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Title: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 22, 2017, 01:08:52 am
SolFed Level 3 Detention Station A-1141-A-F "Big Red"

A colorful mess of beings from all across the Four Arms of the galaxy, all having fallen into the custody of the Solar Federation for one reason or another. But whatever the reason for their imprisonment, an opportunity approaches for a handful of them. For the Ithica, a ship owned by enterprising Kiric caravaneers, has come calling, looking for manpower on a most interesting venture. And for the prisoners who find themselves leased out, this might just be the chance to earn their freedom, if they can return alive.

Little do any of them know, some of the oldest secrets in the cosmos are about to be uncovered...


(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/224772889449070592/337445959837548544/ErrantSpaceTitleCard.png)

The Game:
The format here is going to be mission-based, with time to roam around/investigate and choose direction between them. When making your character, keep the lore in mind but also remember that the galaxy is a big place, home to a beings of all shapes and sizes.

As I prioritize RP and story, when you make your character you should start with a concept, and we'll hash out the mechanics, GM to player. We can begin that with a "sketch" as detailed in the mechanics writeup, which is in the following google doc:

Mechanics to be found here (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EbtL53biqS9rnsTV1zM1irDLgAls94hk7JL2dtH_4iU/edit?usp=sharing)


Note: you will need a reason for your character's imprisonment at the onset

The Setting

Faster Than Light travel. Achieved via a method commonly known as the Threadweave, based on principles of quantum gravity and dark matter. Ships can follow the Threads strung through the beads of stellar gravity wells. Consequently, it's easy to find Threads up and down the arms of the galaxy, but very difficult to Thread across the sparser areas between arms. With few bridges, travel between arms often requires moving closer to the center of the galaxy and circling around. And so the regions of the Galaxy are defined by its four arms: Jaune, Verde, Violet, and Rouge.

There are large empires, covering hundreds and even thousands of star systems, but the galaxy is vast and swallows even them. The space between is filled with smaller nations, entities, freeholds, and simply huge expanses of unexplored space. Statistically speaking, more of the galaxy is lawless than isn't. And rumors of strange and mysterious things unknown to science abound...

Mindweave
A relatively well-known though poorly understood phenomenon, the Iylum hypothesize it to be similar to Threadweave, though with consciousness rather than gravity: like a fabric made of a single filament strung between all conscious beings. Even those species with an intuitive connection to it have thus far been unable to create a complete scientific description of its workings. It is believed that any being with self awareness and sufficiently complex thought processes has the potential to manifest these gifts, but becoming attuned is a difficult process and likely requires as much pure luck as effort. Those who are so fortunate develop abilities that generally follow one of two paths: reading, sensing, and/or influencing other minds; and gathering and redirecting physical forces/energies through their mental processes and senses. Despite the baffling nature of Mindweave, attempts to study it have concluded so far that, at least, it falls within the laws of nature. It cannot create or destroy energy: at the fundamental level, it only redirects and rearranges. Mindweaving is often associated with a blue glow, as the transformation of energy can produce cherenkov radiation.

Though most people would say they've heard of this phenomenon, few would say they believe it exists.


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Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 22, 2017, 01:09:13 am
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Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 22, 2017, 01:09:31 am
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Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on July 22, 2017, 03:45:50 am
Do you already have a cast lined up or is this open for signups?

EDITS:

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Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WunderKatze on July 22, 2017, 03:49:20 am
:D

Making a character.

Spoiler: WIP (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Sudurandom on July 22, 2017, 07:55:30 am
I'm glad to see this still going.
A few questions:
What does engineering: technician cover?
Is basic piloting something everyone has or do you need a rank in it to fly at all?
How much do you suggest we put into combat as a baseline?(I don't want my character to be a liability but he's not a trained fighter.)
If i dump skullduggery would i be able to use engineering and computer science to disable or bypass security systems?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 22, 2017, 12:06:46 pm
Technician is for repairs/maintenance. You can attempt to pilot vehicles without investing in pilot, and basic civilian things like a forklift or a speedboat wouldn't have too high of a DC (those fall under "small crafts" btw).

Do you already have a cast lined up or is this open for signups?

