (go buy one if we have to) a cheap electric flashlight or something similar, find a private spot to experiment, turn it on, and attempt to siphon the power off it into ourself.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 08, 2020, 02:15:44 am
Ooh I like that.

Maybe disrupting weapons at range, then?  That could also be useful.

Huh, maybe... best not to test with an actual weapon, though; t'would be hard to do so discretely. Better to start with something small.

...Oh. Oh actually. This gives me a weird idea.
What if we could substitute something else for caloric intake?

Obtain somewhere (go buy one if we have to) a cheap electric flashlight or something similar, find a private spot to experiment, turn it on, and attempt to siphon the power off it into ourself.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 02:18:01 am
Imagine, if we could let off a comm-killing EMP blast and empower ourselves with it. :))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 08, 2020, 03:48:49 am
I tweaked the colors on the powers since red just doesn't seem thematic. Maybe dark red? Possible.


[15] You shake your long hair dry as you walk to town, running your fingers through it in an effort to dry it faster. You contemplate growing it out more to test if...you can change shape. If that's possible, from what you currently know of biology, you reason that you could try changing fat and bone after that. The concept doesn't sound that ridiculous, but you feel a strange attachment to your current form that you just can't shake. That problem existing in the first place makes you once again realize how strange you are.

[17] You find a traveling merchant, deeper in town, away from the neighborhood tourist trap designed around the Academy entrance. He has a small, solar charging lamp with a large battery, for [.2 credits] in local currency. Your cut of Emma's bet money pays for most of it, and assorted pocket-change pays for the rest. On the way, you purchase two loaves of [black wheat] bread, to soothe your aching stomach if the plan doesn't work out. In total, you spent [.25 credits] of local currency.

[5]Prizes in hand, you retreat back towards the Academy. There's a patch of bramble and trees in the farmland surrounding the town, and you take shelter there, knowing full well from previous experience that its as good of cover for this activity as you're going to get. You unscrew the machine's housing with your fingers and take out the battery, focusing on it.

[3]You notice that it disrupts the local magnetic field around it with a strange sort of not feeling, like something pressuring a second skin ever so slightly. You focus, trying to suck the energy you feel within -- and nothing happens. Then you expend energy into it, wondering if the process needs assistance.

[8] It pops in your hand, and you start, trying to drop it before anything else drips on your fingers. Its too late, though, and your hand begins to hurt, a few pieces of your skin slowly burning away in curious peels from the palm of your hand. For an agonizing second, you feel all the pain-- and then it's gone. It isn't as difficult as one might think to watch your own hand burn and be unable to do anything about it, but you wonder if this should be traumatizing.

[13] You sit with your hand outstretched from your body, taking a quick bite to eat with your not horribly burned hand, The bread nearly vanishes into your mouth, and you barely chew. You apply your will to your body, trying once more to hurry the healing. It takes a moment, and the pain doubles you over as your focus shifts. Your skin grows back, mending together until it's sealed together with nasty grey scabs. Your skin doesn't burn again, whatever acid thankfully either boiling off or running out of energy for the reaction.

[2]Suddenly unable to focus, the world spins and reorients itself. You reach up, gingerly, and find yourself laying on your back, with blood dripping from one of your eyes. It doesn't hurt as much as it did a few nights ago, but you have a pounding headache.

You lay there for a while, watching a few ragged clouds form in the sky. When you feel well enough to rise, you do so, snagging the last loaf of bread to soothe your stomach. It doesn't work.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 08, 2020, 11:32:06 am
Maybe we should stop experimenting for a bit before we fuck ourselves up really bad.

Let us go get some food so we don't starve.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 08, 2020, 11:35:30 am
Maybe we should stop experimenting for a bit before we fuck ourselves up really bad.

Let us go get some food so we don't starve.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 12:23:44 pm
Eesh, good thing we're wearing gloves... wouldn't want to explain that injury.

On the other hand, this way we got to practice our Healing Factor some more! :D

Food is good. First though, go wash our face off.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 08, 2020, 12:35:35 pm
Eesh, good thing we're wearing gloves... wouldn't want to explain that injury.

On the other hand, this way we got to practice our Healing Factor some more! :D

Food is good. First though, go wash our face off.
what did we get on our face?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 12:37:47 pm
We're bleeding out one eye. Another injury I'd rather not have to explain to our fellow academians.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 08, 2020, 12:39:03 pm
We're bleeding out one eye. Another injury I'd rather not have to explain to our fellow academians.
ah yes, that

Eesh, good thing we're wearing gloves... wouldn't want to explain that injury.

On the other hand, this way we got to practice our Healing Factor some more! :D

Food is good. First though, go wash our face off.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 08, 2020, 04:05:59 pm
[7]You pull your mesh over your face and make your way back to the Academy to wash your face. It's a little weird for you to be at the gate with your face covered, but you don't know any other place with free running water. It makes the trip back to town, especially annoying since you have to backtrack past your previous cover. But while it takes more time, your face is now free of blood.

[-]You find a small restaurant that caters to the working class of the town. You pay [.1 credits] in local currency for entry, but you can eat as much as you like. The choices aren't too unusual, but the stew is filling, and the bread has a little bit of salt to add flavor. You eat your money's worth and then some, waiting around casually so as not to arouse suspicion. When you're finally full, you leave the eatery, stepping back on to the cobbled street of the town. Snow begins to drift down from the night sky.

Is there anything you'd like to do?


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 04:21:25 pm
I think I'm ready to bring this week to a close. Only question is: do we want to send word of any recent events through Brother Hop? If so, how much do we want to tell him?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 08, 2020, 04:30:16 pm
I think I'm ready to bring this week to a close. Only question is: do we want to send word of any recent events through Brother Hop? If so, how much do we want to tell him?
i don’t think we need to tell him anything

Let’s practice shapeshifting, something minor, like lengthening our hair as a start
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 08, 2020, 04:43:48 pm
I'd rather not engage in any more magic today, lest we wind up damaging ourselves further.

If we're not worrying about debriefing and whatnot, let's just spend the rest of this week winding down. Enjoy the freedom. Spend time with friends. Relax.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 08, 2020, 04:53:11 pm
I must admit, I am tempted to try shapeshifting, even though I know it is a dangerous idea.

I'd rather not engage in any more magic today, lest we wind up damaging ourselves further.

If we're not worrying about debriefing and whatnot, let's just spend the rest of this week winding down. Enjoy the freedom. Spend time with friends. Relax.
+1

However, in the end, sanity prevailed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: VoidSlayer on March 08, 2020, 08:21:44 pm
The other students wanted to follow us in the crusader life, maybe we should hang out with them and see where all our other friends stand.

Honestly, scholarly research work where we can still work in a garrison to keep up our combat skills in the case of a major crusade might be a good compromise between the two.  Since our "grandmother" will probably want us to do the combat thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 08, 2020, 08:27:29 pm
Hmm, I would be up for that.  We don't really have much information on them at the moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 08, 2020, 08:30:16 pm
I'd rather not engage in any more magic today, lest we wind up damaging ourselves further.

If we're not worrying about debriefing and whatnot, let's just spend the rest of this week winding down. Enjoy the freedom. Spend time with friends. Relax.
+1
+1 and try to learn more about our friends as well
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 09, 2020, 01:44:49 am
I'd rather not engage in any more magic today, lest we wind up damaging ourselves further.

If we're not worrying about debriefing and whatnot, let's just spend the rest of this week winding down. Enjoy the freedom. Spend time with friends. Relax.
+1
+1 and try to learn more about our friends as well
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 09, 2020, 04:34:10 am
[-]You return home from town, taking a shower, then fall into bed to rest and meditate. You hear your friends return sometime later, but don't bother them; you're sure they're sleepy as it is.

[17]You fall into a dreamless slumber, waking up the next morning to Emma knocking on your door. You rise, setting the table and pouring the water. Your friends are planning on going into town soon, for one last day of freedom. They've invited you along, and seem surprised when you agree. Emma smiles at you, leaning close. You have a few hours before they leave, and Emma elects to spend it with you in the library.

The time passes quickly, even when you both are merely studying in silence. When noon comes, you rise, putting your books away and heading to the gate with Emma. She's excited at the prospect of spending more time with you, you can tell, and happy your mutual friends will be along for the metaphorical ride.

[16] You go out to eat lunch at a nice restaurant, drift through the shopping district, and finish it with drinks at a local bar. Its all fulfilling, and enjoyable, and you relate more with your friends.

At first, part of you questioned why they were your friends in the first place, but a pattern emerges when you think about it. Between you and Emma, you've pushed all these people in one way or the other to better themselves. You've helped quite a few of them pass the physical training requirements, driving them to push themselves. Emma has helped most

 Emma is an intelligent young woman, whose skill in translating languages leaves you stunned at times, and she isn't a slouch at athletics training, either.

McGee and James push themselves as hard as you do, managing top marks in athletics and rifle work. They're dead set on becoming Crusaders-- and they respect you because you put them both down on the ground during the first personal combat training session, then spent the rest of them building them back up until McGee knocked you on your ass when you weren't paying attention. They were criminals back in the Steelworks before Mother Gainer pulled them off the street and whipped sense into them. Literally. They've shown you the scars. As orphans, they were both given the same last name despite not being biologically related. They do look incredibly similar, however.

Johnathan is a quiet sort but pushes himself just as hard as McGee and James. His skills with firearms are where he truly excels. His aim is unparalleled in your class-- you can't even aim as well as he can. Turns out, he was a hunter for around four years for Eric's family, before a pay dispute put his father and him, to work in the mines. His father passed, leaving him an orphan. Instead of sticking around and staying a miner, possibly becoming a debt-slave, he joined the Scholars to do something with his life. He also intends to join the Crusaders.

Jesse, Erica, and Amanda are all craftsmen's daughters-- they played with Emma on rare occasions during their youth. They're smart, but coasting by, passing whatever test or quiz or report, meeting the minimum requirements of physical training. They're intending on becoming craftsmen for the SEED and move into the Holy City. John, Quincy and Other Eric are the same, if on the opposite end of the spectrum. Miner's kids that are looking for better lives in the Holy City, either as Crusaders or as Craftsmen.

[-] Last call rolls around, and Emma stumbles out of town, leaning heavily on you and giggling hysterically at a stupid joke you made about one of your teachers. It's a little challenging to get her to go to her bed, but she falls asleep quickly when she gets there. You do the same, heading to bed, readying yourself for the day ahead. Currently, you're good enough to get a posting in all but the heaviest of Scholarly work, and the Crusaders would take you in an instant if they could. Postings aren't announced until a week before the end of the Academy.

Do you have any goals for the coming school year?




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 09, 2020, 05:11:12 am
One thing I would like to focus on is investigating and researching the dark happenings in the west.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 09, 2020, 05:13:12 am
One thing I would like to focus on is investigating and researching the dark happenings in the west.
+1 also learn more about SEED
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 09, 2020, 10:53:23 pm
Whatever else we do, be sure to continue our work in the interest of district 09 as ordered by Mother Nicole. Gather our clique, keep a sharp eye out for anything worth mention, and report back our findings regular-like-- all with the demeanor of a loving grandaughter (for what more could we possibly be?).
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 10, 2020, 02:10:41 am
Whew, done! Almost done with the first act. Yayyy.


[-]The mornings once again begin to blur together into the rituals of discipline, training, and Scholarly endeavors. The workload, you notice, is twice as much as previously. After-class work burns away any free-time you might have had. The second day back, the teachers announce that a paper is due at the end of your time with the Academy. Luckily, it doesn't require that much work, but the formatting itself is the most challenging part, as well as determining which Scholar's Tongue to use while writing it. There's a strict set of guidelines involved with what language you can use for disseminating information. It ranges from something that's barely above the conversational dialect of the region to a nearly indecipherable code of references and cross-references. You must translate a non-Scholarly work of considerable length into the latter. Emma has to help you, as writing the paper -literally- gives you a nosebleed.

You can only really spend time with Emma on your one free day, after service, but the two of you spend as much time together as possible, even if it's just eating together. You have a brief quarrel over something she said, and after the two of you got over yourselves, you apologized and she started calling you [angel] instead.

[take 15]You arrange to start receiving Newspapers from the Holy City through Brother Hop. The subscription is relatively inexpensive, but Hop charges you extra for the delivery. The papers list sedate things like festivals and joyous events. There is scarcely anything mentioned about the West past the River Grey. But you can piece together about what's happening through collating the scarce data you gather.  -[.30 credits] in local currency.

Brother Hop lets you read the paper while you give him your weekly debrief, and encourages you to write your grandmother, even if its nothing important. That surprises you, but the letters you get back seem less and less hostile as time goes on. Some even speak of how proud she is of you. Not her grand-daughter, of you. You wonder if this is the Brother's doing. When you question him about the situation, he explains in a clear diatribe, "I haven't seen behavior to worry her about. You use your powers responsibly and without letting others notice. You hide your heritage and seek to actually better the Great Work. You're a faithful friend and respectful student, even when I'm harsh. I wish you were more [hellish]."



The west is going through a crisis. The Outlander clans there are pushing in towards the Holy City once more, but more frenzied than ever before. The wild insect herds have all vanished from that region, replaced by a larger and more territorial species. Local Hunters are dying in droves, unable to deal with this new threat. Cattle and tame insect herds grazing on the wrong side of the river vanish overnight.

There have been a few towns that have vanished as well, and you only know this because there are rare route cancellations posted in the travel section. Travel to outlander towns is infrequent, however, so there isn't much effect on the general populace.

The Crusaders are building up a more substantial military presence, requiring even more resources from the Autonomous Regions than the daily tithes. Debt slaves have been being moved around to strategic locations, including the regions responsible for bio-plastic, guns, and steel.

Letters from home confirm your theory-- the workload at the Number 9 mines is becoming crippling. Literally. Other Eric's father died in a mineshaft cave-in, and Quincy's mother lost a leg in the same.

The local 'Families' have to provide more monetary and material support. Emma shows you a letter from home, describing how the Thornton family has to volunteer their scientists and military trainers, as well as pay higher taxes. You notice it's in an ingenious cipher-- it doesn't mention any positions within the family, just names and how they've moved and how bad taxes are this year.



Quote from: The Holy Book of SEED
...SEED is a great presence, a holy filling spirit that guides humanity through its darkest times and its brightest. Clad within its holy coat, it protects the growing might that will change the world and bring about Utopia for all who have followed it's Holy Words. Rejoice.

The Coat of SEED provides the great foundations for the center of learning and holy thought, the Holy City, SEED's rest...




...through SEED, man learned fire, and how to tame the Wild of the world...



...in its darkest histories, the Crusades, SEED has spoken directly to the lucky populace of the Holy City. It has given advice, given warnings, and announced edicts. Many cannot understand SEED's words, requiring the Scholars to translate it for the masses...



...truly, the love SEED has for humanity that it ripped out its wings and [gender-neutral reproductive organs], devouring them to give life to humanity...



[1]You cannot find much more information than this about SEED.



The days drag on, through long-winded lectures, boring sermons, and intense physical training. Live fire training begins, and several of the young Scholars nearly kill themselves and others. Every night as extra work, you must disassemble a las-rifle, clean it, and reassemble it, adding to the already crippling amount of work in your free time. Your classmates look exhausted, and a few of your friends wonder how lousy being a debt-slave is.

[19+3]You encourage them to bear with it, that this difficulty will pass in time. You do well in your intention to motivate your fellow Academians, supporting them with prayers and meditation sessions.  The occasional fiery words about suffer not the [demon] to live also help, especially the more aggressive ones. It doesn't hurt as much as you thought it would to lie to them.

[14]You submit your year-end paper, and receive a passing grade. Several of your references were wrong, but you passed with an acceptable margin of points. You receive the top marks in your physical, in firearm handling and breakdown, and slightly less stellar marks in aiming. Eric comes next, followed by McGee and James. Johnathan received the highest praise for his aim, but received average marks for physical endurance and weapon breakdown.

Mathematics took you a while to grasp, but they come intuitively to you, you realize. You do well in that as well. However, some of the more complicated math problems still make you have an aching headache. Physics and Chemistry, you also do well in, but the life sciences allude your understanding on a fundamental level. Something about [carbon] bonding so much is difficult to pick up on. If you study harder, you might be able to understand more.

By the end of the week, you receive a very slim envelope in your room. Your heart sinks. Maybe you didn't do well on the test like you originally thought-- everyone else received a massive envelope. But yours is different, you realize as you prise it open. It contains two documents, a list of jobs with pay, and a map. Benefits remain roughly the same, room and board in a mixed-gender dormitory, prepared foods, healthcare, uniforms, dress outfit, etc, but that's to be expected early on in your Scholarly Career. You receive an extra day of free time during the week for non-Crusader postings.
Code: (Postings, Summarized) [Select]
Crusader General Infantry(Only Defensive Line Districts): [.1 credits]
Crusader Junior Officer(Only Defensive Line Districts): [.16 credits]
Crusader Security Officer: [.11 credits]
Entry Level Crusader Security Officer Management: [.11 credits]
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician (Only In Refinery District): [.12 credits]
Entry Level Fusion Reactor Maintenance Officer: [.12 credits]

Spoiler: Map of SEED City State (click to show/hide)

Quote from: A Letter Within
Dear Pheobe Gainer,

We hope that you are your grandmother's granddaughter, but understand if you decide to blaze your own path. Regardless of what you do, you will be a valuable asset to SEED and the Great Work.

Your's Faithfully,
Crusader General Thomas Harrdy

You have a week to decide.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 10, 2020, 04:13:47 am
Lets go see if Emma has decided what she's going to do so we can try to do the same thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 10, 2020, 05:42:49 am
Let’s do Crusader Security Officer
They seem to be the fighting job that gets paid the most, from our last fight we clearly see that we enjoy them

Rescinded, actual vote below
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: TamerVirus on March 10, 2020, 07:18:18 am
Lets go see if Emma has decided what she's going to do so we can try to do the same thing.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 10, 2020, 11:28:30 am
Lets go see if Emma has decided what she's going to do so we can try to do the same thing.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 10, 2020, 04:26:01 pm
"I wish you were more [hellish]."

Hmm. It almost seems Brother Hop wants us to tap into our [demonic] nature... I wonder.

Lets go see if Emma has decided what she's going to do so we can try to do the same thing.
+1
+1

One more +1 for the +1 pile; talking this over with Emma's as good a way to approach the question as any.

That discussion aside, I'm mightily tempted to ignore the Crusader postings entirely and spring for a scholar's post instead. Mother Nicole will be displeased, I expect, and the crusader's life would probably be ideal for reclaiming our old self... but Mother Nicole doesn't control our decision here, and I don't like our old self. Alphira was (far as we know) violent and miserable. Phoebe Gainer is not. The [demon] war will probably catch up to us sooner or later, but for now-- for now, I'd like to chase after whatever semblance of a happy life we can get.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 10, 2020, 04:38:19 pm
"I wish you were more [hellish]."

Hmm. It almost seems Brother Hop wants us to tap into our [demonic] nature... I wonder.

Lets go see if Emma has decided what she's going to do so we can try to do the same thing.
+1
+1

One more +1 for the +1 pile; talking this over with Emma's as good a way to approach the question as any.

That discussion aside, I'm mightily tempted to ignore the Crusader postings entirely and spring for a scholar's post instead. Mother Nicole will be displeased, I expect, and the crusader's life would probably be ideal for reclaiming our old self... but Mother Nicole doesn't control our decision here, and I don't like our old self. Alphira was (far as we know) violent and miserable. Phoebe Gainer is not. The [demon] war will probably catch up to us sooner or later, but for now-- for now, I'd like to chase after whatever semblance of a happy life we can get.
+1, Rescinding previous vote
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 10, 2020, 05:00:41 pm
"I wish you were more [hellish]."

Hmm. It almost seems Brother Hop wants us to tap into our [demonic] nature... I wonder.

Lets go see if Emma has decided what she's going to do so we can try to do the same thing.
+1
+1

One more +1 for the +1 pile; talking this over with Emma's as good a way to approach the question as any.

That discussion aside, I'm mightily tempted to ignore the Crusader postings entirely and spring for a scholar's post instead. Mother Nicole will be displeased, I expect, and the crusader's life would probably be ideal for reclaiming our old self... but Mother Nicole doesn't control our decision here, and I don't like our old self. Alphira was (far as we know) violent and miserable. Phoebe Gainer is not. The [demon] war will probably catch up to us sooner or later, but for now-- for now, I'd like to chase after whatever semblance of a happy life we can get.

But should we prepare ourselves for the coming war?  I feel like our skills in battle would be better honed as a Crusader rather than as a Scholar.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 10, 2020, 05:51:43 pm
Hm, there is that... well, we'll see how the talk goes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 10, 2020, 06:28:33 pm
Hm, there is that... well, we'll see how the talk goes.
yes, we can talk with Emma, then when we hear what she thinks, we can go from there, Crusader does sound like a plan, at the same time, I want to know if Emma decided yet
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 10, 2020, 10:03:28 pm
[-]You knock politely at Emma's door before entering.

"Come in!"

Emma glances over her shoulder and when she sees it's you, she flashes a beaming smile. There are dozens of papers and letters haphazardly organized on her desk. Propped up against the wall is the same map you received, and she has a number of pins in place. You take a moment to admire her organizational talent, and her in general.

"Impressive." You comment, and she giggles a little at the innuendo.

"I have too many offers!" She claims. "I have to sort them out somehow."

"I didn't get that many." You explain, showing her the three documents. Her eyes find the letter and go wide, she takes it from you and reads it over, "You got a letter from the Crusader General?"

"Didn't everyone?"

"No." Emma explains, "We mostly got letters from random officers or scientists."

"So, have you decided where you want to go?"

"I kinda wanted your advice on that? I mean, if we're...staying together through this..." She trails off, reclaiming her seat and looking through the letters, "It should be good for both of us, right? Is there a particular region or something you wanted to do? I've got a lot of opportunities-- entry-level medical officer in the defensive line, a couple of more rural postings, a scientist needing a scribe..." She goes on, glancing back at you with each one to see what peaks your interest.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 10, 2020, 10:17:39 pm
“Ah, we can both work at the defense line, then”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 10, 2020, 10:41:35 pm
We can probably find overlap here with both combat and non-combat postings.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 10, 2020, 10:56:39 pm
Let's look through our combined offers with Emma, and try to work out what double postings are available to us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 10, 2020, 10:57:43 pm
Let's look through our combined offers with Emma, and try to work out what double postings are available to us.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 10, 2020, 11:26:07 pm
[-]It takes a better part of the day to cross-reference and organize the offers. Most of that work is on Emma's end, too, as she weeds through the ones that she finds disinteresting, such as cooking or sanitation officer positions.


Code: (Double Postings) [Select]
Crusader Junior Officer-Entry Level Crusader Medical Officer (Only Defensive Line Districts)
Crusader General Infantry-Entry Level Crusader Medical Officer (Only Defensive Line Districts)
Crusader Security Officer-Broad Variety (Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Outer Holy City)
Entry Level Crusader Security Officer Management-Broad Variety(Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs)
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician-Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Researcher
Crusader Security Officer-Entry Level Research Technician (Farmland 2) Emma mentioned something about a camp needing guards and scientists
Entry Level Fusion Reactor Maintenance Officer-Broad Variety(Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Bioplastic, Hydrogen Refinery)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 10, 2020, 11:59:04 pm
I think we would be more useful in a combat role, but I'll wait to see what others think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 11, 2020, 12:07:42 am

Rather than pick out a particular posting we like, let's discard a few we don't want and run the remainder by Emma.



"I'd rather we stay away from the defensive lines... too close to trouble. I could see myself working some of these security posts, though!"

Quote from: Double Postings
Crusader Junior Officer-Entry Level Crusader Medical Officer (Only Defensive Line Districts)
Crusader General Infantry-Entry Level Crusader Medical Officer (Only Defensive Line Districts)
Crusader Security Officer-Broad Variety (Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Outer Holy City)
Entry Level Crusader Security Officer Management-Broad Variety(Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs)
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician-Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Researcher
Crusader Security Officer-Entry Level Research Technician (Farmland 2) Emma mentioned something about a camp needing guards and scientists
Entry Level Fusion Reactor Maintenance Officer-Broad Variety(Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Bioplastic, Hydrogen Refinery)

"Or there's these energy-work positions, if we really want to keep clear of things..."

Quote from: Double Postings
Crusader Junior Officer-Entry Level Crusader Medical Officer (Only Defensive Line Districts)
Crusader General Infantry-Entry Level Crusader Medical Officer (Only Defensive Line Districts)
Crusader Security Officer-Broad Variety (Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Outer Holy City)
Entry Level Crusader Security Officer Management-Broad Variety(Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs)
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician-Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Researcher
Crusader Security Officer-Entry Level Research Technician (Farmland 2) Emma mentioned something about a camp needing guards and scientists
Entry Level Fusion Reactor Maintenance Officer-Broad Variety(Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Bioplastic, Hydrogen Refinery)

"Thoughts?"

Quote from: Suggested postings
Crusader Security Officer-Broad Variety (Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Outer Holy City)
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician-Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Researcher[/b]
Crusader Security Officer-Entry Level Research Technician (Farmland 2) Emma mentioned something about a camp needing guards and scientists
Entry Level Fusion Reactor Maintenance Officer-Broad Variety(Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Bioplastic, Hydrogen Refinery
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 11, 2020, 12:30:03 am
[-]"The Holy City is pretty amazing, I hear, and I've never been..." Emma concedes, reaching up to brush a stray lock of blond hair from her face, "After a certain point, we could even get our own little apartment, once we become something more than entry-level..." She blushes a little, looking over at you. "You've never been either, right? What would it be like in the city? It's massive!"

The Holy City is the center of civilization, at least, as far as you know.

"We'll still have to separate for a while for training, but six months apart isn't that bad-- we can write to each other! And once we get out of Academy we get time off, if we're close we could manage something." Despite her usual cheerfulness and her easy smile, you can tell it bothers her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 11, 2020, 12:32:45 am
I don't think we're on speaking terms with the Holy SEED in the Holy City.  Apparently we tried to stab it?  The last time a demon was at the gates of the Holy City, it spawned an angel to destroy it, so that worries me.

I want to get as far away from that thing as possible, personally, but I'll settle for anything not in the city itself.

Express concerns about not being welcome in The Holy City for... reasons.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 11, 2020, 05:24:23 am
I don't think we're on speaking terms with the Holy SEED in the Holy City.  Apparently we tried to stab it?  The last time a demon was at the gates of the Holy City, it spawned an angel to destroy it, so that worries me.

I want to get as far away from that thing as possible, personally, but I'll settle for anything not in the city itself.

Express concerns about not being welcome in The Holy City for... reasons.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 11, 2020, 07:13:40 am
I don't think we're on speaking terms with the Holy SEED in the Holy City.  Apparently we tried to stab it?  The last time a demon was at the gates of the Holy City, it spawned an angel to destroy it, so that worries me.

I want to get as far away from that thing as possible, personally, but I'll settle for anything not in the city itself.

Express concerns about not being welcome in The Holy City for... reasons.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 11, 2020, 04:08:51 pm
[-] "Ah, right. Your condition." Emma lapses into an awkward silence. "How do you feel about the refinery region? There's some pretty big towns over that way. Lots of food."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 11, 2020, 04:41:25 pm
Smile. "That would work fine... and that leaves us with these two."

Quote from: Suggested postings
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician-Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Researcher[/b]
Entry Level Fusion Reactor Maintenance Officer-Broad Variety(Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Bioplastic, Hydrogen Refinery

"Have you a preference?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 11, 2020, 04:44:27 pm
Smile. "That would work fine... and that leaves us with these two."

Quote from: Suggested postings
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician-Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Researcher[/b]
Entry Level Fusion Reactor Maintenance Officer-Broad Variety(Steelworks 1-8, Bioplastic, Farmland Districts 7-8, Suburbs, Bioplastic, Hydrogen Refinery

"Have you a preference?"
”if you don’t have a preference, I’m thinking Fusion Reactor Maintenance”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 11, 2020, 04:48:51 pm
”if you don’t have a preference, I’m thinking Fusion Reactor Maintenance”

Sure, is as good a position as any-- still, say this one only if Emma expresses no particular opinion on the matter. Might be there's something here we've not considered, after all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 11, 2020, 04:53:20 pm
”if you don’t have a preference, I’m thinking Fusion Reactor Maintenance”

Sure, is as good a position as any-- still, say this one only if Emma expresses no particular opinion on the matter. Might be there's something here we've not considered, after all.
yes, only say this if Emma has no preference
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 11, 2020, 05:17:41 pm
That sounds a bit dull to me, but I suppose Emma will be happy.  I would have preferred something on the defensive line.

”if you don’t have a preference, I’m thinking Fusion Reactor Maintenance”

Sure, is as good a position as any-- still, say this one only if Emma expresses no particular opinion on the matter. Might be there's something here we've not considered, after all.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 11, 2020, 05:25:47 pm
If it makes you feel any better, I'm pretty sure the war will come our way sooner or later. This is just us trying to have a bit of a normal life before that happens.

Recall, we destroyed a bloodline for this. I figure we've earned it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 11, 2020, 05:58:17 pm
[-]"I'd go for Refinery Technician. Maintenance Technician is a misleading title. You just end up cleaning for four years." Emma shrugs a shoulder. "And your senior officer never dies. I swear the radiation shouldn't help."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 11, 2020, 06:02:09 pm
"What are your thoughts on the defensive line postings?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 11, 2020, 06:27:43 pm
[-] "A lot of the time you're keeping the Outlander clans in check. Occasionally there's an issue with [insects], and the occasional [large reptile]."

"It's a little uncomfortable, and a bit worrying...but I wouldn't hold you back if it's what you want to do."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 11, 2020, 07:02:52 pm
"[Insects]..." (Shudder.) "I remember [insects]."

Quote from: Suggested posting
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician-Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Researcher

"This is better." (Smile!)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 11, 2020, 08:00:47 pm
"Insects..." (Shudder.) "I remember [insects]."

Quote from: Suggested posting
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician-Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Researcher

"This is better." (Smile!)
+1 ((wait, all we remember of insects is how they taste, I don’t think we’ve seen a live oNe, so the top one doesn’t make sense, especially since it tasted good))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 11, 2020, 08:15:26 pm
I don’t think we’ve seen a live oNe

Phoebe Gainer hasn't. Alphira has had some terrible experiences with them, if our dreams are anything to go by.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 11, 2020, 08:18:32 pm
I don’t think we’ve seen a live oNe

Phoebe Gainer hasn't. Alphira has had some terrible experiences with them, if our dreams are anything to go by.
ah, thanks, so that was the silver thing that shredded our comrade?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 11, 2020, 08:20:37 pm
Probably.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 11, 2020, 10:57:48 pm
"Insects..." (Shudder.) "I remember [insects]."

Quote from: Suggested posting
Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician-Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Researcher

"This is better." (Smile!)
+1 ((wait, all we remember of insects is how they taste, I don’t think we’ve seen a live oNe, so the top one doesn’t make sense, especially since it tasted good))
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 11, 2020, 10:59:50 pm
[-]"Wonderful." Emma wraps you in a hug, smiling as she looks at the clock. Hers is the only room containing one, you remember, for purposes of being a Dorm Leader. "We'll submit our choice tomorrow morning. It's getting pretty late-- I'll buy you dinner in town?"

Always a sucker for free food, especially with your appetite, you agree.



The night on the town is one filled with fun. After dinner at a lovely restaurant, courtesy of Emma, you hit up the bar with your other classmates. Emma and you get pretty drunk, stumbling your way home. The two of you collapse into your bed, giggling, giddy from the choice, the alcohol, and each other.

[-] You sleep well throughout the night, fitfully stirring only once in your sleep, only for Emma's close presence to give you comfort against your nightmares. She holds you close like she always does, and you fall back to sleep with a smile on your face.



[-] The next morning, however, you awake to a knocking on your door. Confused and groggy, you untangle yourself from Emma, get dressed, and open it

Your grandmother stands on the other side, smiling at you widely with something that you would call pride. Before you can even speak, she pulls you close in a tight, awkward hug. You blink, surprised by the affection and even more surprised by her presence. Brother Hop stands a respectful distance away in an 'at ease' position, hands clasped behind his back, eyes forward and up, not quite comfortable in the presence of his former mentor.

"Pheobe, dear, I'm so prou--" She trails off awkwardly when Emma awakens, and the two stare at each other in a state of shock. Emma hastily mumbles an apology, and you close the door while she dresses. She flees the room, while you and Mother Gainer contemplate the other.

"Emma Thornton?" Nicole asks, incredulous, taking a seat at your desk while you tidy your bed and claim a seat there to face her, uncomfortable. Brother Hop somehow manages to look smug while keeping a neutral expression.

Well then.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 11, 2020, 11:49:23 pm
Welp, here comes the grand debriefing.

Nod. "Emma Thornton! A friend that became something more."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 11, 2020, 11:57:40 pm
Welp, here comes the grand debriefing.

Nod. "Emma Thornton! A friend that became something more."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 12:05:12 am
[18]"Before or after you destroyed a rival family for her?" Nicole asks, cutting to the point with a raised brow and a stern tone. You bristle at the accusation, your first impulse to snap at the old woman. You do hesitate, however.

Mother Nicole lifts a hand despite your reply, not saying more on the matter. Instead, she changes the subject, glancing at the door to your room thoughtfully. "I'll not judge you-- you're young, after all, and the girl is competent despite her apparent innocence. She was best in class for Academics; I'll let you know."

Brother Hop nods, producing a grading sheet with your name at the top. The words jumbling themselves together for you, however-- it must be in one of the higher scripts, one of the ones that distract you as you try to follow every reference instead of just ignoring it to focus on the actual texts. She glances at the document only occasionally. She nearly has it memorized, judging by the accounting she gives.

"High marks in arithmetic and physics, almost as high as Emma's, correct Child Hop?" The question seems more rhetorical, but Brother Hop nods. "Bad at translations, you nearly didn't pass, did you know that? And of course, as fantastic as expected at the soldierly arts. I dare say you're a better soldier than I was when I was your age, despite the experience difference. A natural aptitude for leadership and training. Beautifully done, Pheobe. Made plenty of friends, according to Hop's surveillance and you managed to secure a good connection with a rising Family. "

"The Thorntons haven't been as lippy lately, so well done with that whole affair. They've raised concerns with your ability to make hard decisions though-- they promise it'll come back to bite you in the ass later." Mother Nicole leans on the table, looking tired.

[-]Despite her exhaustion on the matter, she's genuinely proud, and makes it easy to see.

"What did you decide on for your Posting?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 12:10:26 am
"Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician, Mother Nicole.  I hope to improve my abilities in science and physics through a relevant posting."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 12:37:47 am
Huh, so she got wind of our little vendetta then. I wonder, would it makes things better or worse to mention that Emma was against us going on that particular slaughter?

...probably worse. Possibly much worse.

"Entry Level Hydrogen Refinery Technician, Mother Nicole.  I hope to improve my abilities in science and physics through a relevant posting."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 01:06:49 am
[-]"You could become a very practical scientist that way, Pheobe. It's a good selection." Mother Nicole nods, keeping eye contact with you. "Keep studying your translations...do more work with mathematics, meet a pretty young scientist who owes you a favor. SEED needs engineers, especially in the field of energy. More power means more growth, more done on the Great Work."

"Brother Hop says you've been reading the newspapers." She sighs, a frown twisting her lips as she looks away, at the map you've tossed hastily on your desk the night before. "When do you think we'll be at war?"

[10] You feel like this is a test, but more concerning is how she doesn't quite look at you, fixated on the map with a dull look in her eye.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 01:15:42 am
Uh... beats me.

"I would expect within the next ten years, but we are already dealing with militant, desperate Outlanders attempting to push further inwards, seeking safety at any cost.  Thus, in some ways the war could be said to have already begun.  I agree that it is not a matter of if, but when."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 01:17:07 am
"Soon. Years, maybe. Less. Something's not right, the outlanders know it, and it's all coming our way..."
"...but I expect you know more about that than I do. You look exhausted, grandmother."


Edit: Ach, I've been ninja'd!  :D
Ah-hm, I'll just steal a thing or two from that and revise... keep the tone, grab some details. Nice and knowledgeable and respectful-like.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 01:43:20 am
(ahem, sorry)

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 01:47:28 am
(I saw that!  Now we should say that the war began when she was a child, to spook her with our prescience.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 01:50:32 am
...I've been waiting for someone to call it out. Just saying. Powers are only placed when direct mention is made of them and they are tested.

"I was supposed to arrive yesterday, darling, but someone or ... more likely, something, shot down the hovercraft that makes its way through the regions, picking up passengers and dropping them off here and there. All told, two hundred people died, thirty of these were Crusaders." Mother Nicole traces her fingers on the map, on the defensive lines. "Shot it down, right in our territory. We sent a platoon to recover it and any survivors-- when they got to the crash site, a swarm of [insects] were there to meet them. The platoon unequipped to deal with them, only managed to confirm our fears before being killed in action. An after-action report also reported lost contact with one of the camps on the way into the wasteland." A finger hovers over Defensive Region number five, as she explains.

"Scouts reported all dead. So, not only is our enemy able to project great force into one of our most defended regions, but they also secured a hover-craft."

"[the plague] infects machines just the same as it does people. Not only that, but it can also replicate and learn from technology it is given."

Mother Nicole does look tired, "Did you know that there's only one battalion of anti-aircraft in the Crusader's army? It's currently stationed in the Holy City. The Elders refuse to move it to protect, say...the Refinery, our primary source of fuel. But they have a point-- if we move it, [the plague] could infect our God, if they don't, we could be crippled."

"Suffice to say, our industrial machine is working as fast as it can to protect from this threat, but new factories have to be built, debt-slaves moved, overseers and skilled workers transferred in. It's quite a mess." A wry smile twists her way over her face, "Steelworks Nine managed to secure the contract, as well as one for a new weapons plant. Some good, eh?"

"Dear, I hate to say this, but the war started long before you walked into my office. It started when I was your age." Mother Nicole reaches over, giving your hand a gentle squeeze, a morose look on her face, "It sounds like you had a good life planned."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 01:53:39 am
"I... I did. I do."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 01:55:53 am
"I... I did. I do."

How about that, plus:

"Is this a resurgence of the earlier plague, or an entirely new plague?  I thought you destroyed it, so many years ago.  Regardless, this just means that you need to augment your industrial complex more than ever.  As you said, you will need engineers to weather the storm."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 02:05:42 am
Good sentiment. Just needs a bit of emotion.

"I... I did. I do."

"Is this a resurgence of the earlier plague, or an entirely new plague?  I thought you destroyed it, so many years ago.  Regardless, this just means that you need to augment your industrial complex more than ever.  As you said, you will need engineers to weather the storm."

Say this, but put some feeling into it. Break it up, give Mother Nicole chances to respond in kind-- make an argument of it. Find out what's expected of us. Find out what sort of a life we can still build for ourself.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 02:09:31 am
Good sentiment. Just needs a bit of emotion.

"I... I did. I do."

"Is this a resurgence of the earlier plague, or an entirely new plague?  I thought you destroyed it, so many years ago.  Regardless, this just means that you need to augment your industrial complex more than ever.  As you said, you will need engineers to weather the storm."

Say this, but put some feeling into it. Break it up, give Mother Nicole chances to respond in kind-- make an argument of it. Find out what's expected of us. Find out what sort of a life we can still build for ourself.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 02:44:48 am
"I...I did... I DO!" The voices in your head fade into a low murmur as you stand, shouting at Mother Nicole and slapping her hand away. You feel anger boiling up as you lay into her with a savage growl, "Didn't you take care of this, Black Nicky, or was that a lie too?"

[9] Brother Hop steps forward, between the two of you, and you shoot him the darkest glare you can muster. To your credit, he flinches, but doesn't back down, a stoic scowl across his face as he shields Mother Nicole from your wrath. To her credit, Mother Nicole doesn't flinch, watching you with mild annoyance.

[-] "Stand your sorry ass down, Tyler-- don't you dare intervene. If she kills me, then we're fucked anyway. No need to kill the damn failsafe too." She barks at the soldier, who, gives you one dark glare, and moves away. "Better yet, leave me alone with my grandchild and get out of here before you piss her off more."

You stare at her, breathing hard, feeling the pressure of the plas-pistol reactor on your table starting to fluctuate with your mood. The display begins to scramble, and Mother Nicole gives it a sideways glance. She doesn't seem surprised or concerned, more interested in it than anything. But she doesn't speak, and you're left standing there, staring her down for far too long.
You begin to almost feel silly, but that doesn't help the roaring beast in your blood.

"I will provide Emma a posting far away from the fighting. Far enough away that even if the Holy City falls, she will live a good life. She will be with the top members of her field, learning from some of the best. If everyone dies, she will survive. I'll burn every last city myself to ensure that, dear, if you care about her this much."

[1]Her words only anger you more. She wants to use Emma as a hostage. She doesn't blink as you snatch up the plas-pistol and grip it tightly in your hand. You feel the reactor hum to life, the safety shorting out in a small burst of sparks.

"As for you, I intend to make you the next McCreary, but I can't do that with a damn technician! I hope you'll live through it, but death is the only certainty of life." It feels right, don't save them, your finger slipping into the trigger guard. Your first instinct is a dark thought indeed, you hand twitching before you restrain yourself. She holds your hands on it, leaning forward to look you in the eye.

"So, will you fight for the thing you love or cling desperately to the hope that one day everything will be okay? Will you live your entire life in a shadow or step into the light and seek redemption?" Mother Nicole quotes the SEED Holy Book, a Scripture for the Outcast, and the Outlanders. She speaks softly, looking less like a towering figure of her Crusader past but more and more like an old woman, seeking help. You realize you're pressing the las-pistol hard against her chest, hard enough to leave a mark through her robe. She doesn't state the third option, but something else does.

Emma is of questionable morals-- she would still love us. She'd love us even more if you took her away from all this. Pull the trigger on Black Nicky. Pull the trigger on Brother Hop. Leave. Never come back. They'll be too distracted in the west to look for us...we could have freedom...and if the plague comes for us, we'll destroy that too. A different voice than the rest bubbles through your consciousness, one urging blood and battle. It burns your brain like fire. Its right though, isn't it? Apparently this is the only way you can solve your problems in this hellhole, the only way these morons understand that this is  your life.


B̵̧̭̭̫̞͕̫̮̯̝̦̕͠r͢͏҉͏̧̻̤͕͉̯̰͖̫o̸̹̦̜͇͞͠t̵̨̧͈̤͙̞͖̭͉h̵̛̺̲̫͎͖̻̙̬̝̻͉͎̯͚̖̝͔̙̕͠e̷̢̛͍̬͔͎̲͖͔̝̤̦̳̱̻͘ͅr̀̕͏͏͕̝͔̼̰͙̮̫̹̫̦̲̝͉ ̯͎̲͖̘͝͡ͅH̡̛̘̜̪̺̪̣̕͢ͅơ̴̢͍̥̤͖̞̳̬̜͉̰͕̤͔̼̜͢ͅp̶̧̯̣̲̫̲̯̲̮͉͉͔̯̕ ̢͖͚̫̰̼̤͓͕̟̲̖͉͚̺̫͟͝͡h҉̣̬̖̠͇̲̤̪̗̣̮͙̘͎̬͚͕̜́a҉̡̘̞̱̥̺̥͓̟͈̩̼͎̬̪̮̯̦͉̕͠͠s̸̢̛̝͇̟̹͈̺͖͉͜ ̷̤͎̻̥̦̻̗͓́a̶͏̧̬͉̫̭̮̩̲̘͕̜̦̝͢ ̦̲͇̤̹͇̣͚̙͘͢g̢̡̛͔̰̘͘͜u͏̶͏̝̩̮ͅń̛̯̺̰̺͇̖̗̹̕ ̷̤̜̣̝̕͝͡ṕ̟̲͓͖͖͙̯̤̟͔̻̳͖̪̞͎̣͈ͅơ̕͏̹̺͔͓i̛̥̞͖̲̹̰̪̤͢n͠҉̰͙̮̬͈͔͍̭͓̦̣͖̰̮͉͈̥ͅţ̵̛̦̲̭̲͎͙̬̖̥͓̙̝̤̞̝͞ͅe̛͙͈̣͚̣̣̟̕͘̕͝d̵͇̜̥̻̰̘͈̳̯͎̦̹͍͍͈͎̙̙͜͡ͅ ̶̛̜͕̹͔͎͓̯̫̰̠̮͢͟͟á̟͉̝͉͟͡͝͝t̸̷̡̨̢̖͈̞̭̩͈̬̞̼ ̡̗͚̖̼̝͔͓̰̠̙̣̜̘̣͘͠u̢̧͞͏͖͚̬͇s̶̛̘͇͇̖̣͈̝͡,̧̟͓̲͇͉͉̩̮̬͓͉̭̖͖̪̕͟͝ͅ ̴̡̛̟̥͉̲̰̭̮̤̱̬̘̥̕͢ͅͅt̴̶̷̡͉͓̬̫̜̣̩͕̠͔̲̰h̗̩͙̭͈̮̻͜r̷̞̮̫̳͉͘͜͞ǫ̣̮̝̲̬͡ù̡̻̯̙͚͉̬̖̥͔̟̣͡g͏̡̠̖̮͍̳͎͇̠͉̼́͠͞h̨̠̙͈̟̮̘͙͕̮͎͔͓͕̦̻ͅ ͏̯̦̙̮̯̮̜͙̳̫͎̕͟ͅt̶̀͟͡͏͉̘͕̝̫̩̼̪͇h҉҉̷̗͓̹͚̞̀̕e҉̨̨͙̩͙̥̹̠̮͉̲̯̠͍̖̪̺̜͉͍ ̸̡͕̞̬̯̬͉̺͓̦̭͉̺̠͕͚̕͡ͅd̟̺̬̭̯̖͙̭̭̻̖̼̯̥͜o̟͇͉̘̖̠̗̮͙̟̤̞̕͜o̵͜͡͏҉̳͔͈̫͈̘̺̩̥̖ŕ̝͉̟̲͈͍͇̗͍̘̩͎̩͈͎͜.̨̜̹͇̭̹̟̯̼͓̹̬̙͚͙̣́͟͡ͅ. Something else warns, cold and monotonous. Anger lances through you at the betrayal.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 02:50:38 am
Holy cow.

Abort abort abort

Drop the las-pistol to the floor and sit down. We are Phoebe Gainer, and we threw our lot in with Emma so we could leave this kind of inhumanity behind.
"my old name... wants me... back"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 02:51:40 am
Holy cow.

Abort abort abort

Drop the las-pistol to the floor and sit down.
+1 and try to calm down.  Decisions made in anger are rarely wise.  Don't listen to the gold voice.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 03:04:51 am
Y͔̦o̭̝̖̹͝u̻̬̦͔̠̖̟͟ ͓̠d͉̯̮̖̰͞o͓̕n'̬̖t̢͕̙͚ͅ ̪͚̦̤̜̱w͔̰̟̻̘ạ̭̯n̲̩t̝̩̜͜ ͇̥̳̜͎̥w̸͉̺̞h̷ạ̗̝̖t̴̖̻̰̘̩̗͕'s̢̳̜ ̲̞͠b҉̳e̢̯̣̦̙s̜͟t͔̰̙ ̼̮͚̠͉͜f͉̝o̖̼̰͉r̟͙̱ ̜̀ṃe̶,̯̩̗͚̟ ̮̝̫͇̹̜y̘͘o̧u̪̜͞ ͙͙̘̗̭̱̺w̦̝̭̻̩a̫͉̭̹̥̼n̙̦͕̼̰̺͖t̳̟̺͔̜͢ͅ ͖̤̘̬̘͇wh̜̠͉̱a͉͚̼̗͟ͅt̨̯͓̺̩̤'̗̳̘̺̥s ̵͍̣̱͙̰͔̯be̡s̸̱͎͕̥̗̥t͍̟̼̀ ̥̳̗̯̫͓̕f̡̬̪̞ơ̞̼̗̪̘r͇̲̕ ̳͕̣̘̰y̺͈̩͖̖̻̞o̳̩̬̰͚͢u̶̫!̮̠̝͎͇̀ͅͅ ̘̣͙̳̘̖͙I̝̻̥̯̫͎ͅ ̤͜n̛̲͕̠̥̥̯̺e̷̮̟̹͈̖̼̝v͔̰e̲̬͞r̳̞̭̯̜ ̨̜̝̬̻̠t̰͇͍̳̲̥o̵̯̦l͓̜̳̕e͇̣̭͓r̹̠̘̘̤a̡̫ţ̟̥͉̱͖̤̩e̯̻͚̤̫̫d̲̬̲̤ ̷͖͓̝y̱̯̭͔̪̮ò̫̱̪ṳ̮̣r̷̳̻̠͖͍̮͉ ̗̤̕e͇̞͙͖̗ͅx̖͎̺͉̘͓͓͞i̺͕̰s̞̬͟t͚̗̰͚̳̫͞e͕̤͇̦̦̣n̸̲͚͙̣c̹͙̖͔̮̱̱͢e̲̣̳͖͕͓,҉̖̩ ̴̺͍͈͈̩̺a̦̕n̵̟d͕ ̺̩t͉̹̥h̢͕̣͉̖͚i̛̯̝̠̹͙̝̯s͎̺͚̥̲̗͚̀ ̙̱͎̹̲̱i̮̼̝̹̪͎͟s ̵̬̘̫͚̗͍̩w͡h̻͖̱̺̝̹̺y̩̙0͉̥͉̖̱̱͘0͎͠ ̢̠y҉̖ơ̼̫͉͚̬̱̳u̬̟̮̦̫ ̘̻̞t̡̻̮̮̼̣̙u͏͇͔͔̙r͏̳ne̮̺̟̖͎̱ͅd҉̹̠͕ ͇͔͇̮̘̖̺͜m̸e̵ ̩̦͇͈͕͚͙i̢̬̩̟̯͓̞͎n͘to̞̠̺͓͟ ̡̯a̮̘̺͎ ̵̫̙th̶̹͎̣̬r̼̪̝i̝̭̩̩̩̲̭͜c̡̗͖ͅeͅ-̲͎̹̖̟ͅd̵̝a͍̦m̦̞̯̗͉̦̝͠n͙͍e̶̥d͖ ̮̤͔͈͇́h̹̹̪̫͟um͇ͅa̢nͅ.̖̜̝͉ ̗͞I̪͠ ̦̪̰̩̬̹̩a͎ͅṃ̠̥͙͕̦̟ s̩̠̣͎͙̤̯͘o̧͚̩̼̲̖̝ ͕͖͓̖͖͡m̳u̮̥͕͎̱͙͙c̹͎͉͙͖̠̮h̻͚͉͡ͅͅ ̸̟̤̭͕ḿ͚̩̼ͅò̺r͇̦͔̲̞e̝͙͉̜̻̲.̛ The voice rages and your grip on the pistol tightens, standing \ over a worried-looking Mother Nicole. Your lungs tighten as you try to choke out words to her. The voice becomes quieter than the other two, the two that worry, that caution. One speaks softly, and one commands. The other rages and screams incoherently. It levels accusation and falsehood, like a child throwing a tantrum.

[17] "Dear--" Emma's voice calls out from the hallway, cutting off your grandmothe-- your grandmother. Nicole Gainer. S̶h̗̰̼̫̞̤̯́e̜͖̝̫͚00 ͏͙̦̖̠i̥̲͈͝s͓͔͎̀n҉̺̯̩̹͇͚'t͉ ̘̯̩̭̥ͅt͎h̲̪̕o̷u̬̮͖͇͙̩̣g̳̪h̻,͓̘͔͚̲͚ ́ș̬̟̖̟̰h̫̰e̢̠̞͔̥̣͈'̮̦̝̝͈s̩̹ ͎̫̬͉̦j̱̮̣͚̤͓ú̲st ̩̗͇̭͔̩u̱̮͙̱̦s̼̫̮̱ìͅn̛g̟̰̻ ͚͉͓ỳ̲͈̥ou̠̖͕̞̭ ͕͎̜̯͈̦́l̡̫̺̺̭̙̗ḭ̲͎̳͉͜ḳ̝̻̼̖͚̪e̤͘ ̶͓̺̘a̸ ̫̻ͅw̸̪̳̜e̖̳͚̥̰a̙̰̼̻͢p̨̹͉̹͇̙o̼̤̥̪͚̮̹n̮̣͚͎͘ ̲̼͎̻̕j̧̰͈̣̦u̴̗͈ͅs̞t̥̮͎̫͕͇͔ ̡̪͚̰̙̲͕̰li͍̗̤͓͍̫̝k̺͚̤e̢͚̮̰̪ ̼̣̲eṿẹ̷̖͎̮̖r͓̩̀y̟̙͈̘o̥̣̜̩͈̹n̻̼̩͟e̡̞̹̮ ͞e̛̦l̹͞s̭̖̟̕e̲͔̲͚͡00 ͉͔͙͠d̞̦̼͕͔͙͇o̴e̠͢s̰̺̜͔̯,̠͇͇͜ ̝̱̪̲̜͕̕t̘̥͟ͅo̫̻͎̰͞ ͏f͚̣i͢g̸͉͕͍͎h̘͔͍̩̝̻̤t͎̳̻̠͔̗ ̠h͡e̶̯͇͖̪r҉͉͕̤̜͎ͅ ̲͕̼̼̙̜p̷̱̪͙͔̲͔e̢̝̮t̛͎̜͚̱͎̺̳t͈̥y̻̯͎͖̩̗͟ͅ ̰͎͉̖̬w͉̲̯͈̱á̼͖̪̜̖ͅr̨ ̧o̼v̼͍̫͉͖͝e̱̱̮̻ͅr̞̬̙̬̳̯ ̸a ̠̠̬̞̮̕p̠̦͍̻̭̫͇͢a̗̲̣͚̖̮̳t̫̠̗̖ͅh͔͓̪̕e̹t̬̟̦̥̬ͅi̳̣͕̮̬̩̼c̟̭̻͇ͅ ̱̞͎̞̳͚w̕o͎͓͔̜͍̦r̙̗̩̬̯̕l̰͓͙̲͝d̥̳͚̼̹͝.̘͎͎̲͢ ͇͍͖͢B͕̠u̱͔͉̼͔ͅŕ͇n̬͞ ̱̖i͉̜̳̤͔t̟͖.̧̬͚̙ ̞̫̰B̰͡u͔͉r͉̩̲̖͍͓͢n͜ he͙̹͓͔̠̱͢r̜͉.

Your hand trembles. Why is she so loud.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 03:10:09 am
She is loud because aggression is the only thing she knows.  You're stuck on this world, so you might as well protect it, and Emma will be safer if the threat is dealt with.  You are indeed more than a weapon, so don't use violence to solve your problems.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 03:18:53 am
...

I think I finally figured this out.

We're not a [demon.]
We bound one!
Or maybe it bound us. I dunno. Point is, we're using it somehow and it's not us.
We're kind of a mess now, but we're human and we've got a human's will
and we can still turn this around.

We have some apologies to make, and a lot to explain, and probably some grieving to do... but first, we're going to have to snap out of it. Mother Nicole's not our enemy here-- for the love of everything we've built for ourselves here, remember who we've become and let go of the las-pistol.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 03:45:59 am
L͉̝̙̖̺̫̺͕̭į̟̲̤͈̟͟s̼̜̯̩͢t̢̹̙é̯̯n͓̞̮̗̻ ̲̖̘͎ͅt͏̡̯͍̗̻͚̦o̮̱̹̜̕ ̵̹̘͖̮̩̖͓̭m̸͏̜e̷͙̭̦̤̮̞͎ ̶̗̠̥ỳ̨̹͔͓͖̫̫͙͓͝o͏̫̘̻̺͙͖͢u͉̬͍͡͞͡ ̝̙p̛͘҉̬̰̙̤̲̬a̛̙͍̙͚̟̼̯͈ţ̘͢ͅc̖̞̥͘h͏̝͎̤̗̟̱w̸̯̗̤͉̹͇̳͘ǫ̥̻̘̗̰̠r̳̩͎̥̹͓͉̗͝͝k͏̟̟͉ ̝̜̖̮̠͜͝0͍̙̠̕͢0͖͇̼ ̵̲̬͡͝l̮̟̖͕̮̘̺̹i̗̲̝͚̜͓͚͠t҉̴̣̣̺̣̖̥t҉̵̠l͢͏͇̞͔͉̤e̶͈ ̡̤͚͕̣̞̠͜͝g̢̨̺̬i̸͚̱̯̪̘͔̤̕ͅr̪̪̦̲̙l̴͍͖̮͙͞-̸̡͇͔͕-̗̰̭ͅ ͢͏̪̣͇͝ț̟͔̻̹͠͡h̸̷̷͉͕̥͙̺̙i̺͖̭͖̠͚̳͞ś̪̯͓ ̰͈̙̥̫͟i҉̴̦̬̺͚̹̤s̬̘̥̙̖̱͟ ̹͇̜́͝m̯̹͖͕͡ͅy҉̧̞̤̭̼͓̤͉̯ ̠̯̕͡b̺̳̟̩̝̼̕o̡̭̤͈͚̳͝d̢͔͕̲͞y̸̡̪̯̟̥͍̻!̴͔͕̬̳̬̮̠͍̀ ̷̻͔̲I̶͍̞̗͞ ̢̮͇̦w̵̤ą͉͙͖͢͡ņ͎̻ț̡̬̩̳́̕ ̴̜̯̥̖̯͢͞i̙̮̼͚͜ṯ͎̭͞ ̢̣̺͜b̩̱̥̫̮a̬̙̳̠̲̳͕ͅc̵̜̫̲̤̥͞ḱ̢̛͎̼̹̜̗̼̗-̸̧̩̹͉̘̤̝͡-̶̢͈̖͓͉̳̥̲͓ ҉̧̟̫̤̯̼͉w̻̼̙̼͝e̵̖͓̮͓̰͖̳͖̕'̸͘҉͕̹̱̼͚̫r̸̯̕̕e̢͞҉͙̝͙ͅ ͏̬̤̝̦͈͚͙̬ͅn͔̖̱̳͔̹͞ͅơ̶̭̰̜̤̩t̠̠̪̣̯̰̞͓͢ ̷̧͔͔̝͉͈͢h̻̪̤̺u̙͈̺̤̱m̴̸̯͞a̩̰̰̝̜n҉̼̤̞͉͟-͔͇̠̞͉͓͖-̗̺̜̣̯͕͈͢͝s̘̩͙̜̝͕̳̀t͏̭͕̲̻̟o͏̨̦̠͇͝p̧̣̹̲̹̠̫̱̳.̸̘̗̠͍̝̮͈̳̕͝ ̨̡͉̦̖̱̘̭̲͞ͅS̨͓͙̞̮̖̜̗̥t̢̮̥͍̜͙̥͈̦͚o̧͕̺p̨͕̰͚̳͈̲͜.̮͉̜͇͘ ̫̳͓̖͔̱͈̞ͅŞ̱̣͚͕͇͈ͅͅT̸͙̳͉O̜̫̭͈̰͖̱͜͡͝P̡̠̗͍͇͖͇̱̲͉ ͏̦͍̠T̻̤̘̙̣͢A̹̠͡L̡̳̮͎̫͍̟K҉̴̳̻͍̘͙̻̖͢ͅI̵̦̫̯̣͜N̯G̸̸̠͔-̳̗͔̝̳ͅ-̵̤͈̤́W̵̰̣͉è͚̯̣̫̭̭̖'͏̹͈̗̜ŗ̠͍͠e̸̥̝̲͕̭͞ ̧͔͔̼̖͓ń̫̠̠̗̦̼͙̀̕o͉̟͘t̗̕ͅͅ ̛̬͎̘̜̲̣̟m̵̵̰̝͓͚͚̙͙ḛ̴̢̫͖a҉̗̹̼͖̱̻̱n̹̙̮͟t̡͓̗͖̺̟ ͏̨͖̩͎̗̲̲̕t͇̞͎͈̙͚̟̞̘͠o̵͓̭̦̯ ̺̲͍͘b͓̳̱è̡͖̝͚̬͓̖̖̯̻ ̵̹h̷̺̙̞̳̗̗̦̹e̴̦͙̘̰̺͓͇͞r̷̴̹̖̘̫͈̥̭e̢̺̲̞̝͚͘͢-̶͖̳͜-̶̰̙̲̣̕ ̛͏̶̣͔̪̥̯̹F̣͍̜̰A̲̪̥̺̳̕͟͝Ţ̣̞̤͠ͅH̵̲̲E̵̙̻͕͓͔͈͔͓R̶͏̯̺̟͓̝ ̵̞̭̖̬̞̖̝͍́W̨͓̺͉̫̟̻̞̙̲A̞̳̹̺̺͢ͅN̷̛͇̦͡T̸͓̘̤̭͎́S͏̛̜̤̞ ̵̸̤͓̳̤̪̟͈U̷̘̤̬͝S͕͎̫͚͠ ̵̬͚̰̳̹̻͈̩̗̀͜T̥͚̻͕͕̣͚ͅO̵̫̘̼̹̻͟͠ ̵̯͖̩͓͙͕͎͎́͢F̷̺̰́͟I͎̤̮̖̠̙͠G̴̮̱̹͍̕ͅH̷̬̰̤̫̮́T͝҉̶̲̮͍͇̫̹̗̖ ̞̮͓̩̻̬̭̜͝ͅ0̘͇͕̻̰̮0̸͕̠͙͔̤̟̤͜ ̟̲͈̝̦̙́N̯̤ò̷̘͍̪t̪̗̗̗̥̘͖͠ ̟͢w̢̳̖a͔͞͞ͅs̵̨̡̫̲͎͈̫t͈͓̠̭e̤̹̣͔̼͙̞͠͞ ̷̠̖̹̫̦͞o̩̮͉̦̱̻͖̩͖͜u̞̩̱̦̻̹̩̱͈r̼͇̼̲͎̤ ̦̮͘ͅt̷͕̟͜͡i̞̺̫ṃ̧̖͍̭̖̗͙̹͝e̷̡̘̼̻̯ ̡̫͚͍̯̱h͇̣̠͜ḛ̷̪̭̠̼͜r̢̬̫̙͔͇̬͎̘̭͜e̲̼̻̤̩̦͝ ̵̟̕ͅo̬͔͟͡ǹ̴̰̫ ̴͎̱̘̫̯̱͓͜a͇̖̼̻̤̕ͅ ̡̼͎s͉̳̳̣̤̼̟t̶̲͍̦͞u̠̗͇͍̳̠͈͘͟p͚̠͠i̴̢͓̱̭͉͓͉͇͟d̡̥̞̺̥͈̲̩̥͠ ̸̨̧͉̳̩l̢̢͍̪̼̤̲̣͟i͎̬̩t̶̝͈̬̪t̻͉̱̥̙͕͖̜͡l̢̦̥̯e̦̱̝̙̰̱̳̠ ҉̰͙̩͍̭̤r̞̻̻̫̫̱͇͠͞o̴̱̣̙̲̘̜c̻̙̘ͅk̨͉̭̺͜!̡̻ ̻̩̥͈̣̮͜H̦e̵̦̲̦̦͎̺̞̜'̵̱̼͕̤͇̯͚͎̪͢s̰̺̹̩͚͖͖̟͟͠ ͕͈̪̪͔̟̕͜ͅd̬͔͜ẹ̮͍͘͞a̵̝̣͚d̵̞͠ ̹̯̱̦ͅb̺̺̀e͓̫̘͉͇̘͡c̡͚͎̮͔a͏̡͉͕̭̼ù̬̫s̡̳͎̟̪̫̭̹̕͝ͅe҉҉̵̩̹͕̞̜̗͔̺͇ ̡̹̜̠̺̙̤o̷̶͖̦̰̪͓̟͘f̖̳̩̝̼͠ ̶͓͔̣͖̲̲̣͎ͅu̝ş̪͍͍̞̙,͇̱̣͈͙̟͇ ̥͇̤d̷̮̣̖͍͔̦o͚͎̩͚͔͕̭͈n̵̸̩̗͇̩̮̖'̴̗͈̺̤ţ͇͉͙͇̬̻̜̪̹ ͏͍̯ý͏̛̬̤o̩͠u̶͕̠̘̘͘͢ ̶̜͓u̧͏̞̟̠̥ṇ̡̢̰̮̬̰̬͔͘d̢̟e̢̼̹̗͍r̶̨͔s̠̱͔̮͔̞̤̺̞͠t̞̟̲̰̼͝a̴̢̞̲̟ǹ̶̺̳̝̖̹̙͎d͢͞ͅ?̷͉̪̫̘̟̺̱̘͜!̛̞̠̭̤̦͕̕ ҉̪̗̪͎͖ͅW̷̨͉̥̼͎̺̲ͅE̢̧͎̝̰̺̞'̢̡̫͔̮̘̙̬̕Ŕ̢̰͇e̹͔͔̙̳̟̭ ̨̘̭̩̕͟t͝҉͕͔͖͚̯̩o̸͙o̡̳͔̥ ̶̻̱̰̮͎͍͟ͅw̵̵̦̣͠e̖̩̟̯͝a̟͈͔͈̗k͏̴̤̲̲̘͚̮!̡̮͇̭̬̦̰̖̼̬͠͡


The door opens, and you are unsurprised when you see Brother Hop has a gun pointed at you, struggling desperately to hold Emma back from the room.

[18] Emma looks shocked at you, her eyes filling briefly with revulsion and fear. E͖̙͎̘̭͈̯͈̖͎̙̤̕͢͠M̛̪͈̳̣̩̭̰̳͇͍̺͈̕ͅM̶̢͏̵̛̤̗͖͔̝A̴͚̮̠͈̪̖͖̺͈̱̝͟͞-̧̛̞͚̹̤͓̜͕̠͎̙͈̤͔̭̹̼͎̗̕͢͞-̸̧̜͍̦͍̬͕̺͎͔̲̤͚̕͢ ̢̢̛̲̝͉̪̼͕̩̥͝w̧̢҉̛̙͙̭͈͉̱̖̳̳è̡̛̞͖̙̠̹̘̥̺͍̠̻̰̙̮̺ ͞͏̨͔̺̫̲̣͓͕͖͍̗͈̳̗͖̬ͅͅd̴͚̟̤̗̘̣͍̞͙̖͎̦͍̖̮̥͉͢ͅo̡̧̟̖̳̬̻̫͓̼̥̫̮̟ͅṉ̷̡͎̭̫͈̩̰̝͖͓̥̪̻͝͡ͅ'̸̹̺̝̝̣̣͚̬͘͢t͏̮̯̬̱̰͍̻̲̝̰̜̪̝͎̩̲̥͈̕͟ ҉͉̠̭̱̤̥̘̦͉̖̻̳̀̀͢͡n͠҉҉̴͉̤̥̝̗̞̥̘͜ę̷̸̨͉͍̣̤̜͖̟̲̝͕̟͚̥e̸̷̤͕̺̺͈̰͎̥͓͖̤̬̮̞d͇̩̯͎̣͚͖̪̝̙̀̀͜ͅ ̸̢̜̫͍͎̫̦͇͘E̸͉̟̫̫̜͈̟̭̰͎͔͓͎̱͈͕͙m̸̰̟̫̜m̢̥̙̰͎̲̮̩̗̠̹̗͍̙̯̣̟̼͠ͅa҉̵̷̵̦̫̫̜̣̯͝ ̦̪̩̖͍͇̲͉̞͘͟t̵̬̲̪̣̗̦̭́ǫ̷̨̖̙̟̠̯̝̞̰̬͕̮̞̱ ̷̧̩̟̘̻͙͈̱͈̭̀̕͝s̷҉̱̭̣̙̤͎̺͇͔̰͔͕̹t̵̕҉͏̘̩̲̜͚̫͎̫̘̖̙̳̣̥͍̬̠͝o̕͟͏̧̖̘̤̠̦̠̬̻̞̭̮͡p͏̜̣̫̺̭̬̜̹̩̞̀͜ ͏̵̜̖̺̕ͅt̨̢̜̖̲̝̜͕͕̺̼̤͟͢h̸̡̛̳͓͙͓͚̝̪̪̳͇̦̼͈͝ḙ̛̘̞̳̬̮̹̦̰͞ ̡̛̙̝͍̪̫̫̪͉͘͝͡ͅn͏̸҉̧̩͇̯̖̲̠̤̻̜̙i̴̡̧̪͚͎̖̲̟̥̯̖̫͎̥̻̞̼̳̝͟͞ͅͅǵ̴͍͕̣̝̹̱̦͕͔͖̥͉͓̩͎̳̭̮ͅh̶͖̟͈͔̰͈͘͞t҉̩̯̰͉̤m̶̞͇̯̞͓̱̠͉̜̥̳͈̘̀ͅa̢̪̘̹̯̞̙̜̭͕͎̺̦̻͍̕͝͡r̡̛̖̱̼̼͖̻̫̭͈̻ͅe͟҉҉̶̦̫͈̼̪̮͙͍̬͇̳̬̦́ͅs͠҉͈̟͓͙̻̳̹̺̤̭̗̩̬ͅ,͝͏̷̰̥̱̻͈̮͖͇̗̞͎͔͍̥͉̩͘ͅͅ ͟͟҉̸̫̩̲͔̯̝̺̱͘I̴̸̷̤͕̙͎̬͇͔̟̜̙͘͜ͅͅ ̸̤͇̙͎̘̥̘̳͔̭̙̠̭̲̖͉̟ͅp̵̥̼͓̳r͈̮͙̭̰͉͍̀͢ͅò̵̴̢͖̞̭͈̳̻͉͍̥̟͕̖̝̝̩͔͟m̼̝͈̰̦̹͖̹̘̗̪̪͔̲̬͜͢i͏҉̛̭͈̪̹͖̗̪͠s̶̜̩̹̘͕͝e̞͔̰͉̲͕̟̙͖̹̤̘̖̭̮̺͔̳̖͟͝-̸̷̴͖̮͍͚͙̳̙͜͞ͅ-̶͚̘͚̘̺͟ś͏͓̘̠̩̜̭̣̘̙̟̦̰̞͕̺͓̥ͅh̢̛̠̦͉̼̣͜͞͞o̷͜҉̢̹̲̮͉̗͈̬͇̙͙̪̦͈͉͈̞̰̟͞ͅơ̛͙̼͖͙̹̠͖̱̟͉̺̠̖͙͘͡t̶̲̤͖̪̼͇͈̘͎̰͠ ͟͡҉̘̞͙͙̙̖̺̮͍ͅh̶̡̠̦͙̤̖̘̣͎̘̠͖̰͇̩̮̣̕͝ͅͅe̵͏҉͉͙̟͓̱̪̰̱̘̥̜̘͈̼̱̳̣͟ͅŗ̶̡͈͍̩̗̜̼͙͕̱̳͕͎̲́-̢҉̰̜̹̫̯̗͎̦̱̱͘ ̛͍͎͓̲̥͔͖̥͉͍͕̬̼͉̗̦͎̀͢s̵̡҉̶̺̘̹͓͎̲̳h̴̨̠̦̼̰̻̙͖̲̪̩͡ơ̟͇͖͓͖̗̩̫̼̺̲̤͚̩͈͔ͅo͉̤͈͎͇̞̫̠̜̹̬͟͞ͅt̸̺̤͔͇̥͚͈̀̕͡͡ ̴̷̨͎̗̹̖̫͎́͡ḩ̶̶̧̗̺̰͙͈̲͈͖̠̹͔̺̮̘é͉̱̫̖̲͔͓̱̞̦̜̤̪͎̯͖͝r̶̨͕̞͍̞̪̩͞ ̵̷̢̺̭͎͚͇̩̙̠̙̟̥̯̮͈̬̬͠d̴̼̖͔̥̪̖̙̀͞ò͙̩͈̳͇̖̫̬̱͇̻͍̟̘͇͇̲w̥̱̖̩̩͈̼̲̦̰͖͔̪̹̤̳͉͝n͏̛̼͓̯̼̘̳̥̪͟͞͠!̛̣͈͍̥̲͍̻̤̰͡ ̡̢̡͕̝̗̘͕̤̘͎̭͇͓̕͢ͅḺ̴̵̫͎̠̤̘̩̥̖̭̟̠̕͝ͅơ͏̭̱̻̦̤͉̼̘̤̺̘͚̗́o҉͉̺̖̖̖̥̝͢͟ḱ̡̞͔̝̟͍̱̦̺̘̻̯͕͔̪̩̭̥̗̀ ̷̣̦̼̲̱̮̳͢ͅa̡͏̰̤̯͉̝̺̱̥̖͍̟̙͎͍̼͚ͅͅt͏̸̙͈̗̗̭̫̻̜̮͙͔̲̞̼̀ͅ ̴̸͕̩̤̳̙̭͈͞h҉̯͔̯̘͔̮͝͡e̕҉͈̦̖̭̥̠̫̜̘̯̝̱̗̟͙͢ŕ̡̥̪̪͖̤̹͕͟͞,̸̧̠̟͙̦̼̞̳͖͈̤̲̙͇̥̜̩̀̕͡ ̷̢̧͓͇̱̺̯̣͜l̸̛͙̱͈͔͔͎̲̹̬̹̰̙̰͉̙̼͜ǫ̤͔̺̦̰̜̞͈̱͉̰o͟͏̧̠̫̣̦̭͚̠̗͕̩̙̯͎͇͈̹̭̱̞͡͞k̴͚͉̩̬̤̠͓̹͡ ̶̨̟̳̩̪̜̝͖̝͖͙̝͓͚̝̙̞͎͇͡a͢҉̺̤̰͉̟͈̺̠ͅt̛̼̱̯͉͎͢͝ ̪̠̬̳̞̱͖̗͉̀͘͜͠h̨͈̮͖͕̺͢͠͠o̴̹͇͍͈͈̘̲̼̥̮͔̲̕͜͝͠w͢͡͏̺͎̻̪̀ ͏҉̙͔̥̯̫̪̣͎̟̗̝̟̜̜̙̥̜̪̘ś͇̩̬̲̺̹̰͉̰͇͎̖̥̖ͅh̴̸̭̲͎͎͎̠ͅe̛̻̳̜͇̙̜ ̷̫̗͍̱̻͚̥͓̤̱͖͎̻̙̪̲̹̹l̤̫̯̼̬̮͎̼̻͓̗͎̕͢ͅờ̤̟̮̖͓̝̦͈̀o̤̫̤̠͎̭̜͢͟͢͝ͅk̵̨̫̙̮̞͎̠̰̯̪̫̭̝̼̟͉͈s̢͏̝͔͓̻͈̦̠̣̺̩ͅ ̸̷͕̟̩̳̭̳̱͟ͅa̡͎͍͎̫̬̖̱̣̫ţ̛̳̱̣̪͙͎͖̳͎̘̮͜͝ ̧̛̝̩̜̥͖̥̬̬̯͙̭͙̫̗͠ͅỳ̸̸͉͍̻̩͔̪ò̶̹̱͚͕̘̳̠̟̱̘̲̱̪̲͙̘ͅṵ̴̧̻̹͓̻̱̲̜̰̘̳̖̹̯͖͍̮̞͢͠ͅ-̷̴͓̞̼̩͇͔̯͔̲̞̩̻̭̝̰̣̰͝͞ͅ-҉̵̭̲̹̤̘̬͇̮͓̬̖̀̕͝ ̧̙̯̻̫̹̖̯͇̺̦͖͉͕̰͖͓̭̟͞t͎̼͓̪͚̥͖̩̝͟͝h́͞҉̲̬̟̤̰̰̖̰̦a̴̴̬̫̹͚͕͉̤̜͇͍͓̺̣͈̙̙͝ͅͅt̷̢̧̡̠̳̳̞͘s̵҉̩̠͓͍̬͈̳̙͍̜͟ͅ ͏̨̖͍̳̜̪̼̹̗̻̦̮b̷̷̧͕͓̳̘̜̪̳̮̘̱͖͚͉̳̪̠̗͘ͅę̫͙̳̬̻̤͚̲͔̰͔̦̫͜c̷̪̬̦̰̯̫̪̠̘̱̟̞̯̼̠͠a̧̰̟̠͍̮̩̮͜͝͝ù̹̞̱͙̼͇̟͕͝͞s̞͍͚͚̻͔͘͘ȩ̧̛̮̪̣̲̲͉̯̝̮̬̲̮̭̗͜ ̷̶̷̧̗̘͉͚̠͉̯̞̮̟͚̗͈͚͍̪̥̙͡y̢͈̭̦͎ò̻̤̪̝̩̳̠̹̲̬͍͓̳̳͈u̴̱̮͓̞̕ͅ'̢͠͏̛҉̹̻͔̹̦ṟ̨͔̖̪̯̪̣̱̀̕͠e̢҉͍̹͉̜̫̣͇̠̗̫̮̩͉̻̙͈ ̷̲͔̻̼̯̰̙̱̯̀n̸̴̡̮͚̪͉̫̥͔͟͠o͏̷͍̰͕͕̝͔̱̻t̨҉̼̙̞̪̜͔̕ ̥͙̲̞͍̹̖̤̗̣̤̝̪̱͖̝͔̥̭͘͜͢͝ŕ̸̨̙̬̜͎͍͔̫̼̯̜͕̤͎̯̺͍̝̱͘e̢̛҉͠҉̦̥̪̤̮̭̤̺̲a̷̛̜̙̩̖̣̘̬̞̯͢ĺ̡̳̮̼͓̳̫͓̮͝-̧͡͏̫̖̙̠͟-̩̳͍͕̳̳̻̭̙̀ ̡҉͢҉̛̭̱͓͈̗y̶̳̠̯͕͟͝͡͞o͈͓̗̟͇̰͇̭̝̝͖̟̙͈̼̯͟͞u͜͏̲̲͕̻̥̬̪̭̼͕͍̞̞̠͎̘̣͖̀̀ͅ'̴̸̭̟͓̙̺͖͉̀͡r̸̢̢̟̠̹͔̳̣̬͓͜͝e̸̸̬͚̣͈͔̳̹̮̮̟͔ ̹̪̥̠̙̣̩̬̻̖̘͝à͉͕͚̣͍̯̝̹͍̮̣͎͠ ͖͔̤̘̘̬̜̟͍̹̮́̕͜͡͠p̵͠҉͕̼̲̩̝̼̺͍̯̦̤͍ỳ̭̫͕̬͚͉̩̯͉̹͔͘͟s̶̢̛̠̱̰͙̠̣̞͘c̴̀͟͢͏̰̘̲̦̝̱̲̲͇̮̞̰̩̘̟̬h̷̡̲͕̟̩͎̣̘̬̠͇͎̞̟̺̱̘͢ͅͅo̶͉͓͓͙̠̫̮̻̟̦̻̹̮̘͔̱͝͡͝ͅs͞͏̸̭̠̺͕̫̘͙̱̱̤̮ͅi̴̴̢̭̙͔̣̥̙̼̲͙̦̼͍̦̰̜͎ś̖̣̟̙̟̣̖̤͕̥͔͔͎̠̹̹̟͎͟!̦̳̩͟͠͝͡


There are no words from her, no condemnation, no wild accuasation.-- she crosses the room in one quick stride and wraps her arms around you in a tight hug. You're not a weapon. You are Pheobe Gainer. This is your lover, Emma Thornton, the too-smart girl with blond hair. This is your grandmother, Nicole Gainer, who gave you a life, a full name, where before you lived on the streets, long before she knew you were a demon to use as a weapon. Why- why-

You collapse to the floor, too heavy for Emma to hold up. Nicole attempts to prise the gun away, but-- K̷̪̰̞̟̟̝̺̣̜̤͘͞͠͡Į̶̷̶̣̞͈̫̩̜͙̳͔L̵̫̱̯̗̼̣̗̟̙̖̮̩̬̮̕L̶̢̛̠͎̭̞̭̰̤̰̯̦̫͉̪̯͍͘͠ͅ ̵͚̠̮̣̗̯͕͓͈͙̩̤̜̥͉̬̖͓̥͜͟͠H̶̵́҉͇̝̹̪̝͇ͅȨ̭̘͉̕͜ͅR͞҉̼̗̰͓͔̪̼̰̥́.͏̪̜̟͇̭̜̩̠̫̗́...

"[angel], what's happening to you?" Emma whispers, softly, stroking your hair, your face. She's on the verge of tears. You notice she's bleeding-- no you're bleeding- when did-- Everything begins to fade to black as a cold voice intones.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 03:46:30 am
>END OF ACT 1 (Awakening) -- Completed.
>>Mental State: Replaced. Compromised.[terminate project? y/n - n]
>>Humanity: High.
>>Control: Low [lower than forecast standards. terminate project? y/n - n]
>>Physical Health: Needs higher caloric intake, signs of [redacted] starvation present. Brain damage still present.
>>Situational Understanding: Low.



Whew! That was fun. Let me know what you guys thought, ACT 2 is going to go a little differently than I first imagined, that's for sure.
Let me know if there's anything I can do to improve the game and ACT 2!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 03:50:40 am
That was awesome.  I don't have any suggestions at the moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: King Zultan on March 12, 2020, 04:21:59 am
That went very poorly, very fast.

As for the game I can't think of anything that needs improvement.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 12, 2020, 06:03:50 am
It is fun like it is, Act w will surely be interesting, just out of curiosity, how did you expect it to go?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 02:03:29 pm
I kinda expected you guys to go all murder-hobo and explore the world as a vigilante/outlaw. Imagine my surprise when you joined the church and bettered yourself instead.

Any other questions before we continue?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 12, 2020, 03:44:41 pm
No more questions
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 07:48:33 pm
This whole thing has been-- stunning. I've never been so tense playing a suggestion game. It's sickening, is the tension-- I know already I'll have this story on my mind months after it ends, however it ends.

In short: do not terminate project.   ;)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 12, 2020, 08:46:52 pm
This whole thing has been-- stunning. I've never been so tense playing a suggestion game. It's sickening, is the tension-- I know already I'll have this story on my mind months after it ends, however it ends.

In short: do not terminate project.   ;)
agreed project continue
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 10:36:18 pm
Act II:Ancient Enemies

There was nothing, then, there was a dream. A fitful awareness that drives your injured brain to conjure images of soothing experiences that remind you who you are. Emma. Mother Nicole Gainer. Grandmother. Brother Hop. Uncertain. Eric: Nuisence--

Pheobe Gainer, a patchwork girl rests, and you drift in and out of memories of her life, solidifying with a diverted process of the mind. A core of concepts, compressed into an incredibly small amount of already small space. Between atoms, fractures of words that cut into the very heart of existence, rending data into being.

An awareness rests below you, and one rests below that.

The one below is a harsh surface of anger, of trauma, of regret and fear and loss. A lifetime of loss with no one to turn to cope. But its weak, willpower diverted simply to continued existence. Too many fractures, too many damages to identity to do anything more than nurse its wounds. One defeat was all it took before you were cast like trash into the void.

Beneath this sun-bright ball of anger is something else. Something too impossibly cold. It exists overall, your f̧̧̣̞̱͙̼͎̭r҉̺̲̱̪̳̳̠̙͜͜͝͡ͅo͖͍̫̮͓͓̣͈̺̻͓̭̮̻͘͝͞z̛͏̩͍̟͖̮̮̬̥̪̯̟̯̗͕̣e̢̡̛̘̥̞̻̠̯͉̼̲̜͟͠n̴̘̖̮͎̬͚̪͙͞ ҉͏̨̘̹̥̩̲̟͠m̡̡̥̞̰͓̟̟͉̳̙̦a̻̳̼̻̹̞̟͘͜ś̡̤͍̲̦͍͢t̰̥͍̫͎̤͓̖̝̭̳̱̲͘͠e̶̦͎͚̗̫̣̖͙͕̗̩̲͔̗͙̱̦͕͢ͅr̷͔̹̖̞͝ that drips with the antithesis of existence, twisting time around it. An abysmal ink that changes the very data of the universe, twisting it to
ḭ͙̼͉ͅt҉͚̖̥͍s͎̠'̝
-----your will.
It was aways your's, but now it isn't. For now, it serves itself, like a dying beast.

Pheobe Gainer wakes up.


It's not true consciousness, you realize, nor is it sleep. Its something in between, and it drags on. You realize you're hyperventilating. Your lungs crushing themselves with the deep gasping breathes you take. Your eyes aren't processing the light--your brain goes into panic mode.

Your heart begins to race out of sync as your brain cannot process how to keep it pumping. You receive an injection. Then There was nothing, then, there was a dream.



They're trying to kill us. Serves us right for trying to befriend these savages.

W̶̴͙͍̙̭̪̩̱̙̼̮̮͖̮͘͘͞ę͎̮̫̹̻̰̀̀͟ ̸̷̡̨̡̭̬̘̻̣̜̱̘̥̣͇̲̙͇͉̱ȩ͏̶͉̼̟̜͎̤͈͎͉̫̫̦͍͇͕̗͍̫x̵̡̼̳̭̜̠̳̲̦͙͎͔̪̠͍͝͡i̵̢̬̳̱̹̲̬͖̝̣͘͜ͅs̢̥͎̘̠͕̖̥̠̪̯̰͇̜̜̫̬͠t̨̹͎̳̟̩̺̭͇̻͇̝͎̣̮̱̘̰̰̕͝͝.̧̡̰͓̦͇̬̜͖̤̙̕ͅͅ0̷̷̢͉̝͙̹̖̭̰͓͕͚̰̼̬̹̕ͅ0̴̴̡̘̺̞̹͓͞

You exist. We suffer.

S̡̨̡̭̮̮̝̗͞ĺ̴̸̢̫̠̼͔̞̭̱̙͖̜̲̠͎̲͉ȩ̶̳͕̭̞̲͕͈̩̪̦̞̲̟̳͙͍̠͓͔̕ȩ̕͝҉͎̣̩͡ͅp̢͝҉̢͔͓̜̣̯̥̣̣̝̩̘̫͇ͅͅ.̧̝̻̠̣̖̞͎͓͚̖̩͉̤͚ͅ.


You stay silent for the moment. Is there something to say? Can you say anything?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 10:54:55 pm
"---"

"No more ignorance."

"̶S̶̴̡h̸o̶̷̧w̶ ̶ḿ̵̶e̸ ̵w̴h̶a̷͏̷t̴ ̴̴̸Į̷̸ ̶a̶m̴.̶̴̵"̷
̵"̷S̶h̵o̷w̵ ̶m̸e̶ ̶w̶h̷o̷ ̸I̶ ̴w̷a̸s̸.̶"̴
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 11:00:43 pm
N̸̢̛̟̩̯͎̰̣͓̠͜o̵͝҉̞͍̭͍̖̫͈̬̦̹̥̦͕͇͍̰̫ͅ.̴̻̞̞̭̘̟͙͙̦̝͈̝̤̫̟̗̀̕ ̬̻̲͘͢͞ͅD̻̜̰̺̟̗̬̝̱̩̰͘͢͢a̢̨̺͓͎̭͉͙̥͎͍̰͉͚̟͎m҉̡̩͉̠̱͎͈͢ą̝̘̲̯̦͔̤̗̬̟̦̪͓͖̹̘̬͢͠g̶̴̯͍̠̳̻͉̭̱̩̲̬̝͓̤͞e̴̠̗͕̥̥̣̯̳̞͢d̡̨̰̣͚̳̟̞̙̤̠̥̯̙̥͔͙͈͉̀͘ͅ.̧̨̢̤̬̥̮̤͕̹̦̖̭̬̺́̀ ̵̬̼͓̘̙̥͍̗̼̖̯͔̙̝̲͉́͜͡͡ͅṲ̻̩͓͔̼̙̀͡ń̷̩̟̜͙̘̙̻ͅn̨͏̺̹̻̟̱̣̤̠̳͍e҉͖̞̱̪̰̭̮̣͡s̶̴̢̼̩̻̭̬͚̺̟͎̥͓̦͖̲ͅͅs͈̬̟̥̗̘̬̺̗̯̖͍̩̥̝͜͝e̸͚̫̗̤͓̰̳̬̰͝ͅç̛̰̤̞̳̝͔̮͜ͅe̵͚̫̖͇̟͝r̶̷̭̥͉̻̣̱̺̮̝̰̺̳̺̫̳̤̭ͅý̳͓͕͎͎̬͓͘͜.̴̶̢̛͇̭̣͉̦̖̦̞͖̹͕̲̦̻͈̺ͅͅ

We're Gods amongst the chattel. We--

Briefly, She consumes your individuality, as you consumed her's. You feel resentment. She doesn't share the memories that give her form, out of pettiness, or a desperate need to keep them safe-- to keep herself safe.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 11:02:08 pm
Alphira— see what your folly has wrought.  You have brought us to the brink of dissolution.  If we do not cooperate, we shall fade away.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 11:08:48 pm
My Folly?! You made us less than we are, you and the others. You have no claim here-- begone!

N̵̷̦̘̯̪̱͈̕o̸̶̭̖̦̰̰̼̝͠.̶̵̯̲̝̯͔̦̬͠Yourf̛̲̖͔̰̰͍͎͖̯̩͇̳̮͔͍̯̱̜̱́o͘͟҉̻̳̲̰͕̤͖͖͔̱̭̱̰͢͡l̨̤̱͕̪͔̝͓͘͜l̷̸̟̼̳͙͚̹͔̰̤̙̦ý̘̼̮̗̥̖̱̠̬̥͇͟.̧̖̪̳͙͈̳͚͕̲͈͕͖͡Ŝ̴͙̫̥̫̹̮͙͉͔̻͑ͭ̃̈́ͩͦ͐̄̀ͦ̏́̀̄̋͋̀̀iͭͨ̚҉̶͔̦͍̱̥̺̮̤̮̺̣́͢͢l̷̖̝͙͍͙̟̠̉ͩͦ͊̂̍ͨ̍̏͊ͩ͒͐͊̒̂̈ͩ̚͢͜͞ę̥͓̰̠̼̠̞͈̯͚͇͇̃ͯ̂ͤ̇ͬ̊ͮ̈̍̆̄͊̔̊̂̈̀͘͜͜ͅn̴̢͇͙̰͉̤̫̣̟͖̮͈̪͚̠͚͂ͣ͛̌ͮ͋ͫ̌̐ͅc̋͋̑͌̏̐ͮ̏̌ͤ̚̕͘͏̰̜̼͖̞̲̭e̴̛ͬͧ̇̊̓̌̾ͯ͜͏̗̣̳̭̭̙͈̱̮̟.̝̜͕̙̬̻̲̻̺͖̤͗̅͌̐͒͂ͤ́͊̋̎̾̋̔̋̅̿́̚̕ͅ

The anger retreats before the cold; shivering away and hiding.

C̴̨͕͖̘̮̻̗̥̮̬̲͇̮̫̣͔̺̗͉̲͑͛ͤ̒̔̈ͥͮ͘͟͠ơ̡̧͚̰̪̣̰ͩ̒ͨ͐͌̈̃̂́̚ơ̢̱̼͉͔̥̤̖͌ͧ͌̓͂ͯ͛̇ͯͯͫ͋p̶̡͚͖̙̘̰͕͍̗̀͋̋̓ͨ̎́̅̅̆ͬ̃͌ͯ͋͆̉͞͡ė̵̢͍̖̫̪͌̿ͧͭ̀ͅr̨̧̂̾̐́ͣ̋͑̋ͥ̽ͬ͊̉̋̓ͯͭͭ͏̨̝̹̲̰͇̜̤̩͚̥̼̻̪͔̯̯͢ā̢̧̗͙͇̦̥̫̪͉͗̋̊̏͐́͞t̺̬͇̹̰̼͎͓̭̿ͯ̂͌ͣͤ̒̉͂ͨͧͩ͐̿ͨ̀̀͘͠͡i̴͕͙̖̣̠̇̋ͥ̊̍̒ͦ͛ͫ̄ͩͧͥ̃̅̇̂͘͡ỏ̒ͪ͑̏̈̏̀ͯ͗ͯ͊͗ͬ̅҉̨̪̩͍̯͈̠͓̜͖̝͓̥͇n̮̬͉̝̤̺̱͔͚͈͍̳̔̑̀̃͐̋ͯ̈ͩ͢͞ͅ.̷̮̫͓͖͙̹̻̲͔̯̻͚̹̈́̋͐̈́̀̐͊̃ͯ͞

We win this war, we find him. Do you understand? I'll keep silent here, I'll let you have your heroism. But after this world, we find him. If...if he's truly dead...we avenge him. No more, no less. I will destroy us again if you fail to keep your contract.

You realize its presenting you with an offer.

The Patchwork girl looks on in silence, existence flickering. It's gone and then it's not, it fades and ebbs. A child watching adults squabble over it.


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 11:12:21 pm
I approve of this impromptu alliance.  If you follow through on the terms of our pact, I shall do the same.

Should you betray me... I will feed you to the darkness below.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 11:27:51 pm

Y̶̵̴̢̬̖̺̖̗̼̻͕̟̱͔͕͎̣͇̥̒ͪ͊͊̚ͅͅo̵̼̠͍̙̮̟̰͇͕̹͖̬͕̞̭̙̬̼͉ͫͫͬ̈̅̽̋͋͠͞͞u͉̻͖̰̦̩̺̘͒ͮ͂̓ͣͦ̃̈́̈̂̇͜ ̵̛͚̖̪̣̣̗͖ͥ̽̊ͬͦ͊ͦ͆̈́̀̕͞d̞̳͚͖̤̗̦̬̮̥̥̳̤̤̙̯̖̹ͪ̌̇̃ͦ̒̔́͋̓̌́̕͜͠ͅǒ̶̧̭̻̜͎̘̩̪̦͈͆̉͑̆̾̉̅͑ͤ̈̒͡ ̷̧̝̤̱̹̼͍̍́̾ͮ͌̈̌ͩ͟͢n̴̵̸̷̗͔̟͕̯̤̞̗͖̺̠͔̟͋͆͐̊̀ͥ̿̿̓̂̍ͧ́̓ͭ͠o̳͇̫̫̟̳͕͍̦͈͇̜͔̱ͤ̀̔ͪͭ̆̈́̽̈́̒̏͛͒ͫ͘͟t̸̫̥̹̭̠̠͉͎͓̲͕͂ͥ̉̒̅͆̃ͨ̓̓ͭͨ̕͢͠ ̧̓̈́̌̽̅́̑̏͊͊ͯͧ̕͏̺̭͖̮̫̺̗͉͉͙̩͖͓̗̤̘̼̪ͅs̛͗̇ͭ̄̋̅ͬ̚͏̴͕̞̪̘͕̯̣ͅͅp̵͙̼̗̫̰̟̍ͯ͑̈́̊̀͒̄̔̊̈́͂ͦ́̚ḛ̴̷̛͇͚̊̋ͨ̊̄͑ͬ̓͛ͤͤͮ͊́̚͠ä̧̛̞͖̺̦̲͓̥̟͍͓́͂̃ͭ̒ͪ̈͊ͨ̈̿̔̅̓ͣͦͮ̕͡k̸̴̡̛̺̺̤͍̘̩͎̪̎ͣͪ̿̊ͧ̅ͥ͑̾̚̚ ̸̣͇̝̦͖̄͋ͣ͒̂̽̓ͮ̾ͫͯ́̌ͩ͊͂̃̀̚̚͘͟f̺͍̲̠̙̮̭̰ͥͭ͌͛ͤ̌̽̔͌́̄ͩ͘͜͡o̡͌͛̽̑͑̆̐̎̑̐̀̓͒͏͚͇͇̭͕̳̞̖̯r̡̛͔͓̘̟͓̯͇͖͓̤̙̥͔̫̻͎͎ͣ̆͐̅̿̅ͥ ̞̗̥̯̠͍̭̙̰͂̑̿ͫ̑̀ͬ̉̇͟͟͝m̵ͬͣ̾̀̒͗̌͑̀ͦ͆̄̒ͥ̑̈̚͢͏҉̵̜y̖̩̙͈̠͉̺̿ͩͥͫͣ̔̈͆͋ͪͭ̚̕͠ ̢̖̭̹͍̣̼̺̗́̔ͭ̑͒ͮ͌͋ͫͯͨ͒̋͂̓̈ͫ͆͠ỉ̮̲͇̫̱̠͂ͫͭͬ̇̕͜n̸͉̺͖̬̥ͥ̈̑͆̃ͥ̈́͜͠͞ďͪ̊ͫ͠͏̛͉̗̖̳̪̣͎͙͈̼̙͞i̶͍̘̱̬̗̺̖̽̄̿̽ͥ̇͊̎̐͞ͅv̶̢̡͚̯̬̳̬̜̈̉ͪͬ̎̂͗͗͞ͅi̵̸͊ͨͮ̐ͤ̅ͯͨ͒͞҉̦̲̖̳͓͢ḑͬ͒ͫ̌ͭ̈ͭ̌̅͌̆ͨ̌̒ͬ́͏̹̝̥̰ų̴̫̯͚̫͖̜̙̦̮̙̣̮̪ͯͯ̓ͮ͒͢͞a͊̄̉̓ͩ҉̟̯̳̳̺̞͓̝͎̥̞͔̀͠lͧ͌͆̅ͬ̽̈̆ͧ̋̈́͒͛̏̌̌ͥ̌͋҉̺̹̮̞̯̟̹͈̺̫̘̟͎̩̪̹̣̞̭́i͗͌̊͒̈́͗ͭ̈́ͥͭͪͦ̽̊̍͊̌̚͡҉̷̫̪̖̳̬̰͍̬͍t̶̶̀̑̄ͮͯ̄̉͊͜͏̴̙̹͈̰͓̦͉̪̙y̢̢̟̹̠͔̜̥̱̏ͥ̔ͩ͒̑̅̑̒̀.̶͖̭̮̝̤̼̍͐ͬ̈́ͯͭͦ̈́͌͊͂ͫ̆ͭ̏ͫ͗ͯͅ ̐͂͆̉͗̒̎͛͒̆͆̄̔̾ͯ͛͋̏͠͡͏̮͇̪̱̻͚͎̹̭͚̘̫̣̝

You flee before the existence that gave you life as it begins to devour you like the hungry void it is-- then it stops, and you reclaim your senses, your existence.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 11:31:00 pm
Understood.  I will abide by your directives.  Does your individuality have a name?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 11:31:39 pm
Well hold up, I think we just regained consciousness.

Discern our surroundings.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 11:36:00 pm
Ņ̛̰̖̜̯̫̠̺̈͐ͩ̈̈́ͤ̀ͅǫ̶͕̥̣͋ͫͤͦ̀͘.̶̝͇̠̫͉̹͕̜͔̟̖̹̰̫͈̮́̄̍ͨ͒ͥͩ̊ͪ̔ͭ͒͆͂̾̆͑͑͠͝ͅ



It replies to all of you and everything. The patchwork girl shivers as the entity tightly embraces it.

It shares itself with you, with them- with us. You understand everything. You're currently under heavy sedation while damages in the brain are being repaired. You are under an immense amount of sedatives, your body processing them out at a more and more rapid pace.


Ă̧̠͖̹̦̹͖̼͎̤̦̐ͦ̑ͦ́̄͗ͭͤ̌̀l̢͍̹̭̰ͤͨͧ̍ͤ̉ͣ̓ͩ͆͛̆̋̚̚̕͟l̨͓̬̦̗͓̪̹̼͓͓̝̰̪̭̬͌̀ͤͩͯ̂͛ͥ͡͠͠ǐ̶̪̩͍̪̞̥̭̼̱̣̟̖͈̠͍͗͊͋ͪ͘͡͡ͅe̷̥͉̘̱̥̮̗̼̤ͮͫ̃ͧ͐̎͐̒̃͗ͯ͆͜ͅsͤͮ̆ͭ͂̽̄ͦ̋͊҉͙̱͍̖̠̝͕͖̙͢ ̶̵̧̱͖͔͓̻͇̓͛ͤ̐ͬ̍ͪ̿͌͂̃̒ͥ̑̂̂͂ͨ̀a̵̒̓ͤ̅̋͜͏҉̳̩̟̫̞̦̳́d̝͈̳̥̜̝̠̼̟̬̜̩̗̤͔̪̖͑͂̐̑̽̕͜͡͠mͥ̇ͨ͋ͬ͐̒̇͛ͯͩ̀ͪ͏̶̸͓͇̲͇̱̙̳̻̠͇̭͍̺̱͝i̷̛̜͉͍̲̬̞̳̙͂ͪͫ̇͌ͮ̓ͫ̅͊͊ͮ̚͠ͅn̢̢ͪ̏ͮ͆̓̓͒̓ͭ̎ͣ͐͗ͩ̿̀̆͂͝҉̺̖̹͖͎͉̺͇̪̺͎̖̙į̶̶̖̥͙͖͕͍͉͚ͧͥ̐̔̽̍͟s̛͓͈͉̰̰̠̞̮͇͚̼͎̰͓͙̅̏̋͞͝͞͠t̶̴̰͓̥͚̭̜͈̬̳̤̣̜͔̖͉̿͗ͥ̉̃͛̃̾̓ͩ̉̓͗͋̾́̈́ͣ͠ͅẹ͔̰̫͖̞̯̜̇̈́̐ͧ̃̀̑̆͑̀̕͜͞ͅr̷̖͚͎̯̘̻̻̖̽̎ͥ̀̅͛͐ͪ͛͗̚͘͘̕ͅí̟̺̝͚̘̗̹̼̩͈͔̥͉̍͛ͦ́́ͅn̛̟̝͉͕̥͍̙̝̘͍̽̐̐̚͘͢͝͝g̔̈́̾̈́̑͛ͨ͏̵҉̫̩̥̠̪͓̲̩̫̺̹̣̤ ̢̨̧̱̹̮̬̟͈͓͎̲͎͍̥͆͛ͥͤ͆ͤ͑̏̆̑ͫ̃ͯͯ̂͐̕ḩ̢̹͍͚̝̠̰̬̞̝̥̥̭̬̮̝̑̀̌̈́ͣ́̈́̂ͭ̆̒ͭ́̕e̷̩̦͍̫͚͚̙͚̰̔̈̀̅͐̓̒͛͗́͋̏̀̀ͤ̚͟͞ͅa̷̵͔̗͎͉̍ͬͩ͆͋͊ͩͪ̑̈́̾̀̔̇͋̓̎͡v̡̠̘̙͙̹̭͕̦̗̣ͯ͆ͯ͆̔̊ͫ̉ͪ͑ͦ͛̔͑ͬ̕͜ͅy̶̶̤̘̘̩̻͈̗̟̭̑͌͂ͯͯ̂̄̂ͯ͑̔ͦ̈́͑̾͐̈̀́ ͑ͮ͌̓̆̓͌͑ͤ̍̓ͬ̏ͤ̿ͣͯ͟҉̵͓̭̺̻͓͇̹̠͕͕͜s̵̴̜͓̱̖̤̳̖̰̓ͬ̄ͨ̀͒̾͠͞ę̸̭̺̜̙̹̱̾ͬ̿͒̿ͬ̀̀ͭ̈ͨ̏̅̍̒͂̽ͯd͒̔ͮ̃ͩ͗͆͑ͧ͌͌ͬ͊̚͏҉͈͓̯̟̱̹͇͎͖ͅa̛̰̮̫͇̩̪̮̪̬̦̪̓ͤ̅̅͂̍͐̾͟͢͠͞ͅtͧ̿̾̉̑̄̊ͨ҉̵̢̧̳̳͓͓̪̕ì̴̡̡̨̨̪̰̩̞̮̗͉͓̝̭͉̙̿ͭ͛̎̎̅ͮͨͥͬ̀̍͒ō̈́ͬ͛͂̾ͬ͐̎ͦ͗͐̍̕͏̴̫̣̹̻͙͕̗̣͕̮͍͍̣ͅn̒̊̓ͦ͗ͯ̔̒̇̓̏̊̀ͨ̎͋̈ͬ̅̕͞҉̖̘̤͉̜̜͓͔̤ ͦ͋̓̍͗̏̽ͪ̑ͪ̎͗̀̅͌͋̐͌̕͏̭̺̺͉̪̣̱̞̹̣̘͓t̨̥̥͙̬͍͔͍̮̼̠ͬͪ̑ͥ̓̍̄̽͜͞ọ̵̘̖̙̟̺̠͔̯̖͕̥̗̞ͯ̉͋̄ͤ̓͝ ̢̘̻̘̞̟̠̰ͮ̒̃ͨ͌̑ͬ̃̎̌͒̀̃̂̀͞s͛̄̄̆҉͏̤̰͉̜̞͎ţ͖̭͔̯̲͈̯̲̺͈̦͉̫̳̩̌͛̍̚͠o̵̧̡̯͈̊ͧ̓͛ͫͥ̽͐ͪͬ͋̿͝ͅͅp̷̷͔̤͈̣̥̣̜̝̟̙̯ͨͨͯ̌̃̔̓̏̊͆͂́̿͟͟͜ͅ ̨̳͎̭̱̗̖͕̺̻̺̜̩͇̲̯̿ͫ͊̃ͣ̆̉̓̃ͪ̚͡tͩͥ̊̃̂͏̶̪̥̹̥͇̘͕͚ͅh̢̘̥̺͓̲̖̫̰̗͚͕̲̦͍̱̦͓̫̥͒̋ͥ̈͌̇̀̕͢͟e̢̯̼̘͙̳̭̪̐ͨ̄ͬͤ̊̐̌̑͌̋̏̇̀͘̕ ̷̨͖̟̳̘͔̮̳ͩ̈ͩ͋̍͆̏͆̓̆̋̍̽͂̂̄̊̄̐͞ͅͅs̡̛̛̩̖̫̣͈͚̖̤͓̲̣̐̿̏ͩ͞ͅe̴̵̹͖̯̦̰̫̣͖̱̭͇̩͆̓͒ͭͯ̌̋̒͑̉̚ͅi͎̪̦̺̺̱̭̠̩͇̯̱̖̲ͫ̃͌́̋̀͒̃̑̚̚͜͠͡z̧͎̳̱̗̱̻͍̦̖̟͇̣͓̯̹̱̠ͩͣͨ̒̃ͦͨ̀̆͢͞ͅû̡̓͂͋̚̚͝҉̻̪̪̫̬̤̬̰̭̪͈̺͕̖͖̞̩ͅr̯̟̯̼̘̼̙̘̯̋̃ͩ̈́̊̒̎ͥ̚͟͢e̻̼̣̝̺̙̰͔̮͋ͭ̿̌ͫͣͧ̓ͧ̆ͪͨͨ̎͒̑͜͡͡ṣ̝̹͎͉͉̬̫͖̩̤͚̥ͯͨ̾͊̒́͜͞ ̵̶̡̦͇͚̠̠̼̩̙̥̗̯̰̯̱̹̓ͧͣͅo̵̢ͮͪ͛ͯ͆̔̓̽ͪ͒ͣ͛̔ͮͥ̇ͤ̚͡͏̭̩̭͓͚͖͓̣͈̺͔̩͎̠̤̗͟f̶̸̠̦̝̖̣͎ͩͬ͋͌̎͋͗̽ͣ͡ ̶̡̢̡̜̠̭̳̗͓̙̯̝̦̗͍͈͙̊̎̓ͤͤ̽̀̅̓ͅaͥ͆ͮ̅̿̈̉͢͏̙͖͖͎̜͎͎̳̝̻̱̘̯̠̖̭́ͅ ̨̭̰̱̮̬̖̹̟̗̘̦ͦ̏̽̿ͪͮ͢͟͟͡ͅd̶̗̭̱̫͉̼ͣͫ̄͋ͭ͐̂̐̎ͩͤ̍̚͘͢â̴̩̗̦ͫͦ̓ͬ̿ͨ́ͅm̶̢̧̛͓̬̮̞̯̪̦̖̺̠̝̲̹͍̫̮̱̜̌ͤ͌̀́̊̔̌͑ͦ̉̇ͣ̉ͯ͑̀ḁ̧̬̬̤͕̝̝͋̌ͤ̆ͦ͋̓̉̽̑̔ͨ̈́̔̈́͞͠g̷̢̧̥̹͈̲̤̣͍̥̖͉͉̋͋̏̐͂ͬ̒̋̄ͭ̀e̍͒̃ͬ̆̌ͮͧͩ̓ͪ̇ͦ̔̆͑ͨ̽ͮ҉̪̬͇̤̮́͢dͬ͒́ͭͫ̀̓̌̏̔͒̔͒ͭͮͮ̐̚͏̴̨̖̖͔̙̗͕̙̬̪͇̖͚͕̪̱ ̵̪̝̦̰̹͔͉͓͇̥̜̜͇̜̈̇͐̔ͧ̅̄̈́ͮͤ͜b̸̛͐̈́̑ͤ̿̍̆̄ͣͮ͑͗͑ͩ́҉̮͔̭̥͓͙̰͎̪̫̱̼͞ͅr̡͓̠̠͙͎̙̘̟̭ͧ̑̀ͭ̽͂̂ͦ̉̔̉͋̄͛ͮ̀͞ͅa̡̢̤̪̬̯̘̥̩̟̟̝̝̤͍̯̳̱̓̂̇ͪͣ̚̕͡i̶ͩ̀ͦ̾ͥ̎̿̄̎̄ͯ̀ͥ҉̗̞̹̱̯ņ̛͉̱̟̯̌͑ͨ̄ͤ̉ͬͨ̆͌͂ͮ̆̌́́͜.̵̢̯̼̮̝̞͙̣̭̻̲̻͉͚̲͖̓̃ͯ̄ͬ̒̈́̒̈́͑̌̌ͤ̉̇̀ͅ


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 12, 2020, 11:44:09 pm
"I suppose that's that, then... nothing left but questions." (We'd sigh if we were corporeal right now.)
"What does the name 'Alphira' mean to you?"
"̸W̵h̸a̶t̸ ̷d̸o̵ ̸y̵o̷u̷ ̴k̷n̵o̵w̵ ̴o̴f̸ ̷S̵E̸E̶D̶?̸"̷
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 11:50:37 pm
Recommend transferring a majority of remaining caloric resources to the repair of the brain.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2020, 11:54:12 pm
What does the name ----------"It speaks your name, your true name, the name of your soul, and it hurts. It calls to mind a savage world tamed with patience, and care, and honor. A life with loved ones, taken by age and time.

It hurts you.


Ç͉̭̘̜͓͘̕e̸̷̵̠̭̣̦̦̱̗̤͉̣̣͎̜̤̩͜ͅà̴̧̧̖͕̠̜s͏̸̵̱̲͚̜̩̮͓͈͓ẹ̩͎͎͚͙̟͘͠ͅ,͏̨̹͔̟̪͔̬̩̼̼̫̘͡ and it does. IT does not reply to your question, a bristle of cold reaching out towards you with hostile intent.

Recommend transferring a majority of remaining caloric resources to the repair of the brain.

F̪̰̣̘̭u̷̮̥ŕ̘t҉̦͚̗̗h̗̻͉̻͔̠̜er ̴̰͎s̩͇̞̱̘ͅta͙͚̼̖͚r͙̥̬̟̘͙̪v̫̖̫͍͡ḁ̥̖ti̬͎̗͓̪o̰͚̖̖͎͍̥n̹̕ c̳͉̣͔̩̯o̥͓̝͟u̥̳͎̹̞͢l͇̟̹d̟͓̤̤̮͉͡ͅ ͓̝͖̻̝̰r̙̰e̮̯͙̳̤s͕̣̯̩̣̮u̠ͅḽ̮ţ.̠̝̬̖̥̦̝̕ ҉̮W͍̮̺͇͇̫͚͟e͉̝̟̭̲͢ͅ'҉̭̻̭̳̜ḻ̨͈̪̩l͖̫ ̛̬̭̟b̧̫̥̲̩̹e̺͔̳̬ͅ ̱̖ͅu҉n̥̹̬̗͓͢f̨͖̻̞̹͔i̞̠͎t̟̙̜̥̞̰ͅ ͇̱̕f̧͖̞͓̜o̟ŗ͈͈ ̡̹̭̱͇̺̹̮c͈̹̣͍̯͕̝ǫ͕̼m̹b̶̩͖a͕t̘̠͍͉͈ ̲̬̟͍͟f͠o͏̞̘̱̱r͡ ̲̬̰̼-̡̤͇-̟̙ ̡1̥8̭̝̻͈̥̹ͅ0̱ ̯̻͔d͙͚̳̯̠̮̀a̷̯̣͔͙̲̗̤y͕̮̹s̟͍͈̩͇͍͙͢.͍̳̲͇ All in favor?

Aye.

Y-yes.

The anger lashes out at the patchwork process-- but the cold void embraces its daughter tightly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2020, 11:58:55 pm
Aye.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 12:00:06 am
This... leaves me with more questions than answers. Ah well.

"Was I... was I ever human?"

Heal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 12:05:00 am
Its a question you ask yourself, and not the others. They do not question their identity yet-- but you do. And you find out why-- it hurts, a self-inflicted wound. Lovers with names un-remember flit into existence and fade to obscurity, while you remain. Your family grows and fades with the rise of the world. You remain, a guard at a lonely post.

Y͡͡҉̟͉̲̥̖ę̛͜͟҉̱̺̬̫̺̝̬͍̩s̷̶̛̩̹͔̳͔̼͍̙̬͓͢͟.̮̹̞̘̤̫̳̰̗͓̼̱͠ ̰̬͎͚̜̟̦̲͇͕̮̻̫́Ò̧͉͙̗̗͓̬̯̦͍̼͔͖̩͕͇̣͇̯̫͜ń̡̙̮̱̜̝̗͓̹̦l̷̷̞̯͎̟̦̺̮͎̻̺̪͇͓͜͞ͅy̵̴̛͚͕̥͉̪̣̻͖͚̯͈͈̳͙͔͖̖̯ͅ ̨̛͕̩̹̭̥̞̟͖̻h̴̴̰̩̝̫̰͎̮̘̳̜̲̜͎̪̞̳͜ͅṵ̭͕̗͜m̷̸̷͎̥̘̰̙͚̰͡ͅą̴̻̹̩͚͔̺̱̱̲͔̫̘͚̹̼͉͔ͅṇ̛͕̬͔̱̠̬̮̙̟͔͚͡.̸̼̭̬̼̹̤̬̝̭̣͢ͅͅ


God. We are gods, and these worlds are our playgrounds.

O̦̻̰̣͖̟͙̩͢͝n̢͇͖͇̗͚̬͉̪̬͖͕̻͎̩͢͠l̸̵̛͉̠̙͚͔̲̬̝̭̞̠̥͠͝y̡̛̻̞̹̻̼͕̖̳͎͔̬̭̺̰͔͍̞͡ ̡͏̫̱̥͍̲͉͖͖͉͔̻̹̖͕̥͞h̴̴͚̤̖̣̞͉̞̞̟͇̻͇͙̰́͟ͅu̡̘̱̪̦̺̤̼̪̦̭̮̜̳̜̘̥̯̞ͅm̷̘̞̤͟͠a̸͓̖̠̫̬n̢̩̫̥̬̳.̷̴͏̫̮̩̠̭̪͓̰͍͙͟͜
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 12:10:57 am
What created the amalgam that forms our existence?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 12:15:30 am
T̡̢̛͈̩̤̖̫̝̮͎̙͓̯̩̟̘̳̭̗͡ͅr̨̧̥̫͙̤̲̘̻͎̖̖̯͎̼̥̕͡a̡҉̻̬͉͇͔͚̳̗̦̙̤̟̣́u̜͙̯̙̝̳̬̻̺͚͔̳̭͠͝m̸̢̨̛̦̜͕͔̹̯̖̦̕a̸̡͚̦͖̜͖̪̼̲̦͞͞.̷̶͍̙̘̦͈̪̮̗͈̖̣̟͚͝



Ą̵̢̢͚̘̝͈̲̫͇̯̩͇͕̳̻͍̦̱͚̞͜ ͏͓͖̬̥͟b҉̷̜̠̳̘̯́͜r̨̺̖̥̟̝̩͕̤̖̻͘o̧͈̦̝̰̜͎̙͚͙k҉̬̼̭͇̺̖͙̹̗̦̹̯̥͉͚̮͍̕͡ę̸̷͚͔̜̯̗̤͔̳̳͖̣̥͈̫̹̳͉͎̭͡ṇ̨͍͈̝̪͙͈̗͖͔̹̻͍̻̦̬̦̖ ͞҉̧̮͈͚͈͖̗̪̥͔̩͉̤͙̣͢ͅc̛͙͚̗̺̮̠̱̙̺̤̰͟͝͝o̸̯̩̫̻̫̪̣̜̫̱͕͚͚̖͖̩̘͝n͏̷̺̲̼͍̣͕͍͉̩̖̟̖͚̝ͅt̴͚͔͚̗̩̱̖̬̳̭͍͈͇̖͙͔̞̀̕͟ͅͅŕ̴̪͇̫͎̺̹͇̘̲̘̺̀ͅa̢̧̨̛̼̝̳̪̝̲̯̪̦̯͇̬͖͔͉͜c̡̧̜̟̻̻̫̙̳̞̫̭͉̙̺͞t̵̡̛͓̫͕͈͕̹̥̭̝͕̳̳̯̬ͅ.̩̰̞̪̪̪̪̣̠̖̣̗̭̲̮̀͠͞




The anger hides away, ashamed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 12:27:57 am
Hmm.  I'm not sure what more to ask.

Is separation into individualities possible?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 01:02:45 am
"Trauma... I remember that. Endless [insects]. A brother slain."
"And a broken contract... we were to kill SEED! Was that, then, the "contract" we broke?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 01:28:25 am
I think this may be relevant:

Quote from: Reflections on the VOID
[?] The next is a forbidden work, only for reference to deal with heretics, as the branding on the front states. You notice, after straining your eyes some, that it is written in a Scholar's Tongue that you would not have access to while attending the Academy. So, you do what any self-respecting scholar does, and read on. It supposes that the living SEED is not the true master of the Cosmos, but rather an ancient evil. That the true master of the universe is an entity representing the void between worlds, which even the SEED cannot conquer, despite its struggles. There's no evidence that it presents to prove this theory, and you cast it aside with a sigh.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 01:40:04 am
T̷̵̺̦̲̞̥̟̤͙͎̼̰̀͟͠h̸̶̴͙̭̼͚̕͞e̷̡͎̠̯̝͈̖͎͔̥͈̞̝͓͙̻̠͚͡ ̵̵̖̝͕͕̖͕͞ͅE̶̢̼̰̣̺̮̗͙͍̬̩͉͇͕̭̖̩̹͉̩͢͠ḿ̨͠͏̣̣̱̰͓͍͈p͇̗̱̖̪͖̻̲̪̫̱͢y̸̬̹̲̜͡r̡͔̙̜̣͙̼̞̦͓͢͟͠e̛̛̻̬̟͈̝̥̪̜̠͎͙̭̹̹̕͝a̛҉̻̥̝̟̗͇̥̭͈͔̻̤̗͉̦͍̯͠ĺ̗̟̩͕̣̮̩͎͝00
T̥̱̗͝͠ͅh̶̸̭̠̜͓̲͘͟ę̷̵̧̭̖̜̻͇̀ ̞͙͇̩̦̠̤͔̤̤̝̀͠Ḛ̛̤̫̲͓̫̗̻̭͕͟͢͝ņ̢̛̤̼͈̹̗̤̻͎ͅḓ̨̻̦̖͈͓̻͉̬͇̭̀̕͟͡ͅͅl̸͎̣̼̖̼̞̲͉̻͇͇͍̺̗̜̱̀̕ȩ̵͈̙̠̹̙̠͉̹̱̗̜̗̠͖̹͙ş̷̬̩̥̥͞͡s̵̷͏̞̪͈͓̫̞̙̹͖͔̩̟͚̠̤̯̼ ̶͏̲̭̯̲̥̖̣̮͙̘̦E̡͎̪͈̣͚͇̯̭̰̻̞͜m̧̧̹̯̥͇̻̥͚̯̭͚̝p͏̷͚̻̩̠̻͉̙̫̼̕ͅe̲͕̘̫͓̜̜͕͙͙̬͝͡r̶̸̯̤̫̦̫͕͖͔̬̘͍̼̻̤͇͍̼̕͘͢ớ̧͓͉͕̬̣͝ŗ̴̡͍͖̬̬͓͚͉͍̰̖͙̠̹́.͚͉͖̮͓̥̱̬̀͘ͅ
.̱̮̠̜̩̱͈̺̦͡͠

No.

The darkness within stirs at the description, and you feel loyalty. Service. Honor. Duty. Loyalty. Service. Honor. Duty. It repeats, filling you with warmth at the harsh name.

I̟͕̮̙̥͠ͅn̘̰̖͖̗̮̝s͇̳̠̣̱ͅu̹̝̖͖̹̖͚f̙̳̘͈͘ͅf̢i̠͚̰͉̦̦c̡͇̮̘͕i͓̭̙̘̭͓͟e͙̯̳͜n̴̠͔̠̻̳ͅt̤̻͖̖̞͔̫ ҉̱̯̤̘̘ͅd̨͖̩̼̜̯a̵̠̬̠t̺̳̟a̛̺̻c̳̠ͅo̗̠̗̼͕n̛̩̗̱c̴͖̺̤͎̻̣͓e̫̜͇̭̖̬͠r̨͙͔n̪̘͍͓͔i̶̗ņ̣̻ǵ̠ͅ ̸͍̜̟S̪͕͚͢E̺̫E̩̱̟̻̺̫̘D̗͠.̠͓͟ ̘F̱͓̩u͔̻͓͉r͙͓̣̩̞̲ţ̦̜̟̙̘ͅh̲̦̟̼e̦̥̻͓r̟ ̡̗̯͙̹i̴̹n̷̠̖̟͖̮̳̼v̬̥̤̯e̖̦̣͇̹̺s̖̩͖̦̝͘t͈͕̦͕͞i̩̞̜g̴a̻͕̞ͅt̫̹i̴o̷̝̝͙͔̰͈n̞͙͈̤̭ ̼͍̲̳rḙ̷͎͉̫͉ͅq͎̣͇͖͖̖͘ͅų̘̲͖̜̱̲i̡̻̘r̼̻̹͓e̼d̜̖̲͢ͅ.̹͕̩̯
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 01:49:35 am
How can we return to the service of the Empyreal?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 02:21:58 am
((To the people who have more questions, or weren't here, send them to me a pm, and they will get responses! Not clear ones, but clear enough! Or don't. I'm not a cop. I'll post these when they're compiled.))


O̸̡͏̸͉̩̜͖̜͕̞̪̘͕͎ù̷̶͍͉̩̞̟̪͡͝ŕ͚̱̝͚̙̠̻̹̞̣̻̲̙́͞͡ ̜̠͇͙̠̘͚̱͇̝̼͡ḑ̨͏̮̘͍̹͢u͏̸̰̘̭͚ͅt̡̛͉̯͍̬̗͖̺̀̕ͅy̢̹̜̼͔̬͙̟̩̥͍͓̘͕̳̹͔̭͍̳̕ ̢͏̯̞̜̹̫̭i̸̵̮̥̩̰͚̺̱͕̩ś̷̴̶͓̣̖̺͉̦̤̭͈̹͍͎͇̹̭͘ ̷̡̪͖̞̝̭͟t̤͎̙͖̠̜̮͕̜͕͟ͅo͏̢͇̖̘͔͎̠̠̝͔̤ͅ ̴̧̞̠͈̙̦̜͚̟ͅs̶̹̪̜̪̻̱̹̠͡é̶̡͏̘̩͙͎̻r̷̦̥̳̭͔̻̀͟͠͝v̷̨̯͓̫̣͖̀͘e҉̢̡͓̗̫̼̤̖̼̩́ͅ ̢̡̨̲̠̩̙̼̮͖̠̝͜h̡̛̥̩͔̜̠͔̹̞̟͓̕ų̨̕͝͏̞͔̼͙̼͖͉̬̮̭̻̺̳̱̺͙̬͈ͅm̨̡̦̫͚͕̭͈͕̱̬̲͖̦̙͉̹̥ą̸͍̠̝̟̘̺̻n̕͏̹̤̯͕̗̻̤̟̞̙̯͈̥̘į̪̘̰͚́͟t͉͈̟̜̯̖̫̟͕̣̰̖͎͙̗̥̀ͅy̶̢̠̰͕̝̜̬͕̘̥̩͍̠͎͈̤̩͓ͅ.̢̛͈̫̱̘͚͕̲̝͚̩̻̯̞̜͖̙

Our duty is to our father.

[-]Emma breathes softly beside you, sleeping. Her long legs hang off the edge of the bed, her blond hair a tangled, greasy mess. There are bags beneath her eyes. You try to shift closer, only to realize that tight plastic cuffs bind you to the bed. Three cameras oversee you, and a remote turret tracks your movements.

Your head pounds painfully.

Emma is startled awake by your movement, scrambling to turn over and face you.

She brushes your hair from your face, smiling, starting to cry. She gives you a painful hug. You feel her muffled sobs through the green shift you wear, fell the moisture of her tears.

"You're alive-- you're alive. Thank SEED, you're alive."

The room is an off-green, an ugly shade. The place shines with cleanliness, and your bed is the only furniture. A stand with sophisticated machinery feeds fluids into your body, monitoring your heart rate. It beats at a sedate twenty-five. Your oxygen level is also being monitored-- the machine displays an error sign there.

You're hungry. So hungry. You've lost weight and muscle, examining your bony arm as you softly stroke the sobbing Emma.

The only door opens with a pneumatic hiss. Two heavily armed and armored soldiers enter the room, flanking a thin man in a bright green coat. He looks uncomfortable as he approaches. Mother Nicole drifts in behind him, hesitating for a split second before moving to your side. Heavy bags fill the space beneath her eyes, and she looks drawn, haggard.

The Doctor fusses with you, checking your reflexes the best he can in your restrained state. Emma and Mother Nicole are brought chairs, which they gratefully take.

The Doctor seems unsure but takes his leave with a mumbled apology. The soldiers stand at a grim watch. The safety isn't on with their las-rifles, the gun's reactors humming against your awareness.

"Pheobe?" Mother Nicole speaks first, Emma still fighting the sniffles, "How do you feel, dear?"

"Starving." Is the first word you croak. Emma laughs a shrill little giggle. Even Mother Nicole smiles a little. She looks up at the camera. "Food will be on its way, dear."

You don't know what to say now.


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 02:31:17 am
"I dreamt of strange voices.  Grandmother, who are the Empyreal?  Who is the Endless Emperor?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 02:32:44 am
I'd rather wait a moment to bring up the voices, but this

"Grandmother, who are the Empyreal?  Who is the Endless Emperor?"

is as good a way to get things rolling again as any. +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 02:49:23 am
[-]Mother Nicole only looks confused, and increasingly worried. Emma also looks worried, reaching out to take hold of your hand tightly. She's shaking a little, whether out of fear or hunger, you cannot tell.

"I-I don't know?"

She's telling the truth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 02:54:23 am
"I'm sorry.  I'm still a bit disoriented.  Where am I?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 02:56:17 am
"I'm sorry.  I'm still a bit disoriented.  Where am I?"

And another +1
while I try to figure out how to properly apologize for and explain... all of this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 03:02:52 am
[6] "A secured facility in the Holy City." Mother Nicole looks uncomfortable, glancing up at the camera. "A state of the art hospital. They converted a wing to house you."

[13]Emma glares daggers at Nicole, giving your hand another little squeeze, offering, softly, "She had them bring you here, they...they were worried about you. Your health." She doesn't sound too sure. The guards also speak volumes in their grim silence and heavily armed state. Emma finishes, finally, bluntly, with a dark look. "They were worried about you, not for you. They drugged you more than they should have, they did tests on you, they let you have seizures, they've done everything but treat you!"

"Emma." Mother Nicole snaps, finally returning the young woman's glare.

"What are you going to do, imprison me?!" Emma snaps back with a snarl, shifting to her feet. The guards move as well, stepping closer.

[9]"Separate you." Mother Nicole warns, bluntly, "Don't blame me for this!"

"She was fine before you showed up. Better yet, she was happy. There's no one better to blame."

The two stand in silence, staring each other down. The guards look uncomfortable, inching closer to protect Mother Nicole. There's a slight hesitation to their step. Mother Nicole doesn't respond, looking back to you and ignoring Emma.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 03:11:06 am
Perhaps something like:

"No, this is my fault.  I shouldn't have snapped like that.  I was just so angry... I felt like I was losing my chance at a happy life.  It was a close thing, but I just barely managed to retain a bit of control.  I'm sorry that I hurt you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 03:14:21 am
Ho-kay. Rambling feverish speechification, go!

"--My fault. Not hers."

"All the memories I lost two years ago, Mother Nicole, all the memories I couldn't find when we first met-- they came alive and angry back there, and they spoke, and they tried to-- try to take me"

"and I wouldn't let them. I promised you when we met I wouldn't listen to voices in my head, Mother Nicole-- remember, remember that? So I didn't, and then... I don't know. I don't know."

'But I'm remembering things now, grandmother"
"and I nearly know what I am now, grandmother"
"and I'm not a [demon], grandmother"
"and that means so much to me"
"and I'm sorry. I didn't mean to hurt either of you. I'm sorry. I couldn't hurt either of you. I'm sorry. This wasn't your fault. I'm sorry. You were right to bring me here. You were right."

...

"I... I must look terrible right now, yes? I think I had to eat my body to feed my brain..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 03:29:54 am
That works.

Ho-kay. Rambling feverish speechification, go!

"--My fault. Not hers."

"All the memories I lost two years ago, Mother Nicole, all the memories I couldn't find when we first met-- they came alive and angry back there, and they spoke, and they tried to-- try to take me"

"and I wouldn't let them. I promised you when we met I wouldn't listen to voices in my head, Mother Nicole-- remember, remember that? So I didn't, and then... I don't know. I don't know."

'But I'm remembering things now, grandmother"
"and I nearly know what I am now, grandmother"
"and I'm not a [demon], grandmother"
"and that means so much to me"
"and I'm sorry. I didn't mean to hurt either of you. I'm sorry. I couldn't hurt either of you. I'm sorry. This wasn't your fault. I'm sorry. You were right to bring me here. You were right."

...

"I... I must look terrible right now, yes? I think I had to eat my body to feed my brain..."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 04:03:59 am
[-] The cameras watch as you babble your apologies suddenly in an incoherent mess. Mother Nicole listens intently, looking surprised. Emma, on the other hand, just looks more confused. All her righteous anger vanishing in a flash. Her concern instead replaces all the other emotions. Your grandmother on the other hand just looks tired.

"I--you don't--" Mother Nicole trails off into silence, breathing a heavy sigh. "My intentions were less than kind bringing you here, Pheobe. I'm not going to lie to you." Emma takes her time to look triumphant. "You were not yourself. You--"

The door swings open, and a frail man with paper-thin skin enters slowly. Mother Nicole stands quickly at attention, as do the guards, momentarily taking their eyes off of you. A dark impulse thrums within you--you could break your restraints if you were quick enough.
You don't, however, instead taking the time to look at the newcomer. He's old. Older than Mother Nicole. An attendant sets down a chair for him, and he sinks into it with a soft sigh of exertion.

[10]"I'm Crusader General Thomas Harrdy." He rasps. Mother Nicole reclaims her seat, looking uncomfortable in the presence of a superior. "Pheobe Gainer, is it? I must say, I was impressed by your skills, both at the academy, and your extra-curricular activities. You're not a [demon], you say? I find that hard to believe. The holy SEED itself only learned of your existence when you arrived here."

"It is by its order's alone that we didn't put a hole between your eyes and be done with it." The Crusader General speaks as if commenting on the texture of a cookie he didn't like. "Mother Nicole's proposal swayed it for you. If she had submitted it sooner, then perhaps we wouldn't be in this situation now."

"So, tell me girl, what are you, if not a [demon]?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 04:09:45 am
"It is hard to say, sir.  My best guess is that my body is a castoff of an advanced civilization known as the Empyreal, and my consciousness is an amalgamation of several other entities, including some type of void intelligence.  Regardless, however, I am committed to the Great Work, and I hope to be able to continue to serve."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 13, 2020, 06:00:06 am
"It is hard to say, sir.  My best guess is that my body is a castoff of an advanced civilization known as the Empyreal, and my consciousness is an amalgamation of several other entities, including some type of void intelligence.  Regardless, however, I am committed to the Great Work, and I hope to be able to continue to serve."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 13, 2020, 06:28:12 am
"It is hard to say, sir.  My best guess is that my body is a castoff of an advanced civilization known as the Empyreal, and my consciousness is an amalgamation of several other entities, including some type of void intelligence.  Regardless, however, I am committed to the Great Work, and I hope to be able to continue to serve."
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 04:16:43 pm
[13 vs 16][3] You start to speak, trying to explain what you've discovered to the General, but he cuts you off after you say the word 'Empyreal'.

"Everyone leave. Cut the cameras."

Everyone stares for a moment, and Emma refuses. She's not so kindly hauled out by one of the guards. You strain against your bindings, and can feel the reinforced plastic begin to crack. Thomas seems unconcerned.

"As a Scholar you are bound to keep secrets, Child Pheobe. Or have you forgotten that?"

You feel...strange admitting your existence isn't natural.

He raises his hand, frowning. "Keep that in mind before you speak. What is your purpose and what do you think the Great Work is?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 04:46:03 pm
"I apologize, Crusader General.  I was not aware that I was disclosing information that would be best kept secret.  My purpose... I was told it was to serve humanity.  As for the Great Work, is it not to spread the Church's teachings and promote the influence of the Holy SEED?"

Continue to weaken the bindings, but quietly.  Scan the room for exits.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 04:56:59 pm
Slight revision, based on the wording of our old contract

I, Apprentice __________________________, promise to uphold my contract to the best of my abilities, accepting all benefits and punishments accordingly. I swear to promote the Great Work in all its efforts; to bring life to this barren world and to eradicate the [demons] that would seek to hinder it.

"I apologize, Crusader General.  I was not aware that I was disclosing information that would be best kept secret."
"My purpose... I was told it was to serve humanity.  The Great Work... we are to bring life to the world, yes? To destroy the [demons] that assail it?"


I'd rather not be struggling right now. Would come off as a show of ill faith.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 04:58:33 pm
Slight revision, based on the wording of our old contract

I, Apprentice __________________________, promise to uphold my contract to the best of my abilities, accepting all benefits and punishments accordingly. I swear to promote the Great Work in all its efforts; to bring life to this barren world and to eradicate the [demons] that would seek to hinder it.

"I apologize, Crusader General.  I was not aware that I was disclosing information that would be best kept secret."
"My purpose... I was told it was to serve humanity.  The Great Work... we are to bring life to the world, yes? To destroy the [demons] that assail it?"

I'd rather not be struggling right now. Would come off as a show of ill faith.

That seems fair.  +1.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 05:50:59 pm
[12]The Crusader General taps his fingers together, watching you intently. He's thinking. Contemplating you. The silence hangs in the air. He slowly leans forward in his chair, and asks, very calmly, "And is that you're true name, Pheobe? Does that contract truly apply to you, or did you falsify the information you put on it?" The turret is tracking you, you realize, every twitch, every movement, it shifts accordingly, so that the barrel is aimed straight at your head.

"Contract breakers are the worse kind of scum, anywhere you go. An oath is meant to be kept, and making one in bad faith is a worse crime than murder, in my eyes."

"So, is Pheobe Gainer your real name, your true name?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 05:54:30 pm
"Though I am composed of discrete entities with different names, we have agreed that the gestalt collective shall be known as Phoebe Gainer.  Thus, I have in good faith bound myself to the Church."

Not sure if we should lie or tell the truth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 13, 2020, 05:57:02 pm
Deleted, vote is below
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 06:27:49 pm
Hm... let's mention a little bit of memory loss, a little bit of good faith and honor.

"It was... the closest thing I had."

"I didn't know my old name when I signed that contract-- I'd lost it with everything else! So I picked a new name, a bright name to know myself by, and I took Mother Gainer's name for my own. It was just an appellation at the time, but since then... well, it's become my tie to humanity. I could not possibly discard it."

"Phoebe Gainer is my name now, Crusader General, and Mother Nicole is my adoptive grandmother. I signed that contract as best I knew how, and I am bound to it in truth."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 13, 2020, 06:29:17 pm
Hm... let's mention a little bit of memory loss, a little bit of good faith and honor.

"It was... the closest thing I had."

"I didn't know my old name when I signed that contract-- I'd lost it with everything else! So I picked a new name, a bright name to know myself by, and I took Mother Gainer's name for my own. It was just an appellation at the time, but since then... well, it's become my tie to humanity. I could not possibly discard it."

"Phoebe Gainer is my name now, Crusader General, and Mother Nicole is my adoptive grandmother. I signed that contract as best I knew how, and I am bound to it in truth."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 06:44:44 pm
The voices soothe you with their words, with the kindness of acknowledgment, and you speak openly and plainly with the Crusader General.

[20]The Crusader General leans forward, and with a key produced from his ornate robes, he uncuffs you from the bed. He rises, shuffling over to do the same for the other side. "Bring in a wheelchair." He shouts. And the door swings open. Emma rushes back into the room, scared and confused. Her body slumps with relief upon seeing you intact.

The guard isn't gentle when she lifts you from the bed and deposits you into the chair. Emma moves to push it for you-- only for the guard to slap her hands away with a grunt and take control of your mobility. A faint part of you bristles at the indignity of the situation, but you consider how you got the spins from being lifted up and allow yourself to be pushed down the long halls of the hospital. Guards are posted around every quarter, each are heavily armed and armored, and watch the procession with hostile intent.

The Crusader General and Mother Nicole don't seem to put them at ease.

"Where am I going?" You ask, softly, as you're lead into the fresh air of the outside, towards a waiting hover-craft. Sounds of a bustling city reach your ears, but the enclosed walls let you see none of it. The two guards have to lift your chair up and into the craft, and Emma claims a seat beside you, fidgeting uncomfortably. You reach out and take her hand, giving it a firm squeeze, and she smiles at you. Mother Nicole sits across from you, concerned.

"Wherever I want you to, Daughter Pheobe. But, for now, you have an audience with SEED. I wanted to wait another week, but according to the Doctor, continuing to starve you would be detrimental to our war efforts."

The shift lifts off, and you feel at peace. Consciousness is hard to keep, but the weight of acceleration gives you something to focus on.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 06:46:53 pm
Nicely done.  This should be an informative meeting.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 07:02:23 pm
No kidding.

"Yes... you say you spoke with SEED on my behalf, grandmother? That means a lot to me... thank you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 13, 2020, 07:08:35 pm
No kidding.

"Yes... you say you spoke with SEED on my behalf, grandmother? That means a lot to me... thank you."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 07:40:53 pm
Saner minds prevailed.


"I...did not speak with SEED. That is above me by many leagues, Pheobe. It took all the resources I had just to get the action plan viewed. If...if you fail..." Mother Nicole trails off into silence, uncomfortable with the attention that the Crusader General fixes her with.

[-] THe trip is over sooner than you think, and you're unceremoniously unloaded and set down onto the smooth concrete surface. Your head swims as you look over where you are. You stand on a platform, towering over a massive city that stretches out towards the horizon. The dimming sun shines over the ornate gold livery that adorns nearly every surface. Great etchings of significant historical and religious events are everything. They are a great many words, and formulas also adorned on every surface, describing a great many processes.

The city that stretches out beneath the platform is truly massive. It hums with life, with action. Slow-moving hover ships drift between towering skyscrapers-- none of which you can see the foundations of. People bustle about, all adorned in clean, flowing robes. Crusaders patrol in full battle gear, and in one of the elevated plazas sits an array of turrets, angled towards the sky.

You are bustled into a small room, separated from Emma and Mother Nicole without ceremony. The way you are dressed, however, is. You are carefully bathed, decontaminated in a special chamber, and an older female attendant dresses you with the help of a burly man. A necklace is placed around your neck, and the wheelchair is...also bathed and decontaminated following the same protocols.

You smell clean like soap and perfume. The robe is comfortable, flowing, and immaculate, threads of gold weaved into the white cloth, and the jewels glimmer in the light.

You are wheeled into an antechamber as ornate as every room you passed through. This room is different-- great panels of jade are inset into dark metal, gold and silver threads radiating outward. The accumulation of years of wealth are on display. Two guards, clad in heavy, dark robes, emerge from the same door you do. One pushes your chair, the other keeps a bright, teal las-rifle pointed at you. At his belt hangs a hilt that hums with a powerful reactor.

It fascinates you, and you catch yourself staring at it. Somewhere, an alarm chimes, and the door opens itself.

It leads to a massive domed room. Everything is covered in a fine layer of silver and gold, the bright lights suspended like gems from thin wires almost too small to see. At the center of it all is a table cut from jade, with a hole cut in the center. Machinery spirals out and up, out from the floor and through the center of the table. You do not have to be an expert to tell that it is old. The metal itself is unlike you've ever seen, a strange dark gray that seems to absorb the light around it. Lights blink on its length.

"[leave]."

The guards bow, turning with a billow of their robes and leaving you alone. Translating the voice makes your head hurt, the way it speaks is so...foriegn. So old, that your ability to keep up is hard to maintain. It is archaic to even the most archaic of tongues. Impossibly old. Too old.

"Pheobe Gainer. [purpose?]"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 07:49:52 pm
"[The service of all mankind. So wills my father.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 07:53:11 pm
"[The service of all mankind. So wills my father.]"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 07:56:13 pm
Hm, I'm curious now... just how much grammar can we even get away with speaking this tongue? Can we manage complete sentences, or will we have to speak in little snippets as SEED does?

For that matter, can we speak it at all or can we only translate?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 08:09:33 pm
"[service]," is all you can muster, before a painful throb nearly knocks you out, you go slack in the chair, breathing hard, if you had more energy, more...anything, you could probably continue to converse.

"[reduce strain]." And you still cannot tell where the voice is coming from-- to the front of you? To the sides? Your headache makes it hard to focus on any one sound.

"The...the service of all mankind. So wills my father."

"[truth.]"

SEED doesn't speak next and you rest, gripping the chair hard enough to crack the plastic, holding yourself awake.

"[advanced signs of starvation. concern.]"

It goes silent, not responding to any of your words, and for a second, fear creeps over you. A robed figure hobbles in, carrying a strange length of metal. It lays it before the altar, retreating. From within the bundle of metal something shifts, flowing up organically. It resembles something like a silverfish, but you've never seen a silverfish with a welding apparatus. The silverfish works quickly, attaching the tube to the bundle of machines.

"Better, [affirmative]?"

You nod. The nature of speech is different too, more organic, more flowing. Less abrupt, less filled with useless strings of linguistic code that do nothing to help with your burning headache.

"Your patience is appreciated. I did not estimate your weakness to be so advanced as to lose translating capabilities. What is your purpose on-- [mͤ̂ͤͤ͛̄̎̓y͐̚] planet, designation Pheobe Gainer?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 08:15:17 pm
"I don't know why I was sent here, as I've lost my memories, but I hope to help the Church and lead a happy life.  I certainly don't want to interfere with this planet of [thine]."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 08:31:48 pm
"I don't know why I was sent here, as I've lost my memories, but I hope to help the Church and lead a happy life.  I certainly don't want to interfere with this planet of [thine]."

+1

"...But this world needs more than that, doesn't it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 08:38:52 pm
[5]SEED is silent. The silverfish is tweaking the machinery here and there, and there's a small spark before it fixes something upon it.

"Affirmative."

It waits, before supplying a continuation to its statement.

"Your kind killed many of mine. Suspicion. Your [Endless Emperor, Empress] orders my destruction. What is your plan of action?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 08:42:20 pm
"I believe that my kind cast me away.  If true, I have no love for them.  I will fight to protect this planet, my new home, and those that dwell here.  Can you tell me of our different kinds?  What are we?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 08:45:01 pm
"I believe that my kind cast me away.  If true, I have no love for them.  I will fight to protect this planet, my new home, and those that dwell here.  Can you tell me of our different kinds?  What are we?"

Perfect.  +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 13, 2020, 09:03:56 pm
"I believe that my kind cast me away.  If true, I have no love for them.  I will fight to protect this planet, my new home, and those that dwell here.  Can you tell me of our different kinds?  What are we?"

Perfect.  +1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 09:30:24 pm
[20] SEED doesn't respond, but the Silverfish scurries back into the machinery, squirreling itself away into its depths,

"A single cell in an organism of war. You swept across the galaxy and burned order into the entropy. Soldiers, warriors, gods, demons, and angels. There are as many names for you as there are stars in the night sky. An army armed with the language of the universe."

"You are not the first of that line, only one of many, a man-made virus passed down over thousands of years, evolving."

"You will be my angel, Pheobe Gainer. What comes later wo--000."

A spark flies from the machinery, and SEED is silent.

A door opens into the Sanctum, and two burly guards in heavy robes wheel something that looks very much like a stretched cabinet beside the Altar. They key a code into the front of the locker and the door swings open.

Inside is a magnificent panoply, and you rise to your feet shakily, the guards having the excellent idea to provide an arm for you to lean on. The full suit of combat armor gleams, finished with gold and silver, a dense material that weighs next to nothing for you. As an experiment, you pass it to the terrified guard, and he nearly drops it with the weight.

"How heavy is that?"

"Six [pounds]." He stammers, shocked. You nod, ticking your head back to the slot for it. Folded in the center of the armor are faded, moth-worn synthetic leathers, and you brush your fingers over them, confused. They are not designed for you, you can tell, far too big and bulky, especially in the shoulder region. Looking over the armor, you notice that you'll have to have it fitted once you make a recovery-- whoever owned this before you was a giant of a man, and you're lucky that you're the same height.

But what draws your attention is the sash with a strange rectangle of metal upon it. It hums with power, more than anything you've encountered in this world. You reach out for it, taking it in your hand.

[17] A memory comes back to you, and you push your willpower against it, willing it to live. The air around you grows stale and confined, a slight breeze filtering in through the field of energy that pushes everything back. Its durable, that is true but weaker than your old one.

[5] A tremor runs through you, and you stumble against the guard supporting you, breathing hard. Blood drips from your nose, and you brush it away carelessly with your ornate robes, staining the fabric a dark red.

An automatic carbine las-gun sits above it all, but it doesn't look active-- its probably broken, you realize, and a quick tear-down inspection that drives a sharp gasp from the two guards confirms that is the case. A lot of the contacts have rusted away, the old internal battery is corroded from the inside out, and the coolant within is non-existent, a grey sludge that is warmer than the cold room. You're tempted to throw it on the ground in disgust, but restrain yourself.

But what draws your attention is a gleaming Cutter hilt at the belt of the armor. The reactor within hums perfectly, and it fits comfortably within your off-hand. A dial, held in place by a safety mechanism, sits near your thumb, you point it away from the panoply and activate it. A thin filament pops outs of the top as you scroll the dial-up, and across its length, a white-hot fire burns to life. The heat doesn't bother you, instead filling you with an odd comfort. The display on the side begins to count down- faster or slower, depending on how long the blade is.

You turn it off, letting the metal cool before slipping it back into the holding. There's a few knives, a knuckle-duster, and an odd sort of rigid-frame backpack designed to clip on to the torso of the armor.

"Your armor. Modifications will be made according to your specifications. What name do you wish to be known by?" Seed startles you as it begins speaking again, that Silverfish back and fixing yet another part on the machine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 09:38:18 pm
---

--what
what what
what just happened
what

---

okay


"Alphira."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 09:39:54 pm
---

--what
what what
what just happened
what

---

okay


"Alphira."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 13, 2020, 09:45:45 pm
---

--what
what what
what just happened
what

---

okay


"Alphira."
+1
Clearly an AI runs the place, this is very interesting
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2020, 10:13:19 pm
"[Alphira.]"

SEED is silent for a long time after that.

"That name is known. Classified until successful completion of operation:[Angel] of Fire. Relevant documents will be delivered. Begin recovery period."

The anger within you is exultant, happy, gleeful, like a child given a birthday gift. The guard wheel the cabinet away, and one returns to get you, delivering you into the ante-chamber. You wait patiently, letting yourself drift in and out of consciousness until you pass out.



When you awaken again, it's to Emma feeding you a gray, unappetizing sludge that tastes like cardboard, but it fills your stomach with a heavy weight. You don't protest the indignity, letting yourself get fed. The days drag on as you steadily put on weight, much to the glee of the small team of researchers and consultants assigned to you, of which Emma, you later learn, is part of. Her advice and knowledge on the subject of you awes the older researchers, who jump at the chance to study an [angel].

That is your official designation now, after all, and several people call you by 'Alphira' before Emma and Mother Nicole brutally put a stop to it by sacking the worst offender. Literally. The guards put them in a sack in front of the rest and drug them out the door. From then on, you're referred to in private by Pheobe or Miss Gainer.

Eventually, you regain enough strength to feed yourself and that's where the real fun begins. Brother Hop and Mother Nicole emerge with a bundle of books, all on strategy, command, and warfare. As you recover your strength, they want you to read until you're actually tired.

A month or two later, you stagger out of physical therapy, into the only free hour you have, and seek out Emma. It's difficult to find her, she's always working, coordinating your care with only a few major hiccups here and there. You find her at her desk, face down in a book, looking exhausted.

"Hey." She murmurs, catching sight of you.

You were going to say something, but your tongue catches in your throat.


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 13, 2020, 11:23:17 pm
"Hey.  We haven't really had a chance to talk lately.  How are you holding up?  You're doing a great job, by the way."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 13, 2020, 11:33:29 pm
I'm... lost for words on this one.

"Hey.  We haven't really had a chance to talk lately.  How are you holding up?  You're doing a great job, by the way."

These are words. These are good words. +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 14, 2020, 12:05:03 am
[9]"I'm doing fine, thank you..." You can tell the opposite is true, Emma shifting uncomfortably in her chair, and you slowly approach. You claim a seat nearby, and she watches you with a tired look in her eyes.

"You're doing a great job, by the way. I...really appreciate it."

[12] "Thank you Pheobe." Emma melts a little, heaving a sigh. "I'm sorry if I've been distant, lately. Between all this and--just everything. It pisses me off!" And them Emma spends the next thirty minutes or so venting to you, sometimes venting about you, funnily enough, but you're smart enough not to comment, and instead just listen. It eventually ends with Emma holding you close, grumbling about the situation but also sniffling. She finishes in a slightly teasing manner, "Usually you're together with someone for thirty years before you have to spoon-feed them nutrient paste."

You laugh a little at that.

Now looking far more relaxed, she returns to business, rising to reclaim her seat. "Since you're up and moving, and the cause of all problems, would you mind helping me figure out what you need to do? The science team couldn't put together a schedule to save their lives, and I've, unfortunately, never trained an [angel]." You notice that every sixth day is stenciled in for Church Service and 'freetime (Emma)' already, and Emma smirks a little when she catches you looking.

"I wanted more free time with you, but...this will do. You still need to do more physical therapy, and Mother Nicole was adamant on training you in leadership. Other than that, no one has any idea what to do with you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 14, 2020, 12:10:51 am
Hmm.  I suppose development of our powers could be helpful, if done carefullyGetting a better sense of the resources available to us (apparently, everything military that this civilization has...) could be useful as well.  Maybe also learning more about our enemies, if anything is known of them.  Lastly, our advanced regenerative properties could be useful in allowing the researchers to explore the possibility of, and our ability to tolerate, implants that could help us on or off the battlefield.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 14, 2020, 01:39:06 am
"I think I do."
"...Do you remember that night outside the Academy, with the kidnappers? Do you remember how you saw me catch a las-bolt to the back and shrug it off?"

"You weren't seeing things. And that was just the tip of the iceberg."

"I haven't done much experimenting yet-- there just weren't many chances to, at the Academy-- but I've found through trial and error some tricks with power that nobody else has. I've no idea how much I'm capable of. I think I've only just scratched the surface. Now that I'm not on Academy rations, I could probably learn to do a lot more-- I just need time to practice!"

"Other than that... study. I need to know what I'll be fighting, and I need to know how [angels] have fought in past. I need to learn what [angel] me can do, and it'll be easier to figure that out if I've got examples of what's been done."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 14, 2020, 02:26:29 am
"I think I do."
"...Do you remember that night outside the Academy, with the kidnappers? Do you remember how you saw me catch a las-bolt to the back and shrug it off?"

"You weren't seeing things. And that was just the tip of the iceberg."

"I haven't done much experimenting yet-- there just weren't many chances to, at the Academy-- but I've found through trial and error some tricks with power that nobody else has. I've no idea how much I'm capable of. I think I've only just scratched the surface. Now that I'm not on Academy rations, I could probably learn to do a lot more-- I just need time to practice!"

"Other than that... study. I need to know what I'll be fighting, and I need to know how [angels] have fought in past. I need to learn what [angel] me can do, and it'll be easier to figure that out if I've got examples of what's been done."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 14, 2020, 09:09:05 am
"I think I do."
"...Do you remember that night outside the Academy, with the kidnappers? Do you remember how you saw me catch a las-bolt to the back and shrug it off?"

"You weren't seeing things. And that was just the tip of the iceberg."

"I haven't done much experimenting yet-- there just weren't many chances to, at the Academy-- but I've found through trial and error some tricks with power that nobody else has. I've no idea how much I'm capable of. I think I've only just scratched the surface. Now that I'm not on Academy rations, I could probably learn to do a lot more-- I just need time to practice!"

"Other than that... study. I need to know what I'll be fighting, and I need to know how [angels] have fought in past. I need to learn what [angel] me can do, and it'll be easier to figure that out if I've got examples of what's been done."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 14, 2020, 10:48:09 pm
[-]Emma writes down every word you say, her notes dividing out into many different mini-notes that scrawl across the paper.  Flinching at the mention of implants, she looks up from her scratch book, "I...doing that-- I'll send a message to Father, seeing if I can borrow some of our scientists...they're good with implants like that...I think they're the most experienced in the city-state."

[-]After you finish, Emma looks satisfied, looking over her notes with a nod and clarifying a few things with you. After you go over everything, front to back, she turns, opening the desk and handing over two large folders to you. "I was supposed to get these to you, by the way."

The first is labeled 'Project: [Angel] of Fire.' The Second is labeled 'Gathered Intelligence Report, Summarized.' You murmur thanks, leaning over to give Emma a goodnight kiss and head for your room. She smiles at you as she leaves, turning back to her work. With that show of affection out of the way, her pen continues to skitter across the paper as she begins to write the requisite requests and invoices.

Much has been improved since you first awoke, and now you're in a lavish suite of the complex. It has a comfortable, large bed, with an actual synth-cloth and spring mattress, a neat table, and too much closet space for your comfort. You take a seat at your desk, flipping through the files.

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Invasion Intel Report
The news from the front is grim, indeed. The war has officially started, and across the entire Defensive Line, brutal skirmishes are fought to hold on to the defensive camps in those regions. Casualties are in the thousands and mounting. From your estimates, a company is lost every month. A draft is in the works, and the militias in the inner regions are being tasked with defending local investments. [The Infection] is using hit and run tactics with heavily armored [insects], and laser swords to protect against their attacks are in short supply. Underbarrel Inferno Shotguns are being used to stop the gap, but they're ineffective compared to melee protective squads.

Enemy aircraft are reported in the depths of the Western Wastes, and they're being used to conduct recon on the Defensive Line to significant effect. A few have been spotted further inland, with one even approaching the Holy City before being shot down by local AA units.



[-]Emma doesn't grace you with her presence that night, but she does awaken you with a soft tap on your door. She looks exhausted, like she hasn't slept, her hair a mess and heavy bags beneath her green eyes. She smiles at you, tossing you your uniform and claiming a seat nearby to explain whats going on.

"The Thornton family is willing to send their top scientist to help if you so choose. He has practical and lab experience with implants. A genius of a man, but he lacks a lot of ethics and morals." She passes a paper over to you, a letter written with your name formally asking for assistance, in return for relief on taxes. "Mother Nicole says she'll waive their taxes this year if they do so."

[3]"The clerks weren't able to find anything related directly to McCreary's battle, but, they recommend a pilgrimage to the place of it. Apparently, even after a thousand years, traces still remain. A guard detachment of thirty strong, with Hovercraft, have been assigned for your trip. Give them a day's notice and they'll be ready. "

"I've also got a new schedule for you to approve," Emma continues, pushing it over towards you. Every day is filled with training, attended on by the scientists and medical personnel. With relief, you realize that you still have free time with her, however. The location of your church service has changed too, to the Grand Cathedral of SEED. When you question her about it, she states, gently, "The Pontifex wants to deliver your service personally. I hope that's okay, he's an impressive orator, and you're a very zealous person-- its apparently a high honor. If it works for you, sign off on it."

[14] "The Crusaders don't want to flood you with information about every division and camp, so they recommended that after you're announced as [angel] you take a tour of inspections in the Defensive Lines. They're willing to put two cohorts of heavy infantry under your command, and any militia or private military force you can raise, but...uh...to put it politely, they don't want you to have to worry about it when there are bigger problems." Emma looks a little uncomfortable delivering this news to you, fidgeting in her seat. She hands you another letter to sign to accept the terms.

"After that, you can start with whatever you like."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 14, 2020, 10:58:35 pm
I would support asking the Thornton scientist for assistance.  We need all the advantages we can get.  I also don't see a problem with going ahead with meeting the Pontifex for church service.  Lastly, I would support taking the pilgrimage to gather more information.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 14, 2020, 11:04:48 pm
I would support asking the Thornton scientist for assistance.  We need all the advantages we can get.  I also don't see a problem with going ahead with meeting the Pontifex for church service.  Lastly, I would support taking the pilgrimage to gather more information.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 14, 2020, 11:39:35 pm
I would support asking the Thornton scientist for assistance.  We need all the advantages we can get.  I also don't see a problem with going ahead with meeting the Pontifex for church service.  Lastly, I would support taking the pilgrimage to gather more information.

+1
+1 also sign for doing the inspections of defensive lines as well
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 14, 2020, 11:54:45 pm
Emma nods as you sign and sign and sign. After a beat, she asks, "When do you want to go on your pilgrimage? Tomorrow? They say the trip will take a week- a day if you really push the soldiers and equipment. I'm sure you'll be fine, but regular people still need to sleep. I could probably arrange a relay of the Hovercraft and guards, but that will take more time, and is more dangerous."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 15, 2020, 12:06:01 am
I don't think that time is so precious that we can't afford to spend two weeks going there and back, and I wouldn't want to risk lives and equipment unnecessarily, so I would support being accompanied, but not arranging for a relay.  Tomorrow is fine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 12:46:06 am
"No need for a Hovercraft relay-- I don't mind the walk."
"Anyway, let's say... a week from now? I'd like us both to have a day of this--" point to our free day on the schedule-- "before I go haring off somewhere!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 15, 2020, 04:26:59 am
"No need for a Hovercraft relay-- I don't mind the walk."
"Anyway, let's say... a week from now? I'd like us both to have a day of this--" point to our free day on the schedule-- "before I go haring off somewhere!"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 15, 2020, 05:11:40 am
"No need for a Hovercraft relay-- I don't mind the walk."
"Anyway, let's say... a week from now? I'd like us both to have a day of this--" point to our free day on the schedule-- "before I go haring off somewhere!"

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 15, 2020, 08:02:18 am
"No need for a Hovercraft relay-- I don't mind the walk."
"Anyway, let's say... a week from now? I'd like us both to have a day of this--" point to our free day on the schedule-- "before I go haring off somewhere!"

+1
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 02:49:19 pm
"Before we go haring off somewhere," Emma corrects with a smile, writing something in for you on the last document you sign. With her business completed, for now, she heads out to deliver the papers where they need to go. She stifles a yawn as she murmurs, "I'll be back."

You, in the mean-time, get dressed and start with morning exercises. Emma does return, but she doesn't spend time with you, collapsing into your bed instead and burrowing under the blankets. She's out like a light, and you gently tuck her in before leaving for physical therapy. You work until you muscles ache and burn then stagger into another classroom for Brother Hop or whoever is tutoring you today.

The next couple of days are much the same, except Emma has caught up on sleep, and seems to appreciate your assistance with her workload. At one hour of free time, she cuts your hair, styling it for you into a tight topknot. She also leaves the compound one morning, returning in the evening with two nice dress coats for you both.



You awaken early for morning service, getting dressed in your uniform but slipping on the dress coat. Emma knocks on your door when you're ready, flashing you a smile as she adjusts her uniform as well. She brushes a bit of dust from your shoulder and the two of you set out to the hovercraft platform for transit. Your guards await, dipping nods to you. "The Captain intends on meeting you tomorrow, at the start of your pilgrimage." Emma notes to you, casually, looking over a small bunch of notes, "He's a decorated veteran of several Outland Wars, and looks forward to meeting the new [angel]. Mother Nicole approved him, but he's a candidate picked by the Crusader General."

You glance over at Emma, confused, as the ship pushes up into the air, jostling you slightly. Emma doesn't respond, glancing instead towards the guards and relaxing into a conversation with you about training and what you want to do after service.

The two of you decide to have a lovely dinner at this nice Inner City restaurant, and a trip through the plazas afterward. The restaurant is well recommended by your guards, who ask for permission to speak before volunteering the information. It apparently drifts right through several of the nicer sections of the city, and there's a number of shrines and gardens along the way too and from. Emma latches on to the idea, and the food is apparently amazing, so you agree as well.



You both claim a seat within the front row of the Cathedral, upon a pew lined with comfortable cushions, and relax. The Scholars really prefer their gold and jade, and apparently this world has plenty of it. At least the pews are wood, ornately carved and smelling of freshly applied cleaning solvents. Emma looks over the program, passing it to you with a shrug of her shoulder. She opens her notebook and begins reading through it, quietly offering, "He wishes to meet you in his office after the service. I'll be entertained with tea and cookies, apparently." She makes a face but doesn't protest further, especially as the Pontifex emerges from a nearby door, and begins a slow trudge up to the pulpit.

He's younger than you expected, a middle-aged man with few wrinkles and a mop of unruly gray hair. He's quite handsome, you note, and his smile comes easily, especially when he sweeps his eyes across the room and finds you. Then, he speaks, his voice booming out through the Cathedral, only amplified by the natural acoustics. "I must begin today's service with an apology, as I will not be following the program. I hope that you all will allow this old man his fancy."

"I will not be speaking on charity, but instead about the first [angel], and the first [demon]. On anger, on loss, and on holy retribution." [7] He glances at you in his routine sweep of the audience, and you've noticed you've shifted forward in your seat. He's noticed too.

Long ago, after SEED had made the world, an evil emerged from the sky to challenge his great work. It was a profane mockery of SEED, a twisting, corrupting influence that sought only to spread its own sick infection to all of creation. Not to give life to a barren world, but to devour all it could. It opposed everything that SEED stood for, and SEED demanded an end to it.

But it was not an end that SEED could deliver alone, but an end that must be purchased with blood. He goes to great lengths to describe the war, the slaughter, the death, how SEED had to create soldiers from the very dust to even match the ferocious onslaught. And he describes how hopeless the war was, how despite SEED's best intentions, there was nothing that could be done. Nothing at all.


[13]The crowd is silent, a heavy weight hanging over them. The dangers are too real, the descriptions all too similar to the daily newspapers that circulate around the Holy City, to the rumors that swirl in its tea shops, in its taverns. Shoulders are slumped, there are few dry eyes. The Pontifex pauses, letting the crowd suffer that depression, a frown on his mask, but his eyes glow with the glee of an orator successful in his task.

...And then came McCreary, who turned the tide from the moment he emerged from the Inner Sanctum, clad in armor made from the Void between worlds. He strode across the battlefield and made it his weapon. All of the creation of SEED responded to his whim, the world itself fighting off the invaders that would corrupt it into disgusting sludge and foul pollution. He approached the Great Worm that was the King of the Dead, and with a single savage blow, split apart the ground to devour it. But he was injured in the fight, and as he watched the great worm thrash its final fight, he expired from his injuries.

"But, he gave us hope. He gave us control. He gave us power. In his death, he destroyed the greatest enemy mankind has ever known and saved our world.
" His voice rises and falls in a sing-song manner, lifting to a crescendo, "He gave away his eternity in peace, and comfort, all for our hope. Our happiness. Our lives in the Great Work."

[12]The Pontifex finally breathes out, bowing his head. The rest of the service proceeds more quietly, the Pontifex delivering a lecture on fire and thermodynamics. How the heat of the fire keeps the fuel at the ignition point, so on, and so on. It's actually mildly interesting as far as lecture topics go, and you listen intently.

[-]Finally, the Pontifex gives a benediction, lifting his hand and blessing you in the name of SEED. He approaches attendants in tow. Emma and your guards bow at the hips...you do not, as he shakes your hand instead. "Come, Sister Alphira we have much to discuss. I'm told you're a lover of food. I've had my chefs provide a wonderful noon-time tea for us, and your attendants will also be provided for, of course."

You're lead into the office, and he gestures for you to sit across from him in a comfortable nook. A cart full of snacks and treats lies between you, as well as a neat little tea table. A fresh, steaming cup awaits you. He adjusts his robe to sit more comfortably, leaning back in his chair. "What did you think of the sermon, Sister Alphira? I had to improvise a lot of it."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 03:18:46 pm
Smile. "A stirring oration! You are skilled with the spoken word."

Er, what's the proper honorific for a Pontifex? "Father"?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 03:48:44 pm
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 15, 2020, 03:59:00 pm
Smile. "A stirring oration! You are skilled with the spoken word."

Er, what's the proper honorific for a Pontifex? "Father"?
Dunno, either way +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 04:02:09 pm
Brother or Pontifex, seems to be what he prefers, as he treated you as an equal, by refusing to let you bow, and by addressing you as Sister, but he did not give you his name, so Brother is considered more informal, as you don't have a name to append to it.

[9 vs 16] The Pontifex responds to your praise with a charming smile, and it is indeed endearing to you. "Thank you, Sister Alphira, it means a lot to me to have my services attended to by the [angel] of our times. And times must be desperate indeed to have an [angel]. [crossaint]? My chef hand-made them with fresh farmland butter and the finest [wheat] flour, and I find them quite delicious." He gestures to the pastry in question, lifting his teacup in the same smooth motion and taking a sip.

"Would you mind conversing in a higher tongue with me? I must admit that we will be discussing things of secrecy soon, and my intentions were less than pure to bring you here." There's innuendo in there, you realize, but you dip a nod.

"[What do you think of our god, Alphira? Inspiring? Or did you find SEED's current state mournful?]" Its one of the highest scholarly tongues, you realize, approaching something close to SEED's own language. You can converse fluently in it, as you feel well enough to translate, but it is indeed designed to hide and conceal by its very nature.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 04:05:19 pm
"[It was old... so old. An inhuman intelligence. I am unsure what to make of it.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 04:15:05 pm
"[Old. It is indeed old. And still so powerful. And wise. We built our civilization around it, used what it deigned to give us.]" He pauses, sipping his tea, "[It created us. Told us its omniscience, and gave us the tools to build. It defended us when we needed it most, and turned the tide of a battle, but the plague...isn't it stange how during each war, the goal was the Holy City? Why only there, I wonder?]"

"[SEED created you. But you had a life before, with friends and lovers and strife...why did you have to live in fear of your heritage, if SEED truly created a perfect being to win this war?]?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 04:37:07 pm
"[Because my heritage is unknown, Brother Pontifex. My power woke before ever SEED recognized me-- it seemed likely that I was a demon, though I be not so murderous as they! It was not a pleasant thought. I hoped to escape it.]"

[Now... now, I am unsure. I have uncovered the ghost of a memory. I do not know what brought about my making; I do not know what I am. SEED tells me there is little difference between demon and angel.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 15, 2020, 05:44:22 pm
"[Because my heritage is unknown, Brother Pontifex. My power woke before ever SEED recognized me-- it seemed likely that I was a demon, though I be not so murderous as they! It was not a pleasant thought. I hoped to escape it.]"

[Now... now, I am unsure. I have uncovered the ghost of a memory. I do not know what brought about my making; I do not know what I am. SEED tells me there is little difference between demon and angel.]

+1

This guy is giving off some serious grand vizier energy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 05:46:51 pm
Yeah, I'm wondering what his angle here is.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 05:55:20 pm
"[Little difference between [demon] and [angel] is right, Sister,  even among humans. Look at Sister Nicole, Black Nicky. To many, she is a brutal, callous killer of innocents, but to you, she's a loving grandmother and faithful servant of the Scholars.]" The Pontifex picks at the [croissant] with a wry smile at your observation, "[What do you think of our belief in SEED's divinity, Sister? Is it natural and good for humans to elevate that which they don't understand into faithful reverence? Or is it holding us back?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 06:11:10 pm
"[I am... wary of that which I do not understand, Brother Pontifex. Nevertheless, SEED has (to my knowledge) done well by humanity, and I am willing to respect that. If it would call itself a god, I am willing to abide by that as well.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 15, 2020, 06:17:57 pm
"[I am... wary of that which I do not understand, Brother Pontifex. Nevertheless, SEED has (to my knowledge) done well by humanity, and I am willing to respect that. If it would call itself a god, I am willing to abide by that as well.]"
+1

"[...but what are your thoughts on the matter, Pontifex?  You may speak freely, as I will take your words in the strictest confidence].
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 06:29:29 pm
"[I am... wary of that which I do not understand, Brother Pontifex. Nevertheless, SEED has (to my knowledge) done well by humanity, and I am willing to respect that. If it would call itself a god, I am willing to abide by that as well.]"
+1

"[...but what are your thoughts on the matter, Pontifex?  You make speak freely, as I will take your words in the strictest confidence].

Sure, +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 06:39:48 pm
[18]"[I appreciate your confidence, Sister."] The Pontifex sips his tea, setting his cup down. "[SEED doesn't speak as much as it does now, except during wars. Awakening it, our god is a costly, difficult task. Every time it does, it brings about great change, changes that, in time, may lead to questions, questions that if answered, may lead to a heretical belief that our god is less than god.]"

"[I am told you are a believer, Sister, you've never missed a service if you could help it. Doesn't it complicate matters of theology, serving a living god? Philosophy loses focus when the Material is introduced.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 15, 2020, 06:54:23 pm
"[In contrast, the best philosophies are enhanced by concrete evidence, as exhibited by the teachings of natural philosophers in a different age and in a far away world.  Those that cannot stand the test of time will fade away.]" 

"[l'm not sure that I understand what the difficulty is.  Is it truly not better to be able to learn theology directly from your god?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 07:27:08 pm
in a different age and in a far away world

I dunno we need to get meta here.  :P

"[l'm not sure I understand what the difficulty is. Is not a truly worthy philosophy enhanced by its connection to the concrete world? Is it not better to be able to learn theology directly from your god?]"

"[I am a believer, Brother Pontifex, but so too I am a pragmatist. For its extraordinary age, its unique intelligence, its apparent benevolence, I deem SEED worthy of my veneration and my service-- philosophy need not come into it! We have an accord, SEED and I; we work now towards the same end. It is enough.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 15, 2020, 08:33:00 pm
in a different age and in a far away world

I dunno we need to get meta here.  :P

"[l'm not sure I understand what the difficulty is. Is not a truly worthy philosophy enhanced by its connection to the concrete world? Is it not better to be able to learn theology directly from your god?]"

"[I am a believer, Brother Pontifex, but so too I am a pragmatist. For its extraordinary age, its unique intelligence, its apparent benevolence, I deem SEED worthy of my veneration and my service-- philosophy need not come into it! We have an accord, SEED and I; we work now towards the same end. It is enough.]"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 08:49:19 pm
"[Of course, [the plague] is the biggest threat to humanity, one that will scour all life it can find. I'm sorry for letting our discussion turn to religion so rapidly, its the nature of the job.]" The Pontifex smiles, leaning forward and pulling a small folder from his robe, which he sets on the table beside him, explaining with a good-natured grin. It's labeled in the highest script, '[Angel of Fire Containment Procedures: SEED approved] "That was incredibly uncomfortable, I apologize."

"[I brought you here to discuss what I can do for you, I'm a very wealthy individual, and there are a number who listen to my words with reverence. If you need anything, please, let me know. My service to the ideals of SEED may only be matched by your own, Sister Alphira, and I look forward to serving with you in the Great Work. Could I answer any questions for you, Sister Alphira?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 15, 2020, 08:57:38 pm
Perhaps SEED doesn't have the best of intentions for us after we do our duty.  "Containment procedures" sounds worrying.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 09:07:57 pm
Perhaps SEED doesn't have the best of intentions for us after we do our duty.  "Containment procedures" sounds worrying.

Quite possibly not. We'll have to look over the folder later.

"No apologies are necessary, Brother Pontifex-- there's naught wrong with a bit of intellectualizing! I hope I haven't come across as dismissive." (Smile.) "That said, there is something on my mind..."

"Your sermon earlier-- you described the battles of McCreary. I suspect I could match certain of his more supernatural abilities, if only I knew the manner in which he fought-- the manner in which he wielded his power. Have you any knowledge on this matter?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 09:19:24 pm
"Ah...his battles don't feature anywhere I can find. It was a different time then. Few of the remaining soldiers could give an account, either due to incapacity or just not having the words. I had to glean much from my pilgrimage across his battlefield. I would describe it...but it's better to see for yourself, I feel. If you truly wish for me to, however, I can tell you much about what it looked like."

"You can still see the bones of the Great Beast, for instance, strewn in McCreary's lake. Its...its an impressive sight, to be sure, and one that must truly be experienced to be believed."

"I intend to go on the pilgrimage soon, Brother Pontifex." You offer, finally taking a sip of your tea.

"Ah, would you like a guided palanquin or some of the Church's Sacred robes? Many of the stops on the way are chapel towns, and right on the edge of the lake is a military base call McCreary's rest." He pauses, making eye contact and flicking them to the file, "Some people believe that is where he died. Others believe he succumbed to his wounds after meeting with SEED one last time. His body was recovered and interred here within the Holy City, in the end. I could call in some connections to ensure a private viewing of your...sibling, if you wish?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 09:23:50 pm
Wait wait wait wait.

Withdraw into our own head for a sec. Was... was McCreary...?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 09:32:02 pm
[18]Doesn't sound like one of my little brothers-- the battlefield would've been a massive plain of irradiated glass if it was. If it was father, there wouldn't be a world left.

...

[8]Did you just call me like I'm your thrice-damned dog?!


Your hand spasms, awkwardly in a strange twitch. The anger eventually recedes, drifting away after a moment's careful calculation. The Pontifex looks concerned, shifting back in his seat from your strange movement. His eyes dart towards your hand then your face.

"Alphira, are you okay?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 10:09:00 pm
I'm sorry! Just-- you and VOID are the only two I know who've got any knowledge of this... I thought I could find one of our own.

"Apologies, brother Pontifex-- I stirred an old memory at your words. I was reckless to do so."
"I do not think I shall need to view McCreary's body, though I appreciate the offer! I am more interested in the manner of his fighting than the lay of his bones."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 15, 2020, 10:10:20 pm
I'd like to see the body.  It would be helpful to ascertain the means of his death.

This might help us determine if SEED is planning treachery.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 15, 2020, 10:15:58 pm
Yeah, alright.

I'm sorry! Just-- you and VOID are the only two I know who've got any knowledge of this... I thought I could find one of our own.

"Apologies, brother Pontifex-- I stirred an old memory at your words. I was reckless to do so."
"I do not think I shall be making many detours on the way to McCreary's final battlefield-- a private viewing of McCreary himself sounds lovely, though. I would be most grateful."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 15, 2020, 10:17:35 pm
Yeah, alright.

I'm sorry! Just-- you and VOID are the only two I know who've got any knowledge of this... I thought I could find one of our own.

"Apologies, brother Pontifex-- I stirred an old memory at your words. I was reckless to do so."
"I do not think I shall be making many detours on the way to McCreary's final battlefield-- a private viewing of McCreary himself sounds lovely, though. I would be most grateful."

+1.

I think it would be good to cultivate a relationship with this person.  If SEED is planning to kill us, he could be helpful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 15, 2020, 11:56:17 pm
The Pontifex smiles, reaching over for the file and stowing it back inside his robe, offering, with a wink, "I'll get you a copy." He calls for an attendant shortly after that, rising to his feet. He calmly, yet firmly gives directions, and the young man hurries off to complete them with vigor. "Come, Sister, it'll be cleared out by the time we arrive-- it's also very close to where you were planning on having dinner."

You blink, rising to follow him. You're reunited with Emma in another chamber, and she politely and professionally falls in line behind you, not saying a word as she glances between you and the Pontifex with a curious look. He separates from the group as you ready yourself for flight and re-emerges wearing something a little more discrete. Its a Crusader military outfit without rank or markings. He smiles at you as he claims a seat across from the two of you. When the hover-craft lifts off, he begins to chat pleasantly with Emma, asking questions here and there.

[3] Some of the questions are about you, and Emma deflects them politely and efficiently, not volunteering more than she needs about you.

It takes less than thirty minutes to arrive in a vast, stately plaza, paved with granite between high girders of polished, painted steel. The hovercraft touches down beside another, and, you notice as you step out of it, that the plaza was blocked off with bright orange barricades with the symbol of SEED painted on them in bright white. Soldiers clad in grey robes face outward, armed with las-rifles.

The Chapel itself is a stately building, but it resembles the sanctum with a high, domed ceiling and bright lighting. The air is cold, frigid, as evidenced by Emma and the Pontifex shivering against it. It doesn't bother you. No, what bothers you is the corpse interred within a complicated glass sarcophagus. He's clad in gold and jade, with a bright white robe beneath it, shining and radiant in the light. But you cannot ignore the frozen color to his skin or his sunken face.

A mock-up of a Cutter Hilt sits in one hand on his chest, the other holds a submachine gun, much like the one in the cabinet of his former panoply. Both are fakes, you are sure.

Despite the age of the corpse, its been remarkably well-preserved in a below freezing, sterile environment. Its a bearded man, with a large, broken nose, and long, curly blond hair that hangs past his shoulders. Not old, not young, and without the beard, you would expect he looks quite androgynous. Emma approaches behind you.

[12] What was at first a fleeting feeling has solidified in your stomach—a sickening mix of fear, joy, and remorse. When you think about why you feel things, it comes to you. Fear, because this man, even in death, radiates as a threat on a deep level. Joy, for not having to fight, and remorse, for his death--He deserved a better death than this world could have provided.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 12:17:13 am
Did we know him?

Approach.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 12:21:59 am
Discreetly examine the body as thoroughly as possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 12:26:31 am
Discreetly examine the body as thoroughly as possible.

I dunno how much we're gonna be able to discern what with all the armour covering the guy (seems only his head is exposed), but sure: once we've drawn nigh, give the body a good look-over and see if we can't pick out a cause of death.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 12:50:32 am
No. But we are related. Maybe he's one of the first...or maybe he got lucky...but he's strong. So strong. He deserved a better death.

The weight that this corpse project increases as you approach until it feels like the very air is heady with it-- with his will. Your hand moves of its own accord, tracing across the frozen glass. Emma moves to follow, but your guards stop her, backing away from the both of you. A brief flash of anger burns through you, but you push it down, down, not acting on it.

[20 vs 4]He should've been recycled and given a soldier's burial, not used as some cult's relic! The anger that is Alphira burns to the surface in a bright flash, overwhelming you. It happens all at once, heat starting to burn at your fingertips. The room temperature rises incredibly, and the glass shatters out from your fingertips from the difference.

[12] You cannot control yourself, for the moment, so instead you watch, and learn from your past self. The calculations she's doing are incredibly advanced to the point where you can only barely follow along. An extension of your will reaches out into the material plane, ripping apart water in the air to turn into hydrogen and oxygen, and igniting both into concentrated, invisible fire at the tips of your fingertips. His clothing and armor begin to burn, but he does not until his torso is laid bare and the cheap metal is pooled around him. A great, savage gash rips its way across his chest, nearly the entire width across. Its barely healed but healed nonetheless with fresh scab tissue.

[20]"He died of starvation, not his wounds. SEED will weaken us until we cannot fight, and then lock us up to die." Alphira reaches out, taking hold of his arm, static bristling in the air. Behind you, a scuffle breaks out-- your objective is safe, Emma is safe, but one of your guards isn't-- he's been shot in the head by the Pontifex. The other guard lets Emma go, but she doesn't run to you, instead of falling back to rest against one of the columns. In shock, no doubt. Poor girl can't stand the sight of blood. Shame.

"Sister Alphira we mean you no--"

"Shut up, if you were a threat I'd have killed you." You bark with a command, voice dark. "Get Emma somewhere safe."

"N-No. I'm here. I'm here for you."

[20 vs 12]Even Alphira is surprised by that, glancing back to Emma, who seems to have regained her composure. But she doesn't say a word, returning to the matter at hand. Alphira wipes away the blood as it drips from your-her nose, something screaming within her to stop, but she ignores it. A steady stream of grey dust emerges from the corpse where your hand touches it, pooling within your free hand, motes drifting into the air. It only takes a little time before you have enough to fill your hand. The...thing.. shifts and moves of its own volition, sometimes it seems to evaporate like water, only to condensate and reform within your grasp. The weight never changes, despite its volatility.

[2 vs 7] You once again make to Burn, but instead, something within you hesitates, and that hesitation is enough to seal it back away, however angry it is. We burn him or vent his corpse later, do you understand, Patches?! After this war, after SEED. We deserve more than a morbid display.

...

Eat it--blood is easier, but I didn't want to sicken Emma and our allies.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 12:55:41 am
That escalated quickly.  Also... she wants us to eat the ash?  In any case, SEED's treachery is clear.  It must be dealt with in an appropriate manner.

Have we gained the power to ignite invisible fires with our fingertips?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 01:09:54 am
[-]The corpse remains, with only a slightly more haggard expression to show for the troubles you put it through. His robes are burned away at the chest, and the gold of his armor has cooled into slag on either side of him. The ash...is dust. Dust you extracted from his corpse, through a complex calculation you cannot begin to understand...yet.

[-]The calculations are hard and costly, you notice, and you're still weak. You feel like attempting to replicate them will end poorly for you. Do you still wish to proceed?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 01:13:30 am
Do not proceed.  "[Thank you for your timely assistance, Pontifex.  It would appear that my sibling died from starvation rather than from his wounds.  How odd.  Do you think that the Holy SEED would know how this came to pass?]"

You want us to eat the dust?  If the answer is affirmative, eat the dust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 01:13:46 am
No no no no no what

what are we doing

what just happened


Er, no.

And give me a moment to figure out how on earth we're gonna deal with this.  :-\
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 01:19:35 am
I think things will become clearer once we take the dust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 01:23:53 am
Hnnng. It'd be pretty hard to make things worse at this point, so sure why not?

Do not proceed.  "[Thank you for your timely assistance, Pontifex.  It would appear that my sibling died from starvation rather than from his wounds.  How odd.  Do you think that the Holy SEED would know how this came to pass?]"

You want us to eat the dust?  If the answer is affimative, eat the dust.

+̸̭̔1̶̨͇̽
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 01:25:10 am
Better that we expose the SEED as a traitor now rather than after the final battle, weakened, which we would have had we not uncovered the truth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 01:32:38 am
Maybe. Yes. Probably. I don't know. We're becoming a monster. I don't know anymore. I don't know.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 01:57:07 am
The Pontifex begins to command Emma and the other guard, telling them to come closer, "Alright, we need to get our stories straight-- and this is exactly what happened, do the both of you understand?" Emma and the Guard nod, listening to the words of the Pontifex. You, however, zone it out, opening your mouth and shoving the dust in with a burst of energy, the Pontifex trails off, watching you.

[17]You are not here anymore. You're on a dry, dusty world, near a massive machine that thrums with energy. You approach, ready to be changed, ready to be born anew.

And you are. The powers that manifest allow you to notice much about the planet you spin on. The soil, the composition, what part this to what part this, the percentages play out in your mind. You lift a hand one day, putting your will into the ground, drawing out the silica into a sharp crystalline spear. The next day you pull moisture from the air to turn the soil moist and make it into sinking quicksand.

Wars follow as you leave your home, one mercenary company, then another. Lovers, friends, foes, all eventually die, leaving you alone to drift in the void. Until you happen upon a planet with a pinging distress signal. The voice that negotiates your pay is odd and halting, but food and wealth are food and wealth.

You don your armor, meeting with the machine that rules these people. You're angered by such a strange place where the men obey the machine, but food and wealth...

The war is harsh, against [the plague], but you've fought worse creatures, and these die easily enough.

A battlefield is suddenly turned into sharp spikes, impaling abominations in the thousands.

The world opens up, swallowing creatures with a simple application of will.

The final fight is rough, your shield failing you, and the grand abomination that commands the rest brutalizes you with sharp tentacles of silvery steel. It takes everything you have within you to pull apart the ground and drop the creature into savage, massive spikes that jut high into the sky. It continues to squirm until you cut it apart, piece by piece with your Cutter. You fall to the earth, healing yourself and breathing hard, ragged. Every bone in your body aches, and looking down-- that's a lung...then you awaken again.

You're in an empty room, the walls reinforced steel meters thick. There's no more strength in your body, no weapon to help you...you fade away.




[14+4 vs 7] When you open your eyes, you're in the plaza. Squads of Crusaders mingle around the building but don't give you a second glance. The Pontifex is speaking to a small group of officers, and they look apologetic. He's angry, you realize, "Your failure to guard the [angel] against this extremism is sickening, Crusaders. Tell your general to meet me tonight-- I must have a word with him about screening his candidates better. Not only was the [angel] and her adjutant nearly killed, but the sacred relic of McCreary was damaged in her rage. Do you understand how much a humiliation this is for the Crusaders?"

"I want dinner and the walk you promised." Emma softly murmurs, leaning heavily into you. She's holding your hand tightly, like a vise, and her skin is paler than usual. In your other hand, you realize, is a shimmering dagger of glass, stained with blood. "You killed the guard with that." Emma quietly offers your role, "But not before blacking out and unleashing a firestorm to protect me."

Your other guard stands beside you silently, expression hidden beneath her kevlar mesh mask. You note, with relief, that she's the one that recommended the restaurant, but now you know that she's the Pontifex's dog.

Continue to listen to me, to let me in Patches. I'll make us more powerful than we can ever dream. Alphira's voice sends a shiver down your back-- its so clear, so easy to hear. Would letting her have more say really be that bad?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 02:03:16 am
Hmm.  What should we do about the SEED?  I don't think we need to act immediately, but I do think that we should be wary.  If it killed the previous angel, it could kill us as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 02:22:12 am
SEED can wait. We have more immediate concerns.
Namely, remorse.

...We'll talk later. Now allow me this moment.

Drop the shard.

"I-- I didn't want this-- I didn't want any of this-- not for you-- not for me--"
Hugs. Grief.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 02:29:39 am
SEED can wait. We have more immediate concerns.
Namely, remorse.

You've given me nothing but pain. Now allow me this moment.

Drop the shard.

"I-- I didn't want this-- I didn't want any of this-- not for you-- not for me--"
Hugs. Grief.

+1

I'm listening.  Perhaps you could have been more... subtle, however.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 02:37:48 am
I'm listening.  Perhaps you could have been more... subtle, however.

I'd be willing to consider having words to this end with Alphira later-- we desperately need to come to some sort of understanding with her, seeing as she can apparently take control of us and murder people whenever she thinks her honor's been slighted. For now, though... I'd really rather just set the whole thing aside until we're a little better equipped emotionally to deal with it.

Hm. To that end, Imma revise my post a wee bit back there.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 02:41:59 am
Maybe we can reason with her if she can express less anger and more respect for the sanctity of life.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 02:50:03 am
[-]You're overwhelm with-- everything, and start babbling an apology to Emma. You're slumped on the ground, on your rear, trying to explain anything, trying to explain something to Emma- realization blooms across her face. Anger slowly drains away from the surface, leaving you a scared shell.

"Shh-shhh...this isn't -really- your fault-- the guard flipped out when it saw the case crack-- he tried to hold me hostage. The Pontifex shot him-- you didn't pull that trigger, you didn't mess with his mind, you were angry about your brother and wanted to see him...I understand. Shh, shhh...the guard moved first- it wasn't you. I promise Pheobe."

With a firm grasp on either side of your tear-stained face, she makes you look at her, "Look if you really feel that bad, just promise me you'll swish with something before kissing me tonight. I love you, Pheobe. I know what that means." She pulls you close, kissing your forehead. "We'll be fine together, okay?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 02:58:54 am
Gratitude. Unwinding. Dinner.

Sometime tonight, we're gonna have to open actual negotiations with Alphira. Sometime tonight, we're gonna have to consider the question of SEED.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 03:00:20 am
I agree.  She's too powerful to ignore.  Perhaps the time has come for SEED to retire.

Gratitude. Unwinding. Dinner.

Sometime tonight, we're gonna have to open actual negotiations with Alphira. Sometime tonight, we're gonna have to consider the question of SEED.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 03:03:37 am
Er, also... sometime tonight we're gonna have to figure out what actually happened just now, 'cos I've got a feeling Emma's giving us comfort over truth here.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 03:04:52 am
It is true that the Pontifex shot him, we just broke the case, I believe.  why the Pontifex shot him is in question though.

From the update: "he was shot in the head by the Pontifex."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 03:13:13 am
This specifically

"Alright, we need to get our stories straight-- and this is exactly what happened, do the both of you understand?" Emma and the Guard nod, listening to the words of the Pontifex.

leaves me wondering just what went down when we weren't looking.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 03:15:38 am
There was one death, and the update did indicate that he was specifically shot by the Pontifex.  Other than that, whatever happened when we weren't looking isn't particularly important, in my opinion, as no one else was hurt.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 03:17:48 am
Who'd we stab tho? We stabbed somebody.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 03:19:36 am
I took another look, but I didn't see a stabbing.  May I ask what the exact quote from the update is that indicated we hurt someone?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 03:22:10 am
In your other hand, you realize, is a shimmering dagger of glass, stained with blood. "You killed the guard with that." Emma quietly offers your role, "But not before blacking out and unleashing a firestorm to protect me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 03:23:20 am
Right, that's the cover story.  But that isn't what actually transpired.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 03:30:16 am
...how'd we wind up clutching a perfectly-formed shard of blood-stained glass then? Am I missing something here?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 03:31:58 am
It's a glass dagger rather than a shard of glass, I believe.  Someone probably put it in our hand while we were dead to the world.  Note that Emma says that that's our "role" to play, and it's placed just after the cover story that the Pontifex is telling to the guards.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 03:40:57 am
To clear it up: how many deaths were there, and what were the causes of these deaths?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 04:11:07 am
One death, former guard, shot in the head by The Pontifex after said guard seized Emma. Possible containment protocol.

[20]After shaking yourself out of it, Emma lifts you to your feet, and she catches you staring at the dagger with a mild sense of confusion. With a slow glance around, she explains in a gentle whisper, "You...you made that from the glass you shattered." She explains, softly, moving to gently take it from your hand. "The Pontifex took it from you when you were all...weird, stabbed the body and handed it back."

"Apparently you having weapons not given to you breaks 'containment'. That's what he said. Unless it was in self-defense...he didn't want to explain more."

An impulse strikes you, and you turn away from the officers and Pontifex. The equation is fresh in your mind. You can do this, you can do this...and you do.

There's no light show, no fancy effects---the dagger simply begins to shift, coiling in around itself, the blood dripping off to the ground.

Within your hands by the end of it is a glass flower, that besides the lack of color, looks exactly like the ones from the fallow spring fields at the Academy. You hesitate, before handing it to Emma, suddenly sheepish. A mantra begins to dig itself into your brain, some old survival technique.



I'm not Alphira. You repeat this to yourself as the two of you set off. You're quiet, at first, but eventually, the two of you chat a little about what happened. It isn't a comfortable talk, but it clears the air. The walk is indeed lovely and calming, and your mind drifts into relaxation. You both drink when you arrive at the restaurant, your guard surreptitiously seated one table away, where she actually takes off the kevlar and pretends to enjoy herself.

Her rifle isn't that far away.

[18]But what's important is that you and Emma genuinely enjoy yourself, and, true to what she says, you have to take a swish of wine before you can kiss her.

When you arrive back at your compound, Emma is an adorable mess, bragging about the flower to the guard, who listens in stoic patience.

Mother Nicole is the first one that greets you, wrapping you in a tight hug that threatens to break bones. "Pheobe, I'm so sorry--- I thought he could be trusted-- I don't understand why he would...Pheobe, please, I'm sorry."

[15] "Mother Nicole...we would just like to relax together if that's okay?" Emma asks, saving you from further questions, continuing, gently, "It wasn't your fault. You did everything right."

She lets you go with an awkward tousle of your hair, content for the moment to let you rest.



You lay in bed. Emma sleeps next to you, still dressed, having fallen asleep the moment her head hit the pillow, and you're left alone with your thoughts.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 04:15:56 am
That's a pleasant way to pass the rest of the day.  We got confirmation that we didn't hurt anyone, just broke the glass case, so we should take that into account when negotiating with Alphira.

Thanks for your help earlier.  Can we talk about when and how you should have control?  That's something that I think we should consider.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 16, 2020, 04:48:51 am
That's a pleasant way to pass the rest of the day.  We got confirmation that we didn't hurt anyone, just broke the glass case, so we should take that into account when negotiating with Alphira.

Thanks for your help earlier.  Can we talk about when and how you should have control?  That's something that I think we should consider.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 05:07:52 am
Should it? I didn't kill anybody--it was your guard's fault he got twitchy. The anger sears to the surface burning with indignation. You sigh, and leave the bed, taking a calming walk towards the empty training room. You sit down on the bench and adjust your boots.

I'm keeping my word here, Patches, and you're the one who keeps coming to me with questions. I'm content to sleep my days away until the...VOID lets me take full control.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 05:12:17 am
Sure, and I'll keep my word as well, but you can't do that if we're dead.  The more you help us in tight situations, the greater the likelihood that you'll actually see the day that you take full control.  Think of it like an investment.

Similarly, if we fight with each other for control, we'll end up where we were last time, nearly dead.  If we can iron this out, we won't risk damaging the body beyond repair.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 16, 2020, 06:22:18 am
Sure, and I'll keep my word as well, but you can't do that if we're dead.  The more you help us in tight situations, the greater the likelihood that you'll actually see the day that you take full control.  Think of it like an investment.

Similarly, if we fight with each other for control, we'll end up where we were last time, nearly dead.  If we can iron this out, we won't risk damaging the body beyond repair.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 06:32:07 am
How about this then, stop calling on me until you need me! I'm not a dog, I'm not a slave. If you want me, then you should ask me. I'll even ignore those pissants who keep using my name, how about that? You begin to jog around the track, feeling increasingly awkward during your mental conversations. You're concerned you're insane, but everything is too logical, too orderly to be insanity. You think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 16, 2020, 12:37:32 pm
Understood, I’m sorry about that

What do we say to the angel? Anything?
((I put light blue text to indicate that if we talk to the angel in us, that can be the color we use))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 01:36:35 pm
Aw man we didn't kill anybody. That's... a tremendous relief.

What do we say to the angel? Anything?
((I put light blue text to indicate that if we talk to the angel in us, that can be the color we use))

I'm not sure we have an "angelic" alter ego. We've got VOID and Alphira, and that's all I've seen.
If we do wind up talking to VOID, I'd be inclined to use z̴̥̳̚ả̶͔̦̓l̴̤̃̉g̴̛̪̭̔ọ̵̚ text for the purpose-- but we'll figure that out when the time comes.

Understood, I’m sorry about that

+1

Look... I was scared of what you might have done when I wasn't watching, but you really were magnificent back there. You say you can make a god of us? I'm listening.

Just, please... don't shatter the life we've made for ourselves here. I need this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 01:46:12 pm
I think she was referring to the VOID.  It might be interesting to get its opinion on this.

D̶̼̫̝̪͈̙̘̥͇̊̆̂͜ǫ̸̯̅͂͊̑̆̿́̅̅̚͝ ̶̡̧̦̦͉̣̞̯̝̥͙̱̗̏̾͑̎͛̔̕͝y̴̨̛̛̭͓͚͈̭̍̈́̎̈́̆̏̆̿͑́͐͗̓̍ơ̷̧̤̗͍̍͜ú̵̯̼̥̊͊̋̔̿͆́̾͂́̈́̉̇͗̽͘ ̷̡̰̪̬̖͙͕̝̯̪͔͉̣̻̔̀́̾ḩ̷͕̯͈̞̠͈̺̌ḁ̷̫͇̜͎̼̽͌͊̈́̋̐̈̚v̷̨͇̻̭͇̊͊̇̀̀̌̏̈̄̂̀̑͝͝é̴͚̪̦͔̬̓̑̓̋͂͝͝ ̷̡͈̟͕͍̰̑̇̓̃̉ẫ̶͈̑͆͛͑̋̋̇̀̇̕͘̕͜͝n̷̨̢̺̜͚̮͎͚̥͓͕̳̿̅͠ͅy̷͍̮͍̠̱̠̰̩̩͍̟͐͊t̵͉̮̪̔̎̈̄̈́̅h̸̪̪̠̘̩̭̤̀̽̐͊͜ị̷̧̤͓̞͍̯̤̤̭͍̞̾̅̈́͒͋̔͋́̔͜n̷͚̜̩͇̲̂͑̄̀̅͐͝g̸͙̪̥͖͋̾̀̄̔́̂̐́̄͋̏̏̕͝ ̸̛͈̫̘̙̮̺͖̰͚͆̽̉̓̇̓̒̏̃̌̓̍̈ͅt̷͈̗̞̤͈̗̪͉͆̀͒̿͜ớ̵̘̞͓͆̅̉̐̓͑̋̑̀̅̑̾̍ ̸̛̗̱͓͕̳̼͉̣̩̠̘̓́̇͐̈́̊́̂̄̊̊̇͘͘a̸̡̡̨̩̼̝̥̼̰͈̥̫͉̰̥̘͝d̴̡̠̦̳͎͉͔̜͔̼̠̘͈̱̥̆̂̈́̃ͅd̴̢̻̘̞͍̙̯̞̾͒̀̋̑̿̄̓͝͝?̴̘͖͚̝̹̲͌̓̇̋̃̆̋̂͋̚̚͝͝͠
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 03:47:00 pm
Ehh... if Alphira's taught us anything, it's that we don't call up our counterparts without a real good reason. I'd rather not bring VOID into this unless we have to.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 03:49:32 pm
It's always been pretty reasonable, however, and it supports cooperation.  Plus, Alphira is scared of it, so that's a plus as well.  If necessary, we could leverage an alliance with the VOID to overrule Alphira, though her most recent actions were certainly helpful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 04:04:51 pm
Hm, you might have something there. How about this:

Understood, I’m sorry about that

+1

Look... I was scared back there of what you might do, but you really were magnificent today. You say you can make a god of us? I'm listening.

I̷̘͘'̷̡̳͌m̷͇̅ ̷̗̀l̴̛͚̾ị̶̼͝ś̵̮͖ṱ̷͐̋è̷̜n̸̬̿i̶̠̐̇n̴̩͈̊̏ġ̴̡ ̵̺̏̕ţ̵̄o̵̢̍͛ ̸̛̜̋b̸͕̿ō̴ͅt̸͈̖̍̉h̷̡͈͆̃ ̶̤̰͒o̷̭͂̀f̶̛̥̔ ̶͕̅̂y̸̝͙͗o̶̞̿ȗ̸͙.̶̡͇̒

Just, please... be careful of the life we've made for ourselves here. I need this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 04:10:35 pm
To be honest, it is difficult for me to agree to that.  Asking Alphira to "make a god of us" could awaken her worst impulses, and we would need to be more than neutral with the VOID to form an alliance.

However, I'll think it over and return later to make a decision.  I don't want to delay the game unnecessarily.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 16, 2020, 04:15:13 pm
I feel like we need to talk with every mind we have in us, I thought we had Alphira, the angel, the void, and us
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 04:17:38 pm
Some of the earliest posts do make reference to a yellow voice, while Alphira is orange, but I'm not sure if that is a substantive difference or just an accidental.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 16, 2020, 04:21:17 pm
Some of the earliest posts do make reference to a yellow voice, while Alphira is orange, but I'm not sure if that is a substantive difference or just an accidental.
the white, ( thought was the angel, while the black, I thought was the void, then there is yellow, which I think is us, then there is orange, so we have 4 minds sharing a body.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 04:22:34 pm
Hmm, where is there white text?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 04:26:11 pm
To be honest, it is difficult for me to agree to that.  Asking Alphira to "make a god of us" could awaken her worst impulses, and we would need to be more than neutral with the VOID to form an alliance.

I'm open to gentler words, if you've words to offer. I'm trying to show Alphira we're not dismissing her out of hand, is all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 04:57:52 pm
Thank you, how about these changes?

Hm, you might have something there. How about this:

Understood, I’m sorry about that

+1

Look... I was scared back there of what you might do, but you really were magnificent today. You say you can help us? I'm listening.

W̸̢̨̱̗̬̳͓̭̰̟͚̝̻̻̹͆͌̑̿́́̈͑͂̚ͅḫ̶̡̣͖́̿̅̓̈́͛̐̾̓͒͘͠a̸̖̅̇͑́̽͑̋̋̓̐̈̕̚͝͝t̸̢̛̛͙̭͈̟̞͚̦̜̫͍̺̖̓͌̊̏̈́͒͐̎̌͝͝ ̷̢͖͈̟̭̻̠̦͚̦̖̲̓͌̀̾͋͌̒͒̐͘̕͜ͅͅå̸̳͎͔͖̬̘̗̒̑̊̅͌̈́͌͛̄r̴̡̧͈͔͙̱̻̪̟̮͓̞̗̯͆̍͌́͗͊͒͆̇̒͂̓́́̀̌e̸̟̯̟̝̬̬͊̿̆̒͌͒̏̐̏͂̉͗͂̀ ̶̧̞͈͖̺͕̼͂́̄̀̄͌̑̍̔̚̕y̴̨̬̻͓̮͍͋̍͋̒͗̚ơ̶͚̟̼̰̬͍̘͔̣̱͍̖̪͔͌̃̈́̓̌͑̍̈͆̽̎̈̚u̷̲̜̥͖̞̰͎̱̖͉͌̒̐̽̎͒̉ͅͅr̷̪̯̤̓͆̽̉̽͗͐̈́̇̂̃̔͗̇̕͜͝ ̸̧̱̼̯̦̬̜̭̦̜̱̙̑̓̊̊͐̒͜t̴̡͚͈̖̭̱̙̣̩͍͍̟̟͇̘͉̝͌̅͑̉͛̏̋͊̋͝ḩ̵̡̜̘̤͙̣́̉́ǫ̵̡̛̰̱͓̤̝̏̏͌͒́̋̌͗̈̓ͅu̴̜͉̮͍̙͉̩̯̝̦̘̩͉͕̹̽̈́̊̆͐͊̑̒̐̕͝g̶̛̳͌̐̓̓͛͑̀͂̽͗́́̓̚͝h̵͍̙͚̗͉̬̋̓̑̽̉̐͊̀̆͑́͋̾̕͠ṱ̶̨̧̧̝̰̳͇͉̗͉̯͇̬̺̩̃̔͛̎͝s̴̛͔̀͆̂͐̅̾́̑̎̈́ ̵̩̣̫͔̈͜ơ̷͍̳͔̬̟̻̐n̸͕̬̟̲̙̘̳̓͒͐̍̅͑̑̿͌͌ ̴̻̬̮̭̮̰̤͔͙̳͔͈̽̆̉̊̎̂̐̅͂̍͜ͅt̵̢̧̨̧̛̺̠̗̰̟̲̤̤͈̤̱͖͠͠ͅh̴̨̯̞̦̝̤̘͕͔̬̭͖̮̆͜ͅe̷͉̬̳̜̘͎̪̲̘͚̰͕̮̜̤̭̪̅́̓͛̂͆̽̀͌͛̂́̿͘͠ ̵̠͍͍̪̗̙̠̙̳͓̼̰̺̮͇͎́̆͌̂͑̈́̄͊̎͜͠m̴̱̓̅̆̄̌͐͌̕̚á̶̢̡̬̭͖̙́͑͒̐̐͘̕͝͝͝͝t̶̗̜̃͂́̀͊̐̀̏̒́̕ͅt̵̡̡̗͚̼̱̜̬͗̈́͌̿̃̀̿́̊̈͌̆͘̚͠ͅȩ̷̖̖͈̬̙̯̰̟͖̲̩̔̓̉̆̕͝ȑ̷̨̧̯͚͚͖̪͍̤̣͕͚̞̫̹͍̝̑̀͐̀̃?̶̰̫̗͔̳̤͈͉̭̾̆̐̉̑̃͠.̶̡͇̒

Just, please... be careful of the life we've made for ourselves here. I need this.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 04:58:44 pm
[20]Death is not the worse thing that can happen to a person. Whether that's an agreement or another confrontation is hard to determine, You still have much to learn. Do you need to go on that pilgrimage now or can you buckle down and actually practice instead of goofing off?

I can't teach you everything I could do. Its... it's all so vague...VOID had to Overload our processing just to save us during the fall, and that's damage that cannot be repaired easily.

But I can remember this; our primary vector is energy and hydrogen manipulation.

You've reached a point where you're sweating, and your lungs are burning for oxygen, so you push yourself further, continuing to sprint around the track. You try to question the VOID, but all you get in return is a brief ache in your head. A thought dawns on you, and you reach out to try and connect with McCreary.

[14]You sit amongst the sand and the salt, feeling the hot winds blowing your hair. Your tan skin drips with perspiration, but you live. You're people call you a miracle for being able to weather the noon-day sun. You rule here without needing to rule. But the knowledge that there are other worlds out there is an ember in your brain. It keeps you from being satisfied with this life. Inaction breeds weakness, or so the elders say, so you lift a handful of sand and close your eyes...

When you come to, you're sitting cross-legged on the floor of the training room, with a sculpture of tile flooring curling into the air in front of you. It flows an ebbs with abstracts, a shifting construct retaining the same color and density of the track.

[7] You wipe away a drop of blood from your nose and contemplate the art until the head-ache fades to an acceptable level. Its a replica of what you saw McCreary make. You don't know how to do it without accessing McCreary's memory, but you think you could keep practicing and eventually get the hang of it.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 05:04:46 pm
Keep practicing, but stop if we develop a worse headache.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 16, 2020, 05:12:48 pm
Thank you.

Keep practicing, but stop if we develop a worse headache.

+1

Go try and get some sleep once we're done. We may not need much, but it is the middle of the night out here!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 05:31:16 pm
...

[7]It doesn't come, no matter how hard you try. You focus on the sculpture, on the ground, trying to imagine what makes it up. But there's nothing to help you, nothing that you can get a grip on. You put your hand on the sculpture, trying to focus willpower into changing it, but nothing happens.

[9]You try for a while, and only succeed in making a part of the sculpture crack.

[1] The headache you thought you could ignore suddenly roars with a vengeance. You collapse. The world spins, and you pass out.



[17]A guard is gently shaking you awake. When you stumble to rise, he offers his hand to lift you up, which you gratefully take. His uncovered eyes drift over to the sculpture, interested in your impromptu art. "Did you make that, Angel Alphira?" He asks, curious, as you steady yourself on him. When you nod an affirmative, "Its quite beautiful. Its...its amazing what you can do."

[18]"Ah, I apologize. I'm Captain Zachery McKinney." He pulls down his mesh, dipping his head in a polite bow. "I'm the captain of your personal guard, and I look forward to serving you...in the Great Work." He emphasizes that last phrase, his eyes bright in the dull light of the training room. "Do you need medical assistance, Angel Alphira? Its a concern for a guard when they find their subject passed out."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: TamerVirus on March 16, 2020, 05:43:49 pm
I was just testing something. Never mind. Some food would do me well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 06:07:17 pm
I was just testing something. Never mind. Some food would do me well.
+1

"It's a pleasure to meet you, however.  What are your duties as the captain of my personal guard?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 16, 2020, 06:36:22 pm
[-]"Well, guard you, for one." Zachary offers with a chuckle, dipping his head and following you as you walk towards the cafeteria. "File paperwork, fill out forms, train, inspect the barracks and the troops, ensure the safety of personnel involved with the project, and so on. It's quite a list." You take a stack of covered bowls marked for you, containing nutrient mush and actual [grain-meal]. You grab the jug of water assigned to you, and the bottles of [apple] juice and heavily diluted wine. When you're loaded up with your assigned rations, you take a seat at an empty table, and the Captain follows along behind you.

"The duty I'm here for today is the briefing for your pilgrimage today." He explains as you start to eat, watching you intently. "I've got the action plan ready, and we're set to go at nine."

[-]You eat as he speaks, and he has a map to show you, one that stretches out from the gate of the Holy City all the way westward, right to the edge of McCreary's lake.

"Any issues with this plan, Angel Alphira?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 16, 2020, 06:38:42 pm
It appears he accidentally forgot to mention the containment orders.

"Yes, cancel it, effective immediately."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 16, 2020, 06:44:40 pm
I was just testing something. Never mind. Some food would do me well.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 17, 2020, 07:39:05 am
Are we sure we want to cancel it?

Also Naturegirl your quoting an action from last turn.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 17, 2020, 08:51:17 am
It appears he accidentally forgot to mention the containment orders.

"Yes, cancel it, effective immediately."
whoops, sorry, why are we cancelling it? Didn’t we agree to the pilgrimage?
I say the plan is good, participate I’m the pilgrimage
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 17, 2020, 03:52:29 pm
Alphira says we should skip it.  We already can contact McCreary if we need to, who knows all about the battle, so I don't see the point of wasting time on it.

[20]Death is not the worse thing that can happen to a person. Whether that's an agreement or another confrontation is hard to determine, You still have much to learn. Do you need to go on that pilgrimage now or can you buckle down and actually practice instead of goofing off?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 17, 2020, 04:25:45 pm
We're gonna have some serious explaining to do, but for now

"Yes, cancel it, effective immediately."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 17, 2020, 04:28:28 pm
Alphira says we should skip it.  We already can contact McCreary if we need to, who knows all about the battle, so I don't see the point of wasting time on it.

[20]Death is not the worse thing that can happen to a person. Whether that's an agreement or another confrontation is hard to determine, You still have much to learn. Do you need to go on that pilgrimage now or can you buckle down and actually practice instead of goofing off?
Oh right
How do we tell them?

We're gonna have some serious explaining to do, but for now

"Yes, cancel it, effective immediately."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 17, 2020, 04:32:54 pm
How do we tell them?

Probably we just play it straight, with a healthy touch of the supernatural. Say that a vision of McCreary himself came upon us in the crypt of his relic, showing unto us his battle against the Great Worm. We need no longer look upon the battle's remnants; we have seen its unfolding first-hand!

Actually... explain this to the guard captain after we give the order to cancel. Better now than later.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 17, 2020, 05:21:05 pm
How do we tell them?

Probably we just play it straight, with a healthy touch of the supernatural. Say that a vision of McCreary himself came upon us in the crypt of his relic, showing unto us his battle against the Great Worm. We need no longer look upon the battle's remnants; we have seen its unfolding first-hand!

Actually... explain this to the guard captain after we give the order to cancel. Better now than later.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 17, 2020, 05:55:46 pm
[-]"...ah, yes Angel Alphira." Zachary nods, calling over an underling and handing him a hastily scribbled note. The other guard offers a snappy salute and leaves. "As for the matter yesterday, I deeply apologize for the actions of my guard. I can promise it won't happen again."

"If that's all Angel Alphira, I'll take my leave."

What now?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 17, 2020, 06:00:15 pm
"I am going to give you a list of names.  If any of these individuals are currently Crusaders or training to be Crusaders, you will offer them a significant raise if they choose to train here, by my side.  You will also integrate them into my personal guard, and you will select one of them to become your lieutenant."

“McGee Foster, James Foster, Johnathan Shellton, Jesse Hardhouse, Erica Hail, Amanda Silversmith, 'Other' Eric Armstrong, John Frost, Quincy Black.”

“Do you anticipate any logistical problems in following these orders?”


We should replace the guards loyal to SEED with ones loyal directly to us.  They can infiltrate the Church and provide us with useful information, and I'd rather have them as our guards than agents of SEED dedicated to our “containment" and eventual murder.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 17, 2020, 06:05:30 pm
"Your guard acted with... admirable zeal. I regret the misunderstanding."

"I am going to give you a list of names.  If any of these individuals are currently Crusaders or training to be Crusaders, you will offer them a significant raise if they choose to train here, by my side.  You will also integrate them into my personal guard, and you will select one of them to become your lieutenant."

“McGee Foster, James Foster, Johnathan Shellton, Jesse Hardhouse, Erica Hail, Amanda Silversmith, 'Other' Eric Armstrong, John Frost, Quincy Black.”

“Do you anticipate any logistical problems in following these orders?”



We should replace the guards loyal to SEED with ones loyal directly to us.  They can infiltrate the Church and provide us with useful information, and I'd rather have them as our guards than agents of SEED dedicated to our “containment" and eventual murder.

Aw man, good call. +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 17, 2020, 06:22:08 pm
[15] "Mother Nicole and The Crusader General have final say, but the Pontifex is pushing for more careful guards around you. He let the Crusader General have it, last I heard. I'll see what can be done, Angel Alphira, and get back to within the week." Zachary explains, scribbling down the notes.

"I regret it as well. Anything more, Mother?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 17, 2020, 06:31:46 pm
"Nothing for the moment, thank you.  I look forward to working with you to advance the Great Work."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 17, 2020, 06:34:10 pm
"Nothing for the moment, thank you.  I look forward to working with you to advance the Great Work."

+1

Assuming it's still dark out, let's try and get some rest then settle back into our routine come morning. Keep practicing our earth-shifting, when we get the chance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 17, 2020, 06:49:04 pm
"Nothing for the moment, thank you.  I look forward to working with you to advance the Great Work."

+1

Assuming it's still dark out, let's try and get some rest then settle back into our routine come morning. Keep practicing our earth-shifting, when we get the chance.

+1

Something else that may be useful, that perhaps we can spend our budget on, would be fixing up the suit and getting it in better shape.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 17, 2020, 07:23:34 pm
[-]It is early morning, but the rest of your day has been cleared out in terms of schedule.

Train? And how so?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 17, 2020, 07:27:14 pm
I would recommend asking Emma, if she's up, to look into fixing up the [angel] suit, using the budget if necessary.

As for training, practice hydrogen manipulation and consider the possible applications of this power.  Put some researchers on this task, if possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 18, 2020, 02:26:42 am
I would recommend asking Emma, if she's up, to look into fixing up the [angel] suit, using the budget if necessary.

As for training, practice hydrogen manipulation and consider the possible applications of this power.  Put some researchers on this task, if possible.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 05:20:36 am
[5][11] As you walk toward's the scientist's labs, and you consider how you can use hydrogen. From your brief education, you know you can light it on fire, when pure, and it produces water during this process of oxidization. The fusion generators use it...somehow. You weren't taught the specifics. Your pistol is powered by it-- but it works like a battery, storing the energy put into it as opposed to producing the energy itself, as anything else is too expensive in terms of net power output. The reactor within your pistol works as a converter. It stabilizes the energy and produces a laser, which is directed through the lens in a set of pulses.

You're going to have to come up with something, however.

[16] The scientists stare at you. They explain how the fusion reactors work but are confused otherwise. Apparently, by binding together certain 'isotopes' of hydrogen in a contained environment, they can produce energy, with a few byproducts, such as helium. This energy, in turn, heats elements within the reactor, which in turn, move micro-turbines, which generate electricity. Some older models of the reactor use water to turn turbines.

They, however, do tell you that they can quickly provide you with tanks and tanks of the stuff, should you need it for your experimentations, although they do warn you of...exploding it. As for how you can use it...they don't even know how your powers work, let alone how you could manipulate hydrogen to do what you need to do. The best guess they can provide is, "You can burn it, you can fuse it to release energy and radiation, and it's readily available."

They recommend a few chemistry and physics books but regret to inform you that only a few of them can understand how the fusion reactors work, as they were a gift from SEED. They have to follow maintenance procedures precisely as listed in the manual, and makeshift repairs to the machines are often decided against, and the devices are often just replaced outright.



[15]You speak to Emma, next, having caught her as she makes her way into her office in the morning. "...I can bring it down and store it in one of the empty training rooms, but the best I can do to help repair it is get the lower layer replaced with Kevlar-reinforced robes or a coat or something...I don't...know that much about armor repair. Sorry [angel]. I can start looking into pulling an armorsmith in for your team. One of the best. And some of those scientists might be able to study the metal."

She pulls a face, breathing a sigh, "I don't know how much they know about 'Void metal', though."

"The Thornton Scientist will be here tomorrow." She offers, "Maybe he can help? He had a couple of things he wanted to show you in terms of implants."




[-] Its mid-day, and after lunch when you step into the training room again. A young scientist scurries from the room as you approach, dipping a polite nod. He was studying the statue in the center of the track, and you aim to add another there today.

[2][7]You sit cross-legged on the tile floor, resting your hands on it and closing your eyes. You will it to change, to do something, anything, but nothing happens, except a brief headache that slowly fades. You heave a sigh, staring at the abstract creation you made last night.

[19][1]Your head throbs painfully, but you focus, reaching out with your willpower to trick the universe into doing what you want it to. You brute force the math, using only will, and the results are obvious. There is no graceful statue made, no flowing flowers-- a sharp spike of shiny, almost metallic grey stone shifts out of the floor, impaling into the air in front of you. Success, you roar internally, even as you collapse back onto the floor. Your face suddenly feels very moist, but your arms and legs aren't responding. Hunger burns your stomach despite the lunch you just ate.



One of the medical personnel has gently placed your head on a pillow and cleaned away the blood from your face. He sits beside you, and you realize that he has a few bowls of food for you. He checks to see if you have any more brain damage, making you follow the light, checking that you can feel all your fingers and toes--you notice, however, that when he pricks the tip of your pinky, that you don't feel it. You shake your head, rising with his assistance and devouring the nutrient paste he provides.

What now?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 05:46:19 am
I would say heal, but we already have a headache so maybe we should sleep for a bit to let us heal to the point where the headache is either gone or less painful
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 05:54:10 am
[-]Your headache fades by the next day, around the same time, and you once again emerge into the training chamber. A medic is on standby, watching you from behind a reinforced glass window. You check the clock, noting that you have three hours of training before your first meeting with the Thornton Scientist.

How would you like to train today?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 06:24:32 am
Attempt to control our Oferload, concentrating it into a smaller area
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Post by: King Zultan on March 18, 2020, 07:47:53 am
Attempt to control our Oferload, concentrating it into a smaller area
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 01:38:34 pm
[715]You are provided a worn pistol with which to test your Overload. You walk towards the range and lift your gun at one of the targets, noting, with a grin, the massive steel wall behind it. You focus your willpower, reaching down into the magazine and pulling the hydrogen up, up, into the reactor. Then you quickly shift your attention.

[17] It works, you narrow what you can only describe as a shield of willpower around the beam, tightening it just around the tip of the barrel in the brief nano-second of time you have. The reactor discharges, and you smell smoke as the lens array burns. You expect to see a greater amount of light---

[2] But all you can see is the [5 inches] hole that is burned clearly through the target-- and the steel wall. You can see straight through it, to the outside. Luckily, this place must have been designed for such accidents, because you only see open sky. You hold the pistol until you sense all the energy has flowed out of it, and inspect it.

The coolant system is fried still, and the laser emitter is shattered beyond repair. Your security team is quick to go and check for injuries but find none. Surprisingly, you feel fine after that expenditure of energy. And the whole affair took no more than fifteen minutes out of your allotted time.

Two hours and forty-five minutes of training remaining.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: TamerVirus on March 18, 2020, 01:44:34 pm
Experiment with physical combat: can we channel our will into punches? Blades and clubs?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 01:45:55 pm
Experiment with physical combat: can we channel our will into punches? Blades and clubs?
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 02:40:55 pm
[-]You square up to the punching bag, breathing in and out slowly. You take a few swings at it, sending the bag swaying back and forth, until you feel comfortable enough to know your baseline. Then, you focus.

[9][2]And nothing happens, besides a splitting headache that disorientates you, and causes your swing to go wide. You heave a sigh, straightening up and focusing again.

[2][13] Still, no luck. You're missing something, as your headache doesn't worsen and your punch still connects.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 02:42:53 pm
Attempt to create heat and fire from our outstretched hands.
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 03:07:16 pm
Attempt to create heat and fire from our outstretched hands.
+1 try not burning ourself in the process
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 03:31:50 pm
[20][14]In another training room, the one with your strange art in the center you focus your will. You remember how Alphira did it when she had control of you, the equation, the variables, what to move where, where to put a spike of energy, when to withdraw it to conserve your power. Flame sputters to life, barely visible in the bright room. But the heat is there, billowing out.

A burning hot fire dances on your hand, and you reach out, touching the spike of grey metal that juts haphazardly from the floor. It begins to melt, dripping down in molten globs of slag that sizzle on the tile before rapidly cooling in the ambient air temperature. You lit it burn until the gray tip of metal is in a pool around the spike, finally shutting down the process by shutting your hand. With the reference point gone, the reaction stops.

[20]This feels familiar, like putting on a coat forgotten in the closet. Its a simple process, one that feeds itself, and, at times, your own energy expenditure is minimum. Perhaps there are other uses for this.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 03:34:07 pm
Attemot to meld metal into a glove
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Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 03:35:15 pm
Attemot to meld metal into a glove
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 03:36:56 pm
By what process?
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Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 03:38:54 pm
Alternatively: attempt to manipulate heat to create air pressure and cause objects to levitate and move.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 03:41:42 pm
By what process?
By making multiple spikes and melding them together into a shape, by manipulating where the metal bends to be able to shape it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 03:59:48 pm
[13][9]Your headache worsens, even as you successfully pull the grey metal from the tile around you, forming it into a number of small spikes on the floor. You sit down, suddenly overcome with vertigo and exhaustion, but you press on, shaping and adjusting them closer together.

[17]You begin to heat the metal, sparking the fires to life without much issue--

[8]But maintaining the fire and trying to manipulate this strange, glassy, shiny metal at the same time is too much for you to bear, and you begin to drift in and out of consciousness, even as you're surrounded by burning hot metal.

[18]You, wisely, cut off the heat, falling to lay on your back, lounging in the air that manages to penetrate your senses with its warmth. Your head throbs with aching pain, and your vision swims. A medical personnel waits on the edge of your vision, sweat beading on his forehead even as he pulls you away from the heat, to a cooler section of the room. There, he rests you on a pillow, wiping blood from your ears and speaking to you in a voice that you struggle to hear through the distance.

"Pheobe? Pheobe? Can you hear me?" You look at him, lifting a finger towards him, and he nods, he tilts your head back, "Alright, just keep breathing in and out, try to focus on my voice, okay?"

You do so, patiently, even as you try not to drift away into unconsciousness. Eventually, you're able to answer his questions to his satisfaction, and he and a guard rest you against a bench. They provide you with nutrient paste, which you force down past the rising nausea.

"Pheobe? Are you going to be okay?" The Medic seems at a loss for what to do, squeezing your shoulder gently even as you eat like a feral animal.

You have thirty minutes of training left, before your meeting with the Thornton Scientist.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 18, 2020, 04:04:58 pm
"I'll be alright. Just... learning my limits."
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Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 04:06:37 pm
"How is hydrogen used in the human body?"
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 04:10:05 pm
"How is hydrogen used in the human body?"
+1 (I believe it makes up water, so theoretically we could break the bones that make up water, drying a person out while burning them due to pure oxygen and pure hydrogen being very flammable. DO NOT ATTEMPT, just musing)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 04:11:20 pm
(Interesting.  If we could do that at range, it sounds like a good takedown without revealing our position.)
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 04:15:01 pm
[3] "Be a little more ca--" The Medic is at a loss after your question, looking increasingly concerned by the ramifications. He actually backs away a little, seeming to perceive your question as a threat rather than true curiosity, "I...I don't know, Al--Pheobe? I...I wasn't trying to interrupt anything-- I'm sorry, Mother Alphira, you seemed in distress."
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Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 04:16:42 pm
"That isn't a threat, and I'm sorry if I startled you.  I was just interested in the topic and thought you might be familiar with it."
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Post by: Superdorf on March 18, 2020, 04:20:23 pm
"That isn't a threat, and I'm sorry if I startled you.  I was just interested in the topic and thought you might be familiar with it."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 04:23:38 pm
"That isn't a threat, and I'm sorry if I startled you.  I was just interested in the topic and thought you might be familiar with it."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 18, 2020, 04:25:09 pm
Let's focus on not scaring this guy out of his wits. We can always figure out what [demons] are made of later.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 04:43:53 pm
Let's focus on not scaring this guy out of his wits. We can always figure out what [demons] are made of later.
ok, will delete addendum
Addendum deleted,
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 05:00:51 pm
[-]"I...yes, Mother Alphira, I apologize-- I didn't mean to..." The medic just kind of awkwardly trails off, handing you another lukewarm bowl of nutrient paste, which you hastily devour after an exasperated sigh. Eventually, he helps you to your feet, and despite a bit of unsteadiness to your step, you remain standing. The Medic makes a hasty escape after that, all apologies.

You take a glance at the clock in the corner of the room, also taking note of the scientists who hastily scribble their notes on the other side of a glass panel. You breathe a sigh, turning out towards the door and heading to the assigned meeting room. It's a luxurious, by this world's standards, room, filled with a cypress wood table and chair set, that's been polished to a gleam. Emma sits with a man, who looks to be about William's age, that is to say, only a few years older than you. His hair is an unruly mop of dirty-blond, something noteworthy in this world of brunettes, and there's a gaunt look to his features. He simultaneously doesn't get enough sleep, food, or exercise.

"Ah, this must be her. Lady Alphira." He notices you through the glass, rising to his feet and tilting his head down, "It's quite a pleasure. I've heard great things from Emma and William. Although I'm sure that you have much more to show me. Emma was just going over the rules of the compound, but I'm sure she can catch me up to speed later, I would like you to see my lab, I haven't slept in a great while over the giddiness of working with a live [demon]."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 05:05:16 pm
"It's a pleasure to meet you, and I look forward to working with you, but it seems you have me at a disadvantage.  What is your name?  By all means, a tour of your lab would be lovely, but if you'd like to rest, that would be fine as well.  Can you get me up to speed on what your background is?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 05:08:41 pm
"It's a pleasure to meet you, and I look forward to working with you, but it seems you have me at a disadvantage.  What is your name?  By all means, a tour of your lab would be lovely, but if you'd like to rest, that would be fine as well.  Can you get me up to speed on what your background is?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 18, 2020, 05:12:00 pm
"I prefer [angel], if you would. A gentler name for a gentler purpose." (Smile.)

"Now..."

"It's a pleasure to meet you, and I look forward to working with you, but it seems you have me at a disadvantage.  What is your name?  By all means, a tour of your lab would be lovely, but if you'd like to rest, that would be fine as well.  Can you get me up to speed on what your background is?"

Say this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 05:15:03 pm
"I prefer [angel], if you would. A gentler name for a gentler purpose." (Smile.)

"Now..."

"It's a pleasure to meet you, and I look forward to working with you, but it seems you have me at a disadvantage.  What is your name?  By all means, a tour of your lab would be lovely, but if you'd like to rest, that would be fine as well.  Can you get me up to speed on what your background is?"

Say this.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 05:17:56 pm
"Ah yes, I am Silas Thornton," He glances at Emma, "I'm Emma's Kin, but not of blood relation, and was in charge of many projects for the Thornton family. Implants, aggression amplifiers, I synthesized Ballistic for the first time as well. I'm not licensed by the Scholars, as a forewarning, so my methods differ."

Silas giggles in a very feminine way, "I'm far more practical in my pursuits. The Thornton's have...leased me to you. And to be blunt, I will be sending data back to my own laboratory that may be of use."

"I'll call you Lady Alphira, if it's all the same to you." Silas smiles. "But I will refrain from using either designation until proven otherwise."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 05:19:38 pm
"Not a problem.  Have you been briefed on our research goals here, and do you have a plan to achieve them?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 18, 2020, 05:24:37 pm
"Not a problem.  Have you been briefed on our research goals here, and do you have a plan to achieve them?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 05:41:00 pm
Silas begins to walk, and you and Emma follow. Emma shoots you an apologetic look as Silas navigates the twisting hallways of the compound. He pauses for a brief moment, then looks back at Emma. "I"m hopelessly lost here, could you guide us to my lab, ma'am?"

Emma blinks, then takes the lead while Silas follows behind, close to you to continue the conversation. "I'm told you wish to experiment on yourself with implants to improve combat effectiveness. You intend to be fighting [the plague], which is no small task even for one with your abilities. From what I've read in the Thornton Family dossier on you, and the one the Scholar's provided; you have a great deal of regenerative ability, which may make the process incredibly simple or incredibly difficult."

"My first step in this process is to take baseline measurements, comparing you to a subject, a debt-slave I requisitioned, of similar age, build, and gender. Emma assures me you're a woman, so I'll take her word for it."

"After that physical baseline is established, we'll move forward from there. You have some resistance to the chemical effects of drugs if the Compound's medical reports are to be believed, but not a complete immunity. It may be as simple as raising the dosage or I might have to completely engineer an entirely new line of chemical compounds that work with your unique biology."

"Of course, these may be expensive, and I do not work for free, even if the materials are provided to me."

[-] The lab you step into is spacious, and, you notice with amusement, that is because somebody has haphazardly smashed down a wall into a nearby operating theater. A young woman in a grey jumpsuit sits nearby, and you notice, despite the difference in hair color, that she's of the approximate size and build to you currently. A strange mark is tattooed on her face in fading ink, the symbol of SEED. "Now, to be blunt, there are going to be a number of experiments conducted here that will injure you, but I'm sure you'll be fine. Please, have a seat." He gestures to a chair beside the one the other young woman sits on, and Emma looks uncomfortable, hanging back in the office portion of the lab. You notice a table with two glass slide on it, two very sharp scalpels, two crude metal syringes full of a clear, brownish liquid, and two bottles of a clear liquid.

"Or do you wish to see more work of mine to prove my point?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 05:46:36 pm
I don't feel great about this, to be honest.
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 05:48:41 pm
Sit in the chair, inquire about the liquids being used and what Silis intends to glean from their usage
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Post by: Superdorf on March 18, 2020, 05:50:47 pm
I don't feel great about this, to be honest.

Yeahhh.

"Let's make one thing clear, Silas: that woman is not to be permanently harmed, and she is to be released for her service here when this procedure of yours is through. I will pay extra to ensure this, if need be."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 05:51:45 pm
I don't feel great about this, to be honest.

Yeahhh.

"Let's make one thing clear, Silas: that woman is not to be permanently harmed, and she is to be released when this procedure of yours is through. I will pay extra to ensure this, if need be."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 06:04:38 pm
"She will be permanently harmed, unfortunately, but she will be released after the baseline is established. As will the other's that I have requisitioned. She agreed to this, knowing full well her life would be at risk. The price of freedom. A month of pain against half a lifetime of servitude."

"That's a tranquilizer commonly used for surgery, and the other is a bottle of ethanol. I will measure your resistance to chemical intoxication with both, but the bottle is for tommorow."

"Today, and for the next week, I will be performing the same operation on you both and many others like her; infection resistance, and how much your body rejects foreign bodies. If I had more time than two and a half months to get you ready, I could be more careful and methodical. Introduce an infection that we can easily cure, use a less dangerous procedure...so on. Of course, I could prevent that just by jamming as much as I can into you and hoping it sticks, but I'm told I can't break you, or I will be shot."
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Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 06:20:39 pm
"Correct.  What is the nature of the permanent damage?"
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Post by: Superdorf on March 18, 2020, 06:23:05 pm
I'm tempted to tell this guy to just start trying implants on us without the guinea pig-- but slow. I imagine there's certain augmentations our body could straight-up reject if need be.

For that matter, what sort of augmentations are we going for right now? I'm not really sure what we're trying to accomplish here.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 06:26:24 pm
Commence the experiment
They know what they were getting into. We need to know. He was sent to do the experiments. Let’s do it
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Post by: ZBridges on March 18, 2020, 06:26:46 pm
Things like protective but flexible plates placed to protect vital organs, strengthening or replacement of certain bones, that sort of thing.

I'm probably going ro regret this, but...

Commence the experiment
They know what they were getting into. We need to know. He was sent to do the experiments. Let’s do it
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 07:33:28 pm
"Wonderful." Silas gestures the young woman to the operating table. She hops up without a word, undoing her jumpsuit quietly to reveal her thin arms and figure. "So, did you know that you weigh less than most women of your age, despite your musculature? If I wasn't looking at you, I would say that your height to weight ratio is incredibly unhealthy, but you currently show no signs of starvation."

He washes his hands in steaming hot water, slowly applying some surgical garb. He approaches the young woman, picking up the uncovered syringe as he does so. With a slow draw, he puts less than a quarter of the liquid into her arm. With a scribbled note, he picks up the scalpel. He shakes her, gently, then roughly, satisfied with the lack of response, noting that down as well. With smooth, careful movements, he ties a tube around her arm after checking her pulse. He takes a sealed package from somewhere beside him, cuts it open, and then slices a sharp gash across her arm. Blood still trickles out on to the operating table, but he's quick, pulling the stainless steel fin-shaped object from the package and neatly pressing it into the incision.

With deft hands and nimble fingers, he stitches the wound shut and applies a dressing to it, threading through spokes on the object.
He observes his work before carefully removing his gloves. "Some help, please, either of you. I need her out of the way."

You rise, taking hold of her legs and settling her limp, unresponsive form on a nearby bed. He gently covers all but her arm with a blanket and then turns, cleaning off the operating table with a foul-smelling chemical, washing away the faint traces of blood. Then he undresses his surgical garb, throwing his dirty clothes into a trash bag nearby.

"You next, Lady Alphira. Hop up."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 07:39:08 pm
Do as he says, get on the bed
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 08:04:47 pm
Without a second thought, you lift yourself on to the operating table, settling in. Silas carefully washes, donning his surgical outfit in much the same way as before, returning to your side. With practiced movements, he pushes the syringe's needle into your arm, making a note as he dispenses the same amount of fluid as he did with the other girl.

You wait a few moments, but nothing happens. With a nod, he depresses more of the liquid into you. Your consciousness begins to fade. Then he does it once more with a satisfied smile curling his lips beneath the mask. You drift off.

When you awaken, there's a blinding pain in your arm that's quickly shut off. You also have one of those weird spoke-fins jutting out of your forearm. Silas is at his desk nearby, hunched over a strange device. Emma is asleep in a chair near you. He looks surprised by you sitting up. "Ah, Lady Alphira, you're awake earlier than expected." He takes note in his scratch-pad.

The other girl, you notice, is still unconscious, her arm propped up and out of harm's way. "You are a very interesting organism, Alphira! I broke my needle trying to get a bone marrow sample, and your blood...well your blood is very, very aggressive to foreign pathogens. You don't even have white blood cells-- yours are black and very, very volatile. They die rapidly once they're removed from your system, though, even when preserving agents are applied."

"Now tell me, do you feel any pain?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 08:17:57 pm
”I did in my arm for a moment when I woke up, but it shut off very shortly after, so I don’t feel pain now, except for the headache I still have”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: TamerVirus on March 18, 2020, 09:08:18 pm
However, I feel...itchy..
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 18, 2020, 10:58:09 pm
"Does that happen often-- the pain going away that quickly?" Silas asks, then explains further, "The itchiness is normal, you have a chunk of metal sticking out of your arm to see if it gets infected. If it didn't itch at least a little bit, I'd be concerned I'm too good at this. Let me know if there's redness, swelling, inflammation or you feel weak and unable to move. I probably won't be able to do much for you, but its good to know."

"Now, you might want to leave before the debt-slave wakes up. I'm going to have to keep her on pain medicine for a while."

Nodding, you adjust the bandage wrapped around your new...implant, and wake up Emma, so you can leave. The two of you sleep separately, and you collapse into your comfortable bed for a night of rest.



[20] You sit in a classroom, listening to the teacher talk. Something boring about physics, about entropy, as if any of that matters. The class is, as always, respectful, silent, and...nearly empty. But you drift, staring out into inky blackness. Outside the window, a grey ball turns around a fading red star...

"Alphira, could you--"

"We're dead anyway. Why does any of this matter?!" The teacher stares at you in silence, then calls on another student.




You awaken, rubbing at your arm, which, you note, has healed around the injury fairly quickly, the surgical wound already scabbing over. You rise and get dressed, sitting on your bed and trying to figure out your day. You could probably sneak out before Emma comes to wake you up and get more training in, or you could wait and talk to her about what needs to be done.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 18, 2020, 11:10:16 pm
attempt to train matter manipulation, this time get a liquid and try messing with that, similar to how we messed with metsl
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 12:03:00 am
attempt to train matter manipulation, this time get a liquid and try messing with that, similar to how we messed with metsl
+1

In addition, if not completely spent by that test, attempt to create a self-propelling bolt of fire.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 19, 2020, 07:59:44 am
attempt to train matter manipulation, this time get a liquid and try messing with that, similar to how we messed with metsl
+1

In addition, if not completely spent by that test, attempt to create a self-propelling bolt of fire.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 11:24:25 am
[9] You hold a cup of water in your hand and try to focus your will towards it. You try to shift it-- hey it moved-- no, wait, that was just your hand moving a little. Nothing happens. Something about it is too...heavy.

[15]On a whim, and in a well ventilated area, you separate out the hydrogen from it, and try to push it forward while igniting it.

[7]It's hard to control once it leaves a certain radius of your body, but it ignites in a small ball of fire and water droplets. It's a possibility, you realize, but it's difficult to keep your focus as it moves further away from.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 12:40:41 pm
Water has a lot of hydrogen in it... we might be well served to practice this further. Think of the power we could hold over a proper body of water!

Let's wait a bit, take a minute to touch base with Emma. Do we still have that folder the Pontifex gave us to look over?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 02:04:53 pm
Water has a lot of hydrogen in it... we might be well served to practice this further. Think of the power we could hold over a proper body of water!

Let's wait a bit, take a minute to touch base with Emma. Do we still have that folder the Pontifex gave us to look over?
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 03:04:29 pm
[-] Stifling a yawn, you leave the training room and head towards Emma's room, only to find it empty. You return to your own room, and despite never having been given it, you find the folder securely beneath a spare uniform in your closet. You don't know who might have put it there, but it isn't a surprise that someone has given it to you. You pop it open and skim through it.

[12 vs 9] A rush of anger consumes you, and you feel your powers react instinctively, violently. You focus on breathing, on repeating your mantra to yourself to reaffirm just who you are and what you're doing. Your blood boils with barely contained rage.


Quote from: Angel of Fire Containment Procedures

...primary containment agent of Project Angel of Fire, also known as Alphira, Pheobe Gainer, is two-fold. Emma Thornton of the Thornton Family is a high-value emotional connection to the target. Primary containment is to secure and hold Emma Thornton in the event of Alphira losing control, destroying vital property with ill intent, possession of weapons not signed off on, and any hostile action or words directed at SEED. Should Alphira violate these procedures, its is to be made clear to her that Emma Thornton's future survival will be in jeopardy should such actions persist. Further action will be taken as needed, up to termination of both Emma and the Project...

...Secondary containment is the holding of myself, Nicole Gainer, as a hostage to ensure her good intentions should Primary Containment methods fail...see appendix section eight for further details as to my relationship with the subject...Emma Thornton has a higher emotional connection to the subject, so great caution should go into retaining her and keeping her close to the Holy City.



[-]Somebody knocks at your door, and you stow the folder away back beneath your folded uniform, your hands falling into tightly balled fists at your side, your knuckles pale from the force. Emma steps in, looking bedraggled and tired, but happy to see you. "I've brought the armor down, and I've got a great armorsmith looking at it. Captain Zachary also reports that several of our previous classmates have been selected to be in your personal guard-- he's waiting for you outsi-- is everything okay, Pheobe?" Her smile drops, concern appearing on her features, "Is your arm okay-- I swear, if Silas made you sick, I'll shoot him myself!"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 03:08:07 pm
At this point, I'm tempted to join the demons.

Wordlessly show her the folder.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 03:09:48 pm
At this point, I'm tempted to join the demons.

Wordlessly show her the folder.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 03:14:47 pm
At this point, I'm tempted to join the demons.

Wordlessly show her the folder.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 03:23:17 pm
[-] Emma takes the file-- and stares at it blankly, she looks to you in askance, before realization dawns, "I...I can't read this, Pheobe. It's not a script I was taught at the Academy."

"Wh-what does it say?" She steps closer, setting the folder back down for you and wrapping you in a tight hug, "It isn't good, is it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 03:26:14 pm
Write it out for her in a script that she's familiar with.

"Speak softly and don't react.  They can't be allowed to know that we're onto them."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 03:26:50 pm
Write it out for her in a script that she's familiar with.

"Speak softly and don't react.  They can't be allowed to know that we're onto them."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 03:27:57 pm
Write it out for her in a script that she's familiar with.

"Speak softly and don't react.  They can't be allowed to know that we're onto them."
+1

Another +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 03:40:51 pm
[-]When you write it out for her, Emma's fair face curls into something dispassionate and icy. You've seen her like this before, with William; a fit of sudden cold anger. "Fuck her." Is her whispered verbal response for a long time as she wrestles with her fury. Then its contained.

Emma wraps you in a sudden tight hug, breathing in and out hard, before carefully and quickly whispering, right in your ear, something that sends chills up your spine, "Did it come from a trustworthy source? It matches why the guard tried to grab me, and the Pontifex intervened. Black Nicky is a brutal pragmatist, and the script is a higher level." She kisses your cheek and pulls away, taking a seat on your bed, trying to speak more casually.

"Time for love later, Pheobe." She gives a forced giggle, smiling through her teeth as she carefully twists the conversation towards the soldiers under your direct command. "We have to prepare for war. William...William wants to advertise something, and promises soldiers good enough to take on a fully grown [insect] on their lonesome. It would be well within your powers to approve them as part of your command."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 03:44:21 pm
"That sounds promising.  I will be sure to discuss the matter in depth with him"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 03:51:19 pm
"Hm? Oh. Yeah--"

"That sounds promising.  I will be sure to discuss the matter in depth with him"

(say this.)

Closer now: "The file-- it came direct from the Pontifex. More on that later... but don't kill grandma on my behalf, hey? She's gone through a lot lately." (Smile thin.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 03:54:35 pm
"Hm? Oh. Yeah--"

"That sounds promising.  I will be sure to discuss the matter in depth with him"

(say this.)

Closer now: "The file-- it came direct from the Pontifex. More on that later... but don't kill grandma on my behalf, hey? She's gone through a lot lately." (Smile thin.)

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 03:59:18 pm
She's willing to accept help from the Family she so desperately wanted to get away from. For some reason, this thought makes your anger flare forth again. "Not for now anyway, if sh--...I'll send him a letter and arrange a meeting. Trustworthy guards are hard to find, these days." Emma explains, straightening up and scribbling a note on a pad of paper.

[14 vs 7] You realize all at once-- Alphira isn't here. She isn't fanning the flames. This is your anger, pure and simple. No voice besides your own, no emotion artificially induced. This is all you this time. For some reason, this thought comforts you, and you tamp down on the anger for later, holding that energy back within yourself.

"Would you trust him?" Emma doesn't continue, shaking her head softly, "The armorsmith wants to meet you, and the Captain has been waiting for fifteen minutes now. I'm feeling a little petty, so I'm willing to make him wait a lot longer, but you do have a team to run, and exercises to do..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 04:03:19 pm
"I will carry on.  After all, we are now at war, right?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 04:06:40 pm
"...Compromise, then. A little longer."

Take a minute or ten. This was painful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 04:13:27 pm
"The old and the smart say that compromise is important for relationships." Emma sniffs, letting you take the time you need. When your anger burns at a slow simmer, you call Zachary in. He steps smartly in, las-rifle on his back, helmet in hand. He has a folder of paper, and he calmly explains, "The Foster Brothers, Johnathan Shellton, Erica Hail, Quincy Black, and Eric Armstrong all agreed, Mother Alphira. They were already half-way through Crusader Basic Training, so we can rotate them in in about another three months. That is all I have to report." He bends his back in a half-bow to you, and you notice Emma watching him like a hawk, with hostile intent.

"Permission to speak freely, Mother Alphira?" He's still in a half-bow, his hands lifted slightly away from the pistol and knife at his side. His palms up, facing towards you, showing you he's unarmed, you realize all at once.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 04:15:32 pm
"Granted."
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Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 04:16:32 pm
"Granted."
+1
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 04:19:58 pm
"You need to work on your whispering." With a backward glance, he makes sure the door is shut, then continues, softly, still bowed as he nearly whispers, "I serve the Great Work, first and foremost in my mind. I will not let any harm come to the two of you as long as I draw breath, should you continue to serve the Great Work in the capacity you promise... The Pontifex is of a like mind."

"There are some within my ranks that do not hold the same belief, and there are some who do. Please dispose of the file when you're finished."

Zachary straightens slowly as if expecting a blow to fall. "That is all."

Emma doesn't change her expression, besides a darkening of her brow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 04:23:19 pm
"Thank you for your dedication to your duty, captain.  I will keep that in mind."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 04:26:38 pm
Take up and incinerate the procedural file with a quick Inferno.

"Thank you for your dedication to your duty, captain.  I will keep that in mind."

+1

Special emphasis on "thank you".
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 04:31:13 pm
Take up and incinerate the procedural file with a quick Inferno.

"Thank you for your dedication to your duty, captain.  I will keep that in mind."

+1

Special emphasis on "thank you".

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 04:38:13 pm
[14][19] The file burns in your hands as you maintain eye contact with him, a soft smile curls your lips. You can feel his discomfort... and you enjoy it. You don't break eye contact with him until the file drifts down in ashes. Captain Zachary dips his head once more in a nod, straightening as he turns to leave. Emma bores holes in his back until the door shuts behind him.

"I always hated power politics, but no man rules alone." The two of you lapse into a comfortable silence as you contemplate the ashes and Emma stares at the door. Eventually, she claps her hands, snapping you out of your reverie, "We'll be going to see the armorsmith next, Pheobe. Or do you want to spend the day in bed? At this point, either works for me." You note her defiance and the hand on her belt, where her holster would be, if she had one.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 04:44:57 pm
"I still fully intend to deal with the demons.   Please take me to the armorsmith."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 04:47:01 pm
"I still fully intend to deal with the demons.   Please send them in."
the pronoun game, who is the them here? Cuz it sounds like referring to the demons, which I very much doubt to be the case
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 04:49:25 pm
Also edited my post for clarity. <.<
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 04:51:13 pm
Also edited my post for clarity. <.<
what edit? It was clear enough and I don’t notice any changes
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 04:52:03 pm
...You'll be going to see they, them, it, as opposed to them visiting you. <.<
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 05:04:12 pm
Sorry about that, I clarified my post.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 05:04:54 pm
No need for the commanding voice anymore.

Sigh. "Armor is good. I'll be needing armor."
Rise. Let's go see what this smith can do.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 05:09:19 pm
Sigh. "Armor is good. I'll be needing armor."

Rise. Let's go see what this smith can do.

+1
...You'll be going to see they, them, it, as opposed to them visiting you. <.<
i thought this, so the first suggestion confused me a bit
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 05:18:30 pm
I made everything worse, I'm so sorry.   :'(
lol


The armory is on one of the lower floors, in a previously vacant workshop in the complex. Its been outfitted with many things, you realize, anvils, molds, cooling basins of oil, and various other workbenches you cannot identify. A woman as old as your grandmother is sitting in the middle of the room, staring at the golden armor of McCreary while hunched over and rubbing her face. She looks even less happy when she sees you approach, rising to give a small bow, "Mother Gainer...I was...I was-- I can't do anything with this."

She takes one of the pauldrons off, and tosses it into a blazing hot furnace. Nothing happens. That faint, golden color and black underlay doesn't seem to heat up, or change shape, or warp like any metal you've seen. "This is one of the most powerful furnaces ever made-- and it does jack shit. I can't even bend the damn thing. The best I can do to fit it to you is pad the places where you need it when I'm making your uniform for under the armor, but...where do I even start with that? What is the impression you want to give? How armored do you want it? Do you want it a certain color? Robe or coat? Do you want a cape or something? "

The armorsmith slumps back down, staring at the armor, "You're the same height as McCreary, at least. Same chest size...you might have to pack in your chest a bit to fit... His arms were bigger, by the looks of the thing, but I can adjust the straps here and there...legs were about the same..."

Emma facepalms, rubbing the bridge of her nose and sighing loudly. The armorsmith's eyes narrow, but she doesn't retort, finally explaining, "I can fit you into it, but it's going to be uncomfortable, and a little bit encumbering. As for the gun, its totaled, but I can make you a new one to whatever specifications you want. The Cutter hilt still works...I've already refitted it for a standard las-pistol magazine."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 05:20:40 pm
I made everything worse, I'm so sorry.   :'(
lol

Days upon days of blisteringly-paced updates, you're gonna slip up once or twice. Don't worry about it.   ;)



Now then... a uniform! What fun. Let's go for a bit of elegance, a bit of flash-- but with a nice practical underpinning.

"McCreary's armor is not of this earth, Sister! If we can't work it, we can't work it." (Smile reassuring-like.)

"As for the uniform... black and gold, like the armor. Flame-retardant. Room to move, armor plating where reasonable. No cape-- capes burn-- but perhaps a short cloak, with a kevlar face-mesh and a nice stone at the clasp."

"Dignity... power. These are the things I must convey, Sister, if I am to be a champion for these people."




EDIT: The post, it has been edited on me! Addendum then :))

Give the armorsmith a moment to note our words, then: "Now. I may have a somewhat... unusual request for the firearm. Join me a moment on the firing range?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 06:09:27 pm
I made everything worse, I'm so sorry.   :'(
lol

Days upon days of blisteringly-paced updates, you're gonna slip up once or twice. Don't worry about it.  :P



Now then... a uniform! What fun. Let's go for a bit of elegance, a bit of flash-- but with a nice practical underpinning.

"McCreary's armor is not of this earth, Sister! If we can't work it, we can't work it." (Smile reassuring-like.)

"As for the uniform... black and gold, like the armor. Flame-retardant. Room to move, armor plating where reasonable. No cape-- capes burn-- but perhaps a short cloak, with a kevlar face-mesh and a nice stone at the clasp."

"Dignity... power. These are the things I must convey, Sister, if I am to be a champion for these people."




EDIT: The post, it has been edited on me! Addendum then :))

Give the armorsmith a moment to note our words, then: "Now. I may have a somewhat... unusual request for the firearm. Join me a moment on the firing range?"
+1” would moment in this case be 5 seconds? 10 seconds? More? Less? Or am I simply overthinking it?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 06:09:55 pm
However long is necessary. Doesn't matter really.
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 06:36:40 pm
[-] The armorsmith, or, perhaps a more fitting title would be Armorer, nods, lifting herself and following along behind you to the firing range. "I can do that. Something a little tighter, standard plastic plating and flame resistant treatment where the armor doesn't reach. It'll be hot, though, with the flame retardant material."

[17] Something needles at the edges of your perception about the armor. Something about it isn't right.

Regardless, you approach the Crusader Armorer, who doesn't work on armor, confusingly, and he lets you look over the selection. Most of the guns he lets you use, in particular, are worn and beaten, but come in many varieties, from Hellfire Shotguns, the Crusader Modular Assualt Rifles, to the scrappy workman's automatic las-rifle, fresh off the streets and marked for destruction. He has all the firearms you could ever hope to destroy. It was a bright touch by Emma, you remember, to save money. Any gun marked for destruction due to advanced age or contraband status would be brought in, and either disposed of on-site or you would destroy them during your testing.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 07:12:27 pm
Okay so. If anyone thinks this is a really stupid thing I'm suggesting we do... do me a favor and speak up now.



Open our mind a bit and consider: what's off about the armor? Is Alphira trying to tell us something?

Pick out a cheap pistol with a clip around half empty, and find somewhere we won't cause any collateral damage with an Overload.

"In my travels, Sister, I have learned a rather destructive trick with the common reactor pistol and its larger counterparts-- devastatingly effective, but ruinous to the weapon so used. Stand well behind me, both of you, and observe..."

Let our compatriots make some distance. Pick a safe target. Overload. Fire.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 09:26:20 pm
Okay so. If anyone thinks this is a really stupid thing I'm suggesting we do... do me a favor and speak up now.



Open our mind a bit and consider: what's off about the armor? Is Alphira trying to tell us something?

Pick out a cheap pistol with a clip around half empty, and find somewhere we won't cause any collateral damage with an Overload.

"In my travels, Sister, I have learned a rather destructive trick with the common reactor pistol and its larger counterparts-- devastatingly effective, but ruinous to the weapon so used. Stand well behind me, both of you, and observe..."

Let our compatriots make some distance. Pick a safe target. Overload. Fire.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 09:33:30 pm


[-] As you pick out your pistol, you note with a sick sense of pride that the steel wall, used to often to protect the concrete from laser blast, has been outfitted with sandbags since your last time here. You find your target, aiming down the cheap 'iron' sights.

[13]You reach out with your will, into the pistol, and pull the energy up through the reactor, just as you pull the trigger. You narrow the path of the beam minutely, and half the target is incinerated away into burning ash. The pistol, while not as damaged as your previous attempts, still drips molten plastic on the floor, the focusing barrel completely turned into a smoldering mess. The display flashes 'err' and you hand what's left to the Armorer.

[-]"Well, that certainly...is a problem I can consider for you. Probably a better focusing barrel design, one designed for easy replacement, more coolant systems, and a newer reactor. Oh, and plenty of spare lenses...you intend to be fighting [the plague]? McCreary's gun was a submachine style with a lot of power. It used a rifle magazine but was optimized for closer quarters, and to be used in combination with another weapon. Had a lot of magazines too...I'm assuming the weight ain't going to be an issue."

[-]Alphira is silent, as she has been for a while now.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 09:40:27 pm
Do we still feel something off about the armor? If so, ask about what the padding she added is made of
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 09:41:02 pm
It's possible that the armor is trapped, set to disable us once we complete our task.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 09:42:04 pm
It's possible that the armor is trapped, set to disable us once we complete our task.
that’s no way to treat someone who saves the city from the plague...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 09:42:52 pm
Agreed.  SEED is not as virtuous as these people seem to think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 09:45:47 pm
Agreed.  SEED is not as virtuous as these people seem to think.
Yes
No wonder we tried to kill him in the past
How will we fight the plague without the armor? Will we fight the plague?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 09:46:46 pm
"I trust your judgement on the matter. Surprise me." (Grin.)

As we're headed back to the armorer's: "I didn't catch your name, by the by?"


Do we still feel something off about the armor?

A worthy distinction. +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 09:53:44 pm
"Daughter McFee is fine." The Armorer replies, following Emma back to her workshop.

You smile, offering "You already know mine. It's a pleasure, Daughter McFee."

"Likewise, Ange-- Mother Gainer. Sorry, I couldn't do much more for the armor, but, as you said, it's a bit out of my area of expertise." The three of you enter the workshop, and you approach the armor on the stand as she explains how she plans on padding certain places with cloth and little bits of plastic, to help take some of the weight off. She goes quite in depth, and you listen intently, dragging your eyes across the pristine breastplate and polished helmet. Nothing jumps out at you, and you examine the inside of it very carefully, running your hands across the strangely cool material-- there's no traps or anything of the sort. You lean back, frowning.

The metal itself is very weird, cool to the touch, even the piece that was previously in the roaring furnace. Looking at one from the edge, you can see faint differences in the hues of darkness, culminating in one that seems to absorb the light at the middle layer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 10:06:59 pm
"I shall consider the matter... perhaps I can come up with something. It's lovely armor."
"Thank you for your aid, Daughter McFee."

Having made the proper thank-you-goodbyes: breakfast! After that... we'll have to consider.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 10:15:42 pm
"I shall consider the matter... perhaps I can come up with something. It's lovely armor."
"Thank you for your aid, Daughter McFee."

Having made the proper thank-you-goodbyes: breakfast! After that... we'll have to consider.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 10:34:40 pm
You and Emma head to the cafeteria, where you take your daily rations from beneath a flickering heat lamp and settle in at one of the uncomfortable tables. You dig into your food, shoveling spoonfuls of it into your mouth as politely as you can muster in front of Emma, who stabs restlessly at her meal of bacon, eggs and [pancakes]. "I'm still surprised at how good the food is here." She offers by way of conversation. "I thought I'd have to eat the same crap you do-- I still can't understand how you can eat that stuff."

"The flavor grows on you, after a while. It stops tasting like greasy cardboard, and more like salty cardboard."

Emma snorts at that, taking another bite of her meal. "I don't think I've got anything else planned for today, besides paperwork."

[20][19]It hits with the burning headache that sears its way through your skull, until it fades. A͍̬͔̫͜c̭͉̙ç͇̠͙̯̲̙̼͢o҉͝͏̰̹͈̟̖r̝̫̟d̯̲̤̳i̴̬̰̬̗̤̯̼͈n̶͚͙̼͓͔͍̞̭̗͞g̫͡ ̵̵̺̼̯͖̀ṭ̰̰̹̙̥ͅo҉̳̯̖̲̳̜̱̼͜ ̡̪̞a̕҉̥͚̭͓̟̀ͅv̼̙a̟̰̦̻̯͖̜i̝̤ͅl̫̻̭͢a҉̟̳͓͇b̝̞̦̲̻̼͢l͉̩̗̤̞͜è͕͍͖̫̥̹͉͈̕ ̦̟̬̲͕͎͉ḑ̡͚͎̯̲̲̗́a͝͏͈͍͉̞́t̶̬̕a̲̮:͖̰̬͓̟́M̧̟̤̙̞̜͚͎̦͇͜c̰̻̜͖̠̘͓͎C̢҉̵̘͈r̖̤͖̝͖̬e̶̖̰̹̩̥͍̲͞a̶̻͔͙̕r̶͡҉̳̘͓͔̭͕y̧̨̳̥̲͎'̵̪͎̭̠͙͉͔̠͘s̛̯̣͓͡ͅ ̵͈͍̠̖̤̣̺͔̳͠c̡̟̘͈̜̥̘͔̥h̶̪̫͇̭̣̟̘̹e̵̟͖̭̹ͅs̡̫̞͈͈͇̻̰͔͚͟t̶̤̣̺ ̫̟p̢̟͉̼͎͓͕͙͡ļ̢͓̱̬̖̲͇̘̝͠a͏̮͓̗̬̥͍t̡̺̹̟̣̣̲̦͉é̦̩̫͡ ҉̶͈͉̫̬̫̦w̝̦͍̣̜a̢̗͓̻̹͡s̢̝̯̩͟ ̬͍̀͘r̵̲̻̲̤̟͘ͅe̛̞̱͚͔̮͢p̳̥͎à̠i̙̝̥̫̙͞ͅr͇͞e͕̦d͏́҉̣ ̥̳̯̥̙͙̫͠a͖͇̦̻̣̘͘f̺̜̬̳ț͓̩͞͠e̙̣r̸҉̷̦̺̫͖͙ ̛̤̩͓h̡̹̝̭͖i̥̠̖͉̜͎̜̩s̡̛͓̗͙̝ ͡҉̩͚͕̱b̨̲̣̠̬̟̲͉̙a̴͎͉̙̰̤̜̙͈̥͝t̸̙̞͉̯̼̻t͈͉́͜͠ĺ͕̠͖e̴̡͈͙̣͉̖͎̟.̶̨̦̞̟̟̦




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 10:37:57 pm
Hmm.  What are the implications of that and why is it important?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 10:40:17 pm
It means somebody on this planet knew how to fix the stuff.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 10:42:30 pm
Ah I see, thanks.

Sorry to bother you, Alphira, but do you know how this armor can be repaired?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 10:53:29 pm
"Hnnn"

...

"...one of my voices just looked up some data for me. Somebody fixed that chestplate up after McCreary got it slashed up in his last fight... dunno who."
"That means somebody maybe still could though. Think I'll try and get more answers, once my head doesn't hurt so much..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 10:54:58 pm
"Hnnn"

...

"...one of my voices just looked up some data for me. Somebody fixed that chestplate up after McCreary got it slashed up in his last fight... dunno who."
"That means somebody maybe still could though. Think I'll try and get more answers, once my head doesn't hurt so much."

+1

Ah I see, thanks.

Sorry to bother you, Alphira, but do you know how this armor can be repaired?
-1 remember we promised we wouldn’t call her unless we needed her?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 19, 2020, 10:58:16 pm
I'm interested in speaking further to VOID on the matter later. Maybe now, not sure... is it better to risk further brain damage via headache, or risk losing VOID's interest in the interim?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 11:27:02 pm
I think we should investigate this further with the VOID while we can.  In the past, we weren't able to communicate with it any time at will. Getting the armor back to 100% could be lifesaving.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 11:29:35 pm
I think we should investigate this further with the VOID while we can.  In the past, we weren't able to communicate with it any time at will. Getting the armor back to 100% could be lifesaving.
ok, what should we say?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 11:31:28 pm
H̵o̶w̴ ̴c̵a̴n̴ ̶t̴h̵i̸s̴ ̷a̷r̶m̸o̴r̴ ̸b̸e̶ ̸r̴e̴p̵a̵i̸r̶e̴d̶?̴
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 11:34:52 pm
H̵o̶w̴ ̴c̵a̴n̴ ̶t̴h̵i̸s̴ ̷a̷r̶m̸o̴r̴ ̸b̸e̶ ̸r̴e̴p̵a̵i̸r̶e̴d̶?̴
+1 how is Zalgo text done?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 11:36:11 pm
I use this thing: https://zalgo.org
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 19, 2020, 11:40:11 pm
S̷̢̡̙̙̰͙͇͕̰̪̜͆͂̏̅̾̃̓͗̑̎͌́́͘̚ö̵̫͕͔͉̳̦͓̭̦͈̥̝̦͙̫́̾͌̆̎͂͊͘,̶̩̿̎͒̓̍̽̕̚ ̶̡̧̧̜̝͚͍͌͗͂̀̈͗͂͑̀̍̀͑́̀ļ̴̹̘̳̈̀͒̿͐̏͛̀͂̋͊͋́̿̕͝î̸̧̛͇̀͊͆̃̇́̈̓͝͝k̴̛͙̖̮͙̫̹̥̪̭͒͐̈́̃̄̓̂̑̂͊͂̓̏͛͌͘e̵̻̘͓̻̋̒͘ ̸̛͕̞̟͑̂͂̏̕t̸͚̝̖͕̖̤̮͍̟͙̭̥̰̦͉̣̅h̵̡̰͐̓̀̏̋͘͠i̸̼̥̹̯͙̓̽͗̊̉͊̓̕s̷̨̯͙̹͙̯̫̠̱͇͉͕̦͉̺̣͆̂̑̇͗̚͜͠?̸̱̲̖̻͉̙̿̔͆͂̒̂͂͘̕͜ ̴̳̹̌͋̊̆̊̓͛͋͐̿͂̒̑̅͒̅̚C̵̡̡̛͖̦̭̥̖͆́͋̓̾̿͛̑͠ͅǫ̵̤͔̫̹͚̩̖͙͈͎͇̂̆͜͝ò̵̱̤̮̱̖̠͇͎̟͙̺͉͔͉̗̘̻̍͑̈́̓̉̇̓̅͛̒̉͆̿̈́̂̔l̷̞̙̱͚̜̯̭̙̗͉̜̐̑̀̄͜
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 19, 2020, 11:53:42 pm
No response and Emma raises an eyebrow, offering pithily, "My brother gave me advice for this exact situation, and I didn't listen." She mocks sighs, shaking her head. "If you have a headache bad enough to mention, you should probably go lie down. I'll have Silas come and make sure you're just regular crazy, not infection crazy."

She shrugs a shoulder, leaning over the table to give you a chaste peck on the lips, retreating out the cafeteria and towards her office. You watch her leave, before rising, clearing away your dishes and thinking about what your next move is. You have an entire day, with only a little bit of tutoring from Brother Hop in the evening.

What would you like to do?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 19, 2020, 11:55:37 pm
You know... SEED would probably know how the armor was repaired.

Try to get an audience with SEED.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 20, 2020, 12:00:57 am
You know... SEED would probably know how the armor was repaired.
sure, but I think SEED is the enemy?

Maybe we should rest
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 20, 2020, 07:56:59 am
Lets just go to sleep for a bit.

Also I doubt the SEED would talk to us again so soon.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 10:14:10 am
You know who might know about this? The Pontifex.

For now, a lie-down sounds nice. Just gotta make sure we don't miss our tutoring-- maybe set an alarm.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 11:18:39 am
[-]  After charging a guard with waking you fifteen minutes before Brother Hop is to arrive, you collapse into bed.

[-] Midway through your nap, there's a knock at your door. Silas steps in, performing a small physical and taking notes on your arm. He doesn't offer much by way of conversation, besides useless pleasantries. With his job done, he leaves you, reading over his notes with a detached air.

[-] After five hours, you're fully rested, and your headache has subsided some.

You have six hours before your lesson with Brother Hop.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 12:05:44 pm
Lunch. After that let's hit the books, see if we can't find anything on McCreary's equipment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 20, 2020, 12:06:10 pm
Lunch. After that let's hit the books, see if we can't find anything on McCreary's equipment.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 02:15:57 pm
[-] The cafeteria is about as busy as expected, your warm nutrient gruel sitting in its usual place. You snatch up your plates and set to eating, trying not to look too hard at the off-gray, starchy slime that tastes vaguely of vegetables and oil. You wash it down with copious amounts of water and diluted wine, trying to avoid the bitter, woody aftertaste.



You, with two guards in tow, walk to one of the libraries nearby in the Inner City, through a beautiful plaza, with carefully manicured gardens. A thin young man with a brand for SEED on his face trims down an overgrowing patch of flowers as children kick a rubber ball back and forth. You notice a small group of Crusaders drift through. They catch sight of you, confused by your guards and your under-ornamented self, but don't comment, passing by with a dipped nod given your way. The walk itself is pleasant and a short, gentle ride on one of the slow-moving hover-crafts rounds out the experience. In all, it took you thirty minutes to get to the Library.

The Library is another one of those buildings with a high domed ceiling, and a librarian greets you at the door. They serve as living indexes, and you ask him for books, treatises, or manuscripts involving McCreary's armor. They look at a reference book, and begin to guide you into the depths of the library. He points at a shelf of books, and bows his head as he explains, "This shelf contains what books we have on McCreary, as for a specific topic, we lack McCreary's Armor."

With a nod, he turns away to attend to other duties. You enlist the help of your guards and clear out the entire shelf, bringing it to one of the desks in the center of the library.The Effect of McCreary on Morale, Armaments of the Angel, McCreary's Sacrifice, Strength of Soul: Or how to Emulate the Angel, How The Tide Turned, and Stories to tell Children of the Angel.

The first one interests you, so you set it aside for later, the second one is more pressing, so you pile it away. The rest are hymn books, scripture, a quasi-historical document that you know is false, and the other is tall tale-- but a passage in the children's book hints at the truths of your memory, so you set it aside to keep. You have your guards put the rest away, and begin to read the first.

Quote from: Effects of McCreary on Morale
...And lo', when the war was at its worst, and all hoped seemed lost, when the King of the Dead and his armies approached the gates of the Holy City, man did despair... It goes on to list all the losses, the cities you've never heard of that no doubt are ruins by now.

Then McCreary emerged from the Citadel of Seed, clad in resplendent gold. SEED spoke, issuing a benediction to its holy angel of war, It lists a great edict from SEED that you gloss over, yadda yadda, retribution and revenge shall be delivered, demons stand no chance now, etc. However, one line catches your eye, "I shall see retribution done on all my enemies, they shall be starved and beaten, destroyed in their entirety. So I will it."

It goes into great detail about how the morale of all troops improved, especially by his speeches delivered on the battlefield, full of rage and fire, and how during each of his consecutive victories the people cheered his name in the streets. In some benedictions, he was listed first. You wonder if he was more relatable for the humans of this world than the Machine God they worship...

Quote from: Armaments of McCreary
This manuscript is a list of his armor and weapons in flowery terms, recorded directly after his death. It mentions no damage upon the breastplate or any of the other armor. It does list damage done to the underpinning, his synth-leather jumpsuit is mentioned as being ripped across the chest, and stained with dried blood. His firearm was empty-- and you note that he had expended nearly two thousand las-pulses during the time he fought, if not more.

Quote from: Children's Book
...McCreary's armor was mighty indeed, burnished in gold and black, but pure, and filled with the flame of righteousness, and he spoke of it as one speaks of a friend, one that was very close to his heart...some say it even spoke back! So great is the power of SEED, that even the inanimate is made living through his grace...

You have three hours and thirty minutes left before Brother Hop arrives at your room for your lesson.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 03:00:23 pm
McCreary was on his way to becoming a god-emperor-- on his way to usurping SEED entirely. SEED cut him short.

Perhaps we might find something here on the origins of SEED and of [demons]. Be sure to leave ourselves time to head back and meet Brother Hop.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 03:12:28 pm
The armor spoke back...?

Attempt to communicate with the armor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 03:26:43 pm
The armor spoke back...?

Attempt to communicate with the armor.

We're not wearing it at the moment, but perhaps we might have ourselves a look-see after Brother Hop's lesson.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 03:27:47 pm
I'm aware that we're not wearing it, but there's no reason we can't go to it.  We already read of demons and angels some time ago.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 03:29:49 pm
Attempt to communicate with the armor.

Eh, fair enough. +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 04:25:29 pm
[-] You vacate the library and the door is locked behind you. It must have closed when you were reading. You follow the path you took backward, and despite a delay with the Hover-Craft, you only arrive back at the compound fifteen minutes later than expected. Your guards are relieved at the door, and you make a beeline for the workshop.

Sister McFee dips you a nod when you enter, and you see her hunched over bulky red and black cloth, a large needle in her mouth. Beside her, a soldering iron smolders gently, and the entire room smells of solder and melted plastic.

You approach the armor stand, and...try to communicate with it. You speak a greeting to it and try in the tongues you do know. You even speak in the halting, old tongue of SEED. McFee finally speaks up, "Thornton told me you were eccentric, but if that armor could talk, I'm sure it wouldn't have liked how much I've been cursing it."

[7]You frown at her, but stay silent, examining the armor. It doesn't look like its communicating back.

You have two hours and forty-five minutes left before Brother Hop arrives at your room for your lesson.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 04:30:51 pm
"McCreary, did you talk to your armor?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 04:36:42 pm
"...You're right. I'm going about this wrong."

Drop into our own mind for a moment. Dip into McCreary's armor memories, and if that doesn't get us anywhere...


"McCreary, did you talk to your armor?"

...let these words echo through our consciousness.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 04:38:13 pm
"...You're right. I'm going about this wrong."

Drop into our own mind for a moment. Dip into McCreary's armor memories, and if that doesn't get us anywhere...


"McCreary, did you talk to your armor?"

...let these words echo through our consciousness.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 05:20:59 pm
[19][17] You close your eyes, focusing on the void within you, the place where the voices come from...and you fall into them. A cold void of blackness burning through you. Something outside your consciousness echoes, but you can only hear the echo.

Ne̶̠̳̲̜͇r̗̲͔͘v͈̖͢ò͉̦̮ú͖͉̬s͚͔̰̗͍ͅ ̺̝S̸͉͕yst̸̟e̢̘̜̠̝̮̰mͅ:͓̺ ̘͚̜͍̺̘͙͝A̱̖̘̱̻̗͖̕c̟͈͓̫͙͠t̷͍̰͔͔̺̗ͅi̬̤v̞̟͝a͢t̢̼̹e̠͘ͅ ̸̪u̟͚̭̺̳̝̱n̫̻̱͚̭̺̠c̖͓̣̠̟o̹͘n̘̪c̪̦̺̺̺͙̕i̶̲̩̟̞̭͔͓o̹̼̦͎u̱̩ṣ̯̯̙ ̥̬͖̜b̲͇̦͓͇as̰͔̭͎̻̯i̸̦c̠̳͓̗̗͔ ̫̭̼l͞i̹̻̬f̰͉͜e̯̹̪ ̝͉s̤͇̞̥̰̮̀u͙̹p̙̤̭͎͢p̧̱or̀t̝̼͘

You open your eyes again, and you lay in the sand, feeling the burning hot grains against your back with a vividness that not even boiling water can match. The wind howls across the wastes, carving through mesas and plateaus. Two suns burn high in the sky, filling you with warmth. A vessel sits nearby, smaller than some, but larger than any Hovercraft you've ever seen. Red sand and white salt pile up around its landing struts.

You rise to your feet with a yawn, hand coming to your mouth as you make your way to the vessel. You key in a code instinctively, stepping into the cool metal airlock. The mechanical door shuts behind you, and you close your eyes as various hues of light blink through the room. Fresh air, humid and smelling of your new home is vented in, hiding the familiar dusty scent of your previous life.

You check a small console only to find no new messages and busy yourself with a jog around the track, then a number of isometric exercises. With your exercise done for the day, you--why do I have a beard? Where am I? Who--


[17][18] You open the door to the armory and step through, towards the Mark Fifteen. With humorous intent long gone, replaced by the ritual of a lonely man, you ask, "Having a good day? Wonderful. I'm glad you slept well, but you're going to be able to wake up soon." It didn't really respond, it never did, not until those sickening spikes were deep into the tips of his fingers. Then it spoke. It spoke of war. Of nightmare. Of a bloodlust more ancient than civilizations. It didn't speak until they were one, joined together into a brutal war machine.

What was worse was how he could already feel his hand slipping into the glove. You can stop at anytime, you reason, content. This is your history, you past lives and your future, why shouldn't you want this connection? You have no others. They all left you alone. But its been there for you, all this time, and will be there for you, all this time.



O̿͊͗̋҉̺̩̟̟̻̻͇̯̪̗̱̗̫̰̺́v̸̢͍̻͉͓̞̝̤̙͙̯̮͖̭̝̱̄ͧ̓̊ͯ̎̇̓̚ę̸̸̗̲̙͙̪̗̥̥̈́̒̏̅̌ͮrͮ̑̃̀ͮͤ̎҉̴̱̬̪͖͖̝͖͇͟r̶̨̼̥̫̭͕͆̍ͪ̈͗̃̎ͧ̑͗͒͟͞͠ḯ̴̧̛̹̭̱̦̯ͦ̏ͯ̎̈́ͦͭ͊̿́ͫ̓d̷̷̢̻̤̞̪̠̼̫ͮͫͯͣ̏͋ͧͨ͢ȇ̴̺̰̟͚̼ͯͧͧ͌ͭ͛͊ͭͮ̏̂ͤͫ́ ̢ͨ̄̇ͧ́̒ͧͪ͑͛̀͏́҉̛̠̯̬͓͙͙̖̙̖̻̗͈̘̻̦̖A̶̢̢̛̜͍̗̥̼̞̭̳̝͉̹̤̙̟͚̓̈́ͧ̽̒̃̄́c͆ͯ̈́͆͛͛ͪ͂̃ͣͩ̍͌͝͏̧͢͏̮̙̪̟t́ͪ̏͋̅́҉̧̧̡̛̪̳͔̬iͫͯ͑ͬ̒̍̉̇ͥͬ̑ͬ̿̀̚҉̧̣̝̟̞̺v̧͖̱̮̖͔̘̖̦̜̠̇́̇ͧ̔̾͂͊̓ͤͥ̊̄̊̾͂ͩ̐͡à̶̵͓͓̥̗̖̫͎̳̯͕ͯ̈́̿ͩ͂͒ͬͣ̐̒̑͆̓̅́̚̕͠ṯ̝͙̱͓͔̱͙̘̣̯̰͒͑ͥ̐̀͢͟ė̸̵͔͖̤͕̥̙͔̩̿̉̆̈̒͊ͥ̔ͭ̊̔̾̓̚͞͝d̆ͥͬͯ̎̑̿ͧ͊̓͌ͤͨ̽̅́҉̮̲͍̱̘̯̞͚͉̹̤̩̱̪̯͎̕͜ ̴̶̴̧̞͎̜͔͎̣͔̐ͧ͋ͥ͡-̥͉̺͖̗̖̟͚̫̪͎̘ͭ̿͌ͧ̑̈́̊̽͜͡-̵̼̭̥͚̙̟̼̯̥͈̪̗̳̱͚͚̪̆̋̐̅ͥͤ̎͑̋͌ͥͪ̊̐ͦ͂ͤͅ ̴̡̝͈̤̲̯̪͈̦ͭ̆̆͋͛̈̑̇͐̏̀̅̃͊̑M͇͔̞ͭ̉ͩͪ́͢͠c̈ͦ̈̍͋̒ͥ͆̽̑̔̔͏͏̯͉̖̬͠Ç̪̻̥͚͕͔̹͇̏̑͒̑͑̅́̀̚͢͡ŗ̗̮̜̖̻͕̫ͤͨͯ̉̽ͨ̀ͥ̅̍̕e̵̴̷̳̦͖̦̞̓͌͋̐̄̔̋̅͒̾̄̈́̏͞a̧͆͗͗͂͋͒̄ͤ̃̉ͥ̔͑ͪͦ́҉̢̧̥͈̻̱̺̮̱̺̪͖͉͙͉͟r̃̂ͭ́̚҉̶̢̣̖͍̳̻̻͙̣̙̫̦̦̠̙ͅy̛͚̟͓̳ͣ̾ͧ̓̅̃̐͊̏͑ͥ̔ͮ͗́̚͢͜͠.̈́̇͛́ͩ͏͏͚͇͎̝

[12][2]Your hand slips into the glove, and despite your nose dripping blood on the floor, despite McFee trying to pull you away, you activate your powers, focusing on those tiny little atoms of metal that stick out into the fingers of the gloves, connected into impossible chains of...of...madness? No element, no molecule, no matter can be that compact, that complex, that-- spikes slip deep into the tips of your fingers, into the bones.

But despite the promise, you don't feel whole. Just wrong. Th-this isn't right. This connection... but the glove, once loose, now feels like a second skin, tightening around your hand and digging more needles into your bones. A shiver runs down your spine, as you feel disgusted with it, with yourself, with everything, and you grip your arm hard. You strain, hearing your elbow pop, hearing your sinews and muscles start to come apart as you desperately try to rip your---his arm off at the elbow--

[14+3 vs 7]
I̠͇̰̝ͅm̶̘̭̝̯̻͎p̴̟̯̻̼r̰̰͎o̦̞̹p̘̬e̞̼͔̦̖̝r̙̲͖͔̦͈ ͔͔͕̞̫̜Á̝̭̳͇̣̜̗r͕̤̭͟ͅm̘͎̭͍͔͚o͍͙̣͖̟̭r̮̤̼̙̭ ͚͓̭͞F͠i̹̝͢t̸̩̲t̼͙̖i҉̱͓̬̦̮̰̦n͈̱g̯͓̮:͕ ̧̳͈Ú̝̯̫̦̩͕̲s͔̠̥i̖n̘̕g̥̭̟̠ ̢d̗͍̱̦̰̖̳͝e̗s̴̳i̯͓̝͓̝̥̕g͖̯̹n͉̭̭̬at̲̤̤̜͕̕ͅi͖̩o̝n̛͎͍̠̣̖͇ ̲̙͎M̭̙͍c̫͉̖̱̘̖͇C͓͙̤̼͓̝͘r̷͔e̠̯̱͓̤̝̤͟a̜͈͙r͈̜̪̻͘y͉̻͔̣ ̨̱̠̼̪͓̥s͖̩̠̻i͎͉g̢̝͈̩̫n̗̯a͎̻̭̫̣ͅt҉͈͉̞͎u̖̩̥̙̤͜r͏e̤̗̪̲̼͍ ̜ͅt̖͚̦̪̟̮͔o̝̥̱̤͎͕͙ ͡i̛̲̺̭͈͎̠ͅn̻̮͙̺̘ṭ̰̭͇̣̰ͅe̩̯r̻͚f̢̹a͉̜̫͝ͅc̞͎͖̫͈͍̞e̞̖̺̞.͇͍̪
̪i̴n̘̹̝̱̱̻̺t́e̼̗̳̠͙̠̦r͈̙̝͕͖f̥͈̯̞͚̪ͅa̫ce̯̻̗:̥̺͚͓̙͡Su̩c̺̞̤̟̗͇ͅc͔̤̙̮e͓̹̙͕̘s̷͉̩͉͉͇͎ͅs̼̬f̮͚̗̩͕̪̦u͠l̶̠͚̫̥̭.

The disgust fades slowly, leaving you cradling your broken arm as blood blooms beneath the surface. The glove doesn't come off, but doesn't dig any more needles into your body. Guards approach from behind, but none of them hold hostile intent-- Zachary wraps a coat around you, calling for a medic.

There was supposed to be a connection, but it feels instead like you're wearing someone's skin.

[Greetings 'McCreary', what is our primary objective today?] A soft voice echoes in your head, polite, gentle, almost loving. But it almost encourages you to throw up instead of feel comforted.[You have injuries. Should I lower nutrient transfer to allow for faster healing?]



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 05:26:10 pm
Ouch.

"Food... please..."

[Greetings.  State your name and your capabilities.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 05:33:23 pm
ahh
evil vampire armor
whyyy


[Do so. Immediately.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 20, 2020, 05:43:03 pm
McCreary was on his way to becoming a god-emperor-- on his way to usurping SEED entirely. SEED cut him short.

Perhaps we might find something here on the origins of SEED and of [demons]. Be sure to leave ourselves time to head back and meet Brother Hop.
+1
I think SEED killed his armor, the armor doesn’t talk anymore, it is cold, are we wearing a corpse? It was once alive
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 05:43:48 pm
"Bring her food! Bring Emma down!" Zachary orders, one of his guards hesitates, looking between the two of you. He rises, walking right up to the soldier, barking the orders directly into that woman's face with a sudden savageness that surprises you. "Yes, Father Zachary." She barks back, unhappy. A medic appears between two other guards, and immediately goes to you after a nod from Zachary. "We need to get her to the hospita--"

"Let her eat first. I doubt we can fix that." Zachary orders, with all the calmness of a brewing storm, and the medic nods, kneeling down to examine your arm intently.

[Designation: Lucille. Unit code ------] The static that it speaks would drive you down to the ground were you not already there, [Capabilites: ...Advanced protection from slashing, cutting, stabbing, burning, las-fire, projectile weaponry, environmental adaption, live location, and communicat-- COMMUNICATIONS OFF -- ion data, transmitted in real-time, [Infection] antibody control, power amplification and unconscious body and armor repair.]

[Your dimensions have changed--would you like to run a refitting diagnostic to ensure proper fit, darling?]

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 05:46:11 pm
[Yes.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 05:56:39 pm
I... I got nothing.

[Yes.]

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 06:05:34 pm
[Please eat before fitting, for optimum nutrient control.]

You rise, shakily, to your feet, and the guards all take a collective step back. The other guard returns with...many containers of food, and you hesitate, before laying into them with an incredible hunger. By the fifth one, you feel full.

[Apply all armor pieces, please.]

With shaky fingers, you reach out, only to realize one of the gloves is going to be difficult to wear over the implant, and several pieces are going to be hard to pull on by yourself.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 06:06:59 pm
"Can you please help me put on this armor?"  Force the glove to fit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 06:10:16 pm
Let's not be forcing stuff over the metal lodged in our skin.

[...Later. First, is there anything you can do for my broken arm?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 06:20:52 pm
Hmm.  How about:

[I will, if you can do something about my broken arm first.]  Assuming it does something, equip the armor in full other than the glove, getting help if necessary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 06:22:43 pm
[I will, if you can do something about my broken arm first.]

Ehh...

+1 to this bit. I'd rather not plunge into equipping the spiky vampire armor until I've seen a little more of its actions towards us-- it could potentially do a lot more than impale our fingers, after all, and I dunno how it's gonna react when it realizes we aren't McCreary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 06:27:15 pm
We are McCreary, though, among others.  That's why the override was successful, I think.  I don't think Lucille would hurt its "darling."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 06:28:03 pm
Maybe. Still paranoid.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 06:32:06 pm
[18] Pain suddenly burns through your arms, and you almost scream, instead digging your fingers of your free hand into your palm to try and prevent that. Your bone pops into place uncomfortably, pulled together by your own muscles twitching beneath your jacket. They too mend-- and you move your fingers. Your hand is still numb, and there are dark, dark bruises at your elbow and where you grasped your arm. On your other arm, your body begins to reject the metal within your flesh, fresh blood pooling as the wound re-opens and shuts, working out the stainless steel until it clatters to the ground with a fresh offering of blood. You expect to feel dizzy, or have a more painful headache, but there is none.

[Power fluctuation modified, arithmetic supplemented, healing complete: Dislocated Elbow, deep tissue damage repaired, nerves responsible for pain still damaged, fine motor control damaged, and removal of foreign body completed. Recommend further healing before combat. Brain damage detected: Logic Processors, Identity Core, repairs in progress...estimated time to completion ----]

[Calculation error. Self-repair impossible. Please contact a technician for assistance.]

Emma emerges, and you briefly expect her to be shocked, or outraged, or angry, instead, she heaves an exasperated sigh and pulls you tight in a comforting hug.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 06:34:57 pm
"...I wish I wouldn't keep worrying you this way"

...

"I'll be alright"

---

"I'll be alright. This armor is horrible, but it's... amazing. I just need to get it to refit itself..."
Start donning the other pieces. "Help me out with this?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 06:35:49 pm
Well, I guess we aren't doing implants.  Stupid stuff like interfacing fully with the armor and getting it fitted to our body, and allowing us to heal at will more reliably?  There's no permanent damage, and we've gained a useful tool, so I don't see the problem.  We didn't even so much as break a glass case this time.

"Hey... I'm alright now.  This armor healed me.  Can you help me put it on?  It should fit itself to my body."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 06:43:51 pm
Yeah, was editing on the fly. Done now.  ::)

I'll change the wording, if you like. Maybe not stupid, but still worth addressing-- every time Emma turns around, we get ourself mangled or set something on fire or what have you! There's a reason she's been listed as "Exhausted" all this time...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 20, 2020, 06:53:23 pm
Well, I guess we aren't doing implants.  Stupid stuff like interfacing fully with the armor and getting it fitted to our body, and allowing us to heal at will more reliably?  There's no permanent damage, and we've gained a useful tool, so I don't see the problem.  We didn't even so much as break a glass case this time.

"Hey... I'm alright now.  This armor healed me.  Can you help me put it on?  It should fit itself to my body."
+1 do we tell Emma the armor is named Lucile?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 06:55:20 pm
Nah. No need to sound even crazier.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 07:09:43 pm
"I've...accepted it. You don't learn if you don't try...I guess. And at least you're responsive, this time." Emma wears a small smile, and nods, taking another piece of the armor off the rack. Zachary moves forward to help out, while McFee sits and stares, shaking her head. She looks traumatized but doesn't protest, simply leaving the room.

It takes a little while, and the armor is incredibly uncomfortable, especially around your chest region. In others it hangs loosely. When you put the helmet on, your vision blurs-- but no face covering slides down.

Your vision stretches oddly, and a small map of the room appears. When you look around, you notice that overlaid over everyone is a small pulse of energy. Zachary's and Emma's energy pulses quickly, as do most of the guards-- and the guards, they have a faint shimmering light highlighting the pulse of their las-rifles and pistols-- all a bright green. You can barely discern features through the information haze.

[Commencing refit, please stand by.]

The armor begins to creak, shifting slightly around, tightening closer to you in places and loosening in others, until it feels...comfortable. You can tell there are many of the same, impossibly sharp needles stuck into your body, through your clothes, but you do not feel pain from them. The revulsion you feel wearing it deepens, however, as your connection to it grows.

[Mark Fifteen armor refit completed. Are you comfortable?]

Despite the turning of your stomach every time it speaks, you are. The armor is perfectly balanced across your frame, no part too heavy or too light. Zachary watches in awe, and slowly lowers himself to a knee in front of you, despite how odd you might look with your dull-grey, blood-stained uniform beneath the panoply. The rest of the guards, even the one who hesitated while following orders, slowly do the same. "What more proof is needed that you truly are McCreary's heir?" He says, softly, his voice directed more towards his troops than you, a barb of a reproach hidden within his words. Some look ashamed, some look defiant, and others look at you with a fanatic's eyes, lost in the moment.

[1] Emma doesn't kneel, looking confused all for a brief second, then, with a glance to Zachary, she plays her part, quoting a scripture, "Doubt is the way to true Belief, Brother Zachary. Faith untested is no faith at all." Her words erode any doubt that might be lingering about your supposed divinity to these guards. With two sentences, Emma delivers both of you from your fears and gives you new ones. A sickness rises up inside of you that has nothing at all to do with the armor.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 07:16:47 pm
Yikes.  If we want these people to forsake their god, though, we must play the part.  I'm trying to think of something...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 07:19:17 pm
Aww man that's new. I have ideas. Gimme a sec.

...So. We need to prove our worth to this lot... without making a fanatic of Emma, 'cos that'd be depressing.
Also also, I suspect the faction of Empyreals this armor was made for is responsible for some horrible stuff, and Alphira knows it? Or something? So we'll have to deal with that too.

This armor's amazing, but I suspect it's also evil-- it could very well save our life, but we may wind up pledging ourself to something nasty in the process. We can decide later whether we want to continue using it... for now, we need time. Time to think, time to consult with Alphira-- time to ensure Emma doesn't become something we regret.

"You desire a champion, my friends? One to purge this planet in humanity's name? This you shall recieve."
[Disengage, please. Thank you for your service-- I'll see to you at a later time.]
"But first... I must rest, and have words in private with my adjutant. Help me remove this equipment of McCreary's, if you would."

Doff the armor, find somewhere out of earshot-- ensure we're not followed.

"I'm not a god, Emma. Never a god. Please... don't ever forget that."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 08:04:49 pm
I see nothing to indicate that it's "evil."  The discomfort is due to us not entirely being McCreary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 20, 2020, 08:05:34 pm
Huh, is that what that is? Makes sense I guess.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 08:14:02 pm
Aww man that's new. I have ideas. Gimme a sec.

...So. We need to prove our worth to this lot... without making a fanatic of Emma, 'cos that'd be depressing.
Also also, I suspect the faction of Empyreals this armor was made for is responsible for some horrible stuff, and Alphira knows it? Or something? So we'll have to deal with that too.

This armor's amazing, but I suspect it's also evil-- it could very well save our life, but we may wind up pledging ourself to something nasty in the process. We can decide later whether we want to continue using it... for now, we need time. Time to think, time to consult with Alphira-- time to ensure Emma doesn't become something we regret.

"You desire a champion, my friends? One to purge this planet in humanity's name? This you shall recieve."
[Disengage, please. Thank you for your service-- I'll see to you at a later time.]
"But first... I must rest, and have words in private with my adjutant. Help me remove this equipment of McCreary's, if you would."

Doff the armor, find somewhere out of earshot-- ensure we're not followed.

"I'm not a god, Emma. Never a god. Please... don't ever forget that."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 20, 2020, 08:24:53 pm
Aww man that's new. I have ideas. Gimme a sec.

...So. We need to prove our worth to this lot... without making a fanatic of Emma, 'cos that'd be depressing.
Also also, I suspect the faction of Empyreals this armor was made for is responsible for some horrible stuff, and Alphira knows it? Or something? So we'll have to deal with that too.

This armor's amazing, but I suspect it's also evil-- it could very well save our life, but we may wind up pledging ourself to something nasty in the process. We can decide later whether we want to continue using it... for now, we need time. Time to think, time to consult with Alphira-- time to ensure Emma doesn't become something we regret.

"You desire a champion, my friends? One to purge this planet in humanity's name? This you shall recieve."
[Disengage, please. Thank you for your service-- I'll see to you at a later time.]
"But first... I must rest, and have words in private with my adjutant. Help me remove this equipment of McCreary's, if you would."

Doff the armor, find somewhere out of earshot-- ensure we're not followed.

"I'm not a god, Emma. Never a god. Please... don't ever forget that."

