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Title: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 14, 2011, 12:33:30 am
Greetings, this is my first time doing something like this despite having played Dwarf Fortress for years. However, as this is my first community fort I welcome any constructive criticism.

Firstly the rules. This is not a succession fort, however, I welcome the claiming of any unnamed character. You may assign, this character, a name, profession, weapon type (if applicable), and whatever personality you deem fit. You are welcome to ask for any information about any candidate, such as deities they worship and descriptions of said gods. I also, encourage you to write about the events of the fortress I describe in from your character's point of view, to share in this thread.

As the title of this thread you may have figured out that I will be playing with the Pony mod.  The pony mod is not my work and can be found here:  http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=80240.0

And now, down to business.

World: The Universe of Dragons
Civilization: The Shells of Dance
Capital Town: Tailentranced
Princess: Dizesh Hugwax; Pegasus Pony
General: Dostob Desserttaper; Earth Pony
Starting year 94

   Sitting in a wagon, traveling through the wilderness, rode a depressed looking Unicorn named Charity. At a glance it wasn't hard to see why she might have been depressed, for a unicorn she was quite unattractive, downright ugly in fact. She was broad and fat, her purple eyes stood out in an unnatural way from her boring beige coat, now caked with mud from the jungle, and her hair, which was a multitude of colors, none of which had any business being nearby each other, was terribly unkempt. However, she like most unicorns, was convinced of her own perfection. No, her source of pain laid elsewhere, specifically the events of the last few weeks.

   Charity had been born into a wealthy noble family in the Town of Tailentranced, the capital of The Shells of Dance, and had lived a very happy life there, as a production manager, determining who did what and when, a task she took to rather well, as she was always more comfortable telling others what to do, than doing it herself.


   All was good for Charity until one day she was accused of stealing thousands of bits worth of masterwork goods from the treasury. She had pleaded innocent, claimed she had been framed, but the Princess, a Pegasus named Dizesh Hugwax was unimpressed and sentenced her to exile. Her previous status was not at all forgotten however, and she was given a chance to regain her good name. Charity was given a small pile of supplies, and few beasts of burden, and six ponies, convicted of mostly minor crimes, who chose to go with her instead of stay in prison, together they made up The Vermin of Twilight (a name chosen by the General Dostob Desserttaper) and the 7 of them were tasked with building a thriving colony in the middle of, The Failed Jungles.

   The Failed Jungles covers nearly a fifth of the entire known world. It is filled to the brim with the most horrific creatures imaginable. To send 7 ponies into here without the benefit of a military escort, right into the center of the forest, was pure suicide.

   On the way there Charity had quickly introduced herself to the 6 convicts. Names had come and gone to fast for her to catch but she had noticed. That she was the only unicorn. She had gotten that the female earth pony was a carpenter, and the male one a miner. Also, we had an tough looking boy Pegasus, and smaller pretty pegasus with a long braided mane, who apparently had medical training, (what crime could she have comitted thought Charity to herself, but decided it better not to ask), and another Pegasus whom she new from the capital as one of the Smith's apprentices, she had shown promise, a shame to be sent on such a likely deadly mission.

   Looking over the workers she had Charity was concerned by the lack of anyone in the food industry, but was comforted by the fact that there supplies would last them for a while, and that the Princess had promised to send more “workers” to help out soon. Surely one will be an earth pony that we can uses to raise some crops, she thought.

   After days of travel, she had arrived at the spot the princess had commanded. It was hot, and humid. The sound of a stream could be heard nearby, according to the map the stream was called, Bleachedroot the Pranks of Coincidence. The area was thick with plant life, and heavily forested with trees that looked unnatural, it seemed as if the very forest itself was hostile to the presence of the few terrified ponies. Charity decided that they would name the new fortress something happy, something to show that it was a shining point of civilization, inside the harsh and unforgiving jungle, and so it was decided that this would be Glitterglen, Strike the Earth!


Below is the embark information.
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I don't know how fast this board generally moves, so I will wait a little while to see if anyone is wants to name any of the starting 7 before I get underway.

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Edit: The Master has been archiving the thread here. http://ia600804.us.archive.org/35/items/GlitterglenmyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicDwarfFortressCommunity/

Edited Edit: The Master created a glitterglen soundtrack! http://tindeck.com/listen/nuvy
Edited Edited Edit: If the above gives you any problems try the following.
"Click the download, save as, then switch the file format from .htm to all files, and append .mp3 to the end."-Dsarker

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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on September 14, 2011, 12:42:28 am
[sarcasm]thanks for the embark info. here's mine
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 14, 2011, 12:49:15 am
[sarcasm]thanks for the embark info. here's mine
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Uh, thanks for pointing that out, now I feel stupid. I edited the OP I think it's working now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Criptfeind on September 14, 2011, 01:07:01 am
Male Earth pony: Miner: Cryptson? (Not really sure what names are appropriate for ponies.): Morbid and depressed most of the time, which he truly brings upon himself with his constant staying away from the other ponies as he mines. Sometime he gets happier for a short amount of time and is then quite the friendly person before he manages to depress himself again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 14, 2011, 01:18:45 am
Charity's journal 1st Granite 94

That was a close call, just as we had decided that this place would be known as Glitterglen, when a flock of deadly Honey Badger Pegasi descended from the sky with murder in their eyes. I made the call to arms and we fought them off together, I even managed to kill one of the bastards myself. Stomped him in the head and smashed it's skull open, but that's nothing compared to that Earth Pony Miner, Cryptson I think his name was, he killed three of them with his bare hoofs, he's been oftly silent too, I think I'll be keeping my distance from him. But now I've got blood all over, I wish we had some soap for nice bubbly bath.

Fortunately, there are no serious injuries from the attack, the Nurse and the carpenter, took a bruising, but I've been assured their injuries are minor and that they will recover with no need for bed rest. Good since we don't yet have any beds to rest in.

Charity's journal 1st Granite 94 addendum:
We tore up the wagon, and used to wood to make a space for our carpenter and she made a wooden axe and has gone of chopping trees. That mason Pegasus has started building a couple of furnaces, when she's done our metalworker can make Cryptson a pick and he can get started digging out our new home. Hopefully before something worse than a flying flock of Honey Badgers shows up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on September 14, 2011, 03:39:38 am
I'd like the carpenter thanks, named ThunderSplinter.
She hates trees and would spend as much free time as possible chopping them down.
On top of this, she has plans on designing a small tower with a landing pad on top, designated with a large 'P' on it.  This might also have her apartment and workshop in it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 14, 2011, 03:49:36 am
Charity's journal 12th Granite 94

The pick is forged, and Crypton has taken to digging out what will a space for us to move our goods underground. I have also ordered the construction of a few bits of furniture that will make our new home a bit more livable.

Charity's journal 25th Granite 94

Crypton has finally finished the storeroom, and without missing a beat has gone off to dig out the dormitory area. The rest of us will have our hooves full moving the few supplies we have underground.

3rd Slate 94

The living quarters has been dug out. We moved a few tables and chairs in there, and are in the process of putting a few beds in there. Now that I've got some space to work, I'm going to take an inventory of all the supplies we brought with us.

Cryptson came to me today, he seemed down, but no worse than usual. Told me he'd struck an aquifer and he thinks it's quite deep. He said we won't be able to get any stone until we find a way past it. This won't be easy.

14th Slate 94

Praise Gadan!
(Gadan the Virtue of Angels is a deity of The Shells of Dance. Gadan most often takes the form of a male unicorn pony and is associated with happiness) We took a chance, and it payed off. A little exploratory mining has netted us a way around the aquifer to the stone below. It is a bit of a walk down the new hallway to reach the staircase down, but it will save us months of work trying to breach the aquifer. This will do just fine for now. Now I have to tell Cryptson to stop hanging around the meeting hall with those Pegasus girls and to start digging out some workshop spaces. He's going to be in work for a long time.

8th Felsite 94

Not much has happened over the past month. Our metalworker. Gulnas Katakbungek has been keeping busy by constructing our last bit of copper ore into a suit of armor for Iger, the Pegasus to wear, and a couple of weapons. Iger seems content with the plate and his new axe.

Edit: Iger the Pegasus has since been renamed, Starkey.
Edit the second: Gulnas is now called Cinderspark.

I had Lanlar, fly over to the river and construct a bridge, as I don't know from where our reinforcements will be coming from, and I don't want them stranded on the other side of the river.

edit: Lanlar is now Pillomino.

We now also, have the space to move our carpentry shop underground, along with a pile of wood, additionally other work spaces are beginning to take form.

11th Felsite 94

   How adorable, I noticed that cat we brought along to deal with pests seems to have taken a liking to Cryptson, it's been following him around for awhile while he works. I think he's gotten attached to the little thing, because, I overheard him talking to it when he thought he was alone, he's apparently named it Rorul Larebsur. Maybe the little guy will cheer him up some. I know he get's lonely down in those tunnels.

4th Malachite 94

   Cryptson and Rorul, have broken through into a vast underground cavern. According to what I heard they nearly fell in while digging out a new downward stair way, when they hit the ceiling of the cavern. We will patch up this hole, in case of cave swallows, and then dig through one of the many columns in the cavern. Looking around, through our tiny hole we have been able to see that the cavern has rich deposits of Cobaltite, along with gemstones lining the walls, and a small underground lake. Might set up a well to draw from the lake. Just in case.

5th Malachite 94

   A new batch of convicts and criminals approaches. I've been sorting them and it seems as if we've got, a male earth pony with no skills, hope he learns fast cause he gets the privilege of maintaining our fields now, he should enjoy that. Earth ponies like playing in the dirt. A unicorn bone carver she also claims to be trained in setting broken bones, a worrying combination I feel. Another unicorn claims to be a damned legend back home, says she can glaze pottery better than anyone else, I told her that I hope she can carry stone half a well as she glazes then because that's likely all the work she's going to get here. We also, got a female Craftpegasus, a female unicorn weaponsmith, and most interesting of all a Royal pony, he hasn't had to do a days work in his life and has no combat experience, however, he'll learn quick, those Royal Ponies are damn clever, and I'm sure we can find some worthy task for him.


Okay, I'm off to bed for the night. Story will continue tomorrow night, probably. Hoping someone will claim the Royal Pony as their avatar before then, and gives me an idea of what to do with him. Might just stick him in the military to make use of his size.

Pony list
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Edit: Darkening Kaos you posted while I was typing, the pony list has been updated to reflect your choice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Criptfeind on September 14, 2011, 06:30:51 am
I got to say, I am liking this story, very well written. Bravo.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: pantherrpg on September 16, 2011, 05:05:58 pm
I would like the next male unicorn pony. Call him Nicolta Tesla. I would prefer that he be an engraver if it's possible.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on September 16, 2011, 06:56:30 pm
Heyyy, I was wondering when somebody was gonna start a pony fort.  :D

I'd like to claim the militia captain, named Starkey.

Can fliers use ranged weapons while airborne? If possible, he would go about assembling a sort of pegasus air force in addition to the fortress guard proper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 16, 2011, 09:42:09 pm
If it's not too late, I'd like to claim the royal guy as Khenal.  He's naive but an honest pony, and a little unsure what to do in this new place.  Send him into as many different jobs as you can.  When he finds the military, please issue him a spear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Grifen88 on September 17, 2011, 02:47:10 am
Oh my god. A pony community fort.

Dibs on the next miner!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 17, 2011, 04:10:10 am
Inside this spoiler is the descriptions from in game of a few of the named ponies. I forgot to take a screenshot of Cryptson, sorry, I'll include it next update.
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Charity's Journal 7th Malachite 94

A cry came from the surface this day, I think it was Thundersplinters. I knew she should have stayed inside, but she wouldn't hear of it. The cry called out one word, "STRANGLERS!" Starkey knew it was his moment to shine, grabbed the copper battle axe, and ran for the surface.

Starkey charged the multi-armed beast and hacked it to bits in seconds. Turning, he ran toward it's mate. It was chasing one of our beasts of burden around the riverside. A water buffulo I believe. Cut it in two with two skillful chops of his axe, if the story he tells is true, regardless, he dealt with the threat, expertly.

Below image is combat report from the first Strangler.
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Starkey%20and%20the%20Strangler.png)

19th Malachite 94

A herd, no a pride, or is it troop, or...Dammit, a WHOLE BUNCH, of Honey Badger Ponies, started harassing Thundersplinters, and our grazers today. I sent Starkey to hunt them all down. Haven't heard back from him yet.

1st Galena 94

Starkey returned from the surface. He's been chasing down every Honey Badger Pony in the area, his -copper high boots- are covered with dried badger pony blood. He requested that I draft more soldiers, says he can teach them how to fight if I can't find any experienced recruits. I told him I'd think about it. We certainly need a larger militia, but I'm not sure who to spare.

8th Galena 94

Keeping track of our constantly changing stocks, has come to take up most of my time, thus I need an assistant to manage the workers. Unfortunately no one here has a lick of managerial experience, I've decided to let that Royal, Khenal, help me out for a while until I find a more permanent assistant. That Khenal, I can tell he's trying, he helped the new earth pony, whatshisname, plow the fields, didn't expect to see him getting dirty, he surprised me there, he's also, been helping our food supplies by fishing whenever he isn't busy helping carry stone out of the tunnels, to the pile by the Mason's work area. He still hasn't found a proper place to fit in yet, but he's trying.

 27th Galena 94

Today is day of great auspiciousness. In search of deep metal our miner Cryptson has struck the great magma sea. He tells me that that can only mean that Raw Adamantine is nearby, a great find that could be, though if even a fraction of the legends surrounding that mysterious metal are true, then mining for it could be to hazardous, though he tells me there are some established methods of extracting it from the earth, something about making tiny windows. He's the miner I'll trust he knows what he's talking about but, it doesn't matter just yet as he has plenty of other work to do, without worrying about blue metal.

 I have decided that we should make use of the magic of magma and build a few magma powered smelters and furnaces, using the clay from the surface, and baking it in the heat of the magma, we can have all the pottery we could ever need. Hmm, maybe, we could use that glazing legend after all.

27th Galena 94 ammendum;

I seem to forgotten to mention in my journal, last week, that the area designated as the future hospital and well have been dug out. Only need to furnish them now.


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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on September 17, 2011, 04:52:48 am
A strong bond with nature????

I guess she's gonna have to come to terms with that filly-hood trauma of trees and flight training I was working on, perhaps put all that pent-up anger into part-time warrior training with the axe whenever her wood-cutting and carpentry skills aren't in demand.

Looking forward to seeing how this is going to develop.

Daarkening Kaos, CIS.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Firelordsky on September 17, 2011, 09:43:45 am
Can I have thy Earth Pwny farmer?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 17, 2011, 09:51:07 am
Can I have the medic?

TF2 medic style personality, name of Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on September 17, 2011, 10:25:11 am
What is it about this mod that causes it to want to make all pegasi obese? I noticed that while reading over Haybeers as well. Ah well, he's a soldier, I guess he'll work it off pretty quick.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 17, 2011, 04:36:56 pm
A strong bond with nature????

I guess she's gonna have to come to terms with that filly-hood trauma of trees and flight training I was working on, perhaps put all that pent-up anger into part-time warrior training with the axe whenever her wood-cutting and carpentry skills aren't in demand.

Looking forward to seeing how this is going to develop.

Daarkening Kaos, CIS.

The "A pony with a strong bond with nature." bit is at the end of every earth ponies description. It effectively replaces the "A short, sturdy creature fond of drink and industry" that dwarves have in the vanilla version. Thus, I think your woodcutter can keep hating trees as long as you want.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on September 17, 2011, 08:59:26 pm
Reading the rest of her bio suggests she's altogether too cheerful to hold a grudge for long and does like working outdoors, so it's no great thing to change my perception before we get too far in.  As she likes ballista bolts, perhaps she should try her hand (hoof?) at carving a couple to decorate her room.  But she still wants a tall tower with landing pad on top, preferably made of wood blocks, if any can be spared for the project.  And the 'P' on top made of Aluminium or Nickel.

Darkening Kaos, CIS.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Nidokoenig on September 17, 2011, 09:53:36 pm
What is it about this mod that causes it to want to make all pegasi obese? I noticed that while reading over Haybeers as well. Ah well, he's a soldier, I guess he'll work it off pretty quick.

That is odd, when I'm testing the new updates I'll see if actually happens or is just randomly happens using a 255 pony embark, then we can get to spitballing about why that might be.


Wow, honey badger pegasi, and regular honey badger ponies? That's a whole lot of fun.

Reading the rest of her bio suggests she's altogether too cheerful to hold a grudge for long and does like working outdoors, so it's no great thing to change my perception before we get too far in.  As she likes ballista bolts, perhaps she should try her hand (hoof?) at carving a couple to decorate her room.  But she still wants a tall tower with landing pad on top, preferably made of wood blocks, if any can be spared for the project.  And the 'P' on top made of Aluminium or Nickel.

Darkening Kaos, CIS.

Wood shouldn't be a problem, given that woodcrafters can cast spells to turn regular plants into wood in a wood painting workshop(based on Twilight turning an apple into a stagecoach). You can take advantage of that by making surplus crops into wood, then turning that wood into potash and growing more crops next season, and thus making a big enough surplus to make a tower out of plump helmets. Oh, and for an earth pony, she'd be trying her teeth at carving ballista bolts, since her mouth is the only grasper she has.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 18, 2011, 03:23:51 am
Khenal's Diary

Hmm, I'm not sure if "Diary" is the right word.  I'll try a new one later.  Anyway, I can't believe I've been banished to this Gliterglen place.  How was I supposed to know that ambassador was allergic to peanuts?  Oh well, it's not like I really felt like I fit in at home.  Maybe ponies can treat me like a regular pony and not bow all the time, that'd be nice.


Khenal's Journal

This place isn't so bad, though it's really, really hot here.  Nopony seems to know what I should do, so I've been just doing what I can to help where it seems like we need it.  Fishing was interesting and relaxing, though topside seems a tad dangerous.  I also helped a little with the farms, those farmer ponies have serious work!  After helping plant a few things, I started simply hauling things.  It's not bad work, hauling.  I enjoy it.  The others have finally relaxed and don't stand slack-jawed when they see me doing something..."common"?  Unroyal?  I dunno, but I like doing this stuff.


Khenal's Log

Ugh, I've been assigned as the manager.  I was worried that the bowing and scraping was rearing it's ugly head again, but it turned out that nopony else knew anything about managing work orders.  I think Charity saw my sour expression when she gave me the news.  Well, I'll try my best.  At least it doesn't seem to take too long to do this stupid paperwork.  I'd hate to sit in an office all day, it's nice to actually get out and do real work.



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Wow, it's kinda scary how closely his in game info fits the personality I was planning for him.  He's also incredibly green: emerald eyes, sea green coat and jade hair.  I'm gonna find that pony builder somebody linked to and post a pic if I can get it to work. And a link so other people can do stuff too :)

*EDIT
Pic of Khenal
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and the pony creater (http://generalzoi.deviantart.com/art/Pony-Creator-Full-Version-254295904) I used.  It doesn't have the option of coloring the wings seperate from the body, but paint can do good things.  If anypony wants me to do their pony in this thing, just say so  :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 18, 2011, 02:58:54 pm
Well that would have been unpleasant. Khenal, got stuck on top of a wall, while returning from a fishing trip, ended up dropping his mussel up there. Damn flier pathing. Managed to get him down quickly, fortunately, but if I hadn't caught it he would have dehydrated.

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Charity's Journal 20th Limestone 94

Our Mason Lanlar, along with a few assistants, have put together a stone wall around our entrance, it won't keep a proper siege out. But it will be enough for the local wildlife. Friesden, that Pegasus filly, she's taken a look over the Hospital area and has drawn up a list of things she'll need. It's a quite reasonable list of demands, mostly she needs tables, for surgery, and storage space.

26th Limestone 94

More Honey Badge Ponies have been spotted upon the surface. We sent Starkey to take care of them. He did so in a beautiful dance of blood and copper blades. However, upon returning home, I noticed he had several bruises, all along his body, wings, and spine. Clearly, our need for more soldiers is growing, we can't keep relying on Starkey alone. I know this.

I asked Starkey for his recommendations, and he seems to want to create two squads, one for close combat, and one composed entirely of pegasi with crossbows, to move quickly to wherever they are needed.

I agree with his assessment, however, even if I were to draft some ponies under him, we have no metal for weapons or armor. The next supply caravan can't come soon enough.

3rd Sandstone 94

A fresh group of "migrants." Three of them. First one, a Pegasus, he's worked as a presser in the city, but he's got a bit of medical training as well. Though he seems to lazy, to be trusted with anything as important as our medical needs. I think he's going to go in Starkey's crossbow squad when that get's set up. Second, we got a pair of Unicorn stallions. One, named Nicolta Tesla is an gem cutter, and the other, who's name I forget, is a gem setter.

addendum

Looks like we're going to be able to start that crossbow squad now, that Pegasus craftspony came to me, and she admitted she'd been hiding the fact that she was a veteran from the military back home, she offered to help out Starkey. But I've decided to let her command the new squad, and her first recruit, that new pegasus.

4th Sandstone 94

I thought I had been doing Khenal a favor by making him the manager. I thought it the best way to allow him to be useful but not have to dirty his hooves with "common" jobs. However, he seemed unhappy in this position. He still spent his time doing other jobs. I've talked to him about it and it seems he'd rather help the town in a more direct manner, and doesn't want any special treatment. We talked some more and when the possibility of the military came up, he seemed genuinely interested in it. So, I'm officially replacing him as manager with one of the unicorns and assigning him as Starkey's new recruit. Starkey's going to begin training him and hopefully before long he'll be a respectable warrior.

18th Sandstone 94

Perhaps I misjudged poor Lolum. That was the name of the Pegasus I described as lazy before, who I had drafted into the archery squad. He has certainly proven himself this day. Due to a mistake in design. A magma crab had made it's way into our lowest levels. Trapping three defenseless ponies between it and miles of solid stone. When brave Lolum, lept unto the creature, without a weapon and nothing more than his plain clothing to protect him from the heat, smoke enveloped the battle, the onlookers couldn't tell exactly what happened. All we know is that the Crab is dead. Killed by this pony, and that Lolum delivered the final strike while his hair and his skin was burning off.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Lolum%20on%20fire.png)

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Lolum%20Abrasenshal%2C%20Wrestler%20has%20bled%20to%20death.png)
He has fallen but will be remembered. Cryptson will dig out a small tomb near where he fell, and I'm instructing Nicolta Tesla to smooth the stone inside of it.

In retelling of the story the ponies have named the Magma Crab Zuglaroslan.

Starkey is being sent down to stop any more that might come up, before the hole can be patched.


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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 18, 2011, 05:18:42 pm
Khenal's Account

I am such a foal!  I was returning from fishing with a rather nice mussel and I decided to stop for a moment on the retaining wall.  I never facehooved so hard as when I realized I didn't have enough room for takeoff!  Luckily, the others noticed and helped me down.  I've never been so embarrassed in all my life.


Khenal's Testament

Bleh, "testament" is defiantly not the word for this book.  Charity came by to ask how the managing was going.  I tried to play nonchalant, but she could see right through me.  We talked for a while and I told her how I just wanted to be treated like everypony else.  She still seems a bit unsure of this, but was kind enough to assign somepony else to managing the work orders and asked me to talk with Starkey about military training.

Starkey, there's one scary pony.  He's the main martial pony around here, with several kills to his name.  He's a bit gruff, and a tough teacher, but it makes sense.  I mean, this is a deadly serious profession he's trying to get through my thick skull.  He's gotta be hard so I don't just panic when ponies need protecting, and I appreciate that I get no special treatment from him.  After training, I try to help with other tasks around also, but I'm usually even more exhausted than when I helped with the farming!  It's a good exhausted, though.


Khenal's Record

Deadly serious profession indeed.  A magma crab managed to get into the fortress and had several ponies trapped!  Lolum, a recruit from the other squad, was the closest military pony and didn't hesitate to come to the defense of those ponies.  Details of the fight are sparse, the witnesses say there was a lot of smoke and fire.  Lolum defeated the magma crab and saved those ponies, though it cost him his life.  Everypony is doing what they can to honor him, setting up his tomb and beautifying it.  Me, I'm doing my best to live up to his legacy:  to do my best to protect those ponies of Glitterglen, no matter the personal cost.



***

Dang flier pathing trying to get me killed :P  I got bored and used the pony creator to make the ponies that had descriptions posted.

Firstly, our beloved overseer: Charity!
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Followed by our intrepid miner pony: Cryptson
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Next is our resident badass and military pony: Starkey, complete with copper armor
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The woodspony: ThunderSplinter
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Our jemcutter: Nicolta Tesla, wearing a bit of his work
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Lastly, but not leastly, our chief medical pony: Friesden, in her scrubs
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: soaringdragon42 on September 18, 2011, 05:28:23 pm
Can I have the female pegasus craftpony? Name her Pillomino.

I'll try to make journal posts, but between school and my muse having run off somewhere, we'll see what happens.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 18, 2011, 05:30:10 pm
Friesden's journal

New plan. Pegasi have a short runway requirement. What if I was to make the wings larger? I'll try the first experiment on Khenal....just need a donor for the wings....That craftspony doesn't look like she's doing anything important. How to arrange an... 'unfortunate' accident, though?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: soaringdragon42 on September 18, 2011, 05:33:54 pm
Friesden's journal

New plan. Pegasi have a short runway requirement. What if I was to make the wings larger? I'll try the first experiment on Khenal....just need a donor for the wings....That craftspony doesn't look like she's doing anything important. How to arrange an... 'unfortunate' accident, though?

Ack! XD
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 18, 2011, 05:37:38 pm
Friesden's journal

New plan. Pegasi have a short runway requirement. What if I was to make the wings larger? I'll try the first experiment on Khenal....just need a donor for the wings....That craftspony doesn't look like she's doing anything important. How to arrange an... 'unfortunate' accident, though?

Ack! XD

Funny thing is, I posted this JUST as you claimed her :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: BowlSoldier on September 18, 2011, 05:37:48 pm
Mind if I take the Female Pegasus Metalworker from the original 7? Have her have great respect for magma and its magical powers, far greater powers than those used by those self-centered unicorns.

Also: that pony creator is awesome.

EDIT: Name: Cinderspark. Cindy for short.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: pantherrpg on September 18, 2011, 10:27:18 pm
The diary of Nicolta Tesla

3rd Sandstone, 94
Today I arrived at Glitterglen with two other ponies. The overseer asked me what jobs I could do, so I started telling her about my current death-ray project.
She seemed glassy-eyed until I began explaining the work I had been doing on cutting gem lenses. At this point she interrupted me, saying she was glad the fort finally had a gem cutter, and galloped off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on September 19, 2011, 12:17:57 am
The journal of Cap'n Starkey:

26th Limestone, 94

Well, our badger-pony problem doesn't appear to be getting better anytime soon. Not that they're much more than a nuisance, really - I made short work of this batch. It's actually quite the thrill, getting up close and personal with the enemy. I've been thinking I might hold off on taking up the crossbow again, stay down on the ground for awhile.

When I got back, Miss Charity took one look at me and told me to see Doc Friesden straight away. I told her I felt fine, but she insisted. I get that she worries about us, being our leader and all. But I'm a big colt and a soldier besides, I think I can take a few hard knocks.

- - - - - -

Just got back from a visit with the good doctor. I take back what I said about Miss Charity.

And the badgerponies.

And the crossbow. We could do with our own little Skyguard out here, and I told Miss Charity as much. She agreed, and said she'd see what she can do.

I wonder how hard it would be to put an axe on a crossbow? Or maybe a sword, swords are nice too...

*the rest of the page is filled with doodles of pegasi dealing death to badgerponies with a variety of crossbow-hybrid weapons*

3rd Sandstone, 94

Miss Charity introduced me to a couple of prospective recruits for our Skyguard: a filly I vaguely remember meeting in basic back home, and some new colt who just showed up this morning. I set her up as my first squadron leader, with the new kid - Lolum's his name - on her wing. Not much else we can do until we get some weapons and ammunition.

4th Sandstone, 94

Miss Charity is either exhorbitently overprotective, or she's got a thing for me. She sent me another rookie today, and this one's a doozy: a royal pony, direct descendant of the Goddesses. I spoke with this Khenal kid, and turns out he's the one who got stuck up on the wall the other day. I asked him how a pony with wings gets stuck on top of anything, and he told me he didn't have room to take off. Asked him if he knew how to hover, and he gave me a blank stare.

Yeah, you're with the ground squad, kid.

Or maybe not? God-kin can fly and use magic. I wonder how many crossbows he can levitate? Oooh, maybe he can carry a ballista like ol' Primrose used to do back home?

18th Sandstone 94

I guess this was bound to happen sooner or later.

Lolum went after a magma crab that cornered some ponies in the underground. Not sure how it went down exactly, but I saw him as they were rushing him up to the hospital. Poor kid was scarred up and bleeding all over, his mane and tail were burned clean off. Found out later he didn't make it. His wingleader took it real hard. She said she'd never lost anypony before, told her it happens to us all eventually. Asked me how I got over it, I told her I still haven't.

We said a little prayer to Kulet for him together, and I guess that made her feel better. I'd write a poem, but neither of us is any good at poetry. I hope Lolum doesn't mind.



(Kulet is listed as Starkey's deity twice, so I'm taking that to mean he's somewhere between moderate and devout.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 19, 2011, 12:27:38 am
Friesden's Diary


Well, somepony seems to be keeping an eye on the craftspony. Can't find any simple methods for tricking her into amputating her wings.


Wait. New idea. Poison the booze. She'll have to drink from the well, and will 'accidentally' fall in! It can't fail! Time to do it right away!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on September 19, 2011, 12:31:19 am
Okay, I'm confused. are the craftspony that just got drafted and the one that SoaringDragon claimed the same?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 19, 2011, 12:37:29 am
Friesden's diary

The booze is poisonee. Only have to wait for our plans to succeed....wait...idea! Let's chop off the horn of a unicorn and attach it to a pegasus! What could go wrong with that? Who to cause an unfortunate accident for? That's the question....
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 19, 2011, 01:15:15 am
Okay, I'm confused. are the craftspony that just got drafted and the one that SoaringDragon claimed the same?
Can I have the female pegasus craftpony? Name her Pillomino.

I'll try to make journal posts, but between school and my muse having run off somewhere, we'll see what happens.

Indeed, they are one in the same. Soaringdragon42 I forgot to mention it in the updated pony list, that the female pegasus craftpony is indeed the pegasus, that I noticed had some combat skill, and that I drafted as the leader of the new airborne squadron. If that alters your desire to claim that one please say so, and you can take someone else. If it doesn't matter, or you don't respond by the time I play tomorrow night, the Militia captain will be renamed Pillomino.

Also, Khenal thank you for sharing those images of the characters. Those are great.


Miss Charity is either exhorbitently overprotective, or she's got a thing for me.

Purely overprotective I assure you Starkey. Besides looking at Charity's relationships it seems as if she's fallen for a certain blue stallion by the name of Cryptson. The unicorn overseerer involved with a day laboring earth pony. Scandalous.

I may have to devote a journal entry, or two, to that next time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 19, 2011, 01:25:29 am
Khenal's Diary

Wait, did I use diary already?  Ah well, this booze is awesome and everyone needs to know about it!  I have to compliment the brewer, usually it takes sunshine to even make me feel anything, woo!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 19, 2011, 01:26:51 am
Looks like he might be needing an emergency horn amputation soon....hahahahahaha....hahahaa... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: soaringdragon42 on September 19, 2011, 01:38:41 am
Indeed, they are one in the same. Soaringdragon42 I forgot to mention it in the updated pony list, that the female pegasus craftpony is indeed the pegasus, that I noticed had some combat skill, and that I drafted as the leader of the new airborne squadron. If that alters your desire to claim that one please say so, and you can take someone else. If it doesn't matter, or you don't respond by the time I play tomorrow night, the Militia captain will be renamed Pillomino.

Ah, fooie. Can I have the Mason/Stonecrafter from the starting 7 then?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on September 19, 2011, 03:45:51 am
From the diary of ThunderSplinter,

Circa late Limestone:
I've examined the wall where Khenal became stuck when returning from fishing and it seems obvious that he needs to lose weight; in the meantime, I'll suggest to Charity that we install some simple ramps.

Early Sandstone:
Pony migrants!  A new pegasus presser makes 5 of us now.  Might have to nominate the most qualified as our air traffic controller and designate proper landing areas - and make sure that Khenal knows how to use them, even royals need to follow the basic rules of flight.

Mid Sandstone:
Our first casualty....... Lolum will be missed, but his selfless bravery certainly saved several others.  If only we had had more time to get to know him so we could honour him properly.  This area we have settled needs to be tamed, so I am going to volunteer my axe for service and defend our burgeoning colony.

Signing off for now,
ThunderSplinter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on September 19, 2011, 01:53:08 pm
Hey, can you upload the save? I wanted to see if I could find some interesting stuff in legends mode.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on September 19, 2011, 03:33:12 pm
Can I has the female pegasus weaponsmith? Call her Ironya >.>

Make sure she makes as much swords and spears as possible :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 19, 2011, 03:35:29 pm
Khenal's Ugh

Is this what a hangover is?  I woke up with Feiesden giving me this strange look, and my horn is sore.  In fact, my everything is sore.  What did I do last night?  Oh crap, my training!  Starkey is going to give me hell!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: BowlSoldier on September 19, 2011, 03:43:12 pm
Can I has the female pegasus weaponsmith? Call her Ironya >.>

Make sure she makes as much swords and spears as possible :P

Mind if I take the Female Pegasus Metalworker from the original 7? Have her have great respect for magma and its magical powers, far greater powers than those used by those self-centered unicorns.

Also: that pony creator is awesome.

Sorry Haspen, that was the one I meant, in case I didn't make that clear. Although I feel like somewhat of a ass for pointing it out.

Here, have an apple to make it up to you! It's full of sugary goodness!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on September 19, 2011, 04:25:45 pm
Can I has the female pegasus weaponsmith? Call her Ironya >.>

Make sure she makes as much swords and spears as possible :P

Mind if I take the Female Pegasus Metalworker from the original 7? Have her have great respect for magma and its magical powers, far greater powers than those used by those self-centered unicorns.

Also: that pony creator is awesome.

Sorry Haspen, that was the one I meant, in case I didn't make that clear. Although I feel like somewhat of a ass for pointing it out.

Here, have an apple to make it up to you! It's full of sugary goodness!

I meant the immigrant weaponsmith, not the starting 7 armor/weaponsmith :P They are both female pegasi, ha. That's also why I mentioned weapons to be forged :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: BowlSoldier on September 19, 2011, 04:28:53 pm
Can I has the female pegasus weaponsmith? Call her Ironya >.>

Make sure she makes as much swords and spears as possible :P

Mind if I take the Female Pegasus Metalworker from the original 7? Have her have great respect for magma and its magical powers, far greater powers than those used by those self-centered unicorns.

Also: that pony creator is awesome.

Sorry Haspen, that was the one I meant, in case I didn't make that clear. Although I feel like somewhat of a ass for pointing it out.

Here, have an apple to make it up to you! It's full of sugary goodness!

I meant the immigrant weaponsmith, not the starting 7 armor/weaponsmith :P They are both female pegasi, ha. That's also why I mentioned weapons to be forged :P

Oh, great. In that case, sugary apples for everyone!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 19, 2011, 04:31:39 pm
Friesden's Journal

Success! I've not managed (yet) to get another pegasus' wings to extend onto Khenal's, nor a horn to create another royal pony....but I've stolen some wood and used it to make additions onto Khenal's wings while he was knocked out by the alcohol. Now to arrange for that unicorn's unfortunate accident....hahahaha....AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!

Sincerely, Friesden
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on September 19, 2011, 05:53:19 pm
The Journal of Cap'n Starkey:

Private Khenal never showed up for practice today. I didn't see him until late this afternoon. I would've scolded the lad for skipping out, if I had been able to stop laughing at the ridiculous wooden shit tacked onto his wings. Oh goddesses, he looked like a fucking peacock, it was just grand. I imagine the hangover, plus the trouble of getting those damn things off will be punishment enough. Dammit, why didn't anyone tell me we threw those kinds of parties here?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 19, 2011, 08:07:48 pm
Khenal's Tragedy

What?  Tragedy is a valid thing to call you, my book.  My life lately has certainly felt like the tragic tales of long ago.  I had never been hung over before, and through the haze I didn't notice these...things on my wings!  I had expected Captain Starkey to make me do 100 laps of the walls, or 2000 push ups, but he just laughed.  I was confused, until he managed to say "wings" while gasping for air.  And I thought the wall incident was embarrassing. 


Khenal's Report

It's been a few days since the peacock incident, and things are going well.  In hindsight, it was a good prank.  I even kept the things, they might make a good silly costume later.  I think I might ask Thunder Splinter about woodworking, see if I can make the things easier to wear.  They are pretty rough, I had to pick several splinters out of my wings after getting the things off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 19, 2011, 08:20:01 pm
Friesden's diary

Curses! And we would have gotten away with it too, if it hadn't been for that meddling pony! Good news is that the patient is trying the experiment himself, too. We can observe his results and improve on them ourselves! Now, to try our next experiment. Dropping him from a cliff and seeing if he can fly!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on September 20, 2011, 03:05:41 am
From the diary of ThunderSplinter.

I've heard some daft ideas in my time but the latest ....um....idea (? if you can call it that) from Khenal takes the cupcake, working wooden extensions to his wings!  Has he not considered the extra effort that will be required to take-off with all that extra weight - even now he has difficulties taking off from a wall with his existing wings.

Seriously, Khenal, paint them in pretty colours and put them over the lintel of the gatehouse so that everyone knows this is a flier friendly area.

In possibly unrelated news, whoever is stealing my wooden logs, knock it off, there are much more important projects for that wood than whatever you are up to.

Signing off for now,
ThunderSplinter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 20, 2011, 05:42:36 am
Firstly, Haspen, I couldn't find where I said the second weaponsmith was a Pegasus but, she's actually a unicorn. I named her Ironya just the same, if you got a problem with that though speak up, and you can take someone else, though you might want to wait for the next group of migrants as we're running low on choices at the moment.

Secondly, New pony screen shots
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

There is a small unassuming brown leather bound book, worn down with age and use.  This book is kept by our overseerer Charity, and she is never parted from it, always hidden under the journal she normally keeps records in. She can be seen scribbling in it when she thinks no pony can see her, and has never let anypony see it. Inside the book is, among other things, the following entries.
 
Charity's Secret Diary 15th Malachite 94

That earth pony Cryptson came down to my working area in the dining room during his break today. He tried to start up a conversation with me. I told him I was busy but he kept trying to talk anyway, so I took my break early and chatted with him some. He's pretty smart, for an earth pony, we talked about our lives back in Tailentranced before Princess Dizesh Hugwax sent us to this gods forsaken land. I enjoyed talking to him, I hope he comes back to talk again soon.

Charity's Secret Diary 17th Malachite 94

Crypston came back to visit me again today. I hadn't noticed before how blue his coat is, and how pretty his eyes are. If only he weren't an earth pony...

Chairity's Secret Diary 14th 94

Gods what's happening to me. Cryptson keeps visiting with me, and I think I'm falling in love with him. The way he carries himself, the way his beautiful violet coat shimmers in the candle light. The way he acts, back home he would be considered a legend as strong a miner as he is, and yet he's as modest as they come. He is a good man, I know my father wouldn't approve, me a daughter of the Kindplays family, and he a common earth pony, of a common profession, but I love him all the same.



Charity's Journal 21st Opal 94

Our magma forges are properly up and running now. Ironya and Cinderspark are ecstatic. They can't wait to get to work, as soon as we have some proper materials imported. I have made sure that precautions are taken to avoid another Magma crab climbing into ar (A line streaks across the page as if the book had suddenly been ripped from the hooves of the writer. Below in a different handwriting, written in red is the following.

Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan. Lolum Abrasenshal and Zuglarolan.

(On the next page)

A frightening thing just happened. My book was torn from my hooves and threw across the room. Upon investigating I saw that the words in red on the previous page had appeared. It seems as if Lolum is unhappy with the speed at which we are setting up his resting place. I will go down personally and make sure that burial is achieved right away, hopefully that will be enough.

Charity's Journal 6th Obsidian 94

No additional sign of the apparition that visited me has been seen since we finished the tomb of Lolum. I hope this means he is gone for good. The supplies we were promised have not yet arrived. We were promised them by the end of winter, and while they are not technically late yet, I would have expected them by now. I hope for our sake that they have not run into misfortune. The jungle is a dangerous place, full of creatures capable of killing anypony wandering around carelessly. Or they might have been ambushed by Diomedian ponies. Cryptson says I'm just being paranoid. I hope he's right.

10th Obsidian 94

Avan Loelfotthor, that earth pony farmer, was spotted a flock of Honey Badger Pegasi, Starkey, Khenal, and Otik ran to deal with the problem. Almost immediately a war dog, that Khenal had trained was struck down. Khenal took a blow to his left front leg at the start, but then he displayed a level of ability I would not have expected from a raw recruit in his first real battle.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Khenal%20Martial%20Trance.png)

 According to the others Khenal killed 5 of the flying bastards himself. Afterwords the battlefield was soaked in blood.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Khenal%27s%20first%20battle.png)

That spear Ironya forged for him is truly exceptional. I'd love to see what she could do with some proper steel.

14th Obsidian 94

I am relieved. The caravan of supplies has finally arrived. I'm having them deliver a special package to the Princess for me, a statue of me carved by my dear friend Pillomino (who I've previously referred to as Lanlar here, I've found out she prefers not to use her given name.) and a pair of puppy tallow cupcakes, the first attempt Khenal made in the kitchen. I hope she chokes on them.

Trading went fairly well overall. Traded most of Pillomino's statues for a pair of Apple Ents, one red delicious and own golden. Also, got a stray grizzly bear in a cage. Will discuss with Starkey how best to weaponize it.

I requested more metal bars/objects/anythings for next year, along with a few other odds and ends.

1st Granite 95

Hard to believe we've been here an entire year. I've filled up my journal, I'll have to get a new one. Looking back this first year here has been more successful than I could have ever hoped. We've set up a functioning community, have three of the bravest ponies I've ever seen watching over us, and I've met my love Cryptson. Praise Igest. (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Igest%20Romancerose%20the%20Fragrant%20Smile.png)

Here's hoping the coming year will go as smoothly.


Updated pony list
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

To the pony who asked for a save for purposes of looking at legends mode here it is. This copy has already been abandoned so you can go right into legends. This is my first time uploading a save, so when you have a problem let me know and I'll try again.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/region3.zip

One more thing.
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Starkey%20and%20his%20axe.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 20, 2011, 05:59:34 am
Friesden's journal

My plan is coming together as we speak! Khenal came in for a battered hoof, sustained during the battle. I've anaesthetised him, and as we write, we are dragging him to a nearby cliff. I've affixed his new extensions, and am about to toss him off... Here goes nothing!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on September 20, 2011, 06:11:08 am
As long as I get metals for weapons...

/me is okay with said unicorn.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 20, 2011, 06:23:18 am
As long as I get metals for weapons...

/me is okay with said unicorn.

I hope you do get your metals Haspen. Unfortunately, I have been unable to find any real metal on the map yet. I'm going to import as much as possible. I could dig for adamantine. But, that's in such limited supply that I prefer to keep that in reserve for legendary smiths only. Unfortunately, training Ironya up to legendary will be slow without any local metal to practice with, but well get there. I did get some steel off the caravan however, so that's a start. First thing I'll do next time is have you forge a shiny new steel spear for Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 20, 2011, 06:40:58 am
Just hope he survives being dropped off a cliff onto sharp rocks his trying to learn flying without a runway.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 20, 2011, 06:53:09 am
Just hope he survives being dropped off a cliff onto sharp rocks his trying to learn flying without a runway.

As much as I would love to help you in this evil plan   dastardly deed  excellent experiment. In my experience fliers don't fall properly when the floor collapses beneath them. They just fall down one level and fly away. Without hitting the bottom, and getting hurt, like a proper dwarf. I noticed this, in another fort, when trying to re-injure a pegasus who left the hospital before being treated, and was getting infected, so that they would go back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on September 20, 2011, 07:03:28 am
As long as I get metals for weapons...

/me is okay with said unicorn.

I hope you do get your metals Haspen. Unfortunately, I have been unable to find any real metal on the map yet. I'm going to import as much as possible. I could dig for adamantine. But, that's in such limited supply that I prefer to keep that in reserve for legendary smiths only. Unfortunately, training Ironya up to legendary will be slow without any local metal to practice with, but well get there. I did get some steel off the caravan however, so that's a start. First thing I'll do next time is have you forge a shiny new steel spear for Khenal.

Weaponsmiths have better chances to get a mood, soooo... :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on September 20, 2011, 01:41:39 pm
Thanks for uploading the save! I do wonder why it's only year 94 though. One very odd thing I discovered is that Testgulfs, the only fortress in the civ (there's one town, 3 hamlets otherwise) is populated solely by the pegasus princess, Dizesh Hugwax. Everyone else has been killed by beast attacks. She's only the princess cause she moved in when the last guy was killed. She seems to have survived 3 beast attacks in the last 2 years on her own, though defeated, she gets away every time (Probably cause she's a pegasus, and they're rather fast).
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: BowlSoldier on September 20, 2011, 01:48:18 pm
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

There's mine made on that pony creator. Couldn't get the background to come out unfortunately, but there she is, showing off her work!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 20, 2011, 01:52:19 pm
Khenal's Autobiography

Hmm, that sounds a bit pretentious, what do you think Book?  Things have settled into a comforting rutine: I start my day training with Captain Starkey, have lunch and do whatever odd jobs need doing, and then finish with a short patrol of the surface.  I got to train a war dog over the last few days, though I don't know how much "war" it actually has in it.  I like to call him Lil' Urist.

Khenal's Debrief

Honeybadger Pegasi.  The Captain, Otik, Lil' Urist and myself rushed out to meet them.  Oh, Lil' Urist.  The badger pegasi tore him limb from limb.  When I saw them covered in his blood, something clicked in my head.  All the training the Captain had been trying to drill into me suddenly made perfect sense and time seemed to slow.  I could see everything.  Teeth, going for my throat, pivot left and set spear.  Straight in and out, don't want it getting stuck.  Duck under the hooves coming for my head, spear in the exposed stomach and slash out; no bones to obstruct it.  I could see the Captain and Otik fighting as well, and they were having no trouble.  Back to my foes.  When it all was said and done, I had accounted for five of the invaders and had only a chipped hoof for my troubles.  Charity told me to have it checked in the hospital, but I wanted to get this written before anything else.  The Captain says debriefs should be done asap.


Khenal's Book

Something odd is going on.  When I asked Thunder Splinter about the wing extensions, she felt they were a lost cause.  She suggested painting them and setting them somewhere as decoration, and I think I'll try my hoof at that if we ever get paint.  However, after seeing Dr. Friesden for my hoof, I had this strange dream.  I dreamed I was falling, which is silly.  I spread my wings and glided, though I couldn't seem to gain any altitude.  I drifted down and came to a soft landing and just looked around, and then I noticed my wings.  The extensions were back.  Rather, new ones were attached to my wings.  These looked like they had been more carefully crafted, though they still chafe.  Yes, chafe; present tense.  When I awoke in my bed, those extensions from my dream were there in reality.  I took them off and sat confused for a while.  Who would make these things?  Who could make these things?  Why?  I think I'll ask Thunder Splinter about them when I next see her, maybe she made them?


Khenal's Book

I think I like simply calling you my book, Book.  It's so relaxingly informal.  The caravan arrived today and I got to try cooking.  The recipe I found looked odd, but we had the ingredients easily at hoof so I tried it.  I thought cupcakes needed flour, but they apparently can work with tallow.  Who knew?  I don't think they turned out bad, they looked like the picture at least.  Charity sent them out with the caravan as a gift to the princess.  Are princesses allergic to puppy tallow?



***

Khenal, the unassuming guineapig :P  I'll edit in pics of the new ponies once I do them

Here's the other two, since BowlSoldier did his :)

Ironya
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Pillomino
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I noticed that Cinderspark and Pillomino are practically twins.  The only physical difference in their descriptions is how they have their hair done, heh.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on September 21, 2011, 03:11:27 am
From the Diary of ThunderSplinter.

Well.  This is just getting curioser and curioser.  Khenal came into my workshop wearing yet another set of absurd wing extensions, and the very fact that he could not get them off without considerable help tells me that he could not have installed them in the first place.  Add his equally bizzare story of waking up with them after a freaky dream just makes me shiver.  I did get an opportunity to examine how they were attached, thinking perhaps that it was some practical joke by an engineer, but that seems unlikely with the way the extensions were attached by cave spider silk thread and some knots I have no knowledge of - I do not know who to ask about knots....hmmm, this is a quandry that will require some further investigation.

In unrelated news:  the theft of wood continues, although the other woodcraftponies seem to recall an order for crutches to be made, but, when I asked the bookkeeper, no orders for crutches could be found.  I will take matters into my own hooves and sleep near the wood stockpile to see if I can catch the wood-lifter in the act.

Signing off for now,
ThunderSplinter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 22, 2011, 03:53:29 am
Charity's Journal 11th Granite, 95

Today Friesden came to me, said she needed, some traction benches, for holding patients still while bones mend. A reasonable request, but something about the look in her eye makes me feel uncomfortable. Unfortunately, for her, we have no mechanics here. She looked upset, and later I found her carving rocks into mechanisms, in the alcove by my office.

Charity's Journal 16th Granite, 95

Now Friesden is burning wooden logs into ash, she claims it's for making soap. But I don't know if I believe that. I know ash is component in making soap, but something seems fishy with that pony.

Charity's Secret Diary 19th Granite, 95

The day has finally, come. Today, Cryptson and I will be married, in the Meeting Hall in front of everypony. Then we will celebrate, with dwarven beers, and wines, and cupcakes, and party until morning, and everypony is invited. I'm so excited. This is the happiest day of my life, even if we are banished out here to the jungle, we can still make a decent life for ourselves. 

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Charity%27s%20wedding.png)

Charity's Journal 27th Granite, 95

A huge wave of ponies has just arrived at our gates. New members of our band of exiles, enough to double our population, apparently the merchants story of how we've succeeded here has reached even the prison population, and more are considering coming here as an option, instead of assuming it to be as good as a death sentence. Now I have to try and organize these 21 new ponies.

Male Earthpony Doctor Sending this one down to help Friesden, and to keep an eye on his extracurricular activities.
Male Earthpony Farmer
Female Unicorn Seamstress
Male Unicorn Spearpony (going in Starkey's ground squad)
Female Unicorn Lasher (ground squad)
Female Earth Pony thresher and mechanic
Male Unicorn Engraver
Male Pegasus Stoneworker
Female Pegasus Cheesemaker, uh, I mean airborne squadron recruit
Female Earthpony farmer/beekeeper
Male Earthpony Carpenter/woodcutter Thundersplinter needed some assistants.
Feamale Earthpony peasant married to above carpenter and mother of two. Guess she can help move things around.
Male Unicorn foal, around 3 years old
Female Royal Pony foal, 1 year old. (how is it that these two filthy earthponies can have a unicorn and a royal as their children.)
Male Pegasus chef
Male Pegasus Fisherpony
Female Pegasus woodcutter with minor military experience. Said she used a mace before, well now she's going to learn to shoot a crossbow.
Male Pegasus Blacksmith
Male Unicorn Siege Operator
Male Unicorn weaver
Male Earthpony hunter.

This many new ponies will overcrowd our dormitories. In the morning.Cryptson is going to start digging out individual rooms for everypony. Starting with ours. Thundersplinters is going to have to take a break from the pile of wooden blocks she's been working on, says she wants to build a wooden tower on the surface, and start building some more beds for everypony.


Also, (http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Starkey%20loves%20his%20shield.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 22, 2011, 04:02:52 am
Mind if Friesden kills off one of the worthless ponies on the sly?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 22, 2011, 04:08:50 am
Mind if Friesden kills off one of the worthless ponies on the sly?

Sure, which one and how did you have in mind. I could make a drop (won't work on fliers), or an upright spike trap room, easily enough, that would be operated by a lever, in Friesden's room, using burrows to make sure Friesden's the one to pull the lever. That could work, unless you have another idea.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 22, 2011, 04:17:09 am
Was thinking the cheesemaker, but if you were planning on using that one, guess the fisherpony.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 22, 2011, 04:25:02 am
Khenal's Book

Charity and Cryptson were married today!  They both looked so happy, I think it's the first time I've seen Cryptson actually smile.  There was a great reception after the ceremony, and everypony had fun.  I made sure I didn't drink too much, passing out would likely see me in wing extensions again.  I still have no idea who made them, Thunder Splinter looked just as surprised as me when she saw me in them after my hospital visit a while ago.


More of Khenal's Book

Huh.  Now that I've settled on what to call you, I need a way to differentiate these writings, my Book.  A whole bunch of ponies immigrated to GlitterGlen, and with new faces came the return of the awkward looks when I work.  Well, the others came to accept me, so I'll just try to ignore the uncomfortable moments until these new ponies adjust.  Cryptson has been busy digging out rooms for everypony and Thunder is busy making beds.  I wonder if she needs any help?



***
Have any of the other named ponies made any interesting friends/romances?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Zaerosz on September 22, 2011, 04:43:14 am
Can I claim the Male Earthpony Farmer? Name of Benoni.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 25, 2011, 04:27:00 am
Someone asked if any of the other named ponies were romantically involved. And no none of them are with the exception of Ironya and Firelordsky, who were married before they arrived, I had forgot to note that earlier.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Ironya%20and%20Firelordsky.png)

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23rd Slate, 95

Bokbon Razotstertar, our broker, and Unicorn Bone carver, has been distant, she hasn't talked to anypony recently, I tried to talk to her but she ignored me. It's almost as if...

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Bokbon%20withdraws.png)

Addendum

That crazy pony ran off and barricaded herself in her workshop. She then ran off and grabbed an entire Water Buffalo Calf's skeleton, and a stack of logs from the kapok tree. She continues to work secretly and hasn't yet come back out. 

27th Slate, 95

Bokbon finally came out of her workshop today, she seems to have made the finest door I have ever seen, she calls it Crazywax. It's made of bone and wood, all worked as if by a master. She claims to have had the idea for it several days ago, and needed to see if she could do. And by the gods she has. I think this will do nicely as the door to Cryptson and mine's new room.


My dad made a sketch of the door after I mentioned it. It isn't colored or inked, and it's on lined paper, but I thought you'd still want to see it so here you go.

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11th Felsite, 95

I've heard that Khenal's been asking Thundersplinter to help out with the carpentry work. We set up a second carpenter's workshop, but Thundersplinter just has him turning out wooden blocks. Say's Khenal isn't ready to make anything more complicated, but I think Thundersplinter is just trying to get another pony to help her with her dream of a wooden tower/landing pad.

11th Felsite, 95 addendum

Ironya, gave birth today, to a bouncing baby Pegasus boy. I haven't heard what the parents are going to name him, but Friesden says the child is healthy and that's what's most important.


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Ironya%20gives%20birth.png)

To the individual who claimed Ironya, I will allow you to give a nickname to your child, if you so desire.
Here's your baby.
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18th Felsite, 95

A filthy Keshi, foal snatcher snuck into the fortress today. Thank the gods they were spotted before they got to any of the children. According to the ponies that saw it, it was wearing the symbols of 'The Bearded Devil' a Diomedian pony civilization, known to operate in the Failed Jungles. It ran off as the militia chased after him. One of our marksponies in training, was the only one to engage the thief, but was unsuccessful in harming him, most likely because he ran out with his quiver empty and attempted to bash the thief's, head in with his -honey badger pegasi bone crossbow- to no effect. In fact the only injury sustained by anypony was a cut to the right rear leg of the charging 'markspony.' I've asked Starkey to have a talk with him about how she isn't in the melee squad any more and should learn to stop acting like it, once she gets out of the hospital that is.

Regardless, the Diomedian ponies definitely know we're here now. I went out and stood on the wall later. Thundersplinters, and that other woodcutter have clear cut a lot of jungle around our walls, I think an archer tower or two could be helpful, as they would have a clear line of sight over a large area, knowing that Thundersplinter has long desired a tower of wood, I told her I will allow her to begin construction, if she submits to allowing for fortifications to be placed in the second and third floors.

21st Felsite, 95

Another Snatcher came today, this one didn't get as far as she was spotted by Shasad as they were cutting trees. The militia was called up, but were unable to catch him, Khenal got just close enough to be disappointed in losing his trail. Two thieves have come and two have escaped, this paints a poor image of our defenses, I worry that they might decide to start sending out their twisted ponies in greater numbers. Cinderspark is working to outfit our troops with bronze armor but we just don't have enough copper or tin, we only got a little from the caravan, thus, our dwindling leather supply is being used to try and patch the holes left by our lack of metal, as are the bones and shells being worked by Bokbon, but neither leather nor unicorn magic worked bone will protect a pony from the iron blades of the Diomedians.


Pony List
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on September 25, 2011, 04:30:18 am
Nah, the kiddo will stay nickname-less, I say! Maybe when he will do something interesting.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on September 25, 2011, 05:00:47 am
From the diary of ThunderSplinter.

That bothersome pony, Khenal, who seems to delight in wasting my time and annoying me with endless inanities, has finally been put to work in the secondary carpenter's workshop.  I don't trust him with any real tools, or projects for that matter, so he's slowly kicking out wooden blocks.  Slowly because, he charges off every now and then, probably chasing horseflies or butterpegasi, feckless colt - wouldn't know what a real day's work involved.

Anyway, so many migrant ponies arrived, I've got orders for beds that will take me weeks to put together, I will have to move my own bed near the workshop just to save time.  Then there will be a whole raft of barrels for alcohol, maybe I should suggest to Khenal that he go and bother the brewer instead.  He might redeem himself if he makes some decent midnight berry wine for me.

Signing off for now,
ThunderSplinter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 25, 2011, 11:06:33 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 1

I figure chapters are as good a way as marking entries in you as anything, Book.  Huh, I guess everything before this counts as a prologue.  There was another party today as Ironya had a baby!  Ironya  is our main weaponsmith, and she's married to FireLordSky.  I think he's the one I helped with farming a few times?  There's getting to be so many ponies I'm having trouble keeping up.


Chapter 2

The Diomedians know we're here.  There have been at least two foalnappers spotted in the last few days.  Neither seems to have been able to get close to the little ones, but it's very worrying.  I almost caught one, but I lost him in the dense jungle that borders us.  I really hope we don't see any more of them, our foals deserve to live without the fear of being taken.

 I've also been helping Thunder Splinter with the woodworking.  I'm not very good, so she just has me making blocks while she makes beautiful beds.  It's nice, working with wood.  I've never had a chance to actually make anything before, even just blocks.  There's getting to be enough ponies that odd jobs are dwindling, I should probably settle into a civilian profession soon.  I really like the military, and will stick with it, but I should at least have something to do between shifts instead of just sitting around.  Maybe I'll apply for a carpentry job?  Or maybe try brewing first, Thunder Splinter seems to think I'd be good at that.  Wont know unless I try!



****

Uh-oh, snatchers!  I wonder how hard the diomedians will be to actually fight?

Also: New Named Pony!  Here's Benoni, our latest farmerpony!
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 25, 2011, 11:25:14 pm
They're the equivalent of Goblins, only better.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: BowlSoldier on September 26, 2011, 12:32:38 am
They're the equivalent of Goblins, only 20% cooler.
Fixed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on September 26, 2011, 12:38:30 am
Ah, so not too bad until 100 of them show up or the military is naked.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on September 26, 2011, 01:45:13 am
Unless you get a royal one, which will feth up your average recruit.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on September 27, 2011, 01:56:21 pm
Could I claim the Unicorn Engraver? Just my username please.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on September 28, 2011, 12:30:27 pm
Was thinking the cheesemaker, but if you were planning on using that one, guess the fisherpony.

Working on the machine Freisden will use to kill somepony. Will take time as I'm still waiting on Cryptson to dig out the area, bedrooms taking up all of his time. The fisherpony is fine as your victim, but I think the Female Earthpony wife and mother, might lead to more fun, but if the victim having wings or a horn is important to you, the fisher it is. Since a drop won't work well on fliers, I'm going with an upright spike trap (probably menacing wooden spikes as metal is scarce), tied to a lever, on the other side of a clear glass window (giving you an excellent view of the carnage). As I stated before, I'll use burrows to make sure Freisden pulls the lever, and not somepony else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 01, 2011, 11:40:40 am
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Charity's Journal 20th Hematite, 95
Construction has officially began upon Thundersplinter's tower. We will hopefully finish it by the end of the year, but it is difficult to give a specific time-frame, many ponies are helping out with actual construction. Khenal, has been assigned as a permanent secondary carpenter during his down time between training. Although Starkey hasn't given him much time to do anything other than eat, sleep, and train, and that time which he does have, he almost exclusively spends on training on his own. One has to admire his discipline.

Charity's Journal 10th Malachite, 95
New immigrants. 11 of them, Better order more beds from Thundersplinter, don't think she'll like that. 
Quick summary of the new guys, We got a Unicorn Ranger, she has a very pretty voice. An earth spearpony, sending her right off to Starkey. A pegasus fisherpony, not much else to say about her. Pegasus stone-worker, we don't really need anymore stone workers, but he does look pretty tough, so I sent him to Otik, he'll learn to shoot quick enough, he's married to a unicorn who's never done a day's work in her life, don't know what I'll do with her. Female pegasus weaver, don't really need another weaver, guess she can learn to shoot too. She's married to an earthpony lasher, and blacksmith, whom I'm sending to Starkey. Pegasus farmer, she seemed a little paranoid when I was interviewing her. Another pegasus with no noteworthy skills, told him to report to training with Otik in the morning. An earthpony metalcrafter, not that we have any metal for him to work with.

And finally, a Royal pony unfortunately he also, lacks any useful skills, he's apparently worked as a wood burner, and cut his own wood when he did so, he's also a decent stone carver, but we don't really have much need for more of those skills. I'm tempted to just have him report to Starkey or Otik for training. I'll think it over, in the meanwhile he can help clear more of the jungle.

Charity's Journal 11th Malachite, 95

That idiot who got cut by the first snatcher is finally about to leave the hospital soon. Unfortunately, Freisden says he's going to need a crutch in order to walk around, the bastard should thank his stars that he's got wings, at least this will hopefully teach him to grab some bolts before running off to a fight.


Sorry there where no updates all week, I had left my flash drive with the save at my parents house by accident, and only just now got it back. There will be more updates later this weekend.

Updated pony list
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on October 01, 2011, 10:35:09 pm
From the diary of ThunderSplinter,

Early Malachite:
I had not even finished the last work order for beds, when Charity came into check up on Khenal's progress and inform us that more migrants had arrived, she chatted for a while and as she was leaving, left a new work order for more beds!  She also told me that the tower is under way, we will finally be able to get those fliers under some sort of control - I don't want to have another 'incident' like the last one, I am still plagued by bad dreams even after all these years.

No time for a lengthy entry, lots of ponies demanding comfy beds for their rooms, and it sounds like Khenal has broken another chisel, he's lucky that he is getting better at making the blocks or I'd ask Charity to re-assign him to a workshop where he can't break tools - and I'm still looking for the mallet he lost last week.

ThunderSplinter.

[OOC]
Can we get a list of our ponies major skills?
[/OOC]

Edit: fixed an idiot mistake.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 02, 2011, 12:02:17 am
Friesden's diary

We have nearly done it, we have! The trap is nearly completed. Now to send that earth pony the mayor saddled us with away and we can lure our prey into our trap. Soon we shall be able to extend Khenal's wings properly. Haha. HaHa. AHAHAHAHAhahahahaAHAHAHA. Our precious will be more useful. HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA.

PS. HAHAHAHA!!!!

Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 02, 2011, 05:34:43 am
Khenal's Book, Chapter 3

I am most certainly not cut out to be a brewer.  I have no idea what to call what's inside that barrel other than...  I dont know!  I chiseled "Do not open Ever!" into the side as a precaution so nopony would try to drink it before it can be disposed of.  Hopefully it'll get dropped into magma or something.  Even worse, I managed to somehow snap the handle of the mallet I used when I missed the chisel.  I've gotten better at the very basics of woodworking, but I clearly need more practice before I can graduate from blocks.  I told Thunder Splinter I had lost the mallet and I plan to replace it.  More accurately, I plan to pay for the replacement.  It's not like I have the skill to actually make a new one.

There were a bunch of new arrivals recently, and several of them have joined the military!  There's even another alicorn around!  Well, another full grown alicorn.  One of the families that immigrated a while ago had an alicorn foal.  I didn't think genetics worked that way, but I am obviously wrong. 

The new recruits (though they look pretty experienced to me) looked surprised that I was in the military.  I was so excited to learn that one of them also used a spear!  There was the usual period of awkwardness of ponies who don't know me, but we seemed to get through it quickly, Starkey's training sessions are too exhausting to allow for that.  We traded tired smiles with eachother when Captain Starkey dismissed us for the day.



*****

Heh, Khenal is going to freak right out when those "proper" wing extensions appear.  Please make it clear if they are proper functioning wing extensions or grisly ornaments when you put them on.  Either way should be interesting to deal with.  I'll use the pony creator for the new pony tomorrow.  For now: Bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 02, 2011, 05:40:28 am
Oh, they should work...heheheha...hahahahahahahah
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 02, 2011, 01:26:33 pm
Awesome.  In unrelated news, here's the new pony!

Theropod Watcher, our new engraver!
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on October 02, 2011, 03:16:51 pm
Awesome! This thread is shaping up to be really great. And thanks so much Khenal!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 02, 2011, 06:16:39 pm
Charity's Journal 16th Malachite 95

A flock of Honey Badger Pegasi have been spotted south of the wall. While they haven't shown any hostilities toward our settlement yet. Starkey has decided that dealing with them will be an excellent training opportunity for our new recruits, and I have decided to allow this little hunting trip of his.

Charity's Journal 17th Malachite 95

The ever increasing pile of Honey Badger pony/pegasi corpses has been taking up all of our butchers time up. They are butchering them slower than we are acquiring more of them, most are rotten before they even get to the chopping block, perhaps we should set up a second butchers so two butchers can work at the same time.

Charity's Journal 18th Galena 95

A caravan of traders has been spotted in the jungle making their way towards us.  Hopefully they will have metals to trade us. I'm sending Starkey's squad to escort them in, while stationing the First Airborne Squadron on the walls. It would be unfortunate if the Diomedian's were to strike now, and I will not be caught unawares.

Charity's Journal 19th Galena 95

While no ambushes were spotted before the traders arrived our Unicorn Ranger reported seeing a tentacle pony (a scout? or another snatcher?) while she was returning from hunting, she chased it off and hit it once in the leg with a bolt, but it managed to escape as well.

Charity's Journal 8th Limestone 95

Another Diomedian foal snatcher, got all the way inside our walls, and down the stairs, but bumped into Starkey as he was leaving the barracks to get a drink, it managed to get a few hits in on some of our less experienced recruits, though nothing life threatening, before it was killed, just inside the foundations of the wooden tower. I'm lead to believe that it was Khenal who finished the thing off with a stab to the head with his new Steel Spear, he should thank Ironya for her craftponyship, and Cindy for that copper peytrel that saved him from a bronze dagger to the heart. Only injuries worth reporting was from one of the recruits from the Markspony squad that got to close, he's in the hospital with a cut on his hoof, looks like we'll have another limping Pegasus.

Charity's Journal 22nd Limestone 95

Strange, our stockpiles seem to be missing certain materials, including a clear glass window I was planning on installing in the dinning room, three high quality stone mechanisms, and the copper spear Khenal used to use. I've asked around and nopony knows where they've been placed. I had a talk with the haulers about proper procedures and hopefully this sort of misplacement won't happen again.

Charity's Journal 27th Limestone 95

Now we have a missing pony. Nopony has seen efim the fisherpegasus since early yesterday. We assume he met something unfortunate while fishing, but strangely nopony saw him leave. He was last seen heading down toward the inside of the fort. Regardless, I'm sending the airborne squadron out on patrol, maybe they can find him, or what's left of him.

Charity's Journal 12th Sandstone 95

We've decided to add a public shower to the lower dining hall,  unfortunately, Ironya and her husband Firelordsky have moved into the room directly above where we want it to go, so the water is going to be flowing through half of their room. Hope they don't mind, there room was over-sized anyway.  We'll be tapping into that aquifer, (glad to get something positive out of the thing) and draining the water into the cavern lake, it seems to flow a long way away from here so it shouldn't flood the caves.

Charity's Secret Jounal 12th Sandstone 95

Cryptson, that wonderful stallion, has dug off a second small tunnel from the main water route for the shower, in order to redirect some of it to our room, for our own private shower, it's good to be the Overseer.

Charity's Journal 2nd Timber 95

More ponies have arrived. Only eight this time. Pegasus brewer, although I think she'll do better in the crossbow squad. An earthpony High Master Armorer, I wonder what Cindy will think about this, first Ironya shows, up and makes better weapons, and now a Master Armorer shows up. He's also married to an earthpony knife-fighter, sending her off to see Starkey for assignment. Another, earthpony metal crafter, but with less experience than those we already have, he's a bit of a tough looking guy though so, we're drafting him too. An earthpony butcher, an earthpony tanner, and an earthpony dyer. And a pegasan fisher pony.
 
Addendum

Speaking of Pegasn fisherponies, efim has not been found yet, dead or alive.



[OOC]
Can we get a list of our ponies major skills?
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Yeah, I can do that with the next update. What in particular are you interested in? Just the labor and combat skills? Or did you want to see the social skills as well?

As you may have guessed from the above, Friesden has succeeded in luring poor efim to a grisly fate as the copper spear repeated sprang from the ground cutting him to pieces as Friesden repeatedly pulled the lever, again and again, I have the complete combat logs, if anyone wants to see them, but they aren't that interesting and it took five pages of stabs to kill the Pegasus, final blow was a stab to the upper body, which pierced an artery near the heart causing instant bleed out.

I haven't moved the body yet, it's sitting behind a locked door. Friesden any requests of what I do with it?

I did however take this screen-shot of the aftermath. It seems that the window and all the walls are just coated with blood now. The pony in the picture is Friesden just seconds after his victim's demise. Doesn't he just look ecstatic. You can't see the body at the moment because it's displaying a piece of his clothing, but I can assure you he is there, or what's left of him is.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/The%20aftermath.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 02, 2011, 06:43:03 pm
Friesden's diary

They all suspect us. Do you suspect us, diary? Do you? DO YOU? I can't abide traitors in our search for greatness. Now to clean the wings from the pegasus. We're good enough as a surgeon to attach them fully to Khenal....just have to wait until he's injured. Waitwait. We must seal off the trap. After removing the body. At night, when the pegasus patrol is asleep, we must dump the body, without the wings of course ;) and let the badgers eat it. We must find the next badger pegasus swarm and lure them to the body.


Khenal will be so happy with the wings! Now he'll be able to lift off from the wall. We can't wait till he's injured. We must dose the alcohol again, while they're off patrolling. They wouldn't understand us. We must do this... WE MUST!


PS. We know you don't trust us, Diary, but we wouldn't hurt you! We promise!

Love, Friesden! XOXOX
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on October 02, 2011, 06:48:05 pm

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Can we get a list of our ponies major skills?
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Yeah, I can do that with the next update. What in particular are you interested in? Just the labor and combat skills? Or did you want to see the social skills as well?

Only the labour and combat skills, thanx.
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From the diary of ThunderSplinter,

Early Limestone.
"Snatcher!"  The alert sent a chill through me, and it had sounded close, Khenal was out on training with Starkey so I had to fend for myself if the foalsnatcher made the mistake of heading my way.  Thankfully the all-clear was sounded soon after and Khenal was prancing around with his still blood-stained spear, despite his attitude, a lot of ponies are grateful for his growing skills in combat.

Late Limestone.
Almost everypony has been asked to keep an eye out for one of new migrants, we're getting so many ambushes lately, it wouldn't surprise me if the fisherpony is in a Diomedian cooking pot somewhere, but I hope the searchers find him.

Early Timber.
Finally.  All the beds on order have been finished and I can now relax with a good drink and some cupcakes - absolutely nothing could ruin this moment, not even the sound of Khenal breaking yet another chisel.  (Fortunately he's in combat training so the workshops are blissfully quiet)

Addendum.
Spoke to soon, diary.  I was just settling down with a second serving of cupcakes when Charity informed me that we have more migrants, she didn't even have to tell me to get back to work making more beds.  Sometimes, only rarely mind, I wish Khenal could be trusted to tackle more complicated projects without constant supervision - I wonder how Starkey copes with him?

ThunderSplinter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 02, 2011, 09:33:43 pm
Odd request, but can I have the little royal pony kid? Got a good story to go with him I think. Lets name the little snatcher bait, Venture.


Hi book!  My name is Venture!

My Mommy gave you to me today cause she says I'm so special for learning too wright so young and stuff. I didn't know what to wright so Daddy said to wright about how we got to new home. We walk a really, really REALLY far with a bunch of other ponies to get here. My legs were SO tired and I don't know how to fly but mommy says there are pegisusses that can teach me in new home so it's OK. There's another pony here that looks like me with wings and a horn so I got really scared. Even more scared then in the hot scary forest cause I thought he was going to take me away from mommy and daddy again like the other ponies with horns and wing that got all loud at daddy, but mommy says that pony is OK so Im not so scared now.  Daddy says that we had to leave old home because the other ponies with wings and horns were angry that mommy and daddy were earth ponies but that’s stupid so we went away one night with a bunch of other ponies so we can go be a family together because that important and I don't want go away from mommy and daddy and my brother forever.

I don't like new home very much. The forest is really scary and hot and wet and there are all sort of scary things inside it. All the ponies live in the ground witch is really funny because ponies should live In houses not in the ground!  Me and my brother want to play outside but mommy and daddy say it's not safe so we have to stay in the ground all the time.  It's really super boring in the ground cause there’s nothing to do and me and my brother can't go into most of the tunnels cause were not old engulf yet and daddy and mommy are always working and stuff so we just got to sit and be bored and stuff. Some times we can play tag or catch with rocks but the adults tell us to stop running so that sucks too. Some times the Adults yell SNATCHER and then we have to go hide until the mommy or daddy find us so that’s fun except that there always crying wen they find us but I don't know why.

I have to go book, somepony just yelled SNATCHER so I have to hide again.

Bye!

Can I also get some info on the other foals in the fort too, especially the sibling? (brother until noted otherwise) Thinking I might get some crazy kid antics up in here!  Cutie Mark Crusaders Fortress Foals! YAY!  :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 03, 2011, 05:13:06 am
Khenal's Book, Chapter 4

I don't like badgerpegasi.  Apparently, neither does Captain Starkey.  He had us hunting them for training for the last few days.  Moving as a squad took getting used to, but we've killed several of them.  The bodies are waiting for the butcher.  I think I'll stick to fruits and veggies for a while.  It just feels weird to eat badgerpegasus meat.


Chapter 5

The caravan was spotted today, and we were dispatched to escort them in.  Everypony was on edge worrying about a possible Diomedian attack on the caravan.  Happily, all was quiet.  I think the caravan brought a lot of metal, we've been getting new equipment.  I really like this new spear.  I'd love if it never had to be used, but I know it will help protect GlitterGlen.


Chapter 6

Snatchers have returned.  One was spotted early and chased off.  The other, however, actually made it down almost past the barracks!  Captain Starkey spotted the would-be foalnapper and yelled the warning before giving chase.  He had it cornered and we finished it off.  I christened my new spear with Diomedian blood and brains.  The others are giving me credit for the kill, but I think the Captain had given it a mortal wound already.  All I did was make it stop moving.  I'm just glad the Captain was the one to spot it.  I didn't notice until later that night, but the Diomedian had given my new copper armor a good gash.  If anypony but the Captain had found it, I fear somepony would have gotten that dagger in their heart.

I noticed something else concerning that night: my old spear was gone.  At first, I thought it was simply melted to be used as something else, maybe even my new armor.  But the other old equipment was still in the armory.  I hope I'm just being paranoid, but I can't help but be concerned.  I don't know why, but it's disappearance reminds me of the strange business of those wooden wing extensions.  I really hope it's nothing.  After all, it's been a long time since I've woken up with anything weird on my wings.




*****

Awesome! This thread is shaping up to be really great. And thanks so much Khenal!

No problem!  I like that pony creator, and I like having pictures to associate with the ponies :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 03, 2011, 05:30:03 am
Friesden's Diary

Now to dye these wings we have, yes yes! We must order dye...but what justification can we gi- We've got it! We need proper uniforms so that if some bad stuff happens the blood won't be seen! Red dye will be ours!hahahahahaHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!


PS. We know you're reading! Look behind you!
PPS. Hahahahaha! Got you! Hahahaha! Actually, there is something behind you now. Just close your eyes, it'll all be over soon....HAHAHAHAA! GOT YOU AGAIN!
PPPS. Did you really think we'd do it? Hahahaha! We only do it to useless pegasi...are you a useless pegasi? No? Then you don't need to fear us! HAHAHAHAHAHA!

Love, Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 04, 2011, 02:39:03 pm
I like the idea of the Cutie Mark Crusader Fortress Foals Yay!
Here is Venture's info and below is her Big Brother. I think ponies grow up faster than dwarves? In my other fortress I think it was around 5 or 6 years of age, so Venture's Big Brother is nearly grown, in I remember correctly. Also, the only other foal in the fort is Ironya's baby pegasus boy, which I posted awhile back. It's still a newborn and thus sticking to it's mother but I'll be sure to note when it becomes a child. But don't worry, I'm sure there will be plenty of kids running around soon enough.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
In other news. Khenal now has a pet war dog named Rithul Istabaratol.

And Starkey now has a war Grizzly Bear, that recently gave birth, she's named Etol Astelrithlut.

I've decided to include in this update some of the god/goddesses of the fortress, for reference, in case anyone cares.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)


And finally a more detailed list of the skills of all the named ponies.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on October 04, 2011, 04:03:46 pm
Hmmm, what enemies we have, except goblins?

Also if Ironya's kid shall be kidnapped or otherwise harmed, this expert weaponsmith will arrange an 'accident' that will include several *iron axe*'s and couple of military ponies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 04, 2011, 04:54:45 pm
Cutie Mark Crusaders Fortress Foals Yay!
Spoiler (click to show/hide)


Maybe set a few wooden spike weapon traps at the entrances to ensure foal safety?  In my experience, thieves may be trap immune, but snatchers will happily impale themselves on whatever traps are laying around. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 04, 2011, 10:02:29 pm
Hmmm, what enemies we have, except goblins?

Also if Ironya's kid shall be kidnapped or otherwise harmed, this expert weaponsmith will arrange an 'accident' that will include several *iron axe*'s and couple of military ponies.

No goblins in this mod, just Diomedian (spelling?) Ponies, which are basically just goblin ponies. In terms of other dangers, I embarked in a Terrifying area, but the only even slightly dangerous wildlife I've seen are Honey Badger Ponies/Pegasi which aren't even strong enough to threaten an unarmed pony, I'm actually kind of disappointed, last time I played in an evil biome, in vanilla, the fort was destroyed by three Ogres, before the end of the first summer, I learned a lot from that failure.

From the embark information we should get visitors from the Buffalo, Zebra, Ponies, Cave Ponies, and Rainbow Ponies civilizations in addition to the Diomedians. However thus far we have only seen caravans from the Ponies, and the Zebras, however it's early in the forts life yet, others will arrive soon, I'm sure. Our civilization isn't currently at war with any other civs, but that could change after we mine some Diomedimite, and get some more iron. I might antagonize the Buffalo if I'm feeling confident, after all Buffalo have no cutie mark, they have no purpose in life, they are worthless, and good for nothing other than making meat cupcakes, skull totems, and bone bolts. (Modded ethics to allow butchering of enemies, that Diomedian Snatcher Khenal killed could end up in a Big Tasty Stew, assuming the butchers get to it before it rots, they've been busy busting up rotten badger corpses into bones.)

And I don't think Ironya has to worry about her baby much. After that last near slip up I'm going to take a few extra measures to ensure future snatchers don't get the chance to get as close.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 04, 2011, 10:09:41 pm
Hmmm, what enemies we have, except goblins?

Also if Ironya's kid shall be kidnapped or otherwise harmed, this expert weaponsmith will arrange an 'accident' that will include several *iron axe*'s and couple of military ponies.

No goblins in this mod, just Diomedian (spelling?) Ponies, which are basically just goblin ponies. In terms of other dangers, I embarked in a Terrifying area, but the only even slightly dangerous wildlife I've seen are Honey Badger Ponies/Pegasi which aren't even strong enough to threaten an unarmed pony, I'm actually kind of disappointed, last time I played in an evil biome, in vanilla, the fort was destroyed by three Ogres, before the end of the first summer, I learned a lot from that failure.

From the embark information we should get visitors from the Buffalo, Zebra, Ponies, Cave Ponies, and Rainbow Ponies civilizations in addition to the Diomedians. However thus far we have only seen caravans from the Ponies, and the Zebras, however it's early in the forts life yet, others will arrive soon, I'm sure. Our civilization isn't currently at war with any other civs, but that could change after we mine some Diomedimite, and get some more iron. I might antagonize the Buffalo if I'm feeling confident, after all Buffalo have no cutie mark, they have no purpose in life, they are worthless, and good for nothing other than making meat cupcakes, skull totems, and bone bolts. (Modded ethics to allow butchering of enemies, that Diomedian Snatcher Khenal killed could end up in a Big Tasty Stew, assuming the butchers get to it before it rots, they've been busy busting up rotten badger corpses into bones.)

And I don't think Ironya has to worry about her baby much. After that last near slip up I'm going to take a few extra measures to ensure future snatchers don't get the chance to get as close.

Have you seen the mentally advanced MLP series?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 04, 2011, 10:29:57 pm

Have you seen the mentally advanced MLP series?

Yes, and it is one of my favorite abridged series, and yes I was referencing what Pinkie Pie said to Gilda, about griffins, in her episode. I also liked Friendship is Witchcraft, (another abridged series) but not quite as much. Anyway, will try to update again, tomorrow after class. Apologies again about the slow rate of stuff, physics and math classes keeping me busy, so I don't have as much time as I'd like.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 04, 2011, 11:05:37 pm

Have you seen the mentally advanced MLP series?

Yes, and it is one of my favorite abridged series, and yes I was referencing what Pinkie Pie said to Gilda, about griffins, in her episode. I also liked Friendship is Witchcraft, (another abridged series) but not quite as much. Anyway, will try to update again, tomorrow after class. Apologies again about the slow rate of stuff, physics and math classes keeping me busy, so I don't have as much time as I'd like.

Did think you were :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on October 05, 2011, 02:03:08 am
Thanks for the info, KingStrongbeard, didn't know ThunderSplinter had any combat skills, that changes a few things.

Cheerz,
Darkening Kaos, CIS.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 05, 2011, 09:46:44 am
Thanks for the info, KingStrongbeard, didn't know ThunderSplinter had any combat skills, that changes a few things.

Cheerz,
Darkening Kaos, CIS.

He didn't have any originally, but all of the starting 7 have at least Dabbling due to the initial Honey Badger Pegasi attack. Thundersplinter also has one kill from that attack if I'm not mistaken.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 05, 2011, 11:43:12 am
Hi again book!  It's me Venture!
I just remembered that I forgot to tell you about my family!  Sorry about that, I can be really forgetful sometimes.  Well first there's my mommy and daddy.  Daddy is the best carpenter EVER! He use to make really pretty bed and doors and all sorts of stuff back home.  I mean old home, sorry book. Mommy used to sing and dance for the noble ponies back home because she was so pretty and was the best singer in the whole town and even teaches me how to sing really good too. Some times she would come home really late at night crying or hurt or both after dancing for the nobles and daddy would get super angry at them and start saying lots of bad words about them and taking out his ax but mommy would always say that there was nothing they could do and it was just how things were, and then they would both start crying and hugging and ----
Sorry book, I wanna wright about something else now. 
Then there's my brother who is a unicorn so he has a horn but no wings like me.  His name is Peytrel, like the armor thing.  He's older than me and some times he can be SUPER MEAN!!  Like when he uses his magic to carry icky gross spiders and chase me around with them like a jerk, or when he wants to play adventurer and bandit and I'm ALWAYS the bandit! He hits way too hard with his stick and he can use magic but I cant so hes way better! He says he has to hit hard so he can learn to be a soldier some day but I tell him he's too pudgy to be a soldire and then we get into a huge fight and we both get sent to time out and it was so not my fault!  Other times he can be nice too, like how he tell's me bead-time stories when mommy and daddy are too busy with work and how he is always the first pony to come when I have my wired bad dreams and the one time he bucked one of those big mean ponies when they were trying to take me away because I have wings and a horn.  He is a really brave pony and I don't say it, but I think he will be the best most super brave soldier ever!
New home has lotsa other ponies too.  There's the big green pony that's like me. His name is Khenal and he is super nice and strong and hansom nice. He has been doing lots of jobs around the fort but he said that if he has time he would teach me some magic!  He has a book too that he calls "his Book", so that's why I call you book. He is so Awsum!
There's no other foals like me in new home but there is this little Pegasus newborn that is SO CUTIE! With his little tail and tinny wings and his soooo adorable laugh!  I can't remember his name but I like to call him "Bubbly" because of his laughing.
There's also Ms. Charity and Mr. Cryptson.  Ms. Charity is bossy and Mr. Cyptson is kinda creepy so I stay away from them. 
Starkey is the milita comsti  commisi  comisar boss pony.  He always wheres this shiny armor and is a great fighter!  My brother is always trying to talk to  him and folwos him around sometimes. I don't think he even notice's him, but my brother is stubborn as a mule and he'll keep going until he dose notice him. Ms. ThunderSplinter says she is the best carpenter here but I know my daddy is way better! She wants to build a big wood tower that sounds super cool!  Dr. Friesden is the midcal medical pony and has this funny eye twitch. 
There's lots of others like Theropod and Benoni and Pillomino and... some others I can't remember but I'm running out of room so I'll stop now. 
Goodnight book!
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That's right Ironya, I just nik-named yo babby! Hope it's OK.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on October 05, 2011, 11:54:04 am
It'sa be okay~~

Actually, King Strongbeard, name my first kiddo 'Bubel' :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 05, 2011, 12:26:47 pm
 8) Adventure Time Bitches!  8)
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Book, something really scary happened today.
When I was down in the tunnels way below the ground I heard these wired sounds.  I got scared because it was weird and I didn't know what it was, but then I thought that it might be a pony in trouble, trapped under a rock or something, so I ran towards the sound as fast a I could but when I got there it wasn't a pony at all!  It was a HUGE ENORMOUS SPIDER THAT WAS ON FIRE!!!     
I screamed and ran away as fast as I could but it chased me and was so fast that it almost got me!  I ran for a long time and got lost cause no other pony was around and I ran into the tome of some pony named Lolum that Khenal had told me about.  I though that I was donefor for sure, but then some big strong pony with grey wings yelled at the giant fire spider to leave me alone.  The spider charged at him and there was this huge awssome battle as he fought the spider! He was like Raaaaaggaaa!! and kicking it a bunch of times and it was all like SKAWWWKAKAKWKAWAAA!! and it snapped at him and spit fire at him it was so cool i wish my brother was there he would have really liked it so COOL!!!   But the the spider hit him agenst the wall super hard and was going to stab him with its claw when he SHOT MAGIC RAINBOW FIRE OUT OF HIS MOUTH AND BURNED IT TO A SMALL PILE OF ASHES!!!!  It. Was. Awesome! 
Afterward he came up to me and asked me if I was OK.  He was really happy I was and made me promise not to play in the tunnels anymore but before I could say thank you he disapired!  Then my brother and daddy and a bunch of other ponies came running in and blamed ME for knocking over the sarcofigufus and other stuff in the tomb.  I told them about the big fight and the spider and stuff but they didn't believe me.  I got spanked a lot and got sent to bed with no supper AND I have to wash all the floors all  by myself! 
You believe me though, don't you Book?
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Super fun near death experience!  Yay!

Also, Dsarker keep a hold on the pair of wings, I have an idea for another adventure involving them. Don't worry, Friesden won't get found out at all!  Not even the foals will figure it out with it starring them in the face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 05, 2011, 02:11:30 pm
The Journal of Cap'n Starkey

That little shadow of mine, Peytrel, came running up today babbling something about his little sister and some great flaming spider or somesuch. I put it off as a game of pretend - hells, I had quite the imagination as a colt - until Miss Charity came in right after him about the same thing. We found her in Lolum's tomb, with no trace of the beast.

The wierd thing is this: the filly claims she saw... well, she said a pegasus with grey wings came in and slew the beast by burning it to ash. Miss Charity and the filly's parents blew it off as an overactive imagination, and she got in trouble for disturbing Lolum's tomb. I don't buy that.

I went back to his tomb today, and I found a pile of ash and chitin in the corner. The seal on his sarcophagus is broken too. I told his old wingleader, and she agrees.

Good job son. I'm proud of you, and I'm sorry.


PS: remember to tell Khenal about Friesden. I've noticed how she watches him, lingering on his wings and... flanks, but I don't think he even sees her. Between training, guard duty, and carpentry, the kid needs something besides work to take up his time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 05, 2011, 02:22:45 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 7

I read through you and realized something, my Book: I haven't really written anything happy in you.  Like any book, you should give a good impression of what's going on, and I've done you wrong.  I haven't mentioned how happy I am here, how so much better life is here than at the Capital.  I don't know a whole lot of ponies personally here, but everyone is friendly.  The few foals around Glitterglen are adorable.  Past adorable.  Like diabetes and a heart attack from cuteness. 

Huh.  I am not a poet, that's a terrible analogy. 

Venture and Peytrel, the little alicorn and unicorn respectively, really bring life to this place.  Peytrel wants to join the military when he grows up and is constantly trying to get tips from Captain Starkey.  Venture noticed me writing in you, my Book, and asked what I was doing.  I explained about you and she seemed almost awestruck.  The next day, I saw her carrying around a little book of her own.  She's also asked me to teach her magic.  I'm nothing special when it comes to magic, though I do know that alicorn magic is different from unicorn magic.  I'll try my best, but I think she needs to be a bit older before she'll be able to do much.


Chapter 8

Lolum still watches and protects us.  Nopony was too worried when Venture couldnt be found, at least at first.  She's quite energetic and her and Peytrel are often off exploring the depths of the fortress.  When her brother asked where she was, then we worried.  Diomedian snatchers always came in twos, never threes.  Right?

 Please?

Crashing sounds from Lolum's tomb had us all galloping as fast as our hooves would take us.  Inside, we found little Venture.  When she saw us, she started gushing excitedly about a pony with gray wings that saved her.  At first I thought the Captain had found her, until she said it breathed rainbow fire and incinerated the fire spider(?) and saved her.  Nopony else believed her, I don't think they noticed the little pile of ashes. 

How could they not notice those scorch marks, though?!  Then I thought of something: Lolum didn't want them to see.  Or maybe they really couldn't see them.  I thought back to my first fight with the badgerpegasi.  I haven't been that collected in a fight since.  I think Lolum helped me, lent me his skill against the enemies of GlitterGlen.  Even beyond the grave, he is doing his part to protect these ponies.  How can I do anything less? 

I think I'll try showing Venture some mental exercises.  She may be too young to actually channel her magic, but I can help her learn to focus and concentrate.  A good foundation is important.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 05, 2011, 02:54:33 pm
Hey, I just realized something.
The origin of this fort is that a bunch of pony criminals (in the eye's of the nobles at least, Slade beds mandates probably) were banished to this hell hole, so if news of the settlement thriving (more or less) reaches the capital, what will happen? 
Demands for goods?
Cutting off trade?
Unreasonable taxes?
Taking the credit, saying this was planed all along?
Sending the more violent criminals to us?
All of the above?

DID THEY ALREADY SELL US OUT TO THE DIOMEDIANS!?!?!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 05, 2011, 03:26:31 pm
Friesden's Diary

We need time off. The precious does not get injured. Nopony is fighting. This frustrates us! We must ensure that something allows us to attach the precious' wing extensions to the precious soon. It will happen soon, precious, don't you worry!

In meantime, we must make sure nopony gets hurt. Is boring at the moment. Nothing to do. Nopony to practice on. Must find new goal.


PS. I don't have anything to put in my PS today.

Love, Friesden
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 06, 2011, 11:14:56 am
Charity's Journal 14th Timber 95

God's above what is that horrendous smell. I was just heading up to the surface to check on how the additions to the walls are coming along, and there is this ungodly odor pouring from the underground farms. Everypony around seems to be bothered by it as well.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Stink%21%20Stink%20In%20the%20Farms.png)

Upon reaching the surface walls I was pleasantly surprised to see a caravan of cave ponies coming, there beasts of burden heavily laden with goods. Time to trade.

The smell is gone now. No pony seems to know what it was. Someone cleaned it up I guess? Maybe a peahen egg rolled away somewhere and rotted? Or something from the Kitchen perhaps? Whatever it was it's gone now.

Charity's Journal 24th Timber 95

The Cave ponies have been quite unreasonable. They came with only one bar of steel and one bar of billion (a worthless metal, we can't even make arms or armor from it) but they had many crafts made from steel or iron or copper or bronze. Naturally, they overcharged us for their trinkets that we only intended to melt down. Afterward, we lacked the goods to trade for the cloth and leather that we also needed. So, I sent Starkey and Khenal, to take it from them, by force if necessary. Despite taking a few bins, free of charge, they still left with a profit of several thousand bits. They should be thankful for that.

Charity's Journal 28th Timber 95

Osal Habithare, one of our young military recruits, has been oftly withdrawn lately, or at least that's what his captain has told me, best to keep an eye on him I think.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/merchants%20and%20an%20artifact.png)

Charity's Journal 4th Moonstone 95

Today Osal, came galloping out of the bowyer's show, holding the finest looking crossbow I have ever seen in my lifetime. He held it aloft and declared that It's name would be his, and from now on they would be inseparable. While, I'd rather see that magnificent bow in the hands of someone who knows what there doing like Captian Otik, I admit that he did make and deserves the right to use it, especially if he can make more similar to it for the other marksponies.


Never had a boyer mood before. But now the second artifact of Glitterglen is finished, a wooden crossbow baring the name Osal Habithare. How decent are artifact crossbows? Does quality affect accuracy with fired bolts, or just for melee attacks? Forgot to take a screen shot of the description before saving and quitting, but I remember it was menacing with spikes of wood, and decorated with Lama wool cloth. I'll post the in-game description later.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on October 06, 2011, 11:28:10 am
Just melee attack. And it's wood, so it's crappy anyways.

But, shiny! :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 06, 2011, 03:30:54 pm
It does affect accuracy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 06, 2011, 04:31:10 pm
I think it also has an effect on rate of fire.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 07, 2011, 01:31:18 am
Khenal's Book, Chapter 9

Another caravan today, though this one is different; it's a cave pony caravan.  Apparently, they overcharged severely for their metallic wares and Mrs. Charity asked me and Captain Starkey to "renegotiate the terms of our trade agreement."  I think the Captain brought me along more for my being an alicorn than my willingness to fight these ponies.  I think the Captain would have been willing to show the cave ponies the error of their greed, but I was most certainly bluffing.  In the end, we procured several bins of cloth and leather from the merchants and they still obviously made a profit.  I'm glad they didn't call my bluff.  I would back the Captain if it actually came to blows, but I'd prefer to never stain my spear with the blood of ponies who came in peace.  Even if they are ornery.


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I have no idea what an artifact crossbow does for this version.  In previous versions, they seemed to be equivalent to a machine gun in power and rate of fire.  I never bothered with crossbow squads, though.  I could never get them to remember to bring bolts.

Minor edit for grammar/spelling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 07, 2011, 02:19:37 am
The Journal of Cap'n Starkey

24th Timber, 95

Insubordination. Assaulting a superior officer. And now banditry.

Sure, I can tell myself that Glitterglen needs those goods far more than they do. Or that they still walked away with a tidy pile of bits for their troubles. But that still doesn't make it sit any better in my stomache.

I'll go along with it this time. Hells, if it had come to blows I'd have laid them all low without a second thought. But next time Miss Charity wants to pull a stunt like this, she can find somepony else.

4th Moonstone, 95

Private Osal showed up at the range today with the most gorgeous piece of hardware I've ever laid eyes on. If he can make a few more of those, I might just consider taking up marksmanship again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 07, 2011, 02:30:54 am
Friesden's diary.

Having watched our great leader authorise the theft of several objects from the cave pony caravan...nope, we've got nothing. Meh. Soon our precious will be ready for the addition of the precious.

PS. Why is it PS? Tell me or suffer!

Love, Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on October 07, 2011, 03:12:51 am
Excerps from the diary of ThunderSplinter;

Late Timber:
Finally finished building all the beds on order and I've decided to take some time off.  I'm sitting on the topmost level of the Air Traffic Tower looking at the view - quite spectacular really - while I collect and record my thoughts.  Also, i've just painted my hooves with the latest batch of hoofpolish that I've been helping Ironya develop.  I collect and boil down sawdust from a few select trees - the most resinous ones, of course - then Ironya mixes the resin with a few powders and some filings from her work, then we mix in some of the wood spirit the brewer makes for us - that thins it out and makes it suitable for painting with a brush.  We are still experimenting with brushes, the ones we have at the moment paint on the polish a bit thick, so we might have to consult with an artist of some description.

There is a lot of shouting downstairs, but I don't want to chip the polish on my hooves before it sets, so, where was I?  Yes.  I think there is still room for experimentation, Ironya wants to add Bismuthinite to get a type of pearlescent effect, but I think I might get some fish scales from the fishery and grind them up.... I must ask Charity if we have a mortar and pestle.

That shouting downstairs is getting really loud....

Anyway, if we can get the pearlescent effect right, I will suggest to Ironya that we try for some bioluminescent hoofpolish....don't know why, or even who would want it, but, you know, its important to have a wide selection, and an expanding selection of hoofpolish would be a high priority.

If they don't still the ruckus down there, I will have some stern words with them, and if my hoofpolish gets chipped, I will be quite angry.....and yes, I think I hear Khenal's voice, why am I not surprised?  Why is he always the lodestone for trouble?

Fish-scales......What do I keep them in until I have enough of them to add to the next batch of hoofpolish?  Obviously glass.  I'll put together a list of options and then go down to the stores, but first, I must wait a few more minutes for the polish to set.

And its suddenly gone quiet, couldn't have been all that important or the warning bell would have been sounded.  In that case, sitting here in the sun for the next hour is much more important than wondering what the boys are getting all rowdy about.

I might even have a nap.
ThunderSplinter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 07, 2011, 06:55:21 am
Hey book. It's me.
Sorry if I sound sad or something, but I missed out on seeing something supper cool.  We were visited by cave ponies today!  I was so exited because I never seen a cave pony before and I heard they have all lost of legs and glowing eyes and tentacles and other cool stuff!  They live underground and since we live underground too I thought we could be friends and stuff.  Maybe they could come and live with us bring there kid's and then me and my brother would have somepony to play with! I ran down to the trade depot to see them and say hello and stuff but Mr. Benoni put a hoof in front of me and said I couldn't go. I saw Mr. Captain Starkey (why is he a captain when we got no boats?) and Mr. Khenal go in and then there was a lot of yelling and cursing before they came out again. I asked Mr. Khenal what happened and he said that they just a a disergement with the cave ponies.
You think it's because they don't like that we live in caves too book?


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Hi book!
I had a fun day today! Mr. Khenal and me did some magic stuff.  You know, I thought magic would be more exciting, but Khenal just showed me something called "meditating".  That's when we both just sit there and close our eyes and not think of anything at all. It's a lot harder then it sounds and I almost fell asleep.  After that we played where he put a ball under a cup and shuffled it around with two other cups. He said it helps with concentration, but it's fun too even if I'm not too good at it. We got interrupted when some other pony came running into the dinning room yelling about how he mad a crossbow and that it's the best crossbow ever.  Peytrel said that it was super awesome so I guess it was. I though it could use some gems or something but I never really liked wepons and stuff like that much. After that Ms. Ironya let me play with little bubbly! We had super fun playing nighttime-daytime! He is just so CUTE!!! I also wanted to ask  if I could have some of that pretty hoof polish she made with Ms. ThunderSplinter but she said I would have to ask her but she's busy working on her tower so I'll ask tomorrow or something.
I have to go book, mommy said that I have to wash up before supper. I wish the showers weren't so cold all the time.


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Good job robbing the caravan! Now I bet the whole world thinks were a bunch of bandits hiding out in the jungle!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on October 07, 2011, 04:14:27 pm
Just something I made of my pony. (Thanks to Khenal for the colors and mane style)
(http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/8302/tunnel2.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 08, 2011, 01:44:15 am
Awesome Art

Theropod Watcher is obviously a legendary engraver, this is awesome!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 08, 2011, 10:43:16 am
Charity's Journal
I've overheard that a lot of ponies, don't approve of my decision to take the cloth and leather from the caveies. And, I understand their mixed feelings, especially since Glitterglen was originally founded by banished criminals, we don't want to send the image of us being, "Bandits hiding in the Jungle." However, I hope the militia at least will change their tune when they see that the materials are being used mostly to help them in their duties. Our leather workers, are producing a pile of quivers, water-skins, backpacks, cloaks, and bandanas for our brave warriors. And silk cloth is being used to create new silk shirts, trousers, and socks to wear under their armor. Meanwhile the plant cloth is being turned into bags we badly need to store all our dyes, and flours, and sugar. I explained this to Starkey, I think he understood why I had to order the seizure, but asked that I have somepony else do it next time. I told him I hope there won't be a next time.

OOC: Strange thing. I just looked over at Lolum's tomb and the engraved slab of Zuglaroslan was not there. I was sure I had already put it in. But it was still sitting in some stockpile. I was sure I had put it in. /OOC

Charity's Journal 13th Moonstone 95
A worrying thing. The slab depicting the death of Zuglaroslan was removed from Lolum's tomb, and no pony knows why, or who did it. It was just sitting in the furniture stockpile, this morning. I know not what this could mean, but maybe there is some truth to what that foal Venture was saying, could the "fire spider" been a magma crab? Perhaps the ghost of Zuglaroslan? Regardless, I had the slab replaced. I hope nothing supernatural is going going on down there, that tends to mean bad things to come. Damn, we need a priest, or an exorcist, or a god-damned paladin out here.

19th Moonstone 95
More bloody honey badger pegasi. The airborne squadron is chasing them away from our woodcutters as I write. Don't think they've actually hit anything yet. Don't know why they won't use that archery range we've set up for them. Maybe, if they did they could hit something.


OOC: This song started playing, on my media player, just as I sent the militia to give chase. Thought it appropriate, wanted to share. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FozCVz0_Kpc
/OOC

Confound those Horseflies. They, chased the flying badgers for hours, and then they gave up on shooting and decided to bash their heads in with there crossbows. They won. Two, Osal, and another recruit, are bruised and beaten but nothing serious. I called Otik in to explain this tactical disaster, and the best explanation he could afford was that the trees were to thick, and they couldn't get a clear shot, so they had to close to melee.

Charity's Journal 24th Moonstone 95
Raw Adamantine! Praise to Cryptson. Cryptson, while mining for marble, near the magma sea, struck adamantine, the metal of the gods. This is truly auspicious. However, care must be taken, many legends surround this metal, and if even a fraction of them are true, it could mean the end of us all. For all our sakes, not a single stone will be taken from the blue metal until the vein is fully mapped out.


Charity's Journal 28th Moonstone 95
The adamant, has been mapped out, at least of this floor. A little can safety gotten, but a lot can't be mined without, flooding the area with magma. There is an underground lake, directly above it.
(Literally 1 z-level up) Perhaps, we could use that to somehow help us get at the adamant, by cooling the surrounding molten stone, will look into it. Additionally, Cryptson, is going to start digging deeper, and try to follow how deep the vein goes.
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Raw%20adamantine%21%20Praise%20the%20Cryptson%21.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 08, 2011, 01:46:10 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 10

Today is my day off, and I am kinda bored.  I'd go train on my own, but the Captain said that day off means DAY OFF!  I can't even go to the carpentry shop to work, Thunder Splinter says she wants to be able to work without me underhoof for a while.  I wonder if it has to do with the hoof polish her and the other mares have taken to wearing?  I'll probably try to find Venture and continue tutoring her in magic.  She's been doing very well in the exercises we've been doing, I might have her try to actually channel a spell today.  Levitation, I think, would be best.  Have her try to lift a little pebble or a feather.

Hmm, but that will only take an hour or two at most.  I could just wander around the fort, looking at Nicolta Teslas and Theropod Watchers engravings.  Maybe I'll try to talk to Dr. Friesden.  Captain Starkey thinks she likes me.  I don't know about that, but she certainly seems lonely to me.  I'm hardly a center of social activity, but I don't think Dr. Friesden has many friends.  Who knows, maybe that will change.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 08, 2011, 02:37:10 pm
Charity's Journal 1st Opal, 95
Every birth in the fortress is a blessing, and Bebmal, the mother of Venture, and Peytrel, has just given birth to her third child. A pegasus boy, this time. What's up with that family's genetics?
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Charity's Journal 4th Opal, 95
Well, we know now that efim is truly dead, his ghost has been spotted wandering around the bone pile. We still have not found his body. Perhaps, we should create a small memorial, but our mason's are so busy right now, and the ghost doesn't seem violent, I think well just let him be, until he becomes a problem.



Charity's Journal 6th Opal, 95
Every birth in the fortress is a blessing, and Charity, overseer and bookkeeper has just given birth to her first child. A earth pony boy.

Charity's Secret Journal 6th Opal, 95
My first child was born today. He's an earthpony like his father, and he looks just like my Cryptson. We're going to name him Adamant, after the blue metal, and we hope he grows up strong and healthy like his namesake.
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I guess I'll send a letter to his grandfather letting him know that he has a grandson now. Though I doubt he'll accept an earthpony as a member of his family, he always was a unicorn supremacist.
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On the 13th of Opal, 95 the following notice is posted in both dining halls.

Memo to all citizen's of Glitterglen.

From the desk of Mrs. Charity Conventtulip, Overseer of Glitterglen, and chief record keeper.

Please take note, that as of today, the showers are now functioning and available to all in the stone hall. Please be informed, that in the unlikely case of flooding, the lever to disable the flow of water is located inside my office, three floors up, first door on the left. Meanwhile, please enjoy the new water system that has been provided for you.

Charity Conventtulip

12th Obsidian
A rainbow pony caravan and a caravan from our own people, along with the outpost liaison, have arrived together. Trade went fairly well, we acquired a good deal of metal from both caravans. Along with more leather, and a caged tamed raccoon, looks like it might be good to eat. But we got plenty of food already, and it's pretty scrawny. Maybe, someone would like it as a pet?

16th Obsidian 95
A pair of brave or very foolish Keishi thieves tried to rob the caravan. The first was spotted by our High Master Armorer, who got a knife in his hoof for the trouble, he's being taken to Friesden for treatment, but the thief didn't take more than three more steps before, a rainbow guard, the Commander, and a stray black bear descended upon the thief.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/A%20theif%20trys%20to%20rob%20the%20caravan.png)

The second was then spotted and tried to run for it. He might have got away but he ran straight in our lovely Unicorn ranger, while she was hunting, and she put a bolt in his leg, allowing the militia to catch up and finish him, while she shot him a few more time, just to be sure.

I'm putting the militia on high alert until we can be sure that no more ambushes are waiting for us. In the meantime, I'm going to go drag Nicolta away from engraving his bed room and make him get his ass to setting up those traps he promised me.

Thrice damn it. Now he's just said he's going on break, and ran off to the dining hall, lazy ass.
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The following is posted in both dining rooms.

Memo to all citizen's of Glitterglen.

From the desk of Mrs. Charity Conventtulip, Overseer of Glitterglen, and chief record keeper.

In response to the increased snatcher activity, a pair of traps have been placed outside the entrances to the fortress. So, if you need to leave the safety of the a walls, for any reason, and don't desire a hoof with a wooden spike through it, you may ask Nicolta Tesla about proper procedures for bypassing his traps.

Additional note to all parents. Children are not allowed outside the walls, without adult supervision. The jungle is a dangerous place, and not just because of snatchers.

Charity Conventtulip


Charity's Journal 3rd Granite 96
*the page is covered with detailed sketches of a weapon rack*
I got a great idea. I...I... Be right back book, don't go any where.
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Charity%20mood.png)
*And so Charity, skipping as she and little Adamant went, hurried up to the mason's shop where Pillomino had been trying to work on a lovely weapon rack for the barracks, difficult with the ghost of efim constantly looking over her shoulder, when  Charity, laughing with glee, threw her from the room.
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Charity%20claimed.png)


She then proceeded to gather material, she started with Pillomino's partially constructed rack, then she grabbed a lump of cobaltite, some rough indigo tourmalines, the same color of her husband's coat, a bar of copper metal, snatched from the hoofs of Cindersparks before she could smelt it with the newly acquired tin, a roll of Llama wool cloth, her favorite, and a piece of Llama leather. And then she began to work furiously.

However as she worked, the ghost looked on and watched, and during the construction the ghost said to her. You aren't allowed to use that stone. Charity panicked, confused, she sat for days unable to work, before she suddenly renewed construction with a glint in her eye, and, while nopony saw how she did it, when she was done, she had created, Foldbored the Fair Dimples, an iron weapon rack. Yes, an iron rack, despite the complete lack of iron in the room for her to work with. No pony saw iron go in, but undoubtedly iron came out, truly, this is some sort of magic.*
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Some pony needs to explain to me what just happened. When she started her mood and claimed the shop, I forbid all stone except cobaltite, from the stocks menu, because I didn't want the artifact to be a boring grey or brown color, but then when she started construction I went to unforbid all stone and I accidentally forbid cobaltite, I undid it, but when I resumed the game, the cobalt no longer had TSK next to it and I assumed she would stop working and get a new stone, note no stones were forbidden during this time. But instead she kept working on her masonry mood without any stone, and then produced an iron artifact. There was no iron in the shop, I had looked at what she grabbed as she got it and looked through the shop's inventory as she was working, there was no iron present or even iron ore (of which I have none) for her to have used. How did this happen? Is this a known bug? Can we exploit this in the future? Has anyone done !science! on this yet?

Charity's Journal 10th Granite, 96

I've just created the finest weapon rack the world has ever seen. It's truly beautiful. I can't remember what magic I used to create Iron from nothing, though if I could just somehow learn that... Regardless, I do now have more knowledge of stone working in my head than I've ever even known there was to know. I guess, I should try to use it to help out Pillomino with her work.


Edit: Forgot to post the pictures

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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 08, 2011, 03:43:14 pm
Book, I had one of my bad dreams again.
It was last night right after the party we had for Mr. Cryptson on finding that adiiniani amun aluminum blue metal stuff way down in the lower mines.  I was horrible.  Way worse than when that scarey human king came to visit and that was the worse ever!  It was all fire and burning and hurt. So much pain. So much hate. So much hate. I saw a burning fortress, the stones themselves ablaze in the fire of madness. All burn... I saw blood running in rivers to the deaths of the earth, falling into themselves forever.  I saw death unending, the two great ones fighting with no hope for salvation, fighting to bring pain to others. HolisticDetective HolisticDetective HolisticDetective HolisticDetective  I saw madness consume creatures whole, casting them into a darkness where Nightmares fear to treed. I saw the whole world burning in a fire that gives no light.  I saw love ones bring death and suffering to each other with smiles and hope for death. I saw twisted creatures, trapped, pained, and and angered. So desperate to be free. So tortured by there own unending existence. So much hate. So Much Hate.
Sorry book that... happens sometimes.
All the time I saw that blue mettal. It was there protecting me. Shielding me. We souldn't touch it. It's important. It was placed there by gods older than the two sisters. A god of blood holds the way for it is blood it holds back. It was placed for a reason. It must...
Sorry, happened again. I don't remember even having red ink though.
Then I saw the one pegasus from before, the one with the grey wings.  He grabbed me and pulled me out.  He said it would be all right. When I woke up, it was my big brother that was holding me. I guess he heard me screaming and stuff.  He's always the first one here when I have my bad dreams.  We hugged for a long time, and then mommy and daddy came in and we all hugged some more until I stopped crying and went to sleep again.  I had a better dream after that.  I was in a town called ponyville and it was bright and sunny and there were all sorts of friendly ponies there. A pink earth pony started this big party and there was games and dancing and all sorts of yummy food like cake and cup cakes and muffins and all sorts of stuff! It was so supper fun!
Do you think that's what heaven is like book? I hope so.
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I HAVE A LITTLE BROTHER!!
I'm so exited i cant right so gud! Sorry book, just so  exited!
Mommy was really big  for a long time now.  She said that I would have a brother or sister soon.  I was kinda hoping for a little sister, but this is OK too.  It odd, but I think I knew it was going to be my brother for a few da---
Have to go book, daddy says I can go see my little brother now! O, almost forgot, his name is DaringSky. (wish my name was that cool)

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I saw that one pegasus with grey wings talking to Mr. Efim today down in some of the lower levels while me and Peytrel were playing Hide and Hunt.  They were really hard to see, like they were smudged or something. Mr. Efim looked upset about some thing I couldn't hear, but that other pegasus was calming him down. I didn't really pay attention.
Also, Ms. Charity had a little foal today! He's a little cutie! He's kinda clumsy and chubby too, It's so funny! Sky and him really like each other too! I don't like his name though. Adamant is a bad name. Adamantine is a bad metal. We must not...
Sorry, that's been happening a lot recently. Anyways I just call that little cutie Andy!

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Ms. Charity finished her weapon thing today.
She was really exited and told everypony that there would be a party to celibate! I hope daddy lets me drink too much wine again, it was fun even if I woke up with a bad headache the next morning.  Ms. Charity has been working on her thing for a long time now, I hope she gives credit to Mr. Efim and Mr. GeyWings (don't know his real name) for helping. I wanted to ask where they found those iron bars they brought to her but there really hard to find sometimes. 
Ive been learning magic from Mr. Khenal is teaching me real magic and not just focus games and stuff! We worked on lifting little things of the table like sticks and pebbles and feather and stuff. I kinda messed up on one of the feathers and crushed it into a little ball.  I was really embarrassed and sad but Mr Khenal said that it was Ok and that it was because I was trying too hard.  We don't do a lot of magic, and I think it's because he's a little afraid of my last bad dream. I hope thats not true, I don't want to scare anypony like I did back in old home and have to stay home all day.
Your not scared of me too are you book?
NO
Yay! I knew you wouldn't be!

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Many updates are many! Having a little trouble keeping up. Should hav another adventure up soon to. Is your body ready?

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 08, 2011, 05:41:41 pm
Friesdens' Diary

Our precious is entering our parlour, said the spiders to the fly. Now to attach the precious to our precious!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: pantherrpg on October 08, 2011, 07:25:57 pm
Diary of Nicolta Tesla

21st Moonstone, 95
Several ponies have been complimenting me about my engravings. It appears that they have mistaken the various diagrams of death machines I have drawn on the walls for artwork. Perhaps I could use this to earn some more bits for my project.

16th Obsidian, 95
Charity told me to build some traps to defend us against the Diomedian ponies. I went to the dining room to start planning the giant magnifying glass I was going to use immolate intruders. It was there that I met Friesden, who told me to use spike traps instead as they leave the limbs unscathed. Normally, I would have ignored such a suggestion, but I am interested in possibly working on a joint project with her in the future. She's the only other pony here who cares about the advancement of !!Science!! after all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 08, 2011, 08:39:01 pm
"Strange" mumbled Charity, "I don't seem to have written anything in here about Ironya's second baby. That's an important event and should have been chronicled. Ah yes I see why, her second little pegasus boy was born on the 16th of Obsidion, that's the same day as the thieves that tried to rob the caravans. How, could any pony forget, she went into labor, just as the call to arms rang out. With all the excitement I must have forgotten to write anything. Best record the event now."
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The sound of an argument fills the air above the normal sound of hard working ponies. The sound comes from the mid-levels around the mason's shop.

"Why would you make this Pillomino!?" Shouted Charity.
"It shows the truth! Don't pretend it doesn't! Lolum was a weakling, killed by a magma crab of all things! And a fool, wrestling one with his bare hoofs without even the littlest amount of armor." Defended Pillomino.
"Lolum, was a god-damned hero. He scarified himself for those trapped ponies. And then you would dishonor his memory with this, this thing." replied Charity, anger in her voice.
"YOu are being idealistic! You just want to build him up into some great champion to further your own agenda! You are the one dishonoring his death by making him out to be something he is not." Yelled Pillomino.

The two ponies separated. "To think I once called her my friend." mumbled Charity before shouting at the nearest other pony. "Throw that abomination in the magma sea, get Cryptson to dig a hole and just toss it in!"


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Mocking.png)

Pillomino was upset about the loss of one of her masterpieces, but she had many others to keep her placated, so, after a good stiff drink, and a wonderful meal, she had practically forgotten about the entire ordeal.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Punishment.png)

Charity's Journal 27th Granite 96

Well at least we know Nicolta's traps work. A snatcher tried to get in the south entrance, and after getting stabbed several times, by the first trap, proceeded to try and escape out the north entrance and triggered the second trap, by the time the first militia pony was on the scene, our earth pony lasher Langgud, all he had to do was put the bastard out of his misery with a silver whip strike to the head, killed him instantly.


25th Slate 96
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/An%20AMBUSH%21%20Curse%20them%21.png)

It was always only a matter of time. The pegasi squad is being sent to the walls, the north entrance will be closed, the south will be left open so that they can come right into the waiting ground squad. The one to first spot them was Erib the unicorn ranger, instead of running for the safety of the walls, she lead them away, into the jungle, we were confused as to why when out of the jungle, in the
opposite direction came a huge group of migrants. It seems she knew they were coming and sacrificed herself to distract the diomedians while the innocent ponies made a run for the walls.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Ranger.png)

The following ponies managed to get inside to safety. One a male pegasus macepony/fisherman, who was immediately pressed into service. Two a female earthpony armorer. Three, a little unicorn boy, about Venture's age. Four, a female earthpony glassmaker/carpenter. Five, female unicorn siege engineer. Six the mother of that unicorn boy, an earthpony stonecrafter. A female bone doctor and artist.

After those got in, a spearpony recruit by the name of Ramol ran out to fight the enemy alone, save for his faithful pet grizzly bear.
(ran to get one of the dead unicorn's socks no doubt) He charged a darkbolt, with a crossbow, knocked a flying silver bolt away with his spear, as he unleashed his battle cry, as the dark bolt evades his weapon, another bolt, this one copper strikes him in the upper body, but seems to get stuck in his cloak, (told Starkey we needed that cloth) he then stabs the dark bolt three times the final one strikes his chanform and cuts through the iron and bone, and pierces his brain, he drops. He turns and attacks a keishi pony archer, blocks another bolt with his spear. He bucks the archer in the chest and then stabbed it repeatedly. At this point seeing as how he was actually holding his own, Starkey called for a charge, the airborne squad flew, under Otik orders toward the ridge overlooking the battle, while the ground squad charged to help their comrade in arms. As his friends rushed in to help him, Ramol, changed target and stabbed, and bite, and kicked, the other Keishi, as the other Diomodians fled for their lives, chased by his loyal bear, who limped on after them his leg bleeding from a wound, clearly in extreme pain. Khenal, chases down the wounded Diomedian, dodges, a copper bolt from his target, and finishes the pitiful creature. And the others scattered to the wind.

 This bought precious time allowing the rest of the migrants to get inside. Including a spear unicorn fresh from basic training. A pegasan thresher, who apparently forgot he could fly and walked around the walls, instead of flying over. An earthpony butcher, a mace pony/cook, a pegasan siege engineer. Earthpony thresher, pegasan lye maker, Unicorn weapon-smith apprentice, another female unicorn ranger, unicorn butcher, unicorn potter, Legendary female Unicorn Glassmaker, earthpony fisher.


Charity's Journal End of Slate 96

Ramol's actions during the ambush, may have been fool hardy, but no pony can doubt his results, he routed the whole group on his own. The others merely helped him mop up the already broken enemy, for his actions he deserves some sort of reward. Perhaps he can be given better accommodations, but first, Thundersplinter needs to make a couple dozen more beds.


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on October 08, 2011, 09:08:03 pm
Excerps from the diary of ThunderSplinter:

Late Slate;
Watching the battle from the topmost part of the tower and urging the migrants to safety while watching the brave/foolhardy Ramol charge the foul Diomedians.  Never before have I witnessed such selflessness - it is inspiring to say the least and deserving of reward, the very next masterwork bed I make should be his.
Of course, that does mean, with all these new migrants, more beds need to be made, fortunately I am not alone in the carpentry workshops now, another pony works quietly in the second workshop.  I haven't had much to do with him as he is a dedicated father and spends most of his free time with his family, and making more ponies as a consequence, ;).

Nicolta has demonstrated that the trap defenses are worth the effort to install them, perhaps they need to be expanded though, maybe Charity will permit the carving of half a dozen enormous wooden corkscrews to bolster the initial defenses.  I wonder if Nicolta needs assistance in the construction of traps?  The business of making mechanisms does intrigue me and the air traffic tower might need some defences from the rabid honey badger pegasi, something else that needs to be brought to Charity's attention, or should I just go ahead and do it myself?  Yes, perhaps that's a better idea, shouldn't bother her with such trivial matters, what with her new foal, husband and ever-growing responsibilities.

ThunderSplinter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 08, 2011, 09:44:44 pm
((Question for King StrongBeard: have you given any consideration to this story as it relates to MLP canon? Are we in Equestria, or somewhere else? Is this the distant future? The past? Are we in a different universe entirely? I had some ideas for a backstory, but I wanted to get your permission first.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 08, 2011, 10:24:51 pm
((Question for King StrongBeard: have you given any consideration to this story as it relates to MLP canon? Are we in Equestria, or somewhere else? Is this the distant future? The past? Are we in a different universe entirely? I had some ideas for a backstory, but I wanted to get your permission first.))

I had been assuming a different universe, that is why I have tried not to refer to Celestia, Luna, or anything specifically related to the show's world. Although I could change my mind in that respect, if you have some interesting ideas. However, some have, mostly jokingly, said, in the Pony Mod thread, that this mod could be thought of as Equestria, during Discords reign before the sister's sealed him in stone. So either a different universe, as I've been working under the assumption of, or the distant past, during the reign of Discord. Although, distant future could work as well I guess, if you have a good idea for that, but not the way I would choose to go.

Edit: Alternatively, if you don't like the above suggestions, it could be set in the universe of My Little Pony: The (Abridged) Mentally Advanced Series, which I have enjoyed, and it seems like it could work, perhaps in another country separate from Equestria. Episode 1 is here,if you haven't seen it, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jUn86Yy7-IA&feature=relmfu

Edited Edit: Dsarker, Cryptson has been digging out a vein of Cobaltite, and after following it for awhile, it has looped around and reached the place where your murder was carried out, and where Efim's body is still sealed up. If it is okay with you I'd like to have him accidentally breach the room, find the body, and thus allow an investigation to begin. Don't worry about Friesden right away at least, no one will link the crime to him right away. Is that okay with you?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 09, 2011, 02:12:31 am
Sure!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 09, 2011, 03:10:20 am
Khenal's Book, Chapter 11

Last week, Cryptson discovered Adamantine!  There are all kinds of legends about the metal, and the prospect of adamantine armor really excited me.  I'm not so sure, now.  Little Venture told me about a bad dream she had, and apparently her bad dreams aren't uncommon.  Her dealings with Lolum make me want to take her dreams seriously.  I suspect she is predisposed to magics of divination and awareness.  I'll definitely need to put even more emphasis on control and concentration in our lessens.  Madness is a real danger to ponies with abilities like hers.

Oh, I almost forgot: Dr. Friesden and I seem well on our way to becoming friends.  Dropping in on her seems to have been a good idea.  She was a little jumpy and odd at first, and she still is eccentric, but she did seem happy to have somepony to talk to.  Almost all of her medical talk goes over my head, but her passion for it is plain to see.


Chapter 12

Nicolta Tesla recently finished setting up some traps at the entrances to Glitter Glen, and they've even stopped a few Diomedians.  Unfortunately, they decided to attack in force today.  Ebsas, one of our rangers, sent up the shout and lead them away from the fort.  She saw the wave of migrants at the same time she spotted the ambush, and sacrificed herself to ensure their safety.  A hooffull of migrants were able to dash inside while the Diomedians were distracted, but many more were still out in the jungle.  One of the new spear ponies, Ramol, broke ranks and charged the Diomedians before Captain Starkey could order the charge.

My heart sank, I was certain we would witness his death in short order.  However, he fell on those Diomedians like a pony possessed.  The Captain ordered the charge and the Diomedians broke and fled.  I finished one that Ramol had wounded, though several got away.  Ramol is the hero of the day, though I think Captain Starkey is annoyed that he broke ranks and charged on his own.  I'm just glad that so few ponies were hurt.  Ramol broke the will of the Diomedians, but we must not forget Ebsas' sacrifice to ensure the safety of others.


******

Ah, HeadShoots/SyrupLeaf references. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on October 09, 2011, 03:57:52 am
Are you sure it's Ironya's kid?

Nicknames of parents show up in 'parents' part of the description, they always did :P

And I don't see 'Ironya' anywhere written there :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 09, 2011, 10:41:27 am
Are you sure it's Ironya's kid?

Nicknames of parents show up in 'parents' part of the description, they always did :P

And I don't see 'Ironya' anywhere written there :P

Indeed I am sure. And I have proof.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Indeed.png)

Edit: Sometimes, I've noticed nicknames don't show up where they should. For example the nickname's displayed properly under Charity's son's page, but they don't on Ironya's second baby's page, despite showing up correctly on his relationship chart.

Also, nicknames don't show up in some places I would want them too, such as in "This is an engraving/statue/decoration/figurine/etc. of something, by (somepony)" where "somepony" is the original name of the creature, not the nickname. It is annoying. Or when it is an engraving or statue of somepony, and doesn't call them by there nickname.

Also, in my previous fort, I noticed that tantrums for some reason, remove the nickname from the pony. I was building a fortress in the sky, and my dinning room wasn't yet fully sealed, and a parasprite invasion flew in and ate all my prepared meals, and many barrels of food drink, and killed two geese. This caused my cook, "Carrot-cake" to tantrum and kill the manager, which caused another nicknamed pony to tantrum, and then after the chaos, both "Carrot-cake" and the other one no longer had nicknames.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 09, 2011, 03:26:42 pm
The Journal of Cap'n Starkey

 - - - - - -

26th Slate, '96

Oh-ho-ho, so the Diomedians grew a pair, did they?

They came with a medium-sized raiding party, not an army - for which I am secretly grateful. Because if there had been many more of the bastards, Private Ramol's, ah, enthusiasm probably would've cost him his life. The moment the gate swung open to let some newcomers seek refuge, he was out the door and charging towards the Diomedian force at full gallop. It was all I could do to stop myself from ordering the charge early to save his sorry flank, but much to my surprise - and I'll admit, more than a little pride - the lad held his own just fine without us. By the time the rest of us got there, he had practically routed the raiders on his own!

I'll let Doc Friesden give Ramol the once-over just to be sure, then he gets first pick of new equipment when he gets back.

...which he will have the honor of wearing while he makes fifteen laps around the fortress walls. This fortress needs heroes son, not martyrs!

 - - - - - -

30th Slate, '96

Nothing happening today. nothing much at all has happened since theattack a few days ago.

Last week, Head Miner Cryptson ran into an Adamantine pillar. I've had a little experience with the stuff: back in my city guard days, I got a small spool of woven adamantine thread from a curio shop, cost me most of a week's wages. I used the stuff to re-string my crossbow, and it was a wonder. I could crank her back as far as she would go, and the stuff wouldn't snap. Goddess, I had fun with that. Shame they confiscated it when - well, none of that matters anymore. All the same, It'll be nice to see what our smiths can do with the miracle metal.

Of course, there have been more than a few murmurs of concerns - apparently, my father wasn't the only one who liked to frighten little foals with old ponytales. Most worrisome is Khenal's diagnosis of the little filly Venture. Apparently she has been plagued by vivid nightmares as of late, but he believes them to be something much deeper than that. After the incident with Lolum's spirit, I'm inclined to agree with him.

Of course, now he intends to take her under his wing as his magical student or somesuch. As if he needed more work. I love the lad to death, I really do, and I trust his judgement completely, especially when it comes to the supernatural. But damn, does that boy need a marefriend. I see he took my advice about the good doctor, and they seem to be getting along well.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 09, 2011, 03:39:33 pm
Friesden's diary.

Well, diary, what's happened now is quite strange. I seem to be getting along quite well with two ponies now. Nicolta Tesla and Khenal. Strange. I've got some strange memories. I think I need to rest. Night!

Friesden


WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING TO US?! We have the precious and our precious, why do we not fix them! We have the technology! We must do it now!

PS. Silly Friesden, trying to get back! You no can have body!

Love, Friesden!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on October 09, 2011, 03:49:34 pm
I have a question for the thread at large here. I'm interested in joining in with all the writing going on, but I've never done such before. One worry is that when writing in first-person I tend to lose my sense of detachment, and the fact that my pony has exactly my username could easily compound this fact. Furthermore, as I am unused to such cooperative efforts, and am somewhat worried I will offend someone or muck up someones plans. Do you guys think I could join in, even though I lack experience?

P.s. Sorry about the formality of the sentence structure, I slipped into major writing mode there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 09, 2011, 04:11:21 pm
Yeah, sure thing!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 09, 2011, 06:51:22 pm
More ponies is more better!  The only way to get experience is to do, so get doing :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on October 09, 2011, 07:55:52 pm
Theropod Watcher's Journal
Entry 1
Hello Journal. I recently made a massive decision; I moved. While I loathe change, it was such a great opportunity for some quiet and peaceful engraving.

This place is called Glitterglen, and its smack dab in the middle of a hot, and miserably humid, rainforest. Luckily, my job keeps me deep in the cool and somber rock, allowing for deep thought. The more I thought, the better my art has become.

Its not all great though,  we have been attacked by diomedians, and some ponies have died. There has also been talk of ghosts and spirits, I do hope the pony in charge doesn't go crazy with so called "Exorcists" like they did back home; those con artists brought such misery to those who were proclaimed "possessed".

I'm getting too worked up now, I'll go engrave some waves.

Theropod Watcher
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 11, 2011, 10:37:51 pm
Hey, you haven't forgotten about us have you?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 11, 2011, 11:21:51 pm
Hey, you haven't forgotten about us have you?

You talking to me Impending Doom? No I haven't forgotten, just been kind of busy, don't have alot of free time during the week you see, and I picked up Dark Souls on Sunday, so yeah, but, I'm going to play for a little while know. Expect a game update soon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 12, 2011, 01:29:29 am
Charity's Journal 11th Felsite, 96

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Therleth.png)
and it's an adorable little unicorn filly.

I also, noticed little Bubel, Ironya's first, isn't quite as little anymore, I saw him and Venture, Shigos
(the unicorn pony foal from the last wave) and Peytral, playing in the water in the dinning room. Bubel's pretty quick for his size, but seemed to tire quickly and go back to mommy, before the other kids where done playing, but, it's good that Venture has a few ponies to play with that are closer to his own age. I latter spotted Peytral playing with Starkey's axe that he found lying in the barracks, Starkey must have been really tired to have left that lying around, he's never apart from it. I scolded him for playing with the militia's weapons and sent him home, but he didn't really seem to listen to me. Oh well.

15th Felsite 96

One of our fisherponies, spotted a giant tiger while out bringing some wood to Thunder. Fortunately, no pony was hurt, I hate to harm such a majestic creature, perhaps Nicolta Tesla has some ideas about ways to catch it unharmed? I'll ask him over a nice pint of pegasan ale.

26th Hematite, 96

A pony by the name of Tunur Buzatadril, has been made Mayor of Glitterglen. He's one of our best armorers and with our lack of materials apparently had the time to run for office, while I was busy actually running this place. Damnit, I can't believe they voted for that mud pony over me. This is unacceptable, I'm going to have to do something about this.

And here comes the power trip, he's making demands already. He's just demanding the production of steel items!? We had already sent a work order for more steel arms and armor to the forges. See this is why you don't vote for some stupid mud pony, they don't even know what's going on in their own fortress.


3rd Malachite, 96

The Giant Tiger from before hasn't been seen since, but a few cage traps have been set up. Maybe we'll get lucky and it'll trigger one if it returns, if not our militia can easily take care of it if it becomes dangerous.

5th Malachite, 96

Another group of migrants has arrived, about nine of them this time, lets see. that brings Glitterglen up to a population of 89, counting all the babies and children. Considering when we started out back in the spring of 94, we were just 7 outcasts we've really grown, I wonder if the government will try to claim us as a proper territory soon. But if they do, they'll probably start demanding we pay taxes to the princess.

Anyway 9 new ponies, one earth pony hunter. two eathpony metal crafter, an earthpony soldier, a unicorn wound dresser, A male Royal Pony architect/stonemason. A professional pegasan cook, and father of two kids, the mother didn't come with them, don't know the story there, probably don't want to ask. The kids are a pegasan boy nearly full grown, and his sister two years his younger who is an earth pony. A mechaninc, who is also, a rather talented axe pony.

6th Malachite, 96

Ironya, was surrounded by a strange purple glowing light today, as she was carrying some of her handy work upstairs to show the troops, she immediately dropped what she was carried, ran downstairs, knock the armor smith out of the forge room, grabbed a single bar of Adamantine and began to work.

9th Malachite, 96

Ironya has finished her work, the light has vanished, and she doesn't recall any of the experience. All she has to show for it, is a large dagger, which she says is called, Goodsnarled the Principle of Slowing. It is a very fine blade, and I'm sure our soldiers will all be fighting over who get's to carry it.

11th Malachite, 96

An unfortunate, discovery has been made today, Cryptson, following a vein of cobalt, found a hollow area, digging into it he found a room, connected to the fort through a crudely dug tunnel, hidden from sight behind a locked, unassuming door. In the room he saw, a clear window, likely the one that went missing months before, on the other side was a body, seemed to be that of a male pegasus, Efim, most likely, complete save for it's wings, which are missing. The body, was impaled upon a copper spear, jutting out from the ground, the victim seemed to have been stabbed many times before falling. The spearing mechanism was connected to the lever in the room that Cryptson hit.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/MURDER%21%21.png)

 This was obviously some sort of murder, but what pony would/could do such a thing.  Cryptson came to me first and together we told the mayor, what he found. The three of us agreed to keep it quite, at least until we know a little more about it. I think we need somepony in charge of protecting us from ourselves, somepony to track down and deal with criminals. I've told the mayor, and he asked me to appoint a captain of the guard, and possibly a few ponies under him, and I think I know just the pony for the job.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________

*Charity calls Khenal into her office, upon his arrival she explains to him the situation with the murder.*
"Khenal, you are one of the most loyal, trustworthy, dedicated ponies that I know, even Commander Starkey says almost nothing but good things about you. However, you are not fit to be a warrior, you lack the killer instinct for that, you Khenal are a protector, and I would trust you to protect any or all of the lives in Glitterglen, including myself. So Khenal, what do you say to the title, and rank, of Captain of the Guard, of the Great Fortress Glitterglen?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 12, 2011, 02:33:49 pm
Hi book. I saw Mr greywings today.
It was when we got that new ponies today. I heard that they were trapped behind some of those scarry looking ponies. I found him in the top dinning hall just leaning on the wall.  I asked him if he was going to help those poor ponies, but he just shook his head and said 'nope, don't need too'. I was confused but then Private Ramol ran past to the gate super fast! He totally saved the day book! I didn't see it, but I hear it was supper awesome and stuff.  Then Mr greywings said that he had to leave, and that he had stayed around for too long already. I said that I would miss him a lot, but he said that it was alright.  He walked into some door I never saw before with Mr. Efim a really scared and confused looking unicorn and a cupple of other ponies I don't recognize and there was a bright light and...
They were gone.
I'm not as sad as I thought I would be. Actually, I'm sorta happy.

-

Sorry I haven't written in you for a long time book, so much stuff has been happing these days!
There's lots of new fillies and colts around now a days and it's super fun! We play all sorts of games and have adventures and all sorts of fun things. I never had this meany friends back at the town I use to live in! There are so many ponies hear! My family has to all share beads, but that's OK. 
Mr. Tunur Was elected mayor too! I don't know what that means but there was a party and stuff so I guess it's a good thing. Ms. Charity wasn't happy though, but Andys' mom is always a sour puss.
Mr. Khenal has been teaching me magic, but weave been doing more boring control stuff again. He said we would try some other spells in this book he got from the last group of traders! That sounds supper cool!

-

Mr. Khenal has me doing a spell today!
It's called the 'floating illusion spell' or something.  You ust think of something and a shimmering image appears in the air. A lot of story tellers use it. Were starting small Khenal said, I just have to do a blue dagger. It's a hard spell, But I'm trying as hard as I can!
I know I can do it!

-

Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger  Blue Dagger

* The rest of the page is made up of blue color drawings of a long dagger *

I don't think this is working book. I won't give up though! Goodness this is going really slowly!


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 12, 2011, 03:29:33 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 13

I bought another book today.  No, not another Book, just a magic book.  I'm not great with magic, and Venture is fast approaching the limits of my knowledge of the arcane arts.  I asked the caravan to bring more books on magic the next time they came, so hopefully this one will last till then.  Maybe the other caravans will have some books as well?

Chapter 14

One of the armorers apparently ran for mayor and won.  Personally, I don't pay much attention to politics.  I don't see why we need a mayor while we have Charity as our overseer.  What does a mayor actually do?  Eh, probably does paperwork so Mrs. Charity can do important things.  I heard her grumbling something about steel production and right hooves and left hooves.  I really should do something to let her know we all appreciate her.  I wonder if Nicolta Tesla or Theropod Watcher accept commissions for engravings?

Chapter 15

Ironya just finished what is possibly the best dagger in all existence.  It's made from Adamantine and is, well, perfect.  I've also seen it before. 

Earlier this week, Venture and I were practicing illusion spells and she was working on making a blue dagger.  I'm not sure if it's her talents in precognition or if she somehow influenced Ironya accidentally.  If it's just her talent, then I think the work in concentration and control is paying off.  She hasn't told me of any nightmares lately at least, which I take as a good sign.  However, if she influenced Ironya, this could be very bad.  I need to test this.  I remember we got a caged raccoon a while ago, I wonder if it's been claimed yet?  I'll try showing it to her and ask her to try to get it to dance.  I really hope she fails to get it dancing; power like that is very dangerous.  Not just to others, but herself as well.

Chapter 16

Mrs. Charity called me into her office today.  I didn't know why.  I mean, I like to think she's a friend, but being called to her office means official Glitter Glen business.  Maybe I did something wrong and didn't realize it?  After the door was closed, she told me about a murder.  I was horrified!  How could anypony murder somepony?  She also told me she didn't think I was cut out to be on the front lines of battle, either.  I wanted to argue that point, but she wasn't finished.  She said I was a protector, and there are official positions for protectors: Guards.  And she wanted me to be the Captain of the Guard.

I just stared at her, dumbstruck, for a while.  Then I started thinking of the various ponies in Glitter Glen: Cryptson and Charity, Thunder Splinter, Dr. Friesden, Venture, Peytrel.  From the founders to the ponies that immigrated just last week, all of them working hard to make Glitter Glen all it can be.  Commander Starkey and the rest of the military, working to protect us from foreign threats.  But what about domestic threats?  What about threats that come from below?  Commander Starkey is the first line, but what if something get through?  He can't be everywhere at once.

I told her I don't think much of the title and rank, but I'd take the position anyway.  She's right about me, I'm no warrior.  But I will do my best to ensure the safety of these ponies and capture the murderer.  I just hope there isn't too much paperwork involved.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 12, 2011, 04:04:19 pm
Friesden's Diary

Something strange is happening to me. Some times I black out. And then bad things happen. I don't remember why or how. I've got to do something.

I don't know why, but the other pegasi scare me. Khenal scares me more. I feel most comfortable with the earth ponies. Goddesses help me. It's coming again. I can feel it. Just finish this and lock my door again.

Friesden.



Friesden's diary.


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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 12, 2011, 04:57:01 pm
 8) Adventure!  8)

---------------------------------------------------------------
* two little foals, siting in the dining hall, looking quite board*
" Hey venture, what do you want to do?"
"I don't know Shigos, What do you want to do?"
"I don't know, what do you want to-"
"Hey! I Know what to do!"
"Yay!"

-

Hey book, I just got a supper idea today.
I remember how Mr. Khenal told me that he had a pair of wood wings, and Shigos always wondered how having wings is like.  It's the perfect plan!
Mr. Khenal said he left them with Ms. Friesden, so we went to her office to ask her.  She looked really nervous when we asked her, but she said we could borrow them.  They were so cool! They didn't even look wooden or anything! And they had real feathers on them all colored red and stuff. They smelled a little odd but still, so cool! A little string and they sit right on Shigos back! Then Ms. Friesden said she would teach us how to fly!  She led us up to the surface and told us to go over to a hill out away from the fortress while she got some thing she forgot.  I hope she come's back soon, I can't wait! You know sometimes when I look at her, I think I can see-

-
"Ello? Whats this?"
The two fillys look back in shock at the appearance of at the new pony. Venture quikly stuffs her book into he saddlebag.  Befor them stood a
 "Dva malenky pegiez out and about I viddy. No, you got horns on your gullivers don't you?"
"Ummm..."  The two fillies shifted under the gaze of the frightening pony before them.
"Well, Beg your pardoon magntesy." The sikly colored pony preformed a mock bow to the frightend fillies.
Ventured finally spoke up "Were not suppose to talk to strangers an-"
"Me eemyas SkrillCoal. Guss I'm not a stranger-danger now am I?"
"well, ya I guess but-"
"Say!" The pony walked closer to the two. "How would you like something to munch? My droogs and me are having a git-to-get over the way, would you like to join?"
"No thanks we-"
"Come now, I insist!"
A short scream came from behind Venture as a darkbolt grabbed Shigos by her newfoud wings. The pony, now reviled as a keshi, approached the little helpless filly.
In her desperation, the filly shouted out "Stop!"
Munch to everyponies surprise, and against all reason, that actually worked. The keshi stopped in in his tracks.  Seeing the effectiveness of her statement, she decided to go for broke.
"Now, you, um... you leave us alone right now!"
The keshi gave a blank stare for a few moments before turning to his compatriot.
"Oy! Lest itty. These malenky sods ain't worth the trubble, lets get-gone."
Needless to say this confused the darkbolt to no end, a confusion compounded by the filly in his mouth shed it's wings and ran off.
The two Diomede ponies, too confused by the whole turn of events failed to give chase to the yong foals.
Said foals managed to quickly make it to the safety of the fort, only to face another, fare more frightening foe. A very angry looking Commander Starkey.

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That's right, my diomedes speak Nadsat!  If you want your diomedes to speak Nadsat too, get the translator here: http://reocities.com/Athens/Academy/1974/nadsat.html
That removes a pice of evidence pointing at Friesden, but if you don't like, let me know! I can edit or remove if need be. I don't want to step on anybodys toes here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 12, 2011, 07:43:55 pm
It's okay! No use having doing this sort of thing without someone else putting their own bits in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 12, 2011, 09:33:00 pm
Charity's Journal 12th Malachite, 96

Khenal, accepted the position of Captain of the Guard. I've also assigned a few ponies to work under him, including the unicorn mare ranger, and the other hunter, both are pretty good shots. And three others who have had very basic weapon training, in axes, hammers, and hooves respectfully. Khenal will have his work cut out for him turning them into competent guards, but I trust him. We are going to start digging out a small office for Khenal, and a little prison cell, for our murderer.

With the fate of Efim now known, I've decided to make a small memorial for him. I don't want to disturb the body just yet. Khenal, will probably still want to look it over for any clues he can find.

14th Malachite, 96

Disaster, a complete disaster. as our engravers where digging little windows into the adamant, to check for the beasts of legend that supposedly live underneath the blue metal, a mistake was made and the great magma sea was breached, 3 lumps of raw adamant where covered in deep magma, and a lot that could have been mined is now unsafe. Fortunately, no pony was hurt, however, this is still very disappointing. It might be possible to use magma pumps to clear the area, but it won't be easy.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/adamant%20fail.png)

Addendum:

I've had a request come across my desk for the production of a half dozen enormous wooden corkscrews to bolster our trap defenses. I've decided to allow it and will have the manager fill out the appropriate paperwork for a rush job.

17th Malachite, 96

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Tislam%20baby.png)
such a cute little unicorn.

19th Malachite, 96

Khenal's office is coming along splendidly, once it's smoothed, it might even be better than mine. We decided the room needed a few statues, Pillomino made one of herself carving a cabinet, not wanting to be outdone by her I crafted a beautiful statue of myself, showing the day I was chosen to as Overseer. Khenal seemed uncomfortable with this selection of statues for his office, but I can't imagine why? Cryptson decided to dig out five different cells, and a private barracks for the Town Guard. In each of the cells we will place a single zinc chain, a bed, a table, a chair, and two barrels, one for food, and the other for drink.

3rd Galena, 96

Thundersplinter called out, from the top of her tower that she's still working diligently on, that Honey Badger Pony had been injured by the traps leading into the fortress. The Fortress Guard put the creature out of it's misery. Knowing where there is one of those things their is more, Khenal lead his squad on a merry little hunt, killed about 6 more of them. Great, more Badger Pony pie.

Addendum:

As the the ponies where returning from the hunt, and we were bringing in the badger carcasses. Something shown brightly upon the Horizon.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Nonub%20Ikudaved.png)

Gods save us all.



Thought I would share what the outside of the fortress is like right now. It's not very impressive. The tower is still under construction. Mostly, cause I designate the next part, go do something else, come back much later when it's done, then put the next part, and repeat. Their is one floor above this one, that stonesence won't show at the same time as the base, the purple blocks are a wall that is not finished yet. I'm planning on adding several more floors, before calling it finished. It's made entirely of wooden blocks, with cobalt block floors on the first floor. The stone wall is almost entirely granite, with the external layer and fortifications made of granite blocks.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Outside1.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 13, 2011, 02:06:41 am
Khenal's Book Chapter 17

Ugh, the position does come with paperwork duties.  Gotta suck it up, but it doesn't mean I have to like the stuff.  The murder scene was a huge mess.  The body was almost totally bones, which I was thankful for.  After all, bones don't really have much odor to them.  Death looked to have come from multiple stab wounds from my old copper spear.  Damnit, I knew I should have made sure it was accounted for!  The amount of blood everywhere, along with a multitude of gashes in the bones says it took poor Efim a while to die. 

His wings are missing.  How they were removed is a mystery.  They could have been simply ripped off or removed with great care, there aren't any nicks in the bones around where the wings should have been attached.  The window and lever to actuate the spear indicate we are dealing with one sick pony.  Whoever they are, they watched as Efim was repeatedly impaled.  Grr, I'm too angry to continue right now, my Book.  I'm going to go train, hopefully work this off before meeting the rest of the guard for the first time as their captain.


Chapter 18

Goodness, was I this terrible when I first signed up for martial training?  The two rangers are doing quite well, but the other recruits need serious work.  I'm gonna ask Commander Starkey for advice, and to see if he can still help me in my personal training.  I also need to ask the Captain of the ranged squad for advice on how to train the rangers.

The Adamantine mining area suffered a huge blow recently.  Apparently they sprung a small magma leak, and couldn't stop it before the area flooded.  The blue metal still makes me uneasy, but it's hard to argue against mining the stuff.  Afterall, that dagger is truly a thing of beauty.

Chapter 19

Dr. Friesden has been even odder than usual lately.  She practically jumped out of her skin when I greeted her in the hall earlier today.  Maybe she's worried about the murderer?  I asked her to examine what was left of the body, so she knows about it.  She made a whole bunch of detailed observations about the body and also the potential state-of-mind of the murderer.  Most of what she said went over my head, but she did say that the wings were carefully removed.  If they were ripped off, there would have been damage to the surrounding bones as well.

The new jail is coming along quite well; five cells and a barracks for the Guard.  Speaking of jails, my office is coming along quickly as well.  The statues are...interesting.  The one depicting Mrs. Charity becoming the overseer makes sense, but the other one is just plain odd.  I appreciate that it must have been a good cabinet, but does it really need a statue commemorating it's construction?

Chapter 20

Thunder Splinter spotted a wounded badgerpegasus, so the Guard was called to put it out of it's misery.  That reminded me of the hunting Commander Starkey had us do to help us learn tactics and teamwork.  I asked Mrs. Charity to allow me to take the Guard hunting, and she agreed.  To the hunt!



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Darn diagonal flow messing up careful Adamantine mining :P  Instead of trying to pump out the magma, maybe try obsidianizing it?  Leave the tiles with wafers alone and obsidianize the rest of it.  You could then dig/channel out enough room for those tiles to evaporate and get the adamantine back.  Channel out above and designate ponds :)

The stonesense (more like horsesense!) image is sweet!

Also: Bronze Colossus!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on October 13, 2011, 02:33:33 am
Exceprt from the diary of ThunderSplinter;

Early Galena:
While checking the stability of the Air Control Tower - I am quite pleased with progress, and it just needs a few more levels to be acceptable - I noticed a wounded honey badger pony struggling away from one of Nicolta's traps, and the bored Fortress Guard were easily stirred into action.

After that bit of excitement, and installing a few more wooden blocks, I received confirmation to build wooden corkscrews which I hope will secure the fortress from invasion.

In other news, the experiment with ground up fish scales did not go well.  The effect was interesting, but was more like iridescent glitter than the pearleascence I was aiming for, plus the fact that it still ponged like fish, and the fisherpony gladly supplied some dried fish, but the scales lost most of their iridescence and grinding them up just made a really fine powder that smelled like fish.  Might have to abandon that avenue for a while and go with Ironya's suggestion of powdering some metal, the miners have located small depsotis of cobaltite which we might be able to make into something wothwhile.
After some tweaking in the carpentry shop, I was able to construct a passable brush by using the tail hairs of the latest batch of honey badger ponies, they have been a source of inspiration as well as filling the pantry.  Speaking of which, time for some cupcakes and midnight berry wine.

ThunderSplinter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 13, 2011, 04:45:54 am
Friesden's diary

By all the gods, goddesses, demigods, heroes and any other deities you can think of!

Some pony has -killed- another here! Watched them BLEED TO DEATH AS THEY WERE STABBED REPEATEDLY IN FRONT OF THEM LIKE THE STOP IT! Or I'll get Khenal! YOU WOULDN'T DARE, YOU COWARD! YOU DON'T HAVE WHAT IT TAKES TO I said stop it! I won't warn you again! HA! I KNOW WHO KILLED THE PONY AND SO DO YOU! I'M YOUR ONLY CHANCE OF SURVIVAL. No, you're not! Khenal would help me! NO HE WOULDN'T. HE'S JUST LIKE ALL THE OTHERS, HATING EVERYPONY BUT THEMSELVES. BUT I CARE ABOUT YOU no you don't! You just want to do your experiments on them! But i'm telling you HE KNOWS, YOU KNOW, AND I KNOW. ONLY ONE OPTION, EH? i won't kill Khenal! No matter what, I'd rather die than kill a pony! I'LL DO IT FOR YOU, THEN. WE NEED THOSE WINGS BACK SO WE CAN FRAME HIM FOR THE CRIME i told you no! We're not killing anyone else! It'll die down soon, then I'll deal with you properly.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 15, 2011, 02:31:30 pm
Khenal stood with his squad, a bit tired from the running around, bits of badger pony blood, flecked upon their skin and armor, and coating their weapons. "That was a good bit of sport men, now how about we try taking down one of those Elephan..." Interupted mid word by the sound of frantic ringing. Thundersplinter, upon the top of her wooden sky scraper *still under construction* had spotted the huge shining bronze titan on the horizon. Khenal, looked up and saw the creature standing on the top of the hill, knowing his squad wasn't ready for this fight. He ordered everyone back inside.

The marksponies took up defensive positions upon the walls, fearful that their bone and wooden bolts would be useless against this foe. The melee squad and the rest of the Fortress guard sat in the main courtyard, and waited. The prebattle jitters got to one pony however, Munest Sodkatdir. A hammerpony assigned to work under Khenal. He disobeyed orders, broke ranks, and charged off on his own toward the beast.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/The%20Titan.png)

It was a brutal beat down. The brave hammerpony fought valiantly, but his kicks, and hammer strikes glanced away ineffectually.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Dead.png)
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/It%20was%20brutal.png)

Standing victorious over the broken pony, the bronze mountainous thing, took off once more, toward the walls, toward Glitterglen. The brave ponies, held their ground, save for one. Egom Singdumpling, an amateur axepony. He had followed the first out, but upon seeing the death of his comrade had tried to flee back to the walls. He was caught by the gargantuan villain, just as the marksponies unleashed their first volley. Egom dodges, counter attacks, the blow fails the penetrate, the titan attacks, Egom evades. Knowing he would surely fall without help, and not wanting to lose another pony today. Starkey, and Khenal, call for a charge. The help arrived not a moment to soon. beaten and battered with a broken leg, Egom, knowing the end was about to take him had been saying one last prayer to Kulet Orblens the Mindful Watchfulness of Poems. Perhaps the gods were listening this day, because as the Bronze Colossus raised its hand to strike him down, Osal, the Markspony, ran up and hit the Titan with his crossbow. The creature threw Egom where he passed out on the ground.  And in a wave, the entire army of Glitterglen, descended upon the monstrous thing. Spears flashed, axes swing, whips crack, bolts fly.  Many attacks glance away, but a few fracture the beast, it can't keep this up for long. But each second that goes by it strikes somepony, and the militia will tire long before it will.

After a long and tiring fight. The thing fell. Defeated. The final strike had been from the earth pony Langgud and his silver whip. But the victory belonged, not to him, but to all the brave ponies of Glitterglen. Nonub Reignedclobbered the Cuts of Domination the bronze colossus, was no more.


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/The%20cuts%20of%20Domination.png)

Charity's Journal 8th Galena, 96

The fight with the Bronze Colossus, was a great success. Only one casualty, and one injured. Well some had a few bruises, but only one required any time in the hostpital. Egom, will be out with a broken leg for a while, but overall, it could have been a lot worse. The body of the beast, it being set up like a statue, inside the barracks of the Fortress Guard, as a constant reminder of why they must train.


Charity's Journal 10th Galena, 96

A double funeral was held today for Efim and Munest. I made a speech about Efim, in which I reveled to the entire fortress about the murderer, still lose in the Fortress, and told them to make sure they report any suspicious behavior to our Captain Khenal. Since then Efim's ghost hasn't been seen.


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Put%20to%20rest.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 15, 2011, 03:20:22 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 21

A bronze colossus.  I had only ever heard legends about them, but had thought them just that: Legends.  Unfortunatly, they are all too real.

It appeared while the Guard and I were out hunting.  Thunder Splinter gave the alarm from the (still under construction) tower.  I knew the Guard was no match for it, so I ordered a retreat to Glitter Glen proper.  This was an outside threat, and a major one as well, so I deferred to Commander Starkey's lead.  After all, he's the Commander for a reason.  We were getting into formation when I noticed two of my guards were absent.  Wait, not absent, but charging the Colussus on their own!  Munest and Egom, still learning the basics of using their weapons, were surely going to die.  Munest was faster than Egom, and reached the colossus with enough time for it to crush him before Egom could get there.

As the monster closed on Egom and began striking him, I ordered the Guard to charge.  Commander Starkey ordered the Army to charge as well.  The battle was long and arduous, but we managed to save Egom, though his leg was badly broken. 

I... I feel a bit numb.  I think it hasn't sunk in yet that Munest is gone.  I'm going to talk to Commander Starkey about it, and maybe Dr. Friesden.  She's a doctor, maybe she knows about mental trauma as well as physical.

Chapter 22

We buried Efim and Munest today.  I'm still a bit unfocused, I forgot that Mrs. Charity was planning to let the fort know of Efim's murder today.  I'd rather keep it quiet so as not to make everypony worry, but they do have a right to know about this threat.  I doubt anypony can give me any new leads this long after the murder, but I'll hear whatever they have to say.  Who knows, it wouldn't be the first time I was wrong.


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Ya, Khenal's taking the first death in his squad hard.

On an only tangentially related topic: today's episode was epic!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 15, 2011, 08:33:56 pm
The Journal of Cap'n Starkey

 - - - - - -

8th Galena, '96

I have come to a rather alarming conclusion: this entire outpost has been infecteed by an extremely virulent strain of Sudden Ludicrous Bravado Syndrome. And today, the disease claimed it's fir

That was stupid of me. I have no business joking at a time like this.

We were attacked by some kind of enormous automata today. It was made of solid bronze, too strong for our weapons to cut through. We just had to keep wailing on it 'till the metal turned brittle with fatigue, and shattered. The thing didn't let us go without a few parting gifts, though. The fortress guard took the brunt of it. One of their ponies is in the hospital, nursing a broken leg. Another...

I should go speak with Khenal. He's a strong lad, I can't imagine he'd take it too hard. But just to be sure...

 - - - - - -

10th Galena, '96

So we have a murderer in Glitterglen. One who likes to kill ponies with insane mechanical contraptions, and relieve pegasi of their wings. Not sure about the death chamber part, but based on the mutilation, I'd be inclined to say this was racially motivated.

But I'm not a guard anymore, I'm a soldier. This is Khenal's task. Doesn't mean I won't give him advice if he asks, but I'll let him act on it himself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 16, 2011, 12:16:23 am
Charity's Journal 12th Galena 96

An interesting thing happened today. Peytrel was watching the militia train again. Seeing as how Peytrel isn't quite the little pony that he used to be, Starkey decided to humor the boy and show him how to do a few basic moves with his axe. But young Peytrel surprised both of them by, cutting a training dummy in two with one swing. A bright light flashed, and then, Peytrel had his cutie-mark. It was an axe over a shield. Peytrel is not a child anymore. He is ready for more responsibility, and it seems that he wants to join Starkey's squad more than anything. It will be so.

13th Galena 96

The mayor has passed a law which makes the export of steel, from Glitterglen, punishable by imprisonment. I agree with his decision. While I doubt anyone would be foolish enough to sell our limited and precious steel supply to any of the caravans, a little extra incentive, not to, can't hurt.

14th Galena 96

A zebra pony caravan has arrived. We traded with them for a good deal of metal goods, cloth, leather, and fish that aren't native to this area. Overall we made out well.

28th Limestone 96

Peytral made his first kills today. He was out with the woodcutters as they were cutting trees. I think it was his day off and he was helping carry some timber inside. Regardless, three stranglers attacked. He and one war dog lept to their defense. The war dog was killed, but Peytral killed all three of them.


Oh my god. A pony community fort.

Dibs on the next miner!

I bet you thought I forgot about you. But, no, I've just been putting off getting another miner.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Charity's Journal 4th Sandstone 96

Cryptson has been wanting to take an apprentice for a while now. And now that he's a father, and husband, that desire has been growing. His work keeps him busy, and away from Adamant and me for far to long, had we more miners anywhere near as skilled as him, he would have more time to spend with his family. So, Starting today he his going to be training the earth pony Grifen in his trade. They're going to start with a simple project, they are going to dig out a huge area of the soil layer to use as both an underground tree farm, and, after some moss grows up a pasture area for our livestock that is safely inside our walls. Cryptson tells me that this will be good training for Grifen.


5th Sandstone 96

A new group of ponies has come. A relatively small number. Probably more banished individuals, although, I know some of our number have come here of their own violation, could be more thrill seekers, coming to live an exciting life on the fridges of society. If so they will disappointed.

This time we got, a scrawny looking, male spear pegasus, (sent him to join the guard, Khenal should be able to put some muscle on his frame) a female pegasus jeweler, unfortunately for her, she showed us some of her work and compared to Nicolta's gems they are rank amateur. A female seige operator pegasi, she seemed to complain about the lack of siege weapons making up our defenses. A male pegasus butcher/farmer. A very experience fisherpony/leatherworker male pegasus. and a male earthpony furnace operator.

14th Sandstone 96

I passed by Khenal's office this afternoon and smelled a horrible smell. I went in the room and found that he left his food sitting out in the middle of the room. It had rotted on the floor. What a disgusting slob. I hope he can explain this. It sets a bad example to those who look up to him.


Looking at the food on the floor, it looks like Khenal didn't want to finish his Diomedian pony intestines, baked bad stuffed with three units of minced blue peafowl tallow. I can't imagine why.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Khenal%27s%20office%20stinks.png)

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Isos.png)
a little earthpony filly. The mother is one of Khenal's recruits. Uses a knife as her preferred weapon. Pretty skilled with it too, considering she holds it with her mouth. We've been allowing her to use the blue dagger Ironya made awhile back, Goodsnarled the Principle of Slowing, that's what she called it.


Charity's Journal 17th Sandstone 96


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Bem%20poss.png)

Bem dropped his barrel of food in the middle of the food stockpile, and ran down the stairs like a pony possessed. Threw Bokbon out of her craftshop and locked himself in. He then acquired two piles of logs, a roll of pigtail cloth, and a sheet of strangler leather. He's been working ever since. We can hear him muttering Kiroshot, over and over again.

22nd Sandstone 96

Bem has finished his Kiroshot. It's an earring. Now, don't get me wrong, it's a very nice earring, it's just, I mean did he really need all those logs just to make one. And he destroyed enough leather to make an entire cloak, or shirt, and just made a few little decorations on his wooden earring. It just seems wasteful.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Kiroshot.png)

28th Sandstone 96

Kil a unicorn mare that I don't really know well had a little unicorn boy today.

________________________________________________________________________________


Question, what is required in order to make a wood painting workshop work. I have some of the new plants, and they have milled into dye. They are listed under powder. I have an abundance of wood. But still the workshop won't let me make painted wood. What else is needed?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Nidokoenig on October 16, 2011, 12:45:53 am
First thing I'd try is making an order for it with managers, see if that produces a useful error message. Can you conjure wood? If not, then it might be a bug that ignores items which aren't defined in the reaction, since I just tell it to grab something with the right material reaction product. So change this:

Code: [Select]
   [REAGENT:dye:100:NONE:NONE:NONE:NONE]
to this

Code: [Select]
   [REAGENT:dye:100:POWDER_MISC:NONE:NONE:NONE]
in reaction_paint_wood.txt in your save's raws and that should fix it. I'll be going over the reactions before the next update to fix this up.

And just to be certain, is everything in proper stockpiles, are burrows/doors not an issue, and is the plant_standard.txt file you're using the one from MLF? I know these are really simple things but it's annoying how often a simple mistake is what's causing the bug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 16, 2011, 02:55:00 am
Khenal's Book Chapter 23

I've been in a bad way ever since Munest died.  I had gotten myself some food, I don't even remember what it was now.  I just sat in my office, thinking about what I could have done to save Munest, but everything I could think of only traded one life for another.  Even if I had charged the colossus, I could only hope to have it smash me instead.  Forgetting my food, I started wandering the halls.  Mrs. Charity confronted me about the stink my neglected meal was creating, told me that far too many ponies looked up to me for me to leave a mess like that.

Do ponies actually look up to me?  Even after Munest?  It seemed unlikely, but Mrs. Charity isn't one to sugar coat anything.  I apologized for the odor and said it wouldn't happen again.

If ponies are going to look up to me, I need to get this murder solved.  Every murder has three main ingredients: Means, Motive and Method.  Motive appeared to be something to do with the wings, though what is a mystery.  Method was the spear trap.  Who in this fortress has the Means to create a weapon trap?  I know Nicolta Tesla can make traps, his works are currently installed in the main entrance as a first line defense.  Wasn't somepony helping him with those?  I need to ask Mrs. Charity about this, see if anypony else has the aptitude to create a trap like this.


*********

I'll use the pony creator tomorrow, unless somebody beats me to it :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 16, 2011, 02:36:37 pm
Chairty's Secret Journal 3rd Timber 96

My second son was born today! My little unicorn. He has the prettiest eyes the color of raw cobalt. Cobalt, yes, I think that's what I'll name him. Cobalt.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Charity's Journal 4th Timber 96

Khenal came and asked me for a list of ponies who are known to be able to work with machines. Specifically those that were already here during the time when Efim vanished. The following is a copy of the list I gave him.


Suspect list
Nicolta Tesla
Istbar Zephyrslap (female earthpony fisher/mechanic)
Friesden (he had been working as our mechanic before Nicolta showed up and replaced him)
Their is also, another, but he only arrived after the currently believed time of death, and is there for not a suspect.

These are all the ponies that I know had the mechanics skill at the time of the murder. However, it is possible that, others could have been lying about it, and hiding their talents, especially if they were already planning this when they arrived.


5th Timber 96
One of the pegasus children. A young friend of Peytrel has grown up and taken up his first job, in the markspony squad.

11th Timber 96

We have successfully dug a tunnel from the underground lake to the entry point of the magma, into our adamantine mining area. Since no more can now get in, I think trying to pump it out into a sealed reservoir our best bet. I'll contact Nicolta about how best to build a magma pump.

13th Timber 96

A cave pony caravan has arrived. Glad to see they aren't too upset about the disagreement we had last year.

25th Timber 96

A little accident happened today. I had asked for some chimpanzees to be moved from one set of cages to another. However, during the move the animals rioted, fortunately Starkey happened to be walking by as it attacked and quickly put it down.


OOC: thought it was tame and had just came off the caravan my mistake, it was actually fresh from the jungle.

14th Moonstone 96

Venture's mother the brewer, gave birth again today, a little pegasus boy.


16th Moonstone 96

The magma is finally being pumped away from the raw adamant. Starkey volunteered to operate the pump. Says, it's good work for building muscles.

23rd Moonstone 96

Thanks to Commander Starkey sacrificing his days off to work the pump, the adamantine chamber is now mostly empty. The floor is still molten
(a lot of 1/7 magma) but is expected to cool (evaporate) soon, and then we can finally get back to the adamant.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 16, 2011, 03:10:38 pm
I made a new friend today book.
His name is Munest. He's kind of like Mr. greywings, kinda blurry and hard to see strait. I found him kinda just... wandering around inside the fort.  He was trying to talk to some ponies, but I don't think they could hear him. He looked really super scared, so I talked to him. I guess he's a ghost or something, because I told him about the funeral we had, and he remembers getting hit by that big metal statue thing. But I thought that ghosts go away when you have a funeral don't they? I tried to show him to the door the other ghosts used (different place this time, but still found it on the first try), but the door is all covered in these, black, vine, chain, things and it won't budge.  He's still super scared, so I let him stay with me until we can figure it out. I hope nopony minds.

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Hey Book!
Guss what! My brother got his cutie mark today! Isn't that great! It's an ax too, and hes in the guard now! Its all so exiting! I mean its like all hes dreams are coming true, but, that got me thinking. I don't know what I want to be.  I guess I never thought about it before now.  But that's not Important, my brother is a stallion today! YAY!

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I meet some zebras today book!
They were so cool too. They talked in rhymes and they had a story teller with them!  Me and my brothers and all the fillies and colts in the fort went to here her. She told the story of Goddess Luna, and the filly who cried snatcher and all sorts of stories. The best part was that nopony had the black vines on that mammy got me and little sky toys.
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Book
I-
My-
The th
I don't have bad dreams anymore. That's good right? Ya, so that balances out the bad stuff that comes next. That's what Munest said. The bad thing is that, the bad stuff is when I'm awake now.
Sometimes, I can see these terrible things on ponies. Like the black vines on the door. And the ponies are different then they were before. There angry, or nevus all the time, or... just bad. The other foals play mean games and hurt little animals. The gurds all brag about killing things slowly so they hurt more. Mr. Khenal is OK though, it's not got him all the way yet.
Some times I can see mommy all covered in cuts and bruises, but then there not there anymore, and some times cutie marks will look different. They start to look terrible. Jagged knives and skulls and blood.
I saw the scary pony from before as a ghost. He was running and crying. The black vines got him, started dragging him into the ground, he was screaming "HELP ME HELP ME HELP ME".
Munest ran away, I can't find him. I can hear him, running from the vines too.
Ms. Friesden has strings coming out of her, black strings. I can see them now all the time.  There hurting her, I know they are.
I want to tell some pony, I really do, but they will think I'm crazy. I know they will. Khenal is so busy now a days he can't even talk to me. I see him covered in chains sometimes, pulling him down. I don't know what to do.
I'm scared book.

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No! I won't eat it it's wrong! It's wrong! They were ponies! They talked, they walked, they were thinking things and it's wrong! I wont eat it! I'll starve before I eat it! I WONT I WONT I WONT DO IT ITS WRONG!!!
I have to find little sky!  I have too find my baby brother! I have to make sure he's OK!  I Have Too!

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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 16, 2011, 04:28:39 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 24

Three ponies were known to have the skills to create a spear trap at the time of Efim's death: Nicolta Tesla, Dr. Friesden, Istbar Zephyrslap. 

...And I'm stumped on how to proceed.  I could question them directly, but if one of them really is the murderer, it would only warn them and give them a chance to slip away.  I could try talking to their friends/family, but that's also likely to raise suspicions.  I've noticed that I'm not the only one to keep a book, so I could theoretically confiscate them as potential evidence, but that's far too extreme.  It's also a huge invasion of privacy, especially if the murderer doesn't keep a book.  And it also gives the murderer a chance to escape.

Wait, I'm trying to question the wrong ponies.  I have ponies with the means now, so maybe I should try finding motive?  I'll try talking to Efim's family/friends, see who could have possibly had reason to cause him harm.  Apparently, most murders are done by ponies who know the victim. 


Chapter 25

When did Peytrel join the army?  I only noticed him in uniform when I went out to see what the cave pony caravan brought to trade.  They were exceptionally nervous around me, and if they are the same merchants form last year, I don't blame them.  I couldn't even bring myself to look them in the eyes from the memories.  I bought several tomes on magic and requested they bring more next year if they could.  I asked specifically about divination and awareness magic tomes, but any would be appreciated.  They charged me through the nose for the books, but I couldn't bring myself to haggle much.

Seeing Peytrel reminded me that I haven't talked to Venture in a while.  With the promotion, colossus and the murder investigation, I haven't had time.  Not to mention that I had run out of things to teach her.  Maybe I'll try talking to her over lunch.  I've only been able to stomach what comes from the fields lately.  It was only from my funk that I even grabbed the tripe that I forgot about in my room a week ago.  I couldn't have hoped to keep something like that down, blech!  Hopefully these books will give me something to help her reach her potential safely.


************

The investigation continues, and Khenal is on the right track, though he doesn't know it.  It will likely take a real break in the case for him to finally nail Dr. Friesden, though.  She seems like a thorough and careful pony.  I'm not gonna rain on Dsarker's parade without his consent :)

As promised: here's Grifen, our aspiring miner pony!
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Hmm, looks like that's a fairly common coloring for our earth pony stallions.  Cryptson, Benoni and now Grifen are all similarly colored.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on October 16, 2011, 05:03:57 pm
Ironya mandates that children getting into military will get her finest steel equipment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 16, 2011, 05:10:53 pm
It's okay if you catch her.



Friesden DOESN'T HAVE A DIARY WE'VE TRICKED YOU 's diary.

Well, today NOTHING HAPPENED. AS USUAL. TALK TALK TALK THAT'S ALL YOU EVER DO. YOU'VE GOT TO I met Khenal again. I don't know.... Anyway, some of the foals were playing again. Venture, I think it was, IS A NOSY FOAL WHO DOESN'T KNOW HOW TO KEEP HER NOSE OUT OF OTHER PEOPLE'S BUSINESS, AND IT PROBABLY WASN'T US WHO DID IT IF HER NOSE GETS CHOPPED OFF was watching me strangely. I'm not sure what happened....

Anyway, I was walking down the WAY THAT HAS MADNESS LYING AFTER IT. HAHAHA corridor, and....I don't know how to say this... I think someponies are hunting me WELL THEY ARE, KHENAL IS THEIR BOSS AND HE WANTS YOU DEAD and I don't know why.

I'm scared. I think I should run away before WE GET TO KILL ANYMORE? ARE YOU INSANE? HAHAHA, TRICK QUESTION, OF COURSE YOU ARE INSANE! they do it. I'm really scared, diary.


I need help.



LOVE, FRIESden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 19, 2011, 01:17:49 am
Charity's Journal 26th Moonstone 96

Ironya had a scare today. While walking outside the walls with her baby boy, her and the others who were outside, were attacked by a troop of Mandrills and a single Elephant Pony. Ironya and her baby ran back inside, jumped over the trap and one of the creatures was scewered by enormous wooden screws, wooden bolts, and spikes from the earth. The others ran right into Khenal, responding to the yelling on the surface. Khenal killed the Elephant pony. And then he killed the rest of the filthy apes that tried to escape. Cut one's head clean off. With a spear! I kid you not.

Charity's Secret Journal 11th Opal 96

Oh my little pony isn't so little anymore. Adamant, went out to play with the other foals today. It's the first time he's been away from his Mommy for any length of time. I told Venture to look out for him. Strangely, Venture seemed kind of off the entire time I was talking to her. Probably just didn't sleep well, I've heard she suffers from night-terrors. I sympathize with the filly and her parents are always so busy, I wish there was something we could do for her.

Oh Adamant is back now. Seems he tripped and scrapped his chin, sounds like he's was trying to say something about Venture, but I couldn't catch it over the tears, The kids were probably just roughhousing or playing on the stairs again or something.

Charity's Journal 13th Opal 96

The fortress guard has returned from it's little hunting trip. Khenal, said he needed some time off to clear his head of the investigation, so he could look at it from a fresh perspective, so he took his men out on a hunting trip. They brought back, several Mandrills, two silver gibbons, and more Siamangs then I can count. The butchers will be hard pressed to process them all before they rot. Hm. Better have Cryptson and Grifen make a room for a second butchers/tanners. Not that we even need the meat, our entire food industry could take a year off and we'd still all be fat and happy.

Charity's Journal 26th Opal 96

I've been informed that Shasad Spewgerbil our woodcutter/carpenter (And father of Venture) has suddenly taken over one of our craft-shops, disrupting production. His wife seemed upset about the whole thing. Said he's hardly said a word to her or their children in days. I'll have to post somepony to watch him, he could be dangerous.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Withdrawn.png)

Addendum

My posted guard has reported back to me that Shasad has grabbed three piles of unprocessed logs and one large granite block, and seems to be building something.

3rd Obsidian 96

Shasad has finally finished what he was building. It's a marvelous wooden door. decorated with spikes of granite. He calls it UnionsArrows. It's very beautiful. I was going to just put it in the dinning room, but he insisted that it was to be a gift to his eldest son, and so it is being put as the entrance to Peytrel's room. Seems a waste to me.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Unionsarrows.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 19, 2011, 02:31:46 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 26

Talking to Efim's family and friends has helped to eliminate Nicolta Tesla as a suspect.  They said he was working with somepony on a mechanics project, and he felt she was "quite a looker."  None of them had met her, though.  Nor could they remember any details if Efim ever mentioned them, but at least my suspects are narrowed down to two.  Now that there's a mechanic here who isn't a suspect, maybe we can get that trap taken apart carefully.  I haven't touched it since the room was discovered for fear of destroying some important clue.  I'll ask Mr. Tesla to deconstruct the trap carefully and help me look for any clues in the mechanisms.

Chapter 27

The jungle has some very colorful and very angry monkeys.  Several ponies were outside enjoying the nice day when they were set upon by an elephant pony and a group of what Charity tells me are mandrills.  Ironya and the others made it inside the walls with the angry animals hot on their hooves.  The traps kept the beasts outside, where I engaged them with several of the guard.  I need to compliment Ironya on her craftponyship, this spear has an excellent edge on it.  I was actually able to decapitate one of the mandrills because of it.  The rest of the guard is still pretty green, maybe we should go hunting again.  After all, our last trip was interrupted by that colossus.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 19, 2011, 05:38:58 pm
Charity's Journal 9th Obsidian 96

Khenal and Nicolta Tesla oversaw the deconstruction of the murder weapon today. We also, removed the window (Thinking about putting it up someplace, though it might be to much of a sad reminder of the tradgedy) Cryptson even tore down the walls for material. Walking down that hallway now it's as if that retched hole never existed. I think that's for the best.

16th Obsidian 96

Happy days! The floor of the adamant mine is finally cool, that accident set us back on gathering raw Adamantine for several seasons, but now mining can begin again. Grifen looks positively overjoyed to finally get to dig up some of the blue metal with his own hoofs. We threw a party to celebrate.

 At the party I saw Ironya's two kids playing around with the other foals. They grow up so fast, feels like just yesterday that she gave birth to little Itur during the Diomedian raid.

19th Obsidian 96

The caravan from home has arrived. I hope they brought the iron and steel we asked for. As has one from the Rainbow tribe.

The leader of the pony carvan, had a letter to me barring the seal of the Royal family. The letter was as follows.

Dear Charity Conventtulips Overseer of the town of Glitterglen

Due to your monumental success in claiming a part of the Failed Jungles for our great nation of The Shells of Dance, in my name. I have decided to officially recognize this Glitterglen as a Barony of The Shells of Dance. And since you have done so well as to survive this long, I am promoting you to the position of Baroness. However, as a Barony you now have certain responsibilities to the kingdom at large, specifically taxes. Starting when the next caravan comes the following year. The town of Glitterglen is to provide goods in value of at least 10,000 bits as an offering to the Royal Family, naturally, failure to comply with the tax law will lead to Glitterglen being declared a rouge state, and will be delt with likewise.

Signed Princess Dizesh Hugwax of The Shells of Dance


Charity's Journal

That bitch. She's trying to make it sound like she planned this all along. She sends us out here to die like animals, and when we survive against the odds, she decides to tax us for the privilege. Unbelievable! Fortunately, the amount is such that our craftsponies should be able to handle it easily. Although I'd bet my life that she's going to raise it next year. Regardless, I best gather the citizens and inform them of what the Princess is doing.

Baroness Charity's Journal 13th Granite 96

Construction is just about finished on my families private dinning room. It has a pair of beautifully worked tables and chair by Thundersplinter and an amazing clear glass statue of the founding of Glitterglen decorated by several types of native gemstones. Truly a great work of art. Along side a pair of masterfully carved granite cabinets for storing our things. Only thing missing is that the walls are kind of bare. I'll call Theorpod over to see what he thinks would look nice.

18th Granite 96

The traders left late yesterday. We acquired a lot of metal. Enough to outfit several more ponies in full steel and bronze. We traded a lot of our preserved meats to them. Our farms are easily enough to keep us feed and our stockpiles were becoming to full. The traders also, had a good deal of sand. Enough to keep our glass-worker busy for a month or two at least.

Addendum: A swarm of Parasprites has been spotted on the surface. They are harassing our surface workers, who are asking me to deal with the problem. I'll need to think of how best to deal with a swarm of tiny flying things. Maybe the Pegasus squad can herd them away from the town. I'll talk to the militia leaders about the best course of action.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 19, 2011, 10:21:33 pm
Book, I don't know what to do.
I was playing with Andy and little Sky today.  I was going to show them how to play jumping Janes. The black vines came back. I screamed, closed the door.  I, can't remember everything that happen.  Andy ran away crying, Sky's looking at me like I'm a monster. I don't know what to do! I think I hit Andy, but I don't know why or...  I don't know!  I don't know!

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Peytrel put down the journal, rubbing his temples.  He hadn't wanted to believe it.  He hated to believe it.  Frankly, he should have seen it before now, he was so run up in being a guard that it slipped by.  The royals have always hated there family, why would this one be any different.  Everything seemed to become clearer when dad ha finished that door.  It was like he could only think clearly around that door.  He finally saw what was happening to Venture, and he knew how was responsible for it, and not just for her.  He had found the books in Khenal's office. Magic books, all based on mind spells.  How to get ponies to do what you want to do.  His little lessons with Venture...  He's relation with Friesden...   It all came together now.  It was time to stop putting this off, he had to go talk to the Cap'n.  He knew how the murderer was.  Nopony hurt his family, not even Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 20, 2011, 01:05:39 am
The Journal of Cap'n Starkey

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Private Peytrel came to me today. I had figured he was here for more one-on-one training - ever since he enlisted, the lad has really been throwing himself into his work. Instead, he told me he wanted to have a talk about something. Seemed to believe he knew who had killed Efim. Then he gave me the name.

Khenal.

I came very close to knocking the foal's damn teeth out - I'm not proud of that, not one whit - but I kept calm, and asked him for some evidence. He told me he'd broken into the captain's office and found some kind of magic books and scrolls. Not too terribly odd, he always did love to study when he wasn't working, and he's been tutoring Venture as of late. But then he went into some tirade about mind control spells, and Khenal's relationship with the doctor. I'll be honest, it sounded very much like the boy had gone off the deep end, until I heard the next bit. Peytrel told me the royals had always had it out for his family, always causing them trouble. I asked him where he had gotten a notion like that. He told me about his parents' relationship with the royals, particularly his mother. I... won't put those thoughts to paper. Growing up around that, I can almost forgive him for being suspicious of the godkin. I toll Peytrel I had my doubts, but I'd look into it anyways - a lie, I know, but I figured trying to argue with him might make things worse. I think that satisfied the lad, at least enough that he won't do anything rash. But just to be sure, there's something I need to do, and I think I have the perfect excuse to do it.

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Miss Charity,

          Recent events have brought to my attention a very serious issue: while Glitterglen is well-secured against outside threats, our
internal security is severely lacking. With the formation of the fortress guard, at least part of that has been alleviated. However, there is one point I wish to address. As you are well aware, Efim's murderer was able to procure the materials necessary to construct the murder weapon in secret, among those the copper spear which dealt the killing blow. Deadly weaponry lying about unsecured is a significant potential hazard, either through accident, fit of passion, or malice. To alleviate this, I am proposing that a secure armoury be constructed to house all weapons within the fort, including that of the militia and excepting certain less-lethal weapons in use by the guards, at all times when not in use. Barring exceptional circumstances (impending siege, riot, etc.) all those wishing to make use of said weapons must register in writing precisely what was taken, what time it was taken and subsequently returned, and a sufficiently adequate reason for its use. Understand that I believe firmly in the right of all ponies to keep and bear arms, but under the circumstances I believe that we cannot afford to be more lenient.

Captain Starkey, Militia Captain, Glitterglen Militia
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 20, 2011, 01:47:15 am
Khenal's Book, Chapter 28

What do I do when I can't believe the evidence?  There's a surprising amount of room needed to make a trap and link it to a lever even one room away.  Among the gears and chains, and in the crawl space, Nicolta Tesla and I found the last pieces of evidence to solve this case: Amber fur, periwinkle and pearl hairs, a russet feather. 

Dr. Friesden.

 I didn't tell Mr. Tesla the significance of them, but he's a smart pony.  He likely knows precisely who bears these colors, and what their presence in the trap means.

But how could it be her?  Physically how?  She seems so quiet and nice.  But the evidence doesn't lie: Dr. Friesden made that trap.  Part of me hold out hope that she made it for somepony else and they threatened her if she told anypony, but I seriously doubt that's the case.

I have to arrest her.  Ingest Romancerose and Othud Cherishfair help me, I have to arrest her.  I'm going to head to Mrs. Charity's rooms to present my findings and see if she can find any fault in them before I go to Dr. Friesden.

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Ingest and Othud are our deities of love and charity, respectively.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 20, 2011, 01:56:26 am
Dear diary

I can feel something tugging on me, like a puppetmaster on..on strings...I need.. i need help now. I need help i need help need help something's connjrhe euitneuh. Stuehuen qyuens. Duuiįrhłæeę glīēœ fheur jjw eiioo loppp fue kirer ba phn'glui mglw'nafh cthulhu r'lyeh wgah'nahl fhtagn firuhe tzeentch nurgle khorne slaanesh loipuy greuil poesd grhettrolling me. I can't trust anyone. I have to hide only the foals are trustworthy i need them to find whos controlling me somepony of them will know oh ingest above i need help something is grabbing me if you find this help me help me help me help me



Dear new diary

I spoken to the foals he she he said he she he knowed who did it khenal khenal khenal khenal khenal khenal khenal khenal
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 22, 2011, 10:44:48 am
Charity's Journal 19th Granite 97

Well, Khenal has finally taken action. This morning, he arrested Friesden, charged her with the murder of Efim, and placed her in one of our cells, to await trial. She has been officially place on leave from her position of Chief Medical Pony. Erok Zephyrcresent our earth pony doctor will be taking over Friesden's duties, though truthfully he is less experienced, I honestly hope Khenal is proven wrong in this, though the evidence is clearly against Friesden. Now I suppose we will have to organize a trial. Hmm. I guess I need to find someone to speak as Friesden's defense, unless she want's to speak for herself. I'll make the appropriate inquires.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Friesden%20in%20her%20cell.png)

Charity's Journal 20th Granite 97

Thundersplinter is moving her carpentry shop into her tower, she's setting up on the third floor just above the fortifications.

28th Granite 97

The Parasprite problem is still extant. Otik, has been using this as training for his marks squad. Says if they can hit a parasprite out of the sky then they can hit a Diomedian between the eyes. True enough but this is taking too long and the area around the outside of the walls is covered with arrows now. I'm asking Starkey's squad to help chase away the filthy creatures.

Starkey's group is practically just running laps out there. Starkey and a few of the others with wings can catch a few of the buggers when they land, but for most of them this is just embarrassing to watch. Turns out it isn't easy to get rid of these things.

1st Slate 97
 
A single lonely migrant arrived today. Said he was part of a greater party that was ambushed by Diomedians in the jungle. He's the only survivor. He seems to taking it hard. His name Toltot Glimmerfocuses, he's a pegasus and a bit of a Jack of all Trades. He's a Talented carpenter, a Master Mechanic, a competent Record Keeper, an Adequate Engraver, and studies Military Tactics in his free time. Truly an interesting pony. I will have to ask him more about his past, once he feels a little better.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 22, 2011, 11:54:20 am
Hey book.
I'm feeling a little better now.  I wanted to go apologies to little Andy, but hes so scared, he just runs away. It's the same for Daringsky too.  It's just horrible book!  I don't want to be a bad pony!  I don't want everypony to be scared of me. I jus-
* The rest of the page is covered in small water stains*

-

Big brother came to visit today.
I hardly ever see him nowadays.  Hes always training or on patrol or something.  Recently, the guards are all running after these little bug thigs.  It's so funny!  They all run after it around and around the fort! 
I... also saw the black vines again, but big brother was there and he hugged me tight and said everything was going to be all right until they went away.  he also said he would make them go away forever soon!  His cutiemark looked different for a second when he said it, like it had blood on it.  But my big brother is the best, so hes not bad.  Not Ever!  he said he can help Dr. Friesden too and get rid of the strings!  He is the best most brave guard ever!

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I made a new friend today.
He's like me book, a pony that wants to be good but has a hard time doing it.  He's name is Toltot.  At first I thought he was a pegasus, but then I followed him to his room.  I didn't get to say hello with everypony else.  When I got there, I found him trying to glue some feathers from a bag to his wings.  Big, scary bat wings! He was a Darkbolt!  I got supper scared, but he got down on his knees and said he was supper sorry!  He begged and said not to tell everypony.  He didn't want to leave just after he got here.  He said that he want's to be a good pony like us and he's read an learned everything he could just to fit in and be usefull and stuff. 
I know mom and dad said never to trust a domidimi pony, but for some reason, I do!  I think he just wants to have friend and not be a monster just like everypony! 
Just like me.
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"Godkin"
That's what every pony called them.
Peytrel muttered it under his breath like a curse.  It was a curse a far as he was concerned.  That's what his captain had called 'them'.  They all thought they were the paragons of truth and harmony thay said they were, but he knew better.  He had seen first hoof how 'good' they can be, and now it was happening again. Dr. Friesden was arrested shortly after they talked. He had tolled her how was responible, and now he was going to make all his problems disappear. 
Just like they always do.
"Not this time.  Not again."
If the captain wasn't going to do anything about this, he wold just have to take maters into his own hooves.  It was time to 'AX' Khenal a question or too.
"Hold on Venture, big bro's going to make it right."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 22, 2011, 03:22:27 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 29

Dr. Friesden is now in a cell awaiting her trial.  I didn't have the guts to go and arrest her personally, I had a few of the Guard do it.  Honestly, I'm not sure I could do it myself.  Seeing her in there when I go to the barracks to train tears me up inside. 

But I won't give up on her.  Like many of the ponies here, she kept a journal.  I never could figure out a motive for her to murder Efim, and her journal could be the piece that proves her innocence.  After all, it only takes one piece of evidence to show she wasn't involved.  However, it could also be the final nail in her coffin.  I'll have a few of the Guards search her room for her journal and anything else that could be evidence of either her guilt or innocence.


Chapter 30

I don't think Peytrel likes me.  I complimented him on the excellent door his father made for him, and he just looked angry with me.  When I tried to ask how Venture was doing, he glared at me so hard I didn't even finish my sentence.  I miss Venture, it's been far too long since we've talked.  Well, she shouldn't be lonely, at least.  There's several foals about GlitterGlen now, I'm sure she's made friends and is just busy playing and enjoying her foalhood.


Chapter 31

There was a new migrant to GlitterGlen today.  Yes, just one.  He said his group had been attacked and he was the only survivor, but something seems off about him and his story.  I can't quite place my hoof on it, and it may just be that I'm thinking too much about Dr. Friesden, but I know he's hiding something.  I don't think he means anypony harm, but I've obviously been wrong before.



***********

So, Dsarker, I noticed Dr. Friesden has a new diary.  Is the old one lying around somewhere that the Guard could find it?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 22, 2011, 04:01:53 pm
Yup, that was the intention. I'll post up somthing more substantial soon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on October 22, 2011, 05:52:10 pm
Excerps from the diary of ThunderSplinter:

Late Granite;
Finally.  This is the first entry in my new diary while I sit in my new workshop in the Air Control Tower.  Everything smells so new and fresh, I can't wait to finish ferrying up my tools, blueprints, and personal effects.  Have to move my bedroom up here as well, when Charity has time to spare, I will discuss it with her, but for now, have to break in the new workshop by kicking out a few dozen blocks.

Ah, the serenity........

Early Slate;
The brewer kicked me out of the still again, he's getting very precious about that old thing, so plans for the new variant resin recipe have been put on hold until he goes to sleep and I can sneak in and work to my heart's content.  Ironya's been a little busy lately so progress has all but stopped from her angle as well.  Dr. Friesden's participation has also been curtailed, what with her arrest and all, fortunately I know what her wine is so I'll make sure she is properly taken care of there.  Personally, I don't believe that Friesden is such the monster the guards say she is, even Khenal seems half-convinced she is part-diomedian or something horrendous like that - well, I refuse to think that she is capable of such a heinous crime - every time she has instructed or assisted me in distilling the tree resin, she has been pleasant and forth-right, not something one expects from a cold-scaled killer.
Something odd, though.  A new pony has been doing odd jobs for me of late and has been taking payment in the form of a failed resin I made some time back, even though it is sticky as pony-snot, it stays soft and flexible - stocks are getting low, it might be prudent to make a few more jars and continue to figure out how to remove the last of the odour, it still smells a bit like a brewery explosion.  A big one.

Later;
ThunderSplinter.

{{Edit: spelling}}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 22, 2011, 06:26:42 pm
I'd like to be pony'd as a male pegasus named Psycho Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on October 22, 2011, 06:33:06 pm
Notebook of Ironya. (promptly stained with ash, coal and occasional burned borders.)

Entry 1: Acquired this book and feather and some ink when Charity was busy watching Khenal arresting Friesden. I hope that Charity will not mind. I saw she had a cabinet full of them. She will not notice.

Entry 2: We need more weapons. We always need more weapons. I want shiny weapons.

Entry 3: A single migrantpony have arrived. Peculiar. I also have seen the journal of ThunderSplinter by accident when she was at work. How on Equestria others can write so much. My eyes go ouchie when I see so many letters. Why they write so much instead of working.
My eyes are ouchie now too. Time to stop writing and go watch pretty hammer sparkles.

Note to self: Ask somepony about other symbols they use in their journals. Shiny symbols are nice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 22, 2011, 08:28:19 pm
Written on Friesden's gaol cell.

Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal  Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal
Khenal
Khenal Khenal Self Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal Khenal





My revenge will be had on you who controlled me. I am free from your will. Forever.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 22, 2011, 08:33:16 pm
REMOVED DUE TO POINTLESSNESS!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 22, 2011, 11:37:26 pm
Psycho Carrot
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

7th Felsite
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Party%20Time%21.png)

Charity's Journal 12th Felsite 97

One of our threshers has been taken by another unusual mood, she's flying right down to the craftshops, as I wright this. We will keep an eye on her further activities.

Addendum: She has acquired one stack of logs and has started to work on something. She's being oftly secretive about what she's doing in there.

Charity's Journal 13th Felsite 97

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/An%20AMBUSH%21%20Curse%20them%21.png)

A pair of Tentacle ponies a Keshi and two Darkbolts have were spotted across the river. The lead tentapony has a large battle axe, the others are carrying crossbows.

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The warning bell sounds from high atop the wooden tower. *Clang Clang Clang* The sounds of shouts can be heard. Parents run and find their children, some sounds of crying babes can be heard over the yelling, scared and unawares of what is going on. The brave Commander takes action. Barking orders to his stallions. "Pull the lever! We can strand the grounded ones on the other side of the river!" Otik get your marksponies to the walls! Everypony else follow me to the courtyard!"

Khenal, hearing the alarm likewise readies his underlings for battle. Stationing them just inside the forts entrance for the unlikely case of Starkey's Stallions falling in battle. They are to be the last line of defense.

Meanwhile the Diomedians entertain themselves by taking potshots at a tied down sentry war dog. Laughing in their own dark way with each shot fired. The dog quickly expires as the metal bolts cut him deeply.

After the dogs unfortunate end. The Diomedians make their way toward the bridge. Which then raises in front of them at the last possible second. Stranding all the wingless ones on the wrong side of the river.

The vile force of darkness waits together on the far side. They may be trapped over there but they're armed with crossbows. But we have them outnumbered. Otik cautiously moves his archers closer, into a position utop a hill on the fortress side of the river.

A cross fire breaks out, missiles of iron, copper, bronze, and bone fly through the air. The first injury. Tecak the markspony, drops to the ground, in extreme pain, as a bronze bolt chips the bone in his rear right leg.

Too many of our ponies went without sufficient ammunition. They are being overwhelmed as the Diomedian bolts fill the air around them. A retreat is sounded, the marksponies retreat to the walls.

Casualties are one dead. Two injured and still being fired upon. In a desperate attempt to save them. Commander Starkey orders the melee squad to the river, and for the bridge to be extended.

Peytrel and efim the axeponies are the first to arrive by the downed pegasi, Osal is gravely injured, lying in a pool of his own blood, arrows protruding from every part of his body. His left wing probably damaged beyond all repair. He lies, unconscious still clutching his legendary bow.

Peytrel jumps in front of Osal, taking two bolts that surely would have ended the pegasi right there. They strike him hard, but his bronze armor holds, though he is bruised and has had the wind knocked from his lungs. efim begins to charge over the bridge into the waiting enemy lines.

Efim strikes the Keshi thrice with his axe and twice with his bare hooves, the final strike, from the shining steel axe, crushes the invaders helmet and gets momentarily stuck in his skull, before being violently ripped free.

Meanwhile Peytrel kills a darkbolt with a single strike to the side of his head. The enemy captain, charges the wounded ponies, across the bridge, but falls prey to a stray cage trap set to trap wild animals, removing him from the fight.

Only two remain, a tentacle pony bleeding from his tentacle, and another Darkbolt archer. The tentacle pony lets loose a laugh, fell and terrible, dodging Peytrel's imprecise and unskilled swings, before lodging two bolts in the young colt. One in his rear right leg and one in his left front. Peytrel drops to the ground unable to fight any longer. Efim distracted by the darkbolt is unable to help, and the rest of the squad is still lagging behind. The Diomedian Tentacle pony, walks up to Peytrel's form and whispers, "You fought like a little filly." before firing a bronze bolt into the young lads chest at point blank range. The bolt cuts through his armor and shatters a left true rib.

The tentacle pony then makes his way across the bridge toward Osal's defenseless body. But then efim finishes the Darkbolt, spilling it's guts and severing it's wings. and charges the tenta on the bridge. With the rushing water underneath the two do battle. The two make a circle around each other, putting efim's back to the fort, and the Diomedian's to the jungle. Suddenly a bolt flies over efim's shoulder. It's captain Otik! The marks squad has returned to defend their fallen fellows! The bolt strikes the Tentacled bastard in his guts, but he merely suffers bruising as the bolt fails to penetrate his armor. Knowing he is defiantly outmatched, the Diomedian turns to run, and despite the best efforts of efim, Otik and Psycho Carrot, he is lost in the thick trees. Now it is time for the ponies to tend to the wounded.
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Charity's Jounal

The battle today has taken it's toll on all of us. One dead. Three badly injured, with no guarantee of survival, (plus one war dog but those are expendable). I just finished helping the injured to the hospital, and now I have the unhappy task of telling Peytrel's family about his injuries. They are quite serious, but not nearly as severe as Osal's.

Charity's Journal 20th Felsite 97
During the battle our thresher finished her object. It is a masterful carving depicting the founding of Glitterglen.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Deleth.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 22, 2011, 11:50:10 pm
Writings on the wall.

I know you're watching me, Khenal, behind my eyes. But I know you're there now. You may have used me before, but never again. I'll die before I do your dirty work for you.

Peytral said he'd visit me, Khenal. Where is he? Have you killed him too?

I know you're there, Khenal, stop hiding from me. You can't get me again. Never. You'll never succeed again. Never again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 02:02:17 am
REMOVED DUE TO IRRELEVANCE.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 03:10:36 am
Khenal's Book, Chapter 32

Ingest above!  The other guards found Friesden's journal, and I couldn't believe what it contained!  The first entries seemed almost manic, exactly what I would expect from a pony who could murder.  But, around the middle, the real Dr. Friesden started poking through.  Towards the end, it seemed like two ponies were trying to write in the same space, with sentences mashed together and flowing into each other. I think she's either possessed or somepony, or something, is using long-term mind affecting magics on her. I don't know the specifics of what's wrong with her, but I do know this: She needs help. 

And I can't give it to her myself.

The last time I passed her cell, I saw she had scrawled my name all over the walls.  I don't think she trusts me to try anything magical to help her.  Even if she did, I don't think my magic would be up to the task.  I'm pretty good at telekinesis, but I am absolutely lacking when it comes to the more subtle magics.  Venture has the talent and ability, but I don't know if she has the skill yet.  But I fear she may be the only pony who can save Dr. Friesden.

I'll try to find a way to explain the situation to her parents and get their permission to ask Venture to try to save Dr. Friesden.  I'll have to be delicate, I've heard rumors her family doesn't like royal ponies.  If Peytrel is any indication, I'll need to choose my words very carefully.


Chapter 33

Debrief first; always debrief first while the details are still fresh.  A small squad of Diomedians was spotted on the far side of the river.  Commander Starkey ordered the river bridge raised and the markspony squad into position to pick them off before they could harm anypony.  I assembled the Guard inside the walls and tried not to think about what it would mean if we saw any action today.

When the sounds of fighting ceased, we were down another brave pony and had three with serious injuries.  Including Peytrel.  I have to ask his parents about Venture and Dr. Friesden right now.  She's the head medical pony for a very good reason, and I fear her replacement may not have the skill to save all three of the injured. 


********

I'll post a pic of Psycho Carrot tomorrow, unless The Master beats me to it.  Too tired right now to use the pony maker.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 03:26:37 am
Prison Graffiti


Khenal Godkin, in fealty to the Princesses, our undying ladies, and by the grace of the God Ingest, I call thee diabolis, and in the testimony of thy crimes, I submit this carta. May holy justice account in all balance. The Princesses protect.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 04:21:12 am
[REMOVED FOR POINTLESSNESS]
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 04:28:17 am
Didn't seem to work too well with Urist Vaultbridges....hehehe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 23, 2011, 09:27:11 am
Guss what book! I threw a party today!
It was a birthday party for Toltot.  We were talking and I told him about the birthday party we had for my friend Andy and he asked me what a birthday was!  Can you believe it book?  He didn't even know what day he was even born on!  I decided that we were going to have a party right then and there!  I got up on the table and told everypony there that it was Toltot's birthday today and that we needed to party.  He was so nervous, but once it got started he loved it!  He said it was the most fun he had ever had.  He even said it was his first party ever!  We all had a supper fun time!
-

Some ponies say that after a battle, that a dark graveyard silence decends over the fields, and that there is not a sound to be heard.  At the moment this... was most esuredly not true.
"YOU PIG FOOTED, LOUCHY SODS!"
The leader of the Diomedian attack had stumbled into a cage trap during the battle, and during the tending to the wounded, was forgotten in his cage.  With his ax knocked out of his reach and his knife lost in a dice game days ago, he was trapped.
"YOU GLOOBY BOTTLES OF CHEAP, STINKING SEWER BREW!"
Having given up on trying to undo the cage lock himself, he instead decided to pass the time sowing off his mastery of the traditional royal speaking tone.
"COME BACK AND GET SOME IN DA YARBLES!  IF YA GOT ANY YARBLES!"
Nopony in the fortress was particularly egar to collect the raging Diomedian. That is, nopony but one.
"COME ON YOU FLUTTERY LUTTERY LITTLE PISS! I'LL ROOKER YA UP ALL KROVVIER! I'LL...  what's this? Horrorshow! If it isn't me new chelloveck. Here to get your droog out of this staja? Real dobby!"
The pony before him stood his ground a few feet from the cage, carefully taking the crossbow from his back.
"Sorry droog, got meself a new way now.  Don't want to muky-up."
The caged pony was perplexed at this statement, and voiced his concern.
"What ya mean new way?  Whats dat on your flappers? Is that flipy-fluff you got sukky on? Have you gone bezoomny? Your mozg fall out your gulliver! What's that pooshka for?"
The free pony for his part seemed to ignore the other as he loaded his crossbow with a salvaged Diomedian bolt.
"Can't have you govoreeting and creeching all me malenky see-me-nots away can I? That would be baddiwad. Very baddiwady."
The bow was raised and aimed towards the imprisoned and soon to be condemned pony.
"Bye-bye me droogy." 
The other never got the chance to retort.
He would say it was the one that got away, most likely to get revenge for something or other.  Eveypony knew how vile there kind can be.  They would believe him, after all Toltot had proven himself the honorable stallion.  Why would he lie about this?

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My big brothers hurt! He's hurt super bad book!
It's so bad, hes all bloody and he wont wake up!
Daddy says the doctor will make him all better but mommy is just crying and... and...
Everything was going so well again.  My friends came back and fogave me, we had Toltot's party and...
Why dose the bad stuff alway come when things are just getting good again!  It's not fair!! I just-

got to go khenal say i can help!
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This is why I love these things man! You never know what will happen!  Love it!
Also, I never said the caged domie is dead, I just said that he won't be giving away any info.
Sweet Celestia, I hope Peytrel lives!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 01:11:49 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 34

That could have gone better.  Venture's Mother was curled up and crying over the news of Peytrel's injuries and her Father looked ready to physically toss me out of their apartment.  Before I could try explaining myself further, Venture came rocketing out of her room talking a mile a minute.  I only caught Peytrel's name before the little filly almost dragged me out.

Well, her parents didn't try to stop us, go that's good, right?  I explained to Venture that Dr. Friesden seriously needed her help, and that if she helped her, Dr. Friesden would be able to help her brother.  We stopped in my office to grab a few of my relevant books, Venture is reading the spells that I think will help, so I'm using this time to write in you, my Book.

Looks like she's about finished and is ready.  It's her show now.  I hate to put this much pressure on somepony so young, but there is simply no choice.  Time to lead her to Dr. Friesden's cell.


**************

As promised, our new pegasus: Psycho Carrot!
Spoiler (click to show/hide)


Just wanted to say that everyone is an awesome writer, I love this fort!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 01:38:53 pm
I love my pony! what program did you use?!?!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 02:05:36 pm
I use a combination of this (http://generalzoi.deviantart.com/art/Pony-Creator-Full-Version-254295904) and paint.  It's quite a nice pony maker, though it doesn't allow for coloring wings separately from the body.  So I use paint for that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 02:23:33 pm
I just made my own personal pony! Let's just say she's not the happiest Pegasus.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on October 23, 2011, 03:23:33 pm
Notebook of Ironya:

Entry 4: Enemies at the gates. Enemies have been repelled. My weapons tasted some blood at last. I am happy, but also sad because of one of the valiant ponies died. I must make sharper weapons. That will make enemies die faster which means less time to hurt my brethren.

Entry 5: While Charity was out of her room to tell ponies' families about injuries I took another bottle of ink from her cabinet. They are so small. Those bottles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 03:30:12 pm
I just made my own personal pony! Let's just say she's not the happiest Pegasus.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

That pony looks like it's going to eat someone's face :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 03:47:49 pm
I just made my own personal pony! Let's just say she's not the happiest Pegasus.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

That pony looks like it's going to eat someone's face :)
she's waiting for someone to post an update :P
No really, she's just EXTREMELY mad that her date hasn't shown up yet.
Picture Pinky Pie explaining what I said and it sounds more accurate.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 03:51:37 pm
Friesden's Gaol Wall.


Khenal.

You think I don't know who told Venture to come here? I know it was you. You tried to use her to get INTO MY MIND YOU
SAVIOR BASTARD!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 04:14:57 pm
Journal of Psycho Carrot: entry one
I've read the writing in Friesden's cell. I have to help her! I MUST!
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"Ummm...Friesden? Are you alright? I won't hurt you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 04:22:42 pm
"Who are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 04:24:05 pm
Screams from the cell block!  I should never have sent in Venture on her own, but I was worried Friesden wouldn't let her help if I was there.  Sounds like I was right.  As I round the corner, I see that one of the crossbow squad is there as well.  Carrot something?  I'm terrible with names.  Looks like he's trying to talk to Dr. Friesden, though it doesn't look like he's getting anywhere.  I need to face my fears, pony up and see if I really can't give Friesden the help she needs.

"Dr. Friesden?  I've read your journal, and I want to help you.  Please, talk to me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 04:29:26 pm
"That's a lie, Khenal. You bastard, you did this to me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 04:35:11 pm
"CALM DOWN! I JUST WANT TO HELP YOU!"
I turn to face Khenal,
"She just won't listen to reason. I've read her writing as well, and I just can't let her stay in such a state of dismay! I could put on a little air show for her...maybe that would cheer her up? She'd have to leave her cell to see it...What do you think we should do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 04:36:31 pm
"Not leaving my cell. All that stops you from using me, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 04:37:52 pm
"Fine then. I guess this means we do this the hard way."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 04:39:02 pm
I turned to Carrot and placed a hoof on his shoulder
"The writing on the walls is only the tip of the iceberg.  Nothing said here leaves this room, I'd rather not have Dr. Friesden's problem spread around."

"I would never do anything to harm you, Friesden.  I put you in that cell to protect the ponies of Glitter Glen, and I wish with all that I am that I could let you out, but you're dangerous.  Or, one of you is dangerous.  I know you have company in your head, but please believe me when I say it's not me.  And I want to help you get back to yourself."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 04:45:32 pm
"Lies. More LIES! YOU controlled me! One of my friends got the evidence, you BASTARD!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 04:47:44 pm
whispering to Khenal
"I'm starting to think that you're only traumatizing her further. I recommend you leave now. I have to put her out of her misery. Unless you have a better plan...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 04:51:51 pm
I glared at Carrot for a moment, then turned back to Friesden.

"Who said I controlled you?"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 04:58:01 pm
"You don't know? Then I won't let you know. You'll never get your hands on him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 05:05:08 pm
"Please, Friesden, let us help you.  Several ponies of the militia were just injured in a diomedian attack:  Two form the crossbow squad and Peytrel from Commander Starkey's squad.  I'm worried that Dr. Erok won't be able to help them in time."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 05:11:35 pm
"If'n you were so worried, why didn't you help them before they got injured?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 05:22:12 pm
I flinched at that.

"Protocall and jurisdiction."

Sweet Ingest, did that sound as hollow and pathetic as it felt?

"If I could fight all the diomedians myself, I would.  If I could have them take me and never bother anypony else, I would.  But I can't.  You know what those brave ponies go through, you've patched them up before.  If you really won't let me help you, let somepony help you.  Even if you don't believe me, I really just want you to be well"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 05:23:56 pm
Friesden laughed. "Yeah, sure. Protocol. And I've got a lovely bridge back home that you can buy for only twenty bits! No, I don't believe you. Why should I?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 05:26:10 pm
"Please, if you don't trust her, trust me! Just tell me how I can help!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 05:53:33 pm
There is an urgent knock on the door.

"Khenal, are you in there? It's Starkey. May I come in?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 05:55:34 pm
"NOT NOW PEASANT! We're...ummm...TALKING ABOUT...stuff! COME BACK LATER!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 05:58:30 pm
"... Seargent Carrot?"

((The crystal ball shows many, many laps around the walls in your future. :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 06:00:23 pm
"Commander Starkey!  Yes, please come in!"

I tried to meet Friesden's eyes before I hung my head and said softly:
"I'm sorry I've failed you Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 06:06:37 pm
"Khenal, is the filly Venture here with you? her parents said she left with you earlier."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 06:13:00 pm
"Leave me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 06:19:19 pm
I glanced over to where Venture was.  She had been oddly quiet.

"Yes, she's right here.  Come on Venture, lets get you back home.  I'm sure your parents are worried."


Khenal's Book, Chapter 35

I've failed her.  I've failed everypony. 



************

And so I bow out of this scene.  This was awesome :)

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 06:21:39 pm
((Uhm... I wasn't going to end the scene quite yet...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 06:24:49 pm
AAAAAAND CUT! THAT'S A WRAP!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 06:27:59 pm
Um, I didn't mean to kill it for everyone, it's just time for Khenal's exit :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 06:31:15 pm
"Friesden, please! I can help! just tell me how I can!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 06:33:29 pm
The captain leans in close to Khenal, whispering.

"You'll find them down in the infirmary. The lad Peytrel's awake, and Doctor Erok wants his family there in case... you know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 06:35:18 pm
"Peytral. I must talk to Peytral."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 06:39:24 pm
"PROGRESS! SHE'S ASKING FOR SOMEONE!!!!" Psycho leaps into the air and does a backflip but smashes into the wall and slides upside down to the ground.

Forgetting my rank, I shout "STARKEY! FETCH PEYTRAL NOW!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 06:43:45 pm
"Considering the lad is injured and bed-ridden, I don't see that happening anytime soon. Unless you think you're up for dragging a fully assembled, occupied bed up twenty flights of stairs all by yourself... seargent.

Now, I see you've been, ah, interrogating the prisoner. What can you tell me so far?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 06:58:44 pm
100% uncooperative! all she does is scream or babble about how Khenal is controlling her. I reccomend we put her down...ssssSIR..." *grumbles*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 07:08:40 pm
"We are not Diomedians, seargent. We don't butcher eachother and try to pass it off as justice."

I notice the scrawlings on the walls of Friesden's cell.

"What is all this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 07:12:36 pm
"Ah, she writes those during her...episodes...they've been happening longer and more frequently lately now that I think about it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 07:13:10 pm
"Can't you see it? It's writing."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 07:19:04 pm
"Hmm, you seem to be a bit more calm now. Now, PLEASE FOR LOVE OF PONIES EVERYWHERE, tell me how I can help you! I...WE...don't need anymore crazy ponies!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 07:22:10 pm
Psycho Carrot recieves an angry glare

"No, I agree that one is plenty enough.

Khenal, Khenal, Khenal... What about Khenal? 'I call thee diabolis?' What did he do, Miss Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 07:31:12 pm
"He took control of my MIND!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 07:37:01 pm
"...What?

Khenal... took control of your mind? How? When? What... What did he make you do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 07:45:35 pm
"You don't really believe what she's telling you, right?"
I say in a hushed tone of voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 07:49:51 pm
"I don't -know- how! All I know is that I've been feeling his voice in my head, and that when I go to sleep I do things! I've had to lock myself in my room at night and hide the key just to stop it from doing anything!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 07:51:49 pm
All of a sudden, Psycho Carrot's eye's go dark and he begins to babble about Khenal
"NO! OUT OF MY HEEEEEEEEEEEEED!!!!!" Screams Carrot as he begins kicking and thrashing about like a lunatic.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 07:55:09 pm
" 'it', Miss Friesden? You mean he isn't controlling you directly? He's sending somepony... or something else to - GODDESS DAMN IT SEARGENT, I'VE HAD DAMN NEAR ENOUGH OF YOUR ANTICS TODAY!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 07:56:36 pm
GET IT OUT...HEHEHE...GET IT OUT!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Babbles Carrot, before collapsing in a heap unconscious.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 08:01:46 pm
"Seargent Psycho Carrot, I'm ordering you to-... Seargent? Seargent!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 08:01:58 pm
"I.. I don't know.... He was using his magic on me. Ask Peytral. He was the one who showed it to me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 08:09:29 pm
"He... He's still breathing... I think he'll be fine. Kulet damn it, I'm getting to the bottom of this."

I approach Khenal's desk, and begin to rifle through the contents. What do I find?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 08:10:15 pm
Removed due to irrelevance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 23, 2011, 08:15:04 pm
In Khenal's desk, is mostly boring paperwork, but there are two things that stand out.  The first is Friesden's journal, the other is a book on mental magic.  The magic book details precisely very powerful mind control magics.  Khenal has it as a resource for defense against those kinds of spells, but it certainly looks incriminating by itself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 08:22:00 pm
"Miss Friesden, when did this start? When did you first feel him... controlling you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 08:24:18 pm
"I... I don't know! I can't REMEMBER!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 08:42:58 pm
regaining consciousness for only a moment, I mumble "Sir...hehehe...you're next...HEHEH...HEHEHEEE...." then pass out again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 08:58:09 pm
"D-do you remember the things he makes you do, afterward? Please, I need to know these things, Miss Friesden!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 09:07:19 pm
"I don't remember most...but he made me kill that pegasus! He made me..." Friesden retched, but doesn't throw up. "Made me stab him again and again and again oh Ingest..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 09:12:18 pm
At that moment, I wake up with the same eerie look in my eyes, but I appear to be acting normal
"Sir. I need to borrow your sword. Now, sir."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 09:20:41 pm
"Seargent? I... haven't carried a sword since basic, son. You want my axe? Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 09:22:00 pm
"I can hear the silent voices."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 09:23:58 pm
"Sir, GIVE. ME. THE. AXE. NOW." Says Psycho, his eyes twitching.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 09:25:44 pm
"Seargent... I really don't think that would be the best idea."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 09:32:18 pm
"No no no no...PERHAPS I'M NOT MAKING MYSELF VERY CLEAR! I SAID, GIVE ME THE FUCKING AXE NOW SO I CAN KILL YOU ALL!!!!!!!! Starting with...Venture...AHAHAHAHAHAHHA!! NOW GIVE ME THE AXE, BASTARD!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 23, 2011, 09:34:02 pm
Only you, me, and Starkey are in the room. And I'm behind a jail cell.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 09:35:14 pm
((I know, I'm going berserk and seeing things! Yeesh, I figured you had picked up on that by now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 09:54:35 pm
"Alright, fair enough."

I draw my axe from my belt.

"You want my weapon? Come take it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 09:56:41 pm
Psycho's eyes turn blood red, then he rushes at Starkey with blood lust,
"GIVE ME THE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 23, 2011, 10:04:39 pm
Venture for her part was silent the entire time, a blank thousand mile stare facing a wall.  Occasionally, her eyes would dart back and forth following something only she could see, her horn lighting up momentarily. Eventually, when the proverbial sh*t hit the fan, she spoke. A smile lighting up her face.

"Got ya!"



----
Sweet lord I look away for an hour or two...
edit: you see, confusing!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 10:06:43 pm
((Venture and Khenal left the room two pages ago, friend.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 10:21:17 pm
((three actually))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 23, 2011, 11:09:11 pm
Starkey sidesteps, letting the enraged Carrot barrel past him, before bringing the blunt back of his axe down hard on the back of his neck.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 23, 2011, 11:49:13 pm
I scream "NO!" then fall over, knocked out cold.

((Well, time to go to bed. TUNE IN NEXT TIME FOR ANOTHER EXCITING EPISODE OF...Glitterglen: General Hospital!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 24, 2011, 12:03:17 am
((Aye, I ought to be off as well. G'night everyone!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on October 24, 2011, 01:02:54 am
Sweet Celestia, I go away for one evening and a day for my brother's wedding, and there's SIX new pages.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 02:00:49 am
There are only six pages.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 02:10:20 am
(Been following the back and forth all night. Was unable to join in as I was at my Shadowrun game. Have a few things to say in character before the scene is finished and fort continues on. Also, as Freisden is definitely the only pony with a couple of the medical skills in the entire fort, I would like to have it decided weather or not she is being released to help the wounded or not before continuing the game and having a zero skilled pony patch them up, although it looks like an early release won't be happening. Not expecting anyone to see this before morning but going to post it now anyway.)

Charity makes her way down the stairs into the guard's floor. She looks out at the scene before her. Commander Starkey standing with his ax in hand, and Sargent Carrot unconscious on the ground. She gasps.

 "Commander! What is going on here! I was coming to talk with Khenal and I heard all this yelling! EXPLAIN!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 02:23:04 am
"Khenal came for him, Charity. Khenal came to kill him. And he nearly succeeded...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 02:37:15 am
Charity walks closer and peers in through the bars at Freisden. She sees all the writing, on the walls. Is quite for a moment and then whispers to Starkey.

"Commander" emphasis is placed upon the title, "I don't know why you knocked out the Sargent, but I trust you can explain it later. Take him to the infirmary, and restrain him in a traction bench if you think he's dangerous."

(Since Impending Doom said he was going to sleep for the night I will momentarily assume he does this.)

Charity walks up to the cell, and says in the most soothing voice she can.

"Freisden, what is with all this writing? Why have you defaced all of Theropod's artwork? And why do you think Khenal is responsible for any of this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 03:14:53 am
"Peytral told me, miss. That's why I had to record it! Couldn't let it be hidden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 03:29:13 am
Charity looks genuinely surprised.

"Peytral?!" Charity files that particular claim in the back of her mind to investigate later.

 "Listen Friesden. I came down here to talk with Khenal because one of the guard told me that they had found your diary, and that in it you were fighting with, presumably yourself. Now I haven't read it myself yet, but if what they told me is true, and from the state of your cell. I can tell one thing. Friesden, you are very sick. And my dear friend, it pains me to say this, but you may be beyond our ability to help. Khenal, is a trustworthy pony, and I trust him with my life, I can't believe he would do this, to you or any pony."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 04:09:49 am
Friesden rose up.

"You -accuse- me of LYING? How DARE YOU! I know Khenal has done this!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 04:34:21 am
"My friend. Please be calm, and look at this from my perspective. What evidence can you show me that Khenal has done anything? We have your diary, in it you admit to the murder! Your walls are covered with graffiti, the likes of which no sane pony would make. You are clearly unhinged, and I don't know how to help you, but we can't keep you locked up forever."

*Charity tears up a little.*

"I'm sorry Friesden I promise I'll make up my mind about what to do with you soon. I'm sorry." Chairty walks away from the cell toward the stairs. A tear makes it's way down her face.

"I have to hear out Peytral, and I need to hear Khenal address these claims about him" thinks the beige unicorn. "Then...Then I can pass sentence on her."

(I should probably note that Freiden and Charity are listed as friends on the relationship chart in game, and I'm counting that for Charity's actions)

(I think I'll end our dialoge here Dsarker, unless you want to shout anything at her as she makes for the stairs)

*After heading out she will summon Khenal, and Venture [someone connected to both Khenal and Peytral] to meet her with Peytral [who is still in the hospital] to hear what evidence Peytral has, let Khenal make his defense, and undoubtedly allow for Venture to either defend or condemn Khenal.*

Also, I guess Starkey will be within ear shot from taking the Sargent up to the doctors, if he wants to drop any info Charity's way about Peytral's parental situation and opinion of the Godkin. Completely up to you Impending Doom.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 02:00:40 pm
I was waiting outside Peytrel's room.  After all, I wasn't family and I doubted my presence would help him heal.  I had only just started writing in my Book when Mrs. Charity came around the corner.  I put it away and tried to compose myself.

"Hello Charity, anything I can help you with?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 03:06:14 pm
waking up in the hospital, with no memory of what happened, I was confused to discover that I'm restrained.
"What...what happened? Why am I restrained...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 06:46:27 pm
Charity makes her way down the hall towards Khenal. She appears to have been crying but seems better now.

"Khenal, is Venture inside?" Without waiting for the answer she says, "Please, follow me." and she walks into Peytral's room.

She approaches the parents and kindly explains, "We are sorry for the intrusion, however, I've been told your son knows something about the murder, you are welcome to stay, while I ask him a few questions." Chairty approaches Peytrals bed and sits next to it.

 "hey kid, I'm sorry that this had to happen, but I need to ask you a few questions. Freisden said you told her that Khenal was mind controlling her. Did you tell her that? And If so, what evidence do you have, of this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 07:00:38 pm
She looks determined to get to the bottom of this.  I hope she has better luck that I did.  I silently followed her into Peytrel's room and tried my best to occupy the same space as the wall, to little success.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 07:04:10 pm
Peytral lay in bead with Daringsky, his younger brother, asleep and cured up to him.  Little venture was also asleep in a little pile of party decorations.  She had wanted to throw her brother a little victory party but exhausted from her visit to Dr. Friesden she had only engulf energy to throw up some confetti and shout "yay!" before passing out. There parents had decided to leave them be for a time.

"Heck if I know why your here Carrot, I thought you were fine after the fight."

Chairty enters, taking a seat next to his bed, explaining her visit.

"Ya, ya I said it, and keep it down too I don't want to wake them up right now.  Hey, hows Oslo?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 07:10:27 pm
"Oslo is is bad shape. All four legs are broken, and numerous lacerations all over the body. I'm not a doctor, but his survival may be in question, but if he does live he owes it entirely to you. But that is not why I'm here. On what do you base your claim that Guard Captain Khenal has done anything wrong? I need to know what evidence you have. Friesden's life may depend on it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 07:32:03 pm
"Wait, wait hold up. Sorry, I think I'm still a little messed up still. What about Friesden?  Wait, no, I know what your talking about."

Peytral looks over to Skydaring, a sad look on his face.

"We should take them out.  They shouldn't be here for this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 07:35:33 pm
Charity gestures to the parents and asks them to remove the children.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 08:02:51 pm
Peytral parents seem reluctant, but see the wisdom in it.  The mother takes the slumbering Venture from the little party pile, eliciting a little mone of protest but not waking the filly entirely.  The father take little sky from the bed. He says how proud he is of him before leaving.

"All right, lets get this over with."

Peytral stares daggers at Khenal on the other end of the room.

"Tell me, cap-i-tan, why do you think I said what I said."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 08:13:48 pm
"I don't know.  I truly don't know."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 08:14:08 pm
"HEY! GET ME OUT OF TRACTION!" Says Psycho, his eyes beginning to glow a faint red again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 08:17:59 pm
"Shut up Sargent Carrot!" growls the unicorn, "This is important. We will deal with you later!" "Now Peytral. Explain your claim, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 08:19:44 pm
"Ya about that why the hell is carrot strapped down to a table?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 08:23:05 pm
"I don't rightly know what exactly happened, but he was yelling, down by Friesden's cell and Commander Starkey knocked him unconscious. I told him to take the Sargent to the Doctor's and to restrain him if thought he was dangerous. Since he is tied down. The Commander must feel he needs to be. And for now that's good enough for me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 08:24:03 pm
Friesden's New Diary


I found a scalpel in my cell today. Somepony had attached a tag to it, too: Honour.



Never.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 08:24:18 pm
"YOU DID THIS TO ME KNENAL! GET AWAY!" Howls Psycho, his eyes now completely blood red.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 08:28:08 pm
Charity is not looking at Carrot but only at Peytral, thus she is unaware of the eyes. She directs her face outwards of the room. She shouts. "DOCTOR EROK! WOULD YOU KINDLY GAG OR SEDATE PSYCHO CARROT."

The Doctor arrives, and attempts to do this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 08:29:30 pm
"YOU DON'T KNOW ANYTHING! LOOK AT ME! HE'S USING US!" Screams Psycho.
All of a sudden, he asks in a calmer voice,
"Ugh...can I have an axe now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 08:32:26 pm
"No!  I don't have that kind of magic!  And even if I did, I would never do anything like this!"



Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 08:36:27 pm
Friesden's New Diary.


Sorry I can't write longer, Diary. It's too hard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 08:38:29 pm
"SHUT UP! YOU USED MAGIC ON ME WHILE WE WERE TALKING TO FRIESDEN IN HER CELL! FIRST YOU CONTROL HER, NOW ME! WHO'S NEXT? CHARITY?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 08:42:18 pm
((I'm not entirely sure what the real situation is anymore.

Is Friesden as crazy as she seems?

Is she actually controlled by Khenal? By the black vines?

Or is she as sane as can be and is merely manipulating everyone into thinking she's insane, that Khenal is controlling her?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 08:45:02 pm
((I'm not entirely sure what the real situation is anymore.

Is Friesden as crazy as she seems?

Is she actually controlled by Khenal? By the black vines?

Or is she as sane as can be and is merely manipulating everyone into thinking she's insane, that Khenal is controlling her?))
((I'd like to think that she really is controlling you, but someone else stone khenal's mental magic book and is using it on me. Psycho would have no way of knowing this, thus he assumes it's khenal's fault.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 08:46:07 pm
Charity turns to face Carrot, "WOULD YOU JUST SHUT...." She sees that his eyes are unnaturally red. "Kogsak (god of mercy) have mercy on our souls."

Charity searches her mind for every bit of magic knowledge she has and finds nothing to help her.

"Captain Khenal! What is going on! What sort of magic is this?"


(I don't know what's actually going on anymore. I thought that Friesden was just schizophrenic, but now I don't know. Is Venture behind all of this? But Friesden was crazy before Venture arrived? Is the filly just making it worse? Is she doing it on purpose? Why? she likes Khenal.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 08:51:41 pm
"HEHEHE...NOBODY LISTENS...HEHEHEEHEHEHHEEHHEEH!!!...WHEN YOU LET ME OUT OF TRACTION-"
All of a sudden, my eyes shift slightly closer their the original color
"Grah, make it stop! Somepony help! Somepony is controlling me! I can't resist it...much longer!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 08:54:39 pm
Red Eyes?  No, please no.  Anything but that!  My horn glows brightly as anything in the room that could be used as a restraint is tied about Psycho Carrot, including a sturdy gag.  I may have failed a few ponies, but I refuse to fail all of Glitter Glen!

"There are only a few things that could do this to a pony, and they are all absolutely evil.  I think it can be fixed, but it will take time for me."

I turn to Charity

"How skilled are you in magic?"


*************

Well, it'd take a truly Machiavellian character to write like a crazy person in their personal journal on the off chance somebody would read it. I was considering having Khenal actually be the one doing at least some of the mind buggery unknowingly, but I'm not sure how to develop that angle yet.  My money is on the vines, but it's your character.

Edit:  Inspiration has struck!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 08:58:27 pm
"MMMMPH! MMMMMMMMPH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I manage to rip apart the gag with unholy strength.

"I'LL KILL YOU ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Both of my eyes begin to turn a demonic red and my body begins to twitch and convulse.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 08:58:49 pm
((Truth is, I'm actually not sure))


Friesden's New Journal.

I haven't written in you before because they took away my ink.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 08:59:59 pm
"Khenal! I don't know what's happening but i think somepony is controlling him with magic. I'm going to try and dispel the magic. Help me. Then we can try and find out who is responsible."

Her horn glows with her magic. A faint shield begins to form around Carrot, but it fades as quickly as it appears. Charity won't be nearly magical enough to help anyone alone.


Ninjaed.

"I'll do my best, but magic was never my best subject. It appears to be some sort of mind controlling spell. I can try to help you dispel or counter it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 09:02:08 pm
Meanwhile, in the astral planes of the gods, a certain Draconequus is having the time of his life (or whatever gods have).
"HAHAHAHAhaha Oohh ha ha aha ha, Ow my sides! Too good! Just too good! This is just to GOOD!"
In his left claw and right foot were what to a mortal would look like marionette doll strings, attached as it were to Dr. Friesden and Carrot respectively. 
"O goodness, this is the most fun I've had in ages!"
Seemingly form thin air, a small royal filly apered, white coated and a pink mane blowing in a perpetual unseen wind.
"Discord! Leave my ponies alone you big jerk!"
"Or what!"
"Or... or..."
"Yes, thats what I thought. Now run along and let a real god have his fun before I have-"
"I'm telling my Daddy on you!"
Few thing can frighten a god. Some would say nothing can, after all, gods cannot be hurt or die. That said, the look of absolute terror on Discord's face while the little filly ran off was out of the ordinary.  Given who Celestia's father was, it is not however unexpected.
"No no no no no STOP!"
Discord hurriedly cuts the stings to his little game, sending the two ponies plummeting into sanity once again.
"Stop! Waite! I'll give you Cotton-candy clouds! You like those right? STOP!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 09:02:54 pm
Friesden's new journal.


Hmmm. It appears to cause less pain when I pick at a more recent cut.


((And it's Draconequus))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 09:08:21 pm
I scream so loud that all the glass in the room shatters, then my eyes slowly fade back to normal. I shake my head and begin to cry in utter fear.

"I feel horrible...horrible...I'm a monster...kill me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 09:09:31 pm
"Then follow my lead.  This is very complicated and could be disastrous if anything goes wrong."

I notice Carrot starting to shred the mundane bindings.

"On second thought, keep him restrained!  This is a possession that we cannot afford to allow to run loose!  Never again!"

With that, my horn glows brighter than before, becoming uncomfortable to look at directly.

"You will not have this one, Discord!"

And suddenly the presence was gone.  My horn dims as I let my magic slowly bleed away.

"That...was odd"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 09:10:44 pm
"He's...He's back to normal? I... I didn't do anything yet. Khenal, did you...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 09:12:36 pm
Tears are pouring out of my eyes at this point.

"KILL ME BEFORE I KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 09:14:54 pm
"I was about to, the presence left on it's own?  I don't know.  We should keep Carrot restrained before he can hurt somepony or hims.."

I cut off in mid-sentence.  Friesden!  Nopony was watching her, and she's almost certainly under the same posession!

"Friesden!  I have to check on her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 09:18:36 pm
Through the tears, I scream, "WAIT! DON'T LEAVE ME!!!!!!! I...WANT...TO...DIE!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 09:19:57 pm
Turns to Peytral. "Do you still doubt the Captain? I don't know what magic is being worked here but one thing is clear. Khenal is trying to protect us."

Now that Carrot is seemingly unpossessed. Dr. Erok, will offer him something to calm him and help him sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 09:21:47 pm
The results of Discords hasty actions are felt throughout the fortress as time seems to skip a beat.  Carrot is cured before the spell is cast, leading to him geting a magical shock from Khenal and charity. One of the wounded ponies finds his leg immediately healed, ups for joy, and falls down a flight of stairs breaking it once again.  A craftspony puts the finishing touches on a truly aw inspiring statue, only to resoundingly find it turned into a block of stone once more.  Venture is once again sleeping in the little pile of party stuff in the hospital as if she never left.  Lastly It takes a hauler 87 years to walk for 1/2 an hour. 

"What just happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 09:23:12 pm
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 09:27:47 pm
Friesden's new diary

Wings don't seem to bleed very much, but they don't cause much pain either.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 09:28:32 pm
"IS carrot OK now? I can't tell he tends to do that sometimes."

------------------------
We need to lock this up, this is an RP cluster fuck.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 09:31:56 pm
Friesden's new diary

There are three types of wounds. Wounds, damned wounds, and suicides. The third sounds good.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 09:33:43 pm
"Please be ok please be ok please be ok"

I burst into the prison block and dash for Friesden's cell.

"Friesden!  Are you alright?"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 09:36:50 pm
"PLEASE, AT LEAST JUST KNOCK ME OUT! I CAN'T TAK-"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 09:56:09 pm
Venture, startled by Carrots screaming and finding herself teleported back to the hospital, jumps up ad runs to her brother, knocking the table Carrot is strapped to over.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 09:57:50 pm
"Hello mind warper! It's a good day for honour!" Friesden stabs herself again in the chest, and as the blood starts coming she raises a quill to dip it in the blood, and she writes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 10:01:16 pm
Charity catches the falling table with magic, and rights it. Dr. Erok, hurries to our patient with a cruel looking primitive, (and probably anachronistic) needle, in his earth pony mouth "This will put you to sleep Carrot." He says as he tries to inject the screaming pony.

"Venture? When did you get here?" A confused Charity mumbles trying to make sense of this all this chaos and discord.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 10:13:52 pm
I magic the scalpel from Friesden with all my might, embedding it in the wall behind me.  She's bleeding from so many wounds, what do I do? 

"I'm sorry Friesden."  was all the warning she got as I magicked her unconscious.

"I guess mental magic really isn't past my skills after all.  Time to get you to the hospital, before you bleed out."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 10:16:50 pm
"N-N-NEEDLE?! AAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!"
Psycho, being traumatized of needles, begins to try to break free, and because the unholy strength is still in his body, he is succeeding so far.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 10:19:03 pm
"Charity, I think we should do this some other time. Like tomorrow morning or something, I don't know."
Patryle looks over to a very confused looking Venture.
"I think you should head home sis, again, I guess... the hell? Whatever! It's past your bedtime."
"O-OK brother."
Alright get going, and Ms. Charity, please just jab carrot! It's hard engulf to sleep with the pain without him screeching his head off... more than usual."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 10:23:26 pm
"Okay Peytral we'll talk in the morning." Charity helps to restrain Carrot, with her magic. If that is successful, she will head down to the prison block, likely seeing Khenal, rushing up with an unconscious and bleeding Friesden, she will then follow them. And after our crazy nurse is the capable hooves of the doctor. She will ask Khenal for details about what's happened.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 10:25:07 pm
Finally, after all the trauma that Psycho has been through, he has a heart attack and passes out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 24, 2011, 10:27:41 pm
"Gezz, I hope he didn't have another heart attack."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 10:47:51 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 36

Maybe I haven't failed them, after all.  At least not permanently.  I should get the details for what happened today down, it was very busy. 

I had sent Venture in to try to help Friesden alone.  I heard yelling and ran in to see Sergent Carrot also trying to talk to Friesden, trying to calm her down.  Friesden would have nothing to do with me, I appeared to only be making the situation worse.  Commander Starkey knocked on the door and asked for Venture.  I told him she was here and I'd lead her to her parents.  They were apparently in the hospital where Peytrel had just regained conciousness.  I left, feeling like an utter failure.

 I wrote the last chapter in you, my Book, while waiting outside of Peytrel's room.  I felt I should apologize to her parents for taking off with Venture so suddenly.  Mrs. Charity appeared and told me to follow her into Peytrel's room.  I didn't really hear what Charity and Peytrel were talking about, I was feeling too morose.  I only came to my senses when Carrot started yelling from the next bed, which he had apparently been strapped to.  I hadn't even noticed him being brought in.  And then I saw his Red Eyes.

Something absolutely malevolent was trying to take over Sergent Carrot!  This is where the details get really fuzzy, my Book.  I remember trying to do something with my magic, and saying something, but it's all a blur.  I remember seeing Friesden in her cell, bleeding all over, and then I remember handing her to Dr. Erok. 

Charity asked me for details, and I can't remember what I said to her.  It apparently satisfied her, she didn't call me a liar or accuse me of using magic on her at least.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 10:50:07 pm
Last written message in Friesden's new diary


No...no mercy. Weak... They were all weak. Cattle... Cattle to the slaughter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 10:53:33 pm
Last written message in Friesden's new diary


No...no mercy. Weak... They were all weak. Cattle... Cattle to the slaughter.
((CLEVER, THOSE ARE QUOTES FROM NIHILANTH IN HALF LIFE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 24, 2011, 10:55:11 pm
Last written message in Friesden's new diary


No...no mercy. Weak... They were all weak. Cattle... Cattle to the slaughter.
((CLEVER, THOSE ARE QUOTES FROM NIHILANTH IN HALF LIFE!))

((Huh. Maybe I should try and find a copy of that at some point. Maybe playing it might make the second make a bit more sense.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 11:13:39 pm
Charity's Jounal (edit) 20th Felsite 97(/edit)

Today, was, unusual to say the least. It started with a member of the guard knocking on my office door. He told me that Ms. Friesden's Diary had been found, and that it showed a disturbed mind tearing itself apart, and that in it she states that she committed the murder. I went to the prison block to confirm this with Khenal, and then to likely have to banish Friesden, into either the caverns or the jungle.

However, that's when everything went to hell. First, on the way down I heard screaming from the cell block. I galloped down and saw Starkey standing over the unconscious body of Sargent Carrot. I later found out that Carrot had gone berserk and Starkey had restrained him. The commander took him to the doctors and restrained him. I talked with my friend Friesden and it was clear to me that she was unhinged. She's been writing all over her walls like a deranged animal. She said that Khenal had been controlling her and that Peytral had told her so. I gathered, Khenal and Peytral and tried to talk to them about these claims.

But then Carrot awoke with fire in his eyes like a pony possessed by the darkest powers. Khenal restrained him and then he and I were about to try and exorcise this influence from the Sargent. But before we could start his eyes and voice returned to normal. The Sargent then seemed to remember what he'd been trying to do, he was terrified and angry and begging to die. Dr. Erok and I subdued the Sargent and sedated him. He's still asleep last I knew.

Khenal ran off to Friesden's side. Peytral asked to talk more tomorrow, as he needed to rest.

Khenal was found carrying Friesden's unmoving and bleeding body to the hostpital. She had tried to commit suicide, with a scalple she had found. Her cell was searched, and the offending scalple removed, a tag tied to it had the word "Honor" written on it, barely readable under the blood. A gift? From who?

At this point I was ready to retire and run home to the waiting hooves of Cryptson and Adamant and Cobalt, but that was not to be. Turns out while this craziness was going on the whole fort was suffering. I have fort full of scared ponies demanding explanations, for everything from floating things, statues turning back to uncut stone. tower turning pink and then back to normal, vegetables sprouting faces and laughing at the cooks, a flying pink earth pony in the dinning area with spinning eyes, and a thousand other nonsensical things. I spent hours running damage control and trying to keep the calm. Gods save us were doing more to tear ourselves apart then the damnable Diomedians could ever hope to do.

But everything seems calm now. Seems we can get back to business as usual.

And now that I've recorded everything, Cryptson and I can finally retire to our bed. The waterfall he made for us is so comforting.


(Well that was interesting.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 24, 2011, 11:21:03 pm
((BEST. ROLEPLAY. EVER!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 24, 2011, 11:51:17 pm
I agree, it was excellent!  And exhausting :P  It'll be nice to get back to relatively normal postings for a bit.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 24, 2011, 11:54:04 pm
(Time to continue on with the fortress as normal I guess then)

Charity's Journal 28th Felsite 97

Summer is officially begun now. Hard to tell the difference, it's always hot and humid in the Failed Jungles. Fortunately nothing unusual has happened since the 20th. Friesden has recovered from her attempted suicide. Her wounds looked worse than they are.

Cryptson's acting depressed and is spending all his time with Grifen digging out more and more underground tree farm space, but it isn't unusual for him to throw himself into his work when somethings bothering him.

Report on injured ponies. Peytral isn't looking good. He's become infected, in all of his wounds, and was to feverish to talk to me when I last visited him. Venture and DaringSky are spending all their time with him. I hope the kid pulls through. He was always such a good boy. Even if I think he's wrong about Khenal.

Tecak's injuries are least sever. He's going to be released as soon as his cast is applied.

Osal, isn't looking good though. His wounds are extensive, he'll be down for months even if he does recover, and with two broken wings, one of which is developing an infection. He might not ever fly again.

Doctor Erok and Doctor Alen are doing their best.

Pycho Carrot was released from the hospital today and reported to Captain Otik for training, as he seems to have calmed down enough. Although Starkey had him flying laps instead of the archery practice Otik had planned, something about a peasant remark.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 25, 2011, 12:24:03 am
Charity's Journal 9th Hematite 97

Cryptson and mine's tomb was finished this afternoon. It is beautiful. Carved into a layer of solid marble. In the center two gem studded clear glass coffins for him and myself. Surrounded by statues, of the founding of Glitterglen, of the gods, and of many heroes, both of legend, and of Glitterglen herself.

10th Hematite 97

Snatcher! Protect the Children! That was the cry that interrupted an otherwise peaceful morning. An earth pony mechanic had bumped into a keshi, while strolling on the surface. Both ran in opposite directions, the airborne squad flew out, but promptly lost him in the jungle.

19th Hematite 97

The position of mayor came up for reelection. Since I've had so much free time since I was made Baroness, I ran for the office this year, and I won! I think the damage control I had to do during the events of the 20th of Felsite helped in that.

25th Hematite 97

Peytral has been released. His wounds have been sutured, his bones set, and splints applied. The doctors have done all they can for him, now his body just has to fight off that infection on it's own. First thing he did when he was released was get right back to work. He's one tough pony.


(And I think I'm done for now. Will continue tomorrow.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 25, 2011, 01:40:24 pm
Meanwhile, back on the atrial plan of the gods, a desperate trixter god was trying to bribe his way out of a very tight situation.
"Come on!  I'll let you try it for a wile! Cotton-candy clouds!  With chocolate rain! Pleas don't tell him!"
"DADDYYYY!!!"
A clash of thunder, louder than any mortal could comprehend sounded throughout the infinity plane.  On the horizon, a titanic visage appeared.  A Metal giant apron a throne carved of raw Admantium. At its feet, a mountain of demonic sculls, some as large as a house, his defeated foes. His voice was the singing of angles, the screaming of daemons, the pounding of hammers on the anvil of creation, for he was the great one. The God of gods, ARMOK the blood god.
"WHAT TROUBLES YOU MY DAUGHTER."
"Discord is being mean to my worshipers again!"
"IS THAT SO..."
Discord was known for two things, his trickery and love for chaos.  A lesser known aspect was his silver tongue.  He's voice has tempted mortals across the multiverse.  He could turn brave heroes into cowards and convince lepers they were the pinnacle of beauty, and have whole worlds agree with them. In his mind, he had already come up with a thousand and one ways to defend himself, weaving word and verse into an impenetrable shield of twisted logic. What came out of his mouth was this:
"See-I-But-well-I-Umm-but-no-see-it-she-me-umm... yes."
Armok droped the hammer, literally.  A hammer the size the empire state building, made of solid admantium metal, covered in refineries that would send a lesser creature mad in it's divine beauty.  Discord was annihilated to the subatomic level, the very neutrons of his body shattered under the blow.  A slap on the wrist by god standards, but a good thump would teach him his lesson.
"Serves you right you big bully.  Well, I guss I should goapologize for his actions. Better do it in person and-"
"CELESTIA... WE HAVE BEEN OVER THIS WITH YOU AND YOUR SISTER. THAT IS NOT THE WAY OF THE GODS."
"But father!  If you would just let me try, I know I could-"
"CELESTIA I WILL NOT ARGUE ABOUT THIS!"
Celestia hangs her defeat and walks out. "Yes, father."
On the shoulder of the giant metal god, a small horse mare appears in a shower of light. She is Faust, a minor god of a small human nation in some no name universe, and the wife of Armok.  The story of there courtship is as varied as the voices that tell it, but the theme is always the same. Love always finds a way.
"Love, you are too hard on them, you can show compassion once in a wile you know."
"I MUST BE FIRM WITH THEM IF THEY ARE TOO LEARN MY WIFE.  YOU WILL SEE, THIS 'PARADISE' THING IS JUST A PHASE.  IN TIME, THEY WILL BOTH BE THE PROPER DEITIES THEY SHOULD BE."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 26, 2011, 03:27:28 am
The following message is displayed in both dinning halls on 3rd Malachite 97.

Memo to all citizens

From the Desk of Charity Conventtulip, Baroness of the Failed Jungles, Mayor of Glitterglen, Chief record keeper of Glitterglen, and Royally Appointed Overseer of The Vermin of Twilight.

Under recommendation from Commander Starkey, effective immediately, the new armories are to be in use. All weapons, (save ammunition which will continue to be stored near the archery ranges) shall be kept behind locked doors. The keys to which are held by Ironya, our weapon-smith, and each militia captain, along with the captain of the guard, and, Stelmith Kebulam (our gem setter has access to the masterwork weapons' storeroom for the purpose of her artwork). Anyone needing access to either armory must get permission from either Commander Starkey, Captain Otik, or Guard Captain Khenal, and sign out, what was taken/stored, with our Bookkeeper, Charity Conventtulip. Note, that this does not change the militia and guard's policies of remaining armed at all times in case of emergency.

Failure to comply will be considered a criminal offense punishable by no less than 3 months imprisonment.