Signups. Only got one or two people who actually submitted a character idea  during the interest thread.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: TopHat on July 22, 2017, 02:56:37 pm
PTW and possibly submit a character if I can think of an idea.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Roboson on July 22, 2017, 03:06:13 pm
Character sketch for a Rtalis engineer/pilot. Don't have the backstory worked out yet, but I thought I'd go ahead and get the conversation started on this character.
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Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 22, 2017, 04:25:05 pm
As a Rtalis, your character will likely have a personal vehicle for traversing pedestrian areas, so they'll have different capabilities when inside that. Rtalis are generally uncomfortable when having to deal with gravity without water to support them.

I should probably make a doc with additional info about established races if anyone chooses to play them.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Sudurandom on July 22, 2017, 07:05:25 pm
Name: Spar Ki of the Thread Rider
Race: Martlon
Role: Engineer
Crime: Illegal salvage
Description:A very tall martlon (1.2m!) he has light grey fur with black markings.
Spar is friendly, easy going, and like most martlon engineers always eager to salvage, fix, or "upgrade" something. Perhaps a bit too eager.

Skills and proficiencies:
Science 3
- Phisical science
- Computer science
Engineering 5
- Electronics
- Mechanics
- Technician
Ranged weapons 1
Agility 2
Skullduggery -1
- Security

Stats:
Defense 15
Armour 5
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Roboson on July 22, 2017, 07:15:40 pm
As a Rtalis, your character will likely have a personal vehicle for traversing pedestrian areas, so they'll have different capabilities when inside that. Rtalis are generally uncomfortable when having to deal with gravity without water to support them.

I should probably make a doc with additional info about established races if anyone chooses to play them.

Right, completely aquatic. May have to decide on a different race then.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: crazyabe on July 22, 2017, 07:18:17 pm
PTW.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on July 22, 2017, 10:00:01 pm
As a Rtalis, your character will likely have a personal vehicle for traversing pedestrian areas, so they'll have different capabilities when inside that. Rtalis are generally uncomfortable when having to deal with gravity without water to support them.

I should probably make a doc with additional info about established races if anyone chooses to play them.

Don't they also sometimes have a pressure-suit? Don't think they can walk, though.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Roboson on July 22, 2017, 10:04:00 pm
As a Rtalis, your character will likely have a personal vehicle for traversing pedestrian areas, so they'll have different capabilities when inside that. Rtalis are generally uncomfortable when having to deal with gravity without water to support them.

I should probably make a doc with additional info about established races if anyone chooses to play them.

Don't they also sometimes have a pressure-suit? Don't think they can walk, though.

Yeah, but its a big hassle to work out all the details for that. Plus, I think I did my points wrong. Soooo, I'm going to think of a better character.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 22, 2017, 10:49:26 pm
As a Rtalis, your character will likely have a personal vehicle for traversing pedestrian areas, so they'll have different capabilities when inside that. Rtalis are generally uncomfortable when having to deal with gravity without water to support them.

I should probably make a doc with additional info about established races if anyone chooses to play them.

Don't they also sometimes have a pressure-suit? Don't think they can walk, though.

Yeah, but its a big hassle to work out all the details for that. Plus, I think I did my points wrong. Soooo, I'm going to think of a better character.
Pressure suit is just using your own stats, nothing to figure out there. As for the vehicle, you could think of it more like power armor if you want, it's just the way the Rtalis have found to comfortably navigate the spaces used by land-dwelling creatures. You don't necessarily have to have a personal vehicle if you don't want, but you'd have a lot of options in choosing one. And there's also the option of being air support, even without a mini-vehicle.

Also note that while Rtalis are uncomfortable on land, going around in a wetsuit in Zero-G would almost be like swimming through air.

Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on July 22, 2017, 11:31:50 pm
Hey Hugo, what's the stance on AI power levels/ in the setting? I'm thinking of writing a character from a colony where everyone gets an upload at birth, linked to one big megaprocessor. But since the processing power is split between millions of virtual inhabitants the computer never ends of giving too much power to any one consciousness... until a great purge wipes them all out and replaces them with a handful of hyper-consciousnesses who end up learning Augury and creating a mini illusory reality that traps the human occupants.

It's just an idea for a backstory, so I'll pick something else if it's too disruptive for the setting.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: SOLDIER First on July 22, 2017, 11:34:34 pm
PTW
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 24, 2017, 06:50:16 pm
Hey Hugo, what's the stance on AI power levels/ in the setting? I'm thinking of writing a character from a colony where everyone gets an upload at birth, linked to one big megaprocessor. But since the processing power is split between millions of virtual inhabitants the computer never ends of giving too much power to any one consciousness... until a great purge wipes them all out and replaces them with a handful of hyper-consciousnesses who end up learning Augury and creating a mini illusory reality that traps the human occupants.