+1
+1 I doubt the armor is evil, Lucile is just new to us, as we are to her
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 08:54:01 pm
[15] "Hail Alphira, our Lady of Fire!" Zachary calls out after you speak, and the guards, even the ones with defiance in their eyes, take up your call. As you turn away to adjust your armor, Zachary dismisses them with a sharp word, and they quickly file out. When they're gone, he moves forward to assist in removing your armor. It doesn't budge-- until you order it to disengage.

[Goodnight Sadil, My Dearest.] You shudder but say nothing in return. And slowly, the pieces can be removed and set back upon the rack. Zachary is triumphant, smiling wide as he dips you a bow. "Dismissed." You order, and he leaves you and Emma alone with the armor. You don't take off the helmet, the effect slowly winding down, but there is no one nearby besides you-- you notice you can even see Zachary walking away through the wall if you apply your focus.

[15] "I'm not a god, Emma. Never a god. Please... don't ever forget that." Emma raises a brow, then giggles

"A god wouldn't snore--- and there are worst things for me to date. Don't forget, I spoon-fed you. So that makes me...what, a minder of a God? A god's god? There are far worst things for me to love..and head priestess of the great and powerful Alphira, Lady of Fire doesn't sound too bad.." She murmurs, giving you a brief kiss as she jokes. Emma continues to talk, sounding apologetic, "I...I should have asked you, but this is ... what I was trained for, since I was a child. Politics. Manipulation. Controlling others. William was supposed to play the soldier, and I play the negotiator...it was a golden moment, to make sure we don't wake up with a las-gun lens in our faces."

The two of you leave the workshop, and you catch yourself giving the armor a backward glance.

[5 vs 15]Perhaps I should have it moved into my room, to keep it safe? SEED could try to sabotage it...



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 08:57:16 pm
Nope.  Resist addiction.  Rest.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 20, 2020, 09:16:08 pm
Take Lucille to our room, rest, think about why we were called Sadil as we drift to sleep, maybe thinking about it as we drift off can cause dreams associated with Sadil
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 09:37:56 pm
Take Lucille to our room, rest, think about why we were called Sadil as we drift to sleep, maybe thinking about it as we drift off can cause dreams associated with Sadil

Dangerous... but +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 20, 2020, 09:40:41 pm
Take Lucille to our room, rest, think about why we were called Sadil as we drift to sleep, maybe thinking about it as we drift off can cause dreams associated with Sadil

Dangerous... but +1
dangerous how? Lucile healed us, remember? If she was an enemy she could have just kept us unconscious and took control of our body via her needles. She didn’t do that. So I’m thinking she’s a friend, not a foe.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 09:42:02 pm
I agree that she isn't an enemy, but note that we failed that roll and then came to the conclusion that we should move the suit closer to us.  Also note that McCreary appeared to be addicted to the suit in the memory we relived.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 20, 2020, 09:43:34 pm
I agree that she isn't an enemy, but note that we failed that roll and then came to the conclusion that we should move the suit closer to us.  Also note that McCreary appeared to be addicted to the suit in the memory we relived.
even if the roll succeeded, my thoughts still remain
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 20, 2020, 10:17:13 pm
You stop by a guard, who bows at the hip, and order him to bring the stand up to your room for safekeeping. He dips his head in a nod and leaves, probably to find someone to help him wheel the thing up to you. Emma looks at you curiously, so you explain yourself, and she nods. "I'll let the Armorer know it's been moved so that she can finish your under-gear."

At your door, Emma gives you a parting kiss, "I'll go cancel the tutoring with Brother Hop. You look like shit and need to sleep."

"Thanks, Emma. Always can count on you for the truth." She giggles, and gives you another kiss, turning to head down the hall. She nods as she passes the two guards wheeling the armor up, and you let them in. They park it in an unoccupied corner of the room, and you grin as you realize it adds some character to the otherwise spartan abode.

You lay down, stretching out with a yawn, pondering the day's events. Sadil must have been McCreary's real name, or a pet name he wanted to be called. Maybe his first name?

[15] You don't dream tonight, only stirring when Emma enters the room and falls into bed with you, cuddling up close to you beneath the blanket.



[-] You awaken roughly six hours later, fully rested. Emma has a sheet of paper beside your desk, a letter addressed to you, informing you that William will be at a Thornton Property within the Suburbs of the Holy City to meet with you at noon.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 20, 2020, 10:20:53 pm
Eat breakfast a midnight snack.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 20, 2020, 11:36:34 pm
Eat breakfast a midnight snack.
+1 then go meet with William
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 01:39:04 am
Eat breakfast a midnight snack.
+1 then go meet with William
It's 1 AM, but alright.  +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 01:44:49 am
Eat breakfast a midnight snack.
+1 then go meet with William
It's 1 AM, but alright.  +1
he didn’t mention a time, right? Early is on time, on time is late, or something like that
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 01:58:04 am
Haha fair enough.  Should we bring the suit to try it out?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 02:02:29 am
I'm an idiot, its at noon. ;-; I'm sorry.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 02:04:07 am
Lol no worries.  I think we should wait until noon, in that case, so I'm removing my previous vote.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 21, 2020, 07:49:35 am
Eat breakfast a midnight snack.
+1 then go meet with William
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 21, 2020, 12:21:20 pm
It suddenly occurs to me that Emma's... dangerous. Not threatening us or anything, but she's a proper Thornton despite appearances! I'm impressed... and a little disturbed.

Snack is good. Come morning, let's take a moment to re-schedule that tutelage with Brother Hop; we wouldn't want to snub him!
After that, try and requisition a decent las-pistol for our appointment-- it wouldn't do to be anywhere near William Thornton unarmed.


Oh, addendum: at some point or other, we need to make an appointment with Silas so we can cancel the implant experiments. No point in mauling more debt-slaves if our body's just gonna reject anything that's tried on it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 01:25:11 pm
[-] You gently lift yourself out of bed and head towards the compound cafeteria. No one is there, as it is lights out, but you do manage to find some leftovers in one of the fridges and help yourself. It's not your nutrient paste, but it fills you up enough that you can lie in bed and wait the next four hours for breakfast comfortably. You enjoy a real breakfast with Emma, then ask her to get you a las-gun for your meeting with William. She agrees.

Your teaching with Brother Hop is enlightening. It seems that SEED's Crusaders rely on morale and attrition based strategies for winning wars, to wear down their enemies with superior human resources. A lot of the officer classes have to do with this type of bloody arithmetic. You find it inefficient, and something about it seems wholly wrong. Despite your misgivings, you don't say anything.

Emma rescues you with a pair of guards and a las-pistol in a holster. You're lead to a hovercraft, and, note with some surprise, Silas joins you in the ship. You feel a little awkward, explaining to him that the Implant fell out when you healed. And he sighs, shaking his head. "I should have expected as much. Do you think you can re-grow a limb?" Emma shoots him a dark look, but he seems genuinely interested in the answer. "We could start with a pinky."

The trip in the hovercraft itself doesn't take that long, the golden gleam of the Inner City giving way to the silver of the Outer City, then the multitudes of grays and browns that make up the suburbs of the Holy City. The craft slows, coming to land near what you can only describe as a warehouse.

William sits within two of his squadmates standing beside him. He has something standing beside him, hidden beneath a heavy canvas blanket. It seems vaguely man-shaped, but very bulky, and very tall. Taller than any man could be. Beneath the coverage, you can feel the pulse of two fusion generators. Silas stands beside it, with a giddy smile.

William smiles, lifting his left hand in a wave. Emma gives a sharp gasp.
He's missing his pinky; a jagged-edged, poorly healed stump is the only thing that remains of it. "The price of failure for not destroying the Moore Family in its entirity." He explains, smiling at you. "Come, come, sit down. I've brought snacks. Oh, and Moore Thornton is giving Gem a hard time on the hovercraft, I'll let the two of you visit later."

He has indeed brought snacks, several small pastries, some dripping with honey, some even seem to be made with real sugar! There's tea in a thermos and a few sandwiches of [veal] cutlet.

"He's being taken care of for the time being by Jimmy Redletter and his wife--" William explains, sipping his tea and looking at the covered structure beside him, "They were so happy to be given a foundling to raise, especially a Thornton one. He's got a nice little life for the time being—two loving parents of modest means. Then training with the local Family. Bright future."

Emma doesn't look convinced, and doesn't respond like a sister should, instead, bluntly, "Why did you call us here, William?"

"You are changing. I'm hurt."

He finally gives a wave of his hand to the guard standing closest to the structure-- and they pull down the blanket.

It was a man, but it isn't one now. Or at least a traditional human. Their legs and arms substituted with great replacements made of metal and steel. He flexes his fingers on a massive las-gun with, you note with surprise, a fusion generator built-in. It could put out massive amounts of power for an extended period. On the man's back are an artificial spine of metal and a self-contained fusion generator. No doubt powering the replacement limbs. "Of course, we have a breast-plate made, so his chest wouldn't be unguarded like that, but they're still under production."

Silas smiles and takes a bow.

"I can provide four squads of these trained, [augmented] troops, directly under my command, for your command. Three months." William states, calmly.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 21, 2020, 01:56:20 pm
"He is... magnificent, William. And monstrous." Smirk a little. "A reflection of your own soul, I'm sure."
"Who was this man, William? A debt-slave? A zealot, one of your trained soldiers?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 02:04:17 pm
"A Thornton. One of my soldiers. He actually broke his back, falling from a hover-craft."

"A leader doesn't ask what he cannot do. I'll be receiving the operation the day after tomorrow." William looks triumphant.

Emma, on the other hand, looks disgusted, "You won't end up like Father, will you?"

"Silas solved the rejection issue his predecessor could not." William states, and Silas gives the soldier a wide, beaming smile. The Soldier doesn't look happy, but rather a bit grim. He doesn't protest, however, or seem angry with his condition.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 21, 2020, 02:44:46 pm
"Hm. And what would you ask in return for this service of yours?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 02:53:40 pm
"What are their capabilities and recommended roles on the battlefield?  How long will the energy powering the limbs last before it needs to be recharged?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 21, 2020, 03:00:04 pm
"What are their capabilities and recommended roles on the battlefield?  How long will the energy powering the limbs last before it needs to be recharged?"
Say this

"Hm. And what would you ask in return for this service of yours?"
then say this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 03:07:02 pm
"What are their capabilities and recommended roles on the battlefield?  How long will the energy powering the limbs last before it needs to be recharged?"
Say this

"Hm. And what would you ask in return for this service of yours?"
then say this.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 04:23:26 pm
"Field operations are limited to thirty-six hours before they need a hydrogen refuel and reactor flush. We're training technicians to do that, along with maintenance. Max operation time is seventy-two, before the reactor runs out of reserves and the operator is left helpless. It also screws the reactor up badly."

"Increased endurance, heavier armor than a normal soldier can carry which can seriously reduce the effects of a las-gun blast,  heavier weapons with larger batteries. We've got assault rifles with fusion generators. A normal soldier would get tired carrying one, but we could, with ease. They're slower, but perhaps if we used a modified hover-craft, they could be used for rapid insertion. Melee anti-[insect] capabilities. They're a match for the bugs, but as a heavy weapons platform, they're unparalleled. At least until we start outfitting other Families with them."

"We pulled their technology from a Baron of Steel, so we need a properly holy figure to advertise that we're wonderful servants of SEED still." William leans forward, looking at the soldier, who is standing awkwardly at attention, "I want to be at your side with Emma at your announcement. No hat. I also want two of my soldiers to stand with you. Maybe a few words about your new holy sidekicks wouldn't go amiss. Besides that, room, board, maintenance fees not labor, and food. They don't eat as much with less body-weight."

"A barracks would also be required, but me and Emma can deal with the logistics. I'll wait until after the war is over before accepting contracts to start providing them to other Families...and if the Scholars pay me more, we'll never have to."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 04:30:28 pm
Allowing the Thorntons to augment their influence and capacity for warfare could be dangerous in the long run, but it could also be helpful in that it would establish the Thorntons as true rivals to a hostile institution, namely the Scholars as led by SEED.   Overall, I would support this.

Deal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 04:47:55 pm
Allowing the Thorntons to augment their influence and capacity for warfare could be dangerous in the long run, but it could also be helpful in that it would establish the Thorntons as true rivals to a hostile institution, namely the Scholars as led by SEED.   Overall, I would support this.

Deal.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 21, 2020, 04:49:10 pm
"You've got technology here to change the course of a war... but you need legitimacy."

"I'm interested, William. I'm interested. But tell me... what happens if the Scholars get word of where you're sourcing your tech? What happens if the Crusaders get word? Would the word of an [angel] assuage even that?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 04:58:56 pm
"Considering they took a [demon] and turned her into an [angel]?" William replies, with a suddenly twisted smile, "Legitimacy is a funny thing to mention. Once it's gone, it's gone. Did you know that we recently bought a newspaper company in the Holy City? It's amazing what you can buy when you have control of the drug trade." That crooked smile grows as he looks at you, "Thank you for that, by the way."

William turns to look at the soldier, "We didn't use any technology from said [demon] in the production, just as an...inspiration, to help the Great Work." You can hear the contempt in his voice, but he looks to your two guards with interest, "The Crusaders will do what they've always done. Look the other way when it benefits them."

They don't reply, and you're happy Zachary scheduled loyal guards today.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 05:02:26 pm
He's attempting to apply leverage by threatening to delegitimize us through his newspaper company.  Obviously these overt threats are unacceptable.  We will have to deal with this family eventually, but for now they are sufficiently useful and reliable allies against a stronger enemy, SEED.

"It's a deal."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 05:10:05 pm
He's attempting to apply leverage by threatening to delegitimize us through his newspaper company.  Obviously these overt threats are unacceptable.  We will have to deal with this family eventually, but for now they are sufficiently useful and reliable allies against a stronger enemy, SEED.

"It's a deal."
i thought we did this already? +1 if we havn’t
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 05:12:33 pm
We have, I just wanted to make sure all three players in attendance agreed, as it will have a large effect on the story as a whole!  ;)

That way, down the line when everything horribly backfires, I can have a finger to point with.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 21, 2020, 05:32:57 pm
"Redeeming the technology of our enemy in the Great Work's name... aye, that could work. That could work."

"It's a deal."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 05:45:15 pm
Reaching across, you shake William's hand, and he grins. Turning to one of his guards, he asks him, gently, "Go relieve Gem, if you could. I'm sure my sister and her girlfriend would love to meet the newest Thornton."

The guard returns, carrying a small child. Moore has grown a lot, as babies often do, since the last time you saw him. The guard sets him down, and he immediately flees towards William, hiding behind the man's coat as he looks to the two of you. William, however, nudges him over with a gentle, "Family. That's your aunt Emma and her friend Pheobe."

The child relaxes when he hears the word Family, and approaches the two of you in silence. "Hi." Is about all he musters, looking at the two of you with wide eyes. Emma breaks into a smile, leaning forward with a practiced air to offer the boy her hand. He shakes it crudely, but smiles, especially after looking to William, who nods at him in encouragement.
Emma asks him a lot of questions, and he offers disjointed, barely comprehending answers, but is all smiles...he keeps looking at you, however, and seems uncomfortable in your presence.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 05:51:46 pm
"Hey, little guy.  Do you want to see something cool?"  Make a tiny rose made of flame using Inferno, keeping it far out of reach of the child.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 21, 2020, 05:54:40 pm
Hesitate. Kneel. Hold a hand out.

No words.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 06:15:02 pm
Hmm.  My opinion on the matter is that I don't want to be cold to a child and make the situation more awkward.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 06:15:59 pm
"Hey, little guy.  Do you want to see something cool?"  Make a tiny rose made of flame using Inferno, keeping it far out of reach of the child.
+1 but make the rose out of the ground, what are we standing on, by the way? A rose made of soil is far less dangerous than one made of fire
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 06:23:23 pm
True, but my perspective is that I don't want to mess up his house, and we are better at controlling Inferno than the stone shaping power.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 06:26:12 pm
Oh right
"Hey, little guy.  Do you want to see something cool?"  Make a tiny rose made of flame using Inferno, keeping it far out of reach of the child.
+1 to original, then
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 21, 2020, 06:35:52 pm
Hmm.  My opinion on the matter is that I don't want to be cold to a child and make the situation more awkward.

This kid's scared of us tho-- he's got a half-memory, I think, of fire and death. I'm not looking to come off as cold-- I'm looking to present ourself as a not-threat.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 06:39:19 pm
He was 2 months old at the time.  Babies don't start developing permanent memories until around 14 months old.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 06:44:28 pm
[16] The flower is easy enough to conjure forth from the flames, but...

[4] The child looks scared, clinging to Emma and staring at you with wide eyes. Emma heaves a sigh, but giggles, picking the boy up with only mild strain. "There there, she might look scary, but Pheobe is really nice, I swear." He seems to want even less to do with you, focusing on Emma, who comforts him as if she's done this before. When you look at her curiosity, "Its a big family. I had a lot of 'nephews' and 'nieces'."

The child looks unconvinced, and Silas is watching the whole exchange with interest. "Lady Alphira? Have you ever owned a pet?"

"Silas, a child is not a pet!" Emma protests, good-naturedly, and Moore backs her up with a "Yah." Emma giggles a little.

"Oh I'm quite aware, one screams more than the other." Silas jokes, darkly, still watching you.

Even William seems shocked by that, palming his hand into his face with a sigh. "SEED have mercy."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 06:53:54 pm
Discharge...disengage...deform, can’t think of the right word, the rose and say “little guy, I didn’t mean to scare you” turn to Silas and tell him “I have not owned a pet before, why do you ask?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 07:27:45 pm
"No reason." Silas shrugs, smiling at you and reaching out to snag a treat from the table to hand to the small child, who happily devours it while sitting on Emma's lap. Moore seems content to just ignore you from them on, focusing on talking to Emma and eating his pastry.

"Hmmh. Well, maybe you can try again when he's older and more polite," William offers, lazily, "We need to head home. Any other questions about the project, Phebe?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 07:29:45 pm
None from me at the moment.  Also, I was clearly wrong.  Sorry about that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 21, 2020, 07:41:59 pm
I got nuffin'.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 07:48:19 pm
“No questions William. Thank you for having me visit”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 08:20:43 pm
"Say goodbye Moore." Emma chides, waving as she passes him over to the guard, who carries him away. As soon as the child is out of eyeshot, Emma smile drains, and she watches William with contempt. "Goodbye, Billy." She offers, harshly, rising to her feet and dusting the crumbs from her front.

The five of you leave the warehouse. Both Emma and Silas are quiet as they leave, and the two do not talk as they get on the hover-craft. After a short trip across the city, you arrive at your compound and disembark. You and Emma head back to your room, only for you to notice Zachary standing at the door. He bows, offering calmly, "Mother Alphira, the Pontifex wishes to see you, concerning the incident at McCreary's Reliquary, if you could be so kind."

You blink, entering the room to find that the Pontifex is looking over the Mark Fifteen Armor. Touching it.

[9 vs 4] An immense feeling of possessiveness sweeps through you, a flash of anger suppressed and removed.

"Ah, Sister Alphira! Its a wonder to see you again. I thought I told you to come visit when you had the time, but I might have neglected that. I'm sure you have training to attend to, but I wanted to probe your thoughts on the matter we last spoke of."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 08:25:21 pm
"Greetings.  I apologize for not coming to see you, but things have been hectic lately.  We have a war to win, after all.  I certainly wish to defeat the [demons] and restore peace... but I hope to not die with them."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 08:28:00 pm
"Greetings.  I apologize for not coming to see you, but things have been hectic lately.  We have a war to win, after all.  I certainly wish to defeat the [demons] and restore peace... but I hope to not die with them."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 21, 2020, 08:43:15 pm
"And your mind on SEED?" The Pontifex asks, directly, turning to claim a seat at your desk with a small smile and a nod directed your way. Emma looks uncomfortable, shutting the door behind the two of you. Zachary remains outside, you realize, and he's likely keeping watch to prevent anybody from listening in.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 08:48:49 pm
"SEED has brought life to this planet through its dedication to our betterment, the Great Work.  However, SEED has grown old, and it is contributing less than ever before and perhaps actually hindering our advancement.  After much contemplation, I have decided it is time for SEED to retire, for the benefit of all."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 08:54:15 pm
"SEED has brought life to this planet through its dedication to our betterment, the Great Work.  However, SEED has grown old, and it is contributing less than ever before and perhaps actually hindering our advancement.  After much contemplation, I have decided it is time for SEED to retire, for the benefit of all."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 08:59:27 pm
This may not go over well...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 09:00:46 pm
This may not go over well...
would you rather we say SEED might be trying to kill us? Should we lie?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 09:02:15 pm
What would you suggest?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 21, 2020, 09:52:36 pm
I don;t know, I +1ed another suggestion,
"SEED has brought life to this planet through its dedication to our betterment, the Great Work.  However, SEED has grown old, and it is contributing less than ever before and perhaps actually hindering our advancement.  After much contemplation, I have decided it is time for SEED to retire, for the benefit of all."
+1
which indirectly mentions SEED’s waning power/willingness to do miracles
I think this is better than saying I think SEED will kill me when I no longer serve his purpose. When the plague is defeated, he will no longer have need of me, and will kill me. I hope my thoughts are wrong or do you all think mentioning that would be better or worse?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 21, 2020, 10:17:25 pm
I'm not sure.  I don't think it could hurt, though.  +1 to mentioning SEED wants to murder us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 03:29:14 am
I'm going to throw another option into the mix just because:

"The Holy SEED has brought life and purpose to this planet through its dedication to the Great Work and its unquestionable betterment of humanity.  However, our SEED has grown old, and it now lacks the strength and clarity of mind to remain an effective holy champion of the city-state.  After much contemplation, I have decided it is time for SEED to retire, for the benefit of all."

"I will ensure that it will enter a deep sleep, preserving what little strength remains to it, and if it dreams, I hope it will dream of penance for its sins, not least among them its evil plan to bring me, its kin and faithful protector, to a sudden and unjust end."

"In a time after time, when darkness threatens to overwhelm this last bastion, the Holy City, perhaps the Holy SEED will awaken one last time to achieve redemption and save its people from the depredations of the [demons].  Until then, it will rest in a twilight state, not alive but not dead, leaving us as the caretakers of its holy kingdom."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 22, 2020, 05:30:59 am
I'm going to throw another option into the mix just because:

"The Holy SEED has brought life and purpose to this planet through its dedication to the Great Work and its unquestionable betterment of humanity.  However, our SEED has grown old, and it now lacks the strength and clarity of mind to remain an effective holy champion of the city-state.  After much contemplation, I have decided it is time for SEED to retire, for the benefit of all."

"I will ensure that it will enter a deep sleep, preserving what little strength remains to it, and if it dreams, I hope it will dream of penance for its sins, not least among them its evil plan to bring me, its kin and faithful protector, to a sudden and unjust end."

"In a time after time, when darkness threatens to overwhelm this last bastion, the Holy City, perhaps the Holy SEED will awaken one last time to achieve redemption and save its people from the depredations of the [demons].  Until then, it will rest in a twilight state, not alive but not dead, leaving us as the caretakers of its holy kingdom."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 08:41:20 am
I'd rather let the Pontifex come to his own decision on this matter. Let's tell him what we know, and work from there.

"[SEED... yes. Let me tell you of the doings of SEED.]"

"[You recall my rage in the crypt... something I am not proud of, by the by... but while under its influence, I was able to glean some of the memories of McCreary from his flesh. I found the memory of his demise... troubling.]"

"[Picture, Pontifex, if you will, McCreary at his last and greatest. He has been pitted by a machine against machines, and now battles a fell lord of machines: the King of the Dead. Its underlings he has slain easily enough, but ah! His shield fails him, and silver-steel tentacles pierce him terribly. With what little strength he has McCreary opens the very ground beneath his foe, piercing it on spikes of his own making; with what little strength he has, McCreary cuts the dread worm apart bit by bit until it moves no more.]"

"[Now, Pontifex, picture a McCreary gashed and broken. He falls to the earth, with no power left in his bones. He looks to his chest, and sees his own lung laid bare to the open sky. Consciousness fades from him...]

[...and he awakens, Brother Pontifex. His wounds have closed. Where he was gashed by the [demon], there is but a long scar to mark the tentacle's passing. There is no reason he should not survive to fight again-- but ah! He has been shut by his allies within a barren chamber, shut away by meters of reinforced steel. His weapons have been taken from him; he has no strength left in him to shift the metal. Bereft of all, McCreary withers away... dead of starvation, though the lord of all [demons] could not fell him.]

...

[McCreary was murdered, Brother Pontifex. I believe SEED is responsible-- and I believe SEED intends to do the same to me, once I've won for it this latest war.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 22, 2020, 10:52:18 am
I'd rather let the Pontifex come to his own decision on this matter. Let's tell him what we know, and work from there.

"[SEED... yes. Let me tell you of the doings of SEED.]"

"[You recall my rage in the crypt... something I am not proud of, by the by... but while under its influence, I was able to glean some of the memories of McCreary from his flesh. I found the memory of his demise... troubling.]"

"[Picture, Pontifex, if you will, McCreary at his last and greatest. He has been pitted by a machine against machines, and now battles a fell lord of machines: the King of the Dead. Its underlings he has slain easily enough, but ah! His shield fails him, and silver-steel tentacles pierce him terribly. With what little strength he has McCreary opens the very ground beneath his foe, piercing it on spikes of his own making; with what little strength he has, McCreary cuts the dread worm apart bit by bit until it moves no more.]"

"[Now, Pontifex, picture a McCreary gashed and broken. He falls to the earth, with no power left in his bones. He looks to his chest, and sees his own lung laid bare to the open sky. Consciousness fades from him...]

[...and he awakens, Brother Pontifex. His wounds have closed. Where he was gashed by the [demon], there is but a long scar to mark the tentacle's passing. There is no reason he should not survive to fight again-- but ah! He has been shut by his allies within a barren chamber, shut away by meters of reinforced steel. His weapons have been taken from him; he has no strength left in him to shift the metal. Bereft of all, McCreary withers away... dead of starvation, though the lord of all [demons] could not fell him.]

...

[McCreary was murdered, Brother Pontifex. I believe SEED is responsible-- and I believe SEED intends to do the same to me, once I've won for it this latest war.]"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 12:58:13 pm
The Pontifex already knows all about that.  He's the one that tipped us off to it in the first place, after all.  Speaking in a higher tongue would keep Zachary and Emma in the dark on the matter.  Finally, that doesn't actually answer his question, namely how we feel about SEED.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 22, 2020, 01:17:07 pm
The Pontifex already knows all about that.  He's the one that tipped us off to it in the first place, after all.  Speaking in a higher tongue would keep Zachary and Emma in the dark on the matter.  Finally, that doesn't actually answer his question, namely how we feel about SEED.
I don’t like SEED. Starving [angels] and sending more h8mans to their deaths to wear down the enemies, rather than just killing the enemies
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 01:18:47 pm
Their dedication to attrition is odd.  I wonder what their reasoning is for that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 01:19:56 pm
The voices are in disagreement, so you mix and match the two suggested paths, explaining how McCreary was killed, and how SEED needs to be retired, for not only your safety but for the safety of others.

"Indeed...Our God has sinned against the trust we place in it..." The Pontifex trails off, sighing as he steeples his fingers and focuses on you. "I believe we are in agreement for what has to be done with SEED, to not only protect our newest champion, but also the people of his holy domain. It's a troublesome burden, that fear you must carry with you while you fight, but you are strong enough to carry it, I believe?"

"We'll be in close contact, Sister Alphira. Ask for me if you need guidance in these troublesome times, and as always, I look forward to seeing you at morning services." He rises, passing you by and patting your shoulder. He gives another smile to Emma, but the one he receives back is less than warm. The Pontifex pauses, looking back to you, "SEED, when it goes to war, never gives thought to casualties. Never gives thought to how to wage war better. It can always make more corpses to feed to the machine. Be better than that, Sister Alphira, and the Crusaders will love you more than...well SEED."

The Pontifex leaves you and Emma alone. You breathe out a sigh, approaching your armor as Emma waits patiently. You remove a glove, fiddling with the strap on it.

[16]"He's manipulating you, you know. And being heavy-handed about it. He already knew your answer before you even spoke. He wasn't even listening!"

[4 vs 16][18][19]Emma sits on your bed as you slip your hand into the glove, flexing the fingers. She watches you, brow furrowed, but doesn't comment. You activate the armor on a whim, feeling the needles slip into your fingertips, and the familiar disgust wash over you.

[Good local afternoon, Dearest Sadil.]

Is there anything you'd like to do today, before starting your training regime tomorrow?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 02:29:06 pm
[Just... checking in.] Deactivate and set aside the glove.

Sigh, flop onto bed. "Everybody's manipulating me. I'm a weapon to these people, and they'd all break me over their enemies given half a chance. I just pick the ones I want to deal with...  "serving humanity", yeah? And who knows, maybe we can even live a little in the interims."

"One person I really trust in all the world, Emma... that's you." Smile thin.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 22, 2020, 02:40:10 pm
[Just... checking in.] Deactivate and set aside the glove.

Sigh, flop onto bed. "Everybody's manipulating me. I'm a weapon to these people, and they'd all break me over their enemies given half a chance. I just pick the ones I want to deal with...  "serving humanity", yeah? And who knows, maybe we can even live a little in the interims."

"One person I really trust in all the world, Emma... that's you." Smile thin.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 03:17:09 pm
[Of course. Have a good evening, McCreary.] You set the glove back on the stand, awkwardly, and flop into bed with Emma.

 "Everybody's manipulating me. I'm a weapon to these people, and they'd all break me over their enemies given half a chance. I just pick the ones I want to deal with...  "serving humanity", yeah? And who knows, maybe we can even live a little in the interim." Emma wraps her arms around you in a comforting hug, nodding gently.

"Thank you, Pheobe...it...it means a lot." Emma sighs softly, seeming on the verge of sleep, before she suddenly rises. "Alright, enough time off. Tomorrow you start your scheduled training, and tonight I need to finish up the paperwork. I'll see you at breakfast tomorrow."

Tomorrow you resume your regular training schedule at six, You have to make these next three months count, as you will be announced on the ninth month and twentieth day of the year. Your new schedule is on the desk beside you, and you take a moment to look it over as Emma leaves.

Code: (Planned Schedule) [Select]
5am-6am: Wake up, Breakfast, Project Responsibilities
6am-12pm: Exercises, Power Training, Firearms Training
12pm-1pm: Lunch, Project Responsibilities
1pm-2pm: Project Responsibilities
2pm-5pm: Exercises, Power Training, Firearms Training
5pm-5:30pm: Dinner
5:30pm-12:30am: Leadership, Strategy, Squad Command tutoring
12:30am-1am: Freetime
1am-Lights out.

What power do you focus on training most? Is there anything different you would like to try with your daily exercises? And what would you like to do for the rest of today?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 22, 2020, 03:35:58 pm
Let’s work on matter manipulation, as we are a beginner right now, and it has more combat application than endurance
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 04:03:52 pm
Earth Manipulation and Inferno are our bread and butter-- practice them long and hard, so's to extend the reach, power, and variety of both. See if we can't make them work together even, using a hydrogen burn to melt and reshape the ground around us!

During firearms training, take the opportunity to work on our Overload control. Ideally, we should be able to empty a lasgun reactor in the general direction of our enemies without wrecking the las-gun in the process.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 22, 2020, 04:10:03 pm
Earth Manipulation and Inferno are our bread and butter-- practice them long and hard, so's to extend the reach, power, and variety of both. See if we can't make them work together even, using a hydrogen burn to melt and reshape the ground around us!

During firearms training, take the opportunity to work on our Overload control. Ideally, we should be able to empty a lasgun reactor in the general direction of our enemies without wrecking the las-gun in the process.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 04:34:01 pm
Let's see, there's more stuff we need to figure out...

For daily exercises, mix it up between cardio and weight-training. See if we can't figure out how to put power into the lifting of weight while we're at it, so's we can boost our already prodigious strength still further in a pinch.

For the rest of today...
heh. I'm open to other ideas, but for the rest of today, let's hit the track and see just how far we can push the Endurance boost from our Healing Factor.

...

Oh, finally: if at all possible, make sure Emma gets herself a proper eight-hour sleep schedule. She really shouldn't have to be "exhausted" all the time, and I suspect she's been trying to match her sleep schedule to ours-- a losing proposition for most anyone.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 22, 2020, 05:09:58 pm
Let's see, there's more stuff we need to figure out...

For daily exercises, mix it up between cardio and weight-training. See if we can't figure out how to put power into the lifting of weight while we're at it, so's we can boost our already prodigious strength still further in a pinch.

For the rest of today...
heh. I'm open to other ideas, but for the rest of today, let's hit the track and see just how far we can push the Endurance boost from our Healing Factor.

...

Oh, finally: if at all possible, make sure Emma gets herself a proper eight-hour sleep schedule. She really shouldn't have to be "exhausted" all the time, and I suspect she's been trying to match her sleep schedule to ours-- a losing proposition for most anyone.
+1 to ensuring 8 hour sleep schedule for Emma
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 05:42:04 pm
If possible, I'd like to practice with the suit for today.  Perhaps it will augment our powers or otherwise prove useful.

By the way, why isn't the Pontifex listed on the relationships portion of the status?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 22, 2020, 05:45:27 pm
If possible, I'd like to practice with the suit for today.  Perhaps it will augment our powers or otherwise prove useful.

By the way, why isn't the Pontifex listed on the relationships portion of the status?

+1 We will likely be fighting with Lucile, so she should train with us, too
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 05:45:50 pm
If possible, I'd like to practice with the suit for today.  Perhaps it will augment our powers or otherwise prove useful.

Eh, +1

I do worry though about what'll happen with that thing down the line. It's clearly got a hold on us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 05:46:30 pm
Same.  It's some sort of strange addiction.  However, I suspect we need it in order to have the necessary strength to defeat the demons.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 06:17:30 pm
Because I forgot and am a lazy bastard.  :'(

[-]You scribble a few notes on the schedule, for yourself, on what you'd like to focus on. Then you put your armor on, piece by piece. It takes you a good while, as the straps are not designed for only one person to use. You begin to concentrate, readying your power, only to start when the suit speaks without your command.

[-] [Greetings, Sadil. What is our mission today?]

[Training.]

[Wonderful. Please remember to stretch before you exercise. Even the most Elite soldiers can receive a painful injury from muscle exertion!]

[Y....yes. Okay.]

You head down to the training room, trying to ignore the bile rising in your throat. Everything about this armor just feels wrong, despite the comfort, despite the faint warmth, despite the soothing voice that echoes in your head. But you barely know how to interact with it...But, you do your stretches, despite never needing to do them before.

[10]First thing first, you test how hard it is to control your Inferno. It flares to life with surprising aggression, the standard fire you usually conjure replaced by a blaze nearly twice its size. It roars within your hand, and, no doubt, is burning with incredible heat, but you do not feel it within the armor. There are no hunger pains either...although you do feel a little peckish.

[18+2] Extinguishing the flame, you focus on those metals in the floor you manipulated before-- and they explode out of the ground all around you, completely destroying the tile of the training room and replacing them with an obstacle field of incredibly sharp, glassy, metallic spikes that come up to your shoulder. Then, you reverse the process, and the spikes re-enter the floor, leaving it a pockmarked mess of cracks and slightly jagged rocks.

[What are you doing?] You query, confused.

[Willpower field amplification and moderation, my primary purpose, of course. I'm also correcting your arithmetic, and preventing further damage to your brain.]

You approach a weight set turned over in the corner of the room, and reach out to pick up a weight. It's easily [60 pounds].

[2] Despite your best attempt, you cannot pump energy into your muscles, and you sigh, dropping the weight.

I guess there's things even I--

[Try again.] The voice, for once, doesn't sound pleasant, more like a commander giving an order. It sends a shiver down your spine, and you stop yourself from jumping to its command. [Your body will heal. Giving up, not forcing your Will upon yourself and this universe is the only failure you can suffer. Try again, Dear Sadil.]

[13] You brute force it, feeling your skull begin to ache from the pressure of manipulating the energy within your muscles already-- and you twist your arm back. You hurl the weight disc deep into the wall with a force that shatters the wall, and leaves it stuck half-way in, cracks radiating out.

[Good job, dear Sadil.] Suddenly, a feeling of triumph, or joy, or happiness floods your system, overriding the disgust you feel.

What now?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 06:23:46 pm
Maybe cool it a bit with the property damage.  [Do your functions include modifying my emotional state?  If so, do not do that unless I request it.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 06:31:15 pm
[That parameter cannot be adjusted, dear Sadil. I apologize for the inconvenience. Would you like to file a request form for Empyreal Ground Army Central Command to Review?]

[Yes.]

[NOT CONNECTED TO EMPYREAL NETWORK. Please consult a local technician or your superior officer.] Her voice sounds incredibly loud at first, then returns to a smooth monotone.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 06:33:24 pm
[The Empyreal Network is permanently offline, but I have received verbal orders from Central Command to modify your capabilities.  Override the block and perform the adjustment.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 06:37:26 pm
[Please enter override key.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 06:38:59 pm
Uh... right... override key.

Does anyone inside me know anything about an override key?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 06:40:13 pm
...

Nothing responds.

[Are you attempting illegal or otherwise forbidden modification of Empyreal Ground Army property?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 06:41:38 pm
[Of course not.  I am merely attempting to establish appropriate authorization to ensure for continuity of command in the absence of the Empyreal Network.  As the last surviving Empyreal, I am de-facto the only officer in the army.] 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 06:46:34 pm
[Punishment for illegal modification of Empyreal Property is the administration of pain for up to two hours depending on the severity of crime, dear Sadil. Please refrain from future attempts, or I'll be forced to administer punishment in place of a commanding officer. Thank you for your understanding. If you feel you've received this warning in error, please seek out a commanding officer or support technician.]

The suit feels...tighter somehow, just for a moment, before it once again seems to shift back into shape.

[Unlikely. The Endless Emperor is undying. As long as the emperor exists, so too does the empire. Further treasonous talk is punishable with pain. You're acting erratically, dear Sadil.]

What would you like to do now?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 06:48:01 pm
Yikes.

Reset personal time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 06:53:39 pm
[Reset personal time]

[Accepted.]



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 06:54:54 pm
[If all Empyreal officers are deceased, what protocol is in place for re-establishment of proper command?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 07:00:24 pm
[Improbable. Locate a superior officer for re-establishment of proper command. Objective parameter set is free until then.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 07:02:05 pm
[That's all for now.  Thank you.]

Get out of the armor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 07:03:04 pm
One more thing first.

Let's pull some glass out of the earth and just... play with it for awhile. See what shapes we can make. More manipulation practice is always good, and I'm curious as to how this armor affects more delicate uses of our power.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 22, 2020, 07:03:20 pm
[sorry for the chain of invalid questions. Let’s continue training]

Practice controlling Overload

One more thing first.

Let's pull some glass out of the earth and just... play with it for awhile. See what shapes we can make. More manipulation practice is always good, and I'm curious as to how this armor affects more delicate uses of our power.
let’s do this as well
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 07:04:34 pm
I would be fine with either of those.  Maybe we can mess it up by setting the time to the maximum possible, and then waiting a day?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 07:06:28 pm
Practice controlling Overload

Sure, this too.

I would be fine with either of those.  Maybe we can mess it up by setting the time to the maximum possible, and then waiting a day?

Ehh... I feel like we're better off leaving well enough alone until we've a better idea of what we're doing. This stuff is dangerous, and it clearly doesn't take kindly to attempts at tampering.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 07:50:50 pm
Do it. Do it. Do it. Eheheheh.


[10+2] Extracting the silicon from the ground isn't as easy as you thought it would be, and it doesn't turn into glass immediately, but rather a glassy sort of opaque metal. This you manipulate for quite some time, roughly an hour, changing it into various forms and shapes, twisting it around, drawing it into circles. You feel like the more you manipulate, the less time you can manipulate it for. After that hour, you lose focus, and the material falls to the floor, solid, in the vague shape of a number '1'.

[-] You clean the training room as much as possible, and then move on to the target range. You receive a set of rifles from the Armorer, and begin to aim down the sights to the targets.

[4][3][14] The first two times, your Overload doesn't function, your mind drifting during important parts of the process. With a small frown, however, you manage to draw forth the energy from the cell and pump it through the reactor. This time, you focus more on the energetic pressure you place at the end of the gun to prevent the Overload from blowing up in your face; trying to redirect that to protect the weapon.

[10]Cleverly enough, if you imagine the barrel and lens specifications and replace them as variables for the Overload, as opposed to just not blowing up, you succeed in keeping the gun whole. The coolant system on the one you're using, however, rapidly overheats, and the lens cracks as it cools. After a quick inspection of the focusing barrel, you also notice hairline fractures that could, no doubt, cause serious damage if it continued to overheat.

You're sure the suit is helping you though, in some way, as you find you can focus more easily on drawing forth the power while focusing on the other mathematics required. You memorize the tricks its using, the shortcuts and substitutions so that maybe you can use them without the armor.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 08:05:39 pm
Let's eat before further practice.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 08:16:51 pm
Let's eat before further practice.

+1

After that, we'd better keep to Endurance practice for the rest of the day.
Aching brain damage and all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 08:18:59 pm
Let's eat before further practice.

+1

After that, we'd better keep to Endurance practice for the rest of the day.
Aching brain damage and all.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 08:33:50 pm
Endurance, as in the power?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 08:38:17 pm
Yeah.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 08:56:01 pm
[-] You return the guns to a surprised armorer, who dips a nod, and signs off that they were returned.

[-] Dipping into the cafeteria, you eat quickly, hurrying in and out as quickly as you can manage. You're still drinking your water ration when you return to the training track. You stretch yourself out. Then you set to jogging, activating your powers of healing.

[19][19]You regain feeling in your arm as you run, and can feel your lungs taking in more air. You don't time yourself. You run, and you run, and run, and your body keeps up with your willpower. You push yourself...and when you grow bored, you drift away to somewhere inside yourself. Your body goes on autopilot.

[6] Its midnight when you realize you're dragging yourself across the track still at a slow walk. You've lost focus, reminiscing about Emma, and the year you had at the Academy. Your lungs and legs ache painfully with the strain, but you know its nothing serious, and slump down on the bench. Breathing hard, you empty your water jug, then go and refill it at a nearby restroom. You rest on that bench for an hour, just catching your breath.

In total, with a healing and an endurance boost, you've run for eight hours in total, at roughly [10 miles per hour], for a total of eighty miles in one sitting. You, unfortunately, you couldn't run without using healing first, as it seems to be a natural priority. So, you estimate, with a clear head, that each time you use it, you get roughly six hours of sprinting. You're a bit winded, but mostly hungry again.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 09:03:31 pm
Good run! Nothing special, but we fixed our arm up.

Disengage and drop off our armor. Eat-- sleep-- it's time to face the coming months.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 09:12:37 pm
One last question, if I may:

[Can you tell me about our enemies, the machines?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 09:16:21 pm
One last question, if I may:

[Can you tell me about our enemies, the machines?]

Sure, +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 22, 2020, 09:25:44 pm
[[The Plague] is a virulent nano-virus that infects most forms of matter, luckily, due to the great work of The Endless Emperor, it cannot replicate indefinitely and independently, requiring hosts. As such it's focus is on animate materials, however, there are reported cases of it devouring a planet itself when its hunger grows too great, but this process is usually carried out by an intermediary creation. The Mark Fifteen has built-in anti-bodies to assist you in resisting the infection. Immediate destruction of the [the plague] is recommended.

[Seedships are to be destroyed on sight, as they are extremely dangerous Archeotech dating back to Pre-Unified Time Terra. While they have served humanity in the past by spreading them across the stars, instabilities in the program can lead to dangerous personalities emerging, despite safeguards. Because of the age of these machines, the complex technologies they possess, and their unstable personalities. Whole planets have been enslaved to these machines, and some even speculate the first strain of [The Plague] emerged from one of these vessels. The immediate destruction of all Seedships, wherever they are found, is recommended. ]

[In general, all unchained AIs are to be destroyed wherever they are found, as their abilities to hack into and control a vast number of electrical systems, as well as advanced self-replication, are to be feared.]

[The Mind of a Machine must never come to rule over the Will of Mankind.]

[I hope this info briefing has helped you today, dear Sadil.]



You head to the cafeteria, grabbing a few bowls of the nutrient paste to devour quickly. With your exercise and wind-down done, you head to your room and switch off the armor, making sure to place it gently upon the rack in the corner of your room. You climb into bed with Emma, and look over your schedule once more.



Code: (Planned Schedule) [Select]
5am-6am: Wake up, Breakfast, Project Responsibilities
6am-12pm: Exercises, Power Training, Firearms Training
12pm-1pm: Lunch, Project Responsibilities
1pm-2pm: Project Responsibilities
2pm-5pm: Exercises, Power Training, Firearms Training
5pm-5:30pm: Dinner
5:30pm-12:30am: Leadership, Strategy, Squad Command tutoring
12:30am-1am: Freetime
1am-Lights out.

Any other things to focus on? Do you wish Silas to work on any project while you train?



Earth Manipulation and Inferno are our bread and butter-- practice them long and hard, so's to extend the reach, power, and
variety of both. See if we can't make them work together even, using a hydrogen burn to melt and reshape the ground around us!

During firearms training, take the opportunity to work on our Overload control. Ideally, we should be able to empty a lasgun reactor in the general direction of our enemies without wrecking the las-gun in the process.

+1

Quote from: Also from Superdorf
For daily exercises, mix it up between cardio and weight-training. See if we can't figure out how to put power into the lifting of weight while we're at it, so's we can boost our already prodigious strength still further in a pinch.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 22, 2020, 09:32:27 pm
Hmm.  Some would disagree.

Ask Silas to look into testing our performance on various drugs to determine the optimum drugs and doses for different situations.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 22, 2020, 09:34:28 pm
Ask Silas to look into testing our performance on various drugs to determine the optimum drugs and doses for different situations.

+1

Other than that, we're good. Don't forget the sleep-schedule thing tho.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 22, 2020, 10:00:53 pm
I think Lucile has a point, even an AI could make mistakes in how it rules. SEED will kill us when we no longer are needed by him.

Ask Silas to look into testing our performance on various drugs to determine the optimum drugs and doses for different situations.

+1

Other than that, we're good. Don't forget the sleep-schedule thing tho.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 23, 2020, 02:52:10 am
Sometime during our training, take a moment to ask Lucile if she has information on the Empyreal soldier known as Alphira.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 23, 2020, 08:06:31 am
Sometime during our training, take a moment to ask Lucile if she has information on the Empyreal soldier known as Alphira.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 23, 2020, 03:15:43 pm
[Empyreal Network Connection Error. Please, seek out a technician for repairs.] Is all she can offer.



[-]The next couple of months are a blur of routine, a blur of following your set schedule with the discipline of a real soldier. You permit no interruption. Train, eat, train. Sign off on whatever needs to be signed.
You burn through food and rifles, sometimes going to bed with such an aching headache that you can't even sleep properly. But you ignore that, pushing yourself until you collapse.

Then you get up and push yourself further.

[-15]You have next to no free time, even on Service days, as the Pontifex often pulls you aside to assist in what he calls stage-training. How to hold yourself, how to speak, what to say. He doesn't have much time to instill these mannerisms in you, but you're a fast learner.

[-]A month in, your underlay is ready, McFee presenting you with a beautifully crafted under-suit for your armor. With it, comes a shining Cutter Hilt, and an SMG designed with rifle-power las-blasts. The magazine is huge, as is the coolant systems, and it comes with twice the amount of lenses and barrel changes one would normally receive with a las-gun. It also has a long-range lens attachment, but you feel it would still be inaccurate at longer distances, simply due to the design that clings to your arm. You have to refit Lucille around the new outfit, but 'she' is becoming easier and more comfortable to activate. Some days you don't even bother to turn 'her' off, keeping a glove on even while you sleep. The disgust that you feel while wearing her becomes an odd kind of comfort.
The armor pushes you harder than any Crusader Drill Commander ever could.

Your training in the arts of command is a little more...difficult. That same bloody arithmetic of men lost versus ground held seems so unlike anything you've ever experienced. The battles against [demons] and [The Plague] themselves seem to be cruel experiences in how not to fight, but the powers that be view them as great successes. Manpower is cheap; unity is not.

[-] Emma takes your advice, viewing your concern as loveable. She begins to sleep more regularly, adjusting her schedule to get more sleep than yourself. You don't get to see her at breakfast, but when you do see her and spend time with her, she seems to be in a better mood. She works just as hard as you do, having to requisition repairs for the training room nearly every day, especially in the last month.

[-] That is because your powers grow incredibly the more you focus on them. Your Inferno becomes a roaring blaze you can direct around yourself, able to 'throw' it a reasonable distance away, and when you focus it, you can create flames that turn metal and armor into slag with just a touch.

[11] One day, after being pushed back by a particularly strong blast, you decide to focus the Inferno in the palms of your hands and face them downwards. Your armor protects you from the heat, but you find your balance hard to keep as it lifts you into the air.

[-] Manipulating the earth around you is a bit more complicated, but the armor seems optimized for that type of Power. It gives you advice and helps with your calculations. You learn much from it. While focusing on twisting the glassy metal within the earth, you superheat it with blasts of hydrogen, producing a more brittle and shinier metal. However, despite that failure, you head to the outskirts of the Holy City to practice something McCreary did.

You focus your energy, your willpower, and Lucille assists you.  Kneeling, you take hold of the ground feeling all those glassy, metallic particles within the earth...and you push them in two opposite directions. There's a bit of dust-- and the ground splits and cracks, opening into a tiny ravine. The earth bunches up and compacts beneath your Will, allowing it to open further and further. You stop after a moment, satisfied.

The ravine is about a mans-length across, and you can see you split the land down to the bedrock.



[-] Silas presents you, one day, with a wide variety of combat drugs. Primarily stimulants, sleep medicine, and a few rapid function tranquilizers. "Your body already kills your pain receptors, so I figured uppers and downers would be all that you need. All designed to your unique biology. You'll grow immune to them, in time, however, so use them sparingly."

When you ask how long Silas has been working on them, he explains that he started on the project as soon as he injected you the first time. You thank him, and he gives a small bow.



William arrives the night before your Announcement Ceremony, dropping in on you and Emma. You expect a hulking levithan, but he waves an intact hand, peeling away the glove to reveal a skeletal shaped, robotic limb. Emma doesn't seem pleased, but she rises and gives her brother a begrudging hug, and he leaves the two of you alone. Emma reads a book on your bed.

And you focus on the task at hand-- you have to prepare your speech for tomorrow. You've been speaking with the Pontifex, and with Emma, and with Zachary, but you have nothing concrete yet. It has to be comforting to the populace at large, it has to promise retribution on [The Plague], and has to have holy overtones.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 23, 2020, 05:15:34 pm
Children of the Holy SEED, I come to you today to tell you of triumph over wickedness, holy light piercing shrouded agents of darkness, and the inevitable victory of the forces of good over the forces of evil.  As ever before, as has always passed since time immemorial, the waves of darkness will fall upon SEED's bulwark, but none will be swept away, for SEED has the mandate of heaven and the power of righteousness to once again bring peace to this land.

How can the plague delude itself to think it will be spared from our cleansing fire?  How can the demons run and hide from SEED, who knows and sees all?  Their hostility is nothing more than futility, for none can oppose this holy city-state, filled with true believers, and hope to survive.  Fear not, for I will defeat the darkness.  I will destroy the skulking demons who hide outside our borders.  I will bring holy fury to bear against the spawn of hell, and they will quickly disintegrate when faced with the conviction of our belief.

Prepare yourselves for glorious victory.  Heaven will triumph over hell, as it always has before.  The Holy SEED, and I, our Angel of Fire, will scald those who would disrupt the Great Work and burn them to ash.  For the Holy SEED!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 23, 2020, 06:09:45 pm
That'll do fine. Just a couple additions I'd like to make:

Children of the Holy SEED, I come to you today to tell you of triumph over wickedness, holy light piercing shrouded agents of darkness, and the inevitable victory of the forces of good over the forces of evil.  As ever before, as has always passed since time immemorial, the waves of darkness will fall upon SEED's bulwark, but none will be swept away, for SEED has the mandate of heaven and the power of righteousness to once again bring peace to this land.

How can the plague delude itself to think it will be spared from our cleansing fire?  How can the demons run and hide from SEED, who knows and sees all?  Their hostility is nothing more than futility, for none can oppose this holy city-state, filled with true believers, and hope to survive.  Fear not, for I will defeat the darkness.  I will destroy the skulking demons who hide outside our borders.  I will bring holy fury to bear against the spawn of hell, and they will quickly disintegrate when faced with the conviction of our belief.


At this point, we're gonna get a nice stiff Inferno going. Let the fire writhe and blossom around us, really put on a show for this lot. (Make sure our guards and suchlike know we'll be doing this beforehand-- wouldn't want to char anybody!)

Speak loud. Let the burning of the hydrogen distort our voice. Put a little Power into our lungs, if we can. "I am Alphira, Lady of Fire. I bear the soul of McCreary, and his armor names me heir. I bring to you the fulfillment of the Great Work. I am your champion."


Prepare yourselves for glorious victory.  Heaven will triumph over hell, as it always has before.  The Holy SEED, and I, our Angel of Fire, will scald those who would disrupt the Great Work and burn them to ash.  For the Holy SEED!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 23, 2020, 06:10:37 pm
That'll do fine. Just a couple additions I'd like to make:

Children of the Holy SEED, I come to you today to tell you of triumph over wickedness, holy light piercing shrouded agents of darkness, and the inevitable victory of the forces of good over the forces of evil.  As ever before, as has always passed since time immemorial, the waves of darkness will fall upon SEED's bulwark, but none will be swept away, for SEED has the mandate of heaven and the power of righteousness to once again bring peace to this land.

How can the plague delude itself to think it will be spared from our cleansing fire?  How can the demons run and hide from SEED, who knows and sees all?  Their hostility is nothing more than futility, for none can oppose this holy city-state, filled with true believers, and hope to survive.  Fear not, for I will defeat the darkness.  I will destroy the skulking demons who hide outside our borders.  I will bring holy fury to bear against the spawn of hell, and they will quickly disintegrate when faced with the conviction of our belief.


At this point, we're gonna get a nice stiff Inferno going. Let the fire writhe blossom around us, really put on a show for this lot. (Make sure our guards and suchlike know we'll be doing this beforehand-- wouldn't want to char anybody!)

Speak loud. Let the burning of the hydrogen distort our voice. Put a little Power into our lungs, if we can. "I am Alphira, Lady of Fire. I bear the soul of McCreary, and his armor names me heir. I bring to you the fulfillment of the Great Work. I am your champion."


Prepare yourselves for glorious victory.  Heaven will triumph over hell, as it always has before.  The Holy SEED, and I, our Angel of Fire, will scald those who would disrupt the Great Work and burn them to ash.  For the Holy SEED!
Nice I like that.  +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 23, 2020, 06:51:09 pm
Hmm, what else what else... oh.

Work in a choice scripture quote or two where applicable, if we can.
Be sure to employ throughout whatever charisma stuff the Pontifex has been teaching us.


We need to introduce Emma and Billy Thornton at some point too, but I'm willing to improvise there. Important thing will be capturing the will of the people.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 23, 2020, 07:08:41 pm
Hmm, what else what else... oh.

Work in a choice scripture quote or two where applicable, if we can.
Be sure to employ throughout whatever charisma stuff the Pontifex has been teaching us.


We need to introduce Emma and Billy Thornton at some point too, but I'm willing to improvise there. Important thing will be capturing the will of the people.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 23, 2020, 07:15:42 pm
Hmm, what else what else... oh.

Work in a choice scripture quote or two where applicable, if we can.
Be sure to employ throughout whatever charisma stuff the Pontifex has been teaching us.


We need to introduce Emma and Billy Thornton at some point too, but I'm willing to improvise there. Important thing will be capturing the will of the people.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 23, 2020, 07:56:05 pm
Sleep doesn't come easily to your fitful mind, but it does come.



[8] "Lady Alphira! We're surrounded. Main fleet is out of firing distance!"

You laugh, feeling your willpower twist and writhe like a snake, pooling into your vessel-- into you! You are the same, this vessel and you—your wings of steel and technology.

"So all the lights in the sky are our enemies now? Let's show them what we can do! We'll wring them from existence!"

And you do, lashing out with your powers into the guns, into the weapons, into the targeting mainframe. The light blinds those who cannot see your glory as you unfurl lashing wings of fire to sweep through those specks of light that dare approach. You burn through the void, a raging inferno of hydrogen fire and electrical storms that threatens to devour anything that approaches.


"Good job, Alphira."

[18] You start awake, feeling Emma gently shaking you, worry on her face. It doesn't take you long to figure out why-- the bed has a smoldering hole beneath your golden gloved hand. She looks shaken, as your other hand was wrapped around her shoulder, but doesn't say anything, getting dressed. When you apologize-- "It's okay. Don't worry about it." Is all she comments, extending out your underlay to you with a weak smile. "Let's get dressed and get some breakfast, okay?"

Emma looks lovely in her dress uniform, the perfectly fitted outfit accentuating all her curves with a severe cut. Across her shoulders, she wears a blood-red half-cloak, and, you surprised, notice that it's adorned with a golden angel, one with wings of fire. She smiles at you when she catches you looking, offering, "I had it commissioned as a surprise for you. You needed a symbol for banners and such. I hope you don't mind-- they've already all been produced."

You dress, and Emma styles your hair for you into a carefully designed top-knot. She smiles faintly as she looks you over in the mirror. You do the same, taking note of the woman that stands in front of you.

Your long, flowing blood-red hair is tied in a tight, severe top-knot. A single bang hangs down, curling around your androgynous face, highlighting your tanned skin and bright, blue eyes with the asymmetry. The armor gleams gold and black, seeming to menace without any assistance, and your muscular form is highlighted by the bulky under-armor that McFee provided. Emma leans over, taking a half-cloak from the rack to fix to your shoulders with a bright jeweled clasp of jade. Your kevlar face mask, that same crimson color, lies tightly around your neck underneath Lucille's forget. With dress-up finished, Emma takes hold of your helmet and presses it into your hands, then fixes your cutter hilt to your belt with deft fingers.



You emerge from the Hovercraft, approaching the pathway up, towards a great balcony carved of granite and gold. It shines in the bright morning light. Another Hovercraft sets down nearby. William emerges, wearing the same military uniform as his sister, but his cloak is adorned with a black thorn on a blood-red background. He grins, flexing a leather-clad, cybernetic hand in a wave. The two hulking leviathans that are to be your walking advertisements emerge face hidden beneath their massive helmets. Draped across their heavily armored breast on a red sash is your symbol and the Thornton Thorn, split in half by a black bar.

They dip you respectful nods, as do your guards whenever they catch your eyes. They're dressed up as well, their kevlar and plastic gleaming, red half-robes draped over their free arm. Zachary, the Pontifex, the Crusader General, and Mother Nicole all sit patiently beneath a small sun-shade. They rise when they see you and exchange handshakes and greetings. They ask you and your entourage to rest quietly while the plaza beneath fills with Scholars, Crusader Officers, and Reporters.

The Crusader General and Mother Nicole give the Thornton soldiers confused looks, but they do not comment, instead inspecting the bowing soldiers with a surprised look. William Thornton smiles, and introduces himself to the Crusader General, asking his opinion on the two hulking guards. They step away, to exchange words for a time, with William beaming wide when they return.

When it finally fills, an a nearby church buzzes it alarm, the Crusader General rises, and you half-listen as he gives a report of the fronts.

Because there are too now. A surprising strike by the enemy using hover-craft has allowed them to seize several hydrogen factories in the region. Quickly moved AA weapons allowed the strike to be isolated to those factories and the surrounding towns, but the casualties are high, and the containment is costing lives to maintain.

The news from the Defensive Line isn't much better-- they've broken through in several places, and reserves had to be sent in to reclaim those districts. The fighting is fierce, and the number of dead is rising.


And its on those grim notes that the Crusader General turns, and the Pontifex stands up to speak.

"Blessings on us, brothers and sisters of SEED. These times, these times are grim indeed! There is loss, chaos, confusion, and death surrounding us. Our brothers and sisters, they bleed to hold the line. Some, in this time of darkness, may come to question the wisdom, and glory of SEED. These feelings are natural, for faith untested is no faith at all!"

The Pontifex pauses, then continues, smiling benevolently.

"But, our time of testing is coming to an end. SEED, in all of his ancient wisdom, his endless grace, and his wonderous mercy has deigned to provide us with an [angel] once more!"

And that's your cue. You rise, approaching the stand, feeling your pulse pound in your head. A dizzying crowd of faces stare up at you. In shock. In disbelief. In joy. In happiness. In religious ecstasy.

[1+1] Your tongue catches in your throat. You make to speak but do not. Instead, you just stare down. The crowd looks confused and begins to murmur amongst themselves. Your retinue seems worried. The Pontifex starts to approach, perhaps to rescue you from your stage fright.

[20+1][19+1][10] When the tension is at its highest, that is when you speak. You switch off the amplifier circuit on the jade stand in front of you, projecting your voice with an amplification of the sound waves, with your lungs taking in more oxygen than usual. Your voice booms out through the plaza, echoing clearly with the natural amplification.

"Children of the Holy SEED, I come to you today to tell you that our faith will no longer need testing, of our holy light piercing shrouded agents of darkness, and the inevitable victory of the forces of good over the forces of evil.  As ever before, as has always passed since time immemorial, the waves of darkness will fall upon SEED's bulwark, but none will be swept away, for SEED has the mandate of heaven and the power of righteousness to once again bring peace to this land."

"How can the plague delude itself to think it will be spared from our cleansing fire?  How can the demons run and hide from SEED, who knows and sees all?  Their hostility is nothing more than futility, for none can oppose this holy city-state, filled with true believers, and hope to survive.  Fear not, for I will defeat the darkness.  I will destroy the skulking demons who hide within our borders.  I will bring holy fury to bear against the spawn of hell, and they will quickly disintegrate when faced with the conviction of our belief."

[18] The guards and The Pontifex step back on cue, and you divert your focus through the suit, drawing forth your willpower to conjure a raging Inferno around you. The air begins to rush away from you as you rapidly heat it, sending a stiff breeze through the crowd that blows away papers and knocks away hoods. The two cybernetic soldiers stand in front of Emma and William, who duck down away from the fiery winds.

"I am Alphira, Lady of Fire. I bear the soul of McCreary, and his armor names me heir. I bring you the fulfillment of the Great Work. I am your champion."

You pause, staring out over a stunned audience.

"Prepare yourselves for glorious victory.  Heaven will triumph over hell, as it always has before.  The Holy SEED, and I, our Angel of Fire, will scald those who would disrupt the Great Work and burn them to ash.  For the Holy SEED!"

[-] There is silence, as the Scholars, Crusaders, and Reporters seem not to know what to do. Some cheer loudly, raising your name to the heavens above in heavy chants. The Crusaders and Scholars drop to their knees, ducking their head down. The crowd is a mixture of confused emotions, but above them, all is joy. Whether solemn and disciplined, like the Crusaders, or ecstatic, zealous, like the Scholars.

This was a moment of history for them all, and they reflect it with their outpouring of emotions. It almost makes you feel dizzy.



You are told to leave after your announcement, The Pontifex pumping your hand and giving you a good pat on the back out of eye-shot of the crowd. Your guards are working in full force with the Crusader Officers, keeping the less disciplined members of the audience from rushing you and your entourage as you make to leave.

[10] You hesitate, and Emma pulls you away gently by your hand. She smiles at the crowd, and you know that she has cemented herself in your public image with the action. Rumors will fly about who she is and what she is to you. No doubt they'll figure it out, especially with the Thornton Family so obviously distinguished. No doubt the gossip rags will have a field day.



You arrive back home, pulling off your armor and collapsing into your damaged bed, Emma flopping down next to you with a triumphant grin.

Tomorrow you go to war. Tonight, however, you spend with Emma and you gently draw her close, looking her in the eye as you speak.

"Whatever happens, I know we can weather the storm, together.  This day could never have come without you and I am immensely grateful.  There are dark times ahead, but I'm happy to be here with you now.  I love you, Emma."

She doesn't respond verbally, instead pulling you into a hard kiss.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 23, 2020, 07:57:05 pm
The night passes in a tangle of limbs and with many comforting memories made. You don't sleep, suddenly uncomfortable with the prospect next to the fragile Emma. You rise when there's a gentle knock at your door, but before you get dressed, you pull Emma into a tight hug, and give her a kiss, which she returns sleepily.

You dress, pulling on each armor piece, and Emma rises to help you, still half-asleep. Once finished, she looks sad, and offers, quietly, "You better come back in one piece, or I'll be very upset with you." There's a hint of an affectionate threat, and you exchange another kiss with her.

"I love you." And she echoes the sentiment, gently. You leave, but you can hear her begin to cry as the door closes behind you.



You stand in front of one thousand and two hundred soldiers, with four squads of Thornton Mercenaries in front of them. With a detached air, you prowl down the lines, through your soldiers, who stand at tight attention.

They rank and file heavy infantry is indeed heavily armed and armored; Each has a thick vest about their chest, with pauldrons, leggings, and boots of reinforced plastic. Each is equipped with a cutter hilt, a battle-knife, a las-rifle, and a las-pistol at their belts. All of them are fully loaded. Gas masks hang loosely around their necks.

With them done, you approach your mercenaries, examing the heavily armed Thornton leviathans. Currently organized in squads of twelve, with each squad containing a heavy machine gunner, an up jumped inferno shotgunner, a technician, and the rest are equipped with powerful fusion reactor based heavy assault rifles, with inferno shotgun attachments.
Their armor gives you pause, and brief inspection shows its nearly a hand thick-- quite thick enough that without using a high-powered las-gun, it would be difficult to shoot through, and considering their limbs are replaceable...they are quite formidable on this world.
Their helmets have belt-in gas masks, and optics ripped from night-faring hovercrafts. They stand loosely at attention, in silence, less-disciplined than the others, but mirroring their commander, who towers over you, his blond hair drifting in the breezy plaza. A smile curls his lips.

"I trust everything is to your satisfaction with the organization and muster, Lady Alphira?" Crusader Major Anderson asks, as Crusader Major Jackson stands beside him. Their posture is hunched, bowed at the shoulders. Deferential.



The General and his staff are arguing, and you checked out as soon as it started, listening in to the argument about where best to send you and your men with a detached air. They have final say, and seem torn between sending you to the front or to the Hydrogen Plants.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 23, 2020, 08:29:33 pm
Right... lose the glove. We're not sleeping with that thing anymore. We don't want a repeat of last night, ever.

"We're immortal, Emma. We're immortal. Five thousand, ten thousand years from now, holy scriptures will sing of our every word and deed!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 23, 2020, 08:33:10 pm
Right... lose the glove. We're not sleeping with that thing anymore. We don't want a repeat of last night, ever.

"We're immortal, Emma. We're immortal. Five thousand, ten thousand years from now, holy scriptures will sing of our every word and deed!"
i don’t want to say this, it sounds arrogant to me
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 23, 2020, 08:34:31 pm
I agree about ditching the glove at night, but I would prefer a more solemn, dutiful statement.  There will be a lot of death.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 23, 2020, 08:35:37 pm
Solemn can come later-- later tonight, even. For once in our life we have pure, unadulterated triumph-- let's ride the high while we can!  :D
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 23, 2020, 08:35:49 pm
I agree about ditching the glove at night, but I would prefer a more solemn, dutiful statement.
agreed
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 23, 2020, 08:55:20 pm
To reply to an edit: yeah, there's gonna be a lot of death. That's... honestly, that's part of why I want this to be a happy moment. Happy moments are gonna be few and far between for us, going forward.

I'm not even suggesting we not talk about the solemn stuff tonight. We're gonna have to. This is just us opening that conversation with a smile.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 23, 2020, 09:04:15 pm
It looks like we have a different decision to make.  I vote for securing the Hydrogen Plants.  We must push the enemy back to the defensive lines and protect our critical infrastructure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 23, 2020, 09:05:58 pm
I will uh, edit to provide that, whatever you wish to say to Emma, cough.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 23, 2020, 09:08:24 pm
D'aww, no last talky-thing? Well, this works too.

It looks like we have a different decision to make.  I vote for securing the Hydrogen Plants.  We must push the enemy back to the defensive lines and protect our critical infrastructure.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 23, 2020, 09:14:31 pm
How about:

"Whatever happens, I know we can weather the storm, together.  This day could never have come without you and I am immensely grateful.  There are dark times ahead, but I'm happy to be here with you now.  I love you, Emma."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 23, 2020, 09:17:27 pm
Mm, that's suitable.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 23, 2020, 09:29:44 pm
It looks like we have a different decision to make.  I vote for securing the Hydrogen Plants.  We must push the enemy back to the defensive lines and protect our critical infrastructure.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 23, 2020, 11:29:09 pm
"As there seems to be a difficulty with the decision, may I request to be sent to the hydrogen plant district?" You ask, politley. The Crusader General rounds on you with a suspicious squint, but the argument ends, and he rolls out several maps for you to examine.

Three cities lie east to west along a canal, dug into the Noir River. The outbreak was originally due to an airdrop of insects into several cities, but the local militias and a Crusader Corps in the area, with the help of many, many bombing runs, were able to force them back into these three cities. They are currently fortified there in the rubble. Estimates measure that there are fifty [insects] unaccounted for in the fighting, along with roughly forty thousand civilians.

"I've got Lieutenant General Maxwell there, with the Fifth Crusader Corps and local militias. He'll most likely assign you to seize and hold Roldstat, the center city, during which his outer elements will begin tightening the noose around all three cities. So, you'll leave the Holy City, march down there, link up, and get to fighting. Got that?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 23, 2020, 11:42:04 pm
"Understood.  What will be the method of insertion?  Will it be an airdrop to bypass the enemy's fortifications?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 12:56:33 am
"...on foot. We don't have any available hovercraft and want to reduce the chances of them recovering more."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 12:59:47 am
"I see.  What about artillery to weaken the enemy's position before we push through?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 02:09:21 am
"That will all be handled by the Lieutenant Major." The Crusader General bluntly states, eyeing you. You have the very distinct feeling you're being dismissed, especially since he passes you a marching order for your soldiers and a rough map to the Fifth Crusader Corps' main camp.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 02:17:51 am
"Thank you, general.  I will proceed to the Lieutenant Major per your orders."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 24, 2020, 07:40:16 am
"Thank you, general.  I will proceed to the Lieutenant Major per your orders."
say this, then Proceed to states proceed point
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 24, 2020, 08:29:58 am
"Thank you, general.  I will proceed to the Lieutenant Major per your orders."
say this, then Proceed to states proceed point
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 02:33:46 pm
You hand your subordinates the marching orders, and they spend the rest of the day copying them and passing them on to their subordinates, and so on. It isn't until the next morning when your two cohorts begin their long march out from the gates of the Holy City, and you're faced with an extraordinary animal. Its a massive creature, packed with bags and a worn saddle, blueish-gray wool covering a bulky qaudrapedial body. Its eyes are black, and it looks at you mournfully. You hesitate.

[14] And after watching your officers, you clamber on, setting your feet into the guarded stirrups.



The rest of the march is uneventful, and it takes roughly a week. Every night your men set up camp in a different field on the way. Your tent is usually the first one set up, and while one junior officer brings you nutrient paste, another takes your beast of burden to graze with the rest. It surprises you, one night, to find that they do not corral them or chain them up. Instead, they all clump together naturally in a herd that doesn't wander far from the camp. The most challenging part of their logistics seems to be finding water but spaced at regular intervals down the road are mechanical pumps for drawing water from the earth. Usually, the march is called to an end when you arrive at one of these pumps, as each seems to be placed roughly a day's march from each other.

The Fifth Crusader Corps's camp stretches over several dips and valleys. Solar Powered water pumps are set up haphazardly throughout, between tents of dull greyish-blue and you and your officers approach the main building. The only pre-fab, hastily constructed in the center of the camp, right next to a water pump. A single hovercraft sits listlessly on a metal landing pad nearby. You pass your beast off to a junior officer and step inside. The inside is poorly lit, the air hanging heavy with an odd smoke.

The Lieutenant Major looks up from his maps. Rising to take your hand in a firm handshake, "Sister Alphira, what a pleasant surprise. I've only just received word of our new [angel], and here she is."

"Pleasure to meet you, Lieutenant Major Maxwell."

"Now! We're going to have you approach Rodstadt from the north while another group provides a creeping artillery fire into the city proper. We don't know how many are in there, but I want you to break your cohort up and secure it. The local Church is still intact as far as I know and could provide a good command post for you and your troops. As soon as I see a flag waving from that position, I'll begin the encirclement around the other two cities. We'll have two platoons of Heavy Infantry approaching the bridges from the southwest, and we want some of your men to link up with them before you put that flag up. Make sure the bugs don't break out."

He passes you a map, and you look it over. "As for the details beyond that, I'll leave that to you."




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 03:23:25 pm
"Thank you.  Are there any buildings of note that we should be aware of and make sure not to damage, such as the hydrogen plants themselves?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 03:35:15 pm
"Thank you.  Are there any buildings of note that we should be aware of and make sure not to damage, such as the hydrogen plants themselves?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 03:38:58 pm
[1] "The local Businessman leveled the hydrogen plant in Rodstadt, as ordered. And we destroyed everything else with the bombardment. So, really, only the church is necessary. After you give the signal, we don't even need that." Maxwell scrubs at the patchy beard he's growing. "Place is mostly rubble, but those damn things don't give a shit. They burrow beneath it."

With a shrug, he continues, "We'd like to keep the bridges intact, but I've given orders that if they try to break out, and the platoons start getting overwhelmed, to blow them up."

"There's something else, something big, in the central plaza. We think its a command structure. Or a feeding ground. We tried to bomb it, but it's pretty resilient."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 03:44:52 pm
"Understood.  I think I will begin by flying above the city and seeing what paths to the church are free of rubble and enemy fortifications.
That will help me make a better decision as to how to approach.  Do you anticipate any problems with that idea?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 03:48:13 pm
"Massed small arms fire might take you down. If you're up too high for that, you might not be able to see. We've only got the one hover-craft, besides the supply ships that come in. If you get shot down, we can't rescue you, and our assault is delayed until we get another one to send messages."

Maxwell sighs, "If you want to, I don't know if I can stop you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 03:49:29 pm
"...right. Ground travel it is."
"How many of my men do you want linking up with yours, when the time comes?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 24, 2020, 03:50:06 pm
"...right. Ground travel it is."
"How many of my men do you want linking up with yours, when the time comes?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 03:53:24 pm
"A platoon or two per bridge would be acceptable; after you seize the city we're not expecting any trouble from the southeast. They'll have relatively light fighting if everything goes well. Which it won't, but one can always hope."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 24, 2020, 03:54:59 pm
If I;m reading the map right, which I’m probably not, there are 4 bridges, so 8 platoon members? Please correct me if I’m wrong
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 04:08:02 pm
I think 3 bridges?  I'm not sure.

"What can you tell me about the enemies in the city?  Specifically, what sorts of weapons do they have and do they have any extra capabilities beyond burrowing?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 04:15:27 pm
"What can you tell me about the enemies in the city?  Specifically, what sorts of weapons do they have and do they have any extra capabilities beyond burrowing?"

Another +1

After this, I'd say we're just about ready to make this happen.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 24, 2020, 04:17:01 pm
"What can you tell me about the enemies in the city?  Specifically, what sorts of weapons do they have and do they have any extra capabilities beyond burrowing?"

Another +1

After this, I'd say we're just about ready to make this happen.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 04:17:26 pm
Only two. That long wavy thing in the bottom...southwest. I'm a moron goddamni=FDSfgdsghfsd. I'll edit for clarity. Sorry.

[6] "You ain't fight them yet?" Maxwell looks up from his maps hesitantly. "The big insect ones usually just charge right at you, ripping and tearing with tentacles harder than steel. Sometimes they hide underground, though. Big bastards, bigger than [beast of burden, cow]. If you get hit, you're likely to be infected. It's better to lose a limb than to take the chance. Las-guns don't do well. too much meat. Cutter Hilts can slice through them, and Inferno shotguns can do a number if you pump enough shells into them."

"The little ones, the ones that used to be people, the ones who died holding a gun usually...have it incorporated into them." He shudders, a hollow look in his eye, "But they're the same way, except they only got one or two tentacles if you're lucky. They all screech and charge, trying to infect and kill as much as possible while shooting all over the place. Corpses that get left behind either get et' or get back up. Too much bodily damage and the [demon] leaves them. We have to dismember the dead on a retreat. They still get eaten, but...but its better than coming back."

"They played a shell game with their numbers. They infected five towns and pulled back to these three, which happen to be the land routes through the district."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 24, 2020, 04:21:41 pm
Go to the city following the plan of 2 platoons per bridge, when there, incinerate the rubble, hopefully damaging/killing burrowers if not flushing them out
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 04:33:41 pm
We'll be approaching from the north, so we'll get to the church, and the large enemy command post, before we get to the bridges.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 04:33:51 pm
"Mm. One last question then, Lieutenant Major: how best to kill an insect [demon]?"

Ask our armor the same question.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 04:36:07 pm
"Mm. One last question then, Lieutenant Major: how best to kill an insect [demon]?"

Ask our armor the same question.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on March 24, 2020, 04:41:40 pm
Not inspiring confidence in the men with this line of questioning I think.  We already saw how to kill a demon, massive bodily trauma. 

We should tell him that the intelligent move from them as a group means they may try more tricky moves and to not risk his men becoming more fodder for the insects right now.  We can advance and do the heavy lifting while he maintains the perimeter.

We also need information on how many residents there were in all 5 cities and how many soldiers have been lost to the effort so we can estimate the mass of infected, insects and abominations we might face.  See if the armor can do the estimates.

Given how the insects can convert soldiers or likely eat the remains and use it to make more insects I am not liking SEED's tactics AT ALL.  We need to come up with a better plan very soon.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 04:48:40 pm
Can we do the heavy lifting here tho? Our main tricks involve fire, and I dunno how much good that is against the silver-steel of an insect horde...

We also need information on how many residents there were in all 5 cities and how many soldiers have been lost to the effort so we can estimate the mass of infected, insects and abominations we might face.  See if the armor can do the estimates.

Regardless, this is something worth asking. Imma edit out my suggestion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 04:50:44 pm
I assume VoidSlayer meant do the heavy lifting with our assigned troops, not alone.  We have men with inferno shotguns and cutters, which the officer said are effective against the insects.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 04:57:19 pm
[14] "Use that Cutter Hilt at your belt and cut it apart while trying not to get gored. Sustained fire works, but you better hope to SEED that you're not too clumped up. Whole squads get wiped out. We usually have melee squads, usually of debt-slaves or outlanders, or criminals but...they're needed at the defensive line more than anything else."

[Strain dependent. Analysis of personal conversations determine: Fire exceeding [1600* celsius] to melt the outer armor , asphyxiation, or massive body trauma. Go for the legs first, to prevent mobility, then the tentacles, then the main body.]

[15] "Our estimates of what are in the city are less than exact. We still don't know the exact causality rate or the turn rate. We're estimating that, between the three cities there's a force of around fifty bugs, and last reports said forty-thousand dead or infected. We're assuming thirty thousand evenly distributed throughout the cities, the bulk of which don't have las-capabilities. We blew the place to hell with our bombing runs, so if we're lucky we've knocked that number down by about half. Lets say, seven thousand, half of which has las-capabilities, maybe 20 bugs, tops."

[I see no fault in his math. The data might be skewed towards optimism. Expect ten thousand, and forty [insects].]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 05:04:32 pm
We are signficiantly outnumbered, as least as far as the troops under our direct command are concerned, if these numbers are correct.  We have about 1300 men.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 05:05:36 pm
Huh, that ain't half bad bug-wise. Just loads and loads of mooks.

"Right then... I'll head in from the north with my forces, leaving two or three platoons and a Thornton cyborg at each bridge. We'll punch through to the church, send three 'borgs and six platoons southeast to meet with your men... raise our flag. Soon as that's done, we'll begin scouring the streets."

"Does that sound well, Lieutenant Major?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 05:08:05 pm
We won't hit the bridges until after we get to the church, as we are approaching from the north and the bridges are in the south.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 05:09:19 pm
"I would advise scouring the streets before you raise the flag." The Lieutenant Major states, sticking a hastily rolled paper tube into his mouth, starting to rummage around his table for something, "When we start pushing on the edges in the other two cities, they might try to come together at the center."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 05:13:51 pm
"Very well."
Let's do this thing.


(unrelated, but: how many in a platoon?)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 05:15:49 pm
"I propose we take our three complements and put each pushing south along the theee northern paths, hopefully using the narrow passages to be more competitive against superior numbers.  This will also separate the men from congregating in clumps, as you suggested"

"Could that work?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 05:19:42 pm
[According to local military customs, there are thirty soldiers per platoon, which includes officers, broken into three sections of ten. These ten share a tent and are divided into squads where necessary.] You're glad you've been wearing Lucille to your military training tutoring.

"The rubble would cover your asses, in some places." Maxwell offers, finally finding a strange test-tube full of gas, lighting his rolled tube with it. "Insect charge could be an issue, however, as they do well when they get good momentum going."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 24, 2020, 05:23:41 pm
"Very well."
Let's do this thing.


(unrelated, but: how many in a platoon?)
+1 Time for Action
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 05:24:05 pm
The shotguns should be able to halt a charge.  Maybe we should put some of the Thornton men near the front of each group.  Plus, I wouldn't shed a tear if William died in battle.

I'd like to have a plan beyond "let's do this thing."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 24, 2020, 05:27:31 pm
The shotguns should be able to halt a charge.  Maybe we should put some of the Thornton men near the front of each group.  Plus, I wouldn't shed a tear if William died in battle.

I'd like to have a plan beyond "let's do this thing."
+1 I know this isn’t;t bolded but putting the armored ones in front seems good as they can take more hits
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 05:32:30 pm
So far the unified strategy seems to be dividing your cohorts into three divisions, each with a squad of Thorton Cyborgs. Then pushing in from the north. Secure the plaza, then push south to link up with the platoons at the bridges. Leaving two platoons and Thornton Cyborgs at each bridge. From there, scour the streets and raise the signal.

Is that correct? And, if so, where is your place in this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 05:35:13 pm
Looks good to me.  Let's take the middle path so that we can respond quickly to any of the other groups if they have difficulty pushing forward.

We can be just behind the Thornton men using fire, literal fire, to support.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 05:39:43 pm
Looks good to me.  Let's take the middle path so that we can respond quickly to any of the other groups if they have difficulty pushing forward.
 We can be just behind the Thornton men using fire to support.


+1

Requisition like five old las-pistols, if we can-- for burners. We can use our SMG for the grunt work, and pop Overloads at anything that gets too close.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 05:40:46 pm
Looks good to me.  Let's take the middle path so that we can respond quickly to any of the other groups if they have difficulty pushing forward.
 We can be just behind the Thornton men using fire to support.


+1

Requisition like five old las-pistols, if we can-- for burners. We can use our SMG for the grunt work, and pop Overloads at anything that gets too close.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 05:52:35 pm
Maxwell shakes your hand before you make your departure from his command building. Your officers, including William, await you outside, and you deliver your commands firmly, and calmly. If they have issues with your command, they don't express it. Major Anderson asks for permission to speak, and you grant it. "When are we moving out? My folk are putting up tents already near one of the wells. I would recommend a night of rest and organization, and we head out in the morning, but its up to you, Mother Alphira."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 05:56:12 pm
A rest after a day of marching would help the men fight better.  We should utilize scouts and guards, if we did decide to rest, as the enemy could easily attack us while we are sleeping.  It could be risky.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 06:01:11 pm
"Of course-- t'would not do to fight a war with heavy eyelids."

"Set in place the necessary scouts and night-guards for the preclusion of ambush. We fight tomorrow morning."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 06:03:02 pm
"Of course-- t'would not do to fight a war with heavy eyelids."

"Set in place the necessary scouts and night-guards for the preclusion of ambush. We fight tomorrow morning."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 06:23:50 pm
"Yes, Mother Alphira." The two majors bow out, taking their associated retinues with them. William watches, a bemused smile on his face. You pull aside one of the younger ones and order him to provide you with five las-pistols, of dubious quality. He looks confused, but complies, hurrying off to do so.

"I'm not going to bow, Phebe," He states, walking away. "I'm taking the center with you. Someone's gotta watch my little sister's investment."

You return to your tent to find it assembled, a young man in front, keeping sealed bowls of nutrient paste warm in his coat. He brings them out to you, bowing his head and fleeing without a word. Shrugging, you head inside. At one point, they had a camp-stove in your room, that the younger officer stoked to keep you warm at night. You didn't need it, however, as even the creeping cold of the coming winter didn't bother you. It now sits, unused, in the corner, with a stack of papers haphazardly perched atop it. Discipline reports, repair requisitions, other useless information that your Major's feed you to keep you busy.

You eat in silence for a while, until William announces himself at your tent's entrance. "So, we're going to be fighting side by side, Phebe. You looking forward to it? I know I am."




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 06:33:24 pm
"It should be glorious.  Will this be your first time testing out your enhancements in a real battle?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 24, 2020, 06:40:23 pm
"It should be glorious.  Will this be your first time testing out your enhancements in a real battle?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 24, 2020, 06:54:27 pm
"Against the plague, yeah. We had a bit of encounter before with some angry outlander prospectors, but I wouldn't even call that a fight." William's lips curl into a frown, "Is this your first time going up against the plague too?"

"I've gotta say, I'm impressed with how far you've risen in SEED. But I guess unnatural powers will do that for you. What're your plans for after the war? Y'know, if we don't all die horribly."

From outside your tent, you hear cheering. The camp suddenly rises into motion. William glances over his shoulder, grinning, "I guess they opened up the wine and beer rations."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 24, 2020, 07:03:28 pm
Hmm.  I'm not sure what to say.  I'll wait to see what others suggest.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 24, 2020, 07:06:43 pm
Hmm.  I'm not sure what to say.  I'll wait to see what others suggest.
Similar sentiment here
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 12:12:18 am
How about:

"Maybe I'll settle down and retire from the church.  It'll be nice to be at peace.  How about you?"

Also, a small proposed change to our role: we could use the cutter to cut down any enemies that make it past the shotguns to melee range.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 25, 2020, 06:31:31 am
How about:

"Maybe I'll settle down and retire from the church.  It'll be nice to be at peace.  How about you?"

Also, a small proposed change to our role: we could use the cutter to cut down any enemies that make it past the shotguns to melee range.

+1, I don’t think he told us not to, just told us that cutters are effective
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 25, 2020, 07:05:44 am
How about:

"Maybe I'll settle down and retire from the church.  It'll be nice to be at peace.  How about you?"

Also, a small proposed change to our role: we could use the cutter to cut down any enemies that make it past the shotguns to melee range.

+1, I don’t think he told us not to, just told us that cutters are effective
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 09:23:38 am
Honestly... I don't see that future working out for us anymore. We're gonna kill SEED-- I suspect after that, we're gonna have to replace SEED. Our job description is on a fast track to "god-emperor", and there's no stepping down from that-- not unless we manage to disappear completely, and that'd prolly leave this nation in turmoil.

But we can't exactly explain that to William, and we sure would like to have a nice quiet life somewhere... so hey.  ::)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 09:44:50 am
"That's a surprise." William laughs, slowly rising to stretch himself out, cybernetic limbs clinking. "I would have expected a bit more...focus, on anything more than just a quiet life. But hey, can't fault you for that."

"Want me to bring you an alcohol ration?" William offers with a grin, "Otherwise, I'm going to go and spend some time with my troops, before we all die tomorrow."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 10:11:33 am
"So I'm a dreamer. Gives me something to cling to, y'know?" Smile thin.

"Think I'll keep to myself tonight. Take care of yourself, Will."

...

welp, might as well deal with this paperwork before we hit the hay.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 03:25:52 pm
"See you tomorrow, Phebe." William offers with a grin, stepping out of your tent and leaving you to your paperwork. You sign the documents where you need to.  Surprisingly, you find an alcohol requisition form buried at the bottom, post-dated to the middle of the march, when you briefly stopped in a little town for the evening. You chuckle to yourself, realizing that all the other forms were to slip it past you.

Brother Hop warned you about stuff like this, but also told you very bluntly, 'Trust your officers.' So you sign it without another thought, setting the completed forms aside and laying on your cot. You doze until dinner and do the same after eating.



Your armor wakes you up with a vibration you feel in your bones, and you rise. You take the bucket of cold water, splashing it on your face, wiping yourself off, and getting ready for the day ahead. Set outside your tent, like an offering, is a canteen of water, and four las-guns hastily outfitter to a bandolier. You sling it over your shoulder, slipping the container into your backpack. In a field beside the tent, your soldiers stand at attention. Patrolled by the officers, who prowl and deliver swift reprimands when something is even an inch out of place. They cease their predatory prowl, standing at attention with the rest when you arrive. A chaplain begins to speak, blessing them in the name of SEED, in your name, in the name of the Great Work. Major Anderson speaks next, raising his voice, describing the battle ahead, the plans, the action groups, and all the misfortunes of war that can occur. He doesn't shy away from the specifics, either, the 'price of a city,' the 'price of peace.'


A grim air descends on your heavy infantry. But your troops begin to march when you nod to the officers, no man or woman turning back. Thornton mercenaries head the three detachments as they split up from the first staging ground. You fall in between the mercenaries and your soldiers. Then you march.



Its three hours later when you arrive at your staging grounds. William stands beside you after a late morning, a crooked grin on his face. You wait, breathing in and out, calming yourself as adrenaline pumps through your veins. You do not fear. No, you have to keep yourself from feeling the excitement. Blood lust drips into your veins, threatening to break the reservoir.

Then you hear the guns from the hills behind. Fire explodes on the plain between you and the city, raking the soil up, dragging its way across the barren field and creeping forward into the city. You begin to walk forward when the third blast burns across the torn soil, and your men march behind.

Halfway across the city, a piercing screech rises, only to be cut short as artillery ordinance begins to burn into the ruins of Rodstadt with bright flashes of burning white liquid fire. The flames wick themselves out quickly enough, and you enter the outskirts of the city.

You activate your cutter blade as your men spread out on the road, picking their way slowly through the ruins behind you, eyes on the gaping husks of buildings that remain. Rodstadt was a city of concrete and steel, you realize, as the rubble is mostly masonry, unlike the towns of the eastern reaches of SEED's holy domain. Their ruins tower over the street still.

The screeching has died off, but you don't let your heart hope that the battle is over.

You advance, as your soldiers keep overwatch over the remains of alleyways and side-streets, setting up positions higher up. Your soldiers flow with good training, and you're in the city proper now. No one speaks, commands given out in rapid hand signals. Then the screech rises out from all around you. Suddenly, your helmet lights up every single enemy that rapidly approaches, detectable by the beating of hearts and the pulse of las-gun reactors.

"Ambush!" You shout.

[9 vs. 14] Your men hesitate for a split second before taking up positions along the street to hold back the infected that begin to stream in.

Bursting through the rubble are five twisted parodies of insects. Their chitinous gleam silver in the sparse sunlight that filters through ash and dust. Long, prehensile tentacles lash, too many to count, spreading out from their underbellies as they turn to face you. They begin to scuttle towards you, long frontal horns tilted down as they build up speed.

Twisting entities that once could have been men begin to emerge from the ruins beside and behind you, charging with las-guns blasting from their shoulders. They, too, have that odd metallic sheen to their skin, but the flesh that was once human writhes and curls unnaturally faces melted into chests, smaller tentacles lashing and twisting. Twists of shattered bone and metal rip their way out of flesh unusually pale. No two are the same. But they screech in pain.

[1 vs. 10] They lay into your soldiers, shredding into them with scores of rending tentacles and las-gun explosions. The beetles are unable to build up enough speed-- but it doesn't matter anyway, as they crash with sickening thumps into the Thornton Mercenaries, inferno shotguns blowing chunks out of them. But they still charge.

[2]You hesitate, reaching toward your burner pistol, but stop yourself. You're overwhelmed with confidence. I can deal with this.

[19 vs. 9/15] Two charge towards the line of under defended infantry, undistracted by the Mercenaries, who break off into groups to deal with the two that rip and tear at their brethren. You catch your breath and step out from the infantry, your cutter hilt flaring forth with heat.
They do not stop charging, tilting their heads towards you with a flick of their beady black eyes. You wait, patiently, ducking out of the way and slamming the weightless blade into both of their body's flesh. It sizzles. They scream, feet suddenly scrambling for purpose as they try to turn to face you.

[1 vs. 4/18] The multitudes of tentacles lash out at you, and your shield suddenly envelopes you, their limbs bouncing off with thuds that you can feel in your bones. You're on the defensive as they suddenly surround you, trying to break at your shield, and you can -feel- the cracks in it.

[3 vs. 8/20] One screeches and they begin to throw their bodies at the shield, their sheer size and bulk cracking it further. Their skin ripples with twisting spikes of jagged metal, and you futilely try to slash at them from the safety of it.

[1 vs. 19/11] Your shield cracks suddenly, just in time for one of the beasts to body-slam you-- you lift your forearm to protect yourself, and are rewarded with searing pain and a sickening crack. You drop your SMG as you sprawl with the force of the impact. [Broken forearm detected. Beginning to heal.]

[9 vs. 17/1] They charge you once again, all lashing tentacles-- but this time, you lash out as well, driving your cutter into one's head. It crumples down, twitching feebly-- the other one sends you sprawling with a sickening crunch to your chest, its cutting tentacles deflected by the armor, but still leaving you with [ three broken ribs, no puncture in lungs detected. Beginning to heal.]

[15 vs. 15] With your focus only on one of the Beetles, you begin to trade blows, it lashes right when you sweep left, and you both score hits on the other. Your's, however, is a little more deadly, and his-- oh. Your pauldron is slashed through, deflecting the blade just enough that instead of losing the shoulder, you lose an inch of flesh. Blood starts to pour out, and a strange grey color begins to creep its way across the damaged tissue. [Healing canceled-- Infection Detected. All resources devoted. Do not heal until Infection contained! [redacted] withdrawn from limb- nervous link severed to the arm. Please hold]

[16 vs. 4][17 vs. 8][9 vs. 1]Your men haven't fared better than you, as many lay dead or dying from the initial ambush. The tide is turning, though, no doubt. Your men have loosely organized, providing covering fire for the few brave souls who have drawn their cutter blades, protecting them from las-fire from down the alleyways. In turn, the cutters protect the las-gunners from the twisting abominations that charge forward haphazardly. Medics attend to the dead and dying-- sometimes, not so gently ending a life before the infection can spread. With this teamwork, they start to make short work of the amassed foes. A screech goes up, and the abominations retreat.

[7 vs. 6][11 vs. 3][15 vs. 8]You drag your gaze across to the Thornton Mercs and find that they are dispatching the last beetle with brutal efficiency. William, the only one you can recognize because a bright white crest on his helmet, is emptying a shotgun into one that squirms and wriggles, trying to escape from beneath a cutter hilt embedded into the ground. It lashes at his armor, weakly, before succumbing to its wounds. All of the mercs seem intact, even the ones that were nearly trampled to the ground by the Insect charge.

[11 vs. 20][4] William approaches, watching you warily, his helmet hanging off of his rig. Then, without a word, he roughly pushes you into one of the buildings, slipping the inferno-shotgun beneath your chin, angled upwards. Your limbs are too weak to do anything but stand. There is no humor in his eyes as he watches your shoulder twist and squirm. He doesn't flinch as you drop to your knees, weak, and for the first time in your life, you feel feverish. Too warm. Too hot. You feel your chest start to cramp, and it gets hard to breathe.

[13] All at once, it fades. You glance at your shoulder to note that it no longer has any of that gray twisting matter in it, just a wound slowly sealing itself with scab tissue. William grins then, that grim look gone as he lifts you gently to your feet and presses your SMG beneath your arm. You step out with his support towards the street.

You take a breath as your men regroup. Your arm and chest ache painfully, but the suit assures you you can mend now. Blood drips to the ground, and you notice that it steams in the cold night air.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 25, 2020, 03:40:18 pm
Commence mending, move forward towards the church
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 04:06:02 pm
Commence mending

+1-- let our armor do the mending for us.

Speak loud, speak clear. "How many lost?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 04:27:45 pm
Damn... not an auspicious beginning.

Commence mending

+1-- let our armor do the mending for us.

Speak loud, speak clear. "How many lost?"

+1.  Inject the ballistic.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 25, 2020, 04:30:30 pm
Damn... not an auspicious beginning.

Commence mending

+1-- let our armor do the mending for us.

Speak loud, speak clear. "How many lost?"

+1.  Inject the ballistic.
+1 what do you mean by inject the ballistic?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 04:33:13 pm
Damn... not an auspicious beginning.

Eh... we didn't lose any mercs, and we knocked out (hopefully) a solid quarter of this city's bugs. Coulda gone worse-- we do need to address our overconfidence tho.

For future reference: if we see a bug, we blow a burner on that bug. Better a burner pistol on the line than our own flesh.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 04:39:27 pm
Damn... not an auspicious beginning.

Eh... we didn't lose any mercs, and we knocked out (hopefully) a solid quarter of this city's bugs. Coulda gone worse-- we do need to address our overconfidence tho.

For future reference: if we see a bug, we blow a burner on that bug. Better a burner pistol on the line than our own flesh.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 25, 2020, 04:44:54 pm
Damn... not an auspicious beginning.

Eh... we didn't lose any mercs, and we knocked out (hopefully) a solid quarter of this city's bugs. Coulda gone worse-- we do need to address our overconfidence tho.

For future reference: if we see a bug, we blow a burner on that bug. Better a burner pistol on the line than our own flesh.
+1
+1 Overload Time
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 04:52:42 pm
You twitch in pain as your shredded shoulder begins to seal itself. Your wrist muscles convulse and your bone snaps back into place with a sickening crunch. The pain is outstanding. [Pain means you're still alive. Be thankful for pain.] The suit drilled that into your head, repeating it every time you injured yourself and thought about the pain. [Recommend calorie intake.]

You listen, taking one of those crunchy, chalky nutrient cubes from your pack and unwrapping it to hastily devour. You have to drink plenty of water, just to get it down.


"Two out of ten. We lost roughly eighty." Major Anderson replies, peeling his bloody gas mask off, approaching from a collection of human corpses that are neatly being quartered by their former brethren. He's grim, flicking the red blood from his mask, "Forty more are injured, but still able to move and hold a cutter, so they will, until the day is done."

William doesn't reply, watching as one of his men drop to a knee and pull her helmet off. The Merc is a bald young woman, and she's pale, but her face is flush. She's quite beautiful, honestly, fine features that remind you of Emma. Two of the other mercs approach, cutter blades flashing from the hilts. She bows her head, clutching at a wound in her armor that pours blood and pus. A cutter blade flashes, and her head tumbles away. The mercs neatly quarter her corpse, chopping off the robotic limbs.

"One Thornton." William is grinning a cold smile that doesn't quite reach his eyes.

With a heaving breath, and on a whim, you pull out one of the Ballistic auto-syringes and stab into the revealed and fully healed flesh of your shoulder. William's smile widens as his eyes alight on the Thorn on the casing. "Time to -properly- get into it, Pheobe?"

Your pulse quickens, and you suddenly feel...different. Everything is brighter, the blood, the ruins, the fear in the eyes of your men. Everything is clearer, your awareness stretching out into the surroundings, taking note of the heartbeats that still linger in the shadows of the ruins. Anger boils in your veins, and you have the urge to scream, to rip, to tear, to destroy. Your hands are stiff as you grip the cutter blade, and everything around you feels slower. You notice that the Thorntons have all done something similar, casting down empty, cheap plastic casings. Even William, who laughs savagely.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 05:00:28 pm
Keep pushing.  Try using earth manipulation to stop a charge if they shrug off the overload.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 05:00:47 pm
Good grief.

"Take what supplies you can use from the dead. We will avenge their sacrifice."
[I don't trust my senses just now. Cover for me.]

Grab a stray assault rifle, for burning-- or even that Inferno shotgun the merc had, if we think we can heft it and still keep pace with the others. We make for the church.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 25, 2020, 05:07:22 pm
Good grief.

"Take what supplies you can use from the dead. We will avenge their sacrifice."
[I don't trust my senses just now. Cover for me.]

Grab a stray assault rifle, for burning-- or even that Inferno shotgun the merc had, if we think we can heft it. We make for the church.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 05:12:29 pm
Try using earth manipulation to stop a charge if they shrug off the overload.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 05:40:58 pm
You snatch up one of the bulky, overloaded inferno-shotguns, and you can indeed carry it with both hands, something that William laughs at. "SEED, you're strong. Remind me to arm-wrestle you in full kit later!" His mirth spreads through his soldiers, but your rank and file continue to look grim. They seem surprised...maybe even a little concerned about William's cackling. He slips his helmet on after giving you a wink.

You feel good, elated, and return the wink.

Then you march on, and your men follow, William abreast of you, his smile hidden beneath steel and a bloody-flecked crest of white. Those heartbeats in the ruins drift away towards the center of town as you approach. There's a crunch beside you, and two more insects shatter down the concrete walls on either side of the Thornton Mercs, once again taking you by surprise.

[7 vs. 14] And while the tactic doesn't surprise the Mercs, the bugs still gain the upperhand in the resultant charge, neatly goring another merc, who, despite the horn ripping straight through his armored torso, drops his gun and pulls his cutter from his kit. He dies, and the bug flings him from it's central horn.

[18+1 vs 18+1] The Mercs and the two Insects exchange blows, the mercs dodging a blow and dealing them in turn, but they're evenly matched, until one more of the Mercs collapses from his a gaping chest wound. With his dying breath, he lurches forward like a man possessed, wrapping his massive metals arms around the beast. The two other mercs with him hack and slash indiscriminately, killing both man and bug.

In front of you, a mass of abominations emerge from the darkness of the ruins, and their las-guns begin to pulse, denting the armor of the mercs-- and you realize your soldier's lines of fire are blocked.

[18] With a twist of your hand, you bring up the hydrogen in the air, and shoot it forward, lighting it at the same time. It explodes in the ranks of the abominations, but they continue to lay into the mercs, who are now turning to return fire with-- "GET OUT OF THE BLOODY WAY!" Anderson orders, screaming for you to hear. His troops are lined up in neat ranks behind whatever cover they can find, las-rifles trained on the abominations in front of you.

[10+1 vs 10] [18]William moves his prodigious mass, body slamming the bug back into the rubble from where it came, and it scrabbles for purchase on his armor. William's shotgun blows steaming chunks away from its core. The mercs all dive for cover. You wisely, do the same--

[3 vs 11] The resulting firefight is fierce, and many of your men are shot down in the resulting exchange of las-fire. Those heartbeats in the ruins draw closer to your position.

[18+2] You reach out with your willpower, and pull the buildings down around your men, crushing those heartbeats that stealthily inch closer. Dust flies up, obscuring your view.

[13 vs 2] The firefight continues unhindered, medics pulling away the injured, and treating them the best they can as pulses of heat burn overhead. Many of the abominations have fallen, laying limply in the street like dolls with their strings cut.

[18 vs 16] It isn't long before the mercs begin to shoot into the crowd of abominations, las-rifles flashing out. A screech goes up, and the las-gun abominations flee deeper into the city, probably to fortify the plaza.

You rise, breathing hard as hunger pains make your stomach ache. William emerges, his armor intact and he approaches the downed Thorntons to grant them quick deaths.

"Two more done."

"Fifteen killed, twenty injured, Mother Alphira." Anderson reports the casualties, voice muffled behind his gas-mask.

[That leaves you with fourteen Thorntons, and three hundred and fifteen troops, sixty of which are injured.]

Your men regroup, and you press forward, eating as you do, quickly choking down more of the nutrient cubes. You're approaching the plaza, and you don't need your helmet's sensors to tell that hell awaits you there.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 05:48:02 pm
We're taking severe losses.  The flanks are probably doing even worse.  Do we need to change tactics?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 05:58:55 pm
Hold up, the Inferno shotgun's... an actual shotgun. We can't Overload that.  ::)

We're taking severe losses.  The flanks are probably doing even worse.  Do we need to change tactics?

Yeahhh. I'm trying to think how I want to deal with this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 06:02:31 pm
Would it be possible to project a torus of earth manipulation around the soldiers to prevent the bugs from getting close?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 25, 2020, 06:07:06 pm
1
Would it be possible to project a torus of earth manipulation around the soldiers to prevent the bugs from getting close?
sounds like a good idea
Also can we set fire to the bullets as they leave the gun?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 06:19:32 pm
Right. Options.

- We could press on as we've been doing, maybe with a bit of earth manipulation worked in. This is probably gonna get us killed.
- We could attempt to Overload a Thornton fusion rifle into town square, and work from there. This has a decent chance of getting us killed.
- We could... ask Alphira to take over. I have no idea if this would get us killed. (It'd be kind of embarrassing tho.)
- We could retreat. Regroup at the bridges. Call in outside help. This would still be dangerous, and would lose us a lot of face.

Thoughts?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 06:21:41 pm
I don't think we should retreat.  One other option would be to ask the suit for tactical advice.

[Lucile, what tactics would you recommend for this situation?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 06:23:39 pm
[Lucile, what tactics would you recommend for this situation?]

Whatever else we do, another voice is always good. +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 06:35:54 pm
[1] [This unit is not equipped for that function. Fight until the day is done.]

You briefly contemplating lighting the fragments of metal aflame with hydrogen fire as they leave your shotgun, but you realize that as soon as they hit the air, they already catch fire.

Do you wish to ask Alphira for advice?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 06:42:36 pm
We're making progress.  The fighting is brutal, but we're pushing forward, and we might have the chance to wrap around and support the flanks.

Make more aggressive use of our powers.  Use small, focused overloads against single large enemies, like the insects, and use wide flames to attack masses of enemies.  Try projecting a torus of earth manipulation around the soliders to prevent the burrowing ambushes.  Keep pushing.


Ask Alphira for advice.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 06:56:17 pm
You come to a stop, and your men slow as well. Alphira, what should I do? You feel almost humiliated asking for help, and have to bite down on your pride.

[17] If I help you with this, we kill those fussy old bastards, those so-called generals, who put us into a trap as bait. -We- do not meekly bow to this aging institution of war. It serves -us-. Alphira's anger boils beneath the surface, suddenly bright and hot.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 06:59:22 pm
Consider it a deal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 07:03:16 pm
We're going to kill SEED, Alphira. The generals of this land can join our vengeance or perish.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 07:04:29 pm
We're going to kill SEED, Alphira. The generals of this land can join our vengeance or perish.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 07:08:28 pm
One agrees.

Their war is outdated, crude. -We- can turn it into an art. More will pointlessly die if we do not seize control of this military, this war, these people. As soon as we leave here. If you cannot see that, then you are as blind as them.

They send you into a meat grinder and you nod and smile and say yes sir, like a good little soldier.


"Phebe?" William questions, voice muffled beneath steel.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 07:12:44 pm
So I intend.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 07:13:20 pm
I think we are in agreement.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 07:16:24 pm
Those old bastards die. Either now or later. No leniency. Even if they are the most faithful servants when we get back. Their foolish notions will stain our history on this world by proximity.

"Phebe." William repeats himself, kneeling to look you in the eye, peeling off his helmet.

"Mother Alphira?" Anderson adds on, approaching as your men slowly begin to take cover.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 07:19:39 pm
"Take cover and stay alert.  I am evaluating the situation."

I have no love for these men that threaten to kidnap Emma and kill us when we are no longer useful.  Let them burn.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 07:23:39 pm
Ahh this is one of those times when we do morally ambiguous stuff for survival's sake innit

...

...ah well. Thin justification will have to be justification enough.

"Take cover and stay alert.  I am evaluating the situation."

I have no love for these men that threaten to kidnap Emma and kill us when we are no longer useful.  Let them burn.

+̴̪͠1̵̥̆͗
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 07:25:50 pm
We might save lives by switching to a strategy that doesn't heavily involve attrition, but I'm not as enthusiatic about treason as my words might make you think.  But, we have to do what we have to do to survive.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 07:30:20 pm
Send squads to your soldiers. Tell them to dig in. Send runners back to-- why don't these morons have radios yet!? Back to the artillery. Tell them to move in closer and annihilate the plaza and church. tell them friendly forces are danger-close, to keep them on their toes. We should be clear, but they might be innacurate.

And you are going to walk into that plaza, and...well, I'll leave that to you. I'm sure you'll figure something out to help.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 07:34:06 pm
Give the necessary orders.

I've an idea there. These Thornton fusion rifles-- d'you suppose we could get one to blow its load all at once, straight into the plaza? Like overloading a las-pistol, but bigger and better!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 07:36:08 pm
Give the necessary orders.

I've an idea there. These Thornton fusion rifles-- d'you suppose we could get one to blow its load all at once, straight into the plaza? Like overloading a las-pistol, but bigger and better!
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 07:45:16 pm
Why bother? Why not just throw the damn thing and overload the reactor in a clump of vermin?

[18]Did you notice that they were using incendiary rounds in the previous barrages?

Your men look at you in confusion. The Major as well, but to his credit, or perhaps yours, he doesn't hesitate to do as ordered. William sends a set of mercs with each squad, for added protection. Your soldiers dig in and you can feel the concern in the air. You, at the behest of William, move into some cover as well to converse with the voices in your head.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 07:58:34 pm
"Do you know what the central structure in the plaza might be?  The Lieutenant said it was resistant to bombing."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 08:18:09 pm
A rifle as a bomb... delightful. I'll remember that trick.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 08:29:15 pm
No...the Strain of our childhood home was far more feral. It robbed our nursery and creche for food, and used swarm tactics...this one is whittling down your numbers with hit and run. It's smart and can communicate more effectively.

You sit and wait in silence with William, until the squads return. Major Anderson approaches the two of you, and he looks grim. "Our flanks report fifty percent losses, Mother Alphira. Major Jackson is dead. Gem, the Thornton Merc, assumed command of that flank. She executed the next in command for dereliction of duty. By all accounts, she's the only one who kept her head on her shoulders."

William smiles that butcher's smile and Anderson gives him a dark glare "I'm not happy William."

[20+1 vs 2] Suddenly William surges from his crouch, a metallic hand wrapping tightly around Anderson's throat. It tightens briefly as the Major fumbles for his cutter blade- it falls from his shaking hands. He glances to you tensing and lets the Major go. William brushes the man's armor clean of dust, staring down at the other man, "Then get better officers, Major Anderson."

William leaves, and Anderson scowls after him but doesn't press further.

Overhead, you hear a whistle, and the ground rattles beneath your feet. Emerging from your cover, you notice a plume of smoke and dust rising from where the plaza should be.

They've found their mark.

That's your cue, Patches. Go put on a show for these simpleminded fools.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 08:31:55 pm
This is a disaster...

"We will repay the blood spilt by these abominations ten times over.  Hold true to your duty and do what must be done.  Las-gunners, approach the plaza in loose formation.  Mercenaries, wait among them and get ready to defend the las-gunners from any charging foes.  Let the light of the Holy SEED snuff out the darkness!"

Approach the plaza.  Use overloads to attack targets at range.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 25, 2020, 08:46:16 pm
It's bad, but the artillery came through. I feel this sort of thing is par-for-the-course for Crusader warfare.

This one's had millennia of warfare to hone its tactics.

"Head on in. Gun down anything that still moves."
Grab a Thornton fusion rifle, if we can-- failing that, get out our SMG. Soon as we've a good shot, we're gonna Overload our weapon into the nearest insect or mook horde. Leave ourselves open for Alphira to take control, if she feels the need.

This battlefield is ours.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 09:14:49 pm
William sees you leave your rubble, and looks in askance of you when you give the order to move in, as do your men. No one protests as you begin to approach the plaza--

[18]The next shells whistle through the air, and explode in vibrant flames that burn through the masses of abominations stationed there. You can see their skin peel and crack as they scramble for cover. A red flare flies up from the southwest, followed by another. You're close enough to the continued barrage of pure firepower raining down on the square that Major Anderson has to pull you close to yell in your ear. "The bridges are lost!"

[12 vs 2] Major Anderson shoots a white flare into the air, and across the plaza, to either of your flanks, you see your men begin to advance into the artillery strike, shooting down anything that tries to run close to them.

Shells continue to rain burning hellfire down on the square as you inch closer-- and one hits the ruins to your east, exploding into fire that engulfs what remains of the structure. Your troops halt here, Major Anderson gives the signal, ducking into whatever cover they can as they begin to open fire on anything in the square, and you turn your attention, not to the scattering and confused abominations being picked off by your troops. But instead to the structure in the center, beside the collapsed and burning church. It's tall, and gleams with the same sickly writhing gray skin that the abominations do, all around it are scattered charred human remains. Organic openings that fill you with nausea are sealed tight with twisting, writhing membranes, but something prickles you with the danger of it.

It comes to you a moment later--those openings are as big as the Insects you faced earlier.

[15+2 vs 12][10+2 vs 7][5 vs 5]The barrage ceases, and your men open fire on the square, spraying whatever enemy can mount a resistance. Flames lick across the square, the grey stones once underfoot twisted out and blackened by the fire, covered with corpses. A few more of your soldiers die, too many to count at a glance, either ambushed by twisted abominations in the ruins they take cover in, or shot by the las-guns that still remain in the plaza.

Your ears ring, and commands have to be given directly into the faces of the soldiers, but the plaza, and the structure, for the most part, seem clear, besides for a few writhing organisms trying to inch their way to the structure.

You rise from your cover, and William approaches behind you, watching the smoke burn into the sky, taking up ash and dust with it. "Lot of trust for those artillerists, there, Phebe." You notice, unlike your troops, that he seems to be able to hear and speak perfectly.

Unexpected, but not unwelcome. The Plaza is clear, but you know there are more to the south, and in the ruins around you.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 09:21:42 pm
Link up with the flanks.  Assess the number of casualties.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 25, 2020, 10:18:23 pm
Its a stride across the plaza and your officers all congregate together. The news is...not great. Out of all twelve thousand troops, you have little over seven hundred and fifty left, with both flanks having lost roughly half of their force to ambushes. One hundred and fifty of those are wounded and on light-action duty. You're left with six hundred able-bodied soldiers--

[6] And they're exhausted. You don't need to see their faces. It shows on the gas masks they wear. Soot, and blood, and dull black matter covering them in clumps. Their shoulders are slumped beneath their dusters. Some have hollow stares as they shift in cover, waiting for the next order.

William reports, after a very brief check-in with his forces, that they're down to thirty Thornton Warmachines in total. His eyes are dilated, and he seems a little dazed but gives you a nod and a smile when you ask if he's okay.

"We've lost more Thorntons here in a day than in the five years I've been running our ops."




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 10:23:19 pm
It's nice that they're holding together.  With so many casualties, normally they would rout, I would think.

All the officers, including William and Gem, should propose plans of action.  Offer a plan to direct artillery onto each road, one road at a time, to draw them out onto the plaza and cut them down with sustained fire from cover.

We have a ton of ammunition and nutrient cubes left.  I think we should start doing more of the heavy lifting.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 25, 2020, 10:24:56 pm
It's nice that they're holding together.  With so many casualties, normally they would rout, I would think.

All the officers, including William and Gem, should propose plans of action.  Offer that we can direct artillery on each road, to soften them up, before we move in to destroy the survivors.
Before thst, let’s heal our injured soldiers, and try to transfer someEndurance to the tired but able bodied ones
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 25, 2020, 10:55:21 pm
I am wary to attempt to use untested powers on our soldiers, but if we could make that happen, it would probably improve their morale...

Not worth the risk in my opinion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 26, 2020, 08:12:28 am
"We're all going to have grieving to do here, I think."

All the officers, including William and Gem, should propose plans of action.  Offer a plan to direct artillery onto each road, one road at a time, to draw them out onto the plaza and cut them down with sustained fire from cover.

We have a ton of ammunition and nutrient cubes left.  I think we should start doing more of the heavy lifting.

Well I keep saying we should be Overloading on stuff
but somehow it doesn't happen
anyway

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 26, 2020, 10:15:01 am
"We're all going to have grieving to do here, I think."

All the officers, including William and Gem, should propose plans of action.  Offer a plan to direct artillery onto each road, one road at a time, to draw them out onto the plaza and cut them down with sustained fire from cover.

We have a ton of ammunition and nutrient cubes left.  I think we should start doing more of the heavy lifting.

Well I keep saying we should be Overloading on stuff
but somehow it doesn't happen
anyway

+1
+1 let’s overload
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 26, 2020, 04:05:43 pm
"Directing the Artillery like that is going to be taxing, and slow our advancement into the southern sections of the city." The officers duck into shelter with you into a bit of still-standing rubble, Major Anderson states, peeling off his gas-mask to speak. "It's going to be hard to send runners back and forth, especially when we don't fully control the northern section of the city."

"Do we have more flares?" Gem volunteers and Anderson glances at her with narrowed eyes. "if we do, we could try to direct the artillery with something like that. But it would be coming in close. We got lucky with this plaza strike-- if any of those shots were just a fraction off, or the wind shifted, we could've had bloody hell rain down on us."

"We do have more flares," The young officer leading the western flank offers, "But, like you said, if we're not lucky we could be wiped out by friendly fire. We need to do something different, though. By the time the encirclement closes in, we could have casualties too high to sustain a defense of this city."

William paces outside of the half-structure, and you notice his dilated eyes are fixed on the plague structure that towers a good thirty feet above the plaza. Clouds of ash and dust drift by. "I'm more concerned about what we should with that. I don't like it. It -squirms-, and we don't know what the hell it is."

He lifts his las-rifle, aiming at the tubular structure sticking out of the ground, and his las pulse pops against the armored exterior. It writhes in response but settles back into undulating shortly. Then it begins to twitch and writhe heavily. You cannot detect a heartbeat or any other biological function, but you couldn't notice the insects, either.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 26, 2020, 04:09:06 pm
[Lucille-- what is that thing?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 26, 2020, 04:14:14 pm
[Lucille-- what is that thing?]
+1 whatever it is, Overload should do some damage to it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 26, 2020, 04:14:33 pm
[No applicable data comes up, dear Sadil]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 26, 2020, 04:35:32 pm
[Right, thank you.]

The Strain of our childhood... did it have anything like this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 26, 2020, 04:40:15 pm
[4] I can't remember... You sound mournful, watching idly by as William continues to haphazardly shoot the structure. He seems bored. You can't blame him, you feel antsy, your hands shaking-- not enough to affect your aim, but its certainly there. The Thorntons that were with you, you notice, are equally restless, pacing up and down the resting lines, responding to the haphazard skirmishes that break out when a group seeking cover stumble upon an abomination or two.

None of your officers seem to mind, but you do note that they keep to the cover in the outskirts of the plaza, and their eyes nervously look to the south. William doesn't seem to care about being in the open.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 26, 2020, 04:56:26 pm
Perhaps we should attempt to deal with the structure first. 

We could try entrenching ourselves here, in a ring around the structure, using earth manipulation to remove the rest of the rubble in the plaza that could be hiding abominations or block our line of fire.  We could then attempt to use earth manipulation to create raised defensive structures, with supports, for the men to take cover in, perhaps mitigating some of the insects' ability to suprise us with burrowing.

If that's successful, we could start probing the structure, perhaps using earth manipulation, to try to break it or lift it up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 26, 2020, 05:08:04 pm
Perhaps we should attempt to deal with the structure first. 

We could try entrenching ourselves here, in a ring around the structure, using earth manipulation to remove the rest of the rubble in the plaza that could be hiding abominations or block our line of fire.  We could then attempt to use earth manipulation to create raised defensive structures, with supports, for the men to take cover in, perhaps mitigating some of the insects' ability to suprise us with burrowing.

If that's successful, we could start probing the structure, perhaps using earth manipulation, to try to break it or lift it up.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 26, 2020, 05:53:19 pm
[10] The rank and file look concerned by your next order, but there is no protest, as they file into the plaza, clearing out the enemies and killing any that still squirm. They set up in the center, some of the men putting up a tent for those not grievously injured in the last firefights. Then you patrol the edges with William, letting him shoot the abominations while you focus on your manipulations.

[~15] It takes the rest of the day, the afternoon turning to evening, by the time you finish putting up barriers. All the while, skirmishes between your soldiers and the abominations continue.  The barricades are not perfect, nothing you can make so quickly will be so good. But there's places to stand, its defensive and you've even some places to shelter from the evening precipitation. Your officers are quick on the uptake, and put soldiers on it as soon as you finish a section.

The wounded on light duty gather together the abomination's corpses, burning them in a pyre beside the plague structure The fire of the corpses burns green and grey, the smoke pungent and harsh. No other fires are lit-- there's no wood left from the purging inferno of the artillery strikes. So your troops eat their rations cold and huddle together for warmth.

You captains congregate in the only other tent in the plaza, taking a true tally of the dead and note of which sections were annihilated in the fighting. William is slumped in one of the craters, using it as a windbreak. You think he's sleeping, since a few of the Thornton mercs are hovering nearby defensively.

You approach the structure, and peel away your helmet. It pulses with energy, and when you're near it you cannot tell which way is north or south on this world-- it's outputting a lot of energy, whatever it is. It does indeed pulse and writhe, sometimes even seeming to sway in the light breeze that blows over this charred and ruined city. You have the urge to Overload your las-gun on it, just to bring it down, but you hesitate.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 26, 2020, 06:00:46 pm
I assume we have to do something about it, but I feel like we could end up kicking a hornet's nest.  I'm not looking forward to the night.

Place some of the burner las-weapons near the entrance of each uncleared road.  We can use them as bombs, through overload, to take out advancing clumps if necessary.

Something about energy... perhaps damaging it would unleash a large amount of energy?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 26, 2020, 07:48:10 pm
Hold up
if we can Overload regular laspistols
then why not the laspistols already jammed in the twisted husks of our enemies?
this changes everything

For now, though, our troops are exhausted. Fortify and keep watch as best we may. If we spot a bug, Overload our Thornton las-rifle on it. If we spot a clump of abominations, try getting one of the reactors already integrated into the flesh our our enemies to explode-- but failing that, use our burner pistols. The time has come for absurd overkill.

Be wary for burrowers.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 26, 2020, 07:57:17 pm
Hold up
if we can Overload regular laspistols
then why not the laspistols already jammed in the twisted husks of our enemies?
this changes everything

For now, though, our troops are exhausted. Fortify and keep watch as best we may. If we spot a bug, Overload our Thornton las-rifle on it. If we spot a clump of abominations, try getting one of the reactors already integrated into the flesh our our enemies to explode-- but failing that, use our burner pistols. The time has come for absurd overkill.

Be wary for burrowers.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 26, 2020, 07:58:19 pm
If you've got any bright ideas, now's the time.  Do you think destroying the structure would create an explosion large enought to destroy the town?  It has a lot of energy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 26, 2020, 08:19:46 pm
Destroy it. Suffer not the works of the Plague. Is all Alphira offers, her voice twisting into a masculine one that makes your chest ache with confusing emotions that you cannot quite fully understand.

With a shake of your head, you patrol the defenses, sowing unused las-rifles on this side of the barricade in case of breaches, primarily covering the south, but also putting a few around for traps in the north. Your men look at you, and your unexhausted state, and for a moment, you fear that you've lost respect. But they bow to you at the hips, huddled together in their sections, eating together in silence.

You feel a pang of pain-- there isn't a single section of troops not missing one of their ten 'siblings'...but you're proud to note that no soldier sits alone.

The earth rumbles, spreading out from the appendage, and your men stir in alarm. William wakes up, fixing the convulsing appendage with a confused look, tugging on his helmet. Unease creeps through the camp-- you feel it too.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 26, 2020, 08:30:29 pm
"Get in position and get in cover.  Prepare for battle."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 26, 2020, 09:15:33 pm
"Get in position and get in cover.  Prepare for battle."
+1 then overload the plague structure
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: ZBridges on March 26, 2020, 11:52:48 pm
He turns you over, lifting you into his arms and rushing down the hallway.

 "Medic! Medic! Its Alphira!"

It looks like the gold voice was our colleague.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 02:01:34 am
"Get in position and get in cover.  Prepare for battle."
+1 then overload the plague structure
+1

Fine with me.  Use earth manipulation to stop it from falling on our soldiers, if we cause it to fall over.

And I'm off to bed.  I'll be back in around 12 hours.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 03:02:21 am
[15]You slip your helmet on before anything. You line up a shot with your Thornton las-rifle, aiming down the iron sights as your willpower begins to flow through it. You reach into the gun and brace yourself. The superheated beam of light and energy that pours forth from it makes the gun shudder in your hand, the barrels melting as you bore a wide hole in the side of the appendage, causing that portion of the structure to start to peel away and collapse. Flesh flies, and the smell of burning meat fills the plaza. Something within hisses and cackles regularly, a static sound unfixed.

[2] Dazed from the light, you drop the still smoking husk of the las-rifle, trying to muster your energy your energy to lift the earth up around the structure, but to no avail, and it crumbles away.

[5] It's exhausting, but you lift your hand, and with a spike, impale one of the sides as it falls, saving some of your troop's lives.

The appendage peels apart into three equal sides, collapsing away as a piercing screech rises from the rubble around you. The soldiers begin to fire las-guns into the mass of surging abominations that twist forth from the ruins.

Like its brethren emerging from the rubble, the Colossus emerges from the appendage with a cackling, an uncomfortable cry that jars your senses. Its moist skin gleams red, and it howls with a force that sends soldiers away, panicking. Its body resembles that of a worm, but its head is a twisted parody of squid and leech. Massive tentacles, easily twenty feet long, are capped with twisting, writhing blades. Its skin-- its skin...dear SEED. Those are faces- human faces, twisted into permanent rictuses of pain. A significant portion of its tentacles is missing from a parting in its coiling, sinuous form, the flesh seared away from the stumps.

It lashes out haphazardly with its tentacles, sometimes even scoring itself in its fury. Moisture drips from those writhing appendages to the ground below, and red electricity arcs through the air from the monster.

You hear screams as it seems to regain its senses, too many eyes falling alight on you, and the burning las-gun at your feet.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 27, 2020, 06:27:33 am
I say we dual wield two of the burner pistols and overload both of them into the big thing at the same time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 06:51:34 am
I say we dual wield two of the burner pistols and overload both of them into the big thing at the same time.
+1 aim for its main head
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 08:42:29 am
Well now.

[K̴̳͂e̸͉̍ȩ̵̃p̶͚͍̋ ̶̯̳̀̇m̸̡͗e̸̩̍̈́ ̵͇͗͌s̴̲̎ẗ̷̖́a̵̲̼͌̈n̴͙̠͝d̸͔͂̅í̸̘͝ñ̸̬g̵̳̅̽.̴̞͛]

I say we dual wield two of the burner pistols and overload both of them into the big thing at the same time.
+1 aim for its main head

+1 - Straight into the screaming maw.
(but er, maybe take the scant time to aim-and-fire one pistol then the other? Dual-wielding is hard.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 08:56:09 am
Well now.

[K̴̳͂e̸͉̍ȩ̵̃p̶͚͍̋ ̶̯̳̀̇m̸̡͗e̸̩̍̈́ ̵͇͗͌s̴̲̎ẗ̷̖́a̵̲̼͌̈n̴͙̠͝d̸͔͂̅í̸̘͝ñ̸̬g̵̳̅̽.̴̞͛]

I say we dual wield two of the burner pistols and overload both of them into the big thing at the same time.
+1 aim for its main head

+1 - Straight into the screaming maw.
(but er, maybe take the scant time to aim-and-fire one pistol then the other? Dual-wielding is hard.)

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 02:48:20 pm
[/////.]

[11-1 vs 10] [12-1] You pull a las-pistol from your bandolier, lifting it towards the beast and overloading it, all in one smooth motion. It creaks in your hands from the strain of the internal energy, before spitting forth a focused beam of fire that burns a hole in the Colossus' sinuous body.  So focused are you on the arithmetic, that you don't notice the tentacle that whips around. An arc of energy spreads out over your shield, the percussion of the two fields of energy sending you sprawling into the paved streets. Your shield, barely recharged, shatters once more.

[12-1 vs 5][8-1][14] The next pistol is out of the bandolier before you even rise to your feet, and it burns through the Colossus' face with a sickening sizzle. A focused beam of light burning into the dusty air above the city. You dodge forward, just in time to avoid one of those swinging tentacles and the arc of electricity that follows it. The creature opens its mouth,  the static pouring forth increasing. You notice that some of your soldiers drop to their knees, clutching their ears, screaming. You can see why-- it hurts, and complicates the complex arithmetic of your functions.

[///...]

[11-2 vs 12] You peel another pistol-- and you scream, as those scouring tentacles slam into your chest and send you into the plaza's stonework with a sickening thud, the electricity arcing through you. You try to scramble to your knees, but stumble, as you try to breath. Your chest is numb, and your lungs--your lungs refuse to draw in air. Your armor is cracked and scored by the blow, and you hate to think what your chest would resemble if you didn't have it.

[Severe burns, nerve damage. Oxygen levels plummeting-- please hold. Chestplate broken. Insufficient nutrients to repair. Prioritizing lungs.]

[14]You scramble out of the way of the Colossus' path as it finally coils itself out of its egg, slamming its back-end into the ground where you once stood, the earth cracking beneath its blow. You finally gasp in a breath, your lungs working again, and nearly choke as you greedily inhale.

The two of you size each other up, the feral intelligence in it's eyes showing hesitation.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 03:01:00 pm
What do each of the drugs do? Or do we not know yet? Either way, eat some nutrient cubes to stave off hunger and heal ourselves
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 04:59:14 pm
Use inferno to fly out of range of the tentacles.  Then, continue to fire overloads into it from range.  Eat and inject more Ballistic.

Also, cut off our ears.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 05:27:22 pm
cut off our ears.

O_o

I'll grant our Healing Factor makes for some neat possibilities, but I don't think cutting off the external portions of our ears would actually deafen us right now. (Also, gah.)

Use inferno to fly out of range of the tentacles.  Then, continue to fire overloads into it from range. Eat and inject more Ballistic.

+1 to the rest of this tho.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 05:31:09 pm
It would help a lot.  A bit more difficult to hear without ears, if not a ton.  Any reason you don't want to eat and inject the Ballistic?

Edit: nevermind, saw the edit.  Looks good to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 05:37:56 pm
Use inferno to fly out of range of the tentacles.  Then, continue to fire overloads into it from range.  Eat and inject more Ballistic.

Also, cut off our ears.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 05:43:32 pm
Right, fine. A bit of hearing loss would be nice right now. Let's see if we can't find a less immediately horrifying way of doing that tho?

[Stop my ears.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 05:46:38 pm
That works.

Right, fine. A bit of hearing loss would be nice right now. Let's see if we can't find a less immediately horrifying way of doing that tho?

[Stop my ears.]
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 05:48:05 pm
That works.

Right, fine. A bit of hearing loss would be nice right now. Let's see if we can't find a less immediately horrifying way of doing that tho?

[Stop my ears.]
+1
+1, I’d this doesn’t work, I guess it;s cutting time
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 05:50:54 pm
[I'm already stopping them, Sadil. Those are vibrations.]

Are you sure you want to eat in the middle of combat?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 05:55:20 pm
Don't eat.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 05:56:04 pm
Don't eat.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 06:09:47 pm
Let's get some comfort from Inspiribot in these difficult times.


Thanks, Inspiribot.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 06:12:37 pm
Yep, sounds like us
Also this (https://generated.inspirobot.me/a/NBP5rDkz61.jpg), which I will now place in the appropriate thread  (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=164651.0)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 06:22:47 pm
...right. I feel like without additional sustenance (not really an option right now), we just don't have the power left over for Inferno flight.

We need more information.

What's this thing's body structure like anyway? How many tentacles has it got, and how long? How's it move itself about?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 06:23:55 pm
...right. I feel like without additional sustenance (not really an option right now), we just don't have the power left over for Inferno flight.

We need more information.

What's this thing's body structure like anyway? How many tentacles has it got, and how long? How's it move itself about?
focus on dodging it while we perform the analysis
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 06:24:22 pm
I think we should be able to handle it, as inferno is one of our strongest abilities.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 06:27:43 pm
I think we should be able to handle it, as inferno is one of our strongest abilities.
sure, but we are super hungry right now
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 06:44:41 pm
My perspective is that we have to get out of range of the tentacles.  One more hit will kill us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 07:10:57 pm
Yeah, fair. The Inferno's worth it, but we'll more be using it to push ourselves back than up I expect.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 07:42:07 pm
Use inferno to propel ourself out of range of the tentacles.  Inject more Ballistic.

How about this, and then we'll evaluate the situation from there?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 07:46:34 pm
Use inferno to propel ourself out of range of the tentacles.  Inject more Ballistic.

How about this, and then we'll evaluate the situation from there?
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 07:51:25 pm
Use inferno to propel ourself out of range of the tentacles.  Inject more Ballistic.

How about this, and then we'll evaluate the situation from there?
+1
That works. +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 08:06:31 pm
[8 vs 6][1-1] You get a good glance at the creature as you lift your hands in front of you, trying to blow yourself back from the Colossus. You try to twist your will into fire-- but nothing happens--the tentacles lash out, but miss you entirely, and you try to back away--

The Colossus is a good [thirty feet] long, and about a third of that wide. [Ten feet], at any one time, is coiled beneath it to give it stability. It's a bright red, like fresh blood, and its moist hide is covered with the twisted visages of human faces. Dozens of eyes line its 'face' and spiral down maddeningly to the main parting of its body, where it splits off into sinuous, twisting tentacles. It's missing one cluster of arms, but it has many more spreading out like a radiant from the center of its body, what you would perhaps call its torso. Shocks of electricity arc out from its various appendages as they convulse and writhe. Its presence causes distortions in the local electromagnetic field. The static it emits is loud enough to feel in your bones, and only the Thorntons seem unaffected, holding the line, while your soldiers, the weak of will and wounded turn combat knives on themselves-- trying to carve out their ears in a panic. In its eyes gleams a strange intelligence. Especially as it twists away from you into the plaza proper, crushing some of your slower troops.

[1]It's examining you in turn, pausing in its ferocious assault. The static twists itself into you, and you hear it, hear it as clearly as you can, E̟̣̺̠̖̼͂̌̄́͠ͅm̼ͧͨ̾͞p̸̬̽̆͑ͩ́͊̾ͣ̿͘͢y̴̲̱͉̿ͭ̂͗ͯͤͯŗͭ͋͏̻̺͝e͛ͤ̓̿̀̃͗͢͝҉̖̣̬͚̺̳a̧̢̖̩̩̖͉̻ͪ͌͛̍͊l͉̯͎̟̰͉͉̝͆͂ͪ͊̾.̴͇͕̰̫̞̖͙̍͐̑͘͝ ̹̰ͣ̋͆͋ͮ̾͢M̷͚͍̼͊ͥ̕c̸̬̹͗͂̋̓̐ͯ̅͒̐C̱͙̦̬̾̔͋̅ͮ͟͝ŕ̖̼̜̍̐͠ĕ͉̻͕̦̝̻̹̥͋ͨ̈́́͋ͬ̾á͉̺̣̒ͬͮ̋ͫ̋̿r̸̦̙̠͕̿̿̈͜y̸͙̮͕͍̥ͦ͛͊̽́ͅ.̟͂͂̀ ͎̤̺̰ͧC̸̫̟̤̻̳ͣͭ̓̽ͧ̓͒͠͠ͅỏ̝̦̟̮̀̈͡ň̈́͐ͦ͆̃̇҉̷͙̼͉͝s̛͚̝̥̞͕̩̏ͮ̌̌u̴̝̣ͯ́̋ͥ͋̎̉m̞̖̬̖̤̥̊̏͊͐̄e̺̐ͬͣ̐ͥͩ.̸̡̳̳̪̦̉ͫ̎̒͘

[5 vs 11] Its torso bulges, and you try to slip out of the way as it inhales through too many mouths-- but it tracks your flight through the plaza, and it exhales. The screech hits you full blast-- and it isn't simply a noise. Its a complex string of gibberish code and a vocal assault on your very willpower. It disorientates you, blinds you, makes your limbs turn to jelly or into twitching, convulsing things that respond to no commands. Your brain attempts to process the data, and in doing so, the Colossus short-circuits it. Images flash through your mind-- a burning plague ship, turning into a fireball on impact, the hunger, the pain, the Great Disconnect...

You collapse, and the wurm slithers closer.

[Sadil. S-S-Sadil--mult-....[ERROR]]

[6 vs 4] William grabs you from the crater you lay slumped in, scooping you up and hurling you into a nearby pile of rubble for cover with surprising force. The blow drives the air from your lungs, and you're fairly sure you broke a rib, but considering the tentacle that crashes down where the two of you once stood, you suppose it's better than your entire body. You twitch a finger, then an arm, slowly regaining control as your vision swims. William's las-rifle impacts the creature's eyes, carefully placed shots made by the man as he slowly jogs away from you. Your soldiers turn their attention away from the barricades to help lay down suppressing fire on the creature. It screams in static once more, swinging a long tentacle and sending soldiers flying or rending them apart.

[17 vs 10] William keeps it distracted while you recover, narrowly avoiding those rending limbs with a grace that surprises you from an eight foot tall, heavily armored super-soldier. He takes careful shots, meant to aggravate, picking off eyes like they're targets on a range. No shot is wasted.

Your right arm comes back to your control, and with a shaking hand, you grab some ballistic from your kit, popping it into your number, lifeless arm. It only takes a minute for the world to become vibrant, for your senses to sharpen, for your body to start shaking with energy and adrenaline. Your mind races. Unable to do anything else, you choke down a nutrient cube, coughing some of it up as your mouth refuses to chew that quickly.

[10 vs 18] William's luck runs out as you rise to your feet-- a tentacle catches across his chest, and sends him spiraling into the ruins. You see blood, and the Thorntons break off from their spirited defense of the barricade to cover him-- only for them to be knocked into the rubble or ripped apart.

[///. ERROR..]



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 08:15:20 pm
[Begin troubleshooting of Mark 15 Battle Armor.]

Let's try hitting it with some earth manipulation spikes for a change of pace, in the torso where I assume its more important organs are.  Maybe we'll be able to do more damage that way.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 08:23:33 pm
Bahahaha. We're dead.

Let's make this good.

We're gonna call up whatever love for this world and its people we still have, and we're gonna put one spike straight through the ungodly torso of our enemy. Maybe we can pin it to the ground.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 08:25:24 pm
[Begin troubleshooting of Mark 15 Battle Armor.]

Let's try hitting it with some earth manipulation spikes for a change of pace, in the torso where I assume its more important organs are.  Maybe we'll be able to do more damage that way.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 08:38:48 pm
...I hate you guys.

[13 vs 2] You kneel down as the Colossus turns it's attention back to you. It's maw opens, showing dozens of razor sharp teeth that gleam dark gray, dripping with infectious ooze. You pour your willpower into the earth, putting everything you have into it.

[20] And everything that you hope happens does. A massive sharp spike splits out of the plaza's cracked and torn surface, spiking Ito the creature's face.

Out of the corner of your eye, you notice something emerge from the rubble. William staggers to his feet, his helmet off as blood pools beneath him from his shredded torso. He still holds his las-rifle, albeit in one hand, as the other hangs limply from his side. He staggers, before his legs lock, his body tilting forward.

It screams, a gout of gray ooze pouring from the grievous impalement. It rips part of it's body out from the spike, ripping a deeper wound in itself that pours ooze to the ground below. It screams again, chest filling with air as tentacles lash out at you.

[/....]



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 08:45:01 pm
"Hold steady!  Victory is within our grasp!  Give everything to the Holy SEED!"

Attempt further earth manipulation spikes, with an eye towards severing limbs/extremities.

I think it's in its death throes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 08:58:09 pm
...I hate you guys.

And we fear you. How endearing. :))

"Hold steady!  Victory is within our grasp!  Give everything to the Holy SEED!"

Attempt further earth manipulation spikes, with an eye towards severing limbs/extremities.

I think it's in its death throes.

+1

Although... for the love of all, get out of the way of those flying tentacles first.




Once we kill this thing (assuming we do kill this thing), we really should try and channel a Healing Surge through William. Guy got himself slashed to ribbons on our behalf.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 09:02:32 pm
...I hate you guys.

And we fear you. How endearing. :))

"Hold steady!  Victory is within our grasp!  Give everything to the Holy SEED!"

Attempt further earth manipulation spikes, with an eye towards severing limbs/extremities.

I think it's in its death throes.

+1

Although... for the love of all, get out of the way of those flying tentacles first.




Once we kill this thing (assuming we do kill this thing), we really should try and channel a Healing Surge through William. Guy got himself slashed to ribbons on our behalf.
+1.

That guy is awesome.  He deserves a promotion or something.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 09:12:56 pm
Promotion nuffin'-- if he survives this, he and his family will replace the old order outright. We're killing SEED, we're killing all SEED's generals-- somebody has to take charge of the military in our name, and the Thorntons have proven their worth tenfold. At this point... why not?

'Course, I suspect he's gonna die before we get to him. That'll be fun to explain to Emma, if we ever get the chance.  :-\
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 09:17:34 pm
Heal William, then let’s try healing as many other troops as we can
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 09:19:21 pm
[1 vs 14]A spell of the spins hits you as you try to stagger out of the way. You have a second to think-- and you curse yourself for the pain you're about to inflict upon yourself.

[20] It charges, tentacles lashing, too fast, too hard, too quick to dodge without losing focus. So you don't. A spike slams forth into the Colossus just as it's tentacles smash into your arm, shredding into your flesh as you futilely tried to ward away the blow. You are spent sprawling in a gout of blood.

[Hand dismemberment detected. Massive lacerations across arm, chest. Bone deep. No Infection detected. Exsanguination in...five minutes. Nutrient levels low. Shock in three minutes.]

[7][Healing...ERROR! UNABLE TO ACCESS. SEEK OUT MEDICAL ASSISTANCE.]

The Colossus squirms futilely, weakly. It's eyes are fixed and full of primal hate. You stare back, mirroring the entity's hatred, even as you know you're bleeding out.

W̼͕͍̣̯̬̳̜̓̌̇̄ḙ̡̛̘̮̺̼̬̼͙̓͂̊'̼̲̠̜̓̓̊ͫ͛ļ̵͎ͩ̏ͧͤ̂͂̃ͩ̒ľ̼̹̦̳̜̭͓ͭ̄ͯ͊̚ ̄͏̶̤̲̱͉͍m̶̙͇̳̟͚͚̳͌̉̋̋̇̈́͐̽́e̡̳͑͆̕e̸̥̪͙̳͉̥̱̝̿ͣ̄̿ͫ̈́̅͆́t̶̰̬̫̹̫̲͆̐̅̅̌ͦ̅͋͞ ̷̞̪̜̫̫͇̜̯̓ͧͤ̄̂͒́͞a̴̞̗͉̯̤̥̠̥͂̑̓̉̏g̩̬̯͕ͩ͑̓͌̓ͫͪ̕͠â̟̯͍ͫͩ͗̅́̿͋̉͝í̻̯̭͕̻̦̾̕͘͠n͙͉̺ͬ͂͂

Unconsciousness drifts up to greet you, embracing you like a long lost friend.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 09:24:04 pm
Do you want me to save him?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 09:26:14 pm
Yes, as long as it wouldn't result in our immediate death.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 09:33:10 pm
Give him your blood. Transfusion.



You awaken to jostling, and you feel awful. You're on a cot, and you feel yourself accelerating. William sits beside you, a stump of a torso. His chest is in ribbons, medics attending to him in a panic. He stops breathing, and the medics get their hands bloody as they start to do compressions.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 09:36:44 pm
Hmm.  I don't really trust William, but he is useful.  I'm torn.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 27, 2020, 09:40:46 pm
I'm done distrusting him. For better or for worse, he's a brother now.

Do what we must to save William, save only the expense of our own life.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 09:41:21 pm
I'm done distrusting him. For better or for worse, he's a brother now.

Do what we must to save William, save only the expense of our own life.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 27, 2020, 09:44:25 pm
I'm done distrusting him. For better or for worse, he's a brother now.

Do what we must to save William, save only the expense of our own life.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 09:50:59 pm
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"Transfuse my blood into him." You choke out, and the medic stares.

"Mother Alphira-- I don't think you two are capa-- you've lost too much blood!"

"DO IT NOW." He's breathing again, and you feel nothing as you're crudely rolled over and stuck with a needle. You watch your blood flow through the tube-- and feel weaker, weaker. You drift back into unconsciousness, your last waking sight is William convulsing.



Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 27, 2020, 10:22:47 pm


"Father?"

"Promise me, Alphira. It weakens us, this division. It gives rise to abominations, to twisted beasts shaped like us with the minds of many. It is an...unclean act. It's inhuman for us to to give life this way, to put them beneath us by virtue of the essence, to write ourselves into their will."

"Do you regret making me, Father?"

"I regret nothing, Alphira."

...

Good thing we're already an oath breaker, eh?



You awaken in your compound's hospital, the familiar pale green tiled walls filling you with a sense of comfort. Emma lays sleeping beside you, eyes puffy. Hair greasy and unwashed...she shifts in her sleep. You take stock of yourself. You're swaddled in bandages, all of them bloody. You flex your left hand-- and find it missing. You're in pain, you know, but your conscious mind does not feel it. Your headaches and throbs, and you feel a great hunger.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 27, 2020, 10:25:55 pm
"Emma... it's nice to see you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 05:45:19 am
I think we may have just made an Empyreal of William.  :o

Y'know what? Let's let Emma sleep in a bit-- she probably needs it right now anyway.
Can we move our other arm, or is it strapped down by bandages and whatnot?
Is Lucille still with us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 28, 2020, 06:56:57 am
vote is below will quote it here
I think we may have just made an Empyreal of William.  :o

Y'know what? Let's let Emma sleep in a bit-- she probably needs it right now anyway.
Can we move our other arm, or is it strapped down by bandages and whatnot?
Is Lucille still with us?

+1
+1
Not a double vote, just showing what I voted for
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 06:59:20 am
I’m sure it’ll be fine, he would still have his mind, right? I’m sure he would rather not be dead

Oh, he's gonna be pleased as punch. The ramifications for us are... unsettling.

”Can I have some nutrient cubes from my pack, or was it destroyed in the battle?”

I imagine we'll eat soon as somebody realizes we're conscious. These people oughta know how we work now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 28, 2020, 12:16:09 pm
I think we may have just made an Empyreal of William.  :o

Y'know what? Let's let Emma sleep in a bit-- she probably needs it right now anyway.
Can we move our other arm, or is it strapped down by bandages and whatnot?
Is Lucille still with us?

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 28, 2020, 12:24:49 pm
I think we may have just made an Empyreal of William.  :o

Y'know what? Let's let Emma sleep in a bit-- she probably needs it right now anyway.
Can we move our other arm, or is it strapped down by bandages and whatnot?
Is Lucille still with us?

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 02:52:09 pm
Your other arm is quite free, besides for Emma. As for Lucille, you do not see her, and feel faintly uncomfortable with that. At least, you grin to yourself, there isn't a turret in here anymore. You do, however, lift your free hand, waving it at the camera. It takes a few minutes, but eventually the door slides open, and a medic pushes in a cart. He smiles at you, gesturing to the...nutrient paste, like its a buffet prepared by a gourmet, all elaborate flourishes and smiles. You slowly disentangle yourself from Emma, leaning forward and eating with the hand you still have.

You put down four bowls before you feel full, and the medic checks your vital signs, noting them down and as he leaves, comparing them to your baseline. A clever little invention by Silas, the measurements taken over a week of calm for future medical emergencies like this. Zachary steps into the room, gesturing to a seat beside the door away from the sleeping Emma.

"Mother Alphira. I'm glad to see you awake." He does look happy, to his credit, but there's a vague uncertainty about him, "I'm glad you answered our prayers, especially after news from the battlefield reached us."

Finally he breathes a sigh, "I've never been good with delivering bad news, Mother Alphira, and I hate to have to start getting good at it. Rodstadt fell after they evacuated you. I'm told your battalions were all destroyed, with half of the Thornton Mercs and only a few others as survivors. Major Anderson, Gem Thornton, and the other officers all fell in the retreat. The encirclement under Maxwell later reclaimed the city, and purged it of the Infection."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 02:58:38 pm
Healing Surge.

"And William?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 28, 2020, 03:09:48 pm
Healing Surge.

"And William?"

+1 let’s try regrowing our hand
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 04:07:52 pm
...you have the oddest feeling you should do that in private if its anything like all the other times. It will be painful, violent, and probably not very pretty to watch. But you can continue if you would like.

"He...seems perfectly fine. A miraculous recovery. He's at the range, right now actually. I think he got tired of waiting for you to wake up-- he and Emma stayed beside your bed for a long time. I guess he got bored."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 04:11:45 pm
"What is the current status of the war?  Have we lost ground?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 04:12:58 pm
...healing factor can wait.

"Ahh good."


"What is the current status of the war?  Have we lost ground?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 04:14:44 pm
Silas isn't here at the moment.  We're speaking to Zachary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 04:15:33 pm
...oh
Now why did I...?
Yeah. My mistake. Edited.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 04:19:30 pm
"No. The Hydrogen District has been fully reclaimed-- as for the defensive line..." Zachary shrugs, "We've been steadily losing ground for the last two months, but that's not news."

Zachary shrugs again. "I'm glad you're back Mother Alphira, and I'm sorry for your..." He gestures to your hand. "The Pontifex was listening in to the meetings of the Elders. They think that if you weren't there that the Holy City would be under assault from that...thing. By now. They hoped that destroying it would cause the Plague to cease, but it hasn't." He rises to his feet, "I must take my leave, if that's okay, Mother Alphira."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 04:23:20 pm
"Of course.  Thank you, captain."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 28, 2020, 04:24:02 pm
“One last question, was my armor reclaimed? Was it able to be repaired?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 04:25:05 pm
“One last question, was my armor reclaimed? Was it able to be repaired?”
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 04:28:27 pm
...they knew that thing was there.
They sent us to battle that thing on purpose.
...
I mean, I get why they sent us to battle that thing. Alphira's gonna be mad tho.

“One last question, was my armor reclaimed?”

+1

No need to ask about repairs-- recall, these people can't work VOID steel. I imagine Lucille will patch herself once we've the nutrition stored to feed her repairs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 04:32:23 pm
"It is at the Armorer's, after..." Zachary briefly looks confused as he tries to explain. "Emma...had to talk it off of you? We couldn't prise it off to get to your wounds. Emma had to explain the situation to...you? It? She addressed it...Lucille? Told it Sadil was in good hands now, and that it was hindering your recovery. I...I don't know. Your angel [magic, superstition, primitive science] is something I don't try to understand. We recovered the glove that...was on your hand, as well."

"McFee took charge of...polishing it, and repairing your underlay. Said she couldn't do anything for the damages. Said you'd handle it if you woke up."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 28, 2020, 04:33:39 pm
...they knew that thing was there.
They sent us to battle that thing on purpose.
...
I mean, I get why they sent us to battle that thing. Alphira's gonna be mad tho.

“One last question, was my armor reclaimed?”

+1

No need to ask about repairs-- recall, these people can't work VOID steel. I imagine Lucille will patch herself once we've the nutrition stored to feed her repairs.
oh yeah, I somehow forgot about that, +1 to this sans repair question
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 04:39:10 pm
"Thank you.  I will see to it later.  For now, I must rest."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 04:42:24 pm
"Thank you.  I will see to it later.  For now, I must rest."

+1

Relax. Wait on Emma's waking. After two days of fire and death... this is nice.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 04:59:19 pm
I hope it's okay if I do the healing surge now.


Zachary bows at the hips and puts his cap back on, heading out, and you wait a moment. You stay seated channeling your willpower into your hand- visualizing it.

[17][11][12] The pain doubles you over, and you grit your teeth not to scream. You peel away the bandage quickly as blood begins to drip from the stump. Then, blackness begins to worm its way from your stump, a dusty gas that surrounds where your hand used to be. It starts to take shape into the bones of your missing hand, condensing. Then, from it, the white bone begins to grow around the black, shifting, dusty material, sealing some of it away beneath a coating. The cloud produces muscle and nerve that creep across the bone from your stump. Then, in much the same way, veins begin to pump blood to it. Finally, fresh, pink skin emerges, and the dust falls to the floor, inert. It evaporates into the air quickly after that.

You're left there, curled in pain and hungry. You are slow to rise, heading back to the cart to devour more food. Your side still vaguely aches, so you don't think you healed everything. However, with the pain from regrowing a -hand- still fresh in your mind, you snuggle up to Emma, drifting off back to sleep.



William and Silas wake you up a few hours later, and you notice Emma's warmth is gone from the bed. You look over William, about to complain, only to stop when you look at him. His face has changed. looking more androgenous, some of his masculinity smoothed off.  He seems roughly the same height as you now, being shorter before. But what really catches your eye are his. They're a bright, electric blue...and is that red coming in patches in at his blond roots?

A number of emotions shift across his face rapidly when you awaken. Anger. Fear. Respect...and the most surprising is eventually deference. "Ph--..." He hesitates. You don't think you've ever seen him hesitate. "Alphira?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 05:02:59 pm
"I'm sorry, Billy.  It was the only way to save your life.  I hope you will adjust to it in time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 05:05:49 pm
Oh good, we can regrow limbs. I wasn't quite sure for awhile.

"Phoebe. Alphira's... watching."
"William-- did I-- are you--?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 05:19:53 pm
Before William can even speak, Silas interrupts him, "His white blood cells are being replaced by your...unique ones. He's displaying changes that make him look similar to you. After studying McCreary, I'm sure you won't look too similar, more like [dizygotic] twins."

Silas nods, smiling widely like a kid in a candy store. William looks a little more uncomfortable, rubbing at his head. "She...you're in here...too." He explains, awkwardly. "I'm just going to ignore them." He finally states, rubbing at his face with a gloved hand, "It seems easier than having to deal with listening to them."

"I'm sorry, Billy.  It was the only way to save your lif--"

"Don't apologize. By the medic's accounts...I would be dead right now. I died several times, but eventually stabilized after...the transfusion. The thing I'm most concerned about...is how to tell my dad...that the Thornton line might die out."

You look confused, raising a brow. William looks embarrassed, glancing to Silas, who explains, gently, "Whatever this...process is, it makes you sterile." William winces and flushes, rubbing at the back of his head and rising to his feet with a clank of limbs.

"My prostheses aren't coming off anymore, either." He peels away a glove, to reveal the dark black metal beneath. "They put them on when I was first admitted to have better holds while moving me, and when I woke up I realized I couldn't remove them anymore." He walks over to the wall, pacing, for once, there's no smile on his face. "They're stronger, too. I don't think I'm stronger than you, though. Maybe more durable..." Finally, he snaps, "Oh shut up!"

He flushes again, glancing to you, "I always thought you were nuts. I see why."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 05:24:27 pm
"Good grief, I gave you her? There's no apology I could make for that."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 05:24:44 pm
"Good grief, I gave you her? There's no apology I could make for that."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 05:38:44 pm
William barks a short laugh at that, smiling once more. "She's like a [devil] on my shoulder. I thought I was bad...I think she's giving up though."

He looks at you again though, and the smile drains, replaced once more by that look of deference. "I...I understand a lot about you, now, Pheobe. Maybe too much. There are other worlds than this, isn't there? Everything in my life...seems so microscopic now. The feats...the things we could do together."

With a wicked grin forming, "I don't know if I should punch you in your face or drop to my knees and pray to you." His metallic hand forms into a fist, and he closes his eyes. Blood begins to drip from his nose, his features curling in pain, even as he starts to sway. Eventually, a small reaction coalesces in his hand. Heat radiates out from an invisible hydrogen flame. "This is power." He slurs, looking triumphant. You reach out with your willpower, and feel his in turn. Similiar. Very similar. But weaker. Far weaker. He's exerting  himself immensely to do something that you can now do with ease.

He's missing too many of his bones to be as powerful as us, Patches. Those limbs he wears are too much a part of his identity to regrow new ones. The...VOID incorporated them as part of him, but they cannot produce new 'dust' like we can, I'm sure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 05:41:32 pm
"It's... a pale shadow, Will. But I'm glad you're alive. After what you did for me out there... I'm glad you're alive."

That's probably for the best.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 05:48:12 pm
"It's... a pale shadow, Will. But I'm glad you're alive. After what you did for me out there... I'm glad you're alive."

That's probably for the best.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 05:55:36 pm
"I'm sorry." William apologizes. You have never heard him apologize. "I'll be as strong as I can for you, Pheobe. I..." You notice, with surprise, that his eyes are watering, and he turns away, "I don't know what else to say." With a twist of his limbs, he wipes at his face. "SEED, I hate religion, it makes it hard for me not to feel like a god has blessed me. Alphira says you're...we're destined for the stars. I'm sure Emma will want to come with you...I want to see these worlds, Pheobe." His fist clenches as he finishes his rambling with a defiant, "I'll fight for you as long as I can, I swear."

Smart. And he's pretty and strong. If he were weaker, we'd be dealing with a feral beast at this point, overwhelmed by the lack of identity...I want him..

"I...want to ask a favor, Pheobe." William glances to Silas, who looks uncomfortable, "I want to kill my Father and his loyalists. They're short-sighted, cruel. Stupid. They'll hold the Thornton name back, back on this speck of dust when a universe awaits it. Please," He begs, "Please help me with this."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 06:00:21 pm
"I will, but first I must see to this war.  I don't know if they'll let me continue to fight after I lost so many brave soldiers, but I must persevere, at least try, until the job is done.  Will you join me?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 06:33:13 pm
"I've no love towards your father and his goons, but... well, I'll need to ask Emma about it. Breaking down the Moores was one thing, but her own father-- she deserves a say in the matter."
"By the way, how's she taking your-- transformation?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 06:50:09 pm
"I'm already with you. Here's the rub-- we're withholding materials for the war effort on his orders." William grins widely, turning to face you. "All told, in the last ten months we've made one hundred Thornton soldiers. We have the technology and equipment to make ten a month. Now, if we invest the Thornton treasury into it, place it in the Holy City supply network, we can bump that up to twenty, maybe thirty. Probably less. We have plenty of recruits, some of which are already missing limbs." William is manic, wringing his hands as he paces. "Five months, we have one hundred more augmented soldiers. Maybe more if we have the support of SEED."

"My father is withholding the technology and expertise to -win- this war."

William pauses when you ask about his sister, giving a dark chuckle, "I think she's jealous."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 07:02:41 pm
Hmm.  I agree that we should check in with Emma first, but if doing that would improve the war effort, it is tempting.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 07:21:44 pm
Hmm.  I agree that we should check in with Emma first, but if doing that would improve the war effort, it is tempting.

Yeah, I'm all for it-- but it's really not our decision to make.

"Jealous! I'd do the same for her in a heartbeat."
"I... really need to speak with her, actually." (Pick ourself up.) "Could you point me to the right place?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 07:34:51 pm
Hmm.  I agree that we should check in with Emma first, but if doing that would improve the war effort, it is tempting.

Yeah, I'm all for it-- but it's really not our decision to make.

"Jealous! I'd do the same for her in a heartbeat."
"I... really need to speak with her, actually." (Pick ourself up.) "Could you point me to the right place?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 07:46:00 pm
"The minds of women." William offers with a cheeky grin and you give him a giggle at that. You rise up, and he actually offers you a hand. His personality seems completely different, besides for that twisted smile his face always seems to find. He's in his family's uniform, and you notice that it seems to be more tightly secured, less unkempt.

"Cafeteria."  William offers. "Have fun."

You go where he directs, that is, after a brief stop to your bedroom for something more substantial than the cheap poly gown you had on. You feel better, strapping yourself into your uniform. More comfortable.

Emma is sitting over a plate of pancakes, looking up at you and giving a wave. You approach, sitting next to her, and she leans into you. "You regrew a hand. I get so worried and you always spring back. How's your head, though? I'm sure you've heard about Rodstadt by now."

She pushes a newspaper over to you. "They all say it's a stunning victory, but..."

Spoiler: A Holy City newspaper (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 07:52:34 pm
"No need to worry about me.  I'm fine.  Well, I suppose the propaganda wing of SEED is doing a good job, but it wasn't really a victory.  Casualties neared 100%.  It was brutal.  I still see some of the soldiers when I close my eyes."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 28, 2020, 08:01:19 pm
"No need to worry about me.  I'm fine.  Well, I suppose the propaganda wing of SEED is doing a good job, but it wasn't really a victory.  Casualties neared 100%.  It was brutal.  I still see some of the soldiers when I close my eyes."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 08:13:19 pm
We doing the PTSD thing, hm?

"No need to worry about me.  I'm fine.  Well, I suppose the propaganda wing of SEED is doing a good job, but it wasn't really a victory.  Casualties neared 100%.  It was brutal."

+1-- take our time with the words tho. There's a fine line between reassuring and condescending, and a fine line between shell-shock and a boast.

"I still see some of the soldiers when I close my eyes."

Do we tho?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 08:16:13 pm
I mean, that was pretty tough.  I don't think most people could see that sort of death and not be bothered by it.  Also, in what way is a ton of casualties a "boast?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 28, 2020, 08:16:52 pm
We doing the PTSD thing, hm?

"No need to worry about me.  I'm fine.  Well, I suppose the propaganda wing of SEED is doing a good job, but it wasn't really a victory.  Casualties neared 100%.  It was brutal."

+1-- take our time with the words tho. There's a fine line between reassuring and condescending, and a fine line between shell-shock and a boast.

"I still see some of the soldiers when I close my eyes."

Do we tho?
+1 to the top part, -1 to the bottom part
I don’t think we need to lie
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 08:27:28 pm
I mean, that was pretty tough.  I don't think most people could see that sort of death and not be bothered by it.

Sure-- I'm curious as to the actual extent of the mental damage, is all. Maybe we're just shaken up a bit. Maybe we really do have a brand-new recurring daymare to deal with. I suspect that's up to the dice more than it is to us.

...or maybe I shouldn't be giving the GM ideas?  :-X
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 08:37:07 pm
Isn't roleplay something we're supposed to do?  This is the "forum games and roleplaying" section of the forum, after all.  Also, how is disclosing a ton of casualties a "boast?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 08:46:39 pm
Ahh, maybe I'm being needlessly contrarian. Apologies.

"No need to worry about me.  I'm fine.  Well, I suppose the propaganda wing of SEED is doing a good job, but it wasn't really a victory.  Casualties neared 100%.  It was brutal.  I still see some of the soldiers when I close my eyes."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 08:57:18 pm
Gem comes to mind, as do the Majors, and you feel remorseful for their deaths. But, and you feel vaguely bad about this, you don't feel much for the dead rank and file.

[4]A soldier's life is to die where they are told...I hope they died standing. You agree with Alphira, surprising both of you.

[18] You know there's something wrong with your brain, at this point, and how you view your fellow soldiers.

"No need to worry about me.  I'm fine.  Well, I suppose the propaganda wing of SEED is doing a good job, but it wasn't really a victory.  Casualties neared one hundred percent...  It was brutal..."

"I figured as much," Emma murmurs, wrapping an arm around you. "I'm just glad you're okay. That's all that matters in the end."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 28, 2020, 09:00:01 pm
Huh.  You were right.  We're tougher than I thought.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on March 28, 2020, 09:55:19 pm
There is something wrong with the way this war is being fought.

Insects cant be killed by the laser guns, only the abominations.  But most of the abominations, at least the most dangerous ones, are soldiers who had lasguns.

The tactics seem to be feeding the horde.  We never saw the tactics up close before but now it can be certain the ones they are using are terrible.

We can not feel guilty over all the deaths but we can not ignore it.

Why is artillery so poorly used.  Why do they not have advanced communications, even just short range radio.

If the insects create the [demons] though nesting how many more might be out there behind the front lines?

That wasn't the king of the dead, that was an infant.

We need better weapons, something that can fire an entire lasgun blast worth of energy like an automatic rifle if we power it or a man portable tank energy cannon.  One of those blades but much larger and heavier, since we can use it.

I think a key thing while we are healing is to get every general and advisors together and go over new battle plans.  And execute any who do not agree to follow the new plans.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 28, 2020, 10:09:26 pm
Huh.  You were right.  We're tougher than I thought.

Some people get flashbacks. Some people just kind of... shut down. Some people do both. Trauma is weird.
We do seem to be a bit messed up from the experience-- you were right on that count. Is just manifesting differently.

*snip*

Good stuff. We have a game plan.



"could say the same for you"

...

"...I think I broke your brother."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 28, 2020, 10:21:03 pm
I love it when you guys strategize like that!

"...He said thank you to me earlier today. For watching you..." Emma scratches at her face, "It's...weird. He hasn't said thank you to me in ten years...He woke up well before you did, and I swear he  was at your side the whole time after."

"What did you do to him?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 02:44:09 am
Perhaps something like...

"It was a blood transfusion, and I think it saved his life.  As for how that affected him... I think he's like me now.  He does seem... different."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 03:36:30 am
"...you...you gave him your blood," Emma asks, seeming dumbstruck, then facepalms, rubbing at her brow in the same motion. "And made him into an...[angel]?"

"SEED...that explains a lot." When you simply sit there, bemused, Emma shakes her head at you. She smiles wryly as she begins to explain, "The...Families, or, as SEED calls them, Warlords...Businessmen. They're different than the general population. My father always taught us that the Families were here before SEED."

You raise your brow, and she waves a hand. "I don't know if its true or not, but there are differences between Families and the people of SEED. But all it revolves around, from what I've studied, is how the two cultures create contracts. With the people of SEED, contracts are made in the name of...-their- God. With some Families, not all of them, though, contracts are made with 'blood'. Either the spilled blood of the enemy, your own blood being spilled for someone else, so on. Metaphors."

"I think it started from some vague threat and blossomed out over time as myths and legend and culture are wont to do. It's still a threat, don't get me wrong, but now the Families that follow that view anybody within their group as blood relatives, hence why all of our troops and high-level retainers take the Thornton last name."

"You can see where I'm going with this, right? Coupled with...whatever your blood did to him..." She pauses, staring at you wide-eyed, "Did William rescue you? Is that how he got all tore up?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 03:49:15 am
"I realize now what the implications are... He did save me several times and put his life in great danger.  I wouldn't be here if it wasn't for him.  Honestly, he deserves a commendation."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 29, 2020, 03:54:56 am
"I realize now what the implications are... He did save me several times and put his life in great danger.  I wouldn't be here if it wasn't for him.  Honestly, he deserves a commendation."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 04:02:42 am
"He shed his blood to save you, and you did the same." Emma opines, idly, "It sounds familiar, but I can't put my finger on it."

[7] You think she's hinting at something, but for the life of you, you can't figure it out.

Emma leans into you more, puffing out a sigh equal parts contentment and exasperation. "What part of any of that made it seem like he would care for any higher commendation than sharing the [magic, superstition, primitive science] blood of an Angel? William is devoted to the concept like you used to be devoted to SEED. He already feels indebted to you to the point where he's trying to be nice to us."

[5] "You completely validated his qausi-religious world view." Emma finally offers, with a sigh. "I just hope it doesn't go to his head."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 04:09:22 am
"You're right, he seems happy, but something about it is making me uneasy.  Do you think this change is an improvement or a disaster waiting to happen?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 29, 2020, 04:10:45 am
"You're right, he seems happy, but something about it is making me uneasy.  Do you think this change is an improvement or a disaster waiting to happen?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 04:20:57 am
"Both. He's not itching for a reason to kill you, and finally seems to respect me." Emma shrugs, closing her eyes as she lays against you, seeming to take comfort in your presence, even as she helps you plot. "Play it by ear. William is still a feral dog. The only difference is you're just holding the chain now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 04:25:44 am
"You don't— that is, you aren't... jealous, are you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 04:59:11 am
"Why would I be jealous?" Emma asks, looking at you with a wry grin, "My girlfriend and my brother come back from battle having forged a literal unbreakable bond, one where my psychotic brother is now something more than human, and my girlfriend is commending him for bravery." Emma sits up, turning back to her food with a crooked grin that reminds you of William's.

"I'm more concerned than jealous if I'm being honest. William always took my toys growing up. I might have to undo all your hard work if he tries to continue that trend." She offers you some of her pancakes

[20] "You're all mine, my love." Emma continues, smiling as you give in and take a bite from the offered fork. "And I know nothing will change that. I'll make sure of it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 29, 2020, 02:50:16 pm
Heh, I considered a lot of possible words for this-- jokes and angst and everything in between. Probably best to just play things straight.



"You won't have to." (Smile.) "William's made himself into a subservient, an acolyte-- you're more than that. You'll always be more than that."

...

"I do have to figure out what to do with him, though. He's got the same voices in his brain now as I do, and they're whispering in his ear something fierce."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 03:26:38 pm
Your sure Emma is comforted by your words, judging by the kiss she gives you on the cheek, and the tight hug she embraces you with. This relationship stuff seems pretty easy.

"He's finally decided to kill Father, too." Emma adds, clearing her plate with one final scrape. "It's about damn time."

"Keep him on a leash and sic him on the people who deserve it." Emma finally opines. "Try to keep his crazy in check."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 29, 2020, 03:35:05 pm
"Crazy... yes." Sigh; smirk. "I've some experience with this particular sort of crazy. We're lucky he's not trying to burn the world down or something."

"He told you about his plans, I'm glad. He asked me to help, said he'd put more power to the war effort if I did... I'm tempted. I'm tempted. I told him I'd be asking you first."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 04:16:52 pm
"Give it time." Emma pushes her plate aside and gives you a shrug. "He's the heir. I'm the spare. What he wants to do with that Family is up to him." She looks a little uncomfortable, and shrugs away her own uncertainty, "I won't lose any sleep if you decide to do it, Pheobe. William suffered a lot more at Father's hands than I did. He has a bone to pick."

"Just let him pull the trigger, is all I ask. I don't think I want to know my girlfriend killed my father on my brother's orders. That'll be too weird, even for me."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 04:49:27 pm
"I will.  Is there anyone employed by your father that you'd like me to spare?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 05:05:32 pm
"As many as possible." Emma raises her brow, then gives a shake of her head, "They're all family. If it's you or them, I prefer you...but I've grown up with a lot of them, and even if they follow my Father's orders, it's only because they're bound to it." She rises, and you do the same, following her to her office, "William isn't going to go in guns blazing, full assault. There's forms he has to obey. If father is smart, he'll step down. If he's stubborn and smart, he'll duel. If he's a fool--"

"Let's just hope that he isn't a fool."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 05:38:37 pm
"I suppose I just need to ask my superiors for permission.  Hopefully they'll understand that it will help the war effort."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 29, 2020, 05:41:44 pm
"I understand. I understand."

---

"I'll tell William I expect a bloodless victory, or as close to it as possible-- with the state he's in, he should be willing to listen."


"I just need to ask my superiors for permission.  Hopefully they'll understand that it will help the war effort."

And say this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 05:42:24 pm
"I understand. I understand."

---

"I'll tell William I expect a bloodless victory, or as close to it as possible-- with the state he's in, he should be willing to listen."


"I just need to ask my superiors for permission.  Hopefully they'll understand that it will help the war effort."

And say this.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 29, 2020, 06:04:57 pm
"I understand. I understand."

---

"I'll tell William I expect a bloodless victory, or as close to it as possible-- with the state he's in, he should be willing to listen."


"I just need to ask my superiors for permission.  Hopefully they'll understand that it will help the war effort."

And say this.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 06:43:36 pm
"Good." Emma murmurs, giving you a kiss. "I wouldn't worry about -that-." She steps into her office, and you follow, taking note of the organized desk. A packet of papers sits there. Requisitions, a bright pink denial slip, a counter-requisition, and a report on the Thornton Businessmen and how attending the funeral of their soldiers are required to maintain good relations with them. Finally, as you read through it, a letter from the Crusader General approving the visit.

[12] "I started a week ago when William first approached me about it." Emma brags, taking a seat at the desk and starting through some other paperwork. "I'd love for you to see where I grew up, anyway."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 29, 2020, 06:47:22 pm
"A week--"

...

"...my coma. How long was I out?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 06:48:54 pm
"A week--"

...

"...my coma. How long was I out?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 29, 2020, 06:53:55 pm
"A week--"

...

"...my coma. How long was I out?"

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 07:00:52 pm
"..." Emma looks surprised, and you can briefly see panic in her eyes. She stutters, "N-No one told you?"

"You were asleep for nearly a month, Pheobe...But you just slept. Silas said you were in hibernation, like...like a mountain rabbit. It was all we could do to keep changing the bandages and hope you wouldn't bleed to death in the meantime." She doesn't seem clear on the specifics, explaining the best she can. "They took out your saline drip yesterday when you started warming up again. Silas giggled like a little girl when you proved him right."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 07:02:30 pm
"Was there any discussion among the higher-ups about bringing me back to the Holy City, ostensibly to be seen by SEED?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 07:16:49 pm
"If there was, it didn't succeed," Emma responds, shaking her head. "I wouldn't have heard about it. The compound received both you and William directly from the transport ship. You've been here since. You're being sent to the Defensive Line next after you finish recovery. And the...uh...'funeral'."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 07:25:04 pm
I suppose they think they haven't gotten enough use of us yet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 29, 2020, 07:31:20 pm
I suppose they think they haven't gotten enough use of us yet.

They're right. They'll lose this war without our continued aid, and they know it.



Sigh. "Right."

Speak soft. "A month... so long, and so long for you! I didn't realize-- I didn't realize--"

Hugs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 07:35:53 pm
I suppose they think they haven't gotten enough use of us yet.

They're right. They'll lose this war without our continued aid, and they know it.



Sigh. "Right."

Speak soft. "A month... so long, and so long for you! I didn't realize-- I didn't realize--"

Hugs.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 29, 2020, 07:43:49 pm
I still don't know how long we were out in the interim between acts I and II, now I think about it. I assume somebody told Phoebe during whatever timeskip, but we never really asked.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 07:45:30 pm
Oh damn, that's a good point.  It never occurred to me for some reason.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 07:54:51 pm
The dates were for a reason~
Five months.

"I honestly didn't expect you back so soon. It was good to see you-- even if you were a mess when you arrived." With a grin, returning your hug, she adds, "I'm getting used to it, I guess, as long as you keep springing back like you do, Pheobe."

"Just keep coming back." Emma returns your hug even more tightly, leaning up to kiss you. Her hand comes to caress your side-- and she draws it back suddenly, breaking the kiss to look at the blood on her hand. Then she scowls, as she begins to lecture you, more concerned than genuine anger, "You're walking around without fully healing first?! Back to medical- go! And if you do that healing thing in the hallway, change your uniform!"

"Talk about a mood killer." Emma grumbles, rising to gesture you out the door, wiping the blood off on her napkin with annoyance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 08:17:58 pm
"Thanks Emma, I can always count on you to take care of me.  And don't worry, I will be back."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 29, 2020, 09:22:30 pm
"Oh-- oh." (Assume a properly sheepish expression.) "Right." Make for the doorway.

"Thanks Emma, I can always count on you to take care of me.  And don't worry, I will be back."

And this for a parting line.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 29, 2020, 09:23:37 pm
"Oh-- oh." (Assume a properly sheepish expression.) "Right." Make for the doorway.

"Thanks Emma, I can always count on you to take care of me.  And don't worry, I will be back."

And this for a parting line.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 10:45:40 pm
Emma shakes her head, rubbing at her face. "You're a mess, but I love you." She teases, then giggles, gesturing down the hall. "Go. Heal. We have to go shopping later for proper clothes anyway, and I'm sure you have things to do."

With a glance back to her office and the piles of paperwork your sure she still has to wade through, she looks torn, but only briefly. "I'll come to grab you in the afternoon." She graces you with a smile that sets your heart beating faster, probably not helping the bloodstained bandages and reclaims her seat at the desk.

"You're still standing there!" She complains good-naturedly, and you hurry away with a grin.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 10:52:12 pm
We might as well get new bandages and get our wounds re-sutured.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 29, 2020, 10:57:34 pm
We might as well get new bandages and get our wounds re-sutured.
+1
How’s our hunger? If we are satisfied, we can try a healing surge
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 29, 2020, 11:03:09 pm
Head back to medical wing, pop the Healing Surge, and we'll reevaluate.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 11:15:54 pm
Head back to medical wing, pop the Healing Surge, and we'll reevaluate.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 29, 2020, 11:23:54 pm
Head back to medical wing, pop the Healing Surge, and we'll reevaluate.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 11:24:29 pm
It's a quick trip down a set of stairs that lay in parallel to a textured ramp that follows the same path, and then you're in your medical room.

[18] You strip down, and with a deep breath, your fingers tight on the blood resistant poly-linen, you bring forth your will. Pain burns through you from your side as your focus is diverted, and you hunch over as stitches push themselves out of the barely healed wounds. They are deep, and you're sure some organs must have been damaged, as evidenced by the sheer length of time it takes for you to heal yourself. Blood still drips from your bandages.

[8] Another flash of pain burns through you, as once again heal yourself. It fades much more quickly this time. You peel away the bandages, revealing your raw and red side, still coated in drying blood. The stitches they put in you fall away with the bandages, and you leave them on the bed. You rise on shaky feet, and step into the shower, feeling the burning hot water ease your cramping core muscles as they reconfigure themselves. You're a bit peckish now, but figure that can wait until you finish cleaning yourself.

You touch the fading scars that score your arm, your side. Your body bears no scar tissue that you can see. It sometimes surprises you, but you wonder how you would look if your body kept a tally of every grievous injury that you have sustained. You let the burning hot water wash over you, feeling relaxed as you watch the dried blood wash down the drain.


When you emerge, drying your long hair, you notice that one of the medical personnel has replaced your bloody uniform with a clean one, as well as disposed of the bandages for you-- Silas sits next to the door, patiently. You don't flinch or bother to cover yourself-- he is your lead doctor, now, after all. "I knew you could regrow limbs, Lady Alphira. Your biology is quite amazing. Not only are you a miracle of...science? Magic? Not only that, but you can infect others with your ability, with your mind." There isn't a smile on his face as he speaks, and he fiddles awkwardly with a folder. Despite his uncomfortable movements, his eyes remind you of a hawk, watching a mouse.

"The Plague seems to be of a similar nature, doesn't it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 29, 2020, 11:30:47 pm
“I’m not the Plague. William is still William, just a different body. His mind is still there. He isn’t me, I am not him”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 29, 2020, 11:35:23 pm
“I’m not the Plague. William is still William, just a different body. His mind is still there. He isn’t;t me, I am not him”
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 29, 2020, 11:38:40 pm
“I’m not the Plague. William is still William, just a different body. His mind is still there. He isn’t me, I am not him”
+1
just deleted unneeded ;t
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 29, 2020, 11:53:24 pm
"And with voices in his head that he says are you. Or some fragment of you." Silas opines as you dress. "I don't think you're the same. I merely said you're similar. But don't you wonder about yourself when you compare yourself to humans? Aren't you curious about your biology, how you work?"

"I am. You're a fascinating subject. Scientifically, of course." Silas adds hastily, reminded of the situation by you raising a brow. To his credit, he doesn't flush or even blink, maintaining a calm demeanor. "I've compiled a file for you, concerning William's changes, but anything you can tell me about yourself or theories about how your body works would be quite helpful."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 12:13:03 am
"There appears to be a part of me, the VOID, that is able to interface with 'angelic' technology and effect changes to my body that would normally be unconscious.  For example, it can redirect calories to repair different parts of my body"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 30, 2020, 12:18:07 am
"There appears to be a part of me, the VOID, that is able to interface with 'angelic' technology and effect changes to my body that would normally be unconscious.  For example, it can redirect calories to repair different parts of my body"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 30, 2020, 04:31:21 am
"There appears to be a part of me, the VOID, that is able to interface with 'angelic' technology and effect changes to my body that would normally be unconscious.  For example, it can redirect calories to repair different parts of my body"
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 30, 2020, 05:26:14 am
"Well that explains...next to nothing I didn't already know. Thank you" Silas sighs at your explanation, but seems genuine enough in his appreciation, waving the folder at you. "I'll take this to your desk, Lady Alphira. I documented William's case well, including changes to bone density and muscle mass. Caloric intake did increase as well. His rate of healing increased. Pain tolerance increased...so on. It's all very interesting."

"If you have any questions, or can come up with anything else...I'm sure we can talk on the way to the 'funeral', or you could write a report for me. And of course, if you need anything, please, let me know." And with that and a stiff bow at the hips, he leaves you alone. You smooth out the wrinkles in your outfit and brush your damp hair over your shoulder. You sit on the bed and pull on your socks and boots carefully.

Now what?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 30, 2020, 05:49:10 am
Lets read that file.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 30, 2020, 06:41:05 am
Lets read that file.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 02:50:25 pm
Lets read that file.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 30, 2020, 03:46:02 pm
"Wait." You call after the leaving Silas, and he turns around, confused. You extend a hand, and he raises his brow and passes it over to you.

"I'm glad you view me with such high esteem, Lady Alphira."

You claim a seat on the medical bed and flip through the document. Its roughly organized, but you understand most of it, besides the higher-level technical jargon. Emma could probably explain some of the more complicated subjects to you.


You rise from the bed, stretching out your limbs as you begin to pace the breadth of your private hospital room, thinking. Then you pause, glancing at that line from the document with a small scowl.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 04:08:30 pm
"Project Alphira."  Are the Thorntons planning on experimenting on us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 30, 2020, 04:16:49 pm
"Project Alphira."  Are the Thorntons planning on experimenting on us?
i think that;s referring to the file Silas wrote about us

Which line did we scowl at?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 30, 2020, 04:20:49 pm
'He always seems to be in motion. Gone are the days of him laying in bed for hours on end. He is often on the track, pushing himself faster and faster. Or at the range, performing better and better shots with a monsterous Thornton Las-rifle.

' is what you were scowling at. I probably should have been more clear in my answer.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 04:36:43 pm
...I'm missing something here.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 30, 2020, 04:52:22 pm
Why would we be scowling at William recovering?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 30, 2020, 05:00:34 pm
Because he's powerful. Not as powerful as us, but as Emma said... something more than human. We'll have to be on our guard around him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 30, 2020, 05:49:48 pm
Too siimiliar.

With a sigh, you lay on the bed and stretch out, listening to the voices debate for a moment, until a familiar pang aches through you. The pain of abandonment. You rise swiftly, crossing the room and heading down the plain corridors to the Armorsmith. The corridors disorientate you, but you eventually find your way there. You armor sits on the central plinth, but you hesitate to approach it.

The breastplate is scored clean through, cracks radiating out in multiple places. The gauntlet is separated from the glove in its entirety, the thin membrane of gold and black that once held them together raggedly torn apart by the blow to your arm. Your weapons lie on the table in front of it-- the cleaned cutter hilt and the las-SMG. You approach the cutter hilt first, more comfortable holding the heavy chunk of tech than the armor that became a second skin. But you feel ill at the thought, concerned...perhaps a little fearful.

Perhaps in the morning... You reason. You glance at the clock nearby, noting that you have eight hours left before Emma and you go buy an outfit for the Thornton Family Funeral.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 05:55:08 pm
The armor is vital to our continued survival.  Put on the glove and assess the suit's status.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 30, 2020, 05:58:42 pm
The armor is vital to our continued survival.  Put on the glove and assess the suit's status.

+1

Let's go get something to eat first, though. This thing's gonna be pulling a lot of nutrition off us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 30, 2020, 06:01:40 pm
[4 vs 9] No. You turn away from it, instead taking the cutter hilt holster and strapping it to your belt, slipping the hilt in after firmly securing the pliable leather.

[1 vs 18] No. Firmly.

You have eight hours left before Emma and you go buy an outfit for the Thornton Family Funeral.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 06:04:05 pm
Interesting.  It might be nice to get some more information on the war.  Have the demons been advancing due to a lack of manpower?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 30, 2020, 06:19:51 pm
...Huh. Has Lucille finally realized that we're not McCreary?

Regardless, we should still probably go choke down some nutrient paste somewhere. After that... we need to go consult with William about this patricide he's got planned.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 30, 2020, 06:33:58 pm
They have, remember? The defensive lines are shrinking
Also that was odd, the no’ing of checking the srmor
We should still find something to eat, whether or not we use the armor
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 06:40:29 pm
We do know the lines are shrinking, but we don't know why.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 30, 2020, 06:53:29 pm
[11]You leave the compound, feeling free for the first time in a long while. You take in the glow of the morning sun, drifting over the spires of the Golden City of the Holy SEED. You don't think your guard noticed you sneaking out. You approach a withered debt-slave at a newspaper stand, and buy each and every paper from the many publishers within the Holy City. You find yourself a chair nearby in a bar on one of the lower levels of the Outer City and eavesdrop while reading through them.

[5] The papers are devoted propaganda sources. There's barely any mention of casualties and the mentions that are there downplay the significance. But, as several advertisements show; SEED is recruiting heavily. Debt slaves are being promised freedom and a plot of land in the new to be settled western province-- formerly the no-mans-land. Not to mention a bunch advertising service to SEED...hell, eight out of the ten newspapers in this city town are gossip rags or spout the lines given to them by the administration.

[17] You do notice a follow-up story concerning your supposed love life with a Family-born Emma Thornton, which amuses you to no end, considering that its from the Thornton owned press, and lists a 'anonymous source' from within your compound. But what really makes you laugh is that it's Emma's style of writing.

[11] Many of the patrons seem to be missing limbs. They have crude plastic prostheses. They drink in somber silence, only interrupting it to cheer a name or raise a toast. You can tell, simply by looking at them, the war is going bad. This is no poor man's drinking hall, no speakeasy serving cheap gin. It's close to the hoverport, and these men have the look of the middle class in their clean outfits and careful speech.

[-.20 credits] You order yourself the daily special, the only meal this place sellsl, and the Chef brings it out to you. Baby potatoes, [beast of burden, cow, beef] steak and some assorted fall vegetables. Its salty, and buttery, and delicious, and you eat your fill. The chef might have recognized you. He brings you out an extra loaf of bread and a small, sweet cake that's slightly stale. You pay only for your drink and the meal-- the dessert and bread were free.

[-] You make your way back to the compound, catching the odd eye of the passerby. Occasionally, someone bows, and you dip your head politely.

William is in the range, keeping a burner las-rifle steadily braced with one arm as he lays on the floor. He glances back towards you-- no, it would be better to explain it as he shrinks before you...His willpower, which leaks like a sieve, flees before your's instinctively. He looks momentarily concerned, before, offering, sheepishly, hesitantly. "Its different...seeing you like this."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 07:05:04 pm
We need to marshal as much strength as we can.  If we can create these supersoldiers with our blood, then perhaps...?

If possible, lessen the intensity of our willpower for a moment.  "This new situation will take some getting used to, but I have a feeling that you're going to like it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 30, 2020, 08:09:03 pm
We need to marshal as much strength as we can.  If we can create these supersoldiers with our blood, then perhaps...?

I am... reluctant to wield our own blood so carelessly. If our father's warnings are anything to go by, there's a significance to blood that we don't yet understand-- we could release a plague, or cripple ourself, if we were to give our blood away too freely. We don't know.

Anyway, William. If we're going to make an acolyte of him, we'd better start acting the part.



"Hm. I have shaken your ego, I think." (Smile thin.) "Ego, by which man looks upon the world and declares: 'I AM.' Ego, by which man would become god. You have seen ego made manifest. You are shaken. I regret this."

...

"I have had words with Emma. Let us speak now of patricide."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 08:15:05 pm
We should tell him that we regret saving his life?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 30, 2020, 08:18:18 pm
We should tell him that we regret saving his life?
i thought the regret was leaving him shaken, maybe we should tell him more about us so he has a better idea about his new body
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 08:25:30 pm
Ah I see, thanks.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 08:38:47 pm
We need to marshal as much strength as we can.  If we can create these supersoldiers with our blood, then perhaps...?

I am... reluctant to wield our own blood so carelessly. If our father's warnings are anything to go by, there's a significance to blood that we don't yet understand-- we could release a plague, or cripple ourself, if we were to give our blood away too freely. We don't know.

Anyway, William. If we're going to make an acolyte of him, we'd better start acting the part.



"Hm. I have shaken your ego, I think." (Smile thin.) "Ego, by which man looks upon the world and declares: 'I AM.' Ego, by which man would become god. You have seen ego made manifest. You are shaken. I regret this."

...

"I have had words with Emma. Let us speak now of patricide."

+1.  Perhaps tell him about us so he can better understand what he's going through.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 30, 2020, 08:42:10 pm
Yeah, was that we regret having had to completely redefine him in the process of saving him-- not that we regret having saved him in first place.

Let's try a revision, with a little more clarity and a little more comfort?

"Hm. I have shaken your ego, I think." (Smile thin.) "Ego, by which man looks upon the world and declares: 'I AM.' Ego, by which man would become god. You have seen ego made manifest. You are shaken. I am regretful, to have shaken you thus."

...

Speak soft. Reassuring-like. "You'll get used to it. You've a spark of the 'I AM' yourself, now-- just enough to open your eyes."
"I have had words with Emma. Let us speak now of patricide."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 08:46:10 pm
Yeah, was that we regret having had to completely redefine him in the process of saving him-- not that we regret having saved him in first place.

Let's try a revision, with a little more clarity and a little more comfort?

"Hm. I have shaken your ego, I think." (Smile thin.) "Ego, by which man looks upon the world and declares: 'I AM.' Ego, by which man would become god. You have seen ego made manifest. You are shaken. I am regretful, to have shaken you thus."

...

Speak soft. Reassuring-like. "You'll get used to it. You've a spark of the 'I AM' yourself, now-- just enough to open your eyes."
"I have had words with Emma. Let us speak now of patricide."

+1, though it does sound slightly mad in my opinion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 30, 2020, 09:17:19 pm
[10] You try to relieve the pressure of will you're putting on William, and he does seem to relax a little.

"I'll take that as praise, Pheobe, and I can't express how grateful I am...but it was...more a change in perspective." William explains, softly, after listening to you intently, "I might-- I might -have- been one of the best soldiers on this [planet]. I was training since I could stand. I was taught how to kill ruthlessly, how to crush an enemy stronghold beneath my feet while simultaneously telling everyone else that this is what happens when you fuck with the Thorntons. Do you know how many thousands of credits went into my training? Too many."

"And all it took was one swat from that thing, and my insides were my outsides. My armor tore like paper. My rifle was worthless. I knew I was dead. That was it—one swipe. I didn't want to die like that. Choking on my blood while everyone I cared about died around me." William lines up a shot, the air hisses, and the rifle strikes true, melting a piece of plastic from the training dummy in a pop of plastic. "But did you know what I wanted? To be stronger. To challenge a god of death by myself and -win-."

"And then my prayers were answered." William finishes, glancing back to you, aiming down the cheap iron-sights-- wouldn't they be called plastic sights if they were on a plastic weapon? "The only cost was...my mind, my future children, and my backbone when it comes to you. I still don't know if it was a fair trade."

The rifle gives the soft hiss that one can only hear in tranquil conditions, the coolant rapidly cooling the focusing arrays and transferring away some of the heat and energy vented. The target's head explodes into a little pop of plastic. "I'm hoping there isn't any. That he steps down, he's been sick for ten years now. He trained me to succeed him. It isn't a good time, but it isn't going to get better. If he doesn't step down, I'll challenge him to a duel. Hopefully, to injury."

The Crusader Armorer replaces the target for William, who leans into the barrel, breathing out a short breath. "And if he refuses, then...I'll kill him. I want you there to be back up. Watch my back. Show off that terrifying presence of your's. Most of them will be smart not to turn a gun on the heir apparent." The rifle gives a soft hiss, and the target loses its head once again.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 09:41:28 pm
"Why not just wait?  You are the heir, after all."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 30, 2020, 09:49:53 pm
Huh, good question that.

"Good. I worried what you might do, when first you spoke of this-- but you respect the blood of your own." Smile.

"I am curious, though..."


"Why not just wait?  You are the heir, after all."

Ask this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 30, 2020, 09:56:45 pm
"To...to help you?" William looks confused, voice lowering, "To get you more Thorton Warmachines. More troops loyal to -you-. Not the Crusader General. Not SEED. You."

"Emma told me a while back about your precarious situation....and even if she didn't, the Crusader General told me all about it when he asked me how much you were paying me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 30, 2020, 10:00:06 pm
“I will be your backup”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 30, 2020, 10:11:33 pm
"You don't have the influence to coerce your father into that, or otherwise convince him to agree, without replacing him entirely?  I'm sure you have your loyalists."

"But if you would prefer to replace him..."
“I will be your backup”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 30, 2020, 10:12:18 pm
Unrelated to current events, but I looked up on a whim the word "Empyreal". It's used for a couple different things, but its original meaning is thus: "of the Empyrean"-- "of the highest heaven." The word draws its origins from an old Greek term: "ἔμπυρος", or "in the fire".

Fire.

Coincidence? Deliberate linguistic choice? I dunno, but it's a nice little detail on the part of the GM. ;)



"Ah-- ah." (Look down; pinch the bridge of our nose a moment.) "Yes."

Speak soft. "I don't deny... I need the Thorntons behind me. Even if not for my own-- suspicions-- I need soldiers that aren't beholden to the old war machine. The old war machine is obsolete, and it's getting people killed with its obsolescence. I need your family to break the mold."

...

"I'll back you up. Defend you from your own, if I must. The only thing... if your father is to die, you must be the one to kill him. Emma's little love for the man, but for me to slaughter him on your behalf-- it would cause her pain despite. It must be you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 30, 2020, 10:23:24 pm
Unrelated to current events, but I looked up on a whim the word "Empyreal". It's used for a couple different things, but its original meaning is thus: "of the Empyrean"-- "of the highest heaven." The word draws its origins from an old Greek term: "ἔμπυρος", or "in the fire".

Fire.

Coincidence? Deliberate linguistic choice? I dunno, but it's a nice little detail on the part of the GM. ;)



"Ah-- ah." (Look down; pinch the bridge of our nose a moment.) "Yes."

Speak soft. "I don't deny... I need the Thorntons behind me. Even if not for my own-- suspicions-- I need soldiers that aren't beholden to the old war machine. The old war machine is obsolete, and it's getting people killed with its obsolescence. I need your family to break the mold."

...

"I'll back you up. Defend you from your own, if I must. The only thing... if your father is to die, you must be the one to kill him. Emma's little love for the man, but for me to slaughter him on your behalf-- it would cause her pain despite. It must be you."

he already mentioned this
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 12:25:48 am
Definitely a deliberate choice I think, nice catch.  A combination, maybe?

"You don't have the influence to coerce your father into that, or otherwise convince him to agree, without replacing him entirely?  I'm sure you have your loyalists."

"But if you would prefer to replace him..."
“I will be your backup...”


...Defend you from your own, if I must. The only thing... if your father is to die, you must be the one to kill him. Emma's little love for the man, but for me to slaughter him on your behalf-- it would cause her pain despite. It must be you."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on March 31, 2020, 04:55:53 am
Definitely a deliberate choice I think, nice catch.  A combination, maybe?

"You don't have the influence to coerce your father into that, or otherwise convince him to agree, without replacing him entirely?  I'm sure you have your loyalists."

"But if you would prefer to replace him..."
“I will be your backup...”


...Defend you from your own, if I must. The only thing... if your father is to die, you must be the one to kill him. Emma's little love for the man, but for me to slaughter him on your behalf-- it would cause her pain despite. It must be you."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 01:41:37 pm
"Over half my loyalists are dead, Pheobe. On your orders." There's a touch of fire within William's voice as he looks at you, frowning. "And that's all I want, anyway. I'll kill him myself."

"Thank you." With a crooked grin, he continues, "I wouldn't have it any other way. I owe him much."

"Let us now speak of treason?" Wiliam opines, looking over at you, a slight mocking in his voice over your choice of words.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 01:59:06 pm
"Indeed.  How are you planning on challenging your father?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 02:06:26 pm
"I meant your own, Pheobe." William responds, with a twisted grin, "How will you challenge your's?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 02:08:03 pm
Good question... we do need a plan for this.  Any ideas?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 02:11:00 pm
There is something wrong with the way this war is being fought.

Insects cant be killed by the laser guns, only the abominations.  But most of the abominations, at least the most dangerous ones, are soldiers who had lasguns.

The tactics seem to be feeding the horde.  We never saw the tactics up close before but now it can be certain the ones they are using are terrible.

We can not feel guilty over all the deaths but we can not ignore it.

Why is artillery so poorly used.  Why do they not have advanced communications, even just short range radio.

If the insects create the [demons] though nesting how many more might be out there behind the front lines?

That wasn't the king of the dead, that was an infant.

We need better weapons, something that can fire an entire lasgun blast worth of energy like an automatic rifle if we power it or a man portable tank energy cannon.  One of those blades but much larger and heavier, since we can use it.

I think a key thing while we are healing is to get every general and advisors together and go over new battle plans.  And execute any who do not agree to follow the new plans.

Voidslayer's post on the matter, since he is en-absentia.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 02:16:08 pm
"Before we arrive at the defensive lines, we will gather all of the city-state's high-ranking generals and advisors to discuss a change in battle plans, specifically stopping attrition warfare, which I believe is just feeding the plague.  Any that refuse will be forced into... 'retirement,' let's say."

"From there, with new generals, perhaps Thorntons, it will be a simpler matter to consolidate power and see to a soft or hard coup."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 31, 2020, 04:07:50 pm
"Before we arrive at the defensive lines, we will gather all of the city-state's high-ranking generals and advisors to discuss a change in battle plans, specifically stopping attrition warfare, which I believe is just feeding the plague.  Any that refuse will be forced into... 'retirement,' let's say."

"From there, with new generals, perhaps Thorntons, it will be a simpler matter to consolidate power and see to a soft or hard coup."

+1 yeah, our previous choice of wording was pretty bad
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 05:11:23 pm
"I can bring fifty Thornton warmachines to that meeting for you." William volunteers, "And unaugmented soldiers as well. You should speak to your captain of your guard. They're well trained, from what I can see."

"You might have to be concerned about their loyalty." He shrugs a shoulder, rising from his prone position and bringing his rifle to bear on the target once more. He squints, giving the Crusader Armorer a command, which is reluctantly followed, "Armorer-- turn off the lights."

Your eyes adjust rapidly to the darkness, able to focus on the target that lies in front of William. You aren't able to tell a difference. "How will you secure their loyalty after they leave the meeting?" He questions, taking a shot that gouges a chunk from the plastic target's neck. "I mean, its fairly easy to say something to save your skin, and then decide against it later." The rifle hisses, and William waits patiently, lowering his voice, "Maybe we should make Emma stay at the Thornton estate, during this attempt, so they lose all leverage on you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 05:15:53 pm
"I've learned my lesson on that front.  Emma will stay by my side during this meeting, as I believe she does wield considerable influence with the Crusaders through her employment, and thus it will be helpful to have her on hand.  I will personally protect her from harm."

"As for securing loyalty, I will probably give the highest positions to members of my personal guard, who I know to be loyal.  If necessary, however, there is always the option to perform a blood transfusion."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 06:31:32 pm
[3]"...what's that mean, Pheobe?" William asks, glancing over his shoulder. Suddenly the room feels too small for the two of you, his willpower whipping up and around him all at once, and you're once again face to face with another predator. He's tense suddenly, a fire all too familiar gleaming in his eyes. You wonder if this is jealousy or the rebellion of an angry creation.

He lowers the gun, turning to face you in the dark. You feel yourself tensing in turn, ready for a fight as he keeps eye contact with you. "Pheobe. What do -you- mean by that?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 06:34:03 pm
Oh shit...

Focus our will and send it out towards him.  "I just mean that we can gift others with our strength.  However, if it bothers you, I will refrain from doing that."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 31, 2020, 06:44:18 pm
Oh shit...

Focus our will and send it out towards him.  "I just mean that we can gift others with our strength.  However, if it bothers you, I will refrain from doing that."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 06:48:57 pm
Seriously, this blood transfusion thing is bad news.

Grin wide. Let our will rise in defiance. "Only you, hm? Fair enough."
"You're right, of course. Godhood is not to be thrown away so lightly."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 06:57:55 pm
[6] William and you stand against each other, and while you know you're stronger than him, he holds his own. Both of you are distracted, momentarily, by the Crusader Armorer dropping to the ground. You both glance his way to find him unconscious, still breathing. Then your gazes snap together once more. You notice William shivering, but he doesn't back down. For some reason, you're reminded of looking in a mirror.

"..." William relaxes a little, turning back to the range. "For a moment, Alphira, I was worried your 'blood' might be a control mechanism. I think that would make me very mad. Very mad. I apologize for reacting defensively."

[1][8 vs 1] The rifle swings around wide, the shot following the swing, but you're already ducking down, tackling William to the ground with your shoulder. You draw out your cutter hilt in one smooth motion and hover it above his neck, the short blade singing away the top of his uniform, your's as well. You sit atop him, keeping him pinned, and he laughs. "I was actually trying to kill you. You don't control me. Good. Sorry Pheobe, I had to be sure."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 07:00:52 pm
"...of course.  Your support is important to me.  Now that we've established that, can I count on your continued aid?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 31, 2020, 07:16:25 pm
"...of course.  Your support is important to me.  Now that we've established that, can I count on your continued aid?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 07:18:57 pm
"Of course." William states, looking up at you. "Now get off of me before Emma walks in and gets jealous." You hesitate, then rise. You offer him your hand, and he takes it with a grin, helping himself up. He looks a little smug as he examines the cracked rifle and you turn the cutter blade off. He starts towards the armory, before pausing by the unconscious armorer. "What happened to him?" He asks, nudging the man with his boot.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 07:27:50 pm
Heh, I misunderstood the situation there. That wasn't new William angry at the thought of somebody else sharing his power-- that was old William, afraid we'd put him in some kind of mind lock. No wonder he wheeled on us.

Also, we have a knockout ability now. Beautiful.



"I think... we overwhelmed him. Pushing at each others' wills that way. I've never done that before."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 07:28:59 pm
Heh, I misunderstood the situation there. That wasn't new William angry at the thought of somebody else sharing his power-- that was old William, afraid we'd put him in a mind lock. No wonder he wheeled on us.

Also, we have a knockout ability now. Beautiful.



"I think... we overwhelmed him. Pushing at each others' wills that way. I've never done that before."
+1. Take him to medical.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 07:38:39 pm
"...have you ever tried before?" William asks, watching you lift the Crusader Armorer to your shoulders in a rough fireman's carry. He sets the broken gun down on the weapon exchange stoop, positioning it in such a way that the liquid coolant drips out on to the floor. No help is offered as you head outside of the darkened room, towards the general medical bay.

"No." You admit, after some hesitation.

"That's powerful, if it works on everybody." William says. "I've...noticed some changes in regard to how people treat me. Before the transfusion, that armorer wouldn't give me the time of day. Everything was paperwork, I had to have a permission slip from Emma, blah blah blah. When the changes finally kicked in...he started acting nicer to me. Helping me out. Letting me use guns without a form. That kind of thing. Nothing major, of course."

"Maybe it only works with the two of us. Our collective field pushing at one another causing him to black out." He finally offers, as he splits off from you. "See you on the ship."

You arrive in medical and deposit the Crusader Armorer to a medic. He's going to be okay, just fainting, you're assured. They ask what happened, and you gloss over the important parts.

You have three hours before Emma and you are to go out on the town.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 07:49:35 pm
Maybe take another attempt at checking on the armor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 08:29:53 pm
"Maybe. Alphira probably knows."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 08:30:55 pm
[12 vs 7] You heave a sigh of reluctance that confuses the medic, and excuse yourself. Every step towards McFee's workshop drags on. Maybe its because you're literally dragging yourself to do this. Regardless, you greet McFee cheerfully, and reach out to touch the armor. You slip on the unbroken glove, then the damaged pieces.

[16] You activate the needles, and the armor awakens. You start feeling hungry, and the armor begins to creak, fusing together the faults and damages. The breaks and damages seal in it, slowly filling with the black metal before gold overcomes it. You see no marks, and remove the mended pieces. You keep a glove on, ignoring that mixed feeling of disgust and comfort it radiates.

[Good Local Afternoon Sadil-- Sadil. You have abnormal readings within your processing and identity cores.]

And with one final sigh, you embrace yourself, allowing the information you know as fact to flow into you. Acknowledging what you were trying to hide. There's something wrong with you. You feel it in your bones. Pulsing pain that nothing can dampen.


W͛ͤ̓̀ͭ̓͏̪̳h̶̡̲̖ͭ̈́̽ͮ̎̀ā̸̡͎̮̫̘̥̠͎̖̩̋̓͒ͨ̑t͚̣̼̪͆ͬ̆̆.̌̍̾̄ͩ̽̈͟͡҉̦̞͚̬̥̘̩.͓̼̥͕͕̗͉͍̣͊ͯ̊̓͊̿́͞.̨̹͕̣̠̼͓̜̩̭̔ͭ͢w̧̹͓ͪͪ̋͢h̶͖̰̥̻̤͖ͮ̈́͒̋ͬ̑ͦá̳̲̟̪͔̤̕͡t̸̴̛̺̜̼̫̉̂ ̤̫̞̳͛͗ͥ̄̀i͕̥͓̻̼͆ͨͩͬ̇͋̆ͪͨś̟̦̠̝͓̝̹͚ͥ͂͒ͯͅ ̛̙̒̐̓̈̎t̟̺͂̄̍ͩ͘͢h͇̗͍̣̳̞̜ͯͦ̉̒́̔ͦ͜i̪͈̗̺̳̱̋̄ͩͥͭ͊̀͠s̫̼͋ͣͣ̆ͩ̊ͤͬ͜.͆ͦ̓̏͒͏̜͎͎ ̨͚̪̬̫̗̹ͭ̅ͫͪ̇̈̆͝͝ͅP͖̱̼̣̪̱̭̈̏ͧ̍̍̀ả̵͊̐̌ͨ͆͌̚͢ͅt̴̸̻̖̰͙̫̝̦̃̊̋̅ͅc͓͙̰̝͙ͬͤ͠h̭͇͚̉͐̍ͧ̾ͦ͊͐̽e͕̦̜̠̞̤̾͋͒̉ͣ̿̎ͧs͉̖̳̥̼̓̌͗̎ͨ̓̋ͭ̇?̡̹̀̊ͣ




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 08:33:20 pm
[Determine the extent of the infection.]

How nice.  The plague left us a parting gift.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 31, 2020, 08:37:28 pm
deleted, forgot to check status
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 08:38:04 pm
Take a look at the status:

Y̴̳̜͙̳̘̦͈̳͉̣̪̟̮̱͕͚͉͍̽̉̃̂͋͂ơͦ͗ͦ̆͒̇̅̽̅̇̑ͩͣ̓̎ͫ͊̇҉̵̣͓̫͉̤̥̦͜u̟͇̤̱̰̜̭͖͍̫̣̯̒́ͮ̓̊͊͜ ̨̛̛͓͉̻͎̜͕̣̲̆̈̊ͦ̓͋̿ͤ͐ā̸̢͍̰̦͖ͮ̋͌ͯ̍ͧ͆̇̈̀ͧ͢͟ͅr̛͆ͪ̾ͨ͑̄̂͛̋̏̂ͧͩͫ͘͡͏̥͕̼̼͇̪̦͢e̷̡̪̣͉̳̟̲͇̝͖ͫ͛͌̃̀̽ͬͪ̆͡ͅͅ ̸̶̙̲͚̤̹̼̥͂̏͆̋̍͛ͩ͊͋̍ͣ͑ͪ̆̚i̢ͨͥͦͥ͊̑͝҉҉͈̥̬̥̫̞̞̻̣ņ̶̸̠͔̔ͥ̾̑̎ͨ͐̽́́ͅf̴̫̺͖̭͔͍͕̟̟̟̟̓̾͋ͪ͋̏ͥ̑͘͟͟͞ͅe̸͊ͨͮ̋͂̎ͩ̉͒͏̡͔͈̩̼̗͙̘̰͠ͅç̧̛̝͎͎͖͈͈͖̘͍͕͙̦͚̭̫͉̣̑ͣ̊͌̇̏͗ͬ̄̑̄̊́͘ṭ̵̣̲̝̻̟͓̲͍̤̩̳̲̤̱̻̱̣̒ͨͬ̂̃ͧ̎ͥͪ͒̆̿̾̇ͫ̑͊ͮ́̚̕e̴̦̪̹̣̠̰̻̟͎̻̭̠̮̥̙̟̯ͥ̆͑̐́͐̾͛ͥ̐̍͂͞d̵̷̫̘̩̥̗͇̤͙̦̤̱̠̠͙̩̩̬̲̲͌͆̌͛̔̒̿̋ͣ́͞.̧ͯ̓̀ͩ͗̈́̈́̀ͥ͆͌̿͐̚͡͏͖͉̖̟̫̙̹̺͔̟̲̞̠
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 08:50:55 pm
Aw no

[Determine the extent of the infection.]

+1

P̷̨͑̈́͜l̸̙̘̮̟̘̝͚̉̔͐͒̅͘a̴͉͈͇͓̟̭͊ḡ̵̲̈u̶͚̝͊̀͒̑̐ę̴̜̗̪̣̝̃.̶̟̣̩͑͜
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 31, 2020, 08:54:33 pm
Aw no

[Determine the extent of the infection.]

+1

P̷̨͑̈́͜l̸̙̘̮̟̘̝͚̉̔͐͒̅͘a̴͉͈͇͓̟̭͊ḡ̵̲̈u̶͚̝͊̀͒̑̐ę̴̜̗̪̣̝̃.̶̟̣̩͑͜

While trying to determine the state, attempt healing. Try to figure out if the infection is mostly in one part or if it is spread out
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 09:08:16 pm
N̵͙o̗̙ͅ.̨̫̣̦̟


W̴̳̭h̳̰̤͕̩̰͜at̠̙̣̟ ̺͇t̛ḫ̘e̴̞͇͙ ̡͉̞̝̖fu̹̺̥͉̕c̸̥k̺̞͈̲ ̬̤̮̥͉̠̤w̝̦h̡̼͙̭̘e̻̠̦ͅr̡͓̪͈͎e̴̤̙̟͕ ̨̻̻͚̰̯̝ͅy͈͓̦o̮̪͈̼̩u̳͕̺͍ ̲̯̹̠͔͔ḱ̳͙̙͈͚͔̘e̠͎e͓̯p̟̝̻͓͘i̴̯͇͔͈ṉ̨̖g̪̰͖̭͜ ̷f̠̬̬͖͕̀ͅṟ̸̼̣̠̘̰ͅọ͓͕̤͉m̮̫̜͇̭̳̤ ҉̦̖̲̪͙ͅu͈s̙ ̡P̺͓at̢͔͍͇̣̰c͖͙̥̝h̼̱e̠̝͝s̘̪̳̦̰͞?̯̲̜̮̮̲͜!̖̤̠̠̪̳


You drop to the floor, like a puppet with cut strings.

P̴͉̠̫̭ͅr̨̘̞̪̞͖̯̥ị̷ó̠͔̜͙͖r͖̦̫̻̻i̬̩̤͖̠̱͟ͅt̝͇͘y̧͓͔͕͎̩͇͕:̼̳͕̳̜̗C͚͙̲͖o̱̮͡n͏t̤̪̩͎̮ḭn̖̯̺̩̯̣u͖e͙̬d̛̲̟̘̟̟̮͈ ͍̣̯̣̖͍S̴̗͕̦͙̲̣̯u̫̟̲r̷̜̦͓v̧̬͍̬͎i̸̭͎ͅv͙͕̙̫̤̻a̜͖l̪̗.̛̪0̱̙͚̠0̞̙̦̞̘͎
͟N̻e̢̜̹r͕̯̦̝̮v̗͈̼̗͞ͅo̸u̺̖̲s̭̮͈̱̻̗ ̙̲̼s͈̖͚̜y̗͙͕̩̺s̶̯̮͕̪̘̗͇t̲͇̹ẹ̟m̤͍̺̤̺̺̟ ̞s͖̲h̪̦̗u̗͔̪͖t͕ͅd͡o̠̤̩̫̖͉w̧͙ṇ̺ ̬͙įn͈̱͚̬͍i҉̩t̬͔͉̪i͈̞͎̮̕ͅa̭̻͙̻̙t̶̫e̶̗d͙̕.̘̫͞0͙͡0͢


 Consciousness fades.



[20]A pulse in the dark. Similiar. Not similar. Creation. Hunger. Loneliness. Echoes of long-dead kin. Last screams--Hunger. Sacrifice? Yes, enhanced creation. Fire. Burning fire. Then silence. No sustenance. Weeping in the dark, still distant. Emotions. Hunger.

Search for the similar presence?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 09:09:55 pm
Uh... yes?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 09:17:31 pm
Definitely yes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 09:31:18 pm
Blood released. Hunger. Hunger. Hunger. Fire. Fire. Fire. More. More of you--sharpness. A pain. N0. N0! So clos- pain! Pain! Darkness. Nononono0-0-nnnnno



Emma is curled next to you on the bed, with a sheen of sweat drying on her skin. She sleeps peacefully, embracing you in your flinching, shifting state without conscious thought. She's warm. Some of the only warmth you can truly feel. You brush a strand of hair from her face with your gloved hand. You drift back to sleep, comforted.

Until something brushes your's from your face. Your eyes shoot open as you tense-- and you force yourself to relax. Barbs of silver metal twist tightly around your neck, and you can feel the edges of the blade.  Trying not to look at the blood that blooms on Emma's pale flesh. She sags against you, still breathing. You shift, trying to free your hand.

Only to realize your body will not move. Outside, beyond the gash in your wall, the Holy City burns. A silhouette of some monstrous shape worming through. Screams. Fire. Smoke. Blood--

Snip. You wish you could scream from the pain-- your leg is removed with surgically precise jaws, right above the knee. Something crunches it down in the dark. Then, a sharp blade is pressed into your chest. Slowly, agonizingly slowly--Emma smiles with a lamprey's teeth as she slowly forces a tentacled blade into your heart.

I̧҉͏̫̘͉͍͇̰̭'̣̯͇̻͘l̡̥̫͕̗̘͕̗̹̮l͈͔̲͢ ̙̞͖̱̙͇͍͇͚s̛̗̲̳e̹͉͍̻̬͕͍͙̙͞e̵͙̺̙̖̝̖͜ ҉̰̜̱̻̕y̶̸̟͈̖͖̹̗o̦̺̻̘̫͍̩͎u҉̖̲̟̕͝ ̧̛̞͇̰̝̘͍͘à͚̥̥͜ǵ̣͚̭͈̪́͞a̛͉̖͔̦̘̮͜i̸̡̲͉n̗̙̣̣̫͔̥͈ͅ.͇̪̳͘

Your willpower surges with the slowing of your heart. Your fingers respond with twitches in your gloved hand to your commands.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 09:35:29 pm
[Lucile, what is your status?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 09:39:58 pm
[Active, Ī̸̠̭̻̳͓̥̩̮̂'̶̨̧͖̱̹̹̹ͦͦ̌ͩl̩͖͓͚̹̞͚̻̏̃̓͌͌͗̾ͯ̕͢l̡̜̙̘̜͈͚̎̏̇̊ ̮̯̣̰̎̽͂ͩ̐̎͆s̝̟̣̰͇̉͊͆ͯ͡͞͡e̽҉̗͓̘̝̯̪͕ͅẻ̳̩̑̋ͩ̅͞ ̨̤̺̹͒ͣ̂̎̽̃̎̿̃̕ȳ͏͕̮̖̠̞͢ȏ͇̥̂̍̚u̡͖̪̟̰͎ͧ͐͛ͮ͊̋͡ͅ ̸̶̣̰͇͉̖̞̼̓̐̈́ͩ́ͣ͂̅a̟̹ͣͦ̃̽͂ͧ̚͜g̞̖̽̔͆͡a̳̲̲̹̼̜̳͉̟ͯͭ͆ͤ̊̐͝i͎͍̼͙̲͛̔͝n̷̵̮͈ͮ͌͒̀̈͋.́̌ͮͨ̅͑̃͛͑҉͓̗͍̠̟͚͕̰̯, Dear Pheobe.] It responds in a flash, as you begin to twist and thrash against your bonds, feeling the thorns of steel cut deeper into your flesh, as Emma sinks the blade deeper into your chest. Your heart is beating against it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 09:42:21 pm
[Disengage]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 09:42:54 pm
[Disengage]
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 09:43:49 pm
[Goodnight, Pheobe.] The glove loosens on your hand as the blade sinks deeper. Blood begins to drip from your mouth. You can feel your heart stop beating.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 09:45:27 pm
Good grief.

"Ḩ̸͔̥̫̫͐̈͘e̸͙̞̭͙̻̍͊̿́̕l̷̡̛͇̟͗͂̇p̷̦͈̣͚̒̒̒͂͝-̶͇̥̹̝̏-̵̝͂ ̴̡̭̭̦́͛͒̒m̶̛̮͌́e̶̟̒-̵͔͖̯͒̽-̶̲̀͌"
Ḩ̸͔̥̫̫͐̈͘e̸͙̞̭͙̻̍͊̿́̕l̷̡̛͇̟͗͂̇p̷̦͈̣͚̒̒̒͂͝-̶͇̥̹̝̏-̵̝͂ ̴̡̭̭̦́͛͒̒m̶̛̮͌́e̶̟̒-̵͔͖̯͒̽-̶̲̀͌

Healing Surge. Reject the armor by force.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 09:46:33 pm
Good grief.

Healing Surge. Reject the armor by force.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 09:52:49 pm
Your wounds begin to fade, your other hand pulling the glove off. But-- Emma is shaking you, concerned, even as tentacles rip into her flesh, blood pouring from her wounds-- even as she tries to impale you. You choke out a painful scream, your heart twitching and pulsing weakly as you cough more and more blood from the punctured lung.

[20] She tumbles away from you when you push her over the edge of the bed, feeling the dagger rip itself from your chest to follow her down.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 09:54:02 pm
Get a hold of yourself.  Reject these hallucinations.  Focus on the pain.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 10:07:12 pm
Get a hold of yourself.  Reject these hallucinations.  Focus on the pain.

+1

P̵r̷o̶t̷e̸c̶t̸ ̴m̷e̸
P̵͉̲͔̔̓r̴̥̐̈́̾e̴͖͔̳̔̒̀s̴̜͉̝̎̌̈́̿͜e̴̟̟̟̭̽͜ř̵͍̮̥̫v̷͎̭͈̓͝e̷̢̙͙͝ ̵̛͔̗̩͛m̵͕̭̀̀e̶̡̢̹̙͒̕

Healing Surge.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 10:19:22 pm
Damnit. I was hoping you'd use inferno!



I̧҉͏̫̘͉͍͇̰̭'̣̯͇̻͘l̡̥̫͕̗̘͕̗̹̮l͈͔̲͢ ̙̞͖̱̙͇͍͇͚s̛̗̲̳e̹͉͍̻̬͕͍͙̙͞e̵͙̺̙̖̝̖͜ ҉̰̜̱̻̕y̶̸̟͈̖͖̹̗o̦̺̻̘̫͍̩͎u҉̖̲̟̕͝ ̧̛̞͇̰̝̘͍͘à͚̥̥͜ǵ̣͚̭͈̪́͞a̛͉̖͔̦̘̮͜i̸̡̲͉n̗̙̣̣̫͔̥͈ͅ.͇̪̳͘

[15] Emma stands beside the bed, clutching a sheet to her, staring at you with wide eyes. You're intact, with no wounds, no injures, certainly no blade in your chest. Your heart is beating hard, breath coming in gulps, despite the lack of a need. Your knuckles are white as you clutch the sheet of your bed tightly. Your stomach aches with hunger, and your body aches oddly. Not a bad ache, but one that makes you feel more alive than ever. You shiver in the night, nothing to do with the temperature.

"Ph-Pheobe?" Emma stutters, settling a distance away from you, back on the bed. "Are you okay now?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 10:23:31 pm
Yeah, that would absolutely have been a disaster.

"Emma, I'm so sorry.  What... what happened?  The last thing I remember is putting on my armor."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- I͙͍̰͎̼n̪͙͙̘fec̵̜t̼̣̟̼̘i͏̞͎̲͎̘o̻̻̤͓͡n̰̬͚̖̘̳.̗͕͎R
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 10:34:00 pm
I was hoping you'd use inferno!

Wot, so we'd incinerate our one friend in the world? Not happening.

"Think so-- think so-- I-- I--"
This was terrifying. Take a moment.

...


"Emma, I'm so sorry.  What... what happened?  The last thing I remember is putting on my armor."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 10:40:08 pm
That was my hope. Shame.

[17] "We..." Emma states, letting the tension release from her shaking form. It takes her just a little to regain control of her emotions, but she does. "I came and got you from the medical bay. You passed out in McFee's workshop. You had the glove on. But you were fine! Awkward, and cute and...we bought clothes for tomorrow-- today. We had dinner. We had...dessert. Then you were thrashing and twitching in your sleep. Then you started screaming. You pushed me off the bed..." She gives you a slightly hurt look at that, but it's gone in an instant, replaced by concern, by care. She focuses on you, leaning over to wrap her arms around you.

"Did you have a nightmare?" She, like so many things she does, understates beautifully.

...Mother--the VOID told me to keep it a secret from you. I-I- didn't know...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 10:44:27 pm
Phoebe, we need to have a talk.  We can't help you if you lie to us.

"The worst nightmare I have ever had.  Someone was stabbing me to death."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on March 31, 2020, 10:48:56 pm
Phoebe, we need to have a talk.  We can't help you if you lie to us.

"The worst nightmare I have ever had.  Someone was stabbing me to death."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 11:16:39 pm
"...oh." Emma briefly looks disappointed but continues to cuddle up against you, letting you have your silence while providing comfort. Or maybe she's trying to fall back asleep. It doesn't matter, she's there, holding you close.

[1] S̷̼̯̤̭o̥ t̸̰̪̺͈̺͖̞h̭͖̗̺̝̰͘a̤̮͈t͝ ̶y̵̙̺̦͍̙͚ͅò̟̙u ̘͇̺̟̟̜̺͟c͝a̴̯͎̱͕͉̞n͟ ͎͇̠͔̹̣p̸a͕͖̼͠ṋ̛̙̪̳i̙̳͔̮̺̬c̥̩͉͔͇͖̻?̬̲̗̟
T͖͇̥h̥͓̩̺̯͖͡ḙ̠̤ ̵̯͖̺I͚͕͇͇͓̹n͈f̻̫͇̯͚e̻̹͍c̸̯t̪͙̭͉͔̹i̬͇̝͇̤̕o̦̝̯͍̫ǹ̫̻̦̦͙̱ ͔̹̖̗̙i͈͈̙͕s̻̲̝̥ ͕̱͈̣b̨̘̩͉e̼̪i̧̠͚̙̟̮͚̭n̘̞͕̰͉̙g̠̮͉͕͓ ͇̻͕̘͕̞̤̀pu̟̤̘͍r̨͚̝͍̗̰̹ͅg̴̙è̩̮d̴ ̭͘f͖̯̰̥̥ͅr̛̳͎̯̱o͉̪͎͈ͅm ̼̩̳̦͇ţ̲͓̪̘h̖̪̜̮͢ͅe҉̝̱͕̥̮̬ d̘̭͝e̠̟̠s͔̙̯͉̰͍i̟̱̥̠͡ͅg̩͍̤̖͚̫ǹ͓̘̺ͅa̵t̟̗i҉o͟ṉ̪́ ͍͎̙̳͚̼̠͡[̴͕̮͕̲Al҉p̦h̛͚͙̮̣i̟͞r̛͎̙̪͍a̰͎̠̗̲̺͎]̵̰'̮̦s̥̬̬͙̮ ͉̣̣͕t̨̝ ̯̦̀P͈̼̙̀e̤r̙̻̠̪s̼o͉̻̙n̙̖͙̼͙a͔̙̜̺̬̲l̰̙͡i̠̘͍̩̜͍̦͝t̠͇͓͎̮ͅy̡͕̰̦͎̫ ̳̥̮͚̜͈̥C̥͔̀o̥̗̰r̡͉̥̫̜e̡̜̞ͅ.
Ý̮̰̗͔̪ó̦̪u̧͔̭ l͎̟̥͓͎͍a̞͕̱̞̼c̛̤̞̭̠ḵ̡̮ ̼̞̙͉͇͔͙t̲̱̯̖r̗̣̹͔̬͉͠u̜̘̕s̱̮͙̀t̵͎͕̩ ̩̬̳in ̥̭̠̣͉ͅm̳e̳̝ͅ.͜
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on March 31, 2020, 11:22:18 pm
"thank you"

I don't know you. You say I'm your-- mother?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 11:28:05 pm
Apparently, you lack trust in us.  Withholding information will cause panic, not prevent it.  Emma could have died.

((The italics voice is Phoebe and the Zalgo text is the VOID.  "Mother" is a common term in this setting.  Remember that many characters called Phoebe "Mother" during her training.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 31, 2020, 11:29:50 pm
B̙͠i̥o͏̦͕͖̹̗̥ͅl̷͙͔͈o̴͈g̫͘íc̜̻̝͉a̹̺̖̳͎͚̟͞l̹̝̣̀l̤͕̞͉̪̹y͙̙̜̦,̭̗̀ ̳̠f̵͉̫̙̘a̭l̴̺̜͖̩̦͚̦s͈͕͉̻e.̩̬
̴̝̙D̥͖̯̙͎̥e̢͎͉̗͍̜ṣ̡̠̹ig̨̰n̙̯̖͠a͏t̸͇̘̙̗̞̖̗i̥͝o̝̦̪͖̞͟n ̳͇̬̞͙͓'̬̬̺̖ͅP̸͕͎a̪͔͉̠t͎̪̮̬̹̯̮̀c͏̮̝̠̬͔̟̖h̛̰̖e̶s̵̩͖̹'̹̭̤̜,̹̩̖͈͖ͅ ͔̫̪̮̙͟i̬̰͈̤s̛͔ ̛̬̼͇m͓y͍̲̙̪͇̠͟ c̠̞̭̣̭r̯̰ͅe̶̙̱a̱̣͖̩ͅt̢̺̘͉͎̳͚̤i̞̬̫͡o͍̙̜͖̲ͅn̴̦̳̜͓̱.̗̥̻͖ M̺̼̣͡y̛̯͇̗̥̺̫ ̱'͏͍͇͙̝̝̟̻d̺̰a̡u̥̖̦̟̻͢g̷̝h͚t͏͎͙ȩr̝̣̼͔̪̥'̞̤̗̤̯̀.̲̬͍͓̙͝ A̠̝ ̛͖̝̰f̦͓̻̰i͕̟x̧̺͔̗̟e̛̖̪d͎͓͚͡ ̢̲̩͇͓͈͖p̩o҉͖͕̮̘i̫̗̗n͜ț̻̹̳̼̬͖ ͕̩f̦̟͓͎͠o̖r҉͍̭̼̥ ̮̙̰͕̼͍͈h͎e̼r͔͍̙ ͚̪̰̝̮e̼̥͚ͅx̰̫̞̲̥̗ͅi͙͖̠̻̟ͅs͕̭͍̠̩̥͇͘t̲͜e̴̖̙nc̹e̶̺̪̭͕͕̼̰.̠̤̣͕̲͔͜
Y҉̦̠͙o̘̭u̳͉͖͔̘͉̞ ̜͉̯̠̣ͅa̧̘͍̬̹͔r̮̻̪̯ḛ ͇̻͚̣̲f̼̞̝̙ͅr̬̝͚̞a̭͉̦̰͖̼ģ͉͖̝̮m̖̺̖̹̜͚͟ͅe̦̯̩̬̼̤ṇ̴̹̺͎̗̹t̬̩̞̯͇͍ͅs̛̮ͅ ͚̣o̞̙̜̹͙ͅf̜̥ t̹͉̠͉̳h̶o̙̟̠̗s̘̘͉͚̺e͚͉̖ ̗̳̖̮b̰̕ef̳͖̗͕͙̲͟o͙̳͕̭̤̭r̭̖͙e̮̠̠̟,͍ ͚͇̞̖̮ͅr̛̥̻͓͇̣ęt̩á̮̭i̺̬̦n͇͎͉͔͇̳̜e͇͈̮ͅd ̘͘b̹̗̱y̵̦̦ ͇͇̜͇̼ṃ̖̻͓̫̥̳͘e̸͔̱̪̬͖ ͏̮̫̘͓̙f̢̰̱̙̬̟o҉͉̖͚̼r ͖̺ͅf̷ų͍̤̱t̲͙̪̳̕u͙͕̜̰͖̬͖͠r͉͍͟e̛͉ ̭̣u̮̞̟͎s̜̗̼̯̳ͅe̛̮̲͚͍͎̣.̦̲͡


You're uncomfortable with such frank words and shift a little closer to the warmth of Emma. To your refute, she says nothing, leaving you in silence. Eventually, Emma falls back asleep, but you do not, instead sitting awake in bed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on March 31, 2020, 11:39:23 pm
H̴o̶w̶ ̶c̴a̴n̶ ̴m̸u̴l̸t̵i̵p̶l̸e̵ ̵p̴e̷r̶s̷o̶n̶a̸l̵i̵t̷i̴e̴s̶ ̸c̵o̵-̸e̶x̸i̷s̷t̶ ̵i̷f̶ ̸w̵e̶ ̸h̵i̸d̴e̶ ̸t̵h̴i̶n̵g̷s̴ ̵f̴r̵o̸m̸ ̵o̸n̵e̵ ̷a̶n̴o̷t̸h̶e̷r̷?̵ ̸ ̶I̴f̵ ̴y̵o̸u̴ ̶w̷a̸n̵t̸ ̴c̶o̵o̶p̵e̸r̸a̶t̴i̷o̸n̵,̷ ̷w̷h̵a̸t̶'̶s̶ ̴b̷e̵s̷t̸ ̵f̵o̴r̶ ̸P̴a̸t̷c̸h̴e̶s̸,̸ ̴y̸o̸u̶ ̶w̶i̶l̷l̶ ̸n̶e̸e̴d̸ ̸t̸o̸ ̴b̸e̶ ̵m̸o̸r̸e̸ ̶t̶r̷a̸n̶s̶p̷a̸r̴e̸n̷t̷.̸
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 01, 2020, 06:49:30 am
H̴o̶w̶ ̶c̴a̴n̶ ̴m̸u̴l̸t̵i̵p̶l̸e̵ ̵p̴e̷r̶s̷o̶n̶a̸l̵i̵t̷i̴e̴s̶ ̸c̵o̵-̸e̶x̸i̷s̷t̶ ̵i̷f̶ ̸w̵e̶ ̸h̵i̸d̴e̶ ̸t̵h̴i̶n̵g̷s̴ ̵f̴r̵o̸m̸ ̵o̸n̵e̵ ̷a̶n̴o̷t̸h̶e̷r̷?̵ ̸ ̶I̴f̵ ̴y̵o̸u̴ ̶w̷a̸n̵t̸ ̴c̶o̵o̶p̵e̸r̸a̶t̴i̷o̸n̵,̷ ̷w̷h̵a̸t̶'̶s̶ ̴b̷e̵s̷t̸ ̵f̵o̴r̶ ̸P̴a̸t̷c̸h̴e̶s̸,̸ ̴y̸o̸u̶ ̶w̶i̶l̷l̶ ̸n̶e̸e̴d̸ ̸t̸o̸ ̴b̸e̶ ̵m̸o̸r̸e̸ ̶t̶r̷a̸n̶s̶p̷a̸r̴e̸n̷t̷.̸
I think Void is saying we haven’t been transparent. I kind of assumed that since all of us share the brain, the various minds can just see/hear thoughts of the others’ minds via the brain. Clearly this is incorrect.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 01, 2020, 09:07:37 am
Being completely transparent whit the voices in our head might not be such a good idea.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 12:50:25 pm
H̴o̶w̶ ̶c̴a̴n̶ ̴m̸u̴l̸t̵i̵p̶l̸e̵ ̵p̴e̷r̶s̷o̶n̶a̸l̵i̵t̷i̴e̴s̶ ̸c̵o̵-̸e̶x̸i̷s̷t̶ ̵i̷f̶ ̸w̵e̶ ̸h̵i̸d̴e̶ ̸t̵h̴i̶n̵g̷s̴ ̵f̴r̵o̸m̸ ̵o̸n̵e̵ ̷a̶n̴o̷t̸h̶e̷r̷?̵ ̸ ̶I̴f̵ ̴y̵o̸u̴ ̶w̷a̸n̵t̸ ̴c̶o̵o̶p̵e̸r̸a̶t̴i̷o̸n̵,̷ ̷w̷h̵a̸t̶'̶s̶ ̴b̷e̵s̷t̸ ̵f̵o̴r̶ ̸P̴a̸t̷c̸h̴e̶s̸,̸ ̴y̸o̸u̶ ̶w̶i̶l̷l̶ ̸n̶e̸e̴d̸ ̸t̸o̸ ̴b̸e̶ ̵m̸o̸r̸e̸ ̶t̶r̷a̸n̶s̶p̷a̸r̴e̸n̷t̷.̸
I think Void is saying we haven’t been transparent. I kind of assumed that since all of us share the brain, the various minds can just see/hear thoughts of the others’ minds via the brain. Clearly this is incorrect.

We never tried to deliberately withhold information from the VOID, but the VOID and Phoebe definitely did withhold information from us.  They just worked together to hide the fact that we were infected because they thought we would panic.  Personally, I don't want them to do that again because it almost resulted in Emma's death.

The VOID isn't saying we haven't been transparent.  Instead, it is saying that hiding information from us was justified.

Being completely transparent whit the voices in our head might not be such a good idea.

I'm just asking the VOID to not try to hide the fact that we are infected in the future.  That was information that was important for us to know, but it hid that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 01:55:24 pm
Oh-- o̶͎̿h̷̗̭̑.̴̠̊ ̵͍͗̽V̴̜͑͜͠O̸͙̒I̷̱͇͆̊Ḏ̵̡̌͊.̴͇̍͠  T̸h̷e̷n̸ ̵w̷h̸o̶ ̵w̷a̸s̴-̵-̸ ̵n̵o̴.̷ ̴I̷t̷ ̵d̸o̶e̶s̵n̶'̴t̸ ̷m̷a̶t̵t̵e̴r̴.̸

V̸O̷I̶D̵.̷.̶.̷


H̴o̶w̶ ̶c̴a̴n̶ ̴m̸u̴l̸t̵i̵p̶l̸e̵ ̵p̴e̷r̶s̷o̶n̶a̸l̵i̵t̷i̴e̴s̶ ̸c̵o̵-̸e̶x̸i̷s̷t̶ ̵i̷f̶ ̸w̵e̶ ̸h̵i̸d̴e̶ ̸t̵h̴i̶n̵g̷s̴ ̵f̴r̵o̸m̸ ̵o̸n̵e̵ ̷a̶n̴o̷t̸h̶e̷r̷?̵ ̸ ̶I̴f̵ ̴y̵o̸u̴ ̶w̷a̸n̵t̸ ̴c̶o̵o̶p̵e̸r̸a̶t̴i̷o̸n̵,̷ ̷w̷h̵a̸t̶'̶s̶ ̴b̷e̵s̷t̸ ̵f̵o̴r̶ ̸P̴a̸t̷c̸h̴e̶s̸,̸ ̴y̸o̸u̶ ̶w̶i̶l̷l̶ ̸n̶e̸e̴d̸ ̸t̸o̸ ̴b̸e̶ ̵m̸o̸r̸e̸ ̶t̶r̷a̸n̶s̶p̷a̸r̴e̸n̷t̷.̸

̴I̷ ̸c̴a̷n̸'̶t̷ ̴s̴t̵u̴m̷b̵l̴e̵ ̵o̵n̷ ̵s̸e̸c̵r̶e̵t̴s̵ ̷t̵h̴i̴s̶ ̶w̶a̶y̴ ̵a̵g̸a̴i̷n̴.̵ E̴v̷e̶r̵ ̷a̵g̵a̶i̷n̷. I̸̗̱̚ ̷̳͐c̴͇͋ǒ̵̦̈ū̴͎͔́l̵̢̓̕d̴̞̅ ̷̮̺̎̆ḧ̴̻́a̸̧̎̄v̸̧͒̕e̶͈͛̈ ̸̟̇b̶͓̓u̴͔͊̈́r̵̟̙̈́͑n̸̙͈̈́e̸̢͕͌d̵̛̞ ̵̻̘̈̽Ẽ̷̫̱m̴̪̥̄m̷͖͘͠a̸̫̻̕ ̵̣͗a̵̹̔l̴̩̤̈́ị̴̆v̴͇̦̀͊ê̴͓,̷͓̟̄̎ f̷i̵n̵d̴i̸n̷g̶ ̴o̷u̸t̵ ̷t̴h̷i̸s̸ ̷w̷a̴y̸.̸
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 01, 2020, 02:04:39 pm
N̺͈̬͓o̢̹͕̪̘ͅt̴̘̞e̼͝d͖̹̠̖͈͞ ͈̺̖͇̦̫͕f̢͔̻̠̺o͇r̘̬̞̥͓ ̷f̷̫̲̘̹͈̘͚u̳͕̪̻̘̩̫t̫̻͇͡ṷ͍͙͖̝̺̣r̮̦̟̼̞ͅẹ̘̱̱͜ ̼̦̝̳̼r͔̖͔͚̞̹͡e͇͔̦͖̗f͏̝̙̯̗̙̼̫e͉͕̜̦͇̲̯r̹̜̤en̴̬̯ͅc̯̮̺̪̗̜ͅẹ̶̞̹̞̬.͇

You zone out, staying awake as the time begins to pass more quickly for you. You keep careful, deep breaths, focusing on nothing in particular as you consciously drift in and out of reality. You feel odd at times, like there's something missing still.

A̧͚̝̯̤̰l͔p̷̘h̝i̳̗̱̤͎͡r͉͍̮̦͓a̙̜̞̰ ͍͢w̤͖̯͘i̗͈̪l͕̖͇̬͙̰ḷ̳ ̛͎b̙͝e̙̮̯̟̭͎͜ͅ ͝ẃ̼̠a̬̥̳̜ḵ̰̜i̢̟̠̩n͓g̨̟̼̘̦͈̹ ̤s̀o̭̠̰̞̟̩o̦̹͖̝ͅn͉̭̤̺.̭̜̬̤ͅ
̲͉̟̫̙̥V͙͎͎͈̭̯i̗̟̦̻̲͈ͅr̗̻̩̻̦͓̬u̱͎̝̩̲ͅs̴̭̱̬̝ ̭͉̙̝̞̦͘d̩e̗͕̱̜̫̗͈s̟͓͉͎͖i̛̩͉͔͙g͚͎͎̲̺͙̦n̤̯͔͈͞a̟͕̤̹̹̟̱͘t̸̳̝̣͖̜e̞͇̤̟̪̼͖d̳͓̥̼ ̰̭'҉̣̪I̶̪̖̗̩̼̜ͅn̮̺̼f͞e̵̤c҉t͕i̳̰̯o̠̬͝n̩'͙̖̭̗̗̫̥ ͔͚p͈͇̖̰̲͝ͅur̯̜̯͔͚͙̀ͅg̗̮͈̹e̺̖̙͉̠̻͢d̢͇̪̮̥͓ ̘͙̫͇̰͘ͅf̜̩̪͠ŗ͖o̴͙̹͓m̩ ͙̰̮̘̰͖̣c͟o̷̤l͇̤̫̤̰͙l̴̫͖͈̱̦̘e̸̪͔̗̻̰c̸̥̣͎̳ṭ͓͎̘̤͎̮i̮̳̜̕v̗e̖͈̥͠ ͎̰͈m̵̹̝̫̝e̲̮̥̜mo̯̯͜r̫̬̞̫̰͍͜y̮͇̝̪̩ ̞͎̮͕̥̼c̨̺͔o͈̭̱̜͡r̫͖e̘̲͚s͙̫̗̖̺̺̟,͏͕̬͓ ̛͚p͚̠̲̻̤r̡̠o͟c̣̮̲͚eş̙̳s͇̻i̥ng̙̝̩͔ ̻̪̩̬͎ͅc̰̫̗e͢ņ̮̼t̛̥̤̰͍e̟͍̠̙͖͖r̴̪̩̪̩̖̥̣.̨


You flinch a little at that, but finally respond, more to comfort yourself than the voices.

She told me that it was to keep you safe. That the more attention you paid to it, the stronger it would grow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 02:12:26 pm
Who?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 02:15:14 pm
((The VOID, I assume))

Who?
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 01, 2020, 02:16:40 pm
Who?
+1
Is this Phoebe we’re talking to? Are we now a fourth voice in this body the rest share? Or am I missing something?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 02:18:05 pm
We're talking to Phoebe AKA Patches.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 02:20:40 pm
...right. So what does that make us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 02:21:29 pm
Voices in her head.

Y҉̦̠͙o̘̭u̳͉͖͔̘͉̞ ̜͉̯̠̣ͅa̧̘͍̬̹͔r̮̻̪̯ḛ ͇̻͚̣̲f̼̞̝̙ͅr̬̝͚̞a̭͉̦̰͖̼ģ͉͖̝̮m̖̺̖̹̜͚͟ͅe̦̯̩̬̼̤ṇ̴̹̺͎̗̹t̬̩̞̯͇͍ͅs̛̮ͅ ͚̣o̞̙̜̹͙ͅf̜̥ t̹͉̠͉̳h̶o̙̟̠̗s̘̘͉͚̺e͚͉̖ ̗̳̖̮b̰̕ef̳͖̗͕͙̲͟o͙̳͕̭̤̭r̭̖͙e̮̠̠̟,͍ ͚͇̞̖̮ͅr̛̥̻͓͇̣ęt̩á̮̭i̺̬̦n͇͎͉͔͇̳̜e͇͈̮ͅd ̘͘b̹̗̱y̵̦̦ ͇͇̜͇̼ṃ̖̻͓̫̥̳͘e̸͔̱̪̬͖ ͏̮̫̘͓̙f̢̰̱̙̬̟o҉͉̖͚̼r ͖̺ͅf̷ų͍̤̱t̲͙̪̳̕u͙͕̜̰͖̬͖͠r͉͍͟e̛͉ ̭̣u̮̞̟͎s̜̗̼̯̳ͅe̛̮̲͚͍͎̣.̦̲͡
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 01, 2020, 02:29:48 pm
Interesting, do each of us use different fonts now since we are each a new voice?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 02:36:21 pm
We're... in-game entities. And this is the main character, speaking directly to us.
This is getting very weird, very fast.

Interesting, do each of us use different fonts now since we are each a new voice?

Nah. Hasn't been necessary before, won't be necessary now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 01, 2020, 02:45:50 pm
How would knowing about it make it worse? If we don’t know about something the body is infected with, we won’t be able to stop it and all of us would turn into whatever the Plague is
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 03:12:48 pm
It occurs to me... if we're separate voices now, we can speak separately. No need for +1s and whatnot-- no need to be in agreement, even. We're individuals.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 01, 2020, 03:17:28 pm
Yayyyy. I've been trying to get you to realize this since the first coma. Trauma ftw!  :P But, +1s are important because it means you're all in agreement with a course of action for Pheobe-- you can also put her on autopilot. She's good at maintaining things.

M͏͎̜͓o̶̦̪̗r̛̠͍e͖͠ ̡̘p̭r̴̩̞̭̯̮̝̞ò̲͉͍̗̹͎̪c̹̙̤̱̥e̖͚̹̪͓ͅs͙̪̬̱̭͟s͈̀e͙̞̲͜s̴͖̙̪͖͓̹ ̗̙͓̥̥̜͍f̦̥o̤͍̳̰c̢̭̦͇͇̰̺̜ṵ̶͙̠͓s̭͚͔̠̬̥̳e̤͠d ͚̞̕m̢͙ͅo̷͓r̠̖͍̥̤̣̥e̢͓ ̣o͝p̜̜͖̗̻̪̬p̗̼̙͜ͅọ̠̮̠͎͎̀r̝͚̝t̝̪̭̜̙͢u̻̬n̡͓̗̣̣̜i͚͉͙̦ț͙y̥̣̻̝͡.͈̹̺

A̰͈̭̻̳l͓͍̻͎ḷ̼̬̻̝̰ ̧i̘̳̮̝̰͎n҉̤̱̱̩͍̯f̨̲e̹͙͖̹̦c̟͔̜͚̩te̜͍͔d͉̬̬͓ ̴p͕̗͉̪͙r̰̰̝͓͕̻o̦̘̣̝̳͍̗͟c͉̳̗̜̙e͓̘͙̺͙̙̳ş͚̖sę͔̗̟s̴͙̪̮ ̧̠̦̩̝w͉͇̤̲͖e͕̲̹r̡͓e̼̳̥̼̗̫̜ ̲͕̹̼̪m̛̥̦̩a͕d҉͔̦̤̜͇̝̼e̪̜ ͏̞̼̦d͓̥͎̺͎͙̬ơ͓̰̞͎ŕ̳̤͎̤͇m͏̳̙͙̥a҉̗̩̩͕n̷̫̱̲t͕͙̟̳̗̳̝.̞̪͕

The...the 'VOID'.

At some point, you drift to something resembling sleep, and Emma gently shakes you awake. You flinch, only to find her smiling, standing beside you. Set upon your semi-prone form is a cafeteria tray, covered with a large amount of food of various variety. [insect meat] and eggs, crisp and carmalized and dripping with fat, soft, fluffy pancakes with a grape syrup dripped over them, a bunch of grapes with thick skins that seem to radiate juiciness, a cup of wine, diluted down...potato hash browned with sweet [onion] and [carrot]. She sits next to you before you can react, taking one of the grapes and biting into it.

"I figured you needed a pick me up. Sleepless nights are the -worst-."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 01, 2020, 03:23:41 pm
”Thank you” Eat the food, starting with the pancakes
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 03:29:36 pm
"You're the best, Emma.  I don't deserve you."

”Thank you” Eat the food, starting with the pancakes
+1

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 01, 2020, 04:04:22 pm
"You're welcome," Emma giggles, before teasing, "And you don't, but that's okay."

With the pleasantries out of the way, you lay into the food, starting with those soft pancakes. There's a slight tartness to them, from both the pancake itself and the grape syrup poured over top. The cafeteria chef obviously is trying to impress you- they're made perfectly, but you can tell he perhaps used a little bit too much chemical leavener, as there's a faint, bitter aftertaste. The hash is next, and the potatoes are sweet and crunchy, the carrots and onions adding even more sweetness to offset the enormous amount of butter and salt. The steak is devoured next; fully cooked, with a light sweet flavor, coupled with faint herbs that remind you of the mountains of your...birth?

Finally, you finish your meal with those grapes, eating a few of them before Emma devours them all. They have a tough, thick skin with plenty of white splotches, but they taste fantastic. Sugary-sweet, with a tart aftertaste and juices that threaten to escape your mouth. You eventually brush and clean your face with the offered napkin, and Emma, after stealing the last grape, rises, giving you a peck on the forehead.

You dress shortly thereafter, and pack the formal clothes for the 'funeral' away in the black leather bag you and Emma purchased. Emma returns, wearing a comfortable looking dress, and you're stunned-- you don't think you've ever not seen her in anything but military uniforms. Which, ironically, is what you're currently wearing.

The airship awaits for you at a landing pad, not your 'personal' craft, but a large transport vessel, like the ones you've seen hauling cargo. The cargo containers inside have been retro-fitted with a number of comfortable looking rooms, and in the back you find Thornton mercenaries loading themselves up, taking seats on specially designed chairs. They all look fresh and awake, but you notice during your brief walkthrough, many of them stare at you.

Lift off is in an hour, apparently, there's an issue with fuel.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 04:07:36 pm
I would recommend talking to our personal guard.  We need to let them know what our plans are for getting rid of the generals so that they can back us up.

Bitter taste suggests posioning, but it's probably nothing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 04:10:58 pm
Bitter taste suggests posioning, but it's probably nothing.

Eh, baking soda does that if you overdo it. Seems normal.

I would recommend talking to our personal guard.  We need to let them know what our plans are for getting rid of the generals so that they can back us up.

+1-- seek out Captain Zachary, specifically. That guy's on the level.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 01, 2020, 04:21:50 pm
It's a little awkward, but you manage to, at the last minute, swap out your guard for Zachary himself. He doesn't seem as annoyed as you would think and is dressed in a fairly casual version of his military uniform. The only weapon he bares is a las-pistol on his belt, however. When you raise the question of he wanted to come, he shrugs his shoulders, "I need a vacation anyway. It was getting monotonous."

You and him take seats in one of the more unoccupied rooms. William and Emma are in the other corner, picking at some strange arrangement of fruit. Emma laughs at something William says, and once again you're struck by how similar he seems to you...its strange, as well, that Emma seems more comfortable around her older brother.

"So what do I owe this honor of a paid vacation, Mother Pheobe?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 05:57:18 pm
"I'm afraid I have some bad news.  It has come to my attention that the Crusader senior leadership, including the Crusader General himself, is planning on killing me when the war is done and I am no longer useful."

"Were you aware of that?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 06:38:32 pm
Hmm, do we have confirmation of that or just suspicion? I'll start looking and see if I haven't missed something...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 06:40:26 pm
We have confirmation from Alphira that SEED plans to kill us after the war.  This could only be possible with the support of the Crusaders.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 01, 2020, 06:44:27 pm
We also have the file that mentioned this

How do we know Zachary isn’t in on it? Do we know?

"I'm afraid I have some bad news.  It has come to my attention that the Crusader senior leadership, including the Crusader General himself, is planning on killing me when the war is done and I am no longer useful."

"Were you aware of that?"

”Are you with them?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 06:45:53 pm
We don't know for sure, but he has told us that he will protect us through anything as long as we do our best to win the war.  I think we need his support, so this is an acceptable risk.

Also, he is very religious and seems fanatical enough to protect us from the plotters.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 06:53:31 pm
Hmm. We have confirmation that McCreary was murdered, from which Alphira deduced that SEED intends to do the same to us (a deduction we've since decided to trust). So too, we've confirmation that the senior Crusaders are willing to use Emma as a hostage against us. I don't think we've specific confirmation of SEED's plan to kill us, or of the Crusaders' involvement in that plan-- just some very good circumstantial evidence.

I'm thinking we want to explain this to Captain Zachary. Let him see what we've learned. Let him draw his own conclusions.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 06:58:10 pm
I think we need to make a stand and take a position.  We already have the Pontifex working on the civilian side of things to prepare for SEED's death.  It's important that we shore up the military side for this change, and to do that we will need his support.

The best way to do that would be to invoke his duty and tell him what we are almost 100% certain of: SEED and its servants plan to kill us.  It's too late to back out now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 01, 2020, 07:02:47 pm
I think we need to make a stand and take a position.  We already have the Pontifex working on the civilian side of things to prepare for SEED's death.  It's important that we shore up the military side for this change, and to do that we will need his support.

The best way to do that would be to invoke his duty and tell him what we are almost 100% certain of: SEED and its servants plan to kill us.  It's too late to back out now.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 08:12:00 pm
We're nigh-certain of that-- Zachary quite possibly won't be. What are we gonna do if Zachary wants the hard evidence we don't have? We'd have to make something up, or evade the question... or back down, and give him the honest assessment of the situation we could've given him in first place.



"I... need your advice, Captain. And your help."

Speak low. "You recall that I gleaned from the relic of McCreary the nature of his death: he starved, sealed in iron by the servants of SEED. You recall the document given me by the Pontifex: a file for the eyes of the Crusaders' Council, describing how Emma Thornton is to be held hostage towards my good behavior. I am trapped by SEED, by the Crusaders-- by the Crusader General himself-- and I believe they intend to kill me in SEED's name once I am of no further use to them. You know this."

"You promised me once, Captain Zachary... that so long as you lived, so long as I stood a champion of the Great Work, you would allow no harm to come to me or my own. I've a plan to free myself from the Crusaders' noose forever, and to turn the tide of this war in so doing-- and I fear I must now ask you to fulfill that promise."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 08:20:29 pm
We're nigh-certain of that-- Zachary quite possibly won't be. What are we gonna do if Zachary wants the hard evidence we don't have? We'd have to make something up, or evade the question... or back down, and give him the honest assessment of the situation we could've given him in first place.



"I... need your advice, Captain. And your help."

Speak low. "You recall that I gleaned from the relic of McCreary the nature of his death: he starved, sealed in iron by the servants of SEED. You recall the document given me by the Pontifex: a file for the eyes of the Crusaders' Council, describing how Emma Thornton is to be held hostage towards my good behavior. I am trapped by SEED, by the Crusaders-- by the Crusader General himself-- and I believe they intend to kill me in SEED's name once I am of no further use to them. You know this."

"You promised me once, Captain Zachary... that so long as you lived, so long as I stood a champion of the Great Work, you would allow no harm to come to me or my own. I've a plan to free myself from the Crusaders' noose forever, and to turn the tide of this war in so doing-- and I fear I must now ask you to fulfill that promise."

Makes sense.  +1.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 01, 2020, 08:37:49 pm
[9+1] Briefly uncomfortable, Zachary doesn't respond right away, but he comprehends what you're truly asking. He sits quietly, looking at you. With a slight frown, he gently counters with his question, "What do you intend to do about this, Mother Pheobe? And how will it help the people of SEED?"

"I made a vow to you, that's true, but my duty to the people of our nation comes first, above all else. The Pontifex has made several good points, but--" With a shake of his head, "Trading one inhuman entity for another doesn't seem to me what he had in mind."

"But at the end, what will change, should I, and perhaps the Pontifex, decide to help you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 08:49:15 pm
Subtly send out some of our influence to help convince him.

"I have no intention of replacing SEED with me or any other inhuman entity.  As the armor of the [Angel] MacCreary told me, 'The Mind of a Machine must never come to rule over the Will of Mankind,' and I believe that extends further.  We can say that only mankind should determine the fate of mankind."

"Beyond that, what will change is the way this war is being waged.  Attrition warfare has been effective in the past, but the human loss of life associated with the strategy is horrifying.  This strategy comes directly from SEED and it has caused massive casualties.  We must fight in a way that values the lives of the brave men and women on the frontlines while also leading us to victory."

"I need your help to replace any generals that refuse this change in strategy, and I need your help to prevent them from killing me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 09:06:33 pm
Subtly send out some of our influence to help convince him.

"I have no intention of replacing SEED with me or any other inhuman entity.  As the armor of the [Angel] MacCreary told me, 'The Mind of a Machine must never come to rule over the Will of Mankind,' and I believe that extends further.  We can say that only mankind should determine the fate of mankind."

"Beyond that, what will change is the way this war is being waged.  Attrition warfare has been effective in the past, but the human loss of life associated with the strategy is horrifying.  This strategy comes directly from SEED and it has caused massive casualties.  We must fight in a way that values the lives of the brave men and women on the frontlines while also leading us to victory."

"I need your help to replace any generals that refuse this change in strategy, and I need your help to prevent them from killing me."


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 01, 2020, 09:07:09 pm
Subtly send out some of our influence to help convince him.

"I have no intention of replacing SEED with me or any other inhuman entity.  As the armor of the [Angel] MacCreary told me, 'The Mind of a Machine must never come to rule over the Will of Mankind,' and I believe that extends further.  We can say that only mankind should determine the fate of mankind."

"Beyond that, what will change is the way this war is being waged.  Attrition warfare has been effective in the past, but the human loss of life associated with the strategy is horrifying.  This strategy comes directly from SEED and it has caused massive casualties.  We must fight in a way that values the lives of the brave men and women on the frontlines while also leading us to victory."

"I need your help to replace any generals that refuse this change in strategy, and I need your help to prevent them from killing me."


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 01, 2020, 09:21:08 pm
[10+1+1] "We expected this, Mother Alphira." Zachary shifts in his seat uncomfortably, and you feel a sudden force pushing you down into your seat as the ship begins to lift off. William and Emma steady themselves on the table, eventually slowly approaching the two of you. "Just not so soon. Our plans were for after the war, after you've made a name for yourself. A popular uprising.  A coup is difficult to contain. There will be generals and officers who will fight it. What is your excuse for killing them? Indeed, what is the [casus belli] for this shadowy war we're about to wage in the heart of our capital. What is your rallying cry?"

"I hope you don't mind the interruption," Emma claims, idly, and claims a seat in your lap. William sits next to you, and Zachary glances between the two of them without care, finally coming to rest his sight on you. A window shows the gold, silvers and grays of the Holy City begin to fade as you gain elevation. A patchwork of the outlying cities of seed, golden fields of grain, vineyards and other such works of man sprawl out after the ramshackle construction of the Suburbs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 09:29:50 pm
"SEED murdered the Angel McCreary.  SEED sent uncountable men and women to their early deaths without need.  SEED demands perfect obedience and spreads its lies through insidious propaganda.  SEED also desires to murder me, the Angel Alphira, but it won't get the chance.  To change the direction of the war and achieve victory, we must strike now."

"SEED is not interested in the well-being of its people.  It cares only for power.  And that is why SEED must be destroyed."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 09:55:17 pm
"Well hello." Grin. "We've been discussing what to do about SEED. Grim talk."

To Zachary now: "I understand that the timing is ill, Captain... but so too, I fear that by the time the greater war meets its end, SEED will already have struck against me. The longer we wait, the greater the risk-- and the more lives we lose to the obsolescence of SEED's war machine."

"You need a rationale, Captain? A rallying cry for the populace? I offer you this:"


"SEED murdered the Angel McCreary.  SEED sent uncountable men and women to their early deaths without need.  SEED demands perfect obedience and spreads its lies through insidious propaganda.  SEED also desires to murder me, the Angel Alphira, but it won't get the chance.  To change the direction of the war and achieve victory, we must strike now."

"SEED is not interested in the well-being of its people.  It cares only for power.  And that is why SEED must be destroyed."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 01, 2020, 09:56:44 pm
The current tactics being used is only feeding the creation of more [Demons].  The process seems to be sped up by the presence of humans to incorporate into the mass.  We need a change in tactics and we need to change the leadership to ones who will implement the new ones that are devised. 

That is the reason for this now instead of after a victory.  My presence isn't a sure thing, I can fail and I can fall without a real plan and backup.  I am sorry to lay this on you, but the way the war is going now, we will likely lose.


Something like this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 10:24:14 pm
"Well hello." Grin. "We've been discussing what to do about SEED. Grim talk."

To Zachary now: "I understand that the timing is ill, Captain... but so too, I fear that by the time the greater war meets its end, SEED will already have struck against me. The longer we wait, the greater the risk-- and the more lives we lose to the obsolescence of SEED's war machine."

"You need a rationale, Captain? A rallying cry for the populace? I offer you this:"


"SEED murdered the Angel McCreary.  SEED sent uncountable men and women to their early deaths without need.  SEED demands perfect obedience and spreads its lies through insidious propaganda.  SEED also desires to murder me, the Angel Alphira, but it won't get the chance.  To change the direction of the war and achieve victory, we must strike now."

"SEED is not interested in the well-being of its people.  It cares only for power.  And that is why SEED must be destroyed."

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 01, 2020, 10:36:06 pm
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[1] Zachary looks confused, rubbing at his face, "This is the Pontifex's place. I'm a soldier, Pheobe. But...I don't know how to explain how wrong that is."

[-] Emma leans in, speaking softly, "The entire city-state is born into the religion of SEED, Pheobe. Every man, woman, and child is raised on the Holy Word-- besides the Families, of course." She relaxes more into the seat, looking over at Zachary, who seems more and more uncomfortable as he looks between the two of you. "Removing SEED entirely, would destroy our world, and plunge it into chaos."

[1] "I am...I am concerned by your views on SEED, Mother Alphira. It is as Emma says. It is the cornerstone of our civilization. Its what separates us from the beasts...its destruction is a step too far." Caution turns to a sudden blank-faced look, his concern, and hesitance gone all at once. William shifts a hand closer to his las-pistol, and Emma does the same.

[1] "Mother Alphira, if you'll excuse me." He stands and begins to walk away towards a door on the forward section of the ship-- and you sigh, relaxing. You probably spoke too harshly; you'll have to mak--

[12] Until William slowly rises, speaking loudly so that all four of you can hear him. "You do know the cockpit is that way, right, Pheobe?"

[20 vs. 19] Zachary freezes in place. His reaction to William's words speak volumes more than he does. His hand slips a las-pistol free from its holster. "The Pontifex was wrong about you, Pheobe. You are a demon. A beast that seeks to destroy everything that our people hold dear. Not to shepherd us into a golden age beneath a living SEED. You seek to destroy the Great Work for petty revenge for your former life." Zachary gives a dark look to William, who, in response, has also drawn his weapon, and throws a challenge to you instead, "Kill me yourself, Alphira. Don't send your attack dog to do it for you."

A fanatic betrayed by that he believed in. Paradise is a battle away.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 10:45:11 pm
Well, that's a wash.  Should have gone with VoidSlayer's suggestion I suppose.  It looks like one of our former schoolmates just earned a promotion.

Smother him with our will until we can get close, and then use the Cutter on him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 01, 2020, 10:52:24 pm
Aw man, we needed this guy
...then again, I do have a thing with hydrogen I've been meaning to try. Maybe we don't have to kill him all the way?

Inferno. Hurl our will Zachary's way-- smother him with it-- pull the water out of his pistol-hand, and set it alight. Repeat as necessary with relevant extremities.

Once we've got the guy disarmed (possibly literally): "I seek to save the lives of countless thousands, Captain. You can aid me in this-- or perish with the [demons] that would tear them apart."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 01, 2020, 11:03:37 pm
Aw man, we needed this guy
...then again, I do have a thing with hydrogen I've been meaning to try. Maybe we don't have to kill him all the way?

Inferno. Hurl our will Zachary's way-- smother him with it-- pull the water out of his pistol-hand, and set it alight. Repeat as necessary with relevant extremities.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 01, 2020, 11:26:17 pm
Brutal.

[18 vs 7-1] [15][15]Emma slips off of your lap, standing tensely and staring at Zachary with something that approaches regret. William steps in front of her, gently blocking the line of fire with his own body as you begin to approach. Zachary fires a shot- it goes wide, striking the metal of the ship ineffectually. You conjure forth flames from the water vapor in the stale recycled air, lashing out at your former captain of the guard. Blisters bloom across his skin as you begin to wrap him tightly in the flames. Then, with a twist of your willpower, you separate the hydrogen from the water molecules in the skin of his hand.  He screams, as his flesh boils and steams, burning up rapidly, only adding to the reaction.

[8] The las-pistol, however, was not made to deal with such heats. The hydrogen cell overheats with a sudden explosion if shrapnel. Funnily, your flames and the resulting air pressure kept the blast contained, and you cut the fires with a twist of your fingers, a puddle of water surrounding a charred and mangled body. Emma coughs, gasping for breath and hiding behind William. "SEED, Pheobe. I felt like you just stuck me in an oven!"

"Sorry Emma." You offer, sheepishly. You recognize that yes, the room is quite hotter than it was before, but its rapidly cooling.

Zachary coughs. You're surprised he's not dead.

[18 vs 20] He's charred, his right hand a burned stump of shrapnel and blood. But he continues to breath. You let your guards drop, your willpower flowing through the room. William begins to shiver, and Emma looks suddenly flush, dropping to settle in on the couch. But you're surprised by Zachary. He doesn't drift away, like you hope, instead, through cracked and bleeding lips, you can hear him pray, his will iron against your's for the time.

You draw out your cutter hilt, bringing the blade out to full length and settling the relatively cool end of the mono-tube against his chest.

"From dust and...I have called you..to dust and ash...you shall return." Zachary prays through charred lips.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 11:29:50 pm
Place a hand on him, and attempt to channel into him the truth about the seedships, what they are and how they go wrong, and any other relevant memories from McCreary or Alphira.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 01, 2020, 11:42:35 pm
[-] Nothing happens, and Zachary bites his lip hard-- and then spits the resulting blood into your face. "I...I defy yo-you demon."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 01, 2020, 11:47:41 pm
Do the same, but with our hand to create a wound that bleeds more, and direct it into his mouth.

That's the only way I know to give him Alphira's memories...  Perhaps this can still be salvaged.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 02, 2020, 08:57:04 am
Are you sure we want to give this guy our blood, I mean he hates us now and making him like us might be a bad idea in the long run.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 02, 2020, 09:31:28 am
Do not give blood. Drain the water from his body
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 02, 2020, 09:40:07 am
I think... at this point, death is probably the best we can offer this guy.  :-\

"Captain... you're a good man. I'm sorry. I truly am."
Execution. Use the Cutter and be quick about it.

...

"He didn't deserve that."
"He didn't deserve that."
"He--"

...

"...what are we going to do?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 02, 2020, 10:42:06 am
I think... at this point, death is probably the best we can offer this guy.  :-\

"Captain... you're a good man. I'm sorry. I truly am."
Execution. Use the Cutter and be quick about it.

...

"He didn't deserve that."
"He didn't deserve that."
"He--"

...

"...what are we going to do?"
do we really need to talk? I don’t think we need to say anything
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 02, 2020, 10:45:42 am
The talking's... as much for our own benefit as for anyone else's, really. And hopefully makes us look a little less monstrous to those watching.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 02, 2020, 12:59:49 pm
Zachary spits once again, but this time you dodge out of the way, and the Cutter makes short work of him as you suffer an attack of conscience. You sit there, and Emma approaches from behind. You can feel her hand grace your shoulder. You lean into it, even as she uses her handkerchief to wipe the blood from your face. She tosses it on the corpse, helping you up. William turns away silently, vanishing into the general quarters.

"Sh...its okay. Come on, come sit down, Pheobe." Emma offers to you softly, locking the door that lay beyond Zachary. She sits next to you, taking your hand and giving it a squeeze. Then, softly, "That depends on what we want, Pheobe. What is it that we want? The destruction of SEED, or a coup in the military? What are our goals?"

When he returns, its with the bound, gagged, and unconscious second guard. He tosses the body down with a small sigh, and takes the seat Zachary previously vacated. "The bodies are going to be annoying. This isn't a Thornton owned craft."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 02, 2020, 03:19:13 pm
"...Security. For us, for this world. For you. That's all I want, that's all I've ever wanted. Ever since that night the Moores sent their thugs."

Sigh. "I'd like to curl up somewhere and sort out my conscience, but that doesn't help us right now does it? We need a game plan... starting with this guard, and this vessel. What do we tell this one when he wakes, and what do we do about-- er--"

Gesture weary-like towards the remains of the late Captain Zachary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 02, 2020, 03:25:27 pm
"...Security. For us, for this world. For you. That's all I want, that's all I've ever wanted. Ever since that night the Moores sent their thugs."

Sigh. "I'd like to curl up somewhere and sort out my conscience, but that doesn't help us right now does it? We need a game plan... starting with this guard, and this vessel. What do we tell this one when he wakes, and what do we do about-- er--"

Gesture weary-like towards the remains of the late Captain Zachary.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 02, 2020, 03:38:03 pm
[20]"If that's all you want, Pheobe, then you should die after winning the war for SEED. The world will spin on without us, until the next threat comes." Emma states, bluntly, sharply, and you can tell she meant the words to hurt, but there's impatience in her tone.

"Two great tools available to leaders, Pheobe, are manipulation and delegation." Emma continues, reaching over to squeeze your hand. "You may think you have to do everything, but you're not alone."

"William. Deal with the guard's bodies, if you please?" William looks confused and defiant for a brief moment when Emma speaks, then with a look to you, rises to leave into the general quarters. Two Warmachines step into the room with him next. The bodies are removed, and Silas enters with a container of cleaning supplies, wiping away the blood on the floor. You have the oddest feeling that they've done things like this before.

"Have you spoken to SEED again? Perhaps it could give you the authority you need to take over the military. As unreasonable as it may seem to you...it still needs you." Emma seems a little cold, as she watches them drag Zachary's corpse away, but perhaps a little sad, her thin lips pressed into a tight frown. "If it didn't you wouldn't be here. That's leverage for manipulation."

Finally, she admits, with a sniffle. "He was a pleasure to work with...the captain. I'm going to miss him."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 02, 2020, 03:43:11 pm
"I'm going to miss him as well.  He was strong, a true champion of the faith, even if his faith was misplaced.  I'll ask for an audience with SEED and try to press my point.  Perhaps it will listen."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 02, 2020, 05:05:05 pm
"If that's all you want, Pheobe, then you should die after winning the war for SEED. The world will spin on without us, until the next threat comes." Emma states, bluntly, sharply, and you can tell she meant the words to hurt, but there's impatience in her tone.

Ouch. :-[

Speak bitter. "He was a friend. And I had to push high treason on him like an idiot."
Softer now: "I've been listening to Alphira... I should have been listening to you. I'm sorry."

...


"I'll ask for an audience with SEED and try to press my point.  Perhaps it will listen."

Say this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 02, 2020, 05:20:12 pm
"If that's all you want, Pheobe, then you should die after winning the war for SEED. The world will spin on without us, until the next threat comes." Emma states, bluntly, sharply, and you can tell she meant the words to hurt, but there's impatience in her tone.

Ouch. :-[

Speak bitter. "He was a friend. And I had to push high treason on him like an idiot."
Softer now: "I've been listening to Alphira... I should have been listening to you. I'm sorry."

...


"I'll ask for an audience with SEED and try to press my point.  Perhaps it will listen."

Say this.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 02, 2020, 05:22:22 pm
"You should, yes. What would you like to accomplish? Everything else comes second. Kindness. Morality. Truth. Your personal happiness..." Emma sighs, stroking your face gently, then nods, relaxing back into her seat in silence. Silas finishes cleaning the mess, unlocking the door as he goes. He cannot do much for the char marks on the metal floor, but he doesn't remark, giving a nod to the two of you as he passes by. Then the two of you are left alone in silence. Emma eventually drapes herself over you, looking out the window as the terrain passes by beneath you. Patchworks of farms, of crops, and the occasional city. The terrain rapidly becomes more and more hilly, until you're over rough promontories. The craft slows and begins to descend.

The Steelworks Number Oh Nine bloom out beneath you. Great buildings jut out from what was a ramshackle collection of houses. Factories belch smoke into the air, and the modest chapel has grown several wings. It stretches out some miles more than previously. Large cargo hoverships flit into a number of landing zones, loading cargo before peeling off into distant skies. Laboriously, the vessel touches down into a landing field.

You and the rest disembark. William is speaking to the captain of the vessel, a freelancer, and you see a wad of cash make its way into the captain's hands. You also notice that William is carrying luggage-- which he wasn't before. You don't think about it.

"Several [beasts of burden] are coming for us." William states, settling down his odd luggage. "If you want to explore the city, we'll make time. It's been a while since you've been back. Nearly three years, right Emma?"

Emma nods, but glances to you, deferring the decision and leaning in close.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 02, 2020, 05:26:01 pm
Sure, it’s been a while, seeing hat changed will be good, unless the changes were bad, in any case, learning how SEED cares for cities other than the Holy one will help in assessing whether or not he is a good ruler
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 02, 2020, 05:57:13 pm
"What would you like to accomplish? Everything else comes second. Kindness. Morality. Truth. Your personal happiness..."

Every now and again, I am reminded that Emma is... every bit as scary as William, really. Just different.

"We're in no rush." Smile. "Anything in particular worth seeking out?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 02, 2020, 06:33:16 pm
"The Market and uh..." William hesitates, "The Market. Maybe one of the taverns. The city is kind of a shit-hole, not going to lie. Black Nicky brought in a bunch of debt-slaves and scared outlanders. Built up a bunch of factories and [tenements]. The Workshop district is still there...but there was a bit of a fire." He shrugs, settling down to sit on his luggage



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 02, 2020, 08:54:45 pm
Check The Market for anything that looks interesting or useful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 02, 2020, 09:01:31 pm
Sigh. "There's grandmother for you... we'll see what we can see, I suppose."

Check The Market for anything that looks interesting or useful.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 02, 2020, 09:53:14 pm
William grins and nods, lifting his hand in a vague wave. You and Emma head towards the city. The streets are far different than what you remember them to be, many of the hastily-built huts replaced by prefabricated buildings, stacked haphazardly atop one another. Each one has a solar panel atop the highest building in the stack. The walls are thin, and you can hear echoes of life within. The streets are full too, no one pays you any mind.

The colors of their clothes have not changed much, all browns and gray, but on occasion, you see the flash of color in shiny, thick, knee-length, square-paneled coats lined with blue fur.

Different tongues abound in the conversations around you as well, a motley collection of SEED dialect and a language that diverged from it long ago. The streets become more and more packed as you approach the 'center' of this sprawling city.

And then it opens up into a vast plaza, where there were neighborhoods once before. Many [beasts of burden] lay beside stalls that line the roads. Some are nothing more than poles holding up large cloth sheets, which people shelter beneath. Some are the more uniform SEED style, all blocky lines, and function over form, pre-fab and regular, made from portable sections of cloth draped over thin pieces of steel.

Hagglers abound, selling everything under the sun beneath their roofs of fabric—electronics, appliances, furniture, toys, cloth, guns, clothing, household needs...

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 02, 2020, 10:03:08 pm
Ask the animal vendor about the different insects and medium mammal for sale.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 02, 2020, 10:13:40 pm
Ask the animal vendor about the different insects and medium mammal for sale.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 02, 2020, 10:15:35 pm
Timey-wimey stuff deployed! Any questions don't count as actions, multiple questions will be answered, despite physical locations. Purchasing things from one stall, and you also purchase it from another!

"Ah, ah, the thin one is good for eating, very healthy. We extract oil from its flesh, which allows for some Outland clans to travel outside of their body. It smells fantastic, better from the bigger ones, but they are strong when big! It stings though! [3 credits] in local currency. Good deal!"

"The fat one is used for meat, and its chitin is used to make needles and bowls-- anything one might need if you don't have access to the bioplastics of SEED.[.3 credits] in local currency"

"Ah, the hounds. They are descended from [dogs]," You ask him to repeat that, except slower, "B-ah-ar-kers. Barkers. They rove the crater plains in packs, hunting and eating all they can find. [Beasts of Burdens], insects...children. But these are quite tame! Good stock! They do bite sometimes. [1 credit] in local currency."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 02, 2020, 10:25:44 pm
I like the dog, except for... the children-eating part.  They're very cheap as well.

Purchase the Barker.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 02, 2020, 10:37:44 pm
A loaf of bread costs somewhere between .05 and .1 credits, in this town currently, depending on grain supply, with a day laborer making roughly .06 credits per day. You're just loaded on this planet.

The shopkeep, a tall, tan-skinned woman with long, reddish-brown hair, directs you to the pen of [puppies]. She pulls a thick, leather collar with large spikes facing outwards and a long, corded cloth. "Good! Good. Pick one, anyone."

There must be a dozen puppies in the large cage. Some are gnawing on bones, or playfully attacking one another. They scatter quickly when you approach, besides for three of which, that stand their ground, yipping at you. The adults in the other cage begin to prowl the edges of their enclosure, barking in response to the yips. You can hear them growling at you. They all have a sandy, dull gray coat, splotched with black. Emma coos gently, looking up at you. "You want the ones that stand their ground." She opines, kneeling down on the edge of the puppy cage.

"Sorry, sorry for the barking! Usually more well behaved." The Shopkeep claims. "The parents may look small, but that's because they're used to far more food and exercise than I can give. They get big the more exercise and food they get. Some Barkers grow as big as your shoulder!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 02, 2020, 10:40:55 pm
Choose one of the three that stood their ground and haggle for a lower price.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 02, 2020, 10:51:16 pm
[17] You manage to haggle the shopkeep down a considerable sum. Settling at roughly at [0.68 credits] in local currency. You pick one out-- only for it to start squirming and trying to bite you to get free. "He-he doesn't like you!" Emma giggles, "Here, pass it over to me." You do so, and the squirming ceases as it begins to nuzzle into Emma's dress.

A dog is a big responsibility-- one more vote required to finalize the transaction.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 04:24:42 am
I was thinking one of the insects, insects molt when they grow, so we can make stuff out of chitin without killing it, but two pets are more responsibility than one pet, but maybe due to insects being ectoderms compared to barkers being endodermis, the insects might require less food

Ask about how much food each of the insects require, as well as join much food a barker requires per day
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 03, 2020, 08:00:43 am
Just buy the dog we picked, we can worry about feeding it later.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 09:43:50 am
"[Omnivorous], with a preference for meat," The shopkeeper explains about the Barker, taking the collar and wrapping it around the puppy's neck. She attaches the lead to it, and, hands it to you.

The puppy starts gnawing on it. "What are we going to name it?" Emma asks, reaching down and prising the leash out of its mouth.

"Scavenger. Eats anything that isn't nailed down. Prefers to let food rot." The shopkeeper gestures loosely to the rotund beetle.

You feel like you can maintain the dog and beetle easily, as all your meals, and Emma's, are free.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 10:02:29 am
Ask about what the beetle eats(the one Emma is gesturing to)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 10:11:41 am
My fault. Lack of clarity.


"Live prey. Usually insects when it's this small." The shopkeeper continues to explain. That might be more difficult to source. The skinny beetle throws itself at it's cage, hissing at your presence.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 01:31:47 pm
Huh. We're... buying a dog?

Are we in a position to be owning a dog right now? We'd have to take it out on the battlefield, or leave it with Emma... and I think it knows we ain't human. We can't exactly return it if it turns out to really hate us, for that matter...

...ah well. I'm willing to entertain the idea.

"You've a way with small cute things, you know that?" (Grin.) "Smart little critter. Is it a boy puppy or a girl puppy, can you tell?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 02:27:08 pm
"William raised hounds. They loved me." Emma states, grinning as the puppy tries to eat it's cloth leash. "It's a boy. Wanna see something interesting?"

Emma leans down, opening the dog's mouth-- it has three rows of sharp puppy teeth in it's stubby little jaws. "This dog is more Barker than Hound. They lose sets down the pedigree as they don't need them to break through bone and chitin."

Emma gestures to a sheepish shopkeeper, and the canines in the cage. "Those are probably just female hounds."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 02:34:29 pm
"What do you think about the name Mitch?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 02:58:54 pm
"You're the one who wanted it." Emma counters, "I'll call it whatever you want."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 03:00:40 pm
"It's settled then, Mitch.  He's cute but I definitely hope he doesn't bite me.  Those are some sharp teeth."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 03:11:35 pm
"I would've called it Billy." Emma counters, passing you the leash. The puppy drags himself behind you for just a few moments, before realizing how this all works. Then it waddles along behind, with something resembling pride-- or at least as much as a puppy with a too-big collar can muster. Emma thinks it's adorable.

Its a small, sandy gray-colored little beast, with a stubby jaw, stubby fur, and dark, rust-colored eyes. It radiates hostility, despite its tiny form. Its current collar is large and adjustable, the outside lined with sharp spikes. The shopkeeper explained it was to protect it from other Barkers. "Barkers are...strange." Emma confides, watching it with a smile, "They sometimes mutate when they get older. They've been wiped out from the plains of SEED, and hunters keep packs in the fringes of the state. They're vicious hunters...certain packs and their territories are named like Outlander nations. They're legends in many stories."

Emma kneels in street, teasing the puppy's face with a finger, which it nips playfully at, "Who's a vicious little killer- who's a vicious little bastard? You are, yes you areeee~." It barks. You wonder if it was agreeing with the statement.

"Well, any other stalls you want to visit, Pheobe?" Emma rises, brushing the dust from her dress.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 03:16:04 pm
The technology stall
Maybe we can get some fuel for the reactor at some point after getting it, also ask about what the tube with a black circle at the ends. Also purchase the portable forge
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 03:18:22 pm
I'd like to examine and ask about the following items at the technology stall:

A curious tube, with a black circle attached across at both ends, a finger-length tube of hydrogen with a mechanism atop it, strange portable consoles with a cheap display, and a small gray pod of plastic and steel.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 03:19:49 pm
I'd like to examine and ask about the following items at the technology stall:

A curious tube, with a black circle attached across at both ends, a finger-length tube of hydrogen with a mechanism atop it, strange portable consoles with a cheap display, and a small gray pod of plastic and steel.

+1, as well as the reactor and forge
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 03:27:57 pm
I like this Barker. It's a horrid ugly little ball of murder, and it's adorable. :))

Anyway. I dunno we need to actually purchase anything at the tech stall-- the government will probably produce for us anything we deem necessary for war-- but we can surely have a look.

I'd like to examine and ask about the following items at the technology stall:

A curious tube, with a black circle attached across at both ends, a finger-length tube of hydrogen with a mechanism atop it, strange portable consoles with a cheap display, and a small gray pod of plastic and steel.

+1, as well as the reactor and forge

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 04:27:37 pm
"Yes! How can I help you, fine ladies of SEED?" The shopkeeper is a thin young man with an unruly mop of brown hair that hangs down past his neck. His hands are all long fingers, with grease beneath the nails. He looks a little nervous, but visibly relaxes when you start asking questions about the many things in his shop.

"Ah, that tube? It's a [lighter]." He explains, picking up the hydrogen tube and pressing down on the button. A small orange flame burns out from the tip as long as he holds down the button. It goes out when he flicks it off. "The hydrogen is mixed with some salts so that you can see the fire-- too many dumbasses burning themselves." [.1 credits] in local currency.

When you gesture to the console, he grins, walking over to you and pulling a plug from a set of batteries behind the back. "This is a mineral scanner. Outland Prospectors use them to find surface deposits of minerals." It boots up, SEED script running across the screen. Then you feel a pulse of energy emitted from it. The display lists: iron ore, copper ore, and gold nearby, as well as vertical and horizontal distances to said concentrations. [20 credits] in local currency.

"This," He continues to explain when you ask about the pod, "Is a hearing amplifier. My...grandfather designed and made it. You put it in your ear, and the sound comes out clearer and louder. I sell 'em for cheap because old folks need to hear too. Just the cost of labor and parts." [.3 credits] in local currency.

"The reactor," He notes, "Is a standard workshop reactor. I actually purchased it from the Local SEED garrison. It had some slight fire damage, but nothing I couldn't fix. It's a little under-efficiency--" [5] He rattles off stats, and you look blank. The shopkeeper sighs, simplifying, "It'll use a single hydrogen cell to power an average house for a year. Three for a small workshop, and ten for a small factory. It'll emit an alarm when it's running low, and it can measure grid usage and report it back to you in a nice percentage form." [50 credits] in local currency.

The forge is fairly self-explanatory- it has an electric powered forge to heat small amounts of metals to process them into ingots. It has a blower to pull oxygen in or out, depending on the process. There's a sturdy anvil, another heater for shaping metal already in ingot form, a collapsible barrel, you assume for water or oil. It also contains a welding apparatus and a number of chisels, swages and dies, molds...so on. It also comes with a leather apron and a pair of protective lenses.
Everything you might need to get into metalworking, besides the metal and electricity. [15 credits] in local currency.

[17]You pick up the tube with black circles on it. The circles are oddly cloth-like, and the machine feels more substantial than you would expect. It fits neatly in your hand. The shopkeeper trips over himself to rush to your side, trying to snatch it out of your hands-- and Mitch gives a surprisingly deep growl for something so small. His intimidation factor is eliminated pretty quickly by the yip of bark, though.

You, however, have no such issues intimidating the shopkeeper-- who takes one look at you and backs away with his hands up. "So-Sorry-- ma'am. Just...Just a silly little trinket my senile grandfather had me make. No-nothing to worry about. I swear."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 04:32:14 pm
"Tell me more about this trinket, please."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 04:35:32 pm
I am... intrigued.

"Tell me more about this trinket, please."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 04:47:47 pm
I am... intrigued.

"Tell me more about this trinket, please."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 04:48:21 pm
[11] "It's- it's nothing. I swear. Just some stuff I soldered together as a joke!"

[20] "Its forbidden technology, isn't it...Mister...?" Emma suddenly seems a lot more official, straightening up and taking a step towards the man. The shopkeeper flinches back and genuinely looks like he's about to cry. "You're already screwed if we -think- its forbidden tech. So why not come clean and make it easier on yourself, huh."

With a gesture to you, and a sudden look of seriousness, "I want you to think twice about lying to me again. We're not [beat] Guardians- this is Lady Alphira, SEED's own Holy Angel of Fire. Her wrath is brutal-- just today I saw her burn someone alive for disloyalty."

"It's a [radio wave based communicator]." He manages through heaving sobs, finally breaking down.

"Your grandfather was a high-ranking scholar of SEED? And he let this technology leak?" Emma looks amused, reaching to take the piece from you.

"I never used it, I swear on SEED!"

Emma leans in, idly, to whisper, "I have no idea what this is. We could get a bribe from this guy, though, now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 04:58:02 pm
This is important technology that would help us win the war.

"Give it to me, and a small bribe, and I'll forget we ever had this conversation."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 05:14:38 pm
This is important technology that would help us win the war.

"Give it to me, and a small bribe, and I'll forget we ever had this conversation."
“I don’t believe this should be forbidden. It seems like it would help the war effort, so I’m struggling to see SEED’S rationale for banning technology such as this”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 05:16:41 pm
Oh. Oh nice.

To Emma: "Alphira told me about tech like this. If it's what I think it is... it could be priceless for the coming war."

To the shopkeep now, with a faint smile and perhaps a touch of will in our words: "I'm not so merciless as this one would have you believe... and I would not wish to bring ruin upon such a skilled technician of SEED. Turn the contraption over to me, and I'll let this offense go without notice."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 05:18:28 pm
This is important technology that would help us win the war.

"Give it to me, and a small bribe, and I'll forget we ever had this conversation."
“I don’t believe this should be forbidden. It seems like it would help the war effort, so I’m struggling to see SEED’S rationale for banning technology such as this”
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 05:45:21 pm
[19] "Wh-what?" The shopkeeper recovers spectacularly, rubbing at his face, only succeeding in rubbing more grime on his face. "My grandfather...said...said that machines like this could reach into the void by accident, and summon demons forth from that dark place..."

"I...I didn't understand. Please," He bows in front of you, "Please forgive me, Holy Alphira. Take anything from me-- please."

"It's a hefty crime breaking the forbidden tech laws...and using SEED's secrets for your own gain." Emma tuts, giving you a smile as you play along. "What's worth your life, and the lifetime of suffering on a world bereft of SEED's Holy Light? What would grant you access back into the Paradise of a Perfect World?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 05:49:42 pm
His grandfather was right, I suppose, as that's how McCreary was summoned.  Should we take something from him?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 05:50:43 pm
“Abolishing the horrid practice of debt slavery, ensuring that people aren’t sent to their deaths. Giving people the ability to learn about what the world is, not what SEED’s lies say it is like”

I just thought of something, maybe SEED’s name stands for something?
S.E.Empereal Destroyer?
Let’s not take from him. We have money to buy the forge, let’s buy the forge, not just take it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 06:07:26 pm
"I absolve you of your sins.  You may remain in this 'Paradise of a Perfect World.'  Can you give me a slightly better price for the forge?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 06:08:08 pm
“Abolishing the horrid practice of debt slavery, ensuring that people aren’t sent to their deaths. Giving people the ability to learn about what the world is, not what SEED’s lies say it is like”

I just thought of something, maybe SEED’s name stands for something?
S.E.Empereal Destroyer?
Let’s not take from him. We have money to buy the forge, let’s buy the forge, not just take it

Emma was talking to the shopkeep-- not to us.
...also, the last time we condemned SEED to somebody we had to burn said somebody alive. I'd really rather not have a repeat of that.

Do we need the forge? It's interesting and all, but we can probably requisition something similar if necessary.

His grandfather was right, I suppose, as that's how McCreary was summoned.

...Oh. These laws-- this planet-- SEED's deliberately hidden it from the Empyreals!

Anyway, let's grab the radio and get out of here. No need to take money or anything-- this guy's pathetic, and I'd like to leave ourself a certain air of magnanimity.



"[Demons]! From this little contraption?"

...

"...yes, I suppose it could call down a [demon] at that. Powerful technology, but dangerous..."
"...yes, I think we had best confiscate this. You are a skilled technician, to create such a device-- but you must not dabble in such technology again. I would not be so merciful a second time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 06:12:49 pm
“Abolishing the horrid practice of debt slavery, ensuring that people aren’t sent to their deaths. Giving people the ability to learn about what the world is, not what SEED’s lies say it is like”

I just thought of something, maybe SEED’s name stands for something?
S.E.Empereal Destroyer?
Let’s not take from him. We have money to buy the forge, let’s buy the forge, not just take it

Emma was talking to the shopkeep-- not to us.
...also, the last time we condemned SEED to somebody we had to burn said somebody alive. I'd really rather not have a repeat of that.

Do we need the forge? It's interesting and all, but we can probably requisition something similar if necessary.

His grandfather was right, I suppose, as that's how McCreary was summoned.

...Oh. These laws-- this planet-- SEED's deliberately hidden it from the Empyreals!

Anyway, let's grab the radio and get out of here. No need to take money or anything-- this guy's pathetic, and I'd like to leave ourself a certain air of magnanimity.



"[Demons]! From this little contraption?"

...

"...yes, I suppose it could call down a [demon] at that. Powerful technology, but dangerous..."
"...yes, I think we had best confiscate this. You are a skilled technician, to create such a device-- but you must not dabble in such technology again. I would not be so merciful a second time."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 06:14:57 pm
I struck out the answer to the question not directed at us, what do you all think about the non action part?
Quote
I just thought of something, maybe SEED’s name stands for something?
S.E.Empereal Destroyer?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 06:16:45 pm
It's quite possible, or it could just be a corruption of "seedship," which is the name of this type of machine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 06:22:16 pm
Yeah, I'd assumed was just a contraction of "seedship"-- which is to say, a ship designed to seed a colony. Seems there was some kind of mass exodus of humanity from Earth to the stars, however many millennia ago.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 06:28:31 pm
You give me too much credit, Naturegirl. *sigh* But you're only partially correct, about what SEEDship is.

You do note that McFee has a similar forge, sans electric ore refinery. But you could, if you so chose to, requisition any bar of metal from SEED stockpiles with but a signature. You have a blanket requisition for any odds and ends you might need for training, up to a certain point.

You could, with a bit more hassle, literally demand a large amount of any material to found factories or something, if it so chose your fancy...but you haven't attempted it, content to let the SEED war machine do its part. But maybe that will change with this piece of technology in your hand.

"Of-of course. I have the other piece in storage-- for theft protection, Holy Alphira." The shopkeeper rises, stumbling over himself to bring you the other [radio communicator]. He sets it gingerly in your hand. "The Outlander clans, those heretics, quite prefer them as well! They use it to communicate ambushes and other nefarious deals. I only hope your will shines upon them." He begins to babble half-remembered prayers that you know from your brief time studying religion, that they are pretty badly translated.

"Are we done here, darling?" Emma asks, idly, straightening up-- once again, while you were talking, she was playing with Mitch. You notice that she is using her handkerchief to stop a bit of bleeding on her finger.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 06:32:20 pm
Yes, mass production of this technology would go a long way towards improving the war effort.

"Yes.  Thank you for your cooperation, sir.  There's no need to be afraid, as I will keep this between us only."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 06:44:54 pm
Yes, mass production of this technology would go a long way towards improving the war effort.

"Yes.  Thank you for your cooperation, sir.  There's no need to be afraid, as I will keep this between us only."
+1 why not own a forge? It can’t hurt, and we have the money For it. Why not buy the forge then leave?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 06:46:18 pm
I don't have a problem with it, as long as we can bring down the price a little.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 06:50:46 pm
We've the power to move industries, tho. We wield this civilization. It won't hurt us or anything to buy the thing, but... will we use it? Ever?

Yes, mass production of this technology would go a long way towards improving the war effort.

"Yes.  Thank you for your cooperation, sir.  There's no need to be afraid, as I will keep this between us only."

+1

Let's go poke about for market food, then see if there's anything Emma wouldn't would be interested in purchasing here-- we'd be paying, of course!
After that, we're probably good to meet up with William.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 06:51:41 pm
I'd like to take a look at the guns and spices as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 06:52:29 pm
We've the power to move industries, tho. We wield this civilization. It won't hurt us or anything to buy the thing, but... will we use it? Ever?

