I made a short album at the beginning of last month. If you have any critique I'd be happy to hear it.
Ok, here's a bit of critique from an amateur/hobbyist composer.
First, some of the tracks are louder than the others, so the listener has to adjust the volume between them, which is a bit annoying. Second, the sound clips quite badly on the first track (not sure if intentional or not, but regardless, it's not a good thing); the clipping on the kick was quite unbearable with headphones even after turning the volume waaay down on my device. Third, the sound balance of some instruments was a bit off: on the fourth track especially the sound with the decimator/degrader effect was definitely too loud. However, you apparently didn't use much time to make the album, so these kind of things are easy to miss (you sort of become "deaf" to these things after listening to your own tracks for a while).
That said, you clearly had some nice ideas in your tracks and they conveyed different kinds of moods and had my imagination running. I'd say get the volume and clipping issues fixed - maybe even ask someone else to master the tracks - and use more time on the structure of the tracks, and you'll have a much better album at hand.
Anyway, keep on making music - I'll gladly listen to what you next come up with!