Chairty's Journal 21st Malachite 97

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Ironya%27s%20third%20baby.png)
That's her third child, she and Firelordsky have been really busy. Guess it's understandable, with our shortage of metal she winds up with nothing to do most days, short of the occasional spear sharpening (Pun mostly unintended). This one's a little earthpony, just like his dad. Name is Vathem.

24th Malachite 97

Osal was released from the hospital today. It's very fortunate that he has recovered enough to walk around. I will admit though, with the wound dressings on all four legs and both wings, along with wooden splints on each. It's kind of funny to watch him hobble around. It's not nice, I shouldn't laugh, but well, it just looks so damn ridiculous. If I were him, I'd take a few more weeks of bed rest and not have to look like a fool.

25th Malachite 97
A pair of ponies has arrived at our gates. A unicorn mare hammerer (she is excited about joining the guard) and her daughter another unicorn along with her, the foal is just about a year old. No father is with them however.

4th Galena 97
My third child was born this morning. A little unicorn filly. She's got her mother's looks. I'm going to name her Belle.


Charity's Journal 13th Galena 97

A caravan from the Zebra civilization of the Triangular Shell has been spotted in the jungle. I hope they brought Iron. Adamant's hoping they brought a storyteller, as he isn't really old enough to remember the last time, he was less than a year old then, but Venture's been telling him about them and their illusion magics, and he can't wait to see them. I loved those old pony tales when I was little, I might sneak down and hear a few stories with the kids if I have time.

20th Galena 97

I had a brief conversation with the Zebra Diplomat. It would have been a pleasant chat had she not started it with what I'm pretty sure was an insult.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/INSULT%21.png)

I Am Not a Dwarf!

28th Galena 97

Fortunately our little misunderstanding, did not effect Bokbon's ability to negotiate a good deal for a lot of metal, raw gems, exotic foods, leather, and cloth.

Additionally, according to my calender, an import from the capital, today is the first day of Autum. Hopefully as "Winter" approaches the heat will die down a little.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 26, 2011, 03:35:16 am
Friesden's New Diary


Failed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 26, 2011, 06:00:41 am
I...I...
No comment.
What an AWESOME story!
Could you dorf me as a doctor?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 26, 2011, 06:14:06 am
I...I...
No comment.
What an AWESOME story!
Could you dorf me as a doctor?

Glad you have enjoyed reading it so far. Yeah, I'll pony you as one of our two, not yet imprisoned doctors.

We have Doctor Erok, a male earthpony, who is our current chief medical pony, (He does the diagnosing and wound dressing, and surgery although Friesden is slightly better at that then him.) he has no other jobs so if no one is hurt he's always available to bring somepony water) and we have a female unicorn nurse, (she does the bone setting, and unless Friesden is released do to plot related things. The suturing) she is also a legendary engraver when no one needs medical attention, she's the one I called Doctor Alen in an earlier post.

Which pony would you like, and what name would you like? Just your user name, minus the numbers of course, or something else?

Edit: Or if you prefer, and I realize it would be a little unorthodox. You could take one pony and claim them without changing the name, as they have both been talked about before, and neither have particularly difficult or unusual names. Your call, I don't want you to think I'm pushing that decision.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 26, 2011, 06:22:06 am
Is Friesden still in the cell?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 26, 2011, 06:30:59 am
Is Friesden still in the cell?

Uh, yeah, been using a burrow, along with assigning her a dinning room and bedroom inside it to keep her there, has worked well so far.

While one could argue that since she seems to no longer be possessed we should let her out, and I'll entertain that idea, I haven't done so yet, because the character's don't know that Discord "cut the strings" so I hadn't released her yet.

 Additionally, she tried to kill herself, got to protect her from herself after all.

Although, if Khenal, or someone else (not Sargent Psycho Carrot, but someone sane, sorry The Master, no offense) comes to Charity and says they think it's safe to let her out, she would go along with it, if only to get Friesden back in the game in a less confining way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 26, 2011, 06:39:23 am
Oh, I did so hope you'd say yes.

Friesden's new journal.



Justice.

Let this be the implement of release.


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 26, 2011, 10:09:47 am
Sorry for the late reply. Wasn't expecting one so soon, you guys are really active!
Yeah, my name really wouldn't fit in.
Could you take the Chief Medical Dwarf Pony and renamed him Bubbles? For whatever reason that seems to be the only thing that comes to my mind while reading about Medical Ponies.
Oh, btw, can you give me some tips on running a Pony Fortress? I always manage to screw up in the first or second year, REALLY taking away that feeling that i'm good at DF.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on October 26, 2011, 11:41:57 am
Notebook of Ironya:

Entry 6: I have three children now. I called my newborn son Vathem, but I wonder if I shouldn't rename him in tribute to one of our militia ponies. Hmm, I would have to ask my husband first. Last time I spoke with him, he wasn't very fond of all the madness surrounding Friesden, Khenal and others. Maybe he just longs for peaceful, obscure earthpony village like the one in which he grew up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 26, 2011, 12:34:00 pm
Hey book.
I couldn't help Dr. Friesden.  Those strings were too strong.  Way too strong.  Like, the spell Khenal showed me wouldn't work.  I couldn't do a thing and everypony started yelling and, they sent me away.
I got to see my brother though! He was still hurt, but he was OK! And he's a real hero! I ran back to my room to get some party stuff like confetti and some cloth streamers and stuff from Toltot's birthday.  I guess I was super tired, cuss I fell asleep, and mommy took me home.  I woke up in the hospital again though. I don't know why.

-

My Brother is feeling super sick now book.
 The doctor said he has an infection and a fever. I don't know what an infection is, but I had a fever once, and it was terrible, and his is even worse. Me and Sky are right here though, so nothing bad happens!  Were helping Doctor Alen get water and help wash his wounds and stuff.  It's really bad doing that cause it hurts him. Hes always mumbling crazy stuff, and sometimes scary stuff too.  I tried to tell him that I know Khenal didn't do anything bad, but I don't know if he can even hear me.  Mr. Osal is even worse too. 
Mabby I can prey to the sisters to help them, but you have to sacrifice something to ask a god to do something.  I don't have anything that a god would like.  Please be OK brother.

-

Big Bros OK!!  Hes up and walking and everything! YAY!  I knew preying to the sisters without something to give would still work.  Those royal ponies back home were stupid.  I bet celestia and luna never even get that stuff.
Big bro listened to me about Khenal.  I'm not sure he bevels me for some weird reason, but he said he would talk to Ms. Charity.
O, Ms. Charity is the mayor now too!  I'm not surprised, she can be bossy and a grump sometimes, but she runs our fort better than any-pony could.

-

There are a lot of other fillies in the fort nowadays. Even more than before too.  Ms. Ionya Had another filly, and there was that big tough looking mare with the unicorn filly.  She's fun to play tag with!  Also, Ms. Charity has another on the way my mom says.
I wan't to go see Dr. Friesden and try again, but nopony will let me! I know I could fix her if I try again! I bet that would get rid if the chains on Khenal too!

-

A caravan of zebras came today. DaringSky was off like an arrow when he heard, chanting 'story teller! story teller!' the whole time! He loves listening to stories about other places, especially the ones about heroes and adventurers. I tell him stories about Greywings and the stuff he did, like how he saved me, and helped the other ghosts and battled the huge cave worm. Ya, I made some stuff up.  Mom's worried that he might run of and be an adventurer some day, but he's too smart to do something like that!
Also, I've been helping Toltot fit in!  He had really bad manners and stuff, but I teach him how to be a good pony. He calls be his 'itsy droogy'.  he has all sorts of funny words, me and my friends like to use them a lot! It's fun and the adults can't tell what we say!  Viddy you marrow book!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 26, 2011, 01:51:49 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 37

Things have started to settle down, but are hardly back to normal yet.  I've been trying to talk to Friesden, but she's mostly unresponsive to me.  I don't know if she's still under that possession or just really depressed.  I just keep telling her I'm here if she needs me.  She has the occasional visitor, but for the most part it's just her and her cell walls.  I think now, more than ever, she needs a friend.

Chapter 38

Zebra caravan, a favorite of the foals here.  The rhyming speech of the zebras make them excellent storytellers, and our merchants love their exotic goods.  They also know a lot about magic.  I've exhausted my supply of magic tomes and bought more from the zebras, though the book seller gave me a weird look and a cryptic remark.  "Nopony can escape their past, a lesson you should learn fast."  At least I got a good deal on the books.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 26, 2011, 09:27:16 pm
Dear Diary
I suppose i should keep one of these things, everypony in this fort also has one.
We released Osul and Peytral today, although both still don't look too good. I was hoping that Doctor Freisden could help, but she's still locked up. Nopony seems to think she's sane. I certainly do, though.
Maybe i should tell Ms. Charity.
I'm really worried about Carrot, he seems to have gone back to normal but that mind control thing someone did on him was REALLY creepy.
Signing off for now,
Bubbles
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 26, 2011, 09:39:33 pm
Journal of Psycho Carrot: entry two

My mind is clear,
The strings have snapped,
I know not what will come for us,

I have seen death,
I have shed blood,
The earth cries out in it's mournful cry,

I feel so weak,
I know who to blame,
The evil tempter will surly die.

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Imagine this being read in a slow, mournful voice. It's up to you to decide who i'm referring to as the "tempter".
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 26, 2011, 10:39:22 pm
Friesden's New Diary.

It has become a bit harder to end this than I had thought it would be.

I keep passing out before it is done.

Honour.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 26, 2011, 11:07:06 pm
Dear Diary, Entry no.2
Carrot seems to be writing in his journal. I hope he's alright. I think i should read it to be sure what his problem is.
Bubbles
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OOC: Would you let me read your journal The Master?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 26, 2011, 11:26:22 pm
Hey Dsarker, is Friesden still writing on the walls of her cell?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 26, 2011, 11:29:09 pm
Not writing on her walls.

She has some more...ink... now :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 26, 2011, 11:36:42 pm
Uhh....
Not Good
I hope Bubbles can patch Freisden up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 12:09:43 am
Khenal's Book, Chapter 38

I was reviewing the evidence against Friesden today, my book, when I came across the scalpel that she tried to kill herself with.  It had a note attached with a single word on it: Honor.  Where did she get this?  More importantly, who gave it to her?  Disturbingly, it looks like somepony hoped to get her to kill herself. 

She got a new journal form somewhere, and I think she's writing in it in blood; she has several wounds that maintain fresh scabs.  I need to do something to help her, to let her know that her life is worth living.

Hmm, if a single word can break her, can another word build her back up?  I'm going to try something very risky, my Book.  I'll need to be careful and absolutely sure it doesn't look like it's from me.  I'm going to sneak a charcoal stick into her cell so she can write without picking her wounds, and it's going to have it's own note and word: Hope.   

***************


Welcome to Glitter Glen Ansontan!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 01:24:44 am
Friesden's New Journal.

I think this is the last time. I'm ready.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 02:04:54 am
"Thats it, i'm going to see friesden."
Dear Diary, Entry 3
Khenal seems to be planning something to do with Friesden. Maybe i can help him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 27, 2011, 06:55:55 am
Charity's Journal 10th Limestone 97

Doctor Erok, or as everypony has taken to calling him Doctor Bubbles (I'm not sure how he got that nickname). Has brought forth a request for a new water source. It seems that all the water the well brings up is laced with mud, he believes that to be the cause of Peytral and Osal's infections. It seems the easiest way to deal with this is to create a well near the top of our current aqueduct that brings water to the dinning hall. But that would mean a much longer walk for the doctors. I think the best way will be to create a reservoir closer to the hospital.

Charity's Journal 28th Limestone 97

An accident occurred during the digging out of the new hospital well. One was killed Enog Govosmesir, a pegasan farmer and father of one of our finest marks ponies. Additionally, Toltot, our pegasn mechanic was seen to be caught in the collapse, but, according to eye witness testimony, fell down as the floor collapsed through the stone floor for 3 floors depositing him in Khenal's office, and knocking over one of Pillomino's statues. Unconscious but unharmed. He woke up under Khenal's statue of me and he was able to get up and get back to work before any pony made it down to check on him. He seemed reluctant to visit the doctors but seemed unharmed so nopony insisted.

It must be some kind of miracle that he wasn't hurt. Falling 3 stories and surrounded by all that flying stone. Khenal sure is lucky he wasn't in his office that day. The flying debrie could have had him ending up like poor ol' Enog.

However, now Khenal has a skylight in his office looking into the caverns. Going to seal that up quick.


OOC: I'm not sure what happened, but it looks like the floor I purposely collapsed in a dangerous way, looking for some FUN, you know, smashed through the ground below it, and through that ground, until it hit Khenal's office, where it stopped. I didn't even know that could happen. Below is a zoomed in picture showing Toltot unconscious in Khenal's office. which is three floors down from were he fell.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Charity's Journal 2nd Sandstone 97

That unicorn foal that moved here recently, has been possessed! But she doesn't seem violent. She's claimed a craftponies shop, and is running about collecting things. Everypony is staying out of her way, we don't want to hurt her if we don't have to.

In happier news, Sargent Carrot's wife, Kil, gave birth to her second child. A little earthpony filly. (Name is Kerlig)

Chartity's Journal 6th Sandstone 97

After breaching the caverns for the purpose of repairing Khenal's ceiling, we have decided to not entirely reseal the caverns. We will put a drawbridge up, for if we need to change that decision, but for now, we will alternate shifts between the two militia squads at keeping watch at the entrance. The squad not on duty will be training. This will allow us access to a bounty of cave spider silk, and a source of different types of woods, from what grows on the surface.

Addendum: Some migrants have arrived.

A male earthpony wood cutter and a female unicorn comedian (also, novice woodburner). Only those two. They arrived together but claim not to be together, or even to know each other as more than passing acquaintances.

7th Sandstone 97

I was awoken early this morning when our little possessed filly returned to normal. She doesn't remember doing anything, or any of the time that transpired but she does know that that crown she made is called, The Page of Crowds. It shows Bokbon doing some of her art and also depicts a Darkbolt brutalizing a rodent woman. I've heard it told that when the gods act through ponies to make items, that it is often to impart some wisdom, but I see none in this crown. It is beautiful though.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Charity's Journal 23rd Sandstone 97

Our reservoir is finished, the mayor's office has the lever to dis/enable the water flow, to keep it full. Now we just need to wait for the water level to rise.

2nd Timber 97

A number of amphibian men attacked some ponies in the caverns. The markspony squad made quick work of them. I'm told Sargent Carrot bashed one to death with his *honey badger bone crossbow*. It's easy to see why they call him Psycho Carrot.

3rd Timber 97
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/cobalt%20grows.png)

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New pony in game description!
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:04:29 am
Dear Diary, entry 4
Good news! Carrot seems to be happy again as his wife has given birth to a lovely cute baby foal!
Miss Charity has been very kind to us medical workers and built us a new reservoir of water after i told her about the muddy well water.
Bubbles
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 27, 2011, 09:38:35 am
Hey book! Mr. Toltot came in today.
He had a broken wing! I guess he can't go to the doctor hu.  There wasn't any krovvy on the outside so nopony noticed.  I took some plaster and stuff from the stockpile so we could put a cast on it.  He knew some doctor stuff, but I hope I didn't do anything wrong.  He didn't really flinch or anything. He said that this isn't the first time he had a wing broken.  Other diomedes didn't like the color of his coat, so they beat him up a lot.  I viddy why he moved here then. 
He said Mr. Enog was where he got hurt!  I hope he's OK too.  I'm sure he will be though.


I just saw Mr. Enog book.  He wasn't Ok. He asked me to tell his family he loves them. 
Still can't get that door open.  Stupid black vine things. Mr. Munest was there though, so he will look after him.  I'm glad I found him again.

-

Remember that unicorn filly I told you about before book?
Well something weird happen today while we were playing hide and sneak with Bubble (Ms. Ironya's son, not the doctor).  She's dubby-dobby at that game, so it takes us forever to find her.  Then I got the idea to use one of the spells Khenal taught me! It was a locator spell that makes a line to where the pony your trying to find is.  It was super hard and I didn't do it very dobby, so the line weaved all over the mesto. Along the way, I govoreeted about when Mr. Bokbon made this great crown, that story of Toltot's brother and that vermin-cheena thing, and I tripped over some dirt root somepony left lying on the ground!  Eventualy, we found her, but she had a blank stare, and ran off saying she had to do something.  It was rude, but I guess she forgot to do her chores.  I do that sometimes too, so it's OK.

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Sweet Luna I love writing nadsat!  It Just feels... good, you know?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 09:42:04 am
Dear Diary, entry 5
I will have to reveal my secret soon to miss Charity, she seems to understand it.
I can use magic.
Khenal and Miss Charity as the only others i know here, aside from that strange foal.
I'm going to tell her straight away, so maybe she can help me control my gift.
Bubbles
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Thats right, i just forced you all to teach me magic and roleplay XD
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 27, 2011, 10:08:53 am
Thats right, i just forced you all to teach me magic and roleplay XD

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Dr. Bubbles (hehe, I like his nickname) took me to his cantora today book.  He said he wanted to show me something secret.  I almost ran away right them, but he said it wasn't the bad thing daddy warned me about. 
He said he could do magic.  I didn't believe him.
He started to try to levitate a bowl of water off a table.  He took a long time, and I was a bit sleepy even with all his grunting. When I took a big yawn, he started yelling "Look look I did it Look!" but when I looked back, there was just the bowl upside down on his head and he was all wet. I  govoreeted that It was amazing, but I remember when an earthpony trader showed us the same trick.  He even had the same malenky flash of light from some powder too.  It was a dobby trick though, I liked it.

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 tee-hee :P

Edit: just to clarify, he can actually do magic, but nopony believes him!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 27, 2011, 10:46:43 am
Charity's Journal

Doctor Bubbles visited me, in my office, today. I think he was drunk. Kept going on about he can use magic. An earthpony, doing magic, it was all I could do to keep myself from laughing him out of my office. He was asking me to teach him to use his powers. He saw I didn't believe him and did a few simple magic tricks, you know the kinds earth pony and pegasi foal entertainers do, and tried to pass them off as genuine magic. Realizing he wouldn't leave without an answer, I told him to take it up with Khenal, or one of the other Unicorns. I told him the truth, I don't believe his nonsense, and even if I did, I don't have the training to tutor anyone in more than the very basics, nor do I have the time or inclination to do even that.

Anyway, I'm revoking his booze privilages for the next week. Lucky for him we just got the clean water well set up, or he'd be drinking mud.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 10:48:01 am
Lol
You guys are making me look bad.
VERY BAD.
It's infuriating lol
Anyways will be back in about 8 hours, need to go hit the hay now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 02:05:25 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 39

Not much has been happening lately, my Book.  Friesden continues to give me the silent treatment.  Dr. Erok has been much more sociable lately, even earning the nickname "Dr. Bubbles" for his personality.  Venture and the other foals have picked up some odd slang from somewhere.  Part of the new aqueduct collapsed through three floors and into my office.

Oh wait, that qualifies.

Two ponies were caught in the chaos of the collapse: Toltot, the odd pegasus, and Enog, one of the farmers.  Poor Enog didn't survive his fall, but Toltot looks like he escaped without a scratch.  I'm lucky I wasn't in my office, I likely would have fared as well as Enog.


Chapter 40

Dr Bubbles surprised me in my office today, claiming to be able to do magic as an earth pony.  Most ponies don't know it, but earth ponies do actually have some magic.  It's mostly subtle things, like their farming ability.  I even have a book that talks about it here somewhere.  Anyway, he tried to show me a few tricks of his, looking almost desperate that I'd believe him.  When I said I did, he looked ready to explode with happiness.  He asked me to teach him how to work magic, and I told him I'd try, but Earth Pony Magic is different from Alicorn Magic, which is different from Pegasus and Unicorn Magic as well.

Some of the principles are the same, though.  It requires focus and discipline.  I told him to gather a pot with soil, and he'd know where to get the soil he needs, and a seed.  Plant it and focus on it for at least an hour each day, and come tell me when it bears fruit.

That should be a good exercise for him while I learn more about how Earth Pony Magic works.

**************

Spoiler: It's Dr. Bubbles! (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on October 27, 2011, 02:57:07 pm
Hehe, this is really picking up and getting interesting.
Khenal, for the pony creator when it says ponytail I usually use on of the braided styles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 03:07:47 pm
Dear Diary, Entry no.2
Carrot seems to be writing in his journal. I hope he's alright. I think i should read it to be sure what his problem is.
Bubbles
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OOC: Would you let me read your journal The Master?
go ahead! :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 03:32:24 pm
Hehe, this is really picking up and getting interesting.
Khenal, for the pony creator when it says ponytail I usually use on of the braided styles.

Ya, I was considering that, but decided on the top-knot style since he's a stallion.  And I liked the immage of a pony with a literal pony tail style :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 03:48:38 pm
Friesden's Diary

Hello? Can anyone hear me or read this? I am Friesden


Friesden's New Diary

Conventional wisdom says only a unicorn can suicide.

I think I'll test this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 03:51:23 pm
Journal of Psycho Carrot: entry three

A CHILD! Things appear to be looking up! Well, they were, until I saw khenal's journal...

Quote
Hmm, if a single word can break her, can another word build her back up?  I'm going to try something very risky, my Book.  I'll need to be careful and absolutely sure it doesn't look like it's from me.  I'm going to sneak a charcoal stick into her cell so she can write without picking her wounds, and it's going to have it's own note and word: Hope.

I WAS RIGHT, HE DID CAUSE ME TO GO BERSERK, AND NOW HE WANTS TO MESMERIZE FRIESDEN AGAIN?! No, never again shall we fear the crazy doctor's dark magic. I shall put an end to this. I'm going to be waiting by friesden's cell, and I'll ambush and KILL khenal. Tonight, there will be blood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 04:16:48 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 41

Sergent Carrot helped me to get my office back into shape after the collapse the other day.  I think I'll actually miss the view of the caverns after the hole is patched.  I was moving the files on Friesden when I tripped over a bit of rubble and spilled the whole thing.  When I picked up her diary, I noticed something new: A new entry.  What the hay?

Before I could consider it further, though, Sergent Carrot dropped something of his own.  He just gave me a sheepish look and we returned to cleaning my office.  He left rather hastily once we were finished, though.  I'd wonder if anything is wrong, but he's always been a bit high strung. 

I've had time to think on Friesden's diary, though.  It's a bit of a long shot, but I have an idea.


Friesden's Diary

Hello?  Friesden?

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 04:21:59 pm
Friesden's Diary

Yes? Who is it? Please, you've got to help me!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 04:39:24 pm
Friesden's Diary

Friesden!  It really is you!  What's happening?  How can I help you?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 04:43:29 pm
Friesden's Diary

I don't know! It's dark and I can't see anything! Please, you've got to find a way to help me here!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 04:52:51 pm
Friesden's Diary

What's the last thing you remember?  Anything could help, I need information.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 05:15:20 pm
"Heheh...Well well well...look who it is."
((WAIT...are you pulling a harry potter: chamber of secrets?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 05:25:22 pm
I dunno, but now I have hilarious images of ponified Harry, Ron, Harmoine (or however it's spelled) and everyone running around in my head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 05:35:19 pm
"Lemme see that book you have there..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 05:42:09 pm
Not good.  I look up from Friesden's Diary to see Sergent Carrot giving me this...unhinged look.

"Sorry Carrot, a little busy right now.  Maybe we can talk later?"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 05:55:57 pm
"Is it me, or is that friesden's book? Are you HIDING something...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 06:07:16 pm
I give him my best flat look, at least I hope I do.  I'm not the best liar.

"It's a book.  Evidence.  I'm just making sure I haven't missed anything."

That's a good excuse, right?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 06:10:17 pm
Dear Diary, entry 6.
I told 3 ponies aboout my magical abilities. Miss Charity was laughing at me, the foal (God dammit I can't remember her name tyler) looked like she'd seen it eery other day, but Khenal actually believed me and told me Earth Ponies have their own branch of magic as well!
I noticed Psycho Carrot left his diary/journal here in the medical ward. I'll bring it to Khenal so he can try and figure it out.
Wait...WHY IS IT PULSING AND GLOWING?
Bubbles
((hehehehehehe. I kinda get the feeling i'm messing everything up.
If nopony gets it, i'm saying a mystical copy of your journal is here, the master.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 06:38:02 pm
I give him my best flat look, at least I hope I do.  I'm not the best liar.

"It's a book.  Evidence.  I'm just making sure I haven't missed anything."

That's a good excuse, right?
"Uh huh. Sure, now I'll ask again, WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH FRIESDEN'S PERSONAL DAIRY?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 06:44:06 pm
Definitely not good.

"Sergent Carrot!  You will maintain a civil tone with me or you will leave; by your own power or my own!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 06:45:03 pm
Uhhh... Hello! Khenal and Sergeant Carrot! I just came to show Khenal something...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 06:49:06 pm
"NO! I KNOW EXACTLY WHAT'S GOING ON! I READ YOUR JOURNAL, YOU WANT TO CONTROL FRIESDEN! I WON'T- "
turns to bubbles
"NOT NOW!!! IF YOU WANT TO HELP, RESTRAIN KHENAL!"
Turns back to Khenal
"THIS ENDS NOW!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 06:50:33 pm
((Bubbles' thoughts))
Why do i suddenly feel a surge of power...Could this be magic??!!
"Sergeant Carrot! Restrain yourself, or face the consequences!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 06:53:53 pm
"If you won't listen to me...I have no other choice than to..."
Grabs a sharp object
"KILL THE PONY RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS MADNESS!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 06:55:37 pm
((Thoughts))
I feel a primordial burst of rage coming towards my hooves. I must stop Carrot, or who knows what will happen to him.
"Sergeant Carrot, this is your last warning!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 06:58:18 pm
Scrapes at the ground, ready to charge
"ON GUARD YOU SON OF A DWARF!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 06:59:42 pm
And we had just cleaned this place up, too.  I stand from my desk and stare at Carrot, unblinking.

"Sorry."

My horn glows brightly, signaling my arcane intentions.  With a flash, his weapon is gone, teleported to the armory.  If that presence is back, it will not be armed.  A second flash has the same sleep spell I used on Friesden drape itself about Carrot's mind.


*************

Now to see if that sleep spell will stick ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:00:25 pm
"How...HOW DARE YOU?!"
*BOOM*
((thoughts))
That was a quite massive blast. I wonder what it did to him...?


God damnit khenal
You ninja'd me lol
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 07:03:10 pm
The captain is busy sorting through the arms ledger in the armory, when a fine silver letter opener materializes inches from his nose, landing point-down in the desktop and neatly cleaving through the stack of papers he was reading.

"What the clop?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:05:38 pm
((Well, it looks like that was useless))
I wonder if the letter was delivered...hmmm
It should explain everything to the Captain.
"Khenal. Should i take him back and restrain him in a traction bench?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 07:05:44 pm
I collapse, unconscious, but I begin talking in a harsh, demonic voice.
"NO...YOU CAN'T DO THIS! I NEED HIM AWAKE! WAKE HIM UP NOW! I CAN'T KILL YOU IF THIS VESSEL IS NOT AWAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:07:31 pm
Why thank you the master for giving me a purpose again
The magic is flowing within me...I can feel it! Maybe i should try growing plants to shut his mouth...
"How about we stop you from talking?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 07:09:48 pm
...Not good is nowhere near severe enough.

"A traction bench wont do for this.  We need a piece of adamantine, it's the only thing that can truely bind something like this.  Raw, refined, or worked into shape, it doesn't matter.  Fetch a piece!  I will restrain him here"

I hope
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:11:05 pm
Suddenly, a strip of adamantine burst from the ground and covers Carrot's mouth.
"Umm...Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 07:12:38 pm
My eyes don't open, but you can see a faint red glow coming from my eyelids, terrifying khenal as she realizes the threat.
"If one body tires, another shall take it's place."
A bright red mist flows out of the body and begins to drift in the direction of khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:13:41 pm
((Are you guys all watching the thread? I'm playing pony fortress and i immediately get a email every 5 seconds about a new reply lol
The master, you're just giving me more and more opportunities for magic XD))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 07:16:08 pm
((Are you guys all watching the thread? I'm playing pony fortress and i immediately get a email every 5 seconds about a new reply
((nope, I just enjoy this thread so much that I keep refreshing the page.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:18:20 pm
What is that red mist floating towards Khenal..? I must stop it! What though, could do it?!

"KHENAL! WATCH OUT!"
A burst of light explodes from my hooves, vaporizing the red mist.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 07:20:17 pm
"No new body, deamon, but you can have this shiny new vessel.  Teal is your color"

My horn blazes white hot as the adamantine flies up, forming into a small sphere.  The red mist is drawn into it as the walls shake with unearthly screams.  They quiet as the mist drains into the sphere, eventually fading entirely once the mist is gone.

"Try not to exert yourself like that, Doctor.  Unfocused magic can be very dangerous.  And try to remember these events.  I will not"

I then pass out.

**************

Oh, also: Khenal is a guy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:21:24 pm
Quickly! I must get Khenal to the hospital!
I pick up Khenal and bring him to the hospital with all possible haste.

((Please don't be over, roleplay! this is still fun. Maybe Khenal could make a sudden recovery.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 07:29:36 pm
Left alone on the ground, the red glow continues to glow in the eyes of Psycho, but a lot less bright. What little of the demonic force controlling Psycho left hides away deep in his mind. I slowly get off the ground, wonder how I got here, and trot back to the barracks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:30:41 pm
"Carrot! Come with me please."
After bringing Khenal to the hospital, i must discuss this with Miss Charity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 07:33:58 pm
After determining that the blade is in fact real, Starkey goes to report the incident to Miss Charity. More wierd sorcery can't be a good sign.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 07:34:15 pm
"Sure. Say...Can you do me a favor?"
a flash of blood red appears in my eyes, but disappear just as quickly
"Wow...my head hurts...whoa, never mind..."
I follow doctor bubbles to where ever he plans to lead me to.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:35:38 pm
"Carrot, help me get Khenal to the hospital. You both have memory loss, and Khenal has been knocked out. I don't know why.
Captain! could you come with me please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 07:39:23 pm
Another flash of blood red appears just long enough for bubbles to notice it, then vanishes again
"Sure...gah! I feel ...a bit quee...queee....oh dear...."
I vomit up blood then pass out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 07:40:20 pm
"D-Doctor? What's going on here? What happened to these two ponies?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:42:11 pm
"Captain Starkey! Did you see that blood red in his eyes? Help me get him to the hospital now!".
They were working on fixing Khenal's office up. Khenal said that a daemon had taken over Carrot's body. He banished it with magic and he passed out. I think there's still a little of the daemon inside Carrot, so we must get him to the hospital now! We can discuss this later!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 07:45:42 pm
Starkey lifts Carrot onto his back and follows Dr. Bubbles

"Daemons... Carrot... a clopping assassin... Fine bloody day this is turning out to be."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:46:33 pm
"Assassin? What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 07:47:19 pm
I vomit up more blood, this time a larger amount. You both realize that carrot doesn't have much time left.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 07:49:05 pm
He pulls the letter opener from his belt

"Somepony tried to off me just now! He tried to use his magic to send this blade straight through my throat. Thank Kulet the bastard missed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:49:29 pm
"Here! Inside this door, now!
Carrot doesn't have much time left!
Doctor Allen! Help me stop Carrot from coughing up blood! He may need a transfusion!
Captain, bring Khenal over to that bed.
Captain, i believe that blade wasn't from an assassin. Khenal magicked it back to the armory after the daemon tried to kill him with it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 07:52:53 pm
daemon
((it's spelled demon))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:53:41 pm
daemon
((it's spelled demon))

I mean the other one lol. We didn't exactly breach HFS yet, did we? Daemon is what i'll call it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 07:54:09 pm
"Aye, done."

He looks worriedly at Carrot. Crazy or not, he's one of his men.

"Is there anything else I can do, Doctor?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 07:55:57 pm
"Put him in that traction bench. We can't have the daemon re-taking control over him. Guard him while me and doctor Allen prepare the blood insertion. If he attempts to fight you, knock him out and call me."
lol I just realized that this is going to stay at the top of the board for community games FOREVER!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 08:00:12 pm
daemon
((it's spelled demon))

But daemon looks cooler :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:01:15 pm
2 hour awesome roleplay FTW
Khenal, maybe you could suddenly wake up and remember everything? Magic...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 08:01:49 pm
"As good as done, doc."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 08:02:37 pm
daemon
((it's spelled demon))

But daemon looks cooler :P

Daemon is the CORRECT spelling. It means a spirit.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:05:12 pm
Welcome back Dsarker
"Captain, could you go to Khenal's office and take anything of note in there? I'll need Doctor Friesden to help with this. Look and see if you can find her diary. One more thing. I can use magical telekinesis. Do not be alarmed if you hear something in your head."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 08:05:48 pm
I wake up, with fire in my eyes. The red is so bright that it lights up the room, almost blinding starkey
"I WILL KILL YOU ALL!" I scream in a deep, demonic voice!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:06:56 pm
"I'l vous, de haspere on couse."
Suddenly, a band of adamantine encircles Carrot.
I collapse to the floor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 08:08:28 pm
Friesden's Diary

I don't know! I'm so scared! Please, you've got to help me!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 08:09:55 pm
Ugh, my horn aches.  In fact, my everything aches.  Huh, yelling?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:10:24 pm
*BANG*
Friesden's diary appears next to me.
I look inside.
"Armok help me."
STARKEY! THERE IS ONLY ONE WAY OUT OF THIS! RELEASE FRIESDEN AND GET HER HERE, NOW!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 08:12:50 pm
the adamantine shatters into dust and the traction bench explodes
"THERE'S NOTHING YOU FILLIES CAN DO! YOU WILL ALL DIE!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:14:35 pm
A bang of thunder blast downwards.
Seemingly speaking, it says:
"DAEMON! STOP THIS MADNESS NOW! ARMOK COMMANDS YOU!"
((You ought to crumple and go back to normal now. This is the ultimate card XD))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 08:15:52 pm
A bang of thunder blast downwards.
Seemingly speaking, it says:
"DISCORD! STOP THIS MADNESS NOW! ARMOK COMMANDS YOU!"
((You ought to crumple and go back to normal now. This is the ultimate card XD))
((Oh come on, that's not fair and you know it!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 08:16:21 pm
Ech, a bit rough on the end.  Especially since this isn't discord, he's still a bit discorperated from that hammering, I would think.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 08:16:36 pm
Friesden's Diary

Hello? Is anypony there?

I'm frightened.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:17:10 pm
((You're not being fair and you know it. Breaking adamantine is impossible.))
Khenal you just beat me. Again.
Editing now...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 08:21:42 pm
((Armok has better things to do than worry about a rouge daemon. Your playing god.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 08:22:33 pm
Let's just get back to the roleplaying, shall we?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:26:08 pm
((Ok))
I picked up Friesden's diary and began to write, saying "Friesden? Is that you?"
"Starkey! Grab the military, we can't let this daemon destroy the fort!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 08:33:11 pm
Psycho twitches and convulses before vomiting up an unholy amount of blood, then my eyes fade very slowly back to their old color. At last, Psycho is free of the daemon for good.
"Guys...? Can you ever forgive me? I...*sobs* I am so sorry for trying to kill you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:34:12 pm
"It's okay, Carrot. Just get in that other traction bench so we can get you a blood transfusion."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 08:34:26 pm
Friesden's Diary

Who are you? Your voice is different to the other two's.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 08:35:09 pm
((Heh, I just had an idea))

Hah, the 'yelling-from-the-walls' trick works every time.  Discord isn't the only one who can play mind games.  Speaking of minds, time to lock this memory away as well.  A brief glow surrounds Khenal's horn.

"ooogghh, not so loud..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:35:36 pm
I continue writing in the book
"This is the new Chief Medical Pony, Bubbles. I can get you out of there Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 08:38:39 pm
I get onto the bench and pass out from all that is happened. Psycho hadn't slept like this in days as he hadn't slept at all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 08:39:30 pm
Friesden's Diary

Out of where? Did we get to the fortress yet?

Chief Medical Pony? Where are we? Why should I trust you?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:40:14 pm
Quickly, i inject the blood into Carrot. I notice that Khenal's horn is glowing. Concerned, i try to wake him up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 08:40:37 pm
"I... I have a feeling this isn't quite over yet. I'll get Miss Friesden, just in case."

Starkey leans over the waking Khenal, pulling the keys from his belt.

"Sorry lad, need to borrow these for a moment."

((Crap, you guys post so fast.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:42:04 pm
((Dsarker wtf? You seem to think we're not at the fortress yet lol))
"OK Starkey. Carrot seems to be back to normal. I'll get him back to you as soon as i can."
((It strikes me that King Strongbeard is going to have one heck of a time putting this into words.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 08:43:49 pm
I smile weakly, knowing that everything will be alright...or will it?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:44:14 pm
I smile weakly, knowing that everything will be alright...or will it?

((OH GOD DAMMIT DON'T CAUSE MORE TROUBLE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 08:45:30 pm
I smile weakly, knowing that everything will be alright...or will it?

((OH GOD DAMMIT DON'T CAUSE MORE TROUBLE!))
((Relax, I meant that the danger has passed for now. I'll wait until another time when you least expect it to cause trouble.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 08:46:10 pm
"Sure, whatever you need Commander..."

I open my eyes to see the chaos that the hospital has become.  Why does that feel familiar?  Friesden!

"Where is Friesden's Diary!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:47:42 pm
Hurriedly, i give Khenal the diary.
"Khenal! Tell Friesden that Starkey is going to let ((Him/her?)) out! She doesn't trust me, only you."
((have you guys realized that we've fill up 6 pages with only 3 hours of time?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 08:50:04 pm
Hurriedly, i give Khenal the diary.
"Khenal! Tell Friesden that Starkey is going to let ((Him/her?)) out! She doesn't trust me, only you."
((have you guys realized that we've fill up 6 pages with only 3 hours of time?))
((Meh, It's like this thread was waiting for me to give it adrenaline. oh, and friesden is a girl.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 08:50:11 pm
Friesden's Diary

Hello?

Am I dead? There's no light here. I can't see. Where are you? Please? I'll be good! No, don't! Don't don't don't don't don't!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 08:53:25 pm
Starkey enters Khenal's office.

"Miss Friesden? It's me, Captain Starkey. We talked, before, remember?

Listen Miss Friesden, something's happened in the hospital, and we might need your help. I'm going to take you there now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 08:54:16 pm
Friesden's Diary

It's me, Khenal.  I'm sorry, I'm in the hospital and I'm not sure why.  Please tell me, what's the last thing you remember before everything went black?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 08:54:42 pm
((It's up to you three now. Me and The master are out of this until you can get us involved again
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Hold on, Khenal, whats the last thing you can remember?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 08:57:12 pm
Friesden's Diary

I don't remember! Please! I'll be good. Don't make me go away! Please?

Please? I don't want to go!



"Hah. Remember you, yes I do. Honour, eh?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 09:04:27 pm
Friesden's Diary

That's...not good.  But don't loose hope, you'll get back to yourself, I promise!

"There is no honor in suicide, Dr. Friesden.  Suicide abandons those who care about you.  I can help you, Dr. Friesden, but only if you wish help.  Please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 09:08:13 pm
I struggle to talk and I studder alot
"Friesden...don't *cough* ugh...don't give up on life. What's the point in killing yourself...Armok won't be too happy, so it's not like you'll be welcomed there with a party...*cough*..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 09:11:09 pm
((Aren't you at the opposite end of the fortress from her?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 09:11:14 pm
"Honour. Pah. Hope. Pah. All fades. All dies. All decays. All loses."

Friesden's Diary


What? I am with myself! Where are you? I can't see you! It's all black in here. Help me, please! I'll be a good girl! I'll do anything, please, don't do it, dad! Dad! Please!

(The rest of the page fills with red marks.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 09:13:05 pm
OOC:woah woah woah, what? I'm confused now. Explain whats going on please. ??? ??? ???
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 09:16:43 pm
Khenal, I hope to Kulet you're in my head too. Whatever you're saying, it's just agitating her!

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 09:17:19 pm
Friesden (or not-Friesden) is trapped in the book, while Friesden (or not-Friesden) is talking to them in Khenal's office.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 09:21:07 pm
I speak into Starkey's mind
"Starkey, Khenal is writing inot friesden's diary And seems to be getting a response. What is the friesden over there saying?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 09:23:44 pm
... Doctor Bubbles?

She's babbling some nonsense about honor and death or something.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 09:24:12 pm
"Friesden!"

Not again!  Never again!  They never had this chance, but I've done the research, I can at least give her a chance at being whole again.

Friesden's Diary

Friesden, listen to me!  Do not give up hope!  Remember your friends, they give you strength.  If I could, I would take your place, but it's all up to you.  Please, be strong, my friend.  Things are about to get very scary, but you must come back to us!


My horn glows a soft green, belying the powerful magics now at work.  Some part of Friesden's consciousness is in her diary, and it must be reunited with her body.  The bridge is made, now Friesden must cross it and return to herself.  Then she must confront whatever or whoever is in her body now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 09:27:22 pm
"Friesden!"

Not again!  Never again!  They never had this chance, but I've done the research, I can at least give her a chance at being whole again.

Friesden's Diary

Friesden, listen to me!  Do not give up hope!  Remember your friends, they give you strength.  If I could, I would take your place, but it's all up to you.  Please, be strong, my friend.  Things are about to get very scary, but you must come back to us!


My horn glows a soft green, belying the powerful magics now at work.  Some part of Friesden's consciousness is in her diary, and it must be reunited with her body.  The bridge is made, now Friesden must cross it and return to herself.  Then she must confront whatever or whoever is in her body now.
Friesden's Diary

Who are you? I'm safe here. Father told me so. Where's mother? Have you seen her, Khenal-of-the-Faceless-Voice?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 09:33:15 pm
I wake up with no memory of the events that transpired. Perhaps, it's better that way.
"Ugh...I...ohhhhh my head...Did...did I miss something?!"
I begin to look around and notice the destruction of the hospital, the IV sticking out of my arm, and the fact that i'm strapped to a traction bench.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 09:39:17 pm
"Starkey! Tell Friesden that a bridge has been opened! She'll know what it means."
I notice that Khenal is channeling magic. Hurriedly, i transfer some of my energy to boost him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 09:40:34 pm
"M-miss Friesden? I think you ought to know... a bridge has been opened."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 09:42:35 pm
I attempt in vain to break free of the bench.
"Why is there nopony here..."
I begin to become worried about such simple things such as that, all the while something far more sinister was occurring in another wing of the fortress.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 09:42:43 pm
"Good! A chance to exterminate my lesser half..."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 09:44:19 pm
I release Carrot from the traction bench, but tell him to wait in my office.
I grab the diary from Khenal, and write to Friesden "Your other half awaits, you must defeat them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 09:45:24 pm
Maybe her consciousness isn't the only one in her Diary.


Friesden's Diary

I don't think I've had the pleasure of meeting your mother, Friesden.  Or, come to think of it, your father.  Could you tell me about him?

The bridge spell will last on it's own for now.  I need to probe the Diary, figure out if Friesden is alone in there.  Suddenly, the diary is snatched from my hooves.

"Hey!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 09:46:03 pm
CLOP! The daemon is trying to come through! This isn't going to work, CLOSE THE DAMNED BRIDGE!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 09:46:51 pm
"KHENAL! IT WON'T WORK! THE DAEMON IS TRYING TO COME THROUGH! CLOSE THE DAMNED BRIDGE!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 09:47:01 pm
Friesden's Diary

He doesn't like me talking to strangers. Who are you?

Mother! Mother!

I can hear her! Where is she?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 09:47:32 pm
I release Carrot from the traction bench, but tell him to wait in my office.
I grab the diary from Khenal, and write to Friesden "Your other half awaits, you must defeat them."

A look of utter confusion washes over my face
"Do I know you...? I feel like I should, but I can barely remember my name..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 09:48:33 pm
I give Khenal back the diary
"Your name is Psycho Carrot. Mine is Bubbles. Please wait in my office, first door on the right."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 09:51:58 pm
A glazed look comes across Friesden's eyes.
"She doesn't know pain yet.


She will now."

Friesden's Diary

(A red blotch appears over the page)


"She doesn't know evil. Now she will feel it."



Friesden's Diary

(A purple blotch appears, covering the red)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 09:52:16 pm
Psycho has amnesia, how convenient. It's severe enough that he is essentially a moron.
"Is it now. How funny...So, I'll just walk over here then...Oh, do you think you could teach me how to fly? I seem to have forgotten..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 09:54:14 pm
"Carrot, i'm afraid not. I don't have wings, see? Alot of others have them, and can teach you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 09:58:29 pm
A child-like look appears on Psycho, revealing just how severe the amnesia is
"When I grow up, I want to be a soldier!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 09:58:41 pm
"A daemon?!  The same trick won't work trice!"

Not on it or on me.  Daemons have a unique aura, once you know what to look for.  Once you do, it's not that complicated to siphon them from wherever they are, though it takes a lot of energy to do so.  I scour the Diary and, through the bridge, Friesden's body for all trace of daemon, pulling it into a tight vortex about my horn.

"Lets see how each of us fairs in a straight fight, Daemon!"

The red mist enters my horn
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 10:00:41 pm
"Psycho, you are a soldier and you are grown up." *shows him is crossbow* "you see this? This your weapon!"
*looks around*
"KHENAL!! BE CAREFUL! IF YOU NEED ASSISTANCE, JUST CALL!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 10:01:41 pm
"Oh! You think I'm a daemon... Haha! I'm Friesden. The part of her that...stopped...her father. That saved her mother. That nobody ever ignored. That nobody ever trusted. That nobody ever harmed again. I saved her. Now I'll destroy her to save her again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 10:08:23 pm
A look of utter bewilderment washes over my face
"I've never seen crossbow before, but it sure looks neat!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 10:08:51 pm
"She doesn't need the salvation you offer!  She has friends to rely on, to lean on, to help her!  You only offer a new cycle of pain!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 10:10:54 pm
"Oh, but she does. She wants me more than she wants you. And you know it...friend."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 27, 2011, 10:18:21 pm
((It's time I hit the hay. good night and good luck friends!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 10:23:03 pm
"I doubt that very much, fiend.  You seem very reluctant to let her speak for herself."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 27, 2011, 10:26:30 pm
"Oh, but I am her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 10:48:11 pm
"Perhaps partially, but I see very little of her in you.  You lack her compassion, and honestly, you don't seem as bright as she does."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 10:49:08 pm
((How....Interesting. I leave for a quick game of League of Legends, and I come back to see a mind duel.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 10:58:20 pm
Starkey has been listening to the exchange through the mental link.

'Wait, friend! She may be right. This isn't some 'other Friesden', they're two aspects of the same mare! Destroying this one could do irreparable harm to her other half!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 11:10:44 pm
"I know, this is her current dominant personality, and it seems intent on destroying both halves of Friesden.  It also seems to be under the false impression that it's the stronger personality, but I've read her Diary.  This Friesden considers ponies to simply be experiments in potentia, while the other Friesden actually has friends.  Still think you are powerful, fiend?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 27, 2011, 11:12:41 pm
"Starkey, that Friesden over there's personality is twisted. The only was to change it back is for Friesden to confront (him/her?)self."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 27, 2011, 11:32:37 pm
God's above! I'm out of it for a little while and everyone get's delusions of grandeur.

ansontan2000, an earthpony, with magic, (bad enough all ready) who can create and bend adamant, and use telepathy, without having had any training at all. Seriously, SERIOUSLY SERIOUSLY Did you really think that would add to the game. Yes, I'm mad, but I guess we'll have to roll with it. Also, a note, in the future, using the "booming voice from above" is not a cool move. Don't do it, if it's being faked somehow, then make that clear, at least in out of character notes. I realize that this has already been addressed by others, but I was unable to post at the time, and wanted to say it now.

A bit of retcon, the reason possessed Psycho Carrot could break the adamant bands that Bubbles made is that they were either, an illusion, or just magically dyed blue stone, not raw adamantine, as creating that is something only a powerful god could do.

Also, Khenal.
 
This Friesden considers ponies to simply be experiments in potentia, while the other Friesden actually has friends.  Still think you are powerful, fiend?"
are you about to pull a power of friendship overpowering of Friesden's dark half? Because I'm totally okay with that. Fits the source material at least.

Also, as we have already brought the gods into this more than I ever expected, Discord, filly Celestia, etc. I'm going to try and write a bit of history of them, that we can use as cannon for this fortress and it's world. In an attempt to keep everyone on the same page about what the celestial situation is. If everyone is okay with that. If not then we can leave it undefined, if the majority would rather it be left alone.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on October 27, 2011, 11:37:10 pm
Friends?! You think friendship is going to save her? you're mad! You'll kill her, You'll kill all of her! Khenal, listen to me, please! Stop this now, I'm begging you, for her sa-*the link is abruptly severed*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 27, 2011, 11:42:11 pm
Also, Khenal.
 
This Friesden considers ponies to simply be experiments in potentia, while the other Friesden actually has friends.  Still think you are powerful, fiend?"
are you about to pull a power of friendship overpowering of Friesden's dark half? Because I'm totally okay with that. Fits the source material at least.

I'm hoping for something along those lines, but it's Dsarker's character and his decision.  Either way, I doubt there will be a beam of rainbow magic to fix everything.  Though like I said, it's Dsarker's character :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 28, 2011, 12:20:43 am
Well, thank you for ending this madness.
Honestly, i can't even remember wtf got us descending into chaos like this.
Well, we'll just roll with your explanation of things.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 28, 2011, 02:31:47 am
"Oh, you think so, eh? Why don't you ask her who her friends are, eh? Does she know what friends are? Haha!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 28, 2011, 04:20:49 am
"I will ask her then.  Friesden, can you hear me?  Do you remember me?  Do you remember your friends?  You can fight her, Friesden, just remember your friends and the strength they give you.  Remember the hope they give you.  Remember the hope you give us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 28, 2011, 04:30:36 am
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Friendship%20cannon%20chargeing%21.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 28, 2011, 04:38:24 am
"Who...who are you? Are you one of dad's friends? Please..please don't hurt me. Please! I'll do anything! Please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 28, 2011, 10:56:27 am
"I would never hurt you, Friesden.  I am not one of your father's friends, but I would like to be yours.  Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 28, 2011, 05:47:24 pm
my stomach growls so I ask
"Hey...Can I have a cake? I'm hungry!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 29, 2011, 12:42:43 am
"No...no...I can't. Dad will be angry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 29, 2011, 01:12:58 am
"Would he really be so upset to see you happy?  And even if he is, we can face him together.  You don't have to be alone any more."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 29, 2011, 01:14:06 am
((i'm not coming into this one, i'm just watching.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 29, 2011, 01:14:43 am
((I'm going to bed...*yaaaaaaawn*))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 29, 2011, 02:54:08 am
Bubbles lay in bed, resting. He was very tired over the days events. The burst of magic he had used seemed to be a one time only use, and he could no longer feel it coursing through her veins. However, he felt triumphant that he had succeeded, surely this was a sign from Armok himself!

((Hows that for a anticlimactic ending? If you guys still think this is not right, just tell me, so i can change it.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 29, 2011, 05:33:40 am
"Dad...dad doesn't like me talking to strangers. He'll get angry. Where's mum? MUM!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 29, 2011, 10:35:14 am
As no one has objected I will write a bit about the gods and where Glitterglen fits into the show's cannon. As will be clear in the following bit, we are currently in the time before Equestria existed. Discord is free and powerful, the sisters have not yet imprisoned him in stone, and naturally Nightmare Moon's rebellion has not yet occurred. The following is what the ponies of the Shells of Dance, have been told. It's may not be 100% true, but it is what their religion teaches. Okay, lets get started.

"In the beginning, there was chaos. No light no dark, no up, and no down, and all of these things together. When after many Eons, for unknown reasons the singular chaotic mass of the universe divided. Into light and dark. From this divergence was born Celestia of the Light, and Luna of the Dark. The sister goddesses. For a long time the sister's played together, but eventually, they grew lonely, and so they divided the light and the dark a second time to create the 6 elements of Harmony (laughter, honesty, loyalty, generosity, kindness and magic). However, the creation of these six elements had an unintended consequence. By creating these elements they unwittingly created the opposing forces. For Laughter can not exist without sadness, honesty can not exist with deception, loyalty without dishonor, generosity without selfishness, kindness without cruelty, and magic without chaos, none of these things can be without the opposite.

So as the sister's worked, creating the lesser gods that the religions of the world pay worship to and those lesser gods then created all of the ten thousand things in their paradise, the six elements of discord through some unknown malice, formed their own champion, the being we know simply as Discord. Discord could not stand the utopia created by the sisters and the other gods.

Discord's first action, was the transformation of the world of the sister's into Slade, a dark terrible stone filled with his malice, and to corrupt all of the Princesses' servent's into the horrible beings we call Demons. The sister's and their children the gods and goddesses where outraged, they banished Discord and sealed his abominations beneath the great magma sea, and underneath the goddesses gift, the blue metal, Adamantine, so strong, and so charged with the elements of harmony that, not even Discord could undo it.

Though the gods had banished Discord, they were not powerful enough to truly control him, and his initial failure had taught him one thing, he must be subtle in his work, he could not hope to destroy their work all at once but only through slow meticulous corruption from the inside out could it be done. And so Discord returned, apologetic and offered to help the gods recreate that which he had destroyed, and so he works with them, sowing his chaotic magics into their design, and creating his own things, from Discord comes all the foul, twisted, and wicked things in the world, the Diomedians, the Titan's, and the forgotten beasts below all bare his mark."


Well I'm not really happy with it. Looks like poorly written fan-fiction to me, but I guess it'll do. I might add to or alter it later, if I feel inspired to do so.

Since our latest break out of RP seems to have died down I will now include Charity's reaction to the events below.

Charity finished reading the paper in front of her and before lightly dropping Commander Starkey's report on the table next to Captian Khenal's. Her hoof was placed soundly in front of her face for several seconds. She then looked up at the two ponies sitting across from her.

 "Commander, Captain, I can hardly believe these reports. Were it any other ponies telling me these things I wouldn't believe them. But, to get to the reason I called you both here, is it turns out Bubbles wasn't lying, when he claimed to have some magic. I feel that this might be a dangerous sign. I direct your memory to the madness that broke out several months ago. During the time that Friesden tried to end herself, madness was erupting throughout Glitterglen, one such example was that we had multiple sightings of an unusual earthpony, FLYING, in the dinning hall. Here is an artist's sketch of the creature."

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

"Bubbles strange powers make him the second unusual pony to be seen in a very short time. I fear the two may be related. Khenal, I want the guard investigating Bubbles. I don't trust him, he might be being influenced by the same force that's been acting on Friesden, and Carrot. Naturally, the fact that he is being placed under suspicion must be kept secret from the general population. And Starkey, as Sargent Carrot's CO you should go and tell his wife Kil about his memory loss. I don't know what induced his amnesia, but it might help him remember himself if he were see his wife and foals."


OOC: Nothing personal ansontan, I just remembered that I briefly mentioned sightings of Screwball before, you did any magic at all, and thus this just seems the most sensible reaction for Charity to have, to another magic earthpony. Although maybe you are being influenced by something? I don't know, it's your character and it's up to you. But it certainly does look that way from the outside.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 29, 2011, 12:24:56 pm
"Then let us be friends instead of strangers, and search for your mother together."



*********

I like the ancient history, Strongbeard.  Sure it's fan fiction, even crossover fan fiction :P, but it's not bad.  It supports most everything that's been hinted at so far, and now everyone will at least have a common base for any mythical shenanigans we get up to :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Theropod Watcher on October 29, 2011, 01:43:05 pm
Finally, a little order in here. The Master and Ansontan jumped in so fast to an already overcomplicated mental mess. Furthermore, we had stable understandable characters and stories here, now I have absolutely no freakin' idea what has happened the past 15 pages.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on October 29, 2011, 02:05:14 pm
That's real horrorshow (super good) Strongbeard, I like it!  I have another one to throw out there.  One that ties the DF universe with the my little pony universe.  I don't have a creation tale written, but you could take it as the world from the gods prospective of things.


The basic premise is that of the creation story on the DF wiiki (http://df.magmawiki.com/index.php/DF2010:Adamantine scroll to the bottom).  Here's the short version:
The gods want to build a world, but need a source of energy to do so.  The Demons already figured out how to build a world out of slade and for the most part were chillin like villains on said world(s).  The gods had beef with the demons some some reason so they covered there world in molten hot MAGMA.  This understandably pissed the demons off and they attacked the rock, only managing to make it hotter and allowing the gods to do there thang. Eventually they add adamantine to stop the occasional demon from fucking there shit up too often...   and rinse and repeat till you get a multiverse of a million billion gods and worlds.

Now, my part (also some strongbeard):

The big cheese of the multiverse is ARMOK. Spell it all capital because he's a boss. He was the dude that figured out all of the above and was pretty much the defacto ruler of all gods because he was such a bad ass.  He also dose this thing were he destroys and remakes worlds when they get boring but whatever.  Well even gods have needs and eventually this guy falls head over heels for another goddess.  Her name was Faust (see what I did there) and surprisingly, she was not some beautiful love goddess or some craven lust goddess, but some minor deity of horses and art for a tiny human coastal nation on some no name world. Love conquers all.
Cellestia and Luna were both created in the way described by king . I said they had needs, I didn't say they made sense to mortals.  Also like strongbeard said, they were having a hell of a time in the void.  Eventually, the old man got sick of there nonsense, making all sorts of elements and messing around with all sorts magic and spawning trickster gods of chaos (hey we all experimented once in collage), but the big thing that set him off was that they had the audacity to say they knew a better way to build worlds!
The sisters figured they could build an magic imbued anti-Slade that could function as a power source for world forging.  ARMOK was quick to point out that not only would this words foundation be unstable, but the end result would also have to be insanely micromanaged!  You'd have to shake the leaves of the damned trees yourself because all the bloody earth and nature magic would be used to keep the thing from tearing itself apart! 
However, the girls were persistent and ARMOK had it up too hear with there shenanigans and decided to teach them how the real mutivers works.  He destroyed there prototype paradise, forged a REAL world, and had them and there little pantheon rule over it's mortals in PROPER god fashion, none of this waking around amongst them helping garbage.  He figured that in time, she would grow out of this 'paradise' thing and move on with here eternity like everydeity else.
Also, he posted Discord there to keep an eye on things and report back to him, not to mention to do what he dose best to show his daughters how hard being a god truly is, and... because he was feeling too lazy to actually destroy him at the moment.  He is a bit of a dick about keeping it a secret, but then he's a bit of a dick about everything. 

What do you think?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 29, 2011, 02:10:21 pm
((perfection as always!))
I hop around, laughing of no reason at all
"WHEEE! This is fun!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 29, 2011, 05:20:08 pm
"No... no, I can't. Dad will be angry. Please.. Just go away... Please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 29, 2011, 06:19:17 pm
I like it thetyler. I had in my head already imagined ARMOK being the "The big cheese of the multiverse" but decided against including him in my background story, as I imagined him being to distant to be mentioned in the pony's religion. Actually, in my original idea, I had a being called The Toady One, separating everything into an infinite number of universes, creating the multiverse and then ARMOK was one of an infinite number of beings who controlled sections of the multiverse. But I dropped that idea because I felt it had to many steps. Toady creates Armok, who creates the sisters, who create the gods, who create the world.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 29, 2011, 07:39:05 pm
Still not too sure about my character. I've got no idea whether she was abused as a child and created her better half to defend her, and that's her talking now, or whether she wasn't and she's manipulating you all, or whether she was and her better half is still dominating, or whether her dominant half is the one speaking and none of it happened.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 29, 2011, 08:44:51 pm
dsarker, now you're really confusing me.

Diary entry 7.
Dear Diary,
Miss Charity has posted guards with me. She is obviously worried about my magic. However, one of them noticed during the day that white smoke is flowing out of my mouth.
While recording medical information, I have found that we're almost out of plaster powder. I've got to tell Miss Charity.

OOC: Khenal and starkey DON'T know what happened inside the office. Khenal did say "Try to remember this, doctor. I certainly won't"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 29, 2011, 11:59:45 pm
I stop hopping to talk to Khenal
"Hi! My name is Psycho Carrot! What's yours?!" I ask excitedly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 04:10:23 am
((Unless I'm misunderstanding things, and I certainly could be, I'm still in Friesden's mind.  Well, mentally anyway.  Carrot is likely to be absolutely ignored by Khenal right now.))

"Please, Friesden, I just want to help you.  If your father wants to hurt you, he'll have to go through me first."


********

As far as Friesden's true character, it seems a longshot for her to be manipulating everyone at this point.  The schism of personalities in her Diary would take a schemer of the highest caliber to even put to paper.  After all, it's her diary, for her eyes only.  The words of meek Friesden appearing in her Diary suggests magic, and Friesden is no alicorn or unicorn.  She theoretically could have a magical accomplice, but that seems a bit out of left field.  You could still pull off the schemer, but this level of schemer is very difficult to write, especially with multiple people writing their stories as well.

I will say this, though: You are at the crossroads for your character.  If she's a schemer, this could be her opportunity to avoid punishment for her crime by blaming it on her "darker half."  Khenal is too much of an idealist to allow "meek Friesden" to take the punishment that her dark side deserves.  She'll be free to continue her experiments, but will need to be extra careful; it's unlikely she could fake her way out a second time.  If she really does have a schism of personalities, and the dark side wins, she'll get to face the full punishment of the law.  If her good side wins this encounter, she'll likely get off punishment, but have to deal with the shadow of her darker side waiting for her to slip again.

Or you could think of something totally different and completely awesome.  Like I keep saying, she's your character.  I can give ideas and try to inspire, but you decide how she really will be. :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 30, 2011, 04:33:44 am
Where did Dsarker go?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 04:36:58 am
I'm right here.

"Please... Please, you've got to leave."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 04:44:38 am
"And leave you alone?  I...I've given up too soon on ponies before.  I've let them face danger alone when I should have done something to help them.  Please Friesden, let me help you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 30, 2011, 04:45:28 am
Khenal, i was about to post there saying we're waiting on you. Ninja'd
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 04:50:19 am
"I.. I can't. Dad... Dad wouldn't let me... Please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 04:59:04 am
"He can't hurt you unless you let him, Friesden.  You aren't alone any more, you can stand up to him!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 05:02:12 am
"I...I can't. I can't! I can't!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 05:08:21 am
"You can!  Your friends will give you the strength to stand up and more, you just need to accept them!  Your true friends, not that darker side of you, are the truest strength you can ever hope to have!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 05:11:32 am
"I don't know what friends are! Mum! Mum!"

A darker tinge fills the voice.

"Yes, my girl?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 30, 2011, 05:20:49 am
((Wow...Creepy.
How is Khenal going to overcome THIS?
I look forward to your next posts.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 05:27:10 am
Bad, very bad.  Do I dare interrupt her?


Do I dare to leave her at the mercy of this side of her?


"Pardon me, madam, my name is Khenal.  Are you Friesden's mother?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 05:28:31 am
"Near enough, dearie. What are you doing with my lesser half?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 05:36:13 am
Dearie?  Is this her darker half again, or somepony new?

"We were talking about friendship, it seems she's had little opportunity to experience it.  I've been trying my best to explain it, but she's rather nervous about what her father would think."


***********

Is that the voice of the darker Friesden that I've heard before?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 30, 2011, 05:50:25 am
((I have no idea. What Dsarker has done here i would never have foreseen.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 05:52:06 am
I was thinking it was different

"Well, dearie, it's her father, you see. I'm sorry, I can't talk about it more. You're the second pony to talk to me, besides her. Recently, I mean. You see, dearie," she leans close, "I'm dead."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 06:01:39 am
I raise an eyebrow at hearing such a frank admission, especially this one.  'At least it's not her darker side.'

"Um...I'm sorry to hear that, it sounds like you were very important to her.  Can you help me explain friendship to her?  She's very hurt right now, and I'm afraid of what may happen if she has to continue on alone."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 06:23:59 am
"Friends? Sorry, dearie, you'll have to forgive an old lady...what are 'friends?' I would like to help her. I couldn't bear a grudge towards my child."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 06:42:29 am
No, do not facehoof.  You do not facehoof when talking to the kindly ghost of sompony whose daughter really needs help.

"Um, where to begin?  You want to help her and don't bear a grudge against her, that's part of friendship there.  Friends want to see each other happy, and are there to console each other when they are sad.  They make the good times great and make the worst times better.  They are a calming voice in burning anger, and an encouragement when you're not sure you can go on.  Friendship makes anything possible, and is perhaps the greatest force for good that ponies have access to."


***********

I just wanted to say that while using spell-check for eachother, one of the potential corrections was "psychotherapy", which I found hilarious.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 06:47:01 am
"Well, at least I don't think I bear a grudge, dearie. But I don't really know. Dearie, I'm not her real mother, do you understand? I'm a memory. She doesn't think I'd bear a grudge against her, so I don't. But I can't tell you something she doesn't know. Maybe I did feel a grudge. I'm sorry I can't help you more, dearie."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 06:51:38 am
"Can you tell me why she might think you would have any reason to bear her a grudge?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 30, 2011, 06:54:29 am
Don't mind me. Just posting some things. Please continue on with your conversation.

Charity's Journal 5th Timber 97

As I write this Thundersplinter is in the processes of moving her possessions into her new room in the wooden tower. Her new room is one floor above her private carpentry shop. I understand her desire to live up their, but I hope she won't forget to come down to visit the rest of us occasionally.

Charity's Journal 12th Timber 97

The forest is teeming with parasprites. They're harassing our woodcutters.

Our ranger's have just informed me that a cave pony caravan has been spotted just over the hill. Best start moving our goods to the Trade Depot.

Charity's Secret Journal 13th Timber 97

I know I shouldn't laugh at this, but well... The Marks pony squad was sent up to the walls to watch for the cave pony caravan. While they were sitting there, bored and taking the occasional shot at a passing parasprite. One of the little buggers decided to fight back. It rammed Tecak three times. Bruising his wings and chest, knocked the wind right out of him (bruised lungs). He probably could have avoided the blow better one of his legs wasn't still in a cast, but still to see a full grown pony have the crap beat out of him by a parasprite, is just too funny. Of course he then shot the thing twice pinning it to the wall with a pair of bolts.

Charity's Secret Journal 27th Timber 97

Cryptson's adopted another kitten. He named it etol.

Also, I noticed Peytrel polishing his axe in the dinning area earlier, not worth mentioning in itself, but I think I heard him talking to it, think he called it his baby.
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Peytrel%27s%20axe.png)


Charity's Journal 1st Moonstone 97

Winter has officially arrived on the calender, and our deadline for the offering to the Princess is drawing near. I've ordered the production of several more crafts to be made including electrum goblets, clear glass glasses, sterling silver and brass instruments, yarn robes, and cloth dresses, all decorated with gems of every color, and hoofworked bone, horn, and shell. Hopefully we will meet the deadline. I wouldn't worry, but we did trade more than we probably should have to the cave ponies. All our craftponies are going to have to put in overtime to meet the production goal.


OOC: Yeah, I could use food to meet the self set goal of 10,000 without even trying or caring about the loss, but that's too easy. Of cource 10,000 is really low with any type of goods, assuming you can make a lot of them easily, I'll probably increase my set goal for next year.

Also, Venture is four years old, as of last in game month. Why do I mention that? Because Peytrel's only six. Yeah, we're a year or two away from Venture being a full grown pony. Have you given any thought to what he's going to do as a young adult?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 06:59:33 am
"Why, of course, dearie! The reason is that she killed me, of course. I don't blame her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 07:07:03 am
I really hope she only is blaming herself and didn't literally kill her own mother.

"I...find that hard to believe.  While she's seemed afraid of her father, she seems comforted by you.  Was there an accident?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 30, 2011, 07:07:16 am
I find you have not read my remark about there being little plaster powder (I had a hunch) *shrugs*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 07:11:43 am
There's a short chuckling. "Accident, dearie? The only accident was that she hadn't done so sooner. You see, what happened was that she grabbed a scalpel, and stuck it in my neck. Such an innocent, sweet looking child, no one ever suspected her. Her father got the blame."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 30, 2011, 07:12:49 am
OK, i'm really confused on how Khenal is going to get outta this mess.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 07:33:50 am
My eyes go wide with horror.  'No, that sounds like something the other Friesden would say.  Wait a minute.  Something the other Friesden said!'

" The part of her that...stopped...her father. That saved her mother."

"I...see.  You've also been talking with her darker side."

"Near enough, dearie. What are you doing with my lesser half?"

"I doubt even a memory of her mother would call her a lesser half.  Friesden, I hope you heard my brief description of friendship, because I forgot something:  Friends also forgive, even when we cannot forgive ourselves."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 07:42:32 am
"Oh, dearie. Did you believe you could trust any of us? The more you come by...the more you learn that each of us is as unworthy of trust as the others. First we have my little daughter, dearie - the sweet faced murderer. And saviour. Then there is me, the level headed one of the bunch - but is that true, or am I deceiving you? We have our daughter's twin, whom you have met.. Is she a daemon or really Friesden's protector? Then there are our wonderful other guests - Friesden the girl, who is as sweet as she could be...but as intelligent as a snail. Friesden the doctor, who wants to improve you no matter the cost. And each of these wants to be in control... How could they not? And if you want to save us, dearie, which ones will you save?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 07:55:53 am
"Ideally?  All of you deserve to be saved, even if there is a true daemon in there.  You've spread yourself so thin trying to be so many things, trying to find the comfort of friends while alone.  All you need to be is yourself, that's all friends need."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 08:03:31 am
"Which of us is ourself? Do you want the killer? The amoral? The brainless? The sadist? The memory?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 08:14:11 am
"I think you all are, and none of you are.  You have a great kindness, a drive for improvement, a desire to protect, a keen mind.  The facets I've seen all have at least some virtue, though several have become twisted mockeries of those same virtues.  Nopony is all good or all bad.  I've seen a lot of bad in you, Friesden, but I think there is even more good.  Embrace your virtues, and let your friends help you overcome your darkness."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 30, 2011, 08:17:31 am
"Again, dearie, I have to tell you that I don't know what friend means. None of us do...or do we?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 30, 2011, 08:21:35 am
I find you have not read my remark about there being little plaster powder (I had a hunch) *shrugs*
Oh, I'm sorry, I did read it, just forgot to write anything about it. And you guessed correctly, we had one bag of plaster powder but that was used up fixing Tecak's leg, so we are actually, completely out.

After Bubbles explains the lack of gypsum powered, for casts, to the Baroness. She replies, "Thank you Doctor, for informing me, however, as you are aware, there isn't any gypsum in jungle for us to make plaster from. If you need more splints than feel free to put in a request for some with the carpenters, however that's all we can do for now. I will, of course, put a request in for more gypsum powder on the next caravan, and I believe the one due to arrive next month will be carrying some. Is there anything else, Bubbles?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 08:29:52 am
"At least one of you has some inkling of what friends are, she came to the surface in your diary because of it.  I know there are many ponies who would be willing to help you learn as well, including myself.  I'd hardly claim to be an expert on the subject, but one of the best ways of learning is doing, wouldn't you agree?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 30, 2011, 08:41:46 am
"Yes. I have found a large amout of ponies to have severe injuries i lack the knowledge to treat. I request the purchase of medical instruction books."

((I bet you were expecting magic books.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 30, 2011, 09:03:00 am
Confound these ponies, they drive me to insomnia.  It's 7am and I should have been sleeping...a long time ago :P  I'll be back after sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 30, 2011, 09:09:16 am
I can't stop laughing about your predicament.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 30, 2011, 10:24:08 am
"Yes. I have found a large amout of ponies to have severe injuries i lack the knowledge to treat. I request the purchase of medical instruction books."

((I bet you were expecting magic books.))

"That is fine... You know I think I remember Ms. Friesden having a few books on anatomy when we first moved here. If they weren't in her old office,
(Bubble's office now) then they might be in her old room. You might want to look for them there. Better you take them then they just sit collecting dust. But, I'll make sure to place an order for some from the caravan, from the capital, and I'll let Bokbon (our unicorn broker/legendary bonecarver) know to keep an eye out for those sorts of books, when dealing with other merchants.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 30, 2011, 10:25:32 am
"Thank you. I'll be on me way, then!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 30, 2011, 02:27:43 pm
I hop over to Charity, smiling and acting like a child,
"Hi! I'm Psycho Carrot!! What's your name?!" I ask excitedly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 31, 2011, 01:35:18 am
A bemused expression floats across the unicorn's face.

"Uh Sargent Carrot. It's me, Charity. Overseer and mayor of Glitterglen. Remember? You've known me for over a year."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 02:07:37 am
"You think the praxis is more important than the mathema? Well, dearie, Friesden didn't become a doctor merely by going up to sick ponies and operating on them....hehe...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 31, 2011, 02:32:39 am
*I notice that miss Charity is talking to Carrot.*
"Erm, miss Charity, Sergeant Carrot appears to have a very powerful case of amnesia. It appears that he has forgotten almost everything he has experienced in his life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 03:03:21 am
"Of course not, but theory will only take you so far.  There are things that only a hands-on education will give, and much of friendship is learned by experience."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 03:35:26 am
"Do you want me to tell you want my little darling knows about friends so far? She knows they bring out the worst in ponies, the hate and violence. Not that she knows it by those terms, the innocent little sweetie, but she can feel it, dearie. Did you ever ask her why she killed me, dear? It could help you a lot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 31, 2011, 03:51:26 am
Charity looks back at Carrot, slight concern evident on her face. She then turns back to Bubbles and says, "What caused it? Have you informed his wife? Kil needs to know about her husband's condition."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 04:11:38 am
Ya, that's not a loaded question at all.  But maybe talking about it could bring her closure...

"Hate and violence?  You really don't know about friendship.  I'll ask, but not to help me.  It's to help her.  Friesden?  Why did you...

It has to be blunt, she needs to deal with this part of herself.  Sugarcoating it won't help her.

"...Why did you kill your mother?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 04:31:00 am
The motherly tones fade, and a new monotone appears.


"Weak. She was weak. Cattle to the slaughter. Weakness must be purged. I had to do it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 04:37:20 am
"Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 31, 2011, 04:43:49 am
"He was possessed by a daemon, as Khenal and Starkey will probably have told you. When it left, he appeared to have lost all memory. As for telling his wife...I have been looking for her, but have been unable to find her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 04:45:36 am
"Weak cannot protect themselves from the strong. No mercy. No mercy. Save them from suffering. They must die."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 04:48:29 am
"No mercy, but also save them?  You're contradicting yourself, Friesden.  So, why must they die?  Why did you kill your mother?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 04:49:41 am
"Better that the weak die than that they live. My mother was weak. They must be cleansed from the species."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 04:59:42 am
"To preserve a species?  If only the strong should survive, why preserve a weak species?  You still haven't answered my question, Friesden: Why did you kill your mother?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 31, 2011, 05:01:36 am
"Ah yes, the possession."

Charity racks her mind thinking back many many years to when she was a young filly, trying to remember her magic lessons.

"I've never heard of a possession leading to memory loss before. Do you think the spirit cast some sort of amnesia spell on him before it left? Or could the amnesia be induced by some kind of emotional trauma? In the case of magic then you should probably take him to Khenal. Khenal's been reading alot of books on magic and might be able to help. But if it's his own mind causing it, then seeing his wife and foals might help him remember."


"But you said you couldn't find her? That seems strange. Have you seen his oldest foal around? You could ask them where she went."


His wife if it matters is a unicorn named Kil, she has no skills, and is thus just a peasant.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 05:01:51 am
"To cleanse the species of her taint. The weak must die. Only the strong should survive."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 05:15:38 am
"Strong individuals are easily taken down by multiple weaker opponents.  Do you remember the Colossus?  None could hope to handle it alone, but as a group we were able to defeat it.  Though we lost ponies in the fight, the weak overcame the strong.  These bonds that allow we mere ponies to overcome such adversities are no taint, Friesden.  They are the only real strength we can hope to have."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 05:22:59 am
"The weak died, the strong prospered. Where is your defence? In the strong."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 05:32:43 am
"You would call a Colussus weak?  It could crush anypony with all the effort of simply walking.  But what about you, Friesden?  Are you strong in your solitude?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 05:47:15 am
"It died. It was weak."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 06:00:08 am
"Such a black and white view you have.  Be strong and kill, be weak and die?  But you are a doctor, Friesden.  It's in your job description to save 'weak' ponies from death, to deny the 'strong' their right.  So which is it?  A doctor to save those who need it, or an executioner to condemn those who can't stop it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 06:09:29 am
"The second. It is my duty."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 31, 2011, 06:21:07 am
"I've seen neither head nor tail of anypony related to him. I guess i'll have to keep looking. Should Carrot stay here, or shall i bring him to the hospital?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 06:29:21 am
"Duty is a poor excuse to do anything, Friesden.  Duty says I should just follow the evidence and let you face the full consequences of your actions.  There is good in you, but you refuse to allow it to shine.  Choices shape us all, Friesden.  I choose to present all the evidence to Charity and recommend the harshest punishment.  I will not have a pony who thinks so little of the lives of others running free to murder again.  I had hopped you could face your darker sides, but it looks like I was too late.  Sorry Friesden, I guess I did fail you after all."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on October 31, 2011, 06:35:11 am

"I don't know, Doc."

Looks Carrot up and down.

"He doesn't look dangerous. But we can't leave him to wander around the fort. It's probably best if you take him back to the infirmry and have Nurse Alen watch him for awhile. Just encase anything were to happen."

Psycho sounded like a child, the way he bounced up and introduced himself. Could his memory loss really be that severe? Best to talk to him like he is a child, as to keep him calm, thinks Charity to herself.

"Carrot, Dr. Bubbles is going to go take you to a nice unicorn lady who'll take care of you for awhile. Okay?"

She smiles the biggest fake smile she can muster which she hopes looks comforting, as she gestures them out, opening the door magically, to allow them through..
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 31, 2011, 06:40:44 am
((Nice work on that ending, strongbeard.))
"OK, Carrot. Nurse Alen, can you please take care of Carrot while i look for his family?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 06:53:40 am
"Excellent. This body was getting old."

Khenal feels a chill run through his veins as he recognises the voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 07:02:46 am
And with that, a cliffhanger for everyone!  Bed time!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 31, 2011, 08:50:23 am
I smile and follow the "nice pony", hopping excitedly all the way
"YAY!!! I GET TO SEE THE NICE UNICORN!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 31, 2011, 09:13:11 am
"Carrot, you stay here with Miss Unicorn."

((WAYYYYYYYYYYY OFF TOPIC: Listening to chipmunked songs is addictive...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxwWfOKCQlY&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 07:44:52 pm
"I said I would take the place of any pony in trouble if I could before, and that has not changed.  Take me, if you think you can."

I try to be brave, but my words are shaky and my face is covered in a cold sweat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 07:58:07 pm
"Do it then. Slay this host and I will own you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 08:19:10 pm
"Murder her?  Never!  My friend is in there somewhere!  I may have failed her today, but I will not stop trying to help her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 08:24:20 pm
"Ah, well. I can wait. How about you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 09:08:34 pm
"Indeed.  Until then, it's time for you to go back to your cell.  I'll see you tomorrow, Friesden; whichever you cares to talk."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 31, 2011, 09:45:52 pm
Getting very bored, I begin to start hopping and and bother the nurse
"Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey, Nurse! HI!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 31, 2011, 10:28:52 pm
*I go inside Khenal's office.*
"Khenal, Carrot appears to have lost all memory. Do you know any magic that may help him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 10:29:31 pm
"I wonder why he did that...hahaha."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 31, 2011, 10:33:21 pm
I continue to hop excitedly, annoying the living daylights out of the poor nurse
"HEY! CAN I HAVE COOKIE NOW?! HEY, THIS IS THE SONG THAT GOES ON FOREVER, AND EVER, AND EVER, AND EVER, AND EVER, AND EVER, AND EVER..." and so on and so forth until the nurse passes out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on October 31, 2011, 10:41:28 pm
I give Dr. Bubbles a tired look.

"Memory loss?  There are lots of spells to cause amnesia, but every one I've heard of is temporary.  Specific things can be hidden for a lot longer, but it takes a lot of magic to do something like that, and a lot of time.  If it takes him much more than a week to recover, it's most likely something he wants to forget.  Forcing him to remember could be very bad.  I'll check my books, but not today.  I'm too tired and everything is a jumbled mess; I need time to sort some things out.  Sorry"

I hold the door for him and then take my leave as well.  I glance in at Friesden in her cell as I leave for bed.

"Goodnight, Friesden"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on October 31, 2011, 10:43:52 pm
*I return to the hospital*
"CARROT! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO NURSE ALEN?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on October 31, 2011, 10:46:58 pm
I smile and hop around, laughing and wheezing
"She got...HAHAHA...she got bored! HEY, WANT TO HEAR A FUNNY SONG?! THIS IS THE SONG THAT GOES ON FOREVER, AND EVER, AND EVER..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on October 31, 2011, 10:51:56 pm
"Before you go, Khenal, one last thing. Do you know what are especially delicious? Memories. Bye now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 01, 2011, 04:22:10 pm
Charity's Journal 22nd Moonstone 97

Bebmal, our head brewer, (Venture's Mother) has had another foal. A little Pegasus filly. That makes five kids for those two earthponies, none of which are themselves earthponies. I don't think genetics is supposed to work this way.

I wonder if Shasad really is the father of all those foals. I shouldn't have wrote that. This is not the place for idle gossip.


OOC: I had a little lesson about weapon material today! I put Commander Starkey in a room with our Diomedian prisoner. I left the prisoner with his armor to make killing him a little better for training. However, Commander Starkey still had the copper axe he had become attached to so long ago. I never bothered forcing him to equip anything else. The fight started, and Starkey naturally took the Tentacled bastard down quickly, but he couldn't kill it. He just kept bashing it in the head for 73 pages of battle reports. Until Starkey started falling down himself from exhaustion. At this point, I unlocked the doors and let his faithful pet Grizzly Bear in to help him finish the Diomedian. He was fighting that one enemy for nearly a month. All because his exceptional copper axe couldn't get through a no quality bronze chanfron.

On the plus side Starkey gained 3 levels in his axe skill!

Charity's Journal 13th  Opal 97

Commander Starkey took our Diomedian prisoner, and executed him today. He took him to a new room he had ordered dug out and smoothed. The militia has been calling it the arena. Its a big room with lots of space for fighting and lots of fortifications to watch the carnage from. He had Khenal fighting wild chimps in there last week, but today, he wanted to duel the prisoner himself. He ordered that the prisoner be allowed to keep his weapons and armor to fight fair. Starkey beat it, but let his pet war bear have it when he grew tired of tormenting the creature. The whole thing seems gruesome and inpony to me. I mean I understand we had to kill the Diomedian, we couldn't let it go, and holding it prisoner forever is impractical, but I question the means employed.
(What is the pony speak for inhuman, inpony sounds wrong to me).

Charity's Journal 14th Opal 97

I don't know what Ironya was doing in the caverns but, when she was out there she ran into a horrible little ape-like creature with tusks, I've been told it's called a Gorlak. It chased her but she ran into two of our hunters who quickly put the beast down. Fortunately nopony was hurt.
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22nd Opal 97

The marksponies, were standing guard and unloaded most of their bolts into another gorlak. After killing the beast they decided to go after a couple of those Creeping Eye things. They killed two but that woke the nest. Ten more of them suddenly appeared, and the ponies were down to their last bolts. They retreated and begged the guard to help them. Khenal rallied the guard and they went off to fight them. They had little trouble slaughtering the hoard of them. But then, a roar filled the caverns. The sound was unmistakable. A troll had come. Khenal, knew the guard were the closest to it, and that going back to the fort could allow the creature to follow them, or to lay an ambush for somepony else. Kheanl made the decision to fight the creature here and now. They charge the Troll, led by the fearless Captain Khenal, and with perfect teamwork, honed by many hours of training, the creature is defeated in seconds. Kussad the spearpegasus who finished the beast, drew his spear from the monster's head, and wiped of the blood and brains. Before thanking his allies brothers, for creating the opening, that allowed him to kill it. Another victory for the forces of Harmony.

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Charity's Journal 9th Obsidian 97

GOD'S ABOVE! A swarm of parasprites has come out of the Jungle, not unusual, we get those sometimes, but I just witnessed one, bite a war dog in the throat and shake the whole thing around like a child's rag doll, and then it bite it's head and tear it's scalp right off. There was blood everywhere. At least the poor thing bleed to death quickly. We need the militia out there now, before somepony get's hurt.

Charity's Journal 16th Obsidian 97

A rainbow pony caravan has been sighted. The militia and fortress guard are still running around killing every parasprite they can get their hooves on. We can't trade much to them just yet however, as we expect a caravan from the capital soon, and have to make our offering to the princess. Once that is taken care of we will know how much we have left to trade.

28th Obsidian 98

Another spring, another year in Glitterglen. It's funny, I can hardly remember life before here now, and despite our problems, I don't think I'd rather live anywhere else. I think I'm going to go down to the dinning hall and have a pint of Pegasan Ale with Thundersplinter and Pillomino, I haven't talked to them for awhile.


1st Granite 98

Great news, Good news, and bad news. The good news, we were able to make the princess's tax with nothing but a pile of dresses and robes, made by our excellent tailors, and a couple of instruments made of worthless metals, sterling silver, black bronze, and such. The great news is that in gratitude for us making the offering Glitterglen is being officially recognized as a county of The Shells of Dance, and I'm being made the countess! The bad news, is this means we are expected to pay double the taxes we paid before.

We did acquire several tons of metal, our furnaces will be running night and day trying to melt all the crappy armor, weapons, toys, figurines, bee hives, nest boxes, buckets, splints, jugs, pots, and whatever else they had, into bars our smiths can work with.

Unfortunately for Doctor Bubbles, the two caravans only had one bag of plaster powder between the two of them, I will however request for more next year, as promised.

I also bought a few books on first aid for the Doctor, it was all they had, I placed an order for proper texts for next year. I also, got myself a few introductory level magic tomes, Cobalt is getting close to the age were his magic is going to start expressing itself, and I need to be ready to help him learn to channel it safety. Plus with all the magical things going on, it couldn't hurt to know a little more myself. I know Khenal has some more advanced magic books, I'll ask him if I can borrow some of them as well.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 01, 2011, 08:40:08 pm
Khenal's Book, Chapter 42

Something is very wrong with Friesden.  I don't think it's a daemon, in fact, it might not be anything foreign at all!  Even if it was a daemon, there's no way to permanently force one out of somepony else; the host has to force it out, or it must leave on it's own.  Of course, I learned that only after trying to banish what I thought was a daemon from Friesden. 

She definitely has a very troubled past, and I think the various "hers" that I talked to genuinely didn't know what friendship was, even the more stable sounding ones.  I'll be recommending that her punishment for the murder is imprisonment until rehabilitated or dead of old age.  Banishment would only unleash her on other unsuspecting ponies.  I fear we were lucky she only got one before we could capture her.  And execution is simply not an option, my friend is in there somewhere.

So I'll just keep trying to get through to her, hoping she'll open herself to friendship, however many of herself it takes!  I'll also be keeping an eye on her Diary, just in case more writing appears in it.


Chapter 43

Our arena had it's first fight to the death between sentients today:  Commander Starkey vs the Diomedian.  Both were fully armed and armored, Commander Starkey would never simply execute an unarmed pony, even a Diomedian.  Unfortunately for the Diomedian, Starkey is simply unmatched with that copper axe of his.  Starkey broke the Diomedian, but was unable to land a solid killing strike through his armor.  Once it became obvious the Diomedian would likely bleed out before Starkey could strike an immediately fatal blow, he called for his bear to deliver what he couldn't.

Baroness Charity doesn't like the arena, but she acknowledges the practicality of it.  After all, keeping a Diomedian prisoner for the rest of his days is hardly equestriane, and releasing him is not an option either.

My talk with Friesden today was...less than productive, I think.  She heard about the arena fight and only gave me derisive comments about it.  Hopefully tomorrow she'll be in a less abrasive personality...


Chapter 44

I've never been so proud of the Guard than I was today! 

The markspony squad was practicing their archery and tactics in the caves today on creeping eyes after dispatching several gorlaks.  Apparently Ironya was the first to spot those things.  Hunting has become quite the training exercise for the fighting ponies of Glitter Glen.  It's great practice and puts good meat on the table, so everypony wins.

Anyway, they upset a huge swarm of creeping eyes, and retreated, sounding for assistance.  They had run out of bolts, and while the eyes aren't too dangerous, they most certainly couldn't be allowed to follow the retreating marksponies into the fort proper.  The Guard formed ranks and dealt with the swarm calmly and efficiently, relying on each other to cover their personal weaknesses.  I was about to sound the all clear when I heard a roar that had dust shaking from the stalactites above: A Cave Troll!  We returned to formation instantly and advanced on the beast.  Through teamwork, we were able to slay the monster with no injuries.  Kussad struck the final blow, coming in from above with his spear while the rest of us harried it from the ground.  I couldn't help but beam at the rest of the Guard for their teamwork and dedication!

I'll be telling Friesden this tale of friendship shortly.  With any luck, more examples of strong individuals being taken down by weaker groups will show her the strength in friendship.


Chapter 45

I used to think parasprites were kind of cute, my book.  After seeing what one did to a war dog, not so much.  The Guard and the Army have been chasing the little winged buggers for the past week or two, so I didn't even notice the caravans arrive.

I've never seen two caravans in the depot before.  One was from the rainbow ponies, as they call themselves.  It's heartwarming and a bit weird to talk to rainbow ponies, they are a culture of diomedian, cave and ordinary ponies.  They're quite friendly, even when getting confused looks from the more sheltered residents of Glitter Glen.  They also have excellent magic tomes, their diversity giving them an excellent range of arcane knowledge.

The other Caravan was from our Princess!  Apparently she's quite happy with how we've doing here, as we are now a county instead of simply a territory!  Charity has been made a Countess now, and she fully deserves the title.  Most nobles I've seen were full of themselves and helped nopony, but Charity has worked hard to guide Glitter Glen to where it is today.  Just the thought of doing paperwork in addition to everything else she does makes me blanch.

The caravan itself was a bit odd, at least to me.  When I asked them about any books on magic, they looked confused for a moment before snickering and congratulating me on a decent prank.  I decided to not press the issue.  I guess I shouldn't be surprised that they figured an alicorn wouldn't need arcane tomes.


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I like using inequestriane in place of inhumane, inpony does feel a bit off. 

Khenal would be more than happy to lend Charity any books she asks.  In fact, she's one of the few ponies in the fort who might recognize that some of them are in Khenal's hornwriting (hoofwriting?), even one or two from the caravan...

Edited for minor grammar/spelling
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 01, 2011, 08:45:24 pm
whaaat? nothing about me? :o
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 01, 2011, 09:07:31 pm
Friesden's Diary

I'm happy here, my other self. I know you read this, lesser me, so why don't you talk to me? Talking is weakness, nuncle. Dearie, you're a bit full of yourself. Greater, lesser, all are equal. Greater self, what is 'equal'? Equality is what alicorns have. Not even them, nuncle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 01, 2011, 09:11:59 pm
Friesden's Diary

I'm happy here, my other self. I know you read this, lesser me, so why don't you talk to me? Talking is weakness, nuncle. Dearie, you're a bit full of yourself. Greater, lesser, all are equal. Greater self, what is 'equal'? Equality is what alicorns have. Not even them, nuncle.
((MONKEY ON A STICK, poor friesden sure does have severe multiple-personality-syndrome!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 01, 2011, 09:19:30 pm
Friesden's New Diary


He didn't believe me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 01, 2011, 09:25:24 pm
whaaat? nothing about me? :o

Mostly for two reasons.  Firstly, he doesn't remember his most significant interractions with you.  Seccondly, you two don't have many opportunities to interact.  You are in the markspony squad and he's captain of the guard.  Also, he's not the most observent pony when he had something on his mind.

...So three reasons, I guess :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 01, 2011, 09:30:55 pm
whaaat? nothing about me? :o

Mostly for two reasons.  Firstly, he doesn't remember his most significant interractions with you.  Seccondly, you two don't have many opportunities to interact.  You are in the markspony squad and he's captain of the guard.  Also, he's not the most observent pony when he had something on his mind.

...So three reasons, I guess :P
huh, fair enough.
EDIT: Awesome new avatar, khenal!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 01, 2011, 10:12:55 pm
 ((I lol'd at the caption on your picture Khenal.))
Dear Diary:
Between the two caravans, we only got 1 bag of plaster powder. Miss Charity has told them that we need more, so hopefully more will come.
We've been promoted to a county!
The caravan has brought many healthcare books, which I need to get to reading immediately.
-Bubbles
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 02, 2011, 12:01:00 am
It's "Horse drawn horse drawn carriages", by the way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 02, 2011, 12:17:10 am
It's "Horse drawn horse drawn carriages", by the way.

Aw, but I like hyphens.  Thanks on the comments on the new avatar everypony :)  I was watching that episode and couldn't resist getting a cap of it
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 02, 2011, 12:19:19 am
Carriages, not carraiges.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 02, 2011, 12:39:24 am
Carriages, not carraiges.
:'(
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 02, 2011, 02:55:21 am
((Erm...CONTINUE RPING?!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 02, 2011, 09:50:38 pm
All of a sudden, I begin to cry for a reason I don't even know
"WHY AM I CR-CR-CRYING?! WAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!"
((AH! RANDOMLINKTOPICTURESOFPONIESIMADE!! http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=95145.msg2730479#msg2730479))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 10:07:22 am
All of a sudden, I begin to cry for a reason I don't even know
"WHY AM I CR-CR-CRYING?! WAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!"
((AH! RANDOMLINKTOPICTURESOFPONIESIMADE!! http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=95145.msg2730479#msg2730479))

Since everyone else seems to be ignoring you, I'll play along.

Charity is walking past the infirmary where Psycho is staying. She overhears the sounds of crying. She considers getting the doctors, but decides to investigate first. She walks in and sees Psycho.

"Carrot? What's the matter? Are you okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 03, 2011, 10:09:04 am
*Hearing the sound of crying, I step outside and find Carrot shedding tears for absolutely no reason whatsoever, and Miss Charity trying to comfort him.*
"Wha....What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 10:12:46 am
I continue to sob
"Why do I feel like I'm forgetting someone?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 10:17:49 am
"I don't know doc. I was just walking by and heard crying, but if I had to hazard an educated guess. I'd say it has to do with him starting to remember somethings."

I continue to sob
"Why do I feel like I'm forgetting someone?!"


"Psycho, it's okay." Uses magic to drape a warm blanket over psycho's shoulders.

"Doctor, I think he's trying to remember Kil. Go get her now. She should be nearby. I saw her on my way in, she was moving some drink barrels down to the dinning hall, look there."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 03, 2011, 10:18:59 am
*I run out, and get Kil to follow me back inside*
((I need you two to talk a bit more, I'm not about to time-warp.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 10:26:17 am
Charity moves and sits close to the crying Carrot.

I need to get him to try and think about himself, to remember, thinks Charity.

"Carrot. Tell me about yourself."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 03:21:50 pm
"Well...I know that...agh it's all fuzzy! I remember you and Friesden...I think she did something bad...then...Ugh! I can't remember!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 03:43:18 pm
"Mental magics, mental magics, where did I put that book?  I've put off looking into that book for Dr. Bubbles too long already, where is it?" 

Books are rapidly pulled out, briefly examined, then replaced on my shelves.

"No.  No.  No no no no no no no!  Oh, there it is."

I finally find the book resting on my desk.  I crack the book open and glance inside, making sure this is the one with the memory charms.

"This should do it."

Closing the book and stowing it in my pack, I head out to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 05:30:49 pm
((I guess I'll keep talking then, since nobody has "arrived" yet.))
"IT'S NOT FAIR! WHY DO YOU GET TO HAVE ALL OF YOUR MEMORIES?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 05:38:34 pm
"Well...I know that...agh it's all fuzzy! I remember you and Friesden...I think she did something bad...then...Ugh! I can't remember!"

"That..."

Interrupted. I was just starting to type.

((I guess I'll keep talking then, since nobody has "arrived" yet.))
"IT'S NOT FAIR! WHY DO YOU GET TO HAVE ALL OF YOUR MEMORIES?!"

"Carrot, memory loss can be caused by many things, and I don't know what your cause is yet. But you say you can remember me and Friesden, and that Friesden did something bad. That is more than you remembered the last time we talked. Before long you might even be back to normal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 05:47:46 pm
I groan in agony, crying because I can't remember anything else.
"Friesden...It's very fuzzy, but I remember- AGH! My head hurts so baaaad......"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 06:11:43 pm
"Dr. Bubbles, I got that book you wan... oh, um..."

I pause just inside the door as I see Carrot being consoled by Charity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 06:25:34 pm
Charity looks up and sees Khenal standing in the door.

"Oh, Captain. Doctor Bubbles has ran to find Kil. Carrot, is starting to remember somethings."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 06:42:08 pm
"Really?  Wonderful!  Dr. Bubbles was worried it might take magic to get his memories back."

I walk up next to Carrot.

"So, how are you doing Sergent?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 06:53:35 pm
"Is that what I am...? a sergeant? Now, I'm just guessing...but are you...Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 07:10:54 pm
"Yes I am.  You seem to be recovering very well, it looks like Dr. Bubbles was worked up over nothing."

I give Carrot an encouraging smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 07:28:15 pm
"I can't remember much...at all-"
I suddenly scream in pain, rubbing a extremely deep gash in my left front hoof.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 07:59:00 pm
I take a few steps back at the sudden shout and motion, then notice the reason.

"How did you get a wound like that?  You probably shouldn't be rubbing it, are there any nurses around?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 08:06:10 pm
"I-I-IT WASN'T THERE A MINUTE AGO!"
I splutter, as I notice the blood oozing from it!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 08:16:33 pm
"Don't panic, don't panic!" I say, clearly needing to take my own advice.  "You're still in the hospital, I'm sure a nurse can help you.  Charity!  Do you know where a nurse is?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 08:28:04 pm
My eyes widen and I shake with terror, as another memory comes rushing back,
"I remember something...I was talking to friesden, then everything went nuts! I went berserk and I tried to kill everypony! But Khenal, that's not what is making me shake...It's what happened after that. I remember being hit by the blunt side of Starky's axe, but here's the problem: I wasn't knocked out, I...WAS...-I gulp as I say the final word- KILLED! The world went dark and I saw the light. Then it faded and I fell! So the question is, HOW AM I HERE TALKING TO YOU?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 08:35:55 pm
I back away from Carrot as he confronts me, avoiding eye contact.

"Um... maybe you had a vivid dream when Commander Starkey knocked you out?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 08:42:05 pm
I smile weakly,
"Wouldn't that be nice? I wish, but if it was just a dream, -I lose all trace of horror at this point, replaced by a strange calmness- why isn't my heart beating?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 08:50:19 pm
I look up, slightly confused.

"It is, isn't it?  I mean, you're bleeding.  I don't think dead ponies bleed much, and they certainly can't worry about being dead, right?"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 08:58:08 pm
As Khenal says this, he notices that the blood has stopped oozing from the wound, yet he can clearly see that the blood has not clotted,
"I really don't care about anything anymore...Even if I am just some half-mad pony, I...I don't know. I really...huh. -I suddenly perk up, acting childish again- That's funny, was I talking just now? Weird! WANNA HERE A JOKE?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 09:05:20 pm
'Maybe Dr. Bubbles was right to be worried...'

"Um..sure?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 09:06:43 pm
"Ok, heh heh, here goes...KNOCK KNOCK"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 09:08:35 pm
"Help me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 09:13:42 pm
"Are...you alright, Carrot?  What can I do to help you?"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 09:17:31 pm
"What do you-help me!-mean? I don't need-KHENA, HELP!-help from anypony!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 09:28:32 pm
'Use the sleep spell, it worked before!'

'Wait, "before?"'


"N-Now settle down Carrot.  You still have that nasty cut.  I don't want you to get hurt, so please relax."

My horn starts to glow subtly as I prepare to scan Carrot's surface thoughts.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 03, 2011, 09:30:06 pm
*I walk back inside with Kil to find Khenal and Carrot staring at each other, a gash on cCarrots hoof.*
"What happened? Why does carrot have an injury?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 09:32:23 pm
Charity has backed away, into the corner, and been quite, staring at the oozing wound. She makes her way inch by inch toward the door. All this has clearly been to much for the overstressed unicorn she manages to stutter out. "I'll...I'll... I'll go find the Doctor." before she gallops out the door and up the stairs toward the dinning hall in search of Doctor Bubbles. ,but she does not leave.

Edit: Ninjad. Fixed for continuity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 09:32:55 pm
"...FOR THE LAST TIME, WHY WON'T YOU LET ME HAVE CONTROL OF MY BODY?!"
"YOUR BODY?! HAH! IT'S MINE, AND I PLAN ON KEEPING IT THAT WAY!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 03, 2011, 09:33:31 pm
((Erm...Strongbeard, I just entered the room))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 09:40:45 pm
"Doctor!  Something is terribly wrong with Sergent Carrot."  I notice he has a mare with him.  "Um, hello ma'am.  Are you a nurse?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 09:41:20 pm
((Erm...Strongbeard, I just entered the room))

Yes you posted while I was typing. I have edited my post, to something more sensible.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 09:45:44 pm
KIL! She cant' see her husband like this. Thinks Charity.

Charity curses. "Doctor! You see to Sargent Carrot. I'm sorry Kil you should come with me, your husband is in no fit state, for visitors, just right now. Please come with me."

Charity leads the young unicorn mare out of the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 03, 2011, 09:54:22 pm
*Carrot slowly falls asleep.*
"Thank you Khenal, now I can treat his hoof. It will need dressing and cleaning. I suggest to stay, just in case something else happens."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 10:03:55 pm
'"Husband"?  He's married?'

"Wait, madam!" I yell, rushing to the door.  "Physically, your husband is, um...ok, but he really needs your moral support right now.  Please, just be here for him, let him know he's not alone."

Whispering to Dr. Bubbles:"There is more wrong than just the gash on his hoof, he needs his wife here if there is any hope for him to pull through.  And, um, would you mind checking his pulse for me?  And not freaking out if it's not there?  Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 03, 2011, 10:06:40 pm
((At this point I'm thinking nobody is reading. Khenal, Kil has already been taken away by Charity))
*I put my hoof on his chest*
((It's up to The Master now to say whether his heart is beating or not.))
"He doesn't have a pulse."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 10:19:05 pm
Charity turns back around, she's not going to argue the point, though she thinks this will only upset Kil.

((At this point I'm thinking nobody is reading. Khenal, Kil has already been taken away by Charity))

Not necessarily. I said I was going to do that, but it is perfectly reasonable for Khenal to say something before I leave with her as I walk out. Which is why I said "she leads the unicorn mare from the room" and not "and then Charity and Kil leave the room." Two very different sentences. And thus they stop and she stays.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 03, 2011, 10:19:59 pm
((Ah, okay then.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 10:31:44 pm
I lead her over to Carrot's bed.

"Carrot, your wife is here.  Let her know you're alright, I'm sure she's worried about you."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 03, 2011, 10:37:35 pm
"Urrrgggg...I...wife....My head...need control..." I mumble.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 03, 2011, 10:48:06 pm
"You can win, Carrot.  With her support, I doubt there's anything you couldn't do."

I step back to allow Kil and Carrot to be together without my interference.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 03, 2011, 10:49:07 pm
*I follow Khenal's lead, allowing Kil and Carrot to meet.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 03, 2011, 10:50:27 pm
Following the others lead, Charity sits and watches what unfolds.

(It's your show, The Master)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 11:04:13 am
"Psycho...Dear...how are you holding up?"
"It's all fire...Lost...FAILURE!!!"
"Honey, your scaring me! What is wrong?"
Silence.
"Hmm...I better check his pulse..."
Kil reaches for Psycho's neck.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 04, 2011, 11:25:32 am
"Erm, Kil, I wouldn't do that if i were you..."
((And I'm off to hit the hay.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 03:04:11 pm
"Why not?! He's just sleeping! It's not like he..." Kil turns ghostly white as the blood drains away from her face.
"He's...He's...ohhh..." Kil collapses in a crying heap.
((FYI, clearly, i'm not dead, but my heart is not beating. Just making sure you know i'm not killing my own character))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 03:11:18 pm
"Kil, he's still alive" or something similar? "but very weak.  He needs you to help him pull through.  I can't imagine how hard this must be for you, but you have to be strong for him.  I know he's fighting for you, make sure he knows you're waiting for him to come back to you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 03:13:50 pm
Sobbing "But he's dead! He has no pulse...WHO DID THIS TO HIM?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 03:20:17 pm
"DO NOT GIVE UP, KIL!  If his own wife abandons him, how can he hope to win this fight?!  I know it's confusing, but you must be strong for him!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 03:44:55 pm
"YOUR NOT MAKING ANY SENSE! HE'S D-"
"stop yelling..." Psycho moans.
"BUT-BUT-" Kil faints.

Meanwhile in Psycho's mind...
"You cannot win! Khenal will save me!"
"HAH! You sound so confident considering that you haven't had control since you had the mishap with Friesden!"
"I WILL DEFEAT YOU!"
"TRY!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 04, 2011, 03:59:07 pm
"I knew this would happen," mumbles Charity to herself. Before running over to the fainted unicorn and helping to move her to a hospital bed that she can rest in for a while.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 04:19:52 pm
I walk over to Carrot.

"You can defeat it, Carrot.  I know you can!  Don't believe it's bluster and lies!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 04:43:25 pm
"It's...too hard......help.......magic..." I weakly grunt.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 04:55:39 pm
'I hope this works.'

My horn glows softly as I begin to channel energy into Carrot.  Bolstering memories are recalled for him, reminding him that he fights for more than just himself.  I extend a bit of magic to Carrot's consciousness as well, hoping to give him some extra force to push the daemon out.

'I may not be directly able to banish a daemon, but i can give Carrot a helping hoof to do it himself.'


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 04, 2011, 05:02:05 pm
Charity walks up next to Khenal, and gently places a hoof on his shoulder. Her horn is also glowing. She may not know the spells to help Psycho, but she does know that magic is tiring, she passes some of her own energy to Khenal so he can channel it into Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 05:04:58 pm
"I TOLD YOU! I AM NOT ALONE! I HAVE FRIENDS AND ALLIES! NOW IT'S TIME TO DEFEAT YOU, ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!"
"NO! THIS ISN'T HAPPENING! I WILL NOT LOSE! I WiLL NoT Loosssssss I wwwwwwlll...lssssssssss.....I-I-I-I-I-I-"
The daemon's screams fade to gibberish, which in turn fades into silence. Psycho is free...for now.
"Guys...? I...umm...Thank you. Thank you, one and all..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 05:16:35 pm
I smile at Carrot, a little winded and sweating slightly.  I also smile at Charity, gratitude for her help plain on my face.

"Any time, Carrot.  After all, what are friends for?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 05:31:00 pm
"I remember everything...plus some extra it seems. I appear to have couple of your memories, Khenal. I now know that you are capable of mind control, but you'd never use it to your own personal gain. Thank you...I mean it."
Psycho hugs Khenal and Charity, then smiles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 05:45:49 pm
I give Charity a confused look as we're hugged.

"I'm just glad you're alright."

I consider asking about his pulse, but decide against it.  'He's himself again, that's all that matters.  Even if he overestimates my magical abilities.  I'm no mental mage.  Not anymore.'



'Wait, what?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 06:07:36 pm
"You helped me not once, but twice now. Remember how you expelled the daemon the first time?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 06:24:59 pm
"First time?  Like what I tried to do with Friesden?  But it didn't work.  A Daemon must either be defeated by the possessed, or leave on its own.  I...oh, my head...I remember you in my office, and then something happened and you were in the hospital, and so was I?  And then everything with Friesden happened?  I think I need to sit down."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 06:27:49 pm
Surprised, I say,
"Oh no. Now you have memory loss? This just isn't my day..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 06:41:38 pm
I give him a smirk.

"Says the pony who just bested a daemon in mental combat.  I'm sure it's nothing, and if it's not, we can deal with it later.  You need your rest."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 06:50:05 pm
I look at my gash, which STILL ISN'T BLEEDING, and it begins to dawn on Psycho that he might still need some medical help.
"Hey, ummm...I know that I am dead...well...i'm not dead...but medically speaking I am. Khenal, what do you recommend I tell Kil? This is all very confusing...Also, HOW IN THE WORLD DO YOU KNOW THAT THE WHOLE MENTAL WARFARE WAS HAPPENING?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 07:01:35 pm
"Um, I've been researching a lot of stuff lately, and daemon possession is one of the subjects.  I originally thought that was what was wrong with Friesden.  I cast a spell to read your surface thoughts a few minutes ago, when you had apparently regressed to foalhood, to try to see if I could get a firm bead on how you were doing.  I heard you and the daemon vying for dominance. 

"As far as what to tell your wife, I have no idea what to tell her about your....physical state.  Just reassure her that you are still you, even if you...might be dead?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 07:07:14 pm
"Gee, thanks..." I say, dryly.
"I guess I'm officially a zombie...hooray...i'm going to go cry in a corner now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 04, 2011, 07:33:16 pm
I place a friendly hoof on his withers ((pony equivalent of shoulders, woo anatomy!)) and give him a reassuring smile.

"Just don't forget you have friends to help you through this.  I'll check my books and see if anything like this has happened before, if you like."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 07:45:15 pm
I force a smile,
"Thanks...I think that whole mind battle really depressed me...Do you have any medication...? I hope I can still digest food- OH NO. NO NO NO...Khenal. Zombies ROT! IF I'M A ZOMBIE...THEN....THEN...THEN....ohhhhh..."thud.
Psycho passes out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 04, 2011, 07:52:10 pm
Friesden's New Diary.

Thread by thread, stitching it together
Charity's dress, cutting out the wound snip by snip
Making sure the pony skin folds nicely
It's the perfect color and from the hip
Always gotta keep in mind my pacing
Making sure the fur's correctly facing
I'm stitching Charity's dress

Inch by inch, chopping off the hoofnails
Dual neck slice, don't you know a dice in time saves nine?
Make him something perfect to perspire
Even though he hates formal attire
Gotta mind those intimate hoofnails
Even though he's more concerned with gaols
It's Khenal's new dress

Dressmaking's easy, from Starkey something tan
Cryptson something sturdy
Blend skin and mane,
Do you think it looks breezy?

Something brash, perhaps quite fetching
Hook in eye, couldn't you just simply die?
Making sure it skins forelock and crest
Don't forget the magic in the head
Even though it rides high when from the flank
ThunderSplinter won't look like a tank
I'm stitching Thunder's dress

Piece by piece, snip by snip
Croup, dock, haunch, shoulders, hip
Thread by thread, primmed and pressed
Yard by yard, never stressed
And that's the Art of the Dress!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 07:54:33 pm
Friesden's New Diary.

Thread by thread, stitching it together
Charity's dress, cutting out the wound snip by snip
Making sure the pony skin folds nicely
It's the perfect color and from the hip
Always gotta keep in mind my pacing
Making sure the fur's correctly facing
I'm stitching Charity's dress

Inch by inch, chopping off the hoofnails
Dual neck slice, don't you know a dice in time saves nine?
Make him something perfect to perspire
Even though he hates formal attire
Gotta mind those intimate hoofnails
Even though he's more concerned with gaols
It's Khenal's new dress

Dressmaking's easy, from Starkey something tan
Cryptson something sturdy
Blend skin and mane,
Do you think it looks breezy?

Something brash, perhaps quite fetching
Hook in eye, couldn't you just simply die?
Making sure it skins forelock and crest
Don't forget the magic in the head
Even though it rides high when from the flank
ThunderSplinter won't look like a tank
I'm stitching Thunder's dress

Piece by piece, snip by snip
Croup, dock, haunch, shoulders, hip
Thread by thread, primmed and pressed
Yard by yard, never stressed
And that's the Art of the Dress!
((good gosh, you sure have a sick mind...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 04, 2011, 07:56:12 pm
((I try))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 07:58:51 pm
((and no psycho mentioned?))
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 04, 2011, 08:04:19 pm
There was no spacing for Psycho Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 04, 2011, 09:17:28 pm
((Im back.))
*quickly, I wash and dress the wound.*
((The Master, i'm afraid that image is going to be my avatar.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 04, 2011, 10:14:52 pm
(( ^_^ ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 05, 2011, 12:37:33 am
Friesden's New Diary.

Thread by thread, stitching it together
Charity's dress, cutting out the wound snip by snip
Making sure the pony skin folds nicely
It's the perfect color and from the hip
Always gotta keep in mind my pacing
Making sure the fur's correctly facing
I'm stitching Charity's dress

That is marvelous and disturbing Dsarker. I love it.

After the events of the day. Charity returns home, before going to sleep, she decides to read a chapter or two of one of the magic books she got off the last caravan.

As she begins reading, she notices something, unusual, the pony that wrote this has very familiar looking hornwriting. It bothers her constantly, until she get's up, half way through the first chapter and starts looking though her files. "Yes, it's a perfect match," she exclaims, "but, why?"

In front of her is on the left, a newly acquired magic book, and on the other an old report from Captain Khenal. "The lettering is identical. Did Khenal write this?"


And with that I'm off to sleep. Tomorrow is Saturday, so I hopefully will have some time to actually play some DF, and will include some normal updates and things.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 05, 2011, 01:01:59 am
Khenal's Book, Chapter 46

It's amazing how ponies can become friends, my book.  I headed down to the hospital today to give Dr. Bubbles a book on memory charms.  Sargent Carrot had a case of amnesia and the good Doctor was worried that it might need magical treatment.  When I arrived, Bubbles was out, but Carrot was awake and aware.  He seemed to be making a good recovery on his own, things seeming to be coming back to him at a slow but steady pace.  Then he suddenly regressed into a foallike state, grinning unsettlingly and asking if I'd like to hear a joke.  Halfway though it, his expression changed and he asked me to help him.  I quickly cast one of the basic memory charms from the book, allowing a look at surface thoughts, and I couldn't believe what I saw.  He was fighting a daemon in his mind!

With the encouragement of his wife, and the help of Countess Charity and my own magic, we were able to help Carrot defeat the daemon and bring him back to himself.  Uh, mostly.  Apparently, his heart isn't beating.  I don't think he's dead, dead ponies don't thank you for your help and offer new friendship.  I offered to check my books for information on his condition, and he seemed a little relieved at that.  Then he worked himself into passing out over the details of his new...condition.

I need to tell Friesden this tale of friendship.  I'd have told her before writing in you, my book, but I don't think she was paying attention to me.  She was humming something oddly catchy earlier, maybe I'll ask her where it's from later.

***********

Excellent creepifying of one of my favorite songs from the series.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 05, 2011, 01:06:02 am
Thanks!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 05, 2011, 01:37:09 am
((Dsarker, that is both creepy and interesting...
We really need to stop this trouble, but nobody really wants to. RPing is too much fun :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 05, 2011, 01:53:40 am
((The day I stop RPing is the day I die.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 05, 2011, 01:58:10 am
((Heh. Sure it's fun, but y'all move waaay too fast for me. :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 05, 2011, 02:34:36 am
A faint smile appears on Psycho's face. After all he's been through, he deserves some rest.
((Now it's time for me to sleep as well...G'night ponies!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 05, 2011, 06:05:01 pm
I wake up, and I notice that my skin is beginning to flake off. Worried, but no longer scared, I look for Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 05, 2011, 08:24:49 pm
((We're nominated in the hall of legend! Vote up people! We must spread pony goodness throughout the forum.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 05, 2011, 08:25:46 pm
((We're nominated in the hall of legend! Vote up people! We must spread pony goodness throughout the forum.))
((THANKS TO ME!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 05, 2011, 11:40:56 pm
Unable to find Khenal after hours of searching, I head back to the hospital and speak with Bubbles,
"Hey doc. Find anything new on what's wrong with me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 06, 2011, 12:39:21 am
No. You appear to be fine, except for the fact that your heart isn't beating. I'm trying to find some information in this book.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 12:59:02 am
"Well...my skin is beginning to flake off..."
((think Fallout ghouls))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 06, 2011, 01:00:06 am
*I go silent for a few moments*
"This is not good..."
((What exactly do you mean the master?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 01:02:09 am
(( http://fallout.wikia.com/wiki/Ghoul ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 06, 2011, 01:03:31 am
"This is something I have yet to see before. Go look for Khenal, he may be able to help you. I lack the knowledge of how to treat this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 01:06:25 am
"I see...That's ok...Oh, when my wife wakes up, could you try to convince her that she just dreamed that whole incident?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 06, 2011, 01:07:01 am
"Sure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 01:11:21 am
I close the door to my office, ready to relax after a long day of patrol and training the Guard.  Well, relative relaxation, at least.  I scan my books on magic, looking for any that may have something pertaining to Carrot's condition.  I stop and pull out one that I had forgotten I bought.  That strange zebra threw it in with the pile I bought a while ago, when I got a cryptic message and a good deal.

"'Magical Maladies and Arcane Afflictions'?  Sounds like as good a place to begin as any."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 01:15:01 am
I head over to Khenal's office and knock on the door, hoping that he's there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 01:19:02 am
"Hm?"

I set the book down before going over to open my door to see who it is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 01:27:10 am
"Hey, I was just wondering...have you learned anything helpful about my...condition?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 01:37:01 am
"I only just now got a chance to really look into it.  This book here looks like a good place to start." I say, levitating 'Magical Maladies and Arcane Afflictions' for Carrot to see.  "It even has an index by symptom, so lets check.  I guess the obvious symptom is lack of heart beat..."

Pages flip rapidly as I follow the index.  'Zombie' is the only condition listed with that symptom.  I do my best to not let Carrot see the page as I scan the other symptoms for zombie.

"Um... have you noticed any lack in appetite, or unusual cravings?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 01:42:42 am
"Now that you mention it, I have sort of lost my appetite...but I that it might just be from the fact that my heart doesn't work. Oh, and my skin is beginning to flake off. ALL. OF. IT."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 01:50:20 am
"Total loss of appetite, severe dermatitis.  Or is it psoriasis?  How about your coat and mane?  Oh, and let me check your temperature, please."

I reach out my hoof to feel Carrot's forehead to get a rough feel for his temperature.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 01:51:26 am
Psycho's temperature temperature is ice cold.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 01:54:34 am
((Just to make sure: room temperature cold, or definitely colder than that?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 01:55:20 am
((definitely colder.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 02:01:43 am
"Hmm, interesting.  No dementia, at least not with that Daemon gone.  Well, Carrot, I think I have good news and bad.  Which would you prefer first?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 02:03:52 am
"bad news, because then the good news will leave me with a better mood...probably."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 02:16:32 am
"Well, the bad news is that I don't know what your condition is.  The good news, however, is that I know what you aren't.  You are not a zombie.  Zombies are mindless and propelled by necromantic energies.  Simply being able to talk to you is a significant hint you are no zombie, and your temperature is also a strike against being a zombie.  The book says the energies moving a zombie makes them tend to be room temperature, but you are very cold.  I think you are actually using your own thermal energy to move.  Um, sorry if I sound a bit...clinical?  There's just so much more that I feel we need to discover to help you, and I think we may be stuck with having to experiment on our own, at least until I can get some new books."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 02:20:06 am
"So...In essence, you have a zero understanding of how my whole body continues to function without a working heart and blood flow. Oh my...what's Kil going to say when all of my skin is gone?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 02:36:47 am
"Well, nothing concrete anyway.  I don't even know if your skin is going to totally flake away.  It's really another tally in the you-aren't-a-zombie column, zombies tend to have their skin slowly rot away around whatever wounds they have.  If they had no wounds, the uh... soft tissues around orifices...rot first.  Um..."

 I pause, unsure how to proceed after that awkward revelation.

"I'll, uh, keep looking for any more information.  Why don't you try to get some sleep, and try to eat something?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 06, 2011, 10:25:31 am
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/The%20Forgotten%20Beast%201.png)

Charity's Journal 26th Granite, 98

Rumblings in the deep. No pony has seen the cause yet, but it's getting closer. I have mobilized the entire militia to the cavern entrance.
______________________________
The battle is begun, Efim Ripeseeds and Peytrel, the axe ponies, are the first two to reach the creature. They are quickly followed by many others as they all attack the ancient evil together. The monster is slain in seconds.

(The entire combat report is posted below.)
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/The%20forgotten%20beast%20is%20slain..png)
______________________________

Charity's Journal 28th Granite 98

The Creature that was heard in the deep two days ago has been slain. Our militia killed it with zero difficulty.

(Uh, uh-oh. Um. We have incoming fun. Prepare yourselves.)

Charity's Journal 7th Slate 98

I told them. I told those ponies. I told them that no amulets were to be exported from Glitterglen. But did they listen? NO! They did it anyway. I can't allow such blatant disrespect for our laws to go on. I've acquired a list of those ponies responsible for this outrage. 10 of them. Including Pillomino and Thundersplinter! I thought we could trust those two at least. I've drawn lots and the four losers will be beaten, while the rest will spend time in prison. I've given the order to the guard.
________________________________
And so the beatings began. First up was Bokbon Shigosotil, a loyal member of Starkey's own squad, she was beaten by Officer: Istlig Konabor, in the Trade Depot where her horrendous crime took place, until she was dead, a tragedy, that will undoubtedly, put a divide between the militia and the guard.

Among those imprisoned we have Pillomino, and Venture's father, (200 and 100 days respectively) among others. Due to overcrowding of the cells, Pillomino, is being forced to share a cell with...Friesden. (Fun times)

The second victim, of Officer: Istligs beatings, Nanges Lisigbol, a double legend, in both glass-making and in the operation of siege weapons. He was beaten in the main hallway, trying to run away the entire time, but being struck again and again, until, the officer smashed his head between his hammer and the wall, killing the poor pony.

The third to be beaten. Thundersplinter, was sitting in the dinning hall, attending a party thrown by the Count Consort Cryptson, when suddenly Officer Tunur, came up and kicked her in the leg, bite her in the upper body, and proceeded to administer justice with his silver war-hammer, that ranks among the finest of weapons Ironya has ever produced. Thunder became enraged and lashed out, but was ineffectual and quickly knocked back down by the powerful hammer blows. But then, the beating stopped, and the officer left her, a broken shadow of her former self, but alive. A passing earthpony, then carried the broken pegasus to the hospital, so she could recover.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Thunder%27s%20beating.png)

And the final beating was dealt to one of our more skilled butchers who while bruised, has survived. (finally got him to drop that damn Steel War Hammer and use a training weapon for his beatings.)
_____________________________________________________

Charity's Journal 10th Slate, 98
Katak, a low skilled, earthpony, metal crafter has been possessed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 03:41:48 pm
The Journal of Cap'n Starkey

- - - - - -

7th Slate, '98

That bitch.

And here I had hoped that maybe we could do things better here. I thought Miss Charity had a level enough head on her shoulders, and we wouldn't fall back into the barbarism that's tearing the old kingdom apart. But no. She got a little taste of power, and now she's just another tyrant, letting her stormtroopers parade around murdering at will. They.. they killed Bokbon, in the middle of the trade depot for everyone to see. Corporal Peytrel told me they carted his father off in irons - thank Kulet they didn't do worse.

I need to speak to Khenal immediately. This order can't have gone through him, he wouldn't have allowed it. If somepony in the guard is going over his head, he needs to know immediately. If not... we'll be having a long talk about a few things.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 03:43:39 pm
Realizing I hadn't checked in with Captain Starkey in a long while, I go and look for him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 03:47:19 pm
Starkey is sitting at the desk next to his bunk, staring at the pages of his journal. He does not look up as he addresses Carrot.

"Evening Seargent. Haven't seen you about in awhile."

He spares him a quick glance, before returning his gaze to the book.

"You look like shit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 03:58:15 pm
"Gee, thanks. Other than the fact that I can APPARENTLY can survive without a working heart, and my skin falling off, nothing is new."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 04:00:52 pm
Starkey closes his journal, stepping away from the desk.

"Sorry, I... didn't mean to be so harsh. It's just... you heard what happened today?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 06, 2011, 04:02:27 pm
((Is Pillomino owned by someone?))

Friesden had decided to chat with her new room mate.

"Hi! Do you like scalpels? I like scalpels. They keep trying to take them away, but someone always gets them back for me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 04:38:42 pm
Starkey closes his journal, stepping away from the desk.

"Sorry, I... didn't mean to be so harsh. It's just... you heard what happened today?"
"Yeah, I heard. Now, I have to ask you something. How am I alive without a working heart?! Khenal didn't give me a straight answer!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 04:41:50 pm
"I... I don't know. But I intend to get some straight answers of my own out of him. Walk with me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 05:02:07 pm
I follow silently, expecting the worst.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 06, 2011, 05:32:30 pm
Frieden's Diary

Other self, you must listen! We know what happens throughout the fortress! Nuncle, our time is at hand! Khenal ordered the death of two ponies, dearies. All must know. You must know this, greater me. We must take this advantage. Even he, nuncle, will fall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 06, 2011, 05:33:40 pm
((Is Pillomino owned by someone?))

Yes, Pillomino was claimed by someone a long time ago (somewhere in the first 10 pages, I think, I'll look for it later). But they haven't posted anything, in weeks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 09:02:43 pm
Starkey and Carrot arrive at the Captain's office. Starkey knocks on the door.

"Khenal? Khenal, I know you're in there. Open up. We need to talk. Now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 09:17:31 pm
((Khenal went offline...again...?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 09:18:20 pm
(( I was starting to wonder when the dwarven pony justice system would bite Khenal in the ass for taking the position as captain :P ))

Khenal's Book, Chapter 47

So, Caverns have some very strange thigns in them.  A few days ago, horrific roars were heard from the deeps, but nothing appeared.  The Army was mobilized and stationed, with both the ground squad and the markspony division ready to engage whatever dared show itself.  They later described it as a gigantic, gaunt, feathered crab, which it certainly looked like from the corpse.  Happily, the Guard doesn't hold a monopoly on teamwork and tactics, and Commander Starkey was able to lead them to victory without casualties, or even significant injuries!  I keep saying it, but nopony is better suited to running the defense of Glitter Glen than Commander Starkey.

Chapter 48

Ugh, paperwork and low priority crime.  Apparently, the export of amulets had been forbidden for whatever reason, and some got traded anyway.  Charity came down to my office earlier with a list of ponies who had violated the ban, and several names were surprising.  Thunder Splinter, Pilomino and Venture's father were among the "smugglers" I recognized on the list.  Charity wanted to throw the book at all of them to set an example, but I told her we have laws and investigations for a reason.  And besides, they were only amulets.  At worst, have them pay a fine to replace them.

I've been poring through my books to try to figure out Carrot's condition, or to figure out a spell to help me figure out his condition.  So far, I've not found anything concrete about what he may have become, but I've found several nice spells for examining magic fields and sensing energies.  I might try a few next I see Carrot if he's willing.

Huh, it's been a while since I sent out a few of the Guard to gather the suspects.  It shouldn't take this long to find a few ponies and let me know they are ready to be interviewed.  I hope nothing has happened.



Huh?  Commander Starkey?

"Commander Starkey?  Come in, come in."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 09:21:10 pm
Looking very sheepish, I walk in, doing my best to hide behind Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 09:27:40 pm
"Evening Khenal. Listen, I'm sorry we don't have time to chat, but this is important: How well do you trust your men?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 09:33:10 pm
I give Starkey a slightly confused look.

"Um, pretty well?  They've been paying attention during training and showing great teamwork.  I haven't gotten to know many of them personally yet, but I do trust them.  I was actually about to try to find a few of them.  I sent them out" I glance at a clock "...a few hours ago?  That can't be right, they're just supposed to be bringing in a few ponies to interview about accidentally violating an export ban."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 09:36:34 pm
"A few ponies like Bokbon? Nanges? Pillomino? Thundersplinter? Peytrel and Venture's father?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 09:37:54 pm
"IDIOT! THEY MURDERED OUR MEN! I thought I could trust you, Khenal!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 09:43:09 pm
"What?!  Murdered?!  When?  Who?  What?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 09:44:18 pm
"...Starkey. I think we both know what the punishment for treason is."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 09:46:24 pm
"Bokbon and Nanges are dead, killed by your guards in cold blood. Thundersplinter is bed-ridden in the hospital, Doc Bubbles says she's lucky to be alive. Peytrel told me his father is in one of your cells. Now I'll ask you One. More. Time. How well do you trust your men?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 09:52:01 pm
'Would any of my men really abuse their position like that?  I Doubt it.  Would Commander Starkey lie about something like this, even as a prank?  Never.  Why does evidence never tell me nice things?'

"Not as much as I trust you, Starkey.  Where are the guards responsible?"

I levitate my spear from the corner to rest along my side.

"I think I need to talk to my men."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 09:57:42 pm
Enraged, I say,
"Khenal...I...I cannot believe you would...you're sick. Absolutely sick. I cannot believe I wanted to be friends with someone like you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 09:59:31 pm
"Istlig. Ittlig Konabor killed Bokbon and Nanges. I don't know where he is now. I don't know who else is responsible, and quite frankly..."

Starkey draws his axe, falling into step with Khenal.

"I don't give a parasprite's arse."

"Oh Seargent? Do me a favor. First, calm the clop down. He's not responsible. If you can't trust him, then at least trust me. Then, I need you to head to the barracks and rouse Leiutenant Otik, tell her to gather her two best shooters, gear up, and meet me outside the armoury in thirty."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 10:01:23 pm
I glare at khenal for a moment, then I salute Starkey and rushing to the barracks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 10:03:46 pm
I yell after Carrot, hoping he hears me."I would never order ponies murdered, Carrot, especially over bucking amulets!  I don't know what's going on, but I will soon find out!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 10:08:00 pm
Reaching the barracks, I grab Leiutenant Otik and shake her awake,
"Leiutenant Otik! Starkey says to gather your two best shooters, gear up, and met him outside the armory!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 06, 2011, 10:09:47 pm
Friesden's New Diary

I love it when a plan comes together. I wonder how long it will take him to guess it was me?


Pillomino didn't last too long before she fell under my influence too.

She now enjoys the scalpel just as much as I thought she would.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 10:14:39 pm

The Lieutenant glares at him, bleary-eyed.

"Wha's the meaning of this, seargent? The cap'n? Why does he...? Oh clop, jus' let me wake up..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 10:17:45 pm
"NO! SLEEP WHEN YOUR DEAD! RIGHT NOW, WE HAVE TWO MURDERS ON OUR HANDS!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 10:24:38 pm
"Wha? Is this about this mornin'? Alright, if the cap'n wants me, I'll be there."

She climbs out of bed, muttering something about a 'clopping drama queen' before prodding two of her companions awake. In short order, they are out the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 10:26:29 pm
The four of us head to to the armory.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 10:28:22 pm
"Augh, dunnae tell me he wants you t' tag along?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 10:30:34 pm
I smack the Lieutenant in the face, already having enough stress for one day.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 10:39:49 pm
The seargent's vision explodes with bright stars. He awakes to find himself gagged and tied to an empty weapon rack. Otik and the two stallions already have their armor and weapons. One of them shoots a glance at him.

"She don't like to be touched, man."

They leave.


((I think Glitterglen is a pretty cool gal. seh takes no shit from Carrot and doesn't afraid of anything.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 10:42:43 pm
'Ok, need a plan.  Can't just let blind fury reign.  Can't give Istlig the business end of my spear as soon as I see him, even if he's murdered two ponies in cold blood.  You only have Starkey's word, which is a hell of a thing to have, but we still have laws.  Order him to stand down so he can be arrested for suspicion of double equicide and treason.  Have the rest of the guard stand down and surrender their weapons as we meet them, and wait in...um...the dining area?  No, the courtyard up top.'

I nod to myself, glad to have a plan.


"So, Commander, I'd like to offer each guard member the chance to stand down, relinquish their weapon, and wait for us in the courtyard up top.  Once we find Istlig" I spit the name out like a curse "he will also be ordered to stand down and we can personally escort him to a cell, before sorting out the rest of the guard.  Does that sound good?"


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 10:44:59 pm
'Great job, Psycho! You just got KO'd by a girl! Worse, now i'm tied to a weapon rack! Well, let's think of the positives...I'm...Actually I am dead...I- No...Aw, screw it! NOTHING GOOD EVER HAPPENS TO ME FOR MORE THAN FIVE SECONDS!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 06, 2011, 10:50:04 pm
"Of course. Give him a chance to explain. We... we aren't barbarians."

((Who will act the part of the guards?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 06, 2011, 10:51:30 pm
I will..naturally.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 10:54:49 pm
Ya, that sounds about right :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 06, 2011, 11:19:44 pm
((so...what happens now?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 06, 2011, 11:24:07 pm
It was at this moment that Istlig chose to arrive. There's a slight change in the air, but nothing too ordinary. He arrives in uniform, with wooden truncheon at his side.

"Reporting for duty, sah!" he shouts out, snapping to attention. He wrinkles his nose. "Your ordered...beatings," he says, twitching as he does so, "have been carried out. As before, I address a formal complaint at using real weapons to deliver it, sah. Somepony might have gotten killed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 06, 2011, 11:28:39 pm
"I... You... What?  I didn't order beatings!  I asked the suspects be brought in for questioning!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 06, 2011, 11:58:04 pm
Istlig remained stock still. "Yes, you did, sah. Got it all filed up with the mayor, as per her orders, sah."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 12:07:21 am
"But...but ponies did die, you murdered Bokbon and Nanges!  I'd...I'd never order ponies beaten, especially not with real weapons!  P-please surrender your weapon and c-come with Commander Starkey and me."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 12:13:33 am
Istlig loses his composure.

"W-what did you say? They...they DIED? You....you made me murder them...I killed them...I killed them!"

With a flash, he draws from under his armour a small dagger. A word is visibly written on it. The word 'Honour'. He makes to stab himself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 12:21:00 am
"No!"

My horn flares as I grab the dagger in my magic.


Honour...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 12:41:36 am
Istlig struggles, trying to hold onto the dagger.


"She knew you'd do this!" he screams. "She knew you'd try to get me to kill innocents. But I won't be your pawn any longer!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 12:51:23 am
There is no Honor in this!

"Istlig, she's lying to you, manipulating you!  I would never hurt innocents!  Please, calm down and come with the Commander and me!"

The knife slowly turns from Istlig and points towards the ground, before a bright flash of my horn drives it hilt deep between the stones of the floor.  I look Istlig in the eyes, breathing heavily and sweating from the effort of disarming him.

"Please, Istlig.  There is no honor in suicide."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 12:57:50 am
While Khenal struggles with Istlig, Starkey has managed to get behind him. He wraps a foreleg around his neck, using his full body weight to shove him towards the wall: a classic guard takedown maneuver.

((EDIT: Khenal, you ninja bastard :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 01:03:03 am
((Dammit, doublepost))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 01:04:25 am
"No...No! You're lying! You told me to do it! You're responsible!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 01:10:15 am
Istlig recieves a punch to the jaw for his troubles.

"Now listen you! I. Am not. In the mood. For games tonight. Who gave the order for the killings?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 01:23:49 am
"Khenal did! He's our commander!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 01:29:34 am
Another punch to the face.

"Dammit, I am not playing with you! Who gave the order!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 01:31:50 am
"Khenal did! Oh Ingest! We killed innocent ponies!" He throws up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 01:34:28 am
Starkey rams his hoof into Istlig's face again, fully prepared to beat a more appropriate answer out of the wretch.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 01:36:52 am
"Then I am under arrest as well."

I place my spear against the wall and look at Starkey.

"Commander, can you handle the rest of the guard without my assistance?  I said we would be disarmed and questioned, and I am no exception."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 01:37:10 am
A strange look comes over his eyes, and in a voice not quite his, and somewhat monotone, he says "It was not Khenal. It was Friesden who did it. Kill her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 07, 2011, 01:38:51 am
I begin screaming(muffled of course from the gag) and thrashing, desperate to get somepony's attention so that I can be untied.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 01:45:14 am
"Ooh, no, that monster Friesden! Of course, how could I have been so blind?"

Punch.

"You think you're being, funny, do you?"

Punch.

"You think it's amuuuusing?"

Punch.

"Well I'm not laughing, you sick clop!"

Punch.
Punch.


"Now you're-"
Punch.
"going-"
Punch.
"to tell-"
Punch.
"me-"
Punch.
"who-"
Punch.
"gave-"
Punch.
"the clopping-"
Punch.
"ORDER!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 01:51:19 am
"Commander, stop!  Please, he's not resisting any more!  Just take us both to a cell.  There's magic about, he may not be himself right now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 01:54:21 am
In the same voice, virtually unchanged from the pain the body must be going through, Istlig answers "It was Friesden. She gave the order. Pillomino was the most important to imprison. Her mind would give her range over the fortress. I suggest, mr Starkey, that you ask her about her Art of the Dress. I've trained her well, it seems."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 07, 2011, 01:55:00 am
I slip into unconsciousness as the gag prevents me from getting enough air.
((Good night guys, happy blood bath!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 01:57:28 am
"Who...are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 01:59:50 am
Starkey ceases his assault, instead siezing Istlig's face in his forehooves.

"I'll wager I'm not talking to Istlig right now. So out with it: who are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 02:10:30 am
"Mr Starkey, your friend here was partially correct. Khenal did order Istlig and the guards to summarily punish the...hehehe...offenders. It was Friesden who came up with the idea of...isolating... The important ones. I, of course, was the fulfiller of this plan. It's partly her fault, I guess. If she had been...what's the phrase... The full bit, I believe, I would still be tasting her memories. They were delicious." The last word is the only one with any emotion at all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 02:12:28 am
"You're doing an excellent job dodging my question: Who. Are. You?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 02:20:35 am
"I have many names, mr Starkey. I have no doubt your memories would taste even better than Friesden's....and hers were very delicious." Saliva begins to drop from Istlig's mouth. "Hers were the best. More than just plain pony meat...they filled...like the first unicorn I drank. I was too hasty. Her mind has splintered, each more acrid and painful to touch than the last. It was good to leave that...even for the poor feast this one is. Oh....but like a thirsting pony in the desert, I could not resist."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 02:24:34 am
"Then what are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 02:24:46 am
"'Many names.' pah. Can't tell you how many times I've heard that line before. You got one you prefer?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 02:34:07 am
"Depends on how your tongue can express it. To some, I am called T'dz'le'kqsrproi'laszke'l, to others Mdnloph'ntzangretchfie, still to others Flprituzq'err'. However you wish to call me is fine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 02:40:15 am
((Ugh, I just realized how late it is. You think you guys can continue without me?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 02:46:05 am
I glance at Starkey.

"So...Schmoe it is, if you don't care about your name.  How can we be rid of you?"

********

I think we can manage for now, at least.  Khenal may still want to be arrested when this is through, though. ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 02:49:29 am
A laugh hangs in the air.

"Why, by killing me and my hosts, Khenal. I nearly managed it with Friesden, but you have this...compunction...against killing ponies. Quite the useless ability, but there it is."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 02:52:10 am
"Hosts?  Multiple hosts?!  What are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 02:57:33 am
"What's in a name? That which you call a daemon by any other name would be as powerful."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 03:08:24 am
Daemons don't possess multiple ponies at once, they don't have the power.  Or do some?  Daemons can only by ousted by the host or leave on their own...

"So, Schmoe the memory eater, how do you think my memories might taste?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 03:10:51 am
There's a slight smugness in the tone of the voice. "Oh, delicious, I'm sure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 03:24:17 am
"Do you dare find out?  You are certainly powerful, but could you hope to possess an alicorn and maintain your other thralls?  Will you subsist on your 'leftovers' while a potential feast sits before you?  Take me, if you think you can!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 03:30:21 am
"At last. An opening. Khenal, my friend, you're going to help me by doing this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 03:40:11 am
"You are not my friend, memory eater!  Now come, see if you've bitten off more than you can chew!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 03:49:00 am
A swirl of green fog expels itself from Istlig's mouth. It fills the room and snakes into Khenal's ear. He can feel the presence of the daemon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 07, 2011, 03:50:48 am
*Right there, Doctor Bubbles steps in with some important news:*
"Oh, Khenal! Thundersplinter told me that Miss Charity was responsible for the order for beating..."
My voice trails off as I notice the green fog.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 07, 2011, 03:53:54 am
The fog thickens in a desperate attempt to stop the sound from entering.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 07, 2011, 03:55:59 am
*Bubbles shouts again, only then noticing the other pony in the scene*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 04:05:18 am
The green fog vanishes into my ear.  After a few moments, my eyes open and I see the looks on the faces of Dr. Bubbles and Starkey.  My posture is slightly different, like I'm carrying a heavy load, and my eyes look sunken and tired.

"That cell would be great, Commander"

Is all I say before my eyes roll upward and I collapse.

**********
Tomorrow, great revelations into Khenal's past.  Right now, bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 07, 2011, 04:06:25 am
Oh you little...
Making me wait on you is NOT COOL
*Bubbles and Starkey rush Khenal to one of the hospital beds*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 07, 2011, 04:14:07 am
Well, it's a little past 1am, and I like to sleep.  Sorry about making you wait on me.  Dsarker's "memory eater" might escape from the trap Khenal had laid for it, giving you some drama to play with until tomorrow.  Up to him.  Until then, g'night!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 03:12:32 pm
((Might as well get the jump on things while I've got a little time.))

"No doctor, to the cells! I'll not have this thing loose in Glitterglen in an alicorn's body!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 07, 2011, 03:17:17 pm
(If you guys are taking this to the prison block I would remind everypony that every cell has at least one prisoner at the moment. Due to my little dictator's crack down on smugglers.) And now I'm off to class.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 07, 2011, 04:15:34 pm
((You guys do realize Psycho passed out from lack of air about a day ago. I don't his body is doing so well without air.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 04:30:38 pm
((You have a nose, man. It's not just for smelling.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 07, 2011, 04:41:50 pm
((*FACE PUNCH* Regardless, any plans to untie poor Psycho?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 07, 2011, 04:45:52 pm
((Eventually... ;D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 07, 2011, 11:36:49 pm
((Eventually... ;D))
((We haven't had day without action yet, let's not start today!  :D))
((Ok...I just read the single most horrific story ever...suffice to say, it involved emo-goth-satanist levels of gore...and i'm TRULY traumatized...I'm literally whimpering as I type this...oh god...)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 08, 2011, 03:13:10 am
((Well, it's really late over here, and Khenal and the doc haven't shown up. I'm off to bed.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 08, 2011, 03:32:40 pm
So, who will Khenal be sharing a cell with?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 08, 2011, 03:42:24 pm
So, who will Khenal be sharing a cell with?

Choices are Shasad (Peytrel's dad) , the cell with Pillomino, and Friesden, or a cell with other nameless ponies. I'd vote for Peytrel's dad's cell. But I have no real say in it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 08, 2011, 11:28:41 pm
((any plans today?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 08, 2011, 11:54:49 pm
Just waiting till Khenal's in a cell.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 08, 2011, 11:55:49 pm
Just waiting till Khenal's in a cell.
((jeopardy music plays.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 12:54:14 am
((The jeopardy music explodes into flames. In other words, can't we just assume that he's in it already?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 12:55:57 am
Hmm. We can't keep going until Khenal's cell mate has been decided. Looking back, it was Doctor Bubbles who was tasked with putting him in a cell. We can't wait for Ansontan2000 forever, thus I propose that if he doesn't post by morning (or sooner, preferably sooner, if that's okay with everyone). Then we declare him MIA, and continue anyway, with Khanel in a cell with Peytrel's father, as he is the only singular pony that is related to any pony of note. Alternatively, we can have the guard move one prisoner in with another, giving Khenal a private cell.

Yes, if ansontan doesn't post by next time you're online Khenal, I suggest you just pick one of the above choices and roll with whatever you have planned.

Unless anyone objects to this, or the good doctor posts before then.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 01:19:10 am
It seems most likely that Starkey would move one of the prisoners to give Khenal a private cell.  After all, as far as he knows,  Khenal just got possessed by a demon.  Unless Impending Doom or Ansontan show up before an hour or so, I'll assume that the case and continue.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 01:37:06 am
I for one, am going to bed. It's 1:37 AM and I need my sleep in order to function.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 09, 2011, 01:39:16 am
While we're waiting - Is there any chance of a few screenshots of the fortress?

Darkening Kaos, CIS, LUH.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 03:02:06 am
While we're waiting - Is there any chance of a few screenshots of the fortress?

Darkening Kaos, CIS, LUH.
A reasonable request that I will attempt to fulfill. Prepare to be entirely underwhelmed by my lackluster fortress design.

Big pictures ahead, you have been warned.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 09, 2011, 03:46:09 am
I am here!
Sorry for the wait, was too busy playing MW3 all day :D
*I take Khenal to the jail, as he requested, and put him in a cell with Peytral's father.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 03:55:06 am
Shortly after the cell is closed, my eyes open and I look around.  I spot Dr Bubbles, but don't see Commander Starkey.  'He's probably rounding up the rest of the guard.'

My horn glows and my book appears in front of me, along with an ink well and quill.


"Sorry, Dr. Bubbles, but I have to write this down right now.  I don't know how many ponies need to know about this, and I think reading it would be simpler."




Khenal's Book, Chapter 49


I never thought I would miss ordinary daemons, my book.  I suppose I should fill you in on what's happened regarding the so called "smugglers".  Two were beaten to death, and Thunder Splinter may die from the injuries she received from one of the possessed guard.  Istlig was the one who murdered the two, I don't recall who beat poor Thunder Splinter within an inch of her life.  However, calling Istlig the murderer is a bit innacurate, he was possessed.  In fact, several ponies were possessed by the same entity.

After Commander Starkey and Sargent Carrot confronted me about the deaths of Bokbon and Nanges, we set out to confront the rest of the guard.  I was expecting.... I don't know what I was expecting, but I certainly didn't expect Istlig to simply report to me like nothing had happened and lodge a complaint about using real weapons instead of wooden ones for the "beatings".  I especially didn't expect to hear him claim nopony was dead.  When I corrected him, he seemed to fall appart and suddenly produced a dagger to slay himself with.  I was able to disarm him while Commander Starkey restrained him and started demanding answers.

The demon decided to answer them, though it was annoyingly vague about almost everything.  It claimed several names that I doubt any pony would be able to actually say, and was even vague on what kind of thing it was.  I sarcastically named it "Schmoe" and called it a memory eater, as it claimed to derive sustenance from memories.

Oh, it's arrogance, my book!  It delighted in breaking ponies and claimed that Friesden was it's first with glee!  It's only regret that her fractured mind was not to it's taste!  I dared it to try to take me, thinking I would be able to handle it simply by virtue of being an alicorn.  As I was, I almost certainly would have succumbed to it.  Only by virtue of my unremembered past did I posess the skill to defeat it, my belief in my friends giving the power to survive.  My old self was not so inspired by friends, but I think that's at least partially why I did what I did back then.

I know this must sound confusing, my book.  If it's confusing to read, imagine how confusing it is to have in your head, to have as your past.  My next chapter in you will be the last, though not my last chapter ever, I hope.  You are growing full, and I think will only just contain the brief history of my past.  And the number 50 is a nice, round number to end a book on.




Chapter 50



I was no simple lazy alicorn in the capitol, my book.  I was one of the premier users of mental magic, well versed in theory and application of my art.  Application was, admittedly, rare for mental magics.  It is a field that is only barely permitted, only as a potential cure for trauma and occasionally used to weed out traitors and other undesirables.  I even studded actual mind control so that I could more easily identify those under it's influence and those who would dare rob a pony of their free will.

I then met my first possessed ponies.  It's well known that occasionally, a pony will suddenly get inspired to create something unparalleled.  Sometimes a weapon of unsurpassed balance and edge, sometimes a single sock with so many spikes as to be unwearable, but always something of unrivaled craftsponyship.  This is a form of possession, though the spirits responsible for these strange moods are rarely malevolent.

Daemon possession is very different, my book.  I was brought a pony possessed by a daemon, and I was fascinated.  That memory eater was not the only one so arrogant, I am ashamed to admit.  I researched and studied that pony, and others that were eventually brought to me.  Nothing I tried could oust a daemon once it settled in, but occasionally one of the possessed would overcome the daemon and fully return to their senses.  Periods of lucidity were common, but actual defeat of the daemons was very rare.

I was obsessed, my book, with finding some way of giving those ponies their bodies back.  In my hubris, I experimented with mind control spells to force a daemon into the background and let a possessed pony live a normal life.  At first, the experiment was a huge success!  The daemons couldn't overcome strong mind control spells, and giving the reigns to the possessed seemed the perfect answer.  As the experiment continued, however, it became obvious that the possessed ponies were loosing their mental toughness.  If the spell wasn't refreshed in time, the ponies very quickly reverted to daemon control.  The hosts were becoming too reliant on the spells and forgetting how to defend their minds!

And I, fool I was, ignored it.  These ponies had their lives back, they only needed to see a specialist every week to get their spells refreshed.  Surely that was better than being a puppet to a daemon?  By the time I felt ready to put the treatment to the general public, I had eight possessed ponies and eight handlers who could cast the mind control spells.  All we had to do was to remember to refresh those spells, and surely they were too important for anypony to forget, right?

The routine of it all, I think, was ultimately what brought about the massacre.  Only one pony had to shirk their duty for it all to collapse, and eventually it happened.  Two dozen ponies lost their lives before the daemons were finally banished or sealed away.  Daemons were vulnerable without a host and could be sealed away or banished by a skilled mage.  I would have been numbered among the dead too, if it weren't for a handful of unicorns who arrived to seal several daemons who were poised to take me.

But that was not the worst of it, my book.  Those daemons knew of my prowess with mental magic.  In the hooves of a daemon, untold destruction could be wrought with my abilities, and they would stop at nothing to have me.  I considered suicide for a time, but never followed through.  I couldn't try to fix my mistake if I was dead, and I owed it to those ponies to keep trying.  I could try sealing my memories of those spells, but it would take a lot of power and a lot of time to cast a memory seal like that.  My life, after all, was dedicated to studying mental magic, so there would be a lot of memories to seal.  Only an alicorn would have the power to cast a seal like that, and I trusted none of the alicorns of the capitol with this responsibility.

I could cast it myself, but those were the memories that needed sealing in the first place!  Then I had an idea, my book: I would use a mental construct!  I'd use a spell loop to ensure my memories of mental magic were suppressed and stayed suppressed.  It would put a significant amount of my magical energy out of my grasp while the spell functioned, but it would work!  It could even repress new memories that could lead in dangerous directions.  It would have my memories to cross-reference for what should and shouldn't be repressed.  It was risky, but I couldn't trust anypony but myself to repress my memories, and now I had a way to do just that.

It took almost a year to fully research and prepare the spell, but I was finally ready.  Once my memories were sealed and my power severely reduced, the princess had little use for me at the capitol.  She banished me here, to Glitter Glen, likely hoping I'd die here.

I won't go into the details of my battle with the memory eater, my book, but I will tell you why I remember my past now.  The memory eater attacked my spell loop the first chance it got.  Whether it wanted the memories it kept locked away or hopped to crush what appeared to be a significant magical threat, I don't know.  With my mental magics back, and the inspiration of my friends, the memory eater was no more.  It was still a significant battle, but I did eventually win.

My friends.  I hope they can trust me after this.  I will ask them to read you, my book.  I am tired of secrets.  They deserve to know my past.  Daemons and worse will be coming, sooner or later they will show their presence.  If Glitter Glen is to prevail, everypony needs to know of this new threat. 



I close my book, and levitate it out through the bars to rest on the floor close to Dr. Bubbles.

"Would you please read my book, Bubbles?  Or get a unicorn to scan it for magic first if you don't trust me right now?  I wouldn't blame you, honestly."

***************

I've had this reveal cooking up for a while now.  If you guys see anything you don't like that effects our canon or your character poorly, I'll edit things, but this is Khenal's past.  I'm not done with him yet, not by a long shot.  Hope you guys enjoyed the freaking novel's worth of text ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 09, 2011, 03:59:57 am
Nice wall of text you have there. Ah well, I was reading the game of thrones so i'm fine.
"Sure, Khenal"
*Bubbles takes the book and begins to read*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 04:21:22 am
Frieden's New Diary.

Lost. Everything is lost. And all I had before is gone. My head is clear now. I am alone in here, like at the coming of the frost. And there's a cold winter chill in my stony heart.

The daemon is free. It got out.

If I knew why I had it in me, I can't remember. All I can remember in the symbols the alicorn told me. And my friend.

I don't know where I am. I don't know who I am. I don't know what language I'm writing. Something is missing, but I don't know what. Maybe if I make the symbols again it will go away. I don't know what they mean, but they are in the same letters as this language is. I'd ask for help, but I've forgotten how to speak. I do recall speaking, but I'm not sure how to do it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 04:30:29 am
As Bubbles reads, I lay down and close my eyes, lost in thought.  After several minutes, I bolt back to my hooves.

'Friesden!' 

I press against the bars of my cell, trying to look down the corridor at her cell.


"Friesden, can you hear me?  Do you remember me?  Do you remember anything?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 04:31:52 am
Friesden's New Diary.

One of the ponies is shouting. I can't even discern the words anymore.

Who am I? Why can I write? Why do I have this book?

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 09, 2011, 04:32:21 am
*Noticing Khenal*
"Khenal, do you want something?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 04:41:05 am
"I...yes.  Please check on Friesden.  I don't know..."

'Please be alright, Friesden.  Please be free of the memory eater.  Please.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 09, 2011, 04:41:31 am
* got to check on Friesden.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 04:42:22 am
Friesden lies mute in her cell.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 09, 2011, 04:42:58 am
*I turn back and tell Khenal that Friesden isn't saying anything.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 04:50:22 am
"Is she doing anything?  Staring at the wall?  Into space?  Pacing?  Anything?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 09, 2011, 07:23:38 am
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/576522 (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/576522)
(I HIGHLY SUGGEST YOU TURN DOWN YOUR VOLUME!)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 11:28:40 am
Enter Starkey, Otik, and the two marksponies, each escorting a single guard. Lacking cell space, they are all bound and left in the hallway. Starkey appears to have calmed down considerably: none of the other guards have been beaten. He instructs Dr. Bubbles to keep an eye on them.

Otik and her squad turn to leave. She turns back to Starkey.

"Cap'n, one las' time... are ye absolutely certain?"


"Yes, lieutenant, I'm certain. Bring her here."

"Aye sir."

They leave.


"Alright doctor, what's happened? Has it taken him? Is he winning?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 04:19:17 pm
'Ok, calm down.  She's not dead, Dr. Bubbles knows the difference between a dead pony and a quiet pony.'

"Commander Starkey!  How goes the search for the rest of the guard?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 04:22:23 pm
"I have four of them here. How many more do you have?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 04:27:35 pm
((You know, Carrot's been in tied to a weapon rack in the barracks for at least two days. He'll starve to death fairly soon.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 04:31:59 pm
((Two days real time. It's only been an hour or so IC. But if you insist...))

Carrot notices a bronze axe on the weapon rack next to his. If he stretches, he might be able to reach it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 04:40:28 pm
((Carrot has a short temper, just saying ::))
I stretch and grab the axe with my teeth and use it to slice the ropes. I then dash to the cell block, ready to speak a few choice words to the lieutenant.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 04:43:24 pm
"There should be three more.  Have they been cooperative?"


*******

I honestly have no idea how many are in the guard, though I've been running on the assumption that it's a full ten, including Khenal.  Unless King Strongbeard posts otherwise, lets roll with ten.

Edit, Hey, look, corrections!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 04:43:56 pm
"I have four of them here. How many more do you have?"
(To answer this question, out of character, the Fortress Guard has 8 memebers total, including Captain Khenal. Also, the melee squad has 9 (it was ten) and the pegasan markspony squad has 8. It did have more before the last ambush.)

Edit: Just noticed, some bad news for Thundersplinter. Our Bonesetter and suturer, doctor Alen, is one of the prisoners. Doctor Bubbles will have to fix Thunder up with his zero skill bone setting instead. Ouch.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 04:58:23 pm
How is that bad? Bone setting doesn't require skill to prevent infections.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 05:01:30 pm
How is that bad? Bone setting doesn't require skill to prevent infections.
Did not realize that. What about suturing? Bubbles also doesn't have that skill and the two ponies that do are imprisoned.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 05:06:51 pm
I believe that might, but the big one is wound dressing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 05:56:33 pm
((Drama time :D))

Charity is awakened by a light knocking on her door, accompanied by the singsong voice of Lieutenant Otik.

"Wake up, lil' sleepy-head!"

This is immediately followed by the sound of her bedroom door being bucked off its hinges. The countess finds herself staring down three crossbows at three very, very unhappy pegasi.


((Too far? Just right?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 06:01:11 pm
"Captain Otik," yells the Countess, "What is the meaning of this!" Charity demands as she attempts to position herself between the angry pegasi, and the her young filly, Belle who she was sleeping next to. The filly has just been awoken by the sounds of a door being bucked down and began to cry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 09, 2011, 06:09:16 pm
"I should go and see Thundersplinter..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 06:20:39 pm
I hear Charity's screams and rush to the source.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 07:27:37 pm
Otik stares over the top of her crossbow, unfazed.

"Yer gonna have t' come with us, ma'am."


- - - - Elsewhere - - - -

Passing the time, Starkey sits down in front of Friesden's cell. He smiles warmly at her.

"Hello, Miss Friesden. You... look like you're feeling better. How are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 07:31:06 pm
Charity leaves the crying foal in the care of her husband, and moves to go with the pegasi. "Fine, I'll go, but why are you doing all this? What's going on? Where are you taking me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 07:31:35 pm
Bah, accidenlty clicked quote instead of modify. Ignore this post.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 07:43:34 pm
Friesden stares mutely at the wall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 08:12:19 pm
This worries Starkey. He reaches a hoof through the bars to rest on her withers. She usually responds, even if only with mad ramblings.

"Miss Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 08:14:16 pm
Seeing the lieutenant leading Charity away, I charge at her, still holding the axe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 08:26:16 pm
Friesden winces as the strange pony touches her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 08:37:00 pm
Seeing the lieutenant leading Charity away, I charge at her, still holding the axe.
(Charges the lieutenant or Charity?)

Seeing the charging Carrot, with a bronze battle axe in his mouth, Charity, dives behind one of the marksponies. And screams.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 08:44:27 pm
((lieutenant, duh!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 08:49:19 pm
Seeing the Seargent charging towards them, one of the marksponies charges at him. They both fall in a heap.

"Head on commander, I'll handle this one!"


- - - - - -

Friesden's behavior is very distressing to Starkey. He rises.

"Khenal, do you still have your keys?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 08:50:30 pm
"Let Charity go!" I yell, through gritted teeth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 09:06:02 pm
"Pycho's on my side?" Thinks the confused Unicorn. "what is going on here anyway? The militia is fighting with itself, Otik bucked down my door and was dragging me away, and where is the guard? Is... is this a coup? No time to worry about that now. Sargent Carrot needs help." Charity, uses her telekinetic powers to grab the door, that was knocked off it's hinges and begins to swing it, wildly, at her captors, starting with the lieutenant.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 09:08:51 pm
"Charity, I don't know why these guys are after you, but I don't care! I refuse to let you get taken away! Fight with me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 09:15:03 pm
"I don't know what's going on either Sargent, but I intend to find out."

Charity swings her improvised weapon again, trying to hit the well trained and quick pegasi militia.

"Cryptson! Get your pick!" Calls the countess back into her room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 09:28:19 pm
Seargent Psycho Carrot. Of course. Who the clop else wpuld show up while she was trying to escort a highly trained unicorn? Otik raises her crossbow, swinging it towards the base of Charity's skull. At the Countess' cry, the third markspony turns to the bedroom door, his weapon ready.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 09:36:43 pm
I enter a martial trance. The world seemed to slow down to the point of turning back on itself. I prepare to toss my axe, calculating the correct angle for it to hit Otik and the other pony guarding the door, then I toss it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 09:45:00 pm
As the blow flies toward Charity's head she panics, she's no warrior, dropping her concentration, before being struck. She falls, and is knocked out cold.

(I hate to take over a claimed pony, but the guy who claimed Cryptson has never posted anything since so I'm going to anyway.)

From the door way a hulking mass of muscles and fat comes forth, it is the Legendary Miner Cryptson, followed by his faithful pet cat Rorul. The blue earthpony holds a solid steel pick in his mouth. He surveys the situation. His eyes find his wife's body, collapsed upon the floor. His eyes move to the pony standing over her, murder in his eyes. Cryptson has become enraged!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 09:48:53 pm
Unable to control the power from the martial trance, Psycho goes berserk, grabs the door, and tosses it at the lieutenant.
"I'LL KILL ALL OF YOU TRAITORS!!!!" I scream at the top of my lungs, attacking the other two marks-ponies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 10:02:02 pm
Sounds of the commotion reach the guard's quarters. Starkey bolts upright. It can only mean one thing.

"Actually, forget about the keys, Khenal."

He bolts out the door, following the sounds of combat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 10:10:40 pm
The door hits the lieutenant and blasts her across the hall, and impacts the wall on the other end. Assuming it killed her, Psycho tears the other two "traitors" to shreds.

With the deed done, Psycho comes out of the trance. Suffice to say, he didn't take what he saw very well.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 10:25:47 pm
((no DFhack, so I would assume no on-demand killing.))

Approaching the scene, Starkey skids to a halt as a wooden door and a certain pegasus mare come hurtling into view shortly before slammng into the wall. Otik tries in vain to stand, before collapsing in a heap on the floor. He turns, galloping back towards the barracks. Starkey bursts through the door.

"Everypony up! Come on, we have a situation, move your flanks!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 10:30:57 pm
I slump in my cell after Commander Starkey runs off to the sounds of fighting.

"I wish I had my keys, or at least knew where they were so I could teleport them here like my book.  I hope everypony is alright..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 10:35:37 pm
After Psycho and Cryptson drive off the marksponies, The blue stallion, calms himself, and gallops over to his wife, he drops his pick and he checks that she is alive and when he sees that she is he cradles her unconscious form.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 10:40:50 pm
"Ugh...I...No! I can't pass out now! I'll protect Charity until my last breath!"
I guard Charity unconscious body, ready to fight off anyone that tries to hurt her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 10:49:26 pm
The touching moment is cut short, as Cryptson looks up to find the hallway in front of him blocked by a wall of shields and blades, with dozens of pairs of eyes staring out from behind them. The voice of the captain calls out.

"Yield. We have you surrounded."

((StrongBeard/anyone with a pony in the military: do we have any dissenters? Are there any soldiers who would refuse to participate in what happens next (or what they Think is going to happen next) ?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 10:56:40 pm
((StrongBeard/anyone with a pony in the military: do we have any dissenters? Are there any soldiers who would refuse to participate in what happens next (or what they Think is going to happen next) ?))

(I don't think so, the only named ponies in the military are Starkey, Carrot, and Peytrel. And the others if they believed that Charity ordered the execution of Bokbon then they would probably follow Starkey. The guard might try to protect her but you already rounded most of them up.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 10:59:34 pm
Knowing that I am likely going to be killed, I yell

"Ponies, listen to me! You've been tricked! The three soldiers I fought off were trying to nab Charity! Charity would never want to execute those innocent ponies! I am protecting her! She and I are not the enemy here! Captain Starkey is! Only Starkey would have the authority to form such an elaborate coup! Only Starkey could've killed them! He's lying when he says he misses those ponies! If you want to arrest me, FORGET IT! If you want to kill me, TRY! If you want to help me, PLEASE DO! THE CHOICE IS YOURS! I WILL NOT GO DOWN WITHOUT A FIGHT! GOT THAT?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 11:03:07 pm
Meanwhile, in Khenal's head....


The trapped daemon has given up his resistance, at least for the moment.

She drags out a pack of what would appear to be popcorn, but which are clearly other memories.

"Mmmm!" he says in a delighted voice. "I can't wait to see how many blows it takes them to kill her. It's going to be just delicious!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 11:04:42 pm
Cryptson stands, and says, "You don't stand alone Sargent." and picks up his pick, staring down the entire militia.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 11:06:56 pm
Cryptson and I lock eyes,
"To the bitter end."
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Byfjv2REks8&feature=related
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 11:11:53 pm
'Hmph, I thought I might have missed a fragment of you.'

I snatch the memories from Schmoe

'And those are mine!  ...I think?  No matter, time to tighten your restraints I see.'

Several chains appear to further bind the demon, or at least this fragment of it.


"I wish I had that adamantine dagger..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 11:13:59 pm
The shield wall parts, allowing a familiar pegasus in full barding to step into view.

"Lay down that weapon, seargent. I'm not here to fight you."

He turns his gaze to Cryptson.

"Any of you."

((Did Bokbon have any significant relationships before she was executed?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 11:18:21 pm
bewildered by the sudden turn of events, Psycho only tightens the grip on the axe, ready to swing if necessary.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 11:19:08 pm
"Why did you have your lackey Otik break into our room, and try to take her away, commander? (the title passes over his tongue like a curse)" asks Cryptson with distrust and anger in his voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 11:23:49 pm
The memories do not belong to Khenal, but to the daemon.

"Oh, you! You're almost as fun as Friesden!" she says, laughing. "She tried to keep me locked up, too. But it turned her. She started off your typical Ingest worshipper...but soon she was mine. My playtoy. But she got boring, in the end. No matter how many times she tried to remember the symbols that unicorn friend of yours taught her, she never could. But the bitch couldn't force me out, either. I had to try and get out any way I could. It was a tomb. Not forever, of course, but for her lifetime. And the memories I would accrue. No, it was you who helped me that day, Khenal." He laughs again. "I'm now more free than ever, and free to remind you of your failures. Do try the popcorn, by the way. I don't doubt you'd love to see that unicorn again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 11:27:31 pm
"Is that not what one does with criminals, Mr. Cryptson? I'm sure by now, news of your wife's deeds has reached even your ears."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 11:27:31 pm
Sensing an opportunity, I swing the axe at Starkey, aiming for Starkey's head. The world appears to slow down for Starkey, He-
((What will commander Starkey do?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 11:34:42 pm
The chains continue thier work in strengthening the binding of the demon, moving now to muzzle the fiend.

'I will see to it you never harm another pony ever, even if I have to seal myself in an adamantine coffin and be cast into the magma sea!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 09, 2011, 11:35:48 pm
After Commander Starkey our skilled master of the axe in his steel plate, undoubtedly subdues the overzealous marks pony with the axe. Cryptson says. "Criminal!? The only criminal I see is filthy traitor and his platoon of stormtroopers."

At this Charity begins to stir on the ground, but she isn't quite awake yet.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 11:36:32 pm
"You won't be alive forever, Khenal. You'll give in."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 11:38:55 pm
((Ok, I just want to say something. I. LOVE. THIS. THREAD!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 11:39:15 pm
The axe finds purchase in the haft of an iron spear, thrust out from the shield wall. The accompanying shield rushes forward, knocking the weapon from his grasp before returning to its rightful place.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 09, 2011, 11:44:01 pm
'Eventually, perhaps.  But the coffin is only my backup.  I hope to have you dealt with long before I have to worry about how my remains are handled.'

The chains finish muzzling the memory eater, silencing it for now.  I carefully examine the bag of "popcorn", hoping to gain insight into what the memories might contain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 09, 2011, 11:45:50 pm
"Your a traitor to everypony, Starkey! All of you so called militia are! Cryptson, I think we both know what must be done."
Psycho then wishes that Khenal were here, realizing that he's truly the best friend he ever made. He decides to attempt to barrel through the line of shields, hoping to find the cells.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 11:47:01 pm
The first of the memories contains a newspaper, with the date highlighted. The day is an important one for Khenal - it was the day he started his plan to use mind control to stop the daemons from 'controlling' their hosts. As it unfolds, it reveals that the daemon Khenal first tried it on was an important one. The very memory eater in his head. More importantly....


The daemon was pretending.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 09, 2011, 11:50:43 pm
"Stormtroopers, Mister Cryptson? Is that what you see in us?"

"No, Mister Cryptson. Stormtroopers burn down a schoolhouse full of students because they suspect it might be a supply cache for political dissidents. It wasn't. I went back to check the next day. Stormtroopers have their way with a single mother, barely even a woman herself, whose only crime was that she spoke ill of a duke's grandson."

He strides confidently towards Cryptson and Charity, his voice taking on a tone of contempt and disgust.

"Stormtroopers flog a defenseless mare to death in broad daylight, because their leader lost a few of her pretty baubles."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 09, 2011, 11:54:07 pm
Friesden's Diary

Hmmm. Well. So it goes. I'm guessing so.

If only we were Friesden.


Friesden's new diary.

Ponies have been shouting at me all day. I try to ignore them, but they hurt. I can't bear their touch. Please, whatever there is out there, let it stop!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 12:00:17 am
I recoil at the memory, reflexively pouring more energy into the binding of the memory eater.  I glare at the fiend.

'You are a sneaky one, Schmoe.'

I place a memory seal on the popcorn, hoping that sealing the memories will weaken the memory eater and grant me more time to deal with the fiend properly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 10, 2011, 12:02:22 am
"Wha, what," stutters Cryptson, "She...she would never do that."

Chairty's eyes open, her head is throbbing, she can't quite remember why she's on the floor, until she looks around and sees the scene in front of her.

"C...Commander? What? What is going on? Otik hit me and..." Charity's line of thought is lost, before, "You! You are behind this. Why Starkey!? Is this all just to grab some power for yourself? You, who couldn't even make it in the real army as a lousy city guard and were sent out here to die with the rest us. And I trusted you anyway, and this is how you repay me. And where is Khenal? Did you have to arrest him too?"


Edit: Corrections
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 12:03:02 am
The daemon sighs in relief. "Oh, that does feel good, my friend. You have no idea how bad the amount of memory you can hold gets. Sooner or later, you just want to forget...but you never can. Once more, you have aided me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 12:07:17 am
((Starkey was never a soldier until Glitterglen. He was a city guard when he was banished.))

"Oh, she wouldn't would she? Why don't you tell him yourself, countess? Tell him about your precious amulets."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 12:08:45 am
((apparently I got through, seeing that nobody stopped me.))

I make it to the cells and yell, "Khenal! Where are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 12:13:29 am
My glare intensifies for a few moments, before I simply roll my eyes and ignore the memory eater.  The binding should keep it from doing anything but annoy me, at least for now.

In my cell, my eyes open and take a few moments to focus again.


"...Being in a cell is really boring, wow."

I prick up my ears, listening for the sounds of fighting.

"No more fighting, at least.  I really hope that's a good thing.  Huh, Carrot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 10, 2011, 12:15:53 am
"My amulets?" Charity looks confused, "Is this all because I had a few ponies flogged. They broke the law, and the cells where full, they had to be punished somehow, so I drew lots, it was only fair. Besides it isn't like I had them executed. I'm not a monster. What is this really about."

(Charity thinks she's telling the truth. Earlier it was said that Friesden, [the deamon inside her actually] had caused the beatings to be to death. Charity ordered floggings, not executions, although only Khenal would know what she asked for, as she would have passed the order through him.")
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 12:17:27 am
I rush over to where Khenal's voice came from,
"By Celestia's mane, you're ok! You have no idea what I've been through!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 12:21:30 am
"Are you alright? I heard fighting, what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 12:22:32 am
A voice calls out from the assembled soldiers.

"You clopping liar! My Bokbon is dead! you murdered her, you bitch!"

Waves of anger ripple through the assembled ranks. Starkey raises a hoof.

"SIIIII-LENCE!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 12:25:38 am
Psycho drew in a deep breath, then said,
"Starkey's turned on us! He sent the whole militia after Celestia! He had his men literally knock down her door! I protected her until her husband arrived on the scene! Then I realized that I needed your help, so I had to charge through the entire militia-filled hallway to get here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 10, 2011, 12:27:22 am
Charity thinks back and remembers Bokbon was on the list of those to receive floggings instead of jail time.

"Bokbon...Murdered...What what has happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 12:27:45 am
A voice echoes in Khenal's head...the voice of the daemon.

"Now, if I could have that popcorn back, I'm hoping to get a front seat view to the chaos. Come on! Let's see how you settle the situation!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 12:30:06 am
Noticing that something is deeply troubling Khenal, I say,

"Khenal, you're not yourself! I know you're in jail, but something much more horrible must be bothering you if you have that kind of look! You look like you've been to hell and back!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 12:32:17 am
"Bokbon Shigosotil and Nanges Lisigbol. Both dead, beaten to death by your thugs. Thundersplinter may join them: she clings to life in the infirmary as we speak."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 12:33:54 am
'Shut up, Schmoe!'


"Uh...what?  Starkey has been helping me round up the guard to make sure that memory eater's influence didn't get extended too far.  It's not surprising that he'd go to arrest Charity as well, the daemon may have gotten to her."

"Wait, literally knocked her door down?  Uh-oh.  Bokbon was part of the militia, and the militia would have been sent to arrest her!  If the ponies sent were his friends..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 10, 2011, 12:41:38 am
"Beaten, to death?" Charity looks horrified, "I, I would never give an order like that. And even if I were the kind of pony to order executions over bucking amulets, do you really think I would choose Thudersplinter to be on the list, she's one of my oldest friends. And Nanges, poor Nanges is, was, one of my favorite artists, I have his work in both my office and my dining room and all over my family's tomb. Do you really think I'd have them killed over so little, you clopping horsefly, think about the accusations you are making. Starkey we've known each other for years, do you really believe me capable of this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 12:43:21 am
"Funny story...I may have thrown said door at the lieutenant and knocked her all the way to the other side of the hall."
All of a sudden I sputter and say, "MEMORY EATER?! WHAT'RE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!"

((I was still tied to the weapon racks during the whole changing hosts scene))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 12:50:35 am
"Come on, it'll be fun! I bet her head gets caved in at two bucks. Friesden thought one, but I respect Charity. I think she's tougher than one buck. How about you? I'm sure we could arrange a betting pool."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 12:55:57 am
"You threw the... right, you were rounding up the rest of the militia when we met Istlig.  The short version is that there are multiple types of daemons, and some devour memories to gain strength.  This memory eater was particularly powerful and took several ponies as hosts.  It has...been dealt with for now, but there is a large mess to clean.  If you want a fuller version, look for Dr. Bubbles, I'm pretty sure he has my book."

I look Carrot in the eyes.

"You are one of my friends and I would like you to read it as well, Carrot.  My story is a bit...complicated, and I'd quickly loose my voice repeating it to everypony who deserves to know.  And I hope you will still be my friend after you read it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 01:02:11 am
Smiling, I say "I already know. Remember when I said I had gotten some of your memories? I know all about what you did, and you know what? I don't care. You were doing the right thing, trying to help ponies by casting out the daemons! Oh, did I mention that I was tied to the weapon racks after 'rounding up the militia'?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 01:06:15 am
I mentally give Schmoe another withering glare before focusing on Carrot again.

"...Why were you tied to a weapon rack?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 01:13:48 am
I blush brightly, "uhhhmmm...Well...I sort of slapped the lieutenant in the face. She had her men tie me up. they said 'She doesn't like to be touched'. There's a reason I threw the door at her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 01:15:20 am
"Then why did you have them beaten at all? A fine, prison time, anything else would have been more than sufficient! Why did you have to resort to this... this barbarism!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 01:20:56 am
I facehoof at that.

"You really need to learn to get your temper under control, Carrot.  The lieutenant isn't an enemy, and you know it.  You're a great friend, but your temper gets you into serious trouble sometimes, and I don't like seeing my friends in trouble."

I give him a gentle smile to assure him there's no malice in my words.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 10, 2011, 01:22:50 am
"I didn't mean for this to happen. I thought I was being lenient. A few bruises and they'd be right back to work. It wasn't ideal, but we didn't have enough cells to go around. And if anyone is to blame, you should ask Khenal, I told him to have them flogged, but it was his guards that murdered them."

(Tonight's been awesome guys but I have got to get some sleep.)

(In other news last I looked we had 5 votes for the Hall of Legends, and that's great. I haven't voted because I started the thread and it would feel like voting for myself, but hey, if anyone out there is reading this and hasn't voted yet, please consider doing so.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 01:29:43 am
"Khenal..." I say with a smile "Your hiding something from me. Something is ebbing away at your sub conscious. Actually, I have no idea how I know that..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 01:38:01 am
"Uh...so has your 'condition' changed any?"  I say in a lame attempt to change the subject.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 01:45:27 am
"Khenal." says the daemon.

"Khenal." he says again, more urgently.

"KHENAL!" the daemons is basically shouting now.

"I didn't drink him. Somedaemon else did."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 01:59:39 am
I wince from Schmoe's yelling in my head.

'Unless you can tell me who did, or how to fix him, I don't particularly care!'



*********
Somedaemon

This, this right here?  This made me laugh out loud.  You are awesome :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 02:09:08 am
"Nice try. Now, is there by any chance, a reason your sweating whenever your not talking?" I say with a smirk.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 02:09:22 am
"No, no, no! That means he might be still there! Be careful! I don't want to lose you just yet!"

********


I try :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 02:17:15 am
'Well, that's weird'

I let out a heavy sigh and slump a bit.


"Even bound, daemons seem unable to be quiet..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 02:30:54 am
A look a horror washes over Psycho "YOU HAVE A DAEMON INSIDE OF YOU?!?!?!?!??" I scream, unaware of how loud i'm getting.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 02:34:31 am
"It's bound!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 02:38:11 am
I laugh nervously, "B-b-ound?! HAH! Oh, and, I have the sudden urge to say 'honor'." Psycho says, before collapsing in a heap.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 10, 2011, 02:42:19 am
From the diary of ThunderSplinter,
{After seeing Bubbles try to thread a hawser into a crochet needle, ThunderSplinter begins writing}

This is the last will and testament of ThunderSplinter, being of sound mind and .... well mind anyway.  {Another glare at Bubble when he drops the needle}  It seems my time is up and I need to put my affairs in order.

To Khenal, I bequeath my family's heirloom ☼chisel☼ and *mallet*, hoping that he honours them with honest, hard work.
To Friesden, I hope she accepts my ☼bed☼ for her comfort and ☼lapping stone☼ to keep her scalpels sharp.

{There is a disturbance and ThunderSplinter sighs as Bubbles attends to a filly with an ingrown eyelash, anything to put off the moment when her life is in his hooves}

There is not much left to show for my life, most of my possessions were left behind when I was exiled.  My word and work speak for me, and in that, I leave Charity an apology - when filling in for a sick hauler and taking that bin to the depot, I did not realise that it contained contraband.  And now, Bubbles is waiting for me to finish this entry so he can start to operate, I pray that I survive the operation as well as I have survived the injuries thus far.

ThunderSplinter.

Final instructions - keep this document in the bookkeeper's office to be executed in the event of my passing.

{OOC - the s-caps were great, KingStrongbeard, It's nice to have some sort of perspective of where things are happening.

            Darkening Kaos cancels lurking - interupted by avalanche of posts

Keep up the entertaining read, guys}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 02:45:14 am
((One word good sir. Brilliant.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 02:47:13 am
Starkey wheels on the countess, and for the first time he locks eyes with her. What he finds, he does not expect: Sincerity. She isn't lying to him. Horror. She didn't want this. And perhaps a little... remorse? Something inside him breaks. this... this is wrong, this is all wrong. Starkey finds that his hindlegs can no longer support him. He falls to his haunches and sits in silence for a while, the countess, her husband, and the whole military of Glitterglen never taking their eyes from him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 02:48:29 am
"Are you alright, Carrot?  I mean, ya, it's a huge thing I just dropped on you, but now you know why I tried to keep it to myself.  I don't want to make you worry.  But now you do know, so you can help me, let me know if I start acting wrong.  We can't let it hurt anypony else.  Please, Carrot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 02:52:51 am
"Khenal, I know what honour means. He's tricking you. The daemon is in him still. Keep us in this nice safe cell, why don't you? Khenal? The daemon knows me, and I can tell you he is too powerful for you to handle. Just stay in the cell, don't let him near."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 02:55:54 am
I slowly get back up. "Urrrggg...I feel like something cracked my head open, then ate it, died, caught on fire...you get the ideas...URRRG" I vomit.
"Anyway...I'm fine. Just don't forget to honor. RAH! why do I keep saying that?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 02:58:31 am
'I am staying in this cell, because this whole mess is at least partially my fault!  And all that "honour" business was you!'

"Uh, maybe you should go lay down, Carrot.  And apologize to the lieutenant for, um, knocking her out with a door?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 02:59:21 am
"I'm fine! Whatever is left of that being is...honor...SHUT UP!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 03:02:40 am
"No, it wasn't. I used it once or twice here, to disguise my presence...you know why. But that daemon...well, he created it. It's his calling card. Just stay in the cell. Against the wall. Don't try to find anything. There's probably a blade here with honour on it. That's his calling card. He gets ponies to go crazy and want to kill themselves. Don't try it, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 03:07:02 am
Psycho loses all the fear in his face, replaced by an eerie calmness.
"I can hear you, and he's right. Honor. Oh, did I mention that all the sharp objects in the hospital have honor on them now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 03:10:40 am
"Maybe...just stop talking?"

'Huh, you actually sound scared, Schmoe.  And wouldn't my death get you your freedom?'

I then notice Carrot's expression change.

"Uh..."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 03:11:34 am
"He'd eat me alive. Stay away from him. Call for help. Just don't get near him. Hear me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 03:15:21 am
Khenal hears a clamor from nearby. Many ponies are walking quite noisily down the hall just outside.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 03:16:37 am
I grab the key, WHICH WAS HANGING NEXT TO KHENAL'S CELL, and unlock the cell.
I speak to khenal in a mocking tone "Now, Schmoe, you sound so scared. What ever happened to Mr. 'I can posses multiple bodies at once!'? Aww, you poor thing. I can tell you still have the strength to control this pathetic pony. So, do it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 03:18:55 am
"HELP!"

My horn glows brightly as I hold my cell door closed with all my strength.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 03:20:26 am
"Khenal. Remember all those bindings you put on me? Put them on him. Now. It won't stop him but it might slow him down."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 03:21:07 am
I lazily punch the door, snapping the bars backwards as if they were silly putty. I walk in.
"Why, the fun hasn't even started yet! Schmoe, come on out of that pathetic wretch. I know you can hear me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 03:23:15 am
Somepony pokes their head through the doorway. A single soldier, from Starkey's ground squad.

"Hullo? I heard a shout, is something the matter?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 03:23:32 am
Friesden's New Diary

Friesden. Read this and do exactly as I tell you.

We are under attack by a daemon. If you write these words on your body, it will let me in, but not him. Got it?

Write these words: Unum Est Optimum Eudaemonium.


Now, Friesden. Not much time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 03:26:23 am
'He just went around my magic.  Fine, lets try the more direct approach!'

My horn takes on a more subdued glow, the glow of mental magics.  Ethereal chains spring from the floor to bind Carrot, or more precicely, to bind the daemon controlling him.


"Carrot, can you hear me?  I can only do so much from here!  You need to fight it also!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 03:29:54 am
Friesden mutely begins to pick up quill and ink and inscribes the letters on her body.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 03:30:27 am
"You idiots! Psycho Carrot...HAH! that name is an invention! That's not even his real name! He doesn't have a real name! What he IS, is one of Khenal's...test subjects. To be specific, the FIRST one to go mad."
((Yes, me bad pony))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 03:40:50 am
Seeing the strange ghostly chains, the soldier calls out down the hallway. In short order, several armored soldiers are barreling down the hallway towards Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 03:43:40 am
Seeing the strange ghostly chains, the soldier calls out down the hallway. In short order, several armored soldiers are barreling down the hallway towards Carrot.
((Keyword, mental. Mind. Inside-of-your-head.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 03:47:14 am
'Impossible, they all-'

I recall Carrot's condition.

'...Oh.'

My magic falters for a moment, before flaring up with renewed vigor.  More and more ethereal chains stretch from the walls, ceiling and floor of the jail.  They quickly start wrapping about Carrot's frame.

'I promised to try to fix my mistakes from back then, and there's no time like the present!'
 

"Carrot, I'm sorry I couldn't save you back then, but I wont fail you a second time!"

*************

Ethereal, the most "real" of the mental magics :p  After all, the more senses that are fooled, the harder it is to resist.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 03:49:02 am
"...Its...fine.................." Psycho says, straining.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 03:49:16 am
As Friesden finishes the writing, she freezes stock still. New purpose fills her limbs, and in a flare of power the cell door disintegrates.

She strides out on two hooves.

Don't get close to him, ponies. That would be suicide. The words impact in the world, like a crossbow bolt slamming home.

Friesden, say goodbye, if you would.

Her mouth opens, and she says "Iiiiiiiii kkkkkaaaaaannnnnn zzzzzppeeeaaaaakkkk. Gggggoooooooodddddbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyeeee."

Her forelimbs explode into fire.


Well, my foe. Shall we?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 03:52:50 am
The strained look vanishes, replaced by a smirk,
"Schmoe...your fired. AHAHAHAHAHAHHA! Oh, laugh a little! Khenal, funny? Little bit? Hm? ANYWAY! YOU'RE ON!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 03:55:31 am
((I swear, this is turning into ghost rider!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 03:56:59 am
Khenal, for my sake, run. Have a life. A wife. A family.

Name your first born after me or Friesden, eh?



The possessed mare turns to Carrot.

Relax. I'm not the one expecting to win here. Let's take this outside, shall we?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 03:57:46 am
"Friesden!"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 03:58:08 am
Two horrifying apparitions are now striding down the hall. Naturally, the soldiers all turn tail.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 03:59:22 am
She's with you now, Khenal, more than you know.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 04:00:11 am
"At last, some civility around here!" I trot past the frozen-from-shock soldier, and happily head outside.
"Now, what kind of game do you want to play? I prefer hurling each other off a cliff. The one that doesn't die wins."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 04:03:03 am
I prefer killing you now. Khenal has bound you, hasn't he. You've tried to stop it. But you cannot resist it.

Fire erupts from Friesden's forelimb and spurts towards the possessed Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 04:06:25 am
Carrot-but-not-actually-Carrot trots out into the hall...

Right into the middle of the bulk of the Glitterglen militia, returning to the barracks after... something.

they are irritated. They are tired. They are armed. And now two daemonically-possessed ponies are battling it out in the hallway and it's blocking them from their beds. you can guess what happens next.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 04:07:04 am
Maintaining my composure, I say "Well. I am about to die. Whoops, no I'm not!" I try to leave the body, but the chains keep me grounded.
"WELLLLLLLL......................shit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 04:08:50 am
You're doomed, my friend. Even the Lord of Battle himself couldn't save you now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 04:10:53 am
STILL keeping my composure in check, I say, "Kindly spare the body? It would make SUCH a mess if I were to burn and melt all over the floor."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 04:14:59 am
Fight then. Destroy me or die.

Another ball fo fire appears and the daemon-possessed Friesden sets a wall around the duel.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 10, 2011, 04:16:52 am
What the hell happened? I leave for half a day and this thread absolutely EXPLODES!
1 more vote guys, to the hall of legends!
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*I treat to Thundersplinter's wounds, and am relieved to see that he will ((PLEASE!)) survive.*

OMG OMG OMG OMG lol, reply 1000
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 04:18:45 am
The charging wall of pure steel, horseflesh, and anger screeches to a halt just outside the ring of fire. Godsdammit, now they're being denied a perfectly good fight as well? A few members of the aerial squadron raise up and try to take pot-shots over the tops of the flames.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 04:20:00 am
I snap one of the mental chains, allowing just enough leeway for me to influence one of the spectators to fight.
"What? You thought that I'd fight? No, no, no, that's my host's j-AH HA!"

Psycho shudders, the daemon hiding back inside.
"Uhhh...Why is there a flaming pony in front of me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 04:28:39 am
Cast out your daemon or we will do it for you.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 04:29:36 am
"Carrot!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 04:30:25 am
((I can't type anymore, i'm about to pass out from tiredness, for real it's 4:29 AM, sorry, but good night guys!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 10, 2011, 02:25:51 pm
(Unless I'm mistaken it seems that the militia has left Charity and her husband alone. I'm also, going to assume she doesn't hear the sounds of the demons fighting several floors up and through several doors, because I don't want to make it any more of a clusterfuck of RP then it already is. Not that it isn't an awesome clusterfuck, just don't think Charity being involved would add much except more confusion.)

 After the couple shares a tender moment and comforts their filly, Charity leaves to visit Thundersplinter in the Hospital. While Cryptson tries to fix the artifact door Otik knocked off it's hinges.  She arrives shortly after Bubbles finshed "sewing" up the wounds. Charity with tears in her eyes, throws herself at her friend, and through the tears, apologizes again and again, while trying to explain what happened. When Bubbles overhears that she was hit in the head, she will be checked for a concussion, before she heads home. Upon returning home, she lights a candle and starts to write in her journal.

Charity's Journal

I don't know exactly where to start. My family had just turned in for the night, and everything was normal, then in the middle of the night my door was kicked off it's hinges, and Otik, and three memebers of his pegasi squad, crossbows, readied and pointed at me, tried to take me away, and they would have if not for the bravery of Sargent Captain Carrot. (His actions will have definitely earned him a promotion) Carrot saw them taking me away and charged them, with an axe. I used my telekinesis to help him fight them off with the only heavy object available, my own *Cow Calf Bone Door*. And I called for my husband to grab his pick. But I'm no warrior and Otik hit me in the back of the head, and I dropped. What happened next, I only know from Cryptson's words. He told me that he and Carrot fought the pegasi until they retreated, said Psycho threw the door at Otik knocking him out of the air. Impressive. Then, Starkey came, and tried to convince them that I was responsible for the death of two ponies, and the wounding of Thundersplinter. During their talk I regained consiousness and told them the truth, they seemed to believe me since the Commander dropped down and then they left. I then went to the Hostpital to apologize to Thunder, I only hope she can believe me, and forgive me. I may not have given the order, but I still should have been present when the punishment was carried out, if I had been, then this tragedy never would have happened.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 02:35:40 pm
((if i'm not executed for hurling a door at someone, then thanks for promoting me!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 10, 2011, 02:40:14 pm
((if i'm not executed for hurling a door at someone, then thanks for promoting me!))

You threw the door at someone who was threatening the Countess, and proceeded to defend her against a much larger force. If that doesn't get you a medal and a promotion, I don't know what does. Also, all the captains, have 2x3 rooms instead of the 1x3 rooms average recruits and civilians have. Assuming you aren't about to die to whatever deamon craziness is going on. Carrot, and Kil are moving up in the world. Although you may have made an enemy out of Captain Otik, and I have a feeling the Commander doesn't like you, so you'll still have to deal with that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 03:50:49 pm
"Khenal? Should I even bother asking you why there's flaming pony vaguely resembling friesden, directly in front of me? Or have I lost my marbles?" I ask, wearily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 04:48:50 pm
"You still have your marbles, I think.  You also still have a daemon in you.  I'm not sure what's going on, but you and Friesden are both possessed by extraordinarily powerful daemons, and hers seems bent on destroying yours.  I...I don't think I can stop it either, at least not while keeping yours in check as well.  You need to oust it, and quickly."

While I talk with carrot, the chains continue their job of binding the daemon.  With it no longer actively struggling against the binding, the spell seems to be going well and strengthening quickly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 05:02:41 pm
"Oh. Well, no sense in going insane until after the threat is gone. How do I get it out?"
'You will obey. kill-'
'shut up! This is MY body!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 05:06:50 pm
Fight back, damn you!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 05:08:32 pm
"What're you talking about?! I'm just a markspony! I don't even have my crossbow!"
                          \/
                      'KILL THEM!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 05:25:16 pm
"You have to cast it out!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 05:31:33 pm
"how?! Do I just tell it go away? Because I tried that!"
'Tasty memories, Psycho.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 05:35:27 pm
"Confront it!  Grab the chains and drag it out if you have to!  Fight it with everything you have!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 05:42:00 pm
"RAAGH! I think I just forgot my name! I dunno how much longer I can fight it before ending up like Friesden!"
 
Meanwhile, inside Psycho's head...

Psycho grabs the daemon by the throat, thinking he can suffocate it.
'HAHAHAAHHA! Pathetic! Can I another memory to eat?'
'I may not remember who I am anymore, but I do know that you must leave my body, FOR GOOD!!!!'
'HAH! That's rich!'
and with that, all the chains shatter to mind-dust.
'See? You cannot hope to defeat me. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to eat some more memories.'
Psycho in both his mind, and in the real world, slumps to the ground crying.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 05:49:02 pm
The backlash of the chains shattering all at once sends Khenal to the floor in pain.

"C-Carrot!  You can't give up!  Fighting a daemon is all about will!  Remember what you fight for and don't let it go!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 05:51:47 pm
"I give up, Khenal. What's the point? No matter how many times we cast the daemon out, he just keeps coming back...There's no hope..." Psycho says, completely melancholy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 05:53:01 pm
Da"mn you. Fight back. Damn you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 05:58:05 pm
"Never give up, Carrot!  You are a fighting pony, you can't let this daemon win!  Not just for you, but for your friends!  For your Wife!  There is more on the line in this fight than yourself, please don't let us down!"

I shakily get to my feet to try to go to Carrot, but fall over after a few steps.  Groaning in pain, I extend my hoof towards him.

"Please, Carrot.  I don't want to loose my friend..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 06:09:14 pm
"I can't...I just...can't. I...I'll try...But it hurts........" Psycho says, still crying.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 10, 2011, 06:12:02 pm
((Keep it going!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 06:14:21 pm
"I know it hurts, but you can do it.  You have to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 06:16:43 pm
'YOU. WILL. NOT. STAY!!!' Psycho says, picking up the daemon.
'HEY, PUT ME DOWN!!!! I AM IN CONTROL!!!!' Howls the daemon, causing Psycho's body in the real world to convulse for a moment.
'NO! THIS TIME, YOUR LEAVING FOR GOOD!!!!' screams Psycho, hurling the daemon out of his mind.

"...Khenal...I did it....." Psycho says, before having his eyes roll back into his head. An unholy scream escapes Psycho's mouth, then a blood red smoke pours out him. The smoke begins to rush towards Khenal in desperate revenge.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 06:19:43 pm
You will not escape this time, my foe.

What seems like fire made of water surges from Friesden's mouth and surrounds the smoke.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 06:21:59 pm
What seems like fire made of water surges from Friesden's mouth and surrounds the smoke.
(http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/309/b/d/the_riddle_by_themaster567-d4f7lrg.png)
((Wow, you practically quoted my riddle on my deviant art account.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 06:29:17 pm
The red smoke vanishes. Psycho Carrot lies still for what seemed like an eternity. Then, he slowly gets up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 06:34:54 pm
By the seven eyes of Ningauble! By the eyeless face of Sheelba! By all that is damned and corrupted!


My plan has failed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 10, 2011, 06:35:42 pm
btw, i'm not going to around for awhile,. so don't get me into your current section of RP.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 06:40:30 pm
I slowly lower my hooves; raising them all I could think to do when the red smoke sped towards me. 

'Well, one down?'


"Get..out of... Friesden..."

My horn barely flickers as a single chain descends from the ceiling between me and Friesden.  It slowly moves towards her to attempt binding the daemon.

"Stop...hurting her..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 06:44:50 pm
You are so very naive, Khenal. Arming your watchmen with weapons that could kill ponies, never dreaming they could be used on them instead of to protect them, thinking daemons are pure evil, and now, to think I am hurting me. How very droll.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 06:48:39 pm
I limp over to khenal and slump him over my back.
"I'm going to save Khenal no matter what! You may have an unholy amount of power, you may have the ability to incinerate everyone in this room in seconds, YOU MAY BE AN UN-KILLABLE FIEND, BUT YOU KNOW WHAT?! I DON'T CARE, BECAUSE I HAVE SOMETHING A BILLION TIMES STRONGER THAN THAT! FRIENDSHIP!" I yell, defiantly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 06:51:10 pm
Yes, yes, power of friendship and all that. How wonderful. Your error, however, lies in your mistaken belief that I want to kill anyone here. My plan may have had a momentary failure, but it shall rise from the ashes. Go ahead then. Kill me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 06:54:30 pm
"No. I have lived long enough to know that killing only brings more suffering. You're going to leave, now." Psycho says, with a adamantine edge to his voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 06:57:05 pm
"If...you don't want...to hurt anypony...then leave."

The chain finally manages a single loop around one of Friesden's forelegs, then starts struggling to wrap it a second time.

*********

And Khenal is still a guy.  Why does everypony think he's a she?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:00:08 pm
And Khenal is still a guy.  Why does everypony think he's a she?
((I dunno, It might be from your old avatar being twilight sparkle. I'm just guessing.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:00:26 pm
I'm afraid I can't, Khenal, my friend. You will have to kill me first.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:03:58 pm
"Wait! Before you go and do something you'll regret, just think! That's still Friesden! Sure, she might on fire, but it's still her! Please Khenal, you know that it's not the right thing to do, killing a friend!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 07:07:09 pm
"You said....you didn't want anyone...dead.  Neither...do I.  Especially...not Friesden..."

The chain seems to loose balance and slips off Friesden's leg.  I grimace with the effort of trying to make it wrap around her leg again
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:09:44 pm
Friesden's body facehoofs.

Did I say kill Friesden or kill me? Just finish it already.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:13:51 pm
"Khenal, I need to get you to the hospital. I know a little bit about fixing wounds and stuff, I can help. Now, if you could please hold tight, i'm going to run through the flames like a lunatic, barrel through a battalion of baffled troops, rush to the hospital, and cool us off before we die from the flames! ALONSY!!!!!!!" and with that, I, with Khenal on my back, do exactly what I said.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:16:18 pm
Why does Khenal need to go to the hospital, again?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 07:17:44 pm
I strain to secure the single loop around Friesden, then take the other end of the chain in my mouth.  I pull, praying that I'll drag Schmoe from Friesden.

"No, not...the hospital.  I need...to help Friesden..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:19:51 pm
I stop on a dime, just in front of the flames, nearly throwing Khenal off.
"If you say so...but you clearly cannot stand on your own. I'm here for you if you need anything!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:21:32 pm
Judy O'Grady and the Colonel's lady are sisters under the skin!

A grin breaks out on Friesden's face.

Or, you might say, that we're kin under the skin, eh? Eh?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 07:22:21 pm
I give Carrot a weak smile around the ethereal chain in my mouth and continue pulling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:25:04 pm
"You can do it!!! YOU'RE A UNICORN, ARE YOU REALLY GOING TO LET THAT WHELP CONTROL FRIESDEN?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:26:59 pm
He's an alicorn, you fool. Why do you think I picked him to augment?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:29:00 pm
"I don't care, Khenal beat you once, and he can most certainly do it again! Right Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:30:55 pm
Does it look like I care? Just kill me and be done with it, Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 07:36:05 pm
((I'm taking quite a risk with this post...))

Khenal notices something out of the corner of his eye. A glimpse of copper feathers, a flash of multicolored mane. He feels a slight tug on the chain in his jaws.

Commander Starkey stands before him. His eyes are bloodshot, his mane is dishevelled - he has obviously been bitterly weeping. Yet now he stands, grinning back at Khenal, teeth clenched around the ethereal chain.


((Too far?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:38:00 pm
((I'm taking quite a risk with this post...))

Khenal notices something out of the corner of his eye. A glimpse of copper feathers, a flash of multicolored mane. He feels a slight tug on the chain in his jaws.

Commander Starkey stands before him. His eyes are bloodshot, his mane is dishevelled - he has obviously been bitterly weeping. Yet now he stands, grinning back at Khenal, teeth clenched around the ethereal chain.


((Too far?))
((as long as you know that you are burning/burned from the flames surrounding us, it should be fine.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 07:38:15 pm
I nod at Carrot, invigorated by his confidence in me.  I get off his back and stand on my own hooves.

I then notice Starkey standing beside me, helping take up the slack on the chain.

"I told you already, Schmoe, I don't want anypony to die.  Now get out of her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:39:53 pm
Friesden's body makes a suitably theatrical gesture.

Oh, no, you've got me. I can't remain here, if only Friesden decides to chuck me out. Well, Friesden? I am at your mercy. What is your decision?

Her mouth opens, and Friesden's voice is heard.


"Remain....please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:41:51 pm
"Starkey, I forgive you. Now, Shall we?" I say with confidence.
I then hear something that shatters said confidence.
"F-f-friesden?! What's wrong with you?!?!" Psycho says, flabbergasted.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 07:42:59 pm
"Friesden!  Please, let us help you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:43:19 pm
"You...can't....take....him...away....I.....need....him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:46:43 pm
"Don't you see, Friesden?! You don't need him! You never did! Think of your parents! Think of your family! They would want you to get rid of the daemon! You have friends now! Trust us, we can help you!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 07:47:57 pm
"No, you don't need him!  He keeps trying to make you kill yourself!  He made you murder Efim!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:49:10 pm
Her mouth slams shut, though she is obviously resisting.

Kill me, damn you! KILL ME!

Her mouth opens, and she says only three words.

"I....love....him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:51:05 pm
"Stockholm syndrome...I should've known..." I mutter with despair.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:52:15 pm
"You...won't...take...him...away."

Damn you, Khenal! Kill me! Kill me, you bastard! You idiot! KILL ME!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 07:54:04 pm
Starkey gives the chain another hard tug, grunting from the strain. His steel barding has protected all but his legs and wings from the flames, but in the intense heat is rapidly turning the suit into a pressure cooker. Even he can only last so long in here. He glances up at Khenal, and manages to grunt around the chain.

"Khernalh. Hyough chnow mingh maghich?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:55:38 pm
((Kindly translate that.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:56:17 pm
((Khenal. You know mind magic?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 07:56:46 pm
"SHUT UP, SCHMOE!"

I spit out the chain and charge Friesden, heedless of the flames around us all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 07:58:01 pm
"KHENAL, STOP! YOU'LL BURN TO DEATH!!" Psycho screams as Khenal charges at the foe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 07:58:59 pm
You sick bastard, Khenal! Kill me!

"No, please! Leave him alone! I love him! You can't touch him!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 08:00:54 pm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PUzGDXpVhuA&feature=related
((this music begins to play as all this happens.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 08:04:32 pm
"Then get him under control!"

I summon a shimmering shield about me to protect from the flames.  From my blackening wingtips and charring mane and tail, it doesn't look to be doing a very good job.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:05:45 pm
"No! He's my protector! Get away from me!"

Khenal, please. Give me mercy, please. Just KILL me!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 08:07:07 pm
"KHENAL!!!!!" I yell as I dash into the flames, disparately trying to save him from certain death, whether from the flames, or the daemon itself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:08:54 pm
RAGHHHH!!! KILL ME! DO IT, DAMN YOU!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 08:09:31 pm
"Death is no mercy!  You can't fix your mistakes if you are dead!"

I leap at Friesden/Schmoe, using my smoking wings to propel me faster as I try to tackle the flaming pony.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:11:48 pm
Friesden's body warps again, her skull becoming that of a hideous predator, and her hooves turning to claws. She latches onto Khenal.

KILL ME OR DIE, you heartless bastard!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 08:12:10 pm
"Starkey, come on! We gotta save Khenal!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 08:17:57 pm
"STOP HURTING FRIESDEN!"

My horn flashes as I attempt my sleep spell, hoping to save Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:19:55 pm
"Get...get away. He's MINE! I won't lose him to you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 08:20:09 pm
"KHENAL! YOU CAN DO IT!!!!!!" I shout over the flames.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 08:21:12 pm
Starkey staggers behind them. He reaches back and unclasps his breastplate, and it clatters to the floor. This buys him maybe another minute or so.

"I-I ca... can you link us? Can... you... put me in her head?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 08:23:18 pm
"Starkey...I just want to say, you owe a drink if we survive this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 08:28:05 pm
"Please, Friesden, listen!  He only wants you dead!  Your friends are here to help you, you don't need him!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:29:45 pm
"Friends? I don't know any of you! Get away from me! I love him, and he-"KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 08:34:28 pm
"I will not!  Friesden is my friend and I will never kill her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 08:34:52 pm
"Friesden, please try to remember us! PLEASE!!! Why do you love the daemon so much? Think! Why in Equestria would you love your captor?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:36:16 pm
I don't WANT you to kill her, just kill me, damn your eyes!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 08:38:08 pm
Realizing what the daemon means, I yell, "Khenal, Do everything you can to pull the daemon out! Let it come to me! The moment it gets me, Starkey, kill me! I'd rather die so that we may all live!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:39:08 pm
"No! You can't kill him! He's mine! I won't let you! No!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 08:40:30 pm
"Khenal... we don't... have much more time... put me in Friesden's head!"

Starkey locks eyes with Carrot.

"Quit... quit your blathering... lieutenant. Nopony else... dies tonight."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 08:43:23 pm
"...I hope you know what you're doing, Starkey!  And Friesden, I'm sorry if this actually works"

My horn flashes, establishing a bridge between Starkey and Friesden/Schmoe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 08:44:06 pm
(( now this plays, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=di3KJjREUig&feature=colike ))
Stunned, I say, "Sir, yes sir!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:44:31 pm
"No! No! NO! NOOOOOOOOO!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 08:48:50 pm
"Hello, Schmoe. I heard you wanted to die?"

In his mind, the captain smirks.

"I can help you with that. I'm somewhat of an expert when it comes to death, you see."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:51:13 pm
Please, do it. Save me!

Friesden throws herself in front of the daemon.

"No! You can't! I'll die before you kill him!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 08:53:18 pm
"Khenal, send me in too. The commander looks tough, but he never asks for help, even when he needs it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 08:54:34 pm
Starkey circles the daemon warily. How does he know he's for real?

"Let's start simple. Why do you want to die?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 08:56:02 pm
Just kill me, damn it! Give me release from this!

Friesden continues to stand inbetween the two.

"You can't kill him. I won't let you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 09:03:07 pm
"I'm not sure I can, actually.  That backlash really took it out of me and its taking everything I have left to keep the flames at bay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 09:03:20 pm
"Oh, now that simply isn't fair at all Schmoe. I'm doing something for you, you do a little something for me. You'll be dead soon enough anyway, why can't you tell me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 09:05:25 pm
Only if you swear yourself to secrecy, mister Starkey.

Friesden continues to stay inbetween them.

"No. You won't take him. He's mine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 09:07:51 pm
"I'll swear to that, aye. But surely your dear friend miss Friesden deserves to know as well?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 09:09:32 pm
She already knows.

The daemon sighs.

I love her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 09:11:19 pm
"Then why do you want to leave her so badly? You can see this is tearing her apart, why are you putting her through this?''
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 09:13:38 pm
"Friesden...Tell me how I can help you. There has to be something...after all...I'm already dead."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 09:14:05 pm
Because it is the only way for her and I to be happy.

He shakes his head.

I saw the creation of the universe. I watched the vasty blackness be changed in the chaos that ensued. I participated in it, too. But not even I can change this form sufficiently to love her back. My plan requires my sacrifice. It must be done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 09:18:45 pm
"Your plan? and what plan is that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 09:20:36 pm
All I can say is that Khenal should get a family. The daemon winks. You'll see then.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 09:22:51 pm
((Plot twist, i'm liking it! :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 09:27:04 pm
"Miss Friesden. You know what his plan is. You know this has to happen. Why do you continue to resist?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 09:28:21 pm
Oh, I haven't told anyone about my plan yet. You're the first one I've even hinted it to.

Friesden is in tears.

"Because...because...I can't stand to lose him. Even for a second."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 09:32:01 pm
Starkey's eyes narrow.

"You just told me she already knew."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 09:34:53 pm
She knows I love her. The plan is a secret.

"Please, stop him, he's mad. Don't take him away from me. Please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 09:46:39 pm
Starkey quickly makes something up. He hates to lie to Friesden, but he must, for her sake.

"Friesden, listen to me. Schmoe is in pain, he's suffering. You're a doctor. What... what do you do when a pony is suffering, and you cannot make them better?"

He locks eyes with Schmoe, silently making his intent clear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 09:54:07 pm
"No...no...no.....It's...no...that's....."

Friesden dissolves into tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 09:56:38 pm
Starkey rests a hoof on her withers. He looks at Schmoe again, his eyes read 'say something, dammit'.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 09:58:15 pm
It'll..It'll be okay, Friesden. Nothing will separate us for long. I'll be back before you know it. Don't worry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 10:06:17 pm
Starkey rises, approaching the daemon.

"Are you ready?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 10:10:00 pm
I've been ready a long time. Do it now, if you would.


In the physical world, a tiny, imperceptible green fog leaves the pegasus' mouth and lays itself on Khenal's face.

One last message is spoken.

See you soon, Khenal, my friend.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 10:16:41 pm
"Starkey? Oh horse apples...Khenal, I think you should yank him out!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 10:18:17 pm
"What the..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 10:20:09 pm
Just you have a good life, Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 10:25:58 pm
"Alright then. Hold still."

The captain lunges forward, siezing Schmoe by the face. Before his vision descends into blackness, he swears he can see a wicked grin split Starkey's muzzle. They both vanish.

- - - - - -

Schmoe awakens to find himself... lying in a bed? no, a hammock - he can feel it rocking gently. He opens his eyes to see wooden rafters mere feet from his face. Schmoe's exploration is interrupted by a familiar voice.

"Have a nice nap?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 10:28:58 pm
Hmm?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 10:33:51 pm
((aww, no fair! you changed scenes! :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 10:41:01 pm
The room is tiny, with walls, ceiling and floor all of wood. Everything creaks perceptible, as though struck by a stiff gust of wind.

Looking down, who does Schmoe see but Captain Starkey. 'Captain' indeed: He sits upon a stool, draped head to tail in a royal blue overcoat with brilliant gold epaulets.

"Oh, sorry about the, ah, sparse accomodations. There isn't much free space aboard."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 10:42:28 pm
I should have known. Your mind, eh?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 10:51:46 pm
"Aye. Not a memory, though. Something you'll find far less tasty."

He stands, opening the door and gesturing for Schmoe to follow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 10:56:01 pm
The daemon stands up and follows him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 11:02:29 pm
((It looks like things,
 8)
Just got a bit weirder. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 11:02:57 pm
They exit the room, strolling along cramped corridors and climbing narrow stairways, finally reaching the upper deck of a large seagoing vessel. Many ponies of every shape and size bustle about..

"The bit with Friesden back there was... impressive, to say the least. The daemon and the doctor? positively touching. Perfect in every detail."

He ascends the forecastle, looking out to the horizon.

"Word for word as mother would tell it to my sisters and I before bed every night."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 11:06:22 pm
I'm not entirely sure what you mean, mister Starkey. Friesden seemed perfectly lucid to me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 11:13:36 pm
"Perhaps she was. Perhaps she wasn't. Perhaps that was one of her darker selves speaking. I have no way of knowing if she - or you, for that matter, were telling the truth."

Starkey leans on the gunwale, watching the countryside roll by hundreds of feet below.

"And until I do, this is where you will remain. Don't worry, I'll drop by often. This is one of my favorite dreams, after all."


((Starkey dreams of steam-powered sheep.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 11:15:56 pm
Indeed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 11:17:32 pm
I begin to shake Starkey, desperate to get him to respond, having waited for hours.
"...Starkey! Come on! ANSWER ME!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 11:19:07 pm
Friesden slumps to the ground, like a puppet with its strings cut.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 11:21:12 pm
Khenal scoops her up in his hooves, listening for her breath and feeling for a pulse.  'Please be alright.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 11:22:01 pm
Her eyes are a mile away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 10, 2011, 11:25:25 pm
from the other end of the deck, the ship's bell can be heard tolling.

"Oh, sorry to cut our little chat short, but it sounds like I'm needed elsewhere."

Amidships, there is a small dhingy suspended over the portside. The captain climbs in alone.

"Enjoy yourself. I'll be in touch."

He gives the rope a hard tug, and the dhingy descends rapidly out of sight.

Starkey awakes. The first thing he is aware of is the seargent - no, the
lieutenant shaking him awake. The second thing he is aware of is that the flames have heated his steel barding to an unbearable level.

"Uh... wha? CarroAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 11:30:22 pm
"YOU, SIR, ARE BRILLIANT!"
I hurl Starkey out of the flames and rush over to Khenal and drag him out.
"Khenal...I...I don't think she really had a mind to begin with. maybe...Maybe that's what the daemon gave her. A mind. A soul. Something to talk to. Without it...she's a shell. Khenal, we need to get her to the hospital. I'm sure somepony could help her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 11:33:14 pm
I numbly carry Friesden, following Carrot to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 10, 2011, 11:39:37 pm
Ah....relief.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 11:45:01 pm
"Khenal, thanks! A MILLION TIMES, THANK YOU! Now, I have a question, how did you get to know friesden, was she always trying to kill herself?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 11:51:23 pm
My eyes never stray from Friesden as I talk to Carrot.

"No, she never tried to hurt herself until... until after her arrest.  She rarely talked to other ponies, but was always so kind and caring for any pony who got hurt."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 11:53:29 pm
"Really? Oh, did I tell you that i'm a lieutenant now?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 10, 2011, 11:56:38 pm
"Really? Oh, did I tell you that i'm a lieutenant now?!"

Is Psycho psychic? Has it not been only a few minutes, maybe a few hours, since all that went down? Charity only just wrote in her journal that she was going to promote Carrot. How does he already know?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 10, 2011, 11:57:24 pm
"Khenal... we don't... have much more time... put me in Friesden's head!"

Starkey locks eyes with Carrot.

"Quit... quit your blathering... lieutenant. Nopony else... dies tonight."
from the other end of the deck, the ship's bell can be heard tolling.

"Oh, sorry to cut our little chat short, but it sounds like I'm needed elsewhere."

Amidships, there is a small dhingy suspended over the portside. The captain climbs in alone.

"Enjoy yourself. I'll be in touch."

He gives the rope a hard tug, and the dhingy descends rapidly out of sight.

Starkey awakes. The first thing he is aware of is the seargent - no, the
lieutenant shaking him awake. The second thing he is aware of is that the flames have heated his steel barding to an unbearable level.

"Uh... wha? CarroAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 10, 2011, 11:58:51 pm
"That's nice."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 11, 2011, 12:00:07 am
Oh, I see. Starkey is the psychic one. Well that makes more sense.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 12:00:22 am
Out of her mouth comes a tuneless song.

"Death. Death. Death. Death."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 12:00:58 am
Noticing that khenal's mind is elsewhere, I say, "She'll be ok! I promise!"
I then hear the song.
"K-K-KHENAL?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 12:02:53 am
Oh, I see. Starkey is the psychic one. Well that makes more sense.
((wrong again.))
Starkey staggers behind them. He reaches back and unclasps his breastplate, and it clatters to the floor. This buys him maybe another minute or so.

"I-I ca... can you link us? Can... you... put me in her head?"
"...I hope you know what you're doing, Starkey!  And Friesden, I'm sorry if this actually works"

My horn flashes, establishing a bridge between Starkey and Friesden/Schmoe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 12:08:10 am
Tears flow freely down my face as I continue towards the hospital.


***********

Starkey isn't psychic either. Charity promoted him to captain in her diary, Starkey gave him a field promotion for actually doing things when the rest of his militia stood helpless.

At least, that's what I got out of it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 12:09:59 am
"No...no mercy. Weak...they were all weak."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 12:10:48 am
((Feel free to punch the monitor if you hate the following ;D))
"...You love her, don't you? The way you risked your life to save her, never giving up, never backing down. That's more than just friendship...isn't it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 12:12:17 am
"Hope....there is no hope."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 12:12:42 am
Quiet sobs are all the reply Carrot receives.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 12:14:34 am
Reaching the hospital, Khenal decides to-
((Take it away, Khenal! It's all yours! :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 12:24:09 am
I gently place Friesden in one of the hospital beds and tuck her in.  I whisper to her: "There is always hope, Friesden.  Even in deepest despair, there is the hope of fixing things."

I move to the next closest hospital bed, only dimly aware of my own injuries from the fire, and settle in.

"Goodnight, Friesden."

I turn to Carrot and Starkey, giving a weak smile through my tears.

"Goodnight, my friends."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 12:26:38 am
"Cattle...cattle to the slaughter."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 12:30:14 am
"Hey, both of you, remember this: Even in the darkest of times, there is always a light to guide you to safety. That is, of course, provided that you WANT to be saved."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 12:38:16 am
"No...no purpose."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 01:04:28 am
((I'll assume the flames are gone))
"Get some sleep, Friesden. You're going to need it."
I then head to the barracks to get some shuteye myself. Today was the craziest day yet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 01:05:08 am
Two thoughts drift across my mind before I fall into unconsciousness from the rough day.  Firstly: Shouldn't the fires have died with Schmoe?  Secondly: I never did give him his popcorn back...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 01:06:48 am
Which fires? They probably should have.


And do remember about the popcorn.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 01:10:50 am
The fires should have died when Schmoe died, but he didn't die, did he?  A good twist like Impending Doom pulled is no fun if nobody else can figure it out, is it? ;)  Excellent twist, by the way.

Edited, because fire does not equal figure.  Not even slightly.  Ok, maybe slightly, but that "gu" really changes things!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 01:12:09 am
We're experiencing a 30 Xanatos Pile Up here. (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GambitPileup)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 01:13:43 am
A what now?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 01:17:14 am
Check above.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 01:20:45 am
Now you've done it, you've linked tvtropes.  How many innocent ponies will now be lost for days, at the mercy of the currents of an ocean of literary devices?  ...And tv devices, and movie devices and, oohh, what's this link...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 01:27:23 am
It's inception all over again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 01:57:41 am
See, what's happened here, is that Starkey doesn't trust the daemon, and is trapping him for that. But the daemon has planned that he die, so that he can be reborn as a pony. His mechanism for doing so is the popcorn, and that tiny bit of himself he's attached to Khenal - when he has a child...boom! It's him incarnated! But he had to try and get Starkey or Khenal to kill him now, because the daemon possessing Carrot was too weak. But in turn that he was orchestrating, by appearing to be weaker than the other daemon, when Khenal banished it he would try to banish him, and the daemon would freely leave, happy to be free to wreak havoc somewhere else. But when he decided to try and pretend to 'fight back', he had to use the drained Friesden. When she saw someone communicating with her, she was really overjoyed, and fell into protectiveness of him. But that's actually quite painful for a daemon, and especially once he started feeling it back. So he had to find a way to kill himself, and saw as the only route having one of the guardsponies come into Friesden's head and end him.

There we go!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 02:09:41 am
Believe it or not, I already figured that one out. :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 02:11:18 am
What you might not have worked out is that Friesden doesn't actually know whats she saying means.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 02:14:52 am
Nah, it was obvious. Why on earth -oh right, Equestria- would somepony talk the Nihilanth from Half Life?
                                                                                                        \/
                                                                                          http://half-life.wikia.com/wiki/Nihilanth
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 02:21:24 am
As I have previously stated, I haven't played Half Life, even with the link you gave me.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 02:32:38 am
AAAAAAAAAAAANY WAY. I guess we continue roleplaying tomorrow?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 05:08:49 am
And i'm back.
THANK YOU FOR NOT BASHING ME INTO THIS LOL!
Anyways,
-------------------------------------------------------
*I leave my office to find Khenal and Friesden laying on the beds in the hospital, both with burn marks.
---------------------------------------------------------
Khenal, are you meaning to imply you want your pony to be in love with Friesden?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 11, 2011, 05:29:21 am
If you're wondering what's going to happen next, have a squint at this, from about 7 minutes in. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gfZBiTyL1co
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 04:38:46 pm
Jeeze...So I can expect friesden to go on a killing spree with a scalpel?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 11, 2011, 05:15:03 pm
(Hey guys. This might be a lot to ask. But I have planned on playing a lot of DF tomorrow. So I would appreciate it if we could have any loose threads, from your last break out of RPing, tied up before then. I don't think that there are any except for Friesden. Is she going to stab Dr. Bubbles with a scalpel? Is she going back in her cell? Is she being freed? Is her "cell" changing to be more of a living space for her and Khenal, to live in together, so he can keep working to reform her? Or something else?

Also I'd like to say that despite the craziness your last bit of excitement was a lot of fun. Extra thanks to The Master for providing an excellent sound track.

Thirdly I won't be online tonight because I get to go GM my GURPS game. So while tying up any loose ends, try not to involve Countess Charity directly. At least not until the end.

Finally, Impending Doom said earlier that their is no death on demand, because of no DF Hack, and that is true because I've never used that program. However, if the majority of you would like it, I could learn the program, and make that an option, still wouldn't allow players to kill each other without the other's consent for obvious reasons. Also, if the program allowed for injuries, to be created, (I don't know if it does) then I could use it for non-lethal or potentially but not defiantly lethal blows that you guys deal in your cooperative story telling. Because right now, in your RP Captain (you guys keep calling him lieutenant IDK why) Otik and 3 of the marks ponies, are injured, and Khenal, Psycho, and Starkey have burns, but there is no way for me to easily represent that in the game. I could stick the pegasi in a spear trap room for a couple of strikes, easily enough, I guess, but I don't think I will, and the burns would be difficult to do without killing them outright. So, I'll be forced to just ignore it and assume that they all recover quickly enough that it doesn't effect them in the game. Which isn't really a problem, but it would be cool if I could somehow represent that in the real game easier.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 05:41:42 pm
I'll keep providing music then. :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 08:46:57 pm
(( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xGytDsqkQY8 ))
The next day, I head to visit Khenal and Friesden to see if they're getting better.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 08:49:42 pm
((I assume both Khenal and Friesden are still here in the hospital. Also, that is a nice track you found Master.))
"Ah, hello Carrot. What do you need?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 08:51:44 pm
((I do my best!))
"How are they holding up, doc?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 08:52:23 pm
"They're okay. I managed to patch up Friesden's injuries."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 08:53:04 pm
I'm laying in my hospital bed, trying to relax and let my burns heal.  No permanent damage was done, but my mane and tail are going to be quite short for a while, and my wings will barely work for anything more than gliding until new feathers replace the burnt ones.

I am deep in thought when Carrot enters the hospital, not noticing him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 08:54:51 pm
"Khenal, Friesden, can you hear me?"
"Their burns are pretty severe. However, I believe they can heal over time."
((Btw, http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/576522
I'm sure you guys will understand....))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 08:59:20 pm
I blink a few times before realizing somepony is trying to talk to me.

"Huh?  Oh, Dr. Bubbles.  How are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 09:00:14 pm
"I'm fine, Khenal. It's you I'm worried about. Anyways, Lieutenant Carrot is here. He wants to see you."
((FIXED!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 09:02:51 pm
((psst. You forgot to unquote!))
"Khenal!" I say, rushing up to him. "Are you feeling better?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 09:04:39 pm
"Oh, hello Carrot!"  I give him a friendly smile.  "I'm a bit sore and burnt, and my magic isn't back to 100% yet either, but I'll be fine.  How are you holding up after yesterday?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 09:08:47 pm
I shurg, "Aside from discovering that I've actually been dead for quite some time? Fine! I've gotten used to it, and it sure is fun to scare people with my lack of a pulse!" I say with a sly grin.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 09:17:04 pm
"Heh, it's hard to keep you down, isn't it?  How is Commander Starkey?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 09:27:51 pm
"Dunno actually...I haven't seen him since yesterday...Oh! I just remembered! I thought of this really awesome song and I sang it in front of everyone in the barracks! You should've seen them running about, screaming...It was priceless! It goes like this," Psycho takes a deep breath, then he starts singing! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v04H7_fFC90&feature=related
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 09:36:45 pm
"Not bad, if a bit...morbid.  Actually, that reminds me."  I turn to Dr. Bubbles.  "Dr. Bubbles?  Have you finished reading my book yet?  I think Commander Starkey should be the next to get the whole story, especially after yesterday."


*********

I love that song, Johnathon Coulton is awesome.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 09:39:10 pm
((Awesome.))
"Yes Khenal. It certainly explains a lot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 09:44:01 pm
"Are...are we still friends, Bubbles?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 09:56:28 pm
"Yes. What matters is what happens here, not in the past."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 10:03:06 pm
I smile, relieved.

"I hope everypony else is as forgiving as you and Carrot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 10:11:36 pm
"Hey, I found this REALLY weird note on my bed when I woke up, maybe you could solve the riddle?" Says Psycho, handing Khenal the note. (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/309/b/d/the_riddle_by_themaster567-d4f7lrg.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 10:22:47 pm
"Khenal, heres your medicine. Drink his flask while i put some ointment on your burns."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 10:28:11 pm
I take the note and read it.

What seems like fire made of water surges from Friesden's mouth and surrounds the smoke.

I look up at Carrot and Bubbles, then slowly turn to look at Friesden.

"Medicine?  Oh, right: burns."

I drink the flask and grimace at the aftertaste.

"I don't know what exactly this note means, but I have a few suspicions, Carrot.  I'll look into them once I'm back on my hooves.  Do you have any idea what it means?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 10:33:05 pm
"There you go. That medicine was one of the last from the caravan. I'll need to tell the brokers to buy it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 11:03:38 pm
((Btw, I actually wrote that, It's from my deviant art))
"Hmmm...I know that it must have something to do with something lost in watery fire...but that's all I- OH! THAT'S IT! It's the red mist!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 11:06:44 pm
(( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PzQD5OO-8ho&feature=player_detailpage#t=22s ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 11:09:39 pm
"Maybe, but I don't think anything in that mist is worth looking for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 11:13:48 pm
*I drop a vial next to Khenal*
"If you feel pain, drink from this vial. It's a strong sleep potion."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 11:13:50 pm
"Well, what do you think it means then?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 11, 2011, 11:26:04 pm
"I think it means I need to look into some popcorn after I heal..."

I glance at the vial of sleep potion from Bubbles.

"Thanks, but I don't think I'll need any help sleeping." I barely manage to say around a yawn, then smile at my friends.  "Thanks for the visit, Carrot, but I'm really tired.  Could you come back tomorrow after your shift?"

My eyelids droop as I lay my head on my pillow. I murmur "Maybe I'll have a less dangerous idea about the note then..."


************

You two feel free to do stuff still.  Khenal, though, needs some recuperation before he gets up to any more shenanigans ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 11:30:18 pm
I turn to Doctor Bubbles, "So...I doubt friesden will wake up any time soon, want to hang out? My shift is over."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 11:46:45 pm
"Sure."
((Man, this is becoming more of a RP thread than a community fort.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 11:56:43 pm
((Ah, but it keeps the children entertained! :P))
The doc and I head to the area where the "great battle" yesterday was fought.
"Doctor bubbles, this is where the whole battle happened...Many could have lost their lives If it weren't for the commander. I don't know what he did exactly," Dramatic look to the ceiling ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECjDfQd8QVc ) "But I don't care! He saved us all from a fiery death! I...I owe him my life, and I think Khenal and friesden do too. Starkey is... well, brilliant!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 11, 2011, 11:57:19 pm
"That he is."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 11, 2011, 11:59:45 pm
"I'm curious. Did you decide to migrate here, or were you forced to?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 12:00:17 am
"I decided to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 12:05:30 am
"...You don't like to talk much...do you?" Psycho says, slightly annoyed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 12:06:37 am
"Not really"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 12:07:22 am
"Well...what do you want to do?"
((YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!!!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 12:08:46 am
"Well, I have some work to be done. And I need to make sure Friesden is okay.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 12:11:17 am
"Yeah...I...Oh look at the umm...BLHARGIN!" And with that being said, Psycho dashes off, not wanting to spend another second with the boring doctor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 12:11:59 am
((lol))
*Confused, I go back in my office and get to work*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 12:32:55 am
Arriving back at the barracks, I look for Commander Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 12:44:47 am
"Well, I have some work to be done. And I need to make sure Friesden is okay._____
((What's missing from the sentence...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 12, 2011, 12:45:01 am
The door to the commander's office is locked. Lieutenant Otik is sprawled on a free bunk beside the doorway.

"Dunnae bother. I've tried talkin' to 'im."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 12:45:09 am
((And I am back. Sorry for the not being here today, but I had an Archdiocesan assembly to go to.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 01:00:34 am
While the others were out of the room, Friesden got up. There, right where she knew it would be, was a scalpel. This would be hard to do, but it felt right. She carefully used her hooves to hold the scalpel steady, and stuck out her tongue. She laid it on the bench top, and carefully manuevered the scalpel up above, and slammed it down, cutting into the tongue. She dragged it through, cutting the tongue in half. She dropped the scalpel and headed back to the bed when she heard somepony coming.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 01:06:11 am
((YOU'RE NUTS!!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 01:10:30 am
((You ain't seen nothing yet.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 01:34:44 am
((I'LL STOP YOU WITH... NARWHALLS!!!!!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Ppb_9DMyVM&feature=related ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 01:36:11 am
((Dsarker, what are you going to pull off next?))
*I exit the office to check on Friesden... and see a bloody scalpel and half a tongue on a bench. Shocked, I try to wake up Khenal.*

((Heh...Narwhals are awesome.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 01:37:14 am
No, no, no. She split her tongue in half.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 01:38:10 am
Oh. You mean she just cut her tongue about halfway?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 01:39:08 am
((picture a snake tongue.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 01:39:28 am
((Oh, thanks))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 12, 2011, 01:44:11 am
Otik rolls over, staring at the ceiling

"Say, Carrot. How did ye get sent here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 01:45:29 am
And as for what I'm going to do next....well, here's a hint.


Spoiler (click to show/hide)

See the guy on the left?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 01:45:55 am
.......thats disturbing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 01:47:59 am
Or if you look at the previous video I posted, look at 12:31.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 01:48:59 am
"I was sent here because I threw the queen's 'first born' out a ten story window. It's not my fault it was a fire snake in disguise!" Psycho says, confident that he did nothing wrong.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 01:49:53 am
((See, Carrot is the really disturbing one. Friesden's just insane. Carrot...well, could be either way.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 12, 2011, 01:56:09 am
Otik stares long and hard at Carrot. He can't be serious. This dipshit committed the crime of the century? The one every crier on every street corner screamed himself hoarse about for a full month?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 01:59:14 am
Friesden appears to be muttering meaningless syllables of sound in her sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 02:03:11 am
Otik stares long and hard at Carrot. He can't be serious. This dipshit committed the crime of the century? The one every crier on every street corner screamed himself hoarse about for a full month?
((Ok, it's official, I died of laughter.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 02:04:10 am
"How did YOU end up here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 02:09:27 am
"Flprit. Flprit. Flprit. Flprit. Flprit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 12, 2011, 02:17:19 am
"Was in charge of a hostage rescue in the upper north side o' Tailentranced. Bunch o' seditioners kidnapped th' baron's son. Long story short, shit went south fast an' we lost th' hostage an' half th' team. Me captain was furious. I cared more 'bout th' lads I lost. Said a few things I shouldna, words came t' blows, now I'm here."

She sits up in bed, looking towards the doorway.

"Say, has th' cap'n told you anythin' 'bout how he got here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 03:09:58 am
((Sorry for taking so long, I was playing Underhell :'())
"Come to think of it...no! Wonder why? Oh...and sorry for throwing a door at you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 03:17:19 am
"Flprit. Flprit. Flprit. Flprit. Flprit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 12, 2011, 03:28:15 am
((was hoping I could draw this scene out a little more. Oh well, it's getting late for me. G'night all.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 03:29:43 am
((Impending Doom, have you voted for us yet in the hall of legends? We only need 1 more vote to get in.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 03:31:00 am
((Now'd be a good time for Khenal to wake up, hm?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 03:31:27 am
((Although he's probably asleep in RL))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 03:32:20 am
((Are you going to respond to Friesden's chanting?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 03:32:51 am
((I'm acting like I can't hear it.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 03:34:26 am
"Flprit. Flprit. Flprit. Flprit. Flprit. Flprit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 03:35:31 am
*I hear Friesden chanting something. It soulds awfully like 'Fprit'.*
"Friesden? Is there something wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 03:38:01 am
The drone continues. Monotonous. If you turn towards her, you can see that her tongue is split open.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 03:39:07 am
*Turning to try and see what is wrong, I notice a cut in her tongue.*
"FRIESDEN!"
*Quickly, I try to get her to stop so I can stop the bleeding,*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 03:40:30 am
The chant continues.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 03:41:47 am
*Knowing that the extreme bleeding may kill her, I forcibly place her in a traction bench to lock her mouth open.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 03:42:39 am
She tries to bite anything you use to force her mouth open.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 03:43:39 am
"Thats it."
*I drip a little of the sleep drug into Friesden's mouth, knocking her out.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 03:45:46 am
She tries to fight it but eventually falls asleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 03:46:52 am
"There we go."
*I chuckle to myself and bandage Friesden's wound, and afterwards suspend her in a traction bench so she can't reopen it.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 12, 2011, 03:51:06 am
((Impending has now voted))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 12, 2011, 03:51:40 am
((Then we're on the HoL. HELL YEAH!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 11:39:00 am
(( Gentlemen, looks like we
 8)
Are going to the hall of legends http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mR3jnW2kcUs ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 12, 2011, 10:28:04 pm
I head to the hospital after the lieutenant falls asleep while talking to me, hoping that Khenal is awake.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 12:20:46 am
((Three hours!!! What's the hold up?!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 01:58:38 am
I lay in bed, staring at the ceiling as I think.


*************

The hold up is that today was my day for gaming at my friend's house :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:04:09 am
((Good reason. You may live for now. :P))
"Khenal, how are you holding-" I glance at Friesden's bed and see blood stains but no Friesden.
"KHENAL! FRIESDEN IS GONE!" Not noticing that Friesden is strapped to a traction bench.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 02:07:30 am
I bolt upright in bed, quickly turning to look at the traction bench.

"WHAT?!  ...What?  She's right there."  I point at the traction bench.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:09:58 am
"Oh...why is there blood...?" I say, still worried.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:10:39 am
While the others were out of the room, Friesden got up. There, right where she knew it would be, was a scalpel. This would be hard to do, but it felt right. She carefully used her hooves to hold the scalpel steady, and stuck out her tongue. She laid it on the bench top, and carefully manuevered the scalpel up above, and slammed it down, cutting into the tongue. She dragged it through, cutting the tongue in half. She dropped the scalpel and headed back to the bed when she heard somepony coming.
((Just in case you didn't read this))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 02:16:32 am
"She did...something to herself, that's why she's in the bench.  I didn't ask too hard, I'm...not sure I actually want to know.  They said it wasn't life-threatening, at least."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 02:27:36 am
Gurgling comes from Friesden's bench.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 02:31:54 am
I wince at the gurgling, and get up to check on Friesden.

"And she's been making weird sounds, like a newborn foal figuring out her mouth.  I'm worried about her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 02:33:54 am
"Kaaallluuuu." comes the gurgling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:38:05 am
Unable put up with the noise, I walk over to see what's wrong. I see the bandages and then foolishly tear them off her tongue and scream in horror.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 02:39:39 am
((Her mouth is being held open. And her tongue is bandaged.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 02:51:20 am
"Carrot, what are you doing?!  You can't just mess with whatever the doctors have done, you don't know what's wrong!"

I get a closer look at Friesden's mouth, ignoring what I take to simply be Carrot either overreacting again or playing another joke.  I go pale when I realize why he's screaming.

"Oh..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:55:35 am
"Khenal..." I say, pale. "I...I know that she did this somehow...but..." I look around for something that could cause this, and only find a scalpel. I grab it and show it to Khenal.
"...I found the likely culprit...I feel faint..." Psycho says before vomiting up his entire lunch.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 13, 2011, 02:55:56 am
My most sincere apologies for not posting on Saturday like I said I would. My internet crapped out and then I had to go to my cousins birthday and just was way busier than I expected to be. But I'm going to start now.


Charity's Journal the day after the most recent daemon battle

I've been informed that in the hours after Otik tried to arrest me, that there was a fire raging in the food stockpile outside the barracks. I don't know the details, but the tales they are spinning in the dinning room are truly fantastical. Stories of demons fighting, walls of fire, Khenal, Starkey, and Carrot, running into the fire to save Friesden, claims that Friesden started the fires, ghostly chains, and mental magics, I honestly don't know what's truth and what's fiction at this point.

Charity's Journal 19th Slate 98

Today, we had a ceremony in the lower dinning hall, honoring Psycho Carrot, for the bravery and loyalty he showed to me several nights ago. He has been awarded the adamantine earring, The Magicians of Violence, forged by the possessed pony Katak Duralertong, and was officially promoted to Captain. I'm dividing Otiks squad in half, one half will remain under Otik, and is made up of Otik and the ponies that broke down my door. Captain Carrot will lead those that did not take part in that, event.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/The%20Magicians%20of%20Violence.png)

14th Felsite 98

Cindersparks was heading up to the surface earlier but when she opened the door a pair of Parasprites tried to attack her, they got a few good bites in on her wings but she fought them off.

15th Felsite 98

Thundersplinter is still in the hospital, Doctor Bubbles has been doing his best, but well, she's developed an infection all up and down her right rear leg. I later found out that the "thread" the Doctor used was actually diomedian pony hair. I bet that had something to do with it. Disgusting. I hope Thunder is strong enough to fight off the sickness.

18th Felsite 98

I had my fourth foal this morning. An aquamarine peasus filly, with beautiful copper eyes. We've decided to name her Skydancer. I was surprised to see that she was a pegasus, I didn't think Cryptson or me had any pegasan blood in us. Or maybe that's just a side effect of unicorns mating with earthponies? I don't really know.

22nd Felsite 98

Psycho Carrot and Kil have finally moved into their new room. I had it place directly across the hall from mine, a mere two steps from the dinning hall. Inside is a pair of masterwork beds, a stone chest and cabinet, and a statue of myself. Additionally the whole place has been engraved by our numerous artists. It's twice the size of their old place I hope they enjoy it.

Additionally, with Doctor Alen in prison, and Friesden, in her state of mind. Doctor Bubbles has been in need of an assistant. And he's hired on Carrot's wife Kil as a Nurse. She won't actually be working on any ponies directly, but will be helping bring food and water to the patients, and the prisoners in the cell block.


(Prisoners were getting thirsty, Bubbles has been to busy working on Thunder to bring them water, and while I have drink stockpiles set up in the cells, to take drinks from the main pile near the stills, and have nearly 500 drinks, the barrels still remain dry. Thus I'm making Kil a full time Nurse. She will have zero responsibilities other than Cleaning, Recovering wounded, and Feeding/watering patients/prisoners.)

2nd Hematite 98

We had a few ponies attacked, by parasprites, while building the next floor of the wooden tower. I'm sending out Starkey and Khenal's squads to chase them away. While Captain Psycho and Otik watch the cavern entrance together.

4th Hematite 98

I tried to teach Cobalt to channel some simple magic earlier. He took to it well, and was able to cast the simple spells I had him channel decently, but not perfectly, though better than I could at that age. He grew impatient when I wouldn't let him move on to more advanced spells, but I explained that magic is an art that require a lot of practice and dedication to get anywhere with. I think he understood.

Later I went to have a talk with Venture. The filly's fifth birthday is coming up this year, and I want to help her get an apprenticeship with one of our craftsponies. She doesn't seem to know what she wants to do yet. I suggested she shadow a few of the older ponies to get a feel for what she would like to do.

And finally, Thunder was released from the hospital today. She, won't be able to walk without a crutch, though. I showed up to see Nurse Kil trying to teach her how to get around with one. As soon as she got the hang of it though she went right back to the carpentry shops and got back to work.

17th Hematite 98

Katak has been complaining to me about being, "just a hauler", before being sent to Glitterglen he was a promising metal crafter, but we can't spare the metal for him to practice with here. I've decided to allow him to begin training under Grifen as a new miner. Cryptson, doesn't work as much now that he's married to a countess, so Grif could use the extra help.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Bubel%20party.png)

26th Hematite 98

We had another accident today. While working on the showers for the cavern entrance, the decision was made to tap into the hospital's reservoir for water. The planned path would have the water, flow down, into the caverns, through Khenal's office, (also giving him a nice private shower/waterfall), eventually draining into the underground lake.

However, we underestimated the water pressure, and when Cryptson breached the last foot of stone, he was immediately submerged. He nearly drowned, but managed to climb out. The water, did not fall, but blasted into the caverns, catching some of the marksponies by surprise and washing them down the hill. Some water blasted down into Khenal's office and flooded it. More started flooding another floor that was intended to have a waterfall in it, this water flowed down to the magma forge area.

Fortunately nopony was hurt. The water was pressurized but there was a limited quantity of it, and once Cryptson got out, we were able to flip the emergency shut off lever. Stopping the last of the water before it could make the situation worse. Once the water dries out a little, we'll begin working on getting the shower working without this happening again.


If you guys want to finish the scene you're currently doing, just consider this to be what happens in the days following it, and don't feel like I'm necessarily cutting you off, just try not to burn down the fortress, okay.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 02:57:59 am
"Kaaaalllluuuuu."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 03:13:54 am
"Oh, Friesden..."


I get a determined look in my eyes look at Carrot.

"Carrot, put that scalpel back where you found it!  Actually, give it to me, you get a bucket and mop to clean that up.  I appreciate you visiting, but don't interfere with the healing process!  Injuring Friesden helps nopony, and I'd like to get better as soon as possible and get back to helping Friesden and Glitter Glen!"

I compose myself a bit after yelling at Carrot.

"I'm sorry Carrot, I'm just a bit restless here in the hospital.  I really do want to get better quickly and get out of the hospital, and I really do appreciate your visits."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:15:13 am
"Kaaaaaaalllluuuuu."

Frieden starts coughing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 03:17:12 am
Highly offended, I storm out of the hospital with the scalpel. I then throw it at my door, embedding itself into it.
((Carrot despises cleaning and getting yelled at.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 03:18:51 am
*Sigh*  "That could have gone better."  I turn back to Friesden to see why she's coughing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:19:54 am
As Khenal leans over Friesden, a look of determination come into her eyes, and she coughs up blood into his face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 03:20:20 am
((I did that mostly to wrap the scene up. I'M PSYCHED ABOUT MY NEW ROOM! THANKS STRONGBEARD! Oh, and, EWW DSARKER!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:22:51 am
((I'm mostly waiting for either Impending to come back, or for Khenal to look through the daemon's memories. Friesden's backstory is waiting.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 13, 2011, 03:27:27 am
((I'm finally here. Sorry for making you guys wait on me, but was playing Mw3 XD))
*I leave my office AGAIN to find a pool of blood, Friesden, and Khenal.... and a ripped bandage.*
"Khenal...? Whats happening?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:29:00 am
"Kaaalllluuuuuu."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 03:29:19 am
"...That, too.  Nurse!  Oh, Dr. Bubbles!  Well, Friesden is bleeding again, and Carrot got sick on the floor."

I go try to find a bucket and a towel to clean the floor and my face, respectively.

'Well, I think she recognizes me.  That's a start at least...'



**********

I'll go ahead and cut my participation in this scene as well.  Khenal needs to be at full strength before he looks at the popcorn.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:33:09 am
Unless Ansotan wants to continue, I shall too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 03:34:50 am
Sorry about leaving you high and dry, Ansontan  :-\
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 03:36:57 am
((...what's that soldier? INCOMING MUSIC!! TAKE COVER!!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iob2_8eyMK8 Picture the insane overlord as Khenal and the prisoner/girl as Friesden))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 13, 2011, 03:49:55 am
((Lawl. I'm gonna get pretty busy, so I think we should leave it there. After all, Khenal needs his sleep for sure.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 03:53:49 am
TIME JUMP! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=40dewhJkGpQ&feature=related
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 04:03:13 am
This might be more applicable to Friesden... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQ7YoIVywG4
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 04:08:07 am
http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&v=qCaVaxlnHa0
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 04:51:52 am
In Khenal's office, immediately following the floods, one book was recovered untouched by water...


When the recoverer opened to the first page, it said in red (ink?) "Friesden's Diary".
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 13, 2011, 05:22:17 am
((Now what is it you're trying to do there...?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 05:27:46 am
Not entirely sure myself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 12:26:16 pm
If I recall, Friesden's Diary (not the "new diary") was written in blood for the most part. Is that correct?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 12:37:10 pm
I sit in my room, looking at Friesden's diary and working up the courage to explore the memories of Schmoe.  The water destroyed every one of my books on magic, as well as the bits of paperwork that I had.

'I wish I had my books, or at least new ones.  Anything that might give me a better idea of what to expect from these memories.  I swear, that office is cursed.  First the ceiling collapses, then it gets flooded?'



*****************

Friesden's Diary is mostly in ink, her new diary is mostly in blood.  I think.  By now, everypony who should have read Khenal's book will have, and it's back in my room.  I don't think anyone has anything weird planned with my book, but just incase anyone needs to know where it is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 01:10:08 pm
Psycho heads to Khenal's room and knocks on the door with his head; carrying a mountain of books that he thought would replace Khenal's damaged ones.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 01:42:48 pm
In my room, not office.  It's a bit flooded in there :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 01:52:15 pm
Psycho knocks again, this time harder.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 01:56:01 pm
"Hm?"

I get up and answer the door, surprised to find what appears to be a massive pile of books with four legs and Carrot's head.

"Oh, hey Carrot.  Come in, wont you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 01:58:49 pm
"I brought Y-OOOOOOOU!!!" I yell as the mountain of book collapses on top of me.
"Mmime mokee"(i'm ok!) I mumble.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 02:01:01 pm
My horn glows as I levitate the mountain of books off Carrot and stack them by a wall.