It's just an idea for a backstory, so I'll pick something else if it's too disruptive for the setting.
So they get a backup on the colony's big computer? Or are they living in VR? Is this a different character from the backstory you posted earlier?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on July 24, 2017, 09:02:35 pm
Eh, I discarded the idea since it was too cumbersome. The idea was that the uploads are hosted on the station's big computer and they receive sense information from the human they accompany, so all humans get a AI's that think exactly like them. This negates the issue of AI's acting on their own, because it's a copy of the same person.

I basically had 3 questions:

1) Can AI's have human-level intelligence?
2) Is it possible to create an AI copy of a person?
3) Can sufficiently powerful AI's use Augury?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 24, 2017, 09:22:30 pm
1) Yes. Part of the "Family" of Earthlings are the various AI constructs they've created.
2) Yes. Tricky though, but it could be done with a high level of fidelity if someone's brain was hooked up to a system suitable for that purpose.
3) Yes. Though like everyone else they'd have to figure out how to connect to the Mindweave on their own. Having a lot of processing power wouldn't automatically let you Mindweave, it'd just be useful once you managed to attune yourself.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on July 24, 2017, 11:04:53 pm
Alright, cool. I think I'm sticking with the current character though, unless I get a sudden burst of inspiration from something. *Starts voraciously consuming anime*
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: HighEndNoob on July 25, 2017, 11:52:23 pm
Well this seems interesting. Working on a character.

EDIT: Here it is.

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Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: armach on July 26, 2017, 05:55:28 am
I think I'm gonna go for a combat focused character.
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Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: TopHat on July 26, 2017, 08:32:40 am
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Spoiler: Sketch (click to show/hide)

Here's my application; some sections slightly work-in-progress.
EDIT - fairly major changes to (later) bio.
EDIT 2 - fairly minor changes to appearance and crime sections; slight modification of defence/armour balance.
EDIT 3 - the word 'sentance' removed from final sentance in bio. 'Work in progress' warning struck through; I think I'm pretty much finished.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 26, 2017, 11:26:47 am
Unfortunately, with crimes like that there's no way SolFed would let him go.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on July 26, 2017, 01:50:08 pm
So grievous political crimes are out of the question?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: TopHat on July 26, 2017, 02:10:16 pm
I had a feeling that might be a problem, but couldn't really think of much else that'd have him end up in a civilian prison as opposed to a military one.
Though come to think of it looting might work. Or a spot of post-war piracy. Hmm...
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 26, 2017, 02:25:57 pm
So grievous political crimes are out of the question?
Might be some room, but threats to Federal security probably won't get parole.

I had a feeling that might be a problem, but couldn't really think of much else that'd have him end up in a civilian prison as opposed to a military one.
Though come to think of it looting might work. Or a spot of post-war piracy. Hmm...
That would work.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Roboson on July 26, 2017, 02:39:49 pm
I think I'll stick with my original character, I'll update my stats, but they're going to be fairly similar.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: TopHat on July 26, 2017, 04:42:02 pm
Submission has been edited. Perhaps still slightly on the no-parole side, though, so I'm more than happy to make further changes.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: IcyTea31 on July 29, 2017, 02:03:01 pm
I'll make a sketch. Concept is the diplomancer archetype with a dash of manipulative yet loveable rogue and a bit of Jack the Ripper.

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Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 29, 2017, 09:56:33 pm
Submission has been edited. Perhaps still slightly on the no-parole side, though, so I'm more than happy to make further changes.

Nah, that works.

Note that SolFed doesn't do life sentences, due to certain prisoners not being susceptible to old age. You could wrack up a sentence of centuries but it's hardly fair (or cost effective) to lock up an android "till he drops dead." Of course, for many organics wracking up a centuries-long sentence would be functionally the same as a life sentence.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Kashyyk on July 30, 2017, 05:36:35 am
What are SolFed's laws regarding Artificial Intelligence? Do they get all the rights of an organic, or are they considered to be tools with a personality?

Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: IcyTea31 on July 30, 2017, 08:19:02 am
What's the naming convention for Rtalis?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on July 30, 2017, 02:31:13 pm
What are SolFed's laws regarding Artificial Intelligence? Do they get all the rights of an organic, or are they considered to be tools with a personality?