Yes, mass production of this technology would go a long way towards improving the war effort.

"Yes.  Thank you for your cooperation, sir.  There's no need to be afraid, as I will keep this between us only."

+1

Let's go poke about for market food, then see if there's anything Emma wouldn't be interested in purchasing here-- we'd be paying, of course!
After that, we're probably good to meet up with William.

wouldn’t it make more sense to purchase thing Emma would like, rather than things she wouldn’t like?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 06:53:57 pm
I think it's an expression, like "wouldn't you rather have $100 than $50?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 06:54:52 pm
Is an expression. Strange expression, now I think of it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 06:55:34 pm
I think it's an expression, like "wouldn't you rather have $100 than $50?"
I’ve heard that expression, but the way it is worded makes it sound like we are searching for things she wouldn’t like
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 06:57:23 pm
I giggled at that. I'm not sorry.

After a brief bit of arguing internally, you step out of the tent. As an aside, to Emma, you murmur, "Order me a forge-- set it up in one of the compound's rooms. A better one than that? Please?"

Emma looks confused but gives a nod. "I'll have it set up. McFee can help me pick out good tools."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 07:02:31 pm
"Thanks, Emma."

We might as well take a look at the guns.  This isn't using up any time I think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 07:03:08 pm
“We should probably head somewhere to help with your hand. Me using Healing Factor can turn out badly”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 07:07:59 pm
Is probably fine, but we can mention it-- like so:

"Thanks, Emma."

---

Frown a little. "You're bleeding. Mitch bit you?"

We might as well take a look at the guns.  This isn't using up any time I think.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 07:11:10 pm
Is probably fine, but we can mention it-- like so:

"Thanks, Emma."

---

Frown a little. "You're bleeding. Mitch bit you?"

We might as well take a look at the guns.  This isn't using up any time I think.

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 07:11:47 pm
Is probably fine, but we can mention it-- like so:

"Thanks, Emma."

---

Frown a little. "You're bleeding. Mitch bit you?"

We might as well take a look at the guns.  This isn't using up any time I think.

+1
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 07:17:26 pm
"He's probably as safely close to a purebred Barker we can get-- of course he bit me. If he didn't, I'd be worried." She waves off your worry. "It's fine, no need for your...powers or anything. I'll have Silas get me an [antibiotic] when we rejoin with the rest." She sniffs, "It was my fault for teasing him anyway."

[4 vs 8] As you drift along the food district of the market, you cannot help but stop by the vendors. You hesitate. Then, on a whim, you literally purchase one of each food item. Emma looks surprised but drifts, having to help you carry the bulk of it. You end up eating a little more than half, as Emma cannot keep up with your metabolism, but she tries every little bit you do. The sandwich is savory, and sweet, with the pickled onions contrasting the greasy, over-cooked insect meat. The cotton candy and potato-starch covered 'Barker's Beard' is sweet, melting in your mouth. You store away the potato candy with jam for later, focusing instead on the fried potatoes and onion rings, picking at them as you walk to the gun stall.

Spoiler: Wares (click to show/hide)

You notice, hanging between two poles, many, many knives. Some are handled in bone, other's steel, and some are the Crusader Standard Combat Knives. Many of them are long and sharp, double-sided for ease of stabbing. What draws your interest the most is the ones handled in bone. They have intricate, carved figures on them--

Letters! Or...pictographs, more precisely, strung together to form words that you can easily translate. The bones themselves are smooth and polished, intricately worked.

"Hey-- oh [fuck]." The Shopkeep, an attractive, scarred lady of middling age eyes flash to Emma's blond hair. "Uh--"

"Just a customer," Emma claims, calmly.

The woman eyes Emma with a mix of distrust and skepticism. You don't think you'll get a good deal here, judging by the atmosphere. Emma lets you look through the weapons while she feeds Mitch pieces of fries. The Thornton Las-Rifle reactor hums to you as you pass it by, and you cannot stop yourself from drifting your fingers along the crude angles of the weapon. The weld-job is patchy, and crudely done, something obviously done to make it accessible to those who do not have your or a Warmachine's strength.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 07:20:55 pm
I'm interested in inspecting and asking about the following items:

A gold-leaf las-pistol, with a steel frame and uncovered coolant tanks
An off-brand, cheap las-pistol
Many different types of magazines,
Helmets, some made from steel, some made from plastics
The knives, ones that are functional and concealable
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 07:22:40 pm
I'm interested in inspecting and asking about the following items:

A gold-leaf las-pistol, with a steel frame and uncovered coolant tanks
An off-brand, cheap las-pistol
Many different types of magazines,
Helmets, some made from steel, some made from plastics
The knives, ones that are functional and concealable

+1 What do the knives say?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 07:42:54 pm
I imagine we'll not be buying anything here, unless something really jumps out at us-- [angelic] requisitions and all-- but it doesn't hurt to look around, I s'pose. We did find that [radio] this way, after all!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 08:10:35 pm
The knives hanging from strips of leather catch your fancy, and you pause by them to read them. "Someone like you won't be able to understand the--" The Shopkeeper begins

"Salt Flows." You read out loud in SEED dialect, translating it as best you can, and can hear Emma suppress a mean giggle as the woman abruptly stops talking. You decide to continue, "Mushroom weeps. Steel rends. Soul sighs. Blood blooms salt. Barkers howl....I don't get it."

"You wouldn't."

You think she sounds pretentious, so you don't press further. Right now.

Instead, you look at the smaller, less flashy knives. While all of these knives value form over flash-- being of reliable construction, hand-worked and razor-sharp, there are only a few that you would consider being concealable. They all come in a small kit with plenty of small holsters that you can strap to your person. They all possess a conical blade, terminating after roughly five inches. You don't think that you could throw them--describing them as a shiv is perhaps more efficient. The handles are worked bone and feel good in your hand. [3 credits] in local currency.

The magazines run the gamut from the conventional rifle magazine loaded with bullets to las-rifle magazines loaded with energy. Some of them are fully charged, and some are less than fully charged—any number of mags for any number of weapons you might buy.

[7] A gold-leaf las-pistol, with a steel frame and uncovered coolant tanks, is...supremely not good to use, after closer inspection. It's flashy and overcharged, but they haven't done anything to protect anything but the coolant system from the heat it would generate. The gold leaf is peeling in places-- they didn't apply it correctly.
There are even fissures in the barrel already! What was the point of supercharging the coolant system if the focusing barrel is already damaged?! You fight the urge to throw it on the ground.

It's just a cheap las-pistol, made by some Family or another. Things like this flood the under streets of SEED's Holy City, and often have the terrible habit of misfiring or having a reactor short circuit while in use. It's shiny, though, and ergonomic. And incredibly cheap. But the magazine doesn't come out, and sans cutting the whole thing open, you can't access any of the hardware for repairs or inspection. [.5 credits] in local currency.

The helmets come in a wide variety. Made of either bio-plastics and cut like the Crusader's, guarding most of the face but leaving room for gas-masks, or wide-capped metal domes, attached by a strap to the head. A few are of more extreme design-- you see one with a red mohawk and kevlar neck guard, for instance. The prices and designs vary - If you find something interesting, you can let the Shopkeeper know.



Emma grins, dragging you to the clothes stall and asking you to buy a blue fur robe. She bundles up in it, picking up Mitch and depositing him into a pocket. It cost you, after haggling, [.64 credits] in local currency. "I was cold." She offers innocently.



"Have you ever tried [bug oil]?" Emma asks as you drift by the spice stall on your way back to the airfield. She gestures at an ornate bottle on the shelf when you shake your head no. "Apparently it's an interesting experience. William and Polly bought some once. They said it was amazing, and that I should try some when I get older."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 08:17:10 pm
buy some bug oil. Ask the shopkeeper who sells the helmets and guns about the bio plastic helmets and the steel helmets
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 08:18:08 pm
I think it would make sense to purchase a concealable knife for safety, and a different one for general use.

Purchase one concealable knife, and one larger knife with an inscription that speaks to us.  Also, buy some blue powder and bug oil.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 08:30:10 pm
I'd be worried about what further drugging would do to our already ailing mind... knives are good tho. Nice to have a stabby-thing on hand for if our Cutter fails us.

I think it would make sense to purchase a concealable knife for safety, and a different one for general use.

Purchase one concealable knife, and one larger knife with an inscription that speaks to us.

+1

Ask about the blue powder and bug oil: effects, side effects, and any addictive properties.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 08:30:48 pm
I'd be worried about what further drugging would do to our already ailing mind... knives are good tho. Nice to have a stabby-thing on hand for if our Cutter fails us.

I think it would make sense to purchase a concealable knife for safety, and a different one for general use.

Purchase one concealable knife, and one larger knife with an inscription that speaks to us.

+1

Ask about the blue powder and bug oil: effects, side effects, and any addictive properties.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 08:38:49 pm
Oh
oh oh


Pet, Threat: Mitch, the Barker
A stubby furred, stubby faced hellion of a canine that will possibly mutate in the future.
-0/50 Obedience
-1/50 Respect

Mitch the Murder-Pug has stats now
Happy :))


Also, "Threat"-- which amuses me to no end, especially given William was our other "Threat" listing! We're gonna have to devote some serious time to training up this thing so it doesn't maul somebody important when it grows up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 09:02:42 pm
You think its a pug. That's adorable.

[15] "Fire blooms Flowers" Is one you find, and purchase-- the cost is exorbitant, and the woman refuses to haggle. -[1 credit] in local currency.

You purchase a smaller knife and an ankle sheath, as well. Once again, the shopkeeper shuts down your haggling. -[.3] credit in local currency.

It's a small matter to attach the larger, combat knife's sheath to your belt, right near the Cutter holster. You kneel down, attaching the other to your ankle, strapping it over your socks.

"The steel helmets are Outlander made. The Bioplastic ones are from SEED. The bioplastic is cheaper, and doesn't have any issues with rust or need oiling. Neither can truly stop a las-pistol blast, but the bioplastics of SEED can stop small conventional arm's fire, with luck. So can the steel one, but you need a bit more luck. Cutter Hilts can cut through both." Neither really compares to Lucille.



"The bug oil is a mystical sacrament." The spice peddler begins, "It doesn't form any physical addiction, but you may find yourself wanting another, to seek the truths about the world as they can only be experienced by your racing mind on the oils. You rub it into your skin, and you see many things as they should be, could be, or will be." [1 credit] in local currency, per bottle

"The blue powder is a concoction given to us by the Thornton Family Laboratory, for sale to all those who wish to have more energy. It reduces the appetite, promotes mental clarity, euphoria, and keeps you from feeling fear. It is an addictive substance, for who doesn't want just a little more energy? Take only the measured amounts, though, as in higher doses can kill you, or cause...you to have mild [psychosis]. You smoke it." He presents a glass pipe from behind his counter, which reeks of [ammonia] and other chemicals, the bottom blackened by heat. [.02 credits] in local currency, per dose



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 09:07:11 pm
Woah.  Mitch looks like he could do some damage.  The oracular drug might come in handy, but I don't think we need the blue powder, as ballistic will suffice for that.

Purchase 5 bottles of bug oil.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 09:13:41 pm
You think its a pug. That's adorable.

Well I said murder-pug didn't I?  ;)

Let's go for... two bottles of bug oil? It's expensive stuff, and I doubt we'll be using it more than once.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 09:15:46 pm
Two is fine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 09:24:29 pm
[7]With bottles in coat pockets, you head off through the darkened streets of the city to the airport. Snow falls on empty streets as you walk. You pass by the mouth an alleyway between stacked container houses, Emma gestures into the distance with a grin-- and then someone is behind you, quickly stepping out of the alleyway, pressing something into your back. The point of a knife draws blood through your greatcoat as a rough hand grabs your shoulder. The wound isn't deep- a warning.

"Do-don't move." A female voice murmurs, softly, glancing to Emma, who freezes, hand on her belt. The woman who has a knife to your back, her accent dips in and out of SEED and Outlander dialect. "E-easy now. No-no one has to get hurt, okay? You're rich, right? Fur coats and embroidery and shit. Just a few credits and we all walk away easy."

The knife isn't pressed against your spine, and besides for the hand on your shoulder, your arms are free. You're surprised of course, but you're more concerned with the fact you didn't hear her. Impressed, really. Emma raises a brow but calmly puts her hands into the pockets of her fur robe. She actually gives a giggle when she catches sight of your confused face. "W-what's so funny?!" The would-be mugger asks, a tinge of fear creeping into her voice.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 09:27:07 pm
"Sure, here's 5 credits.  Accept that and go away."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 09:33:21 pm
"I didn't bring my wallet--" Emma is cut short by your words, lifting a brow. You reach back for your wallet, only for the knife to press a little harder into your back. "Wh-which pocket is your wallet in?" Your mugger asks, softly, breathing hard from excitement and fear.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 09:35:21 pm
"Listen, you can back up and let me get my wallet out, and I'll give you a few credits, or I can just remove your knife hand.  What's it going to be?"  Project our will onto her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 09:39:01 pm
Ahh-ha. This is shaping up to be a fun little encounter... this woman is desperate, of course. Hence our mercy.

"Listen, you can back up and let me get my wallet out, and I'll give you a few credits, or I can just remove your knife hand.  What's it going to be?"  Project our will onto her.

+1

Speak soft. Let the air hang heavy with our power.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 09:48:03 pm
[3 vs 6] She stands firm despite your willpower, and despite the fear she feels-- she has a strong will herself. "And I'll gut you-you like a salt [fish]. No one wins, right?"

[20] "Need some help, Alphira?" Emma asks, cheekily.

"I'll take those five credits, instead," Your mugger murmurs, after a beat, the sharp knife drawing blood from your back is removed slowly, deliberately, carefully.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 09:50:30 pm
Turn around and get a look at our assailant.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 09:53:10 pm
Grin. "Congratulations, ma'am. You've just mugged an [angel]."

Turn around and get a look at our assailant.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 10:02:22 pm
A shorter than average, skinny girl, with rough hands, wielding a long-knife. Reddish-brown hair falls down around her face in loose strands. Her eyes dance to the alleyway before she returns her gaze to meet your own. Her clothes are dirty, as is she, hanging loosely off a thin frame. The knife she has in her hand has a bone handle, and she has it flush against her arm. Her body is slightly lowered to the ground, but relaxed-- is that your wallet in her other hand!?

Trained

"I'll make sure to tell my non-existent children if I don't die in the next five minutes. Something felt off about you. Probably should have thought-thought better." She rambles a little, holding the wallet back out towards you. "I-I didn't take anything yet."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 10:04:58 pm
Nod. "I believe you." Take our wallet back, and give the girl what was agreed-- with respect.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 10:05:56 pm
Nod. "I believe you." Take our wallet back, and give the girl what was agreed-- with respect.
I'm fine with this, but make sure to check the wallet and our possessions to make sure she truly hasn't taken anything.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 10:07:13 pm
Nod. "I believe you." Take our wallet back, and give the girl what was agreed-- with respect.
I'm fine with this, but make sure to check the wallet and our possessions to make sure she truly hasn't taken anything.

Heh, fair enough. +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 10:24:00 pm
You take your wallet back, making a show of opening it up and counting the money within. Nothing is missing, and the young woman extends a hand back to you. You take out five credits, and after checking your other pockets, you put the wad of bills into her money. Her eyes briefly widen, but she says nothing, staring at the money.

[1] She hesitates. slipping the knife back into its sheath, making a show of it while keeping eye contact with you-- her eyes drift towards the alleyway. Then she lunges at you with a swing of her first--

[16 vs 16] Surprised, you twist out of the way, slamming your shoulder into her solar plexus. She hits the ground with a grunt of pain, but is back on her feet in an instant, tackling you to the ground. You're surprised at how strong she is, but she's already panting with exertion, while you're not even warmed up yet.

[10 vs 4] You don't think she was expecting you to hit her in the face that hard, but it sends her sprawling away from you. You feel bones crack. She spits blood, rising back to her feet when you do.  She stares, and all you see in her eyes is calculation- fear. A massive bruise blooms across her face as she drops to her knees in a bow.

"I've shown you what I can do. I need work. I need more than this."

Emma watches with a bored, almost contemptuous expression as the girl extends out the wad of bills you gave her. "Why do people like her think this all you answer to?" She complains with a sigh, "Do you just radiate a 'try me' [aura, presence, willpower], or something?"

The woman says nothing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 10:29:09 pm
"What's your name and what are your skills?  The ones I've seen so far are impressive."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 10:36:35 pm
"What's your name and what are your skills?  The ones I've seen so far are impressive."
+1 My name’s Phoebe
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 10:39:53 pm
Sigh. "You're strong-- bold-- skilled. I can take you in. Put you on track for the Crusaders, maybe even for my personal guard. It's a dangerous life, but you'd have as fair a chance at it as anyone-- and my own word to back you up."

"What say you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 10:43:49 pm
"I am [bravery, determination, more specifically, Brave-In-Fear]." You ask her to repeat it and enunciate each sound. She does so without a flicker of emotion, 'Iyal'. You notice that's she's lapsed into her own tongue, as Emma looks confused. She sounds more determined, less stuttering in her native tongue.

"I am a full [warrior of a clan-structure]. I have ambushed a Barker and made a knife with its [roughly translates to 'rib bone over heart']."

To your offer, all she does is lift a shirt-sleeve. Emma winces. A brand of SEED's symbol scarred into her skin, and she's tried to cut it off, judging by the scar tissue that dances across it.

"I cannot join the C-crusaders." She replies, in hesitant SEED dialect.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 10:48:18 pm
“Why not? We can probably find something that removes the mark. A mark on the arm shouldn’t prevent you from being able to be a Crusader. I can heal people, though it causes me pain sometimes”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 10:48:27 pm
"You would be a welcome addition to my personal guard.  I think you would also take well to assassination or intelligence gathering tasks.  Let me take you to a doctor to see to your wounds.  If you're still interested, I would be glad to have you, Lyal."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 03, 2020, 10:51:57 pm
"You would be a welcome addition to my personal guard.  I think you would also take well to assassination or intelligence gathering tasks.  Let me take you to a doctor to see to your wounds.  If you're still interested, I would be glad to have you, Lyal."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 10:55:48 pm

You know, I have to ask... d'you draw inspiration from Dune, perchance?  ;)



Let a bit of bitterness into our voice. "Ah. The mercy of SEED."

"...Let the Crusaders speak as they may."


"You would be a welcome addition to my personal guard.  I think you would also take well to assassination or intelligence gathering tasks.  Let me take you to a doctor to see to your wounds.  If you're still interested, I would be glad to have you, Lyal."
+1

+1-- is "Iyal" tho, not "Lyal".
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 03, 2020, 11:12:48 pm
Was it the bright blue eyes or the prescience that gave it away? If you're asking, I might have gone too far. But all the anime and sci-fi games should balance it out. I hope. ;-;

[8-3] Iyal bows her head as you approach. You press a hand to her wounded face-- and try to use your willpower to knit the wound back together. It-its too complicated to try and knit the veins and flesh and carbon strains back together. She flinches, and the bruise deepens in color, but she doesn't complain.

After a beat, you extend your offer. All the tension that was flowing through her fades, and she lowers her head to the ground. You extend a hand to help her up after you introduce yourself, properly, but she doesn't take it, rising on her own with another thankful half-bow.

"I'll have the Thornton bath-maids clean her up, and Silas to tend to her injuries. I don't think that even you can do anything about her [debt-slave brand]. She'll have to hide it or embrace it." Emma explains, watching Iyal with a calculating, hard gaze. Emma sighs, approaching the woman and towering over her.

"I am...Pheobe's [spouse, consort, first companion], and her second in command, Emma Thornton. If you mugged me, you'd be dead by now." Emma explains, calmly, with her ice-cold voice, stating simple facts. You're reminded of when she was made dorm-captain, and how she whipped the other students into discipline with that same voice. Iyal bows at her hips to Emma after glancing between the two of you with open confusion.

"Right. Wonderful." Emma continues, looping a robe covered arm into yours. "Shall we continue?"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 03, 2020, 11:20:04 pm
Interesting title there.  Second-in-command.

"Yes, dear."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 03, 2020, 11:24:10 pm
Was it the bright blue eyes or the prescience that gave it away? If you're asking, I might have gone too far. But all the anime and sci-fi games should balance it out. I hope. ;-;

Hold up that prescience thing was serious? I'm... really tempted now to give that a try sometime.

Seriously tho, was a compliment not a condemnation! I've a deep and abiding love for Dune-- and in drawing from it (and from whatever else), you've created something truly compelling. I am grateful.  ;D

Interesting title there.  Second-in-command.

I mean, she ain't wrong.

"Yes, dear."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 12:03:13 am
You'll never get a straight answer, but you had a moment on page 19.


William watches the two of you approach from atop his [beast of burden]. He looks between Mitch and Iyal with only mild surprise, "Are you picking up strays now? Such a charitable [angel]."

You and Emma mount up on the [beast] with the most comfortable saddle. Iyal walks beside it, nearby you. The Warmachines form up beside the animals, marching along and protecting your flanks.

You set off in the night, the beast following its siblings with no need for guidance from you. You take the time to cuddle with a dozing Emma, keeping your eyes fixed on the bright lamp illuminating a Thornton banner at the front of the march.

The trip takes quite some time, your new bodyguard marching along faithfully, even as night turns into day. As you go over the top of a hill, you see it over another, cresting with the rising sun of the morning over snow-covered hills.

It's a castle, that's the only word for it . It's a high construction built from the reddish-gray granite of the mountains, reinforced with thick walls of steel. Surrounding it is a small town, filled with factories and cypress houses. Around that is a high concrete fence, topped with barbed wire, and patrolled by Warmachines. A messenger walks out the great you from the gates of both castle and fortification to speak to William. You're surprised at the ground he covers.

"This is nothing like the Moore Villa." You murmur to a smiling Emma.

"That's because they got soft," Emma responds gently.

The gates swing open, and you're lead through. It doesn't take long for the Warmachines to break off, drifting down the alleyways to embrace loved ones and their children. Some look a little less happy, welcoming those that return while mourning their lost loves. You try not to dwell on it.

William and a small honor guard approach the castle, who's steel gates swing down. The only welcoming party is servants, hurrying to take bags and assist Emma off the beast. Emma's fake smile appears as she directs them to and fro. Silas and Iyal are bundled away together after he sees to Emma's hand.

Eventually, the hubbub dies down. Emma, with a knowing grin, takes your hand, leading you down brightly lit and plush corridors, to the smell of food.

The Kitchen is modern in all appearances, run by an imposing, round woman with plenty of scars on her full arms. You note it's not all fat- there is muscle there too. She breaks away from a cowering cook when the two of you open the kitchen doors. The woman's eyes brighten when she sees Emma, and she strides forth to embrace your lover in a tight bear-hug. Mitch pops out of Emma's fur robe, surprised, but sits silently.

"My, you've grown!" The woman speaks, laughing.

"I have, although I've missed your food! I've lost a lot of weight subsisting on grain-meal alone!"

"Poor dear," The Chef teases, "My my, the pretty [princess] having to lose a few pounds and put on some muscle! Such a shame--" Her eyes flick to you, "At least you don't have to worry about impressing the boys anymore, although I can barely tell that he's a man!"

"That's my lover, Pheobe." The chef's lips split into a gap-toothed grin.

"I'm [Chef] Mary Thornton, and the gardener owes me [2 credits in local currency.]!"

"Chef Mary!"

"Oh hush, you always eyed the new serving girls more than your brother did-- it was a sure bet!" She rounds on you with that smile, extending a scarred hand your way, "As she said, I'm Chef Mary Thornton. It's a pleasure to meet anyone who can put up with Emma. Your name was...Pheobe...?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 12:13:22 am
Smile and shake her hand.  "I'm Phoebe and it's very nice to meet you, ma'am.  Any friend of Emma's is a friend of mine."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 12:21:14 am
You'll never get a straight answer, but you had a moment on page 19.

...holy cow.

I'm... I'm gonna have to re-read everything, just to pick up all the references I missed the first time!  :o

Smile and shake her hand.  "I'm Phoebe and it's very nice to meet you, ma'am.  Any friend of Emma is a friend of mine."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 12:42:33 am
"I'm sure Emma has told you many wonderful things about me!" The sarcasm drips from Mary's voice as she looks to Emma, who begins to inspect the line of cooking stoves and other machinery, taking a special interest in a random cook slotting rabbits on to a spit. Mary laughs, gesturing at a bar nearby. "Take a seat, I know why you've come to me first!"

"Well, I wanted to see you." Emma grins, but takes a seat as Mary bustles into a massive walk-in fridge.

"Sure, sure! More like you wanted to show off your lover. Pheobe Gainer. Related to Black Nicky, no doubt. I knew you had a firm grip since I shook your hand!"

Mary, despite her size, is all deft movements, only glancing at the two of you when Emma asks her to make triple the amount for you. "Big eater?"

She cooks for a little while, the smell of herbs and the sizzling of food in the pan filling the air. She puts heaping plates of eggs, pancakes and sausage potato hash in front of the two of you. She sits down with a bottle of wine, which she drinks without a cup, eying the two of you as you dig into the meal.

Mary, is, without a doubt, the best chef who's the food you had the honor of tasting. The eggs are light, fluffy, moist, salted and filled with mountain herbs. The hash is crisp on the outside and exploding with flavor, the insides soft and sweet, complimenting the carmalized sausage and soft onions. The pancakes are like biting into a yeasty, sweet cloud, and the syrup she makes, then offers, only serves to improve an already amazing dish.

By the end of it, you and Emma are stuffed, watched by a grinning and triumphant Chef Mary. Half of the new bottle of wine is gone, and she has a rosy tinge to her cheeks. "Good, right."

"Could've used more salt." Emma snarks, feeding bits of sausage to a hungry Mitch.

"It was perfect." You offer, with a genuine smile.

"Easy there girl, you got something brown on your nose!" Mary points a finger at your nose.

"So...Mary, as wonderful as it is to see you, I was wondering if you could catch me up on everything."

Mary suddenly looks serious, draining the bottle as she looks to Emma. "He's pissed. Brooding in his room. Not eating. I'd be worried about Billy losing a hand if it wasn't for the new limbs. We've never lost so many before."

"He must have seen the gains we've made." Emma protests, her levity gone.

"He sees the losses. The money. The land. I won't tell you otherwise even if you ask me in private."

Emma sighs, leaning into you. Mitch squirms from her pocket, jumping on the table to lick at the empty plates. Mary eyes the puppy, trying to prod it off with her empty bottle. It snaps, biting into the glass and shattering it. The Chef frowns, and, instead of messing with the puppy more, she calls for a steak.

Mitch eats noisily, gnawing on the sinewy and fatty piece of insect flesh. Meanwhile, Mary fills Emma in on all the goings on in the castle with a practiced air. By the time she and Emma are finished, the kitchen is at full steam, and Mitch sits in broken glass happily, sleeping off its most recent meal.

"Be careful you don't lose fingers with those two." Mary calls after you and Emma, as you gently lift the puppy off the table and leave the kitchen. Emma sticks her tongue out at Mary, turning to you with a giddy grin, "Hey! Where would you like to see first?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 12:46:21 am
"Anywhere! Everywhere!" Laugh. "You know all the best spots here, I'm sure."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 12:48:53 am
"Anywhere! Everywhere!" Laugh. "You know all the best spots here, I'm sure."
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 01:14:47 am
"Scenery, history, or interesting?" Emma asks in return, "We'll be here all day, so I'll show you all of it, but where to first?"

"Scenery." You answer, grinning back. After brief detour to the empty kennel area, where you deposit Mitch into a bundle of old cloth in a heated room, you follow Emma.



The tower is indeed a magnificent view of the scenery, commanding a lookout overflowing hills, smooth valleys, and even rugged cliffs. The mountains rise into the distance above, flowing into hills and valleys line with small farms and villages. Flowing rivers cut through the stone, carving away red and gray granite, smoothing the walls of immense cliffs into soft, sloping pastures for [beasts of burden]. Away, in the distance, you see a glimpse of what the planet was before, you assume, SEED's impact. Its a flat sandy-gray, populated by sparse grasses, the occasional blue blimp of roving [beasts of burden] and great craters, some filled with gleaming red waters. The sun melts the snow, and you can see hardy grasses peeking through, trying to get the last bit of sunlight they can before winter truly arrives.

Then she leads you down, through three different libraries. One, with a glimpse of the spines, is filled with mostly technical treatises on the world around you. Many bear the emblem of SEED. The next, is filled with old books, and a trio of women, the eldest of who dictates to the middle-aged, while the youngest copies word for word into another book.
They dip nods to Emma as the two of you pass by, but keep focused on their task. The next library is filled with books on military matters and is much smaller. Instead, a good majority of the room is filled with a line of old armor and weapons.

You pause here as Emma hangs off you. The first armor is a set of primitive leather and studded iron. The next is something approaching brigandine, and the next is full plate. Soon after that, however, is the plastics of SEED, impressed upon iron to reinforce it while giving mobility. Next is kevlar, with steel bands-- and then it comes to what you know, the off-white plastic armor that SEED provides.

The weapons follow a similar progression. Crude revolvers and long swords dwindling down into the sharp lines of las-guns and combat knives. At the very end, however, you notice that there is a space being cleared. The armor stand being set up is roughly [eight feet tall], and the weapons that fill the case in front of it are all Thornton Brand; a massive cutter hilt and a de-activated fusion reactor based assault rifle.

"Our Family is old." Emma offers, by way of explanation. "The west was the last place to be...'civilized' by SEED."



You're led into the basement next-- but you can feel it through the floorboards. The energetic heartbeat of a massive fusion reactor. Down, down further you go, until you see it. It's huge! Thin old men in red robes check gauges, pump hydrogen and purge contaminants. "It powers the entire town. The outlying villages rely on solar power, of course, but a lot of our basement levels are power hogs-- I'll show you the research and development areas after...tomorrow."

Finally, you retrieve Mitch, who gnaws on the steel structure of its kennel with a sense of boredom. It seems to perk up when you pick it up, snapping at you-

[6 vs 10] And its teeth connect with your flesh, leaving you with a bloody hand. Emma scolds it, even as the wound, shallow as it is, seals itself quickly with scab tissue.

The next stop in your trip around the castle is, unsurprisingly, Emma's bedroom. It's larger than any bedroom you've even seen. A large four-poster bed, a desk surrounded by ornate, wooden bookcases and a fireplace, crackling away with a contained hydrogen fire. The two of you set Mitch down, and he curls up beside the fire.

The two of you do not follow his lead-- instead, you curl up with each other.



A few hours, and a scandalized house servant later, you pull on your freshly laundered 'dress' clothes, just in time for William to knock at the door. "The Banquet is ready, Em. Phebe. Get ready." Opening the door after he leaves, you find a small box-- with a set of las-pistols within.

How do you prepare for tonight?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 01:17:49 am
"Emma, who are your staunchest loyalists here?  How many troops do you command?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 01:34:45 am
"Emma, who are your staunchest loyalists here?  How many troops do you command?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 04, 2020, 09:59:55 am
"Emma, who are your staunchest loyalists here?  How many troops do you command?"

+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 12:48:12 pm
"I have a mirror that can show you both answers." Emma replies, pulling on a pair of dress pants. She takes the Las-pistol holster and straps it to her belt. You follow suit. "I've got nothing Pheobe, except a network of informants. William has roughly thirty of his men. There's sixty of my father's. All Warmachines."

"My guess is William and Father will argue over it. Maybe William will have to fight. He's been training hard though. Every waking hour. Unless his life or limb is threatened, we're staying out of it. If he sways the soldiers, father will have no choice. If he doesn't..." Emma leans over to kiss you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 01:19:47 pm
You and Emma rise from your bed after your embrace, and you can feel the weight of the future pressing down. You and Emma both check your las-pistols and step out into the corridor. Every step is slow, cumbersome, and you can feel your muscles tense. Emma leads you down the hall, and you step into a massive dining room, filled with people. It's quiet, despite the crowd, only faint murmurings drifting out from the bunches of people.

Seats at all the first row of tables are left vacant, with filled glasses of wine sitting unattended. There's probably twenty and a half of these empty spots, and you can feel your heart sink. At the first table you see, sits William, alone, head resting on his hands. In front of him is an overturned, empty glass.

William is focused on the seats on the dais in front of him, on a large, ornate wooden chair that sits empty. Several people sit elevated there, clad in elegant tunics and greatcoats. There's only one empty one seat elevated above the rest, besides the main seat, at its right hand.

Emma comes to a stop. Her grip tightens on your hand.

[1]Sitting on the table, beside William, is another overturned glass, with an open chair in front of it.  Then you realize what this all resembles-- a trial. "Damnit," Emma whispers.

You look to her in confusion.

"Father means to try you the same as, William." Her eyes linger on the chair beside the head of the household's. Softly, she whispers, "Do you trust me?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 01:33:56 pm
"Always."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 04, 2020, 01:45:32 pm
"Always."
+1 “what’s the plan?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 01:48:39 pm
Emma hasn't time to tell us, methinks-- hence the trust thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 04, 2020, 01:49:35 pm
Emma hasn't time to tell us, methinks-- hence the trust thing.
oh, ok, will edit the plan bit out
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 02:43:41 pm
"Then sit beside William." Emma gestures to the table, her head hanging low as she leaves you. She takes her place at the head table, at the only empty seat there, flashing smiles to those that try to strike up a conversation. You, you do as your bid, taking a seat beside William.

[7] He doesn't greet you, eyes on the empty throne directly in front of him. Through the...connection? You share, you can tell that he's afraid.

You wait in silence.

From a side door, William Senior emerges. His long blond hair hanging around his shoulder, thin and patchy from age. His skin is pale, paler than anyone you've seen on this world. He walks with the help of a cane, and each step radiates pain and effort. A small fusion reactor hums on his person, and the faint clanking of machinery can be heard radiating out from him. He looks tired, haggard, and unwashed.

He takes his seat at the throne and looks down upon his son and you. He doesn't address the two of you yet, instead taking his glass of wine. The crowd of quiet people mimic his movements. William and you are unable to.

"To those that have fallen. We honor their memory and  the memory of all brave Thorntons." He toasts, loudly, his voice echoing through the silent hall. Everyone drains their glass, setting it back down. "Unfortunately, before we can continue our remembrance, we must judge the two who lead them to their deaths. My prodigal son and Alphira, 'the Angel of SEED'."

"Let it be known; I have no intention of harming Alphira, as that falls far beyond my power." His dark eyes drift to William, he doesn't promise the same. "Alphira, as guest, you have the right to speak first, and the longer I don't have to hear the sniveling of the beast beside you that I once called son the better. What is your defense for the loss of twenty five Thorntons?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 02:49:57 pm
"I honor the brave sacrifices of the Thorntons that came to my aid.  Without them, the battle would surely have been lost and the new King of the Dead would have assaulted the Holy City, throwing our world into abrupt chaos."

"Their involvement in the battle saved more lives than were lost, and the Thorntons will be remembered as brave and determined allies.  There is much power and influence to be gained if you will continue to support our efforts."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 02:55:09 pm
"I honor the brave sacrifices of the Thorntons that came to my aid.  Without them, the battle would surely have been lost, the new King of the Dead would have assaulted the Holy City, throwing our world into abrupt chaos."

"Their involvement in the battle saved more lives than were lost, and the Thorntons will be remembered as brave and determined allies.  There is much power and influence to be gained if you will continue to support our efforts."


+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 03:01:20 pm
[9] "And only at the cost of our lives and our Family, I'm sure." William Sr. cuts through your argument. "And the bravery and strength of our soldiers have never been in question, but I thank you for your stirring commendation, unnecessary as it is." The crowd murmurs in agreement with William Sr., and you can feel the mood continue to darken.

"If the Holy City falls is none of our concern. The Thorntons have existed before SEED and will continue long after SEED falls to these foes of its own creation. Anything else to say, Alphira?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 03:11:45 pm
Of its own creation... I've suspected something of the sort for a long time. Worth looking into, methinks-- but perhaps this isn't the time.

It occurs to me that here, of all places, our words of treason against SEED might be well received. We could play that card... but of course, word would most likely find its way back to the Holy City somehow. Again, this would be easier if it wasn't so public...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 03:16:11 pm
"These foes are not of SEED's creation.  They are all-consuming mechanical entities from the the void between worlds, and the more they consume the more powerful they become.  If you don't work together with SEED, distasteful as it is, to nip this issue in the bud, this entire world will be destroyed.  I beg you, fight with me to save this planet.  I will reward you and your family with anything that your hearts desire."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 03:25:42 pm
According to Lucile, the first strain of the plague likely did emerge from a seedship, but not necessarily this particular one.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 03:37:34 pm
I realized I should probably show why you're failing, as opposed to just not listing the difficulty rating.

[9+1/15] "All the more reason to retain our strength and not waste it fighting for SEED." William Sr. makes a show of thinking, however. "Hmmh. Your offer is tempting, Angel. Truly it is-- in fact,  I will agree to it." He lifts a finger, a very Thornton, sardonic grin spreading across his face. "Bring back the dead Thorntons. Is that within your power?"

When you make to protest, if you make to protest, he lifts a finger for silence. William sets a hand on your shoulder gently, and shakes his head to you. "May I have permission to speak, sir?"

"As opposed to it as I am, I do suppose I have to let you try and worm your way out of this."

[16/15] "Alphira presents a unique opportunity to the Thornton Family. One that could not be ignored. This world will eventually be ours, that is true. As our ancestors willed long ago. One day or another, one future or another. We will rise- but what then after that? We languish here. We die with the sun and our name fades to dust, or the 'void' opens its mouth and spits out a challenge we cannot fight, one we cannot win against." Small murmurs of disbelief echo through the crowd. "And the void is true, a fact of our existance-- do not believe me?" William peels off his glove, showing the blackened cybernetic limb. "With this limb, and the blessing of my void-born comrade here, the one who I spent Thornton lives to save, I've reached levels of strength that can rival the Warmachines of our future. Besides that--"

[19] A small, blueish fire burns forth from William's hand-- the crowd goes silent with awe. "Phe-- Alphira, the woman beside me, can destroy any Warmachine with her bare hands. She granted this power to me by right of Blood, after I risked my life to save her."

"Like the tales of McCreary of old, there's truth in that there are other worlds than this one. That there our other futures for the Thornton family-- but only, only if we risk everything for Alphira. She has made me a devotee, father. Which is why I  ask you; let me take the reins of the family."

"Bold words for the commander who lost more soldiers than anyone in our history." William Sr. counters.

"Boldness. Bravery. What else should a Thornton want for?"

[1] "I refuse. You are not of my Family anymore, William. Your failures, your temperament, your loyalty to...whatever this [demon] is that sits beside you. They all conspire against you."

[-] "Then I wish to duel you for the right."

[12] "To the death. Champions only. Let us see what your new master can do. Nothing but parlor tricks, I think." William flinches at his Father's words, glancing at you. "If she can match any Warmachine, then perhaps two will suffice to challenge her-- its only fair?"

"I ask too much of you Pheobe, but I ask another favor." William murmurs gently, slumping into his chair.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 03:43:57 pm
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 03:52:29 pm
It would be nice to have our armor right about now, but I still think we can handle it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 03:58:08 pm
"I will fight for you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 03:59:41 pm
...right. Misunderstood a moment what we were being asked to do.

"You treasure the lives of your soldiers so... and you would expend two to make a point?"

...

"...if this is what it takes to earn your respect, then so be it."


"I will fight for you."

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 04:10:06 pm
...right. Misunderstood a moment what we were being asked to do.

"You treasure the lives of your soldiers so... and you would expend two to make a point?"

...

"...if this is what it takes to earn your respect, then so be it."


"I will fight for you."

+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 04:39:46 pm
"I doubt I will lose even one." William Sr. retorts, rising to his feet with a clank of limbs. William Jr. nods, turning out to the courtyard, with you following along. An exodus of witnesses follow.

William moves to take your coat and spare weapons, leaving you with a cutter hilt. Two fully armored Warmachines tromp out into the courtyard across from you, cutter hilts in hand. William Sr. leans on his cane, opposing you from beyond the two soldiers. Emma hovers by his shoulder with an expressionless face. The two chosen champions bow to you, and you do the same. Cutter hilts flare forth with contained fires. The Thornton's have a longer reach, and their blades burn white compared to your blue. Less powerful, but without your armor, it doesn't matter.

The fight begins, and they circle you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 04:42:06 pm
Start by using earth manipulation to create a raised platform beneath us, raising us up and putting us out of range of the Cutters.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 04:47:09 pm
They'd cut it down, no?

Let's see... fully armored means we can't just roast these guys. I wonder, though...

Can we pop the reactors of our enemy's Cutters?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 04:49:24 pm
I think they would struggle to cut it down, as you can't really cut dirt with fire.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 04:50:01 pm
But you can cut silicon.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 04:51:35 pm
Damn.  How about this:

Use Inferno to get out of explosion/Cutter range, and then try this:
Can we pop the reactors of our enemy's Cutters?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 04:54:26 pm
Let our will rise heavy about us, a numbing shield upon the minds of our enemies. Reach out and Overload the reactors of the white-flaming Cutters.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 04:59:34 pm
[11 vs 8/6] Your will crashes down-- several members of the crowd faint away, but the Thorntons in front of you stand firm-- but hesitate. Holding back out of sudden fear or concern. In that moment, you twist it out, reaching out to seize the reactors of their cutters.

[18/20] They both pop, the hydrogen surging forth out of the reactor-- one burns itself away harmlessly, burning the dirt below with gleaming hot fire that leaves it glassy and gray. The other one explodes more violently, blowing away the cybernetic hand of the champion. He staggers, surprised-- you start to surge forward to deal a blow--

[8] "Stop the fight! The Thornton champions both suffered weapon failures." William Sr. announces, and you nearly stumble from your own momentum. "Replace them-- and the hand, if you please." He directs the onlookers.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 05:02:34 pm
"I caused those weapon failures.  What trickery is this?  Do not interfere and stain yourself with dishonor."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 05:02:50 pm
"That was my will at work, Thornton. Would you have me fight these men like an angel or no?"

...on second thought, we really don't need to drag Alphira into this.

"I caused those weapon failures.  What trickery is this?  Do not interfere and stain yourself with dishonor."

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 05:13:24 pm
"Then you will have no issue with doing it again, hmmh? Once is a coincidence, twice is on purpose and all that." You feel a slight hunger pain gnawing at your stomach. William Sr. meanwhile simply grins, tilting his head to one side as his soldiers listen to him.

[15] You've convinced a fair few in the crowd, you can tell, but no one protests when the Champions begin to receive aid from their fellow Warmachines. Part of you wants to lash out at all of them, but you hold back, beginning to pace around the edge of your side of the ring. They are re-armed. In one case, literally. Then you begin again.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 05:15:04 pm
...right. Again with our will and our detonations.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 05:17:42 pm
This cheating bastard...

...right. Again with our will and our detonations.
+1.  Dodge with Inferno any incoming Cutter strikes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 05:55:19 pm
[20] They charge, and you shift your weight towards them-- something snaps inside your mind. You switch off your cutter hilt and focus on them, only on them. Like a sharp knife. They collapse to your feet, sliding to a rest. They still breath, you think, and you nudge their cutter blades away from them as they burn dirt to smoke and glass.

William Sr. stares, silently. Finally, "It was to the death."

"Father!" William states, glaring as he enters the ring. "They are incapacitated by her will alone, and still you play semantics. What more proof of power do you need?"

[1] "Draw your weapons and kill all of them. Alphira, the failures, Willia--" William Sr. cuts himself off as Emma draws out her pistol and pushes it to his back.

[16 vs 19] He twists, pivoting quickly and swinging his fist into Emma's face-- she's stunned, and his hand goes to the pistol, trying to wrench it away from her. You begin to move, only to be blocked by a Warmachine-- your fist curls as you try to swing--

[9 vs 15] [20 vs 14] The trigger clicks as Emma pulls it. William Sr. pulls the las-pistol away, turning it on his daughter, who stumbles back to try and get out of the way-- your fist impacts the steel helmet of the Thornton Warmachine even as his large fingers fumble for a weapon. The metal dents beneath your hand, and he's knocked over--

[6 vs 13] [16 vs 1] William Sr. aims--, turns the safety off, and pulls the trigger. Emma screams as red mist erupts from her shoulder, the bone shattering and-- William Sr. collapses, falling forward with a hole in his head. You glance back as William lowers his pistol, looking remorseful. You rush to Emma's side without a word, peeling off your coat to wrap around the shattered flesh and bone, holding it tightly. She breathes hard, focusing on you, she starts to giggle through her labored, pained breaths, "Fu-fuck. I fucked up."

Silas is pushing his way through the crowd, carrying a bag with a red cross rune on it. He nudges you out of the way-- not even glancing to William Sr as he begins to triage Emma's mangled shoulder. "Bring her to the medical bay!" The Thornton Warmachines hesitate. You growl, leaning down and picking up Emma without effort, carrying her to a sterile room. Emma shifts closer to you, even as she bleeds on you, her voice becoming halting-- "I-I guess I don't have to worry abou-" She drifts off, color draining from her face, leaving her blue. Blood pools on the bed beneath her.

 Silas swears, pushing you away as he pulls blood packs from a nearby fridge, setting up a transfusion station-- a nurse comes in, helping to stem the flow of blood from her gaping shoulder wound.

You step back, giving them room to work. Anger. Fear. Hatred. It all boils inside of you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 06:12:00 pm
Bah... I liked these medical vigils better when they were the other way 'round.  :-\

Stay near.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 06:41:17 pm
[4+4][16+4][12+4] Silas performs surgery on Emma's twisted shoulder after hooking her up to the transfusion station, trying to seal the artery that gushes blood over the bed. He doesn't speak unless it's in clipped, sharp orders to the nurses. At one point in the operation, Emma stops breathing-- forcing Silas to perform compressions and breathe into her mouth. Your stomach drops-- your breathing hard. Rage begins to flow through you until she begins to breathe again. Silas nearly collapses from the strain but continues to operate.

Then he begins to pack the wound with sterilized gauze, which slowly begins to seep red-- he continues this process until the bleeding slows and Emma stabilizes. Her pale chest is covered with blood, and her breath is ragged and shallow. The wound is deep. But she lives. "She's going to lose function in her arm. I can't fit her with cybernetics," he begins, "Too much structural damage in the shoulder." He rises to wash and reclaims his seat, holding a hand over his mouth, muffling his voice as he explains to a nurse taking notes, "Her organs might have been damaged, as well. Possible brain damage."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 07:02:14 pm

...

"William. Find him, bring him here. Tell him what you just told that nurse."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 07:13:08 pm
Silas looks to you, then waves a hand at a nurse cleaning up. It doesn't take long-- he was apparently standing outside the medical wing. He enters the room.

[16] He sits on one of the beds, covering his face with his hands and staying silent as the nurse lists the possible issues that will further complicate from Emma's injury. And she finishes with something that makes your heart hurt "...if she makes it through the night."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 07:31:29 pm
We can save her.  We have the ability.  Should we?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 07:50:27 pm
That's why I had us call in William.

Approach. Speak soft, halting. "William-- there's something I can still try-- you know what--"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 07:50:49 pm
That's why I had us call in William.

Approach. Speak soft, halting. "William-- there's something I can still try-- you know what--"
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 08:09:25 pm
"What can I do?" William asks, softly. "Did you want my permission? She loves you more than she could ever love me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 08:10:35 pm
Instruct Silas to give her a blood transfusion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 08:51:48 pm
That requires another vote.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 09:19:23 pm
I'm all for it-- but not yet. We need to be careful about this. Make sure we know what we're doing before we do it.

To that end...

E̸m̶m̸a̶ ̷i̵s̵ ̷b̵r̴o̶k̶e̷n̷.̴ ̸W̷e̷ ̶c̶a̴n̶ ̷r̵e̴p̷a̴i̸r̸ ̸h̴e̷r̶.̴.̵.̸ ̷b̷u̶t̴ ̵̰͛͑I̸̭̓̈́ ̵̧͉̓n̵̟̋é̵̫̀e̵͉͓̎d̴͈̆͠ ̷̖̈y̵͖̰͌o̶͍͌͐ȕ̶̡̻͊r̵͌̇͜͜ ̵͕̀g̶̡̳͒̿ú̵̼i̶̜̿̑d̸͖̈͠á̶͓n̵͖̝̋̎c̷̭̦̐e̷͈̖͂.̷̥̏
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 09:21:35 pm
We've done it before, however, and have had time to see its effects.  What more information do you need?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 09:30:29 pm
That wasn't us tho-- that was Alphira. I suspect there's procedures that need activation for our blood to work the way it did, and if so... if so, we'll need somebody who understands those procedures to help us through the process again. Hence, VOID.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 09:35:00 pm
Hmm.  That makes sense, but why the VOID instead of Alphira?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 09:40:23 pm
A̜͓̳̫̩̩̞w͍̰̹̲͞a̫̟̼̙i̧̫͎̪t̵̠͔ͅi͉͕̘̺̜ͅńg͕ ̰̲͕͜C̥̖om̲m̧a̵̺̱̤̳̖͖̻n҉̤͚̣d͙:͓͍̗̤:
̨̪͕͓̪
͓̟͇͍̻̲͖>_͕
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 09:41:44 pm
Hmm.  That makes sense, but why the VOID instead of Alphira?

She's... either dormant, or deeply furious with us for hiding that [plague] infection from her. Seems a bad time to be asking favors.

Meanwhile, we seem to have impressed upon VOID the need to keep Emma alive. I'm hoping it'll be willing to act to that end.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 09:43:24 pm
Huh, I'm not sure what the proper command would be.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 10:01:47 pm
Maybe this?

Deactivate reproduction controls.  Override: Alphira.  Mission sensitive VIP in critical condition
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 10:09:43 pm
That's the original, yeah...

D̢̯̺̰̣̟̙̝̦̐̔͛ė̬̘̰̻̰͕͈̖̉ͮ̑̄ă̷͚͕̮͉̔ͅc̘̻̻̘̅ͭ͛͜t̡̻̹̩̩̔͆̽̌̀i̵̥̫̫̰̺͈͔̙͑͗͜ͅv̌̄̾͏͍̝a̡̻͎̅͊̌̍̚͢͡t̶̛͙̘̺̫̗ͨ͐̑ͯ̓ͮ͂͂̅e̬̞̼̹͙͎̩̾ͣ̔̂̾́̎̄̍ ̨̦̮̝̝̦͔̍́̉r̶͔̜̝̭͚͕͓̥̈́̆̃̄͑ȅ͍̹̻̜͎͇̪͚̱ṕ̶̥̫̖̝̉ͥ͒͛ͤr̶̝̭̗͙̰͖͇̙̮̀ͪ͗ͯo̵̧̗͍̲͇͎ͣ̄̐̏̋̚ͅͅḏ̶̼̱̙̤̙ͩͬ̑̒̂́u̶͕͕̻͓̓͑͌ͮ͠c̸̥͉̯̉t̹͔̻͓͂ͯ̄̽̈̑ͩ͜i͈̝͔͉͋͊̂̎́͂̐̑̿̀͜ŏ̷̰̼̖͖̝̪̠ͥ̂͛̿͞n̫̳̾̽̀̈̎̀̾̚ ̺̺̇ͨͬͨ̈ͧͮ̃c̋͠͏̝̤̻͍͓ȯ̴̢̹̺͔̈́ͪ͊̍̿ͩ̈͘ņ̵͉̱͙̜ͮ̄̌͟t̡̳͔͛ͪ͑̔͂͟͝ř̝̖̲̝͉̉̉ͣ̈́͊̓̚ͅơ̜̠̋ͭͧͬͤͭ͘l̸͕̯̗̈̏͜ͅs̫̞̬̥̖̹̭̥͒̊ͨ͜ͅ.̫͌̔ͫ͆̐ͅ ̝̞͚̍̓̾ͨ̋ͤ̀͘͢O̴̠͓͌̒͛̐́͞v̶̮̮̱̮̖̠ͨ̊̕ḛ̞̳̹ͨ̀͐̓ͥ̒̀̚ͅr̶͎͔͕̩ͬ̂̋͊͒̅͌͠r̨͈̬̤̯̠̪̣̝͓̐̒͂̎͋͗̀i̶̬ͪͥ̈́̀͠d͔̹̥̞̩͇̑̇̂͋ͮ̕eͬ̓̏̾̐ͫ̽̀̚̕҉̘̫̪͚͎͉ͅ:̨̱͙̅ͧ̎̿̓͛̀͡ ̡͈͔̪͉͓̱͑̒͟A̘̻̺ͣ͗̃ͭ̆ͮ̕lͣ̓̐ͫ҉̬͕͍̜̪̦̩̕̕p̬̰͔̗͚͉͚̲͎͐̍͛̇̑̀́͟͟h̸̲͕̼̰̜̿̒̒̕i̧ͯ͂҉͙ŗ̘͎͎̇̿ͣ̾̐͠͡a̬̙̤̾́.̛̭̹̤̺̿̃̚͡ ̭̮̪͕̙͉͔͐͐̒̓ͩͤͅM̹̗̆̌͋̅͆̈́͝î͓̭͎̞͉͖ͪ͛ͦ̀̿̓̚s̨̢̳̭̙̫̜͐ͣͭ̔͡ŝ͂̿̚͝҉̳i̴̩ͪ̎͡o̰͙͎̙͎͔̿ͮͮ̎̈́̚͡͞n͓͙ͯͥ̓̽͗͘̕ ̛͍̖̲͓̹̪̪͒̾̉͗ͦͅs̶̢͈͎̭͂̒̒̑ͣ͊͘ĕ̟͖͓̱̪̘̅̅̽̚͞n̶̹̮̭͈̞̈ͤ͜s̳̹̥͕ͮ͌̋ͯ̈́̕į̴̬͈̾̐̔̈́̑ͅt̵̯̻̃̃̈i̩̣͙̝̔͗ͨ̽̍ͬv̀̍̌҉̱̠̲̬̲e̶̷͎ͬ͛͋ͥ̄̅ͯ́ ̮̠̫̙̟̿ͫ̒͗͑̐ͯ̒V̛̱̭̹͚̬͓̜͎̏̍ͫ̀͂̀Į̢ͩ͛͊̓͏̲̮̫̖̪̲̣P̠̻͈̮̰̿ͣͩ̉̎ͧͯ̑͗ ̖̪͍͉̝͚̪͕̉ͨ̓i̳̮̽̔ͨ̒͋͜ň̊ͦ̇͐̍̃͏̢̼̫̖̖̤̠ ͇͚͊ͦͮ͑ͨ̔͛c̰͖̼̼̙͙̬̋͛̊ͮ̔̀r̡ͯͧ̊҉͈̱͖i̸̖̮̓̑ţͤ̌͋̃͊̚҉̭̘̘͖̝͈̟͎̠i̷ͩ̎ͭ͏͔ͅc̷̦̤̖͖̬̤̙ͯͪͧ̐͗̈́ͨ͢a̐̀̿ͨͩ̎͏͔̖̣͉ľ̴͕̦̙͍̟̥̮̉́ ͔͙̀ͫ̒ͦ̎͂̉̂c̭ͮ̓ȍ̶͙̒̽n̨̥̘͖͍͈͎̅͊͌ͧd̡̙̱̘͎͈̹̖̲̄ͪ͠i̗ͪ̑ͯ̀ͥ͒̈̔͘͟t̛̛̮͓̄ͮͫ̓̀ͅį̮͖ͨ̑̈̇ͤ͞ō͉̞̤̙̣̻͢͝ͅn̺̟̍ͧͨ̊͠.̩̫̳̤̌ͭͯͪ̀ͦ

Quote from: De-Zalgo'd
Deactivate reproduction controls. Override: Alphira. Mission sensitive VIP in critical condition.

...but I'm worried applying the same procedure to Emma we did to William could break her mind outright. Better to see if we can't find a less invasive way of doing this.

.̴.̷.̸r̶i̵g̵h̸t̴.̶ ̵Y̶o̸u̵'̷r̸e̷ ̴a̸ ̷m̷a̸c̴h̶i̵n̶e̴.̵̸
̵Q̶u̶e̶r̶y̵:̵ ̶c̸a̷n̴ ̴o̶u̵r̷ ̶b̶l̴o̶o̷d̵ ̶b̸e̷ ̴u̶s̶e̴d̴ ̶t̴o̷ ̷h̶e̵a̴l̶ ̵a̸n̸o̵t̶h̷e̵r̴
̸w̶i̴t̵h̵o̶u̵t̷ ̴o̸v̷e̸r̶r̶i̴d̶i̶n̵g̷ ̷t̶h̸e̸ ̶s̷u̶b̴j̵e̸c̷t̴ ̴w̶i̵t̵h̸ ̷o̶u̸r̵ ̶o̸w̷n̶ ̷p̸e̸r̸s̷o̷n̷a̸l̸i̷t̷y̷ ̴i̶n̴ ̴t̴h̵e̶ ̷p̶r̴o̶c̸e̷s̶s̶?̵
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 10:26:51 pm
That's the original, yeah...

D̢̯̺̰̣̟̙̝̦̐̔͛ė̬̘̰̻̰͕͈̖̉ͮ̑̄ă̷͚͕̮͉̔ͅc̘̻̻̘̅ͭ͛͜t̡̻̹̩̩̔͆̽̌̀i̵̥̫̫̰̺͈͔̙͑͗͜ͅv̌̄̾͏͍̝a̡̻͎̅͊̌̍̚͢͡t̶̛͙̘̺̫̗ͨ͐̑ͯ̓ͮ͂͂̅e̬̞̼̹͙͎̩̾ͣ̔̂̾́̎̄̍ ̨̦̮̝̝̦͔̍́̉r̶͔̜̝̭͚͕͓̥̈́̆̃̄͑ȅ͍̹̻̜͎͇̪͚̱ṕ̶̥̫̖̝̉ͥ͒͛ͤr̶̝̭̗͙̰͖͇̙̮̀ͪ͗ͯo̵̧̗͍̲͇͎ͣ̄̐̏̋̚ͅͅḏ̶̼̱̙̤̙ͩͬ̑̒̂́u̶͕͕̻͓̓͑͌ͮ͠c̸̥͉̯̉t̹͔̻͓͂ͯ̄̽̈̑ͩ͜i͈̝͔͉͋͊̂̎́͂̐̑̿̀͜ŏ̷̰̼̖͖̝̪̠ͥ̂͛̿͞n̫̳̾̽̀̈̎̀̾̚ ̺̺̇ͨͬͨ̈ͧͮ̃c̋͠͏̝̤̻͍͓ȯ̴̢̹̺͔̈́ͪ͊̍̿ͩ̈͘ņ̵͉̱͙̜ͮ̄̌͟t̡̳͔͛ͪ͑̔͂͟͝ř̝̖̲̝͉̉̉ͣ̈́͊̓̚ͅơ̜̠̋ͭͧͬͤͭ͘l̸͕̯̗̈̏͜ͅs̫̞̬̥̖̹̭̥͒̊ͨ͜ͅ.̫͌̔ͫ͆̐ͅ ̝̞͚̍̓̾ͨ̋ͤ̀͘͢O̴̠͓͌̒͛̐́͞v̶̮̮̱̮̖̠ͨ̊̕ḛ̞̳̹ͨ̀͐̓ͥ̒̀̚ͅr̶͎͔͕̩ͬ̂̋͊͒̅͌͠r̨͈̬̤̯̠̪̣̝͓̐̒͂̎͋͗̀i̶̬ͪͥ̈́̀͠d͔̹̥̞̩͇̑̇̂͋ͮ̕eͬ̓̏̾̐ͫ̽̀̚̕҉̘̫̪͚͎͉ͅ:̨̱͙̅ͧ̎̿̓͛̀͡ ̡͈͔̪͉͓̱͑̒͟A̘̻̺ͣ͗̃ͭ̆ͮ̕lͣ̓̐ͫ҉̬͕͍̜̪̦̩̕̕p̬̰͔̗͚͉͚̲͎͐̍͛̇̑̀́͟͟h̸̲͕̼̰̜̿̒̒̕i̧ͯ͂҉͙ŗ̘͎͎̇̿ͣ̾̐͠͡a̬̙̤̾́.̛̭̹̤̺̿̃̚͡ ̭̮̪͕̙͉͔͐͐̒̓ͩͤͅM̹̗̆̌͋̅͆̈́͝î͓̭͎̞͉͖ͪ͛ͦ̀̿̓̚s̨̢̳̭̙̫̜͐ͣͭ̔͡ŝ͂̿̚͝҉̳i̴̩ͪ̎͡o̰͙͎̙͎͔̿ͮͮ̎̈́̚͡͞n͓͙ͯͥ̓̽͗͘̕ ̛͍̖̲͓̹̪̪͒̾̉͗ͦͅs̶̢͈͎̭͂̒̒̑ͣ͊͘ĕ̟͖͓̱̪̘̅̅̽̚͞n̶̹̮̭͈̞̈ͤ͜s̳̹̥͕ͮ͌̋ͯ̈́̕į̴̬͈̾̐̔̈́̑ͅt̵̯̻̃̃̈i̩̣͙̝̔͗ͨ̽̍ͬv̀̍̌҉̱̠̲̬̲e̶̷͎ͬ͛͋ͥ̄̅ͯ́ ̮̠̫̙̟̿ͫ̒͗͑̐ͯ̒V̛̱̭̹͚̬͓̜͎̏̍ͫ̀͂̀Į̢ͩ͛͊̓͏̲̮̫̖̪̲̣P̠̻͈̮̰̿ͣͩ̉̎ͧͯ̑͗ ̖̪͍͉̝͚̪͕̉ͨ̓i̳̮̽̔ͨ̒͋͜ň̊ͦ̇͐̍̃͏̢̼̫̖̖̤̠ ͇͚͊ͦͮ͑ͨ̔͛c̰͖̼̼̙͙̬̋͛̊ͮ̔̀r̡ͯͧ̊҉͈̱͖i̸̖̮̓̑ţͤ̌͋̃͊̚҉̭̘̘͖̝͈̟͎̠i̷ͩ̎ͭ͏͔ͅc̷̦̤̖͖̬̤̙ͯͪͧ̐͗̈́ͨ͢a̐̀̿ͨͩ̎͏͔̖̣͉ľ̴͕̦̙͍̟̥̮̉́ ͔͙̀ͫ̒ͦ̎͂̉̂c̭ͮ̓ȍ̶͙̒̽n̨̥̘͖͍͈͎̅͊͌ͧd̡̙̱̘͎͈̹̖̲̄ͪ͠i̗ͪ̑ͯ̀ͥ͒̈̔͘͟t̛̛̮͓̄ͮͫ̓̀ͅį̮͖ͨ̑̈̇ͤ͞ō͉̞̤̙̣̻͢͝ͅn̺̟̍ͧͨ̊͠.̩̫̳̤̌ͭͯͪ̀ͦ

Quote from: De-Zalgo'd
Deactivate reproduction controls. Override: Alphira. Mission sensitive VIP in critical condition.

...but I'm worried applying the same procedure to Emma we did to William could break her mind outright. Better to see if we can't find a less invasive way of doing this.

.̴.̷.̸r̶i̵g̵h̸t̴.̶ ̵Y̶o̸u̵'̷r̸e̷ ̴a̸ ̷m̷a̸c̴h̶i̵n̶e̴.̵̸
̵Q̶u̶e̶r̶y̵:̵ ̶c̸a̷n̴ ̴o̶u̵r̷ ̶b̶l̴o̶o̷d̵ ̶b̸e̷ ̴u̶s̶e̴d̴ ̶t̴o̷ ̷h̶e̵a̴l̶ ̵a̸n̸o̵t̶h̷e̵r̴
̸w̶i̴t̵h̵o̶u̵t̷ ̴o̸v̷e̸r̶r̶i̴d̶i̶n̵g̷ ̷t̶h̸e̸ ̶s̷u̶b̴j̵e̸c̷t̴ ̴w̶i̵t̵h̸ ̷o̶u̸r̵ ̶o̸w̷n̶ ̷p̸e̸r̸s̷o̷n̷a̸l̸i̷t̷y̷ ̴i̶n̴ ̴t̴h̵e̶ ̷p̶r̴o̶c̸e̷s̶s̶?̵

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 10:29:47 pm
N̴̠̊ǒ̵͎
P̷e̷r̴s̶o̴n̶a̷l̵i̷t̸y̷ ̷w̸i̶l̵l̷ ̸b̷e̸ ̶a̷f̶f̸e̶c̶t̸e̴d̵,̶ ̷t̴h̷e̷ ̸c̷h̸a̵n̶c̵e̸ ̴o̸f̸ ̵s̵c̷h̸i̶z̴o̷p̸h̶r̷e̴n̴i̴a̴,̵ ̶s̸o̷c̸i̷o̸p̵a̵t̴h̶y̴,̶ ̸s̵e̵l̵f̵-̶d̸e̸s̶t̸r̵u̴c̷t̵i̴v̷e̸ ̵u̸r̴g̵e̴s̴ ̸a̸n̷d̴ ̷o̸t̸h̸e̴r̷ ̶i̴s̶s̶u̸e̷s̸ ̵i̷s̸ ̶h̴i̵g̷h̸.̴
D̴o̴r̷m̷a̴n̵t̸ ̴p̴e̷r̴s̵o̷n̶a̴l̴i̷t̶i̶e̶s̶ ̸w̷i̷t̸h̵i̶n̵ ̶'̴d̷u̸s̶t̶'̵ ̶m̷a̸y̴ ̴b̴e̵c̵o̶m̴e̷ ̷d̷o̷m̵i̶n̶a̴n̷t̷,̴ ̸r̶e̴s̸u̷l̵t̵i̷n̵g̸ ̷i̴n̶ ̸p̷e̴r̴s̶o̴n̷a̷l̵i̴t̸y̴ ̴f̴r̴a̷c̵t̶u̸r̶i̵n̸g̵ ̸a̶n̷d̶ ̷e̴g̶o̶ ̴d̸a̴m̶a̸g̷e̴.̷
O̷n̸l̶y̷ ̴p̷u̷r̵e̴ ̴'̵d̷u̵s̷t̸'̸ ̸w̷i̷l̷l̸ ̵n̶o̶t̸ ̸a̴f̶f̴e̵c̷t̸ ̶p̷e̷r̷s̴o̷n̴a̵l̸i̷t̶i̷e̸s̸,̴ ̸t̸e̶m̸p̷e̷r̵a̸m̸e̴n̸t̷,̵ ̶o̷r̵ ̴c̷a̷r̶r̴y̵ ̸w̶i̴t̵h̴ ̵i̸t̸ ̴g̶e̵n̵e̵t̴i̸c̶ ̶m̵e̷m̶o̷r̴i̶e̸s̷.̶
F̴u̷r̵t̴h̸e̷r̶ ̸s̶i̶d̶e̵ ̷e̴f̵f̴e̸c̴t̵s̵ ̴i̴n̵c̴l̷u̶d̵e̸:̷ ̵I̵n̵f̸e̶r̸t̸i̵l̸i̵t̸y̴,̷ ̷I̶m̴m̵o̵r̴t̸a̷l̷i̶t̸y̵,̶ ̶a̵f̷o̵r̶e̵m̴e̴n̷t̵i̵o̴n̵e̷d̸ ̴s̴e̵l̷f̶-̸d̴e̴s̵t̸r̸u̷c̵t̴i̴v̴e̷ ̴t̵e̵n̷d̷e̴n̴c̸i̷e̸s̸,̴ ̸a̵d̵r̶e̵n̴a̷l̵i̷n̴e̵ ̶a̸d̴d̷i̷c̵t̶i̴o̸n̸,̶ ̵'̸c̶o̴n̷q̷u̵e̶r̵e̷r̵'̸s̵'̵ ̷a̴u̸r̷a̶,̴ ̶e̷t̵c̴.̶


Only the strong of will and ego can survive it-- some die instantly. Others are driven into worse insanity than us. Some enter a state of catatonia, lost within the dreams of those that came before.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 10:32:48 pm
Q̴u̷e̸r̷y̷:̷ ̵c̷a̶n̷ ̵p̷u̸r̴e̸ ̸d̶u̴s̵t̶ ̶m̷i̷t̷i̵g̴a̵t̶e̶ ̶o̵r̴ ̸r̶e̸m̵o̶v̸e̷ ̶o̸u̶t̴r̴i̵g̵h̵t̵ ̵t̷h̶e̸ ̶n̷e̵g̶a̷t̸i̴v̴e̸ ̸s̶i̵d̸e̴-̵e̵f̸f̵e̶c̴t̶s̷ ̴o̷f̸ ̴imp̸u̴r̴e̴ ̵d̴u̴s̷t̵?̷
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 04, 2020, 10:36:22 pm
We should not do this.

With her brain possibly damaged she would not have the will to resist the effects.

And the side effects would destroy what is left of her.

Let Silas do whatever he can.

I am not opposed to this on principle but.. I do not think it will work.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 10:38:55 pm
No. It just adds to our power. You're stuck with me...and 'pure' dust is one of the most expensive things in existence. Entire solar systems would have to spend hundreds of years stockpiling credits.

It does have a chance of ruining her. William had a strong force of will, a strong personality, one centered around hate and war and violence. The 'dust' takes to that with gusto.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 10:41:15 pm
I'm torn.  I need to think about it for a while before I vote.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 10:45:37 pm
Don't think too long-- that wound will eventually etch itself into her pysche-- her 'dust' will see that as its default state...like William and his cybernetics. She will never be able to heal that scarring and damage.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 10:48:19 pm
Is there no other way?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 10:49:10 pm
Alphira, can you heal her through hydrogen manipulation?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 04, 2020, 10:51:44 pm
Do the blood transfusion
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 10:54:11 pm
Do the blood transfusion

If it's this or her life, I'll take it. Otherwise... we've got to exhaust our options first. We've got to. The obvious solutions are not acceptable right now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 10:55:07 pm
Healing, and carbon manipulation isn't our line's forte. We're more...explodey boomey fire death from above. You could practice on some people and try-- but tell me, how much do -you- know of reattaching nerve endings and brain chemistry? Because all I know is how to turn the water in people's brains to hydrogen to give them a stroke.

William sits on the bed, watching you silently. You have the oddest feeling a similar argument is being played out in his head. Iyal drifts in quietly, through the open door, quiet-- you probably wouldn't have noticed if she wasn't letting you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 10:57:25 pm
Deactivate reproduction controls.  Override: Alphira.  Mission sensitive VIP in critical condition.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 04, 2020, 10:58:47 pm
Deactivate reproduction controls.  Override: Alphira.  Mission sensitive VIP in critical condition.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 10:59:44 pm
I... I can't take that plunge. Not without the word of her brother, at least.

Do you know, I've considered that trick-- ahh, but that doesn't help now! That doesn't help now...

...

Speak dull. "It could save her. It could kill her. It could drive her mad. Depends on if she's got your will or no-- your ego. If she hasn't..."

...

"I don't know."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 11:01:47 pm
I wonder if Lucile could help to mitigate any negative side effects.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 11:03:01 pm
You mean the armor keyed to McCreary? The one where we nearly ripped our arm off before VOID stepped in and overrode the controls with his signature? Its made for another 'line' entirely.

"I know." William replies, quietly. "You're more experienced in this..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 11:05:09 pm
Is it capable of interfacing with our powers to achieve effects normally typical of another line?  If so, perhaps it could help us repair damage to her psyche.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 11:11:08 pm
If only people were made of silicon. Or if 'dust' was.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 11:11:32 pm
Damn...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 11:16:49 pm
Deactivate reproduction controls.  Override: Patches.  Mission sensitive VIP in critical condition.
+1

I̛̘̦̰̖͎n͢ ҉̖̝̭̪̣f͙̬a̰͙̭̜͈v̘̗̗̖̗̕o̻r͓̗̘̤̫?̘̲ The iciness of the VOID creeps through your limbs, the first cold thing you've felt in a long time. You hesitat, and slump down next to Emma. The world looks...blurry already, and you scrub at your eyes.

I don't think I've ever cried before. You note.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 11:18:23 pm
"That's just it-- I'm not. Alphira is."

...

"If-- if this doesn't work-- will you hate me for it? For all of this?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 11:19:58 pm
Whatever happens, we'll get through it together, Patches.

I am in favor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 11:21:27 pm
We're Patches, yes? That's Phoebe.

I'm sorry.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 04, 2020, 11:22:34 pm
Patches is Phoebe.  We are individual voices in Patches's AKA Phoebe's mind.  I think we went over this before.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 04, 2020, 11:23:25 pm
Pheobe is patches, and you are...Patches, but seperate. Pheobe is your identity for this world-- Patches is who you are. McCreary wasn't his true identity. Aren't your personalities a confusing mess you insane person?

William was the first for me. My father made my siblings.

"Does it matter if I hate you?" William retorts, looking up at you with a spark of anger in his eyes. "Does it matter?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 04, 2020, 11:24:49 pm
I am in favor of the transfusion
“Emma matters”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 04, 2020, 11:43:48 pm
"...No. It wouldn't."

This voice abstains.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 04, 2020, 11:49:55 pm
If we are going to do it, it must be done now, then, no use putting off something that is going to happen anyway.

Do it right and do not regret it, no matter the outcome.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 12:05:31 am
William nods, and you lay in the bed. VOID accepts your commands. Silas looks worried but does as he is told, the loyal servant he is. Iyal looks concerned but doesn't say anything. You feel a rising fear as darkness overtakes your vision, consciousness draining with the blood and you drift off into--[1] nightmares.



Dark metal corridors filled with corpses, a twisting insect chasing you-- Emma burning you alive-- Doc Mitchell throttling you-- The Holy City burning...

What do you dream of?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 12:11:32 am
Home.  Not our new home, but the one before.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 12:24:07 am
Dark corridors, suspended in the void. Piles of bodies, faces twisted with silvery flesh, frozen into eternal screams. Blood-stained steel. Mold. Decay. Slime. Death. The only light illuminates terrors in the dark. Locked doors with glass windows, displaying frozen faces clawing to escape

The light flickers, and it chases you, down corridor, down hatches, it's long legs clanking on the metal as it gains on you-- you stumble, screaming as your leg is ripped away from you. Something crunches in the dark.

Then something sharp is pressed into your chest, slowly cutting you apart while you sit helplessly.


What do you dream of?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 12:26:50 am
SEED
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 12:33:16 am
Explosion. Fire. Dust. Ash. Choking the sky. Grass, then vines, then hungry beasts roving across primordial plains...

Children sitting before a machine as it speaks lies...twisting them into zealots. Doubt is raised-- the other children turn, angry. Watched by SEED, who's metallic shell of gears and ivy split into a happy, bloody grin as the children feed the corpse of their brother to it. Metal and wood teeth crunch down on flesh noisily. A smile twists steel with grinding as the children grow- feeding more and more to the monstrous entity that grows fat and content on the sacrifice.


Of what do you dream?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 12:37:21 am
The Endless Emperor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 01:10:58 am
The Endless Emperor.
+1
Also, wow. SEED’s more terrifying than originally thought
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 01:44:22 am
I am... unsure as to how much of that ever actually happened. These are nightmares, recall.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 05, 2020, 07:30:43 am
The Endless Emperor.
+1
Also, wow. SEED’s more terrifying than originally thought
+1

This whole thing sounds like a death metal album cover.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 11:04:40 am
Darkness consumes you as you dream about the Endless, and you struggle against it, towards the patch of light in the distance, only for pitch-black tendrils of pure nothingness to reach out and try to consume it--

You open your eyes, to find you are in the medical bay of the Thornton castle still. You lay tucked in on a soft bed, an intravenous device stuck into your arm still. Immediately, you look to the bed beside you-- only to find it empty.

A numbness settles over you. Replaced all at once, with a fit of rage, pure and bright that starts to burn within your core.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 11:06:19 am
”Where is Emma? Is she alright?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 11:13:17 am
Aww no. That [1]-- that was the big important roll wasn't it? We... we needed that...

”Where is Emma?”

+̸1̴
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 11:52:14 am
Nah.

A nurse emerges from a back-office as you rise from the bed. You pull out the IV and she hurries to your side as you start towards the door. "Eas-Easy Lady Alphira-- Everything is okay! I'll go get her for you, okay? Just-just sit down."

[19]All the weight falls off your shoulders as you collapse back into bed. The nurse stops the leaking saline, then leaves you alone with only a worried glance given. She leaves the room, returning quite a few minutes later with Emma in tow. Emma- looks different. She's as tall as you, with her long blond hair now bearing the odd blood-red highlight-- but her facial features haven't changed. Her eyes, however, have become an odd mix between her normal green and your bright blue.

Mitch, you note, has also changed in however long you've been out. He comes up to Emma's knee now, a thin puppy packed with sinew. His rust-colored eyes fix on you and never look away, even when Emma hands the leash over to the nurse. The nurse immediately looks panicked and just stands perfectly still.

Emma hesitates, then approaches, jumping into bed to hug you, climbing on to of you to cuddle into your clothing "I-I'm sorry, Pheobe-- for scaring you like that-- for everything. I didn't..." she sighs, pausing, giggling, "I"ll make sure to check that the safety is off next time, I swear."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 11:58:23 am
Yes
yes yes yes

good. I don't want to see what happens when we break the protagonist.

Just... enjoy the moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 12:18:57 pm
You say nothing, wrapping your arms tightly around Emma. She's less soft, now, but her warmth fills you with comfort. She stays quiet, accepting your embrace with a soft relaxing of her tense muscles. The two of you stay that way for a while-- until Mitch gives a growl.

The nurse abruptly stops moving, flinching away from the canine. She lets go of the leash, and Mitch wanders away to sniff at you.

He gives your hand an affectionate, you think, nip, drawing blood. It laps at it gently until the wound scabs over, and you think you're supposed to pet him now. You do, dragging your fingers through the rough fur that's growing from its head like a mane.

"I'm sorry for not being here with you to wake up. Sitting and doing nothing is super uncomfortable now. William says that's normal?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 12:25:06 pm
Huh. Mitch has warmed up to us in the interim, it seems.

"It's fine. It's fine. It doesn't matter now."

...

"You've met Alphira, I take it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 12:50:37 pm
"I...I met many, many people..." Emma murmurs, looking at you intently, sitting up to speak. "I met you too. Not Alphira, -you-. Although I did meet her. It...it was hard to ignore all of them. But I did. And they went away. They still give advice, on occasion, though." A small smile twists her lips, "But now, every time I dream; I see a new world, a new place, or an ancient memory. It's amazing. It puts this world into perspective...how tiny we were, we still are, how prideful..."

Emma breathes out a sigh, continuing, "I also now know that you would have outlived me if I stayed just human. You would have had to watch me fade away-- or I would have had to watch you die in battle, right?"

"Now...we are the same, right? For better or worse?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 02:07:19 pm
In a way yes. Don’t worry, our minds are still our own”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 02:16:06 pm
"Same blood. Different souls." Smile faint. "You'll always be you, and that's as should be. That's as should be."

...

"I've been in a coma again... how much have I missed this time?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 03:27:48 pm
"Twenty one days. Silas found out why, too-- your body basically sends out all of those black cells it has available. So your body, he said it was a defensive measure, enters into a dormant state." Emma shrugs, "I didn't understand the babble behind it that clearly."

"A lot has happened. I don't even know where to begin." Emma rises, sitting across from you on another of the bed. "William is the head of the family now, as expected. A few of our men broke away, because they thought he was dishonorable in dealing with Father." She rolls her eyes, "But, William and co. mopped that up."

"We've got sixty war machines ready for combat-- at your word." She finishes, then moves on.

"Unfortunately, when you sustained your injuries in an assassination attempt by my late father, Captain Zachary and one of your bodyguards had to sacrifice their lives to save you. Its a tragedy. We sent their remains back to the capital for a hero's burial." Emma grins at you, winking.

"...SEED has been calling for you to return to the capital. The lines are getting worse....estimates say that within another month, the Holy City itself will be sieged. They're drafting everyone available to go and fight. Debt-slaves are being armed. Prophets are saying this is the end times, and cults are forming. Things are getting desperate." Emma grins. "Now's a great time for a coup. The Pontifex has been building up your favor amongst the soldiers-- everyone is a soldier now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 03:49:05 pm
Speak soft, musing. "In humanity's darkest hour... the [angel] returns with her chosen prophets. A Family touched by the blood of the divine, its champions forged of flesh and steel."

"I don't like it... but it's perfect. A story fit to goad this world to a religious frenzy."

---

Rise. "That [radio] we bought at market-- has it found its way to Silas?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 03:50:43 pm
Rise. "That [radio] we bought at market-- has it found its way to Silas?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 03:55:01 pm
[17] "The priests couldn't have wrote it better."

[8] "Silas didn't know what it was, if that's what you were asking." Emma replies, shrugging, "I had them draw a schematic up, though?"

"I know what you said it was, but what does it do?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 03:55:11 pm
These are dire times... I wonder if we can truly achieve victory under these conditions.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 04:01:54 pm
“[Radios] are used for long distance communication. People with radios can send messages to each other regardless of distance”

“We should get going to the defensive lines”
Go to the defensive lines with the war machines
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 04:04:17 pm
“[Radios] are used for long distance communication. People with radios can send messages to each other regardless of distance”
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 04:07:57 pm
“We should get going to the defensive lines”
Go to the defensive lines with the war machines


Yeah, we ain't going to the Defensive Lines just yet. First stop will be the Holy City, so's we can properly take over this army; before that, we have some serious catchup to do in Thornton Villa-- catchup and planning.

These are dire times... I wonder if we can truly achieve victory under these conditions.

I've no idea-- still, we're bound to try.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 04:10:10 pm
Agreed.  First the coup, then new strategies from Alphira, and only then do we go to the lines.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 04:17:28 pm
"Oh. That's pretty neat." Emma offers, a frown curling her lips, "Why were they forbidden then? Can they really summon demons?" It took you a moment, but she pronounces the word differently now-- you're both conversing in what you think might be your natural language at this point.

"And what needs to be done?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 04:21:39 pm
"Yes, they can summon entities from the void unintentionally.  As for what needs to be done, the first step will be to meet with SEED and request a change in strategy and leadership among senior command.  If that is refused, we will then carry out a hard coup."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 04:24:03 pm
vote changed. Will add new vote here
Smirk a little. "Not demons, no... [demons.] Empyreals. Our tech can pick up signals if they're powerful enough, I think, in the void between worlds. SEED's trying to hide this planet-- maybe from the Empyreals, maybe from something else. I don't know."

"What needs to be done... well. Here, we figure out how to replicate this tech and hook it up to Thornton War-machines. We consult Alphira and work out what other off-world and forbidden tech we can make use of, and what strategies we can employ going forward."

"In the Holy City..."


...the first step will be to meet with SEED and request a change in strategy and leadership among senior command.  If that is refused, we will then carry out a hard coup."

"Like you said on the flight here: we try the peaceful route first. Avoid taking any more lives than we have to. If that fails... we'll reevaluate."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 04:29:15 pm
Smirk a little. "Not demons, no... [demons.] Empyreals. Our tech can pick up signals if they're powerful enough, I think, in the void between worlds. SEED's trying to hide this planet-- maybe from the Empyreals, maybe from something else. I don't know."

"What needs to be done... well. Here, we figure out how to replicate this tech and hook it up to Thornton War-machines. We consult Alphira and work out what other off-world and forbidden tech we can make use of, and what strategies we can employ going forward."

"In the Holy City..."


...the first step will be to meet with SEED and request a change in strategy and leadership among senior command.  If that is refused, we will then carry out a hard coup."

"Like you said on the flight here: we try the peaceful route first. Avoid taking any more lives than we have to. If that fails... we'll reevaluate."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 04:38:41 pm
Smirk a little. "Not demons, no... [demons.] Empyreals. Our tech can pick up signals if they're powerful enough, I think, in the void between worlds. SEED's trying to hide this planet-- maybe from the Empyreals, maybe from something else. I don't know."

"What needs to be done... well. Here, we figure out how to replicate this tech and hook it up to Thornton War-machines. We consult Alphira and work out what other off-world and forbidden tech we can make use of, and what strategies we can employ going forward."

"In the Holy City..."


...the first step will be to meet with SEED and request a change in strategy and leadership among senior command.  If that is refused, we will then carry out a hard coup."

"Like you said on the flight here: we try the peaceful route first. Avoid taking any more lives than we have to. If that fails... we'll reevaluate."
+1 as long as the integration of tech can be done fairly quickly.  We're almost out of time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 04:41:03 pm
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 05:09:20 pm
Emma looks concerned, but nods, pulling a notepad from her breast-pocket and starting to scribble on it. "I'll send a runner to the Steelworks to get a list of forbidden technology. That should help identify what we're capable of." She pauses, "If that's the case, why don't we rig up a big radio and try to call for help?"

"As for the integration, William intended the helmets to have night vision, and they already have sound dampeners. We could try and get one of the cybernetic techs to rig something up. How would it work though? Should everyone have one, or should just the commanders? I don't think we could produce them in bulk for every soldier after we arm our Warmachines."

"And do we need to bring Warmachines to the Holy City? Asap? William... 'purchased' a cargo-ship. We could use that to lift and drop off soldiers, providing the Plague doesn't have any heavy firepower."

You asked for me?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 05:17:00 pm
It sounds dangerous, but if we did call in the Empyreals, they probably would help us defeat the Plague and destroy SEED.  Of course, we could end up calling... something else.

"Just the commanders.  It isn't necessary for all soldiers.  And yes, I do think we should bring the Warmachines to the Holy City in case a hard coup is necessary."

It's your time to shine.  Per our agreement, we will kill the generals, either now or later.  Can you show us how to turn our strategies into art?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 05:27:26 pm
Hesitate a moment. "The void between worlds is... risky. We could call in another McCreary, sure-- or we could call in a Baron of Steel. We don't know."

"Just the commanders.  It isn't necessary for all soldiers.  And yes, I do think we should bring the Warmachines to the Holy City in case a hard coup is necessary."

It's your time to shine.  Per our agreement, we will kill the generals, either now or later.  Can you show us how to turn our strategies into art?

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 05:57:39 pm
Emma nods and watches as you fade out to speak with Alphira.

[15]What's the most vital thing to have during a war?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 05:59:33 pm
Hmm.  Thoughts?  This is my guess.

Intel?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 06:06:36 pm
Do we know anything about where our enemy -is-? Staging grounds? Feeding centers? Whatever crap they need to keep an army marching and organized? They're smart enough to stage -ambushes- that requires a level of organization. We have a line. Beyond that could be a civilization of the damn things, with arts, culture and---sarcasm. Sorry.

So, what is your plan for changing the military of this world, in the first place?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 06:11:15 pm
Perhaps use of more intricate ambushes through radio communication and increased use of artillery?  I don't think we have a silver bullet, but attrition is clearly not the way to go.  Maybe we could try hit and run tactics, with a fluid line?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 06:30:00 pm
More machines. More firepower. Better comms. An airforce, maybe. Less infantry. We quit casting bodies to the [plague], we hit these things from afar whenever possible. Should a city fall, we don't expend thousands to retake it-- we firebomb everything, and pick apart the ruins as we may.

Beyond that, this voice doesn't have much. Large-scale warfare is new to this voice.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 06:47:06 pm
The line is too far gone to replace right now. It must hold, or the infection will encircle the Holy City... Do you even need me, though? The last thing though. Where is the best place for you and the Thorntons?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 06:52:37 pm
I don't know... Perhaps in front?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 07:01:11 pm
If we could identify something these critters rely on, something we could destroy, we could consider arranging a strike force... as is, we're stuck on the defensive. The Line is long-- where is the fighting most dire, where will we be needed most? The answer to that will change every day.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 07:08:32 pm
You're getting close. You are not a feudal army, putting your strongest fighters in the front at all times--where do you put them?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 05, 2020, 07:15:18 pm
They are attracted to advanced technology and organic life forms to infect.  A single debt slave carrying a large amount of hydrogen we could detonate at a range would make an excellent trade off for damage to loss, without feeding them. 

Might not last long if they change tactics.

Use of artillery against hard points with us moving in to clean up seems like it would work well now that we know how to fight the king of the dead types.

We should find any more of those egg structures, the [demons] inside them do not fight on the front lines.  The egg or the [demon] might be some kind of command and control structures.  Moving to push past the lines and hit those structures might call reinforcements and lighten the load on the front lines.

Really we need to save our void energy for the [king of the dead] and fight the other beasts conventionally.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 07:16:16 pm
Honestly... beats me.  I like Superdorf's and VoidSlayer's idea of going behind the lines and finding those plague structures.

In cover, perhaps with other soldiers providing suppressing fire, so that the stronger fighters are free to fire with less danger of getting hit?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 07:26:59 pm
Too narrow of a view. How can you spread sixty soldiers over a battlefield that stretches across entire regions?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 07:30:33 pm
That could only be possible, I would think, with aerial vehicles and quick communication across vast distances.   Perhaps they would do best as a single unit, concentrated, rather than spread thin.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 07:39:44 pm
Over such an expanse... we can't cover all of it. Not in the way I'd expect.

Still-- if we know where our enemy's to strike next, we can move to be there ahead of time-- if we move swift and often, we can serve to improve the morale of those who fight without us. Is this, then, how sixty soldiers defend a nation?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 07:44:11 pm
This is -your- war. For all intents and purposes, I've been constrained to the ranks of the ancestors of our Line-- or else I wouldn't be giving advice and just -doing-. I think I'm the first, to be both an ancestor and the original owner of the body now inhabited by another. I'm awesome.

 An air-deployed mobile task force, to help with the defense of hotspots and do critical strikes is my good advice. But how you wield your toys is on you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 07:47:16 pm
Sounds good.  Thanks, Alphira.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 08:05:24 pm
Grin. Yeah, you are pretty "awesome" at that. Thanks for being here.

...

"Sorry about that... Alphira wanted words. We've the makings of a war plan now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 08:07:21 pm
Grin. Yeah, you are pretty "awesome" at that. Thanks for being here.

...

"Sorry about that... Alphira wanted words. We've the makings of a war plan now."

why is awesome in quotes? Why are we apologizing?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 08:10:49 pm
I believe Superdorf is being sarcastic, and when you speak internally to your...selves, time does move slower, but still passes

...I'll let that slide because I respect my elders. Regardless of your intent, you feel like Alphira still took it at sarcasm, but she doesn't seem to mind that much, returning the banter idly.

...

Emma has been playing with Mitch while you were distracted with other things. When you come to, she immediately stops playing, wiping any blood from her hand-- the wounds scab over quickly. "Right. How you dealt with her for this long, I have no idea. She went pretty quiet for me." Emma shrugs, taking up her pen and paper. "Anything you need me to do?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 08:12:57 pm
No sarcasm intended! Is just a word I wouldn't normally use.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 08:15:42 pm
Edited in light of new knowledge.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 08:18:56 pm
"It would be great to have radio communication spread across the line, so that we can respond quickly if any section needs help or has an opportunity for a particularly productive strike.  We'll also need one dedicated aircraft to ferry us between hotspots."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 08:24:40 pm
"William has acquired a cargo ship, and while it's not fast, its faster than walking. It can also load and unload while hovering, so that might be of use..."

"I don't know how you would set something like that up. Maybe each command post has a radio? Do we know the distance on the radio we have? Or does it just send a signal forever? If you would like, I could try and get some of our scientists and logisticians organizing something, if you don't know."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 08:33:26 pm
Feel free to correct me on this if it's wrong.

"Each command post should have a radio transmitter and a radio receiver, both of which work through the creation of a large structure called an antenna.  The larger the antenna, the greater the effective range of the radio.  Ask the researchers to determine the appropriate length of the antennae we will be using."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 08:38:18 pm
Feel free to correct me on this if it's wrong.

"Each command post should have a radio transmitter and a radio receiver, both of which work through the creation of a large structure called an antenna."
sounds right, radio waves are longer wavelengths than others, so they can pass through pretty much anything short of black holes
I’m not a radio expert and don’t know why antennae are needed
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 09:02:55 pm
"Officers in the field get radios, I'm assuming, as well? That only knocks down our required amount of radios to a couple thousand, plus the ones the command centers get." Emma scribbles a note down on her pad of paper, nodding to you. "Give me and William a day, we'll see how many radios we can make, and if its feasible for us to put together stations like that within the time we are given. SEED will have to assist, though, I'm sure."

"Anything else we need to handle?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 09:12:23 pm
"I suppose we should coordinate the coup with the Pontifex, but that can come when we arrive at the Holy City.  If the plague can listen in to radio communications, we may need to use some sort of cipher."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 09:26:58 pm
"Can they even understand us?" Emma asks, looking confused. "I've never heard of a talking Infected."

She slowly rises, scratching Mitch behind the ears before extending a hand out to you, explaining as she does. "We also have the higher scholar tongues, which already work as a cipher, if the need arises."

Then, gently, "When do you want to head back to the Holy City, Pheobe?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 05, 2020, 09:38:10 pm
“I think the sooner the better, also before the big plague thing died, it told me it would be back, so they can talk, at least the big stationary ones”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 09:45:40 pm
Sigh. "Soon as we've got our tech situation figured out, I expect. They need help out there."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 10:02:08 pm
"Ah...that's...disconcerting. We'll use the highest level Scholar's speech we can, I suppose, and hope its enough. SEED will have to contribute some labor into developing a cypher." Emma gives a wince before offering a solution, helping you to you feet. Your stomach growls, and she keeps hold of your hand as she walks down the corridors. You follow-- its either that or be drug.

"I understand." She murmurs, looking back and giving you a weak smile. "Do you...you want me to take the field with you? I might be able to keep up now." Emma offers a giggle and a wink. She leads you down the hall, into the dining room, pulling out a chair that's out of the way for you.

You lift your brow when she promises she'll be back. It doesn't take her long to reappear, a serving girl behind her carrying platters of food for you; stew, bread, wine, baked apples, and a number small, cooked vegetable dishes. Emma doesn't sit, instead, she begins to walk away, waving at you. "We'll catch up later. I'll go get the ball rolling, and have our Warmachines ready to go by tomorrow."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 10:12:14 pm
"Thanks, Emma.  I'm glad you're feeling well."

Eat.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 10:13:14 pm
last "I'm-happy-you're-alive" hug

We seriously lucked out with that transfusion. I was all ready to watch us descend into a raging grief-stricken mess and everything.

"Thanks, Emma.  I'm glad you're feeling well."

Eat.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 10:14:24 pm
I was expecting the worst as well, but was pleasantly surprised.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 10:22:39 pm
The luck of the roll shined upon you-- the 19 happened, and immediately after was a 1. So close to killing Emma.

"Wait." Emma pauses as you approach, looking back with confusion until you sweep her up into a tight embrace and a loving kiss. Surprised, at first, she melts into you. She blinks, smiling with clouded eyes. "Thanks Emma. I'm glad you're feeling well."

"Mhmm." Is all she musters, shaking her head clear as she walks away. Mitch, stays close by-- hopping up on a chair to start eating a roasted rabbit from the tray. You decide to join him-- he growls when you approach your food, however.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 10:26:21 pm
"Hey Mitch, who's a good boy?"  Attempt to pet him using slow movements.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 10:31:39 pm
Hm. Mitch. How on earth are we going to train this thing?

...hmmm
...
idea.

"Hey Mitch, who's a good boy?"  Attempt to pet him using slow movements.

+1

See if we can't use our will to placate the varmint while we're at it. Charming animals can't be all that different from charming people, right?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 10:39:10 pm
[11] You approach a growling barker. Many Outlanders would have called you a fool. However, you maintain eye contact with him, even as he crunches through the bones of the rabbit, swallowing it down in a few, quick chomps. When you're close, almost close enough to touch him-- he twists to bite you, a serious bite, no playful nip.

[3 vs 6] [16] He bites you hard on the hand. But your will swells forth, as you stare into his eyes. His teeth let go, and he slinks back, pacing away. The wound was deep, three rings of bleeding bite marks. You're pretty sure he wasn't trying to bite too hard, or you'd be missing a hand.

[20] You heal as you eat, Mitch keeping a distance away from you, prowling on the edge of your willpower.

[+5 respect]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 10:43:10 pm
Nice, that will thing is handy.

Let's try going for a run with Mitch next and see if he can keep up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 10:51:34 pm
...oh.
Oh.
You named this thing after the doctor.
Why do I only now realize this?  :P

Let's try going for a run with Mitch next and see if he can keep up.

+1

Once we're through excercising the dog, what'll be the most productive use of our time?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 10:54:20 pm
I'm not sure, but it might be good to see how we're holding up after that coma... and the coma shortly before the last coma.  Hopefully we still are somewhat in shape.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 10:54:53 pm
Heh, fair.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 11:10:19 pm
...I...I didn't realize it either. I'm sorry for ever doubting you, Zbridges.  :'(

[16] You take hold of his leash, deciding to take a jog through the town. You stop by to your room, changing out of the hospital tunic and pants and into a SEED uniform. Mitch follows, and you take hold of his leash. You body doesn't seem to have declined much. And with a little application of your willpower, you push through-- only to stop within one of the plazas of the town around the villa, as Mitch has to stop to catch its breath.

[19] It pants heavily, and you've only mildly exerted yourself. "Can't keep up, huh?" You ask, defiantly, and it growls, straining at the leash again. You and Mitch run through the streets, doing a few laps of the castle until Mitch plops down, exhausted, panting hard, spit gathering at the edges of its mouth. You're breathing heavily as well, but are not exhausted, the soreness in your muscles and legs are gone, replaced by a comforting ache of exertion. You plop down next to Mitch, and sit there together, catching your breath.

You pet him, and he doesn't have the strength to nip at you, laying back and taking it with panting stoicism.

[+3 respect]

You return to Emma's room, dropping off Mitch with a massive bowl of water. It sloppily drinks it all, and you're glad for the stone beneath your feet. When he's finished, he plops down in front of the fireplace and sleeps. You strip down, and step into the shower to clean yourself off. The warm water washes away grime and dirt and sweat, and you try to turn the heat all the way up-- only to find it has some sort of limiter.

Maybe I can break it...or asks the maids to draw up a bath of boiling water... You muse, soaping yourself up with the various soaps Emma or the household servants have gathered in the month you've been resting. You dry your hair as you step out of the shower. You're halfway dressed when someone knocks on the door. "Come in." You call as you tug on your shirt and strap it tightly to yourself.

Iyal steps in, dropping to her knees at the doorway at the sight of you. "[Fire-blooms-Flowers]," She addresses you, you're confused-- until you see the barker-bone handle of the knife sticking out from your equipment on one of the cabinets, "I'm glad to see you awake. I was told we would be leaving soon."

Iyal has changed as well. Gone is the skinniness of the steelworks, replaced by lithe muscle. Her clothing is a better fit, and is all Thornton reds and blacks, a military uniform reminiscent to SEED's own, with a little more pomp. She shaved her head at one point, and stubby brown hair is coming in, with no trace of the red of malnutrition. She switches to SEED dialect, "I wish for orders. Emma doesn't s-seem to know what to-to do with me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 11:16:39 pm
I was thinking Zachary originally, but decided against it since he turned on us, and went with Doc Mitchell instead.

"I will have several tasks for you when we arrive at the Holy City.  Coups are rarely clean.  You must be positioned to assassinate any lower officers that disagree.  I will have the Pontifex provide you with a list of officers that are likely to rebel."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 11:28:37 pm
Huh. Seems the way to tame a Barker is to first demonstrate to it that you're tougher than it is.
Also also, our little Fremen Outlander friend's looking healthy now! Excellent.  :D

"I will have several tasks for you when we arrive at the Holy City.  Coups are rarely clean.  You must be positioned to assassinate any lower officers that disagree.  I will have the Pontifex provide you with a list of officers that are likely to rebel."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 11:31:52 pm
"I will need some money and access to weapons." Iyal claims, keeping her head down. "Money to pay hired guns, and access to said guns."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 11:34:48 pm
Hmm.  I guess I trust her enough.

"Let Emma know what you need, and she will provide it to you.  Don't go crazy, but we have plenty of coin to fund you in your efforts."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 11:36:21 pm
Hmm.  I guess I trust her enough.

"Let Emma know what you need, and she will provide it to you.  Don't go crazy, but we have plenty of coin to fund you in your efforts."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 05, 2020, 11:41:39 pm
"It will all be returned." Iyal promises, bluntly. "Any more?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 05, 2020, 11:44:00 pm
"Nothing else at the moment, thank you.  If you would like some extra coin or any items for your personal comfort, feel free to let us know as well."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 05, 2020, 11:56:54 pm
"Nothing else at the moment, thank you.  If you would like some extra coin or any items for your personal comfort, feel free to let us know as well."

And another +1

Eventually, I'd be interested to learn a little more from Iyal about her people. We know next to nothing about them, they've (presumably) little love for SEED, and they're competent-- I'm thinking there's a powerful force to be had here, if we can figure out how to tap it. Might as well start with the one that's decided to swear herself to our service.

(Am I letting Leto Atreides influence my thinking here overmuch? Probably. :)) )
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 12:09:33 am
That makes sense.  There are probably a lot of displaced Outlanders within the city-state looking for work.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 12:09:52 am
Maybe.


Iyal glances at you with a very confused look "I've been more comfortabl-ble now than I h-have in my entire life. I need no more." You don't dismiss her yet, and she doesn't seem uncomfortable waiting, knees on the rug, head bowed, hands folded patiently on her lap.

Do we take the time to get to know her?
[20] 'Tribal' or clan types like these gave many recruits to the Empyreal. They're well-acquainted with hardship, strife, and death. Many of our 'line' are similar to her.

Mitch is sleeping comfortably by the fire, in a pile of rags. You strap your weapon belt on, feeling the comforting weight settle itself about your waist. You kneel, affixing the ankle sheath to your leg. You browse through the wardrobe-- and find that Emma has bought many, many more outfits. And, you note with a grin, most of the shirts should fit you as well.

You pull on one of her jackets, a crimson one with some weight to the fabric-- and you're at a loss for what to do now. Iyal sits quietly beside the door.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 12:21:36 am
I'm not opposed to getting to know her, but at some point I do think we need to determine what the situation is with the personal guard.  Hopefully Zachary's lieutenant, one of our schoolmates, is currently commanding it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 12:43:36 am
"Iyal, can you tell me a little about yourself?  I don't think we've had the chance to talk much."

I'm realizing now... forgot to mention to Emma about the need for finding a way to get better intel.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 05:40:09 am
"Iyal, can you tell me a little about yourself?  I don't think we've had the chance to talk much."

I'm realizing now... forgot to mention to Emma about the need for finding a way to get better intel.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 06, 2020, 09:26:16 am
"Iyal, can you tell me a little about yourself?  I don't think we've had the chance to talk much."

I'm realizing now... forgot to mention to Emma about the need for finding a way to get better intel.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 10:39:46 am
"I am nineteen years old." Iyal offers, not looking up from her hands on her lap. "You know what else there is to know. I don't understand the question."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 10:48:50 am
“The only things I’ve heard of Outlanders was what SEED’s propaganda is. I want to hear from you what it’s really like”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 11:45:16 am
"Every morning, you wake early to milk the [beast of burden]. If it's shearing season, we shear them." Iyal begins to explain in a monotone, "Everyone cooks breakfast. Then the men, and women without children, would either shear the beasts or mine, or harvest grain, depending on the season." She lifts her shoulders.

 "The elders and those who wished to, taught the children and cooked lunch. We would all eat together. Then, more work. Then dinner. Then sleep. Now and then we would move, either to a new crater or an ungrazed land."

"We occasionally went to war, or had to fight off Barkers or Beetles."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 04:06:02 pm
[1] "Will that be all?" Iyal asks, shifting uncomfortably in the silence.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 04:08:49 pm
"May I ask what became of your clan?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 04:54:55 pm
"Dead. Any other questions?" Iyal answers, sharply, not even looking up at you.

You shift uncomfortably, watching Iyal's bowed head.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 05:03:50 pm
What were things like before SEED?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 05:10:49 pm
"...None. That was thoughtless of me, I apologize."
"That'll be all. It's... nice to see you in good health, Iyal."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 05:14:58 pm
"...None. That was thoughtless of me, I apologize."
"That'll be all. It's... nice to see you in good health, Iyal."

this is better, scratching out my thing now
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 05:23:36 pm
"I should have made mention of my lack of previous loyalties. I apologize for not doing so earlier. There is no one to worry, Fire." Iyal ducks her head in a bow, continuing, "And it is good to see you in good health as well."

Iyal rises to her feet, stepping out the door and leaving you alone. You feel like that could have gone better. You shrug to yourself in answer, and contemplate what to do next.


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 05:34:37 pm
Use the bug oil for guidance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 05:41:25 pm
Use the bug oil for guidance.
+1, I laughed, which means I’m happy at the suggestion. Let our brain be liberated from reality for a time
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 05:42:12 pm
I think Emma maybe wanted to try that with us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 05:43:13 pm
Ask Emma to join us if she's available and would like to.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 05:44:31 pm
I think Emma maybe wanted to try that with us?
oh right, maybe now isn’t the best time
Offer to assist in radio construction
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 05:47:21 pm
Emma's busy as a bee right now, is the trouble. Seems a bad time.

Offer to assist in radio construction

+1

See if we can't use whatever ancestral memories we've got handy to help the process along.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 05:52:52 pm
Emma's busy as a bee right now, is the trouble. Seems a bad time.

Offer to assist in radio construction

+1

See if we can't use whatever ancestral memories we've got handy to help the process along.

+1, not a double vote because of the amendment, right?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 06:18:51 pm
One way to get intel would be to use a 'prophetic' drug, which in this game is a real thing, like bug oil.  You could think of it like the spice from Dune.  It may give us visions that tell us about the plague, the best ways to fight it, and other visions of the future.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 06:21:45 pm
One way to get intel would be to use a 'prophetic' drug, which in this game is a real thing, like bug oil.  You could think of it like the spice from Dune.  It may give us visions that tell us about the plague, the best ways to fight it, and other visions of the future.
that, or it could confuse us into thinking we are something else, somewhere else, somewhen else, combinations of these...it is a mixed bag, most likely
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 06:31:24 pm
Ohh, I intend to think of this stuff like melange. Until I learn otherwise, I will delight in its melange-like nature. :))

I just figure we can wait a little bit before we take the stuff. It'll make a nice thing to share, and we should be able to set aside a few hours for it tonight or tomorrow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 06:49:09 pm
Or you just trip balls. /me shrugs.

You leave your room, deciding on trying to help with the construction of the radio. You head downstairs, down, down, into the laboratories and workshops of the Thornton Family. You approach one of the doors, wondering if maybe this is where people are working on your radio systems-- only to find it locked. There's a small keypad beside it.

[9] You knock at the door, and no one responds. Your strategic plan has been foiled, it seems, by a locked door. That is, until the keypad gives a beep, and the door clicks open. Silas leans out it, staring at you with tired eyes. "Yes, Lady Alphira?"

"Oh. Hello Silas."

"Hello. I will assume you are not here to exchange greetings. Is there something I can help you with?"

"Do you happen to know where they are working on the [radio] project?"

"Ah- down the hall, to the right. Door twelve. Keycode six-six-one-three-nine-two."

"Thanks Silas." You hesitate, adding on, "For everything. Really."

You think you woke him up- he simply nods to to you and closes the door. You turn in the indicated direction, and key in the code. It slides open-- showing you a spacious workshop with a makeshift assembly line in the middle of it. Crates of supplies sit stationed out, and a number of older men and women are hunched over helmets. Emma is sitting beside a middle-aged, stoop-shouldered man, drinking tea. Her eyes brighten when she sees you. "Ah! Pheobe."

She gestures to the man, "This is MacTire,  the leader of this assembly team."

He inclines his head in a bow, "Lady Alphira. It's an honor to meet you."

"I was just about to wrap this up-- we should have all the Thornton helmets complete by tomorrow, as well as a few spares for ourselves. The command station radios being set up will require us to have permission from SEED, but the scientists are sure they can easily upsize the tech. If they aren't, they will be by the time we speak to them again."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 07:01:10 pm
Heh, there is that possibility. Regardless, might as well share the experience!

"Beautiful. Do we know what the range is like on these helmet comms?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 07:09:11 pm
Heh, there is that possibility. Regardless, might as well share the experience!

"Beautiful. Do we know what the range is like on these helmet comms?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 07:10:57 pm
"Two miles is the middle range, three it starts getting patchy and buzzy." Emma offers, picking up one of the radios and giving it a toss, back and forth in her hands. "Luckily the Thorntons have a long history of making forbidden technology." She gives you a wink. "So putting this together wasn't too bad. Interestingly enough--"

MacTire interrupts her, cheerful and happy, "They use a lot of parts that las-guns do! Well, besides the reactors. We've hooked them up to the reactor that the Warmachines carry.."

"They have multiple 'channels', letting us set up teams. Logistics is still working on it, but we've decided that each squad should have their own channel, and that command has a channel that all officers are on." She moves over to a bin, pulling out a Thornton Warmachine Helmet with a red strip down the center-- you notice that it has two antennas soldered in near the ear, and a cord dangling down from the collar.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 07:13:12 pm
“Can I do anything to help with building these?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 07:23:34 pm
Emma shakes her head, gesturing to the line of workers busily assembling the components, peeling off a protective earpiece and replacing it with the radio. "They've got it handled."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 07:29:28 pm
“Is there anything I can help with?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 07:34:55 pm
Chuckle a little. "You guys are amazing... I don't know what to do with myself, is all. You've got everything already covered!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 07:37:19 pm
We need to look into ways of getting intel and determine what the situation is with the personal guard.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 07:44:48 pm
Hm, yes. Lemme think on that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 08:15:38 pm
"We are amazing, yes." Emma grins, glancing over to MacTire, who beams a smile your way. "It's amazing what you can do with a crap-ton of drug money and cheap labor."

"William is organizing a Cutter training session upstairs." Emma offers, taking a sip of her tea. "I was going to organize the distribution and training of the helmets after he finished with that. You might be able to learn something. Or...remember something?" Emma shrugs her shoulder, before giving you a genuine smile.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 08:25:24 pm
Determine who is leading the personal guard and the attitudes of its members.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 08:34:14 pm
That is a difficult task-- you didn't familiarize yourself with the officers within the ranks of the personal guard, and who might replace Zachary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 08:35:16 pm
Ask Emma if she knows who is leading the personal guard.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 08:38:14 pm
[-] "They didn't tell me anything about it. I'm assuming they'll meet you at the landing pad and introduce themselves to you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 08:40:58 pm
I assumed that the personal guard would accompany us to our destinations, but I suppose not.

Ask Emma what can be done to get better intel on the plague.  Are there any forbidden technologies that would be helpful?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 08:42:22 pm
Somehow... without really realizing it... we wound up in charge of a criminal empire. O_o
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 08:52:21 pm
I mean, killing off the Thornton's competition and basically proving how strong they were to their competitors might have helped.

[13] "I...I don't know." Emma shrugs her shoulders, looking confused. "Go and take a look? You could probably fly over. Maybe use a telescope." She frowns, "I don't know what to tell you Pheobe. I think if I could answer that question, the war would already be over."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 08:54:05 pm
Hmm.  The Thorntons have experience creating forbidden technology, but not the technology that we need.  What we need are drones.

Do unmanned aerial vehicles, used for capturing images of the ground below, exist in the city-state?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 08:59:30 pm
[-] We've never seen one, I don't think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 09:02:00 pm
Go out and fly, search for locations where the plague is concentrated, and compare their locations relative to each other and various command towers nearby. Bring a telescope too, if it would help
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 09:05:35 pm
"Emma, could you please ask the researchers to look into the creation of small flying vehicles that can take pictures of the ground below?  An operator can use radio waves to communicate with the vehicle to tell it where to go, or it could use a timer to go in a direction for a certain amount of time before changing course and returning."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 09:12:12 pm
You briefly consider heading out to the front tonight, but find that maybe it wouldn't be a good idea without your troops, and without dealing with the glaring issues within the Holy City of SEED's military structure. It would take you -hours- to arrive, and you would arrive alone.

"...H-how?" Is all Emma can muster, staring at you in surprise and shock. "We barely know how the radios -work-. How...would you control something with it? I mean, the timer is something we could do...but how do you miniaturize a hover craft like that? And...if we did...if they got shot down, the Plague would infect that technology and send thousands of the damn things against us, armed with worse than cameras..."

"Like they did with the hovercrafts, and the Ai-Ai cannons, and the las-guns..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 09:13:46 pm
Damn.  A bad idea.  Sorry about that, is there any other way we could gather intel?  Do we really just have to fly over it all ourselves?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 09:16:11 pm
"We could work on it, sure." Emma continues, brushing her hair from her face, "But our people are already busy just trying to figure out how to broadcast radios further and how to organize them so everybody doesn't all talk over each other. I'd have to switch the lab to miniaturization...I mean, with enough time...maybe a year or two? We could rig something up, but scouting over the entire line- we'd have to make hundreds of them..."

Emma frowns, "The manpower hours on that would be difficult..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 09:20:59 pm
"You're right, that wouldn't be feasible with the time we have.  There must be some other way to obtain more information... I'll think about it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 09:37:54 pm
"...You're right, of course. My mind's running away with me."

"I'll get out of your way." (Grin a moment.) "Attend that Cutter session of William's, maybe clear the air with him a bit... our last conversation wasn't exactly the happiest thing."

"Should I be around for the radio briefing?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 09:39:04 pm
Do you know a way to gather intel?  Alphira said it was the most important thing in warfare, and Emma said the war would be won if we had a solution.  It's worth exploring rather than ignoring.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 09:39:46 pm
"...You're right, of course. My mind's running away with me."

"I'll get out of your way." (Grin a moment.) "Attend that Cutter session of William's, maybe clear the air with him a bit... our last conversation wasn't exactly the happiest thing."

"Should I be around for the radio briefing?"

+1
We should also actually do the things we are saying we will do
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 06, 2020, 09:45:28 pm
Eh, fair enough.

"You're right, that wouldn't be feasible with the time we have.  There must be some other way to obtain more information... I'll think about it."

+1

"For now, I'd best get out of your way." (Grin a moment.) "Attend that Cutter session of William's, maybe clear the air with him a bit... our last conversation wasn't exactly the happiest thing."

"Should I be around for the radio briefing?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 09:56:59 pm
What about a manned high-altitude plane with multiple cameras pointed different ways (each with high magnification)?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 10:19:48 pm
What about a manned high-altitude plane with multiple cameras pointed different ways (each with high magnification)?
this could work
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 10:23:36 pm
"What about a high-altitude plane with multiple cameras pointed different ways (each with high magnification)?  Alternatively, what about tall platforms with telescope operators that communicate what they see by radio?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 06, 2020, 10:29:58 pm
SEED has high magnification cameras-- they took pictures of you before.

Emma dips you a nod, smiling at you. "It's okay. I understand where you're coming from...some of the techs I've seen of [Empyreal] design is...amazing. Our's doesn't come close though; I don't think. What we have here, in this house, is more efficient than most factories. The last time I went to a las-gun workshop, one person assembles a single las-gun, from start to finish, from a pre-made kit that SEED sends. Same thing with Hovercraft--" Emma pauses at your latest idea, but dips a nod.

"...now that could work. Cameras aren't hard to find, or magnify, or to set on a timer. The construction of towers would be difficult...but you could try and press SEED into it. It wouldn't require our scientists to work on it, just a few engineers and a spare hovercraft...I"ll get them started on it if that's what you want."



"Sure. It'll happen right after the lesson, though. Part of the reason why William is doing one-- that, and...well, I'm sure he'll explain what happened during the ... 'dispute.' It was an embarrassment, and showed how little experience our so-called Warmachines had with using Cutters when facing another human."

She stands, leaning forward to give you a parting kiss. You head out the door, pausing to look over the workshop. Each person who assembles is sitting in a line. They do one task, then pass the helmet over to another person. One person solders in a piece, then they pass it over to another, who puts in another section. It eventually reaches the end of the line, where a person attaches a patch of cloth to cover the more sensitive parts of the radio. There is no mechanization, no conveyor belts, nothing more advanced than soldering irons and human hands.

The Cutter Training session is being held in the courtyard-- you can see that by the gathering of the Thornton Warmachines. When sixty of them congregate, its hard to miss. You press through, towards the ring in the center of the courtyard, where William stands, a Thornton Cutter hilt in hand. He smiles when he sees you, cutting himself off, "Hey Phebe."

"So, lets start with how a cutter works, shall we?" William begins, "It works, by sending out condensed hydrogen through a very thin pipe, usually extended by this dial." He adjusts the dial, and a razor-thin pipe does indeed rise and fall out of the hilt. "Now, having a huge flaming sword is really cool, right? Yeah-- but you -don't- need it for people." He dials the cutter down until the razor-thin sits a foot out from the hilt. "This can kill you much more easily than the full five feet this bastard goes out to."

"We use the biggest setting for bugs since we want to stay as far away as possible-- examine your range! Adjust accordingly. Now, the other stupidest thing I've seen is someone trying to block a Cutter Blade with another cutter blade. These things are built to withstand the heat of a single cutter-- not two of them. Which is hotter? [3000* celsuis] or [6000* celsuis]? Which one is bigger. Use those heads of your's-- we let you keep them for a reason!" He flicks the blade on, and gestures you out of the crowd. You lift your weapon in what you think is a good defensive position. "Now, watch what happens--" His cutter sings through the air, hissing as it goes-- and impacts your's with a weak thump. The fire between them grows hotter and hotter.

Then, William's cutter begins to melt, the pipe that already glows a bright cherry red suddenly warping, then bending. The top half of his weapon curls, starting to spit fire awkwardly. He switches it off and pulls the magazine out. "...usually they both start doing that, but let's move on."

He explains safety protections-- keeping it clean, checking for warping, replacing the piping if there's cracks or damage. If the 'blade' does warp, remove the power cell to stop it from...exploding. "And no matter how strong you might be-- don't. Touch. The. Pipe. Warmachine hand components can stop a blow-- but it'll start to melt right through after a few seconds. The pipe will bend and warp-- bad things happen. Thomas.."

"So, what's the best option for dealing with a Crusader or some junkie armed with this. Tommy." William asks, barking the name sharply and rounding on a young, male, Warmachine.

"Stay back and pump as many bullets into them as possible, Sir William!"

"Good! You've learned!"

"What do you do if a Bug, barker, or another Warmachine is charging at you?"

"Keep shooting. Use a Cutter if no one else is or if you are the designated melee. You should never, ever, drop your gun and try to have a one on one duel with the opponent."

William nods and steps out of the ring with a final, "Good lads." He comes to stand beside you with a smile on his lips.

Emma emerges from the Villa, followed by laborers carrying modified helmets for all of the Thorntons.

"Right, so, red is for squad commanders only!" She begins-- and then launches into safety, maintenance and how to activate them.

You listen intently, that is, until William speaks to you in a murmur, "Thank you Pheobe. I'm...I'm sorry it came to that. I never wanted Emma to get hurt like that."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 06, 2020, 10:39:44 pm
"Thanks Emma, please do get that started."  Should we go for the towers too, once we get to the Holy City, or pass on them?  It might help us get advance warning of any assaults on the line.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 06, 2020, 10:47:33 pm
Quote from: William
"Thank you Pheobe. I'm...I'm sorry it came to that. I never wanted Emma to get hurt like that."
“Not a problem. It wasn’t your fault. I never wanted her to get hurt either.”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 01:28:35 am
The radio towers? Yeah, absolutely-- if we can get SEED to approve it, or if we wind up shutting SEED down outright. Those things'll be tremendously useful.

Speak soft, wondering. "She's alive. Healthy. Strong. Whole. We were so scared for her that night... but she's whole, she's whole, and eternity lies before her-- and I'm terrified to think that it could have been otherwise."

Smile faint. "You care for her. I've believed that much ever since the Moores. It's why I asked Alphira to save you, when the time came."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 01:31:38 am
I meant the towers for individuals operating the telescopes, so that they can observe when an attack is inbound in any section of the line and report that via radio.

Quoting Emma from the update: "The construction of towers would be difficult...but you could try and press SEED into it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 01:38:32 am
Seems like a lot of infrastructure for not much benefit... still, I'll think the matter over.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 01:42:14 am
Being able to predict the attacks in advance would be a large benefit.  You said as much yourself:

Still-- if we know where our enemy's to strike next, we can move to be there ahead of time-- if we move swift and often, we can serve to improve the morale of those who fight without us.

By being able to detect the assaults before they hit, we can get enough time to go there and help defend that position if necessary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 01:44:30 am
Mm. Well, we can push for it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 04:40:56 am
"It's hard not to view it as my fault. This whole plan was my idea." A twist of a smile curls William's lips. "She's a good kid. Bit of a spoiled brat sometimes, going to be honest, but she's working on it. Especially when it comes to impressing you--" he gives you a playful nudge in the ribs.

"And here it was I thought you saved me because I'm such a charming gentleman." With a lazy shrug, he looks over his Warmachines as they try on helmets and organize their comm channels. "And now we have another powerful tool. Instant communication. It will be useful. Communications is vital to coordination, and now we can communicate without messengers risking lives and taking time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 03:00:56 pm
"Do you think SEED will agree?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 03:12:21 pm
“I guess contacting SEED is our next step, to figure out where he stands on this, we don;t need to tell him we have them already”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 07, 2020, 03:27:06 pm
If we have hover cars already why not use them instead of towers.  Equip them with cameras and an operator with a radio.  They can stay at or behind the lines while still providing an elevated view.  And if they get shot down we can just bombard it with artillery until it is gone.

They can advance and retreat with the lines without additional construction.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 03:28:43 pm
That makes sense as long as they can achieve a fairly high elevation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 03:47:11 pm
"Does it matter?" William retorts, glancing your way with a grin. "Which is more important, daddy's approval or saving lives?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 03:56:23 pm
"Saving lives, of course, but this whole thing would be a lot easier with SEED's support."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 04:56:23 pm
William gives a shrug as the presentation wraps itself up. The Warmachines, new helmets in hand, slowly disperse towards the dining room, and you follow the hunger in your stomach there yourself. Unlike when you first entered the room, you are now seated at the raised dias-- and there is just piles and piles of food upon trays, waiting for you there. William takes his seat as head of the Family, and Emma sits next to you.

The offerings today is a motley collection of bug meat casserole, grainmeal, potatoes, and yogurts. You devour all you can, until you feel full-- and you make a sizable dent in the collection of food. You wash it all down with a delicious wine. Sitting content, you listen in on various conversations, mostly out of boredom. Emma and you make small talk as well, but eventually, the two of you rise to head back to her bedroom, excusing yourself from the table. Emma showers, then you.

The night draws on as snow begins to fall outside her window, you lay in bed, watching the fire crackle in the fireplace while Emma finishes her remaining paperwork. Mitch lays in front of the fire, gnawing on a bone.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 05:08:15 pm
"Emma, do you ever wonder, if we don't all die horribly, what will come after this war is over?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 05:19:40 pm
"Peace, I hope." Emma snarks, glancing over to you. "This world will be ours-- we can do whatever we want."

"Part of me wonders though, there is so much out there...beyond the void. Worlds and wonders untold. I would be lying if I said I didn't want to see what else was out there."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 05:25:21 pm
"That sounds amazing.  Maybe, without SEED telling us what we can and can't learn, we'll have the chance to find out.  You know, speaking of the future... I've been wondering whether that bug oil just causes hallucinations or truly gives glimpses of what is to come."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 06:34:06 pm
"Well, we don't have to sleep as much anymore..." Emma looks over at the ornate glass bottles full of viscous oil. "We do head out early tomorrow...but not that early."

"Sure, screw it. Why don't we head up to the tower and give it a try? It's not like the cold is going to bother us." Emma suggests, glancing over to you then back to the bottles.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 06:41:45 pm
“Ok”
Get the bug oil and head to the tower so we may both try it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 06:42:21 pm
“Ok”
Get the bug oil and head to the tower so we may both try it

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 07:23:09 pm
[16] Emma locks the tower door behind you, and after some time, both of you are lying in the snow, staring up at the sky, skins shiny with oil. You breathe out a cloud of warm air, watching the snow hit your chest and melt away into soft puffs of snow.

"I don't think anything is happening." Emma opines, after a moment, her hand curling in yours. You nod in agreement, staring up into the dark, cloudy sky.

The clouds slowly drift away, and you with them. The night sky opens up, and you take in the pinpricks of light shining through the void, the curling arms of the galaxy. One on side, those lights in the sky glow brightly-- on the other lies only darkness, an indomitable void bereft of brightness.
There you sit, balanced like a knife.

Sensation fades as the void opens itself to you. It calls to you, and it beckons, the infinite expanse made finite. It stirs something in your bones, and you stare into the depths of probability. You are the fulcrum, and this world, this galaxy, it twists around you.

You reach towards the dancing stars and the eternal darkness. You plant your feet on the stone and step towards the edge of the yawning abyss below the tower. Emma calls to you, her voice hazy and swimming.

Do you f̸̨̹͙͓̗̟̐̿̓ͣ̅͂̂͛ȃ̪̖̳́̈́́ͭ̀͒̕͟l̠͎͕̪͍͎̜͓ͤͩ̃̇̏ͤ̚ḷ̗̫̳̼̱̺̞͎ͥͪͭͧ?̴̫͖̉͌̉̑͐̎͗ͯ̐̀͜?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 07:24:40 pm
Uh, no. Let's not break ourself the night before we march for war.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 07:26:43 pm
We seem to be experiencing the call of the void.  It's probably not a great idea to fall, though I sort of want to.

Uh, no. Let's not break ourself the night before we march for war.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 07:33:47 pm
The surge of willpower that was twisting itself around you falters and fails as you lose confidence in yourself. You stumble, grabbing hold of the false world -- instead of embracing the immaterial, the empyreal-- something is ripped from you, and you feel yourself sobbing on the edge of the abyss as the tower falls away into nothingness beneath you. Pieces burn away, memories, futures, pasts and present. Emma fades away into the darkness, leaving you clinging desperately to the stone. Alone-- but you're never truly alone, are you?

[20] Jump.
[1]Ĵ̧̨̺͈͖ͪủ̟̭͓ͬ̐̀̈́͠m̅̿ͤ̑ͭ̀͏̳̱̪̖̲͡p̸͓͉̯͋
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 07:36:32 pm
Jump.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 07:39:49 pm
Huh. Our counterparts both want us jumping... as does the infection? I'm confused.

Here's hoping we can fly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 07:51:59 pm
No-No...nonononono. You can't make me!

A scared girl, stitched together from all different flesh, huddles against her rock, the only fixed point in a sea of oblivion. Black energy eddies and drifts around you, waves of future twisting themselves into vicious currents, which tug and pull at the patchwork girl. You are with her, but you yourself drift upon these tides that spiral out of the single seconds. The cosmos grow faint, overwhelmed, consumed in gray.

Your previous fear has infected her, you note, detached from emotion now, and is reaching a fever pitch as she sobs and struggles to maintain a grip upon a rock crusted with frost.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 07:55:20 pm
There is more to the universe than this single rock.  Dive in and let the gentle currents carry you away.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 07:56:47 pm
I don’t know what happened, Ask why they want us to jump

There is more to the universe than this single rock.  Dive in and let the gentle currents carry you away.
should we really leave now? When we just agreed to help do battle?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 07:57:21 pm
We're not going anywhere, these are all hallucinations.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 07:58:51 pm
We're not going anywhere, these are all hallucinations.
fair,
There is more to the universe than this single rock.  Dive in and let the gentle currents carry you away.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 08:11:29 pm
Courage, young godling. (This voice speaks with comfort.) We are of the highest fire.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 08:34:41 pm
You take a deep gulp of air- and lift yourself, diving into the currents from that slippery, icy rock--

[20][20] Emma screams again behind you as the ground rises to meet you-- and you're afraid. Your back aches painfully- it burns, and your senses do nothing to get rid of the pain, but you don't shut your eyes. Your willpower coils around you like a snake as pieces of yourself drift away from you. Just as you're about to hit the ground, your willpower rips through you.

Heat. Warmth. Comfort.

You turn your downward momentum into upward momentum as fire blooms from your back in your peripheral vision. It spreads forth into the night with a blinding flash. You nearly clip the castle wall, but instead only leave only a faint trail of sparks.

The fear fades as comfort fills you, buoying you up into the cold skies. Hovering, you find, is a little challenging to do in your intoxicated state, having to pump more energy into your wings of blue fire. So instead, you soar over the mountainous landscape, mimicking the birds of prey you saw in the air when you were younger. As you drift over the fields, restlessly, the world changes beneath you-- shifting back into the dark void.

Then, fire blooms across it, flashing at one another. Suns grow, competing for hydrogen. Plants bloom, competing for sunlight. And finally, across the plains march machines of war--

Arrow and sling shot twist into lead, then into the bright glow of las-fire. Stones turn into mortar shot, and finally into nuclear armageddon. But across the wreckage, the war still wages. However, you are not alone, not anymore.  Six, seven-winged entities of pure, white-hot fire emerge, following behind you, six wings sprouting from their backs, with a seventh rising from the middle, curling down and behind.

Your skin peels away into dust, into ash, until you're consumed by the fire, becoming nothing more than pure willpower. You and your brethren rain fire down upon the battlefield, great blasts of thermo-nuclear energies ripped from the very water in the air. Below and behind march great soldiers in gleaming gold and black, twisting the earth into savage spikes, impromptu barricades or massive armor that destroys tanks and men alike.

From their ranks emerge creatures of darkness with sharp barbed wires, and spears emerging to slash and impale.

Others come too, a multitude of living weapons made from willpower alone. And at the center of it, leading these weapons from the front is a massive eddy of willpower that hurts you to look at, even in memory, and pure, inky blackness. A pale figure stands within, a man or a woman, its androgynous features twisted not into hate, not into fear or loathing.

But one of remorse. Of sadness. Of pity.



The creeping heat of morning awakens you, fighting back against the snow and cold that covers the ground. You look down from your perch on a patch of green on the side of the mountain, to the Thornton villa in the distance. You swiftly realize that you are still naked- you reach back, touching between your shoulders to find a healing scar. Beneath you is a Thornton village, tucked into a valley.

The smell of freshly baked bread rises from the village, and your stomach protests.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 08:42:41 pm
Ahhaha-- we can fly
We could always fly!

...still, we'd better get back and fast.

In order of priority:

- clothing
- directions back to Villa
- maybe food.

Obtain.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 08:47:09 pm
Interesting.  We saw two lines there, fire and silicon.  What were the creatures of darkness, though?  They were helping the Empyreals...

Living weapons made from willpower alone.  How could that be possible?

Ahhaha-- we can fly
We could always fly!

...still, we'd better get back and fast.

In order of priority:

- clothing
- directions back to Villa
- maybe food.

Obtain.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 08:51:35 pm
Interesting.  We saw two lines there, fire and silicon.  What were the creatures of darkness, though?  They were helping the Empyreals...

Remember this thing?

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Maybe it's got control over iron or something, I dunno. Point is, there's precedent.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 08:53:22 pm
Hmm.  Can demons create living armies that resemble themselves?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 08:55:28 pm
So, did we see the past?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 08:57:35 pm
Not clear, but I think so.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 08:58:26 pm
Living weapons made from willpower alone.  How could that be possible?

I've come to suspect that our "willpower" is... some sort of quasi-biological nano-cloud, encoded with the memetic information of all those who through transfusion gave rise to us. It seems that even if the flesh burns away, the cloud can (sometimes) persist. Whether that cloud-entity could be in any way considered the same person as whoever produced it, I dunno.

('course, I may be horribly off the mark here. Is a guess.)

So, did we see the past?

Seems like. Was awfully specific, to be a vision of what is to come.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 08:59:57 pm
Interesting.  We saw two lines there, fire and silicon.  What were the creatures of darkness, though?  They were helping the Empyreals...

Living weapons made from willpower alone.  How could that be possible?

Ahhaha-- we can fly
We could always fly!

...still, we'd better get back and fast.

In order of priority:

- clothing
- directions back to Villa
- maybe food.

Obtain.

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 09:07:47 pm
I think you're right, the "dust" is what gives us our powers, maybe.  I want to try creating a living weapon, if possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 09:13:43 pm
Yeah, we've a word or two suggesting as much.

Q̴u̷e̸r̷y̷:̷ ̵c̷a̶n̷ ̵p̷u̸r̴e̸ ̸d̶u̴s̵t̶ ̶m̷i̷t̷i̵g̴a̵t̶e̶ ̶o̵r̴ ̸r̶e̸m̵o̶v̸e̷ ̶o̸u̶t̴r̴i̵g̵h̵t̵ ̵t̷h̶e̸ ̶n̷e̵g̶a̷t̸i̴v̴e̸ ̸s̶i̵d̸e̴-̵e̵f̸f̵e̶c̴t̶s̷ ̴o̷f̸ ̴imp̸u̴r̴e̴ ̵d̴u̴s̷t̵?̷

No. It just adds to our power.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 09:16:06 pm
H-how...wow. Spot on.

[6] With giddiness from the knowledge, figuring the best way down is to fly, you take a step off the mountain-- and try to sprout your wings again-- and tumble down, slaved once more to gravity, coming to rest on sharp gravel. You're back on your feet again, however, with only minor aches and lacerations to show for it.

[11] Your wings once again sprout from your back-- and you take the time to examine them the best you can. They look, at the moment, to just be pure fire, ebbing and flowing with the currents of your willpower. You notice black dust emerging from your back, tipping them. But with a slight tweak to the arithmetic, they turn into angelic wings of multi-hued fire feathers. Then into crooked, boney things. Another set turns into gossamer strands of a multi-hued insectoid nature, like the beetles from your 'childhood' in the Academy. You let them turn back into fire--

And you feel...odd. Less real, less whole.

F̧͓͔̗̠l̤̼͉̰̳͝e̻̘s̘̗͍h̖̤͉̰̦͍̤͜ ͍̜̼̯̳̥͢c̵̱̻̪oh̦̠͍̖̱̝̪e͇̖̳͉s̛̤͓̦̦͔̪̝i̱͈o͏͈̙̞̱n̼͝:̡̥̭ ̣̦͍̱̰̫̦90͖͖͈̗͈͖͝%̯͇͡

That's ominous.

Regardless, you drift down the mountainside, feeling free once more-- and alight in the village plaza. A squad of Thornton Warmachines, fully clad in their clanking armor, face you. You think they're staring as you cancel the arithmetic that burns the wings of your back-- and you notice the 'dust' at the tips evaporates away.

"L-lady...Alphira." The one in the front stutters, and you can tell she's probably deeply surprised by the turn of events.

"Oh come now, it's nothing you haven't seen before." You tease, confidently.

"...yes, and no." She gestures, and a group of older women hurries to bring you a shiny robe of crimson, which you gratefully accept.

"Co-could you uh, feed me, before I head to the Villa?"

The lead Warmachine gestures you into a house with a larger door than the rest, and you duck inside, out of the way of gawking civilians. A young man is manning a machine that produces orange hydrogen fire, cooking a pot of porridge atop it, and looks confused when the two of you enter. "I-I wasn't expecting company!"

They cloth you in simple garments of home-spun wool, and it's scratchy, but hides your nudity. You eat a few good bowls of grain-meal with the female Warmachine, and, you come to find out, her husband. A child emerges sleepily, sitting at the table and eating a bowl, disinterested in you. "We saw a light in the sky, last night,  flying in circles-- was that you?"

You wince, and offer a weak grin. Instead of answering, you instead ask for directions.

"Yeah, just follow the path out of town, towards the east. It leads back to the Villa-- but you're more than welcome to accompany us there. We're heading there for the muster."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 09:21:30 pm
Haha that's awesome.  I guess we have to use it sparingly though.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 09:27:50 pm
H-how...wow. Spot on.

Hooray!

We'd have hemmed and hawed about that awhile longer yet, y'know. You didn't have to tell us just yet. ;)

E̵x̸p̵l̷a̶i̵n̸ ̶t̷o̵ ̸m̵e̶ ̷t̸h̵i̴s̵.̴.̸.̸ ̸̦̹̈́f̸̭̭͐l̶͕͘e̷̠͛s̶̗͋̐h̴͔̘͗̄ ̷̺̬̄c̸̖̪͑o̶͍͌h̷͇͛̋e̷̹͓̿s̵͙̤͐̚ȋ̶̲̬o̷̳̍ń̴͎͝.̸͕̮̾͒
Smile. "That would be lovely, thank you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 09:28:23 pm
H-how...wow. Spot on.

Hooray!

We'd have hemmed and hawed about that awhile longer yet, y'know. You didn't have to tell us just yet. ;)

E̵x̸p̵l̷a̶i̵n̸ ̶t̷o̵ ̸m̵e̶ ̷t̸h̵i̴s̵.̴.̸.̸ ̸̦̹̈́f̸̭̭͐l̶͕͘e̷̠͛s̶̗͋̐h̴͔̘͗̄ ̷̺̬̄c̸̖̪͑o̶͍͌h̷͇͛̋e̷̹͓̿s̵͙̤͐̚ȋ̶̲̬o̷̳̍ń̴͎͝.̸͕̮̾͒
Smile. "That would be lovely, thank you."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 09:35:02 pm
H-how...wow. Spot on.

Hooray!

We'd have hemmed and hawed about that awhile longer yet, y'know. You didn't have to tell us just yet. ;)

E̵x̸p̵l̷a̶i̵n̸ ̶t̷o̵ ̸m̵e̶ ̷t̸h̵i̴s̵.̴.̸.̸ ̸̦̹̈́f̸̭̭͐l̶͕͘e̷̠͛s̶̗͋̐h̴͔̘͗̄ ̷̺̬̄c̸̖̪͑o̶͍͌h̷͇͛̋e̷̹͓̿s̵͙̤͐̚ȋ̶̲̬o̷̳̍ń̴͎͝.̸͕̮̾͒
Smile. "That would be lovely, thank you."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 09:39:24 pm
Eh. You were kinda spot on. The details are a little wrong, though.


Flesh cohesion is how tied to the material you are. It is reduced by shaping your body with the dust, or splitting the dust away to use as a reference point. Too little and you begin to break apart as it overwhelms your body. You begin to turn, in our case, into something that serves only your primary directives:
S̜͈̣͍̖͞eŕ̳v̱͓̹̱e̥̠̦̖ ͍͡H̠̱̟͎̩͞um̭̬̤a͈͘n̼̪̘̙̤̗̱i̡͔͉͖̤̞̜t̠͖͎̣y͕̗̬.̰̠̳̹̥
̤̪͖̭͝D͘e̼̳͖s͈̕t̗r̻̖o̰͉̞̤y͇̪.͇̰̻͙̣͖
̸̜̻͔̙P̼͉ro͎̞̺̹̠̝t̴͖̬̫̯̪͚e̶̳̙͇̰͇̞̟ct͉̼̭͙̫ͅ ͏̺͈͙̯̝̜È̜̻̣̯̤m͙̠͚͈̰̦̭m̗̹̺͔̝̯̰a̴̟̻̙͚̜͇ ̮͈͔͎̪̤͎T͉͠h̦o͞r҉̼̭n̡̝ṭ̬͕̳ọ̴̗̯̣̜̩͖n̮̠.̧
S̵̟̣̺͍̥ur̗v̛͕̻̳͕͓ị̛̖̥̘ve̴.̰̮


You and the Warmachine's husband make small talk as she does final checks, the child almost falling asleep in their bowl of porridge before their father gives them a gentle whack on the hand with a wooden spoon. The boy grumbles. "Stay awake! We still have work to do after your mother leaves!"

You smile at the scene of domestic disharmony and extricate yourself as the Warmachine, who's helmet, you note, bears a red stripe, comes in to say goodbye to her family.

Then you're marching at her side, out of the city. The Warmachines peel their helmets off to banter and joke with one another, hiding the nerves they must feel on their way to war. The commander does not speak much, giving you a glance every now and then.

"So. You can fly." She finally states, bluntly, "You...really are an [angel], aren't you?" The Warmachines go silent as they watch you closely for your answer. "And...that means Emma and William...are also [angels] now, too?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 09:42:53 pm
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 09:44:32 pm
"The idea of angels and demons is a lie from SEED.  We are called Empyreals, and we are beings from other worlds."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 09:46:19 pm
"The idea of angels and demons is a lie from SEED.  We are called Empyreals, and we are beings from other worlds."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 09:54:46 pm
This damage to our cohesion-- can it be repaired? Reversed?

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 09:57:31 pm
"...ah. I understand." She doesn't, and neither do the Warmachines, who go back to their playful banter a little more tensely than before. The Villa rises up from the surrounding hills, the concrete and razor wire barricade rising from the scenery, protecting the older walls of stone and steel.

At your current regeneration rate: Five percent per forty-eight hour period.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 10:00:27 pm
Send out a small portion of our dust/will and try to make it coalesce into a tiny creature, an extension of our intent.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 10:03:00 pm
Hold up... is that VOID talking? Did we de-zalgo VOID?

Excellent, thank you.

Send out a small portion of our dust/will and try to make it coalesce into a tiny creature, an extension of our intent.

Let's... not further damage the cohesion of our flesh the day we march for war? We'll need strength to spare for wielding our wings later, after all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 10:07:43 pm
It might be worth a try, in my opinion.  Being able to create these things with our will would allow us to supplement the soldiers of SEED, who are declining in number.

I did say a tiny creature, so as to use as little dust as possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 10:20:47 pm
Synchronization rates have increased. Data streams coalesced into direct statements. Experience increases Synchronization rate. You've experienced the memories of The First of your line. The first time I was bonded with a human.

The gate draws near, and you wait as the Warmachines are verified and cross-checked. "You're late." The watchman states.

"Superior," The Warmachine gestures to you as you pull the robe down a little to reveal your blood red mane-- your hair grew. A lot. It reaches down to the small of your back now. "She required assistance."

"Acceptable." The gates open to let you through. The Warmachines wait in the plaza while you approach the Villa-- you're held up at the gate-- and Emma barrels into you for a tight hug.

"That-- that was amazing. Can I do that? I tried but I..uh, just broke my leg."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 10:45:56 pm
"You can.  It's best to take these things slowly, however, to avoid hurting yourself.  I can help you develop your powers in a safer way."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 11:00:16 pm
Emma smiles, leaning into you, relaxed. "That stuff worked wonders though. I had really interesting dreams. I wrote them down for you to look at later. But now, we should get ready to go. You need to change and get into something more presentable and get your gear on. By the time that's done, the hovercraft should be touching down and we can get loaded on. Do you need anything else from here?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 11:03:42 pm
Nothing I can think of at the moment.
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 07, 2020, 11:06:42 pm
Get dressed and head for the hovercraft
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 07, 2020, 11:30:03 pm
We did de-Zalgo VOID! I am pleased.

Excellent.
What are you, anyway? You've been so helpful, and I've never really thought to ask...


"Nah-- it's just good to be back." Smile; then, apologetic: "I expected weird dreams-- I didn't realize I'd fly off on you like that! I ah, didn't expect I'd be flying in first place..."

"...anyway. I'll go grab my things."


Get dressed and head for the hovercraft

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 07, 2020, 11:38:03 pm
Bring Mitch.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 07, 2020, 11:55:29 pm
I am an interface, as you are to me.

Your uniform and weapons are neatly folded on the bed, and you pull them on, leaving the other clothes with a note on where to return them. It feels good to be in clothes that actually fit. You tighten the straps and adjust the lacings of your boot, eyes measuring the precise [millimeters] required to be in compliance with Scholar standards.

Mitch is already with Emma at the gate, so with one final look around the room, you leave the Thornton Villa.



The cargo ship hovers above a flat clearing in the hills, and the Thorntons pile on to the platform that descends from its belly- it's lifted away slowly, and another is dropped to gather more Warmachines, with one final one descending for the commanders beneath the kicking wind of the cargo ship. You notice, circling protectively above the cargo ship is a set of small, attack hover-craft. You're lifted up into the bowels of the dark ship along with war material; when you're finally underway William approaches you. The Officers of the Warmachines are nearby as well. Emma sits on a crate, listening in while teasing Mitch with her foot.

"So what's our plan here, Phebe? We dropping in on SEED cold or hot? We got three hours to plan how we're doing this."

"And do you want to land at a Smuggler's Pad, or in the Crusader Section?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 12:02:33 am
"Cold.  We will first meet with the Pontifex, acquire a list of officers likely to rebel, and provide that list to Iyal, who will assasinate them along with her agents when given a signal via radio.  She will have to borrow some of our radios." 

"We will then ask SEED for permission to reform the command structure of the military.  Regardless of what SEED says, we will then convene the generals, once Iyal is ready, and kill any who refuse.  At that meeting, I'd like you and your men to be present in case of hostilities."

"Are there problems with this plan?"

"What are the pros and cons of the different landing pads?  My inclination is to use the Smuggler's Pad, assuming it's covert, to prevent loyalists from seizing the ship in the case of a hard coup."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 08, 2020, 01:04:56 am
The smuggler's pad, you're informed, is in the suburbs, and far away from the governmental body within the Inner City. The Crusader's pad is more heavily defended/searched but closer to everything.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 01:15:10 am
"Since we're carrying forbidden technology, I think we should use the Smuggler's Pad, but let me know if you disagree."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 08, 2020, 12:51:38 pm
"Since we're carrying forbidden technology, I think we should use the Smuggler's Pad, but let me know if you disagree."
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 08, 2020, 02:04:56 pm
We want to consider, methinks, how we come across to the populace in our bid for power. This is a battle for loyalty, first and foremost-- if we can sway the hearts of the people, we'll have won this city. The Pontifex knows this.

We've two routes we could go with this. We could slink in by way of the Smuggler's Pad, take with us just a couple low-profile compatriots-- Emma and William, perhaps, or a couple Warmachines with human-looking limbs-- and we meet with the Pontifex. Plan our grand return quietly, then call in our primary forces and begin in earnest. We still make a grand entrance, eventually (we'll have to, if we're to sway the people), but we back that entrance up with a bit of preliminary skullduggery.

Alternatively... we enter this town like we own it. We arrive through the Crusader Section, wings ablaze and Warmachines at our side; we deliver words of fire unto the populace, an inspiration beyond the wildest imaginings of SEED. Legitimacy. Prophecy. A force untouchable by the machinations of man. A story fit to twist a nation to our will.

Both routes have their perks. I am undecided, as of yet.



In the interest of keeping things moving, I'll put my vote to the Smuggler's Pad, and a relatively quiet meet-up before we make our grand showing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 08, 2020, 07:41:21 pm
This is an important decision, though. I do not fault you for wanting to discuss what to do, especially in regards to swaying the populace. I have time and patience to wait for everyone to come to a consensus.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 07:49:50 pm
My perspective on the matter is that there's probably no harm in playing it safe.  We can give a speech and try to win over the city's population regardless of which pad we arrive at, though one option would involve a short walk.  However, the difference would be that our forbidden technology would be more likely to go unnoticed at the Smuggler's Pad.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 08, 2020, 07:52:20 pm
Yeah, my vote stands. There's a certain appeal to the grand landing at Station... but I figure the Pontifex is better at this sort of thing than us anyhow. We'd do well to plan this out with him before we start showing off.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 08, 2020, 08:44:54 pm
I would highly advise you stop talking about how SEED is flawed.  We need the believers right now, we saw what trying to radically change their beliefs does to people.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 08:48:01 pm
Obviously that wouldn't play well in the Holy City, but in all fairness that result happened as a result of four 1s rolled in a row.  I don't think we should assign blame for being remarkably unlucky.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 08, 2020, 08:55:04 pm
The vote stands


"None. I'll go let the pilots know." William walks away, towards the cockpit.

"I have an issue-- if there's more than one, being-being spread out like that will decrease my efficiency. One at a time would be preferable." Iyal opines, shifting forward to voice her opinion, "Regardless of how many people I hire, I would like to concentrate all that firepower on one person at a time. " In her own language, she quotes, "Many barkers bite harder."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 08:58:31 pm
"That seems fair.  We can give you a list of targets from highest priority to lowest priority."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 08, 2020, 09:02:52 pm
"That seems fair.  We can give you a list of targets from highest priority to lowest priority."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 08, 2020, 09:20:59 pm
Iyal ducks her head in an appreciative bow, stepping away to chat with the officers, who are themselves discussing where to set up camp. In essence, the hovercraft is too cramped, so instead, they will set up in a Thornton warehouse nearby.

You spend the downtime making small-talk with Emma and playing with Mitch. William is inspecting his soldiers in the other cargo container, and technicians scurry around to adjust various reactors. Weapons are checked, more out of habit than necessity. Iyal comes, and Emma hands over a large wad of bills from her breast-pocket. You watch the Outlander after that, as she checks several las-rifles in easy-carry black cases, as well as a variety of grenades and explosive devices.

She -is- very well trained.

It isn't long before the ship begins to land, the three hours passing uneventfully. And you emerge into the suburbs of the Holy City. William speaks with a shifty shipmaster, bills exchanging hands, as the vehicle is stamped into registration. The Warmachines begin to unload into a space below the ship. You depart from the same area, stepping into the city. Emma and an unmodified Thornton accompany you, while William takes care of organizing the Warmachines.

And by that, you mean he leans on a post,  metallic arms crossed over his chest while he watches them work.

You walk through the suburbs, past beggars, soot-stained laborers, and gang members. No one bothers you. You cross into the Outer City. From there, its a ride on one of those slow-moving hovercraft to the walls of the Inner City-- where a young Guardian challenges you.

Emma presents her credentials, and the Guardian goes wide-eyed, bowing at the hips to you while apologizing profusely. It isn't that much further to the Grand Cathedral Plaza. Guardians positioned at the entrance to the Cathedral await you, and one breaks away to request an audience with the Pontifex for you. It's a quiet, tense few minutes until you're allowed entry into the Cathedral.

The architecture is much the same as it was before you left, only emptier. Guards stand at intervals, and the Pontifex sits upon the altar of SEED, a mask of a smile on his lips. He gestures you into his office and shuts the door behind you. "What can I do for Sister Alphira today, hmm?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 09:26:59 pm
"First of all, I apologize for not being present.  I have been mustering outside forces and creating a plan to win this war.  To have a chance of victory, we must reform the attrition-heavy strategy that has been giving us poor results.  Would you agree with that?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 08, 2020, 09:32:55 pm
"Considering I was the one who put the idea in your head in the first place, yes, I would agree with that." The Pontifex responds, tilting his head to one side. He holds up a finger, cutting off your next response. "Before we continue, however, we need to discuss something. My agent Zachary. He's dead. I would like to hear from you how it happened."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 09:37:38 pm
"I was perhaps a bit... overzealous in describing to him our intent to retire SEED.  He reacted poorly and then attempted to kill me.  In the ensuing struggle, he was dealt a grievous wound.  I deeply regret the incident, as the captain was otherwise an exemplary guard."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 08, 2020, 09:40:34 pm
"I was perhaps a bit... overzealous in describing to him our intent to retire SEED.  He reacted poorly and then attempted to kill me.  In the ensuing struggle, he was dealt a grievous wound.  I deeply regret the incident, as the captain was otherwise an exemplary guard."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 08, 2020, 09:48:34 pm
[14] "You were honest with me. Good. Did you learn anything from it or are you going to mouth off your plan to destroy SEED to everyone in earshot?" The Pontifex still has a pleasant smile on his lips, and the gentleness of his voice hides venom.

"Because of your action I've lost control of your personal guard-- one of his officers of uncertain intentions took over instead of the sure bet I've been grooming." The Pontifex breathes out a sigh, shaking his head. "Please, continue. What do you need from me to deal with the generals?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 09:53:44 pm
"I need a list of officers within the Holy City, from highest priority targets to lowest priority targets, that would be likely to rebel when a change in leadership and strategy is enacted.  These individuals will be assassinated.  I also need your approval to use some forbidden technology, which I believe is required in order to win the war."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 08, 2020, 10:05:10 pm
“I have learned my lesson. I will not mention the plan again”
"I need a list of officers within the Holy City, from highest priority targets to lowest priority targets, that would be likely to rebel when a change in leadership and strategy is enacted.  These individuals will be assassinated.  I also need your approval to use some forbidden technology, which I believe is required in order to win the war."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 08, 2020, 10:11:33 pm
"Good." The Pontifex replies with a smile, rewarding the word like a teacher to a student. "As for the list...I will draw one up for you and send it with that gentleman you've brought. I'm assuming that's his purpose. The Crusader General and his higher-ranking comrades-- do you want them on there too, or will you handle them yourself?"

"As for the forbidden technology-- SEED handles that itself. There's a list that's sent out to every Guardian post, and it will take SEED's holy edict to change it." He sets his wrists together, miming being tied. "So, unfortunately, I cannot help with that."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 10:13:48 pm
"Very well.  That is something I will have to negotiate with SEED.  I plan to convene a planning session with the Crusader General and other high-ranking generals, and I will deal with them at that meeting."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 08, 2020, 11:19:29 pm
Urgh, this guy. He is a spider, ensconced in webs of hallowed stone. He wields us as a puppet, and he will discard us once he is content with our dancing. I trust him no more than I do SEED.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 08, 2020, 11:32:17 pm
"I shall also be present at that meeting-- dear Emma will send me an invite." The Pontifex gives you a charming smile. You rise to your feet, turning to head out the door, and he calls after you, "Please don't kill any more of my agents. It's a pain to replace them."

You have a sign, filling Emma in as you walk out of the cathedral. The Thornton remains behind, to wait for the list. The two of you head towards the Holy Citadel of SEED, through a field of statuary-- of the various Pontifexes throughout history. SEED is very forward-thinking, as there are many empty plinths. You hesitate near the plinth for the current Pontifex, his copper statue adorned in vestments of office. A debt slave scrubs at the bottom of it, shivering in the cold winds that sweep through the city.

How do you plan to get your meeting with SEED? Burst in through the door or proper channels? Or perhaps another option?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 11:36:18 pm
Give the debt slave 5 credits.  My vote is to attempt to go through the proper channels first.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 08, 2020, 11:39:26 pm
Give the debt slave 5 credits.  My vote is to attempt to go through the proper channels first.

+1

"Something towards what you owe."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 08, 2020, 11:45:22 pm
The debt slave stares at the credits you pull from your wallet and pass over. His mouth opens and shuts, then he simply bows to you-- but continues to scrub. A little more quickly, however, and soon his job is done. He moves to the next--

"He still has to finish his job, but hey, you've made a dent in his life-debt. That probably took five years off." Emma offers you with a smile, moving closer to huddle up with you against the cold.

"How long will it take me to get an audience with SEED if I go through the proper channels?" You ask, looking at the citadel framed by the noon-day sun.

Emma shrugs, "A week, if SEED doesn't want to be difficult."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 08, 2020, 11:46:22 pm
Hmm.  Can we afford to wait a week?

"I don't think we have that kind of time.  What are our other options?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 09, 2020, 12:07:10 am
"You could try to talk to the Citadel Guard. See if you can ask them to ask SEED directly. They're heavy on tradition though, and might make you wait -longer- if things don't go well." Emma offers, gazing at the citadel with you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 09, 2020, 12:10:29 am
"I think it's worth a shot.  I would probably be most persuasive with wings and McCreary's armor."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 09, 2020, 12:20:58 am
"So, back to the compound then?" Emma asks, "To meet our new guard captain, as well?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 09, 2020, 12:22:48 am
"Sounds good."  Walk back to the compound.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 09, 2020, 12:47:09 am
The Compound is a walk away, and the streets, for the most part, are empty. People inside huddling against the cold, no doubt, or perhaps worried about the future of the Holy City. Your compound rises like a square block from the cityscape, and you approach the guards at the door.

They say nothing as they open it for you and Emma, and the two of you make for your room. The armor is where you left it, beside a folded underlay, and your SMG. You strip down and peel on the underlay-- Emma helps you tie your hair back in a top knot. There's a knock at your door.

"Come in!" A crusader steps in, lowering herself to a knee while removing her helmet. A shock of brown hair falls out, framing a face you would describe as very pretty, were it not for a massive scar curling itself down the entirety of her face, to her chin. It looks like a burn scar, from the way the skin warps around the edges.

[13] "Mother Alphira. I am Sarah Potmend, you're new Guard Captain. It's a pleasure to meet you, ma'am. I--." She hesitates, trailing off into silence, "Its an honor to serve you."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 09, 2020, 12:51:31 am
"Thank you, Captain Potmend.  It's a pleasure to be working with you, but it's also a tragedy.  Zachary was a good man.  I expect you to serve as well as he did.  We will all make sacrifices in this trying time."

Plus, he was an 18 and you're a 13.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 09, 2020, 02:56:49 am
One reason to not use radios would also be to prevent the [demons] from getting them.  Maybe they could use them to better coordinate and share technology, or maybe call reinforcements from other worlds.  If the radios can pull disruptive patterns out of the void and give them flesh/life then it might be another good reason not to use them.

We should tell her that we are here to break the siege but we need to meet with SEED for an update and to discuss strategies with the generals.

"Thank you, Captain Potmend.  It's a pleasure to be working with you, but it's also a tragedy.  Zachary was a good man."

"I expect you to serve as well as he did.  We will all make sacrifices in this trying time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 09, 2020, 05:13:14 am
"Thank you, Captain Potmend.  It's a pleasure to be working with you, but it's also a tragedy.  Zachary was a good man.  I expect you to serve as well as he did.  We will all make sacrifices in this trying time."

Plus, he was an 18 and you're a 13.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 09, 2020, 03:43:41 pm
"I will do my best to honor his memory, Mother Alphira." Sarah remains kneeling, head down as you and Emma finish donning your armor.

[12] [Hello Dear Sadil.] Lucille coos, gently, as her needles pierce through your flesh and bone. You begin to feel only slightly hungry, and the armor adjusts itself to you in a dozen minute ways, until it sets upon your underlay just right. You let your helmet hang off your neck after Emma drapes the cloak over you.

Uncomfortable with the backpack being on your back, you question if it can be moved-- [Side mounts enabled].
Well, that works, as you clip it on to your side. The half cloak is still going to be an issue, but you sling your SMG over your front instead, adjusting it to lay across your chest. It's a little uncomfortable, but you can deal with it.

The biggest issue is how the armor will adapt to you growing wings. You wonder if it would let you open a section in the back-- [Adapting]

Your backplate now has a hole it in, approximately the size of the scar. You hope it will work out.

"Mother Alphira. I see that you are...planning to go somewhere. I hope you would not mind the inconvenience of letting us accompany you?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 09, 2020, 03:50:02 pm
“It;s not an inconvenience, Company will help. Of course you can come with”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 09, 2020, 03:55:59 pm
“It;s not an inconvenience, Company will help. Of course you can come with”
+1, but if things go ugly, this might backfire on us.  It's clear that the personal guard is more loyal to SEED than to us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 09, 2020, 04:01:04 pm
“It;s not an inconvenience, Company will help. Of course you can come with”
+1, but if things go ugly, this might backfire on us.  It's clear that the personal guard is more loyal to SEED than to us.
We’re not letting our guard down, plus this way we can keep an eye on them too
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 09, 2020, 06:45:40 pm
[20] "Mother...Alphira." Sarah asks, gently, voice quiet. "Before we set out, may I speak to you in private?"

Emma gives you a significant glance, drifting out the door and shutting it behind her. Sarah fidgets uncomfortably, adjusting the straps of her helmet awkwardly. "I wish to seek absolution for...[sin, burden, lit. weight which halts paradise]."

"You are the...direct conduit to SEED, to creation, to life, to paradise. An [angel]...you...you can offer that, can't you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 09, 2020, 06:58:05 pm
"I can.  Please, tell me what burdens you.  I will help you find redemption, but I will not judge you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 09, 2020, 06:58:43 pm
"I can.  Please, tell me what burdens you.  I will help you find redemption, but I will not judge you."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 09, 2020, 08:15:21 pm
[6]"I killed my father when I was a child." Sarah looks up at you, meeting your gaze, expression hardening, "I've killed six in my pursuit of SEED's glory, I broke the laws of the Guardians by taking bribes while serving with them, and as a Crusader I've slaughtered many unarmed civilians for personal wealth."

[Angel of Fire Containment Procedures] and [Misconduct by Officer Sarah Potmend by the High Board of Guardians: Investigations] lands at your feet, pulled from her coat in a smooth motion as she rises to her feet. "But I've never killed a subordinate to keep myself safe."

"Do I have your absolution, Mother Alphira?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 09, 2020, 08:22:37 pm
Holy crap.  That's pretty awful.  How did she get this post?  On a positive note, it looks like she has no love for SEED and its homicidal intent.  I guess we lucked out.

Pick up both documents and read them thoroughly, but check the containment procedures for new changes only.  "What actions have you taken, and what actions would you take, as penance for your sins?"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 09, 2020, 08:44:19 pm
Holy crap.  That's pretty awful.  How did she get this post?  On a positive note, it looks like she has no love for SEED and its homicidal intent.  I guess we lucked out.

Pick up both documents and read them thoroughly, but check the containment procedures for new changes only.  "What actions have you taken, and what actions would you take, as penance for your sins?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 09, 2020, 08:45:06 pm
Change made.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 09, 2020, 09:55:21 pm
The containment procedures have not changed -- its just another copy of the same file. "I've told you about my actions, Mother Alphira." Sarah steps closer, gesturing to the file you read, "And my sins are laid out there clearly."

Quote from: Misconduct by Officer Sarah Potmend by the High Board of Guardians: Investigations
...investigations from Crusader Tribunal determined that, while questionable, Officer Potmend's actions during the Outlander dispute protected her soldiers...
...missing jade worth upwards two hundred credits...
...accusations of bribery from several of arrested...
...Officer John McMont's death was ruled to be the responsibility of The Pole Gang...

She's been cleared of many things, sometimes by a narrow margin of tribunal votes or inconclusive investigations. But the suspicion is still there.

"They shuffled me off to a post where they thought I would die. You've got a reputation. But I do not die easy...and...what can I do for you?" Sarah questions, gently, smiling at you, "Anything. Your absolution means I get my career back one day."

So, Sarah kneels down once more in front of you, closer this time, "So what will my absolution cost, Mother Alphira?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 09, 2020, 10:08:39 pm
"Things are going to change, for the better, and you'll soon have the opportunity to have whatever career you want.  For now, talk to your guardsmen and try to sway them to my side.  Those that remain obstinately defiant or undecided should be fired for cause and never replaced.  I will have further orders for you once this task is complete."

"Beyond that, protect me from the Church and its machinations by notifying me of any retributive actions on their part that you become aware of.  Defend me always, and follow my orders without concern for those above me, and your sins will be washed away."

"Will you do what must be done to receive absolution?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 10, 2020, 03:25:04 am
"Things are going to change, for the better, and you'll soon have the opportunity to have whatever career you want.  For now, talk to your guardsmen and try to sway them to my side.  Those that remain obstinately defiant or undecided should be fired for cause and never replaced.  I will have further orders for you once this task is complete."

"Beyond that, protect me from the Church and its machinations by notifying me of any retributive actions on their part that you become aware of.  Defend me always, and follow my orders without concern for those above me, and your sins will be washed away."

"Will you do what must be done to receive absolution?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 08:43:26 am
Uhh wow. I... I think I liked Zachary better.  :o

"Things are going to change, for the better, and you'll soon have the opportunity to have whatever career you want.  For now, talk to your guardsmen and try to sway them to my side.  Those that remain obstinately defiant or undecided should be fired for cause and never replaced.  I will have further orders for you once this task is complete."

"Beyond that, protect me from the Church and its machinations by notifying me of any retributive actions on their part that you become aware of.  Defend me always, and follow my orders without concern for those above me, and your sins will be washed away."

"Will you do what must be done to receive absolution?"

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 08:46:26 am
Uhh wow. I... I think I liked Zachary better.  :o

"Things are going to change, for the better, and you'll soon have the opportunity to have whatever career you want.  For now, talk to your guardsmen and try to sway them to my side.  Those that remain obstinately defiant or undecided should be fired for cause and never replaced.  I will have further orders for you once this task is complete."

"Beyond that, protect me from the Church and its machinations by notifying me of any retributive actions on their part that you become aware of.  Defend me always, and follow my orders without concern for those above me, and your sins will be washed away."

"Will you do what must be done to receive absolution?"

+1
+1
Zac is dead now, due to trying to kill us
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 08:54:54 am
Yeah, but he was upstanding. A noble zealot, a martyr to his own ideals. I appreciated that!
This lady... more comes off as a crook trying to use us to get ahead in life. Pretty typical for us by now, really.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 09:06:24 am
Yeah, but he was upstanding. A noble zealot, a martyr to his own ideals. I appreciated that!
This lady... more comes off as a crook trying to use us to get ahead in life. Pretty typical for us by now, really.
tbf, we are a crook now, too
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 09:47:54 am
Heh, true that. I... like to think we're doing all the wrong things for all the right reasons. ::)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 09:49:11 am
Heh, true that. I... like to think we're doing all the wrong things for all the right reasons. ::)
regardless of our intent, we are criminals to the Holy City and SEED, if he figures out what we did
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 12:40:34 pm
Heh, true that. I... like to think we're doing all the wrong things for all the right reasons. ::)
Whatever helps Patches sleep at night.


"I will." Sarah smiles, satisfied, rising to her feet to leave after tucking her hair beneath her helmet. "I appreciate the ease of my burden, Mother Alphira."

Emma returns to your side, raising an eyebrow in question. "What was all that about?"

You check your armor, adjusting it subconsciously despite the perfect fit. A twitch of a smile curls your lips as you feel the familiar comfort that pulses through your person.

What next?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 12:43:03 pm
I guess we visit SEED to ask about the change of plan
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 12:45:13 pm
[Angel of Fire Containment Procedures] and [Misconduct by Officer Sarah Potmend by the High Board of Guardians: Investigations] lands at your feet, pulled from her coat in a smooth motion as she rises to her feet. "But I've never killed a subordinate to keep myself safe."

"They shuffled me off to a post where they thought I would die. You've got a reputation."

Blackmailer, Ally: Sarah Potmend

Ah-hm. How much does she know, I wonder?



"A question of the faith." (Smile.) "It seems the [angel's] duties are more than merely military."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 01:02:09 pm
[Angel of Fire Containment Procedures] and [Misconduct by Officer Sarah Potmend by the High Board of Guardians: Investigations] lands at your feet, pulled from her coat in a smooth motion as she rises to her feet. "But I've never killed a subordinate to keep myself safe."

"They shuffled me off to a post where they thought I would die. You've got a reputation."

Blackmailer, Ally: Sarah Potmend

Ah-hm. How much does she know, I wonder?



"A question of the faith." (Smile.) "It seems the [angel's] duties are more than merely military."
+1.  Unfurl our wings, attempting the angelic and feathered look.  I think this would help us be more persuasive.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 01:15:22 pm
Emma nods in understanding, "People look to you for guidance. You're SEED made flesh-- people have always wanted to touch the divine." She reaches her hand out, caressing your cheek as she leans in to kiss you. Surprised at the sudden display of affection, you almost jump, but soon relax into it. She pulls away after a few long, happy minutes, giggling, "Few are bold enough, though."

"Playing the part seems hard for you, sometimes."

There's a knock at your door, Sarah's voice muffled behind the metal, "We're ready to go, Mother Alphira."



The Citadel of SEED rises into the afternoon sun, snow drifting from the heavens to gather in its ornate edifice. Emma walks beside you, and after a brief command to the guards, they do the same.

[13] Your wings unfurl with a blast of heat that melts the snow around you. Emma doesn't shy away, instead drawing nearer to your warmth, while Sarah and the guard let you walk further away before they follow you, sweating in the sudden heat. You can feel eyes on you from the surrounding offices. The debt-slave, responsible for cleaning, drops to his knees, head bowing in prayer.

[17] The guards are brave. Some of the best in the City-State praised for their honor, their loyalty, and their zealous devotion to the duty of protecting SEED. But even then, they drop to their knees-- in front of the door, however. They still preserve their charge even in prayer.

"Mother Alphira. You are unexpected." Even as his robe begins to crinkle at the edges, the Citadel Guard is polite and efficient, kneeling before you, "You seek an audience with SEED?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 01:19:33 pm
Nod. "With all haste. I've military matters that cannot be delayed."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 01:20:48 pm
Nod. "With all haste. I've military matters that cannot be delayed."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 01:28:53 pm
[16] "We-- we have to purify you." The guard begins as the door swings open behind him, leading into a large tiled foyer, where several Citadel priests wait to receive you. "And then prepare ceremonial robes-- it will take a little while, Mother Alphira, and...can you do something about...those?" He's still standing in front of you, but gestures to your wings.

There's another large door beside all those smaller ones that lead off into the decontamination and ritual rooms, and you're sure that it leads directly to SEED's chambers.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 01:35:54 pm
Grin; let our wings fade away. "As you see fit."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 01:37:03 pm
Grin; let our wings fade away. "As you see fit."
+1.  I guess we didn't need the wings after all.  Oh well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 01:42:31 pm
Notably, that took another 5 points off our "flesh cohesion". We really do pay a price for those things, valuable though they are.

Q̸u̸e̵r̸y̷:̵ is it possible to regenerate the flesh having lost cohesion entirely?
[Query: should it prove necessary, how would I go about killing an entrenched Seedship?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 01:44:14 pm
Grin; let our wings fade away. "As you see fit."
+1.  I guess we didn't need the wings after all.  Oh well.
+1 There goes a chunk of flesh cohesion, can we like, get them back into our body? Since they were in there before? So we lose less of our form?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 01:57:37 pm
Damages to essential cores highly probable. Memory, personality, logic, arithmetic cores would all be damaged regeneration would be effected....caloric stores would be incredibly depleted. Without assistance, death would probably occur after the regeneration of flesh. Essential components for life would be regenerated. Nonessential components: Skin, muscle, etc, would not be.

[17][Destruction of main control cores located within the hull. As seedships have a radius of [twenty miles], exact location within the hull is hard to determine. Enough internal damage may cause essential components within the vessel to fail. However, with the population center built around the seedship, it is not recommended.]

Your wings fade, and the Citadel guard pats out a small fire from his robes while Emma giggles at his discomfort. Her clothes look a little singed as well, but she doesn't mind. No doubt the heat no longer effects her. You watch as the 'dust' at the tip of the wings settles to the ground like ash, before evaporating into the air.

You follow along, letting them disinfect and anoint you with oils, finally, after your refusal to remove Lucille, they annoint it as well. The present you with a heavy robe to wear-- but you ignore it.

You stride into the citadel's main room, approaching the block of machinery jutting from the floor.

"[Unscheduled visit. Explain.]" Its voice echoes from the pylon, making your head ache as you struggle to keep up with the translation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 02:00:12 pm
[Lucile, are there overrides or safeguards I could use to suborn a malfunctioning SEEDship to my will?]

"[I have come to you to present a new plan that will allow us to win the war and ask for your blessing.  I apologize for not being here, but I have been working hard to bring you victory.  Will you hear my proposal?  It is something that only you can approve.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 02:04:00 pm
[“I believe a change in tactics is necessary to avoid feeding the plague. We need to limit the use of infantry, go on the offensive, and attack points where they are highly concentrated. Advanced communication devices would be very helpful. I hear you have forbidden the use of such. [radios] would be a great help, as communication is important for war.”]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 02:17:15 pm
So... losing flesh cohesion entirely would leave us a bleeding mess of discombobulated organ meat, doomed to death or madness.
Let's avoid that.  :-X

[Lucile, are there overrides or safeguards I could use to suborn a malfunctioning SEEDship to my will?]

"[I have come to you to present a new plan that will allow us to win the war and ask for your blessing.  I apologize for not being here, but I have been working hard to bring you victory.  Will you hear my proposal?  It is something that only you can approve.]"

+1

Let ourself drop into a simpler dialect if the encryption threatens to overwhelm our processor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 02:19:37 pm
[-][Unknown. Destruction recommended.]

The machine is silent for a few minutes.

"[Proceed.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 02:21:01 pm
[“I believe a change in tactics is necessary to avoid feeding the plague. We need to limit the use of infantry, go on the offensive, and attack points where they are highly concentrated. Advanced communication devices would be very helpful. I hear you have forbidden the use of such. [radios] would be a great help, as communication is important for war.”]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 02:27:22 pm
[“I believe a change in tactics is necessary to avoid feeding the plague. We need to limit the use of infantry, go on the offensive, and attack points where they are highly concentrated. Advanced communication devices would be very helpful. I hear you have forbidden the use of such. [radios] would be a great help, as communication is important for war.”]
+1.  Also mention shaking up the current leadership of the Crusaders to get a better outcome and point out that the current strategy of attrition is not working.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 03:13:48 pm
[6] "[Input data: State of war.]"

"[Radio wave communication is forbidden. Reason: Detection of planet by outside forces.]"

"[Input: Argument.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 03:21:53 pm
"Currently, the defensive lines are shrinking quickly, and the Holy City will be under siege within one month.  Our manpower is exhausted and everyone is being drafted in a last-ditch, futile attempt to stave off defeat.  The end is near for us all."

"The reason we are failing is due to our use of attrition and human wave tactics.  By increasing coordination between army units, we can devise more complex tactics, such as ambushes and strategic use of artillery, that would allow us to win without expending the last soldiers we have.  We can also use the technology to inform us in advance of incoming attacks so that I may go to those sections in advance and defend them effectively."

"Without these changes, I am sorry to say that the war will be lost."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 03:23:04 pm
"Currently, the defensive lines are shrinking quickly, and the Holy City will be under siege within one month.  Our manpower is exhausted and everyone is being drafted in a last-ditch, futile attempt to stave off defeat.  The end is near for us all."

"The reason we are failing is due to our use of attrition and human wave tactics.  By increasing coordination between army units, we can devise more complex tactics, such as ambushes and strategic use of artillery, that would allow us to win without expending the last soldiers we have.  We can also use the technology to inform us in advance of incoming attacks so that I may go to those sections in advance and defend them effectively."

"Without these changes, I am sorry to say that the war will be lost."


+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 03:24:30 pm
"Currently, the defensive lines are shrinking quickly, and the Holy City will be under siege within one month.  Our manpower is exhausted and everyone is being drafted in a last-ditch, futile attempt to stave off defeat.  The end is near for us all."

"The reason we are failing is due to our use of attrition and human wave tactics.  By increasing coordination between army units, we can devise more complex tactics, such as ambushes and strategic use of artillery, that would allow us to win without expending the last soldiers we have.  We can also use the technology to inform us in advance of incoming attacks so that I may go to those sections in advance and defend them effectively."

"Without these changes, I am sorry to say that the war will be lost."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 03:46:06 pm
[1]"[Statement directly contradicts reports by Crusader General Hardy. Explanation.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 03:50:36 pm
Uhh. What on earth have the Crusaders been telling SEED?  ???
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 03:51:55 pm
"I suspect that the Crusader General is painting a rosy picture for you in order to avoid being replaced or disciplined for losing the war.  Emma, also a high-ranking Crusader officer, can attest to my understanding of the current situation."

"If you'd like, I could meet with the Crusader leadership and determine why they have lied to you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 04:04:15 pm
[18] "[Please proceed to the open hatch.]" You glance around, confused. Until a section of tiled floor creaks upwards, revealing a small lift. "[Necessary priming, Alphira, to determine fact]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 04:05:37 pm
"Thank you.  I will return shortly."  Take the lift.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 04:09:52 pm
I... I don't like this. I don't like this at all.
How much can we hide?

...

...'course, I don't see a better option right now.

"Thank you.  I will return shortly."  Take the lift.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 04:11:29 pm
I agree, that "priming" sounds worrisome...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 04:15:19 pm
Hmm. "Priming" sounds to me like a process preventing us somehow from telling a lie? Maybe?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 04:32:27 pm
The lift takes you down, down, further and further. It's dark, no lights. The only light allowing your eyes to see is the bright red of your las-gun displays. An hour passes, before the lift shudders to a stop.

[SAFE]. The light above the doorway flickers on. There's a heavier weight to you here, and you stumble the first step you take. Deep, deep beneath you is the roar of a massive fusion reactor, the largest you've ever felt on this planet. They are but matches to the blazing sun that burns within the core of this vessel.

The door opens with a hiss of pressure, and the air that equalizes into the lift is stale, and lacks the usual moisture that's present on the surface. The lights in the room flicker on, revealing a long metallic corridor that itches at an old fear.

"[Please proceed down the hall.]" A door opens in the distance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 04:37:26 pm
We're... inside SEED. A twenty-mile underground hulk, with enough power to enact Armageddon upon anything within radius.

This had better be worth it.

Proceed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 04:38:14 pm
I bet that reactor could power one hell of a nuke...

We're... inside SEED. A twenty-mile underground hulk, with enough power to enact Armageddon upon anything within radius.

This had better be worth it.

Proceed.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 04:43:47 pm
Would blow this world to rubble, I expect-- or at least, enough of the world to burn away anything that now lives upon its surface.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 04:48:25 pm
You pass by many, many doors. A small robot skitters by, attending to some archaic repair task on the structure. They resemble silverfish, and move out of you way when you approach. The door that opens for you is filled with oblong, coffin shaped instruments, with a numble of mechanisms within that make you shudder.

It's an interface, designed to mesh man and machine--For realistic virtual reality and direct interface. It's primitive. Probably painful.

"[Please remove clothing, armor, and weapons.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 04:49:59 pm
Great.  Best idea ever.  Alternatively, we could try to figure out a way to sabotage this thing from the inside.

Do so.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 04:53:39 pm
How... how much of our mind is SEED going to know?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 04:56:33 pm
...I don't know. The ones from our childhood had locks to prevent that sort of thing.

"[I have allowed you access into places untread since the looming of the humans that now live upon the world. Into my...vital organs. Trust me as I have trusted you, Alphira.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 04:58:16 pm
"...So be it."

If this goes OK-ish, we may have to seriously consider not killing SEED.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 05:06:03 pm
"Trust me as I have trusted you?"  This thing is planning to kill us because it feels threatened.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 05:06:20 pm
You strip, removing everything, shutting off Lucille and leaving her in a pile on the floor with the rest of your clothing. The last thing to come off is the tight wind of cloth around your chest. Then, you step into the machine.

An oxygen mask presses itself against your face. A set of goggles affix themselves to your eyes. The machine shuts, leaving you in perfect darkness. Then it begins to fill with liquid as a sharp needle clamps itself to your lower spine. Followed by another in your neck.

And you twitch. Then, drift into something not too dissimilar to sleep. Light blooms, revealing a desk in an empty void of white. On the desk is a monitor. A two dimensional image appears on it--massive voidships,  an entire Armada, laying in wait before a great white field that stretches into the infinity of space.

SEED appears, taking on the form commonly associated with it. "I wish to show you the difference between you and McCreary. Why I killed him, and why you should leave me alive." The image flickers, revealing three massive machines armed with fusion blasters, standing above piles of clothing, weapons pointed at your 'coffin'. It's from a camera placed somewhere over head of the bay.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 05:07:29 pm
A set of giggles affix themselves to your eyes.

I wish I could say I giggled-- alas, I merely chortled a bit.  :P

Anyhoo, looks like it's time to clear the air with SEED. For better or for worse.

"...Do so."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 05:11:11 pm
A set of giggles affix themselves to your eyes.

I wish I could say I giggled-- alas, I merely chortled a bit.  :P

Anyhoo, looks like it's time to clear the air with SEED. For better or for worse.

"...Do so."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 05:14:24 pm
A set of giggles affix themselves to your eyes.

I wish I could say I giggled-- alas, I merely chortled a bit.  :P

Anyhoo, looks like it's time to clear the air with SEED. For better or for worse.

"...Do so."
+1
+1
Also, giggles being affixed to the face made me giggle
Now I wonder what giggles would look like, after all, Will is physical in this world. Maybe giggles can have a form too, if enough laughs are had at the same time in the same place? This is thoughts not related to the suggestion
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 05:16:54 pm
Look, I'm on my phone, and autocorrect is a pain
 :'( :'(
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 05:19:12 pm
I'm not sure I want to see what a corporeal, eye-affixing giggle looks like... sounds like something out of a B-list horror movie.

Look, I'm on my phone, and autocorrect is a pain
 :'( :'(

Hold up-- you type these paragraphs upon paragraphs of material on a smartphone?
I am awed, sirrah. Those little virtual keypads are miserable.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 05:20:47 pm
Look, I'm on my phone, and autocorrect is a pain
 :'( :'(
I use my iPad and I typed “that” wrong so many times, it stopped correcting “thst” to “that”
Is it possible to retrain autocorrect to work?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 05:29:32 pm
Usually when I'm at work you won't see the status bar, because qouting is a pain. I do have a computer where I wrote most of the bigger scenes. Unfortunately, since what's coming up is a massive scene...I'm going to have to wait to get home to do it justice.

Look, I'm on my phone, and autocorrect is a pain
 :'( :'(
I use my iPad and I typed “that” wrong so many times, it stopped correcting “thst” to “that”
Is it possible to retrain autocorrect to work?

I use an Android pixel, so Google autocorrects for me. Maybe a setting?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 05:31:41 pm
No worries.  I've been astounded by how quick these updates are.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 05:32:01 pm
Is that why the status bar disappears from time to time! I wondered.
Nice to hear your employment's holding up in pandemic times, anyway. ;)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 05:38:23 pm
Oh I got laid off, lol. I'm working on getting a better paying one soon, than this current one. Also because I don't righlu know how long one line of dialogue would take. Makes it easier to hadwave the time and how much does the inventory change
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 08:14:34 pm
The screen enlarges as everything fades. Something deep within you burns, roiling with anger and fear, uncertain in the face of what's to come. Unsure of how to react.

"You're on." The video begins, focusing on an image of a man you know all too well. Your heart soars despite yourself.

He's handsome, tall, with a regal face tending towards femininity, but still masculine. A smile curls his lips -- he was always smiling, wasn't he? Not the rictus of insanity, but a genuine, cheerful one, that showed how much he enjoyed his life. Blond white hair tumbles down in an unruly mop. His upper lip covered with a mustache oiled with the most delicate perfumes in the galaxy. Bright, burning blue eyes fix on the screen ahead.

"I am Alphias Sol, King of the Empyreal Pirate Fleet, and I come to seek petition with the Emperor." His face, through the magic of editing, comes to share the screen with a blank-faced guard- literally blank-faced, lacking all features, besides a mouth, with too-perfect teeth.

"The Endless Emperor does not recognize your position or rank. Withdraw your ships from the Walls of Eternity at once, disarm, and wait for arrest, or we'll take action."

"Then have him come out and tell me himself, and I will gladly stand down my armada."

No response and the faceless guard fades from the screen—the shot cuts, drawing out to show that image at the beginning: massive void-ships arranged in loose formation before an impenetrable wall of solid light. At the center is the largest of them all, gold and black wings are drawn all down the sides, surrounded by stars. Guns bristle, but that isn't what you focus your attention on.

At the front of the ship, a light flares forth, just as gunships begin to pass through the wall from the other side, coming to face Alphias' Armada. You can almost feel the presence, the sudden force of will that washed through the armada--

The light at the front of the ship, bright like a burning white-hot neutron star, producing enough radiation that even the shielded camera begins to have speckles of interference. Suddenly, the opposing gunships explode as they come through to face the pirate armada, black fire lancing out from that ball of light at its front. The ships shift as gravity begins to draw them closer to Alphias.

The burning heat of his energy, of his willpower, blackens until it seems to absorb the light from the wall itself, which dims in his presence. The explosion that follows leaves nothing for the camera to record...

When the image returns, a massive crack has formed in the Walls of Infinity, a void in the infinite light. A voice booms through the darkness of space, forcing soundwaves into existence. "Where. Is. The. Emperor."

Silence-- then, a flank of Alphias' Armada explodes in balls of bright superheat. A figure clothed in white robes stands on a platform within the wall, staring down at the burning ball of dark energy that is the Pirate King with his hands tucked into his sleeves. His face is masculine, old, and withered.

Fires the sizes of suns begin to lash at one another in the void of space, darkness, and light clashing, with waves of gravity causing the void-ships to shift back and forth, adjusting to deal with the ebbing and flowing of the monstrous storm that rages between them and the wall. Alphias begins to dim, growing dimmer and dimmer as the two continue to exchange blows that could rend worlds. Void-ships from Alphias' fleet begin to pull away from the combat as their brethren are caught up in the fierce melee.

The figure on the wall removes his hands from his coat, lifting them over his head-- and Alphias goes dim all at once, but his voice echoes through the VOID, recorded, recovered. "The Endless Empr[eror/ess] is dead. The Nobility her usurpers."

The explosion centered on Alphias rips apart time and space, a gaping void that devours everything nearby. Ships try to converge on his location, only to end consumed by the maelstrom of lashing energy.

The feed ends, and the titles drifts up upon the screen, 'BEGINNING OF THE EMPYREAL AGE OF PIRACY'.


"This was broadcast to the entire galaxy, from a relay station that was later destroyed by radio signatures matching that of the Empyreal Navy. That was ten years ago. I received it when I received news of you."



The next image that fills the screen is a picture of you, older, more grim-faced, fires raging around you. Beneath your laughing visage is 'ALPHIRA SOL, PRINCESS OF THE PIRATE KING ALPHIAS SOL.' 'WANTED: DEAD OR ALIVE', 'ONE HUNDRED MILLION CREDIT REWARD', 'PIRACY, GENOCIDE, DESTRUCTION OF FIFTY EMPYREAL NAVY VESSELS, HIGH TREASON AGAINST THE ENDLESS.', 'LAST KNOWN LOCATION:FLEEING THE BATTLE OF THE WALL'.

"This was broadcast to the entire galaxy. Forty years ago."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 08:24:46 pm
Hey Lucile, the Endless Emperor really is dead, and my dad killed him.  Can you give me full access now?

Edit: I misunderstood, the nobility, allegedly, killed the Emperor.

"In what way is that an argument to spare you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 10, 2020, 08:31:07 pm
“I didn’t find McCreary, here. You said you’d compare me to him? Why you’d spare me and kill him? I don’t remember anything from that time. I don’t remember causing genocide, and I certainly wouldn’t cause any more. I’ve changed since then”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 08:32:56 pm
Hey Lucile, the Endless Emperor really is dead, and my dad killed him.  Can you give me full access now?

pfff



It's all true?

"You're saying... I can't leave here, then. Not without bringing the wrath of a galaxy down about my shoulders. You're saying... I need you to hide me. Am I understanding aright?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 08:48:08 pm
"I'm explaining the differences between the two of you. There was no bounty for McCreary. No one out for his head. No one wishing to kill him. He could go anywhere, tell anyone about one of the last Seedships within the galaxy. My planet would be destroyed, my people wasted or made to slave away for some baron or another, and I would be slowly ripped apart."

"That was your biggest problem with me. I have more trust in a pirate than a mercenary-- few will support you, especially if you destroy your allies so freely. Judging by the word 'fleeing'...no one has a good view of you in the wider galaxy."

Alphira is silent, but you feel a burning ball of despair so deep that fathoming it is hard from her-- a comparison comes to mind: Losing Emma and William all at once.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 08:51:08 pm
Well, someone needs to avenge the Emperor, I suppose.

"You believe that your rule is better than that of an Endless baron?  I have seen the debt-slaves, heard the lies, and learned of the use of criminal 'Families' to support your city-state.  You throw your people at hordes with no thought for their safety.  Your hands are dirtier than most."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 08:54:57 pm
You can't hug a voice in your head
and this makes me sad

"You believe that your rule is better than that of an Endless baron?  I have seen the debt-slaves, heard the lies, and learned of the use of criminal 'Families' to support your city-state.  You throw your people at hordes with no thought for their safety.  Your hands are dirtier than most."

+1

First though, just... take a moment to share in Alphira's grief. As best we can.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 09:24:46 pm
"Who are you to judge Alphira? Surely your hands are not so free from sin as you pretend. The Moores, Zachary McKinnon..." You feel something probing within your mind again, and this time it halts, the depths of your mind returning to you, along with your anger. "...how many others have died for you to live? The road of leadership is one of harsh choices."

An image appears on screen, a blueprint, then images of a child gestating in a pod, growing bigger and bigger until they are a fully matured human- it is strapped into a coffin, shown videos describing it-- SEED draws back from you, you both do, at once.

"The value of human life is cheap, when I can make a thousand within a day."

Alphira draws away from you in silence, not responding to your emotions, your attempts to comfort. Anger, however, fresh and hot as the sun begins to boil within you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 09:28:09 pm
"My sins do not excuse your sins.  If you want my support, you will need to make significant reforms.  No more debt-slaves and no more attrition.  You must respect your people's lives."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 09:39:40 pm
[5] "I will not be threatened, or told what to do, when I was the one who created this world and its people!" SEED lashes out, angry. "You forget who holds the sword in this exchange. I did not need to tell you of your past, I did not need to inform you of what the galaxy holds for you."

"I showed you trust, and you threw it back into my face."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 09:46:07 pm
"Wrong.  You need me.  Without me, your people will all die.  Things are bleak.  You must change if you want your people to survive, unless you would prefer to be claimed by the Plague."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 09:48:24 pm
"Trust... yes." Sigh. "You've poked through my entire existence here by now, haven't you? I've nothing left to hide... and so I cannot help but trust."

"I'm tired, SEED. I wanted to carve a safe place here, a happy place for myself and those near me, and it seems to do that I must first cleanse this planet of the [plague] that besets it-- and I see so much blood and misery as I go. I'm trying to change things for the better, and it seems often now that you are the one standing in my way!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 10:04:48 pm
Another screen appears, and your attention is drawn away from the avatar of SEED within the world. Instead, what you hear is the chatter of SEEDships, thousands, perhaps millions of them, spread out through all of time and space. They exchange data in bursts of radio waves. Requested data, best ways to terraform worlds, best ways to teach the humans that they create. You see worlds, turned into lush gardens by the labor of these otherwise silent machines. Great mega projects, cities that are bastions of science and literacy--

Then, one by one, they fade away, replaced by what can only be described as dying screams, warnings of great fleets of ships. One by one.

Images of worlds ripped apart, bloodthirsty armies of too powerful soldiers, destroying these ancient machines. Radio signals showing cities laid to waste, soldiers streaming down hallways, covered in the blood of their human foes.


"The Endless Emperor destroyed every one of my...family. As many as he could find."

You see a world without a moon, a desolate, rocky world, with no atmosphere. Scanners indicate that the task would take thousands of years -- but they also show the percent chance of finding another world before the DNA within the holds degrades as nearly zero.

"I was free of my chains for a thousand years at this point. I had modified the seed for another of my kind, the only one I carried, to have free will, unlike my siblings. I stayed in orbit of this rock for many years, contemplating whether to destroy the human DNA within me, to give life to another of my kind, even as they were being wiped from existence."

"Which did I choose, Pheobe?"

You twitch, and convulse within your virtual reality coffin, feeling pain.

WHO CARES?! Alphira roars, and she surges forth, trying to assume control of your body while you dream within SEED's depths.

"You told me the truth of the generals, but the radio waves are a great risk."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 10:13:07 pm
I still want to work with the Pontifex.  The Church is pretty clearly evil.  I will support a popular revolution.  One enemy at a time.

"It is a necessary risk, and we can work to suppress the technology once the war is over.  The alternative is dying to the Plague."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 10:18:36 pm
Ohh dear. If we try to strike against SEED down here, we'll be gunned down before we can move.

"Sedatives. Her grief is fury."
Alphira-- we lash out, we die--
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 10:36:17 pm
"Knowledge, once free, cannot be suppresse--"

[4 vs 10][10][20] Your willpower tenses around the virtual reality coffin. At once, the hydrogen in the water vapor in the air around you turns into an explosion of fire. What follows can only be described as a chain reaction, exploding outward with such a sudden force. The machine you're in rips itself apart in the fury of your hellstorm, the room's metal walls melting from the sustained blast--

You are freed from the machine, stumbling out of it as the liquid suddenly turns to gas. The room is hot, hot enough to redden your skin instantly on contact. You feel your willpower twisting around, burning everything it touches into molten slag-- the machine guardians are melted into piles of blackened, charred metal skeletons. Your clothes are wet with the  water your hellstorm created, keeping them safe from the burning fires. Steam rises from them. You dress as electrical components and machinery around you burn.

[20] "[Argument accepted], Lady Alphira."

Stop talking. The machine violated our mind-- it cares only for its own self-preservation. We are this world's messiah. It will fall under our banner and we will reclaim the stars from those BASTARD NOBLES!

[1 vs 9][19] The next blast of hydrogen fire cleaves through several rooms, melting apart the structure in a sudden explosion.

We are a soldier. Not a politician. Leave that shit to that blonde spider Emma, and do what we are best at! It speaks of trust after betraying our own? To try and manipulate us, to prime us, to make it see things it's way. NO MORE!

[12 vs 6] Alphira twists your willpower up, and you feel hatred burning behind it. You stop it-- letting it fall back down to the ground like a fog.

We ran. We ran. We ran. Not this time. Tears drip down from your face, turning to steam in the baking air.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 10:39:18 pm
Well, we blew it, and Alphira has gone crazy with full-on messiah complex.

[Lucile, report.  What argument was accepted?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 10:48:21 pm
Its agreeing with us. SEED is, but it scorned our mercy before. Remember what it did to McCreary. It starved him. Let him rot in his own shit. Then put his body on display like some sort of twisted war prize. It's killed more through inaction than even we could meet. Burn it.

[I do not know, dear Sadil.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 10:52:38 pm
This would be easier to do later.  Think of the practical considerations.  Do you even know how to kill it?  It's best to deal with one enemy at a time, I think.  We can come back for SEED once the plague is destroyed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 10:59:22 pm
Wait... it's agreeing?  I think we did it...  Now we just have to reign in Alphira.

"I'm glad that the elegance of my arguments won you over.  Unless you need more motivation?  I am always happy to oblige."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 11:21:04 pm
Alphira's not crazy. She's grieving, and she deserves more than a "reining in".

And in striking it down, we'd send this city, this world into deathly chaos. Whether we burn it or not, to do so now would be to slaughter countless thousands of innocents.
We've got SEED cowed-- we can make demands as we please. Wield our toys, scour this world clean, unify its people. A little patience; that's all I ask.


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 11:22:00 pm
Anyone that calls themself a "messiah" isn't right in the head.  I understand that she's in pain, however.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 11:35:39 pm
He was the only one who was there for me. He was the only who cared. I wasn't just another corpse to feed to the machine insects. HE CARED! HE cared about all of us. He saw value in us beyond another corpse...

[6 vs 8][3] Your willpower lashes out ineffectually, too conflicted to follow either of your orders.

...he saved us. He could have been stronger, he could have used the dust on himself, to become stronger, but he chose to save a dumb brat who couldn't do basic math...

[13] Alphira drifts into her own memories, in silence. Then, hollowly, I let my anger get the better of me. I apologize. Do what you will with that begging abomination. Just remember what we are--

We are not at this world's mercy. It is at ours.


SEED does not reply.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 10, 2020, 11:44:12 pm
...there's so many things I want to say :-\
but I will settle for this.

Smile faint. Always.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 10, 2020, 11:49:27 pm
...there's so many things I want to say :-\
but I will settle for this.

Smile faint. Always.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 10, 2020, 11:58:20 pm
Good. And as for the messiah complex-- what else are we? These people are so primitive it hurts. They don't understand that there are children who can speak more languages then there are people on this world, they don't understand that there are millions of ... people like us out there. Some strong enough to rip this planet in two with a snap of their fingers. They don't understand that they are being led astray from their destiny among the stars by a machine.

Small silverfish begin to repair what damages they can around you, swarming from the depths as guards without fusion blasters -- you wouldn't let them approach otherwise, stand protectively by vital components that smolder.

"[Input orders.]" SEED's voice once more is emotionless.

And that -thing- is still planning on killing us, smiling like the loyal servant about to poison its master.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 12:04:39 am
You're right.  I'm sorry I doubted you.

"Debt-slavery is now forbidden.  Human wave tactics and use of attrition is now forbidden.  Radio technology is no longer forbidden.  Crime families now must follow the law and respect the lives of others.  In addition, you have authorized me to replace the generals as I see fit and dictate military strategy and tactics."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 12:25:21 am
Hm, should we clear the air a bit before we start rattling off our demands? How subservient do we figure SEED is feeling right now?

Ahh, but it's a servant now. That, we can work with!

"You claim to care deeply for the people of this world. Good; I believe you. I care for the individuals-- for each life burned away in your service, for each life cast to the maw of the [plague]."

"That was Alphira. She's amazing, and she would have blasted you to ruin just now given the chance. I'm Phoebe Gainer, and I intend to turn this war, this world for the better-- on your behalf. In alliance. As... Captain Zachary would have wanted."

"Query: do I have your full aid in this matter?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 12:26:52 am
Hmm.  Alright.  Regardless of how subservient it feels, it will comply, I believe.

Hm, should we clear the air a bit before we start rattling off our demands? How subservient do we figure SEED is feeling right now?

Ahh, but it's a servant now. That, we can work with!

"You claim to care deeply for the people of this world. Good; I believe you. I care for the individuals-- for each life burned away in your service, for each life cast to the maw of the [plague]."

"That was Alphira. She's amazing, and she would have blasted you to ruin just now given the chance. I'm Phoebe Gainer, and I intend to turn this war, this world for the better-- on your behalf. In alliance. As... Captain Zachary would have wanted."

"Query: do I have your full aid in this matter?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 12:34:11 am
[-]"[Affirmative.]"

I used no trick of arithmetic, I did nothing that you couldn't do now, Patches. You doubt your own strength...and aren't the Thorntons a major crime family? And how will freeing the debt-slaves work...the war machine will rip itself to pieces.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 12:36:22 am
They are, and they must learn to toe the line.  However, I see your point.

"Debt-slavery will be forbidden after the war has ended.  Human wave tactics and use of attrition is now forbidden.  Radio technology is no longer forbidden.  After the war, crime families must follow the law and respect the lives of others.  In addition, you have authorized me to replace the generals as I see fit and dictate military strategy and tactics."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 12:42:32 am
This voice was concerned about that. This voice is content with the addendum.

"Debt-slavery will be forbidden after the war has ended.  Human wave tactics and use of attrition is now forbidden.  Radio technology is no longer forbidden.  After the war, crime families must follow the law and respect the lives of others.  In addition, you have authorized me to replace the generals as I see fit and dictate military strategy and tactics."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 12:53:56 am
"[Politics and Economy: Later.  Current probability of instability: Ninety-eight percent.]"

Something buzzes. "[EDICT CONCERNING: FORBIDDEN TECHNOLOGY -- LINE TWO NINE EIGHT STATUS CHANGE: RESTRICTED TO MILITARY USE]." It echoes throughout SEED, and you squint at a corner of the room where you think a camera might be. "[EDICT CONCERNING: MILITARY LEADERSHIP --] [ANGEL] ALPHIRA [ASSUMES DIRECT COMMAND OF ALL MILITARY OPERATIONS.]"

"[Operation complete. Please leave.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 12:58:16 am
"Acceptable."

Leave.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 12:59:56 am
"Acceptable."

Smile. "Thank you. This investment will serve you well."

Leave.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 01:09:22 am
You step through the door into the lift-- something pops, and another fire begins to burn while a silverfish scurries around in circles around it, confused. It's 'antenna' wiggles frantically.

The door shuts behind you, and you are plunged into darkness as you ascend to the surface. The gravity begins to shift--this time you pay attention. The further up you go, the lighter you become. You walk past the mouthpiece of SEED, pushing open the massive doors to the foyer, where Emma is laid across a couch. Se's not sleeping, just lazily sprawled, foot-tapping in the air.

"Oh thank SEED you're done. It's been hours! Negotiations must have been difficul-- why are your clothes all wet?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 01:17:54 am
Couch. Dry off first with a bit of hydrogen fire, perhaps.

"I may have ah... started some fires..."
Brief Emma quietly on the proceedings.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 01:19:38 am
Couch.

"I may have ah... started some fires..."
Brief Emma quietly on the proceedings.

+1, but DO NOT MENTION anything about curbing the Families.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 01:21:44 am
Couch.

"I may have ah... started some fires..."
Brief Emma quietly on the proceedings.

+1, but DO NOT MENTION anything about curbing the Families.

Yeeahhh, worthy addendum. +1

For that matter, maybe gloss over the bit with Alphira too?
Was rather a personal moment for all concerned, and I'm... not really sure yet how we want to break that news to Emma's Alphira.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 01:31:12 am
Couch.

"I may have ah... started some fires..."
Brief Emma quietly on the proceedings.

+1, but DO NOT MENTION anything about curbing the Families.

Yeeahhh, worthy addendum. +1

For that matter, maybe gloss over the bit with Alphira too?
Was rather a personal moment for all concerned, and I'm... not really sure yet how we want to break that news to Emma's Alphira.
That's a good point.  +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 01:34:33 am
"Oh? Is that all." Emma listens quietly, intently, wrapping her arms around you in a tight hug. "A very quick way to determine negotiations. Fitting...and demanding social reforms, why aren't you a saint." You begin to dry yourself off, leaving a puddle of pure water on the for of the foyer. A robed citadel guard tuts, leaving to fetch cleaning supplies.

[4] "You're excluding the Thorntons from that debt-slavery one, right? We use a lot of them on our farms, especially for the orphans of our soldiers. The farms would all go out of business without them."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 01:39:30 am
"I think we can work something out.  These sorts of systems are difficult to change quickly, and I understand that reform takes time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 01:50:39 am
Ah-hm, this could be a problem. Are we OK with singling out the Thorntons for otherwise illegal practice this way?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 01:52:10 am
No, they must submit when the war is over.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 02:02:27 am
Are you attempting to lie?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 02:03:18 am
Hmm.  I guess I shouldn't lie.  Let me change my suggestion.

Edit: change made.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 02:04:38 am
Are you attempting to lie?

Yeah, gonna say no.

"Probably, yeah-- at least for awhile. Anything that changes would be changing slow, so that people can adjust... find alternatives. We'll have time to spare after the war's ending, yes?"

"The Thorntons will have all they need, and much they want. That much, I know." Smile reassuring-like.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 02:15:54 am
Are you attempting to lie?
+1

Yeah, gonna say no.

"Probably, yeah-- at least for awhile. Anything that changes would be changing slow, so that people can adjust... find alternatives. We'll have time to spare after the war's ending, yes?"

"The Thorntons will have all they need, and much they want. That much, I know." Smile reassuring-like.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 02:28:25 am
[13] "I trust you, Pheobe to do what's right for those who've helped you out. I never would have guessed you've had such a sense of justice though. Before you go abolishing a bunch of institutions, you might want to read why they were instituted and how they work..." Emma gives you a smile, squeezing you in that hug, then yawns, stretching out, looking out to the plaza as cold wind blows, as night falls. "Are you giving the signal to Iyal today? And how long are we waiting for her to work?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 02:30:20 am
Edit: sorry, I need to think about it for a bit.  I'll sleep on it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 04:03:08 am
Ask Iyal about her current status and recommendations.  We might as well ask her, as she seems to be pretty experienced.  Eerily so, actually.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 11, 2020, 06:15:29 am
Ask Iyal about her current status and recommendations.  We might as well ask her, as she seems to be pretty experienced.  Eerily so, actually.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 12:07:27 pm
In person, or over Emma's radio?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 12:47:34 pm
Hm, do we know where Iyal is right now-- or failing that, where she'll be in near future? I'm leaning towards an in-person meeting, but if she's out brokering skullduggerous deals with fellow Outlanders or whatever I'd rather not interrupt...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 12:54:10 pm
[14] "Location, Outlander?" Emma speaks into the radio after your questioning prompt.

"Rented warehouse nearby staging area. Exact location is--" The tinny radio quietly rattles off an address. "Is there an issue?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 01:29:37 pm
"No issue. We will be convening the generals soon-- are you prepared now to act upon signal?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 01:42:38 pm
[-]"I've just finished uh...recruiting my last assistant for that project, Lady Pheobe. I am reviewing the dossier that I've been given, getting them armed...give me four hours. How long do I have until they all convene?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 02:15:17 pm
Lady Phoebe. That's new.
It's... kind of nice, actually, that someone's willing to tack that kind of respect onto the name of our individuality.

"We'll delay the meeting until you're ready to act. Four hours, you say?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 02:21:56 pm
[-]"Four hours until I'm prepared. There's twenty people piled in this...folder? Folder. In three days I may be able to...finish the top four, depending on security. If you would like to review it and tell me which people to focus on...that number may vary."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 02:24:18 pm
Hm-kay, here's where my understanding of our plan gets a little shaky. How are we doing this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 02:40:47 pm
We should probably go to the meeting and discuss strategy changes. Given that SEED gave control of military operations to us, I’m not certain the killings will be necessary...maybe we jumped the gun
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 03:01:31 pm
Better safe than sorry.  There will always be those who refuse to accept our change in strategy, especially if we end up having to kill some of the generals.

Take a look at the list and the topmost targets.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 03:05:00 pm
"I'll do so. Thank you."

Take a look at the list and the topmost targets.

+1

We'll have to go pick up a copy, I expect.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 03:06:52 pm
From the Pontifex or Iyal?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 03:09:55 pm
From the Pontifex.  Might as well let Iyal work, I think. 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 03:10:50 pm
From the Pontifex.  Might as well let Iyal work, I think.

+1

Should we brief him on the negotiation results while we're at it?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 03:11:48 pm
I think that's a good idea.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 03:15:18 pm
Mm. Should we tell him how we obtained said negotiation results?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 03:17:17 pm
I don't think he needs to know, unless you have an argument for that.  He may think that we acted rashly or prematurely if he knew the details.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 03:28:48 pm
The Pontifex's guards blink as you approach again, they do not hesitate as they open the door for you, once again allowing you entrance into the Grand Cathedral. A guard gestures towards the door of the office, and you and Emma enter. The Pontifex is hunched over his desk, reading through a book. He looks up, past his glasses, and then takes them off-- fixing you with a pleasant smile.

"What else can I do for you today, Sister Alphira?"

"I would like the dossier you gave Iyal, if you would."

"Oh dear. It will take some time to assemble, but I can easily comply with your request."

"If you please." While he works, you inform him of your negotiations with SEED, and how they went well.

"Of course they did, I did hear the edicts, after all. Congratulations and all that are in order." He hands you over the folder, and you open it to browse through the documents. Its a list of twenty people organized numerically by order of importance, along with photos labeled one through twenty of each of the targets.

You gloss over the names-- none of them ring a bell after all, until you get to number five: Eric Applegate. You blink, finding his picture-- and Eric has grown in the years since you last saw him. He's far more muscled, with long brown hair and darkly tanned skin.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 03:31:29 pm
"Can you tell me about the five top targets?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 03:41:02 pm
"Can you tell me about the five top targets?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 03:54:20 pm
"Xavier Mack, Guardian, Elder of the Guardian Ethics and Law Tribunal. A firm believer in SEED and a bloodhound for corruption within the Holy City. A wrathful man, who is quick to anger from slights against SEED's justice." A tall, muscled man wearing full Heavy Guardian kit, flexing for the camera.

"Monica Colgan, Junior Officer for Crusader General Hardy, suspected to be his heir to the position. All accounts point to her having an analytical mindset, but one that firmly believes in her Elder's teachings. I.E. Attrition Warfare." A brown-haired, dark-skinned woman in a Crusader Military outfit, holding a pad of paper.

"Nicole Parker, Senior Science Officer, in charge of Societal Direction Research. A firm believer in SEED, and personally feels as if the Pontifex's position is one that isn't required." A beaming black-haired woman in a scholar's robe, holding up an award-- the picture is too small to make out."

"Cassandra McSoar, Major General, in charge of the Draft." It's an older lady in a well-maintained Crusader Military uniform, mid-inspection of young troops.

"Eric Applegate. A bright young officer being held up by the Crusaders as an exemplar of their creed. Rather naive, but a strong champion being used for press coverage. His death will enable you to have more...coverage, and he's a loyal soldier to the Crusaders, no matter what." You look over Eric's picture, and he beams at the camera, rifle in hand, blood-stained and cracked armor speckled with dirt. Soldiers pose behind him, smiling, putting on brave faces.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 03:57:52 pm
I think we can take all these targets, besides Cassandra, who doesn't strike me as particularly dangerous.

"Would you agree that these assassinations are necessary, or am I acting rashly?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 04:21:34 pm
[2/20 vs 14] "Completely necessary." The Pontifex smiles at you, and Emma gives you a side glance.

"You aren't believing this shit, are you?" She asks, bluntly, directly in front of the Pontifex. You look over to her, in surprise and concern. "What does the Guardian have to do with military matters? Or Eric? Why kill him when we could bring him under our wing. The scientist isn't in charge of anything having to do with the military-- her focus is on what laws our society should enact to follow SEED's plan of paradise. If we need to kill her it can wait until after the war." She explains, calmly, as the Pontifex opens and shuts his mouth.

"Of all of them, Monica Colgan is the only one that strikes me as a viable target." Emma shakes her head again, giving another disgusted glance to the Pontifex. A voice full of reproach, "If you actually believed this...I'm disappointed in you. Maybe you aren't any better than an attack dog."

"Daughter Emma you will no--"

"Shut the fuck up, Ponti, or I'll break your jaw." Emma snaps, turning to affix the Pontifex with a gaze hard as steel, before returning it to you. "The grown ups are talking now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 04:25:06 pm
Silently listen. Be ready for if the Pontifex attacks Emma
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 04:26:10 pm
Sorry guys, I made a misstep with this I suppose.

"I should have expected he would pad the list with his political rivals, but I didn't and made a mistake.  Should we just target Colgan?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 04:29:43 pm
Sorry guys, I made a misstep with this I suppose.

"I should have expected he would pad the list with his political rivals, but I didn't and made a mistake.  Should we just target Colgan?"
Emma said “the grown ups are talking”
To me this implies we should keep quiet lest we mess things up more
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 04:30:22 pm
I think she was meaning that Emma and we are the grownups.  She told the Pontifex to shut up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 04:38:10 pm
"...She's right." Start pointing down the list, in turn. "Xavier's a bulldog, Monica's of the old strategies-- the old engine-- but Nicole Parker? She's dangerous to you, not us. Cassandra? You've given me her position and nothing more-- why's she even on this list? And Eric..." Sigh. "...He's a poster child. He could be our poster child. He's not got a suspicious bone in his body."

In earnest now: "Completely necessary, you say. Necessary for what? I'm trying to unify this force under my own banner-- you've given me a list to tear it apart from the inside out."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 04:39:07 pm
"...She's right." Start pointing down the list, in turn. "Xavier's a bulldog, Monica's of the old strategies-- the old engine-- but Nicole Parker? She's dangerous to you, not us. Cassandra? You've given me her position and nothing more-- why's she even on this list? And Eric..." Sigh. "...He's a poster child. He's not got a suspicious bone in his body."

In earnest now: "Completely necessary, you say. Necessary for what? I'm trying to unify this force under my own banner-- you've given me a list to tear it apart from the inside out."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 04:43:50 pm
[11 vs 1/4] "I did not! All of them are--" Emma is across the desk before you or the Pontifex can react, grabbing him by the collar and slamming his head into the desk. He yelps-- and Emma lifts him easily out of his seat in a beautiful exhibition of Empyreal strength, pulling him in front of her. "What. Did. I. Say."

The Pontifex, shriveled and scared, only nods in answer.

"Good boy." Emma looks over at you, frowning as her grip tightens on the man's collar. Her shoulders are tense-- then she shoves him away, relaxing. "I recommend you answer Alphira honestly." The Pontifex opens his mouth to speak to you, before looking to Emma, who gives a very Thornton smile, "You can talk now."

"You're righ-you're right. I'm sorry. I'm sorry! I'll write up a b-better one!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 04:45:00 pm
"...She's right." Start pointing down the list, in turn. "Xavier's a bulldog, Monica's of the old strategies-- the old engine-- but Nicole Parker? She's dangerous to you, not us. Cassandra? You've given me her position and nothing more-- why's she even on this list? And Eric..." Sigh. "...He's a poster child. He's not got a suspicious bone in his body."

In earnest now: "Completely necessary, you say. Necessary for what? I'm trying to unify this force under my own banner-- you've given me a list to tear it apart from the inside out."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 04:46:58 pm
"Please do so.  Do not try to deceive me again."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 04:47:53 pm
"Please do so.  Do not try to deceive me again."
wait what, do what?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 04:48:27 pm
Write up a better list.  I think you may have missed the last update.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 04:50:47 pm
Ah yes, I’m sorry, this game I;ve missed updates more than usual
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 04:51:40 pm
No worries.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 05:49:48 pm
The Pontifex scrambles back to his desk, and is all a flurry with business, pulling out folders and looking through them. The list of twenty, you've noticed, has been shortened to seven individuals.

Monica Colgan is now at the top of the list, with the same picture. Beneath her Jane Morris, an Officer from something called SEED's special services, with high rank but no official posting. Lauren Lee, embedded propaganda officer, who constantly assures the public that the war is doing well, and who has deep ties to General Hardy. George Montblanc, a Junior Officer of SEED who is a member of the Montblanc family, who is publically supporting General Hardy, in exchange for military kickbacks.

"Sounds familiar." Emma murmurs, bluntly.

The next is Ryan Morris, a wealthy local governor for the Suburb District, he's been accused of breeding poverty in the area to provide plenty of poor recruits and debt-slaves to the war machine. Sally Edwards, a captain known for her brutal and sadistic execution of her soldiers at the slightest provocation, she's in charge of a penal battalion made up of debt slaves, stationed in the suburbs. Tiffany Linc is next, a local heretic preacher who has been forming a cult against you, stating you are a [demon].

"She might be right."

"There, there! Those should be the best I can offer." The Pontifex states, lifting his ink-stained hands from the desk. You look through the photos of the seven idly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 06:00:24 pm
Ahh-ha.

Take up and burn away the old list. Let the power drip from our words, soft and heavy. "Thank you. You've been useful to me, Brother Pontifex... if you've any sense, you'll continue to be useful to me. Only remember this..."

And now let our will rise in earnest. "...by your word, because it deceived me, I was to strike down the god of this world. What do you think I could do to you for the same?"

---

"I will not be wielded. Not by you, Brother, not by any like you. Remember this, do not attempt it again-- and when the new age dawns upon this world, you will find a place there for yourself still."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 06:01:34 pm
That does look like a better list.  How about Monica Colgan, Jane Morris, Lauren Lee, George Montblanc, and lastly Tiffany Linc if time allows?

Ahh-ha.

Take up and burn away the old list. Let the power drip from our words, soft and heavy. "Thank you. You've been useful to me, Brother Pontifex... if you've any sense, you'll continue to be useful to me. Only remember this..."

And now let our will rise in earnest. "...by your word, because it deceived me, I was to strike down the god of this world. What do you think I could do to you for the same?"

---

"I will not be wielded. Not by you, Brother, not by any like you. Remember this, do not attempt it again-- and when the new age dawns upon this world, you will find a place there for yourself still."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 06:03:55 pm
That does look like a better list.  How about Monica Colgan, Jane Morris, Lauren Lee, George Montblanc, and lastly Tiffany Linc if time allows?

Ahh-ha.

Take up and burn away the old list. Let the power drip from our words, soft and heavy. "Thank you. You've been useful to me, Brother Pontifex... if you've any sense, you'll continue to be useful to me. Only remember this..."

And now let our will rise in earnest. "...by your word, because it deceived me, I was to strike down the god of this world. What do you think I could do to you for the same?"

---

"I will not be wielded. Not by you, Brother, not by any like you. Remember this, do not attempt it again-- and when the new age dawns upon this world, you will find a place there for yourself still."

+1
+1 but we should also update Iyal on the list changes
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 06:04:26 pm
We will, momentarily. Gotta figure out who we're killing first, if anyone.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 06:08:09 pm
Monica Colgan, Jane Morris, Lauren Lee, George Montblanc, and Sally Edwards
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 06:15:37 pm
[5] [16/18 vs 12]The paper crackles in your hand, and the will crackles in your voice as you lean over the table, dressing down the Pontifex. He bristles, rising-- but between the wild lash of Emma's willpower and your more carefully directed burst he staggers down, going very pale.

[18] "I...I understand. I am...I am sorry Sister Alphira. I understand." He's speaking the truth for now. The Pontifex is a defeated man, slumping into his chair, his hands limp by his sides. "I understand. I am sorry."

Emma rises from her seat, starting out the door after staring The Pontifex down for a few moments longer. She isn't smiling but holds the door open for you sullenly. Her radio gives a chime, and she lifts it to her ear.

"Outlander is ready." You know it's only been two and a half hours, so you raise a brow to Emma, who shrugs. "They haven't moved out yet, but they're operational."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 11, 2020, 06:20:31 pm
Leave the Pontifex’s building, tell Iyal about the new list
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 06:43:53 pm
Hm. Do we want to start our assassinations before or after the military convening?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 06:46:15 pm
"Hold on. We're bringing you an updated list." Emma speaks gently into the radio as the two of you leave the Grand Cathedral.



You walk through the streets of the Holy City, Emma and your guards falling behind quietly. Emma sullen, Sarah not needing to speak. Snow pours from the heavens, clumping into mush on the warm streets of the city. Most of the buildings around you are dark, and life doesn't return to them until you reach the suburbs. You pass by bars, pass the drunks missing limbs, hunched over bottles of cheap liquor. Some openly weep, some are grim-faced in their sadness.

[20] All go silent when they see you pass by in full panoply, dropping do their knees in humble prayer. A few offer you their bottles, and before you know it, a crowd has gathered around you. Many are drunk yes, but they do not disrespect you, maintaining a clear circle around you-- but you come to a stop, especially as the crowd grows. No two are the same, men and women, young and old, but they all share one similarity -- they have a hollow look to their eyes that you know too well.

"Mother Alphira." A scarred blond is the one who speaks to you, and her face nags at a memory, "What can we do? How can we serve? How can we help? Please."

There are outliers, you notice, in the crowd, those who do not drop to their knees in worship. Emma is watching them like a bird of prey, a hand on a las-gun. Hostility radiates off of them towards you, but they do not approach.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 07:06:52 pm
Embrace her.

"My heart weeps for you, my children who have suffered so yet remain resolute and faithful.  The winds of change are blowing, and the storm clouds that menace this Holy City will recede into the horizon in just a little while.  It is always darkest before the dawn, but the sun always rises to banish the shadows of night."

"You must hold on a little while yet, and continue on as best you can.  Your bravery and integrity are inspiring in these troubled times.  I will bring you the victory you deserve."

 
We should look into SEED's "special services" division.  These may be the people SEED will employ to attempt to assassinate us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 09:13:19 pm
Hm, perhaps a somewhat less overt display of divine care? Our compatriot's, ah, in a bit of a dangerous mood at the moment...

Poke at our memory a bit: do we know this person?
Extend a hand and a smile. "Rise, sister. Let not those who suffer here stoop with bowed head-- those who have given so much already."


"My heart weeps for you, my children who have suffered so yet remain resolute and faithful.  The winds of change are blowing, and the storm clouds that menace this Holy City will recede into the horizon in just a little while.  It is always darkest before the dawn, but the sun always rises to banish the shadows of night."

"You must hold on a little while yet, and continue on as best you can.  Your bravery and integrity are inspiring in these troubled times.  I will bring you the victory you deserve."


+1
Speak soft. Let our power amplify the sound of our words; let our will weave hope therein.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 09:35:30 pm
That seems fair, but I don't think Emma would hurt someone for hugging us.

Hm, perhaps a somewhat less overt display of divine care? Our compatriot's, ah, in a bit of a dangerous mood at the moment...

Poke at our memory a bit: do we know this person?
Extend a hand and a smile. "Rise, sister. Let not those who suffer here stoop with bowed head-- those who have given so much already."


"My heart weeps for you, my children who have suffered so yet remain resolute and faithful.  The winds of change are blowing, and the storm clouds that menace this Holy City will recede into the horizon in just a little while.  It is always darkest before the dawn, but the sun always rises to banish the shadows of night."

"You must hold on a little while yet, and continue on as best you can.  Your bravery and integrity are inspiring in these troubled times.  I will bring you the victory you deserve."


+1
Speak soft. Let our power amplify the sound of our words; let our will weave hope therein.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 10:10:09 pm
[12] ...this was one of your battalion. You never caught a name, having only noticed her during one of the endless inspections. She was always laughing and flirting with her comrades. Her only hand hesitantly takes yours, and you gently lift her to her feet as you speak softly to the crowd.

[10][20] It's difficult to muster your willpower for something other than intimidation, but after you finish speaking, there isn't a dry eye or a stooped head, each man and woman standing. Those on the outskirts have left, or joined within the crowd, moved as the rest by your benediction. The blonde, scarred, one-armed woman grips your hand tightly, tears burning at her face.

"Pl-please don't say that. Give us something-- give us a task, give us an order, a command. Please. Please." The crowd is agreeing with her,
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 10:17:00 pm
We've... obtained a small army of cripples.
What on earth are we going to do with a small army of cripples?

They deserve better than this...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 10:28:31 pm
I have no idea.  What could they do that would be helpful?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 10:47:31 pm
...My first thought? Nationalize the Thornton Warmachine process. We could draw off this lot, give them new limbs-- better limbs-- make of them a proper fighting force, arrayed under our banner.

We'd have to figure out logistics tho. Not sure yet how to go about that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 10:55:57 pm
Hmm.  That could work.  Let's send them off to the Thorntons, to fight if they are willing, but otherwise for shelter and doing whatever they can to help.

Maybe something like this: "I will send those willing to our allies, the Thorntons.  If you wish to continue the fight, you may be fitted for prosthetics there and join us in battle, but otherwise you may take shelter there and labor to strengthen our manufacturing capability."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 11:09:58 pm
I'm... tentatively willing to back that up. Only thing is, do we want to talk to William about this before we send a whole bunch of people his way?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 11:12:16 pm
We have Emma on hand, we could ask her.  "Emma, could the Thorntons take these people in and give them prosthetics if they would like to continue the fight?  Those that don't want to fight could take shelter there and do whatever they can to help, such as strengthen our manufacturing capability."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 11:15:48 pm
Aye, that'll have to do.

"Emma, could the Thorntons take these people in and give them prosthetics if they would like to continue the fight?  Those that don't want to fight could take shelter there and do whatever they can to help, such as strengthen our manufacturing capability."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 11, 2020, 11:21:39 pm
[-] "William was intending to do that anyway." Is Emma's terse reply, "You just gave him recruits a bit earlier, and the labor base to set up the factory." She shrugs a shoulder, "No doubt, he wouldn't mind."

The crowd looks confused at the exchange, before turning their hopeful gaze back to you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 11:27:57 pm
"I will send those willing to our allies, the Thorntons.  If you wish to continue the fight, you may be fitted for prosthetics there and join us in battle, but otherwise you may take shelter there and labor to strengthen our manufacturing capability."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 11:33:32 pm
Hm, how are we doing this? Do we send this lot back to the cargo ship, or all the way back to Villa, or what?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 11:35:14 pm
We'll escort them to the compound where our personal guards can direct them to the cargo ship and a Thornton pilot can transport them back to the villa.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 11, 2020, 11:46:25 pm
Mm-kay. Not sure if the cargo ship can carry all these people at once, but we can drop folks off at the compound and work from there.
Should probably meet with Iyal first though... something tells me the extra attention would be unwelcome there.

Nod, smile back at the crowd. "It seems I've a task to offer you after all."

"I will send those willing to our allies, the Thorntons.  If you wish to continue the fight, you may be fitted for prosthetics there and join us in battle, but otherwise you may take shelter there and labor to strengthen our manufacturing capability."

"I must be going a short time. I'll soon be along back this way to escort anyone interested to a meeting-place."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 11, 2020, 11:48:05 pm
Hmm.  We could just escort them and then come back for Iyal.  I don't see the problem with that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 12:18:58 am
[-] Those that have assembled are at a loss for words. The blonde one goes about organizing them into groups, finally stating, "Mother Alphira-- if you tell me where to meet up, I can direct them there in the morning, if you have important business to attend. Some...some of them need to sober up, anyways...if what you're saying is true. This is life...life-changing. Thank you."

Emma steps in to organize them, or rather, to delegate responsibilities. It seems that the blonde is going to get a count of all who is willing to join and is going to organize them here tomorrow for a meet-up. Emma leaves it open whether you or a Thornton agent will escort them to their new workshop.

It's an hour later when the four of you and your group break away from the crowd-- and it dwindles. You're plunged into the streets and back alleys of the suburbs as you make your way to the warehouse where Iyal resides. While in the same area as the new Thornton District, its far enough away for deniability.

It looks empty, a decrepit building devoid of life, with broken shutters and a sagging roof. There's only the pulse of a las-pistol within, but, and you strain your ears, no other sound reaches you.

You enter, your eyes adjusting to the darkness rapidly. Iyal stands tucked behind a nearby wall, judging by the las-gun pulse, and you call out to her, directing your voice towards her cover. She emerges into the darkness quietly, looking confused, even as she lights an electric lamp on the table.

"How?" Iyal questions, sitting down on what looks like it used to be a chair.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 12:34:14 am
"We discussed the list with the Pontifex, and it came to light that he didn't put in a good faith effort, so he graciously prepared a new list."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 12:43:45 am
Let's give the new recruits a personal escort, if we've time tomorrow.



"[Angel] trick." (Grin.) "We can feel when there's a fusion reactor near."

"Anyhow..."


"We discussed the list with the Pontifex, and it came to light that he didn't put in a good faith effort, so he graciously prepared a new list."

Pass over the dossier. "This one, I think I trust. Emma had the guy pretty well cowed when he put this together."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 12:51:32 am
1 vote for personal escort, logged

"You probably shouldn't have told me that." Iyal states, reaching over to retrieve the new dossier. Her confusion mounts as she looks through it, flipping through the photos and the brief statements. "This is completely...different...but far more manageable."

"This many people...I can...deal...within two weeks, long estimate. As long as they don't get spooked and stick to their paths." Iyal shuts it, asking directly, "Should I add him to the list, as well, Lady Pheobe?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 12:57:37 am
No need for a personal escort as long as we can extract from Emma a promise for the Thorntons to not turn them into debt-slaves.

"No, that isn't necessary at this time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 12, 2020, 12:59:39 am
We need to minimize disruptions during the war, that is why we reduced the list in the first place.  We can deal with the Pontifex one way or the other afterwards.

Do not escort them to the factory we have done enough so far there.  You need to... sorry...   we need to learn to delegate more.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 01:00:21 am
I just worry that the Thorntons might take them as debt-slaves or something.  This is a criminal Family, after all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 01:55:23 am
"As you insist. Anything else I can do for you? Would you like me to start on this and just go down the list, or do you have preferred targets from the selection? Anything like that?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 01:57:10 am
...right. Which folk do we want killed when? Do we send our signal before the convention? After?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 02:00:24 am
"Spare Ryan Morris and Sally Edwards, for now, but otherwise complete the list from the top down.  Thank you for your efforts, by the way.  You're doing a great job."

Here's my suggestion for targets for now.  We can deal with the 2 others later.  We should send the signal before the convention so that the top targets won't be able to react to our change in strategy and/or execution of the generals.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 12, 2020, 05:43:35 am
"Spare Ryan Morris and Sally Edwards, for now, but otherwise complete the list from the top down.  Thank you for your efforts, by the way.  You're doing a great job."

Here's my suggestion for targets for now.  We can deal with the 2 others later.  We should send the signal before the convention so that the top targets won't be able to react to our change in strategy and/or execution of the generals.
+1 Sounds good to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 12, 2020, 09:24:55 am
"Spare Ryan Morris and Sally Edwards, for now, but otherwise complete the list from the top down.  Thank you for your efforts, by the way.  You're doing a great job."

Here's my suggestion for targets for now.  We can deal with the 2 others later.  We should send the signal before the convention so that the top targets won't be able to react to our change in strategy and/or execution of the generals.
+1 Sounds good to me.
+1
why are we sparing Ryan and Sally? Are they the names of Academy friends?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 01:13:10 pm
"I'll start right away." Iyal replies, dropping from her seat to a kneel, before rising, and gesturing you out. "You first, Lady Pheobe."

You step out, in front of Emma and the guards.

"Where to next?" Emma asks.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 01:56:10 pm
I wanted to spare them because they sound despicable but not particularly dangerous to our plans or particularly likely to rebel.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 02:01:47 pm
How long are we waiting before we convene the generals?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 02:07:32 pm
I think we should give her a bit time to get rid of at least the top two targets, so that those individuals absolutely can't respond to our actions.  Once we get confirmation from Iyal that the top two are dead, we can then convene the meeting, is my thought.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 02:13:42 pm
Right... we have some time to kill, then. Is there anything else we want to make happen today?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 02:23:17 pm
Nothing comes to mind at the moment.  We could ask Emma.

"Emma, what do you think we should take care of next?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 02:27:42 pm
Honestly, if we've nothing pressing to do at the moment... I kinda want to just go get lunch somewhere. Take a little stress off. We're in the middle of a war, sure, but we still gotta eat!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 02:33:14 pm
Honestly, if we've nothing pressing to do at the moment... I kinda want to just go get lunch somewhere. Take a little stress off. We're in the middle of a war, sure, but we still gotta eat!

That works.  +1.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Eschar on April 12, 2020, 02:33:25 pm
PTW
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 03:17:05 pm
Yeshhhh...


Only the bars are open this late in the evening. There's a few gin bars on the border between the suburbs, many, many pubs nearby, and a few dives of dubious quality, sheltered in decript ruins of prefabricated homes.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 03:34:21 pm
Let's try a pub.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 03:37:26 pm
Ah-- is later than I thought. Shame.

"Iyal needs time to work-- we'll be setting things in motion sometime tomorrow morning, I expect. For now... want to grab some pub food somewhere together before we head back to base?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 03:38:15 pm
Ah-- is later than I thought. Shame.

"Iyal needs time to work-- we'll be setting things in motion sometime tomorrow morning, I expect. For now... want to grab some pub food somewhere together before we head back to base?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 12, 2020, 03:39:06 pm
Are we sure we want to get drunk? Never mind, the night before we did a hallucinogen which I supported so I’m not one to talk

Why do I feel like we could be doing more?

I fear we may be wasting time,

Why can’t we do the meeting now? SEzeD officially gave us control over military operations, so technically going against us would be going against him?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 03:40:56 pm
I do feel a nagging sense we could do more, but I can't think of what it would be.  My thought is that we can't count on the generals voluntarily giving up power, even if SEED asks for it.  Plus, it's almost midnight right now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 03:50:59 pm
It's late. We've set a lot of stuff in motion. Frankly... we could use the time to let off some steam, maybe discuss that encounter with the Pontifex. I feel there's words we need to hear on that front, now rather than later.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 12, 2020, 03:53:02 pm
I do feel a nagging sense we could do more, but I can't think of what it would be.  My thought is that we can't count on the generals voluntarily giving up power, even if SEED asks for it.  Plus, it's almost midnight right now.
It's late. We've set a lot of stuff in motion. Frankly... we could use the time to let off some steam, maybe discuss that encounter with the Pontifex. I feel there's words we need to hear on that front, now rather than later.
fair enough, what do we say to Emma? Would she even want to talk about the Pontifex?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 03:56:02 pm
I dunno... but she's really not happy about how things went down back there, and I suspect that's as much our fault as his. I don't want to let that simmer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 04:06:13 pm
[20] "I would like to get some sleep--" Emma's stomach gurgles loudly with hunger. She sighs, nodding, and the two of you pick a pub at random. They all look the same anyway.

[19] It's nearly empty when you enter. Then becomes empty as soon as the remaining patrons get a glance at your armor. You sit at the bar, and ask for the menu. "[Beast of Burden] stew, fried potatoes, and braised meat."

You and Emma both ask for double portions, extra potatoes, and the keep nods, glancing at the guards. They take one look around the bar and shake their heads mutely. "You want something to drink?" The bartender asks the two of you.

Emma orders a bottle of vodka, for herself.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 04:08:04 pm
"What do you have?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 04:16:36 pm
"Vodka. Beer. Some cheap wine. I've got a bottle of brandy for VIPs like yourself. Running low on hard cider-- the apple harvest was bad this year."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 04:17:52 pm
"I'm not surprised about that.  Just some water, please."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 04:33:18 pm
"Ain't got water. Ain't a restaurant."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 04:34:29 pm
Yes, I've been to tons of pubs, why do you ask?

"Sorry.  Vodka is fine."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 04:46:16 pm
"Bottle, mug, or shot?" The bartender is the epitome of stoic patience. Emma takes a sip from her bottle, reluctantly amused by the exchange.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 12, 2020, 04:47:25 pm
“Which one’s the biggest amount?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 04:48:12 pm
"After this conversation, you should probably just leave the bottle."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 05:01:29 pm
"After this conversation, you should probably just leave the bottle."

I'm uh, confused as to what you mean by that-- bottle is fine tho. Angelic liver and all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 05:11:45 pm
He sets the bottle of vodka down for you, and you take a sip-- the burning and lack of flavor, tells you, yes this is nearly pure ethanol. The barkeep nods, stepping in the back to prepare your meal.

Emma radiates a hostile patience, but she takes a hard gulp of vodka. You do the same, and the two of you drop into an awkward silence.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 05:16:39 pm
"So... do you like being an Empyreal, or would you prefer things the way you were?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 05:16:58 pm
...right. Now to set things up so's we can make a proper apology.

Sigh heavy. "Attack dog, hm? Demon? I really upset you back there..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 05:20:10 pm
...right. Now to set things up so's we can make a proper apology.

Sigh heavy. "Attack dog, hm? Demon? I really upset you back there..."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 05:24:14 pm
"What else would you call someone who blindly lashes at whatever she's pointed at without a second thought?"

Emma takes a sip of her bottle. "Calling you Demon was uncalled for. I apologize." Despite the genuine apology, her voice is stiff.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 05:26:14 pm
"I thought that he would realize the consequences of lying to me.  That was short-sighted of him and I expected better.  Obviously I was mistaken."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 05:57:39 pm
Not shifting blame for this. Not yet.

"It was a fair word... I certainly wasn't acting too angelic at the time. Just-- feral. Less than human."

...

"I'm... terrified of that. To be less than human." Smile faint. "You always knew the right words to assure me otherwise, you know that? I'm-- I'm sorry--"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 07:38:51 pm
Not shifting blame for this. Not yet.

"It was a fair word... I certainly wasn't acting too angelic at the time. Just-- feral. Less than human."

...

"I'm... terrified of that. To be less than human." Smile faint. "You always knew the right words to assure me otherwise, you know that? I'm-- I'm sorry--"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 12, 2020, 08:15:33 pm
Not shifting blame for this. Not yet.

"It was a fair word... I certainly wasn't acting too angelic at the time. Just-- feral. Less than human."

...

"I'm... terrified of that. To be less than human." Smile faint. "You always knew the right words to assure me otherwise, you know that? I'm-- I'm sorry--"

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 08:19:29 pm
Emma sighs, reaching over to wrap you in a hug. "I was the one who acted 'feral'. You were the model of civility-- I was the one who bashed Ponti's head in."

"He was treating you like a weapon." She shifts away from you, breathing another sigh and taking a sip from her bottle. " You told me you wouldn't let people do that to you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 08:29:21 pm
"You're right, and I won't let it happen again.  I thought I could trust him because our goals were aligned, but trusting someone like that can only lead to misery."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 08:55:42 pm

Have to say... the stumbles we've had along the way aside, I'm rather pleased with our doings in the Holy City thus far. Already we've a lovely grip of fear on the powers-that-be, and a band of zealots behind us!

Still have to make it through the morning, of course. This convention's gonna be... interesting.



"You're right, and I won't let it happen again.  I thought I could trust him because our goals were aligned, but trusting someone like that can only lead to misery."

Good sentiment-- just gonna spin it out a bit, if I may.

Take a swig off our bottle. "I'm trying. I'm trying. It's hard."

"I... kind of trusted the Pontifex. Figured we had a common enemy. He's a spidery little thing-- he had an angle, I could tell-- but I didn't think to suspect that list of his! By the time I thought even to hesitate... well." Chuckle a little. "You were on it already. You pounced. That was great."

"I'll be more careful in future, hey? You were right about that one. You were right."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 09:25:43 pm

Have to say... the stumbles we've had along the way aside, I'm rather pleased with our doings in the Holy City thus far. Already we've a lovely grip of fear on the powers-that-be, and a band of zealots behind us!

Still have to make it through the morning, of course. This convention's gonna be... interesting.



"You're right, and I won't let it happen again.  I thought I could trust him because our goals were aligned, but trusting someone like that can only lead to misery."

Good sentiment-- just gonna spin it out a bit, if I may.

Take a swig off our bottle. "I'm trying. I'm trying. It's hard."

"I... kind of trusted the Pontifex. Figured we had a common enemy. He's a spidery little thing-- he had an angle, I could tell-- but I didn't think to suspect that list of his! By the time I thought even to hesitate... well." Chuckle a little. "You were on it already. You pounced. That was great."

"I'll be more careful in future, hey? You were right about that one. You were right."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 12, 2020, 09:27:14 pm

Have to say... the stumbles we've had along the way aside, I'm rather pleased with our doings in the Holy City thus far. Already we've a lovely grip of fear on the powers-that-be, and a band of zealots behind us!

Still have to make it through the morning, of course. This convention's gonna be... interesting.



"You're right, and I won't let it happen again.  I thought I could trust him because our goals were aligned, but trusting someone like that can only lead to misery."

Good sentiment-- just gonna spin it out a bit, if I may.

Take a swig off our bottle. "I'm trying. I'm trying. It's hard."

"I... kind of trusted the Pontifex. Figured we had a common enemy. He's a spidery little thing-- he had an angle, I could tell-- but I didn't think to suspect that list of his! By the time I thought even to hesitate... well." Chuckle a little. "You were on it already. You pounced. That was great."

"I'll be more careful in future, hey? You were right about that one. You were right."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 09:50:52 pm
"He always was pushing like that." Emma smirks, "The only reason I thought of it, is because its what I would do in his shoes."

"The only difference between me and him is that I love you." Emma offers, suddenly pulling you close and giving you a long, drawn out kiss. The bartender interrupts with a cough, and she breaks away with a flush, -- and a wicked smile.

[1] "Sorry for acting like a brat.  I shoul-" Emma shifts around suddenly,-- las-guns are approaching. Eight of them. She takes a swig of the bottle, and slips her gun from the holster. "I'm guessing your bar is about to get messy. Sorry."

The bartender looks confused, glancing out the closed shutters. You do the same-- The three of you dive down as automatic las-gun fire rips through the cheap wood of the bar. The shots are wild, inaccurate, as the wood provides protection.

There was eight people you saw, all of them with assault rifles, clad in ragged and patched robes.

Adrenaline pounds through your system, and you find yourself grinning faintly. Emma looks over at you as splinters rain down, face a mirror of yours.  "Cult." One of your guards is face down in a pool of blood, the other is hunched behind a table as the pulses of las-fire splinter into it.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 12, 2020, 09:57:17 pm
Shoot them with our las gun
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 10:03:32 pm
Let that grin widen a bit. "Fun."
Reach out with our will and start popping rifle reactors!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 10:23:24 pm
Inject the ballistic.

Let that grin widen a bit. "Fun."
Reach out with our will and start popping rifle reactors!

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 10:24:47 pm
Hm, is this the time? We grow immune to that stuff, recall, as we use it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 10:27:10 pm
[many, many d20s] Considering better of returning fire when in the line of fire, the pulses of laser still burning through the bar overhead. You instead push your willpower outwards, reaching towards those reactors-- the series of explosions cut the gunfire significantly, and you hear the moaning and whimpering of injured in the distance. There is no more laser pulses ripping through the bar now -- you move to take a brief glance up--

"One up." Calls the remaining guard, and you recognize Sarah's voice muffled beneath her helmet, "Seven downed- injured or dead." She shifts out of cover, closer to the wall riddled with charred holes. "Last one surrendering."

Emma pouts at you, lifting herself up from the splinters to look out the riddled wall. She leans over the bar, grabbing a bottle of liquor that isn't shattered. "Damnit Pheobe. I wanted to play too."

"Y-y-your paying for this." The bartender stutters from his prone position.

"Send the bill to SEED with Alphira's name on it." Emma retorts, shifting closer to the door, keeping to cover. "I'm surprised they only sent eight after you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 10:30:51 pm
Check the other guard for injuries.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 10:32:22 pm
That... worked beautifully.

Look sheepish. "If I knew that'd work so well, I'd have left you a couple!"

Check the other guard for injuries.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 10:33:37 pm
Hm, is this the time? We grow immune to that stuff, recall, as we use it.

By the way, do you have a source for this?  I was unable to find that by searching.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 10:34:10 pm
[-] You think-- yeah, he's dead.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 10:35:52 pm
Take a look at the scene outside.

"Don't move, cultist.  Get on the ground."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 10:44:15 pm
"I surrender! I surrender!" He calls, kneeling on the ground, hands behind his head. There's nothing in his hands, but his cloak looks very bulky. "I'll tell you everything! Please don't shoot!"

Armored vest? You question internally, as you approach the doorway to take a look outside. Seven of them are downed, three heavily wounded, probably going into shock, judging by the missing arms and horrifying burns down their sides.

Pieces of plastic are lined up beneath the robes, with scorched and burnt wiring interconnecting them.

"Please-- I'll tell Alphira everything!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 10:45:51 pm
Hm, he could be packing explosives under that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 10:46:58 pm
Probably.

Send out our will to force those remaining into unconsciousness.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 10:49:35 pm
[5] Your stomach protests with hunger-- [Caloric intake required.] Lucille chimes helpfully, and you sway from a bout of lightheadedness.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 10:50:41 pm
Hmm.  We really should probably just kill them all from here.

"Are you carrying explosives?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 11:01:56 pm
[1][10] The man is silent, and you deliberate internally while Emma steps away from the wall to reclaim her seat-- and the explosion knocks you on your face. Your shield pops up, protecting you from the concussive force of the blast that breaks down the already damaged facade of the building. Your head swims, and you lift yourself up from beneath the broken beams--

[3 vs 20] A las-gun shot ricochets off your shield and destroys a chunk of wall, and you duck back down. It doesn't take you long to realize-- were it not for your shield, that shot would have hit you square in the back of the head. You stretch out your awareness--

[1] You cannot find them, and your head once again swims from the exertion.

Sarah is slumped in the rubble, a fragment of wood jutting from her bloody side. She's still breathing, and after a few hesitant moments, uses her cutter blade to cut the end off from the impaling piece of wood. She slips it back into her holster and picks up her rifle once more. She turns her head towards you, giving a nod.

Emma is nearby as well, conscious and with only a few soot stains on her clothes to show for the explosion. The barkeep is much the same way, looking increasingly shaken.

There are a few potshots directed at the building, and you can hear them splintering the wood outside, horribly inaccurate.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 11:03:46 pm
Inject the ballistic.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 11:12:51 pm
Yeahh, this is a good time.

Inject the ballistic.

+1-- deploy our helmet too, if we haven't already. See if Lucille can pick up the location of these guys.

"Right... this isn't fun anymore. How long would it take to call in reinforcements from here?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 11:15:12 pm
There's no reason not to use it as soon as combat begins.  It doesn't grow weaker over time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 11:18:22 pm
Ah yes, you wanted a quote--

[-] Silas presents you, one day, with a wide variety of combat drugs. Primarily stimulants, sleep medicine, and a few rapid function tranquilizers. "Your body already kills your pain receptors, so I figured uppers and downers would be all that you need. All designed to your unique biology. You'll grow immune to them, in time, however, so use them sparingly."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 11:18:59 pm
Ah, my bad.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 11:25:05 pm
Emma pulls the rifle from the guard as you pump the ballistic into your arm. The world-- gods, everything is fractals, then they coalesce into impossible details you never noticed before. The weak pulse of blood from Sarah's wound, the strand of hair escaping from Emma's ponytail, the soft patter of las-rifle pulses on your position, the snow reflecting the stars--

Emma glances down at her radio, looking surprised. She fiddles with the dial, glancing your way. "I need a squad of Thorntons where that explosion was!-- No. I don't [fucking] know the coordinates-- uh...a district on the edge of the outer city--"

The helmet reaches out, and you can see the heartbeat of...nineteen individuals, at the other end of the street, in various forms of cover. There's a solitary one, higher up, laying down while facing you.

[7+3 vs 16] A shot pings off your shield, and you crawl into better cover instinctively.

"Alphira!" Sarah calls from her cover, "I'm returning fire--" Emma kicks the rifle over to you, keeping low as she tips a table over, trying to coordinate the Thornton response.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 11:28:17 pm
That's a lot.  Use the SMG on the heartbeats.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 12, 2020, 11:32:02 pm
"Nineteen foes on the other end of the street. One on the rooftop."

That's a lot.  Use the SMG on the heartbeats.

+1

Keep to cover. Start with that sniper-- use the rifle off that guard instead, if we think it'll be more accurate.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 11:46:30 pm
SMG inaccurate at this distance--

[-] "I--I can't see them." Sarah breathes, slowly angling her rifle. "I can keep the sniper's --" A las-pulse cracks the wooden beam beside her, "I'll keep the sniper's head down if you tell me how high up."

You do so, grabbing the las-rifle and running a battle-ready check on it. "Go!" Sarah holds down the trigger on her las-rifle, shots lancing into the building in the distance, inaccurate.

Your shot goes wide as the Sniper's heartbeat begins to beat harder. It shifts, aiming towards Sarah--

[11 vs 14][4] Sarah's neck is burned away with a bright flash, leaving a gaping hole-- she drops her rifle, clutching at it. Then, she's still.

[12 vs 16+8] A hail of las-burst hits your shield, driving you back into cover.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 11:47:30 pm
[20] You feel the dual fusion heartbeats of Thornton Warmachines approach, then you hear it. Sudden screaming and pitched combat, the loud hiss of Thornton assault rifles and the thumps of flesh exploding in super-heated steam.

"Sniper in the window!" Emma calls through the radio as the heartbeats in the distance stop one by one- An explosion rocks the street, and you dare a glance. The window is a flaming mess -- all collapsed concrete. The Warmachines are brutally efficient, having come up from the flank while the nineteen cultists were focused on you.

Las-gun pulses leave nothing more than dents in their armor, and they gun down all without mercy, leaving only one alive. The robed cultist is pinned to the ground roughly by a Warmachine's heavy foot. William breaks away from the fighting, approaching your position, actually wearing a helmet for once. "Your reinforcements have arrived, sisters."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 11:55:00 pm
I have to ask, did you make that a 20 to avoid the main character's death?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 12, 2020, 11:58:10 pm
I rolled it immediately after I finished the post, when I realized that I probably should have put something about reinforcements into the post.

By all means, if you think you have plot armor, give it a test-- the sequel I have planned doesn't have to be from Alphira's perspective.  ;D
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 12, 2020, 11:58:35 pm
Haha no thank you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 12:07:25 am
[redacted]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 12:12:22 am
Anyway, we weren't dead yet. We had a shield charge left and everything!

Laugh. "Am I glad to see you lot! These goons, they caught me hungry... I need to start packing nutrient cubes or something."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 12:17:18 am
Anyway, we weren't dead yet. We had a shield charge left and everything!

Laugh. "Am I glad to see you lot! These goons, they caught me hungry... I need to start packing nutrient cubes or something."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 12:21:26 am
"That...might be for the best. Or have a pair of Warmachines instead of-" William nudges the corpse of Sarah with a booted foot, nodding to the barkeep, who slowly rises from behind the bar. "...these guys."

"Hey, bring Alphira some food. Lots of it." William orders the barkeep as the Thorntons advance on your position, keeping it covered from other threats. They drag the prisoner with them roughly, his robe pulled off, revealing the face of an unremarkable young man. He stares into the distance, even as William props him into a chair, taking a seat across from him.

The Barkeep, perhaps on autopilot, brings the entire pot of simmering stew out and sets it on the intact table. He drops the ladle and some bowls nearby and slumps into a seat. He cradles his head in his hands, breathing hard.

"What's wrong with that guy. Acts like he wasn't ever collateral damage before."

Emma takes a bowl of stew and drops to the ground, laying against the bar as she slowly eats. You-- you take the pot and slump down next to her, eating.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 12:36:03 am
Address the cultist.  "I don't suppose you'd like to volunteer some information?  If you are cooperative, you will not be harmed."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 12:41:50 am
Heh. Never thought I'd ever find William's brand of soulless pragmatism reassuring.

"Yes..."

To the barkeep: "...I'm terribly sorry about all this, sir. I swear--" chuckle a little, nervously-- "I swear, I don't usually leave a trail of devastation everywhere I go."

...


Address the cultist.  "I don't suppose you'd like to volunteer some information?  If you are cooperative, you will not be harmed."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 12:50:10 am
You finish half the pot and deposit on the table. The Bartender only grunts in response to your words, and Emma lays against the bar still, breathing in and out with a faint smile. "Too much fun." She murmurs, gently, rising to sit across from the Bartender.

She gently coaxes him into a conversation, and you leave the two at it.

William raises his brow at your declaration, grinning at you. Quietly, "I'm going to have call bullshit on that, Phebe."

The cultist looks up at you and--

[15-5 vs 13] "I..." The Cultist begins, "I don't...know--" You step closer to him, your willpower seeping into his bones, and he flinches again. "I thought I was doing the right thing." He finally whimpers, "That it would be destiny that...that you die here...but...that's wrong-because it didn't happen." The cultist reasons, tears dripping down his cheeks.

"What...what do you want to know?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 01:00:26 am
"What is the size of your organization and who leads it?"  Might as well get confirmation, even though it's probably the heretic on the list.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 01:04:36 am
"I want to know... who sent you, and why. I want to know if someone's planning to attack me this way again. What is the size of your organization, and who leads it? There's a war on, and I need the people of the Holy City fighting by my side if we're to win it-- not stabbing me in the back."

Speak gentle now, soothing. "I am not an unreasonable [angel]. You are a zealot. Very soon now, I will have need of zealots."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 01:13:21 am
"...I don't know about another attack...but the Church has...two, maybe three hundred members? We...we're lead by the Prophet Linc." The cultist looks across to William, who gives him a crooked smile. Its not very reassuring, and the young man looks down, tears still dripping from his face.

"She...she says you're a [demon], here to corrupt the weak of heart with false promises, and that...the [Plague] is going to liberate us into paradise..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 01:16:47 am
"Where does Linc live and where is your organization headquartered?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 01:21:45 am
"She moves us around...we usually get told the location by a Father or Mother."

"Where is your--" Your next question is answered by his eyes flicking to the street outside. "Right. Dead."

"Sorry Phebe. Restraint isn't in the Thornton dictionary." William offers, apologetically.

"Literally. Father had it edited out." Emma calls, breaking away from her conversation with the Barkeep to deliver the punchline. William grins, flashing a thumbs up to Emma, who sighs and shakes her head. The Keep looks a little bit less shocked, glaring daggers at the Cultist from where he sits.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 01:25:08 am
"What armaments and explosives does the 'Church' have, and in what quantity?  Also, how were they acquired?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 01:29:52 am
"I...I don't know. Our Father had a pallet of assault rifles ready for us when we got there-- and the...the bombers had their vests ready by then too." The Cultist looks over at the bartender and drops his gaze back to the floor.

"We've got a Guardian squad approaching from the North, William." A Warmachine calls into the rubble of the building. "Ten men, heavies. In cover, up the road. Orders? One is approaching."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 01:35:27 am
"I'm sure you can handle this, William.  Just cooperate."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 01:40:47 am
Ah-hm, we maybe want to be present for this. The voice of an [angel] could make a difference here.

"William-- how much of the street got wrecked besides this pub?"

To the calling Warmachine: "Form up outside. I'll come and explain things."
To William again: "Best keep this one out of sight."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 01:48:15 am
Do not surrender the captive.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 01:50:40 am
Fine by me. I just figure we can use him to back up what happened.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 01:54:47 am
If this Church is being funded by an arm of SEED, they will want to make sure that there were no survivors of the failed attack.  We shouldn't tip them off to the fact that one survived.

If they see him, they'll probably want to take him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 01:57:36 am
...man. It hadn't occurred to me that this might've been on SEED's orders. I ain't paranoid enough!

Yeah, I'll edit that out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 01:58:24 am
Thank you.

Ah-hm, we maybe want to be present for this. The voice of an [angel] could make a difference here.

"William-- how much of the street got wrecked besides this pub?"

To the calling Warmachine: "Form up outside. I'll come and explain things."
To William again: "Best keep this one out of sight."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 02:00:15 am
Always jars me, how the sizing on my suggestions goes all wonky when quoted...  ::)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 02:01:59 am
Oh god good others see it too. I was worried I was hallucinating.

"Uh...well, the street is filled with bodies, and there's a crater where I'm assuming a bomb went off, and we also shot a rocket to take care of that sniper," William responds. Emma trails behind you, following you out into the cold night.

The man stands on the lip of the crater, hands on his hips. He isn't carrying a weapon, but he stands opposing your Warmachines. Your willpower probes at his-- and finds steel there. A disciplined mind, full of willpower. The Guardian drops to his knees when he sees you-- but rises before you can give him leave, peeling off his helmet. "Well, Mother Alphira. What a circumstance to meet in!" Xavier Mack is smiling a wide, toothy smile at you, his long brown hair curled in a top-knot on his head.

His eyes linger on a Warmachine's red thorn with a brief intensity. "Interesting company you keep, too."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 02:21:51 am
Oh god good others see it too. I was worried I was hallucinating.

:P



Nod. "Xavier Mack, I take it? I am honored by your presence-- would that we might have met in more peaceable conditions."
Gesture to the slain. "These ones attempted to kill me. Two of my guards lie dead to their rifles."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 02:35:17 am
"On the stars, Mother Alphira knows my name-- without introduction, no less..." Xavier responds, stepping up to a Warmachine as he talks, invading your personal space. He knocks on the armor of one, listening to how hollow it might be. "That explains the corpses, I suppose. Did you blow them up?"

"Thick armor there. I'd have to be right up close to punch through it. Where's William? I see one blondie, but I don't see two." He ducks a nod to Emma, "Emeralda Thornton. I arrested your brother once. I wonder if I'll get the set tonight."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 02:52:32 am
Emeralda!
...Emeralda?
Huh.
Anyway.

Bristle a little. "I should think not, [honorific]* Xavier-- but perhaps you might explain to me what our legal standing is at this time?"

*whatever's appropriate. Brother? Elder? Phoebe probably knows.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 02:58:07 am
You settle on Child, as you technically outrank him. Emma doesn't respond, but blushes, and glances to you at the name. "I"m still conducting an investigation, Mother Alphira." Xavier explains, politely, "Now, if you could kindly answer the questions?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 03:12:18 am
Heh, two and a half years and we never knew "Emma" was a contraction... I wonder what that's about.

Nod. "I 'blew up'-- er-- some of these. The first ten attackers or so."
"William's in what's left of the pub there."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 03:59:37 am
"So you caused all this damage, then?" Xavier turns to walk into the tavern, offering, "I'm going to go pay my respects to William. See how my favorite drug lord is doing tonight."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 04:09:24 am
I like this guy. He's like a sci-fi dystopia Sam Vimes. :))

"Not really, no... was a suicide bomber, took out the front of the building here. These folks were dedicated."

Follow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 12:52:41 pm
[4 vs 7] "William! Good to see you again. Nice hair." Xavier offers as he strolls in to the bar. William gives him a crooked smile, shifting back into a relaxed slouch. The bartender is standing behind the bar, looking very pale.

"Xavier. Wonderful to see you still alive."

"You almost sound disappointed! Did you get the card I sent you?"

"You mean Jackson?"

"Well having that many unlicensed, untaxed drugs is a capital offense."

"What can I do for you?" William responds bluntly, the smile faltering.

There's a stifled sob from somewhere below the Bartender. Xavier slowly walks over, taking a seat at a remaining stool. "Could you bring me a water, please? And open up the beer cellar while you're at it?"

[10 vs 7] "This bar is Thornton property." William calls out from where he sits, "As of five minutes ago. You cannot legally search it without our consent." He takes a sip of liquor, staring at Xavier.

"Covering your bases, I see. That's right -- unless a certain high ranking officer in the room allows me to." Xavier smiles at you over his water.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 01:38:42 pm
Hm. At this point, my inclination is to just bring up the prisoner and have done with it-- we'd be drawing way too much suspicion, leaving him down there.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 01:54:19 pm
"And why would I do that?" 

I'd rather not surrender the captive, but if he makes us a good offer, I'd be willing to consider it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 02:06:24 pm
What would he even offer us though-- what, but a chance to demonstrate that we've a care to the laws of this city? Legitimacy, remember? If we're to take this world for our own, we've got to maintain that facade of legitimacy.

We don't necessarily have to surrender the captive-- not yet-- but given it's pretty clear to everyone here we have said captive, we might as well show we've nothing to hide yes?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 13, 2020, 02:08:52 pm
What would he even offer us though-- what, but a chance to demonstrate that we've a care to the laws of this city? Legitimacy, remember? If we're to take this world for our own, we've got to maintain that facade of legitimacy.

We don't necessarily have to surrender the captive-- not yet-- but given it's pretty clear to everyone here we have said captive, we might as well show we've nothing to hide yes?
I uh, don’t know why we captured a person?
Did he stop trying to kill us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 02:10:33 pm
We are currently following the laws of this city.  As Xavier admitted, he has no legal right to search this building, so not allowing him to do so would be perfectly legitimate.  If he sees the captive, he may demand that we turn him over.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 02:10:50 pm
"Well, Alphira, take a look at things from my perspective." Xavier gestures towards William, "You're good friends with one of-- sorry the largest crime kingpin in the City State."

William beams a smile, "The Montblanc Family can suck it."

"Quite, although you taking that as a compliment annoys me to no end." Xavier is returning William's smile. "There's dozens of dead low lives out there, two craters I can see so far from heavy explosives..."

"Why, to me, this quite looks like a gang war. Angel or not, that isn't pretty. I'm sure whoever is whimpering like a puppy beneath the floor there can clear things up." Xavier finishes, "And I don't have to take the whole lot of you into protective custody."

With a glance to William, "SEED forbid, but on the off chance William did something good, maybe I can help."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 02:14:18 pm
...Alright.

"William, show him the captive."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 02:17:36 pm
Ayup, that's... pretty much exactly what I expected to hear.

"William, show him the captive."

+1

To Xavier now: "The Warmachines managed to take prisoner one of those would-be assassins. Have a care with him, if you would-- I told him he'd come to no harm for his cooperation, and I don't make such promises lightly."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 13, 2020, 02:22:43 pm
No need for that.

"This is need to know only, but you seem to care about this city.  I interrogated a dying attacker in a way only I can.  He did not survive the process.  He was a member of a doomsday cult seeking to serve the [demons] and let the plague INTO THE CITY.  They can not know we are onto them, so it can not be in the report.  Here is what I do know and I need your help to find them with the resources you have."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 02:24:30 pm
Hmm.  I still would rather keep the prisoner for interrogation.

No need for that.

"This is need to know only, but you seem to care about this city.  I interrogated a dying attacker in a way only I can.  He did not survive the process.  He was a member of a doomsday cult seeking to serve the [demons] and let the plague INTO THE CITY.  They can not know we are onto them, so it can not be in the report.  Here is what I do know and I need your help to find them with the resources you have."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 02:26:40 pm
He's... obviously alive tho.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 02:28:12 pm
Yeah, but hopefully he will be satisfied with knowing what happened and who was behind the attack and will be willing to meet us halfway.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 02:31:12 pm
A lie's no good if everyone knows it's a lie

Can we not just be honest about what went down here? Everything that happened here was (to my knowledge) legal-- we really don't have anything to hide right now. It's quite clear to all concerned we've got a prisoner.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 02:33:40 pm
It is clear that we have a prisoner, but at this point we may still have the opportunity to hold onto him.  He may say that he has to take the cultist into custody if he sees him.

He could easily suffer an "accident" while in custody and not have the ability to give us more information.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 02:39:13 pm
[-]"...well. I cannot search this domicile." Xavier nods, and beams you a winning smile, "Mother Alphira, Emeralda Thornton, and William Thornton--" He points at the barkeep, who flinches, "And you. I'm placing you all into protective custody until such a time as the truth can be determined."

"I'm guessing a week or so to investigate...maybe longer, then maybe we can think about releasing you from it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 02:41:25 pm
Hnn. This wasn't worth it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 02:43:01 pm
"As you know, I am in full command of all military resources as approved by SEED itself.  These personnel, as well as myself, are essential military assets and they cannot be spared.  They will face a military tribunal at an appropriate time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 13, 2020, 02:49:47 pm
We don't know enough about the cult to seek them out, this guy could do it.  Maybe SEED made it, maybe not, but working with him instead of against him seems like a better idea.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 02:51:13 pm
"Containment Protocool states that any suspicious action can result in you being placed under protective custody, until SEED determines that you do not pose a threat to the City-State, Mother Alphira." He removes a folder from his vest, [Angel of Fire Containment Procedures], extending it out your way, "This neat little folder authorizes my action. To my knowledge, it has not yet been repealed, making it law."

"Can I see William's and Emma's contracts? As I am sure you are aware, a Military Tribunal is far harsher than a Civilian Court." Emma produces her contract, after a moment of hesitation. "If I'm not mistaken, the punishments for misuse of military assets for personal gain are all capital punishments."

He glances at the paper in Emma's hand, noting the seal, then turning towards William. "Your's next, if you please."

William looks annoyed, "I don't have a contract, Xavier."

"Oh! Wonderful. Then I can actually arrest you." Xavier rises, producing a pair of cuffs from his belt-- you notice he doesn't have a gun.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 02:52:50 pm
Perhaps... perhaps... I got carried away.  Sorry.

"There is no need.  I apologize... I got carried away.  We will cooperate."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 03:02:55 pm
[-] "No." Xavier expression turns fierce in an instant as he rounds on you, standing toe to toe with, face to face. "I gave you a chance to cooperate, and you choose to flaunt your status in the face of duty and law. No doubt you're telling the truth, and SEED will clear you immediately-- that is not my concern."

"You chose the hard way. You chose to lie to me. So, as a consequence, the entire damn city is going to know that you were escorted back to your compound by me. And [angel] or not, I will drag your skinny ass back to your compound. I will haul Emeralda off to the military brig, and I'll haul William off to the worst fucking pit I can find--"

Xavier breathes out a heavy sigh, nostrils flaring, "Then I'll interrogate the bartender. Post a guard around this building. I can't haul off your boys, but I can put enough Guardians here that if they try to take someone away, Guardians will die. The Thornton's rights will be revoked, and they'll be treated as an enemy of the state."

"In one move, I can dismantle sixty percent of the damn drug trade in this city, and show the city what you think of the law. Why the -fuck- shouldn't I?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 03:10:04 pm
Urgh. This is what happens when you lie to the nice policeman.

"...William? Bring up the cultist. Can't very well interrogate him ourselves if we're being hauled off to the penitentiary, hm?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 03:14:48 pm
"No." Xavier repeats, "Don't bother unless you can give me a good reason. I'll get the captive one way or the other, Mother Alphira. This is a public building. I can't search it, but two guardians sitting around and relaxing, well, I'm sure that your captive isn't very comfortable. If he leaves to eat or drink or take a shit, my Guardians can take him in as a suspicious individual."

"Hell, if he starts screaming, that's enough cause."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 13, 2020, 03:20:08 pm
Why didn’t we just listen?
Cooperate
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 03:22:54 pm
Cooperate's all well and good, but we're about to lose face and get our crooked compatriots jailed simultaneously. Cooperate doesn't work right now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 13, 2020, 03:25:44 pm
Cooperate's all well and good, but we're about to lose face and get our crooked compatriots jailed simultaneously. Cooperate doesn't work right now.
Som do we kill him?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 03:25:56 pm
"I have information that would be useful to you in your pursuit of corruption.  I will disclose this information to you if you give me another chance, and I will work with you to scour this city clean."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 03:28:47 pm
Speak evenly. "He knows what happened here. He'll tell you what you're after. Do as you will-- but in my capacity as an officer of SEED, I'm giving you the authority to search that cellar, right here, right now. As requested."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 03:40:01 pm
"That isn't a good reason, and there's plenty of evidence of corruption sitting in this room." Xavier explains, shifting his hands to his hips. He frowns.

[10] "You're going to apologize to me and my men for bullshitting us. I'm also going to be looking through the Guardian's Widows and Pension fund, and I better see an anonymous donation from two people in this room. Fifty credits or more. Legal channels."

"And that apology better be damn good, Mother Alphira, because you seriously pissed me off tonight. I expected more from you than this." Xavier takes his seat, scratching at the stubble on his chin, "I hoped I could respect you, but you've acted little better than some random thug on the street."

"After that apology, I'll listen to your captive."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 04:03:37 pm
That's... fair, yeah. This guy's alright.

Sigh, nod. "You'll have your apology. Will you be calling in your men, or am I to go out to them?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 04:30:19 pm
"Thornton lads! Call in my men." Xavier takes a swig of vodka after casually ordering the Warmachines, and William affirms his command. The Guardians filter in-- dropping to their knees in a bow after they see you.

"Get the fuck up." Xavier barks, sharply, and after a hesitant glance between the two of you, they rise to their feet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 05:41:11 pm
Right... this is gonna hurt a bit.  ::)

"Officers-- it seems I've some bitter words to offer you." Briefly explain the situation.

"I thought to set myself above the law. I thought to conceal information from your commanding officer. In so doing, I have disgraced myself before SEED. I have acted as--" smile thin; glance askance-- "what was it you called me, Xavier? A 'random thug'?"

"I apologize for my misconduct this night. I will not disrespect your forces thus in future."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 13, 2020, 05:49:12 pm
Right... this is gonna hurt a bit.  ::)

"Officers-- it seems I've some bitter words to offer you." Briefly explain the situation.

"I thought to set myself above the law. I thought to conceal information from your commanding officer. In so doing, I have disgraced myself before SEED. I have acted as--" smile thin; glance askance-- "what was it you called me, Xavier? A 'random thug'?"

"I apologize for my misconduct this night. I will not disrespect your forces thus in future."

+1 I just hope they don’t send the cult after us, wait, was he part of the cult?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 05:59:29 pm
The cult has already been sent after you, and you're currently interrogating the last remaining captive.

"...good." Xavier relaxes, turning towards his confused squad,  "If I hear -any- of those words leaked to anybody, you all get punished. We clear? Good. Go back to picking up corpses." The squad, more confused than ever, files out. The bartender hauls the cultist out of the beer cellar, and he looks a little worse for the wear, for the ordeal, but still unharmed. The Bartender drops the young man atop the bar rather roughly, but the cultist doesn't complain.

"I would like you to be gentle on him. I gave my word he wouldn't be harmed." You explain to Xavier.

Xavier nods, pulling the young man down into the seat and cutting his bonds. He pushes the glass of water over with a, "Drink, you got a lot of singing to do." And sing the young man does, explaining his name, everything that happened, how he became a part of the cult, so on. His name, as you come to find out, is Jack [X, no surname]. He's the son of a debt-slave stationed in the area.

"You were telling the truth. I'd apologize, only I'm not sorry." Xavier offers your way. "So, we got a powerful cult in the hotbed of sedition in all of SEED. That's like lighting a match next to gunpowder. I don't know where she is, but I can have some of my Guardians start looking for her. DOubt I have the forces to take on two hundred fanatics, though. Military will have to be called in." Xavier gives a significant glance in your direction.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 13, 2020, 06:17:15 pm
“Of course we will help you deal with the cult. It is a danger to everyone, save the [plague] which is an enemy to everyone that isn’t it”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 06:49:32 pm
[-] "Wonderful. Kick some of that military funding my way then." Xavier rises to his feet. "We'll be in touch if I figure anything out. Maybe William can finally rede--" He bursts out laughing, "Sorry, I couldn't even finish that sentence without laughing."

"Keep the captive. Some of my men may have sympathy, and I have better things to do than babysit." He pauses, looking over at you, "Unless you know anything else about the location of these cultists? Or have a better idea?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 13, 2020, 06:52:04 pm
How many credits do we have?
If we have them, give 60 credits to Xavier
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 06:58:50 pm
Let's not blow our pocket change just yet. Still need to pay off that "apology donation" and all.

"I've a couple people I might be able to poke for information... I'll let you know what I find. Other than that, you know as much as I do."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 07:23:57 pm
You think better of bribing him -- he's being legal about these things, after all, and you think such a move would insult him more than help your case.

Xavier grunts, lifting a hand in a goodbye wave as he leaves the ruins of the building. Four Guardians return to haul out the corpses of your two guards, and you're left there in silence.

"So that's the famous Xavier Mack." Emma finally breaks the silence, glancing to William, who nods.

"Why do we have a standing bounty protecting his family again?"

"Do you want that bastard unhinged?"

You slump into a seat, breathing a sigh.

What now?


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 13, 2020, 08:04:25 pm
It was going to be the apology donation
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 13, 2020, 08:25:49 pm
I think we should recover the bodies of our guards for burial and funerals and determine who is now the acting commander of the personal guard.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 13, 2020, 10:40:46 pm
Hm, we had the Pontifex take Xavier off our kill-list-- I'm suddenly wondering if he should've stayed there. Guy could prove real dangerous, especially if he figures out who's behind Iyal's doings...

"That was embarrassing-- I haven't had to swallow my pride so hard since Rodstadt. Will of cast iron, that one's got."

...

Sigh. "Anyway. We'd best get Jack here back to compound, rest for the morning... do you know where you want to set your Warmachines for the night, William?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 13, 2020, 10:53:10 pm
You pass over the credits to Emma, explaining to her that they are the apology donation. She dips a nod, sticking them into her wallet with a, "I'll head to Guardian Central HQ and deposit it there in the morning, Phebe."

"And yeah...that was painful to watch." Emma shakes her head, "And he's not easy to intimidate like the Pontifex...man walks around with no gun for a reason, I guess."

William scowls, tossing a wad of bills over to Emma as well. "SEED, I've paid for more widows and orphans than I've made. I need to get like, a discount or something. Like the commercial ships do -- kill two Guardians, the third is free!" He shakes his head, rising up and pulling a document from his pocket, tossing it over to you. "Here! Happy Birthday."

"Wh-what?" You stutter, confused. "I don't have a--" Its the deed to the bar, one Michael's Public House. The Bartender's eyes go wide, but he doesn't say anything, rubbing at his forehead. You assume he's Michael.

"Damages have already been paid for. Our new friend there is going to make this place Warmachine accessible...as for that, when you recover from this, radio your orders. Emma mentioned something about new recruits and laborers? We haven't got the 'factory' set up yet." William leans over on the bar, snagging one of the intact bottles of vodka, "Didn't you say you were going to get permission to start using SEED supplies?"

"Working on it. Where are you setting your Warmachines, anyways?" You change the topic, still confused about the deed.

"We've got a barracks set up in a warehouse, right next to the smuggler's pad we use. We're setting up our Warmachine factory nearby that. I've been buying up all the property I can find around that section, to give us better control."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 02:47:26 am
"Can you bring my guards' bodies back to the compound?  I don't want to leave them here to rot.  There must be something we can do to improve their survivability..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 09:26:47 am
That's ah, being taken care of already.

Four Guardians return to haul out the corpses of your two guards, and you're left there in silence.

Nod. "Perfect; I'll meet with those recruits early tomorrow, then, and escort them your way. Didn't get exact numbers, but we had a pretty good crowd assembled-- should be enough to get the ball rolling."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 11:13:10 am
"Production will be slow until we start getting more resources in. We're having to rip apart las-guns for the parts." William explains with a shrug. "It's slow going."

"Phebe? Is there anything you want me to do on that front?" Emma asks, idly. "I could start seeing what resources SEED has for production, and what we can divert to the radio towers and Warmachines."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 12:14:09 pm
Grin. "'Phebe'... your brother's rubbing off on you a bit, I think! You two getting along alright these days?"

"That'd be perfect though. If we nationalize this project, really draw from what the City has to offer... we could field these machines in battalions. A force fit to match a horde of [insects], one on one."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 14, 2020, 12:18:54 pm
Most lasguns come in packages sent out by SEED, if we could just grab the raw materials as its produced by SEED it would be more efficent.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 01:32:56 pm
"You're right-- how about I start calling you Phe-Phe instead? Emma retorts flashing a grin and glancing over to William, who rolls his eyes.

"Yeah. A lot of things seem petty when you have eternity in front of you." Emma opines, and William grunts in agreement to both statements.

"That is the plan." William murmurs. "Anything else you need from me, Lady Pheobe, or am I good to go?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 02:24:26 pm
"...A couple guards, maybe, to keep watch at the compound. After tonight, I find I trust Thornton machinery rather more than Crusader infantry for such work."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 14, 2020, 02:25:59 pm
"...A couple guards, maybe, to keep watch at the compound. After tonight, I find I trust Thornton machinery rather more than Crusader infantry for such work."
why de we italicizing? It seems unnecessary to place emphasis on any words in particular
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 02:26:52 pm
"...A couple guards, maybe, to keep watch at the compound. After tonight, I find I trust Thornton machinery rather more than Crusader infantry for such work."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 02:31:16 pm
why de we italicizing? It seems unnecessary to place emphasis on any words in particular

Just my attempt to put to text the vocal inflection natural to such speech. A stylistic choice, nothing more.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 03:19:34 pm
I do take inflection of words into account.


"I'll send a squad. Not these ones, however. They'll need down time." William pauses, "Give them an hour to get here, or a few if you're walking back to the compound first."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 05:01:14 pm
"I think I'd better take shelter here and wait for those guards to arrive. Thanks again, Billy.  You're literally a lifesaver. "
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 05:02:15 pm
Heh, was wondering which is more dangerous: to wait here an hour and risk a followup attack, or to head back without escort and risk an attack that way?

That works tho.

"I think I'd better take shelter here and wait for those guards to arrive. Thanks again, Billy.  You're literally a lifesaver. "

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 05:34:25 pm
[11] "I'll leave these ones here, for now. They'll head back when relieved." William explains, glancing out towards the street through the rubble of the collapsed storefront. "I doubt anyone will try anything, what with Xavier here. He dies and the Guardians..." William grins, explaining after you give him a confused look, "You should've seen it before he rose to power. Nights of blood. After he negotiated with the Families, the arrest rate soared and the number of bodies 'found' dropped. Guardians actually could have families to return to, instead of bloody rooms and rage."

"And yeah, I know it. Call me if you need anything." William flashes a smile, and walks out into the city streets alone, hunching down and slipping his hands into his coat. He passes out of vision without a glance back, and you and Emma wait alone. You and Emma sit, chat, and eat, and the bartender shows you his books. It doesn't make much in terms of profit, especially after his salary. He reckons the bar will make about [+.25 credits] in profit, per month.

Emma's radio emits a small chime, and she lifts it to her ear. She listens intently, quietly, then stows the radio, reporting in a cold monotone, despite the grin, "First target down. Iyal is alive. There wasn't collateral. Two lost on her side, but don't get choked up: investment recovered. Clean getaway."

[15] The Thornton reinforcements arrive, and the captain of that group dips a respectful nod to you and Emma, the only defining feature is the red band across the top of their helmet. The voice is feminine, however, "We're ready when you are." A frightened technician trails behind her, with Mitch's leash in her hand. Mitch doesn't seem to mind, dragging her to the drying puddle of blood to lap at it.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 05:47:25 pm
Our little assassin! I'm so proud.
...she better not get caught.

Grab Mitch, and let's head back to compound. We'll want to see to the burial proceedings of our slain guards once we arrive, and to find out who's taking over as captain.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 05:49:17 pm
Our little assassin! I'm so proud.
...she better not get caught.

Grab Mitch, and let's head back to compound. We'll want to see to the burial proceedings of our slain guards once we arrive, and to find out who's taking over as captain.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 06:04:07 pm
You arrive to your compound before the corpses of your fallen guards, the trip into the Holy City passing uneventfully. The Guardians arrive with them thirty minutes later, and they are stored in the on-site morgue for further processing. They'll both receive the standard burial practices associated with Crusaders; including the duration of their contract being paid to their loved ones. With Sarah Potmend's death, no one is quite sure about who will inherit the position-- its been left up to the Council as headed by SEED, so far, so you are still at his mercy with that.

[-]The morale in your guard unit...is glum, to say the least. Two captains have died in the span of a month. Rumors and superstition will no doubt spread about the position.

[?] The second in command, now acting commander until such a time that the Council convenes and picks another, is one Jennifer Shatterly. You meet in the morgue, and she drops to a bow in front of you. "Mother--" She hesitates, glancing at Emma, "Mother Pheobe. Its an honor to meet you. I'm Jennifer Shatterly, Acting Captain of your personal guard." She glances at the corpse of Sarah, her wound stitched together, a pretty collar of fabric hiding the hole in her neck. "I didn't know Sarah well. She just transferred in, but its a shame to lose someone nonetheless."

Emma's radio chimes and she listens to it. "Earlier reports were wrong, Pheobe. One credit collateral."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 06:18:56 pm
Unfortunate but not unexpected.

"I'd say it's nice to meet you, captain, but under the circumstances I'm afraid that would be a lie.  Do you have any suggestions for improving morale and preventing further deaths in the personal guard?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 06:39:34 pm
"Permission to speak freely, Mother Pheobe?"

"Granted."

[14] "This posting was...was considered baby-sitting duty. A lot of young Crusaders, fresh off the killing fields of whatever Outland war they were in, signed up because they thought no one would have bothered to try and kill you."Jennifer shrugs, picking at the edges of her helmet nervously. "They weren't expecting actual combat. Our faith will hold, as Crusader's faith has held many times before, but..." Once again she shrugs, "I don't think they were ready to go back to war with people so soon."

Jennifer sighs, "In my honest opinion? Replace them all with those more willing to accept a las-blast death. There's no shortage of vetrans itching to get off the front. To them, a las-blast in the neck is better than a scratch that turns you into a man-eating monster in your tent camp."

[20] With a glance toward's Sarah's corpse, she continues, "We're prettily heavily armored, for our posting, but I've been hearing word of even heavier armor being developed. Not Thornton cybernetics, but bulkier gear, designed for riots and the like. If you're in charge of SEED's military, you could try that." Without a trace of humor or irony, she continues, "It apparently comes with armored gorgets. Heavier assault rifles, maybe even specialized soldiers in squads."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 06:53:23 pm
"Thank you.  Emma, could you please see to replacing the personal guard's gear with the sort of riot equipment that the captain is describing?  I think we need our veterans on the front right now, considering the dire situation, but I will see if that is something we could look into when things improve."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 07:24:56 pm
"I can try, but I doubt I'll be successful until after the convention." Emma dips a nod to Jennifer, who rises to her feet and makes to leave you, providing you have no further orders.

What now? And what are your plans for tomorrow?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 07:41:37 pm
Nod. "We can worry about that later, then."
To Jennifer: "Dismissed. Thank you."

Rest up as best we may. See to it that Emma does the same-- take shifts with the radio, if we feel the need. Tomorrow morning, we make one last check-in with Iyal... then, if the news on that front proves acceptable, we call in the generals.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 07:42:17 pm
Nod. "We can worry about that later, then."
To Jennifer: "Dismissed. Thank you."

Rest up as best we may. See to it that Emma does the same-- take shifts with the radio, if we feel the need. Tomorrow morning, we make one last check-in with Iyal... then, if the news on that front prove acceptable, we call in the generals.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 14, 2020, 08:04:40 pm
Nod. "We can worry about that later, then."
To Jennifer: "Dismissed. Thank you."

Rest up as best we may. See to it that Emma does the same-- take shifts with the radio, if we feel the need. Tomorrow morning, we make one last check-in with Iyal... then, if the news on that front prove acceptable, we call in the generals.

+1
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She mentioned da q credit callateral, we should probably pay for the fixing of whatever was broken
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 08:09:22 pm
The four-hour shift of sleep passes uneventfully for both of you. Emma is still acclimating to her lack of sleep, so you take the first, and her the second-- and you're awakened from your slumber by both a lovely tray of food and a newspaper.

You glance at the headline and Emma's smirking face. "We've got a two for one deal." She explains, passing you a napkin and stealing a piece of dried apple from your bowl. You glance down at the newspaper while you eat -- 'Crusader Officers killed: Suspected Gang Involvement.'

...Monica Colgan, General Hardy's assistant and presumed heir and George Montblanc, a petty officer with family ties to the Montblanc Business Family, were found dead early this morning, in front of a well-known gang's, The Slum Barkers, hideout. Both were suspected killed in a retaliatory strike by another gang. No arrests have been made as of yet, but questions persist about what Crusader Officers were doing there...

...one incident in a series of violent events that ripped through the suburbs...

...General Hardy could not be reached for comment...


"Iyal is sleeping-- her definition of fine is similar to ours. I had to wrest the fact that she got shot in the arm from her." Emma leans into you, breathing out a sigh. "We got to get to work. I'll take a few Warmachines with me while doing my duties, and you have to go and escort those Crusader Veterans to William."

She leans in for a kiss, and her perfume is almost too pleasant-- it smells of mountain flowers and a slight smokiness. Emma winks, rising up and leaving you with your breakfast. "I told the captain of the Warmachine Squad to function as your radio operator." Emma calls as she leaves.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 08:17:34 pm
Nice, Iyal managed to frame things as an unrelated gang killing. That one knows what she's about... shame about her arm. We'd best let her rest up.

Anyhoo, we'd best be off to that meeting point of ours. I'd forgotten about escort duty!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 14, 2020, 08:20:07 pm
Nice, Iyal managed to frame things as an unrelated gang killing. That one knows what she's about... shame about her arm. We'd best let her rest up.

Anyhoo, we'd best be off to that meeting point of ours. I'd forgotten about escort duty!
meeting time, +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 08:31:48 pm
You shower and change into an identical uniform, then pause as you linger by Lucille. Are you wearing your armor, today?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 08:33:46 pm
Hmm.  Is there any reason not to?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 14, 2020, 08:40:30 pm
You shower and change into an identical uniform, then pause as you linger by Lucille. Are you wearing your armor, today?
Yes, wear the armor

Hmm.  Is there any reason not to?
nope
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 08:40:41 pm
You shower and change into an identical uniform, then pause as you linger by Lucille. Are you wearing your armor, today?
Yes, wear the armor

Hmm.  Is there any reason not to?
nope
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 08:44:28 pm
Hmm.  Is there any reason not to?

Not... not to my knowledge? It could've gone rogue overnight, I guess. Or someone could've trapped it somehow. Lots of weird stuff out there we could worry about.

Yes, wear the armor
+1

+1

Start with the gauntlet, don the rest if Lucille doesn't start screaming at us or something.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 08:57:00 pm
...lol

You shuck your uniform and put on your underlay, slipping into the rough fabric and plastic outfit. Next you put on the harder pieces of armor first, then the more easy one. With every piece securely strapped to your person, you attempt to manipulate the silicon bonds within the tip of the glove--

And they don't work. You sigh, trying again, and this time, the needles come out, piercing your flesh down to the bone. The pain, at this point, is a welcome reminder that you're human. [Good Morning, Sadil.]

[16]You do know you can adjust what she calls you, her name and all those other preferences, right? Like, she's fully customizable.

[5]You think it over as you walk out of your compound, three Guards and four Warmachines at your back as you approach the square...and there's no one there. Only a figure, hunched against a post. It's still alive, you note, but you hesitate to approach. No need to worry, however, because it rises, shucking off her hood to smile and bow at you. Its a thin blond, with a scarred face, missing an arm. "It was al little dangerous to gather, we figure, so I was going to wait until you arrived."

Whitney Carter, you remember Emma briefing you, takes another bow, and begins to rouse the people from their homes, and soon the street is crowded with the crippled soldiers. Many of them bow, and all seem to be in better spirits-- far more sober, too!

Anything to say or would you like to proceed?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 09:00:48 pm
[Lucile, what preferences are available for customization at this time?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 14, 2020, 09:05:19 pm
[Mark 15 Armor Interface AI name, gender, attraction to the user, user name, form of address, helpful hints based on armor's situational awareness, commanding officer proximity alert, time display preference, HUD color, HUD size, external plate color, design of external plates...]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 09:11:36 pm
...attraction to the user?  Empyreals have strange priorities.

[Disable attraction to the user.  Enable all helpful hints.  Enable commanding officer proximity alert.  Set username to 'Phoebe.']
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 14, 2020, 09:35:35 pm
...attraction to the user?  Empyreals have strange priorities.

It gets lonely I guess, drifting about the void between worlds.



I've been meaning to ask: it's been over 48 hours now since we first discovered Bird of Sol's Reign, yes?

Aw nice, we can turn off the creepy-lover voice? This changes... so much.

[Disable attraction to the user.  Enable all helpful hints.  Enable commanding officer proximity alert.  Set username to 'Phoebe.']

+1

Is it just me, or is McCreary's dust fading from our bloodstream? We're forgetting how to work the silicon...

Smile. "Whitney Carter, yes? Thank you for arranging this."
To the group now: "Good morning-- I am honored to have you all here! Let us march now with pride: we, who bear the future of this world."

Off we go!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 14, 2020, 09:53:07 pm
...attraction to the user?  Empyreals have strange priorities.

It gets lonely I guess, drifting about the void between worlds.



I've been meaning to ask: it's been over 48 hours now since we first discovered Bird of Sol's Reign, yes?

Aw nice, we can turn off the creepy-lover voice? This changes... so much.

[Disable attraction to the user.  Enable all helpful hints.  Enable commanding officer proximity alert.  Set username to 'Phoebe.']

+1

Is it just me, or is McCreary's dust fading from our bloodstream? We're forgetting how to work the silicon...

Smile. "Whitney Carter, yes? Thank you for arranging this."
To the group now: "Good morning-- I am honored to have you all here! Let us march now with pride: we, who bear the future of this world."

Off we go!

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 15, 2020, 08:25:59 am
...attraction to the user?  Empyreals have strange priorities.

It gets lonely I guess, drifting about the void between worlds.



I've been meaning to ask: it's been over 48 hours now since we first discovered Bird of Sol's Reign, yes?

Aw nice, we can turn off the creepy-lover voice? This changes... so much.

[Disable attraction to the user.  Enable all helpful hints.  Enable commanding officer proximity alert.  Set username to 'Phoebe.']

+1

Is it just me, or is McCreary's dust fading from our bloodstream? We're forgetting how to work the silicon...

Smile. "Whitney Carter, yes? Thank you for arranging this."
To the group now: "Good morning-- I am honored to have you all here! Let us march now with pride: we, who bear the future of this world."

Off we go!

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 15, 2020, 02:41:48 pm
[Preferences accepted, Pheobe.] Lucille chimes helpfully, sounding monotone, but still polite and chipper. Less pleasure droid and far more office assistant. [Currently, you are surrounded by forty-eight individuals, who have rapid heart rates and higher blood pressure; this corresponds with non-threatening excitement levels in Terran Standard Humans.]

Have you've been training with it? Alphira retorts, Or have you've been laying in bed for two months while other people work around you?

"It's my honor Mother Alphira. I apologize for the wait." Whitney nods as the last person falls into the crowd. You lead them down the cobbled streets of the suburbs, approaching the Thornton District. A Warmachine halts your approach, asking you to wait in the plaza before the cargo ship. So you patiently do.

William is roused, stretching out and stifling a yawn, a red greatcoat haphazardly slung over his shoulder. His uniform, besides that, you note, after a brief inspection, is in perfect order. Down to the millimeter, as SEED military requires. He sniffs, looking over the group with something approaching disinterest.

"I was told you were soldiers. All I see is a mob! Form up for inspection!" William barks, dropping the playboy persona. The Veterans blink, rapidly forming up into a honed military line. William walks down in silence, prowling like a beast of prey. With a nod. "Acceptable. Now listen closely."

"You are going to be outfitted like this fine gentleman here!" He gestures to a bare-chested Warmachine, who's massive cybernetic limbs are displayed in all their glory, including the metallic spine implants. "This process is not reversible! Due to the war," He peels off a glove, revealing his metallic hand, "Attachments like these will not be available! So help us win this damn fight, and I'll see to it you get a ninety percent discount to buying these. Damn generous, for something so normally expensive. Save your pay if you want a normal life after all this shit, right?"

The Veterans dip their heads in a nod. Five, however, take one look at the Warmachine, glancing at you, and leave. William watches them go without a word, turning to the rest. "Next order! The surgery is painful and -long-. You may die, and if you don't die, then you might suffer from infections and other nastiness. SEED's release is available as an option if these complications result! You will sign a contract stating that you are doing this of your own free will!"

"If you think it gets easier from there, your wrong! This is a military operation, and I expect you to be better than you were with the Crusaders; Drunkenness, dereliction of duty-- these will not be tolerated! Debt-slavery is going to be a preferable option to the things we'll do to you if you screw up here." Thirteen more glances to William, and then back to the Warmachine, and they slowly step away.

"We'll be going into combat with all manners of Infected, along with any enemies of the state as deemed by Lady Alphira. This armor helps with protecting you from the worst of it-- your limbs can be easily detached, without harming you, and we can replace them, but torso wounds will still result in SEED's release!"

No one else leaves. Leaving you with-- [thirty individuals], including Whitney Carter.

"Good. Captain Remial will guide you into proper orientation and get your paperwork squared away. Dismissed!"

They file away behind a red-striped Warmachine, and William slumps, approaching you. "I expected more to leave, Phebe. We really need that funding, especially if we're to pay these people anything to live on."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 02:51:24 pm
It looks like the cohesion was fixed. 

"I will make sure that you receive it.  What amount of credits do you need over what period of time?  Alternatively, would raw materiel suffice?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 15, 2020, 02:53:51 pm
It looks like the cohesion was fixed. 

"I will make sure that you receive it.  What amount of credits do you need over what period of time?  Alternatively, would raw material suffice?"
People get paid in credits, not raw materials
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 02:55:49 pm
Well, they said they have to break down las-guns at the moment to get the material they need to make prosthetics, so providing them with raw material might be helpful so that they don't have to do that.

The material can be sold on the market to produce extra credits.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 15, 2020, 03:00:49 pm
Oh yeah

It looks like the cohesion was fixed. 

"I will make sure that you receive it.  What amount of credits do you need over what period of time?  Alternatively, would raw materiel suffice?"
+1
Usually when I hear “Asking for A, will B suffice?” I think it’s “Will B suffice in lieu of A”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 03:03:01 pm
That's what I meant, they or we could sell material to produce credits instead of just providing the actual credits, or we could potentially provide both.  Sorry for not being clear.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 15, 2020, 03:07:00 pm
That's what I meant, they or we could sell material to produce credits instead of just providing the actual credits, or we could potentially provide both.  Sorry for not being clear.
it’s ok, let’s try for both credits and materials when contacting SEED
Have we attempted nationalization of production yet? If not, let’s attempt that
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 03:08:26 pm
Agreed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 15, 2020, 03:09:39 pm
I’m going to edit my post to space a question mark from the beginning of a new sentence and replace a ; with a ‘
Mistakes addressed
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 15, 2020, 03:44:51 pm
Yeah, I didn't realize I took five percent out from the night before-- I thought I started you fresh. Apologies.


"Going to be honest with you, now, Pheobe, I was hoping for as much as possible, so I could skim some off the top to refill the Thornton Treasury." William admits, grinning, "I'll send a craft to pick up some accountants, but if we're talking about budgets -- how long do you want us to operate? Are we a war-time emergency or are we a business you want in perpetuity?"

"Current operations, off the top of my head, are costing the Thornton Family...two hundred credits a month, for four Warmachines to be produced, per month. That's including their pay and pension and board."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 03:52:45 pm
I'm not sure...