"Are you alright?  What's with all the books?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:03:32 pm
"Oh. I heard your office was flooded, so I spent some money and bought you some replacement books! I doubt that you would need them, but could you at least try them?" I say, ready to take the books back if Khenal doesn't like them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 02:06:00 pm
"I'd be happy to look through them, Carrot.  Thank you so much!"

I give him a grateful smile before turning to see just what kinds of books he's managed to obtain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:15:47 pm
Khenal sees alot of books that look the same as his old ones, but three in particular stand out: Symptoms of the Diomedian Parasite, Defer Sin, and Falkner's Guide to Dark Magic and Possession.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:19:49 pm
((Forget that anagram, deanagram this one instead: Defer Sin))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 02:23:31 pm
I give a low whistle as I scan the titles.

"That's quite the collection, Carrot.  Thank you! 

My wonder turns to slight confusion.  "Where did you get all these?  It took me almost a year to get this many books from the caravans."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:30:02 pm
I blush. "It took quite a while to get these. I had to barter away alot of my own possessions to acquire them! One of the books is quite odd...Defer Sin. It almost feels like that book's title is an anagram for something...There a book on anagrams in that pile somewhere. Oh, and I also want you to have this." I reach into the bag I had been carrying and pull out a small dagger with the word Loyalty inscribed on it. "After all the stuff you've done and helped me through, I thought I'd give you something to remind you of your loyalty."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 02:44:32 pm
I accept the dagger and place it on top of one of the stacks.

"Thank you, Carrot.  This means a lot to me.  Let me give you something in return."

I walk over to my bed and pull a bag out from under it.  I give it to Carrot, and look at the floor.

"It's not as thought-out as your gift, but I'd still like you to have these bits.  I was planning on buying books with them, but now it seems I wont have to.  And I don't know if I can accept all these books if it means you have to go without some of your own things."


*****************

Get out of my head, Master.  That dagger works perfectly with something I've been cooking up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 02:49:31 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BCr1tD0oyZk))
I shake my head and smile. "With all the damage to your office, you're going to need it to pay for repairs." Psycho says and turns to leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 02:57:45 pm
"Thank you again, Carrot."  I smile and turn to the stacked books, wondering how to organize them until I can get a new bookshelf.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 03:09:49 pm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jgsRFvcIk3c The birds are singing, the fortress is thriving, fillies hop around happily, Masons work to repair damage, everything is peaceful.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:21:42 pm
Still in the hospital, Friesden thrashes as she tries to break free from the traction bench.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 03:30:56 pm
With the book stacked roughly according to subject, my thoughts turn towards the popcorn from Schmoe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:32:21 pm
The popcorn has changed...warped, if you will. No longer popcorn, it has taken the form of a unicorn.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 03:32:58 pm
((It's a good thing the bench is made out of solid anti-Friesden! :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:34:21 pm
((Oh, good. A bench made of Krieg.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 03:34:41 pm
'What the...'

I cautiously approach the unicorn, ready to try a fresh memory seal if it seems hostile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 03:34:56 pm
((Using a timelord name generator http://www.zetacity.com/insidethetardis/games_timelordname.aspx I discovered Friesden's timelord name! The Dark Hand!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:36:40 pm
"Hello, Khenal. I am a memory of the future. You'll meet me sometime. I presume you're here for the memory of the daemon? He has given me the wherewithal to filter through them. Which ones are you interested in?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 03:41:36 pm
'Why is nothing ever simple when dealing with daemons?  What memories are stored?  Who are you?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:45:55 pm
The unicorn frowns. "I have not much dealings with daemons, so I am unable to answer your first question. The answer to your second appears to be from the birth of a pony called variably 'Friesden', 'bitch', '24601', 'prisoner', to approximately twelve months from what I believe is your current time. I cannot answer the third at this time. I apologise."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:51:34 pm
((I'm trying to tie up all the loose ends that have been made for Friesden with this character. Exposition Pony!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 03:56:23 pm
((http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jean_Valjean clever.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 03:57:03 pm
'Do you mind if I simply call you Keeper?'  I think for a few moments, pacing in my head.  'Why did the daemon want me to kill it?  It was acting very strangely when it confronted that other daemon, nothing like what I would have expected a daemon to act.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 03:59:08 pm
"Very well then. The answer to your question is unclear at this time. Your knowledge could change you completely. If you wish to learn, it could give you a moral imperative to disobey what you desire. Do you still wish to learn it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 04:05:38 pm
'I'll hold off on that one for now, then.  I'd rather ease into this stuff if at all possible.  Hmm.  Can Daemons actually make friends?  Schmoe called me friend several times, and I've been wondering if he wasn't being sarcastic the entire time.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 04:10:19 pm
"Provisionally. Daemons suffer pain from any of the so-called positive emotions. Love, friendship, joy, compassion, etcetera. Schmoe, as you know him, may well have been feeling one of these emotions for ponies, but if he was, it is either a restricted or prohibited memory. I am sorry I cannot help you more. Are there any further questions?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 04:12:17 pm
((you're reminding me of the hologram in I-robot.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 04:13:25 pm
'Do you know how to help Friesden?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 04:20:01 pm
"The pony known as Friesden is the main subject of these memories." The unicorn appears deep in thought. "It -seems- additional memories have been implanted that are more current, but they are off limits, even to me. I'm sorry. However, the current memories indicate that Friesden suffers from a multitude of mental illnesses. Most notable is manic depression, but also seen are post traumatic stress disorder, sociopathy, and a variety of other minor ones. Suggestions left by Schmoe are.....that's strange. These include more current memories that are not off limits. It appears that she has developed extreme sadism. First recommendation given is isolation and restraints. She is not be left alone or with single ponies. Ponies listed as to stay away include... Starkey, Khenal, Psycho Carrot, Charity...there is a long list here, but most of the ponies have already died in the memories presented."

The unicorn smiles. "Anything else?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 04:25:28 pm
'How recent are those new memories?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 04:26:55 pm
((That, Detective, is the right question. Program terminated.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 04:31:09 pm
"Within the last month, though I cannot give a full accounting."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 04:36:06 pm
'Then he is still alive.  In that case, tell me why Schmoe wanted to die.  I accept that the answer may change me, but I need to know.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 04:41:37 pm
"Very well. Accessing those memories." The unicorn remains still for a moment, then his expression changes. "...I see. Very well, Khenal. The daemon Schmoe wished to die for two reasons, focused on one motive. He was suffering extreme pain, as well as wanting to lose his daemonic nature. Can you guess the rest?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 04:52:22 pm
'...He was feeling happiness, or a mixture of the positive emotions you mentioned.  And he didn't want to be a daemon any more.  He's too tricky to simply let himself be destroyed if he died, he had some backup plan to keep existing as something else.  As something that could feel friendship without pain.  Thank you, Keeper, for this information.  I'll likely be back with more questions, but I need to get some answers from somepony else first.'

I open my eyes.


"I need to talk to Commander Starkey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 13, 2011, 08:14:36 pm
Once again, Otik stands vigil outside Starkey's office, This time with an open book and a plate of food. She does not seem to notice Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 08:35:25 pm
"Excuse me, Otik, is Starkey in?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 13, 2011, 08:43:33 pm
Otik quickly seals her book, setting it aside.

"Oh, hullo Cap'n. Aye, he's in there, but... I dunnae think he wants to talk to anypony. Are you... here to help 'im?


((EDIT: Don't want to sound like I'm discouraging RP.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 09:00:38 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rx8zMBQaZjQ You didn't edit fast enough.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 09:04:45 pm
"Help him?  Is he in trouble?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 13, 2011, 09:06:40 pm
((-.-))

((http://wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/2/21/Announcer_am_lastmanforfeit04.wav (http://wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/2/21/Announcer_am_lastmanforfeit04.wav)))

"He... well... after the little standoff with th' countess, I think somethin'... broke inside 'im. He ordered th' whole militia back to th' barracks, and when they were all gone, he just... broke down, bawlin' like a little foal. Since then he jus'... hasn't been th' same. He takes 'is meals in 'is office, an' he hardly says a word t' anypony that en't an order. I know somethin's really wrong with 'im, I just dunnae know what."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 09:20:30 pm
"Then yes, I'm here to help him.  May I go in?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 13, 2011, 09:26:40 pm
"Aye, go ahead. He don' even lock 'is door anymore lately."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 09:28:58 pm
I open the door and peek inside.

"Starkey, hello?  I'd like to talk to you if you have some time."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 13, 2011, 09:36:25 pm
Starkey is sitting at his desk, reading. At the sound of the door, he starts.

"Who is - oh... hello Khenal."

He gives Khenal a half-hearted smile.

"I... have plenty of time. What is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 09:40:18 pm
While the two were talking, Psycho had been listening in. He pops up behind Khenal and asks
"What's this about Starkey losing it?" Scaring the daylights out of Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 09:44:15 pm
"Gah!  Carrot, don't do that!"

I give Carrot an annoyed look, before relaxing and holding the door for him with my magic as I walk closer to Starkey.

"How are you doing, Starkey?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 13, 2011, 09:45:42 pm
"Oh.. alright, I suppose. How are you doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 09:47:40 pm
I give Starkey a crisp salute.
"Feeling better, sir?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 09:52:08 pm
"I'm... I've been worse.  I hear you've been pretty reclusive ever since, uh, the incident?  Anything you'd like to talk about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 13, 2011, 10:12:46 pm
"No, not particularly."

Another smile, this one warmer and far more sincere.

"But I get the impression you won't be taking 'no' for an answer. Have a seat."

There is one chair by the desk. Starkey offers it to Khenal, taking a seat on the bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 10:14:45 pm
I return the smile and take the offered chair.

"Thank you, Starkey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 11:07:45 pm
((alright, what's happening?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 11:13:00 pm
A staring contest :P  Looks like Impending Doom had to go do something.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 13, 2011, 11:16:08 pm
((My next post is long. so long I have to compose it in word. Be patient :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 13, 2011, 11:19:47 pm
((And I'm here now. Just had my last exam for the year, thank goodness. I'll be gone in about 40 minutes, and be back again an hour from then.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 13, 2011, 11:21:41 pm
Sweet, somepony gets to have revenge for my wall-o-text a while ago :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 13, 2011, 11:25:53 pm
((I for one LIKE walls of text! They're fun to read and show dedication!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 12:24:15 am
((Progress?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 12:35:12 am
((Hush you.))

((I'm explaining some of Starkey's backstory. I'm trying to work out the last little bit, the part where he actually gets banished. Once I get that, it'll be done.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 12:44:09 am
Oohh, awesome, can't wait! 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 01:57:53 am
"I... suppose it would help if you knew how I came to be here."

"I joined the guard the day I came of age. As long as I can remember, it had been my dream: to protect the weak, stand up for the innocent, and bring justice to the wicked. What I found... couldn't have been any more different. It was alright, at first: petty theft, public disturbances. Once I was even assigned security detail for one of the queen's speeches."

"Then came... the initiations. We were told one morning that the local prison was overcrowded, and they instructed us to..."

He pauses for a moment, unable to continue.

"... to issue beatings on the spot. I went along, good little soldier that I was. I would give them a few good whacks on the rump, like my mother used to do. Imagine my horror when I saw what some of the other recruits had done. Even still, I continued, but I think they suspected my heart wasn't in it. Nothing was ever said, but... certain others seemed to rise in the ranks far more quickly than I, for reasons that were never made entirely clear."
"When you got high enough, they started to trust you more. I would... hear things, that had happened in other prefectures. Over on the south side, a markspony squad opened fire into a crowd of demonstrators. To the east, one precinct over, a little filly of no more than four was hanged for stealing a loaf of bread. I was horrified, of course: how could anypony who had sworn our oath use their power to do such heinous things? But... I was naive as well. 'That sort of thing only happens over there, it could never happen here,' you know the feeling?"

"Goddess I was so naive..."

He must pause again.

"I had been in for about four years, when they woke us all early in the morning. For the past couple months or so, we had been dealing with a particularly nasty ring of rebels. The queen herself was supposed to make an appearance later that week, and there were reports that they were planning an assassination. They told us there had been a big break, that they had located the rebel's supply cache somewhere within the city. So, we all geared up and went out to the site. I was placed on overwatch, scanning the rooftops from on high. I saw the target building: a small schoolhouse, not unlike the one I went to as a colt. I was... angry. Cowards, hiding behind innocent foals while they plotted their evil deeds? The captain took his lieutenants into the building. They weren't long. He came out, and started giving out orders - I couldn't hear what he was saying from so high up. Then they.. they barred the doors, and... somepony brought out torches and..."

Starkey says nothing for a long time, overcome with emotion. At length, he continues.

"Even from so high, I could hear the foals screaming - oh goddess the screaming. i wanted to do something, to swoop in and fling the doors open and..."

"The next day, they sent us back to sift through the wreckage for evidence. we... didn't find anything, not one damn shred of anything incriminating. I... I still don't know why they did it."

"I was outraged Furious. I went straight to the prefecture captain to tell him what had happened. Surely he would be able to do something about this atrocity. I found him in his office, speaking with a strange mare. I gathered that she was a young mother, single, barely even a mare herself. Her... her twin foals had been in that schoolhouse. I didn't hear exactly what was said, but The captain didn't sound very sympathetic. He saw me listening, and ordered me to... to arrest her. I asked him on what charges.  'Treason,' he said."

"I was numb. This... this couldn't be happening, it had to be a dream. I visited her in the dungeon, whenever I had the time. Fikod was her name. We talked, about all sorts of things. It didn't matter what, we just talked. She told me about her family, how she and her parents had fled from AbbeyLashes after the Diomedians razed it to the ground. I told her about my foalhood traveling with the caravans, Mother and Father working as caravan guards. I told her things I never would have told my colleagues. In all my years in the guard, this mare was the first pony I could ever truly call my friend."

"About a month later, I learned that Fikod was to be hanged. There had never been a trial, no evidence of her guilt had ever been brought forth. The order was given, and we were expected to obey. She... was calm, resigned to her fate. 'At least I'll be with my little angels' she said. I... didn't plan on letting that happen. One night, I sneaked into the dungeon. She was the only one on the prison block at the time, so they only felt the need to post one guard. It was... easy enough to bring him down and get his keys. I took Fikod out of the city - she had no family to speak of, so there was no reason to stay in the city. At that point, I didn't care what they did to me: my friend was more important. So it came as no surprise that my welcome was... less than warm when I returned. the rest... well, that was the same for all of us, I think."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 02:00:49 am
I see now why Starkey wanted to help poor RBD.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 02:05:40 am
((What're you on about rainbow dash for?))
"That's...Touching...Oh...Sir. Why is this all coming out now? Khenal and I have battled daemons on three different occasions, but none of us had this much motivation! You truly are a hero in my book, if in no one else's!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 02:08:20 am
"You... you don't understand..."

Starkey stretchces out along the bed, his head at the foot.

"The captain? no more than a week ago, that could have been me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 02:09:34 am
((He tries to save Rainbow Dash from being turned into a statue. At least, last time I read it.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 02:14:43 am
"Sir. What REALLY happened when you went inside Friesden's mind? Khenal just glares or frowns at me when I ask him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 02:17:15 am
"In a moment of weakness, I allowed myself to become the very tyrant I despise..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 02:19:36 am
Realizing that Starkey is going through shell shock, Psycho quietly leaves him to give him some time to rest. I head to my room and go to bed. Khenal also goes home.
((I'm just ending the scene so that we can all be fully awake for the next one. Good night everypony!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 02:30:50 am
I'm just getting started, damnit! It's barely 6:30 PM here!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 02:33:22 am
As everyone leaves, Starkey drifts off into a fitful sleep. He once again finds himself on the deck of his ship.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 02:35:16 am
Hey, Cap'n, comes the familiar voice, and the speaker is quick to follow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 02:39:12 am
"Hello, Schmoe. How have things been?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 02:42:01 am
The daemon chortles. Same old, same old. How are things progressing in the material realm?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 02:48:45 am
"... I'm managing..."

He is clearly lying.

"Now, are you ready to tell me why you
really wanted to die?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 03:36:36 am
I won't press you. Very well, then. Why I wanted to die. It's a long story.

Friesden, as you may know, has been my...host, that's a good translation, for a long time. What you don't know is how long. Since before her birth she has held me. At first it was a mere inconvenience. Her sire had...well, you'd best ask Friesden herself that. She sealed those memories from me. Anyway, her sire had done something to try and seal me in her...to control. I played with her. Her defences were pitiful, even for a pony. Buffaloes are where the mental protection is at.

Anyway, it was a mere inconvenience. That was where I learned to possess multiple ponies. Her sire,
he starts to grin, he tried to bind me again. Didn't have an idea about why it wasn't working. Eventually he went nearly mad and tried to bind me into Friesden's dam. Ha. I took control of Friesden then. Knocked her sire out while he was still preparing. Killed the dam. I grabbed her soul before it left the realm. It was a trophy at the time. Delicious, causing a filly to kill her dam. She was charged with murder, but an investigation by the unicorns of the town halted that and had her immediately imprisoned in a sealed facility.

They knew she had a daemon inside her, and they knew her sire had bound it into her. He was executed, the fool. They didn't know that the daemon was free. After a week of boredom, I had unbound three other daemons, turning the ponies into daemonhosts. The entire facility was destroyed, and we escaped.

From then, it was us against the world. It took some time to get a proper...agreement, shall we say. Her mind was our main weakness, you see? We agreed to split it. Her mother was the first mind to be added. Then we started to add false minds, voluntarily, on her side, giving her multiple personalities. I, of course, controlled them. We only needed them to dodge the telepaths. The rest of the time, it was her.

Eventually we came here. Both of us had gotten sloppy...lazy. We lost control of her mind once. One of the pegasi died. That was when we fabricated the diary. Marvellous work of fiction. I do recommend it.

I was straining myself, trying to find why I had lost it. It came to me. We had fallen for each other. By this time, Friesden was in gaol. She had retreated into her mind, letting the other personalitie take over. I came back. And from there, you should know. Friesden knew we had to escape. If we had a small riot over anything, we could take the chance to get out. Friesden didn't know, but I had already planned to escape from her. Positive emotions are poison to a daemon. I was trying for Khenal, to get him to banish me, but he decided to trap me instead. I'd already left Friesden mostly trapped, but she knew why. When that bastard possessing Carrot came...well, I couldn't just hide behind Khenal. I reopened Friesden's connection and drove back into there. I fought off Carrot...and the rest you know.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 03:44:01 am
"Then the real Friesden has been deep within since before she came here? Have any of us even met the real Friesden?"

"What was so... special about the daemon posessing Carrot? What was he to you? Why did you have to fight him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 03:52:18 am
The daemon laughs again. Oh, you've met the 'real' Friesden, as much as you can say there is one. Whether there still is one...well, I cannot say. But if there is one, you have met her, before the killing. As to the daemon...he was one of the bound who escaped destruction of the holding facility. One of the five pony daemon pairs who did. Friesden and I, the three I unbound, and him. He isn't smart. But he's powerful. He may have retreated for the moment, but he's still out there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 03:53:24 am
"And what happened to the other three pairs? Are they here in Glitterglen?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 03:54:51 am
The daemon shrugs. Truth be told, I have no idea. Could be anywhere.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 04:02:03 am
"One more question: What do you plan on doing once you're free, if that is indeed what I decide to do with you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 04:05:54 am
Find another way to die? The daemon shakes his head. In truth, captain, I have no plans.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 04:08:01 am
"I... suppose that is a fair answer. For now, if you don't mind, I'd like to enjoy the rest of this dream in private."

((Goodnight all.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 14, 2011, 10:47:56 am
Welp, first thing first.  Holy hell, you guys have done a lot with this thing.  I just finished reading it today.
Secondly, you still accepting new victims or not?  What I've seen so far looks very fun and entertaining, so I'd like to throw my hat into the ring.
If I make the cut here be some info on mah pony.
Name: Granite
Gender: Male
Caste: Earth Pony
Profession: Anything rock related.  Order of preference:  Stone Detailing, Mining, Stonecrafting, Masonry.  I suppose pottery might count but that would be the last thing on the list.
Bio:  Joined up with a migrant wave partway through their journey to Glitterglen and claimed he had been slated for deportation right after they left, was kicked out anyway and told to 'go that way'.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 03:46:06 pm
Fresh Meat! New people!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 03:51:48 pm
((Anyone mind putting all the RP we've posted already into one document or something? The main pony thread is cooking up an idea for a Bay12 Anthology of Ponies.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 04:13:40 pm
((good idea! I was thinking the same thing actually! I shall do it if nobody beats me to it!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 04:32:47 pm
((I'm up to page 39. not long now. I'll PM you guys the link when I'm done. I'll have it on google docs.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 14, 2011, 04:35:30 pm
That thing'll definitely make it easier to catch up with the thread.  Figures it would be made as soon as I was done reading it the slow way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 04:43:32 pm
((Done with archiving, or rather saving each page's index file. Now I'll just work some magic with google docs, then comes the link))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 04:50:36 pm
((Alright. I'm using The Internet Archive instead. Regardless...I'll edit this post with the link when it's done uploading.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 14, 2011, 04:53:32 pm
If I end up getting the time I may try my hand at compiling the archive into a coherent narrative.  Might be interesting to see this thing as a complete story.
Unfortunately between school, work, NaNoWriMo, and Skyrim I don't think I have the time to do it at a reasonable speed right now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 04:56:40 pm
CUE ZELDA CHEST MUSIC! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iPZXxlckBSs
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 14, 2011, 05:04:27 pm
wow, ow my head hurts. I guess I shouldn't wrap it around multi-character mind battles, the moral ambiguities of crime and punishment, and maniacal psychotic interpersonal conflict all at once.

you people RP'ing so hardcore and juxtaposing it to the painterly pastels of My Little Pony is hilarious BTW.

anywhosit, I'm jumping in too, pony me up!

Name: Couth Darkmane
Sex: Male
Role: Bartender
Race(duh):Earth pony

Basic info; if Fallout's Moriarty and Pinkie Pie had a pony baby (illegal in most states) this would be the result.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 14, 2011, 05:08:11 pm
Excellent! Another fool to join me in the insanity of joining this late!  May we carve our own path in this madness riddled hellhole of a fortress!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 14, 2011, 05:49:07 pm
(so I have a good story cooked up. It's got plenty of twists for Charity, Khenal, Carrot,feresdin and Dr Bubbles. do I need approval from KingStrongbeard or can I dive right in?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 14, 2011, 06:08:29 pm
((You'll need approval from King Strongbeard. We can't have ponies running around everywhere. Also, WELCOME TO GLITTERGLEN! I hope you choose to *Help* us with firesden's case. Even so, right now this is just insane the amount of mad RP going on. Who knew that the master joining in was the breaker that caused this....rout.
Did you two come from surfing the forums, or the HoL?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 06:12:00 pm
I don't think Strongbeard would be upset if you start some introductory stuff before he officially ponies you, though you might want to wait just to be sure.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 06:23:18 pm
Who knew that the master joining in was the breaker that caused this....rout.
^_^ sigged.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 06:23:44 pm
Anyway, can we start RPing now?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 06:25:37 pm
Right after we sing the Equestrian National Anthem http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&v=fwERapuM17k
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 14, 2011, 06:32:40 pm
First of all, WOW, SIGGED!
Second, I won't be here for awhile, so don't include me in this RP.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 14, 2011, 07:06:40 pm
Hello Rentorian.
And...
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

New pony means new pony in game description. It is below. Khenal, I assume you will want to do your thing? Although he's basically just another indigo earthpony.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

A few quick notes about our new guy. I don't currently have any available male earthponies in any stone based industry. Except for that metalcrafter I mentioned a few pages ago, who was named Katak. He's new to mining, as his metal-crafting skill is wasted here. Although he also was recently possessed and produced an artifact. The adamantine earring I gave to Psycho. But now his name is Granite.

Chairty's Journal 13th Malachite 98

Captian Khenal's office has begun to dry out. However, his floor is caked in a layer of mud and dust, and some blood got washed in as well. and several rather large rocks somehow made it. The rocks have been removed, but everypony has been to busy to help him clean the dirt up. Poor Khenal, can't even get to and from his private rooms without getting his boots covered in the Sister's only know what.

We reactivated the water flow, and with the pressure greatly reduced it was able to flow much more gently. Once, it was calm, we opened the refilling mechanism and now water will constantly flow, from the aquifer, to where the hospital's well is, and then down to the caverns shower, and then to Kheanal's office, and finally to the cavern lake. We will have to watch it for flooding, but I think it's going to work just fine now.


14th Malachite 98

This month Starkey's squad is supposed to be defending the cavern entrance, but today a pair of Batmen, attacked a fisherpony in the caverns. The ground squad seemed to relish the opportunity for some action and chased them off, but I think they were disappointed when the bat creatures flew off over the underground lake, out of reach.

20th Malchite 98

Ironya and Firelordsky had another foal today. A little pegasan colt. Name of Odur.

12th Galena 98

A zebra caravan has been spotted by our scouts, they should be here in a day or two. And I have renewed my ban on the export of amulets. I hope the citizens listen to me this time. Encase they don't however, I'm calling for the expansion of the prison block.
_______________________________________________________________

On the 18th of Galena, a diomedian ambush came to Glitterglen. Kil was out on the surface and the young unicorn wife and her foal were the target of the foul attack. A tentacle pony grabbed her child by the throat, as Charity's daughter Belle, watched from across the river. It was Belle who sounded the alarm. The militia upon hearing that Kil was in danger wasted no time in charging forth to meet the enemy. While the Fortress Guard were ordered to the courtyard, encase another group tried to sneak in while the militia was out.

As Bebmal approached, masterful steel axe in mouth, and a shield floating nearby him, held by his unicorn magic, one of the keishi ponies, let loose a battle cry, and entered a trance like state.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Kolad.png)

Madush and Osal, a pair of Marksponies, rush a Tentacle pony and tumble together before bashing it with their crossbows, repeatedly.

More ponies surround the Tranced enemy. He fights them off well for a time, severally injuring one in the leg, and bruising several more through the militia ponies steel armor. But together and with the help of one of the unicorn lashers Langgud, the tide turns against him. That is until another Tentacled Axepony joins the fight and hacks poor Langgud many times, inflicting several bleeding wounds which quickly do in the brave unicorn.

Another pony is less lucky, he is quickly overwhelmed by multiple attacks, his armor mearly prolongs his suffering as he is stuck again and again.

Osal and Bebmal flee the battle. Captain Otik tries to hold everypony together. And fires off shots at the ponies chasing Osal. "If only the melee squad had charged together." He thinks to himself. But then Commander Starkey, late to the battle shows his face. He rushes off and joins Tecak the markspony and Rithlut the lasher, in melee with a tentacle pony. They quickly kill it and the entire militia turns it's focus on the lone remaining tentacled bastard, hacking and shooting, and whipping it until at last it fell.

The milita, badly bloodied, returned home, to Glitterglen. Though lives were lost, Kil and her foal survived, entirely unharmed, much to the delight of Captain Carrot.
________________________________________________________
Charity's Journal 18th Galena 98

A diomedian ambush took us by surprise today. Kil and her baby were in danger, this lead to foolishness on the part of the militia, instead of grouping together for a charge, they went off blindly, while the day was won, and the civilians all saved, we lost two ponies, and two more are in the Hospital.


(Oh wow, another new pony while I was typing. Okay DVNO, welcome to Glitterglen and all that. Okay, I just so happened to have a male earthpony Cook/brewer. So, he's been officially claimed as Couth Darkmane.

His info will be posted in the spoiler below.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 07:18:03 pm
After the battle and making sure my wife and child are ok, I head off to look for Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 07:28:44 pm
While nopony is watching, Friesden continues to try and break the restraints holding her down.


One of the straps breaks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 07:45:23 pm
I wander the halls on patrol, distracted by my thoughts. 

'Starkey's past certainly explains a lot, and I really need to talk to Dr. Bubbles about making sure Friesden is never left alone.  He might even be able to reach her, he at least wasn't involved in the incident with Schmoe.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 07:48:10 pm
"That is a possibility, Khenal," the Keeper says.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 07:50:24 pm
I find Khenal in the hall. "Khenal!" I say from behind, hoping to startle Khenal again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 08:05:57 pm
I smile and continue walking like I didn't hear Carrot, hoping to turn and surprise him for a change if he tries following me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 08:12:05 pm
I daftly continue following Khenal, making annoying faces all the way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 08:16:05 pm
I quickly turn to face Carrot, sticking out my tongue and shaking my head.

"Rargaboogabooga!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 08:17:59 pm
"AAAAAAAHH!!!" I say, sprinting out a window.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 08:20:56 pm
I fall over laughing, clutching my sides.

"Car-ahaha-Carrot!  Are *gasp* are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 08:21:02 pm
Deftly slipping her hoof out of the remains of the strap, Friesden tries to unbind herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 08:25:11 pm
Carrot finds himself tangled in a heap with a familiar rainbow-maned stallion.

"C-Carrot? Getoffomee!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 08:27:50 pm
I laugh even harder when I recognize who Carrot must have landed on, tears forming from mirth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 14, 2011, 08:37:42 pm
As long as no one has any problems I'll just be rp'ing Granite as though he just arrived as a migrant
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"This is it eh?" Granite asked the seemingly empty air around him.
"As far as I can tell, the place smells delicious," responded a second voice that seemed to come from Granite's mouth.
"You're going to have to stop doing that if we want to actually stay here for a while," Granite chided the voice as he look at the fort from the hill he was standing on.  "Well, no time like the present to see how long it takes them to run us out this time," he said smiling as he shifted his pack around, bringing his mining pick to the front.
"Just make sure I get something to eat soon," the voice reminded him.
"Speak in my head, not with my mouth.  I've told you that a million times!" Granite growled.
Fine, fine.  Is this better your majesty? the voice asked mockingly.
"Much." Granite grunted as he looked for a nice clear path to the front of the fortress, it looked like there was some sort of commotion out front...  "Oh hell," he muttered as he recognized a Diomedian ambush party.  "Looks like you might get a meal sooner than you thought."
Excellent, traveling is always such hungry work, the voice said happily.
"Says the one that doesn't have to do any of the walking," Granite growled.
Please, you're a pony, you can eat grass.  I can't and I'm hungry, it repeated piteously.
"We'll head in as soon as that raiding party is done with, that sound good?" Granite asked.
Excellent, be sure to head to head to the hospital, those places always have plenty of food, the voice reminded him.
"I know," Granite replied.
And make sure to- the voice started saying.
"I know that too, just lay low and try to keep in sync with me as much as you can.  Don't want anyone detecting you before we at least can resupply," Granite interjected.  As he looked down at the field in front of the fortress he saw that the Diomedian's were fleeing, apparently routed.  With a grin he started trotting down the hill towards the fortress, shouting to the first pony he saw to let them know another migrant had shown up.
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And as an added bonus we have Granite as seen through he pony maker:
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 09:32:05 pm
Carrot has a major concussion from the fall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 09:35:26 pm
Starkey untangles himself from Carrot. By this time, even he is chuckling mirthfully.

"Ah-heh-heh, ah, come on Carrot."

He extends a hoof to help him up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 09:47:06 pm
I shakily stand up, still stifling giggles, before moving to the more conventional entrance of a door to the room Carrot jumped into.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 10:20:39 pm
I don't budge, my head appears to be bleeding from falling TWO STORIES.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 10:21:24 pm
Friesden has nearly finished freeing herself from the traction bench.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 14, 2011, 10:21:54 pm
(How did Psycho jump out a window and fall two stories in an underground fortress?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 10:30:33 pm
((Somewhere in the caverns, perhaps?))

"Carrot?"

Starkey notices the blood.

"Oh clop... Khenal, he's injured! Go to the infirmary, tell the doctor!"

He hoists Carrot onto his back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 10:34:23 pm
Friesden finally finishes freeing herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 10:42:03 pm
I dash to the hospital to make sure they are ready to receive Carrot.

"Dr. Bubbles!  Anypony!  Carrot looks like he's in bad shape!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 10:46:19 pm
Friesden jumps up at Khenal's voice, and a savage grin comes over her face. She hurries and picks up a scalpel before he can enter the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 10:52:16 pm
I burst through the door, still yelling for anypony with medical expertise.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 10:53:06 pm
Friesden jumps onto Khenal, swinging the scalpel wildly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 10:59:22 pm
I get sliced across the face before my training kicks in and I reflexively try to buck my attacker before rolling to the side, coming up in a defensive position.  Only then do I notice who my attacker is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 11:03:03 pm
"Kill you!" yells the crazed pegasus.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 11:05:22 pm
'Not good!'

My horn brightens as I attempt to wrest the scalpel from Friesden


"Please Friesden, calm down!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 11:06:51 pm
"If I might intrude, Khenal...I did warn you." says the Keeper.


"Kill you!" the pegasus repeats and continues to try and struggle, growing angrier by the minute.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 11:14:22 pm
'Not helping!'

I continue trying to take the scalpel, not wanting to try my sleep spell while also doing telekinesis.


"Starkey!  Where are you?!  Friesden is loose!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 14, 2011, 11:16:03 pm
a extreemly dark bruise begins to appear on my face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 11:19:17 pm
"Consider it in my best interests that the abomination dies." The unicorn spits.

"I will kill you. You will die by my hand. I will kill you. Kill you. KILL YOU!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 11:22:28 pm
"Khenal? what in Kulet's name is-"

Seeing the scene arrayed before him, Starkey shoulders Carrot onto a nearby bed and rushes to restrain Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 11:24:34 pm
Friesden continues to try to lash out with all limbs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 11:31:14 pm
"Keep her busy so I can try my sleep spell on her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 11:33:26 pm
"Raaaarrgh! Kill you! Kill you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 11:35:41 pm
Starkey tries to draw Friesden's attention, dodging her slashes as best he can.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 11:37:26 pm
Friesden doesn't seem to notice him, just continuing to try and hit Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 11:40:43 pm
I continue trying to avoid Friesden's blows, but it's quickly becoming apparent that I can't dodge her forever.

"Please Friesden, I don't want to hurt you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 11:42:27 pm
Realizing this isn't working, Starkey takes a more direct approach: he grabs her around the middle with both forelegs and hovers, lifting her high into the air.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 11:44:11 pm
She seems to become even more frenzied, and replies "But I want to kill YOU!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 14, 2011, 11:44:25 pm
12th Malachite 98

It's near midnight in Glitterglen. everypony is asleep, and the air in the very cave itself is motionless. all but one building, a bar called the Unshorn Fetlock shows even a glimmer of life. inside are 12 off-duty haulers and their gracious host and bartender Couth Darkmane entertaining them. "...and ten amulets made of that banned metal tumble out of her basket! her father looks at the whole mess his daughter made, looks at her , looks at the guard and says..." Couth pauses as he refills a hauler's mug with the finest brew ... and he says "I don't know her!""  the mead hall roars with laughter. "and what happened next!?" cried a hauler in baited breath. Couth's eyes lock with his. "the guard beat her to death." he said dryly. the room went silent. If this was the punchline of couth's joke it was a sick one. " I-I'm so sorry I didn't know." the inquiring hauler stammered to cut the tension. Couth cocks an eyebrow. " you didn't know the guards killed three ponies over amulets? do you live under a ROCK?" " uh, yes. yes I do." the hauler responds truthfully.  Couth sighs, says "well, it was a mistake. it's over. no need to-" "well who's mistake was it?" interrupted another pony. "nopony official is pointing hooves yet, but last I checked it's under Charity's authority to enforce-" "damn the mayor,an' damn tha princess! those bluebloods try every trick in the book to keep us down."A drunk hauler close to Couth garbled. Couth clenched his teeth "say what you want about mayor Charity but our princess Hux had nothing to do with-" the drunk pony detects the bartender's fondness for the royal family " alicorns think of us like pests, they want of us earthponies dead." "you. out. now." Couth says coolly.  the hauler continues "I will never have enough coin to feed my family, and why? because i wasn't born with wings and a stupid hoity-toity hor-" Couth grabs the drunk bastard by the mane and headbutts him unconscious, breaks a bottle of fine wine and with a mad glare declares "THE BAR IS CLOSED. EVERYONE OUT." everypony makes a mad dash out of the bar.

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not done, will write more after I finish watching walking dead  :P

EDIT this post is now cannon                 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 11:49:43 pm
"Sorry, but I don't want to die."

My horn flashes as I cast the sleep spell, trusting in Starkey to keep Friesden from falling on the scalpel or anything else dangerous.


*********

I believe we only have 3 miners, and one of them is brand-spanking-new.  Haulers might work better for your bar, just so you know, DVNO :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 14, 2011, 11:53:38 pm
Friesden's thrashing slows, then eventually stops.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 14, 2011, 11:56:23 pm
Starkey strains under her weight, before gently lowering her to the ground.

"What the clop was that all about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 14, 2011, 11:59:57 pm
"I think she blames me for her current state, or she's absolutely insane.  Maybe a bit of both..."

I carefully levitate her back to the traction bench, making sure she's secure.

*Sigh* "I should have listened and had her observed at all times..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 12:01:46 am
Psycho's left front leg begins to bleed heavily for no visable reason
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 12:01:54 am
"Damn it all, I had hoped with that daemon gone, she'd show some improvement!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 12:04:45 am
I believe we only have 3 miners, and one of them is brand-spanking-new.  Haulers might work better for your bar, just so you know, DVNO :P

That is absolutely correct. I know most players tend to have more miners than that, but I tend to think two or three legendary miners work quite fast enough. I might use more if I have some sort of large underground project planned, but in most forts only a handful is sufficient, the other ponies are unnecessary. So yeah DVNO you might want to use haulers instead of miners for your bar. As they are the largest group of nameless ponies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 12:15:40 am
"Me too..."

I turn to look at Starkey and notice Carrot on the bed behind him.

"...Why is Carrot bleeding?  Doctor!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 12:17:31 am
"Bleeding? He's undead, how can he..."

Starkey checks Carrot's pulse.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 12:24:43 am
Starkey feels a tiny, miniscule heartbeat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 12:26:35 am
"Khenal! Khenal, you won't believe this, but Carrot's alive!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 12:33:55 am
"And he needs a doctor if he wants to stay that way!  Um, do you know how to treat a wound?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 12:35:09 am
the bleeding lessens as Psycho's heart begins to fail.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 12:39:01 am
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kbxf64t5hNM
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 12:41:08 am
"No, clop no! not again!"

Starkey rears up, placing his hooves on Carrots chest and rapidly pumping his ribcage.

"Khenal! Find me some gauze!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 12:45:39 am
I start searching through the various cabinets and chests, looking for something even vaguely resembling gauze.  I find some fabric and figure that's close enough, rushing back to Carrot to try to stop the bleeding.

'Keeper, I don't suppose you have any memories of triage?  Anything at all?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 12:46:59 am
the bleeding continues to slow, and Psycho's breathing becomes more and strained.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 12:48:58 am
"Triage, Khenal? You want intensive care. What your friend is doing may slow the death, it won't prevent it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 12:51:07 am
"Aye, just like that, son! Keep pressure there, and change the bandage if it gets soaked."

He notices as carrot's breathing becomes labored. Without so much as a second thought, he draws in a deep breath and blows it into Carrot's lungs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 12:52:06 am
(PERFECT MUSIC! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TxqglTl7_H8)
Suddenly, Khenal notice a faint glint coming from the gash, and you lean closer to see what it is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 15, 2011, 12:52:22 am
(( hey KingStrongbeard quick question what's the names of the ponies who died of beatings and whats the name of your chief mechanism maker?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 12:53:45 am
((The beating victims were Bokbon and Nanges. IIRC, chief mechanic is Nicolta Tesla.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 01:08:04 am
'Intensive care, then!  ...Is something in his wound?'

I lean closer to get a better look at whatever it is in the wound.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 01:09:36 am
"If his heart is failing, you will need to deliver an electrical shock to it to restart it. After that, he might need a transfusion is he has lost too much blood."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 01:10:14 am
You see the same knife I gave you jammed into what is likely one of my arteries.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 01:18:05 am
"What the buck?!"

I quickly remove the knife from the wound, trying not to damage Carrot any further.  I then replace the soaked bandage with a new one.

'Um, how much is too much?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 01:19:25 am
"More than a quarter of their total blood, or a litre to be on the safe side."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 01:22:23 am
"What did you... Kulet's tits Khenal, why did you do that!? Nevermind, it's going to bleed faster now. Take the end of your hoof and pinch the artery closed, then tie off the whole leg with that fabric."

Starkey continues administering breaths and compressions.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 01:24:58 am
"You...you took the knife out... Don't do that again, please. The knife would usually have applied pressure and lowered bleeding. You'll need to clamp the two ends shut now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 01:27:19 am
((Just want to let you know, i'm not killing off Psycho.))
Psycho has been awake for a while now, but FAR too weak to be able to talk...until now. Psycho musters up all of his remaining strength, and says "...Look after my kids...when I die..." and then he has a heart attack.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 01:28:16 am
I do as Starkey says, holding the artery closed while I use the cloth as a tourniquet. 

'How much blood does it look like he's lost?  I'm not very good at guessing liquids, and I don't want him to die again.'


"Uh-oh"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 01:33:13 am
Starkey continues with renewed vigor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 01:34:44 am
"I can't see through your eyes, Khenal. You'll have to guess. Best to avoid it, though, chances are high of infection. You'll need to keep him hydrated."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 01:40:02 am
'What kind of electric shock will get his heart beating again?  Quickly!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 01:42:35 am
"Any! You might need to repeat it if it doesn't work."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 01:51:22 am
"I hope this works.  Starkey, get off him for a moment, I'm going to try something."

My horn begins crackling with a charge of electricity, ready to try to shock Carrot back to life once Starkey is clear of him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 01:54:15 am
"You'll need to deliver the shock to the chest, as close to where the heart is as possible."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 01:57:09 am
"Whatever it is, do it quickly!"

Starkey backs away, ready to jump right back in if this doesn't work.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 01:58:13 am
Psycho begins to turn deathly pale. He doesn't have much time left.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 02:03:49 am
"Here goes!"

I lean down to place my horn as near Carrot's heart as I can, then release a strong shock into him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 02:15:14 am
Psycho's heart begins to beat again, and the color to his skin begins to gradually return to it's former luster. He jolts upright for a moment before plopping back down. Psycho will survive.
((Well. It's 2:16 am in America...so I'm going to bed...G'night ponies!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 02:18:59 am
Starkey gives Carrot a cursory examination.

"He'll live, thank the goddess. What did you do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 02:26:22 am
"Um, I gave him an electric shock to restart his heart.  I wasn't sure I should try it, but we were running out of options."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 02:33:52 am
"Heh. Trust you to think out of the box, lad."

Starkey approaches Friesden cautiously, expecting her to wake at any moment.

"Now... what's got you all hot and bothered, miss?"

He picks up the scalpel from her rampage, examining it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 02:39:54 am
"Um, it wasn't my idea.  To shock him, I mean.  I...I need to talk to you about Schmoe.  Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 02:56:54 am
*sigh* "How long have you known?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 03:01:43 am
I pause to consider just how long I've known Schmoe was still alive.

"I suspected since right after the incident.  The fires didn't die after you were finished with Friesden.  I confirmed it a month or so ago, when I finally got the nerve to check on the popcorn Schmoe had left in my mind.  I had actually come to your office to talk about it then, but..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 03:04:41 am
"Aye, he's still with me. Locked away somewhere even he can't escape, unless I allow it. What of it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 03:10:21 am
"Wait, with you?!  I thought he had gotten away!  I thought we were going to have to start searching for him again before he could do...whatever it is he's actually trying to do!"

I pace a bit during my short tirade, before calming down and giving Starkey a measuring look, then smiling warmly.  'Figures he'd have the mental discipline to keep something like Schmoe in check.  Heh, even without magic.'

"What are you going to do with him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 03:15:49 am
"I figured I'd milk him for as much information as I could, in case we ever have to deal with his ilk again - with our luck, likely and often. He's been... surprisingly forthcoming."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 15, 2011, 03:20:06 am
13th Malachite 98

Bokbon used to come into this bar everyday and read aloud her poems about nature, love, and all things beautiful. she captured my hart. she's gone now. and why? Incompetence. Pure Incompetence.

Some wrongs can't be made right. but I'll be damned if I can't try.

Couth wakes on the floor of his bar with his muzzle half-submerged in spilled ale and regret. I lost my temper again.. he thinks as he surveys the destruction of his normally spotless bar. "In last night's drunken rampage I turned over two racks of mead, threw a table out a window and ...? what's this, I wrote a note?"

Intrigued , Couth props up a strewn bar stool and begins to read. "this is unsettling." his eyes widen. "no, this is high treason."

  Nicolta Tesla,
 
      It has come to my attention that I need to bolster my office's security in light of the current break-in. I am formally requesting you to set up a crossbow trap during it's renovation and prime it. don't breathe a word of it to any other pony. what's the use of a trap if everyone knows there's a trap? meet me at the cliff overlooking Khenal's office for your just reward.
                                                                        - Mayor Charity


what's that phrase "just reward" implying? I always joked that place was a great place for somepony to "have an accident" but would I possibly?

"what'ca readin' ?" Nicolta Tesla asked.

Couth jumps back about ten feet.

"WHO IN CELESTIAS NAME LET YOU IN?"

"uh, I came in here for my usual morning brew? and then I find the whole place turned over? are you ok?

right. this is the part of my day where I make Nicolta a ridiculously caffeinated brew and she frantically chats my ear off about her latest technical marvel beheading this and eviscerating that.

" I'm just.. uh, well I.. had an accident taking stock, it's nothing."

"Mmm'hm. well do you have my brew ready?"
     
"sorry, not today."

"oh, well it's been uh, interesting chatting with you. I guess i'll get going."

she turns to leave

"hey, Nicolta? I heard the Mayor and the militia had a stand off.  were there any arrests?"

"hmm, nope, I think everything was sorted out in the end and everyone understood each other!"

"hah, yeah everyone got a happy ending. hey Nicolta, I almost forgot, Charity wanted me to give this letter to you." Couth said coldly.

-----------------------
OOC, next person to walk into Charity's office gets an arrow to the chest! the !!FUN!! has been doubled!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 03:22:56 am
"Have you talked with him about why he wants to die?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 03:28:30 am
"Apparently, he's been with Friesden for... quite a while. Since long before she came to Glitterglen. In their time together, they seem to have... fallen for eachother. I don't quite understand the last part but... apparently love is painful to daemons? Something along those lines. So it seems like he wanted to die so he could find another way to be with her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 03:43:31 am
"Fallen for eachother?  Oh wow, didn't see that one."

I sit down, trying to wrap my mind around anypony falling for a daemon and for a daemon to reciprocate the feeling.

"Huh, I guess that explains his odd behavior.  And most of the rest of his plan.  But if it works, will he be a good...whatever he becomes, or will he be even worse?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 03:50:07 am
((I'm back.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 03:52:12 am
"I'm not sure. He seems reasonable enough, but then again it could be an act to con his way to freedom. I'm not very good at seeing through lies."

"I wonder... if he really loves Friesden, do you think he would help...  bring her back to us?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 03:56:44 am
After finishing the crossbow trap. Nicolta Tesla goes to the arranged meeting area so he can teach Countess Charity the proper way to disable/enable the trap, so nopony would get hurt, who didn't deserve it. Naturally he won't find the Unicorn there.

Mere minutes after Tesla leaves the area, Charity approaches her office door. Her bouncing baby pegasus filly riding upon her back, slightly sleepy. Charity, humms a little lullaby for her daughter, as she begins to open the door. Her front right hoof, steps upon the pressure place, and a bronze bolt flies and strikes her in her chest. She attempts to cry out, but her cry is muffled by her collapsing lung. She takes a few steps back before stumbling, Skydancer falls off her mother's back, and hits the stone floor and begins to cry. Charity coaghs up blood as she tries to call out for help. Skydancer's cries echo throughout the upper levels of the fortress.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 04:01:09 am
"I...don't know.  It seems just as likely that he's trying this reincarnation plan just to escape the pain of being loved by her as it is that he loves her in return and wants to be with her.  I'll see if Keeper has any thoughts on it, though."

'Well, Keeper?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 04:01:22 am
((Tell me my office has a back door. I AM BACK PEOPLE! CHOOSING NOT TO JOIN THE EVEN CRAZIER RP, I WILL JOIN KING STRONGBEARD!))
*Bubbles hears a disturbance in the hospital, followed by what sounded awfully like Miss Charity screaming in pain. Charging out the back door, he found Charity bleeding at her front door, Skywalker crying nearby.*
"MISS CHARITY! WHAT HAPPENED?"
*Bubbles grabs her and brings her to the hospital as fast as he can*
((Damn, looks like you lot are going to have some even CRAZIER reactions to this.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 04:02:30 am
"...Keeper? Who is Keeper?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 04:06:22 am
As Bubbles carries the Countess to the infirmry, she mumbles. "Assassins, trapped my office, assassins in Glitterglen, get the guard, warn my family. Skydancer? Where's Skydancer?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 04:09:12 am
"I fear I must confess. From what you have unsealed in my memory, it appears I am to be...Schmoe, did you call him? I am to be his incarnation if Friesden dies. I don't have his complete memories, but I do know that my previous version was called in my timeline too. I don't know how to procede. I'm...I'm lost. I don't know."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 04:11:13 am
"The popcorn that I never returned to Schmoe."

Realizing how insane that sounds, I try to elaborate.

"Er, in the middle of the confrontation, Schmoe had pulled out a bag of memories that he intended to eat like popcorn.  I snatched them from him, thinking he had somehow gotten loose and was taking my memories.  They were his memories, not mine.  I sealed them, hoping to limit his power by taking some of his sustenance.  Once I finally decided to try looking though them, they had changed into a unicorn who likes to say confusing things and give good advice that I usually don't want to follow."

I pause, seeming to listen to something.

"Really confusing things..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 04:17:08 am
"...You know, insanity isn't a contest. You don't have to try and one-up me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 04:24:16 am
"All I can tell you is what I remember from my own time. Even then, some of the memories are sealed. I can't give you a full and good account of it. I'm sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 04:25:13 am
((And on that note, I must be off to bed. See y'all.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 04:26:06 am
"Charity, Skywalker is safe and sound. What i'm worried about right now is you. Your lungs are collapsing"
((This is all said in a calm tone to prevent Charity from waking up in shock))
*Bubbles bucks the door to the hospital open.*
((Now it's you guys' turn to say something convincing.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 04:31:00 am
Charity's breathing is very labored, after she's been assured that her baby, Skydancer, is okay, she allows herself to pass out. Her breathing is slow and would be painful were she awake, but she's still alive.

(Although if I'm not mistaken, Bubbles and Charity just crashed through the door into where Khenal, Starkey, Friesden, and unconscious Carrot are at. So yay, the gang is all together, and only two of us are dying, today. Well, so far.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 04:34:10 am
I am sitting on one of the hospital beds, examining the dagger from Carrot as I float it in front of me.  Starkey had excused himself, claiming an early shift in the morning.  I stayed behind to ensure Carrot doesn't die before anypony can help him.

I drop the dagger when Dr. Bubbles bucks the door open with the Countess across his back.


"What happened?!"


***********

Like ships passing in the night, Starkey manages to sneak out before more drama happens ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 15, 2011, 05:00:04 am
Present Day

Oh Couth, what are you doing? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?

I'm doing what nopony else has the guts to do.

And I'm doing it for the Princess.

At this thought, a weary Couth Darkmane finally stopped pacing around his room. he'd been doing it for hours, pacing around like a nervous wreck, but it's just now that he realizes it.

In fact, he comes to alot of hard hitting realizations. the most distressing one? he has no plan.

"ok, ok, plan, plan plan, whats the plan? where do I go from here?"

Couth picks up his quill and sets up some priorities on parchment.

 "first, there's Nicolta to deal with."

"then, I need to set things right in Glitterglen, make it a better place."

"after that, the princess might notice I am a pony that exists."

the very thought caused a euphoria to wash over him.

It was just enough for him to commit to step one.

he sets off, saunters back in his home, grabs a bag of granite marbles with his mouth, and sets off again. 
-----------------------------------------------------------------

" well, here I am,"  Nicolta sighed impatiently, tapping her hoof. it's not like charity to keep him waiting.

his ears perk up, hears somepony crying! it could be a snatcher attack! his trap could have gone awry!

He tries to break into a gallop but some lunatic spread practically camouflaged marbles all over the cliff face!

He trips, tumbles, slips and slides off the edge! his grasp on the side of the cliff face is the only thing keeping him from his certain death.

As Nicolta looks up, there is an guardian angel looming over him, his Coffeemaker lackey good friend Couth Darkmane!

"Oh thank Celestia! quick! help me up!"

The colt sucks in his teeth.

"tsssst oooh, yeah, about that, I'm not going to get you out of there until we set a few things straight."

 --------------------------
OOC: the owner of Nicolta Tesla speak now or forever hold your peace.

not bad for my first day, guys?         
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 08:14:41 am
I notice a flurry of activity as I get closer to the hospital.  Flagging down a nearby pony I asked, "What happened?"
The pony stared at me for a few seconds before responding, "Someone tried to assassinate Charity!  She's in the hospital now and she's going to die!  People are saying it was the Diomedians and their ambush was a ruse to-"
I cut her off before she could go any further, I knew a budding rumor when I heard it.  The part about Charity being hurt was probably true though.  Probably the only part that was true.
We should go in there...  To see if our new leader is okay of course.
"Shut it Negs," I muttered under my breath, low enough that no one would have been able to hear me.
I'm just saying we could make a good impression.  Always a good idea to get an in with the powers that be in case things go south again.
"That's what ended up getting us chased out of the last one," I sighed.  "But you're right.  Anyways, If I can explain away your eating habits we might be able to help out."
You'll want me to feed openly?
"Only if I can come up with a good explanation.  Otherwise it's back to the usual."  Putting on my best concerned but willing to help face I made my way into the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 08:16:41 am
"Who....who are you? I'm doctor Bubbles. Doesn't matter...."
This is all said with a ring of depression
"Help me with Charity. Wash the wound there while I dress it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 09:17:22 am
"Can do."
I start washing the wound, noticing Charity shudder as I touch it.
"There's something else I can do.  It will... lessen the pain."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: pantherrpg on November 15, 2011, 09:19:44 am
((DNVO
Owner of Nicolta Tesla here, I have finals this week so I don't have time to role-play. As such you'll have to provide Nicolta's response to the situation. (Try not to kill him though)
PS, Nicolta Tesla is male))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 10:21:29 am
"Hmm...? And what exactly is that? Don't try anything stupid, Khenal here can blast you away to space if you do."
((But seriously, don't make this scenario even worse. RPing is fun enough when you have a crazy daemon trying to kill everyone.))
((Also, HELLO! How long has it been since you've been here? No doubt you will be overwhelmed with the RP thats going on.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 10:33:03 am
I was a little surprised to go to sleep, wake up, go to work, and come back to several new pages of stuff.  Looks plenty fun though.
**********************************************************************************
"I take in the fear, suffering, anger, despair... Pretty much any negative emotions and sensations.  It can leave a person calmer, more relaxed.  But it can also take away the rush you get from those feelings.  If that's all that's keeping her alive it'll harm her, if not it will at least make her more comfortable."
Keep an eye on that Khenal.  Won't like me, won't like us.  Might have to run again.  I really don't want to run on an empty stomach Granite.
"I know that, now shut up and let me keep talking," I muttered under my breath.
Can I at least taste the one over there?  She smells delicious.
"No," I whispered sharply.  "No eating right now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 02:11:55 pm
I give this unfamiliar pony a questioning look, and watch carefully as he does whatever it is he's going to do.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 02:34:19 pm
"Looks like we have the go ahead," I whispered.  "Try to focus on the pain and doubt."
I know what I'm doing.
I've never known what a direct feeding looks like from someone else's perspective.  I know most people can't see the entire thing but they can always tell something is going on.  I took a deep breath and focused, letting Negs move forward in my mind.  Charity's body was suddenly a multicolored cocoon of light.  With a cry of delight Negs reached out and pulled, slowly at first and then faster and faster as bloody reds, deep blacks, sickly greens, and half a dozen other colors swept up into me.  I shuddered as I felt the same euphoric feeling he felt whenever he fed deeply and staggered to the side, closing the gate Negs had used.  When I looked at Charity again she as breathing deeply and softly, as though she had simply decided to go to sleep for the night.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 02:46:03 pm
"Khenal, what's happening? I can feel a new presence out there."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 15, 2011, 02:56:46 pm
 

"Ughugm," Couth clears his throat - he knows convincing Nicolta that he's the hero in all of this is going to be a long shot but he's no barbarian! he has to try!

"listen, Nicolta, I'm just going be upfront. I may forged those trap orders."

"you WHAT-"

"-and I might have just killed the countess"

"I DON- YOU -HOW - WHA?"

Nicolta can't believe what's he's hearing! this isn't the brewer he knows! who is this pony?

 "yeah, it's just been one of those days..." Couth said with a sheepish honesty.

 "YOU MONSTER!" he cries!
 
Couth winces

 "YOU MADMARE' he sobs!

Couth winces again

 "YOU HONORLESS KINIVING CHURL!"

Couth painfully presses his hooves into Nicolta's

"I. am not. the. bad guy." Couth enunciates. 
 
"look, I don't want to hurt you, I don't have to. All I need is that note. then this can all blow over."

Nicolta Baulks at even the notion of placating, but her grip IS getting weaker by the second...


 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 03:01:39 pm
'I don't know, but no earth pony should be able to do that.  Charity looks more relaxed now, at least.  I think this new pony and I need to talk.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 03:02:56 pm
"What did he or she do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 03:12:34 pm
Something isn't right...
"What do you mean?  You haven't fed like that in years.  I can't remember the last time I felt this good and I'm sure you can't either."  I looked around the hospital to disguise my checking to see if anyone was paying attention to my whispering.
Not the feeding.  That was glorious there's something else that's wrong.  Can't you hear it?  There's a... buzzing in the air.
"I don't hear anything..."  I couldn't think of anything that would set Negs off like that, but if he said something was off it was best to leave the room.  Immediately.
"I... think I need to sit down for a while.  That was harder than I expected.  If you need me I'll be in the dining hall."
Hoping my admittedly flimsy excuse would hold up I headed towards the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 03:15:49 pm
'He...took her pain, and seemed to enjoy it.  He didn't bask in the pain, or amplify it, or anything like what I think a daemon might do.  He just removed it.'

I get up to follow this pony out, confident that both Charity and Carrot are in good hooves.


"Let me get you a drink, mysterious new pony.  I'm Khenal, what's your name?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 03:20:20 pm
"Names Granite, nice to meet you."
Damn it!  I was hoping I could get away without being followed.
"I suppose I could use a drink now that you mention it."
Might as well get something out of this.
I choose a seat in one of the less crowded sections of the dining hall and sit down, before Khenal can get the drinks I decide I just might as well ask and get it over with.
"What do you really want?  That look in your eye says you want a lot more than to get me a drink."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 03:29:04 pm
I smile, glad to be to the point.  I keep my voice calm and quiet, hoping to keep the conversation as private as it can be in a dining hall.

"I want to know how you did what you did to Charity.  I know you took her pain, and no earth pony should be able to do that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 03:31:52 pm
"All I did was open the gate in my mind.  Nothing more and nothing less."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 03:35:35 pm
"A gate to where?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 03:38:53 pm
"Just a nice room in my mind, comfortable chairs, good tea.  A bit lacking in good conversation though."
HEY!  There's no need to be rude.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 03:46:07 pm
"I trust you are the sole keeper of the key to that gate, Mr. Granite?  I don't want to sound rude, but I'm note sure I trust who or what is in that room.  However, if they truly helped Charity, I'm willing to give you the benefit of the doubt."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 03:56:17 pm
"Khenal, none of my memories reference anypony like that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 15, 2011, 03:59:43 pm
Nicolta stared into the deep abyss below him, concentrating immensely to hold on. he wished the whole world would just pause, he wished he was home, he wished he stopped to think why a bartender would be giving him secret work orders, he wished to know what happened to Charity. oh, his friend Charity. if.. if he harmed her in any way...the thought was a unbearable, a dull internal pain to compliment the dull external pain of Couth's hooves cutting into her.

Through the pain, through the fear, and through the pumping adrenaline, Nicoltla tesla mutters one last thing;

"I am so sorry Charity, so sorry I failed you"

He plummets into the dark chasm below.


Couth stares into the chasm wide eyed and mouth open.

there's is a long silence













-Thud-

------------------
(in other words,http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKZ9vIS-OU4&feature=related)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 04:02:35 pm
My eyes widen in surprise as I hear this.
"Benefit of the doubt eh?  I suppose that can also be translated as, 'tell me now and it probably won't be a problem, or tell me later when it might be a problem' can't it?"
Before Khenal could respond I continued, "I suppose I can either give you the long version or the short version.  Which would you prefer?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 04:07:31 pm
"Long version, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 04:19:04 pm
"Long, long ago.  Back when great wars were fought between the ponies and the Diomedians, nothing like the small scuffles of today but thousands upon thousands of each side staking their future on a single battle.  During these battles immense amounts of magics were used by our unicorns and alicorns as well as their Diomedian counterparts.  Such magic leaves traces, pile up enough traces and you get an entirely new creation, a creation influenced by the place of its birth.  Since the sheer amount of magical residue would only occur in such pitched battles these creatures weren't given the best of influences.  The hatred and fear of the living, the pain and despair of the dying, every negative emotion known to pony-kind in one steaming cesspit of hate.  From these were born what we called Wraths.  I'm not sure what they're called these days though, most of them were killed early on, they were stupid creatures driven by hate for everything around them and sustained by the same emotions that gave them life.  As soon as they were 'born' they would take control of a nearby corpse, any kind of corpse, be it pony, diomedian, or something else.  They would then rush around causing as much mayhem and destruction as they could in order to feed themselves until they were either killed or simply starved to death.  Unfortunately for them they were rare creatures, and there's only so much a single badly mutilated corpse can do to a trained army complete with battlecasters.  However one of these creatures made a mistake that none other had made before or has made since.  It possessed a living being.  Near death, delirious and might as well be dead, but still alive.  It wasn't prepared to face any resistance on a mental front and was defeated easily.  But in it's defeat it was bonded to it's host.  The usual transformation that renders what was usually a corpse into a somewhat working creature still happened and brought the host fully to life, and as long as the Wrath is fed both will survive."
I smiled cheerfully and added, "I call him Negs."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 04:24:07 pm
I give Granite an incredulous look.

"So, Negs...'ate' Charity's pain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 04:28:16 pm
"A little self-doubt, some of her fear.  Maybe a little pride.  But mostly pain, yes."
Suddenly a second voice, similar but somehow different comes form Granites unmoving mouth.
"I don't think she believes you."
"Well either I'm just a very strange earth piny and very good ventriloquist or I'm telling the truth aren't I?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 04:36:04 pm
"I'm a stallion, and I do believe you."

I give Granite a sincere smile as I stand to leave.

"Believe it or not, you aren't the strangest pony I've met here.  You at least seem to be stable and in control.  If you need help with anything, just come find me in my office or my room.  Ask a guard for me if you need directions.  I'm afraid I need to get going.  I'll need to reschedule our patrols and stations to make sure at least one guard is in the hospital at all times, especially with Charity in there right now."

'And I need to find the time to read a few of those books Carrot got me...'


*************

Everypony thinks Khenal is a mare, do I need to give him a big beard to talk about or what? :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 04:36:56 pm
Dwarf women have beards, too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 04:39:01 pm
((I'm just going to assume that Granite has skizofrenia.))
Psycho awakes with a start.
"AH! WHAT HAPPENED?! I remember khenal scarring me, then I jumped out a window...It's all blank after that." Psycho says, confused.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 04:39:26 pm
Dwarf women have beards, too.
((Actually...I don't think they do...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 15, 2011, 04:41:38 pm
"ok,ok ok,ok,ok," Couth kept repeating. he pranced around the crime scene, habitually combing through his wildly unkempt violet mane in deep thought.

"only killed two ponies, no pressure, no pressure, oh no pressure! I killed two ponies in cold blood! what do I do!" he bawled!

the pony slowly turns his head stares down the chasm again, considering falling down it too, an option

"well," he gulps "that IS a way out."

as he stares into the abyss he finds some clarity.

no, everyone still thinks I'm a normal citizen, I just need to act like it. he thinks.

ok,ok, I'm a normal citizen, I just saw an accident. what do I do?

"Report it to captain Khenal." he says calmly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 15, 2011, 04:42:12 pm
And regardless, we're ponies, not dwarves :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 04:43:57 pm
Friesden begins to stir.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 04:44:08 pm
Maybe it's because most of the time when people think pony they think female. 
*******************************************************************
"Well now that was interesting."
Yeah.  No one's been so accepting of us in a long time.
"Makes me wonder what's happened here to make him so willing to see us as the better alternative."
That's... a good point.
"I think it's time to do a little... investigating.  Now who might be able to tell us what we need to know?"
I walk off aimlessly, muttering to myself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 04:45:30 pm
Still stirring, Friesden says sleepily "Kill you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 04:48:40 pm
((this should do http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GIB4FHm_KLs&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 04:59:28 pm
I continue wandering around the fort aimlessly, soon enough I find myself back at the hospital.
"Negs.  Why are we back here?"
How should I know.  Maybe you weren't paying attention to where you were going.
"No, I may not have had a destination in mind but I was trying to see parts of the fort I hadn't seen yet.  Unless you've forgotten we've already been here."
Well, I... You see...
FINE!  I may have nudged you a little bit so you would come back here but I really want to taste that one pony that was in here, she smelled so good!
"You just had a massive meal!  What more could you want?"
Desert?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 05:03:44 pm
Psycho awakes with a start.
"AH! WHAT HAPPENED?! I remember khenal scarring me, then I jumped out a window...It's all blank after that." Psycho says, confused.

As Psycho looks around his surroundings, he will see lying in a nearby bed, is the Countess Charity. She is currently asleep. Next to her sits, her family, Cryptson and their 4 foals. Cryptson looks grim, even by his usual standards. He looks over to Psycho and says, "Captain Carrot, please be quite, Charity is resting now. If you will listen, and promise not to yell, I will catch you up to speed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 05:05:28 pm
Friesden continues to wake.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 05:07:10 pm
"Alright. What happened?" I ask in a whisper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 05:11:03 pm
Suddenly screaming, Friesden bolts awake.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 05:11:54 pm
"As I understand your situation. You fell and hit your head. I don't know the details, but I heard Doctor Bubbles saying that Khenal and the Commander may have saved your life. However, the more pressing issue, is that somepony has tried to assissinate my wife. Her office was trapped and she took a bolt to the chest. The doctors say she'll live, but the perpetrator is still loose."

Edit: Ninja'd by Dsarker so, I guess Cryptson manages to get that out before the scream?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 05:21:01 pm
Hearing the scream I rush into the room.
"What's going on?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 05:21:13 pm
((I have to go for 40 minutes or so. Just say Psycho passed out again or something.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 05:23:52 pm
Friesden's eyes are full of rage. She flies to the instrument dish.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 05:25:18 pm
Charity begins to stir from the sound of screaming. "Cryptson...What's going on. Who's yelling." She says softly barely awake.

Cryptson wheels around to the source of the screaming. "Buck it" he then turns to the pony that just ran in. "That pegasi just started screaming. Where's the doctor?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 05:28:52 pm
In a rapid stream of throwing, Friesden tosses scalpels from the dish at everypony in the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 05:31:50 pm
I duck under a flying scalpel only to be hit in the face with a bedpan.
"NEGS!  Calm her down!"
I thought you didn't want me to eat anything.
"Do it or I'll go in there and make you do it!"
Fine fine.  It's time for an after meal snack!
I see the cocoon of light again, this time it is almost solely red, I see Negs start drawing on it, taking in her rage, but it doesn't seem to be diminishing at all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 05:33:19 pm
Cryptson, positions himself between the crazy Pegasus lady and his family. He acquires several small cuts from the sharp instruments, but is fortunate that none of them are serious.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 05:36:54 pm
The pegasus' eyes lose their bloodshot nature.

Friesden stops.

"Huh."

She then tosses a dozen more sharp blades out, no longer in a blind rage, but controlled and aimed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 05:40:02 pm
During Friesden's momentary pause, Cryptson begins to advance, before taking a well aimed blade in his upper body, he tries to shrug off the pain as he rears up to kick Friesden with his front legs, in a desperate attempt to prevent her from hurting anypony else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 05:44:40 pm
I snap the gate shut as a scalpel cuts into my side.
"That's it!  If that doesn't work it's time for violence!"
I knock one of the beds onto its side kick out with both my back legs, sending the bed hurtling towards Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 05:49:25 pm
Friesden leaps into the air, before taking the blade from Cryptson's body and stabbing it again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 05:52:56 pm
Cryptson lets out a grunt of pain as he is stabbed once more, when suddenly a bed, meant for Friesden whom he is standing next to, blindsides him pinning him between the wall and the bed. (the bed could possibly be hitting Friesden at the same time, as they are so close)

Edit: The foals Adamant and Cobalt let out a cry of "Daddy!" while Belle and Skydancer cower behind their big brothers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 05:54:49 pm
I dash forward in the wake of the bed, leaping onto Friesden and trying to knock her out.
"Negs, take that pony's pain, we need him fighting at top form!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 05:58:37 pm
Cryptson, suddenly no longer feeling his injuries, tosses the bed aside and charges Friesden, determined to teach that filly about the strength of a Adamantine mining Stallion. He charges her and attempts to tackle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 06:01:40 pm
Friesden stands stock still.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 06:04:10 pm
Seeing Cryptson charging toward me I dodge out of the way, leaving the still unmoving Friesden to take the brunt of the charge.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 06:05:04 pm
Friesden merely looks at peace when the stallion hits her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 06:07:50 pm
After taking Friesden to the ground. Cryptson calls out to the other pony "You, help me restrain her. Get something to bind her legs."

Cryptson continues pinning Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 06:09:31 pm
"Kill me or I will kill you," she says with certainty in her voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 06:11:39 pm
I grab at the sheets from the now smashed bed and dash over to where Friesden is pinned.  Looking down at her I ask, "Stallion, I have my pick right here.  I can crush her head.  Right here, right now.  Or do you still want me to bind her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 06:14:09 pm
"Believe me when I say I'd like to, and if it were up to me you'd have been gone a long time ago Friesden, but other ponies have decided to keep you alive for Luna only knows what reason... Bind her. We'll let the guard know what she's done (again...) and let them decide what to do with her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 06:16:11 pm
"I will kill you. You will die by my hand."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 06:21:40 pm
((I'm finally here))
"THATS ENOUGH!"
*Bubbles charges out of her office, and a burst of light explodes throughout the room, blinding Friesden and knocking her out.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 06:21:47 pm
Cryptson in no real emotional state, to deal with a crazy pony (what with his wife under threat of death, a murderer loose in the city, his own wounds, his children being endangered by a crazy pony, etc.) let's loose of his control. "GRagh, Shut up!" and he slams a hoof into her face, not hard enough to kill, but possibly enough to knock her out, or at least, he hopes, to subdue her. "You aren't going to kill anypony ever again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 06:22:50 pm
((Oops, I appeared to have ninja'd you.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 06:23:10 pm
"What was all of that?!  Why did that pony want to kill us all?!  Why did she want to die?!  Why do you have so many sharp objects within HER REACH!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 06:24:30 pm
"Cryptson, get the foals out of here. You, get those scalpels and give them to me."
Rage is set in Bubbles' voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 06:26:49 pm
I sullenly start to gather up all the scalpels.
"I better get some sort of explanation after this."
"Oh, and by the way.  That Stallion, Cryptson, he got some nasty hits during that fight.  I took the pain but..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 06:27:49 pm
"Yes yes, I can wash and dress them. Cryptson, be careful not to over-extert yourself."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 06:29:42 pm
I pile the scalpels on a table next to Dr. Bubbles.
"Scalpels are done.  Explanations?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 06:30:36 pm
Cryptson, content that Friesden isn't going anywhere for awhile. Stands up and solemnly walks back to Charity's bed sitting next to his foals. "Adamant, you take your siblings, go to the dinning hall. Don't leave with anyone until I get there. And Cobalt, watch over your sisters."

After the foals leave, Cryptson turns to the Doctor, "I'm not leaving as long as she ," his eyes lock on Friesden, "is in the same room as my wife." At this Bubbles will notice Cryptson is bleeding from several small wounds and two more major injuries to his chest. He seems unbothered them, but they look serious enough to you.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 06:32:20 pm
"Friesden used to be the chief medical pony. Then she killed a pony for no reason. She was put in jail, but was taken out recently as the daemon possessing her was killed."
((I'm acting like Bubbles doesn't know the truth.))
"Cryptson, lay down on that bed please. I need to patch your wounds."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 06:32:53 pm
Psycho groans, woken up by all the yelling and fighting. He opens his mouth to complain, but then he sees what happened.
"WHAT THE CLOP?!??!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 06:34:10 pm
I feel my eyes widen and Negs voice comes from my mouth, "A demon?  Here?"
I grimace and shove him back into my mind.
"What would a demon want with an outpost in the middle of nowhere like this?  Better yet, is it still around?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 06:34:35 pm
"Wut?" Cryptson looks down at the wounds in his chest, "Oh yeah, strange they don't really hurt all that much." Cryptson takes the bed between Charity and Psycho Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 15, 2011, 06:40:47 pm
((Ugh, gtg. Strongbeard, you can control Bubbles for now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 06:49:32 pm
"What would a demon want with an outpost in the middle of nowhere like this?  Better yet, is it still around?"

As Doctor Bubbles begins to treat Cryptson's injuries, Bubbles sighs, "Your new here aren't you? I haven't seen you in here before at least. Names Doctor Erok, by the way, but everyone calls me Bubbles, or Doctor Bubbles, or just doc. I'm the Chief Medical Pony of Glitterglen. Nice to meet you and all that." Cryptson bites down on his hoof as Bubbles begins suturing his wounds. "We'll I don't know much about the demon to be honest. Other than that it possessed Friesden for a long time. If you want more answers than that, you should ask Khenal, he's Captain of the Guard and has taken a special intrest in Friesden's case. He's the green royal. You've probably seen him around,err, I didn't catch your name?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 06:58:20 pm
"I'm Granite.  Thanks for the info, maybe I'll be taking Khenal up on his offer sooner than I thought..."
Does this mean the demon is gone?
"Demon's don't go away that easy..." I mutter to myself.
"Is there anything else you're gonna need help with Doc?  After all I don't think I'll be getting any digging orders for a while." I nod meaningfully at Charity and Cryptson.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 07:01:23 pm
I look at Granite and smile.
"Hi, i'm Psycho Carrot!" I say, friendly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 07:03:21 pm
Bubbles thinks for a moment, "Well we can't just leave Friesden tied up on the floor. I'd put her in a traction bench, but she's broken out of one before, and they're primarily for holding a limb in place to heal, not to prevent escape. Also, the prison cells, down stairs, are all full. Oh, I know. The old well house is right down the hall, ever since the old well was disassembled and the hole patched up it's just a big empty room. Help me lock her in there and then I'll finish with the patients, and you can go and get the guard to deal with her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 07:05:34 pm
"Nice to meet ya Psycho, does that name have any... Significance to what you're like?  And what were you in here for anyway?  So far we've got assassination victims, demon possessed nutjobs, and people injured by the aforementioned nutjobs."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 07:13:03 pm
"Oh, that's easy! Khenal scared me, so I jumped out a two story window. I woke up in here with blood everywhere." I say, with a slightly insane-looking smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 07:17:57 pm
I simply stare at Psycho for a little while.
"That explains so much and yet so little."
I grin hugely.
"I think I'm gonna like you kid."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 07:25:20 pm
"Captain you mean. I am a markspony." I say in a correcting tone of voice, still grinning.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 07:34:19 pm
"Sorry about that captain, I'm new here and didn't know your rank."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 08:14:23 pm
There is a commotion from just outside the infirmary. Otik enters, fully geared for combat.

"Carrot! Good, Cap'n said I'd find you here. You mobile?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 08:57:32 pm
"No...I can't move my legs..." I say, with a look of horror as I realize this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 08:59:23 pm
"Otik?" speaks Doctor Bubbles, "What's going on? You look like you're ready for a battle."

Edit: correction Otik, not Starkey. Sorry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 09:09:03 pm
"Damn. Well, you can still give orders from a bed, can't ye? Cap'n wants miss Charity an' her family under guard while th' guards go huntin' for this assassin, an' he wants you for th' job. Think you can handle it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 09:19:35 pm
"I'll do my best..." I say, defeated.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 09:24:21 pm
"I was planning on hunting down Khenal to get more info on all this demon business, but I think I'll stick around here for a while.  Keep ya company a bit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 09:32:17 pm
"Then I'll send yer lads down right away."

Otik trots out the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 09:35:56 pm
"So...Granite. I am guessing that you have a form of schizophrenia. Considering the way you talk to yourself and the like."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 09:40:40 pm
"Best mundane description I've heard for my condition yet!  Should probably try to use that next time I have to move on to another outpost.  Nothing wrong with talking to yourself after all, I find myself to be a rather entertaining conversationalist."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 10:01:31 pm
"No. I mean it's like you think there's two of you or something..." I say, perplexed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 10:06:37 pm
"Well now that's just silly.  There can't be two of me, I am the only me therefore the other one must not be me.  Thusly instead of me and me there is me and Negs," I say with a smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 10:16:20 pm
I punch myself in the head until I pass out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 15, 2011, 10:27:41 pm
Carrot's squad enters the infirmary one by one, each snapping to attention before him.

"Your orders, sir?"

Having bludgeoned himself insensible, the lieutenant does not respond.

"...sir?"


((Being that they're your men and all, I think it's only fitting that you play them as you like.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 10:32:39 pm
I chuckle softly as Psycho passes out.
"You ponies are always so much fun," I mutter to myself.
Are we going to see Khenal about that demon now?
"I think we should stick around.  From the sounds of things Khenal is going to be pretty busy and our noble Countess's valiant champion has knocked himself unconscious to get away from us.  Besides, we've helped the countess recover, helped save the lives of everyone in the hospital, and we have the support of what seems to be a rather influential pony.  Today has been a very good day."  I settle down with a sigh and prepare to stand guard, pick at the ready.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 10:39:38 pm
I wake up quickly.

"Glad to see you're awake, sir. Should I even ask wh-"

"No. Your orders are simple. I want you all to guard Charity and her children with your life! Do I make myself clear, dwarves?!" Barks Psycho.

"SIR YES SIR!" Yells the entire squad as they follow their orders.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 10:42:30 pm
Once the guard has arrived and the Bubbles has moved Friesden into the locked room. Cryptson stands and announces, "I'm going to go up to the dinning hall and bring my little ponies back down here, so we can keep an eye on them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 10:50:33 pm
As I watch the flurry of movement I smile to myself.  Might as well stick around anyway, things are getting interesting here and besides, I turn to look over at the locked door, I still don't feel safe with that... thing in here.  To have lost her rage and still been wholly dedicated to killing us.  I shudder at the memory.  She must be more broken than I thought.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 10:51:38 pm
One of the guards turn to Psycho, who gives a nod, an then the guard accompanies Cryptson.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 10:54:30 pm
Eventually I speak up, "so this assassin.  Who do you think it is?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 10:57:10 pm
"No idea...I don't even know why the clop that Charity is down here..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 11:03:11 pm
"Ah, I only know what rumors have told me but apparently there was a trap waiting for her in her office.  Nearly killed her too.  No one is sure who did it or why.  Most people are blaming the Diomedians but I don't think it was them.  They haven't been too organized lately," my voice trails off as my gaze wanders the room.  "The wound looked like it came from a crossbow bolt though so that might narrow the suspects."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 11:06:20 pm
Friesden awakes in her locked room.

"Hmmm. I don't feel any anger anymore. Maybe if I kill them, it'll bring that back, if nothing else. But how to get out of this room?"

Friesden looks around the room as carefully as she would a pony she was vivisecting.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 11:07:23 pm
"WHAT?!" I scream, causing my men to flinch and drop their weapons.
"Uhh...anyway, can I speak to this...Negs?" I ask, semi-humoring Granite, thinking it's just a symptom of schizophrenia.
((I say again Dsarker, YOU. ARE. INSANE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 11:12:18 pm
Doctor Bubbles overhears the conversation while reorganizing his medical instruments. "Yeah, it was a bronze crossbow bolt. I was the one who found, her and brought her here. She said her office was trapped. I think the guard's going to give her office, bed room, and dining room a once over to check for more."

(Looking around the room Friesden will recognize that she's in the old well room. It was an elegant room, dug into a Colbaltite vein, the blue stone runs right through the granite. All the walls have been smoothed and engraved. In the center of the room, is a single bit of brick floor that she remembers is where the old well once was, only 3 stories above the water's surface in the caverns. Also, in the room is the old zinc chain and the wooden bucket from the old well. The floor is stained with blood, and dirtied with mud that ponies have long ago washed off themselves. The room is not as well lit as it once was with only light coming in from the cracks in the wooden door.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 11:16:47 pm
"See.  Although it was a terrible shot, didn't get anywhere near any vital points so I don't think it was one of your guys.  Unless one of them is a bad shot."  My eyes narrow suddenly, "they are all good shots right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 15, 2011, 11:21:10 pm
Bubbles interrupts "oh I don't think the assassin actually shot her himself. He might have, but I got to the scene fairly fast, and I didn't see anypony suspicious. Plus, Miss Charity said she triggered a trap. I didn't take the time to look myself, of course, what with her being injured and all, but I see no reason to think she would confuse an assailant with a preset trap."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 11:23:26 pm
"Huh, I guess that just leaves us with anyone that can set up a door triggered trap.  How many good mechanics are there around here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 11:26:56 pm
Frustrated by being ignored, I grab a book off a table and hurl it at Bubbles.
"AS I WAS SAYING!" I say enraged.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 11:32:19 pm
I turn politely towards Psycho
"As you were saying?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 11:34:33 pm
"Thank you. Now, this Negs...You know it's just in your mind right? He's not real."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 11:39:34 pm
I stare flatly at him.
"Are you just as quick to discard the ideas of the demon that seemed to have had possessed that madpony in the other room?  Just because you can't experience it doesn't make it any less real."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 11:49:16 pm
((I hadn't woken originally yet.))
"Don't tell me...Friesden went berserk...again..." I sigh, not even slightly surprised.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 11:52:15 pm
"And you attribute these rages to an invisible presence that she alone can hear and see.  If that sort of creature can exist why is it that Negs can't?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 15, 2011, 11:54:40 pm
"Because if I see one more possesed pony, I'm going to murder everyone in this entire bucking place." I say, Psycho-tically.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 15, 2011, 11:55:25 pm
Friesden picks up the zinc chain.

"Well, certainly one way to end it. Hmmm."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 15, 2011, 11:57:54 pm
"Bah, if I could be swayed by that argument I would have given up on explaining these things years ago," I grin.  "Although I must say that if that mare is your only reference for a possessed individual I can't blame you for your dislike of them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 12:12:34 am
((just to point out, a daemon is a ghost of sorts. It's different from a demon.))
"D-D-DISLIKE?!" I splutter, laughing insanely.
"It's far more than dislike. THAT PONY HAS CAUSED SO MUCH DAMAGE TO THIS BUCKING PLACE THAT I DON'T EVEN BOTHER KEEPING TRACK ANYMORE! I've been possessed by a daemon that apparently was a gentleman and challenged Friesden to a battle-and are you even listening...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 16, 2011, 12:16:20 am
I chuckle.  "You'd be surprised how much I listen.  Practically a necessary skill for me.  But if she has caused so much damage why is she still here?  A knife in the night, a dash of poison, maybe even lynch mob would work wonders if she really is so dangerous.  Who is protecting her so much?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 12:26:58 am
"Khenal. He's the only person keeping me from doing EXACTLY THAT." I say through gritted teeth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 16, 2011, 12:39:11 am
"Ah, met him.  Pretty nice guy.  Completely accepting of Negs by the way.  Just sayin'.  You however, may have a few anger issues.  Luckily for you Negs specializes in the removal of such emotions, like rage.  Might help you calm down a bit. Back to the original subject though, if Khenal is protecting that mare he may not be as good a judge of character as I thought."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 01:13:27 am
((Just a reminder KHENAL IS A GUY! FIRESDEN IS A GIRL. THANK YOU.))
"It runs deeper than that...I believe...that Khenal has fallen in love with friesden." I say, ready to scream with rage.
"Oh, and I'd like to keep my emotions, thank you kindly."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 16, 2011, 01:19:11 am
((I do think you're overstating the damage. She killed a pony and got locked in her cell. She escaped twice from the hospital, neither time having much impact.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 01:19:58 am
((That's the point. Psycho exaggerates alot.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 16, 2011, 01:21:39 am
((He does, at that.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 16, 2011, 01:28:49 am
"Well they are your emotions, go ahead and keep them."
I sigh, "Love eh?  That isn't something i can mess with."
I sit in thought a little longer.
"Violence isn't an option either...  I'm starting to think I should have gone to a different outpost."
I stand back up and start to leave the room
"I've got a lot to think about now.  I'll check up on you later."
********************************************************
Don't think I messed it up that time.  In other news It's time for me to get going to sleep.  Stupid early morning classes
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 01:29:45 am
END SCENE!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 01:31:30 am
Just to let everypony know, I'm still actively adding to the archive of glitterglen! Lest bay12 fall, this thread will be preserved!
((Good night everypony!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 07:38:11 pm
I crawl out of bed, using my front legs to drag myself to the barracks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 16, 2011, 07:51:19 pm
As I wander around aimlessly I head a voice coming from the distance, "Captain Carrot!  You need to rest!"
Bemusedly following the voice and glad to be away from my current thoughts I find Psycho still valiantly dragging himself onward.
"Need any help?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 07:53:50 pm
I have a determined look in my eye, and a pained look on my face.
"No...NGH! I can do this...NGH!!!" I grunt, blinking back tears from the pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 16, 2011, 08:05:20 pm
I sigh before saying, "Normally I don't offer this to people doing things this stupid but I can take your pain if you want to be able to get there more easily.  It will cause more problems in the end though.  Pain tells you you're being stupid.  If I take away all the pain you give yourself as you crawl along, you won't realize just how badly you're hurting yourself."
I lean down to eye level with him.
"Since I doubt you're going to stop crawling with or without pain do you want it gone?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 08:09:15 pm
I glare in disgust at Granite.
"I know i'm not dead again if- NGH!...if I can still feel pain. I don't need- AAAGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I scream as I accidentally scrape off the patch that kept my wound from bleeding.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 16, 2011, 08:15:14 pm
I laugh at this.  Stopping as I see the markspony accompanying psycho glaring at me.
"Ah, this is what I always like to hear.  People who want to live their lives!  Too many people love taking the easy way out, letting me suck away part of what gives life it's spice!  You are truly an entertaining individual."
I grin at him as I say this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 08:26:36 pm
I hurl myself at Granite, beating him senseless.
"SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I scream.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 16, 2011, 08:31:44 pm
I drag myself away from Psycho, several new bruises decorating my body.
"He-heh.  Temper temper my boy."
I sigh to myself.
"I suppose I should leave you be then."
I turn to leave and am almost out of the hall when I look over my shoulder and shout, "Don't mistake what I've said for anything but respect.  You have bravery and heart.  Perhaps a bit much so.  I wish you luck in your endeavors."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 08:35:59 pm
I don't respond, as i'm too busy crying in a fetal position as my leg bleeds heavily again.
"I NEED A DOCTOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I scream through the tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 16, 2011, 08:44:16 pm
As I turn down a side corridor I break into a gallop, heading towards the hospital.
I slow down and open the door.
"Hey, Doc Bubbles.  Psycho is down one of the corridors, screaming in pain.  You're going to need to send someone down there pronto."
**********************************
Probably not gonna be up much longer, got work at 3:30 in the morning tomorrow.  Sleep tends to make the shifts much easier.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 09:06:03 pm
((where is everyone today?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 16, 2011, 11:55:10 pm
((Three hours...AGAIN?! >:())
((EDIT: It's getting close to four hours...where are you people...?))
((EDIT2: You're all trying to make me cry aren't you?))
((EDIT3: Anyone...?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 17, 2011, 01:42:25 am
(( i'll make a new entry around 2:00 pm-ish tomorrow. as for everyone else- *glances nervously* I think the Skyrim took em away. ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 01:53:32 am
((Damn it! I now officially despise Bethesda! BURN IN HELL BETHESDA!!!))
((Edit: the worst part, I don't think they're coming back either! SO MUCH FOR LOYALTY GUYS!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 17, 2011, 01:54:32 am
((Well, I don't have skyrim. If anything, it's writing fanfiction that's taken me away.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 17, 2011, 01:55:32 am
((here's one of them.

Fluttershy started to smile as she saw the three Cutie Mark Crusaders.

"Isn't this going to be fun! The sun will be up forever and that means you don't have to sleep anymore! Just do more crusading, forever and ever! And then you'll get your cutie marks! This will be great fun! Celestia is the greatest, isn't she! Giving us such a blessing! Playing together forever! No more sleeping! No more crying! No more hate! No more suffering!"

Fluttershy continued to smile.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 01:56:57 am
((Well, that's great. AT LEAST I STILL HAVE THE MADMAN! HOORAY!! Shoots self))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 17, 2011, 02:01:18 am
I was taking a day to recharge my rp juices, and to figure out what Khenal's going to do about the Friesden issue.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 02:04:38 am
respawn, ding!
I usually go to bed in about an hour or so(it's two o'clock here)...I guess nothing major -if anything at the rate this is going- is going to happen this morning?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 17, 2011, 02:16:34 am
Doubtful at this rate.  I'll prolly do some scene setting here soon, but I doubt anything will happen until tomorrow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 02:28:51 am
Roger that. I'll go ahead and find some more music and work on Psycho's back story a bit. The Master out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 02:40:59 am
Here's what I have so far...
Psycho Carrot was born in a village called Estherxen. He was always different from the other ponies, and everypony was careful to avoid him. When he was 12, his mother was beaten to death by his dad, and he was traumatized forever. Carrot was involved in Khenal's first experiments in handling daemon possession, and died because of it.  He met his wife, Kil, some time after this, but was not aware of his own past at this point. When Psycho first arrived at Glitterglen, he didn't expect it to be where it was. In fact, he was told that it was even farther into the forest from where he ended up finding it...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 17, 2011, 02:45:11 am
(( i'll make a new entry around 2:00 pm-ish tomorrow. as for everyone else- *glances nervously* I think the Skyrim took em away. ))

How did you know? Are you a spy?

Charity's Journal (The day after the attempted assassination.)

I owe my life to Doctor Bubbles, without, his life saving surgery I surely would have perished from that crossbow bolt. I had the guard search my home and office for more traps, I don't trust the militia (save for Captain Carrot), but they didn't find anymore. I've ordered a full investigation into this by Captain Khenal, and when he figures out who is responsible I will have their head.

My husband Cryptson has quit mining and says that he won't return to work until the traitor is caught, so he can watch over us. He even said he was going to go tomorrow and request a suit of armor and a shiny new pick from the smiths so that he can defend us. I think he's being a little overzealous, what with The Wavy Passes
[Psycho's squad] being our private body guards, but he said he wasn't going to ever lose anypony else ever again. And knowing his past I understand his concern.

Compiling what we know. The trap was set by someone who knows about machinery. Strange, counting the Efim murder last year, that makes two such incidents, in a very short time. Regardless, the ponies that are known to work with machinery are, Toltot
[the immigrant that Venture discovered was a Darkbolt], a member of the commander's melee squad named Efim Ripeseeds the Pleated Pillar of Silkiness, an adept axepony, who has mastered the art of juggling both his axe and a shield in his filthy earthpony mouth, (I suspect him, I think the militia still blames me for the Bokbon incident, plus the reason I will talk about below.) Istbar is also capable of pulling it off but we know of no possible motive for her. Next we have Friesden, but naturally she's been under constant supervision so I don't think she could have snuck out and done it. And finally of course Nicolta Tesla.

Additionally, whichever pony did it was was able to get ahold of a crossbow. The bolt would be easy, those are left by all the archery ranges with little protection, but the bows (and all weapons) are kept locked in the armories, somepony, either stole one from behind the locked doors, or stole one from the militia or the traitor is somepony who would be allowed to take a weapon out. Or somepony made one. Khenal, should examine the weapon, and see if it is marked, and if so who was the last pony to check it out from the armory.

All this information has been relayed to Captain Khenal. Hopefully, he'll be able to track down the traitor and give him the justice he deserves.


It is my opinion that
[the writting ends here.]

Tesla has just been found in the caverns, he seems to have fallen off a small cliff. Doctor Bubbles was able to help him, but he seems to have suffered some short term memory loss and can't remember what he was doing there. The Doc says such things are common with head injuries and that he may remember in time.
[if Nicolta's player wants to join in. Otherwise I didn't want to make catching the culprit that easy.]

[I'm about to play some DF for a little while. So their might be exciting new things for you guys to react to by morning. Or maybe not depending on how long I play.]
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 03:00:10 am
DONE!

Psycho Carrot was born in a village called Estherxen. He was always different from the other ponies, and everypony was careful to avoid him. When he was 12, his mother was beaten to death by his dad, and he was traumatized forever. Carrot was involved in Khenal's first experiments in handling daemon possession, and died because of it.  He met his wife, Kil, some time after this, but was not aware of his own past at this point. When Psycho first arrived at Glitterglen, he didn't expect it to be where it was. In fact, he was told that it was even farther into the forest from where he ended up finding it.

True, Psycho was -for all intensive purposes- a zombie. However, he still has a mind, but his heart doesn't beat. His stomach digests food, but it stops there. If a doctor were to perform an autopsy on him, said doctor would likely kill him/herself after seeing the damage to the internal structure. Horror aspects aside, Psycho was kind but sharper than an adamantine blade when he needed to be. You could rest assure that you were safe if he was your bodyguard.

There's a reason why Psycho Carrot is stationed at glitterglen. First of all, used to be a 5-Star General for the queen. He was also the queen's favorite subject. Psycho was respected everywhere for his heroic deeds, such as the exaggerated tale involving defeating Armok in a game of pony chess. Then one day, Psycho just HAD to go and buck things up for himself. On the fateful day, when the queen gave birth to her new born child, Psycho Carrot snapped. Nopony, even to this day, knows why he snapped. Regardless, he grabbed the newborn, climbed up to the top of a two story building, and threw it off, insisting that it was actually a fire snake in disguise. Long story short, he was exiled to Glitterglen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 03:04:30 am
Well, i'm going to hit the hay! Good luck everypony, and I'll see you -sort of- this afternoon. If not, I'll go to your home and rip out your spine!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 17, 2011, 03:56:14 am
uhm....
Sorry, friends. Was at school (FML, ONLY 4 MORE WEEKS!)
I've been working on Bubbles' back story. Standby until I get it done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 17, 2011, 03:56:57 am
((Incoming wall-o-text.  Most of it is just review, Khenal catching up with his journal entries.  The beginning and the end are new stuff, if a bit quick))

"I hate paperwork"

I sit at my desk in my office, the floor still covered in what I've decided is mud until somepony tells me otherwise. 

'I really hope it's just mud.'

I'm going over the reports from the day and the attempt on Charity's life, amazed at how much can happen in just a few hours.  I'm writing in a new book, freshly bought from a caravan.




Khenal's Sequel, Prologue

Hello, my new book.  I was going to call you just that, but if I get a third book eventually, it'll get confusing.  So I'm going to call you my Sequel.  I've had several other ponies read my Book, as it has important details about my past.  I'd write them in you as well, but the only ones who might read you already know, my Sequel.  And if they somehow manage to sneak you form my room, they likely have the skill to get my Book, though they should know that I don't take kindly to having my privacy invaded.

Anyway, I suppose I should get you up to speed, or at least tell you what has happened since I finished my Book.  Schmoe, the memory eater, is very complicated.  He has a convoluted plan to be reincarnated as a pony, I think, and he is in love with Friesden.  Yes, a daemon is in love.  Perhaps more astonishingly, she loves him back. 

Ovbiously, one has to die to be reincarnated.  I don't know if he manipulated the situation, or just took advantage of the work of another, but he got his chance when the export ban was violated.  Charity had evidence of several ponies trading away amulets which she had expressly forbidden.  I signed off their arrest, thinking the so-called smuglers would get a short jail sentence, or maybe a fine.  Most got jail time, but then the jail filled.  This is where I think either Schmoe or Carrot's daemon came into play, as the three remaining "smugglers" were given beatings.  Two died on the scene, and Thunder Splinter certainly would have died if she wasn't rushed to the hospital.

The one to administer the beatings was Istlig, one of my guards.  Naturally, Commander Starkey wasn't pleased with the guard murdering ponies in broad daylight under the guise of justice.  He has since told me the details of why he was so livid, but I won't retell his past here.  We set out to round up the guard, fearing the worst.  We never expected Istlig himself to simply walk up to me to voice his objection of using real weapons to administer the beatings, saying that somepony might have been hurt.  When I corrected him, he tried to kill himself.

With the help of Starkey, we were able to stop him, but he was possessed by Schmoe.  Apparently, Schmoe knew how to possess several ponies, and I suspect that Carrot's daemon may have as well.  I dared Schmoe to try to posses me, dangling my memories and power in front of him in an effort to have him in my head where I could deal with him.  I was able to bind him, though I now suspect he simply let me.

A few weeks later, he escaped me.  Carrot's daemon had regained control of him and was ready to wreak havoc in Glitterglen, and that apparently conflicted with Schmoe's plan.  He still had some connection to Friesden, and slipped to her and unleashed his power to fight Carrot's daemon.  Carrot was able to cast it out, and Schmoe dealt with it, and then demanded he be killed.  I didn't understand him at the time, thinking he wanted Friesden dead.  He finally said plain that he wanted himself dead, not Friesden, and I had no idea what to do.  Commander Starkey, however, did.  He asked me to link his and Friesden's minds, so he could handle Schmoe.

I did so, and thought he had killed Schmoe.  At the time, I missed two important clues that said he was likely still alive.  Firstly, the fires he had conjured didn't immediately die out.  And secondly, he had left a small portion of himself behind in me.  I named this new entity The Keeper, or just Keeper.  It seemed to be a repository of Schmoe's memories, though it apparently can't access all of them whenever it pleases.  I think that should get us to your first chapter, my Sequel.



Chapter 1


How can so many things happen in one day, my Sequel?  I startled Carrot into jumping out a window and seriously injuring himself, so the Commander and I rushed him to the hospital.  I ran ahead to make sure they would be ready to recieve him, but Friesden had gotten loose and attacked me.  I fended her off until Starkey could get there and help subdue her.  While he held her, I cast my sleep spell and we then tied her back to her bed.

In all the commotion, we didn't notice Carrot start to bleed.  He shouldn't be able to bleed, my Sequel.  He was basically a zombie, though a fully aware one.  His heart didn't beat, but now it apparently was, and it was looking to kill him by bleeding out.  Commander Starkey knows at least some basic treatment, and Keeper has medical knowledge as well.  Together, we were able to stabilize Carrot.

Not long after, Dr. Bubbles came rushing in with Charity on his back.  Somepony had trapped her room with a crossbow and it almost killed her.  The good doctor had her well in hoof, and she's on her way to a recovery.  I ordered guards in the hospital, then went to bed.



*Sigh* "There we go, it's been too long since I was able to write down my thoughts.  Though now I have nothing to distract me from these papers..."

I grimace before starting to work my way through the pile.  About half way though it, I bolt back to attention at what I just read.

Friesden escaped restraints again, timed during changing of guard.  Cryptson and Granite subdued her.  She is now being held in the old well room. 

I am already out the door before the report has a chance to drift down to the top of the pile of paperwork.


**************

Another wall of text, loving hurled at the face of everypony, courtesy of me :P  Speaking of walls of text, I'll be transcribing the story of Glitterglen soon for everypony to read without our various coments and out of character stuff.  With all we've done, it will take a while, but I'll be doing it in chapters.  I'll be uploading on over on fimfiction.net, if anypony want to see it.  I'll be making small changes, mostly acting as editor to smooth out formatting and such.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 17, 2011, 04:07:14 am
You still on, Khenal?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 17, 2011, 04:08:53 am
He's still on, don't worry.
Aside from that, I'll most probably be away for an hour.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 17, 2011, 04:13:42 am
With careful hoof movements, Friesden made a loop from the chain. She looked up, thoughtfully. Where to hang it from?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 17, 2011, 04:17:33 am
'No no no no no!  She's alone, and I doubt a simple door will keep her for long!"

I gallop as quickly as I can towords the old well room, dodging ponies as best as I'm able.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 17, 2011, 04:27:47 am
Ah. There. A small, juttting support. It would hopefully be enough. She flew up and tied the non-looped end of the chain around it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 17, 2011, 04:32:49 am
I round the last corner to the well room, surprising the guard on duty.  He snaps a salute, then stands at attention.

"Open the door, now!"

He looks confused, but pulls out his keys to follow the order.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 17, 2011, 04:33:52 am
Friesden slips her head through the loop and hovers for a second, contemplating. Then she folds her wings in and drops.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 17, 2011, 04:36:15 am
[Sorry to interrupt your scene guys, but here's Charity's Journal for the next month or so afterwords.]

Charity's Journal 4th Limestone 98

Istbar Nangesugosh,
[not the same one mentioned in my last post.] the glassmaking apprentice to the late Nanges Lisigbol, has been possessed by some spirit, and they have claimed her master's old magma glass furnace. We are watching her carefully.

5th Limestone 98

Cindy spotted a snacher sneaking up on the fort, however, it was too far away and by the time the milita had even reached for their weapons it was already gone.

Addendum, "Bad things always come in twos," or is it threes? I can't remember, but the point is Bebmal saw a second snatcher, and she kicked it's ass and sent it running. Peytrel should be proud of his mother. Not many earthpony mares would have stood up to a tentacle pony, armed with a knife, with nothing but their bare hooves.


10th Limestone 98

Threes. It was definately "bad things always come in threes." A third snatcher was spotted, but this one stumbled into one of our bears we keep tied up outside, the Discord spawn was fortunate that the bear was tied up or he wouldn't have gotten away so easily.


Addendum:

As the diplomat to the Zebra homeland was leaving, he inadvertently stumbled into a waiting Diomedian ambush. While he was killed, his screams let us know to sound the alarm. The militia and the guard, took to the walls, to defend Glitterglen, as the wood gatherers ran for the safety of the underground.


11th Limestone 98

The Diomedian's seem to be biding their time for now. Standing just outside of crossbow range. However, Istbar finished the object she was working on, just has the spirit (that I believe to be that of ol' Nanges) left. She has crafted an animal trap made of green glass, that she calls, the Pointy Escort, and it is certainly quite pointy.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/The%20Pointy%20Escort.png)

17th Limestone 98

With the Diomedian's sitting outside for more than a week already, and with the Zebra caravan becoming increasingly annoyed about being unable to leave, the militia has decided to sortie out and face the enemy. Starkey's squad engages in melee, while Otik provides covering fire. Meanwhile Khenal's squad will remain behind encase this is some Discordian ruse.

The battle went well. No casualties on our side, and all the enemy where killed. Our lasher, Rithlut is bleeding from her tail end, and Starkey's right wing is seriously messed up. (he got hit by some Darkbolt with a silver battle axe.) But no other injuries.


[And I think that's enough for tonight. I didn't include as detailed a transcript of the battle as I have in the past because it wasn't very interesting, mostly just the melee squad charging in and slaughtering the enemy. But feel free to put as many embelishments as you guys want on it when and if you decide to mention it. I'll imagine Commander Starkey at least will have a few things to say about a certain darkbolt.]

[I look forward to seeing your edited transcribed version of Glitterglen Khenal. Make sure you post a link to it when the first chapter is ready.]
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 04:49:59 pm
I don't respond, as i'm too busy crying in a fetal position as my leg bleeds heavily again.
"I NEED A DOCTOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I scream through the tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 17, 2011, 04:54:39 pm
  It was the stench that always made me gag down here in the sub-levels of the fortress. the Mayor,in her infinite wisdom, shoveled all the new immigrants down here, turned it into a ghetto.I wonder if the mayor has ever seen the absolute squalor the newly immigrated ponies lived in, the barely contained animosity they held in their chests. the fact the young colts rove around in gangs, preying on unfortunate ponies who take down wrong alleys. the fact these poor souls throw every piece of their hard earned coin at me for a bit of the temporary happiness my ale provides. the fetor of it all cesspooled together made me gag.

 As Couth jostled through the overpacked claustrophobic hallways, he noticed a light emerald, red maned filly near covered in dirt sitting on a wood crate and penning a sign that read 'daddy has no job'.

 I remember being in her hooves when I was a filly, having a to lie and cheat and steal to keep myself alive in the slums of the capital city. but at least back then, I could look up at the sky from the smatter of broken wood and hay I called a "bed" and I could literally see a dream without sleeping. an enormous sky castle, the crown jewel of the alicorn race, hovered over *insert our capitol's name here*. the castle consisted of a white stone polished to a fine mirrorlike state, anchored on mighty clouds. in there the royal godkin sits. in there, sits my princess *insert princesses name here*. getting in that castle was my reason to be, to keep fighting. it still is. she will be mine.

"here, kid, take these bits, 'hmph', *he grabs his coinpurse with his teeth and drops twenty bits* "you spend that wisely." he bows his head and tries to get on his way.

 "thank you, kind sir!" the filly beamed
*her expression quickly changed and her eyes widen*
"uh, sir?



"sir, your cutie mark, sir?"

Couth looks at his flank as his mark, a winebarrel, or, it was. now it's a blotchy smudge that somewhat resembles a winebarrel.

"ARGHH" Couth screams

his flanks feel like they're bursting to flames!

the new cutie mark's lines bleed into a sharp focus and the skin's color changes. the new mark is a dagger.

"oh, that's not very low profile." Couth grimaces. 
----

((what's the our capital's name and the princesses name?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 17, 2011, 05:56:35 pm
As I turn down a side corridor I break into a gallop, heading towards the hospital.
I slow down and open the door.
"Hey, Doc Bubbles.  Psycho is down one of the corridors, screaming in pain.  You're going to need to send someone down there pronto."
**********************************
Probably not gonna be up much longer, got work at 3:30 in the morning tomorrow.  Sleep tends to make the shifts much easier.

Seeing that the doctor is busy I gather up a number of medical supplies and place them inside a pouch.  As soon as I leave the door I move into a gallop to where Psycho was.  As I neared a corner to the corridor I slow to a halt.  Grabbing the pouch's drawstring's I spin it around the corner to where Psycho is lying.
You could just go and help him directly you know.
"No.  That would lead to connections.  Those just get in the way," I smile grimly.  Not looking back to see what he is doing with the medicine I leave the corridor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 06:04:45 pm
Unable to put up with the pain and blood loss any longer, Psycho goes into shock and begins to babble incoherent nonsense.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 17, 2011, 06:15:54 pm
Something's wrong.  His lights... They're going berserk.
"What?  That's never a good thing..."
He needs help.
"But..."
But you don't want to make a scene.  You don't want people to remember you.  But haven't you already botched that one?
I glare angrily at the wall in front of me.
You don''t want to let him die do you?
"Let's go."
I return to where Psycho is lying and pick up the supplies I had tossed him.
"Why is it that the most interesting of ponies are always the ones that do the stupidest things they can?"
Continuing to mutter to myself I start bandaging up Psycho's wounds.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 06:18:04 pm
barely conscious, I mumble,
"the children are fire snakes........"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 17, 2011, 06:36:16 pm
I finish bandaging up psycho's wounds and look him over.
"How is he doing?"
He's delirious.  His lights look... Broken.
"Of course they do," I mutter as I pull out a small vial of a sleeping drought I got from the hospital and pour it down Psycho's throat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 06:51:20 pm
"EHH?! WHAT'RE YE.....Dooooo'in...." I mumble as the medication runs it's course.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 17, 2011, 07:11:09 pm
"That should do it you stubborn oaf.  Now how to get him back into the hospital," I wonder aloud.
There were some sticks and some cloth down the hall.
"A stretcher eh?  That brings back memories."
I quickly put together a simple field stretcher and load Psycho up onto it.  Sighing as I trot back to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 17, 2011, 08:01:47 pm
((And I'm gonna be signing off now, got work and classes tomorrow as well as a little stuff I have to finish up before I go to sleep.  Night all.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 17, 2011, 08:50:18 pm
   "that'll be be two hundred and forty bits, and your satchel bag just for kicks." the Zebra trader gruffed callously.

 "for These ragged threads? be glad I'm in a rush." *Hurmph* *throws his marble bag*

   Couth dawns his new gear. http://2chpencil.deviantart.com/art/Castlevania-Alucard-257359572 (http://2chpencil.deviantart.com/art/Castlevania-Alucard-257359572)

  "right, what was I doing? I was going to talk to someone but who was that?"

  *sees Khenal barreling right at him*

  "Oh look, Khenal" Couth says in a stupidly dismissive tone *takes a double take*
 
  "Oh GODS Khenal is coming for me!" he says with abject terror.

  as a Bartender Couth hears many wild stories from his clientele. from what he's gathered this alicorn supposedly is part of the  royal family, is either an angel or a daemon, and can read every pony's mind in the whole fortress at once. and Couth just shot his friend in he face with a crossbow.

  Couth clenched his whole body and braced to be turned to ash/teleported to hell/ whatever alicorns do to criminal scum

  "OUT OF THE WAY" Khenal barks

  he checks the pony as he makes a mad dash to the hospital

  "but-but HEY WAIT! I need to tell you something!"

  Couth follows suit

----------

((great, now I'm playing barbie with my little pony))

   
     



       
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 17, 2011, 10:14:50 pm
So, got the first bit done over on  FiM Fiction (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2892/Glitterglen) if you guys want to take a look.  It only covers to the very first migrant wave so far, but I'll be updating it as we go.  In other news, once Dsarker gets on, we can see if Friesden has managed to hang herself before Khenal could get there.

Edit:  Derp, didn't see that.  Making reaction now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 17, 2011, 10:58:02 pm
((RP wise, she JUST did.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 17, 2011, 11:35:30 pm
"Ah, here's the key.  There you go, sir."  Says the guard, opening the door for me.

Just in time for me to see Friesden dropping like a stone, a chain wrapped around her neck.


"Friesden!"

My horn flashes with brilliant light as I try to catch her before she reaches the end of the chain.


************

I'll let Dsarker decide if Khenal is in time.  And not just because I like cliff hangers :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 12:17:05 am
((I wrote a short story, and I figured you guys would like to hear it! Just a heads up, I purposefully made it so that you could use your imagination on what GU stands for, and so on and so forth. ENJOY!))
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 02:36:04 am
((Guys, what is happening lately?! We can't abandon this yet!))
((I'm going to bed, all I have to say is that i'm VERY disappointed.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 02:55:56 am
((Yes, yes, Khenal is in time.))

Friesden feels her fall halted. She opens her eyes to see right into Khenal's, with his horn lit, holding her up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 03:09:37 am
I smile warmly at Friesden, glad she's alright.  The chain levitates from where it's hooked and the noose removes itself from Friesden's neck.  I gently lower her to the floor and levitate the chain over to myself, trying to not let my unease about what almost happened show.

"Why, Friesden?"


**********

Oh good, I had no idea what to do if Khenal got to watch Friesden die before his eyes :)  And, of course, rp happens right after the master leaves, heh.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 03:15:13 am
"You. Took. Him. Away." Friesden falls unconscious.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 03:32:30 am
'Now what?  I can't leave her in here, I can't put her in a cell, I can't strap her to a hospital bed.  She needs pony interaction, but she's so unstable right now.'

*Sigh*  "What am I going to do with you, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 03:44:58 am
"Kill her. It's the only way to be sure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 03:52:32 am
'Not gonna happen, and you know it, Keeper.  She just needs somepony to talk to, somepony to let her know that Schmoe isn't the only one who cares about her.

...Somepony besides me.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 04:00:52 am
"Khenal, this is not entirely for me own benefit. If she wants to die this much, you might need to give it to ner."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 04:13:48 am
'She may want to die, but that's not what she needs.  I've said it many times, Keeper:  There is no honor in suicide.  She's lonely and doesn't know how to deal with it.  She needs a friend.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 04:19:51 am
"Or she's incurably insane. If I had Schmoe's permission, I could probably tell you which of her many personalities is controlling her at the moment. I don't, though, so that's moot. Anyway, there may be no honour in suicide, but is there mercy?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 04:43:56 am
'Suicide is no mercy.  Suicide is an end, is giving up.  Suicide is selfish, seeking to end one's own pain while giving more to those around you.  I've contemplated suicide before, Keeper.  When I failed, back in Tailentranced, I was going to simply fly as high as I could and then plummet to my death.  I had made such a huge mistake and thought I didn't deserve to live any more.  But I realized something: I didn't deserve death either.  If I simply killed myself, what would that make of those who lost their lives because of me?  Would they have died for nothing?

'I didn't want to live, but I needed to stay alive, to try to fix my mistakes.  I had to make sure that they didn't die for nothing.  That's why I harp on about other ponies and friendship so much, Keeper.  I don't live my life for myself anymore.  If you only think about yourself, things get out of focus and loose meaning very quickly.  But if you live for others, every little thing takes on a huge meaning.

'I don't want to give up on her, Keeper.  She desperately needs a friend, and she won't accept me as one.  I fear nopony else is willing to offer to extend friendship to her, either.  Dr. Bubbles might be able to, or that new pony, Granite.  If they can't get through to her... I don't want to consider it.  Suicide is not an option.  Unfortunately, execution may be...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 04:51:26 am
"As far as she knows, Khenal, she's trapped by a group of ponies she doesn't know who took away her only support. Suicide is not merely selfishness. Remember the old saying, 'I have borrowed my ancestor's name. I must return it to them unblemished.' Suicide is the height of courage."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 04:56:03 am
'It's the basest cowardice!  Instead of owning up to mistakes and trying to do something about it, you just give up and leave everything broken!  Killing yourself doesn't fix any blemish, it only adds another!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 05:05:49 am
"Not having the bravery to die is the basest form of cowardice."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 18, 2011, 05:09:08 am
God.... Seriously guys, don't debate about this kind of thing. I just spilled coffee all over myself when I started screaming at the screen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 05:13:59 am
Well, in actual fact suicide only began being repressed in the west very recently. Classics would fall on their swords if they failed rather than face the indignity of capture. Knights who were wounded would be given mercy, basically an assisted suicide. Japan has always had suicide as honourable, with those who were regarded as too cowardly to do the act actually given a wooden sword to shame them, and it's similar with most Asian countries.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 18, 2011, 05:14:54 am
You are correct. Being Asian myself, I have to back that up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 18, 2011, 05:17:31 am
God.... Seriously guys, don't debate about this kind of thing. I just spilled coffee all over myself when I started screaming at the screen.
No let them go. They have been building to this for awhile. Maybe some sort of resolution to Friesden's plot line can finally come out of this. Either death or steps being taken toward recovery, depending on what they decide of course. Can't just keep crazy murdering pony tied up forever right. Something has to give in one direction or the other.

Edit: Fixed a typo.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 05:21:25 am
'Facing death and surrendering to it are two very different things, Keeper.'

I carefully wrap the chain about Friesden before lifting her to my back and heading back to the jail.  The guard at the well room door looks surprised as I exit with her.


"Uh, sir?  What are you doing?"

"I'm taking her back to a real cell.  I'll have two of the 'smugglers' share a cell, or escort one back here if they want the well room instead.  Friesden is actually dangerous and needs a real cell."


********
Oh the things we get up to in this thread.  However, I need to cut our debate short so I can get some dang sleep.  Strongbeard is right, though.  If Friesden continues with her sociopathic tendencies, Khenal may have no choice but to execute her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 05:24:19 am
Oh, I have no doubt!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 18, 2011, 12:55:22 pm
"Why did I have to go back to help him?" I mutter.
Because despite your best efforts you're a good guy. Negs supplied cheerfully as he grazed lightly on Psycho's pain.
"Didn't you already get enough to eat today?" I ask him irritably.
I take my meals when I can and where I can.  Besides, he tastes good.
I roll my eyes and continue to ignore the looks that several ponies are giving me as I continue to drag Psycho along on his makeshift stretcher.  Despite doing my best to ignore them I can't help but notice that there were far fewer than I had expected.  I was carrying an unconscious military captain here!  For a few seconds I felt a flash of indigence before calming myself.  It was a good thing for people not to pay to much attention to me after all. 
I was so caught up in my thoughts that I almost missed hearing what several ponies were gossiping about near the entrance to the hospital.
"I heard she tried to kill herself!  Commander Khenal just barely managed to get there in time!"
The first pony's companion snorted at this, "I don't get why he's trying so hard to protect her.  I heard she's killed a dozen ponies here!"
"No!" the first one gasped.
What do you think of that pony?
"Not sure.  She tried to kill me, that isn't a good thing in my book."
I don't know either, Negs said slowly.  She was tasty but... her colors are wrong.  She's very broken.
"I already knew that Negs," I sighed.  "Are you trying to get me to pity her?"
I'm not sure.  But she was broken by a daemon right?  Daemons.... I don't like daemons. he whispered pitiably.
"I know Negs.  I know."
I silently nudge open the door to the hospital and drop Psycho off in his bed.
"And stay there this time," I say to his sleeping body.
Confident that he'll be there for a while, if only because of the drug, I head off in search of Khenal.  He did promise he would be available and I finally think I have some of the right questions to ask him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 03:58:02 pm
With Friesden in a propper cell and the paperwork reduced to only a small pile, I head to Charity's room to investigate it myself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 04:11:08 pm
Psycho wakes up in a hospital bed.
"Aw, not again...Why am I here this time...?" I mutter, only vaguely remembering something about crawling and being in pain.
((I'm starting to think i'm being purposefully ignored.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 06:03:26 pm
I think the others are trying to let Carrot recover from his wounds.  Khenal has this new investigation to keep him busy, but he'll make sure to visit Carrot when he can.  In other news, I've finished transcribing another large section of Gliterglen over on FiMFiction.net if anypony wants to go look at it.  And in other, other news, I'll be heading out in an hour or two to do real life stuff.  So, if anypony needs to interact with Khenal, it should happen soon or be prepared to wait several hours before I can reply
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 06:04:32 pm
Post up the links, if you would. Crosspost them to the main pony thread, too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 18, 2011, 06:05:01 pm
The guards give Khenal the key to the hospital and he goes inside.

 "I need to get to Khenal and tell him my testimony before the real facts come in. also I need to know what happened to charity, too." Couth whispers, doing the best he can to keep a low profile. "but first I need to get these guards out of the way."

he takes out his ale flask, takes a big swill and walks up to them.

 "Halt. the hospital is closed to visitors. whoever you came to see will have to wait until this assassination business is taken care of." the beefy unicorn guard droned before Couth could say a word.

why would the hospital be closed off? is my little loose end still alive? Couth wondered nervously.
 
"oh, well I came here to see you two, actually," Couth lied

"see, I'm the bartender down at the Unshorn Fetlock and I came here to tell you all enlisted guards get free drinks tonight for bravely risking your lives for our fortress. and..."

"to calm everyone down after the..you know..assassination" he said in a more hushed tone.

"Attempted' assassination." the Guard growled

"yes, of course" let out with a bullshitter's smile.

'let me through so I can fix that.'Couth thought.

 "well, come on then, lets get going!" the Pegasus guard revs his wings in excitement but the more battle worn guard was harder to fool. he anchored his partner to the ground and said "sorry to turn down your generous offer, but we stay here. Captains Orders."

"well, don't know about you but I'M getting my free ale!" the Pegasus guard snapped. he flies off.

"hey, wait! come back!" the other guard runs after him.

Couth sighs in relief and pulls out a rouges best friend; The lock-pick.

he works the lock in seconds.

when he opens the door he sees the notoriously psychotic Feresden free and Khenal magically whirling a goddamn chain around.

"yeah, Buck that!" Couth exclaimed. "I'll deal with with him later! let's see if Charity or Nicolta are still alive first."

he strides down the hallway, whistling a little tune he picked up called Twisted Nerve.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E84OWq6z3IQ&feature=related (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E84OWq6z3IQ&feature=related)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 06:25:29 pm
'At least it didn't take long to get Friesden situated in her new cell.'

I pause as I pass the hospital entrance on my way to Charity's room.

'...Where the hay are the guards?  I told them to only go off shift after being relieved by the next shift!'

I scowl as I enter the hospital to make sure everything is alright.  I have my spear with me, though not drawn.  If there are no guards at the hospital entrance, something might be wrong.  I cautiously make my way toward Charity's hospital room, hoping that I'm just being paranoid.




**************

Also,  linky  (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2892/Glitterglen) for those who missed it.  I'm still working out the kinks for how to transcribe this beast, and the chapters have been getting longer as I go.  I think the latest chapter is going to be the average length for the rest of it, though.  Which reminds me, anyone have the skills of an artist to make a cover image?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 18, 2011, 06:35:12 pm
"And you're sure you saw him head this way right?" I ask the pony.
"Oh yes, he was heading for Charity's hospital room."
"Thank you very much," I say as I walk away.
Told you we should ask for directions.
"It didn't work the last two times though"
I still won this time.
As I near my destination I see that the guards that were there when I last left have vanished.
That's never a good sign.
I didn't even bother agreeing as I entered the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 18, 2011, 07:10:55 pm
(Khenal just read through all of the Glitterglen stuff you posted on FIMfiction, it's all great keep it up. However, I would like to make one small correction to your notes at the bottom of "We are not alone in the jungle." In it you claimed that Keshi ponies are corrupted unicorns with a tentacle instead of a horn. This is not correct. The three standard castes of the Diomedians are Keshi, Darkbolts, and Tentacle ponies. Keshi's are basically corrupted earthponies. (which I think are bigger? Can someone confirm that for me?) Naturally Darkbolts are blood sucking bat winged pegasi, and Tentacle ponies are corrupted unicorns with tentacle horns.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 07:16:46 pm
i am busy...please talk for me.
((I'm back. I typed that on my cell, so...yeah.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 18, 2011, 07:21:32 pm
i am busy...please talk for me.

Well how can I say no if you ask it like that.

After Psycho is returned to bed he is stitched up by the Doctor. After Carrot awakens Charity, still recovering from her injury though much better than before, comes to visit him.

"Hello Captain. I heard you tried to drag yourself out of this place and reopened all your wounds to do it." says the unicorn in a playful mocking tone.


Oh damn it. I'm retarded. I read that as "please talk to me" Buck. Never mind, forget I wrote anything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 07:39:21 pm
Khenal, post it in the main MLPFIM thread and ask for Sean Mirrsen to illustrate it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 07:45:51 pm
Uh, looks like it just got nuked  ???
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 07:50:43 pm
PM it to him, then. Hmmm.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 18, 2011, 08:11:54 pm
Alrighty, did so.  And now I'm outta here for hanging with rl friends.  Hopefully nopony dies while I'm out!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 08:42:19 pm
http://bay12ponies.proboards.com/index.cgi
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 08:47:05 pm
The Master explodes into gore!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 18, 2011, 09:05:44 pm
Can honestly say I didn't expect that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 09:13:38 pm
Rentorian explodes into rainbows!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 18, 2011, 09:19:59 pm
Sadly, that was less surprising then the first explosion.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 09:22:18 pm
Stalin explodes into cats!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 18, 2011, 09:23:14 pm
I am beginning to believe we may eb derailing this thread ever so slightly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 09:26:18 pm
To be honest, It's starting to feel like Khenal and Dsarker are down right ignoring me. Prove me wrong.

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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 18, 2011, 09:30:15 pm
Hey Rentorian, who are you talking to?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 18, 2011, 09:37:36 pm
Just the voices in my head.  Nothing too unusual.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 10:14:31 pm
you guys suck :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 18, 2011, 10:22:48 pm
Thanks for noticing!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 10:39:17 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=iv&v=3KK95ulnZ_k&src_vid=Gp67V4G-skg&annotation_id=annotation_739604 BWHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 18, 2011, 10:44:36 pm
Ahh, the power of the internet.
In other news I grow tired and find that the only cure is forced unconsciousness.
I wish you all a good night!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 18, 2011, 11:04:05 pm

everyone's done for tonight? ok, i'll post my next entry at two-ish tommorw

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 18, 2011, 11:25:36 pm
I really hope Toady spares this part of the My little pony threads...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 19, 2011, 12:38:08 am
In any case, I'm now more glad than ever that I volunteered to archive this!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 19, 2011, 12:53:11 am
I really hope Toady spares this part of the My little pony threads...

Me too.  I just posted the start of a pony fort story.  I hope he doesn't nuke it.

Anyway, posting to watch.  I've read the whole thing since day one, but haven't actually participated.  For now, I'm content to just see where the whole crazy Friesden thing goes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 19, 2011, 12:55:41 am
Well, i'll tell you this, Retro-Eggman, You certainly won't find any emeralds here. Nope...MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 19, 2011, 01:18:19 am
I really hope Toady spares this part of the My little pony threads...

I wouldn't worry. I'm pretty sure he was just talking about General MLP threads, Glitterglen is actually a Dwarf Fortress Community fort, albeit with a pony mod, (and with some uncontrollable outbursts of free-form Role Playing) and thus is exactly what this part of the forums is for.

Charity's Journal 25th Limestone 98

I saw Venture sitting outside Friesden's cell this afternoon. I think she was trying to get through to the poor mare. Didn't sound like she was making much progress, but I didn't stay to listen to the whole thing.

Charity's Journal 28th Limestone 98

Seems that we had a jail break today. No it's not who you might expect. It was Ms. Pillomino. She used her knowledge of masonry to find a weak point in the cell and make a break for it. Although she didn't try to flee the town. Just ran to the bar for a drink, before Khenal showed up and took her back. She did not resist. Seemed she really really wanted a drink.

(The Nurse Kil had given every pony water except for Pillomino, and then ran off to get a drink herself and then went on break, and then went to a party. With the Doctor busy treating injuries from the last ambush, and Pillomino very dehydrated, and nopony else bringing water, death was a possibility, so I assigned a dog to be tied to her chain, and when that was done, she ran for the drink stockpile, and got one before Khenal dragged her back to one of the new cells.)

However, in other news, Cryptson has been parading around in a fine suit of Bismuth Bronze and Steel Armour, and carrying a masterful Steel Pick. He hasn't left me or the kids alone since the accident. It's sweet, and I'm happy to keep him close, but he can be kind of smothering, although, I'd rather him stay to close, than too far until this assassin is caught.

7th Sandstone 98

Tunur (our armourer) spotted a Keshi lurking around outside the fortress. And it ran off at the sight of him.


(And the game just crashed, with . Rendering all the micromanaging I've been doing for the last hour, fixing up a mistake in my military uniforms, and tinkering with jobs in Dwarf Therapist moot. Buck it. I'll try again another day.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 19, 2011, 04:04:07 am
((Good night people! I will have a ton of back story on Psycho Carrot and other stuff up soon!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 05:51:23 pm
  A small muffled 'ahhgh' echos down the hospital halls

  that can't be good

  --------
OOC;  M'aiq the Liar in told me he saw a mudcrab today in skyrim and I punched his head off in rage  :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 19, 2011, 05:55:09 pm
Did you hear that?
"Yes," I say as I step up my pace and head to where the cry was heard.
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You killed M'aiq!?  How could you!  So what if he saw a mudcrab!?  You should be ashamed of yourself. >:(
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 06:11:44 pm
(( So for the record Charity, Dr. Bubbles, Nicolta Tesla, Psycho carrot, charity's husband and all of the foals are Charity's room and anyone else? ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 19, 2011, 06:22:07 pm
I believe most, if not all, of Psycho's markspony squad, as well as any other guards Khenal wanted to have guard Charity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 06:29:32 pm
  quick, someone open charity's door! the suspense is killing me!  :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 19, 2011, 06:39:01 pm
Psycho gets out of the hospital bed after deciding that he doesn't want to be there any longer. He heads to charity's room and finds two other ponies also there. He gives a questioning glance at them, then opens the door and trots in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 19, 2011, 06:43:13 pm
Was that Psycho? Negs asks incredulously as we near Charity's room.
"Pit damned stallion doesn't know when to stay down!" I muttered angrily.   "Still, if something's up it's better to have more rather than less."
Not waiting to hear any objections I barge into Charity's room after Psycho.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 19, 2011, 06:49:28 pm
"I heard that, Granite..." I say slyly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 19, 2011, 06:55:28 pm
"Then you were probably meant to," I retort as I glare at him.  "You were laid up in that bed not too long ago and you're already back up.  Just isn't normal."
You aren't too normal either, Negs chided me.
"You shut up," I tell him.  "And not a word out of you either," I say before Psycho can comment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 19, 2011, 06:56:52 pm
"Oops! I just remembered!!"
I quickly bolt out the door, remembering that I wrote an autobiography and HAD to show it to Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 19, 2011, 07:00:00 pm
"What about the-?" I start to ask, but it's too late and Psycho is gone.  "That boy is not right in the head," I mutter.
"Don't say it!" I say sharply to Negs.
Wouldn't dream of it, he replies loftily.
Grumbling to myself I start looking around Charity's room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 07:23:46 pm
As Granite approaches the door he hears a raised voice on the other side he dosen't recognize.

he barrels through the door and sees Charity in terrible pain ... listening to the drunk ramblings of an earthpony who decided to barge into her room. Dr. Bubbles and guards are entranced, hanging on his every word, however.

"-and then she says 'Oi, i'm just usin' theh talents my momma gave meh.' " Couth was badly mimicking Domidian accent, haphazardly waving his flask around.

the small crowd around him laughs

"And that's the story of when I hired a tentacle pony prostitute." Couth Beamed

*eyes the new pony in the room*

"hi, Couth Darkmane, pleased to meet you." Couth raises his hoof in a friendly gesture.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 19, 2011, 07:26:48 pm
((I left before seeing the room. I'd like to stick to Dsarker's and Khenal's story.))
((EDIT: It still says
Quote
*eyes the two new ponies in the room*
:P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 19, 2011, 07:49:50 pm
Wait, Khenal is leading Friesden to an actual jail cell right now, correct?  Time is so hard to keep track of in these things.
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"Name's Granite." 
I look over to see if anything is wrong with Charity, I see nothing wrong with her.
Nothing looks wrong with her to me.
I nod slowly as Negs says this.
"I'm surprised you managed to talk your way into here.  I thought almost everypony wasn't allowed in here unless they were a foal or a guard," I say looking pointedly at the gaurds in the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 08:04:19 pm
 "he has a reason to be here, he says he has a lead on the assassination." one of the guards piped up.

 oh, I know everything about it Couth thought

------------
I thought Khenal put Friesden in jail already and he's coming to charity's room
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 19, 2011, 08:06:56 pm
"Well than what are you doing down here?!" I exclaim.  "We should go see Khenal at once!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 19, 2011, 08:12:46 pm
Charity speaks, "Indeed Couth, if you have a lead you should take it to the Guard Captain so he can act on it right away."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 19, 2011, 08:20:18 pm
"Does anyone know where he is?  I had heard he was here but..." my voice trails off questioningly.
"I heard he was taking Friesden to a cell," one markspony replied.
"I thought he was heading here," another said.
"He's in his office!" one of the foals cried out.
Soon enough a cacophony of voices erupted in the room, all certain they knew where Khenal was and what he was doing.
"SILENCE!" I roar.  Even the various military ponies stop bickering and snap to attention.
You still got it don't ya?  Never gonna understand how you do that. Negs commented wonderingly.
"From what I've seen today he'll show up here sometime.  So it might be best if we all just wait right here for him.  Any objections?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 08:33:19 pm
Couth glares at Charity

  she busts up my illegal metal trading ring, she imprisons ten of my employees, kills two of my friends, maims a third and yet she has the audacity to order me around like one of her toy solders. what a mercy I've given her by letting her live.

"yes, of course, Granite." Couth smiles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 19, 2011, 08:57:57 pm
"Glad to hear it," I say and settle down in one corner of the room away from everypony else.
I don't like him.  He has a lot of red.
"Vermillion, crimson, lust?  Which one?"
Mostly crimson, a little vermillion.
"Damn, he's hiding things."
So are you.
"He's hiding anger at someone, and he's putting up a good front for it."
Anger... Which one was that?
"Several of the reds."
You ponies are so strange.
I lay down and keep my eyes on Couth.
************************************************************
I'm gonna go to sleep soon, got work tomorrow.  So if anyone needs Granite for something just talk for him.  Just remember he never thinks anything, always says things out loud so he doesn't confuse his thoughts for Negs voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 19, 2011, 09:02:24 pm
Just a reminder to you two; Please don't assume control of named ponies without express permission.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 19, 2011, 09:17:19 pm
((Yes, What ansontan said. How would you like it if "I" just made your character do something you didn't like? You'd be pretty mad.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 09:20:01 pm
Just a reminder to you two; Please don't assume control of named ponies without express permission.

ARE YOU SAYING YOU WOULDN'T BE VEXED BY MY WILES?  :P

jk, duly noted, won't happen again

also, where is everybody?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 19, 2011, 09:21:37 pm
Friesden starts to wake in her cell.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 19, 2011, 09:35:04 pm
While waiting for Khenal to show, Charity, clearly uncomfortable by being surrounded by so many strangers, (The guards now being IN her room, along with the two near strangers Couth and Granite. Them being why the guards are closer now.) attempts to make small talk. It's probably pretty awkward.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 09:56:50 pm
 
Couth takes this time to check up on how his good friend Nicolta Tesla is doing.

"whats the prognosis Dr. Bubbles?" Couth said with some forged sympathy in his voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 19, 2011, 09:58:38 pm
"He is.... okay. He took quite a beating there, but he's going to be fine. He just broke a few bones, thats all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 10:18:41 pm

 "mm-hm" Couth said, distracted.

he ransacked Nicolta's personal effects while the good doctor was talking.

Damn. no forged work orders, where could they be?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 19, 2011, 10:25:41 pm
he ransacked Nicolta's personal effects while the good doctor was talking.

(You're doing this in front of everypony? Really?  ???)

"Hey you!" Charity calls out to Couth, "What are you doing? That's Tesla's stuff. You have no right to go snooping through it. Leave it alone."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 19, 2011, 10:34:40 pm
 "Do you want to know who tried to murder you, Mrs. charity? if you do, let me do this." Couth retorts
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 19, 2011, 10:55:53 pm
(You've ticked off our little Countess, DVNO. And she's got a bit of temper.)

Charity growls.

"You!? Don't you realize that stuff is evidence. You're not a guard, you're not a detective, you're not even in the militia, you're just a bartender. It's not your job to investigate this. So just sit down, and either tell us what your lead is and go, or wait for the Captain and tell him, and he will investigate, as that is his job, not your's mudpony. Or are you accusing Nicolta of being behind this? Because if you are know that he's already a suspect and will be investigated. By those I trust to do the job right."


After finishing her rant Charity's right front hoof hovers over her bandaged injury. Her wound seems to be irritated when she yells.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 19, 2011, 11:53:44 pm
((My gosh! Where is Khenal lately? He's been on a whole lot less recently, AND NO, SKYRIM IS NO EXCUSE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 20, 2011, 12:04:25 am
 o-hoh, I'm a Mudpony now? I'm debating whether I've had my fill of revenge yet and she's slinging insults. like anything she says in that hospital bed I put her in is going to get under my skin!

  Couth shrugs and laughs quietly to himself

 "your right, this good Samaritan taking time out of his busy day to help you is totally out of his bounds." couth snarked

 *he takes a seat* 

 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 12:06:58 am
((I just want to point out, you're not getting anywhere by trying to guilt trip Charity. If I were her, I'd have you beaten for such disrespect!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 12:09:22 am
((And remember what happened to the last person she had beaten?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 12:17:13 am
((could somepony give us a quote of what happened last time?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 12:20:14 am

(Uh, uh-oh. Um. We have incoming fun. Prepare yourselves.)

Charity's Journal 7th Slate 98

I told them. I told those ponies. I told them that no amulets were to be exported from Glitterglen. But did they listen? NO! They did it anyway. I can't allow such blatant disrespect for our laws to go on. I've acquired a list of those ponies responsible for this outrage. 10 of them. Including Pillomino and Thundersplinter! I thought we could trust those two at least. I've drawn lots and the four losers will be beaten, while the rest will spend time in prison. I've given the order to the guard.
________________________________
And so the beatings began. First up was Bokbon Shigosotil, a loyal member of Starkey's own squad, she was beaten by Officer: Istlig Konabor, in the Trade Depot where her horrendous crime took place, until she was dead, a tragedy, that will undoubtedly, put a divide between the militia and the guard.

Among those imprisoned we have Pillomino, and Venture's father, (200 and 100 days respectively) among others. Due to overcrowding of the cells, Pillomino, is being forced to share a cell with...Friesden. (Fun times)

The second victim, of Officer: Istligs beatings, Nanges Lisigbol, a double legend, in both glass-making and in the operation of siege weapons. He was beaten in the main hallway, trying to run away the entire time, but being struck again and again, until, the officer smashed his head between his hammer and the wall, killing the poor pony.

The third to be beaten. Thundersplinter, was sitting in the dinning hall, attending a party thrown by the Count Consort Cryptson, when suddenly Officer Tunur, came up and kicked her in the leg, bite her in the upper body, and proceeded to administer justice with his silver war-hammer, that ranks among the finest of weapons Ironya has ever produced. Thunder became enraged and lashed out, but was ineffectual and quickly knocked back down by the powerful hammer blows. But then, the beating stopped, and the officer left her, a broken shadow of her former self, but alive. A passing earthpony, then carried the broken pegasus to the hospital, so she could recover.
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(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Thunder%27s%20beating.png)

And the final beating was dealt to one of our more skilled butchers who while bruised, has survived. (finally got him to drop that damn Steel War Hammer and use a training weapon for his beatings.)
_____________________________________________________

Charity's Journal 10th Slate, 98
Katak, a low skilled, earthpony, metal crafter has been possessed.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 12:22:35 am
((STILL want to continue to insult our glorious leader? :-X))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 20, 2011, 12:52:48 am
((lol))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 01:07:11 am
((this is HIGHLY annoying. Without khenal, this thread WILL shrivel up and die! Without ME, it would just be...shorter...big time.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 20, 2011, 01:12:21 am
Charity hears the sarcasm in Couth's voice, but merely glares, and makes a mental note of it for later. She asks her husband for a pint of pegasan ale, he gives her water, she drinks it anyway.

(Charity will probably remain quiet unless spoken too, until Khenal arrives. Assuming Khenal [the player] get's on at all tonight.)

(Don't worry The Master, if Khenal [the player again.] is gone for a number of days, I'll take over for him until such time as he were to return. Not preferable, but better than letting the thread die. However, it is Saturday night, he's probably just out doing real world things.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 01:46:17 am
(Sorry guys, weekends tend to get taken by rl stuff.  And I don't have teh skyrim, so I don't even have that excuse :P)

Down the hall from Charity's hospital room, I hear the raised voices of Charity and an unknown pony.  Though Charity doesn't sound scared, I'm already a bit on edge with the guards at the entrance being gone.  I rush to the doorway and do my best to look authoritative.

"What's going on in here?"  I ask loudly, my glowing horn weaving an aura about my spear.  Though it isn't drawn, I'm ready to change that at a moment's notice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 02:07:44 am
Friesden huddles in a corner of her cell.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 02:13:54 am
Finally deciding to head back to charity's room as hours of searching, Psycho finds Khenal there as well.
"Khenal! I wrote a book!!!" I say excitedly, pulling a book out of my satchel and shoving it in his face, not noticing the large crowd and everything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 20, 2011, 02:19:02 am
"Ah, Captain, you're finally here." says Charity to Khenal, ignoring Captain Carrot. "You don't need to worry. Nothing is wrong. However, this one." She points a hoof at Couth. "Thinks he has some information for you regarding our assassin. Additionally," she gestures toward Tesla's property on the other table, "we have everything Nicolta had on him when he was found at the bottom of that cliff, in case you want to search it for evidence of foul play."

Edit: Fixed an error.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 02:31:57 am
"A book?  Um, give me a moment, Carrot.  I'd like to hear what information this pony may have, and to get a chance to look through this evidence from Testla."

I give Carrot a smile to let him know I'm not simply brushing him off, then head over to the pony Charity indicated may know something.

"Hello sir.  What can you tell me of the assassination attempt?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 02:35:22 am
Psycho frowns dejectedly. He slowly lumbers into the hallway and lays down to wait.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 02:46:16 am
((by the way, the "informant" is offline. :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 02:47:55 am
(...Dang.  Then feel free to come back in the room and... be Carrot :P)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 02:51:32 am
I change my mind and instead dash back in. I inadvertently smash into Couth and knock him out by accident.
"Oops...Anyway, please khenal? I really want you to see it! It's my autobiography!" I say, exitited as a foal.
(props to those who get the reference)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 03:14:08 am
I facehoof at Carrot knocking out a potential witness.

'...At least he's already in the hospital'


"Your autobiography?"  I look a bit incredulous at the book Carrot is waving about, then shrug and float it so I can start reading.


********

Khenal is fast taking an attitude to Carrot that the others take to Pinkie in the show.  In other words: Carrot is Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 03:32:58 am
Psycho Carrot was born in an underground hospital. His mother died in childbirth, and his father was a drunk. All the same, his father did his best to keep him out of trouble. They lived in a middle-class apartment in a place called Stallionville. Mesa East, Psycho's best friend, lived next door to him. They would do everything together...except dying.

When Psycho was a young filly, Mesa and Psycho were doing their usual weekend routine, which of course meant hurling a apple at pigeons. It was Mesa's turn to throw the apple, so he did, but of course he missed. It fell into the street and Mesa ran to get it back. Mesa never did see that   bull barreling down the street. It hit him and it fatally wounded him. The force of the impact knocked him all the way to Psycho's feet. Mesa looked up at Psycho with those emerald green eyes, smiled, and passed away.

We fast-forward five years, and now Psycho is an adult pony. Psycho's dad died from an alcoholic overdose on his last birthday. Luckily, he now has a wonderful girl-friend named Esther Quirk. Ah Esther, how they would hold each other, and the way they danced...how sad things that all good things must have an end. Esther was talking Psycho's ear off as usual, when suddenly, all the lights in the city went dark. Terrified, as this had never happened before, Esther got up from the bench she and Psycho were sitting on and wondered around aimlessly. When the lights came back on about a minute later, Esther was sleeping on the ground in a pool of ketchup. That's what Psycho continued to tell himself as she was buried in her grave.

Psycho was devastated. His best friend was dead, now his girl friend was gone as well! He decided to investigate who killed her. Psycho searched the area around where Esther died, and found a torn piece of cloth. It had the signature logo of the Darkbolts on it. Psycho snapped on that day, and he vowed that he would not rest until he killed every last Darkbolt on the planet.

Psycho didn't anticipate that there were others out there who also hated the Darkbolts. After hearing about these people he decided that he'd join up with them. He rose through the ranks, until he became Captain. Psycho is tired of putting up with the Darkbolts reign of terror. This is his story, and it has only just begun.

((WARNING: WE ARE NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR EXAGGERATIONS.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 03:39:40 am
'...Third person?  And it sounds so detached.'

I give Carrot a concerned look.


"Carrot, is all this true?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 03:43:50 am
My smile dissolves into a look of despair.
"Yeah...I wrote it originally for myself, in case my memories goes again...but I decided to publish it after looking it over." A tear rolls down my cheek, as I recollect Mesa and Esther.
"Oh Esther...why did you have to die...?" I say, depression now completely taking over.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 03:59:11 am
'I was really hoping it was a poorly thought out prank.  He's had a hard life.  A very hard life.'

"Thank you for letting me read it, Carrot.  I...never knew how hard a life you've had."

I place a hoof across Carrot's withers.

"And yet, you still continue on and never give up.  I think Mesa and Ester would be proud of you, Carrot.  You've overcome so much, and are a dear friend."

I give Carrot a warm smile, though there are tears behind my eyes.

"I...I'm sorry I failed you back in Tailentranced.  I'm just glad that you were strong enough to eventually overcome my mistakes."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 04:17:04 am
"...not your fault, it's mine...You see, after I moved to Tailentranced, I was ready to end my life. At that time, I had no friends and nopony to care for me. Nopony even knew me at all either, as they all had also died...courtesy of the Darkbolts. I would've died anyway, mishap or suicide. But then, I suddenly wake up in my own coffin, climb out, and wander until I somehow ended up as the queen's guard. I guess I lost it because I threw the queen's baby out the window, which got me exiled to here. I was going to kill myself -and I tried, but you can guess why I failed- but that's when I met you and the others. You welcomed me here like I was a brother to you from the start." I say, tears now flowing freely.
((Why do people ignore my posts so much...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w7I_MCelk2w&feature=colike and yes, this is the music for the current scene.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 04:43:30 am
I don't speak a word, my own tears saying everything: I can't change his past.  But, as his friend, I can help with his future.


****************

I'm about to pass out.  Shall we call it a scene then?  Khenal can check Testla's stuff behind the scenes and I'll post the relevant things I'd expect to find later.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 04:45:09 am
Yeah, let's call it a night. It's 4:44 am for me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 03:26:46 pm
After crying until there were no tears left, Psycho decides to head home and rest up.

THE NEXT DAY! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQtZJQtBe8E
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 03:31:38 pm
Friesden starts hitting her leg against the wall of her cell, seemingly oblivious to the pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 03:55:15 pm
I take a few minutes to collect myself after Carrot leaves before going to check through Nicolta's belongings.  I pull out my Sequel and begin to make notes on what I find.


Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 2

Notes on what Nicolta Testla had when he was discovered in the caverns.

Several pieces of jewelry, likely of his own make.  Slightly worn, nothing really distinguishing apart from the quality.

Tool belt, empty.  Looks stiffened from water damage.  Also had several small tears in the leather.  Had a bit of paper crammed in one of the pockets, but totally destroyed by water.

It looks like he fell into the cavern river not long after doing some work.  He's a dedicated pony, but I doubt he'd purposely go for a swim with his tools.  Looks like he had a rough ride down the river, likely ending in the cavern lake.  The paper might have been a clue if it weren't for the water damage.  As it is now, it's just trash.  His tools missing is also a bit concerning, and I doubt anypony would be able to find any of them in the river or cavern lake.

Nothing to take him of the suspect list, apart from the fact that he knows how I investigate.  I doubt he was involved in making the trap, but I'll have to take a look at it before I can really say anything.


I nod to myself before closing my book and turning to the guard in the room and pointing to the unconscious witness with a wing.

"Make sure he's alright and take his statement when he's ready to give it.  I'm headed to Charity's personal chambers to check the trap and take it apart for evidence."

As I leave the hospital, I notice the two missing guards are back.  I scowl before addressing them.

"You two will be doing cavern patrol for the next month.  When I say to guard the hospital, I mean guard the hospital!  You two know better than to shirk your duties like that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 03:59:51 pm
((Does this end the day?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 04:05:29 pm
Friesden's leg is now almost completely bloody. She continues to batter it against the wall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 04:11:58 pm
My eyes snap open from where I had fallen asleep in the corner of the room.
Finally.  Khenal was just here. I tried to wake you up but...
"Right, right.  Must have been more tired than I thought," I mutter absentmindedly.
I get up and stretch, working out the kinks in my legs and stretching my sleeping muscles.
"He just left right?  The main door?"
Yes
"And the hunt is on yet again," I sigh as I trot out the door to try and find Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 04:31:34 pm
I sit in my office, annoyed at the paperwork involved with simply getting a set of tools. 

'I should have rememberd that actual tools are needed to take apart a trap, ugh.  At least this is the last of the paperwork for today... What's that thumping?'

I quickly finish the rest of the form, then head out my office, following the dull thump to Friesden's cell.  Once there, I gasp in horror at what I see.


"Friesden, stop that, you're hurting yourself!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 04:57:45 pm
"Why can I never seem to find him?"
Unlucky?
"Can you see anything that might be him?"
Yes.  I will look at the millions of colors all around this outpost, magically be able to tell who they are even when hidden behind walls, and lead you directly to him.
"No need for that much sarcasm, I'm just desperate for ideas."
Several minutes pass in silence.
Granite... What was purple again?
"Pain.  Different shades for the severity and type of pain."
Someone has a lot of purple.
"Then it's probably coming from the hospital."
But the hospital isn't in that direction.  It's somewhere else.  Maybe Khenal will be there.
"Because a high ranking pony doesn't have anything better to do than check if somepony is in pain right?"
We should still check.  He showed up in other places with lots of purple.
I stay silent for a moment.  "Fine, but if this is a trick to get you another meal I'm going to be very angry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 05:16:39 pm
"Yes, I know. It's glorious, I can feel!"

There's a look of joy on Friesden's face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 05:20:34 pm
"Uh..."

I look at her, dumbfounded.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 05:23:06 pm
"I can FEEL again. I can feel!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 05:34:38 pm
It's a little further ahead of you.
"Negs.  There's a wall in the way."
Oh... Go around it then.
I sigh as I turn down a another corridor. 
Soon enough I hear Negs call out again, Keep going and you'll be right next to it.
I trot slowly down the halls.
"This area... What is it?  So many doors, is one of them open a little?"
I stop suddenly as I realize where I am.
"This is the prison isn't it?"
Maybe, the purple lights are up ahead.
I slow my pace and creep silently towards the slightly open door, hoping ot be able to see or hear something that will explain why a prisoner would be in so much pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thechosenone456 on November 20, 2011, 05:43:22 pm
KingStrongbeard, I'm new to all this but what is all the stuff about "My Little Pony?" that seems to be the phrase I've been reading over and over since I last visited this forum...please forgive my ignorance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 06:09:50 pm
Psycho gets out of bed and decides to see if friesden is getting better. Upon arrival, he finds Khenal slack jaw and Friesden injuring herself.
"What the hay is going on?!" I yell.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 06:10:03 pm
It's a television show.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 06:12:24 pm
It's a television show.
((I sent him this link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a27oq09lhPw hopefully our good friend blunty3000 can explain to this poor 14 year old who's living under a rock in Antarctica without a television what My Little Pony is.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 06:13:03 pm
"I can feel...I CAN FEEL!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 06:19:40 pm
That's the crazy one isn't it?
"Yeah, Khenal is there too..."
I'm suddenly pushed to the side as Psycho rushed by me.
"This is getting ridiculous!  Is there some sort of higher force that keeps certain people running into each other!?"
Looks like it.
"Shut up."
No longer caring about whether or not I'm noticed I head into the room and look at Khenal and Friesden questioningly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 06:29:18 pm
I don't see Granite walk in and bump into him, knocking him over for the umpteenth time.
"Whoops...sorry...Oh horseapples, why won't Friesden stop trying to kill herself?!" I mutter worriedly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 06:35:28 pm
I shake myself back to reality, noticing Carrot and Granite.

"I...don't think she's trying to kill herself, actually.  Uh, but she definitely needs some medical attention for her leg.  Can I trust you two with her while I go get somepony to help her?"

I turn to Friesden.  "I'm glad you can feel, Friesden, but your leg needs help.  Please don't injure yourself further while I go get one of the doctors."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 06:37:20 pm
"No! It's the best thing ever! I can feel!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 06:39:24 pm
"Do you want us to keep an eye on her?" I ask looking over at Friesden.
There's no orange, suicide has orange right?
"Yes, yes, suicide has oragne," I mutter.
Looking back at Khenal I say, "I don't think she'll commit suicide, ponies usually have more... despair when they're contemplating suicide, she doesn't have that right now.  Which makes this whole thing even scarier."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 06:41:12 pm
Friesden continues to batter her leg against the wall. A sign of wonder is in her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 06:43:07 pm
THIS IS NOT THE POST YOU'RE LOOKING FOR, MORE ALONG!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 06:43:57 pm
"Can you read anything about her?" I ask Negs worriedly.
She's weird.  She doesn't have many negative feelings... She's very... dark right now.  It's not right, she should have something more than that...  It's scary right now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 06:45:34 pm
((She's at the back of the cell, the Master.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 06:46:57 pm
((Darn! I guess I'll resort to doing what Psycho does best!))
Psycho passes out after seeing all the blood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 06:49:19 pm
"...and now two ponies need help.  Friesden, wouldn't you rather feel something pleasant instead of pain?"

**********

You guys and your posting speed, this is my third change from you guys posting :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 06:51:46 pm
"Is... Is this common?" I ask hesitantly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 06:52:00 pm
((Here comes the madness!))
Psycho begins mumbling the name 'Esther' over and over repeatedly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 06:52:22 pm
"What do you mean, pleasure and pain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 06:55:15 pm
Psycho's voice begins to get louder and louder.
"Esther...Esther...Esther..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 06:58:01 pm
I whisper to Granite: "No, but that may be a good sign."

"Yes, pleasure and pain.  What you feel in your bleeding leg is pain and it means you should stop beating it against the wall.  Pleasure is a little more abstract, though.  Um, you could go feel your bed.  It's fairly soft and nice."

I then notice Carrot.

"...Not good."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:00:10 pm
I suddenly get up, eyes bloodshot, and start ramming my head into anypony nearby, while still mumbling 'Esther' over and over, louder and louder!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 20, 2011, 07:00:50 pm
Starkey is bored. He's been forbidden from training  - doctor's orders, on account of his wing - and Carrot left almost twenty minutes ago, leaving nopony interesting to talk to. He'd take a nap, but he isn't really interested in interrogating Schmoe right now.

Well, he's still got legs, hasn't he? Surely the doc won't mind if he goes for a stroll so long as he doesn't try to fly anywhere. He decides to go pay a visit to Khenal, something about a book he wanted him to read?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 07:01:57 pm
"No, but I feel good when I do this! This must be pleasure!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:02:33 pm
((Doom, you're back! :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:08:34 pm
((scene music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=40t-sMBQ8yM&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 07:09:06 pm
I get a headbutt from Carrot directly in my Peytrel, sending me back a foot or two.  My horn lights up as I levitate him off the floor to try to keep him from hurting himself or anypony else.  Keeping my eyes on him, I continue to try to get Friesden to stop hurting herself.

"Please just humor me and rub your other leg on your mattress there.  It should feel better than bashing your leg against the wall."


*************
So much insanity, so little time :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 07:11:31 pm
As I see Khenal levitate everypony I look over at him enviously muttering, "Now that would be a useful ability to have."
I sigh to myself and speak up,  "Khenal.  Do you want me to try and get anything to... restrain either of these two?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:12:05 pm
Khenal sees a familiar red glow in Psycho eyes.
((Yes, it's you-know-who again.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 07:14:55 pm
Friesden thinks, then nods to Khenal's request. She wanders over to the bed and rubs her leg on the mattress.

"No. There is nothing."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 07:20:15 pm
'Son of a bitch.'

"Granite, run!  Find Starkey and tell him Carrot's eyes are glowing!"

My horn flashes brighter as I begin trying to bind this daemon that simply refuses to leave us alone.


**************

I'm about to name your daemon Cockroach for how tough it is to kill, Carrot :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 07:22:24 pm
"Khenal, remember this daemon is powerful enough to break its bonds. You'll have to either expel it, which could be a bad idea, or destroy its essence completely."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 20, 2011, 07:25:21 pm
As Starkey approaches Khenal's office, he hears the sound of commotion, particularly the raised voice of a certain lieutenant.

'Oh clop no...'

'I don't have to go in there. I can go get back in bed and have a nice rest, without having to deal with demons, lunatics, Carrot. I can just turn around and walk away right now.'


ESTHER
*THWACK*
ESTHER
*THWACK*
ESTHER
*THWACK*

'...no, no I can't.'

Starkey breaks into a trot, heading for the jail.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:25:32 pm
Psycho stops mumbling and smiles eerily warmly.
"That's not going to work this time, Khenal. Now, straight to business. I want a new body and you will do! No, don't thank me, THANK SCHMOE FOR DYING!" Says the familiar daemon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 07:26:57 pm
'Any advice on how to kill it without harming Carrot would be welcome!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 07:28:26 pm
"Khenal, what is he doing? I can help you protect your mind, but I can't see through your eyes or hear through your ears!"

The Keeper thinks.

"You might have to go into his mind. Other than that, nothing."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:28:36 pm
"Oh, Keeper...Kindly remember everything about me now. I'd like you to explain to Khenal what i'm likely about to do." The daemon says, with an all-knowing smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 07:30:44 pm
"You're no daemon of arrogance, though you sure sound like one. If it wasn't for Friesden and I, you'd never have escaped."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:33:06 pm
"How DARE you! I escaped on my own, and you know it! You and that loon...Friesden, just got in the way!" The daemon says; to everypony else nearby, the daemon apears to be talking to himself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 07:33:38 pm
'Right now, he's just talking and acting smug while I keep binding him.  If you say a mental link is Carrot's best chance, then I guess that's what I'll do.'

The ethereal chains slow for a moment as I establish a link with Carrot's mind, ready for the daemon to try to strike.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:35:14 pm
Predicting from last time that Khenal would try to chain him, the daemon quickly exits Psycho and the red mist whizzes down the hallway that Starkey is coming from.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 07:37:12 pm
Daemon Daemon Daemon Daemon Daemon Daemon Daemon
"Shut UP NEGS!" I yell at him as I dash down the hall away from the prison.
"Damn it, have I met Starkey?  I don't think so, this is bad."
Daemon Daemon Daemon Daemon Daemon Daemon Daemon
"I SAID SHUT UP!"
My shout startles several nearby ponies, seeing them I get an idea.
"You!  Go find Starkey!  You need to tell him Carrot's eyes are glowing.  Apparently he'll know what that means!"
The two ponies mill around for a few seconds wondering what to do.
"I SAID NOW!"
As they both run off I turn around.
Where are we going?!
"We're going back.  If we don't we might not have a chance like this to keep the daemon from messing with us again!"
Resolutely squashing Negs' protests I gallop back to the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 07:41:07 pm
"If you think Friesden is such a crazed pony, try and own her, why don't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 07:43:08 pm
'This time I was ready, Cockroach!'

As the chains shatter, I reshape the backlash into a new spell, siphoning off the magic of the linking spell I was preparing as well.  With a flash, I teleport a short distance and land in the path the mist is taking.


"Your fight is here, daemon!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:45:53 pm
The mist appears delighted, and possesses Khenal without hesitation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 07:48:34 pm
The Keeper erects a living maze in Khenal's mind, forcing the daemon to find its way through.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 20, 2011, 07:49:01 pm
There is now a large green alicorn directly in Starkey's path. he does not notice this in time, and slams into him.

"Buh-hwah? Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:51:17 pm
The daemon takes what would've been weeks to him, but seconds in the real world, to finally get through the maze and reach Keeper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 07:51:52 pm
The daemon finds itself in a room of seemingly endless mirrors, reflections of itself and Khenal dancing all around.

'You didn't think I'd be that easy to take, did you?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 07:54:14 pm
((Oh, it's on.))
The daemon looks for the mirror that isn't reflecting anything, and smashes that.
((I know the mirror trick, and I just solved it, DEAL-WITH-IT-FACE))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 07:57:15 pm
I reach Khenal soon after Starkey does, the daemon taint is clear on Khenal's face.
"No no no no no no no no NO!" I gibber.  "Negs!  We need to go in there after him!"
Go in?!  Leave here?!  And go in there?!  After the daemon?!
"Can you follow it or not?!"
Only if Khenal will let us in!  But going after a daemon.  It's not good, very not good!
My body starts to twitch away form Khenal, angrily I snap down on Negs' attempts to make us leave.
"We're going to do this.  Two of us may not be able to defeat a daemon but with the help of him we might have a chance."
I turn to Khenal.
"If you can hear me give me permission to enter your mind.  Negs can't do that without your consent!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 07:57:25 pm
The maze continues through the hall of mirrors, changing every second.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 20, 2011, 07:58:43 pm
Starkey regains his footing. Turning to face Khenal, he finds him standing precisely where he was before, still as a statue. He approaches, gently prodding him in the side.

"Khenal, friend, are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 07:59:24 pm
'Give me some credit.  Everyone knows that trick.  I did say I wouldn't make it easy on you.'

"yes...can't hold...forever...too fast."

**********

:P  He is a master of mental magic, after all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:01:27 pm
"ENOUGH OF THIS!"
The daemon creates an explosion, shattering all the mirrors and hurling himself all the way to the keeper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 08:03:15 pm
"Oh, hello there Cockroach. Just a second."


He shimmers, and where there once was one, there is now fifty. Each of them shimmer and become fifty again. And so on, and so forth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 08:06:08 pm
"He's too far gone," I mutter.  "Is there anything you can do to harm the daemon?"
I might be able to drain the daemon a little, but it will hurt us both.  A lot.
"Do it."
I fling the gate in my mind wide open and lights of emotion spring up around me, Khenal is a strange mixture of his own colors as well as an angry almost black light smothering him.  I can almost see the faint tinkling of a third set of lights underneath it all.  Negs reaches out and grabs at the daemon's lights and pulls hard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 08:08:02 pm
"Carrot's...earring..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:08:46 pm
((The Matrix...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9DeHFMQ1cHk Here you go, agent smith. It's the replication theme.))
"OH HORSEAPPLES!!!! THAT'S SO UNFAIR!" The daemon yells in a spoiled tone of voice.
The daemon comes out of Khenal, and into Granite.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 08:10:56 pm
"Good. Because I was never here in the first place."

The pseudo-Keepers turn into thousands of cells, each surrounding the daemon, and each stronger and more secure than the last.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 08:12:51 pm
The daemon is stopped by a new chain, and this one seems far less inclined to simply shatter.  It traces from Cockroach to Carrot's earring.  His artifact adamantine earring.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:13:59 pm
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...!" The Daemon screams eternally. Psycho heart naturally begins to fail, as the daemon, all this time, was the one that was keeping Psycho alive. He begins to twist and convulse as the symptoms of heart attack begin to manifest themselves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 08:16:20 pm
it's it's not here!
"Good," I mutter as waves of pain sweep over me.  "Where is it now?"
The earring!  it's in there!  It might not be able to escape!  We're safe!
I notice the pain on Psycho's face.  "Oh pit no."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:17:38 pm
"Well..." Psycho says, with determination "It looks like...i'm done for..." Psycho says before his eyes close.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 08:17:51 pm
"Cockroach, in fealty to the God-Princess, our undying lady, and by the grace of the Canterlot Throne, in the name of Glitterglen and the Watch, I call thee diabolis, and in the testimony of thy crimes, I submit this carta. May principial justice account in all balance. The Princess protects," says the Keeper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:19:56 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w7I_MCelk2w&feature=colike))
The daemon goes silent. Psycho turns dead white as the lack of a blood flow sets in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 08:21:57 pm
"Cockroach, in fealty to the God-Princess, our undying lady, and by the grace of the Canterlot Throne, in the name of Glitterglen and the Watch, I call thee diabolis, and in the testimony of thy crimes, I submit this carta. May principial justice account in all balance. The Princess protects," I repeat, finishing the seal on Cockroach before opening my eyes and returning firmly from my mental realm.

Only then do I notice Carrot's still form.


"...Carrot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 08:22:46 pm
This is death isn't it? Negs asks as he watches Psycho's lights slowly turn white.
"Yeah, I'm not sure we can do anything for him..." I mutter sadly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:26:34 pm
Lifeless, Carrot still has a determined smile on his face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 08:29:28 pm
"C-come on Carrot, get up.  Death... death didn't stop you before!  Carrot...?"

I kneel by Carrot, reaching out a hoof to try to find his pulse.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 08:31:39 pm
I slowly open the gate in my mind, watching the white lights slowly fade into nothing as Negs reaches out and caresses them softly.
I don't like death.  There should be colors...
"I don't like it either Negs," I mutter.
Why can I see death?
"It's part of what gave birth to you remember?"
I... shouldn't eat it should I? Negs asks as he slowly pulls his hands away from the fading lights.
"No.  Never eat a death.  It... does things to you.  Bad things."
I want to sleep now.
"Alright."  I slowly close the gate in my mind and seal him off completely.  His presence slowly vanishes from my mind and I'm completely alone again.  I suppress a shudder at the silence in my mind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:32:43 pm
Not even the slightest trace of a pulse can be found. Psycho isn't brain dead yet, he manages to open an eye, lift his head, and mutters weakly, "Goodbye my best friend ever..." then Psycho's head drops.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 20, 2011, 08:33:31 pm
"No... Goddess no..."

Starkey approaches Carrot.

"He... h-he can't be... Khenal, the thing, with the lightning, do it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:35:39 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4kCcA1qlnTM))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 08:37:38 pm
"G...Goodbye, my friend"

I lay my head on Carrot, tears flowing down my face and fighting back wracking sobs. 

Then Starkey's words ignite my hope!  I immediately move my head, pointing my horn at Carrot's heart.  My horn flashes as I send a shock into his heart, hoping that all is not lost.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 08:39:33 pm
I trot over to Khenal and watch in wonder, a faint glimmer of hope in the back of my mind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:40:34 pm
Nothing. ((If you do not succeed, try try again. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0NqNq_hnqQ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 08:43:57 pm
Though Carrot convulsed, he doesn't look to be getting better with just one shock.  My horn brightens as I charge another shock spell.

"Come on, Carrot!  Don't give up now!"

A second charge is sent into his heart.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:45:16 pm
This time, Carrot's heart starts working for a moment, but then fails again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 08:46:21 pm
"Wake up right now soldier!  At attention or I'll have your hooves!" I shout out in my best Drill Sergent voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:47:25 pm
Granite is rewarded by nothing more than Khenal's continued sobs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 08:50:24 pm
I again start charging the shock spell, refusing to let Carrot die like this.

"You've bested the reaper before, Carrot!  Now get off your haunches and remind him you aren't finished yet!"

A third dose of voltage courses through Carrot's heart.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 08:56:38 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GN0pj0vLpE0&feature=related))
Psycho eyes slowly open, and a faint smile appears. He looks at his ever faithful friends, and says,
"You guys are the best...I mean it...Especially you, Khenal...Thank you. Starkey, thank you. Thank you all..."
He says before passing out. This time, with a pulse. Incredibly weak, but a pulse.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 20, 2011, 08:59:10 pm
My shoulders sag noticeably in relief.  "Negs will be glad to hear about this when he wakes up," I mutter.
"Let's get him to the hospital, hopefully he'll stay there until he's healed this time.."
************************************************************
I'm gonna go to sleep now.  Got work tomorrow, you know the drill.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 09:10:10 pm
I again rest my head on Carrot, though this time my tears are ones of joy.  After a few moments, I stand to thank everypony for helping with Cockroach and for just being here.

"Thank you, everypony.  Without you, I wouldn't have been able to bind Cockroach.  And I wouldn't have remembered the shock spell.  It's thanks to you ponies, my friends, that Carrot is alive and Cockroach is hopefully gone for good."

'Thank you too, Keeper.  With you on defense, I was able to concentrate on dealing with Cockroach.'

Then I realize that we have a pony here who was just revived and still has a weak pulse, and Friesden still hasn't gotten attention for her leg.


"Thank you, Granite.  Would you also please send a doctor down here for Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 09:11:30 pm
I'm gonna go to sleep now.  Got work tomorrow, you know the drill.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 09:16:36 pm
Friesden has, quite unnoticed, continued to thump her leg against the wall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 09:18:17 pm
All at once, a new pony Khenal had never seen before runs up to him, drops a letter at his hoofs, then runs away just as quickly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 09:25:40 pm
I sigh before levitating the pillow from Friesden's bed and interposing it between the wall and her leg.  I pick up the letter in my mouth, my magic reserves quite low after the binding, and tuck it in my barding for later.  I then give Starkey a weary smile.

"So, how's your day been?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 09:28:17 pm
Friesden continues to kick the wall, tearing holes in the pillow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 09:31:08 pm
((Doom's offline. We're doomed.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 20, 2011, 09:33:18 pm
(Just got caught up again. I'm surprised that artifact earring actually got mentioned, let alone was used as a plot point. Clever thinking of using that.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 20, 2011, 09:36:03 pm
"Well, it was working up to be quite dull. Then... *chuckle* well, I guess I should be careful what I wish for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 09:41:26 pm
"Heh, yep."

I notice that Friesden is working her way through the pillow.

"Uh, Friesden, could you come here for a moment, please?"


*****************

As far as the earring goes, I knew I was going to use it for something as soon as you gave it to Carrot, I just didn't know what.  Glad you liked it :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 09:48:25 pm
"AH! FLYING TURTLES FROM OUTER SPACE ON STILTS, WHAT HAPPENED?!" I sputter, bolting awake.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 10:35:33 pm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wNo9VHqsuuc&feature=related
((RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGE! YOU GUYS ARE KILLING ME!!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 11:20:37 pm
I'm not at the hospital I'm getting drunk (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XsCHIKTRYRk) trying to figure out how stable Friesden is and trying to keep her from doing serious damage to herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 11:26:59 pm
"They're coming to take me away, ha-haaa!! They're coming to take me away, ho-ho, hee-hee, ha-haaa To the funny farm. Where life is beautiful all the time and I'll be happy to see those nice young men in their clean white coats and they're coming to take me away, ha-haaa!!!!!  To the happy home, with trees and flowers and chirping birds and basket weavers who sit and smile and twiddle their hoofs and tails and they're coming to take me away, ha-haa!!!" Psycho babbles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 20, 2011, 11:33:30 pm
Charity walks out of Doctor Bubbles office, as she has just been checking on the medical reports on the two wounded ponies. Her guard, one of Psycho's soldiers, is on her right flank.

"Captain Carrot. What is with this singing? Do you not realize this is a hospital and a certain," she pauses to decide on the correct word,  "decorum is required?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 11:40:17 pm
"NO! STAY AWAY! YOU'RE HERE TO TAKE ME AWAY!!!!!!!" Psycho babbled hysterically.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 11:42:35 pm
Sorry, had to walk home from uni.


-------


Friesden stops thumping herself against the wall and obediently walks over to Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 20, 2011, 11:44:07 pm
Charity takes a few steps backwards, she shudders out, "Wha...What are you babbling about, Carrot? What's wrong with you."

Charity's guard looks on in bewilderment, confused as to what he should be doing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 11:51:18 pm
"Um, how long has it been since you...felt anything?  Before today when you started with the wall?"

'...That sounded better in my head.  Why do I find her more disturbing like this than when she was trying to kill herself?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 20, 2011, 11:55:22 pm
Friesden goes deep in thought.

"I can't remember," she answers eventually.

She starts tapping her injured hoof on the floor.

"Why? What's happening?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 20, 2011, 11:56:35 pm
"IT'S NOT REAL, EVERYTHING IS LIE!!! THEY'RE COMING TO TAKE ME AWAY!!!!!!!" I continue to ramble.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 20, 2011, 11:58:33 pm
"Do you remember anything before today at all?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 12:02:20 am
"I can remember losing my feelings. It hurt too much to keep them."

She thinks again. "I wonder what hurt feels like?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 12:04:56 am
"Hurt is similar to how your leg should be feeling.  How did you loose your feelings?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 12:05:19 am
Charity is backing farther away from Psycho. "DOCTOR BUBBLES! ANYPONY! Captain Carrot is going berserk."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 12:08:23 am
"Waitwaitwait. There are other feelings than this? Whowherewhen? I want to feel!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 12:08:55 am
"BUT, I WON'T LET YOU TAKE ME AWAY TO THE FUNNY FARM WHERE LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL ALL THE TIME AND BE
 HAPPY TO SEE THOSE NICE YOUNG MEN IN THEIR CLEAN WHITE COATS, HAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!" I say, jumping out of the hospital bed and grabbing a scalpel.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 12:11:38 am
((scene music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2_-SUOI680U))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 12:15:32 am
'Need help. I hope I remember how to do this.'

"Amplify" she whispers as her horn glows and pluses out waves of off white light. And then her voice, magnified many times radiates throughout the fortress. "THIS IS COUNTESS CHARITY! EMERGENCY IN THE HOSPITAL! ALL GUARDS AND DOCTORS PLEASE REPORT!"


Meanwhile, her guard, still confused but seeing Psycho grabbing a scalpel stands between the Countess and his Captain, only to drop to the ground, spilling his bolts, and grabbing his ears as the sound of Charity's magically amplified voice strikes him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 12:15:52 am
I think this fits more.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h94dIE_4b6w
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 12:18:00 am
I think this fits more.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h94dIE_4b6w
((perfect! actually, this is TOO dark.))
Psycho, unphased by the megaphone effect, lunges at Charity, determined to stop her from "taking him away".
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 12:25:37 am
"Um, yes, there are other feelings.  Happiness, sadness and an endless spectrum between.  For instance, you're likely feeling a bit desperate for more information.  Um..."

I pause, trying to figure out a way to show Friesden happiness, before Charity's alarm sounds.

"And this is me in a panic!  I'll be back, please don't hurt yourself more!"

I dash off to the hospital, grabbing my spear as I leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 12:26:44 am
Psycho tries to stab charity in the bandaged rib.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 12:28:51 am
((Oh, good))


Friesden continues to wait.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 12:30:23 am
Psycho's first stab is barely avoided, as the unicorn stumbles.

'Damn it, used to much magic, I can barely stand now. Need more practice.'

Her horn glows faintly, Psycho feels a telekinetic tug on the blade, but it isn't particularly strong. The guard, temporarily deafened by the sound, begins to stand up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 12:34:38 am
((I learned from the best))
"Please stand still, IT'S HARD TO KILL YOU WHEN YOU'RE MOVING! AHAAHHAHAHAHHAH!!! YOU THOUGHT IT WAS A JOKE AND SO YOU LAUGHED, YOU LAUGHED WHEN I HAD SAID THAT LOOSING YOU WOULD MAKE ME FLIP MY LID.. RIGHT??? I KNOW YOU LAUGHED, I HEARD YOU LAUGH, YOU LAUGHED YOU LAUGHED AND LAUGHED AND THEN YOU LEFT, BUT NOW YOU KNOW I'M UTTERLY MAD... AND..." Psycho's voice trails off as he passes out. Charity notices something that looks like a syringe sticking out of Psycho's back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 12:41:14 am
(Interesting, but you seem to have forgotten our miss Charity is hardly defenseless in a pinch. Page one she crushed a honey badger pegasi's skull with her bare hoof, if you don't remember.)

Charity notes the syringe, but instead decides to...

'Gods I'm sorry for what I'm about to do, Carrot.'

Charity lowers her horn toward Psycho, and runs straight at him. Should he dodge, or get knocked out of the way, she will continue past him to the door and then turn back to face him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 12:43:28 am
((Now it's a matter of who get's to me first, Khenal or Charity. My bits are on Charity. Oh, and just to let you know, the syringe is important.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 12:46:50 am
The guard is still disoriented by Charity's alarm, but there is a reason they train.  Going on pure instinct, he shoulder checks Charity away from Carrot and takes a defensive position.  Always protect those who can't protect themselves.

"Countess, uh, please stand down?"  He asks, clearly unsure of what to do in this situation


*************

Option 3, the guard!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 12:49:07 am
The unexpected shoulder check, takes Charity off her tired legs and she hits the wall, hard. She is momentarily stunned.

Edit: (So much for Charity's bad-ass moment.  ::))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 01:00:28 am
'Gotta hurry, can't let the assassins have a 2nd try at her!' 

Thankfully, everypony heard the alarm and the stairways and corridors are almost totally empty.  As I near the hospital, I see the two guards at the entrance are still holding steady, unsure if they should rush to Charity or stay where they are.  As I rush past them without a word, they decide that staying put is likely the correct choice.



***************

Sorry about stealing your thunder, Strongbeard.  :-\
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 01:03:40 am
Sorry about stealing your thunder, Strongbeard.  :-\

(No problem, Khenal. I had had some plans for after her initial charge, but this is fine too.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 01:13:08 am
When Khenal arrives at the hospital, he finds Charity disoriented and Carrot on the ground with a syringe labeled "Hallucinogen" in his back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 01:18:13 am
I burst through the door, spear at the ready to deal with any assassins.  I quickly scan the room for trouble.

'Charity, dazed but looks fine.  Carrot out with something in his neck.  Guard looking confused.'


"Where is the assassin?!  Which way did they go?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 01:19:38 am
"da herminshargin went daaaa weee...Zzzz" Psycho mutters groggily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 01:19:57 am
Charity shakes her head and comes back to her senses. "Khenal! Stop Carrot! He's got a knife!"

Edit: Modifying post to correspond with something I missed.

Charity shakes her head and comes back to her senses. "Khenal! Carrot had a knife, he tried to attack me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 01:20:56 am
Psycho's voice trails off as he passes out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 01:27:50 am
"Uh, what?"

I take a closer look at Carrot and notice the scalpel.  I also take note of the syringe and it's label.

'...Why do we have a syringe of hallucinogen?  And why is it so clearly labeled?'

Still a bit confused, I levitate the scalpel and syringe away from him.


"So...what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 01:28:41 am
"Because it's a trap?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 01:29:59 am
"They're comin tak meh awah....." I blubber.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 01:32:47 am
Charity stands up, her legs shaking. "I don't know. I was just coming out of Bubbles office, when I heard Psycho "singing" or more like babbling. I don't really know. I told him he should be quite in the Hospital and he got worse and picked up the scalpel and tried to cut me with it. That's when I noticed the syringe, I was going to try and take him down, after I sounded the alarm but my guard," She looks at him, "knocked me over and I hit my head. I think that's when Carrot passed out."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 01:36:11 am
((how do you forget quotation marks...))
"You...YOU! YOOOO DID THEESH TO MEH... YOU WAN' TO TAK' M' AWAH! Yarrgin...blah...Zzzz..." Psycho blabbers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 01:40:21 am
"Well?"  I turn to my guard, expecting an explanation.

He gulps before talking, clearly choosing his words carefully.


"It's like the Countess said, sir, except Carrot passed out before she could get to him.  I was a bit dazed from the alarm, but I saw somepony charging someponyelse on the ground and I had to stop them.  Uh, sorry about checking you, Countess?"

I levitate the syringe closer so I can get a good look at it.

"Who else was in the room?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 01:43:41 am
"Schmoe...SCHOME.........SHROOOM..." Psycho is suffering from an overdose of Hallucinogen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 01:47:33 am
Charity keeps several steps between herself and Psycho Carrot.

Charity looks over to the guard. "It's okay, I should have told you to cover your ears before I used that spell."

"To answer your question Khenal, I didn't notice anypony else. However, Psycho was already babbling when we came in."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 01:49:11 am
All of a sudden, Psycho begins foaming at the mouth. He gets up, grabs a sharp carving knife, and slashes at Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 01:53:30 am
((Feel free to take over Psycho for the rest of the scene, I'm going to bed early tonight. Sleep well everypony!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 02:05:23 am
"Oh shi.."  is all I manage to say before blocking the slash with the haft of my spear.

'Not good, I'm too drained from the daemon to safely cast the sleep spell.'

I continue blocking and parrying Carrot's wild attacks, motioning for the guard to get Charity to safety.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 02:09:43 am
Meanwhile, at the Hall of Justice I mean Charity's family's room. Cryptson has readied his pick and is waiting by the door. He would like to run to the Hospital where he fears his wife may be in danger but is fearful to leave his children alone, in case the assassin were to strike here as well.

However, as there is only one way in or out of this room, he has turned all of his attention to the door. The young unicorn colt, Cobalt, sees this as his chance. While nopony is looking he makes his way over to his mother's bookshelf, and levitates a singular old red leather bound book, with a black leather strap binding it shut, with a silver clasp. He has long wanted to read this one, but his mother wouldn't allow it. With eveypony distracted he floats it over to his bed and hides it under his mattress. No pony is the wiser.


The guard hurries Charity from the room, as they pass the two guards outside, Charity barks at them. "What are you doing standing around. Go help Khenal!"

The guard takes Charity home.


(And with that I bow out for tonight. Good luck everypony.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 02:12:32 am
Starkey remains in the office with Friesden: past precedent dictates that it usually isn't a good idea to leave her by herself for any extended period of time.

"So, miss Friesden... you said you, ah, wanted to know about feelings?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 02:13:56 am
"Yes. What are they? I know what pain is, and it is a glorious feeling."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 02:19:32 am
"No, no, pain is not a good thing to feel. Pain is how your body tells you it is damaged, and it's what warns you when you're going to damage it further."

He turns to the side a bit, showing off his bandaged wing.

"Like for example, my wing here. It got cut very badly in a battle. If I had tried to fly with a wound like that, I would have torn it even wider, and I might not have ever been able to fly again. Pain tells me not to do that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 02:30:42 am
Friesden looks confused.


"Are you sure? I feel great!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 02:35:54 am
I continue trying to evade Carrot's attacks, glad for my barding as it saves me from multiple slices.  I strike back a few times with the blunt end of my spear, but they don't seem to faze Carrot.

"Come on, Carrot.  Snap out of it!"

He continues foaming and babbling around the knife handle in his teeth, never pausing in swinging his blade.  Fortunately for me, he's a bit too crazy to notice the two guards bust in the room with their weapons drawn.

"Non-lethal!"  I order.  The guards sheathe their weapons before tackling Carrot in a practiced maneuver.  At the same time, I release my telekinetic grip on my spear and grasp the knife, making sure nopony gets stabbed in the ponypile.  After a brief scuffle, Carrot is finally disarmed and restrained.  He continues struggling and foaming at the mouth for a while, never ceasing in his babbling.  Eventually, though, he works himself to exhaustion and unconsciousness.  I leave the two guards to make sure Carrot doesn't try to hurt anypony while I go find a doctor.  Hopefully, they know how to handle somepony who just got what looks to be a massive dose of hallucinogen.


***********

I'll be up for a bit longer if anypony needs to interact with Khenal tonight.  He'll be here in the hospital if you guys need him :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 21, 2011, 02:38:12 am
From the diary of ThunderSplinter,

Date unknown*:
Things are still a bit hazy, my leg still hurts and I have to change the dressing every few hours - pus and blood seeping from the wound, despite Bubbles' best efforts (!  It's a pity I can't carve a sense of sarcasm with this chisel) - I even had to remove the stitches a few days ago, the wound being so infected and inflamed that the stitches were tearing the healthy tissue around the wound's edges and preventing healing.  It's gonna be a nasty scar if it ever heals.  Haven't been able to do much work, I hope the other carpenter is able to keep up with things.

Heard the call for help from Charity, but, cannot leave bed, Resting Injury, and further to that, On Break.  Somepony brought food and drink to replenish my small stockpile, I asked her to stop and chat, but she was in a panic over something, "Daemons invading the fortress", was all she wailed before trotting off.
All I can do is shake my head sadly.  So, it appears to be starting here now, just like back home in Tailentranced.  Beatings and death are called Justice; high and mighty nobles who sign papers and little more think they also decide the fate of everypony's life, en masse or individual.  Just like back home.  Jail cells filled to overflowing with criminals on spurious charges, while nobles get fat on lavish meals.  Just like back home.  It is all happening again, and soon, there will be a seige, and the gates will be raised and locked leaving defenceless ponies outside to die and rot.  Just like back home.  And daemons.  They have now come.

........I never used to think of Tailentranced as home, it was always a place to be escaped, but lately, I miss the decadent, immoral, tantrum-laden pile of rock.

I wonder if I can arrange to be exiled from Glitterglen?  Leave with six others and found a new outpost?  Or would that be worse?  Time for my favourite barrel of pain-killer before I lapse into unconsciousness.  Again.

ThunderSplinter.

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{OOC: * - It's been so many pages since the last game report I couldn't find a date}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 02:44:42 am
"I'm sure, it's... let's talk about some other feelings, shall we?"

He approaches her and lays a forehoof on her withers, gently stroking along her back.

"There, how does that feel?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 02:47:41 am
Friesden shivers in delight.

"Oooh! What was that one called?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 02:48:53 am
"That one is called pleasure. Do you like it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 02:51:12 am
"Oh, yes! Do it again!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 02:55:08 am
Starkey pulls her into a gentle hug, still stroking her back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:00:27 am
"That....that's good..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 03:09:21 am
"Aye. Oh, but there are other feelings as well."

He steps back from her, pulling a single silver bit from the pouch on his waist. He presses it against her foreleg.

"Do you feel that? that's called cold."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:09:58 am
"Why is it called cold?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 03:16:00 am
"I... I don't know. I only know what they are called. Maybe somepony who knows about words and language can tell you why."

He takes the same silver bit and breathes on it a few times, warming it up. He presses it to her leg again.

"now it is warm. If it were more warm, it would be called hot. Do you see?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:16:39 am
"Is...is warm the absence of cold?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 03:20:18 am
"Well, actually it's the opposite. Cold is the absence of warmth. When you add warmth, it becomes warmer. whan you take it away, it becomes colder."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:21:33 am
"Oh. Hey, hey, are there any other feelings?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 03:29:08 am
"Yes, there are many other feelings. But must of them are abstract. They're hard to describe as clearly as things like warm and cold. I'll... try, though. That Feeling you have, when you ask me questions? the one that makes you want to know more about things like feelings? That's called curiosity."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:30:32 am
"Oh. Okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 03:40:26 am
((Dammit, now I'm running out of ideas.))

"If you don't mind, I'd like to ask you a question of my own. You and I, we have met before. Many times. Do you know who I am?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:46:54 am
"No. Who are you?"

Friesden thinks a second. "Who am I? Am I this Friesden people keep talking about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 03:50:55 am
Starkey's heart sinks. He thought everything was alright! He thought he had his friend back! Fighting back tears, he continues.

"Y-yes, your name is Friesden. My name... i-is Starkey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:55:19 am
"That sounds like a...what did you say? A pleasure name."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 03:58:21 am
"Good. When something gives you pleasure, it is good."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:59:29 am
"Oh. It sounds like a good name, then."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 04:03:49 am
"How much do you remember, friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 04:06:12 am
"I don't know. Only small things. Sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 04:07:05 am
"Can you tell me? It would make me feel good to know you remember things."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 04:12:27 am
"I...I can try. Um....It was some time ago. I don't know how long ago. I was there, and you and someone else were there too. It was dark. I had some...ungood? Ungood feeling. I don't know what it was, but it was too much to hold. Then you and the other left. And I woke up in a dark room. There was a rope, but made of metal, and a large, wooden cup. I fell asleep again, and woke up here. And all the ungood feeling was gone. But so was everything else. I couldn't feel. I was going insane... And the rest you know."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 21, 2011, 04:16:15 am
((Damn it people! A note for further RPs, please don't include me until I come on, kay?))
*Suddenly Doctor Bubbles bursts out of his office, shouting "THATS ENOUGH!". A light swathes the room, and when it subsides Bubbles is gone, Thundersplinter is back on his/her feet and Carrot has disappeared.*
((He he he he he, time to get my revenge.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 04:16:59 am
"That feeling you remember, it wasn't a feeling at all. It was a living thing, something called a daemon. It was living inside you, making you do things against your will. I... I am happy to know it is gone."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 04:18:37 am
"You were there. Did you make it go away?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 04:22:28 am
"No. I was there, but I did not do it. Do you remember the big green pony who was just here? His name is Khenal. He is the one who banished the daemon from you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 21, 2011, 04:31:25 am
{OOC:
.......Thundersplinter is back on his/her feet.....
((He he he he he, time to get my revenge.))

She has an infection resulting from the beating and, as yet, there has been no further information on whether it has been dealt with or not.

Also, she is in her tower, not the hospital, so Bubbles would not know anything about her surrent status.
/OOC}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 04:34:47 am
"He...he tried to stop me from feeling. I don't trust him. He seems ungood."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 04:35:53 am
"You were hurting yourself. He only wanted to help you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 04:40:24 am
"Is...is pain ungood?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 04:42:59 am
"Yes. Bad. Pain is bad."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 04:44:43 am
"Why? Why is pain bad?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 04:47:35 am
"I told you before. Pain means your body is damaged. It's telling you that something is wrong. Let me see your leg."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:04:08 am
"Oh. Okay."

Friesden presents her leg to Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 05:06:36 am
Starkey examines the wounds on Friesden's leg.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:12:50 am
She appears to have scraped much of the skin off, though it seems to have stopped bleeding for the moment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 05:15:10 am
"Oh... that doesn't look too good. come along Friesden, I need to take you to the infirmary."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:16:55 am
"Oh, okay. Just need you to open this, though," she says, pointing to the cell door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 05:20:43 am
((Dammit, I totally forgot about that.))

"Heh-heh. Do you promise to behave for me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:21:15 am
"Behave? What's that mean?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:23:20 am
((Hey, do you have any ideas for names I could use for Equestrian Naval Vessels? I'm modding HoI2.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 05:28:39 am
((Hey, do you have any ideas for names I could use for Equestrian Naval Vessels? I'm modding HoI2.))

How about naming one of them "Kelpies"? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kelpie

To quote The Wiki
"The kelpie is a supernatural water horse from Celtic folklore that is believed to haunt the rivers and lochs of Scotland and Ireland; the name may be from Scottish Gaelic cailpeach or colpach "heifer, colt"."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 05:29:56 am
((Name them after cities, ie. Canterlot, Manehattan, etc. That's what most navies today do, at any rate.))

"...Don't worry about it. I'll be right back."

Starkey heads around the corner into Khenal's office, then returns with a set of keys. He opens the door to Friesden's cell and gestures for her to follow.

"Just stay close to me, and don't wander."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:30:41 am
I was thinking more of like the HMES Canterlot, or something.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:31:06 am
"Okay."

Friesden obediently follows.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 05:35:06 am
Starkey and Friesden arrive at the infirmary. As is typical, there appears to have been some kind of commotion. Thankfully, they seem to have avoided it this time.

"Doctor Bubbles, are you in? I have a patient for you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 21, 2011, 05:42:56 am
*Suddenly Doctor Bubbles bursts out of his office, shouting "THATS ENOUGH!". A light swathes the room, and when it subsides Bubbles is gone
((If you like, I can continue, but just in about one hour. Busy right now. -Om nom nom-))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:45:03 am
Okay. I've got names for the Battleships down. That's all the cities, as well as the royalty. Any other suggestions?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 21, 2011, 05:45:49 am
((Well, it's getting late anyways. If the doctor doesn't show up soon, Starkey goes through his supplies and bandages Friesden's leg himself, then escorts her back to her cell. Goodnight all. :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:48:45 am
Night, Impending.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 03:49:06 pm
((Well, I just want to warn you guys that Psycho is going to be the equivalent of the old Friesden from now on. WE NEED SOMEPONY TO BE THE INSANE ONE! :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:50:12 pm
You have my blessing, and the blessing of the old Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 03:51:27 pm
:D is there some sort of madman's oath I have to take? :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 03:54:54 pm
Yes!


I, [recruit's name], do solemnly swear by [recruit's deity of choice] to uphold the Laws and Ordinances of the madponies of Glitterglen, serve their private trust, and harm the subjects of His/Her [delete whichever is inappropriate] Majesty [name of reigning monarch] without fear, favour, or thought of personal safety; to become an evil-doer and harm the innocent, laying down my life if necessary in the cause of said duty, so help me [aforesaid deity]. Gods Save the King/Queen [delete which is inappropriate].
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 04:05:48 pm
I, Psycho Carrot, do solemnly swear by Discord to uphold the Laws and Ordinances of the madponies of Glitterglen, serve their private trust, and harm the subjects of Her Majesty Celestia without fear, favor, or thought of personal safety; to become an evil-doer and harm the innocent, laying down my life if necessary in the cause of said duty, so help me Discord. Gods Save the Queen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 04:09:48 pm
By the powers invested in me by the madponies of Glitterglen, I do accept thy oath, and hope thee fulfill it with thy life.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 04:53:58 pm
Khenal's going to have a cow when he reads all this!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 05:01:30 pm
Just when Granite thought things might be calming down eh?
I think he might be regretting coming here by now.  Having Negs asleep probably doesn't help with that either.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 05:02:07 pm
I think it's great character drama :D

Khenal, however, will do far more than have a cow, heh.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:05:45 pm
Friesden is waiting patiently in her cell, wondering what to do to pass the time.

She settles on remembering the feelings, both the good and the bad.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 05:19:23 pm
I walk down the halls from Charity's private chambers, having just finished taking apart the trap.  The evidence uncovered, however, simply raises more questions.  Nicolta's name was signed on the back of the main plate of the trap, and several hairs were in the mechanisms that match his coloring.

'But it makes no sense!  He knows how I investigate.  He helped me take apart Friesdens' trap, for Ingest's sake!  If he was trying to assassinate Charity, he'd know how to hide his involvement, and he certainly wouldn't sign his work!  But I don't think anything was planted, either.  He's the best mechanic in the fort, and this trap was definitely well made.  The space for the chains was too small to fit a hoof, only a unicorn could have done that.'

I am still deep in thought as I pass Friesden's cell on the way to my office.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:21:21 pm
Friesden skitters into the back of the cell as Khenal comes past.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 05:24:24 pm
Friesden's sudden movement shakes me out of my thoughts.  As I look at her, I notice her leg is bandaged.  I give her a nervous smile before talking.

"How are you today, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:25:42 pm
Friesden looks startled.

"I...I am...good..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 05:31:19 pm
"Good.  Good..."

I look down at my hooves, a bit unsure how to proceed.

"Do you... Do you remember who I am?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:33:39 pm
"You're... You're the ungood pony," she says in a whisper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 05:34:42 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=muxZXLUYTKc&feature=related))
Psycho wakes up with another syringe jammed in his back labeled HALLUCINOGEN. This time however, it appears to be fused to the flesh and is alot larger than before.
"Hehhehe...HEHHEHEHEE...THEY'RE COMING FOR ME...I WILL STOP THEM!!!!!!!!!!!"
Screams Psycho out of blind rage and madness, running around searching for a weapon to keep 'them' from 'taking him away.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 05:38:47 pm
"Please don't be afraid of me, Friesden." I plead, kneeling down in front of her cell.  "Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:40:20 pm
Friesden turns her head down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 05:45:32 pm
I hang my head and stand to leave.  'Traumatizing her more helps nopony...'  Instead of heading to my office, I head out in the direction of the hospital. 

'Maybe Carrot is awake.  I could use a friendly smile, and he deserves some company while he recovers.'



*********

Khenal just had to make friends with the resident locos, didn't he? :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 05:48:52 pm
Friesden continues huddling in her cell, thinking over her past.

It's not a nice place. Here be dragons, indeed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 05:49:44 pm
I wander throughout the halls constantly muttering myself just to keep from having to hear the silence.
"Not much going on here right now I think I like that quiet is good right?  They always say quiet is good and they're right aren't they but what if It's too quiet what if no one is there?  I don't like to be alone, why can't I hear anypony? when will you wake up Negs?  I know you're still there, how long will you sleep? I need to remember I need to know I'm still here," I mutter seemingly without taking a single breath.  Whenever other ponies see me coming they always move away quickly, not wanting to be near someone who is either mad or possessed by a mood.
"Need to talk, I know I'm still here if I can hear something even if no one responds I am here.  Why is it so quiet I don't like the quiet the quiet went away long ago and I don't miss it."
I continue to wander around the halls aimlessly, soon enough I end up drifting towards the prison.
***************************************************************************
Yeah, Granite isn't too stable when Negs isn't around.  Given that the two have pretty much become two parts of the same person it's understandable.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 05:53:35 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2sa8lGcKLAw&feature=related))
upon Khenal's arrival at the hospital, he finds Psycho with three enormous needles jutting out of his back, and holding a large carving knife. He hasn't seen Khenal yet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 06:02:06 pm
'...Where did he get a carving knife?'

I shake myself out of my boggle and try to telekinetically take the knife from Carrot before he hurts somepony
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 06:09:48 pm
One mistake that people have made is referring to one single pony as Friesden. Truthfully, there was never one Friesden. When she was born, she was not Friesden alone. She had a partner in her mind, the daemon that came to be known as Schmoe.

Where other children had childhoods, she was forced into the back of her mind while the daemon controlled her body to obey her father's will. It was there that she learned her special talent...creation. She created a place to make believe her life. She cut herself off from her body and fled to her own realm, where no-one else could get to. She made up her mother, her friends, everyone.

Until one day her father decided to bind the 'new' daemon into her mother. With Schmoe forced out temporarily, she was placed back in the pilot's seat. She remembered all that had happened to her. All the...uses, shall we say, she was put to. She had a knife. She charged her father, trying to kill him. Before she could, he forced her mother into the way. She killed her without hesitation. It was not
her mother. Her father hid in a room, barricading the door, and called for the guard.

The guard came in, knocked out Friesden, and rescued the father. In their investigation, they discovered all the sordid details. Friesden was put into a combined daemon and mental facility, and her father was exiled, had his horn amputated, and was castrated. Afterwards, the records were burnt, and any surviving details were kept top secret.

Friesden had imprisoned the daemon herselves at this point. The concept of empathy, of compassion, of mercy, of love; these were as foreign to her as heat is to ice. She grew worse. Eventually, having decided she would leave this place and kill all who stood in her way, she released the daemon, who unbound a number of other daemonhosts. The combined destruction and chaos led to the deaths of everypony there, save for one prodigy alicorn.

The remaining years she spent on the street, killing everypony who did not bow to her will. She became fascinated with how ponies worked, and constructed another self to simply learn and apply that. Another she kept to 'mother' her, in a cruel parody of love mixed with lust. She cut herself off from her innocence. It was then that she learned of Glitterglen. A fresh place, where the heat would be less. She travelled there. The rest is, as they say, history.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 06:10:03 pm
The knife refuses to budge. The tug alerts blows Khenal's cover however, and Psycho lunges at him, swinging wildly.
"YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME AWAY TO THE FUNNY FARM WHERE EVERYTHING IS HAPPY AND I'LL BE HAPPY TO SEE THE PONIES IN THEIR..." etc...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 06:24:05 pm
"Uh oh."

I shift my telekinesis to the nearest metal object so I can have something to parry Carrot's slashes.

"A bedpan?  Really?  Woah!"  I barely manage to duck a slash aimed at my eyes.

'At least it was empty, and makes a decent shield.'  I start backing out of the hospital under Carrot's barrage.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 06:25:57 pm
I pause for a moment, before muttering angrily, "Enough melancholy, you can find ponies to talk to... Real people.... That aren't in your head...  And AREN'T ASLEEP AND IGNORING YOU!"
I suddenly notice where I am, "The prison!  I can finally see if this Friesden is sane enough to not try and kill me when I see her!  And if she does try to kill me I can sit on her and talk to her that way!"
Melancholy fully dispersed I head over to Friesden's door, humming to myself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 06:27:31 pm
(You think having Psycho as a friend is going to be rough Khenal. Charity actually trusts the madpony enough to not only make him a captain, but to move him into the room across the hall from her family.)

The night after Psycho's attack. Charity returns home, explains the events to Cryptson, and everypony retires to sleep. Well every pony except for one.

'Yes' thinks the tiny blue unicorn, with the Cobalt eyes, 'finally everypony is asleep.'

The tiny foal pulls out the old book he had stashed away, his mother had not noticed the missing book yet, but he knew eventually she would, and she would assume he had taken it. He needed a place to hide it, but it couldn't be in their room. He stuck the book in a bag and quitely left the room.

'Where can I put it that no pony will ever find it?' he wondered to himself. And that's when he had an idea.

Cobalt, walked to the surface, he looked up, it was a full moon. He'd never seen such a sight before, having never been allowed out on the surface at night. After enjoying the scene for a while he went to the first floor of the wooden tower. 'I must do this quietly' he thinks, 'Miss Thundersplinter's is asleep up stairs and I don't need her to find me.'

With his magic he carefully pulls a wooden plank from the wall, and finds an empty space.

'Okay book, I'll be back when this assassin business is over and then I'll have the time to read you.' He hides the book in the opening, replaces the wooden plank, and returns home.


Charity's Journal (The day after Psycho attacks her, but written before Carrots new episode.)

I can't believe that Carrot would attack me like that. However, Khenal's report says he was under the effects of some sort of hallucinogenic, so I'll have to forgive him. This assassin is getting more dangerous however, first he lays traps that could've hurt anypony, then he makes my own guards go berserk. Khenal needs to catch this pony soon. I hope he found some clues when he disabled the trap in my office.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 06:36:09 pm
Friesden is still huddled on the floor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 06:41:17 pm
Still humming to myself happily I knock on Friesden's door.
"Hello, is anypony home?  Talking to myself has become boring and I seek companionship!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 06:42:06 pm
Friesden remains on the ground, with her wings over her head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 06:43:03 pm
Psycho throws the knife at Khenal, embedding itself in his leg.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 06:46:09 pm
"Ah, the silence of others, but as long as I have someone to talk to that can be almost good enough by itself!  You see one of the major downsides of having Negs with me is that I'm never alone, and after so long like that being alone doesn't feel right.  Sure he's still there, just not taking, not saying a DAMN THING!"  I slow down and catch my breath.
"He's still there but it isn't the same without at least having the potential for a reply.  Don't you think so?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 06:46:50 pm
Tears start falling from Friesden's eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 06:48:29 pm
"Sadness.  I always asked people if I could take their sadness...  But Negs isn't here right now.  Even if I open the gate nothing will happen.  I don't like sadness, I don't think anyone does but it's important isn't it?  It lets you know something is wrong, and that you have to do something.  Something to fix things or find something to make you happier than you are sad..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 06:49:23 pm
"I...I'm a monster."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 06:51:46 pm
"So?  I've met plenty of monsters.  Some of them bad, some of them good.  I'm a monster according to what people tell me.  After all only a monster could live this long.   Only a monster could survive what I've survived.  Only a monster could take your very emotions from you to feed itself."
I smile slightly.
"Monsters are just things other ponies don't like.  Sometimes it's deserved and sometimes it's just somepony being stupid."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 06:53:19 pm
I cry out at the knife in my leg, loosing grip of the bedpan.  I try to focus through the pain and levitate Carrot now that he's unnarmed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 06:55:22 pm
"I've killed ponies. Mares, stallions, fillies, colts, foals...I'm a monster. I'm evil."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 07:02:56 pm
"So?  Killing doesn't make you evil, killing makes you a killer.  The intent makes you evil.  In the last outpost I was at I had to kill two ponies that had snapped, Diomedians had killed their child and they just snapped.  This pick right here?  I drove it into the mother's skull, splattered her brains across the kitchen counter.  The father tried to headbutt me, but he didn't know anything about fighting.  I took out his front knees fist, and then I smashed his skull too.  Killing them didn't make me evil.  If I were to look back and see that with joy, relishing in the slaughter, then I might be evil.  Instead there's just pity, pity and regret."
I look over at Friesden.
"You feel regret don't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 07:04:42 pm
"PUT ME DOWN SO I CAN STAB YOU TO DEATH!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 07:07:53 pm
"...No?"

I start limping out of the hospital, levitating Carrot with the knife still in my leg.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 07:11:55 pm
"I don't even know what regret means."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 07:12:35 pm
"NO!!! I DON'T WANT TO BE TAKEN TO THE FUNNY FARM WHERE LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL ALL THE TIME AND I'LL BE HAPPY TO SEE THOSE NICE YOUNG PONIES IN THEIR CLEAN WHITE COATS!!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 07:13:41 pm
"Do you like being a monster?  Do you like being evil?  Are you glad that you killed them?  Enjoy the rush as their lights faded from view?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 07:15:09 pm
"Yes, yes, I did."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 07:16:14 pm
I give Carrot a confused look as I continue towards the jails.

"I'm not taking you to the farms.  Even if I were, I never thought they were very funny.  I'm taking you to a cell so you can calm down."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 07:16:52 pm
"Really now?  Then maybe you are a monster.  Maybe you are evil.  Maybe they're all right about you.  Do you know what that means?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 07:18:27 pm
"I don't know what that means or who you are. Even the ungood pony didn't eat me as much as you do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 07:22:23 pm
"Eat you?"
I smile.
"Not many can tell it was me unless I let them know myself.  Or maybe you're talking about something else.  Unfortunately Negs is asleep at the moment, I can't eat anyone right now or would offer my services to you again.  When he comes back is there anything you don't like?  Any feelings that make you angry or sad?  They can go away, not forever mind you but for a moment... A single blissful moment."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 07:24:42 pm
Friesden gets up. Determination is in her eyes.

"I was wrong. It wasn't the good pony that I remembered, it was you. You did it, didn't you? Took away all that I had!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thechosenone456 on November 21, 2011, 07:26:46 pm
It's a television show.
((I sent him this link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a27oq09lhPw hopefully our good friend blunty3000 can explain to this poor 14 year old who's living under a rock in Antarctica without a television what My Little Pony is.))

Aaaaaa...no actually I haven' t been living under a rock. There's a difference between a rock and a boulder thank you very much.

Git your facts straight, skipper.
>:(

EDIT: Actually now I'm suddenly addicted to "my little pony." Is that normal? O.O
I loooove fluttershy...she's soooo cuuuute!

I'm officially insane now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 07:28:44 pm
I laugh at this.
"I took your rage.  The rage of the moment.  Nothing I take is gone forever.  Look at you now!  You're flushed with that very same rage!"
My voice steadies as I continue.
"If that rage is all you had then my debt is now repaid.  Your rage is back and in full force.  If you ever had anything more than rage?  That wasn't me.  So tell me, what else am I supposed to have taken from you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 07:31:01 pm
"You took him. I don't remember anything about him, but he protected me. He shielded me. When you took him I had nothing. I couldn't feel, I couldn't think. But now I remember it all. All that I've done. You heartless bastard. Even knowing naught what they mean, I know those words were made for you. Damn you. I hope Discord takes you to the pit."

Friesden spits.

"Go away."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 07:32:23 pm
"Took him?  Who is this him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 07:32:43 pm
It's a television show.
((I sent him this link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a27oq09lhPw hopefully our good friend blunty3000 can explain to this poor 14 year old who's living under a rock in Antarctica without a television what My Little Pony is.))

Aaaaaa...no actually I haven' t been living under a rock. There's a difference between a rock and a boulder thank you very much.

Git your facts straight, skipper.
>:(

EDIT: Actually now I'm suddenly addicted to "my little pony." Is that normal? O.O
I loooove fluttershy...she's soooo cuuuute!

I'm officially insane now.

 Couldn't resist  (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xggKo42eQVc)

And yes, pony addiction is common and awesome
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 07:33:02 pm
Friesden spits again.

"Go AWAY!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 07:33:40 pm
It's a television show.
((I sent him this link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a27oq09lhPw hopefully our good friend blunty3000 can explain to this poor 14 year old who's living under a rock in Antarctica without a television what My Little Pony is.))

Aaaaaa...no actually I haven' t been living under a rock. There's a difference between a rock and a boulder thank you very much.

Git your facts straight, skipper.
>:(

EDIT: Actually now I'm suddenly addicted to "my little pony." Is that normal? O.O
I loooove fluttershy...she's soooo cuuuute!

I'm officially insane now.
(http://api.ning.com/files/Mx0Dt*7TpUpV3NBAsgeror62R4dw72oI9HeXXcPReB-sOnqD8Lyfs5D2UlrdvZY1LPet-Ucea6s4ItqAHWXj0w__/theherd.gif)
and yes, yes it is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 07:34:19 pm
Fluttershy is the best pony, yes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 07:43:38 pm
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Also, that was from page ninty something when I joined this insanity...  These pages just seem to flash by don't they?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 07:49:07 pm
Seriously.  That's why I changed my settings to show 50 posts per page.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 07:50:07 pm
That must take some finnageling to sort out a single post for quotage.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 07:53:09 pm
Not really.  If I desperately need to quote something, there's always new tabs and copy/paste :P

Should prolly get back on the rails soon, though.  Khenal aught to be showing up in the jail any time now...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 07:58:12 pm
I laugh uproariously at this.
"It's been so long since someone was this... defiant towards me.  Usually they just shy away from me because I'm that madman no one want to associate with or I'm that freak that drains people dry.  Or they think I'm the sole source of the outpost's ills.  This is a really nice change of pace!"
************************************
I'm starting to think Granite has very low standards for liking people.  Talk to him and don't back off in fear and he seems to be pretty happy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 08:00:09 pm
"GO AWAY!" shouts Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:04:27 pm
As Khenal arrives at the jails, he sees another dilemma already in progress.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:05:31 pm
"Ya know, not too long ago I thought that figuring you out would be the cornerstone to understanding this place."
I lay down, leaning against the wall to the right of the door.
"But you're just a paw, discarded and broken.  I almost feel sorry for you, the way you are now.  But fixing you isn't my problem, it's his.  Perhaps now that you've met the Pony of Wrath and Despair you won't be so mad at him.  Maybe when you're fixed we can have another conversation.  A happier one..."
Granite's vocie falters for a second.
"Anyway!  Not good to dwell on things that may never happen.  But all this talk about you is getting somewhat boring!  Therefore I think we should talk about me.  I was born in a small village on the Pony Diomedean border..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 08:06:23 pm
"Go away. This is your final warning."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:08:13 pm
((I'd listen to her if I were you, Granite.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:08:36 pm
I pause at the tone of her voice.  I hadn't head a tone like that in some time.
"I suppose I can leave you be for now my girl.  Just remember, let's meet up again when you're fixed."
Sighing I get up and start to trot away from the cells, already starting to mutter to myself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 08:10:07 pm
I finally make it into the cell block, levitating the still-crazy(er than normal) Carrot in front of me.  I don't notice Granite until Friesden yells at him, but I'm a bit busy to investigate.  Carefully, I get Carrot into an empty cell and lock it before releasing my hold on him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:11:16 pm
I instantly rush to the bars and gnaw on them, eyes as big a saucers, and foaming at the mouth again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:12:34 pm
"And another not so friendly face to talk to!" I cry i delight.  "Apparently jail is a real good place to get someone to talk to while the voice in your head is on vacation!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 08:17:11 pm
I eye Granite warily.

"Are you alright, or do I need to get you a cell also?  And what did you do to upset Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:20:23 pm
"As long as I keep talking I'm alright.  It's when I'm quiet that you need to really worry," I assure Khenal. 
"Negs is asleep now though... It's quiet without him..." my voice trails off for a second before I smile again.
"As for Friesden we had a discussion about monsters, I'm apparently worse than the notgood pony, ate her, and took him away.  Whoever him is...  You wouldn't happen to know this mysterious him would you?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:21:57 pm
I reach my hoofs through the spaces in the bars and attempt to choke Granite.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:23:40 pm
I quickly wrest myself free from Carrot's grasp and move judiciously away from the cell.
"And could you tell me why he's going nuts... Again?" I ask eying Carrot warily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 08:27:11 pm
"If I had to guess, I'd say it was those syringes in his back.  They look...wrong and I'm not sure I should remove them.  As far as the identity of the 'notgood pony'..."

I sigh and look Granite in the eyes.

"I'm pretty sure it's me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:29:35 pm
"I was wondering more about who it was that was taken away from Friesden.  Apparently it's now my fault and I want to at least be able to taunt her properly about it if the need arises.  Not that my ignorance seemed to make her any warmer to me.  Would I be able to just make things up on the spot then?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:30:00 pm
"DIE! DIE KHENAL! don't you want to die like I did?" Psycho abruptly asks in a disturbingly civil tone.
"Oh, and that was Schmoe." Psycho says calmly to Granite before reverting back to foaming-at-mouth insanity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 08:32:41 pm
((Granite is treading a dangerous path, methinks.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:34:29 pm
Psycho pulls off his adamantine earing and uses it to easily cut through the bars like butter. He then manages to stab Khenal in the left ear.
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DuIQJ-l16b4))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 08:36:16 pm
I give Granite a look of steel and ice, totally ignoring Carrot for a moment.

"Do.  Not.  Provoke.  Her.  If she is to have any hope of anything, she needs to be shown compassion and caring and everything else good that she has never known before."

Keeping my eyes on Granite, I raise my voice to address Carrot's question.  "No thank you, Carrot.  I'd like to delay my meeting with the reaper as long as possible, thank you."

Unfortunately for me, I fail to notice Carrot escape the cell.  At least until he stabs me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 08:37:15 pm
((If your earring can cut through the bars like butter, it should also have cut through your ear as well as being dangerous to hold.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:38:24 pm
((The simple fact that it's an earing at all defies logic. Stop patronizing me :P))
Psycho slashes Khenal in the back from behind with the earing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:40:35 pm
Not waiting for anyone to tell me not to hurt anyone I bring my pick around and swing it at Pycho's legs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 08:42:46 pm
I blindly buck behind me in pure reaction from the stab to the ear and slash across my back.


***************
It's an artifact earring, it must menace with spikes of something.  Or spikes of several somethings :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:43:05 pm
The pickaxe misses but does manage to embed itself in the ground. Psycho then tries to jam the earing(which is actuality coated in the same fluid that made Psycho go psychotic) into Khenal's head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:44:27 pm
I rip the pick from the wall and kick several of the broken off pieces of wall at Psycho, following closely with a swing at his midsection.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:45:16 pm
((ground you mean.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:46:46 pm
Oops, automatically expected wall because of swing at legs.
I rip the pick from the floor and kick several of the broken off pieces of floor at Psycho, following closely with a swing at his midsection.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 08:48:21 pm
I roll to the side and pivot to see my attacker, only now seeing Carrot has escaped and is using his earring as a weapon to great effect.

"Sorry about this, Carrot!"

I continue dodging slashes from Carrot as I build power in my horn, then release it in a grab at one of the syringes in his back, trying to rip it free.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:50:20 pm
((Mind your stomach.))
Not only does the syringe come lose,
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 08:52:00 pm
((loose. And that shouldn't happen anyway. Sure, the skin would and there might be some flesh tearing, but it wouldn't be much.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:52:57 pm
((I guess your right. Thankfully this isn't the real world! :P Once again, I learned from the best.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:53:16 pm
((You just can't wait for your char to die can you?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:53:59 pm
((I have it all planned out. Don't worry.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 08:54:52 pm
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4152380/Tyrannoshy.jpg)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 08:55:49 pm
'Oh sweet Ingest, please tell me I didn't just kill him...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 08:57:00 pm
Psycho responds with a cry of the utmost agony before going silent.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 08:58:55 pm
Numbly, I levitate the earring away from Carrot before getting closer to him.

"Carrot?"


************

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

NNNnnnoooooooo!!  Please spoiler?  For my eyes?  :'(
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 08:59:11 pm
"Somehow I doubt that kid would die even if you did kill him.  Tenacious little bugger.  Think he has a Wrath?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 09:01:38 pm
((I haven't proclaimed him DEAD. just dead as a rock. :P))
Khenal sees a slowly growing pool of blood forming around Psycho AND notes that his breathing is becoming more and more stained and his heart beat is slowing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 21, 2011, 09:04:57 pm
"I, uhhh, know this is a bad time so I won't press you any furhter for information on Friesden's 'him'.  I'd suggest keeping watch over the remains, just in case he decides to come back again."
*************************************
Got work in six hours.  G'night everypony.  If you need Granite he'll be wandering around the halls toaling to himself until Negs wakes back up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 09:09:12 pm
I don't register Granite's words or his exit, as I'm too busy trying not to panic and figure out a way to save Carrot.

'Blood!  Lots of blood!  Um...oh!'  My horn glows as I turn Carrot so his wound is pointed up, trying to keep his blood in him with the simple help of gravity.  In a flash of desperation, I call to Friesden.


"Friesden!  Do you remember how to heal ponies?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 09:10:56 pm
"I'm a monster. How could you trust me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 09:15:23 pm
"Because you can ask that question!  You may have been a monster in the past, but you don't have to keep being one!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 09:16:36 pm
"I...I can try. One condition."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 09:19:30 pm
"What?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 09:20:35 pm
"I want you to remove my memory. I want to forget everything. I know you can do it. I don't know your name, but I remember you now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 09:30:08 pm
"I..."

'I can't!  She's finally making progress, finally interacting like a normal pony!  But...Carrot doesn't have much time, I don't think I could get him to the hospital quick enough.  I can't just lie to her either, that'd be even worse than making her forget everything!'

"...I'll try.  Locking away memories isn't easy, and there is never a guarantee they will stay sealed.  But I will try, just please save Carrot!"

I levitate my keys to Friesden's cell and unlock it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 09:35:01 pm
Friesden hurries out. She looks at the pony on the ground, and takes his pulse. All the while, memories of her past are flooding back. While she would ordinarily not welcome them, now she has a chance to remove them completely she'll do whatever it takes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 09:36:37 pm
"Is...there anything I can do to help?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 09:38:19 pm
The pulse at this point is so weak that Friesden doesn't even notice it at first.
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8LbkxP_UCBQ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 09:40:55 pm
"Fetch some medical equipment. Something to sterilise them, too. I don't know much about putting ponies together...more taking them apart." She says the last part under her breath.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 09:49:51 pm
I try to remember what kind of things were in the hospital, and where I might get anything similar.  Clean cloth: fresh bed sheets, just down the hall.  Surgical equipment: the armory should have some daggers.  Maybe the one from my leg?  Sterilizer: strong booze?

"Um, on it!"  I dash off to get the improvised medical tools.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 09:51:34 pm
Friesden inspects the wound as best she can, and a familiar memory comes flooding back. She forces it away for now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 09:53:10 pm
((you REALLY want to use a knife that was already JAMMED INTO SOMEPONY? I prefer sterile... but do go on.))
The wound is very deep and you can
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Psycho's heartbeat has become so weak that Friesden cannot feel it anymore. The blood pool stops growing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 09:59:32 pm
(The next game update is below. I'm not quite done for the night yet, so expect another in a few hours. Feel free to finish your current scene before paying any attention to these.)

Charity's Journal 28th Limestone 98

Seems that we had a jail break today. No it's not who you might expect. It was Ms. Pillomino. She used her knowledge of masonry to find a weak point in the cell and make a break for it. Although she didn't try to flee the town. Just ran to the bar for a drink, before Khenal showed up and took her back. She did not resist. Seemed she really really wanted a drink.


(The Nurse Kil had given every pony water except for Pillomino, and then ran off to get a drink herself and then went on break, and then went to a party. With the Doctor busy treating injuries from the last ambush, and Pillomino very dehydrated, and nopony else bringing water, death was a possibility, so I deconstructed her chain, and when that was done, she ran for the drink stockpile, and got one before Khenal dragged her back to one of the new cells.)

5th Sandstone 98

A horrible creature has been spotted in the deep. The militia and guards are working together to try and lure it into an ambush.


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Ozor%20Ledalath.png)

10th Sandstone 98

The beast has so far proven elusive. In other news, I think the confinement is getting to Pillomino. She tried to throw a party in her cell. It didn't go well.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Party.dib)

Charity's Journal 18th Sandstone 98

The beast of the the below, we thought we had it trapped on the southern portion of the caverns, until it swam around our troops and ambushed a fisherpegasus named Udar Gleamedgrass, it grabbed him and tried to drag him into the water, but he scrambled away, though it relieved him of his shoe, which then used to beat him more, until the militia arrived and he was able to escape. Thought the creature likewise escaped into the lake. The militia is stationed by the water, hoping it will resurface.

Charity's Journal 20th Sandstone 98

The creature was spotted heading north away form the fortress, and so, we are relaxing security to allow the troops a break, as they have been on high alert for the past ten days non-stop.

Charity's Journal 28th Sandstone 98

Cryptson has been parading around in a fine suit of Bismuth Bronze and Steel Armour, and carrying a exceptional Steel Pick. He hasn't left me or the kids alone since the incident. It's sweet, and I'm happy to keep him close, but he can be kind of smothering, although, I'd rather him stay to close, than too far until this assassin is caught.


("Warning - while you were typing 38 new replies have been posted. You may wish to review your post." Wow, this thread moves hella fast.)

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

It's an artifact earring, it must menace with spikes of something.  Or spikes of several somethings :P

Surprisingly, no, I'll re post the description again below incase anypony wants to see it without backtracking some 50 pages, but it is called "The Magicians of Violence." It's almost like the pony who made it knew it was going to be weaponized.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/The%20Magicians%20of%20Violence.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 10:02:47 pm
I return as quickly as I can with a pile of bed sheets, daggers and one large barrel of strong booze for sterilizing.

"Will these work?"


***********

Aw, come on The Master.  It'll be dipped in alcohol to sterilize it, it'll be fine :P  Ya, Khenal decided against the knife Carrot got him with.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 10:04:07 pm
((I haven't proclaimed him DEAD. just dead as a rock. :P))
Khenal sees a slowly growing pool of blood forming around Psycho AND notes that his breathing is becoming more and more stained and his heart beat is slowing.

((Made a GIANT ERROR.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 10:06:12 pm
"They should do. I'm more worried about his blood level. We need some beer, or ale. Something thick. And some food, too. This is not going to work well, but its the best we can do."

Friesden deftly severs one of the pieces of cloth into strips with a dagger, and cuts parts of fabric from others.

"We'll also need some stuff for stitching. Quickly!"

Friesden secures the patches of fabric around the bleeding areas with the strips of cloth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 10:11:19 pm
"Thick booze, food, stitches, right!"

I again run off as fast as I can to gather the supplies.


***************
((I haven't proclaimed him DEAD. just dead as a rock. :P))
Khenal sees a slowly growing pool of blood forming around Psycho AND notes that his breathing is becoming more and more stained and his heart beat is slowing.

((Made a GIANT ERROR.))

Hehe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 10:12:44 pm
Friesden continues to plug the bleeding parts.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 10:14:55 pm
((Think it's going to be that easy? PONYCEPTION! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXLDv-fUINM&feature=related))
Khenal and Friesden hear a loud 'BWOOOOONG!' sound and then the room melts away to reveal a strange wavery realm(Psycho's mind!) full of odd colors and the sound of crying in the distance.
((Think of it this way, now Friesden has another reason to get rid of her memories!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 10:18:45 pm
((SCENE MUSIC! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXLDv-fUINM&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 10:23:00 pm
I pause, looking around, before a look of abject horror settles upon me.

'No!  Cockroach can't have won!'



******************
Man, I really hope Khenal is jumping to the wrong conclusion.  That'd totally bone the little canon we have going on.

Also:  this (http://parallaxmlp.deviantart.com/art/Derpy-Loves-her-Lava-Lamp-270265125) is mesmerizing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 10:24:07 pm
((WHAT CANON? MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHA...etc, etc, you know the drill :P))
Khenal hears faint sobs in the distance that sort of sound like Psycho.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 10:25:42 pm
'Where are we?'

"I could ask the same question."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 10:31:32 pm
Looking around, Friesden sees a barren floating landscape, with a small floating road leading to a larger landmass with an entity the resembles Psycho Carrot siting in the center of it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 10:36:04 pm
'Ok, calm down Khenal.  You can fight back, especially now that you know what's going on.  First thing: minimize magic use.  If I don't use my magic, he can't use my magic.  Second thing: Look for a way out.  There's always a way out, even if it doesn't look like it.'

Calmed and focused, I begin to explore this realm.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 10:41:52 pm
Friesden follows Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 10:44:41 pm
Khenal and Friesden nearly falls into a hole that appeared right before their eyes. they then hear a sickeningly familiar voice, GUESS WHO?!
"This, is where I have been the whole time, Khenal. I never left him in the first place. It's time to face me once and for all! Win, and I give Psycho back. LOSE, AND YOU'LL JOIN HIM IN THIS WONDERFUL PLANE OF EXISTENCE! Now, be a good little horsey and go to where that crying figure is."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 10:52:43 pm
I peer into the hole, ignoring the voice of Cockroach as I examine it.  I quickly decide it's likely not the exit and shrug, turning towards Carrot's figure.  I start when I notice Friesden and give her a quizzical look before walking where we were directed to go.

"Is that really you, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 10:55:40 pm
"It's me. Where are we?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 11:02:26 pm
"Carrot's mindscape, I think.  Be very careful, I think we may have to deal with a very powerful daemon.  One that is very difficult to get rid of..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 11:05:13 pm
"A...daemon." She breathes in. "Okay. Let's do it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 11:10:51 pm
As Khenal and Friesden near what looks like Psycho, the entity in question gets off the ground and runs at an ungodly speed towards them. It's beginning to look less like Psycho and more like a...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 11:16:50 pm
"Behind me!"

I plant my hooves and draw my weapon; not my spear, but the dagger that Carrot gave me.

"Loyalty."  I whisper, before the figure is upon us.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 11:20:55 pm
Friesden quickly gets behind Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 11:24:20 pm
Daemon!
"Well, isn't this just rich? Oh, what's this? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXLDv-fUINM&feature=related
Hear that? AHAHAHHAHAHAHAH!!"
The world melts away again, replaced this time with a scene that sends chills down Khenal's mental spine. It's his old office from the town he was banished by the queen from.
"Do you recognize it? You should, it's from your head after all..." The daemon snorts.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 21, 2011, 11:29:34 pm
(More game reports, feels weird posting them during your scene, but you guys never give me a chance to do otherwise, so here you go.)

Charity's Journal 12 Timber, 98

A scream was heard in the caverns, it seems Ozar Ledalath has returned, and attacked another one of our fisherponies, Psycho Carrot
(I'm assuming he lives through the current situation.) was the first on the scene, and fired a bolt at the beast, which missed, and the creature dived back into the water. It then resurfaced nearby and he fired again, this time Psycho hit the monster in one of his left legs. The creature than dived again, and is hiding under the ground, in an old flooded tunnel. We're going to try and trap it in there.

Charity's Journal 13th Timber, 98

Before our plan to trap the beast was ready, it resurfaced, and attacked another marks pony, from Psycho's squad. Cryptson, who happened to be in the area, saw the commotion, and ran to help. With a few strikes of his pick the creature was finished. The fight was won.

Additional happy news today. Pillomino and the other last of the prisoners from the export ban incident have been officially released, they're all free. I'm going to invite Pillomino and Thundersplinter, to have a drink with me, like we used to, but well...I'll understand if they don't want to be around me.

Speaking of Thunder, I saw her the other day and the infection in her leg seems to have completely healed. Additionally, she was getting around without a crutch. I'm glad she's better.


Charity's Journal 17th Timber 98

A diplomat from the cave ponies has come to Glitterglen to speak with us, and has brought a caravan of merchants with him.

Charity's Journal 22nd Timber 98

It seems the cave ponies have finally forgiven us for that little insident a couple years back with the cloth and leather, because this year they brought so many gems, and so much metal that the whole Trade Depot was shining. Naturally, we bought as much metal as we could, along with a few other necessities, gypsum powder, sand for our glassworks, uncut gemstones, cloth and leather, etc.


(Venture has finally reached adulthood.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Venture%27s%20all%20grown%20up.png)

Since thetyler101 hasn't posted in forever, and hasn't responded to my email. I will assume he's dead until proven wrong. Thus we have a named pony who needs a big decision made [what career he will pursue] and no one to really make that decision. If no one has any fun ideas for the character, [please don't Master him up. Tyler may return from the dead at some point] then I'll just put him wherever, I really could use a another pony in the militia or the guard, but that doesn't really seem to be in the line of what the character would have done. So, if anyone wants a bumbling Alicorn apprentice speak up, if not I will have to decide for him myself.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 11:32:56 pm
"The past is past, Cockroach.  I've come to terms with my mistake, and I work to keep form repeating it."

I slash at the daemon with Carrot's Loyalty.


**************

Khenal would love to take Venture under his wing, but I don't think she'd really like it in the guard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 11:39:28 pm
The daemon screams in pain and reels back.
"YOU'LL PAY FOR THAT!!" The daemon grabs Friesden and throws her across the room, hitting a desk.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 11:44:10 pm
Friesden hits the desk with a cry and struggles to get up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 11:47:19 pm
"LEAVE HER ALONE!"

I interpose myself between him and Friesden, then advance on Cockroach.  I keep Carrot's Loyalty at the ready, looking for any chance to drive it into the daemon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 21, 2011, 11:48:33 pm
Friesden eventually stands up. "The pain....is exhillarating."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 11:50:46 pm
"Hehehehe...aww...What's wrong? I'M ONLY TRYING TO KILL YOU!" snears the daemon. He then runs at Khenal while holding shadowy knife.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 21, 2011, 11:57:31 pm
((music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8_KEjAafwE&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 21, 2011, 11:59:06 pm
I stand my ground and meet the daemon and it's blade with Carrot's Loyalty.  The impact is fierce, and I slide a few feet back, but the attack is blocked.  I glare into Cockroach's eyes over our crossed blades before falling back a step, trying to send the daemon off balance and driving a slash at it's head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 12:08:43 am
The slash connects and Cockroach's head slices clean off. The body slumps to the ground lifeless. Now all Khenal and Friesden is figure a way out. The most obvious option is to open the door located on the right of desk Friesden slammed into. The other option would be the LEAST obvious...
((Be creative in other words!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 12:16:17 am
I eye the corpse wearily, unconvinced that Cockroach is dead.

'Still, he's not actively trying to kill us right this moment.'  I walk over to Friesden to see if she's alright.


"How are you doing, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 12:17:02 am
"Fine!"

It's quite clear that she has broken several bones.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 12:21:33 am
'Not so fine.  Her mental defenses look very poor.  She lived with Schmoe for far too long.'

"Are you sure?  Can you walk?  We need to get out of here before Cockroach springs any more tricks on us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 12:24:58 am
As if on cue, the room begins to crumble with them still inside. One of the walls crumble to debris and reveals nothing but a void outside.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 12:27:52 am
"Oh, yes!"

She walks, no, runs over to Khenal. She seems to be enjoying the pain immensely.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 12:30:28 am
The ceiling begins to creek as the entire room slowly dissolves into dust. Khenal and Friesden have about a minute(relative to them) to escape.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 12:33:29 am
'Really creepy, but at least she can move.'

"Then check the door!  I'm going to look for something by Cockroach's body.  I think he had a secret way out of here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 12:34:20 am
The door falls off it's hinges and into the abyss below. There's only one option left. ((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QiPon8lr48U))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 12:35:10 am
"Do you have any ideas?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 12:38:50 am
"...Yes."

I grab Cockroach's head and look into the neck hole, before nodding and pointing it towards Friesden.

"Hop in."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 12:40:34 am
((Good god, that's PERFECT! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dVfBJG5_7DY&feature=colike))
As Friesden and Khenal hop inside the head, Khenal takes the opportunity to smile, because he knows that even a cockroach can't survive without it's head...for long.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 12:40:48 am
"Rightio!"

Friesden leaps in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 12:44:25 am

((Good god, that's PERFECT! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dVfBJG5_7DY&feature=colike))
As Friesden and Khenal hop inside the head, Khenal takes the opportunity to smile, because he knows that even a cockroach can't survive without it's head...for long.

Glad you approve :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 12:50:31 am
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXLDv-fUINM&feature=related
The room explodes into flames behind them.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9O_QXst67nI&feature=related
Everything melts away, and Khenal and Friesden wake up on the ground in front of Psycho, still in a pool of his own blood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 12:52:27 am
Friesden attempts to operate on him and save his life.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 12:54:35 am
I stand watch as Friesden gets to business, still not sure if we're in the real world again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 01:11:34 am
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lVXEZklklhI
Psycho suddenly starts breathing again, and his heart begins to beat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 01:43:16 am
I cease my watch as I hear Carrot gasp and resume breathing.  I walk over to him and Friesden, afraid that even looking at him wrong might kill him.

"Is he going to be alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 01:45:07 am
"Maybe. Now, your side of the bargain."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 01:46:55 am
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HpAqws-C-7s))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 01:50:06 am
I hang my head a bit, before I levitate Carrot and start walking towards stairs and the hospital beyond.

"Then please walk with me, and let me know precisely what you want to forget."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 01:51:37 am
((scene music :D http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-TYF7sNxvnk&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 01:56:51 am
Friesden begins to walk with Khenal.

"Everything beyond the last day, I want to forget. Everything connected with those memories I want to forget."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 02:00:17 am
"Everything before today?  Everything, from birth to yesterday, gone?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 02:02:11 am
"Go. Look through them, if you wish. You will understand why I want to forget."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 02:04:47 am
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WZXBbexOBkk&feature=related the memories flow, as the dawn breaks the sky. The birds sing, the ponies sleep as the moon sets into the morning sky. Life is at peace.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 02:10:54 am
"I can guess why you want them gone, but everything means everything.  You won't know anything that you didn't learn today.  I might have to smack you to get you to breathe, like a newborn foal.  You won't know how to talk, how to walk, how to fly."

I deflate a bit.  "And if I sealed that much, it would only last a bare hooffull of minutes before you would remember everything anyway."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 02:12:57 am
"You cannot take it away? Not permanently? But...but I trusted you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 02:14:08 am
((I'D RUN FOR THE DARN HILLS NOW IF I WERE YOU!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 02:19:49 am
"I can seal the memories you wish to forget, Friesden.  I mean it when I say everything means everything, but not everything needs to be sealed.  Most memories are below the consciousness, and sealing those is very difficult.  The memories that cross the threshold into your active mind, however, can be sealed.  You will keep your knowledge of things, but not the context in which you learned them.  Do you understand?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 02:21:19 am
"I don't want to know these things!" Friesden wails. "Please, please, can't you remove them somewhere, somehow?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 02:22:37 am
Psycho groans and mutters, "Enough of your whining...just give them to me and let me go back to sleep..." He complains.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 02:23:27 am
I'm going to have to go afk for about an hour or so pretty soon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 02:28:08 am
I answer Carrot's rambling out of habit.

"I can't give you her memories, only a memory eater cou...!"

I blink a few times and almost drop Carrot as I get a very stupid idea.

'Keeper?  I have a very dangerous question to ask you.'



*********************

A short break sound good, then. :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 02:38:14 am
((I'm going to bed at 3am EST...so he'd better hurry.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 02:51:17 am
((Well, i'm going to bed. GOOD NIGHT EVERYPONY! I LEAVE YOU WITH THIS MUSIC! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eubWHVBAC-Q&feature=colike))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 22, 2011, 03:07:21 am
From the diary of ThunderSplinter;

Early Timber, 98.
297.  I'm going to remember that number forever.  297.  The number of bars of soap it took to clean out the infection in my leg.  And, on top of that, I have also gathered up all the bars of honey badger pegasi soap and hidden them in my workshop.  It's the softest and soapiest I used.  But if anyone asks, I'll recommend the cat soap, it seems we have plenty of it and I'd probably rate it mediocre at best.  Also discarded that infernal crutch, probably did more damage than anything else.  And, thank Nuket, no more wound dressings to change every few hours - that pus was really starting to stink up the place and the haulers were complaining when I asked them to take the bundles to the refuse pile.  It is with great satisfaction that I took the last bundle of soiled cloth to the refuse pit and threw it in with all the contempt I could muster.

Plans: review the top-most levels of the tower - plan security measures.  The possibility from fliers to invade by pathing through the tower is very real, so a few cage traps here and there will take care of that.  Nicolta has been a casualty of some foul-daemon scheme by the sounds of the gossip that reaches me, and queries over who the senior mechanician is have returned nothing.

Blocks, barrels, and cages should help me get back into the swing of things - I hear we have more migrants that need beds, but I wonder if we are getting enough migrants to replace our losses?

Enough for now,
ThunderSplinter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 03:55:02 am
"What is the question, Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 04:19:56 am
'How did Schmoe take memories?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:22:43 am
The Keeper seems a bit shifty. "It's...it's hard to explain. I wouldn't call it...taking memories. More....predating on them. It's very complicated. Why do you ask?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 22, 2011, 04:26:08 am
((You guys and your mass posting. Sometimes I really hate living in SEAsia.))
*A flash of light explodes from the ceiling, and Bubbles falls down in a heap. Right on Friesden.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 04:31:24 am
'I promised Friesden I would seal what memories she wanted, but she wants too many gone for me to handle for any decent amount of time.  Then I remembered Schmoe's apparent ability to simply take memories.'

Suddenly, Dr Bubbles falls through the ceiling, right on top of Friesden.


"...Nice of you to drop in, Doctor."

**************

I can't resist a terrible pun, I regret nothing!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 22, 2011, 04:33:45 am
"Uhm....Hello Khenal. What day is it? I've been in suspended animation for what seems like a thousand years now..."
*Bubbles steps up and notices Friesden*
"Uh....Hello Friesden..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:35:56 am
"......Ouch."


"It feels...very risky....why don't you simply...I don't know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 04:40:17 am
"Suspended...?"  I shake my head, deciding I likely don't want to know.

"I was actually headed to see you, if you weren't busy.  Carrot has...been seriously wounded.  Friesden tells me he's stable, but he needs a real hospital instead of the improvised treatment Friesden had to give him."

I offer Bubbles a helping hoof off of Friesden, then offer her the same off the floor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 22, 2011, 04:45:23 am
"thanks"

((I would love to have Venture as an apprentice. Two people in the hospital isn't going to cut it XD))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:46:48 am
"Thank you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 04:51:12 am
'I know it's risky, Keeper.  I did say it was a dangerous question.  If it's simply out of my ability to do something like take memories, just say so.  If it is possible, though... I promised her, Keeper.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:58:49 am
"It's daemonic magic. You'll need a proper daemon. Even I couldn't do it myself at this point. I'm too far pony. Do you have any daemons you can control here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 05:13:59 am
I chuckle a bit as I walk with Bubbles and Friesden.

'Daemons I can control?  Not even remotely.  Schmoe is under control, I think, but not mine.  And I doubt he'd play along with this.  And I especially doubt Starkey would play along.  Summoning and trying to bind one is completely out of the question as well.'

When we arrive a the hospital, I make sure to get Carrot a bed and some proper medical assistance.


"Friesden, I don't think I can fully do what you ask.  At least, not right now.  Will you accept a temporary fix until I can research some more?"


*************
I can't get this (http://speccysy.deviantart.com/art/Tumblr-Caramell-270173207) out of my head!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 05:20:18 am
"Please. Tell me you can do it. I'd do anything. Please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 05:32:11 am
"I will do everything I can, Friesden.  It took you a long time to create those memories, and it will take me time to figure out how to seal them completely.  I'll need to take it slowly, starting with just your conscious memories.  It's the only way."

I look her in the eyes, pained that she feels this is her only option.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 05:39:00 am
"If you have any doubt, look inside them..." She starts silently crying. "I'm a monster, Khenal. I've killed ponies, mares, stallions, colts, fillies, and foals. I've done things I can't even put into words. I killed my mother. My...my father wasn't. I just want it all to go away!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 05:47:15 am
"If you forget your past, how can you hope to keep from repeating your mistakes, Friesden?  I know it hurts, but you can be better than you were.  You can't bring those ponies back, but you can help others from meeting similar fates.  Please...Please don't make me seal your memories, Friesden."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 05:49:34 am
"Do...do you remember me from back then? I knew you...but I didn't know you, if you follow me. I was the one behind it all. How...how could you forgive me? And know this. I did far, far worse. How can I forgive myself?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 05:59:01 am
"I don't remember you from before Glitterglen, but I didn't pay much attention to the subj...subjects."  I stutter, having my own difficult memories to deal with.  "Forgiving others is so simple, so easy.  Forgiving yourself, however, is so much harder to do.  I...I still haven't learned that trick.  I just try to...to do what I can to make sure nopony else suffers the same fate as they did.  I... try to make sure I don't repeat my mistakes, for all those who've been harmed by them in the past."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 06:06:55 am
"Did they tell you how they had discovered me? He had been discovered, and my...father..." she spits as she says this, "had bound him into my mother. I was lost in my imagination, where I was happy. Then...all the memories came flooding back. How my father had...used me. Abused me. And now I was free and my father didn't know it. He did, though. He had prepared me. I had a knife. It was sharp as could be. I lunged at my father. My father had sensed it just in time, and forced my mother's body, with him controlling it, in the way. He let the flesh part, let the tormented spirit find whatever peace it could. There are some souls too bitter, too tainted even for daemons to swallow. My father fled to a private room, where I had been used. My father sealed the door and called for the guard. They stopped me and released my father..."

There's a small remnant of a smile on Friesden's face.

"They cut it off, and then they took my father's horn off as well. They exiled my father, and I never heard from or of my father again. That was how I met you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 06:12:53 am
It's past 3am and I have no idea how to respond to that.  I'm gonna hit the hay, maybe I can brain better after sleep.  Nite everypony!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 06:13:31 am
Night.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 02:31:30 pm
"Your father was a monster, Friesden, but that doesn't mean you have to be one also.  Each of your memories is a lesson hard learned.  I know you fear remembering them, but I fear what may happen if you forget.  Please, be strong and keep your memories, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 03:05:39 pm
Friesden bows her head, and in a small whisper, she says "Please...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 03:12:05 pm
Starkey enters the prison: since Friesden's apparent recovery, he has made a habit of visiting her daily. Unsurprisingly, another scene of distilled insanity greets him. He sighs.

"Alright, what did I miss this time?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 03:35:27 pm
Tears flow as my horn takes on the subtle glow of mental magic.  It takes several minutes for me to gather all the energy I'll need to cast the spell: The Memory Construct spell I used on myself before coming here.  It's mission simple: to seal any conscious memory originating before yesterday.  I establish a link with Friesden and release the construct and watch it do it's job.  The construct works quickly and efficiently, though the sheer volume of memories to be sealed drains me severely.

It takes relatively little real time for the memories to be sealed.  Once finished, the construct takes a position in an out of the way part of Friesden's mental landscape, ready to seal any memories that may try to escape the subconscious.  I then sever the link, exhausted.  I barely have the energy to ask Friesden:


"How do you feel now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 03:39:07 pm
Friesden looks up, and there is peace in her eyes.

"Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!"

She runs to Khenal and hugs him tight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 03:40:38 pm
"Well, I'm glad to see you two have kissed and made up, but would either of you care to explain what happened here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 03:42:55 pm
After hearing Starkey's words, Friesden impulsively plants a kiss on Khenal's cheek.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 03:49:51 pm
((And now I have to go to class. See you in a few hours.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 03:52:16 pm
((cya. Sorry for the ignoring :( ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 04:00:12 pm
I weakly try to return the hug, glad that Friesden is at least happy for now.  The kiss, however, surprises me and I loose my balance and fall over.



*************
Ya, sorry about ignoring you  :-\
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:02:29 pm
"Thank you, thank you, thank you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 04:07:24 pm
((I KNEW THAT WOULD HAPPEN! I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5rUIQNFitvs&feature=related there ya go ya love birds!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 04:09:46 pm
I yawn widely before responding with a smile.

"You're welcome, Friesden.  I...I need a nap."

I shakily stand and start making my way towards the cell that Carrot cut his way out of.

'It's not the best bed, but it's a bed.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:10:44 pm
((Well, of course you should have. It's been anything but outright stated before hand.))

"Khenal... I don't know this feeling. What is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 04:15:12 pm
"What does it feel like?"  I ask as I make it to the bed, eyelids heavy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:18:54 pm
"I..I don't know. Like pleasure, I think, but more."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 04:22:33 pm
((Don't make me sound the shipping alarm :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 04:24:47 pm
I barely keep my eyes open as I lay down on the cell bed, and give Friesden a soft smile.  I murmur four words before sleep finally takes me.

"I love you, too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:25:57 pm
((Well, at least they're not like ships that pass in the night.))

Friesden watches Khenal fall asleep. The new feeling is making her feel giddy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 04:33:39 pm
I wasn't sure if Khenal was in love with Friesden until she kissed him.  I knew she was important to him, but I wasn't sure what, precisely, she was to him.  Until now. 

Heh, I wonder how the rest of the fort will react to them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:34:38 pm
Hehe. So do I.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 22, 2011, 04:38:32 pm
I know Granite will find this incredibly entertaining, Negs'll be fascinated when he wakes up too.  Not sure how Friesden will see Granite now though, she still thinks Granite stole 'him'.  But now she has a new 'him'. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 04:42:18 pm
I think Psycho is going to need to jump out another window.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 04:48:22 pm
NEXT DAY! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XgYKXx6JDDw&feature=relmfu
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 04:49:50 pm
Psycho wakes up in the hospital. At this point, he is entirely unphased by this. Naturally, he tries to get up, but learns the hard way when he's screaming from the pain in his back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 04:50:18 pm
Friesden has fallen asleep in front of Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 22, 2011, 05:08:21 pm
The rumors were flying everywhere by the time the sun had fully risen.  According to everything I had heard another daemon had killed Charity, Khenal had gone berserk and killed everypony in prison, Psycho was either dead, maimed, missing, or a daemon, Friesden and Khenal had hooked up, Friesden had killed Khenal, Khenal had been imprisoned by Charity, and somepony had been found with his guts torn out by a diomedian assassin that was just waiting for a chance to strike at Charity.
"How is it that ponies have elevated gossip to such an art form?" I ask myself.  Even after my sleepless night Negs had not woken up.  And there was no point in sleeping if he wasn't there to talk to.  Besides, he had taken in a lot of energy and I figured I was entitled to some of it.
"Don't think the Charity ones are true, she's still in the hospital... I think.  That place has a horrible record for keeping thier patients in the hospital.  Psycho is probably up and about by now.  His healing abilities are just not normal, and that really means something coming from me too..."
My voice trails off as I watch the hustle and bustle of ponies going about their jobs before me.
"So many ponies, so many ways for them to end up running.  There are no rumors of me?  Probably good.  Don't want them to run.  Though maybe I should run, this place has something wrong with it.  Maybe the whole thing is broken?  Who would be able to tell?" I mutter before continuing my sentence from before.
"Probably no Diomedians, would be more panic and armed patrols if that happened.  Same if somepony had gone berserk too.  The last one... Khenal and Friesden hooking up though...  Friesden was broken and seemed to have hated Khenal... But now she hated me...  Is that good?  If she blames her brokenness on me can he fix her?  Probably not a good idea to see her for a while.  Pain is never fun, and it's not like Negs can take my anything...  I should ask Khenal...  And I still need an answer about 'him'... and those colors hidden under his..."
My voice sinks into the usual low mutterings of my thoughts as I walk through the throng of ponies towards the mine shafts,
"Maybe some time spent hitting rocks will help bring things to sense."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 05:25:03 pm
When I awake, the first thing I see is Friesden, sleeping peacefully.  I smile, and my horn glows as I gently settle her into the bed after I get out of it.  I quietly head to my office and start writing in my Sequel.


Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 5

Friesden is better, my Sequel!  Over the past few days, she's actually been responding to ponies and doesn't try to hurt anypony anymore.  Yesterday, though, she remembered her past and couldn't face it.  She asked me to take those memories, and I would have refused if Cockroach hadn't reared his ugly head again.  I...I almost killed Carrot when I tried to stop him, and only Friesden could help him.  In return, she wanted me to seal her memories.  I tried to talk her out of forgetting, but she couldn't handle all the pain they were bringing her.

I created another mental construct, like the one I used on myself so long ago.  It's not a perfect answer, and I don't know how long those memories will stay fully sealed, but she's so happy right now.  And I'm so happy also.  I love her, my Sequel, and I think she returns the feeling.  She's asleep right now, and I'm trying to decide if I should wake her or let her sleep while I go visit Carrot in the hospital.  I'll also need to talk to Charity and Starkey and let them know about Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 05:27:15 pm
Friesden starts to stir in the bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 22, 2011, 05:31:38 pm
"And you're sure about it?  She looks... better?" I ask Negs.
Yes already!  Her lights are much more like a normal pony, and she has a lot more lights that I can't see.
"Enough positive emotions that you can tell they are there?  That's definitely a good sign."
Negs had woken up almost a full day after he had gone to sleep, much of the time since then had been spent explaining what had happened while he slept as well as trying to figure out what was going on.
"We should probably ambush Khenal somewhere, get the full story from him...  You still remember what the hidden colors were like right?"
Yes I remember, Negs responded, annoyed at my constant questioning of his memory.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 05:34:30 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nn2Z7mvekMc&feature=related))
As Khenal nears the hospital, he hears the familar groans of Psycho Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 05:56:11 pm
I decided to let Friesden sleep while I pay Carrot a quick visit in the hospital.  I quicken my pace when I hear is groans.

'Groans are better than crazed screams, but only just.  I should hurry.'



***********

Being a bit slow today, trying to get another section transcribed for FiMFiction
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 06:03:20 pm
I smile as Khenal trots in.
"Khenal! What in Celestia's name happened?! Was I in a coma for two days?!" Asks Psycho, jumping to conclusions as always.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 22, 2011, 06:07:50 pm
"Yes Khenal. What happened? Did you take Friesden's memories?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 06:12:27 pm
I get a bit nervous at the questions and what the answers will be, but calm down at least a little when I remember they are my friends.

"Well, you see..."  I start recalling the last few days, telling Bubbles and Carrot about Friesden's unsettling behavior with her leg, Carrot's induced insanity with those syringes, Cockroach's return, and yes, I sealed Friesden's memories.  I leave out the fact that Friesden and I love eachother, feeling it's private.  For now, at least.

*************

And for those interested in the transcript, the next section is up over here (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2892/Glitterglen)!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 22, 2011, 06:16:59 pm
"Is Friesden okay with having her memories taken? If not, you may want her to come back here to rest."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 06:21:22 pm
"Yes, she...she pleaded that I seal them.  I didn't want to, but she saved Carrot.  How could I refuse her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 06:21:54 pm
Cross posted to the MLP forum
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 06:24:36 pm
"Why would you help a psychopath, Khenal? Friesden is the one who tried to KILL US on multiple occasions." Psycho says, worried about Khenal's mental health.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 22, 2011, 06:26:49 pm
"Carrot, I might add that you did the same."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 06:30:48 pm
Confused, I say "What're you talki- Don't tell me...I went insane...AGAIN..." I sigh, not even surprised in the slightest.
((Psycho wouldn't try to kill anyone willingly 'I' might add.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 06:31:38 pm
((Friesden wouldn't kill anypony as she is now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 06:32:06 pm
"Because she isn't a psychopath, Carrot."


*************

Ahahah!  Burn from Ansontan! :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 06:34:46 pm
"I think you've lost it...what're you, her coltfriend? HAH! Anyway...I think i'm going to need another pain-killer..." Scoffs Psycho, completely unconvinced.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 22, 2011, 06:36:36 pm
*I absentmindedly give Carrot another dose of painkiller*
"Well, I have some paperwork to get on with. See ya'll later!"
((gtg.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 06:37:50 pm
((Master, the correct term would be coltfriend.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 06:38:40 pm
((Good call!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 06:41:08 pm
I blush a bit at Carrot's acusation, glad for the distraction of him getting more medicine.

"I'm...sorry about your back, Carrot.  I didn't think that syringe was so deeply embedded.  How are you doing?"

************
Take care Ansontan!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 06:41:54 pm
((Cya Ansotan. Hope you can get back soon))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 06:44:25 pm
((Yeah! happy trails!))
"Bad. Even with the pain-killer the pain from having SKIN AND BONE TORN OUT hasn't dulled in the slightest. I STILL feel sick from the overdose of...what did you call it again...hold that thought." And with that, goes all of Psycho's breakfast.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 06:53:06 pm
I quietly get a bucket before cleaning up Carrot's breakfast, carefully levitating as much as I can into it.

"They were labeled 'Hallucinogen', which I still think is weird.  You should try to relax and let the doctors do their work."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 06:54:26 pm
"But I HATE needles!!!" Complains Psycho, struggling -and failing- to get up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 06:57:44 pm
"Then stop struggling and let them work.  The more you wiggle, the more needles they'll need to stick you with and the longer you'll be here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 07:02:49 pm
"MORE NEEDLES??!" screams Psycho, now desperate to get away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 07:03:51 pm
((I called it first. :P))

((Though to be fair, Starkey was just grossly misinterpreting Friesden's experimental observations, but still.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 07:05:21 pm
((...wut? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m_mDTLphIVY))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 07:09:18 pm
"Settle down, Carrot!"

***********

Ya, Starkey was the first to think there might be something between Friesden and Khenal.  I just finished transcribing that part, actually :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 07:11:44 pm
Carrot doesn't respond, as he's managed to muster up enough strength to get off the bed and is trying to limp home.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 07:16:00 pm
My horn lights as I gently levitate Carrot back to his hospital bed.

"You have to stay here, Carrot!  Stop trying to leave, or Ingest help me, I will put you to sleep!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 07:17:12 pm
Carrot makes it to the door, only to find a certain copper stallion blocking the way.

"And precisely where do you think you're going?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 07:20:08 pm
"LET ME GO! I WANT TO SEE KIL!!!!!!!!" Yells Psycho, dissolving into tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 07:22:40 pm
Friesden continues to stir, and eventually wakes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 07:24:23 pm
"She should be around here somewhere, just relax and we can get her!"

***************

Pretty sure StrongBeard said Kil was assigned as a nurse recently.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 07:30:13 pm
((He did, but she's not in the room, according to the PERSON CONTROLLING HER. :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 07:33:47 pm
Friesden slowly gets up, and trots over to the source of the sound.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 07:34:35 pm
Just making sure Khenal doesn't just start talking to some random nurse like she's your wife and then get more looks like he's crazy :P  So... is Carrot calming down?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 07:37:50 pm
((He "dissolved into tears". You tell me. :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 07:39:14 pm
"*sigh* I'll go find her."

Starkey trots out the door, heading towards the room Carrot and his wife share.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 07:40:25 pm
Friesden comes trotting into the hospital as Starkey leaves. There's a still sleepy sort of happiness in her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 07:41:49 pm
Psycho sees Friesden through the tears and begins screaming. Psycho has finally snapped for good.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 07:43:55 pm
'Clop. I should have guessed this wouldn't last.'

Starkey turns tail and gallops back towards the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 07:45:54 pm
I busy myself trying to console Carrot while Starkey goes to find his wife, not noticing Friesden enter.

"Shh, it'll be alright.  I know you don't like the hospital, but you need to get better."

Then his tears turn to screams.

'Uh-oh'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 07:47:08 pm
Friesden's happiness turns to shock, then dissolves into horror.

"What? What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 07:48:07 pm
"STAY B-B-ACK! DON'T KILL ME!!! I'M TOO YOUNG TO BE BUTCHERED TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 07:51:29 pm
"Carrot, listen to me!  She's not going to kill you!  She's not going to kill anypony!  Settle down!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 07:52:44 pm
Friesden drops to the ground, hooves over her ears.

"Make...make it stop! Please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 07:54:48 pm
Psycho begins seeing things out of sheer fear.
"NO NO NO!!! DON'T HURT ME!!!!!!!!!!!" Screams Psycho even louder than before.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 07:58:26 pm
Starkey opts to let Khenal handle Carrot himself: he would probably only serve to agitate Carrot further. Instead, he approaches Friesden, offering her a hoof.

"Stand up. Come on, you don't have to stay here for this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 07:59:24 pm
My horn shines as I point it at Carrot, preparing my sleep spell.

"I warned you about calming down."

I release the spell, letting it flow into Carrot and hoping his fear wont overcome his injuries and magical exhaustion.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:00:00 pm
Friesden gingerly takes Starkey's hoof, and walks out with him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 08:01:59 pm
"There, that's better. Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 08:04:19 pm
Psycho manages to resist the sleep spell long enough to force his way out the door, making it all the way to the door to his room before collapsing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:06:09 pm
"I...I think so....what happened in there?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 08:07:03 pm
'I might as well check if Kil is home.'  I knock on Carrot's door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 08:09:20 pm
"Lieutenant Carrot is... troubled. You remember I told you about the daemon in you? He had one of his own, still has it, I think. He has some serious mental trauma."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:10:48 pm
"I don't fully remember...but yes...I think I remember something about that. Khenal killed it."

She's still shaken up.

"Please...can you hold me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 08:12:49 pm
"Who's there?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 08:13:42 pm
"...aye, if you like."

He wraps his forelegs around her, gently patting her on the back.

"it's alright, it's over. You're alright."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 08:16:01 pm
"Kil?  It's Khenal.  Um, and Carrot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:16:20 pm
Silently, tears fall from her eyes.

"Thank you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 08:17:54 pm
The door practically flies off it's hinges.
"CARROT?! Oh...Carrot...Is he alright?" Kil asks, terrified after not seeing Psycho in about three days.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 08:20:26 pm
"Um, he just needs rest, and to stay in the hospital.  I tried to put him to sleep, but he resisted because he wanted to see you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 08:23:15 pm
"So, other that little... incident... how was your day?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:25:53 pm
The crying starts to slow.

"I just woke up... Khenal and I were both tired after last night. I think I...love? I think that was the word. I think I love him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 08:26:39 pm
Kil looks up for the first time in the conversation. She'd been focusing on Psycho lying on the ground.
"Oh my...Psycho is not going to be happy if he sees me talking to you..." and with that, Kil drags Psycho in, slams the door, and locks exactly eight different locks all attached to the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:28:56 pm
((Friesden starting rumour through not knowing the implications.

Problem, Khenal?

Khenal: FFFFFFFUUUUUUUU))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 08:29:13 pm
Starkey freezes. Several thoughts run through his head at once.

A dash of:

'Hah, I told you so, lad!'

A little bit of:

'Dammit, I wanted a piece of that.'

And a heaping helping of:

'Oh sisters, Schmoe is going to clopping kill me.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 08:30:45 pm
Starkey thinks he hears Cockroach laughing, but decides it's just his imagination.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 08:33:22 pm
Quick scene check:  Starkey and Friesden are somewhere in or around the hospital.  Khenal is just outside Carrot's private chambers, somewhere not too far from the hospital, yes?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:34:42 pm
I assume so, yes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 08:34:56 pm
Correct. AGH, NINJA'D!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 08:35:37 pm
((StrongBeard posted a map a while back: as I recall, the infirmary and living quarters are on different levels.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 08:38:12 pm
'That could have gone better...'

I sigh and head back to the hospital to find Starkey and Friesden



****************

The fortress is fairly vertical, if I remember right, so nothing is really that far from anything else. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 08:42:05 pm
((scene music I'M ON A ROLL HERE! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ye4H_croHs&feature=relmfu))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:45:29 pm
Friesden stops crying completely, and a smile lights up her face. She ducks out of Starkey's embrace, and runs to Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 08:46:30 pm
((Crisis averted... or is it?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 08:47:20 pm
((sigh, as long as we're all still alive, then the crisis is never over...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 08:49:05 pm
"Friesden!"

I give her a warm smile and an affectionate nuzzle before draping one of my wings over her in a soft embrace.


*************

As far as Khenal worrying about rumors?  He isn't :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:52:18 pm
"How did you sleep?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 08:54:32 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ipiz8sRiXwE&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 08:55:42 pm
"Quite well.  You?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 08:59:30 pm
"Terrifically. The monsters are gone from my dreams."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 09:07:14 pm
"Good."

I gaze into her eyes, lost for a time, before comming back to reality and turning my head to look at Starkey.

"Thank you for getting her out of there, Starkey.  I owe you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 09:10:03 pm
"Aye, it was no problem."

He grins.

"I always thought you two would look cute together."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 09:12:03 pm
Friesden starts to blush a bit, her eyes longingly gazing at Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 09:12:11 pm
((OH! KHENAL! MAKE A PICTURE OF FRIESDEN AND YOU TOGETHER! oh, and remember...KEEP IT UNRAT- I mean TV M- I MEAN PG 1- I MEANT PG!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 09:13:06 pm
((Ask Sean. Such a scene is worthy of his talent.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 09:14:18 pm
((All I can say is that he'll probably be glad it isn't Friesden and Rarity....:P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 09:16:31 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qlPnzq3wWn4&feature=player_detailpage#t=305s just the one sentence.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 09:16:56 pm
I was about to laugh and joke about what I could have done to make you think I could art, then I remembered all the pony pics I posted.  I'll clear it up now then: I have no artistic talent at all.  I wish I could art.  I'll prolly request something for this from Sean over on the pony forum.  So much d'aaaww going on here :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 09:17:55 pm
GAH! KHENAL! YOUR SPELL CHECKER BLEW UP!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 09:21:28 pm
GAH! KHENAL! YOUR SPELL CHECKER BLEW UP!

Huh?  What'd I do?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 09:23:33 pm
spoilered for noobishness.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 09:26:19 pm
Because prolly is one of the very few bits of "text talk" that I indulge in, so :P  To actually be on topic, though: Shall Friesden and Khenal continue with the public displays of affections, or shall we change scene to something else? 

No, not that, get your mind out of the gutter :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 09:30:00 pm
AHEM. BACK TO THE STORY ANYONE?!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 09:31:32 pm
Friesden started nuzzling Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 09:34:59 pm
continue!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 09:39:46 pm
I return the nuzzle, closing my eyes so my other senses can drink in Friesden's presence.  The scent of her mane, the soft touch of her coat, the sweet sound of her breathing, all of my senses combining to simply give me the joy of the one I love.  I sigh in contentment, truly happy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 09:41:25 pm
((AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwhyareyoustillreadingthis?!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 09:44:10 pm
Friesden settles into Khenal's warm embrace, her every thought rejoicing in the moment. She feels at peace, the troubles of her awakening fading away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 09:46:35 pm
((scene music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0EBf73TeCc&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 10:35:21 pm
((Well, where did everyone go?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 10:47:15 pm
((no idea...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 22, 2011, 10:53:32 pm
Starkey watches the couple from the sidelines. As he sits, he notices another: Lieutenant Otik.

"They're cute, sir."


"Aye, Lieutenant, that they are."

"Y'look happy, sir."

"Aye, Lieutenant, that I am."

"Too happy, sir."

"I wouldn't put it that way..."

"Jealous, sir?"

"No..."

"Permission t'speak freely, sir?"

"Go ahead, Lieutenant."

"Yer lyin', sir."

"...Yes, Lieutenant."

*sigh*, "C'mon sir, I'll let ye give me a belly rub."

"...That would be highly inappropriate, Lieutenant."

"Uh-huh. Yer room r'mine, sir?"

He thinks for a moment.

*sigh*,
"Mine."

They trot off together.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 10:57:42 pm
((Awww...poor Starkey.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 11:09:56 pm
((ALL THIS LOVE IS INTERFERING WITH MY DESTROY-ALL-LIFE-MATRIX! MUST EXTERMINATE LOVEBIRDS! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AutYNQYGjpE&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 22, 2011, 11:16:38 pm
D'aww, you fixed Friesden.  Now I feel all fuzzy inside.  I was certain Dsarker was going to get her executed, but I'm pleasantly surprised.  If I wasn't so slammed with 1000 other things to do right now, I'd illustrate that Khenal / Friesden picture.  Although my pony style is a bit off from the cartoon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 11:25:03 pm
"HEEEEEEEEERE'S...PSYCHO!"
Screaming can be heard from Psycho Carrot's room. The door to the room flies out into the hallway and shatters to dust. Psycho, now covered head to toe in blood, trots happily out of the room, with an psychopathic-mass-murderer-kind-of-smile on his face.
((I don't even have to bring Cockroach back to make Psycho insane! After all, I took the madman's oath! AND NO, YOU CAN NEVER HAVE A DAY WITHOUT INSANITY!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 11:26:16 pm
((So I'm guessing Kil is dead. Let's see how Khenal deals with this.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 11:26:48 pm
((Yes. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y-6q50aY4ZI&feature=related FOUND A BETTER THEME!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 11:30:12 pm
I think this one works better.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P1vDqgsbyhQ
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 11:32:56 pm
As I bask in everything Friesden, I realize something.  One of my senses has been woefully ignored: Taste. 

'Well, I know how to fix that.'

I smile before positioning my face in front of hers, slowly leaning forward to...

...Be interrupted by a not-so-subtle cough from behind.  One of the hospital guards is standing behind us, looking like he's been trying to get my attention for a while now.  I give him a glare as he asks
  "Uh, sir?  What are you doing?"

"I'm enjoying the company of the most beautiful pony I've ever known.  Or I was, until you..."

The guardspony cuts me off.  "You're, uh, kinda making a scene, sir..."

Before I can tell the guardspony precisely how little I care about making a scene, the sound of Carrot's door exploding echoes down the halls.


**************

I don't care if you ninja me, The Master, I'm saying that anyway :P

Edited for spelling, stupid spelling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 11:36:48 pm
Friesden's eyes open wide in surprise, and she looks away from Khenal.

"What was that noise?"


((Dammit, keyboard keeps thinking I want to type Lhenal, not Khenal.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 11:38:35 pm
"HERE'S PSYCHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Screams Carrot, echoing the scream throughout the ENTIRE fortress.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 11:49:10 pm
'Not good!'  I point a wing at the guard who interrupted me.

"Get Commander Starkey!  I don't think Carrot is going to be very reasonable this time!"

I then point a hoof at the other hospital guard.

"Gather the Guard!  I'm sure you'll be able to find me!"

My expression softens as I look at Friesden.

"I'm sorry, my love, but it looks like duty calls me.  Go to Thunder Splinter's tower, alert the Skyguard there and don't leave."

I give her one more nuzzle before standing.

"I need to go...'talk' with Carrot."

The closer guard tosses me his spear as I dash towards the stairwell and Psycho.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 11:50:03 pm
Friesden hurries to the Tower to alert the Skyguard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 22, 2011, 11:52:00 pm
Psycho is holding Kil's head in his mouth, leaving a trail of blood in his wake. He hear footsteps and throws Kil's head in the direction of it, while at the time grabbing a sword from his hilt that he clearly stole.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 22, 2011, 11:54:03 pm
That's not gorey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 22, 2011, 11:58:32 pm
"Car-AAAHH!"

Kil's head hits the wall just ahead of me, spattering me with some of her blood.  I stare, unwilling to accept what my eyes tell me.

'No, he wouldn't!  Even if Cockroach was at full power, Carrot would stop him before he could harm Kil!'



Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 12:01:31 am
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ZfH0pxXPx4))
Carrot barrels down the hallway, heading for the direction of the yelp of surprise.
"I'LL KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF YOU! IT'S FUN!!" Screams the monster that at one time was called Psycho Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 23, 2011, 12:03:24 am
(Aw you killed Kil, oh well, she was going to be redundant when Venture starts working with Bubbles anyway. Quick question for our resident mad-pony. Did you kill your foals too?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 12:05:02 am
((YOU'LL FIND OUT...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hOf1AsaJWXY hint.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 12:15:12 am
Psycho's bellow snaps me back to reality.  I rush to the corridor, knowing I'll need room to use my spear properly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 12:20:16 am
As it happens, they both end up two feet apart from each other and slide to a stop.
"Khenal. How goes it? I just had a lovely nap. Would you care to join Kil? Oh, and..." I turn my head 180 degrees and say "Kids, come here! Daddy wants you to meet your new friend!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 12:30:58 am
'Cockroach!'

With his head pointed away, I swing the blunt end of my spear as hard as I can at his front right knee.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 12:35:45 am
Everything suddenly stops. you hear that BWOOOOONG sound (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXLDv-fUINM), followed by a familiar voice.
"...Remember when you weren't sure you had actually left that wonderful world I created? You left alright...BUT SO DID I! I am in your mind now!" Laughs Cockroach.
At this point, the kids arrive. One is missing all it's skin, while the other is dragging a bloody axe that a titan might have used.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 12:44:04 am
((imagine silent hill blended with Saw. that kind of horror. AND YES, UNLESS YOU WANT TO END UP LIKE THE PONY WITH THE AXE, STAY AWAY FROM IT. PYRAMID HEAD ANYONE?!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 12:45:55 am
((so just for clarity: in reality, Khenal is still standing in the hallway with Friesden babbling to himself while Cockroach screws with his head?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 12:47:15 am
'Motherbucker.'  I grab the borrowed spear in my teeth and release my magic.  Backing towards the stairs I keep my eyes on Psycho and his "children".

"If you want to kill me, Psycho, let's play up top."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 12:49:58 am
"...don't you want to play a game first?" Asks the child with the axe.
"...GAME...GAME...GAME......GAME...GAME...GAME..." Chants the other child.
"YES. LET'S PLAY A GAME. IT'S CALLED: KILL FRIESDEN! IT'S OUR FAVORITE!!!!" Screams 'Psycho'.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 12:57:41 am
((so just for clarity: in reality, Khenal is still standing in the hallway with Friesden babbling to himself while Cockroach screws with his head?))

That's precisely what Khenal fears is happening.  And now, back to the show!



My horn flashes as I cast the voice amplification spell, the last spell I plan on casting for quite some time.

"EVERYPONY GET AWAY FROM ME!  RUN, FLY TELEPORT, JUST GET AWAY!"

I cease backing up and give the trio a look of steel and ice before stepping closer.  'Even if this is all in my head, at least now everypony knows to stay away from me.'

"You'll never get her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 01:07:29 am
"Oh Khenal...usually I don't offer advice...but I would just like to take the time to inform you that...there's something behind you."
Khenal feels hot breath going down his neck.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 01:15:12 am
'Either somepony didn't listen, or Cockroach is messing with me still.  Regardless...'

I spread my wings and about face, trying to fly around or through whatever or whoever is behind me and get up the stairs and to the Tower.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 01:25:41 am
"Meet 'Friesden'...but not the one you love. It's my favorite version of her. The psycho*-killer version."
((*see what I did there? Also, TAKE IT AWAY DSARKER!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 01:32:23 am
((Oh, gods, time to get into Frieden again))

"It's vital that you listen to me, Khenal. You see, for this fort to function, I need to know how to put together all the little ponies that need operating on. And you, well. You've got all the delicate little parts...hehehe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 01:37:15 am
'itsnotheritsnotheritsnother'

I continue past "Friesden", flying up the stairs as fast as I am able, screaming the entire time.


"Everypony get away from me!  Cockroach got in, I don't know what's real!  Run, I don't want to hurt anypony!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 01:43:20 am
"Friesden" continues to follow.

"Come on, Khenal. It's for the good of the fort."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 01:53:57 am
'itsnotheritsnotheritsnother'

I burst out onto the surface and make a beeline for the door to the Tower, stopping st the door.

'No, not here.  Might be real ponies, can't hurt them.  Jungle!'


"Stay away from me!  I don't want to kill anypony!"

I continue screaming warnings as I streak over the wall and out into the jungle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 01:57:21 am
"Come on, Khenal. Just a few slices. Hey, what about another pony? They'd be more obedient, do you think?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 01:58:05 am
A voice calls out to Khenal "Listen to your friend, Khenal...also, YOU CANNOT ESCAPE!!!!" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXLDv-fUINM
Khenal ends up right where he was before he got into the jungle. 'Friesden' is now much closer.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:08:55 am
I land back inside the walls of Glitterglen, seemingly calmed a bit.

'Ok, scenery finally broke the rules.  I'm in my mental landscape, however much is still mine.... No, don't think like that!  Gotta deal with Cockroach!'

I take a few deep breaths before letting the spear vanish and pulling out Loyalty.  I continue with my warnings as I take a fighting stance.


"Stay back, everypony.  I don't want to hurt you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 02:12:19 am
((Both Friesdens(the real and the evil) are overlaid on top of each other as Khenal sees them. Khenal has been running from her and her. :P))
"Aww...you're scaring Firesden...but Friesden is also here and wants you to help her for the good of the fortress!" Mocks Cockroach.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 02:17:05 am
"Come on, Khenal."

"Do come here, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:18:22 am
My calm shatters as I see the two Friesdens superimposed over eachother.

"Friesden, run!  I don't want to hurt you!  I don't know what's real and I can't let anypony near me in case they're Cockroach in disguise!  Please, Friesden, get away from me before I hurt you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 02:19:38 am
"Please, Khenal! Snap out of this madness!"

"Khenal, you must not do this! You're acting like a crazy pony."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:25:11 am
I start shaking and trying to back away from the Friesdens, only barely able to keep hold of Carrot's Loyalty.

"I don't know what's true right now, Friesden!  I can't trust anything!  Cockroach has gotten too deep, I don't know what to believe any more!"


***********
Is Impending Doom still on?  I have something massive planned, and it'd work better if he's here to contribute.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 02:28:15 am
Khenal suddenly sees the room flashing nonstop between normal and covered in blood with bodies of dismembered ponies and guts strewn everywhere. His vision begins to blur to a reddish color.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 02:32:29 am
"Khenal, come on. I lo-"

"ve to save lives, and you can help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 02:33:00 am
In the real world, Two hastily-dressed pegasi come galloping up the stairwell into the open air. They cross the courtyard towards Friesden and Khenal.

"What's going on here? Friesden, what's wrong with him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 02:33:41 am
"I.. I don't know. He was muttering something about a daemon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:38:41 am
"No...Cockroach...lies...everywhere..."

************
Khenal could use some of that trademark Starkey brutal honesty about now.  ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 02:39:55 am
'Goddess, why does this happen to all of my friends? Is this some kind of curse?'

"Khenal, can you hear me? What is it doing to you, what do you see?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 02:41:22 am
"That's right...Now...please kill Friesden, before she kills you! THERE'S NO WAY THAT THE REAL FRIESDEN WOULD DO THAT, SO THE ONLY WAY TO STOP THIS MADNESS IS TO KILL HER! KILL IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Screams Cockroach. Scenes of blood and gore are appearing faster and faster and the blur is becoming fog, Khenal is beginning to snap.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:43:57 am
"...Starkey...?...Blood...lies...Friesdens..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 02:49:46 am
Friesdens?

"Friesden, go inside, hurry!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 02:52:20 am
Khenal is now only seeing the gore filled version of the world, driving Khenal berserk.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:57:07 am
'Starkey?'

My mind flashes to my memories of Starkey and his brutal honesty.  His unique ability to get to the heart of a matter, to find the path when others try to hide it.  To cleave away the lies.


"Cockroach!" I scream, an axe apearing in my mental landscape.  I swing it with all my might, somehow knowing just where Cockroach is hiding.  In the path of the axe, the fog of blood and gore parts and dissapates.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:02:11 am
Sadly, although Khenal hits Cockroach, destroying him for good, he also hit Friesden pretty hard with the blade on the real knife Psycho gave him. The scenes of blood and gore vanish, replaced by real blood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:06:36 am
"FRIESDEN!"

I drop the knife, horrified at what I've done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:06:46 am
((music http://www.youtube.com/user/CapoProductionz#p/u/1/Sty7tvJfR8I))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:11:38 am
((Knew I shouldn't have turned my back on this.....))

"Khenal," she says weakly. "I...I love you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 03:14:01 am
Starkey is quick to react, rushing to the injured mare's side and checking her wounds.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:14:27 am
"What the hay is all the...commotion...about...I don't want to know..." Psycho says as he walks in. As soon as he sees what's going on, he just walks backwards all the way back to his bedroom and closes the door. He's had it with the insanity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:18:20 am
"Khenal...Khenal...come closer....please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:20:13 am
I gently reach out my hoof to touch hers, afraid she might shatter like glass at any moment.

"I...I love you, too.  So much, Friesden..."

I begin sobbing, holding her hoof while Starkey checks her wounds.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 03:21:34 am
"I... clop... I told her to run... why didn't you run?"

Starkey tears the shirt from his back and presses it to the wound, trying to stop the bleeding.

"Otik, I-I don't think we can carry her like this. Fetch the doctor, bring him here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:23:28 am
"I...I...forgive...you...Khenal...Come...closer..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:24:53 am
((Keeper might be able to help :-\))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:29:53 am
I get closer and look Friesden in her beautiful rust-colored eyes, torrents of tears flowing from my own.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:30:49 am
((KISS THE GIRL!!!!!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:32:10 am
((love. http://www.youtube.com/user/CapoProductionz#p/u/8/O7zj-We6Q1I))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:32:16 am
"Finish...what...we...were...doing."


Friesden is having trouble breathing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 03:35:24 am
Starkey does his best to stem the blood flow.

"Hold on sweetheart, I know you can, just a few more minutes. You bested a daemon, this should be nothing to you, where is that damn doctor!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:36:55 am
((want me to be the doc until he gets back?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 23, 2011, 03:38:35 am
where is that damn doctor!?"

Should Doctor Bubbles not be online. I would point out that in my last fortress update I noted that the NPC Doctor Alen had been released from his punishment. So One of you could assume control of him and let him try and save her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:39:27 am
I lean in to give Friesden the kiss she deserves.  A kiss to let her know how much she means to me, to let her know how sorry I am, how much I need her.  Gentle and firm, warm and loving: my kiss for only Friesden.

**********

We have a nameless doctor or two, I think?  Ah, Impending Doom derp, KingStrongBeard! with the ninja to confirm it

Edited for derp
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:39:38 am
It's a trope. I can't find it on TvTropes, but it is a trope all the same.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:40:30 am
Friesden kisses Khenal back, the love in her eyes evident.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:49:44 am
Doctor Alen rushes in, shoving Khenal and Starkey aside.
"OUT OF THE WAY! IF YOU WANT TO STAY WITH THE PATIENT, KEEP UP WITH ME!" He hollers, quickly slinging Friesden over his should and making a mad dash for the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:50:55 am
"Khenal....I feel...warm..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:52:01 am
((Oh dear...umm...I can't fix that now... :-[))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:54:23 am
((Why not? Unless she's got hypothermia....))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:55:19 am
((DOES SHE?! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a1Y73sPHKxw))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:58:09 am
I keep pace with the doctor, never letting go of Friesden's hoof.

'Warm?  Is that good or bad?'


"Shh, save your strength."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 04:00:08 am
"Okay."

Friesden gets quiet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 04:02:45 am
As they approach the hospital, Alen turns to Khenal and says, "Khenal, i'm afraid that i'm going to need time to diagnose her...i'm sure you understand."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:03:30 am
God damn it. Was spending all my time reading this, and didn't reply until now. 12 pages really is something.
I'll assume that I can take control of the hospital staff, as is most appropriate.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Not that bad!"

EDIT: GOD DAMN IT THE MASTER! STOP NINJAING ME!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 04:04:04 am
"I'm not leaving her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:04:54 am
((The master, I would like to ask that you cross out that last bit. I'm here now and I have something very good planned.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 04:05:28 am
((Crossed out, all yours.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:06:30 am
"Khenal, I'm not sure but I think she can't breathe! She needs MOUTH TO MOUTH NOW!"

((XD. It's finally time for me to start messing things up.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 04:07:57 am
((THAT was...THAT WAS IT?! YOU SUCK...:P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:08:32 am
((Trust me. That's not all. I just need them to do exactly as I've planned.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 04:10:11 am
((ANYONE BOTHER LOOKING AT THE TIME!? I was trying to wrap things up because it's at least one o'clock for poor Khenal...IT'S 4:09 AM FOR ME! facehoof.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 04:10:56 am
"I don't know how!"


*********

Ah, subtlety.  Also, Khenal has no medical training at all.  Not even a little.  He can follow directions, but he has no clue how to heal ponies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 04:11:34 am
(('Your girlfriend is dying and I'm going to snog her' not good enough for you, Master?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:11:51 am
((lol. It's 4 pm for me here. Living in SEAsia makes it really hard to respond. I normally am able to respond as soon as I get home from school))

"In it's simplest fashion, just kiss her and breathe into her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 04:13:46 am
((What're you talking about Doom, I killed Kil...her head was yummie...and...stuff... ;D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 04:14:46 am
I do as the doctor instructs, praying Friesden will be alright.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:15:45 am
((Oh come on. Try to enjoy what I'm making you do?))

"Keep it up until I can get her to the hospital. Hopefully Doctor Bubbles is in"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 04:18:20 am
((That tears it, i'm going to bed! SLEEP WELL, WHENEVER YOU BATS DO! :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 04:19:27 am
I can't wait to see what you have cooked up.  Khenal, however, is a bit too preoccupied with his new-found love's survival to enjoy anything :P  G'nite, The Master!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:20:47 am
((Now would be a good time, Dsarker.))
*They arrive at the hospital door, and the doctor bucks the door open.*
((Bubbles))
"Wha.....what the heck is going on???!?!?!?!??!?!?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 04:21:22 am
Friesden somehow manages to survive Alen's bungling as they get her to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:24:05 am
((Btw, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zENVPssSIkw&feature=watch_response))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 04:38:06 am
"Less silly questions and more saving Friesden, please!"

***********

Fading fast....But stuff happening.....
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:39:09 am
"OK then. Set her down in that bed, and Khenal, you keep MtMing her while I operate on her lungs!"

((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vyE1z0PiJt8&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 04:44:43 am
I close my eyes and continue breathing for Friesden, trying not to think about what Dr. Bubbles is doing.

**********

Man, that's a creepy image.  But, it's not like the iron lung or anything similar has been invented yet.  Looks like we're going with a sucking chest wound for what Khenal actually did to Friesden.  Makes sense.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:46:21 am
*I close the puncture wound in the lung.*
"Khenal, try and shock her just to make sure she is able to breathe properly."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 04:54:48 am
'I'm getting far too much practice at this spell...'

My horn crackles with the electricity of the shock spell before I release it into Friesden's heart.



***********

Definitely getting tired.  My first instinct to shock her was to tell her that her father was here.  I'm sure that'd shock her ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 04:55:47 am
She'd just ask "Who?"


Anyway, ich war einfach gerhorcen Befehle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 04:56:00 am
((No, I don't think it would. She doesn't even remember who he is, remember?))

EDIT: I'm surrounded by ninjas...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 04:57:35 am
((Oh lol. You speak German Dsarker? Anyways, get to RPing people. I'm waiting for you to say something.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 05:00:19 am
((No, but I can do a damn fine impersonation))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 05:01:00 am
((No, I don't think it would. She doesn't even remember who he is, remember?))

EDIT: I'm surrounded by ninjas...
She'd just ask "Who?"


Anyway, ich war einfach gerhorcen Befehle.

Right, dur.  Did I mention I'm tired?  Cause I am :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 05:01:53 am
Meh, go get some rest you three. I'm wading knee deep in HW right now, so y'all can go now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 05:06:17 am
Don't gotta tell me twice.  G'nite everypony!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 23, 2011, 05:06:25 am
((Aye, it is that time. Goodnight.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 05:08:44 am
Night
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 06:22:23 am
Friesden wakes.

"Khenal," she says, then coughs twice. "I'm so sorry."

She falls silent.


((That's all I'm going to post for 8 hours. Have a nice sleep, everyone!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 06:45:38 am
((Dsarker, weren't you asleep?))
*Hearing Friesden talk, Bubbles looks up from the desk and stares.*
"You...You're back to normal? No Daemons, no insane psychopathic murders, no nothing? "
FAKE EDIT:
Oh, nvm.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 02:09:03 pm
((Australian. I go to sleep at about 10:00 PM my time))


Friesden remains silent for a minute, then says "When you can't run, you crawl. When you can't crawl, when you can't even do that anymore..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:17:59 pm
"...You are carried by those who love you.  Please, Friesden.  Don't...Don't leave."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 02:18:19 pm
Psycho heads to Khenal's office, assuming -incorrectly of course- that he's there.
"Khenal? Do you know what happened to my book on CPR? I lost it again!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 02:20:01 pm
"I...I only wish we could have been together for a bit longer. We would have been good together."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:25:07 pm
"D-don't talk like that, Friesden.  You...You'll be alright."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 02:28:24 pm
"If...If you say so..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:31:43 pm
I gently stroke Friesden's back with a wing, wishing I could take her pain.

'...Keeper?
  Will she be alright?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 02:34:10 pm
"Hmmm? Sorry, I was napping. Will who be alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 02:44:06 pm
'Friesden.  I...She was stabbed.  Dr Bubbles patched her up, but she seems so weak.  I'm scared, Keeper.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 02:50:52 pm
The Keeper's face morphs briefly into that of Schmoe.

"Allow me to put it delicately. If Friesden dies, the next thing you will know is this. You're awake. You're facing me. But you won't be armed."

The face changes back.

"Of course, my time I won. But don't be too sure this time."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:12:37 pm
I barely register Schmoe's threat, not wanting to even consider the possibility that Friesden might die.

'Keeper, back in the jail with Carrot, you said something about a transfusion.  What is it?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:16:03 pm
"In laypony's terms, you take somepony else's blood and put it into another pony. Unless Friesden has suffered profuse blood loss, it shouldn't be necessary."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:25:47 pm
'There was a lot of blood, but not as much as Carrot in the jail...'

I sigh and hang my head.


"I just wish I could do something..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:26:43 pm
"Just...be by my side, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:31:35 pm
"Always."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:33:35 pm
"I feel sleepy. So sleepy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:35:23 pm
((You know, if this was just a story, this would be the perfect time for Friesden to exhale, and not inhale.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:39:41 pm
Heh, and break Khenal clean in half.  In other news, transcribing more of Glitterglen.  A surprising amount of people are apparently reading it, and even enjoying it! :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:40:43 pm
Have you gotten up to Friesden's murder yet?


Also, soundtrack.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BM5vDvi4mXY
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:42:16 pm
((Yeah...if it were anytime for friesden to expire...It's now. :'( PERFECT MUSIC!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:46:47 pm
((I try.


Anyway, I'm liking Friesden!Nice. No killing off yet.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:50:44 pm
((To be honest, I'm horrid when it comes to playing husband AND wife AND kids all at the same time! I think Psycho will end up killing his family off later for real this time.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 03:53:51 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K_1uK67mQm0 if Friesden does really die, this might fit Khenal/Schmoe))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 03:58:45 pm
Got the murder a chapter or two ago, transcribing the discovery right now, actually.  Literally, I'm on StrongBeard's post where he asks Khenal to lead the new Guard.

Ya, that song sounds about right.  Assuming Schmoe doesn't kill Khenal ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 03:58:47 pm
((how ironic, I already put this up before! IT'S STILL PERFECT!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 04:09:06 pm
And then how will Starkey react?

I can foresee this line coming from his mouth.

"No, son. You murdered yourself. I just carried the bolt a while."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 04:28:09 pm
Man, Khenal isn't going to get away from having to execute one of his friends, is he?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 05:03:32 pm
Unless Friesden survives, no.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 05:38:31 pm
((where'd everyone go?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 05:43:47 pm
I'm still here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 05:46:08 pm
I'm in and out.  Making some food right now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 06:16:11 pm
((I'll only be here for awhile.))
"Khenal, I have some good news, and some bad news. Which one do you want to hear first?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 06:20:48 pm
((Bad news!

"She's going to have to lose her limbs. They're going to have to come off."

:P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 06:23:50 pm
"The bad news first, please."

I keep my wing across Friesden, never moving far from her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 06:25:34 pm
Friesden appears to be breathing peacefully.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 06:29:46 pm
"It's not that bad, actually. She will just have a permanent scar where your knife cut her."
"The good news... Is that she will survive and go back to normal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thetyler101 on November 23, 2011, 06:30:44 pm
(Hey guys, lost my internet for a wile there did I miss any-)
page 170

(Sweet fuck-mothery!)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 06:33:11 pm
((What page were you on till you lost it?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 06:33:20 pm
(Hey guys, lost my internet for a wile there did I miss any-)
page 170

(Sweet fuck-mothery!)

Hey tyler. I hope you don't mind that I asked Venture to become a doctor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 23, 2011, 06:35:31 pm
(thetyler! Your alive! I had pronounced you dead! Glad to see you're back.
As you may have noticed Venture is all grown up. I had asked for someone to take him as an apprentice or something and Doctor Bubbles stood up to do that. However, I haven't actually played the game since he did and thus if you have any different ideas about Venture's future please say so.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 23, 2011, 06:37:04 pm
Yeah, I asked him to be my Apprentice. All for RP purposes. gtg! Act like i'm just talking to you two, now that Friesden's situation is stable.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 06:43:20 pm
I visibly deflate, relieved that my beloved isn't gone. 

"Thank you, Bubbles, for saving her.  I can't thank you enough for what you've done."

I stay by Friesden's side for the next few hours, hoping to be there when she awakens.

***********
Ya, you only missed....a whole ton of stuff, TheTyler  ;)  Welcome back!

In other news, got another chapter  (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2892/Glitterglen)finished on the transcription.  That makes... almost 150 posts transcribed and...over 2000 to go.  To quote Rarity: "What have I gotten myself into?" :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 06:44:08 pm
Friesden starts to stir.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 06:54:51 pm
I lay aside my thoughts on what to tell Charity and how to continue the investigation when I notice Friesden start to stir.  I shift position to be ready to give her a smile when she awakes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 06:57:17 pm
Friesden eventually awakes and slowly blinks open her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 07:03:31 pm
"Good morning, my Love."

"...Or is it evening now?"

I take on a contemplative look before realizing it doesn't really matter and give Friesden a gentle kiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 07:09:18 pm
Friesden enjoys the gentle touch of her lover's lips, and returns it
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 07:15:22 pm
"How are you feeling?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 07:16:06 pm
"Better, now." She kisses him again. "How are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 07:24:27 pm
I close my eyes for her kiss, before opening them again and answer.

"Also better.  I was terrified I had...had..."

I close my eyes to fight the tears, before nuzzling Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 07:32:32 pm
"Shush...it's all going to be all right now. It's all going to be all right..."


Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 07:41:08 pm
((thetyler...you dropped out at the worst time! In a nutshell, Psycho went mad twice I think, we had three or so more daemon battles, Khenal fell in love with Friesden, Khenal wiped Friesden memory, then they kiss and now it's all lovey-dovey...Oh, and Psycho is now the current Psychopath, meaning Dsarker passed the reins of madness to me.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 07:43:27 pm
I bawl like a newborn foal in the embrace of the one I love, the embrace of the one I almost killed.  The dam is broken, my fears pouring out my eyes as I simply let it all flow.  Pain, guilt, sorrow, all flowing in my tears and sobs.

************

Yep, new couple mushiness for the last several pages. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 07:45:33 pm
((Deploying surprise in three more posts.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 07:46:20 pm
Friesden just holds Khenal tight, letting him cry on her shoulder.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 07:47:07 pm
((...two...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 07:55:45 pm
((Kidding, It happens now! Here's a hint, remember that letter that Khenal was given?))
Khenal remembers that he still hasn't read the letter he was given yesterday.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 08:04:34 pm
Eventually the tide recedes, leaving me exhausted, but a bit more clearheaded.  I stay in my love's embrace for a few minutes more, gathering strength from her warmth, before reluctantly taking a step back.

'I can't stay here all day, no matter how much I want to.  How much I really want to.  I need to give Charity my findings on the investigation, and ask her something as well.'

My motion causes the forgotten letter to crinkle in my armor, reminding me of it's presence.



****************

That's from Carrot, wasn't it?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 08:06:10 pm
"Go, my love. I will await your return."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 08:09:48 pm
((No, the letter was from a random pony that gave you the letter then ran off.))
The letter says, 'Khenal, you're in grave danger. Please, for your own safety, get to the top of the tower and meet me there.' you also notice that it's written in blood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 08:15:04 pm
"Be well, my Love."

I turn and leave, giving Friesden one last glance before exiting the hospital.

'Duty calls...'  My horn glows as I levitate out the note to read, my hooves beating a steady path towards Charity's chambers.

The contents of the letter quickly changes my destination.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 08:16:07 pm
As soon as Khenal finishes reading the letter it bursts into a tiny flame and turns to ash.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 08:19:46 pm
The letter's immolation quickens my pace.  As I get to the surface, I flare my wings out and fly to the top of the tower as fast as they can carry me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 08:23:47 pm
Khenal makes it to the top step before nearly smashing into a pony he'd never seen before.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
"You made it!" Sighs the blue Pegasus.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 08:28:38 pm
I take a few steps back form this strange pony and look around, confused.

"Is...everything alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 08:29:55 pm
THAHT PEGASUS IS A SPAH!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 08:33:47 pm
"NO! MY DEAR COLT, IF EVERYTHING WERE ALRIGHT, I WOULDN'T HAVE HAD TO DISMEMBER SOMEPONY TO WRITE THAT LETTER!"
Yells the Pegasus, getting in Khenal's face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 08:41:35 pm
My horn flashes as I push this strange pegasus back.  My expression hardens as I take in what he just said.

"Explain yourself.  Quickly."

**********
Edited for derp
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 08:48:07 pm
"I SAY! Quick to get to the point, eh? Alright, but first, I need to know I can trust y-" He notices Khenal expression "Oh...I say. The issue is that there's an assassin running about, but I know who the fiend is! THE CHAP'S NAM-" The poor Pegasus suddenly slumps to the ground, dead as can be.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 08:55:11 pm
I warily approach the motionless pegasus, keeping my eyes peeled for anything suspicious from him or elsewhere.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 08:58:01 pm
The body bursts into flames and disintegrates, burning Khenal slightly. Khenal hears heavy breathing behind him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 09:01:38 pm
I turn towards the breathing, charging my horn with a telekinesis spell.

********

Man, Khenal really needs to learn to keep his freaking spear with him :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 09:05:07 pm
It's another dream. Cockroach isn't dead yet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 09:07:34 pm
Khenal nearly falls off the tower when he sees Psycho standing right there...with a blowdart gun in his mouth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 09:14:01 pm
"Carrot?"

I keep the spell ready, unwilling to lower it or my guard.

'Something is wrong...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 09:24:47 pm
Carrot simply blows the a dart at Khenal, embedding itself in Khenal's neck(non-lethal). The world begins to get fuzzy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 09:33:05 pm
"What...What did you do?"

The energy in my horn starts bleeding away as whatever was in that dart starts to take effect.

"That pegasus..."  My question goes unfinished as my eyes start to lose focus and I sit roughly.

"Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 09:36:15 pm
"Khenal...I am the assassin...." I say as everything fades to black.
Khenal wakes up in a dark wooden tunnel with flames slowly engulfing one end of it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 10:01:02 pm
I look around the strange tunnel before getting an anoyed expression.

'Cockroach is far to accurate a name for that daemon.  And I'm tired of his games.'

With a powerful buck, I shatter the nearest wall of this wooden tunnel.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 10:06:47 pm
www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXLDv-fUINM
Khenal nearly falls into the oblivion that is below.
Meanwhile in the real world...
Khenal's managed to jump off the tower and is gliding over the jungle.

((here's something to note: you can still feel things that are in the real world.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 10:15:36 pm
I smile before spreading my wings and flying into the nothingness beyond.  My horn glows like a lantern, helping guide me towards my target.

'You are in my brier patch, Cockroach.  It's time I show you the error of following me in.'


*********

Time to remind a certain Daemon who's mind he's in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 10:21:27 pm
"A valiant effort...but will you be so calm without keeper to guide you? Let's just say he's a little tied up right now..." Snarls Cockroach.
Meanwhile in a different part of Khenal's mind...

"...SHUT UP ALREADY! I DON'T CARE ABOUT THE ANSWER TO PI! STOP TALKING!!!!!!!!" Whines Cockroach as Keeper literally is begining to bore him to death.
((Feel free to voice Keeper, Dsarker.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 10:33:42 pm
I smirk at Cockroach's taunt.  After all, this is my mind.  Why would I need a guide?  I quicken my pace anyway, following my horn.  He may not be my guide, but he's still my friend.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 10:36:11 pm
((You have made a terrible mistake. A mistake that goes by the name of Iacton.))

"Yes, I agree. The answer to π is terribly easy. The real question is the second last digit, which is actually 4. The importance of this digit is immense! You literally cannot go a day without the digit entering into it. You know why there are twelve months and four seasons? 4. Because of the 4, you can trust that every thirty days you will have experienced one twelth of the year. It's because of Kryten's Conjunction that we can even predict the four. Kryten it was who predicted a year's dates and the sequence of months and seasons, and it is Kryten who established the dating system. That's why we have the month of Obsidian, which as you might know has the same etymology as Kryten does. However, they were used in quite different contexts. Kryten is far more of the informal version, whereas you would use Obsidian in a formal context. Which is quite interesting, actually, because it was typically K words which were the formal type. To understand the reasoning behind this, we have to dig to the origin of the language, which of course you should know. Every schoolfoal gets taught this. Anyway, the word Obsidian was preferred by the twenty-third ruler of Klatch, and so it was accepted as the formal version while he reigned. However, due to a population explosion, there were far too many ponies using Obsidian as the formal to switch it back, and so it stuck. Interesting, don't you think?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 10:39:27 pm
Cockroach, in polite response, Grabs Keeper by the head and throws him off into the distance.
"AND STAY QUIET!!!!!!!!" Yells Cockroach.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 10:48:04 pm
"No, sorry! I can't! You see, it was the third incantation against daemons which forced them to constantly speak. And by a common coincidence, the fourth incantation prevents any other incantation from being placed on or removed from the daemon. I am physically, mentally, socially, and daemonically unable to keep from speaking. And worse, you'll find that in this mind you will never be able to escape from the sound of my voice. All of this I am terribly sorry about, but it is immutable. You'll have to either die or leave this place forever. Until you do either, you will constantly hear my voice, and it is only amplified by your harming of Friesden. Well, I can't really say I'm sorry about it, really. You caused Friesden, my light, my life, my song, my love, the source of all good things, to be wounded. You will suffer, I am happy to note, for a long time. A long time, incidentally, is a phrase and idiom lost to ancient times, but which used to be the slang for death, torture, and punishment. For example, someone who was punished 'a long time' would be the slang for someone being executed. This is, of course, before pony times. Ponies have emerged only relatively recently, in the last five thousand years, but already they have accomplished many great things, Klatch being only the least among these great things. First, of course, comes the great Oaster of Mar, which is still lost, but legend says it has the power to turn the path of the sea. The same power was attributed to the god Ingest 1.5 thousand years ago, but was deemed heretical almost three hundred years ago, following a falling out between the Prime Archon and the Princess of Hollowfields. Interestingly, the war there was almost completely non violent. This is the third war that has resulted in less than five percent casualties in pony times."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 10:58:28 pm
Cockroach jump back to Khenal's part of the mind, grabs him by the wings, and twists them until they can no longer keep him afloat.
In the real world, Khenal is now plummeting out of the sky.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 11:05:33 pm
Friesden has walked out from the hospital, something telling her that something is wrong. She sees Khenal falling from the sky, and blazes forth to catch him.

"It's another interesting thought, but did you know that all ponies have ambient magic? Unicorns and alicorns can control it, of course, but all of them have it. Even the most mundane earth pony. It was this that allowed the famous assassin 'The Black Viper' to go undetected, as he was an earth pony who had learned to use his ambient magic to make himself unremarkable to onlookers. While the authorities were looking for an unicorn. But unicorns have been well known for their manual dexterity through the years, and it was this that allowed them to build the empire of Klatch right outside Hrul Rassp. They eventually conquered the Diomedian city and remade it in their image. This is the reason for the mural 'Catching Flight', which you might see in the capital. It was named for reference of the unicorn and pegasus dual attack, in which the unicorns held the diomedian flyers down long enough for the pegasus to make quick work of them. But then again, it was also well known that alicorns have much more power than unicorns. Their problem has typically been that of control as opposed to power. This, of course, has its own penalties, but with training an alicorn can, so it is said, turn day into night. Interesting, eh?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 11:10:46 pm
((Man, Khenal decides to bring the fight to Cockroach and I get writer's block  :'(  Hey look, an inspirational ninja!))

'I'm close, I can hear Cockroach.  Friesden is hurt because of him, no more mr nice alicorn.'

I douse the light from my horn and rocket towards Cockroach, intending to take him off guard with as much speed as I can imagine.  Unfortunately, it looks like he was expecting that.  I conjure terain for myself, bringing my haven around myself.

It resembles a Roman garden, marble columns and fountains with crystal clear water flowing.  Willows and flowers of all kinds are visible from the gazebo I now stand in.  Recent additions include several topiarys trimmed to look like Friesden, along with many statues of her.

I growl and buck Cockroach off my back, drawing Starkey's Honesty and charging him as he hits the ground.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 11:12:21 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXLDv-fUINM))
Just before cockroach hits the so-called-ground, Khenal hears that incressingly annoying bwong sound. Khenal's happy world explodes into flames, obliterating it. It's replaced by an infinite stone hallway, full of blood, guts, limbs, bodies, bodies without limbs, chickens without bodies, and other nonsensical...grimdark...ness...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 11:18:08 pm
Friesden continues to fly towards her stricken love.

"But of course you know the other two. First there was the 'Hundred Years' war. Ha, that was a laugh. War between the buffalo and the ponies. Neither using any weapons, and with a referee! Not as funny as the Rainbow/Rainbow war. At least it was fast, though. Otherwise it could have turned violent. Anyway, it was the Rainbow/Rainbow war which brought about the Kingdom of Domains. And without that, the Diomedian forces would have advanced another two miles in the Battle of Eating, and that would have cut off the Alicorn Princess Duvvia from her main force, and left her vulnerable. And that would have stopped this expedition short, with her being the only thing holding the ponies together. So without the Rainbows, this would never have happened. Strange, isn't it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 11:21:17 pm
Cockroach gives up being patient and jumps to where Keeper is, grabs him, and jumps back to the grimdark-hallway, and plops him down next to the whimpering Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 11:23:39 pm
"I've seen worse than this, Cockroach. Were you even trying? Need I remind you, I was at the Rape of Lanchest, and that didn't faze me in the least. At least try throwing something horrible in next time. My goodness, man, you've done better sleeping. Oh no, it's an infinite hallway! Oh no, dead bodies! Oh, no!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 11:23:55 pm
"Perfect."

I cease my ruse and wave Starkey's Honesty, my horn flashing as I assert my will.  In the path of the axe, the gruesome scenery reverts back, but not completely.  The garden becomes a patchwork of nightmare and dream, gruesome hallway clashing with green grass and white marble, both scenes fighting for dominance.

I charge Cockroach, Honesty raised high.



**************

I just realized, I have no idea what Cockroach looks like.  I can aim at head and torso just fine, but detail on what he looks like would be nice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 11:26:39 pm
Friesden flies just under Khenal, and in the nick of time, catches him before he hits the ground.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 11:33:47 pm
((I'll make a picture of him and post it later.))
"Funny...I didn't see this one coming. Fu-" Mutters Cockroach before being sliced in half, sending a grimdark spray of blood, intestines, gore, and other parts of the body, left and right. The gore scene also takes dominance and refuses to vanish, despite Cockroach being dead for the day.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 11:37:52 pm
"Khenal? Are you...are you alright?" asks Friesden anxiously.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 11:42:07 pm
'Hmm, not good.  He's making progress.  Any suggestions, Keeper?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 11:44:16 pm
"I've got nothing. Daemons are, despite what you may think, not well known. There are the seven incantations against the daemonic, of course, but nothing that could kill him easily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 11:46:57 pm
'Anything to make him just stay put or take his power away?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 11:49:04 pm
"The only thing that can do that is learning the daemon's true name, whatever it is. You'll need to get that from somewhere else, though, as I do not know it. It is possible Psycho Carrot might know it...but don't trust in it."


Friesden lands and lowers Khenal from her back carefully.

"Khenal? Are you okay? Can you hear me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 23, 2011, 11:55:56 pm
'I was afraid it might be something like that.'

As I break my trance, I hear Friesden's concerned voice and see her worried face.


"Friesden!  Are you alright?"

**********
Edited for more derp.  I'm on a roll today.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 23, 2011, 11:57:30 pm
((I didn't know you could hear faces! ::)))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 23, 2011, 11:58:10 pm
"Am I alright? You were falling from the sky! Are your wings hurt?"

There's a look of anxiety on her face, a little relieved now that Khenal is responding.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 12:06:56 am
I give my wing an experimental flap, but it doesn't respond properly.  It doesn't hurt, at least.

'Looks like he damaged my memories of flying with that trick.'

"They don't hurt, but I don't think I'll be flying for a while.  I'm just glad you're safe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 12:08:46 am
The look of anxiety returns. "You can't fly? Will... Will it fix itself?"

She suddenly grabs Khenal and holds him tight. "I was so worried...I'm just glad you're safe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 12:13:27 am
I gladly accept Friesden's embrace, closing my eyes.

"It should, it'll just take time."

After several moments of bliss, I open my eyes and notice our surroundings for the first time.

"...Where are we?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 12:15:35 am
"Just outside the jungle. Quick, let's get back to the fortress. Maybe one of the doctors will know how to fix your wings."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 12:18:28 am
Khenal sees the body of the blue pegasus on the tower in the distance, and it slowly dawns on Khenal that the poor soul really DID die.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 12:20:47 am
"The fort sounds like a good idea, but I'll need to take a raincheck for the doctors.  I need to talk to Charity about her assassin."

My horn glows as I levitate the body of the unknown pegasus.

'And I need to resign my position as Captain of the Guard.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 12:26:15 am
"What are you doing with your horn, my love?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 12:29:44 am
The name 'Glacier Chap' flashes in Khenal's mind, scaring the daylights out of Keeper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 12:31:31 am
As we enter the gates, I levitate the body down where Friesden is sure to see it.

'I almost hope it's all in my head.  At least then nopony will have died.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 12:33:26 am
The body is indeed real. It's not too late to save him though.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 12:36:16 am
"Khenal...love...who is this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 12:37:41 am
the name 'Glacier Chap' pulses in Khenal's head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 12:42:06 am
"...Glacier Chap?  I think?  I...I saw him on the tower, and then things went weird again.  I'm not sure what happened."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 12:43:57 am
The look of concern comes back into Friesden's eyes.

"We'll...we'll get through this, my love. We'll get through this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 12:44:13 am
Khenal hears a new voice in his head.
'I DO SAY, BUT IF YOU DO NOT HURRY UP AND SAVE GLACIER, THAT POOR FELLOW WILL HAVE A QUITE DREADFUL DEATH!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 12:48:14 am
((scene music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8zCjHftxt8E&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 12:49:44 am
My eyes widen and I almost drop this new pegasus when I hear this new voice.

"He's alive!  Come on!"

I break into a galop, levitating Glacier Chap with me as I rush to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 12:51:18 am
Friesden follows him, a slight trepidation in her heart.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 12:52:48 am
'Oh, and do allow me to introduce myself. My name is Butler. I am Keeper's Cousin, and I can most assuredly tell you that he's as dreadfully talkative as always!'
((EAT THAT DSARKER! :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 01:01:23 am
((Keeper doesn't have a cousin. He's a construct of Schmoe's, designed specifically so that Schmoe can be incarnated.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 01:02:03 am
For once, there's actually a doctor on duty and not busy at the hospital.  Though she isn't Dr. Bubbles, Dr. Alen is available.


****************

Ya, no medical miracle stuff from Khenal this time.  We have trained professionals who can treat wounds, they really should get their chance to shine.

Also, Khenal's head is becoming a freaking clowncar :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 01:05:10 am
Alen is a medical buffoon. But at least he has a licence to malpractice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 01:09:08 am
He's better than Khenal, who only barely qualifies as equipment.  Specifically, and iron lung and defibrillator :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 01:16:39 am
Well, at least he's consistent. He'll screw up today, like he does every other day. I call that consistent. When he makes a mistake he's not smart enough to admit it and start over. He's inconsiderate, insulting to the nurses, bloody arrogant, demanding, distracting and dumb! And those are his good points. He's surgically incompetent. I wouldn't let him operate on me for dandruff!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 01:19:01 am
AHEM! back to roleplay?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 01:20:06 am
"What happened to that pony? Did....did you have anything to do with it, Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 01:22:44 am
"I..."

I hang my head.

"I don't know.  I don't remember hurting him, but I don't exactly trust my memory right now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 01:26:15 am
((So far I own...Psycho and Glacier. WHERE'S A SHUGPONY WHEN YOU NEED IT?!))
Psycho trots into the hospital to have his left front hoof checked out. It's hurting quite alot after knocking on Khenal's office door for five hours straight.
"Hey guys-" He sees Friesden, "ysug yeH" Psycho says backwords as he trots backwards out of the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 01:29:16 am
"Okay..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 01:31:14 am
"Ugh...NURSE! who let this filth in the hospital AGAIN?!" Complains Doctor Alen. As usual, he's tired, angry, underpaid, and really wants a drink.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 01:33:35 am
((So far I own...Psycho, Alen, and Glacier...why me? WHERE'S A SHUGPONY WHEN YOU NEED IT?!))

Ah, I didn't know you claimed Alen as well.  I thought he was another npc pony.  Well, get to fixing yourself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 01:35:45 am
((I didn't officially, but I was the first one to control him directly, correct? Edited aforementioned post to reflect this.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 01:39:14 am
((I didn't officially, but I was the first one to control him directly, correct?))

Correct, but he's an NPC and I'd rather he'd stay as such. His job means he comes up often, but I'd rather not have him be fully owned by one player. Just sort of used by whoever when it comes up. Specifically, when Bubbles isn't available and the plot needs a doctor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 01:41:13 am
((FIXED! I edited out the world ending issue!  :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 01:43:36 am
Alen begins the delicate procedure by accidentally pulling on Friesden tail, sneezing all over the patient, and then leaving for his break.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 01:46:19 am
Alen is actually a she, and a unicorn if that ever becomes important.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 01:46:46 am
"...Uh..."


*********

So, a description of how he's injured would be nice. :P  Remember, Khenal had no weapon when he went to the tower.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 01:49:16 am
((Alen is now male. Runesmith him to be male.


:P))


"He seems a little....disorganised?" says Friesden sheepishly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 01:58:04 am
Khenal takes a closer look at Glacier, and sees that Glacier is covered head to hoof with tiny scars, all in the shape of a bite.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 02:01:02 am
"Um, I guess we should clean these?"  I ask Friesden, pointing at the bite-marks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 02:04:15 am
Friesden shrugs. "You know more than me, my love."

She looks around for a water source.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 02:07:02 am

She looks around for a water source.

(The well is in the hospital, right next to the beds.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 02:07:15 am
Psycho valiantly trots in, ignoring the very presence of Friesden until upon seeing Khenal, to which he splutters,
"I thought I put you dow- I MEAN, Hi Khenal...and...F-f-f-f-friesd-d-den..."
When he heard Friesden say 'love' to Khenal he instantly collapses.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 02:14:53 am
I quirk an eyebrow at Carrot's odd behavior, but give it little thought.  After all: he's Carrot.  With the help of my beloved, we get to cleaning the wounds of Glacier Chap.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 02:16:28 am
((I'm temped to make Carrot break the fourth wall, just to prove that he's Pinkie Pie's brother.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 02:21:56 am
((If he does that, I'm going to have Slag come in and break Cockroach.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 02:25:37 am
((don't tempt me further! :D))
As Khenal cleans the wounds, he hears Butler say,
'...FOR THE LAST TIME YOU BUFFOON, WHILE YOU'RE BUSY MUKING ABOUT, CLEANING UP BLOODY BITE MARKS, YOU HAVE FAILED TO CHECK GLACIER'S HEARTBEAT! DO SO NOW BEFORE I STRANGLE KEEPER!!!!!!' Yells butler, clearly distressed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 02:27:02 am
((I'd do it. He'd love to torture a being that can't be killed.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 02:31:34 am
'...I don't think he actually breathes, but fine.'

I try to find Glacier's pulse, checking several places.



************
Personally, I can never find a pulse.

Also, leave the poor 4th wall alone.  It never did anything to hurt you.  There there, 4th wall.  Want to get some icecream?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 02:44:30 am
Khenal finds a weak pulse, steadily slowly down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 02:45:11 am
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DZ87DAa79iQ scene music))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 02:51:54 am
'That can't be good.  Keeper, any advice on how to keep a heart going, instead of trying to restart it?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 02:52:44 am
Butler lets go of Keeper's throat to let him speak.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 02:55:38 am
The Keeper shrugs.

"How in the nine hells and all that is below it would I know? I can't tell you anything Friesden or Schmoe doesn't know. Neither of them are particularly interested in keeping hearts going. Friesden's more of the stopping them, and Schmoe is more of the doesn't care, type. And get this fool of a thing out of our head, why don't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 02:58:06 am
'I SAY, HOW RUDE! I HAVE AS MUCH RIGHT TO BE IN HERE AS YOU, SQUATTER!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 03:03:44 am
'So this is what crazy is.  No wonder insane people are so irritable.'

I begin charging my shock spell, though not to full power.

'Hopefully, a small shock will keep a heart going.  It doesn't look like anypony else has any better ideas.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 03:05:23 am
"Now, that I know. Shocks can stop the heart beating."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 03:07:35 am
'I do have to agree with Keeper here, it is quite possible that shocking the poor chap could cause his rather fragile heart to stop.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 03:13:08 am
"Khenal, get this idiot out of our head!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 03:15:55 am
I grumble as I let the magical energy bleed away instead of being cast.

'I miss being the only one in my head.  So, Mr. Butler, any ideas on how to keep his heart beating and you back in his head instead of mine?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 03:26:18 am
'Very perceptive! I must admit I was curious to see how long it would take for you to understand that i'm actually Glacier Chap's mind. At any rate, I have no idea in any way, shape, body, form, cube...' and he continued to ramble forever, until he was interrupted by...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 03:29:30 am
By the Keeper shouting "We don't care who you are, we just want you OUT!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 03:33:15 am
'THAT TEARS IT! YOU'RE GOING DOWN YA BLOODY BLABBER MOUTH!'
Butler picks up a lamp that just happened to exist, and throws it at Keeper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 03:35:12 am
The Keeper shifts into the being of Schmoe, a long, thing, humanoid made of mouths. It stretches out one armed and the teeth elongate and tear the lamp to shreds.


DO NOT TEMPT ME.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 03:37:42 am
Butler transforms as well! He morphs into the most terrifying thing known to all of daemons: a rooster.
'COCKLE-DIDLE-DOOOOO!' screams the rooster before exploding into gore for no reason at all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 03:39:41 am
'Settle down, both of you!  Butler, don't touch my things!  Those are my memories and I like them just where they are!  Keeper, take it easy!'

Meanwhile, in the real world, I give Friesden a very tired look.


"I'm sorry, my love, but could you see if any of the nurses are about?  I don't think this pony is going to make it with just our help.  I...need to sit down.  Things are getting....crowded, and I need to concentrate."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 03:40:39 am
GOOD, hisses Schmoe. HE IS GONE AT LEAST FOR NOW. WHAT AN ANNOYING BEAST. He changes back into the Keeper.

Friesden starts at Khenal's voice. "Yes, of course, my love. Are you okay? Do you want me to see if a nurse can see you too?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 03:45:59 am
'I say, BOO!' giggles Butler, who had reassembled behind Keeper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 03:49:32 am
I smile at Friesden, though I feel a bit frayed.

"I don't think they are trained for what ails me.  Don't worry, I'll be alright."

'...I think.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 03:52:00 am
"Okay. I'll be right back," says Friesden, who gives Khenal a quick kiss before dashing off to find a nurse.


The Keeper transforms back into Schmoe, who wraps himself around the Butler, the tiny mouths eating through him gradually.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 03:58:03 am
'Can you two at least mutilate eachother quietly?  Ok, he's supposed to be in the head of this pegasus and not in mine.  Assuming he's still alive, this should be fairly simple.'

I attempt to link with the mind of the unconscious pegasus, hoping to dump this newcomer back where he came from.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:00:32 am
'OH, I'D LOVE TO LEAVE, BUT THIS FUCKING SHITHEAD WON'T LET ME! STOP EATING ME!!!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 04:03:50 am
'Schmoe!  Off!  He's leaving!  Unless you want to go with him?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:06:43 am
VERY WELL. The Keeper reappears, releasing the Butler. "Delicious."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:13:02 am
Butler gives Dsarker the cave swallow(middle finger), as he's a humanoid, then vanishes into a fine red mist.
((HAH! I BROKE THE FOURTH WALL! MWAHHAHAAHHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I STOLE IT'S ICE CREAM TOO!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:15:16 am
Where?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 24, 2011, 04:16:43 am
*Bubbles bucks down the office door for the second time.*
"Whats wrong? I heard Khenal and Friesden talking....oh."

((1. Bubbles really needs a new steel door.
2. Guys, I'd appreciate it if you didn't take my spot XD. try not to get to injuring anyone or other antics when I'm not here. ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:20:47 am
((THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU RUIN A PERFECTLY GOOD PLOT HOLE, DSARKER! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hiiHKOLiCG4))
Psycho wakes up, sees an icy mist flowing into the blue pegasus, and promptly faints again.
Glacier wakes up, coughing heavily.

"Oi...my head...where am I? And who's miss hotie?" He look at Friesden as he says this. "THIS IS SO RADICAL!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 04:22:35 am
'...Keeper, please tell me I didn't just put Cockroach into some poor random pony.'


**************

Hearing me and Friesden just talking = bucking your door down?  Does Bubbles just hate doors?  :P  As far as injuring ourselves goes...um...it was his fault! *I point at The Master and run*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 24, 2011, 04:22:55 am
*Bubbles respond immediately, understanding the situation. Obviously Carrot has gone insane again! He grabs a crossbow mounted with a syringe from his office, and shoots Carrot with it, hopefully knocking him out.*

((Yeah, I love kicking doors))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 04:26:35 am
Psst, not Carrot.  A new pegasus.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:27:21 am
((Funny how that's the first bucking thing you assume...I'M RUNNING OUT OF DOCTOR DEMENTO'S MUSIC HERE PEOPLE!))
The third wall falls and crushes Khenal under the rubble, then thousands of nothings come pouring out of the hole.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:28:05 am
"All right. I won't."

Friesden jumps back from the pegasus, and hurries over to Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 04:35:52 am
I position myself between Friesden and the new pegasus, remembering that he may have hurt somepony to write that letter.

'...I think the letter was real?'


"Who are you, and what happened on the tower?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:37:03 am
Friesden hides under Khenal's wing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 24, 2011, 04:43:48 am
*The shot misses, instead hitting the blue pegasus*
"Oops."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:46:09 am
"I say, what're you talking about? I was just in the capital, talking to the queen, AND NOW I'M IN THIS BLOODY PLACE?! Oh, in the process of losing my fragile mind, I forgot my manners! I'm Glacier Chap, pleased to meet you...YEOUCH! Good thing I developed an immunity to medicine!" Exclaims Glacier, only now pausing for a breath."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:46:56 am
Friesden starts to quiver at the shouting.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:51:22 am
"Oh...are you alright lass?" Asks Chap, genuinely concerned.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:52:29 am
She shuts her eyes, still quivering.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:53:51 am
Glacier gets off the bed and puts his wing around her, highly concerned.
"I say...It'll be alright, chap. I'm sorry for scaring you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 04:57:20 am
My horn illuminates as I lift Glacier's wing off the one I love, glaring at him.  I caress Friesden with a wing of my own, trying to calm her, before addressing Glacier Chap.

"I am Khenal.  Sorry to be rude, but I have something of dire importance to attend to."

I gently nudge my beloved towards the door and out of the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:58:08 am
Friesden follows Khenal's directions.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:01:16 am
((INSANITY ALERT!!!))
I swoop in front of the couple, purposefully getting in their way.
"No, that's not how you introduce yourself. Here, I'll start." He stabs Khenal in the chest with a knife covered in forgotten beast extract.
"THIS IS MY NAME, SCHMOE! KNOW IT!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:11:04 am
((You know that Khenal had probably almost typed up his full post response, saw yours, and had to rewrite the whole thing?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 24, 2011, 05:13:29 am
"Oh no you don't!"
*Rage builds up inside Bubbles, and he lets loose a blinding flash of light, and when it dissipates, the knife is gone, then re-appears, albeit without the forgotten beast extract.*
((I mean to imply Bubbles can release his rage to send tendrils of light flying everywhere. Hows that now, the master?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:14:14 am
((No, that doesn't happen because, I'm sorry, but that's hogwash and you know it. The knife stays. Also http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=QZElzfDoWuE#t=248s THAT'S YOU being kicked.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 05:15:21 am
Hmm, cliffhanger?  I'm thinking cliffhanger.  Definitely cliffhanger.

Ya, I had a post typed, but now it's gone :P  No big deal, though.  I need to sleep on the sudden turn, though.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:15:29 am
((How the feth did he even get the knife in the first place?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 24, 2011, 05:16:07 am
((I might add it's kinda unfair that theres forgotten beast extract on it. I'm about to re-edit my post.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:16:13 am
Go on, tell us what you'd have posted.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:17:40 am
((Yeah...it's HOLY CRAP. It's 5:17 am! THANKSGIVING'S TODAY! FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUU!!!!! Good night folks!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:18:47 am
Just in time for Impending to get on, amirite?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:19:41 am
((I tried, I failed, I HATE SLEEP!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:20:38 am
Go to sleep, you fool. Nothing else is going to happen. I'm only keeping an eye on it to see when Impending shows up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 24, 2011, 05:23:04 am
{{Your avatar is so fast, Dsarker, what is it - a 78?}}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:23:52 am
I got no idea. It's a gif of filly Dash spinning, that's all I need.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 24, 2011, 05:25:09 am
{{??  78 too old a tech for you to know of?  Now I feel old}}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:26:41 am
((Where'd you come from, good sir? In other news, http://themaster567.deviantart.com/ Aparently, i'm 93% insane! WOW!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 24, 2011, 05:28:23 am
{{Thought you were going to bed!! It's only just 2100 where I am}}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:29:49 am
((...ENGLISH PLEASE?! And i'm going to bed, i'm 21 for Celestia's sake!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:31:55 am
Darkening plays ThunderSplint or whoever it is.

And 2100 means 9 PM. You in Oceania or Asia, Darkening?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 24, 2011, 05:35:58 am
{{Centralia actually.  Yeah, ThunderSplinter is, most of the time, under my control, though she's been giving me trouble lately}}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:38:31 am
Huh. It's 2140 here, in Australia. Huh.


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 24, 2011, 05:45:05 am
{{Centralia is South Australia and Northern Terr.  I'm 1/2 hour behind you.  Trying to write up a new diary entry for ThunderSplinter but she doesn't like what I'm doing and objects to every other word.  Might give up and try tomorrow.}}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:54:56 am
Ooh. Google says Centralia is a part of Pennsylvania.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 24, 2011, 05:58:02 am
{{Bloody yanks, stealing every one of our good ideas.  Anyway, I'm crashing now, work is getting crazier the closer it gets to christmas.}}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thechosenone456 on November 24, 2011, 12:12:59 pm
Strongbeard HELP ME!! YOU TOO THE MASTER!!!

Just a few days ago I started watching My Little Pony. Now I'M STILL WATCHING IT!!

Will this quickly turn into an obsession???! HELP ME PLEASE!!! Fluttershy is soooo cute!!! <3 AAAAHH! WHAT AM I SAYING??? NOOOOOO....!!! IT'S TOOO LAAAATE!!!

 :o

I have become one with the minion force.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 01:44:16 pm
Aahh, sleep helps.  I'll put what I was going to say before getting ninja'd in a spoiler here.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

On a slightly related note, can we dial the insanity back a bit?  It feels like we're taking over and discouraging everyponyelse from contributing. 

Oh, and welcome to the herd, Chosen One :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thechosenone456 on November 24, 2011, 01:58:02 pm
Oh, and welcome to the herd, Chosen One :D

The herd? THE HERD??? So I'm not the only one insane???

Thank ARMOK!!!!! Thought I was gonna get sent to the loony bin for sure!!!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 02:14:29 pm
Here, have a link (http://www.equestriadaily.com/) to perhaps the best place for pony on the net.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 03:01:43 pm
I'm awake and ready to RP.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 03:41:13 pm
I look down at the dagger caught in my peytrel.

"See, this is why I keep my armor on."

My horn flashes as I send a surge of telekinetic force straight into the lower mandible of Glacier, hoping to break his jaw and his grip.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 03:44:41 pm
((Lucky for you, I just got on!))
"IT'S HAPPENING JUST LIKE THEY SAID IT WOULD! THEY SAY I WILL BE KILLED IN ANOTHER HIT!" Laughs Glacier manically.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 03:45:57 pm
Friesden drops to the ground, her wings over her eyes. She is shaking in fear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 03:52:51 pm
My face is cold and emotionless as I quickly pivot to buck my assailant.

"Fine.  Let's see if they are correct."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 03:55:47 pm
He dodges and stabs Khenal in the neck, then he instantly dies without reason.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:00:32 pm
((Preparation for if Friesden dies and both Khenal and Schmoe are unable to die.


He's an alicorn, who vowed to destroy all daemons and to save the one he loved. He's a daemon, lost and without purpose, seeking only to destroy and to die.

Together, they fight crime!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:03:03 pm
((YOU FORGOT YOUR THEME SONG! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mR3jnW2kcUs))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 04:08:24 pm
My barding deflects most of the blow, yet the knife manages to find a gap near the back of my neck.  The wound is shallow, but the extract may still finish the job anyway.  I stand, panting, as the adrenaline wears off and I can relax.  Opening my eyes, I notice Friesden's reaction to the fight.  Trembling, I extend a hoof towards her.

"Friesden?"

***************

Still no medical training for Khenal; he doesn't realize how dangerous that extract might be.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:09:47 pm
Friesden opens her eyes and removes her wings.

"Khenal? Is it... Is it over?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:11:43 pm
Khenal begins to feel extremely warm as his body begins to overheat. At the same time, he's finding it harder and harder to move.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:13:12 pm
((scene music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9NlDMLRDZUE&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 04:22:03 pm
"I hope so."

Sweat begins beading on my brow.

"Or maybe not.  I think that dagger was poisoned."

I try to continue towards the jail, but my movements are slow and uncoordinated.  I collapse just before the stairs, sweating as my body fights the extract.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:24:50 pm
The second stage of the poison begins to manifest itself, causing Khenal's body to suffer low level neurosis, or the slow, painful, decay of the nervous system.
((HINT: There's always a reason to live, if you look for it.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:24:57 pm
Friesden darts in and picks up the immobile Khenal.

"Love, you're going to the hospital. No arguments now."

She carries him to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 04:32:02 pm
"But...cell...letter..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:33:12 pm
"You need help. I can't give it to you."

Friesden lowers Khenal into a spare hospital bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:35:09 pm
((metal gear solid 3 reference here!))
Khenal begins to hallucinate, and he sees all the ponies he's killed in his lifetime, and it feels like that whenever he touches one, he gets weaker and weaker.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 04:42:08 pm
'No...I can't die...I haven't made it up to them yet...'



***************

Khenal hasn't killed hardly anypony, actually.  The only deaths he really blames himself for are those from the Daemon Experiment, and he's dealt with that part of himself already.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 04:42:58 pm
"Doctor! Doctor! Where is the doctor?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 04:56:17 pm
((Anterson didn't want us getting injured, too bad. HERE COMES ALEN!))
"What is it this time...?" Asks alen in his most caring voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:01:05 pm
"He's been poisoned! Help him!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:02:46 pm
"P-P-POISON?! HOW?!" Sputters Alen, now ACTUALLY concerned.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:03:32 pm
"He was stabbed!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:05:37 pm
"GET ME THE WEAPON THAT CAUSED THIS! I CAN MAKE AN ANTIDOTE FROM THE POISON!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 05:07:13 pm
"Jail...protect..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:09:50 pm
Khenal begins to feel like vomiting, and he is quickly losing feeling in his limbs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:10:26 pm
Friesden hurries out, to find four guardsponies surrounding the body.

"What're ye doing here, lassy?" asks one of them in a gruff tone.

"Khenal was poisoned by this pony! I have to find the dagger so that the doctor can prepare an antidote," answers Friesden.

One of the unicorn guardsponies picks up the knife and hands it to Friesden gingerly.

"Mind if we come along? We've got to question all the witnesses. Including Khenal."

"Um...okay!"

Friesden leads the motley crew back to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:12:17 pm
"...WHAT NO- oh it's you Friesden. Quick, the weapon! Guards, hold Khenal down, I have a feeling that he might try to escape!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:15:19 pm
As Friesden passes the dagger over to the doctor, the guardsponies' leader snorts.

"Escape -where-, doctor? If he was trying to escape, why would he come to a hospital? Just do your job, and no funny business."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 05:18:21 pm
"Fries...den..."

My legs twitch weakly as I try to drag myself away, but the poison has sapped my strength.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:19:03 pm
Alen promptly punches the Guardspony who made that remark, then carefully stabs the test animal -a rat- with the poisoned knife, and then watches as it dies horribly. A look of despair washes over Alen's face. He shakes his head and lowers it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:19:54 pm
Friesden leans close in to Khenal.

"It'll be alright, my love. The doctor will fix you up. Just be strong, please. Don't leave me alone, love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 05:25:13 pm
"Friesden..."

I stop twitching and smile weakly, trying to focus on the face of the one I love.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:26:20 pm
"Khenal..."

Friesden hugs Khenal tight.

"Stay. If only for me, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:31:25 pm
Alen walks slowly over to Friesden, and whispers,
"There's nothing I can do...I've never seen anything like it...Unless you have any ideas, i'm afraid..." His voice trails off.
((TAKE IT AWAY YOU TWO! BE INCREDIBLE! music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0NqNq_hnqQ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 05:37:49 pm
My head drops to the pillow on the bed, but my eyes never leave Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:39:27 pm
"No, Khenal. You've got be okay. Khenal? Khenal? KHENAL!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:40:32 pm
((excellently timed metal gear solid reference!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:41:17 pm
Metal Gear Solid?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 05:43:40 pm
"Fries...den..."

'No...Can't leave her alone...'

My forelimbs begin twitching again, as I try to embrace my love.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:45:37 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7x69-67pEf8&feature=player_detailpage#t=5s))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:47:00 pm
"Khenal!"

Friesden leans close and embraces Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 05:47:56 pm
There is a beeping sound.

"Hello, Khenal, this is your early alarm call. Has anything unnatural happened recently? If so, check that Cockroach is finally dead. Hello, Khenal, this is your early alarm call..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:51:02 pm
((Dead on.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 05:55:16 pm
((brb for about half an hour. good luck sorting things out!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 06:02:21 pm
'Can't let Cockroach win...'

'Can't leave Friesden.'

'Can't let Cockroach win!'


"Can't leave Friesden!"

My eyes focus and I embrace my love, my strength returning.

"Friesden!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 24, 2011, 06:11:00 pm
*BANG! Bubbles' door flies across the room.*
"What..... "
*Bubbles sees the necrosis and the knife then charges back inside the office, coming out with a MASSIVE amount of syringes all labeled differently.*
"Friesden, inject him with these, quickly!"
*Bubbles takes the knife and starts examining it furiously.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 06:18:03 pm
Friesden is too focused on her beloved's recovery to pay attention to Bubbles.

"Khenal!" she says through the tears. "You.. You're alright!"

She returns the embrace.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 06:20:16 pm
Sorry, Ansontan.  Pretty sure the necrosis and such are all in Khenal's head again  :-\  Though I could easily be wrong.  This inception stuff is getting a bit old, honestly...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 06:20:58 pm
I was thinking that, too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 24, 2011, 06:31:35 pm
Bah, I'll go with it being real.
 ---------------
"Ok, this, and that... And... Bingo!"
*I stab the antidote into Khenal.*
-------------
Gtg
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 06:46:56 pm
((I stopped the inception stuff, now it's just mind games.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 06:48:49 pm
Alen shoots a glare at Bubbles before stomping out of the hospital. Once again, he's stolen the show from him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 06:58:24 pm
Psycho decides that now would be a good time to give Khenal the new book he got him.
"Hey, if you're not too busy hugging your wife, would you like to see this book I found? It's a fictional book about a war that happens far in the future!" Psycho says, not quite noticing the glares from everyone.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 06:59:52 pm
I barely notice the injection, too occupied with the mare of my dreams.  Carrot learns the hard way that I am, in fact, too busy.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 07:00:58 pm
((I'm thinking Khenal would be too busy to notice :P))


Friesden continues holding her love tight.



((At some point, you're going to have to isolate them together in game so we actually get some of the effects in game))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 07:09:52 pm
And hope neither of us develops a grudge instead :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 07:10:58 pm
Yes, that too :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 07:20:46 pm
((Excuse me while I shoot myself :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 07:21:06 pm
Maybe save scumming might be the way to ensure it :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 07:23:58 pm
So...scene change?  Or just some relaxing OOC rambling instead?

Also, ending with a smiley because everypony else is :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 07:41:09 pm
Scene change. The next day! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r5FT2R_1i8Y&feature=related
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 07:57:07 pm
Psycho Carrot is relaxing on the top of the tower, watching the sunrise.
"I love this fortress..." He sighs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 08:03:22 pm
I relax in my private chambers, idly wondering if I'll have to move once Charity accepts my letter of resignation.  My wings are still not fully functional, the damage from the poison exacerbating what Cockroach did to them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 08:07:39 pm
((today will have a different kind of randomness. Insanity is on lunch break. and no, in the end Psycho doesn't actually leave, just making that clear.))

Psycho gets off the ground and decides that it's time to leave this fortress. He wants to be an explorer now, and so he visits Khenal to say goodbye.
"Khenal?" I say, knocking on his door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 08:09:13 pm
Friesden is already knocking on his door when Carrot arrives.

"Khenal? Love?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 08:10:01 pm
"Hi Friesden. I guess you really have changed...I'm sorry for scaring you...before." Psycho says sheepishly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 08:11:26 pm
((be back soon, having dessert.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 08:12:06 pm
"Oh..uh...hi, Carrot. It's okay..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 08:19:10 pm
"Hmm?"

I shakily get up to open the door.

"Friesden!  And Carrot!  Come in, come in."

*****************

Getting ready to transcribe the next chapter, so I apologize for slow replies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 08:23:29 pm
Friesden enters.

"Love, I've been knocking for some time. What's wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 08:26:16 pm
Psycho walks in as well.
"Guys...I've decided that I want to go explore the world. I won't be coming back."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 08:37:07 pm
"I was just lost in thought, my sweet."

I nuzzle Friesden to reassure her.

"Sorry to make you worry."

I then turn to look at Carrot.

"Leaving to explore?  Why, Carrot?  What about Kil and your foals?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 08:40:03 pm
"I love you, Khenal, and seeing you like this...it breaks my heart."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 08:45:55 pm
((You'll see what I've got planned soon.))

"I don't love her much anymore, after all that I've been through...and besides, she's a nurse, who knows what she does behind my back. Can you take care of them?" Psycho asks with a saddened look on his face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 08:52:00 pm
I carefully walk back to my bed before responding to either of them, trying to hide the instability in my legs.

"She loves you, Carrot, and I doubt she'd do anything behind your back.  I understand about your past, but are you sure you have to leave?"

I look to Friesden and smile warmly.

"Loved ones make the troubles so much easier to bear."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 09:05:33 pm
A tear forms in Psycho's eye. "She doesn't even talk to me anymore...IT'S NOT FAIR! W-W-WHY DO YOU AND EVERY OTHER BUCKING PONY HERE GET A GOOD MATE, BUT I'M STUCK WITH A CHEATER?!" Psycho breaks down into sobs after saying this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 09:06:30 pm
Friesden feels remarkedly awkward at this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 09:13:17 pm
I look at my friend awkwardly, unsure how to console him.

"Um..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 09:16:14 pm
"It's horrible...catching your own wife with another pony...So I've decided to become a hermit...in the jungle. I'll starve to death alone in peace there." He says, grimdark.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 09:23:47 pm
'Catching?  Sweet Ingest...'

"Carrot...I'm so sorry.  I can't even imagine how you must feel."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 09:39:26 pm
(Going to play some DF now I think. A few things I wish to make clear. One Friesden is being trusted to move around freely now correct? You have told Charity you're letting a convicted murderer free right? Second. If the answer to the first is yes, I'm going to try and isolate the two ponies [Khenal and Friesden] together for a while, to see if we can make de magics happen in game.)

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 09:42:56 pm
Le yay!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 09:44:37 pm
Yes and Yes.  He feels she is fully rehabilitated and no longer a danger to the fortress.  He has also given Charity his letter of resignation as Captain of the Guard, and is prepared to argue if she doesn't want to accept it ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 09:48:12 pm
He has also given Charity his letter of resignation as Captain of the Guard, and is prepared to argue if she doesn't want to accept it ;)


 :o
Charity gallops down to see Khenal in his office packing up private quarters, after turning in his resignation. The letter is violently held in a tight telekinetic grasp. Ignoring Carrot and anypony else that might be there, she unfurls the letter and shoves it toward Khenal. "Khenal what is the meaning of this! Why are you resigning!?"


Edit: Correction!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 09:49:24 pm
((sorry, my internet is on the fritz))
"Well, that doesn't matter...I have no reason to keep living like this. Heh, like you care...you actually have someone..." He drops the book he wanted to show Khenal yesterday at Friesden's hooves, and begins to make his way into the unforgiving jungle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 09:49:56 pm
((PSST KHENAL IS IN HIS PRIVATE QUARTERS. Also, music for scene http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sty7tvJfR8I))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 09:52:32 pm
((PSST KHENAL IS IN HIS PRIVATE QUARTERS. Also, music for scene http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sty7tvJfR8I))

I have fixed the error!

Edit: Although in the actual fortress design and thus in my head, Khenals private quarters are behind his office and thus only accessible by going through the office. I guess I never really made that clear to anyone else though.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 09:56:49 pm
Friesden lifts up the book just in time for Charity to burst in. At the sudden shout and bursting in, she jumps back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 10:02:32 pm
((THEN. FIX. THAT. STRONGBEARD.))
The book says 'Equestria: Total War' on the cover. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2354/Equestria%3A-Total-War
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 10:03:19 pm
"Carrot, I do care.  If I lost Friesden, I don't know-"

At this point, Charity bursts in, demanding an explanation.  I jump a bit at her sudden entrance, but stay on my bed.  I do, however, bow my head to her.

"Hello Countess Charity.  I am no longer fit to perform my duties; physically or mentally, I fear."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 10:05:08 pm
Carrot just continues to leave, tears steadily flowing down his face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 10:07:37 pm
I stumble out of bed as I realize Carrot is really going to try to leave.

"Carrot, wait!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 10:09:13 pm
Carrot ignores Khenal's voice and continues to leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 10:11:51 pm
Charity calming down at this point, takes several deep breaths from having run all the way here. She continues to ignore Carrot. "Leave Carrot for a minute Khenal. Khenal, I wouldn't trust anypony with this job more than you. And what do you mean mentally? What has happened? I've seen you best demons with your mind. What could effect you that badly."

(Has Charity been told about the poisioning? If yes then she also says the following, without pausing.)

"And I realize that the posioning might take you off your hooves for awhile but we have several great doctors here you'll be back on your hooves in no time. You don't need to resign just take a few days or weeks off. You'll be fine."

At this point she finally stops ranting enough that somepony else can get a word in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 10:16:28 pm
I slump in defeat as Charity blocks my path to Carrot.

"One got in, Charity.  He got in!  I've destroyed and sealed him several times, but he keeps coming back!  I...I almost killed Friesden because of his influence!  I should be in a cell, not my room!"


**************

I didn't forget to close my quote, nope.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 10:18:53 pm
Carrot is now outside and is looks back one last time.
"G-g-good bye..." He says while sobbing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 10:19:56 pm
"One...got inside. Oh, I...I see. Yes, that makes sense. I assume you want to be completely removed from the guard then? That's a shame. Do you have anypony in mind as a replacement then?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 10:21:14 pm
Friesden puts her wing around Khenal. "We'll get through this, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 10:27:06 pm
"Isos.  She has a good head on her shoulders and a good family.  Not to mention she can wield Goodsnarled like none other."

I lean into Friesden's touch, encouraged by her words and presence.

***************
Ya, the one who actually has an adamantine artifact weapon is the only one Khenal trusts to stand against daemon influence.  I only know the name because of the transcribing I'm doing right now :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 10:30:01 pm
Carrot is stepping into the thicket of the untamed jungle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 10:32:05 pm
Friesden leans back into Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 10:37:52 pm
"Isos, Okay, I'll have it done. I'm not going to lock you up though. Think of the PR nightmare that would be and you seem to be under control at the moment. If you really think you're dangerous. Talk to the new Captain and it'll be her decision on what to do with you."

Info on Isos if she becomes important. She is an earthpony mare who is married to Tunur our armorer and has an earthpony foal and a newborn Pegasus foal. Also, as mentioned she is a knife fighter, who wields the Adamantine dagger Goodsnarled the Principle of Slowing an artifact, made my Ironya.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 10:41:19 pm
"Where he goes, I go too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 10:46:03 pm
"PR nightmare?  Hardly.  Everypony has to at least suspect something is wrong with me by now.  But, you're the Countess, and I'm not the Captain of the Guard anymore, so I'll accept what you decide.  Though, could you please send a few of the Skyguard after Carrot?  Please?  He said he wants to leave Glitterglen, and I think he actually might."

I start to struggle back to my bed, before wondering if it's actually still mine.

"Um, will I need to get different chambers?"

***************

For curiosity's sake, what's her knife fighter skill?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 10:49:08 pm
((CONGRATULATIONS EVERYPONY, OUR STORY IS LONGER THAN FAILCANNON!))
Carrot is now deep in the jungle. He's stopped crying and is now quietly mumbling as heads deeper and deeper into the mass of trees and vines.
"Who needs then anyway...nopony will remember me when i'm gone."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 10:52:15 pm
Charity looks over the scene in front of her, with the sickly Khenal and the lovey-dovey Friesden. And suddenly feels like she should leave. "Well uh, I'll be going now. Lots of paper work to do, you know, plus I got to tell Isos she's getting promoted." Charity turns to leave.

Ninja's everywhere!

"Leave? Why would he leave? He has no where to go? Wasn't he banished here? He can't go back to Tailentranced. Sure, I'll send out his squad to look for him."

"And yeah, you're going to need to move, This is the room of the Captain of the Guard. I'll have a new home dug out for you. Any preference for location? Somewhere near the dinning hall perhaps? Or near the Carpentry shops?"

Edit: will post Isos's combat skills below. If it doesn't show up at first. Refresh a few times.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Isos%20Nutstell.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 10:55:17 pm
Carrot finds a nice pile of leaves and rocks and lies down, shivering at the cold.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 10:58:37 pm
"He, uh, has his reasons.  It's kinda personal why he wants to leave, and I don't think he's thinking clearly because of it.  As far as where to live goes, anywhere is fine.  I'd just like to request room for my books."

I shakily nuzzle Friesden.

"And for my love, if she doesn't mind?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 10:59:53 pm
"Why would I mind, my beloved?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 11:05:04 pm
"All right then. I'll have Cryptson Granite and Grifen get right to it. You'll have a few days to pack up, before Isos moves in here. But for now. I've got a lot of paper work to do, a search party to organize, and new diggings to authorize. So, I'll be going now I think." Charity turns to leave. Assuming she isn't stopped, she will go get the members of Psycho's squad and send them out to find him, and then go back to work.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 11:11:06 pm
"I didn't want to ask without your say-so, my one and only."

I only barely register Charity's words and exit, lost in Friesden's eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 11:14:53 pm
"You are my light and my salvation! My love, my life! Where you go, I will follow."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 11:15:20 pm
((You're just ASKING for insanity. STOP THIS PUBLIC DISPLAY OF AFFECTIONS BEFORE I UNLEASH MY ACE-IN-THE-HOLE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 24, 2011, 11:18:40 pm
((You're just ASKING for insanity. STOP THIS PUBLIC DISPLAY OF AFFECTIONS BEFORE I UNLEASH MY ACE-IN-THE-HOLE!))

(Maybe it's best to dial back the insanity a little bit? It could be scaring away other potential ponies, and we don't want that.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 11:19:45 pm
((I was kidding, and now I have writer's block...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 11:21:00 pm
I knew you were bluffing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 11:22:43 pm
Regardless, besides making Carrot try to leave, I am at an utter loss for events... :'())
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 11:26:27 pm
"And you are a gift straight from Ingest and Othid."


****************
I just remembered he worships deities of love and charity.  No wonder he's so sappy :P

It's about time we started running out of juice, heh.  Maybe I'll get a chance to start making headway in the transcribing.   New chapter (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2892/Glitterglen), by the way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 11:32:06 pm
"No, my love, you are. Without you, I am nothing, for you are my everything!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 11:34:44 pm
((AAAAAAHHH!!! THE CORNY LOVEY DOVEY STUFF, IT BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURNS!!!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 11:38:47 pm
I smile and simply hold my beloved.

"If you say so, love."

*************

Heh, sounds like scene for us then.  Honestly, this can only go to: "I love you more." "No, I love you more."  And I think that might actually kill The Master over there  ;D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 24, 2011, 11:42:46 pm
Very well, then.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 24, 2011, 11:46:54 pm
I'm gonna disappear for a bit. Fallout: Equestria updated and I lurve it so.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 24, 2011, 11:51:30 pm
REALLY?! GIVE ME LINK NOW!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 25, 2011, 12:37:44 am
(Maybe it's best to dial back the insanity a little bit? It could be scaring away other potential ponies, and we don't want that.)

Yeah, I'll admit it's scared me away from joining in on the madness, heh.  I've read the entire thread up to this point, and I'm still a bit lost on where it's all been and where it's going.  Since it's been primarily RPing about a few characters repeatedly going insane, I figured there wasn't room for anypony else really.  If things settle down a bit back into "fortress" mode I might reconsider joining in. :D

On topic, I'm pretty interested to see where this is going with Khenal.  Rather than wildly speculate I guess I'll just keep reading to see where it goes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 12:40:05 am
You don't have to be crazy to RP here, but it helps!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 12:59:27 am
I'm pretty interested to see where this is going with Khenal. 

Heh, you and me both.  I only ever have a vague idea of what I want to happen, then do my best to improvise in that direction.  And don't feel intimidated with the craziness, join us!  I think the worst of the insanity is past, for now at least.  Or until something relatively minor in-game happens that we can all have a cow over rp-wise :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 25, 2011, 01:07:21 am
Heh, even craziness aside there's really not much room for another character in the current scene.  Perhaps if KingStrongbeard has a suggestion for a pony to take (not really picky on who / what, but something like a cheesemaker / lye maker isn't likely to be much of an interesting character), I could pick up at the next fortress update or something.

Anyway, off to doodle another illustration for Dawnpick.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 01:19:32 am
I for one am loving the roleplaying going on. It really makes this fortress unique and the fact that there's so much of it effectively weeds out the people who aren't up for the kind of roleplaying we have going on here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 25, 2011, 01:34:50 am
{Found on the desk in the Bookkeeper's office}

                                      REQUISITION FORM 149A
LIST ITEMS : 1/4 roll (2,500 units) of thread
                   2 dressings.

PURPOSE: not willing to let that hack, Dr Bubbles, treat my recent wound, so I'm stitching it up myself.

COMMENTS: Stepped on tripped dropped a saw mallet chisel which cut my fetlock, minor wound really but it needs a shitload of few stitiches.

                    By the way, I like the new and improved requisition form, sorry about the mess I made looking for the Stock Advisory Form, hope it doesn't take to long to clean up.
                    Anyway, I need to report two (2) severely mangled honey badger pegasus corpses deposited in the butcher's workshop, I don't know the full details, it looks like they were in an airborne fight and fell onto the topmost level of the tower, expiring on impact, also took several severed limbs to the refuse pile.  Blood and gore was cleaned up so no need to send anyone to clean it up.

SIGNATURE: ThunderSplinter, Carpentry Lead.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 01:56:42 am
I like to encourage all roleplayers, The Master.  While I might like to think I'm pretty good, it's only because I've been playing things like DnD almost all my life.  Like everything, it takes practice, and maybe some gentle nudges from people with experience.  (Not trying to cause drama, just clarifying for myself.)


Also, Thunder Splinter is likely going to be seeing a lot more of Khenal for a while.  Hopefully he doesn't break too many of her chisels ;)

Also also, linky for  Fallout Equestria (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-fallout-equestria.html), as requested.  Sorry it's a bit late, but I did say I was disappearing :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 02:02:22 am
No problem...hopefully tomorrow my writer's block will have vanished.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 25, 2011, 02:16:43 am
{{OOC
Also, Thunder Splinter is likely going to be seeing a lot more of Khenal for a while.  Hopefully he doesn't break too many of her chisels ;)

Doubtful, ThunderSplinter moved her workshop into the tower and works from there, you'll probably be stuck down in the workshop area with the other carpenter, I forget his name.  The tower is almost complete and ThunderSplinter will soon be out of work, except possibly for woodcutting.

Darkening Kaos, CIS, LUH}}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 03:47:19 am
Writer's block is gone! EVERYONE, TAKE THEIR PLACES! LIGHTS, CAMERA, ACTION!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 03:50:01 am
When we last saw the gang, Psycho Carrot had left the fortress and was hiding in the jungle, Khenal and Friesden were preparing to move in with each other at a new place, and Isos had replaced Khenal as captain of the guard. Let's see what Carrot is up to...

"I d-d-on't need anypony...I can s-s-survive on m-m-my own!" Chatters Psycho, now very cold and hungry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 25, 2011, 03:55:57 am
Charity's Journal 6th Moonstone, 98

Captain Khenal has officially resigned from his post. His retirement will net him a nice private quarters, and private dinning room for him and his “fillyfriend?” Friesden. It's in the process of being constructed as I write.

His replacement as Guard Captain is an earthpony mare named Isos. She isn't who I would have chose, but she was recommended by Khenal, so I'll give her a chance to prove herself.

8th Moonstone, 98

As the assissin who targeted me in my office, was apparently able to sneak into our armory, and steal a crossbow. I've decided to have our mechanics place a trap in there by the door, to catch a thief unawares. I just placed an order with Ironya for a bismuth bronze serrated saw blade to use in the trap.

11th Moonstone, 98

A troop of Mandrills attacked our ponies working on the surface. I'm sending the Skyguard out to deal with them.

14th Moonstone, 98


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Grifen%20withdraws.png)

Grifen has been acting quite strangely, hasn't talked in days. And now he's locked himself in Pillomino's workshop.

15th Moonstone, 98

The skyguard is back from hunting. They killed a lot of apes. The butchers will be happy.

23rd Moonstone, 98

Grifen has finally come out of Pillomino's workshop. He has made a beautiful floodgate, made of Gold ore and decorated with obsidian and marble, and gems. It's a true work of art.


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Contested%20Bristle.png)

He calls it “The Contested Bristle”.

9th Opal, 98

Khenal and Friesden have been living in their new home for a few days now. Though it was only officially finished today. Today, I had a private shower added to their room. (Complete with Rose Gold Fixtures.) The basic home is a small dinning hall for the two of them that branches from the normal living quarters area, and then you go through another door and pass the shower, and then your in the bed room. Pillomino and I worked together to produce a pair of statues for the room. We both choose the founding of Glitterglen as the topic, but mine shows the ponies traveling too the jungle, and her's shows ponies laboring to create the fort. I wonder which one the couple will like better? We also had all the artists of Glitterglen, carve images/murals/history/etc, into the wall of the rooms to give them a bit more character.

23rd Opal, 98

Nicolta Tesla was ambushed by a hoard of crudles in the caverns. I'm going to send the militia to deal with them.

2nd Obsidian, 98

A lump of petrified wood
(OOC: a stone for those who don't know) I had bought off the last caravan along with a large serrated bismuth bronze disc I ordered from Ironya has gone missing. I've reported the possible theft to the guard.

Additionally, the militia apparently missed a crudle because one attacked Venture when she was trying to reload a cage trap in the cavern. She managed to kill it, but she ran back to the fort covered in it's blood. She ran straight to the hospital to wash it off. She's quite upset.

5th Obsidian, 98

According to the stories I've overheard in the dinning hall. Starkey really impressed the other troops during the crudle hunt.


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Martial%20Trance%20Starkey.png)

16th Obisidian 98

Our scouts have spotted a Rainbow Cravan.


(Well Telgin as far as a suggestion as to which pony to take I can't really do so without some idea of what you'd like to play. However, we have plenty of unclaimed militia ponies or members of the guard, both of the melee or ranged variety. In non-combat positions that could have some, point, in the plotline. You could always take a relative of one of our other players. Venture's father, Psycho's wife, etc. Also, with Venture all grown up, you could always start the new CMC Fortress Foals. We have many foals to choose from, (Including Psycho's kids  ;) Cutie Mark Crusaders Parental Abuse Victims Yay!) Or you could be a farmer, or mason, or cheesemaker and then just force your way into the story by whatever means necessary.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 04:21:33 am
"Khenal," said Friesden. "Have you heard any news of Carrot recently?"



((Oh, and it should be fillyfriend, methinks.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 25, 2011, 04:23:03 am
((Oh, and it should be fillyfriend, methinks.))

Oh, that makes sense. Fixed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 04:24:31 am
((Curse you, you've got me wanting to do my own community MLP fort.


Now, what race to use...Rainbows or Lions....))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:25:37 am
((RAINBOWS!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 25, 2011, 04:26:48 am
(LIONS!! Please Link to it here when you start.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:27:26 am
((DERPY DEMANDS RAINBOWS!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 25, 2011, 04:32:36 am
((Gilda demands Lions!))
(http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110831175829/mlp/images/thumb/b/bc/Gilda_snaps_red_background_speed_lines_S1E05.png/585px-Gilda_snaps_red_background_speed_lines_S1E05.png) (http://mlp.wikia.com/index.php?title=Gilda&image=Gilda_snaps_red_background_speed_lines_S1E05-png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 04:34:18 am
Okay, Lions it is. I'll start it reasonably soon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:39:22 am
((Well, it's 4:38 am, time for me to sleep! I'll be up around 11-12 pm EST. GOOD NIGHT EVERYPONY! Oh, and Dsarker may voice Psycho from now on whenever i'm away. I shouldn't have to explain why :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 04:40:37 am
Can you explain it to me? Because I don't get it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:42:38 am
((Because you and I are both completely and utterly mad! :D I leave you with this music! http://tindeck.com/listen/nysx))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 25, 2011, 05:12:40 am
Telgin, i'd have to say it's cooling down now. Even though The Master keeps making it more a more confusing, me, Khenal and Dsarker have been trying to patch up the holes. Having only 4 consistently active RPers isn't exactly fun. We were hoping that getting this on the HoL would encourage joiners, but we've only gotten 2 so far. Speaking of which, maybe we should change the HoL description to clearly note that we're in search of RPers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 05:17:10 am
((Can't sleep; Ansontan, you're really giving me the impression that you think I'm the source of all the problems here...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 25, 2011, 05:18:30 am
I mean to say that the level of insanity you're giving off is driving away a few RPers, some of which are friends I directed to this thread. Now it's starting to cooldown, how about we go looking for more?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 05:23:02 am
((That's fine, but don't expect the troubles to be over yet, also don't expect the rate of growth of the thread to wain much. I WON'T ABANDON THIS FORT UNTIL IT'S DEAD AND GONE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 05:29:16 am
((NOW I'M GOING TO BED! G'NIGHT EVERYPONY!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 07:48:46 am
Here's (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=96831.new#new) a link to my community lion fortress.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thechosenone456 on November 25, 2011, 01:13:54 pm
You: THIS IS INSANE!!!! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY HORRID!!! WHY DO YOU DO SUCH A DAMNDESTING THING!???? WHAT IS THIS MESS???? WHAT IS THIS INSANITY???

Me: THIS IS DWARF FORTRESS.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thechosenone456 on November 25, 2011, 01:15:28 pm
((NOW I'M GOING TO BED! G'NIGHT EVERYPONY!))

OMG the master YOU ARE GOING TO MAKE ME DREAM ABOUT PONIES WITH YOUR LAME SIDEQUOTES!!!! :/

Ah, it's spring again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 02:05:13 pm
meh meh meh.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 25, 2011, 02:51:03 pm
Alright, I'll bite.  Looks like things have calmed down a lot in the past few pages.  Pony me up, KingStrongbeard!

After some thought, I think I'd prefer a military pony of some sort.  Preferably a melee pony instead of a markspony, but no preference on the weapon really.  Also preferably married, but if that's not possible it's no biggie.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 03:02:08 pm
As soon as the others get online, we start the next scene! www.youtube.com/watch?v=DC4zgfVj-K4
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 03:02:16 pm
yay!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 03:06:49 pm
This fort is officially my home! Now, while we wait for Khenal, i'm going to make a musical theme for each of the guys here who got this fort off the ground.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 03:58:59 pm
Heya everypony!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:03:11 pm
^_^ LET'S GET THIS SHOW ON THE ROAD!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:04:57 pm
"Khenal," said Friesden. "Have you heard any news of Carrot recently?"



((Oh, and it should be fillyfriend, methinks.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 04:18:13 pm
"No, unfortunately.  I asked a few of the Skyguard, but they just got evasive or suddenly had something important to do."

I shake my head, missing my friend.

"I hope he's alright."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:20:21 pm
Psycho is at this point suffering from hypothermia, and will likely freeze to death fairly soon.
"f-f-friends...no n-n-n-n-need-d-d-d..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 04:21:45 pm
"Love, have you tried searching for him yourself? You've been like this for days now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 04:28:45 pm
I tilt my head to one side, seriously contemplating Friesden's suggestion.  My wings were still uncoordinated and my legs were still a bit weak, but my magic was still strong. 

'Couldn't hurt, and it might get me out of this funk.'

I smile at my love.


"I haven't, but I think now is the perfect time to remedy that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:30:57 pm
((A'derp
Quote
My wings were still uncoordinated my legs were still a bit weak
))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 04:31:41 pm
"Well, my love, I shall come with you. Another pair of eyes couldn't hurt," says Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 25, 2011, 04:37:20 pm
A voice echoes down the hall. The accent is unmistakeable.

"...dun give a clop! Yer commander is out there freezin' 'is arse off, 'ee dunnae 'ave time fer you lot ta take a rest!"

Another voice, this one too low to be heard.

"Oh? Well I s'pose if 'ee dunnae make it, then ye'll be assigned under me, now won't ye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:39:58 pm
After spends days of sleeping in the cold jungle, Psycho Carrot finally succumbs to hypothermia and losses consciousness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 04:45:09 pm
Side by side with my love, we head for the surface and the jungle beyond.  However, the voice of Commander Starkey stops us.

"Like you said, my love: Another pair of eyes couldn't hurt.  Lets see if Captain Otik can join us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 25, 2011, 04:47:33 pm
((Not Starkey. Otik is the one with the heavy accent.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 04:48:54 pm
((even I figured that out :P captain Otik to be exact.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 04:55:14 pm
I am on a roll today :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 04:57:06 pm
"Yes, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 05:18:02 pm
((I guess I'll continue to narrate then.))
As Khenal. Friesden, and Otik approach the jungle, they begin discussing search strategies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 25, 2011, 05:24:24 pm
"Cap... Mister Khenal. Good t'see you out 'n about."

She snaps him a salute anyways - once in service, always in service.

"Is there anythin' I ken do fer ye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 05:32:00 pm
I give the Captain a salute as well.

"Friesden and I were about to try our hooves at searching for Captain Carrot.  Would you be able to join us, Captain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 05:37:00 pm
((Is this Captain Carrot Ironfoundersson?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 25, 2011, 05:37:30 pm
"This lot," she gestures towards a pair of rather sheepish-looking pegasi, "jus' got back from a sweep. Was about t' go out m'self. Ye can come along if ye like."

She shoots a sharp glare at the two soldiers.

"Sisters know I could use some real help out there."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 05:38:54 pm
At that moment, It begins to rain, only speeding up Carrot untimely demise.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 05:53:19 pm
((ahem?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 05:59:07 pm
"Excellent.  Shall we get to it, then?"

*Outside, a few minutes later*

"Rain, of course."

I light my horn, creating an umbrella of telekinetic force ten feet across.

'Getting a cold would just be the icing on the cake, wouldn't it?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 06:13:37 pm
((I was waiting for Dsarker, didn't realize that (she? fairly certain) was offline.))
As the group entered the dark jungle, Otik had a sickening sensation that this was just far too easy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 06:15:05 pm
((Sorry, had to go catch a pair of dogs that had gotten loose.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 06:16:34 pm
((Are they ok?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 25, 2011, 06:23:53 pm
Telgin. I can't find any ponies in the militia that meet the requirements of being married and being melee. Got a markspony that does I think. However, in the guard I have two you might be interested in. Assuming you don't mind playing a mare. We have Isos our new Captain of the Guard. She is married and has two foals. Also, in the guard we have a unicorn mother, she has a unicorn daughter, and well I've assigned her a hammer, she's only a novice in it, but she's a proficient biter. Interesting thing about the unicorn is that when she migrated here she had a daughter but no husband, the father of the foal doesn't show up in either ponies relationship list. So you might be able to have some fun with that.

Would you like either of them?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 06:26:26 pm
They're both fine, the rascals.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 06:31:13 pm
Ah, good.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 06:36:33 pm
((ahem?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 07:07:03 pm
"Where could he be? Do you know where he is not, captain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 25, 2011, 07:35:10 pm
"T'be honest, we dun know where he could be. Best guess is he left straight out th' gate, so we've been doin' most o' our searchin' to th' east. Th' canopy's thick, so I dunno if we'd even see 'im from th' air."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 07:40:44 pm
"Shall we try a ground search, then?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 07:45:12 pm
"Whatever you think is best, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 25, 2011, 08:16:34 pm
Telgin. I can't find any ponies in the militia that meet the requirements of being married and being melee. Got a markspony that does I think. However, in the guard I have two you might be interested in. Assuming you don't mind playing a mare. We have Isos our new Captain of the Guard. She is married and has two foals. Also, in the guard we have a unicorn mother, she has a unicorn daughter, and well I've assigned her a hammer, she's only a novice in it, but she's a proficient biter. Interesting thing about the unicorn is that when she migrated here she had a daughter but no husband, the father of the foal doesn't show up in either ponies relationship list. So you might be able to have some fun with that.

Would you like either of them?

Playing a mare doesn't bother me.  The single unicorn sounds interesting, there definitely does sound to be some potential there.  In my last pony fort I named all of my ponies after weapons and armor, so how about renaming her Falcata?  It's a sword, not a mace, but it sounds interesting anyway.  Any description of her or her daughter?  Might think up a name for her daughter too.

Now to also think up an excuse for getting exiled to Glitterglen...

Edit: By the way, would she have any relationship to Starkey or Khenal?  Served with either in anyway?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 08:27:32 pm
Looks like she was in the guard, so she has had at least some interaction with Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 25, 2011, 08:28:24 pm
((Hello? Is anyone here? Are the RPers dead again?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 08:30:33 pm
Just taking a nice slow pace today.  I think everyone is still in a food coma from Thanksgiving yesterday.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 25, 2011, 08:31:37 pm
Oh lol. Either that, or Black Friday shopping. I'm still full even after last night 'cuz of eating 2 turkeys.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 08:32:15 pm
((playing zombie panic...that's why))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 08:32:37 pm
I'm waiting for the rp to be going.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 08:39:24 pm
((LET THE ROLEPLAYING CONTINUE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 25, 2011, 08:49:25 pm
Then welcome Telgin, to Glitterglen.

Below you should find the in-game descriptions of Falcata and her daughter.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

As far as knowing Khenal she's been with the guard training under him since she moved to Glitterglen about a year, year and a half, ago. So she at least knows him. She'll of course know who Starkey is, but whether she's ever talked to him is not up to me.

Her daughter is not yet 3 years old so she still has at least a couple more years left as a foal.

Also, Falcata is currently using a masterwork Silver Warhammer, however, she's only up to novice at that, she just bites her enemies most of the time   :-\. Thus if you want me to change her weapon to something else that can be done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 08:52:00 pm
((I'll just continue then))
As Khenal, Friesden, and Otik entered the jungle, Psycho was busy dying from frostbite. This would give them...let's say one hour to reach him before it's too late.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 08:54:24 pm
I take Otik's lack of response as lack of objection as well, and head into the dense jungle, dismissing the umbrella.  The canopy is thick enough to keep most of the rain off us, and constantly adjusting it around branches would be too annoying.


*****************

And now I'm waiting to see a combat report that has Falcata biting something and then smashing/stabbing it with her weapon :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 08:58:50 pm
((scene music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Re7hMTqdlhg&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 09:02:26 pm
"Carrot!  Are you out here?  Hello?  Can you hear me?"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 09:03:20 pm
"Carrot! Where are you? Carrot!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 09:04:45 pm
Khenal and Friesden are rewarded with complete and utter silence. As the over-confident narrator, it is my duty to remind you that Carrot will likely die within the next half hour.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 25, 2011, 09:05:49 pm
(Being dead never stopped Carrot before.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 09:07:13 pm
((SILENCE INFIDEL!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 09:14:14 pm
I light my horn to provide illumination under the thick canopy, hoping it will help us in our search.

"Carrot!  Please, come back!"

*************

Does Carrot have his armor or a weapon?  Something that might stand out in the dense jungle?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on November 25, 2011, 09:17:02 pm
{{OOC: Far be it for me to be the voice of reason here, but.....

Below is the embark information.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

We are in a steaming hot jungle near the equator, nearing the end of winter, I grant you, if anything Carrot would be suffering from a heatstroke, possibly deep into a jungle-fever driven delerium.

Just sayin'

Darkening Kaos, CIS, LUH.}}

Edit: fixed quote
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 25, 2011, 09:19:42 pm
((Even in the jungle, it can get pretty cold at night.))

"Hey, yer s'posed t' be some kinda bad-ass magic user, right? Do ye know a spell wot could, I dunno, seek 'im out?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 09:20:18 pm
Indeed
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 09:20:24 pm
((All he has is his metal flask, also, ROLE WITH IT! IT'S COLD DUE TO GLOBAL WARMING EFFECTING THE PLANET :P RAH! NINJA'D FOUR TIMES IN A ROW!))
Khenal sees a glint in the dense jungle, he's unsure what to make of it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 09:23:31 pm
"Not really, at least, not without some hairs of his or something.  I could try to improvise, but there's no guarantee that it'll work."

I sit down, trying to think of a way to track Carrot.

**************

Smack dab in winter.  60 deg. F isn't unreasonable, and being soaked in that kind of temperature will give you hypothermia just easily as ten feet of snow.  Maybe not frostbite, but still a bad place to be without shelter :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 09:27:09 pm
"Please, my love. You must know something."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 09:33:56 pm
Otik sees a glint in the jungle ahead.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 09:35:01 pm
'Hmm...  Tracking spell.'

Glint

'Need a connection.'

Shine

'He's my friend, that's a good connection.'

Sparkle

'Is it possible to track him like that?'

Glare


"Gah, that reflection is so distracting!  Wait, what?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 09:39:40 pm
"Maybe it's him! Quickly!"
Friesden hurries over to the glinting.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 09:42:53 pm
I stand as quickly as I can manage and follow, hoping it really is Carrot and that he's alright.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 09:46:24 pm
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
What they find is unsettling. It's Carrot, but he's pale and he appears to have frost bite on his hoofs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 09:49:33 pm
Friesden goes pale. "He's....he's alright, isn't he? He's alive?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 09:52:09 pm
'Uh-oh'

"Carrot!"

I check for his pulse, worried at how cold he feels.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 09:53:11 pm
"Should we...should we take him back to the fort?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 25, 2011, 09:54:03 pm
Often sad and dejected and often happy?  Guess I've got a bipolar pony, lol. :D  Not much striking me for a name for the foal, so I'm just going with Jeneca for her (name of a spell from Everquest, not sure why that came to me).     I considered a blade name but figured she wasn't in the military (yet?), so it wasn't appropriate.  After consideration, I like Khenal and Dsarker's idea anyway.  Flipped a coin and Kris is the name, heh.

Alrighty, Falcata isn't involved in the current scene, so just a journal entry to get me started.  For what it's worth, I doubt I'll be able to keep up with the roleplaying Khenal, The Master and Dsarker usually get involved in, considering my schedule, so I'll probably be just dumping out these mini essays with each fort update.  I'll get involved with any RPs that would logically involve Falcata though, as time permits.

Falcata's Diary - 6th Moonstone, 98

I heard today that Captain Khenal has resigned from his position as captain of the gaurd.  To say that I'm shocked and disappointed would be an understatement.

If I had known what awaited Kris and myself when we were exiled to this place, I would have deserted on the spot and taken my chances elsewhere.  I can only thank all that is still good in this world that I did not personally witness many of the foul things that have taken place in this outpost, but I cannot deny that I believe many of the rumors of daemonic possession.  I have more respect for Khenal than to ask him to his face if they are true, but I believe them all the same.

The treachery, attempted murders and other worldly corruption filling this place are more than I can willingly stand, and have been for some time.  Through all of this, Khenal was the only reason I had any hope for peace.  I found him a bit of a curiosity at first, and couldn't believe that an alicorn would lower himself to fighting alongside the common guard.  In my time working with him, I've grown to respect him more than anypony else.  His dependability, honesty and humility are second to none, and I would prefer to serve under no other.

I once respected Countess Charity for her efforts in turning this place into a functional society instead of the penal camp it was intended for, but after the smuggling incident I don't believe I can say that any longer.  I watch my mouth and actions around her more than ever.

To hear that Khenal will be leaving his position is heartwrenching.  I have no doubt that his recommendation to promote Isos was well deserved, but my resolve to continue on has all but vanished.  I cannot fathom why he would do such a thing, but from what else I know of him, it must have been for a good reason.  To see him associating so freely with the murderous Dr. Friesden only worries more.  I would never say such a thing publicly, but I hope he has not been taken by one of the evil spirits plaguing this place.  We are all doomed if even he could not prevail against them.

I fear I will get little sleep tonight.  Perhaps I'll take some time practicing with my hammer some more instead.  Best to do something productive at least.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 09:59:48 pm
Maybe name the filly Kukri, in keeping with a blade theme?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 10:00:03 pm
once again, Carrot is d- what's this? Carrot stirs slightly despite having no pulse.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 10:00:20 pm
Or Kris.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 10:06:23 pm
((I FINISHED THE THEME FOR GLITTERGLEN! I hope you guys like it! Free MP3 download: New.MP3 (http://tindeck.com/listen/wzpo) there, fixed!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 10:09:07 pm
'No pulse, but he's still moving.  Good, right?'

My horn dims slightly and I channel my magic into levitating Carrot instead of keeping bright illumination.


"The fort sounds like a very good idea, love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 10:10:51 pm
"Let us go, then."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 10:14:42 pm
"Eh?!...wha?!...puh meh dow...rah..." Mumbles Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 10:16:18 pm
"He sounds sick. We'd better get him back quickly, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 10:19:30 pm
Needing no further encouragement, I hurry back towards the fort.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 10:21:45 pm
Friesden hurries back too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 10:30:57 pm
((like my song? I'm working on an extended version as I type.))
As the group is leaving the jungle, a group of diomedion thieves ambush them.
((edit for derp))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 10:38:47 pm
((like my song? I'm working on an extended version as I type.))
As the ground is leaving the jungle, a group of diomedion thieves ambush them.

Yay, I'm not the only one to derp today! :P  Also, uh-oh, Diomedians.  Good thing Captain Otik is here!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 10:40:29 pm
((like my song? I'm working on an extended version as I type.))
As the group is leaving the jungle, a group of diomedion thieves ambush them.
((edit for derp))


You both derped.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 10:44:46 pm
((THE FULL THEME IS DONE! Free MP3 download: Glitterglen Extented theme.MP3 (http://tindeck.com/listen/nuvy)))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 10:52:31 pm
I likey the theme very much.  Relaxed and uplifting, very nice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 10:53:34 pm
Thanks! :D IF this thread DOES die someday, it's going to go out with a bang!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 11:07:06 pm
NEXT SCENE! LIGHTS, CAMERA, INSANE MADMAN, ACTION! clack!

"You there! Yeah you, da one with da wings an' horn, gimmie yer bits! Or I'll kill yer marefriend!" sneers one of the Diomedians thieves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 11:17:27 pm
So, Diomedians.  Numbers, caste(s) and weapons?  You spawned 'em, detail 'em :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 11:21:00 pm
The narrator was eating lunch, so we had to bring in a new one...
the thieves had kittens...what?...oh, the thieves all had knives, and wore a black outfit with the word honor scorched into them. The one who had just spoken also has tentacles coming out of it's back, while the others were missing them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 25, 2011, 11:21:09 pm
I did consider a blade name, but figured she wasn't in the military (yet anyway), so it wouldn't be appropriate.  I thought about it though and I actually like the idea.  Couldn't decide which name to use, so I flipped a coin, and Kris it is.  Funny, I had military ponies named Kukri and Kris that met untimely fates in my last fort.  Hope the names aren't cursed. :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 11:23:40 pm
Friesden stops short.

"Dio...diomed...diomedians...Diomedians!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 11:31:23 pm
'...Clop.'

I set Carrot down by Friesden, placing myself between them and the Diomedians.

'Keeper, reality check please?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 11:31:51 pm
((It's real. It's not impossible to run into thieves if you're near a fortress.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 11:35:03 pm
"This is your late evening reality check! Reality still exists!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 11:35:39 pm
Friesden simply drops to the ground and covers her head with her wings once more.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 11:37:22 pm
((let's say there's four thieves.))
"HAHAHAHA! Awww...are you scared?" The leader makes a snapping sound with his tentacles, "KILL'ER!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 25, 2011, 11:40:51 pm
Friesden's wings move from over her eyes. Where there used to be a thick pupil, her eyes are now empty, pure white. She surges up and over Khenal, heading to the leader. She grabs his head by her back legs and twists. First the neck breaks, but she doesn't stop. She continues twisting, and before the astonished Diomedians or Khenal can do anything, she tears his head clean off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 11:42:21 pm
'Is it bad that I wish my check had bounced?'

I stand as tall as I can manage with my horn aglow, hoping to intimidate the diomedians into simply leaving.  Captain Otik loading her crossbow certainly doesn't hurt, either.


"Leave now, Diomedians, or you may never get the chance to."

I glare steel and ice at them, daring them to even attempt to follow their leader's order.

Then Friesden goes berserk.


**************

I know, but Khenal is still worried about Cockroach messing with him.  Just like I know intimidating them won't work, but Khenal tries it anyway, heh.  Also, transcribing more of this for FiMFiction.  Getting close to where the rping explodes and I'm unsure how to transcribe that part.  Should I have it first person from Khenal's point of view, and change to other ponies when it becomes appropriate, or go for third person?

Stop with the ninjas! :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 25, 2011, 11:45:26 pm
((I recommend having it first person, it would make it more interesting and more story-like.))

The diomedians, rather than flee for their life, cheer, much to astonishment of the others.
"Thank you so much, you have no idea how annoying that bastard was! Now, give us your stuff and we'll let you live."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 25, 2011, 11:54:46 pm
I hardly register what the diomedians say.  My mouth hangs open with shock as I try to process what just happened.

"...Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 12:02:13 am
Friesden is silent as she launches the head at another of the Diomedians and launches right back into the attack. She lifts up another of the Diomedians into the air and drops him, pummelling him throughout the drop. Her legs are covered in blood, and she turns to a third Diomedian. She flies straight at him, hooves held in front of her. Where she hits the head it ceases to exist, turning into a cloud of red, white and grey. Her face is covered in the remains. She turns to the last, the one she had hit with the head of the slain leader.


"You think very loudly, Khenal. Now, I know what's happening. She's an empty eyes berserker, for some reason. Now, what I want you to do is to pick up Carrot and Otik, and get us the hells away from her. She won't stop killing until she falls asleep. Once she wakes up...."

The Keeper scratches his head. "How did you deal with her memories, anyway? You never did tell."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 12:06:24 am
"SWEET MOTHER'A DISCORD, IT'S A NO-EYE-KILLER! I'M OUTA-"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 12:09:37 am
Keeper's words break me from my stupor, and I decide to follow his advice.  Horn glowing, I grab Carrot and Captain Otik and hurry towards the gates of Glitterglen.

'I used another mental construct, like the one I used on myself to forget about the experiments.  I didn't expect it to start slipping up so soon, though.  It took over a year for it to start to fail on me.  Now I think about it, though, it took life-or-death stuff for me to start bypassing it.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 12:10:18 am
Friesden swoops down, still silent, and tackles the Diomedian, before taking off again. He tries to get up, only to be knocked over by her as she comes speeding back. She does so again, and again, and again, breaking his will. She continues to do so until he eventually dies.


((and I have to go now, so....))

Friesden turns to Khenal, charges, and falls unconscious a metre away, landing at his feet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 12:12:53 am
"Khenal..." Splutters the suddenly conscious Psycho, "I told you so..." he says with a weak triumphant smile.
As Khenal and the gang near the gates, they hear the dying shrieks of the last diomedian, then silence.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 26, 2011, 12:18:57 am
*Bubbles is standing on the tower, enjoying the view, when suddenly Khenal drags in Otik and Carrot.*
"Wha..... GET THEM TO THE HOSPITAL NOW!"-calls down Bubbles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 12:22:04 am
I give Carrot a glare, which quickly softens to a smirk.

"Please.  If all it took for me to abandon somepony was a psychotic outburst, I'd be a very lonely pony indeed."

I lower Captain Otik (who had been in the middle of a barrage of fiery epithets, and showed no signs of slowing) so I can pick up my beloved.

"How are you feeling, by the way?"

I start walking towards the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 26, 2011, 12:23:24 am
*Bubbles gallops down the tower, and talks to Khenal*
"Khenal.... What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 12:24:11 am
((PLOT TWIST!))
"Strange, actually. Why was I in the jungle anyway...?" Asks Psycho, confused.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 12:32:33 am
"You tried to run away."

I then address Bubbles' question.

"We found Carrot and, uh... dealt with a Diomedian ambush. Everypony is alright.  Well, apart from Carrot maybe not having a pulse again.  And Friesden should probably be put in a cell until she wakes up, just in case."

I give the doctor an awkward smile, realizing how messed up my definition of 'alright' sounds.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 12:44:10 am
((aaaaaaaaaand there goes bubbles... ::)))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 12:45:56 am
Heh, I like to think he gives Khenal a flat look and wordlessly heads to the drink stockpile for something strong :P

Also, have a peek at the first bit of re-writing I had to do for the transcription.  It's the part where Friesden covers the walls of her cell with Khenal's name.  I couldn't play with the fonts and sizes, so had to go with a description of it.  Have a spoiler.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Also also, should I keep it present tense or past tense for when we break from journals in the transcription?

Edits are my friend!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 12:49:53 am
Doctor Bubbles gives Khenal a flat look and wordlessly heads to the drink stockpile for something strong.
"Khenal...am I dead...AGAIN?" I sigh, chuckling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 12:52:58 am
"Maybe?  I haven't checked your pulse since we got back inside the walls, though."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 01:10:07 am
"Can you check...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 01:23:08 am
I do as my friend asks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 26, 2011, 01:24:51 am
*Bubbles turns around from the drink stockpile, remembering that Carrot appeared to have hypothermia.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 01:27:26 am
Khenal feels no pulse at all on Psycho, but he does notice just how cold Psycho is, ICE COLD.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 01:33:33 am
I give my friend a sympathetic look.

"It appears your...condition has returned, just as it used to be.  Come on, lets get you warmed up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 01:41:32 am
"...Khenal? Why did FrieHONORsden go berserk anyway?"
((DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 01:44:04 am
'...Buck.'

*************

Next chapter up of the  transcription (http://poni.0au.de/story/2892/Glitterglen)!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 01:52:54 am
((You can cry now.))
"It's so much my cozy back in my original host...Oh, what's this? He's dead...how am I..." Says the confused Cockroach.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 01:53:41 am
((Scene music www.youtube.com/watch?v=DC4zgfVj-K4z))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 26, 2011, 01:55:59 am
(Cockroach is back. Groan. The Glitterglen theme you made was great though.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 02:00:31 am
((Think of the Daleks and Cybermen, no matter how many countless times they've been "destroyed for good" they always end up coming back anyway!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 02:04:54 am
"Death never did seem to do much to either of you."

My horn flashes as I lay my sleep spell on Carrot, hoping to at least keep Cockroach immobile so I can put him somewhere safe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 26, 2011, 02:05:50 am
((Think of the Daleks and Cybermen, no matter how many countless times they've been "destroyed for good" they always end up coming back anyway!))

(Yes, but the Daleks or the Cybermen don't show up in every episode. It seems like Cockroach has wormed his way into nearly every scene since his introduction. All I ask for is a little variety. Is that so much.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 02:14:35 am
((Actually, I was just thinking that...you'll be seeing alot more of Cockroach's friends later on. Also, this is the last scene that will have cockroach in it.))
Psycho instantly succumbs to the spell, locking Cockroach inside.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 02:21:49 am
I sigh and shake my head, heading for the main stairwell and the jail below.

'I hope Isos is ready.  She's about to find out first hoof what her new job entails.'


************
I wonder if Falcata is down there, too?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 02:25:56 am
I
((Actually, I was just thinking that...you'll be seeing alot more of Cockroach's friends later on. Also, this is the last scene will be one of the last scenes that will have cockroach in it.))
Psycho instantly succumbs to the spell, locking Cockroach inside.
I guess that ends the scene...Whew...Who owns Isos anyway?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 02:32:37 am
Nopony does, actually.  I might take control of her, at least until someone claims her. 

When Khenal sealed Cockroach in the earring, it was all in Khenal's head, right?  I think he might try it for real, if that's the case.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 02:35:34 am
Yeah, that sounds reasonable.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 02:49:11 am
Well, i'm going to bed, good night everypony!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 02:49:46 am
I'm getting ready to wall-o-text to prepare for Cockroach's demise, sound good to you, The Master?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 02:56:34 am
Like I said, I love reading walls of text! GO FOR IT!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 03:20:13 am
((Eh, if he or anypony else hates it, I'll just delete it.  Look, background character development! :P))

Isos never did understand Khenal's hatred for paperwork.  She had just finished with the last bit for the day, and was relaxing in her new office.  She might have had a harsher attitude towards the bureaucracy if she allowed it to pile up as he had, but she never did.  The admiration of her statues (that cabinet one was especially nice) would have to wait, as her former Captain entered the cell block, levitating two ponies.

"Isos?  Er, Captain Isos, are you in?  I, uh, need your help.  Can you please unlock two cells for me?"

Isos gives me a flat look as she replies.

"Khenal, you aren't Captain of the Guard any more.  You aren't even part of the Guard at all!  Why should I open any of these cells?"

"Um..."  I shift my hooves as I try to think of a reply that doesn't sound insane.  Realizing nothing truthful will fill that requirement, I plow on anyway.

"Carrot here is possessed again, but I have an idea on how to help him.  Friesden went berserk on some Diomedians and then passed out.  I'm pretty sure she'll be fine when she wakes up, but I'd like her in a cell if not."

"And how do I know you aren't possessed, Khenal?  Charity told me why she accepted your resignation, so why should I trust you?"

"Well, you can see Carrot breathing, right?  He doesn't have a pulse, though.  I...should really give you my book to read, it has a lot of information on what's been going on that I'm not sure you know.  Just check his pulse.  If his heart is still beating, I guess I'm crazy again and would really appreciate a cell for myself."

"You're crazy either way, but I'll humor you."  She looks annoyed as she checks Carrot's pulse.  She shifts to worried when she doesn't find it, and then to confused as she sees Carrot still breathing.

"What kind of job did you give me, Khenal?!  Fine, I'll unlock two cells for you.  But I expect that book of yours by morning!"

I sigh with relief as Isos unlocks the cells for me, then float Friesden into one and lay her gently on the bed as I follow Carrot into the other.

'Alright, Cockroach.  The last time I bound you in Carrot's earring was all in my head, but this time it will be for real.'

My horn glows as I slowly gather the energy needed to bind Cockroach.  With any luck, he'll never bother anypony again.


*********************

There we go.  The Master can do the actual end of Cockroach when he gets the chance, assuming this actually is the end of him. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 03:22:18 am
Friesden starts to stir. Her face is as peaceful as a lamb's.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 03:30:57 am
Isos quietly closes both of the cells, not wanting to risk letting anything dangerous loose in Glitterglen.  She's still a bit doubtful, but better safe than sorry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 03:31:53 am
((once again, I fail to sleep, LET THE MADNESS CONTINUE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 03:34:12 am
Let Cockroach die already so we can get on to more...tame....RP. I've already got the next part with Friesden planned out in my head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 03:34:47 am
Then it's your cue to write the end(?) of Cockroach.

Edited because nobody has to line up for anything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 03:36:16 am
Cue. And me, or Master?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 03:37:50 am
((I was doing that anyway, sheesh. STOP NINJA'ING ME!))

"NO! NO! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! KHENAL, YOU CAN'T DO THIS, THINK OF ALL THE FUN WE HAD! RAAAAAAH, I'LL KILL ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!" Screams cockroach in agony.

The room shakes and one of the cells nearby explodes into flying sharps of materials. Part of the ceiling caves in and nearly hits Khenal in the head. Then the tremers subside and with a brilliant flash of light, Cockroach was nothing more than a silently screaming face in an adamantine earring.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 03:46:13 am
"Cockroach, in fealty to the God-Princess, our undying lady, and by the grace of the Canterlot Throne, in the name of Glitterglen and the Watch, I call thee diabolis, and in the testimony of thy crimes, I submit this carta. May principial justice account in all balance. The Princess protects."


***************

Had to go and steal borrow that again.  I really like that seal incantation that Dsarker did.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 03:48:44 am
Not mine. You can thank Mr Dan Abbnett for that.

**************

Friesden comes to, and slowly gets up.

"Khenal? Khenal? Where are you, my love?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 03:53:14 am
((I'm working on getting the band to do a theme for Khenal, then Friesden, then, lastly Starkey.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 03:59:31 am
((NOW i'm going to bed, even song-writers/roleplayers/gamers/EVERY-OTHER-BLASTED-PROFESSION-THAT-I-HAVE need sleep.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 04:01:08 am
I collapse after finishing the incantation for binding.

"I'm...over here...my light."

I struggle to regain my hooves, but don't quite manage it, falling to my side in my struggles.

"Captain...some help, please?"

Isos unlocks the doors, more out of habit than conscious thought.

*************

G'nite!  Even though we all know you'll be back in a few min! :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 26, 2011, 04:01:09 am
*Bubbles feels a tingling at the back of his neck, and promptly says without thinking...*
"Cockroach, in fealty to the God-Princess, our undying lady, and by the grace of the Canterlot Throne, in the name of Glitterglen and the Watch, I call thee diabolis, and in the testimony of thy crimes, I submit this carta. May principial justice account in all balance. The Princess protects."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 04:05:03 am
"What....what happened? Why were we in cells? What happened, my love?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 04:15:39 am
Isos shakes her head, recovering from the shock of what just happened.

"What happened?!  That's what I want to know, Khenal!"

"Well..."

I don't get a chance to explain before falling unconscious from the exertion of casting the binding.

Isos grumbles darkly as she leads Friesden from her cell and begins to try to get under Khenal to carry him.


"Well, are you going to help me?  He's not going to wake up for a while, I'd bet.  I'll escort you two home.  I want that book, and some answers!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 04:17:39 am
"No need. I'll take him."


Friesden gets under Khenal, and straining, lifts him up. She slowly starts the walk to their room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 04:22:33 am
"Let me help you, he weighs a ton."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 04:24:22 am
"Love," says Friesden, still straining, "makes the most heavy burdens as light as a feather."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 04:29:22 am
She shoulders her way in to help carry Khenal anyway.

"As he'd say, 'Friends can share the load.'  Heh, he always was a bit sappy.  And I'm escorting you home whether you like it or not.  I'm the Captain of the Guard.  Besides, I really do need to get that book he mentioned.  I'm starting to wonder just what has been dropped on me with this promotion."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 04:34:50 am
"He's a dear soul." Friesden smiles in contentment.

"I don't know what book he meant, though. I'm sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 04:40:25 am
"Probably his journal.  He called it his book, not just a book.  Come on, lets get him home.  He isn't getting any lighter."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 04:43:37 am
"Okay."

Friesden continues to make her way home.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 04:53:02 am
Scene and cut to tomorrow?  Or scene and pick it up from somewhere tomorrow?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 04:57:45 am
Cut to tomorrow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thechosenone456 on November 26, 2011, 11:29:37 am
CYA LATER!! AND REMEMBER: FRIENDSHIP IS MAGICAL!!! <3

Armok, help me, I've gone insane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 26, 2011, 02:16:03 pm
I wonder if Falcata is down there, too?

Presumably she would have been somewhere practicing with her hammer to try and suck less at it.  I need to go back and find the images showing the layout of the fort, no idea if the barracks are near the jail or not.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 02:30:19 pm
Barracks, jail and Captain's office and quarters are all on the same floor and very close.  In fact, the Captain's quarters are apparently just past the office.

If anypony wants/needs to interact with Khenal, I'll be on for another hour-and-a-half to two hours.  Afterwords, I'll be gone for a while for gaming with friends :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 03:26:59 pm
I'm awake now too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 03:34:00 pm
I've got about an hour.  Think that'll be enough time for anything?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 03:35:34 pm
((Of course! So just to get the ball rolling...))


As dawn breaks on the fortress, Khenal wakes, and sees Friesden at the foot of his bed, an anxious look upon her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 03:38:35 pm
I lean over to nuzzle her, still feeling weak.

"Are you alright, my love?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 03:40:05 pm
Her anxiety lightens a bit, and lets the tiredness shine through. "I am now, my love. What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 03:47:38 pm
I smile and give a small chuckle.

"A lot.  What is the last thing you remember?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 03:50:53 pm
"We...We had just found Carrot, and a group of Diomedians were blocking our path...then I was in one of the cells."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 03:54:23 pm
"Do you remember what I told you when I sealed your memories of your past?  That I could only seal the conscious memories, but couldn't seal your subconscious?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 03:56:20 pm
"I....I think so, my love. Why? What's wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 04:12:10 pm
((Khenal? You there?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 04:12:34 pm
"The spell I used on you was one I had used on myself, several years ago, to try to fix a mistake I made.  It blocks conscious recollection of memories related to whatever subject it's supposed to seal.  In your case, your past.  However, it isn't fool-proof."

I reach out to embrace Friesden, knowing this next part will be hard for me to tell her, and likely harder for her to hear.

"You still have all the knowledge you gained, good and ill, but don't know how to access it.  In times of danger, however, the subconscious tends to react.  You...went berserk on the diomedians, then passed out mid-charge at...at Captain Otik and Carrot."

My omission hangs obvious as I pause.

"I brought you down to the cells, just in case you were going to go berserk when you awoke.  I was pretty sure you'd be fine, but I had to be sure."

Tears start flowing as I continue.

"I'm sorry, Friesden!  I promised to seal your memories like you asked, but I'm not strong enough!  I don't know how long the construct will last, but you'll start remembering your past eventually.  It may be in pieces or all at once, but they'll return.  I'm sorry!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 04:15:48 pm
Friesden just stands stock still, stunned.


"Khenal I must say again that you are a loud thinker. Where is Friesden, that your thoughts are shouting so?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 04:23:45 pm
I continue weeping and apologizing, hoping Friesden can forgive my failing her.

**************
I'll be taking off soon, got about 10min or so left  :-\
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 04:24:43 pm
"I... I don't understand."


((How long till you'll be back?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 26, 2011, 04:29:37 pm
"Y-You've had a hard life, a-and had realized what you had done.  Y-You didn't want to remember, and asked that I remove the memories and the pain they brought.  I-I'm so s-sorry!"

****************
And with that I need to get going :(  I'll not be back for 8 hours, maybe even more. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 04:36:32 pm
AND JUST WHEN I GET UP TOO!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 04:40:49 pm
Well, I guess I'll start working on Friesden's theme...Wish me luck, unless you want me to do a scene that is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 05:03:19 pm
DSARKER, YOUR THEME IS DONE! Free MP3 download: Friesden's theme.MP3 (http://tindeck.com/listen/hyvl)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 05:14:39 pm
"Khenal, don't tell me...you're talking to Friesden." The Keeper sighs. "How many times have I had to fix your mistakes? Khenal...why don't you, instead of...I don't know, GIVING UP AT THE FIRST SIGN OF TROUBLE, try to find out what went wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 26, 2011, 05:15:08 pm
((Yes, I know that Khenal isn't here. That's for when he gets back.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 05:33:30 pm
((I screwed up at the end of the song, one sec, I'll need to upload the fixed version. Free MP3 download: Friesden's theme.MP3 (http://tindeck.com/listen/pjge) fixed!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 26, 2011, 11:55:25 pm
I hope khenal gets back soon...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 12:00:49 am
It's spinning for me, The Master.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 12:03:36 am
odd, it's stuck on a still frame for me...it's gotta be Opera again...Oh, I left turbo on, maybe that's the issue...
EDIT: nope, still stuck, i'll try a different browser...
EDIT2: yep, that was the issue, on chrome it spins fine.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 12:17:35 am
I don't get it. The download link gves me a .htm file full of gibberish, and there's no way to listen to the song on the page.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 12:18:49 am
Click the download, save as, then switch the file format from .htm to all files, and append .mp3 to the end.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 12:20:15 am
Click the download, save as, then switch the file format from .htm to all files, and append .mp3 to the end.
StrongBeard should quote this in the op.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 01:19:03 am
sigh...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 27, 2011, 01:23:24 am
Yeah, wheres Khenal? He should be back by now...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 01:26:04 am
And with that I need to get going :(  I'll not be back for 8 hours, maybe even more. 
grrr.
EDIT: grrr has evolved into GRRRRRRRRRRR!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 27, 2011, 01:43:38 am
Click the download, save as, then switch the file format from .htm to all files, and append .mp3 to the end.
StrongBeard should quote this in the op.

And it is done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 02:00:28 am
Another day ends in and another sun sets over the fortress of Glitterglen. The last bird sings his lone song, as the ponies of the fortress head below, seeking refuge from the night. Thus ends another typical day in Glitterglen.

Well no, that was a lie. A typical day in Glitterglen involves insanity, daemonic posession, civil unrest, and the like, while remarkably this day has passed without incident.

Until now.

As things finally begin to wind down for the night, anypony who happened to be near the barracks would be startled by a loud shriek.


Let's save this scene for later...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 02:02:36 am
I'm going to be unable to RP that scene. I'm still back in the morning of the day in question.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 02:06:16 am
The sheiks echoed all the way down to the cells, and awoke Psycho Carrot, who was still locked inside.
Actually, we should still wait for khenal, we would want to cause a tear in the time-space-continuum!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 02:07:39 am
((Balls. Is everyone else unable to continue without Khenal?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 02:09:36 am
((pretty much...HOWEVER, this song shall voice my annoyance! http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=O0kA3X7GVIU#t=346s warning, language!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 02:14:46 am
(Heya everypony, I'm back!  Sorry about the delay, took a little longer than usual.)

I calm down a bit at Keeper's reprimand, though my eyes still hold tears.

'I know what went wrong, Keeper!  The spell simply wasn't designed with this kind of situation in mind!  And I'm not giving up.  I just...it's going to be so painful for her to remember, and I don't want her to be in pain like that.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 02:22:17 am
"Why don't either you or me go into her head and find out what's going wrong? Then you'll be more able to fix it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 02:25:20 am
((Sigh...I'll get the inception bwong...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXLDv-fUINM))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 02:30:26 am
'I'll ask if she's willing to have me check.  I'd prefer you stay out, though.  You are heavily involved in her sealed past, and the construct might not like you.  If it tried to seal you and failed, it might just shatter.  If it somehow succeeded, I don't know what would happen to you.

"Friesden, can I check on how the spell is doing?"


********************

I hate to hold up everyone's roleplaying like this, sorry everyone  :-[
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 02:33:02 am
Friesden is still still, and she seems to not even notice the question aside from a distracted "Yes, of course."

"As you wish."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 02:36:57 am
((hey, don't sweat it khenal! All you did was cause the entire world to end! :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 02:40:35 am
I give her a concerned and uncertain look as I prepare the mental link.  After a few moments, the link is finished, and I journey into Friesden's mindscape.

***********

Not the entire world!  Where am I going to put my stuff now?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 02:43:02 am
((ON THE MOON OF COURSE, LUNA WOULDN'T MIND! :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 02:47:18 am
Inside Friesden's mind, Khenal first notices the scenery. A grey, concrete room. On the wall is the only bit of colour, a map. While the map nominally shows a flowing river through a valley, two marks have been made on the map. Firstly, a line is crossed straight through the river's path. This mark seems to be more patient, and calm. Almost unnoticeable.

The second mark is not so. It appears to be intersecting another side of the map and the river, and has been frenzily drawn on, almost hacking through the map.

The sound of rushing water can be heard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 02:52:35 am
'Symbolism and metaphors.'

I examine the map, trying to get a feel for the locations of the two marks along the river.  Once satisfied, I look for the exit and the river beyond.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 02:59:04 am
There are two exits. One is tightly secured. Looking at the map, it could be the control room marked, or it could be a storage room. The other exit is free and opens easily.

It opens to a tremendous stone wall, larger than could be thought possible. As Khenal wanders out, he can see over both sides. The first, of course, is to the river. With the end walled up, it has risen to very unsafe levels - he can feel the spray as the water laps against the wall. The water isn't clear, but seems to be tremendously filthy. On the other side lies a dead valley floor, and the decay is exposed to see. Pony skeletons are numerous, as with other dead things.

Khenal can remember the map, and he knows that this should be where the first mark was made.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 03:02:00 am
((I have a feeling this is gonna be a long one.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 03:03:00 am
((Yup. If he'd just let the Keeper in, it would be over in a scene. But, oh no, he had to go and do it himself. :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 03:10:32 am
'Hmm, river: filthy.  Likely her subconscious.  Maybe not, though.  I would expect her conscious to simply be barren, not strewn with corpses.'

Pondering the scenery, I take off for the jagged mark the map indicated.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 03:15:38 am
As Khenal continues to travel, he gets nearer and nearer. Soon he can hear the sound of hurried industry...specifically, that of digging. Soon the wall seems to end, at a cave. The sound appears to be coming from within.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 03:18:13 am
I cautiously approach the entrance of the cave, ready to flee should things turn dangerous.

'Hello?  Anypony home?'


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 03:22:57 am
The sound from within is deafening, and somepony with a very loud voice is barking orders to a silent second party. The cave itself is lighted, though through unknown means.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 03:25:23 am
I carefully enter the cave to try to find the workers within, hoping they're at least not hostile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 03:27:46 am
Inside the cave there are hundreds of unicorns, swinging picks and chipping away at the rock. Under their feet the rock is damp, and several of them have been recently soaking wet. In the middle of rhe cavern is the source of the loud voice, and Khenal can recognise him as the construct.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 03:32:46 am
'Huh, didn't expect that.  Though, I guess I never got to actually see it work on myself.'

I walk over to the construct and try to get it's attention.

'Excuse me, can I ask you a few questions?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 03:34:11 am
The construct turns to Khenal and bows. The unicorns surrounding him do the same.

"Progenitor! Thy dam is constructed! What is thy next task?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 03:41:23 am
((Friesden is best pony.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 03:42:02 am
'Uh...'

I stand confused for a moment, not expecting the sudden attention.  I quickly shake myself out of it, remembering why I'm here in the first place.

'Why are you digging down here?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 03:48:23 am
The construct starts grovelling.

"Thy servant begs your forgiveness, Progenitor! But we had built the dam, and we discovered that the water was too high! We had failed thou, and we decided, in secret, to let a small amount leak, that thy dam not be breached by the force! We beg of thee to spare thy servant for his iniquity!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 03:50:14 am
((OH I GET IT! KHENAL, HE'S REFERING TO THE MEMORY LOCK-OUT THINGY YOU MADE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 03:52:09 am
((Only just now? I think Khenal has known about that since I mentioned the river.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 03:56:37 am
'Um, it's alright?  Having the dam burst would be a total disaster.  Some small flow is far preferable to letting the river free all at once.  Um, what's with the plains up top and all the corpses?'


*********************
I originally thought the dam itself was my construct, and the jagged mark to be something from Friesden's own mind, but I like the weirdness of actually having to talk to the construct.  I also enjoy Khenal's discomfort at the construct's reactions, heh.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 03:58:45 am
"Oh great and merciful Progenitor, we have been in here for several weeks, trying to fix this. We have no answer for thee. Please, we throw ourselves at thy feet! Have mercy on your weak and frail servants, and remember that we are but ponies."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 04:03:01 am
((I'VE HEARD A SIMILAR LINE BEFORE! :o What're you referencing dsarker?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 04:05:45 am
((The Imperial Infantryman's Uplifting Primer, Damocles Gulf edition. The line is as follows: "Sweet God-Emperor, forgive your servant his sins, and remember I am just a man."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 04:13:51 am
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=V2P11pU3yo0#t=117s warning, SMOSH!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 04:15:32 am
'Oh! Um...'

I back a few steps from the construct, uncomfortable with the entire situation.  Then, I get an idea.

'There is no need for mercy, oh diligent construct!  I knew this task was great when I gave it to you, and you have done admirablely in adapting to unnexpected setbacks.  Therefore, I have a new task for you.  This river is too mighty to simply dam, it must be allowed to flow under control.  Design a way to filter the waters and begin to tend the land.  Even the worst of river grime can be used to produce fertile fields and succulent fruit.  Follow the land, let her natural beauty blossom and grow.  Nurture this land and help her grow into her full potential.'

'Her past is troubled, oh construct, but she must find some way to deal with it and herself.  Do your best to help her come to terms with herself.  Be careful and diligent, rush nothing.  This is your charge, my construct, and I know you will not fail it.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 04:17:57 am
"O Progenitor, thy weak and frail servant doth thank thee! Thy task shall be accomplished!"

The construct stands up and bawls out a few orders. The unicorns stand and hurry their way out to the wall, picks in hoof.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 04:23:59 am
'Remember, Construct: Care and Diligence!  Rush nothing!'

I do my best to exit quietly and quickly, not wanting to fuel any zealous mistakes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 04:25:06 am
Khenal makes his way quickly back to the concrete bunker. The map has disappeared.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 04:30:24 am
I examine the secured door, curious about what's on the other side.  Curiosity and caution wage fierce but brief combat, eventually settling on a compromise of listening at the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 04:36:17 am
From within the door Khenal can hear the voice of Friesden. The words, however, are indistinguishable.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 04:40:52 am
Curiosity gains an ally in Concern as I raise my hoof to gently knock on the door.

'Friesden?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 04:44:42 am
The voice stops.

From within, you can hear the turning of many locks, gears, and other barring mechanisms. Slowly but surely, the door begins to open.

Inside is Friesden. The room itself is covered in pictures. All of what appears to be one pony, in differing poses. If anything, the proper word for this could be a shrine.

The pony appears to be coloured green.

Before Khenal can fully see the pictures, Friesden is running at him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 04:49:32 am
'Friesde-oof!'


***************

I almost went with "NotthefaceAAAAHHHH!", but that's not Khenal :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 04:51:20 am
She tackles him to the ground and takes him in a warm embrace.

"Khenal," she somehow manages to say between kisses, "why are you here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 04:55:21 am
'Um, you were acting a bit catatonic, so I had to make sure you were alright.  How are you feeling, love?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 04:56:55 am
"Better now, of course, my love! They've dried and you're here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 04:58:27 am
'They've dried?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:00:51 am
"Yes, my...uh..." She blushes. "My pictures. They've dried."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:01:04 am
((TWO THOUSAND YEARS LATER...
Old pony: "Yeaa...dats dem...DOSE TOOO BOWZOOS DAT WON'T GIT OFF MEH LAAWN!"
Robocorn: Shoots self
Old pony: "DAM' KEEDS AND DER MIN' CONTROOL MACHEEEEEEEENNSSSHRHHSFGSH"
I don't know...i'm getting antsy and it's 5:01 in the morning!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:04:40 am
Go to sleep then, you two thousand year old fart :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 05:09:11 am
I peer through the door at all the pictures, then blush a bit in embarrassment.  Turning my attention back to Friesden, I see about returning at least some of the kisses.

'Where did I find the luck to be able to know you?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:10:15 am
Friesden says "No, I'm the lucky one, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:11:26 am
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=V2P11pU3yo0#t=117s warning, SMOSH!))
((I reiterate. you're killing me with this loveydovywuvy...stuff...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:13:23 am
((See, this is why you should leave before it hits 5:00 AM.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 05:15:16 am
Heh.  Sounds like a scene to me, unless there's something I'm forgetting?

And I'm curious, what would Keeper have done?  Or will you be saving that particular maybe-disaster for later?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:17:40 am
I can stop bashing my head into the keyboard repeatedly then. I'm ready to collapse c6yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
EDIT: god, I fell asleep while typing that, good night everypony!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 27, 2011, 05:20:30 am
*Another bright light appears and Bubbles falls in, right in the middle of the two.*
"Uh...What the heck is going on? I was just in my office doing poison antidote testing, when I fell down here..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:22:05 am
Oh, I can tell you what the Keeper would have done. Basically one or two posts.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:22:48 am
*Another bright light appears and Bubbles falls in, right in the middle of the two.*
"Uh...What the heck is going on? I was just in my office doing poison antidote testing, when I fell down here..."

Going to find it hard to fall right in the middle of the two.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 27, 2011, 05:24:25 am
I'm imagining that I fall on your heads and you break away,
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:25:31 am
I'm imagining that I fall on your heads and you break away,

I was thinking more of the whole 'it's in Friesden's mind' type of thing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:26:07 am
(([sarcasm]I love how you always break the fourth wall, ansontan [/sarcasm] going to bed, NOW.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:26:58 am
(([sarcasm]I love how you always break the fourth wall, ansontan [/sarcasm] going to bed, NOW.))

AND STAY THERE.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 27, 2011, 05:28:33 am
*Another bright flash, and Bubbles is gone.*
((I gotz to goh!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 05:29:49 am
Heh, speaking of: bed sounds good about now.  I'll likely be missing for most of tomorrow as well.  This time I won't be silly and start anything and keep others from their thing.  I wanna know what happened in the barracks.  G'nite!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:31:01 am
Night then, you lot. Get a goodly amount of sleep. Seems tomorrow is going to be a fallow period.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:32:11 am
Expect a theme for Khenal tomorrow!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:33:30 am
Damn you, GET TO BED!


I feel like a parent, sometimes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:40:06 am
NEVER!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:41:58 am
Go to bed or you are GROUNDED, young man!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:49:57 am
NNNNNNNO! Sticks tongue out and jumps on bed.
Ok let's stop this before I die of a heart attack from lack of sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:54:22 am
Rightio.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Rentorian on November 27, 2011, 09:02:09 am
Alrighty then.
Black Friday, both prep and actual damn day: Done
Thanksgiving with family: Done
Thanksgiving with Dad's side of family: Done
Catch up on Glitterglen: .....  Holy hell....  This may take a while.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 12:33:45 pm
I never did fall asleep...Is it normal to be hearing the screams of the damned?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 02:52:41 pm
Yes, just don't obey them when they call for the sacrifice of a virgin.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 04:02:18 pm
((I'll go ahead and repost the barracks scene here, for when you guys are ready.))

Another day ends in and another sun sets over the fortress of Glitterglen. The last bird sings his lone song, as the ponies of the fortress head below, seeking refuge from the night. Thus ends another typical day in Glitterglen.

Well no, that was a lie. A typical day in Glitterglen involves insanity, daemonic posession, civil unrest, and the like, while remarkably this day has passed without incident.

Until now.

As things finally begin to wind down for the night, anypony who happened to be near the barracks would be startled by a loud shriek.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 04:12:00 pm
as soon as khenal arrives, we can begin.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 04:12:58 pm
Waiting for Khenal, eh?


Heh, speaking of: bed sounds good about now.  I'll likely be missing for most of tomorrow as well.  This time I won't be silly and start anything and keep others from their thing.  I wanna know what happened in the barracks.  G'nite!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 04:31:05 pm
right...so...I guess we start without or...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 04:56:51 pm
Friesden slowly started to stir as she heard the shriek.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:02:51 pm
"KEEP IT DOWN! I'M TRYING TO RECOVER FROM DAEMONIC POSSESSION...AGAIN!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:05:54 pm
With the shout, Friesden woke.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:14:39 pm
((yeah...this isn't going to work without khenal...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 05:45:48 pm
((Am I right to assume that Carrot is living in his new office off the barracks?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:46:38 pm
Slowly Friesden disentangles herself from Khenal, and gets up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:47:24 pm
((incorrect, he's still in a cell.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 05:52:28 pm
"N-No... stop... AAAAAUUUGHH..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 05:53:37 pm
"I SAID SHUT IT! I HAVE A BAD...wait, is that who I think it is? Hey, Friesden?! Khenal?! HELLO?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 05:55:04 pm
Slowly and unsteadily, Friesden starts to walk to the noise.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 06:10:24 pm
"I-I didn't... she fell for him, I had nothing to do with it, please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 06:13:16 pm
Friesden eventually comes to the barracks, and the source of the sound. She enters to find Starkey seemingly arguing with himself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 06:14:58 pm
Starkey is sitting up in his bunk, staring off into space with unseeing eyes. The normally stoic captain is utterly terrified of something that Friesden cannnot see.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 06:15:18 pm
Inside Starkey's mind....

I TRUSTED YOU. BUT YOU, YOU FOOL. YOU DIDN'T TRUST ME, AND HAVE PROVEN YOURSELF UNTRUSTWORTHY.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 06:16:16 pm
"What...what is it, Starkey?"

She is here. Damn you and your weakness!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 06:17:02 pm
"She's my friend! I only wanted to protect her! I... I didn't mean to take her from you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 06:21:40 pm
"Who is it you're talking to, Starkey?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 06:30:08 pm
Damn you. I know your heart is true. By the Nine Hells, a reckoning shall be had. But the plan is not yet failed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 06:33:32 pm
"P-Plan? Why would you go through with it now, she..."

His face hardens into a mask of anger.

"No... no, I won't let you. She's happy now, I won't let you tear them apart!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 06:40:29 pm
You mortals truly have no understanding. Yes, the first plan is halted. Schmoe flicks his fingers, and twenty ponies appear behind his form. For each of these, the plan failed. One of them is already here, assisting Khenal. He might refer to him as the Keeper, the Protector, or the Safekeeper. He is me when Friesden died. Another, there, you might refer to as the Destroyer. Friesden didn't die in his timeline, but Khenal died before he was born. He became a dead eyes. Another is the Hoper. Khenal dies, his mother dies, and Friesden dies. Sometimes his mother and Friesden are the same person. He didn't even know any of them, but he hopes for a brighter future. With a wave of Schmoe's hand, they disappear. The plans of the Great Changer are ineffable. They may change with every passing moment. But nothing prevents him from gaining his great hope.

"Who...Starkey, are you okay?"

Friesden rushes to Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 06:43:02 pm
"Hope? What is the great hope?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: thechosenone456 on November 27, 2011, 06:46:29 pm
Is it about romance in any way?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 06:46:54 pm
His great hope is to see everything utterly changing, to see its nature irrevocably changing every instant. Do not make the mistake of believing that just because he is the source of hope, he is nice, or good. Regardl- He lets out a scream of pain as Friesden puts her hoof on Starkey. Keep her AWAY from us.

"Starkey? Are you okay? What's wrong? Who are you talking to?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 07:02:36 pm
Her touch dispels the spectres in his mind, bringing him back to reality for the moment.

"W-Who... Friesden?"

Friesden finds herself wrapped in a bone-crushing hug. Starkey buries his face in her mane, sobbing like a little foal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 07:04:53 pm
Friesden returns the hug for a few seconds, and then tries to gasp out "Who..Who were you talking to?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 07:14:40 pm
"N-Nopony. I-It was only a bad dream."

He is obviously lying.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 07:15:24 pm
"Please. You can trust me. I can keep a secret."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 07:23:59 pm
Starkey read Khenal's book. He knows Friesden's mental block is the same as the one he used on himself. Her bond with Schmoe was strong, even before they fell for each other.

'No. Before she fell for him,' he reminds himself.

Emotions that strong could surely find a chink in her mental armor. He is unsure how much to tell her.


"It isn't... you wouldn't remember... "
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 07:27:37 pm
"Wouldn't remember what? Or who?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 07:34:26 pm
He can risk to tell her a little, can't he?

"He... I don't know what you called him. I know him as Schmoe. He is a daemon, one I thought I had locked away."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 07:39:11 pm
A flicker of recall runs through Friesden's eyes, and she opens her mouth to speak.

"I AM ASSUMING DIRECT CONTROL."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 07:45:07 pm
"Friesden?"

'Oh, no... oh Sisters, blease let it be my imagination...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 07:49:50 pm
"THIS FORM REQUIRES DIRECT INTERVENTION. SPEAKER, THY WORDS ARE ANATHEMA. DIRECT ANY OF THY QUESTIONS TO THE PROGENITOR."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 07:53:15 pm
"No... Oh no, Friesden, I'm so sorry!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 07:56:50 pm
"THY APOLOGY IS UNNECESSARY, SPEAKER. THE DAMAGE HAS BEEN RECTIFIED. INSTRUCT THE PROGENITOR FILTERING IS UP TO TWELVE PERCENT."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 07:57:22 pm
I was so planning to use that line. Glad I got to use it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 07:58:40 pm
"Who is the progenitor? What have you done with Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 08:02:38 pm
"THE PROGENITOR, OUR LORD KHENAL. FRIESDEN IS OUR CURRENT INTERVENTION PROJECT, FROM THE GREAT PROGENITOR, MAY HIS NAME BE FOREVER HELD HOLY, TO FILTER THE EVIL AND RECOVER THE GOOD, ALL GRACES BE UPON HIM. HE HAS GIVEN US THIS TASK, BLESSED BE HIS NAME."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 08:05:27 pm
'Khenal... intervention... filter... does that mean...?'

"You... are the mental construct Khenal created to lock away Friesden's memories? Why are you controlling her now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 08:09:06 pm
"THY WORD FORCED US TO INTERVENE DIRECTLY TO SAVE KHENAL'S WORK, GLORY TO HIS NAME. WE ARE CONTROLLING HER TO PURIFY THE CORRUPTION FROM DIRECT INPUT, GLORY GLORY THE REDEEMER, GLORY GLORY THE REDEEEMER. TWENTY SECONDS UNTIL PURIFICATION OF DIRECT INPUT COMPLETE, THAT KHENAL MAY BE PRAISED ABOVE ALL OTHER NAMES."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 08:14:51 pm
"Then she will be well. Thank you, construct. I am sorry for hindering your work."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 08:16:14 pm
"THY SORROW IS NOT NECESSARY, ONLY THAT THY PRAISES BE GIVEN TO THE PROGENITOR, BLESSED BE THE NAME OF KHENALStarkey, why am I here? What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 08:22:31 pm
"It doesn't matter. Thank you, I think I can get back to sleep now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 08:23:22 pm
"Where...where's Khenal?" she asks groggily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 08:25:37 pm
"Home, I'd imagine. He's probably missing you right about now. Good night, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 08:28:26 pm
"Oh....Okay."


Friesden begins to slowly walk back to her room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 08:36:45 pm
((scene? WHERE'S KHENAL?!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 08:38:30 pm
He said he wouldn't be here for most of the day. Relax.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 08:43:31 pm
As friesden leaves the barracks, she notices somepony: the lieutenant is standing just outside the doorway. Otik pretends as though she has only just arrived, but Friesden can tell she has been there for some time. As she leaves, Otik hurries in past her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 08:53:46 pm
"Huh...that was Otik."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 08:58:23 pm
((...aaand I totally forgot where I was going with that one. :-[))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 09:03:02 pm
Besides that Starkey's walking out with Otik?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 09:08:07 pm
((Starkey's going to sleep, and Otik just walked in the barracks.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 09:09:55 pm
Yes. Walking into the barracks, then somewhere else...

:P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 09:11:52 pm
Oh....

Ooooooh...

Then yes, I suppose, something along those lines. :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 09:18:23 pm
What did you think I had meant?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 09:20:18 pm
Besides that Starkey's walking out with Otik?

... that he had gotten up and they were going for a walk? :-[
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 09:21:33 pm
keep it TV-MA HERE! XD
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 09:22:18 pm
:P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 09:24:01 pm
Hush you. I wasn't going there, at any rate.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 09:26:24 pm
are you sure? what about that belly rub? :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 09:32:51 pm
Perfectly innocent.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 09:33:54 pm
KHENAL! WHY HAVE YOU FORSAKEN US! THIS IS. THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING! falls into sofa
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 09:35:13 pm
Indeed. Originally, Friesden was supposed to follow the screaming and find them in the middle of a tickle fight. I just thought this would be more interesting, and I could draw it out more.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 09:38:27 pm
Well, it changed Schmoe up, but what the hay?



Anyway, of all the possible things, this is the WORST POSSIBLE THING!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 09:49:38 pm
Oh man, Khenal would beat the crap out of the construct if he heard any of that.  As for why Khenal didn't wake up for the scream or Friesden leaving, I have an excuse for that.  The construct uses Khenal's energy to do it's job.  With it's increase in activity, especially the "direct control" part, it's draining Khenal's magic something fierce.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 09:53:53 pm
Why would he beat the feth out of his construct?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 09:55:51 pm
Friesden finally gets back to her room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 10:05:47 pm
((i'm taking a shower, i'll be back shortly))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 10:07:26 pm
I lay in bed, still asleep.  However, I fidget and twitch, apparently having a bad dream.


********************
Partially for the direct control, partially for it's worship of him, and partially out of fear that it's influencing Friesden's emotions.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 10:09:44 pm
Friesden rushes over to Khenal.

"Khenal, my love, are you okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 10:15:39 pm
((back, i'm fast.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 10:17:50 pm
Angry that he's been completely forgotten, Psycho begins to scream and yell quite noisily.
"...FOR THE LAST BUCKING TIME, I'M FINE NOW! IS THERE ANYONE OUT THERE, AT ALL??!?!? ...Anyone...? Why the hay do I get myself into these messes...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 10:18:41 pm
"Huza..wha?"

I blearily open an eye, then give Friesden a tired smile.

"Hello, love.  I guess I was having a nightmare.  Did I wake you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 10:21:24 pm
Friesden blushes very slightly.

"No...I was with Starkey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 10:22:52 pm
Psycho has given up waking the rats, and has settled with crying to himself quietly.
"It's not f-fair...why d-do I always hav-v-ve to be the puppe-e-et...? Why didn't I j-just freeze to death, and stay d-d-dead?!" he moans.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 10:29:51 pm
My other eye opens and I groggily sit up.

"Starkey?  Huh.  How's he doing?"


Meanwhile, in Isos' Chambers

"Ugh, I thought anything would be better than his shouting.  I was wrong."

Isos paces by her bed, trying to figure out what to do about the pony sobbing in one of her cells.  She eventually stops and heads to her door, apparently having made a decision.

"Captain Carrot?  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 10:30:26 pm
"Good, I guess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 27, 2011, 10:30:37 pm
((Friesden tells Khenal she was in his best friend's bedroom and she doesn't remember what happened. Hilarity ensues.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 10:33:56 pm
((That's what I was thinking. Then I'm thinking he'd get up, and head over only to find Starkey and Otik...romantically entangled, shall we say.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 10:33:59 pm
"Wh-wha...what the hay d-do you want now...?" Asks Carrot through the sobs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 10:42:05 pm
"Ah, that's good."

Too tired to catch Friesden's uncertainty, I lay back down.



In the cell block

"I just wanted to check on you, see if you're alright.  I'll let you out in the morning.  As far as I can tell, you aren't being charged with anything.  So cheer up, this'll hardly even be mentioned in the paperwork, let alone your record."


**************************

Isos is a lot more by-the-book than Khenal is :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 10:43:04 pm
Friesden joins Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 10:44:10 pm
"MORNING?!" I scream, trying to ram into the bars, "LET ME OUT NOW!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 10:48:59 pm
Isos turns her head to the side, thinking.

"Hmm, how long have you been in this cell, again?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 10:50:28 pm
"Well, lets SEE! I haven't had bucking breakfast, lunch or dinner for a day, and I haven't had breakfast or lunch today, SO THAT MAKES IT TWO DAYS!" I scream, right in Isos's face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 10:56:58 pm
She quirks an eyebrow at Carrot and glances at one of the barrels near the cell.  She opens it and checks, frowning.

"Well then, Captain Carrot, I need to apologize to you.  I lost track of time, and I could have sworn I asked one of the guards to release you this morning.  24 hours is the limit for holding a pony without charge.  Additionally, somepony forgot to get a new barrel of food so we could give you your meals.  I'll get the keys and let you out in just a moment.  Again, I'm sorry about this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 10:58:43 pm
Carrot, rather than thanking her, utters something so coarse that the old narrator killed himself after hearing it. Suffice to say, Isos was not pleased.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 11:02:24 pm
She frowns at Carrot, though she still remains calm.

"I don't think that's physically possible, and I know it's not legal.  Besides, where would I even get a squeegee at this hour?  Regardless..."

She unlocks the cell.

"You are free to go."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 11:06:26 pm
((there would have been a witty comment here, but the master died of laughter.))
"Where the buck is Khenal? Aw, the hay with it...i'm going to bed... Oh, could you see if you could execute my wife for cheating on me...? that would make my day..." Says Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 11:11:34 pm
"I don't think adultery is a charge the guard handles.  I'll check into it, though.  I hope the rest of your day goes better."

*************

Very by-the-book :P 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 11:13:32 pm
Well, scene?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 11:14:00 pm
"it's night, you stupid dwarf..." Mutters Carrot has as he stomps to his room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 11:18:26 pm
((glitterglen theme! http://tindeck.com/listen/nuvy))
The sun begins to rise, and Carrot is in his usual spot on the tower, enjoying the warm rays of light.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 11:20:28 pm
Friesden continues to sleep soundly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 11:27:19 pm
I occasionally break into consciousness, only to slightly adjust my position and continue sleeping.

**********

Sunrise?  Not without being forced awake :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 11:28:41 pm
Carrot barrels down the halls, singing only Discord knows what, at an ear-shattering volume.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 11:45:44 pm
Friesden tries to continue sleeping.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 27, 2011, 11:50:46 pm
I mumble something incoherent before slipping back to sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 11:53:22 pm
Predictably, Carrot crashes into a solid object. Unpredictably, it was Khenal and Friesden's door.
"LA LA LAAHHH!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 27, 2011, 11:56:13 pm
Friesden keeps her eyes closed with her wings over her head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 27, 2011, 11:58:15 pm
"HI FRIESDEN! WHAT'RE YOU DOING HERE?! I CAN'T HEAR MYSELF TALK, AM I YELLING?!?!?!??!?!?" Screams Carrot, upside-down with the door flung open.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 12:05:02 am
"Ungh, too early.  Go away."

My horn barely flickers as Carrot feels the merest whisper of force brush at his mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 12:06:57 am
"But GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUYS!!!! DON'T YOU KNOW WHAT DAY IT IS?!??!?!" I scream even louder.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 12:07:30 am
"Your turn to deal with the crazy pony."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 12:18:24 am
I grumble, unable to argue anything even remotely resembling logic this early, before sitting up and turning to Carrot,

"Actually, no.  What day is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 12:22:17 am
"IT'S MY BIRTHDAY SILLY!" Yells Carrot, now an inch away from poor Khenal's head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 12:26:32 am
Friesden has so far failed to go back to sleep, and says sleepily "Happy Birthday."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 12:28:09 am
I put what little enthusiasm I have (they call it mo(u)rning for a reason) into wishing Carrot a happy birthday.

"Oh, Happy Birthday.  Why are you yelling?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 12:32:01 am
"I FOUND THESE CUPCAKES AND..." Khenal and Friesden run for their sanity the moment they hear Carrot mention the word Cupcakes. They know full well what Carrot is like WITHOUT sugar in his system...DISCORD KNOWS WHAT HE'S LIKE WITH IT!
 
This is what the narrator wanted to happen, but alas, he was killed by a hobo.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 12:37:30 am
"Cupcakes?  I didn't know we had any puppy tallow left."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 12:38:33 am
"No. Two more hours of sleep. Please. I was up last night with Starkey, and you know what that means."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 12:45:35 am
"AW COME ON GUYS, IT'S MY BIRTHDAY!" He sees the reaction on their faces at this point, "Oh...I see, you guys forgot...nevermind..." Carrot just walks back teary-eyed to the tower and sighs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 12:54:11 am
"Well, I'm awake now."

My mind finally finishes processing what Friesden said about Starkey.

"Uh, what does it mean?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 12:59:05 am
"Well...I...uh...can't remember...." she mumbles feebly, and beginsto blush.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 01:07:54 am
'Huh.  Well, she didn't go berserk, at least.  She'd hardly be back here if that was the case.  I'll ask Starkey about it later.'

I smile at the pony I love, nuzzling her before getting out of bed.


"Are you going to go back to sleep?  I'm going to go try and find Carrot to give him his gift."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 28, 2011, 01:10:04 am
((Oh shit...))

The captain and lieutenant remain snuggled contentedly together through Carrot's confection-fueled rampage - learning to sleep through late night sparring sessions and shift changes will do that to you.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 01:13:50 am
((Come on, give in to the implications....))

"No...I think I'll get up now too." She yawns. "Not going to get much more sleep anyway."

She gets up and winces. "What...I can't remember...what..." Her eyes widen. "I can...I can remember what birthdays are. What..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 01:14:07 am
((you should know by now that nothing ever happens like it should.))

Meanwhile in a different plane of existence...
"...DAMN IT GHAST, HOW DO YOU ALWAYS WIN AT CHESS?!" Cries Drakle, a green mist daemon.
"Heh, I guess-...What in hell...?" suddenly, there's a flash of light, and Ghast is now in a strange colorful world...full of PONIES?!
"AH! WHERE'RE MY DAMN LEGS?! THE...I'M A HORSE?!?!?! CURSE YOU ARMOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Screams Psycho.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 01:23:37 am
"That's a good thing, isn't it?"

**************

I doubt anything short of catching Friesden and Starkey doing something inappropriate would make Khenal freak out.  He's actually been worried that she hasn't tried to get to know anypony else since he sealed her memories.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 01:28:27 am
"I didn't yesterday."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 28, 2011, 01:29:52 am
Yeah, wander into the thread, see I missed an opportunity to interact during the period in which I had time.  Ah well, off to bed after this post.  It's probably been a few effective days since my last post, but it kind of works anyway.

Falcata finishes her feeble attempts to learn to swing her hammer any better and returns it to its sling.  Swinging the heavy instrument about telekinetically was just as draining as she remembered.  She had never spent much time practicing her magic, and the weapon just weighed too much.  She wipes some sweat from her brow and plods out of the barracks back toward her quarters.

Her entire body aches at the expenditure of magic, and right now she's too tired to care much about the noisy outbursts echoing down the halls.  She was pretty sure that the voice belonged to Carrot, and that was becoming a bit routine.  If she was needed, somepony would come get her.  The incidents had worked themselves out without her involvement so far.

Maybe tomorrow she would try swinging the hammer around with her mouth... no, that would just give her a sore neck, and that would take a lot longer to recover from than burning up some magic.  Right now, she was just going to catch what sleep she could.


((Incidentally, are the guards' quarters near the barracks, or somewhere else entirely?  I'm always lazy about this and just let the guards and soldiers sleep with the civilians on another z-level))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 01:39:14 am
"Still, it's not a bad memory, is it?"

************

Writer's block....setting in...nnnnooooooo
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 01:41:46 am
"But why do I remember it, and not my own?" She starts looking worried. "Is this anything to do with my dreams?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 01:47:27 am
"Your dreams?"

I hold open the door for Friesden, hoping to talk as we head towards the carpentry shop where Carrot's present awaits.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 01:58:55 am
"Hooves...wow...AND IS THAT A TAIL?! DAMN IT! Well, at least I can kill people again!" Laughs the clearly-not--possessed--Psycho-Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 02:01:54 am
"Yes, you were there. You said I was catatonic. I know you were really there. Was that something relating to this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 02:14:47 am
"Um, yes.  Sealing the entirety of your past was simply beyond my construct, and memories started leaking through.  I had to adjust the purpose of the spell, or it would have failed completely.  It's working on releasing your memories back to you slowly, so you can better deal with them.  If you happen to dream of the construct, please give it advice on how to help you.  Tell it.."

I groan as I say this:

"Tell it that your directions are the Progenitor's Will.  And, um...try not to let it's opinion of me freak you out.  I know I had a hard time with it."


*********************

New daemon thing, and Khenal is low on magic and without weapons or armor?  This is going to get interesting.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 02:16:59 am
!!FUN!!

*****************

"The Progenitor's Will?" She giggles a bit as she says this, and the colour returns to her face. "What, are you the Progenitor?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 02:21:03 am
*Groan* "Apparently?  I didn't come up with the name, bleh."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 02:24:03 am
"Oh, I think I can access some of this whelp's memories...oh, yes...AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 02:27:14 am
"Sure you didn't, Progenitor," she says in a lightly mocking tone. "You really are the greatest thing to happen to me in the world. Whatever those memories are, we'll deal with them, together."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 02:38:21 am
I groan a bit at the name again, but then smile and nuzzle my love before heading into the carpentry workshop.

"Now then, where did I put his gift?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 02:49:27 am
((what?))
Khenal finds the gift with a knife sticking out of it, being used as a door stop.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 02:52:22 am
"Khenal, you didn't put the knife in it, did you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 02:58:49 am
I examine the knife before pulling it out.

"Who would stab a knife into the chest I made for Carrot?"

*****************

What, you didn't think Khenal actually forgot the birthday of one of his friends, did you?  And you've gone and put a knife mark in the lid of your new chest :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 03:01:07 am
"THIS IS FUCKIN' INCREDIBLE! I DIED A CON, NOW I CAN LIVE AS A CON AGAIN! FUCK YOU GRIM, YA HEAR ME?!??!?" Carrot screams at the heavens.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 03:10:28 am
"I...I don't know, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 03:17:02 am
I quickly touch up the gouge from the knife before hiding the chest behind the door again.

"Well, at least the gouge wasn't hard to repair.  Lets see if we can find Carrot, I think he's taken to enjoying the view from the tower recently."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 03:22:22 am
"Yes, my love."

Friesden follows Khenal up to the tower.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 03:25:36 am
Ghast quickly gives Carrot back control just as Khenal and Friesden come up.
"URRRGGG!! Ah, what?" Carrot groans, confused.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 03:28:16 am
"Heya Carrot!  Come on, we have something to show you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 03:29:05 am
"Sure..." Carrot says, feeling very ill all of sudden and turning slightly pale.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 03:31:32 am
"Are you feeling alright, Carrot?" asks Friesden, with a look of concern on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 03:34:40 am
I mirror Friesden's expression, hoping my friend isn't sick on his birthday.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 03:38:03 am
Carrot walks very slowly up to Friesden, then his eye color shifts to white, then a deep ocean blue, before settling on pure gold.
He smiles seemingly genuinely, then punches her so hard that she sees stars. Then he speaks.


"Heh, name's Ghast. Pleas'd to mak' your acquaintance."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 03:46:02 am
"Friesden!"

I charge Carrot, attempting to shoulder-check him away from Friesden.

************
Also: punch?  Without a fist? :P  Maybe simply strike her?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 03:48:51 am
Drip.

There's a sound that comes before a rockslide. Once you've heard it once, you'll never forget it. It's a small sound, and builds up into the crescendo of the landslide. It starts with the little sounds of pebbles rattling.

Drip.

It doesn't come that way with all things. Artificial objects are usually built without this handy feature inside. They rely on alarms, on bells and whistles to alert the user of danger.

Drip.

In this case, however, the sound was that of a single drop of water, falling.

Drip.



"ALL CREW TO THE EMERGENCY RELEASE VALVE, IN THE PROGENITOR'S NAME!" bellowed the construct. Unicorns were running frantically over the wall, but at the sound of the bellowed order, they organised themselves and quickmarched over to the cave. Their picks were ready, and they commenced the release. The construct was horrified. The Progenitor Himself had given him a task, and he would have to fail it. The water was at the level of the dam, and the pressure was building. Even the tiniest bit more pressure would destroy the dam and undo all the work. The only chance would be to leak out some of the water. This had been done before, and worked...the construct had only not predicted they would need to do it again so suddenly. He looked desperately out at the wall, at the dripping from there, and prayed that the Progenitor would speed their work.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 03:50:53 am
((hoof punch, it still works. WHAM! either way.))

Carrot just dodges away like it was nothing, and then says,
"Hah! this is so much fun after being locked away playing chess for ten-thousand years! Now, down to buisness. I want to kill ya, but I'll assume you blokes want to live, dig? How's'bout this? I kill yer marefriend, then I kill you, that way ya suffer longer! Got it? GOOD!" and with that, he bites onto friesden and leaps off the tower.

((AND NO, THIS TIME IT'S REAL. be resourceful.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 03:57:09 am
I leap off the tower after them to grab Friesden, then spread my wings to glide us safely to the ground.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 03:59:52 am
Carrot has a glint in his eye that INSTANTLY makes Khenal aware of the true extent of the threat at hand. Carrot wasn't even resisting at all, the daemon was THAT powerful.
"I'VE BEEN DEAD TOO LONG TO BE THWARTED SO SOON BY A FLYING DWARVEN DOG!" Spits Ghast. He spins in the midair, hurling the three of them at the tower's base.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 04:03:54 am
Drip. Drip. Drip. Drip. Drip. Drip. Dripdripdripdripdripdripdripdripdripdripdripdrip.


It started with a whine. The construct knew the sound. Knew what it meant. The dam was under unbelievable strain.

"FASTER, PROGENITOR DAMN YOU! FASTER!" The unicorns continued swinging wildly, and it was done. The water flooded through, and washed away two of the unicorns, but it was done.

The construct let out a sigh of relief.




Friesden woke up and turned to her carrier.

She said nothing as she kicked him. Kicked him, again and again and again and again. If you had been watching and knew nothing of the way a pegasus works, you would laugh at what she was doing.

But if you know, you would be clapping. With each strike, she hit one of the pressure points around the wings. Each one of them controlling the fall. With one last swift strike, Carrot's wings no longer responded.

Her eyes were the most ghastly part of it all. They weren't -her- eyes. They spoke of death. Of ruin. Of the end of all things. Of the lost immortality of the world before. Of the last days of the last age of the universe. Of pure entropy made manifest. And worse, they held the onlooker with a death grip, no pun intended.

With a quick flap of her wings, she took the pair to the wall of the fort.


Wham.

Wham.

Wham.

Wham.

Wham.


With each slam of the pair against the wall, Carrot's grip weakened.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 04:07:03 am
Carrot smiles, and purposefully lets go and falls from a fatal hight; Ghast figuring out that his host would be the perfect life-wrecker.
"AHHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA..........." Khenal hears as he falls to his death, or rather to his splatter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 04:08:38 am
Friesden takes the initiative, and dives down at Carrot. She hits him and slams into the ground at an even faster speed, then climbs rapidly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 04:13:57 am
Carrot is now a mangled mass of flesh that once resembled a pony splattered all over the ground. CONGRATULATIONS, YOU'VE COMMITTED MURDER...AGAIN! Just be glad I have a backup plan...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 04:15:32 am
Friesden turns to Khenal.


As throughout the entire battle, there is not even a flicker of emotion in her eyes as she flies straight at him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 04:17:47 am
I brake and land rougher than I'd prefer, but very much intact and trying not to look at the crater Carrot made from Friesden's attack.

"Friesden!  Calm down!"

I then see her eyes.

"Uh-oh."

I begin to channel what magic I have to the construct, hoping to help him keep Friesden sane.


**************
A dash of denial and a sprinkle of desensitization of Carrot dying ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 04:20:47 am
Friesden doesn't even swerve, continuing to charge at Khenal. She is, however, beginning to show signs of exhaustion.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 04:24:52 am
"Now who am I supposed to narrate?" the narrator asks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 04:25:54 am
I take a defensive stance as Friesden closes on me, hoping I last longer than her other opponents so far.  My horn continues to glow as I channel as much magic as I can to the construct.

"Come on, Friesden.  Come back to me, please..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 28, 2011, 04:28:40 am
*PANG! A bright light, and a spear appears in Khenal's mouth.*

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 04:31:10 am
((ENOUGH WITH BREAKING THE BLASTED FOURTH WALL ANSONTAN, IT'S REALLY NOT COOL!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 28, 2011, 04:32:11 am
((Dude, I'm trying to make this more exciting. With his spear, Khenal will be able to fight back Friesden and injure her again. That means work for me.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 04:32:41 am
Friesden continues on, heedless of the new weapon - or so it would seem. With a swift one two kick, the spear is shattered in half, and she leaps over him, kicking on the way down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 04:36:01 am
((Friesden doesn't seem to phased by it. I KNOW, GIVE KHENAL C4 NEXT, THAT SOUNDS DANDY! Carrot exploding into gore wasn't exciting at all...?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 28, 2011, 04:37:16 am
*Another flash, and Khenal appears to receive a sophisticated glowing device named 'C4' with the mark- CAUTION-EXPLOSIVE!*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 04:38:42 am
You could give him that.


He wouldn't use it, like he wouldn't the spear, but you could still give it to him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 04:39:05 am
I roll to the side, the devastating kick grazing my left wing yet still almost fracturing it.

'Holy Ingest!'


"Friesden!  It's me, Khenal!  Please, come back!"


*****************

Ya, Khenal is not going to hurt Friesden.  Even at the expense of himself, he'll never intentionally hurt her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 28, 2011, 04:39:37 am
Something tells me that if I gave it to him you would kick it and both of you would explode in gore.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 04:42:11 am
Friesden's Death Eyesing. Think of a berserker, but without the lack of precision.


********

Friesden's movements slow as the exertion of the combat takes its toll.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 04:47:31 am
SUDDENLY, THE SUN GOES OUT AND EVERYONE STARTS SINGING SUNSHINE LOLLYPOPS AS THE WORLDS BURSTS INTO FLAMES AND IMPLODES!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 04:48:52 am
I continue dodging and blocking for all I'm worth, all the while channeling my magic to the construct and trying to reach Friesden with words.

"Friesden!  Please, I don't know how much longer I can last.  You need to come back!  Please!"

One of her strikes finally lands true, sending me flying and breaking at least one rib.


*************

Na, C4 wouldn't make us explode.  You can hit that stuff with a hammer and it won't go off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 04:50:21 am
((correct, it's designed to ONLY explode when it's remotely ordered to. I can't wait to see how khenal reacts when he notices Carrot is dead!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 04:52:26 am
And with that last kick, Friesden drops asleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 04:56:34 am
I stagger to my hooves, breathing raggedly from the fight and my broken ribs.  I slowly walk over to Carrot.

"Come on, Carrot.  Get up.  I don't think I can carry Friesden like this."

"...Carrot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 04:57:57 am
Carrot is so ridiculously mangled that his insides are actually scattered across the fortress. Whatever was controlling him, it got what it wanted. Psycho Carrot was no more.
((For the record, Friesden did murder Carrot.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 05:06:01 am
Assisted suicide, at most.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 05:07:05 am
Assisted suicide, at least.
((I agree.)) wait, what am I doing talking out of character now? I DON'T HAVE ONE ANYMORE!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 05:08:13 am
My eyes widen as I realize that Carrot is likely not going to simply get up from this one.  I turn and dry-heave, failing to vomit only because I haven't eaten yet today.

I finally cease channeling extra magic to the construct, instead needing to gather up Friesden and what's left of Carrot.  I lay Friesden across my back, heedless of my injuries, and trudge towards the carpentry shop.  Once there, I open the large chest I had made and place Carrot's remains inside it, tears flowing.


"I...I'm sorry, Carrot.  I made this chest for your birthday, hoping you'd like it.  I never expected it was a coffin, instead."

"Happy Birthday..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 28, 2011, 05:10:07 am
((The Master. Soz, you've finally killed your own character. Congratulations.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 05:13:29 am
((I'm sorry. If your quarry goes to ground, leave no ground to go to. You should have taken my offer. Or did you think none of this was your fault?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 28, 2011, 05:15:07 am
(( hey hey I'm back! and 210% more cohesive this time! BACKSTORY BEGINS NOW))

 In an unfamiliar room filled with Black darkness, cut by a narrow sliver of lamp light, all that is visible is an unconscious dark blue pony with a wild unkempt blue mane and a dagger for a cutie mark tied down to a wood chair. he's clearly been badly beaten, there are deep cuts and bruises all over his naked body. his six pack abs glisten intensely, as if Crisco has been liberally applied to them.

 " ... ugh... did Charity kill me?" Couth slurred as he entered a half consciousness.

He looks around the pitch black, hoping to see his gods Othud Cherishfair or Thebil Mindfulsongs, but no, no. In his typical luck, he sees a tentacle pony he never wanted to see again. he has a gray coat, has a well groomed short raven black mane as per usual with Diomidians but this was no typical grunt. this particular Diomidian likes to play therapist and wore glasses and held a clipboard to prove it. his name is Alister, and if he's here, I am far away from my little bed back at the fortress.

 "Oh Couth, I am so glad we found you. how have you been? you haven't forgotten your dealings with us, have you?" Alister says with a friendly grin.

Couth spits a dark black piece of bile at him as a response.

 "mm-hm" Alister wipes his glasses of the unpleasantness. "you're still charming you, I see. or are you? we have gotten reports of Daemons running rampant in Glitterglen." he nods at his clipboard " can you answer a few questions? to prove you're you?"

 "and if I don't feel up to answering your questions? what if feel more like breaking every bone in your body, Alister?" Couth retorted, fully awake.
 
 "Ha, just try it, see what happens!" Alister playfully taps Couth on the cheek with his tentacle. " you'd be dead before you could even touch me. you are not a citizen to our glorious Domidian empire. you have no rights. I can do whatever I want to you, remember that next time you run your mouth."

"ahem" Alister composes himself and gets professional. "now, let's start at the beginning. describe your childhood please."

 "really?"

 "Humor me. it'll keep you alive."

*sigh* "Fine. Rough. It was rough. I had no parents, no family. only pony who cared for me was my sister Willow and I cared for her. we were just two orphans running free in the capital city slums. we did anything we could to survive.. anything. we tried alot of things to make money, but stealing ale from breweries and hawking it to the masses at a cheaper price did the trick best."

 "mhm, good. and what happened to Willow?" Alister proceeded. 

 "Willow... got smart, got cold and cutthroat. she realized that if I was gone she could double her money. we were doing our usual routine of breaking and entering, but she insisted on carrying my load, lied to me. she trapped me in the basement, and the brewer found me. instead of having the guards behead me the brewer put me to work. it was hard work, there was no pay, but he fed me so that was something. this went on for about eight years."

 * Alister scribbles something down on the clipboard*
 
 "what are you writing down? why am I telling you my life story?" Couth demanded.

 "I'm comparing your story with the one we beat out of you a year ago, before we planted you into Glitterglen. your passing with flying colors. please continue. why did you leave the capital?"

 " well after my years of philanthropy the king personally gave me a key to the city and freed me from my servitude." Couth said with a dry sarcasm.

 *Alister whips Couth across the face with a tentacle, drawing blood.* "Be serious!"

 "I bucked up! they drove me out with pitchforks." Couth admitted angrily.

 "I moved to a nice little village with no name. started an inn. it was nice and quiet and nopony bothered me. then you pillaged it. you kidnapped me. you tortured me. you gave me an ultimatum. and shuffled me into a line of immigrants. you know the rest."

 "yes, our contract was steal the items we required, you and every pony in glorified ratthole "Glitterglen" gets to live, correct?"

 "yeah, something like that."

 "well, why didn't you hold up your side of the bargain, Couth?"

 " why? you bastards got greedy! I had a good system, and you wrecked it when you asked for those amulets made of banned metal. ten of my cohorts are in jail and three good friends are dead because of you. then things got personal, things got out of my hooves."

Alister gave out a long sigh.

"you know, my peers think I'm crazy, they think I should kill you and we go ahead and raze your fortress, but I stuck my neck out to give you another chance. it's our understanding there is an alicorn foal-"

"No."

"there is an alicorn foal in your fortress. give her to us and we-"

"I won't do it. can't do it."

"Couth? it's your only way out of this and you know it."

"why? why do you want her?"

Hmmm, whats the most clinical, dispassionate way to put this?  for Breeding, Couth."

"oh gods, you sick bastards."

"you know what we want, and you know the price of failure. two weeks, Couth. two weeks. nighty-night."

Alister puts a rag over Couth's mouth and he fades away to la la land.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 05:16:51 am
DO NOT WORRY FOLKS, FOR IT IS I, THE ANNOYING NARRATOR! FEAR NOT, WHILE CARROT MY BE A SPLATTER AGAINST THE GROUND, THERE'S ANOTHER ONE COMING TO TAKE HIS PLACE! STAY TUNED!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 05:20:53 am
Crest Fire, another Pegasus in the military! MINE! Since it's 5:28 AM and I have to go to day Collage at 7, here's his affiliation to Carrot in a nutshell, EDIT: can't think of anything that wouldn't conflict with the already given parts of Carrot's life. DSARKER/KHENAL, WORK YOUR MAGIC!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 28, 2011, 05:28:52 am
Oh man, Strongbeard is going to have a fit trying to write this in words.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 05:29:47 am
Oh, I hope so.


I'm kind of hoping Strongbeard comes in, sees what we've done, goes to his save file, deletes the world, and locks the thread. All without saying a thing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 05:30:21 am
Hehe
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 05:32:00 am
:P I PMed my untimely demise in a nutshell to him. That's three quotes, and done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 05:32:58 am
Anyway, is that scene, or are we continuing on?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 05:33:36 am
I suppose I could introduce Crest REAL QUICK, is that alright Khenal?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 05:34:37 am
I'm thinking I should wait until tomorrow for Friesden to wake, though it might be a good idea for him to check on that construct of his.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 05:38:05 am
In that case, I shall resign and sleep for a good 22 minutes. Not kidding.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 28, 2011, 05:38:37 am
/buck

Hello folks! Now it's my turn to narrate this amazing tale. At least until I have to go. Then that slimy, hair brained fool will continue for me. Anyways...

And thus, Carrot was buried by his great friend Khenal. How unfortunate, to have Friesden slam him into the ground like that. How unladylike.

((Lemme get the narrator spot when i'm on. It's kinda irritating, not having anything to do when you're all RPing this thread to hell.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 05:39:37 am
You might want to wait to introduce him until Strongbeard can officially assign your new pony.  I'm curious if he's gonna just unname Carrot, rename Carrot, or crunch him under a bridge.  And with that, Bed.  I didn't notice that it's amost 3am, holy crap.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 05:40:50 am
YOU'RE LUCKY, YA WEST COAST HOOLIGAN! Also, I think renaming would be the best, it saves SO much trouble. TIME TO SLEEP FOR 19 MINUTES!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 28, 2011, 03:06:56 pm
YOU'RE LUCKY, YA WEST COAST HOOLIGAN! Also, I think renaming would be the best, it saves SO much trouble. TIME TO SLEEP FOR 19 MINUTES!

But did Carrot have any friends?  Might be Fun to see what damage that caused if he does get smashed.

Ah well, so much for things settling down.  You've been trying to get Carrot killed for what, 50 pages now?  Somehow I doubt it's going to get much more sane now that you finally got your wish.  Unless that was the whole point, of course.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 04:32:12 pm
I still wonder how strongbeard is going to react...Also, I think just plain renaming would be the best.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 04:55:38 pm
Everyone else up and ready?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 05:08:25 pm
I am, anyone else?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 05:10:21 pm
I'm thinking we start again where we left off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 05:18:09 pm
((Alright, lets see.  Carrot is dead for real, Friesden is unconscious after splattering him and giving Khenal a few broken ribs, Khenal is still a bit shell-shocked after placing Carrot in the chest and is trying to process everything that happened.))


I trudge towards the hospital, carrying Friesden on my back and Carrot's remains with my magic.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 05:22:51 pm
Friesden continues to sleep.

"Khenal, what the hell happened? You've got a lot of pain running through here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 28, 2011, 05:27:16 pm
Couth Darkmane limps into the courtyard of the fortress, hoping he can have maybe an hour of sleep before he gets back to the bartending he's been neglecting. he is wholly unaware of the battle raging between Khenal, Friesden, and Carrot above him.

 "if one more freaking thing goes wrong tonight i'm going to-"

Couth hears like, like a crunchy potato chip bag full of chips thrown into an chainlink fence inches away from him and viscous red blood is sprays directly into his eyeballs.

WHAT THE BUCK! Couth yells in blind fury.

(( clicky for refrence ))
http://pastebin.com/FpAEscPG (http://pastebin.com/FpAEscPG)


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 05:34:27 pm
'Something...powerful took Carrot.  He tried to kill Friesden and me, but she...Her eyes, Keeper!  They were like a portal to nothingness!  She killed Carrot, then came for me.  I think she broke some of my ribs, then she collapsed.  I wish I knew what was wrong...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 05:42:54 pm
"Son of a... I was wrong, Khenal. No blank eyes she. She's a Death Eyes. This is...this is worse than you can possibly imagine. Okay. Okay. We can deal with this. You went into her mind. What was it like?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 05:50:44 pm
'It was...desolate.  There was a filthy river, which my construct had dammed, and fields of bodies.  I, um, adjusted my spell so that it would help Friesden to cope with her past instead of simply trying to forget it.  The river is far too energetic to simply be dammed up.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 05:54:52 pm
"Has it actually done what you asked it to do? We need to go into her mind again soon. We need to go deeper inside, that we might find the cause of all these attacks."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 06:08:06 pm
'Alright, after we get to the hospital.  I want to make sure Friesden is physically fine, and I should get my ribs looked at as well.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 06:12:29 pm
"After you check her, take her to a cell, chain her down. If we get this wrong, we can't let her get out."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 06:25:38 pm
'...Fine.'

**********
Cut to the jail?  Unless DVNO has something to add, I think this scene is about done?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 06:28:00 pm
Rightio, then.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 28, 2011, 06:31:42 pm
strongbeard is on. Time to see his reaction!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 06:35:39 pm
He checked the thread, then swore never to play the game again.

Good job, guys.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 06:40:05 pm
...I have no idea how to set up the scene in the jail.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 06:40:24 pm
I HAVE RETURNED!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 06:47:36 pm
The jail is dark, and Captain Isos scowls as Khenal lays Friesden down gently, before chaining her down.

"She killed Carrot and you're still trying to 'save' her? Just give her over to be executed and be done with it!"

Khenal exits the cell and locks it shut.

"Khenal, pay attention to me, damn you! What the bloody hell do you think you're playing at? Khenal? Khenal!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 07:01:08 pm
"It was self defense, what she did to Carrot.  And I will always help anypony that I can, Captain."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 28, 2011, 07:06:28 pm
(Well, that, that was unexpected. So, Psycho Carrot is really permanently dead? I'll have to arrange a death trap for him later. Won't use a bridge, because then there won't be a body to put in the coffin Khenal will make for him. I kind of hope his death is enough to set Kil off on a tantrum, but my ponies are all ecstatic, all the time, so I doubt it. If she had any pets I'd eliminate them at the same time in hopes of driving her mad, but she doesn't. I'm not going to kill him off right now, because I have got to leave to meet a friend for dinner in about 15 minutes now. However I will choose, and name The Master's new pony first. In case he want's to use them while I'm gone.

I'm going to rename the marks pegasus Tecak and he will be taking over, as captain of Psycho's squad. In other words, he was one of the Pegasi Charity trusted to be part of her personal Skyguard, which she separated from Otik. He had a father named Enog when he moved here but the father died in a construction accident. [the one that broke Khenal's old office's roof a while back. Remember?] But has no other relationships.

I'll wright up Charity's Journal entry for all this later, but first I need to know. How much is she being told. Obviously she'll know that Carrot is dead, and she'll find out that Friesden did it, from Isos if from no one else. But will anyone [Khenal] explain the extenuating circumstances to her?)

(Also, someone asked about sleeping arrangements for the militia. Starkey and Otik have nice rooms by the barracks and Psycho has had a special room across the hall from the countess. The rest sleep with the peasants in ordinary rooms, several z-levels down. The same goes for the guard, only the captain get's a special room. Which is behind his/her office. )

(Will put Crest_Fire's picture below.)
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Crest_Fire.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 07:08:49 pm
"Damn you, Khenal." She raises one of her hooves to slap Khenal, then lowers it. "She killed one of our own." She stalks away to tell the Mayor about what had happened.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 07:15:21 pm
'That could have gone better.  We should hurry, Keeper.  I don't know how long we'll have, and Friesden needs to be well before Isos returns.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 07:17:31 pm
"Quickly, then. Open the path to her mind."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 07:23:20 pm
((At last, I can join in!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 07:26:55 pm
I settle down in front of Friesden before casting the mental linking spell.

"Please be alright."

I finish the link, and once again enter Friesden's mindscape.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 07:28:45 pm
((This can have one of two endings.

Friesden lives, and Friesden dies.

Which to pick?))



The mindscape is just as Khenal remembers it, and the Keeper who follows him looks around. "Are there any maps? Do you remember this place?"

One difference is that the room which Friesden had been in last time is leaking water under the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 07:39:01 pm
'I do, and there shouldn't be water in her room.'

I try to open the door, expecting to have to deal with water once it opens.

'You might want to hold your breath and hang on to something.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 07:40:57 pm
"Rightio."

As the door swings open, a torrent of water bursts forth from the room. It pushes strongly, but it passes in a second. In the middle of the room, Friesden is crying, and saying something about the wet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 07:46:14 pm
I rush to her side to embrace her.

'Friesden!  Are you alright?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 07:58:52 pm
She drops into his embrace.

"Ruined," she says. "They're all ruined. They're all ruined. All of them."

Behind the two, the Keeper has halted. A look of madness is in his eyes.

"You bastard, Khenal. You know nothing of the damage you have caused here. I will make you suffer for that. Painfully suffer. I'll kill you. I'll kill you!"

As he rants, the construct emerges from the door to the dam.

"THE TAINT OF THE WATER HAS BEEN DETECTED IN THE PROGENITOR'S NAME. CLEANSING FOR THE GLORY OF THE GREAT PROGENITOR." He seizes the Keeper, and wrings him out. As he does so, a puddle of water forms. The construct puts his hand into the water, and it boils away.

The Keeper is placed down, and his eyes have returned.

"Oh gods, what did I say? What happened?"

Friesden remains unaware of any of this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 08:02:27 pm
'It's alright, Friesden.  It's alright.  Pictures can be replaced, but I could never replace you.'


*****************
I love the mental image of the construct wringing out Keeper.  And I know Khenal votes for Friesden living ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 08:08:56 pm
As Khenal looks around the wall, he can see the pictures are separable into two groups. One of the groups appears to be memories, those of him and Friesden. The others would have to be fantasy. Especially the third on on the right. His wings would be too large to fit in properly.

The Keeper runs to Khenal.

"Khenal, is this all there is? We've got to figure out what caused the beserking rage. Quickly, before anyone finds her and decides that she should die."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 08:14:37 pm
'Friesden, can you walk?  We need to find out what's going on, and I don't know if Keeper and I can do it ourselves.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 08:17:17 pm
"Keeper? Who's that?" She doesn't seem to notice the Keeper talking to Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 08:22:37 pm
'I'll, uh, explain later.  I think whatever is fouling your river is what's causing your troubles.  Will you come with me to find the source?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 08:25:46 pm
"Oh. Okay." She gets up and follows Khenal.

As they trek over the dam, followed by the Keeper, a staircase has appeared where there wasn't before. It leads down to the valley on the side of the river, which has lowered for the moment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 08:34:50 pm
I look down the staircase and at the river beyond the dam, searching for a path or a source of the river grime.

'Be careful.  I don't know what'll happen if you fall in, but it likely isn't good.  How are you doing, Friesden?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 08:35:55 pm
((Funny how Khenal is so calm so soon after Carrot's death.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 08:40:33 pm
"Ummmm...okay? I'm better than I was before. You'd help me through anything."

As the group trek through the valley, they come to a wall. The single gate is guarded by two unicorns in full battle armour, carrying swords. They call out "Halt in the name of the Progenitor," and come down to meet the group. As they see you in full vision, they recognise Khenal, and bow down. "Great Progenitor! We worship thee!"

Friesden lets out a small chuckle. "Progenitor, eh?"

This chuckle is cut short as the two guards tackle her and pin her to the ground, swords over her throat.

"Do not insult the Progenitor, foal!" they yell in unison.

They turn to Khenal, awaiting the order to execute her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 08:43:50 pm
I facehoof at their salutation, then gasp when they tackle Friesden.

'Get off her!  Listen well!  She is my Beloved above all others!  You will treat her with the same respect you do me!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 08:46:59 pm
The two guards eyes widen, and they release Friesden, who runs to Khenal's side. They salute Khenal, then rise on their backlegs. "We have failed thee, Progenitor." With a swift two slashes, they slice open their chest, disembowelling themselves, before falling to the ground dead.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 08:51:44 pm
I stare at the two on the ground in horror.

'I didn't want you two to die for a mistake!  How can somepony learn without making mistakes?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 08:54:54 pm
Friesden has covered her eyes, and refuses to look at the two bodies.

"Can we...can we move on? Please?" she asks, almost in a whimper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 08:56:31 pm
'Um, yes.  That's probably a good idea.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 09:00:02 pm
The gates swing open as the group approaches. Manning them are four more unicorns, all dressed in the same armour as the two other guards. They bow their heads as the group approaches.

As they pass through the gate, the scenery begins to change. Friesden has closed her eyes and covered her ears, resting a hoof on Khenal to guide her.

Unlike the valley, this area is desolate. The river is not water, but blood. There is a mountain in the distance, the source of the river, and on top is visible a throne, with somepony sitting on it, visible despite the distance. A booming laugh echoes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 09:06:02 pm
'That can't be good.  Who's on the throne over there?'

I strain my eyes to try to make out the figure that is apparently the cause of Friesden's troubles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 09:07:28 pm
All you can tell is that it's male, he's an alicorn, and he must be huge.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 09:09:15 pm
((IT'S SHEOGORATH!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 09:11:47 pm
((I read that as Sephiroth and immediately wanted to punch him in the face.))

'Any ideas, Keeper?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 09:15:55 pm
"Well, let's see. Presumably he's the source of the corruption. But...."

He stops, a puzzled look in his face. "I recognise him. I don't remember where I recognise him from, but I recognise him. Anyway, we must confront him, and stop him, somehow. Your construct should be able to deal with the remaining corruption afterwards."

Friesden starts repeating, under her breath, "Don't make me go don't make me go don't make me go don't make me go."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 09:23:14 pm
I kneel down beside Friesden and nuzzle her, trying to calm her fears.

'Friesden, I won't force you to go face him, but I think you might need this.  You won't face him alone if you do.  Will we deal with him together?'



*****************

It's totally her father.  If I'm right and Khenal figures that out, he's going to get more than slightly violent.

Edit:  Retcon ahoy!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 09:26:45 pm
((Of course it's her father.))

"Khenal, you might need to force her. You can't confront her daemons for her. She has to do so herself as well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 28, 2011, 09:32:28 pm
Starkey trots happily down the hall, returning from the forges. Tucked onder one wing is a finely-engraved steel hem, with a tall plume dyed the color of Carrot's mane. He heads for his new quarters across from the Countess' office, hoping to catch him there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 09:36:28 pm
'Forcing her would make me no better than those same daemons!'

I turn back to Friesden, my voice calm again.

'Please, Friesden, my love.  I know it's frightening, but you need to be there if that figure is to be dealt with.  It's part of your mind, and if I try to tamper with it on my own, I could cause serious damage to you!  Please, Friesden.  Lets face him together.'

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 09:47:01 pm
"Okay..okay..just as long as you're there. Please. Don't go. Please. I don't want to be alone. Please?"



The group begin their trek up to the mountain. The red rock that distinguishes it is at least strong enough to walk on, but something sickly red comes out every so often. It's a long walk, but the group eventually climbs the mountain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 09:55:47 pm
'I will gladly be by your side for as long as you will have me, my love.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 10:03:09 pm
As they reach the top of the mountain, the figure becomes distinguishable, though Friesden still refuses to even look at it.

The Keeper's eyes turn red with hatred again.

"I know that face."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 10:03:27 pm
Starkey finds a chest with the words "Psycho Carrot" on it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 10:08:30 pm
'Who is that?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 10:12:37 pm
"Her," he spits, "father. I should have known, damn it. Bring Friesden. If there's a chance me torturing the sadistic son of a bitch could hurt her if she isn't there, I'm still not sure I wouldn't take it."

He charges up the mountain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 28, 2011, 10:15:53 pm
'Huh. Guess he's not home.'

Starkey lowers his hoof from Carrot's door.

'Okay, logic time. I can usually find Carrot in one of three places: here, the hospital, or the prison. He's not here, obviously. And is one of my ponies were to get hurt, somepony would come tell me. Sooo... logically, he's gone and done something stupid and got himself locked up.'

He sighs.

'Oh well, I'll go sit with him for awhile. It's still his birthday, and I've a gift to deliver.'

He spies the chest sitting in the doorway.

'And from the looks of it, so does somepony else. Well, whoever it is, I'm sure they'd prefer to deliver it in person. Hopefully, they'll remember before the party tonight.'

He turns and trots off towards the prison.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 10:20:00 pm
'Don't worry, Friesden.  We can handle him as long as we are together.  No matter what, I won't leave you.'

My voice is calm as I talk to the one I love, but there is no hiding the cold rage in my eyes as I turn towards her father.

'Let's go say hello to your dad.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 10:27:23 pm
"Okay," she says in a very meek tone as she follows him.

They finish the ascent and reach the throne. The absolutely enormous alicorn stands there, laughing. Before the throne is the Keeper, his back broken.

"Another insect for us to swat, hmmm? And our dear daughter, Friesden. You don't know how hard it's been to corrupt you like this."

He laughs again. "It wasn't hard at all."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 10:30:18 pm
'Leave her alone!'

I summon Starkey's Honesty, ready to defend my love.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 10:34:35 pm
"What a miniscule weapon. How do you think that will harm me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 10:38:04 pm
'You are hardly the first to doubt it's power, monster.  Stop tormenting my love!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 28, 2011, 10:41:33 pm
He turns and trots off towards the prison.

(ASSUMING DIRECT CONTROL OF ISOS! um... if that's okay, with you.)

As Starkey makes his way toward the prison block he heads down the stairs. Coming up the stairs he spies Guard Captain Isos. She sees the Commander stops and salutes him. "Commander," she speaks, "I am searching for the Countess, have you seen her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 10:42:50 pm
He laughs, a foul gurgling sort of laugh. "Your love? Did she tell me she, aheheh, loved me first?" With a gesture, another Friesden is on his upturned hoof.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 10:51:57 pm
I quickly check to make sure Friesden is still by my side.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 28, 2011, 10:53:08 pm
Starkey returns her salute.

"No Captain, I'm afraid I haven't. I believe her office was open when I went past there, you could start there."

"Say... is Lieutenant Carrot down there? I... had a feeling I'd find him here, and it's his birthday today, so I thought maybe I'd pay him a visit, give him his gift."

He gestures towards the helm tucked under his wing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 10:53:44 pm
She is, and too terrified to move.

The vast beast begins stroking the pony in his hoof. "Jealous, boy?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 28, 2011, 10:59:21 pm
Isos begins to look uncomfortable. She isn't sure how best to go about telling the Commander the truth, but settles on the straight forward approach, the Commander's used to losing ponies, and he doesn't need it sugar coated. "Actually, I'm, uh, going to see Miss Charity about the Captain. I don't know how to tell you this commander. But, he's dead. Captain Carrot is dead."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 10:59:50 pm
'Jealous?  Of an abomination like you?  Of somepony so depraved as to gain pleasure from the pain of others?  Friesden is better than you, monster.  Take your delusions back to the pit that spawned you.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 28, 2011, 11:01:15 pm
Starkey sighs.

"Again? I'm surprised he's this quiet, then. I should go talk to him, make sure he's alright."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 11:03:34 pm
"Oh, no! I am defeated! I will surrender gracefully," he says in a mocking tone. He then lifts up the Keeper with his magic, and throws him at Khenal. He lands barely a foot away.

"Khen.....Khenal...he's....so...powerful....kill...kill him...for me," says the Keeper, who then exhales once and breathes no more.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 28, 2011, 11:08:47 pm
"Uh no Commander. I'm sorry, but I...I don't mean he's undead, again. He's just dead. I'm sorry, but he's gone, and I don't think he'll be coming back. Not this time. But don't worry. We have the bitch who did it chained down in a cell, and I'm going to the Countess to recommend the harshest punishment for this crime."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 28, 2011, 11:11:02 pm
Alright, let's give this a shot.  I don't want to program my final robotics project right now anyway, so I'll procrastinate a bit.  Not positive how much time has passed, but not too long I think

Falcata was slowly making her way down the stairwell, having just passed Captain Isos on the way.  She offered a customary gesture as she passed by, thinking again how much she wished Khenal was still her commander.  Isos would make a fine captain, she was sure, but it just wasn't the same.

Then she heard Captain Isos speaking with somepony, and the word "dead" caught her ear.  She paused in place to listen closer.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 11:12:18 pm
((she's already captain of the guard. derp. Misread post.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 28, 2011, 11:13:09 pm
A loud clattering echoes through the halls, as Carrot's steel helm falls and bounces its way down the stairs.

"What... what do you mean he's just dead? He's died or nearly died a dozen times, how could he just die, you're not making sense! Where is he?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 28, 2011, 11:15:08 pm
((Yes, but I was referring to her proving herself to be a good captain.  She's captain in title, but not spirit to Falcata yet))
((Ah, see you caught that))

The conversation, what she could make of it anyway, was escalating and heading in a direction she really didn't like.  Had Captain Isos said that Carrot was dead?  She started inching back up the stairway, trying to remain hidden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 11:15:43 pm
Don't let him provoke you, Khenal.  This has to be Friesden's decision, no matter how much you want to chop him into little bits.

'Do you want him dead, Friesden?  I know I do, but this is your decision.  What should I do with your father?


***************

Hoisted by my own petard with how I've been doing Khenal's thoughts and thought speech.  I never thought I would need to differentiate between thoughts others can hear and thoughts they couldn't :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 28, 2011, 11:20:32 pm
(Did Isos actually see the body, or is her knowledge all second hand?)

"I didn't actually see what happened, but I know that it was Friesden," the name is spit out like a curse, "She caused him to fall, and well, there wasn't much of him left intact. Khenal still thinks he can save her. I hate to say this about my old Captain, but he's letting his emotions cloud his judgment. How much longer before she goes crazy and kills somepony else!? We can't let her run around free anymore, she isn't safe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 11:23:31 pm
"Please..." she whimpered. "Make him go away."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 28, 2011, 11:27:29 pm
Falcata stares blindly into the stone wall ahead of her as she listens.  Friesden... the murderous ex-doctor had killed somepony, and it was Carrot?  What could possibly possess Khenal to tolerate letting her live, much less associate with her?

She shook her head and tried to calm herself.  She certainly agreed with Isos' opinion on this matter more than Khenal's.  Perhaps she had misjudged her new captain.  Still, she resisted the urge to bolt up the stairs and demand an explanation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 11:31:06 pm
'You heard her, monster.  You can leave in peace, or in pieces.'

I slowly begin to advance on the source of Friesden's torment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 11:32:16 pm
Just then, a pony by the name of Crest Fire walked in on the conversation that Starkey and Isos were having.
"Hello sir! ...Isos...Anyway, what's this about my buddy Carrot?" Asks Crest, innocently.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 11:33:41 pm
"Do your worst."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 28, 2011, 11:36:38 pm
Suddenly, Isos is aware that she's been having a conversation that should have been private in the middle of the main stairwell of the fortress. "Buck it. Listen. If we're going to have this conversation we should move it into my office. Nopony's told Kil yet, and I don't want her finding out from overhearing some rumor. She deserves better than that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 11:40:43 pm
"Hey, I can hear you...What would Kil not want to know?" Asks Crest, confused.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 11:41:38 pm
I take to the skies, hoping the monstrous alicorn's size will hinder it in flight.

'I intend to give my best for Friesden!'

I break into a swift dive, preparing to cleave into the monster with Starkey's Honesty and my own momentum.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 11:44:32 pm
((Awww...No Carrot Loyalty? Shame...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 28, 2011, 11:46:41 pm
Falcata breathes an uneasy sigh at the confirmation that her listening in probably wasn't welcome.  Or, maybe Isos meant the civilians.  This was disturbing though, and she wasn't sure she was willing to just walk away from it.  Even if Friesden was restrained, there might be more to this than Isos had revealed so far.  She isn't going to take a chance with anything involving murder and even the remote possibility of it finding its way to her or Kris, and so decides to follow Captain Isos at a distance.  Maybe she would be able to make out what was going on, and she could always feign an excuse for being near the barracks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 28, 2011, 11:48:59 pm
"Igest help me. Charity's going to tan my hide if this get's out before she's even been informed. Fine," she looks to Crest Fire and then to Starkey, "Let's finish this in my office." And she moves to head back downstairs. She stops. And sees Falcata listening in. She sighs and without turning around says, "Actually, I'd rather only have to explain this once more. I'll go get the Countess and then I'll meet the three of you in my office."

Edit: Forgot closing quotation mark. Is fixed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 28, 2011, 11:49:33 pm
"I-I... but she was getting better, how could she..."

"S-She... He... He can't..."

Starkey loses the ability to speak, his words devolving into a low, piteous wail that carries far and echoes through the halls.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 11:49:52 pm
Khenal cleaves straight into the gigantic alicorn. The blood spills from the wound and covers Khenal entirely.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 28, 2011, 11:51:39 pm
Falcata's heart skips a beat as Isos' eyes lock with hers.  Should have just walked away when she still had a chance...

She nods nervously and heads up the stairs.
  "Y-Yes, captain."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 28, 2011, 11:53:52 pm
Blinded by the unexpected blood shower, I make a rough landing behind the beast.  I quickly try to shake off the blood and clear my eyes.

*****************

((Awww...No Carrot Loyalty? Shame...))

He'll likely use Carrot's Loyalty as well, when the opportunity arrises.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 28, 2011, 11:57:03 pm
With a roar, the giant alicorn tears the Honesty from Khenal's grip.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 28, 2011, 11:58:36 pm
(Does anyone mind if I skip ahead, to Captain Isos and Charity arriving in Isos's office? Are all three of you coming?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 28, 2011, 11:59:00 pm
Khenal sees a familiar pony standing next to him...

'One last fight, my friend.' Says Carrot, his spectre here to be with Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 29, 2011, 12:00:30 am
(Does anyone mind if I skip ahead, to Captain Isos and Charity arriving in Isos's office? Are all three of you coming?)

(I'll be around for only another hour or so, so I'd recommend skipping ahead)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 12:02:13 am
((Starkey would have to be led by the hoof. He's not exactly in the mood to go anywhere right now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 12:06:43 am
'Heh, and I thought you didn't like Friesden.  Though, you are the most loyal friend I know.'

I smile, summoning Carrot's Loyalty for him to wield.

'I'll distract him.'

I quickly start to circle the alicorn, hoping to flank him between myself and Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 12:07:48 am
(Does anyone mind if I skip ahead, to Captain Isos and Charity arriving in Isos's office? Are all three of you coming?)
(I'll be around for only another hour or so, so I'd recommend skipping ahead)

(Good enough for me.)

After a few minutes [during which I'll assume somepony helps the commander along] Captain Isos, and the Countess walk into Isos's office. Charity is flanked by one of the member's of Psycho's squad, a legendary boyer responsible for all the masterful bone crossbows the squad carries. His name is Osal and he carries his artifact wooden bow, also named Osal.

Charity, speaks as she walk in the door, "Why did I have to come down here? What couldn't you tell me in my offi..." she stops when she see's the crowd gathered in here. A member of the guard she doesn't really know, and Crest Fire, another one of her families body guards, along with the Commander. Realizing that this must be important. She takes a seat and prepares to listen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 12:13:21 am
"It's been fun Khenal, shame I had to die so soon...If you don't mind, could I stay with you, like Keeper used to? First things first though...Let's get rid of that dwarf!" And with that being said, he lunges at the beast, jamming the knife through the creature's chest, aiming for the heart.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 12:22:06 am
The knife slides into the beast's massive bulk, and blood splatters everywhere. But the strike is no more fatal than the last.

Friesden stands up. She runs to Khenal.

"I want to help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 12:22:53 am
After Charity takes her seat, and Captain Isos sits behind her desk, the Guard Captian speaks,

 "This won't be easy to explain, and I don't have all the information yet, but..."

She proceeds to give out all the information she knows about Carrot's death. That he's been killed. How he died. That he likely won't be able to come back this time. That Khenal put his body in a wooden chest. That Friesden killed him. That she's been chained up, and that Khenal still thinks he can save her, and the captain's opinion that he's foolish for trying. Naturally, she is not mentioning that Psycho went crazy first, and that it was really more of self defense, as she hasn't really been told that, yet.

She does mention that Khenal claims it was self-defence, but also, points out that he's both living with her (not unbiased) and is the one who brought her in to be chained up, and thus the Captain doesn't really buy it.


Edit: for corrections.


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 12:29:32 am
'Friesden!  Good, I think Carrot and I are going to need it.  Any suggestions on what to do?


******************

Khenal told her it was self defense, but he's hardly an unimpeachable witness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 12:31:27 am
"I don't know. You're the fighter here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 12:34:35 am
Khenal told her it was self defense, but he's hardly an unimpeachable witness.

I have made corrections to my last post. To those it may apply to please check it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 12:35:02 am
"Khenal, try saying what you said to seal cockroach away!" Yells Psycho.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 29, 2011, 12:37:58 am
Falcata tries to suppress the wrath growing within her.  She hadn't interacted with Carrot that much in her time in Glitterglen, and what little interaction she'd had wasn't the best in the world, but he didn't deserve that.  She wanted to punish Friesden right then, right there.  She even had a weapon to do it with.

No, that wouldn't solve anything.  She let the anger drain away slowly and relaxed the scowl forming on her face.

What she wanted to know right now was why.  Why was Friesden even allowed out, where this could happen?  Why would Khenal allow this?  None of that was the question right now though.  The question right now, was what was the countess going to say, or do about it?

She remains silent, trusting her superiors have a decent answer.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 12:40:46 am
The great beast speaks ""This is your leader speaking. Here is an important announcement. It has been put about by backsliding revisionary paper hyenas that Friesden does not belong to me. This is a lie! Our glorious slavery gallantly continues to function! These are dark days and the storm clouds gather around us. BUT NEVER FEAR! I pledge that I, your leader, will see you safely through to a better world!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 12:41:53 am
'That's the thing, though.  He's not reacting to the wounds like a pony should.  It's like he's a big, pony-shaped blood bag.'

My eyes light up as I realize what's wrong.

'Of course!  It needs to be you, Friesden!  Carrot and I can't hurt it because we arent you.  You need to defeat him, not us.  Do you think you could snap his horn with the momentum from a dive?  Or something else?  Let Carrot and I keep him busy so you can deal with him your way.  How's that sound?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 12:44:26 am
"Oh...okay...what should I do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 12:45:08 am
'SNAP IT'S HORN OFF!' Snaps Carrot, irritated.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 12:48:11 am
'Uh, Carrot's idea seems like a good one.  This is your mind, though, it needs to be symbolic of what you want to happen.  Do what you think needs to be done.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 12:56:35 am
The silence in the room is deafening. Finally, Charity speaks. "Captain Carrot was one of my most trusted men. Only two ponies in this whole fort did I trust more and those are my husband and ex-Captain Khenal. His death, should this claim of self-defense be proven false, shall not go unpunished. Friesden was only ever freed because Khenal claimed she was freed from the possession that drove her to kill efim. However, I wish to at least hear out Khenal, and Friesden, before I pass judgment. We shall hold a trial, for Friesden. The charges will be two counts of murder of the first degree. She, and anypony willing to, will speak in her defense, and the evidence against her will be heard. The trail will take place in one week. Isos, no matter what Khenal says, or what assurances he gives you. You are not to let Friesden out of her cell until the trial."

A trial in the pony civilization is less formalized than that which we know. Indeed, in the average pony town, or village everypony knows more or less everypony else, and they tend to be close knit. Serious crimes are, usually, quite rare but when they do happen. A trial is held. A pony trial is more like the worst kind of family meeting than those trials of some other races. I'll provide more details when we approach it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 12:59:24 am
Oh man, that's going to be awesome.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 01:00:56 am
Friesden climbs into the air and points herself at the beast before preparing to dive.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 01:05:00 am
Oh man, that's going to be awesome.
I do hope so. But you and Dsarker will need to wrap up your mental vacation first. Then I imagine some people will want to RP out some conversations/arguments/investigations/etc during the week before the trail. So I will allow for some time for that happen. Then we'll get into it.

Oh also,

RELINQUISHING DIRECT CONTROL OF ISOS.

If anypony has any plans involving her, go right ahead.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 01:07:03 am
I do my best to keep the alicorn's attention, zipping in to deliver bucks and even occasional slashes with my horn.  Anything to give Friesden the time and opportunity to finally put her father behind her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 01:10:02 am
Carrot begins doing what he does best: Talking his head off at the monster.
"AND THEN, THE FIRE SNAKE SAID 'WHAAAAT!?" HA HA, AND THEN..." And so on and so forth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 01:14:50 am
Friesden dived straight at the monster's face, its eyes glinting smugly at her.

Faster than she had ever reacted, she stopped by his face, and looked deep in his eyes.

"I forgive you, father. For everything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 29, 2011, 01:15:04 am
That was as good an answer as any, Falcata thought to herself.  With the initial flare of rage gone, she knew it was best to follow a formal trial, and her opinion of the countess rose ever so slightly.

Even if she couldn't conceive of any way for Friesden to mount a plausible defense, it was the right thing to do.  She was extremely interested in hearing Khenal's side of the story.

At least she had her answer on why Friesden was allowed to leave.  She trusted Khenal moreso than just about anypony, but she still couldn't imagine his line of reasoning.  How could anypony ever be certain that a previously possessed pony was safe to be let free?


((Eh, would this be a public trial or only for those involved?  Oh, and off to bed for me, so:))

With some difficulty, Falcata clears her throat and says,"Pardon the interruption, countess, captain, but... I must be getting back to my quarters." She blinks a few times to shake the fatigue from her mind and asks, "Is there anything you need of me?  I will speak of this to nopony."

*****

((Nice twist, Dsarker.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 01:21:29 am
With a scream, the monster started to collapse. "No! No! You can't! How dare you!" it screams over and over again as it falls into itself. As it collapses, the terrain warps and changes, shaking Khenal and Carrot where they stand. Cracks form and disappear in the mountainface, and the mountain starts to crumble. The red rock fades into green. The river turns back into water, pure and clean as from a spring.

The dam in the distance creaks as the new water floods down at breakneck pace. The construct on the wall yells at the workers to get off, and they manage to clear it just as the dam breaks and the waters flood down. The once desolate valley beyond the dam bursts into new life, plants where once were none, fish where once were none, and ponies lived once more in the place surrounding the former dam.

If Khenal looks, he can see the construct bowing down and gathering the unicorns. His work here is done. For good.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 01:24:18 am
"Khenal, before you start celebrating, I have a question. Mind if I hang out in your mind, like Keeper used to? If no...I guess...I don't know really..." Asks Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 01:26:03 am

((Eh, would this be a public trial or only for those involved?  Oh, and off to bed for me, so:))

With some difficulty, Falcata clears her throat and says,"Pardon the interruption, countess, captain, but... I must be getting back to my quarters." She blinks a few times to shake the fatigue from her mind and asks, "Is there anything you need of me?  I will speak of this to nopony."

(This will definitely be a public trial. That's just how things are done in the pony world, I would imagine. When I said, it's like the worst kind of family meeting I meant it, and the family in question is Glitterglen. Anyone who has something to say, or just wants to be present will be welcome. I'm planning on having the dinning hall used for the purpose of the trail, that day.)

The countess looks at Falcata, "no my dear, but thank you. Just make sure not to breathe a word of this to anypony until after the official announcement is made." Now, I have the unhappy task of telling Kil about her husband." there is a pause, "Oh, and I'll need to assign a new Captain to the Skyguard. If I remember correctly, you," she looks at Crest Fire, "were Carrot's second in command? I guess that makes you Captain Crest Fire now. Congratulations." The Countess get's up to leave, her guard Osal follows behind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 01:28:05 am
I give the construct a bow in return, before turning to Carrot.

'If you really want to, I'd be happy to let you stay with me.  Are you sure you don't want to continue on to whatever comes after, though?  I'd expect you to have something happy waiting for you.  Speaking of happy, excuse me a moment.'

I fly to my beloved, proud that she had the strength to handle her past and do it her way.

'You did it, Friesden!'



*****************

I was so hoping for something like this :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 01:28:37 am
"WAIT, WHAT?! BUT...I...aw, horse apples..." Mutters Crest.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 01:30:42 am
"W-Wait."

Starkey rises from his seat, moving to follow the Countess.

"I was his commander... and friend. I would appreciate it... if you allowed me the task of breaking the news to his family, ma'am."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 01:31:17 am
"Now...now I remember everything," she says, with a touch of sadness in her tone. She flies to Carrot, and bows low.

"I'm sorry. How could you ever forgive me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 01:31:42 am
"Khenal, Kil doesn't need me, and I wasn't the kind of pony you'd call a hero...Anyway, Thanks so much for allowing me! Friesden, I forgive you. I can't blame you really, I was a danger to everypony anyway!" He laughs as he fades into nothing.

Khenal then hears Carrot say inside his head,
"Hey, it's roomy in here! HA HA!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 01:34:49 am
Charity stops leaving when she hears Crest Fire's outburst. "You'd rather not have the promotion? I'm sure Osal or Madush would like to take it instead, if you're sure you don't want it." She looks at Crest, awaiting a response, when Starkey speaks. "Of course Starkey, you may do so." Charity is relieved to have gotten out of that particular duty. "Just do it before she finds out some other way. You know how rumors spread. Especially when they're true."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 01:36:26 am
"NO NO! I'LL DO IT!!!" Yells Crest hurriedly, not wanting to pass this up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 01:37:14 am
The world starts to fade away. Friesden turned to Khenal in regret.

"I'd love to spend forever here with you, my love. But you have things to do..."



((afk. 30 minutes))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 01:38:01 am
"Thank you, ma'am. I'll see to it immediately."

He trots out the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 29, 2011, 01:38:32 am
((Ninja'ed, so just assume this happened before Starkey said anything))

"Of course, countess. "

Falcata bows before Countess Charity and exits the office.  She chances a glance back to Captain Starkey, who has remained silent, if not catatonic throughout the ordeal.  Another pang of anger races through her mind as she contemplates the pain he must be enduring from losing his friend and brother-at-arms.

She hangs her head low and trudges off to her quarters where she finds Kris fast asleep in bed.  She eases in next to her daughter and tries to halt the racing thoughts in her mind.  She wasn't going to be getting much sleep that night, she could already tell.

Kris shifts next to her and makes a small noise before settling down again.  Painful memories of the past mingle with the events of just minutes ago.  At least Friesden was in custody.  She wasn't going to let anypony possibly take Kris from her.  Nopony.


((So much for heading to bed.  This is more addicting than I thought it would be, heh.  Ok, I'm gone for real this time.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 01:45:55 am
"NO NO! I'LL DO IT!!!" Yells Crest hurriedly, not wanting to pass this up.

"Alright then. I'll have the appropriate paperwork filled out, but as of now, you are Captain Crest Fire, of the Wavy Passes, the Skyguard of Glitterglen, and the Defenders of the Noble house of Conventtulip. May our fortunes rise with you."


(After I kill off Psycho Carrot in the game, give me a few more minutes, we'll see if Kil goes nuts. Assuming she survives, I'm going to move her and her family into a new room and give the old one to Captain Crest Fire.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 01:50:14 am
I take Keepers remains with me as the link closes, hoping he'll revive once back in my mind.  I blink a few times, adjusting to being in cold reality once again.  I can't help but smile a bit, though. 

'My love is finally a whole pony again, everything will work out!'

I prance a bit as I head to Isos' office to ask her for the keys to let Friesden out. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 01:52:42 am
'Khenal, did you know that your mind has a pool?!' exclaims Carrot excitedly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 02:00:49 am
'Yes, I knew that, heh.  Oh, Happy Birthday!  I didn't get a chance to wish it to you properly before...everything.  I, uh, made you a chest.  It's...kinda serving as your coffin right now, though...'


******************

Khenal is an awkward pony :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 02:04:57 am
Starkey heads downstairs into the prison. Lying just past the final step is Carrot's birthday helmet. He sits on his haunches, gingerly picking it up between his hooves, and stares into the empty eyesockets for a long moment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 02:09:19 am
'Don't worry about it! OH! Did I mention that I had a friend named Crest Fire who was in the militia with me? Great guy, kind of hyper...but nice all the same!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 02:12:24 am
I stop in my tracks, trying to visualize somepony that Carrot would describe as hyper, and failing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 02:16:38 am
Starkey returns the helm to its place under his wing. As he turns to leave, he notices Khenal approaching.

"Hello, friend."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 02:17:45 am
Ironicly, or perhaps by sheer luck, Crest smashes into Khenal as he runs down the stairs whooping like crazy.
"HI! I'M CREST! WHAT'S YOUR NAME?!" Yells Crest in the same way Carrot used to yell.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 02:22:38 am
I recoil from the sudden pony, taking a few steps back.

"Uh, hello Crest Fire, I'm Khenal.  Hey Starkey.  You've...heard the news, I take it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 02:24:09 am
"Aye. I'm... off to break the news to Kil. If you don't mind, I'd like it if... if you came along."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 02:28:48 am
"Of course.  Can you give me a second to ask Captain Isos for the cell keys, though?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 02:31:31 am
*sigh*, "I'm afraid you won't get anywhere with her. Miss Charity made it very clear she isn't to be let out of her cell."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 02:33:53 am
"B-But it was self defense!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 02:35:33 am
((Back now, sorry.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 02:36:07 am
"WHAT?! SHE KILLED MY BEST BUCKING FRIEND EVER! THAT WAS MURDER!" Screams Crest, smacking Khenal across the face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 02:38:46 am
Starkey turns and heads up the stairwell, gesturing for Khenal to follow.

"Yes, I know, and for what it's worth I believe you. Listen, there's to be a trial in one week's time. One week to seek out evidence and prepare her defense."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 02:43:33 am
I clutch at my ribs from the sudden motion of getting smacked in the face.  After taking a moment to recover, I follow Starkey up the stairs.

"...Defending her won't be easy, even with you vouching for my testimony.  The truth of what happened just sounds so crazy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 02:45:55 am
'Khenal, are you ok?! My drink spilled due to an earthquake!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 02:50:07 am
'I'll be alright, I think.  Crest isn't taking your death very well, though.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 02:52:39 am
"Glitterglen has had more than its fair share of crazy. I genuinely doubt there's anything you could say that wouldn't be believed by most."

"Corp... lieutenant Crest, please go get moved into your new quarters."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 02:55:02 am
'tell him that I still owe him one, he'll know what it means.'

*********************
"NEW QUARTERS?! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!" Screams Crest, calm as ever.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 03:01:37 am
As Crest gallops off down the hall, Starkey and Khenal approach Carrot's old home.

"Well... here we are."

Starkey lifts a hoof and gently raps on the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 03:03:58 am
I stand next to Starkey, dreading the coming conversation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 03:14:24 am
Kil opens the door smiling, the kids poking their heads out.
"Hi! What's up?" She asks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 03:18:21 am
Starkey begins, taking a pleasent tone so as not to alarm the foals.

"Good afternoon, Miss Kil. We would like to speak to you about something... in private."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 03:28:02 am
"alright...It sounds serious..." Kil walks out and follows Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 03:30:46 am
I follow as well, unable to look Kil in the eyes.

'Anything you'd like me to say to Kil, Carrot?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 03:33:40 am
Chaity's Journal 18th Obsidian 98

The caravan from the capital has arrived. They are expecting an offering to the princess in value of at least 20,000 bits. I believe we have more than enough goods to pay the tax.

21st Obsidian 98

The Rainbows sent a Tentacle pony to represent them. I won't lie, I don't feel comfortable letting a diomedian so far inside our defenses, though he was more or less polite. Didn't stop me from keeping guards close at hoof.

24th Obsidian 98

Isos, the new guard captain, had another foal today. A little unicorn filly. She's quite weak though, even for an infant. We're all just hoping she'll be okay, though the doctors give her good odds.

25th Obsidian 98

The pony from the capital had great news for the ponies of Glitterglen, where being elevated in the eyes of the realm. We will be a duchy and I will be the Duchess. Now to tell everypony.


(Khenal when you transcribe the earlier part where we're dealing with Psycho's death, please change all mention of Countess Charity to Duchess Charity, as this will have happened first.)

1st Granite 99

A new year, and our offering to the princess was accepted, and we were able to trade for a mountain of metal. All is good, in Glitterglen for once.

9th Granite 99

I gave birth to my newest daughter today. My fifth child. Her name is Copper Riverknight.

12th Granite 99

Kil just had her youngest son today. A little pegasus, can't really see the family resemblence to Carrot, guess the colt just takes after his mother.

1st Slate 99

I've just come from a very difficult meeting. It seems as if Friesden, has murdered my trusted friend, Captain Carrot. While death has never stopped him before it seems the fall did enough damage to finally stop him. He is being honored with a tomb in the wooden tower. The third floor now being reserved for the final resting places of our bravest military ponies. The murderer, or I should say accused murderer, is being held in the prisons, In one weak we shall have a trial to decide her fate.

As I write this the Commander is breaking the news to his wife. I hope he is gentle with it. These are delicate matters.

Khenal still thinks Friesden is harmless, claims it was self defense, I can't disagree more with him, but I'll hear it out at the trial in one week.

A pegasus pony by the name of Crest Fire will be taking over as Captain of my Skyguard and will be given Carrot's families old room, once Kil has had time to move into a new room.


(Kil didn't even drop from estatic when Psycho Carrot died, that's just cold. Poor Carrot, his wife doesn't even care he's dead. Same with his kids. Heartless, all of them.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 03:35:24 am
((Well, at least Carrot thought she was having an affair...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 03:39:49 am
Dang, that's just cold.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 03:39:53 am
'Tell her that she's a good fer'nothing wife, love Carrot. You're on your own for this one, Khenal!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 03:43:14 am
'Somehow, I doubt that's the kind of thing to tell a grieving widow.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 03:45:25 am
"Ughhhhh...What sort of a mess did you get us into this time, Khenal?" asks the Keeper groggily as he awakens once more.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 03:45:52 am
"It's... about your husband, Carrot. There's... no easy way to say this..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 03:50:06 am
'Hi Keeper! It's me, Psycho Carrot! i'm your new room-mate!'

****************************

"W-w-what's wrong?" Kil asks worriedly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 03:52:06 am
'Thank Ingest you're alright, Keeper.  I was starting to worry about you.'

'...When did my life get so weird that I worry ponies might actually stay dead?  Anyway, we have more company in here.  Meet Carrot.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 03:53:04 am
"Oh, goody. I was getting ever so lonely in here. Aren't you dead?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 03:53:22 am
"T-There was an incident... he's gone, Kil. I'm so sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 03:57:53 am
'Yep. Long story...Did you know there's pool here?!'

**********************

"Alright. Anyway, what's wrong?" Asks Kil.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 04:02:15 am
Woah, woah, woah. Heave to. Weigh anchor. Stop right there criminal scum. What the clop did she just say?

"N-No ma'am, I don't think you understand. He didn't leave, he's... dead."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 04:03:27 am
"Uh, he... he's dead, Kil.  I'm so sorry."