Depends on if they're sapient or not. But there's politics about it. You'll find both shipboard computers doing their job without complaints, despite being sentient, and free-roaming AI.

What's the naming convention for Rtalis?

They tend to go for mononyms. Some examples are: R'malos, Atlos, Kavr'kis, T'lmetl, J'vetis, Kamlotl

I'm going to get that lore doc up after Ludum Dare is over
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on August 12, 2017, 12:20:34 pm
I've made the doc, right now it provides additional information on Rtalis: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eZIdFoofkCcn20qbdtjbiAP9tZDUvpo_Ucy95N_hjEw/edit?usp=sharing

IcyTea, I like your sketch so far. I should note that the Rtalis "Academy" is closer to this (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Royal_Society) than being an actual school though.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: IcyTea31 on August 12, 2017, 05:25:16 pm
Second draft of backstory written.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on August 13, 2017, 01:15:30 pm
Sounds good! Also, looks like all folks have been editing their submissions rather than reposting, so I have missed some updates. Gonna go take a look at those now.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on August 13, 2017, 03:51:01 pm
-snip-
Question is, why is he in SolFed space jail? This seems like a planetary level conflict.

-snip-
Wat

-snip-
Discussed elsewhere, still seems alright. You may want to link that writeup you sent me to here though.

DivideByZero, are you still working on another character idea, or would you like to go with the one you posted the sketch for earlier?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on August 15, 2017, 03:10:50 pm
DivideByZero, are you still working on another character idea, or would you like to go with the one you posted the sketch for earlier?

The stats for the sketch and general concept I'm sticking with, though there's one element I was briefly toying with the idea of including (Having an AI in a cell phone. It can't hack or really do... much. It just a companion.)
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: IcyTea31 on August 19, 2017, 12:41:18 am
I'm considering raising my character's Mindweaver skill from 4 to 5 (and reducing Social skill from 4 to 3). How huge an improvement (and reduction) would this be? In other words, what do these numbers actually mean in these sketches?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on August 20, 2017, 07:50:14 pm
These numbers will be the basis from which I create the final stats for your character. There may be adjustments based on your background, and situational bonuses or features. Purely mechanically, a 5 in a skill category means you get +5 to skill checks in that category, plus more for skills you're proficient in.

Mindweave gets a tad more complicated, but a 5 would make Mindweaving the primary focus of your character's skillset. A skill rank 1 Augur would be giving suggestions and minorly messing with perceptions, while a skill rank 5 Augur could do things like hypnotize a crowd of people at once or weave large perception filters.

Your character's backstory would be well within a 4, but 5 would make sense as well, given how few mistakes were made in that crime spree (at least in terms of Mindweaving: piloting is another story :P )
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: IcyTea31 on September 28, 2017, 03:44:06 pm
It's been over a month since the last post. Is the game cancelled? I'd hope not, considering how interesting and thought-out the setting seems to be.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on September 28, 2017, 05:10:51 pm
It's not dead. I think I thought there'd be more character concepts, but at this point it's probably best to just move on to statting everyone out. As long as we have at least 5 workable concepts. I'll get to it when I return from class.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: AbstractTraitorHero on September 28, 2017, 05:24:32 pm
I think you would like another character? Becuase I would be happy to join if you will have the one known as Ath :3
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on September 28, 2017, 05:38:38 pm
Alright, show me what you got!
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: AbstractTraitorHero on September 28, 2017, 06:13:33 pm

Added backstory.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on September 30, 2017, 11:52:57 pm
Almost done compiling the currently submitted sheets. Looks like it'll be up either late tonight or some time tomorrow.

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Okay, I believe that is correct in terms of stats and I would assume the rest is going to be handled over pms and working together to build a character that fits the world?

I'll also need a backstory, posted here.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on October 01, 2017, 12:26:42 am
Let us know if there's any input you need.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: sprinkled chariot on October 01, 2017, 01:42:19 am
Are all player slots taken?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 01, 2017, 12:13:59 pm
There's likely room for one more, especially as some of the folks who posted I haven't been able to get a response from since.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: sprinkled chariot on October 01, 2017, 03:15:01 pm
Retired bot.
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Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: IcyTea31 on October 01, 2017, 04:02:16 pm
I tweaked my sheet, both crunch and fluff. We'll need to discuss some specifics later.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 02, 2017, 01:29:26 am
[Expletive deleted] this is going to take longer than expected, partly due to new entries to evaluate and partly due to my net dying for an extended period of time today. But I've kept this waiting for too long.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 02, 2017, 04:30:31 pm
Retired bot.
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Since this is the first pass on this, as compared to the others, I'll go ahead.