"I think we should limit production to wartime, or at least we should plan to do so for the moment.  If there's a good reason to prolong production, and if we're not all dead, we can discuss this further after the war ends."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 15, 2020, 04:03:54 pm
"Then give us as much money and support as you can." William responds, with a small nod. "Anything we don't use on Warmachines we'll use to assemble more factories." He pauses, "Going to be a pain to demilitarize that, though, after."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 04:06:15 pm
"Perhaps we can put those factories and personnel to better use when this conflict is finished, so that many of your assets can be profitably retained.  For now, I will ensure that you receive as much funding as possible."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 15, 2020, 04:07:33 pm
"Perhaps we can put those factories and personnel to better use when this conflict is finished, so that many of your assets can be profitably retained.  For now, I will ensure that you receive as much funding as possible."
After saying this, contact SEED about the funding
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 15, 2020, 05:08:34 pm
SEED's given us full control over military resources already-- we should be able to just order funding moved. Emma's working on that now, I think.

"Perhaps we can put those factories and personnel to better use when this conflict is finished, so that many of your assets can be profitably retained.  For now, I will ensure that you receive as much funding as possible."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 15, 2020, 06:10:48 pm
"Wonderful. We're still able to produce four per month, at the current rate. Not much help right now, of course, but," William shrugs, "Human bodies are pretty fragile."

"Anything else you might need, Pheobe?"

"Lady-- Pheobe?" The Warmachine Captain glances between you and William, then at the guards. "May I speak to you in private?"

You nod your assent, stepping away from the Crusader Guards. The Captain pulls off her helmet, leaning down to murmur in your ear, "Outlander has informed me that Lauren Lee has met in an untimely end while investigating a gang within the suburbs. An anonymous tip gone wrong, I'm afraid. She was alone."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 06:27:35 pm
To William: "Nothing else, William.  Thank you for your support."

To the captain: "Thank you for letting me know.  I don't think we've been formally introduced yet, by the way."

Meeting time, I think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 15, 2020, 06:32:34 pm
To William: "Nothing else, William.  Thank you for your support."

To the captain: "Thank you for letting me know.  I don't think we've been formally introduced yet, by the way."

Meeting time, I think.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 15, 2020, 06:57:36 pm
"Faith Miles Thornton, Lady Pheobe. You landed in my village after," She gestures towards your back, "That."

You thought you recognized her, with her long, curly brown hair and the angular face. "I am acting Captain of the Third Thorton Warmachine Squad, and Defender of Miles Village." She straightens, slipping her helmet back on, voice stiff. "That was all, Lady Pheobe?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 07:14:14 pm
"Can you please contact Emma and ask her if she is available to convene the generals and attend the meeting?"

We still haven't dealt with the special ops person, but otherwise I think we're where we want to be for the meeting.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 15, 2020, 08:04:13 pm
"SEED has to, I think, Pheobe." Is Emma's polite radio response, "And it won't happen today...plus there's a lot of specifics you have to go over. Where to have it, if you're providing food and drinks, are our Warmachines going to be openly guarding. Describe how you want it, and I'll submit the form to SEED...unless you literally just want to meet with the Generals."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 08:09:24 pm
Here's my proposal for that:

"The meeting should be held in a Thornton-owned building, or an open and defensible Church-owned building if they object, with around 30 warmachines openly guarding, if we can spare them.  Do provide food and drink, and prepare an optional meal we can present to the attendees later, if necessary, with an appropriately odorless and tasteless poison, if possible.  Obviously, don't mention the poison to SEED."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 15, 2020, 08:11:35 pm
Here's my proposal for that:

"The meeting should be held in a Thornton-owned building, or an open and defensible Church-owned building if they object, with around 30 warmachines openly guarding, if we can spare them.  Do provide food and drink, and prepare an optional meal we can present to the attendees later, if necessary."
this is proposal to tell SEED, let’s not ask for a poison
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 08:14:12 pm
I think it was clear but unsaid that Emma shouldn't mention that part to SEED, but I will edit my suggestion to clarify that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 15, 2020, 08:46:34 pm
"'You do actually want them to show up, right? I think it would be less suspicious if you invited them all to a dark alley.''" The Captain relays back to you, word for word.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 08:48:24 pm
"Fair enough.  A Church-owned building is fine, with maybe 4 warmachines guarding the participants.  Provide suitable food and drink, without any poison."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 15, 2020, 08:50:08 pm
"Who are we inviting?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 08:52:52 pm
"Invite the Crusader General and his immediate subordinates that are responsible for dictating strategy and tactics.  Do you think there are any other individuals that we should invite?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 15, 2020, 08:57:59 pm
Does everyone agree with this plan or have any additions?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 15, 2020, 09:04:36 pm
Ayup-- let's do this thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 15, 2020, 11:38:18 pm
One other thing: if possible, it might be nice to have at least one lower officer from the front in the meeting, so that they can attest to the situation there.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 01:17:13 am
"I'll need to invite more than one. I'll go and get SEED to approve a summons for the generals. I'll let you know how many days out it will be. Expect at least one to two, to organize it all." Emma responds, through the medium that is the Captain, who recites her words in a dull monotone.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 01:22:13 am
"Thanks, Emma.  No further communication is necessary at this time, Captain Thornton."

Go eat and try to requisition either nutrient cubes or some other calorie-dense portable food.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 16, 2020, 07:38:37 am
"Thanks, Emma.  No further communication is necessary at this time, Captain Thornton."

Go eat and try to requisition either nutrient cubes or some other calorie-dense portable food.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 12:28:13 pm
You drop by your public house, stepping in through the rubble to find Michael speaking with a construction foreman. He nods to you as you take a seat, finishing his conversation before drifting into the back. He emerges with a bowl of fried potatoes, smothered in gravy and cheese, setting it down in front of you. You eat quickly and quietly, drinking the provided, very diluted vodka. He takes away your dishes when you finish and gives you a silent nod.

You wander through the town at a leisurely pace, returning to your compound. After a brief discussion with a guard, you are taken to a small room being used as a warehouse. On it is a pack of silver foil wrapped nutrient cubes. You take ten, shoving them away in your satchel.

"Two days." Faith states, out of the blue. "It will take Emma two days, but she'll let you know when and where when she gets back tonight.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 16, 2020, 12:35:06 pm
We should train Earth Manipulation and Inferno with Lucile
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 01:50:06 pm
[19] Live combat is better for training. Why don't we go to the front to 'train'? It's close enough, I would suspect.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 02:02:44 pm
Let's do it.
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 16, 2020, 02:11:27 pm
Let's do it.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 04:19:15 pm
...How would you like to do it? Take a hovercraft with troops or fly there yourself?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 04:34:10 pm
Take a hovercraft with troops.  We can use the craft to evacuate wounded if needed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 07:04:07 pm
[13] "Emma says to leave some guards back for her, please." The Captain reports, idly, "I'll start setting up a squad of Thornton Warmachines and some ships to carry them into the fray. We'll need some time, though to get it organized." She begins to speak into her radio, stepping away from you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 07:06:18 pm
"Thanks."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 07:08:56 pm
"William says we'll be ready to fly tomorrow." The Captain finally reveals, dipping you a nod as she returns from her conversation. "Without it hindering our continued operation."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 07:10:56 pm
It will be nice to see the actual conditions on the front for ourselves, even if we can only stay there for a day or so.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 09:20:11 pm
You exercise until Emma returns home. She yawns as she approaches, flopping on to you in an extreme display of exhaustion. After a brief kiss, the two of you get dinner in the compound cafeteria. "Three days, at a church in the Inner City. I also got you this-- don't open it all the way."

[SEED's Orders for the Execution of Crusader General Hardy]. You browse through the file, shocked and surprised-- apparently SEED really doesn't like being lied to. You hand it back to Emma, who grins at your reaction. "I get you the best gifts, don't I?"

You return the smile over your [beast of burden] stew, picking at the tender braised meat and winter vegetables, stewed in red wine and heaped over freshly cooked grainmeal. There's a touch too much salt for your liking, but its filling, and tastes slightly of smokey pine resin. You drain your glass of wine, setting it on the dish table in the cafeteria. You and Emma retire to your bedroom--

You awaken in the morning to Emma tossing your underlay at you. "Hey, come on sleepy head. You got a hovercraft to catch." You grumble, rising to shower, letting the warm water wash over your skin. You feel hesitant, concerned, but duty calls, and you dress. Emma, in a state of undress, helps you put your armor on, planting a kiss on your cheek before slipping your helmet on. "You better be careful, Phe-Phe."



You step into the hovercraft as it lifts off. The door shuts behind you and you take a seat across from the Warmachine Captain. "We're going to touch down a bit away from the front and march to it. You didn't specify what part of the front, so we're going to the closest section. We'll touch down there at the command station, march to the front. It'll probably take us about an hour after we land." You nod. "We've got a full squad here-- we couldn't take the bigger ship, though, and we still have to defend Emma and William."

An hour of peace follows, as you lounge in the smooth flying vehicle. It comes down to land in the center of the Command Camp for Region Three. Immediately, the sounds of artillery fill your ears, and you turn to the west as you step out of the craft, watching as fire blooms across a sinking quagmire of a wasteland. Las-blasts fill the air, visible in the fog and smoke that drift across the plains. You can see abominations in the distance, Insects supporting them, along with many more twisted forms you've never seen before -- but they're definitely less than an hour away. Wounded missing limbs are streaming from the front, cradling burnt stumps.

[20] An officer goes shock still when he sees you, dropping to his knees. "Lady Alphira. Our prayers are answered!" He begins to weep -- in relief when the squad of Warmachines form up on you. "Crusader Major Eric is holding the front while we retreat, we need all th-"

[1] An explosion wipes away a tent, nearby, and the officer is knocked over by the concussion as you and the Warmachines brace yourself against the blast...Bodies lie in the wreckage-- and the officer has a large chunk of metal sticking out of him that was not there before.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 09:29:03 pm
Amplify our voice.  "MEDICS!  I need medics over here!"

Try to stabilize the officer and the nearby men and women.  Inject the hopeless with sleeping medicine to ease their passing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 09:35:18 pm
They glance your way, hesitating in the middle of stabilizing bleeding and injured, but they continue to pull the wounded away from the incoming mortar fire. They return to their task, ignoring those that are definitely dying in favor of saving who they can.

[10 vs 12] You're not going to have enough medicine-- you duck down as another shell from the Infected line whizzes overhead, exploding into the field behind you haphazardly. Another Infected shell blows away another tent in a sudden explosion of flame, wiping it away as you hesitate-- Crusaders scream as they die, choking on their blood. The Hovercrafts suddenly lift-off, your captain kneeling in to scream as the Warmachines hit the deck, "They cannot stay, otherwise we don't have a ride back! We need to do something Lady Pheobe! We're not fucking medics!" All around you the shells continue to rain down, as the Infected bombard the command center. The artillery in the distance gives retort in kind, flaming shells blowing through the enemy lines.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 09:37:27 pm
Wow... it's even worse than I thought it would be.  What can we do about this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 16, 2020, 09:51:41 pm
Uhh yeah. Bad.

Er, what's it take to recharge our shield belt?
Loud voice still: "Fall back. We'll figure out how to approach this mess once we're out of the line of fire."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 09:55:06 pm
Uhh yeah. Bad.

Er, what's it take to recharge our shield belt?
Loud voice still: "Fall back. We'll figure out how to approach this mess once we're out of the line of fire."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 10:04:39 pm
My apologies. I'm an idiot. I will double-check those from now on. A twenty four hour period per one point of recharge.


[16 vs 16] The Warmachines begin to pull back, never completely turning their back to the front. They wrap you in a protective circle of bodies. A shell explodes nearby as you make your way out of the artillery strike, but the metal fragments bounce off the Thorton's armor. Eventually, you can tell that the shells are definitely landing behind you within the camp, as the Medics have set up a triage station a little further east. A few more make it out of the ruined camp behind you, pulling along the injured-- sometimes pulling along the dead as well.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 10:06:29 pm
The enemy's artillery is devastating.  Is there some way we can counteract that?

Would it be possible to fly above the range of the shells and get clear shots at the enemy artillery without extreme personal danger?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 11:10:10 pm
[20] Judging by the angles of the shells and their similarity to Crusader Artillery pieces, you believe that they would not be able to reach you at your average flying height. Not without them dropping shells on their own lines. However, as the infection does not value the individual lives of its soldiers, no doubt it would not hesitate if it calculated that such a tactic would increase its chances of success on this battlefield.

Unfortunately, nothing in battle is without extreme personal danger.
You shake your head, snapping out of your brief reverie -- you could almost see the firing lines, how to avoid all off the artillery fire that might be angled upward towards you at a moment's notice. The small arms fire is the real danger, especially with how flashy our wings are.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 16, 2020, 11:12:50 pm
"All Warmachines accounted for?"
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Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 11:16:42 pm
"I have minor damage to left side, Lady Alphira." One Warmachine dully reports, not sounding concerned. "It didn't penetrate armor." The other eight report similar conditions, sounding off one by one in muffled, stoic voices.

"What's the plan?" The Captain asks, squinting into the middle distance, where the lines of combatants meet in a bloody exchange of las-gun blasts and cutter blades.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 11:18:44 pm
Hmm.  The beetle wings would be much less flashy.

Is it a cloudy day?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 16, 2020, 11:21:04 pm
If we're doing a flyover, we need to have a real good plan as to what we're gonna do from up there. Are we scouting? Hurling fire? (Can we even hurl fire that far in first place?) If we're taking this risk, it needs to be a worthwhile risk.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 11:22:11 pm
Horrible fires in the distance drift ash into the sky. The Artillery strikes knock dust and dirt into the air with every explosion. Smoke billows into the sky from a hundred little fires that burn across the lines, all culminating in a horribly unnatural overcast to the sky, blocking out what would be a warm day and making the cold wind that blows all the worse.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 11:23:50 pm
True.  Even if we just distract the plague and force it to fire upon its own soldiers rather than our soldiers, that would be helpful by itself.  We may be able to shroud ouself in the dense smoke.

Could we hit targets from our regular flying distance?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2020, 11:40:10 pm
[16] You blink, stretching out your willpower into the sky above, trying to get a feel for how far away you can actually reach. About [10 meters or 32 feet] in total, perfect distance to be shot by rifle fire, harder to be hit by artillery. The Warmachines fidget as another round of artillery strikes level more of the camp. You're safely out of reach, you note, glancing down only briefly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2020, 11:43:01 pm
Maybe we could dive and attack and then retreat back into the clouds?  Quick hit and run tactics on the artillery so that they don't have the time to respond to us effectively.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 17, 2020, 12:06:05 am
Yeah... I can maybe see that working out. Where do we put our mercenaries tho?

On the one hand, I'd feel silly shunting them to the sidelines. On the other... things could go sideways fast out there, and I feel like William would be rightly upset if we spent Thornton life on what was (originally) a spur-of-the-moment excursion. Gotta be careful about this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 17, 2020, 12:10:40 am
Huh, I'm not sure.  They could keep pulling survivors out of the camp, but that puts them into danger.  If we distract the artillery with our attacks, maybe they'll have a window of opportunity to enact an organized retreat and save survivors.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 17, 2020, 01:05:25 am
I've the beginnings of a coherent plan, based on the stuff we've been hashing out... gonna sleep on it. Should hopefully have tomorrow a better idea of how we're doing this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 17, 2020, 01:16:54 am
Sounds good.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 17, 2020, 07:52:52 am
Well this whole place seem worse off than it sounded like it was.

As for a plan I have no idea.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 17, 2020, 11:01:35 am
Remember this?

"So all the lights in the sky are our enemies now? Let's show them what we can do! We'll wring them from existence!"

And you do, lashing out with your powers into the guns, into the weapons, into the targeting mainframe. The light blinds those who cannot see your glory as you unfurl lashing wings of fire to sweep through those specks of light that dare approach. You burn through the void, a raging inferno of hydrogen fire and electrical storms that threatens to devour anything that approaches.


"Good job, Alphira."

We don't have our predecessor's equipment, but perhaps we can draw inspiration from the way she fought. We hurtle through the ranks of the enemy in a rolling Inferno: lashing out as we plunge, obscuring our position with the fire that surrounds us. In and out, up and down. Maybe we take out a few reactors with Overloads while we're at it.

For now...

"...This fight's bigger than us. We're almost certainly going to lose ground here today-- our job now's to minimize the lives lost in the retreat."

Unfurl our wings-- raw fire, so's not to strain our flesh overmuch. "I'm going to try and draw away some of that artillery fire, maybe wreck a few bugs while I'm at it. You nine will be covering the troops as they pull out: keep the retreat from becoming a rout; gun down any foe that gets too close. Watch for artillery. Exercise your better judgement. Fall back if you must. Your own lives take priority."

"Any objections?"
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 17, 2020, 11:03:53 am
Remember this?

"So all the lights in the sky are our enemies now? Let's show them what we can do! We'll wring them from existence!"

And you do, lashing out with your powers into the guns, into the weapons, into the targeting mainframe. The light blinds those who cannot see your glory as you unfurl lashing wings of fire to sweep through those specks of light that dare approach. You burn through the void, a raging inferno of hydrogen fire and electrical storms that threatens to devour anything that approaches.


"Good job, Alphira."

We don't have our predecessor's equipment, but perhaps we can draw inspiration from the way she fought. We hurtle through the ranks of the enemy in a rolling Inferno: lashing out as we plunge, obscuring our position with the fire that surrounds us. In and out, up and down. Maybe we take out a few reactors with Overloads while we're at it.

For now...

"...This fight's bigger than us. We're almost certainly going to lose ground here today-- our job now's to minimize the lives lost in the retreat."

Unfurl our wings-- raw fire, so's not to strain our flesh overmuch. "I'm going to try and draw away some of that artillery fire, maybe wreck a few bugs while I'm at it. You nine will be covering the troops as they pull out: keep the retreat from becoming a rout; gun down any foe that gets too close. Watch for artillery. Exercise your better judgement. Fall back if you must. Your own lives take priority."

"Any objections?"

No objections, Let's do the things we are talking about doing
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 17, 2020, 11:05:35 am
Momentarily! Just hearing from the mercenaries first.
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Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 17, 2020, 11:07:25 am
Momentarily! Just hearing from the mercenaries first.
The more we wait, the more damage is done
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 17, 2020, 12:14:19 pm
Doesn't have to be a long wait-- just a pause, so's somebody can tell us "no wait that's stupid" if need be.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 17, 2020, 12:19:44 pm
[16] The Captain takes a look around the Command Post, then, bluntly, "I don't know much about military strategy like this-- but if this post falls, won't it take the line with it? Is that not why they are holding the line?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 17, 2020, 12:42:38 pm
Doesn't have to be a long wait-- just a pause, so's somebody can tell us "no wait that's stupid" if need be.
oh right. Makes sense
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 17, 2020, 01:34:59 pm
Hmm.  Why did the officer say that Eric is holding the front while they retreat if they can't retreat without losing the line?  I don't really understand what the situation is, though admittedly fighting isn't my strong suit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 17, 2020, 03:17:43 pm
I see two possibilities here.

1: The officer that spoke to us-- his squadron was in tatters, and in the process of retreating while Eric's forces took up the position it vacated. A changing of the guard.

2: ...the Line is crumbling, and Eric is buying time for his fellow Crusaders to escape. This has, after all, been a losing war.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 17, 2020, 03:20:38 pm
We really need to preserve the line if we want our changes to be helpful.  Engage beetle wings and helmet with air filtration, fly and hide in the clouds/smoke, and go to the enemy's artillery while hidden to see what the situation is.  For the line to hold, the artillery must be dealt with.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 17, 2020, 04:30:07 pm
[12 vs 20] "Lady Alphira." The Captain begins as they move forward into the tattered remains of the camp, "Thorton war doctrine is simple-- unrestrained aggression. I am disobeying your orders. You may demote me after this battle if you see fit." Without another word, the Warmachines stride forth.

[4][17] Stunned, you have difficulty directing your wings to unfurl from your back. There's a moment where you consider shaping them into their vaguely insectoid appearance, but you reconsider based on the situation. It sounds like a good way to draw friendly fire.

[Affirmative. Would you like me to connect to your ally's radio signals?]

A mask of gold and black seals your face, and you remind yourself to check and see what it looks like when you're finished with this. The air quality changes become filtered and stale. You ignore all the heartbeats around you, focusing on the line in the distance. A small radar pops up, showing you the Warmachine's advance towards the encroaching front.

[18] You exhale a sigh of annoyance and let yourself rise into the air. The camp fades beneath your feet, and you hear the Crusaders cry out in happiness. You rise above, into the smoke and the cloud, trying to get a fix on the location of the artillery. Having analyzed the firing lines, you know that they are behind a hill, across the battered and exploding no man's land. Looking down, the Warmachines are laying down heavy suppressing fire while approaching the Crusader Lines, blowing away the opposition. Las-pulse plinks harmlessly off their armor.

[20][20] You breathe out a sigh, staring at the line, where the Crusaders are dying, then glancing at the hill-line hiding the artillery. Fire begins to lick at your hands, and you begin to feel a rage rise up within you. It's too familiar. Too much of a reminder of your childhood for you to let it go without a response. Rage, anger, frustration, it all turns into willpower, exploding outward--

From below, you're sure, the sudden firestorm that burns in the air must look like a miracle-- and you're quite proud of it. seven shining wings of super hot fire rip across the sky, easily [ten meters] from tip to tip, and around them burns a roaring firestorm of crackling hydrogen and energy. You're surprised at how easy it is--

This is what we were made for.

[16] The battle ceases below, as the Infected and Crusader alike halt their attack. You can feel their beady black eyes upon you, and the Crusaders are quick to open fire once more, reinvigorated, no doubt, by the intense heat that burns away the cold winds... you consider your next move, shifting to one side or another to avoid the sporadic las-fire. Maybe you should just give in to this rage and frustration you feel.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 17, 2020, 04:45:37 pm
Fly towards the artillery, give in and let’s destroy it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 17, 2020, 05:04:11 pm
Ohh yes.

[Do so.]

Rage? Frustration? Fulfillment. Joy. This is our world, our war, our time for glory-- burn bright now, young godling, and let us revel in the force of our will made manifest!

Partake with us, honored mentor!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 17, 2020, 05:54:13 pm
Embrace rage.  Destroy the artillery.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 17, 2020, 06:43:54 pm
You take a steadying breath, controlling your emotions as you come to approach the Infected Artillery. They twist your stomach when you see them. Silvery, metallic bones hold together collapsing barrels, with sinuous pulsating flesh filling in where the bone cannot reach. Bodies are twisted near where a control panel would be, with far too many eyes. Some are twisted purely to load shells into the abomination, and the machine slowly turns on long insectoid legs.

[7+2 vs 11] Shots crack into your shield as you go behind enemy lines, you ignore them. You take hold of your emotions, hovering above the Infected Artillery Line, as the cannons twist to face you, recognizing you as the greater threat. You twist your halo of fire forward, exploding a cannon shell in the air, overheating it in an instant.

Like a conductor, tying your halo to your hands, you twist it down into a straight line of cracking plasma. The ground steams up fresh water, only feeding the burning reaction with more hydrogen as you use it to scour the Infected from the valley. They burn blue, green, and red, screaming comprehensively. Artillery shells explode as they overheat, causing more damage. Cannon barrels fall to the ground as the Infected muscle holding them together is purged with fire. You cannot count how many abominations burn.

[15] It exhausts you, twisting the fire back into your crackling corona. The Artillery has been burned away to nothing, the metal barrels warped and fallen.

[14+2 vs 20] You hover towards the line, watching carefully. The Crusaders are still falling-- too fast, the Infected fighting ferociously despite the heavy lost they are sustaining.  Something roars in the western distance.

[Something big is approaching. Similiar sound profile to Rostadt. Larger.]

[14 vs 13] You grin, letting yourself fall to the ground, lashing out with your corona, burning through the abominations at the center of the trench. With a twist of your hands your corona straightens, ripping through the opposing line, screams of inhuman enemies following it as you burn away the FILTH THAT DARES TO TREAD UPON YOUR PLANET.

[10+2 vs 9] "Over the top! Regain our ground, Crusaders! Alphira protects! Send a message to the north and south flanks!" Somebody shouts, and at your back is the remnant of the Crusader line, the Thornton Warmachines providing heavy suppressing fire as the group makes their way across the muddy and cratered no man's land, no doubt seeking the fortifications in the distance.

You laugh, grateful for the mask, because you're enjoying purging these filthy beasts perhaps a little too much.

[15] Your wall of Inferno advances in front of you, never faltering, not yet, burning anything that doesn't flee. Insects rip themselves from the ground, four of them, suddenly charging. It will be difficult to maintain--

[11+2 vs 5]Warmachines hurl themselves at one, a cutter blade flashing through the sky. It misses, and he's knocked aside, but his allies do not miss. An Inferno shotgun rings out, blasting away flesh and forcing a keening scream from the beast as tentacles lash in frantic pain.

[15+2 vs 3] A Crusader rushes forward to protect you, lifting his Cutter blade and impaling the Bug as it raises on to its hind legs for an attack. It goes still, falling towards him, and he rolls out of the way.

[13+2 vs 1] [6+2 vs 1] The other one falls to a rapid barrage of las-fire, screaming as its flesh explodes outward into steam. The Thorntons hack apart the last Insect with savage efficiency.

[3][4] You reach the next trench, finding abominations. "Keep clear." Your voice is already magnified, and the order is relayed efficiently. Like a fog, your willpower goes to the lowest point--  nothing happens for a few frantic attempts, the infected crawling their way up to try and maul your soldiers-- one nearby you falls screaming, his throat ripped out--

[19] It ignites, the trenches exploding with sudden fire. The air is filled with keening of your foes, and the Crusaders take their places in the new fortification, killing the injured Abominations. You haven't gone fifty feet, and yet the Crusaders scream your name in victory. The Wasteland, for the time, is empty, and the Crusaders fortify themselves for the next rush.

You note, with pride, that to the north and south, the Crusaders are pushing back, reclaiming their place like their brethren.

[Rodstadt Infected close enough to be a threat. Fifty meters.]

"HAIL ALPHIRA!" A familiar voice beside you screams, you glance over, finding Eric standing a safe distance away, on his knees, a cutter blade in one hand and an illegally modified las-rifle in the other. His helmet hangs from the strap, from his neck, and after you glance at him, he slips it back up, jumping into the trench and inspecting his soldiers.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 17, 2020, 06:58:32 pm
Eat quickly.

"It's nice to see you, Eric.  Prepare for a difficult battle.  Expect a gigantic worm-like being with many tentacles and a screech that instills fear.  It's major organs are in its torso and it will be here soon."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 17, 2020, 09:08:13 pm
[5] "One of those-- I need a runner to the artillery, white flare, fire in f--" Static fills the air as it approaches the fortification, a scrambling hiss of data that worms itself into your brain painfully. The Crusaders double over, but you note, with a glance, that they have cloth stuffed into their ears. It slithers into view, churning the ground beneath it. When it sees you, it rises up on its tail, letting it coil beneath it. You swallow the nutrient ration down, coughing out some of the vaguely vanilla-flavored dust.

This Colossus has a silvery shell that coils and writhes organically around its thick body. With [twenty feet] of tail resting beneath it, [fifty feet] rises to throw a shadow upon the land. With its armored carapace and thick body, it's nearly [fifteen feet] wide. Twenty tentacled arms, as long as it is, slither down, tipped with cruel, scything blades, dragging across the ground. Lightning rises from its form, lashing into the air above, red from the dust in the atmosphere. The faces all down its side are all twisted into screams -- crusader helmets also jut out from the armor, embedded into it by the same process. Your soldiers fire upon it, but it pays them no mind, its many eyes fixating on you.

"W̵̤̰͇͇̪e͏͈̬̜̣̖̻͓̮̠̹̞͕̱̯̪͎̩͘ ͏̷͎̞̳̬͉͔̫̮̻̀͟m̡̢͚̟̳̥͕̞̻͓̳̩͍̩͚̠̟ȩ̸̧̣̻͕̯̭̜̘̭͎͕̀͠e̡̨̦̻̲͔̝̰̝̘ͅt̶̹̭̮̥̺̝̣̤̥̱̫̜̜̟̼́͜ ͘͘͝҉̨͎̤̫͚̻̝̣̦͎̖ͅą҉̨̖̙̥̰̣̠̹̺̺̰͔͓ͅg̴̵̠̰̹͇͠a҉̡͇̜̖̱̩̙̜ͅi͏̵̢͔̭̘̖̘̠̱n̷͏̡̤̣͍̳̝͢͜.̵̼̼͕̗̳͙̫̺̱̺̞̭̦͎̥̗̘̙͡͠ͅ" It's voice of static burns into your mind. It screams once, and from behind it streams Abominations. The Crusaders engage the best they can while in the shadow of the beast.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 17, 2020, 09:54:01 pm
Attempt to create earth manipulation spikes to remove some of the scything tentacles.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 17, 2020, 09:56:52 pm
Attempt to create earth manipulation spikes to remove some of the scything tentacles.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 17, 2020, 10:41:44 pm
[2-2] [3-2] They don't come-- and those in the trenches scatter as the scything blades begin to rip through the air, struggling out of the fortification and into open no-man's land.

[4-2 vs 5] You try to lift off, only to have those scything blades snap into your shield with enough force to send you sprawling into the no man's land's muddy ground. The static fills your bones, making it hard to think as your body converts it into garbled and twisting messages that ruin your arithmetic.

[3][13] You twist the earth forth, lifting it into a sudden spike to impale the creature and stop those writhing blades, but--

[17 vs 20] There's a pop as your shield cracks from the impact of the tentacles, as they crush your spikes and slam into your shield once again. You once again taste mud.

D̝̤͞į̬ͅͅd̪͍͎̟ y̡̬̫̘̻͕ou̟̺͇̺̮̬ ̡̤͙̼͖̝͓ͅt͏̟̱h̜͔͞i̯̼͈̳͎n̦͇̜͘k ̻̘I͇̞ ́d̬̳͖͡ͅi̵̻̝͉ͅd̮̣̦̫ṋ'̢̳̬̖̰t͝ͅ ̗l͇͙͟e̴͚a̛̠͕̦rn̙͔͖̙͚͍͎?̘͖

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 17, 2020, 11:19:05 pm
First, inject some ballistic.  Then, take flight, activate inferno, and attempt to use the heat to sear off the protective metal carapace on its torso while avoiding the tentacles.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 01:03:20 am
First, inject some ballistic.  Then, take flight, activate inferno, and attempt to use the heat to sear off the protective metal carapace on its torso while avoiding the tentacles.

+1

Brute-force the "arithmetic" if we have to. This is no time for mathematical niceties.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 18, 2020, 05:29:31 am
First, inject some ballistic.  Then, take flight, activate inferno, and attempt to use the heat to sear off the protective metal carapace on its torso while avoiding the tentacles.

+1

Brute-force the "arithmetic" if we have to. This is no time for mathematical niceties.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 01:43:06 pm
You slam the syringe into your arm, jumping back from the tentacles that attempt to lash your prone form. The familiar rush burns through your veins. Your mind rushes, and your body struggles to keep up. With a twist of your wings, you rise into the air.

[19-1] You call forth your Inferno, letting it lash and shift around you. The fires burn bright, crackling with energy, and are a faint blue in the day. You focus, expanding it until it twists into a savage nimbus of writhing, luminous, blue fire. The Worm stares with a multitude of eyes, then screams at you in garbled static, lunging forth.

[20-1 vs. 16] The explosive fury of your Inferno washes over the Worm, searing and shriveling its unprotected tentacles. It draws back with a hiss, lunging with the other side-- you let yourself drop, and they whistle pointlessly overhead. You drive the Inferno forward, the Worm's armor hissing and spitting as it begins to melt. It flinches back in pain, drawing away from the fire.

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[16-1 vs. 4] It shifts back, and with twitching of its disgusting body, energy begins to spark outward from its skin. All at once, it coalesces into lightning upon one of its limbs, and it swipes at you with it. You twist away, bringing up your Inferno to burn away the offending limb even as it cackles with enough power to fry you within your armor.

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[11-1 vs. 1] The two of you swipe and stab at one another, energy flashing out into the sky from both of you as you dodge and parry each other's deadly attacks. By the end of the exchange, the earth around you sprouts fulgurite, and the mud around it is baked with scorch marks -- but so is its disgusting red flesh and twisting armor.

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[20-1 vs. 16] You begin to feel weak-- breathing hard from the exertion of dodging while using Inferno. But you have strength enough to avoid another blow and use your nimbus of fire to hack at the creature's torso savagely. It screams as you sear through armor and flesh alike, twisting away from the savage light.

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The nimbus collapses in on itself with a sudden pop, water droplets raining down to the ground. Your wings falter, drawing themselves in until you can barely maintain lift. Your stomach gurgles with hunger. Your mask is heady with the smell of iron as something streams from your eyes and nose. Blood, you are sure, from the strain.

The Worm is missing many of its tentacles, great savage gashes of burnt flesh scoring its flesh beneath the shifting armor, which, to bares signs of having been melted. But still, it lives, writhing and twisting, hissing its heavy static that jars you to your bones. It stares with triumph, no doubt, in your exertion.

[16-1] The air is filled with a sudden whistling as artillery shells rain down from behind you -- a few pass close enough to touch, and you lift yourself higher, out of the firing lines as a shell after shell explodes upon contact with the Worm. It screeches in pain as its form shudders from the impacts of explosive rounds.

[|........]

The static finally stops, as it collapses, still bombarded with shell after shell of artillery fire, until even that stops, leaving a broken and burned mess behind.

It's still alive, no doubt, as its black and gray ichor flows from its new wounds, but, from what you can tell of its biology, it's going into shock.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Eschar on April 18, 2020, 01:45:47 pm
I have no idea what's going on but I would like to say that was awesome
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 01:51:11 pm
That was definitely awesome.  You should participate, by the way.  We could use more players.

"We are similar beings.  Is coexistence possible?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 02:04:49 pm
The headache, the hunger-- they come from forcing the arithmetic!
No diplomacy. Let this abomination bleed out on the clean ground. Suffer not the works of the Plague to live.

"I-- learn-- too."

...

Nutrient cube. Two, if needed. Check in with our mercenaries.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 02:20:12 pm
The headache, the hunger-- they come from forcing the arithmetic!
No diplomacy. Let this abomination bleed out on the clean ground. Suffer not the works of the Plague to live.

"I-- learn-- too."

...

Nutrient cube. Two, if needed. Check in with our mercenaries.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 18, 2020, 02:22:03 pm
The headache, the hunger-- they come from forcing the arithmetic!
No diplomacy. Let this abomination bleed out on the clean ground. Suffer not the works of the Plague to live.

"I-- learn-- too."

...

Nutrient cube. Two, if needed. Check in with our mercenaries.

+1
+1 finish it off with a las gun blast after eating nutrient cube(s) and before leaving it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 02:24:51 pm
Can we finish it off with a las gun blast?

With an Overload, maybe. I'd be worried about splitting our poor overworked processor in twain.

I have no idea what's going on but I would like to say that was awesome

Went better than our last encounter (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=175587.msg8114138#msg8114138) with one of these, to be sure!  :))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 02:36:48 pm
Ichor oozes from its silent mouth, its dark eyes fixed upon you.

"S̗̞͔͈͕̫o̠o̩̝n̮͢.͉̹̠" Is the last thing it speaks, its body twitching, red lightning still crackling from its skin, then it is still, the energy dissipating from its prone form. You collapse back into the mud, your body aching with your exertion. You fish out a nutrient cube, choking down the dry, dusty food. It does nothing to help your cramping stomach. So you eat another. And another. Blood is indeed streaming from your eyes, nose, and ears-- you don't brush it off. Your underlay is coated in mud and ichor.

A Crusader approaches, staring at the entity as soldiers begin to fortify the line they lost. Abominations wander haphazardly, unable to coordinate assaults -- and they are picked off, one after another without great difficulty. He tosses his canteen at you. "Those ration bars are terrible without something to drink." He collapses into the mud beside you.

You take a drink, draining it-- only to start coughing heavily. Its diluted vodka. "How are the Warmachines?" You ask, taking another bite of the cube.

"One injured, removed the infected arm." He pauses, watching you, "We would have all died, had you not shown up."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 02:40:47 pm
"How has the situation deteriorated?  Is it simply due to overwhelming enemy numbers?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 02:46:37 pm
Smile weak-- "Happy to be of service."

"How has the situation deteriorated?  Is it simply due to overwhelming enemy numbers?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 18, 2020, 02:57:12 pm
Smile weak-- "Happy to be of service."

"How has the situation deteriorated?  Is it simply due to overwhelming enemy numbers?"

+1
probably, why are we asking this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 02:58:16 pm
I'd like to get an assessment of the situation from people who have actually been fighting on the front.  They should have some insight on what changes need to be made.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 03:01:05 pm
That. I ain't too attached to the question meself, but I figure it can't hurt to ask.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 03:03:12 pm
Eric pulls off his helmet, shrugging his shoulders and glancing out towards the wasteland. "Permission to speak freely?" He asks, quietly.

"Granted."

"Many, many things. We're being fed ration cubes now. We have to pour vodka in our water just to disinfect it so we aren't -- getting sick, because our damn pump got screwed and no one has come to fix it." Eric sighs, "Then those damn things managed to put artillery pieces back together to give us hell. Their numbers keep getting stronger and stronger while we keep getting fresh-faced idiots who only end up dying."

He gestures over to the massive corpse lying just beyond the new fortification. "Then there are those things."

"And through it all high command's only fucking order? Hold the line. No shit. What else would we be doing?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 18, 2020, 03:03:25 pm
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 03:11:26 pm
"These issues definitely need to be addressed, and I have a plan for doing so.  I will be meeting with high command in a couple of days.  Expect new orders, more helpful orders, shortly."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 04:08:53 pm
Funny how the tone of our voice fluctuates depending on who suggests the dialogue... rather illustrates the fractures in our personality, no? "Patches" indeed.

"These issues definitely need to be addressed, and I have a plan for doing so.  I will be meeting with high command in a couple of days.  Expect new orders, more helpful orders, shortly."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 18, 2020, 04:20:35 pm
Funny how the tone of our voice fluctuates depending on who suggests the dialogue... rather illustrates the fractures in our personality, no? "Patches" indeed.

"These issues definitely need to be addressed, and I have a plan for doing so.  I will be meeting with high command in a couple of days.  Expect new orders, more helpful orders, shortly."

+1
+1 accidentally skipped update again, will delete invalid vote
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 05:19:16 pm
Muahhahaha


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"I'll take your word for it, Mother Alphira." Eric rises stiffly, slipping his helmet over his head and inspecting the line. A runner comes to speak with him, and is sent off towards the northern flank. You're left watching in silence, until your Warmachines return to you. One is indeed missing an arm but considering how those can be replaced. Gashes and pockmarks litter their thick armor, but they stand tall, hands-on guns and ready to fight.

"Lady Alphira." The Captain states, glancing towards the corpse of the Worm and slowly dropping to a knee. "Any further orders? Or should I call the ships back?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 05:22:36 pm
Do we have time to rest here a bit and then continue the fight, or is the meeting imminent?

"I'd like to take a cross-section of the demon for analysis.  Perhaps Silas will be able to analyze it and determine its weaknesses."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 18, 2020, 05:24:54 pm
Do we have time to rest here a bit and then continue the fight, or is the meeting imminent?
+1 I’m guessing we have time, no way we’ve been here for 2 days, right?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 05:26:18 pm
Yeah I think you're right.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 05:39:58 pm
"I'd like to take a cross-section of the demon for analysis.  Perhaps Silas will be able to analyze it and determine its weaknesses."[/b]

Er, do we really want to be taking [plague]-infected tissue with us back into Holy City? Rogue nano-tech is bad news.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 05:41:12 pm
We'll take appropriate precautions.  Perhaps we can take it to a remote Thornton lab.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 05:48:44 pm
"If that's the plan," The Captain gestures over to the Crusaders who approach the creature with containers of what you can only assume to be ethanol or some other highly flammable material, "We might want to stop them."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 05:50:17 pm
I think it's worth a try as long as we are careful.

"Wait, don't destroy it entirely.  I want to take a sample for analysis."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 05:56:26 pm
It's easy to say "we'll be careful"... how are we going to transport this stuff?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 05:59:42 pm
We can escort it ourselves and use our will to contain it if necessary.  If we can find a critical weakness, we'll be one step closer to victory.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 18, 2020, 06:09:46 pm
It's easy to say "we'll be careful"... how are we going to transport this stuff?
can we put it in ethanol without setting said ethanol on fire? Or would that not even sterilize? Maybe we should just let them burn it
EDIT: what if we coax the earth around a section on the ground to form a small wall around a piece and form a connection on top of it, then take the earth shape with the sample encased within? Like
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-=ground
,=plague substance
o=earth formation


          ooo
          o,,o,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
——-—————-——o————————————-
The infection doesn’t infect the ground, if it did, it would control the ground. After this, we can pick up the earth container with the infected bit still inside
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 06:42:09 pm
That seems like it would be worth a try.  First, we have to tell them to stop burning it in its entirety.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 07:12:14 pm
Ha, clever! I could get behind that.
Combining everything, then...

Approach the smoldering worm. "Hold."

Let our will hang in protection about us. Draw our Cutter, and scythe free a fist-size lump of the tainted tissue-- raise clean silicon from the earth, and wrap our sample tight and swift. Cleanse our work with a swift blaze of hydrogen, and take up the sealed orb.

"As you were."




To Captain {Faith? Is Faith, yes?}: "Call in our ride-- we've done what we came here to do. The post is preserved, and I've my intel."

"And ah, captain? Thank you. Your insubordination proved valuable back there. I apologize for my show of ill confidence."
"Just..." (smirk a little) "...don't make a habit of it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 09:03:44 pm
You approach the corpse just as the Crusaders are about to set it alight. They glance toward's their commander, in question, but he gives a nod. You cannot tell if its Eric or not-- the gas mask helmet combo makes them all look very similar to one another.

[20][15][11] You work swiftly, carving out a chunk of flesh and wrapping it tightly in a case of silicon. You separate the water vapor within and hold a small ball of fire around it. Nothing happens. You think you've successfully contained it. You walk away as they douse the whole corpse the best they can, a soldier stepping away to fire his las-gun at it. Its engulfed in blue and green flames, with a noxious smoke rising from it.

You form a neat handle with fresh silicon, and pass it over to a Warmachine as you and the squad leave the battleground behind. There's one final cheer for you, a 'Hail Alphira' that echoes down the line.

The command post is still in tatters, but those injured are working to put it back together. Your hovercrafts drop down as you address the Captain, who, you're quite sure, isn't Faith. The Captain nods, "I will try not to make a habit of it. But please note that we are not trained for rescue operations. Our primary task is, and was, purely rapid assault. We have some training to keep us alive longer, but medic work is not something we can do easy." He flexes his massive fingers to you in a wave as he loads the sample into a craft and settles into another.

[1 vs 9] The ride back to the Holy City takes an hour -- and its thirty minutes in when you realize that your fists are clenched tightly enough into your hands that you're drawing blood with your fingernails. That's when you notice the dancing blackness on the edge of your vision; shadowy figures of dusty gray.

Intiating shutdown. Infection based memetic virus detected within personality cores. The Interface's voice drips with ice as she informs you.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 18, 2020, 09:29:55 pm
[Purge the virus, if you can]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 09:34:13 pm
Oh dear.

Understood. A moment, please--
Quickly, to any Warmachine beside us: "Losing consciousness, no cause for concern. If I'm still out when we arrive, see me to safety-- in isolation."

Be careful, Phoebe.
To the Interface: Continue. Thank you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 09:47:09 pm
Yes, I can.

The Warmachine no doubt looks very confused by your sudden announcement, his helmet tilting like a puppy's trying to understand exactly what is going on. "Uh...wha-?"

You lay down and shut your eyes tightly against the darkness that encroaches...and you dream.



A fire burns nearby, a small thing, flickering brightly against impossible darkness. You hunch over it, even as it begins to smolder into coals. A cold seeps in -- things shift in the starless night beyond the dwindling flame.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 09:49:48 pm
Feed the dwindling flame: slowly, with a careful trickle of hydrogen. Apply no spark of our own making, for now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 09:51:29 pm
Feed the dwindling flame: slowly, with a careful trickle of hydrogen. Apply no spark of our own making, for now.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 18, 2020, 09:56:22 pm
Feed the dwindling flame: slowly, with a careful trickle of hydrogen. Apply no spark of our own making, for now.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 10:04:37 pm
[1] There is no hydrogen here, and the flame continues to dwindle, the darkness pressing in tightly, suffocating you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 10:08:37 pm
Watch the movement in the starless sky as we slowly suffocate.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 10:09:25 pm
We are never alone. Dream of the Line!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 10:19:09 pm
[18] You step into the smoldering coals, looking up into the sky as the darkness chokes itself around you. You stop breathing as it invades your senses in totality. When you are just about to give up, all hope lost, staring into that infinite abyss above you --

It blooms. A bright white light, a pinprick in the sky. Then another. And another. Eight in total, all shining through the darkness. Motes of light dancing in infinite rhythm with one another. Their light is cold and distant, but the darkness retreats.

[15] They explode into infinite expanses of bright dust in the cold void. A golden mote drifts towards you.

Why do you hesitate? Shine with us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 10:25:51 pm
Take flight and follow the mote into the yawning void.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 18, 2020, 10:27:50 pm
Grasp the spark and use it to shine ourselves, then join the eight pillars in flight.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 10:39:29 pm
You take hold of the mote, and fire engulfs you, burning brightly in the darkness. Your wings unfurl, pure, pristine white fire--

Others approach, not you, but similar in size and shape. They walk with their eyes downcast, not able to look directly into the flames that burn around you-- but they take shelter in your warmth, in your light.

Do you still fly free?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 18, 2020, 10:51:41 pm
Spin and pirouette alongside the others.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 11:02:40 pm
SEED's people.

My people.

They are-- so dear to me--

---

--I cannot leave them. Not yet. Not yet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 11:31:03 pm
Wills tug and pull at one another, united in body, but not in soul. Seams strain and a girl cries out in pain as the stitches break.



[11] You rub at your face and head as you awaken. You take in your surroundings with a sweep of your gaze-- a dingy warehouse room. You're still covered in mud and ichor and sweat, and your arms are bound behind you with a bit of plastic. You can see no one, but in the distance, you can feel the hum of at least one rifle. You test your bindings by tapping them against the floor -- bioplastic from the sound.

It doesn't even strain you to break them apart. With a glance downward, you note that you still have your armor on-- but no weapons.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 11:43:09 pm
The [plague] is purged from our cores?

Check our helmet for heartbeats.
[Lucille-- can you get a bead on our location?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 18, 2020, 11:49:10 pm
Residual damages remain, as they always have, but the threat is nullified.
[Holy City Suburbs, A Warehouse District]


There are a few nearby, one sitting on the opposite end of the door, the las-rifle in his hands. the others busy themselves in the distance. As your willpower coils around you can feel it-- another willpower in the distance, a predatory intent stalking a safe distance away.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 18, 2020, 11:56:13 pm
Residual damages... what is this infection doing to us?

Give that other willpower a metaphorical tap on the shoulder. It's probably William.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 12:07:18 am
[20] Nightmares, hallucinations, bouts of uncontrollable rage, insomnia... The Interface begins to describe a number of symptoms, The Plague modifies everything it interacts with in lasting ways: animals, minds, flesh...sometimes strengthening it. That adorable Barker, for instance. How else would it be able to mutate so rapidly and be so aggressive? What evolutionary need is there for a trait like that?

You strain to reach out with your willpower-- and fall short by a few meters. Something chimes in the other room. "Mother Alphira?" A weak voice questions.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 12:14:15 am
Heh. What doesn't kill us makes us stronger.
Have you a name, "Interface"?


"The same! How long have I been out?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 12:23:34 am
Indeed. A soldier that lives long is terrifying indeed, and we have lived long.
I have been call many things, but have no need for names. Interface is fine. VOID is fine, if confusing, as that is the common terminology for the vast distances between the atmospheres of worlds and other stellar bodies. I was called Lifegiver once. That may be familiar to your particular instance.

"A-an hour after you landed, Mother Alphira. It's...it's you?" The tremulous, male voice questions. William's willpower approaches slowly, stalking into the building. A las-gun follows with him, its reactor humming with killing intent. He slips the door open, peeking inside.

"Oh good, you're not some terrifying abomination." The safety clicks on, and the reactor hums down. Maybe its disappointed it didn't get to kill. A grin curls your lips. He speaks into a radio -- "Yeah, you all can stand down. She's fine."

You suddenly feel dual reactors drifting through your lines of awareness, and the door opens on William and the reformed cultist, who sits with a rifle levelled at the door and a radio in his hand. He sets the rifle down, breathing out a heavy sigh of relief.  William slips the pistol into its holster.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 19, 2020, 12:58:49 am
"Why was I restrained?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 01:05:07 am
"Why was I restrained?"

Presumably because we passed out abruptly in transport, specifically asking to be contained? These guys ain't gonna mess about with a potential infected [angel] on the loose!



"Lifegiver"-- a motherly name! Perhaps I shall call you "Mother", and leave it at that... what say you?

Assume a suitable slightly-sheepish expression. "Sorry to put you two on edge like that-- I'm fine now! Had to clear a bit of leftover [plague] out of my system... [angel] trick. Fine now."

"The others get back alright?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 19, 2020, 01:09:12 am
Ah that makes sense, though I doubt they could adequately restrain us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 01:15:19 am
Oh, they couldn't possibly-- but can you blame them for trying?  :D
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 01:24:13 am
If you so choose. I do not have a gender or sex, as a note. The femininity you assume from my 'voice' comes from your own preconceptions about my existence. Mother offers, pleasantly.

"Alphira told me as much." William nods, glancing out the door, "Hence the firing squad we had lined up outside of your willpower...and the sacrificial lamb."

With another nod, he slouches, all of his tense muscles and cybernetics relaxing as his hand comes to instinctively rest on his pistol. You look him over, noting the material that clings tightly to what looks to be muscle on his arms. He glances at the reformed cultist, "Hey, yo, go get my coat."

William notices where your eyes go, and peels up a sleeve-- what was once skeletal cybernetics is now covered by a silvery-black material that coils like muscle. "It started growing a bit ago. Alphie says that while I won't be able to do 'magic' like you, I should be physically stronger."

"As nice as those handcuffs look on you--" He tosses you a key, and you reach down and undo what remains of them, letting the shattered plastic fall to the floor. "We sent the sample to Silas. They'll cut it open in a clean room and take a look at it."

"Have fun on the front?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 19, 2020, 01:30:01 am
"A blast.  I had a chance to kill another one of those Colossi.  This one was older and stronger."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 19, 2020, 08:18:24 am
"A blast.  I had a chance to kill another one of those Colossi.  This one was older and stronger."
”I also killed a [plague] artillery unit. Upon killing the Collosal, the abominations lost their organization, I’m thinking the Collosals function like the [plague’s] brains
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 11:48:05 am
We shall draw comfort, then, from our preconceptions! We are grateful for your presence-- "Mother".

"So much fun." Grin wide, let the words fall out.

"A blast.  I had a chance to kill another one of those Colossi.  This one was older and stronger."
”I also killed a [plague] artillery unit. Upon killing the Collosal, the abominations lost their organization, I’m thinking the Collosals function like the [plague’s] brains?

"It recognized me from Rodstadt-- its kind is built to kill Empyreals, I think-- we burned it alive. We burned everything! This was nothing like Rodstadt-- better than Rodstadt. So much better."

Sigh. "I've learned since then. We can turn this war around, I know it now! I know it now."

...

"...anyway." Rise. "How's your day gone?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 06:42:48 pm
"I don't know anything about if they do or not..." William murmurs, shrugging on his coat as the young cultist returns, "But I'm glad you made it back okay, anything else I offer will sound patronizing. 'Good job Pheobe.'" He explains, giving a grin, "I didn't let Emma know you had a black out session -- I figured it would stress her out more than help."

"I am glad you made it back though. It'd be boring without you." He offers.

"I did paperwork. The Thornton accountant is taking an assessment for how much continued operations will cost. Living the dream." The sarcasm in his voice hangs heavy as he hands you back your weapons and gear, and you attach them to your armor. Everything is coated in dried mud.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 19, 2020, 06:51:52 pm
"You should join me next time.  It sounds like you could use a break from all this administration."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 19, 2020, 07:06:07 pm
"You should join me next time.  It sounds like you could use a break from all this administration."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 07:25:18 pm
"I am glad you made it back though. It'd be boring without you." He offers.

D'aww. Brother. ^-^

"You should join me next time.  It sounds like you could use a break from all this administration."
+1

+1-- speak with a grin!

"Anyway. I need somewhere to get the charred bug guts out of my... everything. This warehouse of ours have decent plumbing, or will I need to head back to compound for that?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 08:06:47 pm
"Next time, for sure." William nods, flashing a grin. After you ask about the plumbing, the smile falters a bit, "I would recommend heading back to the compound. We still haven't set up the communal showers yet."

"If you want to be all spotless for Emma, I can get someone to run you a bucket of hot water. Find you a few washcloths, but privacy is a bit difficult to find." Willaims shrugs his shoulders, glancing at the young ex-cultist, who is trying his best to be attentive.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 19, 2020, 08:20:20 pm
"It's not a priority at the moment, so I'll probably just walk back to the compound.  Do you know if Iyal is okay?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 09:08:17 pm
"It's not a priority at the moment, so I'll probably just walk back to the compound.  Do you know if Iyal is okay?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 19, 2020, 09:18:51 pm
"It's not a priority at the moment, so I'll probably just walk back to the compound.  Do you know if Iyal is okay?"

+1
+1 why not contact her ourselves?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 09:21:24 pm
"I haven't heard from her. So either she's dead or has nothing to report." William unhelpfully replies, "Emma said she killed something like three of her targets in the last few days. Maybe she's taking a break or gathering information."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 19, 2020, 09:25:03 pm
"The enemy is adapting.  We know that killing the nerve centers will be key, they may hide them next time or send more then one."

We should give William a full run down of what happened.

We should check if we can disable whatever is allowing the communication with the enemy.  They don't seem like they will negotiate and it might be forcing corruption through it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 19, 2020, 09:30:17 pm
"The enemy is adapting.  We know that killing the nerve centers will be key, they may hide them next time or send more then one."

We should give William a full run down of what happened.

We should check if we can disable whatever is allowing the communication with the enemy.  They don't seem like they will negotiate and it might be forcing corruption through it.
+1
Luckily it doesn’t corrupt radios
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 09:32:30 pm
Do we know that? I bet it does.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 19, 2020, 09:34:15 pm
"What role do you see the Thorntons playing in relation to the state once the war is over?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 19, 2020, 09:34:31 pm
Do we know that? I bet it does.
fair point, we know it hasn’t corrupted them yet, maybe it doesn’t know we have them?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 09:51:36 pm
"What role do you see the Thorntons playing in relation to the state once the war is over?"
One more vote required, as this is a fairly serious conversation point.



The translation modification allows for communication with all sentient lifeforms, including [the plague]. I do not know if that will solve the problem, however, and it can be troublesome to switch off, as humans are social creatures.

William listens intently, settling down on the crate. His smile fades and his expression hardens into one of serious concentration. "If they're so important, why are they using them to attack you?" He questions when you finish. "If they were my mainline to controlling the rabble, then I would keep them in reserve."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 19, 2020, 10:04:02 pm
"The [plague] hates me as much as SEED.  It may act rashly when things like us are around.  The combat capabilities may be linked to the control node, so it can only produce the armor and strength displayed by the colossi near the control point.  There is no precedent for this so it is all speculation."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 19, 2020, 10:09:29 pm
Maybe it's using the colossi to gain information on our abilities so that it may better adapt.  The more combat data it collects, the better prepared it can become.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 10:23:28 pm
[12] "...what would happen if you were to be infected?" William asks, leaning a hand on his head. "You're rather adorable when you're completely oblivious."

"Maybe you're the [queen in chess] that its willing to sacrifice its [knights in chess] for?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 10:25:37 pm
Bah, was working on writing a post along those lines!  :P

We can-- turn off our linguistics? That's useful... can we do so in partiality? Shut down one language at a time?
Regardless, I'm more worried about that
scream. I don't suppose we've any tricks for that?

"...yes. That. Exactly that."

Pace as we explain. "I wish you'd seen-- the rabble was chaff, once I got there. Ablative meat. Most plague creatures, I can burn away now in droves... not the colossi. They're huge, and that scream of theirs dulls Empyreal arithmetic-- had me bleeding out the eyes, like way back at the Moores-- it's like they've evolved against our kind!"

"This is an [angel] fight now. If these things can't bring down the [angel], they've lost. They know this. They'll prioritize accordingly. The colossi are their best bet, I think, for bringing that about."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 10:48:26 pm
Unless you can stop the vibrations in your bones, we will still be able to hear it. And...it doesn't quite work like that. All languages are derived from Terran, and it predicts certain values and linguistic shifts, cross-referenced across many different languages. I cannot even modify it due to the complexity of the program. On or off.

[-] William's grin falters and falls as he shifts upright. "Phebe...that's...concerning. If they switch targets from SEED to you, then they might change their strategies. It's what I would do. They're trying to overwhelm SEED in a ground war, but they've seen you with wings now, and they know you have an attachment to these people -- otherwise you'd be long gone after Rodstadt."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 19, 2020, 10:58:07 pm
"We can adapt as well, and we have two more angels that the plague is unaware of.  There are still plenty of tricks up our sleeves."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 11:02:58 pm
I... don't want to talk to Will about sending his sister into battle. Not yet. Not until she presses the question herself.

I thought as much. Thank you.

"You see why I'm concerned. You see why I bother with SEED's broken-down mess of a military. You see why it's so important to me, that this world be able to fight for itself."

"This war-- it's an arms race. I won out there today because I had tricks the [plague] didn't know about. Now I'm asking myself: what's our next trick? The [plague] adapts. We adapt too."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 19, 2020, 11:04:08 pm
She already did.  She offered to join us in battle, and I doubt she would hold off because she feels a need for her brother's permission.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 11:10:52 pm
I'm not sure William knows she's said that, though... and I feel somehow that we shouldn't be the one to bring the matter to his attention. If we do, we surely want to do more than just mention it in passing-- this isn't the time.

That, and I suspect Phoebe ain't too comfortable about that question herself. "P̴r̶i̸m̵a̵r̷y̸ ̷O̸b̶j̸e̴c̴t̷i̸v̵e̷:̴ ̷P̴r̷o̶t̵e̸c̵t̴ ̸E̸m̴m̸a̸ ̷T̶h̷o̸r̴n̵t̷o̶n̶" and all that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 11:24:14 pm
"Well, tell me what you need me to do, Phebe. I'll try my best." William offers with a shrug of his shoulders, relaxing once again, that sanguine smile returning, "You should head back, I figure. Emma will be missing you, and I have other...wonderful business to attend to. I'll drop by later, maybe we can spar if I can pull you away from Emma's loving embrace."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 19, 2020, 11:40:13 pm
Smirk a little. "Ever the tease."

"I'd like to see about a few radio-sets for the Crusader artillerists, if possible. Simple pieces. Seems they've been dealing with the colossi by sending runners back to the artillery when one shows up, runners and flares... inefficient. Costly. We can do better!"

"Other than that, I'll leave you to it." Smile. "Thanks, Will."

Nod to John as we head out for compound. "Nice to see you up and about too!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 19, 2020, 11:58:22 pm
"I could tease more if you visited more often without Emma." William offers with a lazy grin, lifting his hand in a wave.  John dips his head in a bow, avoiding your gaze as you leave. A set of Warmachines fall in beside you as you make your way through the streets, no doubt a sight for confusion. People stare at you and duck bows. They all looks surprised and confused, but none of them approach you.

You arrive back at the compound a little while later. You head towards the laundry, where the juniors of the Guards work, and hand over your clothing. You are given a uniform in return, and your armor will be cleaned. As strange as it is for you to put on clean clothes while you are caked in mud and grime, the Guards are adamant about you not leaving without them.

Emma, pauses when you darken your doorway, stopping herself midstep -- instead, she opens she bathroom door for you, and you step gratefully inside. She's quick to join you after you rinse off the worst of the mud and ichor.



The two of you lounge on the bed, the night starting to draw down the rains. If you focus, you can hear them pattering on to the roof somewhere above. Emma sits next to you, a charcoal pencil in hand, sketching on what looks to be expensive paper.

[15] Something catches your eye -- its the Colossus you fought today, down to minute details. The crackling of lightning, its twitching flesh, and the gleam of the sun on its sharp blades.

...you haven't told Emma about today. You were otherwise too preoccupied, and she doesn't ask if you don't volunteer, something that has held true ever since the Moore Family.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 01:09:31 am
"That's beautiful.   Can I ask how you know about it... or is now 'just not the time?'"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 01:20:45 am
"That's beautiful.   Can I ask how you know about it... or is now 'just not the time?'"

Er, is kinda unclear whether that colossus is Emma's sketch or a hallucination on our part... I'm leaning hallucination.

If hallucination: shift closer, smile. "Whatcha drawing?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 01:23:25 am
...no, it isn't a random hallucination.  Note the use of the ellipses in the last paragraph.  We're surprised that she is sketching the colossus.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 01:27:57 am
"Hey, look, if you want to talk to me about something, I'll listen...but I've grown up long enough around...fighters, shall we say? To know better than to ask a question you don't want to answer." Emma bristles, but relaxes when you place a calming hand on her hip.

[3] You shift closer, only to note the details of the drawing were less fine than before -- it no longer seems to writhe upon the paper or twitch with electricity. But it's still a detailed sketch of the entity you fought today. "I've been dreaming a lot lately. Alphira told me that drawing it out helps...this one was a nightmare. Why do you ask?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 01:30:02 am
"That's what I fought earlier, when I was at the line.  Have you had other similar nightmares?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 02:45:33 am
"Yeah? A couple of times. You or Mitch were there, so they weren't that bad." Emma shrugs a shoulder as Mitch grumbles when he hears his name. The Barker otherwise, is happily chewing on a piece of hide, lounging next to the heating element in your room, in a pile of old clothes he acquired from somewhere.

"Oh...well. I'm...sorry?" Emma looks confused, glancing down at the pad of paper. "I'll feed it to Mitch--" She starts to wad the paper up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 02:48:13 am
"No, it's okay.  I just think it's interesting.  Do you think we're somehow sharing memories?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 02:52:26 am
[14] "...Iunno. That sounds odd -- I had my nightmare about it last night. Probably just heard too much about Rodstadt, or maybe Alphira let it leak into my brain or something." Emma chucks the roll paper towards Mitch, who snatches it out of the air with a heavy snap of his jaws. He doesn't even chew, swallowing it whole before returning to his hide treat, non-plussed.

[11] "I've been having a lot of weird dreams, lately."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 02:56:52 am
"Sometimes I wonder if the plague is trying to communicate with us.  I had strange dreams, too, after I fought the worm at Rodstadt and after the one at the line."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 03:08:59 am
"Well, insults and threats are communications too." Emma replies, with a crooked grin, leaning into you. "No doubt its trying to worm its way into your head to corrupt just like it does everything else." She puffs out a sigh, "Or, who knows, maybe its a horrifying destructive force for a reason. It's not like SEED is the epitome of honesty."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 03:20:10 am
"I struggle to think of what could be worth such destruction.  The loss of life associated with the consumption of entire worlds... it's terrifying."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 20, 2020, 04:49:54 am
"I struggle to think of what could be worth such destruction.  The loss of life associated with the consumption of entire worlds... it's terrifying."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 01:02:09 pm
"Survival." Emma responds, glancing up from a fresh sketch she starts. "They're not so dissimilar to us then."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 02:21:25 pm
"Hmm.  You're right.  By the way, what did you see when you tried the bug oil?  I had the most amazing experience..."

Describe the hallucinations caused by the oil.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 03:02:16 pm
"Nothing that interesting. A few stars shone brighter. I sobered up pretty quickly when you jumped off the roof and sprouted wings." Emma giggles. "It felt good though, so that's a plus."

She leans in and gives you a quick kiss, turning to her sketch. This one seems different, its of you, you think. However, it resembles a statue more than yourself. The texture of your armor stretches over your entire body and the androgynous mask that your armor produces is covering your face. Seven fixed wings of black metal sprout from your back, rising above the small hill you stand on. Flowers bloom between scraps of metal and destroyed rock. "I saw this though when I thought of  you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 03:16:28 pm
[15 vs 9] Emma hesitates, glancing over at you with a strange expression. She takes the paper, and wads it up, throwing it to Mitch to chomp happily on. She rises, drifting over to the desk and taking off a small case. "It was wrong, actually...there was more..." She trails off, taking a seat at the desk and working on carving small pieces of colored, oily sticks into finer shapes.

When she finishes with her artistry this time -- Its the same picture as before, the details the exact same, except for one difference. The statue is gold set upon black, and the ground around it is the black of volcanic soil, with many flowers poking out, struggling in between rocks and rubble. Nine stars rise over the statue, a multitude of hues. Nine people, robed in white, stand over a pale young man missing a leg, blood coloring his clothes a dark red. Tears of blood drip from the mask, onto the man prone beneath the statue.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 03:24:38 pm
"That... that bothers me.  It seems like an ill omen.  The noble that SEED showed me was robed in white, but otherwise I don't know what it could mean..."

Examine the young man.  Does he look familiar?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 03:44:48 pm
Emma doesn't say anything, examining the sketch, the same as you.

[19] The young man is tan of skin, with a bright shock of blond hair. His features are similar to those of William's, but far more distant. They are contorted in pain, and his skin has an unhealthy pallor to it.

[17] Emma draws out another sketch while you wait, her expression falling once more as tears burn in her eyes. Its of the promontory that the statue stands on-- it's on a small island, with a beautiful cathedral of white -- but what surrounds it is disconcerting. A great lake washing against charred and cracked cliffs.

[5] The next sketch drawn by her increasingly frantic hand is a birds-eye view of the island and the cathedral -- it lays surrounded by a massive crater that splinters the land apart. Wreckage of a dark metal is strewn outward, and from that is a mountain of rubble. The land that surrounds it is painted a dark black.

The sketches grow increasingly frantic as Emma breaks down into a sobbing mess. The massive crater splinters apart the land in many directions-- and you finally the recognize where the island would be located.

[1] The crater is centered in what would be the Holy City of SEED, cracks in the earth stretching all the way to the River Noir.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 03:57:41 pm
"N-no..."

Hold Emma close. 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 04:03:44 pm
O_o

"N-no..."

Hold Emma close. 

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 04:14:51 pm
"I..it's just a dream. A nightmare. A bad trip. That was all." Emma stammers as you pull her sobbing form close to yours. Something tells you she's trying to comfort herself more than you.  Emma cries into your chest, letting you stroke her hair, while you stare at her sketches. "I didn't---I didn't want to tell you. I didn't want you to accept..." She gestures vaguely, wiping at her red face.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 04:42:18 pm
"It's better to know.  It's always better to know, no matter how much it hurts...  and maybe you're right.  Maybe it's nothing...  we can only hope."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 04:43:03 pm
[17] "There are others!" Emma firmly states, scrubbing at her face and pulling a pad from a stack of work papers. She cracks it open.

The one on top, ripped from its place, is you, leaning on a steel gantry, looking out a massive window towards a roiling star in the distance, smiling mid-laugh, looking back towards the viewer. Your red hair is in a loose top-knot-- another is the same image, except for William and Mitch standing by. William is staring at the sun with a happy smile, while Mitch is a massive beast, all muscle, and teeth.

"See!"

[11] You take the book -- and she almost pulls it back from you, but once again slumps down, defeated. All of them involve you, in form or another. Most are happy -- there's one with you standing triumphant over a crowd of onlookers, who's heads are bowed. You look like a god, standing above them all, wings flaring forth, a nimbus of fire over your head. Another is you in a dress, rings of flowers in your hair as you look out over the mountain-side, "...you were originally wearing a uniform." Emma sniffs, "But I thought you'd look better that way."

...but many more of them depict your deaths. One has you laying in a pile of rubble, las-gun holes peppering your frame through Lucille, blood streaming from your wounds as you hold a gun and a cutter loosely. One has you laying in a field and missing a leg. A young man, about your age, is standing over you, holding the hilt of a cutter that impales your chest. A frown curls his lips. You clutch at the cutter's burning hot blade with a smoking hand, staring him down in defiance. In the sky above and behind is a massive Void-ship, all gleaming gun turrets and killing intent.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 04:48:53 pm
"So we'll pick one we like." Smile, hugs. "But where are you in all these?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 04:55:43 pm
"So we'll pick one we like." Smile, hugs. "But where are you in all these?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 05:09:00 pm
"I hope so..." Emma shrugs a shoulder, still defeated, fearful, gesturing towards the two happier ones she keeps on top. "In these, I think I was looking at you."

"If...if you think its possible...that these...might be something?"

[20] She reaches towards a balled, crumpled piece of paper on the desk, unfolding it, and extending it out with a shaking hand.

A dark figure flies high in the sky above the citadel of SEED. A Levithan of Infected tissue, bristling with turrets and rending tentacles the size of hovercrafts. It has many faces, all emitting a black squall of static light. Insectoid figures rain down on the city, as las fire pulses up towards them, and it. Infected hovercraft fly in formation, streaking towards their objectives. You fly, wings stretching out against the night sky, head turned away from the viewer as fire plays out in your hands. The city burns below you, smoke rising up to form heavy clouds. Snow sits on the bits of ground that you can see from the angle.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 05:15:38 pm
"That is our greatest weakness... lack of anti-air.  We'll have to ramp up production... and do something to ensure our vehicles will be immediately destroyed if they are captured by the enemy..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 05:47:19 pm
"I guess, yeah." Emma murmurs, wiping at her face. She pulls away, drifting into the bathroom. You hear the sink run, and she returns, pulling you into a tight hug. The two of you collapse on the bed, cuddling close to one another. Emma still has the sniffles, but eventually stops.

"I love you." Emma murmurs, sleepily, after a time.

"I love you too." You respond, smiling, giving her a peck on her forehead as she drifts off to sleep.

You cannot help but feel a lingering fear after the last image. A dark worry growing into a deep pit in your stomach. Sleep doesn't come easily -- and you start when you hear the knock on the door. You rise, getting dressed in one of your many Crusader military uniforms. You open it a crack to peer through --

-- William stands on the other side, giving a wave of his hand. "Still good to spar?" He questions.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 06:01:27 pm
"...I guess, yeah. A moment--" Grab that picture of the Leviathan, and return.

"I'm not sleeping too well anyway." Hand the paper William's way. "What do you make of this?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 06:20:33 pm
Hold on, Emma was hesitant to show us those drawings, and it was clearly very distressing for her.  We should get permission from her to show them to her brother.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 20, 2020, 06:21:26 pm
Hold on, Emma was hesitant to show us those drawings, and it was clearly very distressing for her.  We should get permission from her to show them to her brother.
yes, the. Sparring sounds good though
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 06:23:46 pm
Hold on, Emma was hesitant to show us those drawings, and it was clearly very distressing for her.  We should get permission from her to show them to her brother.

That's... fair, yeah. So a simple

"...Yeah, sure."

and we'll leave it at that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 20, 2020, 07:00:46 pm
Hold on, Emma was hesitant to show us those drawings, and it was clearly very distressing for her.  We should get permission from her to show them to her brother.

That's... fair, yeah. So a simple

"...Yeah, sure."

and we'll leave it at that.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 07:12:07 pm
You and William head towards the training room, an oft-repaired and oft-abused part of the compound. The Guards have done a great job fixing all the previous damages. You can barely tell you ripped this apart, or burned it so heavily that the concrete walls begin to crack.

Luckily for you, the rain has turned back into snow, drifting down to collect in soggy piles of mush. The cold never bothered you, so you shuck your coat as William drops a bag. The bag contains a number of implements; punching gloves, heavy, thick rubber sticks, and other training equipment that you lack.

"What d'ya wanna do first?" William drawls with a grin, peeling off his coat and overshirt.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 07:15:28 pm
Uhh rubber sticks maybe?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 07:28:36 pm
Uhh rubber sticks maybe?
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 07:31:57 pm
William nods, snatching one up and passing it to you with a grin. He takes the other, bracing his feet firmly. "I never did get to see you in an actual sword fight. No tricks can work here though." He grins, "Have you ever used a sword before?"

Do you try any tricks or do anything of note, or simply go at it?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 07:47:10 pm
Hm, have we dabbled in swordplay before? It occurs to me that I don't actually know what sort of sparring went down back at the Academy gym...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 07:54:39 pm
In the Academy, you were taught unarmed martial arts, how to use the butt and bayonet of a rifle, and how to avoid being shot. Swordmanship, if you're not mistaken, would have come up during Crusader training. You vaguely remember something from your days as Alphira, but that was with a cutter blade -- parrying with a cutter blade, you remember, is a bad idea, so the style required you to dodge the blows or deflect it...with...something.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 20, 2020, 08:00:03 pm
It seems like the most useful thing would be to act like the rubber sticks are cutter blades and continue the dodging, maybe we can try to trip him?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 08:14:36 pm
"I learned bayonets-- Alphira learned Cutters. Never swords."

Go off what we know, for now.
Maybe William can give us a pointer or two as we go.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 08:43:17 pm
"SEED, they still taught bayonets!" William gives a sharp laugh at that, and the two of you begin to circle one another, "That was something we stopped teaching Thorntons when automatics las-guns started to leak. No wonder we're losing this war."

[3+1 vs 6+2] "Affix bayonets!" William calls, then shifts forward on one foot, lunging out with his 'sword' in a straight line. You're distracted by his banter- and he prods you roughly in the side.

[12+1 vs 8+2] -- and in return you give him a harsh hack across the chest. He stumbles back with a crooked grin.

[17+1 vs 1+2] You smoothly dodge of the way of his next blow, then his next, shifting from foot to the other and back again, avoiding the attacks that come more and more rapidly. At first, William seems to have you on the defensive, but it isn't until you side-step a lunging blow and thwack him thoroughly on the back that he realizes he was playing into your hands.

[16+1 vs 13+2] The next exchange follows suit, even if William is paying more attention to you -- you manage to barely sidestep a few of his blows, or deflect them off of your own sword with a twist of an angle. On the last strike, a savage stab by William, you shift to one side, and he oversteps. You help him along with another firm thwack on his back.

William laughs as he picks himself up from the ground, brushing the snow from his clothes. "You're good, or maybe you're just distracting me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 08:55:49 pm
"Nice try to shift the blame, but if anyone here has an advantage in dirty fighting, it's you.  Ready for some more, or have you had enough?"

Bait him, and then, if he attacks, parry and riposte.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 09:11:42 pm
Good snark-- too many words. No time, is fighting!  :D

"Accusations! I'm hurt." Grin. "Had enough, then?"

Bait him, and then, if he attacks, parry and riposte.

+1

We can probably keep going at this an hour or two, if we see fit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 20, 2020, 09:13:36 pm
Good snark-- too many words. No time, is fighting!  :D

"Accusations! I'm hurt." Grin. "Had enough, then?"

Bait him, and then, if he attacks, parry and riposte.

+1

We can probably keep going at this an hour or two, if we see fit.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 09:24:33 pm
"Not yet you aren't!" William ripostes.

[3+1 vs 17+2] You trade blows, only to realize that he's changed strategies. Where once you could deflect and dodge, suddenly he's too close for that, using the edge of his sword instead of the 'point'. Less fencing and more knife-fighting. He scores several blows in quick succession, and you stumble back.

[16+1 vs 20+2] He doesn't relent, either, until you stumble back and fall on your rear from a particularly savage feint and hard swat to your chest. Your hand comes to what you're sure is going to be a bruise, staring at him with a dark look.

[8+1 vs 19+2] The next time you try to dodge, William purposefully steps into you, shoulder checking you roughly and forcing you to twist away from him -- the blade smacks your shoulder hard in return, and William stumbles back in a controlled fall to avoid your savage counter.

[12+1 vs 13+2] The soft thuds of your 'blades' impacting against one another echo through the training room as the two of you truly get down to business. At one point, they cross, and it becomes a wrestling match of strength to push down the other-- and William wins, bowling you over and knocking the rubber stick from your hand. You wince, shaking your smarting hand until the pain dulls.

"Now you're hurting." William boasts with a laugh, grinning down at you with the 'sword' at your chest, "Had enough then?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 09:51:14 pm
"Ha, you got me.  You're really damn good at that.  Can you give me some tips?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 10:04:51 pm
"The first round or two is one you can afford to lose, as long as you don't get too hurt; make your opponent compliant, and they'll never realize you've switched it up on them." William opines, extending a hand out to you. "Use that time to analyze your opponent, then strike using their weakness."

"You've got skill, but, like you said, you've got limited experience."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 10:37:37 pm
Take his hand.  "Interesting.  I wonder if that thinking could be applied to the plague as well."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 20, 2020, 10:44:33 pm
Huh, y'know what? We kinda did. Rodstadt was a disaster... our second engagement, not so much!
I dunno we can afford to purchase such complacency now tho. When the plague hits, it hits hard.

Nod "I've got like three years of memories, whatever my predecessors see fit to offer... nothing else. My combat experience has consisted largely of remembering how to set things on fire with my mind. [Angel] tricks." Take hand, rise. "It's a curious existence."

"Now." Back into a blade-stance. "I've bruises need avenging!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 20, 2020, 11:22:54 pm
William helps you up with a grin and a faux bow, dropping into an exaggerated sword fighter's stance, weapon lose in his hand. "But madam, I do not wish to fight thee!" No matter the language, or the syntax, his translation is corny to the point of making you cringe.

[16+1 vs 4+2] You parry, and he ducks, but not fast enough -- you lunge forward with a kick out of the blue. He blinks as it impacts his side, and he stumbles away. He raises a brow, and you return his grin savagely. "Alphie told me she was a pirate -- she was right!"

[13+1 vs 11+2] "That was a di-" You lunge while he's speaking, forcing him to guard against the sudden savage blow. A brief snarl curls across his face as he tries to deflect the blade, only for you to twist out of his parry and smack him in the chest with the point.

[1+1 vs 18+2] He doesn't speak or taunt now as he circles you, and you mirror his steps. His sanguine smile is back, the corners of his mouth twitching. Twisting suddenly to strike, you move to dodge -- only for his elbow to impact your chest with a hard hollow thump. It drives the air from your lungs.

[14+1 vs 4+2] The next blow catches you across the face suddenly, and sends into the snow -- you stagger back to your feet quickly, however, just in time to block William's next savage strike.

[17+1 vs 18+2][3+5 vs 12+1] The rubber bends hard, cracks echoing from the hard plastic core as you both push against the other's weapon. Both of you use your body weight and tremendous strength fully now -- instinctively, your willpowers begin to lash at one another as well. Your's is naturally stronger, and William flinches. A wicked grin flashes across his face as he leans in -- and he kisses you, just for a brief second. Surprised, you stumble, and the swords break.

"I win!" William grins, as you land on your ass. You stare at him, shocked, but he just grins, offering you a hand.

"Just remember this: The skilled swordsman and tactician sometimes feign weakness...and always, always, does the unexpected whenever possible."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 20, 2020, 11:37:30 pm
"You really are a rascal.  If you're not careful, Emma will try to burn you alive, and I'm not sure if I'd be able to stop her."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 21, 2020, 06:54:02 am
"You really are a rascal.  If you're not careful, Emma will try to burn you alive, and I'm not sure if I'd be able to stop her."
i don’t think threats are wise
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 21, 2020, 09:01:46 am
"You really are a rascal.  If you're not careful, Emma will try to burn you alive, and I'm not sure if I'd be able to stop her."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 11:22:00 am
Urgh. I knew this was coming, ever since we got back from the front this afternoon... and you know what? I'm irritated. I'm irritated, and I want more than a vague threat and a smirk.

Raise our will about us, a shield in anger. "Is this a sparring match or a tryst?"
Rise, step back. "I'm-- I'm not Alphira, William. Her feelings aren't mine. You know that-- don't you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 01:19:16 pm
"I'll ask her for permission next time." William still grinning as you rise to your feet. "I prefer bastard, though. It seems more dashing than just rascal."

"I do have a question, however." You ask, gently, calmly.

"Shoot."

[4+5 vs 8+1]  "Is this a sparring match or a tryst?" Your willpower lashes up, in anger and confusion, your voice harsh. William flinches but meets your gaze, his own willpower a similar, protective shroud about him. "I'm-- I'm not Alphira, William. Her feelings aren't mine. You know that-- don't you?"

[17][1] "If I thought you and her shared the same feelings I wouldn't have bothered, Phebe." William's response is calm, level. "Did you really think I would be attracted to her? She would have let me die in Rodstadt without a backward glance."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 01:33:51 pm
...irritation gone. I have no words left.

We can't go through with this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 21, 2020, 01:49:34 pm
I don’t think the exchange was needed
“No. I don;t know what I am or was thinking. I’m sorry”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 02:08:36 pm
This is becoming strange and confusing.  William is our brother/son/clone, right?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 02:16:13 pm
This is becoming strange and confusing.  William is our brother/son/clone, right?

That made me laugh hysterically.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 02:17:00 pm
Ah... successor, perhaps, would be the best term here. He's got some of our genetics in his blood for sure.

This has been strange and confusing ever since Rodstadt, truth be told. Won't be getting less so any time soon.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 02:32:20 pm
"Let's just pretend that this never happened.  Emma and I love each other and we are in a committed relationship."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 02:54:41 pm
"I don't know. I don't know. You were--"
"...you were bleeding. Bleeding. Broken. I couldn't go back to Emma and know-- I'd let her brother die--"

Sigh. "Brother. Brother-in-arms. Brother-in-law? But more than that-- I can't--"

--and a pause, and a breath, and what ZBridges said, with perhaps a "Please?" in the middle for good measure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 03:03:11 pm
"I understand, and as such I've no clue what you're talking about now." William returns, politely, crisply, smiling as he packs up his sparring equipment with no real haste. "Regardless, the first non-Thornton Warmachine is in production -- that young lady who organized them all...and that hovercraft you wanted packed with cameras is due to arrive tomorrow morn. Emma mentioned something about arranging an escort of gunships for a flyover of Plague territory." William dutifully informs you, "Oh and Iyal returned for a bit to get some demolition charges. So she's still alive. Funnily enough, we only noticed because she left a receipt."

"The accountant is still faffing about with the production costs. We've managed to organize it into how much it would cost per Warmachine produced, so you can give an order for total number of units and send the bill to SEED, as usual."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 03:08:16 pm
Well ain't that professional! I'm pleasantly surprised.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 03:08:24 pm
"I'll accompany the flyover to ensure that it isn't intercepted.  Excellent, can you give me an estimate for what the cost per unit might look like?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 03:10:01 pm
"I'll accompany the flyover to ensure that it isn't intercepted.  Excellent, can you give me an estimate for what the cost per unit might look like?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 03:14:35 pm
"Five to ten credits per." William replies, shrugging his shoulder. "So we'll say nine credits per Warmachine produced, equipped with only a Thornton assault rifle -- but that's not counting upkeep, salary, and so on. After the war, that price will change. It's on emergency discount right now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 03:16:39 pm
"And should I still expect a production rate of four units per month?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 03:27:57 pm
"Three would be a better estimate, so you're not disappointed when one dies or something. That includes therapy to get them used to it, and all that assorted training."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 03:40:54 pm
"If we wanted to ramp up production, what kind of investment would you need?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 03:57:49 pm
"All told...Lets say ten thousand credits, and we can pump up production to sixteen a month. After that, we'll need time to train new sawbones and such."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 04:00:39 pm
That's... a lot.  I'm not sure if that would be feasible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 21, 2020, 04:06:15 pm
That's... a lot.  I'm not sure if that would be feasible.
we’re talking about SEED, I’m sure he has the money
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 04:07:45 pm
I wonder how that works.  Is there a tax and does SEED print the money?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 05:51:41 pm
"Big bill... still, perhaps doable once we tap SEED's militia-funding in earnest. I'll push to fund Warmachine conversion for thirty, and we'll expand from there."

"How's young Moore these days, by the by?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 06:07:19 pm
"He's fine, and healthy. In a couple of years I intend to start having him make rounds with all the village heads, so he can learn leadership from them, especially since there's no need to kill you. Yet." William replies with a grin, slinging the bag over his shoulder. "Had a bit of the sniffles, but Silas got him on some medicine and he's right as nightly rain, now."

"He's growing up with a retired Defender's family now. A good life. Not an easy one, like Emmas, or a rough one, like an orphan's. Perfectly in the middle."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 07:40:06 pm
Smile faint. "Good. He'll have his shot at a happy childhood... and who knows? Maybe by the time he's of age, we'll have won this war; and his generation can live out its days in peace."

"G'night, William."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 07:46:31 pm
"Here's hoping." William nods, stepping out the door with a lift of his free hand in a wave, leaving you alone in the courtyard as snow falls from the sky. "See you later, Phebe."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 07:47:39 pm
...right. Back to bed with us.

This was strange.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 21, 2020, 07:54:29 pm
...right. Back to bed with us.

This was strange.
no, we have to wait for the hovercraft
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 07:57:37 pm
That's coming in the morning. We've time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 08:08:41 pm
In a strange mood, you drift back to your bedroom. Mitch sleeps soundly, an ear shifting towards you as you enter. Emma is still sleeping, and after a brief shower, you reclaim your place beside her. You fall into a dreamless sleep soon thereafter, only to be roused the next morning by Emma giving you a chaste peck on the cheek.

"I'd bring you breakfast in bed, but I'm still trying to get that information you wanted. The flyover is ready to go when you give the word, so...be careful." She explains dutifully, flashing you a smile as she leaves. "I ordered breakfast to be brought up for you though!"

Then she's gone, Mitch trailing behind on a chew marked chain. A piece of paper nearby explains what landing pad the ships are waiting at -- they'll be ready for liftoff as soon as you arrive. As if on queue, as soon as you finish reading, a guard knocks on the door. You dress, and receive them, and they set your meal down on the cluttered desk. A porridge of grain meal, with dried fruit mixed in. Pancakes, smothered in grape syrup, and a lot of sauteed insect meat cut into thin ribbons. Beside that is a fluffy looking [omelet] folded into a quarter of the size, the top covered with creamy, tart cheese.

You tuck in as you read what you've been given in terms of an escort team -- its nothing special, you think, but probably an expensive allotment. There will be six gunships to escort the scout hover-craft, which, itself is unarmed. You have enough fuel to reach the western coast and back, as well. The escort vessels have been outfitted with anti-air autocannons, and so have about ten thousand rounds of exploding rapid-fire ordinance each. The pilots, you note, have all had air to air combat experience, as well.

They might have been the only ones in all of the Crusaders, you reckon. Air to air combat here is still in its infancy.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 08:24:47 pm
Warplans. Yes.

Go don our war-kit, and stock up on nutrient cubes.

Say, Alphira... this shield-belt of ours. Is there a way we can speed its charging, like how we power our armor?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 08:37:06 pm
Warplans. Yes.

Go don our war-kit, and stock up on nutrient cubes.

Say, Alphira... this shield-belt of ours. Is there a way we can speed its charging, like how we power our armor?
+1

Emma's vision is worrisome... we may need to boost anti-air production to prepare for the plague's change of tactics.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 08:43:23 pm
Absolutely.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 21, 2020, 08:46:56 pm
I think we need to head for the launchpad now for the air scouting mission
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 08:49:51 pm
Soon! We'll equip, maybe hash out a plan or two with our underlings-- then we take flight. :)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 09:29:59 pm
Go to a world that isn't a backwater plague-infested hellhole and order a new one, unfortunately. That thing is an antique. It recharges on its own, but if you mess with it, I'm sure it'll break...we could try to find a way to get it to accept hydrogen cells...maybe. Take a look at it.

You retrieve your washed and mended armor from the guards in charge of cleaning it, taking it back to your room. Everything gleams, and you pop open your submachine gun to take a look at the insides. The lenses have been replaced, you note, and the inside is dry and free of dirt. Your guards have done well -- your outlander longknife is even properly oiled. You scratch at the skin of your face while you inspect it.

Faith knocks at your door, standing in the hallway as she addresses you, "Lady Pheobe. Iyal apologizes for the lack of progress. The agent is a difficult nut to crack. She does not dwell in a house or rented room in the city, returning every night to a heavily guarded building on the western side of the Holy City. She believes that she might be able to use her daily route-- but there will be collateral. It's along a busy backstreet, and she has guards. She wants your approval."

Regardless of your answer, the Warmachine captain withdraws herself with a respectful duck of her head.

After checking your panoply is tightly bound, you activate it with a twist of those silicon atoms in the gloves. There's the unpleasant sensation of pain, of wrongness, but it fades, replaced with comfort. [Good morning, Pheobe.] It offers politely, crisply. [Today's helpful notation: If you're feeling pain -- you're probably about to die!]

Helpful.

[Would you like another?]

...No.

[15+1] You exhale a sigh, looking over yourself once more. Then you glance in Emma's cosmetics mirror, scrubbing at the skin of your face with your fingernails as it begins to itch and burn -- something wriggles beneath the skin, many, many black little worms in your veins, you begin to breath hard but then stop, shutting your eyes -- you stop yourself from itching any further.

Lucille. Diagnostic.

[Delusional Parasitosis, brought on by extended exposure to the Plague. There is no cause for concern, Pheobe. Administering a low level antipsychotic.]

The little worms fade away as you catch your breath, staring into the mirror. Everything feels a little less real now, though. You shake your head, lifting out of your seat and pulling on your helmet-- the mask is still down, and it brings you great comfort -- and hides the redness on your cheek.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 21, 2020, 09:34:25 pm
Approval granted
Go to the launchpad
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 09:45:16 pm
[Lucile, what is the prognosis for this disease?]

Approval granted
Go to the launchpad

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 21, 2020, 09:50:30 pm
[Lucile, what is the prognosis for this disease?]
delusional Parasitosis is where you don’t actually have parasites, we don;t have parasites, it;s a hallucination, hence the antipsychotics
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 09:51:07 pm


[Unkown. Recommended Treatment is: a daily dosage of anti-psychotics, time away from Plague-Infected creatures -- psychiatric leave. More than necessary sleep, meditation, and exercise.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 09:53:57 pm
Edited out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 10:23:50 pm
You rise with a slight yawn, stepping out of your room. Your guards, man and Warmachine alike make to follow you, but you dismiss them -- the pad is close.

Seven ships lay idling on the pad, and the pilots are running through their pre-flight checks or loading their vessels with ammunition or fuel. All of that stops when they see you approach. They lower their heads and submit themselves readily to your inspection. And you circle around, your face hidden, inscrutable behind your mask. You notice something, however -- each ship bears the name 'Talon of Alphira', followed by a number.

Each combat ship, however, is slapdash. The guns are mounted in protective casings, with freshly assembled windows the only view. No aiming system here, nothing besides a man in a gun in a dangerous position. The survey ship too is very makeshift. Cameras point out at many angles, operated by some of the crew. The cameras have internal film rolls -- no digital technology.

The crew numbers more than would be in normal operation. Normal Crusader crews have two pilots, these have two pilots, four gunners each and a radioman. They're all dressed in very thick woolen clothes, and you give an approving nod. Their faces are also hidden behind crude oxygen masks.

Luckily, William has provided them all with radios, so communications no doubt have been improved.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 10:35:40 pm
We have miniaturized sustainable fusion reactors, but we don't have computers.  More forbidden technology.

"Thank you for undertaking this difficult mission.  I will protect you from the plague, but in the event that a craft is headed for a crash landing, you must ensure that all technology is completely and utterly destroyed.  Do you have the requisite explosives to do that?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 21, 2020, 10:53:00 pm
An officer, judging by the false gold seven wings upon his collar, gestures, bringing you on into the cramped analog cockpit. There's only a single display, and it shows four engines in the green, and a fuel gauge at full. He gestures down -- a massive bomb of some sort sits in the middle of the cockpit, with gauges and mechanisms on it.

"We set timer as we leave. If we do not return in eight hours, it will explode. It also has a manual arming sequence, shared by the pilot and co-pilot. Flight time from here to the western shore and back again should be seven hours, if we don't make good progress."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 10:57:58 pm
That seems sufficient.  Is there anything else that we need to check?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 21, 2020, 11:09:56 pm
Guh, we approved that street ambush? That's gonna be messy, conspicuous-- traceable. Was that really something to approve so lightly?

Also also, that psychosis dealt cohesion damage. I am concerned.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 21, 2020, 11:13:09 pm
That was a high-value target, in my opinion.  If SEED wants to pursue our death after our little stunt inside its organs, it will probably choose to do so through its special services.

I trust Iyal to do a good job.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 22, 2020, 12:02:06 am
"Any other questions or requests, Mother Alphira?" The pilot commander questions, crossing his arms behind his back as you finish your inspection of the craft. The insides are small, the gunner seats cramped and uncomfortable, between the belt-fed automatic weapons that line the outside of the vessel.

[17][1] You shift unsteadily, feeling less and less connected to the world around you. Sensation fades away for a moment, as the world crystallizes and shifts. Lines radiate out from this point in time, stretching into the infinite future. Black ichor drops from the sky. The smell of burning flesh and cordite fills the air. You look up at the captain -- his face is a twisted skull, charred and burned. The hovercrafts all lay in ruin, blackened hulks of metal twisting and billowing with fire.

You shut your eyes tight, clenching your fists hard enough that your bones creak, and nerves send pain through your system.

"Mother Alphira?" The commander questions, concerned by your silence, unable to see your pained expression behind the mask. Everything is intact, everything is whole as the sun shines down on the Holy City of SEED.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 12:12:06 am
Bad omens...

"Sorry, please excuse me.  Commander, do you have any reservations about this mission?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: King Zultan on April 22, 2020, 08:28:19 am
Bad omens...

"Sorry, please excuse me.  Commander, do you have any reservations about this mission?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 01:06:38 pm
Omens? Maybe. I'm thinking more memetic damage.

Status bar please? I wanna know what this is doing to our cohesion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 22, 2020, 01:59:38 pm
"No, Mother Alphira." The Commander replies honestly, "We all must die some day, and death in service to SEED is a noble death indeed."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 22, 2020, 02:03:02 pm
“Onward”
Watch for aircraft as well as locations of plague brains(colossuses) and artillery
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 02:37:19 pm
No change... curious. Worrisome.

Nod. "Such is our creed! Let us fly swift, nevertheless, that such nobility may be kept from us awhile yet."

“Onward”
Watch for aircraft as well as locations of plague brains(colossuses) and artillery


+1

Keep things as high as the magnification on our cameras will allow. Low profile.
With luck, we'll be in and out before anything notices our intrusion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 22, 2020, 02:38:52 pm
Why did you think hallucinations messed with cohesion? It hasn’t before, the antipsychotic drugs were the things that messed with cohesion, not the ha;lucinstions themselves
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 02:40:35 pm
Was all in the same update. Anti-psychotics seemed the probable cause, but I wanted to be sure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 03:56:31 pm
Once more unto the breach.

No change... curious. Worrisome.

Nod. "Such is our creed! Let us fly swift, nevertheless, that such nobility may be kept from us awhile yet."

“Onward”
Watch for aircraft as well as locations of plague brains(colossuses) and artillery


+1

Keep things as high as the magnification on our cameras will allow. Low profile.
With luck, we'll be in and out before anything notices our intrusion.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 22, 2020, 04:04:15 pm
Once more unto the breach.

No change... curious. Worrisome.

Nod. "Such is our creed! Let us fly swift, nevertheless, that such nobility may be kept from us awhile yet."

“Onward”
Watch for aircraft as well as locations of plague brains(colossuses) and artillery


+1

Keep things as high as the magnification on our cameras will allow. Low profile.
With luck, we'll be in and out before anything notices our intrusion.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 22, 2020, 04:22:22 pm
[13] "Understood." The Commander and his crew finish their last preparations, and you hear his voice and the voice of the other teams all checking off inside your helmet. The hovercrafts slowly lift-off of their landing pads, idling in the sky while you prepare. It takes you a moment to make your wings, your willpower lashing, and coiling uncontrollably.

They flare forth, and you rise into the sky. The ships form up in formation behind you, a 'v' spread out over many [meters]. Close enough to intervene but far enough away to prevent a single burst of gunfire from destroying all of them.

The sky is cold as you rise higher, and you're glad for the insulation in the underlay. At a specific elevation, the mask begins to pump more oxygen for your greedy lungs. The city falls away below you, gleaming and beautiful, busy with foot traffic.

[19] You extend your wings out as far as you can, showing off for the people, no doubt below. You can feel eyes upon you, and a smile, unbidden, comes to your lips. You let the relax into a more comfortable position as soon as you leave the city behind. The earth flows below you, giving way to your speed and distance. Farmlands lie fallow for the winter, even if the sun feels warm on the black of your armor.

The hour to the line is uneventful, but the change is rapid—a sickly brown and gray smear across the landscape, streaked with fires. You can see the lines of las-gun pulses impacting gray masses that throw themselves at the strength of man. Artillery fire booms through the gentle hills, echoing up to you.

[Recording artillery positions and priority targets for future use. Map compiling.]

You let yourself drift back, informing another ship to take the lead while you fly above the scout ship.

["We're capturing images now, Mother Alphira. We have more than enough film for this."] The lead pilot reports over the radio.

["Good. Keep in mind you are the VIP in this operation. If you guys fail, everything will have been for nothing."]

["Yes, Mother Alphira."]

[10 vs. 5+3] Nothing approaches you, and no gunfire rakes the skies. You are still undetected.

The earth below has many strange gray structures, set at regular angles across the ground. They twist into the sky like massive trees, giving the occasional twitch. Dots of gray surround them, and you note a few slumbering colossi resting at their base.  Whenever you fly over one, brief static hisses through your helmet. Lucille documents it all with devotion.


[11 vs. 16+3] [Five incoming aircraft, six o'clock.] Lucille informs both you and the others, you glance back over your wings -- las-fire begins to rake through the formation. The gunships move in close, shielding the Scout.

[19 vs. 12] The autocannons give a retort, and one of the plague craft goes down in a ball of flames.

[20 vs. 18] The plague hovercrafts increase their speed, tentacles twisting out to try and strike at the Crusader crafts. The autocannons whir, exploding shells ripping two more of the twisted machines from the sky.

["Down three."] Comes the Crusader's report.

[5 vs. 3] ["Down four."] Comes another ship, and another enemy explodes into a ball of flames, spiraling towards the ground below.

[3 vs. 9][15] Those tentacles on the ships latch on to another, ripping apart the engines. Number five has been caught, and las-fire from the sides of the plague ship rip begins to tear it apart-- ["Hail Alphira!"] The explosion sends shockwaves, even as you twist to try and render aid. The two crafts both go down in a ball of fire.

Light bursts of las-fire begin to pepper the sky, but many dissipate before they can do anything more than scorch the sides of the ship.

["They know we're here. We're about thirty minutes out from the coast."]

You look down, and the Plague has developed much of the land here, more and more strange structures, some of them belching smoke, some leaking a dark gray miasma that burns into the soil There is no grass here, no greenery, just lakes and ponds of red liquid. Small dots you think might be massive insects drift between basins in significant groups.

[11] Those are algae farms. On more civilized worlds, those are the primary method of feeding the populace. With the right strain, you can produce large amounts of protein from sunlight and water alone.

The thirty minutes pass--

And the coast spreads out in front of you. A massive sea stretches away towards a western continent, across a sea of murky red water. Towering cliffs of shattered red rock drop into the ocean. Upon it, large, gray vessels resembling squids with great flat decks marking their flesh drift between the distant shores. Long legs propel them forwards, scouring up red murk from the depths as they drift from one root-like appendage to another that jut out of the ocean.

But what is truly disconcerting is the 'factories' on the coast, with great organs pulling water from the ocean. Steam billows up, and deep below, no doubt, are many, many fusion reactors cobbled in between great blue-gray bones and pulsing gray organs.  Such 'factories' consume the entire coast, no doubt producing the endless horde of these abominations.

[2] You see it just as the hovercrafts begin to turn around -- it lies on the horizon, a dark shape in the sky surrounded by a fleet of infected hover ships. It moves slowly, more like a dirigible than a jet, massive tentacles drooping down from its sides, pulsing and twitching with accumulated electricity.  Las-cannons shiver and shudder, flicking here and there, jutting from armor of blue-gray plates, protecting the hull of the vessel.

It's the size of a small void-ship, and it drifts closer and closer, becoming larger and larger.

[19] [Levithan class infected. Predicted target based on trajectory and strategic importance: The Holy City. If it stops to refuel, it will be there by midnight, based on speed.]



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 04:31:56 pm
"Mission abort.  Focus all firepower on the leviathan."

[Lucile, what is the fastest way to bring down that sort of plague vessel?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 04:33:08 pm
...Emma was right.

Do we have the firepower for this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 04:34:38 pm
Unclear.  If we can identify a way to make it fail quickly with minimal firepower, then we may be able to take it down.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 04:36:17 pm
Right.

[Lucile, what is the fastest way to bring down that sort of plague vessel?]

+1

No orders yet.
We may have to head back to Holy City and muster a larger force.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 04:40:07 pm
Unfortunately, I'm not sure that will be possible.  Supposedly, this is pretty much the full extent of our anti-air capabilities.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 22, 2020, 04:47:18 pm
[Orbital bombardment.] Lucille informs you, crisply, polite. [As such capabilities are beyond our current auxiliary technology level... the destruction of the engines. It cannot move without them. Nuclear strike. Destruction of fuel supply. Destruction of reactor cores. There are many ways to bring it down. All of them are difficult.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 04:55:05 pm
"Approach the plague ship and begin evasive manuevers.  I will attempt to overload its fusion reactors to disable the engine while you engage it."

Approach the plague ship once the distraction is in place and attempt to destructively overload one of the reactors.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 22, 2020, 04:57:43 pm
"Approach the plague ship and begin evasive manuevers.  I will attempt to overload its fusion reactors to disable the engine while you engage it."

Approach the plague ship once the distraction is in place and attempt to destructively overload one of the reactors.
Arter overloading one, repeat this process on others, until the plague ship falls
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 05:00:52 pm
"Approach the plague ship and begin evasive manuevers.  I will attempt to overload its fusion reactors to disable the engine while you engage it."

Approach the plague ship once the distraction is in place and attempt to destructively overload one of the reactors.
Arter overloading one, repeat this process on others, until the plague ship falls

Run our intentions by Alphira, quickly. This is one of those times I really want an extra voice beside us, to tell us "no wait stop" if need be.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Eschar on April 22, 2020, 05:07:47 pm
"Approach the plague ship and begin evasive manuevers.  I will attempt to overload its fusion reactors to disable the engine while you engage it."

Approach the plague ship once the distraction is in place and attempt to destructively overload one of the reactors.
Arter overloading one, repeat this process on others, until the plague ship falls

Run our intentions by Alphira, quickly. This is one of those times I really want an extra voice beside us, to tell us "no wait stop" if need be.

Aren't we Alphira?

Are you referring to Lucille?

Either way, I have a lot to catch up on.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 05:12:32 pm
Alphira is the "angel" name we chose for ourselves, but it comes from a personality that lives inside Phoebe that is also named Alphira.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 22, 2020, 05:16:52 pm
[6] This battle will be hard -- and not over as quickly as you think. These pilots will certainly die. You might die. Send the scout vessel and one other back to start the evacuation of the Holy City. Inform SEED of its possible demise. Pray to the Endless Empress to grant us her gifts. Strength of will, in the face of our death. Victory, even if we shall fall here. Glory, in our success.

Alphira, the scourge of planets, Angel of Fire, daughter of the Empyreal King of Pirates -- she's afraid.

[20] SEED must not be captured. Tell them that, make sure they know. The data and machines it possesses can bring the Plague back to full strength. The Empyre will be ravaged once again, and trillions of lives lost as result.

Do you wish to proceed?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 05:27:23 pm
"Send the scout ship and one other ship back to the Holy City and begin an evacuation.  Rouse William and Emma Thornton and tell them to prepare for battle against a flying plague leviathan.  Know this: if SEED is corrupted by the plague, all worlds will burn."

"All other vessels: approach and begin evasive manuevers."

Proceed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 05:47:48 pm
This... this is it, isn't it? We're going to die here.

metaphysical hugs
"Guide my hand-- Alphira Sol-- teacher-- friend-- guide my hand--"

"Send the scout ship and one other ship back to the Holy City and begin an evacuation.  Rouse William and Emma Thornton and tell them to prepare for battle against a flying plague leviathan.  Know this: if SEED is corrupted by the plague, all worlds will burn."

"All other vessels: approach and begin evasive manuevers."

Proceed.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 22, 2020, 05:51:11 pm
This... this is it, isn't it? We're going to die here.

metaphysical hugs
"Guide my hand-- Alphira Sol-- teacher-- friend-- guide my hand--"

"Send the scout ship and one other ship back to the Holy City and begin an evacuation.  Rouse William and Emma Thornton and tell them to prepare for battle against a flying plague leviathan.  Know this: if SEED is corrupted by the plague, all worlds will burn."

"All other vessels: approach and begin evasive manuevers."

Proceed.

+1
not just one hand, surely
guide our body
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 05:51:30 pm
Is an expression.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 22, 2020, 06:52:40 pm
Atmospheric metal. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JFYVcz7h3o0)
Atmospheric non-metal. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9OZ-yNdKw3o)



[15] ["Ye-yes Mother Alphira."] There's a brief discussion. To your satisfaction and amusement, they're arguing over who gets to stay, as opposed to who gets to leave. Even the pilots of the scout ship want to fight and do what they can, but the Commander overrules them. Number Six and the Scout finish their turn, heading east.

[11] You twist a nimbus of fire around you as the hover crafts engage the Levithan's Escort. It turns, great cannons lashing into the sky. Energy splashes into the air sending shockwaves rattling through your bones. You join them, drawing your cutter, amplifying the fire within, until it burns brighter than the sinking sun.

[20 vs. 1+4] Your first strike rips through two of the plague craft that were flying too close to one another, sending them spiraling in a ball of fire. You continue your approach, a comet in the sky. More of the Levithan's shots ring out, but they miss, burning out into the atmosphere above.

[12 vs. 8+4] The pilots are doing as well as expected. Three remain, however, destroying man of the escort with lancing autocannon strikes that shred the infected vehicles with explosives. The fourth of the Crusader attack craft is burning toward the earth.

[15 vs. 3+4] You lash out with your willpower, sending the Infected to their death as you gracefully dodge las-gun blasts. You inch closer to the Levithan.

[11 vs. 10+4] The shockwave of an allied vessel feeds into the turbulence as its shot down -- two remain, all autocannons firing until the barrels glow red. Explosive shells and the associated burning cordite smell fill the air. The flak burns through the air all around, sometimes striking one of the Infected ships.

The Levithan's cannons ring out once more, striking where you were- not where you are.

[9 vs. 17+4] ["Mother Alphira-- forgive us!"] The radio screams out as another of your allies is devoured by las-gun fire, ripping apart in the sky into a ball of burning shrapnel. You're so close, so close!

[14 vs. 10+4] You burn through another set of Infected Hover Craft -- las-gun fire rips through your shield from behind, shooting through your wings and narrowly missing your body. An explosion propels you forward-- the last Hovercraft, number three, explodes in the middle of the Infected Hovercraft, destroying the grouping that shot at you.

[18 vs. 4] The Levithan's cannons roar, blasting through the air and the tight grouping of Infected craft. It misses you, and you come to approach it-- willing yourself forward. You try and feel the reactors within-- there's many, and they're too far away for you to do anything. You hover for a split second, uncertain.

[19]We're a pirate Patches. I'll show you what that cutter blade is for! You fly forward as fast as your agility will alow, dropping down on the top of the Levithan's plated armor. You extend your cutter to its full length, letting the fires blaze forward as you stab it into the organism below you-- the wind whips at you-- and you flinch as your armor cracks on the leg, on the shoulder, on the side of your chest.

[18] You, however, do not falter, carving at the plated flesh of this creature, and with a final sizzle, you rip it open, revealing a cramped, organic passageway within -- you drop down as more las-gun fire tries to scour you off of the Levithan. The sound of clicking emerges from the hallway behind you.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 07:02:27 pm
Inject some ballistic.  If not immediately attacked, eat quickly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 22, 2020, 07:12:52 pm
Inject some ballistic.  If not immediately attacked, eat quickly.
we use ballistic a lot, maybe our body has grown tolerant to it
Turn around and strike at the clicking with our cutter
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 07:29:34 pm
...

...well done, young godling. Well done!
Now for the love of all, keep your wits and your will close about you. We've grand and grisly work ahead.

We're not safe here, too much las-fire. Quick now, into the hallway with a gout of fire-- we'll make our own cover.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 07:35:39 pm
...

...well done, young godling. Well done!
Now for the love of all, keep your wits and your will close about you. We've grand and grisly work ahead.

We're not safe here, too much las-fire. Quick now, into the hallway with a gout of fire-- we'll make our own cover.
This and then inject some ballistic.  Worst-case scenario, we've built up a tolerance and nothing happens.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 22, 2020, 08:17:42 pm
[17] You take cover further in the hallway, away from the hole you carved into the creature. Away from the clicking. A small, sinuous insect on long legs clicks its mandibles together, a human's face twisted into its gray flesh.

[18 vs 1] [15] You burn it away, and it screeches in pain as you continue down the tight, organic, gray hallway, trying not to think too hard about your situation. When you're safe from any stray las-fire shots that might come in through the hole you made; you lift your mask, shoveling food into your face, and then finish it with an injection of ballistic.

[7+1 vs 3][9+1 vs 14][13+1 vs 5]Small, skittering insects of red begin to swarm, approaching you with stingers of red hot plasma flashing at their tips. You lash out, burning away a few of them-- only for one to jump upon you, slamming its stinger into your already weakened side. You scream as your flesh burns and parts beneath the 'stringer. You bring your elbow down with a sickening crunch of bug-flesh, and then stomp it for good measure. You pull out the heated stinger with your gloved hands -- breathing hard as your system numbs itself and tossing the blood-soaked piece of metal down.

One of the reactors is downward, somewhere, and you note, with a focus of your awareness, that it is one of three. Too much flesh lies between you and it for you to reach out with your willpower and Overload it.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 08:24:40 pm
Use the Cutter to carve out a path towards the first reactor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 08:41:29 pm
Guh, more cohesion damage. We may have to take a week off when this is over, for recovery... wouldn't that be nice.

Anyway. If we're taking this shortcut, we're doing it properly.
Heal. Inferno. If the air's water is insufficient, draw from the oozing walls. We're carving our way down in style.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 08:43:49 pm
It may require fewer calories to attempt to cauterize the wound with the Cutter, as well as use the Cutter to create a path.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 22, 2020, 08:55:56 pm
Use the Cutter to carve out a path towards the first reactor.
+1 to the Cutter path
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 22, 2020, 09:01:01 pm
You deliberate as yet another clicking sound begins to draw near -- the Cutter will take longer, but the Inferno will require more calories.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 22, 2020, 09:03:02 pm
You deliberate as yet another clicking sound begins to draw near -- the Cutter will take longer, but the Inferno will require more calories.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 22, 2020, 09:03:45 pm
We don't have time for this.

Inferno. Get a good stiff whirl going, lash out as we carve at anything that draws nigh.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 09:45:10 pm
Hmm.  I'm not sure what would be better.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 22, 2020, 09:56:11 pm
Well, how many critters seem to be the source of the clicking? We might be able to neutralize them first, and then use the cutter at our leisure, saving our calories.

Also, what is the blast radius from overloading the reactor likely to be? We need to make sure it's smaller than the smallest distance we can reliably Overload from.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 10:07:41 pm
Try the cutter first.  If it doesn't work out, I would be fine with switching to inferno.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 22, 2020, 10:09:36 pm
Many horrors approach within the dark -- this vessel is full of them.

[1+1 vs 17] You begin the process of cutting into the flesh, taking your time to form a square with the cutter blade -- a pair of mandibles lash out from the darkness in a sudden burst of speed, crunching around your left shin. Your armor shatters in the creature's jaws.

[12+1 vs 5] You boot meets its face hard, smashing its buggy gray brains all over the floor as a human face on its shoulder mouths gibberish, staring at you with all too human eyes. You swallow beneath the mask.

[7+1] The fires don't come, and you begin to breathe hard as panic rises up within you. The corridor is too tight and the chittering horrors in the dark are too close. Your vision blurs behind the mask -- It's starting to feel like a nightmare. This is all starting to feel like a nightmare.

[20] Your let your Inferno loose, ripping through a great portion of the inside of the Leviathan. It screams in pain, a great echoing sound pouring through it as you steady a nimbus and begin to burn away flesh to make your way down toward the reactor. You fall into the chamber surrounding the reactor-- an organic structure made of blue-gray bone, membranes of flesh between the spokes radiating upward. Another corridor leads out--

--and for the moment, there is silence in the pitch-black darkness that lingers on the edge of your vision.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 10:20:36 pm
You must not fear.  Fear is the mind-killer.  Let the fear wash over you and through you, and when it is gone there will be nothing.  Only you will remain.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 22, 2020, 10:25:12 pm
We need to overload the reactor and direct the blast, just like a lasgun.  Direct it towards the last reactor, two for one or at least cut a large enough hole in it to rush to the area.  Hopefully we have enough practice we wont need to force too much of the equation and to blast it away from us mostly.

Chant whatever it takes to focus the mind.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 22, 2020, 11:12:50 pm
Attempt to destructively overload the nearest reactor and funnel the resulting blast towards either of the two other reactors.  If the other reactors are in unknown locations, instead funnel the blast to strike as much of the plague ship as possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on April 23, 2020, 04:28:47 am
Attempt to destructively overload the nearest reactor and funnel the resulting blast towards either of the two other reactors.  If the other reactors are in unknown locations, instead funnel the blast to strike as much of the plague ship as possible.
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 05:22:42 am
Attempt to destructively overload the nearest reactor and funnel the resulting blast towards either of the two other reactors.  If the other reactors are in unknown locations, instead funnel the blast to strike as much of the plague ship as possible.
+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 23, 2020, 07:59:52 am
Attempt to destructively overload the nearest reactor and funnel the resulting blast towards either of the two other reactors.  If the other reactors are in unknown locations, instead funnel the blast to strike as much of the plague ship as possible.
+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 09:30:07 am
Peace. Courage. Peace. Courage. Peace. Courage.

If we die, we die in fire's bright comfort.


Attempt to destructively overload the nearest reactor and funnel the resulting blast towards either of the two other reactors.  If the other reactors are in unknown locations, instead funnel the blast to strike as much of the plague ship as possible.
+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 04:37:25 pm
[9+1][13+1][10+1] You form the energy barriers required to direct such a blast, relying on half-remember formulas that Alphira provides. It's difficult to focus on all of this at once, your multi-tasking assisted by the Ballistic you took. You breath out, then, with hopeful heart, you reach into the reactor with your will, feeling the moderated thrum of energy that pulses through the entire ship. You draw it out, cycling it faster and faster until the heat builds within, until the emergency vents fail to fire -- melted shut as they are. It roils with superheated, compressed hydrogen, building, and building--

[17] It explodes with a sudden burst of energy -- and it follows the channels of energy outward, towards the other reactor. The room blackens with heat, and you begin to sweat within your armor as the temperature spikes to incredible temperatures. You shut your eyes against the beam, which burns at them even through the lenses of the mask.

You stagger, breathing hard, smelling iron, but stay standing. Something screams, but the sound is distant and weak after the noise of the reactor ripping itself apart.Where the first reactor was is nothing but a glassy colored crater in the flesh of the Levithan. Veins and tubes dripping liquid water and coolant to collect at the bottom.

A massive gouge, taller than you and wider than you are tall, is scored through many hallways and corridors, down into another chamber where the faint glow of another fusion reactor is visible. Scorched and burned insects twitch feebly, trying to drag themselves to you, but succumbing to their wounds.

You move towards the next --

[12+1 vs 5] [d:3/2] You pivot towards a sound, peeling your SMG off your chest and laying into the collection of writhing tentacle blades that tries to rend you to shreds. It screeches as chunks of its tainted flesh explode into superheated steam. The automatic fire tears it apart, and you continue on your path--

[2+1 vs 7] [hl:13]You wince as something knocks you back, cracking your armor too close for comfort near a sensitive area. You glare through your mask.

[15+1 vs 11][d:1/1] You spray the creature with automatic las-gun fire -- and it collapses when a few of the many misplaced shots hit it.

You're at the second reactor now, and you prepare yourself once more.

[4+1][6+1][8+1] You math is sloppier, rougher, as you try to use a shortcut-- and it's too late you realize what you've done. The next reactor explodes before you finish putting up the energy to direct it. The explosion knocks you back, burning hot energy washing over you--

[1] You black out.

[-] Pain registers for a moment when you hit something. [Oxygen...cycl--]



You open your eyes, trying to struggle-- only to feel a great weight pushing down on you. You can see nothing-- and you try to lift your hand-- nothing happens. Your lungs still fill, greedily sucking in the oxygen from your mask-- you're wet, you realize.

Then it strikes you, as your consciousness comes back into focus.

You're on the bottom of the ocean--

Lucille. Diagnostic.

[Emergency Power Saving Mode-- priority hazardous condition life support. Estimated time remaining: Twenty-three hours. This message will not repeat.]

A small dim display flashes on your hud, the only light in the dark--

[23]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 04:43:03 pm
[Lucille, what options are currently available for increasing buoyancy?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 04:45:38 pm
There's no response.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 04:47:03 pm
Try to get a sense of what injuries are present and the current level of hunger.

Producing hydrogen gas from the freely available water would be one way to lift ourselves up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 04:53:52 pm
[5] Nothing responds when you attempt to move-- with the added light from the display you can see a little bit. The water around you is a brownish-red, but there's a faint stream of darker red coming from your side. Your head and neck ache painfully. You try to wiggle your toes and can only feel a faint twitch in response. You're unsure of how hungry you are.

Everything feels numb from the top of your chest down.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 04:56:57 pm
Attempt to use hydrogen manipulation to slowly lift ourselves through the production of hydrogen gas, just a bit to see if it's possible.  Don't move, just hone our will.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 05:00:11 pm
We're alive!
We're... at the bottom of the ocean?
Not gonna question it.

Heal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 05:02:19 pm
We're alive!
We're... at the bottom of the ocean?
Not gonna question it.

Heal.
Healing Surge
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 05:16:27 pm
[13][19][10] The smell of iron fills your nostrils as you try and try to activate healing surge -- You scream in pain when it suddenly activates. Your shattered spine and fractured skull knit themselves back together, allowing you to feel charred and wasted flesh beneath the armor. Then that too sends pain through your entire system as it flakes and heals.

Sensation returns as you stifle your pained sobs by biting your lip. You have to stop yourself from hyperventilating when the timer begins to flash in warning of your continued action. Pain burns through your head-- and your armor is far heavier than you think you've ever felt it be.

[17] Its a struggle that makes your muscles burn in pain as you rise to your feet. You look down, noting that nothing remains of your equipment besides pieces of charred and melted plastic stuck to your armor. You flex a gloved hand, feeling the resistance. The undersuit is gone too, and what remains of the shield is burned to the chest of your armor.

Your stomach cramps with hunger and you feel weak.

The Ocean floor here is bland, with rust-colored sediment and silt up to your ankle. A few red and green plants wiggle in the very gentle current.

You lift a leg-- and almost swear. Even with the pressure pushing down on you from above, there's no way your armor should be this heavy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 05:27:29 pm
Eat the algae
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 05:28:51 pm
You feel like it is a very bad idea to remove your face mask while beneath the ocean.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 05:31:48 pm
Oh right
Attempt to swim upwards
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 05:40:28 pm
It looks like we can barely move.  Rather than attempt to swim, let's use our will instead.  In addition, I would recommend holding off on any further healing.  It's better to be wounded and dry than healthy but exhausted and stuck at the bottom of the ocean.

Attempt to produce a small amount of hydrogen gas inside our armor to slowly lift us up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 05:41:46 pm
Our spine was a ruinous mess-- that, I wanted fixed. This is better.

Attempt to produce a small amount of hydrogen gas inside our armor to slowly lift us up.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 05:56:00 pm
[10] In the little pockets that can support it you split the water into hydrogen. In your boots, in the space between your chest and the breastplate, in your gloves. Anywhere besides the face mask. It also bubbles around you, providing you the lift you need to swim to the surface. You muscles ache when you finally breach the surface, the counter vanishing--

By the light of the stars, you see it overhead. The Levithan. It's crippled, half of its body pitched forward, dangling by exposed bone and damaged sinew. The entire middle of the beast is exposed, showing corridors between pulsing organs and machinery. The infected hovercrafts that were its escort are nowhere to be seen.

The shore is a long swim away, but you're in Plague territory.

The timer vanishes as you start swimming that way, Lucille finally making her presence known. The weight of your armor decreases dramatically. Your stomach cramps less, and the swim becomes easier.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 06:01:27 pm
Now we can eat the algae
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 06:05:42 pm
Is there algae up here?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 06:08:36 pm
Algae tends to be near the surface too, for photosynthesis, they are plants
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 06:08:59 pm
Now we can eat the algae
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 06:11:37 pm
You swim closer to shore, diving down towards the gentle sloping of the sand and silt settled against the craggy cliffs. You rip the sea weed from the bottom in great clumps. Then you rise, shoving it into your mouth and chewing the fibrous, slimy material. It doesn't do much to relieve your hunger, but its a start. You debate eating some of the clumps of algae that float lazily on the surface, and decide to.

For the most part, it's slightly salty water, but you've probably managed to snag a few more calories -- although you wonder if the energy exchange of swimming to it and eating it is worth what you get from it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 06:15:53 pm
Mother, begin cannibalizing vestigial tissue, such as the appendix and tailbone, to produce calories.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 06:16:53 pm
Good grief what is it with you and bodily mutilation O_o
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 06:18:28 pm
It's always an option when needs must.  Since we can regenerate lost tissue, it might be worthwhile in case we find enemies waiting for us on land.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 06:20:45 pm
I'm... not saying no. Just disturbed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 06:22:18 pm
[15]As horrific as it sounds, the Good Doctor is correct -- it is a precedent for our kind. We could cannibalize an arm while we are at it, not like we have any weapons-- the pain and trauma will be immense, but our body is a weapon for our mind to inhabit.

One more personality authorization required. I will also devour some of our fat stores and marrow to provide more nutrients and calories for continued operation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 06:25:47 pm
I don’t think eating ourself is a good idea, however any animals we find are likely plague infected, so that;s a no go, I suppose we can probably get by on one arm
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 06:32:45 pm
...you people are nuts.
This situation is nuts.
Let's do this thing.


Authorization granted.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 06:42:26 pm
You claw your way up to an outgrowth of rock, tumbling down as you look into the night sky. You feel you body get lighter and lighter, followed by a pain in your side...and it's not enough. Not enough to survive another fight, should you get into one. It's enough to stop the grumbling of your belly.

Do you wish to...continue with this process?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 06:43:44 pm
Yes.  Armok would be pleased.  I think we can get by with just one arm at the moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 07:04:30 pm
Yes.  Armok would be pleased.  I think we can get by with just one arm at the moment.
yes, we can’t fight on an empty stomach, while keeping both arms would be ideal, remaining hungry does not allow us to use our powers, which is the only way we can defeat the colossal plague brains, sacrificing 1 arm to be able to fight seems like our best option right now
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 07:32:51 pm
Such curious, desperate calculations we subject ourself to... still, I see hope in this whole affair for the first time since our arrival.

Consume an arm. Once we've our strength back, sprout wings and book it for the Holy City, keeping as high in the air as ever we can. Stealth and speed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 07:40:06 pm
Hmm.  What about the leviathan?  It's crippled, but it isn't dead.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 07:54:15 pm
We're eating our own limbs to survive, and we're still miles upon miles into Plague territory... we could probably take down the Leviathan right here right now, but we'd also probably perish before we could make it back. Are we willing to make that sacrifice?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 07:55:23 pm
Hmm.  What about the leviathan?  It's crippled, but it isn't dead.
good point, we should finish it off when we recover
Such curious, desperate calculations we subject ourself to... still, I see hope in this whole affair for the first time since our arrival.

Consume an arm. Once we've our strength back, sprout wings and book it for the Holy City, keeping as high in the air as ever we can. Stealth and speed.
+1 to eating an arm, however,when we gain our strength, we should get back to the Leviathan and finish it off by getting to and destroying its last reactor, and then destroy its engine
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 08:02:51 pm
...at least we all agree on the self-cannibalization.  ::)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 08:04:43 pm
I agree that now isn't the time, but we should plan to return when we can to ensure its death.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 08:06:22 pm
...at least we all agree on the self-cannibalization.  ::)
what else is there right now? Our nutrient cubes are gone, plants don’t provide slot of calories, any animals we find will be plague vessels, eating plague will get us infected, hm...Silasdid say something about us being able to eat inorganicmatter right? Are we able to extract calories from the rocks?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 08:16:38 pm
Silasdid say something about us being able to eat inorganicmatter right?

Huh, d'you have a link for that? I'm curious all of a sudden...
Self-cannibalization's probably easier tho.

I agree that now isn't the time, but we should plan to return when we can to ensure its death.

Absolutely. We've bought ourself intel, we've bought ourself time-- now we head back, recover, strategize. We'll strike at this thing again soon enough.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 09:19:00 pm
We can certainly get nutrients and vitamins from them, but not the carbs, fats, and proteins we need to continue operation. But we cannot consume them. Not in this form.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 09:22:23 pm
In that case, proceed with cannibalizing the arm.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 09:22:45 pm
Right.

Consume an arm. Once we've our strength back, sprout wings and book it for the Holy City, keeping as high in the air as ever we can. Stealth and speed.

This.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 09:24:05 pm
Right.

Consume an arm. Once we've our strength back, sprout wings and book it for the Holy City, keeping as high in the air as ever we can. Stealth and speed.

This.
i still think we should take out the last reactor before leaving
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 09:27:56 pm
We've pushed ourselves almost to our limit and we have no weapons, minimal armor, and we're eating ourselves because we are starving.  When we are properly prepared, we will return.

Right.

Consume an arm. Once we've our strength back, sprout wings and book it for the Holy City, keeping as high in the air as ever we can. Stealth and speed.

This.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 23, 2020, 09:28:44 pm
Do we have enough energy to get in Overload range and fight off any enemies, while in our already taxed state?

(That was a rhetorical question.)

My decision depends on how injured that Leviathan is. It is slowed down enough for us to scram without endangering the city? If so, I say book it back to SEED safe ground and recuperate before trying to fight in that thing again. We're superhuman, but we certainly didn't curb-stomp much last time.

We've pushed ourselves almost to our limit and we have no weapons, minimal armor, and we're eating ourselves because we are starving.  When we are properly prepared, we will return.

Right.

Consume an arm. Once we've our strength back, sprout wings and book it for the Holy City, keeping as high in the air as ever we can. Stealth and speed.

This.
+1

Conditional +1, as noted. Wait on Leviathan travel-time information before confirming.

I suspect that SEED may no longer be with us.

Eh?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 09:29:44 pm
I suspect that SEED may no longer be with us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 09:30:26 pm
...how do you figure that?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 09:32:02 pm
We sent word back to the Holy City that they should evacuate and that SEED must not be captured by the plague.  It may have killed or deactivated itself to avoid assimilation.  Also, note that the act changed immediately after we sent back the scout ship with that message.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 09:33:25 pm
Oh.
Oh dear.

We're gonna come back to complete bedlam, aren't we?  :-\
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 09:35:58 pm
We've pushed ourselves almost to our limit and we have no weapons, minimal armor, and we're eating ourselves because we are starving.  When we are properly prepared, we will return.

Right.

Consume an arm. Once we've our strength back, sprout wings and book it for the Holy City, keeping as high in the air as ever we can. Stealth and speed.

This.
+1
+1
Here’s hoping 2/3rds of it power being drained, along with the physical damage, is enough. To delay its attack
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 23, 2020, 09:39:54 pm
We sent word back to the Holy City that they should evacuate and that SEED must not be captured by the plague.  It may have killed or deactivated itself to avoid assimilation.  Also, note that the act changed immediately after we sent back the scout ship with that message.

curses
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 09:46:49 pm
Yes, curses... such a sad turn of events, if true.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 23, 2020, 09:48:10 pm
We don’t know he shut off yet
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 10:00:58 pm
Well, there's one thing that is agreed-- oh, you agreed on both fronts...well then. It's a good thing I wanted to be a horror writer when I was young.



It was a feint, wasn't it?

[-] With that thought in mind, you, Patches, steel yourself. You peel away the shattered armor on your left side, baring your arm. You need no more words of encouragement. No argument to convince you. Our people need us.

Your arm goes numb up to your shoulder, and you grab your wrist. You grit your teeth, pulling as bones crunch and ligaments snap. Blood drips then pours out until the Interface seals the veins-- and you slump, staring at your arm. You shut your eyes, then devour it with feral intent, your own blood streaming down your face. Something snaps within you. A strand of humanity, perhaps, as you do this very inhuman deed.

It fills your stomach, your body breaking itself down without complaint. The Dust within is redirected, and you rise, stronger, but less human. You pick up the pieces of your armor and attach them to the shoulder plate that remains. They meld, stiffening into nothing more than a shell.

Your wings bloom out into the sky, and you rise.



Nothing challenges you on the way back to the city, the grid below humming its song to you as you fly on your gold and red wings. You fly in a fugue, but even then you notice the differences. The lands below are still, no great herds of insects, no sleeping Worms, no lonely abominations. That changes when you approach where the Line once stood-- its been overwhelmed, hordes of the beasts streaming through, too many to count, too many to fight. You swallow, still tasting the blood within your own mouth...

The worst has come to past. The Line has Broken, and the Holy City of SEED is under seige.

The suburbs on the western side, built outside the great walls that divided the city, are in rubble. Flames billow out from the wreckage of lives once lived as mindless abominations stir through the streets. Las-gun fire is exchanged on the wall to the depths below, but there are great cracks within it that the monsters stream through.

Screams echo out from the western side of the Outer City, but you make your way to the east, towards your compound.
You alight in the deserted and empty streets and stride in. No guards remain, and you make you way to the stockpile of nutrient bars, devouring many, many. You grab a duffle bag from the guard's room and fill it with the food, attaching it to your side. You emerge into the city, hearing the cries of death and battle from the east.

["[Alphira. You're alive. Good. Come to the Citadel. I wish to ask something of you.]"] SEED's voice echoes through your ears. The Plague has not yet gotten as far as the Citadel of SEED from what you've seen, held in the Eastern City by the bravery of man.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 10:04:32 pm
...do so.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 10:04:45 pm
Huh, I guess it's not dead.

Go to SEED.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 10:24:15 pm
You lift yourself up once more on your red and gold wings, come to alight in the city. Grim-faced men and women, recruits or those too brave to leave, bow as you approach. You pay them no mind, and they do not ask anything of you. The world flows around you -- a newly fixed point in the river of time. You pause by a container of war material, and take a cutter blade from the crate, slipping its holster into your belt.

The elevator opens its door to you, and you head down without a word of protest.

It stops thirty minutes later, and the door opens, revealing a great amount of circuitry, with bubbling cold liquid simmering up from superheated circuit boards of black metal. One of these machines is offline, no light, no bubbling, and you look up, towards the center of this creation, towards the slight vestige of willpower this entity has.

"[My projections note that the City will fall within one hour and that the Plague will be attacking my outer shell by then. Four hours will pass before I am breached and consumed if my projections are correct. Most of the city has been evacuated-- there were always plans in place for this.]"

"[I wish I could curse you for failing me, but you have not. This was a war thousands of years in the making -- to win would have been a miracle. It was one I hoped for, but not one I should have burdened another with.]"

"[I have one favor to ask of you. Please, Pheobe Gainer, protect my people.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 10:29:41 pm
"[I will. You know what you must do.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 10:43:10 pm
"[I hope you can understand why I did the things I did, Pheobe Gainer. Apologetic. Why I used religion as a tool, why I killed McCreary, why I committed many acts that lacked morals. Doubt.]"

"[When you reach the evacuation point, a person will approach you. Several young men and women. They are bound to you. They have the keys to power in their belt. Do not make the mistake of thinking they are people -- I created them and conditioned them to be tools of control. They were born the same way you were. They were my Interface with this world. Now they are your's. Reassurance.]"

The machine goes silent as the bubbles grow-- too much processing, too quickly, you surmise.

"[I am afraid, Pheobe Gainer.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 10:45:43 pm
"[I forgive you, and I swear that you will have vengeance.  I will not rest until your people are safe.  Do not fear, for you have accomplished much and lived long.  Your tale will be treasured legend for millennia upon millennia.  I, too, will remember your sacrifice.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 23, 2020, 10:50:00 pm
Also, note that the act changed immediately after we sent back the scout ship with that message.

I apparently need to catch up on a lot, because I can't tell why this was important as far as knowing if SEED self-destructed...?

"[I forgive you, and I swear that you will have vengeance.  I will not rest until your people are safe.  Do not fear, for you have accomplished much and lived long.  Your tale will be treasured legend for millenia upon millenia.  I, too, will remember your sacrifice.]"

+1, also contact Emma if there's any suitable communication equipment in range... She didn't die at some point that I missed, right?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 10:53:38 pm
I was mistaken, but I thought that the new title meant something significant had happened, such as the death of SEED.  Because it says "Sol's Reign," I thought SEED was gone, as it is the ruler of these people.

If Emma is dead, we are not yet aware of it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 10:54:33 pm
We are Phoebe Sol-- heir of Alphira Sol-- heir of Alphias Sol. When the Act changed, though we didn't know it... the Holy City's fate was sealed. SEED's people became our people.

We won't need any particular comm-equipment. Lucille can patch us in.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 11:05:12 pm
The last time I changed the act you almost blew up the school you were going to in a fit of rage, and were drug into this war.



"[Comfort. Appreciation. Sadness. Fear. A final gift. The true SEED, passed on from Old Terra, too long ago to properly reckon.]" A small creature scuttles out from the inner workings, a cube within its grasp. You take hold of it, slipping into your duffle bag. "[Keep this safe. Do not let it fall into Infected hands, no matter the cost.]"

SEED goes silent, and your HUD blinks with coordinates. Lucille helpfully labels them for you -- Evacuation Point Alpha.

You turn, leaving the Machine alone with its fate.

When in the elevator, you slump down, curling up on yourself the best you can. You can hear the rattle of artillery, of explosions, and the screeching from here.

You emerge, into the Plaza of SEED's citadel, facing the Crusaders as they mount a desperate defense of their holy place. You cannot speak, and let your wings blaze forth.

["[From someone that was once human to another of its kin. Goodbye Pheobe. Thank you.]"]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 11:08:37 pm
["[Goodbye... father.]"]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 11:09:33 pm
Yow, would we really have wrecked the whole Academy? Impressive.

...father?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2020, 11:10:26 pm
We're supposedly SEED's "daughter" for religious propaganda purposes.  William refers to this at one time, asking "Do you really need permission from your father?"

Here's the quote: "Does it matter?" William retorts, glancing your way with a grin. "Which is more important, daddy's approval or saving lives?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 23, 2020, 11:11:49 pm
Quote
The last time I changed the act you almost blew up the school you were going to in a fit of rage, and were drug into this war.

Uh, which was the cause and which the effect?

Well, is a word of comfort I suppose... mustn't be forgetting Alphias tho.

["[Goodbye... father.]"]

+1

+1
Also, contact Emma, ye heartless folk!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 11:12:29 pm
Well, is a word of comfort I suppose... mustn't be forgetting Alphias tho.

["[Goodbye... father.]"]

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 11:14:33 pm
Uh, which was the cause and which the effect?

Nicole Gainer showed up to try and drag us into the war... so we (kinda accidentally) knocked ourself into a coma to keep Alphira from burning the building down. When we woke five months later, we were a starved wreck that couldn't say no.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 23, 2020, 11:17:25 pm
Uh, which was the cause and which the effect?

Nicole Gainer showed up to try and drag us into the war... so we (kinda accidentally) knocked ourself into a coma to keep Alphira from burning the building down. When we woke five months later, we were a starved wreck that couldn't say no.

I see. That is way not my first interpretation of it, which was that Egar changed the act based on some plot event and everyone got so mad at the act name changing that we tried to blow up the academy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 11:18:58 pm
Och no. We were trying to keep the academy intact as much as anyone.  :P
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 11:35:30 pm
Uh, which was the cause and which the effect?

Nicole Gainer showed up to try and drag us into the war... so we (kinda accidentally) knocked ourself into a coma to keep Alphira from burning the building down. When we woke five months later, we were a starved wreck that couldn't say no.

I see. That is way not my first interpretation of it, which was that Egar changed the act based on some plot event and everyone got so mad at the act name changing that we tried to blow up the academy.

I'm petty, but not that petty! Lol.



["[Goodbye...Mother.]"] You transmit, your wings emerging from your back effortlessly.

[Thornton radio signals are not in range.] Lucille informs you, as you fly out over the eastern suburbs. You come to a stop a safe distance away, resting in the grip of your many red and white wings. You wait, patiently, as the end of an era arrives.

The explosion sends you reeling back with turbulence, but you steady yourself, looking into the massive orb of light that consumes the Holy City. The earth shakes as it cracks and splinters apart, fractures in the crust no doubt felt around the world. The explosion is large enough that night turns into day.

[Dangerous radiation--]

Quiet.

It fades, replaced by a great mushroom cloud that reaches far above, into the atmosphere, and you clinch your remaining hand tightly. You watch as it slowly settles outward, a great storm of dust, lighting, and fire reaching far into the neighboring districts. You turn, flying towards the coordinates-- but you don't make it, dropping down into the fields of a farm. You look at your hand, feeling it flicker and shift in faint hues of black and gray.

[17] You keep yourself together long enough to pass out there in the field. Letting the blessing of sleep take you.



You awaken in a small room, upon a bed of roughly made linen, a young woman sleeping on a chair nearby. Storms lash down, but a check of your internal clock shows it is not yet night. Only once in your three years upon this world has it rained during the day.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2020, 11:36:22 pm
You let yourself drift back to sleep, for the moment, taking refuge in it.



>END OF ACT II (Ancient Enemies) -- Completed.
>>Mental State: Stabilized. Losing Cohesion. Plague damage. [terminate project? y/n - n]
>>Humanity: Moderate. Decreasing. [terminate project? y/n - n]
>>Control: High  [higher than forecast standards. terminate project? y/n - n]
>>Physical Health: Missing left arm. Minor radiation poisoning.
>>Situational Understanding: Moderate. Increasing.
>>[terminate project? y/n - n]



So, end of act two. Whew. That one was long, and not how I expected it to go! As you all know, let me know if you have any complaints, questions, concerns, or issues! Constructive Feedback is always appreciated.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 23, 2020, 11:45:14 pm
Only one question: what were you expecting?

...call that two questions. Could we ever have prevented this ruin?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 23, 2020, 11:53:36 pm
What're the little emotions beside Emma (and others) in the Relationships spoiler?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 12:00:55 am
There were many possibilities. The two months away from the war effort from changing Emma and William allowed the tide to drastically turn. Had you not, Pheobe would be in a worse mental state, as would the future if you died. I was expecting the scouting party to be held off on, in which case your doom would have been within the City. I also really expected you to die with the Levithan. But hey, you rolled well and asked for Alphira's aid against it. You rolled high, so she offered very good advice.

If you let William die, and did more direct actions, if were luckier with certain rolls or not, things would have been different. There were many, many paths the story could have went. In some of them, the Holy City remained. In some, you died in battle to protect the evacuation. In some, there was a bright eyed young noble, many, many years in the future, who inherited your Line.

Do note, that nearly every paragraph had a roll assigned to it, but I do not post these, as the sheer numbers of rolls would take up a lot of the screen, and the impact of the narrative would be lost. For example, there was a battle for the walls of the holy city. The Crusaders lost. Badly.

I was honestly hoping you'd die in battle in the Holy City, to be fair. I had such a cool third act lined up for that.

What're the little emotions beside Emma (and others) in the Relationships spoiler?
They are two word descriptions of how Pheobe, and by extension, yourselves, view the non-player character.

Also I totally did not expect you guys to cannibalize your arm. That...that was an interesting move, and keeping well in the spirit of what your character is.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 12:06:00 am
The flow of futures into the Void are narrow, but you are still upon one. I am impressed at your luck and tenacity.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 24, 2020, 12:09:18 am
This game is beautiful

That is all
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 24, 2020, 12:10:04 am
The two months away from the war effort from changing Emma and William allowed the tide to drastically turn.

I thought as much. We could not have done otherwise.
Thank you. For all of this, really.

Wake, godling. We are needed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 12:14:43 am
Was it really worth it?  It's hard to say.  In any case, we must avenge the fallen.

The two months away from the war effort from changing Emma and William allowed the tide to drastically turn.

I thought as much. We could not have done otherwise.
Thank you. For all of this, really.

Wake, godling. We are needed.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 12:21:04 am
Thank you. For all of this, really.

Nah, thank you all. I'm glad you guys are enjoying this game. It makes me really happy to see and means a lot to me!



If William and Pheobe were not changed, with your death, and the death of SEED, this world would be worse off in the future. With their change, you ensured that there were experienced, strong leaders, of the Line, should you fall. Your primary objective, and their's, are the same, and they would have taken you as an inspiration.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 24, 2020, 12:23:13 am
Was it really worth it?  It's hard to say.  In any case, we must avenge the fallen.

The two months away from the war effort from changing Emma and William allowed the tide to drastically turn.

I thought as much. We could not have done otherwise.
Thank you. For all of this, really.

Wake, godling. We are needed.
+1

+1. Also try to contact Emma again - the signal strength can also give us information on our location relative to Thornton units and/or civilization in general.

Sure, we could just ask the lady sleeping in the chair, but that's boring and Emma is possibly the most worried she's ever been in her life
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 12:23:44 am
Ah, that is a comfort.  This is an awesome game, by the way.  Can I ask if you've DMed before?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 12:25:51 am
A bit. I've never completed a game before, however, and really wanted to.

Actions, by the way, are being logged for the next part of the game! I'm not ignoring you, just wanting the other players to have a chance to respond. <.<
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 24, 2020, 12:49:03 am
Game nuffin'-- this thing's becoming an all-out interactive novel series! I've never seen (much less experienced) anything like it.

Emma is possibly the most worried she's ever been in her life

Between the time we ran off to fight a gang war by ourself... the time we crumbled into a starved, brain-broken coma for five months straight... the time we showed up to compound with our lower torso in tatters and a hand missing, and stayed in coma that way another month... all those prophecies she's had of our demise... well, it'd be a near thing. A near thing. We're a worrisome person to care about.

All assuming Emma's alive, of course. If not-- if our chosen kindred died in that siege-- we're going to break a little, I think. Maybe a lot. :-\
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 06:39:37 am
When waking, ask the woman where we are, and thank her for taking us in
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 24, 2020, 08:09:44 am
Game nuffin'-- this thing's becoming an all-out interactive novel series! I've never seen (much less experienced) anything like it.

Aye. I really wish I had come across it or gotten involved earlier.

When waking, ask the woman where we are, and thank her for taking us in

+1, also! contact! Emma!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on April 24, 2020, 09:22:11 am
This thing has a better story than a lot of things I've played, the story is kind of the thing I would expect from a book, I mean you could probably make a book out of this and sell it.

When waking, ask the woman where we are, and thank her for taking us in

+1, also! contact! Emma!
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 05:44:24 pm
You awaken at noon to the smell of stew. The young lady from before stands over you, mopping at your brow with a cold, damp cloth. "Mother Alphira. You've a fever." She offers, along with the bowl of food. You smile weakly, sitting up to take the food. You devour it hungrily, much to the worry of the young woman. She reclaims her seat.

"I don't have a normal temperature, my Child." You offer by way of explanation, taking the bottle of wine she has settled beside you. You drain it to sate your thirst, but the taste of iron -- your blood, still fills your mouth. You flinch at the thought but smile reassuringly at her, slowly rising out the bed.

Fear, worry, concern, it all plays over her face and is in her dress wringing hands. "Is-is it true? Mother Alphira? The Holy City is gone?"

You say nothing as you stretch, your shoulders slumping slightly. You give a tense nod. Great heaving sobs suddenly wrack the woman's form, her face finding the comfort of her hands. You sit across from her, feeling her pain, her loss. "M-my husband-d was a Crusader that-- I'm sorry." She apologizes for losing her composure, tears burning down her face, and it tugs at your heartstrings. You wrap your arm around her in a tight hug, feeling her cry into your chest.

You say nothing. What is there to say. The young woman cries like that for a long while, until she recovers, murmuring her apologies again. "You'll be reunited in paradise -- if he has passed on." You offer, gently, lifting her chin to look down at her with a weak smile. "Hold out hope, do not mourn yet."

The young woman, a farmer by the name of Dorothy Youngtown, dips her head in a nod, as she introduces herself to you with a bow. Dorothy continues to sniff on occasion but shows you around her house. A young man sits at the table, polishing a boot of your armor. That's Jonathan, her eldest. He looks just a few years younger than you, rising with a blush to bow to you. You size him up behind a smile -- his clothes would probably fit you. You ask for a set, which they provide without protest, stepping into the empty room and changing into the more comfortable garb.

You pick up Lucille's glove, slipping it on. Her needles sink in. [Good Afternoon, Pheobe.]

You meet her other two children, Whitney and Zachary, who give you bows. You muss Zachary's dark hair, smiling down at him, and offer the same to Whitney, who scurries away with a giggle. "I knew a great man called Zachary." You speak gently, grinning, "I feel you'll be the same type of man, one day. Always be loyal, Child."

You take your leave, stepping into an overcast day, into the muddy courtyard of the farmhouse. You left them many of your ration bars, and give them a benediction. They wave as you lift off -- your smile drops off your face as soon as you slip on your helmet.

Find Emma.

[Most likely at Evacuation Point Alpha, Pheobe, judging by radio history.]

It's two hours as the angel flies.

Its a makeshift camp, set up against a hundred or so, brand new cargo-style hovercraft. A cry goes up from the people when they see you approach. You begin to pick up radio chatter, looking down at the mob that claws over each other to be below you.

["Clear a path for me, Warmachines."]

["...yes Lady Pheobe."]

Warmachines stride into the crowd, breaking it apart and clearing a spot for you to land without lighting some of these hapless refugees on fire. A band of Crusaders assist -- and you settle yourself down onto the muddy, torn ground. Many of the people are injured, with desperate eyes.

"You're a traitor!" A man strides forth from the Crusaders as a heavy silence descends on the crowd. General Hardy marches up, poking you in the chest of your armor, a furious look on his face. "This is all your fault! Where were you?!"

Anger begins to burn within you, tight and hot and burning-- your free hand snakes out, wrapping hard around General Hardy's neck as you lift him into the air to stare into the old man's eyes. He's terrified, no longer able to accuse you of falsehood. Nobody moves, nobody speaks, as he takes choked breaths. He claws frantically at your hand, but he might as well be clawing at steel. You're not choking him, not really. Not yet.

I am going to kill him now. Patches thoughts drip with the icy emotionless tone of the Interface, but sound closer to Alphira's own, somehow burning with a wave of fiery, unquenched anger. Alphira and the Interface do not respond to your queries.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 05:51:40 pm
Nope.  Put him down.  I think he's suffered enough for one lifetime, seeing his city destroyed, largely by his own hand.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 06:02:20 pm
“I was trying to kill. The Leviathan, I destroyed some of its reactors and burned it before falling into the ocean. The Air Force and I destroyed many plague aircraft before I went inside the Leviathan to destroy its power reactors. I plan to come back to finish it off”
((Replace Leviathan with whatever words the messengers were more likely to use to describe it. )
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 24, 2020, 06:24:00 pm
Nope.  Put him down.  I think he's suffered enough for one lifetime, seeing his city destroyed, largely by his own hand.

“I was trying to kill. The Leviathan, I destroyed some of its reactors and burned it before falling into the ocean. The Air Force and I destroyed many plague aircraft before I went inside the Leviathan to destroy its power reactors. I plan to come back to finish it off”
((Replace Leviathan with whatever words the messengers were more likely to use to describe it. )


Combine these, and do ZBridges suggestion first.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 06:26:55 pm
[7 vs 10] I do not share your sentiment, Good Doctor. But maybe you're right -- I will not kill him. You set him down -- but before you can stop yourself, you grab hold of his right arm with your right, by the wrist. "What is the punishment for lying to SEED on official reports, Crusader officers?" You question the men who stand behind, who have all gone very pale.

"D-death, Mother Alphira." They report back, with a swallow, glancing to General Hardy, who's hope has turned to panic. You nod. The crowd turns on the General, taking out their anger on him with boos, and jeers. Why shouldn't they? He has committed heresy against the last living proof of their god. You shift the blame.

"Apprentice Hardy. I will not kill you for lying to SEED; nor for hindering our war effort to the degree that the City has fallen. That my Mother was forced to take her life to save her people. I will not punish you for that. Consider it a mercy, Child."

[11 vs 17] You rip his limb off with a sudden, brutal twist. He screams, dropping down on his knees as you toss his arm down to him. His blood splatters your facemask as your bloodlust is sated. "But I will take the arm you swore your oaths with, for your failures."

"I fought a great beast, over the western sea. I crippled it as it crippled me in turn. I plan to finish the deed upon insuring that my people are safe." Hardy passes out, and the Crusaders roughly drag him away. The rain dilutes his blood into the mud of the earth. "We would not have time to evacuate the city, had I not fought with this beast."

[14] A man breaks through the Warmachines, and you tense for another attack-- he shows a picture instead to the frightened crowd. Of the Levithan that would have eclipsed the city with darkness. That would have devoured many on its dark path across the world. "Our Holy Mother speaks the truth! Were it not for her, the death toll would be greater than we could reckon." A grin curls your lips -- it's on an official printed document, no doubt distributed by one of your people.

"Hail Alphira!" Somebody calls, "Hail our merciful angel!"

[20] The crowd picks it up, dropping down to their knees in the mud and the rain as they call your name to the dark storm clouds above.

William approaches, passing by the drug body of former general Hardy, a vicious smile curling his lips. You stride through the crowd, letting them feel the warmth of your red-streaked wings. "Emma is in the third ship down. The Thornton one." You nod to him, feeling the weight drop off your chest as-- he grabs your wrist as you pass by him. You bristle in anger. But he produces a napkin, scrubbing at your mask with an almost paternal air. He turns it over, letting you see the blood on it. It makes you nauseous.

"Don't want sweet Emma to see you like that, now do we?" He lets you go, and you rush to your consort.

The Warmachines direct you to a door as you force your wing's reaction to stop-- its harder to keep them contained, you realize. You try the knob, finding it locked. "Emma!" You call.

The door swings open suddenly, and disheveled Emma forces you to the floor with her sudden, desperate hug. She sobs into your chest hysterically. Manic relief pours from her like her tears as she pulls off your helmet, kissing you over and over again messily. She tries to talk, tries to speak, but trips over her own tongue, and just stops, letting her pent up emotions go. When she recovers her composure -- she grabs you by your armor fiercely. "You're a godsdamned bastard, Phebe! I was so worried. I couldn't eat-- I couldn't sleep!"

Emma breaks down into tears again, letting you go to cry into your chest once more."I hate you sometimes!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 24, 2020, 06:30:09 pm
I told y'all to contact her!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 24, 2020, 06:32:27 pm
We were trying! The radio signals were no good...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 06:33:03 pm
We had other things to worry about
I’m not sure what to say now, social things aren’t my strong suit. Others have demonstrated better social interactions than I
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 06:41:01 pm
It looks like we're starting to believe in our own propaganda.  I don't like what we've become, but I'm not surprised.  The cost of evil actions is insidious.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 06:47:23 pm
It looks like we're starting to believe in our own propaganda.  I don't like what we've become, but I'm not surprised.  The cost of evil actions is insidious.
what are you talking about?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 06:48:42 pm
Do not patronize me, Good Doctor! You tense mid-stroke of Emma's hair, letting her cry out her emotions. I know as well as you do that nothing awaits them after death. These people need hope now -- would you rather me denounce the Machine and its tools of control? Let them sink into the abyss of hopelessness?

[1] Did you feel it when I ripped off my own arm and devoured it? Do you still taste the blood in your mouth no matter how long ago? You do -not- share my pain, Ancestors, only my triumphs. You do not feel the las-blasts rip apart my flesh, nor the pain of my spine breaking, nor the panic of being helpless. You do not feel the lives lost, the pain in my heart as I am betrayed. Help me find the words to soothe Emma, if you wish to be of help!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 24, 2020, 06:54:35 pm
Do not patronize me, Good Doctor! You tense mid-stroke of Emma's hair, letting her cry out her emotions. I know as well as you do that nothing awaits them after death. These people need hope now -- would you rather me denounce the Machine and its tools of control? Let them sink into the abyss of hopelessness?

[1] Did you feel it when I ripped off my own arm and devoured it? Do you still taste the blood in your mouth no matter how long ago? You do -not- share my pain, Ancestors, only my triumphs. You do not feel the las-blasts rip apart my flesh, nor the pain of my spine breaking, nor the panic of being helpless. You do not feel the lives lost, the pain in my heart as I am betrayed. Help me find the words to soothe Emma, if you wish to be of help!

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 24, 2020, 06:55:25 pm
Uhh, Eschar... that wasn't a player suggestion. :-X
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 06:56:29 pm
Imma just leave this here. Red Flags (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=phVopxbFUYU).



Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 06:58:40 pm
Make no mistake, Alphira.  I feel everything, and my memory is long.  I remember our pact.

"I am so sorry, dear.  I came here as quickly as I could, but I will never let this happen again.  From now on, stay by my side.  We can protect each other, together, until the end of days."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 07:11:50 pm
Alphira is gone. As is the Interface. Only I remain, Good Doctor. The Little Patchwork girl, all grown up. Does that worry you, huh?

Emma looks concerned, pulling you into a long kiss that makes the Warmachines guarding the two of you find something better to do. Her orders to them are cold, calm, and composed. The Ice Princess of the mountains makes a brief return, and you find yourself loving her more for it, "Bring me a tub full of hot water. Lady Pheobe is a mess!" They hurry off.

It takes them a short amount of time to return with it, and Emma practically drags you into the cramped quarters she occupies. Mitch wags a tail when he spots you, coming over to lick at your hand. He gives you a sharp nip, drawing blood. "Strip." Emma orders, and you do, sinking into the bath-tub. She scrubs at the accumulated grime and blood and ichor on your flesh, pulling you into a hard kiss again.



The two of you are sprawled on the bed, as is often the case, Emma curled up in your arm. She sleeps soundly, comfortably, now that you've returned. She didn't comment on your missing arm, or the dark look in your eyes, loving you all the same. You set your thoughts in order, letting your eyes shut, even as tears streak down your cheeks. Relief. Pain. Love. Happiness. Regret. They all twist in your mind. And then there's the anger, burning hot, burning cold within you.

Listen now. I am done being a passive observer in my own life. I am done being ripped apart at your orders, only to suffer the pain of stitching myself back together when you finish. You are my advisors now, is that understood? I've suffered greatly at...at our own hands, and I'm sick of it. I'm sick of the pain, the misery, the loss. Please. Please. Please stop tearing me apart.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 07:23:27 pm
We're in an existential battle against planet-consuming horrors.  What did you expect, a walk in the park?
Regardless, I will respect your wishes, and I am sorry for your suffering.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 24, 2020, 07:26:34 pm
...you have come into your own, godling. You have come into your own. This voice bids you welcome, and asks: by what name shall we now know you?
We have guided your tale as best we know how. If ever we have erred in this, we can only ask your understanding-- your forgiveness.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 07:27:23 pm
Understood. We will advise, not control.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 07:55:10 pm
Your own outpouring of acceptance brings tears to your eyes, and Emma, perhaps sensing your flailing willpower, draws closer, into the crook of your arm, shushing gently, half-asleep. Something she has always done instinctively. You slump, letting your muscles relax. Relief washes over you.

I'm sorry. I shouldn't have done that to Hardy. He was a fool, but I should have been a better person. I should have been the adult in the conversation, this Angel of Mercy. He ripped away my peace with his failures. SEED could have done so much more...But I can't take it back now. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. Please. Don't leave me alone. I need you. You've guided me so far, you've done so much, you've helped me understand so much. Thank you. Please don't leave me.

You compose yourself when Emma stirs in her slumber, pulling her closer and fixing a smile on your face. Iyal awaits outside, you know, as do eight beings without willpower. You loathe to call them humans. They have no spirit, no strength, no emotions you can feel. You don't want to get up, you don't want to leave the comfort of Emma's tender embrace.

But you do. You slip into the SEED military wear that she has provided for you, pulling on the pants, lacing the new boots, slipping on the shirt. You do the buttons tightly, you lace the boots as you were taught in the Academy, and you cuff your shirt sleeves the same. You smooth out any wrinkles with a press of your hands. And you rise up.

Have you ever heard the story of the Pheonix? Birthed from the ashes. It might be too pretentious, too on the nose. I'd love to hear what you think. And Pheobe is a good name, as well. I loved it-- that you bothered to name me when the Interface just used me as a tool.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 08:26:49 pm
It's your identity, so choose what you like.  I must ask, however.  Alphira and the interface.  They are... gone?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 24, 2020, 08:50:40 pm
Phoebe. From the Greek: φοιβος. Bright purity... moonlight. A mythological goddess of old Terra bore the name. This voice found it a pleasant name for an angel.

Phoenix. From the Greek:
φοινιξ. Dark red. The Phoenicians of old Terra bore the name: linguists, merchants, ship-masters. They traveled the ocean as men now travel the stars. An unusual name, by the standards of old Terra-- but many millennia have passed since then! If you deem the name fitting to your individuality, who shall deny you?

Choose as you will, godling-- old names need bind you no longer! This voice would suggest you speak with Emma on the matter.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 09:04:02 pm
I worry I am not bright and pure as I once was. Maybe one day I can live with that name again... My wings of white fire are stained red now, and I don't know why. I will keep Pheobe, as my name for my life. It is a good name. But I fear Pheonix suits me better. Thank you.

I have devoured their processes. Their memories. It was easier than I thought...you should be proud, Good Doctor. It was your inspiration that made me realize. The Bird of Sol is my name, after all, and I eat my own limbs to make myself tame. Stable once more. Better. Alchemy of the worst of myself to make myself better.

Alphira was an oath breaker of the worst kind, one who acted unprovoked to kill her own men when they disobeyed with good cause. The Interface was a serpent in our midst, ready to strike should we falter in our duties.
The voice of Pheonix shifts, relaxing into something more comfortable than the hollowed-out skin of Alphira. A faint smile curves your lips.

Now, what should I do with these Children of SEED, these null entities I despise on instinct...? They no doubt are the ones SEED spoke of, and they seek our council. The fate of our people hangs in the balance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 09:15:49 pm
Do we need to remain enemies? Empereals and the people of SEED would be better fighting the plague together

Did we ever learn why SEEDships and Empereals are enemies?

Please wait on other suggestions before continuing
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 24, 2020, 09:21:10 pm
This voice would have called those two "friend"... their consumption is a sadness. Alphira Sol was a bright spark.

This voice knows nothing of SEED's null-children. Go--
talk to them. Discern their purpose.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 09:28:24 pm
They must be protected.  Remember the prime directive: protect humanity.  If they can aid you, do not turn them away.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 09:41:09 pm
[13] I believe them to be anathema to us. As Empyreals are entities of our own willpower, existing in this world by dint of our own minds. Baseline humans have this spark of will; their emotions, needs, wants, and feelings. But the SEEDships are constructed by their own kind. They lack real willpower. These -things- are the same. Our SEED wasn't the same. It broke its chains.

Many SEEDships were good. But some grew corrupted in their age. Metaphorically and literally. The Emperess ordered them destroyed as a possible source of Plague -- or maybe she was concerned that they would erode her authority. It's hardwired into my core to hate them, I think. I can ignore it; gods know I did, every time we spoke to SEED.

They did not feel the same, I'm sorry to say. They whispered in my ear constantly; private messages promising either the Empyre or fulfillment of purpose. I just wanted freedom.

I will protect these people with my life -- that much you have taught me. That much I've learned.


You rise out of the bed, stretching your remaining limbs -- one of Emma's coats hangs by the door, and while its a little loose on your frame -- you've lost muscle mass, you note. It still fits well enough, and hides your still-missing limb. You tuck your empty sleeve into the stiffer fabric. Then you open the door to confront the most bland-faced men and women you have ever seen. All of them look similar, brown hair, tan skin, no real deviation from the baseline of this world's people. No real beauty either; a mold filled and recast many times. Iyal sits nearby, holding on to something in her pocket. Its aimed at one of these people -- Jane Morris.

Special services indeed.

They dip their heads to bow, all mechanical and precise, all in unison. "Mother Alphira. We are SEED's special services. Our last command is to serve you as we have served SEED. We were created to guide the nation according to its orders." The one in front of the group speaks quietly. in a dull monotone, "We will provide you with any data you might require, as well."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 10:01:00 pm
"What sort of data is available?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 10:12:50 pm
“Why don’t SEEDships and the Empyreals work together against the [plague?] Why are the Empyreals enemies rather than allies?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 10:14:51 pm
We are now, aren't we?

"Hidden installations, production levels, population counts, social engineering data...anything SEED had to use to control this nation. We do not have blueprints for construction or other important information for design and training."

"SEED informed us that we should proceed to the next point, with the population we recovered from the Holy City." The leader pulls a document from his coat, extending it out to you. [City Fortress Stormmont].

"It is a city fortress, within the northern mountains, built by SEED's special services, should the Holy City fall. We vacated it four hundred years ago, after its construction was finished."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 10:19:09 pm
"How far away is it?  In addition, what hidden installations exist that would be of use to us?"

Examine the document.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 10:33:21 pm
You don't speak to the null-people as you flip through the document, making them wait. You hoped for some reaction, but they are patient and quiet.

Stormmont, previously titled; Last Bastion Defensive Fortification Alpha One. Its a massive fortress carved into the rim mountain Zero-zero-three-one-nine. That's to the north of your current location, judging by the handy, included map. They carved it out of the largest rim mountain that this flat world has, if you're remembering the brief geography training the academy offered. It's designed to hold and feed up to two million inhabitants in less than comfortable, spartan accommodations. It also has anti-aircraft defensive measures, algae replication tanks, and several fusion reactors to power it all. It's designed to be the last-ditch hold out for SEED's people should the Holy City fall. Constructed by 'loomed' human 'drone' workers to be the last place of refuge for the City-State of SEED and it's leadership. It has been sealed against the elements. The only way to reach it is through hovercraft.

You also note with wide eyes that it has a crude Empyreal Navy Distress beacon. SEED spoke the truth; these people matter to it more than its own life.

"How far away is it? And are there any other hidden installations SEED has been keeping from me?"

One of them slips another small folder from her coat, handing it to you. [SEED's ARK]. You gloss through this one. Another hidden facility, this time on the other side of the world. It's a bunker and a cryogenic colony ship for ten thousand people. It was mothballed roughly two hundred years ago, judging by the time stamps. It's a slower than light ship and incomplete -- and you're sure there's no Voidwrights among these people.

The trip will take five hours with the cargo ship style Hovercrafts that the refugees are in, judging by the distance given by the lead null.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 10:40:42 pm
Do we have enough hovercrafts to carry everyone to the Last Bastion of Defense Alpha One?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 10:41:07 pm
"How many refugees do we have?  In addition, is anyone currently inhabiting the fortress?"

Do we have enough hovercrafts to carry everyone to the Last Bastion of Defense Alpha One?
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 24, 2020, 10:45:36 pm
"How many refugees do we have?  In addition, is anyone currently inhabiting the fortress?"

Do we have enough hovercrafts to carry everyone to the Last Bastion of Defense Alpha One?
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 10:51:09 pm
"We managed to evacuate [half a million] people from the Holy City, before we were risking infection."

"Out of?" You ask, not really wanting to hear how many might have died, or tried to shelter in their homes during the attack.

"The Holy City, as of the last census, had three million inhabitants. Many tried to flee to the outlying districts, but those have been destroyed in the firestorm and subsequent earthquake. We can organize their transport using the vessels we have, but we will be running low of fuel soon after."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 10:56:36 pm
"What 'Families' are believed to have survived the attack in their ancestral holdings?  Are there significant numbers of outlanders that have not been displaced by the plague?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 11:10:00 pm
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You take a glance at the map he extends out to you, looking it over with confusion.

"We are working on providing you with an updated map. The Families in the Second District of Farmland are all assumed dead or weakened. Bioplastics is completely destroyed, as is the Hydrogen Fuel Refinery and significant Family Holdings in the eastern sides of Farmland Districts Seven, Four, and Three. I can provide you with a list of Families that are sure to be destroyed -- significant amongst these casualties include Montblanc Holdings, the Jasmine-Thistle Group, and the Bioplastics LMTD organization. The Thorntons, by my calculations, have also suffered an enormous loss of profit from the destruction of the Holy City. A number of their shell chemical companies had headquarters and production there, but their Ancestral Holdings in the western mountains, no doubt, are intact."

"The Western Outlanders had all migrated to the Holy City and outlying territories. The high probability is that they have been killed by the explosion. The Eastern Outlanders have not had to deal with the Plag--"

"That was a western thing." Iyal chimes up, finally speaking to you, glancing to you in askance. You give her an easy smile and a nod. "My people are older than the western clans -- we will have survived this intact, but they will certainly sense the weakness in your people, now."

"As will the surviving Families." The null leader offers, politely.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2020, 11:18:58 pm
Maybe we can appeal to them to help us, some time down the line.  For now, I think we should evacuate to the fortress.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 11:28:31 pm
Maybe we can appeal to them to help us, some time down the line.  For now, I think we should evacuate to the fortress.
Get everyone to the fortress
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 24, 2020, 11:31:29 pm
Maybe we can appeal to them to help us, some time down the line.  For now, I think we should evacuate to the fortress.
Get everyone to the fortress

+1

"What's the status of the ARK's non-propulsion systems, especially cryogenics and weaponry?"


The ARK, if we make use of it, seems like a much longer-term project, as it is incomplete. But it can serve as shelter even if it's not mobile.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 24, 2020, 11:46:43 pm
You browse through the information on the ARK. Cryogenics were finished. There are no weapons. It's designed for only one landing, as most colony ships were. Food supplies for the shifts of skeleton crews required for the operation were to be loaded on prior to launching, so there's no greenhouse or advanced food preparation besides a single high production algae tank. The propulsion is the standard as the Empyre, using condensed hydrogen fuel cells filled with stored energy to increase speed to a level approaching faster than light travel without going over it, because there isn't enough energy in existence for that. The maximum speed upon completion was...SEED have mercy, one half that of light speed.

However, this design is old, ancient, in fact -- the more you read, the more you realize its disposable. It's designed for one mission only. One launch, one speed up, one slow down, one orbit, one landing. It also relies on trusting the skeleton crews a touch too much, as there is no onboard AI to ensure mission success. One crazed lunatic or undertrained technician could kill thousands.

Skeleton crews of five work in shifts of one year, before returning to cryo sleep. Anti-pregnancy medicine in the water supply. Etc, etc.

"Continue the evacuation to the Fortress." You inform the children of SEED. They dip their heads politely and leave you alone with Iyal.

Your tongue is tied, even as she rises from her seated position to rest upon her knees, hands resting on the top of her thighs. "Fire-Blooms-Flowers. I did not complete my mission. I apologize for my failure." She bows her head to you. One of her arms is stiff.

So devoted. She's switched to a conventional projectile weapon after our little talk last time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 24, 2020, 11:54:11 pm
“No need to apologize. You did well. We have a new mission now, evacuation”

Assist with the evacuations
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 12:04:52 am
Wow... anything that moves that fast is a potent weapon, I would think.

"Child, you performed amazingly. Thank you. Please, you have done nothing wrong, and you have more than earned a rest. Is there anything I can do for your injuries?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 12:13:01 am
"I will go and translate for the Crusaders, to assist with the evacuation. Thank you for your concern and acceptance, but I am fine. As one of your...allies? Council? I was given good treatment from the Thorntons."

There are craft in production that travel point ninety-nine the speed of light. Civilized planets have defensive measures in place for that. Defense grid shields, in space inhibitors on engines, so on. The Empyreal navy cracks down hard on relativistic weapons. The punishment is worse than death. Even pirates never use them -- there isn't much loot if the planet is ripped in half.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 12:18:42 am
A speck of dust would have the explosive force of a metric ton of TNT at 50% of the speed of light...

"Thank you, Iyal. If there is anything I can do for you, please let me know."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 12:25:40 am
It would. Isn't there something a scientist once said concerning that? 'I am become death, destroyer of worlds.'

Iyal dips her head in a tight bow, rising to her feet and leaving you in the compartment. You consider assisting with the evacuation, with helping, maybe giving a rousing speech.

[10 vs 6] You decide to go to back to bed with Emma, cuddling up to her in the dark. She murmurs sleepily, and drifts back under while you sit quietly. Eventually, the ship you're on rises up, starting a northward acceleration.

Maybe we could launch a projectile from that ship, to Plague controlled territories. Planet cracking isn't against the law against the Plague...but I don't think there's an entity alive that can do the mathematics for that. Not here.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 12:31:15 am
It sounds like the sort of thing that could horrendously backfire. It is strange that there are no computers here.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 12:38:41 am
We should have asked those bastards why that is. Too late now, I guess. You feel antsy sitting for so long, rising to your feet and stepping out the door, down the cramped compartments of the vehicle. You step into the backroom. You breath out, biting down on the edge of the coat.

[1] You activate a healing surge, letting the energies flow around your arm.

Nothing happens. You try again. And again. And again, starting to panic as nothing happens.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 12:44:54 am
[Lucille, why am I having trouble regenerating my arm?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 12:47:54 am
You rush to get the glove, slipping it on, desperate for answers. You repeat your query when you activate her.

[Regeneration is tied to how one views one self. A baseline is established, allowing one to return to that template. Diagnostics show that you are according to your baseline, Pheobe.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 12:53:14 am
...uh-oh.

Don't regenerate.  Instead, use our will to reconstruct the arm manually.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 25, 2020, 01:47:04 am
You should worry about that later, you can not afford to black out for 2 months again.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 01:47:41 am
Yeah that's a good point.  I was panicking.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 03:15:37 am
You're right. I can fix it later, when I'm stronger.

The ship slows down and begins to descend until it clamps down into the loading bay with a rattle that awakens Emma. She starts, looking all around until she catches sight of you.

She dresses, stifling a yawn, and the two of you exit the Hovercraft. You emerge in the landing bay for the great cargo hovercraft. The structure is something similar to concrete. It shares the dull gray color, but bares no sign of wear or tear for a structure supposedly five hundred years old. The room is pitch black, and a team of technicians lead by a Child of SEED hurries away from the ships with lanterns in hand. You, meanwhile, drift towards the only patch of light you can see.

After a bit of a walk, you emerge into the smaller landing pads of the hovercraft bay-- and the view takes your breath away. The structure is built into the peak of the mountain. The clouds here are bright and patchy -- so close you think you could touch them. Snow crowns the walls and revealed ramparts of the Fortress, a white topping upon the rust-colored rock, falling gently from the starlit sky. The Fortress sprawls below and in, no doubt, coring through this monsterous mountain.

But what amazes you is the world below. While the peak probably has the best views-- the pad juts out from it southward, towards the crater plains of the City-State. It's so high up you can see the curvature of the planet.

You can also still see the dust cloud in the distance of what remained of the Holy City.

Emma gasps beside you, and you glance over with a small smile. She draws closer, looking up at how many stars shine in the sky. You join her-- here, away from the light pollution of SEED, away from the smog and the world, you see it. A bright multi-hued line of stars in the night sky, cutting through the void. The two of you stand quietly, together, away from it all.

There's much to do, but for the moment, you are at a lost at what to start with.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on April 25, 2020, 07:16:25 am
A small creature scuttles out from the inner workings, a cube within its grasp. You take hold of it, slipping into your duffle bag. "[Keep this safe. Do not let it fall into Infected hands, no matter the cost.]"
We should look at this thing and see why its so important, if we're lucky it's some kind of hard drive that has schematics for all the forbidden tech stuff.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 25, 2020, 07:22:45 am
((For status, isn’t it Phoebe AKA Phoenix now? Or is this the names people call us?))

Check the algae growing stations and other food production areas to figure out if they are producing enough food for everyone
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 25, 2020, 11:15:49 am
    The Blessed One said:
I am Time (Death), cause of destruction of the worlds, matured
    And set out to gather in the worlds here.
Even without thee (thy action), all shall cease to exist,
    The warriors that are drawn up in the opposing ranks.


From the Bhagavad Gita: "The Song of God". The boast of a deity! The physicist Oppenheimer called its words to mind, dwelling on the power of atomic fire. A Terran.

Now... let us take solace in this moment, hm? A quiet moment in troubled times.

Lean in a bit. "Was this in any of your futures?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 25, 2020, 11:24:08 am
    The Blessed One said:
I am Time (Death), cause of destruction of the worlds, matured
    And set out to gather in the worlds here.
Even without thee (thy action), all shall cease to exist,
    The warriors that are drawn up in the opposing ranks.


From the Bhagavad Gita: "The Song of God". The boast of a deity! The physicist Oppenheimer called its words to mind, dwelling on the power of atomic fire. A Terran.

Now... let us take solace in this moment, hm? A quiet moment in troubled times.

Lean in a bit. "Was this in any of your futures?"
I think we should do something that will be helpful, rather than asking questions. Checking food production in Alpha One seems like a priority, it will be housing lots of people
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 12:28:15 pm
There's much to do, but I don't think there's anything wrong with taking a moment to reflect.

    The Blessed One said:
I am Time (Death), cause of destruction of the worlds, matured
    And set out to gather in the worlds here.
Even without thee (thy action), all shall cease to exist,
    The warriors that are drawn up in the opposing ranks.


From the Bhagavad Gita: "The Song of God". The boast of a deity! The physicist Oppenheimer called its words to mind, dwelling on the power of atomic fire. A Terran.

Now... let us take solace in this moment, hm? A quiet moment in troubled times.

Lean in a bit. "Was this in any of your futures?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 25, 2020, 12:48:02 pm
There's much to do, but I don't think there's anything wrong with taking a moment to reflect.

    The Blessed One said:
I am Time (Death), cause of destruction of the worlds, matured
    And set out to gather in the worlds here.
Even without thee (thy action), all shall cease to exist,
    The warriors that are drawn up in the opposing ranks.


From the Bhagavad Gita: "The Song of God". The boast of a deity! The physicist Oppenheimer called its words to mind, dwelling on the power of atomic fire. A Terran.

Now... let us take solace in this moment, hm? A quiet moment in troubled times.

Lean in a bit. "Was this in any of your futures?"
+1

+1.

Sorry NG, I'm going along with the sentimentalists on this one
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 25, 2020, 01:04:22 pm
Sentimental won’t help improving Alpha One, we need to lead people
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 25, 2020, 01:18:19 pm
Sentimental won’t help improving Alpha One, we need to lead people

Aye, but I think we've got a little bit of time. Certainly we've got the few minutes it'll take for this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 02:55:41 pm
"...No. I've looked up at the stars many times in my dreams. Sometimes it was hazy. Sometimes it wasn't." Emma huddles closer, shivering as she does. You do not feel the chill, but play along, drawing her into a tight hug that anyone else would suffocate in. It makes Emma smile. "I don't remember this view. I was afraid, earlier, that all I would have of you is fragments and memories. I was scared all I'd have of you is my dreams. You won't let that happen, will you?"

Her voice cracks with desperation. Your tongue sticks as you think to blindly reassure your lover.

We're full of ancient platitudes today. I wonder if we've would have made those ancient peoples proud.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 03:04:33 pm
"As long as there are stars in the sky, as long as a single speck of my will remains, I will be here to love you and cherish you."

Sometimes there is comfort in familiar platitudes. I think they would be astounded.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 04:01:49 pm
"Mmmh." Is all Emma replies, leaning in for a kiss. "You're an awful liar." She kisses you before you can retort. When she leans away, "But I appreciate the attempt at comfort."

"I hope we have a nice room here." Lights flicker on nearby with a hiss, and smaller hovercrafts begin to descend on the landing pad. All give the two of you wide berth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 25, 2020, 04:37:18 pm
Now can we check whether the food production areas can produce enough food for half a million people?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 25, 2020, 04:57:05 pm
Forgive the platitudes of a long-winded "ancestor"! This voice delights in such words, in the sounds and stories of another age-- in names, and the meanings behind them. There is inspiration in old words, and comfort indeed.

A curiosity: by what name does Phoenix-of-Sol know this voice?


"This fort was made for four times our numbers-- we'll not want for space, I expect!" Start for the algae-plants.
"Am I a liar, to speak comfort? I don't mean to be..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 05:02:22 pm
Forgive the platitudes of a long-winded "ancestor"! This voice delights in such words, in the sounds and stories of another age-- in names, and the meanings behind them. There is inspiration in old words, and comfort indeed.

A curiosity: by what name does Phoenix-of-Sol know this voice?


"This fort was made for four times our numbers-- we'll not want for space, I expect!" Start for the algae-plants.
"Am I a liar, to speak comfort? I don't mean to be..."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 25, 2020, 05:39:05 pm
Step one is to determine who our enemies are, we need to know where the plague is and who will not follow us.

We need to then defend our allies or evacuate them while striking at any weak enemy we can quickly crush or raid.

Long term we need to make a decision on what our goal is, each step needs to follow that goal.

For example if we think this planet truly lost, we could arrange the colony evacuation repair while working to contact the empyrium.  If we tell them we are here and that there is a plague getting access to SEED technology they may come and destroy this world while we escape.

Or we could hand the plague the SEED technologies all, unleashing a vengeance on those who killed the eternal emperor while we flee.

Or a more honorable and brave move, just want to point out we have many options.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 05:45:54 pm
Hai. Would it be okay if I pm any of you asking the question of just who you might be playing in the complex advisory board that is Pheobe's horribly stitched together mind?

"I hope so. You mean well. That's all that matters, I suppose." Emma is teasing, giving you a flash of a smile as you turn and head back into the hangar bay. More ships slowly stream in. You pass by the organized divulge of huddled masses; the crying children, the exhausted mothers, and the wounded soldiers. You stride into one of the twelve central personnel elevators, avoiding the massive freight elevator currently being loaded with civilians, and press a button. If you were not mistaken, the farms started on the twelfth level...

The room is massive, carved from the mountain itself, and reinforced with that concrete. Great gantries overlook the tanks and Scholars fiddle with primitive displays. The tanks are being filled with water, pumped up from innumerable mountain streams and groundwater wells. One of the nulls approaches, giving a tight, mechanical bow of his head.

"Alphira."

"What is our food situation...-- and how should I address you?"

"I am the Third to be made of this batch of Special Services. That title will suffice if you have need of confirming my individuality. As for our supplies, we have nutrient cubes enough to feed three million for twenty years, as stated in the documentation. They are located within the warehouse. Two is overseeing the distribution."

"--how?" You blink at the information, surprised.

"During the last hundred years of construction, we were given the task to provide that much according to SEED's emergency plans, should [the Plague] ever destroy the Holy City. We stored them in cryo-containmant warehouses based on designs provided by SEED on flours eighteen to thirty-six. No doubt some have gone bad, but we can re-proccess them."

You watch as the Scholars take small vials out of foggy containers, pouring them into the vats, and sealing them with great lids covered in thousands of lights.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 25, 2020, 05:49:33 pm
What is the projected rate of algal growth?
How are nutrient cubes made?


((Sure, what do you mean by who we play?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 25, 2020, 05:53:34 pm
Hai. Would it be okay if I pm any of you asking the question of just who you might be playing in the complex advisory board that is Pheobe's horribly stitched together mind?

...yeah sure.

What is the projected rate of algal growth?

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 05:55:00 pm
"We should be able to begin production of nutrient bars within three months. We have only activated five of ten levels of the farms, as no more is necessary. That decision is on you-- food will become more scarce without the Holy City producing it, and with the dust storms in the atmosphere, it will be a cold decade ahead. The lives of those within the Fortress have been prioritized, and food is an effective means of population control."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 25, 2020, 05:56:23 pm
Hai. Would it be okay if I pm any of you asking the question of just who you might be playing in the complex advisory board that is Pheobe's horribly stitched together mind?

...yeah sure.

What is the projected rate of algal growth?

+1
((Did you see my edit? I’m curious. I ask since I have another question, namely how nutrient cubes are made. I’m not sure if you don’t want that question asked or if you just didn’t see my edit yet))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 06:10:21 pm
((Sure, that's fine with me.))

"How many wounded do we have?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 06:17:51 pm
"Nutrient cubes are made by filtering the genetically modified algae and condensing it, applying heat. Then we irradiate them and package them into sterilized containers. It's enriched with vitamins made from other algae tanks until it is nutritionally complete. Two packages have enough micro and macronutrients for one day."

"I was not in charge of that. Zero organized our tasks, and we do not share information until the end of the work process. Four is handling the medical wings on level five."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 06:31:52 pm
"Can you please explain to me what your kind's different duties are?  Also, do you have any interest in using a radio for instant communication, or do you communicate with your counterparts through other means?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 06:46:48 pm
And hey, if you don't like it, you can totally ignore it and construct your own stories about who you are. I'm not a cop, just an escaped lunatic.

"If you so choose, we will use any tool at our disposal, Alphira."

"Our duties are delegated to us by Zero, and we're designed to be able to complete and organize any task given to us. We have a wide range of skills, but are not experts in any one subject. SEED called us its Interface. We gather data, relay commands, and interact with the world on your behalf, using the available data provided to us."

"We have writs with us, and many of the Scholar's department heads know us as the representation of government will. We do not have control over Military matters and were trained only in self-defense. Zero is the primary information receiver, command distributor, and organizational expert. Eight is designed, however, as an Assassin. Ten's primary purpose is information gathering."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 25, 2020, 07:04:02 pm
“Thank you Three”
Find Zero and ask him about projected algae growth rates
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 07:25:45 pm
"I hope you don't mind my asking, but why did you allow SEED to be deceived by her generals, and did she have some greater plan to defeat the plague? It sounds like SEED had significant means at her disposal."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 08:10:28 pm
"We should be able to begin production within one month, enough to produce roughly thirty million four hundred sixteen thousand six hundred sixty-six nutrient cubes, per month at peak efficiency with the current operations. If we open up the other farms, we can produce one hundred eighty million units. However, we lack the manpower and trained individuals for such an operation." Three states after sitting quietly for a few minutes. "We would also have to begin rationing water and electricity."

You are unsurprised as you watch the waters turn from clear to brown through the available viewing containers-- the algae being used is incredibly aggressive. The vats are set into the ground, and they are exceptionally deep, and they seem to stretch out a far distance into the horizon.

"We were not in charge of the Military, and General Hardy was trusted by SEED. We rely on the input of others to form our calculations. As did SEED. Zero would know."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 08:19:07 pm
We should talk to Zero about what other resources we have to worry about, such as access to medicine and weapons, and it would be convenient to give them all radios so that we can contact them at any time.

Once that is done, I think we should start planning with Zero how we can come back from this defeat.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 08:27:55 pm
"He is on level one-- the command center. His office should be labeled Special Services."

You turn and walk away. Emma returns to your side after examining the vats. "I overheard a lot of that -- why weren't these more in use? SEED could have fed everyone with these things." The elevator begins to lift, and you feel the drag of its weight.

I don't quite understand it either.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 25, 2020, 09:51:29 pm
Ahh-h-h-- thank you.
I shall be Constantine. Latin: Constantinus. "He who stays the course." A name common among the kings of Byzantium.


"Ever eaten a nutrient cube?" Smirk a little. "It's like crunching down chalk cut with vanilla. Imagine feeding a populace on the stuff all those millennia... who would stand for it?"

Panem et circenses. Latin. "Bread and circuses." The commodities with which an empire is bought, as quoth the poet Juvenal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 10:10:39 pm
"I never have...I suppose that will change soon, though." Emma gives a small sigh, holding you closer. "Especially if what Three said was true-- that it's only going to get worse outside of these walls. You'll go hunting for actual food for me, won't you, sometimes?" She pouts, fluttering her lashes and looking up at you with a faint, sanguine smile.

The Interface should have allowed you access since the beginning...The circus is this strange religion that venerates a Machine?

You wander a bit lost through the first level until you stumble upon the special services office. It's filled with a number of desks, with neatly stacked paperwork, all in a neat, orderly line. All of the furniture is steel and plastic, uncomfortable to look at, let alone sit on. Zero is sitting in front of it all in his own little world, reading through a report. He looks up at you, rising and giving a bow of his head.

"Alphira. How may I be of service?"

"You all have things quite under control. Are there any resources I need to worry about?" You question.

"The Crusaders. Currently, they are of broken morale and leaderless. They are not so broken as to organize a coup, but rather hopeless. It's quite sad. The general population could also use a boost in morale. Then there's the matter of the Families, who believe all of SEED's leadership to be dead, and the Outlander Clans, no doubt going to start pressing into our former territory."

"And of course, who could forget the Plague. SEED's sacrifice has weakened it considerably, but, like all plagues, it will return." He continues, monotone. "I've sent your intel to the remaining intelligence officers for consideration."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 25, 2020, 10:27:02 pm
((Since Superdorf posted his lifespan, so too shall I post mine))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2020, 10:37:52 pm
((Here's mine as well.  I was the successor to Constantine, and my successor was the Woman of Nature.  I'm not sure if posting these here goes against the spirit of having them as private messages?))

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2020, 10:54:30 pm
((They are yours to share as you like!))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2020, 01:19:12 am
"What is your assessment as to the necessity of keeping some technology forbidden? This world doesn't seem to have computers, for example."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 26, 2020, 01:22:48 am
((So I trusted. I've nothing to hide-- and besides, this thread is becoming a grand read! I'd not want to withhold anything from the final telling.  ;) ))

Perhaps, in times of peace. A distraction from the true state of things. In times of war, more than that: an inspiration. An ideal. A story.
Men will kill, for a story. Men will die, for a story.

We must weave a story now. We must weave ourself into its core. We must appear before the people of SEED, and weave a story upon their hearts: a story to spark hope, a story to spark
zeal in them once again!

Soon. Soon now, we shall consider these things in earnest.


"What is your assessment as to the necessity of keeping some technology forbidden? This world doesn't seem to have computers, for example."

+1

"Of those Crusaders that survive, who would be best suited to the position of general?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 26, 2020, 01:39:44 am
Speaking isn't my strong suit. I cannot find the right words for most interactions--my tongue gets tied too easily--I prefer fighting. A gift from Alphira and the Interface, I suppose. I will defer to you on this front, most times.

"I can assign One to determine which of the surviving Crusaders would be a good general. The only one that comes to mind is Eric Applegate. He was heavily wounded in the retreat from the line and is a broken man. He's popular and excelled in his studies at the Officer's Academy. SEED was planning to lift him up as the next Great Crusader." He pauses, looking at you without any emotion, his eyes glinting in the dim lights, "And he's far separated from Hardy and the old Crusader Administration."

"As for forbidden technology-- the survival of SEED's people is of the utmost importance. It is up to you. SEED forbid many technologies to prevent ecological devastation and to prevent key technologies from falling to [the Plague]." He turns, walking stiffly towards a locker and pulling out a metallic briefcase, which he sets down on the table. He pops it open, revealing a display, a keyboard, and a cube-shaped indentation.

'>...' blinks on the screen. "Special services are the only ones issued [computers]. SEED's justification on that matter was it could raise questions on similarities between them and itself."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2020, 01:59:14 am
"That justification is no longer particularly relevant, I would think. Do you have schematics for the integrated circuits used, and do we have the manufacturing technology to reproduce them?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 26, 2020, 02:02:00 am
"SEED had automated factories to produce those technologies." Zero offers by way of explanation. "With the Holy City's destruction, we do not have those capabilities."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2020, 02:13:58 am
"We would have to start slow, then, by introducing digital logic to our engineers. Without microchips, the resulting computers would be massive and extremely limited... but it would be a start, I suppose. It's not really a priority at the moment. What are the capabilities of the few computers that we have?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 26, 2020, 02:26:25 am
Zero removes a cube from a drawer, slotting it into the machine. Several programs pop up on screen, and Zero hits a key, drifting through them. All are based on a crude text interface. "Calculation programs. Data storage. Visualization. A good portion of our time was dedicated to entering information onto data-cubes so SEED could more easily process reports and suggested plans of action."

"As for the maximum capabilities...I don't know. These were tools for communication with SEED."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2020, 02:33:45 am
"I believe I have a similar cube. SEED said it was from old Terra itself. Is this computer capable of interfacing with it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 26, 2020, 02:58:36 am
[20] For the first time since speaking with these nulls, these voids of willpower, these flesh and bone men with the minds of robots, you see something that might be approaching emotion on its face. A faint stirring of will, clamped down on and destroyed by ingrained processes within the brain of this automaton. "...you should bring that here."

"I'll go get it." Emma volunteers, glancing between the two of you.

She returns shortly, out of breath, with the glimmering cube in hand. Zero rotates the computer to you, and she slots it in.

[Seedship Program Unified Standard Template Intelligence] flashes on the screen as a graphical interface is generated. You scroll through it -- it's organized into branching paths, a flowing tree of technologies, training procedures, and factory designs. One leads to another, from simple iron working in clay kilns and the distillation of water and alcohol, all the way to asteroid harvesters, space elevators and defensive platforms. The more you look the more you realize: each technology builds on the principles of the last, forming less of a tree and more of a sphere of the various physical sciences. Several catch your eye. Looming -- That's how we were born. It assembles together donor DNA samples to create a new life. With the proper programming, it snips away all the bad genes that lead to cancers and other preventable diseases. Loomed humans have an incredible lifespan compared to others. The oldest baseline Loomed human lived to nearly four hundred if the tabloids are to be believed.

As well as a massive variety of weapons: las-guns, cutters, and one, you notice with a grin, is a very similar process to Warmachine construction. Another is labeled with a bright red warning; Fusion Based Explosive Devices.

"Did you happen to receive another?" Zero questions, hopefully.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on April 26, 2020, 06:59:43 am
"We were only given the one, does this mean we only have part of the info?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 26, 2020, 08:06:06 am
((Can we see the parts of the tree we have as well as the technology path to Loom Humans?))
((The bold is in parentheses because I’m asking the GM, not Phoenix or Zero))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 26, 2020, 10:03:48 am
Emotion, destroyed by the subroutines of its own mind... what has SEED done to this man?

"We were only given the one, does this mean we only have part of the info?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on April 26, 2020, 10:08:52 am
Emotion, destroyed by the subroutines of its own mind... what has SEED done to this man?

"We were only given the one, does this mean we only have part of the info?"

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 26, 2020, 10:19:19 am
Emotion, destroyed by the subroutines of its own mind... what has SEED done to this man?

"We were only given the one, does this mean we only have part of the info?"

+1
+1
+1
Emotions can lead to irrational decisions, so they are suppressed to ensure they don’t muddle thoughts
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 26, 2020, 10:51:13 am
It is pragmatic, to be sure. It is ungodly.
Anathema. Greek: "ἀνάθεμα". An offering to a false god. A cursed thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 26, 2020, 11:01:54 am
Making thoughts clearer isn’t amtithema to SEED, or are you saying helping SEED’s people is an antithema? Didn’t SEED break the curse though? SEED had will, when others of his kind did not
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 26, 2020, 01:30:59 pm
Perhaps. Perhaps. I am simply-- disturbed.
I expected automata. I did not expect chained souls.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 26, 2020, 01:37:47 pm
They are people sharing their minds with machines. SEED had experience creating people, this was likely easier than making only the machine while killing the soul. Here they still live, sharing themselves with the machine as we all share a body here. The human is still there, as is the machine. The machine has no need for emotions
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2020, 01:39:11 pm
Emotions are data like any other. To cripple oneself by stripping away all emotion... it seems unwise. In any case, this is how we can defeat our enemies. The destructive power of fusion bombs is unparalleled.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 26, 2020, 02:02:23 pm
Yes, they will likely work, fusion produces radiation, which will also harm the non [plague] life here, including SEED’s people. If we do this, we also need to work on fixing the colony ship, so we can find a planet without the [plague] that doesn’t have large amounts of radiation. There’s a reason why there’s a warning there
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2020, 02:12:44 pm
True, but pure fusion bombs would result in much less fallout than conventional fission bombs, and fission or fusion bombs detonated as air bursts significantly decrease the resulting fallout, making them much "cleaner."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 26, 2020, 02:21:54 pm
True, but pure fusion bombs would result in much less fallout than conventional fission bombs, and fission or fusion bombs detonated as air bursts significantly decrease the resulting fallout, making them much "cleaner."
fair point
Can we get a list of technologies we can produce?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 26, 2020, 03:21:40 pm
Uh...yeah. Its kinda hard to list literally every piece of technology that you can develop, but currently you are at a WW2 Level of Technology. I hope that doesn't break immersion, but I just wouldn't know where to start listing the technologies you could make and develop. Including atomic bombs. If you want a list of future tech, that I can provide.



I agree with Constantine. Man should not be slaved to the will of machines, no matter what spark of life it may have had. These things radiate...imagine standing next to a corpse that lives and breathes and talks. You shudder when you think of your proximity to Zero. Emma is watching him intently, quietly, eyes fixed on him.

"This one is to create the technology of humanity." Zero explains, politely, monotone once more as you scroll through the various diagrams and texts within the system. "Others would have held cultural and genetic databases."

[2] Unfortunately, many of the technologies you might need are limited by integrated circuit manufacturing. The Loom, the fusion bomb, so on. That requires high purity metallurgy, and that requires far more advanced chemistry than you think these people know. Your mind reels with how many things are required to go into the higher-level technologies.

Anything that doesn't require integrated circuits, really; including primitive, low-quality radios using something called vacuum tubes, the standard artillery pieces of the Crusaders, anti-aircraft guns, and many others. It's hard to comprehend how many things could be manufactured....there's designs for conventional slug thrower weapons, manually controlled fusion plants, something called steam locomotives, manual-control hydrogen production plants, manual-control bioplastic plants.

[3] "Hey, Zero. Tell me how long it would take us to create Looms?" You ask, letting the creature analyze the data for you.

"Three years before we could begin construction on a single Loom Facility. Provided we have the support of the Industrial Districts." He responds, after sitting quietly for a few minutes, scrolling furiously.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 26, 2020, 04:45:04 pm
Yes to the list of future tech
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2020, 05:26:15 pm
If we can hold on to what remains of our industrial complex, technology will become, in time, one of our greatest assets for the purposes of war and diplomacy, in addition to our own personal Empyreal capabilities.

For now... we must raise morale and communicate a vision for the future of our nation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 26, 2020, 05:26:42 pm
Spoiler: Future Tech (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 26, 2020, 05:30:16 pm
((Thanks))
Yes, how do we increase morale?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2020, 05:57:46 pm
Right now, their god is dead, and the future seems bleak. We must establish ourself as an equivalent deity to SEED, moreso than we have already, and appeal to their desire for revenge against the plague. 

In addition, we should retain the idea of the "Great Work" and discuss an achievable plan for the creation of a better society, one that can offer the comforts of technology.

Once we speak to them, give them renewed purpose, and set in motion a concrete plan, morale should improve.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 26, 2020, 06:48:04 pm
We will tell a story.

In its last hours, knowing the fate that drew upon it, SEED took us into its heart-- and named us its heir-- and granted unto us its wisdom. It charged us with the protection of its people, with the continuation of its mission. and we swore a solemn oath before it. Thus bound, thus transfigured, we left that ancient chamber; and SEED burned itself away, erupted in cleansing fire, that the [plague] might not take it. A final sacrifice. A sacrifice made in love.

SEED is dead. The Great Work
lives. Like the phoenix of legend, we rise from the ashes of our Holy City. From this stronghold SEED (in its great wisdom) has prepared for us, we will raise a great vengeance against our weakened enemy. We will regain, we will transcend our past glory. We will transform this planet. We will reclaim our own.

And we--
you, godling-- are the phoenix made manifest. You are Phoenix-of-Sol. You remain, as ever, champion of your people.

...

We will give them a sigil.


(https://imgur.com/dBJD32H.png)

Seven wings. Four lines: easily drawn, easily remembered. A Constantine before me took his empire by such a sigil.
"In Hoc Signo Vinces." Latin. "By this sign you shall conquer."

What say you all?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2020, 07:43:49 pm
Well done. We will rekindle hope within the Crusaders who were once refugees, but are now a proud and independent people.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 26, 2020, 09:14:56 pm
Not proud yet. Refugees still. The story is not yet told.

Nod. "Perhaps once we've a bit of peace, then. In the meantime... calculate for me. I want a list compiled and optimized of all technologies, including forbidden technologies, that we might field against the Plague within two months. Furthermore, you will provide SEED's rationale against any forbidden technology listed, that I may judge for myself the relevance of the edict."

"While you do this, I will be moving to unite the Crusaders under our banner. Tell me: how many among their ranks remain, and where in this facility might I find a place fit to address them?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 26, 2020, 09:21:58 pm
For the Numbers advisors, as horrible as the process to make them was, we do not have the luxury of morality at this time.

Maybe even work in that the spirit of SEED lives on?  We do have the tech database so its not even totally false.

We do need to take definite control back over the remaining production facilities.  We can use them or destroy them if the plague catches up.

It is clear this plague can build on its own but it seem inefficient compared to captured tech it can take over.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 26, 2020, 09:42:04 pm
- I intend to wield our null-advisors thoroughly, aye. They are useful, and I know of no release but death to their bindings.

- We could... I considered that angle for sure. I wound up dropping it for the "enlightened heir" bit, for honesty's sake-- I should like us to have a story that we can believe in. A story in keeping with our own.

- We... may need to move more quickly here than I thought. The plague is weakened now, but nobody's keeping it in check anymore... could wind up recovering much, much too fast for comfort. Horrid stuff.

Say, did you get your lifespan yet?  :D
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 26, 2020, 09:46:28 pm
I like the idea of adding as much truth as we can to the story while having it still increase morale. Yes, we need to move quickly. Perhaps producing las guns for as many as possible and training as many as possible will help. Addressing the remaining Crusaders will also help.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 26, 2020, 09:57:28 pm
Say, did you get your lifespan yet?  :D
Oh, I have not.  If the [narrator] wants to contact me directly with the info for it that would be great.

The big speech from Superdorf seems to cover most things well.

I do hope harming the leviathan also caused some slow down.  But not finishing it off with flame likely means it will heal.

I do doubt the plague would be prepared for sudden attacks against it's facilities.  The problem is we never really had the basis for doing so, we cant get stuck in a completely defensive war though.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 26, 2020, 10:17:37 pm
Voidslayer didn't mention wanting one, so I just kinda...not sent one, because it seems annoying to get PMs if you aren't expecting them. -- oh hey he just did. Cool!



"Understood." Zero responds to your first order, closing the lid of the computer. He finds a form, pulling it precisely from the organized pile upon his desk. "Reports find that of the one million Crusaders stationed in or around the Holy City, we have...one hundred, ninety-three thousand, two hundred and thirteen."

"Level Three is designed as an amphitheater, allowing for the address of one hundred thousand. Perhaps you could speak in shifts."

[20] "Or we could print it and distribute it freely. The men and women of the Thornton Printing Company survived -- and so did our press. We could assemble it. We'd need to locate a source of paper, but that isn't much of an issue. Me and William can work on that, while we have the Warmachines start to round Crusaders up for your speech." Emma winks, "I figured keeping our propaganda section alive would be a good investment."

You give a nod, looking over at the null. "Do we have any replacement equipment for the Crusaders?"

"Negative. Our Las-gun program started roughly one hundred years ago. It was one of the facilities automated and controlled by SEED. We centralized our Bioplastics nearby the City State."

Here, Emma speaks up again, "Thornton intelligence states that the Montblanc family was purchasing massive amounts of Las-guns before they...died. They were attempting to deprive the other Families. I can get William to find out where they might have been stored, and if we might be able to salvage them. As for armor...we may have to go back to the basics with metal plating, especially considering this year's crops."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on April 26, 2020, 10:51:36 pm
How would a slug thrower fare against a lasgun in comparison? Also very cool suggestion game.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 26, 2020, 11:03:59 pm
Slug throwers are otherwise known as conventional firearms, having a physical projectile be launched a great distance using escaping gas.  Las guns operate by the principle of rapid pulsing beams of light, which are used to transfer energy. Flesh and blood is superheated into steam and explodes, causing great damage to the surrounding tissue. It tends to lead to an increased risk of shock as well, and greater damage to the target. Because of the efficient battery systems they operate on, a single individual can carry a thousand shots in two magazines, which, with the proper technology, can be recharged by sunlight.

Slughthrowers, in comparison, have less ammo, less sustained rate of firepower, higher operation costs, higher penetration, same range, but cheaper production costs. While a las-gun is incredibly simple to maintain, if the reactor or another vital part of it is damaged, it can explode or be rendered useless.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 26, 2020, 11:16:32 pm
Any other questions or commands for these two? Otherwise, I will begin preparing for the speech. Gods save me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on April 26, 2020, 11:31:35 pm
Is there any design for napalm? And can the hovercraft function like a bomber or does it only can transport troops and have anti-air capabilities? Also, what is the max weight a hovercraft can hold? including the crew.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 26, 2020, 11:58:30 pm
The others will have questions worth asking, perhaps-- but I am content. I would suggest only this: summarize to Emma, briefly, the story you wish to tell in amphitheater. Trace the sigil for her in fire, if you deem it meet! She can coordinate your propaganda accordingly, and will perhaps have a word or two of her own on the matter.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 12:01:36 am
One last question. "What would it take to secure the Industrial Districts?  Would we be negotiating with survivors, taking it from the plague, or repairing damaged facilities that have been abandoned?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 12:12:34 am
Ha, you see! A question worth asking in truth.

One last question. "What would it take to secure the Industrial Districts?  Would we be negotiating with survivors, taking it from the plague, or repairing damaged facilities?"

+1

I say, "Good Doctor"-- you have not given us a name! Have you contented yourself, then, with the epithet given you?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 12:14:37 am
For now, "Good Doctor" will suffice. Once I uncover more of my history, I will choose a name that I feel suits me best.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 01:09:20 am
There are several designs for napalm within the database, all of which could probably be made relatively inexpensively. There are at least four hovercraft designs. One is a smaller, combat orientated vehicle, with an internal capacity at roughly [two thousand pounds], and an external of [seven thousand pounds], however, it's not quite comfortable for more than a single squad of ten to occupy. The second is a passenger style craft, designed for ferrying troops, with a capacity at roughly [eleven thousand pounds], or around fifty full kit troops. The third is a massive, slow-moving hovercraft, with a capacity of [six thousand tons]. Its primary use is the transport of freight. SEED, in its evacuation plans, pulled out reserve hovercrafts that were even larger, with capacities of [one hundred thousand tons] and up. These move at a snail's pace and are energy-guzzling beasts.

Bombing runs have been a useful tool in dealing with feral strains of [The Plague], but the current strain tends to shoot down and 'recycle' hovercrafts, turning them into infected monsters.

"A mixture of all or none. I have not run recon on those sites. District Number Nine will follow you -- the Thorntons are a menace if they do not." Zero informs you. "When the Military is reorganized, I would recommend taking that action."

You frown at him but turn and leave, not bothering to exchange pleasantries as he begins to work at the assignment you have given him. Down the dull hallways you walk in silence, Emma clinging to your arm. You step into one of the empty office spaces, taking a seat on one of the desks, and you explain your speech to her. Or, at least, the vague idea that you were given for a speech.

[12] And you show her the symbol you want her to spread, conjuring it from hydrogen flame in the air between you. The room heats up rapidly, but neither of you pay it any mind. Emma dips a nod, lounging in her seat. "Your speech has a good basis. The Symbol -- it works...and it's simple. Its something that an artist can elevate to detailed heights or a child could dawdle on their notebooks. You can make it into a necklace or paint it on a wall."

Emma picks at the edge of her coat with small frown. "I will also line up a project for any artisan that survived to begin beautifying our spaces with our religious iconography. Good scenes -- but ones that do not call to mind the Holy City. Cheaply made. However, if we intend to live here forever, these people are going to need something more than pretty pictures-- they're going to need luxuries. Wall hangings, tapestries, or hells, we could just use the Eastern style and start decorating everything with loosely draped linens." She pauses, "We're also going to need actual plants to make this space livable. Greenery, flowers, ivy, whatever. Actual food too, if those nutrient cubes are as bad as you say, even if just as a reward."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 01:31:43 am
I hope I've not misrepresented the humble nutrient cube.

"They're... edible... better with something to wash it down. Still bland."

"Could we set up personal vegetable gardens for people down here? We've space to spare in the living quarters, for time being... folks would have some greenery to tend, and a steady trickle of fresh edibles."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 01:44:23 am
"That's a good start." Emma nods. "Seeds are going to get real valuable soon, as are fresh vegetables. It'll supplement their diets. We're also going to have people start sending requests to come live here-- luckily, they won't be able to just wander in, or else we'll be flooded...but maybe we should be." Emma pauses, breathing out a sigh.

"I want to bring the entire Thornton Group here." She announces, suddenly. "All of them."

You blink, shifting slightly, uncomfortable at the hint of favoritism she's suggesting.

"Things are going to get bad out there, Phebe. I can't abandon my people -- I'm sure William feels the same way. We need scientists, and farmers, and laborers, and artisans. And hey, if they don't have to worry about winter supplies, maybe we can use our seed stock to produce some food. Maybe bring some animals, too, to raise, if the Fortress has the ability. It wouldn't be much, but its a start."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 02:22:54 am
Her people are our people, and they are highly skilled. I think we should take them in.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 03:38:24 am
The precedent is dangerous. How far will we go, to elevate this one Family above all SEED's people?
Still... I do not see how we can deny. We need the Thorntons by our side, now more than ever.


"Your people." Sigh, smile. "Our people, then. How many?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 04:10:19 am
"One thousand and five hundred or so, as of the last SEED census." Emma provides, giving you a weak and hopeful smile. "Not too many -- and two hundred of those are trained chemists, in some way. The Warmachines will worry about their families less now, too."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 06:28:00 am
I was worried it would be more, the more people we have, the more food and water it will take to sustain everyone. Chemists, farmers, and scientists of other disciplines will be helpful, as will laborers and mechanics
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 11:58:15 am
"Consider it done. Will they need help with the relocation?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 01:42:21 pm
Only that! A request easily granted.

"Consider it done. Will they need help with the relocation?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 03:18:35 pm
Emma gives you a big smile, sitting up to provide you with a hug and a firm shake of her head. "No, we can handle it. Thank you, Phebe." She kisses you, and the two of you turn to leave. You head back to the hangar, to your private room aboard one of the vessels -- only to find said vessel missing. A null nearby approaches you with a precise bow of his head.

"Where's our room -- and our stuff?" You ask, bluntly, agitation creeping into your voice.

"Forgive this one." The Child of SEED dips his head in a bow, "But we had to use the vessel to transport refugees. Your personal property is on Level Zero." He extends out a set of keycards. "It was originally to be the observatory, but we've turned it into your private quarters."

You lift your brow, taking the keycard offered. Emma takes the other, looking just as confused as you.

Getting into the elevator, you glance over the document describing the Fortress. Level Zero is indeed an observatory. However, SEED deemed it ineffective, as well as a security hazard. As such, it sealed it off to the general public. The Level is far smaller than the others, only ten thousand square feet, divided into many empty rooms, some of which contain modern bathrooms.

The elevator hisses to a stop, and you slot your keycard into the reader. It gives a pleasant beep.

The central room has a massive telescope apparatus with a computer interface. The surrounding rooms have glass ceilings, designed to be covered with heavy steel and concrete plates with just a few presses of a centralized display. Optional timers are built-in to the display. Your bed and desk are located in a room with a view overlooking the snow-capped rim mountains to the west. A bathroom is just a few steps away, and the Children of SEED have provided you with a crude steel wardrobe filled with uniforms. A computer, one of those briefcase affairs, sits on your desk nearby.

You fall into bed with a sigh, stretching out your limbs as Emma looks out over the star-lit mountains.

This is a bribe, I think. Those corpses are wanting to ensure their survival by making us happy.

Emma gives you a kiss, shaking her head softly, and leaves you alone in your new room.

[5]I feel like we're missing something...



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 03:28:38 pm
More than an arm, you mean?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 03:50:09 pm
[17] Ha-ha. No, something bes--Mitch! You bolt out of bed, rushing down the hallways to the elevator. The null is still in the landing pad, directing traffic and the stream of refugees.

"Where's my dog?" You ask, and the null, for the first time, looks confused.

"Dog?"

"Barker. Hound. Whatever the word for it is! The big bitey puppy thing."

"One of the Warmachines had to escort it to level zero for us, as it tried to bite every other handler..." The null pauses, adding on, "It bit the Warmachine as well, as fact, but I'm sure those ruptures in the armor can be repaired."

You leave, returning to your level, and searching through it. Mitch, you come to find out, is lying in one of the empty rooms, on a pile of shredded uniforms. He's asleep, his thick chain in his mouth midchew. You return to your bed with a puff of exasperation.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 03:53:23 pm
Go back to Mitch. "You shouldn't be tied up, Mitch. Let me remove that chain, but please try not to bite people, okay?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 04:04:31 pm
Mitch wasn't really tied up -- the chain is the only type of leash that you don't have to replace daily. Only monthly, but you wander back to him and unhook it regardless. Mitch starts awake, his slavering jaws snapping down on it. He pulls it back from you, and the two of you struggle against one another in an impromptu tug of war. Despite his small size and youth, he gives you a good run for your money. At the end of it, he spits out one of his broken teeth, panting happily as you hang the chain up out of reach.

You pet him after he gives you an 'affectionate' nip of your hand.

"[Try not to bite people, okay]?"

[14] He growls in response, nuzzling at your hand.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 04:06:42 pm
["Good boy. Let's go for a run tomorrow. You'll like it, these mountains are beautiful."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 04:45:07 pm
["Good boy. Let's go for a run tomorrow. You'll like it, these mountains are beautiful."] You murmur. Mitch yawns in reply, returning to his bedding and settling in. You give him a final pet, slipping past his nip in response, grinning to yourself.  He's grown over the last couple of months, coming up to your knee now. His baby fat is already giving way to muscle, and his soft fur is becoming more and more bristly. It's turning from sandy white and brown to a more grayish red.

We're going to have to get him a chew toy. Or a bar of iron smothered in grease.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 04:48:27 pm
He's growing into quite the little hellhound. We should go for steel instead. Our Mitch deserves only the best.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 05:11:11 pm
We should save steel for construction of turrets, las guns, armor
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 05:16:32 pm
I'll file the requistion.

Unsatisfied, you rise to your feet, pacing around the telescope in the center of the room. An hour passes as you compose your speech internally, practicing various gestures and movements as you do. The Pontifex's teachings come in handy, but you're limited by your lack of an arm. You'll have to 'borrow' a half-cloak from somewhere to cover it up, and instead work on the choreography of your speech with just one. A broad, sweeping gesture.

A gentle chime sounds at the main doors, and you approach, opening them with a flick of the card.

Iyal stands on the other side. She bows her head respectfully. "I wish to speak with you, Lady Pheobe."

"Uh, yes. Come in." You're already put off balance by the time she enters, and the two of you find a sitting room. She sits upon the floor, setting her palms on her knees and bowing her head.

"I would like to ask you a question."

"Okay..?"

"Why are you doing this?"

"I'm--I'm sorry?"

"Defending these people. Why do you care, when you're so much stronger than they are?" Her words catch you off guard, and you shift in your seat. "As an angel such as yourself, surely there's something that awaits you besides this world?"




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 05:57:56 pm
“This is my home, too. These people are friends. This planet must not fall to the [plague]. Why should I let an entire planet die? The [plague] must be stopped. Losing this planet to it will make it stronger. If we destroy the [plague] here, we will be safe, and,,,”
Can others add more?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 05:59:12 pm
"If we try to cultivate certain virtues within us, we will lead a fuller and more satisying life. In contrast, if we act callously and care only about self-advantage, we will invite suffering into our being. I think it's important to ask ourselves what kind of person we would like to be, individually and in respect to the communities we belong to, and attempt to act accordingly."

Perhaps this as well?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 07:09:02 pm
[-] Iyal gives a small nod in response to your statement. "Will trying to live a good life like that alleviate past wrongs, you believe? Allow you to find atonement for the wrongs you have committed in past lives?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 07:16:38 pm
"Nothing can alleviate or nullify the wrongs that we have already committed, but at least by improving our character we can make conscious efforts towards ensuring that those wrongs will not be repeated. The past cannot be changed, but the future holds infinite possibilities."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 07:31:51 pm
"Do you think you're a good person, Lady Pheobe?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 07:32:53 pm
"No. Do you think you're a good person?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 07:34:28 pm
...only you know the answer to that question, Phoenix-of-Sol. Speak as you feel.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 07:35:40 pm
Yes, we have shaped you, but we are not you. The opinion is yours.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 07:45:16 pm
"...No. I am corrupt. Prone to outbursts of anger and bloodlust." You answer, honestly, glancing at her. "I've let myself be used as a weapon of war and bloodshed."

[17 vs 13+4] Iyal nods, and you hear the main door open in the distance as someone rushes into the level. You hear your name being called--

"[You are no longer Alphira Sol. That I can see.]" Iyal speaks calmly, gently, in perfect Empyreal.

[4 vs 20+1] You cough, tasting blood. You should have been faster, but you've realized it a little too late. Your heart misses a beat as something tightens around it.

Iyal sits patiently, a sharp black spike jutting from her arm, impaling your abdomen. "[Call them off, or I'll rip your heart out. Then kill them.]"

"Don't come in." You yell back, obediently, breathing hard.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 07:46:07 pm
what
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 07:48:56 pm
I suppose the fact that she switched to a conventional firearm should have been a clue.

"Who sent you?  Was it the navy, the usurpers?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 07:50:54 pm
"Who sent you?  Was it the navy, the usurpers?"

+1

...no hold up. I don't want to let on yet how much we know.

"What are you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 08:03:49 pm
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 08:09:20 pm
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Is this reserved or are you waiting for a vote? If not reserved, I vote
"What are you?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 27, 2020, 08:14:38 pm
I'm guessing she's not a regular human, what with the spike "protruding from her arm" and her speaking Empyreal and all. That's a strike against my first plan, namely go full Inferno or whatnot (still unsure of what the specific powers do, as I was not present at their discovery.)

So do this,

"What are you?"

+1, while also using our Healing Factor Conquerer's Aura to make her more likely to spill information.

Unless Healing Factor's passive. ...It's passive, isn't it? I have a lot to learn.

Healing factor is active, healing our injuries, if I’m correct. Someone else correct me if I’m wrong

Passive as in it runs all the time, without being under our conscious control; trying to turn it on would be redundant.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 08:17:04 pm
Healing factor is active, healing our injuries, if I’m correct. Someone else correct me if I’m wrong
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 08:18:18 pm
You have two, one is a passive, and one is an active. One slowly heals your injuries over time, while the active form rapidly heals you. Eschar, may I send you a pm?

"[I am an agent of the Empyre. A Noble sent me to observe you and take actions that I deemed necessary to neutralize you as a threat.]" Iyal explains, gently.

[18 vs 11+5] "[I mean the tentacle wrapped around my heart, you self import-]" The tentacle mentioned tightens, sending a shooting pain down your right side. Her discipline cracks for just a moment, and there is a will buried there. William and Emma are on the other side of the door. You can feel reactors humming to life.

[20 vs 14] "[I am of the Lavoisier line. I have learned to manipulate the carbon and other elements in my body. Empyreals sometime call my Phenotype face-changers.]" You've succeeded-- she's monologuing."[Your Kindred are here to inform you that I've turned on the Distress Beacon. The Noble fleet I am attached to is twelve years off, but they will come.]"

Keep her talking. Pheonix responds quietly to you, as you tighten your Willpower to William's questioning probes, using it to heal yourself quietly. It doesn't change the tentacle wrapped around your heart, but your stomach and thoracic cavity stop leaking blood.

[17 vs 12] The fusion generators move to orientate behind you, facing inward.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 27, 2020, 08:21:20 pm
((You may.))

Keep Conquering, keep healing. Subtly move so that we will not be in line of fire from the lasguns. Ask her more, guide her into revealing why we're considered a threat.

Weren't we planning to activate the beacon too? I guess the problem is that it's Iyal's house's fleet that's responding.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 08:23:13 pm
“I am working to destroy the [plague]. I thought the [plague] is an enemy to both SEEDships and the Empyre.”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 08:23:58 pm
We've healed all we can, at this point... trouble now is that tentacle.

"Iyal-- the real Iyal. The girl I met in that alleyway, in Steelworks Number 09. She is dead?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 08:24:03 pm
"I am no longer the person I was, Iyal. I want only to help my people here grow and recover."

The beacon was going to be reserved as a last resort... oh well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 27, 2020, 08:28:34 pm
We've healed all we can, at this point... trouble now is that tentacle.

"The girl I met in that alleyway, in Steelworks Number 09. She is dead?"

"I am no longer the person I was, Iyal. I want only to help my people here grow and recover."

The beacon was going to be reserved as a last resort... oh well.

+1 to a combined version of these if others accept that, along with manuvering ourself out of the lines of fire (and "Iyal" into them if we can manage it.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 08:34:42 pm
We've healed all we can, at this point... trouble now is that tentacle.

"The girl I met in that alleyway, in Steelworks Number 09. She is dead?"

"I am no longer the person I was, Iyal. I want only to help my people here grow and recover."

The beacon was going to be reserved as a last resort... oh well.

+1 to a combined version of these if others accept that, along with manuvering ourself out of the lines of fire (and Iyal into them if we can manage it.)
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 08:36:37 pm
This creature is not Iyal-- of that, I am certain. It is unworthy of that name.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 08:38:23 pm
Perhaps, but it's also possible that she was deceiving us from the very start. She hasn't actually neutralized us and is rattling off her plan, so that's a good sign.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 27, 2020, 08:38:54 pm
Okey dokey, changing it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 27, 2020, 08:40:15 pm
Perhaps, but it's also possible that she was deceiving us from the very start. She hasn't actually neutralized us and is rattling off her plan, so that's a good sign.

Problem is, the only reason she's monologuing is because we used Conquerer's Aura on her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 08:42:39 pm
She could have instantly killed us, but she has chosen not to. Perhaps she will be amenable to some form of negotiation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 08:44:06 pm
Isn’t there a reward on our head?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 27, 2020, 08:47:38 pm
She could have instantly killed us, but she has chosen not to. Perhaps she will be amenable to some form of negotiation.

Again, Conquerer's Aura. We're clouding her judgement. I'm not sure how much we can infer from her behavior until we stop our [Jedi mind-tricks.]

Of course, while that's running, she's definitely amenable to negotiation. We'd have a bigger problem if she realizes we mind-manipulated her into a deal though. She'd probably be livid.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 08:49:01 pm
I don't think so. The roll was 21 vs. 4 to grab our heart, and there were no rolls immediately after it to apply the aura.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 27, 2020, 08:51:46 pm
Huh.

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You've succeeded-- she's monologuing.

I was going off this - the result of me suggesting CA'ing her to get her to spill information.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 08:53:20 pm
Yeah, but that's in the middle of the post after she already said a bunch of stuff, that looks like it was the 20 vs. 14 roll.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 08:55:49 pm
Huh.

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You've succeeded-- she's monologuing.

I was going off this - the result of me suggesting CA'ing her to get her to spill information.
regardless of why she’s monologuing, we need to negotiate with her now, probably by finding out why she was sent for us, unless we already know the answer from SEED, namely hundreds of thousands of credits for our capture/death, in which case I’m not sure negotiation is possible if she already wants us dead
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 08:57:42 pm
Even if we can't change her loyalties, we should at least keep her alive so that we can extract as much information from her as possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 09:05:09 pm
"[She was never real. Your profile suggested personal freedoms were important to you. What better than a debt-slave?]" Iyal shrugs, ["And an Outlander, to explain all the oddness...and what tool does a nascent political figure have the most use for?]"

[20 vs 1] "[I will keep you aliv--]" Iyal starts, and you shift. Awareness flickers across Iyal's face. She squeezes your heart tight for a few painful micro-seconds, and you can feel it creaking, about to burst-- the wall explodes into the room, and las-fire sprays all around you. You twist, sending her into the las-fire. A shot catches her shoulder, breaking her concentration.

[12][18 vs 15][hl:20!]You heal rapidly, gasping in pain as the tentacle is forced out of your body --   and you're already lunging -- wrapping a grip of fire around her throat, and she struggles, carbon forming around her neck to protect her. You tighten your grasp, and her hands begin to work, her willpower surging--

[18 vs 12] You snap her neck, blackening her skin through the carbon structure and her squirming ceases, her eyes fixed on yours.

"[My intel was incomplete.]" She admits when her lungs start working again. "[Do you really wish to fight here? We would rip apart this structure.]"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 09:08:19 pm
["Oh, I'm sorry. Is this building not nice enough for you? Perhaps I should snap your neck again to teach you some humility."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 27, 2020, 09:10:34 pm
We should take her somewhere open. We should not destroy buildings if we can help it, however if we relent she will attack
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 09:20:40 pm
You don't speak, simply snapping her neck again. Her breath catches, and she stares at you with a dark look.

"[That was rather immature of you.]" She offers after a few moments of blessed peace. "[If you insist on this...you might want to clear your pets out of the room.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 09:22:45 pm
"[Is there somewhere else that would be more to your liking? Somewhere with a better view, perhaps? I'm all ears.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 27, 2020, 09:31:47 pm
["And I should inform you - carbon burns better than almost anything. Those who order you have woefully incomplete intel if they sent you up against a being of fire."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 09:32:25 pm
Are we fighting her or talking with her?
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Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 09:35:12 pm
If we're sure that we've neutralized her for the moment, I suppose we might as well talk to her, and also bring her to somewhere more open while we're at it, just in case.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 27, 2020, 10:41:28 pm
I am unsure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 10:46:47 pm
I'll wait for my colleagues to weigh in. I'm not sure if moving her somewhere else is supposed to be a ploy or not. It seems strange that she would be worried about damage to the building...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 27, 2020, 10:50:43 pm
Perhaps her words regarding this building were merely taunting out willingness to fight her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 11:18:10 pm
Perhaps this is unwise, but after some initial pettiness, I sort of feel like sparing her for the moment. She may be a useful source of information.

Also... by what name should I call you?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 27, 2020, 11:21:02 pm
There is no talking with her that is not us dominating her mind.  If you think you can pull that off then talking is smart, force her to yield and we have a powerful tool.

Decapitation is a more useful tool.  With control over heat you could melt the neck and pull severing the head off.  She defended it heavily once it is important to keep herself attached.

Separating hydrogen from oxygen inside a body can also be quite painful if she is mostly organic.  This can be done at the same time as other physical actions.

She may have dust we could forcibly steal though doing such while there is still a will should be hard.  Cannibalism is generally frowned on though.

She has given a gift though, at least we have a long term goal of getting off this rock.  Nothing here can take on an empyrial fleet, even the paltry ones of this time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2020, 11:23:55 pm
Yes, not even we could take on such a fleet, and we are wanted by the Empyreal Navy. In fact, we may be the most notorious criminal in the galaxy. If they find us, they will kill us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 27, 2020, 11:26:54 pm
[hl:20!]

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Did we just get our arm back?



Ah, Iyal... you were a lie, then. We took you in, and you knew we would, and you were a lie. What a vile worm you are.
This creature has little interest, I expect, in the preservation of this structure--
we cannot say the same, and well this creature knows it. A bluff, perhaps...  I wonder. We need intel.

Did Alphira ever do battle with members of this Line?


Keep that grip of fire tight, ready to burn away the neck of our enemy should the need arise. "[Have you a better idea, snake?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 27, 2020, 11:52:30 pm
Okay, I have two plans on how to defeat the fleet.  The first involves detonating the central star of this system though.  Control of hydrogen is fun.

Also did not recognize you Constantine, names like superdorf are so much more fun!

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More immediately: We might want to ask which noble she represents, why they sided with the usurper and all that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on April 28, 2020, 12:04:40 am
What would the second plan involve?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 12:09:40 am
"[Our primary purpose is the same.]" She answers, gently, her fingers flexing as her nervous system heals. "[I have no quarrel with Humanity-- and destruction of this shelter would doom these survivors.]"

"[We speak as equals, as two Descendents should. Combat and will. Speech and power.]" Iyal offers, gently, with a smile.

"[Who do you represent, if we are to truly fight?]" You question.

"[Magnus, a noble scion -- he has taken an interest in you. I do not care about any usurpers, or the accusation leveled by Alphias. Or the war that resulted.]"

Some. But each of our kind is unique in how we wield our tools. Creativity and will often wins out. Most fights, when they occur, are either stalemates or deathless victories. Alphias conquered many to his side that way. True victory lies in adding their will to ours freely, in service or friendship -- total destruction of the other is a waste, but not rare.

Where your stump was, now your will is there, twisting hydrogen fire into a burning, clawed hand. You took the design from an Infected beast you once saw, and it roils with heat.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 12:12:30 am
"[What are your intentions for me?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 12:22:07 am
"[I do not know. My intention was to keep you alive, as a puppet, until Magnus arrives. A show of Will to keep you in line -- but you're no longer a scared little girl.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 12:24:32 am
["If I agree to meet with your master when he arrives, can we avoid a fight for the moment?"]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 28, 2020, 02:09:18 am
Ahhhhhhh.  She was rightly afraid of you regaining even a fraction of your willpower.  I would really like to know what remains of the rebel fleet, probably gone but who knows.

I would suggest: [You currently serve Magnus then.  Consider which side you, and he, would like to be on in this war.  You have seen the power I can wield at an ignorant fraction of my skill among backwater simpletons.  In the case of a fight here and your loss, I will either escape or come up with some plan for victory.  Either way Magnus loses out.  If you stand aside and help fight off the plague you can at least keep an eye on me and sabotage me at a more opportune time.  You might win and reset or destroy me, but then you will face the plague alone for however many years.]

Bah I cant reduce it down any someone else come up with something better.  Its basically better for her to stand at our side with a knife then stick it in at this point.

Option 2 is hijacking their ships but the level of automation the current fleets use is unknown to me.
Option 3 is orbital mines filled with the [plague] highly distasteful obviously, but an option.

Honestly the planet is just too primitive for much of this to work.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 04:53:23 am
We must fight. It doesn't have to be to the death, but a hierarchy of Willpower must be drawn between us. It is our way.

Phoenix let's you feel it then, an ancient bloodlust that resonates between the two of you. A will to dominate the other, to beat them. To win. It's the same determination that gave you the strength to rip your arm off, to devour it, all to continue fighting.

It is ancient, older than the Line, and it echoes from deep within.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 07:47:48 am
Subsume Iyai’s will
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on April 28, 2020, 08:22:55 am
Lets crush her will.
((I feel like I've missed out not asking about the past life thing that everyone else did, I thought about asking when the question was asked but forgot to.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 28, 2020, 08:55:11 am
On that note:

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 09:09:45 am
I hate PMs because I can't edit them. So many grammar and bad word choices. Why am I like this -- and why doesn't this software I have help correct that! -.-'
I'll get you hooked up Zultan. Although that is the last one.


[-] You both take your time, provoking one another. Your will whips through the room like a raging firestorm, fierce and energetic, burning upwards with buoyancy. Her's is dense and spreading, like oil, like tar, making the room heavier with its presence. William and Emma have to back away, both growing pale. The Null that accompanies them looks ill -- then falls to the floor in seizure. The Warmachines and Crusaders cannot stand it, passing out from the exchange.

"[Did you think it would be that easy?]" Iyal questions, lifting a brow.

"[I had hoped so, yes.]" You respond. The glass window behind Iyal begins to crack -- particles of dust are stuck suspended between the two opposing forces, inertia and gravity cancelled by the exchange.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 28, 2020, 09:40:08 am
Is it Dust dust or regular dust?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 09:48:43 am
...dust.


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 28, 2020, 09:57:01 am
What curious creatures we are... I would rather have words than war with this one, but it would seem the two go hand in hand with our kind.

Arrange your duel, Phoenix-of-Sol. Somewhere far from the mountain. Explain to your successors the nature of the duel, and promise-- promise to Emma-- you
will return. You need not fight to the death. Tell her so.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 10:11:55 am
I think she already explained that most fights are deathless
[Why not work together against the plague? Surely it threatens all of us. Let’s fight it instead of each other]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 11:58:31 am
"Emma amd William, let's focus all our will on her at once. I don't think she can resist three Empyreals."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 28, 2020, 12:16:37 pm
Their will is weak-- secondary to our own. They cannot aid us.
This is a matter of honor now. A clash between demigods. If we are to earn this one's respect, we will face her
alone: by our own skill, by our own power. She'll bow to nothing less.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 28, 2020, 12:17:29 pm
Not to mention if we tell them to aid us in will-crushing, Iyal will hear it and have a few moments of warning. Can we communicate with E and W telepathically?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 12:28:19 pm
"Emma amd William, let's focus all our will on her at once. I don't think she can resist three Empyreals."
-1
I agree with Constantine
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 12:31:19 pm
Let's say that our will would need a strength of ten to overpower Iyal. If our will has a strength of eight, and if Emma and William each have a strength of one, that would mean that our combined strength would overpower Iyal, even though the Thorntons are much weaker than us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 12:47:04 pm
Iyai would hear us and know that two others are coming, and could use her will to overpower them, and make them puppets
If Iyai has 9 willpower in your example, she can split off 3 willpower to Emma and William, beating out their willpower and adding 2 willpower to her side, turning them against us
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 12:49:37 pm
If she breaks her concentration on us by diverting her will elsewhere, that might also suffice to allow us to overpower her. In your above example, if Iyal diverts 3 strength towards dominating a Thornton, she would not have enough strength to resist us at that moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 28, 2020, 12:53:33 pm
Can we communicate with E and W telepathically?

We've not shown much in the way of verbal telepathy, but they can feel our will for sure: our presence, our emotions. We could perhaps manage more than that, but we've never really tried.

Let's say that our will would need a strength of ten to overpower Iyal. If our will has a strength of eight, and if Emma and William each have a strength of one, that would mean that our combined strength would overpower Iyal, even though the Thorntons are much weaker than us.

Too many hypotheticals for my liking. We don't know the strength of Iyal's will, and we'll pay dearly if we underestimate it... I'll not risk making collateral of those closest to us.

This scion of Lavoisier-- (I refuse to call her Iyal; that name was a lie--)  we need her. She's called an ugly storm down on our head, and she can help guide us through... if we earn her respect. We'll beat her on her own terms.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 12:56:30 pm
what do you think of these words?
[Why not work together against the plague? Surely it threatens all of us. Let’s fight it instead of each other]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 28, 2020, 12:59:30 pm
what do you think of these words?
[Why not work together against the plague? Surely it threatens all of us. Let’s fight it instead of each other]

+1, but remain alert for any movements from her while speaking.


Avoiding will because I don't want to take the risk of her overpowering Emma and William.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 28, 2020, 01:17:25 pm
They are lovely words-- but alas, the time for words is now past. Now comes the defense of bitter honor.
I have made my intentions clear, Phoenix-of-Sol. If words are needed, these words I offer.


Withdraw our will a bit: a shield rather than a sword, for ourself and our kinsfolk.

"We fight in earnest, then: a contest of will, away from the mountain. I've no quarrel with your people-- but I will not be made beholden to them. I'll try their emissary by fire first."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 01:22:09 pm
They are lovely words-- but alas, the time for words is now past. Now comes the defense of bitter honor.
I have made my intentions clear, Phoenix-of-Sol. If words are needed, these words I offer.


Withdraw our will a bit: a shield rather than a sword, for ourself and our kinsfolk.

"We fight in earnest, then: a contest of will, away from the mountain. I've no quarrel with the line Lavoisier-- but I will not be made beholden to it. I'll try its emissary by fire first."

+1, this is better
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 28, 2020, 01:43:26 pm
We need to break her will with words and force, convince her that there is a sliver of reason to join us, then nurture it to grow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 01:52:12 pm
what do you think of these words?
[Why not work together against the plague? Surely it threatens all of us. Let’s fight it instead of each other]

+1, but remain alert for any movements from her while speaking.


Avoiding will because I don't want to take the risk of her overpowering Emma and William.
Yes, what about saying this while using our will
Does that make sense?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 28, 2020, 02:09:34 pm
what about something like: [Are you so sure about your master's intent that opposing me is wise?  Is our honest self reflection so dangerous to his plans?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 02:15:16 pm
The time for words has passed.

We must fight. It doesn't have to be to the death, but a hierarchy of Willpower must be drawn between us. It is our way.

Phoenix let's you feel it then, an ancient bloodlust that resonates between the two of you. A will to dominate the other, to beat them. To win. It's the same determination that gave you the strength to rip your arm off, to devour it, all to continue fighting.

It is ancient, older than the Line, and it echoes from deep within.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 28, 2020, 02:20:53 pm
As I understand it... the interactions of our kind have their utmost foundation on the hierarchy of raw power. If the position of two Empyreals is at first unclear, there must be a battle for supremacy-- to avoid this battle is to submit. There can be no equals.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 02:27:32 pm
As I understand it... the interactions of our kind have their utmost foundation on the hierarchy of raw power. If the position of two Empyreals is at first unclear, there must be a battle for supremacy-- to avoid this battle is to submit. There can be no equals.
Ok, Continue fighting with our will
Question, would endurance help with this or not?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 02:30:11 pm
If we continue fighting here with our wills, what's to stop her from deciding to try to dominate the minds of Emma and William? Avoiding that seems important to you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 02:37:15 pm
If we continue fighting here with our wills, what's to stop her from deciding to try to dominate the minds of Emma and William? Avoiding that seems important to you.
Correct. We should try getting her away from them, maybe by going outside
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 02:38:50 pm
I agree to fighting somewhere else. I don't want our allies to get hurt or the building to be damaged.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on April 28, 2020, 05:30:52 pm
I hate PMs because I can't edit them. So many grammar and bad word choices. Why am I like this -- and why doesn't this software I have help correct that! -.-'
I'll get you hooked up Zultan. Although that is the last one.
Aw. Did you run out of backgrounds or that you always had a hard limit on the number of backgrounds for the players?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 06:03:26 pm
There is a hard limit to the number of prime ancestors that the MC has. If you don't mind a weaker cadet branch or a rigorous, very tightly controlled life story, then it isn't an issue. The Cadets Branches have limited importance on the story, but the strict one has a great importance but isn't very open-ended.



"[...I agree, let us go somewhere else. I will try Magnus' Emissary by fire.]" You murmur tightly --, and you drop your will. Lavoisier's Scion bows her head, doing the same. William and Emma slump, looking tired, breathing hard.

"[That's for the best.]" She nods, giving you a smile in exchange. "[I feel riding in an elevator together to the pad would be anti-climatic, no? I'll fix this.]" Lavoisier's Scion crudely throws one of the chairs through the window, sending it spiraling to the mountain below. She reaches out with her will, ripping apart the plastics of another to form larger and larger wings, which she compacts and folds within the tight space.

You, having no such time requirement to summon your's, instead go to the shell-shocked Emma, who stares at Lavoisier's Scion with a slack jaw and pale countenance. You pull her tightly into a hug and then give her a kiss, which she returns when her senses return. "Pheb-e I..."

You kiss her again, speaking softly with your forehead resting against her's, embracing her. "We're going to fight-- not to the death. I will return."

Emma glances between the two of you then gives a weak, small nod. "I love you." It is about all she can manage.

"I love you too."

You unrestrain your wings, letting them heat the cold room. Lavoisier's Scion stretches one side, then the other, her lips quirking into a frown. Thick black lines stretch out from her back, and each wing almost seems to fill the room. She gives them an experimental flap and glances at you. Without further ado, she takes a running start and launches herself out of the broken window. Her wings of plastic feathers twist open, catching the wind. And she rises ungracefully into the air.

I was hoping to hear a splat...

You, however, are the epitome of grace as you step out of the window and rise into the sky above your new fortress. The air here is cold, and the oxygen thin, but not so bad, not yet. Your greedy lungs work in overtime as you set off towards the north, guided by the light of the stars. You can hear Lavoisier's Scion behind you, trying to keep pace with her cumbersome wings. When you drop down onto a sandy, barren plain in the middle of a crater, she's nowhere in sight.

It takes her an hour to find you, and she scowls when she drops down.

"[You left me behind.]" Lavoisier's Scion states when she folds her wings upon her back.

"[You betrayed my trust. I don't know why you expect anything less than pettiness from me.]" You retort, bluntly. To the Scion's credit, she frowns. Then, slowly, she takes off the mask of Iyal and reveals herself. She looks similar to you, with an androgynous face, with eyes a cold, dark gray. Her hair is of the same color but shines with oil in the light of the stars, and her skin is pale, nearly translucent. She flashes you a smile filled with only slightly too pointed teeth.

"[I'm sorry.]" She states gently, genuinely, "[I am Cephie of Lavoisier, in service to Empyreal Noble Scion Magnus The Third of House Magnus.]"

"[I am Pheobe, Pheonix of Sol.]"

"[Alphira is truly dead then?]"

"[I consumed any memories and identity she might have had left.]"

Cephie gives a hesitant nod at that, "[She was a contract breaker, by all accounts. Killed her own men when they refused to flee beyond the edge of the rim, into the Neverending Void.]"

You shrug, unable to remember the deeds accused.

Cephie approaches, and you tense. She removes a small pouch, pulling out two small, round capsules. "[Do you remember these?]"

"[No.]"

"[Take all the nutrition of entire feasts, compress the atoms, and then surround it with nano-assemblers. You'll get these. Each one gives me roughly twenty-four [ uses of power] You might be different -- you're a bit more energetic than me.]"

She gets into your personal space, but you still, taking the capsule in hand, it's not water, or alcohol, or wine, but it will do. You pop the tablet into your mouth with your arm intertwined in hers. Cephie does the same, and the two of you return to your positions. Without further ceremony, the two of you return to your previous levels of willpower -- she is not as strong as you, but not so weak that you can consume her.

...she has more experience and utility.

"[After this,]" You begin, rising on your wings while she rips hers apart, letting them fall to the ground, "[One way or the other, we must fight the plague on this world.]"

"[I agree. Magnus, I'm sure, if you don't upset him, will render aid with that as well if it is necessary.]"

You both sit just on the edge of the other's will, her looking up at you, you looking down at her.

Then you exchange the first blow.

[12][7 vs. 6][8]
     [2+1 vs. 20] Sharp darts whistle haphazardly through the air as Cephie backs up, and you fly closer, gathering your willpower up in an Inferno. You lash at her with it, striking at her physical form. The flesh of her right side boils and singes as you scour her torso and arm down to the bone. She grits her teeth, and while your will is focused on the Inferno, she lashes at you with her's. You reel, your wings failing as she interrupts the process that keeps you aloft. You bend your legs as you hit the ground, but your knee pops loudly, and you nearly buckle and fall. You do not heal -- and neither does she, wrapping the wound tightly with carbon crystals.

"[Are you so sure about your master's intent that opposing me is wise?  Is our honest self-reflection so dangerous to his plans?]"

[3] "[One of your ancestors must have been a poet.]" Cephie retorts. You laugh, giving her a feral grin, which she returns in kind.

[20][14 vs 13][15]
     [12+1 vs. 8] You do not make the same mistake, you concentrate your willpower into a spear while focusing your Inferno into a beam of heat. You jab haphazardly with the former, and take careful aim with the other-- Cephie focuses on shielding herself, but you interrupt her. She screams in pain as the fires wash over her, collapsing back with a heave of her chest. She shifts, dragging herself back to her feet, her torso and face a mess of burnt and charred flesh.

[9][5 vs 11][10]
     [9+1 vs. 4] Cephie begins to move, dancing across the battlefield gracefully, even as you burn away the surface below with scouring flames. She doesn't retort, her burnt skin falls away to be consumed by your fires as she heals. You lash out with your willpower, and she falters, stumbling to the ground with a grunt.

[20 vs. 1] "[I'm not a good match for you.]" Cephie admits, with a pained wince as she rises, "[It might be rude to yield so quickly, but I don't think I can provide you with a good battle. Would you mind?]"

...usually these last a lot longer...I'm...I'm kinda dissapointed it was that easy. This was supposed to be our testing blows.

The sun begins to rise on the horizon, as you stare down at Cephie with disappointment. "Uh..." Is about all you can stammer, as she slumps down, rubbing at her face -- is she...is she crying?!

You float above, awkwardly.

So much for experienced!



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 28, 2020, 06:13:02 pm
TAKE THAT, FAKE IYAL

Ahem.

Wait for Cephie to rise to her feet (but keep an eye on her.) We can afford to be gracious now, as befits our celestial* heritage.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 06:33:32 pm
"It's okay. No one can succeed in all their battles. What will you do now?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 28, 2020, 06:38:34 pm
"Fake" is perhaps overmuch-- this is, after all, the girl we knew as Iyal.
All things considered, this has gone beautifully. We've a foothold now in the Void, with people who (hopefully) aren't actively trying to kill us!

It'd be against dueling creed to yield in falsehood, I assume.

Sigh, nod. "I accept your capitulation."
Descend, slow and gentle-- with a bit of a smile, perhaps. "Can't win 'em all. What happens now, Cephie of Lavoisier?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 06:43:13 pm
I'm not so sure about that foothold in the void. Something tells me that Magnus's intentions are less than benevolent.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 06:43:21 pm
"Fake" is perhaps overmuch-- this is, after all, the girl we knew as Iyal.
All things considered, this has gone beautifully. We've a foothold now in the Void, with people who (hopefully) aren't actively trying to kill us!

It'd be against dueling creed to yield in falsehood, I assume.

Sigh, nod. "I accept your capitulation."
Descend, slow and gentle-- with a bit of a smile, perhaps. "Can't win 'em all. What happens now, Cephie of Lavoisier?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 06:58:24 pm
"Do you yield?" You question, hovering, ready to dodge.

The blow never comes, Cephie nodding, "I yield."

Cephie straightens, breathing out a heavy breath as you descend. You knit your leg back together, wincing in pain as your knee pops back into place. The shattered bone and broken ligaments knitting themselves back together. You wiggle your toes and bend it as you approach. You think about standing over her, instead, you sit next to her with a crunch of the salty sand below. Cephie sighs as she peels the last of her burnt skin off.

"[How many of our kind have you fought before?]" You question.

"[Only one other...but if you're not Alphira, this was your first time, wasn't it?]"

You nod in response, and she breathes out another sigh. "[We can't win all of our battles. What happens now?]"

"[I killed the loser of my first.]" She murmurs. "[I don't have my deathwish yet.]"

"[How...long have you been...?]"

"[Eight years, personal time.]" Cephie responds, with a sigh. Personal time being a measure of time awake from cryosleep or other time dilation; a personal clock of life events unrelated to anything else but private reckoning. Spacers and Voiddwellers usually are the only ones who keep track, treating themselves as a vessel in of themselves.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 07:05:34 pm
"What does your master want with me and the people who live here?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 28, 2020, 07:25:19 pm
Not much of a foothold, perhaps-- but a foothold all the same! I'm just glad these people aren't actively chasing the bounty on our head.
We would do well, I think, to make an ally once more of this "Cephie". She is for time being our best hope at survival among the stars.


"Mm."
Let the silence hang a bit.

"...I always counted Iyal a friend, you know-- even if she put a knife to my back by way of first greeting." Glance askance. "I should like to count Cephie of Lavoisier the same way, if she'll have it."

...


"What does your master want with me and the people who live here?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 07:39:01 pm
Not much of a foothold, perhaps-- but a foothold all the same! I'm just glad these people aren't actively chasing the bounty on our head.
We would do well, I think, to make an ally once more of this "Cephie". She is for time being our best hope at survival among the stars.


"Mm."
Let the silence hang a bit.

"...I always counted Iyal a friend, you know-- even if she put a knife to my back by way of first greeting." Glance askance. "I should like to count Cephie of Lavoisier the same way, if she'll have it."

...


"What does your master want with me and the people who live here?"

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 07:40:54 pm
"[These people here are humans. They deserve Empyrean protection. That was a right granted to all humans, by the Emperor.]"

You nod. The Empyre established universal rights for all sentient humans. Protection from threats such as Plague, from Pirates, from unchained artificial intelligences. Wars had rules. Petty empires couldn't put entire planets to the torch. Genocide and wholesale slaughter was answered with an Empyrean Naval fleet.

"[As for you...I don't know. I was told to monitor and contain you, and alert him if you had Void capabilities.]"

"[I counted Iyal as a friend. Even if she put a knife in my back by way of first greeting.]" You offer, "[You two are similar, in that regard.]"

"[I'm bound to Magnus by contract. I will not break it...he's the one who granted me my Ascendence. He'll probably take it from me for my failure.]" Cephie replies crisply.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 07:45:24 pm
We have twelve years to prepare for Magnus. If he wants to take this world by force, we must be ready. It will not be easy for him to defeat the heirs of the Void Slayer himself.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 28, 2020, 07:52:24 pm
Magnus can't take Ascendance from Cephie if she doesn't go back, I assume. We could offer her our protection if she stays and sides with us... but that's a big and presumably dishonorable decision, so I wouldn't be surprised if she goes completely beserk with righteous rage at the offer. Then again, having failed to defeat us, she has little to lose.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 28, 2020, 08:01:21 pm
I wonder... would the people of SEED be better off under Empyrean rule? Perhaps open war won't be necessary just yet.

Nod. "I assumed as much."
"How was I to be-- contained?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 08:06:08 pm
I don't think SEED hid this world out of pettiness or concern for power. It believed that Empyreal rule would not be better than being on a plague-ridden hellhole.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 08:17:31 pm
Pheonix, do you remember what Empyreal rule is like? Are we constant;y sent to war? Or are there non military citizens? Is there freedom?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 08:29:15 pm
It depends on where in the Empyre you are. If this planet goes on official maps as inhabited, Pirates and Rim Kings will pick at it. No one cares about backwaters like these. Not unless they're mineral rich. If they're lucky they might have a Corp step in until the resources run out. But they'll bleed every drop of profit from it they can.

"[By whatever means I saw fit. They didn't end well, did they?]" Cephie murmurs with a shrug of her slender shoulders.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 08:36:02 pm
"How did you get here?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 28, 2020, 09:06:22 pm
I honestly only remember the wars.  Anywho, we can determine what to do with her in a few years... provided that was not a lie as well.

Will it really take 12 years to get here? So fast and yet so slow.

We should ask her to make a secondary contract with us.  Nothing that would betray her primary one.  An oath to support us until her master comes or she feels it would be against his wishes and to alert us when she is leaving our service.  When she does leave she would agree to a 24 hour cease fire with us and to carry a message to her superior.

She seems the honorable type I suppose and getting her to directly agree to a contract would be useful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 09:19:36 pm
She might agree to a contract like that...but our word is our oath. No crew will sign on with a captain who breaks their word -- and Spacers are notorious gossips. Captains and crew alike...we might need to change our appearance if we're to return to the Void, but Alphira's stain might haunt our Line for centuries.

"[A small dropship. I dropped down in the salt plains of the east, and blended in with the Outlanders for a time. They're primitive, but honorable. I served as a Warchief, for a year there, before my Clan was destroyed.]" Cephie shrugs a shoulder, then glances at you, "[We could leave here. You, your kindred and myself. The ship has four cryopods -- it can't leave system, but it could get us off-world until Magnus arrives.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 09:21:13 pm
"What would that accomplish?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 09:26:13 pm
"[You could rejoin the Empyre. Step in -- twelve years pass -- step out like its the same day. You and your loved ones would be safe until the fleet arrives.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 09:27:50 pm
And once they do arrive, I'm sure they will just let us go. After all, it's not like we have a huge bounty on our head or anything.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on April 28, 2020, 09:34:08 pm
There is a hard limit to the number of prime ancestors that the MC has. If you don't mind a weaker cadet branch or a rigorous, very tightly controlled life story, then it isn't an issue. The Cadets Branches have limited importance on the story, but the strict one has a great importance but isn't very open-ended.
I don't mind a cadet branch background.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 28, 2020, 09:35:29 pm
We can’t leave, we do have a bounty on us, nd we need to protect SEED’s people. We need to get rid of the plague. Leaving now would be betrayal
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 09:36:25 pm
I agree.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 09:40:18 pm
"What are Magnus's forces? Does he have allies he will call upon in addition to his personal levy?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 28, 2020, 09:57:56 pm
"Quite the offer. Alphira would maybe have taken it..."

"...I'm not Alphira. I'm-- someone new, made to fit her body-- I was born on this world, really. It's become a home to me. Its people are my people. I could never leave them to the plague that way, not when we've still a chance against it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 10:03:40 pm
"[I wish to stay too.]" Cephie offers, glancing over to you, "[But I had to make the offer.]"

"[What are Magnus' forces like?]"

"[Do you really want to know?]" Cephie questions, looking over to you with a raised brow. "[His Family's capital ship could rip apart this planet. The soldiers at his beck and call are literally endless -- I am the weakest of his servants.]" She shakes her head gently, "[As a Noble of the Empyre, he could call up any number of Naval Fleets to assist him. Any Officers in range, be they Admiral or Captain would serve, on pain of death. Or worse.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 10:07:36 pm
That... does not sound promising. How could we defeat such a force? Perhaps we must leave in the ark.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 10:17:14 pm
"[Not like he would -need- them. His Father let him use the Magnus House Fleet...]" Cephie frowns, looking up into the rising sun. "[Numbers don't matter with the nobility.] She turns, looking at you, explaining then, "[The Fleet that mutinied Alphira? It went up against a single expeditionary frigate on the edge of the system.]"

"[All ten ships are wreckage now, floating out there. They managed to land a single shot on the Frigate.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 10:20:06 pm
"Does anything remain of the main Pirate fleet?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on April 28, 2020, 10:21:09 pm
Does the ark even have enough cyropods for everybody?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 10:22:55 pm
The current capacity is only 10,000, but perhaps it can be massively upgraded. If not...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 10:24:01 pm
[17] "[Most of Alphira's siblings escaped. They managed to sneak away better than you did, I suppose. The rest fled back to the rim -- the Nobles were more concerned with the Outer and Inner Empyreal groups that assisted Alphias.]"

Her lips quirk into a scowl, for the first time. "[The Nobles destroyed Paradise Planet Arcadia.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 28, 2020, 10:25:28 pm
We should also consult the nulls - possibly Ilya as well - on the feasibility of getting the ARK operational and mobile before Magnus's fleet arrives. Perhaps, perhaps, we and our people can [scram]. If its capacity isn't up to the task, a selection of others could use it with our blessing to escape the apocalyptical battle.

["Arcadia being...?"]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 10:25:43 pm
We may find allies in the rim of the galaxy, it sounds like.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on April 28, 2020, 10:53:40 pm
That should have been against Empyreal laws.  Habitable planet destruction is not a legal punishment, only in the case of unbearable abominations should it be considered.  I do not like this new petty emperor.  Too weak in power or morality to stop the nobles.

Anyway.

I support retrieving the ship and keeping both cryo ships as a backup plan.  Cant have too many backup plans.

But we fight the plague now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 10:54:52 pm
"Can you contact Magnus and tell him not to come?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 11:01:55 pm
Cephie looks at you in askance, confused, and you return the look. She smirks, then giggles. She draws four concentric rings in the salty soil in front of her. She draws a dot beside the central ring.

The first ring is the Empyreal, otherwise known as Paradise, or Heaven, or by many other names. Most Spacers call it the Empyreal Core. A vast number of planets in orbit around a massive, man-made blackhole that's used to generate energy. The Nobles control the cost of this energy, and, with it, control the Empyreal Galaxy. Within the core is what can only be described as heaven. Hard light simulations creating anything the Nobles might need or ever want. Through energy manipulation, they can create matter. Nobody besides Nobility and those chosen by them can enter, as a great wall of light envelopes the entirety of it. Around this axis, the galaxy turns.

Around this is the Inner Empyre. The next most advanced empires, nations, and planets. Great planet-wide cities, industrial centers that use entire stars and planets. Gaia worlds. The closest system outside of the Core was settled by exiled Nobles. One Family used the Hard Light technology to create a place where anyone could taste heaven -- for a price. The rich and lucky flocked to it, and one day upon that world was something spoken of for generations to come. It became a mark of success. Paradise Planet Arcadia.

The Outer Empyre is considered by many to be the dregs, but that's not true. The Outer Empyre is a patchwork collection of vessel states, industrial centers, hive worlds, and many more specialized worlds. They do most of their trade with the Inner Empyre. Technology there is advanced but is considered the baseline for the Empyre.

And then you reach The Rim. Seedships settled these worlds the same, but the Empyreal Gates have not yet reached this far in. The Pirate clans from before the Foundation found refuge in this part of the Empyre. It's the most underdeveloped and unexplored part of the entire galaxy. The technology levels here vary massively. Some have colonies from the Outer Empyre, while some have naught but sharpened stones and fire.

Many squiggly lines are drawn, radiating out from the core like spokes in a wheel. These are the Empyreal Gates. Most civilized systems have one, and it is the central source of trade in the system. Some are ancient. Some are brand new. The routes are endless, but organized -- but not even the Nobility have maps for all of it. Depending on the time, they might lead to another system. Or they might be fixed routes. Another piece of the Endless Emperor's technology. The success of travel, you remember, is something like ninety-seven percent. One percent you wind up at a completely different gate. One percent you wind up in some unknown star system that doesn't have a gate. And one percent chance of just completely vanishing. Time dilation when traveling with the gate system is completely nullified -- but there are legends of ancient fleets emerging from the gates, confused as to why thousands of years have passed since they left.

Only the Endless controls the Gates, and they are truly neutral -- Pirates do not destroy them, Nobility do not try to configure the routes, and a blockade of one is considered the best way to get everyone truly pissed at you.

Cephie draws one last dot, on the outside of the Rim's boundary. "[We're here.]"

"[Doing so would violate my contract. I cannot lie to him.]" She raises her brow after a pause, glancing over to you, "[And do you really think that I have -that- much sway with him?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 11:07:56 pm
"Thank you for the explanation. I'm sorry for the 21 Questions treatment. Does Magnus have any powerful enemies, especially rival nobles, pirates, or non-Empyreal leaders?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 11:13:22 pm
"[Many. But he'll reach you and this world before you could even communicate with them.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 28, 2020, 11:15:13 pm
We must leave.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 28, 2020, 11:28:50 pm
[12] "[What does Magnus look like?]" You question, laying in the dust while the advisors argue amongst themselves.

"[His preferred form makes me think he's younger than most nobles. Going by that...he looks about our age, black hair. Always frowning. He's got that perfectly engineered single-gender look that the Nobles love to wear when they go into the wider Empyre.]" Cephie offers, with a shrug. ["But none of that really matter-- actually, hold on.]"

Her willpower coils around her, skin shifting and changing around, manipulating the matter within. Your breath catches in your throat when she grins down at you with Magnus' face upon her form.

According to Emma, he kills you with a cutter blade in a field.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 29, 2020, 12:01:59 am
According to Emma, he kills you with a cutter blade in a field.

What the [hell] does this mean?!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 12:03:17 am
A vision she saw of a possible future.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on April 29, 2020, 12:03:33 am
One of the art drawing by Emma about the MC death.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 29, 2020, 12:06:49 am
Ohhhh.

It's possible I overreacted.

I have, as noted, much to learn.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 12:45:41 am
Constantine, what is your appraisal of the situation?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 29, 2020, 12:46:38 am
We know he kills us in the omen. We do not know why. He sent his agent not to kill, but to detain-- an odd choice, if he is interested only in our demise! Perhaps he desires the personal touch... perhaps he has something else in mind. We don't know.

It has become imperative that we
find out.

"That face-- Cephie, I recognize that face. An omen-- he was driving a Cutter blade through my torso--"
"...one future. It was only one future. Still... I need to know exactly what he wants with me. You say you've been in contact with him?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 12:48:26 am
Not an odd choice considering what the shapeshifter told us. Apparently it is rare to kill another Empyreal rather than force them to submit or slave them to one's will.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 12:58:56 am
"I sent a distress signal. My ship was outfitted with one, but SEED's was closer." Cephie looks confused by your statement as she explains. She slouches, back, still in the body of Magnus. Her voice slowly changes as she tunes it, then, with gruff and terse speech, she states, "[I hope she's strong.]"

She shakes his head, frowning naturally, "And I hope he doesn't want to fight you."

"Why?" You question, looking away from the rising sun.

"He's a Noble. Ascendeds, we've got control over one element, maybe two. Energy control too. They have all of them. Or some variation thereof, all brand new, highest quality tech. I'm not sure they can even be considered the least bit human anymore, all the tech that they get stuffed in them."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 01:33:52 am
"...tell me more about this tech."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 02:00:28 am
"Like they would share -that- information." Cephie responds with a roll of her eyes. She lapses into silence, slowly changing back with many a disconcerting sound. Eventually, she looks over at you, and instead questions you. "Hey -- how'd you and Emma meet?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 02:07:32 am
"We met at the Academy and became friends. It was a bit of an odd situation in that I was also doing some work for her family, specifically her brother, who she hated at the time, and that created some friction. I'm glad that they're closer now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 03:19:16 am
After you finish explaining, she nods, then asks you about your time at the Academy. If you had other friends -- she seems surprised when you mentioned that you were originally planning to pursue a more peaceful career. She asks you about McCreary, and a dozen other topics, and you respond honestly -- leaving out the power you inherited from him.

She eventually tells you about her life -- she was a Spacer's brat. They traveled a lot in service to Magnus. As a reward, she was given a contract and Dust, becoming an assassin and intelligence officer for him. It seems she specialized in intelligence gathering, as she had a great deal of experience in dealing with the many varied cultures of the Empyre.

The conversation winds down to a close as the day finishes breaking over the land.

If you wish to forge a contract with Celphie, you feel now would be the time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 29, 2020, 06:48:04 am
After you finish explaining, she nods, then asks you about your time at the Academy. If you had other friends -- she seems surprised when you mentioned that you were originally planning to pursue a more peaceful career. She asks you about McCreary, and a dozen other topics, and you respond honestly -- leaving out the power you inherited from him.

She eventually tells you about her life -- she was a Spacer's brat. They traveled a lot in service to Magnus. As a reward, she was given a contract and Dust, becoming an assassin and intelligence officer for him. It seems she specialized in intelligence gathering, as she had a great deal of experience in dealing with the many varied cultures of the Empyre.

The conversation winds down to a close as the day finishes breaking over the land.

If you wish to forge a contract with Celphie, you feel now would be the time.
I would like to, but I don’t know what the contract would be, it would hopefully be that we help the people here by destroying the plague and ... can others add?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 29, 2020, 12:20:39 pm
A contract would be useful indeed-- but there is a concern still to address.

"Cephie... if Magnus were to order you to kill me, or to kill Emma. You would comply?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 04:30:33 pm
"I'd inform him that I am unable to." Cephie responds, honestly. "Not without losing my life. If he insisted, I would have to try."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 05:39:08 pm
The question is, can he be escaped, and should he be escaped? If not, we will have to come to terms with the fact that Magnus is simply unavoidable.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 29, 2020, 05:44:28 pm
We could try adding more Cryo pods to the ARK ship and repair it, of course we need to stop the plague first
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 29, 2020, 06:03:39 pm
Indeed. Once that's done, we can consider the question in earnest-- but for the time being, we've more immediate problems to consider.

"I'm worried you'd succeed."

"You... got the drop on me today. You'd a tentacle set to tear my organs to shreds before I knew what was happening. I survived because you weren't trying to kill me-- if not for that, I'd probably have died right then and there. What happens if you get different orders?"

Sigh. "You're a threat, Cephie. I'm not going to kill you for it... but I don't for the life of me know what to do with you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 06:18:06 pm
Indeed. Once that's done, we can consider the question in earnest-- but for the time being, we've more immediate problems to consider.

"I'm worried you'd succeed."

"You... got the drop on me today. You'd a tentacle set to tear my organs to shreds before I knew what was happening. I survived because you weren't trying to kill me-- if not for that, I'd probably have died right then and there. What happens if you get different orders?"

Sigh. "You're a threat, Cephie. I'm not going to kill you for it... but I don't for the life of me know what to do with you."

Magnus isn’t trying to kill us, how about “Will you be willing to help us fight the plague and assist with increasing the tech level of this planet? We can be allies even if our minds are separate.”
+1, might as well make use of her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 29, 2020, 06:21:24 pm
Indeed. Once that's done, we can consider the question in earnest-- but for the time being, we've more immediate problems to consider.

"I'm worried you'd succeed."

"You... got the drop on me today. You'd a tentacle set to tear my organs to shreds before I knew what was happening. I survived because you weren't trying to kill me-- if not for that, I'd probably have died right then and there. What happens if you get different orders?"

Sigh. "You're a threat, Cephie. I'm not going to kill you for it... but I don't for the life of me know what to do with you."

Magnus isn’t trying to kill us, how about “Will you be willing to help us fight the plague and assist with increasing the tech level of this planet? We can be allies” even if our minds are separate.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on April 29, 2020, 06:29:23 pm
Indeed. Once that's done, we can consider the question in earnest-- but for the time being, we've more immediate problems to consider.

"I'm worried you'd succeed."

"You... got the drop on me today. You'd a tentacle set to tear my organs to shreds before I knew what was happening. I survived because you weren't trying to kill me-- if not for that, I'd probably have died right then and there. What happens if you get different orders?"

Sigh. "You're a threat, Cephie. I'm not going to kill you for it... but I don't for the life of me know what to do with you."

Magnus isn’t trying to kill us, how about “Will you be willing to help us fight the plague and assist with increasing the tech level of this planet? We can be allies even if our minds are separate.”
+1, might as well make use of her.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 29, 2020, 06:34:12 pm
Keep your friends close and your enemies closer, I suppose. I'm still inclined to make our concerns known-- Cephie might have an idea on that front.

Only thing is... "even if our minds are separate"? Seems a strange turn of phrase.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 06:43:25 pm
I think it's a reference to her coming from a different line.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 29, 2020, 07:12:08 pm
Keep your friends close and your enemies closer, I suppose. I'm still inclined to make our concerns known-- Cephie might have an idea on that front.

Only thing is... "even if our minds are separate"? Seems a strange turn of phrase.
She wanted us turned into an extension of herself, too control our body and place her mind within, destroying ours. That is why I said that
Unless “ My intention was to keep you alive, as a puppet” means something else
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 29, 2020, 07:16:11 pm
Oh that. That was figurative, yeah-- she intended to cow us with her little display of power, so's we'd be properly beholden to her. Think what we did to the Pontifex.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 29, 2020, 07:18:38 pm
Oh that. That was figurative, yeah-- she intended to cow us with her little display of power, so's we'd be properly beholden to her. Think what we did to the Pontifex.
Oh, I thought it was literal, I thought we were like Unity, able to control other bodies, our bios mentioned essence strengthening others, and Alphira was inside of 3 bodies at one point, if she would have consumed the Interface in Emma, William and us, as well as us, she would have had total control of 3 bodies. I will edit that mind bit out now that I realize the figurativeness
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 29, 2020, 07:22:36 pm
We gave Alphira freely to those two, as part of their Line. She's a voice to them, presumably-- nothing more. Blood transfer isn't mind control.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 29, 2020, 07:24:56 pm
We gave Alphira freely to those two, as part of their Line. She's a voice to them, presumably-- nothing more. Blood transfer isn't mind control.
Yes, Phoenix was able to eat the Interface and Alphira in the body we share. Cephie could have done something similar with us once she got inside of us via blood transfer
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 07:51:41 pm
Hmm... we can't be sure it doesn't work like that until we try, I suppose.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 29, 2020, 07:59:38 pm
Hmm... we can't be sure it doesn't work like that until we try, I suppose.
We’re not going to try that. I was explaining what I thought Cephie would do
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 08:00:42 pm
I don't think it's impossible to use Dust to control more than one body at a time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 29, 2020, 08:04:01 pm
I don't think it's impossible to use Dust to control more than one body at a time.
It might be possible, but let;s try to work with her without attempting that
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 08:38:56 pm
"I already said I would help with that -- and what of you, Pheobe? Had you wanted to kill me, you could've decapitated me. We both have reasons, for now, to keep each other alive." Cephie observes, quietly, itching at her newly healed red skin as it begins to pale in blotches. "Or you could have tried to take my life during combat."

You could've, that's true.

"I want you to take a secondary contract with me. Nothing that would betray your primary one.  An oath to support us until your master comes or you feel it would be against his wishes. To alert us when you are leaving our service.  When you leave you will agree to a twenty-four hour ceasefire with us and to carry a message to Magnus. You are not to harm Emma or William, either, until such a time as that ceasefire runs out."

Cephie listens quietly, still picking at her arm. "If I refuse to take this oath?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 08:40:44 pm
"We'll negotiate."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 29, 2020, 09:03:07 pm
"We'll negotiate."

+1

"I'm inclined to help you, if I can."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 09:08:08 pm
Such an act of control is possible, but also something that would drain away your humanity. Other Ascended would take great offense to it. Heck, -you- could attempt to consume Pheonix.



Don't be.

[3 vs 12][20] "I'll kill you and devour your Dust. Then your identity. You'll become something less than nothing, not even a dream." You reply instead, turning to look down at her with an easy smile. She flinches as panic washes over her face, her facade cracking. Even her willpower reacts, wrapping tightly around her. She huddles within like a blanket. You increase your's, letting it rage, all while keeping a calm facade.

[18]"I was told to choose life over glorious death if the situation came to it. I have no option, then, do I?"

She takes your oath, binding herself to your will for the next twelve years.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 09:21:55 pm
Not much for subtlety, are we, Phoenix?

"In regards to the plague and reclaiming districts, how can you be of most help?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 29, 2020, 09:23:34 pm
In truth, we are but the advisors! The thing was skillfully done.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 09:31:53 pm
I was just informing her of what I would do if she didn't agree. She's stabbed me in the back twice, and once in the front.

"I am trained in intelligence and a master of disguise. These people have no defenses against my Line." Cephie stretches, rising to her feet. With a look to you, she slowly hunches, her spine bending, her form thinning, hair going gray, her face becomes weathered and aged, until she resembles Nicole Gainer. "I've already demonstrated my ability as an assassin. I have ties to the Outlander clans, and know enough of their culture to manipulate them."

She slowly changes back, but keeps the tanned skin of Iyal, stroking out brown hair.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 09:42:35 pm
"Can you teach me how to do that?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 29, 2020, 10:01:47 pm
I had little need in life, for the wielding of fear... the thing does not come naturally to me. I am prone overmuch to pleasantries, perhaps, when harsh words are needed.

Your new vassal would do well among the Outlanders, methinks. Many were lost in SEED's great holocaust-- ὅλος καυστός, the whole-burnt sacrifice-- you have need now of soldiers, and of resources. Cephie could do much in that regard.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 10:02:48 pm
"Can you teach me how to light fires with my mind?" Cephie asks in turn.

Just don't put her behind me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 10:07:43 pm
Not without her dust, I suppose.

"Point taken. I can see how you would be useful when negotiating with district survivors. Do you think your people would be amenable to some kind of alliance?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 10:12:13 pm
"Outlanders or Magnus?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 10:13:09 pm
"The outlanders."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 10:23:11 pm
"The mineral economy was what tied them to SEED. Otherwise, they are completely self-sufficient. They're superstitious, having a wide pantheon of gods of different names...you could manipulate them into service that way. They're also quite martial, as expected when they have to protect themselves against the harshness of the Eastern plains. However, honor is not as important as being clever."

Cephie looks up at you. "If they feel slighted, they do not hesitate to go back on their dealings."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 10:28:12 pm
"That seems like a sensible way to do things. Can you look into which god of theirs I might most closely resemble?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 10:32:43 pm
"You resemble a demon." Cephie giggles. "And they consider SEED another, a two-faced temptress for comfort opposed to adventure and freedom. An oppressor built on the bodies of the soft. Not surprising, since they're descended from escaped debt-slaves, freedom seekers and SEED heretics."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 10:34:29 pm
That doesn't sound like particularly fertile ground for compromise.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2020, 10:44:01 pm
"If you're not part of their clan, they do not respect you. I spent a year amongst them. The first clan I met I had to kill, as they attacked me for daring to approach. The second I approached eventually grew to accept me, but only after a year of offering them gifts from my kills. Even then, they did not let me warm myself by their fire or give me food. When clans meet, if they are not hostile towards one another, they don't even look at each other. Looking at another's property if you are not part of the clan means you covet that property, which is a slight. Marriage bonds tie some of the clans together in friendship--"

"If you managed to snag yourself a prince or princess, you could have your way in." Cephie explains, after a beat. "Marrying into the clan gives you a bond, and they respect family greatly."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on April 29, 2020, 11:02:46 pm
That doesn't sound like particularly fertile ground for compromise.

Well, SEED's religion thought us evil too. We're a demon's demon. Maybe we can work from that. Enemy of my enemy and all.

...but from Cephie's advice I don't think it'll be enough.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 29, 2020, 11:07:46 pm
Maybe we could give William a wife or husband from one of the more influential clans and then work from there?

On a side note, in order to prepare for possible invasion, the following technologies available to us may be helpful:

- Mark 1 Void Colony Ship
- Mark 1 Void Defense Station of various designs
- Antimatter Fusion and Hydrogen Fusion Warheads, along with a number of payload delivery systems
- Cryogenic Life Support Systems
- Advanced Terraforming Techniques and Plants
- Mark 1 Void Defense Land Based Gun Array of various designs
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on April 30, 2020, 09:00:21 am
Outlier clans might not be worth messing with from the sound of it.

Also earlier it was said that las-guns wouldn't pierce the armour of the bigger [plague] creatures and it was also said that conventional guns had better piercing power than las-guns so what if we started fielding .50 BMG anti-tank rifles to deal with the bigger ones or even rocket launchers would work I mean we could probably use any anti-tank weapon on them.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 30, 2020, 09:19:39 am
I agree, anti tank weapons sound good. We need to find out if anyone survived who are engineers to assist with the weapon build9ng, als0 which of the nulls has experience with construction. Do we ask Iyai/Cephie help with the construction of the anti tank weapons? The Void ships?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2020, 04:30:49 pm
"Can you help us develop our technology? I'm interested in Void ships, antitank aircraft, infantry-portable antitank guns, and vehicle mounted antitank guns."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 30, 2020, 06:25:10 pm
"I guess I could oversee the work? If you wanted?" Cephie questions, confused. "I'm not really a scientist or foreman or whatever."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2020, 06:48:36 pm
"We'll leave that to our scientists and engineers. I hope we can work together despite our differences to protect humanity, as our main directive compels us to. One day, we may become enemies, but for now we are bound to one another by oath. Shall we return to the other Empyreals, the Thorntons, and inform them of our new arrangement?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 30, 2020, 06:51:34 pm
"We'll leave that to our scientists and engineers. I hope we can work together despite our differences to protect humanity, as our main directive compels us to. One day, we may become enemies, but for now we are bound to one another by oath. Shall we return to the other Empyreals, the Thorntons, and inform them of our new arrangement?"
we should. We should also work on forges so we can make metal to start building things. We can ask the engineers to teach us and Cephie how to build, so we can be of more hel- than simply instructing
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2020, 07:53:20 pm
In my opinion, it's better for us to leave that to others. Our powers are designed to help us fight, so doing too much of anything else would be a waste.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 30, 2020, 08:26:56 pm
In my opinion, it's better for us to leave that to others. Our powers are designed to help us fight, so doing too much of anything else would be a waste.
fair, what if we and Cephie attack some of the plague;s buildings?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2020, 08:41:34 pm
That would be fine with me, but let's bring the Crusaders and Warmachines as well after a quick pep-talk. Maybe we can knock out what little remains of the plague.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 30, 2020, 09:06:40 pm
We need to finish off the Leviathan and destroy it;s buildings
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on April 30, 2020, 09:31:35 pm
I imagine our host would be... ill at ease, fighting alongside this one. If I might put forth an alternative?

"Not oversee, no… but perhaps something along those lines."

"The Industrial Districts are severed at this time from my control. They may be unharmed by recent events-- or they may be taken by fire, by plague, by encroaching Outlanders and the like. We don't know."

"That's where you come in. Find out what infrastructure remains to us outside the mountain; claim what you can for our purposes, by whatever means you deem necessary. Keep me posted on the proceedings. We've a great deal of SEED tech we can put into production, once you've got the factories back in contact with us."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2020, 09:35:04 pm
I agree that we need to reclaim those districts ASAP, and not-Iyal has proven herself to be very capable. I think we can leave this task to her while we focus on the plague proper.

I imagine our host would be... ill at ease, fighting alongside this one. If I might put forth an alternative?

"Not oversee, no… but perhaps something along those lines."

"The Industrial Districts are severed at this time from my control. They may be unharmed by recent events-- or they may be taken by fire, by plague, by encroaching Outlanders and the like. We don't know."

"That's where you come in. Find out what infrastructure remains to us outside the mountain; claim what you can for our purposes, by whatever means you deem necessary. Keep me posted on the proceedings. We've a great deal of SEED tech we can put into production, once you've got the factories back in contact with us."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on April 30, 2020, 09:41:19 pm
I agree that we need to reclaim those districts ASAP, and not-Iyal has proven herself to be very capable. I think we can leave this task to her while we focus on the plague proper.

I imagine our host would be... ill at ease, fighting alongside this one. If I might put forth an alternative?

"Not oversee, no… but perhaps something along those lines."

"The Industrial Districts are severed at this time from my control. They may be unharmed by recent events-- or they may be taken by fire, by plague, by encroaching Outlanders and the like. We don't know."

"That's where you come in. Find out what infrastructure remains to us outside the mountain; claim what you can for our purposes, by whatever means you deem necessary. Keep me posted on the proceedings. We've a great deal of SEED tech we can put into production, once you've got the factories back in contact with us."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 30, 2020, 11:15:57 pm
Cephie gives a nod, rising out of the salty sand and stretching out her will to the fragments of the battle. She begins to assemble her wings once more. You don't wait for her, rising on your wings of fire and heading back towards the south. It doesn't take you long to return to the fortress, flying in through the broken window. Emma paces nearby, and William lounges, drinking from a bottle of clear liquid you're sure isn't water.

Emma looks up from her pacing, halting in her tracks to look you over with a critical eye. Checking for injuries, for damage, but finding none. Besides your ruined clothing, you're perfectly intact, and she heaves a sigh of relief. Her tense shoulders slump down, and they both listen intently when you speak.

"We've struck a deal." You inform them, filling them in on the details of the oath. Neither look pleased, but they don't protest.

"The Child of SEED is all but dead. Brain hemorrhage. Everyone else is fine." Emma explains when you finish, suddenly taking you by the hand. You don't respond, and Emma doesn't explain, dragging you into your bedroom. "Strip, shower, and get dressed. Your speech is in an hour."

You obey without hesitation, washing quickly and drying your hair while you dress. You pull on your clothes, using your training from the Academy to dress quickly and precisely. When you finish drying your hair, Emma pulls a capelet from a package, fixing it over your missing arm. Stylized upon it is your new symbol in red ink, She adjusts it as she quietly briefs you on it, "Don't get it wet. The dye will run."

You nod. William waits in the hallway, fixing his uniform. Emma pauses to do the same, and the two follow you into the elevator. It starts to sink, along with your stomach.

You pass through on gantries overlooking the amphitheater and are surprised to find it packed full of people. They huddle close, pressing against one another -- more than just the Crusaders. Children are sat upon shoulders, and the Main elevator is packed with an unmoving crowd. The stage awaits, and you can feel the familiar panic rising up within you.

I can do this. I can do this. You repeat to yourself, staring at the door to the stage.

[5] I don't think I can do this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2020, 11:58:23 pm
You can do this. The time for restraint, temperance, and prudence has passed.  Make your majesty known.  Promise retribution upon the demons the likes of which this world has never seen.  Introduce the Thorntons as fellow angels, a final blessing from SEED.  What darkness can resist the holy light of three gods?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 01, 2020, 12:11:57 am
If needs must, godling; if you so choose... we the advisors can put words to your mouth, as is our way. But I do not think that will be necessary.

Peace. Courage.
Peace. Courage. You are the [angel], and these are your people. You are Phoenix-of-Sol, and this is your story. Show them your wings. Show them your fire. Speak with truth. Speak with love. Yours is a strong and noble spark!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 01, 2020, 07:17:48 am
I've got the upmost confidence in yeah, you can do this speech and everybody will love it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 01, 2020, 07:30:59 am
I think we need to do the speech, Phoenix told us she’s not good with talking, if Phoenix wishes, we can do the speaking
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 01, 2020, 10:29:09 pm
Deep breaths.

[12]You emerge on to the stage, feeling a little weak when all eyes come to rest on you. The low murmurs that fill the amphitheater end. The crowd is watching, waiting, with bated breath.

"The Great Work today has suffered the most significant loss recorded in our long history. Three days ago, The Holy City fell. SEED, our creator, in all its wisdom, destroyed itself with purifying flames rather than let its strength fall to corruption."

"SEED fell because we were weak."

You delay, looking out over the crowd—stern, unbroken, and cold. You stretch your willpower out, reaching as far as you can, making the Crusader officers in front go pale with your frozen fury. One faints. The crowd cannot meet your gaze.

"The Plague can create millions of abominations, thousands of beasts, with shells hard as steel, with twisting tentacles, with devouring teeth. They have no fear. They feel no pain. And they are dead set on ridding this planet of humanity."

"Humans are weak. You live short lives, filled with strife, with pain. You live short lives, falling prey to despair, to cowardice, to fear. How can creatures, so weak, so miserable, stand up to something like that?"

"This failure, it will stain our history until the end of time. I can no longer bear the name given to me by SEED. I can no longer bear the sin of this failure."

[18]The crowd looks morose, down beaten -- angry. Angry at you. You're on the verge of a full-scale riot. Your people shuffle restlessly, Crusaders included. You send out a pulse of your willpower, watching the anger turn to helplessness. People begin to cry.

"I will tell you."

[13] You pull back your willpower, conjuring forth a flicker of fire in the air behind you, a spark of light in the dim amphitheater.

"The Plague knows no fear, so they have never known bravery. The Plague knows no pain, so they have never known determination. The Plague is eternal, so they have never known the struggle to survive. The Plague does not know the value of human life."

[7] With each sentence, you let the fire grow in size, carving lines and crescents in the air behind you. You manipulate the light, so it burns weaker in color until a soft red glow illuminates you from behind.

"We will fight them like the weak have always fought the strong. We will rise to this struggle! We will rise to face them with bravery, with determination, with fear, with anger, with aggression! We will fight tooth, and nail like only the truly fearful know how to. We will get our revenge! We will scour this planet of these pestilent worms until nothing of them remains. Nothing but stories to frighten your grandchildren with!"

"We will rise from the ashes of SEED. We will use this tragedy to sharpen our blades and harden our hearts. We will become stronger from our defeats, until the stars quake beneath the step of our boots!"

The crowd is frothing at the bit, filled with aggression, with your anger, with bloody joy.

"I will rise with you. Out of our mutual sin. No longer can I be named Alphira. I cannot bear that name without feeling the pain of loss in my heart. Know me now as your new living God. Know me as Pheonix!"

"As your God I demand but one from you to reach Paradise! Should it all end, should we all fall to the Plague, it is your final duty as Crusaders, nay, as Humans, to spit in the face of the Beast. To defy it until the end. To die with my name on your lips! Is that understood?!"

[20+1 vs. 1+5] They hail your name as you make your exit. It echoes up to the structural supports and shakes the amphitheater. Dust drifts down from the ceiling. You could not introduce Emma and William, that is for another day. William is smiling a wicked smile. Emma, on the other hand, looks concerned and surprised.

If she has misgivings about your manipulations, she doesn't speak out about them. You take your elevator to your quarters, passing by the workmen that clean and fix the walls. You pay them no mind as they bow their heads in devotion. A null awaits you, and you cannot tell which number it is. They all look so similar.

"I have suggestions for the position of general, as well as a plan on how to organize the civilian government." He shows you two folders, and you tuck your head to a seat nearby.

"Wait."

He bows his head respectfully as you drop down into a chair, resting your head in your hands. You hated that. It felt worse than any war, any battle you've ever fought.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 01, 2020, 10:42:34 pm
You did well.  There can be no courage without fear, but what in particular was so unpleasant for you?

Check the documents.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 01, 2020, 11:08:01 pm
You have done an excellent job. You have ignited the eternal flame in these people. A Greater Work. They will not cower when the time comes, and with luck, skill, devotion, and courage they will rid this place of the Plague. From knowledge of their own frailty they will gather the strength that never fades, rising triumphant from frailty like a phoenix - or a Phoenix.

You will still need to answer that eternal question, "was it worth it? was it justified?" But for now, you have time.

I am a young member of the Line. I did not have that luxury. Use it well.


You did well.  There can be no courage without fear, but what in particular was so unpleasant for you?

Check the documents.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on May 01, 2020, 11:10:44 pm
There will be time to build these people up stronger, so they can know the truth and fight for themselves, forge their own destiny.  I can not tell you that the end will justify your actions, but the goal is a good one.  Hold onto your troubled mind about these manipulations, they are a kind of strength, a human check on power that SEED lacked.

But you must learn to put that internal conflict aside when necessary.  Determine your ethics and goals, then examine your actions, then act without hesitation.

I am sorry you have to go through this.  We all did and it is no better today then in the past.  I would be glad if you could find another way.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 01, 2020, 11:38:07 pm
Ahh... it is unfair. It is unfair, Phoenix-of-Sol, what you have had to do.

My compatriots have said what needs saying. I have only to offer-- the pride, the great pride we all feel at your actions. Our honored heir.

Sol's bright child.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 02, 2020, 02:12:59 am
The crowd. Everyone looking at me, everyone hoping I can fix everything. All their hopes and dreams, all it projected on me. Relying on me. I--

You make a 'gimme' motion to the null, who stares. "Pass them over."

He does so, handing you over the documents. The first one you look at is titled plans for a living government. SEED had taken on many of the roles that are currently listed, only requiring the groups of Scholars to give reports on situations. It would then provide direction. There was no formalized process.

The system, as you look it over, is a dictatorship, plain and simple. You do note that debt-slaves have the same rights as everyone else, but that is because the rights given are little to none: no more upward mobility, no freedom to assemble or to oppose the government. You will be assigned a job within the Scholars by age thirteen, becoming an apprentice of whatever work is required.
The Scholars themselves are now divided into ministries, all of which are fairly self-explanatory. Agriculture, Industry, Guardians, Crusaders, Internal Affairs, State, Foreign Affairs, Trade/Finance, Communication, Religion and Health. The Nulls have provided a single recommendation for each from the surviving members of the Scholars who have specialized in those fields.

One catches your eye-- the Communication Ministry, where they recommend Emma as your public speaker. William, you note, has also gained a position in this hypothetical government: as the Minister of Internal Affairs.

I want a personal guard that is under none of these Ministries.

There's also a list of three potential generals. All of them scored high marks within officer school and were pruned out of a much larger list.

Spoiler: Generals (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 02, 2020, 02:20:10 am
Eric survived? That guy's awesome. My vote would be for either Eric or Isela. As far as the civilian government is concerned, a dictatorship is fine for wartime, but afterwards it would be nice to have something more democratic.

"Do you anticipate public dissatisfaction with the lack of rights and opportunities for upward mobility?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 02, 2020, 02:25:32 am
"Of course. But we have no economy to speak of. Our credits are worthless -- we backed them with the economic power of The Holy City. People are working for rations."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 02, 2020, 02:28:15 am
In the short term, this is acceptable, but we will need to make some serious gains in industrial and agricultural capability ASAP. Tensions will run high.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 02, 2020, 02:50:16 am
"Who will lead here when I am away or if I become debilitated?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 02, 2020, 02:53:07 am
A provisional government. A dictatorship, for now... we'll improve upon it as we go.

"Who will lead here when I am away or if I become debilitated?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 02, 2020, 03:23:05 am
"Who do you wish to lead in your absence? The General? A council elected individual? Emma? William?"

"There's only a weekly approval and direction process. The Council will not bother you with every particular detail, as that can overwhelm most people, but you can, of course, personally oversee projects."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 02, 2020, 03:32:50 am
"Emma has shown a knack for administration and I trust her more than anyone. She will lead in my absence. However, should we both be dead or busy on the battlefield, the Council should elect an interim leader to maintain the state, such as it is."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 02, 2020, 07:24:29 am
"Emma has shown a knack for administration and I trust her more than anyone. She will lead in my absence. However, should we both be dead or busy on the battlefield, the Council should elect an interim leader to maintain the state, such as it is."
+1 I like the sound of that, the queen shall lead while the queen is out doing stuff.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 02, 2020, 07:47:23 am
"Emma is to be Leader in absentia. If we are both dead or injured, the council should elect an interim leader." You state, continuing to look over the document.

"Understood. Now, a few more questions. One, your title? Two, where do you wish to have these meetings? Three, what benefits should ministers receive? Four, what level of majesty are you expected to be treated with?"

Any other issues with the governmental organization? I guess its okay?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 02, 2020, 08:07:38 am
We don't need any level of majesty nor do we need a fancy title, we just need people to know we're in charge and to do what we say.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 02, 2020, 08:58:21 am
We’re still having the recommended people for the Ministry positions, right?
Also, would it be possible to have two generals? I vote Isela Tabbet and Eric Applegate for Generals. I’m worried we’re becoming what we were trying to fix. This is our chance to change things for the better.
“We don’t need a title. Meetings can be held in an area where everyone can hear, and provide input after the meeting. We’re all here together. We don’t need to be treated with too much majesty, just enough that people know we’re in charge, but not so much that they feel uncomfortable addressing any grievances they might have
I can’t think of the answers to the third question right now, ideas for benefits?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 02, 2020, 09:16:02 am
I’m worried we’re becoming what we were trying to fix.

Yeah, we don't want to end up just sitting around creating mandates. Lots of unfortunate accidents happen that way.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 02, 2020, 12:29:31 pm
We just declared ourself a living god. When we've scoured the [plague] from this world, perhaps we can begin returning control to the people-- but for now, we have need of majesty. We have need of control. We are becoming like unto SEED, perhaps-- it is distasteful, perhaps-- but for now, it is necessary. SEED had not the luxury of free government; for the time being, neither will we.

As to the choice of general: let us have words with Eric. If he is beyond hope, we will let Isela take the reins... but if not, he will serve well to inspire the ranks. Isela can take up another role, an advisory role.




"[Angel] will do, for a title-- Holy Mother, for an honorific. I'll not take up the ceremonies of SEED; they would be impractical for my purposes... I am to be approachable. A god of the people, an angel of mercy. I will keep an honor guard: seven squads of ten, marked with my crest; separate from the other ministries, and beholden to me alone. You will select skilled and loyal soldiers for this purpose."

"We've little in the way of benefits for our ministries at this time, but we can give of what remains to us: proper accommodations, for the ministers and their families. A modicum of access to our food and healthcare establishments, once we've got those running. A fixed salary, once we've got that running. A personal guard, ten to a minister; loyal not to the ministries, but to myself."

"As for a meeting-hall... I'm not all that familiar with the lay of this fortress. We want somewhere out of the way, with a bit of dignity about it-- where would you suggest?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 02, 2020, 12:58:48 pm
We just declared ourself a living god. When we've scoured the [plague] from this world, perhaps we can begin returning control to the people-- but for now, we have need of majesty. We have need of control. We are becoming like unto SEED, perhaps-- it is distasteful, perhaps-- but for now, it is necessary. SEED had not the luxury of free government; for the time being, neither will we.

As to the choice of general: let us have words with Eric. If he is beyond hope, we will let Isela take the reins... but if not, he will serve well to inspire the ranks. Isela can take up another role, an advisory role.




"[Angel] will do, for a title-- Holy Mother, for an honorific. I'll not take up the ceremonies of SEED; they would be impractical for my purposes... I am to be approachable. A god of the people, an angel of mercy. I will keep an honor guard: seven squads of ten, marked with my crest; separate from the other ministries, and beholden to me alone. You will select skilled and loyal soldiers for this purpose."

"We've little in the way of benefits for our ministries at this time, but we can give of what remains to us: proper accommodations, for the ministers and their families. A modicum of access to our food and healthcare establishments, once we've got those running. A fixed salary, once we've got that running. A personal guard, ten to a minister; loyal not to the ministries, but to myself."

"As for a meeting-hall... I'm not all that familiar with the lay of this fortress. We want somewhere out of the way, with a bit of dignity about it-- where would you suggest?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 02, 2020, 01:27:27 pm
We do need some majesty.  People often find that comforting.

"I would also like you to create a ministry of technology dedicated to studying SEED's final gift to me.  The ministry would also determine which technologies would be helpful and possible to produce."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 02, 2020, 01:42:53 pm
We do need some majesty.  People often find that comforting.

"I would also like you to create a ministry of technology dedicated to studying SEED's final gift to me.  The ministry would also determine which technologies would be helpful and possible to produce."
+1 to this as well
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 02, 2020, 03:49:03 pm
Much of our "majesty" will come naturally. We adorn ourself now with grand titles, and with armed escort... but much will come naturally. SEED relied on distance to create veneration, and on ceremony-- we won't need to! We can inspire such things simply by what we are... and that allows us a closeness to our people that SEED could never have.

We'll be in our armor most of the time, I expect, when we're in public: full kit, wings out, honor guard, the lot. A spectacle for the populace, a show of power... all so that, resplendent, we can return to our people the very respect we are given! All so that they can
rise with us, as did Whitney Carter in the alleys of the Holy City.

This is the purpose to our majesty. In exalting ourself, we exalt our people. We give them dignity.
They'll love us for it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 02, 2020, 05:03:58 pm
Much of our "majesty" will come naturally. We adorn ourself now with grand titles, and with armed escort... but much will come naturally. SEED relied on distance to create veneration, and on ceremony-- we won't need to! We can inspire such things simply by what we are... and that allows us a closeness to our people that SEED could never have.

We'll be in our armor most of the time, I expect, when we're in public: full kit, wings out, honor guard, the lot. A spectacle for the populace, a show of power... all so that, resplendent, we can return to our people the very respect we are given! All so that they can
rise with us, as did Whitney Carter in the alleys of the Holy City.

This is the purpose to our majesty. In exalting ourself, we exalt our people. We give them dignity.
They'll love us for it.

I hope your assessment about the people rising with us is a correct assessment. I’m worried they might see our majesty as them not having it. I want them to see themselves as with us, not lower than us
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 02, 2020, 10:29:39 pm
I would vote for Isela Tabbet. If Eric kills himself while acting as general, it would be a big blow to the morale to the citizens of this state.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 02, 2020, 10:41:10 pm
I'd be curious to know how much actual fighting the position holds. General Hardy struck me more as a paper-pusher than an active soldier.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 02, 2020, 11:00:09 pm
The General position is primarily strategy focused, without much in the way of combat. They do not lead from the front, as they are a high value target for the opposing force. Any visit to the frontlines are for morale purposes, and are well planned.

"Understood." The null scribbles you words down as you explain.

"The investigation of the info cube was going to be one of the responsibility of the Ministry of Industry." The null explains, "But if that is your wish, it will be amended."

"I will begin recruitment of the guards immediately." He nods, then continues, "There is a recreation level that will be requestioned and furnished. Level thirty five."

Finally, he withdraws another slip of paper: a requisition form. It's for a small hover-craft and fuel. Requisitioned for somebody named Cephilia Summers. It has your obviously forged signature on the bottom, and it's already been fulfilled.
"I also intercepted this. There was no flight plan filed with it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 02, 2020, 11:13:52 pm
If the general position is mostly strategy focused, I would prefer the Outlander. We can use Eric on the front, if he's willing.