******************

Only just managed to not call her Jim instead
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:05:40 am
"I heard you. What's the bad news?" Kil asks, slightly annoyed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 04:06:46 am
"If I may say so, sir, would you mind checking if there isn't a stallion in the room with her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 29, 2011, 04:10:24 am
Bob's my uncle if you guys have got this all planned beforehand. I'm going to assume that Bubbles, as the chief medical pony, knows about this is advance.
-------------------------------------------------------
*Bubbles stopped concentrating on his needle. It was tipped with a rare and deadly forgotten beast poison, and had been given to him by the caravan folk. His door had been opened and he had been told that Carrot, had indeed died for the last time.*
"What...? Tell me it wasn't me...TELL ME!" Bubbles shouts to himself, mad with grief. He promptly bucked down the hospital doors, and galloped to Carrot's bedroom.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 04:12:41 am
'Guess she knew about the other times he died.'

"Uh...he's not going to get better this time?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 04:13:38 am
"E-Excuse me? That... that is bad news, miss Kil. What are you talking about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:14:46 am
"No, you gave me the good news. What's the bad news?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 29, 2011, 04:14:55 am
*Bubbles arrives to find Khenal and Starkey 'consoling' Kil, and shouts*
"TELL ME IT WASN'T MY FAULT! WAS IT AN INFECTION!??!?!?!?!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 04:15:36 am
"See, this is why daemons have it better off. No mates. No bother with all this trouble."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 04:17:16 am
Starkey continues, his anger rising.

"Wha... Your husband, the father of your foals is dead! How is that good news?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:19:28 am
"When are you going to tell me the bad news? I'm seeing my coltfriend soon, so can we hurry this up?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 04:21:22 am
'...Carrot, your message to her is about the kindest thing I'm inclined to tell her, now.'

"No, Doctor, it wasn't an infection.  Excuse me, please.  I need to go...do something."

'Before I try to buck Kil's teeth out.'

"No, actually, I could use your help, Bubbles.  I think I have a few broken ribs."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 29, 2011, 04:22:28 am
"What?"
*Bubbles feels Khenal's ribs, then ushers him to the hospital.*
((Now, the Master))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 04:22:58 am
He retains his composure, barely. The insults fall like sparks on wet leaves.

"W-What about your foals? How do you think they're going to react, knowing they're never going to see their father again?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:23:16 am
'Please kill her? Her name is so close to kill anyway! Keeper, want to play rock-paper-knife?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 29, 2011, 04:24:08 am
Don't regard this post.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:24:31 am
"Them? Ah, they don't care." Kil says, relaxed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 04:28:36 am
"They... don't..."

This time, the leaves are dry.

"You... you callous, self-serving bitch."

White-hot rage overwhelms Starkey's defenses, as he rams his hoof into the side of Kil's face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:28:52 am
((telepathy numb nuts...telekinesis is levitating objects...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:30:31 am
((I enjoy this...I am now dsarker 2.0 :P))
The blow that Starkey issued to Kil's skull caused it to shatter. Kil would be better off dead at this point...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 04:31:17 am
((He sucker-punched her. how the hell do you get a skull fracture from that?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 04:31:22 am
"Yeah, sure, why not? Whoever wins gets to be the shoulder daemon who is in favour of killing Kil, eh?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:33:12 am
'Deal!' And so they played. Naturally, Keeper won.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 04:33:24 am
'No, I will not, Carrot.  And don't encourage him, Keeper.'


********************

I hate to drop the hammer like this, but I need to.  Firstly, a nitpick: hearing thoughts would be telepathy, not telekinesis.  Secondly, we've established that it takes a mental link to actually hear the thoughts of others.  And even if it didn't, Khenal is a master of mental magics.  He wouldn't leave his thoughts unguarded, especially now that he has two others in his head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 04:34:30 am
"Go on, kill her. Blame her coltfriend for it. Kill two cheaters with one kick!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 29, 2011, 04:34:54 am
Oh great. I'll edit it to remove that part. How far are you in transcribing this beast?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:35:21 am
((I enjoy this...I am now dsarker 2.0 :P))
The blow that Starkey issued to Kil's skull caused it to shatter. Kil would be better off dead at this point...
'Khenal, mind if I kill her?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 04:42:35 am
((Oh god, way to snap Starkey like a twig.))

Oblivious, Starkey continues ranting at the prone mare.

"He wed you, gave you two beautiful children, fought and defeated a daemon for you, laid down his life for you, and when he's gone you throw him out like so much trash! He was a better pony than you could ever hope to be!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:44:02 am
Kil replies with an interesting series of sounds that sound like blood-gurgling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 04:44:55 am
Damn, that's the OTHER witness for Friesden down. Who next?


Khenal, don't kill anypony.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 04:48:48 am
'Yes, I would mind if you killed her!  Nopony is killing anypony else today!  Am I going to have to find a way to put you two in a time-out or something?'

I continue walking with the Doctor to the hospital, unaware of how Starkey is doing.


****************

And suddenly, Khenal is the parent trying to regain control of the rowdy kids :P

I've hit a bit of a wall with the transcribing of Glitterglen.  I just hit the part where we actually get into interactions and fast rp, and have been having trouble with it.  It looks like I'll be doing a lot more actual writing to make sure thigns flow well, so it's taking a lot longer than the simple copy/paste and edit of the previous chapters.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 04:49:40 am
"I hope you're happy with your new... Kil?"

The fires of Starkey's rage subside, and he sees the results of his outburst for the first time. He rushes to her side, checking her for any sign of serious injury.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 04:51:05 am
gave you two beautiful children
(Three actually, as of my last update. One was born just a few days before Carrot died. Assuming they're all actually his. Which seems unlikely now.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:52:06 am
There's a growing pool of blood coming from Kil's head that's positively making a mess!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 04:52:56 am
(("So...Mr Starkey...let's go back to the events of the first murder, shall we? Khenal was put in the position of Captain of the Guard, wasn't he?"
"Yes."
"The same guard responsible for the deaths of two friends, one of whom was a militia pony?"
"Yes."
"The same event that lead you to start a full scale revolt?"
"Yes."
"Why didn't you imprison Khenal, first?"
"Because I knew it wasn-"
"And then when you had almost captured the duchess, you were stopped...by the deceased."
"Yes, but-"
"And now the deceased is dead, leaving the duchess unprotected, as you see it. And who killed the deceased? Khenal's fillyfriend. One who already had the excuse of daemon possession. And you then attacked the deceased's mate, didn't you?"
"Yes, but-"
"And you expect us to believe that there was no conspiracy! That the murder of Carrot wasn't deliberate? Nothing further, Your Honour."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 04:54:36 am
(Oh yes, this trial WILL be fun.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 29, 2011, 04:55:45 am
((The Master, you have just likely caused the deaths of all the mane ponies who aren't Charity.


Congratulations!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 04:56:37 am
((YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! WHAT DO I WIN?!?!?!?!?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 04:56:46 am
"Oh... oh Kulet... oh Sisters... DOCTOOOR! I need a doctor, now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 05:04:57 am
The only defense I can think of is absolutely insane.  Basically, convince everypony Carrot is in Khenal's head and let him serve as his own eye witness to his death.  There are a few other ideas I have, but they all involve using magic, and I doubt anypony is willing to let a potential conspiratorial madstallion cast anything on them.  With that over-analysis, I'm off to bed.  Try not to kill anypony else while I sleep :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 05:06:12 am
time to get a healthy 54 minutes of sleep!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 05:09:04 am
((Yes, time for bed here as well. Tomorrow will be... interesting.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 29, 2011, 11:26:08 am
((He sucker-punched her. how the hell do you get a skull fracture from that?))

((Well, this is Dwarf Fortress after all.  Kind of.  I'd say Starkey's little outburst would count as a tantrum, and I've seen fatal tantrum punches to the head))

Falcata's Diary - 21st Obsidian, 98

The rainbow ponies sent their diplomat to meet with the countess today.  It wasn't long after the tentacle pony set hoof in the door that Isos discreetly informed us to keep a close eye on him and to stay close to the countess.  I couldn't agree more with that decision, so I obeyed.  Fortunately, nothing came of the matter, and so far as I know the meeting was conducted and he left without incident.

25th Obsidian, 98

Word passed down today that things are going well enough here that Countess Charity has been granted the title of Duchess from the princess.  I still have strong reservations about the way she handled the smuggling incident, but otherwise I suppose she has earned the title.

But enough of that.  When I enquired about Isos' absence today, I was informed she had given birth yesterday.  Kris is enough for me to keep up with, so I don't know how she's going to handle having another foal.

1st Slate, 99

I don't know what to think.  Just as I was finishing another failure of a practice session, I overheard Captain Isos and Captain Starkey discussing something terrible.

It seems that the murderous Dr. Friesden has claimed another life.  This time, it was Captain Carrot of the militia.  I was am furious about it.  I couldn't comprehend why Friesden would have even been allowed free until Isos informed us that it was Khenal's doing.

That I don't understand at all.  I've seen Khenal associating with Friesden off and on, but I didn't really comprehend the implications until now.  I trust Khenal's decisions more than just about anypony else, but this I just don't understand.  Regardless, it seems he made a terrible mistake that has cost the life of Captain Carrot.

Well, we'll get to see what he has to say on the matter soon enough.  Duchess Charity has set a trial for Friesden a week from today.  If I have time I'll be there to watch.  I want to know what Khenal and Friesden have to say for themselves.

For now, I'm going to try again to get some sleep.  My first attempt was fruitless, but perhaps now that I've cleared my mind I'll manage.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Haspen on November 29, 2011, 12:13:05 pm
Is Ironya still alive and producing weapons of bloody destructions for brave ponies? What about her husband and kids?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 12:59:09 pm
Is Ironya still alive and producing weapons of bloody destructions for brave ponies? What about her husband and kids?

Aye. They're all just fine. Everypony else is possibly doomed. Yay conspiracies. But Ironya's just fine.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on November 29, 2011, 04:55:50 pm

  Couth wakes up from a fitful night of sleep and eats a healthy breakfast of cupcakes and alcohol. it's nice little escape from a Fortress gone to hell. he looks at a mirror and sees the scar Alister gave him. Mares dig Colts with scars, right?

 "you know what? that's not my biggest problem right now." Couth tells the mirror. " The Mayor might kill me, the Domidians will kill me, Khenal might expose me, or Nicolta Tesla or anyone in the cell block right now could rat me out!" Couth exasperates with a little hysteria.

 "It's like no matter what I do now, I lose." Couth admits in defeat. he gives in.

In midst of the paranoia and delusions whirling around in Couth's mind, something devious clicks together.

"No.. no, there is a way out of this this!" Couth exclaims. he grabs a pen and paper and starts manically writing what he likes to call a 'plan' but it's his stream of consciousness on paper.

"I can win! Hahah, they can't kill me if they're too busy killing each other! HA HA!" the madmare beams. 

 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 05:26:52 pm
Anypony around to do stuff?  I just finished with the next chapter for Gliterglen (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2892/Glitterglen) if anypony want to see how I'll be handling our bouts of back-and-forth.  Let me know what you think, suggestions are always welcome.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 06:07:12 pm
IT IS SUPERB.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 06:11:45 pm
Lets do this. As soon as i get home...i'm on my way there now. And your transcription is superb Khenal!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 06:22:19 pm
strongbeard I'd like to request a pony
One with much military and with a "I can do anything myself" attitude, please.

Name: Cornbread
Gender: Male
Profession: Military

EDIT:or do I message him...?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 06:32:49 pm
Just posting had worked for everypony so far.  You might want to specify which branch of the military you want, though.  There's the Guard, which was run by Khenal until recently.  There's the Skyguard, which is composed of pegasi with crossbows, and there's the actual military for the melee squad.  Welcome to Glitterglen!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 06:37:25 pm
Just posting had worked for everypony so far.  You might want to specify which branch of the military you want, though.  There's the Guard, which was run by Khenal until recently.  There's the Skyguard, which is composed of pegasi with crossbows, and there's the actual military for the melee squad.  Welcome to Glitterglen!

Haha, thanks man, I think I'll go for Skyguard, since Cornbread IS a very ambitious pony.

Cornbread's First Day of Training

Marcus (trainer) "There we go, now that's how you stab. And that-"

Cornbread "-IS HOW YOU KILL MONSTERS!! Alright, thanks Marcus! I am READY FOR-"

*Marcus grabs Cornbread by the tail just before he can fly off.

Marcus "Hooooold your horses, trainee. You've got to master the basics, first. Now show me what you've got."

*Cornbread does a thrust at Marcus, who quickly parries it, and, in one smooth fluid motion, knocks the sword away from Cornbread and renders him weaponless.

Marcus *laughs "With skills like that, you'll be chopped horsemeat in no time! Here, let me show you how it's REALLY done..." (Exunt)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 07:22:45 pm
cornbread is best pony.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 07:31:26 pm
haha yeah, he's kinda like that rainbow guy.

Just posting had worked for everypony so far.

And do I just jump in to roleplay? Are there any rules...or...

I'm the dumbass who doesn't know a thing about roleplay. Feel free to refer me to the sledgehammer if you'd like.


We don't have to stick to the journel entries? Oh joy! This calls for a serious party!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 07:39:46 pm
Yes, be insane!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 07:47:41 pm
'Khenal, wake up! You fell asleep again!' Says Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 07:50:46 pm
Cornbread's Last Day of Training

Marcus "Alright, trainee, congratulations! You've finished your whole training cycle! Now you can finally go off to war and be a good soldier!"

Cornbread *jumps in the air "Yes! My dream; now I can follow it!"

*Cornbread sees the other graduating trainees flying in a small cluster, heading towards the barracks to report for duty. He immediatly takes off after them.

*Marcus watches the cloud disappears in the distance. He hears the sound of footsteps behind him.

Marcus *turning around "Who are...Grapevine, my brother! How are you?"

*Marcus and Grapevine, a tall cloud guardian, embrace each other warmly.

Grapevine "I am very glad to see you too, brother. I have just arrived from 'insert name here' city. We have trouble."

Marcus *leaning back in shock "Trouble? Why, that is a very uncommon word here in 'insert city name here.' What kind of trouble could it possibly be?"

Grapevine *lowers his head. "One of my subcordinates, Anvil, was found dead by the ramparts. I knew we have a traitor in our midst, but was too weak to eliminate the threat. I seek your help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 07:55:44 pm
'I'm not sleeping, I'm recuperating.  There's a difference.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:00:18 pm
'WHAT'S UP!' Cornbread yells, surprising Khenal.
The white pegaseus introduced himself. "My name is Cornbread! I was sent here to guard...something...apperently...I forgot...hm..."

Cornbread is lost in deep thought.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 08:04:41 pm
Pst, Carrot is dead.  The 'single quote italics' mean we're talking in my head.  Khenal doesn't get to have a simple life :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:06:16 pm
Ohhhhhh... <IGNORE THIS COMMENT.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:06:33 pm
My mistake...I'll revise it.

Oh, and that was the sadest thing I've ever heard. Poor Khenal!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 08:16:11 pm
'What is it about joining the military that attracts all the crazy ponies?  I'm hardly one to talk, though.'

I open my eyes, though I stay laying down on the hospital bed.


"Hello Cornbread, I'm Khenal.  Um, why are you here in the hospital, you look healthy."

***************

Huh, you registered today.  Did you come over from FiMFiction?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:17:25 pm
Cronbread shruggs. "I have no idea! I seem to have forgotten! Do you need any saving?"

Before Khenal can say anything, Cornbread starts hopping in the air.

"Cause I was walking down here, and then I saw you, and then you seemed cool, and then..." he rambles on and on.

======================================

Huh, you registered today.  Did you come over from FiMFiction?

Nah, I joined over cause I'd been playing DF for sometime...didn't register before though. I was too lazy and had too much schoolwork. D:
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 08:20:27 pm
I smile and chuckle a bit, before wincing at the pain of my ribs.

"Not right now, thanks though.  I just need to rest and to think."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:22:16 pm
"Okay!" Cornbread bounds off, passing random servants and asking: "Have you seen any enemies? No? Well what about you?" His chattering fades down the hallway.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:25:15 pm
I look around the dark hallways of the morgue wing. "Hello?" I ask. "Anybody down there?" No one responds. So, I do the natural thing. I immediatly began my expidition around the morgue wing.

The area is very quiet. The smell of decaying bodies fill my nostrils, causing me to feel nausious. I hear the scuttle of a rat.


"Ha!" Cornbread yells. "I see you! Halte, vermin!"

The rat darts under a tablecloth. Yelling, Cornbread follows it, waving his sword wildly around.

"I'll get you," he mutters under his breath. "You aren't escaping from me!"

"Cornbread!" A voice yells. "What are you doing in here?"

Cornbread turns around to see his friend "Insert appropriate name HERE (I'l use the placeholder Bluejay.)" standing across the chamber. "Bluejay!" he cries. "Am I glad to see you! How have-"

"Awesome," Bluejay replies. "But what are you doing here? This is the morgue. You shouldn't be here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 08:28:53 pm
((we have a morgue?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:30:37 pm
((haha no, but you told me to be insane. This is just a fragment of my insanity.))

Cornbread laughs. "I'm hunting for monsters! What are you doing?"

"I'm hunting for you, idiot! Where've you been? We're supposed to report to the field now!"

Cornbread is shocked. "What? But I thought-"

"Nevermind what you thought! Now come with me before our captain finds out what you've been doing all morning!" The two rush down the hallway, and out of the morgue.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 08:33:56 pm
Not too insane, please.  We've got the insanity of The Master to deal with, I don't know if we can survive two ponies being totally bonkers ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:35:57 pm
((haha alright! Not too insane...))

((Oh, and sigged.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 08:41:15 pm
Neat, I've been sig'd.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:42:01 pm
TIME TO DO SOME MORE TROLLING.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 08:58:58 pm
On a hill overlooking the city, Grapevine is watching the last few flickers of the sunlight as it vanishes completely over the horizon. He hears a hiss behind him.

"Scrapjaw, what do you want?" Grapevine askes.

"The moon's full," Scrapjaw says, "as you very well know. The time is coming. We creatures of the night cannot wait any longer. You will either surrender the 'insert object of importance here' or we wipe you out."

"Is that a challenge? Do you wish to face me right now?" Grapevine draws his sword, turning to face the werewolf.

"No, not yet," The boogyman snarls. "One day, be very sure, pony. One day..."

With an cackle, the boogyman dissappears into the darkness, leaving Grapevine, his sword still drawn, to comprehend the words he'd heard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 09:00:55 pm
((Some time has obviously passed. What should I assume has happened to Starkey since the incident?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 09:07:16 pm
I have no clue.  I've been riding the edge of writer's block the last few days.  Last time we saw Starkey, he might have just bashed out the brains of the grieving widow.  So...Kil is either in the hospital or in a tomb, depending on if she actually survived.  Either way, it seems likely Starkey would be in a cell for either battery or man ponyslaughter/murder.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 09:11:42 pm
TROLL COMMENT.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 29, 2011, 09:14:39 pm
((Based on The Master's narration, Kil is brain-dead or suffering some other serious brain injury.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 09:19:54 pm
I LIKE CHICKEN.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 09:22:09 pm
((HER!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 09:26:58 pm
Cornbread is back from the field. As he enters the hospital, he sees a commotion. He hurries over, his curiousity getting the best of him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 09:33:01 pm
ATTENTION! This is your narrator speaking. Prepare for...http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=9wVlE-ZkHW4#t=153s
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 09:37:15 pm
THE TROLLMASTER HAS ARRIVED!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 09:44:22 pm
((In the words of Dsarker: [MESSAGE REDACTED]))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 10:17:04 pm
Cornbread sees a dead body by the wall. He hurries over to investigate, and finds that the body's neck had been slit.

=======================================

If you guys don't mind, I'm gonna place Cornbread's control in your hands (cause I've got a bit of a work to do.), just don't make him do anything that he might otherwise not do, such as staying away from a fight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 10:39:53 pm
Cornbread:
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

I did not have any unclaimed male member's of the Skyguard. (Technically Osal is available and male, but he's come up enough that unless someone has specific plans for him I'd like him to remain an NPC) Thus Cornbread is a mare. If this bother's you, you can change your claim to someone not from the skyguard. I never noticed before but Otik's squad is 100% female.

Currently, Cornbread is a member of Otik's squad, and has a pet black bear, but no other relations in the fort. She's the newest member of the squad and isn't yet very good with her bow yet, though she is a proficient wrestler.

Also, at this point I would like to say, to everyone, please keep the insanity to a minimum, but I've let The Master run around this long, and it would feel hollow saying it.

Finally, I think it would be best if we rewind to just after Starkey realizes what he's done to Kil and called for the doctor. This is going to be an important event and I don't think it good to leave it hanging like we did. If that's okay with everyone?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 29, 2011, 10:53:17 pm
I'm good with that.

Huh, Cornbread is a Friesden clone.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 29, 2011, 10:57:53 pm
INSANITY HAS EXCEEDED THESE BOUNDS.

If this is disrupting the roleplay in anyway, please notify me immediatly. Then I will be able to stop.

Note, this is done AFTER the actual roleplay.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 10:59:50 pm
((Now hold on! Does that mean I can't do anymore daemonic possessions?! BUT THAT ONLY LEAVES FRIESDEN X KHENAL LOVE SHOW! :Picardfacepalm: If only it were that easy... :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 29, 2011, 11:04:23 pm
(No, no the Master, I'm not saying you can't. You can. Every story needs conflict. Just well, can't you think of any other way to bring conflict to the story, other than demon possessed mad ponies going on rampages?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 11:22:03 pm
((I SHALL PM THE KING MY REQUEST OF MADNESS: TIER II!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 29, 2011, 11:23:25 pm
((All sounds good to me.  Falcata would be asleep right now, which is just as well since I really need to be working on homework more than posting about ponies, heh.  I'll keep watching though and jump in if an opportunity strikes or if I get terminally bored here))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 29, 2011, 11:49:17 pm
((REQUEST ACCEPTED WITH COMPROMISE! COMMENCE OPERATION: Zebra-see-Zebra-KILL!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 12:11:36 am
'KEEPER!!!!! WAKE UP!!!! I was just haunting the fortress a moment ago, when I saw Zebras charging in from the horizon! IF KHENAL DOESN'T WAKE UP, WE'RE BOTH DOOMED!' Screams Carrot inside Khenal's mind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 12:27:51 am
*Groan*  'How can somepony so dead be so loud?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 12:41:42 am
((KINGSTRONGBEARD APPROVES OF THIS))
'Khenal, did you not hear me screaming?! THE ZEBRAS ARE COMING, AND THEY'RE NOT HAPPY!!!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 12:53:03 am
I sit up in the hospital bed, still in pain from my ribs.

'...Why are they unhappy?  Besides, this is what we have the militia and skyguard for.  I'll go warn them if they haven't noticed yet, but I doubt anypony is going to trust me enough to give me a weapon.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 01:06:35 am
'I can get you a weapon. I'm a ghost, remember?' Khenal coughs out a green mist, wafting out of the hospital, to the barracks, and into a Pegasus wielding a crossbow and quiver. Khenal hears a shriek which quickly morphs into insane, hysterical, laughter. How Carrot hasn't changed...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 01:15:02 am
'...Just once, I'd like to be able to heal in peace.  Guess I'd better get on damage control.'

I get out of the bed and make my way towards the laughter.



*************

Heh, Khenal continues to not be a morning pony.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 01:24:12 am
The pegasus Carrot possessed is laughing manically; at first not seeing Khenal approach at all. Upon seeing Khenal, the pegasus smiles, takes off his quiver and crossbow, and drops it at Khenal's feet before collapsing unconscious. The poor soul breaths out a green mist which surrounds Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 01:29:56 am
"Carrot?  I have no idea how to use this.  Also, it's a bit suspicious if I take a weapon from an unconscious guard, don't you think?  Finally, I have two broken ribs!  I'm in no condition to actually fight!"

I shake my head before returning the crossbow and quiver to the guard and walking to the surface.  Once there, I start heading to the tower, looking for any martial ponies who may be on duty there.

***********

Where is everypony today?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 01:37:48 am
'Oh, come on! It was funny!' Chuckles Carrot, safe inside Khenal's mind again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 01:48:08 am
I grumble under my breath about nothing in particular, still looking for any of the militia or the skyguard.

'Where are these angry zebras supposed to be, anyway?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 01:51:26 am
'Oh! they should be at th-' Khenal losses his train of thought as he feels a tremor shake the entire fortress.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 02:02:15 am
I rush to a window to look for the cause of the tremor, wincing as my ribs remind me of their current condition.

'Zebras can't do anything like that, can they?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 02:13:06 am
'Hmmm, yes. But only if they brought catapults...oh sisters...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 02:18:14 am
'...How would they bring a catapult through this jungle?'

I rush up to the top floor of the tower as fast as I can, hoping to confirm or deny the presence of any siege equipment.  Preferably the later.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 02:28:56 am
((Think Assassin's Creed 3.))
Sadly, Khenal sees what appears to be thousands of Catapults, all lined up in a line, as far as the eye can see.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 02:33:56 am
Thousands of catapults?  Sounds like cliffhanger time to me.  This is definitely the time for the military ponies, and they aren't here.  Khenal would also be asking Keeper for a reality check at this point, but Dsarker isn't here either.  Where is everyone?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 02:34:39 am
(The Master! Thousands of Catapults? I thought we agreed on a small ambush not a full fledged siege. Plus thousands against one pony town with a population of 109, made mostly of noncombatants and foals. There is no way. You better know what your doing.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 02:39:47 am
((I know exactly what i'm doing. I guess I'll just spoil this part, Khenal will find out that Carrot had a bit of fun with Khenal's head, and ended up snapping Khenal's sanity. There's not a single catapult. Also, this is perfect, because it's just me and Khenal at the moment, so no one can misinterpret!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 02:41:27 am
(Oh, okay then. I figured that you where doing something like that. You may proceed.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 02:45:51 am
'Khenal? what do you see? I can-WHOOPS! Oh...Khenal? was this vase important?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 02:50:05 am
Ugh. Sorry everypony, we had a blackout here. Internet stuff only just started working again.


Please, The Master, tell me Kil is going to alright in, say, a week of in-story time. I've got an entirely unethical, though more sane, way of getting us all out of this mess. It involves Kil lying, Starkey telling only partial truth, and Khenal being willing to get Kil to lie.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 02:55:28 am
((I guess I'll have Crest talk to Charity. Anything to beat back the dreadful withdraw symptoms of WHERE-THE-FRIG-IS-EVERYONE-TODAY. DSARKER IS BACK!!! WOOOHOOO!!!!!!!!! Khenal left. http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=V2P11pU3yo0#t=118s WARNING, SMOSH!))

Crest Fire headbutts poor Charity's office door down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 02:59:46 am
As the assassin has still not been caught Charity still keeps guards nearby. As the door flies off it's hinges Osal, her guard and a subordinate of Crest Fire, points his artifact bow at the opening, it is loaded with a steel bolt. "FREEZE!" he yells. Charity, jumps in surprise and grabs a letter opener with her magic to arm herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:04:06 am
"Ahem...Bow down? Thank you...? Anyway...WHY CAN'T WE JUST KILL FRIESDEN NOW?!" Yells Crest.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 03:06:54 am
"Oh captain. My apologizes." Says Osal, he lowers his weapon and moves to pick up the door.

"Captain Crest Fire! Why did you knock my door down!" Shouts the Duchess as she get's back into her chair, and returns her letter opener to it's rightful place.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:09:24 am
"What door?" Asks Crest, looking around for the door in question. Upon seeing it, he blushes vibrantly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 03:12:18 am
"Yes, Captain, that door. You need to calm your head. Save it for the assassin or the Diomedians," the Duchess sighs, "now Captain, what did you want to discuss? You said something about Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:15:00 am
"Yeah...I think we all want Friesden dead at this point. Why not just kill her now then blame Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 03:16:58 am
Charity looks flabbergasted. "Kill her and blame Khenal! Have you lost your mind?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 03:17:43 am
'CARROT!  STOP WHATEVER YOU ARE DOING RIGHT THIS INSTANT!'

I lay down on top of the tower, preparing to enter my mindscape and stop Carrot from destroying my sanity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:20:36 am
'I can't! It's all falling over and smashing! OW, why DO you even have so many glass statues stacked on each other?!'

*******************
"Yes." Crest simply says.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 03:29:06 am
I appear in my mindscape, though I don't recognize it at first.  The order and logic of my deepest self has been completely turned on it's side.  In the center of it all is Carrot.

'Freeze this instant, Carrot!  Do not force me to oust you!  Do nothing unless I ask you to!'

My look of steel and ice is turned on my friend for the first time.  He may have seen it used on others, but this is the first time he's been unfortunate enough to be on the receiving end.



*******************

Khenal's just a bit upset with Carrot.  After all, he's doing a job that several daemons have tried and failed to do.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:30:56 am
'Why're you looking at m-OOF! OH SISTERS, LOOK OUT! STONE WALL IS GOING TO CRUSH YOU, AND I CAN'T MOVE!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 03:37:27 am
"Crest, I'm not going to execute Friesden before she and Khenal get a chance to make their case, to the entire town. From what I've been told so far, I don't expect much of a defense, however, outright killing her first is not our way." Charity pauses, "besides, it's only five more days, surely you can wait until then. She's chained up and can't hurt anypony, anymore."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 03:40:47 am
I keep my eyes on Carrot as I reach out a hoof and stop the wall.  With a push, it rights itself and returns to it's original position.

'Carrot, what you see is no simple landscape.  A mind is all symbolism and metaphors.  Any damage you do here is not simply to property, but to my very being!  Doing anything in a mind without the consent of the one who owns it can cause immense damage!

'And where the buck is Keeper?  I'd think he would have kept you from doing this much damage, or at least warned me of what was happening!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 03:47:09 am
"Mmmmmmmfffff!" comes the sound of Keeper's voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:47:29 am
Carrot instinctively reaches for an apple and eats it. '...What? He wouldn't be quiet...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 03:55:09 am
'OUT!'

Carrot feels an immense force on himself as I pour my magic into banishing him from me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:58:42 am
'Hey, I HAVE NOWHERE TO GO! IF YOU DON'T WANT ME BREAKING THINGS, THEN DON'T LEAVE THEM OUT IN THE OPEN! PLEASE RECONSIDER! YOU'RE MY ONLY FRIEND THAT WOULD STILL ACCEPT ME, EVEN AS A GHOST!' Yells Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 04:00:21 am
"MMMMMMFFFFF MMMMMFFF MMMFF MMMMMFFF!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 04:08:21 am
The force on Carrot adjusts to holding him instead of roughly kicking him out of my mind.  I fly over to him and look him in the eyes, deadly serious.

'If you cannot respect my memories and directions, I can't allow you to stay, Carrot!  Do you have any idea what could happen if I go mad?  I'd like you to stay, but not at the risk of that happening!  Will you stop destroying my mindscape?  Can you stop?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 04:11:50 am
'Khenal...Why are you so serious?! Even if i'm risking driving you insane by breaking your mind, haven't I done that already?' Asks Carrot, hoping to get a bit of a laugh out of Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 30, 2011, 04:18:48 am
Again, act like this post was never here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 04:21:06 am
((once again, you fail to read the whole story. Khenal is on the tower.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 30, 2011, 04:21:49 am
((I thought you confused his mind to make him THINK he's on the tower?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 04:21:56 am
((DAMMIT. I just thought of something that would be nice and poetic.

Khenal, The Master, KingStrongbeard. Mind if we retcon the beast at the top of the evil mountain into an alicorn (this of course means that we have to retcon all of the references to Friesden's father being a unicorn to him being an alicorn, but hey! What do you say?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 04:23:32 am
(Is fine with me, Dsarker.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 04:25:22 am
'This is nothing to laugh about, Carrot.  You want to know why I'm so serious about the sanctity of the mind?  I've seen insane ponies, Carrot.  I've seen insane unicorns.  I've seen just what a pony is capable of doing without a rational mind.  Not all of the ponies brought to me at the capitol were possessed, Carrot.  The truly insane ones were even more dangerous than the ones with daemons.  Daemons have rules and a desire to live.  Insanity removes that.  I am terrified of what I might do in that kind of state.'

'If you can't appreciate the seriousness of the situation, I will have no choice but to excise you from myself.  Will you stop toying with my mind, Carrot?'


*********************

I'm good with that if you want it, Dsarker.  I'll go edit my posts if everypony else is ok with it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 04:28:41 am
((FEEL FREE TO CHANGE THAT! Just know that I'll do the following! http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=V2P11pU3yo0#t=118s I love this clip...))

Carrot doesn't respond, he's too busy trying to struggle free, pulling the direction of where he heard Keeper's muffled voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 04:36:04 am
The force on Carrot resumes slowly pushing him away as I turn to walk towards Keeper and untie him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 30, 2011, 04:38:08 am
*Bubbles walks along the path of destruction, emerging at the tower entrance*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 04:44:01 am
"Ah, my thanks. Can you believe this undisciplined brat? Do you know why he tied me up?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 04:45:57 am
'KEEPER, YOU KEPT GOING SCHMOE ON ME EVERY TIME I TRIED TO LEAVE! OF COURSE I TIED YOU UP!' Yells Carrot, no longer resisting the push.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 04:47:08 am
'...What.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 04:49:34 am
"The idiot had some idea that keeping Kil alive would be a bad thing. Maybe, in the long term. But in the short term, it could help us get Friesden free."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 04:54:13 am
Once again, the force becomes a restraint instead of an expulsion.

'Carrot?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 30, 2011, 04:55:15 am
*Bubbles climbs the stairs to find Khenal standing completely still.*
"...Khenal....Are you okay?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 04:59:15 am
'BUT SHE DESERVES TO DIE! THE LONG RUN MATTERS MORE! USE YOUR BUCKING BRAIN!' Retorts Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 04:59:20 am
"You see...Kil doesn't like Carrot, as you've heard. If you ask her, discreetly mind you, to help you get Carrot's killer off, perhaps spinning a tale about how Carrot had kept coming home after, hmmm, attacking other mares, say? She kept it secret because she didn't want anyone to know, or maybe because she was afraid of him, but now that he's dead there's no point keeping it secret anymore. Maybe a few hints from Khenal or Starkey about how Carrot didn't like Friesden, and there! Bob's your uncle. Like it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 30, 2011, 05:00:47 am
Bob's your uncle.

I was not aware at all that ponies knew English witty comments.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 05:01:49 am
Carrot briefly stares blankly at Keeper, then he kicks him in the face.
'THAT'S HORRIBLE! WHY NOT JUST HOLD HER DOWN AT BOW POINT AND FORCE THE INFORMATION OUT OF HER?!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 05:02:20 am
Bob's your uncle.

I was not aware at all that ponies knew English witty comments.

See, neither did I!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 30, 2011, 05:03:09 am
((Khenal, now would be a good time))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 05:03:28 am
"What are you dribbling on about, Carrot? If there was some actual information we could use to get Friesden off, then please, do tell!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 05:05:46 am
'FOR THE LOVE OF...I'll say it in simple-pony since you all clearly have a speech impairment: HOLD KIL DOWN, POINT CROSSBOW AT HER HEAD, ASK WHATEVER YOU WANT.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 05:06:51 am
"What 'information' are you referring to? I'm suggesting we get her to lie, maggot brain!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 05:09:06 am
'DWARF!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 05:10:24 am
'Because a confession forced means nothing, Carrot.  I agree that she's a terrible pony, but you can't just go and kill her for being a bitch.'

Meanwhile, on the tower roof, I remain laying still, seemingly unresponsive to Bubbles' inquiries.



**************

Holy crap, now I see what everyone meant about the thread moving fast.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 05:11:51 am
"Just damn well get her to lie for us, Khenal! As much as I like existing, I would personally rather not!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 05:16:15 am
'I WILL MAKE HER LIE, I CAN'T STAND EITHER OF YOU ANYMORE! BUCK YOU BOTH!' And with that, Carrot leaves Khenal and the mist whizzes past Bubbles, down the stairs, through the halls, under Kil's bedroom door, and finally into Kil.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 05:20:00 am
'...Buck.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 05:26:31 am
"Well, that's one part out of the way. You ready with the truth? Then... One last thing. You'll need to get Carrot to tell them too. Surely he's got some secrets he entrusted with them that'll confirm his identity, right? Get him to reveal what really happened. Then... Then it's all up to Starkey and Friesden. Friesden's gotta prove she's safe. Starkey's gotta keep from killing Kil. Then it's all hunkey dory!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 05:29:07 am
((I'm feeling kind of blah about the lion fortress.


Well, only one thing for it. My Little Dinosaur mod!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 05:35:02 am
I level a sarcastic gaze at Keeper.

'Oh yes, everything is going to be just fine and hunkey dory.  Ingest above, I almost wish we were dealing with hordes of zebras and catapults!  Ugh, I'm going to head back to the hospital and then clean the mess Carrot made in here.'


***************

I'm thinking bed soon.  Also, from how Carrot went into Kil's room and not the hospital, it looks like Starkey is off the hook for murder/ponyslaughter!  Unless anyone has any interesting new threads to introduce to our sudden courtroom drama, we might be able to get this trial started tomorrow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 05:36:31 am
"Alas, poor Efim. I knew him, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 05:37:23 am
((And that's the last I'm going to be posting tonight, too. Here's to hoping the power doesn't go out and blow the router again.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 02:53:52 pm
((I fell asleep last night while typing.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 02:56:40 pm
Well, I'm here now. Let's get this trial done, for better or worse.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:02:49 pm
((PHOENIX WRIGHT MUSIC FOR THIS SCENE http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J_k1rPDRv6M))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:10:40 pm
((I'll be working on making a Phoenix Wright Trial using a program. Expect it sometime today/tomorrow.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:15:26 pm
((First off, i'm going to need pictures of Friesden, Khenal, and Starkey.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 03:20:55 pm
There are pics of everypony in the first several pages.  I'm only here for a few before I have to go take care of something, but I should be back in an hour or two.  Was able to handle it over the phone, so I'm ready when everyone else is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 03:51:33 pm
Khenal, can you edit the pictures of the ponies to only show the head, then shrink it to the size of this? http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/Ressources/Images/persos/Celeste.png That would allow me to focus more on scripting and doing stuff with our court trial on this website http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 03:58:25 pm
I'll see what I can do

Edit:  That was fairly simple.  Here's the 70x70 pixel heads for Khenal, Starkey and Friesden

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 04:20:05 pm
PERFECT! Next I just need some statements that each of you would likely say when asked. For example, Let's say that Khenal was asked to describe Friesden's personality.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 04:24:48 pm
Hmm.  He'd think for a moment, then say "She's the kindest pony I've ever met."  The pause would be him wondering which Friesden they mean, then going for her as she is now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 05:19:14 pm
alright...I'm going to organize a team and create the trial. Please, give me any extra information on each of the ponies' personalities, reactions to questions, and possibly a picture of the scene of the crime(in other words, If Eggman would like to help make it).
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 05:22:38 pm
SPAM TO YUOR HEART'S DESIRE.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 05:44:23 pm
alright...I'm going to organize a team and create the trial. Please, give me any extra information on each of the ponies' personalities, reactions to questions, and possibly a picture of the scene of the crime(in other words, If Eggman would like to help make it).

Illustrate the scene?  I'd love to, but I'm probably going to be up all night programming a simulated robotic sentry turret killing aliens, so I doubt I'll have time.

Hmm, maybe.  This trial is covering the initial murder plus the killing of Carrot, right?  I'd have to go way back and review the initial murder.  As far as Carrot's death, he was mostly a bunch of guts on the ground, right?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 05:48:18 pm
yes, mostly in a crater in the ground though.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 05:49:07 pm
INSANITY
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on November 30, 2011, 06:06:59 pm
Hey, guys, I know this is a lot to ask, but...
Could we make the trial be on a saturday or sunday? That way I can participate in it. Right now, Khenal could still be gathering a defense case.

EDIT: Herp Derp typos.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 06:13:46 pm
yeah...I agree with ansantan. Besides, I would have more time to build the trial on a Phoenix Wright game engine!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 06:17:10 pm
I've already got Friesden's statement prepped and ready.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 06:20:33 pm
That sounds good to me.  Would give some ponies more time to dig their graves as well.  Either way I probably won't be contributing much.  If you guys live on east coast of the US, you're up a whole heck of a lot later than I am normally, heh.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on November 30, 2011, 06:22:22 pm
((I've been known to stay up 'till 5-ish. Are all of you on the other side of the world?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 06:32:02 pm
I'm in California.  I also won't be able to participate if we do it this weekend, as I'm moving on Sunday.  However, Khenal is least likely to do something off the wall during the trial and I could just give his statement(s) before everything happens if the weekend is better for everyone else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 06:33:18 pm
Just PM your statements to me guys and I'll get the team and I to put it into the trial. The more you guys give me, the better the trial will look.

Also, i'm on the east coast, just like Telgin and Impending doom. Dsarker is from Australia(correct?).
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 07:20:52 pm
YOU DON'T KNOW MY SPAMMING POWER!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 07:39:08 pm
Yes, I'm Australian.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 07:41:04 pm
SPAAAAAM OVERLOAD!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 08:26:33 pm
Alright, I have enough notes, but I still need members for the team. Anyone care to join me? If you do, make an account on http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/index.php and post your username, and I'll send you a collaboration request.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 08:33:32 pm
Possibly Ninja'd by the Master, but...

(I think we should allow for this trail to be a slower affair then we have in past, and not allow it to be solved in one night of rapid fire posts, so that more ponies who want to contribute can do so. I purpose the following method for doing this.)

Chairty takes her place in front.
Isos reads the charges.
Friesden states wheather she claims innocence or is guilty.
Assuming she claims innocence, Everypony who wishes a turn to speak is allowed to, be they for or against the witness. Isos uses her turn to bring forth the evidence against Friesden and Khenal and the others defend. (we let the thread stay in this state for at least one day.)
When everything is said and done, the Duchess will make a ruling and dictate any punishment if there is to be any. (Don't worry Dsarker I will be fair about it, and will take your wishes for the character into account.)

If this sounds good to everybody and I hear no objections with the format, I can set the scene now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 08:42:43 pm
I have a feeling that the Keeper and Khenal are about to be hoist on their own petard....
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 08:43:17 pm
INSERT PUNCHLINE HERE: ^
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 08:46:55 pm
Go right ahead.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 08:49:52 pm
All sounds reasonable to me.  Falcata will probably just be mostly watching regardless, since as far as I know she has nothing useful to add as a witness.  Unless she was part of Khenal's investigation of Friesden's first murder, but as far as I recall only he was involved, not the rest of the guard.

Of course, I assume that she and the other fortress guard would be expected to be present, in case of civil unrest and all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 08:51:56 pm
REASONABLE? ME? HOW DARE YOU QUESTION MY INSANITY?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 08:57:43 pm
I won't be up past 10 pm EST for quite some time on week-days, but don't worry...I might sneak on. stupid collage regulations...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 09:01:35 pm
Is anypony else going to be witnessing in favor of Friesden?  I'd imagine it'd be easy enough to find somepony who heard Carrot yelling about killing both Khenal and Friesden on the tower, lending strength to Khenal's claim that it was self defense.  Efim's murder, however, will be difficult...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 09:01:41 pm
THIS IS GONNA BE GOOD.

Just think:
The prisoner heard the clattering of metal keys, and then the slam of the iron door. Bright light flooded inside the small dark prison cell, the shadows dissolving in the morning mist. She blinked twice, blinded by the sudden bright light.

The prisoner felt a shudder as she felt herself being forced onto her feet, her shackles clanking as she was half-dragged out into the open courtyard, into the morning sun. Her ear-crusted eyes widened as she saw the multitude awaiting her trial. Empirial Guard Pegasi stood atop the ramparts, and the balconies were filled with people, all attention centered on the flat on which the grand trial was to be held.

The prisoner caught sight of her judges, and felt a sickening feeling deep down in the pit of her stomach. She swallowed, and sat in the center of the flat, the judges watching her with intense eyes that bore into her mind.


this is epicness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:03:58 pm
Except Friesden can't wait for the trial. She now knows why she killed Efim (for reals, man.), and how to get out of it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 09:06:23 pm
Is anypony else going to be witnessing in favor of Friesden?  I'd imagine it'd be easy enough to find somepony who heard Carrot yelling about killing both Khenal and Friesden on the tower, lending strength to Khenal's claim that it was self defense.  Efim's murder, however, will be difficult...

Seems plausible that another fortress guard could have witnessed this.  I have no idea what the fortress layout is or exactly where this happened.  Presumably there would have been some citizens somewhere within eye or earshot of it.  What they might have to say is the question though.

I wouldn't mind playing another guard if no one else with more time wants to do it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 09:07:37 pm
The dining hall has been altered for this day. The tables have all been pushed to one side to make room. Save for one made of the finest marble. Behind that marble table in a clear glass throne sits Duchess Charity Conventtulip, She is flanked on either side by her guards Osal and Madush. On both sides of the table are enourmous stone statues of the founding of Glitterglen. The room is full of chairs for the ponies to sit. They are currently empty.

"The time has finally come." Mumbles the unicorn to herself.

The doors are opened and citizens of Glitterglen come in to take their seats. When everyone is seated. Through the door comes Captain Isos. In her mouth is a zinc chain that leads to a metal collar around Friesden's neck. Friesden also has shackles on her legs that prevent her from running and her wings are bound with leather straps. It's difficult not to appear guilty just from her appearance. Khenal walks in beside her.

As the prisoner walks through the hall she is meet with a loud outcry of both catcalls, jeers, and few supportive shouts. "SILENCE!" shouts the Duchess over the crowd and they do so. The Captain leads the prisoner to the middle of the room, where a statue of the god of Justice rests, Friesden's chain is attached and locked to the statue.

Isos takes her place in front of the crowd and unfurls a scroll, she reads, "Miss Friesden Sectlaces you are charged with the murder, of the first degree, of efim Glitterbends the fisherpony and the murder, also of the first degree, of Captain Psycho Carrot Bristledhail of the Skyguard of Glitterglen. How do you plead?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 09:07:50 pm
I'll voice the prosecutor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 09:09:00 pm
I'll voice the prosecutor.

Okay, but this has a lot of potential to be awesome. Please don't Master it up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 09:10:18 pm
don't Master it up.
((WHY DOES EVERYPONY TELL ME THAT?!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:13:03 pm
"I plead not guilty to the first, and to the second, captain, by reason of self defence," replies Friesden, standing straight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 09:13:43 pm
((My hands are sweaty because of the sheer tension of awesomeness radiating from this room.))

TIME TO TROLL THE BOARDS.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 09:14:04 pm
((Poor Efim, never gets his name capitalized :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:14:48 pm
((And there's good reason for it, too.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 09:17:33 pm
(Dwarf Fortress doesn't even capitalize it. )

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Captial.png
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Captial.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:18:27 pm
Èfim, we hardly knew ye. Except for a pair of lost souls...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 09:20:09 pm
((IF YOU ARE A CLOSET FAN OF JUSTIN BIEBER, PLEASE STEP OUT OF THE ROOM. TROLOLOLOLO...!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 09:20:23 pm
"OBJECTION!" Yells the Prosecutor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:21:17 pm
"What, pray tell, are you objecting to?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 09:21:40 pm
"OBJECTION!"

(I'll assume your speaking for Isos here?)

"And to what exactly do you object Captain?" asks Miss Charity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 09:25:20 pm
"Your honor, do we have any evidence, other than the Defendant's word, that the murder was self defense as she says?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 09:25:55 pm
((Are any of the Skyguard present? I'd like Cornbread to attend too. Only as a late arrival, though...or is it too late for that...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:27:40 pm
Friesden merely facehoofs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 09:29:00 pm
"Captain, this is her plea.  Proving it is what the trial is for, so kindly sit down so we can discuss it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 09:30:17 pm
(It's an open door trial, everypony who wants to be there can be there.)

"That is for her and those who speak for her to prove, Captain. Now please present the evidence you have against her." Charity speaks with an authoritarian tone.

(The Master I would imagine your evidence for the efim murder will be primarily the means, which she could do, and the hairs/feathers found, along with the original diary. Then you should be able to make a convincing case for the Psycho murder as well.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 09:35:21 pm
((Alright, thanks for the headsup. I'm thinking of lowering Cornbread's hyperactivity for this one.))

Cornbread hurries in to the courtroom, panting silently, sees the trial going on, and stands by the rest of the guards. Captain Otik gives here a look of disproval for being so late, and she bows her head a little in embaressment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 09:37:35 pm
"As you wish, your Honor." Isos pulls out Friesden's diaries and shows it to the court.
"This is our first piece of evidence, your Honor."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:40:20 pm
"Objection!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 09:41:50 pm
"Objection!"

"On what grounds?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 09:42:19 pm
((You're representing yourself? good luck...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:42:51 pm
"I was not provided a copy of said evidence prior to the trial. I move to have it declared invalid and excluded from this trial."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 09:44:02 pm
((YOUR HONOR? I PROPOSE WE TEA-BAG GREET EACH OTHER IN A FORMALY MANNER.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 09:45:06 pm
((I'm taking care of that. I'm turning it into a game, using what people are saying as it happens. Cornbread, It has to be real evidence.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 09:47:17 pm
((I'm taking care of that. I'm turning it into a game, using what people are saying as it happens.))

((Then you've got yourself one more supporter. Good luck.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 09:49:04 pm
"I was not provided a copy of said evidence prior to the trial. I move to have it declared invalid and excluded from this trial."

(Pony justice as stated before does not follow the same rules as our modern justice system. In fact I feel that using terms such as you Honor, and prosecutor, and such are already a step more organized than I had imagined it being. So what I'm getting at, is that what I'm about to say is totally unfair and if you think I'm an asshole for doing so, you are probably right. Sorry.)

"Your objection is overruled. The book is relevant to this case and will be discussed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:50:02 pm
"Then we move for the trial to be adjourned so we can prepare for this new evidence."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 09:50:38 pm
"OBJECTION! Who put the defendant in charge?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 09:53:12 pm
((Strongbread, I'm going to have Cornbread recall those times when Frisden was trying to kill eyerypony, and when they had to strap her down multiple times. If you don't mind, that is.))

Cornbread blinks. The evidence presented in this trial seems to be vagualy familiar.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 09:56:16 pm
"Fine," Charity sighs, 'this isn't going to be as easy as I thought.' "We shall break for 2 hours, and that's all the time you're getting," Charity looks down at Isos, "Please share your evidence with the prisoner so she may prepare a defense."

(Let me know when your ready to continue Dsarker.)

(compound, that is fine. After the prosecutor makes his case I'm going to allow for anypony who wants to say anything, good, bad, evidence, character testimony, anything to get a chance to speak. I expect it to be chaotic and disorganized and that's just how I want it.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 09:57:47 pm
"No, Duchess, you misunderstand. I wanted to be sure the prosecutor had read them all. Two hours should be enough for them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 09:58:07 pm
((YOU MUST BE DSARKER...WELCOME TO INSANITY! THE TICKET BOOTH IS THATAWAY.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 10:00:44 pm
((I have to go for tonight anyway. Somepony will have to take over for now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 10:05:00 pm
"We would like to note our defence for the unlawful killing of Èfim is temporary insanity. My diary should provide ample proof."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 10:12:37 pm
"Isos, you have read the diary in it's entirety correct." asks the Duchess.

"Well... I uh, skimmed it. But I have read all Khenal's old reports on the case including where he talks about the book." stammers out the guard captain.


Quote
Khenal's Book, Chapter 32

Ingest above!  The other guards found Friesden's journal, and I couldn't believe what it contained!  The first entries seemed almost manic, exactly what I would expect from a pony who could murder.  But, around the middle, the real Dr. Friesden started poking through.  Towards the end, it seemed like two ponies were trying to write in the same space, with sentences mashed together and flowing into each other.

"Then go, take two hours and read the diary thoroughly." grumbles Charity, "And Friesden I am aware that you will be claiming temporary insanity, and the diary which I read certainly works as evidence for the insane part. What we still need to see proved, is the temporary part.

Edit: "The meeting is dismissed and the trial will begin again in two hours."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 10:13:08 pm
((THIS IS OVERKILL.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 10:14:42 pm
"Oh, indeed, Duchess. I've got evidence for that, don't you worry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 10:15:41 pm
Missed the start by a bit, I'm afraid.

Sometimes justice still gets served, Falcata thinks to herself as she watches Isos lead Friesden into the room.

Already she felt butterflies in her stomach, and the trial hadn't even begun.  She'd sat through more trials than she ever cared to remember, none of them happy occasions.  At least this time she didn't have a personal stake in the matter.

She blew out a breath to relieve some of her pent up tension and watched the ponies around her.  She wanted to see Friesden brought to justice, but she also had a job to do.  There was a small chance somepony might lose their cool and do something they might regret, and it was her job to see to it that nopony got hurt.  Even Friesden.

That would have to come later when she was convicted for being the murderer she was.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 10:16:11 pm
((THIS IS A TROLL COMMENT. PLEASE IGNORE IF YOU CAN.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 10:17:19 pm
(2 ingame hours.)

(Does anyone have anything they want to do during this time or may we fast forward?)

Edit: Does anypony else want to take over Isos for this. I'd like it to be someone who's been around awhile, sorry compound. I can do it if no one else will step up, but I'd rather let someone else do it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 10:18:14 pm
((INSANITY IS MY MIDDLE NAME!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 10:19:50 pm
(Either works for me.  Programming between posts so not much difference here.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 10:20:23 pm
((YOU MUST BE THE LEGENDARY MULTITASKER I HEARD NOTHING OF.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 10:22:00 pm
Cornbread stretched her back as she went back to her seat in the courtroom, after sleeping the whole time for two hours listening to the chattering around the room. She wonders how she'd been talked into joining this court. Already, three hours had passed, and not one single exciting thing which she'd been craving for had happened.

((THIS IS YOUR CAPTAIN SPEAKING: WELCOME ABOARD THE TROLL EXPRESS! NOW BEGAIN TROOOOLLLING!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 10:23:12 pm
Also, compound, like I ALREADY SAID, I'm going to let the open forum part of the trial run for at least one full day real time so more players have an opportunity to post regardless of time zones and schedules. So if you need to leave tonight, you should be able to post your part tomorrow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 10:23:59 pm
I'm okay with a fast forward.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 10:25:06 pm
Edit: Does anypony else want to take over Isos for this. I'd like it to be someone who's been around awhile, sorry compound. I can do it if no one else will step up, but I'd rather let someone else do it.

I wouldn't really feel comfortable taking over Isos and probably don't have time anyway.

I'd say that it should go to Khenal or you.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 10:25:50 pm
If Khenal does, who's going to play Khenal when he gets examined?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 10:26:58 pm
Two hours pass and the ponies pile back into the meeting hall. Charity speaks, "The meeting to decide the fate of Friesden is now back in session."

"Isos, the floor is yours. Please make your case."


(Any volunteers, or should I?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 10:27:05 pm
Also, compound, like I ALREADY SAID, I'm going to let the open forum part of the trial run for at least one full day real time so more players have an opportunity to post regardless of time zones and schedules. So if you need to leave tonight, you should be able to post your part tomorrow.

((haha, I know, no hury here...I'm just placing holders in case I need to leave soon...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 10:28:38 pm
Friesden whispers to Khenal, and gets a small nod in return. She smiles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 10:29:05 pm
I'd like it to be someone who's been around awhile, sorry compound.

((No prob! ;D Strongbeard, maybe you should take Isos.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 10:29:26 pm
Dsarker has a point.  Guess Isos is yours KingStrongbeard.

Falcata rises to attention as the trial resumes.  She is very eager to hear what else Friesden has to say for herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 10:31:10 pm
(Okay, I'm going to take up Isos. This will probably be a wall of text, give me some time to type.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 10:41:44 pm
(Okay, I'm going to take up Isos. This will probably be a wall of text, give me some time to type.)

((Haha, go ahead! I always love a reading challenge!))

((In the words of Loud Whispers...))

I'm put off by the large walls of text... But it is a great read nonetheless. CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!!!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 10:54:08 pm
Isos steps forward, “Ladies and gentlecolts of Glitterglen, my first piece of evidence is Friesden's Diary.” She holds the book aloft.

“In the beginning of the book, we find the writings of a clearly manic pony.”

She shares a few of the journal entries with the audience.
(I will not repeat them here, you may go back and look at them yourself.)

“However,” Isos continues, “as the book progresses, the writing begin to take a different tone. It is as if two ponies are trying to write in the same space.”

She again reads the insane book entries to the audience.

“It is clear that the pony who wrote this book was unhinged, and capable of the crime of murder. One might say to this, that it was mearly a temporary condition, one which she is clearly over now. As she sits here calming defending her crimes. However, I have prepared evidence that she is mearly adapt at hiding the madness within.”

(I'm going to put words in Thunder's mouth now. I hope that's okay with the owner as they haven't joined in any Role Playing other than journal entries and I will attempt to stick to that character as best I can.)

“Thundersplinter please come up here.” Gestures Isos into the crowd.

Thundersplinter walks up and sits next to Isos.

“You and Friesden where both members of the founding 7 of Glitterglen, correct?”-Isos
“That is correct.”-Thunder
“How would you describe your relationship with Friesden before she was arrested.”-Isos
“I thought of her as a friend she had a few quirks but I never would have suspected her of murder.”-Thunder
“What sorts of things did you do together before she was arrested?”-Isos
“Well when we were last together, we where working on a recipe with Ironya for hoof polish.” -Thunder
“And she seemed fine then? Normal?”-Isos
“Yes, she seemed just like any other pony.” -Thunder

“Could any of you who knew her before say different? No, you could not.”-Isos

“You see ladies and gentlecolts, I see only two possibilities at this point. ONE Friesden's diary is a lie to make her seem more mad then she was, so as to play it off as temporary insanity, in the case she was caught or TWO she is somehow able to mask her inner madness, with a veneer of calm normality. Regardless which is the case, she is not safe to let go free.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 10:56:25 pm
Cornbread, unable to keep her mouth shut any longer, yells, "I agree!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 11:01:17 pm
Otik glares at her disapprovingly. Cornbread slowly shrinks back, embaressed by her sudden loud outburst.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 11:05:49 pm
A curious series of emotions wash over Falcata as she listens to the captain's statements.  The contents of Friesden's diary were... unsettling to hear.

If Friesden had committed murder, Falcata knew already she was a heartless sociopath.  The diary however, as the captain said herself, proved without doubt to Falcata that Friesden was either hopelessly insane or diabolically sinister in her motives and was intelligent enough to feign such insanity.

Her eyes narrow as she looks over the pony chained before her. 
She would never allow Friesden to go free again.  But it wasn't her place to make such a judgement.

She reflexively reaches for her weapon as somepony shouts a confirmation to the captain's assertion, but halts at the lack of any physical outburst.  She would do well to keep her eyes on that pony.  At least she was a unicorn and nopony would have seen her magically reach for it.  It wouldn't do at all for her to start a scene needlessly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 11:06:58 pm
"Fillies and gentlecolts. My learned associate here claims two things. The first is permanent insanity. If this was so, then how would I be able to hide it? If this insanity is such that it caused me to kill a pony and was permanent, why wouldn't I have killed many other ponies in the rest of the time prior to the killing, and in the time after the killing but prior to its discovery? And what about after I was released? Would not then my insanity have caused me to kill? But, no, don't bother to think about that. For my learned associate has said it, and she is indeed learned! She would have already have thought about this, but would have put it from her mind. She has clearly already thought this out, and merely thinks that we do not have the learning to understand why. For she is a learned pony. And anyway, she has another option she gives us. The murder was calculated, but it was hidden in the insanity. My learned associate clearly knows that this would mean that my alleged killing of Carrot would be a silly thing for somepony who had successfuly hidden prior crimes, and merely discounts it. So should we all, fillies, gentlecolts. For she is learned, and she would have already seen that this would be counterproductive, but there is another motive. She merely does not feel the need to present it to you, but you can be assured she has it. For she is a learned pony, and she would not forget such things."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 11:07:41 pm
((Strongbeard, I give you the honor of chasitizing Cornbread, as any royal court should be.))

Cornbread stares at the chained prisoner as she delivers her end of the story. Somehow, the pieces don't match up. If Friesden had gone into a temporary moment of insanity, then why wasn't she going into another one of her fits again? Afterall, only potions or the gods could free a pony from insanity. Had Friesden somehow come under divine influence? But if she did, then why...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on November 30, 2011, 11:12:17 pm
(I'm tired and need to retire from posting for the night. Dsarker, if you wish to post a rebuttal to the wall of text Isos just laid out feel free to do so. ninja'd. Also, if Khenal, or Dsarker (Or maybe Telgin?) wish to take over Isos, that is fine with me as long as you can try to be unbiased with her portion, I trust you guys to make it interesting. Once Isos makes her case for the murder of Carrot and anyother arguments she needs to make that my tired mind is overlooking, and Friesden gets a chance to counter those arguments, someone may feel free to have Charity open the gates to Chaos.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 11:14:30 pm
(I'm tired and need to retire from posting for the night. Dsarker, if you wish to post a rebuttal to the wall of text Isos just laid out feel free to do so. ninja'd. Also, if Khenal, or Dsarker (Or maybe Telgin?) wish to take over Isos, that is fine with me as long as you can try to be unbiased with her portion, I trust you guys to make it interesting. Once Isos makes her case for the murder of Carrot and anyother arguments she needs to make that my tired mind is overlooking, and Friesden gets a chance to counter those arguments, someone may feel free to have Charity open the gates to Chaos.)

((Don't worry...we've got your back...hopefully.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 11:17:11 pm
It wouldn't do at all for her to start a scene needlessly.[/i]

((FEEL FREE TO START A SCENE OF INSANITY. YOU HAVE MY APPROVAL.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on November 30, 2011, 11:18:36 pm
((Also, I'm bailing out, so anyone can take over Cornbread. Remember: she supports Isos at first, but you can make her opinion change...toodles!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 11:21:22 pm
Maybe I should have put "Friends, ponies, countrymen, lend me your ears." at the start.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 11:22:54 pm
((Hmm, I do believe that's a re-purposed speech from Julius Caesar.  For Brutus is a good man, after all.  Oh hey, I actually caught it, awesome.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 11:26:29 pm
Dammit. You know, it is very possible that we could reach the end of the trial without me putting forth my main statement...hopefully I'll get a chance at some point, though. Preferably at the closing statements.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 11:27:25 pm
Somehow, though, I believe that Khenal has already guessed what's going to happen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on November 30, 2011, 11:31:36 pm
Heh, think I'll pass on taking over for Isos right now.  Truth be told, after reading through all of this thread, I'm pretty sure Dsarker would just run circles around me trying to make decent arguments.

Permanent insanity... Falcata wasn't really sure how to peg Friesden there.  She certainly appeared to be sane right now.  Whether she had ever really been insane, that was the question.

Friesden was articulate and clearly intelligent.  It didn't seem to be much of a stretch to believe that she had fabricated the entire bouts of insanity.  Although the rest of her argument made sense.  It didn't follow why she would murder Carrot after apparently getting away with her first murder.  Unless she really was a sociopath who killed when she thought she could get away with it.  She wouldn't be the first Falcata had seen.

But then she probably
would have killed somepony else before now.  Unless that's what she wanted everypony to think...

Falcata shook her head, trying to find a linear path of thought in the circles of madness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on November 30, 2011, 11:45:24 pm
Somehow, though, I believe that Khenal has already guessed what's going to happen.

I have no idea what's going to happen, I'm not good at guessing character drama.  When Charity asked how Friesden pleads, I half expected to hear "Guilty on both counts." for the massive anti-climax.  At this point, Khenal likely knows what Friesden has planned and will support her, but I have no clue.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on November 30, 2011, 11:51:35 pm
Right, check your PMs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on November 30, 2011, 11:52:52 pm
I'm in sneak mode...
I'll just jump back in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 12:14:42 am
((We continuing?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 12:16:06 am
((Hopefully, i'm just waiting...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 12:23:46 am
((I guess I'll take over Isos?  At this point, I think her case hinges on showing Friesden is still nuts.  After all, a criminally insane pony can't be allowed to roam free.))

Captain Isos appears unfazed by Friesden's speech, and continues.

"I have witnesses that call your sanity into question, Friesden.  Captain Otik witnessed you go mad just days before the death of Captain Carrot.  Captain Otik, if you would tell all gathered here how Friesden went berserk?"


******************

Is Impending Doom around?  Or should we just assume Otik's testimony paints a grim picture for Friesden's sanity?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 12:30:19 am
((I'm not sure if he is or isn't.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 12:40:03 am
((He isn't on.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 12:51:37 am
((Otik seems like a pony to tell the truth, even if she'd prefer to not say anything.  Let's say she gives an accurate retelling of the rescue of Carrot from the jungle, at least from her perspective:  Friesden's eyes and effortless slaughter of the diomedians, Khenal simply fleeing instead of trying to stop her, and the fact that she did actually seem to want to help save Carrot.  Sound good?  Impending Doom showed up to give Otik's actual testimony.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 12:53:10 am
((sounds good. Brb with an acknowledgment.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 12:58:50 am
((I'm right here, folks.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 01:02:30 am
((okay, go ahead and do Otik's Answer.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 01:44:48 am
"Aye. I'll tell ye."

"Me, Mister Khenal, an' Miss Friesden were all out in th' jungle, searchin' fer th' deceased. On th' way back, we wos ambushed by a buncha Diomedian bandit-types. They threatened us, an Miss Friesden... she went nuts. Grabbed th' first one by th' neck and twisted 'is cloppin' head right off with 'er bare hooves, then beat 'is buddy to death with it. Took another one as high up as she could fly, an' dove. Smashed 'im into th' ground so hard, he... just kinna wasnae there anymore. Punched th' last one inna face, an' 'is whole head exploded - not crushed, mind ye, exploded. Then she turned on me 'n Mister Khenal, but before she took even a step, she keeled over, dead to th' world."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 01:52:08 am
"Captain Otik, I will remind you, fillies, gentlecolts, is a veteran. Listen to her words. Now, Captain Otik... Have you seen me doing such a thing prior or hence to this, or would it be an isolated incident? For the benefit of the crowd, I'd remind you all that this happened the day before the tragic incident we are all unhappy about. Isos, of course, knows this, and has no doubt merely forgotten this. For it must be known that she is a learned pony. Nevertheless, let us turn to the recent past. Have you, Captain Otik, seen this happen before or after? Indeed, we saw each other later the very same day. Was I the same, or different, to how I was at the attack of the Diomedians?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 01:57:11 am
((I CAN'T YELL OBJECTION WITHOUT A JUDGE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 02:02:36 am
"When I next saw ye, ye were... not th' same at all. Sweet, but quiet, an' timid as a filly."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 02:04:51 am
((A pony trial isn't as formal as ours :P  Besides, Isos has a plan for this.  I might want to see Friesden free, and so does Khenal, but Isos isn't done yet.  She isn't finished by a long shot.  Edited: Oh hey, that's her cue.))

"Rapid mood swings?  Changing from ruthless killer to 'sweet filly' in no time at all?  That sounds like crazy to me, and dangerously so."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 02:06:03 am
Falcata lets out a muffled snort.  Captain Otik's testimony wasn't improving her opinion of Friesen much.  Maybe Friesden wasn't insane so much as prone to homicidal bouts of rage?  Maybe Carrot said something she didn't like so she just killed him.

Regardless, it was hard to take Captain Otik's testimony at face value.  Nopony was strong enough to do that, much less somepony like Friesden.  But what would Otik gain by lying on Friesden's behalf?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 02:07:02 am
"Surely my learned associate already knew this. But no, no, she wouldn't try to hide anything from us, would she? She's the Captain of the Guard, and an honourable and trustworthy pony. Captain Otik, if I may ask you one more question. It might be getting at something still tender, and if you don't want to talk about it, I understand and will withdraw my question. When the fatal beatings by the Guard happened, Isos was a member of the guard, wasn't she? No, I withdraw my question. Nothing further."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 02:10:40 am
"I... dunnae know? Th' only pony I knew who was in th' guard is Mister Khenal, an' only 'cos he used ta be a soldier."

((EDIT: derp))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 02:12:12 am
"Nevertheless. If you have no further witnesses, I'd like to call my own."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 02:14:05 am
((Edited in something from Isos up there in case anyone missed it.))

Captain Isos glares at Friesden for her withdrawn question, knowing it doesn't need to be answered to sew doubt about Isos' motivation.

"None, for now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 02:16:48 am
"Very well. I call Khenal, former captain of the guard, to the stand."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 02:20:03 am
I stand and step forward, ready to testify.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 02:22:02 am
((I'll take over Isos for now))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 02:22:48 am
"Khenal, you were made sheriff when the death of Èfim was discovered, were you not?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 02:24:02 am
(Hmm, was Falcata part of the guard when the beatings occurred?  She probably knew of it either way I guess)

Friesden's comment on the beatings struck a nerve, and it took most of Falcata's will to remove the scowl that formed on her face.  What did Friesden intend by that remark?

The train of thought was cut off as Khenal was called forward to testify.  This was the moment she was really waiting for.  What would her former captain have to say for all of this?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 02:26:10 am
"I was."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 02:27:46 am
"Can you take us through the wounds on Èfim's body? Only in as much detail as is needed. Were there any abnormalities found in the body?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 02:36:50 am
"Yes.  The ribs and spine showed multiple signs of spear-strike, and the wings had been carefully removed post mortem.  There was also an abnormality of the skull that I didn't think much of at the time: a small hole in the forehead.  I didn't include it in the reports or cause of death, as the hole appeared to be a very old wound.  Additionally, the wound appeared to have been carefully made, not the work of a spear trap."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 02:37:46 am
((Possibly the knife in the chest...Oh my gosh...THE KNIFE JAMMED IN THE CHEST! EVIDENCE PEOPLE!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 02:38:55 am
"Tell me, do you know if it is easy to carve a skull like that? Could it possibly have decayed before being exhumed?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 02:41:29 am
"HOLD IT! Friesden, how would you know how easy it would be, unless you've done it before?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 02:43:09 am
"Because he is a soldier. It tends to happen that some soldiers hit enemy ponies in the head, in which case you would be able to estimate how difficult carving it would be."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 02:47:47 am
"If I hadn't seen the wound myself, I'd have called it impossible.  A simple blow to the head makes a totally different wound than what I saw.  It took somepony who knew what they were doing, and likely some very precise magic as well.  And no, it wouldn't have decayed like that.  A skull is pretty sturdy, holes don't just appear in them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 02:49:15 am
"So this wound would be virtually impossible to be caused by anything other than magic."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 02:52:37 am
"OBJECTION!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 02:54:27 am
"What do you object to now, Isos? What, pray tell, my learned colleague, is not to your liking?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 02:56:37 am
"Nopony has even considered the possibility of a weapon involved! A weapon such as a carving knife could easily create a hole like that! I now present to you my next piece of evidence, the knife found near the chest Khenal made in the workshop!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 02:59:14 am
"A knife will not create a hole that neat, Captain.  And, as I said, it was an old wound.  He likely sustained it long before ever coming to Glitterglen."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 03:03:08 am
"Oh..." Isos grumbles and sits back down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:04:27 am
"An old wound? Could you give us a best guess as to when it occured? More or less than a decade ago?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 03:07:30 am
"I'm not a doctor, but I wouldn't be surprised if it was over a decade old.  At the very least, it looked to have been finished with whatever healing it was going to do well before he died."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:10:52 am
"Very peculiar! Now, obviously we can't speculate on the cause of the injury. But Khenal. Can you give us a professional opinion. Would this wound be consistent with, say, a unicorn having their horn removed?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 03:13:01 am
"OBJECTION! This is becoming irrelevant! The fact whether he's a trans-race is not a factor in this trial!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 03:13:35 am
((I think I see where this is going now... and that is an excellent twist.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:13:56 am
"Don't worry, captain, all will become obvious soon enough."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 03:18:55 am
My jaw drops as I hear the question.  After a few moments, my expression darkens for an instant before I shake myself.

"It...very well could have been.  The regularity of the hole could certainly been because of the joint between horn and skull, instead of a carefully carved head wound."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:22:27 am
"Hmmm. Interesting. How possible would it be that the pegasus was, in fact, an alicorn, who had come to lose his horn? No, never mind, mere speculation. I withdraw the question. With your assistance, we tracked Èfim back. How far could we trace his record back?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 03:27:18 am
((Guessing we're going with the idea that not all alicorns are huge like Celestia and Luna then, or is this just a big pegasus?  I agree with Impending Doom regardless, interesting twist.))

Edit: Can't spell to save my life these days...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:29:31 am
At least Khenal is about the same size as Friesden. Anyway, Luna used to be pretty short. Even at nightmare night she was smaller than Celestia. I'm thinking this particular alicorn was the runt of his litter, as it were. Why else do you think he made himself so big?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 03:30:08 am
((I'm going to bed before five so my heart doesn't explode in gore. Good night everypony. IMPENDING DOOM IS NOW IN CHARGE OF ISOS, :dealwithitface:))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 03:30:43 am
((Eeyup. thought you were going there. :P))

((EDIT: Wait, what? Why me?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:32:58 am
Because you're the only patsy left.


Anyway. Thinking up the real name for Friesden's father.

Farquaad, anyone?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 03:33:11 am
((BECAUSE I SAID SO! Seriously though, because you have the most similar writing style as me.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:35:17 am
((Anyway.

Compact list of ponies decided as incompetent by the majority of the playerbase.

'Doctor' Alen.
Captain Isos.


))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 03:36:23 am
((Okay, good enough for me. :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 03:38:44 am
"Approximately 13 years.  Digging through records, I found he had been exiled to a small town.  There, the records stopped.  There was no birth certificate for Efim, no writ of immigration to the town, nor writ of emigration for where he came from."

************

I'll take Isos back if you don't want to try to play her, Impending Doom.

Also, Isos is not incompetent.  Khenal chose her as his replacement.  She's supposed to be calm, collected and by-the-book.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 03:42:29 am
((So she's Phoenix Wright in spirit then? OK I'M GOING TO BED...DON'T SAY IT DSARKER! :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:42:54 am
"That's extraordinary. Whoever he was, he must have either committed a great crime or bribed a lot of people to get that far. And if he'd bribed that many people, why did he not do the same afterwards? It looks to be too complicated for a simple transspecies. We'll come back to that later. Let's get back to just over a week ago. Carrot had disappeared some time ago, and you were beginning to get anxious. Can you tell us, in your own words, what happened that day?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 03:45:28 am
((Sure, you can play her. It sounds sorta fun, I just don't think I'd be any good at it. ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 03:58:04 am
"I had been...distracted for the days prior to our finding Carrot.  He had said he was leaving, and I had been in no position to stop him.  The day we set out to find him, we overheard Captain Otik dressing down the Skyguard for not finding him yet, and asked her to accompany us in our treck into the jungle.  It looked like the Skyguard had stuck to the skies in their search for my friend, so the three of us decided on a ground search."

"Eventually, we found Carrot.  He was in bad shape, but still moving, so we hurried back to Glitterglen.  Diomedians ambushed us, and you handled them with ease, just as Captain Otik described.  You...weren't you, and I tried to get Otik, Carrot and myself away before anything could happen.  You collapsed, and I carried you back here."

Captain Isos interrupts me here.

"Khenal, you are forgetting a few details.  When you returned from the jungle, you brought her to a cell.  You feared she might still be berserk, I heard you mumbling about her eyes.  Correct?"

"...Correct.  But she is not a danger now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 01, 2011, 04:01:15 am
"I would like to confirm Khenal's statement. Should she have shown signs of insanity, she would have surely been put down by me before this trial. Or do you doubt the words of the pony that has saved so many lives in this fortress?" Bubbles calls from his chair at the back of the hall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 04:06:05 am
"I 'wasn't me'. Can you elaborate? Was I some other pony?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 04:15:32 am
"Your...your eyes.  They were beyond lifeless.  They were like portals to raw nothingness.  You moved with brutal efficiency when you destroyed those Diomedians, instead of your usual gentle grace.  You were not you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 04:20:06 am
"Can you tell the captain, do my eyes appear like that now? I am sure my learned colleague would be happy to accept an opinion on such a matter."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 04:27:41 am
"They do not.  I doubt very much they ever will again."

Captain Isos stands to speak.

"All I heard was that you, Friesden, are unstable and capable of literally rending ponies limb form limb.  I respect Khenal, but his opinion is very biased when it comes to you.  Do you have any third party to back up his claims of your stability?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 01, 2011, 04:29:44 am
((ME))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 04:32:09 am
"Ah, but we do! We have two ponies eminently suited for this task, but we shall leave that to a little later. Two more questions, Khenal. When I was 'not myself', did I harm anypony of Glitterglen? A simple yes or no will suffice."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 04:33:43 am
"No."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 04:35:53 am
"And our last question for now. Did I help to find Carrot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 04:36:09 am
With a nod of approvement, Falcata's opinion of Isos rises measurably.  Khenal may be a trustworthy individual and admirable pony in general, but none of what either of them was saying seemed to be helping her case.  Isos was being very reasonable about this, not letting her prior experience with Khenal cloud her own perspective of matters.

Justice may be served yet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 04:38:46 am
"Yes."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 04:40:39 am
"So, fillies and gentlecolts, it appears that our learned friend, the captain, might well be wrong. It appears that I am not permanently insane. Your witness, captain."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 04:48:08 am
"I have no questions for him.  You have argued my position quite well.  As I said before, you have shown that you are capable of sudden shifts in personality and bouts of extreme violence."

***************
Are we ready to call this for 24 hours to let everypony put in their two bits, or do you have more?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 04:48:37 am
((And now I'm off to bed. 'night all.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 04:51:10 am
"Oh, good. In that case, the next witness I shall call will be our good commandant Starkey."

((Roger that, continue in the morning.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 04:55:11 am
((Bed sounds like a plan.  See everypony tomorrow!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 05:06:49 am
((Ah, bed.  The thing I wish I was in right now.  But no, I've got to program this sentry gun simulator before class begins tomorrow.  Oh, and by the way, if you ever wondered where you would use trigonometry in real life, it's come up a few times here.  Fun times.

Oh well, guess I'll see where this goes tomorrow.  Falcata will probably just keep standing there, feeling smug and confident that Friesden will be convicted.  Now, off to update Dawnpick while I wait for another batch of simulator results.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 03:37:14 pm
if you ever wondered where you would use trigonometry in real life...

Preaching to the chior there, my friend.  I got my degree in mechanical engineering recently, so I could show you how to use calculus in real life.  Or really blow everyone's mind and give you an application for imaginary numbers.  Yes, imaginary numbers have a real world application.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:41:52 pm
Damned smart people...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 03:54:10 pm
TOTALLY RELATED LINK (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3640/%2B%2BINCIDENT-DELTA%2B%2B)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 04:22:53 pm
Dsarker, before we resume, I would just like to know somethings. What was the point in ruling out insanity? All it did was make you more responsible for murder. You danced around the question of whether or not you killed the first pony, and only proved that he was a transrace? how did that help your case?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 04:25:39 pm
I ruled out permanent insanity AND sanity at the time. Temporary insanity is what I'm going for. And I'm going to prove that by reason of possession and/or post traumatic stress disorder.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 04:27:19 pm
And to prove that, I needed to establish he was an alicorn, and he had taken a new name and lived up to our earliest tracing at an exile settlement.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 04:39:52 pm
Alright...That is the single most insane plan I've ever heard in my entire life...I APPROVE!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 04:41:47 pm
I can't wait till Impending gets on. It's his birthday today, you know?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 04:45:08 pm
Yep. Good thing I'm not prepared in anyway shape or form, or else I'd actually be responsible for once in my life...AND WE CAN'T HAVE THAT, NOW CAN WE?!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 05:04:17 pm
((Damn, you guys doing the trial already? YOU SURE PICKED A GREAT TIME TO DIE COMPUTER!*beats dead laptop with a stick* well anywhosit here. we. go.))

 "AHEM." Couth Darkmane loudly coughs. he's wearing an expensive suit, has his wild mane slicked back with a heavy grease and he's even wearing a bowtie.

 "Mrs. Charity, I think the court has a pretty weighed opinion on Friesden, but I am not really convinced it was a singular murderer just yet. I would like to ask Khenal a few questions, please."


((Fix'd sorta))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 05:08:13 pm
((Not yet. Strongbeard isn't on.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 05:11:12 pm
((Also, it was two murder charges.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 05:24:48 pm
((Ignore this comment.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 05:26:55 pm
I quirk an eyebrow at this new pony and remain where I am, though I have a question for him, first.

"I'm sorry, I don't think I ever got your name.  And I believe Captain Isos would like to talk to you after the trial, since I never did get to hear you out at the hospital."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 05:37:07 pm
"The name is Couth Darkmane, and don't worry about the statement; I'm here to testify against your little assassination plot right here, right now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 05:37:59 pm
((I really can't wait to use my third witness.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 05:40:34 pm
My eyes harden at the accusing tone of his voice, but I say nothing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 05:46:16 pm
(("With the court's permission, I would like to call my third witness."
"Very well. Starkey, you are dismissed."
"Not so soon. Starkey, you know who I want."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 05:49:17 pm
((Mind if I ruin the seriousness of the trial with Psycho popping in?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 05:50:48 pm
((Considering pony trials are different from our typical trials, why not add in something to the mix, such as a sudden interupption of action, like a sudden murder or something, that could, in a way, come into conflict with one or more pieces of evidence?))

((Mind if I ruin the seriousness of the trial with Psycho popping in?))

((Exactly somewhat what I was talking about.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 05:51:31 pm
((sure why not?. just waiting on kingstrongbeard anyway.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 05:51:44 pm
Psycho Carrot? Totally! Go ahead.


Oooooh! Best idea for a twist.

We're all near the end of the trial, everypony has found Friesden guilty, and she's awaiting her sentence.

Psycho Carrot bursts in, alive and well. "Hey guys, what's happening?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 05:52:39 pm
((I was thinking Carrot might borrow either Khenal's or someponey else's mouth for a moment durring the part where everypony gets to put in their two bits.  The reaction of everypony hearing "It was self defence!" in Carrot's voice over the crowd would be priceless.  And I was wondering if any of the true insanity would get revealed in the trial.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 05:52:42 pm
((DSARKER, WILL YOU MARRY ME?! YOUR IDEA IS PERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRFEEEEEEEEEECT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, but how to implement it...hmmm...help anypony?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 05:55:15 pm
Kil, of course. Carrot's already gone to possess her. She TOTALLY MORPHS INTO PSYCHO CARROT (ie, just rename, screw the game based stuff))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 05:56:00 pm
Even better. Have him not know what's happening at the start, so he starts with the lie the Keeper got him to pull.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 05:56:28 pm
((Near the end of the trial, when Isos looks all triumphant, and Charity and the court are saying: "I'm sorry, this evidence does not support why...Friesden, we, as the court, do condemn you to-" and Carrot bursts in Yeah, combine the two ideas.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 05:56:55 pm
((BETTER YET! I POSSESS ONE OF MY FILLIES AND BARGE INTO THE COURT SESSION AND YELL "CARROT IS ALIVE!"!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 05:57:29 pm
((And of course, he has to say the perfect line.

"OBJECTION!"))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 05:58:00 pm
(("OBJECTION! Hi." IMAGINE Khenal's face!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 05:58:40 pm
(("OBJECTION! I'm not dead!"))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 05:58:59 pm
((No, that wouldn't make any sense though, unless if Carrot were a ghost, or maybe if he really weren't dead...ninja'd))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 05:59:21 pm
((Carrot IS a ghost, and HE'S a BOY.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 05:59:32 pm
((I think it'd be something along the lines of "...I need a drink, excuse me."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 01, 2011, 05:59:52 pm
AND JESUS ITS A HE!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:00:16 pm
((No, he's possessing one of his fillies.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:00:19 pm
((WAIT! What if Carrot weren't dead and actually had been locked up soemwhere by the assassin (I forgot his name.) who then used her dead body as a way of entrance into the palace! And then the real carrot hadn't really suffered a concussion and hadn't died, but had been switched by the disguised Assassin! And then the real Carrot somehow broke out of the prison area and then relays her story to the jury?))

((Didn't see the above comment, my apologies, everyone.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:01:25 pm
((No. Khenal saw Carrot die. That stays. GET IT THROUGH YOUR SKULL, PSYCHO CARROT IS A BOY!! Everything is worked out.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 06:04:05 pm
((No. Khenal saw Carrot die. That stays. GET IT THROUGH YOUR SKULL, PSYCHO CARROT IS A BOY!! Everything is worked out.))
Yay, Now people can think Carrot is a girl and stop thinking Khenal is one :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 06:04:27 pm
(( I remember an episode of some show where somebody faked his own death to see what people would say about him at his funeral, maybe Psycho Carrot is in the crowd, waiting just as intensely as everypony else to hear what the verdict is?


EDIT; and yeah, Psycho Carrot is dead, but this is GLITTERGLEN we're talking about! )) 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:04:49 pm
((FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU We're getting derailed!!!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:04:58 pm
((Anyway, possession is only going to be temporary. Then you can get back to your mind arguments with the Keeper.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:05:05 pm
((No. Khenal saw Carrot die. That stays. GET IT THROUGH YOUR SKULL, PSYCHO CARROT IS A BOY!! Everything is worked out.))
Yay, Now people can think Carrot is a girl and stop thinking Khenal is one :P

((I may need to reread the genders of these ponies...I'd always thought Khenal was a guy...))

((FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU We're getting derailed!!!!!))

((Yeah, I'm gonna switch back to topic now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:05:35 pm
((KHENAL IS A GUY!! GOOD LORD!!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:06:22 pm
((GET BACK TO THE TRIAL EVERYPONY!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:07:01 pm
((The only major ponies who are girls are Friesden, Kil, Isos, and Otik. Everyone else is male))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:07:33 pm
((KHENAL IS A GUY!! GOOD LORD!!!!))

((Alright! Okay, just pm me about it...))

((The only major ponies who are girls are Friesden, Kil, Isos, and Otik. Everyone else is male))

((My god...I thought Otik and Isos were...nvm. Thank's for clearing that up, Dsarker.))

((And now, back to the courtroom.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:08:23 pm
((Charity = Totally a boy's name.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:09:31 pm
((Charity = Totally a boy's name.))

((PM me if I screw up with the genders, please. Now, as I said, back to the courtroom.  :P Boss!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:09:52 pm
((That does it.))
All of a sudden, Friesden feels a slap hit her in the face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:11:28 pm
((I'm joking. Charity is female.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:12:23 pm
We're waiting on Impending Doom so I can question Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 01, 2011, 06:12:57 pm
Is there a open pony for this? Would be willing to join if there is. One with a horn, wings are options. :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:13:22 pm
((I'm joking. Charity is female.))

((...-___-

ENOUGH WITH THE TROLLING!!! :P))

((That does it.))
All of a sudden, Friesden feels a slap hit her in the face.

((Now, imagine that happening only as a stab.

Suddenly we start to have ghostly assassinations.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:13:34 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=V2P11pU3yo0#t=118s stop making me shoot myself...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:14:53 pm
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=V2P11pU3yo0#t=118s stop making me shoot myself...))

((FAKE!!! happens to be the most popular comment.))

We're waiting on Impending Doom so I can question Starkey.

((Starkey? Starkey is a guy, right?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 06:16:01 pm
Or for DNVO to do his thing, unless I missed it in the 50 or so posts from the last few min.  Also, there should be lots of ponies to choose from still.  You might want to choose a profession, or else StrongBeard might make you a lye maker or something silly :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:17:30 pm
Is there a open pony for this? Would be willing to join if there is. One with a horn, wings are options. :P

Yep, you've got lots of options to choose from.The format for submittion of pony request is, according to Impending Doom, "I'd like to claim X kind of pony with Y job, name him/her Z." Somewhat along those lines.

AND WELCOME TO GLITTERGLEN! ENJOY YOUR STAY!

Or for DNVO to do his thing, unless I missed it in the 50 or so posts from the last few min.  Also, there should be lots of ponies to choose from still.  You might want to choose a profession, or else StrongBeard might make you a lye maker or something silly :P

((IGNORED))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 01, 2011, 06:22:59 pm
Ahem. Well then, I would like to have a Unicorn or Royal gemcrafter ( Yeah yeah, call me unoptimised...), with the name of Pokionic. The Glue Maker.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 06:31:00 pm
((I'm going over charity's head, when has Couth ever respected authority?))

 " first question! " Couth shouted with some animosity.

 " Do you or do you not have a key to the armory? could you possibly attain a crossbow in an emergency?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 06:32:50 pm
"Not anymore, I'm no longer the Captain of the Guard."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 01, 2011, 06:32:58 pm
"Couth Douth! What do you think you're doing, interrupting the court right now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:33:58 pm
"Let the pony speak. We have truth on our side. We have nothing to hide."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 06:38:15 pm
(( is Dr. Bubbles saying that or is ansontan2000 saying that? ))


"of course, but could you have access to a crossbow in the time-frame of about oh, let's say a day before Mayor Charity's  assassination attempt?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:38:49 pm
"It is true," Captain Otik says. "As Captain of The Skyguard, I served by Khenal, and when he left, I myself made sure the keys were properly passed on."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:39:30 pm
Friesden feels a harder slap this time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:39:51 pm
When HE left. HE. Khenal is MALE.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 01, 2011, 06:40:01 pm
"It is true," Captain Otik says. "As Captain of The Skyguard, I served by Khenal, and when she left, I myself made sure the keys were properly passed on."


OH MAH GAWD IT'S A HE!

bBubbles is saying that.

EDIT: Gotz to Goh! be back in about 10 hours, don't pull any shenanigans while i'm gone.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 06:41:20 pm
((Khenal is still a guy, heh.  Sorry about the confusion.))

"Yes, I was still Captain then."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 06:42:31 pm
(( it's going to be a shenaniocolypse))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:43:53 pm
When HE left. HE. Khenal is MALE.

((PM me, damnit! I can't keep track of all these posts...))

(( it's going to be a shenaniocolypse))

((TROLOLOLO! :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:46:21 pm
Friesden feels another smack, and this time it leaves a mark on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 06:47:39 pm
(( it's going to be a shenaniocolypse))

((Seems inevitable at this point.  I'm pretty lost at the moment, hanging back to watch the fireworks for now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:50:50 pm
((haha...shenaniocolypse...I get it, yesss, very pun-tastic.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:51:58 pm
Friesden looks around for whoever is slapping her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 06:52:46 pm
Friesden looks around for whoever is slapping her.

((Behind you. Watch OUT! It'S-))

Smack!

((See, this is what we ponies call "mental discipline."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:54:40 pm
((NO, this has gone on long enough. We keep getting derailed every time there's even the slightest bit of commentary. Keep this up, and I will simply take my business elsewhere and edit all of my posts to be blank.))

Friesden sees nothing at all that could of possibly caused it. She does notice, however, a filly tugging at her hair.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:55:27 pm
"Who are you, filly?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 06:58:19 pm
The filly simply smiles. Friesden notices that her eyes resemble Carrot's.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 06:58:28 pm
 
"Next question; this one's directed to Mrs. Charity. could you describe your relationship with Khenal? was your office, lets say, 'always open' to him in case of an emergency? could he have set a crossbow trap?"

 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 06:59:58 pm
"Hmmm. One of Carrot's kids."

Friesden turns to the out of check pony.

"I'm sorry, you did mention a motive for Khenal attempting to kill the duchess at some point, didn't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 07:02:35 pm
"Nor am I the one on trial here, Darkmane.  I have no idea how to go about building a trap, and the crossbow is not a weapon I'm familiar with anyway."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 07:02:59 pm
The filly tugs harder on Friesden, and says in a quiet voice, "It's me Friesden, Carrot. shhhhhh..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 07:06:00 pm
Friesden mouth drops. She turns to the filly. "You....you bastard!"

Tears of relief are coming down her face. "You..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 07:06:57 pm
"Shhhh...It's alright...I forgive you...I'm sorry I went mad again..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 07:08:34 pm
"You're...you're okay? You really had me scared."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 07:08:42 pm
Couth grins, answers the remark without skipping a beat

" The motive is so simple it behooves us. Love and Power. Love and Power always turns ponies against ponies. If Mayor charity had -gods forbid- died in the assassination, who would take her place? somepony who's been climbing the political ladder? somepony we all love and admire? somepony like-

*glances at Khenal*

"Khenal?"


"And IF Khenal WERE to become Mayor - it would make getting his lover, Friesden, out of the punishment she deserves, rather simple dosen't it? As Mayor Khenal could have freed her with a single penstroke! Making this whole trial moot!"

He smiles so wide the edges of his mouth touched his ears.

"But you, Of all ponies,  should have known! Should have known justice is not blind to your evils!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 07:09:43 pm
"So why did he urge against Charity's impeachment?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 07:09:44 pm
"It is true," Otik confirms. "During training, Khenal was an absolute deuce when it came to mechanics, and his aiming skill was just plain horrible."

((haha, my post was supposed to go before yours, dsarker.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 07:10:43 pm
"No, I died, and it HURT! But I decided being dead was boring, so now i'm starting over as one of my fillies."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 07:12:16 pm
"Somepony who willingly gave up the title of Captain of the Guard?  I have no desire for power, Darkmane.  If I did, I would have stayed in the capital.  And you still haven't shown how this is relevant to the case at hand."

((Also, continuing to be a male :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 07:12:40 pm
"Please. Don't scare me like that again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 07:14:56 pm
"Couth, you cannot possibly charge Khenal on the basis of an act of unselfishness!" Otik shouts, enraged.

"Master," Cornbread begans, but is cut off by Otik.

"And what about me? If I end up giving up my position, does that automatically count me as a suspect? And my trainee, Cornbread, who has only just begun her duty as a skyguard, who has access to crossbows everyday!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 07:23:25 pm
The filly smiles in a way only Carrot would.
"Shhh...i'm going to scare Khenal now..." And with that, the filly sneaks over to Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 07:25:11 pm
"Your chivalry is and act, Khenal, and I see right through it!" Couth said with intensity.

"When Charity was recovering from the hospital the only thing keeping you and your men from slitting her throat was Psycho Carrot and his squad! and look who ends up dead in self defense?"

" also, you couldn't arm a trap, but my good friend and your patsy Nicolta Tesla could. I bet he would love to be a witness and tell all sorts of nasty secrets about you, but he mysteriously fell of a cliff weeks ago."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 07:27:54 pm
The filly reaches Khenal and tugs on his mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 07:28:46 pm
"Guess it's a good thing he's in hospital and recovering, isn't it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 07:33:12 pm
And I guess It's a good thing I set fire to the hospital while everypony but Nicolta was at this trial Couth thinks.

((is it getting hot in this fort or is it just me?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 07:33:34 pm
My eyes narrow as I take in what Darkmane just said.

"So, he fell off a cliff?  Strange, I never did figure out how he ended up in the cavern.  I guess it must drain there.  How did you know he fell off a cliff, Darkmane?  If you witnessed it, it seems like something you should have said immediately after the act so we could catch the culprit."

Captain Isos stands and starts walking towards Darkmane.

"I think we need to talk after the trial.  Unless you have something relevant to this trial to say, please follow the guards."

**************

Nicolta is also a guy.  I find all the gender confusion hilarious, by the way :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 07:36:17 pm
The filly jumps up from behind Khenal and yells, "HI KHENAL! IT'S ME, CARROT!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 07:46:42 pm
Falcata approaches Darkmane from the side, prepared to escort him away at the captain's order.

((Where to?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 07:51:42 pm
My composure while dealing with Darkmane dissipates in an instant as I fall over backwards with a shout.

Captain Isos jumps and turns to see who would pull such a poorly thought out prank.



*****************

A holding cell, most likely.  Though, this would be the time for Darkmane to make his escape if he's going to.  I'd imagine all eyes are on the little filly at the moment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 07:56:53 pm
"Hehehe! Ooops! Khenal, get up! I'M CARROT!" Giggles the filly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 07:58:52 pm
Nicolta is also a guy.  I find all the gender confusion hilarious, by the way :D

((Same here.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 07:59:43 pm
"GET AWAY FROM ME!" Couth strikes out with a leg

"YOU SEE PONIES? YOU SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU GET TOO CLOSE TO THE TRUTH IN THIS FORTRESS?" Couth shouts, trying to appeal to the public.

"I saw you push Nicolta off that cliff, I saw you push Carrot off that courtyard tower, and said nothing, because you held all the cards. well not here! here the ponies decide! not you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 08:02:22 pm
"If he pushed Nicolta off a cliff, why did he save him? If he pushed Carrot off, why didn't he simply leave the body there? If he simply pushed Carrot off, why didn't Carrot fly away? He was a pegasus, you know."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 08:02:57 pm
The filly begins to cry, pointing at Couth accusingly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 08:03:34 pm
Charity is distracted from Couth staring at this filly that would be so bold as to... 'what did he just say?!'

"Couth you say you SAW Khenal kill Carrot and try to kill Nicolta? Is this true? Can you swear to me that what you say is true?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 01, 2011, 08:04:17 pm
((and with that can someone haul me off to jail? I need to go. have fun with the fires I started, metaphorical and literal.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 08:05:44 pm
((DVNO, I look forward to working with you. Pulls out a gun blows my brains out.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 08:06:53 pm
I continue to simply lay on my back for a few moments, trying to figure out what is going on.  Couth's shouting, however, snaps me back to reality.

"How dare you accuse me of killing my friend!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 08:07:33 pm
Falcata grunts as Darkmane strikes her barding.  She tackles him and pins him to the ground.  "Stay down!"  She looks up to the duchess and captain. "Orders?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 08:08:59 pm
"Yes," says the Filly, suddenly speaking with the voice of Carrot "You are to lock up the convict and gag him so that he doesn't spread anymore lies."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 08:09:22 pm
Charity sighs. "Throw him in a cell for now. I'll want to talk to him personally later."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 08:15:26 pm
((This trial has gone insane. I love it! I love all of you! (no homo.)))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 08:15:45 pm
"Yes, duchess." She allows Darkmane to stand and gives him a firm nudge toward the door.  Best hurry, she thought.  She wouldn't want to miss the rest of the trial.

((Erm, so I guess the hospital is really on fire then?  Would that be visible on the way?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 08:18:16 pm
"everyPONY...QUIET!!" Screams the filly in her normal voice again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 08:18:28 pm
Telgin. You have a very important job right now. On the way to the prison, you HAVE to pass by the hospital, it is impossible not to. If it's really on fire their is no way you wouldn't notice, save for mind magic buckery.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 08:19:11 pm
"Duchess!" Cornbread begs. "There's really no need for all of this arrest! Please, I beseech you! Couth is innocent!"

((I'm gonna make Cornbread rush after Couth. Anyone stopping me?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 08:19:25 pm
Starkey quietly approaches Friesden. He taps gently on her shoulder.

"I'm... ready, if you are. Are you sure you want me to do this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 08:22:57 pm
"The truth will set us all free, Starkey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 08:24:09 pm
"LISTEN TO ME! Aw, forget it..." A green mist comes out of the filly and proceeds to waft towards Khenal.
((Dsarker, you're a genius.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 08:24:40 pm
"Duchess!" Cornbread pleads, but Charity ignores her. "Fine! If you aren't going to listen to me, I quit this court!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 08:24:46 pm
((I'm gonna make Cornbread rush after Couth. Anyone stopping me?))

((Falcata certainly wouldn't let Cornbread come between her and stuffing Darkmane in a cell.  Duchess' orders and all.  Not that you can't try, of course))

Falcata leads Darkmane from the makeshift courtroom into the hallway beyond.  A curious tingling odor brushes her nostrils.  Did somepony burn some bread?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: compoundoverkillcornbread on December 01, 2011, 08:26:12 pm
Cornbread storms off down the corridor. Once she is out of sight, she slips down the hallway, following Falcata silently.

Her nostrils start to tingle. She sniffs the air. Something must be burning.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 08:26:30 pm
"LISTEN TO ME! Ah forgot it..." A green mist comes out of the filly and proceeds to waft towards Khenal.
((Dsarker, you're a genius.))

Well, of course! But what in particular was my stroke of genius this time?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 08:26:55 pm
I eye Carrot as he approaches me.

"I hope you've learned to respect my memories, Carrot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 08:27:33 pm
As the crowd sees the green mist pour forth from the filly, many of them panic. Several run for the door, other stand dumbstruck.

Charity jumps atop her marble table, her horn glowing bright. "Khenal! That filly is possessed! Quick you must help me bind the deamon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 08:29:52 pm
'Nah, I'm just taking over your body for a bit.'

"Wow it's roomy...Uh...I'm Psycho Carrot...sorta."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 08:33:49 pm
Charity still not realizing that that the "deamon" is actually the ghost of Psycho Carrot yells, "You will not take Khenal!" ghostly chains, much like the ones Khenal can summon appear from Charity's horn. Though hers are smaller, thinner, and appear rusted. They latch onto Psycho's ghostly form and try to pull him from Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 08:34:23 pm
'Oh, this is going to freak ponies out something fierce, especially since I think I need to reassure Charity.  Give me back my mouth for a sec.'

"It is Carrot, Duchess.  Deceased ponies do not always stay away, you remember the ghost of Lolum?  Carrot is just a bit more...proactive in letting ponies know that something is troubling him.  I think he has something he needs to say."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 08:37:42 pm
"Regardless of whether it's true or not, it is not what we are here to do at this time. Starkey, let's go back to the day of the almost coup, if you please. When you heard of the deaths of the ponies, you went to confront Khenal, to ak if he'd ordered it, correct?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 08:38:22 pm
The chains rust to nothing as soon as they hit Khenal.
"Indeed. I'm back everypony, FROM THE DEAD! I can tell you EXACTLY, in DETAIL, what happened at the scene of my death."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 08:38:37 pm
'Is that really Khenal's voice or is it just using him.'

The ghostly chains fly forth and wrap around Khenal and the "deamon" binding the spirit in place.

"On the chance that this isn't a trick. I will hear you out, but you are not leaving here until I'm sure of what you are spirit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 08:42:29 pm
((Semi afk for 15 mins, will get to that fire soon, have fun in the court while you can))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Toady One on December 01, 2011, 08:45:22 pm
(compoundoverkillcornbread aka thechosenone456 aka Hazael has been banned.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 08:49:58 pm
((What...WHAT?! HAEZEL! I KNEW IT!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 08:50:57 pm
((Gone and forgotten. Back to RP.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 08:54:20 pm
Starkey is unable to answer Friesden's question. He is presently administering the mother of all bear hugs to Khenal/Carrot.

"Lieu-tenant Psycho CARROOOOOT! I've had just about enough of you and your ridiculous dying business!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 08:55:52 pm
"Nice to see you TOO! Crushing me and Khenal...ow..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 08:57:06 pm
"Starkey, the question is not whether he is dead or not. The question is whether I murdered him or not. Please answer my questions."

She does look a bit put out that she is still chained down and thus unable to join the 'welcome back' hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 09:02:47 pm
'MY RIBS!'

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 09:03:56 pm
Apprehension grows inside Falcata as she heads down the hallway.  Darkmane was being cooperative at least, but the odor in the air was getting stronger.  She is almost convinced she can see smoke wafting from the hospital.

"Oh, buck!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 09:07:15 pm
(Going afk, for likely a few hours, Dsarker, I award you temporary control of the Duchess. I trust you not to abuse your power. I'll return shortly.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 09:08:11 pm
(("I find the defendant not guilty! All charges are dismissed!" Is that the sort of abuse you don't want me to do?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 09:09:06 pm
((WE'RE ALL GOING TO DIE!!!!!!!!))
"Let...go...please...OW! there goes the ribs..."

'Yeah...your ribs are going to need to be looked at again...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 09:10:12 pm
(("I find the defendant not guilty! All charges are dismissed!" Is that the sort of abuse you don't want me to do?))

(Yeah, and try to keep her within the established character I've tried to give her. You'll be fine, I trust you.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 09:11:10 pm
"What? Oh!"

Starkey releases Khenal/Carrot.

"Ah, that's not exactly true, ma'am. I went to ask him if there was anypony in the guard he thought might go over his head to carry out an order."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 09:12:25 pm
((Have you seen what I did to Friesden? She went from a plain sociopath to a innocent foal to a berserker to a Xanatos'r. Staying well within established character there.))

"Wait, so you didn't suspect Khenal? Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 09:15:30 pm
((This is for you, Dsarker))
"HOLD IT! I can tell you that Friesden did INDEED kill me. BUT, it was self defense." He pauses for dramatic effect.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 09:15:55 pm
"It didn't fit with what I'd seen of his character before. He went about his duties as a soldier admirably, but he still found killing distasteful, especially other ponies. I just didn't think he had it in him. No offense, lad."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 09:18:46 pm
"So you trusted your instincts, as it were?" asks Friesden, steadily ignoring Carrot's voice.

"Carrot...captain, we're here to determine if she is safe. Whether she murdered you or not is not the resl question." replies the Duchess.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 09:21:38 pm
((you spelled real like resl.))
"Oh...NO. Don't you DARE ignore me, Friesden. Kindly explain to everypony what REALLY happened, or I shall." says Khenal/Carrot sternly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 09:23:56 pm
'Yeah...your ribs are going to need to be looked at again...'

((Hope Dr. Bubbles can work in a !!hospital!! or do it in the courtroom, heh.  Did I read that Nicolta Tesla was currently in the !!hospital!!?)

Falcata gallops down to the entrance to the hospital, heart pounding.  She rounds the corner and sees flames engulfing several piles of sheets placed strategically throughout the room.  The smoke is beginning to get quite thick now.  She takes a deep breath and steps inside, checking for any patients still in their beds.

((Whoops, left Darkmane in the hallway.  What to do with him?  Think he'd just be nice and stay still while she's busy being a hero?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 09:25:13 pm
"Carrot, please settle down and wait your turn.  Commander Starkey is trying to testify."

'Please Carrot, just be patient.'

**************

Also, couldn't resist a new sig.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 09:26:20 pm
Friesden turns her head to Carrot as best she can.

"I killed you. That is what happened. We are trying to establish that I am still safe. Your interruptions are not helping, as much as you may think they are. Please wait until I am ready to direct questions to you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 09:28:57 pm
'Khenal? Why didn't she react when I went into you? Keeper, I'm back!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 09:29:48 pm
"Oh, joy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 09:35:01 pm
'Friesden?  She knew it was you.  She was there when you asked to stay in my head, after all.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 09:39:31 pm
((Mind if I cause Friesden's chains to snap in the confusion?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 09:42:43 pm
Also, couldn't resist a new sig.

((Yay!))

The smoke was stinging her eyes and beginning to make it difficult to breathe, but through the thickening fumes Falcata made out a single pony lying uncoscious in bed.  She scrabbled forward, and using all of the magical might she could muster hefted him onto her back.  She steadied the unicorn on her back as best she could between violent smoke-choked coughs and staggered back into the hallway.

((I presume nopony else was in the hospital?  And still not sure what to do with Darkmane... seems like a good opportunity to do something underhanded.  Like run away at the very least))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 09:44:20 pm
((They are Charity's, and that wouldn't do much for the "I'm not possessed" angle.  Also, I'd expect only Nicolta to be in the hospital.  All of the staff is likely at the trial.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 09:51:13 pm
((I can only agree with Khenal, but do it anyway for the fun of it.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 09:52:03 pm
((oh, wait, I think Khenal got it a bit wrong. He means the chains binding Carrot, but The Master means the chains on Friesden.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 09:54:31 pm
The chains on Friesden snap silently, and she sees Carrot/Khenal smiling at her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 09:55:34 pm
'Carrot, did you just use my magic?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 09:56:52 pm
'Possibly...' Says Carrot, sheepishly. The chains on Friesden turn to dust as well.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 09:57:19 pm
"Buckit you idiot!" Friesden says as she runs to tackle Khenal/Carrot in a hug. "I thought you were dead!"

"Guards, restrain the prisoner, if you would." orders Charity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 10:00:08 pm
"Oh, I am! But what's the fun in staying that way?" Says Carrot/Khenal with a big smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 10:04:34 pm
My horn flashes as a few chains of my own join Charity's in restraining Carrot.

'You are lucky you didn't hurt anypony.  You don't know how to do magic, so leave it alone!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 10:06:21 pm
Free of the blinding and suffocating fumes, Falcata hefts Tesla as far as she can.  She takes a final step away from the hospital and lowers him to the ground with what grace she can muster.

She leans against the wall and takes a number of deep breaths to clear her lungs.  She had no clue if Tesla was alright, but there was no time to waste, she had to tell everypony!  There was no sign of Darkmane, but with the smoke surrounding them he could be right next to her and she'd never see him.  She coughed again and trotted back toward the courtroom as fast as she could maintain.


((I'll leave it that way.  Now he can be a good pony and stay put, or do whatever he wants.  This could conceivably take as long as you guys want, so I'll defer Falcata bursting in and ruining the fun until you're ready))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 10:06:53 pm
The guardponies drag Friesden back and chain her down once more.

"This will be over soon, one way or t'other." Friesden says.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 10:09:20 pm
'Not this time, Khenal. I'm staying here until the trial is over, and that's final. Any objection, Keeper?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 10:10:21 pm
"Oh, go ahead then. I have a bad feeling about this anyway."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 10:12:46 pm
((And now, I have to go for an hour or so. Dsarker, you have control of me as well. I EXPECT INSANITY, DON'T LET ME DOWN!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 10:12:58 pm
"Yes, well now that that's over with..."

"Yes, Miss Friesden, I suppose you could say I trusted my gut."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 10:14:21 pm
"And it served you well, didn't it? For it wasn't from Khenal that the orders came, but from some of his...." Friesden looks at Isos, "subordinates, wasn't it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 10:15:29 pm
'I'm not kicking you out, Carrot.  I just don't want you to use my magic again.  I was serious when I said you were lucky you didn't hurt anypony.  I am glad you're back, sorry I'm being a bit grumpy.  I'm just a bit stressed with my love being on trial for two murders and all.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 10:19:01 pm
"The actual order came from Countess Charity, but some of Khenal's subordinates interpreted it rather... liberally, shall we say?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 10:21:38 pm
"Indeed. Let's move on. So your gut is rather trustworthy, would you not say? Tell me, what does your gut say about Khenal now? About me? Am I safe? Is Khenal trustworthy enough?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 10:26:45 pm
*Sigh*

"My gut tells me that Khenal would not lie if somepony's life were at stake, and that you would never willfully harm somepony without due cause."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 10:28:00 pm
"Thank you, captain. Your witness, miss Isos."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 01, 2011, 10:32:43 pm
((Aaaand... off to bed.  I've been awake for 37 hours straight so that's it for me tonight.  Whenever you're ready for Falcata to break the news, anyone just take over for her))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 10:42:48 pm
Captain Isos thinks for a moment before standing to address Starkey.

"Commander Starkey, has your gut ever been wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 10:48:43 pm
Starkey is silent for a long moment, pondering whether to answer.

"...once, ma'am."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 10:53:32 pm
"And were the consequences severe for your error?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 10:55:04 pm
"...they had the potential to be. I realized my error before harm could be done, thankfully."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 11:02:41 pm
"I appreciate your diligence, Commander, but you cannot be everywhere at once.  Shoud your gut proove to be wrong, this mistake could have dire consequences indeed.  No further questions.  Thank you for your time, Commander Starkey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 11:04:28 pm
"Let us go back to that time when your gut failed you. How long ago was this, captain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 11:12:15 pm
"Several months ago, ma'am. It was... the same incident."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 11:13:52 pm
"Please explain to the people how exactly your instinct failed you, if you would."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 11:15:32 pm
(back.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 11:16:36 pm
(also, back)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 11:17:49 pm
"My instinct told me... that then-Countess Charity... had ordered Corporal Bokbon and Mr. Nanges' deaths intentionally."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 11:18:33 pm
"So your gut told you it was worse than it actually was, correct?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 01, 2011, 11:23:11 pm
"Aye, ma'am, though that fact does little to soothe my conscience."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 11:26:43 pm
"Fortunately, while it may not, it removes any reasonable objection to relying on your gut. Duchess, I would like to call my third witness. Starkey, if you would remain there, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 11:29:28 pm
(Sorry to interrupt but I thought I would provide an update for the making Friesden and Khenal be together in the actual game plan. I've had them isolated together for a time now, and they have progressed to friend status. Progress is being made! Should Friesden survive this trial. I think I hear wedding bells in their future! But first, we must conclude the business at hoof.)

Charity looks out at the now significantly emptier hall. Those ponies who did not run when the green ghost appeared are still here and have calmed down, but a number of civilians have already left.

"Of course Friesden. If they are still here, feel free to call your next witness."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 11:30:08 pm
Captain Isos looks sour but doesn't appear to have any more questions for Starkey.  She looks confusedly at Friesden when she calls her "third" witness.

**************
Nice out-maneuver there.  Isos would have to attack Starkey's character now, and she knows that simply won't work.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 11:31:29 pm
"Thank you. Starkey, the night before the incident, I came across you in an argument with somepony who didn't appear to be there physically. Though the name yet remains pruned from my memory, I have guessed who it was. If I am correct, would you be able to conjure him up for testimony?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 11:43:31 pm
((Doom went offline.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 11:43:56 pm
Impending is offline. Mind if we just agree that Starkey accepted and brought up Schmoe?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 01, 2011, 11:45:33 pm
((No problem.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 01, 2011, 11:48:28 pm
((Sounds like a plan to me))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 01, 2011, 11:49:28 pm
(Sounds acceptable to me.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 01, 2011, 11:56:03 pm
Starkey rises up on his hindhooves, and fire swirls around his forehooves

WHY DO YOU BRING ME FORTH, MOR- Friesden. I should have known. Why am I here? Do you wish to boast? To mock me?

The words are not so much spoken, as written into the brains of all those listening, bypassing the ears entirely.

"No, daemon. I have called you because I am under sentence of death."

Very well. I will destroy the crowd and free you now, the-

"No, you merely have to answer questions truthfully."

Hmmm... Keeper, update me!

A green swirl of smoke swirls from Khenal's mouth, before touching Starkey's mouth and disappearing.

A trial. Novel concept. Very well, you may ask your questions.

"Good. Tell me, what was Èfim?"

I believe the common term you ponies use is 'filly-fiddler', for some hellforsaken reason.

"What species?"

Alicorn.

"How can you tell?"

Alicorns have an incredibly unique magical aura, especially for those who have been bound by them.

"So you could recognise the difference between two alicorns?"

As easily as you could between black and white.

"Did you recognise Èfim's aura? Who he was?"

Yes, of course. He was y-

"Simple yes would do perfectly there."

You ponies are all the same. I don't love all of them, of course, but you all think the same things. 'No, we don't need context'. How do you think I could trick so many ponies before now? Lying is a fool's game. The truth can trick people oh so much more easily. And it is far more enjoyable. But you. You just tell lies to get people to believe you, you ponies. Checking whether it was self defence in Carrot's death but not in that of the 'diomedians'? How do you know they weren't simply a delegation from the Rainbows? Otik doesn't like the diomedians. How can you trust her word in that? Khenal loves Friesden. How can you trust his word in this? Oh, that's right. Because Diomedians are the 'enemy'. Why? Because they always have been. Is that how you sleep at night, captain? Calling those militiaponies you helped beat to death 'the enemy'? And now, now you've decided that Friesden is the enemy. The truth is no matter to you. Only that she dies. And you ponies call yourself a gentle race. A kind race.

"Simply answer the questions, daemon. Your editorials are not required. Were you possessing me on the day of Èfim's death?"

Yes. Of course I blessed well was. I've been possessing you since before you were born.

"Really? Why?"

I was bound to you by that blessed alicorn.

"Sorry, which alicorn?"

Èfim. Of course, he didn't go by Èfim those days. He used Farquaad.

"So, this would have made you angry?"

Incredib- Ah, I see what you're trying here. Sorry, I did not kill Èfim. Neither did you, but that's by the by. No, it was the Doctor who did that. You still hid in your mind at that time. Now can I give these ponies a context?

"Very well."

Farquaad and Èfim were the same pony. He bound me into you before your birth. He was your father. He raped you repeatedly. Average of twice a week, if not more. He beat you, abused you. All only because you were unable to react because of my possession of you. And then I broke free. I tried to kill him, but he bound me into your mother, which put you back into control. Prior to that, you'd hid in your imagination, conjuring up fantasies. You -broke-. All according to my plan. With the scalpel you had to hand, you charged at your father, intending to kill him. You were utterly insane, beyond all measure. I moved your mother into the way and received partial freedom for a time when she died. You chased your father up to his upper room. He locked the doors and called the guards. When they came, they restrained you and freed your father. After that, they punished him for his crimes and sent you to an asylum. We escaped, and only Khenal and that blasted daemon who had possessed Carrot survived besides us. We lived on the streets. We came here. You lost control at your father's presence, and your other mind, the Doctor, decided to harvest his wings against your will. Of course, she had to kill him first, so she did. You were caught, landed in gaol, escaped to deal with Carrot's daemon, and that is all I know. Any further questions?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 12:01:07 am
A green mist shoots out of Khenal and into Starkey.
'YOU!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 12:03:19 am
Another insect seeks to thwart my plans. Run back to your hideyhole, insect. As long as Friesden wishes you unharmed you will be unharmed. But if you knew how desperately I wished to kill all of you, you would flee in terror.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 12:08:23 am
'You're nothing. If you really were all powerful, then explain how you can't even break the a seal some novice put on you?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 12:09:40 am
The chains go taut as I attempt to reel Carrot back in.

"Woah there, Carrot!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 12:11:44 am
Because unlike you, I have patience. Whether now, in fifty years, a century, a millenium, my plans will come to fruition. So I can wait.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 12:20:42 am
'GRAAAAAAAHHHH-' Carrot yells as he is dragged back into Khenal.
'Aw come on! I could've taken him!' He whines.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 12:25:48 am
Do you have any further questions, or can I return to my slumber?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 12:36:08 am
'No, I don't think you could.  He is at least as strong as Cockroach was, and he's far more devious.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 12:42:43 am
'Khenal...Why not just...I got it! How about you lock Schmoe away inside something adamantine!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 12:46:11 am
((Assuming Isos isn't asking anything))

Very well then. I go to my sleep. Wake me not again unless you come to end this existence.

Starkey returns to his typical pose, and the flames disappear. A little dazed, he slowly makes his way back into the crowd.

"Now, of course, my fourth witness. Carrot, if you would."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 12:47:40 am
lock Schmoe away inside something adamantine!'
(There is a very nice Adamantine dagger in the room.)

Edit: Question Dsarker. When Schmoe is talking through Starkey, is it obvious he's being possessed? Speaking without moving his mouth, demonic glow, impossible voice, etc. or does he appear to just be a pony sitting there talking?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 12:50:02 am
'Honestly?  I'm not certain I could.  He's devious and would likely notice the adamantine and flee or destroy me first.  Even if he didn't, I don't know that I have the strength to actually force him into an adamantine item.  Cockroach was severely weakened by the time I sealed him.  Schmoe appears to be at his full power.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 12:52:30 am
((Firstly, he's speaking without actual sound, merely writing his words into the brains of everypony listening, secondly he's standing on his hind legs, and thirdly his forehooves are wreathed in flame.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 12:53:04 am
"Yes, me. What is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 12:53:34 am
"Would you mind coming to the stand?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 12:56:13 am
I get up and walk to the stand.

**************

I like to think that Isos is just staring, dumbfounded, at Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 12:56:55 am
((Firstly, he's speaking without actual sound, merely writing his words into the brains of everypony listening, secondly he's standing on his hind legs, and thirdly his forehooves are wreathed in flame.))

(Oh I see, yes that will do. *Mentally takes the idea of Charity deciding that Starkey could possibly be lying to protect Friesden and crumples it up and tosses it in the trash.*)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 12:57:42 am
"Ready."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 01:03:00 am
"Firstly, can you prove that you are Carrot, and not merely Khenal pretending?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 01:04:53 am
'Preferably without injuring me'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 01:08:23 am
"Easy." A green mist shoots out of Khenal and into Friesden, who then procedes to dance around for a few seconds, then the mist goes back into Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 01:09:45 am
"And? While I'm sure that's enough for my learned associate, I must point out that it could well have been a signal by Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 01:10:26 am
"That proves nothing. Khenal is a full grown and powerful alicorn, and cloud of green mist would be a simple illusion for even a unicorn foal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 01:11:15 am
I facehoof.

'She meant for you to say something only you'd know.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 01:11:51 am
"You asked for it." the mist comes out and goes into Charity. She writes 'I am Psycho Carrot." on paper, then crumples it and throws it at Friesden. The mist quickly goes back into Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 01:13:38 am
'Stop that!  Making her mad does not help Friesden!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 01:14:35 am
'It's fun...Oh right! You never learned what fun means!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 01:14:44 am
"We have some proof you are no mere illusion. However, if Khenal wanted to, he would be able to control others with his mind. Prove you are not him doing so."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 01:15:31 am
"wha. What just? You? You just possessed me. All that proves is that either, you are a some sort of spirit, or that Khenal has decided to use his mind magic to save his love. Neither of which proves that you are the deceased."

(Edit: I don't actually know what Carrot could do to prove this. Maybe he could tell something about Kil that only he would know that she could confirm?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 01:18:06 am
'I CAN'T TAKE THIS ANYMORE! COVER YOUR...oh right. OH WELL!'
Khenal's eyes change to Carrot's color, and booms in Carrot's voice, "I AM MOTHERBUCKING PSYCHO CARROT, AND I SAY THAT FRIESDEN IS NOT A MURDERER!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 01:28:38 am
"And you can prove that isn't another mere illusion...how?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 01:31:31 am
"OH, THAT DOES IT!" The mist goes into one of the guards, and then he screams "I'LL KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF YOU IF YOU DON'T BELIEVE ME! I AM LIEUTENANT PSYCHO CARROT OF THE GLITTERGLEN SKYGUARD, AND I DEMAND THAT YOU KNOW ME!!!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 01:32:37 am
"And you can prove you are not a daemon...how, exactly?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 01:33:27 am
"I'll admit, if this really is Khenal's trickery he really knows how to sound like the Psycho we all knew and tolerated." sighs Charity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 01:34:08 am
"I'll admit, if this really is Khenal's trickery he really knows how to sound like the Psycho we all knew and tolerated." sighs Charity.

I see what you did there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 01:35:30 am
"RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" The guard breaks down into sobs, "Why...won't...anypony believe...me...I give up...Good bye Khenal..." The mist leaves him, and instead of going to back to Khenal, instead vanishes into thin air.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 01:37:23 am
"...Carrot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 01:43:55 am
Silence. A tear forms in Khenal's eye.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Starnight on December 02, 2011, 01:47:24 am
Should I wait until after the trial to join? This seems like an awkward moment to join in...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 01:48:08 am
I hang my head and return to my seat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 01:49:01 am
"It seems we have no further witnesses, duchess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 01:58:30 am
((Don't worry, Carrot isn't gone for good...)))
The courtroom shakes rapidly for a moment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 02:01:31 am
My head snaps up at the rumbling

'I am going to bucking ki... right, he's already dead'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 02:04:02 am
A pillar falls and JUST misses Charity by a hair.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 02:05:34 am
"Carrot!  Stop that!  This isn't funny!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 02:06:53 am
(Pokon I had an available unicorn gemsetter, so they are now yours.)
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
(Starnight. I notice you only registered today? Did you find us from FIMfiction.net?)

"Then Friesden, are you ready too..." Charity's sentence is cut short as the rumbling begins. Then the pillar falls, Charity jumps and runs to the corner farthest from said pillar.


(I would like to point out that the area above the room we are in is the "pipeline" for the forts water supply and Ironya's bedroom. So Psycho is either going to drown us all or Ironya's gonna kill him again. Depending on the source of the material for that pillar.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 02:06:53 am
The shaking ceases, and the mist reappears and goes into Khenal.
"NOW DO YOU BUCKING BELIEVE ME?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 02:10:00 am
"I didn't doubt you for a second, Carrot. But I wanted to make sure Isos was also without doubt."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 02:11:19 am
'Keeper, kindly tie and gag him like he did to you, please.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 02:11:54 am
"Oh, with pleasure!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 02:12:42 am
"I believe you are a powerful, angry, and dangerous spirit. And I don't believe that Khenal would try to bring down the fort just to prove a point. Your identity as Psycho Carrot is still in question but I will hear you out, if you. JUST. STOP. DESTROYING. MY. HOME." Shouts the Duchess.

(Perhaps now would be a good time for Falcata to show up and yell, "Fire!"?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 02:15:19 am
'Hold on now! I have a better idea!' Carrot dodges the pair, and smashes a large mirror in the middle of the mindscape. He then leaves Khenal before knowing what he's done. The mist goes back into the filly, who bolts out of the courtroom.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 02:18:34 am
'Carrot, I swear!  I will bind you into something adamantine if you don't calm down and stop destroying my mind!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 02:19:15 am
After a few seconds of silence, and the lack of anything new happening, Friesden turns to the Duchess. "You were saying?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 02:23:05 am
((I'm going to sleep...It's only 2:22 am, but I've stayed up far too many nights...and my poor heart will burst if I keep staying up so late...Good night everypony...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 02:26:29 am
Charity starts to pull herself back together after her near death experience. "Oh, yes, well." She moves back to her seat, taps the pillar with a hoof a few times to make sure it isn't going to fall over on her, and then says, "The spirit claiming to be Psycho Carrot, I shall allow you to testify, please come forward and answer the defence's quest..." Charity get's interrupted again, this time by the door flying open.

Falcata stands there panting. "!!Fire!! The Hospital is on Fire! I pulled Nicolta free but we need to put the fire out now!" Then without waiting to see anyponies response she grabs a bucket and fills it in the public shower in the dinning hall and rushes off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Starnight on December 02, 2011, 02:30:30 am
(Starnight. I notice you only registered today? Did you find us from FIMfiction.net?)
No, I can't remember where I found this thread, because, for some reason, I never remember where I find stuff. Except MLP. I know I found this before it reached 100 pages. I only just worked up the courage to register, and I just now remembered how awkward I am at talking to people, and thats only made worse by the fact its 11:31 PM.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 02:31:47 am
Don't worry about it. Come on in!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 02:32:36 am
((ZZZZZZ...Nice one strongbeard, I'M NOT AWAKE! SHHH...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 02:35:34 am
Speaking of FiMFiction, I really should work on the next piece of the transcription.  Welcome to Glitterglen, Starnight!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 02:38:33 am
(Starnight. I notice you only registered today? Did you find us from FIMfiction.net?)
No, I can't remember where I found this thread, because, for some reason, I never remember where I find stuff. Except MLP. I know I found this before it reached 100 pages. I only just worked up the courage to register, and I just now remembered how awkward I am at talking to people, and thats only made worse by the fact its 11:31 PM.

Fair enough. I only asked because it was a little suspicious that a newly registered individual was wanting to join only a few hours after we had a troll banned. But I'm willing to let you join in anyway. I just have to trust that it's a coincidence.

So, do you have a preference for what kind of pony you would like to claim. I mean it would be really awkward to introduce your character in the middle of Friesden's trial but we could go ahead and pick out a pony for you, if you would like.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 03:23:45 am
Hmmm, it might be easier on us (probably not on you, though :P) if the OP was updated with a list of unclaimed ponies, possibly with a break down in gender, type, and profession, if that would be doable.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 03:29:16 am
Hmmm, it might be easier on us (probably not on you, though :P if the OP was updated with a list of unclaimed ponies, possibly with a break down in gender, type, and profession, if that would be doable.

That is an entirely reasonable thing to want to have, however, I've been putting off doing it because well. 109 ponies to list is a lot and since Dwarf Therapist doesn't show castes or genders properly I have to check every single one in game. But I guess I'll get started on that now. Yay. Will post again when finished.

(Also, why is everypony so quiet? No pony wants to jump up and fight the fire? No heroes is Glitterglen?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 03:31:41 am
I'm kind of tied up...haha... At the moment.

I'm thinking I might take a break from Friesden for a bit after the trial, or permanently, I guess, if it goes the wrong way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 03:38:50 am
I'm kind of tied up...haha... At the moment.

(What you did. It's their, and I see it.)

(Still nopony. Fine I will the hero!)

"A fire! Buck it. We'll finish this business later." Charity jumps to her hooves and runs over to the showers. She fills as many buckets with water as her magic can carry and lifts one more with her mouth, her hair is made wet by the water as she fills the last one. She looks over at Khenal and says, through a mouth full of bucket, "cmn Khal we nee yo hep. Gib a buket"* and she starts making her way to the door.

*Come on Khenal, we need your help. Grab a bucket.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 03:43:50 am
I cannot be an hero.

Not even a hero, either.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 03:48:18 am
'...Did somepony say fire?  Keeper, stay after Carrot!  I'm going to see what's going on with this apparent fire.'

I blink a few times as I exit my mindscape, trying to focus on reality once more.  The trial is the last thing on everypony's mind right now, as everypony tries to deal with the fire.  I decide to forgo a bucket, and instead gather about a barrel's worth of water with my magic and follow Charity.


**********

Khenal was a bit distracted by Carrot potentially driving him insane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 03:53:59 am
And so the ponies are able to fight the fire most successfully. Fortunatly, the hospital is mostly stone, and while the beds and blankets and tables and cabinets and chests and traction benches are all destroyed. (I'll be throwing them in the magma sea when I play after we finish the trial and replacing them. Lots of work for the carpenters yay.) And ponies will be cleaning ash off the walls and floors for years, nopony was seriously hurt and fire did not spread. Nicolta has a few burns and inhaled some smoke but is expected to make a full recovery. Meanwhile, Friesden has been left more or less ignored, and alone , chained the statue of Justice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 03:56:22 am
"Hum ho. I regret nought of what's happened. Led me here, and to my finally becoming a person instead of a beast. Whatever happens now, I've had that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 04:00:59 am
With the fire out, I return to the hall and Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 04:03:43 am
"I met Khenal. If that's the only good thing I've done in my life, then it's a good life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 04:16:37 am
"Please don't talk like it's over, my love."

I walk over and nuzzle Friesden, trying to cheer her up some.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 04:20:37 am
"Ha. My love, it's all over bar the shouting. Whatever happens now, it's out of our hooves."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 04:31:30 am
I simply embrace Friesden, praying it's not for the last time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 04:44:18 am
"There is a song you may know, Khenal, though I hope the writer forgives my changes.

Through the Failed Jungles over fen and field where the long grass grows 
The West Wind comes walking, and about the walls it goes 
"What news from the West, O wandering wind, do you bring me tonight? 
Have you seen Friesden the Fair by moon or by starlight?" 

"I saw her ride over seven streams; over waters wide and grey; 
I saw her walk in empty lands, until she passed away 
Into the shadows of the North. I saw her then no more. 
The North Wind may have heard the song of the scion of Farquaad yore." 
"O Friesden! From the high walls westward I looked afar, 
But you came not from the empty lands where no ponies are."

Mayhaps when this is over, you will know."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on December 02, 2011, 04:52:21 am
{{OOC: Apologies, I was playing DF and lost track of time}}

ThunderSplinter helps in the bucket brigade, cursing as each bed burns to ash, she hopes none of her master work beds were there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 05:13:31 am
*Bubbles has remained in the court hall, unwilling to survey the damage the fire has done to all his medical supplies. He goes seemingly unnoticed by either Friesden or Khenal.*
"Uhm...hello you two."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 05:17:11 am
(Gods that was annoying. I have created an up to date pony list. It is in the OP. I will try to keep it up to date so I don't have to repeat this exercise. It isn't exactly organized, at all, but it's a start, and they're all there, save for the foals.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 05:20:35 am
Thank you for doing so. I'll do the organisation, so I lighten at least some of the load.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 05:38:32 am
Awesome Strongbeard :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 05:40:31 am
One pony is listed as both Royal and Pegasan.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on December 02, 2011, 05:42:28 am
{{
One pony is listed as both Royal and Pegasan.

A tranny, or just undecided?

Darkening Kaos, CIS, LUH.}}
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 05:45:37 am
And khenal, about your new signature....

Oh yes, Bubbles can work in a ‼hospital‼
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 05:53:00 am
One pony is listed as both Royal and Pegasan.

Sorry about that. I fixed it. He is indeed a Royal.

Edit: Also, thank you for volunteering to help organize the list.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 06:06:11 am
I'll post up organised versions soon. I've seperated them between genders, species, and whether military or not. Legendaries are at the top of their respective lists, when possible.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 06:35:49 am
Non Claimed

1. Male Earthpony Legendary Armorer, Married to Isos, see semi-claimed ponies.
2. Male earthpony legendary butcher
3. Male earthpony furnace operator
4. Male Earthpony woodcutter
5. Male earthpony butcher
6. Male earthpony farmer
7. Male earthpony tanner
8. Male earthpony miller

9. Male earthpony elite markspony

10. Female Earthpony Legendary Armorer/woodburner
11. Female Earthpony legendary stonecarver
12. Female earthpony legendary cook
13. Female earthpony dyer
14. Female earthpony mechanic
15. Female earthpony metal crafter
16. Female earthpony thresher
17. Female earthpony planter

18. Female earthpony axepony has the title “The Pleated Pillar of Silkiness”
19. istig female earthpony hammerer (killed a few valuable members of Glitterglen during the smuggling incident.)

20. Male pegasus Legendary chef
21. Odur Male pegasus blacksmith
22. Male pegasan dyer
23. Male pegasan lye maker
24. Male pegasus woodburner
25. Male pegasus fisherpony
26. Male pegasus fisherpony

27. Male pegasan spearpony
28. Male pegasan axepony
29. Male pegasan macepony

30. Female pegasus legendary woodcarver
31. Female pegasus farmer, wife of Osal (see semi-Claimed ponies.)
32. Female pegasus hauler, could mood into jewler
33. Female pegasus fish dissector
34. Female pegasus siege operator

35. female pegasan markspony
36. Female pegasan markspony

37. Male unicorn hauler, could mood into weaponsmith.
38. Male unicorn siege operator
39. Male unicorn presser

40. Male Unicorn Hammerpony/legendary weaver
41. Ramol Male unicorn spearpony, and a badass.

42. Female unicorn Legend bonecarver and broker
43. Female unicorn legendary glazer
44. Female Unicorn Clothes maker, makes a lot of dresses to sell to the caravans.
45. Female Unicorn glassmaker/nurse
46. Female unicorn butcher
47. Female unicorn woodburner
48. Female unicorn siege engineer

49. Female unicorn lasher
50. Female unicorn ranger/markspony
51. Female unicorn wrestler

52. Male Royal mason/engraver

53. Male Royal markspony
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 06:52:51 am
Friesden continues the dirge.

"From the mouths of the Sea the South Wind flies, from the sandhills and the stones; 
The wailing of the gulls it hears, and at the gate it moans. 
"What news from the South, O sighing wind, do you bring to me at eve? 
Where now is Friesden the Tall? She tarries and I grieve." 
"Ask not of me where she doth dwell- so many bones there lie 
On the white shores and the dark shores under the stormy sky; 
So many have passed down Bleachedroot to find the flowing sea. 
Ask of the North Wind news of them the North Wind sends to me!" 
"O Friesden! Beyond the gate the seaward road runs south, 
But you came not with the wailing gulls from the grey sea's mouth." "
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 07:58:35 am
Thank you Dsarker I will update the OP now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Starnight on December 02, 2011, 12:42:12 pm
(Starnight. I notice you only registered today? Did you find us from FIMfiction.net?)
No, I can't remember where I found this thread, because, for some reason, I never remember where I find stuff. Except MLP. I know I found this before it reached 100 pages. I only just worked up the courage to register, and I just now remembered how awkward I am at talking to people, and thats only made worse by the fact its 11:31 PM.
I only asked because it was a little suspicious that a newly registered individual was wanting to join only a few hours after we had a troll banned.
So, do you have a preference for what kind of pony you would like to claim. I mean it would be really awkward to introduce your character in the middle of Friesden's trial but we could go ahead and pick out a pony for you, if you would like.

Yeah, I know I picked an odd time to join. But, about the pony, I think I'll take the Female pegasus hauler, #32 on the list. Name her Starnight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: HiritconOvermindGibbross on December 02, 2011, 01:34:22 pm
5. Male earthpony butcher
6. Male earthpony farmer

I'm not sure which i want to take.  :D

Named HOG  :D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 02, 2011, 02:10:21 pm
((I'm going to assume that Couth was either a good pony and waiting for his turn in prison, or was promptly located and tossed in there, since that was the original plan.  We should still have some time to sort that out by the time it matters.  And now on to more internal monologue from Falcata.))

Now that the fire is out, Falcata first ensures that Kris wasn't caught up in either the fire or the carnage of extinguishing it.  Fortunately she was a smart filly and stayed well clear of it all.  Falcata sends her home before the sentencing concludes, in the off chance that things did get violent then.

She wanders back to the courtroom and resumes her post in time to see Friesden and Khenal exchange potential farewells.  Having missed the entirety of the chaos Carrot brought about, she can only speculate what evidence had been brought forth that would convince Friesden that she was doomed.

She mentally shrugged.  It didn't matter, there wasn't anything she could think of that would have saved the mare anyway.  She felt pleasantly satisfied that Friesden would be getting what was coming to her.  Yet, the emotional pain plastered on Khenal's face was unsettling.  Whether Khenal really thought Friesden was innocent or not, he clearly felt for her, and losing a loved one was something she could relate to.

She blew out her breath and nervously tried to brush some of the soot from her fur.  At least it would fall to Captain Isos to actually dispense the punishment, whatever it was.


((Speaking of which, I think I read, oh, 150 pages ago that there was no death penalty.  Kind of curious what would be a suitable punishment if she is convicted))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 03:12:46 pm
((Banishment seems most likely.  Considering we're in Diomedian infested jungle, it might as well be a death sentence.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 03:14:19 pm
((Speaking of which, I think I read, oh, 150 pages ago that there was no death penalty.  Kind of curious what would be a suitable punishment if she is convicted))

(I don't quite remember that. But if it was stated then I would say the worst they could do is to be banished from the fortress, into either the caverns (effective death sentence) or into the Failed Jungles (Also, a likely death sentence) likely with out any weapons, leaving them to fend for themselves. But I don't think that'll happen to Friesden at this point. Charity's seen demons in the fort before so it isn't a stretch for her to believe that Friesden could have been possessed when she killed efim, and Psycho living through death isn't exactly unheard of either, and neither is him going crazy so self defense seems almost probable.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 03:14:57 pm
((Or imprisoning her, don't forget that.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 03:32:09 pm
((Speaking of which, I think I read, oh, 150 pages ago that there was no death penalty.  Kind of curious what would be a suitable punishment if she is convicted))

(I don't quite remember that. But if it was stated then I would say the worst they could do is to be banished from the fortress, into either the caverns (effective death sentence) or into the Failed Jungles (Also, a likely death sentence) likely with out any weapons, leaving them to fend for themselves.

Nopony right out said there wasn't a death penalty, but Starkey said that we "don't butcher eachother and call it justice" way back when Friesden was going loopy in her cell after murdering Efim.  In context, he was telling Carrot to back off, so it's open to interpretation a bit.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 03:50:56 pm
(Ah yes, that I remember. I don't know. I hadn't taken that as a we don't excecute ponies statement, as much as a, we don't kill them out of hand because Psycho Carrot feels like it kind of statement.)

Edit: I'm going to take a nap now, and have my GURPS game until late tonight. So if you guys want to play out more of the trial, now or tonight, somepony reasonable, (Not you Master) feel free to take up Charity's role.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 02, 2011, 03:52:11 pm
((Speaking of which, I think I read, oh, 150 pages ago that there was no death penalty.  Kind of curious what would be a suitable punishment if she is convicted))

(I don't quite remember that. But if it was stated then I would say the worst they could do is to be banished from the fortress, into either the caverns (effective death sentence) or into the Failed Jungles (Also, a likely death sentence) likely with out any weapons, leaving them to fend for themselves.

Nopony right out said there wasn't a death penalty, but Starkey said that we "don't butcher eachother and call it justice" way back when Friesden was going loopy in her cell after murdering Efim.  In context, he was telling Carrot to back off, so it's open to interpretation a bit.

((Ah, yes that sounds like what I was thinking of.  So much has happened in Glitterglen it all gets lost in the details))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 03:55:25 pm
((Indeed it does. Which is why after this trial, I'm going to take a break from Friesden no matter the punishment or lack of one.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 03:57:23 pm
I'm going to take a break from Friesden no matter the punishment or lack of one.))

Will you be leaving the thread altogether Dsarker, or just giving up Friesden and getting yourself a new pony?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 03:58:54 pm
Grabbing a new pony. This won't be forever, just for a bit of time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 04:01:30 pm

Hmmm... Keeper, update me!

A green swirl of smoke swirls from Khenal's mouth, before touching Starkey's mouth and disappearing.


I just realized, this right here bodes very poorly for the opinion most ponies are likely to have for Khenal.  I'm pretty sure Charity might know about Keeper, but everypony else?  It certainly looks like Khenal is doing information gathering for a very powerful daemon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 04:04:19 pm
Think of it this way: At least you're not Kobuto!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 04:05:20 pm
(Not you Master)
And just why not? That's a bit prejudice, don't you think?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 04:10:37 pm
(Not you Master)
And just why not? That's a bit prejudice, don't you think?

(Sigh, I keep trying to go to sleep and they keep pulling me back in.

Master, do I really, REALLY, need to explain why? Is it not obvious? It isn't anything personal, it's just that when you control somepony they tend to be a little... overenthusiastic. And I'd rather not be rereading this thread in the future and have this one part where Charity jumps from being more or less calm and collected, to being a screaming sociopath. It's nothing personal.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 04:13:51 pm
I think we're about down to Charity rendering her verdict anyway, so it'd feel a bit weird to have somebody play her for that part.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 02, 2011, 04:20:50 pm
(I see your point Khenal but, I disagree I don't think we're quite their yet. Friesden was trying to question Psycho's Ghost, before the fire, and Charity was about to allow it. Should Psycho return, Friesden can still question him. Also, Isos might want to cross question the spirit, try to make it trip up perhaps on the off chance it isn't actually Psycho you know. Then I guess we could let the audience have their chance to say anything they want. Give the quieter players, Thundersplinter, Falcata, etc. a chance to make a speech voicing their opinions. We get some closing statements from Friesden and Isos, then Charity makes her ruling. At least that's what I would think you guys could do since I won't be online for a while. Okay, gone now, for real this time.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 04:21:42 pm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6oeSFAIKaX4
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 02, 2011, 04:30:37 pm
I think we're about down to Charity rendering her verdict anyway, so it'd feel a bit weird to have somebody play her for that part.

((Agreed.  The final statement should come from KingStrongbeard I think.))

Quote from: KingStrongbeard
(I see your point Khenal but, I disagree I don't think we're quite their yet. Friesden was trying to question Psycho's Ghost, before the fire, and Charity was about to allow it. Should Psycho return, Friesden can still question him. Also, Isos might want to cross question the spirit, try to make it trip up perhaps on the off chance it isn't actually Psycho you know. Then I guess we could let the audience have their chance to say anything they want. Give the quieter players, Thundersplinter, Falcata, etc. a chance to make a speech voicing their opinions. We get some closing statements from Friesden and Isos, then Charity makes her ruling. At least that's what I would think you guys could do since I won't be online for a while. Okay, gone now, for real this time.)

((Makes sense.  Kind of wish Falcata had something useful to say, but she wasn't a witness.  She'd probably only really be useful as a character witness to Khenal, but I don't think Charity or Isos really doubts Khenal's character.  I'm also not sure what she knows about Friesden other than the fact that she did kill Efim.  Did she immigrate early or late in the fortress?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 04:32:16 pm
The Master, unless you get in soon, we're going to skip you in the stand.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 04:34:01 pm
((Hm? Oh, sorry.))
The filly returns to the courtroom sheepishly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 04:35:38 pm
"Where art thou, Carrot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 04:49:29 pm
"I am here..." says the filly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 04:55:32 pm
"You are Carrot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 04:58:41 pm
"Yep. Do I need to bring down the rest of the court room to confirm that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 05:01:14 pm
"Unless Isos objects, no. Please tell the court the events of the day you died."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 05:07:04 pm
((Is it still the same day I died?))
"Well...I woke up on the tower, like every morning. Then I went down stairs to wake you and Khenal up, as that day was my birthday. When neither of you acted like you remembered, I went back to the tower, feeling depressed. That's when it begins to get fuzzy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 05:08:26 pm
"Fuzzy...how?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 02, 2011, 05:14:58 pm
Falcata is truly confused and worried now.  In the confusion leading up to this, she'd heard somepony mention something about a ghost or daemon, but dismissed it.  The damaged architecture certainly lent some credence to the possibility though.  Did everypony really think this child was harboring the spirit of Carrot?

"What madness is this?", she mutters to herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 05:22:10 pm
((i'm back.))
"Well...I remember being hit by you while flying...the seconds as I hit the ground...And seeing red fade the black in the last few moments of life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 05:26:29 pm
"So...nothing? Have you gone...'fuzzy' before?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 05:36:04 pm
"Yeah...now that mention it! I have! I've been blacking out at the oddest times! Half the time I don't even remember arriving at the tower!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 05:37:26 pm
"Can you give us a list of times when you have done so? Even approximate times?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 05:42:40 pm
"Hmmm...4-7 am I rarely remember...I don't sleep then..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 05:43:34 pm
"No, the dates."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 05:46:37 pm
"hmm...around the time I died in the jungle..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 05:49:04 pm
"You died in the jungle? When?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 05:59:13 pm
"When I say died...I meant my heart stopped, not brain failing. I could still move. Hard to explain...Anyway, I froze to death."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 06:01:27 pm
"And you came back to life? Regardless, was that the only time you've blacked out?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 06:02:37 pm
"Yeah...it wasn't the first time my heart stopped...but anyway, It was the FIRST time I blacked out."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 06:07:18 pm
"When were the other times?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 06:18:11 pm
"Let's see...I've blacked out right before putting my kids to bed last week...I don't know. It hurts to think back..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 06:23:57 pm
"Very well then. Now, you earlier said, and I quote 'HOLD IT! I can tell you that Friesden did INDEED kill me. BUT, it was self defense.'. What did you mean by this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 06:27:42 pm
"I meant that I remember you killing me. I remember not being able to control my body, so I knew that I was most likely possessed and trying to kill you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 06:30:33 pm
"You had prior said 'I can tell you EXACTLY, in DETAIL, what happened at the scene of my death.'. Would you please do so?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 02, 2011, 06:31:37 pm
(( Hey again, don't want to interrupt all this great RP, so I'm just going to say Couth put Nicolta Tesla on his back and they are both in a jail cell. I'll post what happened after Falcata dropped Couth and Couth's reasoning why he would save Nicolta after the trial.))   
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 06:40:15 pm
"I'll try to remember..." The filly begins to sweat visibly with a pained look on her face "I remember now. You and Khenal were coming to me and I felt sick. Then I lost control of my body... I think I taunted you and Khenal before grabing Friesden and leaping off the tower. You fought me and damaged my wings...I held on to you and tried to destroy you along with me by crashing into the ground, but you smashed me into the ground, alone, instead. It all went red, I saw my own heart, exposed with my chest being blown open, beating slower and slower...then it was darkness."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 06:42:35 pm
"So what you are saying is that it was self defence. No further questions."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 06:43:28 pm
The filly lingers, staring at Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 06:49:06 pm
I'm here. Can Friesden call me up please? PLEASE?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 06:56:22 pm
Still waiting on Isos to cross examine Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 07:00:36 pm
Someone has to take control of Charity
I'l like to ask that I take Charity while Strongbeard is away.

Apparently already taken.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 02, 2011, 07:03:33 pm
Sorry everyone.  I'm a bit out of sorts right now and busy with moving.  I don't think I'll be able to participate much for a few days  :-[
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 07:04:49 pm
Ansontan, I have been Carrot, and Khenal already is handing Charity...I think, either that or Dsarker.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 07:05:13 pm
Whoops, typo sorry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 07:06:49 pm
The ghost of Carrot, who's controlling one of his fillies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 02, 2011, 07:27:23 pm
((Did we ever decide what happened to Kil? Did she end up dying? Is she a vegetable? Did she just get better?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 07:34:43 pm
Nobody cared enough.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 07:37:15 pm
Nobody cared enough.
yep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 02, 2011, 07:38:22 pm
Time to start caring, I'd think.  Starkey should probably face charges of assault if nothing else, right?

Maybe she'd be relevant to the trial too if she's still alive and conscious.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 07:39:57 pm
Provocation, heat of the moment, he should get a suspended sentence only, if anything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 07:52:40 pm
Kil wanders into the courtroom, with a confused look on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 08:20:29 pm
*crickets*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 08:29:51 pm
People, get to roleplaying! Someone has to take control of Khenal while he's busy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 08:30:28 pm
Controlling Khenal, no. roleplaying yes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 08:39:36 pm
Isos, yes. Khenal, no.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 09:20:37 pm
guys? Why can't we just continue?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 09:28:12 pm
Because nobody who can continue is here. We need someone to do Isos, but all I can think of her asking is 'Prove that you're Carrot', and then Rocks fall and everyone dies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 09:31:44 pm
Hmmm, trial over then? Honestly, it's ruining what made this fortress special.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 09:37:58 pm
Which is?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 09:47:44 pm
Let me rephrase that, the trial has gone on long enough to hinder plot development. Basically, i'm getting impatient.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 09:51:36 pm
As am I.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 09:59:14 pm
((HEHEHEH))
Suddenly, the pipes above the courtroom burst, and the room begins to flood. The filly runs over to Friesden and tries to bite the chains off her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 10:00:48 pm
"That...That's not good."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 10:01:30 pm
*Bubbles looks up and sees the pipes burst. He runs to the GlitterGlen loudspeaker, and shouts*
"ATTENTION ALL PONIES OF GLITTERGLEN! EMERGENCY! PLEASE BRING BUCKETS TO THE COURTROOM!"

((Ladies and Gentledwarves, we have now got more views than the hall of legends.;
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 10:03:14 pm
((MADNESS TIME!))
The speaker promptly explodes into flames after bubbles relays the message.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 10:05:18 pm
"$#IT!"
*Bubbles grabs a bucket and attempts to help clear out the place.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 10:06:26 pm
The filly successfully bites through the chains on Friesden, but her mouth sure hurts after that!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 10:09:12 pm
No. Just NO. You've gone too far this time the master.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 10:10:01 pm
((Alright. I'll fix it with a simple event. better?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 02, 2011, 10:34:11 pm
Muchos Gracias.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 10:42:55 pm
What had happened before? Friesden drowned?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 10:44:16 pm
((Oh nothing really. The room just falls into a fissure.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 10:47:26 pm
"I am grateful, Carrot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 10:51:56 pm
"NOT NOW! WE NEED TO GET OUT OF HERE! I THINK WHEN I TRIED TO PROVE I EXIST, I DAMAGED THE PIPES!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 10:53:28 pm
"....Well, at least you've proved it now. Come on!" Friesden picks up the filly, plonks her on her back, and flies out of the hall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 11:02:49 pm
"Wheeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I LOVE BEING ALIVE AGAIN!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 11:21:02 pm
"Well, what now? Khenal's out, I can see him over there. Anything we can do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 02, 2011, 11:25:24 pm
The sudden chaos completely dumbfounds Falcata for a moment.  She backs away from the water beginning to flood the room and tries to decide what to do next.  Everypony left in the courtroom was scurrying to safety, save for Friesden, who would still be chained...

She looks over in time to see Friesden somehow free and flying from the room.  Did another guard free her?

No time to worry about that right now.  She had to make sure that nopony, especially the duchess, got hurt right now.  She hesitates.  Or should she chase Friesden?  She couldn't let the criminal escape either!


((I think.  Not 100% sure I understand what's going on here.  ???))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 11:27:23 pm
Friesden looks around her, and sees a guard looking around as well, and walks up to the same guard. "Ah, guard. I surrender myself to your stewardship."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 02, 2011, 11:31:03 pm
"FRIESDEN!!!" The filly smacks Friesden hard on the cheek. "GET KHENAL! DON'T DOOM YOURSELF!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 02, 2011, 11:34:07 pm
Falcata locks eyes with Friesden for a moment.  Good, she wasn't trying to escape after all.

"Uh, yes, right."  She motions for Friesden to back into the hallway away from the water.  "Get to safety, but stay where I can see you." She follows Friesden whereever she ends up going.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 02, 2011, 11:36:34 pm
Friesden turns to the filly. "You get Khenal. He's just over there," she says, pointing to Khenal's distant figure in another safe corridor. "I've got to remain with the guard."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 12:02:56 am
((Fucking computer...IT GOT THREE BSODs!!!!))
The Filly grabs Khenal by the mane with her teeth and drags him to his room. Poor Khenal struggling all the way there in vain against the mighty grip of a child.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 12:17:17 am
"Remember, guard. All of us must some day stand before our maker and face judgement. Make sure yours doesn't come sooner than others."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 12:22:58 am
The last of the pipes burst, and a tidal wave of water shoots out of the courtroom.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 12:27:02 am
"Like now." says Friesden as she yanks the guard up into the air, slinging her over her back and begins flying off to the Skyguard tower.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 12:31:31 am
Falcata lowers her head slightly as Friesden speaks.  If only she knew.  "I've already faced my judgement..." she begins before the deluge surges from the damaged pipes.  She yelps as Friesden siezes her and she immediately reaches for her weapon.  The motion halts as they leave the ground, and she returns the hammer to its sling.

She looks down to see the torrent fill the area she had been standing in moments before.  She felt cold at the thought of still being down there.


"...thank you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 03, 2011, 12:31:39 am
((... And then Friesden and Psycho Carrot fly into the sunset on a rainbow while Glitterglen self-destructs. best trial ever.))
 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 12:36:40 am
((... And then Friesden and Psycho Carrot fly into the sunset on a rainbow while Glitterglen self-destructs. best trial ever.))
((Sigged, but not going to happen.))
The torrent subsides, leaving behind a coughing and soaked Charity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 12:49:21 am
"Well, my friend, let's get back down there. If it's finished, it'll drain into the lower parts of the fortress. Time for bucket duty."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 12:52:33 am
Friesden stops, suddenly.

"You bastard!" she yells.

"Quickly, to the cells. We'll need to get those ponies out now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 12:54:08 am
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shrgD2dKz4c&feature=related scene music))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 03, 2011, 12:55:03 am
Couth feels a drop of water hit his head, blinks twice, and looks up at the cell roof quizzically.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 12:56:54 am
Falcata puzzles at the statement for a moment.  Then the switch flips.

"Oh no...  Hurry!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 01:01:55 am
Friesden dives down through the fortress, until they reach the water.

"Good luck!" she yells as she dives straight through.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 01:04:09 am
As Friesden nears the prisoners, she can see that some are struggling to not pass out from lack of air, while others already have.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 01:05:41 am
'Bloody Khenal. Always picking the worst week to fix me.'

Friesden charges at the cell walls, trying to buck them down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 03, 2011, 01:07:54 am
(Not sure what's going on but this might be relevent if the water is still coming.)
Quote
On the 13th of Opal, 95 the following notice is posted in both dining halls.


Memo to all citizen's of Glitterglen.

From the desk of Mrs. Charity Conventtulip, Overseer of Glitterglen, and chief record keeper.

Please take note, that as of today, the showers are now functioning and available to all in the stone hall. Please be informed, that in the unlikely case of flooding, the lever to disable the flow of water is located inside my office, three floors up, first door on the left. Meanwhile, please enjoy the new water system that has been provided for you.

Charity Conventtulip

(and now bed.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 01:08:53 am
((Wait, the prisoners are underwater?  Are we then?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 01:11:05 am
((I am. I thought you might have slipped off me when we dove in.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 01:11:51 am
The walls break as Friesden hits them, but leaves her with a positively dreadful migraine.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 01:13:30 am
Migraine? I bucked them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 01:14:54 am
((Gotcha))

Falcata loses her grip as Friesden slams into the water.  She tumbles underwater for what feels like an eternity, fighting to right herself.  She wasn't much of a swimmer, so she would never make it to the prisoners before drowning.

Her mind races as she tries to think of a spell to help.  Something... anything... inspiration!  Her horn flickers for a moment before the water around her flashs to air, contained in an ethereal bubble.  She sinks to the bottom, enshrouded by the pocket of air.

Friesden wouldn't be able to open the cells without her keys...

She rushes off to assist Friesden, intent on reaching the emergency shutoff immediately thereafter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 01:20:29 am
'What the...my head! Damn it. What caused that?'

She grabs as many of the prisoners as she can, and swims hard for the surface.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 01:24:04 am
Friesden finds herself face-to-face with Falcata moments later.  The water around her disappears abruptly as she passes into the magical air bubble, dropping her and the prisoners onto the floor.  Falcata takes stock of the ponies around her.

((Was Couth the only prisoner?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 03, 2011, 01:28:42 am
(( I thought there were somewhere around ten prisoners in the cell block from the raids? oh, and I'm keeping a death grip on Nicolta so that makes 12 ponies total give or take.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 03, 2011, 01:32:06 am
(( I thought there were somewhere around ten prisoners in the cell block from the raids? oh, and I'm keeping a death grip on Nicolta so that makes 12 ponies total give or take.))

The last of the smugglers where freed awhile ago. Edit: should only be couth and nicolta in there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 01:34:44 am
((i'm so dead for this...))
One of the broken pipes had contained some leeches, and were now latching on to anypony they could find.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 01:38:20 am
((Alright then, Friesden should have all of the prisoners))

Couth and Nicolta... that was everypony as far as she knew.  Falcata points back toward the stairwell and says, "Come on, I can't keep this up much longer."

She focuses again, forming a new bubble behind her.  She steps back into it and says,"Go on and get them to safety, I'm going to shut off the water from the Duchess' office."

That could be a big mistake.  She didn't use her magic often, and keeping the two bubbles up was tiring her quickly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 01:41:57 am
"That should be upstairs, shouldn't it? Anyway, we can do this and get a fresh unicorn to do it. You can't be the only hero today."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 01:43:41 am
The leeches sense the ponies in the bubble and rushes towards it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 01:45:24 am
As they speak, the second bubble Falcata created flickers and collapses with a rush of foam.  She scrabbles into the original bubble beside Friesden, gasping for air as she reaches it.  She chokes for her breath for a few moments and nods.

"You... you're right.  Come on, I don't know how much longer I can keep this up."

((Would the living quarters be underwater too?  Could be a lot of ponies in trouble if so, I'm sure not everypony attended the trial))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 01:48:30 am
The leeches begin biting at the bubble.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 03, 2011, 01:49:09 am
It's leeches. Not leaches.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 01:52:44 am
Falcata's eyes widen as she feels the magic drain from her even faster.  Keeping the bubble up was becoming too difficult...  She sees the leeches and alters the spell to let them pass through like a pony.

She continues forward, ignoring the vermin now that they were inside.  They might suck her blood, but she didn't want to be sucking water right now.  Any leeches that don't get out of the way are crushed beneath her hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 01:59:06 am
The bubble bursts.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 03, 2011, 02:03:42 am
when the bubble bursts Couth starts to doggy-paddle to the surface and poor Niclota Tesla, unconscious, burned, and all four legs broken, starts to sink.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 02:06:47 am
The damage was done.  She could feel that her energy was gone, and there was nothing she could do.  She fought to the last to keep the bubble up, but the struggle was in vain.

"No, no, no!", she exclaims as the magic vanishes, surrounding the four in foam and water.   She looks around frantically, seeing that they made it to the stairwell at least.  She hoped her breath would last long enough to make it out.

She looks back to see Couth swiming for himself, but Nicolta is still unconscious.  She languishes, trying to decide if she should try and carry him or save herself.  Then Friesden's words come back to her, and she motions at him to Friesden.  Trying to be the hero here would likely just get the both of them killed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 02:13:39 am
'Oh, goody.'


Friesden grabs the sinking Nicolta and starts toward the surface.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 02:15:33 am
The water finally stops filling the chamber, and it's filled up all the way to the roof, making the stairs the only place with air.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 02:25:04 am
Falcata breaches the surface of the water in the stairwell, gasping for air.  She coughs and spits the water from her mouth as she waits for the others to join her.  She turns to face Friesden, sees that Nicolta is safe and says, "Thank you.  I... I can't swim very well, he would have just dragged me down."

((Falling asleep here... gonna have to go in a minute I'm afraid))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 02:29:46 am
"..Hey, wait, guys, I'M COOOOOOOOOMING!!!" Yells the late filly, jumping off of the stairwell and into the water.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 02:30:19 am
"It's okay, friend. It's very difficult to be strong all the time. Let's get you up those stairs and somewhere dry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 02:31:41 am
The filly spits out water and grins. "Ha ha! That was FUN!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 02:33:39 am
"Indeed, Carrot. Let's see about not letting you get killed again, shall we?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 02:34:38 am
"Yeah! I enjoy growing up again! IT'S SOOOOOO FUN!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 02:36:08 am
((scene music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hnfkFUWgUr0&feature=related))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 02:37:35 am
Falcata glances at the new arrival and thinks back to the trial.  Was this filly really being controlled by Captain Carrot's spirit?

"Uh, right," she says to the filly.  "We should be getting back upstairs.  Dr. Bubbles may need to look at Nicolta."

She takes several uneasy steps up the stairs, utter exhaustion setting in.

"Perhaps I've misjudged you, Friesden," she says in a low voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 02:53:21 am
"Indeed. Carrot, mind helping the guard up the stairs? I'll take Nicolta up."

Friesden slings Nicolta onto her back and starts trudging up the stairs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 02:55:39 am
"Uhh...I do what now?" Says the filly, looking at the guard.
"I...but...oh...Let's go."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 03, 2011, 02:56:49 am
Couth breaches the surface, wheezing for breath.

*taps Falcata on the shoulder*

"Wh-what just happened?" Couth gasps. "forget it, more important question, can I go home and bilge the rest of the sewer water out of my stomach?"



 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 02:59:20 am
"Silly pony! That's clean water for showers!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 03:02:17 am
Falcata looks back to Couth and says, "I, uh... no. Not yet.  Let's go speak to the duchess first, she'll decide that."  Although what the alternative was, she wasn't sure.  Nopony was going back to the jail for a while.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 03:06:52 am
((Guys, I was just wondering...what if we did an intermission until Khenal gets all settled from moving? We could go back in time and work on the backstory of our characters in the past. We could see how Psycho died the very first time, how Starkey gained all his fighting experience, Friesden's life as a filly...think about it!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 03:11:29 am
Trust me, you don't want to see Friesden's life as a filly, and I don't want to write it.

Suffice it to say, her father was an evil pony, and fully deserved what he got given.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 03, 2011, 03:17:11 am
"Silly pony! That's clean water for showers!" Couth mocked in a high pitched voice with derision.

"cute filly, who's-" Couth stopped. he just had an awful thought.

"It can't be Khenal and Friesden's filly can it?" he shudders.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 03, 2011, 03:18:34 am
Just getting on for a moment before bed.  I have an idea for Khenal's absence, at least for a bit:  The mirror Carrot broke was important.  Khenal is going to be just this side of catatonic for a bit.  He wont starve or dehydrate, but neither will he really react to anything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 03:20:08 am
((That does sound interesting.  I do at least have a reason for Falcata being banished to Glitterglen thought up.  Agreed with Dsarker though, I imagine if much of Friesden's past was put to text, Toady would come down on this thread with his wrath.

Anyway, this feels like a reasonably good place for me to leave off.  I'm pretty beat, and it looks like we're kind of waiting on KingStrongbeard for Charity to flip out on Carrot and perform sentencing.  Falcata's involvement is pretty much concluded at this point.  If you guys want to continue on, anyone can take over for Falcata if she's needed.)

Falcata continued to plod along back toward the makeshift and now quite damp courtroom.  She was too tired to really think about what she was supposed to do now, and was content on letting either Captain Isos or Duchess Charity take care of that for her.  She needed to inform them about the flooded jail and now freed prisoners at any rate.

The events of the past few minutes flooded back to her as if they had taken hours.  Perhaps she really had misjudged Friesden.  She would definitely attest to her selflessness.  If Friesden hadn't thought of the prisoners or come to their aid, Falcata had no doubt they would have drowned.  She couldn't have saved them alone, had she even thought to come for them.

For the first time, she began to question if Friesden deserved what felt inevitable at this point.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 03:23:07 am
Okay. Here's Friesden's time as a filly.

She was possessed by a daemon and raped by her father multiple times.

The end.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 03:33:59 am
Hooray! KILL HER! :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 03:37:23 am
Well, is that it for the night? Or what?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 03:38:00 am
Idk.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 04:40:11 am
the hell? The forums were down for an hour...I guess i'm going to bed now...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 03, 2011, 05:40:08 am
((I think we should RP the scene, kind of like an interlude. Have everyone sitting hown for dinner or somesuch, and they wind up chatting about the past. I already explained how he got banished, but Starkey could use a bit more backstory than that.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 05:54:08 am
If we do do that, I'm going to want to pick a new pony for that. I'm sort of thinking of playing a Ciaphas Cain, HERO OF THE IMPERIUM! type character.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 03, 2011, 10:15:34 am
((Everypony seems pretty much done with the whole trial bit, so I'll wrap up the current scene and the trial in one fell swoop. um... if that's okay with all of you. Also, question, the filly that Psycho's using, is it one of his kids? The earthpony filly, his only daughter?)

As the group of Falcata, Friesden, and Psycho Carrot reach Charity's office, they see the Duchess, standing there, soaking wet, the lever that they were going to pull to lower the floodgate has already been switched. Charity, approaches, the filly. "Psycho, are you still in there," the Duchess grumbles. "Yes." the filly answers. Charity's horn flashes with magic, as the strongest chains she can summon, bind Psycho. Charity begins to give the scolding of a lifetime, which includes such colorful phrases as, "You could have bucking killed us all." and "So help me Luna, if you EVER do anything like this again, I will personally, bind your soul to an eternity in an adamantine bedpan!"

Once the ranting is finished, Charity sentences Psycho Carrot to removing the water from the lowest levels that can't be drained into the caverns.


(I'll assume a spirit capable of bringing down the roof on all of us can figure out a way to move a few tons of water. Also, I'll imagine Ironya will have a few things to say to you after you flooded her forge, and DESTROYED her home.)

Charity also allows for Couth Darkmane to be released from custody, she mostly just wanted him removed from the trial. As Psycho, works to remove the immense quantity of water, the other ponies begin to clean up the dining hall. As that takes up most of the day and into the night the trial is resumed the next day.

(Everyone feel free to make journal entries for this day if you desire.)

Charity's Journal 7th Slate 99

This trial has been just awful. Demons, ghosts, unrest, the roof nearly collapsed and killed me, then the pipes burst. All mostly Psycho Carrot's fault. Seems even the loss of his body won't keep that pony down, his spirit is haunting the town in spite of his body resting in pieces in the wooden casket Khenal made, up in the tower. I am concerned about this spirit, Psycho has always been, unstable, and in this new form he is much much more dangerous, when this trial business is over, I'll talk to Khenal and see if he knows any ways that we might help Carrot move on to his eternal reward. The trail is all over but the shouting, however, I think I've already made up my mind.
_______________________________________________________________________________


(I will make a few assumptions about what others will do during the end of the trial. Forgive me.)
The morning comes, the now mostly dry dinning hall has been set up for the trial once more. Friesden is brought forth in much the same matter as the first time. Charity opens the floor for any and all to speak,  to condemn or redeem Friesden as best they can with their words.

During this time Falcata tells how Friesden risked her life to save two drowning ponies during the flood. And Couth tells the story a second time. Others speak, including Thundersplinter, Ironya, and Pillomino, of the mare they were once friends with. Some more ponies speak out in disbelieve of the evidence, claiming Khenal was pulling the wool over everyponies eyes.

Eventually, after several hours of chaotic bickering. Charity calls for silence, she takes the finally statements for Isos and Friesden. And then Charity stands to make what may be the most important speech she has ever had to make in her lifetime.

(I was going to put the verdict right here but know, I have something I'm waiting, on. You'll get to find out what happens soon. Naturally feel free to write out any last thoughts you might be having before the verdict is spoken.)

(I think it would be a good idea to arrange some sort of dinner for the character's, in which they talk about their pasts, and it'll give Dsarker an opportunity to introduce they're new character.)

(Starnight, here is your pony.  http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Starnight.png

And here is Hog. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Hog.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 02:50:36 pm
If we do do that, I'm going to want to pick a new pony for that. I'm sort of thinking of playing a Ciaphas Cain, HERO OF THE IMPERIUM! type character.

((Now this I can get behind!  Bonus points if you have a Jurgen pony by your side at all times.))

Falcata's Diary - 7th Slate, 99

I knew today would be interesting, but it turned out to be moreso than anypony could have predicted.

I didn't get to see a lot of the trial, because somepony named Couth Darkmane decided to interrupt and make some wild accusations that prompted the duchess to place him in custody for the rest of the trial.  I got the job of escorting him to the cells, and on the way down I saw that the hospital had somehow burst into flames.  The fire was too far progressed to be able to guess if it was intentional or not, but regardless it was a major disruption, and it's going to be some time before the hospital is back to full service.  Nicolta Tesla was in the hospital at the time, but we managed to save him, thank goodness.

Then as I was returning to the courtroom, the ceiling collapsed and flooded the dining hall from the damaged plumbing.  Friesden was released, and as I tried to secure her she pulled me from the flooding room.  I won't say she saved my life, but she did probably save me from some time in the now-defunct hospital.

She did save two other pony's lives today though.  As the waters flooded into the lower levels, she selflessly swam down to the cells to rescue Couth and Nicolta.  I went after her to help, but it was definitely Friesden's actions that saved their lives, not mine.  I made all of this clear to the duchess in my report.

I don't know if it makes much difference.  The pony I saw today wouldn't have intentionally killed anypony, but I've dealt with murderers and serial killers before, and they're usually quite adept at hiding their intentions and personalities.  I am grateful to Friesden for her help today, but I'm not convinced yet that she is completely innocent.  Perhaps if I'd witnessed everything everypony else did in the trial I would feel different.

I wonder now what the duchess' final verdict will be.  I've told her everything from my point of view, as true as I know it.  It's in her hooves now.  At this point, I don't know what I want her decision to be.  Everypony makes mistakes, and I think perhaps Friesden has suffered enough for any she has committed.

Regardless, I am completely exhausted.  Now that I know Kris was unharmed from the flood, I'm going to sleep.  The final ruling will come tomorrow morning, and it won't do much good to agonize over it tonight.


*******

As the duchess calls the court to order for the final time, Falcata feels the anxiety begin to build within her.  What would the final verdict be?  She lets out a long breath and watches the duchess prepare to speak.  She was glad that it was the duchess making this decision, not her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 03:53:25 pm
Friesden stood tall. In her heart no trace of fear remained. Whatever happened, it would happen now, and was unchangable.

She would accept it gladly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 03:58:12 pm
((Unless any other military Earthponies come along, I'm going to claim out the male elite markspony earthpony and the male royal markspony.

Earthpony's name: Schmutz
Royal pony's name: Anias Abel ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 03, 2011, 04:11:20 pm
Charity begins to speak.


"Ponies of Glitterglen, this trial has been a great stress on all of us, and now it is time to put this unpleasant business behind us forevermore. Friesden Sectlaces, I, Charity Conventulip, Duchess of the Failed Jungle, Mayor of Glitterglen, by the power of Gadan the Virtue of Angels, Igest the Fragrant Smile, and all the gods above and below, I find you innocent of the charge of murder of one Psycho Carrot, and the court hereby accepts the claim of innocent by way of temporary insanity for the murder of your father efim, on the condition that you be placed on probation for the rest of your life in Glitterglen, the details of which will be worked out in the coming days, but for now, Captain, unchain the defendant, we're done here."

Charity walks out of the hall, half expecting it to explode behind her. Charity turns right just after walking out the door, and enter's her home. She levitates a do not distrub sign onto the door, before collapsing with her husband.

"My love. Did I do the right thing," she asks.

"I don't know," replies Cryptson, "but I hope so."

"I hope so too."

Charity plans to spend the rest of the day locked in her room waiting for the emotions of the trial to settle before she braves the outside world again.


(That's fine Dsarker, but just to make sure you are aware. The earthpony is in the guard under Captain Isos, and and the royal is serving under Captain Crest Fire. If that's fine with you, then I'll name them and post them right away.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 04:13:56 pm
((Was going to write them as they finally emigrate to the fortress as the trial ends. That okay with you?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 03, 2011, 04:15:19 pm
((Was going to write them as they finally emigrate to the fortress as the trial ends. That okay with you?))

(eh, Sure why not, you won't be the first to do so. Do you want me to move one or both into different squads?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 04:18:41 pm
((Both into the same squad, please))

Friesden stands stock still. She doesn't even move as her chains are undone. She says merely "I'm free, Khenal," before she collapses.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 03, 2011, 04:19:44 pm
Otik places a hoof on Starkey's withers, hoping to soothe his nerves.

She is worried.

Not about Friesden - okay, yes, she is worried about Friesden, but that's not what occupies her mind right now. She is worried about her Captain. How will he take this? If the worst happens, what will he do? Look what happened when one of his squadmates was killed. What's going to happen if he loses one of his dearest friends? Last time, circumstances precluded any punishment, but... what if he isn't that lucky this time?

'Sisters, please let them show mercy. For both their sakes.'

The verdict is passed. The chains are removed. Somewhere, on the edge of her consciousness, a faint 'You're welcome.'


((Quadruple ninja? Really?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 04:21:06 pm
((We try our best.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 03, 2011, 04:29:02 pm
Sorry about the quadruple ninja doom, but if you think that's bad I was once ninja'd by 35 posts at once in this thread during one of our peak posting times. It was crazy.

However, I don't think you need to cross all that out, it's all still valid. Maybe instead just add. "And then Charity spoke, Friesden was being pardoned." and then include the character's reactions to the verdict, or something like that. It's up to you.

Also, Dsarker here you go.
Anias Abel http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Anias%20Abel.png
Schmutz http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Schmutz.png
Edit: Moved Anias into the second slot (which has been free since Psycho died and Isos was moved up) in the Fortress Guard, (he is still equipped with a crossbow) so he and Schmutz are both guards now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 04:29:57 pm
Anias' Diary, 8th of Slate, 099.M1

Well, this trek through the jungle has been about as interesting as I like. Thankfully the princess' administrative drone didn't question my emigration to such a backwater fort. With any luck, there'll be no fighting, and nothing of any sort of interesting there. My hoof was twitching, though, and that was never a good sign. This whole mission was shaping up a lot like that assignment to Bakedarmour, and if I'd known what was going to happen there, I'd have run away into hiding. Hopefully this wouldn't go as bad.


Schmutz's Diary

Psoriasis was the same today. Commissar said not to worry. I wasn't planning on doing so, but if he said not to, must be good that I wasn't.

Hope this Glitterglen has plenty of tanna. Nearly ran out on the trek here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 06:23:10 pm
((I'll just assume that Schmutz is arriving.))
The Filly sneaks off duty to see about bothering Khenal. She finds him, but he's as unresponsive as a rock. She does everything possible to get his attention, from making faces, to poking and biting, but still no response. She eventually decides to sneak to the entrance, and watch the fauna.

All of a sudden, she sees a small group of ponies in the distance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 03, 2011, 07:10:29 pm
((I just realzied that now the pony version of Commissar Cain is among us, the very next thing to happen to the fort is a horrendous megabeast attacking and killing all of the guards but Anias and Schmutz.  Anias would have blundered into it purely by accident, of course, and will dispatch it with commendable skill.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 07:27:45 pm
((Then the filly blunders in and scares the monster away with her cuteness!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 03, 2011, 07:34:44 pm
((Am I the only one the least bit weirded out by the fact that Carrot fully intends to 'kill' his own daughter so he can steal her body?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 07:39:15 pm
((this guy is incredible http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NyaPPWPwVrQ anyway, I like my new 'body'! I wouldn't dream of killing her off...YET! Think of me like Steven King, I make a seemingly impossible-to-kill-off-because-he's/she's-too-important kind of character, then kill the character off anyway, at the least expected time. Just know, that one way or another, all my characters die at some point.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 03, 2011, 07:58:15 pm
((Am I the only one the least bit weirded out by the fact that Carrot fully intends to 'kill' his own daughter so he can steal her body?))

No, I was planning on bringing it up later. I mean if Carrot's basically stealing his daughter's life for himself, that seems kind of, you know, evil. I mean using her for a few minutes to relay a message is one thing, enjoying a second foalhood, through her, is something else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 08:02:36 pm
((Think about it, if I didn't, she'd just grow up to cold and heartless like Kil. I wasn't planning on staying on her, but I can roll with it! Besides, I tend to make my characters hyper, so it works great!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 08:11:46 pm
Charity, approaches, the filly. "Psycho, are you still in there," the Duchess grumbles. "Yes." the filly answers. Charity's horn flashes with magic, as the strongest chains she can summon, bind Psycho.
((It's not like I have a choice...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 08:21:30 pm
"Schmutz," calls Abel as he adjusts his rather nice hat.

"Yes, Commissar?" comes the voice of the earthpony, slightly obscured by the sheer amount of things he is carrying on his back.

"Do we have any tanna left?" asks Abel, a hopeful tone in his voice.

"I'll check, Commissar." The earthpony's head emerges and he starts to rummage among the different bags and pouchs on his back. After a few minutes, he finishes, and shakes his head. "No, Commissar."

"Blast. Hoperfully this place...." "Glitterglen, Commissar." "Yes, Glitterglen, hopefully it'll have enough tanna to tide us out on this assignment." "As the Princesses will."

Slowly the marching group comes into view of Glitterglen, a noticable gap forming between the two and the other ponies in the group.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 08:23:41 pm
'I just gotta see them!' thinks the filly as she dashes in the direction of the travelers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 08:30:51 pm
"Schmutz, when was the last time you bathed?" asked Abel breezily.

"Bathed, Commissar?"

"Just as I thought." Abel stopped. "Is that a pony out there?"

"Looks to be, Commissar."

"Well, time to meet and greet, I guess."

"As the Princesses will."


As the filly gets near to Schmutz, Carrot feels a sharp pain, like hundreds of needles being shoved into every part of her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 03, 2011, 08:31:35 pm


As the filly gets near to Schmutz, Carrot feels a sharp pain, like hundreds of needles being shoved into every part of her.

Lolwut? Carrot is a he.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 08:32:17 pm
Charity, approaches, the filly. "Psycho, are you still in there," the Duchess grumbles. "Yes." the filly answers. Charity's horn flashes with magic, as the strongest chains she can summon, bind Psycho.
((It's not like I have a choice...))
"OWWWWW...ow, ow, ow...........ow." Moans the filly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 03, 2011, 08:32:52 pm
I'm mentally retarded. So what?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 08:34:57 pm
((AFK after this for a bit.))

Abel sighs.

"I think this became a whole lot more interesting than I like."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 08:53:48 pm
The filly shakes her head, then walks up to Schmutz.
"Hi! I'm Carrot! What's yours?!" Asks the filly, excitedly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 03, 2011, 08:57:58 pm
Charity, approaches, the filly. "Psycho, are you still in there," the Duchess grumbles. "Yes." the filly answers. Charity's horn flashes with magic, as the strongest chains she can summon, bind Psycho.
((It's not like I have a choice...))

Oh, um, oops. I had meant to have the chains only be there until Charity was finished yelling at you. However, since I forgot to say that she undid them, I guess she actually did forget to undo them. Yes, we can roll with that I guess. Ha, it'll be funny when Charity confronts Psycho about not letting his daughter go, and he tells her he can't because SHE locked him in. I'm just imagining the look on her face, and it is hilarious.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 09:05:24 pm
((The thing is, when(and she will some day) "the filly" does die, Carrot just becomes free, and I can just find another host. :DEAL-WITH-IT-FACE:))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 03, 2011, 09:06:32 pm
((Think about it, if I didn't, she'd just grow up to cold and heartless like Kil. I wasn't planning on staying on her, but I can roll with it! Besides, I tend to make my characters hyper, so it works great!))

((Hmmm...))

((Now if Kil wasn't cold and heartless. Just, shall we say, a little overenthusiastic? ;D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 03, 2011, 09:16:12 pm
((The thing is, when(and she will some day) "the filly" does die, Carrot just becomes free, and I can just find another host. :DEAL-WITH-IT-FACE:))

((so It's like regenerating in Dr. Who, except horrifying? god I love this fortress. ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 09:17:21 pm
((Me too, pal...me too. backstabs))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 10:18:25 pm
The pain grows stronger as the young filly gets closer to Schmutz, who looks uncertainly at the filly. "Uh, Schmutz." are the only words he says as he continues moving to the fortress. Anias looks at the filly with a worldweary look in his eyes, then shakes his head and moves on.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 10:21:43 pm
"Owwww!!! ...Huh?! WAIT UP!" Says the filly through the pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 10:41:27 pm
"Please don't disturb my aide, young filly." says the Commissar as he continues on his way to the fortress.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 03, 2011, 11:50:37 pm
I guess we can call that a scene then?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 03, 2011, 11:59:34 pm
If you want to.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 12:03:45 am
Khenal is online, we can bring him back!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 04, 2011, 12:07:22 am
I'm just lurking a bit before bed.  Gotta get up early to drive, so I'm just taking in what's happened so far.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 12:10:38 am
Quick summary.

Friesden was found not innocent. She's on probation. When she heard the verdict, she fell into a coma.

Commissar Anias Abel and Gunner Schmutz have arrived.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 05:25:55 am
((I was in a brony's react video! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rfBYrQ-BoyI&list=PL6AD7BD15CA9F1F7A&feature=plcp I was known as killbot in the video.))
The Filly heads home to her family, who promptly throw her out. Depressed, she knocks on Khenal's door to see if she could stay with him, but doesn't get a response. She ends up going outside and sleeping in the grass, shivering from the cold.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 05:52:45 am
It was the Tenth of Slate. I remember the day clearly. I'd wandered into the fort, Schmutz behind me, and had reported to the duchess.

I had knocked on the door. "Come in," came the reply, and I entered the room. In the course of my service, I'd met plenty of dukes and duchesses, mayors, counts and countesses, barons and baronesses, and even the princess once or twice. Most of them are lazy, useless. They don't work, just living the lifestyle. The few of them I have met who weren't incompetent usually turned traitor, and a couple of times led to very narrow escapes for yours truly.

The duchess here wasn't lazy, didn't seem about to turn traitor, but she had a bunch of paperwork on her desk. I winced inwardly. One of the very few parts of being a noble I don't envy. At least with the Commissariat I could foist most of my paperwork onto Schmutz, who took to it with the same enthusiasm he had for every task, considering it right next to a direct order from the Sisters.

"Commissar Anias Abel reporting for duty, ma'am." I said, playing the dutiful, obedient war hero to the hilt, standing at full attention and with the red sash clearly visible. "Oh, yes. We've been expecting you," came the tired reply, and I could see the bags under her eyes. Maybe she was more focused on her duties than the others.

"Sorry about the mess," she said. "Just had a trial. Everything from daemon possessions to the dead coming back to life. It's a mess trying to clear it all up." Inwardly I winced once more. Not the calm, carefree outpost I'd thought it would be, but at least there were no diomedians. "And the Diomedians have continued to give us trouble," she went on, not noticing the wince at the prospect. "Well, I'm here to show those Diomedians that the Princess won't take their constant raiding lying down," I said, bravado in full stride. "But I think the military you've got here already does that well enough."

"Quite. Well, Commissar, I don't want to keep your from your quarters..."

"Nor I yours, Duchess. The Sisters Protect!" I said, and bowed out of the room. As I walked quietly through the corridors, I saw that same filly I'd met earlier walking with a downcast look on her face. She was heading outside, and I knew better than most ponies that the outside isn't as nice and peaceful as the pictures say it is. I followed her stealthily enough, my caver childhood keeping me well unnoticed. She eventually ended up outside, and lay down to sleep.

Slowly I walked over her, then lifting her up gently, I lay her on my back. No sense telling the diomedians we were here and ready to be easy targets, eh?

Slowly, not waking her, I took her indoors and to the quarters Schmutz had managed to scrounge up for the both of us. Without question he accepted the filly on my back and lay her on the bed, before grabbing one of the numerous spare blankets and going to sleep on the floor. I took another and sat on the chair. With any luck, it would be more comfortable than the bed.

I sat down and went to sleep, Schmutz's familiar aroma lulling me into unconsciousness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 03:42:13 pm
((Alright, let's get started.))

"Wha...? Why am I here...? I was just...huh." Stammers the confused Filly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 03:58:13 pm
It was early in the morning when I awoke, Schmutz's familiar aroma at least convincing me that we hadn't been captured by enemies with a sense of smell. I lifted the blanket up and off of me, groaning a bit as I did so. It hadn't been a comfortable night, and I stretched as I got up. The filly was still there, and I was puzzled for a second before it clicked. She was the one I'd rescued last night. I finished stretching, and Schmutz was already there with a mug of fresh tanna, though how he'd found it I still don't know.

"Tanna, sir?" he asked, and I gratefully accepted. I drank it down deep, and turned back to the filly.

"You were sleeping outside last night, young miss. Not a very safe thing to do down here. Who're your parents?" I said, in a voice with equal sternness and compassion mixed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 03:59:14 pm
"They don't want me anymore. I'm homeless..." Cries the Filly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 04:03:02 pm
I sighed internally. Not only was this going to be a rather more interesting mission than I'd hoped for, it seems I'd also picked up another dependent. Outwardly, I placed a hoof on the filly's back.

"Don't worry. Schmutz, would you go scrounge up another pair of beds? Looks like we'll need them." Schmutz dutifully went right on to do just that, and I looked closer at the filly. "Hey, young miss. You can stay with us, if that'd be okay with you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 04:07:03 pm
"REALLY?! Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!" Yells the Filly, crying tears of joy and nearly chocking the poor pony with her hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 04:12:59 pm
"That's....That's okay!" I yelped as the filly grabbed me tight. At least she was happy now. I tried not to think about what would cause her parents to abandon her. Seems like if the Sisters were watching me, as so many had said, they had a sick sense of humour.

"Well, do you have anything you need from home? I've got nothing better to do, we might as well collect it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 04:20:39 pm
The filly lets go and pouts. "Kil," she gulps "My mom doesn't like me anymore. She'd never give me my stuff back...all I had was a backpack anyway..." Says the filly, tears of sadness welling up in her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 04:29:33 pm
Her mother hated her. Well, that just made it a little more complicated. As a Commissar, I do have the right to execute anypony who even looks at me silly. But as I've always said, those who tend to do so somehow have a tendency of winding up in friendly fire incidents. Diplomacy tends to be inordinately easier.

"Well, we'll see what she says to a small squad, hmmm?" Schmutz took that as the right moment to appear, two beds balanced on his back. He carefully placed them down, then turned to me for more orders. "Schmutz, go round up a small group of soldiers. Particularly ones who this filly might know," I said, gesturing to the filly. "Say, what's your name, anyway?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 04:32:53 pm
"Lilac Joker." Says the filly, automatically.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 04:40:13 pm
The name did sound a little too well rehearsed, but it didn't seem like anything major at the time. If I'd known what it was going to get me into, though, I'd have shot the filly right there and then and ran back home. But I didn't know at the time, so I didn't really have a choice.

"Well, Lilac Joker...let's go see about dealing with your mother," I said matter-of-factly, and started heading for her house.1





1 Although Abel doesn't mention this, in his typical style, he appears to have sent off Schmutz before he asked the filly her name, as Schmutz makes his way to Lilac's house before Abel does.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 04:54:29 pm
((I just want to point out, Carrot is not control of Lilac anymore. I've decided that Carrot is now in her mind watching.))
"Alright..." Says Lilac. When they reach her home, they find the door has been badly damaged.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 04:58:19 pm
Well, we eventually wound out outside her house, with Schmutz and the squad there waiting for me. "Good work, Schmutz. Right, ponies, we're here to help this little filly get her stuff from her mother, who's abandoned her. That means you're here to arrest her under charges of abandonment, clear? We want this to go nice and simple."

With a wave of my hoof, Schmutz pushed the door open, and went in, crossbow drawn.

"In the name of the Principial Commissariat you are bound by law, Kil! You will stand down!" I yelled, drawing my weapon too. I stepped into the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 05:00:19 pm
No response. They see a blood trail leading to a closet however.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 05:11:58 pm
This wasn't good. If something bad had happened, and all the signs pointed to yes, Lilac would be the most probable suspect. I motioned to Schmutz, and he followed me in. I tracked the blood trail to a closet, and opened it up. "Sisters have mercy," I whispered.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 05:17:20 pm
In the closet is Kil, barely alive and bleeding heavily. Lilac sees her mom, screams from seeing the blood, and faints.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 05:23:50 pm
"Get her out of here!" I bellowed at one of the ponies, who quickly took the filly out of the room. "Schmutz, get a frakking medic, now!" As he ran off, I took down the bleeding mare and lay her on the ground. A couple of the troopers squatted down. "What do you think happened to her, sir?" one of them asked in a hushed tone. "I don't know," I answered in a thoughtful tone. "I don't know."

It was obvious at the time that it was a pony who'd done this. But why? Kil didn't seem to be that big a deal, even within the fortress. Unless she was hiding something, this just didn't make any sense.

With hindsight, it was obvious. But at the time, we had no clue of just how deeply this fortress was embroiled in daemons.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 05:26:38 pm
Right before their eyes, Kil breaths her last and was no more.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 05:29:21 pm
there is a loud commotion from outside.

"What is the meaning of this? Who ordered you here, soldier?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 05:33:00 pm
As the mare died, I grew calm, I guess you could say. It was peaceful, at least, with ponies trying to help her. But even then, I couldn't shake off the itching in my hoof. We'd missed something, and now somepony was dead.

"Damnation!" I yelled. It was an outburst that suited the Abel that people thought I was, still caring after somepony he hadn't known had died. Well, I didn't care so much about her as that now I knew there was somepony out there killing others, and I didn't want to become the next target.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 05:37:31 pm
Out of the corner of Abel's eye, he(?) sees something dart into another room of the house.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 05:40:04 pm
I heard another pony shouting outside, but before I had the chance to respond, I could see something moving inside the room. It was hard to see, but still there if you kept notice. I crept in slowly, crossbow at the ready.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 05:40:40 pm
An armored pegasus stallion strides into the room.

"So you're the stallion who thought it'd be a good idea to drag six ponies off surface detail in the middle of a Diomedian-infested jungle? Tell me, what di- oh... oh sisters, is that... Kil?"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 05:43:05 pm
That same pony, almost as irritating as Mural, wandered into the room at that point. I gave up on my search for whatever the thing was, and turned to him.

"Yes." I said, a grim tone in my voice. "We have a murderer here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 05:44:57 pm
Abel hears something knocked over in the kitchen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 05:47:08 pm
"Guards, to me! The murderer might still be in here." I said, somehow managing to keep the trepidation I felt out of my voice. We headed slowly but steadily to the kitchen, weapons out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 05:49:09 pm
Starkey unsheathes his axe, falling in beside the stranger.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 05:51:22 pm
The group sees a pony in a full black cloak, with a knife dripping with blood in it's mouth. The pony simply stares at them from under it's dark hood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 05:54:16 pm
"One murderer: check."

A simple hoof-gesture, and every crossbow in the room is pointed at the hooded figure.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 05:56:20 pm
"Halt! In the name of the Princess you are bound by law! Stand down!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 06:01:02 pm
The pony throws the knife at Abel, and it cuts him in the front right leg. It then makes choking sounds and collapses.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 06:02:12 pm
Starkey barks an order, and a volley of bolts sail into the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 06:03:04 pm
All the arrows miss; but the collapsed pony doesn't appear to be breathing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 06:04:46 pm
"Hold fire!"

Starkey steps into the kitchen, weapon ready, and approaches the figure.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 06:06:09 pm
The cut wasn't deep, thank the Princesses. Knives are hard to throw well when they aren't balanced correctly. But it still annoyed me. Assaulting a Commissar is bad enough. But to assault me was, quite naturally, far more annoying.

When Starkey (as I learned later was his name) gave the order, I still didn't fire. Damn this pony, it was not going to get off that easily. When he closed, I went with him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 06:07:33 pm
The pony is dead as can be. There's no evidence to suggest he died from anything other than a spontaneous heart attack.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 06:08:51 pm
"Not a bolt in him, but he certainly looks dead. Poison, perhaps?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 06:09:19 pm
"Do you know who this pony is?" I asked Starkey. Whoever it was, he had just escaped from punishment for murder and assault.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 06:13:00 pm
Starkey gently pulls back the killer's hood, exposing his face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 06:14:06 pm
The dead pony is none other than Crest Fire.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 06:16:50 pm
"I'll be clopped if it isn't Lieutenant Crest Fire, one of my squad leaders."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 06:25:19 pm
"Why would he do such a thing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 06:29:33 pm
Lilac bolts into the room, having woken up and escaped the guards. She sees Kil's body.
"M-m-m-mom...?" Lilac studders before collapsing into a heap of tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 06:32:50 pm
"I... have a hunch."

"Kil was the wife of one of my late Lieutenants, a pony named Psycho Carrot. Crest Fire was one of his close friends. Recently, we learned that she had been stepping out on him, hadn't been letting him see his foals..."

He trails off.

"The foals! Where are they, are they safe?"

His question is answered by Lilac's sobs in the next room. He rushes in to find her lying next to her slain mother.

"Oh... sweetheart, come here..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 06:33:34 pm
"This is one of them, Lilac Joker."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 06:35:05 pm
"WH-WH-WHO KILLED H-H-ER...?" Whimpers Lilac through the streams of tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 06:38:43 pm
"Don't worry, Lilac. Just come with me, and we'll let Starkey figure this out, okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 06:44:49 pm
"Ok......" Says Lilac, horribly traumatized by seeing her mom dead.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 06:49:14 pm
"Lilac, sweetie, where are your brothers?"

((It was a filly and two colts, right?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 06:56:50 pm
((Dunno...))

"I don't know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 07:04:54 pm
"Alright, that's okay. Just run along with Mister..."

He turns to the stranger.

"I can tell by your garb you're a Comissar, but I never caught your name."

He extends a hoof.

"Captain Starkey, Glitterglen Militia."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 07:09:41 pm
"Commissar Anias Abel, attached to Glitterglen." I said as I returned the hoofshake. At least somepony here in the militia was competent. I'd come to rely on him in the future.

After I took Lilac back to my room, I got Schmutz to keep her company, and headed back down to meet up with the captain again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 07:19:33 pm
Abel returns to find the room cordoned off. The door guards part to allow him through. Inside, he finds the room much as he left it, with a few exceptions: a number of objects of interest have been labeled with strips of parchment bearing numbers, and both bodies have been roughly traced with chalk.

"It's been a while since I was a guard, but I think I did alright, wouldn't you agree?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 07:25:00 pm
"Looks to be so," I agreed, inwardly surprised at his efficiency. It was much quicker done than I'd expected. "What are the salient points, captain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 07:35:17 pm
*sigh*,"Nothing we don't already know, I'm afraid."

"The victim was stabbed here, in the entryway. Her wounds matched the attacker's knife. He dragged her - or she crawled, we can't tell - into the closet, here. You found her, and brought her out into the hallway, where she died. Between the attack and the encounter in the kitchen, we don't know what the killer was doing. We haven't found the other foals, either. For the best, really: I'd rather they didn't see this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 07:36:56 pm
"Alright. Lilac claims that she wasn't let in last night. Any chance that was when it happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 07:42:51 pm
"Not likely. The killer's blade tore open an artery. With a wound like that, she wouldn't have survived more than half an hour after being stabbed. Which means the attack happened not long before you arrived."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 07:46:15 pm
"Hmm. Okay. Was the knife Crest's personal knife or from the armoury?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 07:51:08 pm
"His own, it's monogrammed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 07:55:57 pm
Well, there were no clues there. As far as it looked, we were dealing with a single pony attack. But there was no proper motive! The pony's friend was dead. No point getting revenge for him. And where did he get the poison to ensure his death? It just didn't make sense, and my hoof was still twitching. Somewhere in this fortress, somepony had helped this one commit murder, and I didn't like it one bit.

"Well, what about his death? Any clue on the poison or who could have made it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 07:59:40 pm
"Nothing outwardly. We'll have to take him to Doc Bubbles for an autopsy if we want to know more."

He shakes his head.

"I just don't get it. Kil was a bitch, aye, and what she did to Carrot was... inexcusable. But does killing her and orphaning their children solve anything?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 08:04:06 pm
"Until we find the other children, you may wish to amend that to orphaning their child."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 08:10:39 pm
his blood runs cold.

"N-No. We didn't find any other bodies, or signs of struggle. Surely they've just run off to play? O-Or perhaps they became worried when Kil turned Lilac away, and went looking for her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 08:11:49 pm
"I'm afraid so, Captain. The Lieutenant won't have been alone. Someone has taken those children, and we must prepare for the worst."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 08:13:56 pm
"Oh sisters..."

'I'm sorry Carrot, I'm so sorry...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 08:15:28 pm
Starkey notices a hoof sticking out from under one of the carpets.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 08:16:04 pm
"Captain, keep it together. We're going to find this co-murderer, and we're going to bring them to justice."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 08:19:10 pm
"Aye... I can do that."

He notices the strange hoof.

"Look there, under the carpet."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 08:28:23 pm
Under the carpet, they find the bodies of Lilac's brothers, dismembered and decapitated.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 08:30:30 pm
I looked at the carpet, and saw a hoof that I hadn't noticed before. I lifted up the carpet, hope and fear in equal amounts warring within me.

I saw the two bodies underneath the carpet, and I lay it down again.

"They're there. Don't bother looking. We'll need four coffins now."

I looked up to the guards. "Not a word of this to anyone outside of this room. Not a word. This does not leave this room."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 08:31:22 pm
Starkey lets out a strangled cry, backing away from the horror under the rug.

"N-No... oh, sisters no... please..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 08:33:46 pm
"Starkey! At attention, soldier! We're going to find out who planned this, why they planned it, and then punish them! But you. Need. To. Remain. Calm! You can't just go to pieces now. Save that for after we find the murderer."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 08:39:29 pm
Suddenly, Abel notices an engraving on the knife. It reads "loyalty".
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 08:40:20 pm
"I... "

He is silent for a long time. Finally, he is able to lift his gaze to Abel.

"...You are right. Let's bring this bastard in. Shall we go see what the doctor can tell us?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 08:42:58 pm
"Let's do that very thing."

It was then that I looked at the knife. A word had been written on it. "Loyalty", it read. I held it out to the captain. "Why would he have loyalty on his knife?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 08:45:41 pm
((in case no one gets the reference, it's the knife Carrot gave Khenal.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 08:50:09 pm
"What?"

He examines the knife more closely.

"Plain as day..."

Starkey unsheathes his axe, bringing the blade up to compare. The word 'Honesty' is etched across the blade. Sure enough, the script matches perfectly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 08:51:15 pm
"What is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 08:52:35 pm
"I thought the 'C' stood for 'Crest Fire', but... this was Carrot's knife."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 08:56:35 pm
If there had been something I was expecting, this was the exact opposite. So somehow this Crest Fire had stolen a dead colt's knife and used to kill the colt's wife and two of their children? This wasn't making any sense at all.

"How could he get that knife? Who had it last?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 08:59:30 pm
"A mutual friend of ours, an alicorn named Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 09:01:53 pm
"Well, that might be a good place to start questioning. Whoever planned this, it was either Khenal or someone who Khenal knew and trusted."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 09:06:32 pm
"I'm afraid... that isn't possible. He's been in the hospital for days, comatose, along with his marefriend Friesden."

"I-It's like a curse, I tell you... in just a few days, everypony I call friend..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 09:09:07 pm
"Curses schmurses. That just means that somepony has been going through his stuff, and that means we might be able to catch the murderer."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 09:32:01 pm
Once again, Lilac manages to return, and this time, she brought her backpack.

"Hi...Where's Vance and Bane, my brothers? did you find them?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 09:36:09 pm
"No, we didn't. Do you have any idea where they might go?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 09:39:47 pm
Lilac sees the hoof, and moves towards the carpet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 09:43:36 pm
Starkey sees this, and moves quickly to intercept her.

"Uh, why don't we go upstairs and have some lunch, then we can go looking for them, aye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 09:47:40 pm
"A good idea."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 09:50:07 pm
"What're you...hiding...? Lilac had slip past Starkey and lifted up the carpet. She throws up and cries so hard that she weezes for breath inbetween the sobs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 09:52:27 pm
Starkey sweeps the filly up in his hooves, resting his chin on her head and rocking her gently.

"Oh, little one... I'm so sorry..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 09:55:25 pm
"Come on, girl. Let's get you out of here." I lead the two out of the room, and then turned to one of the guards. "Burn everything here. Nopony else is to even get the chance of seeing this. If someone asks, it was a fire and we got here too late, understand?"

I moved out of the room. What I'd seen here was sickening, but I'd seen far worse.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 09:57:35 pm
"I-I-I have no family...L-l-left...Starkey..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 09:57:51 pm
"W-What? Belay that, soldier! We haven't done an autopsy on the killer, and Lilac still needs to get her things. Then you can burn whatever's left."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 09:59:59 pm
"Starkey, take the girl and go. I'll finish up here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 10:00:13 pm
When Lilac hears Starkey say "killer", she cries even harder.
((AFK for an hour or so, feel free to voice Lilac.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 10:10:54 pm
"...Aye, but remember what I said. there's still... evidence wo be found here."

He gently shifts Lilac onto his back, and trots off to the dining hall.

"Have you met miss Otik, Lilac? She should be taking her lunch right now..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 04, 2011, 10:15:05 pm
"Guard, go get the doctor down here. The autopsy will have to be conducted here." I said to one of the guardsponies standing by.

"We can't allow that to happen again. Get a pair of coffins down here. We're going to have those foals buried before anyone even notices."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 10:30:10 pm
((nevermind, i'm back))
"I have not...what's she....like?" asks Lilac, still retching from the horrific scenes she seen today.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 04, 2011, 11:05:44 pm
"She's a soldier, like me. She used to be a guard like me, too. She's a very kind pony, and I'm sure you'll get along very well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 11:07:31 pm
Lilac doesn't respond, she's passed out again from over-exertion.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 04, 2011, 11:55:06 pm
((Where'd everypony go? guys?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 12:02:22 am
Starkey sighs and shakes his head.

'Poor filly. She didn't deserve any of that.'

He changes direction, heading for the barracks. He lays her gently on his bunk and tucks her in.


"Sleep well, little one. You might not have a family, but you're damn sure not alone."

"Well I toldja I wanted foals someday, but dunnae you think this is a bit early?"

He turns to see Otik standing in the doorway, smiling warmly.


"Shouldn't you be at lunch?"

"Ye didnae show up, so I thought ye'd be down here. I brought ye a lit'l somethin'."

She steps inside, revealing two plates of food balanced on her back.

"So, who's th' kid?"


"It's Lilac, hun. Carrot's filly?"

"Aye, I see th' resemblance now. What's she doin' here? Won't Kil be-"

"Dead. Her and both the colts. We're supposed to keep it quiet."

"Oh sisters..."

"It was Lieutenant Crest Fire. He took some kind of poison when we found him."

"He murdered 'is best friend's family? Why would he go an' do a thing like that?"

"I... I don't know."

Otik turns her head, watching the sleeping filly.

"What 'appens to her? Does she 'ave any other family?"

"No. Carrot never mentioned having any relatives in Glitterglen, at least."

"So Miss Charity'll hafta find a new home for 'er?"

She sets both plates on the Captains desk, and they sit down to eat.


"Eventually. For now, I think she should stay here. We think there's another killer, and he might come back to finish the job. She'll be safer among the militia."

They are both silent for a time. eventually, Otik speaks up.

"Hey Stars?"


"Hmm?", he replies around a mouthful of biscuit.

"Y'know, ye could always take her in yerself."

He swallows involuntarily, and almost chokes.
"Me?"

"Sure. I bet Carrot'd be proud t' have ye raise 'is daughter in 'is stead, and now she's away from that horrid mare..."

"No, no, no, I'd make a lousy father! I'd spoil her rotten for sure."

"I dunnae think so. Ye've practically got more'n a dozen kids already, an' it looks t' me like they all turned out fine."

*chuckle*, "Aye, I'll give you that. But a little filly? that's a different matter entirely."

"Well, give it some thought, a'least."

Starkey turns, facing Lilac. She is sleeping fitfully, in the throes of some night-terror. He reaches out a hoof and gently strokes her mane. Slowly, she calms down, drifting off into deep, restful sleep.


"Aye, I'll think about it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 12:12:28 am
((next day! morning music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nn2Z7mvekMc&feature=related))
Lilac falls out of bed, and smiles. For that one perfect moment, she doesn't remember all the horrible things that happened. Then she does, and she bawls he eyes out. She does so quietly, and eventually manages to find Starkey and Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 12:23:10 am
Lilac makes her way into Otik's office. There, she finds both of them curled up together, still sleeping peacefully.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 12:26:23 am
Lilac remembers what her dad taught her about waking ponies up. She jumps on top of them, laughing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 12:32:13 am
"Who's-clop-augh!"

Starkey panics, reaching for his axe only to come up empty-handed. The minor distraction gives him just enough time to calm down and take in the situation. By now, Otik has siezed Lilac around the waist and is tickling her relentlessly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 12:40:15 am
"he-heeeeh-haaa!" giggles Lilac, happy to finally have somepony to play with.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 12:42:26 am
"Well, it sounds like somepony is in a better mood this morning. Did you sleep well, little one?"
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Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 12:45:40 am
"No...I drempt about mom...but you sure made me feel better!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 12:49:02 am
"Well, that's good to hear, at least."

"Oh, and this is miss Otik. You remember I told you about her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 05, 2011, 12:49:09 am
((Been pretty busy, trying to catch up a bit here.  Not sure if Falcata would have been in the squad Schmutz rounded up))

Falcata's Diary - 10th Slate

So the duchess found Friesden innocent.  Mostly.  She says that she'll be on probation, but didn't define what that was exactly.  In the end, I think it was a fair ruling.  Khenal believed she was no danger to anypony anymore.  The duchess believes it.  Maybe I believe it too.  If she's on probation, it shouldn't matter anyway.

As it turns out, it really doesn't matter, as both she and Khenal have been comatose since the trial.  I hope they recover soon.

In other news, I was quite excited to learn that none other than the legendary Commissar Anias Abel has been assigned to our fort.  Well, I'm not sure why a commissar was assigned to our fort.  Not now, at least.  If we ever needed one it was months ago when the real horrors started.

Nevertheless, I'm sure now that Commissar Abel has joined us, he'll sort things out in short order.  If half of the things I've heard about him are true, he'll have no trouble.  Legends are that he slew a daemon single handedly, crushed legions of unliving horrors from below the frozen wastelands, and killed several legendary dark princes and princesses in single combat.  If I understand correctly, I'll be working with him directly too.

I hope I don't let him down.  The stories say that he cares a lot about the ponies under his command, but he's a commissar all the same.  I'd rather not give him a reason to doubt my loyalty and courage.

I was a bit perplexed though.  I think I saw him today, wearing the crimson sash of his office.  He was accompanied by perhaps the most disheveled looking pony I've ever seen.  I almost thought he was a keshi pony at first, but the commissar seemed perfectly comfortable near him.  I didn't get too close, because I think something must have been rotting further down the hallway, but I'll be running into the commissar again before too long.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 12:53:13 am
"Yeah, I remember! She's nice!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 01:07:41 am
Otik answers with a hug and a kiss on the forehead - an outside observer would swear she was already family.

"Wot say we all get dressed an' go upstairs fer some breakfast, aye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 01:16:46 am
"AYE AYE!" Says the excited Lilac, getting dressed and bolting upstairs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 01:28:37 am
Eventually, the two pegasi make their way up to the dining hall - even a soldier cannot hope to match the boundless energy of a filly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 01:37:38 am
"Yay!!!" Cheers Lilac as she digs into the food!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 01:51:37 am
Otik takes a plate and sits with Lilac, while Starkey tries to locate the Commissar in the morning crowd.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 01:53:30 am
((dsarker's offline))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 02:00:02 am
Well, the soldier did better than expected. Doctor Bubbles was brought down, and finished the autopsy as quickly as he could on both intact ponies. We got the coffins and chucked the remains of the two foals in them, gingerly. He told me the results, and after a few minutes silence, we sent him out and burnt the room to the ground. It had been worse than I expected.

I didn't get much sleep that night, poring as I did through the records of everypony here. Schmutz was a great help, supplying tanna and recaf as needed. Four ponies names stood out. Carrot, the one who had died before I got here. Friesden and Khenal, both of whom were in comas. And the last, Starkey. All the evidence pointed to him. He was outside the room just before, he was able to tell the wound quickly without the doctor, and he was apparently harbouring a daemon in him. But one thing didn't click. The foals' bodies had been arranged in the sign of Chaos. That was why we had felt sick at the sight, why I'd ordered it burnt. So why then had it made him feel sick, too?

There was no question though. A daemon, or a cultist aligned with a daemon, had been behind this. And I'd have to seek them out and deal with them before they did the same to me.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 02:08:37 am
((I'm going to assume that means he's here.))

"Oi, Sir Abel! Care to sit with me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 02:21:00 am
Starkey called to me, and I was a bit wary. But with Schmutz at my side, I was sure it wouldn't be easy for him to kill me. I sat down, Schmutz steadily clearing a seat for me by his very presence. I guess I just got used to the smell.


"Well, how are you this morning? And how's Lilac?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 02:33:25 am
"Well and, surprisin... surpri... oh sisters, what is that stench?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 02:41:52 am
"Ah, don't worry. This is my assistant, Gunner First Class Schmutz." I said, with a warm tone in my voice. Yes, it is true there's no such thing as Gunner First Class, but it seems to give him an extra bit of tone, as it were.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 02:51:38 am
"Right... well as I was saying, Lilac is handling things surprisingly well. what about you? Did you find anything else after I left?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 03:03:02 am
I hesitated for a bit, and then went with my instincts. "I need to talk to you in private after this." At the time, I thought that maybe it was him, but I doubted it. It turned out well in the end.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 03:21:53 am
"Oh, right. I suppose it would best if we didn't discuss it in public."

"So, if you don't mind me asking, why did you come to Glitterglen? If you still hold office, then you obviously weren't banished. Were you sent here on some kind of mission?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 03:36:01 am
"Assigned here by the Princess herself. She's heard tell of the daemons and other things here, so I've been assigned to...clear things up, as it were." A safe lie.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 03:56:46 am
"Well, I suppose it was only a matter of time before they sent somepony. We've... been managing surprisingly well so far. Remember Khenal, the lad I told you about? He used to work with posessed ponies, trying to banish their daemons, or at least suppress them. He's been a tremendous help fighting the fiends. But regardless, it will be good to have a... proffessional around."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 04:02:10 am
"Oh, really?" I said casually, as if I hadn't known since last night. Those four had all been connected by the daemons. They were the only ones here whose lives seemed to be centred around the actions of the daemons.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 04:05:57 am
"Aye. I think we're up to... three, four, of the creatures banished? Or maybe... no, those two were the same one... and that... no, that one was Schmoe, that one was Cockroach..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 04:11:23 am
One of my eyebrows rose at this. Naming daemons? Almost as bad as worshipping them. Starkey didn't seem like one of those, but maybe he was good at hiding it. At least with Schmutz there, no daemon would be able to get to us.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 04:16:31 am
"So that comes out to... three. Huh. Only three? It feels like so much more..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 04:25:17 am
"Three, hmmm? Well, soon sort the others out."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 04:32:42 am
"Sisters willing, there won't be any others, but I suppose that's too much to hope for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 04:42:01 am
"Possibly."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 05:03:22 am
((Bedtime for me. Goodnight.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 03:09:17 pm
sorry,internet died on me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 03:22:22 pm
I never really was good at understanding foals. The incident at Daggercharm2 showed me that. But something was really off about Lilac. In hindsight, of course, the clues were obvious. She reacted badly around Schmutz at our first meeting, which really should have warned me then. But for whatever reason, I simply ignored it. Well, as they say, hindsight is 20 20. It was, at least, a good thing I kept Schmutz with me. It was worth the questions about why I didn't use my horn, particularly since I'd probably have got those questions anyway.


2 This incident, while interesting, need not detain us further at this stage. You may find more details in the currently accepted text 'For the Princess: A Commissar's Life', also by Abel.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 05:42:57 pm
((Oh, yes. I just found a use for Istig, which could easily redeem her. Telgin, I take it you can guess what it is?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 08:38:56 pm
By this time, Starkey has finished his breakfast. He stands.

"I'll be just a moment."

He trots back to where Lilac and Otik are still eating. A few words pass between them, and Starkey recieves a nuzzle from both mares. He returns.

"Right, that's taken care of. Whenever you're finished."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 08:47:35 pm
"I'm ready now. Well, shall we?" I lead him off into a nearby corridor, thankfully emptied of ponies. I said to him "Well, I've had the doctor conduct the autopsy. It's definitely poison. Do you know any ponies here who would be capable of making such a poison?" I watched his expression closely, hoping beyond anything that he might stumble here. It would so clear up my day.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 08:50:33 pm
"There are literally hundreds of varieties of poisons. Could you be more specific? What exactly was the cause of death? Did the doctor check for chemicals in the blood?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 09:00:56 pm
Again my hoof was twitching. He was being evasive, yes, but something was -wrong- with his evasion. He was trying to help me...but it still didn't feel right. Nevertheless, I continued. "Something stopped his heart dead. Doctor hasn't seen anything like this. His opinion is the poison is a diomedian type."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 09:09:37 pm
"I Haven't seen anything like that. diomedians mostly use paralytics to incapacitate. If they just wanted to kill you, they'd use a blade."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 09:11:38 pm
"Sometimes, yes. Tell me, captain, have you heard of the four gods of Chaos?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 09:25:24 pm
"I know of only one god of chaos. There are more?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 09:28:38 pm
"There is one god of chaos. There are four Chaos gods."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 09:33:42 pm
"Since when does Discord have lackeys?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 09:39:07 pm
"They are not lackeys. The first, Khorne, the Chaos God of Blood. The second, Slaanesh, Chaos God of excess. The third, Nurgle, Chaos God of decay. The fourth, Tzeentch, Chaos God of plotting."

I sighed. "The killing of the foals was a ritual to the Chaos Gods."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 09:50:14 pm
"Sisters... You mean to say that... Crest Fire worshipped them?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 09:50:59 pm
"Or was killed by one who worshipped them, yes."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 09:58:27 pm
"We'll have to examine the scene again, see if there's evidence to that effect. Now, what kind of ritual are we talking about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 10:09:24 pm
"One of the many that they had. You realise, of course, that's why it hurt to look at it? A thing of Chaos, despite what it is, is wrong. Blood, guts, death, all these are nothing compared to a sigil of Chaos. And it gives power to them by its sheer existence. We had to destroy it."

I shook my head.

"How in the hay could you think we knew what it would mean? It could be part of a pattern, maybe even the start of a great ritual. Maybe it was to summon a daemon to the fortress. Any number of things. This is way above our paygrade, captain. This is a task for an Inquisitor, rooting out a Chaos cult. But we don't have that luxury, unfortunately. So this is the way it'll have to be."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 10:14:05 pm
"It hurt to see my dear friend's sons butchered, and his bloodline nearly ended. And you don't even know what it meant? What makes you so sure it was even... wait, you destroyed it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 10:22:11 pm
"Captain. This maniac, whoever it is, is out there still, and planning more atrocities just like this. Yes, I burned it. And I hope to never see one of its type again. But we will, unless we find out who would have access to the diomedians and who worships their dark gods. I don't know what the symbol meant. I don't want to know. What it meant is meaningless, except that it was a Chaotic symbol. By its very nature, it defies the Sisters. It says they are powerless, meaningless, and a myth. It is heresy, pure and simple. It is evil by its very existence. While I am not an Inquisitor, I know at least to destroy heresy whereever it is found. So yes, I destroyed it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 10:41:53 pm
"Oh, you have got to be clopping with me. Now we're working completely blind, you've destroyed Lilac's home..."

At the mention of the filly's name, Starkey's eyes go wide.

"Lilac! I-I sent her with Otik to pick up things from her room. Sisters, she'll be devastated!"

He turns and gallops down the hall towards the residential quarter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 10:52:01 pm
It was after antagonising the pony that seemed to be the only competent one here that I bumped into another pony. Here, she went by the name of Istig, but I knew her by a different name. Although she was a pleasant sight, it meant things were just as bad, if not worse, than I'd feared.

"Hello again, Inquisitor Vail."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 05, 2011, 11:02:16 pm
It was after antagonising the pony that seemed to be the only competent one here that I bumped into another pony. Here, she went by the name of Istig, but I knew her by a different name. Although she was a pleasant sight, it meant things were just as bad, if not worse, than I'd feared.

"Hello again, Inquisitor Vail."

((Surprisingly, no I didn't see that specifically coming, although I figured you'd work the inquisitor in some way or another eventually.  Now then, to find a way to work Falcata into this so she can annoy the commissar by drooling over him and his reputation...)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 11:14:37 pm
((back again...stupid internet...I have a feeling this is going to become the norm, me losing internet alot.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 11:21:51 pm
"Why...why...." Moans Lilac, nealing in front of her destroyed home.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 05, 2011, 11:25:50 pm
((Just realized KingStrongbeard hasn't posted in a while.  He'll probably be thrilled to learn he has more ponies to kill off in the fort.  :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 11:25:57 pm
"I'm guessing this isn't just another cult." I said, a small part of my annoyance showing.

"Indeed it isn't," she said, a smile lighting up her face as she recognised my expression. "I assume that one of the cultists was behind the murders yesterday." I sighed. If the information wasn't kept tight enough to prevent the filly from getting back to the crime scene, I didn't really expect it to keep out an inquisitor. But, then, I guess nothing keeps out those types. If it isn't nosing into Commissarial matters, taking whatever remains of the law in any petty outpost into their own hands, or even crossing the street incorrectly, an Inquisitor is always, somewhere, not obeying the strictures of established law3. Well, at least now I had somepony I could trust here.



3 I feel here he is being a little overdramatic. Inquisitors never cross the street incorrectly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: HiritconOvermindGibbross on December 05, 2011, 11:28:38 pm
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 11:31:01 pm
-snip-

Your signature has a couple of errors. You've got forgotten so, where it should read Son, so, or begotten Son, so. You've also got parish where it should be perish.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: HiritconOvermindGibbross on December 05, 2011, 11:33:07 pm
-snip-

Your signature has a couple of errors. You've got forgotten so, where it should read Son, so, or begotten Son, so. You've also got parish where it should be perish.
your right sorry about that fixing now
thanks
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 11:38:43 pm
Otik bulls Lilac into a tight hug, gently stroking her mane. Starkey comes trotting up, out of breath. He joins them.

"I-I'm sorry hun, I didn't-"

A glare from Otik silences him. They sit in silence for a while.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 11:40:04 pm
"I have...n-n-nothing left to remind me of my family now...i'm all t-that-t-t's....left....." Cries Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 11:42:59 pm
"Dunnae talk like that, hun. Y'know tha' isnae true. C'mon, I'll show ye."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 05, 2011, 11:44:09 pm
"Alright auntie..." Says Lilac, without realizing what she said.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: HiritconOvermindGibbross on December 05, 2011, 11:44:39 pm
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 05, 2011, 11:51:18 pm
"I've been hunting these heretics for at least two years now, under this identity. About a year ago, we found that they were planning to smuggle cursed amulets from the fortress. I informed the mayor of who I was, and ordered her to ban the export of all amulets. But like the smallminded fools they were, they still tried. I was fighting a pair of them when one of the civilians got in the way and got hit. I finished off the two heretics and took the civilian to a hospital. Another pair had been duped into helping them export them, but they had no idea what they were doing. They got plunked in jail. Turns out the militia had been infiltrated by the cult. One of them was one of the heretics we'd killed. The militia commander and the guard captain, of course, knew nothing about this. Only the mayor had so far proven trustworthy. Anyway, the militia commander, Starkey, almost led a coup. It was only a pair of daemons battling that distracted him long enough that the mayor could reinforce her own guards."

It was a relatively short tale, as things went. But at least now I had a sitrep. "Crest Fire, the apparent murderer, was also in the militia. But he was using the blade that belonged to Carrot, another pony, who was also in the militia. But why would they come out now?" I asked. The Inquisitor shook her head. "Your guess is as good as mine right now. The poison the doctor found was definitely Diomedian in origin, though." She smiled as she walked off, leaving me on my own, with another unpalatable slice of Whodunnit pie.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 05, 2011, 11:57:18 pm
The adults, however, are well aware of what she said. Otik smiles warmly at the filly, helping her onto her back. The three make their way to the barracks, arriving at a door just acrosss from Starkey's office. She nudges the door open, stepping inside.

"This was yer daddy's old room."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 12:01:05 am
Inside the room, however, is a black sign almost carved into the wall. It appears to be a circle, surrounded by 8 arrows arranged evenly.

It hurts to look at it, the eyes almost instinctively turning away. It seems off. Very, very, off.

It looks rather like
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 12:04:27 am
"NO...NOT THAT! NOT THAT!!!!" Screams Lilac, burrowing her face in Otik's mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 12:07:44 am
"Wot is-"

Starkey raises a hoof, cutting her off.


"Why don't you show her Carrot's old armor? It's in the armory, far end of the left wall."

"A-Aye, that sounds nice."

They leave. Starkey steps further into the office, gently shutting the door behind him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 12:14:10 am
Starkey feels a tugging at his mind as the door shuts. Even as the tugging starts, another starts to pull his mind another direction.

YOU WILL NOT. echoes through his mind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 12:19:27 am
'Oh, hello Schmoe. Been a while. Mind telling me what's got you all hot and bothered?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 12:21:02 am
I do not mind you doing what is necessary to sustain your pale, miserable life. That ends when you choose Chaos, he says, perfectly enunciating the capital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 12:26:37 am
'But Schmoe, these are your best buds! I should think you'd be positively giddy to hear I was joining the club.'

Starkey punctuates his mental sentence with a snort of disgust.

'But no, I assure you I have no intention of throwing my lot into this 'chaos' business.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 12:28:47 am
"Otik...do you know how to make friends that don't betray you?" asks Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 12:30:31 am
You really have no understanding. These are just as much my 'best buds' as the Diomedians are yours. I am no servant of Tzeentch, the Chaos God of Hope, of Khorne, the Chaos God of Honour, of Nurgle, the Chaos God of Love, or Slaanesh, the Chaos God of Joy. No. I am the servant of Malal, Chaos God of the Destruction of the Chaos Gods. And with every step closer to that symbol of Chaos, you further taint your soul and remove any hope you may have of salvation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 12:40:10 am
At the daemon's words, Starkey instinctively takes a step back, and curses.

'How the clop are you supposed to be fighting them if you can't even get close to something they've touched without dying?'



 - - - - - -

"Wot do ye mean, lit'l one? They are nae so much yer friend if they betray ye."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 12:44:52 am
Hmm, I believe one of your general's has something to say on this subject...ah, here it is. "Statistically, you will almost certainly die when assaulting a well-maintained fortress with a competent commander. You must strive to make your death useful.". You keep killing them until you become no better than them, and hope that the ones who come after you will do the same.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 12:49:00 am
Starkey continues to back away from the symbol.

'He'd obviously never heard of sabotage. Or stealth, for that matter. So you keep killing as many of them as you can, until you die. then somepony else comes along and does the same thing, and all the while the other side is doing the exact same thing. An eternal stalemate. So how do you tip the scales in your favor? What's your trump card?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 12:52:19 am
What 'trump card'? The war continues. Forever. It will never end until one side or both are completely annihilated.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 12:53:05 am
((i'm going to bed...I can't do the stay-up-til-five thing anymore...or at least for a week or two.))

"I mean...I mean...zzzzzzzzzzzzzz..." Lilac falls asleep on Otik, tired from all that she's seen, and all that food she ate.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 01:43:00 am
Starkey exits the room, locking it securely behind him.

'That's no way to fight a war. You've got to have some strategy beond just 'kill more uf them than they kill of us'. '

He leaves the barracks, heading down the hallway towards the residential quarter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Starnight on December 06, 2011, 01:58:34 am
((Wow. A few days of not having enough time to read this, and the thread explodes... My brain hurts from all the RP I've had to read...))

Starnight's Journal

Well, I'd be lying if I said that I'd kept a journal/diary before, so what I write here might not make sense. Anyway, I just want to say, I got to Glitterglen today. Apparently they just finished up a trial, which worries me. Hopefully this place won't turn out so much like home. I've heard there have been cases of daemonic possession, and there were a few murders. I won't judge this place by the past, because the past is the past. Which is why I came here in the first place. To forget the past... (here there are a few water marks) I'm going to take a nap, so... goodnight... book/journal/diary thing... It feels weird saying goodnight to a book...

((If I should make any corrections, please tell me, and I will gladly make them.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 03:34:17 am
What would you have us do? Would you do as Ingest did, proclaim that there are no gods and lead an army to wipe out all who claimed belief in them? He thought that would wipe them out, but it only made them stronger. Your only weapon is blind faith. And every piece of knowledge you receive takes that away from you.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 03:44:31 am
'I... I don't know. But there has to be something. Now if you don't mind, I have other business to attend to.'

Starkey locates the door to Abel's quarters, and knocks.


"Sir Abel, are you in? It's urgent."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 03:51:18 am
It was just after this that I recieved another piece in the puzzle. I had gone back to my quarters, and I met there Starkey, disturbing Schmutz from his labour (probably a nap, truth be told), and trying to get to me. I walked up and tapped Starkey on the back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 03:53:56 am
Starkey wheels on the interloper, only to come face-to-face with the Commissar.

"Ah, there you are."

He lowers his voice, almost to a whisper.

"There's been another incident... another sigil."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 04:05:08 am
This was another bit of bad news, but it would eventually reveal another clue to the identity of the traitor, so I guess it was good too.

"Where is it?" I asked, motioning to Schmutz to get the torches.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 04:21:00 am
"Crest Fire's office, just off the barracks."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 04:27:39 am
"Right," I said with conviction. I motioned to Schmutz to follow with the lit torch, and I followed Starkey down. We got to the room, and went in. The sigil of Chaos was there, and I approached. Somepony had carved it into the stone wall. The fire wouldn't destroy this. By this point, a couple of guards had approached in wondering, and I sent one of them for a pick. If we couldn't burn it, we could break it down, at least.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 04:34:45 am
"This doesn't make any sense... I was here in this room the day before the murders, and that wall was as bare as it had always been. But... the smooth lines, the depth of the carvings... this should have taken weeks to make."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 04:37:09 am
"Chaos rarely deigns to make sense, Captain. There is no reasoning with these types. Only purging them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 04:50:14 am
'...Is this colt serious? He actually intends to fight without knowing a damn thing about his enemy?'

"Look, I'm not exactly up to speed on this whole Chaos thing. Who are these four gods, exactly, and how do they relate to the daemons we've encountered?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 04:58:23 am
"Very well." I said, motioning Schmutz closer.

"The first Chaos God is Khorne. He is the lord of anger, death, war, battle, and honour. His followers seek only to spill as much blood as possible. The second is Tzeentch. He is the lord of magic, change, plotting, planning, and hope. His followers seek only to brew as much chaos in the Principality as possible. The third is Nurgle. He is the lord of disease, decay, rot, and love. His followers seek to spread as much disease as possible, giving to people the 'gifts' of Grandfather Nurgle. The fourth is Slaanesh. He is the lady of gluttony, lust, pain, perfection and pleasure. His followers seek to perfect themselves in everything, from gluttony and lust to war, from torture to sex."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 05:02:23 am
"Standard fare, but each one has one sphere that seems... out of place. Honor? Hope? Love? Pleasure? These hardly sound like like the domains of daemons."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 05:07:22 am
"If I may interrupt?" came that familiar voice behind me. Well, at least something was going right today.

"Captain, what you call daemons would be better called creatures of the warp. They feed on the emotions of all sentient beings. Indeed, Slaanesh was formed by the Zebra long ago, when they ruled the world. The Chaos Gods are merely those daemons who have been given enough food to expand to such power." continued the Inquisitor as she came into the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 05:11:59 am
"Officer Istlig?"

He has long since come to forgive Istlig for the beating incident, on account of her being posessed at the time. But that doesn't stop him from being just a little bit... wary around her.

"Since when are you an expert in the daemonic?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 05:22:19 am
Some may question your right to destroy ten billion ponies. Those who understand realise that you have no right to let them live!


I've always been wary around Inquisitors. In part, it was because of their being above the law. It simply has no hold on them. But most of it was their supreme authority. If they so wanted, a simple flick of their finger would sign my death warrant, and worse. I would be simply gone from every record imaginable. For they held the power of Exterminatus. To simply destroy a fortress, leaving no record, no trace. None of its works, of its ponies, would survive. So I do admit I flinched a bit as Vail drew her inquisitorial rosette, her badge of office. To his credit, Starkey remained still.

It was a simple thing. A capital I, with a skull at the center. It still scared the buck out of me, I can tell you that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 05:25:58 am
Oh, that's rich. An Inquisitor who can't even shield her mind from a single daemon?

"I see. Is 'Istlig' even your real name?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 05:33:30 am
((Dammit. Finally found the quote I really wanted.

I carry with me an Inquisitorial Seal. It is a small, unassuming object contained in a neat box of Pluvian obsidian. It is a modest thing. Relatively plain, adorned with a single motif and a simple motto. Yet with this little object I can sign the death warrant of an entire fortress and consign a billion souls to Oblivion.))

"Of course not. Inquisitor Amberly Vail, Ordo Xenos. You should learn to keep your face calm." she said, seemingly not caring about the annoyance even I could feel starting to radiate from the captain. "Then you should learn to keep your militia clean of the heretics that have infested it. Were I an unforgiving pony, this fortress would have been consigned to the dust long before now. But I am forgiving. This place could serve a purpose, which is why I have been assigned, and why I have assigned the commissar, to clear this place out. It is a veritable den of heretics and traitors. We've tracked down three. There could be anymore from three to six more of them here, but I would be leaning towards five."

It clicked. A Khornate cult would be able to hide relatively well. The spilling of the mare's blood, the dismembering of the foals, the refusal to hide, all pointed to a Khornate cult.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 05:38:50 am
"I personally screen my ponies well before they ever make it into service, then again before promotion. It was Duchess Charity who appointed Crest Fire to his position. But I imagine you already knew that... Inquisitor."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 05:40:54 am
"Does the name 'Bokbon Shigosotil' mean anything to you? I imagine you screened him well enough."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 05:54:38 am
That strikes a nerve.

"Yes, I read her records, just like the rest. Former soldier. Exiled for desertion. She abandoned her unit to find her family after the Diomedians razed Abbeylashed. She... well, she found them alright."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 05:58:50 am
I saw Amberley unlike any other time I'd seen her. Angry, real anger was in her eyes. She backed Starkey up against a wall.

"Five years. Five years, captain. How many more did you let slip through your grasp? Two Khornate cultists in the militia's ranks, and you propose to do exactly what. I thought you were the ring leader. You certainly acted like it when you didn't even question me beyond when I said I was possessed. DID YOU EVEN CHECK? WHAT IN THE EYE WENT WRONG HERE?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 06:10:27 am
Starkey steps out from the wall, quickly backing Vail into the opposite corner.

"I didn't need to. Not after I saw the beast take hold of your body with my own eyes. Watched as it was drawn out of you. and how dare you insinuate that a mare I had called friend for years, a faithful follower of Kulet and the Sisters, would throw her lot in with the likes of hellspawn?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 06:24:42 am
"I saw the bitch bind those daemons into the amulets herself. I saw her wheel them out to those dupes, making them think they were just ordinary goods, fit for trading. You think that the duchess banned them for no reason?" She laughed. But not the laugh she had when she was happy. It was a cynical laugh, cruel sounding.

"As for the 'daemon' you saw 'dragged' from me. Schmutz, would you kindly leave the room for a moment? Go back to your quarters." Schmutz obediently did so, and I turned my face from the sigil as the whispers started.

"Rakel, if you wouldn't mind?" she said, seemingly into empty air. Suddenly her posture completely changed, and I remembered the name. It was her voice that came out, too, a voice like fingernails on a blackboard.

"Captain unsatisfied the think inquisitor does." came the voice, and the image of that strange unicorn Vail had attached to her, and the reason she'd sent Schmutz out, became clear. Green smoke belched forth from Amberley's mouth, and came to rest on Starkey's nose.

STARKEY. WHY HAVE YOU BEEN TREATING WITH A BLANK? came Schmoe's clear voice, anger clear and ready behind it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 06:30:57 am
'I don't know, what the clop is a blank? Dammit, I don't have time for this right now.'

"Who... is that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 06:40:38 am
"Her unicorn," I answered. Rakel was erratic, shall we say. Much like most unicorns used as mages extensively, I guess. But that's by the by. Rakel was the only one I had much to deal with over my long career, much to their delight.

A blank is somepony who doesn't have any magic in them, not even the ambient stuff that even earthponies and pegasi have. They act as sort of a vaccuum, sucking in all the magic. I was trying to yell at you all through this conversation, but he prevented that. Best watch out for him, the Inquisitor brought him here for a reason.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 06:51:22 am
'Her' unicorn, he said. Starkey didn't like the implication behind those words. So Vail was incompetent and sick and twisted. Lovely.

"Aye, but who is he? I've never seen him before."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 06:56:04 am
((Aaand we're going to have to pick this up again tomorrow. God, it's nearly seven over here! good thing I don't need to be anywhere tomorrow. Goodnight!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 07:03:51 am
"Not a him," I said. "She's probably less crazy than usual, if you haven't seen her."

Get us out of here. That unicorn is more powerful than any I've seen in a long time. Khenal would have a tough time matching her, and no chance at all in her chosen discipline. If she detects us, we're in a world of pain, hurt, and eventually death.


((Side note, I've finally worked out a way to end the hiatus of Friesden with this side story, as well as bumping off a few side characters that really need to meet their maker.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 06, 2011, 11:03:49 am
New ponies.
The Inquisitor, Amberly Vail http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Amberly%20Vail%2C%20Inquisitor.png
Psycho's lovely daughter, Lilac Joker http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Lilac.png

Charity's Journal 22nd Slate 99

   I went down to the tailor's shop today to have a button sewn back onto one of Cryptson's shirts, but the tailor had locked the door and refused to speak to me.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Onol%20Lulargulnas.png)

Chairy's Journal 24th Slate 99

   A horrible sound has come from the deep. The militia is on edge ready for anything the servants of Discord may throw at them.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Ned%20Geshakas.png)

Addendum: Well that was certainly anti-climatic, according to the reports I've gotten the creature came out through a small mining tunnel into a waiting ambush, Falcata bucked it once and then the marksponies fired on it. It went down without a fight. It was Istbar an unicorn from the Fortress Guard who fired the killing shot. Falcata got caught in some blast of boiling stuff, but it seems her armor protected her.

Addendum to the Addendum: Falcata has collapsed. Ironya is rushing her to the hospital as I write.

Addendum to the Addendum to the Addendum: Falcata took a quick nap in the Hospital, woke up, claimed she was fine and got up to go patrol, as she was supposed to do. I hope she's really okay.


(She isn't, http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Falcata%27s%20Stomach.png)

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Entire%20fight..png)

Charity's Journal 26th Slate 99

Yesterday, the new Commissar informed me that Kil and her two colts had been murdered, and that Captain Crest Fire had also died and was probably connected. He said poor Nanges's and Bobrur's bodies had been arranged a sign of Chaos. He burnt their bodies. I'll set up a memorial for the two boys.

Lilac Joker was fortunate enough to be spared from this madness, however, she is now orphaned, I hope some pony will take her in.

However, with Psycho and  Crest Fire dead, this puts me in an uncomfortable situation. My family only has two members of our personal guard left, Madush and Osal. And that isn't enough to protect me and my family at all times. Cryptson has been increasingly paranoid about the assassin, he doesn't allow the foals the freedom they need as children. We need even more than ever to catch this assassin. But in the meantime I need more guards, but I don't know who I can trust.

(
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Steel%20Crossbow.png)
)
Charity’s Journal 8th Felsite 99

I was down by the arena today, and saw Commander Starkey cleaning blood off the floor, it seems he had been fighting captured curdles in there. Or at least that's what I think those bloody meat piles were. I saw Falcata there as well. She looked sick to her stomach. For a soldier she has an strangely low tolerance for blood and gore.


(How lethal is a rotten stomach in dwarf fortress, and can it be successfully treated? Should I try to hurt Falcata, so she'll go back to the the Doctors?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 01:34:43 pm
Addendum to the Addendum: Falcata has collapsed. Ironya is rushing her to the hospital as I write.

Addendum to the Addendum to the Addendum: Falcata took a quick nap in the Hospital, woke up, claimed she was fine and got up to go patrol, as she was supposed to do. I hope she's really okay.[/i]

(She isn't, http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Falcata%27s%20Stomach.png)

((Uh-oh, that doesn't look good.  :)))

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(How lethal is a rotten stomach in dwarf fortress, and can it be successfully treated? Should I try to hurt Falcata, so she'll go back to the the Doctors?)

((Not sure actually.  I had something similar happen to some ponies after a forgotten beast attack where their pancreas was rotten.  They lived for some months before I got bored with the fort and stopped playing it.  I don't know if it's fatal or not (I think not actually).  You can try injuring her anyway if you want, I could just say it was a training accident or something.  I've never actually had a doctor perform surgery on rot before, so I don't know if it'll do any good.

If she dies slowly and horribly, I can roll with that.  If she dies getting reinjured, I can roll with that.  Or she can live.  We'll see, hehe.

I'll post her journal update when I get off work and have time to read the last few pages.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 02:14:59 pm
'Remember the trial. Vail was there, and Abel has at least read the reports by now. They know. If either of them wanted to do anything, they already would have.'

"Oh, right. My apologies, Miss Rakel."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 02:37:29 pm
Unless she assumes that you were doing what she was, or didn't have her blank here. We need to leave.

"Thankee kindly, taskmaster." was Rakel's response. With a sound like the rushing of wind, her presence disappeared. Schmutz wandered back into the room at this time, clutching an amulet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 03:58:23 pm
"Wait... honour. You said one of the god Khorne's spheres was honour?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 04:05:07 pm
"Yes, I did. It clicked for you, didn't it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 04:09:11 pm
((I'll wait until the conversation is done to change the day. Everypony cool with that?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 04:14:19 pm
((Cool.))

"Aye. Oftentimes, when we had come particularly close to exorcising one of the daemons, they would compel their host to commit suicide, invariably with a bladed instrument bearing that very phrase."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 04:21:24 pm
"More unnecessary proof that the cult here is Khornate." She sighed as she said this. "Well, at least it doesn't appear that we're dealing with anything too complicated."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 04:27:05 pm
"Do you believe the cult was attracted to Glitterglen by the frequent daemonic incursions, or they somehow caused it themselves?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 04:35:56 pm
"Hopefully the former, for the latter means we may be outgunned."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 04:41:14 pm
((Derp. You''ll have to remind me what latter and former mean.))

Okay. I'm taking a risk with this, but it might be important.

"One more thing... there was a name that came up. I didn't think much of it at the time, but... what is Malal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 04:43:52 pm
((Latter is second, former is first.))

The name didn't ring any bells with me, and it seemed the Inquisitor didn't recognise it either. She shook her head, and said "I don't know. Presumably it is part of the name of a daemon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 04:47:47 pm
"I see..."

"Now, how are we going to get rid of this thing? I can hardly stand to be near it, let alone get close enough to take a chisel to it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 04:50:19 pm
"Which is why we have Schmutz here." With that oblique reference to my aide's Blankness, she waited for the guard I'd sent out for a pick to come in. It wasn't that long a wait.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 05:20:13 pm
((hello? what happened?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 05:22:42 pm
"Would anypony prefer to do the honors?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 05:33:40 pm
"I'll take a swing at it," I said. Grasping the pick in my mouth, I raised it and swung it down into the wall. It started to crack. I swung another two times, and the wall broke down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 05:52:29 pm
((Looking at the map, the walls of the squad leaders' offices are all one tile thick. You would've broken into one of the stockpiles.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 06:25:59 pm
((I shall take the liberty of having Lilac behind the wall, if only to get the ball rolling again.))

As the wall crumbles to rubble, Lilac is seen behind said wall. She doesn't even flinch.
"Oh...look. A wall crumbled..." Says Lilac, not even caring.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 06:34:24 pm
The three ponies are now staring out into the hallway that leads past the barracks. Otik pokes her head in around the corner.

"Uhh... g'afternoon?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 06:38:43 pm
"Hi. The wall fell." Says Lilac, not even caring.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 06:46:34 pm
"Oh uh, hello Lilac! We just finished getting rid of the, uh, you-know-what in your papa's room. We just need to clean up, and fill in the old wall with stone brick, and you can sleep here. How does that sound?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 06:51:01 pm
"I don't care..." Says Lilac, completely desensitized to everything around her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 08:01:53 pm
((hello?!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 08:39:20 pm
((Preparing for full-blown Nurgle gut rot death here))

Falcata's Diary - 24th Slate, 99

Today was probably one of the roughest days I've had here at Glitterglen.  Mostly because I was nearly killed.

Early this morning the lower halls were filled with shrieks of terror.  I happened to be stationed down there at the time, so I was the first to investigate.  Something, no, a monster had come from the caverns below and was headed toward Glitterglen.  For a moment I stood in awe and terror before my training did its job and I regained my nerve.  Either that or the other guards arriving, anyway.

Without really thinking I charged at the monster, an enormous parody of the leeches that nearly drowned me not that long ago.  I can't take much credit though, I only managed a single buck before it went down from a hail of bolts.  At least I think that's all I did.  I don't even know if the blow connected, because seconds later everything was engulfed by some sort of strange fog.  It all gets kind of hazy at that point.

I remember waking up in the hospital.  The doctors told me I'd been there a few hours, but they didn't find anything wrong with me, and I felt fine, so I went back to my post.  I guess I got lucky.  If the rest of the fortress guard hadn't showed up when they did, I might not be here right now.  At least nopony was really hurt.

28th Slate, 99

Despite my fears, we haven't seen anything more of the monsters from below, and I think everypony is breathing a little easier.  I'm a bit disappointed that I haven't had any opportunity to interact with the commissar yet, but I'm sure he's busy enough doing things far too important to involve me.

The day wasn't completely boring though.  My stomach has been hurting me all day, but it's eased off a little bit right now at least.  I didn't eat much this afternoon, maybe I'm just hungry right now.  I'll ask Kris to bring a little something back for me when she goes to dinner tonight.

8th Felsite, 99

I feel terrible.  The stomach pains have been coming and going for over a week now, and I haven't gotten much sleep.  I'm starting to get a bit worried... I was up all night last night vomitting, and I think I saw some blood in it.  I haven't eaten anything in over a day.  I threw up my breakfast almost as soon as I ate it, and I had no appetite for lunch.

Captain Isos has had me on lighter duty lately at least.  I think it's something to do with regulations and injuries.  I couldn't be more grateful though.  She had me stationed at the arena today, but after having seen Captain Starkey fight before I knew I wouldn't be needed to help.  I did offer to help him clean up afterward though, which was a mistake.  The duchess wandered by as the captain was finishing one of his duels, and the nausea struck me then worse than it had yet.  It was all I could do to avoid vomitting right in front of her. 

It would be a tragedy to embarrass myself in front of Captain Starkey, much less the duchess.  Or, heaven forbid, embarrass either of them in front of the commissar if he happened by (the last few strokes are jumbled and illegible).

The pain is getting worse again... if I don't feel better in the morning I think I'll go by the hospital again and see if they have anything they can give me.  I wouldn't want to be off duty for any reason if the commissar were to check up on me.  I know he wouldn't let a stomach virus keep him down.


********

Kris' Diary -8th Felsite, 99

I'm really worried about mom.  She hasn't eaten much in days, and she hasn't said much either.  She keeps telling me she's okay, but I'm still worried.  She always keeps her armor on its stand when she gets home at night, but today she just left it in a pile by the door.  She sent me to dinner alone again tonight, saying she wasn't hungry.  All she's done since she got home was sit at her desk and whisper to herself, rubbing her belly.  I think she was even crying at one point.  Mom has always been the toughest pony I've ever known.  I'm really worried.

It's days like this I wish dad was here.  He would know what to do.


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However, with Psycho and  Crest Fire dead, this puts me in an uncomfortable situation. My family only has two members of our personal guard left, Madush and Osal. And that isn't enough to protect me and my family at all times. Cryptson has been increasingly paranoid about the assassin, he doesn't allow the foals the freedom they need as children. We need even more than ever to catch this assassin. But in the meantime I need more guards, but I don't know who I can trust.

((I'm guessing this is somehow related to events from long ago, but how are you handling this?  Just claiming that two of the fortress guard are Charity's personal guard?    Falcata may be about to die of horrible gut rot, but even if she didn't I'm guessing she wouldn't be up for such a position.  Charity doesn't really know her, and Falcata would never volunteer for such a position.  She's a good little pony that takes what jobs are handed to her and doesn't push for anything more.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 09:09:40 pm
((Waiting three hours is long enough.))
Lilac sighs. "I don't really care about anything anymore..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 09:33:46 pm
Falcata continues to plod along toward Captain Isos' office.  The pain hadn't gotten any better, and she wanted to tell the captain in person that she wouldn't be able to work today.  The way she felt, she'd probably be in the hospital all day.