For the skill categories, which you have under "stats" here, you get 10 points to distribute between the categories themselves and 6 proficiencies to select among the skills within. You've distributed the points to individual skills instead, which isn't quite how this works. For instance, instead of putting 3 points into Computer Science directly, you'd have 3 points in Science, and a proficiency in Computer Science.

As for the fluff, it's good. The only thing is I'd say Wild Space Kraken is probably one of SolFed's numerous defense contractors, and so the "doctrine" would be theirs rather than that of SolFed in general, since I have different plans for those.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: TopHat on October 02, 2017, 05:11:04 pm
Glad to see this is still going. I'll have to look over my sheet and see what there is to tweak when I get the time.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: AbstractTraitorHero on October 02, 2017, 06:57:39 pm
Added backstory.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 02, 2017, 11:02:05 pm
Here's all the sheets, as is, without additional mechanics added. I need to contact some of these people to see if they're still in, as unfortunately they didn't get as much conversation as others.

Let's get the fluffs finalized

Theta-Rho-348

See previous post of mine

Lilith Hartmeißner

Overall I'm okay with this, but one juvenile destroying an entire planet's ecosystem seems kind of extreme, unless maybe it was more of a small planetoid.

Raioyris

I am really confused by this one. Who/what/why did this come to exist? What happened to land Raioyris in prison?

-snip-

Stats are still good, but we still don't have any fluff on your Rtalis. But not to worry, you can still write one up.

Spar Ki of the Thread Rider

Concept is still good, but you could probably flesh him out a bit more, give us some more details about personality/life/etc?

Theodosius Kantos

Again, I'm still not sure why he'd be locked up in SolFed space prison, as that seems like an entirely planetary conflict? It sounds like he'd just be locked up on Kosmosi.

Also, I notice you've got his balance of Augury vs Actuation, but he doesn't actually have any points in Mindweaving. Did you intend him to? It's alright if not, it's just that step is unnecessary if your char isn't a Mindweaver.

Seven
Still good, though your backstory fluff is still on a google doc where most folk's can't see it.

2 points in Mindweaver, all Actuation. We shall hash out your specific Mindweave talents in the next step.

Name: Sebastian Burrell
Looks good to me, being a space pirate is something one could get imprisoned for but also still qualify for parole, so that issue's solved.

1 point in Mindweaving, leaning towards Augury, we shall discuss what that gets you later. Probably some minor perceptual/mind related things, along with the ability to minorly tweak things in the physical space around you.

V'ralis (alias "Blue Shadow")

Looks good! Only problem is that once incarcerated by SolFed, the Academy probably wouldn't have any sway over R'valis' fate. The deal to lease out his services from prison would be arranged entirely between SolFed and the Kiric caravaneers. Though the Academy would certainly want to know about the outcome of the mission.

5 in Mindweaving, with full focus on Augury. Going by fluff you'll probably be working with powerful memory-altering abilities, and possibly straight-up mind control. 5 in Mindweaver certainly means you're potent enough to go for that if you want. We'll discuss your style and abilities.

Cascadia Alentrussel The III

We'll have to cut off or change the last bit of the backstory. The premise of this game is that your character is imprisoned, and being leased out for a potentially lethal mission carries the reward of a significantly reduced or even negated sentence.

5 in Mindweaving with a slight lean towards Actuation. There's a lot of options here, just as a point of reference these numbers would let you lift and throw a person with your mind (20 Actuation would be throwing cars) if you want telekinesis, but you don't necessarily have to go the telekinesis route for Actuation. Though as something you might want to think about for fluff, 5 in Mindweaving means your character has dedicated a large amount of time and effort to getting powerful at it.



Well, 10 entries. I think two are probably not going to participate (though we'll see), which probably leaves us with 8. I think I'll be able to work with that party size but it's a bit larger than I originally planned. Might have to trim one or two in the end though.