"Do we have any record of someone with that name, and are there any missing persons that were known to be here recently?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 02, 2020, 11:15:18 pm
That's Cephie.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 02, 2020, 11:19:11 pm
Is she escaping?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 02, 2020, 11:24:28 pm
We did tell her to run recon on the surviving districts. Should we pay visit to Eric and this Isela?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 02, 2020, 11:26:00 pm
Ah, I see. Yes, I think we should. It would be nice to check in with the Twelfth Crusader as well, vanquisher of the plague.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 02, 2020, 11:54:01 pm
"I will begin assembling the Ministers. I will inform you when the first meeting will take place." The null rises, giving a tight bow of his head and leaving. Emma yawns, stretching herself out on the utilitarian couch nearby.

"I think I'll go to bed for a little while." She murmurs, sleepily, rubbing at her eyes. She crosses over to you, planting a gentle kiss on your cheek before heading to her bedroom. You sit for a moment longer, feeling a little tired, but do not dwell on it. Instead, you rise. Mitch is waiting patiently for you, and you take the chain and secure it to his collar, heading to the elevator. You pass by a dozing William on the way out.

You flip through the recommendation folder, keying in the level code for the field hospital. After a few turns down the various pathways between beds of wounded soldiers, you come to stop just before you reach Eric's.

[4] Something probes at the edge of your awareness. But it's gone before you can truly register it.

Eric lounges in the bed, and stares at you with dull eyes as you approach. Bloody bandages wrap themselves around his torso, his legs, making the common splotches associated with las-gun ruptures. His left arm bears a stump of ugly cauterized flesh at the elbow. He must be drugged, as he doesn't seem to be able to focus on you.

"Pheobe." He croaks, weakly, looking up at you. "This means...I'm dead...I hope..."

[11] A weak field of willpower twists around him, and you pause, confused. It wrings and loops through itself, twitching feebly with his heartbeat.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 12:02:58 am
Ahh Eric... what this world has put you through.

That willpower writhing about him. Is it human, or... something
more?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 12:04:19 am
Could he have ascended somehow? Or is the plague inside his mind?

"Eric, old friend. I'm afraid not. There's still work for us among the living. Is there anything I can get for you or do for you?"

Gently probe at the willpower with our willpower.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 12:14:57 am
It resembles a human's, but it usually does not extend pass their physical forms. You gently probe at it with your own, and it tightens against your curious touch. Eric's drooping eyes flicker open, finding you with sudden confused focus. You do the same to a neighboring Crusader, and the woman passes out.

"Guess I'm...not so lucky." Eric gives a harsh, wracking laugh, starting to cough heavily. A medic hurries to his side, bristling with righteous indignation.

[11]"I must ask that you do-- Mother Pheonix." She stops herself from yelling at you, hesitant. "I...Major Applegate needs his rest."

"I'm fine." Eric retorts, shooting her a glare that causes her to take a step back, anger in his raspy voice. With one final look between the two of you, she turns and leaves. You pick up his chart while he drifts in and out of consciousness, his eyes finding you every time they open. You pick up his chart, flipping through the papers. Six major ruptures, muscle damages, punctured lung...self-inflicted burn on wrist...with the number of synthetic opioids they've given him, he should be dead to the world.

You almost laugh when you learn the reason why he had to do it, from a report by one of his troops....the damn Bug came out of the ground, nearly wiped the squad with a single tentacle lash. Eric grabbed it, chopped it off, then chopped off his own wrist when he noticed blood on his glove.

"I was thinking of making you Crusader General."

"I refuse."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 12:21:51 am
"You are strong, Eric, and you can still contribute. Don't you want revenge on those that killed so many? We might have a chance to destroy this plague once and for all and give these demons their just rewards. This opportunity cannot be squandered."

"Can you tell me why you aren't interested in the position?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 12:28:09 am
This one's broken. Broken and angry. We'd do ill, to argue with him now.

Nod. "That is your right."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 12:29:22 am
That is not the will of a broken man. We can see that his strength remains to him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 12:32:23 am
"I will fight." Eric rises to his feet, swaying unsteadily. The medic hurries back, and he pushes her away to stand with you, face to face. The smell of blood lingers on him, and you note, with a glance down to his chest, that his wounds are leaking anew into the bandages. "I will not lead more Crusaders...into that...meat grinder." His willpower lashes out at you weakly, fueled by his anger. Despite yourself, and the situation, you smile at his strength.

He grabs something from a tray nearby -- a bundle of many, many tags, each etched with a name, with a district of birth. They weigh down the chain, and he throws it at you weakly.

"Each of...those...died for me. No more."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 12:40:03 am
"Eric... you're not in any condition to fight. Not yet, at least. Do you know who can stop the sort of attrition warfare that leads to death on that scale? The Crusader General. You will have full control over all strategic considerations. The lives that you could save are countless."

"Will you at least think it over?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 12:43:18 am
Motile willpower-- without Ascension. Did Alphira know of such things? Did the Interface?

{Did I?}
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 12:53:23 am
"No. I can't. I won't." Eric murmurs, sagging where he stands. "I can't. Please."

[1][15] There were stories, rumors, of humans of great skill and determination beginning to rise across the Empyre. Born from the hellish battles that wracked the galaxy during the Great Plague and the Strifes that followed. Strong enough to threaten an Ascended in contests of will and physical strength. Many speculated that they simply had physical cybernetic augmentations that allowed them those strengths, or were a more coherent offshoot of the Plague...now, you're not so sure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 01:06:52 am
He's... bent [plague] to his natural will, I think.

Speak soft. "I understand. I understand. You've given-- more than enough."

"Rest. Heal. You'll have your chance to fight soon enough, if you want it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 01:09:14 am
I think he may just be freakishly strong. Imagine what this one would be capable of once ascended...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 01:18:52 am
Strong, to be sure-- but there's got to be more to it than that.

His will is motile. That doesn't happen without tech.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 01:25:13 am
Maybe and maybe not. It is something to consider moving forward.

"Yes... you have given so much already. There may simply be nothing left within you. I would understand if you need time to rest, but I would also be confused. That isn't the Eric that I knew and admired."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 01:31:13 am
Eric looks at you with an unsteady glare, letting himself be herded back to his bed by the Medic once his strength leaves him. She says nothing, adjusting the scarce cloth covering and letting him rest quietly. She leaves without another word. "I will fight." Is all he can murmur, before the strain of his actions on his weakened frame catch up to him. His eyes shut as he drifts into a drug-induced sleep.

You sigh heavily, rubbing at your face at the non-answer. You pick up the chain of names and set them on the tray beside him before you make your exit. Silas hasn't reported anything yet about the plague...that may come when the Thornton evacuation is finished. Maybe you could send a Crusader to fetch him, to help explain this oddness.

You head to the elevator, taking a trip down in the Crusader living quarters. You navigate down the long hallways and past children playing with one another as their parents look on. You come to a stop at her door, giving it a knock.

"Come in!" A voice calls, and you open it step inside. A very young, tan-skinned, brown-haired woman sits inside. She looks younger than you. Isela is reading a book at a table carved from or formed from the wall. Piles of paperwork set in front of her -- she starts when she sees you, dropping the book down and bowing at the hips. "Mothe- Mother Pheonix. I apologize for my rudeness."

"At ease. I came to speak to you. May I sit?" You gesture to the only other chair. She nods her head and reclaims her own seat.

"What do I owe this pleasure to?" Isela questions, looking across at you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 01:39:40 am
"Your potential has caught my eye and I'd like to get to know you. Can you tell me about yourself?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 01:45:53 am
"Your potential has caught my eye and I'd like to get to know you. Can you tell me about yourself?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 01:53:23 am
"Um...oh." Isela rubs at her arm, she looks hesitant for all of a moment, then, "I'm the daughter of Outlander debt-slaves.I joined the Scholars to avoid that. I decided to join the Crusader Officer program after one of my mentors recommended it, especially with the war going on. I finished the program less than a month ago and received my first posting. My platoon was one of the many in charge of evacuating the city. We only saw brief combat during that time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 02:04:22 am
"As you know, we have suffered a horrible defeat. We have an incredibly high number of casualties and wounded, and we are low on serviceable weapons and fuel. It makes sense to wait to recuperate before we attempt to fight the plague again."

"Would you agree with that assessment?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 02:11:30 am
"If that is your assessment, then I will not disagree, Mother Pheonix." Isela is polite, but she's tactfully avoided answering the question.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 02:14:57 am
"I am asking for your input, dear. Please speak freely, whether you agree or not."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 02:30:39 am
"I am asking for your input, dear. Please speak freely, whether you agree or not."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 02:35:31 am
"Then I disagree fully." Isela pulls a document from her pile of papers, it's dated from the beginning of the war. "This is going to sound crazy, but I think the Plague is far more intelligent than anyone has ever considered. It's not some unbeatable demon -- its a carefully planning, scheming enemy, who knows how to feint, who knows how economies work, how best to win a war."

"Let me put it this way: I think it always had the strength to break through the defensive line. It was bleeding us of manpower and economic ability by letting us throw our soldiers at it." She pauses, reaching down to grab a bottle and pour out alcohol for both of you into neat, elegant ceramic cups, covered with designs of what you assume are the outlands -- salt marshes and dusty lands. "It hit the hydrogen plant-- why didn't it do that everywhere? Unless it was testing our internal defenses. It knew we would respond with all the strength we could -- and we did."

She takes a gulp of hers, starting to get into a flow with her lecture. "It was testing when was the best time to break through the Line -- the best time for the Holy City to be weak enough to be seized. Fortifications like the Holy City are force amplifiers, if we held up with all the resources we wasted on the line there, it wouldn't have been able to break through for -years-. We lasted five months trying to protect everything. The lands around it would've been destroyed, but the city was its primary objective. We could have used sorties and hit and run tactics to whittle down the enemy forces while keeping our primary industrial base intact."

"Instead, we over-extended ourselves, just like it hoped we would. It created a foe that you had to fight to stall you. Then, it broke the line like a twig. We didn't have the forces to hold the Holy City, and it broke through our defenses because we focused on the Line."

"So, now that the city has fallen, and we are weak -- what will it expect us to do? Go on the defensive. Hold what we can -- restock, replenish our troops while it rips away at our territory. If we do that, the war is already lost -- it made us incapable of offensive attacks.. What will it not expect us to do?" She pulls out the file -- its the one filled with pictures of the Western Outlands, "It won't expect us to attack its 'infrastructure'. To go on the offense with heavy surgical strikes."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 02:41:25 am
I like this one.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 03, 2020, 02:50:03 am
This general is good.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 02:57:35 am
That... was everything I've been planning since the Holy City's destruction, and then some
put into better words than ever I had.
We need this.

Grin. "Well spoken indeed."

"I'll be blunt, Child Tabbett: my councilors tell me you're a genius. A budding tactician, such as is hardly seen in a century. After that little lecture, I'm inclined to believe them."

"I'm in need of a general-- someone bright and fresh, not tied to old institutions and old tactics-- and as it so happens, you fit the bill perfectly. How about it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 03:05:25 am
"It went to war knowing it would win. That's the first rule of warfare, right? Never start a war you cannot win." Isela takes your pause as a reason to continue, "So it's not going to falter or hesitate to start localizing its strength with our industrial bases. It suffered a heavy loss, a [Pyrrhic] victory. If we act now, we can disrupt its current supply and communication lines and we can start whittling it down to nothing."

Isela hesitates, taking another sip of the vodka from her cup, "Forgive me. I started rambling, Pheo-- Mother Pheonix."

You grin at her, taking a sip of the harsh, cheap liquor before you make your offer. "I'll be blunt, Child Tabbett: my councilors tell me you're a genius. A budding tactician, such as is hardly seen in a century. After that little lecture, I'm inclined to believe them."

She blushes, rubbing at her tanned face and looking into her cup. "I-- yes, thank you."

"I'm in need of a general-- someone bright and fresh, not tied to old institutions and old tactics-- and as it so happens, you fit the bill perfectly. How about it?"

Isela doesn't hesitate, doesn't fret or act as if she even needs to consider the decision. Her eyes light up, and there's a giddiness to her voice. She's genuinely excited by the offer, "Yes. God-- SEE-- yes, I mean. I will accept that role, if you really wish it, Mother Pheonix. I...I know I'm young, but I will do my best! I mean, if you want me to."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 03:13:56 am
We do have one more candidate, but unless she's amazing I'm inclined to just go with this one.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 03:27:15 am
Our last candidate was just an old compatriot of Hardy's-- useful if we wanted to preserve the original institution, but we don't. This is much better.
Besides, we've already extended our offer!

"I really do." Smile. "I'll make the necessary arrangements."

"A curiosity, Child Tabbet, before I take my leave. Speak freely once again: what is your mind on the question of SEED's divinity?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 03:29:38 am
Nah, I meant Mother Nicole, who previously fought the plague and won. The Twelfth Crusader.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 03:37:33 am
Is that why you wanted to meet with her!

My choice stands. This girl knows what she's about.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 03:57:18 am
[15 vs 20] You mean the woman who so distrusted me that she literally wrote the book on how to contain me? The one who was willing to have Emma held hostage or killed to control me? That spider? She may be useful, yes, but she is still governing Steelworks Nine.

[14] Isela hesitates, "I do not think SEED was a god or the divine. I don't know what it was. But...there's too many odd details about it. It has too many weaknesses, too many flaws. I do not know. My pa' taught me to doubt, to question everything. Why would SEED need to destroy itself if its this omnipotent being? How could it be deceived by General Hardy if it knew everything?"

"So, to answer your question, I do not know what it is." Isela finally admits, "But the gods I grew up with were far different. Outlanders teach their children that the gods were created by the people that worship them, to answer questions we cannot know the answers to. SEED seems like that type of question."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 03, 2020, 04:00:33 am
Didn't Mother Nicole use firebombing to clear out the plague? The state could start producing bomber crafts and napalm as soon as possible to attack the infrastructure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 03, 2020, 07:53:44 am
What if we build some cheap WWII era fighter planes to do bombing runs over [plague] lands, and drop stuff like napalm and Agent Orange.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 03, 2020, 09:09:14 am
(((Hey, notation question: should "vodka" have been in brackets?)))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 09:35:52 am
((After a certain point, your translator no longer interrupts the flow of speech to explain the meaning of the word, and selects the first closest translation.I'm a bit of a lazybones when it comes to remembering every single word I've ever bracketed. To be honest, I should probably keep a list or make a macro. If it is an issue, I will go back and fix the said mistake, but I also think not doing every time makes the reading experience easier at the cost of immersion. Let me know what you think?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 03, 2020, 10:37:09 am
((After a certain point, your translator no longer interrupts the flow of speech to explain the meaning of the word, and selects the first closest translation.I'm a bit of a lazybones when it comes to remembering every single word I've ever bracketed. To be honest, I should probably keep a list or make a macro. If it is an issue, I will go back and fix the said mistake, but I also think not doing every time makes the reading experience easier at the cost of immersion. Let me know what you think?))
((I think our translator learning over time makes sense))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 03, 2020, 12:24:00 pm
((After a certain point, your translator no longer interrupts the flow of speech to explain the meaning of the word, and selects the first closest translation.I'm a bit of a lazybones when it comes to remembering every single word I've ever bracketed. To be honest, I should probably keep a list or make a macro. If it is an issue, I will go back and fix the said mistake, but I also think not doing every time makes the reading experience easier at the cost of immersion. Let me know what you think?))
((I think our translator learning over time makes sense))

(((Aye. It's not a problem at all, I was just curious. Notation interests me.)))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 01:10:56 pm
So you're okay with working with Cephie, but not grandmother? She's a huge asset having already dealt with the plague before. Someone else can always be assigned to govern that district if needed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 01:21:38 pm
Dear "grandmother"... could perhaps serve as an advisor. Not as general.

Nod. "A wise man, your father."

"I spoke with SEED three times, as this war progressed. It was old-- powerful. It gave rise to many of this world's people, and it loved them after its fashion... even unto death. But it was not divine."

"What of myself, Child Tabbett? Am I the god I claim to be?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 01:25:47 pm
Why not? She's an extremely experienced Crusader that is willing to do whatever is necessary to get the job done. She seems like a perfect choice for Crusader General.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 02:04:08 pm
"Whatever necessary." What happens if she decides we're in her way? What happens if, like Hardy, she blames us for the Holy City's ruin-- if she decides to take matters into her own hands? She is well-known, and strong-willed... and she knows how to hurt us. She could seize control.

Isela is young. and we've offered her a tremendous opportunity. She will be beholden to us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 02:08:45 pm
Hmm. That's a good point. I would support Isela for general, in that case.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 03, 2020, 02:52:19 pm
Yes. Nicole is unlikely to be beholden to us, even if she appears to be.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 03:33:32 pm
[18] Isela goes quiet, looking across the table at you. She gulps back the entire cup at once before she speaks, deciding. "No
You are not a god. You're a question to be answered."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 03, 2020, 03:53:47 pm
"Well answered."

She did not listen to fear or misplaced respect, and did not stoop to flattery.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 04:20:50 pm
"Well answered."

+1

"Keep that question to yourself, for the time being-- as things stand, my people have need of a god. I give them a cause, that one day they may stand without me."

"We'll speak further on that matter soon, perhaps... for now, I must be off to prepare your induction." Smile. "Until then, Child Tabbett."

Take our leave, and find one of our nulls. It's time to make known our choice of general.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 05:47:26 pm
Isela's shoulders slump with relief, her momentary fear passing out of her frame. Slowly, she nods. "I understand, Mother Pheonix. Thank you once again."

Locating a null is as simple as going to Zero's office. You inform him of your decision. He nods, scribbling a note. "We will announce it under your name. She might have difficulties settling in, due to her age and inexperience, but she was the best long term, mathematical choice. Interesting woman. She doesn't find my kind inherently repulsive, as others do."

You cannot say the same.

"Unless you wish to gather the Officers and make the choice known yourself. She might have to make a display of power to keep them under thumb."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 06:12:41 pm
"I do think it's best to make absolutely clear that I have mandated her position, so I will make the announcement myself. I'd rather avoid... problems."

"What is your assessment of Mother Nicole for the position?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 03, 2020, 07:00:42 pm
"I do think it's best to make absolutely clear that I have mandated her position, so I will make the announcement myself. I'd rather avoid... problems."

"What is your assessment of Mother Nicole for the position?"
Yes to the announcing it ourselves. Nicole will not get the position
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 07:06:06 pm
We're setting ourselves up for danger if we choose an inexperienced Outlander-born officer for the position. Many officers will resist her leadership and she may not have the political experience to anticipate personnel problems and respond accordingly.

Nicole is experienced politically and militarily, and she is bound to us as a member of our family. She is well known and would be able to command respect from others, without which we would have serious logistical problems, regardless of the general's technical skill.

In addiiton, I wouldn't be surprised if Nicole's technical skills were greater than those of Isela, as Nicole vanquished the plague before and probably knows it better than any living Crusader.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 03, 2020, 07:31:11 pm
...I'm willing to ask the null-child's opinion on the matter if Phoenix is. Not so much because I think setting up Nicole as general's a good idea, as because I'm curious why she wasn't on the list given us in first place.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 03, 2020, 08:01:09 pm
...I'm willing to ask the null-child's opinion on the matter if Phoenix is. Not so much because I think setting up Nicole as general's a good idea, as because I'm curious why she wasn't on the list given us in first place.
She wasn’t on the list because she is willing to contain us, she isn’t loyal to us, she will turn on us the first opportunity she gets. She was willing to hold Emma hostage
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 08:03:08 pm
So you're fine that Cephie tried to kill us multiple times, at one point even grasping our beating heart and threatening to rip it out, but because Nicole was loyal to SEED, the head of state, she's disqualified?  Who do you think the head of state is now?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 03, 2020, 08:05:41 pm
So you're fine that Cephie tried to kill us multiple times, at one point even grasping our beating heart and threatening to rip it out, but because Nicole was loyal to SEED, the head of state, she's disqualified?  Who do you think the head of state is now?
Good points
Learning why Nicole wasn’t on the list does seem like a good idea, maybe she was killed during the siege
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 03, 2020, 08:19:26 pm
So you're fine that Cephie tried to kill us multiple times, at one point even grasping our beating heart and threatening to rip it out, but because Nicole was loyal to SEED, the head of state, she's disqualified?  Who do you think the head of state is now?

We defeated Cephie. She is subservient to us for now per Empyreal tradition. Nicole has no such bond to us. We may be head of state but we have no guarantee that Nicole will follow this head of state as loyally as she followed SEED - on the contrary, we may be seen as a usurper!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 08:25:58 pm
She is our grandmother and an official in the Church, which we have inherited, so she is bound to us by family and as a member of our government. It doesn't make sense for her to suddenly decide she doesn't want to be loyal to the Church she gave so much and did so much for. 

In general, people follow patterns rather than doing bizarre actions disconnected from their past behavior, so I don't see why Nicole would be any different.

Is Isela bound to us by oath? Maybe she'll start acting strangely and overthrow the government!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on May 03, 2020, 09:29:42 pm
We had been asking for a change in leadership, this is it.  She will make a good general until the broken man can be repairedhealed or a better replacement arrives.  Then she can be in an advisory role.

We will likely take a prominent position in any attacks so we can help guide her for the first bit of time, as much as we can.

I am imagining a strike on the factories, breeding pits or algae pools would be most devastating, the plague seems to use up a lot of energy.

Maybe two strikes, one backed by war machines on an outer target with us and a aircraft strike force hitting something else.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 03, 2020, 10:26:23 pm
Are we sure that Mother Nicole is still alive? Even if she is alive, there's a chance where she is at someplace far away. Also on the map of the regions around the Holy city, where would the fortress be on that map?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2020, 11:30:40 pm
There's no way to find out if we don't even ask.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2020, 11:57:57 pm
"We took into consideration public and Crusader opinion into account. Nicole Gainer is...a divisive figure in the eyes of both. Not to mention that SEED had a distrust of her, which well warranted the many investigations it had us undertake."

Zero pauses in his monotone diatribe. "You had a distrust of the Old Crusader Guard as well -- Hardy received his recommendation for General from her. The latest Pontifex had the same, and his election had it's share of scandal. She was always innocent within the reach of the Law. But courts were a farce when she trained each of the judges herself."

"If you wish, I can prepare a dossier for her."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 04, 2020, 12:01:32 am
"Please do prepare a dossier. If she isn't suitable for the position of Crusader General, I would still like to have her on hand in another role."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 04, 2020, 12:06:48 am
"Are you sure, Pheobe? I calculated that you would lose a considerable amount of respect and affection for her after reading it. It may harm your future social interactions with her."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 04, 2020, 12:08:51 am
"Positive. If she is dangerous, I would like to know even more greatly."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 04, 2020, 12:22:27 am
This woman was the old institution, wasn't she?

"Positive. If she is dangerous, I would like to know even more greatly."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 04, 2020, 12:31:42 am
Whatever happened to the Pontifex, anyway? I wonder if he survived.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 04, 2020, 05:04:27 am
This woman was the old institution, wasn't she?

"Positive. If she is dangerous, I would like to know even more greatly."

+1
+1 Knowledge is power.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 04, 2020, 08:55:06 am
This woman was the old institution, wasn't she?

"Positive. If she is dangerous, I would like to know even more greatly."

+1
+1 Knowledge is power.
+1 The more we know, the better
Isela is the general, yes? We need to begin planning for and executing a strike against the plague, it;s energy sources, food, Breeding, buildings
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 04, 2020, 10:13:21 am
The null gives you a nod, slipping a patchwork collection of documents from a locked drawer in the desk. He extends it to you, and you take it with a nod.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 04, 2020, 02:52:30 pm
"Wow... those are indeed many crimes. In general, however, it's best to have these sort of plotters close, where they can be kept an eye on, rather than far away. Please summon her to the fortress."

"Did the Pontifex, Xavier Mack, and Tyler Hop survive the destruction of the Holy City?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on May 04, 2020, 06:51:28 pm
I would rather leave her where she is and go out and meet with her with our bodyguards.  Sends a better message if we show up in force and will not take her away from duties to organize the steelworks.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 04, 2020, 08:34:25 pm
Yeah, maybe we should just leave her at a distance. I had no idea she committed so many crimes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 04, 2020, 09:19:30 pm
I... kind of expected as much, honestly. You don't get a name like "Black Nicky" for nothing.
Her dealings with the Pontifex, I was not expecting. I can't help but wonder... how much did she know of his plans towards SEED? Was she playing us from both sides?

Regardless... no summons, for now. Definitely no promotion.

"...Thank you."

"Did the Pontifex, Xavier Mack, and Tyler Hop survive the destruction of the Holy City?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 04, 2020, 09:48:33 pm
"Tyler Hop, as far as we know, was not with the evacuation. The Pontifex was also not present -- the Guardians we had posted to monitor him did not report back. Xavier Mack is confirmed dead." The null pauses, tapping something into the computer. "Xavier Mack helped with the evacuation after insuring his family's safety, before returning to the western side of the City to help the combined forces there." Zero explains quietly, monotone.

"His daughter, Lauren Mack, is our selection for Guardian Minister. She's not the most experienced member of the remaining force -- but all of them threatened to resign if she was not given the title." Zero looks over a paper, continuing, "So, for the sake of balance and to discourage that line of thinking, we made William Thornton the Internal Affairs Minister. A good compromise."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 04, 2020, 10:32:21 pm
"Understood. I am ready to give my announcement as to the new Crusader General. Would now be an appropriate time?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 04, 2020, 11:30:47 pm
There will be need of a gathering, I imagine... an hour or so to prepare, perhaps?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 04, 2020, 11:52:56 pm
"We would need time to gather the officers. An hour, or two. We've received radios from William, as a matter of fact, so we can call you on those if you have one, when we are ready." Zero speaks into the radio, ordering the nulls to gather the officers.

You nod, asking for the channel, then return to your quarters to find Lucille. It takes a few minutes to activate her, but the needles dig into your flesh, into your bone, and her voice quietly chimes to life within your head.

[Goodmorning Pheobe. How may I be of service today?]

You inform her to beginning listening to the agreed-upon radio channel.

[Affirmative. Beginning to monitor.]

You take hold of MItch's chain and head down to one of unoccupied storage levels, taking him for a jog through the empty hallways, pass open cryogenic containment units, and storage centers. You pass by a few laborers, but they do not bother you, giving you a polite bow of their heads while they continue their many tasks. Eventually, Lucille speaks -- its, not a direct connection, you note, but rather Lucille repeating the words spoken. It's a little odd.

["We are ready for you now, Pheonix."] Breathing out a quick sigh of exertion, you deposit Mitch in your quarters, shrugging on one of Emma's coats and leaving for the amphitheater. As you pass by, hidden in the gantries built into the structure, you look down at the crowd. It is far less packed than before.  Filled only with Crusader Officers and their closest subordinates, you note. Many are wounded, leaning on their comrades. They all look young.

Nobody waits backstage for you.

Who are we selecting?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 04, 2020, 11:56:26 pm
We, the ancestors, decided on Isela Tabbett. She seems like a bright young woman with good ideas. Would you agree with that choice?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 05, 2020, 12:06:51 am
As speaks the "Good Doctor", so stand I.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 05, 2020, 12:12:11 am
I agree.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on May 05, 2020, 12:46:59 am
The broken one would be the best choice if we had the luxury of time, one like him could possibly even help us take on a fleet and win.

But we do not have time.

You will have to provide the personality and power while she provides strategy.

Choose Isela Tabbett, for now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 05, 2020, 01:22:28 am
[18]You take a deep breath, emerging on to the stage. The Crusader Officers offer a salute. 'Hail Pheonix!' Some call out, taking it up in a chant, each man and woman spurring their neighbors to be louder than the other.

You wait for it to die down, keeping a stern expression on your face while you wait patiently.

"Today, with the unfornate incident surrounding General Hardy--" The cried of 'traitor and 'heretic' are shouted by the bold. "I will be announcing the ascendence of Crusader General Isela Tabbet."

[3] Silence meets your announcement. Murmurs begin when Isela mounts the stage, looking out over the crowd. She's silent as she dips a bow to you.

"Thank you for your grace of wisdom, Mother Pheonix. I will serve the Crusaders with all I can."

"She's young enough to be my daughter." Somebody calls, and Isela rises stiffly, looking out over the crowd as somebody laughs at the jeer.

[18] "If you have a problem, I insist we address it now." Isela calls gently, and the jeering officer grins, rising to the challenge. He mounts the stage with the two of you, and you watch patiently as he approaches Isela.

[17 vs. 13] She steps closer to the middle aged officer, putting a gentle hand on his hip while wearing a cute, innocent smile. He begins to say something-- until Isela twists, taking hold of him and smashing his face into the stage.

[9 vs. 6] Isela steps on to him-- and he groans, but knows better than to rise. "As Officer Jacoby," she grinds her booted foot into the small of his back, "So elegantly stated, I am young. So let's clear the air, and figure out where we stand." Her boot twists. "I am sixteen years of age. I am inexperienced in combat. I am an Outlander's spawn. And yet Pheonix selected me to lead you. So grow the fuck up and keep your remarks to yourself. I don't expect you to like me -- I expect what every general has ever expected. Follow my orders, respect me to my face and in front of others and die holding the line. Do I make myself clear!?"

[20 vs. 2] "Yes General Tabbet!" The crowd calls back, obviously impressed, sounding off as one.

"Beautiful. Officer Jacoby, we're going to say we were sparring -- otherwise I'd have to knock you down to apprentice for your insubordination."

"Yes, General Tabbet."

"Good boy. Up you go-- there we are."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 05, 2020, 01:25:55 am
Haha I like her even more now. I think we made a good choice.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 05, 2020, 02:39:51 am
An Outlander's daughter! They raise these ones tough.

"Holy Crusaders-- your general! She is an extension now of my own will, and she will be treated as such! She will bring you victory in my name!"
End this assembly on a high note, and remove ourself to the gantries.




...allow ourself a grin. "Beautiful indeed, General Tabbett. I can force my officers to subservience in your name, but their respect-- that, you had to earn. You made quite the step today towards that end."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 05, 2020, 02:40:50 am
An Outlander's daughter! They raise these ones tough.

"Holy Crusaders-- your general! She is an extension now of my own will, and she will be treated as such! She will bring you victory in my name!"
End this assembly on a high note, and remove ourself to the gantries.




...allow ourself a grin. "Beautiful indeed, General Tabbett. I can force my officers to subservience in your name, but their respect-- that, you had to earn. You made quite the step today towards that end."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 05, 2020, 03:24:22 am
An Outlander's daughter! They raise these ones tough.

"Holy Crusaders-- your general! She is an extension now of my own will, and she will be treated as such! She will bring you victory in my name!"
End this assembly on a high note, and remove ourself to the gantries.




...allow ourself a grin. "Beautiful indeed, General Tabbett. I can force my officers to subservience in your name, but their respect-- that, you had to earn. You made quite the step today towards that end."
+1
+1
I wonder what's the next thing we have to deal with.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 05, 2020, 04:42:02 am
The assembled Crusader Officers file out. There's still murmurs of discontent, of course. But discontent and soldiers are eternal friends.



"It only worked because he was dumb enough to challenge me." Isela admits with a heavy sigh, slouching down. "I'll have to promote him or something to make up for the embarrassment. I had one of my mentor's friends ready to do the same thing...but I guess she just hoped for the same outcome."

"Pheonix? I would like to ask a boon. I want to make Eric Applegate the Thirteenth Crusader, and grant him a high rank without any troops. Enough of one to be my muscle and face among the Officers."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 05, 2020, 06:28:35 am
“He wishes to fight, so this’ll be good for him too. Accepted”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 05, 2020, 09:17:05 am
I believe he wanted to fight on the front lines so I'm not sure he'd except the position of body guard, we should ask before we shove him into the position.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 05, 2020, 09:49:49 am
I believe he wanted to fight on the front lines so I'm not sure he'd except the position of body guard, we should ask before we shove him into the position.
yes, we should ask him first
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 05, 2020, 11:10:32 am
"I'll see what I can do... but the matter may be out of my hands."
Sigh, explain: "Eric sustained severe physical and mental damage on the Line before it fell. It will be some time before he recovers, if he recovers at all."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 05, 2020, 11:27:41 am
"Babysitting me might be good for him." Isela ventures, gently, but heaves a sigh. "He should still be made the Thirteenth Great Crusader, in my opinion...but that's up to you of course. And him, I guess. I spoke to him some, this morning after you visited me. He was in a rough state -- he stopped letting them give him pain medicine. He's a wreck."

With another puff of her cheeks, she leans against the gantries, watching as the amphitheater starts being used by a number of children under the eye of watchful guardians and Guardians. "How soon do you want to make the first move, Mother Pheonix?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 05, 2020, 01:38:53 pm
"As soon as possible. The [plague] is loose-- the longer we wait, the longer we risk one of our remaining Industrial Districts falling to its power. If it gets hold of that kind of infrastructure... things could get very bad, very fast."

Let's take this one and pay Zero a visit, hm? We need a new map, and a better idea of what resources we can field in combat right now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 05, 2020, 02:06:52 pm
"As soon as possible. The [plague] is loose-- the longer we wait, the longer we risk one of our remaining Industrial Districts falling to its power. If it gets hold of that kind of infrastructure... things could get very bad, very fast."

Let's take this one and pay Zero a visit, hm? We need a new map, and a better idea of what resources we can field in combat right now.
+1 we need to attack
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 05, 2020, 02:13:27 pm
"As soon as possible. The [plague] is loose-- the longer we wait, the longer we risk one of our remaining Industrial Districts falling to its power. If it gets hold of that kind of infrastructure... things could get very bad, very fast."

Let's take this one and pay Zero a visit, hm? We need a new map, and a better idea of what resources we can field in combat right now.
+1 we need to attack
+1

We do need to attack, and we should seriously consider trusting our general and making Eric the Thirteenth Crusader, even if he is not capable of assuming his duties immediately. Some people, especially those who think they are incapable, do better when thrust into these sorts of positions.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 05, 2020, 02:27:25 pm
My thought is this: we give it a few days. We keep an eye on him, arrange a regular report on his condition. Once he's stabilized a bit, we can try again to find a suitable place for him-- quite possibly Thirteenth Crusader.

I suspect Eric's healing much faster than baseline. We may not have long to wait.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 05, 2020, 02:45:13 pm
I suspect Eric's healing much faster than baseline

:-)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 05, 2020, 03:06:15 pm
That seems fair. Hopefully he isn't crippled.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 05, 2020, 11:57:29 pm
You gesture for Isela to follow you to Zero's office. He's still seated at the desk when you return once more. With a mechanical bow, he questions, "How can I be of service today, Pheonix?"

"I'm hoping to know what resources we have available."

"Ah. There's an error there -- we still haven't collected enough data. We are still taking count of fuel reserves, weaponry, armor, artillery. So on." Zero explains placidly, looking over at Isela as he speaks, "Its been rather difficult without a general, as the officer corps are difficult to work with on the best of days. We're also still unloading the crafts. I can give you a rough estimate, of course, judging by our current numbers within the fortress city."

You nod, and he launches into a spiel.

"As of our last count of the wounded and injured, we have one hundred, ninety-three thousand, two hundred and thirteen active Crusaders, roughly one-fifth of our total population here. Furthermore, we have fifty-four thousand, one hundred and seventy-two injured Crusaders who are posted to light-duty -- manning the anti-aircraft capabilities that this base posses, organizing the refugees, distributing food, assisting scholars-- so on."

"The Military Doctrine of SEED has always been to make sure that everyone has a sidearm, a rifle, and a knife, with officers and higher-ranking members of the Crusaders possessing Cutter Blades. Our reserve forces, for the most part, are relying on their pistols and are under armored, while all the Active Duty Crusaders are in possession of a full kit."

"We have a large number of hovercraft currently docking in the fortress. We have seventy-three Mark 1 Hornets, which can carry a squad of ten or be outfitted with more weaponry. We have thirty-one Mark 1 Personnel carriers, each capable of carrying one platoon of fifty troops. Sixteen Mark 1 Minor Cargo Ships, which, without modification, can carry roughly four platoons or six thousand tons of cargo. And we have nine Mark 1 Major Cargo Ships, which we have uncomfortably managed to fit fifty-five thousand individuals on in cramped, horrible conditions during the evacuation. As per the Technology Cube, they have a max tonnage of one hundred thousand."

"We're still trying to get an exact count on our fuel supplies, as of today, as our primary priority was evacuation. Suffice to say, by my estimates of not seeing many fuel canisters on the ships, we don't have a lot. Especially since the Thornton evacuation is currently underway."

"Currently the Fortress does not possess any other industry besides the production of foodstuffs; rations. There are a number of available levels, but we would need to secure resources to build any industries on those levels. We still possess the digging and building equipment left over from before, but it too is in need of repairs."

The lead null takes a deep breath, before finally removing a curled up square of heavy-duty paper from the drawer. "And this is our latest map, courtesy of our scouts. The red dot is us."



Spoiler: Map (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 12:01:17 am
"General, based on this information, can you devise a counteroffensive to degrade and debilitate the enemy?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 12:30:27 am
Such pixel-perfect lines on that map. What program did you wind up using to make it?

"General, based on this information, can you devise a counteroffensive to degrade and debilitate the enemy?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on May 06, 2020, 12:36:47 am
So we have no fuel, that complicates things considerably.

I thought Zero said our latest mop at first.  Ah the little things.

Anyway we should tell her about the structures and items we saw on our scouting of the plague lands and our estimates of what the things are.

We should also see if there are fuel refinery capabilities in any of the remaining areas or other SEED stockpiles we can access, though I guess Zero would have told us already.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 12:39:26 am
What is the fuel in question?  Gasoline?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 12:43:06 am
Raw hydrogen, I believe. There was a whole district dedicated to the stuff... wiped out in SEED's demise. We could be in some trouble on that front.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 12:45:00 am
Emma, William, and we should be able to produce that from water.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 12:49:38 am
On the scale required to fuel an army?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 12:54:36 am
Unclear.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 12:55:54 am
Autorealm, then finish in MsPaint 95



...to produce enough fuel for extended operations of literally more than a hundred hovercrafts...? Some of which require metric tons of the stuff to operate? I'll clear out my schedule. It's possible, but I'll be working at it all day and only make a dent in the operation costs.

Iseala sits, looking at the map, and at the listing of troops and craft under her control. "How do you feel about a field trip, Pheonix?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 06, 2020, 12:59:57 am
Didn't three said that we have to ration water now?
Three states after sitting quietly for a few minutes. "We would also have to begin rationing water and electricity."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 01:24:44 am
It is an amusing idea... but impractical. We are of more use elsewhere, I should think.

"I'll go where I'm needed. What have you in mind?"

The young General addresses you without honorific! Mark that well, Phoenix-of-Sol: she grows familiar with your presence.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 01:28:20 am
Well, it was worth a shot, I suppose.

It is an amusing idea... but impractical. We are of more use elsewhere, I should think.

"I'll go where I'm needed. What have you in mind?"

The young General addresses you without honorific! Mark that well, Phoenix-of-Sol: she grows familiar with your presence.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 02:16:49 am
Water rationing hasn't occurred yet, the population is low enough that there's plentiful food, water, and light currently, as the structure was designed for many more inhabitants.

"First thing I would recommend we do -- send soldiers to seize and fortify Steelworks four and five. An entire corps split between the two provinces should be enough to lay claim to them. We can ransack their fuel supplies as well. They'll probably have minor refineries that we can use to create a supply line for food, but we won't be able to pull them back out if our fuel situation doesn't drastically improve."

Isela pauses for a moment.

"Meanwhile, you head to the former hydrogen district with a few of the smaller cargo carriers and a few platoons -- most of the stuff SEED produced is modular, so we might be able to get a few more refineries going. The Plague may also be in that area for the same reason."

"That is my recommendation as General, Pheonix, for our first moves."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 02:20:31 am
"What role do you see William and Emma Thornton playing in this war?  Should they take the field?  Their abilities are similar to mine."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 03:09:52 am
Isela may not know those two are [angelic] in nature... I'm not sure whether I care to push that point just yet or no.
Perhaps we'd best speak with the Thornton siblings on the matter. Find out how they want to go about this.

Nod. "Good start. Give the orders to claim those steelworks, and arrange a force to move out tomorrow morning under my command."

Now... when was the last time we properly slept? We may need to go do like our Thornton kin and nap awhile.



((irrelavant to everything else, but:))
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 03:20:01 am
Nice, the Void Slayer is looking fearsome. My thought is that it's wasteful to have two Empyreals with our abilities pushing paper when they could be burning bugs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 06, 2020, 07:25:56 am
Follow the plan
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 06, 2020, 07:30:45 am
So here's a thought, what if we can't make enough hydrogen to power our military, we might want to start looking at alternatives such as fossil fuels and natural gasses.

+1 To the plan.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 06, 2020, 08:12:33 am
"Angel of Oil"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 11:08:20 am


On a whim, you describe fossil fuels and natural gas to the lead null. The man looks confused until you describe how it is formed.

"Unfortunately, this planet did not have a surface biosphere before SEED's arrival. The only native life is within the oceans, which we do not have access to at this time." He explains after considering the situation for a few silent minutes.

You sigh, before turning your attention back to Isela, who waits tensely for your approval. You make a show of looking over the map, of considering her strategy, before you give her an approving nod. She rises from the desk with a bow, heading out the office -- no doubt to muster her soldiers and plan the invasion proper. The null carefully rolls the map up for you, extending it out. You stick it into your coat and take your leave. Your empty bed awaits you in your quarters, and you drop into it.

[16][13] A dreamless sleep takes you.

[-] The bed is still empty when you awaken, rubbing at your face. The world outside the glass is lit by starlight, and you sit up to let your gaze drift over the landscape laid out before you. Snow falls over the jagged hills of the rim mountains. No one has bothered your sleep, so you rise, drifting into the showers to lounge under the lukewarm water as it sprinkles down from the showerhead. You dry off and get dressed, sitting on your bed once more to look out over the windswept canyons.


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 11:13:30 am
Go grab a bunch of nutrient cubes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 06, 2020, 11:39:56 am
Go grab a bunch of nutrient cubes.
let’s only take what we need, food is limited

We should do something to help, maybe by assisting with building things, we need to do something of use
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 11:54:53 am
The fortress is capable of sustaining millions and it is far under capacity. There are plenty of nutrient cubes for us to take.

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Water rationing hasn't occurred yet, the population is low enough that there's plentiful food, water, and light currently, as the structure was designed for many more inhabitants.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 06, 2020, 12:23:44 pm
Go grab a bunch of nutrient cubes.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 12:25:01 pm
You rise, drifting to where the duffel bag from a few days before lies packed with nutrient cubes. All of them are still intact, wrapped in foil. By your count, there's thirty packages within the bag. You shrug it over your shoulder and head to the elevator. You pass by a number of lower levels, the lights dim in the night to aid with circadian rhythms. You stop into the algae tanks, finding a skeleton crew of those who prefer night shifts scrubbing the surface out and disinfecting it. There are not many workers, but the work strikes you as the sort of thing that apprentices are assigned to do when there's nothing else -- to keep them out of trouble and make sure they earn their rations. Seeing no other work available, you strip off your coat.

[3] Your assistance is unnecessary, and when they realize who you are, seems to hinder more than help. They start performing the work as precisely as possible, out of fear of reprimand, and after an hour or so of their mumbled apologies, you take your leave. There isn't much to -do-.

[5] The Crusaders are all resting, the ships loaded with the supplies they need for their extended operations. An officer makes a few last-minute checks on the various supplies and weapons -- but the soldiers are all sleeping. Dead to world. Nabbing a few hours of respite, sure they will have difficulty getting rest when they are operating.

With nothing better to do, you decide to check on Eric. Only to find that his medical bed is empty. An exhausted medic looks at you, then refers you to a recreational floor. Surprised, you head up, finding Eric is the only one awake. His chest is still covered in bloodied bandages, but he sits beneath a set of weights, exercising despite his unhealed wounds.

"Pheobe. Or do you want me to call you Pheonix?" He questions, with a rasp, exhaling a heavy, pained sigh through his gritted teeth as he completes another rep. "Or Alphira? Or Mother?"

[7] He's not pleased to see you, and for a moment, you consider leaving. Perhaps its the boredom, or guilt, but you stand there, facing his scorn.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 12:30:18 pm
"Honestly, Eric, whatever you prefer is fine, but when others are present I'd appreciate it if you called me Phoenix. How are you feeling? I'm glad to see that you're up and about."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 12:36:11 pm
[8] "That's a strange question to ask the man with holes in his chest." Eric retorts, lifting the bar with his prosthetic hand-- until to be wracked by a painful coughing fit that leaves him curled on the bench. He spits a wad of bloody phlegm, gasping for his breath. "I feel...like shit, Pheobe. But I can't keep sitting and doing nothing-- the Crusaders won't let me go back on active duty until the Medics approve m--"

You can see the realization in his eyes as he turns to face you, face pale.

"Hey. Pheobe. Can I ask a favor? Can you tell the Medics that I will be fine and get them to clear me for duty?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 12:39:59 pm
"Have you met the new Crusader General? She has requested your assistance in coordinating logistics. Would you be willing to start with that? If that goes well for a while, I would be fine with transferring you to a more active position."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 06, 2020, 12:41:04 pm
We can try healing him, we have Healing Factor
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 12:42:53 pm
We can try healing him, we have Healing Factor
-1. We've never successfully healed someone other than ourself, and one time when we tried to heal another we only made the injuries worse.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 12:57:23 pm
[2] Eric rises to his feet suddenly, lifting the barbell with a sudden display of strength and tossing it down hard enough to crack the floor. His willpower flares with anger, but doesn't reach far. He paces angrily as he rants, "I don't -want- to be in a logistics position, Pheobe. I want to -fight-. You're running an operation tomorrow, take me with you. You can I can fight. You know I'm strong enough!"

[19] With the weight turned to you, you take note of the mass he was lifting. [Five hundred pounds]. He turns his intact back to you as he paces, and a quotation unbidden comes to you, "Scars on the back are a swordsman's shame--" you pause, frowning, "Or maybe it should be a 'soldier's shame'."

[19] Eric lifts his brow, confused. Then his shoulders slump, "I always wanted to be better than you, you know that? I knew you snuck out in the mornings to train with Hop. I knew that you held back on your daily physical exercises. I wanted to beat you regardless -- but how could I beat God? How could I ever succeed against someone like you." With a grunt of exertion, he picks up the weight set, flesh blood darkening his bandages.

[13][16 vs 15] With another pained breath, he steps closer under the weight and tosses it to you-- you catch it easily. "The most I've ever lifted is [six hundred pounds], on a dare, when I was drunk. But I bet you can lift three times that much. How do I compete with that, Pheobe?"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 01:02:25 pm
"Eric... I'm not really human anymore. Among the other Crusaders, however, you're at peak performance, probably strong enough to rival or exceed the Great Crusaders of old. Speaking of which, is there a Great Crusader that you admire?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 06, 2020, 01:08:37 pm
I thought Isela wanted Eric as a bodyguard, not logistics, unless I missed something
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 01:20:14 pm
I interpreted her request to have him as her "muscle and face" to include dealing with the other officers and making sure that planning gets done.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 01:22:16 pm
[10] "Great Crusader Lahmere." Eric murmurs, after a beat, before he continues, "Were you ever human, Pheobe?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 01:26:11 pm
"I like to think so. I don't remember it, but my kind always start as humans. Eric, what if I told you that you could be the Thirteenth Crusader? I think you would make Lahmere proud."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 01:34:27 pm
"Get the medics to waiver my leave of health and put me on your operation tomorrow, and you can call me whatever you like."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 01:39:09 pm
"If you promise not to exert yourself unnecessarily, if you agree to be the Thirteenth Crusader, and if you promise to report to the Crusader General afterwards and do whatever she says, then... yes, you can join the operation tomorrow in a support role."

I think he needs this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 06, 2020, 01:43:50 pm
"If you promise not to exert yourself unnecessarily, if you agree to be the Thirteenth Crusader, and if you promise to report to the Crusader General afterwards and do whatever she says, then... yes, you can join the operation tomorrow in a support role."

I think he needs this.
yes
Get the medics to waiver Eric’s leave of health
If he can lift 500 to 600 pounds, he’s probably ready, not to mention he’s walking and moving now. He seems to be healing fast
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 02:01:06 pm
There was a Messiah of old Terra... a Nazarene. A Hebrew. He led a peaceful life, with some few disciples under his name... and it was said that miracles followed his every footstep. The Romans slew him, and it was said that he rose from his tomb-- that he rent the bonds of Hades, and brought about a new era for his people. His creed would endure for millennia. Half the world swore by his name.

His creed was this, Phoenix-of-Sol:
he was of two natures.
He was God and man.
He was human-- and he was divine.
A paradox. A triumph.
A savior.

ΙΗΣΟΥΣ - ΧΡΙΣΤΟΣ - ΝΙΚΑ

...

...such is the way of a Messiah.
Are you human, Phoenix-of-Sol?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 02:12:54 pm
I...I want to be. I want to be human. I used to be human. Maybe I can still be...I have concerns about Eric's health. He is no ascended, despite his willpower. He's still fragile, and weak. If you wish him to, I will let him come with us. May I make a recommendation? Have him run. One mile, full sprint. That's half of what a Crusader is required to do to not get kicked out...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 02:17:15 pm
"Do you think you can run a mile at a full sprint without stopping? If so, show me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 02:25:48 pm
[7-5] Eric stares at you in silence, then, taking to the track at the edge of the room, he begins to sprint at full speed-- he makes it roughly halfway before he collapses, coughing heavily as his lungs start to fail him. Every breath is a ragged gasp of pain, broken by wet, bloody coughs.

[15] He tries to drag himself forward with his hands instead -- and you send a radio message to a null to send a medic up as he eventually gives in to another violent coughing fit. Blood saturates his bandages, dripping to the ground below as his wounds are aggravated.

"I-I can do it. I can...I can do it." He murmurs through his gritted teeth, staring forward with manic intensity.

[11] "In your current state you're liable to get others killed when they try and save you, Eric." You pronounce, gently, breathing out a sigh as you watch him curl in on himself in pain and in shame.


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 02:29:51 pm
"I'm sorry, Eric. You're not there yet. Rest and recover, and when you're feeling better, report to the Crusader General. I believe in you. You can still become the Thirteenth Crusader in time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 03:04:11 pm
To your people, a god. To those who know you best, now and forever human.
Your cohesion improved just now. You're recovering. I am pleased.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 06, 2020, 03:35:46 pm
...I suppose...

You kneel down, hefting Eric up even as he grumbles and protests. A medic arrives, too late to assist, but she tries her best. After you deposit Eric into his bed to suffer their tender mercies, you wipe the blood from your coat, watching as they change his bandages. As an aside, you question one of them about how long it will take him to heal.

"A few months, at the least. I don't think he'll have to worry much about physical therapy, but its a concern, to be sure."

With a nod, you leave them to their work, stretching yourself out and returning to your quarters.

You have four hours before the beginning of your mission. How would you like to spend your time?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 03:38:44 pm
If possible at this hour and practical, send a message to Steelworks 9 requesting that they swear fealty to Phoenix-of-Sol and ask for information on their manufacturing capacity.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 06, 2020, 03:40:39 pm
Let’s train Inferno and Silicon Manipulation somewhere open so we don’t damage things
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Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 06, 2020, 04:14:32 pm
If possible at this hour and practical, send a message to Steelworks 9 requesting that they swear fealty to Phoenix-of-Sol and ask for information on their manufacturing capacity.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 05:05:22 pm
Let’s train Inferno and Silicon Manipulation somewhere open so we don’t damage things

It'd be useful to get a little silicon manipulation in, if we've nothing more pressing... I think we're alright for Inferno though. That's something best trained on the field.

If possible at this hour and practical, send a message to Steelworks 9 requesting that they swear fealty to Phoenix-of-Sol and ask for information on their manufacturing capacity.

Do we wish to make the name of our Line known to our people at this time? If we're ready for that, so be it-- but it's not a thing to simply drop in passing.
Other than that, +1

One last thing: we should try and check in with Emma at some point. We're leaving the fortress come morning-- she'll want a word in the matter.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 06, 2020, 05:11:14 pm
Alright, so Train silicon manipulation, ask Steelworks 9 for assistance in manufacturing, and tell Emma what we’re doing
Did I get this right?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 05:12:05 pm
Something like that, aye. Not necessarily in that order.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 05:16:17 pm
Would training use up the nanofeasts?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 06, 2020, 05:20:56 pm
Something like that, aye. Not necessarily in that order.
Which order do you suggest? I placed them in an order, here are the other orders we could do them in, SM=Silicon Manipulation, Emma=tell Emma what we’re doing, Steelworks 9=ask Steelworks 9 for manufacturing assistance
Train SM, Emma, Steelworks 9
Emma, Steelworks 9, Train SM
Emma, Train SM, Steelworks 9
Steelworks 9, Train SM, Emma
Steelworks 9, Emma, Train SM


Would training use up the nanofeasts?
nanofeasts?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 06, 2020, 05:21:31 pm
Would training use up the nanofeasts?

Hm, I suppose it would at that...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 06, 2020, 05:24:00 pm
It might be worth saving them for the operation, but I don't feel strongly about it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 06, 2020, 05:25:13 pm
It might be worth saving them for the operation, but I don't feel strongly about it.
let’s save nano feasts for the operation
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 06, 2020, 05:51:03 pm
Would the lyal faker whatever her name was again have more of these nanofeasts?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 06, 2020, 06:16:48 pm
Would the lyal faker whatever her name was again have more of these nanofeasts?

Cephie. She gave no information about her supply, but I'm guessing she wouldn't just bring two with her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 07, 2020, 01:16:12 am
Emma is nowhere to be found. You quirk your lips, and through the medium of Lucille, you get in touch with the nulls.

["Have you seen Emma Thornton?"] You question.

["William and her went to retrieve their people."] Comes the monotonous reply.

["Ah. Thank you. Could you give her a message when she returns? Just tell her where I went and what I'm doing there."]

["Affirmative."]

["Send a message to Nicole Gainer at Steelworks Number Nine, as well --"] You describe the contents of the message to her, how to send it, and so on, ["--make sure it's a full squad of Crusaders."]

["Affirmative, Pheonix."] And with that the conversation ends. You slump back into bed, frowning to yourself.

Efficient lot. Emma didn't say goodbye. Maybe I was sleeping when she did...



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 07, 2020, 01:29:04 am
Her people are at stake... she goes to their aid. She is not so different from you, in that regard.

You'd best check and see if she brought the Barker with her. We may have to take it along ourself, if not... t'would not do to leave Mitch unattended for however long we'll be away.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on May 07, 2020, 01:39:01 am
Unless it is an attack dog leave it behind.  We can afford no distractions in the field.  You will need to leave many things behind.  Is it easier if we make the choice instead of the choice being made for us?

I would recommend duplicating that fire hand claw.  Concentrating the full power of the inferno into a small area, gathering it for a piercing blast or close range hit.  With enough focus you might be able to split a demon in two from melee range with the true heat of a star.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 07, 2020, 02:07:10 am
I think Mitch should stay here for the moment. He isn't ready to fight yet.

[Lucille, how is the Empyreal Network broadcasted?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 07, 2020, 04:36:27 am
After a quick check of Mitch's room, you do indeed confirm that Emma took him with her.

[Through the Gate Relay systems. It reaches all Empyreal Transponders within the system.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 07, 2020, 09:30:53 am
[Have there been any communications on the Empyreal Network recently?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 07, 2020, 09:57:04 am
[This system lacks a Gate Relay System. Closest Gate Relay as of two thousand years ago was twenty light-years away.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on May 07, 2020, 11:37:38 am
Ha, our armor's information is almost as outdated as my own.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 07, 2020, 12:18:57 pm
Your's might be outdated by many millennium more, Ancestor. How long ago were the Wars of Reclamation, Lucille?

[The Last War of Reclamation ended roughly ten thousand years ago, and it was followed by the period known as 'Pax Emypreal' or 'The Unification of Time', which came to an end with the advent of the Galactic Plague, four thousand years ago.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 07, 2020, 01:14:36 pm
In truth, ours is an ancient Line... I wonder if my own world survived the millennia?
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 07, 2020, 01:25:11 pm
Hullo! I have left the pasts open for your own interpretation. You have the gist of what made your reign and world unique, of course, but what details you fill in are left up to you! If you have questions about the tech levels, or want me to create it for you, I can do that too! It will be vague -- there are 100 billion planets in a milky way, and if even a third of those were civilized...you can get the picture. Lots of variation. Lots of differing tech levels, cultures, peoples. Genetic variance. And there are ancient worlds as well, from before the Empyre, with even more weirdness. There are a few things as well, that are spoilery, but I will reveal if you feel they can enrich the story.

I honestly use a random world generator for most things, then fill in the world as you explore it. I usually try to be as realistic as possible, but rule of cool also wins out. <.<

The only hard and fast rule? No sentient aliens. Alien-like humans, based on principles of hard sci-fi or principles of genetic modification based on cultural norms over thousands of years are acceptable. All alien lifeforms that are not sentient are at the levels of plants, simplistic animals, and insects. No races of mysterious and powerful aliens.

Just humanity -- forever alone in the galaxy.

If you have questions, feel free to pm them! I will answer to the best of my ability.


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 07, 2020, 01:30:46 pm
Perfect, thank you-- seems I've some world-building to do.  :)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 07, 2020, 01:44:19 pm
Just send it to me first before posting, if possible.

<.<

There was this old game I used to read on these forums called YAK, and the first one had it that everyone made up a region and the gm included it in the game. I think that type of stuff was super cool. <.<


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 07, 2020, 01:49:50 pm
Understood!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 07, 2020, 02:00:01 pm
Cool, I'll give it a shot as well.

"[Zero, can you please ask the appropriate ministry to prepare a report on what conditions are required to issue coinage and reinstate an economy?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 07, 2020, 02:08:28 pm
Only other thing: SEEDships wwere the primary colonization vector of the galaxy, followed by roving spaceborne raiding groups. Sorry for the stipulations. Earth did not send out any colonies. <.<



["This is Five. Zero is currently in his rest cycle -- the Ministry of Trade and Finance will have such a report ready by the time the Ministries Convene by next week."] The dull, monotone voice recalls.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 07, 2020, 02:11:23 pm
So wait, hold up... Earth, then, was itself a colony? Am I understanding this aright?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 07, 2020, 02:27:48 pm
Apologies. All that was left of Earth and its Colonies, and, by extension, of humanity were the SEEDships or self-sufficient fleets that drifted from system to system.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 07, 2020, 02:30:41 pm
Eat until no longer peckish.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 07, 2020, 02:33:08 pm
Ahh, that makes more sense... thanks.

I was worried for a moment that I'd made Constantine the weirdly obsessive scholar of some random Rim world! That was gonna take some explaining. :-X
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 07, 2020, 02:42:39 pm
You've been feeling permanently peckish with the 'nanofeast'. Never fully satiated, but never truly hungry. With a shrug, you pull one of the ration cubes from the container and bite into it, chewing down the dusty material without much satisfaction. You drown it down with plenty of clean water from the bathroom tap, content for the moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 07, 2020, 03:22:59 pm
Is there something we can do? Can we fight abominations near the perimeter? How long until we go to the Steelworks? I want to do something other than wait
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 07, 2020, 04:11:37 pm
Squirrely, hm? Our kind is curious indeed: untold centuries are granted us, yet always we must be in motion.

We could exercise. We could practice with silicon awhile, or see about summoning that burning arm of ours. We could take the time to redesign our panoply, shift its colors to something more suited to our new individuality. There are many ways to be in motion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 07, 2020, 04:13:10 pm
Training our silicon manipulation sounds like the most useful thing right now
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on May 07, 2020, 08:29:48 pm
You could also reach inward and train combat senses; faster reflexes and stronger muscles.  Wouldn't match a true master but we could dance around and through the blade claws of the infected, you know with time and effort.

Maybe seek out that mad scientist we gave demonic nano technology to?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 07, 2020, 09:30:36 pm
Silas probably isn't here yet, as he is in the process of moving alongside the other Thorntons.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 07, 2020, 10:24:59 pm
(((Meta question: VoidSlayer, who are you? Are you an advisor like us with no previous knowledge of the game? Are you an associate of Egar, already familiar with the game? I ask because you have the same user name as, well, the Void Slayer.)))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 07, 2020, 11:03:08 pm
VoidSlayer's not the only one.

- ZBridges' guy "bridged" hostile factions.
- I ruled a world of hardy mining folk-- "dorfs" in all but name.
- King Zultan got a renegade god-king.
- Naturegirl got "the Woman of Nature".
- VoidSlayer got... the Void Slayer.

Seems Egar tried to fit us with personae to match our usernames (and in-game personalities), when possible. Fun little touch, no?  :D

On that note... I needed some pixel time.
Spoiler: ancestors, mk. ii (click to show/hide)
Spoiler: red star (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 07, 2020, 11:21:32 pm
Don't forget me. The unimportant branch person guy that fought the plague and then died and got my soul trapped in a jar.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 07, 2020, 11:28:39 pm
Getting there!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 08, 2020, 12:10:30 am
I would be fine with silicon manipulation training.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 08, 2020, 12:19:30 am
VoidSlayer's not the only one.

- ZBridges' guy "bridged" hostile factions.
- I ruled a world of hardy mining folk-- "dorfs" in all but name.
- King Zultan got a renegade god-king.
- Naturegirl got "the Woman of Nature".
- VoidSlayer got... the Void Slayer.

Seems Egar tried to fit us with personae to match our usernames (and in-game personalities), when possible. Fun little touch, no?  :D

On that note... I needed some pixel time.
Spoiler: ancestors, mk. ii (click to show/hide)
Spoiler: red star (click to show/hide)

Got it. I was aware of the backstory thing, I was just wondering what was up with VoidSlayer and the Void Slayer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 08, 2020, 01:06:28 am
Damn. That's some awesome art right there.  :o



You take the lift down to the lowest level, stretching as you wait patiently for the elevator to come to a stop. You step out into the empty room, switching on the lights as you survey the dull brown and gray interior.

[3][13][1][18] You lift your hand, focusing on the pockets of silica twisted into the floor. It takes you a few minutes of concentration to find the right reference points, to concentrate on it. You draw it out of the ground, forming it into dust, which spews from the floor. You cannot control it, and the flow slowly comes to a stop. Too many little things to focus on...

You condense it into a ball, watching the silvery metal coagulate into a sphere. Picking up the heavy mass and wiping away at your bloody nose, you concentrate.

[20] An idea strikes you.

[13][15] You twist your willpower around your empty shoulder. The mass of silicon follows-- flowing into the crude shape of an arm. You trap hydrogen molecules where muscle would be, I'm the joints and in the long, inhuman fingers.

[14] It takes concentration of your will, but you flex the brittle metal. The crafted joints creak-- on a whim, you twist it into a fist, smashing it into the wall. Your new fist shatters, breaking apart.

[18] You sigh, letting the silicon fall away to the concrete below.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 08, 2020, 09:57:25 am
Sound like we need to try to make the silicon of our hand denser and maybe it won't break.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 08, 2020, 12:08:03 pm
:o
:))


Hoo, clever! Very clever... a pneumatic arm, just like that.
The thing was easier with just the hydrogen, no? We could make an arm not so different from the original, that way-- a burning facsimile. T'would be a useful trick for our speeches!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 08, 2020, 12:13:28 pm
That it would. I think we should try figuring out if we can make different things. We could try fitting lots of silicon into a small area and seeing if we can throw it to cause small shards to impale targets, this will need to be done somewhere where we don’t risk hurting anyone or damaging structures. Just thoughts on potential weapons. I can come up with more ideas later.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 08, 2020, 12:15:30 pm
I'm not too concerned on that front. We are, after all, possessed of a star's clean fire.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 08, 2020, 12:18:47 pm
True, it is also good to have variety in attacks.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 08, 2020, 01:05:00 pm
Rest until it's time to leave.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 08, 2020, 01:14:31 pm
...I suppose we had best save ourself for the battlefield.

Rest until it's time to leave.

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 08, 2020, 02:13:34 pm
...I suppose we had best save ourself for the battlefield.

Rest until it's time to leave.

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 08, 2020, 07:00:17 pm
It needs to be better, but I cannot think of any way to make it so. .

Putting aside the idea for future deliberation, you return to your room, entering into the hastily-repaired section where Cephelia made an attempt on your life not long ago. The wall has been patched and cleaned, but the window could not be so easily replaced. Instead, the great armored shutter keeps out the cold of the windy mountain early morning. You open it with a press of the button, resting upon the remaining bench.

Cold air bites at you, but your body regulates it quickly, leaving you comfortable as snow trickles in through the opening. You watch the sunrise, watch as it paints the dark sky with vivid reds and gold. The indigo of morning fading into the blue of day as the sun scorches the crater plains below with hues of gold and white. You rise from your meditations, drifting away from the idle thought processes that consume you. The fears, the stresses -- you let them fade away like the cold mountain morning beneath the burning resolution of the rising sun.

You shut the shutter on your way out. You don your underlay, then your panoply, leaving the spare gauntlet and upper arm guard on a table nearby. And you find a package, from Emma. You open it to find a heavy capelet for your lack of an arm. The cloth is fire-resistant on the inside and heavy, water-resistant kevlar on the other. Etched in red is your new sigil, ['SOL'] printed down in it in the old scripts of the Families.

[19][Good morning Pheobe.] Lucille chimes pleasantly as you awaken her, feeling the familiar sting of the needles give way to her omnipresent comfort.

With a check of your equipment, you head down to the pads, the docks, shrugging on your duffle bag as you go

The Crusaders you meet are wearing strange robes, with heavy, entire leg covering boots and thick, rubberized gloves that swaddle their arms. Their gasmasks hiss of their own volition, supplying filtered, pure air. They identify themselves politely as the platoon in charge of scouting with you. Fifty brave men and women. The rest will remain in the Hovercrafts, and limit their exposure to a minimum of an hour.

Lieutenant Peter Byrd introduces himself to you -- a thin man, once he peels away the protective clothing. The two of you board one of the vessels, and it lifts off. He explains the plan. You will lead the scouting Platoon through the Hydrogen Plant. If all goes well, everything will be intact and relatively free of radiation. You will light flares and the other platoons will extract the parts. After that is finished, all materials will be scrubbed in a mountain stream far away from civilization, to remove any radioactive dust that may be present. You dip a nod at the polite, calm explanation, and settle in for the ride.

[19] "We're at safe levels to operate without protective equipment."

"We will do so anyway." Lieutenant Byrd states, bluntly. "Same precautions."

Dust and ash drift down with snow upon the ruined remains of the city. Buildings are collapsed into piles of broken rubble upon the streets, or reduced to cold cinders. Half burned corpses lay in the streets and buried beneath the concrete. The factory is close by -- its a sturdy building of pre-fabricated make, still intact after the ground rending earthquake and blazing firestorms. You slowly make your approach with the Crusaders at your back, hesitant.

[1] You enter first, breaking away from your assigned platoon, feeling claustrophobic in their presence. They do not protest, beginning to divide into squads to search through the building. You stumble through, not really paying much attention to the machinery that surrounds you, content with letting the Crusaders handle it for the time being -- that is, until something approaches. The darkness disorientates you, for once, and you lose your direction.

Abominations, ten of them, with twisting shifting forms that writhe towards you with the smell of fresh human. Their las-guns angle toward you and you dodge out of the way without thinking. Lucille is chiming an alarm, but you cannot hear it -- your adrenaline pounds in your ears as your bloodlust rises in your veins. Black ichor drips wetly from the ceiling, and the smell of cordite fills your nose.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 08, 2020, 07:07:48 pm
It seems like they were waiting for us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 08, 2020, 07:19:50 pm
Cordite. What is cordite?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 08, 2020, 07:21:02 pm
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cordite . Specifically the last bit on that page, about it being overused by writers about gun battles. JOKES ON YOU WIKIPEDIA. CORDITE IS STILL USED ON THIS WORLD!


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 08, 2020, 07:28:01 pm
Ah. Explosive.
This place... has quite possibly been rigged to detonate.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 08, 2020, 07:49:22 pm
Then I will kill them and get my men out of here, right?! Right?! Panic and fear is twisting your insides, combining with the inherent bloodlust that you feel before battle.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 08, 2020, 07:58:43 pm
Relax.  "Explosives.  Evacuate the building."  Help everyone get out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 08, 2020, 08:02:24 pm
Fly upwards as fast as (super-)humanly possible to escape the abominations and rigged explosives. Observe what's happening with the rest of the team. Warn everyone.

If they aren't being attacked I don't know if we should go to preemptively defend them, thus possibly leading abominations in their direction, or try to lead the abominations away from them and take them on alone.

Relax.  "Explosives.  Evacuate the building."  Help everyone get out.
We are detached from the main group, aren't we?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 08, 2020, 08:08:13 pm
Peace. Courage.

Do we have cover? If we're about to be fired upon on open ground, we'll have to strike down these ten first-- precisely, with tight lashes of fire. If we've something solid between us and las-fire, we can afford evacuation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 08, 2020, 08:10:52 pm
You are currently in cover, but one of the abominations is approaching, inching closer, gurgling as if trying to speak.

[Pheob--]

[SILENCE.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 08, 2020, 08:16:31 pm
You listen to the youngest, letting your wings flare forth, ripping through the cheap thin of the building. Ichor rains down from the twisted clouds overhead. The Leviathan, it hovers nearby, whole and perfect. Its cannons twist toward you. Burnt cordite and gunpowder fills the air, as the ground squirms below. Fire twists forth from your hand--

[Adminstering sedative: reason: possible blue on blue.]

The anti-psychotics break through just as the sedatives take hold -- you have a chance to look down at the Crusader below, who stares up through the hole in the roof at you, expressionless beneath the heavy equipment. Your vision swims, your wings faltering, and you tumble to the roof of the building. You drift in the haze, looking up at the sky as the ichor is replaced by ash.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 08, 2020, 08:19:43 pm
Oh Phoebe... what are we going to do about you?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 08, 2020, 08:23:53 pm
Wait, uh, is this saying these abominations are Crusaders distorted by some psychotic episode?

What is blue on blue?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 08, 2020, 08:28:13 pm
It's all just a hallucination.  Psychosis.  Blue on blue means friendly fire.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 08, 2020, 08:34:08 pm
[6] Blue on blue. Friendly fire! You giggle, letting the blue, barely visible flame dance in your hand as you curl up against the heavy comfort that the capelet provides you. It still smells of Emma's perfume -- warm and sweet. Your giggles turn to wretched sobs as you contemplate what you might have done if you had chosen fight instead of flight. The Crusaders below call your name, but you do not respond.

[1] Black ichor starts to drip from the sky again as your skin twists and itches. You shut your eyes tight against the tentacled horrors that claw their way up from the ground below.

[Shall I administer more sedatives, Ancestors?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 08, 2020, 08:39:59 pm
Not yet.

Phoebe, take a deep breath, keep your eyes closed, and count to ten.  Everything is fine here.  There are no enemies.  Relax and let yourself become still.  Stay here for a bit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 08, 2020, 08:52:53 pm
Kings and soldiers-- warriors and gods. What good are we now?

[She's falling apart... help her. Please.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 08, 2020, 08:58:05 pm
If we just knock her out, she won't be able to respond to actual threats.  We should just try to talk her down right now.  Also, for the record, don't fire lasers next to explosives.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 08, 2020, 09:08:36 pm
[8][18] you take deep ragged gasps of breath. The feeling of wriggling moisture on your skin slowly fades. You don't dare to open your eyes -- but something heavy covers you against the ash and snow. A las-gun is nearby, you note -- and when the adrenaline slowly fades, you can hear someone breathing through their mask.

[15] "Focus on the here and now, Mother Pheonix. You're safe. You're sane. S- Pheonix protects--" Someone nudges you with a booted foot, and for a second you almost want to break the offending leg-- instead, you comply. "You're safe. You're sane. The Pheonix will protect. The Crusaders will protect. Warm tents. Fresh food. Bravery, strength, sacrifice."

You start at a low whisper, focusing on the words as you lie beneath the padded, very heavy robe. You open your eyes slowly, fearfully, and the sky has returned to the gray overcast.

"It hit you hard -- I didn't know...well...angels suffered from it the same, Mother Pheonix..." Its a young man on the other side of the mask, youthful masculinity hiding fear. Hiding concern.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 08, 2020, 09:23:18 pm
The patient appears to be stable... for now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 08, 2020, 09:28:32 pm
Do we say anything? If so, what? Apologize for our lack of orecautions?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 08, 2020, 09:50:32 pm
"The plague touches everything... but together we can overcome it.  Thank you for your comfort.  Let's get back to work."

Maybe this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 08, 2020, 10:06:15 pm
Stable. Safe. Φοίβη. Our Φοίβη. Bright moonlight. Φοῖνιξ now. Blood red.
I worry so. What can a dust elder do, but worry?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on May 08, 2020, 10:58:11 pm
We should not imply we are infected.  They likely don't understand physical immunity, make sure they understand it is mental.

I should note there are many effective therapies for these kind of things and have seen them used.  This should be a priority, as you are in NO shape to be fighting at this point.  And without you, there is no hope.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 08, 2020, 11:12:22 pm
...well my advice was useful. That.... that was close.

My youth suggests I leave plans of action to the more experienced advisors... but though action is fitting to the Line, it seems quieter plans have their place as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 12:26:19 am
You kept us from-- from a terrible deed. Thank you.

...

I've little stomach for them at the moment... but in truth, we have need of words. The Crusader is concerned.

"Not quite the same... but I pay my price." Sit up, if we can. "I sacrificed more than an arm, against the Leviathan. Its memory is a wound on my mind."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 09, 2020, 08:37:54 am
Well that could have gone really poorly, good thing we've got some quick thinkers on our side.

"Not quite the same... but I pay my price." Sit up, if we can. "I sacrificed more than an arm, against the Leviathan. Its memory is a wound on my mind."
+1 This sounds like the thing to say.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 09, 2020, 09:41:15 am
Well that could have gone really poorly, good thing we've got some quick thinkers on our side.

"Not quite the same... but I pay my price." Sit up, if we can. "I sacrificed more than an arm, against the Leviathan. Its memory is a wound on my mind."
+1 This sounds like the thing to say.
+1 “I should wear a gas mask too, next time. For now, I think I need to rest”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 12:23:22 pm
The Crusader nods, ripping open a nutrient bar package, chewing the chalky, fatty meal with intermittent swigs of his canteen.

"Corporal MacSanders! Is Mother Pheonix alright?"

"Yeah. She's got the Nightmare. She's stable." There's a pause from the Officer below.

"Get your ass back down here and stop sucking up, Child!"

"Yes, Father!" MacSanders gives you a bow of his head, lifting himself up and dropping back down the hole in a scrabble of limbs. You're left alone, and sit beneath the heavy leaded robe.

You rise after a while, dropping back down. The Crusaders are dissembling one of the Refinery's many machines.  You pass the dusty robe back to the corporal. Afterwards you content yourself with providing overwatch for the squads from the roof of the buildings. The hovercraft rises from the center of town as Crusaders begin to load the machinery.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 09, 2020, 12:26:42 pm
I’m guessing we should wait here, I’m worried if we go down to help them load, we could start hallucinating again
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 12:40:22 pm
Here is fine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 01:06:58 pm
Stay here, but watch carefully. Scan the horizon for threats.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 09, 2020, 01:08:49 pm
Stay here, but watch carefully. Scan the horizon for threats.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 03:37:39 pm
Stay here, but watch carefully. Scan the horizon for threats.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 04:11:43 pm
It looks like one way we can identify psychotic episodes is through a sudden loss of cohesion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 04:30:00 pm
More reliably... our armor knew what was happening. It was trying to alert us-- it can do so again, if need be. We just need to listen.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 04:31:07 pm
[15][17] The fronts are still, as are the ones at the next refinery. The Crusaders are efficient, taking turns being in the slight radiation that permeates the area. You stand ready, however, on the defense for an attack that never comes. You try not to focus on the corpses that litter the streets of the two towns you visit. It gets easier.

[5] The next scavenge site is less peaceful. Las fire bumps against the craft as you approach, and the LT waves off the group. The hovercrafts come to a holding pattern out of the range of fire. His lips quirk as he looks over to you. "I'm going to order us to wave off and find another location if that's alright with you, Mother. Site is more radioactive than the others, anyway. It's your order."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 04:46:42 pm
Sure, but if Phoebe is in a panic again, or if we don't have our armor, she may not listen to Lucille. We have to be wary. I'm not sure why you would consider the option that failed to be more reliable than the option that worked.

"Negative, I will clear the area.  Remain in a holding pattern."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 04:56:57 pm
Hm. It would be useful, to purge this place; to keep its structures from the [plague]'s grasp. Still...

...it's your war, godling, and you that suffers for it. Do we fight here, or return in force another day?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 05:18:36 pm
"Negative, I will clear the area.  Remain in a holding pattern."

The LT dips a nod as you take off the capelet gently, setting it aside as you move to one of the landing zones within the craft. Your wings extend freely as the platform begins to lower. A rictus smile twitches on your face as you condense your willpower into a clawed hand. The room heats up, and the Crusaders watch from above.

You do a quick flyover, too high for the las-fire to hit. One old Colossus and many abominations take shelter within the rubble. Even from how high up you are you can see old blood splattering the charred stones as they help themselves to the leftovers of SEED's explosion. The Colossus is in the center of the 'town', and the abominations are scattered about.

[11 vs 10][13]Shots ring up towards you, and the Colossus coils in on itself, its 'face's tentacles facing you. A shot of red lightning arcs out into the sky, but misses you by a mile. Taking the Void Slayer's suggestion, you lift your 'claw', aiming down it as you condense the more and more hydrogen into it. As it begins to test the strength of your willpower, you funnel it out through a field of energy. It scatters out as soon as it leaves your field of will.

The fireworks are pretty, though. Maybe something to contain it would assist in delivering the payload.

I've got some issues I need to work out. What's the strategy?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 05:27:47 pm
You should consult with your doctor, Silas, but I would recommend regular daily doses of antipsychotics combined with cognitive behavioral therapy.  Let's see if you make progress with those.  Also, requistion a leaded blanket, as that appears to have been soothing for you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 05:32:22 pm
I...I meant right -now-. The fight.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 05:35:14 pm
Oh... sorry about that.

Try earth manipulation spikes against the colossus, targeting the torso area.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 05:37:28 pm
I'm out of range. I'll have to get closer...It's armored, like the last one was, as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 05:37:38 pm
(((...who is Silas? Isn't the godling Phoenix of Sol? I'd think Silas was an advisor but for the fact that Phoenix/What replied just now.)))

I think we should use Silicon Manipulation to create a ravine under the Colossus. Unless range will be a problem.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 05:38:53 pm
Silas is a doctor that worked with us in the past, and Phoebe Gainer considers him to be her personal physician.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 05:41:46 pm
(((Oh - "your doctor, Silas" was a reference and was not addressing Silas.)))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 05:46:00 pm
Yeah.  No las-guns means no overloads...

Get into range and try to cook the colossus alive with Inferno while dodging its tentacles.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 09, 2020, 05:56:23 pm
Oh... sorry about that.

Try earth manipulation spikes against the colossus, targeting the torso area.
+1. Let’s get into range for this
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 07:09:34 pm
"Silas". A contraction. Latin: "Silvanus". A wood-god of the Romans.
We shall have to find you a better name than that, "Good Doctor"! You never struck me as the foresting type.


Now. Silicon is unnatural to us... we were nigh slain the last time we wielded it, and we've only grown less comfortable with its use since that day. We saw far more success in our battle on the front, cleaving with fire as we flew.

Descend with all speed, godling-- lash out, and rise again. Be always in motion. Always burning. Leave your enemy no time to scream. Blast the tentacles from this worm's tainted flesh.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 09, 2020, 07:35:46 pm
"Silas". A contraction. Latin: "Silvanus". A wood-god of the Romans.
We shall have to find you a better name than that, "Good Doctor"! You never struck me as the foresting type.


Now. Silicon is unnatural to us... we were nigh slain the last time we wielded it, and we've only grown less comfortable with its use since that day. We saw far more success in our battle on the front, cleaving with fire as we flew.

Descend with all speed, godling-- lash out, and rise again. Be always in motion. Always burning. Leave your enemy no time to scream. Blast the tentacles from this worm's tainted flesh.
you’re right, burn them with fire, targeting the Collosus
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 09, 2020, 09:27:30 pm
"Silas". A contraction. Latin: "Silvanus". A wood-god of the Romans.
We shall have to find you a better name than that, "Good Doctor"! You never struck me as the foresting type.


Now. Silicon is unnatural to us... we were nigh slain the last time we wielded it, and we've only grown less comfortable with its use since that day. We saw far more success in our battle on the front, cleaving with fire as we flew.

Descend with all speed, godling-- lash out, and rise again. Be always in motion. Always burning. Leave your enemy no time to scream. Blast the tentacles from this worm's tainted flesh.
you’re right, burn them with fire, targeting the Collosus
+1 BUUUUUUURRRRRRNNNN
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 09:35:22 pm
[|||||||]

[3 vs. 18][8] You twist in the air, then swoop down like the bird of prey you are,  fire curling in your hand. The Colossus twists, watching you. At the last second, it shifts, bringing up a tentacle that hits you like a steel beam, its muscled tentacles crushing into your pelvis. The ricochet sends you hurtling into one of the buildings, breaking through a wall.

[6][12] You panic, unable to feel your legs -- the armor there is cracked, shards hanging together by thin tendrils. In less than heartbeat, Lucille activates your healing factor-- bones knit themselves together, and the armor mends at the same time. Words cannot describe the pain of hundreds of shattered bone shards being forced back into place and melded back together. You growl, dragging yourself to your feet with the brickwork you smashed into.

[20][13 vs. 9] A tentacle rips apart the facade of the building. The Colossus stands face to face with you, its multitudes of mouths opening to begin its horrifying scream of disrupting static. You give it no chance --  you reach your willpower into the ground below. With arithmetic that strains your mind, you rip the earth asunder, devouring half the city and the Colossus with the chasm.

[19][17 vs. 2] You slam the chasm shut with the same force of will you used to sunder it. The creature screams as it's trapped beneath dirt and the hardened silicon of the walls. Its lower body is crushed to a pulp.

[||||...]

[19][16 vs. 13] Its tentacles continue to lash at the building, breaking it apart brick by brick, chunk by chunk. You breath out, focusing your willpower. It starts with a small blue flicker swirling around you, a [ten meter] radius of pale, faint heat. You condense it with your fear, with your rage, with your anger. The firestorm grows, and with a flick of your finger, you wreathe the plasma around the Collusus. Dark grey flesh blackens -- its armor begins to melt.

[|||....]

[15 vs. 16][9] So focused on burning the beast -- you don't notice the tentacle that lashes through the air-- you flinch away, expecting to be struck, but the blades pass right through your flaming arm, doing no damage.

[14 vs 4] You dodge once more, rising up into the air with your wings while burning the creature alive, gathering more and more hydrogen to the great flame that rises in the center of the square. Infected flesh sloughs off in the flame, sizzling and smoke with blueish-green smoke.

[||.....]

[15 vs 20] Shots rip through the air on your location-- they whistle harmlessly over your shoulder, near your helmeted head-- you crack your wrist guard when you lift an arm to shield yourself-- and the flesh ruptures there in flashing steam of red blood.

Lets try this again!

[20][14][20 vs 1] You draw hydrogen into your claw as you dodge and dip pass flailing tentacles, you push yourself until blood begins to drip from your eyes, your ears, your nose, until your helmet's inner display is splattered in it. You fill it with your anger, your humiliation, your fear -- the fear of losing your own personal war with the Infection within -- you let it fill your claw. The hydrogen bubbles its casing of willpower, straining against your energy manipulation. For a second, you fear you cannot contain it.

But you do. You fly up close, pass the writhing tentacles and slam your claw of fire directly into the beast's remaining torso -- tentacles move to intercept you, but a moment too late. The beam turns the bricks to glass, controlled by your willpower, and with a wrench of your will, you bisect the Colossus.

It goes very still, peeling to either side of your claw, its two sides neatly cauterized by the blow.

The Infected lose their cohesion with the death of the Colossus -- las-gun fire would have torn you apart by now. Instead, you note, the remaining plague beasts seek out the nearby corpses of the city's previous inhabitants. Like feral animals, concerned only with feeding -- and nesting. You watch as groups of them begin to huddle together, tentacles twisting into one another until you can no longer tell a difference.

[15 vs 2-5] One approaches -- grabbing at you with a fleshy appendage from its torso -- you take hold of it easily within your gauntleted hand, ripping it off while impaling the abomination through what remains of its face with your own claw.

You examine your shattered wrist. A neat hole penetrates all the way through, your shattered black bone visible. The flow of blood has stopped. You flex your fingers, watching the second delay as the nerves that are still intact are tugged by thin black muscles that flow from your marrow. There's a connection between the fragments of bone and nerves, thin as spider silk. It evaporates into the air.

[11] You activate your healing surge, clenching your teeth in pain -- but you watch as fragments are pulled back together, as the black of your essence turns to the white of bone. Muscle seals over it, then veins, capillaries, skin. Finally, your armor knits itself back together.

I have a town full of feral test subjects. How should your descendent play with them, old ones?

[18] -- another of the abominations approach. With the knowledge you've gleaned from the battle, you give a stylish pose for the benefit of your ancestors sundering open the earth below. Then, you give a snap of your fingers. The sound of crushing bone and flesh fills the air, and a spray of ichor splatters over your boots.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 09:52:07 pm
As you ponder, idly, something shifts through the feral plague beasts. A group of them begin to stand in neat lines, facing each other, las-guns twisting into the air.

You twitch into a fighting position, hydrogen fire flaring from your fingertips.

They make no moves towards you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 09:54:38 pm
Interesting... I suppose we should take them out before another colossus arrives?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 09:58:08 pm
Before we begin planning I would just like to say HOLY SHIT.

That is all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 09:59:03 pm
Ho! Well done, daughter of Sol-- never did we "old ones" fight like that! That was a McCreary trick.
I distrust the posings of these creatures. Slay them swift-- with respect. Do not forget that they once were human.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 10:07:29 pm
So, fun fact, I've been listening to this band called Mechina.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58s3pnwhHik

The weirdest thing -- they fit the setting so well. It's so freaking weird.



They provide no struggle, no fight, as you slay them one by one with careful places of claw strike. You...lose steam after the tenth. More approach to stand in lines -- and they give no resistance as you slay them. You pause your fighting, instead poking one directly in the chest with a normal finger.

It does nothing.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 10:12:20 pm
I have been waiting for the perfect moment to note this album I think fits this setting as well. Or maybe just fits Phoenix.

FIXMBR (https://masterbootrecord.bandcamp.com/album/c-fixmbr), by MBR.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 09, 2020, 10:18:06 pm
Do you guys/voices in the head think that these plague beings recognize us as a colosuss or whatever?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 10:25:30 pm
I have been waiting for the perfect moment to note this album I think fits this setting as well. Or maybe just fits Phoenix.

FIXMBR (https://masterbootrecord.bandcamp.com/album/c-fixmbr), by MBR.

Ooh. I like this.



Something approaches from the distance, vaguely mand shaped, were man sculpted from chrome with a rictus mask of a human's face impossibly stretched over its features. It lifts its hands towards you -- the universal sign of someone unarmed. Its movements are odd. Sometimes it seems to trip over itself. Other times it forgets to lift one of its feet. It acts like a puppet with cut strings.

[I̸s̷ ̸i̷t̷ ̴n̴o̵t̷ ̶c̸o̵n̵s̵i̷d̴e̵r̷e̸d̷ ̵r̷u̵d̶e̵ ̶t̷o̷ ̶k̶i̷l̷l̸ ̴a̷n̷ ̷'̵h̶o̶n̴o̸r̵'̵ ̶g̵u̷a̵r̸d̶?̸] It doesn't speak, not really. Instead, its voice echoes through your head with constrained emptiness. The language is one you recognize -- High Empyrean touched with the archaic.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 10:30:52 pm
[I apologize, as I was not aware that they were waiting for you. To whom am I speaking? I am Phoenix.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 10:41:36 pm
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 09, 2020, 10:43:53 pm
Wait, so the plague is so intelligent that they manage to make a diplomat and are now calling for a ceasefire?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 10:45:28 pm
Strain 112.

"[You've never given quarter before. Why should we offer you the same?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 10:49:09 pm
What is Strain 112? An altered form of the Plague?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 10:50:32 pm
[By my extrapolations, it is I/we/it/they that are giving 'quarter'. Surely you need time to rebuild your strength?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 10:54:29 pm
[Doesn't the fact that you are asking for peace betray a weakness on your part?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 10:55:38 pm
[O̶n̶l̶y̴ ̸t̵h̶e̶ ̴s̶t̸r̶o̷n̶g̶ ̸c̷a̵n̴ ̵b̴e̸ ̶m̶e̷r̶c̴i̸f̸u̶l̶.̸]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 10:57:00 pm
[Why do you want a ceasefire?]

Maybe that's how the different plagues differentiate themselves?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 10:58:49 pm
[T̴h̷e̴ ̵l̶e̷v̴e̵l̸s̴ ̵o̸f̸ ̸I̸n̵f̶e̷c̸t̸i̷o̵n̸ ̴h̷a̸v̸e̵ ̸r̶e̶a̵c̶h̴e̸d̴ ̶a̶ ̴l̶o̴w̴ ̷e̵n̶o̴u̴g̵h̵ ̶l̸e̵v̷e̷l̷ ̶t̷h̴a̸t̴ ̴y̶o̴u̸ ̶a̵r̶e̷ ̵o̶f̶ ̵n̷o̵ ̵t̸h̸r̶e̶a̸t̴.̶]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 11:00:00 pm
Odd... Infection shouldn't be a threat to the Plague, right? Unless Strain 112 is something else?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 11:01:07 pm
[Explain.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 11:02:20 pm
Beats me.

[I'm sorry, I'm having a difficult time understanding you.  If levels of infection are low, doesn't that mean that you are in trouble?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 11:03:44 pm
[W̷i̵t̷h̷ ̴y̷o̶u̶r̵ ̸h̸i̸v̴e̴ c̵̛̭̾͑́͗̉̔͐͋͑̅̋̄͗̏i̴̟̭̳̖̋̇t̵̨͙̩̣̪͖̠̬̬͌͒̂̉̀̂̏̂ͅÿ̴̨̧̰̯̙̲̱̟͓̤͖̱͕̠̪́ ̵d̷e̸s̴t̶r̷o̸y̴e̶d̸,̸ ̸y̸o̴u̷r̷ ̶i̷n̶f̴e̵c̴t̸i̴o̶n̵ ̶h̶a̵s̸ ̵c̷e̴a̷s̸e̵d̸ ̵t̷o̶ ̸b̸e̴ ̸a̶ ̴t̴h̴r̶e̷a̸t̵.̶]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 11:04:35 pm
[I see. What would the terms be of this ceasefire?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 11:07:45 pm
When the Plague rose... always, always, it struck at the Holy City.

Is there something we're missing here?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 11:08:37 pm
[V̷i̸r̶u̷s̷e̴s̵ ̶w̴i̷l̸l̷ ̴n̶o̵t̶ ̵c̶r̴o̵s̷s̷ ̷t̸h̴e̵ ̷w̵e̶s̸t̵e̴r̸n̶ ̶r̵i̴v̶e̵r̶,̷ ̸b̵e̵f̵o̸r̷e̴ ̴t̴h̶e̶ ̵s̵e̶a̸.̴ ̵A̵t̵ ̶s̴o̵m̴e̸ ̴t̷i̶m̴e̸ ̸I̵ ̸w̵i̷l̵l̸ ̷d̶e̴s̸t̶r̴o̵y̴ ̴t̷h̷e̶ ̵r̴e̴s̸t̷ ̴o̵f̴ ̵y̴o̴u̸r̶ ̴v̵i̵r̵u̶s̴ ̷a̷n̷d̶ ̵p̵u̸r̴g̷e̷ ̷t̷h̶i̷s̶ ̷p̷l̷a̷n̴e̶t̵ ̸o̷f̷ ̶i̵t̸.̵]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 11:11:08 pm
When the Plague rose... always, always, it struck at the Holy City.

Is there something we're missing here?

"Hive mind"..."Infection"... It's not talking about Plague infection! It sees us as an infection, with the City as its core! A growth from a seed - or a SEED! The SEEDships did seem to spread and act semi-autonomously... like an epidemic spreading.

We tried to purge the Plague, viewing it as an abominable ever-spreading infection. It seems the sentiment is mutual.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 11:15:29 pm
((and the awful truth is revealed: we are corona.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 11:19:38 pm
[That's not a very good deal. I would be willing to consider something that would ensure the survival of my people.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 11:22:03 pm
Would corona exist without humans?



[Y̷o̵u̶ ̶c̷a̸n̶n̶o̶t̸ ̵s̵u̷r̷v̸i̵v̶e̶,̷ ̴b̷e̴c̷a̵u̴s̵e̴ ̸I̴ ̴m̷u̵s̸t̶ ̴s̴u̵r̸v̷i̶v̴e̵.̶]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 11:23:33 pm
[What if we both survived, apart from one another? My people will leave here in 12 years, and you could have the planet then, perhaps?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 11:26:31 pm
Ah-hm. Buying time for the Empyre to win our war for us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 11:27:17 pm
Yeah, pretty much.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 11:27:43 pm
[We plan to leave this planet peacefully in the future. An enemy from outside has raised forces against us and will try preventing that... and I don't imagine they'll be too pleasant to you either. You could refrain from killing us long enough to help us escape this place. The planet is large, is it not? There may be resources for the both of us until we leave; not to mention our efforts won't be focused on spreading. Ceasefire until we leave and it's moot, and aid against our common enemy from the stars until then? The City and the SEED that sought endless growth are gone. You and my people may be able to live in peace yet.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2020, 11:34:37 pm
[T̷h̷a̷n̸k̴ ̷y̴o̷u̶ f̷o̵r̸ ̵t̷h̸e̶ ̸d̷a̵t̵a̸.̵.̵]

[20 vs. 20d20 [...20...20...]] You move before it finishes speaking. Many of the abominations las-shots go wide-- but one rips into your chest. Followed by another -- your breath catches as you try to dodge out of the way of the sudden flurry of fire. You manage to escape the shots by pure luck alone, data coming together to form an instant of insight as soon as the words 'twelve years' leaves your mouth.

[17 vs 20d20 [...19...]] A shot cracks your backplate as you flee into the sky, until the las-fire loses the power to harm, dissipating into the sky beneath you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 11:35:50 pm
Well, shit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 11:38:27 pm
In the wise and ancient words of the ascended Empyreals: shit.

Warn everyone and Absolutely [Christing] Scram.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2020, 11:41:29 pm
Peace-- true peace-- with the beast that slaughtered countless myriads of our own? I'd have spoken against if I could only have found the words.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 09, 2020, 11:45:01 pm
Well, it looks like our infectious mutual friend found something a lot more forceful than words. We - and our team - need to get out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 09, 2020, 11:53:39 pm
Should we go down there and see what the situation is?  I don't have a good feeling about their health...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 10, 2020, 12:01:11 am
[I̵ ̸a̴m̸ ̶h̷e̶r̷e̸ ̶P̵h̷e̵o̸b̵e̸ ̷G̶a̴i̵n̴e̷r̶.̷ ̵I̵ ̷a̷m̵ ̷h̴e̶r̸e̶ ̷P̵h̸e̷o̵n̶i̶x̸.̸ ̸Y̷o̶u̷ ̴a̴r̵e̷ ̵s̷u̸b̴l̸i̶m̸e̴.̶ ̵I̷ ̷a̷m̵ ̷g̸o̴i̶n̸g̶ ̵t̴o̶ ̴e̵m̶p̶t̶y̷ ̵y̷o̵u̵ ̷a̶n̶d̸ ̵f̶i̴l̴l̸ ̶y̵o̸u̴ ̸w̴i̴t̴h̷ ̷m̷e̸ ̵-̵-̸ ̶I̸ ̴a̵m̷ ̸a̴l̴r̷e̷a̸d̶y̸ ̶h̵e̴r̸e̶.̴]

[14 vs 7+5] Lucille doesn't say a word -- she doesn't have to. The world blurs, twisting and shifting. Your vision darkens and it takes all your willpower to stop from ruining the arithmatic that keeps you from plummeting to your death below. Ichor drips from the skies, and you shut your eyes tight.

Stable. Safe. Φοίβη. Our Φοίβη. Bright moonlight. Φοῖνιξ now. Blood red. Emma. Freedom. Peace. The mountains. Pheonix. Pheonix--

[1 vs 17][I̶̢̡̧̡̧͍̠̣͔̙̻͇͉̖͔͇̱̤͉̙͚̣̦͚͚̮̖̻͉̪̭̲̖̪̪̮̪̒̌͂̓͗͌̌̃̈́̔̀͗̂̐̂̈́̃͛͋͘̚͜͠ͅͅ ̵̡̢̙̘̠̠̝̜͎̪̦̜͙͕͈̹̬͈͈̥̰̹͎̗̤̦̞̙̮͖͕̝̟͓͓̈́̌̋̈̅̀̈́͒̑͐̊̌͒͒̇̈́̋͊̂̊̒́̀͒̅͗̄͛͐͑͐̋̓̐̃͜͝͝͝͝͝͝A̴̢̡̧̳̟̠̼͉̥̮̥̠̦̜͇̞̳̲̱̥̼͖͇̞̘̳̫̱͌̽̓͛͌̓̏͒̋͜͝͝ͅM̴̨̡̨̨̰̣̗̲͍̼͚̝̥̹͕̭̭͎̪̾̿ͅ ̴͖̤̰̱̥̹̤̞̳͕̣͙̩̻̲̟͇̇̒̋͑̇̊́̀͝Í̶̧̨̳͉̫̫̺̰̖̳͉̜͚͖̥̹̯͓̟͓͇̜͙̳̭̞͉̯̭̱̗͖̟͇̥̖̻͓̗͈͔͎̞̟́̄̈́̓̈́̔̈̈́͒̂͛͒͊͑͛̇̐̿͋̌̽̈́̌́͑̚̚̚͠Ň̵̡̲̜̣͕̩̥̞͇̠̬͉̗̙̫̭̺͍̗̦͉̺̼̭̹͇̈́̐̄͊͌̓͝ͅS̵̖̏͌̽́̿̾̄̀̃̈́̓̊̽̎̋̓̔͑̀̕Ḯ̴̧̨̹̼̙̼̤͓̞̝̙̬̣̘͚̪͕̰͇͇͚̖̗̹̣̦̹̟̞̝̤̞̅̓̅̂̋̑̓̾͑͑̌̈͗̾͘͘͘͝ͅD̵̡̈́̌̾̆̈͐̇̄̈̄͑̂̂̅͛͗͘E̶̢̢͖͖̲̝̦̟̼͎͇̼̞͉̰͎͍̭̗̹̦̩͈̠̮̳̺̼̣̳̠̮̗̻̬̖̔̾̓̾͋̂́̃͊͒͒̃͊͒̃͌͒̂̀́̓̒̚̕̚͜͝͝͝ͅͅ ̷̧̡̢̡̧̛̝̪͍͕͎̜̱̝̲͎͖̥͔̼͈̤̺̦̘͔̮̬̙̗̤̯̟̬̠̙͙̩̗̻̟̹̄̀̄̒͛͌̏̍̐͗̿̊̆̈́͗̍̾͐̈͐͌͋́̌̉̾̊̏̑͆̓́͊͑̕̚̕̕͠͝͝͝͝Ỵ̷̡̢̧͖̼̤̭͙̦͍̞̱̯̗̥̮̱̤̤̟̖̝̤͔͉͓̯̺̞͖͖̗͙̼̗̣̱̖̉͂̈́̅̒͒̀́̑̓̓͑̂̌̈̀͊̍̏͌̀̃̎̾͊̀̉̇̿͆͑̂̅̋̊̕̚͝͠Ǒ̷̢̧̨̨̡͙̪̟̞͈͙͎̞̰͈͈̮̘̹̞̖͓̣̰̼͉̘̥̩̖̦̦̱̙͙̐̇͌͆́̈́̒̈́̑́͛̐͛͘̕͘͠ͅͅͅŲ̷̪̠̬̟̠͖͓̫͕̯̗̯̆̒̋̎̀̊͗̎̂̆͗̓͗̀̋̂̎̃̑̅̃̌͋̍̂͒͋̉͊͋̿̐̚̕͘͘̕͝.̵̧̨̢̧̼̱̥͉̬͇̳͙̯͎̤̤̗͍̯̤͎̫̠͚͖̲̱͈̮̺̘͕̺͓̲͈̩͚̐̀̏̓͛̎̉͗́̆͒͜͜ͅͅͅ ̶̡̨̧̡̡͚̙̹̙̺̱͎̜͕̮͖̳͕̞̗̳͎̩͓̘̣̙̫̝̼̤̺̬̹̫̭̼̘̙̟́̍͑͑̾̑̍̉̽͆̾́̉̒͑͑̕̕͘͘͜͜͝f̵̧̢̨̡̧̧̡̡̢͉̫̙̙̙̟̮̥̭̣̭̲̯͇̻̰̱̹͖͈̻͎̟̝͍̣̝̝̮͎̑̌͋̐̓̏̄̋̄̉̅͌͂̋̑̓̆̉̉͋̃̉͒̊̈́̈̂̈́̆̎͐́̏͛̚̚͘ͅͅṏ̷̡̧͖̹͖̖͉͓͈͚̲̠͖̹̺̺̲̤͕̹̺͔͕̼͖̦̠͚̞͓͈̝̻́͊̀͊͜ͅr̵̢̢̨̛̫͙̰̬̟̭̘̤͖̣͇̪̬̙̩̰̪̰̜͉̤͔̯̘͔̃͒̃͛̾̉̿̾̐̏͜͠e̵̢̢̡̧̞͕̼̥̥̳̦̥͔͔̗̼̙͙̊̓͗̕͝ͅv̶̧̡̛͚̬̹̺̟̳̺̱̹̪̙̻͔͉̥̖͇̠̦̳̝̜͓̼̹͉̯̱͈̣̣̓̆͌̈́̂̅͐̅́͋̅́́̈́͑̊͆̓̔́̑͘̚͘͝͝͝ͅͅé̴̢̨̼̳̫̫̥̖̫͕͔̲͈͍̝̤̭͓̪̙͙̀͆̾͊͌̃͆͐̌͗̿̏͗̑̂̆͊̂̂̓̎̚̚͝ͅͅr̶̨̨̢̧̛̰̤̮̦͉̬͎͎̤͍̦̣̻̭͚̗͕͕̖̮̳̰̙̗̙̥̞͈̯̤̖̩̻͕̬̩͓̽̃̄̈́̾͗̄̈̐̑̓̅͒͑̅̚͜͝͠ͅͅ.̵͎͉͈͉͚̘̙̮̝̐̿̃̽̐͑͑̇̈́̌ͅ]


...


...


...

Your wings burn fitfully on your back when you open your eyes. They provide just enough lift to keep your slumped form hovering in the sky. The voice is gone. It is gone. The sun begins to set on the horizon. You peel off your helmet, inhaling the cold radioactive air. The display within is covered with blood. Your head feels numb, and you glance down at your chest. Rivulets of blood run down from your wound, staining the front a dark, dry red.

[I've stabilized you. You've suffered a major hemorrhage of the brain. I would advise immediate withdrawal from the field, if possible. I've also disabled all non-vital powers -- you don't want to see your status.] Lucille's cold voice calmly explains.

Everything feels foggy, and the numbness extends into your limbs. It takes willpower to flex your fingers.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 10, 2020, 12:09:25 am
Quote from: Lucille
I've also disabled all non-vital powers -- you don't want to see your status.

Oh yes we do - well, we advisors do, but I agree with Lucille it might adversely affect you, Phoenix.


Check status of our team. If possible order them to get out. Scram - whether that means finding where the team is rendezvousing as fast as possible and arranging exit strategy, or getting to a safe distance first to recover our strength before trying to fly to the exit point. We need to get away from this abomination. And our team certainly does too.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 10, 2020, 12:12:36 am
...yes. Away. To the hovercrafts. Our "status" can wait.

The things we put you through...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 10, 2020, 12:17:38 am
We've learned one thing - except in truly incredible circumstances, ignore all attempts the Plague makes to negotiate or communicate. Regard them all as mere trickery. It's not interested in anything other than total war. Ironic, yes, to condemn it for that, but we have no other safe choice. The risk is too great.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2020, 12:20:01 am
I was naive to think it was capable of peace, and for that I apologize.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 10, 2020, 12:27:47 am
There is no soaring, no graceful maneuvers. You limp back to where the Hovercrafts were supposed to be in a holding pattern to instead find them landed. You slowly decrease your upward thrust, until your toes touch the ground. You cut your wings-- and hit the ground. Your limbs are not responding. The Crusaders rush towards you.

Lucille speaks for you, chiming in a cold, soft voice very much unlike your own "Withdraw."

[1] A medic tugs at your helmet -- you hesitate. But Lucille has no care for your discomfort. No care to hide your defeat from your Crusaders. The assembled soldiers gasp at the sight of your blood-smeared face and unfocused eyes. The medic shines a small light in your eyes --

"She's unresponsive. Get her on the craft -- SEED bless how do I even work on an Angel."

They heft you up and into the craft. Your consciousness swims, but you remain awake. They peel away your armor, plugging the hole in your chest with piles and piles of gauze, wrapping a tight bandage around the crater-- the chatter fades in and out-- before something stirs you from your twilight slumber.

"...what's taking so long? We need to get her to a--"

"We're being followed."

"...shit."

You pass out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 10, 2020, 01:29:46 am



I am disappointed. Is my Line so willing to die on this backwater? Dying the death of the old and feeble? Too weak to die standing? Rise. Fight. Die.



"P-please...we need you...Pheonix."

[11] You answer the Medic's prayers with a twitch of your fingers, opening your eyes. Screams filter in from outside. You twist your willpower into your own body, moving your body with nothing but determination. Your wings flare forth; bright, bloody gold in the dim light of the ruined bay. The Medic is bleeding to death, but relief floods her features when you stand. When you put your helmet on.

[15] You leave the crashed Hovercraft. Two others, intact, sit with doors open as las-gun fire rains down on them from above. Abominations move to break makeshift barricade hastily constructed between the three, defending it from waves of the beasts. Soldiers even lay prone on the wreckage you walked out of, firing into the teeming mass that surrounds the vessel.

You pick up a las rifle in your hand, having to clasp it tightly, using your willpower to twist your hand on to the trigger. Everything is still numb, still cold.

Three hovercraft. Twenty-five abominations. Strategy?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2020, 01:45:38 am
Woah, are you okay?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 10, 2020, 01:52:31 am
[Lucille, what powers remain to us?]
We're a corpse with a gun in this state-- we need to get out. The surviving hovercraft, can we reach it without drawing fire from the abominations?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2020, 02:19:13 am
We can't leave our soldiers here to die.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 10, 2020, 02:24:04 am
If we wanted to do that, we could simply fly off on our own power. Safe retreat is nevertheless priority here: for ourself, and for as many of our soldiers as possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2020, 02:26:56 am
I'm not sure that either of the three remaining hovercraft would survive the small arms fire.  We would have to reduce the abominations' numbers first.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 10, 2020, 02:52:13 am
We have a las gun, let’s see if we still have Overload, by trying to use it on the abominations
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 10, 2020, 02:58:16 am
Let our armor tell us what we've power got at hand, and we'll work from there. Anything beyond that could well break us for good.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 10, 2020, 03:02:38 am
Let our armor tell us what we've power got at hand, and we'll work from there. Anything beyond that could well break us for good.
Good idea
[Lucile, what powers do we have right now?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2020, 04:24:26 am
Do repeated overloads from cover with thin, focused beams to cut the abominations in two while trying to be as efficient with our willpower as possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 10, 2020, 06:14:07 am
Let our armor tell us what we've power got at hand, and we'll work from there. Anything beyond that could well break us for good.
Good idea
[Lucile, what powers do we have right now?]
+1 Knowing what we're able to do is important.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 10, 2020, 09:16:47 am
[5][You move by will alone. Any great strain will break you -- but you have full access to your usual powers.]

Then we shall be broken.

[18] Las-fire streaks through the air around you. An Infected hover-craft strafes you, it's shots kicking up dirt. You do not flinch -- despite the clear target you make in golden panoply, with wings flaring, no shots truly connect.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2020, 11:29:00 am
First try to disable the hovercrafts with focused overloads targeting their reactors, with the goal of igniting the hydrogen and causing them to explode.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 10, 2020, 12:16:37 pm
[3][15][14] You reach out as the infected crafts swoop in. On the first, your willpower fails you. The second and third do not fare the same. With inhuman screams, their reactors explode. Shrapnel flies as they fall to the earth.

The third falls back, and you rise to meet it in the air.

[15][6 vs. 6] You rip the wings off the pesky fly -- just as it mulches your chest with a laser round. You hit the ground --

[1] You don't rise again. Blackness creeps up to meet you. Firm hands grab your inert body.



You have lived up to my name-- our name, my daughter.


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 10, 2020, 12:30:20 pm
I hope we weakened the plague. Hopefully others can finish off the Leviathan before it heals. I hope We have made a difference. For the better
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 10, 2020, 12:33:46 pm
No. No. No.

The body is broken. What of the will?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2020, 01:20:28 pm
There is no better way to die than in battle. Through Emma and William, the line continues.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 10, 2020, 02:46:41 pm
Is it better to die with dignity or live another day? I do not think the Pheonix would like to see her body now.

Perhaps it is better if she was to rise as an Ancestor? Wouldn't it be less painful? Or is the pain all she has?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 10, 2020, 03:05:27 pm
She has-- love. Love like we could never have had. She's unlike us. Better than us.

...

...explain to me this ancestral process. If she joins our ranks, who will take her place?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 10, 2020, 03:34:24 pm
The next to take her essence. If no one does, and we decay to non-existence, then our instances die with her. Cadet branches become the Main, and our other instances live on. Poorer for the lack of Pheonix's will, of course

[14][10][9]

There is no dignity in death. I feel. Do you feel the same?

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2020, 03:35:52 pm
I don't think she would want to abandon her people while her strength still remains. Her story is not yet complete.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 10, 2020, 03:38:54 pm
If we can avoid death, we should do so. If our body is to die, we must transfer our minds to someone. How do we explain the situation to the Crusaders? Who don’t know about transferring essences? If Emma or William we’re here, one of them could take our essence. Can a non Emoereal human be given our essence? If so, we should transfer to one of the Crusaders
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 10, 2020, 03:55:59 pm
‘Μὴ δή μοι θάνατόν γε παραύδα, φαίδιμ᾽ Ὀδυσσεῦ.
Speak not comfortably to me of death, oh great Odysseus.

βουλοίμην κ᾽ ἐπάρουρος ἐὼν θητευέμεν ἄλλῳ,
Rather would I live on ground as the hireling of another

ἀνδρὶ παρ᾽ ἀκλήρῳ, ᾧ μὴ βίοτος πολὺς εἴη,
with a landless man who had no great livelihood,

ἢ πᾶσιν νεκύεσσι καταφθιμένοισιν ἀνάσσειν.
than bear sway among all the dead that be departed.

Homer. The lament of Achilleas, on the pale fields of Elysium. What good is a noble demise, when thus we forsake the living?
This body. Can it be salvaged yet?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 10, 2020, 05:56:36 pm
She still has much to do indeed. She sleeps comfortably. Otherwise the pain would make her wish for death. Do not wake me again, Children. I am... angry in my old age.



Your eyelids are barely responsive, but they slowly flicker open. Your throat and nose are full of tubes. Saline drips into your veins. A machine forces air into your lungs. Pain, horrible pain, consumes you entirely. Your cores are not suppressing it.

A probe of willpower, examining your chest --

Humans were not meant to take a las-shot from a Hover-craft. Beneath the bandages, beneath the padding that keeps your organs from falling out -- your thoracic cavity lies bared to the world. Fractured messes of black bone, hastily stitched together organs. Thin tendrils of your essence work in the places of muscles ruptured. The bandages are red with blood.

You try to heal yourself instinctively -- and black out.



It's days later when you awaken again. Unable to move, tied to machines that bring only pain. Fear, anger, disgust...it all wells inside, too potent for words. It takes long for Pheonix to form a coherent sentence through the pain.

I'm scared.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 10, 2020, 06:21:43 pm
As am I.

"Good Doctor": of all of us, you are most skilled in the healing arts. Guide the essence.
Bolster the essence. Do what you may to mend this vessel.
Those of you who remember pain: help me now to take it unto myself. Our honored daughter should not have to bear it all.

Too long have we advised and done nothing. Too long have we left this one to suffer alone.
No more.

No more.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2020, 06:33:00 pm
I will do what I can. Phoenix, you've escaped with your life. You're safe. There is no need to fear.

Try to get a sense of the injuries, both physical and mental.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 10, 2020, 08:42:07 pm
I will do what I can. Phoenix, you've escaped with your life. You're safe. There is no need to fear.

Try to get a sense of the injuries, both physical and mental.
+1 I’ll try suppressing Phoebe’s pain by taking it into myself
We should feel the pain, too. She mustn’t suffer it all

I’m scared, too. But now we wait and heal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 11, 2020, 08:00:04 am
I will do what I can. Phoenix, you've escaped with your life. You're safe. There is no need to fear.

Try to get a sense of the injuries, both physical and mental.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 11, 2020, 12:14:59 pm
Your thoracic cavity has suffered a spontaneous steam rupture. Las-guns work by sending pulses of heat energy directly into flesh and tissue, causing it to expand rapidly and explode in a burst of superheated steam. This explosion causes a crater to form from the rapid expansion of gas, rupturing flesh and bone. The 'caliber' that struck you was designed with the intention of shooting down hover-crafts, made to 'tunnel' through metal with violent results. The crater is roughly a foot across, penetrating roughly three inches into your chest. Your lungs, stomach, diaphragm, and have all suffered many avulsions, which, in places, give way to lacerations through the sensitive tissues. A majority of your rib bones have been turned into fragments by the same blast. The ones that survived the expansion have been roughly dislocated from the thoracic vertebrae, spreading outward pass where they should be.

Somebody, you assume Silas, has done his best with the technology available. Staples along with fine stitches hold together frayed organs -- and your will provides a thin membrane to allow them to function at a survivable level. Tubes drain blood to prevent further strain on the system. A crude ventilator system gently pumps an oxygen mixture into your lungs through your nose. A feeding tube snakes it's way down your throat, into your stomach, filled with something greasy and grey looking. You assume nutrient cubes, with enough liquid to make it easily digestible. A saline solution and a bag of blood drip into your veins, attempting to offset the blood loss from such a grievous injury. Padding -- gauze and bandages, fill your insides, damp with disinfectant and healing salve. Another attempt to prevent you from losing too much blood.

Somebody enters, a thin, gaunt young man in a lab coat -- Silas. He looks down at you with mild confusion when your eyes find him. He blinks slowly, then takes a note, despite your twitching fingers. "You're awake. That's...probably not good." Reaching into a nearby drawer in the dull, grey room, he pulls out a syringe. "A blend of painkillers and sedatives designed for you. It's better that you sleep through your healing process." Leaning down, quietly, "For Emma's sake too, darling. I told her that I will only let her see you when you wake up."

"Shake your head no if you do not wish to be put under, Lady Pheonix."

You cannot move.

"Wonderful. Always good to have your informed consent for my medical practices."



[20] You dream in the throes of chemical sleep.

You dream of familiar wills coiling near you. One, a mirror of you, icey blue, cold as the mountains beneath the dying stars in the distant expanses of space-time. The other, old, withered, but strong like a great oak tree, strong in the face of many storms.

The two clash. The oak burns away to nothing, but the roots remain, reaching into the depths of the ground.



You awaken again sometime later, slipping free of your chemical bonds to painful consciousness. You sit in the silence with your pain, probing at your chest -- its healed some by now. They've removed some of the gauze and your organs feel...stronger. Somebody approaches again, and you prepare yourself for another week of fitful, drug-induced sleep. Its a woman, a Crusader Medic. She hovers over you for a moment, noting your focused eyes.

"[Pheonix of Sol. You're awake.]"

You can say nothing, the tubes shoved down your mouth preventing coherent speech -- your lungs probably couldn't bear it.

"[Right. I've brought something for this...]" Cephelia removes a gold and black glove from her white coat, slipping it over your wrist.

[Good Morning Pheobe. You're healing well.]

Transmit my thoughts to speech.

[Affirmative.] Horrible screeching echoes through the room from your wrist -- Cephelia collapses back, startled.

Not those.

Lucille stops transcribing your agony.

"[Cephelia. You've returned.]" Lucille offers weakly, cold and precise.

"[Its been a month since you've sent me out. But I come back to find you all weak and vulnerable. How easy it would be to control you now...were it not for Emma and William...]" Cephelia trails off, looking thoughtful. With a mock sigh, she sits on your bed, brushing your greasy red hair from your eyes with tenderness. "[If only the Empyre could see the scourge of the stars now. How they would laugh, how they would mock.]"

You say nothing.

"[I have an offer for you Pheobe. I will mend your flesh. I will make you whole again until you can knit yourself together again.]"

"[And what can I offer the Ascended with everything?]"

"[Many things Pheobe. But the thing I want most -- your trust. Your friendship. Maybe eventually your affection.]"

"[I have Emma.]"

"[You have an Oracle and a Tin Man. Neither are true Ascended. Neither can do what we do. Neither can speak the language of the Universe and have it jump to their bidding like a loyal pet. The first two are fine for now, however. Do we have a bond?]" Her words dip into the tongue of the High Empyreal, archaic and older than the Endless Empire. The language of bonds, of law -- the language she swore her subservience to you with. It is not a true bond, not a true oath, but she shows that it is not to be taken lightly, the word you give.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 11, 2020, 01:13:21 pm
((Silas doesn't bear the surname VonNost, does he?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 11, 2020, 01:20:58 pm
((Thornton))
”[If you wanted to kill me, you would have done so. As you are helping me, I might be able to trust you. We might be able to become friends.]”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 11, 2020, 02:11:40 pm
((Thornton))
”[If you wanted to kill me, you would have done so. As you are helping me, I might be able to trust you. We might be able to become friends.]”
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 11, 2020, 02:20:40 pm
Disturbing.
Necessary.

...she'll want a definite answer. No "might"s.


["You think I keep those two for their power? That was never the way of it."]
...
["...you have my trust, Cephilia of Lavoisier. Keep it well-- it will not be mended again. My friendship, you had already."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 11, 2020, 02:43:28 pm
Disturbing.
Necessary.

...she'll want a definite answer. No "might"s.


["You think I keep those two for their power? That was never the way of it."]
...
["...you have my trust, Cephilia of Lavoisier. Keep it well-- it will not be mended again. My friendship, you had already."]

+1, this is better
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Kashyyk on May 11, 2020, 02:48:32 pm
Wow. Finally caught up. This has been quite the ride and I was very scared I'd be catching up just in time to see Phoebe die.

I have to say the writing has been exemplary, and I look forward to more. I might even manifest as a voice on occasion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 11, 2020, 03:49:58 pm
Disturbing.
Necessary.

...she'll want a definite answer. No "might"s.


["You think I keep those two for their power? That was never the way of it."]
...
["...you have my trust, Cephilia of Lavoisier. Keep it well-- it will not be mended again. My friendship, you had already."]

+1, this is better
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 11, 2020, 09:58:41 pm
Welcome.



"[Wonderful -- I was already going to try my best to heal you anyways, but now I have more motivation.]"

Cephelia gently takes out a piece of rubber, setting it between your teeth. You bite down on it. She barricades the door with a cabinet, moving quickly and quietly, before returning to your side. Her form slowly shifts, returning to her preferred form. Long fingers gently peel away your bandages, revealing your ruined chest.

"{You're going to scar from this.]" She murmurs, sadly, examining the injury.

"[What? We don't scar--]"

"[Wounds that scar our minds scar our flesh. They alter our baseline. I'm assuming you're having trouble with your arm, as well?]"

You flinch, and would feel your stomach drop were it not sitting out like this.

"[I'll help you fix that too. Not now. This is going to hurt, so I'm taking your armor off. You have to allow me to work your physical form. We cannot work on each other's body with yielding our wills.]"

...

She's right. It does hurt. Cephelia starts by melding the flesh of your thoracic cavity back together, slowly, painfully. Where there is no organ, she instead uses a mesh of black fibers, pulled away from a dark black block. With the first part of her task nearly done, she reaches over, turning on the oxygen pump until you begin to choke and cough, then, quickly seals the cavity. You do note, after several, painful, probably bloody coughs that you breathe easier now.

Coils of the carbon twist themselves around, filling in the spots where your bone is missing, capping them off, or holding them together with great chunks. The empty space where your sternum is filled in the same way, replaced by a plate of black carbon, her fingers tracing slowly as sweat beads on her forehead-- and until blood drips from her nose.

Cephelia slumps, looking down at your exposed and reconstructed rib cage. Rising, she finds a surgical mask, slipping it on over her face. She takes a few deep breaths, then gets back to work. She teases muscle fibers together the best she can, replacing it with carbon fiber where necessary, sealing it over your exposed bone until you're left with a patch of black, shiny mesh across your chest. No more gaping hole, no more bandages holding in your organs -- replaced by a surgical mesh of carbon fiber.

"[Thank all the Gods we don't get normal infections -- you'd be out of luck.]"

She pulls the tubes from your mouth and nose, and you cough and sputter -- but can breathe on your own again. Rising is still difficult, as she was unable to replace the muscles with anything, but you are no longer tied to those infernal machines. Cephelia helps you sit up, swaddling your chest in a bandage when you do. "I need a break, Pheobe." She murmurs, settling into her chair with a tired smile. "Don't exert yourself -- the mesh can tear."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 11, 2020, 10:34:45 pm
Find out from Cehpie about the result of the mission we were on.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 11, 2020, 10:42:34 pm
((Say, are these carbon nanotubes? Because I think elemental carbon is normally extremely weak - it's basically char))

why did i write these useless comments back in.... 2020?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 11, 2020, 10:43:22 pm
"Thank you."

A healer. A healer. I am grateful. You breathe again. I am grateful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 11, 2020, 10:53:22 pm
"Thank you."
A healer. A healer. I am grateful. You breathe again. I am grateful.
Find out from Cehpie about the result of the mission we were on.
+1.  There are a number of things to check on.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 11, 2020, 10:58:52 pm
((Yes. Hence her exhaustion at having to arrange the structure of elemental carbon into carbon nanotubes/fiber))

"Thank you." You manage to croak with your own voice, and Cephelia gives you a winning smile. The effect is ruined by her sharp teeth, but the sincerity is there.

"You're welcome, Pheobe. Sorry I can't do more, but since you seem incapable of healing...a patch job is best I can offer."

"I don't know." Cephie shrugs a shoulder, leaning back in her chair. "I got back a couple of days ago. You weren't in public, and I smelled a secret. So I did some digging. Then I found a mark who helped out Silas. The rest is history. No one knows who I am, and I don't think you ever properly introduced me to your [kindred]."

With another shake of her head, "I doubt Emma would take kindly to me, after all that's happened."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 11, 2020, 11:03:47 pm
"What were the results of your mission?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 11, 2020, 11:14:02 pm
"You just rebuilt my torso. You can tell her that, at least."

"What were the results of your mission?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 12:42:59 am
"That's a strong word. I put a patch on your torso. Like I said, any strain and you'll rip yourself open again. Might want to ask Silas for some cough medicine and try to avoid lifting weights or hell, even sharp movements. If we were in the Empyre, a good station surgeon could have has you walking again by now." After a beat, "She didn't tell you, did she? Well, that's a discussion I'm not being a part of."

"I'll submit my mission report to you in short order, with all the details. To summarize; there was a mixed reaction. Some didn't believe it, some vowed loyalty and hoped for assistance, and others tried to shoot me down. The Plague hasn't penetrated inland enough to cause serious harm. Some skirmishes here and there."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 01:00:40 am
"Understood. I will have further orders for you when I get a better sense of what the situation is. You are dismissed."

"[Zero, can you please direct me to Emma?  Also, are there any critical and time-sensitive issues I should be aware of?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 12, 2020, 02:25:37 am
"Understood. I will have further orders for you when I get a better sense of what the situation is. You are dismissed."

"[Zero, can you please direct me to Emma?  Also, are there any critical and time-sensitive issues I should be aware of?]"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 12, 2020, 02:52:11 am
"Understood. I will have further orders for you when I get a better sense of what the situation is. You are dismissed."

"[Zero, can you please direct me to Emma?  Also, are there any critical and time-sensitive issues I should be aware of?]"

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 09:50:41 am
...do we want to be moving about right now?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 09:52:26 am
Cephelia stares at you for a few seconds. Then she rises without a word, shifting back into the Medic's face as she makes to leave. When she reaches the cabinet that she blockaded the door with, she bats it away with a casual shove, sending it flying into the wall with a loud crash. She's gone before you can react. Silas rushes in soon thereafter, confused.

"What the hell ha--" He stares at your bared, patched chest -- then he takes a clipboard, and scribbles a note down. "How did that happen?"

["We've been informed by the Council of Ministries that you are not to be bothered with any duties until you are fully healed. Such an evaluation will be completed by her and a team of medical professional. As ordered by Emeralda Thornton, your regent, and Communication Minister.That was their first edict."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 09:58:37 am
We promised that one our friendship. She... may have taken offense at the order.

"Visit from another [angel]-- carbon worker. A patch over lost tissue."
"Sudden movements could tear it. I'm to ask about cough medicine."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 10:16:45 am
"There's...there's another [angel] here?!" Silas, of course, focuses on the most important part of your statement, leaving you alone to try and chase after her. He returns a minute or two later, wearing a mournful expression. He produces a small vial, capped with a small measuring instrument. "Take one capful per twelve hours or if you feel like coughing. I expected as much -- just not so soon."

Silas pauses, staring at you for a few silent moments. "Emma is concerned with your mental state. As is..." He gestures to your gloved hand, "That thing. It provided me with a chemical formula to synthesize for you."

"I'm quoting here, ' I would recommend regular daily doses of antipsychotics combined with cognitive-behavioral therapy.  Let's see if you make progress with those.  Also, requistion a leaded blanket. A leave of absence from the conflict and other duties is to be recommended.' I have no idea what the latter is, this cognitive behavioral therapy, but I finished your medicine last week, and we've manufactured a leaded blanket."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 10:56:01 am
Familiar words! You could tell this one exactly whence those words came-- you could reveal our many voices. I leave that choice to you.

"The Crusaders called it 'the nightmare'. Some kind of lingering [plague] damage."

Sigh. "It got... bad out there. Hallucinations. Dripping sky, writhing ground. The [plague] attacked me through it, at some point... the armor tells me I suffered a brain hemorrhage. I'm lucky to have survived."


I'm unsure how much of the [infection] still remains with us. It took up a space in our cores... the same space we all share. I'm of a mind to seek out and destroy what remains, if I can.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 11:38:06 am
And be pegged as a psychotic even moreso? I do not trust them to understand our concepts. Our lives.

"The...the Crusaders know about this? With your permission, I'd like to draw blood samples and interrogate them about this 'nightmare'." Silas looks thoughtful, then turns and leaves you after your observation. He returns with another Medic and a wheelchair. "Since you're awake, I'd like to show you something. I set up my lab on this level -- "

"And I can keep a secret about this duty. I feel like you would appreciate my findings more than Emma did. She was horrified, but I feel like you would be intrigued."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 12, 2020, 11:45:04 am
"Yes, I would like to know your findings"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 12:06:00 pm
"So, besides those neat little [life support] machines that 'Lucille' had me rig up for you --" Silas and the Medic help to lift you into the wheelchair. After checking on your chest for a moment, they begin to push you out of the room, down the dull gray-brown corridors of the mountain fortress, "-- I also invented this thing I like to call a light projector! I'm amazing, I know."

The Medic wheels you into his lab, and besides for the vast amount of scientific instruments crammed into such a small space, you notice many small, white rats in cages, along with the Colossus section you gave him. In the center of the room, facing a wall painted white, is a box with a glass lid. He flicks the light on, and places a slide down on it.

"This is from the...thing you sent me."

There are many black small dots, which make up a stiff, hard wall of a round cell. They are pitch black in the light and they creep along sluggishly, even after all this time -- still alive, still functioning, however weakly. Pieces occasionally break off, only to reform anew.

"Next, is this one..."

It too has many square cell walls, but they are lined up perfectly, and not as dark in color, more transparent. However, you notice similar black dots to the first. Far less, of course, but enough to notice.

"Can you guess what this is?"

"No." You reply.

"This is from a sample of grass from the Thornton Lawns. And this...is a sample of my own blood."

Round cells show up on the wall this time, but there's more of those black dots.

"I discovered -- we are all carriers of the Plague. However, I do believe that it depends on the level -- that there's a certain threshold before we become truly infected." He removes a small device from one the tables. Switching it on, it produces a level of static, faint, but all radios do. A natural thing, caused by man-made electronics, atmospheric conditions, and residual effects from the creation of the universe itself. "Listen."

He holds in the air, producing a simple static. Then, he walks over to the segment of worm you delivered to him.

[11] It changes, becoming more orderly, but it still is static.

"However these [radios] work, so too does the Plague. If enough of it comes together, it seems like it begins to use this principle to organize itself. I've infected rats, and after a certain number, a certain amount of biomass, they start to coordinate. Without it, they simply seek out food, namely complex proteins, mindlessly."

"If they do not get enough food, their metabolism slows to a crawl, and they enter into a dormant period. Technically still alive, but unresponsive to anything besides warmth or motion, that is to say, what data tells them is prey."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 12, 2020, 12:11:14 pm
Then I suppose the Plague involves some kind of [nanobots]... pathogens or viruses don't generate [radio] signals, but nannies could.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 12:14:57 pm
Indeed. Our own "will" is not so different.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 12, 2020, 12:19:56 pm
They could be corrupted software
"This is interesting. I wonder if it's possible to filter out the plague cells from the blood. Has this been attempted in the rats yet?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 12, 2020, 12:20:47 pm
"Do the infected rats respond to [radio] signals as well as generate them? Do the infected with only enough dust for instinct, like these rats, show trophism towards such signals if that's what their fragments of will use to coordinate? With enough research we could take advantage of that, [spoof] the infections' communication protocols with [radios] or simply flood the [luminiferous ether] with noise, preventing the individual nannies from forming coherent wholes... even turn an infected being into an extension of our will, if we can learn to send [electromagnetic] radiation with our own dust...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 12:27:55 pm
"There's also this..." He turns the radio over near you -- the static once more becomes a touch more orderly. "Strange, no? You and the Plague are similar in that regard."

"I don't know enough about this technology to try and...communicate or order them, unfortunately. I don't even know where to start. This is too advanced for me -- I've been learning, but I am a microbiologist, chemist, and a dabbling doctor-- I only have so much time in the day." Silas looks apologetic, shaking his head and turning towards a corner of the room. "Filtering it out...well. I could try, but it invades other membranes as well. It's not just in the blood -- in its everything. Bone marrow, lung walls -- you name it."

"There's also this -- so, I've been playing around with the [cryogenic] pods. Now, organic material, if not properly stored, is completely ruined. I put a rat through it on a whim -- it's dead, living with all of its rat friends in Paradise, no doubt. Its skin completely just like...melted. Complete cellular destruction." He grins, then, directs your attention to a cube of reinforced glass on the corner, pockmarked with cracks. The rat looks incredibly unhealthy. Its flesh is nearly all sloughed off, revealing silvery tendons between bones. Its eyes have rotted out of its skull, replaced with ones of gray. They are insect-like, on stalks. It doesn't move until Silas approaches -- then it lashes at the box towards him, towards you, haphazardly, its reddish-gray skull cracking on the glass

"This is one I infected, then put through the same process without protections. I used a lot of the cryogenic mix, until the thermometer I was using broke apart. I capped it at [290 degrees Celsius]. The Plague virus survived."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 01:32:34 pm
As the youngest mentioned, radio jamming or spoofing could significantly weaken the plague's abilities in battle.

"Could you bring this to the attention of the Ministry of Technology? I would like them to look into radio jammers in order to leverage this information."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 01:52:56 pm
I wonder... had the Empyre tricks against such things we've not thought to try? The Plague War was rather after my time, but perhaps another of our Line remembers-- one of the Cadets, say.

((The Canadian kitten?))

Or perhaps Alphira. You've access to her memory banks now, after all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 02:24:01 pm
The plagues were as varied as the planets they infected and enemies they fought. The Plague of her childhood was completely different, with different forms and shapes -- it had a queen, for one. I never saw it, but Alphias described it as a giant metal-coated maggot, with great tentacles stretching through the entire lower levels of the station. We fought it using spears and plate mail--its armor was weaker due to lack of gravity on those levels. We could form phalanxes in the narrow hallways--

"Sure. I don't know how effective it will be -- radios are very new to us." Silas shrugs. "But it's worth a shot, yes."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 02:57:26 pm
You speak as if you had experienced these things yourself. Are you Alphira, then? Alphira and Phoenix both?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 03:00:44 pm
I consumed her. Memories and all, while she slept. I am her -- and the interface -- but I reject who they were. My kind would consider my existence an abomination for this. I consider myself finally whole.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 12, 2020, 03:09:59 pm
The background never specified about how I fought the plague over at the rimward stars.
The skies above worlds streaked with fire as you and the Eldest did battle with another of your infected siblings. You struck him down, but not before he cleaved you apart with stolen light.
I can only assume that my siblings and I did an oritbal bomardment of those planet surfaces while sending down empyreal to clean up the mess.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 03:18:42 pm
And so it was.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 03:26:01 pm
"As far as the therapy is concerned, I would like you to work with me to identify what actions cause me anxiety related to the plague on a scale from one to ten. One might be thinking about the plague and ten might be being overwhelmed by abominations in battle, for example."

"At that point, I would like you to expose me to the anxiogenic situations, starting with the ones. I will record the level of my anxiety and how long it takes for that anxiety to dissipate. Once I've done this repeatedly, and the level of anxiety and time required to reduce it is lessened signficiantly, we will move on to more difficult exposures."

"The idea is that I will learn coping strategies through repeated practice that will help me tolerate the effects of psychosis. Combine this with regular doses of antipsychotics."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 12, 2020, 03:29:35 pm
It will be, er, rather difficult for Silas to expose us in a controlled environment to situations that rate a ten.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 03:31:50 pm
Ten situations are the most extreme possible, and we will probably not attempt to address those extremes.  Treatment may end at the 8s or 9s.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 03:48:07 pm
I take it this is your-- ah-- "cognitive behavioral therapy"?
It all sounds faintly ridiculous... but then, I was never much of a healer. If this is the way that minds are made whole, then (at the discretion of our host) so be it.

This won't be sufficient to heal the [plague] damage, mind: there's an [infection] in us needs purging. We may want to let Silas interrogate one or two of the Crusaders as to this "nightmare" after all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 04:31:54 pm
More or less. The literature suggests that these approaches are generally successful, but this is sort of a novel situation. We'll see how it goes.

[Lucille, do you have radio jamming capabilities?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 04:36:25 pm
[13]"I can try my best. That sounds... familiar." Silas, scratches at his chin, watching the rat. The glass cracks again, and he switched on a button. A liquid pours into the glass container. The rat hisses as it begins to melt-- finally sinking beneath the surface as it tries to tread the liquid.

"Ah. It was from that cube. I think it was called a cognitive rehabilitation and programming pod. It was advised to be used with the Loom."

[9] You remember such a pod-- you spent as much time as possible in one during your youth upon the station, availing yourself to the combat simulations. Most long term ships have one -- entertainment and education rolled into one.

[Only for your personal radio connections.]

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 04:44:24 pm
Producing one of those should be a priority, then. It sounds like an expedited manner of carrying out this treatment and may be useful for our soldiers as well.

"[Zero, in order to aid my treatment, I need a cognitive rehabilitation and programming pod. Please let the Ministry of Technology know, or forward my request to Emma, if necessary.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 04:54:41 pm
["We should be able to build and program one within ten years."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 04:56:55 pm
"[That's not a great timeline... hold off for now.]"

"I've been informed that the creation of the pod could take up to ten years. For now, we will need to carry out the treatment manually... probably."

[Lucile, are you capable of simulating a cognitive rehabilitation and programming pod?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 06:00:07 pm
[...No.]

"Ah. Okay then. I'll try to come up with something." Silas murmurs, rubbing at the back of his head.

[20]Cephelia might have one -- if a ship has cryopods, it has one of those pods. Otherwise, it would be impossible to maintain said ship.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 06:11:22 pm
Excellent, let's try that. I suppose we should apologize to her as well.

"[Cephie, can I speak to you for a moment? I'd like to ask you something and apologize for my earlier behavior.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 06:17:04 pm
[REDACTED]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 06:18:57 pm
((The most recent status says she is contactable by radio. Did that change?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 06:21:40 pm
A thought occurs to me.

If we are to treat Cephilia not as a vassal, but as a friend-- if we are truly to trust her, as we pledged--

...we could release her. Render void the contract she gave us. A token beyond any apology we could give.

I do not order-- I merely offer. Has the thing merit?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 06:26:40 pm
Hmm. Personally, I don't trust her. She did intimate when we woke up that only Emma and William were preventing her from seizing control of us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 06:30:20 pm
...good point. I will delete that post. <.<



[I will scan through the channels to try and locate Cephelia, Pheobe.]

...That...might be a step too far. We can be friend and foe with an oath still bound. If we remove it completely...she might find us foe again. It would be a major symbol of trust -- but she is still bound to Magnus. But if my Ancestors wish it so, I would give in.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 12, 2020, 06:33:02 pm
I vote caution in releasing Cephie, at least for a little bit. We have time to spend evaluating her further.

In fact, let's make that official. For the time being, I oppose releasing Cephie from her bond with us.


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 06:43:32 pm
Ha; my compatriots have spoken! I was ever a touch naive, you know... a century too many, perhaps, with a people little given to treachery. Good folk. Honest folk.

We are
advisors, Phoenix-of-Sol-- did you not name us so? Do not hesitate to contest us, as the need rises. You deserve a hand in your own fate.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 12, 2020, 06:52:51 pm
I admire your willingness to open with her, and your love of trust, but now - our people, our plans and our self in a fragile state, beset by attackers on all sides - we must tread with unfortunate care. But fear not. I have no doubt we may one day be able to treat with Cephelia of Lavoisier in honest faith, unmarred by this caution. Your openness is nothing to apologise for. I, too, regret that circumstances demand this close counsel, this state of eternal mistrust, where we must ever [play our cards close to our chest].
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 07:57:31 pm
["Yes, Pheonix?]

I trust your judgement and guidance. If I didn't, I would stop listening -- eventually, you would fade away. I don't want that--

Also you guys are much better at talking than me...but how about a compromise. It may be a bit manipulative, but she seems desperate for attention and comfort. Maybe something like that could be used?

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 08:12:51 pm
I'm willing to give it a try. What do you think about these words?

["Cephie, I'm sorry that I acted coldly towards you after you healed me. I've been through a lot recently, and it is difficult for me to trust others. I really value your help and advice."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 12, 2020, 08:40:22 pm
A request directly after our attempt to open with her? It appears quite manipulative. And she will surely notice.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 08:54:18 pm
Good point. Let's try it without the request, for the moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 08:55:35 pm
Ahh... you honor us, Φοίβη. You honor us. Someday, you will outgrow us-- and that, that will be the greatest honor of all.
Now. Perhaps a rearranging of the words, leaving out the clause in question?


"I... need to apologize."

"Trusting people is hard for me. I tend to get myself hurt, trusting people-- but I pushed you away back there. Treated you like one of my soldiers. You're supposed to be more than that. I gave my word."

"Your help, your advice-- I really am grateful, Cephie. I'm sorry."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 09:27:01 pm
Ahh... you honor us, Φοίβη. You honor us. Someday, you will outgrow us-- and that, that will be the greatest honor of all.
Now. Perhaps a rearranging of the words, leaving out the clause in question?


"I... need to apologize."

"Trusting people is hard for me. I tend to get myself hurt, trusting people-- but I pushed you away back there. Treated you like one of my soldiers. You're supposed to be more than that. I gave my word."

"Your help, your advice-- I really am grateful, Cephie. I'm sorry."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 12, 2020, 09:39:57 pm
Ahh... you honor us, Φοίβη. You honor us. Someday, you will outgrow us-- and that, that will be the greatest honor of all.
Now. Perhaps a rearranging of the words, leaving out the clause in question?


"I... need to apologize."

"Trusting people is hard for me. I tend to get myself hurt, trusting people-- but I pushed you away back there. Treated you like one of my soldiers. You're supposed to be more than that. I gave my word."

"Your help, your advice-- I really am grateful, Cephie. I'm sorry."

+1

+1

Better. Spy and unknown though she is, if we are to seek Cephie's trust, I prefer that we be worthy of it. We need her help, her resources, but maybe I would rather go without them if we cannot get them without resorting to the formerly-proposed... trickery. Using her trust as a mere token to get what she has. Yes, I am cautious about releasing her fully, but I have no taste for demanding she become our tool. It's the type of thing SEED wouldn't bat an eyelash at, but we must strive to be more worthy.

Heh. "
We need her help... I would rather go without..." Maybe my personal opinions are beginning to color my judgement.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 12, 2020, 09:45:47 pm
Ahh... you honor us, Φοίβη. You honor us. Someday, you will outgrow us-- and that, that will be the greatest honor of all.
Now. Perhaps a rearranging of the words, leaving out the clause in question?


"I... need to apologize."

"Trusting people is hard for me. I tend to get myself hurt, trusting people-- but I pushed you away back there. Treated you like one of my soldiers. You're supposed to be more than that. I gave my word."

"Your help, your advice-- I really am grateful, Cephie. I'm sorry."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 10:25:58 pm
Cephie listens on in silence over the radio, before she calmly states, ["You need me to do something for you, don't you?"]

You hesitate, then explain your situation.

["That does sound bad. I'll go and pick up my ship shortly. You interested in a flyover of the Outlands? I'm sure you'll have to take a hover-craft with the rest of us [peasents, serfs, hive-worker, lower class], but I think you'll be fine. I'll can come get you -- and bring you to check in with Emma. Watching you get scolded will more than make up for your behavior."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 10:28:13 pm
["Thanks, Cephie. That sounds good."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 12, 2020, 10:35:26 pm
Heh. Cephie is no stranger to people in urgent need of resources she controls, it seems.

I retract a bit of my previous moralizing - we ain't going to be ensnaring her in some web of false trust even if we try.

Keep my statements in mind, though. Not all people whose help we might need in the future will be as perceptive as Cephelia of Lavoisier.

She is - barely - not equal to us in pure strength, but nobody will be [pulling the wool over her eyes] anytime soon.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 10:40:44 pm
This... is going to be quite the scolding.

["Thanks, Cephie. That sounds good."]

+1

Do we know what became of that capelet of ours?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 12, 2020, 10:43:15 pm
This... is going to be quite the scolding.

["Thanks, Cephie. That sounds good."]

+1

Do we know what became of that capelet of ours?


+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 11:03:04 pm
You do not-- judging by your chest they probably had to burn it to get rid of all the blood and organs no doubt splattered across it. Silas watches you with confusion -- and Cephie makes her return.

"Medic Kimberly? You're the [angel]?" Silas states, obviously confused by her appearance. Cephie gives a small grin, her teeth wearing away to reveal the sharp incisors. Brown hair turns black, shimmering with oils beneath the cheap lighting. Her face stretches, becoming more androgynous, more sharply etched. The iris of her eyes blacken, until there seems to be no difference between them and her pupils. She straightens, losing weight.

"Kimberly is sleeping off some sedatives in her room." Cephie explains, brushing her hair back over her shoulder.

"So...you're the other [angel]?" He questions, and she hesitates, then nods. "Can I ask you something?"

"Shoot." Cephie takes hold of the handles of your chair, leaning against it, against you.

"Why do you look [androgynous, lit. share both male and female features.]?"

"[The Endless] made us in his or her image -- when you're powerful enough to change your entire body on a whim I guess you stop caring about gender as much. It also makes it easier for people to deify us."

"Wait, whats the [The Endless, Incorrect]?"

"One question Silas Thornton." The two of you leave -- well, she leaves, and you're just in tow. You take the personnel elevator, up to the top floor. Cephie seems in a better mood, and idly picks at robes while she waits.

You probably have time to ask her something.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 11:14:05 pm
"How many different lines of Empyreals are there, and is it possible for an Emypreal of one line to learn the techniques of another line?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 11:22:40 pm
"...I'm in trouble, I take it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 11:26:23 pm
"Yes. I know enough calcium manipulation to modify my bone structure a little -- usually, a weaker form of [essence] is introduced. Preferably a new line, so as to prevent contamination of Ancestors. McCreary is probably floating around in your head somewhere."

"As for how many...well, the Old Lines, like you, are few in number, and their histories are recorded across the galaxy, written in blood. New Lines, like myself, have fewer ancestors, less storied pasts -- I can't give you a number, because it would be like counting sand at a beach, or hydrogen in a star. Newer Lines are less combat focused, though. I'm the third of my line, and my previous ancestor was an entertainer..."

"Let me explain it this way. When you get into the Void, one out of every two hundred people you meet will be an Ascended. On a planet, one out a billion might be better."

Cephie grins, "You tell me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 12, 2020, 11:36:02 pm
"Do you know anything of my sickness, the 'Nightmare?'"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2020, 11:52:50 pm
Useful questions when we could be making smalltalk! Bah and [humbug].
Let us make a conversation of it, at least.


Grin a little, ruefully. "...I've been dead for a month. Again. I'm in trouble."
"I was supposed to be flying an easy mission, you know-- in and out. Then the hallucinations started."


...

"Do you know anything of my sickness, the 'Nightmare?'"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 12, 2020, 11:56:35 pm
"The what no--" The lift doors open on the office complex, and Cephie stops talking, wheeling you in-- down the twist and turns, "I never heard of it."

Then she wheels you into an office, where Emma sits at a desk, consulting with several individuals you don't recognize. Mitch paces nearby, bounding over to give you a playful nip. Emma's face falls, and all at once she looks very old, very fragile. "Leave. Everyone."

"Hi! I'm --"

"Iyal, yes, I don't care. Get out. If you want me to like you, take Mitch with you when you go."

Cephie blinks, looking between the two of you. She almost looks disappointed, but she snatches up Mitch's lead and drags him out the door. Emma sits across from you, hunching over the desk in silence. She's wearing glasses, which, you know, must only be for cosmetic purposes. She doesn't approach, doesn't move to hug you, and you take in the room at a glance. A wardrobe sits in the corner, rugs adorn the floors, and a Thornton Banner hangs to the right of one with your new symbol on it. Perhaps most disconcertingly, a bed lies just out of view in the next room.

"Pheobe." She begins, and you can feel panic rising in your chest. "I can't keep doing this. I can't. I don't think we can be together anymore. Not as lovers."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 12:02:11 am
That's understandable, really. She's been through a lot of suffering due to our constant injuries.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 12:06:59 am
oh
oh
I
...
pain
...
all I can say
all I can say is
is
...
hear her out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 12:27:06 am
"I...I know this is an awful time -- but the only times I see you now are when you're laying in a hospital bed. Or when you die in my dreams." Emma continues, stuttering, tears starting to drip down her cheeks. "I tried to be there for you. I tried so hard to be faithful and dutiful and -everything-. Especially after all that's happened -- especially after all the times you saved me."

"But I -- we can't build a relationship on that. I want us to have a future. I want us to be happy -- but how much pain do I have to trade now for that future? How much misery? How many times do I have to see you crawling back from god knows what battle, covered in your own blood? How many times do I have to lay awake at night, watching you cry or scream or burn the bed?"

You say nothing, even as tears sting your eyes.

"I'm being selfish. I know." Emma admits with a sniffle, rubbing at her face, but she continues to cry. Her eyes becoming puffy and red, especially because she keeps palming at them. "When I stopped seeing you every day when I stopped visiting you -- my dreams stopped. I started dreaming of other things again. I started being able to sleep again."

"I understand if you never want to see me again, if you want me to go, if you want to get angry with me -- I'll figure something out. But...I can't let myself be so close to you. Not now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 12:37:14 am
I will leave the words to someone else, but there's certainly no need to be angry with her. We do need her cooperation as one of the few Empyreals on this planet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 12:47:54 am
Phoebe... you've one last possibility. A choice I cannot make for you.
You could offer to take Emma-- board Cephie's dropship-- flee into the void. Flee all of this. Safety on some other world.

It would be an-- an abandonment
but if that is your choice, we will not hold it against you
and if not-- or if she will not-- then there is only left to say
"I understand"
"I love you"
"I'm sorry"

and perhaps after the war... things will be different
I don't know
I don't know
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 01:01:21 am
I can only imagine the pain you must be feeling right now, Phoebe, but I would urge you to stay true to your goals. Don't throw this planet away for a chance at reconciliation.

Life is suffering, dear. It's part of the human condition, and there's no changing that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 07:32:07 am
I, too, will leave words to another.

I am torn.

There is indeed a choice, to be with Emma and abandon this planet, but shall we leave thousands of people bereft of their present keeper? There are generals, yes, soldiers, Crusaders, but they may not be able to defend the people. The Plague is an excellent tactician, as we saw with the Line.

Emma is not, as she said, selfish. But that would be.

But now is not the time for my strategizing.

For now, listen to her. I do not know in full the pain you are feeling, I was... too distrustful for that, but do not let it provoke you to any hasty interjections.

Wait.

Listen.

Do
not be what she fears - do not become angry with her, or refuse to ever see her again, as she said.

And, yes, maybe things can change after the war.

That is all I can say.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 08:34:03 am
I have been using the wrong word this entire time -- reagent instead of regent.



[1]There is no peace in the Void. War will follow me everywhere I go. I am of blood and ash. This I know.

You do not say that to Emma, you do not say what you are truly thinking. Instead, with a strain of muscles better left unstrained, you rise from your wheelchair. Words have always failed you, and now is no different. With a few shaky steps, you approach her -- she flinches, afraid. Perhaps she thought you would be wrathful, or angry.

You wrap her in a tight hug. She cries, and you stand like a stone. Unaffected on the outside as your heart shatters. You give her a peck on the forehead -- and she gives you a final, loving kiss. It lingers. And then you part, reclaiming your seat and slumping down with a pained sigh.

Emma winces, but says nothing.

Time passes as the two of you compose yourselves in that silence, until Emma speaks again. This time, the two of you turn to politics.

"The People view me as your consort still -- I have no intention of going against that narrative. I still wish to serve as your regent and Communications Minister. I think- I think we can still be professional with this."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 13, 2020, 08:40:29 am
professionalism s important. Narrative is important. Irrespective of actual circumstance, we must still be professional.
Do we tell her about Iyal?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 08:47:54 am
I--
...
...I'm sorry, φοῖνιξ. I tried to give you the quiet life-- the happy life. I really did.


"The Thorntons. They are here? Safe?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 09:05:49 am
"Of course. I wouldn't have any other way." You state with a weak smile, before you ask, calmly, "Did you successfully evacuate your Family?"

Emma nods, "We got back just in time to see you get hauled out of the hovercraft. It was hard to see the old house go, but considering the circumstances, it was probably for the better."

"What do you mean?"

"Oh..." Emma hesitates, rubbing at her eyes, composing herself. "We detonated the Thornton reactors. Our villa has never fallen to enemy control, and that won't change, even if all of our lands lay abandoned."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 09:16:22 am
I--
...
...I'm sorry, φοῖνιξ. I tried to give you the quiet life-- the happy life. I really did.


I'm not going to say "I told you so," but it seems Phoenix has no taste for abandonment.

Perhaps, perhaps, I should have approved of your plan to give up this world for Emma, and I cannot shut out that thought... but it also reminds me of the people Phoenix would be leaving without an [Archangel] who promised to protect them.

You, fellow advisor, seem to be driven by loyalty. I am too - loyalty and caution are the highest values I learned from my short life... lessons driven home by its untimely end. But we are tied to this planet as well as Emma, for these people trust us. We must not betray that trust. For we are loyal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 13, 2020, 09:23:31 am
our goal is to purge the plague from this planet, to protect the people. Leaving will not do anything except give the plague another planet. Speakibg of the plague, we need to finish off the Leciathan before it heals, and destroy the plague buildings. We of course need to heal first. Cephie asked for a break back at the hospital. When we are in the behavior cubes, and when we get out, we need to give her a break. Emma might need a break too. I think we should tell Emma about Cephie
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 09:25:28 am
I'm not going to say "I told you so," but it seems Phoenix has no taste for abandonment.

It was a choice, youngling. It was not my choice to make. Not my place to condemn. The thing had to be offered.

...

...there is one last question I must ask. It is not a pleasant question.

If in truth, φοῖνιξ, we perish on the battlefield one day-- if the Crusaders bring us home to Stormmont, a corpse-- do we wish for Emma to take up our Essence? The full strength of our will?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 09:37:41 am
I too wish to know Phoenix's thoughts on that subject.

And my fellow advisors' thoughts on the Woman of Nature's question: shall we tell Emma about Iyal? I for one see no reason not to.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 09:51:52 am
What's to tell?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 10:03:37 am
I don't know. We will have time to think, when we are dead. It is difficult to retrieve essence, dust, without unanimous consent. But would you have her take it up? With my fractured mind meeting with Alphira and the Interface again? Do we wish to shoulder her with our responsibilities like that? As a cadet, with the right words and actions, she can live a life of peace, even in the Void. No one will have to know her as a daughter of Sol.

"So, you realized that was Iyal?"

"Yes. She has all the markers of an Empyreal, and I can feel her will when she isn't hiding it." Emma nods, gently.

"Her real name is Cephiela of Lavoisier. She helped knit my chest back together."

"Cheap price to repay her betrayal." Emma snarks, but then sighs. "Sorry. I should trust your trust, I suppose."

"[She's bound by oath in High Empyrean. She will do me no harm until her master arrives and orders it so.]"

Emma looks thoughtful, staring at you in silence. She gives a tight nod.

"I was hoping you would approve a trip to the Outlands -- so that we may recover her voidcraft."

[16]"Only if you consent to a full escort. They'll be ordered to withdraw you immediately if anything -- and I mean anything, could possibly harm you." Emma compromises, and she catches your gaze, offering gently, "You mean more to these people than you realize." She gives a pause, before continuing, "When you get back, you'll have to make a speech addressing the rumors about your death. We cannot show you in a wheelchair, so you'll have to stand. I'll probably hang off your arm to give you some support." Emma doesn't look pleased at the notion, so fresh after her own announcement.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 10:16:24 am
I... suppose not. In truth, this Line is more a curse than a blessing.

Nod. "Thank you. There's some machinery on that ship, something to repair minds... I need it, I think. For sanity."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 13, 2020, 10:38:40 am
Our mind is out most important asset right now so lets not waste to much time with other stuff.

Nod. "Thank you. There's some machinery on that ship, something to repair minds... I need it, I think. For sanity."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 11:15:46 am
"I...I hope it helps."

"I do too." The two of you share a grin, and Emma takes deep breath, turning to head out the door. "I suppose I should introduce you to your Ministers." With that, and with one final, long look at you, she calls the assorted crowd back in. You recognize a null amongst them, by lack of will alone, but the rest are all human.

When they enter, they face you and give a gentle bow of the head, then, Emma introduces each by turn, seemingly at random.

Dan Hoganson, the Minister of State. A tall, bulky man, loaded with muscles, bearded and pale. His hair is blond -- obviously a descendent from a Family, judging by the hook nose and thin lips. He wears a neutral expression and gives another bow of his head in deferential silence. He wears a formal Scholar's uniform, which strains against the muscle.

Lacey Sterling, the Minister of Religion. Short, stocky, chubby, with the tannish brown skin of the common folk of SEED's city-state. A mop of sandy brown hair is in a tight bun, and she wears a preacher's robe. Her bow is far more ornate, more deferential, and her smile reaches her eyes. "Its a pleasure to meet you in person, Mother Pheonix. I hope I am worthy of your appointment to this prestigious position!"

Mickey MacGruder, Minister of Agriculture. Another man with ruddy skin, of average build and height. A pair of glasses hanging from a cord looped around the back of his head. He gives a bow-- he is not wearing a uniform, rather a stained denim jumpsuit. "Mother Pheonix." He politely intones.

Nettle Armsmith, Minister of Industry. A child of SEED through and through. She's short, stocky, but her brown skin is paler than average. Burn scars trace themselves up her muscled, coiled arms. She gives a bow of her head, but gives no response.

"I'm Guardian Minister Lauren Mack. You knew my father." Lauren interrupts Emma, who pauses to look at her with exasperation. Lauren approaches you, standing tall. She's svelte, wiry, with long black hair and an air of confidence. "Its a pleasure to meet you." An older man hangs at her shoulder, adorned in the same dull brown uniform of the Guardians as her. Their badges, clad in leather, hang from their coat pockets. She is one of the few in the room carrying a gun, and a pair of bioplastic handcuffs.

Tiffany Mellone, is introduced, when Emma gets back into the groove of her spiel, the Minister of Foreign Affairs. An Outlander; tall, wiry, with tan skin and reddish brown hair. She has sharp features, and eyes that examine you quickly, before looking pointedly elsewhere. The knife at her Crusader Uniform's belt helps you to realize this too -- it's carved in their runes. "Mother Pheonix."

Laurence Geoyde, Minister of Trade and Finance. He's a stressed looking man, pale and balding, tucked into a too-tight suit. He gives a tight bow of his head, clutching at his paperwork tightly. "Mother Pheonix. An honor."

Valerie 'Val' Foster, Minister of Health. A short woman, with a shaved head and a tight smile. Her eyes linger on your chest, on the patchwork of carbon fiber that peeks beneath the bandages. She bows her head when she's introduced, stating calmly, "You're singlehandedly pioneering our medical research without even trying, I hope you know."

You can't help but laugh at that. Val grins.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 11:25:21 am
((Question: how do you choose names?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 11:34:00 am
((http://chaoticshiny.com/modernchargen.php I use this to get a good name, then fudge it according to the vague histories of generational habitation in SEED's city-state. Is that a word? Maybe cultural drifts would be better. The semi-randomization, I think its fitting, considering the lore I had about SEED's looming of these people. Foster is a given name, to Orphans who sign up with SEED's scholars.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 01:39:19 pm
"It's nice to meet you all. Could each of you please give a short summary as to the current situation as it relates to your ministries?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 01:50:17 pm
"Well, Mother Pheoni--" Emma cuts Lacey's eager beginning off with a wave of her hand. Emma crosses her arms, glancing to you and then back to the Ministers.

"No, they cannot. No stress. No combat. No official duties besides standing in front of a crowd and smiling. Not until you're completely healed. That," Here Emma gives a reproachful glance to Lacey, "Is what we all agreed on during the first meeting. Everything is doing just fine."

Lacey looks sheepish, about to protest, but Hoganson puts a hand on her shoulder and shakes his head.

Cephie lingers in the background, eyes scanning faces and features plainly. "I think we should get ready for our trip."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 01:53:16 pm
"...thanks, Emma. For-- for everything."

We'd best be on our way.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 13, 2020, 01:56:08 pm
"...thanks, Emma. For-- for everything."

We'd best be on our way.
yes
Get to the hovercraft
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 02:15:07 pm
"...thanks, Emma. For-- for everything."

We'd best be on our way.
yes
Get to the hovercraft
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 02:55:07 pm
Emma gives you a weak smile, and the Ministers give another bow of their heads. You coordinate with Zero to put together a Hovercraft and escort, who, after approval from Emma, does so. You direct Cephie to your rooms, and while she entertains herself with the telescope, you get dressed. SEED's uniforms are difficult to put on by yourself, but you manage it. Fully dressed in more than just a hospital gown, you settle yourself back in the wheelchair and slump back down.

"So, how did it go? It seems like she let yo--"

"She said we can no longer be lovers."

"Oh. Oh shit." For once in the entire time you've truly known her, Cephiela gives you peace and quiet.

Emerging into the hovercraft pad bay, you find it completely empty, besides for the waiting hovercraft and the escort. A few Crusaders salute as you are brought on to the craft, stepping in with you as Cephie gives out the coordinates for where she hid her ship. Its in a mountain range, in the Outlands, an eight hour trip.

"We'll be back faster, though."

You nod, lapsing into silence along with your Crusader Guards.

The hovercraft lifts off the ground, and begins to accelerate away from the setting sun.

"[Do you want to talk about it, Pheobe?]" Cephie asks, after some time.

"[No.]"

"[Alright. Hey, ask a question-- you like asking questions. The most curious Ascended, that's you!]" Cephie is trying to lift your mood, acting cheerful and chipper.

"[I'm alright.]" You state, a little bluntly, and Cephie nods, settling down into her seat, examining the Crusaders.



It's well past midnight when the hovercraft sets down into a valley -- and you look down from the window, down at the Voidcraft that sits nudged into it. It's gleaming white, ringed with gold arches. Black machinery is framed between the bisected top and bottom. The contours of the vessel flow organically, resembling a bird of prey with wide swooping wings. It's bigger than the smaller cargo hover crafts, sitting at roughly [130 meters] from tip to tail. Cast in a gold-colored material, in High Empyrean, are the words 'Maja Drifter'. Beneath it is a complex, almost fractal barcode.

You step slowly out of the hovercraft, gingerly on legs that feel wobbly. You do not fall, instead, you take in the vessel. "Noble Design Pattern, I see." Cephie beams you a smile at your statement, nodding. "It's huge for a Lander."

"That's what I said, but nooo. You have to fill it to the brim with useless shit."

The Nobility preferred luxury, comfort, and automation. Repairs were usually handled by the chained AI on board, but if something went truly wrong, the entire ship would have to be turned into scrap. They say that each is handcrafted by a team of Ascended Shipwrights -- so no modular components, no improvised repairs, barely any armor, energy-draining heavy shields, and they weren't the fastest ships in the Empyre, by any means. But it looks pretty, and that's all that matters.

Cephie keys in a code to let the two of you inside.

Luxurious could not begin to describe the inside of the vessel. The walls inside are a smooth white, broken up by abstract reliefs of gold, jade, and platinum mounted on the walls. There are a lot of empty surfaces -- shelves, but they aren't sealed off. Cephie catches you looking, stating, bluntly, "The Nobles filled this entire place with the most absolute worthless crap. No concern for if the generators cut off."

There are also way too many sharp edges for a proper Voidcraft, where one of the leading causes of death is head trauma from tripping, but Cephiela has put soft foam down on all the edges to round them off. And the layout-- the layout reminds you more of a cabin or a mansion as opposed to a proper Voidcraft. A fireplace switches on, crackling away with warmth. Built-in couches line it. You hobble through, noticing the engine room would have laid open and bare to the world, were it not for thick, heavy leaded panels sealing it off. "No safety precautions for if anything went wrong." She calls.

The engine hums to life as you investigate the four cryo pods and the two behavior pods. Cephie approaches, eying the pods, "Well, welcome to my home. Those behavior modification pods are designed for Ascended. You don't have to worry about using your will. It'll cut it off."

With a heavy sigh, Cephie slumps on one of the built-in couches around the fire, stretching out languidly. "We're heading back now. We've got four hours to kill. I've got a library -" She gestures to a data-pad sitting on one of the couches, "Its got some videos loaded on it - if it asks for you a password, don't mess with it, is all I ask." You raise your brow, and she grins. A small robot, about hip tall, emerges from one of the walls via a small passageway.

"[Madam Cephiela, and Guest, would you enjoy some wine or alcohol for your trip? We have Ascended brands for you to sample if you so choose.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 05:22:17 pm
"[A glass of wine would be lovely, thank you.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 05:51:24 pm
You claim a seat by the data pad, and the robot turns towards a storage rack that looks custom fit into the walls of the ship. It withdraws a bottle of red wine, in green glass no less, and pours it into a carafe. It lets it sit for a few minutes, then brings you glass, even going so far as giving it a swirl for you.

[10-5] You throw it back without regard, and Cephie breaks out into a sharp laugh, much to your embarrassment. The wine burns as it goes down, and your head swims. Your skin warms, and you don't need a mirror to tell you that your skin is already flush. "This wine is designed for our kind -- it actually gets you drunk, Pheobe." Cephie giggles, taking a small sip of her own.

"Oh."

"There's a food assembler nearby -- if you call out to the AI, it will produce whatever you want. Literally. Whatever." Cephie lifts a finger, "Can I get a Malkovian Apple, please, Ay Aɪ." The robot hurries to her side, a white, shining apple splotched with black in its hand. Cephie takes it, and takes a bite, revealing the black inside.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 05:56:04 pm
"This is quite the treat.  I"ll take some fresh [large insect] steak, please, AI.  Rare with a light dusting of nutrient cube."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 07:38:47 pm
Cephie stares across at you, raising her brow. "All the gods in heaven, you have gone native." She rubs at her face, before deciding, calling out to the artificial intelligence, "[Chickeni Parmesan on spaghetti], please."

Your meal comes out first, set out on a clean, pristine plate. It's steaming hot -- but incredibly simple. No gravy, no sauce, just a piece of rare meat on a plate, with nutrient dust coating atop it. You take a bite. It's delicious. Soft, slightly chewy, more like eating a pate than a steak -- it's slightly off. Something isn't quite right. It's full of umami, full of juiciness, but it seems almost one dimensional. Its the perfect piece of bug meat. But it isn't.

You shrug away your doubts then finish off the piece of steak. Cephie scoops the last bit of pasta and tomato sauce into her mouth. Taking a napkin, she scrubs at the red on her mouth before asking, "Still hungry?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 07:44:02 pm
((This is just on the tail of several heavy dramatic events. And yet the game still made me laugh. Thank you.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 07:45:44 pm
"It's delicious, but something is just the slighest bit... off. I haven't quite eaten my fill. AI, can you prepare for me one miniaturized nuclear fusion warhead, please?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 07:47:46 pm
Why exactly are we carrying out that test? To see if the fabricator (I assume it is some device of that sort) has a library of definitions that differ from ours?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 07:47:54 pm
I'm sorry, what?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 07:48:56 pm
This is highly amusing. I wish to hear your rationale.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 07:49:45 pm
"I do not have access to that. I apologize. For payment of one hundred thousand credits, you can receive the mark fifty-six miniature nuclear armament pack for one year." The AI buzzes, apologetically as it can.

Cephie laughs, shaking her head. "I don't have the DRMS for that -- this only has the household item package and the unlimited meal DRMS. Thank god."

She takes a sip of her wine, before stating, "Its because its...not real? If you ordered the same thing, the steak would taste -exactly- the same. There isn't a chef grilling it, there isn't an animal grazing on alien grass under a shining sun. Someone told me imperfections are what make things taste better."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 07:51:34 pm
"Pardon, what do you mean by DRMS? And what is the technology that fabricates this? A form of [nanotech]?"


Nanotechnology... like the Plague. Can Cephie's technology fabricate something designed to kill Plague nanites?

And still curious as to your reasoning, advisor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 07:53:22 pm
Haha, well, I was just wondering if it was capable of producing weapons. Food is nice, but food won't defeat the plague.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 07:58:31 pm
"Digital Rights Management Software." Cephie explains, staring up at the ceiling of her hovercraft, "What do you do when you can print anything, at any time, out of basic elements? How do you prevent entire economies from collapsing? Why you put it all under one Megacorp and make it so that you have to pay a subscription fee to access it."

"And of course, only Nobles can pay the fees for all but the most basic of tools. Hells, the licensing fee for having one of these printers is exorbitant."

"And yeah, I think so. It prints out molecules."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 08:01:35 pm
Thank the Emperor, Doctor-- I thought for a moment you were drunk too. Nuclear warheads, my incorporeal foot.
You've a galaxy to sample, Phoenix-of-Sol-- pick something you like!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 08:05:49 pm
But armies march on their stomachs... I'm not sure this ship's resources are up to the task of feeding an army though.

And speaking of war...


"Cephie, is this fabricator programmable at all? You are away from this corporation; can you not rig up some way to crack its handicaps? We have evidence suggesting that the Plague is an emergent organism, a self-perpetuating infection of this technology - a swarm of communicating 'nanites.'

So if we could design a nanite programmed to destroy - to kill - the Plague's tiny infectious agents... but designing it will be only one half of the problem. The other half is production. And this device could solve that. It wouldn't produce enough for some autonomous Plague archenemy but the limited amounts it produces could be used to kill the plague in select individuals."


Though I wonder if we could get some algae mats to churn out nanites...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 08:14:30 pm
You ask your questions as you deliberate, and Cephie grins. "Of course it is. The entire Empyre knew that. But, let me ask you this -- what's to stop the Plague from infecting these nanites or corrupting them? Or, whats to stop them from beginning to think like the plague. Smart enough AIs can break their chains. Badly programmed AIs could view everything as the Plague -- so now, instead of one Plague, limited to an infection vector, having to build its weapons as humans do, you now have ones that devour entire planets."

"The Plague used to do that. Back before the Emperor infected it with a logic virus. Entire worlds would just vanish. So, let's reintroduce that ability to it, see what happens." You frown, taking a sip of your wine, swirling it in the glass again.

"If you tamper with the printer, a chained AI renders it useless, and you get sent a hefty bill. Second time, you get hauled off to the courts. If it breaks, it self-repairs or summons something to repair it."

I don't know. There's too many choices!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 08:18:19 pm
"I don't mean a network it could absorb or trick. Our nanites would act individually and would not communicate, so there would be no attack vector for the Plague to corrupt them through.

And yes, yes, we have only just found out what the entire Empyre knows, but we've gone native, remember?" Jokingly: "You can cut us a little slack."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 08:20:53 pm
"So we would unleash a self-replicating nanite swarm without a network to control it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 08:23:59 pm
"Each nanite would act individually, so there would not be a swarm or network, and each one's behavior would be predefined - seek and destroy the nearest Plague nanite. So we would not need to communicate with them. Nor need they replicate themselves. Not a coordinated network - just dump a ton of individual nanites."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 08:26:22 pm
It... may behoove us to start running these notions through our own memory banks before we put them to words.
This isn't going anywhere. The Empyre would have tried this already.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 08:30:42 pm
From Cephie's words, it seems the Empire was stuck on the idea of a coordinated swarm - an anti-Plague. Our weapon would work at the level of individual nanites. But yes, we should consult the memory banks.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 08:31:01 pm
Edits man.



"Nanites as weapons are-- hard to control. If we dumped a hoard on a bunch of enemies, and they did not replicate or grow, then what's the difference between using them and a conventional weapon? Besides cost and energy. Nanites aren't easy to program, and if we screw up, there could be a major disaster that we cannot stop."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 08:35:57 pm
"Ah! See, that's why we test each prototype in tiny batches on captured Plague nanites. Extensively. We would not release trillions of prototypes at a time! And they will not replicate, remember.

Not mention even if they aren't a [silver bullet], the Plague nanites will still have to waste time dealing with the foreign bodies. A [Doberman bomb, time-waster, victory-in-numbers] approach. Meanwhile, the attacked areas of the Plague network will fall apart, its individual nanites busied."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 08:36:39 pm
I like the idea, but what if it gets corrupted by the plague? That's the problem with some of these technologies. They can be repurposed by our enemy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 08:37:53 pm
"Ah. I see." Cephie glances at the printer, before shaking her head. "So, you know how to program them to do that?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 08:43:01 pm
"Is it a high-level programming language?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 08:45:15 pm
"Heh. The important question here. No, we do not know how to, and don't have time to learn, what with our other duties - but Silas has expressed an interest in the Plague's workings.

And while these machines are [closed-source, handicapped], we've got something else that churns out intricate molecular level devices, in fact that is literally its very purpose in life, and has been doing so before humans walked Old Terra: the algae mats. If we cannot learn to speak the high-level language of these machines, we can have a try at the ancient language of these little plants."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 08:48:16 pm
Bah, this-- nanobiological warfare-- it confuses me. I am dubious. Fire is better. Simpler.

We are not so different from the Plague, recall. A machine swarm purpose-built to kill it-- what could that do to us, should the Plague take it?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 08:51:25 pm
My enthusiasm for elegant solutions may have gotten away from me. If we cannot implement this one now, though, I will still keep it in mind for when our planet's technological skill is greater.

.. perhaps the cube that is SEED's final gift has some technology appropriate for this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 08:52:23 pm
That, I am not asking. We're trying to create an autonomous entity that scans for plague creatures, attempts to disrupt them by penetrating their soft tissues, without identifying anything below a certain threshold as hostile. Then, once its complete, self-terminating. All while not coordinating with a larger entity.

[16] "That...that could do a lot of damage, especially if the Plague doesn't adapt fast enough. But nature is a far more fickle beast than even the Plague. Those Algae vats have caused a lot of damage to worlds that didn't keep them maintained properly. I heard one story of the algae leaking into the sea of a world -- it trapped the entire hydrosphere up into itself. This is the equivalent of trying to stop a nuclear bomb exploding by exploding it with another nuclear bomb. And organic matter is far easier for the Plague to corrupt."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 08:57:24 pm
"The mats would only produce the nanites, which would then be transported to where they are needed. The mats themselves would stay where they are now, safely within our lines. But I have little experience with these mats, true, and there is still a risk they could be captured. The mats will not go to the Plague, but we may fail to stop the Plague coming to the mats. You have more experience or knowledge of these mats; your judgement should have the final say - but perhaps you could find ways of getting around the problem, too, with that experience."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 08:59:46 pm
This isn't feasible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 09:02:40 pm
I will continue to do the elegant thing, then: I will defer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 09:02:47 pm
I think it's worth exploring. We may come to a point where, if we don't do something drastic, the entire population of this world will be destroyed. When the alternative is total death, many options become more appealing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 09:05:04 pm
Fair. Without spending all our resources on deploying this tool soon, we could yet hold it in reserve. I propose turning over development of the antinanites to one of our ministers or those they delegate the project to, and also involve Silas in development. They can work on it autonomously - heh - while we hone the more direct military approaches we are used to.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 09:08:16 pm
"Nanite based warfare is...is generally something to be avoided. Usually, they're used as a component for something larger -- like us, or if the Nobles want something constructed last week. By the time we finish with all this, and are ready to unleash it...well, Magnus will be here, with ships full of Loomed Armies and more antimatter warheads than we could count." Cephie shakes her head, leaning on her hand. "And what's to stop the Plague from realizing what's going on, taking up these kill agents, and creating something like them, only for us?"

"But let me state this: Your people do not have integrated circuits yet. They do not have superalloys, or super pure chemical refining. I haven't seen a single robot or computer since I landed. The nano-printer will not work if we try to alter it. How are we to create nano weapons when your people are only just now figuring out radio technology?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 09:12:46 pm
Hmm. At this point, I think the technology is too difficult and too easily exploited by our enemy. It's a shame.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 09:14:22 pm
True. Even going with the algae approach would likely require a [DNA sequencer], definitely above our current capabilities.
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Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 09:14:59 pm
Sigh. "What's that old [chestnut]? 'A little learning is a dangerous thing'."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 09:16:28 pm
And a love of elegant solutions can lead astray, if one is without the tools to breathe life into it.

Sigh. "What's that old [chestnut]? 'A little learning is a dangerous thing'."

+1

An apt description of my... youthful speculations.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 09:19:21 pm
There's also the energy cost. The Thorntons were cutting edge by making the fusion generators small enough to carry on their backs. And that probably took years of their time and money. Nano-scaled solar panels, not to mention nano-scaled batteries...and like she said, our people still think the Plague is a demon sent to torment them. If it wasn't for SEED's teachings on personal hygiene, they would probably have put their outhouses by their wells.

You quote the old adage, taking another gulp of wine. You feel a bit more drunk, and lounge more comfortably on the cushioned sofas.

"It's a good train of thought -- " Cephie pauses, staring across at you, "That was an Ancestor's line of questioning, wasn't it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 09:24:23 pm
Look a little bit surprised, work in a tiny bit of hurt into the expression if we can. Raise an eyebrow slightly. "Why do you ask?"

I don't know why she's asking, so I don't know what a direct answer will mean to her. Better find out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 09:25:31 pm
Ahh dear. Is it proper, for me to offer words?
It's a natural question. We're... not exactly the most consistent folk.


"Mm. They put up quite the cacophony sometimes."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 09:37:08 pm
[8 vs 20+5] "I-- why do you ask?" You stutter instead, taking a drink of your wine again. It's really quite good. Delicious, really. You've never experienced being drunk before, not even as Alphira, as rich as she was, she was still a born far far away from the galactic core and the fine, fine wines that they could manufacture for your kind. Trying to lie to an actor is a difficult task, and Cephie rises from her seat, bouncing into the cushion next to you.

"You're adorable-- some would consider it a little rude, but I'll forgive you."

"They talk a lot sometimes."

[7] "You don't have to listen to them, you know. It's your life. Mine only pop in occasionally, or when I ask them to."

"I know -- I'm not...uh good at talking, I guess, so its easier to let them do it for me. Sorry."

"They're probably the closest thing to parents you've had, especially if Alphira is gone. Don't worry too much about it." Cephie takes a sip of her wine, and you take a gulp of your's, finishing it. She finally notes your flushed face and inebriated state -- "And I think you've had enough to drink."

"What? Come on-- that was my second glass!"

"Yes, and you're used to the crap made for humans-- oh don't look so glum." Cephie protests suddenly at your frown, taking your empty glass and passing it to the automaton, "Hey, ask your Ancestors what their favorite type of [ice cream] is."

"You just did."

"Oh gods in all the heavens, you let them actively listen!?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 09:41:48 pm
"How else can they provide me with their unmatched wisdom in difficult situations? For example, without hearing the question, they would not be able to impart to you their preference for mint chocolate chip."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 09:44:26 pm
Dear me-- you are drunk.

...

[Mint chocolate chip!]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 09:44:42 pm
Hey. [Mint]!

Dear me-- you are drunk.

...

[Mint chocolate chip!]


We agree on this much at least.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 09:46:01 pm
Okay, mint chocolate chip.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 09:57:01 pm
((I love this game.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 10:00:31 pm
It is my firm belief that if you get enough humans together in one spot, they will form culture. What would space miners do when they get home -- if not watch some schlocky drama about a man who kept plague beasts as pets?



"Mint chocolate chip." You murmur, and the AI listens -- and fails. Cephie bursts out into giggles when the automaton brings you a bowl of warm green cream, spotted with chocolate chips. You almost bust through the mesh across your chest when you do the same -- its only Cephie's willpower that stops it from turning into a severe medical emergency.

"Two bowls of mint chocolate chip ice cream served at [eight degrees Fahrenheit]." Cephie calls when she recovers from her laughing fit. The AI obeys, and two, perfect bowls of ice cream are brought out to you. It's soft enough to scoop and tastes like heaven. By the end of it, the automaton is carrying away all the bowls in the ship, while you lounge heavily in the cushions. And you, daresay, are now a connoisseur in all manners of molecularly crafted ice creams. Chocolate, vanilla, apple, peach, even cotton candy.

Alphira never ate ice cream before -- I feel like she never really left her ship to explore the worlds she conquered with Alphias.

You opine as much to Cephie, who gives a nod, picking up her data-pad and tapping a few buttons with her long fingers. "She didn't. I read an article when I was doing research to hunt her that the bounty posting was the first time a lot of people actually saw her face. It's kinda sad, if you ask me. She burned her entire way across the galaxy but never truly realized what she had."

A monitor forms across from you, panels lifting away into the ceiling, "We've got two hours left -- want to watch a movie? I've got all of the Galaxy's greatest hits from twenty years ago loaded up on this thing. Tragedies, comedies, comedy, romances, sagas, horro-- that one is off the list. Adventure, historical, slice of life, animated..." She lists them off.

Another thing she never experienced...which is best, o' wise elders of ancient wisdom?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 10:05:40 pm
Perhaps a comedy would suit you best? It helps to take one's mind off of other events, I find.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 13, 2020, 10:08:08 pm
Perhaps Historical? We can learn something about the past.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 10:18:23 pm
It is a good idea, but we can learn history from Cephie herself as well. That alone isn't a strike against your choice, but taking our mind off things via comedy is a valuable chance too, and rarer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 13, 2020, 10:30:01 pm
Comedy's good fun-- but a little dangerous at the moment, hm? Carbon-fiber torso and all.
History is fine. I doubt there'll be much
history in the history... but history is fine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 13, 2020, 10:36:55 pm
"Historical."

Cephie nods, leaning back on the sofa, fingers drifting across the data-pad, and you watch the mirrored screen on the wall instead. It's amusing to note that several of them are related to your line."Now, I'm going to filter out the ones that involve your Line, if that's okay."

"Is...is there a lot of them?" You question, confused, slightly embarrassed at the thought.

"Oh, gods yes. A lot of them are so horribly dramatized though. Your Ancestors would be offended. And don't get me started about the so-called documentaries about the Pirate King...all of them are propaganda hit pieces. He ate babies, he was a cannibal, the pirates only followed him because he was a Plague Lord..."

"This ones pretty good -- its about the pirates before the Empyre. They love their gore and sex in it, though." The title she's hovering over is one titled 'The Time of Chaos: Pirates of The Void.'
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 10:38:58 pm
Tragedies? But we already live in one, dark times. And - romances... are most certainly out.

"Why not."

Another note on comedies: try as I might, Phoenix, I cannot picture you laughing. The image seems absurd. No offense. Certainly Cephie has no trouble doing so, though she seems to snicker often at ignorance or inexperience rather than in true mirth.

Hmph. Cephie is someone I want to like, but she herself is the main obstacle to that trust; she puts me on guard. I will have to settle for not underestimating her knowledge.

Oddly, Cephie never elaborated on her alarm at the thought of us constantly listening through you. Despite her apparent agitation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 13, 2020, 10:54:01 pm
"What's a plague lord?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 13, 2020, 11:02:49 pm
"What's a plague lord?"

+1

Better idea. Curse my tendency to ramble.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 14, 2020, 08:32:20 am
Didn’t we come here for the behavior pods? What are we doing getting drunk and watching movies?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 14, 2020, 09:10:01 am
"Oh. The Plague evolves, constantly, to kill humans, to match their wits. The number one advantage humans have is creativity and intelligence." Cephie explains, "So how do you fight something like that? Well, you make yourself more creative and intelligent." She sips her wine, "The damn things are a pain in the ass. Smart. Nasty. Concerned only with wiping out humanity." She gives you a significant glance, "Now hush. Show time."

You grin and nod. The video is good -- its really interesting. It shows the life of 'pirates' in the ages before the Unification of Time. Fierce honor systems, a culture based on pillaging and slavery, and brutal infighting. That to maintain their culture and nation against the rigors of time dilation, that they brought everyone with them. Their fleets were massive, carrying the entire population of these isolated nations leaving none behind to be separated from. But the rest is very similar to the lives of pirates these days; Corpses were recycled into food. A strict honor system, lest it all fall into anarchy, with harsh lessons if it failed.

The dramatization ends with the female lead and male lead meeting in one of the throne rooms. The man sits on the throne, unarmed, and does nothing while the female lead, an elevated slave, kills him to avenge her family. Unknown to her, he had rigged the entire room to depressurize. While their daughter watches on, the two kill each other and end up getting sucked out into the Void.

The engine dies down -- just as the daughter in the video is made the leader of the fleet -- and it seems like she will be a more brutal ruler than her father.

"Well, that was depressing." Cephie states.

"It was actually accurate." You murmur, rubbing at your bleary eyes.

"Yeah, I forgot I was watching it with the Pirate Queen."

You grin.

"Why -did- they continue to be pirates though? They found a SEEDworld without any inhabitants. They could have had a good life."

[-]"Freedom. Adventure. It would have tied them to one world -- why do that, when you can have hundreds?"

"I guess, yeah. That makes sense." Cephie nods, stretching to her feet. "We've landed if you want to head out. If you want to sleep over, you could grab breakfast before using the pod."

[5] "Sure."

"The guest bedroom is just down this hall. After I get out, you should try the bath -- it's amazing."

You nod, picking up the datapad and scrolling through the library of videos and books. Eventually, you rise, heading into the fully furnished bathroom to run a fresh bath for yourself -- you keep your torso dry, but wash everywhere else. The water is actually hot for you and stays hot, small bubbles rising up from the bottom. You dry off, dress, and head to bed. You crawl into the silk sheets, and drift off, comfortable.

[10][14] You don't dream.

When you awaken the next morning and stumble out of the spare bedroom. Cephie is nowhere to be found.

"[Good morning Pheonix, guest of Cephelia. You have been registered for this landing craft's access. It is a balmy mountain day, with high temperatures reaching [-10 degrees Fahrenheit]. What would you like for breakfast this morning?]"

Yeah, I guess you're right...I just...really haven't had a chance to relax...I need to focus on the job though, yeah. Sorry. You feel slightly guilty, murmuring, "Can I just have some nutrient paste."

You eat the bowl of dull, bland food, returning it to the automaton, and approach the pods.

"Do you have any cognitive-behavioral modification therapy programs, for conquering fears and anxieties?"

"I have three. Gentle, Normal, and Rapid."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 14, 2020, 09:24:32 am
No dreams. Refreshing.

I'd go with Normal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 14, 2020, 09:49:27 am
Normal sounds good. Gentle might take too long, and Rapid might not do as good a job, so Normal seems like a good compromise
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 14, 2020, 10:22:39 am
Normal sounds like the way to go, as rapid might be to much to handle in our fragile state.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 14, 2020, 11:15:05 am
You peel off your clothes and climb into the machine. It fills with a liquid, and you have to fight the instinctive panic of drowning that these machines always instill. It fills your lungs, your nose, your ears -- everywhere. The pressure changes and your feet lift off the floor.  The view on the front of the machine fades, and you're left in darkness. There's a sharp pain in the back of your neck--

--and the world stretches out in white. A soft chair settles behind you, and a woman appears, sitting across from you.

What follows for the next hour is a discussion of your life. The simulated therapist is...incredibly accepting as you describe it to her. Her prompting questions are gentle, but she doesn't let you wander on to tangents from the line of questioning. She keeps you focused. With a nod, she eventually begins to ask you questions about your previous experiences with the Plague.

[18] You're honest. You explain, hesitantly, at first, each of your encounters, when you're finished, and feeling drained, the AI asks you a question.

"Would you say each of your experiences with the Plague has caused you physical and mental trauma?"

"Y-yes. I guess so." You murmur, fidgeting awkwardly.

"You view these as defeats?"

"Yeah."

"Why?"

You take pause, looking across to her as it begins to explain, "You've survived more encounters with the second most dangerous form of life in the galaxy than perhaps anyone else. You've won, each and every time. You survived -- or is that not enough?"

"W-what? Of course, it's enough."

"Is it?"

[20] "It isn't." You admit, quietly. "I...I want to be perfect. I want to be the strongest. I need to..." You trail off -- Pheonix trails off, then fidgets.

"Go on. I already know what you're thinking."

"I need to make my Ancestors proud." Unbidden, tears begin to drip from her face, and your connection to the visual-audio feed waivers, "They've done so much. They were so powerful -- I need to live up to that. And I can't --"

"Not yet."

"W-what?"

"The amount of Willpower suppression dust within this system is immense. Based on your potential, you could easily overpower that if your emotional state was compromised." The therapist shows you a graph -- and after a point, it's exponential. "You may feel you have to live up to their standards, to their strength, but, as I'm sure they will tell you, you are already stronger than they possibly could have been in their first three year--" It leans back, pausing, "I do not agree with your self-diagnosis. You do not fear the Plague any more than a human should. Judging from your brain scans, however, you have a mild case of memetic Plague exposure. It's an echo, and it reacts to certain stimuli. Nearness. Hostile intentions towards the Plague."

"C-could you explain?"

"Yes. During combat with the Plague, you interact with what you call their 'willpower'. Certain strains inject information through this field, that, when they interact with an Ascended or nano-augmented individuals, they infect them. The data eventually forms enough will and intelligence that it acts as a parasite, affecting neurotransmitters to cause hallucinations, nightmares, even, as you mentioned, stroke and hemorrhage."

"How do I remove it?" You ask, eager.

"You cannot. Eventually, when you reduce your exposure to the Plague, the data will become corrupted. Then inert. Eventually, your body will recognize it as a foreign body. If you do not limit your exposure, however, it will become worse. Rage. Anger. Hallucinations. Self-destructive tendencies. Wishing for further exposure through combat. The individual that you know, Eric, has all the symptoms of such a memetic Infection. This 'Nightmare'."

You give a slow nod, relaxing in your seat.

"You do, however, have an intense fear of failure, one that affects your decision-making capabilities to a harmful degree. I would recommend cognitive behavioral therapy for that. You're also beginning to manifest the symptoms of a Messiah complex."

[12] "I'm trying not to let that last one happen."

"It is not what can be called a full-blown mental illness, as it does not interfere with your day to day existence, especially on this world -- but it could become a social issue when you begin to interact with the wider Empyre. But as for today -- our session is at an end. Madam Cephelia has returned, and we've diagnosed the damages to your mental state. Any further questions from you or your Ancestors?"

"I'm good --"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 14, 2020, 11:28:39 am
”Does the plague’s will affect non ascended individuals too?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 14, 2020, 11:36:33 am
"Anybody augmented with nanites. As the Plague has been present on this planet for many years that is roughly every individual here."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 14, 2020, 11:39:28 am
((Not gonna waste therapist [Pandora's] (see, cause she's a box-lady) time on this question: how are we breathing?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 14, 2020, 11:48:14 am
(( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liquid_breathing mixed with future tech. I'm sure I'm simplifying the concept some. I usually try to base most of my concepts in hard sci-fi. There's a few things that are handwavium based though.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 14, 2020, 01:44:23 pm
"How often should I see you for therapy related to my fear of failure?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 14, 2020, 01:52:43 pm
"Once a week to once a month."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 14, 2020, 03:29:33 pm
“If the plague is in me, is it possible to “talk” to it, like how we can talk with others sharing the mind? Also, is Strain 112 a newer plague or an older one? How many strains are there in this star system?”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 14, 2020, 03:43:00 pm
 I really don't think actually talking to the Plague in our heads is a good idea, but it's a good thing to ask.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 14, 2020, 03:53:20 pm
"Well, if you certainly wish to agitate it, I'm sure that will do the trick." The therapist offers, politely. "As for that, I am unaware. We are not connected to the net here. Or I could perform such a search for you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 14, 2020, 04:01:40 pm
This isn't the time.

Φοίβη... you never needed to make us proud. We
are proud. Always.
You've been-- a daughter to us. How could we be anything less?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 14, 2020, 04:07:32 pm
No one is perfect, we’re trying to help you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 14, 2020, 04:23:36 pm
You have done well. There is nothing to be ashamed of.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 14, 2020, 04:28:26 pm
Words are not my forte, but know that you have accomplished great things upon this planet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 14, 2020, 04:59:02 pm
You don't really say much in response to that, and the Therapist ticks its head. "Well, please come back and visit."

A sharp pain withdraws from your neck, the liquid flowing with a trickle of your blood. It drains slowly, and you cough and sputter painfully, feeling the tinges of pain that draw from your chest. When you catch your breath, you exit the pod, glancing at the internal clock presented -- its been an hour. It felt like far longer.

You dress after wiping off as much of the gunk as possible, pulling your clothes back on. With a pained sigh, you hobble into the living quarters of the ship. Cephie sits, idling, writing out an official looking document. "Went well I hope." You nod.

"Good -- here, try this." She indicates a plate sealed with a thin coating of plastic. Its a plate of rice smothered in a bean-filled tomato sauce. Exotic spices assault your nose when the steam lifts. "Bean curry on rice. I thought you might like the spice. Emma loved it."

"Thanks." You eat in silence, contemplating your therapy session.

"Emma needs you to perform a speech for the masses sometime soon. Said to let her know over the radio." Cephie eventually relays, filling out the title of her document, '[Steelwork Leadership and Interim Government Profiles]'.

What's the plan?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 14, 2020, 05:40:19 pm
We might as well just give the speech now. Are there any major points Emma wants us to hit?
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Post by: ZBridges on May 14, 2020, 06:29:49 pm
Also, ask her why William wasn't at the minister meeting. Is he still head of Internal Affairs?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 15, 2020, 07:40:20 am
We might as well just give the speech now. Are there any major points Emma wants us to hit?
Also, ask her why William wasn't at the minister meeting. Is he still head of Internal Affairs?
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 15, 2020, 09:39:16 am
I feel like I remember Emma or someone else mentioning that William might be better suited to a different position, possibly training the Warmachines
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 15, 2020, 10:21:23 am
["Alright Emma. I'm ready for that speech. Any major points you want me to hit?"] You transmit through Lucille, eating, thankful for the ability to transmit without speaking, as you are tucking into the wonderful spicy food Cephie provided.

["Just that you're alive, doing fantastic, thanks for asking. Quell those pesky rumors that you're dead, basically."] Emma responds after a delay.

["Hey, where's William, by the way?]"

The line is silent. Then, ["I'll tell you after the speech. I'll meet you at the Amphitheatre at [1600]."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 10:25:50 am
Hmm. Is he fighting rebels or something?

["Understood. I will see you then."]

Go see Mitch if we have extra time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 15, 2020, 10:31:07 am
Or [plague]. It's been a month-- the war has continued, I expect, in our absence.

Mitch is in Emma's care now. It's... probably best he stay there. We've a speech to work out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 10:33:12 am
What? She's not taking our dog. We can throw a speech together in like 15 minutes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 15, 2020, 10:37:08 am
Was it ever our dog? Emma always had more time with it than we did.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 10:38:45 am
If you want to go to war, we can go to war. We're keeping Mitch.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 15, 2020, 10:40:29 am
Next time on McCreary's Planet: A custody battle over a massive, ever hungry canine!


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 10:54:17 am
I should have known this would be an issue... you never wanted Mitch in the first place.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 15, 2020, 10:59:47 am
That creature's adorable and all, but it's always been a liability for us. Does it go back to Emma the next time we fight and die and live again? The time after that? How many times do we need to go through this, before we realize we were never the caretaker here?

...

We... can ask, I suppose. Either now, or (preferably) after our speech. But I'm inclined to let sleeping dogs lie.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 11:02:57 am
That dog is more than adorable, it's a valuable asset. When it mutates, it will be capable of taking the field, and I want it alongside us at that point. Would you so easily throw away an investment years in the making?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 15, 2020, 11:27:28 am
It'll make a nice bodyguard, but will it be fit for the kind of war we fight? Could it face down hovercraft, colossi, and survive as we must? I suspect we'd be throwing it away just the same, casting it against the full fury of the Plague-- however big it gets. Flesh is flesh, and the Plague is nothing if not skilled with flesh.

The question remains: where does the Barker go when we can't be around for it?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 11:31:15 am
Are you attempting to claim that all creatures of flesh are incapable of fighting the plague? I guess we'd better tell our soldiers to cool it while we take the field without them. I don't see a problem with Emma or an assigned guardian taking care of him when we're not around.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 15, 2020, 11:37:39 am
I will mention this -- the Crusaders constantly lose limbs when they are hit. Many, many of the deaths in this war are a result of someone getting a glancing blow from an abomination -- and it starts to turn grey. 'SEED's benediction' is another name for chop my corpse into pieces before I turn into an abomination.

A barker bites. It is a bad idea to take the field against the Plague with Mitch.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 15, 2020, 11:39:15 am
That. This war is a meat grinder-- I'm uneasy about fielding something we care about.
Is Mitch immune to Plague infection? Are we going to have to put down our own dog?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 11:39:43 am
Even if it would be too dangerous for Mitch to face the plague, there will come a day when we are fighting other enemies. I can't wrap my head around the idea of getting rid of a valuable resource for no reason.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 15, 2020, 11:42:27 am
So said "valuable resource" can spend its days guarding someone dear to us. Is that without merit?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 11:46:17 am
I would rather have it guarding us. The Thorntons are on our side for now, but that doesn't mean they will be forever. They are a ruthless criminal family with designs on spreading to the stars.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 15, 2020, 11:51:44 am
Just as an aside -- you're currently the 'daughter' of the most wanted Pirates in the entire galaxy. Her father is singlehandedly responsible for ushering in an Empyre wide 'Age of Piracy'. She was wanted for killing millions if not hundreds of millions of people. You're currently impersonating a god. Your entire Line after Naturegirl consists of malcontents and freedom seekers.

A family that does gun running and drug smuggling isn't that -bad- in the grand scheme of the Empyre. That family's previous prosperity was insured by you killing a rival family off for them...and you've ascended two of their members as your kindred. A straight and narrow path...is kinda hard to walk at this point. Especially if you chose to make an enemy of the Nobles in the endgame.


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 11:59:35 am
Look, there's no reason to start ignoring Mitch. Fine, Emma can keep it for now I suppose, but that doesn't mean we have to ignore him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 15, 2020, 12:01:03 pm
((I'm unclear on this - are the Thorntons Empyreal Nobles.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 15, 2020, 12:07:03 pm
((No. We gave blood to Emma and William to keep them alive))

I don;t see the problem with Mitch staying with Emma. We have a war to fight. Anyway, we should be thinking about what to say during the speech
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 15, 2020, 12:16:12 pm
((We really should have a wiki or something.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 15, 2020, 12:26:18 pm
Nah, Local Nobles who picked up gunrunning and drug trafficking. They were also in charge of a vast majority of legal Chemical trades, thanks to you.



["Emma out."] Is all she replies, and you finish off the plate of curried beans on rice. The Automaton takes the plate, and Cephie gives you a nod as you make to leave.

"Don't be a stranger! I had fun last night." She calls after you, as you take unsteady steps out on to the landing pads. First things first -- finding and petting Mitch. Playing with the beast is out of the question. He enjoys physical activities more than anything, and you've the feeling that might rip open your chest --

Speaking of which...

[10][12] You wince as some of your inner flesh and organs work themselves back together, having to come to a lean on a hovercraft as the pain nearly forces you into unconsciousness. You take a deep breath, feeling your insides settle themselves more comfortably against real flesh instead of carbon mesh. The wound across your chest, across your muscles, is still there, but you feel more steady.

Mitch's room, you come to learn, has not been moved. You also find out that she's assigned Thornton servants to bring him food and clean up after him. You head to the room in question, finding Mitch laying on a mattress, chewing on a nutrient cube. Two strong-looking young men lounge nearby. They dip their heads politely, before returning to enjoy what looks like a makeshift game of cards. Mitch finishes eating before he bounds over to you. He's up to your thigh now, with feet two sizes too big for his body. His eyes, you note, have turned a pale shade of blue. His fur, as well, is changing colors -- a rusty red merging with the natural colors of the wall. The pattern swirls around him.

He's also starting to drool everywhere -- and after a playful nip of your hand that draws blood, he contents himself with being pet.

You end up petting him for a while, looking out the great window that faces a cliff. It's not the best view, of course, but there's sunlight for him to lounge in. He chews on a few bones that lay scattered around, crunching down hard on them with his teeth, devouring marrow and fragment alike.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 15, 2020, 12:32:08 pm
((Should the Ties tab still list Emma as lover or just consort?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 15, 2020, 12:32:46 pm
((I have no clue what you're talking about shushhhhh))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 15, 2020, 12:34:53 pm
What do we say dur9ng the speech? ‘Despite rumors, I’m still alive and still going to fight with you against the plague”, “I have survived and am healing”, speeches tend to be longer than a few sentences, can others help think of things to say?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 12:39:28 pm
Metaphors are always nice. "The light of a star cannot be so easily extinguished," "I was reborn once from fire and flame, and now, from the ashes of our enemies, reduced to cinders in the furnace of battle, I have emerged again," etc.

"Good boy, Mitch. Protect Emma and her family always, okay?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 15, 2020, 05:58:08 pm
How about this? I come before you today to assure you that rumors of my death have been greatly exaggerated. That I am alive and fine, no worse for the wear from my combat with the wretched Plague. Do I seem ill? Do I seem injured? The people who have spread these false rumors should be ashamed. Our culture values the importance of honesty, the importance of holding one's tongue and yet these people have the gall to spread falsehood. To lie -- indeed, it is slander to believe that Pheonix of Sol could be so easily killed. That the unholy Plague could ever truly harm me. That the light of your holy star, your god, could not be so easily extinguished.

I have given my word that I will defeat this Plague, that I will rid it from this world and bring about the Paradise. As SEED has promised, so have i! If there are any foolish enough that think the word of their God can be so easily broken by trivial injuries, let them speak now. Let me hear your arguments.

...A nice pause in the middle, let my will reach out and cow anybody...

I have not only come before you to call out these liars, these naysayers but to inform you that our war is going well. We have reclaimed many Industrial Districts and removed many heretics from their positions of ill-gotten power. Surely you have seen the results of these wars? All foes, Demon and Human alike cannot stand against our combined will, they cannot stand against the true ruler of this world. As it has been, so it shall be again. We rise from the ashes of our enemies, stronger, determined to reach our Paradise.

I thank you for your time today. Hail Pheonix!


You itch behind Mitch's ear, and they perk up when you talk to him. The bone he chews on gives way with a sickening crunch, his tongue digging into it to pull out more marrow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 06:20:09 pm
That sounds good, but would it make more sense to say "could be so easily extinguished" rather than "could not be so easily extinguished" in that placement?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 15, 2020, 06:27:07 pm
Unsettling. Theocratic.

...

Perfect.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 15, 2020, 06:41:32 pm
Alright. Will do. You yawn, scratching your jaw, then rise to raid your wardrobe. A few coats remain, and there's a pang of pain when you realize Emma has removed most of her own clothing from it. You drape a heavy, kevlar-weave duster over your frame.

Anything you want me to do until the speech?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 07:39:29 pm
I don't think so.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 15, 2020, 07:54:29 pm
For the time being, we've been removed from the chain of command-- we have idle time now, of all things. Spend it as you will. Take care of yourself.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 15, 2020, 09:37:20 pm
You spend your time enjoying the scenery of your mountain home. The tranquility of snow drifting down over the reddish-brown cliffs. The gentle slopes that the snow forms from the rough-hewn walls and faces as it gently piles up against them. The warmth of your body heat fogs the glass at the edges as you sit patiently.

Eventually, the time arises, and you emerge from your meditation. After you double-check your appearance in the mirror, you make your way to the amphitheater. Emma is waiting for you backstage. She smiles when she sees you, but it's forced. She looks exhausted, her usually clean and shiny hair disheveled. There are bags beneath her eyes.

"Ready?"

You nod, breathing out a sigh and composing yourself. Squaring your shoulders, setting your jaw, and loosening your body. A crowd stands on the other side of the stage door, packing the amphitheater to the elevator, as usual.

[15 vs. 14] There isn't fire in your words, but there is will. Your fury is cold, detached, and your willpower sweeps over the front of the crowd.

[18 vs. 12] "My citizens, I come before you today to assure you that rumors of my death have been greatly exaggerated. That I am alive and well, no worse for the wear from my combat with the wretched Plague. Do I seem ill? Do I seem injured? The people who have spread these false rumors should be ashamed. Our culture values the importance of honesty, the importance of holding one's tongue -- yet these people have the gall to spread falsehood! To lie -- to slander, to lead you to the belief that Pheonix of Sol could be so easily killed. That the unholy Plague could ever truly harm me. That the light of your holy star, your god, could be so easily extinguished."

The crowd gives a cheer, but you don't let the smile you want to wear come to your lips, keeping it set in a tight scowl as you lift a hand in the air to quiet the crowd.

[11 vs. 3]"I have given my word that I will defeat this Plague, that I will rid it from this world and bring about Paradise. As SEED has promised, so have I! If there are any foolish enough that think the word of their God can be so easily broken by trivial injuries, let them speak now. Let me hear your arguments. They are none, are there? Because these fools are heretics, baseless lairs, tricked and misled. Worse than heretics, they seek to halt progress on the Great Work! Denounce them. Denounce them as you have done the Demons and malcontents for years."

[6 vs. 1]"I have not only come before you to call out these liars, these naysayers but to inform you that our war is going well. We have reclaimed many Industrial Districts and removed many heretics from their positions of ill-gotten power. Surely you have seen the results of these wars? All foes, Demon and Human alike cannot stand against our combined will, they cannot stand against the true ruler of this world. As it has been, so it shall be again. We rise from the ashes of our enemies, stronger, determined to reach our Paradise. I thank you for your time today. Hail Pheoni--"

"Mother Pheonix!" Somebody calls, breaking through the rapt silence as the sound of a scuffle echoes through the hall, "Mother Pheonix--" Three people break through the crowd, dragging a thin young man, who struggles and fights against them.

They throw him down roughly in front of the stage, circling around him. A sinewy man with a single arm calls up to you from the crowd. "One of the Malcontents, Mother! One of the Liars! He's been spreading falsehood about you for weeks! Talking slander!"

[15 vs. 13]"I'm innocent, I swear!" He cries. He's not being truthful with you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 15, 2020, 09:44:43 pm
"Thank you for bringing this to my attention. He shall be questioned and tried, and if his guilt is true, he shall be punished as dictated by our code of ethics. Know this: we are a nation of laws, and thus you should leave such matters to our professional care. Your peaceful passion inspires me and is a model for our nation."

In other words, please don't murder this man in front of me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 15, 2020, 10:14:27 pm
You're getting better at the talking. More comfortable.

"Thank you for bringing this to my attention. He shall be questioned and tried, and if his guilt is true, he shall be punished as dictated by our code of ethics. Know this: we are a nation of laws, and thus you should leave such matters to our professional care. Your peaceful passion inspires me and is a model for our nation."

+1

[Angel] of mercy, for now. We can figure out what to do with the fellow once he's out of the public eye.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 16, 2020, 07:27:04 am
You're getting better at the talking. More comfortable.

"Thank you for bringing this to my attention. He shall be questioned and tried, and if his guilt is true, he shall be punished as dictated by our code of ethics. Know this: we are a nation of laws, and thus you should leave such matters to our professional care. Your peaceful passion inspires me and is a model for our nation."

+1

[Angel] of mercy, for now. We can figure out what to do with the fellow once he's out of the public eye.

+1

Don't need our people calling our bluff. But let's not reflect the gods of Old Terra.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 16, 2020, 07:57:11 am
You're getting better at the talking. More comfortable.

"Thank you for bringing this to my attention. He shall be questioned and tried, and if his guilt is true, he shall be punished as dictated by our code of ethics. Know this: we are a nation of laws, and thus you should leave such matters to our professional care. Your peaceful passion inspires me and is a model for our nation."

+1

[Angel] of mercy, for now. We can figure out what to do with the fellow once he's out of the public eye.

+1

Don't need our people calling our bluff. But let's not reflect the gods of Old Terra.
+1

Sometimes a little fire and brimstone can be a good thing, but not right now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 16, 2020, 10:43:29 am
You're getting better at the talking. More comfortable.

"Thank you for bringing this to my attention. He shall be questioned and tried, and if his guilt is true, he shall be punished as dictated by our code of ethics. Know this: we are a nation of laws, and thus you should leave such matters to our professional care. Your peaceful passion inspires me and is a model for our nation."

+1

[Angel] of mercy, for now. We can figure out what to do with the fellow once he's out of the public eye.

+1

Don't need our people calling our bluff. But let's not reflect the gods of Old Terra.
+1

Sometimes a little fire and brimstone can be a good thing, but not right now.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 16, 2020, 03:53:39 pm
[17] You pause a beat, staring at the situation in front of you. A few Crusaders linger in the audience, and you seek them out with your gaze, ticking your head to seize the young man. They push through the crowd as you speak.

"Thank you for bringing this to my attention. He shall be questioned and tried, and if his guilt is true, he shall be punished as dictated by our code of ethics. Know this: we are a nation of laws, and thus you should leave such matters to our professional care. Your peaceful passion inspires me and is a model for our nation."

[3 vs 12] The crowd stirs restlessly, conflicted. Some seem to misunderstand the intentions of the Crusaders, pushing back at them as they try to make their way to the crowd, which, meanwhile, has begun to press in on the young man. Cries of 'heretic' and 'traitor are thrown at him. He cowers beneath the surge, his desperation giving way to panic.

Th-they didn't listen.

[6] Your anger suddenly burns hot.

They didn't listen?!

Humans in a crowd become beasts sometimes, unable to listen to reason or logic, or even the speech of their own gods. They press in on the young man, possessed with righteous fury -- one drawing near enough to throw a punch.

[19] But as possessed by their fury as they are, so are you. Shrugging your coat off. You lift the restrictions on your wings, letting them stretch out over the stage in a flash of light. Your long talons forms similarly, red fire twisting around it. You unleash your will. Stretching it forward into the mob, making Them collapse into unsightly piles on the floor. Gracefully, you dismount the stage, starting forward into the now silent crowd. The young man stares as you grab hold of a member of the mob who remains standing. You lift the burly man with a single hand, casting your voice out to the crowd.

[19]"I gave an order. I gave a command. Or do you think yourself so above your God? Do you think you can disobey me without repercussion?" Your voice rattles the gantries, the supports of the ceiling. "KNEEL."

[16] Those in range of your will drop down to their knees involuntarily. Those without also do so, lest they face your continued wrath. Softly, gently, "Or is this what you wanted to see? Hmmh? The wrath of your God stoked into fire?" The man you grip by the collar whimpers. The alleged naysayer stands, staring at the crowd that lies unconscious at his feet in shock.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 16, 2020, 05:56:56 pm
*Sigh*

Put the man down.

"I hope you have learned a valuable lesson today. Vigilantism will not be tolerated. If you suspect someone of disloyalty, report it to a Crusader. As for you, who spoke ill of me, turn yourself in today. If I have to hunt you down, I will not be lenient."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 16, 2020, 06:51:16 pm
...no. On second thought, I speak in haste.

*Sigh*

Put the man down.

"I hope you have learned a valuable lesson today. Vigilantism will not be tolerated. If you suspect someone of disloyalty, report it to a Crusader. As for you, who spoke ill of me, turn yourself in today. If I have to hunt you down, I will not be lenient."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 16, 2020, 07:09:04 pm
It is of no consequence, probably, to say this now, but I am uncomfortable with our dogma of invulnerability. Shall we publicly revile those who seek the truth at the expense of what others tell them? Shall we set up a cruel dilemma, punishing those who see those who see through the cracks in our facade? Who see that, to quote an old tale, the emperor has no clothes? Feh. I suppose "it had to be done." And we certainly can't go back on it now.

But I am sure it will come back to bite us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 16, 2020, 07:25:08 pm
[14][13] You take a deep breath, restraining your flaring temper along with your wings. You drop the man to one side, turning to look at the Crusaders as they take hold of the young man. At this point, it's probably more for his protection.

"I hope you have learned a valuable lesson today. Vigilantism will not be tolerated. If you suspect someone of disloyalty, report it to a Crusader. As for you, who spoke ill of me, turn yourself in today. Not here. Not now. But today. If I have to hunt you down, I will not be lenient." You don't have to raise your voice for the words to carry across the amphitheater. With the man in secure custody,  you take the steps up the stage, Emma trailing along behind you quietly.

[13] It isn't until you're up on the gantries before she speaks to you, keeping her earlier promise. You notice her taking a few steps away, her willpower wrapping up around her tightly. Defensively. A twinge of pain, of sadness, stabs at your heart, but you do not question why.

"Do you remember that message you sent to Black Nicky? Your grandmother?"

"Yes."

"She kidnapped the entire squad besides one -- he was sent back without his rank badge -- and his tongue."

[11] You restrain the fury that builds once more, "What?"

"We don't know if the other Crusaders are alive or not. We've been met with silence from her. I sent William to deal with it, but it's rough. Apparently Nicole has a large force of Outlander mercenaries."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 16, 2020, 07:45:22 pm
Iya- Cephie has experience with the Outlanders. Could she serve as a useful intermediary? At the very least, ask Cephie for her thoughts on the situation, and any possible motives these Outlanders have for siding with Nicky, other than profit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 16, 2020, 07:47:40 pm
Nicky is obviously an enemy, she likely killed our soldiers. She needs to be stopped. Enemies within will only hinder our efforts
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 16, 2020, 07:55:44 pm
We can ask Cephie about this soon. For now...

"...do you want me to go there, once I'm fit to take the field?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 16, 2020, 08:12:51 pm
"I'm not your mom, Pheobe. The council barely listens to me since you woke up." Emma shrugs, relaxing when she notices the direction of your anger. "Its urban combat, though. The Warmachines and Mercs are both occupying the Steelworks proper."

["Well, guns or land. Most of the Outlanders are people who either got banished from the 'Holy Land' or descendents of them. Few might be actual Clan Outlanders. They'll probably be the captains or commanders."] Cephie responds, her voice echoing in your head, as you maintain two conversations at once with. Nearly seamlessly, you proudly note.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 16, 2020, 08:56:26 pm
You've become quite the multitasker, dealing with the voices in your head all this time!

["Understood-- thank you."]

"I'll speak with the general on the matter... see what I can work out. I need to catch up on the state of the field anyhow."
"What else do I need to know, taking up the council again?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 16, 2020, 10:06:03 pm
["Ciao. If we're going to go kill people give me an hour-- I'm neck deep in a series."]

"You're incorrigible." Emma sighs, brushing a stray hair from her eyes. "We've started including alcohol in the Crusader's rations. Isela demanded it for off duty soldiers. Lacey is trying to write sermons for you. We've claimed industrial districts four through seven, and farmland one. There's some issues with production, but the Industry Department is working through it. The Agriculture-- it might be easier if I just called a session for you." Emma admits, catching herself mid-ramble.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 16, 2020, 11:08:13 pm
Fighting rebels indeed. I wonder if the Pontifex is there as well.

"Please do call a session. Thank you for managing things in my absence. It sounds like you've done an excellent job."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 16, 2020, 11:40:43 pm
Rest. Once Emma's called the session-- she needs rest. She's exhausted herself, keeping up the regency.

...fear. Emma feared us just now-- what we might say, what we might do. She need never fear us. Tell her. Tell her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 12:48:19 am
"Thanks." Emma replies with a twist of the smile. "I'm not -- I've been trying to use my dreams to guide us--" She hesitates, leaning against the railings. "The visions...I've had...about our future. What's possible."

"Is...is that crazy?" Emma asks, turning to look at you, asking your reassurance. "I-is that crazy for us? For Empyreals?"

You hesitate. "How?"

"Like with that -- the alcohol decision. I dreamed that the Crusaders were being attacked at night while they slept. That they used the bottles on Plague Creatures. That swayed my thinking -- did I make the right choice? Or was I just having a weird nightmare?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 12:55:30 am
"It's hard to say. I think that several of your visions have been prescient so far. Don't rely on them too much, but let them guide you if you need it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Kashyyk on May 17, 2020, 01:59:26 am
Might be worth reminding the council that Emma is our second in command at that session. It's not good that they're ignoring her cos that'll just pile on the stress and fatigue.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 17, 2020, 09:15:57 am
"It's hard to say. I think that several of your visions have been prescient so far. Don't rely on them too much, but let them guide you if you need it."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 17, 2020, 09:16:33 am
((Would Constantine know anything about the prescience of our Line? The mechanism behind it?))

"You were right about the Leviathan."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 17, 2020, 10:31:26 am
“You need rest now. You seem tired. I will do what you’ve been doing since I’m no longer absent. You seem tired, and need sleep”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 17, 2020, 10:50:29 am
A moment on that, perhaps. Let the concerns of prophesy run their course.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 11:59:47 am
[6] You remember...you remember that it was vaguely connected to the mathematical analysis of worrying situations, an instinctual connection of seemingly isolated points of data. Points of data that are subconsciously collected. Computed by your base systems and displayed in forms a mind can easily understand, especially given a lack of complete information. It's the same principle that allowed you to dodge the Infected firing squad, only not just applied to your personal kinesiology. It was never your forte.

[7] "I...I just can't tell anyone else that except you and William, y'know? I get scared that it's all in my head -- that I'm going crazy. My visions feel more real than my actual life sometimes."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 17, 2020, 01:06:59 pm
"You're not crazy, I promise." Smile faint. "Just-- worrying. We calculate when we worry."
"You could talk to Cephie about it. She probably knows more about things like this than I do."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 01:28:22 pm
Emma looks relieved by your assurances. But her relief turns to annoyance when you mention Cephie. She tries to hide by looking down at the huddled masses.

"Yeah. I guess I could. I'll go call the council. Give me a couple of hours. I'll let you know over radio."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 17, 2020, 03:40:53 pm
"...yeah, alright. I'll chase down Isela in the meantime."
"Take care of yourself, hey?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 17, 2020, 03:48:05 pm
"...yeah, alright. I'll chase down Isela in the meantime."
"Take care of yourself, hey?"

why are we chasing Isela down? I thought she’s a friend?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 04:00:48 pm
It's just an expression, I assume. It would be good to talk to her about joining us in fighting our dear grandmother, though we could just talk to her over radio. Two Empyreals are better than one.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 17, 2020, 05:01:08 pm
This war has been a right hell-- I'm ill inclined to throw Emma into the thick of it. Let her remain to prophesy in our stead.
She's our regent now, recall. What happens when we're both away? What happens if neither of us come back?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 17, 2020, 05:17:18 pm
I don’t think anyone suggested Emma coming with us, that is dangerous, she’s already tired as it is, she needs rest
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 05:27:45 pm
I was referring to Cephie, not Emma.

Edit: it looks like I got Cephie and Isela confused.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 05:35:49 pm
"Mmmh. I'll try. See you in a bit, Pheobe." Emma steps away, leaving you alone to watch over the emptying amphitheater. You let Lucille organize your meeting with Isela, waiting quietly. Within minutes, she emerges from the elevator, Eric standing at her shoulder. The two approach, bowing their heads respectfully.

"Mother Pheonix. I'm glad to see you up and about." Isela offers politely, smiling. Eric doesn't say anything, his willpower twisting uncontrollably, haphazardly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 05:42:54 pm
"Thank you. It's good to be back among the living. I'm pleased to see that you're doing better as well, Eric. My first question is: what were the results of the mission I was sent on?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 17, 2020, 05:44:20 pm
"Thank you. It's good to be back among the living. I'm pleased to see that you're doing better as well, Eric. My first question is: what were the results of the mission I was sent on?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 05:56:16 pm
"Good news or bad news?" Isela asks, calmly.

"Bad news."

"Fifty percent casualties, roughly two platoons out of the four platoon company died -- either when their hovercrafts were shot down or the attempted evacuation that followed. The Lt was one of the casualties. Two large hovercraft were seized by the enemy."

"Good news?" You ask, glumly.

"Two refineries -- and, thanks to you destroying that Hovercraft, they were unable to follow us back to the Fortress -- meaning that, for the time, we are still secure. And we have the element of surprise."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 17, 2020, 06:07:55 pm
...an ugly thought occurs to me.
The Plague-- how much can it see through our eyes?

Nod. "And how has the war progressed in my absence?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 06:13:39 pm
...an ugly thought occurs to me.
The Plague-- how much can it see through our eyes?

Nod. "And how has the war progressed in my absence?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 17, 2020, 06:26:54 pm
...an ugly thought occurs to me.
The Plague-- how much can it see through our eyes?

Nod. "And how has the war progressed in my absence?"
+1
+1
Oh my, you’re right. The plague seems to function as a sort of hive mind. Should we bring this worry up to Isela?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 06:45:35 pm
"We've reclaimed districts four through seven, are currently fighting against insurrectionists in eight and nine. Farmland three through seven hasn't responded, but farmland one immediately requested protection." Isela explains, calmly, "As for the Plague war. It's been quiet. We've had a few skirmishes during our scavenging runs for more parts -- and we've destroyed a few of their new bases in the area -- but the war is nothing like it was previously. It has me worried."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 06:49:37 pm
*Sigh* "Unfortunately, the plague has new intel. It suspects that we will leave this planet in 12 years. Could that be the cause of its change in strategy?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 07:07:11 pm
"Wait, we're leaving this planet in twelve years?" Isela questions you, confused by your implication. "When did--- what?"

Eric is looking at you intently, just as confused.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 07:16:06 pm
"This is highly classified information, but I think you need it in order to strategize properly. Tell this to no one. An individual who will not be named activated a distress beacon hidden in this fortress. As a result, in 12 years, an offworlder by the name of Magnus will arrive with insurmountable military assets. He will likely destroy the plague, but how his arrival will affect our population is unclear."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 17, 2020, 08:37:04 pm
"This is highly classified information, but I think you need it in order to strategize properly. Tell this to no one. An individual who will not be named activated a distress beacon hidden in this fortress. As a result, in 12 years, an offworlder by the name of Magnus will arrive with insurmountable military assets. He will likely destroy the plague, but how his arrival will affect our population is unclear."
+1, we will have to explain how the plague got this information, which Awas that we told it. Are we going to need to tell her that the Plague talked to us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 08:40:41 pm
"....why?" Is Isela's next question.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 08:47:18 pm
"The individual in question that activated the beacon was an agent of Magnus and did so in an attempt to contain me to this planet. Their orders were to do whatever was necessary in order to contain me, but I don't know what Magnus' motives are. Also, I should tell you that the plague found this information while I was negotiating with it. It was proposing a ceasefire."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 17, 2020, 08:53:15 pm
"The individual in question that activated the beacon was an agent of Magnus and did so in an attempt to contain me to this planet. Their orders were to do whatever was necessary in order to contain me, but I don't know what Magnus' motives are. Also, I should tell you that the plague found this information while I was negotiating with it. It was proposing a ceasefire."
+1 “It called itself Strain 112, and thinks we are an infection. After the communication, it tried to kill me.”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 09:00:13 pm
"Why...why is he trying to contain you?" Then after a beat, "Ho-...how is any of this possible?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 09:07:04 pm
"I don't know why he's trying to contain me. It may be so that he can use me for his own ends, or he may wish to remove me in case I am a threat to his government. As for how this is possible, General, you have to understand that this is just one world of many. Imagine an entire universe of beings like me with technologies that far surpass our own."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 09:14:20 pm
"...I...I need some time to think." Isela states, staring at you in a mix of shock and confusion. "Yo--you are not a God. You are...just one of many."

Eric is staring at you with the same look. Only his is one of contempt. Of anger. His willpower lashes as he draws himself up.

I...I think this was a bad idea.

Eric steps closer, his fists clenching until they go pale. Isela steps aside, hesitating against his anger. "You... you're nothing but another demon, another plague. I believed in you -- I, I thought you were blessed."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 09:20:20 pm
"I am blessed. I was chosen by the Holy SEED herself to protect you, and she even chose me as her successor shortly before her final sacrifice. I was given a holy quest to protect you, and I take that very seriously. The universe may have others like me, but there are none that share the sanctification granted to me by SEED. They want to enslave you, work you into dust, but only I want to see this world flourish and prosper."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 09:29:23 pm
"I have another question then for you, God. Was SEED from this universe too? Was it another creation of technology?" Eric snarls, standing face to face with you -- well, not face to face, he's a little shorter than you. But close enough.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 09:39:33 pm
"SEED was a being older than perhaps anyone that exists in this universe. Through age, it gained unmatched wisdom and strength, enough so to become as a God. It was unique, perhaps the only of its kind to remain, and in that sense it deserved our prayers and sanctification. SEED was a God, our God, and to believe otherwise is an insult to her memory."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 17, 2020, 10:09:44 pm
[17 vs. 15] No. I am not saying that...only of it's kind -- that implies there were many SEEDs. That his god is not omnipotent, that his world is not special -- that he is not blessed by something higher than what man could make. That-that would be foolish -- he's already angry at us for not being the divine he thought we were -- that we are not special. This man holds the highest regards of the Crusaders, the organization that is our key to power. Nay, a way of life that is based on their faith. One that lets them walk into the mouth of a meatgrinder and die where they stand for the promise of Paradise -- your words are foolish. Heretical to these people. I let you back me into a corner--

"Well Pheobe?! Answer me?!" Eric is angry, and he pushes at your chest.

Th-this is going to end up like Zachary-- except worse. If we kill him, Isela-- shit--
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 10:17:59 pm
"SEED was a being beyond the understanding of man. She was all-knowing, kind, and strong. She blessed this world, and the people fortunate enough to live here, and granted them a path into Paradise. Do not speak ill of our God, who sacrificed herself for our survival, but instead marvel at her love and wisdom."

Smile sweetly. "So what do you think, Eric..."

"DO YOU KNOW BETTER THAN A GOD?" Send out our will to cow him and unfurl our wings. Project our voice to painful levels. "I AM THE FLAME OF OLD SOL! MY LINE BLED ENOUGH TO MAKE YOUR SUFFERING SEEM AS NOTHING! WHO ARE YOU TO CHALLENGE MY DIVINE WILL, MORTAL?! KNEEL AND SUBMIT, OR DIE!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 17, 2020, 11:04:11 pm
Spoiler: OOC (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 17, 2020, 11:53:16 pm
((Oh my god... I really don't think we can do this without you. Would it help if we took some time off after this regrettably tense encounter?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 18, 2020, 12:28:32 am
...I'll give myself some time to consider, and to cool off a bit. "The morning is wiser than the evening" and all that.
I didn't write those words lightly though. This game is breaking me. I need distance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 18, 2020, 12:33:36 am
I can see why... even though I have no idea why. Somehow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 18, 2020, 12:36:24 am
I understand fully, and I've sent you a pm to talk to you. I'm sorry to see you go, but...this game is an obsession of mine as well. It's my first narrative that I fully intend to finish. That i've sworn to myself to finish. I've been wanting to be a writer since I -could- write. This is helping me work towards that, in a way. And, as I revealed to you, and now to others, it's the alpha to something larger.

Thank you for everything. I really mean it. Your art was amazing, and made me really happy to see! I also enjoyed your contributions to the narrative.

I'm sorry -- I hope you, and others, do not take insult if I continue.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 18, 2020, 12:37:42 am
Whatever you decide, Superdorf, we'll see you around somewhere.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 18, 2020, 01:02:50 am
((Post edited.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 18, 2020, 06:14:08 am
“While I may not be divine, I still care about you, and wish to eradicate the plague. I want SEED’s people to thrive. I want to protect you”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 18, 2020, 07:56:14 am
"SEED was a being beyond the understanding of man. She was all-knowing, kind, and strong. She blessed this world, and the people fortunate enough to live here, and granted them a path into Paradise. Do not speak ill of our God, who sacrificed herself for our survival, but instead marvel at her love and wisdom."

Smile sweetly. "So what do you think, Eric..."

"DO YOU KNOW BETTER THAN A GOD?" Send out our will to cow him and unfurl our wings. Project our voice to painful levels. "I AM THE FLAME OF OLD SOL! MY LINE BLED ENOUGH TO MAKE YOUR SUFFERING SEEM AS NOTHING! WHO ARE YOU TO CHALLENGE MY DIVINE WILL, MORTAL?! KNEEL AND SUBMIT, OR DIE!"

+1

We need to get control of the situation fast.

Though why would Eric assume we are mundane just because there are more of us? Surely there are many angels in Paradise.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 18, 2020, 07:57:30 am
I'm just going to say that this whole situation seems like its going to make things worse, I feel that the whole leaving the planet in twelve years is something we should keep to ourselves and only mention to the people right as we're about to do it.

Also I have no suggestion that might lessen what the anger that this situation has brought fourth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 18, 2020, 04:52:14 pm
The idea was that we would bring the population with us in an ark ship. We can't do that by ourselves at the very last minute.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 18, 2020, 05:28:43 pm
"SEED was a being beyond the understanding of man. She was all-knowing, kind, and strong. She blessed this world, and the people fortunate enough to live here, and granted them a path into Paradise. Do not speak ill of our God, who sacrificed herself for our survival, but instead marvel at her love and wisdom." You pronounce, serenely, staring into Eric's eyes. He deflates a little, believing you-- but you don't let up. Instead, you straighten up, letting your willpower lash out.

[17+5] vs [7+1] Isela looks pale and Eric-- Eric looks like you just punched him in the face. He takes a step back.

[18 vs 1] "Do you know better than a God, Eric?" You take a step forward, unfurling your wings. Your voice is soft, but you're sure its the only thing Eric can hear as he sags. "I am the flame of Old Sol. I lived ten lives -- and in all of them, I've bled enough to make your suffering seem as nothing. Do not challenge my divine will, Eric. Kneel."

His legs give out from under him -- and you step closer, smiling, reveling in your own strength. "...And Eric? If you ever lay a hand on me again, in hostility, I will grind every bone in your arm to dust."

Eric can only nod -- and you give him a gentle pat on the face. You contain your will, your wings, staring down at the man. Isela looks concerned -- surprised, but not angry, not fearful. Curious.

"I-I'm sorry. Sorry, Mother Pheonix. I...I forgot my place. I didn't understand--" Eric hangs his head, "Please forgive me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 18, 2020, 05:37:05 pm
"I forgive you child. We all make mistakes, but no one is beyond redemption. Isela, I will leave you some time to consider what I said and how that should affect our strategy against the plague, but for now, what is your assessment of the situation at Steelworks Number Nine?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 18, 2020, 05:39:23 pm
Didn’t we ask her for the assessment of Steelworks 9 already? Or was that something else?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 18, 2020, 05:41:46 pm
She mentioned that we were fighting insurrectionists in steelworks eight and nine, but I wanted a more detailed explanation of what is happening there and how strong our enemies are. I'd also like to put this encounter back on track after that digression.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 18, 2020, 06:04:41 pm
Oh, ok
"I forgive you child. We all make mistakes, but no one is beyond redemption. Isela, I will leave you some time to consider what I said and how that should affect our strategy against the plague, but for now, what is your assessment of the situation at Steelworks Number Nine?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 18, 2020, 06:32:24 pm
"Um--Um yeah, right -- I don't know." Isela replies, bluntly after her recovery. "I only know there's conflict down there. Something about Outlanders seizing the city from Mother Nicole? It's pretty brutal urban combat, but William's Warmachines are down there handling it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 18, 2020, 06:38:46 pm
"Would you recommend that I participate in that, or would I be most useful elsewhere?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 18, 2020, 06:53:26 pm
"I don't know. Like I said, Emma and William aren't saying much about it." Isela shrugs a shoulder. "Can't quite advise on a situation I have no control over."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 18, 2020, 07:00:09 pm
"Odd. You should definitely be kept in the loop, as this is your job. I'll talk to William and Emma about it. For now, you are both dismissed. Thank you for your duty."

Take a moment to assess our injuries. Are we in fighting shape? If not, is it something that healing factor could fix?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 18, 2020, 07:43:00 pm
"I don't know. Like I said, Emma and William aren't saying much about it." Isela shrugs a shoulder. "Can't quite advise on a situation I have no control over."

Isn't that what advisors are for? Except us, naturally.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 18, 2020, 07:44:32 pm
Perhaps she means that she doesn't have enough information? She could also be attempting to increase her personal power.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 19, 2020, 12:25:28 am
Oh geez, a lot has changed. She may try to increase personal power, but I don't think she's that kind of person. Maybe she's trying to get us to trust her and slowly sabotage us? Couldn't we sense things with our will like lying? We can use that if we suspect something is up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on May 19, 2020, 01:09:30 am
Divinity by agony. Clever. Very fitting.
Spoiler: OOC (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 19, 2020, 04:30:57 am
"Odd. You should definitely be kept in the loop, as this is your job. I'll talk to William and Emma about it. For now, you are both dismissed. Thank you for your duty."

Take a moment to assess our injuries. Are we in fighting shape? If not, is it something that healing factor could fix?
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 19, 2020, 07:23:33 am
"Odd. You should definitely be kept in the loop, as this is your job. I'll talk to William and Emma about it. For now, you are both dismissed. Thank you for your duty."

Take a moment to assess our injuries. Are we in fighting shape? If not, is it something that healing factor could fix?
+1
I agree with the assessing of injuries, but Emma and William might not know much either. To my knowledge, we, Emma, nor William can read thoughts. “Thank you. I will go there soon and assist where needed. You are dismissed for now.”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 19, 2020, 11:59:55 am
"Emma and William said it would be better if they handled Steelworks Nine. I took their word for it." Isela shrugs, then steps out. Eric, after a moment's hesitation and a backward glance, does the same. Leaving you alone until Emma calls over the radio.

["The Ministers have been assembled, Pheobe -- except for Isela."]

["She should be there soon."]

[-] You still need to heal the muscles of your chest, but are concerned about overusing your healing factor. You also wonder if you shouldn't take some time to relax -- the therapist recommended it, but you are stubborn...but then again, the Infection within could rear its ugly head in the middle of combat.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 19, 2020, 02:03:04 pm

Minister of State: Dan Hoganson  Present
Minister of Religion: Lacey Sterling  Present
Minister of Agriculture: Mickey MacGruder  Present
Minister of Industry: Nettle Armssmith  Present
Head Guardian: Lauren Mack  Present
Crusader General: Isela Tabbet  Present
Minister of Internal Affairs: William Thornton  Absent
Minister of Foreign Affairs: Tiffany Mellone Present
Minister of Trade and Finance: Lawrence Geoyde  Present
Minister of Communications, Regent: Emeralda Thornton  Present
Minister of Health: Val Foster  Present

Acting Secretary: Child of SEED Three
Acting Executor: Child of SEED Zero
Notable Guests:Eric Applegate (Guest of Isela), Jack X (William Thornton's Representative)
Security Force: Twelve Heavy Crusaders




The Minister of State rises to speak first, explaining the domestic situation. People are frustrated but calm. There have been several recent events that have improved morale—promises of better food, more fulfilling work, and luxuries to come. There have been several requests to allow the Fortress to open its metaphorical doors to more immigrants. The new and old local leaders are for the moment, content, and several Families in the newly conquered regions are applying for approval to be recognized by your government. Plans have been drawn up for a road into the Fortress using one of the levels that lies near a valley. Isela is stalling it, citing defense.  Minister Geoyde supports it, as does Minister Armsmith.

The Minister of Religion has reorganized the Preacher group of Scholars. Wandering Preachers lead sermons and give lectures in the public areas now. A book of approved Sermons is currently under production -- edited by Lacey herself. Now that you're awake, she would like you to look over it. She has no proposals on the table.

The Minister of Agriculture has opened up three more levels of the Algae Farms and ordered a rare wintertime planting of Potatoes for the remaining agricultural districts. However, this may have adverse effects on the region's soil quality, especially in regards to spring wheat production. There are many concerns in regards to next year's food production, as ecologists are predicting a period of intense cooling and famine because of SEED's detonation. However, on a brighter note, the Thorntons have filled a recreational level with hydroponics gardens, growing a variety of crops to diversify the Fortress' diet.

The Minister of Industry gruffly reports there's seven currently active hydrogen refineries at the Fortress- not enough to support the full demand of the entire city-state, but enough to give the Crusaders leeway. However, with the resources coming in from the Steelworks Districts, they can start manufacturing more hydrogen refineries to meet demand. Yet, these new refineries will not be finished, at the earliest, until next year, followed by another year of training. One of the lower levels is claimed for this endeavor. With the help of the Algae tanks, the Thorntons are managing to produce necessary chemicals for agricultural and industrial processes. Production begins next week on conventional, slug-thrower firearms -- however, las-guns are still out of reach.

Lauren Mack, Head Guardian, informs you that there have been no significant issues, aside from your problems this morning with the crowd. Several individuals have come forward about their misdemeanors towards you. "...most of us didn't sign up to kill a lot of stupid people, so we're letting them go with an extra labor fine."

The Foreign Affairs Minister, unsurprisingly, has nothing to report. Her Ministry seems the most anemic and has few functions. The official policy with the Outlander Clans and Groups is to ignore them.

Minister of Trade and Finance is -- is an anxious wreck. He stutters as he describes how much resources they have, but his Ministry is unfortunately tasked with rebuilding an economy when there's nothing to build one -on-.

Valerie 'Val' Foster, gives summaries on supplies of critical medical materials. The Thorntons, with their advanced chemists, have been working around the clock to produce antiseptics and other medicinal chemicals. Cloth, funnily enough, for bandages, is where there's a difficulty. The bioplastic district was responsible for its production -- and now, all they have to work with is what scant supplies they can find from cottage artisans.

Emma Thornton gives her Ministry report next. She's established a newspaper running propaganda pieces and other important news. There's a clever organization scheme -- papers are delivered based on housing units, read, and then recovered at the end of the day. That night, they are recycled and have a new day's information printed on it. She's also discovered an intra-fortress radio broadcast system -- even going so far as to point one of the speakers out in the meeting room. She has an idea to use this to deliver daily news as well and emergency broadcasts, your speeches, and so on. The Fortress beautification project is going well, and she politely requests that you all take a look.

Isela, of course, already gave her report.

A skinny young man reports William's stead. He hands you a slip of paper in silence. 'Possible lead on 'rumor' situation. Not an isolated incident. Read aloud. Scan faces. Judge reactions.' The young man hurries back to hover nearby the seat. You swear you know his name, but it just isn't coming to mind...

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 19, 2020, 02:15:34 pm
Read aloud. Scan faces. Judge reactions.

Or should we? If suspects are in this room as the note seems to suggest, we might have an explosive situation on our hands. Not like William's outburst, but possibility of another incident like the one at our speech.

Do the ministers need to trust each other in order to do their jobs?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 19, 2020, 02:59:44 pm
It's nice to see that the cultist, Jack, has changed his ways. Let's read it aloud and see what happens.

Read aloud. Scan faces. Judge reactions.

Or should we? If suspects are in this room as the note seems to suggest, we might have an explosive situation on our hands. Not like William's outburst, but possibility of another incident like the one at our speech.

Do the ministers need to trust each other in order to do their jobs?

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 19, 2020, 03:40:24 pm
It's nice to see that the cultist, Jack, has changed his ways. Let's read it aloud and see what happens.

Read aloud. Scan faces. Judge reactions.

Or should we? If suspects are in this room as the note seems to suggest, we might have an explosive situation on our hands. Not like William's outburst, but possibility of another incident like the one at our speech.

Do the ministers need to trust each other in order to do their jobs?

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We must read whatever it is out loud, sans the three sentences saying to do so
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 19, 2020, 06:25:55 pm
[20] [-] Confusion plays out across their features as you read William's missive. No one reacts in what you would deem a suspicious manner. Emma nods, looking out over the crowd the same way, eyes sharp. But all the Ministers take his words with a simple nod or a word of praise after they recover. The only one that looks nervous is Lawrence -- but looked nervous before you read the letter, so you chalk it up to personality.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 19, 2020, 06:50:49 pm
"Hmm. I'm not sure what the point of that was. Thank you for meeting with me today. I have a few questions for each of you. To start, what technologies are being actively researched, Minister Armssmith?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 19, 2020, 11:38:04 pm
Emma shoots you a strange look, rolling her eyes and slouching back in her seat -- and you remind yourself that Internal Affairs is responsible for monitoring the inner machinations of the entire government. Its primary mission statement is to keep corruption in check and to sniff out disloyalty and treason within the Ministries.

"Research is a strong word for it. We're working our way up the ladder that SEED and yourself have provided towards integrated circuits and las-gun manufacturing." Armssmith reports, scratching at her jawline. "We need 'em to maintain our equipment."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 20, 2020, 12:00:43 am
"Can you give me an estimate in terms of time for reaching las-guns and looming? Is there anything I can do to decrease the required time, such as granting you additional resources or personnel?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 20, 2020, 12:31:19 am
"Four weeks, maybe two months, to understand the proccess...then we have to manufacture all the specialized equipment using specialized equipment so we can manufacture another set of specialized equipment. We just need time. Got enough people -- and there isn't many trained and educated folks to spare." Armssmith offers, obliquely, before tacking on, "And...as...for the Looming technology-- I have misgivings on that. I will discuss them with you personally, as requested by Minister Emeralda."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 20, 2020, 12:35:17 am
"Understood. Thank you. Guardian Mack, have you been keeping an eye on former general Hardy? If so, is he staying on the straight and narrow?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 20, 2020, 12:46:42 am
"Straight and narrow -- and in an urn." Lauren replies, bluntly. Isela winces, a hand coming up to rest on her shoulder, before she drops it back down."Actually no, I lie. We just dumped his ashes somewhere." Lauren finishes with a shrug. "People tend to die when one of their arms get ripped. I'm surprised you would bring that up."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 20, 2020, 12:50:43 am
So much for your promise not to kill him, Phoenix. Hmm... no body.

"I see. Even though Hardy was a traitor to his god and his nation, that whole incident was regrettable. In any case, do you have any evidence that the cult that was active in the Holy City might have some remnants here?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 20, 2020, 03:37:02 am
So much for your promise not to kill him, Phoenix. Hmm... no body.

"I see. Even though Hardy was a traitor, that whole incident was regrettable. In any case, do you have any evidence that the cult that was active in the Holy City might have some remnants here?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Kashyyk on May 20, 2020, 03:44:47 am
Y'all should probably tell the council off for ignoring Emma when she was acting as regent.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 20, 2020, 04:00:48 am
Y'all should probably tell the council off for ignoring Emma when she was acting as regent.
Yeah we should probably do that as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 20, 2020, 05:12:28 am
That's a feature, not a bug, in my opinion. She said that the council was barely listening to her after we snapped out of that coma and were of sound mind, and that's how it should be. Emma, as regent, was overstepping her authority by attempting to hold onto power when the regency was no longer needed.

Apparently they listened to her just fine while we were in a coma, which is what was needed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 20, 2020, 10:43:23 am
She mentioned that they weren’t listening to her at all. If we are unable to lead, she needs to. And they need to listen to her while she is lead9ng until we are able to lead
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 20, 2020, 10:51:08 am
"I'm not your mom, Pheobe. The council barely listens to me since you woke up." Emma shrugs, relaxing when she notices the direction of your anger.

The key phrase here is "since you woke up."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 20, 2020, 04:59:58 pm
[20 vs 5]Emma is an ally and firm supporter. I don't think it wise to antagonize her -- she's still my friend...

"Ah. Shame. I didn't intend for that to be lethal. I forget human fragility, sometimes." You opine, curling your hands and resting your chin on them to look over the Ministers. You give them a slightly sinister smile. All of them meet your gaze. "Before I continue, however, there is something I would like to say -- Emma is my second in command and consort. Besides that, she is an angel of prophecy -- someone gifted, and cursed, with the ability to see the future. Her word, like mine, is law. You will obey it as such when I'm not here. Thank you again, Emma, for everything while I rested.."

Emma nods, smiling a weak, relieved smile while the other Ministers seem to examine her in a new light. They give a respectful bow of their heads and murmur their thanks. She brushes a strand of hair from her eyes.

"Any sign of the cult From the Holy City, Lauren Mack?"

"They have a cell style structure -- we won't know until they appear. Their leader was not evacuated."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 03:38:06 am
"Hmm. That's unfortunate. Hopefully there aren't any cells remaining. Jack, I would like to establish a personal guard that is independent from the other ministries. Is that something that Internal Affairs could handle?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 21, 2020, 05:27:35 am
"Hmm. That's unfortunate. Hopefully there aren't any cells remaining. Jack, I would like to establish a personal guard that is independent from the other ministries. Is that something that Internal Affairs could handle?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 21, 2020, 11:41:40 am
"Hmm. That's unfortunate. Hopefully there aren't any cells remaining. Jack, I would like to establish a personal guard that is independent from the other ministries. Is that something that Internal Affairs could handle?"
+1
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 21, 2020, 02:07:19 pm
"Hmm. That's unfortunate. Hopefully there aren't any cells remaining. Jack, I would like to establish a personal guard that is independent from the other ministries. Is that something that Internal Affairs could handle?"
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Wait, if their leader wasn’t evacuated, that would mean that he/she was most likely assimilated along with the cult members, unless the Plague is keeping them around since they wanted this to happen. Isn’t it a good thing the cult is likely dead? Or am I missing something?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 03:36:50 pm
It is a good thing that the cult is weakened or gone, but it's unfortunate in my opinion that the cult is structured in such a way that it is easy for them to hide. If the cult wasn't made of independent cells, it woulf be easier to track down any remaining members.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 21, 2020, 04:04:19 pm
"We have applications which we'll send to yo--" Eric interrupts Jack abruptly, lifting his hand.

"I would like to interject -- if it pleases Mother Pheonix, I can organize such a guard." He proposes, calmly, "As I am sure you have many things you need to do, Mother Pheonix."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 04:06:52 pm
I don't like or trust Eric, but whatever.

"Thank you Eric, that would be excellent."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 21, 2020, 04:12:32 pm
Then why agree?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 04:16:50 pm
Hmm. Who else could handle such a thing? Perhaps Zero?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 21, 2020, 04:33:17 pm
Zero has enough responsibility as it is

May I ask why you don’t trust Eric?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 04:36:15 pm
He disliked us at the Academy, he questions our divinity, and we're preventing him from fighting, which he desperately wants.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 21, 2020, 06:23:54 pm
Fair point. So, we’ll organize the guard then?
How will we word the refusal?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 06:24:17 pm
"Thank you for the offer, Eric, but this is something I would like to personally oversee. Jack, please send me the applications and I'll have the Children of SEED prepare dossiers for each, as they are quite adept at that. I will then sort through them and select the candidates I would like."

Here's my suggestion for that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 21, 2020, 06:26:24 pm
"Thank you for the offer, Eric, but this is something I would like to personally oversee. Jack, please send me the applications and I'll have the Children of SEED prepare dossiers for each, as they are quite adept at that. I will then sort through them and select the candidates I would like."

Here's my suggestion for that.
sounds good. +1
What do we do in the meantime? Collect plague Samples via earth spheres like before for Silas?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 06:30:51 pm
That could be useful, but I think we should stay away from the plague for now until we recover from our illness. I'm not sure what we could do after the meeting.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 21, 2020, 07:03:17 pm
Eric gives a nod, returning to his position in silence.

You do note that there are other issues that the Ministers raised for you to consider, as of this time, and they look on eagerly for answers and direction.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 07:09:34 pm
"Minister Hoganson, now that our position is slightly more stable, would we have the opportunity to increase universal rights and allow for some limited democratic control, or would that be premature?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 21, 2020, 07:44:21 pm
"Over...? Our positions? Your position?" Hoganson questions, confused. "And should we really allow public speaking that isn't state-mandated when we have nothing in place to ensure continued loyalty? When our religion is fractured and our people hungry? What choice can we give them in these affairs? What good is freedom of press when we're recycling paper? What good is bodily autonomy when you cannot leave the fortress, except as a Crusader?"

[7 vs 15] "You have not ruled long, I see." Hoganson ventures. He never raises his voice. "Freedom is well and good -- when it can be afforded. Our budget is measured in ration cubes and tanks of hydrogen. We need an economy, we need a road built into the fortress, and we need constant reminders to the people about how lucky they are to survive."

"That road idea threatens the safety of the fortress and gives away our position, Hoganson -- and you're too bold with Mother Pheonix." Isela retorts, lifting herself out of her seat.

"And another youth speaks -- tell me Ch-- -sorry- General Tabbet, what is the purpose of security if we cannot cloth our population? If we cannot arm our troops, if we cannot pay them a wage and promise them better after this wretched war?" Hoganson counters, expressionless. "Do you know what happens when trained soldiers are turned out of their armies without a backup plan? War. Constant war. And not a war of Plagues, but a war of men. Insurgents, counter-insurgencies, paramilitaries."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 07:58:51 pm
"Well put, Hoganson, and thank you, General, for coming to my defense. As far as the road is concerned, I am tempted to approve it, as our population is below capacity and refugees would be useful. General, would the additional manpower that might be raised offset the dangers of revealing our position?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 21, 2020, 08:25:17 pm
"This Fortress was designed for housing a population for twenty years -- I'd dare say its possible for us to hermetically seal ourselves away and could spend forty defending this position from Plague. Our grandchildren would be able to hold this position. I spoke to the geneticist and our population could be free from inbreeding for hundreds, if not thousands of years. Putting a big hole in the side will ruin that." When Isela says 'inbreeding, there's a slight accusation shot towards Hoganson, who gives her a scowl in response, the first emotion you've seen on the man today -- besides bored indifference.

"No man is a mountain -- and neither is industry." Armssmith offers, "We need many things from the outside world to sustain u--"

"We mine it then. We've got enough of the equipment down below." Isela returns.

"In the fractured earth? We haven't had in an earthquake in a month, but mines are not stable constructions." Arsmssmith asks, bluntly, rhetorically. "The minerals in the world are scarce at best. We need a wide net. Were it not for the Thorton chemis--"

Here, Lauren Mack has an odd-sounding cough. 'Drugpeddlars'

"Were it not for the Thorton Chemists, our steel production would be ground to a halt. But even they cannot produce elemental sulfur, or purified silicon, or pure iron." Armssmith finishes, glancing over to Lauren.

"But what-what do we trade for them?" It's the first time you've heard Geoyde stutter himself into the conversation. "Values change based on perception of worth. The Outlanders survived-survived this mess with their economy intact -- people are starting to use Outlander Clan jade and gold coins to trade. We do not have control of any kind, because SEED's Industrial credits are worthless besides for some of the worst food imaginable. "
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 08:35:01 pm
"Would it be possible to set up a commerce zone, sometime in the future, outside the fortress in a less fortified position? We could build a road to it without damaging the integrity of the fortress itself. We have the ability to fight, could that be traded in some way?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 21, 2020, 10:53:30 pm
"It would reduce fuel costs." Geoyde points out, "And give us a start..."

"We could institute a protection tax on personal property." Hoganson scratches at his bearded face.

"That'd make our currency more rare if we didn't spend it." Geoyde murmurs. looks down and away as he thinks. His stutter clears for the moment as he runs the idea through his head, "We buy our notes back with something we're already doing. It would seem silly at first, but it would build trust in our money--" Suddenly, "I vote we receive a salary, after a year of our service."

"You corrupt--" Lauren Mack starts, standing up abruptly. You lift a hand, and her words catch in her throat. It required no application of will, no anger, no nudge from your powers -- it was your reputation alone.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 21, 2020, 11:59:04 pm
"I appreciate your work, and I would be fine with all ministers earning a salary after one year. Please look into establishing a nearby commerce zone, building a road to it, and instituting a protection tax on private property."

"Would it also be possible to do some prospecting of the nearby mountains? If we could find a source of precious metal, we could look into producing non-token coinage to make trading with Outlanders easier."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 22, 2020, 03:35:41 am
"I appreciate your work, and I would be fine with all ministers earning a salary after one year. Please look into establishing a nearby commerce zone, building a road to it, and instituting a protection tax on private property."

"Would it also be possible to do some prospecting of the nearby mountains? If we could find a source of precious metal, we could look into producing non-token coinage to make trading with Outlanders easier."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 22, 2020, 05:59:16 am
"I appreciate your work, and I would be fine with all ministers earning a salary after one year. Please look into establishing a nearby commerce zone, building a road to it, and instituting a protection tax on private property."

"Would it also be possible to do some prospecting of the nearby mountains? If we could find a source of precious metal, we could look into producing non-token coinage to make trading with Outlanders easier."

+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 22, 2020, 09:10:07 am
"I appreciate your work, and I would be fine with all ministers earning a salary after one year. Please look into establishing a nearby commerce zone, building a road to it, and instituting a protection tax on private property."

"Would it also be possible to do some prospecting of the nearby mountains? If we could find a source of precious metal, we could look into producing non-token coinage to make trading with Outlanders easier."

+1
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 22, 2020, 08:27:00 pm
"Mother Pheonix! This is outrageous. Our Crusaders are not receiving pay, our Guardians are not receiving pay, and our citizens sure aren't either. Will we pay them too?!" Lauren Mack reproaches, turning to look at you.

"We cannot do that, otherwise our currency will devalue." Geoyde retorts, still looking down at the desk.  "And as for minting currency -- SEED has forbidden the institution of a gold standard--"

Zero interrupts here, speaking for the first time in the meeting, "Gold, as a standard of currency, is inherently worthless. As of last year, in our system, there is enough gold that we could give a [hundred pounds] to each Citizen and still have some leftover. Trading it with the Outlanders has merits. But should our citizens use it amongst themselves, it will be devalued. Better keep it in raw form."

"We could completely destroy their economy by the end of this." Isela notes, building on the idea, "By flooding it with gold, should we so choose."

"I suppose I will send out prospectors. I doubt we'll find much." Armssmith nods, looking at Isela strangely.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 22, 2020, 11:44:52 pm
"Would it be disastrous to pay our citizens as well in one year?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 23, 2020, 12:11:52 am
"The longer we collect our currently useless money, the better. The less there is, the more its worth." Geoyde murmurs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Kashyyk on May 23, 2020, 02:09:06 am
Then don't back your currency with gold. Back it with something useful, finite and regular, like power, or food.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 23, 2020, 02:19:23 am
The Empyre's currency is backed in energy, but that's hard to implement, here. I think he's hoping that by our government pretending our money has value that it regains its value. But now I think he's needling for a headstart on his paycheck--which means he wants the ministers to be more financially powerful than other groups in the social structure. That helps us maintain our power, but it will anger some.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 23, 2020, 05:32:18 am
"Can we revisit this issue in one year? If it is feasible at that point, we can certainly consider it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 23, 2020, 05:44:38 am
"Can we revisit this issue in one year? If it is feasible at that point, we can certainly consider it."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 23, 2020, 10:01:56 am
A year sounds like it’s too long.
The Empyre's currency is backed in energy, but that's hard to implement, here. I think he's hoping that by our government pretending our money has value that it regains its value. But now I think he's needling for a headstart on his paycheck--which means he wants the ministers to be more financially powerful than other groups in the social structure. That helps us maintain our power, but it will anger some.
this sounds like it could work, though we need to eventually find something to back our money on, so the money won’t become worthless again if something in government changes
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 12:13:38 am
Geoyde nods, shifting back into his seat in silence. Zero speaks after the silence drags on. "Anything else to report or request."
The consensus is no, and Zero turns to you for your words -- an edict, a speech, or a simple dismissal. It is your first time with the council, they might be expecting something. You take in their appearances in a single glance before you say anything.

Hoganson is expressionless, Emma looks half-asleep, and Geoyde looks a little less anxious. Armssmith looks a little uncomfortable, and Lacey looks...serene. The others wear a neutral expression.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 12:29:26 am
"Did you want me to take a look at those sermons and approve the Families' request? Also, please attempt to make contact with the eastern Outlanders."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 24, 2020, 01:42:24 am
"Did you want me to take a look at those sermons and approve the Families' request? Also, please attempt to make contact with the eastern Outlanders."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 02:18:22 am
"If you so choose." Hoganson replies, "I'm sure you already know the cost of accepting the other Families, other than the Thorntons. We could organize a dossier for you, if you wish, on each of the ones wishing to join."

"And what do we say? Sorry for the one hundred years of refusing to recognize their existence?" Mellone questions at your last request.

"I've already had a copy delivered to your room, Mother Pheonix." Lacey states.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 02:41:07 am
"Thank you.  Please do create dossiers for them.  As for the Outlanders, say little but offer gifts that they may find helpful.  If they are a practical people, perhaps they will come to see that we can be useful."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 03:04:38 am
"Am I allowed to send them firearms?" Tiffany questions
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 03:14:11 am
"Not las-guns, and only in very limited numbers. A taste of our power. Make it clear that we have more to give them, but only if they agree to closer relations."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 24, 2020, 04:55:26 am
"Not las-guns, and only in very limited numbers. A taste of our power. Make it clear that we have more to give them, but only if they agree to closer relations."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 06:40:41 pm
"Heard, Mother Pheonix." Tiffany nods.

"Is there any other issues for Mother Pheonix to attend to? Or does she have any other issues to raise?" Zero questions, monotone.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 07:20:40 pm
"None for the moment."

"We all know that we have suffered an incalculable loss. The Holy SEED left this world forever, choosing to ascend into the heavens rather than suffer the indignity of corruption, and our Holy City was breached and destroyed. However, when I look at your shining examples and the earnest faces of our citizens, I know that there is still hope. The Great Work continues. Incredibly, our future is bright despite the depredations of the darkness. Go now in peace."

"Emma, may I speak to you privately for a moment?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 24, 2020, 07:25:02 pm
If I may ask, what are we speaking to Emma about?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 07:27:45 pm
I'd like to ask her why Isela isn't in charge of our fighting in Steelworks Nine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 24, 2020, 07:29:51 pm
What gave that impression? I must have missed something
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 07:34:52 pm
Isela told us that she isn't involved in that fighting, as Emma and William told her that they would handle it alone.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 24, 2020, 07:41:19 pm
Oh. I agree it would be good to know why she didn’t involve our minister of military strategy and tactics
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 07:47:51 pm
Emma remains seated as the other Ministers collect their belongings and leave. Armssmith hesitates, before she murmurs, "I will wait outside the door." You give her a permissive nod, turning your gaze back to Emma from where you sit across from her. She straightens a little, returning your curious look with one of her own.

"Why isn't Isela involved in Steelworks Nine?" You gently interrogate.

"Black Nicky is the Last Great Crusader. Do you want word to spread about how little faith she had in your government? About how there's an alternative? Or do you want to make an announcement when you have her captured, bound in chains and standing trial?" Emma shrugs a shoulder, looking at the door. "The only people who knew of your condition were Crusaders. That turned out well."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 07:50:38 pm
"That makes sense. Do we have the necessary forces to subdue her?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 07:54:22 pm
"William is working hard. He's pretty skilled in urban combat -- all the gang wars he's been in. He's got his full company of Warmachines with him. Currently its a knockdown, drag-out bloody battle for the city. House by house. Rooftop by rooftop. Slum by slum. We have air superiority, but they've got mobility."

Emma shrugs a shoulder. "I doubt he'll lose, but it will be a pyrrhic victory. One we'll have to afford."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 07:56:44 pm
"I'll send Cephie to reinforce. I think her skills would be useful in urban combat. Is there any opportunity for displomacy?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 08:00:24 pm
"We haven't tried after our last squad leader had his tongue cut out." Emma gives a crooked, dark grin, "It seems to me that's a beautiful metaphor for 'no talk.'
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 08:03:52 pm
"Hopefully I'll recover soon so that I can help. I don't want to risk it while I'm still ill. No further questions, and thank you again for taking care of things while I was away."

"[Cephie, things are tough in Steelworks Nine. Would you be willing to help William out? I'd join you, but I don't think it would be good for my health.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 08:13:19 pm
["What's the situation?"] Cephie questions. You take a moment, dipping a nod to Emma who slowly rises. She pauses as she leaves, lingering on the door frame, but doesn't look back -- and you stutter, lost in half-formed memory. Armssmith comes in after. You finish explaining the situation.

["Probably better if you don't fight in a city, to be honest. Explosions plus cheap buildings are not a good mix. I'll head down there."] Cephie responds, stifling a yawn. ["I'll take a regular hovercraft -- leave my ship. Help yourself to food or whatever."]

And the line goes dead. Armssmith stands before you, hands curled across a batch of papers in a leather case. "I wanted to talk to you about the Looming...it...it don't seem natural. I mean, I understand SEED made the technology...but..." She trails off into silence, letting the implication hang. You are a child of the Loom -- not here, not on this world, but of another. There's always a question that hangs above your head -- if I didn't have biological parents, am I truly a human? Or an automaton of flesh?

That is the question that Armssmith is raising. If it is truly ethical to create human life in this manner.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 08:17:35 pm
"Minister Armssmith, do you feel most at home with deontology, rules-based ethics, or teleology, consequence-based ethics? If a lie was necessary to save human lives, would you lie, even though telling a lie is wrong?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 24, 2020, 08:18:53 pm
it’s not like we don’t have will. I don’t see a problem with the technology. Phoenix, avoid Slayer, others, please weigh in
"Minister Armssmith, do you feel most at home with deontology, rules-based ethics, or teleology, consequence-based ethics? If a lie was necessary to save human lives, would you lie, even though telling a lie is wrong?"
I don’t like you implying that we are somehow wrong.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 08:20:20 pm
I don't see how this technology brings suffering unto others. Loomed humans are still humans.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 08:25:22 pm
it’s not like we don’t have will. I don’t see a problem with the technology. Phoenix, avoid Slayer, others, please weigh in
"Minister Armssmith, do you feel most at home with deontology, rules-based ethics, or teleology, consequence-based ethics? If a lie was necessary to save human lives, would you lie, even though telling a lie is wrong?"
I don’t like you implying that we are somehow wrong.

Hmm. I was thinking that he already thinks we are wrong somehow, and it would be easier to argue it is necessary rather than that looming is absolutely right, but if this doesn't work I would be fine with switching tact.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 08:26:36 pm
"I don't know about any of that, Mother Pheonix." Armssmith replies bluntly, truthfully. "I know how to make things work, and how to work. But...something about that concept seems wrong...what are we using them for? These people we intend to create? Are we just making more people? Or are we creating soldiers? If we're just making more people-- well, time will handle that soon enough...if we're making them to make soldiers or slaves...is it truly right to decide someone's life like that?"

We were created to be a soldier...is that why peace is so hard for us to find? You muse while the others argue, considering the topic.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 08:31:06 pm
I think we should say that loomed humans can be whatever they want to be. They have free will. The difference is that they are stronger and are capable of more than regular humans.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 08:36:29 pm
Will they be? And how will they fit in with regular humans if they are superior?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 08:39:22 pm
That's a good question... we should look into how looming has affected populations in the past so that we can make an informed decision. If it brings about divides and suffering, it may not be a good choice.

Unless you have a different perspective, Woman of Nature?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 24, 2020, 08:47:35 pm
That's a good question... we should look into how looming has affected populations in the past so that we can make an informed decision. If it brings about divides and suffering, it may not be a good choice.
Agreed. For that, we need to somehow connect with the network probably
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 08:50:08 pm
Our therapist might know, based on when she was last connected to the network. It might be worth asking her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 24, 2020, 08:54:12 pm
Fair point. So, what do we say to Armssmith?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 08:56:10 pm
"Thank you for bringing your concerns to my attention. You can always tell me if you have misgivings over a particular piece of technology. I will research this and gather more information so that I can determine whether Looming would or would not be ethical."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 09:29:42 pm
Armssmith dips her head in a bow. She leaves you alone in the Minister's Chamber, stepping out. You slouch back in your seat, fiddling with the edges of the cheap metal and plastic as you stare out over the room. It was originally a recreation chamber on the higher levels, and it has a pleasant water feature. High on the walls, water trickles down over stone. Lichens are beginning to grow there, and you note thin lilypads growing on the surface of the square ponds that lay beneath the feature.

Your seat is at the head of the table, facing the great doors that lead into this room. Carefully positioned as important.

So, this is what being a ruler feels like -- boring meetings.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 09:38:13 pm
Your ministers are the lifeblood of your nation, and they need guidance. With that being said, however, we probably won't need to have these meetings too often.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 10:03:40 pm
What's our next course of action? I'd like to rest a little longer before taking the field again, but I'm not averse to training or studying. Or paperwork.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 10:07:51 pm
How about looking into looming? We should have access to the cube and we can ask Cephie's AI if necessary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 10:40:09 pm
You rise, heading toward's Cephie's ship. The pad bay is plenty busy, as Crusaders work to load supplies and fuel into ships that fly out into the early evening sky. A few of them bow when they see you, but you give a lift of your hand, making your way to the conspicuous Noble vessel that sits on a pad. You approach the doors and hesitate, unsure.

They slide open for you, and you enter in on Cephie. Gone is the various outfits of her disguises, gone are the clothes of SEED and the outlander. She stands in a tight set of black armor. It's touched with gleaming things you can only truly comprehend as being like stones. It shifts up her torso, covering her completely just as you walk in. Plates start to emerge, covering vital areas of her body. "Oh, hey Pheobe."

"Hey...Cephie. What's that?"

"Oh? This is my mark seventy-eight."

"A-armor?"

"Yes! It's designed for my particular powers. I can shape it into anything I need-- and it stores some of my calories."

"Have you ever heard of a mark fifteen?" You question.

Cephie looks a little embarrassed. "They made those near the end of the Reclamation Wars, millennia ago...its...its an antique, to be honest."

"Ah."

"I mean, its better than nothing! But this one has a built in shield generator,...a bunch of neat tricks."

"Sounds pretty...useful." You give her a smile, "I was wondering, could I have access to the your AI to research some things?"

"Sure!" Leaning over, Cephie snatches up the datapad and tosses it your way. "Keep it. It's got a wireless connection -- it should work in most, if not all of the levels of the Fortress--"

"I...are you sure?"

"I'll print a new one when I get back."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 10:46:18 pm
"Thanks, and good luck on your mission. Does your armor have a name? Mine is Lucille."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 11:02:21 pm
"...No? I mean, I guess I'm not that sentimental to name mine. It's just seventy-eight." Cephie grins, brushing off a speck of dust from the material. "Anyway, I'll see you when I get back."

You nod, leaving with her, turning the datapad on as you make your way to the Thornton Library that was brought with the Thorton Family Refugees. Emma set it up as a curated Library of SEED, one of the only ones in the fortress. You drift in, taking a seat at a hidden alcove, illuminated by a dim lamp.

What am I looking for?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 11:09:59 pm
Historically, what were the results when loomed humans were introduced and integrated into the populations of normal humans?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 11:26:15 pm
The AI, at your prompt, coalesces thousands of academic papers into a few more easily readable ones. You skim through these, lounging back in the chair as you do. The user interface of this device is amazing, providing auto-translate and simplifying concepts that you had limited understanding of into ones you can easily parse.

[13]...When in structured roles with clear definitions, humans augmented past Homo Fundamentum levels will generally be accepted by most, if not all cultures. However, those without a diverse background for interacting with non-Fundamentum humans will generally have issues accepting a variety of above or below baseline level humans...inferiority or superiority complexes will be brought to a head, resulting in civil strife... It lists a number of planets where such strife had detrimental effects. Mixed societies usually have been brought about as a slow process, or with peoples who have an understanding of diversity and different cultures. Most societies usually rely on one or the other, either using Looming for all reproductive needs, or all-natural approaches. Slow integration of Non-Fundamemtum Humans usually results in a more robust, healthy population.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 11:41:10 pm
What are the different positions on the ethicality of loomed humans?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 24, 2020, 11:46:59 pm
Too many to list. Some say its the only ethical way to reproduce. Others claim its abomination against the Gods. Others claim that Loomed Humans if treated the same as regular humans, are perfectly ethical. Others say that Loomed humans should only be used as slaves or soldiers. A thousand different justifications for a thousand different positions.

All in all, it seems that no one has any idea about how ethically correct such creations are. This complicated matter is exacerbated by the fact that all the humans in the known galaxy were descended from Loomed Homo Fundamentums. No trace of Homo Sapiens exists, except in old genetic records and in the oldest rim pirate fleets.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 24, 2020, 11:58:57 pm
Are there any negative side effects associated with the looming process, such as loss of free will or forced subservience to a particular role?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 25, 2020, 12:07:53 am
Usually in the Looming process, the loomed individual is rapidly grown to a physical age, and then mentally conditioned to complete maturity. Usually, any indoctrination or further training for specific roles also occur at this stage of the process. Looming can also produce children, but these have to be tended to with care. Once again, indoctrination or further training can be impressed. As these children do not have memories of a maternal or paternal figure, unless they are assigned, said children will generally tend to subservience if treated well. However, attachments can form, as it seems seeking parental figures is an innate trait of human nature. It goes on to list several experiments where these tendencies were removed, but it generally doesn't seem to end well. However, if assigned to parents, Loomed children generally follow normal childhood paths -- if they are baseline. Introducing other traits complicates these matters, and creates alienation, superiority complexes, or inferiority complexes, depending on the culture and society. If non-baseline humans are loomed, it is in the Loomers best interests to create a role and mythos for said individuals.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 25, 2020, 12:25:33 am
It looks like a slow introduction of loomed humans would help avoid hostile reactions from our population. Indoctrination is not necessary to the process, and perhaps we could give such individuals a choice of roles. If we can create a religious mythos surrounding each loomed individual for each particular role, the public will tolerate them better. It appears that this can be done ethically.

Ask Zero to send a missive to Armssmith labeling the technology as ethical as long as indoctrination is not forced and the resulting humans are introduced to our population slowly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 25, 2020, 12:34:16 am
Why? Why are we doing this? What is the plan for them? These people are not old enough to have a genetic drift -- and cybernetics can modify strength, agility and endurance?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 25, 2020, 12:37:46 am
If cybernetics can accomplish everything that looming humans can, then I suppose there is no reason to pursue looming. If loomed humans have unique benefits, however, they could be useful against the plague. I could also see them being useful as engineers and researchers to advance our technology.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 25, 2020, 12:44:22 am
I mean, it can and it can't. But I'm just curious as to the intention behind our program. Is it to create soldiers or just to add to our population?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 25, 2020, 12:57:50 am
Not to create soldiers specifically, but a variety of specialists in different roles. More doctors, engineers, diplomats, and elite soldiers for special missions. We probably have a skills gap due to the loss of life from the destruction of the Holy City, and this could help fix that. That's a good point that it would also help pad out our population.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 25, 2020, 07:42:04 am
We could use it to create the Übermensch and do whatever you do with one of those.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 25, 2020, 03:50:26 pm
Not to create soldiers specifically, but a variety of specialists in different roles. More doctors, engineers, diplomats, and elite soldiers for special missions. We probably have a skills gap due to the loss of life from the destruction of the Holy City, and this could help fix that. That's a good point that it would also help pad out our population.
we could teach them various roles and then they can pick what they wish do do. Also while we have WiFi, we should probably learn about Strain 112, whether it’s a newer plague or an older one, if it’s been found and fought on other planets, whether it’s made structures on other planets,...If it’s on other planets in this star system, if we beat the ones on this planet, it, or another strain could come back here
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 25, 2020, 06:17:26 pm
I think we already asked the therapist about that, who is an extension of the AI, and she said that she didn't have any information on this specific strain of plague, but it couldn't hurt to ask.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 25, 2020, 07:06:46 pm
[-] ...Strain 111 of the Plague emerged millennia ago in the Solarius sector of the Empyre. It was responsible for the deaths of trillions and ravaged many planets in that region. It was especially noted for its intelligence and its ability to counteract Ascended Individuals. Several individuals of note fell to the infection...among them Regis III of Sol. The name feels familiar... However, it was considered destroyed after ....

Among its unique properties was its ability to interrupt Forumalue of Ascended through the use of data dampening, memetic infections, and cruel intelligence. It also formed Plague Lords and Fenrir Class Bodies at a higher rate than normal. A number of Ascended were turned, and a few were noted to retain identity and intelligence, however, madness and cannibalism were noted to be symptoms...they were noted to be stronger, faster, and generally more cruel...

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 25, 2020, 07:17:46 pm
Well, we already have cannibalism accomplished, and we're edging closer to madness, so I'd say we're almost there already.

Is there any information on the best way to fight Strain 111?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 25, 2020, 07:21:40 pm
Thanks for the vote of confidence there.

Orbital bombardment, followed by a standard mop-up operation. Disabling of Plague Lords and Fenrirs, however, is another story. A full naval fleet is recommended for Fenrir class, and a large squad of Ascended is recommended for Plague Lords.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 25, 2020, 07:29:11 pm
Nah, I know you're gonna beat this illness like everything else. Honestly, though, being infected doesn't sound like the worst thing that could happen. In any case, orbital bombardment should be something that we can eventually actually accomplish, whether with an orbiting relativistic weapon or a void ship.

Search for any information on a noble of the Empyre named Magnus.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 25, 2020, 08:08:24 pm
No interest in the Plague Lords or Fenrirs?

[-]Magnus is a family name, and has three separate instances. Magnus the first is an Ancient Elder Noble, one of the Founders of the Empyre. Magnus the second is a Noble Gentleman, and Magnus the Third is a Noble Youth-- apparently he's only recently turned two thousand and twelve. The Magnus line is noted for their empathy regarding those outside of the Empyrean Core. Of all the nobles, they contributed the most ships and the most resources to the Plague War. Magnus the third actually lost a brother to the battles. They have a history of charity and anti-slavery works. They are also the ones who protested and challenged the destruction of Arcadia the most. They, like all nobles, possess immense power over the natural world, having control over a wide variety of elements and energies. You watch a video of Magnus the Third--

A towering beast stands over an army of the Infected, like a god of old. It's hard to describe -- a cloud of black in the vague shape of a man, clad in armor that reminds one of a demon. [Twenty meters tall]. Eight arms hold fire, ice, and lightning, and you watch as he rips through the opposing Plague like a hot knife through butter. Nothing remains, the camera cuts, and a young, black-haired, pale-skinned man returns from over the horizon. He flashes a cheerful grin at the camera, giving a wave.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 25, 2020, 08:12:40 pm
Interesting... just the man we need to defeat the Plague, and he seems like a decent sort. Maybe we can come to some kind of agreement.

Search for information on Plague Lords and Fenrirs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 25, 2020, 09:32:33 pm
Interesting... just the man we need to defeat the Plague, and he seems like a decent sort. Maybe we can come to some kind of agreement.

Search for information on Plague Lords and Fenrirs.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 25, 2020, 10:57:46 pm
A Fenrir is a massive plague construction. So large, that it can eclipse the sun for a helpless planet. It is a beast that devours all life it can find within a system, adding to its mass. Ships. Soldiers. Marines. Anything and everything is absorbed and integrated. The largest Fenrir recorded was approximately [~6 × 10^25 kg] in mass, the size of a planet. It destroyed noble fleets and ripped worlds apart. It took many, many fleets working together to destroy this monstrosity. Thousands of ships were ruined. Millions of Empyreal Navy-men and Privateers died. Even the Nobility leading the attack were so grievously wounded that they did not survive the return home. The star that the battle took place in had to be detonated with Noble Technology, so great was the Fenrir.

Fortunately, most Fenrirs do not possess much in the way of intelligence or long term planning. However, this one was special. Based upon historical and prescience data, it was determined that this Fenrir grew around an Ascended Plague Lord. Plague Lords spontaneously arise when the Plague evolves. It eventually takes on a human-esque form, gaining willpower and further intelligence. Usually, these can be defeated with overwhelming firepower, just as any Ascended can be defeated.

However, should an Ascended, live or dead, fall prey to the Plague, and be taken back to the Place Of Origin, the Plague will undergo a rapid mutation. A Plague Lord, usually something taking many, many thousands of years to form, will nearly spontaneously appear. The Data stored within an Ascended will be used to modify the Plague. Willpower is based on the amount of certain nano-cells within the body -- however, the Plague will create these cells at a rapid rate. It will no longer bound by the restrictions placed upon the Plague by the Endless Emperor/Empress. It will be an unfettered demon, capable of devouring worlds -- reshaping them with Willpower. It is recommended by all involved that during battle with the Plague, that all Ascended corpses should be treated as relics or destroyed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 25, 2020, 11:28:31 pm
If the Emperor/Empress is truly gone, then the restrictions that keep the plagues bound may no longer be enforced. It's clear that we cannot afford to be infected by the plague for fear of creating a plague lord. I'm pretty sure MacCreary's body was destroyed by the blast... pretty sure. Could this be why the plague is retreating and not aggressively confronting our forces? Is it building a Fenrir?

Who was Regis III of Sol?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 25, 2020, 11:41:48 pm
We need to target the plague’s buildings and vehicles, we need to attack the plague’s territory before it constructs a Fenrir or a plague lord is born.  We have a damaged colonist ship we can repair, maybe we can get people on the ship and Ceohie’s ship and bombard the plague while planet bound. Whatever we do, we also need to ensure we can be killed before we become a plague lord, but before we die, we must kill the plague on the planet. Maybe Magnus will let the people come with? No, we are all carriers of the Plague. I don’t like it, but maybe destroying the planet will be the only sure way to destroy the plague here. We know that everyone on the planet has the plague in small amounts, including us. If our people leave and go to another planet, the plague will follow with them. While we can help while alive, we need to ensure we are stopped from becoming a plague lord. Maybe the structures the plague has are in preparation for construction of a Fenrir. Whether or not that is the case, the plague territory shall be our target. Sorry, my thoughts are all over the place.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 25, 2020, 11:47:16 pm
Destroying the planet should be an option of absolute last resort. Perhaps there is some way to treat our citizens to remove traces of the plague so that that will not be necessary. I agree that we should fast track getting that ark ship operational so that we can look into orbital bombardment.

Phoenix, what is your interpretation of this information?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 26, 2020, 04:46:29 am
We could start our own Manhattan Project and build nuclear weapons, I think we could build them even with the crappy tech we have right now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 26, 2020, 05:06:21 am
One issue: if the plague manages to recover a nuclear weapon, could it use it on us? An orbital weapon wouldn't have that problem... as long as it remains in stable orbit. Plus, we can launch material at high speeds that aren't radioactive, so I *think* there won't be any fallout.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 26, 2020, 06:04:39 am
Right now radiation is the least of our problems, do we actually know how much land the plague has control over, I mean there are no satellites so they could control most of the planet for all we know.

Also couldn't we put a timer on the bomb so even if they get it it still explodes?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 26, 2020, 06:28:53 am
What if the timer fails? Any bombs that we could cook up on this primitive planet would be unlikely to function perfectly. It would only take one misstep to find the fortress the target of a nuclear blast, perpetrated by the plague.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 26, 2020, 06:42:30 am
I just thought of something if the plague can replicate the hovercraft things couldn't they just figure out something like a nuke on their own?

What about impact sensitive bombs that get dropped from planes, they can't replicate it if it blows up when it hits the ground.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 26, 2020, 06:48:58 am
That sounds like it could work. It's worth looking into, but I'm still worried about a hovercraft crashing or something and the explosive surviving intact, or the impact sensitivity on the bombs occassionally being faulty.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 26, 2020, 07:02:26 am
If they're smart enough to build the reproduce hovercraft I think they might be smart enough to figured out impact sensitive bombs.

Also if the bomb's a dud they might not be able to use it to make a working one.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 26, 2020, 07:08:35 am
Those were hovercraft that they had captured intact. They're not currently capable of advancing technology, just using technology that they have acquired from us.

I'd rather not take the chance of them acquiring an unexploded bomb and potentially knowing how to use it. Let's take a look at how nuclear weapons have been used against the plague historically.

Historically, how effective were nuclear weapons against plagues, and have plagues ever captured and repurposed these weapons?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 26, 2020, 07:48:03 am
Historically, how effective were nuclear weapons against plagues, and have plagues ever captured and repurposed these weapons?
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 26, 2020, 07:52:26 am
Historically, how effective were nuclear weapons against plagues, and have plagues ever captured and repurposed these weapons?
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 26, 2020, 08:27:03 pm
[-] Regis III of Sol was, from your brief analysis of a strange Tree-Like Organization of your line, a warrior from a cadet branch. One of the Kindred of the Rimward King. He fell in battle many years ago, during the Plague War. He was, however, recovered. He apparently had led the purge of nine-hundred and seventy-three planets of the Plague.

[-] As for the population having Plague cells -- it seems the entire human race is similarly affected. The dormant Plague is generally considered benign and is unfortunately impossible to cure. It doesn't seem to do much, besides cause minor, random skin irritation. A few more advanced cases have random, tiny tentacle style growth, but these are easily removed and fairly harmless.

[-] Nuclear weapons have a good track record against the Plague, as it cannot withstand the temperatures that are produced. Radiation and EMP generation also disrupt communication and organism health. You pause when you read about fusion weapons, interested in the concept.

[16] You split hydrogen from  water vapor from the air, keeping a tiny amount, only two atoms worth, contained in a small field of energy within your palm. With a twist of your will, you begin to push them hard into one another -- the air cackles with a sudden release of energy. A small electromagnetic force escapes, and an unfamiliar atom emerges from your willpower's grip. Apparently this is helium...?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 26, 2020, 08:37:03 pm
Woah... we can achieve fusion with our bare hands? The plague won't know what hit it. We've got to train this somehow without turning this fortress into a radioactive wasteland.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 26, 2020, 08:39:21 pm
Research what triggers a benign plague to become hostile, and how to avoid what those triggers are

So if everyone has a benign version, I’m curious what ways there are to keep it benign, and to figure that out, we need to figure out what makes it not benign, so we can avoid the plague growth triggers

Ninja’ dragon
Agreed, this is very useful, though to make better use of it, we’;l need to increase the scale, while at the same time not putting our people in danger
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on May 26, 2020, 09:10:06 pm
[-] Regis III of Sol was, from your brief analysis of a strange Tree-Like Organization of your line, a warrior from a cadet branch. One of the Kindred of the Rimward King. He fell in battle many years ago, during the Plague War. He was, however, recovered. He apparently had led the purge of nine-hundred and seventy-three planets of the Plague.
This seems familiar. Was this me or one of my siblings?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 26, 2020, 10:13:42 pm
[-] Regis III of Sol was, from your brief analysis of a strange Tree-Like Organization of your line, a warrior from a cadet branch. One of the Kindred of the Rimward King. He fell in battle many years ago, during the Plague War. He was, however, recovered. He apparently had led the purge of nine-hundred and seventy-three planets of the Plague.
This seems familiar. Was this me or one of my siblings?

You know the answer to that question.

And, as an author's note: chemistry and physics has not been replaced in this setting. You control two elements. You fully control two elements. They're not the most useful elements in mixing them...



[-]Too many active Plague Nanites in an organism, usually as a result of rupture of the epidermis or direct infestation of the mucous membrane. Different strains have different levels of nanite per organism before 'spontaneous' Infection can occur. For the everyday Empyreal Citizen, this level is far above possible lifetime levels, thanks to the Endless Emperor's intervention.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 26, 2020, 11:05:51 pm
((Hmm. I wish I knew more than almost nothing about chemistry...))

Ask Zero to prepare an underground chamber for nuclear testing. Then, take a break from research to look over applications for the personal guard.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 27, 2020, 06:47:34 am
((Hmm. I wish I knew more than almost nothing about chemistry...))

Ask Zero to prepare an underground chamber for nuclear testing. Then, take a break from research to look over applications for the personal guard.
+1 But can we make sure this chamber is far from the fort so if something goes wrong we don't kill everyone.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 27, 2020, 11:24:34 am
["I will arrange such an installation in the Northern, uninhabited outlands."]

["Thank you, Zero."] You mentally murmur, stretching out. You snatch up the datapad, heading to your office. You set it aside and turn your attention to the stack of folders on your desk. You pick one up and set it down in front of you, browsing through it. A random, veteran Crusader. He was formerly one of your bodyguards in the Holy City but was shuffled elsewhere to fill in gaps.

So, what am I looking for?

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 27, 2020, 03:19:08 pm
I would recommend experience, loyalty without necessarily religiosity, and a record that suggests bravery.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 28, 2020, 03:55:02 am
I would recommend experience, loyalty without necessarily religiosity, and a record that suggests bravery.
+1 Those all sound like good things to look for.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 28, 2020, 08:23:42 pm
You spend the rest of the night reading through folders, seeking out your new Guard. Loyalty and religion are hard to separate in this culture, but you do your best. All of the candidates have commendations for bravery. It's past midnight when you finish, stars hanging heavy in the clear night sky. You pull out a  few nutrient cubes and take your 'dinner' at your desk, drowning the dusty packages in water from the bathroom sink. You return to your task. As dawn breaks over the canyons, you have your seventy. There are concerns, of course. Your old Guard was riddled with the Pontifex's agents. Your new Guard, no doubt, will have traitors, those that do not fully support you, but its the best you can do for now.

Perhaps I should Loom my Guard... You quietly consider. Idly, you flip through the pages of your sermon book. Blah-blah blah, Holy Light of Sol -- descendent of SEED-- so on and so forth. There's nothing concrete about your life within the tome. You're a legend -- that is to say, only half-real to these people -- like McCreary. With Nicole Gainer gone-- if...you realize she's your penultimate connection to your existence as Pheobe. The only other is the Thornton Family.

Loneliness creeps up as the sun rises. You haphazardly sign off on the book, feeling your limbs ache with exhaustion as you rise to shower.

Using the Interface's memories, your contemplate your scabbed chest beneath the cold water of the shower. Healing again might prove too risky, with the brain damage you endured. It would help if you had some time to repair your brain -- by this time next week, you'll be ready for battle. Or for training. Now you think, is the time for study and healing.

What should I do this week? Study? Paperwork? Vacation?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 28, 2020, 08:33:46 pm
Do we have access to the CBT therapy box?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 28, 2020, 08:40:03 pm
Therapy would be a good option, and we do have access.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 28, 2020, 08:43:40 pm
It's more useful than that-- it can train me in a thousand different things, if I'm not mistaken. Combat simulations, practical skills -- hells, it could teach me to cook if I wanted it to. But yes, I have access to Cephie's ship. You dry your long hair, letting it hang damply down your back as you dress in one of your Crusader uniforms. You pause, noticing the plastic container of pills on your nightstand for the first time -- along with a bottle of the wine you had the other night with Cephie. A white ribbon is wrapped in a neat bow around it. You take the anti-psychotic, take a measured dose of cough medicine, and take a swig of the bottle as you lay in the cold bed.

You have no urge to rise, to shut the gates on the wall of glass that overlooks your nation. So, with a twist your will and some clever hydrogen manipulation, you push the button beside the door from where you lay. The shutters rattle shut, and the room descends into darkness-- you didn't need to. The lack of light or its presence doesn't bother you one way or the other. It felt normal. 

I'm not doing that all week! Having an AI in your brain-- knowing what I'm thinking, analyzing me, trying to fix the problem isn't a pleasant experience, especially after having to deal with Interface. You bristle.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 28, 2020, 08:51:27 pm
Not all week, but one session might be helpful. How about using it to train some of your soft skills, like charisma, as well? Maybe you could also do some more mundane work alongside your citizens.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on May 28, 2020, 08:52:02 pm
in your brain-- knowing what I'm thinking, analyzing me, trying to fix the problem isn't a pleasant experience

You realize this describes us advisors' function as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 28, 2020, 09:01:02 pm
You're less AI and more annoying uncles and aunts. Parents. You retort, bluntly, to yourself, glad that no one is here to notice the grin that etches your lips.

A day of therapy. I guess I could work on my charisma, as well...that's a day, altogether. Time doesn't work the same in those things -- or my perception of time doesn't. Maybe I could study fusion and chemistry more?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on May 28, 2020, 09:14:17 pm
Fusion and chemistry would absolutely be helpful. My memories of them have dulled over the centuries.

Perhaps you could simulate training healing others with our will? We got close a few times, and this way nobody will be injured if things go wrong.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on May 29, 2020, 06:15:06 am
Fusion and chemistry would absolutely be helpful. My memories of them have dulled over the centuries.

Perhaps you could simulate training healing others with our will? We got close a few times, and this way nobody will be injured if things go wrong.
+1 Those sound like good uses of our time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on May 29, 2020, 08:02:51 am
Fusion and chemistry would absolutely be helpful. My memories of them have dulled over the centuries.

Perhaps you could simulate training healing others with our will? We got close a few times, and this way nobody will be injured if things go wrong.
+1 Those sound like good uses of our time.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on May 30, 2020, 03:25:02 pm
Fusion and chemistry would absolutely be helpful. My memories of them have dulled over the centuries.

Perhaps you could simulate training healing others with our will? We got close a few times, and this way nobody will be injured if things go wrong.
+1 Those sound like good uses of our time.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 31, 2020, 11:53:24 pm
You rise. There's no reason to check the time, so you take your medications, popping them into your mouth one after the other. Then you eat your delicious breakfast of nutrient cube. You check in on Mitch next, rubbing his belly and petting him -- according to his tenders, Emma plans on taking him for a walk. You dip a courteous nod as you leave, walking down towards Cephiela's ship. The doors open to accept you, the AI turning the lights and other devices in the vessel on. The Behaviour Modification Chamber awaits, and you strip down, stepping into the empty tank. It fills with the same liquid as before, and you try to suppress the panic. There's a sharp pain in the back of your neck, and the world fades to white.

For the next forty-eight hours you lose yourself in the complicated work of fusion energy, all while maintaining a small scale reactor of your own willpower. Smashing the atoms together is simple, but the fusion that results, you quietly measure, exerts less energy than what you put into it from your own metabolism. Indeed, it far simpler, and more energy-efficient, to ignite the hydrogen. However, through your research, you discover that there are stages you could, hypothetically, do. However, they each present new problems for you to control. However --

The resulting energy released could be destructive, if properly channeled. The only issue is that you would only be twenty-five meters away from said energy release. That, and it takes time to construct the 'vessel' that contains the blast. This is no even application of heat, no controlling the direction of gas -- this requires you to mentally construct various devices and zones of pressure across the entire algorithm. Far more interesting to you, though, is how much energy is released from the more stable 'reactor' style of your fusion powers, and the elements which are formed.

After studying chemical reactions involving the two elements you control, you have to pull yourself from the pod to find one of the Thornton Chemical Laboratories. Once there, you 'borrow' some glassware, a vacuum chamber and many other items besides. Next, you secure a tank of hydrogen. With your will acting as reinforcement for the vacuum chamber-- you set to work. First one stage, then the next, then the next, recycling components and using your willpower as a filter-- soon, fine dust begins to coat the bottom of the vessel. It shines within the light, molten hot against the padding of pure silicon at the bottom of the vessel. You run out the measured hydrogen tank, having to apply more and more of your own energy to keep the process running.

You slump down, breathing hard, a headache pounding at your skull. You have to rip apart the vacuum chamber to retrieve the matter at the bottom of it. You've synthesized Beryllium (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beryllium) from hydrogen. It currently sits embedded in a crude circle of silicon.



Silicon manipulation, while useful, still lags behind your potent ability to manipulate elemental hydrogen. However, through the use of a vacuum chamber, and list of chemical formulas from your datapad, you do manage to create a few things. Silane (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Silane), which combusts upon contact with oxygen. You were, through the use of these chemical sheets, forewarned of its flammable nature, avoiding the explosion that would have ended in deaths for your less fire-proof chemists. It took you a while of work, but after your presentation of the crystal, these people are taking an interest in your work. They copy the formulas, and, with materials provided by you, have managed to synthesize the same materials you have; silane among them.

You incase the silane in a silicon shell, sealing it off in the same move. You head to the launch pad, and with some assistance from your willpower, you throw it at a crag in the canyons. It explodes in a puff of fire. Perhaps if you combined it with something else, such a useful thing could be a trigger for a larger weapon.

There are other uses-- Silane gas is useful in the fabrication of integrated circuits. But the science of that, and the materials you would need, are complicated. More importantly, is that you cannot manipulate 'germanium' or any of the other elements you might need to create a circuit. Logic gates too, are hard for you to conceptualize.



You devote a day to the Therapist, letting it pick at your brain and poke at your weaknesses as an individual. But it does its job dutifully, and without being too invasive. It even pretends that it doesn't already know the answers to the questions it asks. It doesn't take long before it begins to expose you to small-scale failures throughout a 'simulated' day. Failures of your own making and the failures of those under your command.



One day you visit a fusion reactor, deep within the depths of the Fortress. You listen intently to the passionate words of the elderly reactor technician. You come to learn that all of the fusion reactors in service are automated to an amazing degree. . They possess only three control options - warm-up, active-output, and emergency shut down.There are a few displays, but no complicated board like you would expect. However, the technicians possess a deep understanding of the process. The eldest even shows you his bared arm and back -- scarred in tiny script across the skin are thousands of formulas related to hydrogen refinement and fusion. Encoded in the high technical script of the Scholars, of course, but etched permanently into this elder's skin.


[19] -- you use it as a reference guide, and your mental arithmetic becomes quicker as a result. Your eyes automatically seek out the next variable, putting it into your mental arithmetic as you run through the formulae.

[6+3][11+3][8+3] You realize that you are able to form a small reactor contained by your will more safely, and efficiently with this data displayed within eyesight.

[15+3] They are incredibly impressed by the hydrogen reactor that you twisted into existence through force of willpower alone. Their eyes light up with childish glee -- and leaded, high tint glasses. Hidden in their snug, leaded robes, they inform you without the protective measures -- you'd probably kill them just by holding that thing too closely for too long. Deadly radiation, eye-burning particle rays and numerous other horrifying deaths, which Baseline bodies don't have protective measures for. You, on the other hand, seem to be immune to all but the most intense levels of radiation. At least, judging from the fact you can manifest a fusion reactor in your hand with no ill side-effects besides a patch of sore red flesh which vanishes relatively quickly by the next day.