At the sound of a wall collapsing, she trots with what speed she can muster in its direction.  She spots a filly sitting alone next to a pile of debris.  With some effort, she asks,"
Wh-what's going on here?"

Edit: Typos...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 09:36:40 pm
((thank you for continuing the scene!))

"Oh. Nothing really. Starkey just knocked down a wall in front of me. I don't really care." Says Lilac, without a hint of emotion in her voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 09:40:14 pm
((Yeah, figured I needed to get a bit more involved around here, heh))

She stares in puzzlement for a moment.

"Captain Starkey?  Why would he do that?"

She peers through the new hole in the wall.

((Looks like Dsarker is offline at the moment))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 09:42:52 pm
((Wrestling my Christmas tree. You know the ones with the built-in lights? Yeah, they're a pain in the ass.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 09:47:20 pm
((Impending Doom grasps the Christmas Tree by the right lower branch with his right hand!  The Christmas Tree breaks the grip of Impending Doom's right hand on the right lower branch!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 10:06:23 pm
((brb for an hour after this))
"I don't know...I don't care. My family is dead. Leave me alone." Growls Lilac, stomping outside to sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 10:16:47 pm
That struck something deep inside Falcata.  Had she gotten to the monster from a few weeks ago too late?  She hadn't heard anything about anypony else getting hurt, much less this filly's parents getting killed.  She resisted the urge to chase after the filly as another jolt of pain rolled through her.  She grunted and turned back to the hole.  Maybe Captain Starkey would know what she was talking about, if he really was behind this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 10:40:40 pm
I was still standing there, panting, as another militia pony came poking in. She wore a curious look on her face. At least, until she saw me, and the look turned to excitement.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 11:00:50 pm
"C-Commissar!  I didn't realize you were working here."

Her expression changes to obvious discomfort.

"I-I'm not interrupting anything important am I?"

She cursed herself inwardly.  Of course the commissar was doing something important.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 11:03:03 pm
((Impending Doom grasps the Christmas tree by the cord with his left hand! Impending Doom bashes the outlet in the socket with the Christmas tree's cord! Christmas tree, tree has been struck down.))

"Lilac, hun, come back!"

Otik trots off after the filly. Starkey extends a hoof, helping Falcata over the rubble.


"Nothing of the sort, seargent. We were just finishing up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 11:09:01 pm
She nods, accepting the hoof and crossing the fallen debris.

"Thank you, captain.  Can I be of assistance?"  She glances to the commissar.  "Anything at all, commissar.  Err, sir."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 11:10:54 pm
Inwardly, I groaned. Another one of the fans. Though maybe, since she was in the guard, she could prove useful at something.

"We'll need to get some stone to finish this up, sergeant. If you could get us some, we can finish."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 11:12:14 pm
"Auntie," Lilac says, stopping in her tracks, "Other than you and starkey, nopony really cares about me. What's the point in caring about anything at all if everything dies anyway?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 11:16:21 pm
"Yes, sir."  She attempts a salute, but it comes off horribly sloppy as a jolt of pain runs through her gut, barely making it half way through the gesture.  She backs away and lowers her head.  "S-sorry sir, I'll get right on it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 11:17:23 pm
This was exactly where my reputation got me. Scaring ponies into working beyond their endurance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 06, 2011, 11:20:34 pm
((Guess who's back?  I see we're getting some warhammer up in this mug, interesting.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 11:22:41 pm
((thetyler is back? :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 11:24:55 pm
((Yay, Khenal's back!))

Falcata turns away from Captain Starkey and Commissar Abel and gingerly steps past the rubble.  She heads for the stone stockpile.  How much stone would they need?  She probably wouldn't be able to carry much alone, not like this.  Maybe she could get somepony to help.  She cringed at another stab of pain.  At least she had an excuse if she ran into Captain Isos.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 11:29:14 pm
"I... am nae some kind o' scholar, Lilac. I cannae give ye a real fancy answer f'r that, but... I guess we care 'bout things cos it makes us happy, cos it makes life easier t'live. An sure, everythin' dies eventually, an' it hurts when y'lose somethin' y'care about. But isnae havin' t' be sad every once in awhile better n' bein miserable all th' time, cos ye got nothin' t' care about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 11:34:52 pm
"I don't know...why not just end it? What's the point in going on if there's no family left to support you?" ponders Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 11:38:21 pm
Khenal, we've even got an incharacter reason for you to start back up. Just wait a tick.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 11:39:09 pm
"What's the point in going on, young miss? Because that is the joy of life, to die knowing your task is complete."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 06, 2011, 11:40:59 pm
((Yep, I'll be watching until somepony shows in the hospital, or something else happens to force Khenal awake))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 11:43:18 pm
"You're not helping, you know that, mister?" says Lilac rudely to the Commissar.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 11:46:01 pm
"Me? Why would I be helping you, filly? As much as I'd love to stay and talk with you, we've got a cult of murderers to track down here. If you don't mind not haranguing my aide, we can leave now." I said. "Come on, Schmutz."

"Bye, little miss." he said in a phlegmatic tone as he followed me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 06, 2011, 11:46:34 pm
Otik lays down on the floor next to Lilac, eye-level with her.

"Family or no, y' got folk who're more'n willing t' support ye. Me, Stars..."

She struggles a bit, searching for names.

"Auntie Friesden, Uncle Khenal... tha' poncy git with th' red sash..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 11:49:49 pm
"Leave me alone!" Yells Lilac, dashing in the direction of the hospital.

((Gee, what could she want in the hospital? I SURE hope she doesn't hurt herself on the SHARP OBJECTS in there! HINT HINT))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 11:50:43 pm
"Schmutz, what is that amulet you've got there?" I asked. I was more than just curious. Amberley had told me about the cursed amulets that had been sent out, and I wasn't ready to get a new one on just yet.

"Somepony left this on your desk, sir. It's addressed to you."

This got my hoof tingling, and I continued on to the hospital. There, Khenal and Friesden, the other two major possibilities in the investigation, were in a coma.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 06, 2011, 11:54:40 pm
((Yep, I'll be watching until somepony shows in the hospital, or something else happens to force Khenal awake))

((Falcata may be joining Khenal in the hospital soon, but I doubt she'll be waking him))

Falcata returns to the collapsed wall, pushing a small cart of stones with her magic.  She grunts as the cart comes to a halt and steps aside, wiping some sweat from her forehead.  She dearly hoped this would be enough, nopony seemed to be in much of a hurry to help her at the stockpile.

"Commissar?  I brought...," she begins before noticing everypony is missing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 06, 2011, 11:55:00 pm
Physically, I lay in a hospital bed.  Mentallly, though?  I was nowhere near Glitterglen.  I twitch ocasionally, mumbling nonsense.

"Broken..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 06, 2011, 11:56:42 pm
Lilac reaches the hospital, ignoring Khenal, sees a scalpel and tries to grab it, but Otik snatches it away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 06, 2011, 11:57:37 pm
I walked in, Schmutz behind me, and as I did so, one of the ponies, Friesden as I was later to learn, woke up.

"I...finally...understand...my...father..." she said in short pants, and then fell asleep again. I turned to Khenal, and watched as he woke from what appeared to be the same nightwoman.

This was not the best sign I'd had.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 06, 2011, 11:58:41 pm
"Wrong..."

"Wrong!  No, what?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 12:00:55 am
"No. I won't let ye throw yerself away like that. Ye really are a foal if y'think dyin' is gonna make it all better."

((Okay, you guys need to slooow dooown. I had to totally rewrite my post three times, I got ninja'd by so much.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 12:02:55 am
"I WANT TO DIE!" Screams Lilac, trying to get the scalpel back from Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 12:03:03 am
I walked over to Friesden, and touched her lightly. She shivered at the touch, and woke.

"What happened?" I asked her. She reached up to me and wore a grin I recognised. The grin of somepony I'd hoped never to see again. Emeli Duboir. I slammed her down without thinking. This was very, very bad.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 12:04:08 am
I look around, wild-eyed and terrified.

"No, it's still broken!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 12:05:19 am
Falcata looks around briefly, but there is no sign of Captain Starkey or the commissar.  She glanced at the pile of stones, which didn't seem to be going anywhere and decided that it would have to do.  She needed to find Captain Isos and explain that she wouldn't be showing up for guard duty.  She clenched her teeth as she started toward the captain's office again.  The way she felt, she wouldn't be showing up for duty for a week.

((You know, I sort of had a feeling you'd work Emeli into this somehow. :) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 12:05:32 am
"Schmutz! This mare needs to be tied down. Something very, very bad, has happened."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 12:07:00 am
"What are you talking about? What's wrong with her?"

Otik discards the scalpel and siezes Lilac around the waist, dragging her away from any more sharp instruments.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 12:08:46 am
Lilac bites Otik, trying to force her to let her go.
"SOMEPONY, KILL ME, PLEASE!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 12:09:03 am
"We're not dealing purely with Khornate daemons and cultists. There's a fething pleasure-cult here, too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 12:10:18 am
"Why are we conscious?!   We should not be conscious yet!"

My horn flickers and sparks, as a spell starts to form and constantly fails.

"Leave it alone!  No, let me do it!  Stop it!  We all know we should be unconscious, stop interfering!  You stop!  I don't trust you to do it right!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 12:12:54 am
"Otik, get her out of here!"

She obliges, hoisting the flailing filly into the air and carrying her out the door.

"What have they done to her, Abel?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 12:14:50 am
Falcata reaches Captain Isos' office and knocks at the door a few times.  She's starting to get a little light headed now... she hoped she wouldn't have to insist much.  She hated asking for time off, but if she was on duty like this she could be a danger to somepony.

"Captain?  Are you there?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 12:16:33 am
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!" Shrieks Lilac as she's carried out the door.

***********
((Hope you don't mind, Khenal.))
Meanwhile, inside Khenal's mind, a tiny spark of Carrot is still inside.
'BUT I KNOW WHAT I'M DOING!' Hollers Carrot at Khenal inside his mind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 12:17:54 am
"She's been fed upon... By a daemon of Slaanesh. Imagine all the worldly pleasures you can. Now know this: they are only dust, compared to even one of the pleasures given by Slaanesh. She's become addicted."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 12:20:23 am
(("Well then I guess..."))

((Starkey pulls a pair of dark spectacles from his brestplate, setting them on his face.))

(("This is an intervention."))

(("YYYEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHH"))

((I just had to do that. :P Entirely non-canon, of course.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 12:23:40 am
In my mindscape, Carrot is shouted down by a multitude of Khenals.  There are hundreds of Khenals, each vying for control, each trying to fix the shattered mirror.  And each is unhappy with Carrot.

'No!  We all know you did this, and we will not let you harm us further!'


"No!  We all know you did this, and we will not let you harm us further!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 12:30:55 am
'THAT BUCKING DOES IT! MOVE IT, YA STUPID BUNCH AH FOALS!!!' Yells Carrot, smashing his way through the crowd until he finds the mirror. He reaches for the shattered pieces and...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 12:32:43 am
Otik lands a ways down the hall. She spins Lilac around to look her in the eye, and with a free hoof, smacks her across the face.

"D'you think if you just off yerself right now, Luna will take pity on ye, and let ye through th' gates t' see yer family? Well it don' work like that! Y'have ta work hard t'earn yer place among th'ancestors! Ye havenae even begun, an' I refuse t' let ye give up afore ye've even begun ta try!"


((Yeah, I think I'd be pretty lousy at trying to talk someone down off a ledge. :())
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 12:35:30 am
'No!'

"No!"

My horn glows, and this time the spell fires off flawlessly as chains appear to bind Carrot and drag him from the mirror.

'You broke us, Carrot!  We will not allow you to fracture us further!'


"You broke us, Carrot!  We will not allow you to fracture us further!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 12:37:58 am
Receiving no answer, Falcata pushes against the door, but it is secured in place.  Perhaps the captain was at her post already?  She groaned audibly at the thought that Captain Isos would have been several floors up right now.

She takes a few deep breaths and heads for the stairwell.  The pain has subsided slightly, thankfully.  She began to reconsider... perhaps she should just return home, get into uniform and show up where she was expected.  That would take... fifteen minutes?  She might make it on time...

Yeah... that's what the commissar would do.  She didn't want to let him down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 12:38:43 am
Lilac cries from being hit, struggling to break free.

********************

'...I have not...come this far...to be locked away now...YOU WILL LET ME GO, YOU INSIGNIFICANT PIECE OF DIOMEDIAN FILTH! YOU WANT TO BE STARK BUCKING RAVING MAD, FINE! JUST LEAVE ME THE BUCK OUT OF IT!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 12:44:07 am
'Fine!'

"Fine!"

The chains dissapate as Carrot feels the familiar expulsionary force upon him.  The Khenals all yell differing things at Carrot as the force increases: some yell for him to move on and accept the reward that surely awaits him, others damn him as worse than Cockroach, some simply say nothing.  However, they all wish for Carrot to leave.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 12:51:12 am
Carrot resists it and kicks one of the clones in the head, knocking it to the ground, likely out cold. He then gallops to the mirror while the clones were distracted and picks up one of the pieces, trying to fit it back into the mirror.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 12:52:50 am
"Ye think yer th' only one who's ever lost anythin'? I've lost so much more than you could ever imagine! I had a son! A beautiful little colt of my own, and they took him from me! I'll never get t' see him smile, hear him laugh, watch him grow. He won't even remember my face by now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 12:55:34 am
Lilac simply shuts down, mentally and physically. She goes limp in Otik's grasp, now in a coma.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 01:00:57 am
'Leave it alone!  You don't know how it should be!'

"Leave it alone!  You don't know how it should be!"

My horn glows brighter as the force continues to increase.  The multitude advances on Carrot to remove the mirror shard from him and then remove him from my mindscape.  Some apologize, some sneer, but it is obvious that none of them will allow Carrot to try to put the Mirror back together.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 01:04:08 am
'Oh, look...it's a vase! OOPS!' Says Carrot sarcastically as he smashes it. 'Every time any of you try to stop me, I BREAK ANOTHER OBJECT! I'M SURE YOU WOULDN'T WANT THAT!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 01:12:41 am
'OUT!'

"OUT!"

My horn flares brilliantly as the force begins to rapidly increase, showing no sign of stopping.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 01:13:13 am
"I... I can do this..." Falcata mutters to herself as she levitates her chanfron onto her head, completing her barding.  She was glad Kris was off with her friends right now.  The filly was worried about her, and she knew it, and it would only upset her to see her mother struggling like this.

She grabs her hammer and levitates it to its sling.  The weight was all but crushing as she took a few uneasy steps from the room into the hallway, nearly stumbling into somepony.  She apologizes awkwardly and staggers off toward her post.  Where was she posted again... the caverns?  Or was it the entrance to the surface?  No... that was next week.  She groans audibly and heads up toward the surface.  It would be easier going back down if she went to the wrong place first.

She was late... putting on her armor had taken three times longer than she anticipated.  She just hoped the captain and commissar would forgive her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 01:19:46 am
'Khenal. Think about Friesden.' says Carrot, voice fading.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 01:28:03 am
'Friesden...'

"Friesden..."


***************

Not sure if it's clear or not, but Khenal has been saying his dialogue in his head and in reality as well.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 01:31:37 am
"Damnation." I said. "We need the Inquisitor here. I can't tell how far gone she is, whether she's worth saving, or if it's even possible to be done."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 01:33:50 am
((Yeah, I got that.))
'You love friesden. Go to her...please.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 07, 2011, 01:34:54 am
((I'm guessing this is somehow related to events from long ago, but how are you handling this?  Just claiming that two of the fortress guard are Charity's personal guard?    Falcata may be about to die of horrible gut rot, but even if she didn't I'm guessing she wouldn't be up for such a position.  Charity doesn't really know her, and Falcata would never volunteer for such a position.  She's a good little pony that takes what jobs are handed to her and doesn't push for anything more.))

(Allow me to refresh everyone's memories on this. During Starkey's attempt to have then Countess Charity arrested, he sent Otik and three others from the Skyguard to get her from her bed. As you may recall Lieutenant Carrot intervened and defended her against great odds, and at immense personal risk. For his actions she made him a Captain, and split the Skyguard in half. One half was made of Otik and the three that followed her to arrest Charity, and the other Captain Carrot, and the other three, which did not attempt to capture her. (which now retroactively included Crest Fire.) While I don't think it was ever directly stated, Charity's motivation with creating this new squad, "The Wavy Passes," and moving Carrot in across the hall from her family, was to make sure she had one group she could count on as loyal to her if Starkey and Otik ever tried anything like that again. However, ever since the assassin struck she's been using Carrot's squad as her personal retinue of guards. However, someone, (The Master) keeps killing them all off, and she's only got two left.)

(Also, I think I'm going to try and re-injure Falcata, I'll try a short drop, (2z should be enough) and we can say she took a tumble down the stairs. Believable with the amount of pain she must be in. Assuming the fall doesn't kill her, it shouldn't, she'll wind up in the hospital where, she can die on the operating table as they try to remove her stomach. Sounds like FUN.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 01:42:08 am
((What can I say, I am a psychopath at heart...seriously though, it adds the kind of drama that is perfect for stories, so that when Khenal gets to the point when I start killing certain ponies off, it will all fall into place.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 01:43:17 am
'We can't, it'll hurt her!  We need her help!  We just need to calm down and...'  The multitude begins arguing, though several Khenals simply take up defensive positions around the shattered Mirror.

"But Friesden can help us!  We'll figure something out.  We don't want to hurt her with us like this!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 01:46:37 am
Friesden leaped up at his voice. She sent me flying with some force I didn't think she could possibly have in that frame. She walked over to Khenal, a predatory grin on her face. She said "Oh, but I want you to, Khenal dearest."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 01:50:41 am
'DON'T LISTEN TO HER! PLEASE...GRRRRRRR!! MY NAME IS CAPTAIN PSYCHO CARROT THE SECOND, AND BY THE POWER BESTOWED UPON ME BY THE PRINCESS, I COMMAND YOU TO CEASE AND DESIST! ALL OF YOU WILL SHUT THE BUCK UP!!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 01:51:00 am
The legion falls silent in mid-argument as Friesden's voice echoes through my mindscape.

'Friesden?'


"Friesden?"

The shards quiver for a moment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 01:55:12 am
I give up...buck it, i'm leaving...go ahead and...die, hell if I care...' Carrot vanishes, leaving to claim his reward.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 02:03:49 am
((Ah yes, I do recall all of that now.  Didn't realize that you inducted them from he militia instead of the fortress guard.

As for the surgery, Fun indeed!  Interestingly enough, based on what I'm reading in other threads, she'll probably live with a rotten stomach for a long time without noticeable ill effect.  It might cause infection and that might kill her eventually, but since she is quick to heal, probably not.  Anyway, one tumble down the stairs coming up!  We can work out the specific injuries once you try it out in game.  Hopefully it doesn't break her neck, lol.  Feel free to drop her a few times if the first go-round doesn't do the trick of breaking something.

Actually, it would be pretty hilarious if they completely removed her stomach and she recovers.  Should be possible, based on what I've read.))

Falcata hesitates at the stairwell.  She felt absolutely awful... even the thought of heading upstairs was about as unappealing as eating something right now.  She looked down the other flight of stairs, trying to stabilize her wavering vision.

She took a step forward, and it hit her.  She swallowed convulsively to try to settle her stomach, but there was nothing for it.  She clenched her jaw, but the reflex was too strong and she noisily painted the floor in front of her with her meager stomach contents.  The brief relief from the nausea was shattered as she opened her eyes, seeing a profuse amount of blood mingled in the bile.  She shook her head and spat out another gob of partially congealed blood, trying to make sense of it through blurred vision.

Something moved in the peripheral of her vision.  A red sash?  Oh, no, the commissar was looking for her because she was late!  He'd give her a flogging at the very least!  She spun to face the phantom image.


"I... uh, c-commissar I w-was...," the statement trailed off as she stepped back into the puddle and lost her footing.  With a startled shriek she slipped backward down the stairs, landing hard on each step and filling the stairwell with a chaotic cacophony of clangs of metal armor against stone steps.  As she finally comes to rest at the landing, her chanfron was catapulted from her head, bouncing around and settling steps further down.

She moans in confusion and agony for several seconds before her vision slips into blackness.


((And with that, I'm off to bed.  Reading back through that, it came out a bit more dark and twisted than I anticipated (and a lot longer to boot, it's as if I'm writing a freaking novel here), but oh well.  Curse these ponies and their tendency to make me do terrible things to them.  Oh, and I assume somepony would be kind enough to carry her off to the hospital?  Guess that'll be whoever does it in game, considering everypony is busy with the ruckus going on in the hospital right now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 02:11:24 am
"Go on Khenal," Friesden said. "Hurt me." She licked her lips.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 02:19:18 am
I recoil away from Freisden as if she had stabbed me.  A few shards begin to fuse together.

'Never!'


"Never!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 02:20:46 am
((GENTLEMEN(and Dsarker), WE NOW HAVE AN OFFICIAL IRC! CENSORED, PM ME OR ONE OF THE ACTIVE ROLEPLAYERS FOR THE LINK))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 02:33:22 am
"Hurt me!' she said again, and Schmutz tackled her from behind. "Good job, Schmutz." I said as I stood up. "Keep her down."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 07, 2011, 02:49:56 am
'Something is wrong with Freisden.  We need to sort this out quickly and help her!'

"Something is wrong with Friesden.  We need to sort this out quickly and help her!"

The Khenals begin to cooperate, slowly helping eachother assemble the Mirror.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 04:23:04 am
I took a rope from a silent guard, and tied up Friesden's legs, tying them together. I finished the knot, and put her in a corner.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 07, 2011, 10:22:34 am
Charity's Journal 23rd Felsite 99

One of our members of the guard, Falcata, has tumbled down the main stair well, the clanging of armor on stone could be heard echoing through the fortress, her right rear leg was broken in the fall, from the amount of blood it seems to be broken quite badly, however, our doctors have treated worse. An earthpony named Toltot, he works the furnaces all day down by the magma sea, helped Falcata get to the doctors.

25th Felsite 99

I've just read the report that Chief Medical Pony, Doctor Bubbles has given me on miss Falcata, the leg is fairly standard fair, but it seems that she has somehow contracted Advanced Stomach Rot, and he is unsure of how to proceed.


(After she was finally evaluated the Doctor's caught the stomach rot, it's been diagnosed, however, no treatment is yet scheduled. Will continue to monitor.)

28th Felsite 99

Our legendary tailor Onol, has finished a truly awe inspiring robe, fit for a Duchess. It will be the new standard of my office. I will wear it with pride.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Pleatabbeys.png)

5th Hemetite 99

Doctor Bubbles has released Falcata from the hospital, her leg has been treated and bandaged, but they seem to be unable to help the rot of he stomach tissue.


Edit: (Damn that Doctor Alen, he used Adamantine strands on Falcata's leg.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 07, 2011, 10:30:37 am
OHOHO LOL. This is why I modded adamantine to be smelted straight into metal from when it's raw.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 07, 2011, 10:38:42 am
(I don't exactly know how it happened, I always queue up an equivalent number of job orders for "extract adamantine strands" and "Make adamantine wafers" in the manager. Are those not one to one? They must not be as my stocks say I have 15 units of Adamantine Strands, which I have just had to give new orders to make wafers out of. I thought that one raw adamantine=one unit of adamantine thread=one wafer. Is this wrong? Have I been doing it wrong all these years? Am I a complete fool?)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 12:11:54 pm
((Can't really explain it either.  That's how I've handled adamantine: queue equal numbers of extract strands and make wafers.  I tend to get them staggered and out of order due to job priorities sometimes, so there might have been some thread lying around for a moment.  A pony then came by and dragged it off to the hospital.  I guess it's possible that since only a fraction of a thread is used for suturing, it still claims you have the full thread.

Anyway, I'm going to guess that the scene going on now will have long played out by the time Falcata is released from the hospital (or even wakes up), so journal time:))

Falcata's Diary - 23rd Felsite, 99

Some guard I am.  Lately it seems the civilians have been helping me more than the other way around.  I don't really remember what happened over the last day or so, but I somehow managed to fall down the stairs and badly break my right rear leg.  The pain was pretty unbearable at first, but the doctors gave me something that's eased that off a lot.  I need to thank Toltot for dragging my sorry behind down here.

I hate to think what the duchess, commissar or Captain Isos think about it all.  Me clumsily falling down the stairs like that.  I'm supposed to be an example for the ponies here.  Worse still, imagine I'd fallen on somepony?  That could have been a disaster.  I was wearing all of my armor and I still managed to break my leg.  An unarmored pony would have been crushed!

I feel like I broke more than that.  I've got a knot on my head the size of my hoof, and I'm pretty sure I bruised some ribs.  A few teeth are loose too, I hope that's temporary.

What really broke my heart though was when Kris came galloping into the hospital, bawling her eyes out.  When she heard I was hurt, she dropped what she was doing and came running.  It warms my heart to know she cares so much about me, but I care more for her and it pains me to see her crying like that.  She spent the rest of the afternoon lying at my side, despite my recommendations she go get something to eat or get some rest in her bed.  I'll be fine here, I assured her, but she wouldn't budge.

I suppose maybe I've done something right raising her, despite my mistakes.  Her father would be proud of her.

25th Felsite, 99

I had a rude awakening this morning.  With the pain killers the doctors gave me, I'd forgotten all about how much my stomach hurt, but that was back this morning which let me remember part of the events a few days ago.  The pain isn't nearly as bad as it was, but it's only because of the drugs.  And there is a pretty sickening reason for it.  I knew something was wrong this morning when Dr. Bubbles was avoiding me, but he finally spilled it this afternoon.  Thank goodness he waited until Kris wandered off to get some food.

He says he doesn't know where it came from, but something is seriously wrong with my stomach.  He suspected something when I vomited up more blood this morning, which I suppose is a pretty bad sign, but I figured with all the vomiting I'd done I was bound to have hurt my stomach.  He told me it's worse than that... it's as if my stomach is decaying.

He told me that there wasn't a whole lot he could do.  He obviously can't excise the whole thing, and he's worried the necrosis has spread too far for surgery to be of any use.  He said he could do some exploratory surgery to check, but in my state it might only make things worse or outright kill me.  He gave me some more drugs that he says might help, but I could tell he wasn't too confident.  I elected to pass on the surgery.

I'm... scared.  I really am.  I was sure that the stomach pains were just a virus, but this... (several wet drops stain the page, obscuring the writing) I never (more wet stains) was dying.

Kris knows something is wrong.  I tried to hide it as best I could, but she's a smart filly.  I won't tell her just now.  I... need time to think about this.

5th Hematite, 99

Despite my fears, I didn't expire within a few days.  The drugs Dr. Bubbles have given me seem to be keeping the pain... manageable.  I still can't eat much, but as long as I take the drugs I can keep a little bit of food down.  I'm not optimistic, he was pretty clear that it was only managing the symptoms, and unless my body was unnaturally strong the prognosis wasn't good.

I was a bit surprised to find that the doctors used adamantine thread to stitch up my wounds.  Only the duchess could have authorized that, and I don't see why she would for a clumsy foal falling down the stairs and nearly killing herself.  Unless she knows I'm dying and it's her way of sending her condolences?

I still haven't had the heart to tell Kris, but now that we're back home I think she believes everything will go back to normal.  I only wish it was that simple.  (Wet stains mar several words on the page)  Heavens above I wish Estoc was here right now.  I could use his strong embrace at a time like this.


((By Armok that was a long post.  Hope you guys like reading about a character who isn't even really involved at the moment!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 08:40:49 pm
((great read telgin! also, where is everypony today?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 08:44:28 pm
((Thanks!  Present and accounted for, but I'm mostly observing while the commissar sorts out this mess he's managed to get himself into.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 08:46:37 pm
'Schmoe, you're supposed to be good at fighting these bastards. Sir Abel thinks Friesden has been tainted by a servant of Slaanesh. Do you know if there's any way to help her?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 08:54:19 pm
Silence is Starkey's only reply.

I stood there in the hospital. At least the corrupted mare was tied down. But we needed the Inquisitor here. I stood in silence as another mare was brought in, with injuries.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 08:59:27 pm
'Dammit Schmoe, this is important! What can we do?'

 - - - - - -

Otik hoists Lilac onto her back and carries her off to the barracks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 09:02:22 pm
((You are still in the hospital, right?))

Silence continues to be the only response.


Schmutz was there, and offered me a cup of tanna. I took it gratefully, and he turned to the captain and offered him the same.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 09:04:28 pm
Falcata moans incoherently as Toltot carries her into the hospital.  The moan is punctuated by a sharp cry as somepony hoists her onto an available bed, twisting her broken leg.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 09:05:43 pm
I turned as the pony that had just been brought in cried out, and I walked over to her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 09:07:19 pm
((Yes. And a trip over to the Lexicanum enlightened me to the issue.))

'Oh, come on! Rakel isn't even-'

Then Starkey notices Schmutz offering him a drink of... something. He takes it, taking a tentative sip.

'Ah, okay, I forgot about him.'

He takes his drink and sits in the farthest corner from the pair.

'There. is that better?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 09:12:38 pm
Falcata fights through the pain and delerium for a moment as the commissar approaches her.  She sucks in another breath and says,"C-commissar?  Is that you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 09:15:42 pm
"Yes, it's me. How are you doing, soldier?" I said, in as kindly a tone as I could manage, still shook up from the madmare.

I told you to STAY AWAY FROM THAT THING.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 09:17:44 pm
'I thought you were talking about Rakel! Now did you hear anything I said before, or do I have to repeat myself?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 09:19:06 pm
She chokes back another retch and clenches her teeth.  Finally, she says,"N-not well... s-sir.  I-I don't th-think I'll be a... able to make it to my p-post today."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 09:20:34 pm
She has been corrupted like nothing you can possibly imagine. It is probably more torturous to her to be tied up than stabbing her with a knife. She would probably enjoy that.

"Well then," I said, trying my best to stay cheerful in tone. "Just do what you can to get better, okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 09:22:20 pm
'Lovely. Now how do we fix it?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 09:24:32 pm
"Y-yes, sir."  She wipes some bloody bile from her lip and swallows back yet another retch.  "Th-thank you, sir, I wi-ill."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 09:26:30 pm
Fix it? Well, simplest way would be a bolt to the head.

"Good to hear, soldier."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 09:30:27 pm
'Is there a 'hard way'? Preferrably one that leaves her alive, whole, and reasonably sane?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 09:34:33 pm
She clenches her teeth and suppresses a shriek into a muffled whimper as she adjusts her position to relieve the pressure on her stomach and leg.

"I-I brought... the stone... y-you asked for, s-sir."

She motions vaguely in the direction of the pulverized wall far away.  "It's... it's at..." she trails off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 09:35:15 pm
Destroying and recreating her entire personality?

"Good job, soldier. You just stay here and rest, okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 09:37:08 pm
Lilac is horribly depressed, and continues to cry all the way to the barracks.
"PUT ME DOWN!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 09:39:29 pm
"Y-yes, sir.  Th-thank you."  She rests her head on the bed, shuts her eyes, and tries unsuccessfully to suppress another series of moans.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 09:42:32 pm
'Did you forget about the 'alive' part? I want to save Friesden, not just make a new one to replace her!'

An idea strikes him.

'Wait... You know the construct Khenal used to seal his memories away? The one you destroyed? If we could use something like that to make her forget what happened while she was under the daemon's influence, would that help?'


 - - - - - -

Otik carries Lilac into her own office, setting her gently on her bed and locking the door behind them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 09:45:44 pm
"LET ME OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUT!!" Shrieks Lilac at the door, bashing into it with all her might.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 09:47:43 pm
I destroyed no construct of Khenal's. He was altering her mind? I KNEW IT.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 09:48:14 pm
'No no no, I mean the one in his own head! The one for his memories about that daemonhost-rehab-hospital place? Dammit, I'll need to re-read that book of his...'


 - - - - - -

"No."

Her voice quavers. She has tears in her own eyes now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 09:53:37 pm
"RAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" Lilac tries to bash her head into the door until she gets knocked out from hitting the door so hard.

((AH DERP!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 09:57:07 pm
((Also to clarify: they're both in the room together.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 09:59:37 pm
I've got no idea what you are dribbling on about.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 10:07:46 pm
'Alright, look: Khenal knows a spell that allows him to selectively block out part of a pony's memory. If we use that to make Friesden forget about her time with the daemon, will it help her get better?'

 - - - - - -

Otik takes the dazed filly into her hooves, sitting on the bed. She clutches her to her chest, gently stroking her mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 10:19:13 pm
Minutes later, Lilac wakes back up, mumbling something incoherently.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 10:22:18 pm
"Shh... hush now..."

She rocks Lilac gently.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 10:23:54 pm
"Why don't you just smother me and get it over with...?" mutters Lilac under her breath.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 10:26:17 pm
"B'cause I don' want ye to d-die." she sobs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 10:27:49 pm
Lilac just growls, kicking at the sobbing Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 10:33:12 pm
"P-Please stop... I care about ye... I love ye... I don' w-want ye t'go..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 10:34:09 pm
Maybe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 10:35:09 pm
Lilac tries holding her breath.
((Brb for a half hour or so.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 10:39:17 pm
''Maybe' is better than nothing.'

Starkey gallops over to the bed where Khenal is resting, being careful to keep a good distance from Schmutz. He tries for several minutes to shake the alicorn from his stupor, unsuccessfully.

'Shit. Okay, plan 'b'.'


"Sir Abel! What do you know about mental magics?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 10:40:46 pm
A cream colored unicorn filly bursts into the hospital, tears streaming from her eyes and soft whimpers passing her lips.

"Mom?" she calls out, searching the room for her injured mother, completely oblivious to the commissar and militia captain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 10:43:08 pm
"Only that they're extremely dangerous and most often heretical. Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 10:46:42 pm
"Can you use any of them? I have an idea that just might save her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 10:47:50 pm
"I can't use any magic, tell you the truth."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 10:51:34 pm
"Wha... you... you're a clopping alicorn for Luna's sake! How can you not use magic?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 10:52:38 pm
"Never learned."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 10:54:08 pm
"You're kidding... you're kidding, right? How the hells do you fight daemons without any magic?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 11:00:41 pm
"Same way I fight all the other creatures I have. Shooting them until they stop fighting."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 11:05:09 pm
"Cloooop... Okay, new plan: You said she's addicted, right? So we can break it like any other addiction!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 11:07:59 pm
"She's addicted to sensation, to feeling."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 11:10:17 pm
Due to Otik lack of reaction to Lilac holding her breath, her face has now turned blue.

((Just to make you aware of what I hope you all know, when you try to hold your breath until you pass out -assuming you manage- you'd simply start breathing again the moment you lose consciousness.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 11:18:41 pm
The filly spots Falcata lying motionless on a bed at the far end of the hospital and dashes over, heedless to the conversation.

"Mom!" she cries, propping up against the bed.  She takes in the blood covering her mother's face and leg, and her mouth hangs agape.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 11:19:22 pm
((I know, and so does Otik. That's why she's not doing anything.))

"W-Well that makes it easier, right? We can just sort of wean her off, instead of going cold alfalfa!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 11:23:24 pm
"Wean her off what? Every single sensation she feels she is addicted to feeling that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 11:25:53 pm
"You said the pleasure the daemon gave to her was like nothing you could ever feel anywhere else. It's like she can't get the pure drug anymore, only the watered-down stuff. Eventually, she'll have to come down off it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 11:30:21 pm
"And so she won't. Tell me. What happens when you look into a bright light?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 07, 2011, 11:31:56 pm
Lilac releases her breath and pants for air. She tries to squirm out of Otik's hug of "doom".
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 07, 2011, 11:33:00 pm
Falcata rouses at the jostling.  She moans again and opens her eyes to see her daughter tearing up in front of her.

"Mom... are you okay?"

Not at all, but she nodded feebly.

"I-I'll be alright.  I... just hurt my l-leg."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 07, 2011, 11:36:14 pm
"Your eyes hurt, and after a while you... oh... oh, no..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 07, 2011, 11:40:13 pm
"Yes. That's the problem."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 12:03:10 am
"Clop... clop, clopclopclopclop clop! Okay, alright, you're the expert, what do we do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 08, 2011, 12:09:09 am
Reconstruction of the Mirror was going well, but has now hit a snag.  There are only three Khenals left, but they are currently at an impasse:  Each holds a piece of Mirror that could finish it, but there is only room for one piece.  One is timid and empathic, but refuses to budge on this issue.  Another is cold and intelligent, arguing unrelenting logic.  The final is a defender, fiery and protective.

'Stop this, we need to help Friesden!'


"Stop this, we need to help Friesden!"

'But, um, how?'

"But, um, how?"

'Lack of careful planning is what got us into this mess in the first place!'

"Lack of careful planning is what got us into this mess in the first place!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 12:15:02 am
"Might be most merciful to kill her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 12:17:40 am
"...No. No, I cannot believe that, there has to be a way to save her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 12:21:23 am
"You'll have to first find whatever daemon is playing with her, exorcise that, and then fix her up otherwise. It's never been done before."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 12:25:48 am
"That's it? Great, once Khenal is up, we - wait, you mean you've never done that before?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 12:29:11 am
"Nopony's done it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 12:34:42 am
"W-We just did that a few months ago! To miss Friesden herself, even!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 12:35:35 am
I was slightly stupified. This was a very bad thing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 08, 2011, 12:36:36 am
((Carrot as well, can't forget him :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 12:36:56 am
((WATCH IT!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 08, 2011, 02:19:15 am
Falcata tried to maintain a straight face as she stared into her daughter's eyes, but it was a lost effort.  Tears began to form and drip down her cheeks to match those of the filly.  She cringes as the bone shifts in her leg and lets out another muffled cry.

"I-I'm going to be o-okay, I p-promise."

Kris continues to frown and sniffles.  She makes a motion to nuzzle her mother's nose but hesitates as Falcata winces and pulls back.  The filly stares at her suffering mother for what felt like hours.

"O-okay, mom."  She backs down from the bed and curls up into a knot at its side.  There was no room next to her mom on the bed, and that would probably only hurt her more.  "I-I'll be right here if you need me."

Falcata nods, a gesture that her filly couldn't even see, but speaking was more effort than she felt like she could spare.  She lowers her head back into her pillow and lets the fabric absorb the tears and sounds of her crying.  She never wanted to put Kris through anything like this.  She bites down on the pillow to contain a scream that shot up her body.

Where in Glitterglen was a doctor?  She'd give a year's salary to be free of this agony.


((And with that, I'm off.  I'll edit Falcata's diary to match anything that happens while I'm away))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 08, 2011, 02:48:30 pm
Charity's Journal 2nd Malachite 99

My bodyguard Osal, his youngest daughter, a unicorn, has gone missing. Reports say she was on the surface, watching the fortress guard chase off a swarm of Parasprites, one minute she was by the pond, the next, gone. We suspect it was Diomedian foul play.

Sisters I can't imagine the horror the little filly must be going through, right now.

15th Malachite 99

It has come to my attention that a flood has occurred inside Khenal and Friesden's bed room. The entire room is underwater. Fortunately the door in their dinning room was enough to hold back the tide. We'll have to disable the flow to all the showers to diagnose the problem and allow the water to drain. I suspect something we missed also busted when Psycho's ghost caused that flood.


(Hold on, why is the water not draining? Ah, there it is. I found the engineering mistake. I forgot to dig out the last tile in the drain, to connect it to the hole that takes the water off the map.)

20th Malachite 99

It seems as if something was clogging the drainage pipes and causing an overflow. One of our miner's Granite has created a bypass, and water is now draining safety.

24th Malachite 99

We have taken measures that should slow the flow of water toward Khenal's and Friesden's home, and today we will finally we able to turn the water back on. And I'm so grateful 9 days without a proper shower is outrageous.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 08, 2011, 03:16:27 pm
((Has anything changed about Falcata's condition?  Developed an infection from the rot?  That's the next step based on what I've read.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 03:22:58 pm
Lilac calms down, and looks up at Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 03:24:52 pm
It's a trap!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 03:25:06 pm
((I hope not. Because 'Psycho Carrot Memorial Children's Home' just doesn't roll off the tongue quite right. :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 03:30:27 pm
((But 'Lilac Memorial Children's Home' does.))

"When...when did you do this? Exactly?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 03:44:42 pm
Lilac hugs Otik tightly, tears suddenly streaming down her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 03:45:19 pm
"Almost a year ago now. Khenal, Carrot and I, we excorcised the daemon from her body, and for a while she was... wrong. Crazy, flip-flopping from suicidal to equicidal. But eventually, just a month or so ago, she turned lucid, and she's been fine ever since! Well... until now, that is."

((Only have a few minutes right now. I'll be back later for more.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 08, 2011, 03:46:41 pm
((Has anything changed about Falcata's condition?  Developed an infection from the rot?  That's the next step based on what I've read.))

(Nothing has changed yet.)

Lilac calms down, and looks up at Otik.

(Oh, you reminded me of the other thing I needed to write. I got distracted with the flood.)

Charity's Journal 17th Malachite 99

Lilac Joker visited me today. She was visibly upset. She yelled at me for awhile and then left. I hope she feels better after getting that out of her system. She's the last member of her family, and I think she might blame me for that. I feel for her. I know Starkey and Otik are trying to help her, but I don't think she quite accepts them as family yet. Perhaps in time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 03:49:04 pm
"God Princesses above."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 05:20:40 pm
((A quote from one from whom a daemon was exorcised (40k Style)

"I am half alive. The thing destroyed so much of me, and when it was torn away from me it took a part of what was left. I fear that within me there are still parts of it, fragments left like thorns in my soul."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 06:07:51 pm
((yay, doom is back!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 06:10:24 pm
((You're stalking me, arent you? <.<))

Otik pulls Lilac in closer, burying her muzzle in the filly's mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 06:17:23 pm
"I'm sorry Auntie, I just...don't have..." The rest of her sentence is cut off by another wave a tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 06:21:42 pm
"Shh... it's alright."

She is silent for a long time.

"I... I'm sorry I hit ye. Tha' was wrong."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 06:28:18 pm
((Lilac accent is going to very slowly change to Otik's. After all, Lilac is around her all the time, so of course she will adapt.))

"It's alright...I'm s'sorry I tried to kill myself..." Says Lilac. Otik can't help but notice that Lilac is starting to sound like her a bit.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 06:32:53 pm
((I'm a real bitch for what I'm going to do to Friesden. And Khenal, too, come to mention it.))

At that point, the Inquisitor came in, and stopped. "What is that mare doing tied up over there?" she asked, looking at Friesden.

"She's been possessed," I answered. "They want to exorcise her."

She nodded. "I always hoped my time among the Witch-Hunters wouldn't be put to waste."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 06:45:11 pm
"Aye, I forgive ye."

 - - - - - -

"Okay, great. First, do you have anything made from adamantine? Anything at all, even a small trinket will suffice. And is miss Rakel with you? We'll need her skills as well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 07:03:08 pm
"Oh, Adamantine isn't required. And I plan to have Rakel somewhere else at the time. Daemons are canny beasts. We'll have to have Schmutz somewhere else as well."

She smiled, and I began to dread what she would say next. "We need only to know the daemon's true name."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 07:08:03 pm
"Otik...? Is ther' anything I can do to make it up to you?" Begs Lilac, depressed about upsetting Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 07:20:33 pm
"How the clop will that help? The only daemon names I ever heard, I couldn't even pronounce, let alone try to memorize!"

 - - - - - -

"Ye can go out an' grow up inta a fine mare, an' make me an Uncle Stars... an' yer mum an' dad... proud."

She tousles Lilac's mane.

"But right now? Ye can jus' give me a big smile."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 07:27:25 pm
Lilac giggles and smiles as hard as she can.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 07:30:07 pm
"Knowing its true name will weaken it, make it easier to remove without damaging Friesden. But we can do without."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 07:44:54 pm
She took to a corner of the room, and wrote on several sheets of paper. Finishing, she came back and told the captain "We need incense, and a place hallowed to the God Princess. Do you have any such a place?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 07:52:10 pm
"Well, we have a little triptych for Luna in the barracks, but... I don't know about any incense."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 07:53:46 pm
"Luna? Not one to Celestia the Everpure?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 08:04:06 pm
"Everypony reads The Book of Dawn and Dusk, and there's a few personal statuettes and votives there, but what with the nature of our, er, 'work', it seemed appropriate."

((I figure that besides the night, Luna's domain also includes death. So as a soldier who kills other ponies on a regular basis, and may very well end up dying themselves, it would be natural to pray to her for forgiveness and protection. Or failing that, to ensure that they'll be admitted into the afterlife.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 08:09:54 pm
"Very well. Let us take her there."

Of course, by us, she meant me. I lugged the mare over there. It was very unnerving, and I wished that Schmutz was there. Eventually, I could put her down and wipe the marks she had made on me.

"Daemon!" called the Inquisitor. "In the name of the God Princess Celestia the Everpure and in the name of Luna the Thousandfold Cursed, I command you to come out!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 08:22:11 pm
"Otik, can I see if Falcata is alright? I would've asked her before when I was there...but..." Lilac's voice trails off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 08, 2011, 08:32:13 pm
Otik is more than a little bit wary of letting Lilac go back there. She wants to believe the filly won't try anything, but a part ofher still fears for her safety.

"I dunno, hun. Starkey acted like somethin' real important was happenin' there, an' he didnae want us around, in case-"

She hears voices in the barracks outside. She could pick out Starkey, Istlig, and that new stallion from yesterday morning.

The word 'daemon' was mentioned.

"...On second thought, why dun we go see 'er now? I think Starkey is done in there, an' lit'l Kris looked pretty upset. Maybe you two could talk?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 08, 2011, 11:47:40 pm
Falcata continues to lie in bed, having not moved at all now that she found a tolerable position to rest in.  She takes shallow breaths, trying to avoid the worst of the pain in her ribs.  Kris is still curled up tightly next to the bed, occasionally wiping her eyes or nose between sniffles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 08, 2011, 11:51:34 pm
'What do we do?  Maybe ask Keeper?'

"What do we do?  Maybe ask Keeper?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 11:53:33 pm
Lilac and Otik arrive at the hospital. When Lilac sees Kris, she dashes towards her, stopping on a dime upon reaching her.
"HI! I'M LILAC!" Says Lilac excitedly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 08, 2011, 11:55:50 pm
Kris recoils from the sudden interruption.  She sniffles again, wipes her nose and says, "Uh, h-hello."  She pauses awkwardly.  "I'm Kris."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 08, 2011, 11:58:08 pm
"L-listen...I heard what's really wrong with your mom..." Whispers Lilac, Leaning close to Kris's ear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 08, 2011, 11:59:35 pm
((I'll get this sorted quick smart.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 12:00:19 am
((Technically Dr. Bubbles hadn't diagnosed her with terminal gut rot yet, but I can forgive that for a bit of drama, heh))

Her expression grows grim.  "Wh-what?  She just broke her leg, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 12:01:42 am
"No...her stomach...it's...well...you know what happens to food when you leave it out for days...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 12:05:23 am
Her expression remains grim.  "It... starts rotting?"

Falcata moans and turns slightly to bring the two into view.  "What are you two talking about?" she says with difficulty.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 12:09:43 am
"Correct...well...oh, i'm so sorry..." Lilac hugs Kris tightly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 12:11:08 am
Kris doesn't reciprocate the hug.  She simply mutters, "Wh-what?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 09, 2011, 12:15:20 am
The temperature in the room started to drop, and ice began to form on the walls. From Friesden's mouth came a sensuous, flowing...delicious...voice, like a warm caress in auditory form. Foalish mortal. Your princess has no power here. This being is ruled by She Who Thirsts, the Prince of Pleasure. Bow down and you will receive such ecstasy as you have never before or will again experience.

The Inquisitor said to each of us, as she passed out the sheets, "Just repeat the prayer transcribed here." 

"I Deny The Ruinous Powers, and I will not suffer the Witch, the Mutant or Heretic to live." I read, as the Inquisitor started. 

"I Believe in the God-Princess, Her in Canterlot, who United Ponykind under her auguring quest, and Ventured on the Great Crusade.

I Believe in the God-Princess, Who was Betrayed by Luna, the Favoured Sister and afterwards Thousandfold Cursed.

I Believe in the God-Princess, who Ascended the Golden Throne, to Guide and Protect Ponykind, and gave Her Divine Mandate to the High Ladies of Canterlot, so that they may rule until Her return and in Her Name, of which the sweetest of hymns are made.

I Believe in the Principial Creed, and all the Principial Laws, and I swear upon the Golden Throne itself to Abide by them." I continued. 

"Hers is the Name of Order and Justice, Hers is the Reign of Glory. Ours is the Gift of Hers Providence. We give thanks in the Milliards every day, so that Her Heritage may Endure until She comes Again. We sing Her Praise in the Basilikas and on the Fields of Battle in a Million Unknown Places. Acolt."

"Acolt," Starkey repeated. 

As the prayer finished, the daemon spoke again. Oh, how wonderful! Your voices are nearly perfect. But they could be enhanced so much if you merely gave in to me. Friesden's hoof stroked Starkey's side. Starkey shuddered, recoiling slightly from the touch. As I turned over the card, I found the hymn which, as a Commissar, I knew intimately.

"Before the swollen gaze of the Dark Eye, do I stand
I hold for She who long ago sacrificed for pony
I will yield no ground, I shall take no step back
In Her name and for Her will, I will never surrender"

"Pierce my flesh, break my bones, take my life
These matter not
In my sacrifice, ye of the Dark Gods shall know defeat
For even in Death shall we be triumphant in Her name"

"Lo! I have fallen in battle for She and her flock
Prepare my place, O Lady!
I shall stand by thee side until the End Times
Until Thy will be done"

"Take heed, ye who have surrendered to the Darkness
We shall be unbowed and unbroken
For where there is darkness, Her light shall shine
And the darkness shall retreat"

"We who have bled shall be redeemed
We who have fallen shall be exulted
We who have sacrificed shall be rewarded
We who have died shall be avenged"

"Stand, O warriors of the Princess!
Let no despair fall upon thy bless-ed hearts!
Stand and fight!
For it is by thy sacrifice that thee shall be remembered!!"

"By our deeds shall we be known
Let these deeds be a mighty sword from which She who rests upon the Throne shall wield
For with mighty deeds shall the darkness be thrown back into the Abyss
And in them will thee prevail"

"Take succor in Her strength
Steel thy soul with Her word
Armor thy personage in faith to She
Arm thy self with Her will"

"Suffer not the Unclean
Suffer not the Impure
Suffer not the Weak
Suffer not the Heretic"

"Amor Principissa!
Fiat Justicia!
Go forth in Her name and find victory!" I was cheered as we finished, hoping that the daemon might finally leave us. 
Your devotion to your false princess is annoying, foals. That is the first thing I will change when I control you. was the daemon's response.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 12:18:57 am
((Nice job!))

"Kris...your mom's dying..." Whispers Lilac; Falcata overhears however.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 09, 2011, 12:24:15 am
The voice pierces the stalemate in my mindscape.  The Khenals exchange glances.

'That doesn't sound good at all.'


"That doesn't sound good at all."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 12:28:26 am
Kris jumps to her feet and backs away from Lilac, up against the bed.  "Wh-what?  No... she... she just broke her leg!"  She looks pleadingly up to her mother.  "Right?"

Falcata's expression cycles through a rainbow of expressions, from pain to fear to sorrow.  What should she say?  "Wh-where did you hear such a thing?" she directs to Lilac, ignoring her daughter's plea.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 12:34:24 am
"...me? Oh...I heard it from Doctor Bubbles. He was whispering that to a nurse, but I overheard."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 12:47:59 am
((Ahah, I'll roll with Falcata not knowing either then.  Dr. Bubbles hasn't told her yet.))

She looks back to Kris and says, "O-of course, I just fell down the stairs.  I'll be fine."  She turns her eyes back to Lilac and adds, "D-dear, have you seen Dr. Bubbles today?"

Had she heard the filly right?  Her stomach was... rotting?  She'd never heard of anything of the sort, but as sick as she'd been...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 12:59:31 am
"You...won't be...oh..." Lilac kicks a pebble, unsure of what to say.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 01:13:02 am
Falcata's expression grows more worried.  Nausea rolls through her stomach as the filly's words sink in.  No, how could her stomach be rotting?  She... had vomitted up a lot of blood that morning, but after vomitting so much that didn't seem unlikely.  But that didn't mean...

Her thought was cut short by the nausea intensifying.  She swallowed again and again to try and abate the feeling, but it was no use.  She turned her head to the side in time to miss the children watching her, but to her surprise the sensation disappeared after a moment, followed by her mouth filling with blood.  She coughed and hacked the sticky mass into the bucket by her bed and shuddered.


"Mom!" Kris cried, her eyes wide as saucers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 01:14:18 am
"Kris!" Lilac covers Kris's eyes, trying to do something to comfort her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 01:28:23 am
The filly instinctively clings to Lilac, new tears beginning to form in her eyes.  She turns her head away from the scene and begins sobbing between incoherent muttering.  Falcata finishes noisily coughing and spitting the blood from her mouth and groans, but says nothing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 01:34:06 am
"shh..shhhh...It'll be okay...shhh...hush...it'll be okay..." Says Lilac, hugging Kris and stroking her lightly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 01:45:33 am
"Would it?", Falcata thinks.  Seeing Kris crying like this was tearing her heart out, but she was at a loss for words.  Fear was genuinely beginning to grow in her gut.  As Kris finally peeks from behind her and Lilac's hooves, Falcata reaches out to her.  Despite the throbbing ache running through her body, she pulls Kris close and gives her the strongest hug she can muster, which wasn't much.  "She's right... it's going to be okay."  She swallows back another retch and adds, "I promise."

Kris is silent for some time.  "I love you mom... please be okay..."

"I love you too..."  Falcata looks up from the nuzzle with a pained expression and asks Lilac again, "Dear... h-have you seen Dr. Bubbles today?  Or Dr. Alen?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 01:52:39 am
"Come to think of it...no." Sighs Lilac. "Miss Falcata, if something were to happen to you, could Kris stay with me?"
'I don't think that came out right...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 01:59:56 am
Falcata is shocked by the question, but manages to form a weak smile.  The foal hadn't meant anything by it, she knew.  She strokes Kris' mane gingerly and replies, "N-nothing is going to happen to me."

She sniffs back a tear of her own and continues, "But, I may be here a while, so she can stay with you all she wants."  She begins to question the foal about her parents, but remembers the encounter in the hallway and decides it best not to.  "Wh-who are you staying with?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 02:02:34 am
A tear runs down Lilac cheek, "M-my parents are both dead, along w-w-with my brothers...I'm staying with Uncle Starkey and Auntie Otik..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 02:11:08 am
Captain Starkey and Lieutenant Otik... Lilac couldn't have picked much better ponies to befriend.  Perhaps Khenal, but he was still delirious if she hadn't been hallucinating that.  Falcata's expression turns to a small frown and she says, "Oh, I'm so sorry to hear that.  Captain Starkey and Lieutenant Otik are wonderful ponies though, they'll take good care of you."

She adjusts her position, stiffling a cry as her weight settles on her ribs again.  She releases Kris and says, "Why don't you two go find the captain or lieutenant?  I just need a little rest right now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 02:14:45 am
"Alright!" Lilac grabs Kris and drags her over to Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 02:24:19 am
Falcata settles back into her bed, turning her head to the wall where nopony could see her.  What if what the filly had told her was true?  Was she really dying?  How could this have happened?  Oh, Luna... she couldn't bear to leave Kris alone.

Kris finally tears her eyes away from her mother and begins to follow Lilac.  "Where are we going?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 02:28:08 am
"Well, if there's one pony daddy used to talk about, it was Khenal! Maybe we shou-" Lilac notices the group chanting in front of Friesden, "On second thought...Hey, want to see my room?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 02:31:27 am
Kris backs away from the scene and nods. "O-okay."  Her mom said a lot of good things about Khenal, but he didn't look like he was doing well either.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 02:36:01 am
"You can sleep in my room tonight! I bet you're tired...I am..." Yawns Lilac as they approach the room.
"Huh, Otik must be out...I'll tell her in the morning, if you want to stay that is..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 02:40:06 am
She nods and says, "Okay... if you don't think Mr. Starkey and Ms. Otik will mind.  My mom talks about them sometimes, I think she knows them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 02:44:21 am
"They won't," Says Lilac, opening the door to her bedroom, "Well...I'm going to hit the hay...I have an extra bed, so you can sleep in that..." Mutters Lilac as she climbs into bed and falls asleep. ((Sad sleep music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4kCcA1qlnTM GOOD NIGHT EVERYPONY!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 04:21:42 pm
Lilac wakes up, and sees the still sleeping Kris. She gets out of bed and heads to the barracks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 09, 2011, 05:27:21 pm
'That sounded similar to Schmoe, but far more powerful.'

"That sounded similar to Schmoe, but far more powerful."

'It sounded dangerous...'

"It sounded dangerous..."

'We can't let that run free.'

"We can't let that run free."

The Khenals nod, finally in agreement.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 09, 2011, 08:43:21 pm
"Begone, Daemon! You have no power here!" yelled the Inquisitor, with rather more bravado than I personally felt. I started muttering the Litany against the Warp under my breath.

Oooh. How delicious. Go on, inquisitor. You smell so tasty.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 09, 2011, 09:15:46 pm
The Khenals each place their final piece in the Mirror, layering upon eachother.  As they do so, they merge, once again forming a single alicorn.  Once finished, I finally open my eyes to take in my surroundings.

"What has happened?  How did the trial finish?"


************************

I'm about to head off to some dnd.  If you guys have stuff to do, just assume Khenal gets lucid after whatever happens.  If the quiet trend for today continues, however, we can roll with this tomorrow or so.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 09, 2011, 09:17:58 pm
Yeah, what's up with people these days?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 09:19:02 pm
I'm concerned as well...It's always five at the most. Myself, Khenal, Dsarker, Impending Doom, and KingStrongbeard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 09, 2011, 09:25:38 pm
You said six earlier...who was that sixth person?
Well, i'm free today and t'morrow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 09:27:17 pm
It was you, but then I noticed how you're not on often. Also, your 12 hours ahead of me, it's hard to have to stay up til five or so just to roleplay with you...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 10:11:20 pm
Lilac gets lost and ends up back home. Kris is awake now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 10:25:22 pm
Kris is awake, but she hasn't moved from the bed.  She lies motionless in a tussle of covers on the bed, eyes looking blankly at the wall ahead of her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 10:26:27 pm
Lilac trots over to her, concerned.
"Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 10:30:22 pm
She blinks a few times and looks over to Lilac.  "Yeah.  Just bad dreams.  I'm worried about my mom."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 10:46:41 pm
Lilac smiles at Kris. "It'll be alright, trust me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 10:50:32 pm
A small smile forms on her face and she sits up in bed.  "Yeah.  My mom is the toughest pony I know.  She'll be fine.  She always is."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 11:01:06 pm
"That's the spirit! Oh, would like to go and play with me outside?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 11:03:46 pm
"Uh, okay."  She hops down from the bed and stretches.  "What did you want to do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 11:07:05 pm
"Play tag in the forest!" Says Lilac with a large smile, expecting Kris to be excited too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 11:14:56 pm
Kris looks concerned.  "Mom always told me that I shouldn't go far from the entrance, and to never go anywhere where a guard couldn't see me."  She paws at the floor nervously.  "She says it's really dangerous out there."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 11:18:36 pm
"I've been outside loads of times! It's perfectly safe!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 11:21:33 pm
She pauses in thought.  She hated to do something her mom told her not to, but she had never been more than twenty feet from the entrance since the day they arrived at Glitterglen, and her mom wasn't going to find out.  A mischevious smile works its way onto her face.  "Okay, but just for a little while."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 11:27:44 pm
The two fillies sneak outside, avoiding the guards. Upon arriving at the entrance to the fortress, Kris...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 11:31:07 pm
Kris halts just outside the entrance.  She looks around anxiously and says, "I... don't know about this.  Mom will be really mad at me if she finds out..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 11:32:44 pm
"I know, maybe we sh-" Lilac sudden grabs Kris and drags her outside completely.
"Ha, gotcha!" Laughs Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 11:35:14 pm
She gasps as she is pulled along.  Her legs feel uneasy even this far from the safety of the fortress, but curiosity continues to grow inside her.  "O-okay, we're out.  Now where?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 11:38:52 pm
Lilac grins immensely.
"TO THE FOREST!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 11:41:25 pm
She reflects a fake smile and follows Lilac toward the forest.  She'd heard of some bad things that had happened to ponies outside the fortress, but it was broad daylight.  The bad things usually happened at night, and she didn't see anything but a few odd birds fluttering about.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 09, 2011, 11:56:01 pm
As the group enter the forest, Kris is constantly frightened by the sound of the inhabitants.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 09, 2011, 11:58:50 pm
Kris closes the gap between her and Lilac with a nervous whimper.  She didn't recognize anything she was hearing.  "Y-you're sure you've been out this far before?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 12:05:00 am
"I lied actually, I've never been in the forest in my whole life!" Says Lilac happily. Kris is dumbfounded.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 12:09:27 am
She races around in front of Lilac and blocks the path.  "Y-you what!?"  She twists in circles, glancing in every direction.  Her breathing picks up to a rapid pace.  "Oh no... we... we shouldn't be out here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 12:13:01 am
"Don't worry, I know...just...the...Nope, we're lost! HOORAY!" Says Lilac, completely oblivious to Kris's panic attack.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 12:15:59 am
She spins back in the direction she thinks they came from.  She stares into the forest, but everything looks the same everywhere.  This had been a terrible idea.  "Wh-wh-what do we do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 12:21:42 am
"Hmm...Well...OH! I KN-" Lilac stops mid-sentence. Her eyes rolls back into her head and she faints. Behind where Lilac used to be standing, is a diomedian, grinning devilishly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 12:24:19 am
Kris freezes.  She stares at the twisted pony for several seconds before letting out the loudest scream her lungs could manage.  She had seen the corpses of the diomedian ponies before, at a distance.  She knew what they were.  She turns to flee, not knowing or caring where she is headed.

((Yep, she ditched poor little Lilac in the panic))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 12:42:38 am
((DAMMIT IMPENDING AND KHENAL.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 01:08:46 am
I watched in horror as the mare slowly started to warp. The Inquisitor only redoubled her chanting.

In came Otik. "What's the noise?" she said, before gaping at Friesden. Friesden's foreleg, now totally warped, stretched into a tentacle, which snaked its way over to Otik, who stood stock still, transfixed. It wrapped itself around her, and she collapsed, writhing in euphoria.

"Keep your hooves off her, BITCH!" yelled Starkey as he drew his axe. In one swift stroke, he cut off the tentacle. Friesden screamed in pain, and blood spurted forth from the wound. She reared back, and it was this point that Khenal entered.

"Friesden! No!" he cried.

For a moment, the mare's eyes changed back to what they were before, and the Inquisitor took this opportunity. She touched her sword to Friesden's flesh. The sword (which I found out later had been blessed by the Hierarch of Paintedtouched) set her flesh afire. The mare writhed in pain, her body unwarping. Her legs reformed.

"By the God Princess Herself, be ye cast OUT, daemon!" shouted the Inquisitor. The flames disappeared, and Friesden lay asleep.

"That's all we can do." said the Inquisitor. "We'll find out what happens when she wakes."

It was then that I heard a scream, as if from far off. I sighed. A commissar's work is never done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 01:26:30 am
The Diomedion grabs Kris by chest with it's tentacle, dragging her back towards it with unbreakable strength.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 01:28:20 am
She shrieks and paws at the dirt, unable to get a foothold on anything with her hooves. "Heeeelp!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 01:29:48 am
I hurried up the stairs. Schmutz was at the top of the stair, waiting by the door. He had my crossbow in hoof, as well as his own. Without a word, he gave me my crossbow and bolts and followed me out.

We headed out into the forest, looking for the source of the cry.

I didn't see the diomedian as it snuck up on me. But Schmutz did, and with a loud cry, he shot it twice in quick succession. The once static face of his was smiling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 01:34:54 am
The diomedian shrieks, throwing Kris three yards into a tree, causing her to break a few bones upon impact. Then, the monster collapses dead.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 01:42:08 am
I moved forward to the filly. After a quick check, I motioned Schmutz forward. She was hurt, but she'd survive7.







7 Anypony wishing to learn more of the filly's future are recommended to read 'Glitterglen: An Annotated History', by General Kris.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 01:45:11 am
Schmutz found Kris lying next to the tree, dazed and confused.  As she begins to come around, she starts groaning and rubbing at her side.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 01:45:22 am
Unfortunately, Abel is hit in the back with an arrow, embedding itself deep inside him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 01:50:05 am
It was on that day that I learned the benefits of full barding. The arrow embedded itself in my armour, and I was free to turn around and return the damage with interest. A pair of bolts from my crossbow found their mark in my foe, killing it instantly.


((AFK for the night. Telgin can take over.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 02:04:36 am
((And so I shall.  Breaking this up into two posts for readability.))

With the attacking diomedian slain, I took it upon myself to take stock of our surroundings.  There were two dead diomedian ponies, the first expertly dispatched by my aide and the second more by luck on my part than judgement.  And it seemed we'd come across the filly whose screams could be heard even back at Glitterglen8.

"She's a bit banged up, sir," Schmutz said, observent as ever.  "But I think she'll pull through.  A few busted ribs is all."

I'm no medicae, but I could see that he was right.  She was rubbing at her side and her breathing was a bit off, but she seemed unharmed otherwise.  I adjusted my cap and returned my crossbow to its sling.  "Very well, then.  Let's go see about getting this little filly a little medical attention."  Unfortunately, she was still out of it, else she could have saved us all a lot of trouble in the coming hours, but I had no way of knowing at the time and so led us back to Glitterglen, feeling quite pleased with the outcome.

As I suspected, the site of Schmutz and I hauling the poor thing back into the fortress with an arrow jutting from my armor was quite inspiring among the locals and they flocked to me.  I hushed them with a wave of my hoof and played myself off as the selfless savior they thought I was.  "Would everypony kindly step back?  This young filly needs to get to the hospital."

It worked like a charm, and they all made a berth for my passage, oohing and aahing as they always do.

8. How Abel was able to hear her screams from the barracks is a bit of a mystery.  I certainly heard no such thing.  We can only assume he is exaggerating a bit for dramatic effect, but the truth will likely never be known.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 02:33:19 am
Falcata rolled over in the bed, confused from being woken from her shallow sleep by noise in the hallway.  She rubbed her eyes and tried to clear the fog in her mind, partly from the pain killing magic running through her body and partly from the utter exhaustion of the past day.

Moments later, Commissar Abel and the curiously dirty pony from before burst into the hospital, demanding a doctor urgently.  Something about the pony he carried looked familiar...


"Kris!" she screamed, her voice croaking at the attempt at such volume.  She scrabbled up onto her good hooves and tried to rise from the bed, nearly collapsing onto the floor as she did so.  A nurse had set her leg by now, but even with the powerful pain fighting magic in her body it was barely tolerable.  She limped over to the commissar, taking in the scene with horror.

The filly was moaning and clutching at her side, specks of blood in the corners of her mouth.  She looked up to her mother, but immediately turned away, dried tears on her cheeks joined by new moisture forming in her eyes.
  "I-I'm so sorry... I di-didn't mean to... I..."

The commissar gently placed her onto an available bed.  "Schmutz, go see if you can find a doctor, would you?"  He looks to Falcata.  "She's bruised a few ribs I think, she'll be fine."

As the pony complied, Falcata began to panic.  "Kris, wh-what happened!?  Oh, Luna..."

"W-we were playing in-in the forest..."

"We?" Abel questioned.  "I saw nopony else."

Kris moaned again and nodded.  "Li-Lilac was w-with me.  S-she di-didn't c-come with you?"

"Clop," the commissar said levelly.  "I'll be right back."  He gallopped from the hospital, reaching for his weapon as he did so.

Falcata stood motionless over her suffering daughter, mouth agape. 
"Oh, Kris..." she began before breaking down into sobbing.  The one time she wasn't around to protect her, this happens.  She agonized over what to do, finally sitting next to the bed.  "It's going to be okay, honey... I promise," she said, gently stroking Kris' mane.

"I-I'm sorry... mom," the filly said. "I-I shouldn't have..."

"Shh... it's okay," she answered, continuing to stroke her mane.  "You're safe now."

((And that's it for today.  I'll probably post a journal update for Falcata tomorrow.  I think enough has deviated from my glossing over from before to update it))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 02:55:21 am
((good night everypony!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 06:25:46 am
Well, after seeing those Diomedians in the forest, I certainly wasn't going out there alone. I marshalled a small squad and headed out. It was quiet, and only the short sobs that I began to hear gave us any indication of the truth of the filly's tale. Slowly we made our way through, checking for another ambush on the way.

We came to a small clearing. In the middle was a diomedian royal. I swore under my breath. He was holding a small filly, and a knife was at her throat. Held telekinetically was a sword, and I sighed. If we wanted to save the filly we'd have to duel this beast, and my bloody reputation put me in first order.

I drew my sword, slinging my crossbow as I did so. I stepped boldly forth into the arena, hoping I hid the fear in my body as I did so, and proclaimed "I am Commissar Anias Abel. If you want to harm that filly, you'll have to come through me."

With a sneer, the royal tossed the filly aside and faced me. "I am Dresguthor, pillager of Mittenknees, slaughterer of the Ten Hounds of the Princess, and ruler of one hundred cities. Face me, if you dare."

Well, I'm sure those names were supposed to mean something, but I never did find out. He charged me, and I sidestepped and slashed for the side, just blocked by his returning sword. I blocked the counter strike, and continued with the flurry of blows, each swiftly blocked by my adversary. He was a skilled swordspony.

But like all the Diomedians, he was undisciplined, and eventually left the cool, collected state that a swordspony needs for victory, and started maniacally attacking wildly. I countered, and my strikes started landing home, cutting or grazing him. Every strike seemed to leave him more crazed, and eventually he was no more likely to hit me than an elephant a fly.

I poised, waiting for when he would leave himself open, and he did. A brutal strike left his sword stuck in the ground, and as he lowered his head to raise it, I swung the fatal strike, cutting his head clean off. It fell and rolled on the ground. I dropped my sword and ran to the filly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 02:24:05 pm
Schmutz eventually returned with a doctor as ordered, who proceeded to scold Falcata for leaving her bed before diagnosing Kris.  Falcata refused to rest until she knew Kris would be okay, but it didn't take long for that conclusion to be drawn.  She cracked two ribs, and had managed a few cuts and scrapes, but she would recover in short order, the doctor had told her.  Much to Falcata's relief, the blood on Kris' mouth was from a cut lip, not a punctured lung.

With another dose of pain killing magic working through both of them, Kris had finally managed to slip off to sleep.  Falcata managed to convince the doctors to relocate her next to her daughter, and she collapsed into bed.  She was too worked up to sleep though, and at long last, she magically fetched a quill and piece of paper to record her thoughts.

Falcata's Diary Addenda - 23rd Felsite

I can't believe I forgot to mention that none other than Commissar Abel was here in the hospital as Toltot brought my sorry hide here.  It seems his selfless reputation is well deserved, as he was checking up on the wounded like they were family.  He personally wished me well, and if I hadn't been in such pain at the time I'd have probably giggled like a foal.

In other news, it seems that Khenal has finally awoken from his coma.  He left the hospital while I was still sleeping, so I didn't speak with him, but I'm glad he's alright.

24th Felsite

Kris and I were woken by a young filly galloping into the hospital late tonight, who I was later to learn was Captain Carrot's daughter, Lilac.  I can definitely see the resemblance both physically and in behavior now.

I didn't pay her much mind, even when she started talking to Kris, until she mentioned she knew what was really wrong with me.  I hadn't spoken with any doctors today, so I had no clue what she was going on about, but she told Kris that my stomach was rotting.  I thought she was just making things up or exaggerating like foals often do, but Kris was practically hysterical.  It was all I could do to calm her down.  Lilac dropped the point eventually after planning events after my death, and offered for Kris to join her elsewhere.  After a little encouragement on my part, she did so, leaving me for the first time in over a day.

Hopefully she forgets about that nonsense.  As soon as the doctors get a splint on my leg, I'll be out of here.  I should bring up the nausea and vomiting with Dr. Bubbles though.  Perhaps he has something he can treat it with.

25th Felsite

Today was... awful, to put it very mildly.

I thought Lilac was making things up, but when I finally spoke with Dr. Bubbles this morning, he admitted it was true.  He can't explain it, but my stomach is somehow decaying.  I knew I was sick... but I never expected that.  He gave me some medication that has settled my stomach a bit, and I was finally able to eat a little something this afternoon, but he made it pretty clear that there was nothing more he could do.  My body will have to fight it off if I'm going to live, and I could tell from his expression and comments that the odds weren't good.  When I pressed him for more, he told me I probably had a few months to maybe a year to live.  The decay was very slow, he said.  Little comfort.

I decided not to tell Kris, hoping she wouldn't remember it at all.  I felt numb.  I still don't think it's settled in my mind that I'm dying.

I forgot all about that a few hours later when the commissar returned however.  Much to my horror, he was carrying Kris, who was injured.  The doctors came and found she had a few cracked ribs, but it was nothing she wouldn't recover fully from.  That was a tremendous relief, but I still feel jittery about it.  I barely managed to get anything but apologies from her, but she said she and Lilac were playing in the forest when a tentacle pony attacked them.

I was devastated that she would do something like that.  If the commissar hadn't been there at just the right moment, she would be dead or worse right now, and that's something I can't even begin to think about.  I owe him more than I can give for bringing her back to me.  I must thank him next time I see him... I was too shaken up to do so while he was here.  He ran off to go find Lilac once he discovered she was still loose in the wilderness somewhere.  I dearly hope the filly is alright, if anypony can help her, it's him.

Kris has finally settled down and gone to sleep.  She thinks I'm angry at her, and maybe I am.  She knew better than to go out in the forest, and this is exactly why.  I'm too upset and worried about her to be truly mad at her right now.  Every time she wakes and groans, it tears at my heart.  At least she's here where I can watch her again.  I try to do everything I can for her, but I can't be everywhere at once.

I... just hope that I'll be here long enough.



((Armok's beard, that turned out even longer than the last one I think.  I get a bit carried away writing these things!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 10, 2011, 02:29:42 pm
((Armok's beard, that turned out even longer than the last one I think.  I get a bit carried away writing these things!))

((That's fine with me, I enjoy reading these.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 02:35:51 pm
((same here!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 02:50:31 pm
The Filly was delirious, clearly having been traumatized by the monster.
"S-STAY A-A-AWAY!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 03:21:19 pm
((That's fine with me, I enjoy reading these.))

Quote from: The Master
((same here!))

((Well, that's good to know. :)  In a way I'm a bit frustrated that Falcata is probably going to live through having her guts slowly turn into gak, since there's so much potential character development for her and Kris if she dies.  Assuming a FB or something doesn't kill her, she'll probably be just fine.  Which is why I pegged her at a year or so to live, that gives time for me to work in a way for her to survive.))

Quote from: The Master
The Filly was delicious, clearly having been traumatized by the monster.
"S-STAY A-A-AWAY!!!"

((Delicious?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 03:26:41 pm
((...fucking spell checker...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 03:49:28 pm
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

I was tired. I'd come close to death twice in the last hour. What I did then may have not been the best decision, but it was all I could think of at the time. I sheathed my sword and walked to the terrified filly. She stood still, shivering but too afraid to run. I lifted her carefully in my mouth, and started to carry her back to fortress. It was a long walk, but eventually we got there.

I dropped her in the fortress, and pushed her along. Eventually, we got her to the hospital, and left her there.

I headed to my room, intent on getting at least a few hours of sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 10, 2011, 04:00:06 pm
((Sorry I disappeared yesterday. More Christmas stuff, and a Chemistry final.))

Starkey cradles Otik in his hooves, on the verge of panic.

'Please, Celestia, Luna, please, tell me it didn't touch her...'


"...Otik... hun... are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 04:02:28 pm
"She should be fine," said the Inquisitor, not halting in her vigil over Friesden. "Even this mare may recover, and the daemon was possessing her for what appears to be some time."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 10, 2011, 04:09:00 pm
He mutters a quiet thanks to each Princess.

"But... how? Commissar Abel said it had never been done before."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 04:11:57 pm
"Exorcisms are not well publicised. For good reason. I have no doubt he hasn't seen or heard of any before today."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 10, 2011, 04:12:26 pm
Lilac doesn't move; does not want to move; cannot move. She simply stares, unblinking, at the wall she's facing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 10, 2011, 04:17:01 pm
"The way you were speaking about Friesden, I'm guessing that's because they usually aren't this successful?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 04:39:26 pm
"Or because the possessed are simply too dangerous to keep alive."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 10, 2011, 04:47:05 pm
"...You only sent it away. The beast could just come back, couldn't it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 10, 2011, 05:27:05 pm
"We didn't just send it away. We burnt it out."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 10, 2011, 06:51:11 pm
"'Burnt it out'? What do-"

It hits him: there is only one thing that could mean.

"No... y-you didn't..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 10, 2011, 07:50:05 pm
I toss the book aside, frustrated.  It lands in the third pile, next to the door.  I've been poring over my books for information on what the buck might have happened to Friesden, but nothing was helping.

"Why do I have no information on anything like this?!"

I pace, growing more anoyed by the moment at my lack of knowledge.

'Ponies do not just sprout tentacles!'

I shake my head, and leave my and Friesden's chambers.

'Istlig knows something.  It's time I asked her what's going on.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 10, 2011, 10:24:53 pm
Kris wakes to a dull pain in her side that fluctuates with each breath.  Everything is a bit hazy, a side effect of some magic the doctors had used on her, but she eventually works up the courage to look over to her mother.  Falcata is asleep, but her face still bears the troubled expression she had worn since the commissar had brought her here.

Guilt wells inside her again.  Her mom was so upset when she was brought to the hospital... she never wanted to see that look of horror on her mom's face again.  She could stand her being angry at her, but this was something so much worse.

She prepares to turn over and return to sleep when she spies Lilac sitting against the far wall of the hospital.  The guilt is replaced for a moment with elation.  The filly had nearly gotten them killed, but she was very happy to see that she was alright.


"Lilac?" she calls, propping herself up with a bit of difficulty.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 01:17:47 am
"Yes, I did. Friesden is there still, captain. Worry not. But the daemon will not be back."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 01:25:05 am
"...oh..."

Okay, maybe there was more than one thing it could mean.

It was at this moment that Otik elected to wake.

"Ugh... Wha..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 01:36:18 am
"Could be anything from one to ten days till she wakes. Go get some sleep."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 01:37:06 am
"Well, this is supposed to be the place."

I knock on the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 01:41:49 am
"Where... am I? Wha' happened?"

Starkey rushes to her side.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 01:45:37 am
((I'm confused as to where everyone is now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 01:48:37 am
((Sounds like this is some time later, and Otik and Friesden have been moved to another room after the incident in the barracks.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 01:50:06 am
((I have no idea.  I thought Istlig and Starkey were either in the hospital or Istlig's quarters with Friesden around somewhere, but it looks like I'm so very wrong.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 01:51:01 am
((I thought we were still in the chapel.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 01:52:51 am
((There is no chapel. Just a little triptych (fold-out wall thingy with carvings n' shit.) in the barracks.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 01:55:42 am
((The triptych, then.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 02:01:20 am
((Right, the triptych.  Now I remember.  Khenal's knocking on the barracks door, since he doesn't have any actual position to simply go in.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 02:02:23 am
"Come in."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 02:08:33 am
'...Istlig?'

I open the door and step inside, a bit confused as to what's actually going on.  I slowly make my way towards the triptych.


"Istlig?  What's going on?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 02:13:19 am
"You can call me Amberley. We've burnt out the daemon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 02:14:17 am
"Khenal? You're awake! Good to see you up and about again, lad."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 02:18:30 am
"Amberley?  Commander Starkey!  What do you mea- Friesden!"

I ignore Amberley and Starkey as I rush towards Friesden, concern for her plain on my face.



*****************
One of Friesden's legs turned into a tentacle and was chopped off, right?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 02:20:25 am
((her real leg grew back when the daemon was banished.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 02:21:15 am
((We decided to have it grow back. I felt sorry for the poor filly.))

Friesden appears to be in a coma.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 02:28:21 am
After taking a few moments to make sure she's alright, I stand and look at Starkey and Amberley.

"...What's going on here?  The last thing I recall clearly before the hospital was the trial.  Why did Freisden...mutate?  Whatever that was?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 02:32:05 am
"Uh, aye, you missed a lot while you were out. I suppose first:"

He gestures towards Vail with a hoof.

"Khenal, allow me to introduce Inquisitor Amberley Vail of Tailentranced."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 02:37:19 am
"Inquisitor?  Seriously?  I mean, it makes sense that one's here with all that's happened, but..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 02:40:34 am
"Of the Ordo Xenos in particular. Nevertheless. Your...fillyfriend here was possessed by a cunning daemon, one of Slaanesh. How long it had been in her, I cannot say."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 02:46:12 am
"I...don't think it was there when she was tried.  Where did you bind it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 02:48:43 am
"I'm no radical, Khenal. I exorcised the daemon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 02:56:34 am
My eyes go wide.

"You forced it out?  Without harming her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 02:57:51 am
"She will not be permanently damaged."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 03:03:30 am
"Can...I check on her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 03:09:23 am
"Yes, you may."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 03:09:45 am
"Did I pass out? Wha' happened t' miss Friesden? Where's Poncy Git?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 03:11:30 am
I close my eyes as my horn glows softly.  The link quickly forms and I carefully enter Friesden's mindscape.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 03:13:45 am
Even as he tries to enter, a large wall blocks his path. It seems to encircle the entire mindscape, with no gates or gaps to pass through.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 03:18:52 am
I gently rap on the wall.

'Friesden?  Can you hear me?  Are you alright?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 03:20:20 am
Silence is all that greets him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 03:27:03 am
I call out a few more times, hoping Friesden can hear me through the wall, before terminating the link and returning to reality.

"I hope she really is alright.  That wall looks like she either learned mental defense in a hurry, or...  Anyway, what else have I missed?  Inquisitors don't usually just announce who they are."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 03:28:14 am
"Wait. Stars... where's Lilac?"

"What? I saw her come in earlier with Officer Falcata's filly, Kris. They were both asleep last I saw."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 03:31:04 am
"We've got a serious problem. A Khornate cult, and somepony here placed the daemon in Friesden, which means we may be dealing with a pleasure cult, too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 03:34:16 am
I blink a few times while trying to process that.

"That's...very bad.  Is there anything I can do to help?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 03:37:02 am
"At the moment? No. All we can do is wait for the members of both cults to act against us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 03:38:37 am
Otik climbs out of bed and quietly moves to the bedroom door. She nudges it open and steps inside.

Immediately, she comes flying out.

"They're nae here!"


"What? That isn't possible, we've been here the whole time you were out! Milady Vail, did you see the two fillies leave?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 03:44:09 am
"What fillies?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 03:48:21 am
"Who's fillies?"

I ask, walking over to the door to peer inside.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 03:54:44 am
"The lads have been sitting around outside ever since we kicked them out of the barracks. One of them has to have seen them."

"Aye, I'll go ask around."

She leaves. Starkey turns to Khenal.


"You remember Lilac Joker, Carrot's youngest foal? She... she's staying with us now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 04:11:00 am
"What?  Why?"

I look around the room for signs of a struggle or traces of magic, only half paying attention to what Starkey is saying.  Figuring out where they are now is more important than why Lilac is spending the night with Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 04:14:26 am
"A lot has happened while you were out, lad."

*sigh*, "Kil is dead, Khenal. And so are her two colts, Lilac's brothers. All murdered, in... the most brutal way. She doesn't have anypony else."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 04:19:40 am
I freeze in my inspection when I hear what Starkey said, before sitting down heavily.

"How...Who...What?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 04:22:17 am
"Their deaths were part of some kind of ritual to the Chaos god Khorne. That's what tipped us off to this cult."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 04:34:01 am
I shake my head, trying to focus.

'Cruel as it sounds, you can't help them if they're dead.  And these fillies may still be alive.  Focus!'

I steel my gaze and resume inspecting the room the fillies were supposed to be in for anything unusual, magical or mundane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 11, 2011, 04:36:53 am
((Just posting this then going to bed.))
The beds in the room are both messy, and one of them has a red wool hat on it, Lilac's favorite. The room itself is fairly normal besides that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 11, 2011, 10:16:49 am
((Long post is long.   :)  And forgive me if I've misremembered anything or butchered Otik's accent.  Dsarker's log was missing the first little bit, and I didn't have it either.  I glossed over the Dr. Alen thing a bit, since I'm not sure how relevant it'll be in the end.  Should be enough details left if it comes to that.  Also, forgive me if I haven't followed the formatting strictly, way too many nested italic tags to get this done in any reasonable time frame.))

Kris wakes to a dull pain in her side that fluctuates with each breath. Everything is a bit hazy, a side effect of some magic the doctors had used on her, but she eventually works up the courage to look over to her mother. Falcata is asleep, but her face still bears the troubled expression she had worn since the commissar had brought her here.

Guilt wells inside her again. Her mom was so upset when she was brought to the hospital... she never wanted to see that look of horror on her mom's face again. She could stand her being angry at her, but this was something so much worse.

She prepares to turn over and return to sleep when she spies Lilac sitting against the far wall of the hospital. The guilt is replaced for a moment with elation. The filly had nearly gotten them killed, but she was very happy to see that she was alright.

"Lilac?" she calls, propping herself up with a bit of difficulty.

There is no response.

"Lilac?" she insists, with greater volume.

Still no response.  Kris starts to rise from bed, fear beginning to grow inside her.  "Lilac, what's wrong?"  She starts to hop down, but a mare in barding bursts into the hospital, searching the room frantically with her eyes.

"Where is she?  I 'eard she wos in 'ere!" the mare bellows.

"Lilac?  She's over there", Kris answers, pointing at the stricken filly with some trepidation.

The mare, Otik, she thinks her name is, dashes over and throws her hooves around the filly.  "Oh Lilac, wot happened to ye?  Are ye alright?"

Kris works up the courage to hop out of the bed and trots over.  "Is she okay?  She wouldn't talk to me..."

Otik studies Lilac's blank expression and gives the filly a gentle nudge.  "Lilac?  Speak to me, wot's wrong?"  She looks over to Kris.  "Wot happened to 'er?"

Kris looks away sheepishly.  As mad as her mom had been, Miss Otik would surely be furious.  "I-I'm sorry Miss Otik... we-we were playing in th-the forest."

The mare's eyes go wide.  "Oh, sisters..."

"But we were saved by somepony that wore a funny hat.  I think mom calls him Abel."

"Poncy git?  Big hat?  Red sash?"

Kris nods.  "Yeah, that's him."

Well, whoever saved them, that didn't matter right now.  Otik looks back to Lilac, who hasn't so much as blinked since she set hoof in the hospital.  She notices a few shallow cuts along the filly's body, and a nasty gash along her side.  "Why 'asn't anypony treated 'er yet?"

Kris shrugs and rubs at her aching side.  "A doctor was in here a little while ago.  He gave me something to drink that made my side hurt less."  She rolls her eyes and thinks.  "That was before I fell asleep though..."

There was no time for this foolishness.  What kind of doctors leave a hospital unattended with injured children in it?  Otik stands and hurries over to the nearby cabinets and begins rummaging through them.  It had been a while since she'd had to perform first aid of any sort, but anypony could clean a cut and apply a bandage.

In her haste, she knocks over a box of things she didn't recognize and didn't particularly care about right now.  The clattering of strange metal instruments against stone echoes through the hospital, and Falcata cracks her eyes with a weak grunt.  She spots Otik hurrying back over to Lilac and croaks, "Lieutenant Otik?  What's going on?"

"Lilac's hurt and there's nae a doctor in sight!" she responds, beginning to tear a piece of gauze to bandage Lilac.

Falcata tries to rise in bed, but catches halfway.  She clenches her jaw and fights back a cry before giving up on leaving the bed.  "How bad is it?"

"She's got a few cuts, but she'll be alright."  Otik begins to wrap the gauze around the now cleaned cuts and notices the lack of blood flow.  She pauses for a moment, her mind not want to admit what she's seeing.  "Oh, sisters... Luna... Celestia..."

"What?" Falcata asks, propping herself up to get a better look.  There is no response from Otik.  Her own pain seemed a bit irrelevant at this point, and she forces herself out of bed with significant effort.  "Lieutenant, what is it?"

Otik begins to cry softly as she pulls Lilac in closer.  "Why... why did this 'ave to happen to ye?"

Falcata begins to limp over as Kris backs away from the scene.  "I-is she okay, Miss Otik?"

Otik shakes her head and continues to embrace the filly.  "She's... she's..."

Falcata crouches next to the two as Kris clings to her.  She places a hoof on Otik's back and takes a closer look at Lilac.  "It... doesn't look too bad..."

Otik can barely bring herself to utter the next word.  She lowers her head and gives the filly another squeeze.  "...undead.  Jus' like 'er father..."

Falcata gasps and looks back to Lilac. "I... but... she's..."  She had never encountered the undead before, but she knew of them.  She half expected the wilds around Glitterglen to be filled with the monstrosities when she arrived, but was thankful to find that at least some of the rumors of the place were just that.  Rumors.  Regardless, Lilac didn't look anything like the undead as far she was aware of.  "How?"

Otik looks her squarely in the face and exclaims, "I-I dun know!"

Falcata raises an eyebrow.  "Wait... this happened to Captain Carrot before?  He... seemed fine, last I saw him."

Otik wipes her eyes and says, "I-it happened a couple of times... He'd die, then get better, then die again..."

Kris cowers behind her mother, disbelieving what she is hearing.  Falcata shakes her head.  None of this made any sense... the filly looked traumatized, not cursed with eternal unlife.  "I-I don't understand... how can you get better from that?"

Otik's face is plastered with frustration and fear.  She opens her mouth to speak, but the hospital door slams open abruptly.  Dr. Alen wanders in, walking in irregular wobbles and carrying a bottle of something in his mouth.  He pauses after a few steps, turns to look at the knot of frightened ponies, and puzzles at them.  "Wha... what the hell are hospitals doing in my mare?"

Finally a doctor!  Falcata rises to her feet and turns to face the new arrival.  "Doctor!  Can you take a look at Lilac?  There's something wrong with her..."

Dr. Alen's eyes uncross for a moment as he brings them into focus.  "Shet up, mare!  Don't you dare tell me what to do!"

Falcata blinks in confusion.  "Doctor... I-"

"This is... this is... this is my hospital!  Go and get yer own!"  Dr. Alen snorts and takes another swig from his bottle.

Otik stands, letting her mane hang in her face carelessly.  Was this pony serious?  She wasn't going to take much more of this...

"Doctor... sh-should you be drinking while on duty?"  Falcata asks.

He glowers at her and snorts again.  "I'm the doctor here.  I'll decide what I doing to be ought!"

Otik begins to walk toward him.  "I dun' give a damn.... if it's her majesty's own hospital!"

Dr. Alen rolls his eyes and tries to stabilize himself.  "What 'her' majesty?  It's his majesty, you filly!  And didn't you hear me?  Get!"

Otik bares her teeth and lets out a low growl.  "You... will treat this filly this instant!"

"She's fine... just slap a bandage on her... somewhere,"  the doctor replies, waving a hoof randomly in Lilac's direction.

Falcata scowls and snatches the bottle from the inebriated doctor with a flare of magic from her horn.  "I think you've had enough, doctor.  Where is Dr. Bubbles?"

Dr. Alen grasps feebly for the floating bottle as it's taken away.  "Hey!  That's my bottle, you mare!"  He gives up after a few wild grabs and staggers backward.  "Get, all of you!  This is my hospital, I won't have you clogging it up with sick people!"

Otik notes the bottle hovering gently nearby and snatches it from the air with her mouth.  She smashes it against the nearest cupboard and points the jagged glass at Dr. Alen.  As she begins to step toward the doctor, he backs into another cupboard and knocks a piece of glassware down, which smashes against his head.  "Oww!  Dammit!"

This was getting out of hand... Falcata steps up behind Otik and says, "Lieutenant, wait... let's not start something we'll regret."

"You... are a doctor.  Get off yer sorry arse... and tell me what's wrong with my child!" she insists, taking another step closer.

Falcata takes a step back.  She was in no position to prevent Otik from picking a fight with the doctor, and she didn't want to get herself or Kris hurt any worse if it came to that.  "Lieutenant..."

"Ye don't have any children!  You're single!" the doctor scoffs.

Falcata dislodges Kris from her leg and says, "Kris, go back to our room.  I'll come get you in a minute."  Kris hesitates, staring at Otik and the doctor.  "Go!" she insists, giving the filly a nudge.

"O-okay!" The filly takes a few cautious steps toward the door before trotting off down the hall.  Falcata immediately cursed herself for not telling her to bring Captain Isos instead.  She really hoped this didn't turn violent... Lieutenant Otik had more sense than that...

Her attention is drawn to Dr. Alen stumbling forward a step and collapsing.  Had Otik struck him?  No, Otik still stood well out of range.  She cautiously approaches the doctor, noting that the drink that had leaked from the broken bottle smelled extremely strong... almost acrid.  "Doctor?"

His eyes are wildly out of focus as he begins to mumble incoherently.  "I can see the palace..."  He chuckles.  "So... beautiful...."

Falcata nudges him and repeats her question.  "Doctor, can you hear me?"

Otik spits out the improvised weapon and snorts.  "Drunk out 'o 'is mind."

"Yes... I think you're right."  Falcata begins to examine him, noting that he's completely oblivious to the world.  "Too much... maybe..."  Her heart rate begins to hasten.  The last thing they needed right now was for Dr. Alen to die of alcohol poisoning.

She prepares to hoist the inebriated stallion onto a nearby bed when a knock comes at the door, moments before the smell of unwashed socks.  "Hello, is anypony there?" a voice calls.  A few moments later, the door creaks open, followed by the commissar's aide walking in.

Dr. Alen immediately recovers and begins backing away from the new arrival.  "God-princesses above!  Get... get away from me... get away from me!"

The grime covered pony scratches his head.  He turns to look at Otik and asks, "What's his problem, miss?"

She scowls at the flailing doctor and replies, "Drunk.  Is th' booze talkin'."

As the two continue to speak and ignore the bundle of insanity scrabbling around on the floor, Falcata notes the pieces of the shattered bottle lying around on the floor, mostly intact.  Something was off about the smell of the stuff... where did he get it?  She begins to piece the bottle back together.

Otik notices her set to work and raises an eyebrow.  "Err, sergeant, wot are ye doin'?

She shakes her head and replies, "I... don't know.  I'm not sure that was just alcohol."  She finishes piecing the bottle back together and levitates it in front of Otik.  The doctor continues to babble and shout as Schmutz inspects him closer.

Otik takes a glance at the bottle, seeing nothing interesting about it.  "Alright... ye can fix it.  So?  Are ye hurtin' fer bottles?"  Lilac was undead, Dr. Alen was stark raving mad, and now Sergeant Falcata was taking an interest to the bottle?  Had everypony lost their minds?

Falcata sniffs the bottle, smelling the acrid odor again.  She hobbles over to the doctor, favoring her injured leg.  "Doctor, what were you drinking?  Where did you get this?"

He takes a moment away from cowering from Schmutz to reply, "I-I don't remember!  Th-they gave it to me!"

"Who?"

"I don't know!"  He scrabbles backward again from Schmutz and adds, "Keep the hole away from me!

Schmutz grabs the doctor and shouts, "You tell the lieutenant and sergeant right now!"  The doctor only replies with panicked shrieks and tries in vain to wriggle away.

Otik growls under her breath and takes a step forward.  "This is gettin' us nowhere.  Yer not gonna get anythin' else out o' him 'till he's sober.  Try again t'morrow mornin'."

Schmutz drops the doctor and turns to the two mares.  "Anything I can do, ma'am?" he asks Otik, deferring to the highest ranking of the two.

"Get 'im out o' 'ere," she replies immediately.

Falcata nods.  "If he was drunk while on duty, I think that alone is worth enough a night in jail."  She instinctively reaches for her jail keys before realizing they were with her barding... wherever the doctors had taken that to.  "Do you know where the jail is?  See if you can find him a cell for the night.  Captain Isos should be able to help you if you run into any trouble."

As Schmutz scoops up the sobbing doctor, Otik adds, "And see if ye can find a real doctor!"  Otik resists the urge to shout something uncouth at the doctor as he is hauled away from the hospital.  Unbelievable, that stallion.  She begins to turn back to Lilac when she hears Falcata call the filly's name.

She finds the filly blinking blankly as she sits against the wall.  "Yes?" Lilac asks, blinking again.

At the sound of Lilac's voice, Otik rushes over and envelopes her in a crushing hug.  "Oh... Lilac..."

Falcata wanders back over and kneels beside Lilac again.  "Honey, are you okay?"

The filly blinks idly again and frowns.  "I... feel wierd..."

Otik releases the hug.  "Wierd how, hun?"

"I normally feel my heartbeat, but..." she begins, reaching for the vein in her neck.

Otik pulls her closer again and begins to nuzzle her.  "It's nothin', lit'l one.  Yer okay now..."

Lilac ignores the mare and continues to feel her neck.  An expression of utter terror washes over her face as she feels nothing.  "Am.. am... am.. I..."

"Lilac, look a' me... dun' panic..."

"Buh... buh..." the filly begins, eyes wide in fear.  Tears begin to form in the corners of her eyes, and she lets out a sniffle.

"Stay calm hun, breathe..."

Lilac bursts into tears, sobbing uncontrollably.  Otik presses her into her chest and begins to join the crying.  "Shh... hey, c'mon now..." she manages at last.

Falcata forces a weak smile at last, completely baffled at what to say or do.  This is far beyond anything she was familiar with.  "You're going to be fine, honey."

"I'm dead!?"

Otik nuzzles her again.  "I know yer scared hun, 'cause I'm scared.  But.. everythin's gonna be alright.  Yer gonna be okay.  We'll find a way t' fix this, and you... you'll be okay.  But I need ye t' be brave fer me, hun.  I need ye t' be brave, so I can be brave, okay?"

Falcata strokes Lilac's mane gently.  "You're here talking to us, aren't you?  I don't think anypony that's dead can do that."

Lilac sputters something and begins to hyperventilate.  Her eyes roll back in her head and she finally goes limp with a sigh.  Otik panics for a moment and shouts something incoherent before realizing that Lilac is still breathing.

Falcata swears under her breath.  "Where's a real doctor when you need one!?"

Otik ignores the statement and gently places Lilac on the nearest available bed.

"Wait.. Lieutenant, you've seen this before.  What do we do?"

She shakes her head and wipes her eyes and nose.  "I... I dun' know.  I never found out how Carrot got better."

The silence that follows is deafening.  Finally, Falcata asks, "W-would Capt - I mean Khenal be able to help?  Wasn't he good friends with Captain Carrot?"

"Aye... he was.  Way I hear, he wos there every time Carrot... died?  He should know if anypony does."

Falcata looks to the empty bed where Khenal was last and nods gravely.  "Good... but I have no idea where he is..."

Otik raises a hoof to her head.  "Las' I saw 'im, he was in th' barracks with Star... th' Cap'n."

Falcata takes a step toward the door and freezes as a jolt of pain rolls through her body.  She clenches her teeth and sucks in her breath .  "We... should go... get him... then..." she manages between pained breaths.

Otik shakes her head and points a hoof to Falcata's bed.  "I'll go get 'im.  Yer in nae condition t' do anythin' but rest.  Stay here, lie down an'..."  She points back to Lilac.  "Watch 'er fer me?"

Falcata lowers her head and nods.  "You're right, of course."  Overreaching herself is what got her here in the first place.  She climbs back into bed with some effort.  "I'll keep any eye on Lilac.  Oh, and would you mind telling Kris it's safe to come back here?"  She would hate for Dr. Bubbles to show up looking for them and she not be here.

"Aye, I'll send 'er," Otik replies as she heads for the exit.

Falcata smiles weakly.  "Thank you, lieutenant."  As Otik steps out, she collapses in exhaustion and watches Lilac's motionless body.  At least the foal was still breathing.  She wasn't sure she was looking forward to Khenal diagnosing the child, and especially didn't want Kris to get too worried over it.

None of this made any sense to her...


((Edit: spelling))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 11, 2011, 12:35:58 pm
((I can't wait to see it! I'll be gone for a few hours.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 01:58:17 pm
'Lilac's hat.  Perfect, there should be a few of her hairs on it.'

My horn shines as I levitate Lilac's hat and scour it for strands of hair.



*******************

Looking forward to the IRC transcription as well.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 11, 2011, 06:13:08 pm
Khenal finds a single strand of hair inside the hat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 11, 2011, 07:16:20 pm
I smile and carefully remove the hair from the woolen hat before turning to face the others.

"Otik once asked me if I could track somepony.  You remember my answer, Captain?"

I smile at Captain Otik as my horn begins to glow with my tracking spell.  The hair bends into an arrow and quickly begins to turn in air, before slowing and coming to a stop.

"Let's go find these fillies before it's too late!"


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I'll be heading out soon, so Impending or Dsarker can take over Khenal if it's needed.  No offense, The Master.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 07:33:07 pm
((Otik already left, and hasn't come back yet.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 11, 2011, 11:02:30 pm
Meanwhile near the hospital...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 11:03:51 pm
Back in her mother's quarters, Kris hears a knock at the door.

"Kris? Are ye in there? Yer mum says it's okay t' come back now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 11, 2011, 11:06:08 pm
Kris perks up as she hears Otik's voice.  She hurries to the door and unlatches it, then opens it up.

"Is everything okay, Miss Otik?  Is Lilac alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 11:09:22 pm
*sigh*, "She's fine right now. I know somepony who c'n help 'er."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 11, 2011, 11:21:21 pm
She takes a step toward the hospital.  "Is there anything I can do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 11, 2011, 11:38:15 pm
"She's real scared right now. I think bein' there for 'er is the best thing ye could do for 'er."

She turns and heads for the barracks.


((Dsarker: If you would do the honors of playing Khenal?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 11, 2011, 11:44:57 pm
"Yes ma'am."  Kris trots off to the hospital, hoping Lilac really is alright.  She doesn't like the way Otik sounded about it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 11, 2011, 11:52:37 pm
Kris reaches the hospital, and finds Falcata asleep, and Lilac crying in a ball on the floor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 11, 2011, 11:54:32 pm
"Lilac?"  She hurries over to her and places a hoof on her shoulder.  "Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 11, 2011, 11:54:47 pm
((Okay.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 11, 2011, 11:56:45 pm
"NO! WH-WH-WHY AM I D-D-DEAD?!" Sobs Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 11, 2011, 11:59:45 pm
Kris frowns.  She remembered what Otik said while she was still in the hospital, but none of that made any sense to her.  Lilac certainly seemed alive to her.

"You're not dead... how could you be moving and talking if you were?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 12:01:27 am
Lilac explains what happened after Kris left, sobbing and crying all the way through.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 12:04:44 am
She sits in silence for a few moments, trying to think of something to say.  She still doesn't really understand...

"It's... it's going to be okay.  Miss Otik said she knew somepony who could help you."  She forms a small smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 12:07:45 am
Lilac begins hyperventilating again, shaking uncontrollably and sobbing harder than ever.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 12:15:06 am
Kris backs up a step.  What should she do?  She looks over to her sleeping mother and considers for a moment waking her... but what good could she do?  Oh... she really wished Miss Otik was here!

She grabs Lilac and tries to hold her still.
  "Lilac!  Calm down!  You're going to be okay!  Miss Otik is on the way here now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 12:23:23 am
Lilac is wild eyed at this stage, muttering nonsense and hitting her head into the ground.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 12:28:31 am
Kris stares at the scene in shock.  She does the first thing that comes to mind, and her horn flares with a spark of magic as she lifts Lilac from the floor.  Can't hit your head against anything if you can't reach it, right?

It takes all of the magical strength she has to keep Lilac from hurting herself, but she brings her a little closer.  Time to try a different approach.


"Lilac?  Please, you've got to calm down... you're going to be okay..." she begins in a soft tone.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 12:30:09 am
Lilac is too busy hitting her head into the non-existent floor to notice Kris's actions.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 12:35:40 am
She stares in confusion for a moment.  At least she solved one problem, and Lilac wasn't crying her eyes out right now.  She had a feeling that this was a lot worse than it looked though... where did Miss Otik say she was going?  Could she take Lilac to her?

She pushed the thought aside.  Keeping her in the air like this was getting very hard... how did unicorns lift big things?  Then a thought hits her: her mom is a unicorn, maybe she knew a spell that could help!

Kris struggles to keep Lilac aloft as she bolts to her mother and urgently tries to rouse her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 12, 2011, 12:36:24 am
Otik reaches the barracks, and enters to find only Starkey and Vail.

"Stars? Where did mister Khenal go? I need t'see 'im."


"He's just in Lilac's bedroom. What happened, did you find her?"

"Aye... but somethin's wrong. Tha's why I came lookin' for 'im."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 12:39:41 am
Khenal came out of the room at that point, his horn glowing.

"I think I can find her now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 12:47:39 am
Falcata blinks the sleep from her eyes.  What happened?  She just closed her eyes for a second...

She was supposed to be watching Lilac!  She immediately props herself up in bed and sees that Lilac is missing from her own bed.  It only takes a second for her to see Lilac floating next to Kris a few steps away, idly bashing her head into nothingness.

Kris begins to tear up.
  "Mom, help!  I-I don't know what to do!"

Neither did she.  "G-give her to me!"  She scoops Lilac up with her own magic as Kris' magic fails.  "Lilac?  What's wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 12, 2011, 12:52:15 am
"Uh... find who?"

"Sorry lad, she's already been found."

"Who... oh! Aye, she's in th' hospital. Would ye come with me, mister Khenal? There's somethin' wrong with 'er, an' yer th' only one I know who c'n help 'er.."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 12:53:54 am
"Uh..okay. If you think I can help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 12:54:57 am
"I'M D-D-DEAD..." Sobs Lilac, repeating herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 01:01:11 am
Falcata sits up in bed with some effort.  She levitates Lilac closer and hugs her like Otik did, stroking her mane gently.  "It's okay, honey," she says softly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 01:02:58 am
Lilac cries into Falcata's mane, soaking it rather quickly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 12, 2011, 01:06:54 am
"Alright, jus'... come with me."

Otik turns to leave, and Starkey falls in behind her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 01:08:33 am
Falcata continues to embrace her gently.  Her own troubles seem to pale in insignificance for a moment.  The child had lost her entire family in just a few days, and was now convinced she had joined them in some sick parody of undeath.

"It's okay..." she repeats softly.

Kris sniffles quietly to herself and moves to the other side of the bed, out of sight.  She felt terrible about what was happening... she didn't even want to look.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 01:09:11 am
Khenal follows obediently.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 01:10:35 am
Lilac continues sobbing into Falcata's mane as Khenal and Otik enter the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 12, 2011, 01:30:01 am
Otik rests a hoof on Lilac's shoulder.

"Shh, it's okay hun. I brought somepony who can help ye. Y'remember mister Khenal, aye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 01:31:55 am
"S-s-sorta..." Says Lilac, trying not to cry again, but failing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 01:39:26 am
"Hello Lilac. What's wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 01:40:16 am
"I'M DEAD!!!!!!" Screams Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 12, 2011, 01:42:31 am
"Dead? Lilca, sweetheart, you're no-"

Starkey connects the dots.

"Oh. Oh... Sisters, does it... run in the family?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 01:44:55 am
Lilac throws a shard of glass at Starkey for saying that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 01:49:52 am
((Assuming that's from Alen's bottle...))

The shard of glass flies perfectly through the air, landing deep in Starkey's flesh. Strangely, he feels happy instead of feeling pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 12, 2011, 01:57:16 am
"Lilac, don- oooohhh... Huh."

Starkey pokes at the shard embedded in his chest.

"Wow, that's... deep. That's quite the arm, Lilac!"

"Stars? hun, yer bleeding."

"I am? Aw, not on my good shirt!"

He pulls out a cloth and tries to mop up as much blood as he can. Finding the glas shard in his way, he pulls it out, and promptly falls to the ground wailing in pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 02:00:52 am
((HA HA!!!!! I can't stop laughing!!!!))
"LEAVE ME ALONE YA BUCKING SON OF A-"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 02:02:23 am
"What the hay is happening?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 12, 2011, 02:06:24 am
Otik grabs the filly by the shoulders.

"Lilac Joker! Dunnae ever let me hear ye use language like that! What's gotten into ye, girl?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 02:08:39 am
"BUT I'M DEAD!!!!" The poor filly continues to say.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 02:12:08 am
Falcata releases Lilac and gives her over to Otik.  Best let her handle this...

While Otik is lecturing Lilac, she hops down from the bed and starts to inspect Captain Starkey.  The wound was starting to bleed more...

Kris is now scrabbling away from the injured captain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 02:12:10 am
"Oh...ummm. I think I know the problem now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 12, 2011, 02:15:59 am
"C-Clop... dammit..."

Starkey uses the small cloth to apply pressure to his wound.

"W-Why... didn't I feel that? I should have... been on the floor... as soon as I was hit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 02:17:52 am
Lilac bursts into hysterical sobs again, traumatizing Kris even further.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 02:25:54 am
"Captain, are you alright?"  She curses herself internally.  Of course he's not alright, he's bleeding...  She fidgets for a moment, trying to think of some way to assist.

Kris continues to keep her distance.  She really wished some of the grown ups would calm Lilac down...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 02:33:03 am
Lilac's eyes roll back into her head. She makes choking sounds, then goes limp. Once again, the only evidence to suggest that she wasn't a corpse was her breathing.
((i'm going to bed, g'night everypony!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 12, 2011, 02:43:43 am
Otik cradles the unconscious filly in her hooves.

"Can ye help 'er, mister Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 02:45:00 am
"I can do my best... But I've never had any real success with this before."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 12, 2011, 03:50:50 am
*Bubbles steps out the office door, finding them all in a stage of madness and hysterics.*
"WHAT THE CLOP IS GOING ON HERE?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 01:12:22 pm
After the doctor's exclamation, Falcata turns her attention to him.  Thank goodness it wasn't Dr. Alen again....

"Oh, doctor, good... Captain Starkey is injured."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 08:00:31 pm
"Ready, Lilac? Let's see what we can do."

Khenal built up an electric charge in his horn, before directing it at Lilac's chest.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 08:21:12 pm
Lilac screams in agony and cries, but nothing beyond that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 12, 2011, 08:42:54 pm
Khenal checks her chest for a heartbeat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 08:49:10 pm
Nothing. Lilac continues to sob.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 12, 2011, 11:04:20 pm
Kris continues to hesitate and cower behind her mother until she sees and hears the electrical discharge.  Lilac's scream captures her attention, and she looks up to see the filly sobbing uncontrollably.  Despite everything inside her screaming for her to just let the grown-ups handle this, she wanders over, props up against the bed Lilac sits on, and places her hoof on Lilac's.  This worked for her mom...

"Lilac?  I'm here, it's going to be okay..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 12, 2011, 11:19:04 pm
"K-k-kris...make t-them...s-s-stop..." Moans Lilac, blinking back tears of pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 13, 2011, 12:40:39 am
"I...I don't know what to do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 13, 2011, 12:51:32 am
Kris backs down and sits on the floor.  She was... surprised and frightened to hear Khenal say that.  Miss Otik said he would know what to do, and if he didn't did anypony?  She really wanted Lilac to be okay...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 12:55:40 am
"Kris...ngh!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 13, 2011, 01:10:36 am
Kris' mouth hangs agape as she fights for words.  She couldn't think of anything to say or do, so she settles for standing up and holding Lilac's hoof again.  Her mom said a lot of good things about Khenal... he would think of something to do...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 13, 2011, 01:26:30 am
Otik pulls Lilac close to her chest, sitting up on her haunches and wrapping her wings around the filly.

"W-What do ye mean? Ye done this before, haven't ye? Why didnae it work this time?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 13, 2011, 01:29:28 am
"It didn't work last time, either. Carrot was being preserved by a daemon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 01:43:16 am
Lilac sobs lessen into whimpers and hot tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 13, 2011, 01:51:36 am
His wound adequately patched, Starkey approaches and poots his hooves around the pair.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 13, 2011, 01:54:23 am
The sound of the word daemon brought about a sharp intake of air in Kris.  She looks over and finds that Lilac has begun to calm down, at least.  She didn't understand any of this any more, but what little she knew of daemons scared her.  Was... Lilac possessed too?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 05:27:35 pm
"Uncl' Stars? Am I going...to be ok...?" Asks Lilac, shivering in fear of what might happen to her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 08:15:44 pm
I speak up before Starkey can.

"It's...hard to say, little Lilac.  Your father had a similar condition for awhile, and seemed fine.  I would like to check something, though.  If you don't mind?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 08:19:47 pm
Lilac nods her head shakily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 08:26:00 pm
My horn glows softly as I prepare the mental linking spell.

"Thank you, Lilac.  I'll be careful.  And please, try to relax.  I promise I wont hurt you."

I finish and cast the mental link, preparing to search young Lilac for daemon influence.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 13, 2011, 08:31:59 pm
Falcata watches in awe as Khenal works.  She knew he was perhaps the most accomplished magician in Glitterglen, particularly in mental magics, but it was something she had never had occasion to witness while he was captain of the guard.

Truly if anypony could help Lilac, it was him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 08:39:55 pm
Khenal materializes in a strange forest; completely silent.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 08:43:26 pm
'Lilac?  Can you hear me?  Please, answer!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 08:50:59 pm
A bright flash lights up the forest, and Khenal notices Lilac's family's corpses, lying in a pile right in front of him. He then hears a sinister voice.
((not cockroach))

'Well, well, well, if it isn't my ol' buddy Khenal! Remember me? THE ONE YOU PUT DOWN?!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 08:57:49 pm
I turn to face where I think the voice is comming from.

'How are you here?  You died, you should be Beyond, not here!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 09:06:42 pm
There is no reply, instead, the ground falls apart. Khenal tries to fly, but his wings are gone. Khenal falls into oblivion. He "wakes up" in a dark room, bound up in rope.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 09:11:34 pm
'Lilac, can you hear me?  It's Khenal!  This is your mind, you are in control, not him!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 09:38:17 pm
Khenal hears familiar whimpering next to him, but it's too dark to see.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 09:46:44 pm
'Lilac?  Are you alright?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 09:55:27 pm
'It's so c-c-cold...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 10:01:58 pm
'Dear little one, it will be alright.  You are in charge here, nopony can harm you if you don't allow them to.  May I untie myself?'

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 10:10:08 pm
'I...' Lilac's stops mid-sentence. Khenal hears the first voice again.
'Hey, it's not that easy pal! See, here's the deal. I killed ya first friend, now i'm going to kill this one as well. Dig?' says the sinister voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 10:16:37 pm
'You have no power.  This is Lilac's mind, not yours.'

I turn my head to address Lilac gently.

'May I untie myself, Lilac?  Remember, this is your mind.  He has no power but simple bluster if you don't give it to him.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 10:28:07 pm
'Khenal, i'm in control. Pal, if I wanted you to be in charge of this...pony...then I'd of let ya know, dig?'

Khenal feels a slap go across his face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 10:35:07 pm
I give him a humorless smile.

'You always did have a gift with lies.  You control nothing, Lilac just needs to remember that.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 10:40:23 pm
'Yeah, sure, "I control nothing" THAT'S WHAT YA BUCKING TOLD ME WHEN YA PUT ME DOWN!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 10:47:49 pm
'More bluster.'

I again turn to Lilac and gently address her.

'May I untie myself, Dear Little One?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 10:51:51 pm
'ah don' have any say in it!' exclaims Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 10:53:54 pm
'You have all the say in it, Lilac.  This is your mind.  If I do anything without your permission, I could hurt you.  I promised I wouldn't.  So, may I untie myself?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 11:14:39 pm
'ah suppose...but only if you make that meanie go away!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 11:20:49 pm
I smile warmly at Lilac.

'That's a good filly.  Don't worry, we can both get him out of here.'

My horn flashes as the rope unties and lays at my hooves.

'So, Apple.  The young filly would like you to leave.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 13, 2011, 11:50:45 pm
'Whoa there, I might have a better plan!' Says Lilac in Apple's voice, 'I want Khenal to leave and Apple to control my every action!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 13, 2011, 11:58:36 pm
'Lilac, I can help you to oust him, but I need your help.  If I simply rip him out, it would be very bad.  Can you gather him to one place?  You are stronger than he is, Lilac.  Remind him that you are in charge.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 12:02:12 am
Suddenly, Khenal feels sick to the bone. "Lilac" explodes into a large, demonic-looking, Hydra.((This is all happening inside Lilac's mind. Just needed to point this out to new readers.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 14, 2011, 12:02:58 am
'Whoa there, I might have a better plan!' Says Lilac in Apple's voice, 'I want Khenal to leave and Apple to control my every action!'

((Apple? Could someone remind me who this is? I don't recall an Apple. I had thought this was Psycho Carrot, bound into Lilac, but now I'm confused. Could someone please refresh my memory?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 14, 2011, 12:05:59 am
((A daemon I assumed))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 12:10:17 am
((we discussed the name on the IRC.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 14, 2011, 12:12:57 am
((A daemon I assumed))

((Indeed, but Khenal called him Apple first and so I assumed we've seen him before. We probably have, but, I just do not remember him. Which is why I asked.))

ninja'd
((we discussed the name on the IRC.))

((Oh, I see. But how did Khenal [the character, not the player] know his name then? If events happened in the IRC they should be transcribed here for all to see.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 12:13:56 am
'Whoa there, I might have a better plan!' Says Lilac in Apple's voice, 'I want Khenal to leave and Apple to control my every action!'

((Apple? Could someone remind me who this is? I don't recall an Apple. I had thought this was Psycho Carrot, bound into Lilac, but now I'm confused. Could someone please refresh my memory?))
((He's new.  He's also from Khenal's past, which is why Khenal knows him.  I would have called him Wormtongue, but Apple has some interesting origins that The Master liked :) ))

I stand and take a defensive stance.  The hydra is the obvious danger, but Apple is trickier than to commit everything to a frontal assault.  I keep an eye out for anything out of place, hoping to find his hidey-hole.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 14, 2011, 12:17:06 am
'Whoa there, I might have a better plan!' Says Lilac in Apple's voice, 'I want Khenal to leave and Apple to control my every action!'

((Apple? Could someone remind me who this is? I don't recall an Apple. I had thought this was Psycho Carrot, bound into Lilac, but now I'm confused. Could someone please refresh my memory?))
((He's new.  He's also from Khenal's past, which is why Khenal knows him.  I would have called him Wormtongue, but Apple has some interesting origins that The Master liked :) ))

(Very well then. I am satisfied. Please continue, sorry for interrupting.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 12:35:07 am
Khenal spots a rainbow colored carrot on a table.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 12:43:50 am
Avoiding the hydra's attacks, I make my way to the table and carrot.  I summon Carrot's Loyalty and smile before plunging it into the carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 12:52:56 am
The carrot explodes into a cloud of fire, slightly burning Khenal. The flames take shape, forming a silhouette that resembles Psycho Carrot. It's clear that Khenal needs to find another object to fully release him.

'NO, KHENAL, THIS IS THE PART WHERE YOU FALL DOWN AND BLEED TO DEATH!'


"NO, KHENAL, THIS IS THE PART WHERE YOU FALL DOWN AND BLEED TO DEATH!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 01:08:11 am
'Lilac, you must maintain control!  Don't let him take it from you!  Carrot, can you hear me?  Your daughter needs your help!'

As I prepare to flee the table, I decide to stick close on a hunch.  I dive under it and examine as well as I can with a hydra breathing down my neck.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 01:26:28 am
Khenal sees an axe-shaped indent in the ground under the table.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 01:45:36 am
I summon Starkey's Honesty and prepare to strike the ground.  Apple is tricky, but there is no falsehood that can stand before Starkey's Honesty.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 01:47:29 am
The Hydra slashes Khenal's left foreleg open.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 01:50:30 am
'Gah!  Only I could forget about a bucking hydra!'

I swing Honesty at the axe-mark with all the might I can manage.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 02:06:46 am
((perfect cliff hanger, i'm too exhausted to continue...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 04:22:51 pm
The axe embeds itself into the mark, and at the same time, the Hydra explodes into flames! When the smoke clears, Khenal can see Carrot and Apple glaring at each other where the Hydra used to be standing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 04:30:58 pm
I smile at Carrot before getting to my hooves, favoring my slashed foreleg.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 04:40:04 pm
'Long time no see, huh?' Asks Carrot, glancing over at Khenal before turning back to face Apple.

'Well, ya got me. The only question now is, what're you gonna do with a fellow like me?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 04:59:13 pm
I grin at Apple.

'I think you are a job for a professional.  Carrot, can you help Lilac get back to herself?  I think Apple needs to meet somepony.'

My horn glows as ethereal chains begin to wrap about Apple.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 05:32:06 pm
'Heh, very well.' Carrot disappears, replaced by Lilac. Khenal facehoofs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 05:39:18 pm
'That's...I don't even want to think about that right now.'

I continue binding Apple, preparing to bring him out of Lilac with me.

'Lilac?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 05:58:53 pm
'What?! where's the monster?!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 06:02:02 pm
I heft the bundle of chains, double checking that it still contains Apple.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 06:16:59 pm
They do, and Apple sure isn't happy about that.

'KHENAL, YOU WILL RUE THE DAY YOU DESTROYED MY PLANS TO TAKE OVER THIS BODY! I WILL HAVE MY REVENGE!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 14, 2011, 06:31:22 pm
'Your mistake was in attacking this little filly.'

I turn to Lilac.

'I'll be taking him with me now.  Thank you for fighting him, Lilac.'

I prepare to leave and drag Apple with me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 14, 2011, 06:45:45 pm
All at once, the area around Khenal twists and bends until everything fades out. Khenal wakes up inside his own mind, keeper staring down at him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 15, 2011, 08:42:32 am
((Finally, finished!  Took long enough!  Part 1:

This an IRC transcription of the events of Glitterglen in the hospital.  In the story, crazy things happen.  It menaces with spikes of purple prose and is adorned with hanging rings of typos.  On the back of the paper is an image of Telgin and the ponies.  The ponies are reading.  Telgin is in the fetal position.))

All at once, the area around Khenal twists and bends before fading away.  Khenal wakes up in his own mind, Keeper staring him down.

"...Keeper?" he asks, confused.

"I don't now why I'm here.  What in the Eye did you do?"

"That's a good question..." Apple's voice calls.

"And who is this?" Keeper asks.

"This is Apple, and he will not be staying here long," Khenal replies.

Keeper looks around.  "Where is here?"

Apple continues, "Will I now?  The way I see it, I'm talking out of your mouth."

Khenal frowns.  "I should be back in the real world with him in chains, ready to be handed over to the inquisitor."

"Where is here!?" Keeper insists.

"In Khenal's mind, bullbrain," Apple retorts.

Keeper scoffs.  "I was in Khenal's mind for over a year, you pathetic minion.  I know what it looks like, and this is not it."

Apple looses a low chuckle.  "Ah, clever."  He pauses.  "You're in the ether."

"Is that what you call it?" Keeper replies.  He looks to Khenal.  "I did note that it had some similarities to your brain."

Apple ignores the comment.  "This is a place that no form of intelligence has entered since existence and before."

Khenal's expression remains unchanged.  "So, either something fundamental to the fabric of reality is broken, or Apple continues to lie."

Another chuckle from Apple echoes into the oblivion.  "Khenal, have you bothered to look at me?  For, if you had, you'd note that the chains are gone."  He sneers.  "I am still bound in Lilac's head, but not outside it."

"Do we care?  And who is this damned Lilac, Khenal?"

Khenal looks to Keeper.  "Carrot's daughter."

"Oh, goody."

"So yes, I care that Apple is still there."

Apple says, "Fortunately, I have learned how to control this place.  Observe!"  The ground begins to shake, and a large mountain rises from the ground, tossing Keeper high into the air.

Khenal's horn glows with ethereal energy as he attempts to summon another set of chains for Apple.  As the scene unfolds, the environment continues to shift.  Keeper rolls his eyes.  "Oh, wow, you can create a mountain."  As he lands, his form begins to change.  No more a pony, he has become a twisted bipedal monster with four arms.  A gaping maw covers its body from top to bottom.

Apple vanishes, replaced by a sign with the head of Carrot nailed to it.  Then an army of honey badger ponies begin to materialize around the trio, snarling and snapping their teeth as they circle.

Keeper grins devilshly.  "Let's get these badger ponies, hey?"

Khenal looks about.  "Where is Apple?"

Lilac vanishes in an instant, replaced by an eviscerated corpse.  Keeper shrugs awkwardly.  "Oh, it doesn't matter, let's just have some fun!"  A wooden cage forms around him.  "Oh, that's cute!  A cage!"

Magma begins to pour into the area from nowhere.  Keeper grins again, moving his arms around in a chaotic, twising pattern.  With a sound like a million damned souls screaming in agony, strange flames burst from around him and destroy both the magma and the cage.

"Hey, that's not cool!!  This is MY realm!!" Apple shouts.

Khenal grins.  "Problem, Apple?"

Keeper nods in agreement.  "Oh, I like the sound of that, Apple.  You don't know how long it's been since I got to go out and enjoy myself!"

With another flash of chaos, the dead scenery evaporates to be replaced by all of Khenal's past patients, crying in agony like the each did on the day of their deaths.  Keeper begins gleefully leaping between the patients, twisting each with his chaotic touch.  Horns sprout from some, feathers from others.  Others still have their hooves replaced with tentacles, or muzzles with beaks.  "The changer of ways will be pleased!"

Khenal's horn is enshrouded in more magic as he lifts an immense chunk of the ground.  "I've already dealt with my past, Apple.  I'd prefer it never happened, but I can keep it from repeating!"

"Can you?" Apple asks.  "Is that why you're choking Lilac?"

"She is stronger than you Apple.  She also wants you out," Khenal replies.

"No... I mean in the hospital!  You're choking Lilac, and I'm not there to keep her alive!"

Khenal halts for a moment.  He sets the slab of ground back down.

"I can hear Starkey arresting you..." Apple continues.

Keeper jumps about in glee and hurls another volley of warp flames at the remaining badger ponies.  When they hit, the ponies scream as their flesh begins to melt away.  The area of dead ground begins to expand.

Khenal continues to pause.  "Hmm..."

"Khenal, Lilac is on a timer, and your keeper friend is only speeding it up.  That isn't just grass, it's her life!"

A flash of magic surrounds Khenal's horn as he closes the chains on Apple.  "It's time we left Lilac's mind!"

Keeper smirks as well.  "It's not just grass anymore either!  It's the land of the Lord of Sorcery!"

"You inconsiderate fool!  Keeper, you're destroying Lilac's mind!  I'm not that heartless... to destroy somepony's mind..."

"The Grand Schemer has arranged for it already!" Keeper shouts.

"Lilac!  Wake up, I don't want you to be destroyed!" Apple shouts in desperation.

Khenal glares at Keeper.  "Keeper, settle down.  We're getting out of here."

"Can't I stay?  This is the most fun I've had in eons!" Keeper says, his voice slowly shifting... it soon becomes none other than Schmoe.

"Schmoe!?" Apple cries.

Khenal's glare hardens.  "No, Keeper.  If this is really Lilac's mind, you are not supposed to be here."

Apple begins to plead, "I... uh... sir... Sorry sir!  I didn't mean to interrupt your mission!"  He materializes in front of Keeper. He cackles.  "All hail in the glorious name of schmoe!  He is awake, and you will worship him!"

"Got you!"  Keeper grabs hold of Apple, and instantly warping change ripples through hsis body.  Wings sprout from his back, like thos of a griffon.  Tentacles replace his hooves... a leg warps into a twisting arm with a mouth for a hand.  Flames gush from the mouth.

Khenal's horn shines like the sun as his strongest bindings wrap around Apple.  He looks to Keeper.  "Keeper, what are you doing?"

"Not quite finished..."

The bindings surrounding Apple shatter.  Khenal reels from the magical backlash.  Apple's new tentacles wrap around Khenal's throat, choking the life from him in the real world.  "I name they True Name,  Eoeeeiloduioeuda!" Keeper shouts.

Apple stares idly.  "That's not my name.  It's really just Apple."

As Keeper speakes, Apple's mind opens to the Warp.  Hundreds, thousands, millions, trillions, infinite thoughts enter Apple's mind.  "Lord Tzeentch has bestowed it upon you."

"I accept this gift!"

" Eoeeeiloduioeuda... release me..." Khenal chokes.

"Nah, Khenal, I want you to hang out with me all the time.  And you can't unless I help..."  Apple shouts, "And the name's Apple!"

As Khenal speaks Apple's name, he feels himself unable to resist.  "That's... how a True.. Name works..."  He gasps as the grip loosens.

The tentacles tighten again, even harder than before.  "I win!" Apple chuckles and Khenal smiles feebly at Apple before he begins to slip into unconsciousness.

"Yes, yes... all according to the great Lord Tzeentch, and his great plan..." Keeper says.  "Without your current acts, he would not have succeeded in his next battle and thus defeated Khorne's followers.  You are finished now.  Begone to whatever little things you wish to do."

Khenal gasps as he drops from the mental realm back into reality.  The world swims around him as he returns to real consciousness, only to settle on the blue face of Lilac.  She isn't breathing.

He scowls and says, "Apple....  Eoeeeiloduioeuda... I invoke your True Name.  Remove yourself from Lilac.  Do her no harm, and never return."

"My name's Apple!  Not Kerblargintin!  Not Pablo!  It's Apple!" a disembodied voice says.  Khenal repeats the incantation.  "No, no, no!  Khenal, you cannot do this!"

Khenal repeats the incantation.  "Thrice invoked!  Obey!"

"I'll take Lilac with me!"

"You will not!   Eoeeeiloduioeuda, you are barred from harming her!"

"I'll break the laws if I have to!"  Lilac arches backard, screaming in pain.

"Apple!   Eoeeeiloduioeuda!  I invoke your True Name!  Remove yourself from LIlac!  Do her no harm and never return!  Obey!"  Apple screams in torment, and Khenal repeats the incantation yet again.    A great, massive, black mist pours from the screaming Lilac, flowing toward the nearest pony.

"Inquisitor!" Khenal calls in vain.  " Eoeeeiloduioeuda!  Coalesce before me and harm nopony!"  Apple obeys, materializing before Khenal and drawing horrified gasps from everypony nearby.  "Somepony, get Amberley!" he shouts.  He glares at Apple.  "Not you!  You are no pony!"

Apple chuckles and turns a vengeful glare to Lilac.  His tentacles reach out and grasp the filly by the throat.  She coughs and scratches at the tentacles in vain.

***

Inquisitor Vail is standing vigil over Friesden, who continues to lay in a catatonic stupor.  A frightened pony bursts into the barracks, panting from hte exterion of galloping for some time.  "What is it?" she asks.

"Khenal wants you!"

She turns to look at Friesden.  "Well, time to go.  Keep an eye on Friesden for me.  Where is he?"

"Up at the hospital!  Hurry!"

Inquisitor Vail nods and gallops from the hospital.

***

"Eoeeeiloduioeuda!  Release her!"

"Never!  She'll die with me!!"

"Eoeeeiloduioeuda!  You will release her!"

"I'll never do such a thing!  She must die!!"  Lilac finally ceases struggling, her face blue.

"Eoeeeiloduioeuda!  You will do no harm to her!  You will release her this instant!"

"You have no power over me!  And she is-" Apple's sentence is cut off by Inquisitor Vail bursting into he hospital.  "-dead!  You're too late!!" he finishes.

Amberley Vail pauses, mouth agape.  "In the God-Princess' name, what is going on here!?"  Apple feels tortorous pain roll through him at the invocation of Her name.

He hisses loudly.  "Who dares speak that vile name?!"

The inquisitor glares at him.  "I do.  Amberley Vail, of the God-Princess' Holy Ordos!  Indentify thyself!"

"I am apple!"

She nods.  "In the God-Princess' name, I dub thee Excommunicate Traitoris!"

"Lilac is dead!  Do what you want with me!"

Amberley looks to Khenal.  "Explain this!"

"Destroy it, bind it, or whatever it is you do!  This daemon can't be allowed to run free!" he exclaims.

"This is a daemon?!  I am no daemonhunter... I am a member of the Ordo Xenos!"  A thought enters her mind.  She begins to speak as the daemon rakes claws against her foreleg, drawing blood.  "D-dammit!  Get Schmutz, in the God-Princess' Name!  Do it now!"

Khenal shouts, "Apple!   Eoeeeiloduioeuda!  You will harm no one!"

She looks to him.  "Is that its True Name?"

He opens his mouth to reply, but the daemon lashes out again, tearing a gash down Khenal's back and smashing ribs.  He lets out a startled cry and falls to the ground.

At the inquisitor's command, a member of the hospital staff hurries off to fetch the commissar and Schmutz.

"I... I witnessed his Naming.  How... can he ... resist?" Khenal mutters.

"Eoeeeiloduioeuda!  In the God-Princess' name, be bound!" shouts the inquisitor.  Apple snatches a scalpel and drives it into her wounded leg.  Ethereal chains appear and encircle the daemon despite the interruption, stronger than he can resist.

Khenal groans incoherently for a moment.  "Is... it bound?"

"Maybe, but I wouldn't trust it for long..."

Khenal grunts again as he tries to shift.  "I never... thought my past... would come back like this..."  As he speaks, a dark thought enters his mind.  He looks over to Lilac's motionless body and drags himself to her.  The filly looks lifeless.  "I hope.. this works..."

Schmutz and Commissar Abel trot through the door, dressed in their combat fatigues.  Amberley points a hoof at Apple and shouts,  "Schmutz!  Attack!"  The pony obediently charges at Apple.  As he passes by, Khenal feels his magic drain away and vanish.

He draws in a deep breath, despite the stabbing pain in his back and releases it into Lilac.  He desperately hoped he remembered how mouth-to-mouth worked.  There is no response.  "Come on, Lilac.  You... are stronger... than him."  He repeats the breath, praying it will bring her around.

Schmutz passes by Khenal and throws himself at Apple.  Apple begins to immediately destabilize, and as Schmutz is upon him his material form vanishes completely, haunted by a torturing daemonic scream.

Khenal tries again, still eliciting no response from Lilac.  Tears begin to stream from his eyes.  Inquisitor Vail slowly rises and staggers to Khenal.  "What's wrong with her?"

"She isn't... breathing.  Please, can... you help her?"  He looks down and notices Lilac's face is completely pale.  A stab of fear jolts through him.

"What caused it?"

"The daemon... strangled her.  I tried... to stop him, but.."

"Strangled her?"

The fear shifts into a deep nauseating feeling that Khenal remembers from the time he witnessed Carrot's final death.  "Lilac..."

Amberley turns to Abel and says," Commissar, Schmutz.  Feel free to go back to your quarters.  Nothing more you can do here."  The two trot off without another word.

Khenal leans in and gives Lilac a final breath, and is rewarded with nothing yet again.  He begins to choke back tears and fails, collapsing into sobs.

***

Inside Lilac's mind, Keeper finishes destroying the last traces of Apple's influence.  The lights begin to grow dim...

"It's... so... cold..." Lilac mutters.

"Oooh!  Seems you're dying, silly fill!" Keeper says to her.

"At least... I can see daddy and mommy again.."

"Oh, yes, totally.  Does Kil want to see you?"  Keeper stops as an idea crosses his mind.  "I have an idea!"  He summons a ball of warp fire that cleaves him in two.  The halves fall to the ground before warping and growing limbs of their own.  The two halves begin to bicker among themselves and rampage through her mind.

"C.... c.... cold..."

The two continue to scuffle, pressing buttons and wreaking havoc where they go.

"Stop... fighting..."

The madness continues, a plan too convoluted for her to realize, but a plan nonetheless.  The two press more buttons, and eventually the lighting returns.  The two fist bump and merge back into one Keeper.  "Well, that's done now.  How are you feeling, silly filly?"

"...I'm stuck with you, huh?"

"Oh, yes!"

"...Please... can you kill me anyway?"

"Why would you want to die?"

"Oh, nevermind... I'm Lilac."

"I'm the Keeper, but you can call me Helmfire."

***

With the chaos in the room settling, Falcata begins to come around.  She shakes her head to clear the stupor that has washed over her.  She's just witnessed things that nopony ever should.  She notices Khenal crying over what appears to be Lilac's corpse and everything begins to flood back to her.  She trots over and stares at the stricken filly, mouth agape.  "Kh-Khenal?  I-is she..."

Khenal looks up at her, tears streaming from his eyes.  As his eyes track up her face, he spots her horn.  Of course!  "Falcata!"  He jerks up, only to release a pained groan as his injuries force themselves back to the forefront of his mind.

Falcata winces as she notices the severe injuries on his back.  She swallows back a retch as she spies a smashed rib jutting from his skin.  How could he even still be conscious?

Khenal shakes his head and points to Lilac.  "Not me, her!  Falcata, how's your magic?"

She snaps her attention back to Lilac.  "I... uh... don't know... how I can help... I don't know any medical magic..."

"Heh... neither did I... the first time I did this spell.  You... need to give her a... shock.  Directly into... her heart."  He looks up to her.  "Can you... do that?"

She stares back for a moment, stupefied.  Had she heard that right?  "I... I can try."

"Thats... all I can ask."

She shuts her eyes as she begins to focus.  Her mane begins to stand on end as the air around her charges with electricity.  "Here... goes."  She opens her eyes and aims at the center of Lilac's chest.  She averts her gaze as soon as she feels her horn's aim is true.  A bolt of violet electricty leaps from her horn into Lilac's chest.

Lilac twitches, but does nothing more.  Distraught, Falcata looks back to Khenal.  "It... it didn't work..."

"Less... power.  Don't want... to cook her.  Try again."

Falcata nods.  Her horn glows again, a more sedate blue.  "Please... work..."  She angles her horn at Lilac's chest again and releases the bolt.  Lilac's eyelids flutter, but nothing more.

"Better.  You're... a natural.  Don't be afraid... to get closer.  Again... please."  Khenal winces and groans, his vision dimming.

Falcata hesitates for a moment.  Encouraged by Khenal, she steps forward and places her horn nearly on Lilac's chest.  Charge begins to build again.  She releases the arc, trying her best to channel it safely through her heart.  If only she was a doctor...  She watches Lilac intently, anxiety building in her stomach.  Had... she used too much that time?

Lilac takes an almost imperceptible breath.

Khenal forces himself lucid.  "See?  A.. natural..."

Falcata is elated.  She pants several times to catch her breath.  She wasn't used to doing stuff like this.  "Lilac?"  She leans in closer and examines the filly.  Lilac is still deathly pale, and surely needs a real doctor immediately.  Falcata gently levitates her to the nearest bed.  Lilac looked terrible, and Khenal was badly injured.  What was she going to do?

At that moment, Dr. Bubbles enters, eyes wide.  "What the clop is going on here!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 15, 2011, 10:37:02 pm
((We'd like to take the time to inform you that from now on, most of the roleplaying will be happening on the IRC.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 15, 2011, 10:39:10 pm
((We'd like to take the time to inform you that from now on, most of the roleplaying will be happening on the IRC.))

Why?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 15, 2011, 10:40:23 pm
((it's a billion times faster to roleplay, and we don't have to worry about the IRC going down, unlike the issues with bay12 lately.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 15, 2011, 10:47:22 pm
((A fair point, however, I must ask. Are you planning on archiving your role playing here? If no archive is available, then it makes it impossible to attract new players, additionally, I don't frequent the IRC, so what of me? Shall the fortress part of this community fortress crumble to it's end?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 15, 2011, 11:02:58 pm
(('A billion times faster' is precisely why I don't usually like IRC roleplay. It tends to move too fast for my taste, and I often end up having to retype my posts many times before actually posting. Bulletin board RP is much more slow, deliberate, and thought out.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 15, 2011, 11:08:02 pm
((No way! I'm just saying "most" of the roleplaying will be at the IRC, but not all!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 15, 2011, 11:11:44 pm
(('Most' meaning 'the majority' meaning 'more will be on the IRC than on B12'.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 15, 2011, 11:12:46 pm
((correct.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 15, 2011, 11:14:52 pm
((As I understand it, it will merely be until we resolve this 40k arc.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 15, 2011, 11:19:45 pm
I know I'm just stikin' my head in, but I hope there will still be plenty of stuff here.
 I love readin' it even if I don't think I could join in very easily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 16, 2011, 09:39:44 am
((As I understand it, it will merely be until we resolve this 40k arc.))

((We sort of discussed this on the IRC last night, but I'd like to add my support for this in writing here.  The IRC is pretty valuable to discussing what we're doing, but for a variety of reasons it's easier on everyone to do the actual RPing here.  Even if we post the transcriptions here, it's not quite the same.

Don't get me wrong, I don't mind reworking the transcriptions to make them postable.  Not at all.  I just think that most people find reading individual posts easier, especially prospective players.

And lastly, if the IRC is going to be a hindrance to anyone, then I'd rather that not be an issue.  In particular, it's been a little while since the duchess has been involved, and I'd like to have some opportunities for Falcata to interact with her.  Falcata is pretty scared of her in general, and I'd like for her to either learn that she was right or wrong (I'm thinking she's wrong to be afraid of Charity, but it's up to KingStrongbeard, of course) in this respect before / if she dies.  If that can't happen on the IRC, then I would be a sad pony if we only worked in the IRC.


Now, having said all of that, I'd like to say that I've found using the IRC to do the roleplaying was more fun than I originally thought it would be.  And it's still a perfect place to do it when the forums go down.  Further still, I think it's a wise choice to do most of the remaining 40K related stuff there, else it will take forever and a day to get through it all.

But once it's done, I'd like to move back to posting here and using the IRC to discuss what we're thinking as we post.))

((Edit: The first transcription is nearly complete.  I'm waiting for Dsarker to get back to me with translating the last of it before I can post it.  If Dsarker has already finished, I don't suppose there's any harm in posting it directly without sending it back to me.  (Just realized I didn't send all of what I'd rewritten, so scratch that.)  It's probably going to be about 10 hours from now before I can post it, regardless of when I get it, since I'm heading off to work shortly.  I might be able to sneak it in during the day, but probably not.

Oh, and by all means, join the fun JaxtalMK2.  As you've no doubt figured, this thread runs a lot differently than Dawnpick does right now.  I didn't think I'd be able to join in either, but it went surprisingly smoothly.  If you'd rather wait for the current story arc to conclude, it may be easier to work your way in, but I have no idea when that will be.  I'm sure we could accomodate you either way.  :) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 10:04:49 am
((My only thing is I have troble writing if I'm not reacting to something. After this arc though I suppose I'll
  Give it a go. Or maybe before, I just don't wanna seem like I'm butting in.  Or messing with anyone's story.
   Any chance of grabbing a male earthpony axe user?  If I can name him Hiero.
     I know dumb joke but I think its funny. Hmm now I wonder if Telgin or Khenal will get it :-\.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 02:19:18 pm
((I don't have any male earth axeponies available. I guess I could draft a farmer if you want, but regardless the available ponies list in the OP is up to date if you want to take a look at it.

I'm looking forward to the conclusion of this arc. I would like to be able to join in again, once all the transcriptions are done and I can get caught up again.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 02:32:31 pm
((I wouldn't mind being a drafted farmer If you don't mind. Any male earthpony you can spare for drafting would be ok by me.
  As long as he doesn't start off with any lovers or the like I can always add that into my plans for the character.
   Yes I have a basic idea about who he is, I always enjoy thinking about who I'd be if I joined in.
    If there aren't any unconnected earthponys then a pegasan would be fine.))

((Hope I'm not sounding too picky.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 02:42:19 pm
((Not at all, I've probably got an earthpony I can spare, and the melee squad still has a hole after the last death, as does the guard. Any preference for the Militia or the Guard? And what about a name? Even if you don't plan on joining in until later, I can go ahead and add you in the fortress and post your ingame image.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 03:02:33 pm
((Any chance of grabbing a male earthpony axe user?  If I can name him Hiero.
   I know dumb joke but I think its funny. Hmm now I wonder if Telgin or Khenal will get it :-\.))

(( I seriously doubt anyone not reading Dawnpick will get why that's a joke.
   Still think it's a cool name, especially if it's said right
    He'd be focused on protectin' his home so I guess the guard. Good to know I'm not annoying anybody.
    Just cause you shouldn't care what others think of you doesn't mean you should be a jerk.))

((I'll probobly join in quick if i end up gettin' mentioned but other then that I feel like I'd just be appearing outta nowhere,
  and kinda steppin on toes. At least until this arc is over.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 16, 2011, 03:04:14 pm
((perhaps i'm misunderstanding something, but are you calling strongbeard a jerk? Never mind, I get it now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 03:07:42 pm
((Sorry if I was unclear. Don't wanna insult anyone :(.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 03:15:29 pm
Charity's Journal 24th Malachite 99

Due to the number of deaths within our militia and guard, I've decided to draft a new member, an earthpony miller by the name of Hiero will be joining the guard as of today. The other farmers should still be able to keep up without him, I've told Hiero to show a few of them how to properly work the mill so they can do so when he's on duty.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Hiero.png
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 03:24:20 pm
((Cool, his hair isn't striped fifty different colors.
   Almost never sick, quick to heal, and very flimsy... dude Its a pony version of me!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 04:00:34 pm
Charity's Journal 26th Malachite 99

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Pegasus%20fey%20foal.png)

One of Ironya's sons has been taken by a fey mood. And he flew with speed I've never seen right up to the craftsponies workshop, next to Khenal's carpentry shop. He grabbed a bunch of cobalt, a roll of pig tail cloth, some bars of nickel and brass, a crudle's bone, some wool cloth, a few uncut rubicelles, and some zinc. And he's locked the door to the shop.

Charity's Journal 5th Galena 99

Little Odur has finished his artifact, it is a beautiful cobaltite ring. It's called, the Decisive Puzzle and it depicts Babin the god of Loyalty. I'd like to present this ring to somepony who deserves it, but I don't know who yet, I'll think it over, for now it goes into storage.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/The%20Decisive%20Puzzle.png)

Charity's Journal 15th Galena 99

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Siege%21.png)

Glitterglen is under siege! The zebra have sent an army to wipe us off the map. It seems that from my parley with the leader, they are upset over the "murder" of their diplomat last summer, I tried to explain that he was killed in a diomedian ambush and that it wasn't our fault, but he would not listen, and then he rode off on his war rhino to rejoin his forces. It seems this will mean war. Starkey's Stallions stand at the ready. This is going to get bloody.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 16, 2011, 04:01:20 pm
((Can't trust those bloody Eldar!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 04:04:56 pm
((Wait, wait wait, a zebra riding a rhino? The heck does that work ????))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 16, 2011, 04:09:13 pm
((That didn't really happen silly, it's a way of explaining things.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 04:12:02 pm
((Oh, still seems weird.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 04:16:00 pm
((Wait, wait wait, a zebra riding a rhino? The heck does that work ????))

((Heretical magics I'm sure.))

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Heresy%21.png)

((That didn't really happen silly, it's a way of explaining things.))

((It did happen, well, the riding a war rhino part did, pony civs do use mounts when besieging.))


Charity's Journal 17th Galena 99

As if the army of zebra sitting outside wasn't bad enough, our scouts have reported a small diomedian squad to the north. They're not far from the zebra, maybe, if we're lucky they'll take each other out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 04:18:53 pm
((Okay that seal, is epic. Odd that a four legged creature would be riding another one. At least the rhino wasn't riding something.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 16, 2011, 04:19:10 pm
((My 1.61 fort used to get diomedians riding giant jaguars a lot, hehe.  I think Nidokoenig took a lot of that out for 1.71.  And you're at war with the zebra now?  Shoot, there goes half of the scene where I was going to sort out how Falcata survives the gut rot.  I suppose a zebra could kick her skull in and make it a moot point anyway.  :) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 04:39:55 pm
((I didn't intend to go to war with the zebra, their diplomat just found an ambush for me last year. And yeah, Glitterglen is still using whatever version was the newest when I started it. I don't know if I could upgrade without re-genning the world, and obviously I'd lose the fort if I had to do that. Although if/when Glitterglen falls I'll obviously use the new version for my next Community fort that I already have some ideas for.))

Charity's Journal 19th Galena 99

My hopes of the Diomedians attacking the Zebra was misplaced, they have assaulted our gates, killing a second sentry dog. However, we've raised the gates on them, and the Skyguard are firing on any who get too close. Although a darkbolt hammerer flew over the walls and severely wounded Osal the markspony before the guard killed it, the rest of the diomedians where killed or fled after a few volleys from our archers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 16, 2011, 05:02:19 pm
((I have plans on how to integrate our characters into the next fort when glitterglen falls, so don't worry about having a quiet thread, I'll make sure it's just as successful as this one is!  :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 05:23:07 pm
Charity's Journal 3rd Limestone 99

Autumn has come. It's been half a month and the siege continues. They do not move from their place in the jungle, the smoke from their campfire signals that they have not yet left. The militia is anxious. I think they'd rather the zebra just attack and get this over with. But they just sit there waiting.

(the following entry for the 4th is scribbled quickly and slopily.)

4th Limestone 99

Reports just in. The zebra are on the move, they are heading for Glitterglen. The alarm bell is ringing. I can hear Starkey calling to get his stallions to the walls. The time has finally come.

Charity's Journal 6th Limestone 99

The battle began just as the zebra army crossed our river. The Skyguard opened fire, as they approached the fortress walls, just as they approached the militia backed by the fortress guard sortied out to meet our striped foe on the field of battle before our walls.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/It%20begins..png)

As the battle began Osal, showed a dazzling display of marksponyship with many well placed shots.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Martial%20Trance%20Osal.png)

Our champion efim was the first to hit the enemies line, and fought well, until a damnable lasher with a copper whip struck him from behind, and he was surrounded and overwhelmed. Fortunately for him, while he had fallen, he was not yet dead.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Zebra%20trance.png)

Seeing their fallen companion the militia and the guard, lead by Otik, (Starkey was very late to the battle) charged the enemy and fought them off, the enemy routed but where killed down to the last pony. However, our champion efim bleed out as they rushed him to the hospital and has passed on. Osal was also seriously injured but will hopefully recover.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 16, 2011, 05:34:11 pm
((It's funny, I've heard others say they couldn't start a war when they tried.  Pesky zebras.  I'm a bit surprised I've never had that happen to me, now that I think about it.  And I suppose it doesn't matter if the zebras are at war with you, any caravan will do when the time comes.  Anyway, did Falcata actually participate in the fight at all?  Wouldn't want to misrepresent her in her next journal entry.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 05:40:32 pm
((I know that Falcata helped to kill the darkbolt that flew over the wall, a spear pony finished it, but she beat him up pretty good first, might have saved Osal's life when he first got attacked. I didn't notice how much she took part in the zebra battle, but I'm 90% certain she went out with the rest. ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 05:42:45 pm
((Man I chose an interesting time to get a pony. did Hiero get in on the fight?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 05:48:59 pm
((Man I chose an interesting time to get a pony. did Hiero get in on the fight?))

((Some, he's in the guard and the guard all ganged up on that darkbolt, I know Falcata, and a random spear pony did most of that though. And I know I saw Hiero go out, but he doesn't have any kills that he would have gotten there, just animals he's killed as a hunter. I didn't mention that but he was actually a hunter/miller before being recruited, technically still will be when not on duty. Also, doubled checked and while I think Falcata went out, she didn't get any new kills.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 06:03:22 pm
((Random curiosity, didja get the reference in the name Telgin?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 16, 2011, 07:55:22 pm
((I just realized that I've never seen Otik's in-game description. Strongbeard, could you post it?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 16, 2011, 08:22:37 pm
((Certainly Doom, here you are.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Captain%20Otik.png

I thought we were going to lose poor Otik during the siege when she ran out of bolts and charged in with the first wave of troops. But she's a tough one and came out unscathed, Starkey chose well I think.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 08:50:05 pm
((BTW whats an IRC?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 16, 2011, 08:59:53 pm
((Dunno what the letters actually stand for, but it's like an instant messaging program.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 09:01:43 pm
((Ah so there's one for this fort then. Where? I just looked at my last post again, Acronyms FTW.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 16, 2011, 09:01:55 pm
((Internet Relay Chat.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 16, 2011, 09:02:24 pm
((irc.mibbit.net #Glitterglen))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 16, 2011, 10:51:17 pm
((See Part 1 (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=93121.msg2833349#msg2833349) first.  Recall that these events take place some time before the last journal update by KingStrongbeard / Charity.  Part 2:))

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 16, 2011, 11:32:24 pm
Said it on the IRC but I'll say it again here. Awesome transcription Telgin.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 17, 2011, 12:58:07 am
((Indeed, that was an excellent read. Thank you Telgin for transcribing it.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 17, 2011, 02:16:46 am
((Aww, thanks. :) And even though we're not quite done with the 40K stuff, I don't want to forget to post Falcata's thoughts on this, so I'll do so now.  We'll get here eventually.))

Falcata's Diary - 4th Limestone, 99

The tension filling the fort was finally broken today when the zebra army besieging us finally moved to attack.  Watching the smoke from their siege camps for weeks was beginning to work on everypony's nerves, and I could tell that everypony in the guard at least were glad that something was happening.  I'm not so eager... even though I probably don't have long left in this world, I'm not anxious for it to end just yet.  Or worse, somepony else die because of my failure.

6th Limestone, 99

We might have been tense watching the campfires in the distance, but I'd have preferred it stay that way instead of anypony losing their life.  In the end, the battle was decisively in our favor, but Efim was killed.  Osal is in bad shape, but should recover from what I hear.

The actual battle is a bit hazy in my memory, and I'm just glad that I didn't participate in much of it.  I do remember a darkbolt daring to fly over the fortress walls, where he paid for his audacity with his life.  I had the honor of being the first to engage him, and I suppose I should be grateful that my time practicing has paid off some.  I was able to hold him off and actually got a few solid hits in with my hammer before somepony else with a spear finished him.  I don't think it was the new guy, Heiro, but I did see him fighting reasonably well for his experience.

By that point though, I was getting extremely nauseated, so I had to back down before the killing blow.  I don't know what Captain Isos thinks of it... she didn't say anything.  I just wanted to sit down and let everything settle, but that's when she gave the order to charge out to assist the militia.  I managed to keep my lunch down as we headed outside, and I'm extremely glad to say that Starkey showed up to finish off and route the last of the zebras.

After the battle was over, and the smell of blood was everywhere, I couldn't hold it in any longer.  I vomited next to the corpse of one of the zebras, who had suffered a particularly nasty and fatal wound to his head.  I guess everypony thought I was grossed out by it or something.  I heard a few snickers from one of the militia squads and something along the lines of "the guards have no nerve."  If it didn't feel like my stomach was in a furnace, I might have said something, but I just moped back inside the fortress.

At least it wasn't Captain Starkey or Lieutenant Otik laughing at me, but I know they both saw it happen.  And I hope Captain Isos doesn't get too put off by me embarassing the guard like that.  I haven't told anypony what's wrong with me, and I don't think they know yet.  There was a lot of blood in the vomit, but there was so much everywhere else I doubt they noticed.  If they even cared to look at it in the first place, of course, which I doubt.  If Captain Isos found out how sick I was, she'd probably relieve me of duty...

7th Limestone, 99

After another shot of medicine from Dr. Bubbles, my stomach finally settled again.  It's taking more and more to keep the pain manageable and let me eat anything.  Last night it was so bad I couldn't even drink water.  I don't need a doctor to tell me what that means.  I almost feel selfish wasting the medicine knowing that I'm doomed, but pain and fear of mortality are strong emotions that I haven't conquered yet.

Kris was so happy to see that I was alright after the siege, and I was likewise happy to see she wasn't hurt.  After her expedition into the woods with Lilac, she's been pretty terrified to even set foot out the door, which is fine by me.  When I'm gone... when I'm not here to protect her any more... (the diary entry ends abruptly)


((Whether she lives or dies, Falcata is convinced her end is nigh.  We'll see how it plays out...))

Edit: Fixed some menacing spikes of typos.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 17, 2011, 02:26:16 am
((Falcata is quickly becoming my favorite pony in this fort. I don't know weather I want her to live or die from this, as both have great story potential, but I can't wait to find out.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 17, 2011, 02:37:20 am
((I know, I'm having the same conundrum.  I strongly suspect she's going to live.  I experimented with a fort of mine where a pony had a rotten pancreas from a similar incident, and after a full year she was completely unharmed otherwise.  Her pancreas only had minor rot, as opposed to advanced rot like Falcata, but I suspect it'll end the same: nothing.  Supposedly she could get an infection that would kill her, but I doubt it.

I suppose you could kill her like you did the other ponies if we wanted her to die.  We could put it up to a vote, hehe.  I just can't decide what I want... I've got scenes planned out for both outcomes.  One will give you d'awwabetes, the other... not so much.

And I must say, I never expected to actually participate much in this fort, much less get a decent story out of it.  I've really come to like my little unicorn.  Why is it I want terrible things to happen to her?  :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 17, 2011, 02:38:43 am
((Ponies are magnets for harm.

I'm still feeling sorry about what I'm going to do to Friesden.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 17, 2011, 02:46:05 am
((And Khenal for that matter.  :D

By the way, there's a few things that I've been wondering:

1: For RP purposes, does the fort run on a socialist or capitalist economy?  I've been trying to think up a decent reason for Falcata to not resign and spend her last months with her daughter, and I figured if they need the money that was a pretty powerful motivator.  If food was rationed out for free, that's not such a good excuse anymore.

2: Does anypony know what crimes immigrants committed, or is it one of those things that it's assumed nopony will ask if you don't?  I'm wondering if somepony like Charity or Isos would know why Falcata had been sent to Glitterglen.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 17, 2011, 02:53:44 am
((
1: For RP purposes, does the fort run on a socialist or capitalist economy?  I've been trying to think up a decent reason for Falcata to not resign and spend her last months with her daughter, and I figured if they need the money that was a pretty powerful motivator.  If food was rationed out for free, that's not such a good excuse anymore.

2: Does anypony know what crimes immigrants committed, or is it one of those things that it's assumed nopony will ask if you don't?  I'm wondering if somepony like Charity or Isos would know why Falcata had been sent to Glitterglen.))

1. Has been inconsistent, and I don't know. Perhaps a vote should be held. I think it tends toward a capitalistic bend though as there has been talk of bits, and buying of private items from the caravans etc. It's defiantly a mixed economy of some kind.

2. No, ponies just show up, some were banished, some are ordinary immigrants, but no one is given any particular information regarding the immigrants. This is mostly to allow someone to keep it a secret from everypony until plot demands it be revealed, but the in game explanation would be that the Princess, at least at the beginning, didn't give a rat's ass about what happened out here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 17, 2011, 03:12:03 am
((Okay, cool.  I vote for capitalist, for the reason I just mentioned then.  Falcata's reason for getting banished to Glitterglen isn't really spectacular or anything, and it's not worth a plot derail to bring it up, but it would give her a little more character development before she died and show that everypony makes mistakes.  If she dies.

I'm seriously contemplating leaving her fate up to a vote actually, and you could kill her off if it came to that.

Actually, what are the attrition rates like in the guard?  She might get killed anyway and it might not matter.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 17, 2011, 03:17:12 am
(( I vote Capitalist ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 17, 2011, 03:23:38 am
Socialist.


Anyway, tomorrow the 40k arc ends. I've got an way for the interrogation to be done and for all the heretics to be caught. It's going to mean that at least one more pony in the military is a heretic.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 17, 2011, 05:35:54 am
capitalist.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 17, 2011, 08:37:26 am
Capitalist. Seems like that has more opportunity for "Interesting stuff" happinin'

Aww, Dsarker, don't do anything to Friesden, she's my favorite psychotic / demon possessed / sometimes catatonic, pony.
Nah but seriously it's your character, although if anything really bad happens I'll be a saad Jaxtal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 17, 2011, 02:16:15 pm
Also voting capitalist, and for Falcata to live.  I'm a huge sucker for a happy ending.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 17, 2011, 02:17:42 pm
Oh yah I really want Falcata to live too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 03:27:02 am
((What follows is the transcription of the final parts of the 40K arc.  It again menaces with spikes of typos and is adorned with hanging rings of purple prose.  There is an image at the bottom of Telgin.  Telgin is writing.  Telgin is in the fetal position.))

Lying around in bed in the hospital was so boring.  Lilac rolls over and sees Falcata lying in bed next to her, and decides to get up.  She steps over to her and says, “Umm... miss...?”

Falcata looks down to her.  “What is it, honey?”

“Is anypony mad at me?”

“No dear, nopony is mad at you.  Why would you think that?”

Lilac looks away to Khenal and frowns.  “I'm frustrated, dying so much... I'm worried that I might have annoyed uncle Khenal...”

Falcata returns a smile.  “Don't worry about that.  Khenal isn't mad at you.”

Lilac sniffles again and looks up.  “I... I miss daddy...”

She gives Lilac a hug and strokes her mane.  “I know you do.  We all miss him.”

Lilac stares back silently for a few moments.  “You... knew daddy longer than I did.  What was he like?”

That wasn't strictly true.  She'd met Captain Carrot before, but she had only been at Glitterglen for just shy of two years, and she hadn't really interacted with him much during that period.  Still... “He was a good friend to everypony.  He was very friendly, and devoted to those he knew.”  She lets out a chuckle.  “And very energetic.  He was a good soldier.  He even stood by the countess when nopony else would.”

Lilac smiles and looks away.  “How did he really die?”

“I... wasn't there honey.”  She rubs Lilac's back.  “But he died fighting hard for everything he believed in.  Don't ever doubt that.”

Lilac brushes against her, smiling weakly despite the tears beginning to stream from her eyes.  Falcata strokes her mane and wipes a tear from her face.  “It's not easy... I know.  I know what it's like.  But it gets easier with time, I promise.  You'll never forget him, and you shouldn't.  But it gets easier...”

“What about my brothers...?  Do you think they're okay...?”

Falcata nods.  “They've gone on to a better world with your father.  They're all happy now, and I know they wouldn't want you to be sad.

Lilac says something, but it sounds attenuated and far away.  The world seems to blur and shift around her, and fog settles in her vision.  She blinks to clear the haziness and looks around to find herself in a completely void environment.  In front of her stands the impossible.  Captain Carrot.  “Carrot?”

“The one and only.  I see you've been comforting my daughter.”

Falcata stares in disbelief for some time.  “She's been very upset about it all... and she doesn't have anypony else to really turn to.  Lieutenant Otik has spent some time with her when she can, but I've been off duty more than her in the past few days.”

Carrot nods and steps closer.  “About that... there's something wrong with you.  Have the doctors told you what's really wrong with you?”

She nods somberley.  “Yes, they have.”

“Then who will be as nice to Lilac when you're gone?”

“I... don't know.  I don't even know who will look after Kris when I pass on.”  She looks aside.

“I can guide her, Kris, but I can't take care of her...”

Falcata smiles.  “I appreciate that Captain, but how would you do that?”

Carrot grins.  “Well, how do you think I'm talking to you now?”

She ponders the statement for a moment.  Good question.  “I actually wish I knew that...”

“Here's a hint... what happens to gas when you breathe it in?”  He continues to grin.  “It's a trick question.”

“I... uh...”

He points to her forehead.

“What?  My horn?”  She notices his displeased expression and adds, “Sorry, it's been a long day...”

He rolls his eyes.  “I give up.  I'm in your mind.”

“Oh... of course.  I... don't get the riddle, but that makes sense I suppose.”

“I can guide Kris.  Get it now?”

She looks to him, eyes wide.  “Wait... how are you able to do this?  Could... could I speak to her too?”

Carrot chuckles and grins again.  “Sure... I can't freeze time!”

“No... no,” she says, shaking her head.  “I mean, when I die... could you tell me how to speak with her?  Like you're speaking to me now?”

He nods.  “Of course!  It's simple, just don't go to, at least what Khenal always called, 'Your Enternal Reward.'”

She looks down in silence for a while.  “I... what's it like?  Not going on?”

“It's boring sometimes, not having any senses... at first you go mad, but then you get tired of it.  I'm here because I still want to be.  I've visited Khenal on many occasions.... he didn't like it much...”

“I see...”  She hangs her head and continues, “I feel that I've atoned for my sins in this life... but I still fear what might await me after I die... but the chance to help Kris along... at least for a while...”

“Don't worry.  Besides, when you do die, I get a playmate!”  Carrot grins hugely.

Falcata responds with a weak smile.  “Until then though... I'm going to do everything I can for Kris.  And Lilac.  The poor filly doesn't deserve what's happened to her.”

Carrot glowers darkly.  “Who killed my foals?” he growls.

“Nopony is sure,” she replies.  “The inquisitor believes that it is some sort of cult... Crest Fire was there...”

“Crest Fire!  What!?” Carrot exclaims, eyes wide.

“Yes... he committed suicide at the scene, from what I hear.  Why... I have no idea.”

“He what!?”  Carrot looks away.  A thought strikes him, “Oh, would you look at that?  Time to go...”  He turns away from her and begins to step away into the darkness.  “But first, catch!”  He throws something to her.  Falcata catches what appears to be a watch with her magic.  She glances over it, seeing nothing of interest.   “Hang onto that, you'll need it later.”

She continues to stare at it as Carrot recedes into the dark.  “Alright, I'll keep it safe.”  She looks up and sees that Carrot is gone, and her vision fades away again.

“Hey!  Wake up!  Stop ignoring me!”

Falcata shakes her head and blinks her eyes to fight the fog.  As the world becomes lucid again, she sees Lilac staring her down.  “Hey!  You fell asleep!”

“Sorry, honey, it's been a long day.”

“You kept saying Carrot...”

“Yes... I'll tell you about it later.”  She tries to think up a plausible topic to change to, as Commissar Abel, Schmutz and Dr. Alen enter the hospital.  The commissar escorts Alen over to the inquisitor and ties him up.  This wasn't going to be pretty.  She looks down to Lilac and says, “Why don't we let the inquisitor work?  Let's go see Kris, I bet she'll be happy to know that you're okay.”

Lilac stares at the inquisitor for a  moment before saying, “Okay.”  She didn't like the way this was starting to look.  The inquisitor was beginning to get really loud.

Falcata rises from bed and leads Lilac outside just as the sounds of the interrogation begin.  Would the inquisitor really have started in front of the foal?  No matter, they weren't going to be anywhere near it in a moment.  She thinks back to what she had just seen... should she tell Lilac what happened?  Surely Carrot had appeared to his own daughter before her.  “Lilac... about your father...”

Lilac ignores the comment as something catches her eye.  “Fal... why do you have a watch around your neck?”

She raises an eyebrow and looks down to see that it was true.  She thought it was just in her mind.  “Y-your father gave it to me.”

“Really?”

Falcata nods.  “I... don't really understand it... but while I was out... your father came to me.”

Lilac's expression grows frustrated.  She begins tearing up again and says, “Why does everypony keep lying to me!”

“Lilac, I...” She pauses.  Smooth going, she should have just kept it to herself.  “I don't know, maybe I was just dreaming.”

“Then where did you get the watch!?” Lilac demands.

“I-I can't explain that.”  She levitates it to Lilac's eye level and asks, “Your father told me to keep this.  Do you recognize it?”

“That's my mom's watch!” she exclaims.  “She was buried with it!”

That was unexpected.  She looks over to Lilac, who is beginning to burst into tears again.  Poor thing... this had to be more difficult to deal with than she could imagine.  Lilac's tears are interrupted as she stumbles and lands face first on the ground.  “Lilac!  Are you okay?”

The filly slowly rises from the ground, blood beginning to form in her nostrils.  “Oww...”  Lilac stands and places a hoof against her mouth, where Falcata can see that she has broken a tooth.

“Oh...”  Falcata looks up to see that they're right outside her door.  “Come here,” she instructs before hurrying over and opening the door.  She runs inside and rummages about for a cloth and returns to find Lilac standing in the doorway, crying and rubbing her cheek.  She steps over and gently tries to wipe the blood from her nose, but Lilac winces and pulls away.

“Oww!”

“I know it hurts, honey,” she replies, urging Lilac to tilt her head back.  “Here, look up for me, that will help stop the bleeding.”

Lilac pulls away and shakes her head.  “It hurrrts...”

“Mom, is that you?” a voice calls from out of sight.  A cream colored filly appears from another room, confusion on her face.  “Oh, Lilac!  I'm glad to see you're okay!”  She steps over.  “You... you are okay, right?”

“No!” Lilac shouts, wincing as she does so.  “It hurts... it hurts...”

“Oh, let me try something,” Kris closes her eyes as she begins to concentrate, her horn covered in a soft golden glow.  Immediately Lilac feels the pain in her nose and mouth subside mostly, but not completely.  “Did it work?”

Lilac darts over and gives her a strong hug.  “Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you!”  She tackles Kris and the two tumble together and roll a few paces.

“Hey, watch it!” Kris says, rolling out from under her before letting out a giggle.

“I bet I can beat you in a race to the hospital!”

“Bet you can't!”

Lilac darts out the door, Kris in tow.  Falcata stares in confusion for a moment.  How did Kris learn to do that?  Wait... if they're going to the hospital...  “Girls, don't interrupt the inquisitor!”  She bolts out the door after them.

Lilac leads Kris back to the hospital, to find Commissar Abel leading a group of chained ponies away from the hospital.  “Hello!” she says to him, ignoring the prisoners.

“Hello, sorry girls, I don't have time to talk right now,” Abel responds.

Kris pauses.  Her mom told her not to bother the commissar.  “Wait, Lilac, maybe we shouldn't bother Mr. Abel...”

“Blood for the blood god!” one of the prisoners bellows, lunging for her before pulling his chains taut.  Abel yanks him back out of reach and forces him on.

“Oh, Luna, no!  Don't kill me, please!”

Kris cowers as the pony lunches at her

“Come on!”  the commissar shouts as he moves on, taking the prisoners out of sight.

Falcata manages to catch up to the two now, finding Lilac cowering behind Kris from nothing in particular.  She steps over and kneels beside Lilac.  “What's the matter?”

“Mom!” Lilac exclaims, latching onto her instinctively.  She squeezes down with a bone crushing hug.  She shuts her eyes, and memories of her own mother begin to flood back to her.

Falcata is surprised, but accepts the embrace.  She returns the hug as best she can.  “It's okay...”

Eventually Lilac releases her and sits on the ground next to her.  Moments later, Otik rounds the corner.  “Afternoon Falcata, an'... Lilac?  Hun, what happened to yer face?”

“I hurt it... I tripped...”

Falcata nods.  “Hello Lieutenant.  Yes, she tripped... I did what I could, which wasn't much I'm afraid.”  She looks down to Lilac.  “How is it now honey?

“A lot better!”

“Good!

“Wel, I still appreciate it,” Otik replies.  “She hasn't been any trouble otherwise?”

Falcata shakes her head and adds, “No, of course not.”

“Auntie Otik, can Kris sleep over again?” Lilac asks, rearing up on Otik.

Falcata smiles at Otik.  “I wouldn't want to impose...”

Otik waves her hoof.  “I dunnae think she'll be any trouble.  I've rai.. I ken handle two fillies jus' fine.”

Lilac raises an eye brow and looks at her.  “You raised what?”

“Nothin, hun.  I... I mispoke, s'all.”

Lilac sinks away and begins to pout.  “No ya didn't...”

Otik leans down to her and whispers in her ear, “I'll tell ye some other time.  Mebbe tonight?”

“Alrigh'...”

Falcata looks to her daughter and says, “Well, alright, if you don't mind lieutenant, I don't.”

“Alright, slumber party!” Lilac shouts.  “Come on Kris!”

Otik restrains Lilac and says, ” No Lilac, you are comin' wit' me.”

“Aww, but...”

“Mister Khenal's  right inside,” she says, pointing a hoof at the hospital door.

“Actually, lieutenant, I was looking to speak with Khenal too.  Should I come back later?”

“Oh, I dunnae think tha' will be necessary.”

“Alright, if it's not personal.”  Falcata looks back to her daughter and says, “Kris, why don't you run along and go get your things ready for later?”

Otik waits for Kris to leave and looks back to Falcata and says, “It's about Lilac... an' Keeper.  Lilac, is there a voice in yer head, one tha' dunnae belong there?. ”

“Yeah, actually... his name is Helmfire...”

“How long has he been there?”

Lilac raises a hoof to her chin.  “Since... hm...”  She reaches into her mind and asks Keeper, “How long have you been in my head?”

Keeper's lethargic voice replies, “How long since that daemon was in here?”

“Come on Keeper, how long have you been in my head?”

“I don't keep track of these things.  Either cast me out, or let me sleep.”

“Some keeper you are...” Lilac mutters.  “Just sleep...”

Otik watches worriedly as Lilac sits silently.  As she comes to, Otik says, “Uh, alright then.  Well, we need ta talk t'mister Khenal about Helmfire, aye?”

“Aye aye!”  Lilac grins playfully, following the two grownups back into the hospital.  She spots Khenal lying in bed at the far side of the hospital.  As he stirs and looks their way, she exclaims, “Hi Khenal!!”

“Hmm?”  Khenal  just has time to recognize the ponies entering the room as Lilac bolts over to him and jumps on his back.  He shrieks in pain and tries in vain to fend off the filly.  Otik and Falcata rush over, and Otik snatches her from Khenal and hoists her into the air.

“Hey!”

“Now cut tha' out!  Mister Khenal is hurt, he needs 'is rest!”  Otik lowers Lilac to the ground next to Khenal.

Lilac pouts and looks up to her, “But Ooooooootik!  I never get to see Khenal!”

As Khenal lets out a soft whimper, Otik gives Lilac a stern look.  “Now, wha' do we say?”

“Sorry...”

Otik looks back to Khenal.  “Are ye alright, Khenal?”

“It's... alright.  But please... don't jump on me for a while.”  He tries to put on a tough facade, but it's not very convincing.  “So, how has the day gone?”

“Well, so far... I came by t'see about th'deal with Lilac an' Keeper.”

Lilac smiles.  “Helmfire is funny... but he's always sleeping!”

“Helmfire?”

Lilac shrugs.  “He's also called Keeper, I guess...”

“He is usually quiet,” Khenal responds, nodding.  His gaze shifts to Otik and Falcata.  “How goes... the plan?”

Falcata prepares to respond as Lilac jumps up and tries to get on top of Khenal again.  She snatches the filly up with her magic and plants her on the ground next to her before giving her a stern glare.  “Sorry... The inquisitor is handling it well, I think.  I don't know how her progress goes.”

Lilac's eyes snap open.  “What're you talking about, is it the cults!?  Did they find me!?”  She bolts behind Otik.

Otik leans over and whispers to Falcata, “When did she hear about tha'?”

“I... I don't know,” she whispers back.

“O-O-Otik, don't let them k-kill me!”

Otik drapes a foreleg over Lilac's back.  “Nopony's gunna kill ye, Lilac.  Not while me an' uncle Starkey are around.”

Khenal smiles and tries to get comfortable on the hospital bed.  “That's certainly the idea, to keep you safe.”

Otik nods.  “Okay... so ye said Lilac had t'unbind Keeper herself?”

“Yes, she needs to want him out and to let him go.”

Lilac frowns and looks at Khenal.  “But I don't wanna!”

Otik looks down to her and says, “Lilac, Keeper isnae a pet.  Did ye ever ask 'im if he wanted ta stay or go?”

She puzzles in thought for a moment before reaching back into her mind.  “Want to stay?” she asks Keeper.

“Ugh... if I can go back to Starkey, that would be preferable,” he replies lethargically.

“Aww... can't you make another one of yourself and have him stay?”

Keeper is silent for a moment.  “Very well.”  Keeper splits himself into two blue creatures.

“Yay!  Helmfire, you can go, but I want him to stay!” Lilac shouts in her mind, pointing at the new arrival.

“Thank you.”  Helmfire turns to his clone and says, “You!  Stay here.”

Lilac arcs backward without warning, red mist pouring from her mouth.  Falcata starts visibly, but as she sees Otik calm down she follows suit.  She and Khenal had more experience with this than she did...  The mist drifts silently to the door and leaves the hospital.

“Wha?  Where's he goin'?” Otik asks, tracking the mist with her eyes.  She is interrupted as the room suddenly fills with a thick black smog.  In the center of the room, a new pony has appeared.

“Hello, everypony.”

The four stare in shock.  “...Carrot?” Khenal asks.

“Captain?”

“Wha... Carrot!”

Carrot smiles and looks to Falcata.  “The one and only.  Falcata, Kil's watch, please?”  She looks down at the watch for a moment before levitating it over to him.

“Thanks.  Now, feel free to scream, anypony, I'm used to it.”

Otik blinks several times and stares at Carrot.  “Ugh... Carrot, what are ye still doin' in Lilac?  I thought ye were goin' ta th'afterlife?”

Carrot notices Otik and glowers at her.  “Oh, Otik...”  He steps over and plants a slap across her cheek.  “Now, we're even.  That's for tying me to the racks...”

Khenal's eyes snap open.  “Carrot!  What are you doing?”

Otik growls at him.  “We wos even when I decided t' take in Lilac.”  She approaches the apparition an delivers a crushing uppercut to Carrot's jaw.  Carrot is sent reeling with a startled shout.  “Now, we're even...”

“Oh, it's on, Miss Otik...” he hisses, circling her before launching into a tackle.  Otik rolls with the attack, latching him into a headlock.  Khenal and Falcata shout ineffectually trying to get them to stop, but the two continue to scuffle.  Otik and Carrot trade several blows, before somepony else enters the hospital.

“M-my lady...” Falcta says, lowering her head in deference despite the chaos unfolding around her.

Duchess Charity is standing in the doorway, draped in her finest dark blue robes and wearing a confused look on her face.  When she spots Carrot fighting with Otik, she shouts, “Carrot!!  Do you remember what I told you would happen if you kept causing trouble?”

Carrot locks eyes with her for a moment between swings.  “Shut it dutchy!”

Charity narrows her eyes and strides into the room.  “Don't speak to me that way.”

“Blah blah...”

“Feck off, can ye not see we're busy here?”  Otik adds.

Charity looks to Khenal.   “Dammit Khenal, why aren't you doing anything about this?”

“Sorry Duchess Charity, I'm still recovering from the last daemon.”

“Captain... lieutenant... this is getting out of hand...” Falcata says to brawling mass.  She winces as Carrot shatters a lamp over Otik, who soon finds herself pinned beneath Carrot.

“I see Hoofdon, I see Prance...” she says, a sinister grin forming on her face.  She then slams her hoof into a very personal place on Carrot, who immediately loses the strength in his legs and topples from her.

“Oww... you... you fucker!!” he manages between gasps.

Otik hoists Carrot up by the shoulders and dusts him off.  “There, now we're even.”  Carrot gives her a solid hoofshake and nods.

Falcata takes a step over to place herself between the two and the duchess, just as the melee calms down.  Charity frowns and says, “Now that that's done with, mind telling me what's going on down here?”

Carrot retrieves the watch and tosses it to her.  “Sure, here, catch!”  She catches it with her magic and examines it.  “It's Kil's watch,” he continues.  “You'll need it.”

“And why is Kil's watch significant?  What aren't you telling me?”

“Oh, that's the fun part!  I can't tell you!”  He cackles as everypony gives him confused expressions.  “What fun would that be?”

Khenal sighs.  “Do we get a hint?”

Charity glowers at him.  “Carrot, your fun has caused us a lot of trouble in the past.  Can't you say any more?”

He raises a hoof to his chin.  “Well... I can tell you that Friesden will break Khenal's heart..  That's all I'll say.”  He motions to the watch.  “That'll help when that happens.”

She reexamines the watch, trying to imagine how it could be related to Kenal and Friesden's relationship.  The watch appears mundane, aside from the word 'Loyalty' inscribed on the back.  Inside, it appears completely normal.

“Trust me, you'll want it.”  With those words, Carrot vanishes into a cloud of fog and is gone.  Charity pockets the watch.

Lilac comes around, having frozen in fear and astonishment during the exchange.  “Wha... wha... what did... that was... but.... how... dad...”  She begins hyperventilating.

“It's alright, Lilac,” Khenal reassures her as Otik gently wraps a wing around her.

“But... but... dad... daddy!”

Charity steps over, unwrapping her cloak.  She drapes it across Lilac's shoulders and says, “It's okay little one.”

Otik begins to console Lilac.  “Shhh... hush now... ye don' have ta yell, hun.  He can hear ye just fine.”  Lilac begins to stammer something, and she hushes her with a hoof to her lips.  “He can always hear ye... he's always with ye...”

Charity shakes her head.  “Carrot has a proper tomb up in the tower.  He shouldn't be causing trouble like this.”   She turns to Falcata.  “Falcata, I think we should investigate his resting place.”
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Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 03:35:09 am
Dammit, was meaning to but couldn't participate due to being out of town. Sorry everyone!
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 03:39:08 am
((I must note that I don't have transcripts of anything past when I left. Assuming the dinner is continuing (please tell me it hasn't finished) I should point out that by that time it's been seven days since the exorcism, which is another thing Khenal would be anxious about.

The following post is assuming the dinner is continuing.))

Even as Khenal soured in the corner, almost like grapes, a pony not technically on the invitation list burst in. He looked like he had been running for some time, and he panted as he looked around, saw Khenal, and continued over towards him.

"Khenal...Khenal...Khenal," he panted. "She...she...she's awake."
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Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 03:47:53 am
((Dsarker, just to clarify for you. The dinner isn't exactly over, however, with Carrot screaming in pain, and Charity taking him from the room, it could be seen as wrapping up. However, Khenal being injured would still be there, so your post does make sense.))
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 12:00:19 pm
((Ah, the dinner was on the 7th day after the excorsism?  Khenal should be just able to walk, then.))

I look confused for a moment, before what the messenger said sinks in.

"Friesden!  She's awake?"

I shakily get to my hooves and start to make my way to the stair case.
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Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 12:18:42 pm
((Part 2.  Read part 1 above first!  Apologies to Impending Doom and DVNO.  I tried to work Otik into the fight scene, but it just didn't seem to work out.  I tried fiddling with Couth's actions and dialogue, but that came out funky too.  I decided to leave it as it stood instead.  I hope that's alright with everyone.))

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 01:55:16 pm
The messenger leads Khenal from the room, heading up to the tryptich in which Friesden had been exorcised.
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Post by: Impending Doom on December 20, 2011, 02:02:22 pm
((I believe I should clear this up: You cannot go into a triptych (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Triptych). It's a flat, decorated box that hangs on the wall. It has doors on the front, and you open it up and there's a statue or painting inside.))
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 02:05:43 pm
((which is why they're heading to it, as opposed to heading in to it.))
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 03:58:32 pm
"Friesden?  Are you alright?"
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 04:12:43 pm
As Khenal enters the barracks, he can see Friesden lying near the open triptych, with chains still holding her down. Even as he enters, he can see three ponies trying desperately to hold her down as she continues to thrash.

As he speaks, she stops dead still.
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 04:21:11 pm
I slowly approach, hoping she's alright.

"Friesden?"
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 04:24:20 pm
She remains silent and still.
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 04:27:34 pm
I glance at the ponies holding her down.

"Could you get off her, please?"
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 04:39:54 pm
The ponies warily back away from her. Khenal can see several of them have bruises with chain marks on them.


"Please....please, let me out of the chains," Friesden says.
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 04:43:28 pm
I kneel down to look my love in the eyes before nuzzling her.

"I'm so glad you're alright, Friesden."
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 04:48:37 pm
A confused and bewildered look is in her eyes, and she tries to back away from Khenal, but the chains hold her sufficiently in place.
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 04:50:04 pm
"Friesden?  What's wrong?"
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 04:57:23 pm
"I...I know you...I know you. Oh gods, oh gods! Get away! Get away from me!"
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 05:02:31 pm
Startled, I stumble backwards.

"What's wrong?"
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 05:05:02 pm
"You...You know me! You KNOW me! How do you KNOW ME? I KNOW YOU! Get out of my HEAD! I can't TAKE IT! Kill ME or DESTROY me I care NOT leave ME!"

She descends into mad babbling.
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 05:15:58 pm
I stare at Friesden, stunned.

"F-Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 05:23:13 pm
She coughs a bit, and a bit of phlegm hits the ground nearby.
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 05:38:22 pm
While I am still physically, mentally I am a blur.

'No!  She's supposed to be fine!  Amberley said she...'

My face shifts to an expression of pure rage.


"AMBERLEY!!"
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 05:40:28 pm
Even as Khenal's face turns to rage, Friesden struggles against the chains once more. However, instead of moving back, she is trying desperately to go forward.


"Khenal!"
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 05:42:13 pm
Rage is instantly replaced by hope.

"Friesden?"
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Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 05:47:17 pm
Meanwhile, Duchess Charity is taking the zombiefied Psycho Carrot back to his final resting place as they reach the surface and are greeted with a gust of cold night air, Charity says, "I hope this works." as she makes her way into the tower.
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 05:48:35 pm
"Khenal? It is you, it is you!"

The chains are starting to pull out of the walls.
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 05:50:33 pm
Heedless of the pain, I rush to Friesden.
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 05:54:00 pm
Friesden grabs onto Khenal, and holds him tight.

"I...I didn't know if you were real or not. It...it kept pretending. Now I remember it.... But You're real. You're real. I know You are real!"
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Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 05:55:32 pm
((Strongbeard...That's not nice, zombie sounds so racist...:P))
"Y-you can...ugh, you can put me down now."
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Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 06:01:08 pm
((I apologize, I'll try something different in this post.))

Hearing Carrot speak, Charity sets the undead abomination down by the tower. "Do you feel better now Carrot?" she asks.

Spoiler: for The Master (click to show/hide)
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 06:05:44 pm
I return the embrace as best I can, trying to not show my pain.

"You're really back!  Oh Friesden, I was so scared."
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 06:08:56 pm
"You...you're here..."

She relaxes....in time to notice Khenal's pain.

"Khenal, you're hurt!"
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 06:23:19 pm
"Um, ya, heh."
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 06:23:55 pm
"Please, I can wait. Just go, get better!"
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Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 06:25:39 pm
((Hardy har har....oh, and unrelated...but look...http://prntscr.com/4r6x2))
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 06:27:38 pm
"I can rest as well here as in the hospital."
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 06:28:28 pm
"If you can....it's been too long."
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 06:35:28 pm
"Yes.  Yes it has."

I relax with my love.
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 06:40:01 pm
"The...the first century was the worst..."
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 06:42:13 pm
"...Century?"
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 06:46:07 pm
"What? What...what year is it?"
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 06:50:06 pm
((I have no idea what the year actually is...))

"It's only been a few weeks since the trial, I think."

"...How long do you think it's been?"
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 06:51:35 pm
"I...I can't remember. It's been so long."
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Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 06:52:18 pm
((I have no idea what the year actually is...))

((The Year is 99.))
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 06:58:43 pm
Centuries without Friesden?  I shudder at just the thought.
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 07:00:29 pm
"What...what year is it?"
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 07:03:14 pm
"Still 99."
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 07:12:56 pm
Friesden's face drops.

"So..That...that never happened? It...oh Sisters... NOOOOOO!"
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Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 07:17:56 pm
"Friesden?  What's wrong?"
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Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 07:18:52 pm
She begins to weep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 07:24:28 pm
I gently stroke Friesden's mane, trying to reassure her.

"Shh, it's alright.  Whatever you went through, it's over now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 07:25:23 pm
If anything, she seems to weep more at this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 07:30:17 pm
I continue holding my love, doing my best to try to console her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 07:32:31 pm
"No. No. No. No. No. NOOOOO!"

She begins to wail.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 07:36:27 pm
"It'll be alright, Friesden.  It'll be alright..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 07:56:07 pm
"They're...they're gone. They're gone! They're GONE!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 07:59:28 pm
"Who?  Who's gone?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 08:02:59 pm
"Our....our foals! Our foals are GONE!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 08:05:24 pm
((lolwut?))
*A pony walks up to Bubbles, and he leaves the dining hall, headed for the tripyith.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 08:05:53 pm
((I was afraid it'd be something like that...))

Her answer hits me like a bolt between the eyes.

"Our...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 08:10:12 pm
"Our...our foals....they weren't real...they...they didn't exist."

She stops crying and wailing, just falling to the ground, utterly crushed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 08:11:18 pm
((Sorry for taking so long, internet issues.))
"I feel alot better Charity...thanks..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 08:11:57 pm
"You're welcome, but what do you think caused that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 08:13:42 pm
Carrot shrugs.
"Likely from putting my body back together using nothing but pieces of other bodies in the other coffins and magic from Venture."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 08:15:30 pm
((Ugh. Something tells me I know what is going to happen next. Insert cheesy quote from Khenal here.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 08:15:39 pm
I collapse with Friesden, heart breaking with her.

"Oh...oh Friesden..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 08:16:10 pm
"You, You did what?! And Venture helped you with this?!" Charity is dumbfounded.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 08:18:11 pm
"ummm.....Sort of...I may have umm...controlled her...a little?" Carrot ducks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 08:20:04 pm
Friesden refuses to move. Tears continue to fall from her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 08:20:20 pm
((Wow... I was wondering where Dsarker was going with this.  Poor Friesden and Khenal...

Friesden has been stricken with melancholy!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 08:22:23 pm
"Friesden...oh Sisters..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 08:25:15 pm
Charity's shock turns to anger, "You've gone too far this time Carrot! You've defiled the graves of several ponies, and forced another to help you do so against their will. I'm sorry but I'm taking this to the Inquisitor. She'll know what to do with you." Charity turns to leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 08:28:52 pm
"Khenal....what happens to them? Do they exist at all?" she asks, begging for comfort.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 08:29:28 pm
"Charity. If I hadn't, the whole fort would be doomed right now, and you darn well know that! NEXT TIME YOU GUYS ARE IN DANGER, I'LL JUST LET YOU GET WHAT IS COMING!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 08:33:12 pm
"Carrot, you didn't have to build yourself a new body to save anything. If you knew where the cult was meeting you could have just told us, like you did at the trial. Or you could have used Venture as a mouth piece instead of forcing her to make this, this thing." she gestures at Psycho's new body when she says, "thing."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 08:35:36 pm
"I...I don't know.  That daemon may have just been lying, it may have shown you a possible future, I just don't know.  But...maybe...they are just waiting to be born."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 08:43:03 pm
She looks up at him, a plaintive look in her eyes. "Really? Is that...true?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 08:48:39 pm
"I hope so."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 08:51:08 pm
"I...I need to think. Oh sisters...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 08:54:56 pm
"You...you don't get it do you, I EXPLODED ALL OVER THE GROUND! HALF OF ME IS NOW ROTTEN FLESH AND FOOD! I'D LIKE TO BE ALIVE AGAIN, THANKS A TON!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 08:55:19 pm
"Do...you want me to...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 08:59:03 pm
"I..I don't know. It just feels....so different."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 09:01:46 pm
"Pycho, you're already dead. You need to stop holding on to this place. It's time for you to move on. And by the gods you can't just take parts of other ponies like this. It'll anger their spirits, do you want to add rampant hauntings to Glitterglen's problems."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 09:08:17 pm
"...Maybe I'll go ask Captain Isos if you can be released, then return?  How does that sound?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 09:09:22 pm
"Hah! They don't care! Besides, I'm bored bein' dead, and Lilac needs me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 09:11:22 pm
"Okay...okay..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 09:17:40 pm
"They don't care?" Charity clearly doubts his claim, "Fine then Psycho, but this is your last chance. If your wrong... Regardless I will be informing the Inquisitor, and the Captain of the Guard of your actions and they can decide if anything needs to be done about them." Charity turns to leave, "Now I have some other business to attend to. Good day Psycho."

((Unless Carrot moves to stop her, Charity will go and look for Falcata so they can finish their conversation in Charity's office.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 09:20:07 pm
((Is the feast still going?  Last I read it was, but if not, Falcata is patiently waiting outside Charity's office.  If it is, she's still there with Kris.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 09:21:02 pm
*As Bubbles walks, he passes by Falcata.*
"Hello Falcata. How is the stomach?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 09:22:28 pm
"It's... tolerable doctor, thank you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 09:23:18 pm
((Is the feast still going?  Last I read it was, but if not, Falcata is patiently waiting outside Charity's office.  If it is, she's still there with Kris.))

((Depends exactly how long everything with Carrot took. I don't think it was that long, their conversation was fairly short, and it wouldn't take that long to reach the surface, so I will assume that you are still at the dinner.))

Charity returns to the dinner and sees Doctor Bubbles chatting with Falcata, she decided not to interrupt and merely retakes her seat next to her, silently.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 09:23:37 pm
"...I wouldn't go telling anypony...I know some information that would tarnish your reputation, and if I were to feel threatened in some way, said information might...slip out."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 09:24:05 pm
*Bubbles takes out a few tablets, and gives them to Falcata.*
"Here, take these. If the pain in your stomach ever becomes too much to handle, these will give you instant relief. Should be able to reduce the pain a lot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 09:24:24 pm
I reluctantly stand and step away from Friesden.

"It'll...be alright.  Please, be strong."

I turn and slowly walk away to try to find Isos.

((Anyone want to take Isos, or will I be talking to myself? ;) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 09:24:50 pm
((I'll take Isos.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 09:27:37 pm
She takes the pills and smiles at Dr. Bubbles.

"Thank you, doctor."

As she notes the duchess return, she turns to her and asks, "How is Carrot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 09:29:37 pm
Lilac wanders into the  just as Falcata mentions Carrot. She's not very happy.
"H-Hi....Wh-wh....where..." Lilac sighs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 09:31:33 pm
((We're at dinner.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 09:32:10 pm
"Carrot is as alive as he's been since he fell from the tower, and I can't say more here. If you're finished eating we can move this to my office."

((Falcata isn't in the hospital The Master, she's at the dinner in the dinning hall.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 09:32:32 pm
I check Isos's office first, since it's the closest place she might be.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 09:32:58 pm
Isos is inside, going over some paperwork
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 09:35:17 pm
The Inquisitor and the Commissar are conspicuous by their now-absence.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 09:35:30 pm
Falcata looks at her plate and laments that she left as much as she had, but it was all she could stomach.

"I... think I'm finished."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 09:36:24 pm
Lilac wanders into the dining hall. She's not very happy.
"H-Hi....Wh-wh....where..." Lilac sighs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 09:37:07 pm
"Captain Isos?  Friesden is awake.  Would you please come and see if she's fit for release?  Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 09:39:43 pm
*Isos sighs*
"Oh alright"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 09:41:36 pm
I sigh in relief, then turn to lead Isos to Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 09:42:35 pm
"Then let's go to my office." Charity stands up and notices Lilac. "Are you looking for Otik, little one? or Starkey? I think I saw them around."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 09:44:30 pm
"No...I....I WANT MY DADDY!!!!!!" Cries Lilac, tears fountaining out of her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 09:46:12 pm
Falcata stands after the duchess  "Of course."  She notices Lilac, but lets the duchess speak.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 09:48:54 pm
'Sisters what do I do.' Thinks Charity to herself, wishing somepony else else had dealt with this. "Uh, I last saw your father on the surface. I think he's still upstairs."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 09:50:43 pm
Lilac bounds for the stairs, but smacks right into Kris, knocking each other over.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 09:56:32 pm
"Ow!"  Kris shakes her head and looks at her attacker.  "Lilac?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 09:59:28 pm
"So, Khenal. What proof do you have that Friesden is fit to be free?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 10:00:18 pm
"Foal," Charity looks directly at Lilac, "if you're going to look for your father, don't go out onto the surface, it's late and getting dark, and plenty of nasty things live in the jungle." Charity looks back to Falcata. "Do you need assistance to get up stairs?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 10:03:22 pm
"I think I can manage, thank you," she replies with a smile.  She looks to Lilac, "The duchess is right Lilac, it's very dangerous outside.  You remember what happened last time, don't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 10:06:08 pm
"She seems to be back to herself, Captain.  I haven't done anything to actually check, but I think she's back to herself."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 10:07:21 pm
"BUT MY DADDY...HE...I...." Lilac breaks down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 10:11:37 pm
"Uh-huh. Lets see then."
*Isos and Khenal enter the room*
((Dsarker, your turn))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 10:13:07 pm
Charity and Falcata make their way past the foals and up the stairs to Charity's Office. They go inside and Falcata sees that the office isn't that large, in fact the mayor's office, (Which is technically also her's at the moment, though it is unused.) is defiantly larger. This room is stuffed with boxes, and chests and cabinets, all ornate, that seem to be overflowing with papers. The room is engraved but the art is difficult to see in many places. Charity slides her self between her desk and a worn marble chair. She gestures for Falcata to take the seat opposite of her. Her desk is piled with many things.

 "I'm sorry about the mess, but please take a seat."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 10:18:16 pm
Falcata accepts her offer and sits across from her.  "Thank you."  She tries to avoid making it obvious that she is taking in the ordered chaos and wondering just how much the duchess does on a day to day basis.

***

Kris steps over to Lilac.  "Come on, Lilac... what's the matter?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 10:21:01 pm
Friesden is lying in the same position.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 20, 2011, 10:21:52 pm
"Friesden. Why is it you think you can be free?"

((Sheeeeet, I have to go. Someone else take control of Isos.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 10:22:37 pm
((It's busy work being the Duchess, mayor, and Bookkeeper for all of Glitterglen, and that's on top of her helping out in the Mason's shop crafting beautiful stone work, on top of being a mother of five. All that stress, I'm surprised she doesn't explode.))

"Now miss Falcata, you said you wanted to talk to me in private about something?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 10:23:30 pm
Friesden doesn't appear to be saying anything, though Isos can see her eyes are red with tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 10:28:46 pm
Falcata nods, the troubled expression returning to her face.  "Yes, my lady.  I am truly honored that you think I'm worthy of the position... but there's something I think you should know before you give it to me..." she trails off, averting her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 10:30:54 pm
Charity softly says, "...Yes... I'm listening?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 10:31:45 pm
Isos frowns slightly.

"Hmm, you don't seem a threat right now.  But you also don't appear to be very stable."

I look pleadingly at Isos, but say nothing.


((It is so hard to not play Isos with a bias right now :P ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 10:33:09 pm
"They're all gone."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 10:37:54 pm
Isos' frown deepens slightly, as I move to be nearer to Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 10:39:14 pm
"The...the daemon lied. As they all do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 10:39:56 pm
"My daddy's dead...You know that, but I thought I saw him..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 10:44:26 pm
"I... uh..." She continues to look away.  "Doc-Doctor Bubbles believes... I-I would hate to leave the position unattended so soon... "  She hangs her head slightly, and pauses for some time.  "I... I'm dying..."

***

Kris blinks dumbly for a moment.  "But... it couldn't have been?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 10:47:52 pm
I gently lay a wing over Friesden and just try to be there for her.

Isos, however, remains unconvinced.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 10:49:03 pm
"Dying? That knife couldn't have hurt you that bad, and you already seem to be recovering from whatever toxin was coating it? What exactly is the matter?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 10:53:57 pm
She shakes her head and stammers something under her breath.  "No... Doctor Bubbles says he doesn't know where it came from..." She looks up.  "Do you remember the monster that attacked from the caverns a few weeks ago?  The giant leech?"

((Not sure on the timing, but that feels about right))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 10:56:12 pm
"Yes, I remember that, you... you collapsed after the fight. Does that have something to do with this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 11:00:32 pm
"I don't care what happens anymore."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 11:04:04 pm
She nods.  "I... thought I was fine..."  She places a hoof against the side of her head.  "But... soon I grew very ill.  I know it has to be linked to that monster's death... the gas I breathed in... there's no other explanation."

She rests a hoof against her stomach and says, "I've been so sick... it's only with very strong medicine from the doctors that I'm able to eat at all."  She looks away.  "Doctor Bubbles told me... it won't be getting better.  It can't.  There's only one possible outcome..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 11:05:35 pm
"Kris, I think i'm losing my mind..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 11:06:27 pm
"...Dying. Well, if you don't mind me asking. Do you know about how much longer you have left?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 11:07:25 pm
I wince at her words.

"Please, Friesden.  Don't give up hope.  Please..."

Isos has apparently seen and heard all she needs, and turns to leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 11:12:33 pm
"As you command, Khenal, so I will obey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 11:12:44 pm
She continues to hang her head.  "I... don't know.  A few months I think.  Maybe half a year.  Dr. Bubbles wasn't sure...  I've been getting by with the medicine so far."

***

Kris places a hoof around Lilac.  "Aww, come on, it's been a tough few days."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 11:15:52 pm
"Well, up till now, you've continued serving in the guard, why is that? Why not take the rest of your time and spend it with your daughter?"

((You said you where thinking about this before, I hope you came to a decision on it.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 11:16:16 pm
I collapse into sobs.

"No...Friesden..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 11:20:55 pm
"It's been more than that...I just...I feel so stupid!" Lilac punches herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 11:22:48 pm
Friesden tries to put one of her wings around Khenal, but is still tied down.

"Shh shh shh....it'll be alright, Khenal...you'll get through this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 20, 2011, 11:26:53 pm
I continue to weep, my worst fears seeming to have come true.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 11:28:22 pm
((Yes, assuming this logic survives scrutiny.  :)  I have a less bullet proof backup plan if necessary.))

"Kris... she's the reason."  She pauses for a moment.  "I'm a single mother... if I didn't provide for her, there is nopony else."  She continues to stare into the desk instead of Charity's eyes.  "I... I'm not sure what I was going to do..."

***

Kris sits next to her, concern in her eyes.  "What?  Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 11:31:19 pm
"Hush, Khenal. It'll be okay! It'll all turn right in the end."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 20, 2011, 11:35:24 pm
Charity grimly states, "Well, now that I know all this I can't let you stay in the guard."

Charity pauses for dramatic effect.

"Either you take the job I'm offering, with a pay raise, until such a time as your illness makes you unable to work, OR you can retire and I'll make sure you get a pension that can support you and your daughter. Your choice."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 20, 2011, 11:38:03 pm
"BECAUSE I SAW MY DAD, IN FLESH AND BLOOD, RIGHT IN FRONT OF ME, TALKING TO KHENAL AND THE OTHER GROWNUPS!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 20, 2011, 11:46:35 pm
Falcata's ears droop as she hears the duchess' first statement.  She prepares to accept termination of her position in the guard when Charity finishes.  Her expression shifts from confusion to elation.

"I-I can still work.  I want to serve as long as I can." She forms a genuine smile.  "Th-thank you, my lady... I accept the position."  Her expression turns sheepish.  "And... forgive me, my lady... I didn't mean to burden you with my troubles..."

***

"But... I... I don't understand.  Where?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 20, 2011, 11:56:43 pm
"Please, Khenal, don't cry for me. We'll get through this. I'm not good at this whole comforting thing...but with you here, we can get through anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 21, 2011, 12:01:36 am
"It is no trouble. I'm going to be trusting you with a lot of things, and the fact that you're willing to come forward about your own problems just makes me more sure that you're right for this job."

((End of scene?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 21, 2011, 12:03:22 am
((let me get some music for the opening to the next scene, then we begin!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 21, 2011, 12:03:39 am
"Thank you, my lady.  I won't let you down."

((Seems like a reasonable place to cut it off.  I assume that we're going to sort of massage the timeline so that your last journal update occurs prior to this, since Falcata was still in the guard at the time?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 21, 2011, 12:06:51 am
((Massage, hit it with a hammer until it stops complaining, something like that. Although I had forgotten that the siege was planed for later and already mentioned Osal's latest injuries. I swear that pony nearly dies in every ambush or siege we've had, but keeps coming back for more, not sure if that makes him lucky or unlucky but it's certainly something.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 21, 2011, 12:11:19 am
I continue to bawl, inconsolable.  Eventually, ponies arrive to return me to the hospital to let me rest my wounds.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 12:15:51 am
Heiro walks in after Khenal is taken out. Noticing Friesden he goes to talk to her

"Hey You're Friesden right? Whats wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 12:17:59 am
"Khenal...he doesn't love me, I guess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 12:19:19 am
"Khenal... that's the pony who was just taken out right? what happened to him? He seemed pretty messed up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 12:24:29 am
"I don't know! If I knew, I'd help him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 12:26:11 am
"Why are you still chained up? you don't seem like a threat."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 12:26:51 am
"Isos said so, I think."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 12:29:13 am
"Commander Isos? Hmmm let me go talk to her, I don't see why a nice pony like you should be all chained up."

Heiro goes lookin' for Isos
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 21, 2011, 12:32:22 am
Captain Isos is in her office, finishing up her paperwork.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 12:36:21 am
Heiro knocks softly on the wall and walks in

"Excuse me Commander but If I may ask... why is friesden still chained up?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 21, 2011, 12:41:24 am
Isos sighs and spits out the pen.

"She is very likely still a threat to the fortress.  She appears to still be delusional."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 12:42:48 am
"Delusional? She seems lucid to me... are you sure?" 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 21, 2011, 12:46:23 am
"I also didn't like part of what she said earlier.  If Khenal hadn't broken down at what she said, he'd be chained up as well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 12:48:26 am
"Really what was that? Perhaps it's not my place to ask... Permission to take up guard duty of the prisoner Friesden?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 21, 2011, 12:51:29 am
"Hmm..."

Isos shuffles a few papers before she finds the duty roster.

"I can do that, if you like.  Just be careful and listen to your partner.  I really do feel Friesden is dangerous."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 12:53:42 am
"Understood. I'll go tell Friesden."

Heiro returns to where Friesden is chained up to tell her about the new arrangement.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 12:58:15 am
*Bubbles passes by Isos' office, and says,*
"Captain Isos, may I head to Friesden and test her for any mental problems? I must test if she is still a threat to the fort."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 12:59:39 am
"Hmmm. Have you ever thought about the absurdity of life, Heiro? We work for all our lives, so that we have the possessions to enjoy it for a few scant years at the end. But here's how you end that system. Don't worry about possessions! Live off the land. It is the journey of life that matters, not the destination. But we look at it all wrong-wise. If you worry about the destination, you cannot enjoy the journey, always aching for it to be over. You must concentrate on your journey, enjoying it as best you can! For then, the end is not the sole part of enjoyment, but the capstone to a wonderful adventure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 21, 2011, 01:00:55 am
Isos gives Dr. Bubbles and unamused look.

"No offense, Doctor, but you are no mage and no expert in this problem.  I appreciate your concern, but please leaver her alone."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 01:01:32 am
"You ok? Where did all that come from?"

Yah Pretty mutch my reaction ???
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 01:09:16 am
"I've experienced millennia in my mind...being alone, it gives you time to think. Why does the sick pony work? Because the children need food. Why not give her the time to rest? Because rest costs money. This system will grind you down. Ah, well. Nothing to worry about in the end, is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 01:12:38 am
"Hmmm I don't think much about that sort of  stuff... Oh! I was coming to tell you I'm gonna be your new guard.
  So I'll be able to take really good care of you. If you need anything just ask and I'll try and get it for you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 01:14:49 am
"Oh, who needs anything except love?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 01:16:41 am
"U..Umm..." Hiero blushes deeply "I m..might be able to help there, b...but..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 01:21:33 am
She smiles, a truly entrancing smile. "You'd have to ask Khenal first, dear. I believe the phrase applicable for this might be that 'he's got dibs'."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 01:24:18 am
"Oh...I..I see. But I thought you said... nevermind I guess I'll talk to him later if you want me to..."
To himself "Or maybe if you don't..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 01:30:32 am
She continues to smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 01:33:53 am
((Well this seems to be going nowhere fast... let's just say that Hiero is gonna want to talk to Khenal when he can...
   and Khenal isn't AS hysteric. Either way I'm good with stopping for tonight unless anypony else has something to say))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 21, 2011, 01:44:24 am
((Whoa whoa whoa, WE DON'T STOP TIL THREE AM EASTERN STANDARD TIME!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 21, 2011, 01:44:37 am
((Ya, sounds like scene for tonight to me.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 01:47:53 am
((It's not over until the fat lady sings....or, in this case, The Master has to go to bed.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 01:50:22 am
((Ah but the party's over once the Jax goes to bed  :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 21, 2011, 01:51:23 am
((ENOUGH WITH THE HORRIBLE JOKES, JAX!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 01:55:09 am
((I'll bite: is Friesden still chained up in the barracks?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 21, 2011, 01:56:36 am
((Yep with Hiero standin' guard))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 21, 2011, 02:01:01 am
Kris recoils at the exclamation.  Lilac couldn't have seen her father.  But what did she see?

"Wait... I... but... where did you see him?  When?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 21, 2011, 02:04:52 am
"He just appeared in the hospital yesterday, alive and well, I COULDN'T EVEN SAY ANYTHING, I JUST SHUT DOWN!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 21, 2011, 02:08:26 am
"In the hospital?  What did he do?"

Kris tries to picture seeing her father again and wonders what it would feel like.  She might freeze up too...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 02:09:13 am
Starkey quietly enters the barracks. He approaches the small triptych, opening it wide and pulling out a small drawer. From within, he produces a few small candles and a stick of incense. He lights each with a small flint and steel, and sits in quiet contemplation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 02:10:50 am
((That's where Friesden is chained.))

"Starkey, my friend, how are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 02:15:07 am
Starkey gives her an insincere smile.

"Fine, I'm... fine."

He turns back to the carving of Luna.

"How are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 02:26:14 am
"Oh, you know. Hanging around, heh."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 02:35:58 am
"Are you sure? I saw Khenal in the hall earlier. I should think he'd be happy to hear you were awake, but... he was... inconsolable. Did something happen?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 02:38:24 am
"Well..I don't," her voice cracks for a bit, then she begins again.

"I...I don't think he loves me anymore."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 02:45:28 am
"W-What? Friesden, where would you ever get a... a ridiculous idea like that? He adores you! If you could have only seen the pain he was in, seeing you enthralled by that daemon..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 02:47:47 am
"Then...then.." She chokes up for a second. "Why...why didn't he let me comfort him when he was sad?" She starts to cry again. "He,  he, he doesn't want me near him! And I can't bear to be apart!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 02:56:40 am
Starkey turns away from his prayers, kneeling down to nuzzle Friesden.

"Hey now, don't cry... What happened that made him sad?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 02:59:48 am
"Me!" she bawls out. "I was just trying to let him know how much I loved him and he turned away and left! I, I, I, I just wish I knew why!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 03:07:34 am
Starkey puts out the candles, closing up the small shrine. He lays down next to Friesden.

"It has to be something more than that. Please... tell me what happened, exactly."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 03:14:00 am
"That, that, that was all there was! I..."

She broke down, sobbing. "I just want somepony to hold me and tell me it's all going to be alright."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 03:14:33 am
((Cue Starkey doing just that.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 03:30:01 am
((Why does it seem like Friesden gets more affection from Starkey than from Khenal?))

Starkey leans in, gently wrapping his hooves around Friesden and pulling her into a hug.

"There... of course everything will be alright... I know it will..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 21, 2011, 03:33:15 am
((I think it's because he's always laid up in the hospital :P  As for right now: he's convinced that Friesden is a thrall, that all the love she's shown him is just because she's so open to suggestion with her weak mental defenses.  How would you feel if you thought that not only did your love not actually love you, but that you were forcing them to love you because they don't know any better?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 03:34:40 am
Friesden's tears slow as Starkey comforts her, and eventually finish.


"Thank, thank you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 21, 2011, 03:36:06 am
((Forgot to log off, so I'll just do that now, but first I want to say: Starkey is a FAR better match for friesden then Hiero or whatever is.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 03:43:55 am
He smiles warmly at her.

"Anything for a friend."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 03:45:46 am
"You're my only real friend now..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 03:46:40 am
*Bubbles leaves the office, but still goes to see Friesden.*
"Hello? Friesden? Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 03:51:34 am
As he enters, he sees Starkey and Friesden embracing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 03:52:10 am
"W...wwhaaa.a....whaa?
What is the meaning of this!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 03:56:10 am
"Don't sa-"

Starkey pauses. Wasn't he? The only ponies who really had much to do with her were himself, Khenal, and Carrot. With Carrot gone, and Khenal-

"Aaaaaaanythin' f'r a friend?"

Starkey turns his head to find himself staring into a familiar pair of rust-colored eyes perched above a well-groomed periwinkle mane and capped by the most disconcerting cheshire grin he had ever seen.


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 03:57:05 am
((Whaat?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 21, 2011, 03:58:49 am
((Otik just walked in, heh))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 03:59:18 am
((Otik, I presume.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 03:59:35 am
((Otik is laying on her back on a bunk next to them, leaning back and staring at Starkey upside-down. She's been watching them, and... getting ideas, shall we say. :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 04:01:11 am
"Otik?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 04:12:25 am
Otik rolls right-side up and reaches out a hoof to rest on Friesden's shoulder.

"Hey there sunshine. glad t'see ye up an' about."

She turns to face Starkey, gently tapping him on the nose.

"Thought I'd find ye down 'ere mopin' 'bout Efim, not seducin' poor, vulnerable lit'l fillies."

Otik prods his chest with each word in mock anger, but her expression is pure glee. Starkey is blushing furiously.


"Otik, hun, shouldn't you be resting? You took quite a beating yesterday, and..."

"I'm in bed, en't I?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 04:17:12 am
Friesden stays as far out of the conversation as she can, feeling an intruder.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 04:20:19 am
*Bubbles walks over the Friesden, and puts a hoof over her shoulder.*
"Friesden, are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 04:26:12 am
"From the sound o' things, she's havin' a lit'l crisis o' th' heart. Issat right, hun?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 04:27:40 am
Friesden jumps almost a foot in the air as Bubbles taps her, only not going higher due to the chains.

As she settles down, she says sadly "Yes. Was it that loud?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 04:37:01 am
Otik rolls out of bed and lays next to Friesden opposite Starkey, draping her good wing over her.

"It's understandable, hun. Ye thought ye finally had a break, thought ye could finally settle down an' spend some time with th' stallion o' yer dreams, an then... it all falls apart. Am I right?"


"I seriously doubt he's actually left her, hun."

"Hush now, Stars, th' girls are talkin'."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 04:48:01 am
"Yes. I just... I just don't know why he left me. I think maybe if I knew that, it'd all make sense."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 04:55:17 am
"Why dun' we start a'th beginnin'? Tell me everythin' you two said, hun. Every word."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 05:06:39 am
Friesden, tearfully, repeats all that happened since she awoke.

"That, that, that's all that happened."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 05:22:03 am
Otik nuzzles Friesden gently.

"I... c'n sympathize. I know what it's like t'have yer own children taken from ye."

"But I also tkink I see what's got Khenal upset."

She repeats Friesden's words: "As you command, so I will obey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 05:23:14 am
"Aye. Oh sisters, Khenal must feel horrible!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 05:24:11 am
"What do you mean?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 05:24:49 am
"Khenal probably thinks he's been manipulating you, and you don't actually love him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 05:26:37 am
Almost imperceptibly, one of Friesden's hooves begins to twitch. Certainly she doesn't notice it.

"But...but that's insane! It's impossible!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 05:28:19 am
"Do you remember when he took your memory away? He had to have brushed with your mind. In that way, he probably thought your mental defenses were weak, and he let the feeling get to him. Now, with you saying that, he must feel that he has been using you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 05:30:53 am
"No! That's impossible!" There is a strange tone in her voice. "You're lying!"

Her hoof continues twitching.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 05:32:25 am
((dammit me. Why can't I give Frienal an even break?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 05:35:08 am
((Goddamit, are you all taking night classes in ninja?))

"Hey, jus' calm down, hun. We all know ye really love 'im. We jus' hafta find a way t'let him know that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 05:36:52 am
((Impending, you son of a gun! Frienal prevails!))


Friesden calms herself. The twitching goes away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 05:51:06 am
"There, hun. Now, I'd imagine he's still tearin' 'imself up right now. We'll wait 'till tomorrow mornin, let 'im sleep it off, then Stars n' me'll head down an' see if we can't talk some sense inta him, aye?"

"Aye, luv. That sounds like the best course."

Starkey turns to Dr. Bubbles.

"Doctor, would you keep an eye on him? Make sure he doesn't... try anything rash?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 05:52:01 am
"Who? Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 05:54:47 am
"Okay...okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 05:55:47 am
"Aye. If I know Khenal - and I'd like to think I do - then this is worse than anything he's ever gone through. If he loses this fight... if he loses hope... just watch him for me, please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 05:57:21 am
Friesden looks up, horror writ large on her face.

"No...No...NO! Did...Did I...NO!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 06:01:09 am
"Sure Starkey"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 06:05:18 am
Otik stands up, wrapping her hooves around Friesden.

"Hey hey hey, calm down, hun! He's gonna be okay. He'd never go an' do somethin' foalish like that."

Starkey recieves a glare from Otik.


"A-Aye, you're right, I'm... that was a foalish thing to say."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 06:07:56 am
Friesden is beginning to hyperventilate at this point.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 06:12:52 am
Otik takes Friesden's head in her hooves, bringing them together until their noses touch.

"Stop that. Look at me. Breathe. Slow, deep breaths. Dunnae think about anythin' else. Just breathe. Slow... deep... in... out..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 06:14:58 am
Friesden's breaths begin to slow and stabilise.

"Thank...thank you...oh Sisters..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 06:21:31 am
"Heyyy, it's no problem, hun."

She runs a hoof through Friesden's mane. Starkey smiles warmly at them.


"So, what, now you're mother to every little lost filly in Glitterglen?"

"...I s'pose I am, aye. It that a problem?"

"...no. I wouldn't have it any other way."

He embraces them both.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 06:24:29 am
"Thank you...thank you both...."

Friesden starts sobbing tears of happiness onto them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 06:38:19 am
The three of them stay like that for a long time. When Friesden's tears have finally subsided, they part. Otik strips the blankets off a nearby bed, spreading them on the floor.

"I'll stay out here with you tonight, hun."

Starkey looks hurt.


"B-But it's Tuesday! Tuesday night is when we..."

Otik rubs her chin in contemplation.

"Oooh, tha's right."

The mischevious grin returns - oh Sisters, that grin.

"S'okay. Ye can stay out here as well. I'm sure Friesden would appreciate th'show."

Starkeys entire face turns bright red.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 06:40:49 am
Friesden has a look of incomprehension on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 06:53:13 am
((And that's it for me tonight. Goodnight.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 06:53:44 am
((Same for me, I think :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 21, 2011, 01:14:21 pm
((lolwut at Starkey and Otik))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 03:58:28 pm
((heheheh))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 21, 2011, 04:20:27 pm
((Frienal prevails! I'm sorry, but whether or not that was an error, it's now in the IRC MOTD!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 04:22:02 pm
((hehehe. Not an error. Though the way it's going, might be Otriekey))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 21, 2011, 07:07:29 pm
The sky crashes with thunder as the rain comes pouring out of the morning sky.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 07:08:08 pm
((Hey hey, still night time.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 21, 2011, 07:10:37 pm
((I know, finish up the scene, i'm just preparing the next!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 07:14:37 pm
"What...What do you mean?" asks Friesden, curiosity in her voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 07:16:48 pm
*Bubbles remains quiet.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 07:32:45 pm
((DAMMIT IMPENDING. WE NEED TO FINISH THIS SCENE ALREADY.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 07:34:09 pm
((Hold your horses, man. I'll be available around 10-ish EST.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 07:35:42 pm
((Why not now? Just type a smallish post about what you and Otik were talking about.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 10:00:35 pm
"Oh, uh, ah, n-nothing Friesden... Otik is just... being silly, aye? Just being silly."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 10:03:07 pm
"You...you sure?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 10:23:11 pm
Otik releases Friesden, taking a step back and looking her in the eye.

"Tha' depends, hun. Do you want it t'be nothin'... or somethin'?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 10:28:07 pm
"I...um...I don't know...maybe?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 10:57:13 pm
"I...I just don't understand what you mean."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 11:03:15 pm
They both stare at Friesden in shock.

"Uhm... Friesden, hun... do ye know where foals come from?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 11:15:07 pm
She flinches. "I...I think so."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 11:16:06 pm
*Bubbles goes wide eyed*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 21, 2011, 11:17:53 pm
UNFORTUNATELY, THE EDITING DEPARTMENT CUT OUT THE REST OF THIS SCENE DUE TO BUDGET CUTS!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 11:18:23 pm
"Is... somethin' th'matter, hun?"

"Doctor... perhaps you ought to go see to your patients now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 11:19:50 pm
"Khenal.....Khenal would be mad. He'd never love me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 21, 2011, 11:21:09 pm
*Bubbles leaves*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 11:25:29 pm
"If Khenal gets mad at anypony, it'll be me, or Stars. I dunnae think he'll..."

Curiosity and suspicion get the better of her.

"Friesden... has Khenal ever gotten mad at ye b'fore?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 11:26:44 pm
"I...I don't know..I don't want to know!"

She begins to hyperventilate again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 11:29:13 pm
"Ye dun' know? Then... he's never yelled at ye, or... or hurt ye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 11:32:29 pm
"Please, don't make me think about it!"

She continues to hyperventilate.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 11:35:06 pm
"Hey, hey, calm down hun. Breathe, remember? Ye dunnae hafta tell me. I won't ask anymore."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 11:37:03 pm
She tries to calm down. Eventually she stops hyperventilating, and she collapses onto Otik with tears again clouding her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 11:41:58 pm
Otik holds her close, stroking her mane.

"Oh... shh... hush now..."

Her words are calm and soothing. Her eyes, however, tell a different story. They seem almost lit from within, burning with primal rage.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 11:45:48 pm
She continues to whimper.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 21, 2011, 11:50:07 pm
"It's late, hun. Ye've had a rough day. Why dun' we all get some sleep now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 21, 2011, 11:51:01 pm
"Okay...okay..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 12:01:36 am
Otik and Friesden lie down to sleep. Starkey dithers for a moment, then finally joins them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 12:06:58 am
In the morning, Friesden lies asleep with them still.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 12:15:20 am
The sky crashes with thunder as the rain comes pouring out of the morning sky.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 12:21:25 am
Friesden starts to stir....
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 12:32:39 am
Starkey stirs next to her.

"Who... oh. good morning, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 12:34:45 am
She blushes. "Oh..Uh...hello, Starkey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 12:38:30 am
A loud bang of thunder scares poor Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 12:39:27 am
"Eep!"

She almost leaps into Starkey and Otik's hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 12:40:36 am
"There now, it's only a little storm."

"So, I trust you slept well last night? Didn't have... any... night... oh dear..."

As starkey looks up, he sees they are not alone. The entire Glitterglen militia is gathered in the barracks, sitting on benches, bunks, or the floor where necessary. They are all staring at him, and they are all grinning stupidly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 12:44:12 am
Friesden blushes even more, if that were possible, even without knowing the implications.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 12:44:43 am
A gasp is heard from the back of the crowd.
"CARROT?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 12:47:49 am
Otik stirs.

"Nnngh... shtop righ' there... criminul schkum... nopony breaks th' law on my... wha? Carrot? Where?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 12:56:25 am
"You! OTIK!" Carrot barrels through the crowd of ponies and skids to a halt in front of Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 01:01:43 am
"Hun?"

"Stars?"

"Am I awake?"

Otik reaches over Friesden, jabbing a poorly-healed scar on Starkey's wing.

HHYYYEEEEEAAAAAARRRGH

"Aye, I think ye are, hun. Hi, Carrot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 22, 2011, 01:03:18 am
((The day after Charity's last talk with Psycho Carrot, the following letter is sent to Captain Isos, with very specific instructions that it be for her eyes only.))

Captain Isos,

During the celebratory dinner last night Psycho Carrot's undead body started to be pained. Not knowing what else to do we decided to try and take him to his tomb to rest. Upon reaching the surface he, felt better, (or stopped faking, I'm not entirely sure.) and I put him down. We spoke and he confided in me that his new form was made from parts taken from the graves of other ponies, magically given life by Venture. (Who he forced to assist him somehow, against the poor mare's will.) I told him that this was not acceptable and that I would have to report it to you and the Inquisitor, however, he threatened to release secrets about me if I did so, however I don't know what secrets he's referring to.

I'm not making any orders about what you need to do about him at the moment, but you may act as you see fit with this new information. However, if he could control Venture, he has become very dangerous, and should you decided to confront him, don't do it alone.

On an unrelated note, a book of mine has vanished from my shelf, a very large old leather bound tome, with a silver clasp. I bought it from the last Zebra caravan over a year ago, and it is full of some very dark magic. I acquired it to learn more about the demons we've been fighting, but now I fear it could have fallen into the wrong hands. I suggest you keep an eye and an ear open for it.

Charity ConventTulip, Duchess of the Failed Jungles, Mayor of Glitterglen, Chief Record Keeper of Glitterglen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 01:04:49 am
"HEY, HIDE ME!" Carrot ducks behind Otik just as a pissed-off guardspony smashes through the crowd, carrying a pickaxe and screaming "DAMN YOU ZOMBIE!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 01:09:16 am
The pickaxe-wielding guard is restrained by a pair of soldiers.

"W-What, I... Carrot.. alive... hide... What the clop is going on here!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 01:10:48 am
"C....Carrot....Carrot..." Friesden begins to hyperventilate again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 01:27:08 am
This time it is Starkey's turn to embrace Friesden.

"Carrot, what are ye doin' here? An' why should we hide ye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 01:29:59 am
"THAT GUY IS TRYIN' TO KILL ME! ALL I DID WAS INTRODUCE MYSELF!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 01:30:42 am
Friesden buries her face in Starkey's mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 01:39:05 am
Captain Isos' voice rings out, bearing every ounce of her authority.

"Guardspony!  You will stand down!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 01:42:12 am
*Bubbles' voice rings out through the hall*
"And you, Isos, will stop shouting! Friesden is already in a horrible state of mind, and you're just making it worse!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 01:42:21 am
Starkey gently nuzzles Friesden, then looks up.

"Captain Isos? What is the meaning of all this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 01:43:17 am
Friesden just repeats under her breath "Make her go away, she hates me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 01:50:03 am
"It's alright. She won't hurt you. not while I'm here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 01:51:10 am
Friesden tries to breath deep and stay calm.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 01:58:59 am
Captain Isos ignores Bubble's break of protocol, and strides to the guardspony with the pickaxe.

"You will return to your post, or you will be relieved."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 02:02:42 am
Friesden continues, however, to hold Starkey tightly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 02:04:51 am
Starkey rests his chin on friesden's forehead.

"Captain, what's going on here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 22, 2011, 02:10:31 am
 
Quote
striking Darkmane down.

 (( struck down as in dead? injured? I'm fine with either of those. just don't tell me couth is locked in a jail cell. ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 02:10:58 am
The guardspony finally relents under Isos' glare and leaves.  Isos composes herself before answering Starkey.

"Apologies, Commander.  One of my ponies got a bit angry and irrational."

She takes in the scene: Otik, Starkey and Carrot around Friesden.  She hesitates before speaking again.

"Commander?  Do you feel Friesden is safe to be released?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 02:12:42 am
Quote
striking Darkmane down.

 (( struck down as in dead? injured? I'm fine with either of those. just don't tell me couth is locked in a jail cell. ))

((Oh, he's quite dead.  I hope to have the entire thing up tomorrow sometime.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 22, 2011, 02:14:52 am
Quote
striking Darkmane down.

 (( struck down as in dead? injured? I'm fine with either of those. just don't tell me couth is locked in a jail cell. ))

((He's not just merely dead. He died and then exploded!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 02:15:49 am
Friesden closes her eyes and covers her ears with her wings, not daring to hope.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 02:18:03 am
((He's not just merely dead. He died and then exploded!))

((Yep, Falcata learned in that fight to never cross the duchess.  She almost doesn't need a bodyguard, heh.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 02:19:03 am
"Well he sure thought she was safe enough to-"

"Kill that noise, soldier!"

"S-Sir, yes sir!"

"Now, then. I don't believe she's a threat to anypony, captain. She's safe to go about unchained."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 22, 2011, 02:19:44 am
((He's not just merely dead. He died and then exploded!))

((Yep, Falcata learned in that fight to never cross the duchess.  She almost doesn't need a bodyguard, heh.))

((Twas a lucky shot.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 02:28:41 am
Isos considers Starkey's words before turning to the guardsponies that are actually supposed to be with Friesden.

"Remove her chains and return her to her quarters.  I want her accompanied by a guardspony at all times she is not in her quarters, with a guard outside when she is."

She looks down to Friesden.

"You are on probation, Miss Friesden.  Once I am fully convinced that you pose no threat to Glitterglen, I will remove your accompaniment.  Have a good day."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 02:29:58 am
Friesden continues holding Starkey tight, not even listening to Isos.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 02:36:29 am
*Bubbles rolls his eyes, and goes up to Freisden and Starkey.*
"Sigh...Isos always forgets that the chief medical pony is higher ranking than the captain of the guard. She's the one who should be listening to me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 02:42:14 am
((Isos is a she.  And in issues of Glitterglen security, it's her choice on how to handle it, barring a direct order from Charity of course.  Starkey has outside threats, Isos has threats from within.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 02:45:28 am
Friesden just continues to hold Starkey tight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 02:46:03 am
((Eh, I was kinda hoping actually that you would arrest me for my outbreak, and I could spew out this long speech i wrote last month about how important i am lol.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 02:46:58 am
((Easy fix for that, just hit her. :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 02:50:21 am
((But that would make it clear that I should be in jail. And all of Glitterglen's other ponies would be dying as there is no doctor.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 02:51:21 am
Isos glares at Bubbles' comment, then shifts the glare to Carrot.

"Carrot?  Please accompany me.  I'd like to ask you a few questions."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 03:04:49 am
"Is she going?" Friesden asked quietly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 03:07:44 am
((If Carrot comes with her, yes.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 03:09:03 am
((Has Friesden been cut down yet?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 03:13:42 am
((Should be.  Think Carrot would follow Isos for some questions, or will she have to ask more forcefully?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 03:18:32 am
((Don't know.))


Friesden felt the chains removed, and still didn't move. If anything, her grip grew tighter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 03:34:20 am
"Friesden, please stop being angry. Come with me, i'l show you the new hospital."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 03:35:33 am
"not angry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 03:36:23 am
"Then why are you clenching so much?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 03:37:11 am
She squeaks and continues to bury herself in Starkey's mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 03:38:53 am
"She's just a little shy, doctor. give her some space."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 03:44:38 am
*Bubbles backs away, then goes close to Starkey's ear.*
"I'll go and look for Khenal", he whispers soft enough that Friesden can't hear."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 03:50:51 am
Starkey tilts his head to whisper in the doctor's ear.

"He isn't in the hospital?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 03:53:22 am
"He is? I just went straight to my bedroom last night, without looking in the hospital."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 03:57:42 am
"I think that's where they took him after he broke down."

He pauses.

"Don't say anything to him. Not yet. I'll need to talk to him before I let Friesden see him again, and... I'm not quite ready to do that yet."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 03:59:20 am
I lay in my hospital bed, sweating with the effort and concentration needed for the amount of raw magic I'm drawing upon.

"Almost..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 04:00:14 am
"Aye. I'll just go and check if he is okay."
*Bubbles heads to the Hospital.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 04:05:50 am
Friesden slowly raises her head from Starkey's mane, and looks around. As she sees the soldiers around her, she quickly ducks her head back in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 04:06:43 am
"Got it!"

The energy is released, raw and unformed, before spiraling back into my horn.  As Bubbles approaches the door, he sees a bright flash from behind it, and hears a brief scream.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 04:09:16 am
Otik glares at the assembled soldiers.

"Nothin' t'see here, lads. Out. Now."

Reluctantly, they all file out the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 04:09:16 am
"KHENAL!"
*Bubbles bucks down the door*
((Yes, for the 6th time now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 04:10:39 am
((lol, I failed to ninja Impending. We both posted at the same time.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 04:11:35 am
Friesden remains burrowed deep in Starkey's mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 04:13:38 am
"They're all gone, hun. It's just us three."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 04:18:11 am
Hesitantly Friesden removes her head. Looking around, she slowly releases Starkey. She runs and embraces/tackles Otik.

"Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you," she says.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 04:18:55 am
((Sorry guys, getting sleepy.  Have a cliffhanger until tomorrow.  This feels like the perfect spot for one.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 04:23:02 am
Otik returns the embrace.

"What, those lads? They're harmless, hun. no need t'be scared o' them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 04:32:46 am
Friesden is silent, merely relaxing into her embrace.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 04:40:43 am
((And I'm calling it a night. Goodnight.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 04:41:24 am
((As will I, then, I guess.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 01:54:11 pm
I lay in my hospital bed with a pained but triumphant smile.  Small wisps of smoke curl from my horn.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 02:27:52 pm
((That's my Khenal. A brother of death, a cousin of luck, and a son of a bitch.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 22, 2011, 02:41:14 pm
Pokionic could only wonder what poor Khenal did, but going from the smoke that was coming from his room it was not pretty. He decides that it would be best that he does not disterbed, and that he simply continued down the hall, thinking about wonderfull, wonderfull gems, and the feeling of well-cut jewels against his hooves....
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 02:42:09 pm
"Otik," she says, softly, "will you be my ------?"

The last word is too quiet to hear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 06:43:52 pm
"What's that, hun? Ye can tell me, it's okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 07:11:26 pm
Her face is bright red. "My mother."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 07:48:02 pm
"Y-Your..."

Otik hesitates. A little filly who had just lost her whole family? Of course, she wouldn't hesitate to take her in. But Friesden? She's a grown mare, that's a different matter entirely.

Isn't it?

She remembers her story. The cruelty of her father. The indifference of her mother. Nopony deserves that kind of life, least of all this mare. If she could give Friesden the family she deserved, why shouldn't she?

"A-Aye. Yes. Of course I'll be your mother."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 07:49:48 pm
"Thank you...thank you." She begins tearing up, so grateful is she.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 08:18:13 pm
"KHENAL! WHAT DID YOU DO?!?!?!?!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 08:53:34 pm
"You...you've been so nice to me...how can I repay you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 09:06:48 pm
Starkey approaches them, laying a hoof on her shoulder.

"No, Friesden. You've been through so much... too much. You're the one who's owed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 09:11:55 pm
Friesden holds both of them close.

"I...I love you. Thank you, so much."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 09:25:11 pm
They all embrace.

"D'awww..."

A small knot of soldiers has been watching them from the doorway. A glare from Otik sends them scurrying.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 22, 2011, 09:28:14 pm
Friesden just stays there, drinking in the comfort the two provide.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 09:35:56 pm
I wince at Bubbles' volume.

"I've burnt out again.  On purpose.  I doubt I'll be able to even light a candle or levitate a feather for a week.  Isn't it wonderful?"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 22, 2011, 09:42:59 pm
"Burst out? But why.... Oh sisters... I was right..."
*Bubbles runs out, heading to the triptych.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 09:44:56 pm
((T-R-I-P-T-Y-C-H))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 10:08:32 pm
I tilt my head, puzzled at Bubbles' sudden exit.  After a few moments, I realize how insane I must have sounded to anypony who didn't know my plan.  I facehoof at my stupidity and try to think of a rational way to explain what's happening.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 10:26:34 pm
Carrot dives into the Hospital, looking around franticly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 10:30:01 pm
After her discussion with the duchess the night before, Falcata's nerves had continuously been on edge.  The duchess was... so different than she expected in person.  She had never expected her to offer her and her daughter life pension for what she did... perhaps the rumors that circulated the fort about her were nothing but that.  The duchess didn't seem to be the sort of pony to hurt anypony...

Regardless, her nerves had her stomach unsettled pretty badly.  Nothing like butterflies to add to systemic necrosis... and the only thing for that was to see Dr. Bubbles in the hospital for another dose of his long term medication.  She wasn't in enough pain to use the pills he'd given her the day before.

She approaches the hospital door and slowly pushes it open, hoping to avoid waking any sleeping patients.  Khenal was probably still bedridden, and she didn't want to bother him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 10:31:07 pm
"AH!" Carrot whirls around STAY BAC- Oh, it's you." Sighs Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 10:35:14 pm
"...Carrot?  And Falcata?  Hello you two."

I give them a smile, even as another small wisp of smoke rises from my horn.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 10:38:12 pm
"Oh... Carrot, hello."  She looks to Khenal.  "Hello Khenal.  I heard you might still be here.  I hope you're feeling better."  She notes the wisp of smoke and plays it off as a trick of her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 10:40:08 pm
"WHAT...Khenal...you didn't..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 10:42:18 pm
"I am indeed!  And, with any luck, I'm not the only pony feeling better now."

I turn slightly to face Carrot.

"I certainly did, but it's not permanent."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 10:44:40 pm
Carrot walks over to Khenal, frowns, and smacks him hard on the cheek.
"ARE YOU REALLY THAT STUPID?! HOW WILL YOU DEFEND YOURSELF NOW?!" Snaps Carrot, an inch from Khenal face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 22, 2011, 10:46:51 pm
Otik releases Friesden.

"Friesden, hun, why don't ye go on an' get some breakfast? Starkey n'me have some... things t'talk about."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 10:50:03 pm
"Carrot!  What's the matter with you?"  She trots over to Khenal and takes a closer look.  There is definitely some acrid burning in the air...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 10:52:23 pm
"I'll just have to rely on my friends, wont I?  Like you and Falcata, Starkey and Otik, Charity and... and Friesden."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 10:53:10 pm
"Khenal..." Carrot has a horrified look on his face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 10:55:11 pm
She quirks an eyebrow.  "Khenal... what are you talking about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 10:58:34 pm
"I've burnt myself out again.  On purpose.  It should take me about a week before I can channel anything, maybe a month to fully recover."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 11:00:23 pm
Her expression grows profoundly worried.  "Wh-what?  Why would you do that?  You're already hurt... you.. you might permanently damage your magic!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 11:01:09 pm
"YOU...DID....YOU...KHENAL!!!! YOU IDIOT!!!!" Carrot punches Khenal in his back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 11:04:04 pm
Falcata scowls at Carrot and pushes him back.  "Carrot, please, you're not helping..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 11:06:43 pm
"GAH!  Carrot, please!"

I spend a few moments recovering before answering Falcata.

"I did it because I may have done something very bad, and removing my magic for a time was the best solution I could think of.  There shouldn't be any permanent damage, I was careful."

Realizing how hypocritical that sounded, I try to give a reassuring smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 22, 2011, 11:07:57 pm
"Khenal...I can't even look at you anymore...how foolish..." Carrot stomps out of the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 22, 2011, 11:11:48 pm
((A gigantic magic wall made of text and bent on delivering plot approaches!))

Charity's Journal 12th Sandstone 99

Today has been madness. It started innocently enough I was sitting in my office filling out the paper work to mandate the construction of more amulets, but then I heard the sound of yelling from downstairs. I went to investigate, and found the Late Psycho Carrot, seemingly having taken physical form fighting with Otik. Once the fight was broken up Carrot gave me a pocket watch, which he said belonged to his deceased wife Kil. He said it would be important, but looking at it, it seems quite mundane, never the less I'll keep it on my person, just in case.

After that he hinted that we should go explore his tomb, we wanted to wait till Khenal could walk again, but we where forced by the spirit to go right then. Falcata, Otik, and myself, helped Khenal to make his way up the stairs. When we got the tomb we found that a hole had been blown in the side of the tower, and rope lead out of it. “Had someone been using the hole to enter the fort from the outside”, I thought to myself. However, Psycho revealed that the cult held meetings on the top of the tower, he wanted us to charge them, we explained that that was foolish, we didn't know the numbers and with Otik having gone back down to watch the children, the only ponies that could stand where Carrot, Falcata, and myself. We wanted to get help, but Psycho insisted that we had to act now.

We made our way to the top of the tower, I laid Khenal down and we saw that Amberly Vail, was fighting with Couth Darkmane, the apparent leader of this cult. We all assisted her in bringing him down, and killing him. During the fight he tossed a poisoned dagger at me, but Falcata jumped in the way and took the blow to her stomach. She will be rewarded for her bravery. That much I can promise.

After the fight Falcata seemed to be hallucinating, it is from this that I gather the blade was poisoned, I took her down to the hospital where Nurse Venture helped her.

Amberly then went and executed the cultist prisoners, counting Couth there was 7 in all, along with 2 foals that she claimed had been irrecoverably corrupted by the cult.

I was personally surprised to hear that Doctor Allen was among those excecuted, his loss will be felt most of all. Second, his assistant and the apprentice to old Nages (Legendary Glass-worker killed in the amulets incident.) was also put to death, her death means we have nopony who knows how to work glass. A loss. We also lost a pegasus stallion from the guard. Along with a few other less important ponies.

Charity's Journal 13th Sandstone 99

We had a celebratory dinner for us finally dealing with the cultists, hopefully we can put all this behind us. I offered Falcata a position as my captain of my security and she accepted. Carrot confessed to me the secrets of his new body, and I was appalled, he's been reported to Captain Isos, although I don't know what she'll do with him, if anything.

Charity's Journal 26th Sandstone 99

The only foal of Bal our stonecrafter has reached adulthood, the Unicorn Stallion, name Shigos wishes the join the military. I'm putting him the militia under Commander Starkey.

Charity’s Journal 28th Sandstone 99

Bebmal, ((Venture's family.)) had another foal today. Another Pegasus. This one's a little colt.



Charity's Journal 9th Timber, 99

Pokionic was seen in the halls, today showing the aspects of one fey! He's heading to the Leather works shop near the jewlers! ((He's a triple legend in Gem setting, Leather working, and Organizing.)) He's gathered a lot of material and has begun construction on something.

11th Timber 99

I've been working with the smiths to create a hammer for my new captain. It is rediculously over decorative, yet, Ironya promises me it is still very very effective. Work isn't quite done yet though.

12th Timber 99

Pokionic has finished his work, and he's made. A shoe. He's named it Lyricmatches.


http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Lyricmatches.png


Charity's Journal 16th Timber 99

Scout's have spotted a caravan of cave ponies in the jungle. They will be here in a day or two.

Charity's Journal 24th Timber 99

Our woodcutters working in the cave were ambushed by a tribe of rodent apes, fortunately nopony was hurt. ((game still calls them rodent men, but I thought that sounded wrong in a game with no humans.)) Starkey's militia is hunting down the creatures and plans on killing them. I wish them luck.

((I think Khenal just tried to kill himself. He just flew up the waterfall in his room and was in the area the water flows from, he then got washed back out.))

Charity's Journal 25th Timber, 99

The diplomat from the cave ponies this year was an Underlord. I'd never scene one up close before. With their eight legs, and magical tusks. They are quite intimidating, Though Elot was nice enough, and our meeting went well, brief as it was.

Charity's Journal 28th Timber 99

Falcata's hammer is finally ready. I'm going to go present it to her right now. I've asked the smiths and craftsponies involved to keep quiet about the design, so as far as I know she has no idea what it is yet, I can't wait to see the look on her face when I hand it's case to her, and she opens it.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Falcata%27s%20Hammer.png

((I was going to add Blue Jade to it as well, but discovered that gems can't be put on weapons. A pity.))
((Falcata's condition remains unchanged as far as I can tell without her being re-diagnosed.))

((One last note, I'm going to be out of town for the next week. I'll be visiting family up in Michigan. I'll be around on here, but not regularly.  So try not to get Charity directly involved unless absolutely necessary, unless I happen to find time to get involved myself. If for some reason you need Charity to do something, and I'm not online. Telgin you may take the reigns. ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 11:13:44 pm
Falcata watches as Carrot storms off and looks back to Khenal.  Khenal had never done anything bad that she knew of.  What could he have meant?  "I... don't understand."

This was completely unlike anything she would normally do, but she was worried about him... and if she could help him, she wanted to do what she could.  "Do... do you want to talk about it?  I mean... I understand if you don't... I won't bother you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 11:21:56 pm
I look Falcata in the eyes, considering.

"Actually, I don't really want to talk about it.  But I think I need to.  Do you know why I came to Glitterglen?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 11:24:16 pm
She shakes her head.  "No... I don't know why you came here.  Somepony like you, I assumed you migrated here by choice.  But, why, no I don't know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 11:32:05 pm
I wince a bit as Falcata says "Somepony like you," but soon continue my story.

"It's partially to do with my specialty in magic, Falcata.  I excel at enchantment.  Specifically: mind effecting enchantment.  It's a very powerful and dangerous field of study.  I was heading unique research, trying to give possessed ponies back their minds.  Glitterglen is not the only place to have daemons, though we seem to have far more than our fair share.

"I was a very different pony then.  I didn't see them as ponies, just...research subjects."

I close my eyes and hang my head in shame.  I've dealt with my past, but I'm still not proud of how I treated those poor ponies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 11:37:08 pm
Falcata's mouth hangs open slightly as she listens.  She had no idea...

"Khenal... I... I had no idea..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 22, 2011, 11:53:12 pm
I open my eyes and solemnly look Falcata in the eyes.

"Very few know.  Eventually, I thought I had solved the problem and had found a spell to stop possession.  It did seem to work, but it had to be maintained.  Either cast regularly, or constantly channeled.  Eventually, somepony messed up.  It snowballed quickly, so many... so many died because of my research.  I... contemplated suicide, but decided I hadn't earned the right to die.