Looks like we probably have quite a few Mindweavers. Only a couple really powerful ones though, so it we should have enough mundane skills to be well rounded.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Roboson on October 02, 2017, 11:17:09 pm
Will write up a good story sometime when I'm more awake.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on October 02, 2017, 11:44:31 pm
Lilith Hartmeißner
Overall I'm okay with this, but one juvenile destroying an entire planet's ecosystem seems kind of extreme, unless maybe it was more of a small planetoid.

Mmmmm it does test the limits of the capabilities of self-replicating machinery in the setting.

She didn't design all the stuff herself though. She just inherited it from a station where almost everything is automated. So I'd justify myself in that it's not 100% her own mary-sue-ness, but rather a case of playing with technology that she couldn't possibly reinvent from scratch.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: AbstractTraitorHero on October 02, 2017, 11:46:18 pm
What do you guys think of my character how it currently is?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WunderKatze on October 03, 2017, 12:23:26 am
Ye. I'll play. I'll finish the char.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: IcyTea31 on October 03, 2017, 01:06:34 am
Looks good! Only problem is that once incarcerated by SolFed, the Academy probably wouldn't have any sway over R'valis' fate. The deal to lease out his services from prison would be arranged entirely between SolFed and the Kiric caravaneers. Though the Academy would certainly want to know about the outcome of the mission.

5 in Mindweaving, with full focus on Augury. Going by fluff you'll probably be working with powerful memory-altering abilities, and possibly straight-up mind control. 5 in Mindweaver certainly means you're potent enough to go for that if you want. We'll discuss your style and abilities.
Huh, I thought I read the premise well, but you're right, it was supposed to be the SolFed who had custody. I was going by V'ralis being caught by law enforcement under the Academy and being sent to the Ithica under suspicious circumstances probably but unprovably involving Mindweaving. I think the simplest solution would be to add a reason for V'ralis to keep contact with the Academy despite being under the SolFed. I'll think about it.

As for the Mindweaving, I was indeed thinking about messing with memories: reading them for access codes, wiping them to leave no traces, adding a memory of V'ralis being a childhood friend and so on are obvious for affecting others. I was also thinking about V'ralis' own memories: total recall, of course, and possibly a form of foresight by "remembering the future" being the signature move granted by the high Mindweaving score, though this would have to be vague and/or unreliable to make sense in a game like this.

I was thinking of this being the reason V'ralis confessed: they'd have 'remembered' even greater fame to be found on the adventure than in keeping up the phantom thief legend. I realize I should probably have mentioned this before, but I was writing the backstory in-character as somebody who wouldn't know about it; sorry.

Full-on mind control isn't necessary due to something close enough to that coming with diplomancy skills, but it could be fun if we can't come up with something else.

Perception stuff like unseeability and bullet time are within the scope of Augury as I understand it, but might not fit the flavour I have in mind.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Sudurandom on October 03, 2017, 10:17:24 pm
Ok here's what I've got so far that seamed worth writing down.
The arrest story is just to explain why he's on his own, so feel free to change it if you want. By the way it might help if I could get a quick overview of what conditions are like in a Sol Fed prison and how long Spar would have been there.

 
Spar is relatively young and hasn't had much experience with the world outside the Martlon fleet.

He was arrested while the Thread Rider was engaged in a salvage operation. When a Sol Fed patrol showed up while he was deep within the wreck Spar volunteered to be left behind to give his family time to escape. He intends to return home after he is released.

Having been raised in space He is uncomfortable in open spaces on planets, but not to the point that it interferes with his work.

He enjoys singing and often hums while working.
 
 He would be quite willing to work on the robotic members of the party but they might not want him to. Martlon repair techniques tend not to worry about what used to be there, but use the parts on hand to make something that fills the needed function. So if he were replacing an arm it might end up with an entirely different design then the old one.

I hope these were the kind of things you were looking for. Please let me know if you have any questions
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: sprinkled chariot on October 04, 2017, 02:22:31 am
Retired bot.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Since this is the first pass on this, as compared to the others, I'll go ahead.

For the skill categories, which you have under "stats" here, you get 10 points to distribute between the categories themselves and 6 proficiencies to select among the skills within. You've distributed the points to individual skills instead, which isn't quite how this works. For instance, instead of putting 3 points into Computer Science directly, you'd have 3 points in Science, and a proficiency in Computer Science.

