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Finally... => Creative Projects => Topic started by: GamerKnight on March 23, 2011, 04:58:18 am

Title: A different form of writing.
Post by: GamerKnight on March 23, 2011, 04:58:18 am
I've decided to write a story (just for my own amusement) in an 'unconventional' format.  :P It is about
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Tell me what you think.

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And thats about it. Need to finsih Cat and Mouse and then I will start Repairs. Anyway, any feedback would be nice.
Title: Re: A different form of writing.
Post by: Korbac on March 23, 2011, 08:10:09 am
This was actually quite awesome.  :D
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Post by: Knight of Fools on March 23, 2011, 12:12:46 pm
I didn't think I'd enjoy it when I started, but I ended up liking it.  It was different.
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Post by: Hugehead on March 23, 2011, 12:32:01 pm
Interesting writing style, I wish more authors would deviate from traditional writing.
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Post by: Strife26 on March 23, 2011, 12:43:01 pm
Very nice. I'd read more.
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Post by: Deadmeat1471 on March 23, 2011, 01:23:38 pm
Interesting at least, unique at best. Keep it up :D
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Post by: GamerKnight on March 23, 2011, 02:42:14 pm
I'll try to keep going, but it's really hard to write like this!
Title: Re: A different form of writing.
Post by: GamerKnight on March 23, 2011, 08:41:24 pm
Yay! I wrote some more during IT today. The whole running over children thing was dark... I'll probably change it later. But now for tbe urban massacre!
Title: Re: A different form of writing.
Post by: darkflagrance on March 25, 2011, 02:35:25 am
It's interesting to try to pick out the humanity from the bare bones input-output stream presented to us. Looking forward to completion!
Title: Re: A different form of writing.
Post by: MaximumZero on March 28, 2011, 12:24:01 am
What I've read so far is really cool. Posting to follow.