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Finally... => Creative Projects => Topic started by: Hubris Incalculable on April 19, 2011, 04:09:56 pm

Title: A couple months ago, Hubris had an inspiration.
Post by: Hubris Incalculable on April 19, 2011, 04:09:56 pm
Now he hopes to get more from being critiqued.

Spoiler: Prologue (click to show/hide)
And that's where i left off. Any critique?
Title: Re: A couple months ago, Hubris had an inspiration.
Post by: Hubris Incalculable on April 20, 2011, 08:00:23 pm
Has no-one anything to say? :(