As for the fluff, it's good. The only thing is I'd say Wild Space Kraken is probably one of SolFed's numerous defense contractors, and so the "doctrine" would be theirs rather than that of SolFed in general, since I have different plans for those.

Fixed the stats issue, also  Wild space kraken defence foundation was meant as sort of charity organisation focused on SAVE WILD SPACE KRAKENS FROM BEING CATCHED, SPACE WILDLIFE MATTERS! BUY OUR BRAND NEW CUPS AND T-SHIRTS WITH SPACE KRAKENS! Not some military company(sorry for bad wording)
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 04, 2017, 04:09:19 pm
Alright, and the "naval doctrines" can be those of whichever defense contractor or merc corp created him, rather than those of SolFed directly.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: AbstractTraitorHero on October 04, 2017, 04:31:47 pm
Pmed you a bit ago Hugo.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Roboson on October 04, 2017, 04:52:16 pm
I forget, what do I still need to do with my character?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 04, 2017, 05:05:44 pm
You've got your stats sketch, but no backstory. Not even a name :o

So, need to add a "who" there, cuz right now we only got numbers.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Roboson on October 04, 2017, 05:47:37 pm
Name: Roboson

Backstory: Roboson is a Ritalis engineer and pilot. For a long time he worked for the the Imperial Academy acting as a pilot freelancer. He was one of the many Ritalis which wen't through the safety valve, encouraged to explore the galaxy to learn and see as much as he can. After a long stint piloting the space-faring ships, a minor collision incident caused him to fall out of favors with the higher-ups. It is unclear whether he resigned. was fired, or was forced into the Rmalos deal. One way or another, he ended up here piloting this ship.

Description: Roboson is a blue and black Ritalis of average size. He has the Ritalis equivalent of, as humans would say, "dashing good looks". He is well accustomed to his wetsuit and continues to insist that humans call their wetsuits "drysuits" because thats what they really are. He also has a speech synthesizer implanted within his wetsuit, which allows him to communicate with his crew members. He also has a larger mechanical suit which he uses in places that have gravity and are not submerged in water.


Spoiler: Skills (click to show/hide)

Is this sufficient or do I need more in the sketch?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: sprinkled chariot on October 05, 2017, 03:32:47 am
Alright, and the "naval doctrines" can be those of whichever defense contractor or merc corp created him, rather than those of SolFed directly.

done  :)
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: IcyTea31 on October 05, 2017, 04:08:45 am
Is this sufficient or do I need more in the sketch?
Your character's skills aren't quite in the right format. You should assign points to skill categories rather than individual skills; proficiencies are for more narrow knowledge.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 05, 2017, 02:15:27 pm
Here's my notes:

Remember, you're a prisoner of SolFed being leased out. While he might've been a victim of R'malos deal at some point, there'd have to be something else that landed him in prison (and besides, the first contact between SolFed and The Academy was a long time ago).

Technically, any R'talis could be blue and black, since they can change their skin color and pattern at will. And often they don't like to wear clothes since they use their skin to communicate. But both of these are matters of personal taste.

You have a lot of freedom for choosing your mechanical suit/personal vehicle. Did you have any specifics in mind? That will give some basis for determining its game properties.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 16, 2017, 11:00:48 pm
Last call for finishing your fluffs. Ideally I'd want everyone to finish, but we've already got a lot of folks and to be honest I probably need to pare down the party a bit. Right now I'm setting up google character sheets for hashing out your final sets, going to be PMing links.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 17, 2017, 01:34:27 am
Additional:

Your character has innate values for Armor and Defense, which are modified by equipment. The sheets as I'm sending them display only the base values right now.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: AbstractTraitorHero on October 17, 2017, 01:43:03 am
Pmed you a bit ago Hugo.
I assumed we were going to be working on the charater a while back but you never pmed back.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: IcyTea31 on October 17, 2017, 02:48:59 am
Added a line to sketchily justify the deal with the Academy. I'll expect nothing less than them completely ignoring their side of the agreement, but maybe that's what V'ralis is counting on?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 17, 2017, 11:52:46 am
A lot of folks have their backstory pretty much done, the warning is mainly for those who don't. Also, we need to decide on a venue. The majority of the game can be handled here on the forum, but for action scenes, I'd like to use an online tabletop such as roll20 for expediency. However, I know some players may have problems with that.

Added a line to sketchily justify the deal with the Academy. I'll expect nothing less than them completely ignoring their side of the agreement, but maybe that's what V'ralis is counting on?

