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Finally... => Creative Projects => Topic started by: DFNewb on April 29, 2016, 07:44:43 pm

Title: Rate my short story. (<30seconds read)
Post by: DFNewb on April 29, 2016, 07:44:43 pm

Within the confines of four walls, the Friend of None weeps. His only visitor is his shadow, whom leaves at sunset. Cold lonely nights is when true freedom is experienced. Escapism through dreams, a natural distraction from the world. If only he could sleep forever.

Title: Re: Rate my short story. (<30seconds read)
Post by: Dozebôm Lolumzalìs on April 30, 2016, 12:45:02 pm

Good. It's who not whom btw.