"I couldn't let that be all I left to ponykind.  I couldn't let all those deaths be for nothing.  But I couldn't risk letting my knowledge of magic fall into the hooves of daemons, either.  If a daemon got access to the magic I know... what we've seen so far would be nothing.

"It took me a year, but I finally created a spell to seal memories that wouldn't have to be constantly recast.  With my knowledge sealed, Princess Hugwax had little use for me anymore, and sent me here."

I sigh heavily.


"And I haven't even gotten to the part where I explain why I burned myself out just a few minutes ago..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 22, 2011, 11:57:01 pm
Pokionic is not a stupid pony.

It might be wrong to refere to oneself in third person, but whos going to know? Perhapes those others from my former home were right,and that I did go native with the Zebra. Neverless, hardly explains why I am here, right? Heh, perhapes leaving for this little town was great, perhapes one of the better things he ever did. Whoops, slipped again. Oh, never actualy said who I was, did I?

I am Pokionic, The Glue Maker.

Heh, those silly Zebras and there silly titles. Well, to be fair, the one time I did make it was with a willing mare who lost her husband to a griffon raid. Brain was caved in by a manticore slave-solder. Neverless, her remains were found, and I was exported. Wonder why. Silly Zebras, to think that making me leave would kill me! Neverless, my skills where needed, and was part of a camp that sold gems to the few Dog packs who where forced to live in the savana. Poor souls. As for my gemworking skills, there is a simple reason, realy.

I am Pokionic, Dragon-decendent.

To be fair, it was something waaayyy down the family tree. As for how, I would like to think Dragon Magic. Whatever the cause, I have a big guy down the family tree, and it gives one certiant...insights into the surroundings. I knew, for instance, that Psycho Carrot would die, but that something was off about it. I knew this even before he died. I can tell a ponies relitives by scent alown, and while I will never admit it, I can tell when one is pregnent or not. Celestia knows how actual dragons deal with this baggage of mential crap. Or perhapes its just what happens when Unicorn blood mixes with a magical creature. Knew a cousin down the line with a bat wings and could breath fire, think he joined the shadowbolts a while back. Twit died when he tried to hold his breath while breathing fire, and it all backed into his lungs.Thats beside the point, however.

 I am Pokionic, the Gem-worker,

With all these skills, you may ask, why be a Gemsetter?! Simple: most dont pay attention to one with such a low-key job, even after one makes a nice shoe. Personaly, that shoe was inspired by the fact that the things around here are very much willing to possess one who shows signs of madness. I can only hape that I could be resilant to the things around here, and make some freinds.

After all, Pokionic is not a stupid pony.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 22, 2011, 11:58:51 pm
Falcata continues to listen intently.  She never knew this side of Khenal... the things she lived with... were utterly insignificant compared to what he felt responsible for.

"Oh, Khenal... I'm so sorry.  If... if it's too personal... I understand..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 12:17:20 am
"It... it needs to be said, Falcata.  I'll see about letting you read my Book, and what's in my Sequel as well after I get out of the hospital.  The other reason I had to burn out is because of Friesden.

"She's had a very hard life, and has very poor mental defense because of it.  I know, I've... I've been in her head.  I've helped her, and seen her overcome her past as well.  But... I fear I may have done something terrible to her.  For a while now, I've worried that she was..."

I choke up at this point, fighting back tears.  After a few moments, I manage to continue.

"...That she was Enthralled.  Yesterday... I think my fear was confirmed.  'As you command.' she said to me.  I-I realized what I had done, the injustice I was dealing to her.  I've... I've burned myself out, Falcata, because it's the simplest way I can think to break her Enthrallment.  The short times I've spend burnt out may not have been enough to allow it to fade, so... I'm trying an extended duration."

By this point, my voice drips with sorrow, but my eyes are dry and determined.

"I love her, Falcata, and I will not have her controlled by anypony.  Especially not me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 12:21:58 am
Pokionic woke up in a cold sweat. His sences where tingling. Something big just happened, he just did not know just what. Shifting his weight to the floor, he was alert for anything that might happen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 12:27:44 am
"Starkey! Otik! come quickly, Khenal is trying to destroy his own magic!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 23, 2011, 12:30:32 am
Falcata blinks back tears of her own.  Sisters, she had no idea what Khenal and Friesden had been through... his association with her was beginning to make a lot more sense.  She felt horrible for the judgmental things she'd written in her diary about it and thought to herself.

"Oh, Khenal..."

She almost nuzzles him, but catches herself in the motion.  That... wouldn't be appropriate...

"I know somepony like you would never do something like that on purpose..."  She blinks back more tears as she looks at Khenal's broken expression.  "We... we all do strong things in the name of love..."

Genuine tears begin to form in her eyes as she thinks about just how much that phrase applied to her.  Luna, she felt like she needed to tell somepony about it... keeping it bottled up from even her daughter.  But this wasn't the time.  "I understand now... I know you're doing the right thing."  She forms a small smile.  "It'll work out, I promise..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 12:52:38 am
"Okay..." Friesden manages to leave just before Bubbles bursts in, and makes her way to the dining room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 12:52:59 am
"I hope so, Falcata.  Because this.."  I tap my horn. "...was just my first idea."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 12:54:16 am
Otik leads Starkey into the Captain's office, shutting the door behind them. "Starkey, we need t'talk. I dunnae think Friesden's safe around Khenal."

Starkey is taken aback.
"What do you mean? She's fine now, you saw her!"

Otik shakes her head. "It's not her I'm worried about. It's him."

"...This is about what she said last night, isn't it?"

"I've worked domestic cases, Starkey. I've seen how a battered mare acts when ye confront her."

"I know, hun. I just... the idea that Khenal would do something like-"

-Doctor Bubbles bursts in.-

"He what? Clop, I was afraid of something like this. Otik, please go with Friesden. We'll... talk more later."

((It bears mentioning that the militia have now headed off to either breakfast or their posts. The 'news' should be spreading quickly now. :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 01:05:25 am
Friesden is still walking in the corridor when Otik comes out and joins her.

"Oh. Hi...mum?" she says hesitantly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 23, 2011, 01:06:25 am
"It will."  She smiles again.  "I believe in you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 01:09:55 am
I sigh and lay down on my hospital bed, glad to have that off my chest.  At least somepony else knows now.

"So, how are you doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 01:12:53 am
Pokionic knew that, whatever was happening, could wait until later. He manages to find a warm spot on his bed and rest, knowing that whatever has happened "yawn" can wait until a goods nights rest.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 01:15:51 am
Otik chuckles.

"Hey, Friesden. Decided I ought t'get breakfast out o' the way b'fore my shift."


 - - - - - -

Starkey enters the infirmary.

"Khenal? Doc Bubbles said you were... hurting yourself. Is that true?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 23, 2011, 01:18:05 am
She sighs in return and looks away.  "Oh, I'm fine, no need to worry about me."  She admitted to the duchess she was dying... but telling Khenal didn't seem necessary.  She didn't want to upset him any more.  Well, maybe she was overestimating how much he would care... but knowing Khenal he probably would even if they weren't really close friends.

But... perhaps she should tell him what doing things in the heat of passion could cause.  No... that... that would just upset him more too.

She notes Captain Starkey enter and banishes the thought altogether.  No, no need to bring any of that up now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 23, 2011, 01:19:05 am
"...oi! let me go whERE ARE YOU DRAGGING ME OH GODS!!!!!!!!!!!!"
The door to the hospital crashes down, with an angry guard standing over the bloody mangled body of Carrot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 01:22:07 am
I smile when I see Starkey enter the hospital.  It disappears when he asks his question, replaced by a nervous grimace.

"Um... not permanently?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 01:23:38 am
"Okay!"

Friesden joins Otik with a smile on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 01:26:57 am
"Temporary injury is still injury. Now, why are you trying to burn out your magic?"

 - - - - - -

"So... mum. I havenae been called that in a long time. It... it feels good."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 02:00:36 am
"It...it feels good to say it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 02:04:38 am
As they enter the dining hall, Otik leans over and nuzzles Friesden affectionately. A handful of ponies seem to misinterpret this gesture, based on the calls and wolf-whistles. Otik ignores them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 02:06:45 am
"What...what are they doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 02:11:24 am
She snorts in derision.

"Gossipin'. My guess is th' lads have been talkin' 'bout what happened last night. Or what they think happened, a'least."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 02:13:03 am
"Not permanently.  It's just... it was the only thing I could think to do.  No, the best thing I could think to do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 02:16:50 am
"But why, exactly? Why would you want to lose your magic, even temporarily?"

Starkey stops to think for a moment.

"Wait... this is about Friesden, isn't it? Let me guess: you think that some spell or curse of yours is controlling her, and by burning yourself out, you'll break it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 23, 2011, 02:17:59 am
Falcata steps to the side to let the two talk.  She tries to stealthily wipe a tear from her eyes.  No need to have Captain Starkey asking questions...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 02:29:28 am
"What....what do you mean, mum?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 02:32:00 am
"Basically, yes."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 02:35:04 am
*Bubbles, having followed Starkey, facehoofs.*
"Khenal, you fail to see the truth of things."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 02:39:30 am
Starkey casually strides over to Khenal. He raises a hoof and swiftly thwacks him over the head.

"Khenal, you are an idiot."

 - - - - - -

*sigh* "It's just  gossip, Fri. dunnae pay it any mind."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 02:40:23 am
"Okay, mum."

Friesden continues walking right besides Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 02:41:41 am
I rub the spot Starkey hit.

"That's what everypony tells me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 23, 2011, 02:42:12 am
Falcata's eyes grow wide as Captain Starkey strikes Khenal, and she takes a step back.  Perhaps would be a good time to slip out... she could find Dr. Bubbles later in private to get more medicine...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 02:45:24 am
*Bubbles walks past Falcata*
"I'll explain later. Here, i got these for you. Took a long time to make, and I only have the supplies to make these few. "
*Bubbles hand Falcata 5 pills.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 23, 2011, 02:49:15 am
She takes the pills as discreetly as possible and places them in her bag.  "Thank you doctor."  She begins for the door.  She'd come back and check on Khenal later.  She felt so bad for him...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 03:00:10 am
"Look Khenal, I get that you care about her. a lot. And I can see why you'd be afraid of manipulating her. But I spoke with her - well, to be precise, Otik spoke with her and I listened, but I can tell you that I never saw or heard any sign that she's your unconditional love-slave or anything like that. She truly loves you. And now she's worried about you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 03:08:30 am
(("But why don't you think she's my love slave?" "Uh..."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 03:15:59 am
I look Starkey straight in the eyes.

"As you Command.  That's what she said to me, Starkey!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 03:32:16 am
"She didn't mean anything from it, you daft colt! Her whole life, her entire world had just vanished in the blink of an eye! She was confused, and scared out of her mind."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 03:35:07 am
"And I'm scared that somepony is in it!"

I deflate, slumping to the bed.

"I'm afraid it's me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 03:43:02 am
"Amberley banished the daemon in her. If you were in her head, she would've caught you too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 03:57:26 am
"Maybe.  But I won't risk her health, her mind, on a maybe.  And either way, the point is moot, my Friend.  I wont be able to channel anything for about a week."

I sigh and hang my head.

"I really hope I'm just being as stupid and foalish as everypony seems to think I am.  But I'd do anything for her, Starkey.  A week of no magic to guarantee Friesden is her own pony?  I'll gladly pay it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 04:03:59 am
*sigh, "I suppose that's the best I could hope for."

He approaches Khenal, staring into his eyes.

"One week. Just one week. Promise me that after that, you'll forget about all this so both of you can move on with your lives?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 04:19:11 am
Even as they eat and the low whispering fills the dining hall, Friesden lowers her head more and more, until it's almost touching the table.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 04:27:07 am
Otik reaches over, laying her hoof on Friesden's.

"What's th'matter, hun? Crowds gettin' to ye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 04:32:06 am
She nods slowly. "They don't like me," she whispers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 04:39:57 am
*chuckle*, "Dunnae be silly, hun."

Her ears swivel about, seeking out snippets of conversation.

"From th' sound o' things, they all like ye a lit'l... too much."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 04:40:56 am
"What? What do you mean?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 05:13:04 am
Otik leans in and lowers her voice.

"They're talkin'... 'bout last night..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 05:22:40 am
Anxiety flashes over Friesden's face. "But...but you told me everypony does that...Don't they?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 05:47:04 am
"I did, hun. An' they do. But... to a lot of ponies, it matters more who ye do it with. F'r example: like any rumor, I garuntee ye this one gets a little... twisted... when it goes 'round. Some ponies in this room might think I'm steppin' out on Starkey. Others might think he's steppin' out on me. Th' ones who got it straight from th' pony's mouth may be talkin' 'bout why: Is Starkey abusin' th' power o' his station? By itself, it's not bad. But when ye think about th' things that come with it... it turns inta somethin' else."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 05:50:31 am
"Is this...is this bad? What we're doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 05:56:36 am
"Priests, philosophers, an' damn near everypony else have been askin' that question forever. me? I think that, so long as everypony actually involved is okay with it, it en't anypony else's business."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 05:59:20 am
"O...okay then...mum." Her face started to brighten.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 06:01:32 am
"Hey. You... dunnae seem so confident. Are ye sure yer okay with what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 23, 2011, 06:49:08 am

Charity's Journal 1st Opal 99
I had the military line up for inspection today. It was miserable. Not the soldiers, though there are some holes in their ranks, it is their gear. Far to many of them are making do with sub-par equipment, some of them still have bone or leather covering their flanks. It is unacceptable. I've spoken with the armorers and they are going to use our remaining steel and bronze to try and outfit a few more. Unfortunately there isn't enough steel available, and our smelters aren't able to keep up with the volume of metal crap we acquire that needs melting down, I think we will have to add another smelter to our system.


Chairty's Journal 4th Opal 99
We've been working on setting up a private barracks for Cryptson and my private guard to train in. It's being built on the floor with my masonry workshop. Just two floors up from the dinning hall. Falcata has taken a personal interest in it's construction as well. I saw her helping to smooth the floor earlier today.
Ah yes, I forgot to mention, I've assigned Captain Falcata and her daughter Carrot's old home, right across the hall from my home, and right next to the Dinning Hall, it's in a wonderful position, I hope they can feel at home there.


19th Opal 99
Our scouts have spotted another horrible creature in the deep.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Gedor.png


20th Opal 99
Fortunately the beast was not as tough as it had appeared to be, and was dispatched with ease by our well trained fighting ponies.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Gedor%20Combat%20Report.png

It was Itur, one of Otik's mare's that got the killing strike, and after the fight she gave her weapon the name, Sellflash.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Sellflash.png

Also, today, Ironya gave birth to her first daughter. A little earthpony.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 07:24:02 am
"I..I feel strange."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 07:28:47 am
((I wish that Friesden the character was real, just so I could apologise to her for what I've done. What I am doing. What I will do.

I feel like the operative now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 23, 2011, 09:42:05 am
((Not done torturing her yet?  :) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 02:06:40 pm
((I can't change what will happen without disregarding her character...damn me.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 23, 2011, 03:13:20 pm
"With any luck, Starkey, we can get back to normal before the week is out."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 23, 2011, 06:11:02 pm
((The transcription is finally up.  Here's the link to part 1 (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=93121.msg2843308#msg2843308)  Part 2 is a few posts down from it.  Not quite as long as the last one actually, only 22 pages.  And apologies for interrupting the scene unfolding, but here's Falcata and Kris' thoughts on what's happened so far and the not so distant future:))

Falcata's Diary - 12th Sandstone, 99

I'm back in the hospital again.  My head is killing me, not to mention the cut and stab wound I've received.  I was pretty shocked to wake up finding the duchess sitting next to me, concern plastered on her face.  I didn't really understand what was going on at the time, but she seemed positively elated that I was awake.  Apparently, the fact that I'm not babbling nonsense is new too, which worries me.  I hope I didn't say anything... off putting or incriminating while I was out of it.

My memories of what happened over the last day are a bit fuzzy, which is surely related to the pounding in my head.  I do remember Carrot appearing before us, heading to the tower... and fighting Couth Darkmane.  I don't really remember much from there.  Lady Charity tells me that I heroically placed myself between between her and a blow from Darkmane, possibly saving her life in the process.  I... vaguely remember doing that... but in any case she was most grateful, and I understand she personally carried me down here.  I'm... touched that she would go through the trouble herself.  Wasn't there anypony else there to carry me?

I regret that I didn't have a chance to thank her in turn.  She left a few hours ago, and at the time I was still fighting to remain conscious and lucid.  The thought didn't even cross my mind while she was here.  I should go tell her in person when I get the chance.

For now, I'm just too tired to do anything.  Kris has been here with me since I've been awake, but I don't know when she got here.  I could tell she had been crying her little heart out again, and this time I don't really blame her.  I didn't break my leg this time... I really could have given my life for the duchess.  I didn't even think about Kris when I made that decision...

13th Sandstone, 99

I'm totally blown away.  I didn't expect Lady Charity to host a feast commemorating our victory, much less ask me to be seated at her right side.  When we got there, she revealed to me that she was so impressed by my selflessness and courage, she wanted to make me captain of her personal bodyguard!  I was shocked, and didn't know what to say, and so without thinking about it, I accepted.  I kind of regret that, and told her that we need to talk in private.  She doesn't know I'm dying... and I'd hate to accept the position only to have it vacated so soon.  I haven't had a chance to speak with her yet... I hope she takes it well.

14th Sandstone, 99

I spoke with the duchess today, and I really must say that my opinion of her has changed dramatically in the past few days.  After hearing about the amulet incident, I was actually a bit scared of her, and made it a point to avoid contact with her as much as possible and to remain as formal and obedient to her when she was around.  Today though... I realized that she's actually a very kind pony, and it's only because of her title that I feared her before.

She was very understanding about my condition, and left the offer for me to command her personal bodyguard open.  When I told her why I wished to remain in the guard, she offered to give me and Kris a pension for the rest of our lives.  I... was completely shocked to hear the offer.  I accepted the position as her bodyguard, and she told me that she would see to getting me some new equipment for my position.

I feel a bit selfish accepting it, since I'm sure there's somepony else who could put the equipment to better use than me, but I didn't want to question her.  I considered taking the retirement... but I still haven't told Kris what's wrong with me, and retiring would basically force me to do that.  I'm... still not ready for that.  Not yet.


Kris' Diary - 18th Sandstone, 99

Oh, diary... I've been so upset the last few days that I haven't been able to write a thing, even in you.  At first I was really happy when mom told me that she was going to be fine after her fight, and that Lady Charity had given her a promotion for what she did... but it didn't last long.

Mom... has been really sad lately, even after she got the promotion.  And when I was looking around today... I found her diary.  I know I'm not supposed to read it, and she would be really mad at me if she found out... but I couldn't help it.  She's been so upset lately that she doesn't even eat much... and I wanted to know if I could help.

I almost couldn't even read it all.  Lilac was right!  Mom really is dying!  I felt sick after reading it, and I cried for hours.  It was tough... but I think I managed to get her to believe that I just didn't feel good when she got home.  I almost can't look at her, knowing that she's dying... she... she lied to me!  She said she was going to be okay!  Why would she do that!? 

Oh... mommy...  (Tears stain the page, disrupting another paragraph)

She... she wrote that there is nothing anypony can do.  I can't believe that there isn't anything anypony can do!  Dr. Bubbles has to be able to do something!  Or... mom always said that Mr. Khenal was the most powerful wizard in Glitterglen.  Maybe he can help?  But... she told me not to bother him... and if I do, he'll probably tell her that I read her diary...

Oh, diary... I... I don't know what to do!

16th Timber, 99

Sometimes I forget what I read in mom's diary, but when I remember, I start crying again.  It's been almost a month since I read it... and I still can't believe it.  I think she thinks something is wrong with me now... but I haven't told her what happened.  She... she keeps acting like nothing is wrong.  I don't understand why she doesn't tell me...

If nopony here can help her... then... I heard that a caravan should be here soon.  Maybe somepony there would know what to do?  Do they bring doctors?  I think I'll go check tomorrow morning when mom is on duty.  She doesn't have to know, and I don't think anypony there would tell her.  They wouldn't know she was my mom, right?


Falcata's Diary, 28th Timber, 99

Kris knows something is wrong with me.  I can see it in her face every time she looks at me.  I feel horrible for not telling her the truth, but so far I haven't been able to muster the courage to crush her like that.  I have the courage to throw my life away to save the duchess, but not tell my own daughter the truth.  What kind of mother am I?  I think I've waited long enough, she deserves to know the truth.  I'm going to try to find the easiest way to break it to her, but I don't think such a thing exists.  I'm not sure what to do.

Lady Charity summoned me to her office today, so I didn't tell Kris yet.  There she presented me with an absolutely beautiful new silver warhammer to signify my new position.  I assumed it was just for ceremonial use, considering the ornamentations on it but she assured me that Ironya intends it for combat use and that I shouldn't be afraid of damaging it.  I hope I never have to swing it at a foe, but I know that's probably a forlorn hope.  I thanked her in earnest and asked her to pass my thanks off to Ironya and the other craftsponies for doing such a superb job.

I really must find someplace to display it.  I wouldn't want to appear ungrateful!

4th Opal, 99

As if the warhammer wasn't enough, Lady Charity summoned me to her office today to tell me that Kris and I were going to be moving into Captain Carrot's old room across from hers.  I wasn't expecting that, and I again thanked her so much for the gift.  I shouldn't have any problems finding somewhere to display my weapon now.  I just hope Carrot isn't too put off by us moving into his old home.  If he has any thoughts on it, I'm sure he'll find a way to let me know...


((Just wow, that came out long winded.  Not sure how much butchering I did with the timeline, but I think it'll fit in eventually.  Some of that takes place days or weeks ahead of the current RP, so I'll have to wait a bit before posting any more on some of this.  Plot hooks ahoy!  Perhaps I should start on that choose your own adventure while I wait?

I also just realized that it's kind of odd to put ellipses in journal entries.  It's supposed to be the characters writing it out, not saying it, but it's hard not to.  I'm too lazy to go rewrite it all.  :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 23, 2011, 06:31:52 pm
((Fantastic job at transcribing as always!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 07:17:08 pm
Anxiety grows again on Friesden's face. "Where...where's Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 07:26:04 pm
The poor Unicorn, now somewhat awake, could only think of one name and one name only:Friesden.

Scared out of his mind, he dashes to where he belives she might be, following the tugging of his horn. Hopefuly, he thinks, he will not interupt the timid mare in any conversation she is currantly having, for he belives he must get some choice bits of information from her.

(Could the transcription be seperated into Strongbeards posts, and,well, everyone elses, Master? Would be helpful for those attepting to backtrack on the fortresses progress. )
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 07:30:28 pm
Friesden covers her head with her wings when the unicorn approaches.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 07:59:51 pm
"Err, hey." He sayes, somewhat forced. "We have not talked in like..." Pokionic frowns." Ever. I dont belive we have ever had a actual conversation. Anyway, I think you may know me, because I made that nice shoe a few weeks back that everyone loved. This may sound odd, but can you tell me about everything that has happened to you in the past few weeks that are of any importance?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:02:30 pm
Friesden squeaks and waits for Otik or some other pony to save her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 23, 2011, 08:03:27 pm
Lilac walks into where Friesden and Pokionic are, smiling as bright as the sun.
"Hi Friesden!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:06:12 pm
Friesden turns to Lilac, her face begging her to remove the unicorn.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 23, 2011, 08:10:00 pm
"Mr, I think you're scaring Friesden, could you please go away before she gets anymore upset...daddy warned me about what happens when she loses it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 08:16:00 pm
"Err...sorry." The unicorn was rather unsure on how to continue. "I realy, realy need to know. Can any of you little ones tell me about anything strange happening around here? Anything that never happens? Just one thing, and I promise to...give each of you a nice pretty gem." The unicorn contorted his face in a rather stiff grin, showing off slightly sharp teeth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:18:19 pm
Friesden flees the hall in a blind panic, not caring where she goes, as long as it is not there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 23, 2011, 08:21:12 pm
"YOU MONSTER!!!" Lilac runs after Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:24:28 pm
"Have to get away have to get away have to get away have to get away!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 08:26:19 pm
"....Shoot. Hopefully I am not questioned about why I was talking to a filly about where she has been the past few days." Not missing a beat, he attempts to run after the fillys saying "Hey, come back here! Please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 08:27:18 pm
Okay, this buck is really starting to piss Otik off. As he turns to follow Lilac and Friesden, she siezes his collar in her teeth.

"Listen here kid, just who th' clop do ye think ye are, harrassin' my stepdaughters?"


((Dammit people, you move too fast!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:29:24 pm
Friesden continues running, not even looking where she's going, until she bumps into a pair of militia ponies.

They leer. "Hey, pretty filly. We heard 'bout what you did to Otik and Starkey last night. 'ow 'bout you give us a demonstration?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 08:30:53 pm
*Bubbles is walking past the two guardponies when Friesden crashes next to them.*
"Oi! What the clop do you think you're doing, harassing the poor filly? Get away! Now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 08:32:44 pm
"Meep." The unicorn, knowing fully well who the buck in front of him is, stammered, "Uh sir, I was mearly asking about if anything interesting to them or there family has happened in the past few days. I have certiant abilitys that can help with such strange incidents, and I desperatly wish to help."

In the back of his mind, his inner voice was screaming "Ohgodspleasedontbreakmylegsandthrowmeinahydrasnestohgodspleasedontgeldmeohbythe
scalyancesterspleasedontbreakmepleasebegentle!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:33:07 pm
One of them turns to the doctor, fury in his eyes.

"You'll leave, right now, if you know what's good for you. Me and me mate just need a little relaxation, and this filly right here is going to give it to us, isn't she?"

Friesden squeaks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 08:34:45 pm
"Hey! Who do you two think you are! " The unicorn, momentaraly distracted, is now fully prepared to gore the sick buck in the jaw with his horn.

It be a insight into the future. Trolololo.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 08:35:25 pm
"I dunno, mate. I think we really oughta listen to him..."

 - - - - - -

"Look, I've been listenin' ta what's goin' 'round, an' I can tell ye right now Friesden doesnae need your brand o' help, ya lit'l pervert!"

((Pokon hasn't made it out of the dining hall. Otik stopped him.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 08:36:59 pm
"Oh, and you think you're higher ranking than me? Now git, before I report you to the Baroness Charity, who life I might remind you, was saved by me. Twice."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 08:39:36 pm
Er, Otik? Please turn around. There might be something you may be interested in. Than perhapes we can talk somewhere else. Perhapes when you save your fillys, we can talk in a better enviroment than in the doorway to the lunchroom. And please dont geld me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:41:41 pm
"Oh, bloody..." He leans into Friesden's face. "One time your doctor friend won't be here, filly. Then you'd better be ready to pay up," he hisses, and the two militiaponies leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 23, 2011, 08:41:53 pm
((Otik is a female.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 08:42:39 pm
*Bubbles sighs*
"Friesden, are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:43:35 pm
Friesden is frozen stiff, shaking in fear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 08:44:14 pm
"Please close your ears.
OTIIIIK!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 08:45:26 pm
Err, Otik? Please, please turn around, so you can thank the nice doctor. Oh, and the only perverts here are the ones who tried to molest your fillies down the hall I have been trying to warn you about. "Attempts to look over the well-built mares shoulders in order to see the hallway."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:46:47 pm
Friesden keels over, collapsing to the ground. She begins to hyperventilate again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 08:47:41 pm
((I'm laughing imagining Friesden keeling and hyperventilating btw.))
"Whoops."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 08:48:17 pm
"Bubbles? Doc, what's th'- Oh sisters, Friesden!"

Otik releases Pokon and rushes to Friesden's side.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:49:05 pm
"Get- GET AWAY FROM ME!" she screams hysterically, trying to scramble back across the ground.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 08:49:59 pm
"Rushes to the pair along with the mare."

(Hey, a few years of living with Zebras rubs off)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 08:50:38 pm
*Bubbles walks away.*
"Otik, will you come here for a moment?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 08:52:42 pm
Otik wheels on Pokon, an inch from his face.

"Go. Now."

"Not now, doc. I need t'see to Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 08:58:03 pm
The unicorn, after a few moments of silance, stares into the mares eyes and defiantly sayes "Fine. We need to meet together today, however. Please, I truly need to help. I know things. The only reason why I walked down the hall today is to talk to your fillies to stop something I knew was going to happen. You stopped me from going down the hall to follow them. Only the fact Bubbles is a good pony is the reason why they are still here and not pleasing those militaponies. Please, we need to talk."
He begins to walk away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 08:59:39 pm
"I mustn't run away I mustn't run away I mustn't run away I mustn't run away I mustn't run away I MUSTN'T RUN AWAY!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 09:02:37 pm
Her eyes widen. She siezes Pokon's shoulders.

"You knew this was goin' t'happen? You... I should have yer cloppin' balls on a plate, you sonovabitch!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 09:04:23 pm
"Otik. This is serious."
*Bubbles leans in to Otik's ear, and whispers,*
"There were two militiaponies here. When Friesden bumped into them, they tried to take her away and **** her. And Otik, I think you're misunderstanding Pokon. He saw them taking Friesden, and tried to go after them. You were the CLOPPING one who stopped him. Friesden would be pleasing them if I hadn't passed by."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 09:07:13 pm
"What were their names? Did y'see their faces? I'll have their jobs, I'll have their damn heads, I..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 09:08:39 pm
"I was trying to tell you this whole time!" The buck almost screamed, his mouth never closing the whole while," And you where accusing me of being a pervert while the only ones in this town where those two who nearly took your fillys!" Gritting his sharp teeth for all to see, he adds "While I am sorry for the inconvinance of my existance, I do wish to let you know that I wish to do is help. You. You and your childeren. You, your childeren, and everypony else in this rotten place."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 23, 2011, 09:10:32 pm
"Tarik and Mogul, I think they were called."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 09:12:31 pm
"idon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadie idon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadie idon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadie idon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadie."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 09:15:44 pm
"Aye, I'll... deal with 'em."

Otik sits next to Friesden.

"It's okay, hun. They're gone. Yer safe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 09:17:58 pm
Seeing the hardened mare comferting her fillys, the buck walks off to hover around in the lunchroom, awating for the mare to finish her buisness with the doctor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 09:20:45 pm
"idon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadie idon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadieidon'twannadie."


She takes in a deep breath.

"I DON'T WANNA DIE!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 09:23:25 pm
Otik throws her hooves around Friesden.

"Yer not gonna die, hun. Nopony's gonna hurt ye. Not while I'm here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 09:29:52 pm
Trying out a telapathy spell he learned while reading a book of spells a while back, he attempted to contact Otik by saying "I never got a responce from you, Otik. Please, think of  a location, and I will meet you there after you talk to the good docter. I need to expain something to you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 09:30:13 pm
"Mama? You're here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 09:39:17 pm
"Yes, hun. Momma's here. It's gonna be okay..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 09:42:39 pm
Friesden starts leaking at the eyes, the fear and terror draining away in the sheltering arms of the protector.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 23, 2011, 09:45:41 pm
...bloody horseapples. No connection. Grumbling, the buck simply decided to wait out this lovey-dovey seen and talk to the mare even if it took him all day.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 23, 2011, 09:49:05 pm
"They...they..." Friesden continues to cry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 23, 2011, 10:03:04 pm
((To prevent this scene from getting any worse, we've decided to cut it off here. A day has passed.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 23, 2011, 10:56:27 pm
The next morning, Isos steps out of her quarters. On her front step, she finds a dozen stern-faced militiaponies. In their midst are Tarik and Morul, hogtied together.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 12:00:10 am
I slowly wake in the hospital bed.

"24 hours."

I get out of the bed, ribs and back still sore.

"I... should I try to find Friesden?"


Meanwhile, Isos has yet another unique situation to handle.

"What is this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 24, 2011, 12:09:50 am
*Bubbles steps out of his office to check on Khenal*
"Khenal! You're finally awake!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 24, 2011, 12:11:02 am
"This is us taking care of our own, ma'am. These two were harassing the Lieutenant and Miss Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 12:20:38 am
"Hello Bubbles.  How much longer do you think I'll need to stay here for my injuries?"



Isos raises an eyebrow at the militia ponies, then looks down at the tied up ponies, no trace of mercy in her eyes.

"I think she's smart and creative enough to punish them as they deserve.  Unless she wishes for something... official to be done?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 24, 2011, 12:22:27 am
"Let me just see your injuries and check them...
At most two days."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 24, 2011, 12:25:01 am
"I imagine she could, ma'am. But the Lieutenant wants this by the book, ma'am."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 12:27:45 am
"Then I will need to hear the testimonies of those involved.  Did any of you witness the harassment?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 24, 2011, 12:32:11 am
"...No, ma'am. Nopony but these two, Lieutenant, Friesden, and the doctor, ma'am."

"I-I heard them talking about... what they wanted to do to Miss Friesden, ma'am."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 12:38:13 am
Isos' eyes narrow.

"What did they want to do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 24, 2011, 12:40:22 am
"W-Well, um, ma'am..."

The young soldier looks around nervously, then leans in and whispers something in the captain's ear.

((Use your imagination.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 12:46:04 am
Her eyes flash with rage as she reflexively reaches for her dagger.  She stops herself before gripping it, and turns to the militia ponies.

"Take them to a cell, please.  You don't need to be gentle.  Pardon me."

She storms past the ponies, ruthlessly stepping on the ones tied up as she leaves to find Captain Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 24, 2011, 12:48:26 am
Friesden woke with a smile on her face. The last night had been a comfort after yesterday. Lilac, her sister, had brought her over for a sleepover, with Otik's blessing.

It was just relaxing to shut the door, and with it, all that happened since she woke. Lilac talked the night away, and freed her from the need.

She thought through the night, and remembered, now she woke. Khenal.

She loved him...and yet, feared him. She didn't know where the words "As you command, so I shall obey" had come from, but they had risen unbidden, from instinct. Something warned her to be careful. She carefully opened the door, and prepared to find Khenal again. He would know what the words meant.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 12:51:13 am
Suddenly, from out of the blue, a small THUMP, followed by the sound of a pony struggling to stand, could be noticed from down the hall. Out came a rather well-dressed unicorn buck, albet with a rather messy mane and generaly ill-kept coat. He saw the group gathered in the area and, coughing slightly to gain the attention of the guards, stated " I am sorry for being so dreadfuly late, but I do belive that I should be here. I identified these two attempting to converse with the two fillies, and attempted to alert one miss Otik about the situation before it could get any worse."

Glaring at the two tied-down militaponies, he added "To be fair, it is quite a shock to learn that two of the ponies that we are supposed to give our lives up too are nothing more than a pair of pathetic creatures not worthy to be part of a dog warren. At least they give some thought on what might happen next in a given situation. There should be some sort of system to weed out such idiots before one even gets the chance to weild a wooden spear, no?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 24, 2011, 12:54:39 am
Isos finds Otik in the firing range below the barracks, practicing. She continues shooting even as Isos approaches.

"morinin', Cap'n."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 24, 2011, 01:01:42 am
She went through, and saw the two from yesterday tied up. She began to hyperventilate, but remembered what mum had said. Breathe deep and slow. She regularised her breath, and looked around.

Where was Khenal? She remembered they had said it. But it hurt to try to remember. But...she had to. Her head throbbed as she tried to think. Where was he? Where was he?

She swayed, and found it hard to stay up. Like the fortress was rocking. Where...where was she? Tailentranced? She was in-

She collapsed to the floor, babbling nonsensical sounds.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 01:06:55 am
"That soon?  Huh.  Thank you, Dr. Bubbles."

I turn to leave, but stop at the doorway.

"Do you happen to know where Friesden is?"



Captain Isos gives the new pony a measuring glance.

"Indeed.  If you are willing to testify, please follow the militiaponies to the cells.  I will be along soon to speak with you."

Eventually, she finds Captain Otik at the firing range.

"Good morning Captain.  Your men tell me you have important testimony against a few ponies from yesterday?  If you have a moment, could you follow me to my office so I can take your statement."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 01:10:12 am
"Uh.. sirs? I think you may wish to contact Otik. And throw those two in a pit, or something. If anyone knows this filly personaly, for the love of all things holy, please calm her! Oh...wait...I do have that old medical spell that makes the whole body numb and sleepy."

Pokionics horn glows blue, than a deep purple, which then envelopes the babbling filly.

"Think happy thoughts..."

.......................................
Rather stressed, he sayes to the militaponies thru clenched teeth
"My good ponies, I will follow you in just a minute. I mearly need to put this filly in a better condition for Otik to find her in and I will go with you as Isos asked."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 24, 2011, 01:12:58 am
Four of the soldiers 'escort' their 'comrades' to their cells.

 - - - - - -

Otik lowers her crossbow, slinging it across her back.

"Those two troublemakers from yesterday mornin'? Aye, I have a bit t'say."

She follows Isos.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 24, 2011, 01:14:57 am
"You're not my father my father had wings and a horn and an evil daughter me I was never good was I I always did wrong but he's dead and I killed him but my father never had a horn only wings and he loves me as though I'm his daughter but he's my father and not my father and everything in between I cannot tell the difference my head aches why can I not remember my life am I evil am I wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 01:18:57 am
Falcata was headed down the hallway on her way back home, when she spots Friesden lying in the floor babbling something.  Concern shows on her face as she picks up her pace and trots to Friesden's side.  She kneels next to her.

"Friesden?  What's the matter?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 01:25:05 am
"You! Pony next to Friesden! Get away! Its hard to work a spell ment for surgaries while theres a pony near the casting! If you have any magic, any form at all, stay away from her. Currantly, if you wish to know, I am blasting the fillies mind with happy thoughts while numbing the body. Also, this fort needs a child care worker.And some Zebra spirit-warding charms, as well. Give me space, but alert someone she knows about whats going on.

If you want to help, go find Otik and scream your head off. If this has happened before, she should know!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 24, 2011, 01:26:17 am
"You're neither of my mothers good or bad or both or neither all is dust two by two hooves of blue can't look can't look mustn't run away must be a good girl must obey my father and my mother must do their command can't disobey mother can't disobey father all is naught to obedience I must obey to death but I don't want to die I don't want to die I don't want to die I don't want to die."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 01:36:18 am
"You. Shall. Not. Die. You shall prance in the medows with fawns in the field and dance with the Buffalo on the night of the full moon and you shall play strange deerish games until night comes and then you shall hide in the forest from the great bear who than leads you to a great clearing where you shall fly to the savanna where you can play games with strange zebra and there enchanted glyphs and go with the elephants as they travel on the earth and then you shall find a great rhino monastary where you shall learn to be a ninja and fight the pirates and then everyone laughs in the end and there is a great party at the castle with the princess and everyone is there because its your birthday and if one thing is not gunna happen is that you will not die and you will go to sleep right this minute young lady and you will see this and more as long as you dream right now..."

The poor unicorns horn feels like its about to shatter, from the pain and magical energy going thru it. He can only hope that worked.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 01:39:53 am
Falcata stares at the pony in disbelief.  He was doing what?  She looks back to Friesden and tries to decide what to do.  This pony might kill her if he didn't know what he was doing, and based on his looks she doubted it.

"Stop that, now!  She needs to be seen by a doctor!"

Falcata musters all the magical might she can and lifts Friesden from the ground before bolting in the direction of the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 24, 2011, 01:46:41 am
"murgllth kos sakos...morguluth kaos aksos TZEENTETH! You will fail, all your little plans torn asunder! You and your masters! I will see to it! Morguluth KAOS aksos NURGOLTH! Morguluth KAOS AKSOS SLAANETH! You will hide and I will find you! You will run and I will always be right behind you! MORGULUTH KAOS AKSOS -KHORNATH-! I WILL SEE YOU IN -HELL-!" are Friesden's parting words.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 01:50:59 am
Unbeliving what just came out of the mouth of the filly, he could only feel the full weight of his magical power in a crushing force around the area of his horn. He could only scream at the pony who interupted him, " You stupid mare! The girl is all but possesed! You fool, put her down and get Bubbles right now! I must make sure she is comotose by the time her caretaker comes back! She is saying words of unholy power, and if thats the case, I need time to access my personal birthright. Get as many ponies with a lick of skill with magic around here and give me room, because this might get a little hot."

Lowering his head, he slames down his legs and runs   at a speed that would make a pegusi proud.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 01:58:20 am
Falcata ignores his warnings and continues on to the hospital.  This pony was insane, there was no way he was qualified to be doing any of this!

"I am taking her to see Dr. Bubbles!"

She hears the pony give chase, but she throws all of her remaining energy into galloping herself.  She didn't want to have to restrain him...  She sees the hospital door just ahead and makes a break for it, barely keeping Friesden in her magical grip.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 02:01:28 am
"Didn't really think so, but I had to ask.  Thanks Bubbles."

I smile and open the door to leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 02:08:25 am
"Shoot shoot shoot shoot!" His lungs are burning, and not in a good way. He was to tired to attempt to simply teliport to the doctor, and there was no way he could actualy get that blasted filly. Knowing little else to do, he knew that the nearest pony with any actual idea on her true tradition was Bubbles himself. He marched on, charging his horn all the way for a differant spell, this time involving clensing fire. If there was some sort of creature in that filly, as he belived, the fire would only harm the possesser. If its the filly herself...I guess he deserved the name Pokionic the Filly Roaster.

With his horn glowing a rather sicking shade of greenish yellow, he prepared to blast the whole hallway with the magical flame. If there was such a creature near it, it would focuse on it and only it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 02:15:36 am
Falcata reaches the door and manages to get Friesden inside just as the flames consume the hallway.  Falcata falls with a startled scream as the flames enshroud her for an instant, and Friesden tumbles to the ground next to Khenal.

She swears under her breath and staggers back to her feet, all of her fur not covered by her barding singed and blackened.  She turns back to Pokionic with a murderous glare.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 02:23:32 am
.......He failed. He was wrong. His spell either failed or he was correct in saying that the filly itself is foul. The look on the mares face, that of loathing and hate, made it all too clear that he was utterly screwed. He should go to the guard right now and use the ropes around those two monsters who got him into this mess in the firstplace and lynch himself with it. His hooves betrayed him, however, for he continued to walk down the hall. The only good news was that, being magical fire, it did nothing but warmed the room around him, not even leaving a trail of smoke or a burnt pach on the ground.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 02:24:12 am
I reel back as Friesden lands at my feet just inside the hospital.  The fire blowing past the doorway, however, steals my attention, along with Falcata's scream of pain.

"Friesden?  Bubbles!  Please keep her safe!"

I step out into the hallway, looking for what or who was trying to harm Friesden and Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 02:27:41 am
"You!  Who do you think you are, and what do you think you're doing!?"  She continues to glare at him and steps in his direction.  "You've endangered the lives of at least two ponies today... do you know what the penalty for that is?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on December 24, 2011, 02:30:07 am
awesome story
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 02:37:39 am
"Death? Having my horn ripped off?" Honestly unsure," Whatever it is, I did attack two mares, under gounds that one had symptoms that highly resembled advanced possession. The arcane fire I just used was ment to focus on unclean spirit-creatures and them only. Considering that that spell is ment to be casted in a ritual chamber, usualy with others assisting, is a fault of mine. It is yours, however, to belive that filly can be helped by one who deals with wounds of the flesh. If she is indeed harbering something foul, it will only burn that away. If it harms her flesh in any way, however, you have all the rights to gut me where I stand. The girl is speaking in foul speak and belives she is evil, which could mean that her very soul is impure, in which case I have no way of dealing with. I can tell you her condition, if you give me a momentary scan with a very quick spell. "
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 02:42:55 am
"You will leave her alone!  You assault one of the Guard and throw a bucking fireball down a hallway, and expect to be allowed to cast anything else?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 02:44:59 am
" And risk her being like that forever?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 02:46:48 am
Falcata nods at Khenal's statement, her expression softening slightly.

"You're not doing anything else to anypony.  You could have killed somepony!"

She approaches Pokionic.

"Captain Isos will assess the final penalty, but two counts of assault... a minimum of forty days in jail."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 02:50:06 am
In his smallist, kindist voice, inhanced somewhat with his barly-flickering magic, he said softly "Friesden, sweety, how are you doing right now? Who is your father, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 02:55:56 am
I take wing, blasting towards this strange unicorn with all the strength my wings will give.  My injuries remind me of their presence, but are ignored.  Blasting past Falcata, I aim a punch square at the jaw of Friesden's latest tormentor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 03:09:27 am
Aww, hors-"crunch" Thump.



That was the sound of a ponies lower jaw being forced back forty degrees into his upper jaw as it dislocates, all while hitting the ground head-first. Thank the scaly ancester for stronger bones and a good horn, or else I would be the one who needs to be put under a sleeping spell.

" Tell Otik that I was trying to calm her with a spell...before I was interupted by this mare, Bubbles.
She was showing signs of acute possesion and was speaking about a father figure. She must be put under by the spell I was casting earlier. Tell the most learned magi in the area to take the proper procautions. The Dragonic Spell of Spirit-Clensing can be found in a leather scroll under my bed, near the pile of crushed emeralds. Take them with you, for that powder assists in channeling the energy needed for attacking the parasite without doing mush harm to the host..."

Weakly, he muttered."At least... I...am near a...doc..ter..." Than his eyes rolled into the back of his head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 24, 2011, 03:10:26 am
"Father or other? What is both? Both and neither? Always the same. Same and different. Always two there are and will be, always after the pound of flesh. Life is a prison, and death a merciful reprieve."


Even as Khenal comes into view, she appears more lucid.

"My head hurts. Why can't I remember where Khenal is? I see him how. Am I there? Who am I? I know my name, my father and mother loved me, and all is well with the world, but of me I know only my name. Who am I?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 03:16:26 am
Falcata is surprised by the ferocity of Khenal's onslaught and winces as his hoof connects with Pokionic's jaw.  She watches uncomfortably as the unicorn rattles on about Friesden being possessed, despite his dislocated jaw.  She watches as his eyes roll back in his head and he loses consciousness.

"Khenal..."

She steps over to Pokionic and swears under her breath.

"Let's get him into the hospital..."

Her horn flickers with magic as she does precisely that, realizing at length that Khenal wouldn't be capable of doing so for days to come.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 03:20:10 am
My fury quickly fades when I hear Friesden start talking.

"Friesden?  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 03:24:06 am
(on how he can still say stuff thats understandable with a dislocated jaw without passing out: Dragon magic. ;D)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 24, 2011, 03:25:36 am
"Who is Friesden? A filly owned by her parents? By Otik and Starkey? Do they own me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 03:32:54 am
My eyes widen in shock at her words.

"Y-you're Friesden... aren't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 03:36:02 am
Falcata watches as Khenal begins to speak to Friesden and decides it's best to leave the two alone.  One more quick check to make sure Pokionic wasn't dead and she left the hospital silently.

She would report Pokionic's assaults to Captain Isos and let her deal with whatever came of it.  If she questioned how Pokionic dislocated his jaw, she'd take the blame for it.  Khenal had been through enough, and she understood all too well how he felt.  After an assault, Isos would probably drop it anyway.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 24, 2011, 03:45:11 am
"Yes. I am Friesden. Khenal, tell me. You are the only one I remember truly. Who am I? Who are my parents?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 03:55:44 am
"You... are you.  You're the kindest pony I've ever known.  Your parents... were most certainly not, but they are gone now."

As I talk, I kneel and lay by Friesden's side.

"And... you're very important to me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 24, 2011, 05:48:51 am
*Bubbles sighs*
"Falcata, bring him over here. Then go rest. I can tell by the look on your face that your stomach is being painful. ALWAYS this pony, meddling in things he doesn't comprehend. Sending clopping FIREBALLS down my hospital hallway is just too much."
*Bubbles walks to the hospital loudspeaker*
"THIS IS DOCTOR BUBBLES. CODE RED! I REPEAT, CODE RED! WE HAVE A FIRE IN THE HOSPITAL HALLWAY! ALL FIREFIGHTING PONIES ASSEMBLE AND DOUSE THE FLAMES!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 24, 2011, 12:27:58 pm
-snip-
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 12:34:06 pm
I think that's scene.  Unless you guys have anything else that needs to happen right now, I think this is the perfect place for us to skip ahead and catch the timeline up with everything in-game.  Despite how it may look, Friesden's situation is stable and really needs to be allowed some time to set before continuing.

So, what do you guys think?  Catch up the timeline, or does more stuff need to happen first?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 24, 2011, 12:37:10 pm
((I vote for catching up to the timeline. Perhaps anyone who wants to can write journal entries for the stuff that's happened in fortress mode, if any of it affects them, and then we can move on. I don't really feel comfortable advancing the fort anymore until the roleplayers catch up. But, I might have time to play some this week, and I'd like to be able to.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 12:46:28 pm
I say we try to get on track with the timeline. I need time to recover, anyway. Mind if we start with me being interagated by Isos, Khenal?
 ;D
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 24, 2011, 12:50:32 pm
((*pouts* ok, snipping..))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 12:56:33 pm
It looks like we're about 3 months behind the game.  Unless you really want to rp getting grilled by Isos, a journal entry should work.  I was thinking that Khenal would be healed up and back to enjoying the quiet life, Pokon will have served his time and been released, and... there was one other thing that I thought needed mentioning from my end, but now I forget.

I remembered the third thing.  Friesden's probation is over.  After three months of no incidents, Isos simply can't justify the use of ponyhours watching her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 01:01:49 pm
I suppose something like that would be better off in a entry,as well. I suppose my next real issue is to attempt to get Otik to talk to me without risk of my life. I mean, it has been around three months, but somepony needs to explain about that little fillies condition!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 01:07:32 pm
Which little filly?  Friesden?  She's a full grown mare. :P
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 24, 2011, 01:11:28 pm
((As we are jumping forward, Khenal and I have noticed that there is a slight plot hole that I'm going to attempt to fill, although it may make it worse. I don't know. Below is a transcription of the conversation in which we noticed the problem and my suggested solution.

 KingStrongbeard   Is the current RP before or after the zebra attack?
Khenal   before
Khenal   I think a week or two before
KingStrongbeard   Really? Then Charity's journal entries are out of order, because I have the zebra attack as before the cultists as I dated the cultists as the day I sealed them up in the actual fortress.
Khenal   I think it's before, anyhow. it feels like we've been in the same week for a month or two now
KingStrongbeard   Yeah, a quick skip through my old posts shows that the seige was supposed to take place after the scene in which I interrupted to post it, but then that scene went on and then we just stayed within that week.
KingStrongbeard   However, Impending has made mention of efim's death in battle, so I think it will take the least amount of massaging of the time line, if we assume that the siege took place before the start of the scene I interrupted to post it. So that it happened awhile ago. Opinions?
Khenal   my head hurts :P
KingStrongbeard   Indeed.

So to summarize, the problem is that the siege happens both before and after. Thus the solution is that happened first, then the cultists stuff and everything that happened around the same time. I assume there is no objections to this?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 01:16:02 pm
See, this is what happens when you decide to jump into the middle of things without going thru the 300+ pages beforehand. :P Oh well, its like calling someone "Darling" or "angel". Better yet, he simply cannot tell the ages or genders of the ponies around him. Still need to contact someone with a bigger horn and more experiance with the filly mare...Khenal? That pony could fill him in, but he still needs to pretty much prostate himself over to Otik. As well as everypony else who ended up being effected by that magical flame. Which, by the way, was not supposed to start fires. Magical dragonfire, you see. Than again, it should have focused on that silly pony Friesden, whom I will continue to call a filly. For the sake of roleplay.



Quote
So to summarize, the problem is that the siege happens both before and after. Thus the solution is that happened first, then the cultists stuff and everything that happened around the same time. I assume there is no objections to this?))

I like this, so no objections here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 01:22:50 pm
((I'm good with advancing the storyline up to the last journal entry.  If we don't, I think it's going to languish over the same week for a long time yet.  If we do that, Falcata has been officially bumped up to captain of Charity's personal guard, has her new hammer, is now living across from the duchess, right?

That would also mean that Kris found her diary and now knows she's dying.  Time to start working on that bit I suppose, I guess I'll have to massage the timeline myself and say the caravan hasn't left yet.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 01:25:58 pm
Heh, if he asks around, he'll get pointed to Khenal.  However, Khenal has a pretty low opinion of him, heh.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 24, 2011, 01:48:17 pm
If we do that, Falcata has been officially bumped up to captain of Charity's personal guard, has her new hammer, is now living across from the duchess, right?

That would also mean that Kris found her diary and now knows she's dying.  Time to start working on that bit I suppose, I guess I'll have to massage the timeline myself and say the caravan hasn't left yet.))

First, yes that is correct. Falcata's promotion will be official for future RP.

Also, I think the caravan is still there anyway, at least I didn't notice it leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 01:51:33 pm
Well, low opinion or not, he has the magical power. I have the spells. I, however, am utterly clueless about whats going on if its not a possesion of some sort. The Royal, in any case, would probably be hostile, because he could tell somethings off with Pokionic. At this rate, all Pokionic cares about is attempting to say sorry to all he harmed, and trying to understand whats going on with that little filly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 01:58:31 pm
A genuine appology would do wonders for Khenal's opinion of him, heh.  How much have you read, though?  Mental magic has kinda been Khenal's thing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 24, 2011, 02:10:29 pm
((Falcata too.  Right now she really doesn't like Pokionic, but if he genuinely apologized to her, she'd probably come around.  She'll still think he's slightly unhinged though, unless he does something to alleviate that worry.

And he'd best be glad that was magical fire that didn't really hurt her.  She would be much less forgiving in that case.  :) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 02:12:57 pm
Oh, I know that. Lets put it this way: Khenal is, for all intents and purpuses, far better than Pokionic is in every single way. He is physicly fit, can actualy take a hit, and few wish to clop him in the bits. Pokionic, on the other hand, is not so much a mential magi as a ritual magi, and knows a thing or two about evil spirits,( Which will hopefully be explained in a conversation with Otik.) Both spells he used where made to be used in controled inviroments, not in the middle of a hallway or in motion, in that order. If he can get a few moments with what is likely the most powerful magical being in the fort, he could probably come to a understanding with the Royal, who, by the way, Pokionic would be submissive too out of respect and pure instinct.

He should probably explaine himself to a whole group, but yeah, he owes almost everyone a apolagy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 02:14:22 pm
Oh, this is going to be some interesting character interaction, I can feel it :)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 02:16:32 pm
Ohh, without a doubt. 8)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 24, 2011, 02:40:17 pm
Charity's Journal 21st Opal 99

I have just returned from having a drink with Khenal. It was nice being able to talk to him like a friend. We chatted and eventually the subject came to that demon he had in his head, the one that caused him to quit his position of Captain of the Guard. Turns out he got rid of it awhile ago, locked it inside the adamantine earring I gave Carrot. I asked him why then he didn't rejoin the guard. Obviously he couldn't just go back to being Captain, but he could serve under Isos. He said he didn't think that would work. The guard might look to him over Isos, since he was their captain first.

I admitted he had a point, but offered him a second choice. To work under Falcata in my new guard. And he took me up on the offer.I can't wait to tell Miss Captain Falcata the good news.


Charity's Secret Diary Opal 21st 99

I didn't write this in my journal as that isn't the place for it. But I suspect something may be up with Khenal and Friesden. I asked them how they were and while he insisted they were fine, his words didn't feel genuine. They're so cute together though. I hope it's nothing serious.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 03:01:19 pm
Dear Magical Scroll of Sending:

I got myself utterly smashed up a few weeks ago. I could have sworn I saw little Rocs flying around my head for the last few days. My jaw was utterly dislocated by a rather impressive specimen of a Royal stallion who I later learned was none other than Khenal, and my poor horn has been sore for days. Due to my relivly hermit-like life, the only ones who even talked to me was Isos, and she and I agreed a the month in jail. However, that little filly that started this whole mess is disterbing me. From my own personal experiances with Zebrakind, malevolent spirits tend to automaticly be hostile to others around it, and so far the worst that filly has done is speak foul words of evil and lost her identity.

.....thats still realy, realy bad. Probably worse than what the alternitve is.Not only was the filly unaffected by the spell I casted on her before, but the Spiritfyre did not foucus on the little pony. Unless the mare herself is evil, I have no idea on how to go farther. I belive I need to talk with both her caretaker and Khenal. The powerful royal has some sort of freindship with the mare, and I can only assume he can help me farther. If he wishes, he could prepare a way to end the poor mares...strangness once and for all.

Also this place... is terrible. The darkest of Zebrish shamens could conjure up a single spirit of evil, but this place is crawling with them. Its as if the entire place is a giant congragation of deamons and evil beings, waiting to pounce on those who are weak. Perhapes the Zebras are right, and adamantine is the remains of evil god-things that roamed eons ago. Neverless, I need to apologize to everyone I have effected negativly so far. However, a talk with Otik must come first, and then a chat with Khenal about whether or not his freind is utterly evil, possessed, or both.

"Scroll bursts into purple fire, is sent to a unkown hiding place"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 24, 2011, 03:05:40 pm
My jaw was utterly dislocated by a rather impressive specimen of a pegusi mare, and my poor horn has been sore for days.

((Khenal is neither a pegasus nor a mare. But is an alicorn (royal pony) stallion.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 03:07:03 pm
Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 38

I need to stop obsessing, like Starkey said.  But Friesden seems... slightly off.  Almost like an actor ocasionally missing a cue for a moment.  No, stop it!  She's fine, she has to be.  It's been a month since I burnt myself out, and I finally feel 100% again.  The week of no magic had to have ended anything I might have been able to do to her.  Even my construct would have been dispelled by this point.  Anything already done will still have been done, but at least I can't harm her any further.

Anyway, today has been good, despite myself.  I met Charity in the dining hall today and we talked like the old days.  Eventually, we talked about my resignation and what caused it.  Charity asked if I wanted back in the Guard, but I said no.  I couldn't just treat Isos like a substitute to be replaced at any time.  And I don't think it would work if I was just a normal Guardspony, either.  I was captain to them, and I think they'd treat me like it, even if Isos retains the post.  I couldn't do that to her.

Then Charity asked if I'd like to join her bodyguard.  Falcata is the new Captain.  Though she did work under me in the Guard, she's the only one there who has.  I think it'll work out.  If worse comes to worse, I'll just have to resign again, or she can fire me if she feels we can't work together.

Oh, I almost forgot.  There is at least one positive sign that Friesden really is her own pony!  One of the Guard, Heiro, asked if he could visit today; said he knew Friesden and wanted to be friends.  It's wonderful!  She's made a friend, on her own!  I had no idea, so I can't have influenced it!  Maybe she really is back!



****************************
Those paying attention may notice a huge numerical gap between this and Khenal's last journal entry.  He's been making them, but I haven't been writing them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 03:13:00 pm
My jaw was utterly dislocated by a rather impressive specimen of a pegusi mare, and my poor horn has been sore for days.

((Khenal is neither a pegasus nor a mare. But is an alicorn (royal pony) stallion.))
"Where did you get that quote from? I did not type that." :P

(This is what happens when there are about ten different ponies running around, and one has not yet memorised there names!)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 24, 2011, 04:20:00 pm
Heiros journal 1

Well I finally did it...one month of watching over Friesden, and I just now got up the courage to talk to Khenal. He was walking back from the Dining hall when I came across him. Apparently he was taking some food back to Friesden so I asked if I could come along. He's a real nice pony but... I always get nervous around him. I wanted to ask about his relationship with Friesden but all I ended up doing was stuttering, stumbling on all of my questions, I don't think he understood what I was asking either. "I love her" he said... I understand that, but sometimes I wonder... their relationship never seems to be solid, and if I have a chance... but I can't just up and ask him! Oh Khenal, would you mind if I asked Friesden out? Yeah, great idea, then I get to spend the next month in the hospital. Still I care for her so... maybe at some point I'll get my chance. Untill that happens I guess that I'll just stay a friend, and guard. As long as she's happy...     
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 24, 2011, 05:55:55 pm
((I AM BACK!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 11:02:18 pm
(Huh. Ready when you guys are. :D)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 24, 2011, 11:05:18 pm
Heh, Christmas or Christmas eve depending on where everypony lives.  Will prolly be slow for a few days ;)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 24, 2011, 11:10:43 pm
IT'S FUCKING CHRISTMAS POKON, GIVE US A BREAK!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 24, 2011, 11:33:42 pm
WELL SORRY, "MASTER", THOUGHT I WOULD LET YOU KNOW. BECAUSE, WELL, I AM A NICE GUY.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 25, 2011, 03:06:02 am
((Hehe, yes, Christmas and all so too busy to even check the forums until now.  I got some pony stuff for Christmas, so I'm happy!

And, oh, this is going to have some very interesting potential for interaction between Khenal and Falcata.))

Falcata's Diary - 21st Opal, 99

Lady Charity told me today that there's a new recruit for her personal bodyguard, but she didn't tell me any more than that.  I'm not sure who it could be, as far as I know we're all hoof picked by her, so somepony must have done something brave or outstanding to get chosen.  I haven't heard of anything of the sort recently, so I suppose I'll just have to wait and see who it is.  I'm a bit nervous about this whole thing, I'm not used to leading ponies so much as taking orders, but maybe I'll be able to do half as good a job as Khenal did.

I just realized that I haven't really spoken with him for a few weeks.  I really hope Friesden is doing better.  Khenal gave me permission to read his journal, and although I was hesitant to do so at first I did.  It took me a few days, but everything makes so much more sense now that I have.  I feel absolutely terrible for him and Friesden.  She's been through so much more than I could have ever imagined, and poor Khenal is so deeply in love with her that he's gone to the point of hurting himself to help her.  I know all too well what sorts of things love will make you do, and I'd hate to see him have to suffer through what I have in its name.  Perhaps it is worth it though, I don't regret everything I've done.

Speaking of that, I'm happy to report that Pokionic has mostly recovered from Khenal's outburst.  Captain Isos didn't even bat an eye when I told her that he attacked me and I ended up dislocating his jaw.  I'm definitely going to keep my eye on him though.  He worries me a lot.

And I really need to speak with Kris and find out what's bothering her, as busy as I've been getting settled in our new home I haven't had much chance to talk with her lately.  She's been avoiding me and hiding in her room a lot, though, which isn't like her.  I think if she knew that I was dying, she would have said something by now, so it must be something else.  Perhaps I should break the news to her then, I don't know.


((Think I'll post something tomorrow on Kris.  Not sure how interactive it'll be for RP purposes, but I need to get Falcata not dying resolved.  I'm already not really liking what I had thought up... I may have to work with this some to get the plot interesting enough...

Edit: Khenal had a better plan for this than I did, so Falcata doesn't know he's her new recruit.  Hilarity will ensue.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 25, 2011, 10:18:37 am
Merry Christmas Everypony!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 25, 2011, 11:30:56 am
((CHRISTMAS SPECIAL TIME!))

A crowd gathers around a stage in the courtyard of Glitterglen, on the stage is the mane cast: Kris, Falcata, Khenal, Friesden, Charity, Pokionic, Granite(?), Psycho Carrot(possessing a willing host), Starkey, Otik, Lilac, and Venture. They're all preparing for the Trans-dimensional play, which occurs every winter's solstice. The crowd quiets as Charity takes the center stage.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 25, 2011, 12:03:34 pm
"Merry Christmas Everypony! It's that time of the year again, and that means it's time once again, for the annual Christmas Story. The story we will tell is as old The Shells of Dance, itself. And it all starts in the humblest of places, in a little town far far from here, with a family of modest means."

The curtains opens to reveal a set made to look like the interior to a tiny poor home. A Pegasus, hidden by the wall drops fake snow behind the "window". At a table, near a fake fireplace, sits our star[s.].


((themaster asked me to set the scene so I made something up. I don't know who the star is, or even what the nature of the story [should anything come from this at all.] will be. Just run with it and make something up.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 25, 2011, 12:18:13 pm
Jennie(Lilac) and Cheese(Kris) sit in front of the fireplace, staring hopefully at Uncle Read(Starkey), who is busy sleeping.

"Uncle Read?" Asks Jennie.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 25, 2011, 02:03:58 pm
Cheese steps up beside Jennie with a smile on her face.  "Come on, Uncle Read, wake up!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 25, 2011, 02:38:02 pm
Pokionic has no idea why he his here, but neverless follows his part and sneaks up on the two mares and says

"Hey girls, what can your uncle Jonnie help you with?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 25, 2011, 03:18:21 pm
((Due to complications, we will be doing the scene in our IRC much later today.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 25, 2011, 03:19:40 pm
((Complications mostly being "Oh geeze, what are we gonna do, stall stall stall!" ;) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 12:38:21 am
((It does indeed appear I slacked off. Need to add one more thing to the last scene.))

"My....my parents...GONE? But...no! How could they leave me? They told me yesterday they loved me! Where...where did they go?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 26, 2011, 01:08:31 am
((Here's the Christmas play.  Turned out chaotic, as predicted.  Since the end gets a bit silly, take anything that happens with a grain of salt.  :P))

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 01:45:51 am
I may or may not post a journal about Khenal's first day of being in the Bodyguard after you put the transcription, heh.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 26, 2011, 01:52:27 am
((I was thinking the same for Falcata.  Oh, so embarrassed on several levels... Anyway, here's the transcription of their sparring match, not positive where it fits in the timeline since the Friesden thing is still unresolved:))

Falcata stands a short distance back, watching Madush and Osal take turns plinking away at the archery targets across the room.  Madush scores a finely placed shot on one of the targets.

"Nice shot, Madush!" Falcata calls to the pegasus.  True to nature, he simply nods and continues firing at his target.

A few seconds later, Duchess Charity enters the barracks flanked by her husband, who goes off to do some individual practice.  "Good evening Captain,” she says to Falcata as the two meet eyes.

Falcata lowers her head before the duchess.  “Good evening, Lady Charity.”  She returns to eye level and adds, “I understand you've chosen a new recruit for your bodyguard?”

The duchess nods.  “Indeed, he's proven himself quite well in the past, and I trust him well enough.  You've worked with him the past I think.”

Falcata ponders the statement for a moment.  It would have to be somepony from the guard.  There were more than a few brave ponies there, and she trusted them all well enough.  “Oh?  I've no doubt your confidence is well placed.”

During the exchange, Khenal has been waiting outside the barracks waiting for his cue, barely suppressing a few chuckles.  At hearing Charity's signal, he composes himself and enters the barracks.  Falcata looks over to Khenal and offers him a small smile and nod.  “Good evening Khenal.”

Khenal bows to Charity.  "Lady Charity."  He turns to Falcata and snaps a crisp salute.  “Captain!”
 
Falcata puzzles at the salute and looks between the two ponies.  Wait a second...  Her eyes go wide and her mouth hangs agape slightly.  Khenal smiles.

The duchess repeats the smile.  "Falcata, I would like to present your newest recruit, Khenal."

"Reporting for duty, Captain!"

Falcata stares dumbly for a second before composing herself.  "Oh, Khenal!  I-I didn't realize!"  She returns the salute sloppily, feeling her heart skip a beat as he gives her a warm smile.  She fails to suppress a small nervous grin in return.

"Well,”  Charity begins, “I'm sure you have much to discuss, and I don't want be in the way, so I'll just be going now.  Madush, I believe it's your shift now?”

"That's right milady.”

"Then let's go." 

Falcata nods Madush off and bids the duchess farewell.  Khenal bows to Charity and salutes Madush as they exit.  "This... this was quite unexpected!" she says to Khenal, her smile growing to a grin.

Khenal raises an eyebrow.  "Ma'am?"

Realizing her breach of protocol, Falcata's grin shrinks from a dumb grin to a nervous smile.  “I... uh...”  She looks away for a second.  "It's an honor to work with you again Khenal.  I know Lady Charity's trust was not misplaced."

Khenal maintains his collected smile.  "The honor is mine, Captain Falcata.  I look forward to working under you."

Falcata blushes slightly.  Oh, sisters, this was going to awkward...  She fidgets for a moment before inspecting Khenal's equipment.  It looked like the same gear she remembered from when he was her captain.  It would do well enough.

Khenal continues to wait, standing tall and proper.  "Um... orders, ma'am?"

Osal, the world's unluckiest pony, fires off his last bolt. He turns to Falcata.  "Captain, should I go to the ammo pile, or do you have other orders?"

Falcata looks over to him and says, “No, continue on.  One more quiver of bolts."

"Yes sir!" Osal runs off to acquire another quiver of wooden bolts.
 
Falcata looks back to Khenal   "We were performing some drills.  Seems like the best place to start."  She steps back toward the open sparring space and beckons Khenal to join her   "Are you well enough for some sparring?"

"Yes Ma'am."  Khenal follows Falcata to the sparring space, flipping his spear so nopony will get hurt.  Falcata levitates her new hammer out to her side and turns to face Khenal.

Cryptson stops his drill and steps off to the side of the sparing arena.  "This should be entertaining."


Falcata meets eyes with Khenal and turns her hammer to a striking angle.  Khenal salutes Falcata, then drops into a defensive stance, waiting for her to make the first move.  "Begin.”  She swings her hammer low, trying to catch Khenal by the leg with the hook between the striking surface and hilt.

Khenal leaps over the blow, countering with a downward strike aimed at her withers.  She sidesteps the thrust, which slides against the side of her barding.  She circles and brings the pommel of her hammer up for a strike at any part of Khenal that presents itself.

He sees the strike coming, but can't move fast enough to keep the hammer from clipping his hoof.  He holds the hoof off the ground as if it were an actual injury, meanwhile making several feints to try to get Falcata off balance .

She tries to parry a feint, throwing her hammer far out of line.  Khenal attempts to take advantage of the successful feint, aiming a blow at the same leg Falcata got on him.  She realizes her mistake a moment too late and tries to step out of the way.  The blow misses the target hoof and jabs into another.  She backs away instinctively and favors the hoof like Khenal.

Falcata brings her hammer up again and tries a feint of her own, faking a strike at Khenal's shoulder.  At the same moment, he attempts to press the advantage, looking for any openings in Falcata's stance.  Caught by surprise, he oversteps himself.  Parrying the hammer has thrown him completely off balance and wide open.  She takes advantage and tries to sweep his weapon out of his magical grasp altogether

Khenal is too distracted by trying to keep his hooves with only three available, and is efficiently disarmed.  As the spear sails off in an arc, Khenal smiles and salutes Falcata again.

Falcata returns the salute.  "Not bad.  We could both use a little practice."

"Whew, thank you Captain.  Do you want to go again?" Khenal says, levitating his spear back.

Falcata nods and takes up her stance again.  "I think that would be a good idea.  Why don't you lead off this time?"

Khenal takes his stance.  "Ready when you are, Ma'am."

"Ready."  She raises her weapon in a defensive stance.

The moment the words leave Falcata's mouth, Khenal darts forward with a thrust to her barrel.  Falcata is surprised by the ferocity of his attack and fails in her attempt to sweep his spear aside.  The blunt of the staff rams into her barding, and she backs away with a grunt to evaluate her options

Cryption smiles and nods approvingly.  "That looked like a hit. Tied 1-1."

Khenal takes a defensive stance, slowly spinning his spear in mid-air and attempting to make his next strike unpredictable.  Falcata circles him slowly, waiting for him to make the next move.  She keeps her hammer close and ready.

His spear suddenly picks up speed as he aims a spinning strike at the side of Falcata's head.  She ducks the swing and brings her hammer up at Khenal's jaw in turn, making certain to not swing it hard enough to harm if it lands.

He was expecting a block and to redirect the momentum of his spear, not a dodge.  Acting on reflex, he rolls to the side, feeling the hammer just brush the fur of his jaw.  As he comes out of the roll, a massive grin is plastered on his face.  He was very much enjoying the match.  He stands and tangles Falcata's hammer in his spear, hoping to use his size and strength to his advantage.

Falcata struggles against Khenal's strength.  He was a head taller than her and stronger to match physically.  Magically, he was leagues beyond her.  She locks eyes with him and with a smile tries to step aside, but her magical strength buckles under his and she falters.  He wasn't expecting her to give so easily and looses his balance, stumbling into her.

She looses a surprised grunt and falls with him, her weapon falling to ground and sliding far out of reach.  Khenal's spear gets tangled in his legs and he topples over with Falcata, becoming a mass of legs, wings, and confused yelping.

"Whoop!  Ack!" he cries, trying not to catch his spear on either of them.  Falcata winds up beneath him, stunned and confused.  She sees her weapon halfway across the barracks and chuckles to herself.

"Oof...  I think... that round goes to you."

"Huff, if you say so, Ma'am."

As the two fighters tumble together, Duchess Charity has returned to the barracks.  She looks down to the two in a very awkward position and raises an eyebrow.  "What's going on in here?”
 
Khenal's eyes widen when he recognizes Charity's voice.  Falcata blushes as her eyes snap open, and she looks up to lock eyes with Charity.  "Oh... we were sparring.  A bit of... an accident."

Khenal wiggles and tries to get out of the pileup, and Falcata does the same, fighting to get to her feet while panting from exertion.  "Starkey always told me that was a bad maneuver, but never why,” he adds, sheepishly.

Charity looks over to her husband with a glower.  "Cryptson, I didn't give you this room so you could watch this kind of stuff.”

He smiles in turn and says, "You misunderstand, they were just sparring and crashed.”

“Uh-huh. Sure."

"No honest!" Charity's magic grabs her husbands ear. "Oww, let me go.”

"You're coming home now, dear," she says, dragging him away by the extremity.

Khenal finally manages to disentangle himself and tries to help Falcata to her hooves, trying and failing to ignore Charity's suggestive comments.  Falcata stands and looks at Khenal, her face slightly red and dripping with sweat.

Charity looks back to them as she exits and adds, "No need to stop on our account, we were just leaving.”
 
Khenal looks a bit flustered, but continues to help Falcata.  "Thank you..." she trails off, accepting his help but avoiding his eyes.  She continues to pant and wipe sweat from her brow, trying to catch her breath with difficulty.  She shouldn't be this exhausted...

Khenal levitates Falcata's hammer over to her, then salutes again.  She accepts the weapon and replaces it in her sling with a few more deep breaths.  "Thank you...  I'm out of practice,” she manages between breaths.  “I think we should take a minute to catch our breath..."

He nods and takes the opportunity to catch his breath as well, returning his spear to a passive stance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 01:55:18 am
((Oooh...okay.

I've had a vision. It's clear to me now just what has to be done.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 06:36:58 am
((RETCON INBOUND.....

Oceania is at war with Eastasia. Oceania has always been at war with Eastasia. Eurasia are our allies.

Would the following sections of the story please report to the memory hole?

Starkey, Otik, and Friesden having anything more than a platonic/familial relationship.
Anything from that day relating to any part of the above.
The entirety of the second day after Friesden awoke.

reply 26.12.11 retcon malreported rectify

The second day, all events referring to Friesden.

Oceania is at war with Eurasia. Oceania has always been at war with Eurasia. Eastasia are our allies.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 26, 2011, 01:37:50 pm
I always thought that Equestria is at war with Camelshan, and Zebrica is our ally?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 04:25:07 pm
Slowly Friesden awoke. Yesterday had had its ups and downs. But here...with Lilac, her adoptive sister, it all seemed so peaceful. She opened the door, and saw down the way the two guardsponies from yesterday, outside Isos' office. She turned her head, and quickly strode down the way to the hospital. Maybe...maybe today Khenal would be happy to see her.

She could only hope he would, at least.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 04:36:27 pm
((The following bit is before the time jump, and introduces a bit of retconning.  It's unfortunate, but very necessary for everypony to not die horribly.))

I slowly open my eyes and instinctively try to levitate a glass of water over to drink.  When the beverage refuses to even consider budging, I recall being burnt out still.  Sighing, I get up to get a drink.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 04:40:43 pm
Thankfully, the corridors were empty of other ponies. Friesden still slunk in the sides, the memory of yesterday still burning in her mind. She made her way to the hospital, which was still shut. She breathed deep. Khenal would want to see her. He must. She built up her courage, and knocked.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 04:43:23 pm
Startled by the knock, I drop the wooden cup.  I simply stare at it on the ground for a moment, before remembering why I dropped it in the first place.  Shaking my head to try to clear the cobwebs, I go and answer the door.

"...Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 04:44:45 pm
"Khenal?" Friesden asked, hesitantly. "Can...Can I come in?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 04:47:39 pm
"Huh?  Oh!  Of course, of course!  Sorry, I'm feeling a little out of sorts.  How are you feeling?"

I try to give a reassuring smile before returning to the hospital bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 04:49:15 pm
Friesden walks in.

"A...well, a little different from when I last saw you." She smiles hollowly. "I'm sorry for what happened then. I...I didn't mean to scare you like that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 04:54:40 pm
"It's... It's alright, Friesden."

I pause for a moment, unsure if I should continue.

"B-but why... did you say it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 04:56:56 pm
"I...I don't know. My tongue spoke before my mind."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 05:01:27 pm
I close my eyes and take several breaths, trying very hard to not freak out as it seems my suspicions are confirmed.  After a few moments, I open them.

"You said you feel different?  How so?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 05:03:07 pm
"Oh, it's nothing to worry about, my love. Just...just something that happened. How are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 05:05:26 pm
"Please?  If something feels wrong, tell me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 05:06:32 pm
"Only if you promise me something, my love. Promise me you won't do anything about it. Other ponies are already dealing with that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 05:11:47 pm
I again close my eyes and do my best to not panic.

'You love her, you need to trust her judgement.  And you need to trust your friends.  It'll be alright, just don't freak out.'

Eyes closed and breathing evenly, I answer.


"I promise I will not do anything about it unless specifically asked by you, Freisden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 05:12:49 pm
"They...Two guardsponies...they..." She takes a deep breath. "They...tried to...you know."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 05:19:47 pm
"Tried to...?"

My eyes snap open, cold with fury, as I realize what she's trying to say.

'You promised!  Besides, ponies are already dealing with it!'

A few inarticulate sounds escape me as I try to smother my rage with the promise.  After a few moments, I shake my head and get off the bed to pace.


"You said ponies are already dealing with it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 05:23:00 pm
Friesden starts to shake. "Y-yes. Pl-please, don't g-get m-mad! Isos is-is dealing with it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 05:26:27 pm
I continue to pace, though I've slowed a bit at the news that Isos will be handling it.

'She's the Captain of the Guard, this is her job, after all.'

Noticing Friesden shaking, I stop and try to reassure her.


"Well, I can't help but be angry at what they tried to do to you.  But I'm not mad at you, Friesden.  I don't think I ever could be."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 05:29:04 pm
"Y-you were mad when I woke! Please, don't be like that again, my love!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 05:32:15 pm
I wince at the memory.

"Again, not at you.  I was mad with myself, and disappointed in myself.  And afraid..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 05:33:38 pm
"I was afraid too...that you didn't love me anymore. Do you love me, Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 05:38:39 pm
Nervously, I reach out to embrace the mare I love with all my heart.

"Always, Friesden.  More than anything, I will always love you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 05:42:25 pm
Friesden returns the embrace, and the shaking stops.

"I...I love you, Khenal. Will you be mine forever?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 05:43:47 pm
"I already am."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 05:45:47 pm
"Then I will be yours forever too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 05:54:24 pm
I flinch slightly at her words, but maintain the embrace.

'She can't be enthralled, you're burnt out.'

I smile at my love and slowly lean in to kiss her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 05:59:39 pm
Friesden returns the kiss. "I've been waiting so long for that, my love. I want this to be forever. But...I know you don't trust me yet. So I need you to do something for me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 06:04:21 pm
"Anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 06:05:36 pm
"I know you've looked into my mind before. I know you're afraid of hurting me, but do it. For me. I trust you with it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 06:12:10 pm
'But I don't trust me with it...'

"Are you sure this is what you want?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 06:13:31 pm
"Yes, Khenal. I want you to be able to trust yourself, and I'll do whatever it takes. Do this for me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 06:20:34 pm
"Then... I will do my best, once my magic is back."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 06:21:31 pm
"What? What do you mean, once your magic is back?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 06:27:25 pm
"I... I've burnt out again.  I don't think I'll be back to 100% for close to a month."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 06:29:00 pm
"Why?"

A look of horror comes over her face.

"Please....tell me it wasn't because of me. Tell me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 06:32:33 pm
I slowly and reluctantly withdraw from the embrace, desperately trying to not meet Friesden's eyes.

"I-I was so frightened... that I had done something to you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 06:38:54 pm
"Khenal...."

Friesden embraces him once more.

"My love... I trust you. I know you'd do anything for me. Please...once you've recovered, never do this again. Please. I love you too much to want to see even a hair of your head be harmed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 06:44:14 pm
"I... I promise, Friesden.  I'm so sorry..."

I lean into her embrace and begin to cry on her shoulder.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 06:47:50 pm
Friesden joins in the tears.

"No, I'm sorry! I made a foalish mistake, and I caused all this pain! Please, forgive me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 06:49:56 pm
"I've been so selfish and such a coward!  How can anypony even stand to be in the same room with me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 06:54:13 pm
"Khenal, I love you, and I always will. I'll be by your side forever and a day. No matter what happens, I will always love you. Nopony else will love me like you. Not even my parents could."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 07:00:00 pm
I sniffle a few times and try to pull myself together.  A good cry is cleansing every so often.  Something she just said, however, seems off.

"...Your parents?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 07:00:48 pm
"My new parents. Starkey and Otik."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 26, 2011, 07:06:40 pm
((GOOD LORD, JUST END IT BEFORE I SCREAM AND TEAR MY HAIR OUT, THIS ROMANCE IS JUST PLAIN ANNOYING AT BEST!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 07:33:01 pm
((Heh, it's scene anyhow.  I think everypony can imagine the look on Khenal's face at that, and his "wat." response.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 07:38:51 pm
New Journal Entry 1.


I've never been so happy before. Sisters above. I've got parents who love me, a sister who enjoys me, and my true love Khenal loves me too. I don't know how I could get more happy.

I am so very happy. I wish this could last forever.




New Journal Entry 2

Khenal.

He went into my mind today.

I told him not to worry, but I still did. But he opened it. I was there, and he found me. He knows I'm free now.

I love him so. But he's gone back into the guard. I don't want him to. But now he has, the only thing I can do is put the skills that I learned from before I came to the fortress to keep ponies alive, to keep -him- alive when he gets hurt.

I worry about him so. Especially now he's working with Falcata. I've heard stories about her and Khenal. I trust him. He wouldn't do anything with her. Not willingly. But I still worry.

No. I trust him. And I trust her. The ponies in this fort are better than that. But I worry about her well being.

Maybe I should talk to Khenal. I've seen her, and she seems so unhappy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 26, 2011, 07:40:40 pm
((Her? SHE? Khenal is a male.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 07:42:00 pm
((Yes. When did I say otherwise?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 07:55:57 pm
Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 39

Friesden is herself!  Oh Sisters, how sweet those words are to write and know they are true!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 26, 2011, 08:14:53 pm
((Ok lets try my hand at this, here's the scene Khenal is in the dining hall, by himself. Heiro just walked in))

Heiro walks up to Khenal, his demeanor much more serious than usual, and says "Khenal, there you are. come with me, we're gonna spar. Now" his tone that of a pony on a mission.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 08:19:38 pm
'Mmm, strawberry cupcake...'

I fail to notice Heiro until he challenges me to a sparring match.


"Huh?  What?  Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 26, 2011, 08:22:21 pm
"You're going to be taking care of Friesden yes? I want to make sure you can handle the job. I won't be there to guard her all the time."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 08:23:49 pm
"What? What do you mean, Heiro?" Friesden asked as she entered the dining hall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 08:28:54 pm
"I thought Captain Isos had decided to not spend the ponyhours on escorting Friesden any more?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 26, 2011, 08:31:12 pm
"I convinced her to let me continue to watch Friesden on my own time. there are some who still don't think she's safe."

Heiro turns to Friesden
"Right now I'm your guard. pretty soon though captain Isos won't see the need to have you watched, and I want to make sure that you'll still be well protected."

Turning back to Khenal "I won't be taking no for an answer, either we go to the barracks or we'll do this here. Your choce."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 08:34:24 pm
"Oh, Heiro..." Friesden says with sympathy in her voice.

"It's not the danger from me that you worry about...it's the danger to me, isn't it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 08:36:36 pm
'My cupcake...'

I sigh and stand, hoping Friesden can talk some sense into Heiro.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 26, 2011, 08:40:07 pm
"Perhaps," Heiro says "I wish nothing but the best for you two but..." his voice trails off, and he shakes his head "but that doesn't matter now. Khenal make your choice."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 08:41:40 pm
"Oh, Heiro...I'm so sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 09:39:57 pm
I groan slightly, both for the scene we're starting to cause and the loss of my cupcake.

"The Arena.  We won't interrupt anypony training and there's plenty of room.  I think there's even some training weapons there."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 09:42:19 pm
"You two can't seriously be considering this. Fighting over me? I've got a mind, I've made my choice, dammit!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 26, 2011, 09:46:49 pm
"I never claimed you hadn't. But I need to do this"

Turning back to Khenal he says
"Fine lets go. no need to waste time." turning away he says over his shoulder "And just eat the darn cupcake. you need your strength, I won't hold back."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 09:49:18 pm
"No, buckit! I won't let you two do this! It's madness!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 09:51:04 pm
I sit back down and begin to slowly eat my cupcake.

"What should I do?  I don't think he's going to leave this alone..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 09:54:22 pm
"Heiro, for the Sisters' sake! I've chosen Khenal to be my mate. You will just have to accept it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 26, 2011, 09:55:21 pm
At this point, Lilac walks in.

"Hi big sis, what's up?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 09:56:57 pm
"These... Rrrrgh! These stallions are fighting over me like I'm a bucking cupcake!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 26, 2011, 09:59:07 pm
Lilac turns to Heiro with a look of concern on her face.

"Are you bothering my sister?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 26, 2011, 10:03:42 pm
"No child I am not" Hiero says his words getting more deliberate as his frustration starts to show.

looking back at Friesden
"I accept your choice fully. He is the one you chose, and I won't take that away. But even still I have to be sure that you will be protected..." He pauses slightly seeming to have trouble finding the words "If anything were to happen... I promise neither of us will be hurt, but for my own sake I need to know."

"Kenal you know where I'll be. finish your meal then come. This will happen."

saying this he turns and heads for the arena.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 26, 2011, 10:04:31 pm
((Sorry if I'm not on at all tonight.  I have 2 things to say: 1. I freaking hate Hughes.net and 2. My internet is currently nuked to worse than dial-up until 6PM EST tomorrow afternoon.  I can barely load pages here (takes over a minute per refresh) and the IRC would be pointless.  I may have an opportunity to get on in a bit for a little while, I'm not sure )).
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 10:05:53 pm
"I trust him! That should be enough for you! Rrrrrgh!" Friesden leaves the hall, ranting about stallions as she does.


((Telgin, IRC would still work. It came up first in the Internet because it didn't require much bandwidth.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 10:09:55 pm
I just keep eating my cupcake, sighing as Friesden leaves, then look down to Lilac.

"What do you think, Lilac?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 26, 2011, 10:14:31 pm
"Hmmm, I think you should prove your worth to friesden! Show her that you can defend her! I SAY YOU SHOULD FIGHT THAT BIG MEANY!!" Lilac says, encouraging Khenal as best she can.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 10:17:23 pm
I smile down at the little filly.

"Then I guess I will.  Think you can calm her down while I go see Heiro?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 26, 2011, 10:19:13 pm
"I can try...but don't expect me to help!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 26, 2011, 10:22:26 pm
Approaching the arena, Hiero can hear the sounds of a fight in progress.

"You're not using your head, son! That gap behind the blade is there for a reason!"

Starkey is sparring with one of the younger soldiers. He swings his wooden sword at the young buck, who - finally - manages to hook the blade behind the  beard of his axe. With a twist of his neck, he snaps the blade in two.

"That's the way lad, excellent!"

He retrieves a new training sword from the rack.

"Now, again!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 26, 2011, 10:24:38 pm
Walking up to Starkey Hiero says in a monotone
"You're Commander Starkey right? I'm going to be needing this space soon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 10:26:04 pm
Friesden makes her way to Otik in a fury. If nopony else, her mother would know how to deal with this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 26, 2011, 10:31:50 pm
"Take a rest, private. Five minutes."

He turns to face Hiero.

"I cleared my training schedule with Captain Isos a week ago, officer. I was to understand that the guard wouldn't begin their drills until noon. You'll have to wait a few hours yet."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 26, 2011, 10:33:18 pm
*Bubbles had followed Hiero to the arena after hearing what he had to say to Khenal.*
"Starkey, just listen to this. It's ridiculous I tell you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 26, 2011, 10:34:22 pm
I slowly make my way towards the arena, thinking about the impending match.

'He's going to be taking this seriously, so how should I handle it?  I can't insult him by not giving my all as well, not to mention insulting Friesden by not giving everything.'

I shake my head and quicken my pace.

'Looks like we'll both be giving our all...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 26, 2011, 10:36:15 pm
"Does eveypony in this fortress listen to private conversations? Bah, fine just stay out of my way."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 10:37:16 pm
"Otik? Mother?" Friesden called out in the barracks. She couldn't quite remember where Otik usually was this time of day.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 26, 2011, 10:40:50 pm
Friesden eventually finds Otik on the roof of the sky tower, scanning the jungle below. She looks up as Friesden approaches.

"Oh dear, I know that look. Some starry-eyed buck doesnae get th' message?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 10:48:25 pm
Friesden sighs. "I wish. You know Heiro? Something has put it in his and Khenal's minds that they should be fighting over me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 26, 2011, 10:49:32 pm
((May be on the IRC in a minute then.  The bandwidth isn't the issue so much as my ping goes up to about 11,000ms (yes, 11 seconds) during this "recovery" period.  That's pretty terrible for realtime chat, but I can try it out.  I'm interested in seeing how Khenal manages to avoid seriously harming his duelling partner, heh.  Oh, and have we advanced the three months again?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 10:51:08 pm
((Yes.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 26, 2011, 10:56:55 pm
"That guardpony who comes 'round all th' time? Aye, I know him. What's his angle? Surely he dunnae expect t'win ye over in a fight?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 10:59:18 pm
"I think he does, that's the problem! And Khenal seems to accept it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 26, 2011, 11:00:14 pm
((Impending, get on IRC already.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 26, 2011, 11:09:32 pm
*sigh*, "Th' gallant knight steps forward t'defend th' fair lady's honor in righteous battle."

Otik chuckles.

"Bucks. Dunnae they realize chivalry died an age ago?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 11:10:39 pm
"I just...What do I do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 26, 2011, 11:19:32 pm
"They're both a'least smart enough t'know not t'take this further than a duel. Let 'em have their lit'l battle. If that's that, then ye can go on an' forget all about it. If not... well, I couldnae tell ye. I've never personally had stallions fightin' over me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 11:21:02 pm
"I don't think they'll keep it just a duel. I'm really worried one of them might hurt, or even kill, the other!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 26, 2011, 11:31:08 pm
"give th'lads some credit, Fri. I seriously doubt either o' them actually means harm to th' other. But... if yer really worried, go an' ask Isos or yer father t'keep an ear to th' ground, just in case."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 11:31:53 pm
"Where is Dad at this time of day?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on December 26, 2011, 11:36:01 pm
Couth Darkmane watches the situation bemusedly. There are many pro's and con's to being a wraith, but the most mixed blessing is his corporeality. In light, Couth is nothing but a the voice in the back of the head, the chill in the spine, unable to do anything but cast magic and watch the world go by. In the pitch black, he is flesh and blood and alive, more alive than ever thanks to the Princess's "gifts". Was he happy Hugwax snatched up his soul and stuffed it into this semi-body with figurative strings attached? No. Was he complaining about the body's horn and wings? not at all.[i/]

"Hah, looks like Hiero has a death wish." Couth remarked. "oh, the stupid things we do for love."

"Maybe I should lend him a little boost? to kick a little sand in Khenal's arrogant face?" he pondered.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on December 26, 2011, 11:37:24 pm
"He should be..."

Otik ponders for a moment. A smile crosses her face.

"In th' arena, I believe. Yer lads wouldnae happen t'be having their duel there, would they?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 26, 2011, 11:50:05 pm
"Yes, probably. I'll go see if Dad knows. Bye, mum!"

Friesden hurries off to the arena.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 27, 2011, 10:59:54 am
((The following journal entries take place sometime after the dual between Khenal and Heiro. I'm going to continue on with the assumption that neither of them kill each other, should it matter in this session.))

Charity's Journal 26th Opal 99

I stopped in by my guard's barracks earlier to see how things were going. Unfortunatly, no one was there. But I found a note left by Falcata.

“Meet in the arena today colts. Madush, Osal, Bring combat bolts.”

Wondering what was up I headed down to the arena. I saw that Falcata was standing alone in the ring with a menagerie of caged critters, all set to be let loose with a single lever pull. She said to the others that she didn't expect to need help, but that if she did they were to use these beasties for target practice.

Bubbles was also on hand, just in case. It was he who pulled the lever.

Inside the cages was an elephant pony and three mandrills. Falcata lunged at one of the apes. She immediately crippled the ape, and then bashed it's head twice to end it. She then turned to another ape, hit it upside it's head, you could hear it's neck snap with the blow, then she caved it's skull in. The third and final ape started to run, but Falcata was faster and there was no place to hide in the arena. This one she broke the foot of for running and then gored it in the head with her horn.

The elephant pony however, wasn't as easy for Falcata to deal with. First she bucked and kicked it but could do nothing substantial. It tried to smash her but she rolled to her side, it could have hurt her when she was down but instead paniced and ran away again. She got up and with renewed passion, charged, the beast turned to flee and got struck in his guts by her hammer, the blow looked like it really hurt something inside. Falcata then stabbed the elephant pony with her horn and bite it's hide. The creature threw her off and she struck the retching thing several more times breaking a leg. The creature vomited on the floor and then Falcata smashed it's skull. Brains and blood mixed with vomit, and the whole room stank to the heavens, but I don't think she noticed, I've never seen Falcata smile quite like that before.

After chatting with Osal and Madush for a few minutes she left to go take a shower, leaving the mess for someponyelse to clean up.


Charity's Journal 14th Obsidian 99

The diplomat from the Rainbow's was spotted fleeing from a giant swarm of parasprites in the jungle. The Fortress Guard with help from Falcata's squad is fighting them off, trying to keep them away from him and from our surface crops.

((14th Obsidian, Falcata enter's a martial trance while hunting parasprites, then they all fly away and she gets no kills, before exiting the trance. Don't know if you want to do anything with that, but there you go.))

15th Obsidian, 99

A keishi pony, whom it seems thinks of himself as a Master Thief, fell into one of our animal cage traps. Starkey will be “interrogating” him in the arena soon I think.

Addendum: While the guard was busy dealing with the parasprite swarm, a group of diomedians was spotted by the river, torturing a poor little rabbit.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________
The alarm bell sounded from the tower. The guard immediately dropped what it was doing, this was what everypony had trained for. Cryptson, the Fortress Guard, and Falcata's squad set up positions in the Trade Depot, just under the ground. They would be the final line of defense. Inside the wall readied Starkey's ponies. Each ready to do their best. Otik took her few marksponies to the wall, and the time to wait had begun.

While the Diomedians, mulled about just out of crossbow range, suddenly from the south, a caravan from the Rainbow Ponies was spotted. They didn't see the ambush. We feared that the diomedian's would attack the caravan, but instead they spent their time taking shots at a Raindeer Bull that got stuck on the surface, it was a pet of Itur from Otik's squad.

The injured animal limped behind the fortress walls. Not inside of them, but on the far side. The Diomedians were apparently bored of hurting the animal and made for our gates. Bolts flew, but most of our bowponies had spent all their ammunition, keeping the parasprites away from the farms, while the Diomedian's bided their time. When they made for our gates, Cornbread forgot his training and flew over our walls to do combat with the enemy hoof to hoof. He beat one Keishi into a bloody mess as he tranced against another foe. At this point the ground squad charged the enemy.

The enemy took heavy casualties from the charge and began to route. The only pony down on our side was Itur, who had followed Cornbread out, but been less successful in the melee.

The route though turned out to be only a tactical retreat the enemy turned back into our ponies and with surprise injured Shigos in the leg before falling to our brave colts. The only surviving enemy a Darkbolt with a mace, flew off toward the east.

With the enemy routed, the caravan made their way inside unmolested. But the militia shall remain vigilant.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________

19th Obsidian 99

The ambush was dealt with but we have some injuries. Niether are all that bad, just a few broken legs between the two of them. Our doctors will have them walking around in no time.

With the militia still recovering from the first fight. The Isos volunteered her squad to escort the caravan from the capital inside. Fortunately they where not attacked.


22nd Obsidian 99

As if things weren't bad enough with everypony on edge expecting another attack Odur, that lazy good for nothing horsefly blacksmith has been possessed. 
((Just my luck. This guy is always on break when I want him to do something, and when he finally moods, it's a possession.))

27th Obsidian 99

Odur has finished his project. He can't remember how he did it, but he's made a wonderfully strong Adamantine cage, with spikes of Adamantine lined with maghgony wood. It's a work of beauty. I wonder if it's strong enough to hold these demons we seem to constantly attract, such as Schomoe and Psycho Carrot.

Charity's Journal 28th Obsidian 100

Happy new year! And Happy new Century!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 27, 2011, 12:19:57 pm
The buck, now rather drained of energy, could only hope that the royal pony was finished recovering from his foolish fighting. Or perhapes he was never wounded at all. Neverless, nothing annoyed the buck more that two ponies fighting for a foolish reason. No matter what, Falcatas... preformance with the Elephant pony was all that was needed to remind him that he was very, very lucky.  To be fair, in his mind, every pony here was touched by spirits, good or bad. That horrid little mare was mearly the worst off,

Walking down the halls, he kept the look-out for the forts only royal pony, for there was much to be discussed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 01:59:57 pm
((Jax and I did the fight on IRC, so here's a cleaned up transcription of it.))

Heiro and I walk out into the arena, hefting our training weapons.  I have a training spear and he has a training axe.  Looking across the arena, I try to defuse the situation one last time.

"So, this is going to happen? We can't just talk?"

"Not this time."  Is all Heiro says as he finishes examining the axe, looking ready to fight.  I sigh and raise my spear.

"Alright, if you insist."

Taking the words as a signal, we both fall into defensive stances, each waiting for the other to make the first mistake.  After a few moments, Heiro starts to slowly advance on me.

"You wont win without attacking." Heiro says around the axe handle.

"Hmm..."  'His stance is very good.  I need to startle him out of it...'

I suddenly flare my wings and raise my spear, hoping to startle Heiro out of his form.

Heiro ducks lower into his stance preparing for a blow.  I take the opportunity to maneuver around to Heiro's side, hoping to land a blow form an unexpected angle.  However, Heiro is too fast and quickly sweeps his axe around, turning his whole body to keep me in front of him.

"You've got to be quicker."

I can't help but smirk and banter.  "By twenty percent?"  I follow by spreading my wings and taking to the sky.  I said the arena had plenty of room, and I meant it.

Heiro, however, doesn't seem to be in the bantering mood.  "I told you to take this seriously." With that Heiro steps back, settling in to fend of an aerial strike.

"Misdirection." I telekinetically jab with my spear from ground level while Heiro is watching the sky.  Instead of moving to the side, Heiro jumps forward past the spear and brings his axe up again.  "Good now I can actually test you."

I land with Heiro between myself and my spear, flanking the pony.  My horn flashes as the spear dances, forcing Heiro to deal with attacks form both sides.  He quickly turns, putting me and my spear on his sides instead of in front and behind.  He blocks and dodges strikes from spear and hoof, before quickly rolling away. 

I quirk an eyebrow, impressed at his speed and skill.
  "You are much faster than I thought you would be." I punctuate my compliment with another slash, aimed at his forelegs.

"Thanks for that." Heiro stomps down on the spear haft to pin it to the ground.

'Well, I promised I'd give it my all...'  My horn flashes as I send my scouting spell to get a feel for Heiro's mindscape.  I release my hold on the spear as the spell reports back, and try to keep distance between myself and Heiro.

'Two points of interest, one active right now.  Those should be his Self and his Mind.  Here's hoping I've got this spell right...'


"You don't drop your weapon for no reason..." Heiro seems curious "What are you up to..."

My horn flashes again, sending a seeker construct with one mission: Slack Jaw.  I can feel the spell hit it's mark, but Heiro keeps his grip on his weapon.  Confused, I send another seeker with the same mission, hoping Heiro hasn't figured out what's happening.

'Maybe it hit his Self?  A simple hit to the jaw wouldn't do much to that.  Better try the other...'

It's Heiro's turn to smirk.
  "Heh, you can't beat her up that easily Khenal. Fight me straight!"

Looking panicked, I send a third spell at Heiro.  Moments later, my horn flares as I suddenly reassert my grip on the spear. The same spear that Heiro is standing on. It jerks upward quickly, sending Heiro over backwards.  As soon as Heiro's hooves leave the ground he spins his body landing on his hooves.  "That's what I'm talking about, fight!" Quickly turning, he charges full speed at Khenal preparing for a strike.

My horn glows as I hurry to bring my spear to bear against the charge.  I get the spear just in time, blocking the charge and sliding back a few feet from the impact. The weapons lock, and the eyes of the combatants meet.  Heiro grins, remembering the lesson Starkey was teaching when he entered.  He twists his axe, snapping the spear in two. "Now then what do you do?"

I take to the air again, smiling at Heiro.  "Misdirection. Where's the third spell?"

Heiro's forelegs suddenly start feeling numb, not wanting to take his weight.  "Dangit, Heiro!" Heiro's eyes flicker, and his demeanor returns to its normal state. "Wow you are good, I've never seen anypony beat her before. I think you win... can you let me up now?"

"Almost. Commander Starkey always taught me..."  My horn glows as I take the axe and gently tap Heiro on the forehead.  "...make sure the fight is over before letting your guard down."

I smile warmly at Heiro  "You are very good, my friend."

Heiro bounces to his feet. "Nah the fight was already over, Midnight said so. You really think I fight well?" He seems back to his normal exitable self at least.

"You do: in your head and on the field. Do you think I can protect Friesden now?"

"Definitely. Hmmm, Big sis agrees too. You better take care of her though. I can still be friends though, right?"

"Heh, you don't need my permission to be her friend. Like she said, she's her own pony and can make her own choices."

"What about us?"

"Of course we are friends, if you want to be?"

"Defenitly! You could teach us a lot of fighting stuff! You aren't mad at us though right?"

"I'm a bit annoyed that you thought this was the best way to go about it, but everything seems to have come out alright. Though, if you want lessons, Commander Starkey is your stallion."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 27, 2011, 03:02:02 pm
((Making up some dates here, not positive when Khenal got introduced as Falcata's new recruit, but she definitely has some thoughts on that day.  It's also going to be a bit of a stretch to work in her condition getting worse when she's gleefully slaughtering animals in the arena, but I think I can manage.  I'm also just a tad confused by some of the stuff Heiro says at the end of that fight there, but I'm sure there's some reason to it))

Falcata's Diary - 24th Opal, 99

Something happened today that I'd have never expected in a hundred years.  Lady Charity showed me who my new recruit was today: Khenal!  I thought I was going to fall out in the floor when he saluted me and called me captain.  It felt so wrong on so many levels, but I tried to keep my composure.  Didn't do a good job of it, I know I was grinning like a foal half the time.  Just the thought of working with Khenal again was enough to raise my spirits, but I don't really feel comfortable working over him.

I really don't want to let him down.  He was an excellent captain to me, and I'll never be that good.  He's a nice pony though, maybe he'll go easy on me.  At least he's professional about it, and he never let on that I was slipping up.

As if grinning and stumbling over myself wasn't embarrassing enough, we had a nice spar so I could get a feel for how much he still remembered about fighting.  He's excellent with his spear, which I had no doubt of.  That ended up with the two of us in the most awkward position imaginable when Lady Charity showed back up in the barracks.  I dearly hope she was joking when she alluded to the idea that we were doing something more than just sparring, and Lord Cryptson saw it all and knows we were just sparring.  Oh, sisters, if that rumor got around the fort, I'd never be able to look anypony in the eye here again.

26th Opal, 99

I decided today to test myself out against a few of our caged prisoners.  After my spar with Khenal a few days ago, I was absolutely exhausted, where he was barely winded.  He's a good bit larger than I am, and a strong stallion to boot, but I don't think I should have been that much worse off.  I brought Madush and Osal along with me to get a little target practice on live targets.  Shooting at the practice range doesn't compare.

I ended up doing about as well as I could have expected, taking out the prisoners without taking much more than a scratch here or there.  I forgot just how much fun it could be, and I think I got a little carried away.  I saw the duchess come by just as I was finishing things up, and when she caught sight of my expression she just smiled and chuckled to herself.  I hope she doesn't think I'm crazy now or something, it was just an amazing release of stress.

After the fight was over though, it was the same as with Khenal.  I was so tired I could barely keep my footing, and I never thought I'd be able to catch my breath.  It was all I could do to tell Madush and Osal to get in some practice and find somepony to clean up the mess I'd left behind.  I know if I'd tried I'd have probably ended up just adding to the vomit piles, if I didn't pass out altogether.

14th Obsidian, 99

I haven't seen parasprites in quite some time.  I also forgot just how annoying they could be.  A rainbow pony diplomat was found fleeing from a swarm of the things today, and the fortress guard was sent to deal with them.  I brought along the stallions under my command to help them out, since I knew it would be almost impossible to run the things down with just the guard.  That's when it happened.

When I was surrounded by the parasprites, I felt the world change around me.  A sort of primal rage filled me, a rage I haven't felt since two years ago in Coupledye, but I knew it was the same.  Time slowed as I swung at any parasprite that got too close, but even still I never managed to strike any.  It didn't seem to matter, after what must have been a horrifying display they fled into the woods, leaving the diplomat and most of the ponies around me slack jawed.  I tried to brush it off, and led my stallions and the diplomat back to the fortress.

Just like before, I never thought I was going to catch my breath.  I nearly blacked out after the rage left me.  I fear it's related to my deteriorating condition, I should see Dr. Bubbles about it soon.  If he thinks the end is getting close, I'll have no choice but to tell Kris.  I feel like such a horrible mother, I still haven't worked up the courage to tell her, especially when she seems so depressed all the time.

19th Obsidian, 99

Another season, another diomedian ambush.  I'm thankful that there were no fatalities this time, and only a few moderate injuries.  I'm secretly also thankful that we were stationed away from the conflict as a last line of defense.  I hate to not add our fighting strength to the battle, but I'd have only dragged us down and possibly gotten somepony else hurt or killed.

I've been having trouble breathing lately, and as a result I haven't gotten much sleep in the past few nights.  I keep waking up, feeling like I'm choking, and standing up is the only thing that helps.  Last night I had to sleep standing up, which did help, but even still it's pretty terrifying.  I spoke with Dr. Bubbles about it this morning, and after one look at my gums and some prodding of my sides he knew what it was.

My condition is getting worse.  Much worse.  Dr. Bubbles believes I'm bleeding internally from the rot, and I'm becoming anemic.  That coupled with a little fluid collecting around my lungs is making it hard to breathe.  It's only going to get worse, and at best I have a few weeks to live.  Probably less.

I don't think I can keep going on like this much longer.  It's not fair to the ponies under me in the royal guard.  I'm not fit to be their captain anymore.  I can't lead any sparring or demonstrations like this, and I can't put them off on just my account.  If I see the duchess tomorrow, I think I'll let her know I've gone as far as I can.  Khenal would make an excellent replacement for me, but Madush has seniority over him in the royal guard.  Osal doesn't want the job, I know.  I'll leave it up to Lady Charity on what to do there.

It's also not fair to Kris.  She deserves to know that I'm going to die soon, and I won't be with her much longer.  I already feel so guilty for leaving her so little notice.  I have to tell her tomorrow.  I have no choice.  I need to spend the little time I have left figuring out what to do with her once I'm gone.  Lady Charity offered a pension for her, I hope that option is still open.  Else I may have to send her off back to Coupledye to live with my brother or sister.  As much as I fear her living here without me, I fear sending her back through the wilds, even under escort, as much.  I don't know what to do.


((Another planned short diary entry, another chapter from a novel.  And that's that, it's time to get Falcata living resolved.  I think I've stretched her lingering on long enough.  I just hope the little stuff I've planned with Dsarker, Khenal and The Master pans out before she bumps into the duchess.  Not sure if Charity would just hand the position back to her if she resigned and got better.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 03:34:28 pm
Friesden's Diary

(This entry has several tear stains on it)
Please, Sisters, let the rumours I've heard be false. I've finally reached happiness. Don't let it be taken away from me. I'm not sure how I'll go on if they're true.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 27, 2011, 05:40:45 pm
Sending out a moderate wave of magic, the buck attempts to locate the Alicorn with the intent to confront him. Knowing that he was recruted into the guard, he saunters off to that area of the fort in hopes of finding him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 05:41:05 pm
Friesden sat just outside the arena, her eyes closed while she waited for the fight to end. As she heard the sounds of battle cease, she opened her eyes. There was Khenal and Heiro, and her heart started to soften, before she hardened it again. No. She had to stop this now.

She flew into the arena.

"Khenal...." she said, disappointment in her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 05:44:56 pm
'Friesden!  Wait, that wasn't a happy "Khenal..."'

Sheepishly, I turn to face Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 05:49:53 pm
"Khenal...why did you fight him? You're better than this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 27, 2011, 05:53:52 pm
Heiro looks at the two "Hey Freisden, you're not gonna get mad at Khenal now are you? He didn't do anythin'" even Heiros voice has changed slightly. He sounds younger, more colt-like than like a full grown stallion.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 05:56:46 pm
Friesden raises a hoof, indicating to Heiro that he should perhaps be silent.

"Khenal, it was wrong of you to fight him. What he said were just words. They matter not a jot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 06:03:12 pm
"They were just words, but he meant them, Friesden.  I don't doubt for a moment that he really would have fought me in the dining hall.  I would rather not have to fight, you know that.  But sometimes, it has to happen."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 06:04:54 pm
"No, it doesn't! They were just words, and it doesn't matter if he meant them or not. They were just noises, drifting on the wind."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 27, 2011, 06:09:25 pm
"Um, Friesden, please don't be mad... I don't want to get Khenal in trouble..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 06:11:12 pm
"I'm not mad. I'm scared for him. Khenal, every day you go out and put your life on the line for everypony here. Every day I wait at the hospital, worried that you won't be coming home. Don't make me do the same because another pony wants to fight you. I don't want to lose you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 27, 2011, 06:13:34 pm
Pokonic, passing the arena, notices that perhapes he was wrong, and the two bucks where still going at it. Seeing a shape he nocied was familer, he was rather shockd to see the blasted mare land near the royal buck. Seeing no better timeing than now, he slowly walks over to the arena, preparing to finaly talk to the buck after he convered with the mare.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 06:17:14 pm
"Khenal..." There are tears in Friesden's eyes now. "I couldn't bear to lose you, especially just over me. Don't let it happen again...Please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 06:20:11 pm
"There is no such thing as 'just' words.  Every last one conveys meaning.  Some are happy, some sad, some material things and more and more.  Sometimes they are simple noise, but not these ones, Friesden.  Are they just sounds when I say 'I love you'?  Of course not, I mean every syllable!  When Heiro said he wanted to fight, he meant them as well."

I deflate a bit, trying not to yell in my passion.

"I love you so much, Friesden, and I hate to make you scared like this.  I promise I won't duel again."

I lean down to embrace her, to reassure her, to reassure myself that she's alright.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 06:26:14 pm
Friesden leans into the embrace.

"I know you won't. My love...I still love you above all."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 27, 2011, 06:38:58 pm
"Um, Friesden... are you mad at me? Y...you hate me now don't you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 06:41:19 pm
Friesden turns to Heiro.

"No! I...I just don't want anypony to get hurt. Especially... especially over me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 27, 2011, 06:43:40 pm
"Freisden... nopony was going to get hurt, big sis told you so, remember? I would never want to hurt Khenal, that would hurt you too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 06:45:42 pm
"I don't want you to get hurt, either! I'm just....so worthless... I don't want anypony to get hurt because of me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 06:47:28 pm
"You are not worthless, Friesden.  You are the kindest pony I've ever known."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 06:48:23 pm
"I...I just..." She dissolves into tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 27, 2011, 06:50:30 pm
"Hey! never say you're worthless again! You're worth more than a whole lotta so called important ponies. Never... never." Heiro stopps looking embarrassed and upset. "I... I just... don't."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 06:54:31 pm
I simply hold my love, knowing she had a point about words.  In this case, words would just be more noise.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 06:56:26 pm
Friesden just continues sobbing onto Khenal.

"I'm- I'm sorry! I'm sorry, Khenal! I'm sorry, Heiro!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 27, 2011, 06:59:54 pm
Heiro just stands close, wanting to comfort Friesden, but worried about going too far. So he just stands there, hoping he hasn't done something irreversible.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 07:01:44 pm
"It's alright, Friesden.  Just know that you are very precious.  Not just to me and Heiro, but to Starkey, Lilac and Otik, and more besides."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 07:04:05 pm
“I'm just a pegasus mare...million more where I came from...”
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 07:06:03 pm
"There's only one Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 27, 2011, 07:07:34 pm
Heiro finally finds his courage, and joins the embrace "There isn't a single other like you... don't think your replicable. not to any of us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 07:08:31 pm
“I'm sorry...”
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 27, 2011, 07:33:20 pm
Staring at the sight, something clicks in Pokionic: The mares not his friend, but his lover.

This was going to be a whole lot worse than what he expected. A whole lot worse.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 07:40:37 pm
“Can you forgive me?”
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 08:14:47 pm
"I would forgive you anything, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 27, 2011, 08:16:47 pm
"Heh, you haven't done anything wrong, Come on give me a smile huh?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 08:18:17 pm
“Even me not forgiving myself?”
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 27, 2011, 08:20:05 pm
((Time to get started on this, I'll be back on in a couple of hours after I post this, I hope))

Kris sat silently in her room, trying to decide what to do.  Her pillow would normally be damp by now, as it had been the past dozen times she started thinking about her mom, but she had apparently cried herself out about it.  Maybe she was coming to accept it.  Her pillow only had a few spots from her tears this time.

She sat up and hopped down from the bed.  She stepped over to the cabinet and sifted through it until she found the small cloth bag she was looking for.  Inside, she counted twenty bits: all of the money she had to her name, saved up over the two years she had been here.  If nopony here in Glitterglen could or would do anything for her mom, then it was up to her to do something.

She took the bag and placed it in the saddlebag on her side.  There was a caravan outside, she had heard, and maybe somepony there could help her.  Would it cost more than twenty bits?  She'd trade everything she had to help her mom.

She hesitated at the doorway.  Maybe.... maybe she should go talk to Mr. Khenal instead.  Her mom seemed to think he was the best mage in Glitterglen, and he was really nice.  He would help, she knew.  But, her mom told her not to bother him, and if she told him what was wrong, he'd tell her mom.  Maybe... maybe she could get him to teach her some magic.  She learned how to do the pain control spell pretty easily.  Based on the nasty things her mom had written on the scroll, it must have taken her a long time to figure it out.  Maybe Mr. Khenal could teach her something, she didn't have to tell him why she wanted to learn.  Maybe she could figure the rest out.

A frown drifted onto her face as she shut the door and headed for the entrance.  Maybe she would run into Lilac.  She really, really felt like she needed to talk to somepony, but her mom obviously didn't want to talk about it.  Why... why had she lied to her?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 08:24:10 pm
"Of course.  Can you do the same for me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 08:26:44 pm
“I'd do anything for you, Khenal, my love. You know that. Even if you hurt me...or, Sisters forbid, killed me...I'd be the first to forgive you.”
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 08:46:40 pm
"Sisters forbid it ever happen."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 08:47:42 pm
“But...yes. I forgive you everything and anything.”
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 27, 2011, 09:27:52 pm
Pokionic, now more than a little embarresed at eavesdropping on such a tender moment, now stops being peaved and saunters into the arena, looking at everything exept for the ponies in the ring.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 10:15:08 pm
I slowly move from whispering in her ear to looking her in the eyes.  "I love you."  I murmur, before passionately kissing my love, trying to let her know without words how so very valuable and irreplaceable she is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 10:22:45 pm
Friesden returns the kiss, holding both the ponies tight in her hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 27, 2011, 11:28:28 pm
Kris is knocked down as Lilac bursts through the door that Kris had just started to open.
"There you are Kris! I was looking all over for you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 27, 2011, 11:30:55 pm
"Err, sir? I need a few moments with you, magical matters, you see." The buck said in a rather pleading voice to the kissing couple, knowing that the Alicorn may understand the issue at hand.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 11:31:43 pm
Friesden refuses to loosen her grip on Khenal, even tightening it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 27, 2011, 11:32:46 pm
Kris stumbles backward onto her haunches as Lilac bowls into her.  She shakes her head to clear it and looks up to her.

"Huh?  What?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 27, 2011, 11:36:23 pm
"I WAS- oh my...are you alright?" Lilac asks, noticing the tear stains on Kris's face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 11:36:42 pm
I ignore the new pony, lost in the lips and embrace of my love.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 27, 2011, 11:38:38 pm
"Uhh, sir? Its about the currant infestation of evil in the fort."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 27, 2011, 11:39:47 pm
"I..." she trails off, wiping her eyes clear again.

"No!"  She gets up and latches onto Lilac.  "Oh, Lilac!  You were right!  Those months ago in the hospital!  You were right!  My mom... she..."  Tears begin to form in her eyes again, despite all the crying she's done already.  "She is dying!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 27, 2011, 11:41:13 pm
"Oh Kris...I warned you..." Lilac embraces Kris in a hug.
"It'll be alright, trust me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 11:41:52 pm
Even as Friesden hears the words Pokionic speaks, she loosens her grip on Khenal, and breaks off the kiss.

With a sad smile on her face, she says "Duty before pleasure, I guess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 27, 2011, 11:45:24 pm
Kris tightens her grip for a moment before releasing Lilac and falling back onto her haunches.  She looks down and tries to stifle the tears.

"I... I don't know what to do!  She wrote in her diary that Dr. Bubbles can't help her!  Nopony here is trying to help her..."

She motions to her saddlebag.  "I've got all of my money with me.  I... was going down to the caravan to see if anypony there could help her.  If not... I thought maybe Mr. Khenal could.  She wrote that he doesn't know.  He's a powerful mage... but if I tell him, he'll tell her, and she doesn't know I know, and..." she says, twisting her words together hysterically.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 27, 2011, 11:48:25 pm
"Relax...I've lost everything I held dear, so if anypony is going to cry, it's going to be me. I'll go to Khenal and see if he can help, and you can go to the caravan to find somepony who can help too!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 27, 2011, 11:48:45 pm
I return the sad smile.  "It wouldn't be so bad if Duty could keep to the hours of my shift."

I give Friesden a quick nuzzle before standing to address the new pony.

"Have you talked to the Guard?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 27, 2011, 11:51:03 pm
I don't know what I'm going to do with him. I love him completely...but the things I heard the other guards talking about... I guess maybe I'm not worth loving... Friesden thinks to herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 27, 2011, 11:53:03 pm
Kris nods and sniffles.  "I... already lost my daddy.  I don't want to lose my mom too..."  A small smile forms on her face as she stands.  "Alright, I'll go to the caravan and see if I can find a doctor or somepony.  If not, I'm sure Khenal can help.  He helps everypony, mom says."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 27, 2011, 11:55:06 pm
" I believed the things I am asking would be best discussed with the best magi in the fort, in all honestly. It involves no pony in this room directly, in any case."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 28, 2011, 12:02:04 am
"Good luck!"
Lilac heads off to find Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 12:03:25 am
I glance to Heiro, my intention clear:  Your friend is sad, be there for her.

I sigh, turning to this strange unicorn.


"I guess that'd be me then.  I am Khenal, what's your name?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 12:08:41 am
Heiro looks at friesden "Well if Khenal has to work then... you want to go for a walk? I should probably apologize for how I was actin... but let's start over yeah? come on!" he steps back bouncing up and down like an exited colt, trying to get a smile from his freind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 12:08:50 am
"Pokonic, actually. Master gemsetter and ritual magi, in order of importance in a fort such as this." He smiles, "And I do believe that there are some events I need to be filled in on, mostly about your little marefriend." The last part was not said with his mouth, but directly spoken into the Alicorns mind..
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 12:10:20 am
Friesden slowly follows Heiro out, with a last sad smile at Khenal as she leaves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 12:12:35 am
"So where you wanna go? I've been here for a while but I still don't know where most of the stuff is. I can be a bit directionally challenged..." 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 12:14:26 am
"Err...um...Wherever you want to go is fine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 12:19:10 am
I watch Friesden go, saddened that I can't go with her.  'Like she said: Duty calls...'

I quirk an eyebrow at Pokonic, then lower my voice so only he can hear.


"She is my love, and I'll thank you to stay out of my head, Pokonic."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 12:21:07 am
"Well... how about the tower? I don't think I've ever been on top. Ummm It's this way right?" he starts off down the hall towards where he thinks the tower is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 12:23:55 am
"If you merely talk to me, alicorn, than I would love nothing more than to never do that again. Please, were would you go in order to have a private conversation? I would like to have a talk with you about many subjects, foremost about why I need to help you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 12:26:48 am
"Okay." Friesden follows Heiro to the tower, her face brightening as she does.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 12:27:07 am
Being called Alicorn instead of my name does nothing to lighten my mood.

"Please, just Khenal.  We should be able to talk in my carpentry shop, unless you have a better place to talk?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 12:29:23 am
The buck seems happier. "Well, I do have a nice gemsetters area, but please, Khenal, lead the way."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 12:29:54 am
"Haha so you can smile! big sis was startin to doubt me. Well hmm somethin to talk about... well anythin you wanna know?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 12:32:25 am
I lead Pokonic to the carpentry shop, attempting some small talk along the way.

"So... how long have you been in Glitterglen, Pokonic?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 12:33:14 am
She quivers.

"Something...there's something I'm not sure I want to know," she whispers as the smile fades away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 12:34:01 am
Kris had never been around the caravans so close before.  She'd never had any reason to.  Although she felt a bit odd coming up to the surface without her mom, with so many ponies around it should be safe.  Oh, her mom would be so mad at her if she knew what she was doing...

She looked at all of the ponies hauling things around to temporary shops and tried to figure out where to begin.  What exactly was she even looking for?  A doctor?  Would there even be one here?  These all just looked like ponies selling stuff.

She walked past a strange looking pony with a tentacle draping from her head instead of a horn like hers.  The sight sent a chill down her spine as she rememberd that day in the woods with Lilac.  The tentacle pony didn't seem to be interested in her, but she scuttled along anyway, there wasn't a lot of time to be wasting.

Finally, among the stalls she saw something that caught her eye.  Not a doctor, but a unicorn like her with stacks of books.  She even saw the twisting serpentine pattern that seemed to decorate so many medical books she'd seen in the hospital.  Maybe this would be what she was looking for!  She hurried over to the stall with a small grin edging onto her face and started taking a look at the books.  There were even some books on magic.  Even healing magic!  Her spirits began to rise as her eyes darted from one to the next.  Which should she get?  Where should she start?  Could she afford them?

"Can I help you, miss?"  the unicorn stallion asked her, noticing her sifting through the stacks.

"Oh, I, uh... I was looking for some books on healing magic."

The unicorn nodded and stepped over to her, pointing out a few with his hoof.  "What were you looking for in particular?  Basics?  Surgical techniques?"  He raised an eyebrow and looked down at her.  "Wait a moment, who is this for?"  That hadn't even crossed her mind.  Should she tell him she wanted it, or somepony else?  The unicorn smiled and knelt beside her.  "I hope you aren't planning on trying this stuff youself.  You're just a little filly, this is grown up stuff."

"B-but... it's..."

He noded again and leaned in close.  "I know, you're interested.  But this is dangerous stuff.  Even if you have the best of intentions, you could really hurt somepony or even kill them with this kind of magic, if you don't know what you're doing."

She looked away.  Oh, she hadn't thought about that either... if she hurt her mom more instead of helping her...  But nopony else was going to help her.  She had to try.  "It's for Dr. Bubbles," she lied.

The unicorn stood and thought for a moment.  "Oh, alright.  The books are seventy bits apiece.  How much did he send up?"

Her face darkened.  She didn't have nearly enough... "I... don't have that much..."  She reared up on him and pleaded, "B-but I'll trade something!  I have a really nice scarf back home, let me run get it..."

He restrained her and shook his head.  "No, no... I thought you were getting it for yourself."  He smiled.  "It's too dangerous, I'm sorry.  If you bring Dr. Bubbles up, then I'd be happy to talk with him about it though."

"Oh... okay..."

Kris turned away and slowly plodded back toward the entrance.  She clearly couldn't do that.  She didn't have enough money, and nopony would sell it to her even if she did.  And they were right... she didn't want to hurt her mom more.  Her lip trembled, but there were no tears left to cry.  She dearly hoped Lilac was having more success than her.

"I'm sorry, mom..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 28, 2011, 12:34:10 am
Lilac finds Khenal at last, panting and sweating as she comes up to him.
"There...you...are...Khenal...I..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 12:36:35 am
"What? you don't have to be afraid of me Friesden. Go ahead ask! Just don't be sad anymore OK?" Heiro seems worried... the last thing he wants is Friesden afraid to ask him something, afraid of anything to do with him for that matter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 12:36:59 am
*Bubbles stepped to the pony that had told Kris to go get him.*
"Hello. I'm looking for any medical books that have anything to do with rot treatment. Magic, pills, tablets, anything!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 12:37:20 am
"Oh, a year or two. It realy has been a blur to me, realy. However, I will say that I have spent the better part of my days among a small camp along the western part of the kingdom, and quite a few among the zebras. Some of the better ones, actualy, where among the zebras.


 I have a question for you, too, for it relates to the subject at hand: were there any other Royals in your family, Khenal?"

And then another pony runs near the pair.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 12:39:03 am
"Its...its about Khenal."

Her voice drops to the slightest whisper. "Promise me you won't tell anypony, please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 12:42:45 am
"Of course. You can trust me with anything Friesden." Now Heiro was nervous, if there was something up with Khenal... but He stopped his thoughts there, He should wait to hear what Friesden had to say first. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 12:43:29 am
"Well... Lilac?  What are you so out of breath for?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 12:44:01 am
The unicorn looks up to Dr. Bubbles as he approaches.  "Oh, hello doctor.  I see the young one was telling the truth after all."

He ponders the statement for a moment and raises a hoof to his chin.  "That's a pretty unusual request."  He pulls out a fairly large hardback tome and says, "This is the only one I have that might be related.  It's a book with some techniques on curing serious diseases and infections.  Mostly spells though."

((Dr. Bubbles is an earth pony, right?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 28, 2011, 12:44:30 am
"I...looking...you...Falcata..." Lilac losses her balance and falls over.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 12:44:57 am
"I..."

Her voice drops into the whisper again.

"I think he's been walking out with Falcata..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 12:48:00 am
*Bubbles shuffles through the pages.*
"This will be perfect. How much will it cost?"
((Yep, but I have something planned.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 12:48:25 am
The buck attempts to slow the fall of the mare with weak levitation magic, and looks deadpan into the eyes of the alicorn next to him and says, "This is the sort of stuff that we need to talk about, actualy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 12:49:26 am
"What... why would you think that? If Khenal was willing to deal with me because of you I doubt he would..." he pauses seeming to listen to something that isn't there "Oh right... Well anyway what makes you think he's walking out? Maybe I can help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 12:50:26 am
"I...I heard the guards talking about it. I...I just don't know what to do..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 12:50:46 am
I turn my head to the side, confused.

"What about Captain Falcata?  Do you know something about her, Pokonic?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 28, 2011, 12:52:42 am
"She's dying!" Lilac splutters.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 12:53:31 am
"Well... normally..."  He smiles.  "Well, I told that little filly a few minutes ago seventy bits, so I'll leave it at that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 12:54:11 am
"That, actualy. Knew that something bad was going on, but did not know the details."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 12:54:51 am
*Bubbles puts eighty bits in the unicorn's hoof*
"Here's eighty. Keep the change."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 12:55:29 am
"Ah, thank you doctor.  And do send my apologies to that little filly, I thought she was being untruthful with me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 12:56:01 am
"The guards? Odd... oh wait those rumors? Have you asked Falcata about it? I don't know how she fights, but there are any number of moves that could be perfect fertilizer for rumors if somepony walked up at the wrong time." Heiro was sure that Khenal wouldn't be... but still bluntly telling Friesden that she was wrong would probably just make her clam up... and that would do more to hurt the situation than help...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 12:56:28 am
"It's no problem."
*Bubbles walks back into the fortress, looking for Khenal.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 12:56:39 am
"She's what?!  How?  Since when?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 12:58:41 am
*Bubbles hears the sound of Khenal's voice echoing through the halls.*
"Kheeeenalll? Where are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 12:59:02 am
“I'm just being a silly filly...aren't I?”
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 01:00:24 am
"Oh joy, at this rate I will be speaking with Charity by the end of the night." Pokonic facehoofed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 28, 2011, 01:04:43 am
"SINCE MONTHS AGO!! HER STOMACH IS ROTTING, YOU DIDN'T KNOW?!?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 01:04:59 am
"Friesden, I'll admit I don't know Khenal very well yet, but there is one thing I'm sure of. He loves you with everything he has. But... if you're still worried we can go back and find him. I'm sure it's just a rumor, but letting a worry like that stick around isn't good."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 01:06:12 am
"Can we?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 01:06:46 am
"Dr. Bubbles?  Over here!  Sorry Pokonic, but ponies currently in life-and-death situations trump a talk.  You can follow if you like, especially if you think you can help.  Bubbles!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 01:08:47 am
*Bubbles walks to the sound of his voice.*
"Hello? Khenal! I found this book... It may have to answer to saving Falca..."
*Bubbles stops talking, filled with outrage.*
"You!" he says, pointing a hoof at Pokionic


((Modkilled. Hurrah!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 01:09:32 am
"Of course! Don't worry, I'll stay right with you. come on he can't have gone far from the arena" Heiro turns back "Ummm, which way was the arena again?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 01:09:59 am
"I know a spell that knocks one out without harm. Ment for surgeries and the like. Does that count as helpful?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 01:11:12 am
"Ummm...I think it was...this way."

Friesden leads him back to the arena, conveniently coming via the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 01:12:53 am
"I think it does, especially if you have medical training.  Bubbles, Falcata's stomach is rotting!  Can anything be done?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 01:22:41 am
"Well which way do you think Khenal went? If it was busness then..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 01:29:02 am
((Khenal has full control of Bubbles until I get back. Make sure what I see is insane!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 01:30:32 am
Dr Bubbles pulls the new book from his bags to show Khenal.  "With any luck, yes!"

I turn towards the main stair well.

"Then lets get moving!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 28, 2011, 01:33:18 am
"WAIT!!!!!! FALCATA IS IN THE BARRACKS!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 01:35:00 am
Khenal notices Kris moping up the stair well as he turns to it.  She starts as she notices him and steps back a bit.  Should she tell him about her mom?  She notices Lilac and instead stammers something incoherent.  "Muh... Mr. Khenal... I..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 01:36:57 am
"Hey did you hear that yelling? Maybe he's this way!" Heiro stars bouncing off towards the stairs making sure Friesden is following
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 01:37:53 am
Hearing ponies move down the hallway, the buck runs over in that direction to alert them of the situation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 01:38:30 am
Friesden follows Heiro, and they run into sight of Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 01:40:53 am
"Wait! Your his marefriend, right! Come this way!" the buck futily shows the pair running down the hall the direction of the stairs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 01:42:16 am
I skid to a stop in front of the little filly, then kneel down to look her in the eyes.  It's obvious she's been crying, and it's easy to guess why.

"Don't worry, Kris.  I promise we'll do everything we can to help Capt... your Mom get better."

Hearing Heiro and Friesden, I stand.

"Friesden!  Falcata is in trouble and needs your help!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 01:43:27 am
Friesden takes a deep breath.

"I need to ask you something first, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 01:44:04 am
Kris looks surprised that Khenal knew what was on her mind so easily, and was so confident that he could help.  A small smile forms on her face as she sniffles.  "Oh, thank you Mr. Khenal... I knew you would help..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 01:44:49 am
"So, should I use that spell or not?" The buck asked the medicalpony," because it might give us time to create a solution to this mess."

Looking closer, he notes "Well, she seems to be rather fine to me," as he charges up his horn with purple energy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 01:48:02 am
I again tilt my head, confused.

"What do you need to ask, Friesden?

Bubbles looks at Pokonic and shrugs.  "Maybe when we get there.  I want to get another good look at her before anything is cast on her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 01:49:39 am
"I...I don't care what the answer is... Just that you tell me the truth."

She breathes in again. "Are you...are you stepping out with Falcata?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 01:51:19 am
"Okay, sir. I am, after all, just the pony with the horn and the magic."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 01:54:52 am
I continue looking confused for a moment, unsure what Friesden means.  When it finally does sink in, my eyes widen in shock.  My face serious, I look Friesden directly in the eyes so that she can search them herself for any hint of falsehood.

"No.  You are the only mare for me, Friesden.  I would never do something like that to you, I swear it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 01:57:43 am
Friesden looks deep into Khenal's eyes, and sees the truth behind them.

Tears aain forming from her eyes, she runs to Khenal and tackle hugs him.

"I'm sorry Khenal, for ever doubting you! Please, forgive me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 01:59:17 am
"heh I'm glad that worry is outta the way at least. Now why exactly is everypony on the stairs?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 01:59:33 am
"Uh, guys? Dont we have a dieing mare to deal with? I mean, not to kill this moment, but this charge is killing my horn and I want to use it badly."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 02:03:34 am
I hold my love in my hooves, happy for the reunion even after only a few minutes.

"I said I would forgive you anything, Friesden, and I meant it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:05:08 am
"Then...then let us go off to help her now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 02:07:40 am
"Err, theres a mare with rotten guts and there are evil spirits all over the place. I hate to break up another tender moment, but will you two hurry up, kiss or something, so everyone can get back to there lives?"


Hearing what the mare says, he adds "Well, at least the mare knows whats the main issue at hand."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 02:15:02 am
PLEASE SEE HERE: RETCON (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=93121.msg2861282#msg2861282)

We've had a bit of an upset, and nothing that happens as of this post up until the one I linked actually happened.  PLEASE GO READ THAT POST.  AND THE PM YOU HAVE / WILL BE GETTING.

Spoiler: RETCON (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 02:16:38 am
"Now can I knock her out? Pleeaassee?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:17:05 am
Friesden follows the group in, staying in behind them.

Even the unicorn stallion knew how worthless she was...how could she be hiding it from Khenal so? How could he love her so?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 02:17:30 am
I carefully extend a foreleg to tap Falcata on the side.

"Um, Falcata?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 02:18:18 am
"Wow, she is in bad shape... should we get her to a bed?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 02:19:42 am
She jerks her head up with a startled grunt.  "Huh... wha?"  She looks over to see Khenal staring at her, and realizes she's fallen asleep.  And long enough for the rest of the recruits to show up for training.

"Oh... Khenal... I..." she begins weakly, blinking the sleep from her eyes and trying to clear her mind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 02:21:46 am
"Everypony, stand back! This mare is going to sleep whether you like it or not!" A gout of purple magic envelopes the staggering mare.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 02:23:20 am
"Falcata, we're here to try to help.  We know about...your stomach."

The magic of Pokonic suddenly flys past me and envelopes Falcata.

"What the buck?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 02:24:31 am
Heiro gives Pokonic a good smack on the head "What do you think you're doing! Pull something like that again and I'll arrest you here and now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 02:26:12 am
"Dont. Touch. It! The mare will be stablised for a short time, and nothing is going to happen to her! Think of it a nice, long sleep, pain relive and all. Give me a few seconds, and than we can work on intensive healing!" Noticably, the area where the buck hit him seemed to bruise quickly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 02:26:49 am
Falcata's expression grows grave as she hears Khenal speak, only to have her response be cut short by Pokon's magic.  She fights against the magic with the constitution that has brought her this far, and scarcely maintains her consciousness long enough for Heiro to smack him, breaking the spell.  She staggers a step backward and lets out a weak moan, gasping for air as she tries to recover.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:27:03 am
Friesden squeaks in fear at the sound of the slap and turns away, muttering under her breath "nothing bad will happen nothing bad will happen nothing bad will happen sisters protect me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 02:27:53 am
I round on Pokonic, eyes cold with fury.

"You will sit the buck down and let the ponies with actual bucking medical training decide what to do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 02:28:49 am
"Freisden? It's all right, calm down..." turning to Pokonic "you need to stop doing anything untill you are asked."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:30:20 am
Friesden squeaks once more at the fury in Khenal's voice and continues muttering feverishly under her breath "everything will turn out right everything will turn out right everything will turn out right everything will turn out right."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 02:32:26 am
With a ragged breath, he turns around and mutters "Fine. Let her suffer some more, and then tell me when your ready to fix her organs. I will be sitting over there. Recovering. " Noticably, the bruise  somehow rised to the surface, and is now a blatent open wound.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 02:32:32 am
"Friesden?" Heiro moves closer trying to comfort her "Please just calm down, everythings fine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 02:34:28 am
Falcata collapses onto her haunches, resting her head against a hoof.  Her breathing is labored as she fights off the lethargy brought on by Pokonic's magic.  "Wh... what... happened?" she manages between breaths.  Kris squeaks something and cowers behind Friesden and Heiro.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 02:35:58 am
I continue glaring at Pokonic as he goes to sit down.  After a few moments, I try to calm myself.  Once calmed, I try to talk to Friesden.

"Friesden?  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 02:36:28 am
Turning to Kris, Heiro says softly "Hush little one everything is going to be fine I'm sure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:37:38 am
Friesden puts her hooves over her head and covers her face with her wings and continues muttering.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 02:38:21 am
((I hate my life sometimes. Trip was canceled, I'm taking back control of Bubbles.))
Bubbles turns and glares at Pokonic
"You. Will. Stop. BUCKING. Trying. To. Kill. My. FRIENDS!"
Bubbles turns back to Falcata and turns the book to the page that says how to deal with rot.

((Ninja'd. Twice. Thrice. FOUR TIMES!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 02:39:04 am
Kris looks up to Heiro and makes a small nod before her eyes fix back on her mom.

Falcata performs a few wet coughs, still resting her head in her hoof.  The faintest traces of blood can be seen in her mouth, agape as she continues to pant.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 02:42:10 am
"Bubbles, I was not trying to kill her, I was trying to ease her pain! Look at her! She is praticly liquid on the inside! She is sloshing around! Unless she is comatose, she will last a few more moments, tops! Let me continue my spell, else you will have a dead guardspony on your hoofs!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 02:42:19 am
Heiro smiles slightly "Friesden please calm down, Kris needs somepony to keep her calm, and you can help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:44:50 am
"nopony is going to die nopony is going to die nopony is going to die nopony is going to die nopony is going to die nopony is going to die."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 02:45:19 am
I kneel down in front of Friesden.

"Friesden?  Are you alright?  Please, say something."

I shakily reach out a forehoof to touch her, trying to reassure her that there's no danger to her here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:46:47 am
"Ah!" she squeals and falls backward, her wings and legs getting tangled....


"Ahhhh!" she screams in pain as she rolls over one of her wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 02:46:58 am
Bubbles turns back to Pokionic.
"You think I don't know that? I know just as well as you do what the spell will do to her. You said it yourself. She's liquid on the inside. You think I wouldn't have found that out after tending to her for a whole BUCKING YEAR? YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU, CASTING MAGIC WITHOUT ANY POINT TO IT! HER STOMACH IS ROTTEN, IN CASE YOU HAVEN'T NOTICED!"
Bubbles calms himself and turns to Falcata.
"Falcata, do you trust me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 02:48:57 am
"Friesden!" Heiro quickly picks her up. 'Umm Khenal her wing looks OK right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 02:49:44 am
Falcata looks up to Bubbles weakly and nods her head.  "Yes... doctor... I trust... you..." she says between deep breaths.  Her breathing is finally beginning to even out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 02:50:25 am
"Friesden!"

My horn flashes as I levitate her gently out of Heiro's grip, hoping she isn't hurt.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:52:31 am
"Oww oww oww oww OWW!" screams Friesden as her wing droops across the ground, clearly at an unnatural angle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 02:52:45 am
"I think she broke her wing. Darnit I don't know anything about medicine. Grr I should lock that Pokonic up just on general principals."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:54:14 am
"Khenal...Khenal...Shall we go to the dance together, Khenal? Mother's ever so worried about you, Khenal, but I do love you, Khenal," Friesden says slurringly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 02:54:48 am
I look at Friesden, helpless.

"What... what do I do, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 02:55:02 am
"Truly, twenty years training to be a ritual mage and five more among zebrakind payed off in the end." The pony snarks, seeing the incident happen before his eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:56:11 am
"You...You take me to the dance, silly!" She laughs a bit, and the pain seems to return. "Khenal, my wing hurts, Khenal, what's happened? We were on our way to the dance, Khenal, what's happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 02:57:48 am
"D-Dance?  You fell on your wing.  I... I think it's broken.  What do I do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 02:59:50 am
"No, silly! It can't be broken! I've never even scratched it!" She giggles, like a little filly making a joke. "Where are we, Khenal? I can't see the dance hall anywhere!" She laughs again. "We don't have to go away to be happy together, Khenal. We can cuddle anywhere. Who cares about Mother?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 03:01:42 am
"Okay, Khenal. I actualy have a spell for this, but it involves fire and souls. This time, I am asking your opinon on casting the bucking spells. The tock. Is. Ticking, Khenal, and we have two ponies in desperate need of help." Pokonic grins. Widly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 03:05:40 am
"Khenal, remember the flowers we picked? They were beautiful, all white and red and blue. All sorts of wonderful colours and flowers and trees and all the beauty in the world. So beautiful. Do you remember them, Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 03:06:52 am
'Friesden needs help!  Bubbles is the doctor, get him!'

My horn flares as I telekinetically grab Dr. Bubbles away from Pokonic and bring him over to Friesden and myself.


"Wing!  Broken!  Fix!  Gimme that book, I'll help Falcata!  Just save Freisden!"

I roughly drop Bubbles as I grab the book, then ever so gently set down Friesden so Bubbles can get to work.

'He's an expert, she'll be fine!'

Looking very much like a madpony, I walk over to Falcata, brandishing the book of medicinal magic.  Pokonic mentions something about fire and souls, that sounds bad.


"No!  No fires or souls or whatever that is!  No spells unless Bubbles says so, he's a doctor!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 03:08:43 am
"Pokionic. You better not mess this up. I give you permission to cast ONLY your sleep spell on Friesden. Then Hiero may bring her to the hospital. This is your last chance. Don't waste it. If you mess up... Well. I'll just say I will personally see to it that you leave and never return."
Bubbles gets dragged over the Khenal and Friesden.
"Khenal, a broken wing isn't serious. I can fix it in under an hour. Right now we both have to help Falcata. It's the only way."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 03:10:38 am
"Khenal? Khenal! Where are you, Khenal? Hello? Anypony? Where is Khenal? Khenal!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 03:13:07 am
'She's in good hooves, she's in good hooves, she's in good hooves.'  I repeat to myself while I try to read the book for rot removing/curing spells.  The magical theory is simple enough, usually transmutation, but the medical stuff is totally beyond me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 28, 2011, 03:13:55 am
"Thank you. Is she mentaly okay, by any chance? It usualy works best on a willing target." The unicorns horn re-charges with energy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 03:29:45 am
"Khenal, Khenal, give me your answer do...Khenal, can you hear me? Khenal? Does anypony hear me? Where am I? Am I deaf, blind or dumb? Am I insane? Where is everypony?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 28, 2011, 03:34:18 am
DUE TO BUDGET CUTS, THE BOARD OF FUN HAS RESTARTED THE SCENE WITH CHANGES! THOSE RESPONSIBLE HAVE BEEN SACKED!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 03:43:39 am
Had a bit of an RP-pileup, cleaning the wreckage.  Expect delays until tomorrow.  Sorry for the inconvenience.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 05:03:25 am
NOTICE:

The RPing has undergone a nontrivial change starting at this point.  Everyone will be getting a PM sometime tomorrow outlining what we discussed.  Basically, we've got enough players now that we can't just let everyone run around and wrestle with the plot unchecked.  Before we did quite well on the honors system, but it's getting increasingly difficult to do so.

The last scene that we were running has been rewound up to the point where everybody met up at the stairs and were planning on finding Falcata.  Kris and Lilac have already showed up, and everypony knows Falcata is in the barracks.  Using the new rules system, here is the scene description (this is highly experimental):

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:08:12 pm
Friesden follows the group into the barracks, staying behind them, her head hung in shame.

Even the unicorn stallion knew how worthless she was...how could she be hiding it from Khenal so? How could he love her so?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:11:50 pm
Falcata is standing at the racks of weapons and armor at the far side of the barracks.  She'd come in early that morning to drop her things off, since she wouldn't be needing them anymore.  She had to find the duchess and tell her that today was it.  She could go on no longer.  But, with the lack of sleep she's been getting the last few days, she involuntarily locks her legs and drifts to sleep standing up.

As everypony arrives at the barracks, they find her standing there asleep, taking deep, calculated breaths.  Her armor hangs loosely from her thin body, and every few seconds she snaps her head up, shakes it around in frustration and immediately slips back to sleep with a low moan, failing to notice anypony has arrived.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:12:49 pm
Bubbles walks up to Falcata and shakes her gently.
"Falcata, wake up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:15:42 pm
She snaps her head up with a startled grunt and looks around in confusion for a moment.

"Huh?  What?"  She notices Dr. Bubbles and blinks a few times.  "Doctor?  What's..." Her sentence trails off as she notices everypony standing behind Bubbles, and she takes a nervous step backward.  "What's... wrong?  Has something happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 11:16:48 pm
"We know, Falcata.  And we want to help you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:17:03 pm
"Falcata, we all know what's wrong. And we have found a cure. There's only one way to cure you. There's only one way to save your life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:20:16 pm
Her expression grows dark and she hangs her head.  "I..." The doctor's last few words register in her mind.  Her ears perk up slightly.  "A... cure?  Doctor... I thought..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:21:10 pm
Friesden thought about asking what the solution was, but had already imagined the worst.

She huddled in the corner. Maybe she wouldn't get in anypony's way this way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:21:29 pm
"Yes, a cure. There's one way only to do it."
Bubbles' voice becomes very soft.
"Falcata, do you trust me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:23:02 pm
She looks up to him, and takes a few pained breaths.  "Yes... doctor... I trust you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:24:47 pm
"We have to change your now rotten stomach with anotherpony's."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:26:03 pm
Her eyes grow wide as the implications set in.  "But... that... that would just... trade my life... for somepony else's..."  She shakes her head.  "I can't... do that..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:26:58 pm
"Don't worry Falcata, you won't be. A pony can survive with just half their stomach. Even then, it will eventually regrow to full size."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:27:40 pm
Friesden heard the words with another sinking feeling. Another pony would have to lose their stomach. But...but who?

Everypony there was important. Except for her, whispered the voice in her head. It was true. She just seemed to be the...the third wheel to everypony's happiness. She stood up, tall, and spoke.

"I'll do it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:29:20 pm
Bubbles turns around to face Friesden.

"Are you sure Miss. Friesden? Once the operation begins, we can't turn back."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 11:30:00 pm
"Be absolutely sure Friesden. I'm sure we could find somepony else..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 11:30:29 pm
"What?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:31:44 pm
"...Yes. I'm the most expendable pony here. I'll do it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:32:24 pm
"Friesden, that is NOT the truth and you know it. However, if you're sure..."
Bubbles trails off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:32:49 pm
She pondered the words for a moment, trying to understand.  Everything hurt so much... it was hard to think.  She opened her mouth to speak when Friesden stepped forward and volunteered herself.  Then Khenal spoke up with an objection.  She hung her head again, trying to fight through the urge to go back to sleep.  She was so tired...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 11:33:30 pm
"You are far from expendable. I But if you've made up your mind... DR. tell me how I can help"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 11:34:07 pm
"No!  Use mine!  Please Friesden, you don't have to do this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:34:32 pm
"I'll do it. Just... You'll need me for...for the operation. You'll have to keep me awake through this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:35:39 pm
"Hiero, can you get Kris please?"
Bubbles notices that Falcata has fallen asleep again, and shakes her awake.

"Khenal, you can't do it. Please, listen to me here. You HAVE to help with the magical part of the operation."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:36:22 pm
"Khenal...You'll have to help Falcata. Help her keep the stomach healthy. You'll need your magic for that. And you can't be distracted by the pain. It has to be me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:37:15 pm
She snaps awake again with a frustrated wince.  Her chanfron falls from her head onto the ground noisily as she looks up.  "Sorry..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:38:10 pm
Bubbles picks up the chanfron and puts it on a rack.
"It's okay, Falcata."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 11:38:49 pm
"But... but I don't know anything about medical magic.  I could keep you awake, but... you'd feel it all."

I look at Friesden in horror.

"Is there no other way?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:40:53 pm
"It's okay, love. Duty before pleasure... Please...just keep me immobile, too. If I... if I move, it could be messy. I'm..I'm sorry, my love. I wish you didn't have to do this for me...but you will. I'm sorry...oh, my love. I wish I could repay you for this...but I have nothing of worth. Please... Just do this, for me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 11:42:36 pm
"I..."  I choke back tears, desperately wanting to refuse.  "For you, anything..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 11:42:49 pm
Heiro looks around, and sees Kris standing behind him, Nervously clinging to Lilac. "Hey little one, come on. The Doctor needs you" he moves over and tries to usher her over to Bubbles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:43:35 pm
"I...I love you, Khenal. Please...take my hoof. I don't want to go through this alone...please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:44:55 pm
Kris squeaks nervously as she stares back at Heiro for a moment.  She looks over to Bubbles and sees the reassuring smile on his face.  "Oh... okay..."  She slowly paces up to him, looking at her mother's pained expressions the entire way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:46:14 pm
Bubbles puts his two front hooves on Kris' two cheeks.
"Now, Kris. I'm going to save your mother. I'm going to cure her. But I need your help. Only with your help can we cure your mother. Will you help me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 11:46:51 pm
I take her hoof in mine and cling desperately to it, like it's the only thing keeping me from falling off a cliff.

"I love you too, Friesden.  You won't be alone, I promise."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 28, 2011, 11:47:00 pm
Heiro follows behind Kris trying to comfort her as best he can, "Don't worry little one I'm sure Dr. Bubbles knows what he's doin'. I'll be here too so just stay calm."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:50:08 pm
Kris barely fights back panic at this point, but nervously nods.  She would do anything she could to help her mother right now.

Falcata locks eyes with her for a moment before she looks away in shame.


"Wh-what can I do?"  Kris asks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:50:36 pm
"Khenal...it'll be alright. Then...then you can be with the pony..." Her voice trails off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:52:26 pm
"I need you to help me keep both Friesden and Falcata calm. Can you do that?"
Bubbles addresses everypony
"We will be performing the ...cure... at the hospital. If you all would follow me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 28, 2011, 11:56:10 pm
"Please, Friesden.  Please just pull through this.  I don't know what... what I'd do without you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 28, 2011, 11:57:32 pm
Kris silently nods in agreement.  She'd do whatever Mr. Bubbles told her, but how was she going to do that?

Falcata sighs and tries in vain to levitate the rest of her barding off.
  "Could... somepony... help get... this off?" she manages between drawn out breaths.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 28, 2011, 11:58:16 pm
Friesden leads Khenal slowly to the hospital, clutching his forehoof tightly in her own. With every step, she grips more tightly.

This isn't something she wants to do, but she has to.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 28, 2011, 11:58:36 pm
Bubbles moves it off Falcata and, with surprising strength, picks Falcata up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 12:02:13 am
"Come on little one" Heiro says to Kris "Let's go... I'll help however I can."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 12:03:50 am
With her barding removed, it's clear how much weight she has lost.  Her ribs are just visible beneath her skin.  She grunts in pain as Bubbles lifts her unexpectedly.

"Okay..." Kris agrees, following the grown ups.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:04:43 am
Bubbles carries Falcata to the hospital, beckoning for the others to follow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:08:11 am
DUE TO BUDGETING CUTS, THE SCENE HAS BEEN CUT AND WE ARE JUMPING TO RIGHT OUTSIDE THE HOSPITAL!

Due to more budgeting cuts, I have been fired. Telgin is your new narrator.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 29, 2011, 12:09:24 am
Pokonic is rather tired. Knowing that his spell needs a willing target to fully work, he asks the Alicorn pony near him, "Can I please cast the blasted spell, sir?", while blatently ignoring the docter.

As magic crackles around his horn, he says "Falcata, please think calm thoughts and relax your body. When you are struck by is, stay still, for gods sake
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 12:14:49 am
Kris silently follows the adults to the hospital, her heart thundering in her chest the whole way.  Could they really help her mom?  She seemed so sure this wasn't possible...

As they she arrived at the hospital, she saw Khenal and Friesden standing near a surgical table.  One look at both of their expressions set her even more on edge.  She was so scared...

The fear amplified yet again a moment later as Bubbles arrived with her mom.  Now it was mixed with a gnawing expectation... what was going to happen now?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:15:20 am
"Khenal...I'm sorry about doing this to you. Can you forgive me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:16:17 am
Bubbles bent down to Kris.
"Kris, I will make sure you don't see what happens. Just don't try and look, OK? Make sure you mom and Friesden stay calm."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 12:18:43 am
"I would forgive you anything."

'But I don't think I'll be able to forgive myself...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 12:18:54 am
Heiro looks at the obviously scared Kris "Hey now no need to be so scared little one, everything will turn out for the best you'll see." Heiro looks back at the hospital, wishing that he was as confident as he was trying to sound... but he couldn't show his fears now, the filly needed somepony to be strong... to keep her confident...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 12:19:26 am
She nods, trembling slightly.  She looks back to the doctor.  "H-How should I do that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:20:09 am
"Then.... Can I ask you to do something?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 29, 2011, 12:22:24 am
Whispering, the buck uses the spell he has been preparing since he learned of the mares condition. Using his magic, a purple glow envelopes the mare, with the buck softly saying, "Please do not resist. Its for your own good."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:22:54 am
"Just..calm them down if something is happening."
"POKOOOON! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 12:23:54 am
"So... tired..." Falcata whispers as the spell takes effect.  Her body loses the last vestiges of its rigidity as she loses consciousness.

Kris nods, and takes another look at Friesden before turning to her mom.
  "Okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 12:24:15 am
"Anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 29, 2011, 12:25:03 am
" Giving her some rest, you twit!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:26:25 am
"Just two things. You'll have to keep the operation going, no matter how much I might hurt. I...I'm sorry you'll have to...but it has to be done. And next..."


"Please...forgive yourself. Please. I don't care how much it hurts...just as long as you're happy, I'll endure. But every time you can't forgive yourself, it hurts just that much more. Please. Just forgive yourself. It'll be easier for me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:27:19 am
"Twit? TWIT?! Go to my office and STAY THERE until I come."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 29, 2011, 12:28:37 am
Smiling, he walks out without a word, knowing that his work has been done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 12:32:44 am
Kris sits to try and calm herself down, but she can still feel faint trembles rolling through her.  Was she really going to be doing any good?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:34:14 am
Bubbles turns to Khenal and Friesden.

"Khenal, please strap her into the traction bench, and give her anesthesia."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 12:35:06 am
Tears flowing, I start to strap my love to the traction bench.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:35:20 am
"No, doctor, you can't do that. I'm the only pony here who knows anything about surgery. I'll have to guide you through it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:36:27 am
Bubbles freezes.

"A..are you sure? You would have to go through all the pain of it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 12:37:16 am
Heiro moves up and puts a hoof on Kris's shoulder. "Hey now little one, no fear now. You have to be brave for your mother... and Friesden. If you need any help just ask OK? I'll be right here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 12:39:03 am
"O-okay," she responds, giving Heiro a small smile.  She looks back to her mother, who has a pained expression even in sleep.  "I love you mom... please don't leave me like daddy..." she whispers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:40:05 am
"I've...I've seen...and done...worse than this. I can deal with the pain. Khenal...just hold my hoof."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:41:12 am
"You seem sure. Alright then, lets get this started."
Bubbles carefully takes a scalpel from the wall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 12:41:23 am
I cling to her hoof, and nuzzle her as well.

"I love you Friesden.  Be careful."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:42:46 am
"Okay. Bubbles. You'll need to cut shallowly across the lower chest. Cut up from about the pelvis. Once you hit the rib cage, you've gone too far."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:43:26 am
Bubbles does as Friesden says, cutting a shallow incision.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 12:44:42 am
I wince and shift my gaze away from Bubble's work, focusing on Friesden's face and continuing to hold her hoof.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:46:07 am
Friesden's face contorts in pain, but she manages to hold a scream back in.

"Okay...Okay...I need something hard. To bite on."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 12:47:27 am
Kris looks away and shuts her eyes, making a small noise.  She really wished the doctor hadn't asked her to do this... she really wished he hadn't asked her to do this...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:48:37 am
Bubbles puts a rag in Friesden's mouth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:50:43 am
"Something a bit harder than that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 12:50:51 am
"Hey little one you allright? If you want I could ask the doc if we can wait outside." Heiro moves closer, "But if you want to stay, then Just grab my hoof, and squeeze as hard as you can... that always helped me when I was scared."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:51:35 am
Bubbles pulls it out, and puts a block of wood in her mouth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 12:51:42 am
My horn glows as I break a piece of the post from a nearby bed and wrap it in the cloth Bubbles provided.

"L-Like this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 12:52:29 am
"He... he said he needed me..." she answers, grabbing Heiro's hoof and squeezing like he said.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:53:16 am
"That...that will do. Okay. Bubbles, you'll have to go through my intestines. Be careful not to damage them. Spread them out, and cut out as much of the stomach as you need."

She clamps down hard on the block of wood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 12:54:12 am
"...buck"
Bubbles carefully pushes the intestines aside and cuts out a small piece of the stomach.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 12:57:39 am
'Dont look, keep on her face, her eyes.  Her beautiful face, her loving eyes.  Ignore those sounds from Bubbles, Friesden is fine.  Be there for her.'

I begin softly chanting into Friesden's ear.

"I love you, please be alright."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 12:59:57 am
Friesden's face contorts once more, and her hoof's grip on Khenal's tightens to almost bonecrushing strength.

Once the cutting stops, she spits the piece of wood out. There are clear teeth indentations now on it.


"ARGHHHHH! Oh SISTERS it HURTS! Damn...it....damn...it...DAMN IT!"

Tears of pain form in her eyes.

"Okay...okay....now...now you'll need to suture it shut...oh. SISTERS ABOVE!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 01:00:57 am
Bubbles holds the piece of Friesden's stomach gingerly, while suturing it shut.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 01:02:17 am
Kris ceases holding onto Heiro's hoof and instead clings to him in earnest as she hears Friesden's cries of pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:03:13 am
"Oh, Khenal, stop it! Stop it stop it stop it! Please! I'll do anything just stop it, please! oh, Sisters the PAIN! Please, please stop it! Oh, gods above stop it! I'll do anything! Please, Khenal!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 01:04:04 am
Bubbles finishes suturing, and check to see if Friesden is okay.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:05:30 am
"Khenal, Khenal! Please! Stop it! Please! Just stop the pain! Stop it stop it stop it stop it please I'll do anything!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 01:06:19 am
Heiro moves his arm arund Kris pulling her into a comforting hug. "It's all right little one, be brave. I'm still here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 29, 2011, 01:06:44 am
A rather quite voice enters the head of Khenal, saying, "What in the sisters is going on in there!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:07:34 am
"Sisters above please Khenal I'll do anything I'll do ANYTHING just stop the pain stop it please oh Sisters stop it Khenal please oh Sisters please please please stop it oh gods!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 01:08:08 am
"I... I can't.  Sisters help me, I can't.  I love you, p-please be a-alright..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 01:08:47 am
"...I would suggest you try and comfort her. I don't know, declare your love?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:10:06 am
"Oh please Khenal Khenal where are you I can hear you Khenal but the pain hurts so much! I don't want to see I can't see please where are you oh gods above it hurts it HURTS! Hurts hurts hurts hurts hurts hurts HURTS!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:12:47 am
"It hurts hurtshurtshurtshurtshurtshurtshurtshurtshurts..." Friesden descends into mad raving.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Pokon on December 29, 2011, 01:13:17 am
The airy voice pauses, than almost screams into the poor alicorns mind "Sedateherputhertosleepceephercalmdosomethingyoufoolishbuckkeepherstillwipehermindsendherto
dreamytimemakehercalmdoSOMETHING!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 01:14:24 am
Tears begin to stream down Kris' face as she hears Friesden continue to cry out in bitter agony.  "No... no... no!  NO!" she shouts as her horn begins to glow.  The hospital is filled with a blinding flash of golden light, and Kris goes limp in Heiro's grip.

Friesden immediately feels the pain in her body vanish, replaced with only a faint, lingering tingle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 01:15:37 am
"I-I love you, pl-please be al-alright..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:16:09 am
Friesden's eyes open wide, and she stops the rambling.

"Oh, Sisters above...I...I was too weak...I'm...I'm sorry, Khenal! I...I couldn't do it!" She begins to cry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 01:23:26 am
"Whoah there little one..." Heiro shift himself to avoid dropping the suddenly limp filly "You OK? that was quite the magical blast."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 01:24:24 am
Kris rocks back forward slowly, blinking and focusing her eyes.  "What... what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 01:24:49 am
WE WOULD LIKE TO INTERRUPT THIS SCENE FOR A BRIEF ANNOUNCEMENT. POKON, OR POKONIC, IS NOW BANNED FROM OUR IRC AND WE AT THE BOARD OF FUN WOULD LIKE YOU TO IGNORE HIM FROM NOW ON. WE NOW RESUME YOUR PROGRAMING ALREADY IN PROGRESS.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:26:17 am
"Sisters...I'm so...sorry. You're....you're going to have to take off the pain-easing spell. I...I think I can do it again, now. I'm sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 01:29:39 am
"Fr-Friesden?  Is it... over?  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:30:57 am
"Just got to...To do the replacement for...for Falcata now. I can... I can deal with the pain now. You'll have to take the painkiller spell off."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 01:40:36 am
Bubbles takes the stomach piece to Khenal.
"Khenal. I need you to enlarge this to about half the size of a regular stomach, please."

((NOW TELGIN! DO WHAT WE PLANNED!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 01:42:08 am
Heiro smiles slightly "Well little one, it looks like you just cast a spell. A major one at that, and seein as Friesden isn't yelling anymore I'd say you just used a painkiller spell. See you were a help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 01:43:33 am
"Please... please don't make me do that, Friesden.  Please, can't you do what you need to without all the pain?"

I look her in the eyes, pleading.

"Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:45:13 am
"No. If I get it wrong, Falcata could get hurt. Don't worry. It'll be okay. Just need you to turn off your spell, and all will be okay. Okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 01:54:11 am
"It... it's not my spell.  I don't know any healing magic."

Bubbles words and presence finally sink in, and my eyes go wide as I start to panic.

 "I don't know any healing magic!  I can't do anything to that piece of stomach!  It doesn't have a mind for me to work from!  I can't do anything!  Oh Sisters, why can't I do anything?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:54:56 am
"Then....who? Who did it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 01:58:06 am
Kris sees the shock on Khenal's face as he was asked to perform what the doctor asked.  Could... could nopony do it?  Was all of this for nothing?  Was her mom still going to die?  No... it couldn't happen like this.  Tears begin to form in her eyes again, and she wrestles herself free from Heiro.  Without a conscious thought, she slowly strides up to the sliver of organ, her horn glowing a blinding golden again.

"No!  This can't be happening!"

The room is filled again with an overpowering flash, and Bubbles finds himself holding a substantially regenerated stomach.  Not whole, but close enough.  Kris blinks in confusion and takes a step before stumbling and falling.

"Wh... what?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 01:59:33 am
Bubbles is speechless.
"Kris, you and me will have to talk after this."
Bubbles walks up to Falcata, and asks Friesden what to do.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 02:00:49 am
"Who...who did that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 02:02:07 am
Heiro, somewhat shocked at Kris's action walks back up to her "And to think you were worried about being a help. Now come on we should stay outta the way of the medponys. Now they can fix up your momma."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:02:30 am
"K..K..Kris did..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 02:03:08 am
"Did...Did she put the spell on me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:03:30 am
"Yes...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 02:05:08 am
The flash of magic manages to penetrate my panic, and I notice Bubbles holding what appears to be most of a stomach and talking to Friesden.

"...What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 02:05:14 am
Kris is mostly unresponsive.  She meets eyes with Heiro and mumbles a simple, "Uh-huh..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:06:39 am
"Kris seems to have...Regrown this stomach and out the painkiller on Friesden...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 02:07:24 am
"You'll...you'll have to ask her to take it off..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 02:08:17 am
"Hey doc Mind if I put the little one in one of these beds? I think she needs to rest a bit after that display."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:08:44 am
Bubbles turns around.
"Kris...take the painkiller off Friesden please."
"I don't mind Hiero."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 02:11:06 am
Kris blinks lethargically and accepts Heiro's help.  What did the doctor say?  Take off the painkiller?  Had she been the one to do that?

She sank into the bed and felt the exhaustion overtake her.  She hoped somepony else could do it... she was so tired...

As Kris drifts off into sleep, the magic holding back Friesden's pain begins to fade.  She can feel it slowly returning...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 02:12:56 am
"that's right little one, get some sleep." Heiro goes back over to the others "So doc anythin I can do to help?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 02:13:47 am
Friesden grits her teeth as the pain surges back.

"I...Can....Deal...With...It."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:13:55 am
"Just..make sure no fillies see what I'm about to do next. It will probably lead to scarring them for life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 02:15:15 am
"Bubbles. You'll have to open up Falcata's body now. You know where the stomach is. Cut it out."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 02:15:50 am
I grip both of Friesden's hooves, wishing I could do more for her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 02:16:09 am
"..Is that...A STOMACH?! THAT IS SOO COOL!" Says Lilac, who had snuck in about five minutes ago.
(http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/361/9/4/pony_commission__lilac_joker_by_lunalie-d4kdg7q.png)
((This is a picture of Lilac, curtosy of an amazing devientart friend, Lunalie!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:17:20 am
Bubbles glares at Lilac..
"What are you doing here... agh. Hiero, make sure she doesn't see this."
Bubbles begins to cut open Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 02:21:09 am
"Hey you're Kris's friend yes? She's over this way if you want to see her." Heiro tries to put himself between the filly and the surgery, to block her view of the procedure.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 02:23:13 am
Lilac dodges both of them, darting over to Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:25:29 am
Bubbles continues cutting whilst grumbling, and pushes aside the intestines.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 02:28:04 am
"Okay. Now once you've opened up the che-" Friesden says as she is interrupted by Lilac jumping over her. Khenal manages to just catch her in time. More tears form in Friesden's eyes, that her new sister should see her in such a state.

"Ah. Lilac," she says through gritted teeth. "What is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 02:30:55 am
The extent of the rot is immediately evident, even before Bubbles sees the organ he can smell it.  The stench of putrefied meat instantly fills his nostrils, and the partially congealed blood from her internal bleeding begins to slowly ooze from the cut.  He can see that some nearby organs look unhealthy, but nowhere near her stomach and don't appear to have any rot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:31:50 am
Bubbles wrinkles his nose.

"Friesden! WHAT DO I DO NOW?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 02:32:56 am
"Just a minute, Lilac."

"You'll have to cut it all out. As well as you can."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:34:00 am
Bubbles slowly cuts the rotting stomach out, and puts it on a tray. He then inserts the new stomach, and slowly sutures it back together.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 02:34:06 am
"COOOOOL!!!!" Lilac shouts as she sees Falcata's exposed insides. Having no family left alive and having seen her whole family horribly mutilated, she's COMPLETELY unphased by what Falcata looks like.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 02:35:40 am
I look to Friesden for guidance on what to do with the energetic filly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 02:37:27 am
"Ooookay....ooookay...I think...I think it's time for a rest... A rest sounds...good..."

Friesden's eyes blink once or twice, then shut, her body utterly exhausted by the effort of resisting the pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 02:37:38 am
"Hey now! that's enough of that!" Heiro goes over and grabs the excitable filly, Dragging her back over to where Kris is sleeping "Let the doc work yeah? You can play around later."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 02:38:41 am
Lilac breaks free and zooms up to Falcata, prodding at her exposed ribcage.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:39:11 am
"OK, THAT IS IT!"
Bubbles bucks Lilac away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 02:40:27 am
Lilac gets knocked into Khenal, sending them sprawling on the ground. Lilac giggles as she gets back up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:41:29 am
Bubbles finished suturing Falcata, and closes the hole in her stomach.
"Now that thats done..."
Bubbles turns to Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 02:42:58 am
I panic for a moment when Friesden closes her eyes, but quickly see she's still breathing.  I collapse as well, emotionally drained.

'Useless.  I couldn't do anything...'

Lilac's impact on my side barely even registers through my melancholy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 02:44:37 am
"Are you alright Khenal?" Asks Lilac, finally starting to grasp the situation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 02:47:23 am
"I will be talking to you later, filly."
Bubbles leaves the group and disappears into his office.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 02:54:47 am
I don't bother to get off the floor and only half hear somepony say my name.

"Hmm?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 02:55:38 am
Lilac takes in a deep breath. "ARE YOU ALRIGHT KHENAL?!?!?!?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 02:57:47 am
My ears are blown back by the force of Lilac's voice, but I just turn to look at her.

"No, I don't think so."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 02:59:48 am
Lilac tries to cheer Khenal up by lying on Khenal's back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 03:03:46 am
((...and CUT! That's scene, folks.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 03:39:09 am
((We'll be picking this up tomorrow where we left off, or at least when Falcata wakes up.  Pokon is gone, but at least Falcata, Friesden and Khenal are still in the hospital.  I don't think there's any reason to exclude anypony from this scene, so whoever wants to join in, please feel free.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 01:18:11 pm
((Alright, double posting so people watching the thread will get the update.  This should be a reasonably generic set up in case anypony wants to do anything before the usual time nine hours from now, I kind of hate to feel like I'm the one everypony is waiting on.  :) ))

Falcata tries to ignore the nagging, gnawing pain in her body as she attempts to return to sleep.  She'd awoken some time ago, hours perhaps, she wasn't sure, but she was so exhausted all she wanted to do was go back to sleep.  The events of the previous day kept replaying in her head: everypony confronting her in the barracks and hauling her off here like she was a foal.

Well, perhaps she was one.  If she had admitted things earlier, there would surely have been less of a scene.  She could still see the look of terror in Kris' eyes as her daughter looked at her in the barracks.  That was something she would never forgive herself for.  Kris deserved to hear it from her, long ago, not at the last moment when all seemed lost.

Friesden drifted back into her mind.  The idea that Dr. Bubbles had come up with to save her life... she couldn't have asked anypony to do that for her.  If she hadn't been on the verge of unconsciousness the entire time, she probably would have contested Friesdent's decision to volunteer herself.  Not that she wasn't grateful, of course.  But as it was, the surgery must have happened.  She still felt as sick as ever, but the extra pain in her belly told her that something had been done.  A slight hint of fear reasserted itself as she wondered if the procedure had failed after all.

She kept her eyes closed and shifted slightly, catching as a jab of pain stabbed through her.  She couldn't remember anything after when they got to the hospital, and she was a bit afraid to open her eyes and look around.  If anything bad had happened to Friesden during the procedure, she'd never forgive herself of that either.

Somepony would come in eventually and try to wake her, and she'd listen to whatever they had to say whenever that happened.  For now, she just really wanted to go back to sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 01:21:01 pm
Friesden continues to mutter meaningless gibberish in her sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 04:25:34 pm
I sit by Friesden's bed with a cloth and a bottle of her favorite fisherberry wine, occasionally wiping the sweat from her brow and constantly worrying.

'Please, Sisters.  Please let it have been a success.  Please don't take her.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 04:28:01 pm
"My....my brother...wherefore art thou, son?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 04:44:05 pm
Falcata wakes from her shallow sleep as she hears somepony say something.  With a bit of trepidation, she cracks her eyes and sees Friesden lying in bed near her, her sleep clearly troubled.  Khenal is just visible next to her, but Falcata can't make out his expression.

Friesden was still alive at least, that much was a relief.  She continues to watch silently, not wanting to disturb the sleeping mare.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 04:58:34 pm
"My son...my brother...your mother...your sister..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 05:04:35 pm
I wipe a new bead of sweat from Friesden and try to calm her.

"Shh, you're alright.  It's ok."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 05:09:01 pm
"Father....father...why, father? Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 05:12:05 pm
My expression darkens as Friesden mentions her father.  I wring out the cloth I've been using, for a moment pretending it's his neck instead.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 05:15:54 pm
"Can't...can't take him...mine..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 06:02:44 pm
Falcata looks away and listens silently as Friesden rambles.  There was nothing she could say or do to help, so she kept quiet.  She just hoped Friesden was alright.  Was she having a nightmare, or was she delirious?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 06:09:55 pm
Falcata's movement and the slight creak of her bed draw my attention.  I try to give her a small smile.

"How are you feeling, Falcata?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 06:10:14 pm
"My...my brother...my son...mine...can't have him...daemon...help me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 06:22:59 pm
Falcata opens her eyes, takes a deep breath and returns a nervous smile.

"I hurt... a lot... but I'll manage."

She props up with some difficulty and a cringe and looks at Friesden with evident worry on her face.

"How is she?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 06:29:18 pm
I again wipe Friesden's brow.

"She's having a nightmare.  Seems like a pretty powerful one as well.  Physically, I imagine she's about in the same boat as you are right now.  She's in pain, but should pull through."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 06:33:08 pm
"MY SON! MY BROTHER! MINE!" Friesden screams out, then falls silent.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 06:35:07 pm
Falcata listens silently, keeping her eyes on Friesden the whole time.

"I see...  that's good to hear."  That sounded terrible...  "That she will be fine, I mean."

She begins to say something else, but is interrupted by Friesden's outburst.  She recoils slightly and looks away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 06:36:00 pm
Lilac goes to visit Khenal and Friesden. She's carrying a flower in her mouth as a present for Friesden.
"Hi Khenal...i'm sorry for yesterday...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 06:40:36 pm
Friesden shakes her head rapidly, and her eyes flicker open.

"Where....where am I?" she asks between pants of breath.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 06:42:50 pm
I jerk back to Friesden at her outburst, then wipe her brow one last time.

"Looks like the nightmare is just about over, at least."

I can't help but smile when I see Lilac enter the hospital with a flower.

"Hello Lilac.  Yesterday wasn't your fault, I was just... stressed."

"Friesden!"  Remembering we're still in the hospital, I try not to shout again.  "You're in the hospital.  It looks like the operation was a success, thanks to you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 06:45:41 pm
"What opera- Oh...Okay. I remember. My...my failure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 06:46:59 pm
"Failure?  What failure?  You and Falcata are both alive and should recover.  Right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 06:49:08 pm
"...Failure?" Falcata asks, more than a hint of fear in her voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 06:50:13 pm
"I...I let the pain get the better of me. I'm sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 06:53:46 pm
"You... you've endured more pain than anypony should ever have to, and saved a mother in the process.  That is no failure, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 06:56:41 pm
The others hear talking coming from outside the hospital "Heh I know you're exited little one, but remember your mother might not be awake yet" Heiro walks into the hospital, Kris following behind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 06:57:00 pm
"I deserve more pain than you can possibly know, Khenal...I gave in to it. I failed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 06:58:09 pm
Falcata's expression relaxes notably then grows concerned.  "...What happened?" she asks nervously.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 06:59:40 pm
"I..." Friesden hangs her head in shame. "I took a painkiller."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 07:03:18 pm
"I... don't understand..." Falcata responds, raising an eyebrow.

Kris takes note of everypony present and beams a smile at Lilac.  "Hi, Lilac."

When she sees that her mother is awake, her smile widens to a grin and she trots over.  "Mom!  You're awake!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 07:03:35 pm
"THAT'S WHY YOU'RE UPSET?!" Lilac gets in Friesden's face.
"Look, my whole family is dead, everypony. And you're upset about taking a painkiller?! Gee, I thought my sister was better than this..."
Lilac then notices Kris and turns around to face her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 07:03:45 pm
"You needed it, Friesden.  If Kris hadn't cast it, you might have...might have..."

I just look at Friesden, tears welling up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 07:05:35 pm
Hiero looks around as well "Well now so you're both awake? Friesden, Whats wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 07:05:48 pm
"Then...then I would have deserved it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 07:14:07 pm
"Hi Kris...ugh, I cannot believe my sister! She's upset because you helped her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 07:19:01 pm
"I...I don't deserve the help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 07:51:41 pm
Falcata winces as Kris nuzzles her affectionately, trying to mask her own pain.  "Yes, I think I'm going to be okay," she says to her daughter.  "I haven't spoken with the doctor yet though."

She looks back to Friesden with another worried expression.  "Friesden... I owe you my life for what you've done for me.  You deserve a lot more than that..."

Kris backs down and looks back to Lilac, confusion forming on her features.  "Did... did I do something wrong?"

((And now I have to perform some surgery on my computer!  Be back in a little while.  Assuming it doesn't die during the operation, heh))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 07:56:46 pm
"Friesden is upset that you took away the pain, and is even more upset that she couldn't handle it when it returned..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 07:59:04 pm
"I'm the least important pony in the room...it had to be me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 08:03:13 pm
"You are the most important pony on the planet to me, Friesden.  I'm so proud of how brave you are, of how much you're willing to give to help others."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:07:56 pm
"I'm worthless except for my body..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 08:11:09 pm
"You are priceless, Friesden.  All of you: Mind, Body and Soul.  Priceless."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:14:02 pm
"Priceless...because there is no price low enough."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 08:17:09 pm
"FRIESDEN!! STOP EMBARRASSING YOURSELF!" Lilac stomps over to Friesden and glares at her.
"YOU'RE MY SISTER! YOU'RE ALL I HAVE BESIDES UNCLE STARKEY AND AUNTIE OTIK!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:17:56 pm
"I...I guess I failed again. Sorry..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 08:18:43 pm
Lilac hits Friesden in the jaw.
"DARN IT SIS, CUT IT OUT NOW!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 08:18:56 pm
I smile down at Lilac.

"There is no price for a sister, for a daughter, for love.  You have worth beyond measure, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:20:26 pm
"I...sorry..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 08:22:56 pm
Lilac jumps onto Friesden's back and lays there.
"Come on sis...will you play with me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 08:24:12 pm
My eyes widen in alarm when Lilac jumps on Friesden.  My horn flashes as I quickly levitate her off before she can pop any of the stitches.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:25:29 pm
"I...sorry. I can't."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 08:26:41 pm
"Khenal! You're not helping Fri' at all! Besides, i'm way too small to hurt her...oh forget it...Friesden, if you want to beat yourself up, go ahead."
Lilac slowly walks out of the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:28:43 pm
Tears begin to form in Friesden's eyes.

"See? Even my own sister knows how worthless I am."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 08:31:19 pm
Friesden hears the sound of something being torn, and then feels something hit her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:34:07 pm
The tears continue to fall as Friesden feels the flower hit her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 08:38:13 pm
"Friesden..."

I gently take her hoof and carefully nuzzle her, trying to comfort her without harming her further.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:40:04 pm
"I'm not good enough for you, Khenal...I'm sorry...for everything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 08:41:06 pm
"Oi what's this talk Freisden. You haven't got anything to be sorry for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 08:41:44 pm
"You are more than I could ever hope for, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:43:20 pm
"I'm worthless...you don't have to try and ease my feelings."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 08:46:06 pm
"You are far from worthless, how can anypony not see that. You are the only reason we're still here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:47:43 pm
"You mean that my only worth is in my body..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 08:50:21 pm
"What can I do to show you how much you mean to me, Friesden?  Name it, I'll do it.  Please, just tell me what to do..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 08:52:47 pm
((Another successful procedure!))

Falcata shakes her head and gives Friesden a warm smile.

"Friesden... you are not worthless.  Nopony who is worthless would be willing to do what you did for me, and your body didn't make that decision for itself.  I only wish there were more ponies like you in this world."

Kris steps over and looks Friesden in the eyes.  "I'm sorry, Miss Friesden... I didn't mean to make you upset..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 08:53:05 pm
"I...I can't...Oh, Khenal! I'm...I'm sorry!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on December 29, 2011, 08:59:43 pm
Bubbles leaves his office and listens to Friesden rambling.
"Friesden, you are NOT worthless."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 09:04:49 pm
I gently lay a wing across Friesden.

"Shh, it's alright.  You see how much everypony cares for you, Friesden?  You have far too many friends to be worthless."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 09:06:25 pm
"I'm sorry, Khenal, everypony. I'm sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 09:14:06 pm
"Don't be sorry, Friesden, you've done nothing wrong."  Falcata continues to smile.  "I really can't thank you enough..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 29, 2011, 09:16:46 pm
"Oh Friesden..."

I lean down to kiss the mare of my dreams, to let her know she's all I'll ever need.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 09:22:24 pm
Friesden's eyes become happy again as Khenal kisses her. Any objections she had are muffled.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 09:24:39 pm
"Well now, how about we stop with all the depression? We should be happy! It seems like everypony is just fine, and if Falcata's awake then the surgery was a sucsess... ummm... it was a sucsess right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 09:27:01 pm
All the ponies in the room suddenly remember Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 09:28:33 pm
All, that is, except Friesden and Khenal, who are busy at the moment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 09:42:17 pm
Confident that Friesden was now in good hooves with Khenal, Falcata sinks back into her bed.  She would try and find a moment to speak with Friesden again later, when there were less ponies around.  She really needed to find some way to thank her properly.

Kris looks around briefly.
  "Um, where did Lilac go?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 09:43:40 pm
Kris promptly hears a door slam in the direction of Lilac and Friesden's home.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 09:53:09 pm
Kris looks back to her mom and sees the exhaustion and pain still present.  She didn't want to leave her, but she would be fine with everypony else there.  Lilac looked pretty upset... maybe she should go get her now that Friesden was happy again.

"Um... I'll be right back..." she murmurs to herself as she turns to leave and go find Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 09:54:39 pm
Eventually, Kris arrives at her Lilac's room, and she can hear Lilac crying from behind the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 09:58:35 pm
She knocks against the door gently.  "Lilac?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 10:00:02 pm
"WHAT?!" Lilac says through the door, sobbing softly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 10:00:58 pm
"Lilac, what's the matter?  Miss Friesden is okay..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 10:04:08 pm
"Kris?"
Lilac opens the door. Kris notices Lilac's normally blue-purple-pink mane is soaked with tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 10:06:00 pm
She smiles and nods.  "Yeah, it's me.  Come on, Miss Friesden is okay, why don't you come see for yourself?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 10:17:09 pm
"Alright..." Lilac slowly follows Kris, still dropping tears as she does.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 10:45:28 pm
Kris leads Lilac back to the hospital.  Lilac seemed awfully upset about this, Kris hoped she wasn't sad about something else secretly.

Inside the hospital, a thought finally strikes Falcata, now that things have settled down.  She opens her eyes again and says,
"Wait... did somepony say something about Kris doing something?  Something to Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 10:48:45 pm
"Yeah, you should be proud of your girl. Not only did she cast the biggest painkiller spell I've seen, she grew your new stomach from a tiny fragment."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 10:51:41 pm
She looks at Heiro in disbelief for a moment.  "She... she did that?  But... I thought Khenal..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 10:52:21 pm
Friesden's eyes become mournful again as she hears more of her failure. She remains locked in the kiss, however, resolving to resolutely ignored everything but her true love.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 10:57:20 pm
"Nah Khenal didn't know how. Kris did most of the magical stuff. Allthough I don't know how much she remembers of it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 10:58:48 pm
"But... how did she?  I mean... we couldn't afford to get her magic lessons..."  She looks around briefly.  "Where is she?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 11:03:38 pm
"I don't know how actually, hmm kinda reminded me of big sis... either way she just left to check on Lilac, she should be back soon. Brave filly, practically had to carry her to bed, she wanted to stay right here till you woke up. But I told her that you wouldn't want her to make herself sick from worry, or lack of sleep."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 11:09:13 pm
"Yes, that sounds like her.  She stays worried about me all the time..."  She frowns slightly.  "I suppose I give her enough reason to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 11:13:29 pm
"Not to hear her tell it, or the others. Maybe it's just me, but you kept a pretty horrible condition quiet for a long time, even fought like you were fine, just for her. you did everything to not give her reason to worry. A tip though? Kris is a very intelligent filly, if something else happens to you, she shouldn't find out from anyone but you. I'm not too good at family stuff, but I'm pretty sure that will only make her worry more."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 11:20:37 pm
She looks away and nods somberley.  "Yes... that... I'm not proud of that.  Dr. Bubbles told me there was nothing that could be done... I didn't want anypony else to worry over something that couldn't be fixed."

She sighs.  "You're right though.  Kris has known for some time.  She has to have.  I'll never forgive myself for putting her through that."  She snorts quietly.  "It's probably my fault anyway.  If I'd waited until help arrived, I probably wouldn't have ever gotten sick in the first place."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 11:22:42 pm
"Hey now, the last thing Kris needs right now is you bein all down on yourself. You're fine now, and that is all that should matter. Now come on, I wanna see a smile before Kris gets here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 11:29:00 pm
She smiles weakly.  "You're right, I suppose."  She looks over to Friesden.  "I just want everypony to be alright..." she whispers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 11:32:17 pm
"You're not the only one..." Heiro looks at the ground, and his expression wavers slightly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 11:36:12 pm
"Friesden? Are you better now?" Asks Lilac sheepishly as she walks in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 29, 2011, 11:37:33 pm
Friesden is slightly too busy being passionately kissed by Khenal to answer Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 11:39:39 pm
Heiro looks up to see Kris walk in behind Lilac "Heya little one, come on over, your mother is fine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 29, 2011, 11:44:54 pm
Kris perks up as she hears Heiro and trots over.  She rears up on the bed and nuzzles her mother.  "I was so worried about you mom..."

Falcata returns the nuzzle and smiles.  "Me too...  So, Mr. Heiro says that you were the one that helped Dr. Bubbles for me.  I'm really proud of you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 29, 2011, 11:47:54 pm
Heiro smiles at the scene then turns to Lilac "So Lilac you need anything?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 11:49:31 pm
"Is my sist...er...ewww!!!" Lilac's sentence trails off as she notices Friesden kissing Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 29, 2011, 11:51:19 pm
((AAAAND CUT!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 12:07:25 am
Kris smiles broadly for the first time in days.  "I don't know how I did it, but I did!  I'm just so happy you're okay."  She looks her mother in the eyes for a moment.  "Are you hungry?  I am.  Let me go grab something from the dining hall for you."

Falcata shakes her head and places a hoof on her belly.  "No... I'll still be sick for a while.  But why don't you run along and get something?"

"Okay!"  She pauses and looks at Heiro.  "Are you hungry?  Why don't you come with me?"

Falcata smiles at her.  "Now, don't bother Mr. Heiro..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 12:09:34 am
"Nah it's no problem, I don't mind at all." Heiro pauses for a moment "But you said that you're going to be sick for a while? Maybe..." his voice trails off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 30, 2011, 12:15:34 am
"Kris, can I come with you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 12:19:02 am
She hesitates.  "Oh... I... couldn't possibly ask that..."

Kris smiles.  "I like Mr. Heiro... I'll be good mom, I promise!"  She hears Lilac's question and turns to face her.  "Sure, you can come too!"

Falcata looks to Heiro with a slightly embarrassed expression.  "I-I wouldn't want to impose..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 12:22:59 am
"Impose? You kiddin'? I was worried that you would take my head off for askin'. Don't worry about Kris, I'll make sure she stays safe, you focus on getting better. I'm sure we'll be by here plenty. T-...that is if you really don't mind."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 12:28:46 am
"Well... she does seem to have taken a liking to you.  Hopefully I won't be here but a few days..."  She looks down to Kris.  "Be on your best behavior, okay?"

"I will!"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 12:30:39 am
"Well then, come on little one, and your friend if she wants. We'll head on down to the dining hall."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 12:32:36 am
Khenal and Friesden are still locked in their passionate kiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:05:27 am
((SCENE))


Friesden lies in her bed. Even after emerging from the hospital, the nightmares continue. She yells snatches of phrases out, strange strings of words without meaning.

The only constant themes are her father, her brother and her son.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 01:10:20 am
Heiro is heading down the corridor towards Friesden's room. He could tell something had been bothering her, and he wanted to check on her. Coming up to her door he hears Freisden yell out. Not really thinking he bursts in, and finds her having a nightmare.

He carefully tries to wake her "Hey Friesden, wake up, you're allright, come on."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:11:41 am
"No! NO!" screams Friesden as she awakes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 01:14:12 am
"Friesden? It's OK, you're safe, I'm here. You were just having a nightmare. Want to talk about it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 01:15:20 am
I stand by her bed, anxious.  Recurring nightmares are never a good sign, and this one seems particularly painful for her.  I resolve to ask her about it once she awakens and occasionally wipe the sweat from her brow.  When Heiro bursts in, I try to quiet him.  Too late, it seems, as Friesden wakes up.

"Friesden, are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:17:35 am
Friesden pants heavily as she wakes.

"Wha-what? What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 01:21:26 am
"Like Heiro said, you were having a nightmare."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:23:03 am
"A...A nightmare? What was it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 01:24:52 am
"You don't remember? you were talking about your father, brother, and son."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:26:36 am
Friesden sits bolt upright.

"I don't have a brother or a son. How...How DARE you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 01:27:14 am
I nod, confirming Heiro's answer.

"It's also not the first time you've had this nightmare.  Can you tell us anything about it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 01:28:47 am
Heiro shies away "D-...did I do something wrong? I was just worried"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:29:34 am
"N-no. It was just a nightmare. Please, I need to do something."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 01:31:52 am
"If it was just a nightmare then why did you..." Heiro pauses then says to himself quietly "sis help me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:32:24 am
"I...I just need to do something. Alone, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 01:33:10 am
I watch Friesden, concerned, as she gets up to do whatever it is she needs to do.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:34:38 am
Friesden carefully leaves the room, and hurries down the corridor.

Where had she put it? She wasn't needed here anymore, and all she seemed to be doing was causing pain...

She found it...

The rope.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 01:37:00 am
After Friesden leaves, my gaze shifts between the door and Heiro.

"Does nopony know how to knock anymore?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:39:04 am
She carefully looped the rope around her neck, and tied the noose. Just one short sharp shock.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 01:40:11 am
A change comes over Heiro. His stance, expression and even eyes become... colder, calmer, more deliberate. When he speaks again his voice sounds... eerily calm, almost cold. "Khenal. We are going after Friesden. Now. this is not up for debate." With that he turns and follows Friesden out of the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:42:14 am
Now...where to do it? Somewhere private. She didn't want to hurt Khenal anymore. She would just fade away and nopony would ever be unhappy again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 01:43:28 am
I quirk an eyebrow, but decide to simply follow Heiro/Midnight.

'I never did get the chance to ask about his "Big sis"...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:44:34 am
Here. A quiet storeroom. Nopony would ever come in here. She flew up to the top, and tied the noose.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 01:47:32 am
"Quickly Khenal, I know that look. It's not a look I want to see on anypony's face." Heiro runs down the passage ways, bursting into the storeroom that Friesden is in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:49:04 am
Well...she'd failed. Again. They'd found her. Well...at least she'd succeed in this.

She dropped.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 01:50:51 am
Quickly Heiro draws his axe, and jumping up slices the rope cleanly through. Friesden continues to fall
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 01:51:55 am
'Look?  She looks like that fairly often.  I just wish she would smile more often...'

I round the corner and see through the door just in time to see Friesden plummet.


"Friesden!"

I rush through the air, desperately hoping I won't be too late.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:52:54 am
Tears fell from Friesden's eyes as the rope was sliced through. She...she couldn't even have that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 01:57:54 am
Friesden stopped short as her fall was broken.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 02:01:34 am
I break Friesden's fall myself, sending us into a pile of barrels.  I try to cover her as we impact, hoping to keep her from all harm.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 02:02:43 am
Heiro steps over to the two "Well Friesden, now do you wish to talk?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 02:05:51 am
"I...I can't even have that. I'm that worthless."

Friesden hangs her head and cries.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 02:10:52 am
I cough a few times, trying to get my breath back after having it knocked out of me.

'Nothing feels broken at least, but I think I'm going to be pretty sore come morning...'


"Friesden?  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 02:14:18 am
"Friesden please don't cry, he doesn't." Heiro's voice cuts off instantly, when he speaks again he seems to have returned to normal "Friesden? Please, tell me you're OK." Heiro begins to sound like he's going to cry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 02:36:23 am
"I'm...I'm sorry...Please, can't I be selfish? Just this once?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 02:39:20 am
"Why?  Why would you try to kill yourself, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 02:39:39 am
"Freisden, why, I-I... please don't leave like this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 02:43:50 am
"Because I'm worthless and all I ever seem to do is hurt ponies. I don't know any other way out!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 02:45:02 am
"B-...but you're far from worthless! You saved Falcata's life!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 02:47:02 am
"I'm...I'm evil. I killed ponies, just to watch them bleed! I hate me! I wish I'd never been born."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 02:50:04 am
"That's past, Friesden.  You aren't that pony any more.  You're the kindest pony I've ever met."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 02:51:40 am
"I'm cruel, and heartless, and evil! If I wasn't, why would I have killed ponies? Killed my father and lost my son!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 02:52:07 am
"I don't care about the past! You are far from cruel! You're everything to us! If you hadn't been here..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 02:53:41 am
"If I hadn't been here, two ponies would be alive today! My coming here was a mistake. I didn't deserve the chance."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 02:57:28 am
"If you hadn't come then more would be dead!" Heiro starts to actually cry now, falling down at Friesden's hooves "Please, you can't leave us!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 02:57:41 am
"And how many more would your father have destroyed if he were still alive?  Because you are here, at least one pony is alive, directly because of you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 02:59:30 am
"O my son Mica. My son, my son Mica. Would Celestia I could die for thee, O Mica, my son. My son!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 03:07:25 am
I hug Friesden tightly.

"Don't give up hope!  As long as you live, you can still find hope!  Mica must still be alive, he must be!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 03:08:56 am
"I was my brother's keeper and I lost him! Sisters above, I lost him! I lost thee, Mica! I lost my brother!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 03:11:15 am
Heiro's voice changes again, and he stops crying, as if somepony flipped a switch. "Friesden, we will do anything for you. If you will just tell us what. But we will NOT let you die. There is no hope in death, and we will NOT see another family member die!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 03:12:23 am
"Please, don't give up, Friesden.  There's still hope.  Please..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 03:12:49 am
"The one I could love! The one I did love! He is lost! O Mica, my brother, my son, would Celestia that I could die and bring you back! O Mica!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 03:15:06 am
"Friesden, please, please stop this. W-...we don't know what to do..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 03:16:35 am
Friesden hangs her head.

"But...but I can't. I'm not worth enough to make that exchange. O Mica...Mica...my brother...where are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 03:17:15 am
"And what about the ones you do love?  The ones that love you in return?  Please Friesden, don't leave us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 03:21:09 am
Heiro moves over and places a hoof on Friesden's shoulder "Please, we care for you, we hate to see you like this. Please, give us something we can do, something we can say, anything!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 03:26:30 am
"I'll hurt you...like I hurt my son, my brother. Like I hurt the others, the innocents. I don't want to take that chance. I wouldn't live if I hurt you! Please! You've got to let me go!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 03:30:21 am
"You'd hurt us if you died, especially if you killed yourself, Friesden.  Death is not the answer."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 03:31:39 am
"Please, we can't let you go, we can't lose anypony else, especially not you! You have to stay with us, please....please...little sis" Heiro's calm demeanor starts to waver, just slightly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 03:32:44 am
"But I taint you! I make you less perfect each day, and I don't know how to stop it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on December 30, 2011, 03:35:29 am
"You save me Friesden!  I am not perfect, I never was!  I will never be as kind, as gentle, as loving as you are!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 03:40:07 am
"Nonononononono! I'm tainting you, corrupting you! I'm an evil bitch! I have...to get away before I hurt you any more!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 03:41:29 am
"We are far from perfect Friesden. You make us more than we could ever be without you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 03:48:02 am
"No...No! You're perfect. I'm nothing compared to you two...nothing..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 30, 2011, 04:02:52 am
((scene is postponed until tomorrow by order of the board of fun.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 04:06:06 pm
"Perfect? We are broken, not even worth the time of one as amazing as you. But still we try, and we will do anything to be worth you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 04:10:39 pm
"No! No, you are perfect! I'm as dust compared to you! I'm corrupting you, making you worse each day just by my being here! I don't deserve to have happiness, you do! Oh, Sisters, I have to get away before I hurt you more!" shouts Friesden as she covers her head with her hooves.


"No, Friesden," Khenal answers. "You purify us, complete us! Without you we are as nothing. Please, don't leave us!"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 04:18:21 pm
"Why, why do you think of yourself as worth so little? Do you know how many would be devastated by your loss? Khenal and us, we aren't the only ones who care about you. You're family now, and we won't let our family be hurt!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 04:20:24 pm
"I'm EVIL! I killed ponies, again and again and again! I'm not good enough for you!" Friesden screamed out.

"You are more than we deserve," replied Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 04:23:11 pm
"And we are not good enough to even be your friend. But still we try. You can ask us for anything, just please. Please don't leave us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 04:26:46 pm
"No! No, I'm not that good! I'm worth nothing! You deserve everything, I deserve nothing! So let me take what I deserve!"


"Every day I ask Celestia how the kindest pony in the world can even stand to be in the same room as me," says Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 04:30:16 pm
"You say that we deserve everything, yet you refuse us the one thing we want. We would gladly give everything that we have, everything we ever could have, just to be able to make you happy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 04:32:12 pm
"Who is that pony, Khenal?" Friesden asks bitterly, trying to ignore Heiro.


"You," Khenal answers simply.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 04:37:21 pm
Heiro moves over and pulles Friesden into a hug "Come now little sis, you must see that we care for you. If you truly believe that we are perfect, then wouldn't it mean something that we would do anything for you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 04:40:39 pm
Friesden begins to cry. "No...please...please..."


"Just please tell me how I can show you how much you are worth. I would bring down the moon for you, I would douse the sun. I would drag the princess to you in chains. I would fight the Sisters themselves to show you how much you are worth, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 04:44:19 pm
"You have us, you have Khenal, we would all do anything for you. Judge your worth on that, not on worries in the back of your mind. Trust us, all of us who care for you." Heiro holds Friesden tighter "You are worth everything to us, if you need proof, just give us a way to prove it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 04:46:06 pm
"I'm...I'm sorry...oh Sisters...I'm so sorry. I'm just so...so selfish. I'm sorry. Can...can you ever forgive me?"


"Always."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 04:48:38 pm
"There is nothing to forgive sis, but we would forgive you anything. But please, promise us you won't do anything like this again. Please just... just smile, and the world will be right."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 04:52:20 pm
"A single sincere smile from you would be the crowning achievement for any life," Khenal adds.


Friesden smiles, a sad smile, but a smile nonetheless. "Is...Is that it?"

"I could die now and know I lived a good life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 04:54:56 pm
"That is all we need. As long as we can still make you happy, we are worth something."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 04:57:22 pm
"Please," Friesden says to Khenal. "Don't die. Not for me."

"I said I would do anything for you. If you ask it, I would happily die." Khenal drew the axe used by Heiro to his neck, held in his magic.

"NO! I couldn't bear missing you...either of you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 05:02:47 pm
"That feeling? That is how we feel about you. Can you see now why we won't let you hurt yourself? If you were to die..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 05:05:34 pm
"I...I'm sorry! I'm sorry! Khenal...Heiro...I'm sorry...please...forgive me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 05:08:38 pm
"Of couse little sis, we will forgive anything. Just promise that you won't make us worry like this again, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 05:12:28 pm
"I dont...I don't deserve you. Either of you. I never will... Not in my whole life," Friesden sobs.

"You deserve so much more. More than we can give," Khenal says as he joins in the hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 05:15:00 pm
"We will always be there for you. Never think you're worthless, or that nopony cares about you. We will always care. After all, you're a part of the family, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 05:17:20 pm
"I...I love you..." She breathes in. "I'm sorry. Thank you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 05:24:14 pm
"We-...I love you too. I'm just glad you're allright"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 05:28:42 pm
An idea pops into Friesden's head. Maybe...maybe that would work.

She keeps her face calm, and the smile on it. They wouldn't have to know...but they would be happier. It was a good idea.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 05:39:31 pm
((And that's scene. Next scene is between Friesden and Falcata, and anypony else who Falcata wants to talk to post-op.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 30, 2011, 06:18:30 pm
Charity's Journal 2nd Granite 100

Dimshas Ginetigest, our legendary pottery glazer. Was outside today, setting out a new sentry bunny. Just as she turned to leave the rabbit spotted an ambush. More Diomedians had come. The alarm was sounded and the military flew into action. The Diomedians killed the bunny, but our craftspony was able to escape. The Marksponies, all took to the walls, and all melee ponies, militia and guard alike were sent to the courtyard.

However, while this was going on outside, business continued as usual in the Glitterglen market. Our broker Bokbon, oversaw the paying of Glitterglen's taxes to the capital this year. This year our “offering” was paid almost entirely with goods made from the bones or leather or our enemies. We want to show those ponies back in the capital what we have to deal with out here. Piles of decorative armor made from Diomedians, Zebras, Honey Badger Ponies, Crundles and other beasts' bones. Dozens of Skull Totems, some leather goods we could spare, a stone figurine of my Chief Bodyguard Falcata smashing the skull of a darkbolt with a hammer, a pile of Zebra and Diomedian meat for the royal kitchens, and a crown of Zebra hoof and Gorlak ivory for the princess.

We then traded our other goods: clothing, stone and earthenware crafts, goblets of gold, etc. to both caravans in exchange for great quantities of metal.

Charity's Journal 14th Granite 100

Itur broke ranks and charged the enemy. She fought a lone Darkbolt hammerer on the bridge just out of range as the rest of the militia looked on, not sure what to do. She shot the Darkbolt in the right wing as it charged, and then repeatedly beat it in the head with her crossbow, the Darkbolt fell unconscious but would not die. Itur wouldn't return to the safety of the walls but just kept hitting it as the other Diomedians looked on from afar. Otik begged Starkey to allow the militia to go save the poor mare, and eventually he relented and called for a sortie.

As the militia arrived to help, the markspony, tried a different tactic and kicked the unmoving darkbolt in the head smashing the skull. She then moved into position just on our side of the river.

While we waited it was once again Itur who broke ranks firing off a bolt and charging across the river. This time however, she was not as lucky. She was pulled out of the air by her wing by the magic of the Dark Princess leading the enemy attack. While held by her wing, two vile tentacle ponies beat her with copper warhammers, the autopsy our doctors, Bubbles and Friesden, preformed later showed that she drowned in her own blood from her internal bleeding, a sad death for a good soldier.

However, the charge of the rest of the army together slaughtered the enemy.

Additional casualties include.

Cornbread, Markspegasis, Skyguard, damage to both front hoofs, left rear leg broken and compound fractures of the lower spine, Bubble's evaluation is that the nervous tissure has been cut apart. Surgery is required.

((Poor Otik, her squad only had three ponies including herself and one is dead and the other wounded. Depending on how things go with Cornbread, this might be the end of the Skyguard.))
Hiero, Axepony, Fortress Guard, left rear leg broken.
((Hiero had his leg broken by a Tentacle pony with a copper warhammer, he then struck his axe into the back of a tentacle pony's leg and it got stuck and then someone else killed it. Still zero notable kills.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 06:24:19 pm
Friesden's Diary, 14th Granite

Sisterssisterssisters


I can deal with the memories of my past. Khenal and Heiro have helped me through them.

This battle was just horrific!

Itur. Oh, Sisters! I should have been the one to suffer that.

(Tears are streaked across the page at this point, obscuring the text beyond readability.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 07:12:54 pm
Friesden's diary, 2nd Granite.

I

I tried to kill myself again today.

Khenal.

He saved me.

Heiro.

(tears obscure this part of the text)


My brother Mica is gone. I could wish he was not, but he is. My brother Heiro is here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 08:41:42 pm
((I've got to help disassemble the last of the family's Christmas stuff in a bit, so I won't be on the IRC for a little while.  I didn't have all that much in mind for Falcata to say to Friesden, but if you want to set the scene, be my guest.  If anypony else has anything to say to her, that's fine, but she's only actively looking to talk to Friesden.  Khenal might be nearby at least.  I presume this would take place after Khenal and Heiro have talked to her, but if you want to do before hand, that's fine.  Oh, and KingStrongbeard, I assume that Falcata didn't do anything of note during the ambush?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on December 30, 2011, 08:57:42 pm
((... Oh, and KingStrongbeard, I assume that Falcata didn't do anything of note during the ambush?))

((That is correct. She did take part in the charge, but was near the back with Khenal. Neither of them actually got a chance to get attacked or be attacked by anything. The crossbow ponies under her command got to shoot at the enemy, but that's the total sum of her involvement. Also, Telgin that art that you posted a while back of Falcata was great.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 09:04:13 pm
Even as they entered Falcata's room, Friesden's nervousness grew. She had worried, after the fight, whether Falcata would have survived the charge, but by the Sisters, she had.

Heiro had been hurt, but the Sisters had blessed Friesden, and he had only gotten a broken bone, which would heal in time. Even as the three entered, Khenal was next to Friesden on her right, and Heiro was on her left. They had refused to leave her side ever since the... The attempt, though the siege had forced them to their duty. But when they came back, it was as if it had been just after.

At least she could be of comfort to them. But if Falcata agreed, maybe she could be even more comfort. It would be easier this way. For all of them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 10:15:32 pm
Falcata welcomes the three into her room with a smile.  "Hello everypony."  She looks at Heiro, then to his leg.  "I hope you're all doing well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 10:16:36 pm
Friesden kind of wanted to speak to Falcata...in private. But she waited as the other ponies exchanged pleasantries first.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 10:16:57 pm
"I'm doin' alright. How's Kris?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 10:18:38 pm
"Oh, she's doing fine.  I think she's off playing with Lilac right now, but she said she enjoyed staying with you."  She smiles again.  "Thank you again for watching her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 10:20:29 pm
"It wasn't any problem, I'd be happy to do it again." Heiro glanced over at Friesden, as if looking for advice on what to do.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 10:26:07 pm
Friesden was caught unaware. She wasn't used to directing ponies at the best of times, and now was not the best of times. Maybe...umm...Well. Maybe best to ask now, maybe. Before the butterflies in her stomach got any worse.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 10:28:40 pm
Falcata looks to Friesden and can tell that she is anxious about something.  "Friesden?  How about you?  Are you doing well?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 10:29:52 pm
"I'm...I'm doing okay," said Friesden as she looked down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 10:36:15 pm
"Glad to hear it."  She looks over to Khenal and repeats the question,  "I take it you're doing well too?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 10:38:59 pm
Khenal turns to Friesden, a quiet smile on his face. "Better for her doing well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 10:43:24 pm
"Good.  I'm better for it too."  She looks back to Friesden and adds, "Well... unless you want this to be private..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 10:44:12 pm
The Sisters were watching, it seems. This could be the way!

Friesden nods. "Yes, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 10:47:47 pm
Falcata looks slightly surprised, but accepts her wishes.  "Oh, alright then.  If you two wouldn't mind?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 10:47:47 pm
"U-umm I-...I guess if you really want me to. are you sure I can't stay? It's so... quiet right now, I don't like it" Heiro starts to fidget nervously.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 10:52:40 pm
Khenal too looked surprised at his love's choosing to be in private, but he nodded. "Come on, Heiro. Let us leave the two together. We'll be waiting for you outside, Friesden." He saluted Falcata, and left the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on December 30, 2011, 10:55:57 pm
Heiro just continues to fidget, looking again to Friesden for direction.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 10:57:47 pm
"Please, Heiro?" Friesden asked.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 11:05:36 pm
Falcata nods at Heiro, encouraging him to leave.  As he does so, she looks back to Friesden.  "Well... all I really wanted to tell you is how thankful I am.  I saw how worried and upset you were in the hospital... I thought perhaps it would be better to talk about it in a more sedate environment."  She places a hoof against her chest.  "I owe you my life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 11:08:41 pm
Friesden shakes her head back and forth quickly. "No. No. No. You owe me nothing...but...if I could ask a favour..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 11:10:36 pm
Falcata returns a small smile.  "Of course, anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 11:11:54 pm
"It's...it's about Khenal. I...I need your help doing something."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 11:13:06 pm
"Khenal?" She raises an eyebrow.  "Of course, what is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 11:13:55 pm
"I..." Friesden steeled herself. Now was the moment of truth. "I need you to enthrall me to him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 11:16:18 pm
She stares back at Friesden for a moment, slack jawed.  "I... uh... Friesden... wh-why would you want that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 11:17:21 pm
"It's the only way for me to be safe around Khenal. I don't want to take any chances. And this way...this way he'll be happier. And that's all I've ever wanted."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 11:22:12 pm
Her mouth continues to hang agape for a moment.  "Safe around him?  I... I don't understand.  He'd never do anything to hurt you."  She searches Friesden's eyes.  "And... wouldn't he know?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 11:24:52 pm
"No. No, you don't understand. Back...back 12 days ago....I...I tried to hang myself. He...he said he couldn't bear to lose me, that he'd kill himself. I don't want to take the chance that he might...that he might not be able to stop me if I try it again. Please. You have to do this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 30, 2011, 11:32:05 pm
"Tried to..." Her eyes grow wide.  "Friesden... what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 30, 2011, 11:52:31 pm
"I..." Friesden lowered her head in shame. "I remembered my brother. My son. He who I lost. I... I thought it would be the easiest way to reunite myself with him...and to stop hurting other ponies...would be to take my own life. But Heiro and Khenal stopped me. I... They forgave me...but I don't want to take the chance that I'll hurt them again. Please...just this one little thing."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 31, 2011, 01:45:53 am
Falcata listens silently, waiting for Friesden to finish completely, fairly sure she had heard the mare correctly about her brother-son.  She shakes her head and looks Friesden in the eyes.

"This... this isn't the answer.  Friesden... I won't pretend that I've experienced the pain that you have, or even understand it.  But we're not so different."

She looks away and hangs her own head slightly.

"This is something that I've never told anypony... but I quite nearly did the same thing to myself.  After the terrible things that I'd done, after losing my husband, after being banished here, I was so consumed with despair that I tried to kill myself."  She sighs.  "One night, two days after we arrived here, I climbed to the top of the tower, and stared over the edge for hours.  I kept trying to work up the courage to jump and it end it all.  I never could."

She looks back to Friesden.  "No matter how much I wanted to see Estoc again... no matter how much it hurt to be without him... no matter how much I hated myself for what I had done to bring myself and Kris here... it wasn't worth it.  I couldn't leave Kris behind.  The thought of leaving a loved one behind to have to live with my death, especially a senseless one like that... I couldn't do it."

She smiles weakly at Friesden.  "But... I think you understand that now... right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 31, 2011, 01:51:28 am
"I know. But I...I don't trust myself. This is the easiest route...and I'll be able to make Khenal happier by this, too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 31, 2011, 02:05:01 am
She shakes her head again.  "It is the easiest route.  But it's not the right route."

She motions to the door, where Khenal would presumably be standing just out of earshot.  "I don't think you understand how much this would hurt Khenal if he found out.  He blamed himself for exploiting you, to the point of hurting himself to fix it."

Falcata looks Friesden in the eyes again.  "To Khenal, being enthralled to him, is worse than leaving him.  He would never forgive himself for putting you through that, even if he knew it wasn't him that did it to you this time."

She sighs.  "It's all academic anyway... I never learned to use my magic well, and I certainly don't know how to do that.  Even if I could, Khenal would surely find out sooner than later.  And if he found out... I fear what he might do to himself next to try and free you."

She places a hoof on Friesden's shoulder.  "Please... this isn't the way... With Khenal, you can overcome anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on December 31, 2011, 02:06:40 am
((I HAVE RETURNED FROM THE SPRAWL!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 31, 2011, 02:10:27 am
Friesden's face fell, if possible, even more.

"I guess...I guess I just got it wrong...again."

She looks up to Falcata with beseeching eyes.

"Please...tell me why I deserve him? What is there that I've done right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 31, 2011, 03:01:27 am
Falcata smiles and points to herself.  "Surely you haven't forgotten what you did for me already.  I would consider that having done something very right.  And the ponies that you've helped in the hospital not days ago?  Or what about the prisoners that you helped rescue during the flood?  If you hadn't been there, both they and I would have drowned."

She points off toward Khenal again.  "You've done nothing but good things since I've come to know you.  And you won't find a pony that loves you any more than Khenal does.  He can see the good in you.  I can see the good in you..."

She pulls Friesden into an embrace.  "You saved my life, Friesden.  I'll never forget that as long as I live."  She releases the embrace and bites back tears.  "You might not accept my thanks for what you've done... but... would you accept my friendship instead?  As long as I live, you'll always have somepony to talk to in me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 31, 2011, 03:33:16 am
"...Yes, of course I will!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 31, 2011, 06:18:01 am
"Thank you..."  Falcata manages to keep the tears just below the surface, and smiles.

"Everypony makes mistakes..."  She places her hoof on Friesden's shoulder again.  "But the only mistake that you're making is not trusting yourself.  It took a lot of courage and strength to do what you did for me.  I believe in you, it's time you did the same."

((Apologies for holding things up.  I should be returning to a more typical schedule now.  Oh, and Falcata has been happy recently.  She made a friend recently.  She talked with a friend recently.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 31, 2011, 07:54:37 am
"I...I think we should...call in the boys now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on December 31, 2011, 01:35:28 pm
She nods with a smile.  "Okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on December 31, 2011, 02:28:34 pm
Friesden walks to the door, and opens it up.

"Heiro? Khenal? You can come back in now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 01, 2012, 12:17:09 am
((Darn it khenal, where are you?!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 02:36:45 am
I nod at Friesden and follow her inside, still slightly confused about why she asked Heiro and I to leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 02:41:02 am
"Khenal...Heiro..." Friesden breathed in deep, and continued. "I...I have a confession to make."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 02:49:10 am
I sit down and listen to Friesden.  No matter what she has to confess, we'll be able to get through it together.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 02:51:00 am
"The...the reason I wanted to talk to Falcata...was so I could ask her to...to put a spell on me. I came here to...to ask her to enthrall me to you, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 02:54:47 am
"What!?  But why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 02:57:25 am
Friesden hangs her head.

"Because...because...because it would just be so much easier. It would...it would..."

She braces herself, as if expecting a slap. "Please don't be mad!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 03:10:39 am
"I'm not mad, I'm confused.  Why would you want to loose your free will?"

Heiro pipes up.

"Ya, why would you do that?  We don't want you to just be a slave, we love you!  We want you to be happy and still be you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 03:29:46 am
"Because...it was the easiest way. I...I just want to make you happy...with that, it would be so much easier."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 03:37:33 am
"Few things worth doing are easy, my love."

I pause, giving Friesden a look combining concern, inspiration and just a dash of mischievousness.  Heiro seems to notice the look, but says nothing.  Instead, he gives me an inquiring look of his own.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 03:45:48 am
"But...but I'd have...but I'd have been able to make you happy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 03:49:09 am
Heiro again picks up the slack as I continue thinking.

"You being you is what makes us happy!  Being enthralled removes everything that makes you you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 03:55:13 am
Friesden's face droops. "I...I know now...I was just being my foalish old self...I... I just wish I could get something right and make the ponies I cared about happy for once...I'm not even fit to be used, am I?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 03:59:10 am
I nod to myself and start speaking before Heiro can.

"Friesden, you are fit to be whatever you like.  I would follow you to the ends of the world.  In fact, I was just thinking of something along those lines.  What would you like to do for the rest of the day?  For the next few days?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 01, 2012, 04:00:28 am
Falcata smiles and places a hoof on Friesden's shoulder.  "Remember what I just told you?  You couldn't have made me any happier, after what you did for me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 04:01:23 am
"I...I don't know. Whatever you want to do?"

Her face brightens a bit as Falcata reassures her, then droops again. They were being nice...trying to save her feelings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 04:10:51 am
"I want to do whatever you want to do.  For the next few days, you are in charge."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 04:12:44 am
Friesden's eyes widen in a combination of fear, horror, and indecision.

"But...but...But!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on January 01, 2012, 04:25:10 am
"Webz are back on. One word. D'AWWWWWW!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 01, 2012, 06:49:25 am
((BLARRRGI'MSTILLAWAKEBECAUSEMYBODYWON'TEVERLETMESLEEPCURSEYOUBODYYOU'RENOTNICEATALL!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 01, 2012, 11:24:23 am
Charity's Journal 6th Slate, 100

The carvan form the captial decided to set out through the carverns. The leader had a map that showed tunnels that would take them all the way out of the Failed Jungles. Seemed they were less afraid of the cavern beasts then they were the Diomedians. Shortly after they left, Otik, who was on watch (Alone since her squad is shattered.) heard the sounds of battle. She called for assistance and the Militia and the Fortress Guard ran out to help. They found a single unicorn from the carvan, one of their guards, standing in an opening surrounded by a half dozen dead crundles, standing over the lone survivor. He smashed it's skull, with his mace, just as the militia arrived. This unicorn guard had stayed behind to cover the escape of the merchants, and while he was victorious he was battered and bruised, Starkey offered to take the stallion up to see Bubbles, but he said he was fine. He then left to catch up with his , the militia took a look around and found another group of crundles nearby, undoubtly planning an ambush on the caravan, and they killed them all.

Charity's Journal 14th Slate 100

A large group of new migrants has arrived. 19 in all.

Male Unicorn Soapmaker, (He's going to be drafted into the militia)
Male Earthpony Medic (He's got both Medical and Combat skills, I'm going to draft him into the melee militia. He's also married to the next pony.) ((That makes the melee squad full at 10 again.))
Female Pegasus Cheese Maker (Skyguard Recruit.)
Female Pegasus Nurse
Male Unicorn Ranger (Married to the following pony. No children.)
Female Unicorn Peasant
Male Unicorn Gem Cutter (Less skilled than Nicolta so he's going into the Guard.)
Female Pegasus Fisherpony (A new recruit for the Skygaurd)
Male Pegasus Ranger (Definatly excellent material for the Skyguard.)
Male Earthpony Furnace Operator
Female Pegasus Dairy Farmer (Another Skyguard Recruit.)
Female Pegasus Glassworker (Yay!)
Female Pegasus Soapmaker (Skyguard)
Female Earth Fisherpony
Male Pegasus Doctor
Male Unicorn low level Metalcrafter (Drafted into the guard.)
Female Pegasus low level Glassworker (Skyguard.)
Female Pegasus Fish Disector (Skyguard.)
Female Pegasus Peasant (Skyguard.)

I'm quite pleased to see so many new recruits for our military. This brings Starkey and Otik's squads each up to ten members (assuming Cornbread can still fight when Friesden finishes operating, 9 if otherwise.) And the Fortress Guard is at 9. And my bodyguard is still at 4.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 01, 2012, 07:43:46 pm
Heiro seems excited "Oh that sounds like fun! I'll bet there's all sortsa stuff you wanna do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 07:47:01 pm
"But...but...but I'll mess up. I always have. It's all I've ever done."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 08:47:19 pm
I smile warmly at my love.

"You'll do fine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 08:54:24 pm
"No...No I won't!" Friesden begins to cry again. "I...I just always seem to make things worse. I'm...I'm a failure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 01, 2012, 08:59:51 pm
"No you aren't! I would join in but with my leg..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 09:06:17 pm
Friesden breaks down, crying.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 01, 2012, 09:08:49 pm
heiro goes over to hug Friesden "Friesden? Did I say something wrong? I'm sorry, please don't cry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 09:15:29 pm
"It...It should have been me that got hurt, not you...I'm a monster, Heiro," she whispers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 01, 2012, 09:19:44 pm
"No you aren't. I'm a guard, getting hurt is part of my job."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 09:45:58 pm
"But...but you're a good pony...I'm evil."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 01, 2012, 09:50:23 pm
"I told you already, you aren't evil. If you are evil, then so am I"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 09:53:47 pm
"No....no...you can't be evil...you're good," Friesden whispers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 01, 2012, 09:56:05 pm
"So are you! Don't even think otherwise."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 10:01:08 pm
"I...I'm sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 10:09:48 pm
I smile, listening to Heiro and Friesden.  Maybe hearing it from somepony else will help her realize the truth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 01, 2012, 10:18:06 pm
Falcata watches in silence, unsure of what to say or do.  She really wanted to help Friesden, but at this point she was afraid to say much else at the risk of making it worse.  Khenal knew her far better than she did, so he would probably know what to say, and Heiro seemed to be handling things well.  She hated to just stand there... but what could she say?

"Don't be sorry Friesden, you've done nothing wrong..."

She smiles and moves to look Friesden in the eyes.  "Evil ponies don't risk their lives to save others.  That is the opposite of evil.  You're probably the kindest and most selfless pony I've ever met."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 10:22:39 pm
Friesden starts to smile, a still sad smile.

"I...I just wish I could repay you all."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 01, 2012, 10:32:27 pm
"You've done more for me than I could ever ask for in a lifetime."

Falcata gives her another genuine smile.  "But, if you would do one more thing for me?  Stop doubting yourself so much."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 10:59:35 pm
"Would...would that be enough? I'm...I'm not sure I could do it..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 11:07:08 pm
"I think you can do it, Friesden.  No, I know you can do it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 01, 2012, 11:07:33 pm
She nods, still smiling.  "Yes, that's all I ask.  I know you can do it, I believe in you.  It's time for you to start believing in yourself."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 11:09:07 pm
Friesden steels herself, and smiles.

"If that is what will make you happy. If that is what you ask, I will do it. Gladly."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 01, 2012, 11:09:12 pm
"Of course you can, my little sis can do anything!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 11:10:42 pm
Friesden begins to cry again, tears of joy.

"I...I can't thank you enough. I'll never deserve you three, or Starkey and Otik, never."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 11:20:15 pm
I pull everypony into a group hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 11:23:25 pm
"I...I love you, Khenal..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 01, 2012, 11:23:46 pm
Heiro smiles, and winces in pain a bit from his leg.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 01, 2012, 11:27:19 pm
Falcata accepts the embrace with a smile.  Right now, she really did want to see Friesden happy above everything else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 11:30:06 pm
"I love you too, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 11:39:34 pm
"Thank you all. So much."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 01, 2012, 11:42:26 pm
I smile at Friesden.

"So, what did you want to do today?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 01, 2012, 11:47:25 pm
"I...Um...I don't know."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 12:14:44 am
"Well, are you hungry?  Should we get something to eat?  Maybe you want to explore around outside, or just enjoy the view from the tower?  Maybe visit Starkey or Otik?  Or simply stay in and relax?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 12:22:25 am
"Maybe...we should visit mum and dad. I should tell them, too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 01:22:45 am
I lean in to kiss Friesden.

"That sounds like a good plan."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 01:24:50 am
Friesden answers Khenal only with the kiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 01:27:19 am
Heiro backs away from the couple. "I-...I think I should be going now. If you need me I'll probably be in my room I-...if you need me..." Heiro turns and starts to limp away back to his room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 01:29:20 am
Falcata smiles and backs away to give the two some room.  Maybe Friesden was truly feeling better now.  She really hoped so.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 03:39:14 am
((Advancing to the next day.  I'm going to assume that Friesden and Khenal eventually leave Falcata's bedroom and see her adoptive parents.  ;) Oh, and apologies The Master, if this isn't something Lilac would get Kris to do, but it seems appropriate.  You weren't here to ask, and we needed an excuse. :) Lilac might be able to get involved later, depending on how far we get tonight, but this is going to end up not really involving Kris soon.))

Kris takes a cautious step into the caverns, trying to avoid being seen by anypony.  She wasn't supposed to be down there, she knew, but it was safe up here at the uppermost parts.  Lots of ponies came and went all the time.

She slips down the tunnel toward one of the smaller shafts off to the side.  There probably wouldn't be anypony in there, and she could find something to prove to Lilac that she'd been down here.  Her mom would be pretty angry if she found out she was down here, but there wasn't much chance of that, and Lilac insisted on the dare.  She'd be in and out in a moment, before anypony saw her.

But how could she prove she'd been down here?  Some spider webs?  A gem?

She looks up and down the walls as she creeps along in the growing darkness.  Maybe this wasn't such a good idea...


((Oh, and picture of Kris below.  She's a bit chubby, hehe.))

Spoiler: It's Kris! (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 03:48:40 am
Heiro is on patrol down near the entrance to the caverns, when he catches a glimpse of a filly entering them.

"Wait was that Kris? Why would she be going down there sis?" Silence is all he hears. "Right Midnight isn't here... If she was then I could... But its Kris if she gets hurt... Come on Heiro you can do this, Just focus"

Nervously, he begins to follow, his nervousness soon making him move faster, until he was running straight into the caves. "Grab Kris, get out, grab Kris, get out, grab Kris, get out"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 03:54:11 am
Kris steps over an unpleasant looking puddle of something and takes a few more nervous steps into the shaft.  This wasn't just a bad idea, it was a terrible idea.  She was starting to recall what happened when she followed Lilac into the woods and decided it wasn't worth it.  If her mom found out, she'd be furious, and she'd be right about it.

She steps back and realizes that it's quite dark now, and she can't quite make out the way back.  How did that spell go again?  She focuses a bit, and her horn lets off a dull glow, bringing her surroundings into a level of perceptible light.  But there was something else...

Her eyes snap open and she lets out a scream as she picks out the flicker of eyes staring back at her, and she bolts for the direction she came from.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 04:00:33 am
"A scream? Kris!" Heiro stats galloping full speed towards the scream, drawing Midnight's axe as he goes. "I...I watched Midnight do this enough, how hard can it be?" He almost loses his grip on the axe "This is for Kris, I have to be able to do this... I-...I have to. sis..."
Quickly, he runs on, holding Midnight's axe in a death grip.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 04:10:32 am
Kris gallops away from whatever it was that she wandered into, her heart thundering in her chest.  "Help!" she screams, hoping that there was somepony there to answer.

Suddenly she finds herself face-to-face with a guardpony, axe ready.  She skids to a halt with a startled squeak, nearly blundering into him.

Behind her, the crundle leaps forward, claws splayed and a sinister grin on its twisted face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 02, 2012, 05:15:36 am
((I am sorry, but my computer is ruined. It has a horrible virus that locks it up whenever the explorer program loads. I am going to sue Malware Anti-Bytes's ass for causing this, as it happened right as I ran the program for the first time. I will miss all of you guys so much! All of you are incredible, every last one of you! It's just not fair, but this is goodbye, unless i'm clever enough to duplicate the glitch that allowed the computer to run this time. The odds of it working after restarting are almost nil.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 05:17:23 am
((...bollocks.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 02, 2012, 05:22:26 am
((I really will miss you guys. I'll be on the IRC as long as I can, but the virus wakes up or whatever, it's game-over for good, because I can't afford another OS...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 02, 2012, 06:03:42 am
((Dsarker is the greatest. He managed to help me get rid of the virus! Praise Dsarker!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 06:11:20 am
((We have uncovered raw The Master! Praise the Dsarkers!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 02, 2012, 07:24:47 am
((Time to sleep, I'm actually drowsy. This is good, because I haven't slept in two or three days.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 03:21:15 pm
((Dsarker is credit to team!  Glad to have you back, The Master.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 05:54:42 pm
Heiro jumps at the crundle, panic granting him strength.

 "Kris, run!"

He begins to swing his axe at the creature.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Meta The Golem on January 02, 2012, 06:40:23 pm
Is it possible to get a pony now?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 06:54:23 pm
((Yes. If you check the list in the first post, that will tell you all the ponies that you can pick from.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 07:01:28 pm
((And you'll have to wait for KingStrongbeard to confirm it for you.))

Kris says nothing but obeys the command, bolting past Heiro into the expanse of the cavern.  She didn't see any more monsters around, but she wasn't keen on getting too far away from Herio and so stopped after a few steps.  She turns around to see the axe connect squarely with the crundle.

((Feel free to describe the carnage as you see fit. :) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 07:05:08 pm
((My thought was that Falcata would show up for the aftermath, I can describe that real well. I was gonna skip actually writing the dis-assembly))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 07:18:33 pm
((Ok then.  Hmm, not actually sure why Falcata would be near the caverns...))

Falcata was walking past the entrance to the caverns when she heard the screams of a filly, followed by what was definitely the sounds of something being torn apart in combat.  Her blood froze in her veins for a moment before she galloped at full speed into the open expanse.  She couldn't pick out who the voice belonged to... Lilac maybe?  Please be okay... please be okay...

((I'll leave it up to you on what state she finds the two in.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 07:27:53 pm
Heiro stands in the center of what was once a crundle, now more of a red mist covering the ground.

"Have to fight, have to keep Kris safe, have to"

He continues this whispered chant, Slowly and repeatedly striking the ground where the threat once stood. Exhausted and withdrawn he doesn't notice Falcata's approach, focused on destroying the danger that he can't see has far passed. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 07:49:46 pm
Falcata stumbles to a halt a short distance away from the two.  She recognizes some of the bits of what must have been a crundle strewn about the area, and Heiro standing in the middle of it all.  Kris sits in a frightened heap just behind him, unwilling to take her eyes off the scene.

"Kris!" Falcata shouts, trotting over to her.

The filly looks up, and upon recognizing her mom, stands and gallops over, throwing herself into a hug as she begins to cry.
  "Mom... I'm... I'm so sorry... I... I didn't mean to..."

Falcata strokes her mane and tries to calm her as she notices Heiro still hacking away at the gore on the ground.  "Corporal?  Are you alright?  I... I think you got it..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 07:51:42 pm
Heiro doesn't seem to hear Falcata, or at least he doesn't respond, he just continues his chant, and his strikes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 07:56:45 pm
Falcata looks down at Kris and inspects her for a moment.  She didn't look hurt, at least.  "Kris, are you alright?"

The filly nods without a word and initially resists her mother's attempts to dislodge her, but backs away after enough persuasion.  Falcata steps over to Heiro and looks him in the eyes, careful not to get too close to the axe he is hacking the ground with.  "Corporal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 07:59:21 pm
Heiro's eyes are blank, looking like dull pools. He shifts his grip on his axe slightly, and continues his chant.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 08:07:25 pm
"Corporal?  Corporal, what's wrong?"  Falcata waves a hoof in front of Heiro, getting no response.  She reaches out to touch him, but decides against doing so physically.

She reaches out with her magic and tries to still the axe as he brings it down for another swing, again careful to stay out of his reach.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 08:11:34 pm
The axe halts, shocking Heiro out of his daze, he jumps a bit and starts looking around nevously.

"D-...did I get it? A-...are there more? W-...we s-should leave now, quickly. Kris is Kris OK!"

He stumbles through his sentences, not seeming to notice his surroundings, seemingly scared of something... or everything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 08:15:30 pm
Falcata raises an eyebrow and looks Heiro in the eyes.  "Yes, she's fine, thanks to you.  Are... are you okay?"

Kris steps over nervously and takes a glance at the bloody mess on the ground before hiding behind her mother.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 08:18:54 pm
"I-...I think so. w-...we n-need to leave now t-there's danger here, c-can't you tell."

Heiro starts breathing faster, seeming to be on the verge of panic.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 08:21:25 pm
She nods.  "You're right, there could be more.  Come on."  She turns to leave, shooing Kris on toward the exit and looking to make sure that Heiro is following.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 08:23:39 pm
Heiro follows along behind, shrinking away from the shadows, and jumping at any sudden noise. He keeps looking around as if he expects enemies to spring from the walls at any moment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 08:28:05 pm
As the three reach the relative saftey of the fortress proper, Falcata halts and turns to face Heiro.  She notices his still profoundly troubled expression and says, "Corporal?  It's over now, we're safe.  Kris is safe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 08:35:51 pm
"Right, safe Kris is safe I'm safe, I did good right sis... oh, right, sis isn't there..." Heiro mumbles quietly to himself to himself

Slightly louder he says to Falcata "U-...um w-would you mind walking home with me? I-it's s-so quiet, I don't like it when it's quiet... U-...um you don't have to though if you don't want to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 08:43:01 pm
Falcata stares at him for a moment, a worried expression on her face.  She looks down to Kris.  "Go on home, we'll discuss what happened later."

She looks back to Heiro.  "Uh... alright.  When are you supposed to go off duty?  We might should see Captain Isos first..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 08:45:01 pm
"D-duty, a-am I on d-duty? u-um I-I t-think I was s-supposed to b-be off n-now..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 08:49:04 pm
The worry inside her grows, but she keeps as much of it from her face as possible.  What was getting to him so badly?  Surely it wasn't just a single crundle... and what did he mean by everything he just said?  She should probably bring this up with somepony... Captain Isos maybe?  Khenal?  Oh, she didn't know...

"Oh... okay, come on, let's go."

She beckons for him to follow and begins off toward the living quarters.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Meta The Golem on January 02, 2012, 08:50:38 pm
(I would like to claim the legendary metalworker, his name shall be Calmsteels and he will be a dwarf who ignores the crazy shit that's (if its any) going on around him unless it directly involves him or his friends (if any) he hopes to one day to make an legendary artifact sword or weapon that will be remembered for thousands of generations of dwarves!) (I hope i get to play this dwarf because hes vital to most of the fortress working with the metal making armor and what not) (i'll be keeping an eye on this thread king)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Meta The Golem on January 02, 2012, 08:52:48 pm
(LOL PONIES) (sorry i meant pony instead of dwarf(curse my wandering mind))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 08:53:22 pm
"H-hey F-Falcata, Khenal knows a l-lot of m-mental magic r-right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 08:55:44 pm
That didn't sound good... where was he going with this?  "Uh... yes, he does."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 02, 2012, 08:59:02 pm
Heiro's eyes seem to brighten a bit "R-really! M-maybe h-he could... d-do you know where he is?"

His voice drops and he mumbles to himself "K-kenal will know what to do. He's sure to be able to get sis back."
 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 09:03:28 pm
"I... he is off duty right now, so I'm not sure where he is.  Why don't we get you home?  I'll go look for him."  Leaving him alone might not be such a good idea, actually...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 09:15:47 pm
A patrolling soldier directs Khenal and Friesden towards the arena. As they draw near, the sounds of combat echo down the hall. A curious sight greets them as they enter: Otik has backed Starkey into a corner with a padded whip, the stallion deflecting her blows with a training spear. She seems to be faring much better with the unfamiliar weapon than he is. Starkey notices the couple enter.

"Friesden? Take five, hun. Frie-HURK"

As he drops his guard, Otik lashes out with the whip, wrapping around Starkey's hindlegs and hoisting him into the air.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 09:18:00 pm
Even as she does so, Friesden ducks under Khenal's wings with a meep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 09:19:47 pm
Otik grins around the end of the whip.

"Need a shpare shtallion hun? Jush caugh' thish wun fresh!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 09:23:52 pm
Friesden slowly peeks out from behind Khenal's wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 09:24:06 pm
'Huh, I wonder where Otik learned to use a whip like that.'

I check on Friesden under my wing.


"Heh, it's alright, Friesden.  They're just training."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 09:25:29 pm
A slight blush breaking out, Friesden comes out from under Khenal's wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 09:41:05 pm
Otik lowers Starkey to the ground and helps him disentangle himself. They stow their weapons and approach the couple.

"Well I can't say I'm not overjoyed to see you, hun, but... are you sure you should be up and about? We heard about what you did for miss Falcata."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 09:42:17 pm
"it's nothing. I'm alright."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 09:46:39 pm
I gently nuzzle my love.

"You saved her life, Friesden.  That was certainly far more than nothing."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 09:47:08 pm
"Nothing?"

Starkey bends down and gently nuzzles Friesden, slowly raising her to her hooves.

"The way I hear, you walked Doc Bubbles through surgery with a pony's hooves rooting around in your insides. That's far from nothing."

He hugs her gently.

"That was incredibly brave, and I'm very proud of you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 09:49:43 pm
"it wasn't that hard. anypony could have done it. I just happened to be the least useful one at the time." she whispers, as her blush deepens.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 09:54:26 pm
Otik joins the hug.

"Dunnae talk like that, hun. Yer th' only one in a thousand miles who knew th' procedure. She would've died without ye."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 09:57:23 pm
She cringes, slightly. "they'd have thought of something else. I just gave them a hoof."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 09:58:45 pm
"No, Friesden.  You are the only pony in the fort who could have directed that operation.  Falcata would almost certainly be dead now if it weren't for you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 10:01:33 pm
Friesden begins to tear up. "I...I'm just happy to have you...all of you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 10:08:26 pm
"An' we're both very happy to have you, Fri."

Starkey takes this opportunity to quietly check the bandages around Friesden's abdomen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 10:15:22 pm
The bandages are slightly stained red, and are wet.

"I...I have to tell you something. I've...I've already told Khenal this...but I have to tell you two."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 10:17:17 pm
I nuzzle Friesden and stand at her side.  This is something she needs to say, but I can still give her support at least.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 10:20:59 pm
Otik beams.

"Yer gettin' married?"

Starkey looks up.


"You're pregnant?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 10:25:37 pm
"I...I tried to hang myself two weeks ago."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 10:29:01 pm
"Oh, sisters Friesden..."

Otik clutches her tightly.


"In Luna's name, Friesden... why would you ever want to do that to yourself?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 10:30:37 pm
"It's...it's not important. But...today...We went to see Falcata."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 10:32:30 pm
"You're not getting out of it that easily. We'll be having a talk about this later... but go on."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 10:33:51 pm
"I...I went to ask her something." Friesden turns to Khenal, a plaintive expression on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 10:38:57 pm
I lay a wing across Friesden to gently embrace her.

"Would you like me to continue instead?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 10:39:37 pm
She nods quickly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 10:42:46 pm
I briefly tighten the embrace before continuing the tale, though I leave my wing across Friesden.

"She asked me to wait outside, so I don't know the specifics of their conversation, but... she wanted Falcata to Enthrall her to me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 10:46:33 pm
"What? B-But she wos terrified at th' thought of it before! Why would ye want that, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 10:50:01 pm
"Because...because I thought it would make him happy. That's all I'm good for..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 11:05:59 pm
Starkey can think of nothing to say. He just holds her close. Otik leans in and whispers something in Friesden's ear.

"Y'know hun, there's other ways ye could make Khenal happy..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 11:07:16 pm
"What? What do you mean?" Friesden asks, confusion replacing the shame on her face, though not completely.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 11:10:01 pm
I wince slightly as Friesden continues to tear herself down, then tighten the embrace.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 11:11:17 pm
"I'll show ye later. F'r now, promise me ye won't do somethin' like this again. An' especially that ye won't try to... end it... ever again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 11:12:47 pm
"I'm...I'm sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 11:18:33 pm
"No..."

Otik lifts Friesden's muzzle, staring into her eyes.

"Promise. I dunnae think I could stand t' lose another child..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 11:22:15 pm
"I...I don't think I could...either. I promise, mum."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 11:26:49 pm
"Thank ye."

While they share their tender moment, Starkey and Khenal step aside.


"Sorry we couldn't come and visit you two, but with all the new recruits to get settled in, we've both had our hands full. How have things been?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 11:29:43 pm
"Appart from the suicide attempt and Enthrallment business?  Alright, I guess.  Friesden has been really down on herself lately, so we're trying something to build her confidence up a bit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 11:31:52 pm
"Aye, and I'm grateful for that. But... I'm guessing it isn't helping much?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 02, 2012, 11:37:12 pm
"Mooooooooooooooooooom?"
Lilac's voice can be heard coming from the doors to the Arena.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 11:38:25 pm
"Well, not yet.  But we did just start it.  I think we need to keep at it a bit before we'll see any results."

I sigh, heavily.

"I really hope it works.  It hurts to see her being so depressed and self-deprecating ."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 11:44:14 pm
"I know it hurts, lad. Believe me, I know more than you can imagine."

Starkey sighs, looking on at the mother and daughter.

"I don't think this is some passing thing that we can fix with a lot of hugs and encouragement. She needs help, Khenal. Help she can't get in Glitterglen."

He snorts.

"Help I don't think she can get anywhere in the Principality. Back home, there were specialists, trained to help ponies like her, but I've never heard of anything like that here."

 - - - - - -

"Lilac? Wot is it, hun?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 02, 2012, 11:46:46 pm
Lilac trots in, wearing her favorite hat, carrying a small dagger in her mouth.
"THIS was on my bed!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 11:47:43 pm
I quirk an eyebrow at Starkey.

"Back home?  What kind of specialists?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 02, 2012, 11:49:13 pm
Friesden steps back from Otik, slinking over to the shadows. Time for Otik to deal with something more important than Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 02, 2012, 11:51:32 pm
Falcata continues to trot down the hallway toward the arena, picking up a bit of speed as she went.  Khenal wasn't at the barracks, at any of his posts or at his home.  She went to check with Captain Starkey or Lieutenant Otik, but they weren't home either.  They might still know where he was, but the last place she could think they might be was the arena.

She didn't like the way Heiro was talking and acting when she left him alone.  She needed to get Khenal to him soon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 02, 2012, 11:54:24 pm
"We had a word for them: 'psychotherapists'. They were trained to diagnose and treat maladies of the mind: clinical depression, Legionary's Nerves... They could figure out what she's going through far better than any of us could, and help her get past it."

 - - - - - -

"Och, I told th' lads the 2nd lieutenant's office was off-limits. I'm sorry, hun. Just give that here, an' I'll take care of it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 02, 2012, 11:57:53 pm
"Otik, do daggers normally talk?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 02, 2012, 11:58:22 pm
"Psychotherapists?  Sounds like we could definitely use one of those.  I know a lot about how a mind can break, but precious little about repairing one.  All I really know is that it's up to the one with the problem to deal with it, though others can certainly help.  Do you think they might have any books on the subject?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 03, 2012, 12:05:42 am
"Oh, I'm sure they have volumes on it. But getting your hooves on any, with import regulations as they are? Another matter entirely."

 - - - - - -

Otik blinks.

"N-No, hun, they don't. Wot did it say to ye?"

She narrows her eyes at Lilac.

"Lilac... did th' dagger tell ye t'set fires? Or t'hurt lit'l animals?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 12:08:11 am
"Um... Starkey?  Where... um, where is 'Home' that importing some books might be a problem?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 03, 2012, 12:09:50 am
"No...but it keeps saying Honor, Loyalty, Laughter, Honesty."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 12:10:31 am
Falcata trots into the arena, desperately hoping that she'd find somepony there.  She perks up as she literally finds everypony she was looking for.  She hurries over to Khenal and Starkey.  She hoped they weren't discussing anything critical...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 03, 2012, 12:14:16 am
He stiffens.

"Oh? Oh, that's... right, I've never told you. Never told anypony, besides Otik..."

Starkey turns back to Khenal.

"I was born in LaceAbbey. It's a province of the Rainbow Coalition. I didn't become a citizen of the Principailty until I joined the Tailentranced city guard."

 - - - - - -

Otik ponders this a moment. There's only one place she can think of where those words occur together, but what did that have to do with anything?

"Is that... all it says, hun?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 12:19:55 am
"Rainbows?  Huh.  Would they be unwilling to export, or does Hugwax frown on importing their knowledge?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 03, 2012, 12:21:34 am
Lilac simply collapses. The dagger clatters to the floor, blade now covered in blood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 12:26:42 am
Friesden screams in horror when she sees her sister drop.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 12:28:02 am
I whip around when I hear Friesden scream, dropping into a defensive stance and looking around for what caused it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 12:29:58 am
Khenal comes face-to-face with Falcata, who has a thoroughly surprised expression on her face.  She turns to look at Friesden then follows her eyes to the fallen Lilac.  "What?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 03, 2012, 12:31:28 am
As far as anypony in the room can tell, Lilac is not breathing, BUT, is also not blue or gray, so she doesn't seem to be dead.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 12:31:51 am
Friesden drops to the ground, covering her head with her wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 03, 2012, 12:34:51 am
"Starkey!"

Otik rushes to Lilac's side. Starkey gallops up beside her.


"What happened?"

"I dunno, she came in with that knife, she must've slipped and cut herself."

"I'll take care of her. You see to Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 03, 2012, 12:34:59 am
((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TR3v_eT8aCA&feature=player_detailpage scene music.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 03, 2012, 12:36:47 am
Starkey and Otik begin to hear 'Honor, Loyalty, Laughter, Honesty, Honor...' loop inside their minds as they reach Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 12:37:55 am
Seeing no immediate danger, I rush to Friesden to check if she's alright.

"Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 12:39:38 am
Friesden is shaking, her hooves clutching her head under her wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 12:46:28 am
I gently touch Friesden with a forehoof.

"Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 12:48:39 am
Falcata looks around nervously.  What happened?  She needed to get Khenal to Heiro, but Liliac... what happened to her?    "Buck..." she whispers under her breath, fidgeting indecisively.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 03, 2012, 12:49:29 am
'Hmm. Chanting voices in my head. That sounds like your area of expertise, Schmoe.'

Starkey checks Lilac for any obvious signs of injury.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 12:50:46 am
Friesden tumbles over backward when Khenal touches her, her limbs flailing as she tries in vain to stop. In one tragic instant, one of her legs gets caught by a wing, and prevents it from moving freely.