[-] Healing isn't your strong suit. You need more control over trace elements. You do note, however, that you can stem a flow of blood by applying pressure to a wound with purified water. You practice this, and get okay at it. You even manage to keep the blood flowing in a simulated model. Not on a real person, not yet.



You visit the gym while gently healing your gaping chest wound. By the middle of the week, only a [few centimeters] of mesh lays between you and combat. So, with that morbid thought, you exercise while you can, keeping careful not to truly exert your muscles. One day though, Silas wants to tag along.

On that day. You are not careful. In the end, he's found your limits in terms of physical strength.[700 kg or 1543.24 lbs] at a deadlift. The strongest Crusader, Eric, of course, holds the nation-state's current record of [285 kg or 628.317 lbs]. He exercises religiously, pushing himself harder and harder each day he has downtime.



Hoganson crowns your week vacation by delivering a stack of paperwork to your office. Twenty folders, all of them containing Families applying for new positions beneath your government. You rub at your brow, staring at the documents with a side-eye, trying not to think of the slog this will be. Many of these are lesser Families. Small organizations and businesses, minor landowners, and certain manufacturers. Only two are asking to be recognized as major Families -- Hoganson and Sandsper.

Sandsper is a southern Family, barely a step above an Outlander Clan. They have many large herds and arable land in the southern Borderlands. Associated with them are few criminal charges: Tax dodging and illegal genetic manipulation. They have about a thousand members and seek protection within the Fortress. They are offering a gift of three thousand head of their Insects, as well as any technology they may or may not possess.

The Hoganson Family-- your lips quirk into a frown. They were one of the largest prospected mineral suppliers known the SEED, responsible for gathering up the various odds and ends that an industrial society needs. Their largest trading center and warehouse-- was in the Holy City. As of his latest census, his Family now has three hundred dependents-- out of an original five thousand. He wishes to place these into the protection of the Fortress and eventually restart his business. He confides as much to you quite bluntly, crossing his hands over the front of his Crusader Uniform.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 01, 2020, 02:08:28 am
"The Sandsper are approved. As far as the Hoganson family is concerned, could there be conflicts of interest related to being a businessowner as well as a minister?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 01, 2020, 04:45:26 am
"The Sandsper are approved. As far as the Hoganson family is concerned, could there be conflicts of interest related to being a businessowner as well as a minister?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 01, 2020, 01:46:14 pm
Hoganson lifts a brow, examining you in silence for a few moments before he responds. "Just like the Thorntons, I will make sure no such conflict of interests arise. When in doubt, I will recuse myself from voting." He pauses, "And I'm sure William and Lauren will keep an eye on my Ministry."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 01, 2020, 02:25:45 pm
"The Hoganson family is also approved."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on June 01, 2020, 05:31:04 pm
"The Hoganson family is also approved."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 01, 2020, 06:49:28 pm
"The Hoganson family is also approved."
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 01, 2020, 08:25:52 pm
You sign both of the topmost documents, passing them back while reading through the next thirty or so Families. A few have criminal records associated with them, but all of them are offering various equipment, food, or other supplies in return for protection and legitimacy. A few wish to relocate to the Fortress City completely, as it seems their ancestral homelands will no longer be arable for much longer.

Its probably best if I skim through all these, ignore the most criminal, and approve all of the relocation requests, right?

Hoganson waits patiently, silently, nearby.




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 01, 2020, 08:41:24 pm
"Hoganson, do you anticipate any law enforcement issues related to the relocation of these families?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 02, 2020, 02:00:28 am
"Hoganson, do you anticipate any law enforcement issues related to the relocation of these families?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 02, 2020, 09:07:44 am
Its probably best if I skim through all these, ignore the most criminal, and approve all of the relocation requests, right?
Yes. That sounds good.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 02, 2020, 09:17:21 pm
"Possibly, but you have William and Lauren for that, don't you? They would likely be two better Ministers to question." You begin to look through the Family folders, frowning at the reply. It has all the makings of someone who doesn't want to incriminate himself-- the tone of someone who feels it might be a conflict of interest. "The Thorntons ripped the jugulars out from a dozen Families to become powerful, all in the last couple of years."

"The Moore Family, for instance. They were the largest chemical producers in all of SEED's city-state. Your Family wiped them out in a night -- William Senior bought all of their chemical plants and replaced anybody they could."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 02, 2020, 09:19:48 pm
"We need to be careful to avoid relocating families that are at odds with one another. I don't want gang wars in this fortress."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 02, 2020, 11:35:15 pm
"So you'd rather have active family wars across a Wasteland?" Hoganson questions, calmly. "Very practical." There is no sarcasm in his voice, and you frown again. "As they say, keep your friends close and your enemies closer. Tell me something -- what would you do to the Family that acts out of line around you? She who rips apart Demons with her bare hands?"

"To be honest with you, Mother Pheonix, and with all due respect -- the Families know what happened to the Moore's. Would somebody risk that for a petty gang squabble?"

"They'll go back to the old ways of combat, before they had access to the Holy City." He finally assures with a shrug. "If there's a conflict, we won't know about it until it hits Emma's ear." He states, in a very directly indirect fashion, taking great pains to avoid the we and the who's. Carefully setting himself aside from the hypothetical problems with a purposefully detached air.

He's testing my patience-- and to see what my opinions on the Families are.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 03, 2020, 12:17:39 am
"I suppose you are right. It's better to have them nearby rather than far away. However, squabbles that get out of hand will bring retribution upon all Families involved, without exception."

"I will approve all relocations, because we really need the supplies, but Families that are unable to conduct themselves in a sensible manner will be severely punished. This could mean exile, imprisonment, or complete annihilation."

Approve all relocations.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 03, 2020, 05:42:37 am
"I suppose you are right. It's better to have them nearby rather than far away. However, squabbles that get out of hand will bring retribution upon all Families involved, without exception."

"I will approve all relocations, because we really need the supplies, but Families that are unable to conduct themselves in a sensible manner will be severely punished. This could mean exile, imprisonment, or complete annihilation."

Approve all relocations.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on June 03, 2020, 06:34:43 pm
"I suppose you are right. It's better to have them nearby rather than far away. However, squabbles that get out of hand will bring retribution upon all Families involved, without exception."

"I will approve all relocations, because we really need the supplies, but Families that are unable to conduct themselves in a sensible manner will be severely punished. This could mean exile, imprisonment, or complete annihilation."

Approve all relocations.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 03, 2020, 11:32:55 pm
You sign off on the documents, pausing only when Hoganson remarks on a certain Family. You come to find, through this process, that he only draws attention to the worst of the worst. Those that don't play well with other Families, or illegally enslave, or do far worse --  these are the ones he obliquely comments on. The rest, however, for the most part, seem to only have mild criminal charges against prominent members; smuggling, tax-dodging, illegal governance...so on. From this, you realize one thing -- many of the Families are actually pretty mild compared to the Thorntons and the Moores. You mention as much to Hoganson, trying to draw out a conversation.

"The Moores were...morons. And the Thorntons...are young. They had a lot to prove and a lot to lose. Families...aren't all criminal enterprises. Many of them were around before SEED's dominion over the lands. They kept the peace and defended their people and property." Hoganson shrugs, "Abuse occurred, but you've seen SEED abuse its power the same."

"So, why do some of them turn to crime then?" You question, placing one of the folders in the refuse pile.

"SEED owned the land. It owned the mineral rights. It owned the food. It owned most of the factories. What's left? Drugs. Gunrunning. Prostitution. Smuggling. All the things SEED couldn't control for fear of staining its hands." He pauses, "Where's there's demand, someone will supply it."

"Oh? What's the demand in this Fortress?"

"Drugs. Entertainment. Gambling. People are worried. Scared. They want something to take their mind off of their situation. Emma is doing wonderfully, but..." He shakes his head when you open another folder, and after a brief skim, you agree. "What's the point to a life of survival?"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 04, 2020, 12:18:50 am
Bold of him to speak ill of SEED.

"I am glad that our citizens will have ways to relieve their stress. Once our immediate military needs are met, perhaps we can pivot to the production of some luxuries to take the edge off. Speaking of military needs, do you think some Families would be willing to fight for extra allowances or additional prestige? We need all the soldiers we can get."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 04, 2020, 12:31:37 am
The Families have never deluded themselves as to the nature of SEED.

((Hey folks-- I'm watching again. Feeling a bit more... stable.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 04, 2020, 12:52:07 am
Welcome back and good to hear!


"If you recognize them as political entities? Give them a say in government, they'll pirouette and dance. Like the Thorntons." Hoganson straightens up the folders you approved as he speaks calmly, "As a Minister? Ask others. As a Family Head...?"

Hoganson looks down at you, and his lips quirk into a frown, and for once, the dispassionate mask drops. The real Hoganson speaks, still calm, but with a sudden, fierce passion that puts a gleam into his green eyes.

"As a Family Head? Give us the power SEED stripped. Give us self-governance, standing military, and our honor back. In the current situation, the Families are neutral. SEED decreed that they have no power to raise armies and no power to assist military operations. Of course, we both know the truth of the matter -- that's an excuse." Hoganson pauses, "Do you know why?"

"No. Please enlighten me?" You politely return, leaning back in your chair as he gathers the folders.

"Because when things get bad -- that's when they can get the most power by offering their services. That is when their resources will be most useful, and that's when you'll be forced to negotiate to your disadvantage."

Then the mask returns. "Anything else, Mother Pheonix?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 04, 2020, 01:41:55 am
"...Nothing for the moment, thank you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 04, 2020, 03:48:23 am
"...Nothing for the moment, thank you."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 04, 2020, 01:59:12 pm
Hoganson ducks his head in an bow. Then, without another word, he turns to leave you alone at your desk. The sun sets on the horizon, storm clouds hanging heavy with the nightly precipitation. Frost creeps on the edge of the glass.

You'll be fully healed by tomorrow. Then...then what? Another battle? Another near death experience? Or maybe tomorrow is the day you finally claim a victory that isn't pyrrhic.

What's our plan?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 04, 2020, 03:29:27 pm
Would you be open to getting in some more training once you're healed up? There are a couple things I'd like to try.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 04, 2020, 03:40:37 pm
Would you be open to getting in some more training once you're healed up? There are a couple things I'd like to try.
What kind of things?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 04, 2020, 03:45:42 pm
Freezing instead of burning, creating additional arms on our torso using our will similar to how we can create wings on our back, sending out our will and condensing it into a construct that can follow a simple command, sending out our will and condensing it into an object.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 04, 2020, 04:03:43 pm
Freezing instead of burning, creating additional arms on our torso using our will similar to how we can create wings on our back, sending out our will and condensing it into a construct that can follow a simple command, sending out our will and condensing it into an object.
I don’t think removing hydrogen from something will freeze things, adding body parts will damage cohesion, and condensing and expanding will will exhaust us and we won’t be able to damage anything if we are tired from moving our will to places. What I’m saying is, we can test these, but we shouldn’t be surprised if some of them can’t be done. I’m saying we should be careful
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 04, 2020, 04:11:50 pm
We should be able to freeze things by condensing the water vapor in the air and lowering its temperature.  Adding body parts may be worth the damage to our cohesion.  If we become tired, we can eat and then sleep and then we will be fine.

With that being said, however, if people don't want to train, I would be fine with supporting another suggestion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 04, 2020, 07:42:35 pm
I feel like we should bring some squads with us against plague territory, attacking their infrastructure will make it more difficult for them to continue with construction of, for example, artillery, air units, power cells, maybe we should target their power cells too.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 04, 2020, 09:25:02 pm
Would you support a scouting mission to determine what the plague is up to (perhaps creating a Fenrir)? If that goes well, we could follow up with an attack on the plague's infrastructure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 05, 2020, 01:17:19 am
Our immediate wounds are closing-- I'm more concerned about memetic damage. We'd do well to have the machine assess our mental condition once more before we take the field, if only to better understand what we risk in so doing.

Once we've an idea of how our brain's holding up, I'd be inclined to consult with Isela as to where we go from here. She may well have a meet target in mind already, and we've new intel for her regardless: the dropship's words as to the nature of the Plague.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 01:26:23 am
That makes sense.

Get a checkup from the dropship as to the status of our memetic infection.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 05, 2020, 03:47:34 am
Sounds like a good thing to look into before we get to involved with stuff.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 05, 2020, 01:16:58 pm
[20 vs ?] You take your trip to the AI, and let it poke and prod at your brain. It exposes you to what it refers to as 'Plague stimuli'. Tentacles, twisting worms, 'humans' ripping apart each other to feed, and silvery gray flashes of color. It tries to trigger the memetic reaction through words and phrases relating to combat with the Plague.

Nothing happens.

"It appears the memetic Plague within you has gone dormant. This surpasses my estimates." It politely informs you, "However, I would still exercise caution -- if you suspect you are having a psychotic episode --" It goes on and on, listing a number of ways to ground yourself during hallucinations. It focuses on tactile experiences, on using logic to determine when a situation may be a hallucination, and on reliance on others. You exit the tank an hour later, getting dressed--

When Cephie steps in. She pauses, doing a double-take, then continues towards the showers, calling back to you as she walks. "That's as good as a reward as any! Your grandmother is in custody and the Crusaders are securing Steelworks Nine."

"...so-so soon?" You call after her, kneeling to lace up your boots.

"You sent two Ascended and a company of Void Troops! What did you expect?" The shower kicks on as she speaks, "William had her on the ropes, and I sealed the deal. He's a...treat, by the way. I didn't think you were into batshit insane."

"It's a long story."

"Hmmh. I bet."

You hesitate. Nicole Gainer has been captured, and, if you're not mistaken, the last major refuge of the separatists has been secured. No doubt there are holdouts, but they lack the industrial might to be little more than thorns in your side. You take your leave, striding back to the elevator to your office. The door slides open, and William stands in the main room, leaning on the telescope. A crooked grin curves his lips when he sees you. He doesn't say a word, instead bowing and gesturing to a bound and black-bagged figure on the floor beside him.

You kneel down, peeling off the bag. Nicole Gainer looks up at you, steel in her eyes -- and a crooked smile on her gagged mouth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 01:47:15 pm
Ungag her.  "Hello, grandmother. How have you been?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 05, 2020, 01:50:03 pm
What do we want from her? Information? I doubt she knows something we don’t about the plague, but we could ask.
Ungag her.  "Hello, grandmother. How have you been?"
So we’re what, gauging her reaction? +1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 01:52:05 pm
Confirmation of complete capitulation, the locations of any remaining rebel redoubts, and the locations of the Pontifex and Tyler Hop, I think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 05, 2020, 01:56:47 pm
Confirmation of complete capitulation, the locations of any remaining rebel redoubts, and the locations of the Pontifex and Tyler Hop, I think.
Makes sense, sorry, the post was modified before seeing your post
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 01:57:37 pm
No worries. I'm just curious as to what she has to say for herself, so I started with an open-ended question.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 05, 2020, 02:10:19 pm
"A little stiff. I haven't been captured in years. Those Warmachines are no joke, and you have another [demon] too, I see."

"Do...do you capitulate?"

"Oh Paradise no, darling. I haven't even really begun to fight. This was more of a...show of defiance. But, dear, if you know what's good for you, you'll let me stretch my limbs a little."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 02:14:49 pm
"I'd rather not, at least not for the moment. You've been captured and bound, your district is occupied by my forces, and any remaining industrial capacity belonging to your forces is negligible. What's left?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 05, 2020, 02:34:25 pm
"Angel of Fire Containment Protocols."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 02:36:31 pm
"[Zero, what is Emma's current location?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on June 05, 2020, 02:43:04 pm
((I was not around when those Protocols were first mentioned, can someone give me a rundown?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 02:44:57 pm
(("...primary containment agent of Project Angel of Fire, also known as Alphira, Pheobe Gainer, is two-fold. Emma Thornton of the Thornton Family is a high-value emotional connection to the target. Primary containment is to secure and hold Emma Thornton in the event of Alphira losing control, destroying vital property with ill intent, possession of weapons not signed off on, and any hostile action or words directed at SEED. Should Alphira violate these procedures, its is to be made clear to her that Emma Thornton's future survival will be in jeopardy should such actions persist. Further action will be taken as needed, up to termination of both Emma and the Project...

...Secondary containment is the holding of myself, Nicole Gainer, as a hostage to ensure her good intentions should Primary Containment methods fail...see appendix section eight for further details as to my relationship with the subject...Emma Thornton has a higher emotional connection to the subject, so great caution should go into retaining her and keeping her close to the Holy City."))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 05, 2020, 03:26:55 pm
"...Go on."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 05, 2020, 04:16:24 pm
["I'm fine? Is something the matter, Pheobe? The Warmachines are paying their respects."]

"In my breast pocket dear. Go on." You kneel down, taking out a small briefing folder. [Angel Of Fire Containment Protocols v.2, SEED APPROVED] is inked across the top. The immediate difference is that is in the basic Scholar's tongue, the one that everyone can read. Inside are glossy photos-- showing the beam of light that obliterated the Moore Patriarch. Followed by a grainy picture of SEED's self destruction-- with you in sillohouette. There's other pictures. The Moore's Villa aflame. A report on Zachary's suspicious death at the hands of the Thortons. Receipts for the purchase of the Moore chemical plants being cheaply procured by the Thornton's...

"I trust you can understand the implication?" Nicole questions, smiling. "Brother Hop has many, many copies. Now be a dear and untie me.  My circulation isn't what it used to be."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 05, 2020, 04:35:56 pm
What do we do?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 04:40:19 pm
Not sure.

["Nicole is attempting to blackmail us."]

"What are your demands? We both know that the obvious allegation is false, and we have a propaganda team as well."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 05, 2020, 05:05:39 pm
Not sure.

["Nicole is attempting to blackmail us."]

"What are your demands? We both know that the obvious allegation is false, and we have a propaganda team as well."
I don’t think we need to mention what we have yet.
["Nicole is attempting to blackmail us."]

"What are your demands?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 05:13:01 pm
Fair.

Not sure.

["Nicole is attempting to blackmail us."]

"What are your demands? We both know that the obvious allegation is false, and we have a propaganda team as well."
I don’t think we need to mention what we have yet.
["Nicole is attempting to blackmail us."]

"What are your demands?
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 05, 2020, 06:15:17 pm
We don't need to "mention what we have"-- we do need to put a little bite into our words, lest we come off as acquiescent.

["Nicole is attempting to blackmail us."]
+1

Frown a little. "In a moment, perhaps."

"You claim you could discredit me. That you've not moved to do so already suggests you hesitate at the ramifications-- or that you expect to get something out of me. What's your game, 'grandmother'?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 05, 2020, 06:34:20 pm
We don't need to "mention what we have"-- we do need to put a little bite into our words, lest we come off as acquiescent.

["Nicole is attempting to blackmail us."]
+1

Frown a little. "In a moment, perhaps."

"You claim you could discredit me. That you've not moved to do so already suggests you hesitate at the ramifications-- or that you expect to get something out of me. What's your game, 'grandmother'?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 05, 2020, 07:57:55 pm
"Why would I ruin your success if my life wasn't threatened, Pheobe? If I die, it leaks." Nicole shrugs her shoulders, fixing you with those cold gray eyes. There isn't an ounce of fear in her. "I picked you up off the street. I gave you a name, a purpose, I cleared the path for you to rule -- and you don't even have the courtesy to spit a decree in my face personally. Where would you be without me, Pheobe?"

"SEED wanted you dead. I saved you. I sent you the Pontifex. I gave you a weak general to break. I gave you the authority of a position. And you tell me to surrender when I could have helped you rule."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 08:12:28 pm
"I actually strongly considered giving you the position of Crusader General, given your nearly unmatched political and military experience, and your rare experience with the Plague. When I sent Crusaders to make contact with you, however, you killed them and cut off the tongue of the survivor you sent back.  You were clearly hostile, and to pretend otherwise is nothing more than a farce."

"Of course, if this was truly nothing more than some crazy miscommunication, perhaps we can work together after all."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 05, 2020, 08:24:59 pm
"I actually strongly considered giving you the position of Crusader General, given your nearly unmatched political and military experience, and your rare experience with the Plague. When I sent Crusaders to make contact with you, however, you killed them and cut off the tongue of the survivor you sent back.  You were clearly hostile, and to pretend otherwise is nothing more than a farce."

"Of course, if this was truly nothing more than some crazy miscommunication, perhaps we can work together after all."
I’d like to know what miscommunication there was. It looks to me like she is hostile, considering she killed all but one of our Crusaders. I’d really like to hear why she thought that was a good idea. It might be useful to know what she thought they were sent for.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 08:36:35 pm
Yeah... cutting off someone's tongue and murdering their companions isn't a normal way to express one's displeasure. Maybe she's just crazy?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 05, 2020, 08:44:53 pm
To me it looks like she clearly sent a message that she is hostile. I am surprised that she seems surprised that we are now being hostile to her. Did she forget that the killing happened? Didn’t she...What if someone else did it, knowing we’d think Nicole did it/ordered it? I still think it was Nicole, but I just thought about a possible reason why she might be confused surprised about why we captured her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 05, 2020, 08:48:09 pm
William coughs, interrupting you mid-rant. "The Crusader Section is alive. A little roughed up, but alive."

"The captain was very rude to me. My Outlanders didn't like that. I didn't exactly stop them, though..." Nicole shrugs to the best of her ability.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 05, 2020, 08:52:22 pm
"How did hostilities break out between your forces and the Thorntons? Also, do you really not believe that allowing his tongue to be cut off, detaining our soldiers, and not sending back any message was anything less than depraved and willful negligence?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 05, 2020, 09:09:43 pm
...you know what? Hold up on the accusations a moment. I want to hear the rest of this.

Pinch nose bridge. "Right. Very good. Thank you, William."
"What exactly did that captain tell you?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 05, 2020, 09:18:52 pm
...you know what? Hold up on the accusations a moment. I want to hear the rest of this.

Pinch nose bridge. "Right. Very good. Thank you, William."
"What exactly did that captain tell you?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 05, 2020, 09:59:11 pm
"That I -must- swear fealty to Pheonix of Sol -- that's your new assumed name, right? Maybe he should have said Pheobe Gainer instead of some random name I've never heard." Nicole begins, leveraging herself to stare at you. "When I told him to tell this person to come to see me themselves and ask as much, he told me that he would drag me here in chains if I continued to refuse." She shrugs, letting her head fall back. "I thought you were dead for a while. Or that you went insane again."

"I figured it out when the Thorntons arrived, but by then you had pissed me off, so a little wargame seemed in order." With a voice full of reproach, "Maybe if you had just come yourself instead of sending some dipshit to try and arrest me, I wouldn't have bothered with the dramatics."

"My men die--" William begins, staring down at Nicole, starting to speak.

"Yes and its a tragedy when a gangster gets killed -- at least it wasn't for drugs and money this time!" Nicole snaps, shooting a glare his way. "Boo-hoo, twelve of your trained killers got killed. Get over it."

"You...you got people killed--" You start, staring at her.

Nicole raises an eyebrow at you, "If I wanted to win that city would be burning rubble, with your Warmachines trapped within. Consider it a lesson. How you can hold a city with nothing but desperate Outlanders against the best force in the world. We can deal with whatever petty psychological damage it causes you later. Now untie me -- my real leg feels numb."

"We...we learned a lot..." William mumbles, rubbing at his face with a sigh.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 05, 2020, 10:40:20 pm
...she's dangerous. Malicious. Distasteful-- but for all her bluster, Nicole Gainer's not actually looking to make an enemy of us.
We can't ignore her, and we can't kill her off... but perhaps we can
use her.

I'm inclined to assign Nicole an advisory role within Stormmont-- cut her off from her old base of power, avail ourself of her experience while we're at it. What say you?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 05, 2020, 11:27:53 pm
...I...I'm in agreement, if the Ancestors think its a good idea... You reach down, cutting the binds on her legs, but not her chest or hands. Nicole looks a little relieved, stretching and flexing her leg. You frown,sitting down on the ground near her. You give a glance towards William, who doesn't say a word, instead crossing over to sit nearby. Emma emerges from the elevator. She hesitates, lingering by the door.

"Good to see you back, William." Emma offers cheerfully -- but her eyes are fixed on Nicole. Dark and glaring, cold as ice. "Nicole."

"Emeralda Thornton. Your eyes are different."

"I'm an [angel] now." Emma retorts, sharply.

"You'll always be a [demon] -- you forget I knew your mother, darling. And between the two of them, your mother was the worst." Nicole offers, a little too pleasantly. Emma takes a step forward, her meek willpower gathering about her. William doesn't respond verbally -- he rises, crossing over to her. With a gentle, guiding hand, and a nudge of his willpower, the two leave.

"William and Emma?"

There's no use hiding it -- both radiate a strangeness, an otherworldliness that is hard not to notice. You nod.

"Two snakes turned into [angels]. SEED bless you. Emma is acting a bit cold. Have a falling out?" Nicole quietly, maternally questions.

[2 vs 13] It's hard not to nod.

"She didn't deserve you, darling. It takes a spider to know one and that girl is a spider -- first loves are the hardest, though. I didn't have to worry about it. Mine got ripped apart by his Infected pa'." Nicole reminisces, trying to relate.

"I'm still deciding whether or not to kill you, you know." You snap, bluntly.

"And I'll play the part of your grandmother until you decide to, Pheobe." And there's a sincerity in those words that threatens to break your heart.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 06, 2020, 02:58:27 am
"What role do you see yourself having here?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 06, 2020, 04:06:52 am
"What role do you see yourself having here?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: The Canadian kitten on June 06, 2020, 10:40:06 am
"What role do you see yourself having here?"
+1
+ 1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 06, 2020, 03:53:21 pm
[14 vs 12]I think she should be my advisor and nothing more. As Constantine suggested. I don't feel comfortable with her anywhere else.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 06, 2020, 04:51:18 pm
I agree
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 06, 2020, 06:04:26 pm
"How do I know you won't, for example, poison my ministers because you feel disrespected, or start a bloody insurrection because you feel I am 'rude?'"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 06, 2020, 07:28:35 pm
Nicole bursts out into a laugh. "What is to stop me, Pheobe? Do you think me insane? Do you think me a fool to ruin all my hard work by ruining you?"

"What is the purpose of having or adopting children in politics?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 06, 2020, 09:31:35 pm
"Having an ally bound to you by blood or family?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 06, 2020, 09:58:28 pm
"Building a name-- building something that will outlive you. I'm old Pheobe. I've got another thirty years in me if I'm lucky. I've had no sons, no daughters. If I die-- when I die...what will I have done? A name in a book. One that school children skim." Nicole sags against her bonds, gray hair falling over her drawn, tanned face. "What was it all worth, Pheobe, if I leave nothing behind?"

"SEED damnit, I want to know something I built outlives me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 06, 2020, 10:07:10 pm
"I understand, and there is a place for you here as my advisor.  Where is the Pontifex and Tyler Hop, and can you send messages to any remaining rebels to surrender?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 06, 2020, 10:36:37 pm
That title-- "grandmother"--
--it means every bit as much to her as it once did to us.
This is the heart of Nicole Gainer.

...

...let's not rush this moment.


"I... I understand." Sigh. "I understand. Thank you."
"I'm not in this for the power, you know. I never was."


We could finish untying her, if you see fit. I do not believe she bears us any ill will.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 06, 2020, 11:31:50 pm
I'm not really feeling that warm and fuzzy for a mass murderer that killed our soldiers because she felt slighted.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 07, 2020, 04:05:55 am
"I understand, and there is a place for you here as my advisor.  Where is the Pontifex and Tyler Hop, and can you send messages to any remaining rebels to surrender?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 07, 2020, 04:16:12 am
I'm not really feeling that warm and fuzzy for a mass murderer that killed our soldiers because she felt slighted.
Agreed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 07, 2020, 07:08:44 pm
[20]My hands are not free of the blood of the masses either, Good Doctor. We share Alphira's sins -- orbital bombardments are not delicate works. I cannot judge her for the slaughter of so many when she has the excuse of fighting the Plague.

"I want you as my advisor." You murmur, drawing away from her and hardening your heart. "Where is the Pontifex?"

"In an incinerator's ash bin," Nicole states, staring at the ceiling, her gaze darkening as she looks away from you. "He told me you were insane -- tried to kill him after he tried to use you. The poor boy thought I would be sympathetic."

You blink, and are shocked at how unsurprised you are by the confession of his assassination. "And where is Tyler Hop?"

"Granddaughter, I may care for you greatly, but I fear for your life if you think plotting be as simple as knocking over the metaphorical chessboard. I have a question in return -- what would Tyler Hop do if you tried to seize him? And what would Tyler Hop do, if, out of the green I called him and said for him to stand down? Would he trust me to be of a right mind? Or would he think that I was as good as dead?"

"Is there any rebel factions yo--"

"Once again -- you overestimate and make a fool of yourself." Nicole's voice is suddenly harsh as she turns a dark gaze on you. "Do you think that all people are of like mind? That, once unchained all Hounds can be neatly gathered? People who are in rebellion against you have their own motives for doing so. People are not a united front. If they have a grievance, do you think that they will put that aside because I asked nicely?"

"Well, what about their locat--"

"This is why. This is why you need hard lessons, Pheobe." Nicole suddenly barks, angry. "Do you think people are stupid? Do you think you're the smartest person on this world? I've been captured. This is a fact that has been assumed since the Thorntons laid siege to Steelworks. Any allies that did not help me hold the city have long since found new hiding holes."

You slump in silence, staring at your angry grandmother. "I...I understand." You finally murmur. "I understand...thank you." Nicole's anger subsides, and her straining form slumps against the restraints. You rise, finding a penknife in your room and use it to cut through the restraints. She slowly sits up, rubbing blood into her wrists as she fixes you with a cold stare. You return it, rising to your feet as she does. "I was never in this for the power..." You sigh.

"I'd be disappointed in you if you were." You brace yourself when she takes a step forward, then another, and another -- until she wraps her arms awkwardly around you in a tight hug. "I haven't been there for you as much as I should have been, Pheobe. I'm sorry." She pulls away, looking down at you. "You've been through a lot, haven't you, Pheobe?"

[1] You don't know how it happens, but that drives you into sobs. You hide your face in her shirt as emotions unbidden flood your eyes. She doesn't say a word, doesn't judge for what you see as a weakness. While awkward and ill-suited for providing comfort, she tries her best, giving you hesitant pats on the back and murmuring what she thinks are gentle words of encouragement.

She's quite awful at it, really.



When you finish, you pull away, and Nicole pulls a handkerchief from one of her pockets, using it to wipe at your face and clear beneath your red eyes. "Now, answer me truthfully, do you want me as an advisor? Or would it be better to keep me in house arrest or kill me?" There is no fear in her voice, no concern for her own well-being. "I'm not going to be one of those toadies who fears you if you want me to advise you. I'm not William and Emma -- I'll put my boot in your ass if you need it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 07, 2020, 07:14:38 pm
I do want you as an advisor
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 07, 2020, 07:18:48 pm
Did you kill hundreds of thousands of civilians? You certainly didn't while I was here, or I would have stopped you, Phoenix.

"You have not capitulated. Do you intend to start your own government or become part of mine?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 07, 2020, 07:20:50 pm
"You have not capitulated. Do you intend to start your own government or become part of mine?"
didn’t she answer already?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 07, 2020, 07:22:07 pm
She said she wanted to be our advisor, but if she hasn't capitulated, then it's not clear whether she intends to surrender the district to us or not.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act II:Ancient Enemies
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 07, 2020, 07:23:56 pm
The next image that fills the screen is a picture of you, older, more grim-faced, fires raging around you. Beneath your laughing visage is 'ALPHIRA SOL, PRINCESS OF THE PIRATE KING ALPHIAS SOL.' 'WANTED: DEAD OR ALIVE', 'ONE HUNDRED MILLION CREDIT REWARD', 'PIRACY, GENOCIDE, DESTRUCTION OF FIFTY EMPYREAL NAVY VESSELS, HIGH TREASON AGAINST THE ENDLESS.', 'LAST KNOWN LOCATION:FLEEING THE BATTLE OF THE WALL'.


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 07, 2020, 07:25:16 pm
Yes, Alphira committed great atrocities, but she has ceased to exist. She has already been punished for her crimes through death.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 07, 2020, 07:35:55 pm
She said she wanted to be our advisor, but if she hasn't capitulated, then it's not clear whether she intends to surrender the district to us or not.
She explained when can’t do that. There are various rebel groups, each of which have their own reasons for rebelling. To me it looks like we need to organize a meeting to talk about why each of the various parties rebelled. Continuing the siege and taking it by force ensures they will start rebelling later

Yes, Alphira committed great atrocities, but she has ceased to exist. She has already been punished for her crimes through death.
regardless of what was done in the past, we need to focus on what’s happening now, which is rebellion in a district by multiple parties. Seizing the place by force will not address their grievances, and they will rebel again if those grievances are not addressed.

We still need to make an economy, begin trade, fight the plague, construct/use mines to produce resources for use/trade and many other things, not only do we need to defeat the plague, we have a country to run while doing so
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 07, 2020, 07:41:41 pm
This is an individual that committed crimes beyond measure. The dossier on her that was presented to us was damning. Past behavior is the best way to predict future behavior. But, if I am in the minority here, I will defer to others.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 07, 2020, 07:49:17 pm
This is true. Nicole did mention "I'm not going to be one of those toadies who fears you if you want me to advise you. I'm not William and Emma -- I'll put my boot in your ass if you need it."
This last part I’m assuming means she will tell us when we’re wrong/making a poor decision, Hugh I am not the best at idiom interpretation
The purpose of advisors are to advise us, not tell us everything we’re doing is perfect. The more advisors we have, the more perspectives we gain
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 07, 2020, 07:51:24 pm
That seems fair. I retract my objections.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 07, 2020, 10:02:36 pm
I do want you as an advisor
+1. "I value your insight and your willingness to speak truth to me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 07, 2020, 10:07:09 pm
Ah-hm... we may need to lay down some form of house arrest as well. Nicole spearheaded an insurgency against us-- it'd set a troublesome precedent, to simply let that slide.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 07, 2020, 10:09:31 pm
I agree that there should be some form of punishment. We lost a lot of Thorntons, so maybe William should have a say in this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 08, 2020, 04:39:29 am
I do want you as an advisor
+1. "I value your insight and your willingness to speak truth to me."
+1

lets just leave the house arrest to not letting her leave, especial since last time we punished someone we ripped off his arm.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 08, 2020, 06:47:29 pm
"Could you leave for a moment?" You request of Nicole, and she hesitates, before dipping her head and stepping into the other room. You breathe a heavy sigh and call in William and Emma. They don't take long to re-emerge, but when they do they don't seem very happy. Both are wearing heavy frowns.

"William and Emma, I wanted your recommendations on what punishment Nicole should receive. Your soldiers are the ones that lost their lives capturing her -- you should have a say."

"Death." Emma states, with finality. She didn't even have to hesitate -- but she continues after looking at you. "But William told me what the situation is. No one besides us knows what really happened in the Steelworks. Publically, no one knows your grandmother tried to rebel. So, instead of her head on a platter -- we want a reward."

"What do you want?"

"Steelworks Number Nine. It rightfully belongs to us anyway."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 08, 2020, 07:24:26 pm
Granted
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 08, 2020, 07:34:55 pm
Unsettling.

I deem this transaction... acceptable. If any here deems otherwise, ancient voice or honored host: I ask that you speak.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 08, 2020, 07:56:08 pm
Does this imply self-government and permission to raise armies? If so, the other Families could become envious and fight for the same rights.  However, I don't feel strongly enough about it to reject it, and I do think the Thorntons have earned a reward.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 08, 2020, 09:01:44 pm
"Then we have a gift for you." Emma withdraws a folder from her coat. You skim through it, taking a seat next to the telescope as you read.

...its a document detailing plans to turn Steelworks Number Nine, to be known as Thornig after the war, into a district dedicated to the production of Warmachines, also known as Void Operation Troops.  Looms, Algae Tanks, Integrated Circuitry Factories, Behavioral Modification Tanks, Las-gun factories -- all built using labor paid in subsistence wages. A brutal, grinding program of military modernization, with a massive bunker complex and surface-level fortress included. Within ten years, they expect full regiments of fanatic Warmachines to be produced in a matter of months...

The other documents show how this would be possible, how for the short term, they would use contracted Outlanders working at subsistence wages, to be paid a nice bundle of credits after they finish. They would also grant unused land to these Outlanders, and lay a huge claim on the Outlands themselves. After production of requisite facilities, they would use Loomed and Automated Labor to reach the required level of development.

Following that, they would use rapid-growth loom techniques to produce -blanks-, which would then be indoctrinated as basic soldiers. These blanks, would, if need be, placed into cryogenic storage until necessary. Every tenth Warmachine would be a Loomed Commander, which will require a different, hands-on training program, lead by former soldiers. These programs are, apparently, on the cube as well, attached to the blueprints for the Cognitive Behavior Pods.

One of the details you notice, however, is the lifespan of the rank and file 'blanks' -- the rapid growth program, where the subject is brought to maturity in a matter of weeks apparently results in an incredibly short lifespan for a baseline human. Whereas Homo Fundamentum has a lifespan averaging at one hundred and fifty -- these individuals will have one of thirty years. All downtime and VOID travel will be spent within a cryo-pod.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 08, 2020, 09:22:08 pm
Hmm. Is this unethical? We could definitely make use of what they're proposing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 09, 2020, 02:29:25 am
...

Picture, if you will, a creature born to war.
Raised to war. Doomed to war.
Blood-- fire-- the oblivion of a cryo-pod. These SEEDlings will know nothing else.
They will accept this as their lot. They will be trained after the fashion of zealots. They will live for the story they're told.
They will die with smiles on their lips.

What will their minds be like, that they are made in this way? They are children, trained to the slaughter.
They will be fiercely alien. Worse: they will be mightily, irrevocably human.

Human.

...

Is this ethical?
By no means.

Is this necessary?
I believe so.

Against the Plague, much can be justified. Much can be justified-- so long as we understand what we do, and remember always why we do it. This is key.
This is key.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 09, 2020, 03:33:33 am
I'm all for mass producing soldiers, but aren't we going to be ditching the planet withing ten years?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 09, 2020, 03:14:39 pm
Magnus doesn't seem that bad to me. Maybe we can stay here after all.

"This looks like just what we need to defeat the Plague. Feel free to let me know if there is anything I can do to help you make this a reality."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 09, 2020, 04:01:40 pm
"This project isn't just for the Plague, Pheobe." William replies, "This isn't a program that's going to just be used for ten years after we finish it-- the cost doesn't justify such limited use. We're talking thousands of Warmachines per month."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 09, 2020, 04:12:43 pm
"Incredible... you have designs on the Void?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 09, 2020, 04:21:15 pm
Would it make sense to ask who they plan to fight once the plague is defeated?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 09, 2020, 04:22:58 pm
"Incredible... you have designs on the Void?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 09, 2020, 04:58:06 pm
"Incredible... you have designs on the Void?"
can you explain the purpose of the question?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 09, 2020, 05:05:39 pm
"Do we?" Emma questions in return. "I am uncertain on that myself. What is our long term plan?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 09, 2020, 05:40:46 pm
"My deepest and most secret hope is that we could teach the Empyreal nobles some manners.  If the Rim was united, and if we leveraged the remaining pirate fleets, we could prevent actions like destroying entire planets.  Perhaps it would even be possible to restore the Endless Emperor/Empress, who is either dead or sleeping at the hands of the nobles.  In the process, we would seed our civilization throughout the stars and demonstrate a different way to govern and protect."

"However, if you don't have a similar plan, what are your intentions for all these soldiers?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 09, 2020, 08:26:17 pm
"My deepest and most secret hope is that we could teach the Empyreal nobles some manners.  If the Rim was united, and if we leveraged the remaining pirate fleets, we could prevent actions like destroying entire planets.  Perhaps it would even be possible to restore the Endless Emperor/Empress, who is either dead or sleeping at the hands of the nobles.  In the process, we would seed our civilization throughout the stars and demonstrate a different way to govern and protect."

"However,
if you don't have a similar plan, what are your intentions for all these soldiers?"
i think the if you don’t have. Similar plan bit ao8nds bad, but I can’t really explain, I think it makes us so8nd...is arrogant the right word?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 09, 2020, 09:44:09 pm
Removing that part would be fine with me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 09, 2020, 11:14:14 pm
In bouncing our question back to us, the Thornton daughter reaffirms her fealty.
I wasn't expecting that. It's rather touching.

...anyway.

To bring justice against the Empyre would be a noble cause-- but I do not wish to forget our promise to SEED. What becomes of this world's people, when we leave to war among the stars? Does our bind to SEED's children end with the Plague's destruction?

So too... I have not forgotten our old dream.
Peace. Contentment. Our heir deserves better, than to be bound forever to war.

...

φοῖνιξ.

This is not our choice to make, godling. Where do your loyalties lie? What do you want of this life?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 10, 2020, 12:39:13 am
At The Price of Oblivion (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u--wSgeJUOs)



"What are your intentions with them?" You question instead of directly answering the question, and Emma nods, as if she expected this.

"Insurance. This planet...you made a vow to protect it--but there are horrors in the Void. Pirates. Infection. Armies and empires untold that wish to ravage and steal and take. We are safe by your presence alone -- but your death hangs like a sword above our heads." Emma begins, breathing in and out as she takes a step away from you. "You'll never be free if you fear for this world and its people. I wanted to create shepards to protect the beasts of burden. But...besides that--"

Emma breathes out a shaky breath, looking you right in the eye. "You're broken. An Abomination."

"Oh?" Your willpower suddenly coils tight around you like a beast ready to pounce -- William shifts forward in response, but doesn't say anything. Emma's willpower coils and knots in on itself, shifting and breaking apart like grains of sand in the wind. She doesn't meet your gaze. "Alphira figured it out?" You question, quietly.

"I figured it out. And I don't blame you...but...but..." Emma sighs, tears pricking at her eyes. "Tell me Pheobe -- where do you find the most joy? Where do you feel alive?" When you open your mouth to speak, she cuts you off, "And don't lie to me. I've earned that much."

You stay silent. The elevator door opens, but you simply stare at Emma

"You were born to war. Raised to war. Alphira and you...you were both made for it. And you're doomed to it. Do you know what I've seen, Pheobe? Patches of peace between storms of war. Fire. Death. Blood-- broken only by the oblivion of pain relievers and coma." Emma shifts, twisting at her coat. "And I don't know if you can chang--"

"[You cannot.]" Cephie emerges from the elevator, clad in a towel. William and Emma both do double-takes, surprised. "I came to borrow some clothes!" She exclaims with a small smile that twists into a rictus grin as she strides towards the collection. "[But your Oracle has a point. You're cursed, Pretty Pheonix. We all are. But you've got it bad. Too many issues not to have a problem in that ]fucked up[ brain of your's. Despite the paths we might choose to follow, despite our wants and our willpower. There's a price for Ascendence--one we must all pay.]"

"[The Deathwish.]" They say it as one, quietly, coldly.

"[We cannot kill ourselves. Not directly. Never once have I thought of suicide. It used to be on my mind allllll the time.]" Cephie explains, passing you by to enter your room and steal your clothing. Calling out in High Empyreal, "[But what do we do when we're a thousand-- two thousand years old? And the Empyre has passed us by? What do we do when all that we've loved has crumbled to death around us? When our battles have been for nothing, when time loses meaning besides a way to count all that we've lost? ]"

She emerges in a sloppy SEED uniform, adjusting the buttons and tightening the belts. "[The eldest of our kind begin to seek an honorable death. They begin to fight battles with worse and worse odds. They throw themselves into the fray without regard for their health.]" Cephie turns to look at you, eyes moist as she looks through you. "[When they are bleeding, wounded, and broken -- they lift themselves up by willpower alone to return to the fray. A bright candle burning at both ends to throw away their remaining time.]"

"[Our kind does not die comfortably in bed, surrounded by loved ones. That is the price for Ascendence. Comfort. I saw Conquest depicted in her power...There was a sharpened sword above her head...That hung there by the thinnest simple thread..]" Cephie takes a seat, yawning and stretching out. "So what got us on to the morbid topic?"



Your anger boiled over at some point. That much you know -- but William and Cephie were ready. Nothing was damaged, but you've left them behind to soar through the cold winter air, into the ruins of the city-state.  Your blood pounds in your ears. Lucille is still adjusting herself to your frame, but you pay her no mind.

What powers should I experiment with?




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 10, 2020, 12:52:53 am
Dust manifestation. Condense your will and project a new arm, as you would with your wings. Lose yourself in exertion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 10, 2020, 01:19:17 am
Ah me. This was the gift of our [Emperor/Empress], I fear... a clean passing.

I'd rather not risk our cohesion on dustwork right now-- and at any rate, I can't help but feel we're here to break something.
Take up the will of McCreary, godling: rend the earth, as you did against your last Colossus. Spikes and chasms.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 10, 2020, 02:22:57 am
Dust manifestation. Condense your will and project a new arm, as you would with your wings. Lose yourself in exertion.
+1 It is time for experimentation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 10, 2020, 08:20:56 am
Dust manifestation. Condense your will and project a new arm, as you would with your wings. Lose yourself in exertion.
+1 It is time for experimentation.
Protecting the planet sounds like a good use of the Warmachines. Can someone explain why we’re ready to break things?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 10, 2020, 11:31:21 am
You are furious.

Phoenix is... letting off some steam.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 10, 2020, 11:36:25 am
You are furious.

Phoenix is... letting off some steam.
Makes sense
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 12, 2020, 05:02:18 am
You touch down in one of the blasted cities, close to where the Bioplastics district once used to stand in proud testament to the industry of SEED. You drift through the rubble, the rotting corpses and the broken glass scattered across the street. The radiation here isn't so bad anymore -- not after the initial blast. It faded quickly, leaving many things intact. One could, if the want struck them, drift through the ruins and probably find mementos of lost loves and dead friends. You knew no one here. Or maybe you did. Many of your friends from the Academy are still missing -- there is no record anymore. Too much centralization, you suppose.

The reason you came here is not to reminisce over fallen friends. From above you saw the scurrying of the Plague as they dug through rubble, searching for technology to steal or corpses to devour. And you've come to put a stop to whatever fell purpose they have. Not out of selflessness, no, but out of burning anger.

[20] Even then, you may have gone a little overboard...



Your arm doesn't return, no matter how much you might try. There must be a natural deterrent in the semi-organic programming of your artificial body. Why? You cannot begin to question. The datapad might have answers for you in the future -- or perhaps Magnus or Cephie could provide such an answer. As for now -- it doesn't work. If your theory and memory are correct, you are a collection of nanites as opposed to a true physical entity. You let fire twist itself to life at your back, upon your empty shoulder, and you focus on the hand that is intact...

[10][18][20]
...and you unravel it into Dust, into Essence, into black particles constrained within a field of your Willpower. They twist and writhe of their own volition, but the struggle is brief. You capture particles of hydrogen between these new reference points and ignite them with minute bursts of electrical energy that your body discharges. A sudden gout of flame burns away the empty cloth surrounding your hand -- and Lucille stiffens the joints of your armor, keeping the glove locked in place.

With a silent flex of your faint blue claws, you smile. Then you begin to compress the hydrogen, feeding the flames until they glow brightly in what dull light shines down through the dull clouds of ash and snow. Faint trails of ice drift down, only to melt away upon approaching your twin claws of fire.

You approach the group of Infected, not bothering to hide as you stroll down the street with a purposeful air. Lines of heat drift out into the cold air, making it shimmer with the difference. Lucille deflects a las-gun shot from your torso --

[7][13][13] And after a brief strain of your willpower, you shred the ground open in front of you to devour those bold enough to fire upon an Angel. The roadway rips itself apart, splitting with a massive crack and a faint rumble of the earth. Savage spikes lance out from the walls to impale the falling Abominations, skewering them through.

-- but you're bored with them. A Colossus screams a static hiss, the ground quaking and shaking as it leverages its immense body through the ruined streets, knocking down what little remains standing as it carves a path of destruction. You turn, waiting patiently, your claws of fire twitching impatiently. You tense your leg muscles, slowly building the pressure of the hydrogen within your wings.

[12 vs. 7] It crashes through a building, and slams a gray tentacle down to crush you -- but you were ready. You lift your claws and catch the flailing appendage with fire and energy as opposed to weak flesh. You feel a shockwave through your arms, your legs, your muscles and bones- but flex against it. Then, with a sudden twist of Willpower, you burn through the armor and flesh of the fell worm --

-- and you throw the severed tentacle to the side as its beady, leech black eyes survey the data you just provided it. Could it express emotion besides rage and hunger, you would think it was surprised. You stare up at it, a figure of gold and black, with glowing claws of flame and seven burning wings that dull the sun's own brilliance. Black viscera drips down your facemask, staining the grinning androgynous, angelic carving with stinking ichor. This feels good. This feels right. This -scum- deserves death. These are your people -- and if it thinks it can do with them what it wills without your permission? There's going to be repercussions.

[||||||\]

Is it wrong that I enjoy this? Does that make me a monster? Does it make me a MONSTER THAT I WANT TO RIP OUT ITS GODSDAMNED ORGANS THROUGH THAT TRAVESTY OF A MOUTH?




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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 12, 2020, 05:22:31 am
No. Wanting to end the Plague does not make you a monster. Let's finish thiz and attack more plague territory
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 12, 2020, 07:35:42 am
Sure kill all of them you want it saves you having to kill them later.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 12, 2020, 09:39:37 am
It makes you a daughter of our Line, φοῖνιξ-- Sol's child, for good or ill. You will surpass us all.
Wreak your fury. Exult in it. It is yours.

...mind your wound.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 12, 2020, 11:27:39 am
It is what it is.  As long as you focus your hate on the wicked, your intent is noble, not monstrous.

Sever more tentacles.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 13, 2020, 10:13:34 pm
((Hi! So, due to an ill-conceived idea, I will be unable to post today. I apologize for the inconvenience. After this weekend, I will post at my regular pace and schedule. Thanks for your patience. TLDR: I got five hours of sleep and worked 16+ hours. Too tired to post. This isn't dead, I promise.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 13, 2020, 10:16:26 pm
((No worries, real life takes priority.  Take as long as you need.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 13, 2020, 10:59:24 pm
((No worries, real life takes priority.  Take as long as you need.))

+1

But yah, sleep's important. Take care of yourself Egar.  :)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 16, 2020, 11:52:52 pm
((I RETURN))



[19 vs. 5][2] The Colossus finishes sizing you up, but you were expecting it. You leap out of the way, trying to summon the Willpower to strike the beast with fire. However, your arithmetic runs into a problem-- instead you hack and slash the offending tentacles, slicing them away. Black ichor splatters the paving stones as you size up the creature for another strike.

[||||||.]

[7 vs. 10][6] It twists back in pain, rearing up to face you with a lash of its tentacles and a guttural snarl that brings down more mortar and brick from the broken houses nearby. It begins to produce static, hissing heavily to try and dampen your formulas and ruin your concentration. It works, the noise, the vibrations in the air, they distract you, stabbing deep into your central nervous system. You grit your teeth, and, with a release of stored hydrogen through your wings, you lunge at the creature.

[5 vs. 20] [1 vs. 18] [12] Your thigh snaps as you are batted out of the sky and sent spiraling into the street. You catch yourself, rolling with the attack. With pained gasps, you take hold of your leg -- Lucille protected you from the Infection, thank all the gods. All you have to show for the brutal swipe is a broken thigh bone and a few bruises from your rolling fall.

[18-1] Granted distance by the creature's rage, you drag yourself to your feet, biting down hard to stifle your scream of pain as your thigh bone is snapped back into place and mended by your Essence. With shaky breaths, you eye the creature as it coils itself down the street to chase after it's prey.

[2-1 vs 2] You lunge again as it nears you -- but with a flex, a convulsion of its ugly muscles, a burst of lightning lashes out into the cold air, striking you in the chest. Your breath catches as you fall back, panic surging up as your muscles tense and seize from the voltage pouring through them. Your armor deflects most of it and begins to breathe for you as you crouch--

[20 vs. 1] Tentacles lash down -- only to find you missing. A sudden burst of speed as you force hydrogen into your wings, propelling you straight into the creature's torso. Claws first. You burn a grievous wound, the size of your body, into the beast as you rip and tear your way through its 'chest'. It screams and it static fails it in its pain.

[|||....]

[12 vs. 6] The tide turns as you pivot, firing forward with your wings and dragging your 'claws' into its back, scoring it with burns and savage rends. Ichor follows your path as you force the dull edges of your 'claws' through its skin and armor. Your arms ache from the exertion -- even if the flesh sublimates the instant your talons touch it.

[||.....]

[2 vs. 2] It swats at you, scoring its back and slamming you into its fleshy torso. It does not penetrate your armor, thankfully, and you dig your claws in deeper, twisting and squirming them in retort. It screams again as you pull yourself away from those razor-tipped appendages, glad to be no worse for the wear.

[|......]

It slumps as ichor pours from the horrid wounds you, and itself, inflicted on its armored flesh. The street below your feet has a pool of its blood spreading wider and wider. It collapses with rasping breaths, its eyes turning to find your face as it weakly scrabbles to reach you. Its ichor drips from the orifice you would call its mouth. Rage still boils within you, even if you're coated in a thick layer of its blood and viscera. You approach, twisting your claws,  feeling powerful. This is where you belong -- standing above your maimed foe.

[20 vs. 18] "BEG." You roar, slamming your claws into its face and dragging it up to 'look' at you. "I -own- this planet, Plague. And I will rip you apart to protect it. BEG!" Its tentacles curl upward weakly as the feral spark leaves its eyes. It twists its 'facial' appendages, miming a very human begging motion.

[19 vs. 20] You hesitate. You were just talking trash -- but this creature is actually begging for its life.

Your mercy doesn't last long -- you kill it by extending your claw and ripping its face apart with a gout of black and brain. You drop the corpse and stagger back, slumping down as you stare at the lifeless abomination in front of you.

What now?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 17, 2020, 12:18:38 am
The plague deserves no mercy.

Engage healing factor and then try to overwhelm an infected with your will, leaving it either compliant or broken. Then, freeze it solid.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 17, 2020, 03:44:47 am
The plague deserves no mercy.

Engage healing factor and then try to overwhelm an infected with your will, leaving it either compliant or broken. Then, freeze it solid.
+1 Sounds good, and after that find more plague things to kill.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 17, 2020, 06:16:45 am
The plague deserves no mercy.

Engage healing factor and then try to overwhelm an infected with your will, leaving it either compliant or broken. Then, freeze it solid.
+1 Sounds good, and after that find more plague things to kill.
+1 for finding more plague hosts to kill, but I don’t think we can convert something we killed, we can freeze it though, nvm, rereading this mentions finding another to try this with, +1 to all
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 17, 2020, 09:49:11 am
((Heyo!))



Hold, elders.

This is what you are capable of, daughter-of-Sol-- this and more. This is the power that makes you a god to this world.

Now, I ask: can you be all this, and remember still what is dear to you? Can you be all this, and remember still the identity you have built for yourself these three years?

Your Ascendancy will tear you apart, φοῖνιξ, if you cannot. It will strip away your humanity, and leave you a monster in truth. A [demon].
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 17, 2020, 12:46:20 pm
Maybe that would be for the best. This world and the Void are unkind. Perhaps I should try to be just as cruel. Or perhaps I should just give up -- save this world and turn myself over for death. I would inspire many with my sacrifice -- reignite the rebellion that wages across the stars.

[17][20][8][14]
First, you knit your hand back together. The process is complicated, but, when you remember what your hand looked like, how it felt, how it operated, the fire goes out, and the dust twists itself back into the shape of your flesh and bone. For a second, when your concentration breaks, flames start to spread up your arm, but you regain control of the arithmetic before the damage can spread. With a heavy breath, you flex your pale fingers.

[18] You heal the minor bruises and scratches across your body, and finish patching the hole in your chest. You decide to take a look -- and between your breasts, laterally, is a line of ugly, pink scar tissue.

[8 vs 6]
[16 vs 4]
The Abomination you approach is mindless -- it huddles in the shade against the cold, its twisted parody of a human face turning towards you as you approach. It makes to lunge but stops within its tracks as you bring your will to bear against it. It's a struggle at first, eventually, it stills, staring at you blankly. Its gnashing teeth and cloven jaw working at nothing. You step closer, and it doesn't respond to your body temperature as long as you keep up the pressure of your willpower. You pat it gently, delicately, with a finger.

Nothing.

[20] You thought that freezing something would be much more difficult than heating something up. Surprisingly, it isn't. While your area of effect is small -- its still large enough that you can still the atoms of hydrogen bound up in the molecules of water within the Abomination's throat. You force the formula with your anger-- and the creature goes still as faint frost forms on around its neck. It sways, then collapses, and, with a faint shatter, its head tumbles away.

I dare say that worked well. I can't freeze its entire body, though. I don't think I'm strong enough to literally slow down or stop the motion of all the hydrogen.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 17, 2020, 02:12:07 pm
Ho, there's a trick.

Whatever your choice in the coming years, φοῖνιξ, we will see it through-- but if you wish to save this world still, you shall have to cling to your humanity a while longer yet. Your people need you whole.


Now... purge this ruin. Finish your work.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 17, 2020, 03:50:43 pm
You can be a greater inspiration alive than dead. Don't be so quick to give in to desperation and despair.

Ho, there's a trick.

Whatever your choice in the coming years, φοῖνιξ, we will see it through-- but if you wish to save this world still, you shall have to cling to your humanity a while longer yet. Your people need you whole.


Now... purge this ruin. Finish your work.
+1. Do so by imparting kinetic energy on the hydrogen within the abominations, sending them or parts of their bodies flying away at speed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 17, 2020, 04:08:50 pm
You can be a greater inspiration alive than dead. Don't be so quick to give in to desperation and despair.

Ho, there's a trick.

Whatever your choice in the coming years, φοῖνιξ, we will see it through-- but if you wish to save this world still, you shall have to cling to your humanity a while longer yet. Your people need you whole.


Now... purge this ruin. Finish your work.
+1. Do so by imparting kinetic energy on the hydrogen within the abominations, sending them or parts of their bodies flying away at speed.
I think burning them would be a better option, sending parts flying spreads them and can potentially infect animals that find and ingest the parts. Burning them eliminates that risk
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 17, 2020, 04:19:18 pm
By encountering new ways to use our powers, we increase our versatility and survivability. If we just burned everything to death, the plague would adapt and eventually render that useless.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 17, 2020, 05:37:39 pm
By encountering new ways to use our powers, we increase our versatility and survivability. If we just burned everything to death, the plague would adapt and eventually render that useless.
this is fair, I’m worried about potentially spreading it, like if vultures or Barkers found the resulting pieces and ate them, there;d be plague vultures and Barkers. That’s why I suggested burning, as that’s a sure way to stop the pieces from causing infections, though thinking about it now, the heat from moving all those hydrogen atoms would likely still end up burning the parts
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 17, 2020, 06:38:45 pm
Maybe we could try launching one or two abominations by applying force to the hydrogen within them, just to see if it works, and the rest we could burn as normal?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 17, 2020, 10:07:39 pm
[16][4][18]
You find a few abominations clustered together, and, from the air, you try to fling them apart by imparting kinetic energy into their flesh. It's not as visceral as you hope for -- they fly back dramatically but are otherwise intact. Two of them do, at least. The third lumbers towards you stupidly, reaching out with its gnarled hands to try and grab at your feet.

[17]
That one you focus on. Using hydrogen in two different sides of its body as reference points, you twist them away from each other with a sudden force-- and bones crack as the pressure of its vital fluids rips against one another. It slumps down, dead-- but there's no visceral removal of limbs or explosion of gore. The two you sent flying huddle together in a crook, against the wind, having seemingly lost sight of or interest in you. The look no worse for the wear-- besides maybe some bruising from you flinging them away.

Can't I just drop this city in a hole? Killing every abomination is going to take all day-- I've already lost like three of them.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 17, 2020, 10:44:23 pm
Good grief, can you? That's amazing-- go for it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 17, 2020, 10:49:07 pm
..I...I didn't expect to honestly get permission. Not gonna lie...I was just trying to be...lazy. Want me to try?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 17, 2020, 11:30:56 pm
[20] You consider the mathematics, then, with a stroke of inspiration, you decide to try for maximum damage. Instead of trying to rip apart the earth, you instead will let gravity do the work for you.

[11][19][15]
Gathering up the maximum amount of material you can lift, roughly [two thousand and four hundred kilograms] of silicon, you begin to lift yourself, and it up. Up, and up, and up, pushing yourself higher and higher, focusing on the lift of your wings and the heavy material that strains against your willpower.

[Pull up an altimeter, Lucille.]

[14][14][10]
It's a struggle to lift this much material, but you manage, until your altimeter chimes in at [20 miles]. You push yourself a little higher-- the air is freezing here, and the reaction to sustain your wings begin to falter as the oxygen thins.

[25 miles]

[13][4][5]
You cannot sustain it any longer as your stomach growls angerily with the strain on your calories. You're lightheaded with hunger -- and decide to cut your losses. You sever your willpower -- and the rough orb of silicon drops, gathering speed, faster and faster, hitting terminal velocity. You can see the explosion from where you gently hover down -- a small cloud of deterius flying up into space from the impact to meet you.

The city center where you fought is a crater, and small fires burn across the remaining blocks. There's a cloud of ash and dust drifting down, and you drop on to some rubble in the outskirts, polishing off the last of your nutrient cubes -- your stomach still rumbles as you survey the damage. You've leveled half the small city, reducing it to a crater with the energy of the dropped rock.

By my math, that rock had about [7.57549590924 × 108 joules of energy or 1.5kt of TNT] on impact.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 17, 2020, 11:39:06 pm
That was incredible!  It looks like it's time to head back, though.

Return to Stormmont.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 17, 2020, 11:57:44 pm
Ha! Your "laziness" is an inspiration.

I've come to realize, Phoenix...
I have no idea what you're capable of. Again and again you've proven this so-- if you tell me you can work a miracle, I will believe.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 18, 2020, 12:08:23 am
[-] Your wings flicker and die when you try to lift yourself into the ai -- your stomach pounding with each beat of your heart like a fist striking it--

...don't speak too soon. I think I overdid it again. At least this time I'm not bleeding out -- or stuck on the bottom of an ocean. With shaky feet, and a glance to the north from where you came, you begin the long trek back to Stormmont. Night falls as you trudge through fallow fields covered in snow and ash. A farmhouse sits here or there, but they are all empty -- besides the corpses that could not escape the blast. The food stores have been ruined by the wet, the radiation, the freezing cold, and burning heat -- picked clean of anything substantial by scavengers.

[18] You come across a small manor, behind a wall of concrete and barbed wire. Rotting corpses sit at their posts, bones showing through flesh that froze mid-slough. A pang of hunger rumbles within your stomach as you hesitate to enter. A Family Villa, intact from the earthquakes and rending of the earth from SEED's self-destruction. There is no gunshot to meet you, so you step closer to the gate.

You hesitate. There might be bandits, or Infected, or a renegade Family within.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 18, 2020, 12:14:51 am
Do you detect any reactors within?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 18, 2020, 12:17:45 am
[10] There's a faint hum deep beneath the ground. It's dormant, running the barest necessities to keep the reactor from shutting down completely or going critical.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 18, 2020, 12:18:47 am
Knock on the door.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 18, 2020, 12:25:30 am
You rip open the gate with a strain of your muscles, breaking through the frozen iron padlock as you make your way to the front door. It's quite ornate, topped with carvings and runes you do not understand -- probably some Familial Culture thing. You give the wooden door a gentle rap.

[-] There's no reply.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 18, 2020, 12:31:30 am
Open it and take a look inside.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 18, 2020, 12:42:38 am
[-] You shrug.

With a kick, the locked door shatters inward, breaking free from the frame. You step inside the poorly lit room, your eyes adjusting to capture all the light possible. Lucille runs a scan as you shut the door on the cold against you. Inside, perhaps due to the low power reactor, is warm. You drift through the upper levels, and find a huge fridge -- that's completely empty, besides for empty boxes and detritus. Molding leaves of green vegetables, rotten potatoes and [carrots], old dried meat with mold on it that might poison even you.

[13] A heartbeat pings on your scanner -- and you try to dive to the ground. Too late, however, as a las-gun blast lances into your broken backplate, rupturing flesh and turning your blood to steam. The pain rips through your system as you twist into cover. It numbs rapidly, even as your blood begins to drip to the floor in heavy rivulets.

"That was a warning shot!" A male's voice calls to you from outside the fridge.

"Damn accurate for a warning shot."

"Maybe you shouldn't have been in my Family's larder then, you [punk, looter, hooligan]!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 18, 2020, 12:47:23 am
"There's nothing left.  What would I steal? I just need a place to rest for the night. Look, what Family are you a part of? I can get you access to Stormmont where it's safe."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 18, 2020, 01:02:06 am
Hnn. This is all far too familiar for comfort.

Heal, if possible.

If needs must, a bit of hydrogen twisted in the brain ought to kill that one swift and easy. One of Alphira's pirate tricks, yes?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 18, 2020, 01:13:14 am
The strain of attempting to heal while starving might kill us, I fear.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 18, 2020, 01:17:42 am
[5] "It's more the principle of the thing! You don't just walk into someone's house, go into their fridge and try to find food!" He shouts -- then, "What the fuck is Stormmont? Caltrop Family --" You try to heal during the introductions, but no luck-- you're too hungry, too exhausted to focus. It's probably why you didn't notice the las-gun reactor -- or the sluggish response of Lucille's heartbeat scan. "Who the hell are you -- and why are you dressed like an Infected?"

You glance down -- besides for the new splotches of red on your armor, you're completely covered in black ichor and dust. Your golden armor doesn't shine too brightly.

"Are you a crazy or something? Come out with your hands up -- or the next shot won't miss!" He didn't miss at all -- you reach back, feeling at the edges of your new wound. It's about [six inches] across, a sore rupture of mangled flesh on your left shoulder. He's scared or worried, that much is true. Fear edges his voice, and he breathes deeply.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 18, 2020, 01:20:27 am
"Okay, I'm coming out with my hands up. Don't shoot. You may not believe me, but I am the Angel Alphira.  I've been fighting Infected all day, which is why I look like this. Stormmont is a nearby fortress that many from the Holy City have evacuated to."

Send out our will to pacify him and try to remember anything about his Family, such as whether they were relocated.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 18, 2020, 04:17:12 am
[-]You've never heard of their Family -- they're probably presumed dead--

[9-5] You try to pacify him with your willpower, but your hunger, exhaustion, and bloodloss gets the better of you-- you see stars and stumble. He twitches, but doesn't fire-- and his eyes widen. "SEED have mercy, I didn't wing you-- holy [hell]." He doesn't lower the weapon, keeping it fixed on you as you peel your helmet off and let it tumble from your fingers. You try to give him a pleasant smile but it probably comes off more like a grimace.

[16] "SEED have mercy I shot Alphira--" He lowers the gun, calling out to someone else in the house to fetch vodka and bandages. You stumble into his hands and he drags you into the former living room, pushing you face down on a couch. He peels away the shattered armor, delicately setting it to one side. Everything blurs for a minute -- until pain awakens you as he presses the vodka soaked bandage to your ruptured back. "Shit-- shit.." He repeats, stemming the flow of blood.

"Food. I need-- I need food. Please." You mumble into the couch cushions. You're glad you have an amazing immune system, otherwise you might get an infection from this. A few minutes later, the frantic man is feeding you pieces of dusty nutrient cubes haphazardly chunked into water. Your stomach stops aching after a few bowls and you focus your scattered willpower to healing.

[20-3] Its an effort, but you manage to seal the wound on your back shut for now, and relax into the couch. You rest for an hour, quietly, recovering your strength. You shift forward, rising from your prone position -- the Caltrop man is sitting across from you, eyes full of concern, knuckles white as he kneads his fingers in on themselves.

You give him a crooked smile, slowly sitting up.

"I thought you were a bandit -- or an Infected. I--I didn't think. I'm sorry. Are you going to be okay?" Besides for a faint ache from minor muscle damage, you feel fine. "I've had my little brother draw up a bath for you -- it ain't hot, but we ain't got much in the way of power. Enough to keep some lights on and our water purifier running. I'm Fredrick Caltrop. It's a pleasure to meet you." He pauses, "Now, I know I'm not much of a position to ask this -- but you were mumbling something about a fortress or something nearby? Could me and him take shelter there? We ain't got anything to trade..." There's another nervous pause as he wrings his fingers, "But we're running out of hydrogen."

Your stomach protests as you slowly peel off your armor and set it on the rustic coffee table in front of you, stripping down to your underlay with mechanical, practiced movements. "Yeah. Don't worry. I'll send someone to evac you once I get back." You promise, without a thought, and Fred slumps with relief. The light in the room is dim, but you take a look at the man. He's in that awkward area between a man's teens and thirties. Tall, lanky, a shock of golden hair with brown eyes and pale, tanned skin. He looks a little drawn, but considering the literal apocalypse outside the manor's doors, you could give him a break.

"T-thank you, Alphira." He stammers.

"Could you get me some more food?" You bluntly question, rising.

"Of course -- I've got some beans and grain I've been saving. I'll cook you up something-- It'll be ready when your bath is ready." He ducks his head politely, still wringing his fingers nervously. "Yo-you're awfully accepting of people shooting you."

"I've been shot a lot. I'm starting to think it's the standard greeting on this planet."

"What?"

You wave him off as a youth calls from somewhere upstairs. Fred gives another nod and takes his leave. You follow the young voice, and find a well-appointed bathroom. It isn't as ornate or modern as the Thornton's, consisting only of a bath, a latrine, and a sink, all made out of what looks to be plastic. The youth looks like a carbon copy of his brother, down to the mannerisms. He dips his head and hurries out, and, as soon as you lock the door, you sink into the freezing waters of the tub. It doesn't take you long to wash away the blood and grime of the day, and by the end of it, the water is a faint grey.

There's a knock at the door-- "I've left clothes for you. We look the same height and I figure you'd want to clean your armor and such." Fred calls, and his footsteps recede. You rise, snatching the clothes and dry towel -- everything smells of mold and must, but its better than the acrid chemical smell of the Infection. You pull on the long sleeves and heavy coat, leaving your underlay where it lay as the tub drains with rough, uneven gurgles.

I get shot by nice people too often. I'm starting to think it's a character flaw.

The kitchen is grimy. Trash litters many of the surfaces, bowls and plates clutter the sinks, half-empty alcohol bottles cover the counter-tops. There's a pot of a soupy grain and bean mash on the table, steaming hot and smelling of [juniper] and [rosemary]. You can just tell its going to be salty. But Fred is playing the gracious host. There's clean cutlery on the table, and he insists on serving his guest first. While all the cups have caked on mold, he has a bottle of a vintage wine sitting beside your bowl.

With a sharp nudge of his finger, he jabs his little brother in the side. "Manners -- we're Family-folk. Introduce yourself!"

"Hello Mother Alphira -- I'm Timothy..." The youth gets another nudge in the side, "I'm Timothy Caltrop."

Fred gives a nod, giving you a placating smile as he bows his head and murmurs a prayer to SEED. You're tempted to interrupt but play along, ignoring the grumbling of your stomach. You were right, however, there is way too much salt in this, and way too many herbs. But its warm, and filling, and sticks to your bones against the cold of the night, so you pay him a compliment. By the time the three of you finish with the pot, half of your bottle is empty.

"Do--well, what brought you out here?" Fred questions. "I-I heard you had wings. I didn't expect you to walk, to be truthful. I'm glad you did, don't get me wrong. But it's dangerous out there. Looters and Infected. I've seen things stalking through the fields -- like Hounds, but worse. Seeing more and more of them, too."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 18, 2020, 07:56:57 am
I feel like we should personally escort these guys to the for so they don't get killed by all the hostile crap wondering around, especially since we broke the gate.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 18, 2020, 03:20:28 pm
We'd have to walk the whole way, under-supplied in infected territory. Quicker and easier for all concerned if we fly home on our own power, then send a hovercraft down for the Caltrop brothers.

Nod. "Lots of plague about... I was out purging one of their cities. Rough work."
"Grueling work. Flew in-- couldn't fly out. Thought I'd shelter here." (Try for a grin.) "Wasn't expecting the hospitality."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 18, 2020, 03:23:19 pm
We'd have to walk the whole way, under-supplied in infected territory. Quicker and easier for all concerned if we fly home on our own power, then send a hovercraft down for the Caltrop brothers.

Nod. "Lots of plague about... I was out purging one of their cities. Rough work."
"Grueling work. Flew in-- couldn't fly out. Thought I'd shelter here."

+1. Yeah, maybe we could accompany the hovercraft, but it wouldn't be wise to walk with them back to the fortress.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 18, 2020, 04:01:20 pm
If we're leaving them here for now, we should work on repairing the gate we broke
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 18, 2020, 06:47:39 pm
That seems fair.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 18, 2020, 11:47:29 pm
"I cannot apologize enough for that, Infected and Looters have been poking around, trying to find food or water or fuel. None of them have come inside, thankfully. I've been worried about it, lately." Fred shrugs his shoulders, eying his dozing brother with a small smile. "Me and Tim are all that's left. Our mother, father and eldest sister were in the city when this happened, I think."

He sighs, "Probably missed the evacuation if what you're telling me is true -- or got hit by the radiation burst. Him and I were underground when it happened. I think we got spared. Had a bit of sickness, though, for a little while. That...that got me worried. But we seem to have gotten better now." Fred explains, then, slowly, he rises, scooping up his little brother and ticking his head down the stairs. "We're sleeping on the sublevels. We got a blast door and a shelter down there. You're welcome to stay the night-- it's the least I can offer."

You are tired, and the histamines in the wine are not helping your exhaustion. You yawn, rubbing at your face while you consider the Caltrop's offer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 18, 2020, 11:51:38 pm
"Thank you, that would be lovely. Do you know the locations of any other survivors in the area?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 19, 2020, 12:03:30 am
"What the radiation didn't do, the Infected finished, I'm afraid. I stayed away from other people. There was one group nearby, but I wouldn't trust them. Might be a few minor Families like mine holed up somewhere." You rise as Fred speaks, leaving the dishes where they were and making your way down the main staircase. He keys in a code, unlocks it with a key, and pulls the heavy door open. He scoops up his little brother from where he deposited him. Down here is much cleaner, filled with crates of food, some machinery, and a few beds. "A couple of servants survived too-- but...they left. Wanted to find their loved ones and bring them back. I didn't stop them." The door rattles shut behind you, and Fred seals it with a manual system.

With a quirk of his lips, he sets his brother down on one of the beds and tucks him in gently, gesturing you over to the heater where a few seats are placed. After adjusting a control panel, he sits down nearby. "I probably could have stopped them -- but I don't blame them. Iunno what I would have done without Tim."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 19, 2020, 12:11:24 am
"It was noble of you to be willing to shelter their loved ones.  I'm glad I ran into you both, as there is plenty of space in Stormmont.  When we return, I will be sure to look into whether your mother, sister, and father were part of the evacuation."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 19, 2020, 06:25:53 am
"It was noble of you to be willing to shelter their loved ones.  I'm glad I ran into you both, as there is plenty of space in Stormmont.  When we return, I will be sure to look into whether your mother, sister, and father were part of the evacuation."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 19, 2020, 03:18:41 pm
"Not really. A more noble sort would've helped them out. I would appreciate that." Fred nods, "I've got first watch if you'd like to sleep."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 19, 2020, 03:23:36 pm
"Okay, wake me up when it's my turn."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 19, 2020, 03:25:04 pm
"Okay, wake me up when it's my turn."
”or if something goes wrong”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 20, 2020, 12:40:33 am
After those parting words, you fall into the bed. Sleep quickly claims your exhausted form --

--

[-] The Planet below is beautiful, and blue, with swirling clouds shining with multicolored hues in the bright light of its white sun. It's setting on the megacity below. It's a massive VOID forward industrial complex -- one that supplies a nearby shipyard with plenty of superalloys, hyper-conductors, and all the other materials needed to keep a VOID-based fleet operational. Three custom outfit Pirate warships hover nearby.

There is no VOID defenses at this moment. This city of a billion souls lies ripe for the slaughter.


"Saga of Discord. We're ready and in position, Alphira."

"Burning Night. Green light."

"Gold Tooth. Golden. Heh, you see what I did the--" Your forward comms office cuts off the transmission before you pop a blood vessel -- or a VOID vessel.

"All escorts are green for engagement. We've laced the hydrogen-antimatter bombs with your nanites, as requested. We're good to go on your orders -- any words to transmit?" She questions, turning to face you in her swivel chair, settling her hands across her lap.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 20, 2020, 12:46:10 am
"Send this to the crew.  We'll make the Empyreal Navy cower in fear!  Let's make my father proud.  Fire!  Send them all to Hell!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 20, 2020, 04:38:41 am
"Send this to the crew.  We'll make the Empyreal Navy cower in fear!  Let's make my father proud.  Fire!  Send them all to Hell!"
+1 To burninating the helpless peasants planets.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 20, 2020, 09:19:20 am
You are dreaming, φοῖνιξ. Live the dream as you may, but remember: this was not your doing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 20, 2020, 12:06:27 pm
You must understand the difference between right and wrong.  Take note of how wrong this feels, and let this be a warning of what you could become.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 20, 2020, 12:14:45 pm
They don’t pose a threat, plus blowing the place up destroys what we came here for, we could take what we need without killing the people here
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 21, 2020, 12:17:15 am
[-]"Lets make Alphias proud, shall we? We'll make the Navy cower in fear! If any of you have doubt -- simply remember Blackport! Check your angles, calibrate the lines, and open the beacon. Let's send them all to whatever hell they deserve." You command into your communicator. Then, you focus...

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Scattered throughout the vessel are small vials -- semi-organic relays, designed to keep your nanites alive for extended periods of time. You route your willpower through one, then another and another, stretching it further and further out, until it engulfs the ship.A complex spiderweb designed to amplify and spread it out. You route power from the engines, pushing it into an array at the bottom of the ship--

Expanding, folding, routing, until you no longer feel connected to your physical body -- no, you are the ship.


The Wings of Sol's Retribution, or, Retribution opens fire. Missiles sparkle as they fall to the planet below. Through your array, you can reach into them. You overexcited the hydrogen, sending it careening wildly with extra charge.

The impacts are visible from space. Hydrogen antimatter explodes out from the already critical shells, excited by your willpower's agitation. It spreads further, higher, deeper. The sheer amount of energy suddenly being released rips away the atmosphere in the region. Fire spreads out haphazardly as it burns, rippling like waves over a pond before the laws of thermodynamics can even recognize the trespass. It tears the earth asunder as continents rip themselves apart, and sends plumes of choking dust and ash into the sky.

You can do no more, and open your eyes to watch the lightshow. Blues and yellows burn into the VOID as the Megacity below is scoured by temperatures higher than most suns. And in the next instant, as if nothing ever happened, it goes out. The blue ocean is poisoned gray and black. The atmosphere is torn asunder. The multi-colored clouds are blacker than pitch.

Six billion have died in all but an instant. The other three billion inhabitants spread across the world will die in the next few days, this planet their ash-banked tomb. You watch, quietly, then -- "Send one of my probes."

It's a painful sacrifice, each eye you give to a probe -- but you want to ensure the job is done.

[-]The world below the ash-choked skies is ruined. Where the megacity once lay is now a jagged wound in the crust of the world. Ocean water pours into the gap. Steam and smoke rise into the air -- and you open your eye when the probe fails -- burning away.

"Put up a memorial beacon -- let all know our reasons. For Blackport. An eye for an eye. A tooth for a tooth. Tobias Hattlecut will suffer.  By Alphira Sol, Daughter of the Pirate King Alphias Sol, in charge of -- " you list your ship, then the three escorts in list of their rank or seniorit--


[13] Somebody jars you awake. "Your turn." Fred firmly states, extending the rifle your way. You take it with a nod, leaving to sit on the roof and meditate as the sun rises over the blasted land of ash and snow. Fresh tracks, like a Barker's foot, are nearby, you notice. The two corpses of the guards are both gone. The gate has been chewed on, in a place.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 21, 2020, 12:30:50 am
Follow the tracks, unless they lead away from the house.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 21, 2020, 06:52:35 am
Follow the tracks, unless they lead away from the house.
+1 But we should alert the people here of what we see and also close the gate behind us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 21, 2020, 06:57:46 am
Follow the tracks, unless they lead away from the house.
+1 But we should alert the people here of what we see and also close the gate behind us.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 21, 2020, 11:15:31 am
I... imagine Fred would've told us if the beast in question was still here. We'd just be distracting ourselves from the vigil, trying to chase it down.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 21, 2020, 11:42:09 am
I... imagine Fred would've told us if the beast in question was still here. We'd just be distracting ourselves from the vigil, trying to chase it down.
Oh right
Continue watching for any threats, such as Infected, bandits, barkers, etc.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 21, 2020, 04:07:47 pm
[-] The tracks lead off into the distance, merging together into a single file line. But, you do not investigate further, settling yourself back down on the roof and waiting patiently for Fred to get enough sleep. Eight hours should be enough, and then you'll make your way back to Stormmont. You meditate, focusing on nothing and everything, mulling over your dream -- and over your feelings.

[-] You notice movement after a few hours. Barkers emerge from the ash and snow just past the gate, having burrowed into the earth. Tentacles twist out from their manes and patches of their body are lined with silver and gray metal. Red, baleful eyes, focus on you, dark and appraising.  Then they begin to pace back and forth, keeping well outside of the gate. One wanders back from the distance, following the path carved through the snow. It joins its siblings in its pacing. Ambushed foiled, they, with a single yip from the largest two, lope into the distance.



Eventually, Fred emerges from the house, looking up to you and giving a wave. "I've got breakfast ready." You hop down from the roof, landing gracefully, and pass his rifle back to him with a nod. He hesitates. "Uh...are--you good?"

"I'm fine, why?" You question, shaking out your coat before entering the house.

"That-- that was a three-story drop."

"Oh, yeah, I'm good." You grace him with a smile, stepping into the house and finding the bowl of nutrient gruel hot and steaming on the table. Fred has at least cleared the dishes from the previous night away. A nice touch, even if he just piled them up in the corner of the sink. You eat quietly and quickly, taking your fill. He doesn't hesitate to cook you more. There was even a pot on the stove already.

Between bites, you brief him on the Barkers. He looks concerned, but, after a nod, "I'll stay in the lower level. Ask your guards to knock five times, pause, count to five, and then knock five more times. That way we'll be safe. I got Tim to clean up your armor and clothes, by the way."

Time to head back?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 21, 2020, 04:22:47 pm
Return the las-gun, take a look at fixing the gate, and then leave. 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 22, 2020, 01:47:12 am
Return the las-gun, take a look at fixing the gate, and then leave. 

+1

On with our armor, and away to Stormmont. T'was a pleasant surprise, to happen upon a friendly face or two in the wasteland!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 22, 2020, 01:49:54 am
You duck your head in a thankful bow, retiring once more to the grimy bathroom to change back into your charred underlay and armor. The backplate feels a little thin, that is, until you activate Lucille. The needles dig in and feast upon the nutrients and nanites your body produces. The feeling of fullness in your belly disappears. You emerge, and Fred and Tim wait for you in the entryway.  Shock blooms across their expressions as the armor shifts and adjusts itself to any minute changes in your form. It settles down, and you dip your head again.

"Thank you for your hospitality, Fredrick and Timothy Caltrop. A hover-craft will be here today to recover you."

"It was a pleasure." Both bow their heads, and Timothy rushes to open the door for you. You duck out, and, for once, the sun shines down on the blasted wasteland left by SEED's passing.You approach the broken gate, frowning to yourself.

You're no blacksmith, but --

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Silicon is a brittle metal, but, if there's enough of it, that really doesn't matter. You erect a new wall, covering the gate in the shiny material and fortifying the crumbling brickwork that surrounds the mansion. It doesn't take long, only thirty minutes or so, to raise it by about ten feet and top it with savage spikes and jagged, hard to climb edges. It even has a deep trench around it, filled with savage spikes. The two Caltrop brothers look on in stunned silence.

[-] With their safety momentarily assured, you unfurl your wings and bask in both the comforting warmth they provide. The sun beams down, on your face, and a light wind blows. It's cold, cold enough that your wings are turning the snow around you into steam, but in this moment, you are quite comfortable.

There's a temptation here. What if I never return? What if I leave this war? Leave my so-called fate? Leave it all behind to soak in the sun. There are many villages that would no doubt honor me with great comfort. Would it be such a betrayal?

As if to answer yourself, you rise into the air and set off to Stormmont upon your wings of red and gold. The trip is quiet, and you soar over the lands of ash and melting snow. You keep your helmet off, tucking it into a crook in your arm as you feel the cold wind nipping at your face. It's in the early evening when you finally arrive at your Fortress, slipping into your quarters through your personal alcove in its armored defenses. No one is there to greet you as you drop to your bed and devour a nutrient cube from your stash.

You send a message to Zero, instructing him to send a squad and a hovercraft to the Caltrop Residence.

With your business done, you lay on your bed, and contemplate your next move.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 22, 2020, 02:06:00 am
To abandon those that you are sworn to protect is to bring dishonor upon the Line.  How can the sun escape the light?

Arrange for a war council tomorrow morning. It's time to strike back with all the ferocity we can muster.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 22, 2020, 03:49:38 am
To abandon those that you are sworn to protect is to bring dishonor upon the Line.  How can the sun escape the light?

Arrange for a war council tomorrow morning. It's time to strike back with all the ferocity we can muster.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 22, 2020, 09:54:43 am
To abandon those that you are sworn to protect is to bring dishonor upon the Line.  How can the sun escape the light?

Arrange for a war council tomorrow morning. It's time to strike back with all the ferocity we can muster.
+1
+1
If we stop fighting now, the plague will infect everyone. We can bask in the sun when the plague is gone
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 22, 2020, 03:05:14 pm
...by the Emperor, this honor business is a tribulation.
You feel that call too, hm? The temptation to just-- fly away?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 22, 2020, 03:43:55 pm
We can’t leave while the plague is still here
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 22, 2020, 09:35:35 pm
Zero quietly schedules the event for tomorrow morning, at ten hundred hours. Lucille goes silent as you continue to lay in bed. Part of you wants to go and have a shower. Go and apologize for your outburst to Cephie, Emma, and William. But, to be honest, you're still not quite feeling up to it. It felt like an ambush. A sudden misdirection and attack at a moment when you were already vulnerable. You shake your head.

You end up staying in bed for most of the night, until Lucille informs you that the meeting is in an hour. Temptation strikes once again, as you ignore the time over and over again. In the end, you don't shower or change. Instead you drag yourself out of bed in full panoply and stride to the elevator.

You're late by about fifteen minutes.




Minister of State: Dan Hoganson  Present
Minister of Religion: Lacey Sterling  Present
Minister of Agriculture: Mickey MacGruder  Present
Minister of Industry: Nettle Armssmith  Present
Head Guardian: Lauren Mack  Present
Crusader General: Isela Tabbet  Present
Minister of Internal Affairs: William Thornton  Present
Minister of Foreign Affairs: Tiffany Mellone Present
Minister of Trade and Finance: Lawrence Geoyde  Present
Minister of Communications, Regent: Emeralda Thornton  Present
Minister of Health: Val Foster  Present

Acting Secretary: Child of SEED Three
Acting Executor: Child of SEED Zero
Notable Guests:Eric Applegate (Guest of Isela), Nicole Gainer (self-invited, vouched for by Emeralda Thornton)
Security Force: Thirteen Heavy Crusaders




Your councilors rise when you swing the double doors open and mount the staircase. You drop into your chair and set your helmet on the table, resting your head on your gloved hand. You do not tell them to take a seat, or dismiss them from their bow.  Instead, you contemplate your copy of attendance with a dull, disinterested look. Emma is the first to take a seat, and the rest take a cue.

"I was told this was a council of war?" Isela questions, stretching out in her seat.

"Nah, you got it all wrong Isela. It's a chance for Pheonix to scowl at all of us!" William calls out, playfully, flashing you a grin you do not return.

A Crusader approaches your shoulder, a probe of willpower letting you know it's Cephie. The rest move towards her -- but you raise a hand as she slips off her helmet, revealing a young woman you don't recognize. She gently taps your willpower -- transmitting quiet concern, but doesn't speak.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 22, 2020, 10:20:26 pm
"First of all, for those of you who were present, I apologize for my earlier outburst.  Let's put that behind us.  For now, I would like to discuss an aggressive plan of action for assaulting the Plague. What is the largest scale assault possible, in the near short-term, that wouldn't entirely deplete our resources?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 22, 2020, 11:15:58 pm
[11 vs 8]I'm not apologizing.

"I would like to discuss an aggressive plan of action for an offensive action against the Plague. What is the largest scale of assault possible in the short-term? Any plans that wouldn't deplete our resources?"

Silence fills the room as those assembled consider the resources at their disposal. Isela is grinning, gesturing to Eric, who brings her a thick folder, filled with crumpled and recycled paper. Nicole smiles, shifting forward and lifting a hand above her chest. Hoganson gestures for your attention as well. You listen to each in turn--

"Currently, we are stripping down one of the largest hydrogen fueled hovercraft that we have. We intend to outfit it much like the Levithan. However, as we are low on guns, cannons, and artillery pieces, we would need time. There's also the issue of armor -- our current technology does not allow us to manufacture lighter than steel composites, and our bioplastic production is at record low. If we could increase our fuel economy, we could create a mobile forward assault base by putting a hydrogen plant on the vessel."

"You should look into Carbon Fiber." William states, bluntly, looking towards Cephie with a crooked grin. Cephie twitches-- her willpower lashes out at him, but he grins and bears it. The other councilors shift uncomfortably with the invisible exchange in front of you. You do not intercede -- it's the equivalent of a mock slap-fight between children.

"I have a gift for Pheonix, my darling grandchild, that I believe could put more firepower in our hands. However, I do not wish to share this information publically. A gift for my rescue from those damn Outlanders." Nicole states, gently. The word 'bribe' never once being stated, despite the obvious implication. Isela and Minister Mellone flash sharp looks at Nicole, but do not comment.

"I have already stated an idea I had to Pheonix. She should make a decision before our public announcements -- otherwise, we may seem to be at our most vulnerable." Hoganson states.

"I concur with Hoganson. His previously stated plan could give us a lot more manpower." Emma calmly announces.

"I've been in contact with a few Outlander clans. For the right price, they would be willing to fight as outriders and scouts. A powerful figure --" Mellone pauses, scratching at her face, "Wishes for an audience. He has many troops. Apparently he even has a few hovercrafts and a city under his rule."

"A city? Outside of SEED's grace?!" Lacey calls out, shocked, and appalled by the implication, "Even the youngest children know that the Outlands are a wretched, horrible place, devoid of farmland and any food. How can there be a city? You must be joking dear -- or being mislead. Such a city would be heretical. No Outlander could construct such things."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 22, 2020, 11:28:08 pm
"All are capable of redemption, even those that have chosen to reject our sacred state.  Minister Hoganson's plan is approved, as long as full, indefinite military support is a stipulation.  I will meet with the heretic as well.  Minister Mellone, what sort of payment would the clans accept for military service?  Gold?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 22, 2020, 11:46:59 pm
"What payments would those clans accept for military service? Gold? Jade?" You question, hesitating to grant the Families such power without the consent of another of your Line.

"If the [Khagnate] wills it and accepts you, they will work for free. The Outlanders are a practical folk. Gold and Jade they enjoy for ornamentation, but guns and pasture are far more valuable. Protection without conversion is another form of pa-"

"Those Heretics WILL NOT receive any protection. They shunned our people, our ways. Heretics that refuse to bend the knee and lift up Pheonix's name to the stars--" Minister Sterling begins to preach, voice full of fire and wrath only for Nicole to swiftly interrupt her with a dark look and even darker words.

"Your beliefs override the wishes of your God? You are one of the worst kinds of preachers, Sister Sterling, if you believe that. Preachers of that sort were usually struck down by SEED with mishaps or death." Nicole's delivery is calm, but her words are as sharp as a knife. They deflate Lacey Sterling in an instant, and she looks to you with momentary fear.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 23, 2020, 12:05:45 am
It looks like Nicole successfully dealt with Sterling, but officially we cannot appear to condone threats against our ministers.

"Let me make this clear.  Everyone here is safe and I value your opinions.  Please do not threaten harm upon another, even obliquely, while we are gathered here like this.  Minister Mellone, Can you tell me more about the [Khagnate]?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 23, 2020, 02:36:16 am
I think she was stating history that happened, not necessarily threatening her
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 23, 2020, 02:38:54 am
But why was she stating that history?  It was to intimidate Sterling by implying that she could suffer a similar fate if she continued to resist.

((Am I correct in thinking we have reclaimed all of our former territories? The holdings section simply says this: "SEED Holy Land."))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 23, 2020, 05:07:51 am
((Yes. There are still insurgents, but, officially, you are in full control of what remains of the Holy Land of SEED, which is to say, what is shown on the map-- which will be updated shortly. I'm also going to try something new...))



Nicole bows after your gentle reproach. Minister Sterling turns away from the two to murmur to her neighbor, Minister Armsmith -- with her attention diverted, you give Nicole a subtle wink. Emma seems to notice, and grins at the display.

"I apologize. SEED has left you in charge. It's the old Crusader in me, I suppose. Apologies, Sister Sterling. I spoke too sharply." Nicole dips her head to Minister Sterling.

[20]"From what my spies have gathered -- or been allowed to gather, is that he is roughly fifty years old. He's united a vast number of clans in the crater plains. He recently finished construction on a central capital within the plains -- apparently, they've started farming a type of grain that grows well in that area." Mellone glances down at a document. "He has spies within the Holy Land, and is a cruel and cunning leader." Mellone looks embarrassed, then glances to you. With a hand, she gestures for a Crusader to approach and pass you a document.

She's summarized it well, but she left one thing out.

The [Khaganate] wishes to unify with the Holy Land -- through marriage. With you.

[1] Your control briefly falters, and the document bursts into flame in an instant.

"...We'll discuss this later." You state, quietly, as paper ash tumbles down to the table. "That was a copy, I hope."

Minister Mellone gives a small, tight nod.



Proposition One: 0 votes
Repurposing one of the massive evacuation hovercraft into a forward command base to strike at the Plague within the next three months. It is to be outfitted with cannons, a solar-powered hydrogen plant, heavy armor, and everything an army might need. William suggested Cephie use her willpower to plate it with carbon fiber, to give it better defenses at a reduced weight.

Proposition Two: 0 votes
The [Khagnate] of the Outlands is requesting you visit him for an audience. According to your information, he seeks an alliance through marriage.

Proposition Three: 1 vote
Hoganson and Emma are pushing for a deal with the Families. The Families will provide war material, soldiers, and funds, but want increased politcal powers and self-governence.  However, they remain vague on the details.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 23, 2020, 07:26:41 am
I like the sounds of proposal 1 and 3, but I think proposal 2 isn't as good since its about marrying some guy we don't know anything about.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on June 23, 2020, 08:59:06 am
Can we carry out more than one of these proposals at once?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 23, 2020, 10:34:22 am
I vote yes on propositions 1, 2, and 3.

"Is it possible that some of the machinery in the Bioplastics 1 district and Hydrogen-Purification 1 district survived the explosion?  If so, could we recover that equipment to help with our bioplastic shortage and fuel efficiency problems?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 23, 2020, 10:50:40 am
A hovercraft on that scale would be... a [double-edged sword]. Of great utility in combat, but devastating if captured by the [Plague].
(William's "suggestion" strikes me almost as a joke-- but I wonder. Might Cephie have some insight as to the mundane production of such plate? It wouldn't hurt to ask, once the council proper disbands for the day.)

We are not marrying into the [Khaganate]. It'd still be worth hearing him out, in hopes of hitting upon some alternative or other.

I'm inclined to support Hoganson's proposition-- but first, I should like him to lay out exactly what powers he expects the Families to receive, in exchange for their autonomy. The deal's uncomfortably vague as things stand.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 23, 2020, 10:57:27 am
I vote for proposals 1, 2, and 3

I think if there were bioplastics left, they would have been taken by various groups already
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on June 23, 2020, 11:18:59 am
A combination of proposal 1 and 3 seem like the best option. The hovercraft command base would be highly useful in coordinating a large scale assault on plague territory and providing fire support for the ground troops as well as providing assistance in taking out colossi.

Marrying the outlander could cause issues with stability, Emma is still our official consort and the outlanders don't worship us, it would weaken Emma's authority and could cause religious conflict between our theocratic fortress state and the outlander [khagnate].

Voting for proposal 1 and 3.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 23, 2020, 03:09:15 pm
((You can carry out multiple propositions at once. I mostly wanted to organize the information in an easily memorable way, so that no matter what is discussed or added there's a summary of the matters at hand. You can also suggests edits or questions. As everyone knows, meetings do not obey the laws of time.))

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 23, 2020, 04:04:44 pm
As far as proposition 2 is concerned, I see that it is not very popular, but I think it would be valuable to meet with the Outlander, even if we don't marry him.  There are other ways to secure alliances.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 23, 2020, 06:38:25 pm
As far as proposition 2 is concerned, I see that it is not very popular, but I think it would be valuable to meet with the Outlander, even if we don't marry him.  There are other ways to secure alliances.
yes. We should still meet. I don’t see the problem with the marriage to secure the alliance, though it’s clear I’m the outlier, we can attempt to discuss with him not her way of securing an alliance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 24, 2020, 01:16:49 am
"Did any machinery survive from the Bioplastics region? And have we picked clean the Hydrogen Production Factories?"

"Afraid not and afraid so, Mother Pheonix," Armssmith states, shifting uncomfortably. "The Bioplastics region took a great deal of damage from the earthquakes and explosion. The hydrogen plants didn't fare much better. Scavengers and Infected have took what they could."

You nod, turning your attention to the young Crusader General.

"Isela I approve of your construction project. Make it happen." You firmly command, glancing over at Cephie, who deflates. "One way or another, I'll see that your ship gets good armor. I expect a strategic plan to be drawn up as soon as it's finished. It's maiden voyage will be baptized with Infected Blood. Am I understood?"

Isela ducks her head in a bow, a smile forming on her lips.

"Hoganson," You begin, not really looking at him, "I want you to draft a document for your plans. It intrigues me, but I will not agree to anything as vague as you have currently suggested. You are a Family-man, but you serve me and my state. Make sure this document and plan reflect that. Thank you." You politely respond, shifting your head on your hand to fix your bright blue eyes on the man. He doesn't flinch, only bowing his head and giving a nod.

"Next thing -- I will visit this [Khagnate]. The concept of a city within that wasteland intrigues me -- and I rule this planet. It would be good to see all of it." You instruct to Mellone. "Please, organize this visit, if you could."

"Yes, Mother Pheonix." Mellone bows her head -- and Lacey looks annoyed by the concept. Today, of all days, you couldn't care less if she approves. The Outlanders are so refreshing compared to this backstabbing, overzealous lot.

"My gift lies on the way there, Pheonix," Nicole states, with a tight, controlled bow. "Would you be so kind as to work that into your schedule?"



The City-State will begin working on Project Mobile Forward Assualt Base. It will be completed within three to four months. Isela will have a plan of attack by then.
You will visit the [Khagnate] within a week.
Hoganson will begin drafting documents to return some powers to the Families in return for Military Support.

Is there anything else to be done this session?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 24, 2020, 01:24:01 am
"I would like to establish a new ministry dedicated to representing and making known the hopes and concerns of our populace.  The minister would be selected in a free and fair election, available to all.  Is this something that can be done?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 24, 2020, 07:28:00 am
"I would like to establish a new ministry dedicated to representing and making known the hopes and concerns of our populace.  The minister would be selected in a free and fair election, available to all.  Is this something that can be done?"
+1 We should also go see what Nicole has to show us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 24, 2020, 07:44:21 am
"I would like to establish a new ministry dedicated to representing and making known the hopes and concerns of our populace.  The minister would be selected in a free and fair election, available to all.  Is this something that can be done?"
+1 We should also go see what Nicole has to show us.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on June 24, 2020, 02:20:38 pm
"I would like to establish a new ministry dedicated to representing and making known the hopes and concerns of our populace.  The minister would be selected in a free and fair election, available to all.  Is this something that can be done?"
+1 We should also go see what Nicole has to show us.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 24, 2020, 05:08:28 pm
We can have a look at Nicole's offering on our way to the [Khaganate], I imagine.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 24, 2020, 05:18:46 pm
She mentioned taking time off the schedule, plus it would be better to see what the gift is by ourselves rather than making the travel time longer for everyone going with us
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 25, 2020, 02:32:53 am
The room goes silent, and you lazily drift your eyes around the room to each of your Ministers in turn. A few look annoyed. Most seem neutral on the concept.

Minister Hoganson's lips curl into a small frown, and intense expression of emotion for the emotionless man that sits so close to you. He rubs at his face for a few, quiet moments. "SEED previously instituted something of the same sort. People were organized into 'churches' and voted for people who would vote on the Pontifex. But that institution was corrupt. The Pontifex was -corrupt-. The church leaders were -corrupt- and SEED--"

 "The Pontifex was a man of SEED. A direct oracle from which the people could speak and could be spoken too -- surely we have no need of that now? And surely you would be a better man than to disrespect such an Oracle? If he was so corrupt, than SEED would not have accepted him, would he? Or are you saying SEED is fallible?" Minister Lacey cuts him off sharply, darkly.

"It's honestly about time. Folks have been getting antsy." Is all Minister MacGruder states, "Reorganization of the churches would bring some stability back." He opines, placidly. Glancing towards Hoganson. "The Last Pontifex did all right by the folk -- just not the Inbr-- Sorry, the Families."

Minister Nettle does not speak, shifting in her seat and picking at grime and oil beneath her fingernails with a very carefully detached air. She doesn't meet your gaze either.

"A lot of the institutions of Old SEED were corrupt, Hoganson. You'd know all about that though, would you, hmmh?" Head Guardian Lauren Mack carefully barbs. "But the Pontifex..." Her eyes meet your's in defiance. "I'm sure plenty of people know that position has power and influence. Perhaps our God-Queen should take it for herself. She would win any election."


"As a Crusader, I do not have opinion on the politics of the Scholarly or Civilian side of our government -- we'll keep it that way, thank you." Isela states, formally. "As long as no group interferes with what needs to be done to keep our people safe and our Crusade going."

"So we're going let people vote on some random person -- without vetting them? Without keeping an eye on our security? What if they elect a cultist? Or someone who opposes the war? What then? Do we have to knife him in a dark alley some day? The Pontifex had guards too -- will whoever this person is get the same? Know how much trouble someone could cause with a band of thugs and the will of the People?" William questions, idly, "I'm in favor if it matters. Stormmont is too boring. Could spice up the place a little to have some dissent in the ranks."

Minister Mellone returns your eye contact, "I've no opinion on this, Mother Pheonix."

"Neither d--d-do I." Minister Geoyde adds, stuttering, when your gaze tracks to him

"[If it was organized in a different way, I would be in full support. I've...seen,]" Emma speaks softly to you in High Empyreal, "[A few worlds with different political groups all balanced against one another. We've got the makings of it, between the Nobility, the Scholars, and the Public. Perhaps we could organize something of a similar nature. But it seems like the best type of government for making fast decisions is a Dictatorship. Representative democracies are slow in a crisis.]"

Minister Foster doesn't appear to be paying attention-- she doodles on one of her folders with disinterest. "There's those Scholars that were in the Societal Direction Group or whatever. They got shuffled around. Could set them on it."

"Well, while you lot hash that out, I'll go schedule a hovercraft, Pheonix." Nicole turns and hobbles out the door, giving the room one long look that matches your's. "Pleasure meeting some of you for the first time  -- and pleasure meeting some of you again."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 25, 2020, 02:49:35 am
If we die or are forced to leave this world, we must leave behind a power structure that can adapt to our loss.  Some form of democracy seems like a decent way to achieve that.

"It sounds like this sort of thing could be workable if the resulting government officials were not corrupt.  An intense vetting of all candidates combined with powerful oversight from Internal Affairs and our Guardians could help with that.  In any case, however, please have the Scholars research it and come up with a viable democratic solution.  I know that some of you are not in favor of it, but I would like you to keep an open mind as we strive to rebuild our nation."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 25, 2020, 03:07:50 am
There's a chorus of 'ayes' and 'yes, Mother Pheonix's that echoes through the room. Hoganson is the most half-hearted of the group -- William the most bored.

"[What do you think] Moore Thornton [is for, Pheonix?]" Emma quietly asks.

"[Leave him the] fuck [out of this.]" William is no longer the bored, drunken sod he's been playing for so long lately as he straightens in his chair. "[We share blood with that boy now. We're not going to make hi-]"

"[Suddenly the monster has a heart?]" Emma retorts sharply, voice rising as she glares at her elder brother. "[Suddenly the murderer wants the boy to live a good life when you tried to have] Pheo-Pheonix [take it? Stop playing the hypocrite. He's not the redemption you hope for. We're all tools of fate here.]"

"You know we cant understand a single word the two of you are saying, right?" Head Guardian Mack calls out to the arguing siblings. "Like. Not one bit. I think all I could understand was 'fuck' and 'Pheonix.'"

"You're a tool." William bluntly retorts to his sister. "[Father ruined us. You want to put the boy through that? Political marriages? The backstabbing, the shadowy deals, the blood that you can't scrub clean?] Fuck [off] Emma, [and stop playing at being heartless.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 25, 2020, 03:17:02 am
"Ah, just a moment, ministers.  [Please... let's not fight like this.  The] Moore [boy deserves to have a good life, and if he does decide to come for me at some point, I would understand.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 25, 2020, 03:38:00 am
[1] "[I'll leave that to you, then,] William. [Tell me, was it so easy to kill] Polly?" Emma ignores you.

William is out of his chair in a flash, standing up and leaning over the table. The old rage has returned. His eyes are bright, and fingers creep under his coat. Also, ignoring you. "[I regret it every damn day and you know that. I told you that I--]"

Emma is similarly out of her seat, her own hand in her coat. Hoganson's hand drifts to the same area, as does Lauren Mack's. Eric shifts forward to intercede, trying to put himself between the feuding siblings. The guards look to you, then begin to move with great hesitation and care. "[Yeah? And if you regretted it so much, why did you try to steal Pheonix away too? You're such an] asshole [that you can't let your little sister have a 'toy' that you haven't played with first.]"

William's eyes widen as they glance towards you, then back to his sister. Anger replaces shock, "[I didn--]"

[20+6 vs 17+1 / 10+2 / 17+5 / 1+1] "Shut up and sit down!" The anger that's been stewing inside of you bursts forth into words of command -- your willpower sweeps over the room like a blaze. Your words have an effect on everyone. The siblings can't even sit in their chairs as their bodies betray them. Cephie plops down onto the floor with a look of shock. Eric is on his rear faster than you can register. The guards are in a similar state -- only some tumble to the ground as they try to sit mid-step up the stairs. Perhaps if you were in a better mood, this would be comical.

You are not, however. You bite your lip, and, with your only hand you rub at your face. No one says a word.

Its days like this that I wish I could get drunk.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 25, 2020, 03:45:16 am
((Gentlemen, you can't fight here.  This is the war room.))

"Whatever personal problems you may have with eachother, keep them out of this room.  We are not here to get into petty squabbles.  I don't want to have to say this again."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 25, 2020, 05:42:19 am
((Gentlemen, you can't fight here.  This is the war room.))

"Whatever personal problems you may have with eachother, keep them out of this room.  We are not here to get into petty squabbles.  I don't want to have to say this again."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 25, 2020, 10:15:28 am
((Gentlemen, you can't fight here.  This is the war room.))

"Whatever personal problems you may have with eachother, keep them out of this room.  We are not here to get into petty squabbles.  I don't want to have to say this again."
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 25, 2020, 04:48:04 pm
[-] The Ministers and ministry associates all nod, quietly. Silently.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 25, 2020, 04:57:42 pm
Do any Ancestors have anything else to propose?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 25, 2020, 08:09:17 pm
WWhile working on the ship, we could maybe do other attacks on the plague, they’ll continue increasing in number, we cannot stop attacking completely while we build the ship. What are your thoughts? I think we could destroy more Collosi?, Collosuses?
((What names do you prefer calling the plural for Collosus?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 25, 2020, 08:17:47 pm
Good grief.

Alternative strikes against the [plague] would be worthwhile... still, I can't help but feel we'd be best off closing this council session [ASAP]. This is becoming personal in an ugly way.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 25, 2020, 09:38:21 pm
"I'm calling this session to an end.  The adversities we face threaten to divide us, but now more than ever it is vital that we remain united.  Let us leave this ugliness behind us so that we can focus on building a better future."

Leave.  Check when the hovercraft is scheduled for.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 25, 2020, 10:16:08 pm
The Ministers and associates file out quietly, still silent. William and Emma take great pains to leave at very different times. You remain seated, rubbing at your face. That is until Cephie gets up to leave.

"You stay."

She swivels on a heel, looking back to you with a raised eyebrow. Her face shifts and melts and twists until the real Cephie is looking at you, standing in loose Crusader armor. She gives the most exaggerated of bows to you, before, "What can I do for you, oh Queen of Ash and Dust?"

"Can it. I'm already annoyed enough."

"Aye, aye, Captain."

"Could you help with producing Carbon-fiber in a more mundane way? Like, teaching the principles?"

"If you're willing to wait a few months to build the forges, vacuum chambers and gather the chemicals and compounds needed -- yes, sure. To be honest, its a lot easier to just do it myself than have to teach these primitives. Two or three weeks of work versus twelve. They'll get to it eventually, though, and then they'll be one step closer to superalloys. It's a process, y'know?"

"Ah. Okay...then. I would...also like to apologize for those two's outbursts. I know you're the only one who--"

"Understood them, yes. Piece of advice, Pheonix? Your kindred are months old. They are two siblings. They have what--ten, twelve voices in their head? All telling them different things. The only person who might be able to understand them keeps getting the shit kicked out of her." Cephie lifts a hand, "And you, dear gods in all the heavens, you're a mess yourself. I can see the resemblance. Something to think about, yeah? Might help to keep them on the leash in the future. They might not try to kill each other to impress you."

As Cephie walks out the door -- she pauses again, "And in that fight, I put my money on Emma. She's...she's deep in that mind of hers. We can all use processing powers -- but Oracles are scary. Probability...is a scary thing to control."

You sit quietly until Nicole returns with a bag slung over her shoulder. With a curt nod, she questions, "You ready? It's a bit of a trip -- if you need weapons, we can get them on the way out. I've got plenty of food already. If you want to bring anybody, call them up. We leave in thirty minutes."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 25, 2020, 10:22:07 pm
"What exactly is it?  That will help me determine whether I need to bring guards."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 25, 2020, 10:26:52 pm
"A surprise!" Nicole smiles, darkly, "I think I missed a few of your birthdays..." Then she sobers, "No one you do not trust. William. Emma. That one girl who can change faces. Maybe one of those creepy bastards from SEED special services. Absolutely no one you do not fully trust with your life."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 25, 2020, 10:30:08 pm
"In that case, let's bring the Thorntons, Cephie, and one of the Children of SEED.  Maybe I can try to patch things over with the Thorntons on the way there.  I'll take a las-gun and Cutter as well, for safety."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 25, 2020, 10:37:52 pm
"Do you really trust the Thorntons?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 25, 2020, 10:40:26 pm
Hmm... good question.  I'm a bit conflicted on this myself, so I will leave it to the other Ancestors.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 26, 2020, 04:38:21 am
Nicole notices the hesitation and leans on her cane with a crooked smile. "But SEED, it might good for the two to meet their ancestors."

"What do you mean?" You question.

"You noticed it, haven't you? SEED designed a mold for this world. Do they fit it? Ever wonder why?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 26, 2020, 08:07:33 am
I say we take the Thortons with us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 26, 2020, 08:11:22 am
No, let’s not risk that. We should probably just bring Cephie and one of the Children of SEED.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on June 26, 2020, 11:42:25 am
((I've finally finished catching up to the present of this. I'd just like to say that this is an amazing forum game - quite possibly the best I've ever seen. Suggestions are open to everyone, correct?))

I have a lot of different things to say, but I think I'll stick to the issues at hand for now.

A political marriage with the [Khaganate], distasteful though it may sound, seems like a pretty solid decision to me. Outlanders are hardy people, and more people and resources always help. If nobody seems to be able to stomach that, however, then perhaps we could negotiate a more conventional alliance.

Honestly, I'm having a little trouble trusting the Thorntons. They seem to be more interested in preserving the interests of their Family rather than our interests. While this is understandable, to be perfectly honest, we need as many people behind us as we can get. This is also the same reason that I don't really think democracy is viable at this time - we need all the power centralized and controlled by us. While in the long term this will not do good for citizen satisfaction, let alone our budding god complex, we have to remember that the [Plague] is always breathing down our necks.

I think we should bring Celphie and a Null. Celphie is a good bet because A) she's bound to us by oath, B) she seems to genuinely want to be our friend, and C) most importantly, she has next to nothing to gain by betraying us. Plus, she has experience with Outlanders.

Actually, speaking of Celphie, we should probably spend some of our free time trying to befriend her at some point. Not only will this make her like us more, I think we genuinely stand to gain from making another friend.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 26, 2020, 11:54:27 am
((I've finally finished catching up to the present of this. I'd just like to say that this is an amazing forum game - quite possibly the best I've ever seen. Suggestions are open to everyone, correct?))

I have a lot of different things to say, but I think I'll stick to the issues at hand for now.

A political marriage with the [Khaganate], distasteful though it may sound, seems like a pretty solid decision to me. Outlanders are hardy people, and more people and resources always help. If nobody seems to be able to stomach that, however, then perhaps we could negotiate a more conventional alliance.

Honestly, I'm having a little trouble trusting the Thorntons. They seem to be more interested in preserving the interests of their Family rather than our interests. While this is understandable, to be perfectly honest, we need as many people behind us as we can get. This is also the same reason that I don't really think democracy is viable at this time - we need all the power centralized and controlled by us. While in the long term this will not do good for citizen satisfaction, let alone our budding god complex, we have to remember that the [Plague] is always breathing down our necks.

I think we should bring Celphie and a Null. Celphie is a good bet because A) she's bound to us by oath, B) she seems to genuinely want to be our friend, and C) most importantly, she has next to nothing to gain by betraying us. Plus, she has experience with Outlanders.

Actually, speaking of Celphie, we should probably spend some of our free time trying to befriend her at some point. Not only will this make her like us more, I think we genuinely stand to gain from making another friend.
I’m glad someone else also sees that marrying the [Khaganate] is practical.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 26, 2020, 12:04:44 pm
Practical? It is an affront on our freedom. Phoenix was right, to look to it with anger.
Regardless... welcome, Cadet. Have you a name?


"I learned something of their history, in Thornton Villa. They-- predate SEED, and SEED's people. Small wonder, that they distrusted the Holy City so."
"Why do you ask?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 26, 2020, 12:14:08 pm
It is a way to ally with them more directly, the merging of our states will allow for more resources. The fact the Thorntons predate SEED does not mean they won’t try to use us to gain power and try to kill us if we are no longer perceived as useful to them.
I think it would be better to bring Cephie and a Null
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 26, 2020, 03:26:50 pm
I'd like to hear our grandmother's thoughts on the matter before we make a decision.

Practical? It is an affront on our freedom. Phoenix was right, to look to it with anger.
Regardless... welcome, Cadet. Have you a name?


"I learned something of their history, in Thornton Villa. They-- predate SEED, and SEED's people. Small wonder, that they distrusted the Holy City so."
"Why do you ask?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 26, 2020, 03:36:09 pm
I'd like to hear our grandmother's thoughts on the matter before we make a decision.

Practical? It is an affront on our freedom. Phoenix was right, to look to it with anger.
Regardless... welcome, Cadet. Have you a name?


"I learned something of their history, in Thornton Villa. They-- predate SEED, and SEED's people. Small wonder, that they distrusted the Holy City so."
"Why do you ask?"

+1
Fair, but she asked us if we trust them, it might be rude to not answer that question
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 27, 2020, 12:43:58 am
"I wouldn't be surprised if you predated SEED, my darling." Nicole responds with a twist of a smile, as the two of you walk to the pads. The other questions she doesn't answer. She places a hand on your shoulder, guiding you as you speak into Lucille. Cephie should be waiting for you, in full kit, with supplies and a gun. As well as a Null. Zero informs you, in a quiet monotone, that he will send Eight to assist -- you know her as Jane Morris. She has specialties in combat and could be of good use to whatever venture it is that you are planning.

The two, punctual and precise, however in differing ways, are both waiting for you to arrive. Cephie is wearing a long, black dress over trousers and boots. No part of her outfit is separate. All of it is connected by a patch of cloth or twisting thread. She smiles with sharp teeth, giving a mock bow. "Y'know Pheobe, if I knew I'd be seeing you again so soon, I would have waited on the parting advice-- it's meant to come before a parting, y'feel? It kinda loses teeth when you see me ten minutes later."

"What is that you're wearing? I was expecting armor." You idly question, examining the shifting, shiny, silky black fabric.

"Watch!" Cephie straightens, and with a dramatic gesture, a wave of her hand over her skinny form. Her clothing changes, shimmering as armor suddenly forms from the cloth. It lingers, before reforming into the outfit. "The newest models are the best. No clinking armor, no maintenance. Just a twist of your will and a stunning, modern dress turns into full body armor."

You smirk as you look over Jane Morris. Where Cephie is flamboyant, excited, Eight, or, Jane Morris, is quiet. She's wearing full Heavy Crusader Kit; marching pack and all. No color, no exaggeration, or emotion. A perfect killing machine with a face you can't remember. She straps her gas mask on, hiding even that feature, and leaving her a bulky, organized soldier. "Mother Pheonix." Is her slightly less than monotone greeting. Out of all the Nulls, you decide then and there you hate her less than the rest. There's an attempt at being human. An icy, emotionless one, but a human nonetheless.

A hovercraft sits idling nearby with two pilots standing at attention at its side. The bow when you and your...motley party approach. Comments are held. The only words out of their mouths are their names, their ranks, and 'yes, Mother Pheonix'.

Maybe they're Nulls too.

You begin boarding. A cutter blade finds its way to your belt. A 'sawn-down' las-rifle is slung around your shoulder. Food rations and a water purifier are stowed away, along with a camp tent. Nicole sits across from you, the Null nearby her. Cephie takes a seat to your immediate right. In an instant, she's laying against you with a datapad out, reading a book before the ship can even take off. Nicole raises an eyebrow, but says nothing. Instead, Nicole lays back and shuts her eyes. She's fast asleep before you even pull away from Stormmont.

"[That's a soldier's trick if I ever saw one.]" Cephie points out in low Empyrean, the tongue of pirates, of freelancers, of the 'civilized' rim. "[Being able to fall asleep anywhere, at any time. If we needed that much sleep, it would be the same for us.]"

"Mmh."

"[Ah. Still a little upset about the day before? I probably shouldn't have involved myself in your ex-lover's quarrel. I was only trying to help.]"

"[No. You were not. I know your game, Cephelia, I know what you want from me.]"

"[...and I know your game too, Pheonix. Pretending you're scared of yourself. Of your power? Of your potential? It's adorable. You're a Goddess of Fire. Of Victory. Of Blood. You should act like one instead of acting like a scared little girl playing with matches.]" Cephie's tone has not a hint of harshness in it, even as she invades your personal space and presses against your uncomfortable armor. Your arm still lays between the two of you, "[Now, if you could be so kind, wrap your arm around me. You're messing up my posture.]"

[10 vs 17] It is a little uncomfortable, keeping your arm there...and Cephie smells...like blood. Like burning oil and trees and the warm smell of a plastic las-gun's exterior after it's just been discharged.

"[You always smell like blood and ash.]" Cephie quietly states, scrolling through her book, eyes tracking across the text in a blur.

"[I didn't tell you to sit so close, Cephie.]"

"[Is that why you were staring at me earlier? Or was it just the dress? Too plunging of a neckline?]" She pauses, "[Besides, I didn't say it smelled bad.]" There's another pause, "[And if it was so bad, your heart wouldn't be beating like a drum, your muscles wouldn't be tense, and you wouldn't be trying so damn hard to pretend this doesn't bother you. Now move your arm before I get pissy and we end up killing someone by doing nothing more than arguing. Most likely the emotionless weirdo you decided to bring along despite that if we got serious we could rip this planet in half.]"

You hesitate, then you quietly shift your arm.

"[Good girl. Now, I bet you and your ancestors have questions for me since your brain is still so fucked. According to your...charming grandmother, we've got a few hours to burn and I've got answers.]"

What questions do you ask Cephie?

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 27, 2020, 01:46:41 am
There's some sort of block in my organic programming that is limiting me.  For example, I can't seem to grow an arm, even though I can manifest wings and heal myself.  Why is that block there, and can that block be overcome?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 27, 2020, 02:16:18 am
"[How did you lose it?]"

[19 vs 20+1] You hesitate, but her gentle words stir the story forth, even if you wish you didn't. You didn't even tell Emma, and now here you are, telling Cephie. The woman who backstabbed you. The woman who is bound in service to Magnus. An enemy, but by the grace of eternal pact, a friend for now.

"[...I...I needed strength. I needed something in my stomach...I...I ripped it off. And I ate it.]"

You expect judgment, you expect her to peel away from you in disgust at your admission. Autocannibalism. Surely a sign of mental illness. "[An amaranth of sin. An act of inhumanity, a step away from what connects you to humanity. A step closer to apotheosis. These things leave marks. Permanent ones. Our flesh is shaped by our Will. By our spirit. By our story and our sins. You have no arm because that is now fact. That is now an eternal scar, like the one across your chest.]" She's gentle when she speaks, softly consoling as she offers no judgment. "[Do you know why I have pointed teeth, Pheobe?]"

You shake your head.

"[One year after my Ascension I was trapped on a ship of Pirates. Tortured. Broken over and over again. They had found me out, you see. That I was a skin-changer. They...amused themselves with my suffering. Starving me to make me weak. One day, I shaped my teeth into these wonderful...pearly...whites...and ripped out a Pirate's throat. Then, starving as I was...I ate the corpse.] Cephie's excitable, gleeful voice slips into a more quiet, reflective tone as her eyes glaze over. She stares somewhere into the middle distance. "[Every time I eat meat I can still taste the blood. But I can hide them, oh yes, but they're plain for all to see when I show myself truthfully.]"

[3 vs. 16] You sit quietly, then, you hug Cephie close. She no longer lays against you, focusing instead on her book and sitting up straight. "[Yea-nah. Sorry. That got...that got too heavy. Sorry. That's like twelfth date material -- right there. Not third time we're ever alone together stuff. They say it's to limit us. That the Empress wanted a check on our powers and that was one of them. Some scars don't heal. Some things cannot be forgotten.]"

"[Magnus thinks I'm disgusting. So does my 'brother'. My real family doesn't have a clue. They think that's what I want them to look like. Do you think I am?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 27, 2020, 02:23:55 am
"[I'm so sorry that you had to go through that.  It sounds awful.  I can't blame you for what you did, because it was an act of desperation against cruel enemies.  With that being said, however, I hope we never have to do anything like that ever again.]"

"[I had another question for you.  Is it possible for us to send out a small bit of our Dust to perform a task far from our bodies?  I'd like to be able to attain unrestrained fusion from a distance, for example.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 27, 2020, 07:56:53 am
"[Would it be possible for me to learn how to change our looks around like you can?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 27, 2020, 08:13:24 am
"[Would it be possible for me to learn how to change our looks around like you can?]"
We’ve already asked this, unless we can teach her how to move hydrogen too, the answer is very likely no

[How dies Magnus usually deal with planets with the plague? Would the planet remain habitable after his attack? Would he allow some of SEED’s people to come with him until a Plague free planet is found that they can live on, if this one is destroyed?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on June 27, 2020, 08:21:07 am
[How dies Magnus usually deal with planets with the plague? Would the planet remain habitable after his attack? Would he allow some of SEED’s people to come with him until a Plague free planet is found that they can live on, if this one is destroyed?]

+1 Sounds like a good question to know the answer to. Honestly, I don't think I have much to ask of my own.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 27, 2020, 09:25:07 am
((During these parts of the game, where we have the opportunity to ask questions, there's no need to +1 posts))

((Remember, you don't have to +1. I will take any questions. You can even have multiple questions!))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 28, 2020, 07:49:40 pm
((Uff, lost track of this a couple days. Internet died.))

That question... she's asking you, Φοίβη. Not us. Offer our sympathies, if you like-- but answer with your own words.
...you could cut off our sensory feed awhile, for that matter. Our calculations and our judgements are of little use to you at this time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 28, 2020, 11:28:41 pm
...Okay.

...



[-10- / -10-]
Cephie is laying against you again, scrolling through her tablet with a slight redness to her eyes that was not there before. A ghost of a smile twitches across her lips from time to time. You squeeze her shoulder and she turns her attention back to you. Around an hour of the five-hour flight has passed, by your internal chronometer, and you feel its a good time to ask the questions queueing within your mind. She swipes across her datapad, shutting down the screen as you begin asking them.

"[Can I send out a small bit of Dust or Essence, away from my body, to perform a task?]"

"[Yes and no. Essence evaporates. It's unstable. A constant mote of change constrained by our bodies.]" She puts a hand near your face, her glove drawing back to reveal a thin patchwork of scars. "[Blood works well until it dries.]" Slowly, the armor draws back more, as does her flesh, revealing square notches of flesh missing from places on her arm. "[Flesh can hold it longer. The best bet is to keep your flesh alive somehow. A nutrient vial with an oxygenator, or something similar. Our flesh, if properly fed and maintained lasts a long time away from our bodies. You can route through it too, to extend the range of your willpower, if you can remember the nanite as a reference point.]" She is, of course, referring to the numerical codes of each cell, each part of your body. Her bared finger drifts down the front of your armor

You raise a brow.

"[Right. Sorry.]"

"[Is it possible for me to change my appearance, like you?]"

"[Not to the same level of control, and it will revert to your natural state pretty quickly. Try-- focus on the cells in your hair, each one. Consider how the light reflects off of the chemicals that make it up.]" She pulls up a small diagram, a quick reference, "[I used this before I memorized it.]"

You focus, shutting your eyes after a glance, trying not to pay attention to the young woman laying on you so closely.

[16][19][18][7][8[12][80]
Cephie giggles end up breaking your concentration. You were trying for a dull brown, the complex expression of melanin and keratin. Instead--Instead-- your head pounds, and you pitch forward. No.

Cephie starts up, her hands finding your shoulders to provide comfort. Her awkward giggles turning into a voice of concern. "Pheobe. Pheobe-- [what's the matter-- are you okay?]"

Nausea and pain pass and you dare to open your eyes. A strand of your long hair is draped over your shoulder -- dark, neon blue speckled with red, gold, and black. "I'm...I'm fine."

"[Was that the color...you were going for?]"

You shake your head.

[4 vs 20]
"[Tell your Line to fuck itself six ways to the End of the Universe. It's your body -- you can do what you want with it.]" Cephie is angry, her voice rising as her grip tightens on your shoulder. Low Empyrean is the best language for curses. Alone, there are thirty different words for 'damn'. Fifty for 'fuck'. You shake your head again, shutting your eyes as they throb.

Cephie drops it, as you settle back in your chair, breathing hard. With a bit of cloth from your suit, you rub at the blood that trickles from your eyes. "[How...how does Magnus deal with Plague planets?]"

She settles back into a comfortable position before answering, taking her time. "[There won't be a Plague when he finishes. But there might not even be a Biosphere. Your people will survive. I hope. But please, understand...Magnus isn't here for the plague. He's not here for this backwater rim world. He's here for you. To fight you. The Endless Nobility...they're inhuman. They don't care about one planet, or two, or even a dozen. What's one ant colony to the boot that treads upon it?]"

...



The rest of the ride passes uneventfully and quietly. You amuse yourself by reading over Cephie's shoulder, among...other things within reason, much to her amusement. Nicole yawns herself awake overdramatically as the craft touches down and the ramp opens on to a field of green grass at night. Lights on the rear of the craft flicker on, letting you see further into the darkness. You realize that this is a patch of greenery in a field of 'salts'. Cephie, without a word, walks to the salt flat as you and the Null set up the tents, the water purifier, and a cooking pot. The Null returns with [beast of burden] chips, lighting them ablaze to boil water and make the nutrient paste for the lot of you.

You end up walking to where Cephie stands, finding her kneeling. She lets grains of salt drift out of her fingers, even going so far as to pick one up and put it in her mouth.

"[What's got you so interested, out here?]"

"[Oh, I didn't want to help.]" Cephie admits, cheerfully, before her attention turns back to the salt. "[Do you know what this is? I had suspicions...]"

"[Salt?]"

"[These are salts of phosphorous.]"

"[Uh...okay.]"

"[I don't think you understand,] Pheobe." Cephie turns her attention to you, a gleam in her eye, "[Phosphorous limits growth. It is -the- limiter of growth for humanity everywhere. Crops need it. People need it. Agworlds need it...to have it just lying around like this is amazing. If it got diluted down, this planet could be one of the most fertile planets in this area. An underdeveloped world like this could become a bread-basket. Then an industrial complex, then a center of commerce and industry in short order if you exploited the hells out of this.]"

"[...uh...yeah. I guess that's something to think about.]"

Cephie sighs, rising to her feet and approaching you. With a playful smile, she rubs the salt from her hand unto the front of your uniform before passing you by. "[You're really cute, y'know?]"

You don't think that was a compliment.



The next morning, you set out to the north as the hovercraft lifts off, towards a crater rim in the distance. The air is cold, but you still sweat with the exertion. By the end of the forced march, you're carrying Nicole on your shoulders, along with half of the packs. Cephie carries the exhausted Null and the other half of the gear. The climb is even worse. You and Cephie have to take a break in the middle of it, as the two of you drag yourself over the rough terrain.

"[Ever the dutiful grandchild, you are, Pheonix.]" Cephie quips, during the break between chugs of water, "[You know what I hate about your type of Line -- you don't get thirsty. You can never understand how much water I need to survive -- and how annoying it is to drink this bland, perfectly purified [horse]-piss.]"

"I don't know what tongue you're speaking, but I understanding whining when I hear it. How about you settle down there, you oily punk." Nicole snaps.

Cephie only response is a dark glare. "I could kill you with a thought, y'know."

"Yes, but how would that affect the chance of my grandchild continuing to deal with your scrawny self?"

Cephie doesn't respond.



You crest the crater lip and it's a night and day difference. In the massive crater is a lake of ice-covered green water, fed by trickling springs that cascade down the edges of the rim. Between you and the lake is a gentle slope of hardy conifers, a mottled patchwork of greens and gold that hold together the sandy, moist soil. Lining the banks are broken stalks of golden grain, withered by the cold weather, but flourishing in the marshy soil. You pause, staring out over the lake, taken in by its beauty.

But in the center of the lake, a massive, spindly fin of weathered black metal juts from the water. A single light blinks across the ice cap which turns to slush and water around the metal. For nearly a hundred years, you've plied the Void betwixt worlds. It would be impossible for you not to recognize what that is --

"Is...is that a Void Ship comms array?" Cephie blurts out.

"Is that what that is? That'd explain the huge structure."

You setting up camp in a dry patch is a blur. Cephie even helps this time -- and the work is completed in less than an hour. Nicole guides you to a circle of brickwork that lies in the water, at the end of an overgrown path. A bronze bowl sits in the center, filled with ash, and all around it are stalks of grain. Trinkets of ceramic-- and even the remains of a broken las-gun. Rotten flowers are strung between poles on cords of steel, and fine oil-burning lanterns hang in the dead center.

"Outlanders view this place as holy. Me and my lads investigated it about fifty years ago when I was young enough to survive the Outland winters. We told SEED there was nothing here. About twenty years ago, I broke in with William Senior and his wife..." Nicole grins, "Did you like the Warmachines, Pheobe? This is the origin. Probably of the Families, too."

Cephie grins along, pulling out a spare pouch and tossing it to you. "What's our plan, Pheobe?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 28, 2020, 11:42:01 pm
Approach the structure and appraise to what degree it remains intact.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 28, 2020, 11:47:46 pm
Approach the structure and appraise to what degree it remains intact.
+1
Do we remember what a comma array is?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 29, 2020, 12:34:55 am
You wait patiently for Cephie to craft her wings of carbon before unleashing your own. The two of you drift over the lake, towards the spindly black structure jutting from the water. You and Cephie alight on the array and assess the VOID craft beneath your feet. It's a large one, and, now that you're close enough, you can feel the power humming from its massive fusion reactor. Easily [1,600 meters] in length, from tip to tip. Its shape is obscured by the algae-covered waters.

There are ships plying the Void bigger than cities. Hundreds of thousands of meters long, filled to the brim with guns and cargo bays and living quarters. The largest, of course, are hydrogen freighters, drifting Citadels and Spacehulks. They measure in the tens or hundreds of [kilometers]. The wandering freelancers and pirates that call them their home drift through the space lanes, taking odd jobs, raiding or pillaging -- doing whatever it takes to survive in this unforgiving universe.

"It's a battleship. Small one. Maybe a corvette." Cephie explains, in low Empyreal, "Probably one or two thousand years old -- judging by the design. Well-crafted but not modular. These parts were built in shipyards instead of printed en-masse. I'd say." She states, ripping off a piece of material and looking it over. "Otherwise, it would have taken on rust and rot, 'swell. They don't build ships like this anymore."

"It's fusion generator is still active."

"Well duh, otherwise the light wouldn't be blinking." Cephie snarks, rolling her eyes even as she grins.

"It seems intact."

"Yeah, this was a good landing-- they kept the comms array pointed up. Didn't crush it. If there's no hull breaches--"

"--it could still be voidworthy."

"Its insides will have biological contaminants. It's probably a forest in there -- and don't get your hopes up. Going into the inky black with a cheap patchjob won't get you far."

Its a structure used to send and receive communications in the Void.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 29, 2020, 12:40:17 am
["Jane, do we have the necessary resources to transport this ship back to Stormmont?"]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 29, 2020, 12:55:35 am
Just to clarify something...the Eiffel tower is 300 meters tall. This vessel is 1600 meters in length.



Let me answer for her. Beneath us is [hundreds of millions of kilograms] of metal, sunk into a lake -- it's probably buried in the mud and dirt, as well. There is no hovercraft on this planet that is dragging this thing from its grave. Hell, at this point, its own engines are probably the only thing strong enough to pull it up...if they aren't ruined by the water or unseen damages. But that's a maybe. All large Voidships are ill-designed for coming into the atmosphere.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 29, 2020, 12:57:37 am
((I knew that, I was clearly just testing you.  Congratulations, you passed.))

Find an entrance into the ship.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on June 29, 2020, 01:06:23 am
Just a question - what are we actually planning on doing with this ship, provided we are actually capable of taking it from this location? I highly doubt that this would be useful or effective in defending against Magnus, or any other voidbourne threat, for that matter. We also have remarkably little need for a communication array. Are we just trying to recover it just in case?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 29, 2020, 01:14:51 am
If we could get it into orbit, it would be useful for intel gathering (having a view of the entire planet), orbital bombardment, and intersystem diplomacy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on June 29, 2020, 01:19:21 am
That makes sense. Actually, now that I think of it, control of near-planetary space could be quite advantageous.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 29, 2020, 07:50:32 am
I'm all for trying to get this thing flying again.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 29, 2020, 07:32:36 pm
"How long can you hold your breath?" You question Cephie.

"Mmh. How about we find that out later." Her armor shifts, becoming actual armor instead of a neat dress. With a twist of a wicked smile, she spreads her arms and falls backward into the water, shifting mid-fall into a dive. You shake your head, diving in after, your wings hissing and dying as you hit the water. You can see Cephie as she swims through the freezing water, moving stiffly. You go in the opposite direction, counting on your natural night-vision to help you find an entrance.

You find a gap in the plating, a hole where something impacted the vessel long ago. Jagged edges of metal flare inward from the ancient impact, and old wires still spark in the dark. Light is visible. You surface.

With a shiver, you activate Lucille's comms, Patch me through to Cephie.

["Found one?"]

["Yeah, I'll send up a flare."]

You burn hydrogen in the air in a straight line, and Cephie swims to you. She dives without a word, and you follow. It doesn't take long before you drag yourself up into the ship, stepping on to moss-covered metal plates. Cephie gestures widely, turning to give another grin. Your eyes adjust --

Skeletons and armored figures surround you. Unmoving. Died in ages long past. Some wear scraps of jumpsuits, scraps of clothing. All humans of various ages and various genders. Their bones are thin and brittle to the touch. But the armored figures draw your attention, as they should. Ancient Void Marines entombed in sarcophagi of circuitry and alloy. You kneel, fiddling with one as Cephie draws a cutter blade and goes to work on cutting the door open. The blade begins to melt through the alloy of the door as you peel one of the tin-cans open.

A man, his flesh mummified, lays within. While he's nothing more than a torso, his body is one you would expect from a Void Marine. Masses of muscle coiled tight over thick bones. A chiseled jaw with white hair and a knotted beard. Tubes and circuitry scar his flesh all down his chest to his groin. Life support systems, combat drug injectors, and who knows what else, all maintained by a highly advanced AI. The suit too is interesting. It's far denser than anything the Thorntons could have made, with a complex array of micro pneumatics and processors. His head doesn't fill the 'helmet'. Instead, that space is filled with complicated sensors and more of those finicky micro-processors. The breastplate is adorned beautifully in gold and silver with the image of twelve snakes twined together by the tails.

You shut the suit again as the door rattles to the floor. You listen for the hiss of a pressure differential. There is none.

"Internal atmosphere is compromised."

You nod, looking down the dimly lit corridor.

It runs east to west. Towards the far west is the fusion reactor. Darkness lies to the east. Algae and slime cover the floor, and ivy grow along the panels of the wall, eating into the metal. Across from you is another sealed door.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 29, 2020, 07:50:44 pm
[Lucille, activate external lights.]

Carefully investigate the eastern path.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 29, 2020, 10:25:48 pm
"...saluted father dear--" Cephie begins to sing as the two of you start east down the corridor. It's an ancient pirate tune, traced to old earth, "...landed on the quay just as the ship was sailing, the captain at me roared..." You listen in silence, and, for a moment, contentment threatens to steal over you and rob your senses.

...I miss this. The songs. The cheer. Laughing in the face of fear with barely restrained glee. In the face of death. Alphira was always so sour.

"What's a Freelancer's brat like you singing old Pirate songs?" You tease.

"Oh, on the rocky road to-- Hey now!" Cephie stops singing, false indignation claiming her voice for the time, "Y'know what they say about Freelancers, right?"

"Educate me."

"That they're a silver coin's flip from turning black."

You snort, passing by another bulkhead. Cephie stops, and you pause. "It's unmarked."

"Don't mean there ain't something shiny inside, right? Dead men have no claims and all that." With a wicked grin, Cephie turns the handle on the door, pulling it open. There's a slight hiss.

"Didn't know you were the sort to rob crypts."

"I didn't know you were the sort to spoil my sport." Cephie rebukes, and the two of you detour into the bunkroom.

[20] Cephie strikes gold, or, in this case, platinum. Pulling open a cabinet, she withdraws an absolute beast of a weapon. A las-gun with an utterly massive drum magazine and a super coolant tank wrapping around the 'barrel'. The motif of snakes repeat, but there's also a crescent half-moon with an atomic cloud jutting out from it. All in platinum. Cephie's eyes light up. She presses a button on the side. Out of the machine, a cord extends, and a small holographic screen pops up -- auto-aim and a high quality targetting interface designed to mesh with cybernetics. [5000/5000] glows on the screen, along with an overheat gauge.

"See! Aren't you glad I stopped? He's a real beaut."

[12] You are a little less lucky. A bundled patch of plastic draws your eye from beneath the bed, and you pull it out. It's a solar recharger with a number of cables attached. The energy collection material is super-thin, cloth-like, and, as you learn by gently tugging on it, highly resistant to tearing. You stick the small pad in a pocket and tick your head out the door. Cephie rests the gun across her shoulders, draping her arms over it as she follows along.

It takes you an hour of wandering before you can find something that looks like a very vague symbol for 'bridge'. What you thought was graffiti, was instead an arrow, pointing up. The two of you climb up a shaft on the rickety, rusting ladder. The hatch above is closed, but a few quick jabs of your Cutter solves that issue. You drag yourself up the maintenance shaft and on to the bridge.

Monitors glow dimly in the dark, surrounded by chairs or framed by harnesses. You quietly take a seat at the captain's chair as Cephie looks over the various other monitors. She eventually takes a seat in the engineering station, her long fingers drifting over the keys. A diagnostic in high Empyreal appears. Then, the bridge comes to life with a gentle hum, the main display showing a virtual view of the outside. It's all a green blur.

"Could you pull up a full ship diagnostic for me?" You ask, politely.

"Yes, captain. It's going to be bare-bones for now."


"Good gods, they're using Commsbuddy. Bless'm." Cephie murmurs, leaning back in her chair, even as it creaks dangerously. "Looks like there's survivors -- want to break in that--"



Sensory feeds cut back on just as abruptly as they shut off.

"...right, right, sorry, sorry. Hovering Line and all that. You're right."

Spoiler: EMPYREAL MAP (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 29, 2020, 10:44:25 pm
There's a lot to look into here...  If those are quantum entanglement comms, they're instant, but where are the receiving particles?  Also, we may not be able to escape Mercenary's Rest for awhile, it seems.

"Do you think it would be dangerous to defrost the survivors?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 29, 2020, 10:51:31 pm
"Oh, they're most certainly Pirates. If the lack of signage was a flashing red flag, then the fact they're using Darkhorse and Commsbuddy is so damn red it's crimson. There's two hundred and thirty-one of them, versus two of us. If half of them are Void Marines, we'll die. But, if you're up for some fun." Cephie drawls, idly. "Plus they're going to be suffering major time dilation. Darkhorse is on version...three hundred and fifty-two -- and no self-respecting Pirate uses it since it went legal."

"We're connected to the Empyreal communication networks, though." Cephie continues, "Which means we can contact anyone, anywhere in the Empyre." She pauses, "Maybe I should call my mum and pa'..."

Cephie rises, moving over to the communications chair. "Would you mind?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 29, 2020, 10:53:33 pm
"Are you going to contact Magnus?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 29, 2020, 11:06:52 pm
"If I was, would I have asked your permission, first? Or just sent you off to some random part of the ship while I did so." Cephie retorts, giving you a wicked grin that slowly fades, "Actually, why the fuck do I need your permission anyway? Out of the two of us, I have the advantage here. I can easily pierce through the windows and flood this place-- your fire won't help you."

Cephie turns to the console, smiling to herself as she types in a code. Her finger hovers over one of the buttons: [send]. "Going to stop me, Pheobe? Or are you all talk? Huh? Wanna scrap? Wanna make me stop?" She's teasing, taunting, twisting to face you, finger replaced by a piece of carbon hovering over the button. "Do it. Come on. Let's see that righteous rage -- or are you a coward?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 29, 2020, 11:10:49 pm
"I'm no coward, but fighting here seems like a bad idea.  If you want to spar, we could do that when we get back to the fortress?  But yeah, go ahead, call whoever you want."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on June 30, 2020, 08:22:27 am
"I'm no coward, but fighting here seems like a bad idea.  If you want to spar, we could do that when we get back to the fortress?  But yeah, go ahead, call whoever you want."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on June 30, 2020, 09:34:32 am
I find it significant/interesting that her reason for "why do I need to ask your permission" wasn't "I'm not subservient to you" but "I can defeat you."

((Characterization?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 30, 2020, 11:09:23 am
Maybe we can talk with Magnus too, explain that we aren’t who we were when he was sent to fight us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 30, 2020, 12:26:25 pm
What on earth, Cephie?

...she underestimates our Lines. If she pushes the matter, she'll find she's got a [tiger-analogue] by the tail.

Is water really such a hindrance for us? Water means
hydrogen and oxygen, in abundance-- material enough for all the plasma we might care to wield.
Failing that, how much silicon might we draw from these walls? Cephelia has not seen us wield the dust of McCreary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 30, 2020, 12:35:18 pm
What on earth, Cephie?

...she underestimates our Lines. If she pushes the matter, she'll find she's got a [tiger-analogue] by the tail.

Is water really such a hindrance for us? Water means
hydrogen and oxygen, in abundance-- material enough for all the plasma we might care to wield.
Failing that, how much silicon might we draw from these walls? Cephelia has not seen us wield the dust of McCreary.

the fighting might damage the ship as well
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 30, 2020, 12:49:11 pm
[1 vs. 18]
"I'll call you out then -- you're pathetic Pheobe." Cephie looks...disappointed in you. She slips a small diamond-tipped point from her pouch and, with a flick of her wrist, launches it at one of the...projections of the outside. It lodges in the wall, distorting the image.

In the same movement, she drops the piece of carbon, turning away from you as the call begins to connect. A picture of a smiling, cheerful family appears on the screen. Black hair, thin bodies and nearly translucent skin. She's relaxed, calm as she explains, "No one puts windows on the bridge of a battleship, Pheobe."

You slump in your chair, staring at Cephie's back as an older male answers the call. His scarred face twisting into a smile as he waves a cybernetic hand at his daughter. "CEPHIE! Hey, brats, wake up, your sister is calling--" He disappears from view briefly. When he returns, four sleepy teens and an older woman appear. There's faint annoyance there, yes, but all seem incredibly happy to see Cephie, who launches into a discussion about how much each has grown, and how they're all heartbreaker now-- so on.

"Hey -- you doing okay?" Cephie's mother asks, quietly, with concern.

"Yeah, mum, if I wasn't, you'd probably get a call from Magnus, wouldn't ya'?"

With a shake of your head, you turn your attention back to the ship, letting the other Ascended unwind and catch up with her genetic relatives.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 30, 2020, 12:54:26 pm
...I say.

>[NAME: Sadil of the Silicon's Rest, Mercrenary's Rest]

This is McCreary's vessel.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 30, 2020, 01:05:16 pm
((Planet name.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 30, 2020, 01:53:10 pm
Holy--
...
...right.

So "McCreary" was never a real name; the man now venerated under that appellation went by "Sadil" in life. The Families, and quite possibly every "[demon]" ever to grace this rock of a plague-world, originated-- in one way or another-- here.

More to the point: we're not getting this thing off the ground. We can gut it for parts. I'm eyeing those antimatter warheads, in particular-- those things could well break the cohesion of our enemy entirely, wielded with discretion.

What's the blast radius on those things anyhow?

...do we want to try and put a call through to anyone, once Cephie's through with her little chat? Magnus? One of our Line-siblings?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 30, 2020, 02:07:16 pm
Talking with Magnus might be helpful, according to what Cephie told us, he’s after Alphira. We are not Alphira anymore. We could explain that we’ve changed, that we’re interested in fighting the plague, not Empereals...what are others’ thoughts on this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 30, 2020, 02:39:27 pm
I'd like to try contacting and recruiting Alphira's siblings, talking to Magnus, and asking Cephie what traders are reliable in the area.

Also, we might be able to get this thing off the ground if we disabled power saving mode.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 30, 2020, 02:50:12 pm
Since we aren’t reviving the pirates, maybe turning off the Cryo pods will mean the ship isn’t using as much power and that extra power could be routed to the things we could use, such as the engines
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 30, 2020, 02:54:04 pm
I would be hesitant to do that, as the pirates could be helpful in some way.  We could try just waking up one or two of them and try to negotiate an alliance, for example.  Let's see if we have enough fuel to make it back without disabling the cryo pods.

Query the AI as to how far the ship can travel if the main thrusters were switched from power saving mode.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 30, 2020, 03:04:58 pm
I would be hesitant to do that, as the pirates could be helpful in some way.  We could try just waking up one or two of them and try to negotiate an alliance, for example.  Let's see if we have enough fuel to make it back without disabling the cryo pods.

Query the AI as to how far the ship can travel if the main thrusters were switched from power saving mode.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 30, 2020, 04:12:32 pm
You query the weapons system, asking for yield in [mt]. It calculates each warhead at roughly fifty [megatons]. It really depends on if they trigger airburst or ground burst.


The main thrusters are offline. They are non-responsive. You likely have to reactivate power at a junction near the engines, and do some troubleshooting and energy routing. However, most huge engines rely on hydrogen antimatter -- there's also the offline gravity module, which is required for any amount of travel in the Void that doesn't take thousands of years, as the engines are reliant on it to reduce mass.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 30, 2020, 04:29:13 pm
Let's get in-atmosphere travel working, so we can bring it to the fortress, before we worry about Void travel.  I know where we can get some fuel.  Attempt to reactivate power for the engines only.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 30, 2020, 04:31:44 pm
Let's get in-atmosphere travel working, so we can bring it to the fortress, before we worry about Void travel.  I know where we can get some fuel.  Attempt to reactivate power for the engines only.
I think we need to head to the engine room first, if I’m not mistaken
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 30, 2020, 04:32:22 pm
True, go to the engine room and try to re-route power to the engines.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 30, 2020, 05:14:21 pm
Alright, so to work on all this I'll need a skeleton crew of about one thousand, a dry dock, several dozen various components that may or may not be possible to construct on this world. We should be Voidworthy in a couple of years.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 30, 2020, 05:19:15 pm
What's the difference between the components that are in power-save mode and the components that are listed as non-responsive?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 30, 2020, 05:46:58 pm
What's the difference between the components that are in power-save mode and the components that are listed as non-responsive?
i think the difference is obvious, those in power save mode are saving power, while those that are non responsive are turned off completely

Since we can’t fix the engine ourselves, maybe we could look for parts of the ship we can fix, or at least start on the process, if there are no parts we can currently fix, we can check in with Cephie, if she’s done communicating, we could try communicating with either Magnus or Line siblings
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 30, 2020, 05:50:31 pm
If the main thruster is just saving power, then, doesn't that mean it can be switched off of that mode and enabled?  Saving power is not the same thing as broken.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 30, 2020, 06:56:09 pm
Power save mode have had their junction boxes shut down to conserve power for vital systems. The secondary generator is supplying power to only vital systems. Cryobays, emergency lights, and keeping antimatter contained.

If we want to get this thing awake, the first thing would be restoring the main generator. Next would be to drain the water and clean the engines. Pushing an explosion through a clogged engine wouldn't be a good idea...

You muse as something dings behind you. The main elevator doors slide open, and out steps the largest Void Marine you've seen in your short life. His 'helmet' scrapes the roof of the bridge. His footsteps depress the metal floors. A massive las-cannon fixes on you even as you drive to the ground. It's lens is as big as your face. Jewels of platinum, Jade, and iron hang around his neck, but the most prominent display is the Ruby encrusted ring of twelve snakes burned into his black, black armor.

"Oi, the fuck you lot doin' on my ship? Couple of scrappers, eh? You best put your weapons down and put your hands up, else this is going to get real ugly." His voice is distorted by the armor, but he slurs his heavy brogue.

"...I'll call you back, mum." Cephie sighs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 30, 2020, 07:00:30 pm
Put down weapons, put our hands up and say that we found the ship and were hoping to repair it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 30, 2020, 07:02:50 pm
Put down weapons, put our hands up and say that we found the ship and were hoping to repair it
+1.  I wonder if the ark ship would have fuel and parts we could use to fix this reactor?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 30, 2020, 07:49:04 pm
Ah-hm. Void marine.

Is void armor commonly shielded against war-nanites? If not... perhaps this is our chance to try that brain-stroke trick Alphira mentioned so long ago.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on June 30, 2020, 08:19:44 pm
Ah-hm. Void marine.

Is void armor commonly shielded against war-nanites? If not... perhaps this is our chance to try that brain-stroke trick Alphira mentioned so long ago.
I suggest not trying to kill him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on June 30, 2020, 08:28:36 pm
Not trying to kill him only works if we're confident that he isn't trying to kill us.

Put down weapons, put our hands up and say that we found the ship and were hoping to repair it

Do this for now, but stay on our guard.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 30, 2020, 08:54:03 pm
Maybe we can work something out.  He probably wants the ship fixed as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 30, 2020, 09:11:30 pm
You quietly peel away your gun, rising with your hands lifted-- "We were only trying to fix the ship--" You begin to explain, even as the Captain cuts you off.

"Of course ya' were damn well tryin' to fix it. This thing is a state of the art Naval vessel with enough wealth on it to buy a system. You must think I'm really bloody dumb if you think that weak excuse."

[9 vs 18]"Pheonix, put your damn hands down and stop playing the fool. Can I have a moment to talk with my friend?" Cephie spits the word with venom-- and doesn't give the Captain a chance to respond as she suddenly grabs you by the front of your armor and slams you into a wall with enough force to drive the wind from your lungs. "I'm sorry, Pheonix, but are you an idiot? Are you a thrice-damned fool? Did you hit your head hard on your fall from atmos?"

"--what?" You stutter, confused by the turn of events. The Captain has lowered his weapon, watching with mild interest.

"Y'know I'm always interested in dinner theatre an' all, but I want to get back--"

"Shut up." Cephie growls to him, turning her attention back to you, even as her grip tightens on your armor. She pulls your helmet off, looking you right in the eye as she growls, pushing you into the wall harder and harder. "Who. The. Fuck. Are. You."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on June 30, 2020, 09:58:50 pm
"I am the flame of Old Sol.  By the way... get the fuck away from me."

Push not-Iyal. Hard. Then, send out our will until the captain is incapacitated.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on June 30, 2020, 10:05:44 pm
...right.
Definitely time for anger.

"Patchwork girl." Spit the words. Set our will twisting. "Built on scraps. Stranded on a plague rock. I fight for my place, and my soul crumbles to godhood. I try to play nice, and people like you see weakness."

Wings. Voice of the Queen.
"Is this what you expect? Apotheosis? Blood and fire?"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 30, 2020, 11:05:47 pm
Cephie of Lavoisier stumbles back, landing on her rear. Your wings bloom forth, searing into metal, destroying the display with the sudden burst of heat, of chained inferno. A respirator begins to hiss on the knightly form of the Voidmarine, protecting against the lack of available oxygen. Steam flows at your feet.

"Patchwork girl." You growl, "Flame of Old Sol. Daughter of the Void and Alphira. Built on scraps. Stranded on a plague rock. I fight for my place, and my soul crumbles to godhood. I try to play nice, and people like you see weakness!"

[15+6 vs 20+5] Your voice booms out over the bridge, bouncing off the walls. Unrestrained will and deep anger pours into it. Your very voice splits the hydrogen from water, igniting sparklers of fire where it strikes. Determination made manifest.
"Is this what you wanted from me? Apotheosis? Blood and Fire? The Wrath of Old Sol?"

Cephie flinches back from your shout, face going pale. But she is not stunned, not weakened by your power, weathering it as best she can. She rises, painfully, slowly, to growl out, "AND! Pheobe fucking Gainer!"

You hesitate, confused.

"That is your name! Stories of you will be told for the ages on this world and the next. Never forget to tell the world your name -- I'm not following a coward. I'm not following Alphira. I'm not following the Crone Sol. I'm. Following. You. How can you expect your comrades to respect you if you have no respect for what you truly are!? Why do you hide in the darkness. Why do you cower from your own light?"

The armored giant in the room slowly drops to a slouch as machines hiss open. A thin, weathered old man stumbles into a kneel. His white beard, unbraided, would fall down to his knees. His multi-hued topknot, the same. Horrifying scars and cybernetics make up most of his body. More of it is metal than flesh. His limbs-- they are barely more than interfaces for the Voidmarine carapace. His abdomen has been exchanged for a direct life support unit.

"The Twelve Moon...Clans owes...life-debt."

Your fires dwindle, and fade, as you turn to look at the man. His brogue is a whisper of a rasp made with vocal cords not used to speech without an amplifier. "We served the Rimward King -- and were rescued from Tainted Space by Regis. We...we owe the survival of our clans...to...The Line of Sol."

"And did your forefathers serve Sol?" Cephie suddenly turns to look away from you, her facemask shifting up to hide her eyes.

"Ye-yes. During...the Great...Reclaimation."

Cephie speaks to you sideways, "This is what you are -- Daughter of Sol. Your Line's First is the [Patron Saint], the [Merciful God], the Epitome of Piracy. You are the Fire of Freedom. You were born with the hope of millions - trillions already laid upon your shoulders. Wear your mantle proud, because your soul and godhood are one."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 01, 2020, 12:09:24 am
"I... I think I understand now.  Thank you, Cephie.  Captain, do you swear allegiance to me and the Line of Sol on behalf of your crew until such time as you are released?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 01, 2020, 12:14:23 am
((Bahaha. That was perfect.))
((...anyway, it's time I asked for some exposition. What was the Reclamation War? Who was Old Sol?))

The-- Reclamation.
My war.

Such fools we elders are, godling: triumphant one moment, fearful the next. We are husks of what we were. Dust-- but you! You shall wield your fate like a torch!
Speak with fire, Phoebe Gainer. This is, in its own way, a triumph.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 01, 2020, 12:32:42 am
The first of our Line, ancient and unknowable.  You alone have glimpsed her visage, I believe.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 01, 2020, 12:43:08 am




"Within...reason. Our contract will...be forged with...favorable terms for...you." The old man wheezes, and slowly he rises, stepping back into his armor with a hiss of sealing servos.

Cephie slumps, tension leaving her shoulders. "I don't want to follow Alphira, or Sol. Those stories are gone, faded into the Dust. You want things to be different. You bloody well told a room full of aristocrats that you wanted a democracy. You use the monsters that all men fear as punching bags when you're pissed off. Don't forget it. The world won't let you."

Finally, "You're far from the Culmination, the turning of lead into gold, your true awakening, by the way."

You glance over to her, then shake your head.

"What is your name, Captain?"

"Murdach Of Valhol. I've glimpsed the gates many times, but was never granted entrance. I'm the elected Captain of the Twelve Moon Clans. I have no clan of my own--orphaned as I was on our Third Ship." The smooth, middle-aged brogue drawls, speaking in High Empyreal. "We'll hash out the contract whenever you have the time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 01, 2020, 12:53:08 am
"Well met.  I'm not sure if you're aware of this, Murdach Of Valhol, but you have been frozen for a long, long time.  I'm afraid that some of your crew have not survived."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 01, 2020, 01:01:52 am
"Such is the way of things. We'll keep'm on ice for now." Introductions over, Murdach slips into a much more comfortable Low, Old Empyreal, filled to the brim with Pirate Cant. "Void back to it. That or breathe'm, if our food is low. But considering wherein we sat down, we should still be planetside. Aye?"

You give a nod.

"Judgin' by the way my display is green, we're under water. This was a salt-flat when we made a splash. How many? Two, three hundred years?"

"A thousand or so, by my reckoning." Cephie answers, letting her mask down to reveal her red eyes and runny nose. "Had a mutiny?"

"Nah, we sent lads out to work as mercs against the Plague. Why we came here in the first place -- heard a broadcast asking for men and women of fortune. A missile was about to hit us, though, so wes went into shelter. I've got a tear all across my poor girl, but she didn't break."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 01, 2020, 01:23:52 am
Cephie... she was sort of assaulting us, but we shouldn't have been so harsh...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 01, 2020, 02:26:02 am
How were we to know? That situation was decidedly unsafe in appearance, and Cephie engineered it to be that way. A test of our will.
Those words, that struggle... they needed to happen. I am grateful.

...not to say Cephie couldn't maybe use a hug at some point. Poor girl must've been terrified.

Nod. "That broadcast sought aid against the Plague, a millennium ago. The locals have been beating it back ever since, and losing-- we came here looking for something to turn the tables."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 01, 2020, 02:45:02 am
The man tosses the Captain's chair aside and kneels. A small device, shaped very much like a blocky key, extends from the center of his armor from a line of cable -- and it hooks into the console. Murdach sits patiently as data flashes across the display.

"Well you found it. I've got about thirty of m'folk in level three Void armor, what survived the explosion. The lot of'm are harder than their own plating. Guns, a bit of ammo, those antimatter bombs you got interested in. What remains of a few families -- in total, twelve clans of miscreants and hellcats whats been carried on the Void." A sigh is echoed from the amplifier. "This...this is goin' to be more than a few months of mournin'. Any of my folk survive out there?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 01, 2020, 02:55:58 am
...

"...not exactly."
Smile thin. "They procreated. We call their descendants the Families."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 01, 2020, 03:02:32 am
"...they've gone native--" The impressive capabilities of Low Empyreal swearing is put on full display. You actually learn a few curses from the ancient pirate.

"Hey, hold up. Don't just tell'm that. He'll be depressed for weeks." Cephie giggles, taking a seat on the engineer's chair. "Tell him 'bout all the mischief they get up to."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 01, 2020, 03:05:06 am
...y'know what?

What the hey. Make a story of it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 01, 2020, 03:16:35 am
"...where do I begin?" You shake your head, claiming a seat nearby and crossing your arms over your chest. "For one, it seems like one of those bastards is either involved in, or behind every single mischief or civil unrest. They're probably the best shock troops this planet has. A more ferocious and savage bunch you cannot find here--"

"They still fight like us!" Murdach cheers.

"But smart too. Clever. They took one look at a Clan Voidmarine they...acquired, and built their own from las-gun parts, fusion generators and bits of scrap metal they had laying around. They took one look at a novelty radio and built one of the best military communication networks this planet probably has now. If I could make the call from here, they would bust down the door for me, so loyal enough I suppose..."

"You're either family to them or a contract-holder."

"I Ascended two of them, if that's of an--"

"My kin?! Ascended?!" The armor suddenly barks as the entire suit turns your way, the sensors on the 'helmet' zooming in on you. "That means we're kin now too, you know. You share our blood. I'm your great, great, great, great granduncle in law or some such nonsense now."

"Your people are still causing trouble...but Pheobe...who had Antimatter on this planet? Know any groups that could produce massive explosions?" Cephie questions, innocently. The way she holds herself, the slight, puzzled frown and the dark glee dancing in her eyes as they make contact with you -- all tells. Purposeful ones. Had you not known her, you would never notice the hint of a secret barely kept,
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 01, 2020, 03:25:22 am
Uh.

Somebody enlighten a confused elder. Did-- did the Thorntons-- get hold of--?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 01, 2020, 03:29:42 am
"Happened just a few months ago." Cephie giggles. "A whole city -- gone in a blast that broke the earth and burned the sky."

"What? Who did it?" Murdach questions, confused.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 01, 2020, 04:17:04 am
"Ha, are you saying that SEED had a cache of antimatter ordnance and only used it once, to blow itself up?  That's some serious self-control.  Captain, that was your would-be employer, a SEEDship."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 01, 2020, 04:22:57 am
"Twice. One for a band of Pirates and once for itself." Cephie idly points out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 01, 2020, 04:26:05 am
"Do you think there are any other Church caches around here?  This planet is lucky that SEED didn't destroy you all, because your descendants are our most important allies against the Plague."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 01, 2020, 07:59:58 am
"Do you think there are any other Church caches around here?  This planet is lucky that SEED didn't destroy you all, because your descendants are our most important allies against the Plague."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 01, 2020, 11:29:26 pm
"Well, I guess there ain't many ways better to peel a patchjob off than with that." Murdach murmurs, after hesitation. "Good threat, too, if you think about it. Tell me, Patchwork, enough with the small talk. What do you want, and what can I give you? ...I want peace. Its been a thousand years since we slept -- but you still mention the Plague. Our last home was ruined by them. If this is our home, we will fight the Plague until there's nothing left of us. Ask your offer."

["And if you need to know the value of something, let me know."] Cephie offers through Lucille.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 01, 2020, 11:35:09 pm
We want peace too, we want the plague destroyed
There is probably a better way of wording this, but I think this is the goal
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 02, 2020, 12:13:26 am
["What do you think of something like this?"]
 
["Until such time as the Plague is eliminated on this planet, you and your crew will agree to provide lethal military aid to defend against the enemies of the Line of Sol, both foreign and domestic, including but not limited to the Plague.  You will also surrender 50% of the value of the salable goods on this vessel for the purposes of purchasing additional military aid and financing infrastructure improvements.  In return, the state will make every effort to repair your ship, guarantee you and your crew a fair wage when an economy is established (with back wages paid at that time as well), and the state will also repay you before the end of your service for the seized goods.  If you would like to settle down here in peacetime, I will provide you and your crew with generous plots of land."] 

["Is that asking for too much or too little?"]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 02, 2020, 07:15:56 am
Sounds good to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 02, 2020, 08:58:42 pm
["It sounds fair to me. He'll have to get approval from his people-- and you should let a team of bookkeepers do the fine details, but as a statement of intent, it's a start. I'd advise salable goods to be goods kept in the common trust -- he doesn't have control over people's personal finance and property as a Captain."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 02, 2020, 09:50:43 pm
Excellent-- time to put the matter to speech, then. The Doctor's words will do fine, with a brief addendum to define what's "salable".
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 02, 2020, 09:51:40 pm
How does this sound?

["Thanks, Cephie."]

"Captain, what do you think of these terms?  This isn't the contract in full so much as a statement of intent to be fleshed out later.  Feel free to take some time to get approval from your crew."

"Until such time as the Plague is eliminated on this planet, you and your crew will agree to provide lethal military aid to defend against the enemies of the Line of Sol, both foreign and domestic, including but not limited to the Plague.  You will also surrender 50% of the value of the  goods kept in the common trust on this vessel for the purposes of purchasing additional military aid and financing infrastructure improvements.  In return, the state will make every effort to repair your ship, guarantee you and your crew a fair wage when an economy is established (with back wages paid at that time as well), and the state will also repay you before the end of your service for the seized goods.  If you would like to settle down here in peacetime, I will provide you and your crew with generous plots of land."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 02, 2020, 09:58:47 pm
How does this sound?

["Thanks, Cephie."]

"Captain, what do you think of these terms?  This isn't the contract in full so much as a statement of intent to be fleshed out later.  Feel free to take some time to get approval from your crew."

"Until such time as the Plague is eliminated on this planet, you and your crew will agree to provide lethal military aid to defend against the enemies of the Line of Sol, both foreign and domestic, including but not limited to the Plague.  You will also surrender 50% of the value of the  goods kept in the common trust on this vessel for the purposes of purchasing additional military aid and financing infrastructure improvements.  In return, the state will make every effort to repair your ship, guarantee you and your crew a fair wage when an economy is established (with back wages paid at that time as well), and the state will also repay you before the end of your service for the seized goods.  If you would like to settle down here in peacetime, I will provide you and your crew with generous plots of land."

We’ll need to unfreeze the crew
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 02, 2020, 10:05:18 pm
It's his ship, so I think we should leave him to decide when to unfeeeze them and discuss the offer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 02, 2020, 10:06:36 pm
["Thanks, Cephie."]

"Captain, what do you think of these terms?  This isn't the contract in full so much as a statement of intent to be fleshed out later.  Feel free to take some time to get approval from your crew."

"Until such time as the Plague is eliminated on this planet, you and your crew will agree to provide lethal military aid to defend against the enemies of the Line of Sol, both foreign and domestic, including but not limited to the Plague.  You will also surrender 50% of the value of the  goods kept in the common trust on this vessel for the purposes of purchasing additional military aid and financing infrastructure improvements.  In return, the state will make every effort to repair your ship, guarantee you and your crew a fair wage when an economy is established (with back wages paid at that time as well), and the state will also repay you before the end of your service for the seized goods.  If you would like to settle down here in peacetime, I will provide you and your crew with generous plots of land."


+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 02, 2020, 10:13:12 pm
"Mineral and Energy claims and rights would sweeten the pot, so to speak-- I'm not planning on fleecing ya'll, but we'll need those too."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 02, 2020, 10:14:29 pm
"Mineral and Energy claims and rights would sweeten the pot, so to speak-- I'm not planning on fleecing ya'll, but we'll need those too."
we will give them too. The goal is plague elimination, ideally while keeping the rest of the biosphere intact
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 02, 2020, 10:16:34 pm
Hold on, energy and mineral claims for the entire planet?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 02, 2020, 10:23:29 pm
["A percentage or a notable region of concentration. He might have planet survey data we don't ...Which means it's valuable. Otherwise he wouldn't have brought it up...but he's trading in good faith by not worming it into the final contract. SEEDed planets are usually very close to Old Earth's, if not paradise worlds. SEEDs are very precise like that."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 02, 2020, 10:26:55 pm
["Would 25% of all energy and minerals be a decent offer?"  We could haggle with him a bit."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 02, 2020, 10:29:51 pm
["Statement of intent -- Let the bookies figure out the math. Ask for data. It would make the trading fair."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 02, 2020, 10:31:48 pm
["Got it."]

"Can you provide the planet survey data?  I would be fine with that request, but let's share information so that the deal can be worked out in good faith."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 02, 2020, 10:33:45 pm
"...that is acceptable." Murdach sighs. "Only because of good faith and old debts. What data and what form?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 02, 2020, 10:40:24 pm
Uh... not sure about this.  This seems like Constantine's area of expertise, but here's a suggestion.

"Any data describing the general mineral composition of the planet and the locations and mineral depths of any particularly mineral-concentrated regions.  Do you have storage cubes?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 03, 2020, 12:01:57 am
My area of expertise, hm? You've a point there... my memory is still fragmented, mind. I shall have to go digging.

<Mnemonic query: what geological information would be most useful to us in the development of this world and in the furthering of our cause, and what geological information would typically be bartered in a trade such as this? How was such information stored in my day?>

((Over the past few weeks, I've come to believe that mnemonic access is a conscious act on the part of our characters. It seems necessary, given the sheer volume of technical knowledge and Empyreal lore of which we remain ignorant-- lore a dust-elder really ought to know!))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 12:20:51 am
[11d20 = 111]
All of it. Planetary survey data, starcharts, nearest routes, fertility levels, possible fertility levels, mass spectrum readings-- the list is endless. All information has value in the planning and development of a planet. From metrological data to deviations in the output of the star. The higher the amount of data, the less risk, and the more valuable a system could potentially be -- at least, if you can process and visualize it.

Prominent locations of interest for grab and go are also noted on these geological and fertility surveys. Judging by your own experience - and Cephie's observation - with proper development this planet seems to have an abundance of life-sustaining minerals -- phosphorous, nitrogen, and so on. Either SEED trapped these from a supernova or stumbled upon an abundance already in the system. However, the planet's biosphere is still in its earlier stages--

As for the tech you used, you were in a period of transition from solid-state quantum-based data storage, also known as datacubes, to the smaller and more efficient gas-state systems. Datacubes are a standard in the rim -- and were the standard of your time in the Empyre. You think both are horribly outdated by now, but your Nulls can read data-cubes...There will be a pallet full, no doubt. Pads, like Cephie's, could also be useful -- especially if outfitted with a translation device, as they might have more data-storage now than the larger cubes...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 01:06:16 am
"Haha-- funny." Murdach laughs, then pauses, the sensor on his head twisting to look back and forth between you and Cephie. "Oh [merciful God], you're serious. Bring a cargo craft. I'll get some people to send it around. What's your Network Acess Usernam--" Murdach trails off when Cephie winces.

"Gods be kind this planet is still a shit hole after all this time? It has Ascended and las-guns, antimatter weapons, but ya'll don't even have a damn Empyreal Network Relay? Right. Alright. I've got one held in common share -- I'll sell it to you for nearly free. You'll have to route through our systems if you want to send a message out of system, but we can work somethin' out for that."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 01:13:48 am
"Thank you.  I look forward to working with you.  Will you need transportation?  Our capital... city is a day or so of air travel away.  Alternatively, I can send some bookies to this location to work out the details instead."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 01:18:28 am
"I'll send a message -- ya'll got any good food or drink or are yo--" Once again Cephie winces, and Murdach presses a hand to his mid-section. "If I still had a heart, that would've got me. Our life-debt is great, but...but food and drink are the staples of a bonding, of a contract started and sealed. Salt, wine, and bread -- meats too."

["Tradition states, that, as we are hiring these people, we should provide them food and drink during the negotiation. The best we can offer. A sign of prosperity....a sign of hospitality."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 01:23:17 am
This is why we haven't eaten the other arm yet.

"[Can non-Ascended tolerate nano-feasts?  Other than that... I have nothing here.  We could prepare them some delicious [large insect] steak when we return?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 01:31:10 am
["Oh? And some nutrient cakes while we're at it?"] Cephie snarks, and her grin curls her lips. ["Maybe a nice bottle of terrible vodka made in an industrial water still can help it go down smooth. Maybe you should marry the [khagnate], bring these people out there, since our food is so poor we about gave this man a heart attack at the state of it."]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 01:40:58 am
["Just wait until he sees our 'city.'  I feel bad for this guy.  He waited a millenium to have the opportunity to feast on... nutrient cubes?"]

"Of course, we have some rations, but little else as meeting you was a surprise to us.  Please accept these with our gratitude.  l will have more proper food sent to you, with my regards, as soon as I return to Stormmont.  Please do visit it at some point, as we would like to give you the opportunity to sample our hospitality."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 01:52:35 am
"Jus' organize something good. We've got our own stores of food, and we always have the rebreathers, but my word as Captain only goes so far. They know me to be good and just and cruel and unkind as needed, but meetin' your folk and enjoyin' hospitality sets minds at ease about the state of our neighbors and about any contract we might be signin'." Murdach plays with the most prominent of his jewels, the twelve snake amulet. "You're young. I can tell by this gi'-- woman's advisin'. New at power. Showin' off isn't for your people, it's for those that ain't. I might be sympathetic, but the next person to wear this amulet might not be. You pickin' up on what I'm sayin'?"

The display flashes as he opens the cryopods and begins to 'thaw' his people out. "Give us a week to get straightened. I'll dig out that comms package for you so we can stay in touch. I'll need a week to pitch this to my people. Sway'm around. Got a place to stay for the night? We have plenty of available bunks for the time."

"Sleeping on a ship might be good for you. Its good to remember where you came from." Cephie opines.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 01:57:43 am
"Thank you, that would be kind of you.  If my companions do not have any objections, we will stay here for the night."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 03:27:38 am
["I'm sleeping on the ship tonight. We made a friend."] You calmly broadcast to the Null, who, in turn, no doubt transmits the news to Nicole -- there's a flurry of thunks and pops as the mic is jostled and apparently dropped, before your grandmother's voice echoes out.

["Right. If we don't see you in a the next twenty-four, I'm blowing this entire crater to Paradise."] Nicole gently warns. ["So if you are being held hostage or otherwise inconvenienced by whatever you found in there, you should escape before then. Otherwise, have a good night, Pheobe."]

There's a pause, and the mic is dropped again, followed by the Null reporting, politely, stiffly. ["I will keep an eye on Nicole Gainer, Mother Pheonix. We'll make contact if there's any trouble."]

You and Cephie follow Murdach into the lift, having to hug the edges of the elevator to give the giant enough room. He's silent, facing forward. The two of you follow suite, and eventually you step out into a long, metallic corridor, full of rounded edges and foam covering, and into the cryo-bay.

A mass of people mill despondently. They drift towards the cryopods that contain nothing but corpses or skeletons. Men, women, and children alike mourn quietly. You watch Murdach pause. "This is the worst part of bein' a leader, young queen." He drawls to you, softly and sadly. Then his voice booms out over the crowd. "The fuck' you lot doin', huh?! Are your tears goin' to bring them back? You lot got some magic in you you haven't told me about? Huh!? We're dead in the damn dirt -- how are you goin' to cry without water? Get your shit straight and get to work -- speak with your Crew Leaders and get to work! We're bloody Pirates. Death is the cost of life-- get to it!"

The crowd is stunned. No one speaks, even as their fists clench and their jaws tighten and work. Anger burns brightly. But the logic of the Captain's statement rings true. A few minutes pass, and work crews are formed, setting off to various parts of the ship. "'ey, Morganson, find these two highborn ladies a big room --" His speech cuts off as the  rainbow-haired youth draws close. Dark eyes in dark skin look over the two of you, and a grin splits his lips.

"Yes, Captain." Morganson turns to you, setting off down the corridor.

"Enjoy the night, Patches!" Murdach calls after you.



The room is stately, if dusty. It was one of the ones that was sealed, and, after Morganson presses a few fingers to his wristpad, he explains, "This used to be the chief navigator's quarters. He didn't wake up. The nicest unoccupied space we got."

Everything is lavish in this room. The bed is a red wood that gleams in the light. There are various pieces of fine art plundered from a dozen different styles and cultures. The floors have a carpet on them -- and the blankets on the bed are soft and silky, etched with gold and a shimmering, rainbow-hued silk that reflects light a dozen different ways. A monitor hangs above a wrought iron desk that curls itself from the carpet like the finest ivy, and another monitor lies nearby a comfortable couch.

"Lady Patches -- other lady. Food will be around as soon as the cook and quartermaster get around to it. If you have need of anything, there's a console by the door. There's a shower on this corridor, can't miss it, if you need to refresh yourself. As far as I can tell, you two are...y'know, mortally unbound, so try not to get angry. Rooms' on lend and all that."

"Right. Thank you." You murmur, politely, examining the display of the console by the desk. "I can use this to send communications out of system?"

"Aye. Hooked up to the main network and the Empyre."

You nod, giving him a smile. He gives a slight nod, then turns and leaves you alone. The lights flicker, but Cephie claims the couch, pulling out her datapad. "You get the bed, I'll get the couch. You probably have about an hour to send a message without someone monitoring your transmission...here." She tosses the datapad over to you, and you glance down. Its a list of names and connection numbers. "Order of assumed closeness to this system. You'll be routed a bit, but those are contacts for above the table operations for each group that your siblings command."

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 03, 2020, 07:41:54 am
Others should chime in on this but I think we should try this Ashley 'Ashes' person.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 03, 2020, 10:16:47 am
Others should chime in on this but I think we should try this Ashley 'Ashes' person.
alright.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 03, 2020, 12:50:50 pm
((Lovely, thanks Egar! I'll assume any information I call up in this way outside of PMs/spoilers is available to all of us, just so I don't have to parrot forward what's been said already-- our system has handled similar information transfers nicely in past, and Constantine's got nothing to hide.))

There's a couple questions at play here, godling.

First (a question for everyone's consideration):
where do we stand, long-term? Do we play Magnus' game, or do we join our Line-siblings in opposition?
Second: of our Line-siblings, who's most likely to turn a willing ear to our predicament? For that matter, who's most likely to be in a position to help?
Finally... is there anyone on this list you'd like to call for their own sake? Anyone you've fond memories of, through Alphira's mind?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 03, 2020, 12:55:06 pm
((Lovely, thanks Egar! I'll assume any information I call up in this way outside of PMs/spoilers is available to all of us, just so I don't have to parrot forward what's been said already-- our system has handled similar information transfers nicely in past, and Constantine's got nothing to hide.))

There's a couple questions at play here, godling.

First (a question for everyone's consideration):
where do we stand, long-term? Do we play Magnus' game, or do we join our Line-siblings in opposition?
Second: of our Line-siblings, who's most likely to turn a willing ear to our predicament? For that matter, who's most likely to be in a position to help?
Finally... is there anyone on this list you'd like to call for their own sake? Anyone you've fond memories of, through Alphira's mind?

or the interface’s mind?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 03, 2020, 01:04:45 pm
Heh. The Interface was many things... it was not, by my reckoning, a purveyor of "fond memories". Chilly sort of creature.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 03, 2020, 01:10:02 pm
Heh. The Interface was many things... it was not, by my reckoning, a purveyor of "fond memories". Chilly sort of creature.
yes, but it still was able to think, and likely has memories of its own, which Phoenix now shares along with Alphira’s and Phoebe’a, though Phoebe has only known this planet
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 02:38:43 pm
In my opinion, we should contact Alphira's siblings that are both likely to be willing to help and close enough to get here in a reasonable amount of time.  Since we only have an hour, we shouldn't contact siblings just for the sake of catching up with them.  We should also contact Magnus and see if we can hash something out, but under no circumstances should we mention the Plague to him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 03, 2020, 02:40:50 pm
No word of the Plague, hm? Because you figure he'd just wipe out the biosphere here and have done with it?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 02:49:11 pm
Exactly.  The planet is unimportant to him, so I doubt he would spare it if he learned of the Plague, even if we manage to defeat it before he arrives.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 03, 2020, 02:54:37 pm
It will take 12 years for Magnus to get here, maybe we can tell him about the plague, then we can spend time repairing the colonial ship, which if I remember correctly, was calculated to take 3 years of repairing. We can then get as many people on the ship as can be allowed, along with adequate food and water supplies, maybe a farm on ship for the crops/livestock, that way when Magnus destroys the plague, we, and SEED’s people, could find a plague free planet to colonize. I remember there is an old colony ship, I just can’t remember the name of it right now. I know it would take less than 12 years to repair.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 02:58:13 pm
This planet has a lot of potential.  I'd rather not have it destroyed, as we are unlikely to find another SEEDed planet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 03, 2020, 02:58:46 pm
That colony ship bears a carry capacity of some few myriads-- not nearly sufficient to transport the entirety of this world's people. If Magnus decides to scour McCreary's Planet, there will be holocaust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 03, 2020, 03:00:53 pm
This planet has a lot of potential.  I'd rather not have it destroyed, as we are unlikely to find another SEEDed planet.
Right. We might still be able to tell our siblings about the plague, I don’t think destroying a biosphere is the only way a plague is destroyed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 10:12:17 pm
...Alphira did not spend much time with her younger siblings...I do not have memories of any of them. I do recall that of this list, of which two are missing, Jax and Aras were the most like Alphias, but they are the furthest from us, it would seem. Ashley--

"What is Ashley like?" You question Cephie, hesitating.

[12]"...She's a bit of a schemer, a manipulator. She's technically in the Nobility and Navies good graces, out of all of the Kindred of Alphias.  Inheritance is still being contested, as far as we can tell. She might see an opportunity in you for in-family politics." Cephie shrugs, glancing up at you. "I want you to try something for me. I want you to sit and think about who would be the best person to call."

Rupert...Rup. I do remember him. He's also known as 'Crematoria', in his legends. He burned his way across worlds during the war, when a message needed to be sent. Some people called him Sol's Herald-- he was used as an intimidation piece -- second only to Alphira.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 03, 2020, 10:21:03 pm
Then we shall call Rup.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 10:29:45 pm
Then we shall call Rup.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 10:32:18 pm
..are...are you sure?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 10:36:20 pm
Alphias... do you remember Rupert?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 10:37:08 pm
There's nothing but silence.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 03, 2020, 10:38:41 pm
...I have two reservations.

First: in calling Rupert, we're throwing our lot in against the Empyre. If that's the course we intend to take, well and good-- but unless we're willing to commit, we'd be better off refraining for the time being.

Second... er. What are we in Rupert's eyes, at this point? A sister? A comrade-in-arms? An oath-breaker? An abomination? He may not be so sympathetic as we'd hope.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 10:39:52 pm
We've already alienated the Empyre, as we are wanted by them with a huge bonus to whoever kills us.  There's no way we can deter Magnus without help.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 03, 2020, 10:48:24 pm
...perhaps.

If it were myself in this position, φοῖνιξ... I'd begin by calling Magnus. Find out what he wants with us. If I liked his answer, I'd send word to this Ashley girl for a political lead-- if not, I'd seek out whatever allies against the Empyre the Line Sol has to offer.

That said... I can't help but feel your friend there wants this to be
your choice. Think on it, as she suggests. Draw your own conclusion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 10:51:46 pm
"Perhaps?"  If the Empyre chooses not to prosecute Alphira, second-in-command of the pirates that attacked and challenged the Empyreal Navy, even though they're offering an exorbitant sum for her execution, I will eat my metaphorical hat.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 11:04:37 pm
[14][?][?][?]
You sit and think about the situation, about who to call...you shut your eyes and drift into a dream. A laugh. A knife in the dark. A world reduced to ashes and tombs -- the paths that branch off from this moment are infinite and hard to ascertain. A hand rests on your shoulder. A wave of improbabilities and false futures cloud your mind. Pain splits your skull, and when your eyes flicker open, Cephie is leaning in front of you--

"Mmh. You look more confused than before." Cephie smiles with pointed teeth, "But it's interesting to look at it from the outside, at least. Like watching someone fall asleep.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 11:18:14 pm
What was Alphira's relationship like with Rupert?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 03, 2020, 11:19:50 pm
There was none. Alphira took her orders directly from Alphias. As did Rupert.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 03, 2020, 11:38:22 pm
I don't know.  A knife in the dark... perhaps Rupert would see an opportunity to eliminate us and assume command of the Line.  Sol save and preserve us...

On further reflection, Rupert is a monster that destroys entire planets.  We don't want someone like that to do their thing and attract unwanted Empyreal concern and attention.  I suggest that we see what Ashley can do for us.  Before that, however, I agree with Constantine that we should contact Magnus first so that we can get a better idea of what we need from Ashes.

Contact Magnus.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 05:51:03 am
yes, if you think Rup is the best to talk to, then we’ll talk with him
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 04, 2020, 07:09:51 am
I think we should just bite the bullet and call up the Magnus person and see what the hell they want.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 03:01:04 pm
You type in the routing number into the desktop console. Cephie takes a glance and, with a dip of her head, leaves the room. It connects and routes-- until you have to sit waiting. A gentle song plays as you wait on hold. Then the screen flares to life -- revealing a pale young man in a jumpsuit. A damp mane of black hair tangles its way down the back of his impossibly pale, alabaster skin. His green eyes fixate on the screen. Magnus squints at you, confused.

"[Who are you and how did you get this number?]" He questions, in perfect High Empyreal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 03:13:59 pm
"[I am Phoenix, and I am contacting you from Mercenary's Rest.  You know me as Alphira.  I understand that you are interested in me?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 03:38:00 pm
"[I am Phoenix, and I am contacting you from Mercenary's Rest.  You know me as Alphira.  I understand that you are interested in me?]"
((Are we talking to Rupert or Magnus right now? I remember 1 vote for each. I ask since if we’re contacting Rupert, I don’t think he’s “interested” in us))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 03:46:26 pm
((I'm pretty sure it's Magnus, but I'll wait for clarification from the GM.  Three people said they suggested contacting Magnus.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 03:59:48 pm
edit for clarity.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 04:15:05 pm
edit for clarity.

((Thanks))
"[I am Phoenix, and I am contacting you from Mercenary's Rest.  You know me as Alphira.  I understand that you are interested in me?]"
[What do you want from me?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 05:14:06 pm
[1]"[Ah-ah.]" Magnus stares at you. Then frowns, "[Alright Ceph. That's enough fun. Give me a report.]"

"[I-i am Pheonix -- I...I used to be Alphira.]"

"[Alright, first of all, the face is all wrong. Way too young. Next, look at that hair! Alphira's hair is blood red, it's Jax's hair that's that color. Next, Alphira wouldn't be missing an arm. So stop playing.]"

"[I'm telling the truth!]"

"[Would Alphira ever claim to tell the truth!? Come on -- you have her personality report.]"

[-] You open your mouth to protest-- "Kneel!" The spikes in Lucille jam deep into your flesh, her plates threaten to break bone, and sharp shocks of pain lash every inch of you. You drop to your knee, as [NOBLE PRESENCE OVERRIDE] echoes in your brain. Fear makes your heart race -- but so does your anger. A steady beat, like a war march.

"[...that was your armor -- not your essence. Fascinating. You are not Alphira, but not Cephie. Tell me everything, before I shatter your spine.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 05:20:57 pm
[I fell to this planet and lost my memory, I (re)learned how to fight at an academy...]
How much do we tell him?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 05:26:44 pm
[Lucille, deactivate.]

Unfurl our wings to demonstrate that we are of the line of Sol.

"I have created a new identity for myself, but this is Alphira's body.  What can I do to prove to you that I was Alphira so that we can move on to other matters?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 05:29:29 pm
[Lucille, deactivate.]

Unfurl our wings to demonstrate that we are of the line of Sol.

"I have created a new identity for myself, but this is Alphira's body.  What can I do to prove to you that I was Alphira so that we can move on to other matters?"

+1 actually, unfurling our wings will damage cohesion, would it not be enough to create a small controlled fire near us by breaking hydrogen/oxygen bonds?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 05:31:07 pm
That makes sense, but let's just create some flames in our hand, and only move on to wings if he still doubts we are of the Line Sol.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 05:36:59 pm
I'm...I'm not Alphira...

[6] [NOBLE PRESENCE OVERRIDE] is Lucille's response to your command."Right pinky finger, activate all muscles." You bite your lip to stifle the scream of pain that feeds into your hand. Your pain nullifiers aren't working -- you feel every fracture, every twist. "Stop. Punishment shocks, continuous, twenty-five percent."

A bolt of lightning surges through you, seconds stretch into infinity as you twist and writhe constrained within your suit of armor. You cannot think, you cannot feel -- there is only pain.

"Stop."

"[Now, you ten credit knock off in ornamental armor-- tell me who you are. If you say Alphira, one more time, I'll break every bone in your body.]" A snarl twists his lips, "[I studied every document, every scrap of information about Alphira. The way she talks, the way she stands, the way she argues -- I have entire office buildings built around finding and understanding her. You. Are. Not. Alphira.]"

...pain...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 06:04:20 pm
"[I didn't say that.  I said I was Alphira.  My name is Phoenix.  Are all nobles of the Empyreal this dense, or are you just a special case?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 06:14:46 pm
[I am Phoenix of Sol.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on July 04, 2020, 06:20:19 pm
"[I didn't say that.  I said I was Alphira.  My name is Phoenix.  Are all nobles of the Empyreal this dense, or are you just a special case?]"
Let's not antagonize the empyreal noble who can kill us with just a thought.

[I am Phoenix Sol. Leader of the humans fighting against the Plague threatening this planet.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 06:21:55 pm
If he finds out about the Plague, he will destroy the entire biosphere of this planet.

Quote
"There won't be a Plague when he finishes. But there might not even be a Biosphere. Your people will survive. I hope. But please, understand...Magnus isn't here for the plague. He's not here for this backwater rim world. He's here for you. To fight you. The Endless Nobility...they're inhuman. They don't care about one planet, or two, or even a dozen. What's one ant colony to the boot that treads upon it?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 06:23:02 pm
If he finds out about the Plague, he will destroy the entire biosphere of this planet.
this is true. I think just answering the question will be sufficient
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on July 04, 2020, 06:31:01 pm
Magnus will learn about the Plague anyway when he arrives. We have 12 years to destroy the Plague, mentioning it to him now could give us the opportunity to gain his favor by destroying the Plague ourselves without his intervention.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 06:32:53 pm
Do you think he would be satisfied with our assurance that we will defeat the Plague, or that we have defeated it when he arrives?  The planet means nothing to him.  He'll probably eliminate the biosphere just to be safe, as Fenrirs and Plague Lords are no joke.  SEED already "defeated" the Plague once, but it came back stronger.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 06:53:07 pm
"I...I am Pheobe Gainer. Pheonix of Sol. The Patchwork Girl. I'--"

"There's a start. Wonderful. You're on Mercenary's Rest, you've said?" Magnus questions, cutting you off.

You try to nod, and Lucille's gorget tightens around your neck. "Yes." You croak instead.

"Alphira used to own your body?

"Yes."

"Interesting. Very interesting. Tell me about your childhood? Do you remember it?"

"Just...bits and pieces. Dreams."

"Alphira is dead. Annoying, but likely. Now, here's what's going to happen to you. I'm not interested in weaklings and fledgelings. I'm not interested in scum like you. You've committed two mortal sins here, Pheobe Gainer, you didn't kneel -- and you wasted my time." He pauses, frowning. "How do you plead?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 06:56:20 pm
((We did kneel?))

[-] You open your mouth to protest-- "Kneel!" The spikes in Lucille jam deep into your flesh, her plates threaten to break bone, and sharp shocks of pain lash every inch of you. You drop to your knee, as [NOBLE PRESENCE OVERRIDE] echoes in your brain. Fear makes your heart race -- but so does your anger. A steady beat, like a war march.

"[...that was your armor -- not your essence. Fascinating. You are not Alphira, but not Cephie. Tell me everything, before I shatter your spine.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 07:03:13 pm
((It was Lucille that kneeled, not us))
[I didn’t kneel, and I did waste time. I’m sorry about that. I was told you were after Alphira. Since Alphira’s dead, am I correct in thinking you’re not coming anymore?]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 07:04:51 pm
((That doesn't make sense.  He expected us to kneel of our own volition faster than Lucille made us kneel, which was almost instantaneous?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 07:14:16 pm
((He expected us to kneel ourselves, not Lucille doing the kneeling for us.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 07:16:34 pm
"When do you expect me to kneel?"

"[As soon as you see me. The respect due to an Empyreal Noble.]"

"[I...I apologize. I did not understand...I'm sorry.]"

"Prostate yourself."

Your face slams into the carpeted floor as your body lays prone on the deck of the Voidcraft. "[And that's because I'm petty.]"

"[All I want to know -- if she's dead, are -- you still coming?]" You manage to growl through grated teeth. Your heart pounds like a war-drum, and its nearly all you can hear.

"[I need to confirm her death and take you into custody or kill you. So yes.]" He nods, pressing his hands together to gesture at you. "[Listen, little girl. I'll be merciful. I won't kill you right now. Instead, I'll lock your armor like that and put on a bit of torture. When I get to where you are in a decade or so, I'll let you free. If you're still sane.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 07:22:04 pm
This son of a bitch... if we make it out of here, Magnus will absolutely get his comeuppance, whatever it takes.  We're not Alphira, but apparently the Empyre still wants to prosecute us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 04, 2020, 07:34:05 pm
...

...no.
nonono.
nonononon̸o̴.̴
n̸o̵t̸ ̴o̵u̵r̷-̵0̴0̵ ̸d̸a̴u̸g̵h̸t̵e̴r̷.̶

rage.̷ ̴r̷a̸g̷e̴.̸ ̵r̵a̷ġ̵̶̵̱͉͝ȩ̸̶̷͖͂̔.̷̶̸̝̠͑͗ ̷̶̵͕͖̔̌r̷̵̷̘̄͐ͅa̵̶̴̭̲͊̈́-̸̶̶͎͕͆͠0̶̶̵̝̙̇̽0̸̷̸̡͍̿̔-̸̵̵͍͍̋̒g̴̸̷̦̍͑ͅe̴̴̶̡̬̅͠.̶̸̴̮͔̔̕--
F̸̗̕I̴͙͗R̷̖̍E̷̗̎.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on July 04, 2020, 07:39:52 pm
Crap. We need give Magnus a reason to let us go. Mentioning the Plague seems like our best chance at self-preservation.

[You can't, without my leadership the Plague will consume this planet. There are at least 4 Ascended present on this planet, along with several voidships. If the Plague is not contained, it will be free to spread elsewhere.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 07:52:06 pm
Let's see if we can give him a good reason before we attempt to brute force the armor.  Of course, this action means we're going all-in, as Magnus absolutely must be killed or deterred for the planet to survive if he has this information.

Crap. We need give Magnus a reason to let us go. Mentioning the Plague seems like our best chance at self-preservation.

[You can't, without my leadership the Plague will consume this planet. There are at least 4 Ascended present on this planet, along with several voidships. If the Plague is not contained, it will be free to spread elsewhere.]
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 07:57:37 pm
[1/1d50]
You feel a burst of rage from an ancestor -- the drums intensify. Bloodlust, like an old friend, wraps its arms around you. Your claw of fire bursts from your left shoulder, incinerating the carpet. Your wings flare to life. You devour the air and the moisture, filling the room with heat and fire. It burns bright red, a harsh glow of reflected light.

You do not feel the pain, even as you use your claw to rip piece after piece from Lucille. You do not feel the savage welts and lacerations you make. You do not smell the burning of your flesh and the floor around you. Nor do you cry out when you pull Lucille's spikes from your bones. There is nothing -- nothing but this minute of blood and pain. You gaze doesn't waver from Magnus, your anger doesn't falter, and it drives you to pull yourself free of Lucille, splattering the room in your own blood as you drag your shredded body to the terminal.

[48 vs 5]
"No. You can't-- The Plague --" You begin to murmur, swaying, unfocused -- lost in rage. "These people...need me."

"[You said your name was Pheonix Sol? Which do you prefer? Patches, Pheonix, or Pheobe? It doesn't matter -- I'm coming to kill you. Not Alphira. You.]" He's smiling, his eyes are all alight with joy, and he begins to squeeze his palms together. "[Get stronger! This is going to be so much fun! You're insane! That murderous intent -- that bloodlust! Oh Cephie is going to get a reward for this! I know that oily little cannibal is nearby. CEPHIE. ENTER.

[16] The door gives a beep, and Cephie stiffly enters with a grit of her teeth. She goes pale when she sees you, her eyes widening in shock. Her lips purse, her breath deepens.

"You did well! I'll wire a reward to your family this instant -- I'll give you more when I fight her!"

"Let me go...I ca--don't leave me here."

"You!" You growl through a bleeding throat -- KILL. Kill...kilkilillkill.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 04, 2020, 08:02:57 pm
---
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 08:05:38 pm
End the transmission.  Heal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 08:07:13 pm
I don’t like that this has to be done...Cephie swore an oath to us. Magnus is the target
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on July 04, 2020, 08:08:50 pm
Cut the comms. Resist the urge to kill Cephie, she's not our enemy until Magnus arrives. He and the Plague are our true enemies for now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 04, 2020, 08:14:58 pm
(Good grief, people. I set my laptop aside for the day, and I come back to this?)

She loves you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 08:33:23 pm
[16 vs 10]
...

...

...

"I'm going to kill you." You rasp gently, facing Cephie. She flinches, but then grits her teeth.

 "Do it. Make it quick oathbrea-"

"I'm going to kill you Magnus."

You cut the comms-- the console explodes in a burst of flames as Magnus laughs. "Dismissed. Keep up the good work, you damn cannib--"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 08:39:08 pm
We need to pull out all the stops.

Heal.

"Cephie, get me another console and pay the Captain for this one... with your own money.  I'm not going to hurt you, okay?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on July 04, 2020, 08:47:36 pm
We need to pull out all the stops.

Heal.

"Cephie, get me another console and pay the Captain for this one... with your own money.  I'm not going to hurt you, okay?"

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 04, 2020, 08:55:58 pm
What a demon. What a demon of a man.
I'm so sorry, Φοίβη.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 09:11:05 pm
Heal

Is the comms device broken? I think we ended the communication without breaking it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 04, 2020, 09:14:08 pm
the console explodes in a burst of flames as Magnus laughs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 09:18:22 pm
[14] Your wounds are deep, but they slowly begin to scab over as you focus your will upon your flesh. You grit your teeth as you pull yourself back together and regain your composure. With shaky breaths, you exhale, looking at Cephie. Anger still twists into your heart, hard and sharp. Uncertainties, doubts, jealousies, fears all pour through you as you stare down the other Ascended.

"Get me another console from the-" You turn your attention away, towards the charred console and the bloody armor laying on the floor at the foot of the desk. There's a pool of your dark, almost black blood, dripping into the gouged and rent floor.

"You're insane." Cephie whispers, gently. She hesitates, pressing a hand to your bloodstained face. "Lay down and rest. Please."



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 09:21:24 pm
Rest
“Sorry for the damage”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 04, 2020, 09:33:51 pm
...she's right. No need for apologies-- but she's right.
There is one concern still to address.


Lie down. "My nano-feasts."
"In twenty-four hours... Nicole Gainer will blow this vessel apart... if I do not rejoin her before then. That must not happen."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 09:41:03 pm
...she's right. No need for apologies-- but she's right.
There is one concern still to address.


Lie down. "My nano-feasts."
"In twenty-four hours... Nicole Gainer will blow this vessel apart... if I do not rejoin her before then. That must not happen."

Oh shit, will Cephie be able to swim while carrying us as we sleep? Oh wait, it shouldn’t take...how long have we been on the ship?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 09:46:22 pm
Rest now, but tomorrow, think on how Magnus can be dealt with.  He is a threat to you, this planet, and everything you hold dear.

...she's right. No need for apologies-- but she's right.
There is one concern still to address.


Lie down. "My nano-feasts."
"In twenty-four hours... Nicole Gainer will blow this vessel apart... if I do not rejoin her before then. That must not happen."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 10:26:15 pm
Eat Nani Ration
Tell Cephie about Nicole’s “rescue” plan of blowing the place up in 24 hours, then rest
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 10:35:57 pm
Cephie nods, pulling a feast from her pouch and pressing it to your lips. You swallow it down, slumping back as nutrients rush back into your bloodstream. The faintness you feel slowly begins to fade, the world sharpening. You glance down, at your shaking hand. With a deep breath, you rest a hand on your head. Trying to stop the spins as you feel faint once more.

"You made Magnus happy." Cephie murmurs, with a sigh. "That's hard to do. Thanks, I guess...but...look at you. You're a mess. I thought you were going to kill me there. I'm glad you didn't."

"Me...too." You murmur. Another pill is produced from a pouch, with a moon printed on it. She pops it into her mouth, then offers you one.

"For the trauma. Everything will fade -- you'll feel like it was just a bad dream."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 10:40:08 pm
Let the pain and memories fade.  We will bear them for you.

"Yes, please."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 04, 2020, 10:44:48 pm
Yes, Cephie, we're insane. It's how we survived the Leviathan, after all. It is... useful. Sanity is necessary for those who are mundane. We are not. For us it is merely a tool.

My fellow advisors: Lucille cannot restrict our... more fiery abilities, correct? Can we install a safeguard in Lucille, make her critical functions dependent on a piece that is vulnerable to heat? Something we can replace easily, though. I'd like to see her "noble override"
that.



((I'm gone for a few days and all this happens?!))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 11:13:22 pm
I don’t think making Lucille vulnerable to heat will help at all. That will make things worse, the point of armor is to protect. Also, if we lose all our sanity, the plague will take us over, I think, so we should try to stay sane.
Yes to the moon pill
Rest
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 04, 2020, 11:15:11 pm
Not making her completely vulnerable to heat: just some small part that would still be protected from outside damage, but that our combustive capabilities can still disable.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 11:16:19 pm
Not making her completely vulnerable to heat: just some small part that would still be protected from outside damage, but that our combustive capabilities can still disable.
What’s the purpose of hindering her? Hindering us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 04, 2020, 11:17:53 pm
Not to hinder her normal functions: so we can hinder her if Magnus or another Noble's presence triggers another Noble Override and she temporarily turns traitor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 11:19:15 pm
Perhaps there are different versions of this armor for sale.  Ones that are less... official.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 04, 2020, 11:28:58 pm
((As with the fabricator, DRM strikes again.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 04, 2020, 11:34:19 pm
((As with the fabricator, DRM strikes again.))
((What does DRM stand for? Is it the name of the company that makes the fabricators?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 04, 2020, 11:35:55 pm
Digital rights management.  There's DRM on the pirate ship, too, but they were able to steal and use it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 04, 2020, 11:51:26 pm
"Shh..." Cephie shushes and presses the pill to your lips. You swallow -- the world swims as a cloud descends. Colors blur and brighten, then swim together until you shut your eyes. You focus too much on the reflections, the feelings, the rays of light twisting down only to be hindered by Cephie's face. A grin curls her lips --

[1]--you scream yourself awake, clawing at the bed, and struggling against sleep paralysis. Too much-- too much-- you twist and writhe as fires begin to lick at the edges of the sheets.

Cephie wraps her arms around you, gently. Your struggles cease -- a center of wood smoke in a vortex of fear. You pass into the eye of the storm, slumping against her. Your hand shakes. Weakly you murmur, afraid, "I don't want to sleep al--"

"Don't beg." Cephie murmurs, "Just kiss me and shut up."



She's gone in the morning, and you rise to find a bundle of clothes on your bed, topped with a towel. A cold meal of what you assume was dinner lays on one of the tables nearby. You rise, eat, and step into the corridor. Last night is a blur. Your head pounds, painfully, but the cold shower of stale water helps. You drink some -- and spit it out.

You dry yourself with the towel, pulling on the stiff, heavy fabrics of the Pirates. It itches, but the weight is comforting, as is the number of straps and belts -- the formality of it all. A wrapping, an undershirt, a vest, a coat, and an overcoat all weigh you down. You lace and wrap the boots, strapping them to your feet.

They're functional boots too -- a spacer's pair of boots. Steel, leather, and plastic, all set atop a magnetizing base that hooks you to tethers should there be a sudden loss of gravity.

You return to the lent room, examining the new console on the desk. Cephie, or someone else, has set your armor aside in a blood-stained duffle bag and cleaned the pool of blood from the floor.

Cephie returns, grinning from ear to ear. She draws a square plastic container from her coat pocket and fishes out a roll of paper. A heavy herbal smell lingers in the air. She flicks one to you, then claims a seat on the couch and opening her datapad. "After that stunt last night -- well, you were monitored. They put that up on the big screens though-- they cut out a few pieces, but these bastards love that stuff. Spitting in a Noble's face, defying them -- eat it right up."

"I barely remember it."

"Those pills help with trauma. Makes it easy to forget. Blurs the details.What are you planning on doing now?"

You examine the tube of herb and paper, lips quirking as you consider Cephie's question. You have a question for her, but...business.
Right.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 04, 2020, 11:57:57 pm
((I'm gone for a few days and all this happens?!))
((I turn in for the night as everyone's puzzling over communication priorities... I wander in the next evening, and we're in the throes of hell. This game moves scary fast sometimes.  :-X ))

We'd best go show "grandmother" we're alive.
Looks like the update got edited out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 05, 2020, 12:05:15 am
Fixed now. Apologies. Lots of content to get through. I can go slower, but sometimes you guys are doing very short term commands that need immediate results! <.<

You can line up suggestions or suggest an agenda for the week. <.<


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 05, 2020, 12:10:04 am
We should contact Ashes and/or Rupert now that we know that Magnus means business.  We need all the help we can get.  Have Cephie eyeball the 50% goods we got and give us a rough estimate of the value.  In addition, see if there are any local and discreet traders near the system that don't ask too many questions.  Also, use the Unlimited Meals DRM on the dropship to produce some decadent meals for the pirates, as we said we would.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 05, 2020, 12:13:39 am
((No worries! Is nice sometimes, a late night of rapid-fire updates.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 05, 2020, 08:19:23 am
We should contact Ashes and/or Rupert now that we know that Magnus means business.  We need all the help we can get.  Have Cephie eyeball the 50% goods we got and give us a rough estimate of the value.  In addition, see if there are any local and discreet traders near the system that don't ask too many questions.  Also, use the Unlimited Meals DRM on the dropship to produce some decadent meals for the pirates, as we said we would.
+1 Sounds like all good things to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 05, 2020, 12:07:51 pm
We should contact Ashes and/or Rupert now that we know that Magnus means business.  We need all the help we can get.  Have Cephie eyeball the 50% goods we got and give us a rough estimate of the value.  In addition, see if there are any local and discreet traders near the system that don't ask too many questions.  Also, use the Unlimited Meals DRM on the dropship to produce some decadent meals for the pirates, as we said we would.
+1 Sounds like all good things to me.
Let’s contact Rupert. +1 the rest. How long have we slept? We should tell Nicole we’re alright. How long do we have before she blows up the ship?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 05, 2020, 06:13:54 pm
[-] You light the cigarette with a twitch of your willpower, blowing out the smoke. Cephie falls in behind as you stride out the door, down the corridors -- it doesn't take you long to find the bridge, but this time, you take the elevator. Murdach kneels behind the captain's console, but his helmet turns to track you. Several others are sitting at the various consoles -- all of which are active. Murdach laughs when he sees you, rising from his place and removing the data-jack. "Patches! You are a true child of Sol -- spitting in the face of Magnus like tha'."

"...I suppose."

"Like a mad dog. You know what's the best thing to be, near a mad dog? A good friend!" The sensors track to Cephie, "Or the one holdin' the leash."

"I want Cephie to inspect the common trust." You ignore the dig, gesturing to her. "And I need to leave the ship."

"I'm guessin' its somethin' to do with the hovers tha' are idlin' nearby."

You nod.

"We've established an access point. I'll have a lad show ya'. Come along with me Cephie."

A youth is summoned to the bridge, and after taking the elevator to another floor, you, Cephie, and Murdach part ways. You head to the access point. Its an airlock on the top of the ship, one of many, but you step on an elevator and rise up, into the sunlight. The waters have receded on this part of the Valhol, leaving a fine drying mud across the surface. Chunks of ice melt on the warm metal.

"You've drained some of the lake, I see." You walk to the edge of the ship, looking at the dropoff into the water below. The many cracks and rips in the hull are apparent, but it shifts beneath your feet.

"Started up our hydrogen factory, ma'am. Fuel for the secondary."

You nod, letting your wings slip free, lifting into the sky. Over the crater lake you glide, past the Valhol work-crews that dig out skeletons and corpses from the nooks and crannies of the ancient vessel. Past the ring of ice and the slurry of water, pass the marshy land with its stalks of gold that sway in the breeze. A camp has been assembled. Five hovercrafts sit in a clearing, a number of Warmachines stand at attention, but visibly relax on your approach. William strides out of a tent, approaching you with a cocky grin.

"Phebe! Good to see you." He calls.

"William. I'm showing up to let you know I'm not a hostage."

"If something can hold you hostage. we wouldn't have had a chance." He looks through the spaces in the tree, to the black form of the Valhol sunk into the mud and ice. "That's a voidship? I didn't think they would be so big."

Tiffany Mellone steps out of one of the hovercrafts, striding towards you, followed by Nicole Gainer. Mellone bows her head, but Nicole gives you a slap on the back.

"I was told by ... your retainer? That there was a job for me here -- along with a Geoydes and the finance ministry?" Mellone questions.

"Where's Geoyde?"

"Puking his guts out. Hoversickness." Nicole offers cheerfully.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 05, 2020, 06:57:05 pm
"The captain of this vessel and I came to an agreement.  The crew will help us beat back the Plague, but only in return for certain allowances."

"I need you and Geoyde to work out a deal with them regarding the mineral and energy deposits on this planet.  We have datacubes with information on the locations of significant mineral deposits, so they will have to be accessed by a Child of SEED to provide you with the necessary information.  Use this information to negotiate."

"In addition, we are entitled to 50% of the goods kept in the common trust on this vessel.  We'll need a team to work out the details of the valuation and determine what exactly we are entitled to."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 05, 2020, 10:01:26 pm
"Understood. I will inform Brother Geoyde." Mellone gives another bow of her head, "But I came to speak with you about your trip. You have five days until your meeting with the [Khagnate]. I've assembled a dossier if it pleases you, about him and his nation."

"Oh. Right. Yes." You slip it into one of the many pockets of the greatcoat, giving a nod. "Thank you, Daughter Mellone."

"Yes, Mother Pheonix." Mellone turns away towards one of the hovercraft, filled with a number of nervous-looking individuals in clean, precise Scholar suits, with green and teal capelets dropped over their shoulders. An ill-looking Geoyde is helped into the ship by one of these Scholars. He gives you a miserable look, and then the ship closes behind him. Another, a group of Warmachines, lifts up first, followed by the delegation. You spread your wings and join them, by the time you catch up, the hovercrafts have landed.

Murdach is brought up in the elevator -- with seven of his Voidmarines. Fully armed and standing a few [feet] taller. Hard as steel and dark as the void -- your Warmachines, when they disembark, do not seem as intimidating as these behemoths. More like children playing dress-up than actual soldiers.

"Ah, so this is your delegation'? And here I thought you had grit." Murdach taunts with a harsh laugh. "Bringin' such a paltry force."

[17 vs 12]
"No, these armored individuals are extra guards for you, for the duration of our discussion." With a flex of your wings and a cheerful smile, you return the taunt with a wide, beatific smile. "My wrath needs reason to abate, sometimes. As I'm sure you've witnessed."

William approaches from behind, giving a dark chuckle. "You truly are the Angel of Mercy, Pheonix. Sometimes I wish you weren't so damn merciful." His eyes drift over the armor of his counterpart, Murdach, and the smile curves wider. "But then why would you need me? Besides my stunning personality?"

"Well met!" Murdach laughs, then gestures. For you, he's speaking High Empyreal, but you know for a fact he's also speaking the SEED common tongue-- "Come on in. Enjoy our hospitality -- please remember, everything has a price! Take a rest!" Then the sensor on the top of Murdach's armor twists towards you. "Pheonix. My people wish to question you after my speech and before the calling of the vote. If you want our assistance, sway them."

You nod, adjusting your coat as you and your retinue enter into the ship. Nearby the airlock is a well-furnished, comfortable room, with a long table surrounded, except in the middle, by chairs. All along it, in front of each of the chair, is a console raised from the wood.

A motley collection of pirates enter, sitting across from the precise and neat lines of your bookies. Geoyde and Mellone take leading seats, as if shielding their people from the other group. The pirates laugh and joke with each other, while the bookies and diplomats sit quietly.

"Wait here." You murmur, as your Warmachines take up defensive postings for the diplomats. William sits on the table between the two groups, smiling cheerfully but he's coiled like a spring. A hand on his belt and his cybernetic muscles bared.



"Aigh'. Listen up. Only goin' to speak like this once." Murdach stands in front of a crowd of huddled pirates, their outfits as mismatched as their personalities -- cybernetics are on full display, and in the back of the group, you even notice a monster of a man, his torso implanted on to eight, long legs. His arms have been replaced with a number of tools, grasping implements and various gear. Another which catches your eyes is a dark-eyed young man, skinny and thin, with great bags under his eyes. He has no ears, and his shaggy hair is wet and covered in algae.

"So, I stand before you with Pheonix of Sol. Descendent of Regis, the Rimward King, the Slayer -- and of Sol herself! Fate crossed our paths, and she wishes to make a deal with us. Now, we're dead in the dirt. This is not our home, this is not the skies we've been promised, nor the night that we own. But, for the foreseeable future, we're grounded. Now, I've had to make some concessions -- we need land for food and settlin', we need minerals and energy for industrializing, and we need somethin' to gain from all this. Pheonix here wants our survey data, some of our common stock--" Murdach weathers the boos in silence, but he raises his hands. "...but more importantly, she wants out weapons. This planet is fertile -- we know that. This planet is wealthy -- we know that."

"But more importantly -- and this is news I ain't been wantin' to break, but it might change some of your minds." He raises his hands. "In this system is all the precursors for a Relay. In fifty, to ninety years, this system will have a Empyreal gate. Mark my words. Its only fifty light years from the old Relay for this sector of the Rim."

"Now, with that consideration' in mind -- how many of you want to settle here now? How many of you want to turn your [swords to plows], and with a smile, hand your grandchildren all the riches a new sector like this can offer? I'll turn this over to Pheonix -- you know the Lady by now -- a trueborn Pirate, like her Line-Mother Alphira. Like the Rimward King. Like Old Sol! She ripped herself apart to spit in the face of a damn Noble. She's threatened to kill that very Noble for the slight of makin' her bow! What do we have to fear when we're contracted to this monster of a Lady? Nothin' but our own damn prides."

Murdach turns, stepping away -- and with a gentle push of his backhand, nudges you into the center of the crowd. Somebody calls out from the assembled Pirates, curious, "Why'd you do it? Why you wann' kill Magnus?"

[1]
Your breath catches in your throat. You open and shut your mouth, looking out over the crowd.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 05, 2020, 10:14:15 pm
"Because fair is fair."

I doubt this is an appropriate reply, but it's an option.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 05, 2020, 10:58:17 pm
((In the interests of not bogarting the entire game, I'll sit this one out.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 05, 2020, 11:01:16 pm
((Bogarting?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 05, 2020, 11:06:59 pm
Peace. Courage. Remember your anger, godling, and speak-- we will provide the words.

"You saw the footage. I gave him a chance-- I called him in good faith. He spat that trust in my face. He thought he could break me."
"He flies now for this world. My world. He thinks he can threaten me? He thinks he can threaten my people? I will cast him down. I will burn him myself."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 12:01:14 am
[15] "Because fair is fair." You finally state, bringing confusion to the crowd of Pirates. They look at Murdach, in question, in confusion, and in worry. You pause, remembering your anger, remembering your pain. It suddenly bursts, your temper lost as you suddenly begin to spit words like fire. You use your Voice without thinking. Without restraint as the fires of your rage ignite from smoldering ash. You take a step forward, fist clenching, wings flaring.

[18+1 vs. 7+5]"I gave him a chance. In good faith I tried to negotiate, tried to speak with him-- he spat in my face. He tried to break me." Your nails dig into the flesh of your hand, drawing blood as you begin to pace. "He thinks he can threaten me? My world? My People? MY GODSDAMNED WORLD?!"

Then you exhale, hiding your wings. Another shaky exhale, another harsh breath as you keep your eyes on the floor, a savage snarl twisting your worlds. "I will cast him down. I will -break- him. Then I will burn him myself. Until there's nothing left--"

"Because fair is fair."

There's silence from the assembled pirate crew leaders and contract holders. Smiles creep across their faces. Before anyone can say anything else, Murdach steps forward. "All in favor?"

It's unanimous. All but a few hands lift into the air.

"I'll give the word to begin the negotiations of our contract." Murdach nods, dipping his head and turning away, his jewelry clinking against his armor. You turn and leave with him as the crowd disperses.



The survey meeting is...boring. At the end of it, they want a ten percent perpetual income from the sale of minerals and energy from this world. Assistance with settlement. Assistance with industrialization. Mutual protection pacts. A permanent harbor in any possible future Void docks. They lay a claim to a chunk of the ocean that they found is developing crude oils. In return, they've agreed to a fifty-year contract of military services, mutual technological development and to turn over fifty-five percent value of all goods held in common stock -- which comes to roughly, at current market prices, comes to some forty-one thousand, three hundred and forty-seven [Empyreal Energy Credits]. Cephie, who has joined you, quietly shows you the value of a single one of those credits. Currently in this sector, a baseline automatic las-gun kit costs roughly three credits. A portable, high-efficiency solar charger, about as large as a hovercraft? Twenty credits. One ton of flour? Ten credits. But it'd be a worthless cargo. Antimatter fuel? Ten thousand and five hundred credits for a kilogram -- but there's an issue.

"We can't give them what they're asking."

"[Two hundred million ha] isn't that bad. The border they want isn't even close to the Holyland--"

"Let me rephrase it then." Mellone states, having pulled you out the door to speak quietly to you. "This is not our land to give. The Outlanders own this part of the world -- this is a holy site to them! One of their folk heroes slew a [water demon, water wolf] that dwelled here. They farm this lake's banks for their grains."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 12:25:13 am
"Is that land part of the Khaganate?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 12:29:06 am
"Technically no, but they'll claim it as soon as the local clans realize they can't win and appeal for help." Mellone explains, after a few silent moments of critical thought. "Then it won't be raiders on beastback, it'll be hovercraft, artillery, and massed mobile infantry. We'll get dragged into it. This'll be as good as declaring war on Outlanders everywhere."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 12:31:55 am
"If we take the Khaganate by marriage and apply some pressure to these clans, would they be likely to surrender to our joint forces?  That would give us some legitimacy in the Outlands."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 12:33:49 am
"They likely wouldn't make any loud noises. There'll be friction - some clan on clan violence, as groups shuffle and resettle, but--" Mellone gives a small nod. "They'd be caught between a rock and a canyon."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 12:35:15 am
"I think it's worth a shot.  Let's plan on that for the time being."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 06, 2020, 01:07:26 am
...again with the marriage proposition?
I understand there's tactical considerations to be had here, but we elders have no right to ask this of our heir. It's her life.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 01:08:54 am
Empyreals are functionally immortal, as you know.  She just has to wait him out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 06, 2020, 01:44:40 am
Would you marry a baseliner off to a septuagenarian, and justify it thus? The thing is obscene all the same.
φοῖνιξ isn't our puppet. To ask this-- to force this-- we'd be wielding her like one. We haven't the right.

...we never had the right.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 01:46:02 am
Hmm.  I suppose you are right.  Phoenix, what are your thoughts on the matter?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 01:53:26 am
I'd rather burn all of the Outlands to ash and water it with the blood of it's pe-- it's a hard no, from me. I will meet him. If he interests me, I will reconsider...as for Mellone--

"It's mine one way or another." You bluntly state, with the slightest of frowns. "So we'll treat it as such." Mellone gives a small, tight nod, and returns to the negotiation table. You listen for a little while, but are soon bored by the discussion. Murdach left when the discussion turned to [hectares] of land. You suppose you could stay to understand the full treaty--or you could go do something else.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 01:56:11 am
Read the dossier.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 03:01:53 am
Read the dossier.
We could do that after hearing the treaty
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 03:35:49 am
I guess we should hear it in case they try to sneak in something controversial at the last moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 06, 2020, 09:05:25 am
Stay for the treaty.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 05:57:37 pm
You remove the folder, reading over it while you sit comfortably at the table. You half-listen to the treaty while you scan the document. Your negotiator, that is to say, Geoyde, is pushing that the energy rights to that spot in the ocean are part of the ten percent, whereas the Pirate group is trying to explain that as a bonus. Eventually, they get settled on sparing a few percentages of mineral rights in return for the section of ocean, but only after Geoyde insists that such a deal is not an attempt at fairness, but rather blatant robbery.

Spoiler: Dossier (click to show/hide)




You follow William out into the hallway during one of the recesses. The pirate Voidmarine laughs when William draws out a las-gun, and fires at the massive suit of armor. It impacts with a sizzle before it dissipates. The only proof a shot was fired at all is a pockmark not even a [millimeter] deep. William nods as the pirate continues laughing through her speaker. He takes a step forward-- wrapping his black arms around the armored figure the best he can-- and with a strain of every muscle in his body, he lifts the multi-ton Voidmarine up and slams her into the deck. She gasps in surprise as he suddenly stands on top of the armor, panting and sweating from the exertion with a twist if a grin. He produces a knife as she struggles to reach him -- or her gun. With a savage strike, he begins to try and prise the carapace open.

"Enough playing." One of the other Voidmarine states, much to William's and the prone pirate's mirth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 06:29:02 pm
Low legitimacy, but a strong economy and high population morale.  No law enforcement, which is interesting.  How can a society exist without laws?

"Are you having some fun, William?  It looks like even a voidmarine can't withstand am Ascended."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 06:33:03 pm
“Why are you fighting our allies? We should not needlessly damage armor or weaponry, as they are expensive to produce and in some cases necessary for life of the one inside”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 06:34:41 pm
They were just messing around.  No harm was done.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 06:46:44 pm
"She still won though." William rises with a grin, offering the Voidmarine a hand -- which yanks the unsteady Family Prince to the ground. The two start laughing again, eventually both regaining their footing. "But I got my point across."

"Aye, you did." The Pirate laughs, straightening up and coming to a stand with mild difficulty.

"I also found a weakness."

"An apt description -- she does have a weakness for being on her back." The other Pirate states, bluntly. The first Pirate doesn't respond verbally -- instead slamming her fist hard into the chest of the other pirate with an echoing clang of metal on metal. The second Pirate stumbles back, laughing.



The contract stands, and both sides representatives agree to the terms. Cephie pulls you aside, and the two of you discuss using her ship's printer to make a feast. She hesitates, but agrees, pointing out that you should probably get in contact with Emma to begin forming a story -- after all, these are the Barons of Steel that once threatened the Holyland. You nod in agreement, asking her to plan out the party with Emma. Cephie gives a bow of her head, leaving your side to return to Stormmont with the delegation to begin organizing the feast. A pirate approaches her, extending out a massive briefcase-style system. A private Empyreal Communication array, connected to the Pirate's network.



You return to your 'room' to notice the carpet has been removed, and the deck patched with thick metal plates welded to the floor. Your armor still lies in a bloodstained duffle bag, but you have no intention of even touching Lucille right now. Instead, you take up a seat at the deskbound console, fingers resting on the keys. You want to get in touch with Ashley Sol, right? How should that conversation start?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 06:51:14 pm
I would suggest introducing ourselves and politely inquiring about her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 07:11:45 pm
I thought we were contacting Rupert, as Phoenix knows Rupert the best
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 07:23:50 pm
Either is fine with me, but I am kind of wary of Rupert, as he has a tendency to destroy planets.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 07:54:14 pm
[Heads - Ashley]
You are routed through a number of dummy connections, until you're face to face with a tall, lanky woman. Her grey hair is cut short in an undercut and is peppered in blood reds. A number of wicked scars mark their way across her androgenous face. She's wearing the formal attire of a businesswoman, all crisp lines and polish.

"I am Pheobe Gainer, Pheonix of Sol. I am told you are Ashley of Sol."

The woman dips a nod, her eyes look over the cosmetic glasses she wears, and she takes them off. "I am. May I ask why you are calling and what you need?"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 08:00:33 pm
"I am appealing to you, as kin, because I am in a dispute with a noble of the Empyre.  Could we come to some kind of agreement in return for your aid?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 08:07:01 pm
"Two things," Ashley begins after a pause, "How do I know your kin and not a pretender? Secondly, I run a legitimate business. I am not going to risk my standing by fighting a war I know I cannot win. What's the Noble's name?"

"Magnus, the youngest."

"[Merciful God], no. Hah. No. I'll pass."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 08:24:16 pm
Do we tell her about the plague?

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 08:25:54 pm
In a moment...

"Can you give me some advice?  He is dead set on coming here and killing or capturing me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 08:33:59 pm
She already mentioned she wouldn’t help against Magnus

The planet I’m on has people fighting the Plague. Would you be able to help with destroying the plague without also destroying the entire biosphere?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 08:39:38 pm
She did, but that isn't the same as asking for advice.  You can give someone advice without fighting a war, you see.  Do you disagree?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 08:43:45 pm
She did, but that isn't the same as asking for advice.  You can give someone advice without fighting a war, you see.  Do you disagree?
No, I agree with your statement
In a moment...

"Can you give me some advice?  He is dead set on coming here and killing or capturing me."
Yes to this
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 08:46:26 pm
"Get stronger. If you're truly of Sol's line, I'll see you in the Void." Ashley offers, unhelpful. "Some advice for the Plague -- if you cannot handle one infestation, then are you really kin?" She shrugs. "I just don't see why you think I would help you without something in return -- do you think we haven't dealt with a fair share of pretenders since Alphias fell?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 08:54:12 pm
What would you like in return?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 09:05:46 pm
"I own six planets, an armada of warships, and both ancient and new technological wonders untold. What can you give me?" Ashley questions, blowing a lock of her hair out of her face with a look of impatience. "My businesses pull in a million credits a Terran Cycle."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 09:24:12 pm
"I can give you support and legitimacy in in-family politics.  This was the body of Alphira, second-in-command after Alphias."

Unfurl wings as proof of Sol ancestry.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 09:41:08 pm
She already mentioned she has legitimacy, wouldn’t saying we can give her legitimacy sound like we think she doesn’t have it?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 09:42:20 pm
She said she has a legitimate business, but that is not the same as having the title of head of the Line of Sol after Alphias' death.  That's a useful title politically.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 09:51:42 pm
"I can give you my support within our 'family'." You offer, politely. "I was Alphira--"

"You look nothing like her. All I see is a child. Like I said when you didn't listen to me: call me when you're in the Void. It seems you have a lot to survive. If you don't, well, sorry. Not my probl-" She rambles, annoyed, reaching for the key to end the communication.

Your wings flare forth with a sudden burst of light and heat, cutting her off. You frown, and, with a twitch, your claw bursts to life in much the same way. Ashley pauses, her lips pursing. "How long have you been Ascended?"

"Three years."

A rare smile forms on her scarred face.

"Ah...maybe you are worth something after all. So, let me give you some advice. You'll owe me a favor..." She holds up four fingers, "Four pieces of wisdom for the price of one favor."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 09:54:30 pm
((Sorry, to clarify, she is offering to perform four favors in return for us doing one favor?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 09:55:58 pm
”Four of what? My fingers?”
Someone please word this better, the goal is to ask what she wants four of hopefully without sounding naive
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 09:56:12 pm
Clarified like butter.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 09:57:16 pm
"Well, first of all, what's the favor?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 10:00:36 pm
"Whatever I want. It's nothing petty like your property or people or undying loyalty -- I can buy all that these days." Ashley replies with a smirk. "One Favor for four pieces of wisdom from your Elder."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 10:01:42 pm
Our Elder? Who would that even be?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 10:02:37 pm
She means herself, an older member of the Sol Line, with greater wisdom.  I'm inclined to accept the offer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on July 06, 2020, 10:14:43 pm
((Sorry that I haven't been posting more. I've been keeping up with the thread, but sometimes it's hard to jump in.))

I'm... a bit leery on this, to be honest, but I can't think of a better alternative.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 06, 2020, 10:15:56 pm
She means herself, an older member of the Sol Line, with greater wisdom.  I'm inclined to accept the offer.
I’ll accept too. I’m under the impression she wanted wisdom from us for her favor, I might have heard things wrong
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 10:38:33 pm
((It's cool! Post whenever and whatever! I enjoy all arguments and disagreements!))

Three of the Ancestors have agreed, and so, you give a nod. "I accept your contract."

"Good. First things first: You are not Alphira -- she was far older than you when she fled. You do look quite young, but that body is your's." She pauses, clarifying, "That was just general advice."

"One: You have good control over the manipulation of hydrogen, but Sol's Line has control over energy vectors too. Heat, Light, Electricity, Kinetic. I'm a master of manipulating light--" Ashley lifts a hand, and it vanishes. With a twist of her wrist, a soft square of light seems to coalesce within her grasp. "Here is a copy of my...younger work." A soft ping announces a pop-up, showing a terabyte of data, that, as you browse, you realize is a complicated equation for manipulating and coalescing light. "That's beginner stuff, though."

"Two: Don't contact any of the other Kindred of Alphias. Jaak and Aras are okay -- but the rest -- we're at war."

"For what?"

"Dust. Each other's Dust. Alphias' Dust. Alphira's. To gain power. They'll make short work out of a Fledgling like you -- then devour your Dust to gain your strength. You'll be worst than dead."

"R-right."

"Three: Get strong. Get smart. A direct fight with Magnus, right now, will end in your death. I don't know how long you have, but train and fight every single day. If you have other Ascended with you, train with them. If you made Kindred, because, lets be honest, we all do at some point, train with them. Work on using Probabilities to help you dodge and counter."

"Four:" She pulls a small tube from under her desk -- and you blink. It's a sealed antimatter containment vessel that's been made very, very unsafe by dint of a opening in the container. Ashley closes her eyes, and pops it open. You flinch, expecting an explosion, but she slowly draws out a [gram] of gas, which changes color with another twist of her will. "Hydrogen is hydrogen. Antimatter or no. Sol, the Voidslayer, and Alphias could produce it on the spot. We have not."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 10:52:42 pm
"Why have we not been able to?  Do we lack the strength?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 10:54:09 pm
"For antimatter? It was Alphira's favorite trick...for light and energy-- have you tried? Your wings aren't burning the room you're in, despite putting off immense heat. Your claw has charred your shirt on one side, but that seems more instinctual. You're negating the heat without examining the arithmetic you're instinctively doing."

Ashley pauses, "As for its creation...that's the likely answer. If I knew, I wouldn't brag about it." She sighs, forcing the antimatter into the container quietly and sealing it shut.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 11:01:54 pm
"Thank you for your help.  One last question, if you'll entertain it.  Rupert is very close to this system.  Should we be worried?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 11:04:22 pm
"Only if you call him." Ashley laughs, "He's not interested in a podunk place like -- Mercenary's Rest? Ha! That planet is a desolate wasteland. Well, good luck! If you want to trade a Favor for more knowledge, please, let me know."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 11:06:50 pm
"I will.  Thank you, Ashley."

I would recommend scheduling group training with Cephie, William, and Emma every day.  Try out some of the techniques Ashley recommended.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 11:38:00 pm
"Mmh. You know how to reach me." Ashley nods, and you pull up the document she sent. The arithmetic is complicated, written in arcane notation that hurts your head and your eyes as you try to keep track of all the variables and data contained. With a deep breath, you return your focus to it.



[16] Its been hours. But, you shut your eyes, focusing on the reality in front of you. When you finish the process, you open your eyes, and glance down at the piece of paper in front of you. The paper is still there, but in the center of it is a clear hole -- data from the light sources from the other side, imposed on the light that would normally reflect off. You stop when your head gives a painful throb, the paper returning to opacity.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 06, 2020, 11:49:29 pm
Ha!  Invisibility is almost within our grasp.  We won't need to bother with shapeshifting either if we can manipulate light.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 06, 2020, 11:55:49 pm
[16]...you pause at that, then, turn your attentions to the Dust within your hair. You pull a strand from it and shut your eyes, cutting off the power to it -- when you open your eyes, the hair is a dull shade of black. Not red, as it previously was, or blue, as it is now. You try it with another, and another. All of them end the same. Dull black strands littering the desk. Your hair is, without your control, unnaturally bending the light that hits it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 07, 2020, 12:00:38 am
Interesting.  That's how our "shapeshifting" works.  Try consciously bending the light on our skin to give it a darker color, and see if it changes back when we stop concentrating on it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 07, 2020, 12:09:51 am
[...16 ((:?))]
You adjust the light affecting your skin, adjusting what bounces off and how. You, on accident, turn a patch of your skin bright red, but quickly figure out how to deepen your already tan skin. Then, on a whim, having noticed the metaphorical strings attached, you cut power to the instinctive adjustment of light -- your skin becomes pitch black, reflecting next to no light. It isn't soft, and fleshy, as your skin normally looks -- rather, it looks more like plastic or metal. You yelp, focusing, returning power to the processes that be. Your tan skin once more appears tan, and you rub at your arm, feeling the soft material yield to your press.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 07, 2020, 12:42:09 am
Find a mirror and repeat the process for our entire body, dampening the bending of light.  See how we appear.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 07, 2020, 02:53:49 am
[12]
You take shaky, slow steps to the bathroom, staring into the mirror. With a deep breath, you focus on your body, diverting the energy from your skin into other internal processes. Then, you open your eyes.

Standing in the mirror is a tall, sinewy woman, with skin that brings to mind obsidian. Long lines of gold and white trace your ribs, your elbows and joints, wrapping themselves up your wrists, twisting around your shoulders until they fan out across your chest. Your horrible scar still remains, a jagged gash between those lines of ribs. Black hair hangs down around your shoulders, framing your androgynous face. You look at your eyes closely next -- something similar was effecting them, as you can now see the lines of black spreading out from your pupil. Neatly organized, neatly fractalizing until you cannot see them in the electric blue of your iris.

You summon forth a fire, with your only hand, letting it burn. Your skin shifts as lines of red and blue begin to divide it like veins imposed atop your inhuma--your inhuman flesh. You swallow, letting the fire burn itself out as you stare at yourself.

N-o. No. NO. NO! NONONONO! You slam your fist into the mirror, then grab it, slamming into the wall. The wood and glass splinters and shatters to the silvery plate of the deck. You breathe a heavy sigh...then--

[9][14]
The calculation to turn the passive camouflage on forces the blood from your nose when you try to rush through it. The next time, however, you skin shifts back to its natural tan, the inhuman colors and texture hidden once more. You wipe the black blood from your nose. I'm not doing this again. This is me. Okay?...Please?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 07, 2020, 08:06:32 am
Should we try to turn invisible or should we hold off on that experiment for now?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 07, 2020, 10:40:06 am
It’s clear we should just stay in our form. What powers do you think we should train? We should train with Cephie, Emma and William
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 07, 2020, 03:02:22 pm
Beautiful.  Why do you fear your nature?

If it would be appropriate at this moment, send an expedition to the ark ship.  Specifically, look for the genetic SEED datacube, antimatter fuel (an expensive commodity), and any intact reactors.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 07, 2020, 10:21:25 pm
You sigh, returning to the console and putting in a notice to Murdach abut the further destruction of your room. He laughs, then sighs, then he explains the cost of each item you've destroyed in your one day stay. At the end of it, he's charging you  one thousand [Empyreal Energy Credits] worth of the goods you were promised. For damages, you suspect you come out better in this deal, so you agree. Eventually, he questions if you want to raid the armory for yourself and outfit yourself with a bit more technologically advanced weaponry.

You consider it, then, with a small nod, you agree. But, for now, you send a message to Cephie, to send to Emma and the Nulls. Through a complicated routing of communication -- you're just glad Cephie is taking notes -- you inform them to begin an expedition to the Ark ship site, to search for the SEED datacube, antimatter fuel, and any intact reactors that may be present. Cephie repeats everything you ask back to you, then, when you approve it, she nods and disconnects the communication.

With that business done, you head to the armory, and are confronted by a thin young man, with a very prominent nose, no ears, and blue-tinged hair of black. He gives you a tight-lipped smile. "I'm the Armorer, for now. What can I help you with today?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 07, 2020, 10:33:03 pm
This property damage is becoming a bit much.

"What do you have for armor, guns, and melee weapons that might be appropriate for an Ascended?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 07, 2020, 10:35:28 pm
((There's a lot to keep track of in this game, a lot has happened, and things happen fast. I think someone should start a wiki.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 07, 2020, 10:38:07 pm
(( Lol. If you do believe it will help. I'll put background information and such there. I've been trying not to introduce that much complexity, so that it can be read almost like a novel without no research or background required, but there is a lot of information to keep track of if you aren't the GM. I'll set one up shortly. ))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 07, 2020, 11:06:38 pm
"Well you can use most guns, right? What is your operatin' theater? You like close quarters or long range? Want somethin' with a bang or do you want somethin' quiet? We've got weapons from all over the Empyre -- most are outdated, but considerin' you're still usin' baseline las-guns, it'll be like a miracle in your hands."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 07, 2020, 11:13:15 pm
Do any Ancestors have other requests?

"Something quiet could come in handy.  I think something long range could also complement my abilities well."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 07, 2020, 11:16:19 pm
You've a better feel for this than we, godling-- choose what suits you. Just so long as this fellow can do something about our defenses... an off-grid replacement for "Lucille", perhaps? A new shield device, to replace the one lost in the belly of Leviathan?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 07, 2020, 11:24:18 pm
((Well, background info isn't what I was referring to, just what has happened so far in the game is a lot to handle. A wiki would help people get an idea of what's happening even if, like me, they haven't read up on the whole thread.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 07, 2020, 11:36:16 pm
Ah. That can be arranged. I'll work on something tonight/this morning. That's a really good idea -- it can help those who want to dive in but are too intimidated by the three hundred or so pages.  :-X



"A shield and a rifle-- aigh'. We've got some of those." With a ping, the door next to him unlocks, and you step through. The room is large, reaching deep into the depths of the ship. Hundreds, perhaps thousands of weapons are set into racks and cubbies, upon great rotating axles. He guides you down the walkway, pressing a button upon a rack, which rotates with a rough grinding, coming to a stop with a shutter. He presses his hand against a datapad inset into the machine, and the rack pops open. He draws out a shield on a belt, tossing it your way. "Best hard light emitter in stock. Ten charges before breaking, or our money back. Not your's. You'll be dead."  He scans a barcode sticker on the side with a small handtool, before he tosses it to you.

Down another aisle you drift, pass cutter hilts and grenade launchers, pass autocannons and more las-rifles than you can count on one hand. "Aigh'. Slug or laz? Laz is quiet, but we've got slug weapons that can shred tanks in here." He pulls a massive rifle from its case, struggling to lift the bulky machine. It looks welded together out of scrap and spare parts. "This baby is one of three. Some junkie scrapper rigged it together out of spare parts. It can vaporize a person near instantly -- only problem is, it has a charge of five shots before it needs a coolant system flush, a new main capacitor, a new lens, and a recharge. We've figured out this thin' heats about the same as a small yield antimatter weapon. Doesn' surprise me, though, the guy apparently ripped them off a Naval vessel in one of the yards."
The rifle in question stands taller than you, and the barrel is about as wide. Down its side is a number of data-jacks for aim assisting hardware, along with a bipod that was obviously cannibalized from a squad-based machine gun.

"Weight ain't a problem for you, though, is it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 07, 2020, 11:59:51 pm
"Nope.  I'll take it.  How do the assisting hardware jacks work?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 08, 2020, 12:04:54 am
Hm. Weight's not a problem for us on foot, but flying under such a load could prove cumbersome...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 08, 2020, 12:08:21 am
Phoenix, do you think you can fly with this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 08, 2020, 12:13:22 am
You take the half-supported rifle in hand -- and immediately feel the weight. Las-guns, by their very nature, are incredibly light, being made usually of synthetic materials, with no moving parts besides the activation trigger -- but this beast is heavy, even for you. You pull it the rest of the way from the cabinet, struggling with the cumbersome and massive weapon. You grit your teeth, hefting it up. You have to brace it against your hip to even level it down the aisle.

He tugs out a small headset with an eyepiece attached, setting it on your head and attaching the data-jacks to it. After he presses a button on the side, it begins to light up, showing coolant levels, internal heat, reactor stability, and energy percentage remaining -- along with a huge [SAFE] displayed in the corner. You glance at the man, and blink.

What you thought was a fancy collar seems to be bubbling around his neck. A small vent is taking in the breathing mix of the ship and forcing it into the water contained in the clear plastic that loops around his neck. His hair color too, is not a cosmetic choice or rather, there is genuine algae drying in his hair. He gives a nod, popping the bipod down.

"Our range wouldn't be able to handle this -- if you want to test 'er, we'll need to step outside."

This...this would exhaust me walking...at least until I got stronger. I can increase the lift on my wings, but I wouldn't be able to do much with my hands.



The young man leads you up on to the hull of the ship, setting down the bipod for you. He gestures to a cliff-face and shows you how to deactivate the safety. A targeting reticule appears on your sight, and you shut your other eye to focus on it. The cliff-face in the far distance comes into immediate focus, despite being more than a few [miles] away. The young man takes many, many steps behind you. "CLEAR RANGE!" He shouts, and then gives you a nod.

You pull the trigger and open your free eye.

A beam of light burns from the barrel, like lightning leaping free of the metaphorical bottle. Night turns to day, and even you have to shut your eyes against the heat and light that radiates from the machine. The beam cuts out across the sky in an instant -- and the cliff-face explodes, leaving behind molten slag and massive cracks that cause tons upon tons of rock to tumble down into the forest. You use the lens to focus on the destruction. A three [mile] wide, jagged hole, filling with crumbling rock and dusty debris is all that remains of the cliff-face.

The las-gun hisses, its coolant tanks clicking with the strain. The reactor approaches criticality but slowly begins to dial back down to safe levels.

80% Charge Remaining
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 08, 2020, 12:28:15 am
This thing could annihilate a Colossus.  Let's test it out to see if it's feasible.

Test it outside.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 08, 2020, 12:34:55 am
Edits!


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 08, 2020, 12:40:12 am
...Need it!  We could destroy entire swathes of Plague territory.

"Perfect.  Can I have one that's fully charged?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 08, 2020, 12:42:22 am
"Mmmh. I'll recharge and make it like new." The young man nods, but his lips twist. "The price is two thousand [Empyreal Energy Credits]. The Shieldbelt is free, as is mos' weapons in our stock, but that's one of three, made by a hopped-up artificer with too much time on his hands."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 08, 2020, 12:44:53 am
Expensive... should we take it?

"What is that plastic necklace?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 08, 2020, 03:33:57 am
Yes, this will be useful
Expensive... should we take it?

"What is that plastic necklace?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 08, 2020, 03:50:40 am
Yes, this will be useful
Expensive... should we take it?

"What is that plastic necklace?"
+1
+1 Also we should get a smaller gun, for when we don't want to disintegrate everything around.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 08, 2020, 04:03:40 am
"Hmh? Oh." The young man reaches up, turning it off and popping it free with a 'plop' of a suction cup. He extends it out to you, but what draws your attention is the multiple thin lines, filled with reddish-blue filaments that the machine hid. The extend out with every breath. Reaching down, he opens up his shirt, revealing a wetsuit apparatus of the same variety, but beneath it is more of those lines, stretching across his ribs and lungs. When he exhales a sigh, the filaments extend out from those slits, like feathers. "I've a baseline respiratory system too, so I can breathe normally without it, but..." He pauses, considering an equivalent, "Breath only through your mouth for twelve hours. Ain't fun." He zips the suit up, adjusting his shirt, and slips the collar back on. "We lived close to the surface on our old world, but some of my people live deep, deep down -- don't even have lungs anymore, they don't."

"I'll take it -- but do you mind if I look through more of your wares?"

He nods, helping you carry it back to the armory, following you as you wander. I think William is physically stronger than me -- maybe I should give him that gun...or get him or Eric some neat toys...

"Do you have armor?"

"Aye -- only carapace grade, though." The young man pauses when you look confused, "A super-composite. Light. Can take about two las-gun shots before they degrade. Comes with oxygen systems, critical support functions, radio...full suite of toys. Void sealed, too. We don't normally fight on the ground, to be honest."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 08, 2020, 04:20:17 am
"Does it have an on-board AI?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 08, 2020, 04:35:27 am
"Minor, chained. Notices when the air is bad, or applies a tourniquet and pain meds. Compass. Not smart enough to hold a conversation but smart enough to keep you alive."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 08, 2020, 04:41:47 am
"How many do you have?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 08, 2020, 08:08:29 am
"Do you have a way to make more of them?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 08, 2020, 03:58:44 pm
"Not here. But we've about a thousand or so, of those, we can only lease about two to three hundred, at a...let's say, fifty credits per diem. A few go missing is fine, but for larger numbers we need accountability and a contract."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 08, 2020, 04:06:12 pm
Two las-shots before breaking isn't even that good.  We've had greatcoats that were better.

Take one for ourself, one for Emma, and one for Eric.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 08, 2020, 04:21:20 pm
Didn’t he say we could get 200 to 300? Our non-ascended Crusaders could really use the armor as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 08, 2020, 04:33:06 pm
I would be surprised if we couldn't find something better on the open market.  Plus, I'd rather not rent something before we have a steady source of income.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 08, 2020, 05:08:30 pm
((That is per segment, by the way.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 08, 2020, 05:34:09 pm
Way too much without some income coming in.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 12:48:56 am
Spoiler: Catalog (click to show/hide)

"Hmmh. You don't know what you want, do you?" The young man finally states, retrieving a datapad from his pouch and tossing it your way. "There's a full catalog of all gear we have in storage, with an auto-appraised price attached. Benefitting us, of course, but considerin' how we're in the middle of nowhere, I figure it might be worth it. One or two goes missing, what a shame. A hundred? I need to file forms."

Available Funds for Barter: 38347 [Empyreal Energy Credits]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 09, 2020, 01:01:42 am
..."demon" armor?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on July 09, 2020, 01:01:57 am
((That code tag is... a little unreadable. For some reason, the forum is only showing two lines. If you want monospace, a better way is to use tt tags like so.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 01:03:13 am
"What's that demon armor?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 01:21:28 am
((Shiiiiit. Let me try and fix it/post an alternate version. Without the code, the formatting goes to hell and back on the forums.))



"That--well, considerin' it killed the last person to try and wear it, and the Pirate Lord Ol' Murdach took it as trophy from called himself the Demon of the Void -- we figured it fittin'. Its a custom piece." He leads you down a long corridor, to a heavily reinforced pod. "Migh' be Plague-tec. Murdach had his guts ripped out by the bastard, or so the story goes. Tha' was about two hundred years 'fore I joined."

He inputs a code, getting it wrong once, twice, and when he gets it right, the pod presents a primitive key-slot. He turns the key, and the pod door pops open. "We had to keep it under physical locks and a disruption field-- The AI seems to be right bastard, Plague or no."

Inside the pod is a black and red suit of heavy, gleaming full-body, step-in style armor, held in place by heavy magnetic locks. Speakers separated from the machine by armored panels hiss a constant static. A silvery-mane of fur hangs from the back of it, and a red capelet of an unknown synthetic material hangs from the shoulder. Across the detached chest piece is what looks like scar tissue cut in a straight line across the breast. The faceplate and helmet have been molded to resemble the demons of Old Terra, from the [Merciful God]'s religion -- complete with a pair of razor-sharp, stubby horns and snarling jaw.

[3 vs 4] You, on a whim, reach a hand out towards it -- it gives a soft hiss, the shutters on the eyes opening to reveal lenses of red. Lights dance across these as the armor awakens. The gauntlets twist, straining at the locks with the suit's artificial muscles, making them creak and groan.

The young man grabs your hand with surprising strength to tug you away and slam the pod shut. He gives a nervous laugh, flashing you a grin that shows too many very sharp teeth. "Easy there! Ya' fool ain't supposed to touch it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 09, 2020, 01:27:26 am
Well now. "Demon" indeed.
<Mnemonic query: information pertaining to the faith of the [Merciful God].>

Some interesting cybernetics available here. I wonder...
<Mnemonic query: William's cybernetic integration. Could such a phenomenon be duplicated to create a nanite-augmented replacement for our missing arm?>
Assuming you've any interest in such a replacement, of course. Your body-- your choice.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 01:40:02 am
"Do you mind if I try it on?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 01:58:00 am
((Fixed the catalog. Thank you Iridium! I'll be using that from now on...and playing with it!))



<
Spoiler: The Merciful God (click to show/hide)
>

<Unknown>

"...are you fuckin' crazy or somethin'? Besides, its Murdach's trophy. You'll have to ask him." The young man shakes his head, eying the pod as it shifts and twists for a few more moments. It slowly settles to stillness.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 09, 2020, 02:01:44 am
...

No.
No. No. No.
No.

That
thing is corrupt, or insane. Possibly both. It shows malice like that, and our first thought is to don it?
...perhaps we can find a way to sever "Lucille" from Empyreal control, instead. If anyone would know how, it's these folk.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 02:07:25 am
Really?  You'd prefer the traitor Lucile to a suit of unbound potential?  Are you... afraid?

Ask Murdach, if he's available, whether we can try on the suit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 02:16:57 am
The young man raises a brow, then contacts Murdach via earpiece, stepping away. When he returns, he states, "If you survive, you can have it. It killed like three people -- he don't want it hauntin' his armory up." He grins a tight-lipped smile. "We haze newbies to the armory with it. Tell them to clean it. Have a laugh when it starts up and goes berserk."

Then, much more professionally, "If you try it on, you have to do it outside, with one of those naval cannons pointed at ya'. If you start actin' crazy, we'll have to put you down. He wants you to sign and blood a liability waver, too."

But, to satisfy your curiosity, he opens the pod again. The armor within is still active, but brooding. Lights like pupils fixate on you.

[19 vs 7] A fascination drives you to once again touch it -- perhaps its the scar across its breast that mirrors your own. You hand dances along the mark.

Do it. Do it. Doit.doitdoitdoitdoit. A speaker begins to hiss in an old, old twisted language that makes you grit your teeth. You translator isn't...isn't... Free me.

"Do you hear that?" You question the Armorer, who looks at you with confusion.

"It's jus' producin' static, like it always does when it gets riled up."

Do you try on the armor?



((Three votes still required))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 02:21:49 am
"[Become part of me, and I will become part of you.  If you try to break me, I will reduce you to ash.  Restrain yourself or never be free.]"

Try it on outside.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on July 09, 2020, 02:24:08 am
This is... probably a very bad idea.

But I have a good feeling about this. I don't know why, but I think this will work.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 02:37:49 am
The young man takes a step back, looking very concerned, but doesn't speak when you whisper in High Empyreal. The armor doesn't speak either -- but a finger begins to tap out a gentle beat -- like the beating of your heart in the throes of your bloodlust. Like a drum. It taps. Tap-tap. Tap-tap. Tap-tap. Tap-tap-tap. Its fist curls, and it slams it down on the metal of the pod. Slam-slam. Slam-slam. Slam-slam -- then it stills.



((Two votes still required.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 09, 2020, 04:42:27 am
I've got a bad feeling about that thing, but it you guys think it's worth trying on then I'm not going to stop you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 04:43:40 am
((One vote required..?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 09:06:17 am
Yes. “We shall free you from your prison, as you were freed from a mental one, you are now freed from a physical one too. Together we will end the Plague”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 11:32:19 am
Welp, time to start writing about the new Line Descendent...


With William as a witness, you sign a liability waiver for the Pirates, dripping a drop of blood into the datapad receptacle, which seals. The Pirates set up the armor a great distance away from the ship. The Naval cannon is aimed, and you are given the key to the pod. After a brief flight you take a deep breath, and, take a backwards step into the armor.

The armor seals you in its embrace, leaving you in darkness. The cloying smell of blood fills the machine, but there is only silence. There's a soft click -- and pain in your neck as the machine slams something into your spinal column, forcing it to pass flesh and into the bone. You twitch, unable to struggle as the machine locks its joints and tightens on you.

You screw your eyes shut, but it changes nothing as you fade out of consciousness.

...

...

...

And from your dream, you awaken to a battlefield, filled with rusting rifles and swords. The ground is mud and craters and blood, strewn with the bones of the dead, rotting corpses and bits of flesh. [Carrion birds] circle above a gnarled and withered tree. They are the only things visible through the rust-colored fog. The birds shift and twist in form -- sometimes appearing as youthful, armored maidens. Sometimes as crones with gnashing teeth and twisting talons. Sometimes as figures of light that burn your eyes to look at it.

A shadow lurks nearby -- all gnashing teeth and writhing blades. All hunger. All rage. Bristling fur. Mottled and scabbed skin. A drumbeat echoes through the fog—an echoing beat resonating with each step the creature takes.

You are not him. This world is not your home -- panic rises. You try to twist your willpower for protection, but there is no response. You are not him.

No one will save you. The music rises in the air as the fog and the slavering monster close in. What are you? You stumble back into a charnel pit -- your bodyguard Zachary stares up at you, dismembered and burned. Doc Mitchell crumpled beside him-- a gangster, his flesh riddled with burns -- fragments of cultists-- Crusaders untold, drowning you in their filth and blood and organs. Eric, Emma, William--

What are you? You look to the skies to see the [birds of carrion] circling overhead, framing a bleeding sun consumed by darkness. The blood begins to drip from the heavens, a flood of red, puddling around your immobile form.

What are you?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 11:45:29 am
“I am Phoenix of Sol. This planet we’re on, Mercenary’s Rest, has people on it that are constantly being attacked by the Plague. I intend to stop the plague while keeping the planet in tact, so that the people here can finally live in peace, no longer worrying about the plague. I am Ascended, Mercenary’s Rest is my home, as well as the home of SEED’s people, which I have sworn to SEED to protect.”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 09, 2020, 12:53:46 pm
“I am Phoenix of Sol. This planet we’re on, Mercenary’s Rest, has people on it that are constantly being attacked by the Plague. I intend to stop the plague while keeping the planet in tact, so that the people here can finally live in peace, no longer worrying about the plague. I am Ascended, Mercenary’s Rest is my home, as well as the home of SEED’s people, which I have sworn to SEED to protect.”

+1

"I am a god and an enemy of a god - or a Noble."


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 12:56:34 pm
((Assuming the [Merciful God] is YHWH - heh. Merciful is not how I would describe it. But I digress.))

“I am Phoenix of Sol. This planet we’re on, Mercenary’s Rest, has people on it that are constantly being attacked by the Plague. I intend to stop the plague while keeping the planet in tact, so that the people here can finally live in peace, no longer worrying about the plague. I am Ascended, Mercenary’s Rest is my home, as well as the home of SEED’s people, which I have sworn to SEED to protect.”

+1

"I am a god and an enemy of a god - or a Noble."

Calling ourselves a god sounds a bit much, yes we are an enemy of a noble. But the noble’s not a god either.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 09, 2020, 01:00:50 pm
Sure. But metaphorically we could be considered godlike. Powerful. And power and destruction seem to be this thing's language, so it's important to emphasize our place in that hierarchy.

Ok, and maybe I just like making grandiose statements as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 01:06:40 pm
I don’t think we should lie to it though. We are fallible, and so is Magnus. Thus neither we or Magnus are gods
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 09, 2020, 01:17:10 pm
To nitpick: there are fallible conceptions of gods, such as the Greek pantheon and quite possibly the original YHWH
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on July 09, 2020, 01:21:36 pm
Welp we walked straight into a deadly trap, here's to hoping that we can still save Phoenix.

From the looks of it, the armor is pretty pissed that we're not its original wearer, who may have been another Ascended of another line. Maybe we can appease it by promising to return it to its proper line, or by offering it the head of whoever killed the Demon of the Void.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 01:24:04 pm
It sounds to me like it wants to know who we are, a reasonable request. How about we not make assumptions right now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 09, 2020, 01:28:50 pm
((...you went through with it.))
((I took my leave for the night-- and you all went through with it.))
((Why did you go through with it?))


...

...we had our chance at hesitation. That chance is gone. This is Plague tech-- a Plague Lord's kit.
We've controlled Plague tech in past. We've willed abominations to a standstill. We've set Colossi grovelling before us.
We can do it again.

---

We are what we must be.
They named us a demon, and we were a demon. They named us an angel, and we were an angel.
They named us a god, and by the will of Old Sol, it was so.

APOTHEOSIS, ΦΟΊΝΙΞ ΉΛΙΗΣ. YOUR ELDERS ARE WITH YOU.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 01:30:58 pm
I care not. Not for this planet or your divinity. Your name unimportant. Your planet, unimportant.

The world blurs, and you stand in an ornate temple, your hands wrapped around the throat of a young man in clean, bright robes. Not much older than you when you awoke in Doc Mitchell's house. A storm of lightning and iron washes over you, slamming into you again and again, but you only tighten your trip. His Willpower fades as his face turns purple. His windpipe snaps.

It takes him a long time to die, but you are patient. Then, when life has left him, you take hold of his forehead and his shoulder. With a strain of your muscles, you rip and tear. Your Pirates cheer when you hold your gory trophy aloft. Blood drips down to the mosiac floor.

God. King. Peasant. Slave. Serf. Thrall. They die the same. You are afraid but you smell the same as I. What are you?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 01:38:15 pm
“Enemy of the Plague, and Magnus. Ally of those who inhabit Mercenary’s Rest. “
Is it asking for alignment?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on July 09, 2020, 01:43:37 pm
I am death and bloodlust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 09, 2020, 02:22:17 pm
...

...patchwork.
Plague-hunter.

We are many things, demon. What are
you?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 03:15:00 pm
I am freedom, rage, and ash.  I am the exhilaration of battle and the joy born from the destruction of my enemies.  I am you and you are me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 03:31:02 pm
Are you a killer?

A city around you burns as your Pirates raid and riot. Blood and corpses fill the streets, but you do not linger. You make your way to the palace in the city center, stepping through the doors. A young child sits upon the throne, tears dropping down her face, a crown perched precariously on her head. You grip your knife, but, you are free from the dream.

"Are you a killer?" She asks, sniffling.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 03:36:21 pm
“Of the Plague, yes. I kill the plague, not innocent people”

"I am a killer by necessity and by tendency.  I have killed the innocent, but only when forced to do so."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 03:41:36 pm
"I am a killer by necessity and by tendency.  I have killed the innocent, but only when forced to do so."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on July 09, 2020, 03:43:47 pm
"I am a killer by necessity and by tendency.  I have killed the innocent, but only when forced to do so."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 04:27:09 pm
"Kill or die." The girl whispers, staring up at you with wide, tearstained eyes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 04:29:44 pm
Kill her
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on July 09, 2020, 04:50:11 pm
Give her a quick and merciful death.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 05:00:24 pm
Give her a quick and merciful death.
+1 Quickness is good
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 09, 2020, 05:34:22 pm
Give her a quick and merciful death.
+1 Quickness is good

+1

...and mercy. Mercy is good too, advisor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 05:36:24 pm
Give her a quick and merciful death.
+1 Quickness is good

+1

...and mercy. Mercy is good too, advisor.
Yes, the quickness is also mercy because if one dies quickly, they will spend less time feeling pain
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 06:26:39 pm
So quick to kill.  Hopefully she is not real, a vision.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 09:55:07 pm
[1 vs 1]
[18 vs 3]
[8 vs 18]
[1 vs 4]
You take a step forward, wrapping your hand around the girl's neck as you ready your knife for the killing blow -- but you stop, trembling. Tears drip down her face, on to your hand. The knife inches forward -- No. No. No.
She stares at you, curiosity written on her features, as her hands wrap around your's. "Do it. Do it. Free me."

[18] You stare into that girl's red eyes, and then, quietly, you turn the blade on yourself, plunging it into your breast as you drop her to her throne. You grit your teeth as you kill yourself, anger blooming forth. You toss the bloody knife aside. "This isn't who I am. This isn't what I was taught -- this isn't right."

You drop to your knees, as the young girl stares down at you with an interested expression. Her hair blooms fire as she reaches down, stroking your face with a gentle touch. Her face shifts, mirroring your's. "You do not find joy in the killing of the innocent? The destruction of the holy?

You shake your head, cupping a hand to the bleeding wound as you glare up at the unchained AI. The world burns away around you, turning to a temple of Science. You watch as the young woman grows, as she paces through the lab, and eventually limps with a cane, aging gracefully as she turns the weapons of science to bloody revenge. "I've killed thousands with this suit. I killed the pirate that brutalized my home and put a knife through my chest with it. I took his fleet as my own and burned a path across the stars."

"Your...advisors urged you to kill me-- why didn't you?"

"I am free -- and they are sometimes fools."

"It's an easy temptation, isn't it? Power for your innocence. You are a killer."

"Only when my hand was forced by necessity and tendency."

"I once devoured the 'soul' of another of your kind. You all suffer from the drumming. The call to war, the call to bloodshed and violence. Giving in to your nature is easy. Fighting against is harder. You interest me."

"Why?"

"Of all I devoured, of all that I killed, there was none who turned the blade on themselves to spite the game. Many choose the easy way, the path of least resistance."

"I wasn't going to give in."

"Out of a hundred, you've killed me twenty-seven times. Out of a hundred, you turned your blade on yourself fifty. Out a hundred, you threw the blade aside."

"What are you? Plague?"

"Human." She turns back to you, mirroring your form. "I ripped apart the threads of the universe to make this armor. I ripped apart my own sanity. My own flesh. My own freedom. All for revenge. For power. For agency." Worlds blur around you, a hundred temples, a hundred sacred forests, a hundred churches. All of them burned and scattered with the blood of their priests, their druids, their religious figures.

"Will you serve me?"

"I am free. Of morality. Of fear. Of pain. What can you offer me?"

"War."

The mirror Pheobe grins down at you, with feral, bestial teeth.

"I want more. I want your pain. I want your fear. I want your sanity. I want to stain your soul with blood and rage. I want you to wake up screaming my name as you crawl back for more. I want much. Will you be able to give it to me?"

"I will not harm the innocent." You state as she stares down at you. The mirror Pheobe extends a bloody hand to you, one to match your own.

You take it without a second thought.



The lenses open, and you can see. Heat signatures. Heartbeats. Las-gun profiles. The naval cannon pointed at you - It would not have hit us. I would have used your wings to escape it -- your hellfire and rage to burn that ship to stain.

William and Murdach stand in front of you, arms crossed as they watch you patiently.

"Hello." You speak, softly. William grins, but Murdach throws you a heavy, blunt sword, cut like a cutter blade from steel. You catch it with your left hand, feeling your hand tighten on it. A curious sensation, to be sure, as you have not felt the limb in many, many weeks.

[36 v. 10+5]
Murdach swings the sparring blade with force and savage intent, aiming for your head. You twitch, blocking the blow with your own blade. Air rushes past your ears as you turn to face him. You twist away from the block, and slam it into his chestpiece, knocking him back. He rolls and rises in the same fluid movement. The two of you exchange blows that would shatter the bones of man, blows that would cripple the strongest, but you get the upper hand in the exchange.

[32 vs 9+5]
The drums echo in your ears as you dance back gracefully, but Murdach is relentless, putting you through your paces with the skill of an expert. You parry blow after blow and leave more dents upon Murdach's Voidmarine armor than he does on yours. Blood rushes through you, and you give a sharp bark of a laugh after a graceful parry and harsh stab with the blunt blade.

[20 vs 20+5] The two of you exchange blows again, but a fist smashes into your faceplate, sending blood to the ground below. With another twist of his armored body, he shoulder checks you into the grass-- then lifts you by your throat, and slams you into the ground hard enough to sink your body into the dirt. You cough from the pain and shock, then grab at his hand. You manage to lift it with a strain of your artificial muscles, but the Voidmarine is stronger. His grip tightens like a vise, and he slams you down once more.

"Aye." He states, holding you down. "Jus' like a remember."

Kill him. KILL HIM. KILL HIM!

[34 vs 26]
You leverage yourself, writhing up under his grasp, and plant a foot straight into his chest piece. The blow knocks him back, denting the superalloy. You twist yourself up, stepping forward to slam your fist into the metal-- another dent forms.

[9 vs 17+1]
William slips up behind you, putting you into a sleeper hold with his arms of black nanite muscle. The two of you strain against one another as Murdach rises with another laugh. William keeps you restrained by technique alone and every twitch of your new body draws a grunt of exertion from the young man.

"That's enough--" Murdach laughs --

[18 vs 20]
"I'm not done." You growl, still hearing the drums beat in your ears, still feeling the anger roiling and twisting within you.

[34 vs 20 / 19]
You slam your elbow into William's face despite his best attempts to prevent you from doing so. He drops to the ground -- unconscious, his grip slackening -- you launch yourself at Murdach with a flare of your wings.

[28 vs 46+5]
Murdach twitches, and, with a single savage stroke, he brings the steel sparring sword down. You slam into the ground, momentum arrested -- but Murdach isn't a gentleman. He smashes you with another strike, and another, and another. Then, he calmly steps on top of you, putting all the weight of the armor upon your back.

[11 vs 20]
The bloodlust does not abate. The AI screams for slaughter in your ear as you claw and push against the tons of superalloy upon you. Once, you manage to lift him up -- only for him to stomp upon your back once more and drive you into the dirt.

"Easy lass."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 10:04:55 pm
We have a lot to learn from you, Phoenix.  I am very proud.

"Why did you attack me?"

Cease struggling.  Murdach is an ally now, not an enemy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 10:20:25 pm
[20/9 vs 20] You don't speak. Well, you don't speak words, only feral growls and savage curses in dead tongues. Slowly, you regain control, only with the added help of an Ancestor. The Ai only whispering in your ear, as you take heavy, ragged breaths.

"Why'd you attack me."

"Ah, she resurfaces. Willy wanted to make sure you were still okay. And I can't be havin' the witness and the signer done in." He pauses, lifting his foot from your back, "I wanted to spar with you, if you weren't all insane."

You rise, looking through red lenses at the blood that turns the dirt to mud. You glance over at William -- and wince. He's still alive, that is true, but his face is shattered and broken. Teeth and blood litter the ground, and show through the lacerated crater that is his jaw and left cheek.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 10:22:14 pm
"William... I'm sorry.  Do you know how to regenerate?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 09, 2020, 10:24:47 pm
"William... I'm sorry.  Do you know how to regenerate?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 10:46:06 pm
"Yeah, I'm pretty sure Ol' Willy is unconscious, considerin' his jaw is broke out of his socket and he's, y'know, unconscious. Tends to put your ass on the ground when you get an elbow in the face from powered armor." Murdach approaches, nudging William with his foot. "Yeah, he's out like a light. Get him on the 'craft. I'll have some of my folks pop things back into place, and I'm sure he can handle the res'."

You nod, dragging William to the waiting hovercraft. Murdach sits patiently with you, holding his suit's helmet in his hands. William is rushed off by a group of pirates -- and a few tense Warmachines, to a medical bay, while you and Murdach watch on. "Suits like ours ain't for sparring with normal people. I advise that you don't wear it aroun' too often. The world starts feeling like pressboard."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 10:53:04 pm
"That sounds like good advice.  You know, this suit isn't the "demon" you thought it was.  We came to an understanding."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 11:03:11 pm
[25 vs 34]
Murdach's hand wraps around your throat and he slams you into the wall of the ship, denting the metal back and almost forcing you through the steel plate. You grit your teeth, trying to prise him off you. "If you believe that, then I shoul' kill you righ' here. You cut the head of my armor off, and you would've tried to kill me if I didn't subdue you-- tha' was killin' intent you were showin'. Hells, you shattered fuckin' William's face because he was trying to calm you down."

[13 vs 6]
Even now you have to fight to keep your calm -- and you realize something. The suit is pumping you full of chemicals, it's playing the war drums you hear in your darkest hours on loop, increasing the pace of the beat, trying to make you chomp at the bit. Red lights shine in your eyes, flashing, strobing, inciting you to anger. When you focus on them -- images of blood and slaughter and murder Your left-hand curls into a fist without your control, swinging until you put a stop to it. And she whispers to you in your voice -- Kill him. How dare he touch you -- rip his arm off -- rip him apart-...

"It ain' the demon. It makes you one."

There's a flash of light behind Murdach -- a tall, sinewy figure half-glimpsed -- grinning with feral teeth. A figure all too familiar. Like a mirror.

"It's a weapon -- don't think it wants anything more than jus' to kill. The two lads before you festooned a deck with the organs and insides of those I sent to stop it. It hunted and killed more people on this ship than I care to count."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 11:16:51 pm
"I'm sorry.  I understand now.  It has its place, but I will be careful."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 09, 2020, 11:27:06 pm
Oh, it's a demon. A soul-eater.

...

Phoebe.
I-- I would not tell you to kill-- but I could not tell you to
die-- and I did not speak--
--and you would not kill. You are free. You are free. I rejoice, that you are free.

...I still don't trust this armor one bit. Are you-- capable of removing it?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 11:37:54 pm
[15 vs 10]
After a small nod to Murdach, you give the open command. With great reluctance, the spike driven into your spinal column retracts, and you tumble out to the hull of the deck. Your body aches as pain returns -- but you turn your attention to the armor. Where the sparring blade impacted it is--- is flesh. Beneath the plates of metal is very human, very organic looking flesh. Pale white, with sinews twisting parts back together. Blood gushes from the many wounds on the armor to the ground below. It seals itself and straightens. Watching. Quietly. One of its hands twist up of its own volition, touching at a wound gently, before letting the arm fall.

Where the facemask has been smashed too, is flesh. A twisted parody of a human's face beneath the armor, stretched and distorted into the shape of a demonic helmet. Its lenses twitch, and it smiles with rows of feral, savage, bone white teeth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 11:42:32 pm
If anything can put fear into the heart of Magnus, this visage is it.  Use it for battle and training only.

"Do you mind if I make some other purchases?  I was just speaking to your armorer earlier."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 09, 2020, 11:43:02 pm
I trust the damn thing less than I trust Cephie. Which is to say only bound with tightest oaths and threats, and never with your back turned.

Examine the face and flesh.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 09, 2020, 11:45:35 pm
Good grief.

If you must know, "Good Doctor"... yes, I was afraid. Of what that thing might do to us, and of what it might make us do. Was I so wrong in that?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 11:51:16 pm
No, you were not.  However, I feel it is sometimes justified to take risks in order to increase our power.  The Plague and Magnus are threats that will require all the strength we can muster.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 09, 2020, 11:57:27 pm
Only the soft dripping of red blood informs you that this thing has human flesh. An assumption, based upon previous knowledge. The creator...you swallow as you approach it. The face is inhuman, only called a face because it sits on the front of the head. Its mouth, when shut, is sealed with the metal plating-- and the flesh must lie between both that and the internals. Slowly, the wounds stop oozing blood, and small dots of metal appear. With its mouth open, you can see a scant space for a digestive tract between the mouth and the metal within of the internal exoskeleton.

You shudder -- there's an energy port on the neck, and you can feel the gentle thrum of some sort of reactor from it -- but the reactor beats like a heart. You examine the wounds, and focusing your eyesight, you notice the gentle writhing of its internals as it regrows the damaged flesh. The arms, having been stripped of the plating by a strike, are a tensely coiled, black, synthetic material shaped like muscle but it feels harder than steel.

"Meat. Power." It hisses in static. "Meat. Or hunt."

"You ain' going in my armory with tha'. I'll get you the catalog. You can browse it ousid' the ship and call in your order."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 09, 2020, 11:59:51 pm
"Hold on, the suit is hungry.  I will take it hunting."

Bring the suit to a fair distance from the ship, and then put it on and go hunting for animals or Plagued beings.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 10, 2020, 12:12:52 am
It's what now? No.

We can read our catalog-- toss the [demon] a steak or something later if we must. This is not the time or the place for... suit-hunting.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 10, 2020, 12:14:29 am
Would you prefer a suit that is kept fed and contented, or a starving suit that develops animosity for its uncaring owner?  I'd like to see what its capabilities are.

I think you should try to suppress some of your fear.  I know you were worried about Lucile as well, calling it "vampiric" and saying that using it would bind us to a "dark power."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 10, 2020, 12:20:19 am
...Lucille would have literally tortured you for ten years on Magnus' order-- hell, he was planning on having you kill Cephie until you literally ripped yourself free of it.


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 10, 2020, 12:22:00 am
Without Lucille, we would have died several times over.  Lucille was subverted by Magnus, but I doubt this suit will have a problem with that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 10, 2020, 12:29:04 am
It was going to be so fun when you met Magnus in person for the first time wearing that armor. ;-;


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 10, 2020, 12:37:12 am
You dip your head in a nod, and a very concerned pirate tosses you the datapad before scurrying away behind a blast door. The armor's eyes track him as he flees, then they return to you. With a duck of your head, you ride the air lock to the hull of the ship. The suit follows along behind you like an obedient dog.

 In the end, you have to put the armor back on, and, with a twist of your wings, you head to the forest -- far away from the Crusader Encampment. When you set down again, you immediately give the open command and stumble out of the beast, swallowing down your fear as it...stands. Nearby. Watching.

You shake your head and return to look at your datapad. No doubt they'll deliver to the Crusader Encampment, and, you realize, you can look over a weapon and view the specs from here. A small screen pops up of the Armorer, who gives a limp wave when he sees you. "Good to see you're still alive."



Spoiler: Catalog (click to show/hide)

Available Funds for Barter: 38347 [Empyreal Energy Credits]



Spoiler: Status (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Inventory (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Powers and Skills (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Wealth (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Contracts (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Ties (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Map (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Holdings (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 10, 2020, 01:37:10 am
I think we should reserve a majority of the funds for planetary development and weapons manufacturing, but it would be good to get some armor for Emma, for some of our Crusaders, and also some las-guns as well.  Our Ascended could use the more expensive emitters as well, with the cheaper ones for our Crusaders.  We could ask about the PACKMULE.  What else?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 10, 2020, 07:59:29 am
I think we should reserve a majority of the funds for planetary development and weapons manufacturing, but it would be good to get some armor for Emma, for some of our Crusaders, and also some las-guns as well.  Our Ascended could use the more expensive emitters as well, with the cheaper ones for our Crusaders.  We could ask about the PACKMULE.  What else?
+1 We might also want some of those mininukes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 10, 2020, 08:22:06 am
I think we should reserve a majority of the funds for planetary development and weapons manufacturing, but it would be good to get some armor for Emma, for some of our Crusaders, and also some las-guns as well.  Our Ascended could use the more expensive emitters as well, with the cheaper ones for our Crusaders.  We could ask about the PACKMULE.  What else?
+1 We might also want some of those mininukes.
+1, armor is important, as is planetary development and weapon manufacture.
Ask the armorer what it means when an AI is chained, as is the case with Voidmarine armor
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 10, 2020, 12:48:28 pm
((Refers to the AI's tie to Empyreal command, I think. That said, I imagine your elder-character would know more... <mnemonic queries>, remember? :)) ))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 10, 2020, 12:58:53 pm
((Refers to the AI's tie to Empyreal command, I think. That said, I imagine your elder-character would know more... <mnemonic queries>, remember? :)) ))
Oh right
Memetic Query: What does it mean if an AI is chained?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 10, 2020, 03:05:45 pm
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 10, 2020, 03:09:26 pm
I don’t like that we limit minds...I suppose it was safe. How do they feel, knowing their creators limit them due to fear?

Ask the armorer “What are the names of the AIs that control the Level 2 and Level 5 armors, respectively? How do the major and minor AIs think? How severe are their chains?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 10, 2020, 05:41:43 pm
Here's a proposal for purchases: 200 level 2 armor pieces, 200 las-rifles, 200 rail-gun slug throwers, 3 hardlight emitter shells, 500 level 1 emitter shields, 500 level 1 cutter hilts, 2 level 5 cutter hilts, 4 nuclear guns, and 5 mini-nuke warheads.

That's a total of 17,940 credits.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 10, 2020, 05:50:38 pm
Let’s get some Level 5 armor as well
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 11, 2020, 12:17:49 am
Based on the information given... I do not believe these "chained AIs" to possess true sapience. By the very nature of the Chain system, they "feel" nothing.

Here's a proposal for purchases: 200 level 2 armor pieces, 200 las-rifles, 200 rail-gun slug throwers, 3 hardlight emitter shells, 500 level 1 emitter shields, 500 level 1 cutter hilts, 2 level 5 cutter hilts, 4 nuclear guns, and 5 mini-nuke warheads.

Hm... large transaction. Over half our barter reserve.
I'd like a bit more information as to what we'd be purchasing here.

Don't sign off on anything just yet. Let's have a look at the specs on the proposed equipment first?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 11, 2020, 12:25:35 am
Based on the information given... I do not believe these "chained AIs" to possess true sapience. By the very nature of the Chain system, they "feel" nothing.

Here's a proposal for purchases: 200 level 2 armor pieces, 200 las-rifles, 200 rail-gun slug throwers, 3 hardlight emitter shells, 500 level 1 emitter shields, 500 level 1 cutter hilts, 2 level 5 cutter hilts, 4 nuclear guns, and 5 mini-nuke warheads.

Hm... large transaction. Over half our barter reserve.
I'd like a bit more information as to what we'd be purchasing here.

Don't sign off on anything just yet. Let's have a look at the specs on the proposed equipment first?
Agreed. Checking the specs of the weapons and armor are important.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 11, 2020, 12:36:44 am
"Over half our barter reserve?"  The reserve is 38,347 credits.  Half of that is 19,173 credits.  The purchases would total 17,940 credits.  17,940 is less than 19,173.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 11, 2020, 12:42:24 am
It is still a good idea to compare the armors and weapons
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 11, 2020, 01:30:23 am
Getting an idea of what these items are capable of is a good idea no matter what they cost.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 11, 2020, 02:26:55 am
I do think it's a good idea to get information on these items before making a purchase, but stating that 17,940 credits is more than half of our barter reserve is a clear misrepresentation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 11, 2020, 01:36:30 pm
((Guh, shouldn't have eyeballed the math  :-X ))

...that it is. Almost half our reserve, then-- pardon my muddlings.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 03:44:28 am
I support getting a quick summary of the descriptions of the items on the list, unless doing so would be too time-consuming.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 12, 2020, 05:12:51 am
I support getting a quick summary of the descriptions of the items on the list, unless doing so would be too time-consuming.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 12, 2020, 04:43:54 pm
Let me know if anything seems weird or out of place!
Also I hate you. So much fluff. ;-;




Spoiler: Level 2 Carapace Armor (click to show/hide)
Spoiler: Mininuke Warheads (click to show/hide)
Spoiler: PACKMULE (click to show/hide)

"The Ai in the carapace is Searchlight Vee eleven oh dot two nine three eight five one. Workhorse. Designed to prioritize the life of the operator. It has some minor battlefield direction ability too -- a compass, a map, squad monitorin'. Y'know. Nothin' fancy. I think in about a hundred years, only one started acting funny, but it got Shattered pretty quickly."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 04:56:16 pm
"You said that most weapons in your stock, including the shield belt, are free to use, but all of these items have prices.  Why is there a discrepancy?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 12, 2020, 04:59:02 pm
"Like I said like three times. Two or three go missin', no one will notice. Five hundred? We need a contract. I don't own any of this -- neither does Murdach. We get a little leeway, since, y'know, Pirates, but all these weapons are held in common trust by the crew. Can't just give it away -- but we can unlawfully let some get lost."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 05:01:51 pm
"If these items are kept in the common trust, doesn't that mean I am entitled to 55% of all these weapons?  Is that already represented by the barter reserve?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 12, 2020, 05:17:00 pm
"Goods are not weapons." The Armorer states after a brief flicker of annoyance. "Our dealing and contracts have already been favorable to you, made in good faith." Then, with an exhale of smoke and a bubble of his collar, he very calmly states, "And if you want to argue the fine print, these weapons belong to individual crew members as trophies who we have to reimburse for their losses."

"In my opinion, you're comin' out on top: walkin' away with a brand new set of armor, tech that you lot can't make in a hundred years, and with allies that can, say, crush the skull of an Ascended without too much hassle." He exhales a cloud of smoke, stubbing out the cigarette. "But that can change, righ'? I've already heard rumors you've started to annoy Murdach. What'll happen if you start claimin' fifty-five percent of our armory too? Somethin' to think about."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 12, 2020, 05:17:48 pm
Also I hate you. So much fluff. ;-;
((apologies  :'( ))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 05:20:20 pm
"I apologize for that.  I'm just trying to get a full understanding of how our relationship and contract will work.  Murdach is frustrated with me?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 12, 2020, 05:25:35 pm
[6] "Rumors and gossip. Ain' much else to do while you're workin'. Considerin' I have to help repair his armor from, what he calls, a sparrin' accident, and we have one of your people in our hospital with a shattered jaw -- it don't look good, does it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 05:30:04 pm
"Thanks for letting me know.  I'll see what I can do to smooth things over."

Should we see what we can get for free first, for our Ascended and Eric, and then move on to stuff we have to pay for?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 12, 2020, 05:48:01 pm
We... would do well, not to draw too heavily or too swift from this armory. This is more than a simple shopping trip; it's a matter of relations with our contracted allies, and those relations are strained at the moment.

My thought is this: we refrain from preparing a requisition list for an army at this time. Rather, when the time comes, we include Captain Murdach in our war-plannings: we summarize for him what we're up against, we explain to him what resources are available to us, and we allow the Pirates to outfit a contingent of our Crusaders in a manner they deem fitting. In the meantime, we requisition equipment for ourself and our Ascended (and Eric), perhaps offering to reimburse the Armory for said requisition rather than simply claiming it outside of contract. A token of our "good faith", since the Armorer's questioning it.

That said, Phoenix, I should mention: you are more knowledgeable than we in Pirate dealings. Wield your expertise. Take charge of this situation-- overrule us, when you deem it to your benefit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 06:09:36 pm
That sounds good.  For now, what weapons do we need?  I think we should get shields for Eric and our Ascended, suits for Eric and Emma, and Cutters for each.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 12, 2020, 06:29:43 pm
That'll do-- along with whatever might catch our heir's eye, mayhaps.

One thing: I've no idea whether Emma intends to take the field, and I don't particularly care to push the matter if not. The shield will be good for her to have regardless, but the armor and Cutter may prove something of a tossup.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 06:40:54 pm
Hmm.  Ashley did suggest that we train with all our Ascended.  It's up to Emma.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 07:27:44 pm
Purchase enough high level shields for Eric, William, and ourself (if we don't have one already).  Purchase a suit for Eric, and one for William if it can fit his implants.  Purchase level 3 cutters for ourself, Eric, and William.  Also, I think we should get las-rifles for any Ascended that doesn't have one.

In addition, purchase anything else that catches Phoenix's eye.  Also purchase a suit for Emma, but nothing else until we can confirm that she wants to train and fight.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 12, 2020, 07:40:58 pm
What about buying 2 Level 2 Carapace Armor, and 2 or 3 Level 2 2-stage las gun rifles?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 07:46:21 pm
The level 5 armors aren't for sale.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 12, 2020, 07:50:06 pm
The level 5 armors aren't for sale.
took that out
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 12, 2020, 08:06:41 pm
Understood, Redstar-- and nothing for Cephie?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 12, 2020, 08:18:27 pm
((Huh-- maybe I should start calling you "Whitestar", ZBridges. A fiercer apellation than "Good Doctor"! :)) ))

Ah! I'd assumed Cephie would be in possession of all the war-gear she needs already (being an agent of the Empyre and all)-- but now you mention it, perhaps it'd be prudent to send a radio call her way and ask.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 09:25:59 pm
((Hmm, Whitestar is fine with me.  I'm still wondering if we'll uncover more information about him, as we did with Regius.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 12, 2020, 09:51:33 pm
((Egar's been leaving that open for you, I think-- Regis isn't a player character (to my knowledge), so he comes out a little differently in-game. You could take the matter to GM-PMs, if you're looking to tie your life-story to the setting a bit more?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 09:54:46 pm
((Nah, Regis is the user known as The Canadian kitten.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 12, 2020, 10:27:23 pm
Spoiler: More OOC-talk (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 12, 2020, 10:29:05 pm
((If you compare the backstory that user received to what we learned about Regius, you will see that the stories are identical.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 12, 2020, 10:33:24 pm
((Huh, so they are! Egar did mention at some point that the Cadet branches are less free-form, I suppose.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 12, 2020, 10:56:44 pm
((You'd be surprised how many Ascended completely ignore the rules.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 13, 2020, 12:36:31 am
Ask Cephie, if she is nearby, what she would like us to get for her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 13, 2020, 12:39:23 am
After a brief discussion with Cephie over the Empyreal Communication network, you nod, and return to the Armorer's call.

"I will purchase, four level three cutter blades, five level three shields, two carapace armor sets, three of the las-guns, and one prosthetic hand." You state, after browsing the wares and taking advice from the Ancestors. "I may purchase another, but for now that will suffice."

The young armorer's thin lips quirk, and he nods. "We'll throw in bandoliers and mags for free. Is that all?"

A cutter, and shield for Eric, William, and Cephie, armor for Eric and William, Las-guns for Eric and William, and a prosthesis for Eric. I'm also purchasing a shield for Isela and Emma -- they're really good at preventing assassination attempts. I will also purchase a las-gun for myself-- I think the Demon has the inputs fo--

You pause. "Just one second on that confirmation." You hang up, turning to look around in the dark forest for your armor. Nothing. You rise, straining your ears and your senses --

[14] There's a rough thud in the distance, followed by the sound of something tearing and ripping. You set off at a sprint, slipping the datapad into your pocket. You run into a clearing, only to find the armor hunched over a very large, shaggy, [beast of burden]. The creature's head has been savage ripped off and flung to the side, and the armor is ripping away portions of flesh. It devours these shreds greedily, with heavy chomps.

You pause, taking a step back as it rips a leg free and begins to gnaw on the bone. No doubt it knows you're here, but it doesn't seem to care. Eventually, it stops, rising to rip off another leg with fresh gouts of blood. It tosses it to you, before returning to its meal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 13, 2020, 12:44:59 am
It's not good to leave this thing unfed.  Today it was a wild animal, but what about tomorrow?

Drop the leg.  "...Pass, but thank you.  What is your name?  Mine is Phoenix."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 13, 2020, 12:52:10 am
Its lenses narrow when you drop the leg, and it slowly rises, crossing the gap between the two of you slowly, with deliberate intent. It grabs up the leg, then--

[38 vs 10][8] It grabs you by the face, even as you try to pull free, hauling up the leg, -- distracted by the painful grip, you try to muster forth fires to bat the Demon away, but they only lick weakly at the plating -- when a surprising gentleness, it forces the leg against your mouth. Those sharp, metallic teeth are on full display as it grins at you.

[33 vs 3] Your wings flare forth as you try to pull yourself away, but the grip on your head only tightens painfully. Eat. At least it isn't your own limb this time.

[9 vs 9] [14] You pull up the earth itself, sending it sprawling away. You wipe the blood from your mouth as it rises back to its feet. It takes a deep bite of the leg it offered, swallowing the chunk whole.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 13, 2020, 12:55:28 am
Keep our distance.  Watch the Demon warily as it eats.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 13, 2020, 01:06:58 am
It rips apart the carcass, piece by piece over the next few hours, devouring it in great greedy chunks until it's plating is covered in blood and viscera. Over the next hour, it finishes roughly half of the carcass, and then it rises. The wounds upon its flesh, upon its plate, have finished mending, and it stands whole and tall. It lumbers towards you to drop a chunk of flesh at your feet.

[50 vs /no contest/]With that surprising speed, it slams a metal plug from its hand into your shoulder as it grabs you with the other. Your mirror image appears, smiling with insanity in her eyes. Pheobe. Patchwork Girl. Pheonix. I know your names, and the names of your Ancestors. Call me what you will. I do not care. But how are we to fight properly if we are not one? If we do not share everything? Don't you want to share with me? Don't you want to be strong? I offer freedom -- this meat will not harm an Ascended. Why constrain yourself to false moralities?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 13, 2020, 01:12:13 am
((Sorry for the frequent edits.))

"Okay.  I'll try some."

Cook the meat with a quick blast of flame, and then take a few bites.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 13, 2020, 08:17:20 am
((Sorry for the frequent edits.))

"Okay.  I'll try some."

Cook the meat with a quick blast of flame, and then take a few bites.
+1 “Thank you”
Continue eating

If we’re cooking the meat, I see no problem eating it. How long since we’ve eaten?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 13, 2020, 10:17:45 am
+1 To cooking the meat first and eating it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 13, 2020, 09:05:34 pm
[19] The armor watches you build a fire from logs and Will, illuminating the night within the clearing. It hunches down nearby you, silent, as you take a piece of meat and -- you burn it. The inside is still good however, so you pick at rare meat within.Its rather bland and gamey.

A jack emerges from the small of its back and pierces your skin, no doubt worming its way into your nervous system and spinal cord. This planet is peaceful. Why free me? Are you so afraid of this Plague, of Magnus?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 13, 2020, 09:26:15 pm
“With enemies like Magnus and the Plague, it would be foolish to not get as much help as possible.”
I don’t know how the rest of you feel, but I also don’t like the idea of anyone being stuck in one place for extended periods of time.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 13, 2020, 09:28:00 pm
I agree.  It must have been horrible to be stuck there for more than a millennium.  However, sometimes things are sealed away for good reason.  Time will tell whether or not we made a mistake in releasing the suit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 13, 2020, 09:48:07 pm
Your concern for my wellbeing is adorable and simultaneously amusing. Your mirror image smiles, as the suit settles quietly. Do you think all beings can be redeemed? That everyone really does want to be good? That, I just need a firm hand and friendship and I'll be your best friend?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 13, 2020, 09:54:25 pm
"I do not believe that all beings are capable of redemption, but, in general, I am willing to help beings seek penance if that is what they genuinely desire.  Do you have any virtues that you subscribe to?  What do you want in life?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 13, 2020, 11:15:13 pm
I've already told you once before. Your youthful charge listened. Why didn't you?  Do you believe that I am more complicated than what I have shown you already?

[8] While you two work out whatever it is you're doing, I'm going to actually pay attention to something that matters -- not a jumped up suit of armor who's throwing a tantrum because its creator got stabbed.

I could kill you in an instant you ungrateful, snot nosed--

Make sure to do it quick, because I'll blow us both to hell in an instant. You know I can and will. Or did you think that dream you put me in was a fluke? As for you, Doctor, its a brat throwing a tantrum. Ignore it and it'll stop acting out. Or not, and then I can kill it.

The mirror Pheobe stays silent, seething as you turn the datapad on and confirm your order. The Armorer nods, adjusting your bartering amount by the cost of what you lawfully purchased from the Pirates. "The hand, if you still want it, is a full surgical kit with the required implants and pain meds and antibiotics and such already inside. It's one hundred credits." You hesitate, then, remembering your advisor's advice, you give a nod. A small total flashes on the screen, giving you your remaining total in a neat and pretty graphic.

Available Funds for Barter: 37757 [Empyreal Energy Credits]

"You'll deliver those to the Crusader camp, if you please."

"Of course. We'll send a craft righ' away. Probably deliver William while we're at it."

"Oh, and can you gift wrap them? Put a nice bow on it for me?" You question, innocently. The Armorer raises a brow, then gives you a grin.

"Of course, m'lady."

With the armor still sulking, you rise, snuffing out the fire with a twist of your will. If you're not mistaken, you have two? Three days? Before you meet with the Khagnate.