The Academy tends to hold up their deals, since they bank a lot on reputation, but I'm still not sure how much contact he'd have with them in SolFed prison. However, this is a minor thing and otherwise I'd say your fluff is p much done.

Pmed you a bit ago Hugo.
I assumed we were going to be working on the charater a while back but you never pmed back.

I just had the one note for your fluff after the last revision. As for your mechanics, I'm working on those and will send you the sheet soon.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: sprinkled chariot on October 17, 2017, 03:42:34 pm
I assume, that as I fixed all problems with fluff you had, I am in?  ::)
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 17, 2017, 03:47:48 pm
I assume, that as I fixed all problems with fluff you had, I am in?  ::)

You're good. I'm actually working on your character sheet right now, in fact.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: AbstractTraitorHero on October 17, 2017, 10:12:19 pm
Oh awesome thank you!
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: _DivideByZero_ on October 18, 2017, 02:55:21 pm
Re: Vanue

Roll20 is a bit clunky IMO, I wouldn't mind if we used it, but as far as I remember everyone needs an account to play, and be online at the same time.
I've used Rolz (https://rolz.org/join) dice rooms before. It gives everyone a way to roll and chat, but at the same time nobody needs an account and the chatroom is open to people dropping n and out while reading past results. It doesn't have maps, however, so that might be a killer.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: AbstractTraitorHero on October 18, 2017, 03:26:33 pm
I would rather do everything on here.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: Roboson on October 18, 2017, 03:45:53 pm
Name: Roboson

Backstory: Roboson is a Ritalis engineer and pilot. For a long time he worked for the the Imperial Academy acting as a pilot freelancer. He was one of the many Ritalis which wen't through the safety valve, encouraged to explore the galaxy to learn and see as much as he can. After a long stint piloting the space-faring ships, a minor collision incident caused him to fall out of favors with the higher-ups. It is unclear whether he resigned. was fired, or was forced into the Rmalos deal. One way or another, he ended up here piloting this ship.

Description: Roboson is a blue and black Ritalis of average size. He has the Ritalis equivalent of, as humans would say, "dashing good looks". He is well accustomed to his wetsuit and continues to insist that humans call their wetsuits "drysuits" because thats what they really are. He also has a speech synthesizer implanted within his wetsuit, which allows him to communicate with his crew members. He also has a larger mechanical suit which he uses in places that have gravity and are not submerged in water. Roboson also has a mechanized Ritalis suit. It's basically a large Ritalis shaped mecha with interchangeable ports on the 12 shoulders. Typically these ports have arm/leg attachments, but weapons and tools can also be attached. The interior of the suit has water based life support for the Ritalis inside as well as coms, scanners, and other standard mechasuit stuff.


Skills:
1: Ranged Combat
2: Electronics
2: Computer Sciences
2: Mechanics
3: Technician
3: Small Crafts
3: Large Crafts
-3: Melee Weapons
-3: Biological Science

Proficiency:
Small crafts
Large Crafts
Electronics
Mechanic
Engineering
Ranged Weapons (Sonic)

Defense/Armor
10 Defense
10 Armor[/spoiler]

Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on October 22, 2017, 12:24:25 am
Note: you might have seen these acronyms on your sheet, so I wish to clarify.

DR - Damage Reduction
DT - Damage Threshold
DS - Damage Soak
AD - Active Defense
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (SIGNUPS AND OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on December 24, 2017, 02:14:46 pm
It's been a long time, I know! I apologize for not posting here as much, as most of the planning has been going on in the drive and the discord. But it's time soon (at long last!) for the intro session. My aim is to run it on roll20, but if there are other platforms that would work better, I'm all ears.

Now, what time this week would be good for people? I'm aiming for Thursday.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on December 28, 2017, 04:13:21 pm
Actually, since this first session isn't going to feature combat, I've decided to just start it on the forums, where everyone can reach it for sure.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on January 05, 2018, 08:03:02 pm
We be starting! http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=169005.0

Post here if you get confused on what to do.
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (OOC)
Post by: Hibou on January 05, 2018, 11:46:46 pm
This looks pretty interesting, is it too late to submit a new character sketch?
Title: Re: Errant Space - Adventures in a turbulent galaxy (OOC)
Post by: WillowLuman on January 06, 2018, 12:33:50 am
Fraid so