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Finally... => Creative Projects => Topic started by: Jackrabbit on September 07, 2009, 05:11:09 am

Title: Yes
Post by: Jackrabbit on September 07, 2009, 05:11:09 am
Yes. Yes I did do this. I'm so original. Just something I felt like writing. Will wrap up fairly quickly.

Please correct me if I make a mistake, or tons of mistakes, or if everything was a mistake.

However, some things are artistic license. The warp fracture is one, I think. I'm not sure those exist.

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Title: Re: Yes
Post by: timmeh on September 07, 2009, 09:07:18 am
I'm a horrible critic and my spelling and grammar are horrible (started SAT recently, aced the math section, managed to drag myself down to a 75% though after the writing/grammar section...) so I can't really comment on mistakes related to spelling or grammar, but I loved the story itself.  Looking forward to any more of it you write!
Title: Re: Yes
Post by: Jackrabbit on September 09, 2009, 04:26:39 am
And then, they all died!

Slaneesh did it.

*cough*