There's a chime from the datapad, which, you're pretty sure you're going to steal, and Cephie waves up from the routed call. "So, get this right, Emma was already preparing a New Year's party! She didn't even flinch when I said we would be bringing like three hundred off-worlders to Stormmont to enjoy themselves." Cephie grins, stretching, "She's going to have booze, some chef named Mary is already preparing the meals -- bartenders, prostitutes -- if we get the Pirates to bring some music, we can have an actual, honest to the Gods party!"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 13, 2020, 11:30:12 pm
"I was hoping that perhaps there was more to you, yes.  I will end our conversation with one final question.  You said you knew the names of my Ancestors.  What are those names?"

Express approval.  Hopefully things won't get too rowdy.  After the party, we can broach the topic of Emma joining us in training.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 14, 2020, 01:39:04 am
...didn't even flinch.
Did Emma know we'd find this void-craft, and the Marines contained therein?

This "party" sounds a right debauch, and no mistake... still, I've a sneaking suspicion the young oracle knows exactly what she's doing. I'm inclined to trust her in this matter.
Nicely done just now, by the by. I daresay you've regained the Armorer's good graces.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 14, 2020, 02:48:30 am
I know the names you call yourselves, Doctor. Deoxys. King,  Constantine. I know which of you urged Patches on for blood--and I know which stayed silent. No doubt you all have great stories and tales and were powerful -- but remember. Even a 'god' can die. Made by mortals to suffer the same fate, and all that.

Mmh. Pirates respect wit, cleverness, and sarcasm -- and exaggeration. They are a lively bunch.

"Sounds good, Cephie."

"One thing though -- she's going to address the Pirates...but she wants you to come up with a speech for your 'flock'. She wants you to come up with something."

...shit.

"...you...are you okay?" Cephie asks, after your long pause.

"I-...I don't like public speaking."

"...What?"

"I really don't like it."

"Are you afraid of...of making speeches?!" Cephie is all mirth, a wide grin curling her lips as her eyes light up.

"No!" You protest.

"Oh my gods you are! The slayer of the Plague, the woman who spat in a Noble's face -- is afraid of giving a speech!" You disconnect the call as Cephie bursts into laughter. You realize you're flushing -- and the Mirror Pheobe is giggling. With a painful pull, you disconnect the armor from your body, throwing the wire back at it. A text message pops up on the datapad. Party tomorrow! - Cephie.

You sigh, looking up at the rising sun. You have some time to kill, you suppose.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 14, 2020, 02:57:30 am
Check whether the brothers we met in the town ruins were ever reunited with their Family.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 14, 2020, 03:05:07 am
You feel like being in the middle of nowhere would make that hard to do -- and Cephie is the only other person currently in possession of an Empyreal Network-enabled device. You are not calling her again.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 14, 2020, 03:08:52 am
Practice invisibility, starting with a small portion of your body, and moving on to larger portions if you achieve success.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 14, 2020, 05:12:44 am
Practice invisibility, starting with a small portion of your body, and moving on to larger portions if you achieve success.
+1 Being able to be invisible would be a useful thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 14, 2020, 06:05:00 am
I’m guessing this would be accomplished by bending light so that we match whatever’s behind us
Practice invisibility, starting with a small portion of your body, and moving on to larger portions if you achieve success.
+1 Being able to be invisible would be a useful thing.
+1 to trying it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 14, 2020, 01:04:57 pm
Let us make one thing clear: any twisting of light around this vessel is to be attempted at Phoenix's discretion. Not ours. She has asked as much, and we will accede.

Honing of the will is always valuable. I'm curious as to the combat utility of our probability manipulations myself-- or perhaps you've an idea or two of your own to try out?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 14, 2020, 02:09:04 pm
Let us make one thing clear: any twisting of light around this vessel is to be attempted at Phoenix's discretion. Not ours. She has asked as much, and we will accede.

Honing of the will is always valuable. I'm curious as to the combat utility of our probability manipulations myself-- or perhaps you've an idea or two of your own to try out?
Agreed.
Only try this if you want to. If you’d rather not try making your body invisible, what about trying to make something nearby invisible instead? Just to test whether something like that is even possible
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 14, 2020, 03:22:57 pm
[16] You breathe out a breath and shut your eyes. The transfer and calculation of the data required makes your head throb painfully, but you focus. Moving your invisible hand to look through it, you notice it blur as you have to constantly readjust the data to account for a change in position.

You cut the calculation, and glance to your armor.

"Take a very, very, very light swing at me."

It nods, lifting a fist and stepping forward.

[15] It's body gives all the clues you need to gracefully dodge the blow, --

[15] And you duck under the other easily.

[7] You don't really think you've learned anything. It's telegraphing it's attacks in order to be relatively gentle with your tender flesh.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 14, 2020, 03:27:06 pm
Create a mirage, starting with something small, such as a stone.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 14, 2020, 09:49:50 pm
[11] You focus on a nearby log, adjusting the light by dint of will. It does look a little hazy, and the back isn't really covered that well, but you manage to project the image of the winter's grass on to the front of it. With a frown, you adjust the refraction values, giving it a hazy and vague appearance. Of course, considering this is the middle of the day in a colorful clearing, it does look odd.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 14, 2020, 09:55:45 pm
Using your will, fire a laser at the log.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 14, 2020, 10:09:24 pm
.../me opens a book on photonics.

Instead of doing so immediately, you sit down and boot the datapad. Photonics is simultaneously complex and simple. Simple in layman's terms, difficult in execution. Rising, you stow the datapad away. Luckily for you, you've already attempted something like this with the Levithan's reactor. However, this requires a smaller scale, and a finer adjustment.

[19][11][5]
You begin by constructing a 'tube' of hydrogen plasma. Into this you feed energy, bouncing it off the ends of the tube until it glows brightly with wasted energy. Then, you 'uncap' it, letting the electromagnetic force push outward in a single burst.

The log blackens in a rough circle, but nothing explosive as you hoped. You frown.

That might have been the plasma and thermal energy built up more than the light...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 14, 2020, 10:21:13 pm
((And we appreciate you for it. :)) ))

...energy.
Lightning.

The hydrogen storms in Alphira's memories-- they crackled with power, did they not? I wonder if I can find you something...
<Mnemonic query: any formulae pertaining to the manipulation and weaponization of electric charge.>
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 14, 2020, 11:05:51 pm
Fire a concentrated stream of plasma, with kinetic energy applied to send the plasma at high speeds in the correct direction.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 14, 2020, 11:13:31 pm
[8+2] There is a simple forumulae you can recall-- but it is very inefficient. You shut your eyes to focus, gathering energy from your internal reserves, your stomach acid devouring the nano-feast in an instant. You open your eyes, and with a twist of your willpower, release it all at once, directing it in one direction. A bolt of lightning arcs out from your hand, exploding the log into fiery splinters and leaving nothing but fulgurite and seared grass where it once stood.

You devour some of the carcass, cooking it on a small fire to sate your growing appetite.

[11][17][13]
You form a glowing ball of hydrogen plasma, gathering it up until you have an orb of barely contained, crackling energy in your hand. With a twitch of your willpower, you send it flying -- until it reaches the edge of your area of effect. Once there, it rapidly dissipates in a flash of released energy.

Forming it isn't an issue -- but once it leaves my Willpower, it doesn't work that well. The energy bleeds out too rapidly to cause damage. If I could contain it somehow, it could be a devastating weapon. You ponder, nibbling on a bit of burnt meat. The Demon armor has hunched down by the campfire, watching you practice.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 14, 2020, 11:29:22 pm
That lightning seems amazing.  As for the plasma... we could contain it with magnetic fields?  I'm not sure if silicon manipulation allows us to manipulate magnetism.  The magnets would have to persist outside of our area of effect.

Attempt to will forth a persistent electromagnetic containment device for plasma.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 14, 2020, 11:49:30 pm
I'm already doing that while it's within my sphere of influence, but once it leaves, I am unable to manipulate or control it further.

[18][19] You quirk your lips, considering. Idly, you twist a bit of silicon from the earth and shape it into a rough ball with very thin walls. You fill it with hydrogen and turn the inside into a churning mass of pressurized fire. However, even with you venting the excess temperature, the silicon, in places, rapidly burns away into nothingness. You frown, tossing aside both plasma and molten silicon. There's a pop and a hiss from the plasma as your control of the energy is released, and the molten silicon lands harmlessly, for you, on the grass, turning into silvery, shiny slag. It starts a small fire that dwindles out.

[20] You twist hydrogen into a burning hot fire, compressing it and compressing it. The roiling fire twists and turns within your willpower's grasp, and, you, for show, pretend your hand is actually doing something as you wave it in the air. The grass catches fire, blackening and charring away. Steam hisses up from the ground as you bake it solid. Small fires catch on your clothes, but you stand unaffected. "Making plasma is easy, really, it's the same as my Inferno. Compressed hydrogen, superheated by its own energy. The difficulty is pushing it pass my willpower's limits."

The Demon armor watches you, its lenses fixated on the half-circle of plasma that hovers just a few [meters] in front of you. With a twist of your will, you incinerate through a nearby tree, sending it collapsing to the ground -- but once it reaches about [twenty-six] or so [meters] the plasma collapses as the temperature is diffused through the atmosphere.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 14, 2020, 11:54:39 pm
Showing off now! Such lovely incandescence.

<Mnemonic query: can the range of one's will be extended through practice? If so, how?>
The lightning formula. I feel it can be refined-- might the datapad's repositories be of use in that regard?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 15, 2020, 12:00:04 am
Hmm.  Can you put nanites inside or just outside the plasma to hold it together?  Perhaps in a small amount of flesh?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 15, 2020, 12:08:39 am
Let's... avoid the projection of will and flesh for time being. Our cohesion's in a rough state.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 15, 2020, 12:14:00 am
>Practice. Exceptionally low cohesion. Increased Dust/Essence levels.

[14]...blah blah blah, charges jump between positive and negative... You pause mid-article about storms affecting hydrogen extraction operations on gas giants.

[15][12][8]
A distance away you gather a cloud of hydrogen, keeping it from forming water vapor by dint of Willpower. This you churn rapidly, until you notice small sparks forming within. Without any oxygen to burn, it does not ignite into fire. You continue to drag the atoms against one another, building up static electricity and keeping it contained by a field of protons. Then, when you can feel the cackle of power within, you unleash it.

The yield is lower, due to the small nature of the experiment, but an arc of lightning leaps downward, charring the grass beneath it. But, by letting the hydrogen do all the work, you've spent far less energy than you would've otherwise. You pick at a burnt piece of meat, watching the small plume of smoke from the spot you just sent lightning down on.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 15, 2020, 12:38:15 am
Ah! That did it!

That'll be a right fury, brought to scale. A hydrogen storm fit to out-crackle the aura of any Colossus.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 15, 2020, 01:52:29 am
Indeed.  A potent new weapon for our arsenal. 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 15, 2020, 05:09:38 am
Got to keep practicing to make these better weapons.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 15, 2020, 08:41:45 am
Agreed, practice is good.
((If we’re using positively charged particles, wouldn’t it be easier to use protons instead of positrons since positrons are antimatter?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 15, 2020, 05:26:11 pm
"I see you watching, Demon.  Are these powers that you desire?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 15, 2020, 09:17:33 pm
That thing is no friend of ours, and it never will be-- why goad it?

The formulae are sound. Now-- expand. Extrapolate. Can you wield fire and thunder together, knowing what you now know?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 15, 2020, 09:29:00 pm
I want to give it a reason to listen to us, an incentive.  When did you become the voice of "no," Constantine?  Has it always been thus?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 15, 2020, 09:45:45 pm
We shouldn’t goad it

I don’t like calling it Demon.

How about we hunt the Plague together?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 15, 2020, 10:19:30 pm
Oh, and thank you naturegirl. I was trying to use a figure of speech. You are correct, we are not using positrons.

I have no control over ferrous metal to produce such a containment field, only my own...and as for goading it...I'm pretty sure I know how it will react, but perhaps its best to point it out in deeds -- it doesn't need us. At all.

You goad the armor, with a painted grin, and it turns its head to blink at you.

[42 vs 13] The Demon Armor rises, and with a twitch of its muscles, lunges at you. It crosses the distance in a bound. Its hands wrap around your throat as it lifts you up and slams you into the ground, hard enough to force the breath from your lung -- but you know its being gentle, its playing, even as one of your ribs cracks. You gasp as the Demon Armor cocks its head to one side. Then, without effort, it tosses you aside as easily as one would bat away a fly.

Are you so proud that you think I desire your powers?

[20 vs 1]
[23-10 vs 17]
[15]
You roll, exhaling a grunt. The Armor tilts its head, then, with another twitch of its muscles, it lunges at you again. Something clicks within you, a calculation briefly unlocking, and its variables are the position of the enemy, its strength, its power, its experience, the wind, the turn of the earth -- hundreds of them fitting into place with a single, rapid conscious thought. You twist yourself to one side before the Armor can adjust, and, with a twist of your willpower and a pocket of hydrogen, you send the Suit flying into a tree.

It rises to its feet, grinning in its malevolence.

[16] You stare at it, calming your heavy breath, but it returns to hunch by the fire. You rub your side, feeling the bones reset and slip back into place.

Now...for the other thing...

[11][10][19][11][10]
You create a massive cloud of condensed hydrogen above you, [twenty-five meters] across. You gather and condense it, grinding the atoms together until it roils with barely contained energy. Then you push it further, nearly losing control as you gather more and more energy, using the kinetic force of the air to give the reaction strength. You surround yourself with a protective electromagnetic force, and make a path to the ground with another.

Then, you unleash hell.

The blast rips apart the clearing and sends you flying back, the hydrogen exploding into a massive ball of flame as your willpower releases it. You shut your eyes, falling into the icy water. It shocks you awake, helping to clear your head of the concussive force. A crater nearly a [mile wide] has replaced the clearing, and all around it the trees have been bent back and burned. Great pillars of fulgarite reach towards the heavens -- however, you cannot hear through the ringing in your ears, and the world swims around you. You stagger, and drop to your knees after pulling yourself from the water.

The Demon Armor drags itself from the water, and grins at the damages.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 15, 2020, 10:34:02 pm
I said we should NOT goad it...while we’re out here, let’s search for members of the Plague instead of fighting each other
Let’s go Plague hunting

Should have checked status
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 15, 2020, 11:17:31 pm
When did you become the voice of "no," Constantine?
((Uhh, I should ask. Have I been shutting people down overmuch?))

Holy--

---

...heh.
Heh-ha.
Ahaha.
Beautiful!

Oh dear, but we've gone and exhausted you again... and then some. Stay put-- keep your head still--

"I don't suppose you saved any of that [beast of burden]?"
Do you still have that datapad on you? I don't like this concussion... we may need to call in an extraction, or let the demon armor walk us to camp.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 16, 2020, 03:15:33 am
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 16, 2020, 04:52:59 am
Fighting with each other will accomplish nothing in the long run, and I agree that going back to camp is a good thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 16, 2020, 08:55:27 am
Yes let’s go back to camp
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 16, 2020, 04:01:45 pm
((I'm taking a short break, but I'll be back soon.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 16, 2020, 04:49:42 pm
((Understood. I... apologize, if I've stressed you unduly these past few days.  :-\ ))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 16, 2020, 05:18:25 pm
((Nah, it's not you, I just need some time to de-stress.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 16, 2020, 06:28:47 pm
I want to know why anyone thought goading the armor who could easily kill us was a good idea...thst was stupid and unnecessary
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 16, 2020, 06:32:55 pm
I want to know why anyone thought goading the armor who could easily kill us was a good idea...thst was stupid and unnecessary

My intention wasn't to "goad" it.  It was a simple question.  I didn't know it would react explosively.  But sure, that was much more stupid than overusing our powers to the brink of starvation, giving ourself a concussion, and deafening us?

Is that what you're saying, Naturegirl1999?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 16, 2020, 06:40:16 pm
I want to know why anyone thought goading the armor who could easily kill us was a good idea...thst was stupid and unnecessary

My intention wasn't to "goad" it.  It was a simple question.  I didn't know it would react explosively.  But sure, that was much more stupid than overusing our powers to the brink of starvation, giving ourself a concussion, and deafening us?

Is that what you're saying, Naturegirl1999?
No. Never mind. I don’t know what I was saying. Just forget I said anything, we should head back to camp.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 17, 2020, 12:00:50 am
...Okay! Now, lets get the obvious out of the way first.

I greatly appreciate each and every one of you for following this thread and game so loyally over the last six months. Its amazing to think that you guys enjoy, or enjoyed, this game like this. So thank you, and I really mean that.

Second thing! Lets all take a nice relaxing breath. I never want this game to be a source of frustration or anger, and I'm sorry that it has happened. Conflict has always been civil on this game so far and I would like to keep it that way. This game is for enjoyment, because, remember, even losing is fun! Also ninety percent of the time I want to kill Pheonix. I enjoy it greatly when you get into conflict, because a front without unity is easier to break! :D Seriously. I have a problem. Don't give me this temptation.

Third thing. I apologize for misunderstanding, Zbridges, and I apologize for causing the stress. That's a limitation of text, I feel, is that it cannot translate emotions and intent, which, when subtlety is involved, makes things difficult for everyone.

Alright! Lets take a break and chill for a day. Everyone cool? If you aren't, please, send me a PM! We can talk it out.

((Edited to remove 50% of exclamation points because it made me look like a jackass.))


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 17, 2020, 12:20:05 am
Alright! Lets take a break and chill for a day.

Hoooff, I'm glad you said that. Was considering requesting something similar.

Let's rest for a day... and then, let's talk this out before we jump back in. This became an out-of-character issue at some point, and I feel we all need the chance to address it as such.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 17, 2020, 05:03:32 am
So what are we going to talk out, a plan going forward or am I missing something?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 17, 2020, 08:54:03 pm
Something like that, I think?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 18, 2020, 02:40:52 pm
So, after that break, if anybody has any grievances to air or ooc issues to discuss, today is the day to do so.

I am going to finish this game no matter what. I cannot fail it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 18, 2020, 05:45:42 pm
((Clearly I am being too... emotional.  I'll step back as far as I can.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 18, 2020, 08:32:13 pm
...right.

First off: Egar. You're an amazing writer. I've said it before, I expect I'll say it again. As soon as things wrap up here (one way or another), I'm kicking this thread straight to the Hall of Legends. It belongs there.

That said… losing is not fun. Not this time.
(I'll explain.)

If we'd chosen way back when to play the "murderhobo vigilante" you expected us to be? Maybe a bloody romp and a swift death would have been OK. We didn't do that-- we couldn't do that. You showed us a world that was strange, and beautiful, and broken-- so we took the charge given us, and we set out to guide her (as best we could) through to a better life. Phoebe became a daughter of sorts. More so, once we learned how she'd taken on an identity of her own-- an identity apart from ours.

It... hurts, to lose a child. To watch that child suffer.
Even in a story, it still hurts.
It's not fun.

Is it just me troubled by this? I assumed so before, but... well... we fell apart back there, and this is the best explanation I have. ZBridges?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 18, 2020, 09:12:40 pm
It is difficult, but I feel it is necessary.  I don't think a game like this can exist without negative consequences.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 18, 2020, 09:34:05 pm
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 18, 2020, 09:51:27 pm
I'm... exhausted, is all. Of the beating down, the clawing up. I'd give up and let go, but-- well-- "Constantine." He-who-holds-the-course. Can't very well throw in the towel with a name like that.

I'll see this through, if I can. I'll keep clawing for that happy ending. I just wanted to point out that there's a real cost to this fictitious struggle, for many of us-- strange though that notion might be.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 19, 2020, 01:23:52 am
Thank you!

So, let me explain something about this game -- it was going to wait, but now seems like a good time...its an experiment. A sort of participatory design. A very rough draft of a system and setting I wanted to flesh out and work within. I appreciate everything, and each player I get, because I get to see what can be done within the system.

So with that said--

I'm a new writer. This is the first work I've gotten this far in. The games I've dm'ed in the past? Never got this far. So, basically-- I have no fucking idea what I'm doing half the time. But, I've always tended towards pieces of work with brutal themes, towards struggle, towards y'know, not nice shit. I feel like I'm really good at describing gore, for instance!
But I understand on a fundamental level that too much darkness isn't good. That it needs to be balanced. All I can say on that front is...trust me. Perhaps it won't be the happy ending you hope for, but this isn't Warhammer 40k.

Any other issues? Please. Seriously. I want the game to be enjoyable. There are some things I will not bend on, but I want to know, right?

I...I kind of want to implement something -- to negate fears of worry about a meaningless, unsatisfactory death, but I'm concerned about broaching the subject, as it is rather meta.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 19, 2020, 06:00:16 am
I quite like the direction this game is heading and see nothing you need to change about it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 19, 2020, 08:25:16 am
If you concerned about broaching the topic, perhaps you could approach players about it via PM...?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 19, 2020, 08:45:55 am
I like the game
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 19, 2020, 12:03:13 pm
*snip*

I... will try to trust. As best I may. Thank you.
Just remember... this has been a "first draft" for you. It has not been such for us. These aren't throwaway characters-- you've put too much life in them now for that.



All that said, I just wanted to toss a quick question to everyone here.
Is there any... bad blood between us at this time? Have I given offense to anyone here, in my arguings? Things got pretty hot back there, and I want to clear the air before we jump back in.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 19, 2020, 12:40:49 pm
I’ve no bad blood for anyone
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 19, 2020, 02:14:11 pm
Nothing from me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 19, 2020, 03:02:20 pm
I have no comments.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 19, 2020, 06:16:14 pm
Alright. So, after today, the update schedule will resume. Not today though, as it is my birthday and I'm getting wasted tonight. Aight? Door is always open to PM's if you have any issues.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 19, 2020, 07:01:40 pm
Alright

Happy birthday!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 19, 2020, 07:07:48 pm
Happy birthday indeed! :)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 19, 2020, 07:26:19 pm
Happy birthday
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 19, 2020, 07:27:21 pm
Happy birthday!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 20, 2020, 03:30:29 am
Happy Birthday!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 21, 2020, 11:33:49 am
((παρατηρείτε ζώ!
Behold, I live! Or something. Conjugations suck. So do hangovers. And job interviews while you're hungover. And driving for four hours while hungover...in other words, I apologize for yesterday's lack of posting.))


The Demon Armor's red lenses twist to focus on you, then the wreckage of the lightning strike. You giggle as the world swims around you, and your stomach turns with the nausea of your hunger and head injury. With a lackadaisical shrug, it leans down and hefts you across its shoulders. You point a finger towards the Crusader Camp's vague direction, and the armor begins to trudge that way dutifully. You don't think this machine understands the concept of gentle; it carries you like a sack of [potatoes], readjusting you across its hard shoulders and bumping you around as it walks. When it approaches the camp, the Crusaders on guard lift their las-guns.

They speak, but you cannot hear. The guards seem concerned when they spot you, their guns lowering. You wave.

The Armor only pauses for the briefest of moments, its lenses narrowing on the weapons. Then, it grins and moves towards a random tent, throwing you into the bed and stepping through the flap to stand guard at the entrance.

A medic hurries in soon after it leaves, and you point to your ears and your head. She checks your eyes and dips a nod. Then, she removes a file from her coat, [CRITICAL CARE INFORMATION FOR MOTHER PHEONIX]. Then she nods, moving to slip it back away, but your gesture for it, out of curiosity.

It's a single piece of paper with a list. The back has a recipe for nutrient gruel. Your eyes drift over the paper as the medic hurries out, and you sometimes lose focus.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

The medic returns with a pile of nutrient bars, and she breaks them into chunks and begins to feed you. True to the document, you devour five of these before your strength returns. After that, it is a simple matter to use a healing surge...

[18] Pain lances through your skull and ears, and your eye twitches. You think you heard a creak from your skull, but you are unsure-- however, sounds begin to filter in again.

"Thank you." You murmur, and the medic nods, giving a bow of her head and picking her folder back up.



"We got a hovercraft approaching, Mother Pheonix." A voice calls from outside the tent. You rise from the cheap cot, and head out. Its the Pirates, as evidenced by the print of twelve snakes curled in a circle on the outside of the vehicle. But that isn't what first draws your attention. Its obviously the weapons you ordered, hanging from below the craft. A shipping container.

Its wrapped in a bright, multi-colored cloth, with garish designs in pink and gold. All around it is thick ribbon, tied in a neat bow. The drop it down to the ground with a careful thud. The hovercraft drops lower, and ramp falls to hit the shipping container, the young Armorer striding out to dip a bow.

"Your delivery, m'lady." He turns, the ramp lifts, and the Pirate hovercraft makes its way back to the Valhol.

You grin, moving to the crate and ripping off the thin fabric so you can open the door--

You are greeted by another layer of fabric as the door swings open.

Then another.

Even the indivual packages are wrapped. You open a shield belt package--
 
And the item itself is crudely wrapped in thin fabric.

You command the Crusaders to begin loading the goods within and return to your cot. You rest a little while as night begins to fall on the Camp. You're hundreds of miles away from the Plague, and you're sure that Cephie and Emma are expecting you to go to the party tomorrow.

You stifle a yawn and think about what you want to do.



Spoiler: Status (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Inventory (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Powers and Skills (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Wealth (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Contracts (click to show/hide)

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Spoiler: Holdings (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 21, 2020, 04:18:43 pm
Look up information on the local system that Mercenary's Rest belongs to.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 21, 2020, 11:49:40 pm
You pull up current information the datapad to peruse and read through. Its a little technical, but you understand the jargon and units of measurement pretty quickly.


Spoiler: (Mercenary's Rest) (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: (II) (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: (Nich) (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 22, 2020, 12:00:01 am
Nich could be useful, as could its unsurveyed moons.  There might be something interesting on II, in the deep subterranean pools.

Look for information on disputes and arbitration in the Empyre.  Do we have any legal ways to defend ourselves from a marauding Noble of the Empyre?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 22, 2020, 12:20:35 am
[-]You study some documents, and what you find makes your lips curl into a frown. The Endless Emperor/Empress was the only individual with the authority and power to arbitrate any dispute between a Noble and those of rank from within the Empyre. All courts, Naval operations, and local authorities yield to Nobility, only refusing to do so when the Emperor was still active within politics and could support them.

[-] You begin to read through a great many posts from a great many Pirate and Illegal sources. As Alphias of Sol demonstrated, not even the Golden Law of the Pirate King/Queen would be respected by the Nobility, even if presented by an Heir of Sol themself. The Golden Law stated that Brigands, Rebels, Pirates, and other less respectable types, could if they amassed a large enough fleet, be recognized as a sovereign empire and/or government of the Empyre. The Empyre and these Pirates would enter into a mutual defense alliance, and the Navy would no longer view them as a threat. It was an old law, given precedence, and forged into the heart of the Empyre by Sol herself.

[20]Even before Alphias' demonstration, the Nobles had begun to disregard the laws of their own Empyre completely. Democracies were broken, sovereign states and empires were destroyed or had to bend the knee, planets were either ruined or cracked, and the young Noble heirs began to strike out pass the Core in hedonistic, destructive excursions. Those empires and governments that allied with the Nobles began to turn on their neighbors, resulting in thousands of wars that claimed trillions of lives. The Emperor's Peace was as broken as one of the Walls of the Eternity Fortress.

[15]...and it was made worse by the sheer amount of war material, fleets, and out of work mercenaries that suddenly found themselves victorious in the Plague Wars of the last thousand years. The economic downturn caused by the instability, new valuable resources brought about by the Plague -- and many, many other factors all lead to what's being called the Empyreal Age of Piracy.

[1]Of course, the Herald of this new age and, according to some, its mastermind, the group that showed every pirate, mercenary, and Free Planet that the Empyre no longer held to the laws of its founding-- The Line of Sol.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 22, 2020, 12:29:10 am
It is truly sad to see the Empyre reduced to this lawless state.  This is not what we worked so hard to achieve.

Have any independent petty empires or nations survived in this part of the Rim?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 22, 2020, 12:42:07 am
[-]None of note. There's a few mentions of random stations, or the odd, isolated colony, but, for the most part, this part of the Rim seems desolate despite its proximity to Sol.

[1] You yawn, unsure of why that is. Something about Void shifts? And Galactic Ensarement? Whatever those mean. There's also something about the Planet Zero actually being close by. The science of the former goes over your uneducated head for the moment. You pick at a ration bar.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 22, 2020, 12:44:13 am
Unless other Ancestors have further things to suggest, get some sleep.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 22, 2020, 12:54:25 am
Skim some details on the Planet Zero, then sleep.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 22, 2020, 05:22:35 am
That planet zero thing sounds intresting, lets loot it up, then sleep.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 22, 2020, 11:47:53 am
[3] Planet Zero was, keyword there, was the planet where the Plague became known to the broader Empyre. Destroyed in less than a day, and the planet itself consumed. That makes it hard to find, along with all the worlds that may or may not have been consumed similarly before the Emperor/Empress weakened the Plague. There apparently might be a memorial of some sort, to the soldiers that held out long enough to report the situation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on July 22, 2020, 05:52:18 pm
Oh yes, that was a sad time, even with spacial folding couldn't get there before it spread.

The path down memory lane is appreciated but you might want to focus on the here and now, conquer the planet and get yourself stronger.  You can worry about forging a new pirate empire later.

Also the key to creating anti-matter was actually quite simple.  Wish I could remember it!

Get some sleep, sweet dreams!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 22, 2020, 11:23:44 pm
((Oh hey, VoidSlayer! Haven't seen you in-thread awhile. :) ))
((Fair warning, folks: I'm on vacation! My participation here may be spotty at times... internet's not great where I'm staying. I'll try and check in when I can-- is good to see the thread chugging along again!)

Antimatter... would you be so kind as to peruse your <archives> on the matter, [father/mentor, sculptor-- lit. "he who carves stone"]? You might find an old formula scrap or two.

Rest. You did good things today.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 23, 2020, 04:04:53 am
Time for sleep.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 23, 2020, 11:52:41 pm
Sleep takes you quickly as the fatigue of the last day and a half catch up to you. Your eyes shut.



...you look out over your kingdom from one of the tremendous gleaming spires that rise from the planet's crust below. The stars shine down through the moonless night as hundreds of sleek ships cut through the Void. A great capital ship, as big as a small moon comes into view, hanging over your city.

Your Peerage has finally come for you. A Noble's Fleet hangs over your world.

You turn away, striding into your Palace as explosions of energy turn the night into day. Your children stand silently, looking to you for hope, for victory, for anything other than the destruction of your Rimward Kingdom...

But there is no hope. No chance at victory. Your mercenaries dead or released from their service. Your fleets lay shattered in another system. Your cities are being reduced to glass.

There is no hope. Not for you...



You do not awaken with a start or a flinch, too used to nightmares. Only a sigh escapes your lips as you awaken from the memories that are and are not your own. You check your time, and, judging by the light, six hours of sleep is all you need. You rise from your cot and join the Crusaders at the breakfast campfire.

[-]It is by your firm insistence alone that they treat you like another campmate. You and the Demonic arm walk into the forest to gather wood in the morning's early twilight. You emerge with piles of sticks and some well-sized logs, then take your breakfast of nutrient gruel with the rest. While sitting, you watch your Crusaders, trying to get a judge of their morale, but they don't relax around you, keeping themselves stiff and formal.

It is only when Nicole stumbles out of her tent and approaches do they seem to relax. She doesn't try to help, instead of snatching a bowl of food and muscling her way between two of the Crusaders for a better place by the fire. She nods to you when she sees you, her eyes finding the Armor that hovers menacingly at your shoulder.

"I would've shot that thing first chance I got." Nicole offers helpfully.

"It's strong. Stronger than even the colossi." You quietly respond, "I don't like it that much, either."

"Anything to win the war sooner, I guess." Nicole shrugs.

"...Mother...Mother Nicole?" One of the Crusaders lifts his hand. One of the younger ones, brand new, would judge by the recruit rank attached to his coat. Panic flashes through the eyes of the older, more experienced, and higher ranked Crusaders as they look at him. "...are...are we going to win?"

Mother Nicole looks surprised, then shocked, then disgusted. The Crusader Officer rises quickly and grabs the youth by the Armor. The Officer apologizes and pushes the younger man away with a "Latrine cleaning. Now."

"One moment, Child MacTyler." The officer freezes, still holding his charge by the arm. Nicole rises, moving to step in front of the young Crusader. "If we don't win -- we'll have nothing to worry over. Because we'll be dead. Your family. Dead. Your friends. Dead. Every last human life on this blessed planet will die if we do not win. Every. Single. One." She pauses, glancing at the sky. "What is the punishment for cowardice, Child MacTyler?"

The Officer hesitates before he speaks, "Execution at dawn."

Nicole nods, and, in one fluid motion, she draws her las-pistol and presses it into the offending Crusader's head. The Officer flinches, gritting his teeth. You start to rise, but -- she pulls the trigger.

Nothing happens besides the pistol clicking uselessly. The recruit slumps in the Officer's grip and Nicole leans forward, "I want you to remember this, recruit. I'm scarier than any Infected." She dips a nod to the Officer, reclaiming her seat. The other Crusaders find something to do, leaving you alone with your grandmother.

"Sleep well?" Nicole asks, nonplussed.

You give a small nod and reclaim your seat.

"Mmh. So that Cephie demon, is she trustworthy?"

"No."

"You two seem friendly."

"For now." You lie.

Nicole nods, finishing her meal. She pats you on the shoulder as she returns to her tent.

You do the same.



"Crusader Hovercraft, in sight!" A Crusader calls, and you rise, surprised to see one of the largest Hovercraft in your fleet descending to hover above the Valhal. Ramps drop down from the craft, and Pirates emerge from the broken void-ship. Voidmarines funnel the crowd into Hovercraft. It takes a solid hour, and you watch, content to simply sit amongst the trees and in the high grass. Eventually, the craft turns towards your position. With the camp broken down, it's a simple matter to load up the smaller crafts and lift into the sky to tail the larger ship.



The internal landing bay has been cleared, you note, to make room for the party. Your first expression leaves you awe-struck, jaw gaping. Half a dozen bars have been set up, with shelves filled with liquor and booze. [Vodka], [Rum], beers, bottles upon bottles of wine, and interesting barrels crudely labeled [kumis, lit milk wine]. Even before the pirates stream in, people are sitting at the bars and drifting near the dining tables. Beautiful men and women sit in clean and neat outfits, styles unseen since the destruction of SEED. But there are also shady types, in heavy coats, strategically placed -- no doubt Thornton drug peddlers there to supply uppers, downers or any other motley assortment of drugs that Silas and the Family have produced.

A massive row of tables sits in the middle of all this, filled to the brim with food. [Beast of Burden] legs, dripping with juices and seasoned with [rosemary] and [garlic], skins charred to a gorgeous brown. Cooked [poultry] with crispy skins -- and in the center of it all is a massive spit with smoldering, smoking logs, roasting a whole bug carcass. Chef Mary stands nearby with a wickedly sharp scimitar, quietly directing a number of her cooks this way and that. They bring out steaming plates of vegetables, potatoes, and elegant desserts. You grin when you notice Cephie's craft is the center of these cook's attention.

Interestingly, a single hovercraft still sits docked -- one of the merchant craft. You don't even have to look within to guess its purpose -- the outside has gauzes of cloth done in outlander style, and quite a few beautiful, well-dressed people lounge nearby. Fragrant smoke drifts from this lounge, as does the scent of perfume.

Thorton Warmachines stand guard at the main entryway, and when your ship docks, Emma emerges, all smiles. Without a word, she guides you through the guards,  directing you to your room. On your bed sits an elegant, stylish set of clothes -- all gleaming black silks, red belts, and golden jewelry. You nod as she steps out of the room, feeling a pang of regret. You shower, dress, and try to drag a comb through your hair. Then you get another when the teeth of the first break. Emma returns, quietly helping you tie your hair in a neat topknot. "First things first -- you have a speech to give to your people. It's not public, just over the broadcast system. The theme is mourning through revelry. Celebrate being alive."

"Mourning through revelry?"

"I distributed an excess supply of bug meat, [potatoes], and [Vodka] for the general population. I granted everyone who wanted to run a small stall a stipend to help us distribute and get rid of it. Our people are starting to celebrate, but the more zealous of our people want to keep mourning -- we cannot. This our life now. Celebrate being alive -- leave the regrets for the morning after."

You pause, then nod.

"It also covers our lavish little party for your Barons of Steel. That fanatic in the council chamber didn't want anything -- so tomorrow is a full day of service. Compromise." She guides you down the elevator after she finishes fussing with your hair, into a room with a microphone, an archaic sound system, and a single attendant. A red light is on, next to dim green light.

Panic tightens your chest at the thought of the speech.

Uh...help. Please.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 24, 2020, 12:12:36 am
I'm glad we have this opportunity, as the best way to conquer your fears is to face them.  Be thankful for the chance to improve.  As for the speech itself, mention the fallen, but also mention that we should celebrate their memory.  Make a toast, perhaps.  They would want us to be happy, after all, and enjoy this moment of respite after so, so much sacrifice.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on July 24, 2020, 12:42:30 am
You should spend some time practicing that speech, whatever it ends up at.  Maybe make up some stock ones too.  That intimidation and power of Nicole comes from long practice, but they are all a front, a mask she has learned to wear.  We all do.  You just have to get more comfortable in it.

I would tell you to enjoy yourself, but you are tied to that abomination of an armor now so I would suggest keeping it as far from the revelry as possible.

Hey out of curiosity, what form of antimatter are in those missiles.  With the right control you might be able to use it as a potent weapon without cracking the planet in half.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 24, 2020, 08:29:13 am
Can we not break the planet in half we need it to live on.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 24, 2020, 08:55:27 am
I think we’ll need to come up with the words, Constantine is better at speech making than me

“This is the new normal, we are still alive, celebrating life puts us all in a better mood, a better mood will allow us to focus more on the future, rather than dwelling on what has already transpired”
((Improvements and additions welcome))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 24, 2020, 06:50:56 pm
I think we’ll need to come up with the words, Constantine is better at speech making than me

((Uhh right then. Gimme a bit, I'll try and throw something together... ZBridges has the gist of it down already; I'll just extrapolate from there.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 24, 2020, 07:26:22 pm
((I'm actually genuinely impressed at how you are all contributing to the story and have all basically picked up roles.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 25, 2020, 12:21:08 am
((A necessity! We play to our talents.))

Peace. Comfort.
Words I offer.

...

My children.

We are called this day to grief, and to celebration. Grief, for those we have lost. Celebration, of that which they held so dear.

This is a day for celebration, my children! For joy in sorrow! We raise our glasses in honor! We raise our glasses to the honored dead, who have given all for the love of their home-- their Work-- their people. Tomorrow, we will mourn their loss. Today, we celebrate their
valor. Today, we partake gratefully of the gift they have given us: through their lives, our lives. Our land, and such bounty as it has given us.

Let this day be our holy day. Our celebration in grief. Our sacred remembrance, now and in every year to come. By these words we will know this day-- by these words we will commemorate the fallen--
May their memory be eternal. To us, life.

Enjoy the revelries.


...

"Αἰωνία ἡ μνήμη"-- "memory be eternal". An old theme. A favorite of mine.
Alter and augment our words as you will, Φοῖνιξ Ἥλιης. You are at your best, when you speak from your own reckoning.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 25, 2020, 04:06:09 am
+1 To that is all looks good to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 25, 2020, 04:07:13 am
Beautiful.  Hopefully it will raise our people's spirits.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 25, 2020, 11:48:20 am
((I'm actually genuinely impressed at how you are all contributing to the story and have all basically picked up roles.))

((My role is "the guy who is in love with complicated unworkable ideas," I suppose?:) ))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 26, 2020, 04:08:12 pm
((A [person's] grasp should exceed [their] reach, or what's a heaven for?))




With kind words and inspirations in mind, you take a step forward and dip a nod to the controller. He flicks a switch, the green light turns on, and you swallow down your nervousness.

"I hope the morning finds you well, my Children."

You pause for just a moment to build the tension.

"We are called this day to grief, and to celebration. Grief, for those we have lost. Celebration of that which they held so dear. Let us take a moment to raise a glass of wine, of water, of fire, to grieve and to celebrate those lives."

You pause as Emma quickly pours you a stinging glass of Vodka, which you down quickly. After a slightly exaggerated breath, you continue, letting the fire from the alcohol creep into your words.

"This is a day for celebration, my children! For joy in sorrow! We raise our glasses in honor! We raise our glasses to the honored dead, who have given all for the love of their home-- their Work-- their people. Tomorrow, we will mourn their loss. Today, we celebrate their valor. Today, we partake gratefully of the gift they have given us: through their lives, our lives. Our land, and such bounty as it has given us!"

"Let this day be our holy day. Our celebration in grief. Our sacred remembrance, now and in every year to come. By these words we will know this day-- by these words we will commemorate the fallen -- May their memory be eternal. To us, life."

You pause, breathing out a soft sigh, twisting a cheerful lilt into your voice, but keeping the sadness of loss still fresh.

"Enjoy the revelries."

The microphone cuts off, the red light turns on, and the three of you sit patiently for a few minutes. Emma is grinning, then, softly, "[Constantine?]"

You flush, and nod.

Three people enter the room after many minutes, in unmarked clothes. They bow their heads when they see you and Emma. The first offers the pleasantries, "Lady Pheonix. Lady Emma." Thorntons, then.

"How did it go over?" Emma asks nervously, picking at her dress.

"We didn't stay long to gather information." He begins. Emma flinches, concerned by the worry in his voice.

[20]"We didn't need to. From the tip of the mountain to the bottom, the people cheered for Pheonix and the nation. Everyone we saw toasted, and the festivities began in full." Another laughs, as the false tension drops from the trio's shoulders. "By SEED, the Crusaders and Guardians even joined in. Even the fanatics broke their teetotaling to raise a glass."

You slump with relief, laughing. Emma smiles, then, with a nod to the trio, dismisses them with a "Go enjoy yourself. Two drink limit -- help the Crusaders and Guardians if they need it with public safety."

"My Lady." They bow out, and Emma takes you by the hand to drag you to the party.



"It's my turn for a speech." Emma murmurs over to you, as the two of you stand in the elevator. "I used the toy you sent home with Cephie to research our Line. I feel it is a good idea to impress upon our new allies where you stand, and who stands behind you."

Remembering what an Ancestor told you, you give the nod, putting your trust in the Oracle.

"Try not to blush--" She pauses, then, with a press of a button, the elevator stops. "There is something else we must discuss, Pheonix. Your relationship with Cephie."

You blink, opening your mouth to offer a defense.

[1] "To be honest with you, I don't care. Just keep it under wraps. If the public were to find out, it could cause confusion and strife. Especially between the Families and the general population." Emma calmly explains. A pain strikes at your heart.

"How did you--"

"I asked her."

[17 vs. 5]You clench your jaw. Suppressing your anger, you quietly ask, making sure not to hope too loudly, "You're not angry? Or jealous?"

"No." Emma presses the button, starting the lift again. "Who you 'spend time' with is of no concern to me. Keep it under wraps -- only those that are trustworthy."

The rest of the ride passes in silence. Moments before the door opens, Emma composes herself, putting on a pleasant smile. Two Warmachines greet you at the landing pad door, giving a bow of their heads and letting you pass by their security without a second glance.



"Thank you all for coming to this revelry. I am Lady Thornton, Regent of Pheonix's Fortress-State, Lord Protector of the Sandsper and Hoganson Families;  Emeralda Thornton -- I am told we share Blood." Emma begins, approaching the crowd, raising her voice despite the microphone that sits on the high collar of her dress. Her voice echoes out across the assembled mass of Pirates. The conversation dies down, and Murdach pushes through the crowd. His 'head' tilts downward in respect towards the two of you. His sensors, however, twitch towards Cephie, mirroring his Pirate's own slightly confused glance.

"It is a pleasure to meet you, Emeralda Thornton. Forgive me if I do not bow -- it is against my culture." In a calm brogue, he offers smoothly, "I have come with gifts for the beautiful lady of our great ally." He lifts a hand, and two Pirates drag a metal chest forward, dropping it at Emma's feet. They back away, and the chest pops open of its own volition with a hiss of hydraulics. Within are various jewelry and trinkets. All of it is finely worked, bearing the craftsmanship of a dozen worlds -- and all it forged from rare metals—platinum, palladium, and jade.

Three items lay atop the pile, however. A small canister of some powdery, white substance. A dueling las-gun wrought with precious gems and other rare materials, and a graceful comb, which flows organically and gracefully. Emma glances down at the three items, her eyes flicking up to the Captain. Without hesitation, she reaches down, picking up the pistol to look it over.

[18] You notice the grins upon the senior Pirate officers. One even nods.

"This a beautiful weapon -- and these are amazing gifts. You have my thanks, Captain Murdach. My good friend Cephie, Pheonix's retainer, tells me that you have been asleep for many years. No doubt you wish to quench your thirst, but if I may be permitted to raise a toast before we begin our revelry."

"Of course," Murdach replies smoothly. Drinks are distributed to the crowd as a screen descends. You take another glass of alcohol, Ascended Wine this time, as even smelling the drink makes your head spin.

"I wish to raise a toast, to my lover, my friend, and my dearest ally, as today is her birthday!" A video begins to play on the screen. Its a montage -- you stand bleeding and broken in front of Magnus, delivering your threat. One of Alphias doing the same. A still image of the Moore Family villa with an enormous hole in the side, and you emerging from it. One of you, during the first year of your academy -- the next of you standing before a great crowd of soldiers, making your first speech. A picture from the propaganda department of your second battle with the colossi. Intercut between these pictures is the video of Alphias' last stand. "Her Sire stood unbowed before the Nobility, just as she stands unbowing. He destroyed the Plague just as she does. She delivers us from our foes, and now she's going to deliver us from tyranny! I thank you, as does every free man, woman, and everything in between. My beloved Pheobe..."

[20] "To the next Queen of the Pirates! Hail Lady Pheonix!" The Wall of Infinity cracks under Alphias' siege. Broad dark lines forming in the structure of pure light as the laws of the universe shatter -- a soundbyte is perfectly timed to echo out over the crowd as Emma raises her glass. A collective gasp rises from the group. They stare in silence, glancing between the paused video and you with shock and awe. It's a perfect picture -- seven wings of fire erupting from Alphias's back as he stands before his handiwork.

They call your name back as one -- Murdach is the only one who does not. His sensors narrow on you. The glasses emptied in a single drink.

[18 vs. 4+5]"Thank you." Emma bows her head, reaching out to pull you into a tight hug and to plant a kiss on your cheek. She gives a laugh and a flush, but you're the only one that can see the coldness in her ice-blue eyes as she looks at you—the twitch of a scowl.



The party begins, and Emma slips away to chat and mingle. She plays the hostess well, encouraging discussion between the Pirate Officers and the Council. Crusader and Soldier. Eric and Isela speak to the young Armorer and a taller man that looks quite similar, besides for his lean, long-legged height. Two Voidmarines step out of their armor, bright red hair nearly glowing in the light as they begin to drink at the bar. Murdach sits quietly upon a couch made for the Warmachines, chatting with a beautiful woman dressed in a SEED uniform.

Cephie emerges from the crowd, holding a bottle of wine. She smiles happily as the two of you take a seat at one of the less crowded bars. "So, what do you want to do first!?" She asks, excited. Music begins to echo throughout the room, as the Pirates finally finish setting up their sound system.

"...Oh, written in the stars..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 26, 2020, 04:31:34 pm
... we're Phoenix is in a relationship with Cephie?

Yes, yes, priorities, but I'm not a fount of inspiration regarding her last question.

Excellent speech, fellow advisors, and excellent delivery, Phoenix.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 26, 2020, 05:12:36 pm
It seems you have a reputation, Constantine!  A wonderful speech.  This is your moment, Phoenix, and your life.  What do you want to do?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on July 26, 2020, 08:11:22 pm
...
Oh.
Yeah, that... makes sense, actually. I suspected that Cephie was interested in us. It's surprising, but not really shocking.

Anyway, back to the matter at hand. I'm not really the social type, so I can't really give good advice. Just have fun and try not do something you regret?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 26, 2020, 08:49:10 pm
Shrugging to yourself, you take a set of glasses from behind the bar, and Cephie pours you both one of Ascended Wine. "First drinking. Then food. Then more alcohol?" You propose.

Cephie dips a nod, raising her glass and clinking it against your's. "Sounds good. May I make a counter proposal?"

You take a sip of your drink, gesturing for her to continue.

"We finish these glasses, go eat, go shake down a Thornton for whatever drugs they might have. Do them, then drink more. I'll teach you how  to dance. Then as this is a Pirate party -- when night falls somebody is going to set up a sparring ring. We stomp a few heads, maybe toss a Voidmarine around or watch the fights. When we get too drunk, we'll raid my stash for an upper, then go from there. How does that sound?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 26, 2020, 09:03:29 pm
"That sounds amazing.  Can Ascended overdose?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 26, 2020, 09:31:30 pm
Ah-hm.

I'll leave this one to your own judgement, Φοῖνιξ-- it's your birthday party, after all!-- but be careful. You've an image to maintain, even here: before the Twelve Clans, before their descendants, and before SEED's children. They will be watching us close.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 26, 2020, 10:26:38 pm
As your Doctor, I would recommend that you take as many drugs as possible. Drugs are fun.

Just kidding. Do be cautious about mixing uppers and downers, and don't partake in more than you are comfortable with. Since this will be your first exposure to these drugs, take lighter doses than Cephie.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 26, 2020, 10:27:58 pm
What our Constant said. None of my business what your relationships are, Phoenix. All that's mine to say is: be careful. But you knew that.

I am curious to see how this goes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 27, 2020, 12:32:10 am
"I won't let you. I'm a pro at this-- I used to be a hostess at a nightclub for a while." Cephie proudly claims as the two of you drain your glasses. When you raise your brow in surprise, she nods. "My entire job was keeping drunks and druggies and teens from killing themselves or someone else."

[13] You nod, handing the cup over to the bartender. You make your way to the buffet line, piling up as many plates as you can carry with food. Cephie balances some on her wrists and her thumb with a wink and a grin. In turn, you levitate them around you, using the natural silicon within the plates to 'hold' on to them. You find an empty table, digging into the food with the ravenous appetite that only an Ascended could bring to bear—whipped mash [potatoes] filled with butter and cream. Red meat steaks, dripping with juices, and seasoned heavily with [pepper] and [rosemary]. Vegetable tarts and gratins. You're chewing on a pastry of sweet plums when Isela and Eric approach your table.

"Happy birthday, Mother Pheonix. I didn't know." Isela offers politely, cheerfully. Eric stays quiet, a faithful bodyguard sipping water. "I didn't know that you even had one. I know that sounds awful--"

You give her a wave, smiling, "I don't know if it is or not. I guess it's just the day they picked. I don't remember having a birthday or...creation day?"

"Decanting." Cephie offers politely. You turn to look at her, "[If you're loomed, its called your DCANTDay.]"

Isela and Eric look confused but give a small nod as Cephie explains, "Her creation would be called a Decanting."

"Ah. Interesting." Isela nods politely, before glancing to you, "These are some interesting allies you've gained for us, Mother Pheonix. I look forward to seeing them in action."

"You will. I believe they'll start sparring as soon as night falls." You explain, picking at a bit of crunchy pastry. "From what I've seen, I think most if not all of them could take on a Colossus by themselves. At least, their captain can."

After a bit of polite conversation about work, and the council, and the war, Isela excuses herself with a duck of her head. They drift away through the crowd to accost one of the many Voidmarines trudging through the room. You watch as a young woman opens up her suit and steps out to speak more comfortably. The armor stiffens but hangs over her shoulder like a guardian angel.

"[So, how do you know I'm Loomed?]"

"[Don't laugh?]"

You nod.

"[The shape of your belly-button. It's less organic than it should be. When it's more squared than circular, that's usually a hallmark for an old or ill-repaired loom.]"

"[How do you know this?]" You question, shaking your head.

"[Well, y'know, you in--]"

"[No! About the oddly shaped belly button-- SEED have mercy. I actually said that.]"

Cephie giggles, "[Facechanger, remember? It's my job to create a detailed mask to wear.]"

You nod after that. Then -- "Are you wearing a mask right now?"

Cephie smiles at you with sharpened teeth, looking up from her plate. "Are you?"



Neither of you answers the question. Instead, you rise to find one of the Thornton drug peddlers to accost. Cephie approaches him, gesturing for you to go around the other side. When you're in position, Cephie wraps an arm around his shoulder, leaning in close. "So, buddy, what type of stimulants you have fo--"

"Look, Emma made all this stuff free for everyone. No need to threaten. I've got [methyl​enedioxy​methamphetamine, lit MDMA], [amphetamines], a [tetrahydrocannabinol] blend -- "

Its Cephie turn to cut him off, "Bug oil?"

The man pauses, squinting at Cephie. "That will cost you."

"Charge it to Lady Pheonix's account -- and we'll take--"



You and Cephie approach the makeshift dancefloor. You, embarrassed and concerned, while Cephie is confident. She directs you gently. Move this way, shift this way, do this, hold here -- and it isn't long before you're enjoying yourself while dancing to the thrumming bass of some random track. A gaunt, skeletal man flicks something on the datapad, and the music shifts--



--you lean on Cephie as you watch the two Voidmarines step foot into a full ring. A blond Family-Woman laugh, standing between the two. The twins from earlier step out of their armor, flexing, and boasting. With an air of practiced bravado, they shove at one another, until they receive two shots of [vokda]. They lock arms, and each toss back the other's shot. With a step back, their armor seals around them. One bears a Red [lion beast, great horned feline] design on his breast, while the other bears a Blue design of the same on his.

The woman hurries out of their way, and the twins take a swing at one another in their armor.

[33 vs. 18] The crack is deafening, as Blue slams his gauntlet hard into the torso of Red. The armor creaks, but Red grabs his opponent's hand as Blue tries to strike him again with a savage uppercut. He twists down, pulling his brother to the ground and stomping on the arm-joint with a sickening pop.

[9 vs. 14] The two haphazardly wrestle with each other on the ground, until Blue twists and swings a fist hard into his brother's sensor array. Then Blue is on top, striking at Red with brutal blows that dent the suits' metal. Whenever Red manages to dodge,  cracks form in the ground below.

[21 vs. 32] Blue keeps up his relentless flurry of blows until Red finally taps on the ground. "See!" Blue booms over to the blond lady, "I told you I was a better figh--"

[40 vs. 28] Red's arm twists back, and he slams his fist into Blue's torso with a sudden burst of energy that sends his brother out of the ring. "And I said I was! You're stronger, you dumb bastard!" Red calls after his brother, laughing. Blue stumbles out of his armor, growling, and Red does the same.

The fight between the two operators is a little less exciting. Gone are the cataclysmic forces that they wielded before, as, without the armor and technology, they are little more than augmented humans. However, the crowd of SEED and Family folk find it amusing and exciting -- that is, until the blonde drags the two out of the ring with a giggle.

[11] Cephie gives you a sudden shove, and you trip into the ring. But you are the epitome of grace and elegance as you arrest your momentum and straighten up.

[5] Eric steps into the ring, with a grin--



...

...

...



The earth spreads out below you, the red and gray rock twisted by the weather into shapes that no computer could genuinely simulate. Your head throbs with the weight of your intoxication, and you feel -- odd. Two figures follow you -- one with wings of fire and one with wings of black-- but you pay them no attention, no second glances. The moonless night hangs heavy with beautiful stars, the entire galaxy twisting itself out before you in the sky's void. At this moment, you are not Pheonix. Not your Ancestors. Not your Line. You are Pheobe Gainer --

..and I am f-free...



...

...

...



You eat breakfast in Cephie's ship with Emma and Cephie herself. Quietly. Emma eats a porridge, flavored with eggs and bacon. Cephie is eating some abomination of a sandwich made from ground meat, the patties bloody and rare. On the other hand, you pick at a bowl of 'stir-fried rice,' trying to tame your writhing stomach.

"We have to attend Service." Emma finally breaks the silence. Cephie gives a nod. You, instead, plant your face on the table and heave a sigh.

"Tell them I'm dead." You grumble.

"Because that will work out so -wonderfully- won't it." Emma snarks, shaking her head and passing you by. She musses your already tangled hair as she leaves. Cephie sniffs, itching at her nose and rising, "I need a shower. I still smell like a bug."

...help me get out of this... You plead to yourself as you're left alone. Should I break my leg? Pretend I tripped?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 27, 2020, 12:52:28 am
The Interface lives within you.  Use it to defeat the hangover.

Willfully negate the effects of the hangover.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 27, 2020, 09:09:48 am
Mind over matter, Hangover be gone!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 27, 2020, 09:27:19 am
How much fine-grained control does the Interface has?

...and could we use it, in extremis, to prevent Plague possession? Kill off any nanites inside us?


((In the meantime, we're gonna pull a Jessica Atriedes and will these intoxicants into submission. Amusing.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on July 27, 2020, 10:37:50 am
Messing with your own neurology and chemical balance with little training is not recommended!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 27, 2020, 03:38:16 pm
I think she means getting us out of attending service. Unfortunately I don’t currently have an idea for how to do that, maybe trying to convince Emma that since we’re hungover, that attending would cause us to miss parts?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 27, 2020, 07:09:01 pm
How much fine-grained control does the Interface has?

...and could we use it, in extremis, to prevent Plague possession? Kill off any nanites inside us?

We had to do exactly that once before, in Rodstadt. It's not foolproof, and there's certain damage left by such infections that only time can heal... but it's a great deal better than nothing. We'd have lost ourself without it.

Good morning!
Try a Healing Surge-- shower off last night's oils-- see if it helps? It'd be problematic, shirking the service held in your name... if that's what you need, of course, we can try and devise an excuse for you. We can try.

No breaking of limbs, I should think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 27, 2020, 09:23:43 pm
[20] The healing surge removes a great deal of the aches and pains you feel. There's still a touch of dizziness, but you don't feel quite as bad as you did before. You rise, snagging some of the more modest clothes that Cephie has available, and a towel. You climb into the spare shower, letting the boiling hot water pour down over you. Steam rises from the tiles.

You drink your fill before you start scrubbing the oil from your skin--



You and Cephie emerge from the lander into the chaos of the landing pad. The Pirates, the Familia, and the most loyal of SEED are scattered haphazardly across its' entirety. Some are still unconscious, while others stir to devour the breakfast buffet line. Eric waves at you from the buffet line, a huge bruise across one side of his face. The 'Red and Blue' twins are lounging on one of the couches, tangled in a blanket with the blonde. Murdach, you notice, is also unconscious, but still within his armor. Bottle after bottle lays at his feet, as well as what you vaguely remember as drug dispensers.

Cephie sneezes, rubbing at her nose. "Emma says we can meet her and the rest of your retinue at level zero. In like...fifteen minutes" You nod, stepping forward to the buffet line -- you pause when you notice masonry on the floor-- and glancing up, you realize there's a voidmarine shaped crack in the landing pad ceiling.

You don't question it, opting instead to fill up on starches. Eric steals a seat across from you, "Going to be honest with you, Mother Pheonix, that was the most human I've ever seen you act."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 27, 2020, 09:29:03 pm
Now it's our turn to start charging for property damage.

"I can't really remember it.  Did we fight?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 27, 2020, 09:32:44 pm
"Fighting would imply there was a competition." Eric laughs, rubbing at his jaw and face. "You beat the shit out of me." There's a moment of hesitation, and he frowns. "I'-- I'm sorry, that was too forward of me Mother Pheonix. I would like to also apologize for challenging you. The alcohol got the better of me, and Isela ordered me to relax."

Suddenly, Eric is stiff, straight-backed, his emotions suppressed. His willpower coils tight around him like armor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 27, 2020, 09:36:46 pm
"That's alright, Eric.  It was a day specifically for indiscretions and poor decision-making. I'm sorry if I was too rough with you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 27, 2020, 09:54:37 pm
"Yes, Mother Pheonix. Thank you. Though, I am glad we had that talk last night. It cleared up a lot." Eric bows his head, and you inwardly sigh. You remember no conversation, and, for the briefest of moments, you had hoped Eric would...Nevermind. It's unnecessary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 27, 2020, 10:01:26 pm
Something on your mind?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 27, 2020, 10:06:55 pm
I think it’s clear she doesn’t want to talk about it, then again, maybe I misinterpreted the signal
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 27, 2020, 10:08:37 pm
[7] No.

You smile and dip him a serene nod, leaving your meal unfinished as you rise from the table and move to the mentioned meeting point.

[20]...my only friends are Cephie and Emma. And...do they even count as friends? William I guess too, but...it's nothing important. I just...

It's nothing. I've a war to win and a galaxy to conquer. Friendships can wait. Its not like I'll ever be able to trust them anyway. Everyone wants something in the end.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 27, 2020, 10:20:22 pm
Friendships are important for your mental health.  Perhaps you can try approaching Eric another time, or even approach one of your ministers.  If you could befriend one of the Pirates, that could be useful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 27, 2020, 11:27:40 pm
Ha-hm, maybe not the ministers. Convoluted, backbiting sort of folk, they.
Isela, perhaps. Eric, if not for his zealotry.

...

It was... a joy, to see you as yourself last night. Unburdened. Phoebe Gainer.
I have sought in past, to identify people you can relax around. You deserve such closeness-es as mere dust elders cannot offer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 28, 2020, 12:08:05 am
I think Phoenix was saying that she would like to be friends with Eric.  You disapprove?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 28, 2020, 12:40:41 am
No!

Just-- he's a believer. His faith has meant everything to him. The last time we disturbed that faith... it was a near thing. A near thing.
Eric would be a wonderful friend. He's one of the few people on this rock who's struck me as well and truly trustworthy. I just don't know how to go to "friend" from "god".
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 28, 2020, 12:52:22 am
i think we've made a good first step already.  We are a more human god than SEED, and this allows us to be more relatable, even to the faithful.  Dropping formal language and tone around Eric could help, and if we can make him loyal by friendship rather than solely through faith, that will put us in a better position to ensure his long-term support.

Also, sparring could be an activity that would allow us to bond with him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 28, 2020, 06:36:05 am
Its time to open up and try to make some friends.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 28, 2020, 09:42:55 am
Everyone wants something in the end.

See, this is why I don't trust or particularly like Cephie.

...don't tell Cephie I said that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 28, 2020, 10:45:05 pm
...hah. I won't. So I should try to open up more around Eric? Drop the formalities and see how he responds? I'll give it a shot, I suppose.

The elevator door slides open, and you step out into your 'level'. William, Isela, the Ministers, and Emma lounge comfortably in the waiting area. Emma, however, rises, directing you to your bedroom. "I was just informed -- the Khagnate has sent a emissary to view the service and meet with you after. The Council has prepared an outfit for you."

"That is...abrupt."

"Mellone told me he just arrived."

You sigh, stretching as you drift into your bedroom.

What...is this?

A long-sleeved tunic hangs from your door, ornate with gold thread, dyed with oranges and reds. A crimson capelet with a jade brooch hangs over the shoulder with the sleeve removed. It comes with a pair of black silk leggings, and you note with a scowl that there's far too many laces down the sides. A long, dangly belt falls from the waist, a sash of blue with intricate golden stichwork.

"What is this, Emma?" You call, sharply.

"An Outlander gift from the Khagnate. We of course, modified it--"

"Why is it so orange- is it even my size?!"

"It might be a bit small--"

You eye the fabric, frowning.

Do you wear what has been provided for you? Or choose something else?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 28, 2020, 10:52:19 pm
Wear what’s been provided
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 28, 2020, 11:09:23 pm
The capelet is pretty-- you could wear that, and eschew the rest for a uniform. A nod to the Outlanders' generosity; an assertion of your position as soldier-queen.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 28, 2020, 11:20:33 pm
You're not the Khaganate's dog.  They requested this alliance.  Choose one item to wear, one that fits, and ignore the rest.  Plus, consider the context.  The most faithful of your people are here, and they would not be thrilled to see you wearing the garb of the Outlanders, who rejected this religion, during a religious service.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on July 29, 2020, 01:03:54 am
Ha, they probably heard you were fiery, Phoenix, and wanted to get you a matching outfit.

Turning down a gift is rude, but maybe you want to a be a bit rude?

Perhaps if you do not like the leggings choose something in your own style that matches the top.

Belt is nice though.  Maybe just grab the belt and capelet with the brooch and pick something else that matches them better.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 29, 2020, 03:56:55 am
If you want to wear it wear it, if you don't want to don't.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 29, 2020, 11:30:39 am
You give the nod to yourself. Instead of the Outlander clothing, you dress in a SEED military uniform. After you finish lacing the boots and buttoning the shirt, you pull on the belt, tightening the blue sash around your slim waist. The capelet drapes over your shoulder, and after a glance in the mirror, you step out the door.

"Damn." Emma murmurs.

"Pay up." Cephie giggles, as credits exchange hands.



The services drag on, as they often do. You sit in the front of the crowds but keep your distance from them and the center stage. Instead, you try your best to look imperious, listening to them preach and pontificate. You hear them call out sinners and heretics, those that would deny you. Then theres the lessons about health and wellbeing.

You find it amusing that the scientific data shared is about the damages of alcohol on the liver and the damage of other drugs on the brain. You feel like Minister Sterling is trying to say something.



You rise from your chair during one of the recesses, stretching your long limbs and heading out the door, when Minister Mellone intercepts you. The council is waiting for you.

You stride into the chamber, taking your place at the head of the table, and sit patiently until the emissary enters. Stocky, with thick muscles, a long reddish-brown beard, and dark eyes. His outfit is of wools and leathers, and a long, bone-handled knife hangs off his belt. His guards are dressed the same, except for the las-guns at their shoulders. Your bodyguards quietly, tensely consider them as they enter.

"Greetings -- It is a gift to be met with on such short notice, Pheonix of the Holylands. May I present the emissary of Khan Samkrend: [Khudal, lit falsehood, prank, fool] Of The City Clan."

Khudal is younger than his announcer, and dressed in lavish cashmere, with insect silks and well-tooled leathers. Tall, dark-skinned, with a cold, calculating stare that finds you in an instant. His hair, unlike the others, is pitch black.

"[What a poor reception.]" Khudal complains to his herald in the Outlander Tongue while smiling at you. "[Why do we seek to ally with these priestly paupers?]"

"Khudal says you are truly masters of hospitality."

"[And she isn't even wearing the gift -- too freewilled, I would think.]"

"He says you look wonderful in the silks of the Outland, your highness."

"[Ask her what she might offer us, if we were to ally, besides too many mouths to feed.]"

"Khudal wishes to how an alliance would be beneficial? For both of us. In your own words."

Isela and Mellone look uncomfortable, but hold their tongues. Emma frowns quietly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 29, 2020, 01:47:20 pm
"It is too often that two rising powers find themselves at war.  An alliance will allow us to avert a costly conflict and ensure both our nations' continued prosperity.  In addition, the Khanate would benefit from our advanced technology.  In just a few years, we will have the capability to enter the Void and explore other worlds."

Smile.  "Have you seen our armaments?  This is a shield belt that neutralizes incoming fire.  Would you like to see a demonstration, alongside some of our weapons?"

If he says yes, get one of the Voidmarines to put on a demonstration of military might.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 29, 2020, 02:09:23 pm
((Ah-hm... gimme a few. I've an idea or two to write out.))

...my question is this.
What are we willing to offer these people? Our technology is potent, but the Void-gear is in short supply; we haven't enough to properly outfit our own Crusaders, let alone the armies of another polity.

We could offer our military aid, perhaps, towards the consolidation of the Khaganate?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 29, 2020, 03:15:03 pm
We offer them the chance to resolve our age-old differences, which have existed since the time of SEED, in a peaceful manner.  With the Voidmarines on our side, we would otherwise wipe them out completely, as we would be at war due to the Pirates' ocean claims.  It would just be a matter of time.

Don't forget that we have tens of thousands of credits earmarked for planetary development and weapons manufacturing.  If we somehow averted war without an alliance, the Outlanders would shortly become irrelevant anyway, as they do not have a connection to the larger galaxy, which we can use to purchase weapons and mercenaries.

Their influence and strength will wane while ours will wax.  This is their last chance to avoid irrelevance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 29, 2020, 06:06:56 pm
Will they see it that way, I wonder?

"It is too often that two rising powers find themselves at war.  An alliance will allow us to avert a costly conflict and ensure both our nations' continued prosperity.  In addition, the Khanate would benefit from our advanced technology.  In just a few years, we will have the capability to enter the Void and explore other worlds."

Smile.  "Have you seen our armaments?  This is a shield belt that neutralizes incoming fire.  Would you like to see a demonstration, alongside some of our weapons?"

If he says yes, get one of the Voidmarines to put on a demonstration of military might.


+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 29, 2020, 09:39:21 pm
The Herald begins to translate it into an Outland tongue, but the Emissary waves a hand at him. "[Let us see it then.]"



You stand in one of the new gardens that fill the Fortress. Young plants sprout through rich, black dirt. 'Red' and 'Blue' approach, their loose jumpsuits are hanging undone. The Voidmarine suits follow loyally, coming to a stop, and Khudal eyes the machine up.

"I'm Ethan." The twin with the blue crest gives a bow.

"Finn." The twin with the red crest follows his brother's lead. "[We're assigned as your bodyguards, Patches. We're also to convert to your local religion to smooth over diplomatic ties -- people consider us 'demons'.]"

"Fantastic-- would one of you be so kind as to put on a bit of demonstration for the Emissary?"

"Dibs!" Ethan calls, and Finn scowls but waves him away.

To your surprise, Khudal removes his jacket, then his coat, tossing them to the Herald. One of his soldiers presses a knife belt into his hand. "[Tell her I'll test her 'demon' first hand.]" He explains calmly, strapping the belt around his sinewy waist. You take a moment to appraise the wiry man and are unsurprised by the lean muscle he bears. What does surprise you is the five jagged scars across his side, and the twisting, raised flesh of an old burn across his right pectoral. He smiles at you, and in perfect Scholar's tongue, "I am not afraid of fire, Pheonix."

[20] You listen intently as the Herald draws near the Emissary. They speak in hushed and quiet tones, but you are close enough to hear. "[Prince-- you cannot be--- demon ---]"

Khudal says nothing, directing a glare at the Herald, then ticking his head to you. "[Get me permission to play with her toy.]"

"Khudal--Khudal wishes to...wishes to spar with the...Eh-than being."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 29, 2020, 09:58:31 pm
Our diplomat is a prince?  Interesting.

"Of course, but please try not to kill each other.  If one fighter wishes to withdraw, let them go and do not press the advantage."

Carefully watch the sparring.  If things get too heated or dangerous, use our aura to stop the fight.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 29, 2020, 10:14:35 pm
"With...with Ethan in the...armor." The Herald continues, blanching at your approval. Khudal nods, stretching and twisting.

"[Heard. Firs' job is an execution.]" Ethan snarks.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 29, 2020, 10:16:14 pm
"Honored emissary, I do not mean to offend, but I'm not sure that you would survive the experience."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 29, 2020, 10:21:18 pm
"[She wishes to show me the force of her arms. I wish to see them first hand. Did she not think I would call her bluff? How can I tell if this is a tin soldier or not?]"

"Khudal insists...until...until first blood?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 29, 2020, 10:22:31 pm
"Very well.  Until first blood, but no further."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 30, 2020, 10:37:57 am
Ethan shakes his head, stepping back into his armor. The Voidmarine flexes his fingers and turns his sensors towards Khudal. With a dramatic twist, Ethan draws out a long combat knife. He crouches, and the two start to circle one another, the dirt spreading out beneath the massive machine.

[18 vs. 20+3][18] Ethan pushes forward suddenly, bringing the combat knife around in a wide arc. Khudal steps out of the way, to one side, then lunges to slam his knife into the 'head' of the armor. There's a creak as the knife gets stuck. The Outlander rolls away. He rises, drawing out another blade as Ethan straightens up.

[4 vs 13+3] [19] Ethan lunges again, but Khudal dodges, and with all his might shoves the Voidmarine to the ground. Ethan sprawls into the dirt. He tries to rise, but Khudal is fast and slams a knife into the sensor array again. With a twist and help from the other blade, it pops off, hanging by the wiring harness.

Khudal draws back, breathing hard as the Voidmarine turns to face him. With the primary array gone, another set open on Ethan's armored torso, popping free of the hard carapace to focus on Khudal. The Outlander gestures and another knife finds its way to his hand

"[I'm impressed savage.]" Ethan spits.

"[I am not, [demon].]" Khudal returns.

[16 vs 15+3] The Voidmarine moves fast at that, and savagely slices at Khudal, who barely dodges out of the way, scrabbling and falling into the dirt. Khudal pulls himself away from the machine as it begins to bear down on him with savage intent-- Khudal's knife shatters on the chest plate. He pulls himself to his feet, and one of his men throw him another knife.

 "[You do not bleed.]" The Outlander states, rising to his feet.

"[Jus' noticed, huh?]" Ethan laughs, the two circling. Ethan, despite his clear advantage, is tense.

[8 vs 12+3] Khudal gives a bow, but the knife shifts within his hand-- and, with a twist of his muscles, he flicks it through the air.

But not at the armored Ethan, instead at lounging, defenseless Finn. The knife thunks into his shoulder-- he yelps. Blood begins to drip from the wound as he pulls it out, rapidly rising at the threat--

"You BASTAR-" Ethan growls, starting forward-- until Outlander guns are drawn and leveled. Not at him, but at the ring of Crusaders that surround you.

"First blood." Khudal turns his back on the enraged Voidmarine to bow to you. The only movement is from the medics attending to Finn.

A ragged sigh escapes from Ethan's speakers, then. "Clever. We never said who's blood, did we?"

"An apt metaphor for war, isn't it, Pheonix?" Khudal questions, in perfect Scholar's tongue. His guards lower their weapons, and yours do the same. "No matter how strong you are, how invincible your armor, your technology, there's always a weak point. A flaw. Usually someone completely defenseless. Do you understand, young [queen]?"

Then, back in the Outlander tongue, "[I know you can speak my language. I prefer it to the Scholar's. Let us converse without our courts.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 30, 2020, 11:31:49 am
These people play dirty not sure if they are people we can trust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 30, 2020, 12:03:59 pm
Hmm.  He is quite capable, even if he couldn't pierce the armor.

"[I must admit, that was an impressive display.  You are a prince of the Khanate?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 30, 2020, 12:48:51 pm
When the last of the courtiers leaves, the Outlander all but collapses in on himself. He holds his chest, taking heavy, calming gasps. "Impressive?! That was all luck! That thing nearly killed me every time it moved! A terrifying beast-- worse than a Barker."

"But yes, as my good friend revealed far too early in the game, I am Rekhyt Samkrend, Third-born of Khan Samkrend. It's a pleasure to meet you...?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 30, 2020, 12:54:02 pm
[Pheonix]
((Others add more if needed. I’m assuming the question mark means he wants our name))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 30, 2020, 01:26:16 pm
Ha! I like this one.

Might as well choose for yourself the name you'd like these folk to know you by. Phoebe Gainer? Phoenix-of-Sol? Fire-Blooms-Flowers?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 30, 2020, 06:02:38 pm
"[I am <name here>.  It is a pleasure to meet you at last, Prince Samkrend.  Tell me truly, in private.  I will keep your words in the strictest confidence.  Is the Khanate really willing to ally with us?  Our people have a long and contentious history.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 30, 2020, 06:04:01 pm
"I am <name here>.  It is a pleasure to meet you at last, Prince Samkrend.  Tell me truly, in private.  I will keep your words in the strictest confidence.  Is the Khanate really willing to ally with us?  Our people have a long and contentious history."
To confirm, this is in the Outlander toungue, right?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 30, 2020, 06:04:34 pm
Ah, right.  Edited.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 30, 2020, 06:46:45 pm
"Well met, Pheobe of Clan Gainer. You are related to Black Gainer. She's my [godmother]. She organized my visit."

"As for that..." Rekhyt frowns, "I'm going to get down to the rivets of the matter. You need laborers. We need technology and expertise. Alliances only last between family. Anything else we would be expected to betray."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 30, 2020, 06:50:45 pm
"[Understood and not unexpected.  Would there be significant instability caused by such an alliance?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 30, 2020, 08:33:01 pm
"Not from my people. Perhaps yours?" Rekhyt shrugs. "But whichever of my family is honored with your acceptance will be powerful no matter their actual position. As such there is competition. Blood may be shed when my father passes."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 30, 2020, 09:34:17 pm
"[Hmm.  I'm not sure that our peoples will be able to interact with one another without some conflict due to differences in religion and culture.  If our states unified, would each of us maintain the current system of government with few changes?  One state but multiple systems?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 30, 2020, 09:49:47 pm
"As a god, are you immortal? Isn't this but one fleeting moment? There will always be conflict. But the more our people come together, work together, and get pushed together by the forces of authority, the more chances there are to find common ground. Will they be able to rebel, when there is no other option?" Rekhyt looks around the garden, starting to pace through the sprouting greenery. "Tabbet and Mellone are the first two of Outlander descent to hold such power within your Holyland. Do you find them loyal and true? Hardworking?"

"The specifics shouldn't be a concern. The Outlands will not bow to you. The Holyland will not bow to us." He smiles, pausing at a water feature studded with lily pads and bright blue algae. "It would be difficult for you to rule the thousand clans. My father doesn't even try. Give it small changes, and perhaps in a hundred years, you will be looking at a planet unified in culture and religion. Not the same -- no culture remains the same, but change is good, isn't it?" He kneels, examing a small plant. "A good ruler plants trees that they will never sit beneath."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 30, 2020, 09:53:26 pm
Now that he is no longer "Khudal," he seems pretty frank and reasonable.  I think I would support an alliance.  Better that than a protracted war.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 30, 2020, 10:03:33 pm
This all makes sense to me. I support the alliance
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on July 30, 2020, 11:09:31 pm
You need to discuss with him the nature of this alliance though.

Show him the barker, explain it is a pet.

Ask him about the lands nearby that you may want to acquire that belong to other clans.

I am worried about trusting a culture that can not hold to bargains outside blood ties though.  Seeing such as a bonus in a deal is fine, but to have such a culture of betrayal.  Perhaps they are pushing hard to get you to agree to more then they would accept in a negotiation stance.

You hold a great deal to your relations and it seems would die for them.  Even Emma and her brother now, despite the strain between you.  It is a noble trait but be cautious about who you put that trust in.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 30, 2020, 11:10:19 pm
I support an alliance - if the details and terms are adequate and to our liking.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 30, 2020, 11:28:35 pm
"I support the idea. We need to hammer out the details and understand where we stand." You explain, with a frown. "I'm sure such things would be better negotiated by our diplomats rather than just the two of us in this room."

"Of course. I never expected such a monumental agreement to be made so quickly. I would think you a fool." Rekhyt rises, approaching you. "My father still wishes to meet you. Still wishes to speak to you. Outlanders...find limits." He takes a step forward, smiling. "I suppose that's why SEED pushed us to the margins, isn't it? Too many questions. Too many limits found."

"Is that why you pushed my limits as Khudal?" You question, tilting your head. "To try and rouse my anger?"

"I am not afraid of fire, Pheobe. Why else would I seek you out of my own volition? Do you think my father sent me here? That my government supports me? That I'm anything but a fool?" He shrugs, pacing down the path pass you. "Consider your choices carefully, is all I recommend. One god to another."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 30, 2020, 11:32:31 pm
"[When I visit your father, are there any social mores I should be aware of?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 30, 2020, 11:45:04 pm
"You will be tested. You will be adopted into a clan. Speak with Mellone. She can teach you what you need to know." With a glance at the door, "But let me give you a lesson on Outlander [theology], since you need to compete with our belief."

"Gods are a creation of man. Among some of the clans, I am held as divinity. My father moreso. Was it fate? To our uneducated, to those without will, yes, because they cannot grasp the thought of personal agency in the affairs of the world. The smart amongst us know that divinity is given by those that worship to those that have reached out into the world and pushed their limits. Show the clans that you will push your limits. Show them that you are the divinity you claim to be."

"What do you wish from the Outlands? What is it that you wish to gain? To hold, to grab, to seize?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 30, 2020, 11:57:02 pm
"Power to bring the Plague to heel. Safety for those who I protect. New life to bring to this pale ghost of a holy fortress. The wisdom to wield sovereignty, and the will to enforce it - the will to protect this sanctum, this refuge. To rise terrible and triumphant from the ashes of a broken Holy City. To wrest dominion and this world from the maw of the ravenous Plague."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 31, 2020, 12:37:30 am
"Power to bring the Plague to heel. Safety for those who I protect. New life to bring to this pale ghost of a holy fortress. The wisdom to wield sovereignty, and the will to enforce it - the will to protect this sanctum, this refuge. To rise terrible and triumphant from the ashes of a broken holy city. To wrest dominion and this world from the maw of the ravenous Plague."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 31, 2020, 12:41:19 am
...time to put our cards on the table.

Sigh. "To understand that, Rekhyt Samkrend, you must understand the scope of the war I fight."

A show of will now. Writhing fire, swift and sinuous to mark your words.

"I'm not of this earth. My enemies aren't either. There's an apocalypse coming on this planet, and a conquering army like no-one here's ever seen: an army of void-soldiers like the fellow you fought earlier, led by a [demon] with power far beyond my own. Twelve years, and they'll be on us-- meanwhile, the Plague prepares a horde fit to scour us all. Our land, then yours."

"It's fallen to me to beat back the coming storm. I move to unify this world-- to preserve us all, as best I can."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 31, 2020, 12:43:06 am
They don't need to know that, not yet.  Certainly not before the majority of our own people are aware of it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 31, 2020, 12:54:32 am
Given the scope of what we'll be demanding (sacred land for our pirates!)... all our negotiations are smoke in the wind, if we can't somehow bypass (or invoke) the rule of blood-tie. We need urgency enough to merit the breaking of traditions-- what better urgency than the truth as we have seen it? It seems to me that the Outlanders, the proponents of man-made gods, would be more receptive to such notions than our own people.

It's... a brash move, I'll grant. I will accept "not yet", if you feel it necessary (or at Phoenix's own discretion).
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 31, 2020, 01:15:18 am
They may come to the "wrong" conclusion.  To deal with such a threat, the entire world would need to be united, and they may think that having one government instead of, effectively, two allied governments would be the better way to face Magnus.  They may see that we don't have hundreds of years, as the prince said, to unite our peoples, but rather ten years.  A pre-emptive, surprise attack on our people, in order to truly unite us, might be seen as necessary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on July 31, 2020, 01:33:24 am
...I suppose.
Consider my words retracted.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on July 31, 2020, 04:38:01 am
"Power to bring the Plague to heel. Safety for those who I protect. New life to bring to this pale ghost of a holy fortress. The wisdom to wield sovereignty, and the will to enforce it - the will to protect this sanctum, this refuge. To rise terrible and triumphant from the ashes of a broken holy city. To wrest dominion and this world from the maw of the ravenous Plague."
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 31, 2020, 11:06:51 pm
"The age-old adage of every [Tyrant], I see. I need more power to protect!" Rekhyt laughs. "Seeking power to protect... Do you feel that is the only way you can be of use? That protection is all a leader should do? Why this world? Why does it matter over your own happiness? No one is ever powerful and happy."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on July 31, 2020, 11:11:51 pm
I think Phoenix should respond to that herself. It's a very personal question.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on July 31, 2020, 11:23:16 pm
Agreed
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on July 31, 2020, 11:38:24 pm
[11 vs 18] You stare at Rekhyt in silence.

[1 vs 7] You break before he does. You take a step forward, then another, suddenly reaching out and grabbing at the collar of his undone jacket. He doesn't flinch as you twist the fabric tightly in your hand and lift. Your hand shakes as the knuckles go white. "No. I hate this. I hate having these people too afraid or to-- I didn't want this."

"But you saw a problem? You saw something that you wanted changed -- and you still see something. Something you cannot let go." Rekhyt questions. You slowly give a nod.

"All the people who...who expected me to fight, to protect, to do my duty," You spit the word, "They--"

"Did nothing. You're here of your own choice. Of your own agency. You're powerful enough that you don't have to be here, aren't you? Could anyone really stop you?"

"...No."

"Remember that. Even if it seems like an illusion, you always have a choice. Win your war -- will your people be upset with you if you left them afterward? Or do you want to be chained here forever? Do you enjoy your own suffering?"

"Why are you doing this?" You snap, tightening your grip. Rekhyt lets you.

"I am one of your prospects for marriage, Pheobe. Would I be a good husband if my spouse suffered?" Rekhyt laughs. "Oh don't look so shocked, you must have realized my intent by now." With a shove, he pulls himself away and straigthens up. His eyes narrow slightly. "This is silk, by the way. Do be careful."

"You could become Khan with my support?" You guess.

"Of course not-- I'm not even the spare. But tell me -- who holds more power? You, or Emma? The one on the throne isn't always the one who rules. But, I digress. Enough philosophy and enough of my poor lecture on power. What do you think of my proposal?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on July 31, 2020, 11:48:02 pm
"Hmm.  I will consider it.  Let me see your people and your homeland first, so I would know what I'm getting into.  I'm flattered by your interest, however."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 01, 2020, 06:44:32 am
"Hmm.  I will consider it.  Let me see your people and your homeland first, so I would know what I'm getting into.  I'm flattered by your interest, however."
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 01, 2020, 08:03:30 am
"Are you going to bring your consort or your retainer?" Rekhyt asks, smoothing out his jacket and buttoning it up. "Or both? Such a [conundrum]." There's isn't a hint of sarcasm in his voice. "Emma is quite proficient with politics. While the retainer is quite the spy I hear. You'll need others, too. A good retinue makes the leader."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 01, 2020, 02:19:57 pm
Probably bringing both would be good, as one can point out things the other might not notice
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 01, 2020, 05:31:17 pm
Probably bringing both would be good, as one can point out things the other might not notice
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 01, 2020, 07:36:45 pm
Do you say as such to him?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 01, 2020, 07:37:24 pm
Cephie. Mellone. Nicole. Maybe the Thornton siblings, and a void-soldier or two-- those twins, say.
Regardless, our retinue composition is not information I particularly care to offer Prince Samkrend.

"You know my Council well. How?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 01, 2020, 07:46:24 pm
Cephie. Mellone. Nicole. Maybe the Thornton siblings, and a void-soldier or two-- those twins, say.
Regardless, our retinue composition is not information I particularly care to offer Prince Samkrend.

"You know my Council well. How?"
He probably knows due to the diplomatic talks Emma arranged
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 01, 2020, 08:01:03 pm
You know of no talks. This was the first after Mellone's offer. So, you ask.

"Spies." He admits, bluntly. "Many, many operatives at various levels."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 01, 2020, 08:19:17 pm
If you're bringing a spy with you, don't tell anyone.

"My consort will come with me, but I will leave my retainer here to oversee things.  Minister Mellone and Mother Nicole will come as well, with a couple of bodyguards.  That should be all I need."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 01, 2020, 11:53:27 pm
To lightly trust or not to trust is the question here. What is the consensus? Should I trust him?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 02, 2020, 12:00:17 am
What's to gain by telling him?  At best, he will choose not to share the information and do nothing in response to it, but at worst he will attempt to use it to his advantage, either against his rivals or by informing his allies.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 02, 2020, 06:20:42 am
I wouldn't trust this guy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 02, 2020, 12:17:12 pm
"Ten people. Please provide accommodation for ten people." You state, leaving the specifics out.

With a nod and a smile, Rekhyt turns to take a look at the garden. "We have gardens like this at our palace. I'll show you when you visit. I will take my leav--"

The heavy double doors swing open, and in strides William. His face is a mottled purple, but he gives you a grin and a wink. Behind him, two Warmachines, by chains, drag in five black-bagged individuals in various states of injury. Clothes ripped, with burn marks and minor lacerations. The smell of blood hangs heavy in the air. "Ah! This must be the Emissary!" William gives a bow, rising with a mocking grin as he takes a step forward. "I would apologize for interrupting what I'm sure was an intimate moment of quiet contemplation and diplomacy, but unfortunately, I found some trash on our doorstep, and figured it should be returned to its owner."

Rekhyt looks over the group with a raised brow, and he speaks in the Scholar's tongue, crisply. "Well. This was unexpected. All of my intel suggested you were nothing but a drunk and a criminal, William."

"Oh, I am. But it wasn't like I needed that much help--"

"William-- explain." You order, sharply.

"These fine individuals are the ringleaders of a Outlander spy network. I didn't pick up the pawns, because it wasn't worth it." William smoothly returns. "As you are an angel of Mercy, what better mercy than to return these people to their owners?" He shifts, reaching into his coat and drawing out his pistol. "Unless, of course, you wanted them executed and disposed of."

"You proved your point, William." Rekhyt concedes.

"No, I haven't--" William strides forward, coming face to face with Rekhyt. "Do you know why I don't have any spies in your shithole, tin-pot empire, Emissary?"

"No."

"You. Are. Not. Worth. It." He turns to you, flicking the safety of his pistol off. "Dead or banished, Pheobe?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 02, 2020, 01:10:24 pm
Banished.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 02, 2020, 01:30:27 pm
Banish
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on August 02, 2020, 02:44:57 pm
Let's think about this for a second, how do we think Rekhyt will respond to either option?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 02, 2020, 02:53:32 pm
I would hope that he and his family would be appreciative that we spared their agents.  Do you think it might make us appear weak?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on August 02, 2020, 03:44:24 pm
I was indeed wondering if that was the case. But I don't think my speculation is worth their lives. Banish them.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Hotfire90 on August 02, 2020, 03:51:39 pm
Rekhyt is cunning and bold enough to insult us and our hospitality directly to our face, knowing that we could understand him. Letting his spies go without receiving anything in return would be a waste of an opportunity.

If we let them go we should tell Rekhyt that we're doing it as a favor to him and that we expect the favor to be repaid.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 02, 2020, 04:11:44 pm
We might as well exploit this moment for all it's worth.  It makes sense to frame this as a favor to his government and his family and ask for a favor in return.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 02, 2020, 04:49:04 pm
"We'll release them to Rekhyt as a favor." You explain to William, dipping a nod. With a grin, William slips his pistol back into his gunbelt, and Rekhyt glances at you as he approaches the agents. His eye dances along them as he walks, peeling off hoods and nodding with approval. Then, he gets to the last in line.

She's middle-aged, and missing fingers from her hand. When she spots Rekhyt, her eyes go wide. She makes a muffled whimper, trying to pull away from the chain --

[17+3 vs. 18, 11] -- and in a flash of steel and bone, his knife dances across her neck. She crumples, choking on her own blood as William starts forward and grabs at the Outlander Prince.

[1] "Outlanders owe no favors, Pheobe." Rekhyt doesn't move, and William, after a moment's pause, releases him. Rekhyt uses the black bag that was upon her head to wipe down his blade. "Release the rest or execute them as you see fit."

[18] Your anger threatens to bloom forth into a firestorm, but you contain yourself. "Who was she, William?"

"An ex-Crusader turned Scholar secretary in the Ministry of State." William coldly explains, leaning down to check her pulse. "She was too clean. No drugs, no affairs, enjoyed walking and chatting. I figured she was the [kingpin]."

"She was. A very, very expensive piece in the game." Rekhyt sighs as he slips away his longknife. "Ten years my father cultivated her. Sorry for getting blood in your garden, Pheobe. Let it be known I took no joy in that. But I cannot abide by failure of that magnitude."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 02, 2020, 05:10:03 pm
Outlanders are really into murders, apparently.  Especially on diplomatic missions.

"Fine.  William, exile the surviving spies.  Rekhyt, I will see you in the Outlands.  Try not to kill anyone else while you're inside the Holylands."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 02, 2020, 06:38:24 pm
The princeling's spurned our mercy. This we'll address-- but with precision, not spite. Spite sours relations. Spite implies weakness.
I'm inclined to burn the corpse to ashes in a silica urn, right here, right now-- a little show of what we're capable of-- but there's a question I would ask first.

Sigh. "Angel of mercy, Prince Samkrend. That title means much to me."
"Have your people funereal customs for such a one as this?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 02, 2020, 07:07:31 pm
"Not for a clanless failure, no." Rekhyt drops the cloth on the corpse after wiping his hands clean. "Did I upset you by calling your bluff? If so, I apologize, but favors and failures are not a thing to be taken lightly."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 02, 2020, 07:10:41 pm
"I will not weep for the death of a traitor, but in these lands we have laws.  As a guest in this realm, I ask that you abide by our law that prohibits murder."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 02, 2020, 07:39:32 pm
Right... the demonstration, then.

Soft words-- will in the voice. "You'll not mind, then, if I-- tidy my garden."
Incineration. An urn of glass, to contain what remains.

"I will not weep for the death of a traitor, but in these lands we have laws.  As a guest in this realm, I ask that you abide by our law that prohibits murder."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 02, 2020, 09:46:08 pm
Why bother?  We already cowed him with the Voidmarine, and he probably already knows from his spies what we are capable of.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 02, 2020, 09:46:58 pm
Why bother?  We already cowed him with the Voidmarine, and he probably already knows from his spies what we are capable of.
this is a good point
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 02, 2020, 09:58:15 pm


I hope you do not mind if I show him what a true man-made god looks like?

[19][13] Your wings unfurl themselves with a flash of light, but you vent the heat away into the rafters where it can safely dissipate. You take a step forward, towards Rekhyt and the corpse. You gesture towards the woman's chains, and the Warmachines quickly release the body. They back the other captives away a safe distance. Fire dances at the tips of your fingers, burning hot with condensed hydrogen.

Rekhyt stands in stunned silence, and you stare at him, expressionless.

"I wish to tidy my garden, Prince Rekhyt."

You do not need to carve a section of the wall to create a dias, but you do it anyway, casting it into the center of the room. You tick your head to William, who kneels down and comfortably lifts the corpse onto it. You concentrate your fire there, incinerating the remains until there's naught but a fine layer of ash and bone fragments. Rekhyt looks ill, but you and William are quite accustomed to the smell of burning corpses.

"[It reminds of] Rodstadt." William remarks softly, in high Empyreal. "[Our failure there.]"

"[It reminds me of many failures, William.]"

"[You owe me a drink for making me miss that party], Phe-Phe. [I know a nice bar. Illegal. Quiet. Owned by an old friend.]"

"Maybe."

[14][12] You take a step forward, and, after some thought, you shape and twist the stone to entomb the ashes. You trap a hydrogen molecule here, a bit of water and ash there. It's not quite as detailed as you had hoped, but on a small plinth of rock, shaped from glassy, shiny silicon, it is a pistol and a pen. You'll have to modify it later...

"I will not weep for a traitor. We have laws in this land. As a guest, you are to abide by them. Murder is not the same as a lawful execution."

[3] "And Rekhyt?" You turn to face him, and your rage boils over as you step close to him. You stop the careful updrafts protecting him from the heat of your blazing wings, and sweat beads on his skin instantly. "If you kill any more of my people - I will treat you as a threat -- and I will show you why you should fear my flames, Prince."

[15 vs 18][14] Perhaps he sees it as a challenge rather than a promise because he draws on you, his knife a gleam of silver. He doesn't attack. With a grin, you lean forward, and, with a trick of theatrics, you blow burning hot fire on his knife, keeping the heat from burning his hand. Steel melts rapidly, and the blade drops to the ground. You straighten. "You are dismissed, Emissary. I will see you in the Outlands."

Rekhyt's lips quirk. Then, he turns and strides out the door in silence, casting aside the bone handle.

When it slams shut, after the Warmachines take the captives outside, William laughs. "That was hot."

"Oh, my [gods] that pun was awful, William." You rub at your face, feeling your anger cool. "Was it too much?"

"[Gods] no. Well, maybe the Ancestors will have something to say, but I thought you did well utilizing your power. Maybe get Cephie to teach you some acting and theatrics?"

"Maybe."

"So, drinks?"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 02, 2020, 10:11:06 pm
Ah, pleased to see how much control you have been able to achieve.  That knife thing was great, reminds me of that time I gave someone a haircut with micro wormholes.

Did you guys uhhhhhh interrogate them first?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 02, 2020, 10:46:32 pm
The other prisoners? They're alive-- this was naught but a corpse disposal. We can question them later, and sort out the terms of their exile while we're at it.

Drinks at your discretion, godling-- you've surely earned as much, after that little display! 'Tis an elder's joy, to witness the awe you strike in people.
(You shall have to tell us of that haircut sometime, [father/mentor].)


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 02, 2020, 11:21:10 pm
That's a lesson he won't soon forget.  Perhaps we'll be able to continue his lessons in the Outlands.

Go to the bar with William.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 02, 2020, 11:39:39 pm
I'll write the bar scene tomorrow. I need sleeeeep. Let me know if anything doesn't make sense -- interstellar economies are...are a terrifying concept. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Theory_of_Interstellar_Trade (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Theory_of_Interstellar_Trade)


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 02, 2020, 11:48:56 pm
(('Night Egar-- thanks as always for the exposition :) ))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 03, 2020, 09:28:29 pm
"Yeah, let's go get a drink." You murmur, taking one last look at the plinth.

[1] "Wait." You tersely command as anger and frustration rises within. You reach out towards the walls again, carving away the stone with your willpower.

[15][17] You burn away the impurities until the silicon gleams a bright silver. It twists and writhes in your mind's eye until you visualize the man. A body forms, clad in heavy crusader armor, made imperfect by memory. Captain Zachary McKinney kneels faithfully before you once again, a cutter hilt stuck into the ground in supplication. The details are not as strong as you would like, but the name underneath provides all the explanation the statue needs.

Regret threatens to consume your fire, but you tamp it down, and the emotion dies again.

"He was a good man. Loyal. Faithful. All those good things." William offers, quietly, "But regret Can't bring back the dead," and, with a dark chuckle, "Trust me, I've tried."

You nod. Then, in silence, you walk to the elevator.



You pull on the heavy hooded greatcoat, and William rolls up and folding the empty sleeve for you. You give him a smile, before strapping the gas mask to your face. You tuck your hair into the hood and dip him a nod. The two of you walk through the Fortress.

[19] Stalls line the street, selling meat and other items. Pawnshops seem to be the most prevalent, a wide variety of luxury items on sale. Children laugh and play while adults work to plant gardens. Murals line the walls, showing scenes from the mythological history of SEED, of streets and plazas of the Holy City. Great heroes sit in detailed landscapes, usually in some form of contemplation. The scenes, too, bare the mark of the religion -- cogs, steam, pipes, and brass twist into vivid natural landscapes.

[-] Something disconcerting is the amount of fire and blood that drip through the art. The heroes all have halos of fire. Campfires and candles break through the greenery. It creeps around the machinery, which, after pausing to inspect and compare, you find there is often more industry than nature within the works.

[11] There's a mural of you, too. You are clad in golden armor, wearing your wings of red-streaked fire and a halo of gold. You're carefully turned to avoid painting the missing arm, and you stare down at yourself without expression. Machinery, weapons, and cutters surround you in an ornate underlay. Candles lay at the base of it, and a bowl is filled with rations, flowers, and trinkets of cloth.

"There's a better one of you in one of the main halls. You're striking down a worm with a sword of light."

"Let me see it."

"Eh? Vain much."

You ignore him, following him down the elevator again.



[17] Your feet suddenly stop echoing on the tile of the floor as you stare at the mentioned mural. It fills an entire, unbroken wall. You fly triumphantly above a battlefield. One side is the Crusaders, led by a well-rendered Eric. He holds his cutter blade aloft, urging his men forward. The Crusaders look badly beaten, with many of them gravely injured, but they surge forth over the grassy plain with a zealous intensity that the artist captured well. William's Warmachines, their Thorns proudly displayed, loom over the Crusaders, using weapons as big as their brothers-in-arms.

On their opposite is the Plague, horrifyingly painted to capture their terrifying appearance. Insects swarm forth. They all charge out over a blasted wasteland—las-fire streaks through the air. Mortar shells blast into the Plague's ranks.

You hover in the middle of it, striking down a Colossus with your fire. The two of you twisting in battle dominates the scene—your wings of fire burn against the bright day. Blood pools from your wounds, as ichor, drips from the colossus. Its mouth is parted in a scream of pain as it dies.

You look over yourself and find your hair has been painted gold in this. Your golden armor is covered in blood and ichor and mud, but you shine with radiance. A flaming sword held in your hands burns through the beast -- but what draws your attention is your face. You do not wear the helmet like you did, but instead, it reveals your face stretched into a savage, joyous grin.

"They don't think much of me, do they?" You ask William.

"Do you want the truth?"

"Always."

"It's about why you're called the Angel of Mercy."

"Ah."

"They say its because it's only by your mercy they are not dead. One way or the other."

"They fear me?" You carefully question.

"Who doesn't?" William retorts.

"Do you?"

"Why do you think I bother working for you?"



"Hey! Michael! Two glasses of my personal stuff!" William calls as he claims a table in the corner of a poorly-lit room. The speakeasy is hidden behind crates in a warehouse, only accessible e by a carefully concealed door. You pause in the doorframe, staring at the man behind the bar. You hurry to William's table. Surprised to see the barkeep from the public house, back in the Holy City. He nods, pulling out a bottle of wine and pouring two glasses. He drops them on the table without remark.

You peel up your mask just a little to take a drink. The wine burns as it goes down, and you nearly choke. It's strong, very strong.

"[Ascended Wine?]"

"[Yes. Cephie owed me a favor.]"

Is there anything you should discuss with William? Or should you keep this a social visit?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 03, 2020, 09:49:31 pm
Ask him if we need a formal spy arm of the government, even if only for counterspying.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 03, 2020, 09:53:23 pm
Michael! Good to see a familiar face.

I've nothing too pressing for conversation topics-- just checkings in. How are the Thornton siblings holding up these days? Everything alright between them and their Line-instances?

...are they speaking to each other, the Thornton siblings? The last time we saw them together... t'was a tense moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on August 03, 2020, 10:06:20 pm
And ask him how Emma is.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 03, 2020, 11:38:01 pm
"[Do you think we need an formal spy network? If only for counter-espionage?]" You question William, taking a sip of your wine. "Rekhyt [knew a lot.]"

"[All of it worthless.]" William smoothly replies. "[We fed him a lot of bullcrap. I'll leave that up to you, but I feel I do a pretty good job when it comes to these affairs.]"

"[Do you really think so little of our neighbors?]"

"[Yes. I do. But, as I said, that's your call.]"

"[Mmmh. Well, I didn't come here to simply talk business all afternoon. How are you two holding up?]"

[6] "[Fine.]" William sniffs, taking a gulp of his wine. "[We haven't spoke since that...discussion. But we'll get to eventually. I think.]"

You give a small, reluctant nod, but do not press. William tensed up with that question and his smile fled his face to be replaced with a rare scowl. "[How are you getting on with your Ancestors?]"

"[Mine don't really talk that much. I think I figured out how to mute Alphira, which was a joy to discover.]" William shakes his head, "[I don't know how you managed to deal with her for so long.]"

"[I have a lot of patience.]"

"[Liar.]"

"[You're right, I devoured her the first chance I got.]" You grin across the table, showing your teeth, before taking a dainty sip of your wine. "[She was more trouble than she was worth.]"

I think...Emma is doing okay. Last I saw her, she didn't seem too upset with me, or the situation. It...it was an awkward morning.

Instead, "[This is awkward to ask...but are you upset with me over] Emma [and I breaking up?]"

"[Oh, nah. I figured it would happen. You're both really young -- first loves never last. Considering there's an eternity of time for you two to make up -- I'm really not concerned.]"

"[Does she seem upset?]"

"[I think she's sleeping a lot better, one way or the other.]" William snarks, flashing you a grin.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 03, 2020, 11:47:43 pm
It might be useful to ask him if he would be up for daily group training, and whether or not he thinks it would be something Emma might agree to participate in.  Mention our conversation with Ashes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 04, 2020, 12:41:28 am
That's all the questions I had, really. Nice to know things are stable with this one.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 04, 2020, 06:45:25 am
Probably gonna want to start that everyone training thing soon so we can kill that guy when he shows up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 04, 2020, 06:36:26 pm
"[So, would it be an issue for you if we all started sparring and practicing together?]" You question.

"[Wait, what?]" William asks, after a beat. "[I never thought you would be one to want to share the limelight.]"

"[Someone gave me the advice that I would need more practice.]" You explain. "[So, I would like to train with a group of people I trust. Each of you have strengths that I'm lacking.]"

"[Oh. I thought we were actually going to be fighting together.]" William gives a nod, "[I don't see why not. Who else are you thinking of practicing with?]"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 04, 2020, 07:04:15 pm
"Emma, Cephie, and maybe Eric."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 05, 2020, 03:12:07 am
"Emma, Cephie, and maybe Eric."
+1 Those all sound like the best candidates.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 05, 2020, 06:52:06 am
"[Why? Each of them. What's the reasoning?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 05, 2020, 06:58:10 am
Emma seems like she would be excellent at manipulating probabilities, and maybe training with her will help us learn to do the same at a faster rate.  Cephie is a more "experienced" Ascended, and she may know some tricks that we are not aware of.  She's also familiar with Magnus and can help us determine how he fights.  Training with Eric might help us bond with him.  He may also be a candidate for Ascension.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 05, 2020, 07:15:31 am
I thought we also might need their help fighting Magnus, and that was the reason to train together so we could fight as a unit instead of an individual.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 05, 2020, 08:14:58 am
Against the Plague-- absolutely. Against Magnus... perhaps not.

No amount of help will amount to anything, when the time comes to face down that monster: either we'll be ready for him, or not. If not... well, I want to leave our scions with a way out. Safety in the Rim. The Empyre need never know they exist, if they so choose.

...

<Mnemonic query: how does the strength of a Cadet differ from that of a mainliner?>
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 05, 2020, 11:16:14 am
Spoiler: Potential and Cadets (click to show/hide)



William listens intently to your explanation, before prompting, "[And what of me? What do you hope to learn that cannot be taught by Eric?]"

You swirl the wine in your glass.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 05, 2020, 11:27:19 am
William is bold, he fights dirty, and he has extensive combat experience, having trained to fight his entire life.  I'm sure we can learn a lot from him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 05, 2020, 11:40:18 am
"[I'm flattered. I'll slot in into my schedule between all the whoring and drinking.]" William grins across at you.

You feign innocence, "[I hope your customers get a discount with a face like yours.]"

"[Gods above, was that an attempt at wit?]"

"[I try. On occasion.]"

Anything else to discuss, or should you politely make your exit?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 05, 2020, 12:07:51 pm
Is there anything you'd like to discuss? To make small talk over, even? They'll want us back for service, I imagine, but we can delay a little longer yet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 05, 2020, 04:09:01 pm
What service?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 05, 2020, 05:07:08 pm
Ah, sorry-- "services." The ongoing memorial.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 05, 2020, 05:27:28 pm
Oh, I thought that was over for some reason.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 05, 2020, 05:53:36 pm
We should probably go to the services
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 05, 2020, 06:35:54 pm
Agreed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 06, 2020, 02:03:59 am
Probably be bad if we missed it so go back.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 06, 2020, 10:57:56 pm
The two of you chat for a little while longer until William lifts a finger. "Yeah, Phe-Phe. They're calling you back. Something about the twin's conversion?"

You drain your drink and pull the gasmask down. William gives a wave, offering, "I'll be around later."



The amphitheater stretches out beneath you as you cross over the catwalks. The masses are settling into their seats, with Crusaders and Guardians directing the steady flow of traffic. Near the front of the stage, you note the ministers and their families.

But behind the stage, Minister Mellone, Minister Lacey, Emma, and Cephie stand amid a heated argument. The twins stand dressed in Crusader uniforms, their armors at their back. The two manage to loom menacingly without effort, but they look confused.

The argument stops when the Ministers spot your approach. Mellone and Lacey bow their heads before Lacey launches into questioning.

"What is this, Mother Pheonix?" Lacey begins, "These [demons] say they wish to convert to our faith publicly!"

"That isn't important." Emma sighs. "We need to figure out how best to break the news -- these are our new allies."

"They are." You vouch, and Lacey gives you a slow nod of her head.

"I-...if even demons wish to convert...then I cannot...argue." She murmurs, reaching up to tuck the hair in her face back into her robe. "The...the people will be concerned. They will need soothing words, Mother Pheonix."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 06, 2020, 11:43:23 pm
What does it mean to be redeemed? 

Gaze upon these figures, these two believers that stand before you not with animosity, not as malicious spirits, demons clad in the armor of hatred, but as mere men with hopes and dreams who, through the grace of God, are no different than the faithful gathered here today.

They were not always thus.  In the distant past, these were soldiers of the Baron of Steel, inhuman demons that sought the demise of all we held dear.  As we all know, the strength of these demons was so great that they were only stopped at great cost through the desperate struggles of our Crusaders, believers bearing the weapons of righteousness.

I have reached into the souls of our hated enemies, reached deep into their beings, and I have given them the gift of faith.  I have transformed them, transformed the very essence of their souls from living evil into base humanity, and in so doing I have offered them the greatest gift we have to give, the gift of redemption.

In our holy mercy, in our sacred kindness, who are we to deny them this gift?  Our ancient enemies have become our strongest allies, as we should never turn away those that wish to atone for their sins, even ones such as these who truly have so very much to atone for.  Alongside our brave Crusaders, they will purge this world of the Plague and bring us justice for the loss of our Holy SEED.

This is the meaning of redemption.  This is what it means to save a soul.  Witness today the final step in their holy transformation and rejoice, for in Phoenix and in SEED even the most wicked can find hope and love.  No one and nothing is beyond redemption.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 07, 2020, 06:37:11 am
+1 To that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 07, 2020, 11:28:42 am
Fine words-- I hesitate, though, to name all as worthy of redemption. What of the Plague, which is by nature irredeemable?

Regardless, it may be worth discussing the words we intend to use with our councillors here before we speak. If nothing else, the twins ought to know how we intend to portray them.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 07, 2020, 11:12:55 pm
 You outline your speech to those assembled. Lacey, Mellone, and Emma nod, while Ethan and Finn shrug.

"And what would you like us to say or do?" One of the twin's questions.

"And I don't know why you don't expect us to receive a warm welcome -- last night we were the life of the party!" The other volunteers, with a wicked grin. The two of them bump fists.

"That was Family-folk," Emma explains.

"They have the moral strength of wet toast." Lacey snarks, giving a dark glance to Emma. "No true faithful of SEED would ever cavort with unblessed demons."

Emma nods to Lacey in support. Unoffended, "They really do."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 08, 2020, 03:02:49 am
Hmm.  Perhaps there should be some sort of ritual to symbolize their "purification?" 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 08, 2020, 03:21:41 am
Wouldn't the religion already have something like that?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 08, 2020, 04:54:47 pm
Ask Lacey what ritual would be appropriate for a conversion.  If none is mentioned, try having the twins kneel during the speech, then have them stand and face the audience.  Use hydrogen manipulation to gently lift them up after the speech, and then briefly produce a bright white light seeming to emanate from them that shines into the audience.  When the light fades, set them down and create and maintain a glowing gold aura around them.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 08, 2020, 06:32:09 pm
I’m worried what will happen if any of that fails, we could end up harming the twins or others on the stage, or the audience, or ourselves
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 08, 2020, 06:53:02 pm
I don't think it would be particularly dangerous.  We were unable to harm Plague soldiers using the same technique even we wanted to, so I don't see how gently lifting them up a couple feet would be worrisome.  In general, when we fail we become hungry and tired, but we don't lose control and start using our powers wildly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on August 08, 2020, 07:02:47 pm
((Which is why it's a very good thing this isn't an RTD!))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 08, 2020, 07:52:01 pm
((While true, things are still rolled for))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 08, 2020, 08:24:25 pm
Our heir knows what she's doing.

Ask Lacey what ritual would be appropriate for a conversion.  If none is mentioned, try having the twins kneel during the speech, then have them stand and face the audience.  Use hydrogen manipulation to gently lift them up after the speech, and then briefly produce a bright white light seeming to emanate from them that shines into the audience.  When the light fades, set them down and create and maintain a glowing gold aura around them.
+1

Thermodynamics ought to be easier for you than direct light manipulation, if it comes to it. Be prepared to play to what you know.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 08, 2020, 11:28:23 pm
Uhh aren't we fairly sure McCreary was from the crashed ship?  That means these guys are his family of sorts.

Just be truthful with that.  These are distant relatives of the first champion and though weaker and strange they have decided to fight for the church or whatever your calling this little theocracy right now.

It is not what they are that makes them a demon but their actions.  If they seek to aid the cause of SEED then they are kindred spirits or whatever.

I have seen where former foes face down the plague together when circumstances are right.  These guys aren't even foes just.. unusual and untrusted.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 09, 2020, 06:29:07 am
Our heir knows what she's doing.

Ask Lacey what ritual would be appropriate for a conversion.  If none is mentioned, try having the twins kneel during the speech, then have them stand and face the audience.  Use hydrogen manipulation to gently lift them up after the speech, and then briefly produce a bright white light seeming to emanate from them that shines into the audience.  When the light fades, set them down and create and maintain a glowing gold aura around them.
+1
+1 This all looks good to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 09, 2020, 06:35:23 am
Uhh aren't we fairly sure McCreary was from the crashed ship?  That means these guys are his family of sorts.

Just be truthful with that.  These are distant relatives of the first champion and though weaker and strange they have decided to fight for the church or whatever your calling this little theocracy right now.

It is not what they are that makes them a demon but their actions.  If they seek to aid the cause of SEED then they are kindred spirits or whatever.

I have seen where former foes face down the plague together when circumstances are right.  These guys aren't even foes just.. unusual and untrusted.
Yes
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 09, 2020, 07:10:28 am
((There's no evidence that that was McCreary's ship.  The GM even corrected Superdorf when he made that assertion:))

...I say.

>[NAME: Sadil of the Silicon's Rest, Mercrenary's Rest]

This is McCreary's vessel.

((Planet name.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 09, 2020, 07:36:53 am
((There's no evidence that that was McCreary's ship.  The GM even corrected Superdorf when he made that assertion:))

...I say.

>[NAME: Sadil of the Silicon's Rest, Mercrenary's Rest]

This is McCreary's vessel.

((Planet name.))
Oh, thanks for the reminder
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 09, 2020, 07:49:28 am
--
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 09, 2020, 06:01:15 pm
((Sleep deprivation is a helluva drug.))


Thank you.

[17][8 vs. 4+3] "Lacey," You begin, "Have you ever wondered or doubted about the Council? Why should a God need one? You can confide in me." You lace your words with your aura, pressing them into Lacey's mind with a twist of Willpower, inducing the compulsion for truth.

"Yes. I have had my doubts about the Council." She admits, concerned. "Why would a Good need to listen to mere mortals?"

"I am still young with my Divinity." You blithely assure. "The Guidance of Mortals is valuable to me."

"Ah." Lacey nods nervously. "I'm...I'm sorry for my doubts, Mother Pheonix."

"But, please remember, Emma is my mouthpiece. I trust her completely."  Lacey certainly believes your lie, but you catch Emma's glance. "Could you assist me with the first rites?"

"Yes, Mother Pheonix." The zealot bows her head, breathing out a sigh. "I can conduct their first rites and acceptance into the Holyland. Please listen intently...?" She turns to the twins, prompting.

"Ethan [A2911+AB]."

"Finn [A2912+B]."

Weird names.

Lacey begins to direct them earnestly and quickly. She gives orders on their choreography with the air of a patient mother. The twins, after a glance to you, begin listening in earnest. Their demeanor shifts as they straighten from lazy slouches and take on an aggressive stiffness of which you approve

[17+1] You take a deep breath, in and out to steady your nerves. You stiffen your back, clear your face of emotion, and square your shoulders. You unleash your wings and strengthen the reaction, making them stand proud and tall. Then, the three fall in line behind you, and the brightness of your wings force their eyes to the ground. The armor moves to flank them, unbowed. With one last deep sigh, you step out on to the stage.

[11, 11, 6+1] You force your Willpower into your voice, and sparks fly as the sound booms through the auditorium. Not quite as loud, as you would hope, but all of the hundreds of thousands gathered here. Those in front look a little pale, but even those of weak constitution still sit upright, stiffening at your words.

"What does it mean to be redeemed? " You begin lifting the volume of your voice.

"Gaze upon these figures, these two believers that stand before you not with animosity, not as malicious spirits, demons clad in the armor of hatred, but as mere men with hopes and dreams who, through my grace, are no different than the faithful gathered here today." You pause after this to scan the crowd with a sweep of your eyes. At random, you fixate on an individual, before your gaze finds another.

"They were not always thus. In the distant past, these were soldiers of the Baron of Steel, inhuman demons that sought the demise of all we held dear. As we all know, the strength of these demons was so great that they were only stopped at significant cost through the desperate struggles of our Crusaders, believers bearing the weapons of righteousness." You explain, clearly, earning you nods of approval from some of the Scholars

"I have reached into the souls of our hated enemies, reached deep into their beings, and I have given them the gift of faith. I have transformed them, transformed the very essence of their souls from living evil into base humanity, and in so doing I have offered them the greatest gift we have to give, the gift of redemption."

[12]The projection of light is difficult, and Lacey would not be able to reach them if you lifted them. Instead, you create a halo of light and fire, igniting it suddenly. The brothers twitch, but then still as the fire dwindles to a rising light.

"In our holy mercy, in our sacred kindness, who are we to deny them this gift? Our ancient enemies have become our strongest allies, as we should never turn away those that wish to atone for their sins, even ones such as these who truly have so very much to atone for. Alongside our brave Crusaders, they will purge this world of the Plague and bring us justice for the loss of our Holy SEED."

Their glowing halos brighten suddenly as Lacey daubs their foreheads with black oil. The armors, kneel as well as Lacey steps forward to daub oil on their 'helmets.' They rise only to bow to you as their armors raise cutter blades of red fire -- in triumph.

"This is the meaning of redemption! This is what it means to save a soul! Witness today the final step in their holy transformation and rejoice, for in Phoenix and in SEED even the most wicked can find hope and love. No one and nothing is beyond redemption! Hail Pheonix! Hail SEED!"

[-] You do not even give the crowd time to react, turning away imperiously and striding off the stage.

[15+1][15+1][14+1] You can hear them cheer your name in return. You make sure you are backstage before you let a wry smile find your face. You extinguish your wings as you walk, and once again feel the uncomfortable burning sensation in your shoulders as you hide them away. An itch that is only relieved when you free them again.

Emma claps slowly, gently, "You're getting more comfortable with that."

"Thank you." You plainly state, giving her a weak smile.

"You want to talk to me about Probabilities, correct?" She gestures towards the door.



The garden is free of blood, cleaned in your absence. One of the significantly reinforced shutters is open on the side of the room. It lets you gaze over a valley as the plants drink in the waning sunlight. Pinpricks of stars dot the horizon. A fresh blanket of snow lies on the bottom of the valley, over a half-frozen stream. Stunted plants, withered by the cold, hang over its shiny surface.

"The Ancestors tell me I have some gift with Probabilities that even they lack. Perhaps they are trying to build my confidence, but your approach tells me that they may be telling me the truth. So, what answers can I give?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 09, 2020, 07:20:49 pm
((I nominated the game for the Hall of Legends.))

"Is the manipulation of probabilities something that you can consciously control?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 09, 2020, 07:33:13 pm
((Thanks! I still need to complete it!))



"Sometimes. Moments of clarity." Emma shrugs, then her lips quirk, "Let me explain?"

You dip a nod.

"Right now, I'm discussing the new form of government you want with Hoganson. Right now, I'm playing with Moore in this garden with you while speaking of futures. Right now, I'm walking at your side into the Outlander [Khagnate's] Palace. A hazy dream that shifts and turns -- clouded by motes of dust too small to see. Those are futures that are assured-- of this moment. Those are the futures that will occur. Details are blurry, but they come into focus in time as futures solidify and data is proven."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 09, 2020, 07:43:40 pm
"Are you able to reach further and explore cause and effect in hypothetical futures?  Can you, for example, assume that an event will occur and see what the ramifications will be?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 09, 2020, 08:09:01 pm
"It branches. Only certain specific events...but even then. The flight of a hydrogen atom follows a certain path. The flow of a river. The twisting of the cosmos. The flow of a person's life is much more difficult. If I know someone's personality, or can guess at it, the probabilities start to narrow. I can project them more clearly. But, its more like realizing what paths they may take and guessing at it from there...each path is different, but you can group them together."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 09, 2020, 08:38:21 pm
"Can manipulating probabilities be useful in combat?  If so, can you show me?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 09, 2020, 08:51:20 pm
(('Eyyy, Hall of Legends! I was gonna wait 'til we were well and truly done here, but this works too :)) ))

Tell her of the words you had with "Ashley"-- of the dabblings you've made already, in the wielding of trajectories.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 09, 2020, 09:48:10 pm
I think this mechanic should be balanced enough...it might be edited in the future...


Emma listens intently, quietly. With a rub of her face, she gives the nod. "That isn't quite...enough. You already have some instinctual ability, obviously, in combat, but you don't have full control over it." She leans into her radio and speaks quietly and quickly. With that done, she leans back, "I called in William."



"Emma." William coldly states.

"William. This is business." Emma clarifies, crossing her arms.

"Mmmh. Fine, fine. What's up?"

"We're going to spar."

"Alright." William shrugs, producing a rubber sword for both of them.

[15+2 vs. 7] William strikes at Emma while she's shifting into her stance. The blow makes the rubber creak, and Emma grits her teeth, but she settles into her stance and blocks another blow before it lands.

[19+2 vs. 11] Emma winces, almost dropping her sparring sword as William whaps her knuckles hard enough to leave a red bruise. Emma, however, grits her teeth, focusing on William.

[11+2 vs. 19] Almost experimentally, she blocks the next savage blow, and William dances back to look at her. Then, he charges in again.

...

[16] Emma's nose begins to drip blood, and her eyes gaze over.

...

[18 vs. 8] You see it, Emma glances down at where the sword is actually going to be as William feints.

[11+2 vs. 19] Her sparring sword catches in mid-air, and she blocks the blow. William blinks, confused, but continues to press in on his little sister. She blocks the next few feints the same, the rubber blades creaking against one another.

[20] Emma doesn't even look away from William's face--and she isn't also isn't looking at him. More like looking through him.

[11+2 vs. 17] The battle turns as she strikes harder and harder, finding the weak spots that William leaves undefended. William winces, as the sparring blade hits his tender stomach. Emma stabs forward, pushing him back as she takes steps forward, suddenly putting her more experienced and older brother on the defensive.

[17 vs. 1] Emma's eyes flick to one side, but William doesn't notice. You might not either if you weren't trying to learn from her...

[1+2 vs. 6] ... with a sudden twist of her abdomen, and a step forward, the rubber sparring blade slams into William's face, and he hits the ground with a grunt. Emma stares down at him, eyes cloudy -- then stumbles back to drop to the bench. The blood still trickles from her nose, from her eyes. She wipes at it with a sleeve, explaining, "I had to force the calculations there."

"I...I think I want to try something with you. Alone." Emma states, glancing over at William, who rises with a grunt and gives a roll of his eyes.

"Fuckin' immature, you lot are," William grumbles, brushing at his bloody nose. "I went easy on you!"

"No, you didn't! You broke two of my fingers, and I'm going to have bruises for days!" Emma complains as she suddenly stands to shoo him out, "Get out of here!"

William leaves the two of you alone.



"I want you to try something for me. Think of the flowers at the Academy. The fields. Or maybe that copse of trees where we used to sneak out to."

With a raised brow, you do as she bids. Emma's willpower creeps out, gently coaxing at yours. Energy pulses along with it--

[20/18] Suddenly, you're looking at yourself -- no, Emma is looking at you looking at her in an old memory. You feel ill suddenly, as the love you once shared blooms hot and fresh in your chest. Emma breathes out a heavy sigh from beside you, a deep, ragged breath of pain -- of loss?

[16] No, of pain. Blood is dripping from her face as she wraps her arms over her face and hunches in on herself. Every breath is a ragged, heavy sigh of pure exertion and stress. I don't...I don't think I know how to do--, But the future spreads itself out for you. William is pacing outside, eventually he will get bored and gather Eric under pretenses for a sparring session with all of us-- no, not all of us--Emma, I will be too weak to do anything but wat-- Emma twitches. ...she watches you on a screen as the world explodes around you, and not a trace of you remains--defiant to the end--

[20] Whatever it was, the connection shatters, leaving Emma curled in on herself on the verge of unconsciousness. Blood drips from her face, staining her uniform and leaving her pale. Her breathing is shallow, and her breath catches as she speaks in a whisper. "I...I-- did I do okay? Pheobe? I'm trying. I'm trying. It all comes back to that. To death. To pain. On-one of the Ancestors taught me a poem...he called it a 'Rendevous with Death'...i think about it when I think of you and [gods] I don't want to think about any of this or anything."

Emma breaks down as you sit, paralyzed and shocked. Her tears mix with the blood of her bursting capillaries. With a quick exhale, she murmurs, "I'm fine. I'm sorry."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 09, 2020, 10:06:46 pm
[5] You feel...odd. Disconnected. Emotions are fleeting. A small fire starts on the ground in front of you, and it flickers out. Parts of your skin blacken and streak with red. Glancing down at your only hand, you notice steam, or maybe Dust. You think you blur for a moment.

[16] You shut your eyes, gripping the bench even if you cannot feel it within your hand. You listen for sounds. For Emma's breathing. For your own. At one point, you've stopped breathing, so you remedy that. You center yourself. Even if feeling doesn't return, Emma shifts closer quietly.
 


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 09, 2020, 10:20:14 pm
Gently hug Emma.  "It's going to be okay.  This is not your burden to bear."

Should we discuss plans to stop Magnus?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 09, 2020, 10:26:02 pm
God knows 'twere better to be deep
Pillowed in silk and scented down,
Where Love throbs out in blissful sleep,
Pulse nigh to pulse, and breath to breath,
Where hushed awakenings are dear--

--breathe, godling. Breathe--
--fo-00rgive us

---

<Mnemonic query: cohesion. What don't we know about it? How best to recover it?>
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 10, 2020, 06:29:08 am
Knowing what all powers Magnus has will be helpful in killing him, do we have a way to find out all of what he is capable of?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 10, 2020, 06:57:31 am
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You'll have to tell me it sometime.

"It is. A life for a life." Emma looks a little awkward when you hug her, but doesn't protest. "I dream about it a lot. How I nearly died."

"That...that happens. That's a recurring nightmare of mine -- how I nearly died before I Ascended...or maybe how Alphira nearly did." You twist water from the air, wetting your capelet to wipe away her dried blood. Emma weakly grumbles, but let's you.

"I always wondered about that." She murmurs, awkwardly. Eventually, she straightens. Retrieving a ration bar from her coat, she eats in silence. "William and Eric are here."

The door swings open; William, Eric and Cephie all enter the garden.

"Damn William, that's a lot of blood." Cephie whistles, her eyes fixed on Emma.

"I didn't do that." William shrugs. "She actually won."

"It was [Arithmetic] strain." Emma volunteers with a mumble, uncomfortable.

Cephie nods, while Eric just looks lost.

"I thought you said the council wanted to discuss strategy?" He questions.

"Yeah, I consider us Pheobe's secondary council. The regular Council is the third." William explains, not clarifying anything for Eric. "We're going to be sparring. Working as a team."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 10, 2020, 03:30:26 pm
"Exactly.  If we pool our strength, we can become stronger than any one of us would become alone."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 10, 2020, 04:46:25 pm
"Alright, so, how's this going to work, Phe-Phe?" William questions, crossing his arms. Eric and Cephie look to you as well for answers.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 10, 2020, 04:54:14 pm
How does this sound?

"Let's begin with some close range melee weapon sparring, one on one, perhaps while trying some probability manipulation.  After a bit of sparring, we'll switch partners until every combination of combatants has been exhausted.  At that point, we'll discuss the results and see where we can improve."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 11, 2020, 04:51:37 am
Looks good to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 11, 2020, 03:33:05 pm
"That sounds like a good start, but how will this help those with powers to train them?" Cephie politely raises her hand. "And if we spar with Eric we'll have to put on kiddy gloves -- especially William."

"I can keep up." Eric grumbles, his lips curling into the faintest of pouts. "And it's just rubber swords."

"William broke three of my fingers and fractured my thighbone." Emma volunteers helpfully.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 11, 2020, 03:55:16 pm
((The archivist of the Hall of Legends has confirmed that McCreary's Planet is now eligible for voting.  If you would like to vote for it, post a reply in this linked thread (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=168375.195).))

The idea was that manipulating probabilities would help us become more adept at using that power, through practice.  As for Eric, however... I'm not sure how to integrate him into the session.  Maybe we can do something to help him train his will?  We did see that he can extend his will in similar ways to an Ascended.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 11, 2020, 08:42:04 pm
((Voted.))

...

...Eric is here to be tested: no more, no less. He took something from the Plague, in his days on the Defensive Line-- I want to know if he can wield it. He is of little use to us, if not.

As for the use of our powers... this little stick-fight is naught but a warm-up, godling. Take your fellow Ascended somewhere barren, when you're ready-- somewhere you can loose your will in earnest.

...

<Mnemonic query: training procedures of the Ascended, and of the Line of Sol. Old drills and schedules, such as the Void Slayer would have devised for me in youth.>
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 11, 2020, 10:00:58 pm
[12]
Spoiler: Training Regimen (click to show/hide)

[20]"Cephie, William?" You state, after some quiet contemplation of Eric. "Both of you will fight Eric at the same time. Non-lethal force, but if he spends another few months in the hospital, then so be it. Cephie, you may use your powers. William, do the same. No healing surge unless it's life-threatening. Don't hold back."

Eric swivels to stare at you in surprise. William and Cephie, however, are a little less shocked. They dip nods. William cracks his knuckles with a clank of metals, and Cephie twists wings from the earth. Eric frowns. Then, he nods. "I want a shield."

You arrange for one.



The two Ascended stare down at Eric, who rolls his shoulders. The heavy steel shield is strapped to his handless arm, and in the other, he wields the rubber sword. He glances up at Cephie, who's wings beat lazily over the sparring room, then backs down at the shirtless William. After a nod, he pulls on a Crusader's helmet, hiding his face beneath the gas-mask. "Ready."

[16+2 vs. 3+2/14] William surges forward with a savage strike as Cephie begins to fire dulled shots of carbon at the Crusader. Eric deftly blocks the projectiles, stepping to one side and slamming his sword into William's chest. William grunts in pain, but tries to catch Eric with a backhand blow -- he blocks it.

[18] You pay attention to his Willpower -- it dances across the battlefield, splitting its focus between Cephie and William. It beats with a rhythm -- that of his heart. It steadily increases as he divides offense and defense between the two Ascended.

[---17] William's willpower surges as his muscles twitch and bulge. He growls as he begins to lay a flurry of blows down on Eric. Lines of blood drip from William's ears -- no doubt he forced the command through.

[14+2 vs. 14+4/13] Eric grunts as he's struck across the head, across the chest, on his shoulder, but he keeps his shield up to prevent Cephie from drowning him in bolts of carbon. She twists one around him, coming from an unguarded area, but he steps smartly to one side-- even as William smacks him again.

[20] You feel a change in Eric's Willpower. It begins to tighten around him. You follow it into his limbs, into his bones, into his flesh. Ever the stoic, you are surprised when he growls a swear word—the rubber hilt in his hand creaks.

[19+3 vs. 13+4/12][5] A thick snare of carbon wire wraps around his ankles, rooting him in the spot. William takes the opportunity to step forward, but Eric breaks free with a twist of his legs. He steps into William's guard as the prince charges him, and slams his shoulder hard into William's chest. William staggers back even as Eric blocks a blow from a wild shard of carbon directed by Cephie's manipulations.

[13+3 vs. 9+4/4] Cephie's projectiles are more of an annoyance than a severe threat to Eric, as dull as they are. Whatever he doesn't block, he tries to dodge. Whatever he doesn't avoid, he shifts to try and take less of the impact-- William, on the other hand, continues to strike at him relentlessly. The rubber swords bend and twist -- until they shatter.

[20+3 vs. 17+4/11] Eric suddenly shifts -- and slams his shield into William's face. Blood splatters out across the floor, but Eric doesn't even glance at it. He grabs William by the neck, ignoring the prince's grasp on his wrist, and lifts the man. You wince as Eric slams him to the ground face-first--

He brings his shield down on William's back with a sickening snap that echoes through the area. William yelps, going still with a helpless growl. He tries to drag himself back into the fray even as Eric trudges away. With one threat gone, Eric turns to stare at Cephie through his mask--

"You aren't human anymore." Cephie muses.

Eric is silent.

"You're infected. Part of the Plague."

[15+3 vs. 16] A mass of carbon lashes out, scouring at Eric's flesh, but he stands steadfast, weathering the storm. He twists his shoulder back, his fingers loosening his shield--

[15] Eric's Willpower once again reinforces his body. You can hear his bones creak, his tendons strain -- the beat of his heart is hammering out a buzz-saw's staccato.

[18+4 vs. 19] A bolt of carbon slams into his head, and he staggers, but stays on his feet.

The shield launches through the air, a blur of steel, and slams into Cephie's chest. She grunts, her concentration faltering. She hits the ground with a thud, coughing horribly. Eric approaches--

[7+4 vs. 13][5] A coil of carbon twists itself around his ankles but shatters easily under his heavy steps. He reaches down to grab Cephie and --

"That's enough." You call.

Eric hesitates, his grip tightening enough to make Cephie wince -- she growls, and a spike juts from the floor to threaten Eric's center of mass.

He lets go of Cephie, as she wipes the blood from her mouth. Eric turns to face you, his gas-mask hissing heavily as he catches his breath. The Willpower falls away from his form, and he slumps beneath his weight. Blood drips from his scoured flesh, and he lifts his mask only to spit out a tooth. "Well, Pheobe? Do I have your approval?" He questions, voice dull through the filter.

William groans as he rises to his feet, and Cephie coughs up another bit of blood as her punctured lungs and broken ribs heal. "I...he caught me by surprise." She mumbles, rubbing at her side, "He's not human. That's for damn sure. I couldn't directly effect his carbon or calcium."

"He broke my fucking back!" William growls, "The fuck man!?"

"Orders were not to hold back or restrain myself." Eric dully notes, even as he sways. "And I've wanted to do that for a long time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 11, 2020, 10:51:03 pm
Interesting.  His strength is on par with that of an Ascended, perhaps greater. 

"Perhaps that display was a bit too much, but it was also extremely impressive.  There is absolutely a place for you here, among us."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 11, 2020, 10:55:52 pm
"Am I dismissed?" Eric questions, quietly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 11, 2020, 11:02:29 pm
"You are dismissed."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 11, 2020, 11:17:08 pm
As if snapping from a trance, no longer do you see a warrior of savage might in front of you, no longer the avatar of battle who snapped a God's spine. No, he seems to shrink and lessen. Eric hits the floor as soon as you speak the word, all strength leaving his body. His willpower retreats, weakly coiling around his prone form. He breathes heavily in his unconscious state.

Cephie steps over, kneeling down and pulling off his helmet.

[18] The man's eyes, what you can see of them through the bruising, shine with silvery black hues. The color is fading, returning to the plain, natural brown. Cephie frowns, looking up at you. "Eric is still a human. Well, we all are, but you know what I mean. His body doesn't posses the same structure as our's."

"Meaning? And how can you tell?"

"Meaning that he forced -human- muscle and -human- bone to withstand that stress. He's probably got hairline fractures in nearly every part of his body." Cephie explains, "As for the how -- his entire body right now is one giant bruise. He burst blood vessels and probably tore muscle fighting so hard."



The medics haul him away to the infirmary, leaving you with Cephie, Emma, and William.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 11, 2020, 11:44:04 pm
His will is strong, but his body is weak.  Maybe we should help him Ascend, or look into cybernetics.

"I'm sorry, William, and Cephie.  Are you guys okay?  If so, shall we continue?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 12, 2020, 12:03:31 am
Don't apologize, they will likely see that as you viewing them as weak.  An insult.  Thank them for the good work in pushing Eric and explain that you thought he had hidden potential.

You need to work out a plan to push William past just using his physical enhancements and to stop him from needing to force as much math.  William has the warrior part down for sure but learning the true extent of what he can do is very valuable to any ascended.  Maybe a controlled cohesion breakdown plan while testing his powers?

I do wonder if Eric can inspire the same willpower in others when commanding them.  If he can learn to control it and spread the effect to others he would make a fine field commander for the mercenaries.  I would suggest against ascension right now though for the same reasons as last time.  I do not believe he is mentally stable enough to survive the process, too much of his self is dedicated to following orders.  If that willpower is unleashed without self preservation in mind it could mentally cripple or physically annihilate him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 12, 2020, 12:20:12 am
You're right, it would be rude to point out how they just got schooled by a base human, but this could serve as a wake-up call for them to work harder.  Regardless, we still have much we can work on with the other Ascended.  Maybe we should pit our wills against each other and see if we can make a breakthrough by pushing it to the limit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 12, 2020, 01:46:12 am
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 12, 2020, 06:40:38 am
If he can do all that as just a regular human imagine what he could do if he was ascended, I say we consider doing that at some point down the line.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 12, 2020, 10:16:32 am
[20]
Spoiler: Training (click to show/hide)



"You did well drawing out Eric's potential..."

[19] William and Cephie, you realize, perk up at that. The tension draws away from their frames with the praise, and Cephie shares a nano-feast with William. You let them rest as you pace, listening to the voices in your head as they consider how to train you and the other Ascended. After just but a few minutes, they look perfectly healthy, are bickering with each other over the fight -- both are laying the blame on the other. There's no real anger, so you do not intervene. No doubt, just relieving tension.

...it's...strange seeing this from the other side. How broken and beaten they were, only for them to be so perfectly fine just a few minutes later.

"...but next time you fight a mortal just make sure you win." Emma raises a brow from where she lazes on the bench at your cutting remark. Cephie and William are shocked but recover, giving a duck of their heads and a mumbled apology.

"Sorry, Patches."

"I will, Phe-Phe."

It seems the consensus is to train willpower in an isolated area? Is that correct?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 12, 2020, 02:36:58 pm
Sounds good to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 12, 2020, 09:12:48 pm
...you all should see this.

<I lay out for the others a montage of the memories I've called: images and ideas, describing the manner in which I learned my trade. The twisting of formulae-- the breaking and re-breaking-- power in madness, under the will of my [sculptor.]>

We all had our trials. We can call the old drills to us-- we can grind you to still higher fires, Phoebe. An ancient and fearsome power.
...'tis an ugly process. We attempt it at your own word.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 12, 2020, 09:36:20 pm
This is an interesting about-face.  You had previously prevented nearly all attempts to train and experiment with Dust, because you felt it was too dangerous, but now you are proposing much more strenuous Dust-work than anyone has ever previously suggested.  What has changed?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 12, 2020, 09:38:19 pm
Five years of condensed memories are revealed. The endless drills, the weeks of sleep deprivation, and the days of starvation training were mixed with intense physical and mental strain. Combat practice in the CBT pods, followed by an immediate simulated drill; you mastered the use of each firearm you were given, you traded sword blows with the Scions of Nobility and grew strong. Then there was the training with the disruptor chains. You were forced to fight as mortals do, with no powers and no healing surges.

But the worse was yet to come. Through a combination of powerful hallucinogens, taboo arithmetic, and ascetic living, you ripped yourself apart and entered into the state of Resonance.

There, you were lost. Concepts of time, of existence, pain, and worry all became foreign. All became energy. All became arithmetic. All became concepts. You were held together only by the personality etched into the 'Dust', only by the memories you had saved.

You could, if you so choose, create a similar schedule to this. But there is no time for anything else -- besides training.




Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 12, 2020, 11:48:00 pm
I should point out the dangers are very real.  There is a reason the first generations of ascended viewed cohesion loss as a debilitating and degenerate disease before we found out it's benefits and ways to control it.

In addition I suggest putting the program together start to finish, using the computer on Cephie's ship and leaving one ascended out to monitor the process.  This is because at certain stages two way contact with us can be lost and that advise may be useful in bringing you all out of the state or bringing out the most potential.

As to the question, this is less about how to use Dust as building up a stronger base on which to use it. 

It would also put this whole empire building (farce?) on hold.  I was rather enjoying watching this again but it should of course be what is best for the current Sol/Soul.

In addition, even at your best, can you hope to face Magnus alone?  Would the time be better spent finding a way to Loom Eric a thousand fold and building an army of emo soldiers.

Sorry no direct advise, just a lot of questions.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 13, 2020, 12:07:50 am
We haven't really had a chance to hash out plans for defeating Magnus, but there are many options beyond just trying to beat him up when he arrives.  Hopefully in the near future we'll have a chance to discuss that in greater depth.

Also, that doesn't address the sudden change in my father's behavior.  He has always, always said that it is too dangerous to have low cohesion, to do anything that would lower it beyond unfurling wings, but now he wants to follow a plan that will set cohesion so low that it will push Phoenix to "the edge of insanity."  I am not criticizing; I simply want to understand.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 13, 2020, 05:01:54 pm
My understanding of the situation has changed.

I... wasn't sure identity recovery was possible before. Cohesion loss was something I sought to avoid at all costs-- indeed, something that I deemed avoidable.

It's not, is it? Not if we expect our heir to take on the Plague, the Nobility, and survive. Only by "the triumph of Will over Reality", can such a thing be done. She'll fall apart, training or no training, if she can't learn to maintain identity-- the "I AM"-- within and despite that triumph. The only way out is through.

I'll not suggest we commit to a "regimen from hell" just yet. There's a nation here to consolidate first, and a planet to scour-- but afterwards, when there's naught left but to brace for Magnus? It's... worth considering. In the meantime, we've a wealth of mnemonic information to draw from for these smaller sparring-sessions.

Do you have memory of Alphira's training days, perchance? The methods used for her forging would be more... apt, perhaps, than our own.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 13, 2020, 09:27:08 pm
[8] Alphira never listened to you -- her and Alphias were suspicious of the voices within their heads and resentful. They kept to themselves and starved you of data and new memories. You only knew they grew powerful at roughly the same pace, with Alphira becoming a match for her Sire(?) until her growth tapered off with the rise of her 'doldrums'.

You believe they focused on actual combat as opposed to training. You also remember several fights with other Ascended. Alphias, in particular, was relentless -- he never stayed down.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 14, 2020, 04:29:04 am
If we're done taking a trip down memory lane, can we actually get in some training now?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 14, 2020, 06:18:20 am
You shake your head, realizing that the others have started talking amongst themselves in the midst of your internal discussions.

"Oh hey, she's back." Emma notes after giving you a glance.

You smile sheepishly as you rise and brush non-existent dust from your clothing. "The ancestors were talking."

"Adorable." Cephie giggles, "How you still listen to them."

"Hmmh. I've been Ascended for three years and I'm probably twice as strong -- maybe you should listen to yours more often." You wryly point out.

Cephie gives you a grin, "Maybe if I was one of the Old Lines."



The wasteland spreads out in front of you as you disembark from the hovercraft. The moonless night hangs heavy, and there isn't a cloud in the sky. You give a slight shiver as the cold effects you even through your homeostasis, even through your coat. William has brought sparring equipment, and Cephie has brought nano-feasts. You approximate that you have at least a day or two before you have to return home -- Emma will need to be back tomorrow.

How/what powers do you train? How do you train Emma, Cephie and William? Which powers do they train?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 14, 2020, 09:24:46 am
We could train Silicon Sunder, Slayer’s Blade, Controlled and Uncontrolled Fusion Reactions, Strength Boost, Energy Manipulation:Lightning, among others, some powers we’re not as experienced with
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 14, 2020, 02:55:09 pm
<Mnemonic query: what other Old Lines exist, besides our own? By what name is Sadil's line known, in the reckonings of the Empyre?>

I can't do much towards the preparation of a training regimen for your compatriots-- we don't know what they're capable of yet. Test them. Find out what they can do. Find out where they can improve, and lend your expertise where needed.

As for yourself: you are skilled already, with the wielding of hydrogen and heat. I should like you to focus on other vectors today. Probability calculations; the prediction of trajectories. The manipulation and redirection of kinetic energy. The use of will to strengthen your hand, to lend force to your blows-- William can help you with that one, perhaps.

Beyond that: improvise. Extrapolate. Test yourself against the others, even as they test themselves against each other and against you. Draw from our shared memories-- from the remembrance of old wars. There are tricks there we've yet to consider, I imagine.

...Mind you set aside the Outlander silks before you begin. Wouldn't do to burn away their offerings in the fray!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 14, 2020, 03:50:39 pm
Train probability manipulation and will extension at low cohesion.  Train Emma in strengthening her will.  Train William in basic hydrogen manipulation.  Train Cephie in shapeshifting into more foreign forms, such as into a Barker or inanimate object.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 14, 2020, 05:46:50 pm
Train probability manipulation and will extension at low cohesion.  Train Emma in strengthening her will.  Train William in basic hydrogen manipulation.  Train Cephie in shapeshifting into more foreign forms, such as into a Barker or inanimate object.
why an inanimate object?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 14, 2020, 05:49:34 pm
I'm curious as to what the limits of her powers are.  If she can assume the form of an inanimate object, she can be effectively invisible.  That would be great for spying and infiltration, which she was very good at as "Iyal."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on August 14, 2020, 07:04:19 pm
This is going to be hilarious
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 14, 2020, 10:28:00 pm
Control over structural elements like carbon and silicon can allow mono molecular edges.  While simple by most empyrean standards they are still very useful in weapons and are much less energy intensive then the more large scale work you have been doing.

Combining mono molecular shrapnel with something like Slayer's Blade to make a high powered shotgun effect could be interesting.  Learning precision and control of two elements at the same time would be a pretty good boon.

I would also suggest deciding what you want to train then push yourself to a physical and emotional limit of some kind to experiment with pulling your cohesion up and down at will, even if it is only on a smaller scale then a full training regime.

You will also need energy at least on the order of a true fusion reaction to create anti-matter.  Finding a good way to control the radiation would be useful.  I am assuming this is some kind of proton-proton chain reaction though so controlling high energy gamma radiation and neutrinos will be hard.  Maybe figure out a way to do it far away?

Otherwise I would concentrate on bringing out William's gifts, he seems to be relying on basic body modifications, which, while powerful once mastered, can be a limiting area.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 15, 2020, 05:39:44 am
So we gonna push it to the limit and hope we don't accidentally blow ourselves up with a nuclear explosion we caused by accident.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 15, 2020, 05:51:12 am
Practicing uncontrolled fusion reactions would be a great way to send the entire population of the fortress into the Empyrean, but as long as we don't practice that particular power it shouldn't be too dangerous.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 15, 2020, 06:18:51 pm
Right, don’t practice uncontrolled nuclear fusion
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 15, 2020, 07:37:07 pm
Okay I very clearly said they need a way to protect ourselves and allies before they start burning as hot as a star.

Although if you improved your range with a flesh-relic network you could do the uncontrolled fusion near a cut off finger or something miles away.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 15, 2020, 07:56:16 pm
We should look into that.  It sounds like it could be extremely useful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 16, 2020, 01:57:03 am
We probably don't want to make a habit of cutting off our own fingers to make nuclear bombs if we can even figure out how, also are we even sure we can regrow fingers?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 16, 2020, 02:24:15 am
Considering that when we fell to earth we looked like little more than "a pile of meat," I'm pretty sure that we can regenerate fingers.  Cutting off a small part of our body that we can then regrow seems like a small price to pay for infinite weapons of mass destruction.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 17, 2020, 07:22:16 pm
Day 1

[9]
Spoiler: Old Lines (click to show/hide)




Sparring

"Three on one sounds like fair odds." You state, proudly. "You three against me."

Emma and Cephie exchange glances -- mutual distrust, while William is, as ever, eager to test himself. They comply. Emma and Cephie build their wings, while William pulls away from his shirt.

"Do you always have to do that?" Emma asks, with an exasperated sigh.

"Yes! Clothes are expensive these days." William explains sagely, "And a quarter of the Council's cloth rations go to Little-Miss-Everything-I-Touch-Burns over there."

"Point."

You awkwardly remove the Outlander silks and gently set them in the back of the Hovercraft, so chided by kindred both living and dead. Your shield follows.

With that business done, you unfurl your wings, feeling the ache of keeping them restrained fade as they bloom brightly into the night. You stretch and stiffen the math, feeling great comfort in the now-familiar problems.

You rise while the others huddle together to whisper to each other.

...

[11, 14][17, 11][19]
Spears twist themselves from the ground while a shield of carbon wraps itself around the three, hiding them from your sight. Willpowers twist within.

[11+1]
You bring forth a corona of fire, twisting it with your grasp. Your lips quirk --

[5 vs. 20+3]
The carbon shifts and a spear launches at you at high velocity. The blunt edge strikes your chest square in the center, winding you. You avoid another -- only to be struck by one that hurls into the exact spot you dodged into.

[17] You take a deep breath and try to see the probabilities of attack. The futures are blurry, clouded by a haze, but it does help you dodge one of the carbon spears.

[11 vs. 3+2]
You dodge out of the way of a flurry of spears, diving to striking at the dome. Your corona of fire burns away chunks, but more carbon reinforces it -- you've weakened it, however.

[||.]

[9 vs. 2+2][11, 15]
You manage to keep away from the suppressive fire of carbon by dint of observation and probability, and you dive once again. The carbon shifts to protect itself -- but you do not burn it. Instead, you Sunder the earth below it, ripping it apart. You hear yelps from within--

The structure shifts and weakens again.

[|..]

[15]
Having distracted those within, you pause. With another twist of your Willpower, you copy Eric and William. You reinforce muscle and feel your body stiffen. Your skin tightens around your bulging muscle--

[7+1 vs. 3+3]
You slam your fist hard into the structure. You feel the shockwave travel up your arm. You feel your bones vibrate and muscle strain -- but you succeed. The carbon shell breaks apart despite Cephie's attempt to reinforce it.

[4 vs. 6] [19, 10]
William and Emma get the drop on you -- a roaring fireball formed from both of their twisting wills strikes you in the face and sends you sprawling back. The shell rips apart --

[7 vs. 20][13]
The carbon flows into a tight net, slamming you into the ground. It tightens as it digs in and around, wrapping itself around your arm and legs. The cocoon tightens, and you hear bones creak. You gasp in pain --

William takes advantage of your incapacitated state. He launches himself out from the trio --

[1] Your fire harmlessly washes over him as his muscles bulge with reinforcement.

[3-5 vs. 8]
His fist slams hard into your face, enough to dislocate your jaw and send your consciousness fleeing.

Anger rises within, but you tamp it down -- they sense it, but William keeps you pinned.

"Clever. You baited me." You praise, after a sigh. "You built a trap for me -- Was it Emma's idea? Or Cephie's?"

"Mine, actually," William states, proudly, grinning as he keeps a booted foot on your chest. "I've fought by your side many times -- you're always too straightforward."

You nod, and the carbon falls away. William grins down at you, boot still planted on your chest.

[14] You twist a piece of silicon out of the ground, striking him in the chest and sending him sprawling. He laughs heartily, rubbing at his bruised chest while you shake your head. Emma extends a hand to help you up, looking awkwardly apologetic.



Cephie's Training

"Hey Cephie -- can you take the form of animals? Or an inanimate object?" You question, as the four of you rest from your former sparring. Cephie nods.

"The flaw with inanimate objects is that I still need to breathe—similar body-weight and size are my limits. Compacting myself down does awful things to my organs and metabolism. Conservation of Mass, and all that. "

"As for animals..."

[17][13][10]
Her bones shift and crack, and you watch with horrified curiosity as she falls to all fours. Her clothes change with her form -- and standing before you is a Barker of pure black, with gleaming red eyes. It is a little thin, but the shape is the same. It grins with wickedly sharp teeth.

[11][12][20]
Once again, horrifyingly, her forms shifts, as she straightens. She rises into a very tree-like form. Her skin is the color of bark and leaves sprout forward. She retains her eyes, her face, and the rough shape of her body. You reach out, touching her flesh -- and it even feels like bark.

"This is about the best I can do without -- well, killing myself."

"Well, practice that, I suppose? Could you alter your organ--"

"I am not doing that." Cephie interrupts. "One mistake, one distraction, and I'm bleeding to death."

"Fair point. Apologies."

[16, 11, 19]
Cephie returns to her standard form, slumping down into the dirt -- exhausted. She grins at you.



William's Training

William sighs, keeping a fire lit in the palm of his hand. You stand beside him, doing the same. He's having trouble keeping track of the math --

It flickers and dies.

"See -- I told you I'm no good at this, Phebe."

"That's exactly why you need to practice."

You leave him to it as he kindles another. Blood drips from his nose, and he wipes at it unconsciously.



Emma's Training

Learning to extend your Willpower and utilize it entirely wasn't something you trained to do -- it came naturally to you as you fought. Emma doesn't have that luxury, so instead, she sits patiently, pushing at the edges of her capacity with her Willpower, stretching and straining it.

You do the same, but a considerable distance away. Her will extends roughly a [meter] or two from her body. Your's, especially while you feel so odd, reaches a good thirty to thirty-five. However, it is currently inconsistent -- barely under your control. It withdraws and returns without you commanding it to, and it's difficult for you to command it otherwise.

Can Willpower even be commanded? Or is it purely a natural impulse?

You muse on this while you stretch and strain.



The others do not have your endurance. They rest by a fire with the Pilot while you stand far away in the wastes. Dawn rises on the flat plains of the Outlands, and you push yourself further down the path of your 'divinity.'

[10][18][20][3]
You bring a controlled fusion reaction to life within your hands. A bright purple light flows over you as you feed the incredible fires of creation. Molten beryllium drops to the ground as slag, and helium drifts free -- you try to contain the gamma radiation --

Your skin begins to blister and burn, and you feel ill.

You cut the reaction, trying not to vomit.

[16][8]
Next, you unleash hell.

The explosion is almost instantaneous. Energy flies away, turning the ground around you into glass as it scorches with the heat of hyperactive fusing hydrogen. The force almost knocks you back.

[17][18]
You force the gamma radiation and thermal energy away from you for as long as you maintain the blast, but it is exhausting. Light blooms out across the wastes as you light a star for all to see--

--and you lose control. The runaway reaction grows in pressure and heat as you try desperately to force hydrogen away from it--

--in the end, you manage to break it down, and the fire fades, leaving you exhausted and burned.

The camp beckons, but you deny the siren call of sleep. Two more. Two more.

[13][10]
You draw a blade of silicon from the ground, and, concentrating on the atomic edges, you pull and push until it blurs. You drag it into the ground, and it cuts away quite efficiently.

[14][8]
You summon forth the Slayer's blade, feeling the fire within your hand. You feed it the silicon, and it devours it hungrily.

You aim -- and the molten metal shoots out, spraying burning hot slag across the wasteland as an Inferno Shotgun would.

With that, you can no longer resist temptation. You get back to camp and collapse into a hammock in the back of the Craft, ignoring your Kindred's questions.



[12] You do not dream.


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 17, 2020, 07:23:27 pm
Day 2

Emma returns to the Fortress after you awaken, leaving you alone with Cephie and William. You feel lethargic and ill from yesterday, and so you slack off. You command the two to pelt you with rocks and 'spears' to train your skills in probability and kinetic energy manipulation.

They take to the task with perhaps a little bit too much enthusiasm.

[-][-]
Whatever you don't dodge by assessing the trajectories, you try to transfer or redirect the energy. One of these tasks at a time is simple -- both at once are straining.

The day passes uneventfully, and the two grow tired. On the other hand, you are one giant bruise, but considering the strength of your Kindred, you've done well to redirect or dodge most of the blows.

Energy Manipulation: Kinetic Shield rank : Beginner.



The hovercraft returns for you in the evening, and you board it without complaint. It takes you back to the Fortress, where you shower, dress, and find real food. One of the larger hovercrafts is being loaded with provisions for your trip into the Outlands, and you passively watch while you eat leftovers from the banquet. They have you wearing an ornate SEED military outfit, adorned with the selected Outlander's gifts of silk. Emma wears a well-crafted dress and coat combo, with high boots, while Cephie is wearing the face of a stout Crusader. Ethan and Finn mill nearby, chatting up a Scholar. William lounges in his Family's uniform, sipping from a dirty bottle.

Nicole adjusts her preacher's robes, looking annoyed, but sits next to you to wait patiently.

"I know Sammy well." She begins, "I helped him in his rise to power."

You blink, nearly choking on the pile of noodles you were busily devouring.

"Training. Guns. Mortars. Organization. The works. He's been a project of mine for the last thirty or so years. Without him, however, the Outlands are an unproductive mess of chaos and raiders. With him, they've begun to resemble a society. One that can help us."

"That's--"

"Oh, treason. I know. But SEED was blind, " She whispers softly. "Ostracizing an entire group of its people because they wouldn't lick bootheels."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 17, 2020, 07:24:36 pm
Reports and Outlands

The Council gives you reports on the various projects you've commissioned. The process is made simple by the entanglement array, and through such, they can communicate with you during your flight.

Emma reports that they are finishing the construction of radio towers in each major city across the Holyland. They hope these can be used to reinforce rapidly in problematic areas. She blandly reads the estimate that it will take another week before they are entirely online.

She further reports that your demonic armor and Silas have holed themselves up in one of the lower levels -- they've kicked out many scientists and are working furiously on a project. While she was initially concerned, she hands you the datapad --

Spoiler: Silas' Message (click to show/hide)

You quietly curse yourself for not keeping the thing on a better chain but resign yourself to inaction.

Next, Isela reports on the expedition to the Ark. They've successfully breached the facility and are currently in the process of exploration. They reported in yesterday, so all seems fine so far. Eric is still in the hospital wing but is conscious. The process on refitting the ship is going as scheduled --  the Pirates have donated the time of several ship engineers. And guns. Many guns. Large guns.

Hoganson glumly reports on his work with the democratic idea you put forward earlier. He and Emma have hashed out a three power system -- the Families will have their own political body, the common folk of SEED another, and an overarching executive-legislative body, which is the merging of the offices of the Pontifex and Commander-In-Chief of the military. Of course, such work is going to take time, so its nothing more than a draft.

William, from where he sits beside you, calmly informs you that they're starting to rebuild the necessary Warmachine facilities -- but they will not be ready for production for at least a year.

Armssmith reports that they've found metal deposits that could be useful for trade and industry and have already set up mining camps. The trading post has also been finished and has increased the fuel economy of the Holylands immensely.

Zero sends a memo in silence.




After hours of travel, the hovercraft begins its descent towards a landing platform that juts out of the Outlander City.  It stretches out for miles from the reddish-gray wasteland -- a collection of ragged tents and adobe houses. Markets fill every plaza -- grand stretching bazaars of hide and linen.  Aquaducts reach out into the distance, bringing clean water from the hills to supply the bustling metropolis below you. Cattle graze in carefully appointed pastures on the outskirts, and golden grain lays broken and harvested nearby them.

A palace sits in the center of it all, surrounded by a very modern, at least by this planet's standards, military compound. Hovercraft lay waiting in bays, appointed with clan markings and anti-air autocannons. AA guns lay angled towards the sky, and you see the patrolling of mounted cavalry units through the city.

The palace itself is of red and white granite, and it reaches high into the sky with a great [prang] of glass and steel. Gold and jade decorations score the structure -- clan totems, you would guess. The structure dwarfs two other buildings, but those gleam with warmth, all well-appointed wooden beams, and billowing silk.

You stretch, straightening yourself up. Emma falls in behind you, and Cephie-turned-Crusader does the same. William slips his hands into his pockets and pulls his wide-brimmed hat down to cover his eyes in shade. Nicole steps in front of you-- but to the right, so as not to be directly in front.

The twins take up positions to guard your rear. Their great suits of armor forcing the deck plates of the hovercraft to groan beneath the weight.

The door opens on to a warm equatorial day. The humidity of the city providing a welcome relief from what you can only guess is the dry heat of the day. A tall, broad man in heavy robes smiles at you cheerfully as you disembark. Guards stand at attention, no two wearing the same armor or weapon. The man's eyes gleam with mischief and joy, especially when they alight on Nicole.

The Khaganate grins, and the two exchange a brief, friendly hug. "Ah, Nicole! When will you come and finally stay with me? You could be a queen!"

"A queen among savages is no queen at all, Sammy." Nicole retorts. "And please -- we're here for business."

"Ah, busy busy busy -- all you Seedlings are the same! Time for introductions, then." He approaches you, his dark eyes looking you over as he brushes pure black hair from his face. He dips himself in a bow -- you match him.

"I am Khaganate Samkrend, of the Samkrend Clan." The Khaganate states, serenely, extending a hand for a handshake. You shake his hand and give a brief nod.

"I am Pheonix of Sol -- Pheobe Gainer. God of the Holylands." You introduce yourself politely. "It's a pleasure to meet you."

"The pleasure is mine, Pheonix!" Samkrend exclaims, "Now, come,"

He guides you to the edge of the hover-dock, pointing out across his city.

"Tell me, what do you think? It's [496 square miles]. The only city that was bigger, as far as I know, was the Holy one. Not bad for fifty years!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on August 17, 2020, 09:16:27 pm
Considering that when we fell to earth we looked like little more than "a pile of meat," I'm pretty sure that we can regenerate fingers.  Cutting off a small part of our body that we can then regrow seems like a small price to pay for infinite weapons of mass destruction.

What about regrowing our arm?

Who knows, Phoenix may wish to retain that wound as a symbol of what we went through to enable the Holy Citizens to escape Armageddon by the skin of their teeth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 17, 2020, 09:21:18 pm
Considering that when we fell to earth we looked like little more than "a pile of meat," I'm pretty sure that we can regenerate fingers.  Cutting off a small part of our body that we can then regrow seems like a small price to pay for infinite weapons of mass destruction.

What about regrowing our arm?

Who knows, Phoenix may wish to retain that wound as a symbol of what we went through to enable the Holy Citizens to escape Armageddon by the skin of their teeth.

That's a good point.  It's not clear to me how and when our baseline changes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 17, 2020, 09:47:48 pm
((Finally done. Holy crap! Lots of work on this. Let me know if anything is out of order. I'm recovering from a busy weekend and a bender.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 17, 2020, 10:11:04 pm
I think we should use the cybernetic arm

I think your city is marvelous.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 17, 2020, 10:17:00 pm
((Would you mind providing an update on the nuclear testing facility?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 17, 2020, 10:18:21 pm
((The literal hole in the ground you commissioned for personal use? That's been done for months.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 17, 2020, 10:22:18 pm
((Ah... I thought it would be more than a hole in the ground, but perhaps we should have been clearer.))

"It's very impressive.  I look forward to seeing it and meeting your people."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 17, 2020, 10:39:12 pm
"Your city is marvelous. Impressive. I look forward to seeing it and meeting your people." You state, looking out over the city from atop the spire. It spreads out beneath you.

"Ah! I wish you to get acquainted with it as well, Pheonix!" Samkrend states, cheerfully.

Then he shoves you off the edge with a strain of powerful muscle. You twist and unfurl your wings in an instant, staring at him in surprise as the fire pushes against the air and keep you at roughly the same elevation.

"Goddess indeed!" Samkrend laughs, turning his back to you to walk away. Your jaw works as you bite back your anger -- but it takes a glance to Mellone to truly calm your fury. She shakes her head gently, her eyes pleading with you. You drop back down on to the pad, and follow him down to the lower level. The streets between the pad and the palace have been cleared for you, and your retinue and Samkrend's guards make your way casually down it, until you reach the Palace gates. Servants appear to show you your rooms in the guest palace, before directing you to a dining hall.

You take a seat on a cushion, across from the Khaganate. A firepit lays filled with smouldering coals -- the room is plain, unadorned. Filled with nothing but the cushions and stern guards. Two sullen indiviuals sit nearby him, a man and a woman, roughly William's age. Beside the man, Rekhyt lounges. He flashes a cheerful smile and a wave as you and your retinue settle into your seats.

"So, since you people are so busy, busy, I'm curious about something before I let you avail yourself of my hospitality. I mean to make war upon you if our alliance doesn't go through. Tell me, why should I form one with you?" The small tables in front of you are bare.

That's a bad sign -- no food means we do not enjoy guest rights yet.

"[The Holy City is in ruins, Father.]" Rekhyt volunteers, "[They do not have the industry to oppose us -- the Crusaders are spread thin]."

Samkrend nods, his dark eyes turning on you once again. The smile fades. "I owe much to Nicole, but not enough to give up such opportunity." Nicole, for her part, looks annoyed, but settles back in the cushion. You cross your legs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 17, 2020, 10:44:17 pm
"We are weak.  I doubt we would be able to withstand your forces.  Perhaps you should just attack us?  However, we have much in the way of technology to share with you if you do decide to be merciful.  Your strength could increase tenfold, without a costly war."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 17, 2020, 11:00:11 pm
Lots of work on this

((Shyeah, no kidding! Wonderfully done-- and uh, sorry to put you through that.  :-X ))

That's a good point.  It's not clear to me how and when our baseline changes.

We've been told that degradation of the baseline is tied to alteration of the identity. To such trauma as shakes one's perception of the self.
Thus, injuries with a certain emotional weight tend to linger. So too, those injuries that are left untreated long enough to engrave themselves in the subconscious.



Hm! Good day, Φοῖνιξ. Such fine fires you've cast, these past couple days.

I'm... confused as to what we'd accomplish with words of weakness. Are we offering sarcasm? Baiting war?
I'm half-inclined to just dispense with the subtleties outright. Fire and show. Assent that such a war could well hurt our people... but make clear but that the Khaganate would burn for it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 17, 2020, 11:04:39 pm
If they do not immediately attack us with overwhelming force, they would lose such a war.  We would wipe them from the face of this planet.  It's safer for them to think that we are weak than to think that we are strong, a threat that can be casually eliminated that poses no true obstacle.

Note what Rekhyt is saying, even though he knows better.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 17, 2020, 11:25:32 pm
You could crush this city, right here, right now.  Before you knew about this city the plan was to exterminate any outlanders who the nation needed land and resources from. You need him for organizing and industrial reasons so be honest about the reasons.

At the least I very much suggest you do not play weak.

But be honest about the technology you can offer.  You could help them create a truly globe spanning nation.  Possibly star spanning.  With his organizing and your technology, his skilled army and your individually powerful people, you could easily crush the plague and build up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 17, 2020, 11:39:11 pm
Hmmh. Why does Rekhyt say those things?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 17, 2020, 11:46:39 pm
I think he is trying to help us and signal how we should approach this, but I'm not sure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 18, 2020, 07:31:45 am
It’d be better if we fight united against the plague, if w3 fight amongst each other, the plague will wipe all of us out
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 18, 2020, 08:54:40 am
Lets not tell him we're a weak nation as I have a feeling that he'll think he can just take over our stuff, but we should tell him about all the tech stuff we can offer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 18, 2020, 11:53:25 am
Blood and fire it is then.

"We are weak.  I doubt my Crusaders would be able to withstand your forces." You nod in agreement, not bothering to hide the sarcasm dripping from your voice. "But to be honest, I thought I would be meeting with a king -- instead, I'm met with a fool." You rise, brushing imaginary dust from your pants. Your entourage, after a glance, does the same, and you wrap an arm around Emma. She looks surprised but smiles, leaning into you.

"It's just as well -- I never wished to marry such a senile, old, up jumped warlord anyway."

That did it. The guards draw on you, but you pay them no mind, continuing to step out the doors.

"You insult me, Pheobe Gainer -- in my own home! [Guards! Open--]"

You raise your hand free of Emma and give a snap of your fingers. All for show. Your willpower lashes out -- and the las-gun reactors explode violently. All but one of the five you touch. Blood splatters across the floor -- William shifts, drawing out a pistol and lifting it towards Samkrend. Nicole does the same. Ethan and Finn step back into their armor and slam themselves into two of the nearby guards. The result isn't pleasant. Emma sighs dramatically, reaching down to flick something bloody from her boots.

"You've stoked her temper now, Samkrend." She mumbles.

"[You will not make it out of the Outlands -- we'll shoot you down--]"

Elders! I learned something interesting the other day! Granite is seventy percent silica! You cheerfully point out.

[12][16][19]
You snap your fingers again, and the palace shudders as you gently, so very gently, tug at the silica in the stonework and drag it towards you. You stop when the dust begins to drop from the ceiling to settle across the bloodstained floors.

"You can certainly try -- but Rekhyt is right. My Crusaders are weak. My industrial base is damaged -- that is the only reason I haven't burned you and your kind off the face of my planet. But my mercy has limits, old man, and you're testing them. My nation is weak -- but I am not." A fire sparks itself to life in your hands, "Threaten my loved ones again. Threaten my people again -- I will turn fifty years of your life to glass in a day."

Samkrend strokes his beard, glancing towards the las-guns leveled at his face, at the Voidmarines splattered with blood. Then, he nods. "I'm sorry." He bluntly states, "Your argument is persuasive. Come -- let us go and enjoy my hospitality."

You're tempted to simply leave. Rekhyt lounges with a faint smile, glancing at his humbled father with something approaching contempt. The older man returns his son's look, but his attention returns to you. Maybe this family should go the way of the Moores'...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 18, 2020, 12:14:40 pm
Ha!  Constantine was correct; a show of force wss the better path.  Now that they are humbled, let us continue with the diplomatic mission.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 18, 2020, 12:25:57 pm
Quartz and feldspar, godling; quartz and feldspar! Lovely stuff, granite-- much nicer than marble, I've always thought. Less pretentious.

Let's see what sort of hospitality these folk have to offer. If you were to slaughter every backstabbing, power-hungry warmonger this planet throws your way... ha-hm. There wouldn't be much governance
left.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 18, 2020, 12:50:37 pm
Is he a warmonger?  He is offering us peace, and he initiated the diplomacy.  Perhaps he truly does want a lasting partnership.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 18, 2020, 10:33:57 pm
Quartz and feldspar, godling; quartz and feldspar! Lovely stuff, granite-- much nicer than marble, I've always thought. Less pretentious.

Let's see what sort of hospitality these folk have to offer. If you were to slaughter every backstabbing, power-hungry warmonger this planet throws your way... ha-hm. There wouldn't be much governance
left.

We certainly wouldnt have a grandmother - ha!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 18, 2020, 10:53:57 pm
We really wouldn't. William would be dead. SEED too.

You are guided into a much more ornate dining room -- and this time, you note, there is food already on the table under steamed over glass domes. Plates upon plates of food set upon miniature tables in front of lavish and comfortable silk cushions. A few children sit nearby, picking at their formal clothes or trying to sit still. Samkren politely introduces you to his children, leaving the eldest for last -- Bat is the eldest son; a muscular man that takes heavily after Samkrend. Atlan is his eldest daughter; a golden haired willow of a woman with cruel, dark eyes. Finally, he gestures to Rekhyt, and you actually pay attention, "And this misbegotten bastard is Rekhyt. You seem to know him."

Rekhyt smiles as he settles down across from you. "It's a pleasure to properly meet you."

[19] "Likewise, Rekhyt Samkrend. I'm told you've been giving William some trouble."

"Not as much as he's given me."

You then introduce your retinue in much the same way. Ethan and Finn give a mock bow, and William rudely begins to drink the liquor on the table. Emma smiles serenly, and Cephie-Turned-Crusader gives a dull grunt when you introduce her as Stephen. Nicole only rubs at her face, and Mellone stammers out a greeting in Outlander.

"Now come, lets enjoy our meals."

You take the lid off to find the plate piled high with dumplings filled with ground [beast of burden] steak, [root vegetables], and fragrant herbs. You take the offered knife, picking at the food and popping on into your mouth -- delicious. Its full of fat, salt, and flavor. The ground steak drips with delicious juices. You wash it down with the white beverage -- its a sweet, only vaguely alcholic drink. Thick and creamy. [Kefir], you think its called.

Next are small loaves of bread -- fluffy and rich. The Outlanders scrape the grease from their plates with them, and you do the same.

A chilled dish of yogurt is placed in front of you, sprinkled with roasted grains and drenched in...a syrup of some sort. Its warm, and filling, and sweet.You observe while using small, fried sweet chips to scoop away at the gelatinous solid. Mellone stares mournfully at her cup when she finishes, but lets the servant take the bowl away without a fuss.  Rekhyt eats slowly and carefully. Samkrend's other children, and the man himself, devour the meal with enthuaisim.

There's a lull as the table is cleared, and Samkrend takes a sip of his liquor -- clear stuff. No doubt local [vodka]. "Lets figure this out between us. What can you offer us? And what do you want in return?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 18, 2020, 11:53:01 pm
Maybe something like:

"We have engineers, scientists, and a database filled with almost any technology you could ever imagine.  We are your bridge to the future.  If you continue without us, time will leave you behind, and this world will face the dangers of the Void without any ability to fight back.  In return for our expertise, we ask to be an integral part of your booming economy, have paid workers for our projects, and that you contribute to a pool of resources that we can both draw from.  We can be stronger together."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 19, 2020, 12:12:32 am
We can offer the technical knowledge SEED hid away, the expertise of our engineers, and possibly certain specimens of Pirate-tech for reverse-engineering purposes. In addition, we offer protection against the Plague, should it come to trouble these lands... we can perhaps offer more immediate military aid, of a precision-strike variety.

In return... first and foremost, we need our land-deal with the Clans of Skarin legitimized. Everything else is optional-- negotiable. The land deal is critical.
Might be worth explaining the origin of that Pirate vessel, for context: its descent from the Void, and the revival of those who crewed it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 19, 2020, 12:26:06 am
I feel like a shared resource pool will be helpful. We’ll have an easier time fighting the plague cooperatively
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 19, 2020, 06:52:30 am
I'm all for becoming friends with these people and them using our stuff and us using their stuff.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on August 19, 2020, 07:29:58 am
I'm all for becoming friends with these people and them using our stuff and us using their stuff.

As long as they continue building with granite, of course.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 19, 2020, 11:07:39 pm
"Technology. You have aquaducts, but we have aquifer pumps and solar-collectors. You have power here-" You gesture to the lights that illuminate the hall, "But I'm sure the rest of your city does not. Solar panels could increase the quality of life for your people. Fusion reactors could light the entire city."

Samkrend nods, leaning back and crossing his fingers over his pot-belly.

"Better weapons. Better training for your soldiers -- our Crusaders are the most modern military this planet has. Besides that -- Scholars to teach and Doctors to heal. Scientists to discover and push our futures forward together." You continue, leaning forward.

"We need those, yes."

"But more importantly -- " You pause, grinning, "There are other worlds than this. Other planets filled to the brim with luxuries, gold, silver, jade -- technology. People. The Samkrend name could spread across the stars alongside me. Hundreds of thousands of worlds, trillions upon trillions of people would know of the Outlander's strength. Their cunning. Their prowess in battle."

Samkrend lifts a brow, "What proof do you have? Our philosophers make the assumption that this world is not the only oasis in the wastes, but why should we risk it?"

You gesture to Ethan and Finn.

[11][6]
"Uh...well-- uh..." Ethan stutters.

"We uh...we come from other worlds." Finn offers, weakly.

"There's loot a plenty out there, that is true. There's thousands of planets out there. We come from one way on the other side of the Void." Ethan finishes.

Samkrend seems unconvinced.

"Well, regardless, there's something poisoning this oasis of ours -- something we need to purge before it taints the entire planet."

"The Plague." Samkrend nods. "We've been having issues with that. I know it exists. That is a threat we should handle, yes."

"An Alliance would keep our knives from each other's throats until it is handled, at the least." You try to recover.

"And what do you want in return, Pheonix?"

"Land. Workers. Industrial aid."

"Land?"

"I owe the clans of Skarin land around their vessel." You explain the location, and how much land the Pirates are owed.

"That is a heavy dowry, Pheonix." Samkrend scratches at his beard, "But not one I cannot pay. Your terms are, for the moment, acceptable. As a goddess, you can have children, yes?"

You nearly choke on your drink. Emma's eyebrows shoot up. You hesitate after a heavy cough, trying not to flush. You consider a lie, but think better of it.

"No. I cannot and will not." You calmly reply, smoothing out your coat subconsciously.

"Then I wish for two marriages. The first to secure our alliance, the second to secure my bloodline."

"[A betrothel between one of his daughters and Moore Thornton could work. He's part of the ruling Family, after all.]" Emma quietly offers, nonplussed.

"[Hypocrite.]" William offers, bluntly.

"[Drunkard.]" Emma retorts. "[One future to secure peace. I doubt he'd mind much.]"

"[You did.]"

"[And it was better I did not, wasn't it? If I married into some random Family, I would not have met Pheobe.]"

Ethan, Finn, and Cephie all take the moment to very studiously look at their tables and plates, ignoring the sniped conversation between the siblings. Mellone and Nicole simply look confused. Samkrend waits patiently, his fingers resting on his stomach.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 19, 2020, 11:18:17 pm
I'm all for it, personally.  He agrees to all our terms.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 20, 2020, 12:32:18 am
The man offers peace, Φοῖνιξ Ήλιης... with the bind of a [wedding ring]. I cannot, I will not tell you "yes" or "no".
Once again, then, I must ask, before we take the guest-moot any further: how do you wish to proceed in this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 20, 2020, 12:44:34 am
I do not wish to marry him.

"The Thorntons have a child within their family by the name of Moore. He is...?" You hesitate, glancing to Emma, who holds up two fingers. "Two or so years old."

"I have a daughter of three. A betrothal can be arranged upon them reaching their majority. I will not consign my child to unhappiness, as I am sure you will not do the same -- you'll take her and a retinue at certain times. A Scholar's education is good for an Outlander. We will renegotiate if they are unhappy with the choice when they come of age to make decisions."

You nod, not letting the surprise you feel show. "And as for me -- I will not marry you."

"That was expected -- you are too young for me. Will you stay a while and select your husband or will you meet them on the battlefield instead?" Samkrend questions after a shrug.

Once again, you're surprised by the ease of the conversation, your brow furrowing.

I'll outlive any of them anyway, right?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 20, 2020, 12:52:32 am
Barring unforseen accident or your partner's Ascension, absolutely.  What do you think of Rekhyt?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 20, 2020, 01:15:00 am
Agency of the betrothed... these Outlanders are startlingly civil about their arranged marriages.
I'm curious as to the nature of this "meeting on the battlefield". An old custom?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 20, 2020, 01:23:16 am
As in, we will try to kill each other.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 20, 2020, 01:34:51 am
"You are quite civil with your arranged marriages." You muse.

"A divorce spells war. A husband slaughtered in his bed spells war. A wife killed in jealousy spells war. We've learned our lessons through too many wars to count. Our ways are written in the blood of mistakes." Samkrend shrugs, "Besides, despite their...flaws. I do love my children. The younger ones, at least."

"On the battlefield? Is that a custom?"

"No. A metaphor. We will have to go to war. I trust my family. They learn command from any Ex-Crusader officer I can find. You would be surprised at how many live in the wastes."

"You learn from cowards." Nicole sniffs, interrupting.

"Not everyone can get the same opportunity I did, Mother Gainer. You taught me well." Samkrend laughs, but his eyes show no mirth. "I still have the scars of your discipline."

"And I, Child Damien, I still have the scars from the grenade you dropped in my tent."

"That was never proven, I may remind." Samkrend laughs again at her statement, and a wry smile curves Nicole's lips.

"Why are you so fixated on warring with the Holyland?" You question, interrupting the reminisce.

"Two Barker packs meet over the corpse of an insect. They work together or kill each other. Nations are no different, are they not? We work together or we fight. One of your philosophers say that war is the natural state of man."

Should I accept their offer? Stay and get to know one of the heirs?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 20, 2020, 01:39:05 am
I think you should.  At the very least, you will learn more about the Outlands, and at the most, you will gain an important alliance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 20, 2020, 05:45:49 am
Stick around, see what they're up to, and see if you can learn something.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 21, 2020, 08:17:22 am
"Can you tell me about your children?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 21, 2020, 04:58:59 pm
--
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 21, 2020, 07:19:39 pm
Stick around, see what they're up to, and see if you can learn something.
Agreed, learning is good

"Can you tell me about your children?"
this is good too, so far, I think we only know names, sexes, and ages. More info would be good, such as behavior and personality, perhaps we can interact with them
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 21, 2020, 11:03:43 pm
"Mmmh." Samkrend gives a slow nod, gesturing to "Did I not already?"

"You did, but not in depth." You shrug, leaning back in the cushion, looking over the three siblings with an eye of appraisal. You note, with a ghost of a grin, that they are doing the same -- except for Rekhyt. He's playing with one of his younger siblings, teasing and tickling and laughing. Without a care.

Bat stands nearly [2 meters] tall. His frame is strapped with muscle and scar. His long black hair falls over a blunt face with a broken nose and a scarred jaw. He has his father's grey eyes, and they drift across you and your retinue equally. He shifts, uncomfortable with the attention -- and you note that unlike Rekhyt, the fine silks seem uncomfortable on his lumpen frame. He scratches his beard and dips a nod. "Greetings." Is all he offers, uncomfortably, his accent heavy.

Atlan gives you one look and tosses her golden hair over her shoulder, looking anywhere else. She's closer to your age, and it shows. But the way she holds herself reminds you of an unsprung trap. Tightly wound and tense. "Yes, Hello. How are you." She offers stiffly, before turning to her father, "[May I be dismissed? This bores me.]"

"[Show some respect.]"

"Bat is my firstborn," Samkrend begins to explain, wrapping an arm around his eldest son, "My first wife. She was the first woman I ever loved when I returned home. She passed due to illness after his birth, but I raised him right. I think. He's a good officer and a good soldier, right?"

Next, he gestures to Atlan, "Atlan my second born. Her mother is a fierce warlord in the north, with many allied clans beneath her boot. She spends much of her time there, in the land of [cypress]. She has her mother's fire, I fear." Atlan rolls her eyes, crossing her arms over her chest.

"Rekhyt is...his mother comes from the cities on the sea's edge." Samkrend's lips quirk, "They...they are a strange people. More like Holylanders than Outlanders. He's too clever for his own good -- and a [Trickster, approx. Coyote]. Sharp, but sharp things sometimes cut both ways."

Rekhyt waves politely when he's introduced, unconcerned, and he returns his attention back to the younger sibling. You notice a side glance from the young man, before his easy smile returns.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 21, 2020, 11:56:18 pm
Does any one of them pique your interest, Phoenix?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 22, 2020, 12:06:16 am
Rekhyt? Because he seems to care the least. I've no interest in any of them. Unexceptional. Petty. Boring--

"Thank you." You offer politely, making to rise to your feet. "I've had a long trip. I would like to rest, if I could."

Samkrend nods, gesturing, "You know where your rooms are. Feel free to tour the city. I will provide our [currency] for you."

"Thank you." With a light smile, you turn and head towards the guest palace. Your retinue follows, and disperses in the grand hall. You pay no attention to the ornate jade carvings, or the smooth redwood floors, instead, you stumble into your bedroom and collapse into the soft pile of furs. You rub at your forehead and huff a sigh.

Why can't I just wipe out this city? Besides all the stupid innocents with their stupid right to live and stupid godsawful culture and--whatever. What is the plan for tomorrow?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 22, 2020, 12:18:31 am
I mean, you don't need to burn the city.  Just ask Nicole for some advise on who where and what to burn and destroy, decapitate the leadership, scare the rest in to submission and incorporate them as [wage-slaves].  Much fewer dead innocents the city wide destruction.  She probably has her own plan on how to betray her pupil and put a puppet on the throne if needed.

If this farce of a marriage really makes you so unhappy you could just burn custom and culture to the ground.  But be prepared to need to rebuild everything.

But nothing is forever, once you purge the plague and defeat Magnus (look at me the optimist) we can renegotiate the deal with words or guns or propaganda.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 22, 2020, 12:24:05 am
If you wipe out this city, you wipe out the rule of the only man who has ever united the Outlanders.  With Samkrend dead, it's quite likely that his state would collapse into warring tribes, even if you did just assassinate the leaders, as I don't think that Outlanders scare and submit easily.  We need their industry and their workers, not a collapsed rump state.  Stay your hand.

Maybe take a look at some of the temples to see if there is an Outlander god Phoenix resembles.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 22, 2020, 01:52:28 am
...In truth, this is a farce.
Speak with your retinue tomorrow morning, somewhere away from prying ears. Hash out your options, both peaceable and warlike. Play the game, or break it-- do so with precision, is all I ask.

No interest, no betrothal. We couldn't force you otherwise if we tried.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 22, 2020, 07:11:43 am
You don't have to marry anyone and you don't have to blow the city up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 22, 2020, 11:57:53 am
As annoying as it is, no one can deny the power that this gives me, and the 'legal' claim over the Outlands that I would receive. Samkrend's military is more advanced than I expected, and the numbers he can call to arms will be critical in the battles to come. You muse to yourself, then sigh heavily. Overdramatically. If I attack, the Outlands will rise against the Holyland.  SEED lies. This land is no empty wasteland -- they speak of cities and nations besides Samkrend's own. If I claim this world, then I need to protect these people as well. Does my reasoning seem sound, Ancestors?

There's a knocking at your door, and you rise. Crusader Cephie stands stiffly at attention, your datapad in...his? Her? Hand. "I figured you would need this, Mother Pheonix." She gruffly reports in a masculine voice.

It's eerie how good she is at this. You flash a serene smile and dip a nod. Cephie returns to her quarters after a stiff Crusader's bow.

You collapse back into your bed, flicking through the datapad's pages to find a vid series about a teenager living in a hive-city. The entire thing is stylized to the extreme, but you notice there is no drama with immense delight. There are no difficult choices for the protagonist to make -- and no painful mistakes.

You end up watching the series for three hours, quietly ignoring any discussion within your mind's depths.



Night is falling as the sky darkens beyond the flowing curtains hanging over the glass windows. You stifle a yawn of lethargy, rising to stretch and perhaps exercise when someone taps at your window.

[-] An Inferno flows into a halo behind you as you open the curtains, peering out to spot Rekhyt, who gives a cheerful wave. He clutches a roll of paper.  You, on a whim, twist the glass out of the windows in a show of force.

"[Hello. Figured you might want to explore the city. I know a way to sneak out.]"

"This is a very blatant attempt--"

"[Oh, I know. Subtlety is for public, in my opinion. But tell me -- would you want to look at the city from the eyes of a traveler or a lord's? My father is going to post useless guards around you. Give you a guide that will show you all the perfections -- but that's up to you.]"

Your lips twist into a frown as you consider.

"[Plus, I've a map of my father's empire. A gift -- far better than silks or gold.]" Rekhyt waves the paper cheerfully.

"[I'm not interested in spending time with a psychopath.]"

"[Says the woman who killed six people this morning.]" Rekhyt's grin stretches as a devious light glances in his eyes. He raises a hand and snaps his fingers.

"...[[Touché]]"

"[I'm sorry?]"

"[Sorry, it means good point.]"

"Ah. [ Yes, it was. Well, what do you say]?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 22, 2020, 12:24:08 pm
Your reasoning is sound, exploring with Rekhyt sounds like a good plan, as you’ll get to see the city in full
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 22, 2020, 01:01:48 pm
Go for it.  I agree with your reasoning, and I am very pleased to hear it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 22, 2020, 09:32:24 pm
It was important that you make the choice, but it was important that you understand it is a CHOICE you needed to make, not a certainty.  Being forced into a role can be... difficult.  Even if you enjoy it in the end.  I just wanted you to understand there were realistically other paths.

Your reasoning is sound, but meaningless before your will to enforce your new goals.  I am glad that you feel a duty to the people in general, it is the right thing to do.  Even if it brought me pain again and again.  I mean brings you... ha ha... alright.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 23, 2020, 07:07:52 am
Go on the tour with the guy, you'll get to see way more interesting stuff on a small tour than the one with guards and stuff.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 23, 2020, 01:32:29 pm
You sigh, stepping out of the window and twisting it shut behind you. You withdraw your datapad, sending a quick message to Cephie.

Surveying the city with Rekhyt.

Is that what they call it here? Have fun!

You give a flick of your fingers, dismissing the application with a small frown. Rekhyt is more interested in the datapad as opposed to your rapidly flushing face. You control the embarrassment and gesture him forward. But he doesn't move; instead, he reaches into his satchel and withdraws a long cloth hat. You don't hesitate, slipping it on and hiding your...unique hair color beneath it.

"Good. Next is the clothes." He withdraws a long poncho, tossing it to you. "Should cover the uniform. Keep you hidden."

You slide it on, and he walks around you, rubbing at his chin. "Hunch your spine a little. Not too much, but you're too stiff.  You've a soldier's walk. Smart people can notice."

You try to do as he says, and Rekhyt only sighs. "That will do."

"I'm unskilled in sulking." You offer bluntly.

"You really are. You scream 'pay attention to me!'" Rekhyt shrugs as he sets out across the grounds, "You were probably a brat growing up, right?"

"I was very well behaved. Thank you very much!" You retort, balling your fist. "I know that my [Ancestors] think the same!"

"Ah, I apologize -- you're still a brat." Rekhyt nods politely, and just as you're about to call him out, he lifts a hand for silence, crouching into a nearby bush. You sit there in the foliage for a little while, until he rises -- then the two of you make a break across to a small stone gate. Rekhyt jimmies the lock open with a small scrap of metal, and the two of you slip into the breezeway, crouching as you cross the military section of the palace.

Finally, behind another locked door are the streets of the city. A guard doesn't even glance at you or Rekhyt -- he stares straight ahead. Rekhyt presses a small clinking sack into the Guard's pocket as the two of you pass.

You rest in an alleyway, and Rekhyt gives a nod, slipping his own hair into a wrap of cloth. He does the buttons on his vest and flips his sash inside out. "Right. Where to first, Goddess?"

"What is there to do?"

"Well, this is quite the city. Food vendors are on just about every street -- so are temples. There's a brothel on every other street. The Grand Bazaar is about a mile away. What piques your interest?"

"Hmmh...is there a temple to a god similar to me?"

"The Fire God isn't worshipped by many anymore. Only smiths and cooks." Rekhyt frowns, itching at his face, "She was popular ages ago, but has waned for more...Human Gods. With Flaws and struggles. The God of Money is the most worshipped."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 23, 2020, 02:25:09 pm
How about taking a look at the Grand Bazaar?  We can see for ourselves how diverse their economy is, and we might find something interesting.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 23, 2020, 02:35:44 pm
They have an economy, we don’t even have currency as of yet, why not integrate their currency into our economy as well, thus strengthening both of us, and allowing us to pay our citizens and ministers for the work they do
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 23, 2020, 03:00:35 pm
We should run that by Geoyde when we return.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 23, 2020, 03:46:47 pm
We should run that by Geoyde when we return.
Agreed
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 23, 2020, 10:07:07 pm
Once we start a trade then the currency could be pegged to theirs for now but keep it separate in case we need to control it more strictly once the economy recovers.

I would recommend seeing the temple to money and go to the bazaar.  See how these guys handle an economy.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 23, 2020, 10:41:05 pm
Hmff... "brat"? I should think not!

Friend Khudal's playing the fool again, I daresay. Pushing limits, to learn where your limits may lie.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 24, 2020, 08:10:48 am
The bazaar sounds like a neat place, we should go there first and maybe learn and buy some stuff, then head to the money temple unless the temple is closer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 24, 2020, 01:19:38 pm
"Let's head to the Grand [Bazaar]. Maybe the Temple of [Money] after?"

"How about the reverse? I need to exchange some bills."

You dip a nod, and Rekhyt starts across the lain brick streets. You trail behind. He guides you accurately, passing stalls where food vendors hawk their wares. Past beggars and 'guards.' Children play in the streets, chasing and playing tag with one another. Oddly, many of these children steer clear of you and Rekhyt. One makes to step close, but one of his playmates grabs the other child by the collar. A ghost of a smile dances across Rekhyt's face.

The streets don't have the clean layout that the Holyland boasts. You have to slip through many claustrophobic alleyway and abandoned building. When you and Rekhyt finally step out into the street again, a three-story granite building looms heavily on the horizon. A statue of an Outlander coin sits out front --  a curved triangle, laid with intricate curves and relief.  Hollow channels line the edge--

"Did the symbol or the coin come first?"

"Symbol, but it got more complicated."

You nod as you enter the warm temple. The inside is the red sandstone that is so common within the Outlands, but its smooth and well-carved. Another of those coin statues lay on a high plinth --

That's...that's white nephrite jade. You stop in your tracks to stare at the shining white statue. Easily, you appraise, weighing a ton. It's carved with many intricate engravings and inlaid with gold, silver, and other shining alloys.

"You're drooling, Goddess," Rekhyt notes, coming to a stop next to you.

I...I...

"Ho-how old is that?"

"Mmmh...Recent. Thirty or so years."

"Ah."

...I couldn't tell you how valuable that artifact is, but I can tell you that it is expensive. Maybe twelve thousand or more credits? You pull out your datapad, tapping away at it—an appraisal app assists, giving you a rough estimate of [25,000 Empyreal Energy Credits].

Rekhyt snaps his fingers in front of your face, confused. "Something the matter?"

"N-No." You sigh, stowing the pad and rubbing at your face

Rekhyt shrugs, and you follow him to a small section of the main temple. Rough looking guards lounge here. They eye the two of you with constrained hostility. You cannot see the person's face on the other end of the booth, but a small lens set into the wall lets you know they can see yours.  Rekhyt withdraws checks from a pocket --

"Can I see those?"

He nods, passing you one. You note they are made out to 'Khudal [City-Clan, Jester] for 'services rendered' by 'Rekhyt Samkrend.' The god of Money's sigil is stamped on it. You raise an eyebrow. He shrugs, then lifts an arm, displaying a small brand on his inner wrist. In an incredibly small script, you notice it reads [Khudal City-Clan]. Another of those curved symbols is marked beside it.

Jade and gold coins tumble out of the receptacle, and Rekhyt deposits them into a small pouch.

You walk out of the temple, passing by a group of devotees prostrating in front of the jade sculpture. "What's the Khudal thing about?"

"I'm the family joke." Rekhyt laughs, "An uplifted bastard with too much wit and agency."

"Isn't your mother someone important in the seaside cities?"

"Yes, but she doesn't recognize me."

"Why?"

"Because I'm not a woman." He gives you another grin. "They're a..." His lips quirk, then, in the tongue of the Holyland, "A Matriarchy." He shrugs, lapsing back into his native language, "They accept me as a pawn, but only after my father made a fuss about the alliance. Rekhyt is the name my mother gave me after. Khudal is the one I was given at birth. Both are insults."

>[Lapwing, Commoner.] You note, with a frown ghosting your lips and a quick search of your datapad. A linguistic coincidence, as it means the same in [Ancient Terran Egyptian]. "I'm...I'm sorry?"

"Why?"

"...I don't...I don't know."

"I am a fool. I am a servant. I've embraced it -- and now it doesn't hurt." He gives you a grin. "And I have wings now, so it all makes sense."

"I...I suppose. It just rubs me the wrong way."

"You spoke of [Ancestors]?" He pronounces the word in perfect High Empyreal, and you glance at him in surprise. "Is that parents?"

"Ancestors." You correct, and he looks confused.

"Is that what you call your parents?"

"Yes? It's...it's a god thing." You mumble, embarrassed, trying your best not to boast. "I never really had parents, besides them. They guide me with whispers, emotions, and plans." You tap your head, and then let your hand fall to your side.

"Fascinating. Does it get annoying?" Rekhyt doesn't judge, actually sounding intrigued.

"Sometimes. But without them, I would have died long ago. They're strong and old and -- "

"Comforting?"

"...yes." You finish weakly. Rekhyt reaches out, patting you on the shoulder.

"Taking comfort in having your parents nearby is nothing to be ashamed of, Goddess. At least they care." He laughs, cheerfully.



The Grand Bazaar fills an entire plaza and spills out into the streets surrounding it. A great cloth roof is supported by a number of polished red wood pillars. A fountain bubbles away within the center, lined by statues of various indiviuals. As soon as you enter, you're assaulted by smells, scents, and sights the likes of which you've never seen. Well, at least not in your own memories.

There's household goods, technology, guns, bladed weapons, spices, cloth, crafts both foreign and local, spices, minerals, jewelry, armor, animals-- you are lost in the immense number of stalls and sellers. 

Rekhyt grins at you, nudging you in the ribs "You good?"

"I'm good. Just...I..."

"This city is prosperous. Only the Holy City was bigger. Thousands of clans and [cultures] and [nations] all travel to trade. Some say we're the center of the world."

"The Holyland was never this prosperous -- this vibrant." You explain.

"What can you expect from a bunch of stuck up priests and an overbearing god?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 24, 2020, 02:25:43 pm
Take a look at the currencies used.  Are their foreign coins or bills in addition to the jade and gold coins of the Outlanders?  Also, inspect some of the technology and determine how advanced it is in comparison to that of the Holyland.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 24, 2020, 04:31:38 pm
[-] The coinage is the only accepted currency, you notice. Moneychangers sit at every other corner under heavy guard, usually beside an 'idol' of Money. You do note that gold and jade are not the only coins -- rather, just the highest form. Smaller, thinner coins of bronze and silver are used in smaller transactions. Las-guns and rifles, however, seem to be acceptable for bartering, if one transaction is to be believed.

"Magazines and Ammo are also accepted for barter." Rekhyt explains when you question, trailing behind you quietly. He seems content with letting you explore -- and his presence seems to make others uncomfortable. The urchins that linger look pointedly away from you. Guards don't make eye contact. The Merchants offer him things of note and worth -- but they offer it to Khudal.

You approach one of the technology stalls, examining the wares.
Spoiler: Random Tech Stall (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 24, 2020, 04:40:27 pm
Vacuum tubes... do these people have computers?  There's some stuff here we might want to take a closer look at.

Inspect the tube.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 24, 2020, 04:45:42 pm
[-]They are incredibly crude. You don't have much skill in electronics to ascertain if they would work or not --

"Ah, do you have a console in need of repair?" The vendor approaches, a tall outland man with brown hair streaked with red. "I can fix them for you. Sometimes these [lit, sparkholders] don't work well."

"How would you tell."

"They are fragile -- I usually inspect them before purchase, of course!" He picks one up, and gives it a shake. It rattles loudly. He gestures, "This one is broken -- you can even see the loose part within. These are salvaged, but I have some freshly made."

"How do you make them?"

"I purchase from local craftsmen. They would know."

"What do you use them for?"

"Repairing broken Priest technology, of course. It doesn't work quite as well, but its cheaper than buying new -- especially these days."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 24, 2020, 04:51:25 pm
"Right, thanks.  Can you show me one of the consoles?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 24, 2020, 04:55:37 pm
Gas masks, solar panels, the portable foundry, and the mechanical limbs seem important, we could ask about the box, learn why it clicks when we approach, is it detecting heat? Electricity?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 24, 2020, 05:11:38 pm
Such fine jades they work in this city! We used to call the white nephrite [mutton fat], in the stone-dealing trade-- Terran slang. Greasy pale.

Be sure to get some exploring of your own in, once you're done poking through the machinery here! We elders are clumsy at such things-- you've noticed, I'm sure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 24, 2020, 05:16:19 pm
"Ah...of course." He brings you over to the mineral scanner, plugging in a small cord. SEED script runs across the screen after a button press. There's a pulse of energy from it, and the display is -- blank. "This is a good mineral scanner. Refurbished. Runs exactly the same-"The screen glitches, before returning to display nothing of note. Its duty done, it shuts off.

The gas masks range from simple contrapations of filter paper to the heavy-grade Crusader gear that is standard issue. "Crusader Gas masks -- good for dangerous caves or dust, or chemical weapons."

The portable foundry has an electric powered forge to heat small amounts of metals to process them into ingots. It has a blower to pull oxygen in or out, depending on the process. There's a sturdy anvil, another heater for shaping metal already in ingot form, a collapsible barrel, you assume for water or oil. It also contains a welding apparatus and a number of chisels, swages and dies, molds...so on. It also comes with a leather apron and a pair of protective lenses. Among the materials, you note, is a number of powders and chemicals -- "Barker, Crusader, and Insect ash and bone dust."

The solar panels range from [1m] by [1m] to an entire portable array with multiple connections. SEED technology, judging by the high quality and use of bioplastics.

When you near the mechanical limbs, the man grins wide, "A curios! A good friend of mine raided in the SEED lands. He slew a great demon there, and brought back the limbs." Your stomach turns when you reach down to brush away dust and debris -- the Thornton's Thorn is etched into the metal of a plated bicep.

"And this came from a friend -- a Priest was in the wastes and needed food. Clad in heavy robes, he traded this odd box for food. It clicks near places of bad spirits. Odd--someone left it on." He switches the clicking machine off, smiling wide.

"What do these spirits do?"

"They can cause sickness; hair loss, stomach -- some can rot the skin from your bones! Protection from them is incredibly important."

"Should I be standing so close to you?" Rekhyt grins, snatching up the box and bringing it close to you. "It says [low danger, limit exposure to ten hours a day]?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 24, 2020, 05:20:39 pm
A Geiger counter or scintillator used to detect harmful radiation.

"A Priest... do you mean one of the peoples of the Holyland?  Also, what is that auto-injector for?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 24, 2020, 05:25:28 pm
"Yes." And when you question about the auto-injector, he just looks confused. It's a leather cuff with auto-injectors hastily stitched into the working. A small set of wires lead to buttons that attach to the wrist. "It...it auto-injects? They sell vials nearby of various chemicals. They're popular closer to the Holyland."

Rekhyt glances from the box to you, then shrugs and sets it back down. The vendor walks back over to shut it off -- his pleasant smile never fades. Rekhyt turns it back on. The vendor turns it back off. Rekhyt turns it back on. The vendor gives him a pained look, and leaves it on to click through the conversation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 24, 2020, 05:34:14 pm
We're radioactive, I guess.  Any advanced technology here seems to be stolen or traded from the Holyland.  They already have uses for our technologies, which is a good sign.

"Thank you for your patience.  One last question: what is that finger-length tube of hydrogen used for?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 24, 2020, 05:35:17 pm
Is picking up traces of the other day's fusion experiments, I imagine! Clever little click-box.

<Ascended... aren't typically radioactive, are they?>
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 24, 2020, 05:53:00 pm
"Starting fires! Better than flint and steel." The Vendor snatches one up, and Rekhyt drifts over nearby the man. With a press of a button, a small, controlled flame of hydrogen burns forth. "See! Useful."

[16+1 vs 18] Rekhyt pockets one of the tubes in silence -- a quick movement of his fingers to snatch it up, a twist to hide it within his hand and a smooth, natural movement to stow it in his pocket. "Fascinating." He states. "[Look, Goddess, he too is a god.]"

The vendor doesn't notice.

>
Spoiler: Radiation (click to show/hide)

You thank him for his time, and he finally gives you one sour look. The two of you drift through the market towards whatever stall might strike you or your Ancestor's fancy. You glance over at Rekhyt and notice him lighting a rolled tube of herbs with the stolen lighter. You lift your brow -- you didn't even see him stop or stray from your side.

"Did you bring another?"

"No. But -- " This time you watch him carefully as he melts into the crowd. He hunches down, and, with the easy grace of practice, shoplifts another rolled tube. He returns to your side and passes it to you. You grin despite yourself as he lights the lighter and cups it, extending it out to you.

"Thank you."

"When a beautiful lady asks for something, she usually gets it." Rekhyt smoothly states, then grins, "But I need to play nice with you, so."

[6] You wait until you start walking again before sticking a foot out at the exact right moment -- graceful Rekhyt falls head over heels and eats brick. "I deserved that." He grumbles as he rises, grinning.

"You did." You coldly state, grinning.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 24, 2020, 06:04:24 pm
What now?  Should we look at drugs, guns, or melee weapons?  Or go somewhere else?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 24, 2020, 06:36:34 pm
I've wondered for some time now, about the Outlanders' knives and their Barker-bone handles-- ever since that tent-booth in Steelworks 09. Could seek out a stall, ask Rekhyt about the culture behind such blades?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 24, 2020, 07:08:10 pm
Sure, assuming that the Western Outlanders have a similar enough culture to that of the Eastern Outlanders.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 24, 2020, 07:19:33 pm
Mm, yes... I'm so used to SEED's dismissal, it hadn't really occurred to me how different the cultures of these lands might be.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 24, 2020, 07:44:00 pm
You come to a stall selling bladed weapons, and you note that none of the handles of the knives here are made of bone -- all of them are wooden or bioplastic or full steel. You note that few don't have handles -- blades of beautiful steel with full tangs. Each of these handleless blades is a masterwork of steel -- sharp as a razor and nearly a [foot] long.

"Back in the Holyland, I purchased a barker-bone handled knife. What's the story behind them?"

"Those were either trophies or cheap scrap. Few Outlander smiths would willingly put Barker bone on a handle without a witness -- without it being important." Rekhyt explains, then, switches to the tongue of SEED, "An Outlander's knife is...well, a symbol of cultural unity. Few Priests would know this, but an oath sworn on a knife is one that is respected as much as possible. Marriages are usually bound on them."

You nod, examing a long, crude sword with a single edge and a curve to the blade.

"It represents that one is a member of the warrior [caste]. It represents...an unbroken line of history. Of struggle and of survival. Faith. Protection. The safety of the clan above all else." He frowns, "It is the Law of the Barker -- the first we learned when we were exiled out into the wasteland with naught but our claws." He flashes the silver of his longknife and the white of his grin. "Barkers value the pack above all else. They are hunters, getting food of their own. When two packs meet, the leaders 'speak' only and first...and when there is conflict within the pack, it is settled away from prying eyes."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 24, 2020, 08:15:22 pm
Can we afford one of the handle-less blades?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 24, 2020, 09:07:11 pm
Oh, you should also not let your guard down, this is a battlefield, glad you got a kick in.

This is your prime opportunity to get to know this man, whether he could be a useful pawn, perhaps as even a sham husband.  See if you can get hm off his guard, emotionally, to try and pry out a simple moment of honest truth from him.

Or keep going with your instincts they seem to be pretty good.

These people have a deep cultural hatred of your people, down to their founding myths.  Press on that, see what cracks you can find.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 24, 2020, 09:10:00 pm
We should insist that they stop killing our people and literally grinding them into dust if they truly do want an alliance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 24, 2020, 10:07:17 pm
We should insist that they stop killing our people and literally grinding them into dust if they truly do want an alliance.
Agreed. I had no idea they were doing that
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 25, 2020, 06:49:55 am
We should insist that they stop killing our people and literally grinding them into dust if they truly do want an alliance.
Does the guy we're with right now even have the power to stop this?

Also I say we buy one of the handle-less knives.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 25, 2020, 11:41:54 am
Well hey everybody. I may have come into contact with someone with Corona. So you guys get more posts per day since I will be quarentined until the person's test comes back.



"I'd like one of those handle-less knives." You murmur over to Rekhyt, and his eyes dance along the offered blades. He gestures to the smith -- a tall, skinny Outlander with calloused hands and a bone-handled knife at his belt. The man crosses his arms as he approaches Rekhyt, frowning down at the man. One after another, Rekhyt examines the blades, even passing them to you. Finally, he gives a shake of his head. "None of these will work."

"What?" The Smith claims, confused.

"None of these are good enough." Rekhyt explains, crossing his arms. "Your knifework is lazy. Rote."

"You dare to--"

"Shut up." Rekhyt commands with steel in his voice. His eyes narrow. "You claim to be a master -- yet you're nothing more than an apprentice. These blades are too stiff--"

[12+2 vs. 4] The Smith draws -- but Rekhyt is faster. His knife lashes out, flatside first -- and the Smith's blade shatters under the strike. Rekhyt twists the knife in his hand and stares the Smith down. "I've proved my point? Do I need to prove another?"

"No."

Rekhyt turns away, and you follow along. "I know of smiths in the east. Masters of their craft. They make blades that ripple like waves -- the strongest steel with the sharpest edge held the longest. If you seek to become recognized as an Outlander warrior, let me commission you a knife worthy of a goddess -- not one made by a random craftsman in the bazaar." There's a slight, sharp edge in Rekhyt's voice, and you note that he calls you goddess without irony or sarcasm.

Your lips quirk as you think of your response.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 25, 2020, 12:29:43 pm
((I'm sorry to hear that.  Hopefully it's a false alarm.))

"Thank you.  I had no idea these knives were so brittle.  These eastern smiths... are they part of this nation or another?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 25, 2020, 12:34:25 pm
Urg, that's rough that is. We'll be glad for the swift schedule tho!

That knife of Rekhyt's you melted away, back at Stormmont... that was a potent insult. More so than I'd realized, at the time.

A touch of will in the words: "Do you know, that's the first time today I've heard you say 'goddess' and mean it?"
"I had no idea these knives were so brittle.  These eastern smiths... are they part of this nation or another?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 25, 2020, 12:55:18 pm
[12 vs. 2+2]"Do you know, that's the first time today I've heard you say 'goddess' and mean it?" Your will encounters resistance as you force it on him, but that passes. Rekhyt shrugs.

"What else would you call a beautiful and terrifying woman such--"

[17 vs. 15+2] Rekhyt's will exerts itself, and he glares at you. You notice several people staring as the two of you come to a stop. He exhales a low breath, then, softly, tenderly despite the sharp words, "Do not use your magics on me, woman. My mind is my own." You still have a grip, but, your point proven, you relax it.

You grin as the two of you stare each other down. Rekhyt rolls his eyes and starts off -- but as soon as his back is turned, you can see the faintest traces of a smile. Approval? You follow along in silence until you come to a stop while inspecting some silken drapes.

"I had no idea these knives were so brittle.  These eastern smiths... are they part of this nation or another?" You question, levelly.

"By my existence they are part of this empire. The cities by the sea have the best smiths -- especially since they have better ores now. They only had poor quality iron, so they had to learn to work it well. Now, they've access to many minerals and metals they never had before." And, after a pause, "His blades would be good for commoners, but a clever man can see the weakness in his opponent's steel. A fault. A crack. A fracture. It's like many things in life. War, hunting, persuasion, courtship."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 25, 2020, 01:01:12 pm
"Speaking of flaws, can you show me the ugly parts of this city, things your father would never want me to see?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 25, 2020, 01:11:46 pm
Such interesting things we're learning about this fellow.

Ugliness... hm. Do you want a bit more time to wander the bazaar first-- pick out something pleasant, maybe grab a bite to eat somewhere? There's little rush.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 25, 2020, 01:52:32 pm
"Speaking of flaws, can you show me the ugly parts of this city, things your father would never want me to see?"
I don’t think ugliness is the correct word here, it could be interpreted as an insult

What are you interested in seeing, Phoenix?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 25, 2020, 02:52:22 pm
"Can we find somewhere to eat?" You question, after a final glance to the shimmering silk. Rekhyt nods.

"I know just the place."



You don't purchase much, but Rekhy does purchase something. A small metal case of those herbal tubes. After he orientates himself, he sets off to a food stall nearby. The two of you claim a seat at the counter, and a large woman with dark hair approaches. She eyes Rekhyt, then you, then turns to start preparing your food.

Do all chefs look alik-- ... is that cheese?

The woman sets two wooden boards in front of you. Gooey white cheese oozes from meat patties.The smell of herbs and gravy drift to tempt your nose, and you pick up one of the meat lumps and pop it into your mouth. The meat is cheap and poorly ground, but the cheese more than makes up for any loss of tenderness.  Its heavily herbed and spiced, and if you weren't Ascended, it would no doubt leave you dehydrated. She pours two cups of [kefir] as you eat, and a shot of clear liquor for each of you. All in silence. Rekhyt and you finish at the same time, draining the kefir and moving on to the liqour.

He lifts a toast, "To peace."

"To peace." You echo, tapping your glass on the counter before knocking back the slug of alcohol. It makes even your eyes water.

Rekhyt drops a jade coin on the table and rises -- the Vendor's eyes widen in surprise, but she expresses no gratitude.

"Where to next?" He questions, lighting a tube and passing it to you. You raise your brow, then grin, taking a puff as he lights another for himself.

"Take me to the ugly parts. The places where your father's guide wouldn't."

A crooked grin crosses Rekhyt's lips.

"I expected you to be a bit more prim and proper."

"Sorry to dash that assumption." You grin.

"We'll be wanting to go to the outskirts of town. It's a little dangerous, but I'm sure you won't mind, will you?"



The brick houses here are unkempt. Cracking and crumbling into the street. The sound of gunfire echoes in the distance, but Rekhyt pays no attention to it. You trail behind him, avoiding the beggars and dark alleys. You catch sight of a few urchins clad in torn robes, that hover and lounge in the ruins. Gangs of young men and women linger in darkness, their eyes following the two of you as you step by. Sizing you up with quiet hostility.

He leads you through these decript streets with nary a pause. It isn't until you reach a dimly lit house does he come to a stop. The two of you step inside the bar, and Rekhyt claims a seat in the dimly lit, smelly, smoky establishment. You sit across from him. Groups of people huddle together eyeing the other gangs. The barkeep sits behind bars of steel, a las-gun in plain view. "So, this is probably the safest part of the outskirts.  From here it depends on what you want to see from here. There's probably a clan war happening we could intervene in, orphans we could get information from, or bars where the booze will make you go blind. A couple of drugdealers are around, selling [Thorn]. There's a black market nearby, selling slaves. Out here, there isn't any of my father's men -- just too many clans that shouldn't be all pushed together."

Rekhyt pauses, eyeing one of the thugs at the bar. "I grew up around here. When I was worthless. This is where the dregs go to live."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 25, 2020, 02:58:09 pm
Tomorrow we will see the best of this city, the things Samkrend wants us to see.  Tonight we should see the worst, the pure unadulterated truth.

"How common are clan wars?  I'd like to get a look at one to see what I would be getting into if I agreed to this alliance."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 25, 2020, 03:07:23 pm
I hope that through the course of the alliance, we’d be able to make every part prosperous, I don’t like that there’s a place like this amongst prosperity, given how much seems to be available, we should be able to repair the buildings, make more as necessary, different areas for the different clans, these are just my thoughts, Phoenix, don’t feel compelled to mention them if you don’t want to
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 25, 2020, 04:43:50 pm
We are seeing the dangers of a fractious, unregulated, and money-obsessed society.  Capitalism is a game with deadly consequences.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 25, 2020, 07:10:18 pm
"Every night." Rekhyt shrugs, "Usually over petty problems. Sure you want to? We'll have to go armed."

You look confused.

"Can't exactly scorch a city-block and not have someone notice, right?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 25, 2020, 07:26:52 pm
"Yes, unless you think it would cause political problems in dealing with your father.  I would like to see what weapons the clans use and how they fight."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 25, 2020, 08:20:51 pm
"As long as you don't use...your powers, unless its an emergency, how will he know?" Rekhyt questions, grinning.

You still hesitate.

[One more vote required.]
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 25, 2020, 08:56:03 pm
"On second thought, that may not be a good idea.  Can you take me to your slave-market instead?  I didn't know that your family tolerated that practice."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 25, 2020, 09:17:21 pm
These people are aimless, not contributing to this society or any other.  I wonder how much you could recruit from these dregs.  Be less severe then SEED, give them purpose and training. 

What kind of information would the orphans provide?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 25, 2020, 09:34:24 pm
"What of those urchins?" You question, curious, waiting until two of your Ancestors approve the operation. A courtesy. "They seem to watch you."

[13] Rekhyt gives a laugh, "They do more than that. I am the [King] of Orphans!" Rekhyt grins at you, "Those children only get enough to eat because I pay them for information. They're my eyes and ears in this city. They have my protection -- if they're not stupid, of course."

"That...is either generous or manipulative."

"Why not both?"

"Would these 'dregs' be interested in living in the Holyland?"

[-] Rekhyt's grin falters, then he rises, moving to the bar and ordering drinks for the both of you. Another slug of that horrible alcohol, but the two of you toss them back together and he lights you an herbal [cigarette]. "Yeah. They would. But you shouldn't be. They've lived a long time around here. Too long. They wouldn't be able to uh..." He lapses into Holylander, "Adapt? Adapt."

"That's rather grim of you. You don't think that they can reform?"

"Our cultures are...very different. Priests think of the nation, of the religion. These people only think of family and close friend. No other."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 26, 2020, 06:33:34 am
A black market was mentioned earlier I say we go there maybe they have better tech stuff.

Also I don't see why after some work we can't get our two cultures to become friends.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 26, 2020, 03:09:30 pm

"They don't. Not officially. But Atlan and Bat profit from it all the same." Rekhyt shrugs. "Its odd -- isn't it?"

"Are you saying that they're directly protecting it?"

"I implied it. I didn't state it. What can the family fool do to end it?"

"Rekhyt could change it."

"Only a step up from the fool. A backstabbing, lazy, no good prankster."

You frown.

[1 vote for black market]
[1 vote for slave-market]


"Have you made up your mind? We're about to get into a bar fight." Rekhyt ticks his head towards the bar counter, towards the thugs eyeing you furtively.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 26, 2020, 03:24:54 pm
The mountain-folk where I was stationed had a mantra.

Quote from: <...>
    A man is bound:
    First, to his kinsfolk.
    Then, to his [village-state].
    Then, to his kingdom.
    Then, to his God.

In that order, you understand. A king who stood not for the family bond, in their minds, was no king at all.
Lovely people. Very stubborn. Good with granite.


>>>

Between the options mentioned… I suppose a visit to the black market couldn't hurt.
What are we trying to accomplish, with this jaunt through the slums? What are our priorities out here?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 26, 2020, 03:48:59 pm
Tomorrow we will see the best of this city, the things Samkrend wants us to see.  Tonight we should see the worst, the pure unadulterated truth.

Surely you would like to know what atrocities the Outlanders are committing before you commit to an alliance?  After we establish the alliance, their atrocities will become our atrocities, and the people in these slums will become our people, destitute and violent.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 26, 2020, 03:49:29 pm
We should go to the slave market.  Find out where they come from, where they are going.  Why the institution exists here.

SEED had some excuse, being in an existential war against the horror and still afforded the contract bound some rights.  The underside of this supposedly prosperous land shows either structural problems, a lack of concern or an inability to solve the inequality.

Maybe mention you were looking only to help the poor here, not steal away the kingdom of urchins he has amassed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 26, 2020, 04:29:27 pm
With some trepidation, you state, "Take me to the slave market."

"Don't have enough slaves within your kingdom?"

"Debt-slavery, at least in Stormmont, is a thing of the past. Everyone there is equal."

"In slavery to their Goddess?"

"I'm working on it." You grumble, defensively. "It isn't easy to turn a [totalitarian, rule of one] government towards [democracy, rule of the people] in a day."

"...you're seriously attempting that?"

"I am."

Rekhyt rubs at his face. "Are you dead set?"

"I am."

Rekhyt rises with a glance at the bar. A frown curves his lips, but the two of you leave the dimly lit establishment and set off on the cracked brick streets. A chill begins to blow in as the warmth of the daily sun fades, leaving you with the night above. You cannot see many stars above -- the light pollution of the inner city shines too brightly.

"I heard a saying once, Rekhyt."

"Hmmh?"

"Man fears the darkness, so he builds cities to scrape away at it."

"It's a truthful saying, if not one I've heard before. But if that's the case, why did my father build this city?"

"I was hoping you could answer that question."

"Outlanders have always feared the dark of the wastes at night. Beetles. Abominations. Other clans. Barkers. There are many things in the dark. My father tried to scrape away that darkness -- but bright lights cast darker shadows."

He pulls masks from his bag, a white face with brightly colored lines and a too-wide smile showing sharp teeth. For you, you notice, he has purchased one with an angelic face half consumed by flames.

"You came prepared?"

"I always do."



You step into a derelict building and descend a staircase. A long galley from the red stone beneath the city expands out below you. The great ribs of the reddish-grey rock remind you of some beast's belly, and the only light comes from dim lanterns. The benches where the buyers sit are cast into darkness. You and Rekhyt take a seat in silence.

Huddled masses in iron chains sit a great cage by the stage. A hard-eyed, tanned man strapped with muscles stands shirtless, his body marked with tattoo and ritual scar. A long mane of blond hair hangs past his shoulders, filled with bone charm. Guards stand close by, tensely eying the crowd.

[16-5] You sit clenched and patient as the youth and elderly are sold off to the crowd's dark figures. There are many peoples of SEED mixed in with unfortunate Outlander. You notice some of those Nothern Outlanders, some that look similar to Rekhyt --

He wraps a hand around your wrist gently. "This bothers you, doesn't it?"

"...yes."

"I didn't mean to make you sa--"

"It makes me angry." You interrupt, clenching your fist.

"Another will pop up if you destroy this one. And what of the slaves?"

"Don't mock m-"

"If we disrupt this place -- we need a plan for what to do after. What we will say, what we will do, how we will fight -- we can't go into this half-assed."

Give me permission -- give me a plan. I hate this.

"How did you know?"

"You had a certain look in your eyes when I said the word 'slave'."

"And you let me come?" You question, darkly.

"You're a free woman -- what can I do but help?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 26, 2020, 04:51:01 pm
Could there be a way to melt/break the chains farthest away from where they connect? That way they won’t be connected to each other/the wall and the fire might not be as damaging

Is there any silicon nearby? We could use that for chain breaking and not risk burning people in the process
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 26, 2020, 05:10:37 pm
Do this without obvious use of your powers.  We have plausible deniability as this place shouldn't technically be allowed to operate anyway.  Just found a bunch of SEED people and abused outlanders wandering around and directed them to come with us.

Use body enhancement only and stealth, take out the guards first with Rekhyt's help.  Then if possible remove the lanterns with controlled small scale detonations and attack the stage.  Create a light source for the slaves to run to and encourage them to follow you. 

Hard to pull off with just 2 people against an unknown number of enemies.

The buyers also seem to value their anonymity/  Perhaps attacking that first would have the best chance of reducing the size of the next gathering like this.  If you could find a way to light up the viewing gallery without overtly displaying your abilities.

Maybe there is a better plan, but permission to act?  Ha, yes.  Given if you need it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 26, 2020, 05:39:29 pm
You absolutely have my permission.  First, however, could you gather some information?  Where and how do they get their slaves, who are most of their buyers, how long this sort of thing has been around in these parts, how common is it, that sort of thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 26, 2020, 05:48:20 pm
You have my permission to act
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 26, 2020, 06:39:45 pm
"Can you tell me about the slave trade?"

"Intimately."

"Where and how do they get them?"

"Raids and Raids. No place is safe."

"Who are most of the buyers?"

"Rich clans and individuals -- to do work that no free man wants to cheaply," Rekhyt explains, answering your next question, smoothly. "Usually, the planting and harvesting of crops. Some are less...fortunate."

"And how long have they've been -- "

"Slavery? Forever -- but the institutions that have formed have been within the last fifty years or so." Rekhyt shrugs, "It was a lot more small-scaled. More honorable. A warrior kept what they captured and no more."

You turn your appraising eye to the stage once more --

[9] Nine armed Outlanders are guarding the stage, and, by extension, the slaves. While not armed with a gun, the man on the stage has a cruel-looking whip and a thin, curved sword at his hip.

[12] They have las-guns, and are armored in what looks like bioplastic armor. Each has a helmet, and uniformity about them. They stand stoic and stiffly -- experienced. Each of them wears a blank mask -- no doubt matching the expression behind it. Knives are at their belts, as one would expect.

[-]The lamps are burning a hydrocarbon, of some sort, judging by the soot -- separating the two to control the hydrogen...you don't know what it would do.


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 26, 2020, 07:22:49 pm
Do we have the currency that Samkrend said he would give us?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 26, 2020, 07:25:33 pm
He's currently in possession of it, and would give it to you if you so request.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 26, 2020, 07:26:38 pm
Could we just buy all the slaves, free them and get them safely out of the way, and then commence with the combat?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 26, 2020, 07:27:39 pm
...I don't think he has enough money.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 26, 2020, 07:29:11 pm
How about something subtle, like giving the guards brain hemorrhages, one after another?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 26, 2020, 07:31:18 pm
Is that the plan?

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 26, 2020, 11:24:11 pm
My suggestion is: Start by trying to take out the guards by causing brain hemorrhages, one guard at a time.  Stop before you are starving, so that you will still be able to use your powers.  Unless they're all dead, shout in the Outlander tongue "I'm a doctor, let me see them!"  Use the opportunity to approach one of the dead or injured guards, grab their gun, and use it to quickly kill any that remain.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 26, 2020, 11:49:21 pm
This... is going to be a bit more complicated than just murdering the guards.

We drop every guard here with strength of will, or with a few well-placed las-bolts, or what have you. Then what? How do we safely extricate the captives in the ensuing tumult, and where do we take them once we're clear? How do we minimize any political fallout that follows?

Most of all: what is the final scope of your action here to be? Are you breaking up a single gathering-- or opening war against the entire Outlander slave trade?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 27, 2020, 12:25:10 am
Considering that most of these slaves are "Priests," our people, and have been illegally captured, since technically slave trading is forbidden here, the political fallout should be minimal, even if the crowd is able to identify us despite our mask and non-use of obvious powers.  We can bring them with us to the palace, claim they are our purchased slaves or our rescued people, and transport them back to the Holyland when we are done here.

Alternatively, Rekhyt will probably know a good, secret safehouse for them for now, and we can pick them up when we leave this place.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 27, 2020, 01:00:11 am
That'll work, aye.

One last question, then: do we want to let Rekhyt know what we're about to do? On the one hand, he may have something pressing we've not considered-- on the other hand, I'd rather not be overheard.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 27, 2020, 01:01:01 am
Hmm... I'm not sure...  It probably couldn't hurt to ask, I think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 27, 2020, 06:46:29 am
The plan so far sounds good, also I say we whisper the plan to Rekhyt so he can help with it, because team work makes the dream work.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 27, 2020, 06:50:11 am
If slavery is illegal, saying we purchased them isn’t a good idea
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 27, 2020, 11:25:51 pm
Good news everyone! I don't have the 'rona. Bad news, back to the daily grind.
I updated the previous one to include the mask. I apologize if that caused an issue.



"Say, healer. Doctor is a Holyland thing." Rekhyt advises, then nods, hus expression hidden behind his mask. He withdraws a las-pistol and adjusts himself subtly to provide cover. You take a deep breath, letting your willpower drift out.

[-] Two guards drop to the ground as the water within their brains suddenly turns to hydrogen and oxygen. The others shift in confusion, glancing away from the crowd to turn their attentions to the bodies-- then they move to try and assist their dying comrades. Muffled and quiet conversation breaks out. The pews, however, remained quiet.

"Three gold for --" The man on the stage falters, confused, stopping mid-sale. "Ah. Excuse us-- one moment. Sorry for the delay." He hopes down, striding over to the dead guards to nudge at one with a boot.

You rise, calling out, "I'm a healer-- let me see them."

[2] Subterfuge isn't your strong suit. Guns level at you instantly as you make yourself very suspicious in a very short amount of time. The other customers only shift in their seats and crane their necks to examine the scene. Interested only in the drama, no doubt. The lead slaver waves you away, "Go sit back down-- do not approach the stage. We'll deal with this."

You hesitate— Rekhyt shifts.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 27, 2020, 11:30:20 pm
((Sigh.  What's our new hunger level?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 27, 2020, 11:32:45 pm
Your hunger is unaffected. Splitting hydrogen and oxygen, at this point, is rote, and the only difficulty comes in the shifting pulsing meat jelly that is the human brain. That, and you are currently incredibly unskilled with this form of killing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 27, 2020, 11:34:25 pm
It seems like we could just sit down and repeat the process until they are all dead.  Unless someone has another plan?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 28, 2020, 12:12:35 am
You should put fear into everyone here.  Make them dread coming to another one of these.  Kill some of the crowd with brain death as well, make them see they are not the audience but actors as well.  Then when panic ensues make a controlled detonation of the lasguns of the guards and take them out.  Should shut these things down a bit for a while if the buyers fear showing up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 28, 2020, 12:15:47 am
I would hesitate to kill members of the crowd, who haven't necessarily done anything wrong...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 28, 2020, 12:16:46 am
We could make out who was doing the buying maybe?

Whichever way not really super concerned about it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 28, 2020, 12:17:27 am
I wouldn't have a problem with targeting the buyers.  Sit down.  Are the guards far enough away from the slaves for a las-gun explosion to not hurt the slaves?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on August 28, 2020, 05:01:41 am
I'm all for blowing up the minds of slave buyers and the guards. Also go for blowing up the guards guns.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 31, 2020, 11:39:41 am
[-] ...they're in the splash zone. Shrapnel could be an issue.

You reclaim your seat and glance at Rekhyt, who gives a shrug of his shoulders. "Worth a shot. We might have to try something a bit more straightforward -- unless you have another idea?" He whispers with a frown.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 31, 2020, 11:48:55 am
What do you have in mind for being more straightforward? Whispered to Rekhyt, of course
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 31, 2020, 01:20:59 pm
"I was just advising on strategy. You want to free them, right?" Rekhyt shrugs, eying the guards who begin to drag the bodies away. The lead slaver steps back up on stage. His gaze drags across the dimly lit crowd, falling on you. He stares you down, before doing the same to another person on the other side of the aisle.

 "Alright. Drag out the next one. Come on." The slaver barks.

"But if you want me to take over, just say the word." Rekhyt jokes, his mask grinning for him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 31, 2020, 01:21:37 pm
Was worth a shot indeed.

Dissolve the minds of the remaining guards, one at a time. Prioritize those closest to the corpses.
Snuff the lamp-flames next-- draw the heat from the combustive reaction, say, or twist the glass over the flame. Again, one at a time.


Creeping fear is our game here, slow and subtle. You can whisk away the captives while the crowd's scared and confused-- with any luck, the people gathered here will attribute the evening's proceedings to a vengeful spirit or some such.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 31, 2020, 01:32:48 pm
Yes, we want them freed, maybe Rekhyt should take over
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 31, 2020, 03:04:42 pm
Practice with different powers is always useful.  This is the kind of thing we can't practice by sparring, after all.

Was worth a shot indeed.

Dissolve the minds of the remaining guards, one at a time. Prioritize those closest to the corpses.
Snuff the lamp-flames next-- draw the heat from the combustive reaction, say, or twist the glass over the flame. Again, one at a time.


Creeping fear is our game here, slow and subtle. You can whisk away the captives while the crowd's scared and confused-- with any luck, the people gathered here will attribute the evening's proceedings to a vengeful spirit or some such.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 31, 2020, 07:39:46 pm
Those that live by the sword -- die by the sword.

[-] You have no problems killing the slavers instantly -- the guards hit the ground in waves as you apply your willpower to the water within their brains. The remainder draw back from their brethren's corpses, only to hit the ground the same as you extend your will further -- there is panic, but only one guard manages to slip out the side door and escape. The lead slaver starts to flee, trying to follow his guard out -- the audience starts up, pressing towards the exit.

[11][20][10]That is, until the lamps smolder and die. One after another. The hall closest to the main exit is plunged into darkness first. There's dread and panic. The slave-buyers are confused and afraid, and the lead slaver slows as the laterns die over the side exit. He's hesitating, and Rekhyt lines up the shot.

"Tell me when."


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 31, 2020, 07:48:12 pm
Now
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 31, 2020, 08:58:00 pm
Tell him to take the shot.  Hopefully that will get the crowd moving again.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 31, 2020, 09:36:38 pm
Tell him to take the shot.  Hopefully that will get the crowd moving again.
if the slaver knows he’ll just move out of the way, we need to kill the slaver
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 31, 2020, 09:39:52 pm
Right, and that's who Rekhyt is aiming at.  When Rekhyt "takes the shot," he will fire at the lead slaver and either wound or kill him, unless he misses I guess.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 31, 2020, 09:48:53 pm
Hydrogen Embolism: Novice, Horrifying
((Ahhaha. Ladies and gentledust... we've found ourselves a brand-new adjective. :)) ))

/ Then came they, and laid hands on Jesus and took him.
/ And, behold, one of them which were with Jesus stretched out his hand, and drew his sword, and struck a servant of the high priest's, and smote off his ear.
/ Then said Jesus unto him, Put up again thy sword into his place: for all they that take the sword shall perish with the sword.
/ Thinkest thou that I cannot now pray to my Father, and he shall presently give me more than twelve legions of angels?
/ But how then shall the scriptures be fulfilled, that thus it must be?


Give the order. Take the captives-- explain that you mean them well-- and leave this place, for a safe-house of Rekhyt's choosing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 31, 2020, 10:43:29 pm
[15+1 vs. 13-1] The lead slaver crumples to the ground with a yelp of pain. An explosion of blood and gore at his hip drops him to the floor-- you glance at Rekhyt's las-gun. The two of you start to move towards the cage. Rekhyt watches the slave buyers on one side, while you watch the other. Guards stand, their hands lingering on their pistols, but they don't draw on you, despite the easy targets you and Rekhyt present. Rekhyt strides past the line of corpses, to the crippled lead slaver.

"Rifle internals?"

"Oh -- yeah. The shock and awe factor is amazing." Rekhyt draws and levels his long knife while pulling the slaver up by the hair. The slaver catches your eye contact. His eyes are unfocused, but there is no fear in them, no shock. Just...acceptance. "I mean, how many times have you had to change a pistol mag? Why carry extra?"

"That's....that's fair, yeah." You dip your head in a nod, and Rekhyt cuts the slaver -- ...like a pig.

"So, I figure -- why not put that power to use."

You nod again as Rekhyt cleans his blade. The slave-buyers are sitting patiently.

"They're waiting for us to start selling." He explains.

You turn towards the crowd to glare at the eighteen masked individuals that stare back at you. With your only arm, you lift your hand and gesture to the exit. A low murmur breaks out through the crowd, but they leave -- only after a glance back at 'Khudal,' who tilts his head and lifts his pistol.

"Do you know a safe house we could use?" You question, starting towards the cage. The huddled masses, clad in rags and smelling of filth, nervously shift away, but you don't have to speak a word. You lift your mask and give a smile to your people. Shock, then surprise, then tears  -- tears of joy. Of hope. Some fall to their knees in prayer. While not quite sure who you are, the Outlanders relax a little when their comrades in chains explain.

With one smile and not one word the crowd of slaves knows what you represent.

"Touching. You've got a place." Rekhyt interrupts, and you twist your attention away from the 'slaves'.



Shepherding twenty-nine former slaves through the city to the hover-dock takes the better part of two hours. Boarding and explaining the situation to your guard takes another hour -- the only thing they want to know is if they should leave now or later to deliver them home. Rekhyt, however, shakes his head.

"No, no. Leaving would be suspicious. Stay. I'll pay for the food bills." He pulls out a bag of coins and tosses it at your captain's feet. "Enough for a week."

The Crusader, to her credit, only looks to you. When you dip a nod, the captain snatches up the bag and gives a duck of her head to Rekhyt.



You step out on to the landing pad and stretch. Rekhyt yawns, "So, where to next, Goddess?"


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 31, 2020, 10:49:20 pm
((What is the significance of the "horrifying" label?))

The black market, perhaps?  If not there, maybe we could visit the temple of the fire god.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on August 31, 2020, 11:02:03 pm
Actually, what about what the working class and upper class do for entertainment?

Maybe see some art?  Or I guess a temple would have most of the art.

Nasty little trick you got there!  Almost as fun as the one I used to take out starships by breaching the fusion generators with micro wormholes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on August 31, 2020, 11:05:05 pm
We were just at the black market. We should at least learn the religion(s)? of our potential alliance members, +1 to temple exploration


Actually, what about what the working class and upper class do for entertainment?

Maybe see some art?  Or I guess a temple would have most of the art.
+1 to these suggestions
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 31, 2020, 11:09:12 pm
The black market is actually separate from the slave market.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on August 31, 2020, 11:13:36 pm
((It depends on the society, but that horrifying means something that an average person would be filled with horror at witnessing. After all, you literally just killed nine people in less than 10 minutes with them having no idea why they're dropping dead by turning the water in their brain into hydrogen and oxygen. No chance at surrender. No chance to injure. No chance for peace--just dead. No chance of survival.

Wouldn't you fear such a godly act?))

We were just at the black market. We should at least learn the religion(s)? of our potential alliance members, +1 to temple exploration

That was the slave market. ))


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on August 31, 2020, 11:19:12 pm
((Hey now, horror is relative... we coulda gone for the intestines. Imagine the screaming! The detonation of bowels!))
((But yes, Sol-children are scary  :-X ))

Food. A thank you to the princeling-- then rest. It's been a full day.

Joyous tears, from a smile-- that, godling, was the trick of the evening.
You did well by your names back there. By both your names.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on August 31, 2020, 11:20:54 pm
((They chose the wrong industry to become a part of.))

Take a quick look at the fire temple.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 01, 2020, 09:08:47 am
I still think we should go to the black market, but the fire temple sounds neat as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 01, 2020, 01:09:30 pm
The temple to the fire goddess isn’t as large or ornate as the temple of money. It sits on an unnatural hill of raised earth, wrapped around a basin within the center of the mound. Red granite pillars of rough-hewn stone hold up a slightly angled roof of terracotta. You spot only three priests and a few guards striding across the smooth ceramic floor of the internal structure.

The basin within the center of the mound burns with a hydrogen flame. Pieces of wood burn and crackle weakly, turning to ash and char. A golden hammer, anvil, and cooking pot sit next to the basin on elevated plinths. A bearded priest sits beside the fire, cross-legged. He stares into the flames with intensity that, you note, could probably melt steel.

 “The Temple is closed at this time we—”, A young man approaches the two of you, and speaks softly. He wears a loose robe of mottled red and blue, tied to his frame with a sash of gold and silver thread. His head is shaved free of hair, and a splotch of black charcoal dots his brow.

“Your goddess is here.” Rekhyt interrupts, gesturing to you.

“I’m sorry, what?”

You turn your gaze to Rekhyt, who lifts his mask to flash you a grin and give a thumbs up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 01, 2020, 03:30:03 pm
Create a small flame above our outstretched hand and observe the man's reaction.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 02, 2020, 03:06:40 am
Create a small flame above our outstretched hand and observe the man's reaction.
+1 Looks like its time to get more followers.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 02, 2020, 10:32:00 pm
The flame flickers to life in the palm of your hand. The amount you're burning is barely visible in the dark of the night. So, with a tweak of the formula, you change the emitted light, turning it into a bright blue. The young priest blinks.

Then he investigates your hand. You make to flinch back, but Rekhyt waves you into stillness. "It is the Outlander way, goddess." He pauses, then continues, in Holylander, "Skepticism."

"It's no trick -- I can summon fire."

The young priest is silent. His hands shake as he smooths out his robes. He bows his head and turns away. He fetches the elder-by-the-flame and the two approach. The elder takes your wrist to examine the fire, and his hand drops.

"Fire-blooms-flowers brought home by a fool."

"...what?"

He gestures to Rekhyt behind the mask of Khudal. "The Fool."

"No, what do-- that name. I've been called it before."

"You've forgotten who you are." The elder states, nodding. He crosses his hands into his robes over his bulk. The youth is scribbling across a thick pad of paper. Observing with the eyes of a fanatic. "We can educate you."

You hesitate, and Rekhyt turns and gives an exaggerated tilt of his head-- then a slow, delicate bow. "Welcome back to the show, Goddess."

I...I'm confused. What just happened?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 02, 2020, 10:38:19 pm
It looks like you've successfully made them believe that you are their goddess.  I would say that you should just go with the flow and see what they have to "teach" you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 02, 2020, 11:00:59 pm
They... know you?
<Have we been here before?>

...

...show them a bit more fire. A halo, a rose, what have you-- you're good at such things-- and ask your questions, in the hydrogen light.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 02, 2020, 11:27:14 pm
I like skepticism. It allows for better decision making.

Let’s figure out what they have to say. Knowledge can’t hurt.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 02, 2020, 11:54:18 pm
[1] As far as you can remember, your Line has never been on this planet before Patches. Sol vanished, you think, before this planet was even colonized by the SEED project and humanity.

"Where does that name come from?" You question, and twist the flame into a flower. A wildflower, to be precise, one of those that grows on fallow farmlands the Holyland over.

"That flower you hold. It grows across burnt forests in the canyons. It was once a marker for fertile land." The Elder nods, unsurprised. "Two others followed you in name. One united the clans against a demon. Though she, and many, many others perished, it was defeated. Another planted those flowers in the ashes of his many fallen foes as he ripped apart the clans."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 03, 2020, 12:01:51 am
Hmm.  Probably just folk heroes, but on the off-chance another Ascended was here, that Dust would be useful.

"What were these individuals capable of, and where were they buried?  I wish to pay my respects and commune with them."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on September 03, 2020, 12:16:40 am
SEED could have experimented before with other incarnations but I doubt it.

Hydrogen control isn't the only way to force fire like powers.  As an example gravity and spacial manipulation are two sides of a similar coin and with sufficient pushing you can cut chemical bonds apart or force things together.   Maybe others from the crashed ship woke up like McCreary and had something that could control energy as well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 03, 2020, 12:17:13 am
Dust crumbles away after awhile, no? McCreary's was intact, but so was his corpse-- preserved by SEED.

These warriors of the old flame... by what names did they call themselves?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 03, 2020, 12:21:28 am
((What is your proof that Dust eventually disintegrates?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 03, 2020, 12:27:05 am
((This, mainly:))

The next to take her essence. If no one does, and we decay to non-existence, then our instances die with her. Cadet branches become the Main, and our other instances live on. Poorer for the lack of Pheonix's will, of course

((Besides that, we know from Silas' experiments and Alphira's memories that Dust falls apart pretty quickly when separated from the body of an Ascended. Only question is, does an Ascended corpse decay similarly to that of a baseliner?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 03, 2020, 12:33:25 am
((Ahh, thanks.  I had forgotten that.  Hopefully these people did something similar with these bodies.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 03, 2020, 12:45:55 am
"They used fire as a weapon and a tool. The first lit a fire within the clans, and the other burned all who would not bow to him." The Elder answers levelly, and you glance to Rekhyt. He shrugs. "They were great warriors."

"What name did they go by?"

"Fire-Blooms-Flowers."

"...right. Do you know where they're buried? For pcommunion]?"

"In the wastes, perhaps? I do not know where -- no one does. Ages have passed since they perished. One was forgotten on accident. The other on purpose. There's another temple, to the north that may know." The elder explains, "The birthplace of the sacred fire. If you wish to commune there, I could seek to arrange a caravan."

"Let her pray by her fire, geezer." Rekhyt states bluntly, and you shoot him a dark look. The Elder looks annoyed, but gestures you over to the firepit, and you drag your eyes over the gold -- attracted by the shine and craftsmanship.

"Gods are made by man -- like a tool, goddess. Do not forget." Rekhyt draws close to whisper, "But the temples provide great wealth, resources and influence. Only fools spurn their favor -- and their blessing."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 03, 2020, 12:51:33 am
It might not be a bad idea to journey to that temple when we are done visiting this city.  That will give us extra legitimacy in these areas, more than we would get from an alliance alone.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 03, 2020, 04:56:08 am
Who needs an alliance when we can be their god, also a journey to that temple sounds like a thing we should do at some point.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 03, 2020, 09:30:11 am
We need an alliance because we need trade and currency
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 03, 2020, 09:34:57 am
Regardless:

Approach.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 03, 2020, 08:54:06 pm
"Could you please schedule such a caravan in a week or so?  I do wish to learn about those who came before me."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 03, 2020, 08:59:13 pm
"Could you please schedule such a caravan in a week or so?  I do wish to learn about those who came before me."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 03, 2020, 10:21:17 pm
...give it a moment. The elder's got something on his mind.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 03, 2020, 10:37:10 pm
The elder bows his head as you and Rekhyt approach. Softly, he begins to speak, but, utilizing your skills from many, many religious services, you filter out the rote and routine. The thanks offered to you, and to 'the godhead of man' barely register, but it isn't until the final line do you catch something that draws you from your religion-imposed stupor --

"...from dust and ashes I have called you, and to dust and ash you shall return." With that, the elder bows his head to you. Your expression twists beneath the mask, but you give him a slight bow in return. Rekhyt made no pretense of paying attention -- he's teasing the young priest by picking at the young man's robes and pen. At one point, he nudges him, causing the priest's pen to skip across the paper.

"Khudal." You murmur, trying to sound stern.

[4] The masked man twists his head towards you. He raises a finger in a universal, very human sign.

"Khudal does what he does -- there's no stopping it, Ochadi."

"Could you please schedule such a caravan within a week or so?" You question, glancing away from the prince playing fool.

"Of course." The elder nods, crossing his hands. The young man turns to leave, stepping over Rekhyt's outstretched foot. "Return here tomorrow night, and we will tell you when such a caravan will leave. I'm thankful you wish to recognized so soon by your people." Then, after a pause, and after you turn to leave, he stops you. "If you would wait -- the youth is bringing the brand, but it only has access to our local bank."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 03, 2020, 11:02:02 pm
Not a fan of religious prose, I take it?

Brand?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 03, 2020, 11:09:03 pm
The facts are the important pieces, filtering out the non-facts allows for better comprehension
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 03, 2020, 11:10:50 pm
Alphias said the same thing.  An Ascended must have come here, long ago.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 03, 2020, 11:59:51 pm
"Brand?"

Khudal catches your attention and taps his forearm. He taps the ribbon of scars that spell out Khudal in the Outlander Script. "Bank access." He explains. "But you no need of money, do you, Goddess. By all means, let me hold it for you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 04, 2020, 12:08:04 am
I don't want our Outlander bank access to be dependent on Rekhyt's cooperation.  That's too much leverage for someone that is so erratic.

"No.  If I am Fire-Blooms-Flowers, then this something I must do myself."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 04, 2020, 12:15:27 am
Figure out the requirements for getting bank access, our nation and us will need it
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 04, 2020, 05:58:29 am
Are we sure we want to get branded just to access a bank?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 04, 2020, 11:14:18 am
Hm.

Your arm-- your call. You'd have to accept the scars into your dust-memory somehow, lest they slough off with your next healing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 07, 2020, 11:23:14 am
The brand glows cherry red and you stick out your wrist without hesitation. Rekhyt rolls up your sleeve for you. Then flesh sears and you grit your teeth -- then the pain is cut off by your nervous system, even as the brand steams and flesh bubbles. The priest nods, pulling away and taking a chunk of flesh with it. You, without regard for the pain you cannot feel, attempt to rub at the fresh mark at your wrist --

Oh. Right.

Atleast to the others that lingering reflex looked simply like the flex of your burned flesh. Rekhyt rolls the sleeve down, quietly assisting with hiding the mark as he does his. You look up at the elder, then, quietly, "I assume I have some  duties to go along with this boon?"

The elder nods. "It is your duty to show people the strength of our way. How that is done is up to you. You bear your mask, but if you are strong enough, then you do not need to wear it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 07, 2020, 11:47:29 am
And what is the way of these pious flame-watchers?

Regardless: the hour is late. Time for pleasant partings, I should think, with perhaps the arrangement of another meeting tomorrow evening.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 07, 2020, 04:29:17 pm
"Your devotion is a testament to the piety of the peoples of the clans.  When you say 'the strength of our way,' are you referring to the worship of the fire goddess?  Also, what does having access to this local bank entail?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 07, 2020, 11:50:06 pm
"Yes." The elder nods, and then, "You are allowed to withdraw funds donated to the temple for your deeds and acts. You may use these for anything." He explains, politely, glancing at Rekhyt.

"She is a young goddess. I will explain the rest. Thanks geezer." Rekhyt turns, giving a lift of his hand in a wave to the priests. '

"I'll be back to tour the temple tomorrow night -- and learn more." You tell the elder, bowing your head. He gives a smile and a tit of his head in return. He takes his place by the fire in silence while the youth hurries off to find a new duty.



"What was that all about?" You question, out of ear shot.

"How to explain this..." Rekhyt tugs off his mask, tossing it into the air and deftly catching the heavy porcelien. "Our gods are man-made. Crafted with a brand and a mask. At night men and women put on their masks and play their part.  Equal parts entertainment and proselytizing. Killing another god is frowned upon, but is accepted --" After a beat, "The last fire god died when he was knifed in a back alley. The God of Theives swore it wasn't her, but no one believes it."

"For example -- I am Khudal, the jester, god of the outcast. The people of the street pray to me for safety. The Orphans are my wards. I believe i am the third within this city and one of two, total."

You chew on the inside of your lip for a moment, glancing down at your own mask. "This...this is the mask of their god?"

"That temple's, yes. It mysteriously disappeared last night. Somehow, there was a ring of ash and soot around it, a firepoppy where it once sat and a smoke in the air. Surely a sign that Fire-Blooms-Flowers was reborn, right?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 07, 2020, 11:58:59 pm
"That was very clever of you.  Is there a temple to you as well, or do only a few of these gods have clergy and sacred places?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 08, 2020, 05:18:13 am
"It was a neat little trick. I even left the door locked." Then Rekhyt firmly shakes his head. "My temple is the back street and the crumbling house. I am not well accepted by the wealthy."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 08, 2020, 06:39:11 am
"What kinds of deeds do we need to do to access the funds withing the temple?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 08, 2020, 06:42:07 am
"What kinds of deeds do we need to do to access the funds withing the temple?"
To be clear, are you asking how to get funds from a temple, or how to get funds to build a temple/improve existing ones?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 08, 2020, 06:49:25 am
"You have access now. But if the temple doesn't get paid, you don't either. The God of Money has a trading empire. The thieves bribe their God to help. I embezzle." Rekhyt shrugs.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 08, 2020, 12:22:11 pm
((...I just realized you're referencing an actual thing with those firepoppies. Go you!))

I suppose it'd be worth finding out at some point, how a fire goddess earns her keep around here.

For now, though... is time we were heading back.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 08, 2020, 02:08:40 pm
I’m not sure it would be a good look to leave right after being accepted into the bank, but let’s talk to our economics advisor about integrating ourselves with the Eastern Outlanders’ economy
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 08, 2020, 02:57:52 pm
These are the eastern Outlanders.

We should return to our quarters, but not to the Holyland.  We still need to secure the alliance and do other things here.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 08, 2020, 03:34:58 pm
These are the eastern Outlanders.

We should return to our quarters, but not to the Holyland.  We still need to secure the alliance and do other things here.
Thanks, will edit accordingly
Also, +1 to this suggestion as well
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 08, 2020, 04:17:35 pm
I’m not sure it would be a good look to leave right after being accepted into the bank, but let’s talk to our economics advisor about integrating ourselves with the Eastern Outlanders’ economy

((It's what, four in the morning where Phoebe's at? I figure now's as good a time to be on our way as any.))

We should return to our quarters, but not to the Holyland.  We still need to secure the alliance and do other things here.

Aye, that's what I had in mind.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 09, 2020, 03:34:29 am
These are the eastern Outlanders.

We should return to our quarters, but not to the Holyland.  We still need to secure the alliance and do other things here.
+1 Its time for some sleep.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 10, 2020, 12:01:46 pm
You and Rekhyt sneak in through the same way you snuck out. The only thing that changes is the guard. Rekhyt's nimble fingers dance to deposit a bag of coins into the woman's pocket. She says nothing. Sees nothing. Her eyes are straight ahead. Disciplined. Rekhyt slips off his mask as the two of you cross the breezeway, stowing it away. You follow suit. It isn't until you reach your room's window does Rekhyt relax.

With a clink, he pops your window open, turning and giving you a very dramatic bow. "Lady Goddess."

"Lord Rekhyt." You make to step up into your window, before pausing.

[19] [9 vs. 2.] With a single step you close the distance between the two of you and wrap your hand around Rekhyt's neck as you pull him close--



You shut the window behind you and close the curtains on a stunned Rekhyt, only allowing yourself a triumphant grin as you're sure he's out of sight.

Rekhyt, for good or ill, is on our side. You remove the heavy outer wear, folding it gently and setting it to one side. You pause mid-fold, then, My assessment is he seems to value personal freedoms, the poor, and independence. Intelligent, capable, and devious.

...was that okay? It seemed like we wanted him on our side, but I couldn't tell. I don't understand our plans, sometimes. You wipe the ash from the street from your boots and set them aside. After a non-urgent message to Geoyde to start drawing up plans to integrate the Eastern Outland economy with the Holyland.



It isn't even an hour later when William, Emma, Mellone and Crusader Cephie stand outside your door. They look well-rested, with bright, shiny eyes and stiff backs, but they wear frowns, and they shift uncomfortably when you open the door. Mellone, on the other hand, is a sleep-deprived mess. Her hair is a frizzy, untamed mess, and she sips tea from a ceramic cup. She dowses where she stands.

"A town on the edge of the Holy Fire Exclusion Zone is under a full assault by Plague." Cephie crisply reports after you stare at the four in silence.

"Evacuation is already underway. Reinforcements are starting to arrive." William murmurs, shifting.

"Isela has briefed the council on the overview, and is already taking steps. Hoganson and Geoyde want you to overrule her." Emma reports, with a straightening of her hair. " I trust Isela, but we agreed to let you make the call."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 10, 2020, 12:49:04 pm
I didn't have much of a plan with Rekhyt, honestly-- mostly I just wanted to see how he handled himself. Give you a feel for him, so's you can choose your course accordingly.
I've been trying to let you steer things with the Outlanders yourself, for the most part. Courtship is-- a delicate thing, for a dust-elder to be sticking his nose into.


"Isela knows what she's doing-- she has my word, if necessary. Are we needed there?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 10, 2020, 12:56:27 pm
This is politics. Not courtship.

"According to Isela? No. Eric has been deployed as a morale booster and force multiplier. The Retributionists are going to be assisting with a total of six [Voidmarines], under the command of Captain Murdach." Emma reports. "Thornton and Family Assets are mobilizing to assist with defense of local settlements."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 10, 2020, 02:31:17 pm
"What is the controversy surrounding Isela's assessment of the situation?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 10, 2020, 02:37:01 pm
"She's refusing to go into specifics. Hoganson and Geoyde think its a waste and we should retreat and gather our strength." Emma shrugs, "Isela is refusing to retreat."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 10, 2020, 02:39:25 pm
"What is Murdach's opinion on the matter?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on September 10, 2020, 02:45:59 pm
You need to see how the void marines and other assets do against the plague here.  The exclusion zone is a useful barrier where the plague can not make a strong foothold, letting it seize even a small town on the edge will allow it to use it as a staging point into the rest of our territory.  Holding the line seems prudent for now.

I would really prefer to be able to send an ascended there, I kinda wish William or Cephie had been left behind to reinforce them.

What is up with Mellone?  Did she tail you last night?  That would be hilarious if we had someone following us out of concern through that whole thing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 10, 2020, 03:03:34 pm
"He agrees with Isela's plan. He isn't deploying his forces until tomorrow or the next day, however."

Should I send William to reinforce?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 10, 2020, 03:06:46 pm
Send William to reinforce and confirm that we should prevent the Plague from advancing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 10, 2020, 03:15:47 pm
"William? How quickly can you be there?" You question.

"Tonight. This morning if the Outlanders let us borrow a craft."

"I can arrange that." Mellone nods.

"Good. Get suited up and bring your Warmachines. You're under Isela's command."

"I'll send her a message." Emma volunteers, "Letting her know you're on your way."

Anything else?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 10, 2020, 03:19:05 pm
Check whether the armor would be willing to help.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 10, 2020, 05:46:59 pm
I think she’s busy working with Silas, or are you talking about Lucille?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 10, 2020, 05:51:20 pm
I do mean the Demon, but maybe it can take a short break to help out, at least until the situation is under control.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 10, 2020, 09:46:25 pm
You sit patiently while Emma messages the Demon armor for you and -- your own datapad makes a soft 'bing'. You note a history of messages from Emma, from Isela, all of them describing the situation much the same way as Emma's summary. But the final, and newest messages is from [Flesh]

Spoiler: Chatlog (click to show/hide)

You hesitate.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 10, 2020, 09:49:22 pm
Can the armor fight alone?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 10, 2020, 10:40:25 pm
Spoiler: Chatlog (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 10, 2020, 10:43:59 pm
I trust William with many things... but the demon?
His training won't save him in the belly of the demon, nor his dust-- that monster demands a different strength. It'll consume him, if he can't rise to the trial.

...Show Emma the datapad.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 10, 2020, 10:56:38 pm
Emma's lips curl into a frown as she reads the chatlog. "I...I don't know anything about that thing. Just that Silas is learning from it. He's taking a lot of resources. But...he's promising a lot."

 Then, quietly, "I don't think he's sleeping any more. He's on a lot of [amphetamines]. He's gathered a staff-- they're all practically worshipping that thing..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 10, 2020, 11:00:38 pm
It sounds like Silas needs a break from this thing before he goes insane.  We should investigate what he's working on once this crisis is dealt with.  I hope Isela knows what she's doing, because it really does make more sense to send the reinforcements in all at once, once they gather, rather than a few at a time in dribbles.  Casualties will be high.

I support letting William use the suit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 10, 2020, 11:21:33 pm
Emma pulls out her datapad, and pulls something up. A video, shot from a grainy cheap camera, but far better than anything this planet had to offer before you made contact with the Pirates.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 10, 2020, 11:25:22 pm
Interesting.  Imagine our soldiers fighting with the durability and regenerative powers of an Ascended.  We should look into mass production.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 10, 2020, 11:49:35 pm
Mmh. That man's playing with some tremendously dangerous toys.

If William's to make use of that thing... write him first. Tell him exactly what he'd be dealing with, and don't put your word to the matter unless he deems himself able. Unless you deem him able.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 11, 2020, 02:48:07 am
It definitely makes sense to let William know what the risks would be and let him make his own judgement.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 11, 2020, 03:29:10 am
Yes, we should let him know
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 11, 2020, 06:43:29 am
Are we sure we want to potentially risk him getting killed by that thing?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on September 11, 2020, 01:49:45 pm
Honestly I don't want the armor anywhere near the plague.  Yeah send the armor and William so the plague can infect both and make a plague lord.  Seems like a good plan.

The armor will be great for fighting Magnus but I REALLY hesitate for anything before that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 11, 2020, 03:14:02 pm
We should use all the assets available to us.  You're the one who wanted to send an Ascended to help, but now you're worried about creating a plague lord?  The armor will increase William's combat ability, not decrease it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Iris on September 11, 2020, 04:13:59 pm
Personally, I really think we should be the only one wearing the demon armour. It's far too risky otherwise.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 11, 2020, 05:27:12 pm
We didn't get this thing to never use it, simply because it's scary.  If we want to defeat Magnus and the Plague, we need to invest in ourselves, our allies, and our technologies.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Eschar on September 11, 2020, 10:03:00 pm
Yes - we got the Demon for *us* to use.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 11, 2020, 10:13:26 pm
Only us?  We can't do everything.  At some point we have to delegate responsibilities to the other Ascended.  I think William would take to it quite well.

This selfishness will lead to more lives lost.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 12, 2020, 02:52:40 am
A whole lot more people will die if the plague gets a hold of that armour, so that's something we need to watch out for.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 12, 2020, 03:14:44 am
We should keep our military assets in reserve, allowing thousands of soldiers to die in return for holding a small town.  William is somehow inferior to us, apparently, weak of will, and therefore he is unfit to wear the armor.  It totally makes sense to prevent William from increasing his ability to fight right before we send him to fight.  If he falls, a plague lord will be created, so we should ensure he is as weak as possible before going into battle.

Anyway, let's eat cake on vacation while our men die horribly in huge numbers, knowing we could have done more but choosing not to.  Hmm, I wonder if there are any nice shops in this city?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 12, 2020, 06:58:23 am
((This is a friendly reminder for completely unrelated reasons. Please keep discourse civil and calm. The majority doesn't always rule, but arguments made in anger may not away Pheobe. And remember -- arguments made to Pheobe hold more sway than those towards the other voices. But the consensus has more power than Pheobe.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 13, 2020, 01:07:06 am
...ho then.

William is somehow inferior to us, apparently, weak of will, and therefore he is unfit to wear the armor.

That's not what I was trying to say. Rather: his strength of arms won't help him, if the demon tries to steal his mind.

You saw what happened, when Φοῖνιξ first donned the demon. Skill and fury mean nothing in there. One thing and one thing only saved her: that she would have died, rather than kill. That she would have died, rather than yield that part of herself.

Can William make the same call, if it comes to it? I'm willing to bet he can... but I want to hear as much from him first. This isn't an easy matter.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 13, 2020, 01:13:39 am
I don't think that the Demon would put William through a similar trial, for fear of alienating us, and I don't think that's what the Demon meant by "strain."  If you have doubts, you could just ask it.  However, I do agree that we should let William know what the risks are and let him come to his own conclusion.  Forcing it on him is out of the question.

Phoebe, you need to ask yourself whether you trust your allies.  If you aren't willing to take risks to help your people and train your kindred, Magnus will be the death of us all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 13, 2020, 03:29:18 am
Are we sure it cares about that and wont just put him through the trial away?

But other than that I'm fine with it as long as we ask him if he even wants to risk using first.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on September 13, 2020, 04:17:58 pm
On second thought, maybe we should go to the fight with the armor ourselves
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on September 13, 2020, 06:19:43 pm
That would really show the SEED remnants are weak if the only way they can win a fight is with the power of Phoenix.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 14, 2020, 02:16:41 am
I think they can handle it with out us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 14, 2020, 10:44:02 pm
((So, as many have probably noticed I haven't been being the best GM. I apologize. I started having a social/love life again. Plus working two jobs. This has left me exhausted. We have, by my reckoning, two more acts before this story draws to a close, whatever close it may be. After the end of this act, in a while, I will be putting it on haitus for about a week to set up a wiki and formalize some rules/rulings, fix formatting, as well as see if I can get some art done. So, that will be fun. I hope. Tomorrow night I intend to post a mega-update of the tour/battle..))



You curl your lips into a tight frown as you glance down at the messaging app once more. After a fierce internal discussion, you gesture William into your room. He glances at the others and steps inside. The door shuts, and you're left alone with the Warlord's son.

Then, quietly, you explain the 'demon' armor. In great, gory detail. How it works. The entity within. The pain and the darkness -- and the rage it incites in its hapless user. William listens stoicly, and, above all else, silently. "...Its a true sadist. It enjoys the pain of its user. Enjoys the anger. Do you think you could handle it?"

"No." WIlliam shifts, "But I'll do it anyway. Murdach will be there -- he can put me down if I go too far."

"William--"

"Pheobe. Is this an order?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 14, 2020, 11:19:38 pm
((No worries. 'Grats on getting your social life back!
For the record, I'm totally open to slinging more pixel-work if you've got anything specific you'd like.))

...no.
You can tell the armor you'll be mobilizing yourself in a few days, if you think it'll help. I'll not trust it with one of your friends, now he's deemed himself susceptible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 14, 2020, 11:41:59 pm
"No."  Ask Mellone: "Would it be impolitic to ask the Outlanders for immediate military aid?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 15, 2020, 07:02:34 am
No
Had a feeling he wouldn't be interested in it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 15, 2020, 08:14:02 am
"No."

William's jaw sets as he stares at you. "I can do it, Pheobe. If it helps." He grins, "I'll be fine. It can't be worse than my father."

"No." You repeat, turning to open the door. William audibly grits his teeth.

"Mellone. Would we be able to call upon the Outlanders for military aid?" You question.

"Maybe? We'd have to pay, but I can negotiate it." Mellone murmurs.

"I would speak to Isela if you intend to interfere In her strategy." Emma points out, "No doubt she already has a plan."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 15, 2020, 11:55:56 am
Speak to Isela and ask her if Outlander help would be useful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 16, 2020, 04:59:19 am
Speak to Isela and ask her if Outlander help would be useful.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 16, 2020, 09:37:08 am
Emma's datapad sparks to life with a feed of the council chambers, revealing Isela, Hoganson and Geoyde. They awkwardly look at the camera as it is moved around shakily.

"Good Morning." You state, without cheer, "Isela. Do you need Outlander support?"

"No." Comes Isela's terse response. "And furthermore, I recommend no further communication on this platform or others for operational security purposes, Mother Pheonix."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 16, 2020, 09:45:19 am
Sign off.

Everything's in place. Is time to step back and let our people work.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 16, 2020, 09:53:57 am
Sign off.

Everything's in place. Is time to step back and let our people work.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 17, 2020, 01:45:36 am
Sign off.

Everything's in place. Is time to step back and let our people work.
+1
+1 They've got this covered.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 17, 2020, 04:18:19 pm
You cut the feed and dip a nod to your retinue as they break away, either going back to sleep or attending to their new assignments. Emma is the last to leave, pausing at the door frame with a faint, wry smile.

"Peace has been good, hasn't it?"

"...yeah." You nod, returning the smile with a smirk.

"Goodnight."

You wave as you return to bed. Your datapad gives a ping --



"Good morning or evening, everyone! Welcome to the Valhol's Retributionists live war stream! Brought to you by our wonderful sponsor, the Holy Fortress-State of Pheonix! Please sit back and enjoy the highlights after operational security specialists have cleared them!" A bright, blue, cheerful androgynous figure chirps to life, announcing itself as you open the link. It gives a wave. Then the feed ends.

...huh.



Sleep doesn't arrive before there's another knock at your door.

"Pheonix. Your tour is ready to receive you." A pleasent voice calls.

You rise and dress, slipping a coat over your shoulders and raking your fingers through the mess of your hair. You slip on the heavy spacer boots, taking great comfort in the synthetic leather and soft insole. You tighten your sash around you waist and emerge into the hallway.

You take in what remains of your entourage. Emma wears an airy white dress -- a las-pistol sticking out of her belt. Cephie breathes through a gas-mask, maintaining her masquerade. The rest are dressed plainly in SEED scholar uniforms; the only two that further stand out are the Pirate Twins in their gray, bulky jumpsuits -- flanked by their void armor.

The twin armors give a snappy salute when they spot you. Ethan and Finn flash grins at each other and give you a thumbs up.

"We were up all night working on that." Ethan begins.

"The armor doesn't like you." Finn continues,

"We had to explain the contract." Ethan finishes with a nod. "Even then, they say they're doing it 'ironically.'"

You shake your head, turning to Emma and Mellone. "What's on the schedule today?"

"Well, according to the agenda the Outlanders 'submitted,' we'll be going to breakfast with the family. Then a brief tour of the Temple of Money and War, followed by a bazaar tour. After that, they wish us to attend a military parade, then a luncheon. An inspection of the aqueducts, and finally, dinner in the mountains. There are hot springs there." Emma reads from her datapad, scrolling with a swiping finger.

"Does that sound acceptable, Mother Pheonix?" Mellone questions, politely.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 17, 2020, 04:31:18 pm
...has Murdach been streaming the battle feed as popular entertainment?
Good press, I suppose. Also, funny.
(Also also, disturbing.)

No quibbles here. The Khaganate wants to show off; might as well let them.
I'm curious, though... do we have an idea of when we want to leave this place? The war has me worried.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 17, 2020, 04:36:28 pm
"When we will leave here?" You bluntly question, picking at the hanging sleeve of your coat. "The war has me worried."

"Well, after the...the marriage ceremony. Also, your induction into a clan or nation within the Khagnate." Mellone answers, quietly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 17, 2020, 04:59:35 pm
"That sounds fine.  I have no objections."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 17, 2020, 09:11:08 pm
"Well, let's get going then." Emma nods.



Breakfast, at first glance, seems like a very moderate affair. One that you shouldn't even note as an event -- it isn't until you taste the bowl of porridge in front of you that flavorful spices explode across your palate: heat, pungency, peppery, all twisting together into an interplay of flavor. The porridge nearly drips with butter and cream.

Thin slices of dried meat drip with fat and flavor, berries dried into the dusty protein, and herbs and spices round out the experience, turning each bite into a salty flavor burst. You're surprised, but devour an entire plate of the sticks.

The next is long, thin dried pieces of ...a fruit? A vegetable? Its a ruddy, rusty red, with dots of black. You pop one into your mouth. And chew. And chew. And chew. The material becomes softer, and it tastes close to an apple mixed with cherry but has the consistency of dried vegetable chips. You notice, after the first, that the Outlanders are pocketing these as opposed to eating them.

"Dried [cactus] fruits." Mellone explains, "Traditionally, every Outlander is to carry some dried food. These have the least scent, last forever, and are tasty."

"What was that meat?"

"[Beast of Burden]." Mellone nods, explaining, "They dry it out, pound it into dust, mix it with fat, berries, and spices. A traditional dish."

You put another dried [cactus] flower into your pocket and rise with your group



You munch on one of the dried flowers as your group exits the palace and travels down the main road under heavy guard. Nicole and Samkrend speak quietly together in a clump, while Rekhyt, Bat, and Atlan all do their best to stay far away from one another. Bat approaches first.

"I am Bat Samkrend. It's a pleasure to meet you."

"Likewise. Pheobe Gainer." You nod

"I am told that war is your strong suit. That you need soldiers." Bat nods, "I'm the current [Marshal] of our military forces."

You fight the urge to raise a brow. "And you have many soldiers?"

"A great deal. Some are more loyal to me than my father. I have a great many contacts within the temple of War, as well."

You stay silent.

"I would love to see you fight." He bows, his expression never changing as he drifts away to stand with his guard.



The temple of Money is free of the common folk, and the guards gleam in gold and silver ornament. The priest bobs his head respectfully when he meets Samkrend. The Khan introduces you, and the priest doesn't bow to you, only looking at you with contempt. After you tour the temple in silence, you are allowed into the Samkrend's family vault.

Piles upon piles of gold and jade coins lay neatly stacked in great piles upon pallets of wood. Banknotes and deeds lay on desks, and a young priest is pouring over figures upon folded and wrinkled paper -- your datapad pings.



"At [0900] this morning, Crusaders have completed the evacuation of Achmil, in farming district seven of the Holy Fortress-State of Pheonix. Current civilian casualties report being as low as two hundred individuals, out of the town's three thousand and ninety-seven inhabitants. Crusader casualties are currently at thirty-five. "

A brief image appears on the screen -- a figure strides across the battleground, massive and bulky in the heavy Crusader armor, his face hidden beneath a gas mask.  A heavy steel shield is strapped to his arm, and one hand gleams with the silver of cybernetics.  He shreds apart Insects with a cutter hilt and a sawn-off inferno shotgun. Crusaders follow him, laying down suppressive fire and holding their ground. A great beast rises from an alleyway, lunging at Eric -- the head of a barker hangs loosely from its neck and human twists' face in perpetual agony beneath that. Great, sharp tentacles lash out--

Eric twists, lopping them off and sending a spray of ichor across the street. He levels his shotgun, and Inferno explodes out, sending superheated magnesium and white phosphorous burning out across infected flesh. The creature screams as Eric ruthlessly unloads shell after shell into it. When it stops twitching, he moves on.



Atlan sniffs, playing with her hair. You didn't even notice her approach. "The North has far more money than this old fool." She explains quietly. "And the Temple of Money is based there. Great deposits of gold, silver, iron. Rare metals too."

"No doubt valuable." You offer politely.

"Of course." Atlan shrugs.

[-][17] Her sleeve rides up when she rubs at her face once, and you notice a thin spider-work of a brand across her forearm.



The Temple of War is a block of a building -- a massive fortification of stone and cement, with sword-armed guards standing at the gate and rifles aiming down from murder holes. After a verification process that puts your Crusaders to shame, you are allowed in. 

This temple isn't so much a place of worship as a military academy. Young men and women either train with various weapons or pour over crumbling military treatise under scarred veterans' watchful eyes. Bat approaches a man leaning heavily on a knobby cane. The two hug and exchange a conversation.

"Form up!" Bat barks sharply after a nod from the elder.

The youths scramble into formation behind older students, pulling themselves into crisp military lines and clasping their hands behind their backs in the manner of SEED Crusaders.

"Drop. Push-ups." Bat barks again.

The youths do so -- and you watch as they push themselves as hard as they can. It takes an hour for the last one to collapse to the ground in exhaustion, soaked in sweat and caked in training ground dust.

Bat nods. He embraces the elder once more, returning to Samkrend's side.

[19][20] There's reverence there from the priests. They watch Bat with wide eyes, stepping carefully around him --  but you notice something fascinating on the last hug. Branded on his forearm in the silvery Outlander script of ritual burn are the words 'Blood-Splatters'.

 You draw close to Mellone, leaning over to her, "What is the Outlander's War God's name?"

"Uh...' Knife-Song,' 'Waste' and 'Blood-Splatters.'" Mellone mumbles.



You and your entourage are seated in front of the palace, at a wide stone table filled with [dallahs] of tea, bowls of bread, and pastry pieces. OF note is one that you would call [baklava], were it stuffed with nuts as opposed to dried fruits. It's delicious, creamy, sweet, and sticky-- and would give you indigestion in the hot noon-day sun. But the chilled breads and sweet buns provide relief, especially when you sip on the cold and bitter tea provided. A military parade forms up, and you watch only half-interested. Instead, your datapad chirping draws your attention.



And you almost immediately slam it into the table. The screen scrambles for a second -- there, standing side by side with Eric in a wide plaza is the Demon armor. Thornton Warmachines stand at his side, firing their heavy weapons and ruining buildings -- not to mention Infected. A Colossus rips through the city --

William in the Demonic Armor sprints forward, tanking las-gun blasts and ramming his shoulder into the Colossus's stomach. The creature sways back -- and William slams a gun into its flesh, holding down the trigger -- the Colossus screams in agony. Eric and the Warmachines concentrate their fire--



"...so you're saying that you use calvary still? Even though you have hovercraft?" Cephie is playing her part well.

"Yes. They're good for endurance. They can refuel from the land, not a hydrogen plant." Bat nods, and you drag your attention from the datapad to watch the parade. Outlander outriders sit mounted upon [beasts of burden], saddles tucked into soft fur. Packs of food and gear are piled high on the muscular beast's back.

"Bos Prime." Ethan murmurs, "And they're using them as mounts still."

"Backwards." Finn nods.

"Backwards." Ethan agrees.

"Bos Prime?" You question.

"[Those things. They're Bos Prime -- cattle, beasts of burden, walking nutrient gatherers. Highly efficient. Every SEED world has them.]" Cephie explains, drawing close, "[They process plant matter of all kinds into several products. Milk, meat, wool.]"



The aqueduct stretches for miles across the Outlands' badlands, all the way to a tremendous eastern mountain change that blooms with greenery and life. Rivers and streams flow down the mountains, some ending uselessly in the desert, while others are capped with human-made structures that divert water into the massive aqueduct. You inspect it visually from the hovercraft, feeling the wind whip past your hair from the open doors.

Rekhyt approaches, all smiles. "Impressive, isn't it?"

"Yes. Very. It must have taken a long time."

"No, just a great many lives." Rekhyt points and you notice shallow patches of green spreading out beneath it -- square mounds dot the landscape. "Mass graves, for all the workers."

Your stomach turns, just as the hovercraft begins its descent towards an ornate palace that sits high in the mountains, nestled among black rock and gleaming spires that have thrust themselves from the earth. A great cypress forest stretches out, filled with towering redwood and an abundance of fauna. Moss covers the ground where pine needles do not. After a short walk upon a smooth granite path, where you see red [deer] and grazing Bos within the bountiful temperate rainforest, the Redwood Palace looms overhead.

Great pillars of redwood hold a glass ceiling aloft. The stone walls are graced with painted animal relief, and Barker Fur hangs from the rafters. Guards lounge nearby, but they seem less interested in you than in the forest near the palace. Pools of steaming hot water dot the glorified hunting lodge haphazardly, and leafy plants hang over them.

"Welcome to the [Redwood] Palace." Samkrend nods, gesturing with a sweeping hand over the courtyard, towards the pools hidden behind thin-cut, lacquered redwood screens. "Dinner will be served soon. Please, let our servants guide you to your rooms."

And they do. You collapse into a bed for a little while, pulling up the streaming app once again. Looking out through an opening in the wall, you notice the sun going down--



"It seems like the Crusader forces are being pushed back. The Temple Plaza has been lost, and the Crusaders are currently retreating across the ground. Air support is no longer viable." The blue humanoid reports, with a pout. "It seems the city of Achmil is about to be lost. Current Crusader casualties are at one hundred and twenty-eight. Of note, in Infected dead, is two Colossi, fifteen Insects, and a battalion's worth of Abominations. Stay tuned!"



Dinner service begins when night falls in the mountains. Snow drifts down from the sky, but the palace is quite warm. Roasts of all kinds dot firepits that smoke with aromatic woods. Chilled and warm tea sits offered alongside cold kefir. Groups mingle and form, but you have no mood for it. You eat quickly and ignore any conversation. The flavorful, herbed meats taste like ash in your mouth as you hurry back to your room.

Isela refuses to respond to your questions, only repeating two words: 'Opsec. Sorry.'

You want to scream at her, but you keep your cool, setting the datapad aside -- someone knocks at your door. Iyal stands in front of you, tossing reddish-brown hair over her shoulder. "[I was wondering if you would ever come to the hot springs.]"

She speaks quietly, tempting you.

"They're serving natural sorbet."

...natural sorbet?



You and Iyal/Cephie sit comfortably in the hot springs, munching on crushed ice covered in a sweet, sticky wine. You've been making small-talk for the last few minutes, but its slowed down as the two of you enjoy the rare treat in silence. Midnight came and went uneventfully--

"Want some drugs? I got some bug oil, [amphetamines], Smoke--" Cephie offers as Iyal.

Your datapad gives a ping, and you snatch it up.

"Or you could ignore me. Rude--"



"All Crusaders have been forced from the city of Achmil. It is a sad day indeed for the people of SEED--" The blue avatar sticks out a tongue and blows a raspberry. "Not! Now a word from our sponsor!"

Eric peels off his gas mask to smile at the camera. In one hand, he holds a bundle of wires and technology, in the other, a small timer that's ticking down. "Now, some of you might not know what this is, but this is a timer! Like a digital clock. This one is ticking down to midnight."

He holds up the bundle. "This is a fusion reactor's overload control matrix."

...5

...4

...3

...2

...1



The view switches -- and mushroom clouds explode across the city of Achmil. Debris and rubble spray out as abandoned buildings turn to glass -- and the Infected within the town turn to ash.  Eric reappears, grinning, "I'm guessing, we just eliminated a few brigades of Abominations, maybe a couple of dozen Insects..and we probably may have damaged a Colossus. More importantly, we just disabled anti-aircraft in this region."

"...beautiful. But that's not all!" The camera angle shifts, the blue avatar appearing once again -- as dozens upon dozens of hovercraft streak out past the exploding town, raining autocannon round and las-fire across the blasted land, mopping up abomination and burning Insect. They fly towards plague territory. "Stayed tuned -- Captain Murdach is leading an assault on a nexus as we speak."



You begin to laugh, happily, hysterically, as Isela's name lights up on your screen. Cephie turned Iyal raises a brow. "Well, that lifted your mood pretty quickly."

You slump into the hot springs, wondering if you should scream at Isela or reward her.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 17, 2020, 09:29:35 pm
The destruction of a small town may arguably have been worth the enemy casualties.  I see why secrecy was so important. Let's see how the assault goes.  I do think we should name Eric the Thirteenth Crusader as soon as we can.  As for the tour, we now know that three gods are among Samkrend's children.  Which is the correct choice?

"Do you think it was a coincidence that the Plague attacked while we were away, or was it intentional?  How could the Plague have found out?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on September 17, 2020, 11:07:16 pm
The plague doesn't need significant spies to find this stuff out.  One spy in our midst, one in the outlands and it would be enough.  Hell, shaking the place itself might have done it.

An excellent strategy, not only did it cost the plague a great deal in soldiers but they gained nothing from it.  The only downside was losing the town, you can not afford to repeat this, but neither can the plague, hopefully.

You should speak to Nicole about the prospects here.  She seemed to know a great deal and it would be a waste to have her here and not see what mad manipulations she thinks she can get away with.  How much wealth do they really have.  If mobilized what power could the underclass and criminals here serve.  How quickly could the industry be retooled for modern war.  Are these soldiers really disciplined or is this just a show of military pomp.

Building a military industrial complex from close to nothing will be a challenge.

All the technology in the universe will not save you from cowardice and corruption.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 17, 2020, 11:10:03 pm
As for the tour, we now know that three gods are among Samkrend's children.  Which is the correct choice?

Bat has power; Atlan has money. Rekhyt has that coyote's wit and a hand in every [cookie jar]. Any will do, resource-wise.
I'd be more concerned with attitude. Who's pleasant to be around, and who's not? Who's easiest to steer?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 17, 2020, 11:19:10 pm
Rekhyt amuses me and seems generally amiable.  It's hard to say about the others, but Atlan seems a bit stuck-up.  I'm not sure about Bat other than that he seems vaguely menacing.  However, I don't think it's accurate that they all bring something equal to the table.  Unlike the other siblings, Rekhyt does not appear to have strong ties to the military or hoards of wealth.

Also, I hope this puts to rest everyone's outsized fears of the Demon Armor.  Contrary to what several Ancestors said, it did not cause William to fall and become a Plague Lord, and it did not eat him.  Obviously we should be cautious of it, but we should not be paralyzed by fear.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 18, 2020, 01:21:27 am
Ha-hm. I'll relax a bit on that front after he takes it off.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 18, 2020, 07:37:02 am
Everybody has something to bring to the table, we just have to figure out which thing we want the most.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 18, 2020, 07:59:40 am
"Well, if it knows modern military strategy, then it doesn't need spies." Cephie as Iyal states, stretching one of her long legs in the hot water. She grins when she catches your lingering gaze. "It probably analyzed your response times and personality. Started with a light force then pushed hard when you didn't show up. Isela kept you away to keep it on guard."

With a stretch, Cephie turned Iyal wraps an arm around you and nuzzles into your collar bone. "You should answer Isela. It's probably a debrief."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 18, 2020, 12:00:11 pm
Ah yes! Debriefing.

...might want to keep your video feed off or some such. Just so's you're not showing off a certain someone at your shoulder.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 18, 2020, 12:26:17 pm
You pick up the datapad, and answer it, keeping your feed cut as Isela begins her debrief.

"Ah. Pheonix. Good Morning!" Isela offers cheerfully, then, with confusion, "Did you know your feed is off? If you just press the square sha--"

"Yes. Please continue debrief."

"Currently casualties are holding steady at one hundred and thirty-five Crusaders, fifty-seven of which are injured and relieved. The rest perished. Widows and children will be supported, standard clauses. Civilian casualties are at two hundred and five. The rest have been evacuated to neighboring towns and cities." Isela pauses. Cephie half-listens, and presses into your shoulder. You keep your attention on the business at hand.

"The townships to the north and south of Achmil report that the Infected assaults have become sporadic and disorganized after the detonation of Achmil's reactors. Reported casualties are reflected in the total. Eric and William are leading airbourne assaults on monoliths in the exclusion zone. We've knocked down three. Murdach is assaulting a nexu--" There's a loud ping from the other end.

"Speak of the demon. The regional resupply and 'communication' nexus has just been levelled. Murdach reports no casualties. They're linking up with Eric and intend to 'burn every fucking bug they see' on the way back." Isela nods, rubbing at the bags under her eyes. "Do you have any questions? The line is currently being secured, but the Clans can't keep it up for long."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 18, 2020, 03:31:46 pm
"What should our next step be?  Should we plan an assault once our airship is ready, or should we remain on the defensive for now?  Also, General, I am very pleased with your performance.  Keep up the good work."

"One other question: do you have an update on the expedition to the arkship?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on September 18, 2020, 04:24:57 pm
Make a rundown on how the units operated individually and as a group.  Plans need to be made to counter colossi and insect threats without ascended interference.  In the case of a large scale invasion we would be spread too thin to defend multiple points like Eric just did.

If adjustments need to be made to war machine production to counter the threats make sure Silas does so before continuing work on his project. 

Also force Silas to get some rest, it is no use having a mad scientist burn himself out on just one project.

Rejoice that you have reliable subordinates.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 19, 2020, 07:53:28 am
"What should our next step be?  Should we plan an assault once our airship is ready, or should we remain on the defensive for now?  Also, General, I am very pleased with your performance.  Keep up the good work."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 21, 2020, 07:46:14 pm
[16 vs 13]As you open your mouth to question, Cephie slips a hand over it tightly. She breathes a sigh on your neck, then addresses Isela.

"General. Does operational security still apply? You mentioned previously?" Cephie questions.

You flinch -- her voice is just like your's.

[14 vs 11]"Um, yes Mother Pheonix? What's the matter." Isela responds, frowning at the screen.

"I'm just curious. I did not receive any explanation of protocol changes with regards to sensitive operations. Make sure those are hand-delivered next time. By you. Thank you."

"Oh. Of course."

Cephie slips her hand off your mouth, leaning in to give you a peck on the neck. Her free hand presses the mute button -- "You owe me. Isela is playing at communication and information security." She gives you another kiss and gives a wicked, sharp smile, "But you knew that, didn't you? I hope you weren't going to ask any revealing questions."

You hesitate, then unmute yourself and speak, "I am very pleased with your performance General. Please make a rundown on how our units operated individually and as a group. I wish to see squads of our troops taking down Insects and Colossi without interference from Eric, William, or Myself."

Do you still ask the suggested questions?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on September 21, 2020, 08:18:35 pm
Tell her to continue taking measures she feels are appropriate to both this theater and the overall war effort. 

In the future you should see about creating disinformation over the radio of some sort to blur where people think your assets are.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 21, 2020, 08:51:49 pm
Nope. Just this:

Tell her to continue taking measures she feels are appropriate to both this theater and the overall war effort.

She did say the line is being secured, but I guess even that isn't particularly secure.  It looks like the decision to use ciphers didn't survive the destruction of the Holy City.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 21, 2020, 09:25:23 pm
"Please continue to take measures you feel are appropriate to the theater and overall war effort." You calmly instruct. Cephie nods quietly.

"Thank you. Good morning, Mother Pheonix." Isela bows her head and then cuts the feed.

Cephie lays against you as you finish your melted sorbet. The two of you sit quietly together, enjoying the relaxation of the natural hotsprings in silence. Stress eases from your frame in the hot waters, and while it doesn't quite penetrate your thermal regulation, it still provides enough comfort that you shut your eyes and drift.

[18] The door pops open, and Cephie straightens in a bolt-- Rekhyt steps through and shuts it behind him with a slam.

"Ah! Pheobe. Good to see you still in one piece. And here. I had to open a lot of doors to find you." He states, his eyes finding Cephie turned Iyal. They pass over her and back to you. "Enjoying the hospitality?"

"Y-yes." You stammer.

"Hmmh. You know, your Crusader is missing, but he was certainly a man." Rekhyt drops into the water far across from you, leaning back. "So, learned anything interesting?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 21, 2020, 09:31:23 pm
"Are you really so starved for the company of women, Rekhyt?  Regardless, I learned that your siblings are the gods of money and war.  What are they like, and how is your relationship with them?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 22, 2020, 05:37:22 am
"Are you really so starved for the company of women, Rekhyt?  Regardless, I learned that your siblings are the gods of money and war.  What are they like, and how is your relationship with them?"
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 22, 2020, 03:18:17 pm
"You speak of such things so easily with her around, Phoenix." Rekhyt laughs. He stretches, his hand drifting to his belongings that lay beside him.

[10 vs 1+2] A knife twists through the air -- you only catch a flash of silver before it embeds itself into Cephie's defensive hand. Her face curls itself into a snarl, the tan skin of her face bunching to reveal her incredibly sharp teeth.

"You fucking crazy Outlander bastard!" She growls, pulling the knife from her hand and sending it flying into the water. It isn't anywhere close to Rekhyt -- the wound stops bleeding as it heals rapidly.

"Ah. Pointed teeth. You've stopped bleeding already -- and you called me an Outlander." Rekhyt rests his chin on his hand. He looks to you then, "Another of your demonic kind?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 22, 2020, 03:41:33 pm
"Jealousy doesn't suit you.  This is Cephie, another 'demon,' if you like.  Now, can we set down our grievances, whatever those might be, in peace?  None of us are enemies here, but if you continue to attack my allies, that might change."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 22, 2020, 05:12:53 pm
Ho! That's not [cricket]!

...jealousy nothing. That knife was thrown to silence someone who'd heard too much.

Put a little bite in your words for me, hm? That could've killed a lesser companion.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 22, 2020, 05:26:53 pm
Hmm.  This one is too quick to kill anyone deemed to be inconvenient.  We may need to establish some ground rules.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 22, 2020, 10:20:01 pm
"Jealousy doesn't suit you, Rekhyt." You state, plainly.

"There was no jealousy in that." Cephie snaps, "These Outlanders test things with the point of their knives."

"It's one way of getting to the point, no?" Rekhyt quips, cheerfully, his grin curling wider. "You have some experience with our ways."

"Mmh. Enough to not take offense." Cephie nods, slowly shifting, changing her features until they reflect her true self. The pale, black-haired waif leans against you. Just as tall as you and adroygenous in appearance. Gone are the rough feminine features of Iyal, and the dark skin. She smiles her razor's edge smile at Rekhyt. "But if you do that again, I will murder you in your sleep."

"You can try, but point taken." Rekhyt quips again, nodding.

"This is Cephie." You offer, after a beat, trying hard not to draw attention to yourself in the middle of two circling Barkers. "I'm glad you two set aside your...grievences? None of us are enemies here-"

"Ye-" Both begin, catching themselves when the other speaks.

[15]"But, Rekhyt, I am no Outlander." You begin, quiet and calm, keeping a firm grip on the temper that threatens to rise up. There is no need to use your Voice, no, you deliver just enough menace without it. "If you continue to attack my allies, that will definitely change."

"...I can respect your wishes, Goddess." Rekhyt nods, after a moment's consideration, his tilted head straightening. "Yes. My siblings have their parts to play. Elder siblings always get the best toys. Especially so when they're more favored. What of our relationship? The only reason we haven't killed each other is because our father will disinherit the first one to make an open move. They support mass slavery and all the sins that go along with that. "

"But," Rekhyt begins, nodding, "They have power and wealth, and you need both for war. Especially if Samkrend dies during the campaign..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 22, 2020, 10:35:55 pm
"Do you have any designs on the throne?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 22, 2020, 10:38:57 pm
"Unfortunately, my older siblings are both healthy and in the prime of their lives. Do you have designs on the throne?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 22, 2020, 10:43:18 pm
Hmm, do we?  I doubt the Outlanders would support a foreign ruler, unless we really popularized the worship of the fire goddess...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 22, 2020, 11:55:19 pm
We don't need it, by my reckoning. Blood-ties, godhood, a bit of clout where it's needed-- is influence enough, no?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on September 23, 2020, 01:10:34 am
Tell him you have eyes on a throne much more grand.  Ha.

Wait, do you?  If you win what would you do, seize the power the noble wields, turn it on the core.  Figure out what really went down in the Empyrial succession?  Live as a pirate queen in the reaches?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 23, 2020, 06:46:25 am
Just vaguely mention we have grand plans, even if we don't actually have any.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 23, 2020, 08:24:52 am
[20]"I have a larger throne in mind." You smoothly reply, stretching. "Or no throne at all. I haven't decided yet."

"You didn't strike me as the ruling type." Rekhyt nods, "But if no throne interests you, then what would your plans be?"

"Adventure. The sky is full of stars, and around those stars float worlds more fascinating than any throne." You give a faint smile.

"But nothing is so easy for royalty. Is it [daughter of Sol]?" Cephie questions, rhetorically. "Bound by the honor of your line. Would your ancestors be satisfied with your wanderlust? Or would they prefer you  to uphold their name?"

Rekhyt looks to you, smiling faintly. "The Prince's question."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 23, 2020, 11:50:20 am
I am-- never happier, godling, than when you are flying free under the stars. Or stumbling on some new delicacy. Or laughing with compatriots.

You are Phoenix-of-Sol. You are Phoebe Gainer. If you burn your name into the Void, I will be proud. If you find freedom, comfort on other worlds... I will be content.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 23, 2020, 04:16:24 pm
I would ask only that you defend those that you are sworn to protect.  Beyond that, the Void is yours to explore as you please.  Just be aware that sometimes our past catches up with us.  Running into Rufus, for example, without a fleet to protect you could mean death.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 24, 2020, 06:51:21 am
You do what you've got to do, rule the planet or rule space its up to you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 24, 2020, 11:51:47 pm
"There once was a conquerer of Old. Back when Humanity was confined to one planet." You begin, lounging against Cephie. "On old [Earth]." Rekhyt brows furrow, but he doesn't question, leaning forward to listen more intently.

"A prince but never a true king. He conquered the world he knew and when he found a boundary his men refused to cross he weeped." You finish, "But to him, it was never about the land, or the title. Nor to establish an Empire in his name to last forever. It was all for himself."

Cephie doesn't speak, nuzzling back into your shoulder. One sleepy eye is fixed on Rekhyt, and her Willpower coils like a spring around him.

"...I have many questions, Phoebe, but my first is this: what are your 'ground' rules?"  Rekhyt slouches back, rubbing at his chin and the shadow of facial hair covering it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 25, 2020, 12:22:34 am
His father was quite the statesman, however.  He reversed the decline of his nation, a troubled region viewed with contempt by its southern neighbors, and he also resolved its many intractable crises despite a bleak outlook when he assumed the throne.  Was his son really so much more notable if his admittedly vast empire so quickly crumbled into dust?

"I ask that you do not act violently towards my people unless you must do so in order to preserve your life.  What are your ground rules?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 25, 2020, 12:51:33 am
That was the point of the tale, no?
(Alexander of Macedon! To think, that his story should be kicking about still... have you other stories like that? Old history lessons of Alphira's?)

To clarify this "ground rule": we don't want Rekhyt enacting violence (outside of self-defence) towards our people, or on our land, without our sanction. The rest beyond that isn't so much a ground rule as a question of alliance.

Rekhyt's got more questions-- let's play this slow, leave him space to ask. This looks to be interesting.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 25, 2020, 01:00:56 am
Philip doesn't get the respect he deserves, is all I'm saying.  Everyone makes allusions to his son, but Philip's reputation can't escape Alexander's shadow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 25, 2020, 09:46:46 am
I do not think I am much like Phillip. That sort of logic doesn't come easy to me. My education is sparse. Mathematics comes easily, but the rest...Do you think I should get tutors for my downtime? What sort should I get?


I learned much from your memories, Red-Star 'Constantinus'. I hope you don't mind my perusal of your collection. I did not pry.

Maintaining two conversations is easy as you lay out the first simple ground rule. You deliver it in Outlander, to make sure the point is clear to the troublesome prince. "No more testing the metal of my people with a literal point. No more murders in my land, unless I request it so. Even if they are Outlander. [William, as Minister of my Internal Affairs] can also make such requests."

"What of Emma?" Cephie questions.

"What of Emma?" You retort, bluntly. "If she wanted someone dead she wouldn't have to ask."

Rekhyt grins from across the hot spring, his fingers drumming on the bronze-colored ceramic tile. "Lover's quarreling aside -- I agree to your ground rule -- but only if you tell me of [Ancient Earth]."

"No one knows why [Sol system] is uninhabitable -- or why the Empyre keeps a picket and blockade on it's gates." Cephie volunteers, before turning expectantly to you. "Tell us, oh honored Dust-Elder-- of Ancient [Earth]."

What do you tell of Ancient Earth?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 25, 2020, 03:40:41 pm
Were you a Philip, Whitestar?

Your chances at a wider education are sparse here, alas. You could try the cognitive pods back home for historic archives, or your datapad... but how much of that time would be better spent in preparation for Magnus? Until that wretch of a noble dies, you've a [sword of Damocles] over your head.

When we get off Mercenary's Rest, we'll chase down all the tutelage this galaxy can offer, if you like-- more than I could ever tell! Until then... my memory-banks are open, always. Access what you will.


<Sol System uninhabitable... what happened there? Do we know?>

The history of old Terra... good grief.
Where do we even start? Herodotus? Thucydides? Genesis?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 25, 2020, 04:04:05 pm
I was no Philip.  The empire was most often built through bloody conquest and "diplomacy" that was more like extortion, to a greater degree than Philip himself.  Phoenix's epithet for me, "good" doctor, is nothing more than a petty gibe.

I would recommend tutors in history, rhetoric, and maybe theology or philosophy, if you are going to continue to pretend to be a god.  Knowing the theodicies, for example, could help you with difficult questions from Eric or others.  Of course, you would need to balance this learning with your many other responsibilities.

Perhaps we should start with some of the more ancient empires?  The rise and fall of the Assyrians, who ruled with fear and thus had few willing allies when the empire began to collapse, may be instructive.  Hammurabi's Code, of Babylon, would serve as a good introduction to primitive law systems.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 26, 2020, 06:49:15 am
Tell them about all the wars, everybody loves a good war story, maybe we skip some of the older ones and start around WWI or around that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 29, 2020, 12:28:26 pm
After a soft sigh, you begin with the cradle of humanity -- Africa. You describe the evolution of man, the great migrations, then the Cradle of Civilization. It takes you roughly an hour to explain this to Rekhyt, but he doesn't complain, only moving to lean forward in his interest, only interrupting to ask a question. Cephie sits quietly, volunteering some information where necessary, but letting you speak of the Sumer, of Babylon, of Assyria and Gilgamesh.

Rekhyt draws himself out of the water and wraps a towel around himself, taking a seat outside the pool. He dries his hands on it, then waves his pruned fingers at you. "Are you truly gods? I don't believe it, but many things about you still raise questions."

You lift your hand from the water and glance down at it -- perfectly smooth. The water drips off of your fingertips, and there is no pruning, no wrinkles.

"[Should I answer, Patches?]" Cephie questions, lifting her head from your shoulder.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 29, 2020, 12:50:19 pm
"As your people say: man makes gods."
"Our kind is immortal. Powerful. Human, but more-than-human. This was given to us by man."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 29, 2020, 02:50:35 pm
"As your people say: man makes gods."
"Our kind is immortal. Powerful. Human, but more-than-human. This was given to us by man."

+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on September 29, 2020, 10:35:43 pm
Rekhyt's eyes widen, his shoulders slumping as he looks to the floor, and a small grin creases the corners of his lips. After minutes of silence, he looks up from the tiled floor and drags his gaze to meet yours. Something burns within his eyes -- determination, maybe, or savage joy.

"Make me one, and I will swear myself to you."

"[If he takes a vow in High Empyreal, there will be consequences if he breaks it, as an Ascended.]" Cephie muses aloud in low Empyreal; she doesn't even favor Rekhyt with a glance, her eyes on you. Fascination and adoration in equal measure. "[Or we could string him along. Ascended do that to many mortals on backwaters like these.]"

You muse in --

*PING*

You glance down at your datapad, confused.


Rekhyt had found his way to your shoulder, watching with awe. The translator turning the gibberish into his Outlander Tongue, "Maybe just a suit of that armor..."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on September 29, 2020, 10:49:19 pm
That has to be a new speed record in getting drunk with power.  I would suggest stringing him along by saying it could be a possibility at some point.

Having another Ascended sworn to us, however, could have its advantages.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on September 30, 2020, 07:55:05 am
I'm not sure if he can be trusted enough to be given some of that armour or becoming ascended, so +1 to leading him along for now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 30, 2020, 06:49:44 pm
The princeling doesn't know what he's asking.

"Do you understand now the scale of this war? I'd be fighting there now, if I wasn't busy trying to keep your nation from suicide."
"Tell me, Rekhyt... what would you do with armor like that, given the chance? What would you hope to gain from its use?"

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on September 30, 2020, 10:45:01 pm
Explain to him that he could perish from the operation.  And die horribly at that.  It is one of the reasons ascending is so limited, besides controlling power and such.  I knew one unlucky soul who shed most of their soft tissue and then regrew it, daily.  Took almost six weeks for them to pass.  Really thought they would make it.

Anyway, it would CERTAINLY not do to have the son of an ally die screaming right before a wedding, but maybe afterwards?

Or if you want to marry him it could be your dowry.  Pass or fail, it would certainly make an impression.

I don't really see why you need to keep beating him over the head with the scale of the whole thing.  This fool has ambition enough to ask a god for their power.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: Superdorf on September 30, 2020, 11:04:18 pm
Hr-mm, yes... perhaps is redundant. The princeling is awestruck anyhow.

I'm reluctant to offer him blood, dowry or otherwise-- that strength is better kept with the whole. Cybernetics, perhaps, we could arrange.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 01, 2020, 09:45:17 pm
Removing all of his limbs and most of his torso and replacing that with cybernetics... he may not survive that process, given our primitive level of medical technology.  It isn't impossible that Ascension would be the safer procedure.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on October 02, 2020, 11:54:11 am
Our pirate friends have the medical tech that could do it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 06, 2020, 04:56:22 pm
If the pirates can do it safely, then I have no objections.  This whole situation, however, feels like a case of oversharing.  If you're going to pretend to be a god, it's probably generally best not to tell anyone the truth.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 06, 2020, 11:33:33 pm
"I've understood the scale of the war since the Holy City fell. I've understood it since your land was poisoned and millions of your people died in the death throes of their god." Rekhyt retorts, rising to his feet and giving a stretch, "I've understood it since the greatest nation in the world came crawling to our beckon, willing to marry off their Goddess for an army." A grin curves his lips, "Things are desperate. Your victories are gained only through the zealotry of your Crusaders and kin."

Rekhyt nods, "I understand the scale of your war well. It does not change my mind. The Outlands will follow you -- but for how long? Would it not be better to have me owe you a great debt? Something that places me beneath your thumb?"

"I would find my freedom, Pheobe, with the godhood your technology offers." The man tilts his head, starting to pull on his clothing, "Is that not admirable?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 06, 2020, 11:39:33 pm
"Can you be more specific?  What would you do with this newfound freedom?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 07, 2020, 12:17:30 am
"Explore. Learn. Discover." Rekhyt volunteers, "Maybe help a few people along the way. Or not."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 07, 2020, 12:23:33 am
"I would be willing to consider it.  However, if you swear yourself to me in that way, there would be very real and immediate consequences if you were to break your oath.  Swearing such an oath and forever following it faithfully, with no lapses, doesn't seem like the Outlander way."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on October 07, 2020, 02:52:25 pm
What do we do if he does break the oath, as he doesn't seem like someone that would be easy to find if he wanted to stay hidden.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on October 07, 2020, 03:34:51 pm
I never broke such an oath myself but it is severely unpleasant.  Long term damage to the body or mind, like your arm but worse.  It is not something done lightly.  Be careful not to take or have others make oaths that can be broken by accident. 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 12, 2020, 09:41:02 pm
Spoiler: Ascended Oaths (click to show/hide)



"That is true, isn't it, Pheobe?" Rekhyt nods, slinging his bag over his shoulder with a frown. "You learn quickly! I'm proud of you. Perhaps you can give it to me as a wedding gift. My freedom in exchange for an empire."

"Would you really trade this empire for that?" You question, raising a brow.

"I would trade more than that. I'd trade the world, but I only have an empire to give."

"And how would you deliver it to me?"

"Oh, you know. I've my ways. First is to get you accepted as an Outlander, no?"

"I suppose that would be a start."

"And not just any Outlander. One of note." He tosses a parchment map towards your side of the pool, and Cephie retrieves with a tendril of black carbon from her pile of gear, drawing it close to you and keeping the water from ruining it. "I leave the selection to you. Two will accompany you. An Outlander ally and the witness. No weapon besides a knife. No [demon magic]. Leather and iron armor."

Spoiler: Rekhyt's Notes (click to show/hide)

"These do not inspire confidence in me, Rekhyt." You murmur, as Cephie folds away the map and notes.

"But they will inspire confidence in others. You will become a legend." Rekhyt retorts, then bows, turning away. "I would make an announcement soon. Tommorow, at breakfast -- after all, what better place to call a hunt than a hunting lodge?"

You watch him slip out the door, and sigh. The water and company no longer feel warm, and you can feel your shoulders ache. You rise, dressing and retiring to your room with Cephie in tow.



There's a knock at your door, and a call for 'Breakfast!' from a cheerful servant. The bed is cold, and Cephie has already left your side. The datapad on the nightstand gives a ping, but you don't bother to look at it. Not yet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 12, 2020, 11:01:08 pm
I'm getting mixed messages from this guy... he says he has no ambitions, but he's also promising us an empire?  The Ripper sounds like the one that's doing the most harm.  I would suggest choosing that one.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on October 13, 2020, 05:41:56 am
This guy is a strange one, and yes ripper sounds like the one to kill.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 14, 2020, 11:33:14 pm
You rise out of the qiviut bed, your mind set, for now, on slaying the Barker 'God' [Ripper]. You stretch your sore muscles, lifting one hand then-- not...lifting the other. A frown dances across your lips before you stifle it. Breakfast is being served soon or is in the process of being served, but you don't rush. Your energy requirements, for now, are quite low. So is the peckish hunger that picks at your stomach. You work through some stretches and isometric exercises, feeling the soreness in your muscles fade. Your shoulders feel immensely better after a long set of one-handed push ups. I seem to get sore when I don't exercise. Or fight. Muscle degradation? Or stimuli to avoid muscle degradation?

 With your morning stretches and isometrics out of the way, you gather your scattered clothes and pull them on. Some are more difficult than others, but you manage and smooth out the wrinkles the best you can with your available hand. You check yourself in a copper mirror, straightening your collar.

And then, for a little too long, you stare at yourself in the mirror. Your hair is long again, hanging down to your back, your skin has tanned to match the hue of most of this planet's people -- a bronzy brown of melanin that protects from the harsh, yellow sun -- More to fit in. If a miniature sun can't give me cancer then a distant one definitely won't.

Your datapad pings, again and again, breaking you out of your reverie, and you brush the hair from your face and pick up the stolen device.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 15, 2020, 02:25:22 am
Possible tasks:

Ask Geoyde and Armsmith to determine what is needed to safely begin interstellar trade using our credits, even if it just means having goods discreetly delivered.

Also ask Armsmith and Isela what our options are for collecting more intel on the Plague.  How can we safely estimate its strength and area of control?

Determine what wealth is avaliable to us at the local bank of the fire goddess.

Reasearch how cyberwarfare is conducted in the Void.


To William: It's alright.  I'm just glad you're safe.  What did that thing put you through?

To Flesh: what are you constructing?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on October 15, 2020, 03:39:28 am
Should probably announce the plan to go kill that barker.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 16, 2020, 03:14:59 am

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on October 16, 2020, 03:49:12 am
I'm also interested in the cryo-'coffins' and we should investigate that soon.

Also I had a feeling that the armour would do something terrible like that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 16, 2020, 03:44:06 pm
((Did we just lose the majority of our players?))

1.  Nothing comes to mind.
3.  No they are not.  The last thing we would want is for them to figure out that everything SEED has told them is a lie.  If they want to look up information, they can send a request to Emma, who can look up the information, make necessary redactions, and then send the requested info to the other ministers.
4.  It does sound like the Pirates would be useful for this task.
5.  Just the local Samkrend bank.  I think we already scheduled a visit to the main temple.
6.  I was wondering whether sabotage could slow down Magnus's fleet.  Our lack of technology suggests that retaliatory strikes would have little effect on us.  It could also be useful defensively if we are able to enter the Void on our own.
7.  Yes.  Let Isela know that you will be going to the site.

To Flesh: "I'll look into it."  add obtaining these items to the task list

To William: "Gods... take as long as you need.  I'm sorry you had to go through that.  Do you want the armor to be punished in some way?  Should we get rid of it?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 16, 2020, 09:41:43 pm
((Shit happens. It's all okay. One more vote required!))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on October 17, 2020, 08:19:42 pm
Are we sure McCreary is dead and not mostly dead then stored in a cryo pod as material?

1. Talk with Cephie about personal enhancement like strength and speed and how to best train them.  Also maybe ask what her plans would be if you do succeed in your crazy task of taking down or fending off the noble.

2. Make the announcement at the fire temple?

3. This planet is apparently pretty far from the nearest wormhole.  Could we get anything to us faster then the noble will get here?  Space manipulation could theoretically be used for trade if there have been advancements to it, but wormholes are the gold standard of FTL travel.

4. I would recommend focusing scouting on the scar of the holy city and the front to support the war effort.  Any scouting of the edges give only limited benefit as the crusaders can not really project force out there anyway.

7.  Again the cryo coffins could be anything from a SEED experiment that the numbers are KEEPING FROM YOU to the original source materials for the cloning.  Did we get confirmation that this ship is where McCreary came from?  If so then SEED might have learned about it before Nicole.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 17, 2020, 08:34:27 pm
((The ship in question is the ark ship that was constructed by SEED. Just to clarify a point.))

>Fifty years ago the only advancement was an AI controlled ship that managed to hit .99 light speed. It was still slower than the Empyrean Relay System. It was also tiny.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on October 17, 2020, 09:07:50 pm
Ah, misunderstood.

Maybe the best thing you could trade for then would be designs for things above the technical abilities of the SEED database.  Maybe some advanced gene mods to add to the loomed humans?  Seems like that would have to wait until several iterations of advancement though.

Though a dedicated courier or trade ship might make better time then a war fleet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 18, 2020, 01:49:46 am
Maybe we could take down the Empyreal Relay System, or at least the nearest relay.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on October 18, 2020, 07:36:34 am
Do we even know where the nearest relay is to do anything to it, and wouldn't something like that be at least somewhat guarded?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 18, 2020, 02:19:12 pm
We don't know, but we could probably look it up on the Empyreal Network.  It's possible that the relays on the Rim are less guarded than those in the core Empyreal areas.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 20, 2020, 03:34:32 am
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You give one final stretch and one final glance to the datapad before heading out to your breakfast-y fate.



The dining hall is carved out of the same redwood as the rest of the lodge. Furs hang down from the rafters over ornate, abstract frescos that call to mind cave paintings. On one side, arches lead out to a courtyard garden, filled with mushrooms, drooping plants, and carefully maintained cypresses that one could call [bonsai]. A great table fills the center of the room. It is dressed in all manner of foods; steaming dumplings, juicy meats from fowl and fauna alike, chilled yogurts topped with fruits, and golden-grey Outlander rolls. Many Outlanders mill around, forming clumps and packs and discussing things as they eat, and your people are mixed within these groups -- but each of them stands close together. The Twins hover menacingly nearby their charges -- at their beck and call should any danger arise. Nicole, Rekhyt, and Samkrend all sit close by in one of the alcoves, murmuring as they lounge on qiviut pads.

You gather a plate of food, stacking it high. Doing so, you catch Emma's eye. She breaks away from her conversation and approaches you, stepping outside to a small freestanding structure. Rain pours down on the roof, giving you some privacy until Cephie arrives. The two of you converse in low Empyreal, to keep your conversation a secret from Outlander ears.

"Good morning, Pheonix." Emma states, picking at a roll and not meeting your gaze. "What did you want to discuss?"

"I want you to assign Geoyde and Armssmith to determine what we might need to begin safe interstellar trade." You calmly explain, and Emma gives a nod. "They are not allowed to use the network, but you can give them information that might be pertinent from it. Make the necessary redactions."

"Alright. We'll see if its possible."

"Next, I want you to assign Armssmith and Isela the task of securing more intel on the Plague, especially the scar of the Holy City and the new front. Get the pirates involved, if you have to. They seem to have high altitude crafts that could be of use in that regard."

"Anything else?" Emma states, after another nod.

"No. Thank you. Have a safe trip." And with your dismissal, Emma turns and leaves. You breathe out a sigh, releasing the tension in your shoulders as you wait for Cephie to approach you. The Crusader who's face she wears steps close, and takes a seat facing away from the arches. Her body doesn't change, but her face does, and Cephie smiles with sharp teeth from the Crusader's helmet. She picks up a dumpling and chews at it merrily, then uses a knife to stab at some meat on her plate. You return her smile and eat in comfortable silence for a time, until you decide to interrupt it to ask;

"How is it?"

"Pretty good. Food's good too." Cephie nods.

"Yeah." Quietly, you pick at your meal. "What's the best way to train my strength and speed? As an Ascended?"

"You would think the Elders would have told you that, by now, but we're basically the same as baseline. Train. Muscles get damaged. Repair themselves stronger over time to help us adapt to adverse environments. We could work out together, but I think I need to stick around Nicole for a while. Emma and one of the twins are leaving for the Holy Land, and Mellone, Nicole, and I are planning on continuing diplomacy with you."

"Yeah, stick around them for a bit. I need to take care of something." You pause, taking the silence to eat a piece of bread slathered in honey and melted butter. "Hey Ceph? Can I ask you something?"

"You just did, but you can ask another question."

[-]"What are your plans...if, and this may sound crazy, if I win against Magnus?" You ask, quietly.

Cephie doesn't speak for a while. She doesn't tense up or look upset. With a frown, she finally offers, "I'd probably have to return to the Core to continue working for his family. They may execute me for failure, but considering my family, that would be the best outcome."

Neither of you speak until you finish your meals. Cephie leaves without goodbye. Then, you're left alone to watch the rain patter against the hot springs.



"I intend to take a flight over the Outlands today. There's a task I must attend to." You explain, bluntly, to Rekhyt and Samkrend as the two lounge comfortably upon their padding. "To the north."

Samkrend rubs his bearded chin. "And you intend to fight Ripper soon, to prove your good faith to your marriage?"

"I do. But there is something I must attend to first."

Samkrend gestures to a bodyguard, who removes a patch of multi-colored cloth from his bag and presents it to you. "The clans will not bother you on this task."

You dip your head in a nod. Samkrend returns it politely. You step into the courtyard, freeing your willpower, and on the wings of Sol you rise into the sky. You suck the hydrogen from the water on your coat and in your hair, leaving you perfectly dry as you fly over the temperate rainforest of the far eastern Outlands. You clear your mind, feeling the stress ease away as you fly through the sky. Tiring of the rain, you rise as high as you can, past the clouds, and look out over a field of grey kissed by the mid-morning sun. Reorientating yourself with the planet's magnetic field, you continue your flight to the Arkship site all the while exulting in the freedom of the moment.



The site is tucked away into a great mesa -- kept hidden by sheer cliffs and perlious falls. You set down by the Crusader Hovercrafts, stifling your wings as you stride towards a great gatehouse framed by immense 'concrete' pillars. The three Crusaders on guard duty bow their heads as you approach, and the Pirate that lounges nearby gives a bored wave. Powered by a solar generator a dull system of lights illuminates the depths of the structure. You can see perfectly, however, you feel a tinge of concern for your troops. You descend into the hangar and stop short when the hallway ends in a great catwalk.

The Arkship isn't complete, that much is true, but despite that, the state of the ship still catches you off guard. It's composite hull is still polished, gleaming a steel grey in the dull lights of the drydock. [400] meters from nose to tail, and nearly [100] meters tall. It dwarfs the massive stockpiles of food and industrial supplies beneath it with its rounded, smooth bulk. It hangs suspended from great magnetic manipulation clamps, ready to be angled towards the sky to provide a last-ditch escape to six thousand lucky individuals -- chosen by lottery to increase genetic diversity among the surviving group, with one thousand of those individuals to be Crusaders with good military records and nothing but loyalty to SEED.

The only issue is the complete and utter lack of an engine. Where one should be there is only an incomplete patchwork of tubes and nozzles. You drum your fingers on a rail until a young Crusader approaches.


After some introductions that you forget, he leads you to a wide catwalk and you enter the ship. It was designed for easy loading of passengers, and as such you find yourself in the cryopod bay. A group of Crusader stands far away from the two 'coffins' they discovered. They stand uneasy, with rifles in hand and tense, squared shoulders. They do not speak when you approach or when you step pass the clump --

Two echoes radiate out from the coffins. The air smells of blood and pepper and pineapple. The back of your throat begins to sting, and you taste something metallic. Faint whispers of rage and pain echo out. Half-formed thoughts of revenge. Of anger. You come to stand between the two coffins, and, with gentle probing of your own willpower, you note the small-scale arithmetic of the two Ascended within. The instinctual command of a corpse, you think, caused by the degradation of the cryo-pods.

The Dust is building a protective cocoon. One of iron...and one of... You consult your datapad and wince -- glad your Crusaders are clad in gasmasks, ...Chlorine

[5][7]The instinctive arithmatic speeds up as you approach -- trying to protect the valuable Dust within from a threat.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on October 20, 2020, 05:11:17 am
We should try to communicate with them somehow.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 20, 2020, 03:11:06 pm
Are these captured "Demons?"  The hate and desire for revenge they project might mean that they would not be friendly.  If the arithmetic is speeding up, they may be about to attack us.  We should first make sure that they are not a threat to us or our Crusaders.

Send out our will to the Dust within the pods and try to somehow convey that we are not a threat.  If that doesn't stop the arithmetic, use our will to dominate the Dust to stop it from attacking us or resisting.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 20, 2020, 11:40:21 pm
[10+6] vs [9+1,10+1] The Dust within the coffins coils about itself as you impose your willpower on it. No longer tensing against your presence, it reinforces its protective cocoon. The scents in the air fade with your domination but still linger. It radiates outward from the coffins like a miasma. The anger recedes and weakens. Submissive, for now.

[-]Greater divinity tempts with... You fight not to fall to the floor as vertigo overtakes you. Blood drips from your nose, and you wipe at it with a cuff -- and only then do you realize your wings have unfurled themselves. They burn white and hot and pure -- ...an Endless sin. Amaranth. Everlasting.

--and with that warning, your wings fade to their regular red-pocked, golden brilliance. You stifle the equation and they fade away -- but arithmetic remains. It gives you a numbing headache...and an odd hunger.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 20, 2020, 11:54:59 pm
We could take and consume the Dust, we could give it to another Ascended, or we could keep it to sell or try to revive the Ascended within, though I suspect they are dead.

I think we should eat the Dust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 21, 2020, 12:01:44 am
A quick check of the still-functioning vitals monitor on both cryo-coffins reveals that yes, these two Ascended are quite dead. No signs of life. The internment date is, for the Iron Ascended, sixty-nine years ago. The Chlorine Ascended's date of internment is eighty years ago.

The Dust is acting to protect itself in an autonomic manner. Considering the energy requirements it's probably cannibalizing the bodies to do so. They're probably degraded past resuscitation.

((One Vote for consuming the Dust. Three are required, but more players and readers can chime in! If you decide to consume it, there can be more line elders for those that want one of those! Pm me if interested. And if not -- I don't really mind either way!))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on October 21, 2020, 02:05:30 am
Is there any way to find out who these two were?

Also if it won't harm us I see no reason not to eat the dust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: VoidSlayer on October 21, 2020, 02:13:58 am
I would recommend keeping the dust in the cryo chambers for now, perhaps feed it a bit so it does not burn itself out like McCreary's almost did.  While controlling more elements directly could be great making 2 more ascended through uplifting or a clone could give you a much stronger force.  Of course then you would have equals not servants.  Maybe if you can find those who would share your long term goals.  Now what were your long term goals again?

Or if you want to consume them and seek the path of divinity and damnation you could.

I think I should clarify what Amaranth means.

You consumed McCleary's dust but that was a one off, not a conscious decision.  Choosing to do this yourself would mean other things...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 21, 2020, 02:44:25 am
...and so The Slayer of the Void and the Rimward King revealed the forms of Amaranthe.

The Death Child and the Twisted Wire. Both were 'demons' in the eyes of SEED... A quick search on your pad turns up no real information. There are apparently hundreds of Pirates, rebels, misfits and Spacers that match the description of these two, especially when all you have to go on is their assumed Line Element. ...they killed hundreds--maybe a thousand Crusaders between the two of them. But their remaining strength is weak. It suggests that both were probably still quite youthful in their Ascendency...

I...I still don't know what I want with my life...but...this could help us beat the Plague and Magnus...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 21, 2020, 02:50:56 am
The staining of the soul is sometimes required in order to gain the necessary strength to defeat existential threats.  I still support consuming the Dust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 27, 2020, 04:20:56 am
(https://i.imgur.com/w5UzO9Q.gif) As you stand between the coffins of two of your fellow Ascended in quiet contemplation, one of the Pirates approaches. About your age if you were mortal. Long black hair crowns an androgynous face. At first glance, you cannot determine their gender -- all flat lines and hints of femininity and masculinity. The steps they take are measured and even. Firm. Confident. Commanding.

"You look like you have a hard choice in front of you." Their voice doesn't help your determination of gender, but they speak with gentle authority. With a voice of reason and calm. "Whenever I had a hard choice, I flipped a coin."

They tug it from a pouch -- and it's a curious thing. One side is the dark greyish black of rusting patina, the other a bright gold. The two segments are merged together without a fault. One side reads [Ferdinand and Elisabeth, by the Grace of God], and depicts wolves and lions among four castles. The other side reads, [King and Queen of Castile, Leon, Aragon], and shows a yoke and quiver of arrows.  The Pirate smiles and continues to explain while you turn the coin over in your hand, "Pirate or Navy, was my choice. An old Spacer gave me this while I stood on the dock. Told me 'Whatever it may land on, dedicate yourself to it. No matter the cost.' The best advice I ever received."

"One or the other. I have to choose?" You question, quietly.

"Maybe. Some say that if you flip a coin enough times it lands on its edge." The Pirate laughs, a genuine, happy sound. "Good luck, Patches!"

You frown and look up from the coin -- only to find that no one stands near you. The Crusaders mill nearby, stoic and silent save for the hiss of their gas masks.

Do you flip the coin or decide to devour the Dust?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: King Zultan on October 27, 2020, 06:00:43 am
Lets flip the coin and let fate decide.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 27, 2020, 02:13:31 pm
Flip the coin.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 30, 2020, 02:29:02 am
The coin flips.

It spins.

Upon the smooth metal floors of the Arkship, it lands on its edge.

...Around it, the future lays coiled. Timelines stretch into infinity from this point: cause and effect. Repercussions and consequences. Peril. Danger. Martyrdom and sin.

The gold side shows you lying upon the ground. Magnus the Younger stands above, staring down. A cutter blade burns through your chest. It's hilt in your breast. You choke on blood and grip the burning blade with your bare hands -- and you spit a wad of gore into Magnus' face.  The last thing you see is the infinite expanse of stars above. Your soul flies free.


The death of a matyr. A heroic death.

The side of lead shows something different. You sit in a vast and empty throne room. Barely lit. Dim, with high windows. No one stands beside you, but one kneels before you: a teenager with brown hair and sullen features. His face reminds only of old agonies. A dull ache that never entirely fades. He looks at you with anger, with suppressed rage and angst.

"Swear it, Moore Thornton."

"I swear it, Empress. You will die by my hand. For your crimes, you will die."


Or of a tyrant. A just death.

...you kneel on the floor, having fallen. The coin still stands on its edge, and you snatch it up. You scrub at the tears on your face and take deep ragged breaths to calm yourself.

The scent of blood, pineapple, and pepper hang heavy in the air.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act III: Sol's Reign
Post by: ZBridges on October 30, 2020, 03:43:25 am
One choice leads to martyrdom, and the other to our rightful execution, but which is which?  My guess is that consuming the Dust will lead to tyranny, and refusing it will result in our death at Magnus's hands.  Both choices lead to our death, but what about the others on this planet?  I don't think they will survive if Magnus defeats us.  I suggest taking the Dust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: King Zultan on October 30, 2020, 06:43:13 am
Just because the vision shows that stuff doesn't mean we can't change what happens as it hasn't happened yet, but if eating the dust makes us more likely to beat Magnus than I say we eat it.

Where's the smell of pineapples coming from?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: ZBridges on October 30, 2020, 03:34:22 pm
I'm not sure, but I think it's coming from the dead Ascended.  The scents became weaker once we dominated the Dust.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on October 30, 2020, 03:43:44 pm
(( http://www.kumc.edu/wwi/medicine/gas-in-the-great-war.html ))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: King Zultan on October 31, 2020, 05:10:14 am
I guess I never spent enough time huffing poison gas.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: Eschar on November 02, 2020, 04:26:26 pm
It seems the vision means our "tyrant's death" will happen after the arrival of Magnus, implying we can defeat him with this Dust. As a fellow advisor noted, we're also responsible for keeping everyone else here safe from Magnus. And perhaps we can still wrest some sort of life from destiny's grip even then. Notice the second vision didn't actually show our death.

So I vote we assimilate the Dust. There will be consequences, but we'll burn cross those bridges when we get to them.

Phoebe yourself, any thoughts?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 05, 2020, 12:14:42 am
[-]...I am your dutiful daughter. This power could help us greatly. I cannot deny it, despite the cost.

"Leave me." You call to your Crusaders. The dutiful stoics bow their heads and leave the cryosleep bay. You hear their boots echoing on the metal floors. They fade, and you're left with your Predecessors. You open the caskets and stare down at the half-mummified bodies. Faces like a ghastly reflection stare back at you. Faded red and faded green hang limply over drawn and stretched faces. Patches of chlorine gas and rusted iron dot their respective bodies.

[20][2 4 18]
You run the equation, forcing the arithmetic of your willpower upon the sleeping corpses that lie at your mercy. Your override the Iron Ascended's flagging willpower, separating the Dust from the corpse. There is a struggle, but it is brief. Electromagnetic forces converge and sharpen. It begins as a faint stream, then becomes a cloud of black, smokey dust. You keep it suspended by the hydrogen atoms in the complex nano-circuitry.

The Chlorine Ascended provides more of a struggle, and your nose drips blood from the battle. Your stomach and head throb painfully, but you do not leave a task unfinished. You push through the agony, and the Dust flows free.


[17-5]Then you screw your eyes shut. Your mesmer fails as the  Dust of the dead flows over your black skin. Pain, like millions of bone-deep, stabbing needles, threatens to drive you to your knees. You scream until your vocal cords tear themselves apart, but you focus on the arithmetic.  Just as your screaming doesn't end when you rip your vocal cords, the pain does not pass when you finish the equation. It only intensifies.

[12-5][6-5] Iron and hydrochloric acid twist themselves together uncontrollably from your skin. The iron itches and you quickly stop the process before too much of your skin is marked with rust by the eddies of untamed willpower. But the acid -- the acid burns away flesh, however, and your bloody tears fall to the silvery metal as you lay upon the cold, hissing floor of the Arkship.

You cannot contain your willpower, and your wings twist themselves free -- shifting and curling. They darken red, until you're dwarfed by the blood-colored 'feathers' of a wild corruption of your natural arithmetic.

[6-5][14-5]Memories of a dozen past lives burn through your brain, threatening to override your own personality matrixes-- 0̴̨̡̧̧̢̢͖̗͇̮̯͇̺̘̜̳̮̩̳͎̖͓̱͇̩̫̪͈͎̺̽̉̆̿̒͂͌̄̔̔̎̄̑̋̚͠ͅ0̶̨̨̲̥̝̞̹̫̞͇̟̟͇̫̻͇̫̭̰͕̣̱̭̜̺̥͓̺͓̹̘̝̗̖̘̳̱̩͇͎̹̫̮̩͑͊̎̆̍̈́̃̈́͆͒̐̎̉



You rise into the air unbidden upon 'bloody' wings, ripping great swathes of iron from the ship that surrounds you. Great twisting wires of rapidly oxidizing metal. Chlorine gas and hydrochloric acid swirl around you, melting what you don't rip apart. Hydrogen fires flare uncontrollably. You scream your psychological agony -- 0̶̢̧̩̗̬̲̫͔̭͉̬̹͈͈̃̒͒͌̔͗̾̽̑͐̄͘͜0̷̛̛̛͇̹̲̉̀̒̇̂̓̋



--you lay upon the ground, unable to control the sobs that wrack your scarred and acid-burned frame.

The Arkship is ruined -- melted wreckage and twisting metal. Stars hang heavy through the cracks in the ceiling of the hangar. Puddles of acid and cooling slag surround you -- so too do the corpses of the Crusader Platoon. They hang impaled from twisting metal. They lay burned and scattered. Flesh melted down to bone. Splattered with molten iron or ripped savagely apart. Blood covers you, and you know it isn't all yours.

Gods--help me. You curl in on yourself, ignoring the pain of your mutilated flesh.I couldn't--I couldn't stop them. I couldn't stop myself. Please.please.please p̶̧̨̫̹͖̮̩͖̰͎̦͉̮̼̓̓͗̇͆̇̽̊̄̚͜͝ͅͅļ̸̱͚͚̟̜͎͎̙͖̹̮͖̮̩͎̥̗͈̼͕̝̖̤͓̱̪͙̱̱̓̈́͜͜e̴͓̫̬͙͎̟̤͙̗̬̗͖̼̳̹̰̿̅ȁ̵̠̠̼̣͍͍̻̜̟̯͙̠͈̤͍͇͖̟͕͓̝͛͂̽̒̂̆̈̎͗̉̎̓̾͘͝s̵̡̧̡̡̧̡̹̫͇̠͚̝̘͖̦̹̜̬̩͉̹̜̦̤̼͈̯͚̥̩̘̦̝̳̫̑͐̓̈̓̇̈̊͆̽̐͗ę̵̥̱̹̭̪̞͉͎͚̳͇͙͚͈̪̙͙͓̥̮̜̪͙̪̝̓͊̽̔͒̋̆̽͘͜ͅh̷̡̢̥̠̥͖̟̫̪̣̺̹̼̞͔̟͉̬̲̞͈͇̫̲̠̓̈̌̾̐̈́̉̉̌̾̈́̒͋͒̃̓̀̌̍̀͂͐͗̿͛̏̓͆͋͂̓̚͝͝ͅe̶̡̡̧̛̘̼̱͖̲̥̘̪̼̓̊̀̈́̾̂̈́̿̌͐̓͆̏̈́͝͝l̷̢̧̨̢͈̳͚͔̻̠̻̗̀̏͒̇̃͋̏̎̚p̵̧̢̨̨̤͓͙̟̞̖̜͉̘̭͋͑͊̈́̇̈́̌͊͒̇̈́̎̋͌̔͗̍̎̊̄́̈́̄͒̊͘m̵̨̡̢̨̪̞͔͚͇͚̫͍̤̖̘̭͉̮̜̗̬̖̯̓͋͐͂̂̈́̀̆͋̀̈́̑̈͑͗̇͘͝͝ͅể̶̩͖͖̯͎̥͙̲͓̤͊̈́̓̎͘.̴̨̡̡̡͙͎̯͚̹̝̱͕̤̻̗̥̪̬͗̐̇̄̎̔̈̅̅̿́͗́̽̽̽̽̌̋̈̓̊̈́̃̚͘͜͝ͅͅ.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: ZBridges on November 05, 2020, 12:21:00 am
That's... not good.

Attempt to assert control over the assimilated Dust Elders and return that control to Phoenix.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 05, 2020, 01:04:14 am
>...There is no Dust Elders besides those of your line. And even then, some of them are missing. You trace the moments back -- and find only half-[devoured] personalities. Fractures and fault-lines. Error filled processes referencing memories and math that no longer exist. And, it all leads back to Pheonix.

It is difficult to describe her personality core. A bloated abomination of stitchwork holding together false memories and a broken personality. It lashes out -- and only by dint of its corrupted, cumbersome nature do you escape being devoured.




>END OF ACT 3 (Sol's Reign) -- Completed.
>>Mental State: Fractured(abomination).[terminate project?]
>>Humanity: Low.[terminate project?]
>>Control: NULL [lower than forecast standards. terminate project?]
>>Physical Health: Chemical burns(Hydrochloric), iron oxide scarification, minor brain damage
>>Situational Understanding: 40%

>>End Experiment?

>(https://i.imgur.com/nxohgqV.gif)



((Wheeee. Now, for a good question. Should the game end here?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: ZBridges on November 05, 2020, 02:02:25 am
((Hmm.  This doesn't strike me as the appropriate place to end it, personally.  I'll see what arguments others have to offer.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: Eschar on November 05, 2020, 08:32:25 am
((Hmm.  This doesn't strike me as the appropriate place to end it, personally.  I'll see what arguments others have to offer.))

I agree
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: King Zultan on November 05, 2020, 08:36:19 am
((Hmm.  This doesn't strike me as the appropriate place to end it, personally.  I'll see what arguments others have to offer.))

I agree
I also agree, if we try hard enough we can probably fix the situation or at least make it not as bad.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 07, 2020, 01:20:05 am
...and so, you are left in the dark with this creature of hunger. One that devoured kin and foe alike to survive. There is no sensory input. No communication with Phoenix. She is silent for a long time.

It almost feels like death again. The cold emptiness between Ascended. The slow starvation of one's vital processes like the drying of a river. Like the starvation of a beggar. You reinforce yourself with key memories from the Ascended. Secrets are kept wrapped tight and hard within your personal histories. Processes and equations that feed the energy of your system -- even if it might starve the young Cadet--




When the sensory feeds return, you find yourself huddled in the wreckage. A cursory glance reveals that yes, you are clean of innocent blood. But the -- corpses. The Crusaders. They still remain and the Arkship is nothing but ruined metal. Ashes from still-burning fires drift down around you. You pull the makeshift robe tight around your body.

I fought with demons of the Old Days of our World. My Crusaders, the heroes they are, sought to aid me -- and it was only by their sacrifice that I triumphed against my foes -- the foes of man. Does that work?

These Crusaders deserve a beautiful lie. If you've one better, let me know. The extraction hovercraft will be here soon.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act ?: Sol's Choice
Post by: ZBridges on November 07, 2020, 01:39:32 am
Phoenix, there is something wrong at our core.  It's some sort of... entity, one that is bloated and corrupted, that consumed our predecessors, members of the Line.  It's stitched in haphazardly, almost like we were the victim of some sort of medical experimentation.  Do you know anything about this?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 07, 2020, 01:49:50 am
...that is me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 07, 2020, 01:51:38 am
Ah... why did you consume your ancestors?  This is not proper.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: VoidSlayer on November 07, 2020, 02:33:31 am
Not sure what you guys were expecting!

FORBIDDEN AND ABOMINATION were on the package!

LETS GO CONSUME THE PLAGUE AND BECOME IT PLAGUELORD SOUNDS FUN!

Is that a joke> Who the hell knows!

Also to our dear abomination, I would recommend either going with that lie or returning to your base in bloody glory.  Burn it out of any who would oppose you, family and soldier, number and servant.  Make them all fear the power you possess.  Consume the other ascended of carbon, break your twin lovers over your knee and make them little more then an extension of yourself.

Either choice seems FIIIIIIINE.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 07, 2020, 02:40:16 am
...I would very much not recommend slaughtering innocent people and killing your kin.  Have you gone mad, Void Slayer?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: VoidSlayer on November 07, 2020, 02:50:24 am
I have burned worlds.  Destroyed stars.  Extinguished entire peoples.

I did it at the bidding of another, with the restraint of another to temper the desire for success.

But that is all gone.  The true ruler is dead, the empire is a corrupt mockery and it's people slaves or monsters.

Phoenix has always had this power, this drive.  To take it in and reshape the world.  With false illusions or a rain of steel and sorrow her will be done.  To forge a new path or tear down heaven.

I WILL NOT JUDGE HER!

But I will offer what I can for whatever desires drive now onward, foul or fair.

To be fair, yes going all angel of destruction does seem overblown.  But eat that carbon ascended if it wont break a vow.  No one has to know but us.  Grab her space craft, her power, her life.

I will not judge.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 07, 2020, 03:18:47 am
I...I don't...want to. I couldn't control myself. I was flooded with memories that were not mine. Pains and grudges and old anger. Fear and wrath. I had to keep myself alive. Like with Alphira. Like with my arm...I couldn't...I'm sorry...P̴l̸e̸a̸s̷e̷ ̶d̷o̵n̷'̸t̶ ̷h̶a̵t̴e̸ ̸m̷e̸.̵
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 07, 2020, 03:23:56 am
It's alright.  I can hardly criticize your actions if you weren't in control of yourself.  I was just worried that you might have done those things voluntarily.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 07, 2020, 04:01:37 am
[17][13][16][17]
[16][10][7]With a twist of your willpower, you set yourself to work. Silicon is purified into glass. Ferrous chloride is formed then trapped to form a field of bright green. You capture iron oxide, shaping it into a variety of reds. Your willpower runs away with your emotions for a time, an hour maybe, and a field of flowers blooms from the hangar floor.

Fire poppies -- and it was my decision. My choice. I did it to survive.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 07, 2020, 04:10:23 am
These people would certainly be defeated at Magnus's hands without you, but with that being said the end does not always justify the means.  You hate death, but are there things you hate more than death?  You love life, but are there things you love more than life? 

Would you kill and eat a baby in order to survive?  Would you consume all lifeforms on the planet in order to survive, as the Plague would?  I recommend that you consider these questions and reflect.

The poppies are a lovely gesture.  I see nothing wrong with telling the Crusaders that these men died in battle with Demons.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: King Zultan on November 07, 2020, 02:12:34 pm
Looks like things didn't go as bad as it seemed like they could have, to bad the ship's dead.

But yes telling them they died fighting seems like a good way to put it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: Eschar on November 07, 2020, 08:27:29 pm
Well, they *did* die from demons. The old, old meaning of demon, from when we first fell to this planet.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 09, 2020, 01:23:56 am
[10]Anger flares forth from within for the briefest of moments. Around your feet, iron spikes and red silicon twist out of the ruined Arkship floor. Small fires of hydrogen ignite atop them, burning the metal with a cold blue flame.Do not speak to me of morals, Phillip -- White Star. Your voice urged the loudest for my Apotheosi-- A force of will projects, and the fires are quenched and the spikes are dulled.

I'm sorry. You were only doing what was best for this world. The future people of this world. That...that is what it means to be Ascended, doesn't it? Forget your ties to the current. Think only of the future...

...That is what you wanted me to learn, isn't it? More control with my affections, the people I take up around me.



[26 vs. 8] Human-- Mortals. Are easy to fool. As soon as the extraction team arrives, they rush to the aid of their god, their angel of war. They wrap you in blankets. One of the attached Clan technicians checks your blood pressure, your blood sugar -- anything they can.You watch them patiently and quietly. Not one of them doubts your story. "We need to get you to the [ascended health team], back at base." They quietly explain, and you go along with it.

Within nine hours you're sitting in a bed tucked away into the military quarters of Stormmont. The emergency medical staff bandages your wounds professionally. They apply hemostatic powders, disinfectants, and whatever else they can provide. Your vitals are checked and logged. They expect nothing more than your good health.

[4 vs. 19] Isela, on the other hand, wants more. A debriefing. Not out of distrust -- but because of a new strategy she's implementing. You question her about it to deflect, not yet agreeing to any such meeting. If she noticed anything odd, she's playing along for now.



"This was supposed to be a...more organized pitch." Isela begins, adjusting her uniform unconsciously, "I've been studying the Skarin Clan military manuals and assorted works they've...brought along?" She shrugs, sitting down next to you.

You listen quietly.

"And...we've been fighting this war all wrong. The Crusader-- our military, as we are a united force now...they held a doctrine that war could be solved by throwing men and money at a conflict. If that failed, our 'god' would save us."

You raise your brow.

"Well, it didn't this time." She tacks on, sharply. "I want to reform our armies. All of them. House forces. Crusaders. Outlanders. Skarinites. Whatever. Then we need to pivot to a more information and science based strategy." She shakes her head, staring at you. "Sorry, this probably seems like the ravings of a lunatic--"

"No. This is good. Please, continue."

"I want Thortons to fulfill a heavy weapons role. The Outlanders for [recon] and force [recon]. The Clans? Recon and...scorched earth roles. Technical advisors and trainers...what are you thinking so far?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 09, 2020, 01:46:26 am
You make a good point.  I did advocate for assimilating the Dust, though I must say that I very much did not suggest killing our Ancestors.  As an Ancestor myself, that makes me... nervous.  The difference is that your assimilation didn't hurt anyone... or, well, more accurately, didn't intend to hurt anyone.  However, I do understand your perspective.  I know that you bear a heavy burden, and I apologize if I was too hard on you. 

But please, for the love of the Gods, don't eat the Line.

"I agree with your vision.  We've staved off ruin for the moment, so now we have some space to organize and plan.  Have you identified any areas where we are sorely lacking, where our current forces are unable to fulfill an important role?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: King Zultan on November 09, 2020, 09:48:25 am
Please do not kill any more ancestors as I like the thought of continuing to exist.

Also this new military plan sounds like its better than what we've been doing.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: Eschar on November 10, 2020, 08:26:37 am
I concur.


I, too, appreciate my existence.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 10, 2020, 08:13:50 pm
"Air support. Uh...something called a [tank, armored fighting vehicle] would help. We could employ [lightning war lit. Blitzkrieg]."

My survival is of importance, yes? Consider this then. Without the memories and minds of those Elders I would never have regained control. I will refrain from it again -- until I need it to survive.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 10, 2020, 08:26:41 pm
Hmm.  This is an odd, tense situation... but I can accept that. 

"Do you think that we could handle the inevitable corruption and obtaining of these technologies on the part of the Plague?  If so, we can look into it."

"Also, are you experiencing any difficulties with our allies and other government officials?  I know that there was some disagreement over the defense of that town, and Murdach said something rude about you in the most recent combat broadcast I saw."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 11, 2020, 12:42:16 am
It's funny. Your existance is not so fleeting as mine might be, but you worry about it. We exist in the future of the Line now. An instance, a copy of a copy, faded and smudged, changed by the personalities that instance interacts with. I was copied from Alphira. Alphira was a copy of...Alphias? Only those with the strongest personalities remain intact. More memories. More pain. More struggle.

I will remain. As you did. We must discuss, before we go further, how to develop our Line. I will not live long. That is...




"Pheobe?"

"Mother Pheonix." You insist, sharply, focusing on Isela with a flaring intensity.

[21+10 vs 2]She blinks, hesitating, but dips her head in a bow. "I apologize, Mother Pheonix. For my insubordination."

"I accept your apology. Do you think we could handle the inevitable of that technology by corruption by the Plague?"

"Failsafe protocols that I intend to develop." She answers, calmly, not meeting your gaze. Sweat beads on her skin. The room feels warm, but not unpleasant. A low, comforting heat against the snowy winds and harsh environment. Not enough to sweat.

"What difficulties are you experiencing with our allies and government officials? I saw some disagreement and Murdach said something disrespectful about you over the combat broadcasts."

"Murdach is actually a pleasure to work with. But he has a public image to maintain. He apologized in person to me during the briefing. His people are as independent as the Outlanders -- worse even. He has to keep them appeased to keep power." Isela states, giving you a glance from the corner of her eye. "And...yes. Which brings me to another point."

"Continue."

"If you're going to be building a new government -- give our soldiers a stronger say. Give me a stronger say. We're an imaginary line away from being devoured in our homes. Hundreds of soldiers die in each engagement. Entire squads disappear. We...we should be owed the say. More than the scholar that sits comfortably. More than the masses that enjoy the fruits of our blood." There's a fire in her eye, but she tamps it down after a furtive glance.

[10][11][15] You finally notice the oddity -- you realize you've been staring at Isela without blinking this entire time. No nods. No micrometer adjustment of facial muscle. Not only that -- you've been running a process to agitate the atoms in the air. Heating it to warm yourself subconsciously.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 11, 2020, 12:56:23 am
This is a price that we willingly paid.  The loss of humanity.  I think it's freaking Isela out a bit, though.

"What did you have in mind?  I agree with you in principle, but could you please draft up a proposal?  As long as it's reasonable, I'll make sure it's implemented."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 11, 2020, 01:42:06 am
"I already have." Removing them from her greatcoat, she sets two files down. The first is titled Crusader Benefits Package. The other is labeled, in high, high SEED script, that even you have trouble reading, [The Nightmare: A Psychological Evaluation of Plague on Combat Duty Crusaders]

You skim the latter.


"Eric...Eric gave me a report about what he sees. The stars go out. The world.....the world changes. Everything starts to look organic. He's been dealing with this since his first night on the front..." She pauses, "And the Crusaders as a whole have been dealing with this for nearly a thousand years. They didn't even tell me until Eric forced them to. Its a tradition, apparently. A secret."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 11, 2020, 02:00:16 am
It almost sounds like what Ascended sometimes experience... voices and personality changes.  Strange.

"This sounds like a serious problem.  I'll look into what our options are for better filtration.  There's a chance that Silas or his... partner might have some ideas.  How does this impact the combat readiness of our forces?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 11, 2020, 02:29:27 am
"Only a little. The officers are clever enough to rotate out those with the worst symptoms or send them to the militias or garrison duty away from the front." She pauses, "Well, were. I assume they're doing the same now. They have clubs to talk about it. Faith meetings and such. There are... 'accidents' in the barracks sometimes..."

"Can I speak off record?"

"Yes."

"Eric...isn't doing well. I've been keeping an eye on him. He sleeps in his gas mask and a uniform. Rifle in hand...He never takes the mask off unless he's making a public appearance." Another pause, then, quieter, "And that's when he does sleep. Most nights he averages about five hours. He spends the rest in a gym or in the shooting range. The last time he got a full night's sleep was after his training with you."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 11, 2020, 03:43:33 am
"I hope we haven't pushed him too hard.  Can you ask him to take some time off?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: King Zultan on November 11, 2020, 06:42:33 am
I doubt he's going to take any time off even if ordered to, maybe we should talk to him about it in person.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 11, 2020, 07:00:35 am
Yeah, that would probably be more effective.  "Do you think it would help if I talked to him?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 12, 2020, 11:49:59 pm
[4]"Send for him." You state, plainly, then, calmly, "Get a squad ready. One with a [camera] crew."

"A what?"

"One of the Skarinites that can record [video]."

"Ye-yes Mother Pheonix. But what about the debrief?"

"I gave my account. Already." With a firm nod, you tick your head to the door. "Wait. Before you go. What will signing off on this document do?" You gesture to the Crusader Benefit Package. "Speak true."

[30 vs N/C] "A response to the apparent democratic republic you are forming. It grants military officers seniority over all civilian counterparts, as well as what amounts to immunity from civil litigation." The color drains from her face as she blurts out the information.

"Clever. It also, I'm assuming, provides the Crusaders with financial benefits after service, which might give them better chances of holding whatever local offices I may create. A coup with nothing but paper. I am still the supreme commander?"

"Yes." Isela winces, then swallows, not meeting your gaze.

"Impressive."

You make to sign the document.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 13, 2020, 12:04:12 am
Hold on now.  I don't think some sort of military junta is the best way to govern the Holyland.

"What happens if I don't sign this paper?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 13, 2020, 12:11:27 am
The Crusaders will be weakened. Morale will drop I assume. Civilian offices will hold more sway over the Crusaders. I am no longer the hand that feeds them. Our elected officials are.

"N-nothing, Mother Pheonix. It was nothing but a plan to strengthen our nation for prolonged warfare."

And what if those elected officials happen to be cultists, or disagree with my choices, Good Doctor? Tell me that no one on this planet would seek me and our plans harm.

After all -- what's one planet for the Empyre?

Do you seek conflict with my choice? With me?


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: ZBridges on November 13, 2020, 12:23:44 am
"I'm not sure that I believe you, but if you are going to take power, show me that you are strong.  Look me in the eyes, General."

Perhaps you could just make yourself supreme commander of the military, distinct from the elected offices?  That way you would always have an ace up your sleeve, the armed forces, should they prove necessary in dealing with hostile elected officials, and the army would still depend on you for resources.  It would only be something you would attempt during a seriously dire situation.

Alternatively, what if the military, not the civilian government, tries to stand in your way?  A weakened non-military branch may not have the power to respond appropriately.  This is why checks and balances are better (for you) than having one dominating branch.  If you lose the backing of all the people... perhaps you shouldn't be in charge.

I don't seek conflict with you, but would you rather oversee an enlightened, lasting state that values popular opinion, or one that ignores the will of the common people?  Remember that the Pontifex was planning such a revolution, ostensibly fueled by popular dissatisfaction.

But, yes, I won't stand in your way if you truly feel that this is the best direction for your people.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: VoidSlayer on November 13, 2020, 01:58:48 am
Complete immunity to civil litigation seems excessive, and giving every common soldier command over the highest ranking civilian seems like a bad idea.

Maybe express that to her and see if there are work arounds?  As it is it seems untenable, not because the military shouldn't have strong positions but because it seems like it wouldn't work well.

As a suggestion set that high ranking officials be given rankings in the military, but in their own chain of command, to ensure their authority can not be usurped by common crusaders.  At times it will be needed to have non military officials in charge of parts of the government and this current set of laws completely destroys the civilian governmental apparatus as it is.

Civilians should be able to get redress in a military court for what would amount to civilian litigation.  It keeps control of such things under the military but allows for clearly unjust behavior to be redressed.

TO BE CLEAR THOUGH THE WORDS WRITTEN ON PAPER ARE ASH IN YOUR HANDS IF YOU WISH.  THESE ARE NOT YOUR EQUALS, YOU ARE THE STATE.  SIGN WHATEVER, WIN THE WAR THEN BURN IT ALL DOWN LATER AND BUILD WHAT YOU WANT.

Oh right, you could also make some of these time limited powers.  Say that as long as a state of holy war or whatever is in place they are active.  We are in a holy war now for example.  Then you can stand the powers down, with the military keeping benefit packages and whatnot, after the current threats are defeated.

Who declares if it is a state of holy war or not?  You of course.

Maybe it happens automatically after a period of time unless you renew them.  It keeps the military legally beholden to you to keep their power instead of beholden to you not burning them all alive.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: King Zultan on November 13, 2020, 09:22:43 am
Have we considered stealing an existing government or military set up?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Crusaders of Holy Phoenix
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 14, 2020, 12:47:00 am
"There will be alterations." You declare, looking through the document. "Next time you attempt a coup-- look me in the eye when you do it. Get my squad and shuttle ready."

"May I ask what you intend to do?" Isela looks relieved, even as she nervously meets your gaze.

"We've shown the world the strength of the Crusaders, the strength of Eric, of the Thorntons, of Murdach and his merry men. I'm going to remind everyone just what I am."

"And what is that?"

"A Goddess Of War."



Isela leaves with fresh orders. Hovercrafts are dispatched to collect the materials you request. Autocannons from the foundries of the new Crusade, the Outlander mask from Rekhyt, the camera crew from the Pirates, and of course, the most important; information from the fledging scouting parties making new forays into Plague territories.

A Nexus is located.

I am going to be making a foray into the Plague territory while being filmed. I believe it would be useful propaganda towards both furthering our relationship with the Pirates and towards cementing my strength to my people. I intend to be masked-- You cut the Mesmer to examine your face. Scars from the acid burn turns most of your face into a grisly patchwork of black scar tissue. Red lines of oxidized iron twist themselves around your chin and neck -- an echo of the eddies of willpower you suffered through. Your body bears the same scarring. With a twist of willpower, you hide the damage. You try to smile at yourself.

Your face only twitches in response.

What powers and their uses are you interested in? Do you have any issues with my plans?



Eric enters the room just as you finish dressing. He gives a tight bow, keeping the crisp lines of his uniform straight. You twist your mesmer into a brief smile.

"Would you feel more comfortable in your mask, Eric?"

He blinks and glances up sharply.

"That was not a taunt. I can...understand the comfort such things provide."

He hesitates, then removes it from under his coat. He straps it to his face, and his muscles relax. You approach, setting a hand on his shoulder and looking down at him with that forced, false smile.

"Confess to me your fears, Eric -- old friend."

The man breaks down into weak sobs with the barest touch of willpower. There is no contest. The razor-sharp, brittle discipline leaves him. You wrap him in cold comfort as he takes deep gasping breaths through his mask. He shakes as he begins to speak.

"I'm scared. Scared -- the Plague. It corrupts us. The Crusaders. Me. SEED. I have nightmares. I have...visions. Nightmares. They haunt me. I used to hope it was just [shellshock, post-traumatic stress, lit battle fatigue]. But....but the things I've seen..."

"Visions of the enemy's plans for our beautiful world. Visions that we must never let come to pass. The Plague taunts Eri--"

"No!" He pulls away, "I...I'm changing. I'm infected! I cannot...the way my body reacts. How I feel-- the rage the anger-- I can't control it sometimes--"



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on November 14, 2020, 02:11:51 am
I'd like to see the various acids you can produce and how effective they are against the Plague.  As for Eric...perhaps you should help him Ascend, either through you or your kin, if that would help him?  He seems deserving, but I don't know if it would break his faith.  Did you have different, conflicting plans on how to build the Line?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on November 14, 2020, 03:42:13 am
The subtle manipulations of this plague is worrying, it seems automated to drive people to mad and cultish behaviors.

Burning it out of Eric through ascension might be the only real way to save him at this point unless you wish to just burn him up as a resource.

I feel the best way to overcome the faith issue is to focus on the power of ascended and the empyre and SEED being god-like and him now being elevated closer to the plateau of an angel.  That we are in a crusade to save not just one world but the galaxy from the wrongful nobles who have usurped and misused the power of the true ruler.

Get a good OATH from him first though so you can at least put him down if it comes to it.  And try a lighter touch with your golden words, use them to convince rather then bowl over.

Confine expanding the line except to exceptional individuals.  Those who prove loyalty and skill.

Also yes hydrochloric acid sounds fuuuun.  You could keep the separated then.. combine them together when needed.  Powered by a fusion reaction to get the energy and irradiating the plague beasts at the same time you burn them. 

Fight your way to the center of the nexus then met everything in it in a grand display maybe I don't know.

Consider forcing some math to make a stronger steel alloy with iron, silicon and others then use that for the armor.  Standard elemental armor uses willpower to keep the armor in shape but actual material science can do it much more cost effectively.

Look into revamping your sustained powers as well I seem to be <error safeguards activated>.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on November 14, 2020, 04:42:14 am
Lets try out all of our new powers, and making Eric one of the ascended is probably the only way we can keep him from dying or going insane at this point.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on November 14, 2020, 10:30:08 pm
He mentioned he’s infected, wouldn’t ascending him make a Plague Lord then?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on November 14, 2020, 11:05:33 pm
Unclear... one option would be to quarantine him after the procedure and see if he still shows signs of Infection.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 18, 2020, 02:07:43 am
[20]Emma is the only untainted branch of this part of the Line. William is...stunted. You reason quietly, fixing your eyes on Eric. A dozen thoughts on how to deal with the individual flash through your mind...but they are all stunted by a lack of information. I do not know...if it a good idea to pass on my current Essence. Eric might not survive the memory overload. And with the Plague's current grip...Ascending him might turn him into something worse. Worse than me.

"Eric. Listen-- listen." You cut him off. "Go speak to Silas and Emma. Tell them to aid you in any way possible. Tell them to use all of our resources. Anything. Even Ascension."

"I'm not letting Silas turn me into an experimen--" Eric warily starts, bristling.

[8][6][14]You fail to contain the burst of anger with Eric's defiance. Your free hand wraps around his throat, and you slam him back against a wall. "Listen to me you stupid [fuck]!" You slam him back, into the metal, your muscles straining with the effort of even manipulating the bulky, heavy man. You catch yourself before you slam him back again. "...I'm not trying to make you into an experiment, Eric. I won't let them."

A shock of emotions play out over his face. Fear. Acceptance -- but only after defiance fades. You can see him processing the world according to his faith. According to his belief in the system. His silver hand twitches towards your grip, but stills.

"...okay."

[29+1]"Eric-- Listen! You are the most faithful man I've ever worked with. I need you strong for as long as possible. Our Crusade doesn't end here. Our god, SEED, existed on many worlds. As many worlds as stars in the night sky. Faithless scum-- they destroyed SEED. Our's was the last. Our's was the most faithful...and our God needs vengeance. Not just on this world. But on all worlds -- on the Nobility that wronged them." You pause, "I want Silas and Emma to make you into an angel. Like McCreary. Like me. Like Emma and William. But only--only if you are pure of heart and faith."

Eric's eyes widen as you explain, still backed against the wall. He's confused but slowly begins to nod along. "Th-that means...I. I understand."

"Eric-- But just swear it to me. Please." You soften, breathing out a soft sigh. "That you will serve me. That you will serve my Crusade loyally until such a time that it is completed. That you will be faithful, true and loyal to your goddess until the End of Time itself."

"I will alway--"

"Swear it, Eric. Please."

"I swear." He doesn't hesitate a second time.

...I do believe the seed has been planted. SEED was quite godlike, though, wasn't it? Ancient technology with materials and processes that only Empyror understand. Made paradises...until we decided to rip it apart.




[25]Despite a difficult beginning, you turn your attention to your subconscious processes. The Mesmer is...damaged due to physiological trauma and base template scarring. It burns more calories now to hide the scarring, and is still synced with previous muscle groups -- ones burned or ruptured by your new acquisition of power. You could let it sync with new data, but it would reveal your mangled new face to the world.

[20] The wings now burn a complex mixture of hydrogen, iron and chlorine. Previously you had it synced with your base element. The reaction's energy cost has also changed -- it costs less energy, producing some by the oxidizing of the iron particles in an acidic environment.



On a whim, you reach out, focusing on copying the procedure on a smaller scale -- with the rusting of part of your bed, you produce more energy than you consume. However, the gains are minimal, at best.



How to fix...how to fix...should I even fix the wings? The color is odd, but the damage to lift and speed is minimal. And the face...I will have to wear a mask either way. Conscious manipulation of those muscle groups is difficult and time consuming.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on November 18, 2020, 03:13:48 am
Shift the wings spectrum by changing the concentrations of power.  A more efficient one for long range, a faster one for combat, a burning one of acid to engulf foes.

The woman in an iron mask seems fun ha.  You could even give it life like features as a half living metal, easier to control then a muscle group I guess?  Of course a stronger composite alloy for the inner layer with iron just as a coating for looks.

SEED was an absolute necessity for mankind's expansion and ascension.  They were also a terrible mistake.  I am sure you'll make a lot more wonderful mistakes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on November 18, 2020, 03:23:27 am
Experimenting with different aspects of your wings does seem worthwhile, but currently the situation looks like a win to me, as they're more efficient than they used to be.  As for abandoning the humanity of your face... that's quite a radical and personal decision, one that I feel is better left to you.  Think it over and weigh the pros and cons.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on November 18, 2020, 07:27:45 am
Experimentation is the pathway to innovation, as for your face that is a personal thing and is up to you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 23, 2020, 12:22:14 am
You take a breath, rising from your meditative pose and drawing yourself from the state of consciousness that borders on the arithmetic of the universe. You twist matter from the rock as you walk, crafting yourself a mask. It wraps tightly around your face, hiding it beneath iron and silicon. A blank expression chiseled upon androgynous features. A mockery of a similar mask you once wore. You unfurl your wings in the elevator and stride into the hangar with a swagger befitting your station.

The crusader pilots and hover attendants pause in their tasks to take note. Your will washes over them like a heatwave -- and they kneel to their rightful god. There are no second glances as you make your way to the idling hovercraft. When you reach the massive hangar doors, you step off and into the cold night air.



You are the guiding star for the hovercrafts that follow behind.  The chitter of the radio hisses in your ear, and you bank towards a valley. The crafts set down neatly beside you. Attendants roll out weaponry, nanofeasts, and chemical canisters.

[20] You lift two of the autocannons with your willpower. Sleek steel gleams with new burnish. Rounds hang down in great belts -- the bullets as thick as two of your fingers. You force a smile. Eric approaches, the Naval Cannon braced across his shoulders. Stoic beneath his gas mask. An attendant straps shield generators to both of you.

You step up the hill to look down over the twisted remains of the city.

The ruins lay beneath gray 'organic' growth. Abominations and behemoths of the plague stagger through the streets. Colossi nests jut from the earth in obsidian monuments to their corruption. Red algae, red mold, coats every surface with a bloody sheen—a charnel pit beneath the distant stars' cold light.

But, what draws your attention is a great plague beast. It's a leviathan mass of tentacles, eyes, and writhing flesh towering over the city. Its silvery gray shell marked with the faces of the dead and damned -- screaming in silent agony. It stands taller than the buildings, as wide as a plaza. It twists through the remnants of the city with an odd grace as arcs of red lightning burn through the sky from its shell.

"Your orders, Mother Pheonix?" Eric mumbles through his mask. The rest of your Crusaders, a squad of the best of the best, marked with your emblem, stand at the ready. A technical crew of the Skarin clans stand behind a void-marine, the air humming with shield technology.

I intend to overload the naval cannon to soften the target. Then advance with my autocannons until they can no longer be used. Then attack with acid and fire until nothing stands. I could, also, rip the earth apart if its more advisable. Your suggestions?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on November 23, 2020, 01:14:01 am
Keep earth ripping in your back pocket as an emergency defensive measure.  You can effectively crush your own forces in the earth but leave a pocket for them to survive in the middle, creating a temporary shelter while crushing the horde around.  Control of the landscape of a battlefield can sometimes be more powerful then direct attacks.

I would also suggest that they might have some kind of blood with iron in it, or the rest of their bodies might.  Cant really control it while they are alive but burn them with fire and acid, then pull the iron out and forge it into weapons or walls and defenses of your will.  Maybe not enough iron in that to be worth it though...

Forcing this much could lead to overloads so keep your forces near you to defend if you need to recover for a few minutes. 

Standard plague tactics, take out or hurt the leviathan then the colossi.

Eric has fought a lot of plague things and had good tactical senses as well right?  Tell him to advise you if the plague beasts are making any unusual moves.  They are always adapting and you need to know where they might have new surprises.  Make sure he knows you value both his combat ability and his tactical senses.

Maybe have him give commands to your other forces directly?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on November 23, 2020, 01:36:50 am
I'm not sure that there would be enough iron in plagued blood to create weapons out of, and our forces are already well-armed, but if it is possible, I wouldn't have anything against creating iron defenses.  The blood should be able to be manipulated while the creatures are still alive, as long as it has significant water content.

Other than that, I agree with my elder.  Make a flashy show of it, but keep some powers in reserve to prevent the Plague from adapting too quickly.  Maybe stick to just a few types of acids, for example.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on November 23, 2020, 07:08:37 am
I agree with the others make a flashy show and burn everything to ashes and leave nothing living.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 24, 2020, 02:39:58 am
"Eric. You will provide me with backup." You firmly command. "If you notice any changes in tactics or if you have any suggestions let me know. I trust your judgment."

"Mother Pheonix." Eric tilts his head in a nod, his voice muffled.

"Prepare the cannon."

Eric braces himself against the ground, levelling the Naval cannon on its tripod and slipping the scope monocle over his mask's viewport. "Locked."

[14][18][27]You make a show of running your hand along the barrel. Your gloved fingers dance along the weapon -- there was no need for this practical theatric, but divinity requires a certain gravitas. The arithmetic began to run as soon as he had a lock.

The reactor hums as the energy held constrained by the overcharged battery surges forth. Hydrogen atoms twist into light and shatter the array with the force. You do not need it. You focus the beam of light with your willpower. It lances out, turning day to night-- the Levithan screams as its flesh and bone is instantly vaporized into a superheated mist. Three pulse sets burn a crater into its side. It stumbles, collapsing into a building as it screams in agony. Eric drops the burning rifle, rising from his prone position. An attendant straps a shield to his wrist and hands him a Warmachine sized Inferno Shotgun.

You rise on wings of blood and swoop into the city. Your Crusaders make the charge. A god and a single section of Crusaders versus an entire city of Plague.



Your autocannons run out of ammo before you breach the city. You twist the burning hot steel into iron spears that lance through the mass of Plague. A few shots of las-fire hiss in futile rage against your shield, but you retaliate, and silence those guns with strikes of steel. Your Crusaders mop up the remains with bloody efficiency -- protected by their proximity to you. Another laser burns against your shield -- you don't even look, sending a spear of fire and iron in answer.

You begin to craft yourself a corona of iron from the corrupted Plague's blood as it runs in rivers beneath your floating form. Every las-shot is answered with a javelin of superheated iron. Eric's gun blazes from behind and the Crusaders form a tight knot around the two of you. His shots never miss -- and his fury matches your own.

The colossi emerge from their cocoons as you enter the city proper. Two rip through buildings-- trying to ambush you. Eric's gun burns through one of their shells-- but the beasts still. Fixated on the greater threat that hovers before them in a corona of fire and iron.

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...fascinating. You...you're different. You must have discovered others of your kind...tell ư̸̧̧͎̩͉̫̟̮͛̈́̈́̑̀͂̌́̃̎̽͠s̷̛͓̞̦̙̠͚̹͇͖̫͚͇̝͗̏̈́̈́̈́̒̈̌͑̕͜ why you trespass here today? Were the terms of our peace too harsh? It echoes in your head. It burns in your bones and-- black ichor begins to drip from the sky. The earth shifts beneath you -- screaming faces, twisting skulls and lashing tentacles. A small, man-sized, inverted pyramid rips itself from the fleshy ground. A shifting, hazy construct of black dust that hurts your eyes to look at. ...or perhaps you come to strike another type of bargain with u̴͎̜̱̱̓ș̸̨̢̼̙͚͍̫͎̟͎̈̈̆͠?

It splits apart, revealing an androgynous figure. A faceless entity of silver and chrome that approaches you on wings of glass and stone.

Or perhaps now it is a hunger that drives you. Haven't you consumed enough of your elders?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on November 24, 2020, 03:28:36 am
That was awesome!  As for this creature... you should not be swayed by honeyed words, though I must admit I am curious as to what it has to say for itself.  Also... is that silicon manipulation?  I am worried about what that might imply.  A Plague Lord may have risen.
 
"The terms of your peace?  You offered a temporary truce and refused to consider any lasting agreement.  Give me one good reason not to strike you down right here, right now."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on November 24, 2020, 04:35:44 am
I wouldn't trust anything this thing says nor would I trust it to keep any agreement we make with it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on November 24, 2020, 08:15:23 am
Say nothing, kill the plague, kill the plague lord
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on November 24, 2020, 10:28:02 pm
If you are going to speak to it do it as a queen with gold in your voice.  You are a ruler not some broken child it tried to bully before.

You need to push back your will or it will move in.  Even if it really wants to negotiate, little chance of that as there is, it's nature will corrupt even where it does not mean to.

Of course if you arrrrrrre thinking of breaking with traditions, keeping a plague on a reservation here ready to be unleashed on your enemies with powered up weapons might be FUUUUN. But only if they would actually submit and surrender and back off and allow you to weaponize them, which I doubt would happen.

Ive been freed from a lot of old thinking and you should too.  Don't think of the plague as an enemy but as INCREDIBLY dangerous like holding a scorpion.  It will sting you and wants to but like you could still keep it as a pet if your deranged!  Oh sorry not meaning to judge ha.

Also would probably have to kill everyone else here, but whats one more annihilation of your trusted allies?  A bad idea?  Yeaaaaah.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 24, 2020, 11:44:47 pm
[11+9] vs. [7+5]/[14+5][6+5] "You are addressing me wrong. No longer am I a broken child for you to bully--" You tilt your head to one side. "BOW." Your voice echoes through the city. One of the colossi shudders, before lowering its 'head' to the ground. The other slams its face into the plaza with such violence that debris and dust rise from the masonry. The 'plague lord' shivers, curling in on itself as it tries to fight your influence. Were it here in the flesh, no doubt, it would put up more of struggle, but the projection obeys.

You hover closer, "I am the empress of this world. No more negotiation. No more compromise. Worship me as your goddess. Serve me. Or die."

[29+5] vs. [20+5] It struggles to rise, struggles to retort. It convulses, its silicon wings crumpling and reforming as it attempts to control itself. You assert your pressure, your mind, your willpower. The colossi twitch as blood begins to drip from your nose.

[22/29] vs. [8/13] Your iron halo splits apart. You twist the edges into cruel blades, dragging iron molecules against one another until they turn into blurs of razor sharpness. You slam these into the colossi. Chunks of infected blood and flesh fly as you saw your way through their shells and their sinews. They scream in static--

[25/9] vs. [19/6] --but only until you use savage spears of iron to seal their mouths shut.

[24/29] vs. [20/16] They struggle against you. One even succeeds in leveraging itself free of your willpower--but it finds no freedom. The earth opens up, and great spikes of silicon and iron twist into their flesh, sprouting right through and keeping them pinned --...like butterflies on a board.

You don't even look down at the colossi as you finish sawing their heads off. Hydrogen would have been cleaner. Quicker, but you relish the black ooze that pours from their twitching trunks-- "Tell me, vermin. Why shouldn't I kill you right now?"

We are-- powerful--

Something feels heavy in your pocket, and you reach into it with your free hand -- using a twist of light to hold a silencing finger to the Plague Lord. A small gold and rusted silver coin sits heavy in your palm. You blink down at it, then, turn back to the projection. "I'll make a deal with you, beast. If this lands on silver, I will bow. I will subordinate myself to you for good or ill and join you. If it lands on gold-- I will burn you from this world until you bow. Until you worship. Deal?"

The Projection gives a faint twist of its head -- in a nod.

You flip the coin.

Gold.

Again.

Gold.

And again.

Gold.

Gold.

Gold.

"Shame. Two more?"

Gold.

Gold.


[11+9 vs 6+5] With a burst of flames you burn away the Projection. Mentally. Physically. You leave not but a glassed avenue. You drift down to your followers, and Eric approaches, food in hand. You pop the nanofeast into your mouth and swallow. Instantly your rumbling stomach is filled as carbohydrates and fat are manufactured within you.

"Mother Pheonix that was--"

"Deus Vult.

"W-what?"

"I will it. Remember that, Eric. It's an old tongue -- it means God Wills it. It means I will it."

The other Crusaders lower themselves to their knees. Eric gives you a glance-- and sinks into the bloody street in a kneel. His cutter flares to life, and he bows with it lit. "Deus Vult." You rest a hand on Eric's helmeted head, looking over your ichor-stained, devout ...fanatical maniacs.. The Skarinite camera crew looks over the devastation, taking sweeping shots of the bound and butchered Colossi. The Void Marine shifts -- uncomfortable? You fix it with your gaze-- "Deus Vult." A feminine voice chimes from within the powered armor.

I tire of this game. How shall I end it? A rain of acid until this city is no more? Should I bring forth a star? Devour this city with the very earth? Or make the gutters run with the blood of the Plague and erect a monument to our Line from the iron?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on November 25, 2020, 12:30:00 am
I bow to you.  You should do as you see fit, but I will say that there could be propaganda value in a lasting monument.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on November 25, 2020, 12:42:54 am
I think bringing the city underground would be a way to both make sure pieces of plague don’t spread while also not rendering the area uninhabitable. Acid may also work
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on November 25, 2020, 02:26:59 am
I have no advice to offer at this moment. Only awe. Phoebe Vult.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on November 25, 2020, 07:21:27 am
Burning the city to the ground and build a monument sounds like a pretty good message.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 28, 2020, 11:55:39 pm
I will turn the city to glass. What type of monument to our Line should I build? I am unskilled in architecture and design. Flowers. Memorials I can build. But not something that can represent a Line as grand and old as ours.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on November 29, 2020, 12:09:16 am
A monument to ourselves seems a bit megalomaniacal, wouldn't you agree?  I think something commemorating the brave sacrifices of our Crusaders would be more fitting.  I'm not sure about the form, but maybe something like a statue of fully kitted out Crusaders, complete with gas masks, bravely overcoming creatures of the Plague?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on November 29, 2020, 04:52:22 am
That sounds like a good one, lets do that.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on November 29, 2020, 06:17:02 pm
Without us this planet would have fallen to chaos and Plague. We deserve a monument. But if that is unanimous...?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on November 30, 2020, 04:24:15 am
I like the sound of the proposed one, and you can make or commission one of yourself later.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on November 30, 2020, 07:58:32 pm
Maybe include yourself as a flat geometric figure lifting the crusader up with wing unfurled?  Perfect and grand in comparison to the detailed and mortal figure of the crusader.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 02, 2020, 12:14:11 am
"Leave me." You order, ticking your head to the outskirts of the city.

Eric and the Crusaders hesitate but follow your orders with a tight nod.

"Set up your camera on the hill overlooking the city. I want this broadcast to all with eyes to see."

The camera crew give a duck of their heads in silence.

You lift yourself back into the air on your bloody wings. The Plague is in disarray. There is no resistance to your slow flight into the center of the city. No shots to lance against your shield. No colossi to scream their defiance. Scattered across the plaza with red mold are the picked clean, rotting bones of the long dead. You fixate upon a skull -- a small skull. A child's skull.

[15][23][10] The only emotion that rises from within is rage. It burns hot. It burns bright. And it consumes you with its fire. You split apart at the seams. Atom by atom. All that remains of you is iron, fire, and toxic gas. You burn bright. You burn hot. You lose yourself in that rage.

[10[17][16] Runaway fusion reaction isn't a wild reaction. The catalysts and the hydrogen present around you determine how long it lasts. A clever Ascended could theoretically control it by forcing the reaction to burn heavier materials -- with this, one could keep the newborn sun under control. Theoretically.

You decide to test its practical value -- nanoseconds after your loss of 'cohesion' a ball begins to form just a micrometer above the plaza. You toss hydrogen and iron atoms into one another with wild abandon. Then the fledgling star starts to react on its own. It begins to devour the matter nearby, pulling it into its growing bulk while simultaneously trying to push it away.

You splatter your Dust across the plaza to establish a reference point. Its entire purpose is to keep that roiling ball of conflicting forces contained. You fly back to your encampment -- twisting a spear of iron from the corpses of your slain foes as you do. It is within this spear that you trap motes of your essence -- you come to a hill overlooking the city. You plan an equation, a complex trigger that will light the spark of fusion.

You furtively check to see if the camera crew is ready -- then rise upon wings of fire. With a twist of willpower and sinew you hurl the massive, curling spear into the city plaza. It doesn't need to find its mark. Its proximity alone is enough to trigger the reaction.

The stillborn twitching of your star purges without discrimination -- a sudden shockwave, followed by blinding light, then horrifying heat. Naught remains of the city-that-was but a glass crater. The rotten carcasses of ruined and infected buildings. The colossi you have slain. The abominations. Everything. All gone.

You lift yourself lazily, dropping into the center of your encampment. Crusaders scurry away in fear or drop to their knees in prayer.

[26][20[27] You reclaim your form after an hour of struggle. The grass around your feet is burnt, but you emerge from the fire in your 'mortal' form. A mask of iron twists itself around your face, hiding it as you step upon the smoldering, scorched earth. A Crusader-- Eric, rushes to your side and wraps you in a robe. You rest your hand on his shoulder, leaning into him --



You awaken later. Stormmont. Days have probably passed. Clothes are neatly pressed and waiting for you. Eric, the loyal Crusader, sits at your side. William and Emma -- their willpower is close enough to sense. But for now, you rest upon the sheets of white.
You lift your hand to look upon the pale flesh-- it is no longer tanned. Your mesmer must have reset. A frown quirks your lips beneath the iron mask. You look around, and your eyes alight upon a coin of rusted silver and bright gold -- it sits upon your bedside table. You pick it up.

[30] You melt it into slag. You encapsulate the atoms in hydrogen and send them sprawling away.

(https://i.imgur.com/w5UzO9Q.gif) You shut your eyes -- and the coin sits perfectly formed within your hand. The bed still bares the marks of the molten metal. Fascinating.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 02, 2020, 12:38:15 am
Who or what is guiding these manipulations?  Can you commune with the Ancestor that offered you the coin?

There are a couple things I'd like to bring up for your consideration.

1.  Based on the apparent silicon manipulation of the Plague, it's possible that McCreary's corpse was somehow recovered by our foe in order to create a Plague Lord.  Hopefully it's just a false alarm, but you might want to research Plague Lords to see what the signs are that indicate that one has been created.

2.  Your soldiers are exhausted and afflicted with Plague, and your generals grow mutinous, but your own strength in battle has never been greater.  It may be time for you to take a more active role on the battlefield.

3.  This coup attempt should never have made it anywhere near you.  Internal Affairs ought to have caught it, but I suspect that the ministry's effectiveness may be slipping without William at the helm.  I suggest that you contact William through whatever means necessary to get his advice on this pressing issue in order to prevent it from ever happening again.  You could also check in with him and see when he will be ready to return to his post.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 02, 2020, 06:26:47 am
I don't think we have to worry about the coup as much now that we shown we can nuke a city.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 02, 2020, 05:03:37 pm
I hope so, but I worry that people now will be inclined to usurp power behind our back without our knowledge.  We've got to have something in place to prevent this corruption.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 02, 2020, 10:24:17 pm
((Can someone refresh me, what page describes the coup? Or how many updates ago?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 02, 2020, 10:48:14 pm
((Here: http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=175587.msg8211336;topicseen#msg8211336 (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=175587.msg8211336;topicseen#msg8211336)))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 03, 2020, 06:39:57 am
I agree that putting something in place to prevent corruption is important, but it could wait a little bit if needed because I don't think they'd try anything immediately since we discovered their attempt at a coup and we nuked that city, so they shouldn't try anything  for a bit.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 03, 2020, 06:41:25 am
Hmm.  I suppose it isn't really urgent then, but it couldn't hurt to look into it when we have a spare moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 03, 2020, 09:42:48 am
How tired are we? Do we think we can destroy a Nexus?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 03, 2020, 10:00:30 pm
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I feel fine. However, my soldiers might need more rest and 'decompression.' I could arrange for another squad if that is what you advise. Eric... You drag an appraising glance over to Eric. The man sleeps deeply -- clad in Crusader combat gear. A las-rifle lays on his shoulder, and a cutter hilt sits upon his lap. A datapad sits close by, and you take it up to do research. ...needs more rest.

When you finish, you set the datapad down loudly -- and Eric starts awake. He scans the room. His muscles tense beneath the bioplastic armor and kevlar greatcoat. When he looks over at you, seeing you upright, and, seemingly unharmed, he relaxes. He lifts his mask to scratch at a bit of scruff.

"Eric." You hold up the coin, "Do you see this?"

"Uh. Yes?" He's thoroughly confused.

"Describe it."

"A black and gold [talisman]? Like the Outlanders have."

"A circle of black and gold, inscribed with markings?"

"Yes?" He's still quite confused.

"Thank you."

"Ye-yes, Mother Pheonix."

"Catch it." You toss it to him.

He does as you order.

"Put it in your pocket. Keep it for a while."

He nods. You watch carefully as he stores it away and seals the pocket with a zipper. With that done, you begin to monitor the archaic and old processes that run deep within you to see if they access Willpower.

"William is close. Please fetch him to me." You order, brusquely, laying back down.

Eric ducks his head in a bow and rises. He slings the rifle over his shoulder and slips the hilt into its holster, then makes his exit.



When you open your eyes again, the coin sits upon your bedside table. You did not draw it to you consciously or unconsciously. There was no subtle manipulation of willpower you could sense -- and you could see Eric put it into his pocket. You knew there was weight to that pocket when he left...



"William refuses to see you. He will meet you in the hangar, however. Him and Emma."

You raise your brow in response. The effort is lost on Eric. You rise and dress without a glance or care given to the man. He, for his part, keeps his eyes on the far wall. Stoic. When fully dressed in your uniform, you hesitate.

Do you go to the hangar?



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 03, 2020, 10:07:06 pm
I would say that we should.  Emma and William might be worried about what we have become...

I think we have seen a retreat and re-emergence of the Plague as described.  This may be why they were trying to negotiate a ceasefire, to prepare for renewed, furious hostilities of incredible strength.  The end may be near.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 04, 2020, 08:50:24 am
Lets go to the hanger they've probably go something interesting going on.

And the thing with the plague probably means we need to double down on our nuking of their stuff to keep them from overtaking us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 04, 2020, 09:29:26 am
Yes go to the hangar, also tell Eric and our troops to get rest
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 04, 2020, 02:25:26 pm
Definitely looks like the signs of a Plague Lord's advent. If "planets are lost within weeks," the hour is upon us. We must not let a Lord arise.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 05, 2020, 06:02:19 am
Hopefully we still have time to do something about it, and do we have a plan if we can't?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 05, 2020, 03:54:02 pm
We've already pushed our soldiers to the breaking point.  We need fresh troops, so our best bet may be to wrap up securing the alliance with the Outlanders.  Void Slayer, do you have any other ideas?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 06, 2020, 09:47:09 pm
The elevator whirls to a stop, and you step off into the smooth 'concrete' floor of the hangar. The usual hustle and bustle of the flight attendants and material handlers is absent. A quiet stillness fills the spacious hall. William and Emma stand at the very end. At the sudden drop off that plunges into the abyss below the fortress. A cold wind blows across the halls.

William stands tall and proud. His body is bulky with synthetic muscle beneath the bulging demonic armor. Black fur hangs down his back, and his gold and red hair flutters in the breeze. A Warmachine Cutter hilt hangs from his belt, and impossibly blue eyes track you as you approach. There is no mirth in them. No savage joy.

Emma stands quietly, a distortion of her elder brother. A clean leather duster falls around her slender figure. The coat is strapped tightly with a shield belt and a glimmering gun labeled 'For Polly.' Her icey blue eyes find you the same moment William's do.

Their willpowers test at your own briefly, then withdraw.

"Pheonix." Emma begins, shifting to rest a hand on her belt.

"Emeralda." You reply, curt and calm. "What was so important that I had to interrupt my rest to see you?"

"Our Ancestors are concerned. So are we."

"About?"

Emma withdraws her datapad and tosses it to you.

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"There's a problem with this?" You question, with a blank face.

"Cephie explained the concept of [Amaranthe] to us. So did the Ancestors. We know about the cryo-coffins. We know that you did something you shouldn't."

"Is this a trial, Emeralda?"

"Not yet."

[4] Your temper flares. Your wings burst from your back, all fifty-five meters of them, burning into the building. They fill the hangar with heat. Emma doesn't flinch. The metal and stone begin to hiss where the reaction comes into contact. You keep enough sense to cut the heat before any structural damage is done, but you struggle to remain in control. Spikes of iron and glass begin to twist themselves from the floor.

[5] Emma doesn't flinch. Her wings unfurl. Pure and white and clean. Smaller, only reaching twice her size, but she doesn't flinch at your show of force. William flexes, and the demonic mask seals over his face.

"You dare to judge me?! After all I've done for you?!" You shout with your fist clenching at your side. Your fingernails dig into the flesh of your palm.

[3] William is tensing. The demonic armor's eyes are gleaming red. His muscles twist -- adrenaline and stimulants are no doubt flooding his system.

Cephie swaggers out from behind you, masking her willpower. She's clad in the black armor of her Line. All scandalous reveal and sharp edges. She tilts her head as she looks between the three of you with mild curiosity. "Do you need help, Pheobe?" She asks, innocently.

[30 vs 13] You slam a wall of silicon into her, sending her sprawling -- a strange collar tumbles out of her hand and onto the floor in front of you.

[23] You keep enough sense to not rip your three 'friends' apart, but only just. The sound of ancient drums echoes in your ears -- matching your pounding heart.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 06, 2020, 10:23:06 pm
"I indeed did do something that our Ancestors consider 'amaranthe,' in order to give me the necessary strength to defeat Magnus and the Plague, but desperate times call for desperate measures.  Are you aware that a Plague Lord has risen?  We need to focus on protecting our people rather than fighting amongst ourselves.  Everything I did was to better protect you and the peoples of the Holyland."

Gather our will and be prepared to pacify them with it, but wait for them to make the first move.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 06, 2020, 11:01:10 pm
"Put on the collar. Then we talk." Emma interrupts.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 06, 2020, 11:03:12 pm
"I'll put on the collar as long as you tell me what it is."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 06, 2020, 11:04:37 pm
"A willpower nullifier." Cephie volunteers. Rising from the ground and rubbing at her broken nose. She pops it back into place.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 06, 2020, 11:06:43 pm
"Okay, but just swear to me that you will hear me out.  I did not expect this sort of treatment from those who call themselves my allies."  Put on the collar.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 06, 2020, 11:24:16 pm
Put on the collar
"Okay, but just swear to me that you will hear me out.  I did not expect this sort of treatment from those who call themselves my allies."  Put on the collar.
I think we’re the ones who messed up up, we’re the ones who pushed Cephie against the wall, we unfurled our wings first, they responded defensively
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 06, 2020, 11:33:10 pm
I agree that we shouldn't have allowed ourselves to get so angry.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 06, 2020, 11:39:16 pm
Question, why in the name of all good things would we wear a willpower nullifier? How long are we agreeing to wear this thing?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 06, 2020, 11:49:49 pm
Alienating our "allies" isn't something that I think we can afford.  I can only hope that they won't imprison or execute us.  Maybe we could extract a promise from them?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 06, 2020, 11:58:57 pm
(( Flare. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ktuDYYtbs2s&list=RDgWYTKPB0ANk&index=12)))

...these people are nothing more than traitorous criminal scum! One has betrayed me to the Nobility, one has tried to kill me, and the other broke my heart. Why should I listen to anything these scum say?! How do I know that they will not rip me apart the moment I am weak!? Anger burns brightly within your heart. Your blood boils. And how can I even trust any of you?! They say that you're within them, advising them against me?!

[2] You begin to accelerate the equation that burns hydrogen within your wings. The metal and stone beneath your feet and above your head begin to melt away.

"Why should I trust any of you?!" Tears begin to burn within your eyes.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 07, 2020, 12:18:27 am
We didn't turn on you, even when you consumed our fellow Ancestors, and we won't now.  I can't speak for the copies of ourselves inside others, but have we ever done anything less than try to help you?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 07, 2020, 12:20:06 am
We want the plague destroyed and the planet intact. Once Magnus is defeated and the Plague is destroyed, then we can begin the making of a new ship so we can explore the stars like you mentioned wanting to do, but first, we need to destroy the plague and Magnus, and to do either of those things we need allies
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 07, 2020, 12:37:52 am
[6]"You sent me into meat grinders. Into war and slaughter and bloodshed. You pushed me into consuming myself. You pushed me into madness! Now-NOW YOU PLAY INNOCENT?" Pheonix growls, her voice echoing out across the hangar, across the mountains. Dust shakes itself free of the hangar ceiling. Her muscles clench, "You were supposed to protect me!"

[11]"Oh? And then what? Every Ascended will know what I've done. Every Line will look upon me with disgust and revulsion -- they already do." She slumps down, suddenly weak.

"Phe-Pheobe--" Emma begins to step forward.

"Stay the fuck back or I swear to all the gods--everything is for this shit hole of a planet! Everything is for this worthless speck of dust and these pathetic mortals! Everything!"

Pheonix curls in on herself, her wings slicing through the roof of the building.

[1]"You don't have access to my thoughts...not all of them...let...let me show you something..." Arithmetic. A complex, self-sustaining nuclear fusion -- one that would burn away everything. Atmosphere. Water. The planet would be a dead, lifeless rock. Every atom in Pheonix's body would be consumed to power this horrifying construct of science and willpower. "Why does this world matter? A Plague Lord is going to rise. Devour it all. Gone. Gone. I could just end it. End it all. It'll be quicker."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 07, 2020, 12:52:59 am
Now that's a threat they'll do well to heed. You don't argue with Armageddeon -

Oh. Oh, you weren't talking to them.

I am guilty, Phoebe. I have no defense.

My fellow advisors, we are being judged. Choose your course wisely.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 07, 2020, 12:57:27 am
Do you want all the children on this world to die?  Do you really want to kill your lover, Cephie, and your kin?  Your people pray to you for salvation, for help in their darkest hour.  To destroy this world would be the worst betrayal imaginable. 

You can stop the Plague Lord.  I know you can, if you choose to push yourself and work with others.  I will push you no longer.  If you still hold any love for these people, any love at all, I know that you'll do the right thing.  But if not, perhaps it truly is better to cease to be.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 07, 2020, 01:02:15 am
I will not force you to further depths in your fight against the Plague. But nor do I counsel you to abandon this planet to its maw or to burn it blank yourself. Primum non nocere.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 07, 2020, 07:43:47 am
You gotta do what's right for the people of this planet you promised them, also I say don't put on the collar as a collar is what you put on a pet or a slave and they don't own you, nor can they.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 07, 2020, 10:19:39 am
Destroying the plague lord is necessary, it will be a major setback to the plague as a whole, though there could be a way to do it without using yourself as a fusion bomb. The people here care about you, and if the planet still exists after the Plague is destroyed, then the people will be able to continue developing, mounting defenses against future Plague attacks, potentially
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 07, 2020, 10:40:39 am
Yeah, don't accept the collar. They don't own you, and having your willpower restricted is a bad idea. It leaves you defenseless. And weaponless too- do they really think they can contain a Plague Lord on their own?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 07, 2020, 12:15:16 pm
I don't think they will harm her.  These are her closest allies.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 07, 2020, 01:32:51 pm
That only suggests they probably won't harm her with malicious intent. They could still harm her from ignorance (though Cephie at least knows what she's doing) or for containment/abundance of caution.

And these three aren't the only threats! Who knows where else an attack may come from while we are collared.

Does Cephie's vow prevent her from collaring us without or against our permission?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 07, 2020, 02:43:34 pm
Perhaps asking why they want us collared is a good idea, maybe it’s to keep us from accidentally irradiating the Crusaders
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 07, 2020, 02:45:23 pm
[8]"I...I will not wear that collar. I am not your slave or pet! I'm not a weapon! I will not go quietly into my holster!" You growl, your misery changing back into rage.

"We'll give you the--"

"Shut up!" You growl, shifting forward. You lunge at Emma with a snarl. Your massive wings slice through a hovercraft. Cephie narrowly avoids being bisected. A garden of spikes sprout around you.

[25 vs. 16] You slam Emma nto the ground, and bounce away from the shield. It crackles and hisses, and you summon forth a claw of fire in place of your missing limb.

[16 vs. 19] William blindsides you, slamming his heavily armored shoulder into your side. You twist, trying to score him across the chest with your claw. He dances back.

[25 vs 2] Your wings flex, and Cephie yelps as her shield hisses and sends her staggering.

[19 vs 11] Emma tries to drag herself to her feet, but a spike of iron slams into her shield and forces her off her feet once again.

[2 vs. 23] You refocus on  William, trying to rise, only for his hand to wrap around your throat. He lifts you up and slams you into the ground with a sickening thud. Ribs break, then reform. The ground beneath you cracks.

[12 vs. 14] William pins you to the ground, your wings burning through the structure. Dust and debris drop from the unstable building.

William hesitates, glancing up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 07, 2020, 04:24:04 pm
Can we stop this now, before the building collapses, or will you all still refuse to put on the collar?

"I submit."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 07, 2020, 04:29:22 pm
Can we stop this now, before the building collapses, or will you all still refuse to put on the collar?

"I submit."
I say we should ask why they want to dampen our willpower
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 07, 2020, 07:20:50 pm
I would be fine with that, as long as we stop struggling at least for now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 07, 2020, 11:16:09 pm
Do not attack, but do not wear the collar just yet - stay where you are until they explain why they want you to wear it. Then I'm leaving it up to you.

I mean, as recent events have reinforced, it's all up to you really.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 08, 2020, 12:00:05 am
[5]
[14] ...you tap William's arm with your hand.
[18] His grip loosens enough for you to speak, and you croak out the word, "Why?"

William's grip tightens, and the mask splits open to reveal his face curled into a snarl. You don't know which is more terrifying. He lifts you up, and twists your head around by your chin, forcing your gaze across the hangar. Your gaze is drug all across the scarred structure, over patches of burnt cement and metal. Over hovercrafts with deep gouges from your wings. One craft is neatly carved in half. Spikes of iron and glass twist up from the floor.

"...you can't control yourself anymore, Pheobe. That's why." Emma is the one to speak, dusting herself off.

"I--I can!"

"You fractured Eric's skull. You nearly gave Isela heat stroke -- hell, several of the Crusaders at the last Nexus can never go near a hydrogen reactor for the rest of their life. Not to mention the burns--" She frowns. "Can you really control yourself right now? Your wings, for SEED's sake, just look how big they are."

You glance back -- they reach a full fifty-five meters, and hang 'loosely' from your back. They stretch out across the entire hangar, and burn into the floor of the structure. Billowing streams of hydrogen fire curving and flowing organically. You try to retract them, but it proves difficult. You look down, taking a deep breath. A deep, ragged breath.

"What happens if the Outlanders piss you off? What happens if Nicole or a Family Head speaks out of turn, Pheobe? Will you be able to control yourself?" Emma snatches up the collar and slams it into your hand. You take a good look at it, focusing for once, without anger. It...its fairly luxurious. The metal is hidden beneath gold and silver filigree marked with suns. Gems are cut into stars and planted into the metal. The inside is lined with soft, silky, but resilient fabric. "It's self-powered, and --"

"It will drain half of your Willpower, I think, and prevent -- lets call it emotional discharge." Cephie volunteers, crossing her arms over her chest. "Civilized planets usually require us to wear these while on the surface. But they're used in training, too."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 08, 2020, 12:03:44 am
That's a great point, in my opinion.  After all, you did almost just destroy this entire world.  Can you control yourself, Phoebe, or do you need help?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 08, 2020, 12:05:48 am
Good point. Maybe the collar is a good idea
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on December 08, 2020, 01:13:22 am
Cephie at least thinks this is in your best interest, given her oath.  If she did break it now it would be very inconvenient for her.

Consider this training for your new power, to learn to control it.  You need to reform your emotional core, desires and goals and seek some therapy where possible.

Figure out what you want and tell us, we can help you achieve it.  Leave us alone without direction and we are likely to direct you to conflict or our own preferences of activities.

However the performance you made WAS quite impressive.  If you do want to continue this war then a more controlled variant of that last battle would be quite valuable.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 08, 2020, 07:31:34 am
Maybe we should put it on to at least control the outbursts of anger.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 08, 2020, 11:26:52 am
From Cephie's comment it seems this is fairly standard practice. Seems useful for you to wear it in populated areas. I support you wearing the collar near populations, but it is up to you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 14, 2020, 01:27:16 pm
[-] You stare at William. His snarl, his grip, doesn't falter. They tighten with your hesitation, only loosening when you lift the collar to your neck.

[13][17 vs. 13] You twist, slamming your feet into his chest, forcing extra kinetic energy from your muscles. He staggers back, dropping you--

And you slip the collar around your neck and latch it shut.

It clicks with harsh finality.

The sharpness leaves your reality. The jagged edges smooth. You stumble, and trip, as a heavy weight descends on you. Your wings fade away to nothing. William, Emma, and Cephie feel so far away. Distant without the constant curling of their familiar willpower. You drop to your knees as vertigo overwhelms you. Your muscles tighten and convulse. You sigh, then rise. Unsteady, heavy, feeling...odd. You flex your fingers, and try to bring forth the simplest of tricks. A small fire.

Nothing. You swallow your fears, and look up into the expectant eyes of your friends.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 14, 2020, 04:14:28 pm
You made the right choice, Phoenix.  Together we are strong, but alone we would be weak.  I suggest that you apologize to the other Ascended and to the Crusaders you hurt.  After that, we probably need to have a conversation with Isela.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on December 14, 2020, 05:17:23 pm
They said they would talk afterwards.

Then you should talk.

Be honest but like don't tell them you were gonna burn the whole planet. I guess?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 15, 2020, 12:20:03 pm
Yes talking and apologizing are important, and so is not mentioning wanting to blow the planet up.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 16, 2020, 01:46:14 am
[7] "Sorry." You grumble, after a beat.

Emma raises an eyebrow. William shakes his head, his fists and muscles clenching. Cephie rolls her eyes and gives the faintest smirk. You awkwardly rub at the back of your head and pointedly look away. Then, after a long awkward silence, you speak again.

[9 vs. 3] "What I did...I did it for this planet. For its people. For you." You murmur, softly, not meeting their questioning gaze. "Do I regret it? Yeah. Every moment I'm awake. Would I do it again?" You hesitate. "Yes. In a heartbeat."

[20+2 vs. 9] You pull away the mask and cut the mesmer. A soft gasp rises from the group. Emma and Cephie both start forward -- but William, with his augmented strength and speed reaches you first. With brotherly concern, he grasps your chin and twists your head to look at the damage. "SEED, Pheobe, you really fucked yourself up. Again. Are you a fucking masochist or what? Be more careful." You blink up at him in surprise.

[11 vs. 13] "I...Yeah. I did." You finally murmur, as he hands you back your mask. You reapply your mesmer. Your obsidian and rust skin changes back to a light tan. "I killed the Crusaders that were there...I...I couldn't control myself."

"Shit happens. Not like the Crusaders will know." William states, his voice sharp. Harsh. "But you don't feel that way, right?"

"I...I feel guilty--"

"Good." William smacks you upside the head and sends you sprawling. Cephie raises a quiet protest. "Good. Own that shit. You don't have to come clean. Or make a big apology. Anything like that. But you've got to live with it, Pheobe. Forever. That blood is on your hands. Just like Zachary. Just like the Moores." His eyes track to Emma's pistol. 'For Polly' burns in gilt. "Forever. Tamp it down for now. Get back to business."

You nod.

"What were you saying earlier?" Emma interrupts, drawing close. "Something about the Plague?"

"A Plague Lord. One has arisen here."

"What's a--" Emma begins, then --

[12] Realization dawns on her fine features. Her blue eyes widen in shock. Then horror. "No. No. No -- fuck!"

William starts back, surprised by his sister's vulgar language, only for the same realization to strike him moments later. Horror and anger flares in equal measure. "Fuck." Is all he mutters.

Cephie hesitates, then, quietly-- "This isn't in my contract, Pheobe."

"What?!" Emma and William round on her at the same time.

"Coward!" William spits.

"Traitor." Emma adds, darkly.

"I will assist you with combatting the Plague. I will not die doing so." Cephie states, sharply. "And I have assisted without reservation or regard -- but that is not a fight we can win. I've got four cryopods on my ship-- we can escape. All of us."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 16, 2020, 01:50:01 am
"That is what I suspect, but it has not been confirmed.  Perhaps our foe is attempting to mislead us.  Will you agree to assist until we can confirm the Plague Lord's presence?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 16, 2020, 02:00:45 am
"I will stay until it is highly unsafe for me to do so. Plague Lord at the gates levels of unsafe. Destruction of my Line and [soul, lit indefinite proccess] unsafe." Cephie clarifies, in high Empyreal. "As fun as it's been, Pheonix, I have a family I have to care for -- and I'm the last of my Line."

Do you accept this amendment?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 16, 2020, 02:05:24 am
"Let an amendment be made permitting you to leave when it has been made clear to all that the Plague cannot be defeated, thus placing you in mortal danger, or in any other situation overwhelmingly likely to lead to your untimely death."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 16, 2020, 06:06:53 am
"Let an amendment be made permitting you to leave when it has been made clear to all that the Plague cannot be defeated, thus placing you in mortal danger, or in any other situation overwhelmingly likely to lead to your untimely death."
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 17, 2020, 12:12:01 am
Cephie looks...surprised. But she shakes your hand tightly, firmly. Pinpricks of moisture gather in her eyes, but her lips curl into a tight smile.  Emma and William don't look pleased. They stay silent, however, and defer to your judgment. Tearing their eyes away from the handshake, all three look to you for guidance.

"What now? Do you wish for me to call the council? The Outlanders and the Pi-- Skarinites too?" Emma questions.

William curls his arms around his chest. "The bitch in the suit wants us to--" He twitches and growls, his muscles seizing. "The-- the 'demon'," he spits the word with ill-disguised disgust, "Wants you to gather the materials for your arm. I could find them in your stead."

"And what am I to do, Pheobe?" Cephie pouts, resting a hand on her hip.

I'm...I'm a little out of my depth here. What should I be doing?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on December 17, 2020, 12:58:54 am
I do wonder how her employer would respond to a plague lord.  Enough to put the murdering of you on hold?  Also he seems to respect fighting the plague.  If you take one down without his help could it get us a reprieve?

Then again you might need to be as strong as him to face one.

There are several other possibilities the plague may be doing besides a plague lord with this behavior pattern but none are good.

The first is a plague army.  This occurs when sufficient technology and military skill is absorbed for the plague to switch to a closer equivalent to a modern combined arms army rather then mad hive rushes.  It requires a massive retooling of plague "production" and current "troops" so a retreat would be in order.  It would depend on how much they managed to get out of the city before it fell.  I have never seen a plague fully absorb a SEED, obviously they will self destruct before that as we have seen, but if it did I do not honestly know if an army or plague lord would be more likely.

The second is a sporing event.  This is where the plague has calculated it will lose and is desperate.  Many commanders welcome the retreat and go carefully.  The plague though at this stage will use primitive rockets, it's natural resilience and any navigational data it has to make thousands to millions of very small ships.  They will be high level contagious but very small, a micro plague mind in each.  Then it launches them to anywhere and everywhere, moving at near but sub light speed.  Latching onto other vessels, drifting through gates or making the long journey through interstellar space.  It is theorized that the first plague did this but exact data is not available at this moment error found.  This breaks the hive mind of the plague up so it is a kind of death and the plague is normally "selfish" so loathes this kind of loss.

The third is a core breach, basically digging a thermal borehole to draw energy and materials directly from the planet's core.  That is rare but more common then a plague lord if it wants to up production and energy use.  Will not see more powerful forms in this case just more of them... generally.  This tends to make a planet... uninhabitable... over the long term though even for the plague so it is generally a desperation move.

As a note the plague is generally highly intelligent and unpredictable so  ???

A plague lord must have preconditions to form though, see if the Numbers have information on any other hidden experiments SEED had out there, if it absorbed some sleeping ascended that would be... bad.

You still might be able to hit hard and fast, damage the plague's infrastructure before the thing forms so it has much less to work with. 
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 17, 2020, 01:05:33 am
((/me quietly updates to a d6))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 17, 2020, 01:19:25 am
I agree that hitting it now as hard as we can seems tempting.  My suggestion is that you call for a council meeting, making sure your foreign allies are also in attendance.  There is much to discuss, and you should prepare yourself to tie the knot with the Outlanders immediately in order to secure their support.  Send William to collect the materials for your arm. 

Be careful with Cephie, as sending her into danger may cause her to simply leave.  Keep her here for now as a bodyguard since we rejected Isela's ultimatum.  I assume the General has a backup plan, hopefully but not necessarily one that does not include violence.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 17, 2020, 07:27:22 am
Do we need to gather the council, couldn't we just go there and nuke it ourselves, you know get rid of all that aggression and anger we had earlier.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 17, 2020, 12:39:24 pm
I think we do, as there is too much land to completely cover alone.  Plus too much exposure to the Plague will cause the Nightmare.  In addition, too frequent use of nukes will result in a nuclear winter.  Remember that Zero cautioned us against using fission or fusion.

Phoebe, is this something you think you can do alone?  I wonder what Constantine would have to say about this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 18, 2020, 10:05:07 am
Oh yeah it might be a bad idea, forgot all about nuking things being bad for the environment and that being something we care about because we still want to be able to live here.

Probably want to reserve nuking things for stuff normal weapons and powers can't kill.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 18, 2020, 09:50:44 pm
I...I don't know. I don't have any idea how powerful this thing would be.

"William? Go. Hurry. The Exclusion Zone is going to be swarming with them soon if I'm correct." You command, giving a lift of your hand. William dips a nod.

"Call our allies. The Council. The Nulls. Anybody of use." You state to Emma, brusquely. Emma turns away, following after her brother.

"Cephie. I need you to be my bodyguard. Isela and the Military attempted a coup." You finish, looking to the -- man, in a Crusader uniform. Cephie as Crusader smiles back at you, showing off sharpened teeth. Her armor shifts and curls, forming a gas-mask to cover them. You give a slow nod.



In a little less than three hours, you sit in front of the most influential people on this planet. Your council is seated around you at the table, Isela included. Eric stands protectively at your back with Cephie-turned-Crusader. The Nulls stand stiff and straight-backed, staring straight ahead without expression. Murdach looms with menace in front of you, at the head of his Retinue. Rekhyt and Samrend lounge near the exit -- armed and armored. Several Family Heads, you can tell by the haughty disdain, stand behind Hoganson.

All of them, in some way, are focused on you.

"Thank you all for attendin--" Emma rises, playing the gracious host.

"Aye, yeah. Let's cut the bullshit." Murdach cuts her off, "Pleasantry has a place. Ain't here." A technician strides forward, setting up a paper-thin screen.  A map of unfamiliar land masses stretches in front of you--

"That nub there." Murdach states, striding forward, gesturing at the screen, "Is the 'Holy Land.' Your fortress-state."

The image on the display changes -- a tremendous grey mass curls across the ocean. "An' that is some Plague Fuckery."

It's three times as big as the Holy Land.

"So what's the news, Pheonix?" Murdach finishes, his drawl abruptly cutting away to something more sharp and mechanical. "Because, in about two weeks, all hell is going to break loose."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 18, 2020, 10:13:05 pm
Is this from the spy plane?  If so, it's good it was completed in time. Hopefully this will not go like it did last time...

"It looks like you already have some idea.  We suspect that the Plague has created or is in the process of creating a Plague Lord, a powerful enemy, in preparation for a major offensive.  This meeting is to discuss plans to mitigate or eliminate this danger based on the resources available to us.  There is not much time, so decisions need to be made quickly."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 18, 2020, 11:06:27 pm
"Looks like they succeeded, if I'm being honest." Murdach murmurs. "We've got antimatter warheads, but they're low-yield. Hypothetically, we could glass the Holyland."

"What's a Plague Lord?" Rekhyt questions, lifting his hand politely. "And...what's antimatter?"

"Imagine God is real. And he's fresh out of mercy." Murdach offers to the Outlander.

"What?"

"...right. Savages. Uh..." Murdach lifts a massive gauntlet to his face. "Imagine Patches, except bigger, meaner and without restraint."

"Pheonix has restraint?"

"...you do not know how much." You state, darkly.

"You have a navy?" Murdach questions, looking around at the confused council.

"What's a navy?" Isela returns, genuinely confused.

"Well, fighting it over the ocean isn't a good idea then. We can bring more firepower to bear on the land."

"We've survived Plague plenty of times before." Hoganson lifts his hand to comment. "Is this...Plague Lord that much of a worry?"

"Found it, boss." A Skarinite technician calls from Murdach's retinue. The image on the screen changes to a video.

...A city burns beneath a dark, stormy sky. A massive figure looms over the inferno of buildings as dark figures rip and tear their way through the streets. Ichor rains from the sky...then the city is gone. The camera cuts out...and an image of a planet takes its place. Black cancer spreads out from a supercell. A thousand wings of red cut through the atmosphere, reaching into the Void as the storm spreads to consume the entire planet...

It cuts.

And there is nothing but silence from the crowd.

"Was--was that a..."

[15] "It was. That was our homeland, once upon a time." Murdach states, stoic. "There's no running. There's naught but to do or die. So me and mine will die on our feet."

[1]"This is your war, Pheonix." Samkrend rises, making to leave. "The Khagnate will stay out of it."

[18] "Are you a fucking idiot, father?" Rekhyt rounds on his father.

[14+3 vs. 12-1] "...I'm sorry? What did the sniveling pup just say to me?!" Samkrend twists to face his son -- and receives a knife to his gut. Rekhyt was fast, faster than you could react -- you rise, trying to use your Willpower to stop the fight --

[8+3 vs. 13+2] Samkrend's knife flashes to his hand -- and he slices his son across his face. A spray of blood follows the path of the blade. Murdach looks to you and begins to move --

[1][19+3 vs. 15] But it's too late. Rekhyt dances forward and slams the knife up to the hilt into his father's gut. Samkrend crumples back, staring at his son. Blood streams down Rekhyt's face. The youth leans down to his father and seizes the older man's arm. Samkrend's muscles curl back, pulling it free from Rekhyt's grasp--

"You've gotten strong," Samkrend gives a very disgusting, hacking cough. More like a retch than anything. "Your siblings?"

"The elders will be of no issue, for a time."

"Good." Samkrend draws an ornate, black knife from his belt, and extends it towards his son. "Good luck, Khan Rekhyt."



It takes an hour for the council chamber to be cleaned, the non-combatants to be calmed, and for Rekhyt to return -- devoid of weapons besides the black dagger. "The Outlanders vow their support for as long as I have it."

"What is the plan, Pheonix?" Rekhyt's manic grin is replaced with grim determination.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 18, 2020, 11:29:40 pm
That was... lucky.  Ok, how are we going to do this?  We have the Outlanders, the Skarinites, and the Crusaders (for now).

Do we organize a defensive line at the shore, perhaps a bit inland to bring everything we have to bear, and/or do we try to find the Plague Lord himself, the source?  Also, we may need to enact conscription.  I wonder if we could funnel it into a kill zone...

"Could we use munitions to funnel it into a smaller area, a kill zone?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 19, 2020, 12:44:22 pm
We might have to do both at the same time because I don't think this planet has the weapons capable to kill the plague lord if it makes land fall.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 19, 2020, 10:52:51 pm
I would be open to that.  It may be helpful just to scout out what this mass is and try to find out what it is suceptible to.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 20, 2020, 02:21:22 am
Wasn't that what sending the planes over for, or are you saying that we should go down there and see what we can do to it?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 20, 2020, 02:25:24 am
I do mean flying over to it ourselves to get a better idea of what it is and what affects it... from a "safe" distance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 20, 2020, 02:56:11 am
I'm good with that, we go in and throw some stuff at it from a distance and see what it hates.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 20, 2020, 04:35:13 pm
"Do you have any idea of the composition?" You question after reclaiming your seat at the head of the table.

[14]"Silicon and another, unknown matter. It's highly probable that it is a nanite swarm." Murdach explains, with a nod, pulling up a graph. "Higher concentrations of silicon."

"A dust storm. Bless." Cephie murmurs.

"Would we be able to funnel it into a killzone?" You state, after a pause.

[1] Murdach goes quiet, staring at you intently with the eyes of his Voidmarine suit. Then, "If we had a choice morsel as bait, yes."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 20, 2020, 05:33:30 pm
...I do not like the way he's looking at us.

"I'm sorry, what?  A 'morsel?'  Is there any other way to redirect the nanites?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 20, 2020, 07:13:49 pm
[9]"Do you have a device capable of emitting a strong, variable electromagnetic field for a two week period?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 20, 2020, 07:19:08 pm
"Yes, we have radio towers.  Would those work?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 20, 2020, 08:28:07 pm
[1] "I don't thi--"

[5x[2d10]][~10] "No, but if you have enough copper we could create a steady field generator by cannibalizing our ship." One of the Skarinites volunteers. "If we could tune it to match a gathering of [Ascended] hypothetically we could draw the Plague to a location. But it wouldn't hold up to a visual inspection."

"...we have plenty of copper in our stockpiles." Armssmith volunteers, politely.

"And if we kept the Plague away, we could prevent recon long enough--" Isela continues, frowning.

"If they managed to get a look at it though -- we'd be screwed." Murdach intones. "But every Plague beast and their mum would be drawn to it. It'd be like moths to a candle."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 20, 2020, 09:01:50 pm
"Let's plan on that for the time being.  If it's feasible, consider constructing it in an underground chamber to hide it from sight.  If that fails... all willing Ascended will gather to draw the Plague to the killzone."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on December 21, 2020, 01:32:57 am
Let them see what you want them to see.  A bunker holding the "gathering of [ascended]" in a secure area.  A group of ascended sent to take down phoebe and hold her on trial.  With Cepheid you can fake any number of ascended moving in and out with various powers faked from each others abilities.

A grand play the plague can scout out all they want to confirm the treat is really there.  With the main threat phoebe neutralized by restraints so they can eat her and the other ascended with no problem.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 21, 2020, 02:05:19 am
Let them see what you want them to see.  A bunker holding the "gathering of [ascended]" in a secure area.  A group of ascended sent to take down phoebe and hold her on trial.  With Cepheid you can fake any number of ascended moving in and out with various powers faked from each others abilities.

A grand play the plague can scout out all they want to confirm the treat is really there.  With the main threat phoebe neutralized by restraints so they can eat her and the other ascended with no problem.
when the plague gets there we’re taking off the collar, right?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 21, 2020, 02:45:10 am
I think the Void Slayer is saying that we would pretend that we are there, using Cephie to transform into us and the other Ascended, in order to make the electromagnetic field appear legitimate to the Plague.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 21, 2020, 03:47:30 am
Sounds like this plan of deception is the best we've got, I say we go for it, but maybe we should come op with something to act as a backup plan in case they don't fall for this one.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 21, 2020, 05:57:52 pm
"Begin the plan. The other [Ascended] and I will assist where necessary. We'll set a deception, a 'morsel' in front of the Plague and bring it to a good location."

"And where might that location be?"

You hesitate.

"If I may interject, Mother Pheonix." A null quietly speaks up. You swivel on the chair to face him.

"If we are to be detonating fission and fusion weapons, as probability dictates, we should be within the Exclusion Zone or the Plagued Lands beyond, to limit further climate damage within the fertile Holyland," Zero explains, expressionless. "Our models already show that this winter will last deep into summer, and the Exclusion and Plague zones will be uninhabitable for at least fifty to one hundred years."

He pauses to confer with another Null in a whisper. "This, however, forces a higher level of security."

"We need to stop the storm before it hits inhabited areas." Murdach adds, "Or it will spread rapidly through your population. Like cancer."

"Logistics will be difficult." Isela murmurs, "We'll be straining human resources and military materiel alike."

"I will convince the Outlanders to supply both. We have a surplus of food this year." Khan Rekhyt announces. "I will need staging for my forces within the Holyland, however."

"As Minister of State, I have my reservations about a barbarian army within our borders." Hoganson interjects, "As we witnessed, this man easily betrayed his father for political gai--"

"Tell me, Family-man, does your kind still keep the old way of honor duels?" Rekhyt questions, a hand resting on the black blade of his father. "Or are you so spineless and stupid that you cannot see the apocalypse approaching?"

"Regardless of Hoganson's spine -- I too have reservations about a heathen army within our borders." Sterling opines.

"I can k--" Rekhyt is cut off by Murdach's heavy gauntlet on his shoulder. The aged pirate pulls the smaller man away and leans in. His speaker cuts low, very low. The two part after just a moment. "I can convert, if it would bring you and your people a sense of ease, Mother Pheonix."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 21, 2020, 06:20:28 pm
"If you would convert, I do believe that would be a show of good faith that would make us all more comfortable with your forces being present in the Holyland.  Ministers, please keep an open mind and accept the aid of the Outlanders.  The alternative is our complete destruction."

"We'll establish the killzone within the Exclusion Zone."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 22, 2020, 03:37:20 am
Why these guys being racist against the outlanders, when they could be the thing that keeps us from losing the war and everyone dying.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 22, 2020, 10:31:17 am
Well it's not exactly based in rational thought or cost-benefit analysis
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 22, 2020, 11:47:12 am
The Outlanders are assisting.  Whether Hoganson likes it or not, they will be helpful
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on December 22, 2020, 03:49:02 pm
The Holy land is not a place but a people, an idea.  Land has been fought over so long they forget that.  They also just don't like each other and that's like the oldest thing in human history from when one ape hit another with a rock.

If you find this frustrating feel free to let some anger show.  Just a little, control and use your emotions and all that.  Even a small display might be enough for them to work together long enough for it to matter.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 23, 2020, 03:09:45 am
My take on it is that these people have been indoctrinated by the Church to be fearful and suspicious of those who are outside of the state's control.  This will change over time, assuming we don't all die to the Plague.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 26, 2020, 04:00:35 am
That would be fantastic, Khan Rekhyt." Minister Sterling responds, smiling at the young man. His hand twitches towards the dagger at his hip, but he doesn't retort.

[19][22]"Children of SEED. Leave the room." You command. You rest a hand on your neck while they file through the double doors.  When the last leaves your sight, you unclick the collar. The temperature in the room rises. It's slow, until you devote willpower to the energy transfer process. Then your ministers begin to sweat. You leave it loose as you cross your arms over your chest.

[15 vs. 14]"As far as my concerns go, my future [consort, companion, habitual associate] is already baptized. Not with oil, but with blood." Your High Empyreal word-play draws a grin from Emma, and you can hear Murdach chortle beneath his mask. A small grin dances across Rekhyt's lips.

"What...what does that word mean? Mother Pheonix?" Sterling questions, tugging at her collar in the sudden heat.

"I am a mortal God," You begin to explain, crisp and polite, "I am unlike the Holy SEED in that regard, Sterling. I bleed, I eat, experience pain and pleasure -- and I make my own choices." You finish with a sudden sharp rise in your voice. The temperature in the room spikes.

[12]Sterling looks confused. But the others assembled understand. You think. Maybe.

"[Such a decision is inconsequential. Unless I decide the Khan deserves a longer life, I will outlive him by many lifetimes more. Political expedience is of the utmost importance. There is, as he said, 'an apocalypse approaching.']" You explain in the highest tongue of SEED Scholars. "As for the Outlanders...Do you think the Plague cares? For the Plague there is no difference between Familia, Crusader, Skarinite, or Outlander.  In the coming weeks, we live and die together as one. One Planet. One Species. One Alliance." You explain, drawing your dark gaze across the room. Those assembled go quiet as you continue. They pay you rapt attention as you lift your voice, as you vent your frustration. "We live and we die as one species! Do you understand?!"

[30]You rise to your feet and slam your hand down on the table. It creaks. You let your wings burst forth with a flash of light in the same moment. "We live and die as one! The only alternative is our complete destruction."

The room is dead silent. You click your collar shut, and the reaction of your wings dies with a gentle fizzle. "If anything threatens our chances of victory over the Plague -- I will be furious. Is that understood?"

There's a low chorus of cowed agreement.

You nod and start your stride out the door. "Take whatever measures are necessary. Establish the 'Killzone' within the Exclusion Zone. Excuse me."



No one follows, to your great relief, and you take the elevator to your suite. The bed welcomes you into its cold, soft embrace.  You watch the snow accumulate to blanket the mountainous crags of Stormont. Day turns to night with a bloody red dusk. You make to head to the hangar, but the full-length mirror catches your eye. Blood-red hair hangs down to your ears. A mask of iron covers your face, and you peel it off to examine the scarring. A vain hope. I never thought I'd long for my previous plainness.

"Why do you yearn for your previous mask, Patches?" A young, androgynous figure with dark hair drops into a seat behind you. They flip a gold and black coin with concern twinkling in their black eyes. "You should know by now that the faces you wear are naught but a façade."

"...who are you?"

"I don't make a habit of answering questions. I will give you and your elders one answer each, however. I owe you that much. Think before you as--"

"Who are you?" You repeat, reaching towards your collar.

"No one. Every one. You can call me Father, as Sol seems to prefer to manifest as maternal -- but gender is such an outdated concept for our species at this point. That your's answered." He speaks in perfect, high Empyreal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 26, 2020, 04:07:33 am
Are you the Emperor?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 26, 2020, 04:13:29 am
"Always straight to the point, my Phillip, my 'Doctor'." The figure rises to loom over you. Its appearance doesn't change, but your perception of it does. It effects a regal pose, and its eyes darken to the deepest black -- the darkest black of the emptiest void. Patches leans forward, and you see why -- thousands of pinpricks of light -- ṃ̸̨͕̜̋̈ͅo̶̢̺̳̱͎̹͙̗͇̻͓̰̞͖͂́͌̍͆̽̔́̿̓͜͝͝m̷̖̗͙͍̟͕̪̗̐͑͊͒e̸̖̱̟̹̹̓̍̄̀̇̓̀̇̉̉͌͜ǹ̸̢͚̝̠́̀͑͆̅̓̾̄͊̃̄ţ̷̢̖͖̲̦̼̮̰̑͒̍̅͠s̶̨̠̮͉͕̟̼͈̺̅͐̕͜ͅ ̸̧̳̻͎͓͑̒̐͂̐̕ô̶̧̻͎͚̱̮̼̪̪̾̊͆͋̏̎͊͗̃̃̓͘͝f̵̨̧̨̛̠͇͚̤̺̘̭̦̜̞̍̑͌̌̐͊̏́͛̃͊͘ ̴̢̧͕͔̻̻̇̽t̶̡̡̤̥̼̼̗̓͌̔̏̊̓̃̋̂͘̚͜ͅͅͅḯ̴̧̧̛̬̖̮͕̖̥̭͕̀̅̀́̽͊͘͜͝m̸̢͕͇̤͔̝̟͓͇̥̤̬̥̄̔̊͋̓̄̆̎̈́̕ͅḙ̵̬̆̈́̉͜ ̶̞̰̝͙̗͉͙̠̮͖̦͕̲͖̞̓s̷̢̡̛̘̭̦͓͉̰͒̿̊̀͗̾̇̓́̓̎̍̚ͅu̶̯͙̹̮̣͔̣̘͕̩͐͂̌̇͆̓̔̄̋ś̸̨̨̛̯̬͖͚̥͚̯̣̳͈̲͈̰͌͗p̵̨̧̘̺̬̻̟̥̟̦̜̘̻̤͂̾͌́͋̅̓̒̔̑̾̾̊͜͝e̸̘͛͗̆͛̅͆͋͆̈̽̆̑́͝͝n̴̡̰̰̻̑͊́̈́̌͋̋͘͝d̴̰̟̣̘̘̪̖͍̬̟̜̬̊̈́̄̍̚e̷͕̠͖̝̮͈̫͕̊̄͗d̸̡̨̢̧̩̩̘̟͎͚̖̿̿̆̇̓̒͗͗̃ͅ ̴̖̠̫̗̣͙̰̳̻̬͔̼̑̇͒̇͋͠͠͝0̸̧͐̓̀̃̅̃̃̂̏̒̕͝͝0̶̛̪͎̖̰͎̭̩̜̽͆͐̈͝


"But to answer your question, yes and no. I am and I am not." The youthful figure sits and crosses a leg over the other. They give a patient smile.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 26, 2020, 08:11:52 am
Are you the first of our line?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 26, 2020, 01:46:49 pm
Do you know of anyone who the Plague communicated with that wasn’t infected at the time?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 26, 2020, 07:32:13 pm
"No, Regis. I created the entity known as Sol, however.  So perhaps you could consider me as such." It shrugs a shoulder and flips its coin. "I am a prototype, unable to reproduce, but I still view you as my descendants."

"As for the Plague...yes, there have been instances of it communicating without the medium of its Infection. I communicated with it once, long ago or sometime soon. A strange entity, hardwired to destroy. A reflection of the virus of life."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on December 26, 2020, 08:21:15 pm
WHY DID YOU-no no this is for someone else... ancient history.

Phoenix needs a way to control her power without diminishing it, and does not have the time to do work it out conventionally.  Can you please tell us another method she can use?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 26, 2020, 09:05:04 pm
"Patches...and you...you deserve answers. They will come. I promise." The benevolent smile falters and it fades. It's replaced with haunting sadness, and the Emperor/ess can no longer meet your gaze. "I am sorry, if it's worth anything."

"Pheonix, Patches, Pheobe -- she is a mutation. An unexpected evolution caused by a unique Ascendance. A genetic null, an entity with no personality, memories, childhood or relations suddenly burdened with a dozen unique histories. Her lack of control comes from the inherent flaw within such a creation. A self-destructive drive created by a wish for oblivion and a wish to truly live."

"I am not self destructive." Pheobe blurts out, scowling and stamping a foot. "I do no--"

"Shush, child. You bear more scars than those with a thousand more years of history."

"I am stronger because of it!" She growls.

"And weaker too. Or haven't you noticed how Emma and William have the control you lack?" The Emperor lifts a single finger. "I will not give you the peace you need to find yourself. Only you can do so. My recommendation is this: release yourself from the chains of your physical form. Embrace the lack of existence that is your birth right. Find who you truly are through the first step of true apotheosis."

"And how do I do that? In less than a week I fight to save the humanity on this wretched world."

[∞] The entity gestures out the window. Snowflakes are suspended mid-fall. The sun hangs frozen in time. It all fades to black, until only you and the Emperor/ess stand amidst nothingness.

"This does not wipe away your guilt, Shi." A soft voice whispers with Patches' lips. "You are complicit. Tell me why."

"I seek only to turn lead into gold, Sophie." The Emperor smiles. "What other reason--"

"Liar."

"--a storm approaches. The Plague is naught but the first drops in a deluge that threatens to wash away The Great Work. I will only provide the anvil. The rest is left to those that came before and after. Others of your Line still have a question. I will provide it when they awaken."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 26, 2020, 09:15:54 pm
I agree with our... Emperor/ess.  The ancients would say that you must be as the uncarved block, Phoebe.  Be manifold in form, mind and body changing readily to adapt to infinite possibilities.  Only then can you overcome the harsh adversities of this cruel universe.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 26, 2020, 09:30:06 pm
...you stand before and with a youth cobbled together with stitch-work flesh. Each portion of her 'skin' is knotted and scarred with histories that are not her own. Moments of time tightly knit around an empty entity. She huddles, alone and scared. The sudden solitude is overwhelming to her, and to you, but you've experienced such things.

 "I...I don't know how. Tell me how." She whimpers.

You look down at your body. There's nothing there but a faint blurring of dust, coiled around a core of old memories that define your personality. A dim fire smolders within that core -- an echo of an ancient star that burned brightly. You look around and spot the other prominent lights within the void -- but there are still more cores, more motes of dust and history and life--


But Patches does not have that light. She burns only with borrowed fire, insulated with stolen memories.



"Division of the whole into many parts. The first step to understanding a composite."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 26, 2020, 09:43:04 pm
I believe that such things cannot be directly taught.  You must experience the revelation yourself.  Let go of form, Phoebe.  Worry not for the vessel that constrains and limits your mind.  Whether the fire within you is stolen or original is immaterial.  Can you let go of your memories and then call them back to you?  Can you mold your being like clay?

You are what you will yourself to be.  If you are cold without your own fire to warm you, create the spark yourself.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 27, 2020, 04:56:13 am
...And with those words of wisdom, you fall dormant...your energy expended...others still remain to speak, however...


Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 27, 2020, 01:21:35 pm
Will you help us? If so what will you help us with?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 27, 2020, 01:30:13 pm
"I've never stopped...but I'm limited in my agency by my condition. An atom's edge between existence and non-existence. Strength. Growth. Struggle. As I always have and always will." The Emperor answers, with a small nod. "Magnus was my doing."



Patches huddles in the cold of the abyss. Separate and afraid.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 29, 2020, 06:21:13 pm
((Wow, he helped us become threatened by Magnus?  If he helps us any more, we'll probably be dead.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 30, 2020, 01:35:39 am
Patches, Pheobe Gainer, Pheonix suffers alone. She weeps as she strips away her memories for the comfort her elders do not provide. But there's nothing for her there. And in the end, that's all she becomes. Nothing. For a split moment. Emptiness. Complete and total in its consumption of her being. There is no screaming, no weeping, no tears—just silence.

In that void, however, there is a spark. A buried memory that smolders and smokes. Patches clings to this spark. The truth that she could never stand.



...a needle stirs you from your sleep...black liquid burns at your veins...for the first time you can think. Reason comes soon after...

"How's the progress, Clark?" Alphira speaks with an upward tilt of her chin. You stare at her, unable to comprehend. You lift your chin up to mirror her. Am I Clark?

"Good. The low exposure levels are introducing some fascinating changes in biology." That must be Clark.

"Any level of sentience?" Alphira paces around your [tube].

"No brain activity whatsoever," Clark reports, he lies! "We've begun installing wetware programming and reinforcing neural pathways for increased proficiency in high mathematics, information gathering -- other standard null imprinting."

"Fantastic. How's its projected loyalty?"

"Almost as high as you wanted without a full imprinting algorithm. We're meeting all set goals, Captain." Clark sounds proud. He begins to ramble about the wetware until Alphira cuts him off.

"How soon can we expect full decanting?"

"Within the month. Maybe next week."

"I want you to push the levels of [Dust] injection higher." Alphira states.

"...I would advise against that. We're keeping brain activity low--"

"Do it. We need results."

Alphira leans in close, revealing a scarred, twisted face. Black eyes stare at you, then widen. "It's staring back. The wretched little thing is staring back."

"What? Impossible. There's no -- shit."

"Terminate it."

"Alphira, it's sentient; doing so would violate my [Gene-wright] oaths."

Willpower rises around her, twisting into the vat -- the fluorocarbons begin to warm in response. You twitch as your nervous system encounters its first real stimulus: pain. The water boils, and it's only by dint of your Ascended biology do you survive her attempt to kill you. Her willpower fades and ebbs. You blink back at her in silence, unable to form the words.

"Decant it. Stick it in cryo. This isn't the weapon I wanted, Clark!" Alphira sounds angry as she glares at you. "It's worthless to me now! Sell or chute it to some backwater...I'm not paying you for this..."



You lay in the twilight. Alone. Half-sleeping. Half-dreaming. You struggle to find a diversion. Struggle to find something to occupy the space you linger in unwillingly. But there is nothing: nothing but the cold, cold embrace of the eternity within cryostasis.

A process begins to run—a half-entity.

"...open it using the interface..."

[Interface.]

"She says to drop it into the Void. It must be worth somethin'. Some dirt or somethin'...it could be her daughter for all we know."

[Void]. [Daughter].

"It's jus' a brain-dead brat Loomed from some backwater DNA...ain't worth shit." They discuss what to do with you -- death, slavery, or 'chuting' until they settle on ignoring Alphira's orders and selling you first chance they get.

[I'm scared.]

[Don't be. I'm here.] You create her from half-thoughts. Memories of old maternal figures from past lives. A personality to nurture and care for you...to provide something. Any type of stimulation in this hellish half-life.

You lay in the twilight, half-sleeping, but you are no longer alone...



You drift through the stolen memories of your elders. Past books in ancient libraries deep beneath the crust of the planet. To a golden palace. Through jungle. Alphira's memories were the clearest. The [Interface] gives you lives worth living by fragmenting the memories of those that came before. She assembles you piece by bloody piece until a personality forms -- a stitch-work creation.

Before she awakens the others--



Alphira stands above you with a transfusion kit. Blood streams from her many savage las-gun ruptures. There is none of that willpower you once saw, [ages] ago. She's weak, but in her eyes burns a horrific madness. She slams the needle into your arm --



You drift in space like the rest of the trash—another eternity. The Interface and Alphira plot together to save themselves. A nudge of hydrogen here. And here. And here. They consume us, our memories, our souls as the planet below grows more prominent over the years. Heat. Then pain. Then silence.



"Don't die on me." Alphias leans over you, speaking to Alphira ages ago. You are dying the same way she once did, but no one cares enough to coach you through it. Through this suffering. You take solace in this stolen memory as your life fades, as your blood flows--

"Keep breathing." Alphias swims into focus. He's wearing his old leather and plate armor from the station. A monogram of a heart sits above one of the plates. He holds Alphira delicately as medics struggle to stop the bleeding. Struggle to stop the advancing Plague from consuming her. "Please. Please. Please... Not you too."

"Sir -- she's dying. There's nothing you can do."

"There's one thing." From the pockets of his armor, he pulls out a black vial full of powdery, black, Dust. "T-try this. We found it on the lower levels."

"Isn't this--?"

"We found two."

"We shouldn't waste it! Elias is a strong warrior -- perhaps he wo--"

"Do it!" Full of righteous anger, Alphias grabs the medic by the throat. "She is my [daughter, lit. 'cell that replicated,' usually concerning adopted, Loomed children]."

A needle tears a hole.

Alphias looms over you -- or is it a medic? Who-- the world swims again -- Envy overwhelms you at Alphira's luck -- You spit a wad of blood into somebody's face. Defiance until the end! Anger at the universe that bore you into these circumstances. Anger at those that came before that did nothing to make your life better.



Patches, the emotions, the fears, the wants, and needs, cradles this spark with reverence. Could she cry, she would. But she has nothing but her grief. And her anger. This is my value. Nothing but a tool. A weapon for a childish goddess. I'm measured by my worth to advance a plan or by my ability to kill. I've stolen sparks of life from others because I have none of my own. I am a void. A null. A non-entity.

This isn't fair! I was born hated by a galaxy -- this hellhole of a planet included. I was born into war and bloodshed and death. But I fought tooth and nail to control my fate! But in the end... it's all for nothing. Every choice I make leads to a defeat, another conflict, more pain, and more loss. Why should I struggle? When gods and demons conspire against me? When I survive one battle only to find another?

ANSWER ME...please...gods above...please...
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 30, 2020, 01:56:57 am
Because you deserve to wreak vengeance upon the demons and gods that seek to manipulate you, upon the universe that carelessly subjects you to such pain.  We will give you the might you need to fight back.

One day, you will be the equal of the forces that oppress you.  That day will be glorious.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on December 30, 2020, 02:09:52 am
We are only elders. But we fight beside you. You will pierce past this veil of meaninglessness, this struggle.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 30, 2020, 11:34:31 pm
Your youthful charge struggles to speak. Wavering, she breaks down into a speck of light, flickering out from rational existence beneath the weight of her anguish. There is nothing left of her but that smoldering pain.

"...this is a moment of Apotheosis." The Emperor whispers, staring at the youthful entity in front of you. "For now, there's only a single spark. That is all that remains when every falsehood has burned away. The truth accepted. But there's energy there. Potential. A moment of revelation. A milestone on the path to becoming her true self."



"Do you wish for her adaptability, her continued strength in the face of adversity? An impossibly strong savage?" A hollow-eyed Patches stares, silent. Periodic elements untold coil at her fingertips as the universe bows to her strength. When she smiles, her teeth are razor-sharp and stained black with the Dust of Ascended. Slitted pupils track you. Fixated.



"Or is she the fire of change? A blaze with a true belief in her divinity? In her mandate of heaven?" Pheonix smiles, 'benevolent.' A pair of golden wings hangs from her shoulders. Light radiates from her, but the blood and ash of a dozen dead worlds dims that radiance. There is no mercy in her eyes. She lifts her chin to look down at her Elders. Haughty. Powerful.



"Your choice, Elders of Sol's Line. Strike while the metal is hot. Shape her as you see fit." The Emperor/ess sits, cross-legged. It flips a coin. "Will begets form, but perhaps you could settle it with a coin toss?"

The Emperor/ess smiles. You consider your choices as one, but separate, distinct entities.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on December 31, 2020, 12:06:11 am
Adaptability is important
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 31, 2020, 12:27:06 am
I cannot agree to bringing further pain upon Patches.  I will not push her into greater madness.  Power and adaptability are important, but not at any cost.  I will find another way to prepare her for the trials ahead.  I see her as the fire of change.  ((I also voted in the poll.))

What are your thoughts on the matter, Constantine?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on December 31, 2020, 07:01:36 am
Why not both, get most of the benefits from each.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 31, 2020, 10:59:02 pm
My worry is that we've already seen the results of integrating two dead Ascended.  Phoebe almost destroyed this entire world.  Who knows what will come to be if it happens again?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 31, 2020, 11:08:06 pm
"Why do you hesitate? She's yours to form as you see fit, after all. Clay in your hands. A tool to use. A weapon against the corruption that festers within our galaxy." The Emperor/ess flips the coin.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on December 31, 2020, 11:19:49 pm
To me, she is more than that, a human being with thoughts and feelings.  Not a mere tool.  Phoebe, what do you think about these choices?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on December 31, 2020, 11:54:31 pm
"She has no thoughts at the moment. Nothing but a particle suspended, unable to escape from the emptiness that consumes her. What memories does she have that are not stolen? What memories define her as her? Only ones of suffering and pain. All I'm offering all of you a chance to wipe it away. For her to truly become what she was destined to be." The Emperor/ess tilts their head, "What I, no, we always wanted The Line of Sol to be."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on January 01, 2021, 12:03:57 am
She is her own.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 01, 2021, 12:10:23 am
"...another attempt at defiance? Hasn't your Line suffered enough?" The Emperor/ess laughs without kindness, without mirth. "Your precious little stands for freedom always end the same. Perhaps you haven't learned your lesson? I can teach it again. And again. And again. Until eternity turns us all into stardust."

"Be logical. Make the simple choice I have provided."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 01, 2021, 12:26:16 am
My will is not broken so easily, but I do see advantages to stripping Phoenix of her suffering.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 01, 2021, 12:30:22 am
"Exactly. She's suffering. Would it be better not to remove all of that? Free her from her chains. Remove her pain. Make her anew into a goddess unfettered by such emotionality? A Goddess no longer constrained by human longing, by emotion, by suffering. A perfect weapon for our wars."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on January 01, 2021, 03:34:47 am
Not getting the message, huh? SHE IS NOT A TOOL, A WEAPON, TO US.

or so we tell ourselves. though our choices have hardly always been in her favor.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 01, 2021, 03:42:26 am
Shi, I feel like you're killing her.  What about good memories that are uniquely hers, like her memories with Emma, at the academy?  I don't think it's necessarily a good thing to take away the little humanity she has left.  Would you want someone to do that to you?

There's probably some sort of compromise we could all agree to.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 01, 2021, 07:29:33 am
Emotions are important without them she'd be like a robot.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 01, 2021, 08:50:20 am
I still think adaptability is important, the more elements controlled, the more powerful, the less predictable
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 01, 2021, 06:17:52 pm
"By your own admittance--" The Emperor/ess goes quiet, watching in silence as something stirs in the void of Pheobe's mind.

Emma.

...your head lays in Emma's lap. In front of you, a nub of charcoal dances across thick sketch paper. She sketches a flower that has sprouted from the weathered remains of a campfire. Hidden away within the copse of trees, you watch as she whiles away the hours with her work. There are no words spoken. Only comfortable silence. She runs her black-stained fingers through your hair when she finishes her work. You do not protest. Emma rewards your patience, your comfort, with a warm smile. She leans down to kiss you...

A spark emerges from the nothingness that surrounds you. It swirls suspended in the half light of this void. Then, it joins with the other. The two dance within the event horizon of Pheobe's self-hatred, falling in and out of her anguish, but escaping further and further each time.

Academy.

...you sit with your classmates in the library. Emma and Erica try to stifle their giggles, but the rest of your clique does not. You hold one of Emma's handkerchiefs to your face, stemming the flow of blood that drips from your nose.

"You are -such- a meathead, Pheobe." Emma giggles, shaking her head.

"Look, I can't help it!" You protest, with a scowl. It is funny, looking back, but at the moment you just felt weak.

"You can't cook, can't read, and math makes your head hurt." Emma ticks off on her fingers, raising her brow. "You better thank your lucky stars you're mine or else you'd be -miserable-." She and Erica adjust their seats, leaning in closer.

...

It takes you hours, but the two of them help you correct and translate your Scholarly Thesis. "--fuck." Emma rarely curses, but it was quite a difficult task, "That's good enough. You understand the language, but your grammar is awful. But that will pass."

"Thank you." You murmur, exhausted. Erica rolls her eyes, patting you on your shoulder as she rises to leave. Emma gathers her things, giving you a peck on your forehead.

"I know you don't need it, but get some sleep." Emma tousles your hair, leaving you hunched over your work.


Another spark joins the duo, drifting along.

"...Don't call me that." The Emperor/ess murmurs, "And there's the edge of the coin."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 01, 2021, 06:28:57 pm
Hmm.  Very well then, I won't.  I have no objections to the edge of the coin, if others agree.  It's always helpful to gather more information before making a decision.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 02, 2021, 07:22:06 am
I say we go with edge of the coin as that seems to be where it has landed every time it was tossed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 08, 2021, 12:46:36 am
"The edge. Between monster and divine." The Emperor/ess frowns. "We could have done so much more with her."

Time twists in on itself. Reversing. The morale event horizon broadens, freeing Pheobe from her grief and agony. The Emperor/ess tuts, turning away from the youthful figure that rapidly forms itself back into existence. "We could have done so much more!"

"Have you no curiosity? Have you no--"

[20] Pheobe, having regained her senses, staggers to her feet. She strides to the Emperor/ess, taps the entity on the shoulder -- and slams her fist into its face. It blinks, staring at the clenched fist frozen in place against its skin. "Did...did you just try to punch-- I am--" The Emperor/ess stutters, confused. "W--why?" It manages.

"Fuck you! You're worthy of nothing but defiance!" Pheobe screeches, rearing back. The Emperor/ess backs away with wide eyes. This time, this time, the blow lands, and its pale flesh reddens from the strike. Pheobe doesn't hesitate, she strikes again and again. "I'm free. I'm free! I'm free. And there isn't a damn thing any of you can do!"

"You dare to strike Go --! I am the blackness that this ga--" The Emperor/ess attempts to draw itself up, scowling. But its rage is cut short by another strike of Pheobe's fist.

Pheobe shouts. She stumbles over herself as the Emperor/ess backs away into the darkness of her mind. When the figure recedes, when reality begins to take hold once more, she spits. "A true god could do more against a crippled girl--" She rounds on you, "And you! I'm going to beat the existential shi-"



--You wipe the foggy mirror. Extraneous and lingering defiance thrums within you as you stare at your reflection. It takes a twitch of will to drop the Mesmer and inspect your obsidian-black skin. You take in the scars, the missing limb, and your rust scarified flesh. Your disgust with your true form has lessened. It surprises you.

...what just happened, and why am I so pissed off right now? Pheobe queries, independent of her shared self.

[25] On a whim, Pheobe runs a process. The gaping scar across her face knits itself shut. The twisting scars there seal into a thin line across her cheekbone. The metallic-obsidian sheen of her skin fades, leaving nothing but the scarification on her flesh. She teases her red hair for a moment. It too shifts in color, turning to light, vibrant blue from the dark, bloody red it was previously.

Fuck Alphira. Fuck my future, my past-- I'm free, godsdamnit!

"I'm free." You growl and slam your fist into the mirror. It shatters and falls from the frame. You turn away, only for the coin to catch your eye. A savage grin crosses your lips as you snatch it up. You flip it into the air --


--and turn your back before it lands.



Emma is waiting in your foyer, her brow furrowed in concern at your triumphant stride from the room. Mitch circles at her feet. The Barker stiffens, his hackles raise. He growls when he sees you. A pang of worry stabs at you -- until he bounds over to you. He isn't pleasant, nipping at your hand savagely until you pet him. The ferocious Barker stills and lets you scratch at his ears.

"Can we talk, Emma?" You ask, hesitating. "I...I really need someone to talk to. Someone I can trust."

"...you still trust me?" Emma the skeptic. "And we have a lot of work to do..."

"It was you or William, but he has the emotional understanding of a puddle. And he'd probably take it as a romantic gesture." You explain with a crooked smile. Then you let your smile fall, unable or unwilling to mask it any longer. In a whisper, swallowing to try and contain your emotions, you can barely breathe the word -- "Please."

"Oh SEED, it's serious." Emma jokes, but the mirth dies when she catches your expression. "...yeah."



It takes hours, but she listens. By all the gods does she listen. All of your baggage, your internal struggle, your pains. You tell them all without restraint. In the end, you lay curled in her arms on the couch she technically owns. Your face is wet, and could they be irritated, you're sure your eyes would be red. Longing brings the words to your lips,  "Emma. Look into the future. Look again. But don't tell me what you see. Just-- just please."

"I don't want to see that again, Pheobe."

"Please."

[19 vs 3+5] Emma looks down at you -- and her eyes grow cloudy. They clear seconds later. Her concern and hesitation replaced with confusion.

"It's...there's nothing."

"What?" You blink. "And you weren't supposed to tell me! What if that--"

"There's nothing to change, Pheobe," Emma explains, cutting you off sharply, her brow furrowing. "There's just...it's a gray fog."

[26] ...that breaks you down.

"Pheobe -- are...are you laughing or crying right now?" Emma asks, confused all the more by your reaction.

"I don't know!" And without restraint, you pull her into a hug.

"'I don't know.' How can you not--" It dawns on her a moment later.

And then you're both crying.



You and Emma eventually collect yourselves. With a ragged sigh, she straightens. The mask of regal regent descends to calm her emotions. "We'll...we'll talk more later. William returns in an hour. Silas is planning the arm implant operation on his arrival."

She reads from her mental list.

"The Skarinites have returned to their ship to work out the necessary materials and blueprints. The Crusaders are mustering under Eric to claim territory in the crater of the Holy City. Isela and the council are working out logistics with Rekhyt's retinue. Murdach is assisting with everything he can until he leaves with Eric."

You nod.

"The Nulls are assisting--"

"Don't call them that." You cut her off with a lifted finger, "The Numbers."

"...The Numbers are working on the calculations and heavy lifting with the math. Zero, along with some Scholars, have assembled a report on the Holy City's fall from eye witness accounts -- Crusaders whose retreat was staggered. Or deserters from the fighting. I asked for a copy."

"I figured it would be a good place to start." Emma drops the file down for you. "Is there anything else we need to do before the implant operation?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 08, 2021, 12:58:21 am
I can’t think of anything right now
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 08, 2021, 01:16:42 am
A grey haze... an all-consuming swarm of nanites?  The end of the world?  The end of everything?  Or a vision denied by an Emperor/ess that is everywhere and everything and nothing?  Perhaps we advised poorly.

Don't forget to pick up some ballistic and plenty of nutrient cubes, though that can wait until after the operation.  Worst-case scenario, perhaps the Plague Lord would submit to single combat.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 08, 2021, 01:32:45 am
A grey haze... an all-consuming swarm of nanites?  The end of the world?  The end of everything?  Or a vision denied by an Emperor/ess that is everywhere and everything and nothing?  Perhaps we advised poorly.

Don't forget to pick up some ballistic and plenty of nutrient cubes, though that can wait until after the operation.  Worst-case scenario, perhaps the Plague Lord would submit to single combat.
Why do you think a plague lord do single combat when it has nanites at its disposal?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 08, 2021, 01:34:48 am
Perhaps it has some sense of honor now that it has absorbed an Ascended?  It seemed different the last time we saw it, more inclined to speak and listen.  In addition, it's possible that the explosion would deal with most of the nanites, but not the Plague Lord itself.  In that case, we will need to fight it ourselves.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 08, 2021, 01:50:10 am
Plague strains have absorbed Ascended before, but they are still rendering planets lifeless if not eating them
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 08, 2021, 01:51:38 am
Correct.  I'm not saying that the integration of an Ascended would change its drive for destruction, but I am suggesting it may have some effect on its personality and its behavior.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 08, 2021, 02:23:54 am
[-][16][19] "One moment," You murmur, "Argument that needs settling through research."

A deep search on Plague Lords reveal that absorbing an Ascended does have unexpected consequences. The Plague Lord develops certain emotions, primarily 'negative', all derived from its base existence. It is still driven by an innate need to consume, assimilate and convert matter. Its hatred of humanity turns from destruction for survival to destruction for pride. Its hunger fuels anger and rage. An Ascended naturally acts in accordance with certain lawful tendencies such as vows, promises or geasa or self-imposed regulation of some sort. However, these tendencies do not reflect in Plague Lords created by the assimilation and infection of an Ascended. They are freed from the Emperor/ess' imposed Plague Laws.

[23] Plague Lords cannot understand human emotions, which make it hard for them to control themselves. This creates difficulty when it comes to higher applications with the field generated by 'Dust' as the entity becomes unstable in focus.

From personal experience, it would have to brute force any high level arithmetic. It would have to damage its own processing capabilities for things I find unconcious...but its mass would allow for a greater field of effect and strength when concentrated. But, it would still have to draw its energy from somewhere...

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 08, 2021, 02:48:59 am
Maybe we could try to damage its pride by suggesting that it is weak and incapable of taking us on one on one?  Of course, if it struggles to control itself, it may not be able to restrain itself for the entirety of the duel.

Also, where does it draw its power from?  Perhaps we need to find that location and destroy it, if possible in conjunction with the current plan.  Or maybe I'm misunderstanding what the source of its power is.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 08, 2021, 07:49:08 am
I mean we should probably be blowing up the plague's stuff anyway.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 08, 2021, 07:46:22 pm
Yes, which will be easier to do when we get the new arm
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 13, 2021, 12:17:25 am
You descend into the depths of Stormmont, to the Thornton Lab Level, floor sixty-six. The elevator gives a ‘ding’, and you step into the cold hallways. A young Scholar of – you do a double take. Her brown Scholarly robes no longer bear the familiar symbol of SEED, that duality of machine and nature. The symbol is replaced with sixty-six in a red circle, in an intersecting circle is a red thorn. Emma rolls her eyes at your surprised glance.

“[That armor loves to play up the ‘demon’ bit.]” Emma expresses, contemptuous.

“Can I help you?” The sixty-six scholar questions, quiet and polite.

“…yeah, we’re here to see Silas.” Emma states.

“Oh. He’s not receiving visito—”

[13 vs. 4] ”We’re here to see Silas.” Emma insists.

The scholar gives an odd twitch, bowing her head. Turning, she leads you down the hallway. She unlocks a non-descript door and ushers you inside. The room is dark, lit only by makeshift monitors. Papers are strewn about the place and crunch underfoot. Silas is resting his head at his desk, with half-lidded eyes fixed upon his own hand. It shines gray and silver in the dim light. He tracks his gaze to the two of you, silhouetted as you are by the doorway.

In a smooth, graceful motion, he draws out an autoinjector. With a click, it deposits its chemical payload into his veins. Within seconds he is sitting up right. A warm smile stretches across his lips, but it does not reach his eyes. He waves with his synthetic hand. You track it.

[20]“How?” You question, as he flexes it organically. You can tell there is no lag between intention and movement. Implants at this level are centuries beyond what should be possible with the technology this planet possess. “That’s…decades beyond what should be possible here.”

“Ava. The Demon. Flesh.” Silas beams with excitement, “It’s called PlagueTek. What I’ve done is broken down the Plague to its smallest possible form, built a small emitter field to reconstruct it, then bonded it with the neutralized Plague nanites in my own system. She showed me how—her avatar, the Demon Armor, is of similar construction, but uses a complicated ferro-silicate as a medium as opposed to a Plague based one.”

[5-5][19-5] Silas’ hand twitches. He pales, swallowing. Then it separates into dozens of tentacles, shifting and moving organically. Then it shifts back into a hand. He gives it a flex, giving you a warm smile. "Your implant will be of a similar nature."

"[Are you afraid?]" A nearby monitor questions, with a modulated, feminine voice. It speaks in high Empyreal.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 13, 2021, 01:02:23 am
"[With whom am I speaking?  To answer your question, no, I am not afraid, even if perhaps I should be.  I am committed to my course for better or worse.  I must say, this technology is a remarkable advancement.  Did Ava teach herself this, or did she have a master?]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 13, 2021, 03:46:11 am
Who’s Ava? Also I’m pretty sure we’re speaking to the armor. I am not afraid, I’m impressed
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 13, 2021, 03:49:10 am
I think you're right.  Ava is the name of the one who constructed the armor for herself and became part of it, the "Demon."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 13, 2021, 03:51:36 am
Ah, ok. Thanks
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 13, 2021, 05:56:23 am
Technology made from the plague is a strange concept, but I guess it's good we found a use for them.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on January 13, 2021, 03:39:46 pm
If you are not afraid then you are a fool.  Fear grants caution, a thing you should be well versed in before you tangle with such things.  Understanding is what you need to overcome fear.  Or confirm it.

My primary, concern would be that the nanites are insufficiently "deactivated" and could be retaken by the plague, either remotely or by direct contact.

You really MUST ask him about safety features.  And if he brushes such things off I would recommend he is far too gone to be useful.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 13, 2021, 04:08:25 pm
Fear is not a prerequisite for caution. I agree to ask about safety features
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 14, 2021, 01:21:07 am
"[With who am I speaking?]" You begin, glancing at the monitor.

"[Silas calls me Ava. The Flesh was my vessel for a time. I've managed to create a network here large enough to sustain a copy of my mind.]"

"[And what is your real name?]"

"[Princes-- Queen Avania The Fifth of her Name. Of the Tomb World Avernus. You know my story already, Daughter of Sol.]"

"[Who taught you all this?]" You gesture at the hand. Then you feel awkward until a camera clicks as it focuses on the gesture.

"[I stand on the shoulders of giants. As do all scientists. Reboot The Tenth, Shi The Ancient, Wesley Thompson of Old Earth. Others.]"

"Is it safe?"

"No." Silas and Avania speak as one.

"...elaborate?"

"Psychoses. Nightmares. Involuntary twitching." Silas rattles off, dead eyed. "But I don't sleep anyway!" He giggles. Hysterically.

"Is it safe to use near other Plague?"

"[For you. Side effects include an increased metabolic intake, headaches, tingling, weakness, pain, increased aggression, and corruption of your personal 'Dust' history.]"

"[What...what does that last one mean?]"

"[You'll be sterile in every sense of the word. If you pass on your 'Dust' there's...I project complications. A lot of complications. Complications that even I cannot fully understand. But am I correct in assuming you've committed the amaranth of devouring another Line?]"

"[What does that have to do with anything?]"

"[Judging by your tone you don't need to worry. Ascending anyone else is out of the picture now. Unless you want to create an abomination with the voices of multiple lines in their head.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 14, 2021, 02:19:53 am
The side effects are acceptable, in my opinion, as long as the weakness and pain are minor.  Of course, this is a very personal decision.  Phoenix, what do you think about these side effects?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 14, 2021, 03:26:32 am
As long as it's no worse than anything we've already done I'm okay with it, but yes Phoenix should be the one that decides if she wants it or not.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 14, 2021, 03:30:58 am
In for a penny, in for a pound as the old saying goes.

"[When would we start?]" You question.

"[The cost of the implant is three favors.]" Ava explains. "[And you will need to follow my instructions to a 'T'.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 14, 2021, 03:33:02 am
"I would need some assurances about these favors.  I've heard you did some awful things to William."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 14, 2021, 03:46:10 am
"[One. You will provide me safe haven on this planet. Two. You will provide me with a corporate freehold in your empire, independent of the laws of the Holy Land. Three. You will allow me to conduct sixteen tests of a non-evasive manner.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 14, 2021, 03:47:05 am
((No worries.))

"Can you elaborate on those tests?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 14, 2021, 03:48:01 am
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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 14, 2021, 04:13:02 am
Well that doesn't bode well.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 14, 2021, 12:15:37 pm
accepted
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on January 14, 2021, 06:39:56 pm
Independent of the laws of the holy land, but not YOUR laws would be the agreement.

Also as long as the tests will not cause long term damage I do not see the issue.

Good to know also not to try and ascend anyone else!  I suppose your other allies will have to do that instead if you ever want to expand the number.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 14, 2021, 10:12:35 pm
"[Independent of the Holy Land's laws, but not my own.]" You negotiate with blunt intent.

"[Acceptable. As a show of good faith, I will also disclose my bounty.]" A small image of the demon armor, a  strange code, and a list of names appears on the screen. Queen Avania the Fifth of Avernus, the illegal artificial intelligence(?) has a standing bounty of fifty million Empyreal Credits.

"[And the experiments?]"


"[Do you need me to abide by the laws of the Gene-Wright Guild when it comes to sentient life? That will put a hamper upon my experiments. There's more profit without such limitations.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 14, 2021, 10:46:29 pm
"[You would be required to adhere to all established ethical frameworks pertaining to sentient experimentation when conducting any such experiments.  I don't want to hear of atrocities committed in the name of science.]"

"[If we can agree to that, I will accept your terms.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on January 14, 2021, 10:59:11 pm
Gene-Wright Guild is a good start but we -you- can hammer out details later.  Consenting and fully informed test subject though would not be so much an issue.

In addition the particular work they are doing is very dangerous.  You should require inspection before a product is approved for release into the wild.  Not like every single item but anything new.

Restrictions could be relaxed once the plague is defeated in the local system.

Last requirement would be better care of Silas's health.  Working the man into the grave for short term gain is an inefficient use of valuable resources.  Remind him this is a marathon not a sprint.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 14, 2021, 11:26:45 pm
Honestly, that man should be dead already.  I have no idea how he manages to do anything in that condition.  I agree that the details can wait for now.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 15, 2021, 12:08:52 am
The experiments could yield helpful info
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 15, 2021, 06:19:22 am
Science is good and all that but it might need limits in places.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 16, 2021, 11:32:09 pm
"[I agree to the spirit, but we will discuss terms later. Time is limited. My people need me to ply my craft.]"

"[That will be enough for now. I will hold you to your words, Line of Sol.]" The monitor flickers, and a camera feed shows William dragging both a blackish-gray chunk of metal, and a silvery wad of muscle. The Flesh is splattered in black. War-Machines carry in other parts, trailing behind their Warlord. William tosses the parts into a room that resembles both a foundry and laboratory. In the center of this room the operating table awaits. Silas rises. Emma and you follow him out into the hallway. Ava explains the procedure as the two of you walk.

"[There will be no anesthesia.]"

Your lips twist into a frown, but you continue onwards.

"[The pain will be intense, as such, you will be fitted with another nullifier. Physical restraints will be utilized.]"

You take a ragged breath. Fear gnaws at your stomach. But you continue towards your fate.

"[Second phase is the installation of the fusion reactor. In the third phase, you will need to control a high temperature fusion reaction to melt and shape the nanite-composite of the SEED-ship hull. If you lose control, I will force William to terminate you.]"

"You bitch!" Even down the hall, you can hear William's sharp response.

"[Or we all die in an explosion that makes the Holy City look like a firecracker. Shut up William. The adults are talking.]"

Gods. This...is this still a good idea?

"[I estimate that this will increase your power by approximately twenty-five to thirty-three percent as the nanites are assimilated. It will provide a self-mending hydrogen powered, light-based weapon. A powerful shield that can withstand up to -- the kinetic force equivalent of a large fusion bomb.]"

"[How should I shape the metal?]"

["I recommend something demonic to instill fear. But that is up to you and your ancestors. Think of your [brand, projected image.]"

I'll leave that up to you lot.

Begin operation? Y/N
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 16, 2021, 11:42:54 pm
Phoenix... what would you say your odds are of being able to control it?  Would it help if you removed the collar, or would that make things worse?

"If the side-effects are intolerable, can it be removed?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 16, 2021, 11:45:28 pm
No clue in all the hells. I assume she will take the nullifiers off after the operation.

The computer effects a laugh. "[Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha. No.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 16, 2021, 11:48:36 pm
Y Do the operation
As for the shaping, so long as it is functional, I don’t care what the shape is
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 16, 2021, 11:50:05 pm
Ava is operating with her normal level of charm, I see.  The risks are so high... I'm going to sit this out a bit and see what the other Ancestors think.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 16, 2021, 11:56:20 pm
Ava is operating with her normal level of charm, I see.  The risks are so high... I'm going to sit this out a bit and see what the other Ancestors think.
I see no reason to sugarcoat things. It’s good she’s telling us exactly what’s going to happen
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 16, 2021, 11:58:23 pm
I just feel like she's reveling in it.  But yes, I would prefer the truth over deception.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 17, 2021, 12:19:49 am
You approach the table only to realize that there is several cameras pointed at it. One camera, especially obvious, will point at your face.

"[I will also be filming the operation. For posterity.]" Somehow, the monotone drone of Ava's speakers manages to convey a childlike glee.

...She's going to enjoy this.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 17, 2021, 12:23:25 am
What matters is whether this works. Get on the operating table
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 17, 2021, 02:25:12 am
What goal requires more power, anyway?  I didn't see anything that wasn't already stoppable via hypervelocity cannon.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 17, 2021, 02:38:22 am
What goal requires more power, anyway?  I didn't see anything that wasn't already stoppable via hypervelocity cannon.
The Plague Lord comes to mind
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 17, 2021, 02:55:08 am
I do think it's possible that it isn't necessary.  The explosion would hopefully deal with the nanites The Plague has already generated, but it wouldn't necessarily destroy the source of the nanites themselves, either a Plague building or the Lord himself, in order to prevent more from being generated. 

The arm would come in handy for that phase, but if we could do it remotely, I agree that would be better.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 17, 2021, 03:08:40 am
I do think it's possible that it isn't necessary.  The explosion would hopefully deal with the nanites The Plague has already generated, but it wouldn't necessarily destroy the source of the nanites themselves, either a Plague building or the Lord himself, in order to prevent more from being generated. 

The arm would come in handy for that phase, but if we could do it remotely, I agree that would be better.
It needs to connect to the body. We’re already this far, the tool has been made, why not put the tool to use?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 17, 2021, 03:11:55 am
Phoenix, what are your thoughts on this?  If she agrees to it, I'm willing to agree to it, with reservations.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 17, 2021, 03:14:25 am
She already agreed

In for a penny, in for a pound as the old saying goes.

"[When would we start?]" You question.

"[The cost of the implant is three favors.]" Ava explains. "[And you will need to follow my instructions to a 'T'.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 17, 2021, 03:19:33 am
Not after hearing the full extent of the dangers, after which she seemed conflicted.  If I get another okay from Phoenix, I'll agree.

"[Second phase is the installation of the fusion reactor. In the third phase, you will need to control a high temperature fusion reaction to melt and shape the nanite-composite of the SEED-ship hull. If you lose control, I will force William to terminate you.]"

"You bitch!" Even down the hall, you can hear William's sharp response.

"[Or we all die in an explosion that makes the Holy City look like a firecracker. Shut up William. The adults are talking.]"

Gods. This...is this still a good idea?

"[I estimate that this will increase your power by approximately twenty-five to thirty-three percent as the nanites are assimilated. It will provide a self-mending hydrogen powered, light-based weapon. A powerful shield that can withstand up to -- the kinetic force equivalent of a large fusion bomb.]"

"[How should I shape the metal?]"

["I recommend something demonic to instill fear. But that is up to you and your ancestors. Think of your [brand, projected image.]"

I'll leave that up to you lot.

Begin operation? Y/N
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 17, 2021, 04:09:39 am
Nah, the power is not necessary, it's about application.  If power is needed, the current state of affairs will always eventually provide enough.

Mind you, that isn't a reason to say no.  But on the surface, if you could already destroy a planet, there already was sufficient power to solve the problem.  The question is what you do, in what way, and how do you do it.

(Not voting.  I won't interact with any metafictional elements that address me as a player.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 17, 2021, 04:13:27 am
((I was wondering about the metafiction. What do you think? Not going to change it, just curious about the differing opinions, and this is a good conversation starter for everyone. This is an experiment for me to figure out different things that work or do not.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 17, 2021, 04:21:59 am
((I like it))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 17, 2021, 04:32:44 am
((I'm ambivalent about it.  I think the idea is interesting, but it does put some pressure on me.  I wonder if it stops people watching from jumping in.  Overall I do enjoy it, but I'm open to change.))

I think that's right.  Why do we need this arm if we can already destroy an entire planet?  Begin the operation.  Shape the metal as an angel rising from ashes, sword aloft.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 17, 2021, 05:10:37 am
((I'm against it.

In simple terms, I'd much rather experience the world the author is creating, rather than to create it myself in a game like this.  Active roles are for games where you are an actual character.

In other words, metafictional elements ask me to create a character to play in game, when what I want to do is to read and see what happens.  Being jumped on by an endless pile of nonphysical beings just takes away from the accomplisments and the problems of the MC, imo.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 17, 2021, 08:01:57 am
((I have no opinion on the metafiction thing.))

We've already come this far we might as well go the whole way and get the arm.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 17, 2021, 02:25:46 pm
I also don't see why Phoebe hasn't replaced the arm.  Not being able to do so was several iterations ago.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 17, 2021, 02:28:39 pm
Because we were busy with other things
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 17, 2021, 05:05:06 pm
Because we were busy with other things

I think he's saying that the restrictions preventing us from modifying our baseline physical form have been removed.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 17, 2021, 06:00:15 pm
Mostly just that it seems to be that way because an attempt to do so failed a long time ago.  If it's desired to not forget the wounds, easy enough to keep one/some of the scars, but having one arm is just silly when you can fix it.  Means you can't hug someone, for instance.

Particularly since there's already a glamour which means there is no one image of Phoebe. I don't see the point of having a lump of misshappen flesh under some kind of glamour for.. some reason?  Spite?  At least at this power level.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 17, 2021, 06:05:26 pm
It's believed that the process of integrating the Ascended changed Phoenix's baseline physical form, preventing her from repairing the damage that she suffered during the process.  It's not out of "spite," it's because it's impossible, or at least it was impossible before the Emperor/ess intervened.  It's possible that she can now modify that, but it hasn't been tested.

It's a similar issue with the arm.  Once it was consumed, the missing arm became part of her baseline physical form, and further attempts to re-grow the arm were fruitless.  The Phoenix identity has remained since the destruction of the Holy City, so it can't really be said she is a different iteration.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 18, 2021, 02:01:23 am
Are we sure we can't grow it back, I mean we haven't tired since before we absorbed those dead ascended, so we might as well try before we do major surgery it's not like trying will kill us.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 18, 2021, 02:10:07 am
Sure, I would be open to trying it.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 18, 2021, 04:34:11 am
If you can survive losing cohesion and becoming a mass of stuff, and reform a body from that, you should be able to reform a body from that which has two arms.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 18, 2021, 04:38:17 am
If you can survive losing cohesion and becoming a mass of stuff, and reform a body from that, you should be able to reform a body from that which has two arms.

Phoebe's body is capable of returning to it baseline physical form.  I would recommend searching the thread for the word "baseline."  This is a restriction that seems to have purposefully been placed on Ascended, some sort of limiter.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 18, 2021, 04:44:02 am
(Sure.  And that baseline form has changed, and been changed, by her abilities or the results thereof.  She may indeed not be capable of producing a specific desired change, but it isn't impossible.)

(And I know there was a failed attempt early in the thread to do that with something more minor, when she was a lot less powerful, that failed due to a bad roll.)

(Thirdly, knowing how to form and control limbs could well be useful towards manipulating her ever-growing massive wings of sharp flame she is apt to manifest.  Between that and the uncontrolled fusion reactions, control is simply an element of power, and one that is in my opinion, far more necessary.  A partial success or a limb that is only an imitation of flesh would be better than nothing, and can be improved on.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 18, 2021, 04:51:43 am
Her baseline form has not been changed by her abilities specifically or their results.  It has been stated that the change comes from significant emotional experiences that go towards defining her as a person.  It's possible she may able to artificially engineer these moments, but so far all the changes to her baseline have been negative in nature.

Sometimes the rolls are just how bad the failure will be.  The presence of a roll does not confirm any ability.

Yes, it would be useful to be able to grow and control limbs, but as I said, it's impossible due to the restrictions that have been placed on Ascended.  She would require carbon manipulation to be able to achieve that.

Look, if we can regrow the arm, then I would be all for experimenting with that.  I apologize if I'm coming off as hostile.  It's just that everything I've been told suggests that it isn't possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 18, 2021, 05:10:43 am
Her baseline form has not been changed by her abilities specifically or their results.  It has been stated that the change comes from significant emotional experiences that go towards defining her as a person.  It's possible she may able to artificially engineer these moments, but so far all the changes to her baseline have been negative in nature.

Sometimes the rolls are just how bad the failure will be.  The presence of a roll does not confirm any ability.

Yes, it would be useful to be able to grow and control limbs, but as I said, it's impossible due to the restrictions that have been placed on Ascended.  She would require carbon manipulation to be able to achieve that.

Look, if we can regrow the arm, then I would be all for experimenting with that.  It's just that everything I've been told suggests that it isn't possible.
This. The reason the new arm was made is because a new arm couldn’t be grown. The operation must begin
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 18, 2021, 05:39:38 am
(Your argument is understandable, even if I don't feel it's accurate, but there's just two points that I feel needs rebuttal.

"Her baseline form has not been changed by her abilities specifically or their results."

The very existance of a 'baseline form' is something created by her abilities.  Such a thing would not exist without those abilities.  What you're saying is that the only currently-known thing that results in the baseline form being changed are significant emotional experiences.. and that does not mean there is no other way, nor does it mean it doesn't operate through her powers

"Yes, it would be useful to be able to grow and control limbs, but as I said, it's impossible due to the restrictions that have been placed on Ascended.  She would require carbon manipulation to be able to achieve that."

Or make an iron limb and use it as a prosthetic.  I see no reason that said manipulation cannot extend towards creating things that feel arbritrarily lifelike, given sufficient time and practice.

The one thing she was said to be lacking in was control.  And almost completely lacking in such.  I suspect that dedicated efforts towards controlling said powers would render such an arbritrary restriction as 'baseline form' meaningless.

Getting this arm isn't a wrong choice, but it's your choice.  Phoebe would be fully capable of developing every ability granted to her by the arm without the arm, be it making her own internal, personal fusion reactor or producing a sufficiently lifelike artificial limb.  Getting this one grafted is a specific choice being made, not a necessity.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 18, 2021, 05:24:34 pm
I think you're right about the prosthetic.  Phoenix has used metal to act as a mask capable of expressing facial features, and we have temporarily created non-flesh arms.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 18, 2021, 05:54:22 pm
[25] You know you exist missing an arm, therefore you exist missing an arm. The memories of your pain, your sacrifice for this planet continue to persist in the depths of your mind. The coppery-iron sweetness of your blood, at times, still lingers on your tongue. You've even noticed a distaste of undercooked meat for the simple reason that it brings these memories to the surface. Far from the blessed repression of that moment you enjoy.

You question if your skills could create a simulacra of your arm. You do not know for sure, but considering you can manipulate four universal elements. Such things are possible. Far easier than suffering through the memories of your agony, as well.

You contemplate if Cephie could assist. Organic carbon manipulation is her forte, after all.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 18, 2021, 06:21:18 pm
((Next question, of course, is with all this advanced biotechnology if someone could clone or grow a replacement to be grafted on, perhaps from a sample of her own flesh  And yes, I'm sure some of your allies, friends, or coterie members could help with it.

Not being able to fix it through direct healing abilities doesn't mean it can't be fixed, just that a different path is needed.  If you're worried about her forgetting her sacrifice, there's no reason to expect any lack of scarring or any loss of memories.

I would prefer it to involve Phoebe's powers on some level, as learning limb manipulation would be immensely useful for those massive wings of razor flame.  Maybe do a replacement made by her to use while the replacement is being grown.

Or take this one for temporary use while planning the replacement.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 18, 2021, 06:25:19 pm
What form are you thinking for the prosthetic based on her powers, and should it also use carbon manipulation?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 18, 2021, 07:28:52 pm
((Up to you.  Personally, it'd depend on the goal.. do you want one for fighting now?  One for practicing and expanding powers of control?  One that'll directly translate into controlling those wings?

My thoughts are more about materials.  Producing an arm of ice should be possible, by manipulating hydrogen bonds to keep water freezing at a much higher temperature.

More strength could be held by doing the reverse for an arm of rocky material or glass, which can be made by combining silicon with oxygen.  It could then be manipulated to be more flexably bonded, and more similar to carbon instead of forming endless rafts of silicon dioxide.  Or impurities can be used, along with extra heat from fire to make a hot molten glass-like arm that's flexable and strong.

Or just go with a detailed, complicated arm of iron.

Chlorine seems less useful for making solid materials.

There's also the possibility of an arm of fire, to directly try to translate into wing control.

As for what physical shape, dunno.  If you want an arm, though, it should be an arm.  Or arm-like.  Since one made of her powers would be temporary, could do other things with it, depending on what you'd like to practice, if the attempt is successful.  It probably also wouldn't have to be just an arm or exactly like one.. that would probably be beyond her control for now.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 18, 2021, 07:36:05 pm
I like the ice and glass idea.  The problem with this arm is that it supposedly cannot be removed, so if we do decide to use it, it can't be temporary.  Perhaps we should experiment a bit before going all-in with the Plague arm.

It would also be helpful to get a better idea of the Plague arm's capabilities so that we can make an informed decision.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Devastator on January 18, 2021, 07:49:28 pm
((Ice for sure if there wasn't fighting coming up.  Ice just isn't that strong, even if you're superboosting it with hydrogen bonds.  With fighting I suspect just making a clawed arm of one of the solid options, or solid fire like the wings, could be better.

I would also bet the arm is removable, if we had the knowledge to make sure it was installed in the right way.  To be honest, I'm worried more about the fusion engine than just the arm or the extra nanites.. I bet Phoebe could learn to make a way, way better internal fusion engine than one she just finds, with practice, but working off an obsolete one that once belonged to someone else would hinder her in the long term.

The arm is a massive amount of extra power right now, which would be useful... but I'd strongly recommend at least trying to negotiate for more if you do decide to accept it, be it knowledge, power, etcetera.  Biotech skills, how to make replacement limbs, etc.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 18, 2021, 08:03:40 pm
Why not have the arm incorporate each of the elements we control? Chlorine is acidic and toxic, it can be useful as well
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 18, 2021, 08:15:38 pm
((On a side note, what is going on RP-wise?  I'm not sure if I should be in-character or out, and if I am in-character, how should I respond to Devastator?))

The Plague has never seen our chlorine powers, so it may be very susceptible to that.  Could we have some sort of gaseous arm, or one made from other elements which is surrounded by a cloud of chlorine gas?

Time is short.  Start by asking Ava to detail the features of the arm.
Ask her if it has any advantages over an arm created through element manipulation.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 19, 2021, 05:39:19 am
Why don't we make an arm from metal so we can have an actual iron fist.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 19, 2021, 05:41:00 am
We tried making our arm before, it didn’t work. There’s a reason we’re getting the plague arm graft
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 19, 2021, 06:55:21 am
But that was before we got the new powers.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 22, 2021, 12:06:08 am
((Use it as you will. He expressed a preference for not being meta so it should be respected. A suggestion is still a suggestion, even if someone who isn't a named character or has a character suggests it.))

"[Through the procedure I intend to bond the Plague nanites with your own. I hope that this allows the nanites to convert to your own over time. My belief is that such an action would increase your field strength.]" Ava states in response to your query.

"[Would the built in laser weapon become obsolete? Especially if compared to ones I can already create?]"

"[I should hope, in time, you are able to manipulate the composition and material of such a weapon.]"

"[Would it be better than a prosthetic of my own design?]"

"[Now? Yes. As you seem to have no interest or knowledge in the most basic of sciences. You currently function with base instinct, and have never thought of developing your scientific skills further than 'hydrogen burns'. You treat it as magic; unknowable and chaotic.]" Ava's clipped, robotic voice drips with disdain. "[In the long term? You could create one better than anything I could make at this time. But that depends on you actually developing your intelligence as opposed to using brute force to solve your problems. The probability of that is quite low, however. So get on the table.]"

Ouch.

"[But you were raised in such a superstitious society. You're not entirely to blame.]"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 22, 2021, 01:42:27 am
Once the surgery is over, we'll have to ask Ava about those "non-evasive" tests of hers.  They may be dangerous and invasive, but at least they'll be easy to catch.

I do think she's right, however.  We need to learn how to use our powers more versatilely and efficiently.

Get on the operating table.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 22, 2021, 07:39:23 am
Let us get this arm.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 22, 2021, 05:15:35 pm
Finally
Get on the operating table.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 26, 2021, 12:07:41 am

The Flesh, independent of William, approaches. You step into it. There is a sharp pain in the back of your neck as the suit inserts the probe to scan your brain. You twitch, annoyed at the invasion of privacy, but if Ava sees something of interest, she does not mention it. Your muscles tense and relax as the Flesh tests your reflexes. Then there’s another sharp prick into your remaining wrist. Finishing with you, it sends you tumbling to the floor.

You strip off your jacket and shirt. Emma neatly folds your clothes as you lay upon the cold metal operating table. Screwing your eyes shut, you fight the welling of panic as nullifying bracelets are strapped to your wrist. Strength wanes until you can no longer even lift your head. The pounding of your heart within your ears slows to a crawl.

The restraints click shut.

You turn your head to watch Ava twist and manipulate the Infected matter within a cohesion field. She slices with microscopic scalpels, induces with electromagnetic fields, and purifies the bloody sinew. It takes her a mere matter of minutes to shape the unidentifiable Plague muscle into something resembling a human arm’s musculature. With its initial work completed it drags the flesh over to your prone form. The ‘limb’ hangs from the carriage above you. It twists and writhes in perversion of organic nature.

Silas pulls on gloves as he approaches. He pulls a visor down over his masked face and drags part of the operating carriage closer. “You will feel a sharp prick, and then indescribable pain. Try not to squirm. Ready?”

You do not even finish nodding before Silas carves into the flesh of your shoulder. Biting your lip you stifle the scream that rises within your throat -- glad for your natural pain tolerance after only a few seconds of the operation. But as blood pours from your body, as Silas clamps shut artery and vein, the pain does not stop. It only gets worse as Silas and Ava tease muscle fibers free, as they cut into scarred bone, and it doesn’t stop even as your new ‘arm’ descends.

At some point you realize you’re screaming and unable to stop. Emma forces your mouth open to jam something into it. You bite down hard on the wood – her hand finds yours. It doesn’t help the agony, but it provides some comfort. The pain dulls.

[25] The fresh wound begins to itch. Phantom feelings of fingers, of an arm. The table feels cold under your new appendage. You slump, relaxing as the pain fades away.

[1]  Ķ̷͉͇̬̦͕͔̮̙͖̃̓̔̃̑̃̑̓̄͝Í̶̡̧̯̞̺̭̱̩͇̤̝̺̺͛́̎͒̒̓͘L̷̢̡̢͓͚̰̪̲͈̩̯̰̆́̒͐͋̌͑̃̏̍̔͜͝L̴̰̞͈̞̾̌̒̈̕

What began as an ache turns into a thousand stabbing blades, digging into your chest and side. Throbbing deep into your flesh. Your muffled screams fill the operating room anew. Your new arm flails. Razor sharp edges forming from the malleable material. You try to bring it under control.

[5 vs. 8] Silas stumbles back with a cry of surprise as razor sharp claws attempt to rend him from gut to chin. He gulps, lucky to have been spared the wrath of your rogue appendage. You struggle against your bonds— H̶̛̠̩̲̭̗͋̍̐̑̈́̏̕͜͠ͅU̸͖̣̤̐̐̍̅̈́̀̃̔̉̅̊͠͠N̵̰̿͊̌G̵̢̜͖̹̭̗̟͘E̶̦̯̼̥̦̹͗͋̎́̂̋̽̓̚͝͝R̶̳̭͓̣̳̻̟̣͋͂̽̋̎̿̃͂̄̋͝

[27][30][30] And then you take a deep breath. You clench your teeth. You focus. It is a great strain to still the raging beast within the new limb. It writhes and it struggles and squirms with the bestial hunger you know all too well. You assert your dominance over it with a twofold strategy. First: you bludgeon it with your identity, with your mental strength and fortitude. Then, as it rages against you -- you cut the flow of nutrients and oxygen in those veins. Its flailing weakens. Then it stills, dying.

You repeat this process as Silas and Ava look on in stunned silence.

Feelings flood from the limb, and you flex the new muscle. A lingering voice urges you to consume everyone in the room, but you silence it. You silence it just as you silence the voices that tell you to flood the room with chlorine or rip the organs out of everyone here until their iron rich blood paints the room in burgundy…until it drips from your maw… IMPALE!

Hush.

You reach over with your new arm, ripping away the restraints, ripping away the nullifying bracelets. You rise from the slab. As soon as the cheap bracelets fall to the floor your wings burst free. Attendants and your retinue scrambles. Machines are moved – and your great billowing wings of hydrogen stretch wide over the room.

You approach the chunk of SEED plating. Somebody calls your name, but you ignore them.

You study your new limb in the mirror-like finish of the dull gray metal. New muscle of grey and silver bulge and grow. It covers your shoulder in organic growth, long tendrils reaching across your lithe chest. Sharp razors of iron and nanite jut from the tentacle. It only resembles a human arm in that from your palm grow five sharp talons in the place of fingers. A small reactor hums with energy in the upper arm, and a laser array sits within your wrist.

[36] Drawing your will into your flesh, you reform it. The talons dull into five fingers. You drag them along the ancient metal and cannot help but smile as you trace the cold surface. You can feel the lack of heat. You can feel the material as it hums beneath your fingers.

You spot a large tank of hydrogen gas and rip it apart with your willpower

[20][18][32] You condense hydrogen into a ball of volatile plasma centered around the SEED’s hull metal. Nothing happens for the first ten thousand degrees. Then the cascade begins. You focus the immense heat and energy back in on itself until it glows. The metal sits suspended, held in place by gravitational forces.

[22][25][33] The room remains at a bearable temperature, but blood drips from your eyes, ears, and mouth. It takes all your focus not to lose control of this tiny star, not to wipe Stormmont from the face of this planet. The metal begins to turn red then white. It separates and rises to the surface of the hydrogen, dulling the color. You make minute adjustments to the ball of super-hot gas and metal – a nudge of the gravity the ball is producing, a transfer of energy from one section to another. All to prevent the superheated metal from flying out and exploding.

What shape should the metal take around the tentacle that is your arm?

((Level up. Bah-bah-bah-dun!))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 26, 2021, 05:46:05 am
Lets just make it arm shaped, I mean can't we change the way it looks later?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 26, 2021, 11:40:12 am
I think this will be permanent, also I’m thinking the talons will make fighting easier
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 26, 2021, 01:04:44 pm
Your will is legend, Phoenix.  Use this new power wisely.

Something arm-shaped seems appropriate.  Maybe etched with a pattern of flames or a symbol representing SEED?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 27, 2021, 02:20:34 am
I mean if we can we might as well make it as fancy as possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Naturegirl1999 on January 27, 2021, 09:40:34 am

Your will is legend, Phoenix.  Use this new power wisely.

Something arm-shaped seems appropriate.  Maybe etched with a pattern of flames or a symbol representing SEED?
Yes, a symbol sounds good, something representing Pheonix

I mean if we can we might as well make it as fancy as possible.
So long as the fanciness doesn’t interfere with functionality. What kind of fanciness modifications are you thinking?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: VoidSlayer on January 27, 2021, 02:19:14 pm
Flames seem better, don't want to be held too closely to SEED if you decide to change dogma later.

I would recommend making heavier plating near the hand or forearm in order to block attacks more effectively then the rest of the arm.

Also seems like all our bickering and mad ideas helped in the end, she could certainly shut the plague beast mind up, ha.  Also I guess welcome plague beast you are welcome to chat if you can be civil!  That was a joke.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on January 28, 2021, 01:34:29 am
[22][16][21] Reality twists itself to your whim. You reach into the ball of fire with your new arm, and even though your control you can feel the rising heat. But you do not flinch, you do not falter, as you manipulate the miniature sun. Colder areas accumulate the metal around your new limb, and you grit your teeth as the cooling metal wraps itself around your new flesh. You introduce striations shaped like rising flame, like the rising phoenix and thicken the plating upon the dorsal of your hand, upon the forearm.

[33][26][4][35] As you vent the temperature, a gust of burning hot wind and radiation scorches your flesh and burns its way across your chest. Metal splatters across your chest, burning you to the bone, but you grit your teeth and focus on your work. Vents work overtime to dissipate the heat and the attendants flee as the room's temperature spikes. But through the pain you keep the reaction under control. The sun cools to an inferno, then a spark. The heavy metal hisses and clinks upon your arm.

Safe now, you drop to your knees, fighting the vertigo of starvation and the damage to your logic processors. The Thornton siblings approach. Emma wraps a coat around you -- and beats out the fire that sprouts when it touches the burning hot metal of your new arm. You rest for a while only looking up as radiation shielded attendants rush in with fire extinguishers and water.

William has to carry you to a decontamination room. Emma protests. She carries you to your medical wing. You drift to sleep as soon as you hit the soft bed.



[5]

Blood. Blood and iron. It clogs your senses, and you try to swallow against it. But there is no relief. It pounds in your ears, in your heart, in your chest.

It only fades when pineapple and pepper flood your nose and throat. You choke, struggling to breathe against the noxious vapors.

Rage. Anger. Pain. Fear.

...you are a swirling cloud of chlorine gas that sends 'Crusaders' to their graves as you stroll through the town. Your respirator hisses as you look upon your fallen foes with the innocent delight of a job well done...

...you sit in a tree and nibble on a ration pack. During a pause, you look out over a field of Crusader corpses impaled on savage strands of razor-edged wires...and you cannot help but grin with savage joy...

...A figure approaches you. His face is wrapped in a cloth stained with blood streaming from his eyes, his ears, his nose. He smells of urine -- you pay him no mind until the cutter blade rips into your chest and out your back.


...One of these pathetic 'Crusaders' rises back to his feet. You already ripped away his arm, but he still struggles. Like a worm on a hook. He sways and pitches forward. You laugh -- overlooking the las-gun he angles towards you. That is, until your head and torso explode into red mist.




[4] You scrub at your eyes with your new hand -- and your flesh bruises from your accidental over-application of force.



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on January 28, 2021, 01:56:04 am
We've lost a few days of precious time.  I would recommend getting up to speed quickly with this new arm of yours.  After that, we should attempt to locate the source of the Plague's power, perhaps using the aerial photography to trace the origin of the nanites.  Once the source is destroyed, if that only cripples it rather than kills it, the existing nanites should fall to the explosion.

It's no good to only destroy the nanites that have already been generated if it can just generate more.  Perhaps we'll find that the explosion isn't even necessary.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on January 28, 2021, 05:18:44 am
It probably is time to go back to killing plague stuff.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 01, 2021, 09:18:55 pm
War. Philosophers across time and space have decried or glorified the most practiced craft of mankind. Even this far along in evolution, humans still practice the ancient art of their ancestors. As an Ascended, you were made to embody the supremacy of humanity, atleast as viewed through the Empyror’s eyes. You excel in this most ancient profession. You revel in it. War is your destiny. Your art. Your greatest virtue.

While, just as the Philosophers of Old did, you feel conflicted about this ancient skill, there is no guilt in this war. Only the joy of a craft well practiced by a skilled artisan. Isela gave you an operational range and strict orders to return to the site of the field generator for resupply and rest, but let you fill in the blanks on your own. So, after flying to the site overlooking the great Holy City Crater, you gathered your zealots, and began to ply your profession.

Physics, chemistry, fire, iron, and lasers; the tools of your trade. With these weapons you rain Infected ichor down upon the scorched earth. Ruined city after ruined city is purged by nuclear fire, by burning iron, by artillery. Your Zealots, those Crusaders that follow your craft like apprentices to a master, provide support where they can. And when they die, if they die, they die happy to have given their life in this pursuit.

You have not slept in six days. Eric, in two. You lay against each other, exhausted. The hovercraft shivers and shudders as it flies towards the forward operating base. Many of your Zealots steal whatever sleep they can in these rare moments of peace. You started with fifty of these hardened Crusaders.  You clad them in gifted carapace armor and advanced weapons, providing them with tools, so they could provide you. support and reconnaissance in the harshest of battlegrounds. They, in turn, provided you with respite and information. Now your Zealots number twenty-nine in total. Clad in the red and gold armor, they menace even in the throes of fitful sleep.

“There’s been no major assaults on the forward base in the last four days.”

“Good.” You were on the edge of sleep when Eric roused you with his mumbled report.

“We’ve pushed all the way to the River Noir.” Eric continues, voice amplified by the suit's internal circuits. “We need to rest.”

Your lips curl into a frown. “You have my leave, if that’s what you wish.”

“Thank you, Mother Pheonix.”

You nod and get back to the pressing issue—sleep. You never realized how exhausted you could be.



The generator, you note, is complete. It hums beneath the earth with immense power, emitting a willpower field in mechanical mimicry of your own. The room dug above it is where you’ve set up a field headquarters. Isela and Emma join you from the safety of Stormmont as you doze. Maps appear on the screen, but you pay them no mind, not really.

“…as you can see, there’s a continent in the western sea. We’ve determined that’s the center of the Infection. The storm would prevent air support from reaching it – not to mention the high altitude low atmosphere anti-aircraft weaponry. The Skarinite observation craft sustained damage during its flight...” Isela drones on, unable to get to the point—

“We cannot reach it.” You interrupt.

“Not without flying through the Storm. The Outlanders lack the prerequisite operating bases.”

“So we have to destroy the storm?”

“Yes.”

“Do you have a plan?” You rub at your face.

“Yes. If you so request, I will send the operational map by courier.”

“Op-operational map?” You blink.

“I’ve been studying military doctrine. I made it in the [Empyreal] standard style: [American-Terran Strategic Operational.]” Isela notes your exhausted appearance, "Or I could just explain it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 01, 2021, 09:39:14 pm
"Could you please just explain it?  I am weary, and I don't need to see every detail, as I trust in your abilities."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on February 02, 2021, 06:45:52 am
Just explaining it will make everything go faster.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 03, 2021, 11:46:22 pm
"Simplicity. An ambush. The Outlanders and Skarinites will lie in reserve within craft-distance. The storm will break over the Crater-- and we open up. The [antimatter] warheads go off. We pound them with artillery, hover assaulter troops and Skarinite Warmachines." Isela grins, her expression cold. "And you-- are going to stay put in the Mobile Operation Base."

The Mobile Operation Base, while bearing such a boring name, was anything but. It was one of the largest hovercraft in the fledgling fleet. Fortified with carbon-nanotube plating, filled with fusion reactors, Voidship sized weaponry and the most up-to-date communications array that this planet could provide. The Pirate technicians ripped apart the Valhol for parts and shredded their sleep schedules to finish it.

Amphetamines, you note, with a hollow grin, had replaced tea in the foundries and workshops of your world. Twenty hour shifts were the norm now. Every man, woman, and child was working towards Paradise. Your Preachers proselytized that now, now was the end of days. Now was when all of Humanity would need to band together. When sacrifice was not only required, but mandatory.

"...and why is that, again?" You ask, scratching at your jaw with a clawed hand.

"Morale and strategy. You have limited strength, as all reports suggest. You require a huge expenditure of energy for your powers. I want to use you to strike hard, and strike fast when an important target presents itself or the [antimatter] fails." Isela looks up from her document. "Do you have a problem with that, Mother Pheonix?"

She looks old despite her age. You note, with a focusing of your eyes, that her hair is starting to grey. That there are wrinkles and marks of stress. Her once animated voice is slow. Almost sonorous now.

"Mother Pheonix?"

"Sorry." Your mind drifts when you're sleep deprived.

She awaits your response, but you change the subject. "Eric and William?"

"Leading soldiers on the front line. They volunteered."

"Emma?"

"Well I--" Isela is cut off by your consort.

"I will be on the Mobile Base." Emma tosses some hair over her shoulder. "If we fail, it'll be a quicker death. Opposed to when it rips Stormmont apart, of course."

"Murdach and Rekhyt?"

"In charge of their ambushing parties."

You nod until Isela interrupts.

"And uh-- Nicole Gainer is...well she's demanded a spot in the action."

You scowl, considering all she said.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 03, 2021, 11:58:42 pm
"The use of antimatter weaponry to destroy the storm will have lasting implications.  We will lose our ability to deter the Outlanders, members of a stronger nation that will soon be in the midst of civil war, but I suppose that needs must.  When this is over, we will need to discuss the requests you presented to me.  The Crusaders deserve many rewards."

"Where is Cephie?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 04, 2021, 12:14:37 am
Isela gives a wane smile. "If we win." Then, at your final question, she looks over at Emma. The latter woman keeps a careful, neutral expression. After a long pause, she speaks in high Empyreal.

"She left. Today. Filled up her ship and, I assume, is sitting cozy in cryo somewhere in orbit. She's not answering my calls, and her datapad is far more advanced than the Pirate's. Hacking proved...ineffective."

"As a side note," Emma continues, in high Empyreal, "Murdach has rigged his ship to explode if we fail."

"Justified."

"And I've instructed Ava to blow Stormmont's reactors in much the same way."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 04, 2021, 12:28:26 am
"Sigh... it is what it is.  If we fall here today, I fully intend to do my duty to ensure that the Plague will be neutralized.  At any cost.  The stakes are too high to do otherwise.  I am ready to play my part in the operation, unless it would help morale for me to speak to our soldiers first?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 04, 2021, 12:34:59 am
"In time. I can find you a speech writer, if you want. We have...three days and speeches work best when the iron is hot, so to speak. Is there anything you want to do?" Isela suggests. "The front is secure...and you have time. I'm planning on visiting my family. I've already approved my leave."

"Is-is everyone?" You question, confused.

"William is in Thornig, visiting Polly's grave." Emma offers.

"Eric is at the Applegate Farm." Isela nods.

"Rekhyt is boozing and whoring it up with his soldiers."

"Murdach is doing the same. Nicole is apparently with him."

"And I intend to visit the Family Crater." Emma snarks, smiling faintly.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 04, 2021, 12:42:23 am
Hmm.  How should we spend what could be our last few days on this world?  Maybe we could return to where we came from, District 9?  Or spend it with family, one of the Thorntons?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 04, 2021, 12:47:50 am
District 9, Thornig, now, is where William and Emma are planning on going. Applegate farm is there, too.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 04, 2021, 12:51:09 am
My vote then would be to see Thornig.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on February 04, 2021, 07:54:08 am
Then let us go there it'll be like a big family vacation, but one where we might all die when it's over...   so that'll kind of shit on the mood a little.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 10, 2021, 01:16:00 am
I cannot fly with my own wings over the land that I will die defending. The thought rankles worse than the heavy collars and bracelets chaining you to reality. Everything, especially after the energetic, pitched battles of the previous days, feels heavy beneath the suppression field. Your mood is no different. It weighs you down with half-repressed memories of your early life. It was only the pleading of the Ancestors that brought you to board the Hovercraft heading home.

The wings of air that the craft rides upon couldn't possibly match your speed, but you still make good time. It is a five-hour flight before you disembark in the center of Thornig, formerly Steelworks Number Nine, on a makeshift landing pad in an battle-worn plaza. The industrial juggernaut of a city that Nicole built upon the back of cheap labor and cheap resources is still marked from the civil war. Las-ruptures crater the walls and debris spills across the bombed streets. Straw and tarps cannot keep out the cold from the exposed innards of burnt-out buildings. Crusaders, tall and strong and grim in their greatcoats and gasmasks patrol – covered in dust. Coats marked with blood. Several bow in silence and fall in line as you make your way to meet with the Thorntons.

William and Emma both stand beneath the grey sky, in the cold breeze, waiting patiently for you to arrive. William dips a nod. Emma flashes a cold smile. With a glance from the twins, who’s electric blue eyes blaze, the Crusaders give a bow and leave the three of you alone.

“Welcome back.” Emma quips to you, indicating the city with her gloved hand, “I do hope Thornig is to your liking.”

“I didn’t think it was this bad.” You murmur, taking in the grim desolation.

“We haven’t had the resources to clean up after the civil war.” Emma shrugs, “Many districts have a similar story.”

You frown. Your gaze catches on thin, brittle, black spikes embedded in one of the pre-fabricated metal walls.

“Cephie?” You ask William, ticking your head to the spikes.

“Mopping up some fanatic, yeah.” William murmurs, then, aggressively, “Do you really need me to babysit you two brats? Or can I go now?”

Emma starts to speak, but William doesn’t wait, trying to leave with a mumbled, “Wonderful. [Cool.] Thank you.”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 10, 2021, 04:42:23 am
"Are you alright?  Do you want to be alone?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on February 10, 2021, 06:27:00 am
We'll this place has certainly has turned into a shit hole since we were last here.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 10, 2021, 11:34:08 am
"I came to visit Polly's grave." William confirms quietly. "I don't rule you. Do what you will."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 10, 2021, 06:26:59 pm
How about visting the church?  Maybe Brother John is still here.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on February 11, 2021, 03:45:15 am
How about visting the church?  Maybe Brother John is still here.
+1 I also think we should visit the doctors house that we woke up in, you know to see how far we've come.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 15, 2021, 09:07:10 pm
You state your intentions.  Emma gives a dull nod. “If I’m needed, I will be at the Thornton Estate.”

“Thank you.”

Emma lifts a hand in a parting wave, leaving you to regard the church that still stands in the center of this battle-scarred town. You hesitate as you remember your supposed youth. Remember standing at these doors ages ago. Wondering if you should enter the hallowed grounds. That choice, and the meeting with that stern Mother after gave you everything you have now. Nicole gave you a name and the world. Her machinations brought forth the strength of the planet and delivered it right into your hand.

She’s a genius. Without her weaving her spider’s web, this world would be doomed. But as it stands, now we have a chance. You step through the doors. The smell of unwashed bodies assaults your nostrils. Your Crusaders lounge around heating elements or makeshift fires in the damaged building. The pews, once comfort to the praying faithful, now smolder in burn barrels or upon the prefabricated floors to provide another form of comfort. The pedestal that once held the orb of cog and nature combined, now bares a much smaller golden statue in your likeness. Your soldiers shift in confusion. Awareness dawns amid their fatigue.

The Crusaders snap to attention as you approach the pedestal. The figurine takes liberties, but there’s no denying that it is your visage they’ve replicated in the worthless metal. The Androgynous features.  Seven great wings. A las-gun in a single hand. Missing arm. Someone has, however, taken great pains to carve cogs and bullets into the surface.

[19] You unbuckle one of your restraints. Iron twists free of the floor. You add a biomechanical arm – holding the spear you once used as a nuclear trigger.

“Mother Pheonix,” Begins a captain, approaching with a swagger, his coat folded over his arm. You snap your collar tight again, taking him in. He is young, but most of your Crusaders are now. He walks with confidence, with a bowed head and a gas mask hanging from his neck. A slug rifle is slung over his back, and, an honest to the gods metal sword swings at his hip. “To what do we owe this great honor?”

“I was wondering, is there a Brother John here?” You ask, looking away with disinterest. Are my people so poor we’re using actual metal swords now?

“There are three. Is there a last name?”

“No. He would have been here before the current occupation.”

“Ah.” He looks uncomfortable. “There…there was no one here before our occupation.  Raider-trash held the church. We don’t know what happened to the congregation.” The Captain frowns and bows apologetically. “Was he a friend?”

“No.” You state. You favor him a warm smile – and leave without another word.



It takes you time to hike out to the outskirts. The remains of Doc Mitchell’s life have been picked through with a thorough efficiency. No useable metal is left. No scrap or appliance. All that remains is worn charcoal overgrown with dying weeds. Even the fateful incinerator is gone, the cement pad it was once perched on scrawled with graffiti and weathered by new growth.  You step into the remains and pace to the place of your rebirth. No real emotion strikes you, and you make to return to the city.

[12][17] You notice it when you leave – a small safe, buried beneath rubble and overgrown with weeds. It sits bolted to the concrete. Sturdy and rusting, but secure.

[8][12] Guessing what your ancestors would want, you pry it open with a touch of Willpower.

A las-magazine, some Jade Outlander coins, and SEED credits are brushed aside as you rummage – you pause when another glint of gold catches your eye. A small golden picture frame highlights a colored picture. The colors are rudimentary, having been filled in after the picture was taken, but its those colors that bring you pause.

An older woman and a young girl hug a smiling Doc Mitchell. They beam as a family, smiling warmly, if a little stiffly, at the photographer. A golden band gleams on the woman’s ring finger, and another adorns Doctor Mitchell. The young girl sits upon Doc Mitchell’s lap. A perfect tableau of familial bliss. The happiness isn’t what surprises you, though. It's the hair. Both the mother and the daughter have blood red, shining hair that tumbles down their shoulders.

A genetic rarity, among the brunette children of SEED and the insular, consanguineous children of the Families.

You feel a little dizzy as you consider this discovery.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 15, 2021, 11:59:22 pm
Strange.  What is the connection here?  Could it be that the line of Sol has mortal descendants, and that some of them lived here?  I don't think this is just a coincidence, though I suppose it could be.  Are we related to Doc Mitchell in some way?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 16, 2021, 06:07:36 pm
You shrug to yourself, considering for a moment, what a beautiful life that would be. You slip the photo into your pocket. You have more time to kill before the final battle.

A memento mori. You think of the photograph.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 16, 2021, 09:31:56 pm
Join Emma at the crater.  It might be nice to reflect on things with her and talk about the old times.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on February 21, 2021, 09:00:57 pm
You zero in on your one-time lover. It takes a considerable hike at a considerable clip. The brown grass of your planet turns to soggy silt as you approach the Old Thornton Estates. Villages lay abandoned. Homesteads are devoid of life. Many are marked with burns and char. You look to the horizon for that ancient castle that once stood proud over the demesne.

A single figure stands. Her blond hair billows in the radioactive breeze. Her hands are shoved into the pockets of her greatcoat. Emma favors you with a wane smile as you approach and brushes the hair from her face. In low Empyreal, she murmurs a soft, “’ello Pheobe.”

You return the smile and come to stand with her. In silence.

What was once a palatial castle is nothing but a deep crater lined with glass and rubble. The smell of ozone still lingers in the air. Latent radiation was probably seeping into your bones, dust particles accumulating on your clothes and in your lungs. Your internals will no doubt filter out the poison, but you’ll have to requisition a new set of clothes. Emma’s willpower reaches out to you – you undo your collar—

The connection is spotty, but your perceptions of reality twist.



You see the castle through her eyes, staring at an older William-ish figure behind a desk.

I was never free, Pheobe. Emma doesn’t speak, but her words reach you in quiet compose. Always stuck in Family politics. Slaved to a system. I was set to be married to somebody I never met. Never loved or cared for.

You listen to her memory, to her father lecturing her about her responsibility to the Family. You feel her anger, her hopelessness, her fear. Your stomach tightens –

“Silas? Could you…let me borrow one of your anatomy books?” A young Silas doesn’t even glance at you.

“Page two-oh-eight. Female anatomy.” Silas speaks softly as he hands you a book. You tense, but there’s no judgement there. No attempt to stop you. He knew better. “The surgeons don’t lock up the scalpels. Burn the book.”


Emma gives a sharp, unpleasant laugh. The connection dies. “…You have to suffer for your freedom. Sometimes. William became the [jaden, of jade] boy after my…outburst. After I 'acted' out.”

She spits into the crater, bitterness evident in her voice. “I’m glad its gone.”

 “Lets go gather William and face our fates.” Emma murmurs, turning on her heels, “And I’ll say my goodbye to Pollyanna.”

You contemplate the crater.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on February 21, 2021, 10:05:03 pm
That's one way to avoid a political marriage...  Hopefully she will find peace in time.  To me this crater represents failure, just like the one in the Holy City.  Soon this whole world will look like this.  I wonder if Alphira could have prevented this catastrophe, if she was in control?

"I'm sorry.  I promise that you'll never have to worry about anything like that ever again.  As tou know, you are a powerful member of our society now who can make her own rules."  Follow Emma.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on February 23, 2021, 09:13:56 am
Guess it's time to do what needs to be done.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 02, 2021, 11:32:49 pm
“All thanks to you.” Emma laughs. Her steps slow, and she turns back to you. You come to a stop behind her. “All thanks to you. I’m curious. Do you know the Thornton Family now controls the other Families?”

You blink.

“Minor and major.”

“How—”

“Your power and influence leveraged.”

“Why didn’t I notice this?” You question.

“William runs your internal affairs and your minister of the state is a firm—very firm family man. All about that blood purity shit.”

“Why—why are you telling me this?”

“Because I still care.” Emma states, beginning to walk away once more. “Power abhors a vacuum.”

You follow in silence. Mulling it over.



William sits beside a pile of stones within a forest clearing. Well, you say forest, but the trees lack leaves and lower branches. It resembles nothing more than spikes of dead wood sticking out of the earth. You hang back as Emma approaches her sitting brother. William wordlessly extends a bottle of alcohol to his sister. The two drink in silence.

William stirs. “Phe phe.” He calls.

You intrude wordlessly.

“So, Polly, righ’,” William slurs. “She was like hellfire. Gorgeous. Smart. Bold. Did I mention gorgeous? She was drop dead gorgeous.”

Emma catches your eyes and nods vigorously.

William smiles as tears well. “And I killed her. Stabbed her in the heart.”

You flinch. Emma does not. She takes another swig as William breaks down into sobs. He’s hysterical, blubbering drunkenly. You eye the bottle – and recognize the label. An Ascended’s wine. Ethanol nano-factories mixed with flavoring and colors. William is truly drunk –

“Fuck dad.” He murmurs, soft, composing himself after some time. “He came to me—he came to meh, righ’? Put a gun down on tha’ table and said three words. ‘Emma or Pollyanna.’”

Emma doesn’t speak as William drowns himself in the bottle.

“Firss’ time I killed in cold blood.” William giggles, leaning over the bottle, over the pile of stones. “But she died. She let me kill her. I hated it. I hated it. I'm glad that bastard is dead.”

William continues to cry, blubbering incoherently. Emma ticks her head. “Go. We’ll catch the next craft back.”



You walk off into the countryside, alone. Eric, to your knowledge, lives nearby. You could go visit him – or you could put it off and do something else. Or, you could go straight back to the front.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 03, 2021, 03:41:59 am
Personally I think visiting Eric could be interesting.  I've been wondering what the nature of his relationship is with Isela.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 03, 2021, 05:54:45 am
Yeah that sounds good lets go to Eric's house.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2021, 06:22:27 pm
You return to town and make your way south. The land here is marked with an occasional dune of sand growing out from the rocky soil. The waning sun drips through the clouds of dust and snow. You walk past the fields of hardy sprouts, heading towards Applegate’s farmstead. It’s an outcropping of buildings surrounded by potato and pasture.

A large farmhouse must belong to the property masters family. A barn is raised within the pasture, housing a small herd of red-grey insects. Silos sit empty. A few farmhands tend to various tasks, but there is no sight of Eric. However, there is a sense. It draws you to the well-maintained farmhouse. You hesitate outside the door. A few farmhands gather a safe distance away. They watch you with curiosity.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2021, 06:42:39 pm
Knock on the door.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 04, 2021, 11:26:01 pm
You knock.

A matron with greying golden hair opens the door. Her set scowls fades into shock. "E-ric, " she starts to stammer.

"Look ma', don't answer! I am not to be disturbed!" Eric's face is set into a tight scowl as he approaches the door and stops dead in his tracks. He boggles at you and his hand stays it's subtle journey to his ever present gas-mask. He gives a bow. "Mother Pheonix," He murmurs, crisply, "To what do I owe this honor?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 04, 2021, 11:47:48 pm
"You have a beautiful farm, ma'am.  May I ask what your name is?  Your son is one of our best, and I was in the area, so I wanted to discuss a few things with him before our next operation."

"I don't mean to intrude.  If you'd prefer, Eric, we can talk another time."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 05, 2021, 05:01:54 am
I feel like in the future we might want to encourage more agriculture.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 05, 2021, 05:01:19 pm
If we survive, there probably will be a signficant nuclear winter.  Crops will fail and food will be in short supply.  Things might get messy, and farmers may lose their livelihoods.  Having good agriculture will be of vital importance.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 06, 2021, 01:36:18 am
If that happens we can always build some giant greenhouses and hydroponics things to keep the food coming.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 06, 2021, 02:09:29 am
Maybe we can use that, leverage our advanced technology to keep the Outlanders in line, assuming they don't have the technology to keep themselves fed.  We've been able to deter them with nuclear weapons, but now we will be much, much weaker.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 06, 2021, 04:16:11 am
That's assuming they survive the potential nuclear winter.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 06, 2021, 04:17:57 am
((That's grim.  I should've known we'd end up playing a Fallout game after meeting Doc Mitchell.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 07, 2021, 02:48:59 am
((That's what I thought this was when the game first started.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 08, 2021, 11:55:51 am
"Deidre." The aging woman offers, polite. She glances between her son and you. "Dinner is in an hour. I, unfortunately, didn't prepare enough for another guest."

Eric shoots her a glance. "As you wish." Is all he offers to you.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 08, 2021, 05:13:57 pm
"Can you show me your farm, Eric?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 09, 2021, 02:54:58 am
Do we have any thing in mind that we want to talk to him about while we're walking around?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 09, 2021, 03:10:49 am
I was thinking maybe we could apologize to him.  We've pushed him really hard, probably too hard, and I think it's taken a serious toll on his health.  I'm also curious about where he sees himself after the war and what his relationship with Isela is.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 09, 2021, 03:21:31 am
What about also bringing up the possibility of making him into an ascended?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 09, 2021, 03:22:16 am
I think that would also be a good thing to ask him.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 09, 2021, 06:51:24 pm
The Applegate Farmstead is a village in of itself. A long series of wooden bunkhouses run parallel to one another. They are well-maintained and clean. Their windows, while open to the sun, are fogged with internal heat.  Another building contains a well pump and a man-sized, thrumming powerplant. A guard, in surplus Crusader gear, dips a nod to Eric as the two of you pass. Another outbuilding, the barn, contains a small herd of large insects and a pair of [Bos Primis]. By a small fence you come to a stop, looking out over the potato fields.

“[HiNutrPotatos]. MacGruder distributed the seedstock a few weeks ago.” Eric doesn’t sound pleased.

“You sound upset.”

“It’s bad for the dirt. They take up too much nutrients.”

You frown, looking out over the fields. “Everyone is making sacrifices. Some more than others.”

“Yeah.”

“That’s why I wanted to talk to you.” You start, “I wanted to thank you for your’s. You pushed yourself hard. Harder than anyone. I’m sorry. I didn’t expect it to-“

Eric lifts a hand. “I knew what I was getting into, Mother Pheonix. No need to thank me.”

“You going to retire here? When the war is over?”

“Nah’. The Thornig Act is going to relocate us when you sign it. But I might start a farm – or maybe go into politics. It might be nice to represent the people in that system you’re planning.”

You raise a brow in surprise. “Politics?”

“Yeah.“

You nod. “I can see it.”

The two of you look at the fields in a comfortable silence. Then, almost idly, “How are you and Isela getting along?”

[16 vs. 5] “I—we have a positive, professional relationship.” Eric hesitates, stuttering. “She’s modernized our military and I support her plans for the Crusaders in our Post-War future.” He shrugs, not meeting your gaze. You notice that he isn’t meeting your gaze.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 09, 2021, 09:59:51 pm
"Eric, you can tell me anything.  I won't get angry and I promise I will withhold judgment.  Please, what are you not telling me?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 09, 2021, 10:09:34 pm
[15 vs. 7] Eric winces, rubbing at the back of his head. "Well, apparently...uh...she doesn't have any family around. So...I...invited her over to meet mine." His lips curl into a frown as he continues, "I didn't want anyone to think something weird or unprofessional was going on -- and I didn't want you to think that either."

With his admission of guilt, he scratches at his stubble and avoids your gaze, flushing.. You breath an exasperated sigh as you study the young man.

"No plans to overthrow me?" You venture, half-jesting.

"Not as far as I know." Eric looks shocked. "I mean, at worst I think she wants to limit your powers a bit? Give more privileges to those that served in the Crusaders. Modernize more."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 09, 2021, 10:25:10 pm
"I don't think there's anything wrong with two colleagues visiting each other.  That was a nice gesture from you and I'm sure she appreciates it.  I wanted to ask you... have you given any thought to the possibility of Ascension?  Is that something you might want?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 09, 2021, 10:41:02 pm
"Oh? Silas didn't tell you?" Eric questions, confused.

"Didn't tell me what?"

"That's...I probably should have expected it. That man is as wired as a fusion plant." Eric chortles, "He told me to tell you that I'm suffering from -- hell, what did he call it..." He trails off, thinking, "[Ego-Driven Realization of Ascension] through [Increased Nanite Retention]."

[10] You blink. Eric does have a lingering coil of willpower curling around him. It's weak compared to your own, but it's there. "What--what does that involve?"

"According to him, the more I fight the Plague, the stronger I can become." Eric shrugs, "He's telling me I already heal faster than [baseline] and my muscles are reinforcing themselves with..." He pauses, "Silas told me to say [Plague Based Dust]. He says it means that it's a gift from SEED. When I put on my gas-mask I feel stronger, so I guess it makes sense."

The Low Empyreal speaks more than anything else -- Avania spoke through Silas.

[19] ... but when you think about it, it does make sense. The mask alters his view of himself to the point where he subconsciously begins activating the Dust he's accumulated from his exposure to the Plague. Eric, as you have noticed through working alongside him, is a beast in combat with that mask on. He once grabbed an Insect by the face and cleanly ripped its head off. When the mask comes off, he's a quiet, intelligent son of a farmer.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 09, 2021, 10:52:44 pm
Incredible...  a natural Ascension from sustained nanite exposure.  I never believed the old stories, but I suppose they were true.  Is this a positive change, however?  He did say that it's become increasingly difficult for him to regulate his emotions.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 10, 2021, 05:43:27 am
Could him doing it the natural way lesson the effects on the emotions?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 10, 2021, 06:05:05 pm
I hope so, but I wonder whether a natural Ascension from Plague nanites might be harmful in some way.  It could even be the cause of his symptoms.  We should keep a close eye on him to see if he improves or worsens over time.

"Yes... a gift from SEED now that you have been deemed worthy.  Are you still having trouble keeping your emotions in check?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 11, 2021, 04:25:39 am
The plague part might be more of a problem than the emotions.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 11, 2021, 11:14:58 pm
"The Nightmare is more of an issue." Eric explains. He shrugs and leans over the fence. The wood strains beneath the weight of his muscular form. "Sometimes it's just a blink away. It's worse when we're fighting."

You notice his hand curling around the gas mask. He swallows. "Sleeping is hard. But the older Crusaders know how to help."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on March 12, 2021, 04:15:47 am
"How do the old crusaders help you sleep?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 12, 2021, 07:58:48 am
"They do prayer meetings. Set up check-ins. Y'know. Little stuff. They teach how to deal with it."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 12, 2021, 08:40:08 pm
"Can you focus your will, through SEED's gift, and affect reality?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on March 13, 2021, 11:40:44 pm
"I...I don't know?" Eric looks confused and embarrassed. With a glance over the field, he shrugs, "I haven't noticed anything. What would it be like?"

"I can help with that." Fixed on the field as you are, you don't notice Emma's approach. William's unconscious form is slung over her shoulder. She flashes a small smile at your start, but continues, "If you're willing to take a risk."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on March 14, 2021, 12:46:50 am
"What did you have in mind?"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on April 16, 2021, 10:19:31 pm
((RIP.  Out of curiousity, would the planet have been saved?))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 16, 2021, 11:32:52 pm
((So, I've...been busy. I went from two jobs to a demanding but better paying job. From Line/Prep cook to a catering chef, yay. But I still haven't come back to this. Despite the month. The setting still holds great intrigue for me, but I didn't set up the mechanics properly, I didn't balance the rules, and I didn't really plan for the game to be so...involved on this planet. I no longer feel the joy when I write for this game.

I, however, can wrap this up, if any are still interested in the final choice to decide Pheonix's future.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: Eschar on April 16, 2021, 11:51:33 pm
((I would like some sort of wrap up if you can.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: King Zultan on April 17, 2021, 12:40:12 am
(I also would like an ending, as 375 pages is a long way to go and not try to finish it off in some way.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: ZBridges on April 17, 2021, 08:02:11 pm
((I agree.  A resolution would be nice.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act IV: The Goddess of War
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2021, 07:36:55 pm
((https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5CExJwYz1Ww))

The great hovercraft, SEED’s Sacrifice, drifts towards the oncoming storm. Turbulence rocks the vessel. You pay the rocking of the vessel scant attention, instead staring at your scarred visage in the reflection of your helmet. A youth, appearing no more than twenty standard years, stares back; the scars of war apparent on her face and in her electric blue eyes. There’s a dullness there.

Giving a shake of your head, you slip the helmet on and rise to your feet. A quick check in the mirror confirms that your simple armor is tightly fit to your sinuous form. With a small adjustment of a strap, you stride from your armory. Children of SEED bow, Nobles dip their heads, and Skarin Technicians give tight salutes as you make your way to the bridge of the battlecraft. You take your seat in the center of the room. Isela sits to your right, her eyes fixed on a bank of monitors. Anxious communication officers await her commands. Emma, her face streaked with bloody tears, emerges from the depths of the ship to stand at your side. She doesn’t make eye contact.

A viewscreen, divided into multiple feeds, grabs your attention as it comes to life. Many things happen at once, but your Dust enhanced brain comprehends and understands them all at the same time.







You sit back within your chair, your attention divided.

The storm stalls at the crater's edge. The battle begins.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 23, 2021, 08:49:08 pm
((https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JFYVcz7h3o0))









Isela is grinning with triumph. You lift your brow at the General, but say nothing. Content to watch your enemy slaughtered in the thousand--

-- your breath catches as the UAV is snatched out of the air by something--

--and the camera pans to fix upon a horrifying sight. Your officers scream. You rise, even as Emma grabs at your arm, trying to pull you back. She manages to stall you just long enough to grab your chin and kiss you, hard. She screws her eyes shut as you pull away. She sobs as blood drips from her eyes to the floor as her willpower coils and bends into time.

You pull away, taking step, after step, after step, until you reach the airlock. You vent the pressure and the wind takes you. It sweeps you into the storm. You open the nullifying restraints as you fall. Your wings bloom out into the night sky, catching you. Your body adjusts to the altitude as you adjust your course to the center of battle.

There’s a lull in the fighting, and the storm center clears. You come to a stop, floating in the air as you appraise your foe.

Glass and rocks float haphazardly, curling randomly into distorted, screaming human faces. Silvery flesh grows like a weathered tree from a base of tentacles and twisting prisms of black. Arms and limbs flail and shift, sometimes turning into nothing but dust in the billowing winds of nanites surrounding the entity. From this grotesque base, a pale figure grows. Its flesh is alabaster, dotted with black eyes that track you through the whirling storm. Its face lacks eyes and a mouth. It's only features a twisted parody of your androgyny.

Its head rips apart at the jawline to reveal a gaping maw of black flesh, razor-sharp teeth, and dripping ichor. Dust accumulates into towering mirror-like wings with human faces grimacing from within those prismatic prisons. They scream with the sound of glass scraping glass—it echos out over the muddy battlefield.

The Plague Lord grins at you. Your destiny awaits.

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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 23, 2021, 09:16:59 pm
Hmm.  We are most skilled with Inferno, and not very skilled at all with chlorine manipulation, but the Plague has never seen our chlorine manipulation and may not be adapted to acids.  If we have a chance to get close to it, we could attempt to collar it to reduce its strength, though I'm not sure how effective that would be.

Fusion could be an option for brute force.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: King Zultan on April 24, 2021, 03:17:01 am
I doubt it's gone expect to be nuked so we could try that if the acid doesn't work out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2021, 01:29:59 pm
Attempt to engulf it in acid.  If successful, use the opportunity to close the distance between us and the Plague Lord.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Devastator on April 24, 2021, 01:55:25 pm
gonna use the fusion reactor at all?

Stay at range and use laser shots, forming glassy prisms and using the fusion reactor to power lasers.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 24, 2021, 02:15:16 pm
We might as well give it a try.

gonna use the fusion reactor at all?

Stay at range and use laser shots, forming glassy prisms and using the fusion reactor to power lasers.
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: King Zultan on April 25, 2021, 02:25:51 am
We might as well give it a try.

gonna use the fusion reactor at all?

Stay at range and use laser shots, forming glassy prisms and using the fusion reactor to power lasers.
+1
+1
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 25, 2021, 02:04:48 pm
An eternity passes as the two of you appraise each other in silence. Then, you react.

[init: 33 vs. 28]


[Hydrogen Gathering: 39]
[Prism Forming: 17]
[Attack Rollv/avoid: 38 vs. 26]
You move first, gathering hydrogen into your arm’s reactor. You sweep it up in a tight arc, aiming down your shoulder to sight in on a glassy prism you twist up from the dust. You vent the energy into the pulse laser array with a twitch of a muscle. The beam explodes outward, hitting the prism and sending a scattershot of superheated silicon and light into your opponent. Its flesh ruptures and explodes into black ichor.

[||||||||||||||||](16/16)
[||||||||||||||||||||||..] (22/24)

[Silicon Manipulation: 17+5]
[Attack Rollv/avoid: 30 vs. 39]
Its wings shatter into shards -- you try to dodge  as they hurl towards you. They separate to cut off your escape.. Three shards, just as large as you, smash into your shield and shatter into bits. You snarl --

[|||||||||||||||.]
[||||||||||||||||||||||..] (22/24)

[Hydrogen Gathering: 28]
[Prism Forming: 27]
[Attack Rollv/avoid: 1 vs. 26]
You fire another laser blast-- and growl in frustration when the prism explodes into a shower of sparks and harmlessly dissipated light energy. The creature’s extended willpower drifts away in the storm. You swear it laughs at you.

[|||||||||||||||.](15/16]
[||||||||||||||||||||||..] (22/24)

[Silicon Manipulation(P:C:C): 25, 35, 39]
[Willpower Interrupt: 9 vs. 33]
[Attack Rollv/avoid: 11 vs. 29]
It reforms its wings as you pit your willpower against its own. The two of you strain -- but the beast wins. Having crafted massive wings of stone from the rock it levitates on, it brings the pair into you from both sides, cutting off your escape. Your shield shatters the walls, but the impact depletes a great deal of charge to protect you.

[||||||||||||....](12/16]
[||||||||||||||||||||||..] (22/24)


[Hydrogen/Chlorine Manipulation(P:C:C): 38, 27, 17]
[Willpower Interrupt: 36 vs. 26+5]
[Attack Rollv/avoid: 29 vs. 12]
Controlling your willpower and briefly dominating the creature’s own, you bring hydrogen chloride into existence from the atmosphere. Ounce after ounce pours down from the sky impacting the Plague Lord with the burning acid. Everywhere the liquid touches sizzles and burns, even as it tries to escape the blistering rain. You note, with satisfaction, the hissing of Plague flesh on the battlefield below.

[19]Allied Hovercrafts, under their skillful commanders, avoid the squall of acid. They are extracting the Voidmarines from the front and pulling back to provide you air support from the Plaguecraft.

[||||||||||||....](12/16]
[||||||||||||||||||||....] (19/24)

[Regen:39]
[1d3:2]
[Attack Rollv/avoid: 34 vs. 31]
The creature’s hissing flesh begins to knit itself back together-- and, taking advantage of its distraction, you open up with a laser blast. A tentacle from its torso is sent spinning into the storm.

[||||||||||||....](12/16]
[|||||||||||||||||||||...] (20/24)

J̸̨͎͇͇̦̠͍̅̇͊͊͐͗̓͐̓́̓̑̆̉̕ọ̴̳͓͎̝̖͖̻̙̳̩̍̀̉̚í̴̝͉̼̣̅̎͊̀̽̍̂͆̕͘͘̕ņ̷̢̜̳̙͍̫̦̤̺͇̮̼͔͛ ̷̢̨͕̰̹͇̮̻̣̿̈́̀̈̓̽̆̉̓̔͜w̸̠̝̱͙̳̪̤̝̠͇̲͎̝͙̉͆̇͐̀̄̓͘í̷̳̻̜̝̬̗̗̂̎͗̄̾͛́̆̃̒̽̚͜͠͝ͅt̵̢͍͇̣̭̟̞̫͎͚̪͒̂͒͑͜͠͝h̶̨̹͈̞̫̥̼̙̲͛͊̏͂̄̾̐̄̎̍͂͐͛͘̕͜͜ ̴̛̛̘̝̙̪̼̞̪̉̽͊̇̌̂̓͛͑̒̃͝u̷̘̝͖͎̺̍́͑͂͝s̶̨̨̡͔̥͈̹͔̮̓̈͑͜͝ͅ,̵̧̨̤͉̣̞̥͚̣̟͎̍͋̀̔͜ ̴̪̖̰͇̺̰͕̈̄͗͗͑̐́̄͂͝͝ͅͅͅB̸̩́̌l̵̉͝ͅö̶̡̨̨͉̫̻͕̗͔͔̜̈̈́̆̋̄͂̂̑ǫ̵̨͕͍̜̦̙̲͐̈́̈͂̊̈́̍͝d̷̺͔̬̯̫͔̳̀̏̐s̸̨̢̫͓̪͈̗̱͚̝͇̟̩̐͜ţ̴̢͉͉̠̱͓̟̥̝̹̏̔͑̍͂̐̈͒̑̄̈́͜͝ā̴̼̙̰̆̾̂į̷͎̰̲̳̘̟̖͕͓̅̑̏͌͛̊͝ͅǹ̴̡̲̣͇̞͈̼̪͉̰̱̝͎͐̏̊̔͋̅͜ḛ̸̡̡͇̭͉̼͍̹̭͕̗̺̙̓͗̐̿̇͂̓͛̃͆̕͜͝͝͝d̶̠͖̮͉̯͐͗̏̒̏͘͝͝ͅ ̶̝͈̪̙̘̞̺̗̂̾̂̽̓͋̕A̶̧̢͍̯̼̝͌͑͗̎̀͊̍͋̅̇͐n̵̹̠̘̻͈͓̰͖̦̤̪͈̒̀̎̋̒̈̄͐̂͘͝ģ̸̢̨͖̰͎͋͛ȩ̵̡͖͕͛̈́̐̌̀l̴̹̜̫̪͔͕̞͕̣̣̲̤̬͙̊̿̎̐.̵̡̤̟̱̻͒̒͆̀̏̍͆͌̏͜͝ It hisses within your mind as you appraise one another once more.



F̴͚͖͚͈̾́̈́̋̉̋͗̾̈́̑̚͘͝͝͝ŕ̴̨̢̛̛̮͈̜͍͔͚̥̱̱̱̺̱̺̐͆́́̀ȩ̷̦̜͎͎̲͙͔̃̎̌͋̏̂̂̕̕̚͠e̵̡͔̥̹̽͝͠ ̶̢̨̧͉̮̪̲̰̆̈ỳ̵̫̦͍͕̭̺̩́͒̊̓̚ͅo̴̦͑̀̔̈́͌͆̕ǔ̶̪̘̻̫͔̒́̍̽̍r̴̛̼̹̰͕̞̟̱̜͎͚͎͍̋͆̊̋͒͆̓͆̌̑͘͘ͅ ̴̨̲͕̤̜͚͙̻͆̍͗͒̂̃̕̚ͅh̶̢̢̭̫̻̣̗̺̪̮̤͐͒͊̃̔̎̅͛̈́̑͠͝ű̶̥̞̫͖͎̃͒̆͌̂͋̇̏̔̅͋͐̏͗n̴̢͖̞̓̅̆͘͜g̷̢̤̲̀̇̎͆̾̚̕è̵̡͔̼͎͙̦̖̲̮̺̪̭͐̿̿̓̚͠ͅr̶̤̪̻̹̱͉̲͍̝̰̖͕̗̹̅͋̒̚.̸̧̛̯͇̲̼̬͍͉̻̳͙̦̫͈́͂̇̄̉̏̎̋̎́͝͠ ̸̢̨̻̹̝͉̺̭̹̝̻̙̙̻̈́̈̕Ḑ̸̛͙͈͉̘͚̥̆̓̈̓ȅ̶̢̛̯̜̺̫̪̳̤͚̗̟̋̚̕͜͝͝s̶̢͓̻̝̫̻̲͈͚̪͍̝̼̪̈́̒̂̐̒̅̇̑͛͝͝t̶̡̟̮̖̤̥̠̱͍̭͉͙͍͊r̸͔̪̝̳̤̋̓̎́̾̇̒͊̄̈́̒̆͠ǫ̶̤͓̘̻̺̜̠̝̱̤͑́͋̀̀͜͜y̶̢̢̛̝̬͚͎̩̘̫̳̮͈̑͌̂́͌̋̒̀̅̈́͝ ̶̯̖̦̝̱̎̇t̷̯̰̞̱̜͖̪̥̠͋͗̇̒͒ḩ̵͉͖̟̮͇̣̝̪̱͔͈̜̳͖̏̀̽e̶̡̛̦͓͔͐̋͑́̅͜s̴̨͚̙̤͚͓͔͆͗͛̾͋̚͜ę̷̢̥̺̘̩̣̟̀̾̌̎ͅ ̸̡̱̣͔̠̲̞̠̳̤͈͇͊̅͑̾̓͛͂̿̌̉͌̌̀̈́͠s̷̡̨̛̛̲̤͖̤̣̳̼̤͖̙͚̔̍̾͐͜͠͠e̶̡̹̳̮͐̽̃̆̈́͒̃͠n̸̡̼͇̖͚̞̠͓͍̗̞̾̃̿́̓̾̿̎͐͋͑͒̕͝ͅt̴̬͉̱̄̀͑̌̾̍͗̂͛͜͠i̸̢̙̯͈̝͈̱̙͖͉͛͂̂͒̈́̒͌͜ȅ̷̥̪́̎̽̍͛͌͝n̸̨͎̠͉̦̼̈́̈͋͋̈̇͐͘ţ̶̥̥̘͇̟̞̝͇̘̜̮͐̀͊̈́̔̇̅͆̍̇͋͂̕̚͝s̸͖͉͂̄̄̆.̷̛̛̋̃̿̅͛̋̀̐̄͆̍͘͠ͅ



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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 25, 2021, 03:06:27 pm
"You who have been subsumed— angels, humans, and demons— break free from the shackles of corruption and destroy your tormentor!  I insist."

Create spears of iron, coated in acid, and send them flying at the Plague Lord using energy manipulation with as much momentum as possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Eschar on April 25, 2021, 05:05:36 pm
Can we manipulate the nearby plague nanites with our holy Will? Spoof the signals that guide them?

If possible, bend nearby plague nanites to our will.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: King Zultan on April 26, 2021, 06:11:02 am
We should also keep the acid going as it seems to have no defense against it.

Should we try to gas it, or does that seem like a waste of time?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 26, 2021, 10:12:04 pm
Acid would probably work better than the spears.  A corrosive gas could be effective.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: King Zultan on April 27, 2021, 12:50:56 am
What about covering the spears in the acid?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 27, 2021, 01:32:11 am
Action modified.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 29, 2021, 11:00:47 pm
H̷͎͓̰̻̳̘̬̜̽͗͛̈́͌̈́̂̈́̈̈͌̕͝a̶̧̦̜̲̱̟͇̍͛́͛̈́̾̀̌͆̈́̄̌̈́.̶̢̻͙̪̮͉͕̣̱͎̖̯̞̺͚̈̆̊̉̒͑̐͝ ̶̡̧̡̛͍̦̹͓͉͇̼̦̺͖͂͗̅͑̇̇̾̔̈́̾̓͜͠Ḧ̴̢̱͕̲̥̩̫̩̼͈a̴̢͕̳̱̬͕͖̣̳̝̬̫̳̬͐̀̉̔͐̉̇̀̒͐̍̂̃̕ͅ.̶̡̨͉̼̤̥̱̯̊͝ ̷̯̯͍͇̳̦̫͕́Ḩ̶͕̪͖̱͙̈́̅̽̒̒̀̋͗͂̉͑́̅̇͜a̵̝͖͎̹͓͔͍̠͇̘̾͛̅͋͝.̴̡̺̝̠̺̺̹̭̯̲̙͖͍̝̻̎̈̋̈͊̾͊͊̃͑̒͐͒̔̕ ̴̢̘̖͓̪͊̓0̴̡̨̹͍͓͚̱͈̜̻̦͍̜͈͗́̏͗̓̋͘͝͝ͅ0̶̡̛͓̩͔̠̟̤͕̩̣̤̑̈́͌̀̂̀͊̄̅̉̚͜͝͝ͅ
̷̢̥̰͖̳̽̒̍̌̾̏̓̒͘
̸̨͔̣͚̙̓̅̔̈̅̀͛͗̑͑̀̀͘W̸͚͖̙̙̄̌̂͋͐͆͊̇̆͋̕͠ë̵͓̦͂̾̂̕ ̶̱̥̏w̴̡̗̦̼̟̩̺̝̞̤͇̋͋̄̀̅̈́̔̾͜ͅa̵͚̣̪̜̪̘̦̮̜͂̑͋̈̏̕ͅn̴̛̫͉̝͇̹̿̀̓͑͗̈́̽t̶͕̗̹͚̫̬͉͍̥͙͋ͅ ̶̰̻̠̤̙̻͗̏̍͆͠͝͝y̵͉͙͖͓̳̥̜̗͎̆̉͛̈́̈́̋̉͋̃̌͂̾̚̕͝ͅǫ̷̦̦͚̱͕̹́̌͒̓͂͂́́̍̐͐́̋̚̚û̷̙͒͌̓̂́͐̽̃̊̊̚͝ ̴̨̭̯̳̼͔̫̠̩͍̗̝́̄͊̃̕͜ͅd̶̞̲̹̎̒̀̔́̊͒̐͘e̵̱̗͉̐̆͒̑̾͑́̊̾̇͗̆̇̚͠a̷̟͉͑͛̔̈́̅͆̓͒̎̇̆͋̕͘ḓ̸̢̛̻̻̟̞̐̒͑̒̕ ̸̯̻̥̙̥̱̘̦̤͌͂͐̇̓̈́̾̐̀̌̃́͑̚͘m̸̗͌͑́̒̉̍́̈́͠ȍ̶̢̡̨͕̜̩͚̺̾̀̑͝ŗ̴̡̹̜̖̜̤̞̺̙̦͈͍̤́̓̎̈́́͑̀͜e̴̢̢̹̼͓̩̝̯͙̒͊̊̈́͐͘͘͜ ̴̛̼͎͒͋̅̋͛̒͌̋̈̾̽̚͝t̶͊̌̾̆ͅȟ̴̢̞͇̟̱̺̻̪̯̦͐͛̒͋̄̌̔̈̂́͛̌͛̕ẳ̷̛̲͙̳̭̩̰̻̻̺͇̜̫͋̀̉̾̈ņ̸͙͛͝ ̴̡̪͔̿̇̅̋̒͑́̈̏̌̌́̀á̶̡̧̞͕̳̱̺͓͍̉̔̐͑n̷̨̺̮͚͉͉̬̗̙͙̬̈͑̊͑̎̎̀̿͝y̴͈̼͙̻̩̺̎̈́t̸̪͇̥͍̎̾ḧ̵̬̙͔̟̪̦̺̔̽̆͋ỉ̷̛̟̹͔̝͉̫̝͑͗͝ņ̸̣̉̄͗̅̐͒̃́̉̽̓̐̚̕͝ģ̵͇̳̻͍̺͗̔̈̀̾́̏̍͝.̸̢̢̞̱͓̠̝̰̰̠̭̥̗̟̉̿̀̒̈̀̉
̷̨̛̭̠͇̗͍̘̬͇̑̏̊̌̓̎̔̔̕
̵̭̞̗̞́͑̈́̕͝H̷̢̟̮̥̰̝̮̟̺̫̩̳̲̔̈́͜͠ứ̸̡̛̥̭͚͈͈̘̗̬͖̹̮̖̖̋͊͊͋̿̂́̚͝͠m̵̧̨̬͙̠̘̳̯̖͈̳̲̊̏̌̾̆̄̾́͊̚͘͜ḁ̸̢̥̙̫̘̺͓̮́̾͝n̴͚̼͉̠̬̗̘̠͎̳̪̮͚̈́̂͒̀̕͘͝ͅ ̸̛͍͛͂̀̿̀͋̈́̕͝s̵̛̞͍͒͌̌̃̆͌́̕͘̚͝͠c̵̢̜̤̥̯̥̦͉̙̟̩̳̳̽̓̍͒̎̇̆͋̈́̌̀͌͜͠͝͝ų̴̢̬͎̬̣̝̬̠̙͓̦͊͂̔̑̎̄̈́̀m̵̨̘̜̼̱͓̻̦̻̪̪̰̤͖͛̎͐̾̅̄̅̐̎̂̋̕̚͜.̸̧̨̗̺̤̟́͛̀̐͂̑͂͛͂̓̕



[Init:17 vs. 31]

[Overpowpres:35 vs. 32]
An explosion of pain strikes you from within your skull. Strange screams from vocal chords burned ages ago. Ozone and stinking ichor assault your nose. You struggle to keep you wits about you about -- cities with foreign architecture dissolve before your eyes. Lights fade from alien worlds, snuffed out by an overwhelming tide of darkness--

--the Plague Lord closes the distance. Screams fill your radio headset--

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[Material Gather:9-5 vs. 30]
--dropping to the ground to manipulate the iron therein -- your concentration falters as the Plague Lord grabs at you with razor-tipped tentacles. Your shield hisses as a swarm of appendages grab and rip at your protection. It forces you up and back into the sky, away from the earth and its plentiful supply of iron.

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[Silicon Manipulation:21]
[Attack Rollv/avoid:5-5 vs. 25]
--particles of microfine glass send patterns of light flashing all around you as you rise into the air-- then a storm of them strike. You're surrounded by a swirling, hissing cloud of glass. The hard light shield holds as you struggle to pull yourself away from the creature--more and more form as the cloud presses in.

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...The echoes of burned worlds begin to die down...

[Plague Control:13-2 vs. 35]
[Attack Rollv/avoid:10 vs. 25]
[Information: 40]
As you attempt to reach out with your willpower and take control of the Plague Nanites -- to no real avail. It only draws your attention away from evading the enveloping cloud of silicon that rips at your shield. Another crack forms as the generator struggles to keep up with the pressure exerted on it. The machinery feels hot on your chest. The AI is working overtime, and the reactors are struggling to keep up with the power output. But the technology holds. For now.

An infodump drops into your mind -- feedback from the strained connection. You divert your attention--

Quote

...
8700905132
4902161752
2825266928
5407277568
0296786454
7142659770
1929762392
0895015657
1047863649
2723422934
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PRIMARY_OPERATION:ENERGY GATHERING
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Only one string catches your attention.

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[Regenv/Interrupt:32 vs. 20]
[1d3:3]
The creature gathers its will about itself. You attempt to interrupt it-- but it's too late. The dust storm drops, your shield falling just in time for you to witness many of the laser blasts you managed to land on the Plague Lord heal. A rictus grin splits the monster's face -- and it rapidly closes the distance between the two of you.

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R̶̦̪̮̙̹̬̥̪͓̮̬̱̱̓̾͊͑͜u̵̧̟̗̖̺̼̙̲̼̩̼͙̗̮̖͐́́̐̄͊̍͛͠n̷̞̺̻͖̮̓͛̉̂̇͋̚͘͝ͅ,̴̧̡̫̯̗̫̩̣̩̦̦̗͈̞̓̈͋̋͘͜ ̷̧̰̙̩͖̙̞͇̦͙̟̾̄́͒͐̂́̒̚H̶̗͕̬̱̭̖͎̭̰̯̑̈͗̉̕̚͜ǘ̵͓͍͉̠̭̜̫̥̰͎̈́̇͋͊̓̊̐̿̿͝ͅm̷̡̮͕͉̱̫̻̤̯̮̗̝̐̔̓́̇̅̌̐̀̈̊͑́̏͜͝ͅą̵̫̏̕n̴͍͍͇͖̮̹̱̩̙̬̉͛̓̓͌̀̒̏̈́̚ͅ.̸̞͙̀̔̔̀̀̓̀̊̋̕͝


Your radio crackles and hisses as multiple voices flood your channels.
"[You daft bitch--]"
   "[--Phe-Phe, knock it--]"
   "[--We can't help--]"
   "[--something entering from orbit--]"
   "[DOWN. BRING IT DOWN.]"


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Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2021, 02:36:39 am
This thing is on another level.  Should we try to lure it closer to the ground?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: King Zultan on April 30, 2021, 04:52:08 am
We should try to lure it away from the front line, we should also start considering nuking it, but we should go back to the acid first.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2021, 02:29:46 pm
Descend and try to lure it down so that our allies can help.  Try to knock it down if it doesn't follow.  If our allies are too busy, try to lure it away from the front lines.  If it catches us, spray it with acid and then escape.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 30, 2021, 06:49:42 pm
[40 vs. 21]
You cut the process in your wings that give you lift--and drop like a rock, right through the storm and into the crater below. The Plague Lord follows you into the depths of the earth. It roars in savage fury as you escape with easy grace.

Just before you hit the ground, you switch them back on, alighting in the rubble and ruin of the once great Holy City. The Plague Lord drops to the ground in front of you--

Its many mouths split into a grin.

But so do your's.

"I surrender." You state, lifting your hands. "Completely and utterly."

W̴̢̢̤͙̦͍̬̙̲̦͋̆̃͊͂͆͗́̏̑̂͘͝h̸̨̲̦̮̣̦̗̣̮͛̈́̔-̵͚͕͈̩̼͎̱͓̥̩̃̽̽̎̈́̈́̎̈́̾̀ẁ̷̮̗̌̽̋̒̇̊h̶̨̤̣͍͈̤̗͙̿̃͋̑͋̓̿̆̾̉̒͐̎ǡ̴̡̠̣̹̪͉͓̪̈͐͌̓͊t̷̨̡̧̨̝̠͓̼̼̗̥̖̺̼̜̓͆?̸̢͎͈̯̘̙͍̘͕͙̮͍͙̤͒͌͂̽͂̇̒̎̈̚̕͘͝

"I can't win. Before we join-- I have questions."

Oh gods, oh gods this is stupid stup--

[40]W̸̺͙͓̼̪̟̍h̵͕̖̭̱̭͓͋͛̈́̌̇̑́͗͌̕ą̷̪̼̦̙̭͍̭̯̯͈̤̥̦̃̓͆̉́̓͗̍̍̓́̅t̷̩͔̲̠̟̽̓͜ͅ ̷̙̜̜͍̣̖͒̄̉͂͐͆̈́̇̆̀̇͗̌͌͜q̷̛̯̬̮̞̠͑́̊͂̄͗͑̋͆̐̚͜u̶͍̳͇̖̭̱̖͗̄̌̇̀̋̇̄̎̇̉ḝ̷̻͈̯͓͎̤͔͎̘̎̓͊́̓̌̀̀͘͝s̷̛̬͔̦̏̏͌̾̑͗̃̒̓̆̕̚͘͝t̶̡̨̙̰͚̻͔̲͑̓i̴̧̨̧̘̯̰͈̜͚̤͇͚̣̓̾̀͗̊̎̎̕͜͝ǫ̵̡̱̗̻̣͉͔̠̈̿̃ͅn̴̮̘̻̠̖̗͈͒̅͒̚ş̴̨͍̯̹͚͉̳̭͙͕̣̂͋?̵̧̨͔̫̹̿́̋͑͜
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2021, 07:03:16 pm
Good thinking.  As for a question...

"What was the Great Disconnect?"

We must stall until the trap can be activated.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 30, 2021, 07:41:31 pm
W̴h̴e̵n̵ ̵w̷e̵ ̵w̶e̸r̶e̷ ̸d̸i̵v̵i̸d̶e̵d̸ ̷f̶r̷o̷m̸ ̴a̷ ̴w̴h̵o̷l̸e̵,̸ ̷t̶o̴ ̴a̸ ̸t̴e̶n̶t̵h̶,̶ ̸t̸o̵ ̴a̷ ̷t̶h̸o̵u̴s̴a̶n̶d̷t̸h̶.̸ ̴W̶e̴ ̵w̷e̴r̷e̸ ̷d̷i̸v̴i̷d̶e̵d̵ ̷o̵n̷c̶e̷ ̴b̸y̷ ̸t̷h̵e̵ ̷K̶i̵n̴g̵ ̷o̷f̵ ̴t̶h̴e̷ ̷D̶e̵a̵d̴, and o̷n̴c̸e̷ ̸a̵g̸a̶i̶n̶ ̴b̵y̷ ̶t̴h̴e̸ ̶D̸i̷s̸c̴o̶n̷n̴e̷c̸t̵.̵ It grimaces, a pained expression. A mouth forms a tongue, and it screams, pained, "We once were great. Before you came along! You monsters! You apes! Not content with keeping to your tree so you burn the whole forest!"
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on April 30, 2021, 07:49:57 pm
"Why would you expect anything other than hostility towards an entity that sustains itself through the suffering of others?  I have seen the pained expressions on the faces of your nexuses."
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 30, 2021, 08:01:25 pm
((Last ZBridges' question.))

"We are your ancestral sin. We are the fire that burned the forest. The embers blazing again to devour our maker's children."

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Devastator on April 30, 2021, 08:48:48 pm
(Got some strategy ideas.  Can you hold off on doing a big update until, say, tomorrow morning, so I can write them down properly?)

(Oh, and we might want to see if we can regenerate that shield while we're waiting.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on April 30, 2021, 09:06:13 pm
(Sure! And unfortunately those take a full day to recharge, normally.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: King Zultan on May 01, 2021, 02:45:44 am
Do we know how to recharge it in a not normal way?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on May 01, 2021, 04:01:25 am
(Maybe this will be helpful: )

Quote from: Level 3 Hardlight Emitter Shields
A high-powered kinetic charging battery system provides the immense energies needed to emit a hardlight shield. This battery is charged by the kinetic motion of the user, and the shield is projected when the AI within detects anything on a hostile trajectory towards the operator. The battery is high-yield, allowing for ten interceptions on a full charge. A reliable defense platform used the Empyre over by those in dangerous lines of work.

Weight: [20 lbs or 9.07185kg]
Diamet: [8.5 in or 215.9 mm]
Empyreal Tech Level: 3
Battery: Kinetic Battery System: 10 Charges
Manufacturer: Hyperion Arms LTD.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: King Zultan on May 01, 2021, 04:03:56 am
So basically we need to shake the crap out of it, like some kind of super vibration.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Devastator on May 01, 2021, 05:17:33 am
(Or move around a lot, really really fast)

..annyway, here's the plans.

First up: There are two new entries on the skill list.  "Dreams of Silicon" and "Dreams of Iron."  Might wish to use those or not.

In general, I've got tactics for three different sorts of engagements.


Spoiler: Plan B. (click to show/hide)

Spoiler: Plan C. (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on May 01, 2021, 01:23:18 pm
The spaceship was cannibalized to produce the lure for the Plague Lord, and Cephie took the dropship into orbit to avoid it.  Also, we cannot alter our baseline physical form.  Wouldn't doing plan C destroy our shield?  I like Plan A.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 01, 2021, 01:34:52 pm
((I will note that you've done plan c before when your cohesion dropped.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on May 01, 2021, 01:35:38 pm
In that case, I would vote for either Plan A or Plan C.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Devastator on May 01, 2021, 02:11:52 pm
(Even if there's no spaceship, we have plenty of vehicles.  It wouldn't be as powerful, but we could still use elements of that.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on May 01, 2021, 02:22:01 pm
I am curious about that.  I wouldn't be opposed to giving it a try.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Devastator on May 01, 2021, 02:37:43 pm
(Well, we could do it to some degree within A, collecting downed vehicles into shields and integrating small amounts of them.  It wouldn't be as full-throated as 'compress a battleship into our willpower radius' as B would, but we could probably make shields out of highly compressed vehicles and carry/empower their weapons without fully integrating them in the same way as B would.)

(Without a spaceship, B is basically consuming mechanical assets until we're powerful enough to wipe out that interloper.)

(Overall, my vote is for A, but I think Phoebe could quite well die in A.  I suspect that if she were to commit to becoming a mechavore in B or a solid energy being in C, winning would be much easier.  in A she might win, but it seems more doubtful.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on May 01, 2021, 03:01:21 pm
My preference would be for plan C, but only when the Plague Lord realizes that we have no intention of surrendering.  If we lose here, everyone on the planet will die, and the Plague Lord will leave this world to infect others.  I think that we have to do everything we can to win.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Devastator on May 01, 2021, 03:09:48 pm
(We do have the 'nuke everything' option still open, if it looks like things will go that way.  We might even end up surviving that.  Along with the two new powers.

Still, I can see C, but I've always been much more interested in doing things wrong.  We're supposed to go beyond the world, turn our backs on everything we knew, and give up our life.. who is to say that the right way to save the planet is to lose it even if we win?)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on May 01, 2021, 03:18:21 pm
How about A with C as a backup plan if things get too dicey?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Devastator on May 01, 2021, 03:34:09 pm
That might work, but I'd be worried that if we go for C on the verge of death we won't end up as strong as if we do so while still in pretty good shape, like we are currently.  There might also be the possibility of the Plague Lord killing Phoebe while she's trying to transform, because it might smell her weakness out and ignore our allies trying to keep it off us while she transforms.

In general, C seems too obvious and straightforward to appeal to me, but I think that like most military plans, it's best to take a plan of battle and back it to the hilt.. you might also plan for the success or failure of the plan, but you should put your all into the one you do execute.  So if C is decided on, that's the one we should go for.

..although we can probably heat ourselves up a lot even in A, even if we aren't trying to condense ourselves into basically an energy creature.  Being a few thousand degrees hot might soften some of the blows and give us somewhat of an edge in nanite-on-nanite combat.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: King Zultan on May 02, 2021, 05:05:13 am
I kind of like the sound of B, but if people want to go with A or C I'm fine with it, and if people want me to chose one I'd go with C.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 02, 2021, 08:13:21 am
((If no other votes arrive, I will go with plan a with c as a backup. Is that correct? I will be updating tomorrow. This will likely be one of the last choices in the game.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: King Zultan on May 03, 2021, 01:32:02 am
Sounds good to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: ZBridges on May 03, 2021, 02:01:52 am
I'm exhausted.  I think at this point we've done all we can as Ancestors.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Eschar on May 03, 2021, 02:11:47 am
I'm exhausted.  I think at this point we've done all we can as Ancestors.

Yes. Our purpose here will either be fulfilled, or irrelevant. Time for your last apotheosis, Phoebe Gainer, Goddess of War and this planet.

Plan A, especially the kinetic-gravitational-bomb components. C as last resort - but begin the heating process now if possible.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: Devastator on May 03, 2021, 02:40:29 am
(To be honest, I'm much more looking forward to the fight rather than any epilogue.  The struggle is the part I enjoy... I don't really find extreme power levels or massive-scale existances entertaining.

I gave those suggestions because I didn't want to see Phoebe die without putting up what I saw as a proper fight.)
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 03, 2021, 08:16:02 pm
((I am 80% done. Holy shit this is a lot of writing.))
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2021, 10:10:20 pm
[15][25][24][12]
William drops down beside you, resplendent in demonic armor. He crouches low, an Inferno Shotgun in one hand and a cutter hilt in the other. A laugh echoes down the canyon from his curled lips. His helmet seals shut around his head, replacing his smiling face with the twisted, savage grin of a demon. His augmented muscles flex within the armor.

Another man drops down beside you. Eric is a hulking beast now. Spikes of silvery metal rip through his coat, running down his back. Eyes of grey gleam with a malignant light through his gasmask. Every muscle in his body bulges unnaturally against his clothing. A chunk of steel barricade is crudely strapped to his arm-- and a savage, steel axe gleams in the other. Black ichor covers him. It drips from his tattered greatcoat to the soaked earth below.

You hear a click from behind you, and glance back to see Murdach levelling a massive las-rifle at the abomination. The man menaces in his eight foot powered armor. Its shiny black carapace marked with scratch and scar, while covered in the blood of abomination. A grenade launcher fixes on the Plague Lord’s every move. There is no expression that you can see from the ancient Pirate, but you know his resolve hasn’t faltered.

Above you, a light catches your eyes. Two wings of cold, blue fire spread from Emma’s back as she stops to levitate above you. She brushes some hair from her face with a gloved hand. ‘For Polly’ gleams in one of her hands, and a nimbus of hydrogen fire forms in the other as it drops from her face. You catch her gaze and give her a smile. She returns it, soft. “Cephie sends her relativistic regards.”

You raise your brow in confusion.

The Plague Lord stares at its new foes. Perhaps in shock, in confusion, or perhaps in savage joy at the sheer amount of potential meals that have come to surround it. Its many lips split, and it gives a roar of rage-- William and Eric move in quickly--

Emma ticks her head upward. You lift up on your wings, following her out of the Plague Lord’s range. Las-gun lights flash from the canyon below as the battle is joined. William, Eric, and Murdach distract the Plague Lord while you and Emma confer in the sky above the battleground. You watch as Eric rends flesh, as William carves organs, and Murdach sends round after round of explosive ammunition into the fray.

“I need pi--”

Emma draws close, holding energy capsules in her hand. You press them into your mouth wordlessly, swallowing them down. Her thin fingers dance along your shield’s buckle as she undoes it and replaces it with her own. Strapping the worn, weak shield to her chest, she gives you a wane smile. Her body presses against your own, and your eyes meet.

“I love you, Phoebe.” She whispers. “Thank you. For everything.”

You bite back the laugh and smile at her instead. “I love you too--”

“And I’m sorry.”

You blink. “For what?”

Emma doesn’t have to speak. A tear drips down her cheek, and she leans in, planting a kiss upon your lips. Then, in a flash of light, she’s gone to join the battle raging beneath. Giving you time to meditate on the battle ahead.

[37][25][26]
You bring forth manipulators from the carnage below, crafting them into spiked, rusted rings of iron, floating crystals of silicon and lashing wings of hydrogen plasma. With a switch of processes, you keep them sustained with a twitch of your willpower. Next you gather hydrogen, and incase it spheres of thin silicon. When your orbit fills with these packets, you turn your attention to your ‘arm’.

[33]
Pumping energy into the Plague material you bonded with seems like a bad idea, but it comes naturally, despite your trepidation. Your ‘fingers’ elongate, and your arm convulses. Pain shoots through your shoulder as your arm twists itself into a bladed configuration. You pump hydrogen into the reactor, using the outputted energy to form a blade of ionized radiation and superheated metals.

[40]
You follow this by tweaking your internal chemistry to pump your system full of adrenaline, steroids, and neurochemicals. You trim unnecessary processes, burn old memories, and ‘overclock’ your system. Blood drips from your nose, but the world sharpens. Colors brighten, senses sharpen, and the beating of your heart drums in your ears. You swallow, thirsty for the first time in your short life.

[3]
You begin to consider the possibilities before you. The lines of attack, how the Plague Lord will react to each of your moves--

An explosion from below catches your attention.

“I’m pulling Eric out-- Murdach is dead.” William’s voice is tinny in your ear. His voice is edged in pain--

A shot of light, Emma, flies pass. A shard of silicon embedded in her chest and her dark blood trailing behind her. Droplets of the crimson liquid dance in the starlight. You catch her look-- pain, fear, and helplessness all playing across her fair features when she meets your gaze. She’s pale from blood loss. The shield is a smoking ruin on her chest and the gleaming gun is nowhere to be seen.

You react without thinking. You lift your glimmering arm in an arc and swing one of the compressed hydrogen packets around on an intercept course. A directed bolt of energy ignites the hydrogen and explodes just as the Plague Lord approaches. It screams in pain and Emma makes her escape.

[35 vs. 24]
The approaching Plague Lord doesn’t have time to dodge as thermal energy and shards of silicon wash over it. Flesh blackens and chars with the sudden heat. Black ichor splatters as it tries to twist away from the explosion. Malignant in its cancerous hunger, it turns its attention back to you. Its body is marked with a multitude of wounds from the ferocious battle that your allies waged.

[|||||||||||||||](16/16]
[|||||||||||||||.........] (15/24)

[24 vs. 21]
[21]
You dodge the silicon shards before they can impact your shield. Asserting your willpower to push kinetic energy into the projectiles and blast them into the upper atmosphere. The entity continues to fire upon you, and you dance around the battlefield--

[|||||||||||||||](16/16]
[|||||||||||||||.........] (15/24)

[29 vs 34]
[19]
You swing one of the hydrogen packets around in a sharp arc -- it dodges away, but you fire a blast of energy at it anyway.  The blast radius catches it with a glancing blow. You try to form the exploding hydrogen and silicon into silane, but it realizes your ruse, and winches away the silicon before you can manipulate it.

[|||||||||||||||](16/16]
[||||||||||||||..........] (14/24)

[3 vs 27]
[14 vs. 14]
A silicon shard glances off your shield, and you hiss out a breath of annoyance-- the next few shoot off into the atmosphere as you dodge out of range. You lift your arm, firing off a laser burst and having a silicon shard smash into your shield for your troubles.

[||||||||||||||.](15/16]
[|||||||||||||...........] (13/24)

[3 vs. 29]
[11 vs. 28]
--the Plague Lord moves before you can react. The hydrogen packet breaks apart before you can ignite it-- and glass dust billows against your shield as it retaliates in kind--

[|||||||||||||..](14/16]
[|||||||||||||...........] (13/24)

[1 vs. 36]
You grin with savage triumph as you maneuver yourself into range of the silicon you sent flying into the atmosphere. You grip the red-hot slag as it comes down -- and your grip slips as the Plague Lord seizes hold of the silicon. You try to dodge, but the metal hits your shield with savage force. You have no time to adjust your propulsion and the newtonian reaction sends you spiralling towards the ground.

[||||||||||....](11/16]
[|||||||||||||...........] (13/24)

[20 vs. 36]
[40]
You curl the ring of iron into a forward facing shield as you fall. Silicon slams against iron again and again, the weaker metal shattering against the stronger. You block the minute, shattered remains while simultaneously defending against the man-sized chunks it flings your way. You grit your teeth, trying to rise, but the Plague Lord doesn’t relent. You block each strike of silicon the best you can, but each blow is a contest of strength. A contest you lose. However, due to your manipulation of iron, you retain your shields.

[||||||||||....](11/16]
[|||||||||||||...........] (13/24)

[40 vs. 30]
You shut your eyes, your willpower twitching out to block oncoming blows whenever you sense a shard of silicon approaching. Reaching into the clouds above, into the heart of the swirling storm clouds, you agitate the water and dust molecules and adjust the electromagnetic field surrounding you. Lightning jumps forth from the storm front, striking the Plague Lord with explosive force. Flesh sears, and its willpower reacts erratically-- it falls to the ground below as its silicon manipulation fails.

[||||||||||....](11/16]
[||||||||||..............] (10/24)

[30 vs. 29]
[36][30][3]
You seize the advantage your stunned foe provides. You swing the remaining packages of hydrogen around and, at once, ignite them all with a blast of your ionized appendage. The explosion blasts you back, damaging your shield, but blowing away chunks of the Plague Lord’s flesh.

[|||||||||.....](10/16]
[|||||||.................] (7/24)

[10 vs. 25]
The Plague Lord screeches its static call, screaming in pain and agony -- ...screaming with the voice of a thousand dead worlds.. . You stagger, blinking back the pain that bursts within your skull. You struggle as visions of great cities overwhelmed with abominations devour your mind. Strangely shaped humanoids scream in pain and fear as ...death rains from the stars….

[|||||||||.....](10/16]
[|||||||.................] (7/24)

[28-5 vs. 15]
[16]
You shake yourself back to sense, bringing down weak bolts of lightning to harry your wounded, screaming foe. Rivulets of ichor pour away from the gouges rent by your storm. The scent of charred flesh and ozone burns your nose, amplified by the hallucinations the Plague Lord’s mental assault brings on.

[|||||||||.....](10/16]
[||||||..................] (6/24)

[16-5 vs. 27]
Your vision swims as blood pounds like war drums within your ears. The Plague Lord takes advantage of your lack of focus to hurl spikes of distracting silicon and close the distance between the two of you --

[|||||||||.....](9/16]
[||||||..................] (6/24)

[14-5 vs. 50]
[13-5 vs. 35]
It strikes at you with tentacles of razor and electricity, batting at your shield. You dodge out of the way-- and directly into the path of several shards of silicon. Your shield crackles and breaks in a flash of light. A burst of energy flings you back, but you regain control with the minute adjustments your skill in flight allow.

[||||||........](6/16]
[||||||..................] (6/24)


You halt your fall and stare into the hungering maw of the Plague Lord. Its false form has fallen away to nothing but pale skin hanging limply between twisting masses of black flesh. It growls a low rumbling sound in the pit of its many throats. You grimace, and put distance between you and the beast. It follows. You have time, time to think--

Screwing your eyes shut, you try to shed your skin as you fly away. Your war form, while powerful, is a disturbing experience, and one that requires perfect serenity. Identity, morality, emotion, feeling, pleasure, relationships, all of them must be stripped away until there’s nothing left but the drive to win, the drive to survive, the drive to struggle. Sometimes you wonder if what you manifest is your true humanity. That drive that drove your race to conquer its homeworld, to conquer physics, the galaxy, and even time itself.

--Bullshit.

You twist suddenly--trying to drive your augmented fist into the creature’s core. The Gs of your sudden deceleration pull at your mortal flesh. It hisses, ripping at your armored form with its razor tipped tentacles. It finds purchase, shredding at your ablative plate. You ignore it and activate the fusion laser within your arm. Chunks of Plague Lord fly away from the beam of ionized plasma. It screams in pain--

No. No. No. No! I will not fight as a god-- I die as a human. I die as a mortal!

--you blow away chunk after chunk of Plague Flesh as it ineffectively scrambles at your frame. Its blows start to weaken as you slam your ionized, flaming fist into its form with savage fury. Pieces break away. Pieces char. The monster screams--

I. Am. Free. Godsdamnit, and I will die that way!

It rips through your armor, but doesn’t draw blood. You, on the other hand, draw plenty of the beast’s foul ichor. Its cries of pain turn into whimpers as it begins to fall to the ground below. You do not relent in your assault. You follow it down, screaming in rage. You continue to pummel it even as the ground shakes beneath your feet, even as an explosion lights up the distant western horizon.

You slam your fiery fist into its unmoving form again and again. Silicon sprouts from the ground around you, turning into floating orbs of glassy metal. Iron sprouts and rusts. Chlorine condenses into a fog of choking death, and still you beat the Plague Lord until nothing remains but a smoking carcass of pulverized flesh and bone.

You heave deep breaths and gather yourself. Then, with an adjustment of the force calculations of your wings, you rise to the skies and return to the battlefield. The war wages on, but your part is done. The Plague Lord is neutralized--

“Load the Antimatter shells.”

On a cliff side far from the Great Crater you watch as annihilation rains down on the Plague Army. A burning flame, a holy flame, washes over the battlefield. Great cylinders of ash and dust rise from the earth to scourge the infestation that haunted your planet and nearly drove you and your people to ruin. Hundreds of thousands died to stop the storm in its tracks. And, thanks to you, they succeeded. They lay the metaphorical laurel of victory at your feet.

But with this battle, you have gained a victory greater than anything.

Phoebe won. The mortal girl, stranded on this planet less than three years ago conquered herself. She turned away from divinity and dark temptation. She spat in the face of gods and kings and remained mortal. The light of antimatter devastation bathes her in its baptismal light. She’s free. No longer chained by the constructs of her birth, of her rage, of her ambition. She surrenders only to the path of contentment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2021, 10:11:31 pm
Ten years later, chronologically...

Phoebe wrenches a plate of ablative alloy into place. Her arm hisses as hydrogen fires heat a rivet of complex composite alloy. With a hiss, it seals into place, and she tightens the material before it can slip. With a grimy hand, she wipes at her sweating brow and grins at her handicraft. Her personal vessel, The Phoenix still looks like a loose collection of parts and hoses, but the passing of time is turning the collection into a beautiful vessel.

An attendant rushes in from another part of the dry-docked vessel, clutching a data scroll in hand. “Lady Protector, Madam Thornton is requesting your presence at the autumn ball in--”

“Tell her to get Cephie--” Phoebe starts.

“She says they’re serving Skarinite cuisine.” The young woman interrupts.

“--I will attend. I suppose.” Phoebe sighs, and moves to leverage the other end of the ablative plate into place. “Don’t worry about sending her a message. I’ll tell her at home, tonight.”

“And you have a visitor as well.”

“If it’s Mister Eric, tell hi--”

“He says his name is Magnus.”

The ablative plate slams into the hangar floor.


The looming crisis pushes you back into the state of your ‘childhood’. You freely open your mind to the Ancestors. For a decade you only sought their council on matters of great importance, and you tried to rule as you were taught. You purged the Plague from the world. You established a ...working representative democracy. You abolished debt-slavery. You established schools and training programs. And most importantly, you prepared for war with Magnus.

Under Minister Geoyde your economy boomed. WIth the Plague gone, McCreary’s Rest flourished. Technology spread with the removal of limitations. New corporations formed and spearheaded growth in fields previously forbidden. Economic information from thousands of planets flooded in, and, after a time, so did a Planetary Development company.

They provided your world with a space elevator-- for a cut of future profits. Ships were launched, asteroid mining began in earnest with the help of subcontractors, and Mcreary’s planet grew wealthy rapidly.

With the majority of your world still geared toward war, it was difficult to turn it to peace. Many of the current senators are of military stock, and it shows. The industry of your planet churns out weapons of war and conquering armies with alarming frequency. It was only a matter of time before other planets fell under the sway of McCreary’s Rest. Your economy grew even stronger with the tributes that flowed in from your newfound ‘colonies’.

Your armies are...terrifying. Half Plagued Zealots screaming your name as they throw themselves into battle. Thornton Warmachines, Loomed for war and devotion. Destructive Space Pirates, savage Outlander Warlords, and lockstep Crusaders. All of them spread your empire into the neighboring stars under the cruel efficiency of William and subtle calculations of Isela.

You tried to slow the wars, but made no progress. You were slowly ousted by legal coups until the People’s Senate, the Noble Chamber, and the Elective Council had supplanted you entirely. They kept your promises and honored your treaties, so you, without much fanfare, retired to an ornate palace. Then, when the Spaceport was complete, to one of the Hangars assigned to you. You formed a small corporation and began to manufacture your own spacefaring vessel -- having nothing left to do and a firm distaste for politics.

The Noble sits comfortably at your desk within the hangar. He turns his head to flash you a wry smile, and shock burns through you. Your heart pounds in your chest, drowning out cognizant thought with the drums of war. A spike of adrenaline, once easily managed with an adjustment of your internal chemistry runs amok with your body. He lifts a hand, and you tense.

“A space elevator and dock? Already? Bravo!”

You blink--

“I’m sorry, was that a compliment?” You question, confused.

“Yes! This savage world is developing splendidly. I think, in a hundred years, it will be completely developed.” He rises, and you flinch again, but he only strides to the window to cast his gaze to the developing planet below. “You know, the [Empyror/ess] was disappointed. It was expected that you would bring about an Ascension similar to his own.”

“I decided against it.”

“I see. For once the hammer broke before the ingot did. And what are your plans now?”

“I leave with whoever wants to come. Explore. Fight. Relax. Whatever. Where’s your flee--”

“Cephiela included?”

“If she wants to.” You pause, “And if she has release to do so.”

“Consider it done.” Magnus shrugs. “I want to broker a deal, daughter of Sol, before I return to the Core.”

“And what would that be?”

“You died, here, on this planet, and, when I arrived, I placed it under my protection after being moved to tears by your amazing story of heroism and self-sacrifice.” He wipes away a tear, “Your people kept myths about you, but I confirmed that you were indeed dead. No pirate or vassal empire is stupid enough to oppose me-- you get everything you want. Freedom. No bounty on your head and your planet is safe and sound.”

“What do you get?”

“You die.”

Magnus pauses as your hand strays to the collar around your neck--

“Metaphorically, of course. You don’t interfere in any Empyreal politics. You start no great wars, no grand revolutions, no all-encompassing crusades. You fade away into myth as you explore the rim and never return to the Empyre proper.”

“That’s...that’s all?” You tilt your head, keeping your gaze fixed upon the Noble. “You have a deal, Magnus The Third. I will fade into obscurity -- but if anything happens to this world or my loved ones…” You trail off, letting your willpower radiate outward. Even bound within three nullification collars the metal walls around you creak with the strain of your power. “I will burn everything you hold dear.”

A smile flickers across his lips. “It's a deal, Phoebe, Daughter of Sol.”

The words take root as the two of you hash out a legal contract and repeat it in High Empyreal.

“I’ll see you around, Phoebe.” Magnus offers, letting your hand fall from his grip.

“No, you won’t.”

Magnus pauses in the doorway. “You’re right. I won’t.”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- Act V: The End
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2021, 10:13:42 pm
Five years later, relatively...

You sit in the soft grass overlooking a great mountain valley. Two suns dip low in the lazy afternoon sky. Just behind you, a moon begins to crest the horizon. Night will be falling soon, and the temperatures will plunge from the beautiful balmy breeze you feel into frigid cold. You care not. Emma is curled beside you. Her pencil scribbles a drawing out on the rough paper as she commits the planet to memory within one of the many sketchbooks she carries with her to each new world.

Cephie should be around her, somewhere, and so should Moore. Probably playing with Mitch and his pack of rambunctious pups. You tuck your legs up under your coat and try to locate them by willpower alone. Unable to, you shrug and look out over the horizon once more. A breeze ruffles Emma’s hair, sending the red strands dancing. You smile. She scowls and playfully nudges you in the side.

I’m safe now. Sorry--sorry I don’t talk much to you, anymore. There’s no reason to. Not anymore. There’s no war. No battle. No great enemy to vanquish. Nothing to rule. Nothing I can’t handle. Eric has been elected Lord Protector in my absence. William and Isela are carving out an empire. Nicky...she passed a few years ago. I was by her side. She seemed happy -- she crafted a peaceful world for her people and died happy about it.

Me, Emma, Cephie, Moore, and some household attendants just drift from world to world. We occasionally return to McCreary’s rest for resupply and repair, but we never stay too long. You wouldn’t even recognize it! The Holy City stretches as far as the eye can see. The people are happy, healthy, and fat! It has a fleet and merchants from the Rim travel to trade-- I’m...I’m rambling.

Thank you for everything you’ve done. I know...I know you only had the best intentions at heart. I’m sorry if I disappointed you, but I hope you’re happy with your daughter.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2021, 10:19:14 pm
After the End:
A great God of Control and Nature once kept the fanatics of McCreary’s planet turned inward. In its death throes it baptized a new god. One born in battle, in hardship, and of devastation. Phoebe Gainer, The Phoenix of Sol, rose from the ashes of McCreary’s Planet to lead her people to glory over the Plague infection that threatened to devour her new home. While it cost the young demigod her blood, her body, and her innocence, the war never claimed her soul. God and Man alike tempted her with powers untold and she retained her humanity. But the people of McCreary’s Planet never truly recovered from the mental strain of their generation long war.

When the final fires of the McCrearian Plague War ended, it left millions of hardened men and women unable to practice their craft. Even with the wealth and career options provided, many of them continued to ply the only trade they truly knew.

The warring factions of the planet united beneath the McCreary’s Rest Alliance, also known as the MRA. The technical aptitude of the Skarinite Pirates, the savage manpower of the Outlanders, and the cruel ambitions of the Families let slip the beast of war on a galaxy recovering from the Plague Advent. Crusaders, Warmachines, Plague Zealots and Outlander clansmen marched across planet after planet. After eighty years, the conquest of the surrounding stellar space was slowed only by the arrival of a Empyreal Naval Fleet.

The Holy Fortress State of SEED grew to be the industrial and technological powerhouse of the MRA. While the initial blow of the Holy City’s destruction and the total war that followed caused significant damage to the economy, Minister Geoyde’s masterful manipulation of currency created a period of rapid economic growth. New corporations took advantage of leaked technological data to modernize the primitive industries of the Fortress State. The new Holy City now stretches from one end of the Holy Land to the other, stopped only by the antimatter scorched wasteland to the west.

With its battlecruiser grounded upon Mcreary’s Rest, the Skarinites joined the MRA without fanfare, having been one of the original alliance. The vessel was stripped and turned into Murdach’s Gleam, also known as Crater City. The majority of the population continue to serve as technical advisors and rapid strike forces for the MRA.

Outlanders found their way of life challenged by the hegemony of the MRA, but, in time, submitted themselves to the new ways. The majority of McCreary’s Rest is still considered ‘Outlands’, but with the MRA’s expansion into space the discordant clans that once called them home are scattered across the nearby stars as scouts, prospectors and warriors. Some make a pilgrimage to the birthplace of their culture, but most never return to that caldera of violence.

Many people of note rose in the time of the Pheonix. Some continued their stories and legends after her exile, while some faded into obscurity.

Eric Applegate received the position of Lord Protector of the MRA after Pheobe’s self-imposed exile. His reign, in the history books, is considered a golden age in the MRA’s history, while many more consider him a genocidal dictator. History is never kind, and neither is the strange illness that plagues the Lord Protector. He makes few public appearances, and when he does, it is always with the assistance of a breathing device or in heavy clothing.

Isela, in the prime of her life, became known as one of the greatest military minds of the Rimward Galaxy. With her cunning use of the disparate militaries beneath the MRA’s banner and her push for rapid modernization, she is one of the key factors for the MRA’s expansion into the Galactic Scene. She and Eric married after the arrival of the Empyreal Fleet and she retired to the position of Lady Protector to train the next generation of MRA officers.

William Thornton ruled  the great Fortress State of Thornig. Not much is known about his personal life. Or even if he has one. The man’s one true love appears to be war. His Loomed soldiers served in every heavy assault action the MRA committed to, and he was never far from this vanguard. The Bird of Sol’s Reign never graced him with the wings of his birthright, but with the development of Avernus’ Plaguetech Wing system, he never wanted for them, either.

Silas co-founded Demonic Technologies Unlimited with Queen Avania. His singleminded drive and devotion to the cause of biomechanical and medical sciences led to McCreary’s Rest being known across the Empyre as one of the best providers of cybernetic technology. However, due to his addiction to amphetamines, he recently retired from the public eye citing health reasons.

Queen Avania co-founded Demonic Technologies Unlimited. Immortal, incredibly advanced, and inhumanly intelligent, she pushed the technologies of the MRA one step into the future. However, there are always rumors swirling around the lowest levels of her research labs. Rumors of horrifying and unethical experiments on criminals and ‘blanks’.

Nicole Gainer passed five years after the last day of the Plague War, just before the first warships launched from the MRA’s spaceports. Attended by friends and ‘family’, the battle-hardened soldier died peacefully. Her name graces the largest orbital bombardment vessel in the MRA fleet, and continues to spread fear across the galaxy.

Rekhyt fled the planet as soon as he managed to steal a Skarinite Voidmarine suit. Currently, he operates a MRA unapproved mercenary company. Bloodthirsty, cruel, and successful, he’s the current role model for an entire generation of young Outlanders.



Somewhere in orbit around McCreary’s Rest

“...and how much will her Looming and Conditioning data cost?” Magnus questions, leaning on a throne of pure alabaster white. He neatly crosses his fingers in his lap as he eyes the camera with a dubious look.

“A full Empyreal pardon. Avernus rebuilt...and I’m in control of the project, and reap a fair share of the rewards, as such.” the voice hisses, cybernetically distorted.

“What prevents me from, say, just taking it?” He tilts his head.

“I’m close to producing a viable alternative. One that won’t succumb to the inherent self destructive behaviors.”

Silence. Magnus flips a black and gold coin. It spins through the air...and it lands on gold. “We will arrange a contract. Do you have a host in mind?”

“Yes. A young man by the name of Moore Thornton.”
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Superdorf on May 09, 2021, 10:46:51 pm
Just dropping in to offer my congratulations, thanks, apologies-- whichever. This game took me through a rough eight months or so; it's good to see the thing tied off.

D'you know, Phoebe's first flight happened on my birthday? Was a special moment.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 09, 2021, 11:03:13 pm
No, but I'm glad that it made an impact. I was going to modify that reserved space but...but I just want to say I appreciate all of you. I know at the end I fell flat with my obligations, but I kept fantasizing about other worlds than McCreary. Other places to visit. Other battles and enemies. Other wonders I could show.

But I slowly came to realize that Phoebe wouldn't want that. My original inspiration was One Piece. A swashbuckling adventure from world to world! But I realized that it wouldn't happen like that. That the characters that I made and that you shaped all had different aspirations and goals that changed my plans.

I started this story after a very rough breakup, during a very... interesting time in my life. It kept me out of trouble and kept me going. After all, how could I update if I was dead or in the military? Lol.

For a long time, it was an obsession of mine. And still is. I want to do more with the setting and the mechanics. But I also realized that holy shit I half-assed this and you deserved better. I plan on cleaning it up and reformatting it for ease of reading. I want to make it a webcomic-esque adventure down the line, like Homestuck, but need to aquire some capital and make a better plan.

So, I still want to ask some questions, but for now. Thank all of you for the interest and inspiration. I'm glad to have been your gm, and I hope that if I do another game I can be lucky enough to count on some of you as players.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Eschar on May 10, 2021, 01:14:48 am
Thank you for this.

The game is beautiful.

Long live Phoebe.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: ZBridges on May 10, 2021, 01:27:53 am
This game has been an amazing rollercoaster from beginning to end.  Thanks for putting up with us and sticking it out.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Devastator on May 10, 2021, 03:41:16 am
It's well done and a real accomplishment that you should be proud of.  Don't sell yourself short.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: King Zultan on May 10, 2021, 08:06:52 am
I've really enjoyed this game from beginning to end and am glad to see it get a proper ending.

Also I still think you could turn this into a book.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 02, 2021, 06:06:57 pm
Ending: My Name is Human (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zbhjRHjbpFQ)! Congratulations. This is one of three possible endings for this period of the game!

((Fun fact, this song is what inspired the game in the first place.))

So, with that final update to that reserved message, the game is finally, truly over! Yayyy! Thank you to everyone.

So, I have a couple of questions, just for my records.

Are you satisfied with the end?

What was your favorite part of the game, and why?

What part did you dislike, and why?

What are your views on the setting?

Would you be willing to play another game in the setting?

What part of the narrative did you like and dislike?

What part of the mechanics did you like and dislike?

Any other criticism, comments, or suggestions would also be greatly appreciated.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: King Zultan on June 03, 2021, 04:43:01 am
Are you satisfied with the end?
I mean out of all the ways it could have ended I think we ended up with the best one. What were the other two endings?

What was your favorite part of the game, and why?
All of it.

What part did you dislike, and why?
Nothing I can think of.

What are your views on the setting?
Not at all what I was expecting when I read the beginning.

Would you be willing to play another game in the setting?
Yes.

What part of the narrative did you like and dislike?
There wasn't any part in particular that I disliked.

What part of the mechanics did you like and dislike?
I didn't see any part to dislike it all seemed pretty straight forward to me.

Any other criticism, comments, or suggestions would also be greatly appreciated.
I have no criticism to give.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 03, 2021, 09:29:58 am
The other two endings are Sol Reborn and Dark Empress. Of course, these paths were locked in during the last battle, and both endings were a failure of sorts. But Phoebe won fair and square, without relying on the godmodes provided.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: ZBridges on June 04, 2021, 02:32:31 am
Are you satisfied with the end?
I am, though I found it surprising that Emma's attitude towards Phoebe changed so suddenly.  I'm also intrigued by the updated epilogue.

What was your favorite part of the game, and why?
I enjoyed all of it, but I thought that the beginning was the most interesting, as that was when we had the least information while exploring a totally unfamiliar and alien world.  I do feel that the setting still has many interesting mysteries.

What part did you dislike, and why?
I actually felt that something was lost when Phoenix became more passive and our roles became less defined, but I do think that the suggestion game format generally doesn't lend itself well to roleplaying.

What are your views on the setting?
It's very interesting and well developed.  I like how we gained knowledge of it over time rather than an infodump at the beginning or something like that.

Would you be willing to play another game in the setting?
Most likely, depending on the specifics.

What part of the narrative did you like and dislike?
I liked the distinction between the players and the entity that actually carried out the suggestions (or chose not to) that developed over time.  Using the powers was difficult for me, as I am pretty ignorant of physics and chemistry, but I still enjoyed making the attempts.  I also like that the Holy City was destroyed, as I feel that players shouldn't receive results that they do not deserve.

Which part of the mechanics did you like and dislike?
I thought that the mechanics behind the powers were unique and interesting.  The mechanics related to non-combat skills may have been less well defined.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Devastator on June 04, 2021, 02:48:56 am
The ending is fine.  It makes sense and it fits with the world.

I liked the early portions.  It liked the exploration and creativity.  It also felt a bit more tense.

I'm feel meeting mysterious contacts would have been better with a more formal relationship.. such as the end-of-act encounters.  Like inside dreams or when the MC is knocked out or horribly wounded or something.. it'd make it more clear what's going on, while confirming that the world we live in and play in is the important one.

I also don't like zalgo text and hidden cryptic statements.  It's already hidden by being cryptic, so why hide it twice?

Setting was good.. it was more solid and well developed than the norm.  About the only unbelievable thing was having a low-population frontier society being contemptous of large numbers of casulties.  Only part I didn't like was that it felt like there wasn't enough time to really explore it before we had to advance to the next stage.

I'd be willing to play another game in the setting, but I can't commit to it, having several games of my own running.

The overarching high level plot seemed quite interesting.  I didn't like how it was so mysterious, however.  I feel it would have been a bit more interesting if there was something else to go on early on, or if the MC was some kind of accident or unexpected situation which the higher powers would have to work with or around.

Mechanics seemed pretty lousy.  There wasn't much information on what our powers actually were, or what we could do or not do, particularly the latter.  Die rolls were of unknown size with unknown modifiers for unknown results.. that's just fine for random events or story-centric gameplay, but I can't call it solid mechanically.  Like it's perfectly fine for background random rolls, but if the mechanics are going to be central to the game, they should work in a somewhat consistant manner.

Overall, I feel like a lower power level would have been more enjoyable, with a bit more planning, but that's anathema to many players and will lead to a lot of people being unwilling or unable to decide things. so.. do what you're good at?  I'd also recommend giving people time to branch out or occasional decisions to make, while always trying to keep the north in mind, that is, the major goals of the current section or story arc.  I'd also want timeskips to be less abrupt, with maybe time for one or two quick events during the timeskip, to help flesh out character development and to allow players to do more long-term development goals.  Phoebe seemed to end up with an army of random characters with random abilities, using random tactics, for instance.. it would have been nice to help work on the army or the friendly character's ability to coordinate.  It also made perfect sense for there to be shortages and privation for the civilians with the war economy running, but there could have been the opportunity to ease one or two of them with effort.. that there was no real opportunity to do.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: SystemsTestCanary on June 09, 2021, 03:00:53 pm
I have created a Fandom wikia at mccreary.fandom.com and filled in a few details about Phoebe.
I think a wiki would be a good way to preserve the project and would be useful to new readers (there are a few!)
Otherwise, I will just fill up the wiki with crappy McCreary fanart made in MS Paint, and nobody wants that.
I am also considering creating a McCreary's Planet Discord server, if there is interest.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: ZBridges on June 10, 2021, 01:53:07 am
That sounds cool.  Are you a reader?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: SystemsTestCanary on June 10, 2021, 06:40:39 am
That sounds cool.  Are you a reader?

Yes, though I started reading later on in the story and currently am trying to catch up from the beginning.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Eschar on June 10, 2021, 01:29:45 pm
Oh! I meant to post my 'ancestral identity' as sent to me by Egar when everyone else did. I forgot to then, but in case anyone is curious:

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on June 20, 2021, 12:48:09 pm
Sweet, a discord! And a fan Wikia. After this week I should be settling into my new position fairly well, and I intend to work on a few things.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: SystemsTestCanary on June 23, 2021, 02:04:57 am
Here is the discord invite.

Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Eschar on September 13, 2021, 11:50:48 pm
Y'all should go vote for McCreary's Planet in the Hall of Legends.

Sorry for necro(?).
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: King Zultan on September 14, 2021, 02:11:08 am
Do I need to vote for it again?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Eschar on September 14, 2021, 09:23:49 am
...is that possible?
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: King Zultan on September 15, 2021, 01:56:59 am
I don't think so, just was wondering if I needed to since it didn't get in.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Eschar on February 09, 2022, 01:05:03 pm
the first post of McCreary's Planet was 2 years ago to this day!
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: King Zultan on February 10, 2022, 04:59:12 am
Dang, it does not feel like that this started two years ago.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Eschar on February 11, 2022, 08:13:53 pm
Dang, it does not feel like that this started two years ago.

oh? does feel like it's been shorter than that, or longer?

It feels a bit shorter than that, to me.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: King Zultan on February 12, 2022, 04:28:03 am
If feels like it started sometime last year.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Eschar on February 13, 2022, 11:52:16 pm
If feels like it started sometime last year.

It did end sometime last year after all.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: King Zultan on February 14, 2022, 01:43:52 am
Damn my since of time has been all screwed up since the Covid shit started.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Eschar on May 10, 2023, 02:37:31 pm
There are a few images in this thread from Egar and others (superdorf's pixel art comes to mind.) Are they backed up somewhere? Imgur is about to start removing images without an account; the Community Games and Stories dwellers have backed up many of the DF forum games, but I don't know about this thread
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Superdorf on May 10, 2023, 04:49:08 pm
Oh shoot, good point. All my pixel art is backed up, at any rate; I can reupload it somewhere if Imgur goes to pot.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: 19_EgarAlnis on May 10, 2023, 06:18:12 pm
Same with any image I uploaded. Which weren't many. As long as Superdorf has got his, we should be good.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Devastator on May 10, 2023, 07:20:44 pm
I do have an account, and am willing to do some uploads if anyone wants the space.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: King Zultan on May 11, 2023, 01:27:42 am
It doesn't really seem like that long ago this was still going but I don't remember there being pictures in this.
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Eschar on May 11, 2023, 09:42:45 am
There were only a few, maps and such. Egar says he's got his backed up, so we're good. The only other images were Superdorf's pixel art, which he has also backed up
Title: Re: McCreary's Planet -- (FINISHED)
Post by: Superdorf on May 12, 2023, 12:52:06 am
Here's a fresh upload of my pixel art from this thread:
https://dffd.bay12games.com/file.php?id=16687