It snaps, loudly and clearly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 12:55:10 am
"Yes, yes. I'm doing my best up here. Not easy when you're missing half of you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 12:55:48 am
I stare in horror for a moment, before my horn glows as I gently levitate Friesden.

"Ohbuckohbuckohbuck... Friesden?  What do I do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 03, 2012, 12:56:10 am
Otik suddenly collapses. Starkey begins to feel woozy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 12:57:29 am
"Oh...Khenal..." she saids mournfully. "It...It hurts, Khenal. Oh, Sisters, it hurts. Khenal? Where are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 03, 2012, 12:59:09 am
'Missing half of... why do I... pretty... nonono clop-dammit stay awake! Lilac! Friesden! Both daughters! In trouble! Stay! Awake!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 01:00:09 am
"Friesden!  I'm here!  Can you hear me?"

Panic starts to creep into my voice as I grow more worried.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 01:00:35 am
Falcata cringes as she hears the bone snap.  She looks over slowly to confirm it was who she feared it would be.  Sisters above... would Friesden never catch a break?  Now she really didn't know what to do...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 01:01:28 am
"It...it hurts, Khenal," she says, a pathetic tone to her voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 03, 2012, 01:02:56 am
Stars begin to fill Starkey's vision, and he realizes to his horror that he's going to faint, one way or the other.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 03, 2012, 01:05:31 am
'I... Schmoe...  take over... I'm... trusting you... don't... break...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 01:06:22 am
"Khenal? Khenal, where are you? It hurts, Khenal. Khenal, it hurts!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 01:08:06 am
"Um um um... Hospital!"

As I turn to rush to the hospital, I only dimly register that Otik and Lilac are on the ground, and Starkey looks unsteady as well.

"I'm still here, Friesden!  I'm taking you to the hospital.  That's the right place to go, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 01:11:10 am
"I don't know, Khenal. Why is everything so bright, Khenal? It's too bright, Khenal. Maybe I should close my eyes, Khenal."

She does so.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 03, 2012, 01:12:27 am
Starkey collapses onto the hilt of the dagger, bruising his chest badly but not injuring him.

**********************

Starkey "wakes up" in a wasteland. He can hear somepony or something screaming.
'...HONOR, LOYALTY, LAUGHTER, HONESTY!!!!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 01:13:42 am
'Bright?  Is bright good or bad?  I'm pretty sure closed eyes is bad, though.'

"Friesden?  Friesden!  Can you still hear me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 01:15:09 am
Her eyes flutter open for a second.

"I'm still here, Khenal. Just a bit tired, Khenal. You're going to make a wonderful father, Khenal. I do love you, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 01:18:54 am
Falcata watches Khenal take Friesden out of the arena and trots over to the remaining three ponies.  They were all unconscious... why did this seem to happen to Lilac so much?  What if she carried them off too?  They didn't need to just lay here, but she certainly couldn't move them all by herself...  what to do... what to do...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 01:22:27 am
"I love you too, Friesden.  I love you so much."

I continue rushing towards the hospital, hoping the doctors there can help Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 01:31:59 am
"Khenal. Will you marry me, Khenal? I know I'm not as pretty as Falcata. But I love you, Khenal. Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 01:39:58 am
'Oh please don't be delirious.  Shut up, brain!  Be happy!  The mare of your dreams just proposed!'

"Of course I'll marry you!"

I burst into the hospital and gently set Friesden down on a bed.  It looks like Venture is on duty.

"Venture!  Friesden broke her wing!"

I fidget in place as Venture goes about examining the break.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 01:44:24 am
"That's good, Khenal. I do love you, you know, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 03, 2012, 01:47:23 am
(My apologies for interrupting the role-playing that has been going on. This is Telgin's brother. I have become interested in joining this RP, but obviously do not want to stick a monkey-wrench into your campaign. For that reason, I am flexible and can accept any pony that you feel is best for me to own. My main desire is to be a male pony (since I am male myself). I had my eye on the male pegasus blacksmith, but I can be another character if that is necessary. I would like to have some degree of involvement, but not so much involvement that I must be on everyday nor have to stay up into the wee hours of the morning with RPing.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 03, 2012, 01:50:32 am
((Don't worry about it! WELCOME TO GLITTERGLEN! POPULATION: ANYPONY WHO IS STILL BREATHING!(and some that aren't!) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 01:51:17 am
One by one, Falcata picks up the ponies and brings them to the hospital, starting with Lilac and ending with Otik.  She is exhausted by the time she brings Otik in, and takes a moment to sit and catch her breath in the hospital.  She looks up to see Khenal standing worried over Friesden, and Venture setting off to fetch something.

"How... is... she?" she manages between huffs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 01:52:48 am
"My wing still hurts Khenal. When will we get married?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 01:55:20 am
I get as close to Friesden as I can without being in Venture's way.  Venture examines the break as I do so: it appears to me a clean compound fracture.  She goes to get some plaster and other bits to set the break.

"I... I'm sorry I broke your wing, Friesden.  I..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 02:01:41 am
Falcata stands and takes another deep breath.  She carefully steps over to Friesden, careful not to get in the way.  Her wing was broken... but it would heal at least.  She hangs her head at the thought of Friesden having to go through anything else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 02:02:53 am
"It's okay, Khenal! We're getting married!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 02:09:07 am
I can't help but smile at the thought of marrying Friesden.

"Yes, we will."

I gently nuzzle Friesden as Venture returns with what she needs to set the wing.

"Please step back for a moment while I set the bone and apply the cast so it'll heal properly."

Reluctantly, I step back to let Venture do her work.  As I do, I notice Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 02:11:32 am
"Venture! I'm going to marry Khenal, did you hear?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 02:15:00 am
Falcata locks eyes with Khenal for a moment.  Not a great time to bring this up, but it had to be soon...

"Khenal... this is a terrible time for this... but I think Corporal Heiro needs your help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 02:16:00 am
Venture smiles.

"Well congratulations!  Hold still please, I want this to set properly."

Her horn glows as she sets the break and casts a minor anesthetic spell so she can sew a few stitches before the cast goes on.

I wince as the wing is set, but listen to Falcata.


"Heiro?  What's wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 02:20:28 am
"I've never been to a marriage before. What happens at them?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 02:26:59 am
"I... I don't know.  He's acting very strange and asked for you to come to him.  He specifically mentioned needing mental magic..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 02:39:42 am
Venture keeps up the light chatter, hoping to keep her patient from concentrating on the pain as she finishes the stitches and starts to bind the wing.

"Actually, I've never been to one either.  But it's supposed to be a great party and you get to wear a fancy dress."

Meanwhile, I talk with Falcata.

"Mental issues?  I can certainly try, but I need Friesden's permission.  After all, she's still in charge."

I turn back to Friesden, trying to not pay attention to what's happening with her wing.

"Friesden?  Heiro might need my help with something.  Is it alright if I leave you here with Venture and see what he needs?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 02:46:36 am
"Thank you Khenal.  I only wish I could handle it, but this is way beyond what I can do."

She looks back to Friesden.

"I... maybe I can help him... I don't know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 02:46:41 am
"A fancy dress...that'd be nice! You'll have to come to it too. Then we can both have been to a wedding!"

Friesden listens to Khenal, with concern spreading over her face. "You'll be back soon, won't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 02:49:36 am
"I'll be back as soon as possible, I promise."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 03, 2012, 02:51:48 am
"Please? I don't want to leave you. I love you, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:01:40 am
"I'll return the moment I can, I swear it.  I love you so much Friesden."

I lean in to give her a passionate, if unfortunately brief, kiss before following Falcata to see what Heiro needs help with.

'Take care of her, Venture.  Take care of my Fiance...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 03:04:19 am
Falcata thanks Khenal for agreeing to help and leads him back to Heiro's room.  She dearly hoped the delays wouldn't be a serious issue...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:06:36 am
they enter the room to find... nothing. Or at least it appears that way at first upon looking around they find Heiro hiding under his bed, shaking like a leaf.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 03:09:52 am
Worse than she expected... this was definitely something only Khenal could help with...

She leans down and tries to encourage him out from his hiding spot.


"Corporal?  Khenal is here..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:10:06 am
"Heiro?  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:12:38 am
'K-Kenal Y-you're here? T-thank the s-sisters, it's so quiet, I-I hate the quiet. You can help, I know you can!" Heiro pulls himself out from under the bed and stands up, still shaking.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:14:22 am
I raise an eyebrow at Heiro.  This definitely doesn't look good.

"What's the matter, Heiro?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:16:34 am
"S-sis s-she won't, I-I can't hear her... I-it's too quiet. I c-can't stand q-quiet. B-bad t-things happen w-when it's quiet."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:18:45 am
"Alright, what do you want me to do?  Go into your mind and look for her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:20:34 am
'Y-yeah You c-can do that right? Y-you know l-lotsa mental m-magics, I-I remember w-what Midnight said after we s-sparred."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:22:50 am
"Yes, I can.  I have to ask because going into a mind uninvited can be very dangerous.  Would you like me to enter now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:24:15 am
"Yesyesyes right now. u-um d-do I need t-to do anything?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:29:41 am
My horn glows softly as I begin to cast the linking spell.

"Just try to relax."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:36:34 am
Khenal finds himself in a dirty room, he immediately recognizes it as an inmates room at an asylum. There is no furniture, but the entire room seems one step from crumbling away around him. The only other feature are a set of rusty bars where the door should be.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:38:26 am
I frown at my surroundings.

'This doesn't seem right.'

I test the bars to see if any are loose.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:39:29 am
At the slightest touch the bars start to flake away, any harder and they would shatter. Even still they hold, and don't appear to open.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:42:25 am
'Hmm.  Bars and a cell indicate that Heiro might not actually want me here.  But the poor condition of the bars might say otherwise.  Or they just might be indicative of his mental state...'

After a few moments of pondering, I decide to sever the link and return to reality.  After blinking a few times, I look at Heiro.


"Why would you place me in a cell, Heiro?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:44:52 am
"A-a cell?" Heiro seems even more nervous at the mere mention of a cell. "W-what do y-you m-mean?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:48:01 am
"The mind is all symbols and metaphors, Heiro.  If I enter your mind in a cell, it means you don't really want me to wander your mind.  However, the cell was in very poor condition and I likely could have broken out.  I didn't, because breaking things in a mind can have very bad effects.  So, please Heiro: do you really trust me enough to search your mind?  Be honest, your sanity may depend on it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:50:04 am
"I-I t-think I-I... I m-mean I-I do... y-you have t-to be able t-to do something. M-Midnight s-said..." 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 03:54:20 am
"What did Midnight say?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 03:55:39 am
"S-she just s-said that you were r-really powerful, and t-that you coulda really h-hurt me if she wasn't t-there to F-fix things."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 04:00:05 am
'Buck...'  I shake my head.

"It can't be me, then.  You might trust me, but she doesn't."

I get up and pace a bit, trying to think.

'Ok, it can't be me.  Who else can go in, though?'  I glance at Falcata as I pace, then suddenly stop.


"Falcata, how's your magic?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 04:01:51 am
Her eyes grow wide at the question.

"I... uh, I'm a bit tired after helping the others to the hospital... but... I don't know any mental magic, so..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 04:11:31 am
"Unfortunately, I think you get to have a crash course.  Linking is a fairly simple spell, actually.  Think of it similar to telekinesis, but you're forming a gentle link with a mind instead of an object.  And you have to be careful to not exert any force.  Just establish the link, then follow it.  Once inside, be very careful about what you interact with.  Everything inside is a part of Heiro.  If you damage something, you may damage him.  Try to get Heiro to do whatever needs to be done, but you can do what he asks you to with little problem.  If you get in trouble, sever the link.  Um, did that make sense?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 04:15:55 am
"Um..."

She eyes Heiro nervously.  It's clear that she's terrified to proceed.

"I-I'll try..."

She closes her eyes and tries to do what Khenal said.  A faint violet glow surrounds her horn and forms a bridge to Heiro's head.  After a few seconds, nervous sweat begins to form on her brow and she aborts the attempt.

"...I can't do it... I don't understand how to do that..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 04:20:07 am
'Buck, she's too tired to maintain focus.  Time to go for broke, I guess.'

"That was a great try, Falcata.  Mental magic isn't easy, and I shouldn't have forced you to try like that.  Heiro, I'm going to try to bring Falcata along with me into your mind.  Do you think Midnight will allow me in if my Captain is there?  Captain, are you willing to try going in?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 04:22:20 am
Falcata nods nervously.  "Yes.  If I can help, I'll do what I can."

Oh, sisters... would Khenal be able to read her mind if he linked her?  That could be bad...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 04:22:59 am
"U-um I-I don't know... Midnight won't t-tell me... B-but" Heiro blushes slightly "I-I think t-that M-midnight would be O-OK with it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 04:27:14 am
"Then here we go."

My horn glows as I cast a more complicated link to allow Falcata and myself into Heiro's mind.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 04:32:13 am
They find themselves inside the cell again, but almost as soon as they take in their surroundings, the walls fade away and they find themselves at the entrance to a village. Or at least what was once a village. The entire place looks like a battlefield, the buildings burnt and twisted, and the streets spotted red with what seems like blood. The entire place is deathly silent, but there is a feeling that something is there, on the corner of their consciousness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 04:40:46 am
Falcata takes in her surroundings and lets out a startled gasp.  "This... is what you meant by symbols and metaphor..."  She tries to collect herself.  She was a full grown mare in the guard, no need to look like a scared filly right now, even if that was how she felt.  "I... fear to find out what this symbolism means..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 04:43:43 am
I squint, looking around.

"Not the worst I've seen, but definitely not good.  He's had a pretty traumatic past too, it looks like.  How are you doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 05:02:20 am
Not the worst?  She hadn't envied Khenal's experiences before, but she definitely didn't now.  Had he seen Friesden's mind?  Was it worse?  If not, who else?  She began to question what her own mind looked like... and if Khenal had even glimpsed it.  Not this bad, she imagined.

She blinks away the awe and looks to Khenal, failing to mask a nervous frown.


"This... is a first for me.  I..."  She takes a cautious step forward and jumps back nervously as she knocks a pebble away with her step.  "Y-you said we can cause a lot of damage here... that... that didn't hurt anything, did it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 03, 2012, 03:44:34 pm
(My apologies for interrupting the role-playing that has been going on. This is Telgin's brother. I have become interested in joining this RP, but obviously do not want to stick a monkey-wrench into your campaign. For that reason, I am flexible and can accept any pony that you feel is best for me to own. My main desire is to be a male pony (since I am male myself). I had my eye on the male pegasus blacksmith, but I can be another character if that is necessary. I would like to have some degree of involvement, but not so much involvement that I must be on everyday nor have to stay up into the wee hours of the morning with RPing.)

Certainly Kryptid, welcome to Glitterglen. And feel free to take any pony you like. If you still want the blacksmith that is perfectly acceptable. Do you want me to give him any particular name? Once I have a name I'll post his in game information.

(I would like to claim the legendary metalworker, his name shall be Calmsteels and he will be a dwarf who ignores the crazy shit that's (if its any) going on around him unless it directly involves him or his friends (if any) he hopes to one day to make an legendary artifact sword or weapon that will be remembered for thousands of generations of dwarves!) (I hope i get to play this dwarf because hes vital to most of the fortress working with the metal making armor and what not) (i'll be keeping an eye on this thread king)

I've look through the available ponies list and I don't have a legendary metalcrafter, and I have zero legendary weaponsmiths Claimed or Otherwise. I do have a pair of legendary armorers available, if that's what you meant. One Male Earthpony married to Isos the captain of the guard, and one Female Earthpony. Would you like one of them? I also have two mid level metalcrafters. But the only weaponsmith in Glitterglen is Ironya and I lack the spare metal to even consider training a second one. To see a complete list of available ponies please look to the original post for this thread.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Meta The Golem on January 03, 2012, 04:46:57 pm
(i'll take the armorer)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Meta The Golem on January 03, 2012, 06:31:52 pm
ttttt
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 11:22:59 pm
I glance down to see what Falcata disturbed, then give her a reassuring smile.

"Pebbles are usually just pebbles.  This whole area seems to represent some massive trauma.  Destruction itself seems to be the symbol, the landscape is just the canvas."

I again look around for any sign of life or happiness.

"We need to find Heiro..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 11:30:10 pm
There's not much light to be found, even the sky is covered in black clouds... however in the distance Khenal can see one small twinkle of light, but almost as soon as he sees it it disappears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 11:30:53 pm
She nods slowly and looks back at the pebble.  Of course... that was a silly thing to worry over.

"Uh, right.  I think... this is your specialty, so I think you should lead?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 11:33:48 pm
'Fading light, never a good sign...'

"I think something is over this way.  Let's hurry!"

I lead Falcata quickly towards where I saw the brief light.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 03, 2012, 11:39:20 pm
Eventually they pass into a clearing, the land changing into what might have been a beautiful field once. Now though the grass lies dead, parts of it singed, a single tree stands in the center of the clearing, even it seems to be rotting, withering away like everything else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 11:40:59 pm
"What do you make of this?" Falcata asks, taking in their surroundings with more than a bit of trepidation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 03, 2012, 11:48:00 pm
(My apologies for interrupting the role-playing that has been going on. This is Telgin's brother. I have become interested in joining this RP, but obviously do not want to stick a monkey-wrench into your campaign. For that reason, I am flexible and can accept any pony that you feel is best for me to own. My main desire is to be a male pony (since I am male myself). I had my eye on the male pegasus blacksmith, but I can be another character if that is necessary. I would like to have some degree of involvement, but not so much involvement that I must be on everyday nor have to stay up into the wee hours of the morning with RPing.)

Certainly Kryptid, welcome to Glitterglen. And feel free to take any pony you like. If you still want the blacksmith that is perfectly acceptable. Do you want me to give him any particular name? Once I have a name I'll post his in game information.

Thank you! As for a name, I will do some thinking. How about Forgefire? I guess he'll be "Forge" for short.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 03, 2012, 11:53:17 pm
'Well, I said she was getting a crash course...'

"What do you make of it, Falcata?"

I keep looking for any sign of Heiro as I listen to her answer.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 03, 2012, 11:58:07 pm
"This tree... it seems out of place.  Significant somehow, if I had to guess."  She looks around at the desolation surrounding them.  "I don't know... everything looks dead or dying... what it could mean..."

She chances a look up to Khenal.  He'd probably find that blind stab at making sense of this pretty silly...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 12:03:00 am
I again give Falcata a reassuring smile.

"You've got it, though you may not realize it.  The tree is significant somehow.  And this area is dying instead of dead like the last one.  We need to find Heiro.  If dying is the only improvement we can find, he's in very deep trouble indeed.  Heiro!  Can you hear me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 12:09:15 am
She smiles a little.  A lucky guess, at least.  "Maybe if we take a closer look?"  She steps toward the tree, careful not to touch it, but examining it closely.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 12:22:22 am
As they approach the tree they start to hear a conversation, one of the voices sounds deep, with a darkness about it that is almost tangible. The other sounds like Heiro, bit higher pitched, like a young colt.

"Come on now, I know you enjoyed it, watching that crundle get ripped apart. Just like you did to me yeah?"

"N-no, g-go away. s-shut up!"

"Shut up? But I know how much you hate the quiet. I'm all you have, now come on, just a little bit of fun. I'll bet that alicorn wouldn't even see it coming. Heh, I didn't."

"T-that was different, g-go away, o-or I'll."

"You'll what? Sic your big sis on me? She's GONE colt! She's never coming back! Now are you gonna play or am I going to have to make you!?

As the two approach they see two figures, one a large Shadowbolt, and the other a small Indigo colt, cowering at the large Diomedian.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 12:38:23 am
I hastily whisper to Falcata:  "That looks bad, but you can't attack unless Heiro gives the ok."

I step around the tree to confront the Shadowbolt.

"Hey!  Leave him alone!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 12:40:38 am
She nods and circles in the opposite direction, trying to keep the shadowbolt pinned if necessary.  Why would a shadowbolt be in his mind, anyway?  She evaluates it cautiously as she circles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 12:46:54 am
The shadow bolt turns to Khenal, and he starts to notice something... wrong about it. It seems partially translucent, as if it's having a hard time even existing. along one side is a horrendous gash, healed into a long silver scar starting at one shoulder and continuing down it's side.

What? you! I see, so the colt asked for help." it chuckles "No matter, you can do nothing to me, even Midnight couldn't destroy me. Why don't you just leave, I promise I'll take good care of your little friend.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 12:49:35 am
I sneer at the shadowbolt, but address Heiro with worry in my voice.

"Heiro!  Can you hear me?  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 12:55:27 am
"K-Khenal? Khenal, you came! P-please m-make him g-go away, I-I hate it when he's here, h-he shouldn't b-be here."

*I* shouldn't be here? They are the intruders, you think they can protect you? Foolish colt, you should just give up, it's so much easier, and I know you enjoy it. No matter how much you deny it, I KNOW.

as they speak the grass around the Shadowbolt starts to blacken and smoke.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 12:58:40 am
Falcata dances away from the smoldering grass and looks to Khenal for any sort of hint on how to proceed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 12:59:11 am
"Don't worry Heiro!"

My horn glows as I attempt to immobilize the shadowbolt.  I look past it at Falcata.

"And thanks for permission!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 01:06:16 am
Make it go away?  Sounded like permission to attack it if she ever heard any.  She telekinetically reached for her weapon, wondering for a moment if it would even be there and feeling pleased to find that it was.  She brought it around to a ready position, noticing that something was off about it... something written on it.  No time to worry with that, she reared it back and swung at the shadowbolt's head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 01:12:01 am
The blow sails through the Shadowbolt's head as if it was thin air.

"Heh, you think something that small is going to harm me? Humph, not that it matters, with Midnight gone it's just a matter of time. After all I don't have to leave, I live here."

With that remark he breaks Khenals grip, and runs off back into the village, calling back to them as he goes.

"Take care of that colt for me, it wouldn't do to have anything happen to him... yet."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 01:19:41 am
Falcata stares dumbly at her hammer for a moment.  Of course it wouldn't be that simple...  Wait... what was written here... "Loyalty?"  What did that mean?

She looks over to Heiro and asks, "
Heiro?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 01:21:51 am
I smirk as the shadowbolt flees.

'Sure, it had no effect.  You just have something better to do, right?'

My smirk fades as I remember Heiro and why we're in his mind in the first place.


"Heiro?  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 01:30:04 am
The colt jumps to his feet "Yeah I-Im alright..." He pauses, then runs over and gives Falcata a small hug. "Thank you for making him go away. Midnight generally doesn't let him into my field b-but" hid face falls "S-she won't talk to me... I-it's my fault isn't it..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 01:34:41 am
Falcata is startled for a moment at the hug, but accepts and returns the embrace.  If he was a colt in his mind, it was probably best to treat him like one, right?  She gives him a reassuring pat on the back and says, "It's okay, we're here to help.  But who is Midnight?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 01:35:19 am
'Huh, his self-image is very young...'

"Do you know where Midnight is?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 01:40:13 am
"N-no I d-don't. H-her axe is on her p-pedestal, b-but I can't find her anywhere, she won't come out a-and t-the field..."

He looks around. "U-um b-big sis usually k-keeps this p-place all n-nice and g-green, I-I don't know why s-she let it g-get like this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 01:44:31 am
Falcata smiles and gives him another reassuring squeeze.  "It's okay, we'll help you find her."  She looks up to Khenal again for any lead on what to do about that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 01:47:12 am
I smile at Falcata as she comforts Heiro.  'A mother figure might just be what he needs right now.'

"Maybe we should all go examine her axe then?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 01:51:20 am
She nods and encourages Heiro to let go and follow her.  "Alright, come along."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 01:53:28 am
They go over to the pedestal under the tree, sitting on it is an axe. It looks strangely familiar, except for the fact that it is chipped and cracked, the handle rotting, the blade rusting.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 02:01:48 am
'Hmm, just like the area...'

"Heiro, why is Midnight gone?  Did she say anything before she left?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 02:08:09 am
"S-she was m-mumbling something about failure... B-but she n-never said anything t-to me. D-do you think I-I failed in s-something? I-is she j-just mad at me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 02:12:55 am
"I don't think your Big Sis is mad at you, Heiro.  How long ago did she leave?  Do you know where she went?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 02:20:25 am
"U-um she stopped talking to me i-in the h-hospital after m-my leg got broken. I-I don't k-know where s-she went, b-but she a-always has her axe... N-nothing b-bad happened to h-her right?" He looks up at Khenal, a pleading look in his eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 03:06:41 am
I sit down to think about what's been going on so far.

'Hmm, why would she disappear after a simple broken leg?  She seemed to be tougher than that, considering how she fought me, especially if she's been keeping things like that shadowbolt from taking over Heiro.'

I stand up quickly as I realize something.

'Wait!  She fights his battles!  She blames herself for losing and hurting him!'

I glance at her axe, recalling what Heiro just said.


"Heiro, it's up to you to help Midnight.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 03:11:51 am
"M-me, h-how can I help? I-I'm not s-strong or anything, how can I do anything?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 03:13:03 am
"Since she left, have you looked closely at her axe?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 03:24:07 am
"H-her axe? N-no I never t-touch it o-or n-need t-to look, I-it's hers, s-since s-she isn't h-here though... s-should I have looked?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 03:26:07 am
"Maybe you should take a look at it now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 03:28:51 am
"U-um okay" Heiro walks over and looks at the axe. "H-how did it g-get like this? M-midnght n-never let's her axe get d-dull, much less... w-what's going on Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 03:31:29 am
"She blames herself for you getting hurt, Heiro.  I think you need to show her that you still care about her and want her here.  Do you think you could repair her axe?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 03:45:11 am
"U-um maybe... I-I think she kept some repair stuff in a hollow under the tree" As Heiro talks his voice starts to steady. "Y-you think she'll come back if I try? I-I don't know much about weapons but... I can try."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 03:47:24 am
"Just try your best to repair it.  I think all she needs is to know you care enough to try to help her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 03:48:51 am
"U-m OK." Heiro goes to a small hole between the roots of the tree and pulls out a saddle bag "Does any of this look right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 03:59:24 am
I look into the bag, checking what Heiro's found.

'Whetstone, oil, rust remover, rags, sandpaper, wood finish, leather straps.  Looks about right'


"Looks like everything you need to restore her axe.  The whetstone will give it back it's edge, while the rust-remover will clean the rust off.  Rub it with the oil afterwards so it won't rust back up as well.  Use the sandpaper to get down to good wood on the handle, then use some of the finish on it.  Wrap a bit of leather where she likes to keep her grip and rub just a little oil into that as well."

I point to each piece as I go through weapon maintenance like Starkey taught me.  I smile at young Heiro as I finish.

"Don't worry, you'll be fine.  Just remember you're doing this for Midnight and you should be fine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 04:15:09 am
"Okay I will"

Heiro carefully takes each item out. Slowly he begins to Sharpen and shine the blade, As he does he begins humming an unfamiliar tune, He begins his work on the handle carefully smoothing it, wrapping the handle in leather and oiling it down. His tune seems to give him a bit of confidence, his hooves not shaking as much. Finally as he begins to shine the blade, Khenal feels a presence behind him.

"And how exactly, did you get here Khenal? If you broke something"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 04:22:13 am
I smile without turning to see Midnight and simply gesture towards Falcata.

"Hello Midnight.  I'm here with supervision.  Meet Falcata, my Captain and friend."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 04:32:55 am
"Falcata, Ahh I see. yes you are defenitly welcome here captain."

 Midnight bows slightly to Falcata.

"I hope Heiro didn't bother you, he can get... ah but nevermind, I do apologize for the status of things, but please stay as long as you like."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 08:33:10 am
Falcata smiles and returns the the bow with a nod.  So, this was Midnight?  Still, who was she?  What was she?

"Thank you, Midnight.  Don't worry, Heiro hasn't done anything to bother me.  We're both just concerned for him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 10:39:37 am
As Falcata speaks, she gets a good look at Midnight. The first thing that strikes her is Midnight's sheer size, she towered over the two, roughly twice Falcata's height. Her coat was a deep black, and her her long mane a dull gold.

"I see, thank you, he could use more ponies who care about him." Midnight looks around at the destroyed field, "It appears we had some... less pleasant company as well. Allow me to make this place more comfortable."

Midnight focuses, and the sky starts to clear, the sun beginning to shine through onto the clearing. then the tree begins to glow, and bursts into bloom! The energy radiates outward, restoring the grass, returning the field to it's normal state.

"There, much better" Midnight starts breathing a bit harder at the exertion, but seems satisfied.

"Midnight?" Heiro runs over to his big sis, dragging the axe behind him. "You're back! I fixed up your axe for you!"

Midnight takes the axe and returns it to her sling "I saw, thank you Heiro." She gives him a small hug. "Now how about you go play over there, I think these two will want to talk to me."

"Okay, we can talk some later," Heiro starts to walk away. "now that you're back everything's perfect."

As Heiro runs off to play, Midnight turns back to the others. "Well I'm sure you have questions, go ahead and ask, we have plenty of time, and I don't get a chance to talk to other ponies much."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 11:26:37 am
Falcata watches Heiro trot off and looks up to the giant before her, puzzlement on her face.

"Very well... if you don't me asking so, who are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 01:13:23 pm
"My apologies, I forgot that we haven't actually spoken yet. My name is Midnight, Heiro calls me his big sis. I protect this place, and him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 01:44:10 pm
As the field bursts into life, I turn to face Midnight and Falcata.

'Woah, she's huge.'


"Midnight, why does Heiro still think of himself as a colt?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 01:49:53 pm
She nods slowly.

"And you say he calls you his big sis... but, you're not his sister at all... right?" , she asks, cocking her head slightly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 01:56:51 pm
"Hmhm, No I'm not really his sister, but I am the only family he's had in a long time."

She turns to Khenal "I was expecting that question. It has to do with why I am here, and Heiro's past. I will tell you about it if you wish, but are you sure you wish to know?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 04:10:49 pm
"Yes, I do.  Maybe we can help Heiro deal with whatever happened if Falcata and I know."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 04, 2012, 04:13:02 pm
i'd love to claim a pony... for real this time

name: jaxler
gender: male
And make him look as evil as possible... and winged... but mostly evil.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 04:42:47 pm
 "I see... I'm not sure how much you can help but if you wish to know. You noticed the village of course? Burnt and twisted, sadly it's not just some metaphor, it's a representation of Heiro's hometown Angelfields, a small place and mostly peaceful. One day a diomedian raiding group came through, evil creatures, they burned what they didn't steal, and killed anypony who they found."

 "Heiro was just a colt at the time, younger even then your Kris, Falcata, so he did what young colts do, he hid. Unfortunately, not well enough."

 "Two Diomedians found him, a Keshi and a Shadowbolt, and were discussing how they were going to kill him, when a guardspony, a mare, ran in and attacked the two. The Keshi was struck down, but it managed to get a mortal wound on the guard in the melee. The Shadowbolt assumed he had won, and went to gather more of his group to finish Heiro. Unfortunately for him, even as a colt Heiro was powerful. He grabbed the fallen mare's axe and struck down the Shadowbolt, I don't think he even saw it coming."

 "Taking the axe Heiro ran to his house, and hid in his room, holding the axe like a stuffed animal. That is where I was born, I wasn't much then, just a fragment, a protector for the colt who needed somepony to guard him."

Midnight pauses for a moment, seeming to have trouble keeping her composure. "Poor colt, he got to watch his entire village burn to the ground, everypony he knew killed... By the following day, the raiders had left, and I managed to whisper to Heiro that he should as well, there was nothing left for him there. He took only one thing from that village, I think you've seen it."

"Ah but you asked a simple question, and I got caught up in memories. I am the only one who knows of Heiro's story, it feels... nice to tell somepony else. If you can help him, I will assist you however I can." 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 04:53:12 pm
Falcata looks back to the smoldering ruins of the town.  She hoped Heiro didn't want to keep all of this secret... if Midnight was able to tell them, did that mean that he wanted them to know?  She stood in silence for some time, pondering what Midnight had told them.  It was tragic... her own troubles paled in insignificance.  Anger at the diomedians grew within her, but she managed to keep it below the surface.  There was so, so much injustice in the world.  For an instant, she wanted to crush the life from all of the diomedians... but that crime would be a thousand times worse than this.

But what could they do to help Heiro?  Was bringing Midnight back enough?  Would he even want to be free of needing her?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 05:51:40 pm
"I would like to help him, but I'm not sure how, exactly.  You don't seem to be something external, Midnight, and that worries me.  I'm used to dealing with daemons, and they're relatively simple to deal with.  But you are a part of Heiro, I can't just seal you away so the healing process can begin.  In fact, you seem integral to the healing process.  For now, all I can think to do is to have you try to help Heiro grow up.  He can't stay a colt forever, Midnight.  Maybe try to help him deal with the wasteland around this Sanctuary?  I think I need to get some more books before I can really suggest any 'hows', though."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 04, 2012, 05:57:37 pm
"I-I see... well if you don't know. I would prefer to be sure before I attempted to change anything either... Well you are welcome here whenever you wish to visit, the both of you. I enjoy the company, Heiro is my family but... Either way, if you are leaving would you say goodby to Heiro first?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 04, 2012, 06:01:04 pm
I smile at Midnight.

"Of course!  It'd be downright rude to come here and then leave without saying goodbye."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 04, 2012, 06:09:51 pm
((Still considering if I want this to end up with everypony in Falcata's head somehow... it doesn't feel natural to do so, but I'm thinking about it... kind of have a tenuous excuse if I wanted to exercise it.  I suppose she'll go say goodbye, either way))

"Yes, where did he go?"  Falcata looks away from the ruined town back to Midnight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: PawPrint on January 04, 2012, 11:24:31 pm
Well, sorry to intrude, but wow, I read this entire thread I must say this is very well done, It would be great if I could join. Pony me as the Earth-Pony WoodCutter or the next Male Earth Pony migrant. Preferably the migrant if he wood-cutter is too happy. My internet breaks alot though and I'll be busy this week. Man this is gonna be crazy.   :o
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 04, 2012, 11:31:20 pm
((New Ponies.))
Spoiler: New Ponies Inside (click to show/hide)

((Okay, I'm starting a new scene. Friesden is in the Hospital, injured, Charity hears about this, and goes to visit her. Things will probably get awkward. I'll imagine this is happening while the other scene in Heiro's mind plays out. Any pony who want's to get involved may do so, but try not to be disruptive.))

Charity sits in her office, looking over the mountain of paper work. She sees amongst it all the report form from Dr. Bubbles for today. "Friesden's checked in?" She mummbles aloud. "I haven't talked to her since the trial, and before that not since she was arrested. I...I should visit her."

The Duchess get's her things, grabs her cloak, and heads to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 04, 2012, 11:34:32 pm
Friesden is lying on the bed, a smile on her face for what seems like the first time ever. This is despite the cast on her wing, and her now being alone.

The smile drops a bit as she remembers Khenal still isn't there, but it stays strong. He said he would be back, and she knows that he is perfect.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 04, 2012, 11:36:43 pm
Charity walks into the room with Friesden and turns to her. She smiles.

"How are you doing today?" She asks, a twinge of nervousness in her voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 04, 2012, 11:39:10 pm
"Oh, uh, hi Duchess! I'm...I'm doing really good!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 04, 2012, 11:42:52 pm
"That's, uh, good to hear. I heard you were in here, so I thought I'd pay you a visit. I know it can get lonely in a hospital, especially with Khenal always running off to go train, or go fight some demon or something." Long Pause. "Anyway, how'd you wind up in here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 04, 2012, 11:45:06 pm
"Well..." she laughs a bit. "He broke my wing. It hurt a lot. But it's going to be all better now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 04, 2012, 11:47:37 pm
'He? Who's 'he'. Surely not Khenal. He would never...'

"uh. He, who? I'm sorry I haven't read the doctor's reports on you yet, just came down as soon as I heard."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 04, 2012, 11:48:02 pm
'Uhg... clop...'

Starkey stands up, examining the hellscape around him.

'Well this is positively charming. Helloooo? Somepony? Anypony?'

'...Schmoe?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 04, 2012, 11:48:31 pm
"Khenal." Her eyes sparkle as she says the name of her beloved.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 04, 2012, 11:52:13 pm
A moment of concern fills Charity's mind. Surely Khenal of all ponies wouldn't beat his mare, but then she thinks, that surely it must have been an accident. Khenal's a lot bigger than her, and things could happen. Right?

"Khenal? So how'd that happen? He trip and fall on you, or..."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 04, 2012, 11:54:24 pm
"Well...um...it wasn't Khenal...I...uh...I fell over."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 04, 2012, 11:58:33 pm
'well, we meet again buddy ol' pal.' A voice says, seemingly out of nowhere to Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 04, 2012, 11:58:57 pm
"You, you fell over. Friesden. I know, that we haven't talked much since your arrest, but well, I want you to know that you can trust me. If there is anything you need to tell me, you can. Or I could get Isos, or somepony else to talk to you if you'd rather."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 12:00:12 am
"No, I...I tripped, that's it. I tripped and broke my wing."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 12:01:08 am
Heiro trots back up to the group "Heyas you guys done talkin' yet? Oh you wanna play some Captain? Theres all sortsa fun stuff to do around here!" he stops and looks at midnight nervously "U-um big sis did you ask them yet?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 12:01:36 am
'Again? You sound so familiar... Help an old stallion out, would you? Where do I know you from?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 12:04:25 am
'Hmm, right. You forgot ol' Vance already? It's me, the one that tried to kill your wife, buddy! GOOD TO SEE YA!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 12:05:46 am
"Friesden. First you say that Khenal broke your wing, now you say you fell. If he's been hurting you you don't need to cover for him. We have ponies that can protect you from him you know. If you'd just ask."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 12:07:06 am
Falcata smiles at Heiro and chances a look back at Midnight.  She wasn't sure what he was asking about.

"I'm sorry, Heiro, but we have to go.  Your sis is here again though, and she'll look after you.  We're always nearby if you need us though, don't doubt that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 12:07:16 am
"No, no, Khenal isn't hurting me. I'm perfectly okay. We're going to get married. It's all going to be okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 12:08:28 am
"Yes, I'm afraid we need to go for now, Heiro.  What did you want to ask, though?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 12:09:55 am
"Hmm. Okay. If you say so."

Charity remains suspicious, but her trust for Khenal is also old and strong. She isn't sure what she believes anymore.

"So, getting married. You must be excited about that, hmm. Planning a big party?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 12:11:41 am
'Oh yes, I remember you now. You're forgetting my daughter, by the way. So, to what do I owe this honor?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 12:11:48 am
"I'm...uh...not sure. Khenal hasn't said anything much about it. But it's going to be nice!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 12:13:24 am
'Well, I can't kill ya, so i'm trapping you inside your own mind! But here's the best part, i'm gonna to give you a chance to escape, dig?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 12:14:30 am
"Oh u-um well... I was wondering if we could work for you instead of Captain Isos, Falcata." He blushes and looks away "B-but only if you want."

he shuffles his hooves a bit "Do you really have to leave? You'll come back right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 12:16:57 am
She smiles.  That call wouldn't be up to her, it was up to the duchess, but maybe some day.

"I'll see what I can do about that," she answers truthfully.  "But, yes, I'm afraid we have to go.  Khenal has somepony he needs to go see soon.  And we'll come visit any time you want."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 12:19:26 am
"Don't worry, Heiro.  We'll be back.  Falcata, would you mind severing the link for me?  It's just a quick snip and release."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 12:21:59 am
'Let me get this straight... you're going to trap me... in the one place where I have absolute control over everything?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 12:22:24 am
"Well I look forward to it then." Charity is quite sincere with this.

"I'd like to apologize to you, for kind of pressuring Khenal back into service to Glitterglen. I realize you love him very much and that him constantly being in the line of fire must be stressful. But he's one of the best fighters in Glitterglen, and there is almost no pony I would more trust to do his job."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 12:24:39 am
"I know."

The smile turns to sadness. "It's...it's why I work in the hospital, now...maybe...maybe I can save him if he gets hurt. Repay him for all that he's done for me...do you know he saved my life almost two weeks ago? Again...I'm not sure how I could repay him any more."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 12:24:53 am
'Ah, but here's the fun part, you don't have control, we're in your mind, yes, but...do you remember the battlefield, THE one? Because that's where we are, and because that's a memory, and you can't alter your past, I'M in control, because i'm able to alter your mind!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 12:26:22 am
"Two weeks ago? Hmm, I can't recall hearing about anything like that. What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 12:26:58 am
Falcata's eyes grow wide as she hears the request.  She looks over to Khenal with a bit of worry on her face.  "I... um, alright.  I'll try..."

She closes her eyes and feels for the magical aura that signified the link between the three of them.  She just had to... cut it, somehow?  How would she do that?  Well, she'd failed to do fairly simple mental magic so far, but this at least didn't seem like it could go wrong.  She reaches out with her magic and feels something... not what she expects...

In an instant, Khenal and Heiro feel their consciousnesses ripped in a direction they didn't know existed.  When they come to, the find themselves in what appears to be a dank crypt.  Coffins line the walls, and an exit can be seen at the far end of the crypt.  Falcata stands inside the exit, dazed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 12:27:25 am
"I..." She hangs her head, and continues. "I tried to hang myself. But he stopped me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 12:28:04 am
"That wasn't supposed to happen, was it? You OK Captain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 12:32:49 am
My eyes roll about in my head before I can focus them.

"Who...where are we?"  I ask, still a bit woozy from the unexpected change in scenery.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 12:34:49 am
"Tried to... oh Friesden. What could have driven you to that? You who stood up to an entire fortress that wanted to see you put to death and argued your innocence. You who took revenge on her father for all the crimes he committed against you. You who gave a piece of yourself to another without a thought for your well being. Why would you try and end it now? Why deny us your Kindness now?"

((I'm assuming that Charity has already learned of Falcata's recovery here, and that yes, while I know that Friesden did what she did for Falcata because she thought she was worthless, Charity hasn't connected those dots yet.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 12:36:19 am
Falcata shakes her head and looks around in confusion.  "Wait... we're not..."

Her eyes snap open and she begins backing in circles, staring at the scenery.  "No... no... no-no-no, we shouldn't be here!"

"We shouldn't be here!  I-I've got to get out!" She looks to the exit behind her and bolts through it. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 12:37:21 am
"C-cap, wait! Dangit, should we chase after her Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 12:38:50 am
"Definitely!"

I follow my words with action, rushing after Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 12:41:43 am
Heiro follows closely beside Khenal "Is this Falcata's mind? Huh Wouldn't have thought we'd find a crypt here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 12:42:52 am
'No, I don't remember. I have no idea what...'

Starkey looks on with dawning horror as he realizes where he is.

'N-No... not here... why did you bring me here?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 12:45:26 am
"I..." Friesden has no answer for the duchess. "I'm sorry..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 12:45:48 am
As the two reach the exit of the crypt, the floor suddenly collapses, followed by the ceiling, blocking them in.  Behind them, they can hear the sounds of a stone lid sliding away from its coffin.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 12:47:48 am
'Because. You couldn't save anypony at glitterglen, and EVERYPONY died, DESERTER! Khenal, Friesden, Otik, oh yes...Lilac too. And now you get to explore the fortress you abandoned! How wonderful!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 12:48:48 am
Heiro stops and turns around, "Great, We can't break anything right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 12:49:22 am
'Not good!'

"Falcata!  If this is your mind, you need to calm down!  Heiro and I could be in trouble if you don't!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 12:51:49 am
*Sigh* "Friesden, what are we going to do with you. Just please, don't try anything like that again. You'd destroy Khenal, and the rest of us would suffer for the loss of you, even if we don't all know it."

((I've got to go to bed now. Busy day tomorrow. Dsarker, feel free to wrap up the scene any which way you like, or you can leave it, and we'll finish it another time.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 12:52:54 am
'You bastard... why would you bring me back here? What do you want from me? Just tell me what you want, but don't show me this!'

He slowly sinks to his haunches.

'Don't make me... remember...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 12:53:50 am
As they turn to face the source of the sound of grinding stone, they see the lid slide from one of the coffins, landing heavily against the stone floor.  The name is illegible, but the year of death is clear: 97.  With the sound of cracking joints, a unicorn skeleton sits up and looks to each in turn.

"So... you've come," the skeleton says in an echoing masculine voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 12:53:57 am
"I...I guess I'm just as worthless as I thought. I'm sorry. I just get everything wrong, don't I?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 12:55:17 am
Heiro draws his axe, taking a defencive stance "Well I just can't hurt it right? Stay behind me then I'll block anything it tries."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 12:56:12 am
I warily eye the skeletal unicorn and take a defensive position between it and Heiro, whispering as I do so.

"Careful Heiro.  We don't want to harm Falcata, and it may not be hostile."  I didn't really believe it'd be friendly, but minds can be strange.

"Who are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 12:57:14 am
'Awww, what's wrong? CAN'T FACE THE PAST?! Oh, poor filly...do you want your teddy bear?'
The "ruins" of glitterglen appear before Starkey, and the "corpse" of "none other" than "Lilac" lying at his feet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 01:01:14 am
The skeleton nods and rises from the coffin with more pops of joints.  As it leaves the coffin, it says, "She hasn't told you about me."

It continues toward them slowly, stepping into the soft lighting of the torches on the walls.  As its bones cross into the light, flesh returns to it, revealing a unicorn stallion.  His white fur and black mane are blurred slightly by a soft golden glow, and a small smile forms on his face.  "She hasn't told anypony at Glitterglen about me.  I am Estoc, Falcata's husband."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 01:02:54 am
"Husband? I see, what do you want from us?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 01:03:16 am
'Oh Sisters...'

He bends down, taking the limp form of his daughter into his hooves.

'Lilac... my little Lilac... she was so strong. She held on for so long... she was still warm... when Ochre and Aly found me... she was still warm...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 01:07:26 am
I relax my stance slightly.  Maybe he would be friendly, afterall.

"I am Khenal, and this is Heiro.  Do... you know why Falcata would panic at being here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 01:10:10 am
Estoc nods.  "Yes... she's afraid of what you might find here."  He looks between the two, and settles on Heiro.  "I expected Khenal... not under these circumstances... but I did not expect you.  Still, I don't think it will be of any harm."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 01:13:38 am
Heiro puts his axe away "No I would never harm Falcata... or is that not what you meant."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 01:15:05 am
"Should we simply leave her mind then?  Or is there something we should see first?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 01:20:04 am
'Oh dear, I believe you couldn't save poor Charity either.'
Starkey notices a door partially open, with the "limp" form of "Charity" keeping it from closing properly. Lying slumped against the door, with an arrow in his chest, is Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 01:20:22 am
He smiles at Heiro and shakes his head.  "No, you misunderstand me."

His vision turns to Khenal.  "She would prefer that."  His expression changes to a frown.  "However, I am beginning to grow concerned for her.  There are things here that she would never show anypony, and I fear that it may be... significantly to her detriment to continue doing so.  Perhaps even cost her life.  It nearly has already."

He pushes past them toward the collapsed exit.  "I cannot force you to stay.  But, if you would... there are some things I would like to show you.  Both of you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 01:22:48 am
"If she would prefer us leave... no. Khenal, you are the one who knows how to leave, so the decision is yours, but I think we should see what's here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 01:26:37 am
'Husband, hmm.  A powerful symbol...'

"I agree, Heiro.  Mr. Estoc, I would like to see whatever you have to show, as long as it will not cause harm to Falcata to do so."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 01:28:49 am
"Thank you.  She... won't like it to start with, but I think it is important that somepony she knows see these things.  Hopefully you'll understand soon."  He steps through the rubble like a spirit, and as he does so it vanishes to reveal another hallway than the one Falcata left through.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 01:33:51 am
"Well Khenal, after you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 01:39:22 am
'Oh Khenal, dammit no!'

Starkey rushes to Khenal's side, propping him up.

'I-I never saw him fall. He went back down to the infirmary... he said Doctor Bubbles needed help moving the wounded to safety, but... I knew why he wanted to be there. That was the last time I saw him. You made it out, didn't you lad? Please, if anypony made it out of there, it had to be you. Tell me he made it!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 01:40:05 am
I nod thanks to Heiro and carefully follow Estoc down the new corridor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 01:45:41 am
Estoc leads them past what appears to be a jail cell, past the skeletons of two more ponies long dead.  He sighs as he casually skirts the remains.  "Forgive the mess... it seems no matter how many times I put those two in their coffins, they always end up back there again."

He leads them through another doorway into a large room with a vaulted ceiling.  It could have passed for a cathedral, if it wasn't for the lack of religious symbols decorating the walls.  Instead, massive skeletons of ponies are built into the supports, holding up the immensity of it.  A number of wings branch out from the room, some doors are shut and barred, others open but leading to impenetrable blackness.  Others still are open and bright.

He pauses at the center of the room.


"Now... where to begin..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 01:47:24 am
Khenal stares weakly into Starkey's eyes and says 'Starkey?  So many... I couldnt...' He sobs. "Friesden...'
Khenal's head drops.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 01:48:10 am
"What is this place? so different from my village, or my field."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 01:53:32 am
'Hmm, a mausoleum?  Looks like Falcata has had a violent past as well.  Having a respectful place for them to rest indicates she's at least dealt with it well...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 02:01:19 am
'N-No lad... you fought like a devil... I'm so proud of you... I'm so sorry...'

Starkey lifts Khenal's head, trying in vain to slap him awake.

'Khenal? Khenal! Oh, Luna, spare him, pass him by, please! Not him!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 02:02:20 am
Estoc looks off to the barred doors and shakes his head  "Not yet.  Perhaps a bit of perspective first... then we can go there."  He motions for the two to follow him down one of the dark hallways, which begins to brighten to a just visible level as they draw near.

"The duchess... I believe she is the only pony that even knows this much... but Falcata and I used to be city guards in Coupledye.  Three years ago."

The hallway abruptly ends in the center of a town, deserted in the wee hours of the morning.  A massive bloody gash forms at the base of Estoc's skull, and immediately his mane and neck are covered in blackened congealed blood.  He beckons them to follow him to an alley behind a storefront.

"I lost my life this night."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 02:05:46 am
The full moon begins to rise, and Starkey is busy crying on Khenal when he notices a face that meant more to him than anything else. He sees Otik, torn in half, lying on the ground near the ruined trade depot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 02:10:02 am
I solemnly follow Estoc, appreciating now why Falcata might be upset about us knowing, but also seeing that it may be important for us to know.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 02:13:16 am
Starkey slowly rises, walking on shaking legs to stand over the corpse of his beloved.

'She was with me...'

He is numb. Too numb even for tears.

'Every step, every blow, she was with me. She never left my side... until the very end.'

He bends down, placing a gentle kiss on her forehead. Hemoves to her neck to retrieve something, but finds only air.

'Her necklace.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 02:15:45 am
'Hm, are you positively traumatized? I can take away the pain...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 02:18:41 am
'She always wore her necklace. A thin, fine silver chain. There was a pendant hanging from it. A clasp, holding a single pure white feather.'

Starkey rises, staring straight into Vance's eyes.

'She never went anywhere without it.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 02:19:39 am
'Wow sis, she lost someone important... sometimes I'm glad I can't remember'

 Heiro continues to follow, Serious as he can get.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 02:21:15 am
'Well...I...oh bullocks.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 02:24:35 am
Estoc casually leads them past his corpse, sprawled in the street and bleeding profusely from the wound at the back of his head.  A pony darts away into a nearby building with a snicker.  "Severed my spine in a single stab.  Much faster and more quiet than slitting a throat, if you can get the drop on somepony, which he did."

Time leaps ahead several days, and ponies are beginning to mill around them, oblivious to their presence.  A faint trace of the blood stains the cobblestones beneath them.  Estoc beckons them toward a small shop, where shouts can be heard.

"Three days later, after I was long buried, Falcata found out who killed me.  The first step in a series of events that she hasn't forgiven herself for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 02:31:21 am
Starkey strides towards Vance with growing confidence as the false memory crumbles around them.

'You never showed me Friesden. I would have remembered my eldest daughter's fate.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 02:33:58 am
'Heh...heh...take it easy, buddy...? No! NOT THE FACE!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 02:35:43 am
"You... you think this is funny!?" a mare shouts from inside the shop.  The scene twists around them to transition inside the shop.  Falcata can be seen staring at a dark gray coated unicorn from across a table, an expression of incredulous disbelief on her face.

Estoc looks away from the scene with a grimace.
  "His name was Slim Pickings.  A long time thief in Coupledye.  He'd stolen more than he'd earned in his life, ten times over, but it was rarely anything large at one time and he'd been in jail dozens of times since I joined the guard.  Still, he'd never been violent."

The thief chuckles again.  "Yeah, a little bit.  I told you I killed him.  He was about to catch me, and to be frank, I'm getting a bit tired of you guards getting in the way all the time.  So, I decided to make sure he'd never bug me again."  The pony stands and leers over the table.  "The funny part is, that I just told you all of this, but there's not a thing you can do!  You can't prove it, and I'll deny it all day long in court."  He grins again.

Falcata's expression contorts into primal rage.  Estoc looks away again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 02:38:07 am
'We know that look huh sis. I wonder if I looked like that before I attacked that crundle.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 02:40:10 am
An ornate, gilded axe appears in Starkey's grip. the word 'Honesty' glows brightly along the blade.

'My sisters never ran a caravan through the Failed Jungles. The highway to the north is faster.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 02:41:18 am
'...WHAT ARE YOU TA-'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 02:54:05 am
Vance finds himself pressed against a wall that was not there a moment before, with the blade of the axe dangerously close to his throat.

'I'm sorry Mister Vance, but your story just doesn't add up. I don't think you're being entirely honest with me.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 02:54:18 am
Falcata looses a wrath-filled scream and leaps onto the thief, who collapses under her with a startled grunt.  She stamps as hard as she can, crushing ribs under her weight.  With a flicker of magic from her horn, she snatches him up by the neck and hurls him through the nearby window into the street, where he lands in a motionless heap.

Without wasting a moment, she draws her sword and jumps after him, heedless of the cuts ripped across her limbs by the glass.
  "You!  Estoc was protecting innocent ponies."  She drives the sword into his chest and twists it completely around, spurting blood everywhere.  Ponies flee in terror, screaming for guards.  She withdraws the weapon and stabs it into him again and again, ignoring the fact that he has long stopped resisting.  "And!  You!  Killed!  Him!"

Eventually satisfied with the carnage she has wrought, Falcata collapses onto her haunches, gasping for air.  Her expression finally relaxes from a scowl to a confused glare as guards arrive and begin inspecting the scene.

Estoc hangs his head.


"She was arrested on the spot.  Although she was taken to jail, Captain Bardiche knew us well and sided with her.  The count of murder was dropped to ponyslaughter.  She was to be suspended for two months, and would serve two weeks in jail.  The minimum mandatory sentences."

He beckons for them to follow again, leading them through a doorway which appears to lead nowhere.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 02:56:31 am
'We-well...ummm...OH BUCK THIS, DIE!'
Vance struggles in vain against Starkey's grip, then sighs.
'Well, could be worse...I could be you!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 02:57:05 am
'Hmm he got of easy... if someone hurt you sis...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 05, 2012, 03:01:41 am
I don't even flinch as I see Falcata butcher her husband's murderer. 

'I would do no less if somepony murdered Friesden...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 03:09:07 am
'You talk far too much for my liking, and I'm done listening to your rambling. Schmoe? Can you hear me?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 03:15:22 am
"What is it now? Have you come to end me yet?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 03:18:32 am
'Schmoe, you remember Vance, don't you? He's managed to sneak his way in here, and worked a fair bit of mischief before I caught him.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 03:23:29 am
"I don't remember your old colleagues, Starkey. What do you want with him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 03:26:30 am
'He's a servant of Nurgle. As I recall, you're none too fond of them.'

Ropes spring from the wall, neatly hogtying Vance.

'Deal with him for me. I don't really care how, just... clean up after yourself when you're done.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 05, 2012, 03:28:00 am
'HEY NOW, L-LET'S NOT MAKE RASH DECISIONS HERE!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 03:44:13 am
"I'm not one of the Slaaneshi, to take pleasure in inflicting pain. Let us merely...evolve him. First his immune system."

With a wave of one of Schmoe's appendages, the long dormant white blood cells in Vance's 'body' come to life. At first, the slurry of disease in his 'bloodstream' holds its own, but every second the white blood cells change and adapt. Become stronger. Soon, the diseases begin to die off. The immune system, with no other target, begins to turn on the other cells, destroying them in a fury to become pure. They grow, and multiply. And mutate. The body begins to die. But even as it does, Tzeentchian power comes upon them, and they begin to adapt. The body fights itself in a bitter struggle to survive. Entire colonies of cells destroy each other in a frenzy of growth and mutation. The body collapses into puddles of cannibalistic cells, and Schmoe looks on in glee.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 05, 2012, 03:52:47 am
Starkey grimaces, stepping back from the seething puddle.

'Right... just remember, clean up after yourself. I don't want... Vance everywhere. I need to wake up now.'

At once, Starkey vanishes from the mindscape. As he does so, he quietly stirs in his bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 11:51:31 am
((Recall that not knowing what else to do with the unconscious ponies, Falcata took Lilac, Starkey and Otik to the hospital.  At least there they would be relatively safe.  Although, Charity didn't notice them, so I'm not sure if we've got an alternative that works better.  And wall o' text, because I thought up too much stuff. :) ))

"She doesn't blame herself for my death.  Not anymore, at least," Estoc says to his company, the bloody wound on his head vanishing as quickly as it came.

The three arrive in what appears to be a jail.  The same that they passed through on the way from the crypt, save the absence of the two pony skeletons against the wall.  Inside a cell just ahead of them is Falcata again, curled up on what passed for a bed.  Her eyes are pink from incessant crying, but she is silent, staring off into the wall ahead of her.


"But she does blame herself for this."

The sounds of a hushed conversation can be heard down the hallway, accompanied by the scuffing of hooves against bare stone floors.  Two ponies slink into the jail block and stand near the bars of Falcata's cell.  She looks up.

"What... how did you get in here?  What do you want?"

The taller of the two grins and leans on the bars.  "We broke in.  Wanted to come pay you a visit for what you did to our friend."  He glowers at her.  "We don't take too kindly to having our friends killed off, you see?"

The stockier of the two nods.  "Yeah, we heard what you did to Slim Pickings.  Butchered him like an animal... you'd best watch out, sister... this is our city."

Her expression darkens and she stands.  As she approaches the cell bars, she says, "You don't scare me.  What are you going to do?  Break in here and 'teach me a lesson?'"

"Oh, no, killing you wouldn't send the right message..."  The tall pony grins again.  "You've got a filly, I hear?  Staying with your brother on the other side of town while you wait off your slap on the hoof?"  The two intruders exchange mischievous glances.  "You took somepony from us... maybe we should take somepony from you?"

Falcata's eyes snap open and a grim scowl returns to her face.  "Leave her out of this... Kris hasn't done anything to you..."

"Uh huh..." the stocky pony says, smirking as he sees the response they're getting.  "What do you think?  She's just what, six months old?  Guess we could just toss her in the river."

"Yeah... it would be painless, and nopony would ever find the body."  The tall pony smiles at Falcata.  "I can hear it now, 'Guard pony snaps, murders citizen and own daughter.'"

Falcata's eyes narrow and she props up against the bars in their faces.  "Leave her alone... or... or..." she says through bared teeth.

"Or what?  You're stuck in there," the short pony retorts, making a motion to his associate.  "C'mon, let's go."

Estoc points to his horn and says to Khenal and Heiro, "A unicorn doesn't need their hooves to hurt somepony.  The jail was magically shielded, but she worked there.  She knew the bypass harmonics."  He motions for the three of them to step aside.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 12:22:07 pm
Heiro moves to the side, seething at what he had just heard

'Six months, just a foal... sis if we ever find anypony like these two, I want you to give the raider control. You would hold back too much...'

'In this case I think I would make an exception. That is an unforgivable act, even to threaten it is... No, I don't think you would have to worry about me holding back at all.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 05, 2012, 03:45:26 pm
Falcata grits her teeth as she backs away from the bars.  "I killed your ring leader... for murdering my husband... an innocent pony... protecting the citizens of this town."  She stamps her hooves several times and snorts, glaring holes through the two ponies still standing in front of her.  "And you... you... you have the temerity to threaten my daughter for that!?"

"Oh, temerity?  That's a big word, who are you trying to im-ACK!" the tall pony's sentence was cut off as both were snatched by the throat and pinned against the wall where Estoc, Khenal and Heiro once stood.  A clearly visible violet magical haze surrounds her horn and their throats as she rears up on the bars again.

"If you go near my family, I'll hunt you down and slaughter you like the animals you are!" she screams at them, tightening her magical grip.

They claw at their throats, and the tall pony manages to gasp, "We... weren't... going... to... just... trying to... scare..."

Eventually her magical grasp falters, not from spent rage so much as lack of strength, and the two ponies collapse against the wall.  Her grip was gone, but the damage was done.  Time lurches forward again, and both suffocate from crushed airways, ending in the positions of the skeletons that the trio passed when leaving the crypt.  Falcata backs away from the scene, a horrified look on her face.  She finally collapses in the center of the cell and buries her face in her hooves, but there are no tears left to cry.

Estoc steps through the bars to her and nuzzles her, an ineffectual gesture as he passes effortlessly through her.


"There was no escaping what was to come," he says, looking up to them.  "Even Captain Bardiche wasn't able to forestall the punishment.  Three counts of ponyslaughter in as many days.  Nopony higher up in the command structure trusted her anymore, and the citizens were terrified of her.

"The decision was to banish her to Glitterglen.  Her brother Dirk and sister Kukri offered to watch Kris instead of send her to Glitterglen too, but it wasn't safe for her in Coupledye any longer.  Falcata decided to bring her along, where at least she could be responsible for her."

Estoc steps back toward the doorway from which they entered and says, "This is where your experiences begin to mingle.  Perhaps it is enough context for me to show you what it is I wanted to show you... but, I think there are two more events that would help further.  If you would listen."

((I'll leave it up to you two.  I sort of feel like I'm rambling here, so if you want to get on with it Estoc will happily see you to the end of your little trip.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 05, 2012, 04:23:02 pm
"I would listen, if only to be able to help Falcata more."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 07:10:09 pm
"I...I guess I'm just as worthless as I thought. I'm sorry. I just get everything wrong, don't I?"

((Continuing from last night. Included the quote since the last bit of this is buried under several pages.))

"Friesden, are you even listening to yourself? How are you worthless? You've become one of the most important ponies in town. For one, you're the only surgeon. When Cornbread cracked his spine in the last fight, you were the only pony who knew how to help him. And because of you he'll probably be able to walk again. And should Khenal or Falcata or Madush or Osal any of the others get seriously hurt, you're the one that they'll be counting on. How are you worthless?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 07:11:58 pm
Friesden hangs her head.

"I'm sorry...I'm always wrong, aren't I?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 07:18:22 pm
*Sigh* "Friesden. I don't know what else to say. So, I guess I should go. Just remember that you are important to a lot of ponies, and, and if you ever need to talk, my door is always open."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 07:19:48 pm
"No! Please...I don't want to be alone. Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 07:23:44 pm
'This whole conversation feels odd. Is this really the same mare who defended herself against Isos, in the trial a few months ago. It's as if she's entirely different pony.'

"... Oh. Alright then. I have nothing that needs doing for awhile. I can stay a bit longer."

Charity returns to her seat.

"So, then, what should we talk about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 07:24:47 pm
"I...I don't know. What do you want to talk about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 07:32:56 pm
"It's been a long time since I've had a chance to just talk. It's always official Glitterglen business. I don't know if I remember how. Heh. I don't know. Why not talk about yourself? How are you liking being able to work in the Hospital again?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 05, 2012, 07:34:59 pm
"It's...it's good. I...I wish I could stop anypony from being hurt at all. But I guess...I guess it's the best I can do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 07:54:31 pm
And with that the two mares continued to chat about every little thing under the sun. Their families, work, the weather (hot, wet, and unbareable as always), Friesden's coming wedding, and a plethora of other things. For several hours they talked, and laughed, and gossiped.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 05, 2012, 08:49:33 pm
((Firstly I promised a picture of the Charity family tomb on the IRC so, here it is.))
((Secondly I apologize for the double post. I only do so, so that those watching the thread will know that new things of significance have been posted.))

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

((The following events take place after the conclusions of the currently ongoing scenes.))
Charity's Journal 18th Slate, 100

Starkey and myself were both down in the arena. He was preparing to interrogate the Diomeidian prisoner. When suddenly, we heard a cry go up from the deep. Our scouts had spotted something fierce.


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Spos%20Stasnoanu.png)

Charity's Journal 19th Slate, 100

The militia has set up a full defense of the fortress at the cavern gates. They are waiting for the beast to come to them, as others have before. Nicolta Telsa, was out in the caverns, setting up one of our new Giant Cave Spider traps when he spotted the monster heading straight for Glitterglen. He dropped his work, sounded the alarm. He barely managed to out run the lumbering behemoth.

The fight was long, but not particularly difficult for the ponies of Glitterglen. First, our great markspony Osal Habithare, shot the creature in the lung before it got within 10 yards of any of our ponies. Then the militia pounced on the monster; hacking, biting, breaking, burning. Until the beast fell, and young Peytrel, saw a chance to run forward, he gave the beast a pommel strike to it's chest knocking the wind from his one remaining lung, and then while it was stunned cutting the beasts head from it's body in one swing. And not a single pony was struck in the entire battle.

I don't think I've ever scene Starkey look so proud of them all.

Charity's Journal 23rd Slate, 100

Starkey questioned the Diomedian prisoner, but it was obvious that he wouldn't talk, and he wasn't about to torture anything out of him. Naturally we where once again in the situation where we couldn't let him go, but keeping him locked up forever wasn't practical. So once again, Starkey, with my blessing, offered the thief a chance to fight for his life, in single combat with Commander Starkey. It wasn't a fair fight, Starkey is stronger, better trained, and better equipped, but it still felt better than just executing the pony. The fight was short and won't bother describing it, suffice it to say that Starkey won quite easily.

Edited for clarification.
Edited due to objections to previous version.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 01:55:49 am
Even as Charity leaves the room and Friesden lies back down to sleep off the wait, she's disturbed by the stirring of Starkey, and immediately gives herself a mental thwack on the head for being so focused on herself that she ignored her father.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 02:16:39 am
Starkey awakens fully, finding himself in a hospital bed. He sits up, taking in his surroundings. He notices Friesden occupying the bed next to his.

"Mmm... Friesden? Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 02:17:45 am
"I'm...I'm alright, dad. What...what happened to you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 02:19:30 am
"I... don't know. I remember talking to Khenal, and then..."

He notices the cast on her wing.

"Oh, Friesden... what happened to your wing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 06, 2012, 02:20:29 am
"I would listen if you would be willing to share it.  Thank you for what you've shown us so far, Estoc."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 02:20:53 am
"Khenal...I...Uh...he kind of...broke it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 06, 2012, 02:26:17 am
A trickle of blood begins to form around Otik's left eye.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 02:31:27 am
"Khenal broke your wing? How did that happen? And where is he? I'd think he'd be practically begging your forgiveness..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 02:32:36 am
"No...Um...I...uh...I tripped over, that's it... And he had to go off with Falcata. He said he'd be back soon...but he isn't back yet."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 06, 2012, 02:32:57 am
((-snip-))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 06, 2012, 02:35:10 am
Estoc forms a warm smile and nods.  "Thank you.  I believe now that I made the right choice.  Come along, there is a little to see yet."  He vanishes into the nothingness of the doorway.

As Khenal and Heiro follow him, they find themselves atop Glitterglen's tower.  A wisp of cold wind catches them as the world becomes lucid again.  Falcata is standing at the edge of the tower, staring down to the ground far below, periodic whimpers passing her lips.  Estoc steps up behind her.


"This is something that she has told nopony but Friesden.  Two days after reaching Glitterglen, Falcata nearly took her own life."

Falcata backs away from the edge and slumps to the floor, and frustrated frown on her face.  "I... can't do it... I'm too much of a coward..."

Estoc hangs his head and turns to face Khenal and Heiro.  "Thank Luna she didn't.  There were two reasons she decided not to go through with it... Kris being the first and foremost.  To leave her here alone would be unthinkable."  A ghostly apparition of Kris appears next to her father for an instant before vanishing.  Estoc looks up and points to Khenal.  "The second reason, was you, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 06, 2012, 02:39:39 am
I tilt my head in confusion at Estoc.

"Wait, what?  Me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 02:48:09 am
Friesden being evasive about her injuries, and Khenal visiting with Falcata? Come to think of it, didn't he see those two together rather often-

'No. Stop right there. Khenal is a good lad, and he's absolutely infatuated with Friesden. He'd never do anything like that.'


"I... remember I took a look at your bandages. It looked like you'd pulled some stitches. Has the doctor seen to that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 06, 2012, 02:51:12 am
"Yes."  Estoc sighs as Falcata stands and returns to the edge of the tower to contemplate her end again.  "When she arrived at Glitterglen, her first course of action was to ask to join the fortress guard.  You were captain of the guard at the time."

He cringes as Falcata stands along the edge, nearly loses her footing and scrambles back to safety with a startled cry.  "She was absolutely lost in depression... having lost me, nearly losing her daughter, never being able to see her old friends or family again...

"She joined the guard for two reasons.  First, it was what she was best at.  Second, she thought in a place like this, it would only be a matter of time before she was killed.  A short time."

Falcata hangs her head and backs away from the edge.  "Bucking coward... why... why can't I do it..."

"But, then she met you, Khenal."  Estoc watches Falcata pace the tower for a few moments before returning his eyes to Khenal.  "She was convinced that there was nothing here for her but an untimely end among strangers and enemies.  You were the opposite of what she expected... a friendly, welcoming pony that did everything he could to help the ponies under his command.

"After just a few days of working with you, she changed her mind and decided that Glitterglen was worth fighting for.  Worth living in.  If you could come here and make good of it, so could she."  He smiles.  "She really looks up to you, you know.  Moreso than anypony in Glitterglen.  You may have saved her life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 02:52:45 am
"I...I...Um...I don't know. Has she?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 06, 2012, 03:02:53 am
I sit down roughly, not expecting anything like what I just heard.  My mind races, but can't seem to process what just happened.  All I can think is: 'Well, at least now I know why Falcata didn't want us in here...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 03:12:00 am
"You don't know? Hold on, let me have a look."

Starkey prepares to climb out of bed...

And promptly drops back down to his pillow. A two-foot drop should not give you vertigo! Did he get a concussion? Is that why there's a big gap around this afternoon?


"Okay, bad idea. Just... check your bandages, please? She would have changed them anyway, and if she found any pulled stitches, she would have fixed that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 06, 2012, 03:17:56 am
Estoc's smile transitions to a hint of confusion as he sees Khenal's dumbfounded expression.  "I see that you weren't entirely aware of that... which I should have suspected.  That will... nevermind."

Falcata stands from her heap in the center of the tower and begins to mope down the stairs, muttering about being a coward the entire way.  Estoc watches her go and looks to Khenal and Heiro.  "Perhaps we should move on, I think my intentions will become more clear soon."

He leads them down the stairs, which transition somehow to the caverns instead of the fortress like they should have.

The air is cold and damp as always, and the sounds of creatures skittering about in the dark echo to their ears.  Falcata is standing guard at her post, still equipped with her fortress guard barding and hammer.  A pained expression covers her face, which fades as she dozes off while standing.  After a moment a chilling gust of air sweeps past, jostling her awake.  She shakes her head in frustration and blinks to fight the grogginess before lifting her previously broken leg from the ground with a pained whimper.


"This... is the part that hurts me the most..." Estoc says, bringing the group to halt in front of her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 03:18:21 am
"Um...okay..."

Friesden gingerly runs her hoof along the bandages, and stops short. She flinches, and withdraws the hoof.

"Owowowowowowowowow. Ow."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 03:21:52 am
Starkey winces at his daughter's pain.

"Oh, Friesden... I don't think it should hurt like that. Doctor? Are you here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 06, 2012, 03:22:58 am
The trickle of blood drops to the floor, and eventually Starkey takes notice of it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 03:34:49 am
"...maybe I deserve the pain."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 03:44:27 am
'Oh no, not this...'

"Friesden..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 03:56:39 am
"All...all I seem to do is cause other ponies pain. Maybe it's time that I get to experience it a little." Tears begin to form in Friesden's eyes again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 04:03:49 am
"Stop!" He snaps at her. The anger in his eyes is tempered somewhat by the tears that flow freely down his face.

"Stop... just... just stop... tearing yourself down. Do you have... any idea... how much it hurts to hear you talk about yourself like that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 04:05:24 am
"I'M SORRY!"


"Maybe it would have been best if my father had killed me...I wouldn't have hurt you all like I have. You'd have been able to go on through your lives...happy...without me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 04:12:01 am
"I don't care how much happier I might have been! I don't want a perfect life, I want you! I want my daughter!"

My Friesden... my little pony...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 04:13:02 am
"Then...I did something...something right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 06, 2012, 04:14:32 am
The blood trickle reaches a dangling sheet from friesden's bed, which begins to turn slightly red as it absorbs the blood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 04:16:50 am
"You asked me to be your father. It was the greatest, most wonderful thing you ever could have done."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 04:18:27 am
"I'm sorry for what I was saying...I was just a bit mixed up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 06, 2012, 04:21:28 am
A vase suddenly crashes to the ground as one of the haulers see the amount of blood on the ground.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 04:22:13 am
"I forgive you... I love you so much, Friesden..."

Starkey notices the blood staining Friesden's bedsheets.

"Friesden... are you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 04:23:01 am
"Am I what?"

She turns to the sheets and screams.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 04:26:54 am
Starkey leaps to his hooves, doing his best to push through the vertigo and accompanying nausea. he pulls back the sheets on Friesden's bed, checking her for injuries.

"It's not you, hun. Where is... it..."

He trails off as his eyes fallow the stream of blood to the next bed over, and the occupant.

"Otik! Sisters, DOC-TOOOR!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 04:29:33 am
Friesden begins to hyperventilate once more.

"Oh Sisters oh Sisters oh Sisters oh Sisters oh Sisters oh Sisters!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 04:52:03 am
Starkey ruches to Otik's side, searching for the source of the blood.

'O-Okay... find and note all wounds... rate in order of severity...'

A little Cap'n barks out orders in his head. His hooves do their best to follow.


"Night Sister, pass her by... seal thy gates this night..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 04:55:37 am
"Um...Um...eyes...how do you fix...the eyes....how! I...I CAN'T REMEMBER!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 05:14:32 am
"F-Friesden, hun... just calm down. Do you... do you remember the prayer I taught you, the one for somepony who goes off to battle?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 05:19:49 am
"I...I..." Friesden strains her head, trying desperately to remember it. It was there somewhere, but she couldn't think of where.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 05:27:57 am
"You remember, don't you luv? I taught you, so you could say it whenever Khenal has to go off to fight? Say it for me, please. For her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 05:35:38 am
"Umm. Umm. Night Sister, pass him by, seal thy gates this night. Let him not untimely pass into that land of our delight. For we need him here, and ever shall, until we all are called. So let him stay within these walls until all things have palled," she recites in a flurry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 06, 2012, 01:18:11 pm
Estoc watches in silence for some time as Falcata continuously fights and fails to stay awake, a frustrated glower edging onto her face each time she wakes and realizes what has happened.  She winces, places a hoof on her belly and lets out a weak moan.  "Ugh... if... if Captain Isos... sees this..." she mutters under her breath.

Estoc steps back from his wife and looks to Khenal and Heiro.  "Forgive me if this sounds intrusive or is too personal... but have either of you been in a situation where you thought you would die?"  He looks to Heiro.  "From what I've just learned from you, I suspect that you have."  He glances over to Khenal.  "And you've been in the militia and guard for some time, I suspect the same for you."

((Actually not sure about Khenal, has he ever even been injured in an ambush, siege or megabeast attack?  If nothing else I'd think just facing the bronze colossus would be pretty frightening.  He did partake in that, right?  A few FBs if not.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 06, 2012, 01:42:11 pm
((The only injury Khenal has ever had (in the game, you guys hurt him in your RP all the time.), was a cut to his hoof when he tranced and killed 5 of 7 Honey Badger Ponies by himself. While Starkey and Otik dealt with the other 2. That was early on in the fort back when those 3 where the entire militia. He has certainly taken part in dealing with some of the FBs, a cave troll, and the BC, though he has never gotten the credit for the kill.

 Although, I didn't mention this. I stationed the Royal Guard near a wall during the last Forgotten beast fight. Falcata, Madush, and Osal were outside in the cavern, but Khenal decided to hide in the prison cell on the other side of the wall. I considered writing about that, but decided not to because it was so out of his character, that I just accepted it as a quirk of DF and said nothing about it. Additionally, it seems that in almost every ambush when I call out Khenal's squad he's got the job "Pickup-Gear" until conveniently just after the fight.

In other news, I noticed that a few of our militia ponies have earned titles.

Commander Starkey Spreadstyles the North Depth.
Peytral Secretwaxes the Equal Ways
and
Ramol Weathercook the Sad Evenness of Lathering (You may remember him as the pony who broke ranks and then routed the Diomedian ambush single hoofedly.)

I didn't exactly know how to work those into a journal entry, but here they are.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 06, 2012, 02:15:23 pm
"More than once... that feeling... nopony ever needs to go through that alone." Heiro shudders a bit at the memories.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 06, 2012, 03:56:45 pm
((Pick up equipment? Weird.  Does Khenal have any equipment conflicts, or maybe he doesn't get to wear his stuff all the time?))

'That I would die?  The colossus, the cave troll, so many fights where I know I could die, but not the certainty that I would.  After the asylum, I wanted to die, but...'

I simply hang my head, unable to imagine the pain that Falcata must have been going through.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 06, 2012, 04:47:51 pm
((Hmm, All my military ponies are supposed to wear their stuff all the time but, I'll check for conflicts. Khenal isn't the only pony I've scene this happen with, so there might be a problem with the uniform. Ah, yes, I think I see the problem. The wiki has informed me that Leggings are Solid, where I thought them to be like mail shirts. So that's causing a conflict with the Cruppers. I don't know if that's the problem I was looking for, but I'll deal with it now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 06, 2012, 05:39:25 pm
((I've seen similar issues before, and have never really figured out what the flip is wrong with the ponies.  In my case, setting uniforms to replace clothing helped a lot, but perhaps I did the same and accidentally assigned leggings and cruppers, or something similar))

Estoc nods gravely at Heiro's words and takes in Khenal's grim expression.  "Indeed, Heiro.  You know how it feels then... the knowledge that the next moment may never come.  Now, imagine that feeling sticking in the back of your mind for days... weeks... months.  Never quite going away."

He looks away from her as another pained expression flickers across her face and she lets out a drawn out moan.  "She endured that silently and alone for many months."  He winces as she finally gives in and vomits on the cavern floor, more blood than anything else spattering onto the stone.  "And all needlessly."

As Falcata steps away wearily to find something to remove the mess, the caverns fade away into blackness, leaving the three suspended over nothingness.  Friesden slowly becomes visible before them, and Estoc steps toward her.  "I'll do it," Friesden says, standing erect and without fear.

Estoc smiles at her and nods.
  "If Falcata hadn't kept it bottled inside her, Dr. Bubbles and Dr. Friesden could have saved her months of agony."

((No idea if Heiro or Khenal have anything to say to that, so I'll double post the next scene in a while if nobody else posts anything.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 06, 2012, 07:51:35 pm
((I want to claim the:

27. Male pegasan spearpony

and name him Jaxler))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 06, 2012, 09:00:34 pm
i want to claim the:

27. Male pegasan spearpony

and name him Jaxler

((Um, Jaxler you already asked for a pony here, and I already gave you one. He's the Male Pegasas Ranger (as your only requirements were Male and Winged, I choose one randomly. You also asked him to look "evil" but I can't exactly control that.) from the last migrant wave, that I drafted into the Skyguard, named him Jaxler as per your request. Do you want me to change it to the spearpony or keep it as is?))

I'll repost his picture below so you don't have to go looking for that one post that I put him in.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Jaxler.png
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 06, 2012, 09:07:34 pm
i want to claim the:

27. Male pegasan spearpony

and name him Jaxler

((Um, Jaxler you already asked for a pony here, and I already gave you one. He's the Male Pegasas Ranger (as your only requirements were Male and Winged, I choose one randomly. You also asked him to look "evil" but I can't exactly control that.) from the last migrant wave, that I drafted into the Skyguard, named him Jaxler as per your request. Do you want me to change it to the spearpony or keep it as is?))

I'll repost his picture below so you don't have to go looking for that one post that I put him in.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Jaxler.png

((oh me is being derp I is sarrz.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 06, 2012, 09:18:07 pm
((could you, uh...USE CORRECT SPELLING?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 06, 2012, 09:21:09 pm
((could you, uh...USE CORRECT SPELLING?))

((I did it on Purpose, in order to emphasize the derp

WAIT I looked up my guy's specs and, HE LOVES UNICORN MILK.... does that make him a pervert ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 06, 2012, 09:28:28 pm
((First of all, use (())s IF YOU'RE NOT ROLEPLAYING. Second, get your mind out of the gutter.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 06, 2012, 09:30:39 pm
((First of all, use (())s IF YOU'RE NOT ROLEPLAYING. Second, get your mind out of the gutter.))

((sarry I was unaware. and im not in the gutter im just Concerned for poor lil pony Jaxler.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: PawPrint on January 06, 2012, 09:40:38 pm
((How me of me, I forgot to give my pony a name. Well, anyway, the pony will be known as Marble.))

((Add on: Is there anything I need to know besides post on wall, and no demonic possessions?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 06, 2012, 10:42:33 pm
The image of Friesden fades away to be replaced by another image of Falcata, thin and weak.  She is lying in bed next to Kris, her eyes are open as she stares blindly into the wall next to her, and each breath she takes is punctuated by a raspy wheeze.  Estoc shakes his head and turns away from the sight.  "But, she didn't tell anypony.  She tried to handle it on her own, and near the end she again considered taking her own life.  After months of pain, it was tempting."

Estoc looks up to Heiro before shifting his gaze to Khenal.  "That was how I feared we would meet, Khenal.  I feared she would attempt to kill herself, and only then would others become aware that something was wrong.  It was unlikely still, but if there was a time to see her thoughts, that would be it.  I am glad it never came to that."

He smiles again, and around them the darkness disappears, replaced by the massive vaulted ceiling of the mausoleum.  "I... feel that perhaps you have seen enough.  I think... maybe you will come to understand why I shown you these things."  He turns to face one of the doors that was barred before, now open and free to enter.  "There is one last thing I would like to show you... but I will leave it up to you."  He looks back to them and says, "It... may be difficult for you... I know it would be difficult for Falcata.  But, if you have any doubts on why I've shown you these things, perhaps it would help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 06, 2012, 10:53:57 pm
((I read back like 10 pages and I quite honestly have no idea what the shit is going on right now... can someone explain? I’m also familiar with pony mod if that helps))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 06, 2012, 10:55:55 pm
((It's quite complicated what's going on, I'm afraid.  Read the first 20 or so pages, that will give you a good idea of who the main characters are.  We can probably fill in the holes after that.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 06, 2012, 11:03:09 pm
"Not doubts, but I do wonder why you'd show us all this.  I appreciate the look into her past, and I would like to know more, as long at it won't harm her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 06, 2012, 11:03:48 pm
((It's quite complicated what's going on, I'm afraid.  Read the first 20 or so pages, that will give you a good idea of who the main characters are.  We can probably fill in the holes after that.))

((Oh how wonderful... I love these threads but I always come in after 10+ pages (in this case 440). I really need to find a thread that’s just starting out. But what is going on like RIGHT NOW with that pony wanting to kill her self))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 06, 2012, 11:07:50 pm
((To understand what's going on with Friesden, you pretty much have to start at the beginning and read all the way through. She's very complicated.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 06, 2012, 11:16:30 pm
((It's a trudge, but you'll be a bother otherwise. Trust me.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 06, 2012, 11:24:42 pm
"I would like to know as much as possible. If it lets me help Falcata then... as long as you are sure that I will do no damage to her by learning it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 06, 2012, 11:36:53 pm
((To understand what's going on with Friesden, you pretty much have to start at the beginning and read all the way through. She's very complicated.))


(( 0_o can someone just water it down her back story. my attention span is only like an hour))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 06, 2012, 11:40:12 pm
((tl;dr: parental abuse, she killed her parents, fell in love with Khenal.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 06, 2012, 11:45:17 pm
((To understand what's going on with Friesden, you pretty much have to start at the beginning and read all the way through. She's very complicated.))

((^^This is pretty much true.  Friesden has been a pivotal character in just about every junction of the fortress.  Right now, she has recently had a daemon purged from her mind, come to grips with the fact that she's murdered ponies and is basically constantly on thin ice with soul consuming depression.  Stuff like that.  More or less business as usual around here.))

Estoc nods, but for once a smile doesn't form on his face.  "It... won't harm her.  I believe it will help her in the future... if she continues on as she has, I just don't know.  I think this is the right thing to do..."

He motions for them to follow him through the previously barred door.  The door leads to a long hallway, which in turn leads into an atrium branching into several further wings.  He directs them to the leftmost hallway.  The hallway eventually terminates into a large room filled with statues of ponies.  Most of the ponies are unfamiliar, save Falcata, Kris and Estoc.  "Her family," Estoc offers, waving a hoof at the collection of statues.

In the center of the room, two unicorn statues, a male and a female, are holding up a statue of Falcata, whose face bears profound sorrow.
  "Dirk and Kukri, her brother and sister.  They were two of the few ponies who stood by her in her last days in Coupledye."

Surrounding the three are the statues of six older ponies, in pairs of male in female.  "Her parents, grandparents..." Estoc continues, waving a hoof over the lot. "Me... and Kris," he finishes, pointing off to a lichen encrusted statue of himself behind Falcata, and a smaller, pristinely polished statue of Kris in front of her.

"She will never see any of them again, except for Kris."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 06, 2012, 11:51:20 pm
'Wow... all of these ponies, all family. I-I don't want to think about losing any of my family, Friesden, Kris, you I can't even imagine losing any of you...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 07, 2012, 12:21:18 am
((To understand what's going on with Friesden, you pretty much have to start at the beginning and read all the way through. She's very complicated.))

((^^This is pretty much true.  Friesden has been a pivotal character in just about every junction of the fortress.  Right now, she has recently had a daemon purged from her mind, come to grips with the fact that she's murdered ponies and is basically constantly on thin ice with soul consuming depression.  Stuff like that.  More or less business as usual around here.))

((well fuck... well now I haft to keep on reading...me es hopez her not kil mey pony. so is she in the militia or somthing?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 07, 2012, 12:24:18 am
((Nope, she used to be the chief medical pony, and is still the fort's only surgeon.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 07, 2012, 12:24:58 am
((Nope, she used to be the chief medical pony, and is still the fort's only surgeon.))

((well thats Great, she's good with a knife. Also I think I know Exactly what my pony’s personality will be. also is my pony in love with anypony, if so plz bring said better half to a bridge and retract it.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 07, 2012, 01:04:48 am
A door to their right opens, and Estoc leads them on.  "This is the part that may be... difficult for you."

A short hallway opens into a massive room.  The room is filled with statues of ponies, most of which are foreign to the onlookers.  "Her acquiantances."  Estoc leads them down an empty stretch in the center of the room.  One side of the room is covered in a dark haze which slowly transitions to a golden bright at the far end.  A massive statue of a male alicorn sits at the center of the bright side, gilt in gold and surrounded by statues of ponies in armor.

As they move along, Khenal and Heiro note a few faces they recognize.  Slim Pickings is at the far corner of the dark side of the room, an sinister grin on his face.  The other two thieves are right beside him.

In the center of the room, a short distance on the bright side are Lieutenant Otik and Lady Charity.  Charity's statue appears to have been smashed apart at some point and put back together, and although it has a polished surface, smudges mar its surface in several places.  Otik wears a glower on her face and appears to be shouting at somepony not present.  Estoc stops briefly at the statues.


"By far the darkest moment in her history in Glitterglen.  Falcata was one of guard tasked with handing out the beatings for violating Lady Charity's export ban.  She reluctantly agreed, hoping to use her position of authority to make the punishment as lenient as possible.  There was a revolt when it became clear why she was seeking out Thundersplinter... after the chaos had ended Thundersplinter was nearly dead.  Falcata never forgave herself for accepting the order, nor has she completely forgiven Charity for ordering it."

He motions to the statues of Otik and Charity.  "She's still a bit afraid of the two of them.  Charity for the power she holds and the way she's used it in the past, although she is very grateful to her for what she's done for her.  Otik... well, she was the one who rounded up the guard after the beatings.  She wasn't happy that Falcata was one of the offending officers.  I'll leave it at that."

Further along into the bright side, Dr. Bubbles can be seen, surrounded by the hospital staff, but Friesden is notably absent.  Silver and gold chase Bubbles' features.  To their side, Captain Starkey and some of the militia can be seen.  Lilac stands alongside the crumbling statue of her father.  A small golden statue of Commissar Anias Abel stands alone.

As they reach the bright end of the room, Khenal can see that the alicorn is none other than him.  It is the largest statue in the room and the most ornately detailed.  The statue is surrounded by statues of the fortress guard, both present and past.  Heiro's statue sits slightly apart from them, hints of gold tracing his features, and a small figurine of Kris sitting on his base.


"I told you she looked up to you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 07, 2012, 01:16:12 am
'Huh sis... I'm here... she thinks of me at least. But that statue of Khenal, She does look up to him doesn't she...'

"Estoc, sir... This statue... does it mean... nevermind" Heiro quickly turns away from his statue, blushing slightly.

 "She does look up to you, doesn't she Khenal... I wonder if anypony would ever think of me that way"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: PawPrint on January 07, 2012, 01:22:06 am
"A joyous, whistled tune managed to worm it's way through the damp, jungle canopy, and a lone Pony trotted along the forest floor, going a little deeper in the forest than he usually did, and he was a little frightened of some Diomedians vandals and vagabonds jumping him. His whistling was quieting down with every step; a sudden rustling in the bushes caused him to rear back, and pull out his old, rusty axe, and stand ready. Something leaped out of the bushes at him, and Marble took a giant swing at it. Unfortunately, he missed it, more fortunately his unknown assailant came in the form of a bunny. He got over the pounding in his chest and got back to work. Thinking of the Diomedians got him decidedly nervous until he was wary enough to think of what would happen if he actually went hoof-to-hoof with one. A booming laugh that caused the bunny several paces behind to bolt and a flock of birds to take off echoed off every tree. But what really shocked Marble was that the laugh was issued from his own mouth. This time his halt was enough to make his shaking knees fail him and he collapsed on the ground. Marble jumped up and made a dash for the nearest tree.
The wood this tree would shed would be of inferior quality, unfit for the forges, or anything else you would want to be near, but something something about that laugh disturbed him.

Instead of a satisfying TWHACK that made Marble so content a sickly thud came in it's stead; and  if you bothered to listen for that moment, minute, hour in time you would have been able to hear a voice muttering repeatedly, "I'm Marble, I'm Marble, I'm Marble." "


((HELLO, CRUEL WORLD!!!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 07, 2012, 01:27:51 am
When I realize who the alicorn statue is, I simply stare in horror.

"No.  No no no nonononono!  That... that's not me!  That can't be me!  I'm... that can't be me!  I don't deserve a gilded statue!  I... I deserve... no!  Please no!  Not that!  Anything but that!  I... we need to go!"

My horn flashes as I sever the link, and I race back to reality and my own mind as quickly as I am able.  Barely pausing to let my eyes focus, I stammer as I leave.

"I... sorry, I need to go.  I promised Friesden I'd be back quickly.  Sorry!"

I ricochet off the walls several times as I careen down the halls without taking the time to allow my eyes to adjust properly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 07, 2012, 01:43:51 am
Estoc stares in horror of his own as Khenal vanishes in an instant.  He looks slowly over to Heiro, then to Heiro's statue.  "The statues... represent her opinion of somepony.  For you..."  He looks at the statue again.  "...she thinks enough of you to set you aside from the masses.  I can't go into more detail than that."

His face shifts to a frown as he looks up to Khenal's statue.  "I made a terrible mistake... Khenal misunderstands... Falcata will be devastated if he turns against her for this..."

He lowers his head and looses a sigh.  "No matter... you are still here, and there is one last thing I would show you.  Please follow me."  He leads Heiro through another door that opens beside them.  The room hallway opens into another small room, filled with bright light.  Several statues sit covered in tarps in the corners.  In the center of the room is a single statue: Friesden.

"Her friends..." Estoc says in grim tone.  He motions to the covered statues.  "Old friends from Coupledye that she'll never see again.  The only pony in Glitterglen that she believes thinks her a friend is Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 07, 2012, 01:56:36 am
Heiro looks around, then turns to Estoc, his voice quavering "T-that's all? But... she, she doesn't think of..." He stops shaking his head.

"No it doesn't matter... I care for her, that's enough. If I can help... but I do have one question... Why was there a figurine of Kris next to my statue?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 07, 2012, 02:08:48 am
I rush down the halls, avoiding colliding with ponies by a hair's-breadth.  Finally, I see the hospital and give a final surge of speed, anxious to see my love again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 07, 2012, 02:12:17 am
Estoc continues to look on at Friesden's statue, not taking the time to look to Heiro.  "Yes... this is all.  This... this is what I meant to show you and Khenal."  He sighs.  "She is surrounded by ponies that she cares for and who care about her in turn, but she's blind to it.  She thinks everypony is being friendly with her on a professional basis.  Especially those in the guard and militia, and doubly so for Lady Charity.

"Friesden is the only pony she has actually brought the matter up with directly.  After saving her life and then revealing how upset she'd been, Falcata immediately took the opportunity."

He looks up slightly.  "The figurine of Kris could mean several things.  Kris is an important part of your relationship with Falcata, but I know nothing more..."

Estoc sits back on his haunches and shakes his head.  "I've made a terrible mistake...  I never should have shown Khenal...  I should have known better..." he whispers under his breath.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 07, 2012, 02:19:10 am
((herp a derp))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 02:20:05 am
As Khenal nears the hospital, he can hear the fevered voice of Friesden reciting something over and over.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 07, 2012, 02:20:16 am
"I-I see... I wonder if there is anything I can do. I want her to think of me as... nevermind, that is unlikely to happen... you shouldn't worry too much about Khenal, he's smart, he just has had a lot to deal with recently. I'm sure he'll calm down. But now I have to ask, can you give me something I can do? I want to help, but..." Heiro's voice trails off as he looks around the room again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 02:24:16 am
((http://mibbit.com/?channel=%23Glitterglen&server=irc.mibbit.net

Head there, Jaxler.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 07, 2012, 02:30:10 am
Estoc sits silently for some time.  "Yes... there is something you can do to help..."  He looks up to Heiro.  "I've made a mistake... I hope that you are right about Khenal... but... please... watch out for Falcata.  After what has just happened... she will be very upset.  Just... just watch out for her.  Can you do that for me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 07, 2012, 02:31:47 am
(( herp a derp))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 07, 2012, 02:32:36 am
((http://mibbit.com/?channel=%23Glitterglen&server=irc.mibbit.net

Head there, Jaxler.))

((??? O noww i is get itz me is feel supar derpzilla))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 07, 2012, 02:34:39 am
11th Felsite, 100
Ironya's first foal Bubel, has reached the age of adulthood. Ironya has been dreading this day. Ours is a small village and there was no pony for him to apprentice himself to, and with our limited metal supplies we can't afford to train up a novice, even if he is Ironya's son.  He's decided rather than live as a peasant or working in the fields, he want's to join the Fortress Guard.  When she heard, Ironya had the largest strongest drink they'd let her buy and then rushed down to the forges to craft the very best weapon she could for her eldest son. A very fine steel spear, among the very best of her work.

28th Slate, 100

We nearly had a horrible accident today. Falcata had the day off from the Royal Guard, and was helping the engravers to earn a few extra bits. Meanwhile our miners had just finished digging out the room for our new garbage disposal system. However, when Falcata went to open the hole to the magma (draining from the magma moat in my tomb) the magma flowed too fast and she took a wrong turn and got cut off from the door.

Fortunately, somepony heard her yell, and pulled the lever to drop the Steel Floodgate to seal the room, and then ran for help. The miners arrived, and decided to try and dig a tunnel to the part of the room farthest from the magma's entrance.

 It took several hours but when they arrived they saw Falcata, still alive. She'd climbed up on the narrow slit that the magma was draining through, she'd somehow stuck her fore hoof in the slit and held herself up there while her rear legs were wrapped around a sconce after removing the lit torch, in spite of the heat, and the hours of exhaustion she managed to hold on. When Grifen struck through the wall, he grabbed her and pulled her to safety. Then she was even able to walk out on her own. She has no burns at all. She's a very lucky pony.

11th Hematite, 100

Udur a weaponsmith that has been out of work since he moved here, took over one of the magma forges, and then took some adamantine without permission, along with some other material and created a crossbow from it. His work has certainly improved, I'm going to allow him to work the forges again.

The marksponies took a look at it and said it was an impossibly fine bow. Osal insisted his wooden one was better, said that the adamantine is too light, and that a bow needs weight to it. I'm no expert but it still shoots straight, and that seems most important to me. I'm not sure who to let use it. Otik would be the natural choice as she's a great shot and a captain, but well she has pointed a crossbow at me before and I don't know if I want to give her an even better weapon to possibly use against me should her coltfriend decide Duke Starkey the North Depths has a nice ring to it. I'll need to think about it. Maybe one of my friends will have a better idea, I'll ask what they think.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 07, 2012, 02:38:04 am
"Of course Estoc, I will do everything I can, If she ever needs help I'll give it, even if she's too proud to ask for it. Hmm I0I wonder how much of this she will hear... Either way, I feel I should say this to you at least, Falcata is a part of my family now, and I won't allow anything to happen to my family not again..."

Heiro takes one last look around the room, his eyes slighly teary. "I-If I ever see this room again, it will be much more crowded, I'll make sure of it. Either way, I should probably leave, I don't know much about minds, so without Khenal here. How do I leave?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 07, 2012, 02:44:28 am
"Thank you.  She likes you... I now know why."  Estoc stands and turns toward the exit.  "I'm returning to rest... I can't face Falcata now..."  He begins to walk from the room as the lighting dims, the flesh disappearing from his bones again as he leaves the light.  "Falcata... your friend is waiting for you..."

Estoc vanishes partway down the hallway.  Where he stood, Falcata appears.  She looks around in a daze before her eyes settle on Heiro.  "Sisters above..." she whispers to herself as she averts her gaze.

"How... how... much did you see?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 07, 2012, 02:48:19 am
'Chanting?  Why does that sound vaguely familiar?'

As I dash into the hospital, I screetch to a stop at the scene there.  Instead of Friesden relaxing on her bed, I see Starkey frantically checking Otik, who appears to be bleeding quite profusely, while Friesden offers a chant to Luna.


"What's... what?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 02:51:47 am
Friesden turns to Khenal as he enters, and relief spreads across her face.

"Khenal! Thank Luna you're here! You have to know how to fix this!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 07, 2012, 02:52:05 am
"K-Khenal? Oh, t-thank the Sisters... She's... I don't... I-I can't stop the bleeding, c-can you... please... help her..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 07, 2012, 02:53:18 am
"I... I don't know anything about medicine!  What happened to her?  What's going on!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 02:54:25 am
The relief on Friesden's face starts to waver. "You...you don't? Oh, Sisters! What do we do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 07, 2012, 02:55:27 am
"I don't know... I... I found her like this, and... there... there's so much blood..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 07, 2012, 02:55:52 am
"Falcata there you are, I was worried I wasn't goin to be able to find my way out. I-I saw... enough, I-I..."

 Heiro looks about as if he's looking for somepony else to talk for him. "I care about you Falcata, and I hope you won't think less of me for looking, I just wanted to know..."

He moves closer "I won't tell anypony what I have seen if you don't want me to, I won't even mention it myself. But I do want you to know that I'm there if you need to talk. If you need anything, you or Kris..."

He blushes and looks away "B-but I-I'm just rambling now... I-I should go... Umm do you know how to send me back?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 07, 2012, 02:57:06 am
"Friesden, you know medicine!  What do we do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 02:58:45 am
The panic spreads across Friesden's face.

"I....I don't...Oh, Sisters! What do I do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 07, 2012, 03:03:00 am
Panic wins the day. The little Cap'n is Starkey's head is overrun as the rational parts of his brain begin to shut down.

"S-So much... blood... she... Otik... m-my..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 07, 2012, 03:13:39 am
Falcata continues to avoid eye contact.  "I... I understand.  I... don't blame anypony...  don't worry about it..."  She looks up briefly.  "Wh-where is Khenal?"

Before Heiro can respond, her eyes snap open, all of the events that transpired in her mind solidifying as true memories in an instant.  Estoc... Khenal and Heiro witnessing the murders... her attempted suicide... the statues.  She gasps.  "Khenal... oh no... no, no, no..."

She stands and looks to Heiro.  "Yes... we should leave... before something else terrible happens.  I think I can do that..."  Her horn glows softly, and the world fades away into darkness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 07, 2012, 03:18:27 am
My gaze quickly shifts around between Frisden, Starkey and Otik as I wrack my brain for anything that might help Otik.

"Um um um..."

'Keeper, back in the jail with Carrot, you said something about a transfusion.  What is it?'

"In laypony's terms, you take somepony else's blood and put it into another pony."

"...What about a Transfusion?  Would that help?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 07, 2012, 06:03:51 pm
(( well i think i should make an introduction for Jaxler so here it is:

a pony whom only wants power, if your on his side then he's the kindest man in the world and will protect you, but if you stand in his way you won't have time to regret it. He sees a world of crap and wishes to make it better, though his way in doing so is a bit unorthodox. he hates alicorns with all his heart.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 08:03:45 pm
"I-Ummm-I-I don't know! What's a transfusion?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 07, 2012, 09:08:20 pm
"Um... we put fresh blood back into her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 09:20:54 pm
"But...but how? I'll...I'll give the blood...at least I'm useful again...but how do we get it into her, and how do we stop the bleeding?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 07, 2012, 09:32:14 pm
Something about this registers with Starkey.

"Blood... you can... give her new blood..."

He rushes over to Khenal.

"Take mine. As much as she needs, as much as I can give! If it will help her, I'll give it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 09:37:00 pm
"No, dad. I'm already going to be in here for a bit more time. Not like I've got anything that's of any importance...but you're the head of the militia. You have to be ready to defend the fortress at any time...you're essential. I'm not. It has to be me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 07, 2012, 09:50:23 pm
"Friesden... you're injured, you're already weak. You need to heal. you... you can give a little, and I'll give the rest."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 09:52:00 pm
"No...I-I have to do this. To repay you, to repay Otik. To repay the fortress that has taken me in. It's something I have to do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 07, 2012, 09:53:26 pm
I just stand there, dumbstruck as two ponies I care deeply for argue about who gets to give blood to save Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 07, 2012, 10:07:07 pm
"No, Friesden... I have to do this. I... I have to do something for her..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 10:09:40 pm
"But...but...but..." Friesden turns to Khenal, who only has a blank stare on his face. "But... So do I..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 07, 2012, 10:12:50 pm
"I... I know I can't stop you... but at least let me give something..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 10:14:58 pm
"I...okay. You can do it." Friesden's head starts to droop.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 07, 2012, 11:57:01 pm
Khenal continues to stand still, then with a shake of his head, he seems to come back to reality. "So...who's doing what again?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 12:18:55 am
'Schmoe... she's dying... Otik is dying and I don't know what to do. Khenal thinks we can replace the blood she lost, but... nopony knows how. Pease... fi you know anything...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 12:20:15 am
"What was that, Starkey? You want me to do something for you for your loved one? Then maybe you should do something for me for my loved one, hmmm?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 12:24:37 am
'For Friesden? Anything, name it and I'll do it.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 12:25:33 am
"I want the same thing I wanted since you first met me. End this existence."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 08, 2012, 12:26:23 am
Charity's Journal 15th Hematite, 100

I have some friends in the militia and the guard. I wish to gift them some appropriate weapons. I have contacted Udur to forge a spear worthy of my friend Khenal. He requested to be allowed to use some of Glitterglen's precious adamant. I have allowed it. The first attempt was wonderful. It was grand, it was amazing, it wasn't good enough. Not for a friend of mine. I had it given to the militia, let one of the common soldiers use it, and I told him to try again.

The second one was hardly better than the last, yes the balance had been improved a smidgen, and yes it could still cut through steel, but it wasn't perfect. I paid him for the work and sent him back a third time. This second spear will be given out to the soldiers as well.

The third spear, yes it was perfect. It was quite simply the best a spear could be. I informed the metal crafters I expected them to decorate it with gold and sterling silver, without messing up the weapons performance. They are great craftsponies and should be able to do so.

Charity's Secret Journal 17th Hematite, 100

I was down in Crypt's Barracks working on some self-defense moves Crypt showed me, when I went into labor. My sixth child. He's an earthpony like his father, and we've named him Blue Diamond.

Charity's Journal 20th Hematite, 100

The smith's have finally finished the spear I'm going to give to Khenal. It's beautiful I can't wait to see his face when I give it too him.


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/To%20Khenal%20From%20Charity.png)
((I was only going to add gold and silver to it, but then I looked at Khenal's in game information and saw he liked tin, so I thought "why not" and added some tin as well.))
((I would like to RP out this scene if that's okay with Khenal, I would also like for Falcata to be present in it as well.))

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Friesden%27s%20Party.png)
((I didn't write a journal entry for this, because I don't want to put words in Friesden's mouth, but in game I saw that Friesden threw a party. I thought that you might want to know about that. I also noticed that Charity attended it among several others.))

Charity's Journal 6th Malachite, 100

A new group of Migrants has come. Eight in total.

Female Earthpony, She worked as a pottery glazer before coming here. (Married to the Earthpony Peasant.)
Male Pegasan Doctor
Male Earthpony presser (He has some minor military experience, but the squads are overrun with new recruits already.)
((Every squad except Charity's Bodyguard has 10 members.))
Male Unicorn Miner (Married to the Pegasus Milker)
Male Pegasus Carpenter
Male Earthpony Animal trainer/fisherpony
Male Earthpony peasant. (Married to the Earthpony Glazer.)
Female Pegasus Milker (Married to the Unicorn miner.)

Charity's Journal 13th Malachite, 100

Our scouts have spotted a behemoth with the head of a bull and the body of a hairless female ape, following the river heading out of the jungle toward Glitterglen.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Minotaur%21.png)

While the rest of the militia was sitting tight and being wary, the Titan sat outside our walls and bellowed a challenge to anypony inside brave enough to face him. There was talk of swarming it with all our troops, which would have easily killed it, but our Commander Starkey ordered his stallions to stand down, and went out to fight it alone. The fight was spectacular, I am told, Starkey moved so fast, his axe flashed like lighting, and the monster couldn't even touch him. He won in seconds. After the fight I heard someponies saying that he even offered a prayer to Luna for the creature's soul.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Starkey%20Fights%20the%20Titan.png)

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 12:32:09 am
Falcata's Diary - 11th Felsite, 100

I heard Ironya's son Bubel is joining the fortress guard, now that he's old enough.  I can understand his enthusiasm, but at the same time I have to wonder how Ironya feels about it.  If Kris wanted to join the fortress guard, I don't think I'd be too happy.  It's not really something I'm worried about her doing, but I don't think I could stand it if she got hurt, or Luna forbid killed.

I'm sure Bubel will be fine though, Ironya is an amazing smith, and I'm sure the equipment he gets will be unparalleled in quality.

26th Slate, 100

Today was pretty much my worst nightmare.  Kris went down into the caverns on a dare from Lilac, and was attacked by a crundle.  Corporal Heiro was stationed there, fortunately, and he killed the crundle before it could harm her, but something was wrong.

He was acting very strange, and asked for Khenal to come help him with something.  Khenal and I ended up going into his mind to help him out, where I met Midnight.  I'm still not sure what to make of that.  Heiro seems well adjusted and friendly, and I really do have to thank him for helping Kris, but I'm worried about Midnight.  I don't think Heiro, or Midnight for that matter, would ever do anytihng to hurt anypony.  On purpose.  What he might do accidentally, or if there is more wrong with him than appears at first glance, I don't know.  And his colt-self in his head asked me to let him join me in the royal guard.  That's not something I can just do, and I really don't know if I want to bring it up with the duchess.  Heiro hasn't had much opportunity to prove himself yet, and I don't have a lot of evidence to back him up.

But that's not what was so bad.  No, what was bad was I managed to buck up severing the mental link.  If only Khenal hadn't asked me to do that.  But he did, and I tried, and we all ended up in my head.  I tried to sever it myself, but I couldn't.  I really don't understand why the things that happened did.  I'm not a mental magic expert, but I'm pretty sure the appearance of Estoc was my own mind willingly showing Khenal and Heiro my past and how I felt about everypony.  That is the last thing I would have wanted, and the reason was pretty soon evident to Khenal.  When he saw how much I looked up to him, he lost it and fled my mind.

Heiro at least seems to have taken it well, and he seems to be genuinely concerned for me.  I helped him, I suppose, maybe he feels like he owes me.  I don't know.

Regardless, I think I'll be hiding in my room for a long time.  I don't think I can face either of them after what happened.  And heaven help me if they tell anypony else.  I don't think I have to worry about that, at least.  Sisters, I'm such a foal.  Why did this have to happen?

28th Slate, 100

Well, I almost died today.  I've been helping the engravers the past few days, claiming that I was looking to earn a little extra money on the side, but the truth is I've been trying to avoid Khenal as much as possible.  We've had to work together during training, of course, but that has been incredibly awkward.  I sparred with him yesterday, and my heart was nowhere in it.  I've got the bruises to prove it.

Anyway, I was down near the new garbage melting system helping out.  I went to engage the magma drain, and I guess my mind was dwelling on what happened a few days ago, as it has been pretty much incessantly.  I opened it too wide and nearly got caught in the flow.  I ran as fast as I could, but there was nowhere to run, and I thought for sure I was going to die a horrible death, but at the last moment I managed to climb to safety.  I can't express how grateful I am to whoever heard me, and Grifen managed to dig out an exit for me after a few hours.  I could have kissed him, if it wasn't for the fact that I was absolutely exhausted.

I opted not to go to the hospital, despite the fact that my lungs still ache from breathing the hot air for so long.  I've spent enough time in there, and now that Friesden works there again, it would only be a matter of time before Khenal came by to talk to her or something.  I can't keep avoiding him like this, but I'll never forget that expression on his face when he saw the statue in my mind.  He was horrified, and I fear talking to him would only make it worse.

It's still early in the afternoon, but I'm going to bed.  I'm exhausted, mentally and physically.

11th Hematite, 100

Udur made an astonishingly well crafted crossbow today out of adamantine.  I saw Osal take a shot with it, and the bolt struck true at an impressive distance.  I'm not sure who Lady Charity will give it to, but I'd be proud to have it in our squad.  Perhaps Otik would find better use for it though, it's not my call.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 12:42:13 am
'You... I... Alright, I'll do it. But only if she survives.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 12:44:31 am
"Why is it that you still want to deprive me of that, Captain? What is it that you desire for me to want for Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 12:47:44 am
The world slowly came into focus as Falcata's eyes opened.  She was in Heiro's room, just like she remembered, but she was lying on the floor and her head ached.  She took a look around and saw Heiro coming to next to her.

"Please tell me all of that was just a dream..." she mumbles to herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 12:50:04 am
Heiro slowly stands up, his head aching slightly "Falcata, are you OK? I didn't hurt anything did I?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 12:52:50 am
She averts her eyes.  "I'm fine.  You... didn't hurt anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 12:56:04 am
'i... I don't understand. You love her, don't you?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 12:57:08 am
"...Yes, of course I do. But how could I show her that, or even endure it, like this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 12:58:36 am
'I understand that, I really do, and I'm willing to accept that you're telling me the truth. I'm willing to let you go, if you just help me save Otik!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 12:59:39 am
"Good," Heiro sighs in relief, "I was worried, Midnight usually keeps things from getting damaged in my mind, but I wasn't sure..."

 He walks over to Falcata and offers her a hoof, "I am sorry for looking at your memories. You need anything?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 01:06:18 am
"One more thing. Don't tell Friesden. It would break her." His voice sounds hollow. "I've more experience in there...."

He waves one of his many appendages, and a series of diagrams and instructions passes into Starkey's memory. Most of them refer to the transfusion, though there are some that have hints of the Rainbow to them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 01:11:27 am
She continues to look at the floor ahead of her.  "Don't worry about it."  She sighs.  "I... I don't understand why Estoc... I mean... was he just a memory?"

Her eyes drift about slowly.  "I don't know..." she mumbles.

She eventually looks up to Heiro.
  "Thank you for the offer... but I'm fine.  I... I'll be fine.  Just... try not to mention any of this to anypony else... I'd hate to upset somepony else..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 01:11:57 am
'...Thank you.'

Starkey clears his throat.


"I... I know how. I'll need... a syringe, some tubing, and two needles."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 01:18:58 am
"Upset? I mean of course I won't tell anyone, I told you I wouldn't, but did you think that those memories were disturbing?"

He looks into her eyes "I meant what I said, if you need anything, If Kris needs anything , just ask." He looks away again, trying to hide another blush. "E-even if you just want to talk..."

He looks back at her, hoping that he had said the right thing. The last thing he wanted was to drive Falcata off, but if she truly only thought she had one friend... he had to do something, anything to show that she wasn't alone.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 01:20:17 am
Friesden gingerly gets off the bed, keeping her broken wing from moving as much as she can, and makes her way to the cabinets. She opens one, and takes out a pair of needles and a syringe. She stops, trying to recall where the tubing would be, and then turns to another coffer and takes some out.

"Will..will that be enough?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 01:26:34 am
"Yes... this should do well. Khenal? I don't think I can do all of it with my hooves. Do you think you can do this with your magic?"

Starkey begins to dictate instructions for a curious device to Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 01:28:23 am
Khenal rises from his stupor and follows Starkey's instructions as best he can. Eventually, the device is crafted.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 01:36:09 am
She looks back to him silently for some time.  "I... don't know.  I... I expected you and Khenal to either hate me or fear me after seeing that.  I mean... I killed those two, and they didn't even do anything.  They just..."

She lowers her head and places a hoof against her forehead.  "I don't know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 01:36:31 am
"Okay. Friesden, I need you to check her eyes, see if you can find a way to stop the bleeding."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 01:46:51 am
"O...Okay..."

Friesden makes her way to the bed, wincing as her stitches pull taut, but carries on through the pain. She examines Otik's eye, wincing as the blood continues to come through.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 01:48:03 am
"Didn't do anything?" Heiro sounds suprised, "They threatened to kill your foal! She was only six moths old, and they would have thrown her in  the river!" Heiro takes a deep breath trying to calm himself.

"Nopony threatens my family. Anypony that would use a foal as a tool of revenge doesn't deserve any pity. If I had been there..." He takes another breath.

"That was the past though, no point dwelling on it now." he places a  hoof on Falcatas shoulder "You don't have to worry about me, or Khenal. Once he has a chance to calm down he'll say the same."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 02:04:32 am
Falcata looks slightly surprised as Heiro sides with her.  Maybe he was right.  But still...  "I suppose... it's just... if I hadn't done that... if I'd done something else... we'd have never been sent here.  I could have escaped... I could have followed them maybe... I don't know..."

She hangs her head.  "I regret bringing Kris with me quite often.  I thought she would be safer with me, but I now wish I'd left her with Dirk or Kukri.  I had no idea how dangerous Glitterglen would really be."

She blows out her breath.  "And I really hope you're right about Khenal... he... he looked so horrified... that... was the last thing I ever wanted to happen.  At least I didn't upset you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 02:19:20 am
"Don't worry about Kris, she has you, and me. Family is the most important thing. If you had left her, she may have been safer yes, or she may have not. Either way she wouldn't have the most important thing... her mother. And I don't think you would have forgiven yourself for leaving her behind."

Heiro gives Falcata a small hug "You worry too much, everything will be fine, you'll see."

He smiles a bit, "I have an idea, how about we go and find Kris, I want to see how she's doing. If you're OK with that, that is."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 02:29:31 am
Falcata tenses slightly as he hugs her, but relaxes after a moment.  She doesn't return the hug though.  "Th-thank you.  I hope you're right."

She slowly stands and nods.  "Kris should be back home... let's go see if she made it back okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 02:36:58 am
"Alright then, lets go." Heiro stands up and leads the way out of his house, and through the corridors eventually making it to Falcata's home.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 02:42:44 am
"Alright. Khenal, I'll need you to perform the procedure. Both of us will be... indisposed. You'll need to insert the needle into a major blood vessel, say, this one here in the foreleg. This needle goes in her leg, the other one goes in ours - don't get them mixed up, it only works one way."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 08, 2012, 02:46:57 am
"This one in her, right there.  That one in... in you a-and Friesden.  Got it."

'Oh Celestia, why did I suggest something like this?  Gotta focus, follow Starkey's instructions.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 08, 2012, 02:51:00 am
Otik has turned deathly pale at this point and the bleeding has nearly stopped from all the blood loss. Starkey nearly faints upon noticing this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 02:54:17 am
"Oh, that's... that's not... Friesden, is she still..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 02:55:15 am
Falcata opens the door and leads Heiro inside.  Kris is sitting nervously on the bed and looks over to the two as they enter.  She slips down and cautiously makes her way toward them.  She notices her mother's expression and says, "Mom?  Are... you mad at me... from earlier?"

Falcata looks away.  "I'm just really disappointed... you know better than to go into the caverns."  She looks over to Heiro and adds, "If Mr. Heiro hadn't been there, you could have really been hurt."

Or killed, more like it, but there was no need to bring that up.  She ponders that for a moment.  Heiro seemed to have more than a casual interest in Kris.  And the figurine in her mind?  Her subconscious saw that there was something to it.  She mentally shrugs it off.  After all, she had done a lot for Lilac and they were of no blood relation.  But then, the filly had lost her family and had nopony else.  But was he just being nice?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 08, 2012, 02:55:49 am
Otik's heartbeat seems to be slowing along with her breathing, she doesn't have much time at all left.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 02:58:49 am
Heiro walks in and smiles at Kris. "Heyas little one, you doin' alright? Your mother is right, going into the caverns like that is dangerous. Why did you go?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 03:00:55 am
Kris looks away and scrapes a hoof against the floor.  "Um, Lilac dared me to.  She said I was too scared to, and wanted me to bring back proof I'd been there."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 03:03:33 am
"Heh, I see. Didja manage to grab anything?" 

'Wow sis, I thought she would be scared of me after what I did to that crundle, and how I acted afterwords...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 03:04:36 am
"I...I've never seen anything like this. I don't know how to stop this...Oh, Sisters...Why do I have to be so useless!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 03:09:43 am
"No, that... thing attacked me before I could."  She smiles nervously at Heiro.  "Thanks for helping me.  I don't think I'll ever be going back down there again."

Falcata shakes her head.  "Absolutely not, unless you're with me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 03:11:18 am
"Yeah little one, you should really stay outta there unless you're with a guard. So you're OK now? How you feelin'?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 08, 2012, 03:13:48 am
A random hauler barges in on Falcata's conversation, screaming about Otik bleeding all over the place in the hospital, then runs off in utter hysteria.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 04:04:44 am
((Going to assume that hauler didn't show up, it kind of breaks the flow of everything))

"I'm fine now."  She continues to smile at Heiro before looking over to her mom.  "Um... mom, can I go now?"  She needed to go tell Lilac what happened, but she probably shouldn't mention that to her mom.

Falcata sighs and nods.  "Yes... just please stay out of trouble.  We'll talk more about it tonight."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 08, 2012, 01:27:52 pm
Heiro stands up, "Well I should probably get outta your mane. Hey Kris, want me to come with you? Get's borin' just wanderin' around when I'm off duty. Umm if your mother doesn't mind that is."

'Wow sis did I really just say that out loud? I am an idiot...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 08, 2012, 01:55:48 pm
"Okay!" Kris says, smiling at Heiro.  Hmm, maybe she should go do something else first then?  She didn't want to get Lilac in trouble or anything.  But what?

Falcata forms a small smile at Heiro.  "Of course."  She looks at Kris and adds, "Be on your best behavior for Mr. Heiro.  I don't want to hear you've gone back to the caverns."

"I promise."

Kris leaves the room with Heiro in tow, wondering about what she should do now.  Her mom looked pretty upset, and she hoped that she would calm down a bit before they talked about what she did.  "Um, Mr. Heiro, what did you want to do?"

Back inside her room, Falcata removes her barding and places it in a less than neat pile before collapsing into bed.  She extinguished the lanterns with her magic and embraced the darkness that swallowed the room.  Almost everypony in Coupledye feared or hated her after what she did, but Heiro seemed to think she'd done the right thing.  Would she have done things differently if she could do it over?  Would she have tried to avoid coming to Glitterglen?  She had experienced many lows since she had come here, but maybe the few high points kind of made up for it.  Maybe.

Her mind drifts back to Khenal and the expression of consuming horror that crossed his face and the way he fled her.  That would haunt her for a long time to come... and she was absolutely not looking forward to meeting him again in training.  In fact, she should probably be returning to the barracks right now, but she was captain and she had the authority to call off training sessions if needed.  And right now, trying to organize any training would be pointless at best and counterproductive at worst.

She blows out her breath and rolls over.  She was obsessing over Khenal, but Heiro had been nothing but supportive for her.  Perhaps she was missing the truth... but... maybe she was overlooking a true friend.  Or at least, maybe missing an opportunity.  But he didn't need to worry over her... these were her problems, not his.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 07:57:08 pm
'One more thing, Schmoe. I don't think this is... natural in origin. I need you to go into her head and make sure everything is alright.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 08:01:13 pm
"...Ah. You'll be able to get out of that deal then, methinks. I know what it is that's caused this. Remember. Don't tell Friesden...not unless she asks. Don't hold the truth back from her. She...Well, I'm giving her this. She deserves that much. This is for Friesden. Make sure both you and Otik remember that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 08:11:25 pm
'I suppose I'm glad, in a way. I would have hated to kill you. I like you, Schmoe. I... well to be honest, I'm going to miss you.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 08:16:58 pm
"Well, it's been an adventure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 08:18:09 pm
'Will... will you remember? When you come back?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 08:21:07 pm
"Maybe. Well, whatever happens, make sure to see Khenal gets married soon. Don't want to miss too much, eh?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 08, 2012, 08:24:16 pm
'Aye, I'll see to it. Goodbye, Schmoe.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 08:26:46 pm
"Bye, Starkey."

A small ball of blue and yellow gas flies out of Starkey's mouth and flies into Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 08, 2012, 08:31:17 pm
As Schmoe materializes in Otik's mind, he can see right off the bat that everything is dull and quivering. Grey rain fall from a grey sky onto the grey ground. In the North, Schmoe can hear faint whimpering. In the South, the world is very slowly vanishing. Schmoe sighs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 08:35:31 pm
"Well, let's head north then." He does so.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 08, 2012, 08:51:17 pm
As schmoe heads north, he can identify the whimpering is coming from Otik. Just as he begins to make out Otik visually, a huge blast of lightning knocks him to the ground and hitting his head, temporarily knocking him out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 09:08:46 pm
"Oh, what now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 08, 2012, 09:24:28 pm
Schmoe wakes up, face up to a towering monster, taller than the tower Psycho Carrot fell off. The creature grabs Schmoe and laughs horrifyingly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 08, 2012, 09:28:59 pm
"...Right. Is that it? Oh, no! Huge beast! Oh no!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 09, 2012, 05:43:37 am
Even as Schmoe is lifted up, he recognises the laughter.

"You? Again? I was there at the trial for your death. What is it now?" Schmoe asks the monstrous abomination holding him. 

"If I cannot have my love, no-pony can have theirs!" came the booming voice of Psycho Carrot. "They don't deserve the happiness that should rightfully be MINE! So none of them can have it!"

With these words, an earthquake shakes the plane. 

"Again, is that all you've got?" Schmoe asks derisively. "I've seen toddlers be scarier than you."

The monstrousity became incensed at this, and tightened its grip. "Your death will be a great victory for Khorne! You will be my next sacrifice after this feeble mare!"

"Oh, yes. I'm sure." Even as Carrot tried to crush him, Schmoe's body warped. Mouths filled his body, and began to eat Carrot's essence. Even as the giant tried to drop him, mouths fastened themselves further and continued to drain the essence.

"Insignificant worm!" yelled Carrot as the beast drew a massive axe from its back. Even as it shrieked through the abyssal æther that filled the plane, Schmoe moved up the arm, his mouths acting as fasteners onto the monstrous being. 

Schmoe grew as he absorbed the essence of the great beast, tearing it apart even as it raged and tried to destroy him. Before long, the beast had shrunk and dropped the axe as the weight won the battle. 

"Only now, at the end, do you understand, young Carrot. I am a daemon of Tzeentch. I have watched the stars be born and die. I have seen whole civilisations rise and fall. Do not ask which creature screams in the night. Do not question who waits for you in the shadow. It is my cry that wakes you in the night, and my body that crouches in the shadow. I am T'dz'le'kqsrproi'laszke'l and you are the puppet that dances to my tune." The daemon loomed over the tiny Carrot and smiled. "All is change." With a flick of his now engorged appendage, the last bit of Carrot was consumed.

With a sigh, he turned north. There was Otik. But not as Starkey knew her. She was changed. Weakened. Schmoe sighed. Another flick, and the essence he had consumed surged forth, rejuvenating the realm and restoring it whole. He collapsed, his strength gone. But Otik was there, supporting him.

"Who are ye?" she asked, and Schmoe shook his head.

"I am nothing." He tried to think of something witty to say, but he was draining out still. Otik was a ravenous soul, and if Schmoe had anything else to do, he would have marvelled at it. But...this was for her. For Friesden. He gasped again, as the energy left him drained, and he dug through her memory, like a drowning man's thrashing. And what he saw filled him with a deeper horror than he could possibly have imagined he would feel.

"Mica..." He exhaled and inhaled again. "Otik. Thank Friesden...for me. If...if you need someone to reward, let it be her. I am dead, and will never meet my maker. All is for her...."

He breathed in again. In agony, with the last of his essence draining away, he said "All...is...Dust..." and shrivelled up into a tiny piece of nothing and disappeared.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 09, 2012, 07:27:10 am
((I just want to say this real quick before I go back to sleep, dsarker, you never stop amazing me!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 09, 2012, 06:42:56 pm
((Doing this as a quick scene between Kryptid and me to orient him to the RP a little bit.  This could conceivably happen at any time, but I'd like to think it happens about the time we're at in the RP or shortly thereafter.  I'll play it up as it happens shortly after Kris and Heiro leave, just to keep things simple.))

Falcata rolls over in bed and sighs.  Her mind was racing, and despite her mental and physical fatigue she hadn't found much success in trying to sleep it off.  She was supposed to be on duty right now anyway... it would be even more embarassing on top of all that had just happened if the duchess came around looking for her to find she was absent.

She focuses for a moment and despite being tired she manages to light the room adequately with her magic.  With a tired grunt she slips out of bed and gathers her barding.  As she tries to fasten the straps, she recalls that she had been meaning to get them adjusted for nearly a week now.  After having lost so much weight while being sick, she'd had them replaced with the smallest available, and they didn't fit any more.  It wouldn't do to be out of uniform either... best get this taken care of.  That would be a plausible excuse if Lady Charity really had come looking for her somewhere.

She places her chanfron on her head, gathers her hammer and leaves for the forges.  There should be an armorer or smith available to change the straps out for her, that shouldn't take too long.  And it wasn't likely she would run into Khenal on the way.


Edit: Spelling and tense
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 09, 2012, 07:46:38 pm
Today had not been a particularly busy one for the blacksmiths, but there were a few things that needed tending to. A male pegasus, coat colored tan, trotted over to the kiln whilst carrying a tin bucket by the handle with his teeth. Tipping it over with a hoof while still holding its strap, a collection of cold, black coals tumbled out and fell into the pale cherry-red glow of the furnace. A few bright sparks leaped up in response as the fire grew hotter. Forgefire stoked the flames as the temperature rose substantially.

Time to make some new links to build the all-too-useful iron chains that were needed around here. He had the needed metal rods, placing them on the black-stained wooden work bench by his side. He stuck the tip of one bar into the forge as he waited for it to transform from a dark, dull gray to the required luminescent orange.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 09, 2012, 07:52:19 pm
((Just thought of something... KingStrongbeard, are all of your forges magma forges now?))

The smell of burning coals met Falcata's nostrils as she neared the forges.  The smell never completely left the area, of course, but at least it meant that somepony was probably around to tend them.

She slowly steps into the area and takes a quick look, noticing a single pony tending a forge.  She fought her memory for a moment to place his name... Forgefire?  Well, she wasn't sure, best not to embarrass herself by getting it wrong.


"Um, excuse me, can you help me with something?" she asks, waving a hoof at him to get his attention.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 09, 2012, 08:01:10 pm
Eyes darted to the unicorn who had just entered his field of vision. He held the rod in the flames with a soot-blotched hoof as he responded to her initial inquiry.

(Should I assume that ponies can hold things with their hooves? I know Octavia can play the cello with her hooves, so that's gotta mean something...)

"Oh, um, well I guess that depends on what you want." He hadn't known many of the other ponies here, at least not very well. This one was no different. He couldn't even recall her name.

"So what's on your mind?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 09, 2012, 08:05:49 pm
She levitates her barding up and in front of her before pointing at the straps hanging loosely from the bottom.

"Could you... replace these for me?  I need some longer ones put in."

She half expected a fat joke to come as a response, but there wasn't any need to go into details.  Normally she'd get Clamsteels or Cinderspark to handle this, but any smith should be able to set a few rivets.  It wasn't like she needed articulations replaced or anything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 09, 2012, 08:15:12 pm
He pulled the rod out of the furnace, examining the glowing tip before placing it in the nearby bucket of cool water. It hissed and steamed as if protesting angrily to being cast aside. "I suppose this can wait until later then," he considered aloud.

Walking over to the piece of armor presented to him, he felt along the straps with a hoof, "Sure thing. Do you have any length you want these loosened to, or do you need me to take some measurements?" Forgefire felt a bit uneasy about asking that. Hopefully she wouldn't take offense to the request, but it was needed knowledge if he was going to comply.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 09, 2012, 08:20:42 pm
The thought hadn't even crossed her mind.  It had been nearly three years ago when she was first issued the armor, and she couldn't remember how it was sized.  She fought her mind for a moment to try and recall the numbers, but it was a hopeless gesture, as frazzled as she was.

"I... uh, can't remember.  I suppose you'll have to take some measurements."

At least this shouldn't get misconstrued into more than it was if somepony wandered in at a bad time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 09, 2012, 09:13:02 pm
((To answer your question Telgin, yes, all of the furnaces, smelters, and forges in Glitterglen, are magma powered, and are down on the lowest levels, by the magma sea, carved into a layer of pure marble, all smoothed, and significantly engraved walls, with smoothed floors. Most of the best smiths live in rooms near the furnaces, except Ironya she lives in the middle of the fort with her farmer husband.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: PawPrint on January 09, 2012, 09:44:46 pm
((This is rather lengthy, so I spoilered it.))
Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 09, 2012, 10:38:59 pm
(So I take it that the mentioning of coals on my part was a flaw then? If the furnaces are magma-powered?")

"Let me see what I can do," the pegasus responded. He paced over to a large bin containing various tools and instruments of his. Forgefire wasn't exactly the most organized pony, so he had to sift through the mess to find what he was looking for. Pushing aside a partly rusted sledgehammer, he eyed the frayed end of a rope. It was thin and fibrous, with knots tied into it at specific intervals so that it could be used to properly ascertain lengths and girths of irregular objects that a simple straight ruler could not do.

Shaking the dust off, he examined it to make sure there were no splits or stretches,
"This should work."

Forge wasn't one to talk much, but he hadn't really spoken to anyone all day, "Something on your mind?" he questioned curiously, noting Falcata's distant expression and distracted tone. He carefully pulled the rope around her middle and made a mental note of how many knots it took up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 09, 2012, 10:44:39 pm
She tensed slightly and involuntarily as he placed the rope around her belly.  He didn't mean to pry by the question, she knew, but she certainly didn't feel like sharing everything that had just happened to her.  If he'd believe it at all anyway.

"It's... been a long day, is all."  She pauses as he shifts position and takes another measurement.  "My daughter went down into the caverns earlier and got attacked by a crundle.  I'm just thankful that the fortress guard were nearby when it happened."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 09, 2012, 10:50:49 pm
It was a cliche, but he spat it out involuntarily, "Oh, I'm sorry to hear that."

If she was attacked, then perhaps she had also been injured. At least the filly shouldn't have been dead, given the context. Would it have been appropriate to say what came next? "Well at least she's safe now...right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 09, 2012, 10:56:58 pm
That was an obvious detail to leave out... she forms a small smile.  "Oh, yes, she's fine now, thank you."  There was an awkward pause as Forgefire takes the last measurement needed.  "I... take it your day has been less eventful?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 09, 2012, 11:05:13 pm
He let out a sigh as he relaxed. Good thing he hadn't made things worse by prying, "You're welcome," he replied in a quiet voice whilst returning the smile. He tossed the rope over his shoulder, it landing half-in and half-out of the storage bin from which it had been extracted.

Drat, he thought.


He rolled his eyes, "Ah yeah, things have been slow around here today. I've had some problems channeling the magma properly to this furnace, so I've had to resort to the use of dirty coals. Not like that matters much at the moment; I haven't had any work commissioned to me recently so I've decided to start on some spare chains in the inevitable case that one of the others should break in the future."

He turned and walked back to the suit, "At least this gives me something a bit more important to do now," he says as he taps the plates with a smudged hoof.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 09, 2012, 11:34:03 pm
"Well, I'm glad I gave you something to do then," she replies, maintaining the smile.  She takes a look at the armor he was prodding at and adds, "I'm in no hurry, so take your time."

That was true enough, she was looking for as many excuses to avoid the barracks right now.  Well, Khenal had said that he was off to see Friesden, so only Madush and Osal would likely be there, but she wasn't keen on showing up looking like she'd lost her best friend and provoking questions.  Even if that's exactly what she felt like had happened.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 09, 2012, 11:43:46 pm
Based on his measurements, each strap needed to be about a centimeter-and-a-half longer. Back to the storage bin he went. Forge knew he had a collection of random, yet relevant, items to pull from in there. He located a collection of leather straps and pulled them out one-by-one. None were the correct size. Of course. The blacksmith discarded the straps that were too short back into his scrap collection. Holding up one of the longer pieces of leather, he decided that he would cut it down to the right length.

Forge realized that he hadn't been properly acquainted, "Sorry, I probably should have asked your name.."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 09, 2012, 11:48:19 pm
Falcata feels a bit silly at the realization that she'd just barged in like this without any pleasantries.  She wasn't all there today.

"Ah, I'm Falcata.  Captain Falcata, Lady Charity's personal guard."

She smiles and returns the question, "And you are..."  She wanted to guess he was Forgefire, but best not to take chances.  Things changed down here a lot without her knowing a thing about it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 09, 2012, 11:54:59 pm
"Captain Falcata? I'm sure that I've heard your name mentioned before, but was never able to put it to a face. Probably because I don't get out much," he noted while retrieving a pair of shears to slice the strap to the proper length.

"Ah yes, it's Forgefire. My name, I mean. I don't mind being called simply 'Forge' if that's your preference, however."

Each strip was cut to specification, so he tossed the shears aside and went for a hammer. Time to loosen those rivets.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 10, 2012, 12:03:17 am
"Nice to meet you.  I'll admit I don't get out too often either.  Well, not out of the barracks anyway."

She watches as Forgefire skillfully hammers the rivets free of the armor and retrieves fresh rivets.  Armoring was always something she'd been interested in doing, but never had the time to learn.  It was an especially foregone idea here in Glitterglen, since almost all of the metal had to be imported and fighting for practicing scraps with Ironya and the other smiths would be a criminal waste.

"I've always been interested in this stuff, I doubt I'll ever get the chance to learn any of it though."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 10, 2012, 12:10:02 am
Forge raised an eyebrow after pounding out the last rivet, "Is that so? Well, I don't see any particular reason I couldn't show you a few things about the craft. At least, until my work picks up around here. I imagine that will happen once the problem with my furnace gets resolved. Everypony else seems to go to the other smiths who have access to magma."

Putting the cut straps in place, he began to apply some of the newer rivets to the armor to hold them fast.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 10, 2012, 12:14:38 am
"Perhaps when I have some time I'll take you up on that.  I stay pretty busy, as you can probably appreciate."  She sighs mentally.  This had been a nice distraction, but it didn't take as long as she expected.  Oh well, she'd just have to show up at the barracks and hope Madush and Osal didn't pick up on anything being amiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 10, 2012, 12:20:08 am
It probably wouldn't hurt to teach this pony if she wanted to learn, but he also wanted to be careful about getting to know her too well; it was something of a personal policy not to make new friends. A dark secret could always rear its ugly head and ruin a friendship. He didn't like taking such risks.

"With the job you have, that's not surprising," he answered after securing the last piece, "Maybe you can try this on? See how well it fits?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 10, 2012, 12:27:05 am
"Alright."

She levitates the adjusted armor onto her back and magically fastens the straps.  They fit almost perfectly, just a bit loose, but that was fine.  She didn't like it too snug anyway, and if she put on any more weight maybe she wouldn't have to bother him.

"That's perfect," she says with a smile.  "Thank you very much."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 10, 2012, 12:30:45 am
"Perfect? I don't hear that too often. Thank you...or...you're welcome, rather," he looked to the side a bit; he wasn't used to compliments.

"If you ever have anything else I can fix, feel free to stop by again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 10, 2012, 12:32:35 am
"I will, thank you."  She turns to leave and looks back.  "Oh, and I'll put in the forms to compensate you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 10, 2012, 12:38:13 am
"Ah, well, don't worry about payment this time," he shrugged, "Just a quick change of straps. It's not like I had to make a whole new suit of armor. Not worth the trouble, I think." The tan pegasus dropped the hammer back into the bin with a heavy clank. He should have probably taken better care of his tools, but he had confidence in their durability.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 10, 2012, 12:41:55 am
"Alright, well thank you."  She left the forges and headed back toward the barracks at the slowest speed she could reasonably do so.  She'd probably see about the compensation anyway, but for all she knew he was right and there was a minimum time investment or something.  Oh well, best to get this out of the way for the day, and hope Khenal stayed tied up in the hospital.

She'd cover for him if Lady Charity showed up at the barracks.  Besides, she was pretty sure the duchess would understand the circumstances with Friesden and Khenal.


((Scene concluded))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 12:56:54 am
As Khenal finishes the transfusion, the color slowly returns to Otik's face. Starkey leans against the bedframe, Watching her closely. at length, she stirs.

"Mmm... wha... Sta-"

She cannot even form a coherent thought before he falls upon her, weeping and blubbering and showering her with kisses.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 01:05:22 am
I carefully set down the transfusion thing, relieved and exhausted from the precision magic and the day.  I shakily step over to Friesden's bed and gently nuzzle her, slowly letting it flow into a kiss.

"I love you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 01:13:11 am
"Khenal..." says Friesden, as the events of the day begin to catch up with her. "I...I love you...I love you too..."

She tries to hold the kiss, but her tiredness gets the better of her, and she falls onto Khenal, sleeping.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 01:51:31 am
I lean against her hospital bed, laying my head and neck by hers.  The last thing I see before unconsciousness claims me is Starkey still kissing and embracing his love.

Morning comes all too soon, and I awaken a bit stiff and sore from the awkward sleeping position, but it's worth it to be near Friesden.  I hazily open my eyes and carefully lift my head, trying to not wake her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 01:53:25 am
Friesden too begins to stir in her bed. Before too long, she has awoken, and looks around herself groggily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 10, 2012, 01:56:59 am
"AAAAAAAAAAHHHH! KNIVES, GHOSTS, VOICES, EEEEEEK!!!!!!!!"
Lilac bolts straight up, sweating like crazy and panting for breath.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 01:58:59 am
Friesden's head turns in alarm, and losing her balance, she tumbles off the bed and onto Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 02:00:08 am
Starkey sits up in his bed next to Otik's. He doesn't appear to have slept much at all.

"Lilac?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 02:01:56 am
Fresh coffee has nothing on adrenaline.  At Lilac's exclamation, I jerk my head up to scan for anything hostile.  Friesden falls on me before I can do anything else, and my focus shifts to her.  I check her for any further injury before doing anything else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 10, 2012, 02:03:21 am
"DAD!!!" Lilac explodes out of bed and dives onto poor Starkey, crushing him in a bone-crushing hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 02:03:48 am
Friesden appears mostly unharmed, though there is a little more staining on the bandages. "Khenal!" she says in happiness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 02:09:14 am
I sigh in relief and smile as I wrap my forelegs about Friesden.

"Good morning, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 02:10:53 am
"Um..." she says as she returns the embrace. "Just...just how did I end up here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 02:12:41 am
Starkey returns the hug as best he can.

"G-Good *gasp* morning to you too, Lilac."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 02:13:58 am
I nuzzle her before answering her question with another question.

"Here on the floor, or here in the hospital?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 10, 2012, 02:14:54 am
"I HAD A HORRIBLE NIGHTMARE! THERE WERE GHOSTS AND MONSTERS AND FLYING KNIVES AND-" Lilac continues to ramble.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 02:15:27 am
Friesden looks around her.

"Why are we in the hospital?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 02:17:28 am
"Shh, hush now, little one. It's over now, it was only a dream. Please, keep your voice down. Your mother is very weak, she needs her rest."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 10, 2012, 02:18:23 am
"Mom...? What......oh sisters....all that blood...."
Lilac buries her head in Starkey's mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 02:23:40 am
My smile fades as I realize the implications of what Friesden just said.

"Something happened to Lilac, Starkey and Otik... and you.  I...I'm so sorry.  You looked so frightened... I reached out and... and you fell over backwards, startled.  You... your wing is broken.  And..."

'Please.  Please don't let the proposal just have been delirium.  I'll do anything, oh please...'

"...And you proposed.  To me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 02:24:44 am
"Hey, it's alright. she's going to be just fine. She just needs to rest for a little while."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 02:25:49 am
"Oh, no..." Friesden's eyes begin to fill with tears. "I'm sorry...I'm sorry, Khenal, for embarrassing you like that. It's...it's okay if you don't want to marry me...I'll understand...Oh, I'm so sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 02:28:45 am
I interrupt Friesden with a short, but passionate, kiss.

"Of course I want to marry you, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 02:30:01 am
"R-really? I'll understand if you don't...Oh, Sisters! Why...why do you love me so? What have I done to deserve you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 02:33:16 am
Starkey bolts upright in bed, still clutching Lilac.

"You'll marry her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 10, 2012, 02:33:55 am
"YOU'LL WHAT NOW?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 02:36:34 am
"Mmph... buzwah? L-Lilac's gettin married? C-Clop, how long 'ave I been out!? Sisters, I've missed seein' her grow up, her first kiss, first date, oh sisters no!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 10, 2012, 02:38:13 am
"I'M DOING WHAT NOW?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 02:43:34 am
"I don't know how you can love somepony like me, Friesden.  You're so kind and gentle, so caring... everything I wish I could be.  You are the mare of my dreams, Friesden, and I would have to be the greatest foal this world has ever seen to not accept your proposal.  I love you so much Friesden!"

My composure shatters as I embrace her, tears of joy flowing freely.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 02:45:57 am
"No hun, Friesden! Friesden and Khenal!"

"Wot? Oh, Friesden's gettin' married... well now I feel... Friesden's gettin' married!? Our Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 02:47:02 am
"Oh, Khenal! I thank the Sisters that they've chosen to bless me with you...with you, I have no more desires."

She returns the embrace, and gives him another kiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 03:02:18 am
I return the kiss, so happy that she's alright and wants to marry me.  In the ecstasy following the kiss, however, I let slip something I had been trying to keep secret.

"Best Birthday ever..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 03:03:55 am
"It's...it's your birthday?" Friesden asks, trying to think what to do on somepony's birthday.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 10, 2012, 03:04:08 am
"IT'S KHENAL'S BIRTHDAY?!?!??!?!!?!?!?!!!!!!?!?!?!?!" Screams Lilac, excited to the point of maybe actually exploding.
"PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 03:10:06 am
'BUCK!'

My eyes widen in terror, but I manage to not bolt like my instincts tell me to.  Instead, I give Friesden and the others a sheepish smile.


"Oh, um... yes?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 03:12:13 am
"Well...if I'm going to marry you...I'm going to organise this, too!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 10, 2012, 03:49:02 am
"YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 03:50:24 am
I nervously look around for escape, but stay planted by Friesden.

"Yay..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 03:51:45 am
"Well, this is rather sudden... you never mentioned anything about your birthday before, lad."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 03:52:38 am
"I've never done a birthday party before. Not even for me. But this will be the best party EVER! Only the best for my love!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 03:58:37 am
'Stop panicking!  Stop it!  It's different here, this isn't Tailentranced!'

I calm down slightly, though my eyes occasionally dart towards the exit and away again.


"Heh, um, I guess I just... forgot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 10, 2012, 03:59:09 am
Lilac tackles her sister in the most playful hug ever.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 04:01:14 am
Friesden keeps hold of Khenal, and holds onto him through the tackle.

"This is going to be so fun! Oh, I can't wait!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 04:05:42 am
It doesn't take the Element of Honesty to see through that. Starkey isn't buying it, but he figures it's best not to say.

"...Right. Well, happy birthday, lad."

"So we're havin' a birthday party, then a wedding? Does this mean we dun' get a bachelorette party?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 04:06:47 am
"Ooh, this is going to be so fun! Lilac, let's go off and plan this! It's going to be the best party ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 04:09:43 am
I flinch slightly at the 'happy birthday', but try to put on a smile.

"Thanks, Starkey."

I give Friesden a nuzzle as she gets up to go plan the party.

"Um, have fun planning?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 04:12:54 am
"We'll have as much fun planning it as you will at it! I'll see you soon!"

The two scamper off, giggling as they leave.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 04:18:58 am
As the two fillies leave, starkey turns back to Khenal.

"So... You forgot it was your birthday..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 04:21:29 am
'Run!  Runrunrunrunrun!'

I shake my head, trying to squash the rising panic as I look at Starkey.


"...um, maybe?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 04:26:00 am
*sigh*, "If it's... painful... for you, then you don't have to answer. I'll understand. But I'd like to know... why? Why hide something like your birthday?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 04:36:39 am
'Stop it!  You're being a foal!  He's your friend and this is Glitterglen!  Nopony is going to do anything rash for your birthday!'

I shake my head again, then hang it.


"Tailentranced.  After... my parents... birthdays were never a good thing for me.  All the attention, the adoration... I hated it.  I never told anypony here because I was afraid it... might happen again."

A few tears fall to the hospital floor as I relive the memories of birthdays past.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 04:42:24 am
"But would it really be so bad? The attention of your friends and family? the adoration of the mare you love? This isn't the capital, Khenal. Nopony here wants to worship the ground you walk on."

A smile crosses his muzzle.

"Well, except for a certain little pegasus mare..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 04:51:42 am
"M-maybe?  I don't kn-know!  It just... it just frightens me!"

I lift my head to look Starkey in the eyes, trying to not shudder or collapse in fear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 04:58:04 am
Okay, pressing the issue is just making him nervous. Starkey decides to shift the topic a bit.

"Well... tell me a little more about it. You mentioned your parents? What were they like?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 05:04:36 am
"They... they were nice.  D-dad was a unicorn, Mom was an earth pony.  Th-they tried to hide me from... from Tailentranced.  I always wore something to c-cover my wings.  Th-they're easier to hide than a h-horn.  It w-was one of my b-birthdays when... when..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 05:23:10 am
"That... that's terrible. I can't imagine losing my parents. When I came to the Principality, Mum and Dad would write to me every month. Even when I was banished, they still managed to find me out here, and somehow they still get their letters to me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 05:32:05 am
"I... I only have m-memories of them... and of their t-tombstones..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 05:38:58 am
"I... I'm sure they're very proud of you, lad."

Okay, not helping. time to get off the subject entirely.

"speaking of parents, that reminds me: you wanted me to see about getting those therapy books for Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 10, 2012, 05:40:04 am
Even as Starkey remembers this, the memories Schmoe left him with seem to be a bit important. Chief among them are a list of what might be book titles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 05:44:16 am
I sniffle a bit, trying to regain my composure, and not doing a very good job of it.

"Y-yes, please.  Do you think the Rainbows w-would sell them?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 05:56:10 am
Book titles? Starkey certainly doesn't recall reading or seeing any such books, but they sure sounded like the right stuff.

'Schmoe, you clever bastard...'


"No, I'm afraid not. The Principality comes down hard on the distribution of so-called 'blasphemous texts', and the Coalition doesn't want any advanced knowledge falling into the hands of their 'enemies'. They'd have to be smuggled across, and that's incredibly risky."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 05:59:23 am
I finally regain at least some composure now that I have a problem to think about.

"I couldn't give a buck about what Hugwax wants, but convincing the Rainbows to share would be difficult too?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 06:15:21 am
"Difficult? They hoard their knowledge like dragons. When some ponies gave away the secret to building crossbows, the council actually wanted to execute the folk responsible. LaceAbbey nearly seceded over that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 06:18:45 am
I blink a bit, surprised.

'Huh.  I wonder how many of the books I got from them were illegal for them to sell.'


"So... how do we get some of those therapy books?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 10, 2012, 06:27:58 am
"Like I said, they'll have to be smuggled in. I can write home about it - my relatives have been known to deal in somewhat... less than lawful circles from time to time. If anypony can do it, my sisters can."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 10, 2012, 06:32:24 pm
"I don't want to cause them any trouble, but if they can do it, I'd be interested in anything they could bring."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 01:51:00 am
((Reserving post for finishing this scene.  There's only a bit left to do here, and there are more scenes to do.  On with the show!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 02:01:55 am
Falcata idly rubs the bridge of her nose.  She winces as she hits the welt forming and sighs.  Osal had given her a good thrashing in that sparring match, she didn't land a single hit and he'd managed to hit her just about everywhere conceivable with his crossbow.  Thankfully her barding took most of the hits, but she had a nasty bruise on her leg, and undeniably had another forming on her face right now.  Osal knew she was distracted by something, she could tell, but thankfully he didn't bring it up.

After that, she called off the rest of the training session for that day.  Madush and Osal had sparred a bit with themselves and gotten a bit of target practice in, and that was enough.  She wasn't accomplishing much other than getting herself hurt, so there wasn't much point in continuing it.

At least getting a few bruises paled in comparison to nearly being burned alive by magma... this entire thing with Khenal was going to get her killed at this rate...

But she didn't feel like facing him yet.  Thankfully he was off duty today.  When he was ready to talk about it, maybe she would be, but she wasn't going to bother him any more.  Not if she could help it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 02:14:06 am
I pace restlessly outside the barracks, trying to gather my thoughts.

'Ok Khenal, you can do this.  Just apologize for barging into her mind and seeing her past without her conscious permission.  And... for leaving so abruptly.  Don't traumatize her more than you have already.'

I continue pacing, still unable to work up the courage to open the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 02:23:36 am
Falcata rises to her hooves and frowns as she tastes blood.  She wipes a hoof across her lip and confirms the sight.  Great, she bit her lip harder than she thought when that last whack caught her in the face.  She must look awful... best to just slip home and try to clean herself up as best as possible before Kris came home.

She hangs her head and begins for the door, hoping that nopony that knew her would notice the bruises or ask too many questions if they did.


"Oh, Khenal!  I thought you were off today?  Captain Falcata just called off the training for the day," she hears Madush say from just outside the barracks.

Her blood froze.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 02:31:34 am
When Madush opened the door, I froze.  When she loudly greeted me, I tried to shush her, but to no avail.

'Well, no getting out of it now...'


"Um, really?  I, uh, just wanted to talk to her about something."

I slowly walk into the barracks with my head hung low, not really looking forward to what has to be said, but not willing to just leave either.

"Um... Captain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 02:35:51 am
Yes, there was no doubt she had heard Madush correctly.  She looks aside and mumbles, "Oh, sisters..."

She wipes a little more blood from her lip and says, "Uh... you just missed training for today..." Maybe he wasn't here to talk about it right now, best not to assume anything yet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 02:43:36 am
"Ya, that's... um, that's what Madush said."

I raise my eyes to look at Falcata, but keep my head low.

"Um... can we talk?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 02:47:43 am
She really wasn't sure she felt like doing that right now... but it had to happen sooner or later.  Maybe she wouldn't feel any worse after this at least.  She couldn't keep going like this, next time she might actually fall into the magma.  She slowly returns her eyes to his and nods.

"Alright..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 02:53:36 am
"I... I'm sorry, Falcata.  I'm sorry I watched your memories without your conscious permission.  I'm sorry I... left so abruptly."

I look up to her, my eyes pleading for forgiveness.

"Please say we're still friends..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 03:02:48 am
Her mouth hangs slightly as the words reach her mind, bounce around a bit, punch the inside of her skull and finally settle.  That was not at all what she expected to hear.

"I... um... Khenal... I-I think I owe you the apology.  I... never intended for anypony to have to see any of that... I'm the one who screwed up the link."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 03:10:20 am
I give a weak chuckle.

"You didn't screw up the link.  You... shifted it, quite well in fact.  You handled having ponies in your mind very well, Falcata.  It... can be dangerous for outsiders to visit a mind that's not ready.  But you didn't harm us.  Even showing us... traumatic memories, we were unharmed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 03:19:43 am
She forms a weak smile and sits, suddenly feeling exhausted.  Knowing that Khenal wasn't here to freak out again was a tremendous relief.

"Yes... I've been wondering about that..."  She wipes her lip again nervously, finding no more blood this time.  "I panicked at first and ran off to find an exit, forgetting of course that there wouldn't be one.  Then... then I ran into Estoc.  He told me to relax... that there were some things he wanted to show you and Corporal Heiro."

She looks up to Khenal again.  "I didn't understand any of it at the time... but I listened to him.  I think... I think maybe really I did want somepony to see it all... even if I didn't realize it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 03:26:51 am
I sit next to Falcata, relieved that she seems to be feeling better about everything.

"Keeping memories like those secret can be... tiring.  Letting friends know about your past lets them help carry the burden, make it lighter.  Um..."

I turn away slightly, unsure how to broach the subject of the statue.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 03:35:05 am
"I... suppose.  Yes... I think that was what Estoc was aiming to do..."  She recalls that Khenal hadn't seen the final room, where Estoc showed Friesden as being her only true friend in Glitterglen.  She had no doubt now that Estoc was trying to solidify their friendship...  A sigh passes her lips.

"But then... you saw it... and..." her sentence trails off as she rests her forhead against a hoof, looking away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 03:43:24 am
"I... I'm sorry about how I reacted to the... the statue.  I'm not used to... I'm nopony who deserves something grand like that.  I... I panicked, I'm sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 03:57:44 am
"I was a bit surprised myself," she replies truthfully.  She pauses for a moment.  "Khenal... what Estoc said was true.  You've been an inspiration for me... when I first came here I'd lost all hope.  Meeting you was the first good thing that had happened to me in months... to me... I guess you..."  She sighs.  "I don't know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:04:00 am
Even as Friesden finishes making another one of the banners, she notices Heiro in the corridor outside. With a small wave to Lilac, she hurries outside to meet her brother.

"Hey big brother! How are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 04:05:52 am
I shift uneasily at what Falcata says, unsure how to respond to that.

"Are... are we still friends?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 04:06:53 am
"I'm fine sis, what are you doin'?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:09:02 am
"We're preparing for Khenal's birthday party!"

She looks around conspiratorially, and then whispers in Heiro's ear "Then he and I are going to get MARRIED!" She squees as she says this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 04:11:47 am
Heiro starts at the news "Really? You're gonna get married? Cool! I didn't know it was Khenal's birthday."

'Huh Little sis is getting married, hope Khenal takes care of her.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:13:15 am
"Thank you! And neither did I. But this is going to be the best party ever just to make up for all the ones we've missed. Are you going to be there? It'd be so good if you could!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 04:13:31 am
She looks him in the eye and a genuine smile forms on her face.  "Yes... of course."  She can feel the inkling of utter relief mixed with joy finally edging into her mind.  "Thank you," she whispers under her breath.

Clop.  Well that was a strange thing to say at a time like this...


((Khenal and I agree that this is a good place for Charity to come in, KingStrongbeard, so take it away whenever you get a chance))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 04:15:01 am
"I guess I can come, if you really want me to. I'm sure it'll be an amazing party if you are making it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:18:05 am
"YAY!" she shouts as she throws her forelegs around Heiro and hugs him. "Well," she admits, "Lilac is helping a lot. This is my first party, too! But it's going to be good. Lilac knows so much about how to throw a party. Do you want to come in and see what we've already got prepared?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 04:19:42 am
"Sure, if you don't mind. I don't have anywhere else I need to be."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:21:19 am
"Yay! You're the best brother ever!" says Friesden as she virtually drags Heiro into the room.

"Those are the banners! I made them myself! And....and that's about all," she admits sheepishly, but there's going to be more! Lots of them!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 04:32:46 am
"Really, you made all of these yourself? They're pretty good, I didn't know you could sew. Can I help?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:35:22 am
"I...well, I couldn't sew before, but Lilac taught me! We can go ask her if you want!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 04:37:38 am
"Alright, I guess we can ask, if you don't mind"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:41:39 am
"Okay! This will be fun. We don't get to do much together, but we can do this!"

Friesden drags Heiro over to Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 11, 2012, 07:33:11 am
((Sorry, fell asleep at the keyboard. I'm going to drag myself into bed.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 10:15:35 am
She looks him in the eye and a genuine smile forms on her face.  "Yes... of course."  She can feel the inkling of utter relief mixed with joy finally edging into her mind.  "Thank you," she whispers under her breath.

Clop.  Well that was a strange thing to say at a time like this...


((Khenal and I agree that this is a good place for Charity to come in, KingStrongbeard, so take it away whenever you get a chance))

Charity is making her way through the halls of Glitterglen, a large, long, thin box floats in the air next to her. The unicorn is smiling wide, and practically skipping as she goes. She reaches the door to the training hall and opens it without knocking and walks in on the end of Falcata and Khenal's discussion. She holds the present behind her, but due to the length, even her considerable girth couldn't hide it from plain view.

"Oh Khenal, good, I hoped I'd find you here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 11:13:48 am
Falcata flinches slightly as Charity enters the barracks without warning.  She didn't exactly look presentable to the duchess right now, bruised as if she'd just picked a fight with a buffalo on top of whatever combination of expressions must be on her face at the moment.  But there wasn't exactly a whole lot she could do about that.

She bows her head before the duchess with as much grace as she can recover in the moment.  Charity had addressed Khenal already, so she didn't say anything, not wanting to interrupt whatever she had to say.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 01:22:03 pm
'Thank you...?'

Charity and her obvious good mood are enough to distract me, not to mention that box.  Falcata bowing reminds me of my manners, and I bow as well.


"Hello Charity.  How are you today?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 02:13:45 pm
Charity's good mood fades a little as Khenal and Falcata bow to her. "Khenal. You've been my friend since before I had any title at all, since before I was so much as mayor of Glitterglen. Since I was nothing more than the sudo leader of a band of convicts, criminals, and outcasts sent into the jungle to die. You are my friend, and my friends do not bow to anypony, least of all me. And Falcata, you may be my..."

Whatever she was about to say to Falcata is cut short as she notices the bruises and cuts on her Captain's face. Charity loses concentration and the box drops to the floor.

"Sisters! What happened? Are you okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 02:29:39 pm
I look at Charity, confused at her shift in mood.  When I look at Falcata, I finally see why.

'Sisters above!  When did Falcata get injured?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 02:30:12 pm
Falcata's eyes widen as she takes in Charity's concerned exclamation.

"I'm fine!" she replies lifting a hoof.  "I... just had a bit of a rough day sparring.  Had my mind on other things, and I think Osal is getting better at fighting with his crossbow instead of just shooting with it."  She smiles sheepishly.  "My fault.  Sorry, didn't mean to alarm you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 02:37:47 pm
"If you say so Falcata, but perhaps you need to take the sparing down a notch, if I need you I don't want you to beat up from practice to help. But as I was saying, Falcata, you may be the Captain of my personal guard, but behind these closed doors, I would like to also think of you as a friend, if I may. And as I said to Khenal, my friends do not bow to anypony."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 11, 2012, 03:15:19 pm
((I'll be on the IRC in an hour. One thing I'd like to say, is that when we change over to the next version, let's not make a new thread. That way there's not as much confusion. Also and again when we do change forts, I call dibs on a female pony with as much points into comedy and observation as possible.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 03:19:46 pm
She stares silently in response for a few seconds before flashing a smile.  "Of course."  There was a strong temptation to tack, "my lady" onto the end of that, but she managed to fight it.  This was going to take some getting used to.  And did the duchess really think of her as a friend?  She was starting to feel quite guilty over how she'd felt about Charity in the not so distant past.  She really had misjudged her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 03:27:45 pm
I give Charity a small smile.

"If you say so, Charity.  You are perhaps the only nobility I've ever known who is actually noble and deserves some bowing.  Um, you were looking for me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 11, 2012, 03:33:02 pm
((I JUST THOUGHT OF SOME FANTASTIC NAMES FOR THE NEXT FORT! Heartsword, Rightshield, Peacehold, Bravecast. What do you guys think?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 03:37:10 pm
((What, no Ponymurdered?  :P  Those sound like reasonable names.  I suppose when the time comes we'll need to think of a new theme for the fort, probably won't be a pseudo prison camp next time I imagine))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 11, 2012, 04:18:53 pm
((What? Surely you don't all intend to just abandon Glitterglen the moment the new version rolls out?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 04:20:30 pm
((I don't think so, just planning for the day we get run out of the place for doing a certain something to a certain somepony, or a furry undulating maggot with wings breathes rotting death on everypony.  Which ever comes first.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 11, 2012, 04:29:25 pm
((What? You're horrifically wrong!!! When the next version comes out, Kingstrongbeard is going to come up with an excuse to make a new fortress, and say that we left glitterglen to go to [new fort name here].))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:34:34 pm
"Hey sis. Heiro here wants to help us! Can he?" Friesden asks Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 04:36:50 pm
((Well, whatever we do it's going to be a while yet before the new version is ready.  The initial release will have too many bugs in it for one thing.  By the time a truly stable version is ready Glitterglen may have run its course, or maybe not.  We'll have to wait and see.  I doubt we'll be going anywhere for months yet.

And besides, we'll need to wait for the next pony mod for the new version.  Because the modding possibilities are drool inducing.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 11, 2012, 04:47:30 pm
"Sure, he can help make confetti!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:51:18 pm
"Yay! Can I do it with him, please? We don't get much chance to talk, and I want to get to know my big brother better!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 04:52:52 pm
"Confetti? What's that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 04:54:13 pm
"It's probably like the banners. But it'll be fun!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 05:31:17 pm
I give Charity a small smile.

"If you say so, Charity.  You are perhaps the only nobility I've ever known who is actually noble and deserves some bowing.  Um, you were looking for me?"

"Oh yes!" Charity's grin returns as she remembers why she was standing here. "I had something commissioned for you, Khenal. A gift. I paid for it out of my own pocket, but it was worth every bit. I hope you like it."

She levitates the box up between her and Khenal waiting for him to reach out and take it.

The box is long and narrow, and made of fine smooth wood. Along the lid of the box is engraved 7 ponies and a wagon traveling, through a jungle, it refers to the founding of Glitterglen in 94. The box has a silvery metal latch and is wrapped in a red ribbon with a large bow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 05:51:38 pm
I just stare dumbly at the box for a moment before realizing Charity is waiting for me to take it.  I shake my head to clear it, then nervously reach out my magic to hold the box.

'Don't freak out, Charity is just being nice.  It's not like Tailentranced...'


"I... I don't know what to say, Charity.  Thank you for... what is it?"

Curiosity slowly overcoming my unease, I carefully undo the bow and open the box.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 06:05:12 pm
"You'll see."

As Khenal opens the box, he sees the finest spear he has ever set his eyes upon, resting in a bed of red dyed silk cloth. The spear looks like...


(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/To%20Khenal%20From%20Charity.png)

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Khenal%27s%20Spear.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 06:08:32 pm
Falcata stares in awe as she catches a glimpse of the masterwork spear, the immaculately forged adamantine tip all but glowing of its own accord.

"Wow," she mouths, unable to actually say a thing.

((By the way, were we still going to do the thing about the crossbow?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 06:23:44 pm
My mouth hang agape as I try to process the amazing gift Charity has given me.  I reach out an unbelieving hoof to touch the tin studs, then run it over the silver and gold trees.

"It... it's amazing, Charity.  I... I don't..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 06:35:43 pm
((Yeah, once Khenal's mind gets put back together after the shattering effect my generosity seems to have had upon it, I'll move the conversation in that direction. Alternatively should Falcata try to excuse herself from the scene, Charity will ask her to stay saying she has more to talk about. However it pans out.))

"I'm glad you like it Khenal, it took Udur and Ironya three tries to get the balance just right, but I'm still not entirely happy with the silver and gold gilding, it could have been done better I feel."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 06:42:18 pm
((Okay, cool.  Just hoping this doesn't turn into another Khenal-freaks-out.  :) ))

Falcata finally manages to shake the awe long enough to say, "It's beautiful... I... don't see how it could have been done any better..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 07:50:35 pm
((I... I think Charity just gave Khenal the first thought out and meaningful gift he's gotten in a very, very long time.))

'Tin... like my first toys... I used to love climbing trees...'

I look to Charity, tears filling my eyes.


"It's... it's..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 07:59:39 pm
Charity sees the tears forming in her friend's eyes. She smiles kindly.

"Oh Khenal, it was nothing really. It's just spear. No need to go getting so emotional."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 08:08:07 pm
I pull Charity into a hug, tears of happiness still flowing.

"It's perfect, Charity.  The... the last real gift I got was... was from my parents.  Th-thank you, so much!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 08:16:47 pm
Seeing ponies being happy for a change instead of the haze of depression that seemed to hang over Glitterglen began to take its toll on Falcata, and a smile forms on her face as she watches Khenal hug Charity.  Friesden, Starkey, Otik, Lilac, Heiro... so many others had been through so much lately and as a result of all that so had Khenal.  He deserved something for being there for all them, if nothing else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 08:18:51 pm
Charity is momentarily caught off guard. It's been years since anyone outside of her husband or children would have dared to hug her like this. It was wonderful. She hugs Khenal back, and says.

"My friends deserve nothing less than the best Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 08:27:28 pm
I pull Falcata into the hug as well, happy to have such caring friends.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 08:37:36 pm
((D'aww.  Now she feels bad for not reciprocating Heiro's hug. :)  Perhaps later. ))

Falcata is surprised by the sudden yank and tenses initially, especially when she realizes that she is also touching Charity.  "Not appropriate!" her mind screams, but after a few moments she relaxes and joins in, making a semi-conscious effort to lean toward Khenal instead of Charity.  This was only the third hug she had received from or given an adult in years, and all within the span of a few days.  The relief of knowing that she had ponies she could rely on in Glitterglen had an almost palpable sensation of relief.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 08:44:29 pm
((SO Much D'aww.))

After a few moments of this, Charity speaks up, "Um, their was also a bit of business I wanted to discuss with the two of you, if you have a moment."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 08:46:15 pm
Falcata is the first to pull away, sensibility once more forcing itself into the front of her mind.

"Oh, um, of course.  What is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 08:47:14 pm
I reluctantly release the group hug, still feeling a little unstable from dealing with Charity's generosity.  I reverently place the spear back in the box, then turn back to her to hear what she has to say.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 08:55:26 pm
"Well, you might recall that one of the smiths recently produced a very high quality adamantine crossbow. And I'm not sure what we should do with it. It seems to useful to just put on display somewhere, but that's an option. A number of ponies are expecting me to gift it to Captain Otik, but that's just not going to happen. I guess Madush could take it. What do you two think? I want your opinions."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 09:04:28 pm
Falcata quirks an eyebrow at the statement.

"I would be proud and honored to have such a weapon at our disposal, and I know Madush would feel the same... but Lieutenant Otik... I..."  She trails off, unsure if she was willing to question such an absolute statement by Charity.

((Dang it, who to believe?  Starkey calls her a lieutenant, the duchess calls her a captain... Falcata is confused.  :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 09:27:59 pm
((This inconsistency with Otik's rank goes back a long way. I call her a Captain because that's what she is in the game, and Starkey is the Commander, even if he sometimes get's called Cap'n.))

"Yes Falcata, what about Otik?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 09:28:13 pm
"Why not Otik?"  I ask, confused.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 09:29:46 pm
Charity turns to Khenal, she seems slightly confused. "Why? Because I can't trust her of course. Her or her coltfriend Starkey."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 09:32:03 pm
I tilt my head, even more confused than before.

"Why don't you trust them?  And if you don't trust them, why keep them in the military?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 09:44:10 pm
"I don't trust Otik because she kicked down my door and threatened my family. Starkey because he ordered it. And both of them because they'd have drug me off in chains or worse had Carrot not stepped in and saved me. I let them keep their positions because the majority of Glitterglen love them, and they're big god-damn heroes. That doesn't mean I don't keep an ear to the ground for whatever plot they might cook up next, but I don't think I need to give them more firepower. They're the biggest reason I still feel like I NEED a personal guard."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 09:59:32 pm
From the corridor beyond comes the sound of two ponies, a mare and a stallion. They are talking, but the mare occasionally lets out a burst of giggling. The sound comes closer to the barracks, and eventually they stop outside the door. After a whispered count to three, the two, Friesden and Heiro, burst into the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 10:01:58 pm
"Have... have you tried talking to them about it?"

And then the ponies arrive to drag me away to my doom party.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 10:03:27 pm
"HEYAS KHEN-" Heiro stops after noticing the duchess

"U-umm d-duchess I'm sorry I-I" Heiro blushes and bows quickly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 10:06:25 pm
Friesden hurriedly follows suit, then leaps up and winks obviously at the duchess.

"Hello, Your Grace, we've just come to take Khenal to the party that you're totally not giving a speech at, remember! Hello Falcata! Are you coming, too?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 10:07:25 pm
Falcata opens her mouth to speak, unsure of exactly what she was going to say.  Truth be told she was still a bit afraid of Otik herself, but she didn't think Otik or Starkey would ever try something like that again.  The circumstances were exceptional, to say the least.

Thankfully, the arriving ponies relieved her of the need to actually say anything.  She blinks dumbly at Friesden for a moment.
  "Party?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 10:09:35 pm
"It's Khenal's," Friesden breaks the speech to give Khenal a big kiss, then continues "birthday party today! So we're throwing the best party EVER!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 10:09:36 pm
"Oh is it that time already, Friesden. I guess we can finish this conversation later, Khenal, Falcata. Can't have the stallion of the hour late for his own birthday party."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 10:11:19 pm
"Yay Khenal's birthday party!" Heiro is just as bouncy as a colt

"I'm not sure what a party's like but little sis planned it so it'll be awesome!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 10:13:31 pm
"It's my first party too, but Lilac helped a lot, and so did Starkey and Otik and Charity and everypony and it's going to be SO FUN!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 10:13:52 pm
"Oh, birthday?"  She looks over to Khenal, the spear and back to Charity.  Of course, that made sense now.  "Oh, I had no idea.  Happy birthday, Khenal."

She looks back to Friesden.  Well, that would give her some more time to think.  Telling the duchess she had a gut feeling Otik was a safe bet wouldn't be good enough, she imagined.  "Of course I'll come."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 10:16:17 pm
I close my eyes to further focus on the joy of Friesden's kiss, lost in happiness until the repetition of the words "birthday party" start to bring me out of it.  I give the gathered ponies a nervous smile.

"Um, I... guess we should get going?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 11, 2012, 10:17:11 pm
Can I take the Male earthpony woodcutter (if there are multiple first on list) and have him named Powder Woodcutter?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 10:18:00 pm
"This is going to be the best first party ever!" Friesden says happily as she begins dragging Khenal to the party, lost in her own imaginings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 10:21:38 pm
"Is Kris gonna be there Falcata? I hope she will be! Come on we can't waste time!" Heiro is practically vibrating with excitement.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 10:38:55 pm
I follow Friesden, trying to keep my fear in check.

"Yes, best party ever..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 10:42:14 pm
Falcata looks over to Heiro.  "Oh, I... don't know?  I didn't know about this until just now.  I suppose I could go get her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 10:43:11 pm
((Powder, here is your pony. Treat it with care, or it might wind up broken like Dsarker's.))

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Powder.png

"Charity looks to Khenal, are you going to bring your new spear so everypony can see it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 10:44:39 pm
"Yeah let's get her! She should be there too. U-um if you don't mind."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 10:45:31 pm
"Oh, right!  Sorry."

My horn glows as I carefully levitate Charity's gift after Friesden and myself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 10:48:23 pm
"Ooh, Khenal! What's this? Is... That's me! That's me, there!" Friesden says as she looks over the box and then points to one of the ponies engraved onto it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 10:58:33 pm
I smile warmly at Friesden.

'Her happiness is just so infectious.'


"Yes it is.  Did Charity show you this before?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 11:00:13 pm
"No... But it's definitely a worthy gift for you! I wish I could have gotten you something as good...but the birthday party will have to be enough, I guess. But we've worked hard! You'll love this! One day, just about you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 11:01:57 pm
Falcata nods to Heiro.  "Yes, I think she'll enjoy it.  She should be back home by now I think."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 11:03:37 pm
"Cool, lets go and get her then!" Heiro pulls on Falcatas hoof, trying to hurry her up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 11:19:45 pm
As Khenal and Friesden wander through the fortress, they bump into another pony, a woodcutter that Friesden doesnt know.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 11, 2012, 11:24:03 pm
Powder Woodcutter had been walking to a party for Khenal when he bumps into a pony. "Er-" he starts to say, before he looks up and sees Khenal and Friesden. "Oh! Err... ...hi?" He hadn't expectesd to ever run into a group of people like this in the halls, and he was feeling a bit overwhelmed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 11:27:05 pm
"Hey!" says Friesden in a happy tone. "What's your name? I don't think I've met you before! I'm Friesden, and this is Khenal, the best pony EVER!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 11:27:37 pm
The two reach Falcata's home shortly.  She opens the door, a bit excited at the prospect of showing Kris a true birthday party.  Inside, they find Kris lying on the bed by herself, scribbling something into a book.  The filly looks up and hurriedly shuts the book before stowing it into a bag.

"Oh, hi mom!  Mr. Heiro!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 11:28:59 pm
"Heyas Kris! How you doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 11:29:34 pm
I give the new pony a nervous smile.

"Um, just Khenal, please.  Friesden is best pony."

I give her a gentle nuzzle for emphasis.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 11, 2012, 11:30:29 pm
"U-u-uuh, my name's Powder Woodcutter. I don't think I've met you either?" He turned to Khenal. "Uh, hello. I didn't quite expect to bump into any important ponies... hello, I guess?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 11:32:07 pm
"Khenal's always so modest, but no, he's really the best pony ever. He's so good he loves me! So we're throwing him a birthday party! Want to come?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 11:33:46 pm
"You've already invited nearly the entire fort, hun. He was probably on his way there now." Says the Duchess to Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 11:34:49 pm
"Oh, I'm doing good.  What's up?"  She notices the bruise on her mother's face and asks, "Mom?  Are you okay?"

Falcata idly brushes the blemish on her nose and nods with a smile.  "Yes, I'm fine, just an accident while training.  But we've got something to show you."  She looks over to Heiro.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 11:35:12 pm
"Are you? Because that would be really really really really good! Everypony should be able to come! Khenal's going to get the best birthday party because he's the best pony!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 11:35:26 pm
I pale slightly when I hear how many were invited.

'The whole fort?!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 11, 2012, 11:36:40 pm
"I-i was actually grabbing an axe to start woodcutting, but I g-guess I-i'm going now?" Oh stallion, Powder Woodcutter was getting more and more overwhelmed. Not only had he bumped into Charity, Friesden, and Khenal, some of the most legendary ponies in the fort all at once, they were up and inviting him to a whole-fort party, but a party? Oh, geez.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 11:38:08 pm
Friesden gives Khenal another kiss. "Won't this be fun! A whole day, all about you! And we can do it better each year!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 11:40:47 pm
Friesden's kiss helps to settle me down again, but I'm still uneasy.

'It's not Tailentranced.  It's like Charity's gift, something thought out and personal.  Even if the entire fort is there for it...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 11:41:46 pm
"Yeah! We're going to a birthday party for Khenal! I don't know much about parties, but little sis planned it so it will be cool! You're gonna come right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 11:42:56 pm
"So..." Friesden starts to say, then jumps over and gives Powder Woodcutter a hug. "You're going to come! This is going to be the best party!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 11, 2012, 11:43:53 pm
Powder Woodcutter is just standing there. Considering these ponies "legends", he practically worships them, and he's not sure if he should move something or if that would be rude! He's never been the best at conversations... And all three of them at once he bumps into and gets invited to a party? ...He's just kind of standing there and looking increasingly nervous.
Then one of them, Friesden turned her attention back to him and hugged him. "Y-y-yeah, I- y-yeah..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 11:45:49 pm
"Oh, a party?  Cool!"  Kris grins and steps over to them.  "Let's go!"

Falcata pauses.  "Oh... but we don't have a gift for Khenal..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 11:46:53 pm
"Yay! Let's go! You can tell us all about yourself on the way!" Friesden grabs hold of both Khenal and Powder Woodcutter and begins to drag them towards the party.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 11:47:47 pm
"A gift? Oh... was I supposed to get a gift?" Heiro's excitement seems to fade a bit.

"I-I don't want to mess up the party... not after little sis put so much work into it..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 11, 2012, 11:48:57 pm
Charity suppresses a chuckle as she watches happy Friesden's antics.

'This should be a fun evening.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 11, 2012, 11:51:08 pm
"W-w-w-w-well I-i w-was born in a cl-clan... w-we pr-prove ourselves in a k-kind of work and th-then we live our lives, as n-noted sp-spspecialists. I'm a-able to w-woodcut, b-but I w-want to b-be kn-known as a le-legend, b-become the master at it. I-i-m only kinda.. c-competent at it though."
She wanted him to tell them about himself. Aaaaargh!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 11, 2012, 11:54:16 pm
She raises a hoof to her chin.  "Well... that was tradition in Coupledye at least.  Does Glitterglen even have tradition for this sort of thing?"  She smiles at Heiro and Kris and says, "Well, if Friesden didn't say anything about it I'm sure it'll be alright.  I suppose she'll be setting the tradition here now."

She leads them back out to the hallway.  "So, where was the party?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 11, 2012, 11:54:39 pm
"What was your clan called? Where was or is it? You're going to be a legend, I can see it! You know Khenal here, he does carpentry! Maybe he might be able to give you a few hints from the masters he knows!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 11, 2012, 11:55:41 pm
"It was gonna be in the dining hall. I'm so exited! Hey Falcata, what's a party like?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 11, 2012, 11:55:57 pm
I try to distract myself from my fear with some small talk with this new pony.

"Woodcutting?  Maybe I've worked with something you've brought in."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 12:01:26 am
She sets off toward the dining hall, trying to remember the last time she had been to one.  Had it really been that long?

"Well, in Coupledye it varied a lot depending on what the party was for, of course.  For birthdays there was usually a lot of friends and family over and lot of food for everypony.  Some families would do things one way or another, streamers, banners, little things like that.  Most of the time the guests would bring gifts for whoever's birthday it was."

She rolls her eyes and smiles.  "Some families would have a lot of alcohol around too.  People would socialize until they got too drunk."  She chuckles a little.  "Only saw one or two like that myself, thankfully."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 12, 2012, 12:03:07 am
He'd never doubted they wouldn't be mean, but they were so nice! He didn't w-want to accidentally offend someone! "E-eerk...  W-w-well m-m-maybe? I-it might be an-anyone, I d-d-d-don't really tr-track th-the l-l-l-ogs I br-bring i-in, a-after a-all I-i h-havven't b-been here v-very l-long..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:06:00 am
"Oh, Khenal! You're scaring him!" Friesden gives Khenal a playful tap on the cheek. "So, Powder Woodcutter, how do you like Glitterglen? Don't worry about the Duchess, she's a nice mare!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 12:07:36 am
"Wow, That sounds really fun! I can't wait, what about you Kris, you exited?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 12, 2012, 12:09:39 am
"W-well, i-it's a pretty g-g-good place... Ii-'m sorry, I-i'm just a bit overwhelmed right now, d-didn't expect t-t-to run into y-you," he pointed to Khenal "hhim, or the D-duchess, and I was c-certainly surprised t-to see a-all of y-you important ponis a-at once..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 12:12:01 am
Kris nods vigorously.  "Yeah, that sounds fun!"

Falcata chuckles again.  "Well, I've got no idea what Friesden has planned, of course, could be anything.  I only wish Kris could have seen a few in Coupledye.  We've been here ever since around her first birthday."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:13:14 am
"Don't worry!" Friesden gives Powder Woodcutter another hug. "This is going to be really fun! Don't worry, it'll be all okay!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 12, 2012, 12:15:02 am
"O-o-o-ok... i-if you s-say s-so..." Oh geez, sometimes Powder Woodcutter wished he was not so good at knowing what others were feeling and he wished he were less -awkwad-! They were all so happy and he was so nervous oh geez...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:16:22 am
Friesden gives him a little nuzzle. "Just loosen up a little. This is going to be FUN!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 12, 2012, 12:17:05 am
Charity forces a smile, she's used to people being uncomfortable around her, but knew it probably was bothering Khenal.

"Relax kid. I don't bite, and neither does Khenal, unless you're a badger pony that is."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 12:18:09 am
"Wow... I've never had a party I don't think. Hmm... I can't remember what my birthday is..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 12, 2012, 12:18:35 am
Deep breath, Deep breath. Deeeeeeeeeep breeaaaaath... "Ok, I'll have fun I guess... I'm just not the best when in conversations you see...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 12, 2012, 12:20:07 am
Friesden's mood continues to lift mine, and I give Powder a small smile.

"So it looks like you're safe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:21:04 am
Friesden gets a mischievious smile on her face, and before Powder Woodcutter can react, she tackle-hugs him and gives him a little nuzzle. "This is going to be fun!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 12, 2012, 12:24:49 am
"Hurk! Ummm..... yeah? I hope it will be?" Oh dear Sister! Had to be so sociable and eager to talk to him, why did she have to be?!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:28:00 am
"Yay! So let's get to it!" In the tangle of limbs, Friesden's still not-fully-healed wing gets caught and a spike of pain rushes through her body, wiping the smile from her face. "Ow!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 12, 2012, 12:29:02 am
"Ah! Are you O-OK?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 12:29:37 am
Couldn't remember his own birthday?  She was curious just how young he was when his village had been destroyed.

"Well, my family wasn't too wealthy, but we managed a little something for me each year until I was grown."

She gives a small smile to the two in her company.  "Well, I suppose you'll both get to see your first real birthday party today."  She'd done something small for Kris each year of course, but she could never have afforded to do anything of this scale, and Kris didn't really have any friends outside of Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 12, 2012, 12:30:02 am
"Oop!"

My horn shines softly as i carefully try too disentangle Friesden and Powder.

"Are you alright, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:30:20 am
"I'll...I'll be alright," she says bravely, and after a bit of effort manages to extract her wing without further injury. "Well...well..." she says, still panting from the pain, "shall we...shall we go to it, then?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 12:32:56 am
"Heh I can't wait. When is your birthday Kris?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 12, 2012, 12:34:15 am
Oh Sister, had he hurt her? "S-sorry about that..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:35:30 am
"Sorry? About what? Oh, the wing. That's okay! That was Khenal, really. He's the best pony though, so it's all okay!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 12, 2012, 12:36:26 am
Charity is visibly concerned.

"Friesden, are you okay, did you re-break your wing? Do you need to go to the infirmary?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:37:42 am
"No, it'll be okay! I can wait until after the party! This is Khenal's day!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 12, 2012, 12:39:14 am
"Are you sure you're alright, Friesden?  I don't want you hurt because of me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 12:40:29 am
"25th Timber," she answers matter-of-factly.  "Mom's is 24th Obsidian.

Falcata raises an eyebrow in surprise that Kris knew that so readily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:40:50 am
"I'll be okay, Khenal! I don't want you to miss your party because of me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 12:45:07 am
"Wow, we'll have to have a party for you too! U-umm, if I can afford it..."


Heiro thinks a bit. "Hmm, so Kris, when do you think my birthday is?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 12, 2012, 12:45:21 am
"Eergohmy... A-awfully sorry." Ooh, please no wing breaking. He didn't want anyone to be mad at him...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:46:51 am
"It's okay, Powder Woodcutter. Khenal was the one who gave it to me in the first place, and I haven't killed him," Friesden says jokingly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 12, 2012, 12:48:46 am
"Huh? Th-there must be a lot of accidents here...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:49:48 am
"It doesn't matter. Let's just go to the party and have fun!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 12:50:56 am
"Hmm."  Kris thinks for a moment.  "1st Granite?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 12:54:09 am
"1st Granite?" Heiro thinks a bit more "Sounds... perfect! So now my birthday is 1st Granite, hehe I wonder if I'll get a party."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 12:58:38 am
"I hope so!" Kris says.

Falcata nods silently.  It was a long ways off, maybe they could get something going by then.  Maybe birthday parties could kind of become a tradition for Glitterglen like Coupledye by then.

As the thought finishes, the three finally reach the dining hall where the final preparations are being made.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 12:59:01 am
Even as Friesden says that, they arrive at the party!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 12, 2012, 01:05:44 am
The small crowd of ponies enter to find Starkey and Otik just as they are putting the finishing touches on the party decorations - or rather, Starkey alternating between decorating and fawning over Otik.

"Really, hun,  I can handle this. You should rest."

"I'll be fine, Stars. Ye dunnae need t'wait on me so."

"You lost a lot of blood, Otik. You're still very weak."

"An' you gave over a pint o' yer own. Shouldnae you be restin' as well, then?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 01:08:13 am
"Dad! Mum!" shouts Friesden as she bursts in and tacklehugs them both.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on January 12, 2012, 03:01:10 am
Seated in a corner of the dining room, quietly drinking some wine, ThunderSplinter guards some exquisitely decorated cupcakes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 12, 2012, 10:53:33 pm
Starkey is a strong buck: he catches Friesden in the air and twirls her around.

"Oooh ho-ho! There's my little girl! How have you been?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 10:56:39 pm
"Really good dad how have you been? Khenal's here and he's already got his first gift and this is going to be the best party ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 12, 2012, 10:58:41 pm
Starkey gently lowers her to the ground.

"Of course it is. Only the best for my son-on-law."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:00:36 pm
"You're the best father EVER!" Friesden reluctantly tears herself from her fathers hooves, and runs to give her mum a big hug too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 12, 2012, 11:02:56 pm
I nervously eye the banners with my cutie mark, trying to stay calm.

'It's a gift of love, don't freak out.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:04:11 pm
"You doing okay, mum?" Friesden says with a tinge of nervousness mixing with the happiness as she throws her forelegs around Otik's neck.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 12, 2012, 11:06:19 pm
Charity, looks on at this. She'd heard Friesden had been "adopted" by Starkey and Otik, but it was still strange to see them acting this way.

"Khenal, why don't you go show your soon to be father-in-law your gift, and I'm going to go say hello to Thunder, over there, I'll talk to you later."

Charity walks over to greet her old friend Thundersplinters.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 12, 2012, 11:07:09 pm
"Oh, aye luv. Yer father just worries to much. I'll  be fine, Fri. How about you? How's yer wing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 11:08:19 pm
Falcata takes a quick look at the scene and tries to figure the best place to get settled.  She enjoyed coming to parties for people, but had never really cared to be the center of attention.  Best find someplace off to the side for the moment.

She notices ThunderSplinter sitting off to herself, sipping at some wine.  Every time she saw the pony she cringed inside.  That wasn't a day she was going to forget.  Ever.  Had she ever apologized to her?  With what happened later that day, she couldn't remember.

Well, she wouldn't want to cause a scene in the middle of Khenal's party, so she idly wanders in that direction.  If ThunderSplinter started a conversation, she'd be happy to talk, but she wouldn't push it.  And if not, she would be mostly out of the way over here, and maybe not everypony would ask her who kicked her in the face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:09:23 pm
"I banged it today, but it's alright! Dr Bubbles says it'll be healed soon, so I didn't want to put off Khenal's party for it. Got to make sure it's perfect for him! I can't wait till it starts. This is going to be so fun!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 12, 2012, 11:10:11 pm
"Oh!  Um, sure, that sounds good.  Um, thanks again for the gift, Charity."

I walk over to Starkey, levitating the gift behind me.  The earlier conversation with Charity about him and Otik flashes through my mind as I approach.

"Um, heya Starkey.  How, um... how are you doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 12, 2012, 11:14:06 pm
"Oh, Friesden. Do be more careul 'bout that please. Ye wouldnae want t'worry Khenal too much on his birthday, would ye?."

 - - - - - -

"Well, now that I know Otik will be alright. Thank you, by the way."

Starkey notices the box floating in the air, wreathed in Khenal's magic.

"What is that, then? Been peeking into your gifts?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:17:07 pm
"Oh, no! Would he? What should I do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 11:17:38 pm
Falcata pauses as she notices Charity beating her to the opportunity to talk to ThunderSplinter.  Well, probably just as well.  She finds a relatively empty spot and settles in, waiting for the party to officially begin.

Kris wanders off as her mom sits down.  Lilac would be here, right?  She hadn't had a chance to talk to her in a while, and she probably had a lot to say if she'd been helping organize this party.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 11:19:32 pm
Heiro looks around at all the banners and ponies 'so this is what a parties like huh sis...'

He spots Friesden in the group and walks over "Hey little sis, how you doin'?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 12, 2012, 11:19:54 pm
"Charity gave it to me in the barracks.  It's... well, look."

My horns glows as I open the box to show Starkey the spear from Charity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:22:54 pm
"Big brother! How are you?" Friesden leaps over to him, still excited at the party to come.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on January 12, 2012, 11:23:07 pm
As Charity approaches ThunderSplinter, she is disquieted by what she sees - ThunderSplinter was wearing those ear-rings again.  They were quite ordinary looking, green-glass leaves, but they had a much darker history.  And they had been made by the late Nagel back in Tailentranced, before both were exiled - Charity hoped that history was not about to repeat itself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 11:24:41 pm
Heiro pulls Friesden into a hug, being careful of her wing "I'm great, Kris is here too did you see?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 12, 2012, 11:25:28 pm
Forgefire had overheard a conversation that there was going to be a party of sorts today. Supposedly, all who lived in the fort were invited. At first, he was a bit reluctant to attend, since he didn't know anypony very well here at his new home. The blacksmith had spent most of his adult life to himself, so he thought a change of pace couldn't hurt for once. If anything, at least he could learn what kind of important events had occurred in the recent past and what he could expect to happen in the future. If anypony decided to strike up a conversation with Forge, that probably wouldn't hurt either. Not a bad thing to know what kind of ponies shared this fort with him.

The tan pegasus loitered near the area where the party was to be thrown, pacing the hard floors and staying close to the decorated walls. He always did have a bit of nervous energy about him and rarely stood still if he could help it. However, Forge held back from going in until he was certain that the festivities had begun. In the meantime, he occupied himself by thinking of ways to improve his craft.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 12, 2012, 11:26:44 pm
"Oh, my... That's a beautiful weapon, Khenal. Miss Charity must have paid quite a sum for that. She really must appreciate your service."

 - - - - - -

Alarm bells! Friesden shouldn't be this worried about Khenal being unhappy. Starkey vouched for the alicorn, and she valued that, but Otik still isn't so sure...

"Just... try not t'get hurt again. For me, as much as for him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:28:37 pm
"No, I didn't! Is Falcata here? Let's go and see her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 11:29:59 pm
"Yeah Falcata's here... Umm somewhere. This is what a party is? It's COOL!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 12, 2012, 11:30:24 pm
Charity approaches and sits near Thundersplinter, the memories of seeing her beaten and bloodied following the amulet incident flashed in her mind. She never asked for that.

'I should have grabbed a drink, first.' she thinks to herself.

"Uh, Hello Thunder, how have you been?" she nervously smiles at Thundersplinter before taking her seat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 12, 2012, 11:30:52 pm
"Um, ya, I think so.  Um... did you ever talk to her about... the amulets?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:31:41 pm
Friesden looks around, and spots Falcata. "There she is! Let's say hi! Then I've gotta go say sorry to Khenal. This is going to be the best party ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 11:33:59 pm
Falcata turns an ear toward Charity and ThunderSplinter's conversation, but tries to feign disinterest.  She really should say something to the pony... in private.  If ThunderSplinter hated her forever, well, she'd understand that.

She notices Heiro and Friesden talking and turning toward her.  Time to put all of that nastiness aside for now.  She smiles at them from across the distance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 11:34:32 pm
"Why do you have to apologize to Khenal?" Heiro starts walking after Friesden
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:35:27 pm
"Yes, see! She's smiling!" Friesden drags Heiro over to Falcata, a huge smile on her face.

"Because Otik thinks I might have scared him, and this is his birthday. It's gotta be the best day ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 11:36:56 pm
"Oh, oh, didja hear? Kris decided that my birthday is 1st Granite! So now I'll be able to have a party too!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 12, 2012, 11:37:41 pm
Starkey bows his head.

"...no, I haven't. We haven't really spoken that much since... you know."

He raises his head, watching Charity and ThunderSplinter from afar.

"Even then, at the height of my anger, I never intended her any harm, but... that doesn't make what I almost did any better."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:39:34 pm
"That's good! I don't remember my birthday anymore either. But this is the best birthday present I could have got! Khenal's going to marry me AND I get to organise his birthday party!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on January 12, 2012, 11:41:20 pm
ThunderSplinter nods to Charity and offers a goblet of wine.  "Needs another month in the cellars, but still drinkable"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 11:42:49 pm
"This is all very nice Friesden, I know Khenal's going to love it," Falcata says as the two ponies draw close to her.  It was nice to see Friesden truly happy for a change.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:44:53 pm
Friesden leaps at Falcata and tacklehugs her too. "I know! This will be the best party EVER! I can't wait till everypony gets here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 12, 2012, 11:45:12 pm
"I... I think you should talk.  It's been unresolved for far too long, don't you think?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 11:46:02 pm
Heiro joins in on the hug "It is already awesome! There's MORE!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 12, 2012, 11:48:00 pm
Peeking into the dining hall, Forge discerned that the event in question had commenced. There were a lot of ponies here; that made him feel slightly intimidated. Well, he was already here, no point in leaving now. He slowly trotted inside, eyes darting silently back-and-forth to the various groups of conversing ponies all wrapped up in their own activities. He recognized Duchess Charity, not surprising given her status. He also caught sight of Falcata, remembering how he helped her with her armor resizing. Forge took a breath and walked over to the spread of food, humming a bit as he tried to decide what would be the best thing to start off with.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:49:58 pm
Friesden catches sight of the new pony, and wriggles out of the hug and runs over.

"Hello! I'm Friesden! What's your name?"

Before he can reply, Friesden gives him a tacklehug too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 11:51:13 pm
Falcata grunts as the two compress her currently bruised ribs, but stoically ignores the pain at the expense of worrying anypony.  She returns the hug without hesitation this time, feeling quite a bit happier herself just being near the elevated moods.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 12, 2012, 11:52:06 pm
"Aye, maybe you're right. I wanted to ask her something else anyway."

As he turns towards the small crowd around Charity, he notices something out of the corner of his eye: an inscription on Captain Falcata's hammer. He squints to read it.

'Loyalty'


"Huh. You did Falcata's hammer too? Loyalty... wasn't that what you put on Carrot's dagger?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 12, 2012, 11:54:09 pm
"Heh I'm glad that Friesden is so happy. Is this a good party Falcata?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 12, 2012, 11:56:16 pm
To suddenly have his thoughts interrupted by the rather loud greeting causes Forgefire to jerk and grunt from being startled. He turns to see the enthusiastic female pegasus staring at him with a grin on her face.

"I...nngh!"

Pupils dilate as he finds himself in the choke-hold of a hug that Friesden gives him. He was not expecting this. "I'm...Forgefire...do I...know you?" he managed to squeeze out timidly as he looked for a way to back out of the stranger's hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 12, 2012, 11:56:35 pm
"...What?  No, Carrot gave me a dagger with loyalty etched on it.  Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 12, 2012, 11:57:00 pm
Charity accepts the offered wine and takes a sip. "Ah yes, I see what you mean, another month would have done wonders, for it. Oh well."

Charity continues her drink and tries to make small talk, "I, uh, like your earrings. Nagel made them right? He was always so skilled. A pity what happened to him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 12, 2012, 11:57:33 pm
"Me too," she answers, not noticing that they're still hugging.  "It looks like a good one to me so far, and I'm sure Khenal would agree."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 12, 2012, 11:58:46 pm
"Well NOW you do! How are you? Do you like the party? It's for the best pony ever, Khenal! He's going to marry me, did you know? This is going to be so good!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 12:00:34 am
"That wasn't you? I noticed an engraving on the blade of my axe a while back. It just says 'Honesty'. Then I saw one on Carrot's dagger, and now on Falcata's hammer. I thought you were saying you thought I was particularly honest."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 12:04:03 am
Well, that was one way to break the ice...or rather to have it brutally shattered by somepony else first.

"K-Khenal? Yeah, I'm pretty sure I did hear that this was a birthday party..." Forge replied with a feigned smile covering up his feelings of slight worry and awkwardness.

"So then...congratulations. On the marriage, that is. To this Kennel...um...Khenal..." he continued, followed by nervous laughter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on January 13, 2012, 12:04:30 am
"Nagel and I go way back - we were both apprenticed to the same master, but Nagel saw more opportunity in glassmaking, I stayed on...", she trailed off and fell silent, "I miss him sometimes", she adds sadly.  She pours more wine for herself and proffers the bottle to Charity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 12:06:43 am
Memories of fighting daemons with Starkey's Honesty and Carrot's Loyalty run through my head.

"You are Honest, but I never engraved anything.  That's uncanny, I remember using your axe against Cockroach to great effect.  Carrot's knife as well..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 12:11:05 am
"Come on! I'll introduce you to Heiro and Falcata! Heiro's my brother, did you know? He's the best brother anypony could want!" Friesden drags Forgefire back to Heiro and Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 12:14:18 am
He was being pulled into socializing quite a bit more quickly than he had originally expected. The guy couldn't be rude, though.

"Sure thing...I do believe that I've met Falcata before," the pegasus responded, feeling a bit more reassured that at least he had seen one of them before.

He followed after Friesden, but his pace was notably less energetic than hers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 12:16:29 am
Charity continues to only sip at her wine. It isn't particularly strong, but Friesden wanted her to make a speech later, and it wouldn't do to be at less than fully aware when doing so.

"I loved Nagel's work. The table and chairs in my dinning room where commissioned from him. As is a large glass statue of the 7 founders all studded with indigo gems that I had put in there as well. I know some ponies think I ordered those, executions, but I can honestly say that those orders where not mine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 12:18:26 am
"That's good, you'll know one of them then!" Friesden pulls Forgefire over to the two, who are still embraced.

Friesden squees and claps her hooves together. "You two are the cutest couple ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 12:21:58 am
"Hey..." Forge stated half-heartedly towards the two other ponies without making direct eye contact. He scratched behind his head with a hoof, trying to think of what to say next. "Guess this is our second time meeting up...Falcata is it? So you've got a coltfriend, huh?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 13, 2012, 12:24:27 am
Heiro blushes as he realizes that he's still hugging Falcata. he lets go and turns to greet the newcomer, "Heyas I'm Heiro, who're you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 12:25:24 am
"You... used our weapons to fight Cockroach? Inside a pony's mind? That's very strange."

Starkey ponders this for a moment.

"Honesty and Loyalty... I've heard those together before. Khenal, how well do you know your scripture?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 12:26:32 am
Falcata's eyes grow wide as she hears Friesden's words.  Couple?  She backs out of the hug.

She clears her throat and looks at the ponies around her, feeling her face flush slightly.
  "Uh..."

She takes in what Forgefire said and decides to change the subject.  "Oh, hello again Forgefire.  I trust you're doing well?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 12:27:01 am
Friesden lets go of Forgefire and pushes Falcata and Heiro back together, squeeing as she does so. "You two are so cute together!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 13, 2012, 12:28:21 am
Heiro blushes harder, but doesn't attempt to move away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on January 13, 2012, 12:31:16 am
ThunderSplinter nods slowly, "I learned later that you had nothing to do with the hammering", she says distantly, "I am more upset over that useless hack, Bubbles, how he learned medicine I will never understand...", then with a sigh, "...and there are many other ponies you must mingle with, so, go and enjoy yourself, I'll sit here and take it easy, resting my injury....", she stops suddenly and focuses on the last cupcake on the table between them, "You want that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 12:33:28 am
"Hello Heiro...I'm Forgefire...one of the blacksmiths," he answers the male pony. Forge glances to Falcata, "Um, yeah, I'm good...you?"

The blacksmith pegasus grunts a bit as he sees Friesden push the two back together. He can tell Falcata isn't enjoying the occurance. This peppy filly is starting to scare him a bit. Hopefully she wasn't gonna try to do anything embarrassing to him...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 12:33:36 am
Friesden continues squeeing and clapping her hooves together. "You two are adorable! This is so cute! I've got to get Khenal!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 12:34:41 am
"Um... not as well as I should.  Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 12:41:19 am
Falcata completely fails to contain the blush on her face, but she avoids eye contact with Heiro.  This was more than a bit embarrasing, but she didn't want to upset anypony right now.  She inches away from Heiro slightly, to give herself a bit of breathing room.  She looks up to Forgefire and says, "Good to hear, I'm doing well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 12:42:26 am
Charity pauses. She does want that. It looks so good. But Crypt asked her to cut back on the sweets, but it looked so delicious, one wouldn't hurt.

((My chubby little unicorn, has no willpower against cupcakes.))

"Thanks. I guess I'll go mingle now, um, if you ever want to talk again, you know where to find me. Maybe we can do lunch together again sometime."

She levitates the cupcake and takes a bite out of it. She stands and looks around for other ponies to talk to. She sees the group surrounding Falcata.

 'It's good to see she's finally making some friends. I'd best not get in the way.'

And she looks for somepony else to talk to.

'There's Khenal, but he's with those two. Don't want to go there.'

She decides to wander the room chatting with whichever random ponies are attending.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 12:43:36 am
Friesden runs over, leaving the embarrassed pair of ponies together, and runs to Khenal. "Khenal! Khenal!" she says as she jumps into a tacklehug onto him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 12:45:46 am
"The Book of Dawn and Dusk tells us of the Elements of Harmony: six virtues that all ponies should strive for to achieve true happiness. Kindness, Generosity, Honesty, Loyalty, Laughter, Magic."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 12:48:44 am
I look at Starkey, confused.

"Magic is a virt-woah!"

Friesden's tackle hug, while greatly appreciated, catches me off guard and I stumble.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 12:48:58 am
Feeling slightly confused, Forge wondered by Falcata seemed to be unhappy with the cuddle whereas Heiro seemed to silently enjoy it. Not that it was any of his business; he held his tongue on the matter. Time to find something else to discuss, "So...what kind of jobs do you two do? I do believe I recall you saying something about guarding Charity last time we met, Falcata? What of you, Heiro?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 12:52:05 am
"Khenal! How are you loving the party?" Friesden asks as she holds Him tight and gives Him a kiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 13, 2012, 12:54:44 am
"I'm in the fortress guard! I'm not much of a fighter, but my big sis helps! Although... F-falcata d-did you ever ask about..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 12:59:27 am
Heiro's question snaps her out of the stupor for a moment.

"Oh... I, um, not yet.  I was going to ask her this afternoon."  She makes a motion to the ponies surrounding them in the dining hall and adds with a smile, "But then the party happened."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 01:02:15 am
"Ah, the both of you know how to fight, then?" He was stating the obvious, but what else was Forge to say? "Seen...much in the way of action?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 01:02:56 am
I return the kiss lovingly, then think about how to answer Friesden's question.  I look around the room, finally seeing past the banners to all the ponies and how happy they all look.  Truly, honestly happy. 

'They aren't trying to scheme for my favor, they just want to show their friendship.  It... it really
isn't like Tailentranced.  Not at all...'

I look Friesden in the eyes as happy tears start to well.


"Y... Yes, I am.  Thank you, Friesden.  It really is the best birthday party ever.  Thank you so much!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 01:04:03 am
"Not recently, thank goodness," Falcata answers, relishing in the chance to change the subject.  "If I see action that means whatever is attacking us got past the militia and the guard.  I'd rather not dwell on what that would mean."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 13, 2012, 01:07:15 am
"I-I ran into a crunde in the caverns recently..." Heiro looks at the ground, as if waiting for a reprimand
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 01:08:47 am
Well, no need to interrupt the two lovers. Starkey leaves Khenal and Friesden.

'Well, no time like the present...'

He tentatively approaches Countess Charity.


"M-Miss Charity, ma'am? Could I... have a word?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 01:12:01 am
Happy tears begin to fall from Friesden's eyes to match Khenals as she stares mournfully into his. "I'm just so happy I could throw a birthday you'd like. I love you so much, Khenal. Without your happiness...I'm not sure I could go on. But...you're happy. I just want to say sorry, again, for scaring you in the corridor just then. You are the best pony, and I love you so much!"

Friesden gives Khenal another long kiss to rival the longest kisses she's given him, holding him tight to her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 01:15:05 am
"Um, Crundle...?" Forge asked. He was starting to melt in a bit better and wasn't as nervous as he was when Friesden had first grabbed him, "Did...something bad happen? Hope that's not a dumb question..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 01:16:45 am
Charity looks over Starkey, he's not armed. 'That's good.' she thinks to her self. But all the same she looks around for, and notes the locations of, her guards just in case. 'Not that he would do anything in front of this many ponies,' she assures herself.

"Of course Commander. What business would you like to discuss?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 01:21:19 am
"It could have been bad," Falcata answers for Heiro before smiling.  "I think I told you about this the other day actually.  That crundle attacked my daughter down there.  If Corporal Heiro here hadn't been there things wouldn't have turned out well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 01:24:29 am
"Well, I..."

Starkey paws the floor nervously, searching for the words.

"I've been meaning to talk to you about... what I almost did to you... those years ago."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 01:26:06 am
Forge recalled, "Oh, is that so? So he's the one you were talking about who saved your daughter. I think I understand now."

The pegasus looked around a bit, "So this daughter of yours, is she here at this party as well?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 01:28:16 am
"Oh," Charity is genuinely surprised.

"Perhaps we should take a seat, if we are going to have this talk."

She gestures toward an empty table against the wall, out of the way of the party.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 01:30:47 am
Falcata looks around briefly to try and spot Kris but fails.  "Yes, she's here somewhere.  Not sure where she ran off to though."

She notices Friesden and Khenal openly kissing in front of the entire fortress and isn't sure if she should feel happy or embarrassed for them.  "Well, looks like Friesden and Khenal are happy at least," she says, motioning at them with a hoof.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 01:39:58 am
Starkey takes his seat gratefully.

"Thank you, ma'am."

"When I heard what had happened to Bokbon and Nanges, I was... angry. Not just that one of our own had been killed - though I'll admit, that was very much on my mind. I was angry that a pony in a position of power would us it to... to murder two ponies over something that at the time seemed so frivolous. But you... you're so very different from the nobility back there. I should have known you never would have ordered something like that."

"I... I want you to know that I'm sorry, for everything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 01:51:06 am
"I, uh, wow. I didn't...I don't. I don't know what to say to that Commander."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 01:56:33 am
"There was a time when I called you my friend, Miss Charity. I... I'd like it if I could again, if that's alright with you..."

 - - - - - -

Khenal and Friesden look up to find Otik standing over them, grinning.

"That looks fun. Room f'r one more down there?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 02:02:44 am
"Hey mum!" Friesden says as she tears her mouth away from Khenal's and drags Otik into the hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 02:05:12 am
"Starkey, I. I would like that as well. But, buck, half the reason I promoted Captain Carrot and gave him the squad that became my guard was because, I was afraid that you would try and take over again. I want to believe you're being honest with me right now, and you sound sincere, but I don't know if I can really trust you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 02:08:13 am
I don't quite process what Otik said until after Friesden breaks the kiss and brings her into a group hug.  Once I do, however, I can only stammer a greeting.

"Um... heya, Otik."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 02:21:31 am
"I... I don't know what else to say to you, other than I'm sorry."

Starkey hangs his head.

 - - - - - -

Otik plants a kiss on each of their cheeks.

"Heya, birthday boy. Enjoyin' yer party?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 02:24:30 am
"Um... yes, actually.  How are you feeling?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 02:27:05 am
Friesden just beams at Khenal's happiness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 02:30:55 am
Charity scans Starkey, looking at his face, his posture, looking for any tell that he's not being honest. She finds nothing. Nothing but sincerity and a desire to repair a friendship long ago tattered.

"...Starkey, I believe you. I believe you are truly sorry. And for what it's worth, I forgive you. I hope that we can be friends again, I've missed you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 02:34:17 am
Starkey looks up, meeting her eyes and smiling warmly.

"Thank you, I... I've missed you too."

He gets up, moving to hug her, but then shrinks back, deciding it's probably a bit too soon for that.

 - - - - - -

"Better. A lot better, now that I'm up an' about."

She leans in to nuzzle Friesden.

"An' especially now that I heard my little filly's gettin' married!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 02:36:00 am
Friesden squees and returns the nuzzle. "I'm just so happy, I think I might burst! A father and mother who love me, a sister and a brother, and Khenal! I don't think I could want for more!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 02:47:48 am
Otik quirks an eyebrow.

"Brother?"

Otik breaks off the hug, and in an astounding feat of acrobatics, twists around to put her ear to her own belly while hovering in the air.

"Friesden... do ye know somethin' I dun'?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 02:48:48 am
"No!" says Friesden playfully. "Heiro's my brother, he said so!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 02:50:19 am
The combination of Otik's confusion and Friesden's happiness is too much for me, and I start to laugh.

'Truly the best birthday ever.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 02:52:40 am
"Oh... oooh... y'mean that nice guard buck I see ye talkin' to all th' time?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 02:53:35 am
"MUM! He's my brother, don't think about him like that!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 02:54:03 am
Charity sees that Starkey was about to hug her, but was relieved when he did not. 'Too soon for that.'

"So, my friend, what's new in your life? I've heard a lot of rumors about you and Friesden, and I've heard her call you and Otik, her father and mother. What's going on there? If that's not to personal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 02:58:23 am
Forgefire decided to stoke the fire of conversation a bit, it was a bit awkward just standing there silently, "So how old is...Kris? Young? I admit that I'd be surprised to see a filly hanging around in this fort." Given the nature of this establishment, he knew it wasn't the most appealing place to spend ones time growing up. However, surely having a loving family can make most any situation tolerable...at least more so than being alone, anyway.

((Gonna be my last post for tonight. Got work in the morning.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 03:00:39 am
"It's not too personal at all. I'm proud to call her my daughter. She asked us both, just after she recovered, and we said yes. After hearing what that... horrible stallion did to her, I think she deserves a real, loving family."

 - - - - - -

"Oh Fri, How crude! I swear, you have th' dirtiest thoughts some times."

Otik chuckles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 03:06:59 am
Friesden blushes redder than a tomato, and hides her head in Khenal's wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 03:07:23 am
Falcata tears her eyes away from Khenal, Friesden and Otik as Forgefire speaks up again.

"Oh, uh, she's almost five.  The two of us have been here since she was just under a year old.  She'll be a mare before I know it."  She lets out a nervous chuckle and fights back a frown.  He certainly didn't mean anything by the last statement, and she wasn't going to volunteer anything.  "And no, not a lot of foals around Glitterglen.  She has a few friends close to her age though."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 03:14:11 am
I continue chuckling as Friesden tries to hide her face, and look Otik in the eyes.

"I've no idea where she gets it from, heh."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 03:17:19 am
"It's all from mum," comes Friesden's muffled voice, with even more happiness in her voice if that could be believed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 03:34:45 am
Otik turns to watch Starkey and Charity chatting off in a corner.

"Looks like Stars managed t'patch things up with th' countess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 03:41:47 am
Friesden raises her head out of Khenal's wings in surprise, and turns to the two. "What do you mean? Did the duchess not like dad? Why? She seemed nice to me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 03:45:01 am
"They had a... misunderstanding a while ago, and haven't talked to eachother about it until now.  I'm glad they finally could talk.  Your party helped them be friends again, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 03:47:41 am
"My party? Oh, yes. No, this is your party," Friesden says, and without another word dives back into Khenal's wings.

"What?" comes her muffled voice. "It's nice and comfy and warm and cuddly in here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 03:48:53 am
"Really? Can I come in an' see?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 03:49:30 am
"There's plenty of room!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 03:53:35 am
Otik sqeezes under Khenal's wings next to Friesden.

"Yer right, hun... It's awfully warm an' cuddly in here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 03:55:12 am
I squirm a bit as Friesden and Otik squeeze under my wings, a bit ticklish.

"Hehe, careful, that tickles, hah!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 03:56:26 am
"Are dad's wings like this? Are my wings like this? This is nice!" Friesden begins to giggle helplessly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 04:00:19 am
"Oh, aye, jus' let me tell ye what yer dad can do with those wings o' his..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 04:03:09 am
"Oooh, are they as good as Khenal's?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 04:09:58 am
"Oh, and so much more! Yer coltfriend here could stnad to learn a few things from yer dad."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 04:18:57 am
Friesden doesn't quite know what to say, so just decides to rest in the warmth of Khenal's wings. He was her shield and protector.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 04:34:28 am
Otik relaxes next to Friesden, snuggling up to them both a little.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 04:36:28 am
"I...I kind of wish this could go on forever...I love you two...thank you for all you've done for me. I don't know if I'd be here without you two. Or my brother...even if he is still away from me," Friesden says in a quiet voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 02:27:16 pm
I reach under my wing to gently nuzzle Friesden.

"You'll see him again, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 02:34:32 pm
"I...I want to believe that. But..." She stops, and shakes her head a little. "This is your day. For you, not me. You don't need to worry about me. I'll be okay!" As if to prove it, she kisses Khenal again, wrapping her forelegs around his neck to keep him there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 03:09:16 pm
I gladly stay to reciprocate the kiss, gently caressing Friesden with the wing she's trying to hide under.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 13, 2012, 04:38:57 pm
After a long time of searching, Kris finally finds Lilac, hidden behind some barrels, peering over at the group surround Khenal.
"...hmph...look at me, i'm Khenal, and- AHHH! Kris, don't scare me like that!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 05:04:29 pm
Kris grins, happy to get the jump on Lilac for once.  She chuckles.  "Sorry, Lilac.  What are you doing hiding back here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 13, 2012, 05:10:28 pm
"Look at those idiots...laughing and having fun...IT'S NOT FAIR!"
Lilac begins to cry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 05:31:45 pm
Kris raises an eyebrow and places a hoof on Lilac's shoulder.  "Having fun?  Not fair?  But... Lilac, what's the matter?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 13, 2012, 05:38:06 pm
"...they don't care about me, in fact, they wouldn't care even if I just ran away!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 05:51:46 pm
"Don't care about you?"  Concern washes over Kris' face.  "Now come on, you know that's not true!  Why would you think that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 13, 2012, 05:55:35 pm
"Because! Otik never talks to me anymore, Friesden only came to me because there was a party, and nopony cares about the filly with no mommy or daddy! That settles it, i'm running away!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 06:34:02 pm
"Lilac... none of that's true!  Miss Otik and Miss Friesden love you."  The worry on her face grows.  "And besides, I care about you.  Now come on, let's go talk to Miss Friesden and Miss Otik, you'll see they care about you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 13, 2012, 06:51:25 pm
"No! I...you don't understand...nopony does..." Lilac tears away from Kris and runs off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 08:58:17 pm
Otik takes a step back, leting the two ponies share their moment in peace.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 09:00:45 pm
Friesden eventually breaks the kiss, the smile now full on her face.

"We should find Lilac. She's the best sister I could have hoped for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 13, 2012, 09:04:12 pm
Lilac runs outside, Kris chasing her all the way there. Lilac suddenly stops as she approaches the jungle and turns around to face Kris.
"I'm going to be a diomedian."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 09:05:38 pm
I smile at Friesden before slowly standing.

"Do you know where she might be?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 09:06:33 pm
"It's not too personal at all. I'm proud to call her my daughter. She asked us both, just after she recovered, and we said yes. After hearing what that... horrible stallion did to her, I think she deserves a real, loving family."

"Well, I'm sure you and Otik can be that for her. But uh, I've heard you adopted Lilac Joker as well. Any plans for you and Otik to tie the knot? Maybe have a few foals of your own?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 09:07:43 pm
Kris stumbles to a halt at the exit.  Ever since she followed Lilac out here last time, she felt uneasy even getting close to the exit.  But Lilac didn't stop, and so she charged after her.  When she was convinced she'd be able to run no further, Lilac stops and turns to her.

"I'm going to be a diomedian."

Kris pants and shakes her head.

"Wh-what... are you... talking about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 09:09:09 pm
Friesden raises her head from Khenal's wings almost regretfully, and takes a look around.

"No...but she must have been here to help mum and dad set up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 13, 2012, 09:10:03 pm
"If nopony cares about me here, then there's no reason to stay here. I'm gonna be a diomedian, and I'll be the best warrior ever! Don't try to stop me."
Lilac turns and prepares to run off into the jungle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 13, 2012, 09:11:41 pm
"Lets ask them, then.  I think Starkey is still talking with Charity, and Otik can't have gotten far either."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 13, 2012, 09:12:46 pm
Friesden giggles, and turns Khenal's head to Otik. "She's still here, silly!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 09:12:55 pm
"I care... about you... Lilac," she continues between pants.  She takes a deep breath to level her breathing.  Why did Lilac have to be in so much better shape than her?.  She takes a step toward her.  "Come on, let's go inside..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 09:13:33 pm
"Oh, aye, We've finally decided to marry."

Starkey blushes just a bit.

"I-It's a funny thing, actually. I suppose Otik felt I was moving things... a little too slowly, so..."

The glow on his cheeks intensifies.

"She proposed to me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 13, 2012, 09:15:17 pm
"Goodbye Kris. Do yourself a favor, and just forget me."
And with that, Lilac Joker disappears into the jungle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 09:21:55 pm
Kris can feel her heart begin to race.  Uh-uh.  No ma'am.  She was not going back into those woods again.  She fidgets impatiently as Lilca begins to disappear from view.  What was she doing?  She couldn't just let Lilac run off alone!

She takes a few uneasy steps and breaks into a trot as she heads into the woods.  Lilac was getting harder and harder to see, and already she could feel panic beginning to grip her.  What if there was another tentacle pony here, waiting for them?  She slows to a stop and hangs her head.  No... she couldn't do this alone.  She would waste some time, but if all of the grown ups came help they could find Lilac.

She turns and breaks into a gallop for the fortress.  Everypony would still be in the dining hall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 09:27:16 pm
"Well congratulations are in order I guess. I hope your lives together are long and fruitful. Perhaps you and Otik, could come over and visit with me and Cryptson, sometime. He won't say so, but he's missed hanging out with you. We could sit and talk, play some cards, whatever you'd like."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 09:30:14 pm
"Aye, I think I'd like that."

He clears his throat.

"There are... a few more things I'd like to ask of you, if it's not too much."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 09:36:12 pm
"Certainly, Commander, what else do you wish to ask me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 09:40:15 pm
"Well, you know now how I feel about Lilac and Friesden. As far as Otik and I are concerned, they're already our children. But do you think that, after the wedding, you could... make it official?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 09:47:04 pm
"Hmm, well, certainly, I could do that. A few forms, some signatures, a letter to the princess, and I could have it officially in the records at the capital. If you feel it's necessary, as far as we are from everything, I hardly think it matters, but I'd be happy to help you with it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 09:56:04 pm
"Thank you. That means... a lot to me."

Okay, now for the hard part.

"Now there's... something else. You heard what happened to Otik?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 10:02:29 pm
"No Starkey I can't say that I know what you're referring to. Has something happened to her?" Charity looks over to were she saw Otik earlier.

'She seemed okay to me.' she thinks to herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 10:19:00 pm
Falcata exchanges a few more pleasantries with Forgefire before he eventually wanders off to his own devices.  As she sits, her mind drifts back to what Friesden said.  Did she really think she and Heiro would make a good couple?  She looks at him out of the corner of her eye before letting her eyes dart away again.

That... had never crossed her mind.  After what happened to Estoc, she hadn't exactly been looking to be in a relationship.

Heiro was a nice pony, but... she barely knew him... and some of the things she did know were a little worrisome.  He seemed to like Kris a lot, but... well, she just didn't think she was ready for another relationship.  Not yet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 10:22:51 pm
"There was... an incident in the hospital. She very nearly bled out in front of me, and we're still not sure why."

"When I saw her lying like that, slipping away... I panicked. The love of my life was dying brfore my eyes, and I didn't know what to do, and that terrified me more than anything else I've ever seen."

"There's just... so much we have left to do together, and I'd like the time to do that. To be with her, just the two of us, for a little while, in case..."

He pauses, then continues.

"I'd like to ask if you would give the two of us some time away from the job. Not permanently, mind you. Even just a month would suffice. Is... is that acceptable?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 13, 2012, 10:25:47 pm
Heiro looks at Falcata... She had let him hug her but... Estoc obviously still was a big part of her. The last thing he wants is to run her off, he cares for her, far Kris...

'you do make a cute couple you know.'

'You think so sis?'

'I know so, go ahead, sit by her, she may not have feelings for you, but you'll never find out if you just look.'

Heiro moves over and sits right next to Falcata, not touching her, but closer than normal. 'I hope you're right sis'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 13, 2012, 10:32:40 pm
"Starkey, you've been the Commander of the militia here for 6 years. In that time, I don't think you've taken a single day off. Even when your not scheduled to train you spend time working out with the pumps, or keeping watch, or maintaining the armory. I think you've only ever stopped working to eat, drink, or sleep. You've earned a vacation, you and Otik both. But well, it's nearly summer, and you know that's when the Diomedians are most active, I ask you to stay on, until autumn, then, you can have your vacation, is that fair?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 13, 2012, 10:34:12 pm
"That's... actually a better answer than I was expecting. Thank you, again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 11:09:50 pm
Falcata tenses imperceptibly as Heiro sits near her, clearly closer than was strictly normal and within her comfort zone.  She couldn't help but wonder what he thought about what Friesden said.  If his current actions were any indicator, he wasn't so averse to the idea.

She decides not to move away.  She didn't want to upset him, especially if she was reading into this more than there was.  He was a nice pony... but... she hoped Friesden didn't push the idea.  Not yet...  Maybe some day.  But not yet...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 13, 2012, 11:13:56 pm
"S-so... umm, how has Kris been doing? I-I haven't been able to see her as much as I like. U-umm you don't mind me being friends with her do you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 13, 2012, 11:28:01 pm
After finishing his short conversings, Forge headed back off towards the spread of food. He had been distracted before by the sugary-sweet antics of Friesden but she seemed to be occupied with other matters at the moment.

A cupcake sounds good right about now, he thought.

Eyeing the plate in question, his ears fell back as he saw they had all already been taken.

N'aww, man...

Might as well settle for something else. What else might tickle his fancy here?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 11:28:30 pm
Sisters above, clearly he was thinking about it too.  Well, best to answer his question anyway.

"Oh, um, she's doing fine.  She's been spending a little time with Doctor Bubbles when he has it to spare.  He seems to think she has a real talent for healing magic.  I suppose she must," she replies with a nervous chuckle. 

But why would Heiro think she minded if he was friends with her?
  "And... no, of course I don't mind if you're friends... she doesn't have many here in Glitterglen."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 13, 2012, 11:42:12 pm
Heiro looks over at Falcata. "He didn't mean anything by it. You know that right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 13, 2012, 11:47:08 pm
She raises an eyebrow and looks over to Heiro, finding her face uncomfortably close.

"Uh, who didn't mean what now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 13, 2012, 11:53:30 pm
"Oh, I-I'm sorry I'm so used to talking to Midnight I forget that others cant see into my head. Forgefire, He didn't mean anything when he said that he didn't expect to  see a filly around the fort. You did the right thing bringing Kris here, never doubt that."

Hero looks into Falcata's eyes as he says this, then blushes and looks down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 14, 2012, 12:01:55 am
Falcata does the same, looking away as Heiro blushes.

"Oh... I..."  She clears her throat.  "That's... something I've questioned more times than I care to remember.  I think... I think you're right.  I don't know how she would have felt living in Coupledye with the rest of my family, but I don't think I could have managed without her."  She taps her temple with a hoof and adds, "Well, you saw the tower... heard what Estoc said..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 12:11:23 am
"Y-yes... I do..." Heiro moves closer, trying to comfort Falcata with his presence

"I... I wouldn't want to lose you... I remember what I saw and... well... just remember, you aren't alone anymore. But, you don't have to worry about Kris anymore. She has friends, and family."

Heiro looks at Falcata, as if waiting for permission for something.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 14, 2012, 02:08:08 am
Falcata listens to Heiro and tries to think of something to say.  She wasn't sure what his expression meant...

Her train of thought was broken by Kris bolting into the room and running up to her and Heiro.


"Mom!  Come quick!  Lilac... she-she ran off into he woods!  She said she was going to become a diomedian!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 02:13:33 am
"WHAT! Lilac! What should I do... We need to get a search party going!"

Heiro looks around frantically finally seeing Charity. running over to her he yells, "D-duchess it's Lilac, she ran off into the woods, all by herself!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 14, 2012, 02:13:42 am
I cough into my hoof, a little embarrassed at not noticing Otik.

"Well, um... I was pleasantly distracted.  Anyway, Otik, have you seen Lilac?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 02:20:13 am
Friesden gives him a peck on the cheek as he mentions the distraction, and smiles.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 14, 2012, 02:21:21 am
"What, Lilac? You mean Lilac Joker?! Carrot's little filly's gone off in the woods alone! Are you sure, Heiro?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 14, 2012, 02:22:51 am
Starkey rises from his seat across from Charity.

"She what!? When? What direction? The jungle is crawling with Diomedians, we need to find her now! OTIK!"

Otik pokes her head from under Khenal's wings.

"Aye?"


"Lilac's gone into the jungle again. We need to go after her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 02:23:08 am
"Kris just came in and told me! She said Lilac said something about becoming a diomedian! We need to form a search party NOW!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 02:25:10 am
"Wait, what?!" Friesden shouts in horror. The jungle held only bad memories for her...and Lilac was in there...alone! She began to hyperventilate. Not Lilac. Not her sister. Better it be Friesden than Lilac!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 14, 2012, 02:25:37 am
"All right, party's over!" Charity stands.

"Khenal! Falcata! Osal! Madush! Get over here! We've got an emergency!" she yells into the crowd.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 14, 2012, 02:27:05 am
After deciding to sample a bit of stew, Forge dropped the spoon as he saw the sudden commotion developing in the dining hall.

What's going on? The party is canceled?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 14, 2012, 02:27:29 am
I give Friesden a quick kiss before rushing to Charity to hear her plan, grabbing my new spear along the way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 14, 2012, 02:30:32 am
Falcata is already on the way over, Kris close behind.  "This is bad..." she whispers under her breath.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 14, 2012, 02:30:59 am
Otik falls into step beside Khenal. She hadn't been summoned, but this is her daughter, and Sisters damn her if she wasn't going to be there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 02:32:10 am
Friesden calms herself at the kiss, and tries to follow behind him. If...if she could help them find Lilac...it was all her fault. Maybe if she hadn't had the party, somepony would have stopped her...

As her thoughts grow darker, her stride slackens and her movement slows.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 14, 2012, 02:34:09 am
"TAKE ME!" Lilac shouts as she's inevitably ambushed by diomedian grunts.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 02:34:19 am
Heiro looks around at the party and notices Friesden. "Hey little sis, cheer up, we'll find Lilac, you'll see."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 14, 2012, 02:35:07 am
Seemed to be a lot going on...where was everypony going? Was the fort on fire? An attack?

"Umm..."

Forgefire decided that he would follow at a distance, to see where everypony was headed. Maybe it didn't concern him. Or maybe, there was some emergency that he could help with in some way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 02:35:32 am
"'t's all my fault. I should have done better. I'm such an idiot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 02:38:31 am
"Your fault? You didn't push her out the door, you are blameless in this."

Heiro hugs his little sis "Come on sis, this isn't your fault at all"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 14, 2012, 02:40:21 am
Madush and Osal arrive and then Charity begins to speak.

"Alright, we've got a filly on her own in the jungle. Time is of the essence and we've got to hurry. Captain Otik."

She looks Otik dead in the eyes. "You've got to rally your skyguard and search from above. Madush, Osal you go with them."

She turns to the Commander, "Starkey, use the militia to begin combing the surface in whatever direction, Kris says she went. Keep at least one magic user in each group tell them to send up green sparks if they find her, red if they run into trouble."

She turns to her two most trusted friends, "Falcata, Khenal, we're going to help the ground search. Yes, I'm coming, no I won't hear any arguments, stay with me. Move OUT!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 14, 2012, 02:42:00 am
"Yes ma'am," Falcata answers, saluting the duchess and following the formation out of the dining hall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 14, 2012, 02:44:24 am
"Yes Ma'am!"

I salute Charity and follow her .
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 14, 2012, 02:44:39 am
"Aye, ma'am."

Starkey beginds calling out names, and a steady stream of militia ponies begin to file out of the crowd.

"Down to the armory, lads! Get your gear set and head for the surface, move, move, move!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 02:45:34 am
"No. It is. This was all supposed to make Khenal happy...why can't I do something right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 02:50:00 am
"Khenal loved it! It's not your fault that Lilac ran off. I told you that this was my first party right? Well I don't think it could have been better, I even might have gotten a bit closer to Falcata because of your party. You did everything you could."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 02:53:18 am
"Really? I... I just want...Can...can we just stay like this? I don't want to get in Khenal's way..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 02:56:20 am
"Of course we can, we can stay here as long as you want... just, smile a little huh? for me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 02:57:46 am
Friesden smiles a little. "You...you're the best big brother ever."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 14, 2012, 03:01:06 am
As they begin to leave the room, Charity turns to Heiro, who she is unhappy to see chatting with Friesden. "Colt! Are you going to just sit around, or are you going to go tell Isos, what's going on. We need everypony on this. Go!"

Charity mumbles under her breath. "We aren't going to lose her. I owe Carrot that much at least."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 03:03:01 am
"Can...Duchess, can I help?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 03:05:30 am
Heiro lets go of Friesden for a moment and turns on Charity, his voice could give you frostbite. "No I will not go and tell Isos. My little sister needs me. I will not be leaving her. Do you understand me." he gives her a glare "Duchess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 03:08:23 am
"No...Heiro, we've got to help. We need to save Lilac...then I can repay my debt to her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 14, 2012, 03:10:55 am
"Friesden... Yes, of course, you can help. Go with either your mother or your father, and do what they say."

Then Heiro speaks back.

"I'm giving you an order! Go inform your Captain, NOW!" Charity's face is contorted with fury.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 14, 2012, 03:14:21 am
Starkey overhears the exchange.

"Come along, Friesden. You can stay with me for now."

As he approache Friesden, he leans in to whisper to Hiero.

'I appreciate your concern for her, I really do, but she'll be alright with me. Please just do as the Countess says.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 03:15:04 am
"NO. I told you. I will not leave my sisters side. If she is going to help, then I will go with her. And you will let me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 03:16:10 am
"Please, Heiro, just do as she says!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 14, 2012, 03:19:06 am
"I don't have time for this." Charity turns away from them heading toward the door.

 "Enjoy tonight Heiro, because if you don't get your act together right now, it's last one you'll have a free pony for a long time."

Charity gathers her friends and heads for the surface to begin the search.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 03:20:29 am
"Yes sis... take care of yourself alright?"

Heiro turns to Charity his entire demeanor changed, and his voice returning to normal. "I'll go and inform Isos of our current situation now" he throws a salute and runs off to inform his captain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 14, 2012, 03:23:37 am
Falcata cringes internally as she witnesses the exchange.  Sorry Heiro, after that... there was a lot of making up with the duchess before she'd even consider asking for a promotion on his behalf.

She tries to push the thought aside as she follows Charity up to the surface.  Bad as that was, it paled in insignificance to finding Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 03:26:07 am
Friesden hurries to catch up to the Duchess, contrition writ large on her face. "Please, duchess, forgive him! He didn't mean any harm! Please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 14, 2012, 03:27:29 am
As Hiero turns to leave, Starkey stops him just outside the door.

"Again lad, thank you for being there for my daughter. Not many ponies are so kind to her. But... neither of us wants to see you hauled off in chains over it, understand?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 03:33:50 am
"I would burn this entire fort to the ground for my family. A little jail time is nothing, I've dealt with much worse. Thanks for worrying for me, but I would do the same again."

He looks Starkey directly in the eyes, "No-one will be allowed to harm my family, or cause them to come to harm. I will not lose another part of my family. Even if it would kill me. I. will. not. Lose. another. Understand?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 14, 2012, 03:34:14 am
Charity sighs and looks at Friesden, but doesn't stop walking, "Don't worry dear, he said he'd do what I asked now. I won't have him locked him. I was mostly buffing anyway. Isos speaks rather highly of him, she wouldn't want him locked up for long. Still he needs to work on his priorities, one shouldn't ignore an order, especially with your sister's life on the line."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 03:36:56 am
"He's my brother...though I haven't done anything to deserve it. I...I felt despair at my sister's disappearance. I needed Khenal...but my sister needed Him more."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 14, 2012, 03:39:43 am
"Aye, more than you know."

Starkey turns to follow the countess, then pauses.

"You know what? After you finish that, I want you topside with my party. I think it would help calm her nerves, but... Don't tell Isos that, aye? Just say I need you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 14, 2012, 03:43:54 am
"Sir!" Heiro salutes Starkey, real admiration in his eyes. "I'll be there as soon as I can!" He runs as fast as he can to report to Isos.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 14, 2012, 03:46:55 am
Charity looks to Friesden. "Your..Your brother."

'Her family is getting more complicated all the time.'

"Yes, I guess that explains his behavior. It doesn't excuse it. But it explains it. But don't despair Friesden. We can find your sister yet, and your going to help us right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 03:53:08 am
"Yes. We're going to find her, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 14, 2012, 03:54:01 am
"I hope so Friesden. I really hope so...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 14, 2012, 04:00:25 am
Starkey arrives on the surface to find the militia already gathered there, with Otik busy dividing her pegasi into smaller wings. He looks over the ponies in his own squad. Nine ponies. Plus himself, Hiero, and Friesden, that made twelve. He sets to work dividing them up into three groups of four, making sure to keep Tarik and Morul seperate from each other as well as himself and Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 14, 2012, 04:10:01 am
Friesden shies away when she sees Tarik and Morul, trying to hide her head in her father's wings
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 15, 2012, 12:42:25 am
Starkey Rests a wing across Friesden's back. The other two teams file out the front gate, leaving Starkey, Friesden, and another militiapony she does not recognize. As they leave, he looks back towards Friesden.

"So... 'big brother', eh?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 15, 2012, 12:44:19 am
"Yes," comes Friesden's voice, muffled by Starkey's wing. "He's my brother. He said so himself."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 12:48:51 am
Heiro walks up to the two. "I went and told Isos about the situation. The guard should bee here soon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 15, 2012, 12:51:13 am
Friesden withdraws her head from Starkey's wing and smiles as Heiro, gratitude in her eyes. "Thank you, brother." Before he can object (if he even would) she gives him a quick hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 12:52:21 am
Heiro returns the hug. "Hey little sis. how you holding up?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 15, 2012, 12:53:27 am
"I... I'll be alright when we find Lilac. We'll do it with you. I know it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 15, 2012, 12:53:55 am
Starkey watches the two with amusement.

"Well if that's everything, we should head out now. Sisters willing, she hasn't gotten far."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 12:54:12 am
Charity walks up Starkey, "Commander, myself and my two guard here." She gestures to Falcata and Khenal, "are going to be accompanying your stallions in the ground search. From this point on however, you are in charge. Awaiting instructions, sir."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 15, 2012, 12:58:46 am
Friesden turns to Khenal, her eyes mournful, but turns back to Heiro. "I...I don't think I should be working with Khenal... I don't want to distract him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 15, 2012, 01:01:51 am
He quirks an eyebrow at this - that's a lot of trust to be putting in somepony whom you only hours ago believed might cut your throat in your sleep - but decides it's best not to question.

"Aye, ma'am. Right this way."

The party heads out the gates to where the others have gathered. Starkey points each team in a different direction. The first will head north, another will go south, while he will take his own team west, straight out the gate: he figured if Lilac didn't have any particular place to go, it was more likely she just headed straight on out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 01:11:33 am
"I doubt you'd distract him. But if you're sure then why don't we ask your father what he thinks you can do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 15, 2012, 01:19:17 am
"N-no, if you think I'll be okay, I believe you. You're my brother."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 01:33:46 am
Charity could see Starkey's surprise at her giving command to him, and she understood his confusion. Why would she follow orders from a pony she wouldn't have been surprised to find trying to cut her throat only the day before? In truth she didn't feel 100% comfortable about it. But with Falcata and Khenal at her side she was much more sure of her safety.

Plus, she had seen that emotion on Starkey's face when he heard Lilac was missing.She was certain it was no act. He was clearly more worried about helping Lilac than anything else at the moment, and she knew he couldn't bluff. Finally, he had much more experience in command of ponies like this; for all her power she was a glorified bureaucrat.

Despite her reservations, she knew trusting him was the best move if they wanted to find Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 01:44:31 am
Under Starkey's Command the ponies began their search. Otik and her pegasi, took to the air and searched from above for any sign of the filly.

Meanwhile, the ground based ponies split into small groups and began to search the jungles for any sign of her.

After about an hour of searching, with no sign of her, the group made up of Charity, Falcata, and Khenal spotted something moving ahead of them. But it was no little filly, it was much to big for that.

Out of the woods in front of them, came four Diomedians, lightly armoured but branishing deadly weapons. A Tetacle pony with a knife, two Keshis one with an axe and one with an iron scourage, and a darkbolt with a crossbow.

The Tentacle pony speaks, "Horrorshow smot hear droogs. We got ourself quite the lovet. That's the noble soomka herself, if I ain't mistaken."


((Translation: "Look here friends. We've got ourselves quite the catch. That's the noble bitch herself, if I'm not mistaken."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 15, 2012, 02:03:40 am
Falcata scowls at the sight of the approaching diomedians and shouts at the top of her lungs, "Ambush!"

She whips her hammer from its sling, brings it up to a ready position and looks back to Charity.  "Get back!"

As she moves forward and begins to evaluate the enemies ahead of them, she cuts her eyes to Khenal.  "Take the darkbolt, I'll keep these busy," she mutters to him.

Khenal nods and moves to square off with the darkbolt, who raises his crossbow and takes aim.  A poorly aimed shot is quickly dodged, and Khenal lashes out with his spear.  The blow grazes the diomedian's muzzle, rewarding Khenal with a small spurt of blood and a shouted curse from his foe.  The darkbolt leaps into the air and frantically fishes for a bolt.  Khenal gives chase.

The keshis move to circle Falcata.  She deflects the axe blow with a parry from her hammer and dodges a strike from the scourge.  A retaliatory swing of her hammer catches the axe keshi against the head with a satisfying crack, and he goes down hard.  Falcata lets out a surprised grunt as another scourge strike rakes against her barding, gouging scratches into it and drawing blood from a deep scratch against her leg.

She backs away and reevaluates the scene.  One down...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 02:18:26 am
Charity backs away from the brawl. She channels her magic to prepare to send up the red sparks which signal trouble when a cold steel knife is pressed to her neck.

"I wouldn't do that if was you. Unless you want to lose your pretty malenky gulliver."


((I wouldn't do that if was you. Unless you want to lose your pretty little head.))

A smarmy tentacled pony whispers into her ear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 02:33:23 am
Heiro runs forward, after hearing Falcata's yell he had abandoned his group and hauled flank towards it, bursting through the forest, he finally comes across the others.

that a tentacle pony had taken Charity hostage he draws his axe 'Alright sis, let's do this'

He slams into the side of Charity's attacker sending it reeling back, the knife falling away from Charity's neck.

"You OK Dutchess? I will deal with this one."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 02:39:27 am
"I'm okay, thank you Heiro, you saved me."

The Diomedian pulls himself to his hooves.

"You bloody bastard. I'll kill you first, then the noble bitch." he yells before rushing Heiro, knife held with his magic and at the ready.


((For those who prefer your Diomedians to speak Nadsat what he actually said was,

"You krovvier bratchny. I'll oobivat you first, then the noble soomka."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 15, 2012, 03:08:33 am
Falcata takes a swing at the scourge wielding pony and grimaces as her strike is caught up in the straps of the scourge and goes wide.  The keshi sneers and leaps upon her as their weapons tangle together.  She cries out in surprise and braces for the impact, collapsing under her foe's weight as she fails to sidestep it.

The remaining tentacle pony circles the two and tries to find an opportunity to jab his knife into Falcata's now-exposed underside, but pauses as the darkbolt crashes to the ground next to him in a heap.  Khenal lands just to the side and readies his spear, prompting the tentacle pony to change targets.

With a frustrated shout, Falcata kicks the scourge pony away and grabs for her weapon.  This keshi was better than she expected... she didn't have much chance to practice against weapons like this...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 03:30:21 am
"No, you wont." Heiro's brings his axe around, knocking the knife to the side, as he brings his body around and kicks out at the Tentacle pony's legs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 03:34:18 am
As the tentacle pony hits the ground with a thud, he has lost his grip on his knife. His tentacle fails wildly as he uses his magic to try and push Heiro back with a quick blast of sickly green energy, before scrambling to get back up and grab his knife.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 03:38:33 am
The strange blast staggers Heiro, as he regains his footing he charges forward bringing his axe around in a deadly arc.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 03:41:07 am
The Tentacle pony ducks the wild swing and attempts to end the fight quickly, bringing his knife up and under Heiro's peytral to stab for his vitals.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 03:47:15 am
Heiro jumps to the side, and as soon as his hooves touch the ground he pounces back at the tentacle pony leading with his axe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 03:55:44 am
The tentacle pony dodge the axe strike, by rolling to the side, his knife held close to himself.

Charity is too panicked to do much of anything. This isn't like with the fight with Couth, that time they'd started it, she'd had time to prepare mentally, but this, she was still too stunned to move.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 03:59:03 am
Heiro follows the tentacle ponies roll, bringing his axe around in an upward slash at it's body.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 04:12:21 am
The tentacle pony tries to move himself backwards away from the strike but is too slow. The upward swing cuts into his chin and mouth, a wound that he would probably live through, but was certainly enough to dissuade him from further hostilities, against this particular pony.

"Damn you're good. At least I can get your pretty little ruler, before I go. Consider it a parting gift."

He makes a gallop around to the right and around toward Charity, his weapon thirsty for blood. A warcry on his lips. "For Discord," he cries.


(("Damn you're dobby. At least I can get your pretty malenky ruler, before I itty. Consider it a parting gift."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 04:15:32 am
Heiro runs forward, placing himself between the Tentacle pony and Charity, However in his rush his axe drops out of the way, leaving him momentarily defenseless.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 04:21:41 am
The tentacle pony sees an opening in Heiro's defenses, his steel knife strikes at Heiro's body, maneuvering around his peytral and punching straight through his bronze mail shirt. The knife goes in deep and the Diomedian twists the blade, cutting and tearing flesh, causing Heiro immense pain.

"That hurts don't it, friend."


(("That hurts don't it, droog."))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 15, 2012, 04:36:45 am
Heiro yells out as the blade sinks into his flesh, the pain making him drop his axe. He abandons it instead rushing into the Tentacle pony slamming him into the ground. Heiro raises a hoof and stomps the tentacle pony's head, with a resounding crunch the head caves in killing the tentacle pony instantly.

Heiro turns and staggers over to Charity, he trows a wobbly salute, "C-corpral Heiro ma'am.... r-reporting for duty..." With those words Heiro collapses, the blood loss finally taking it's toll.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 15, 2012, 04:49:33 am
Charity stands slack jawed for a moment. 'Heiro, just saved my life.'

Then Heiro collapses in front of her. She snaps back to her senses. First she looks to Falcata, 'she's already dealt with two and the third is under control.' to the sky she sees Khenal, and the darkbolt, 'No doubt who'll win that.'

'I need to help Heiro.'

She goes over to him, and examines his wound. The knife cut deep and was pulled free in the wrestling. He's losing blood fast. "Damn it." Suddenly Charity remembers the signal, and blasts red sparks into the sky, 'somepony will see and come to help,'

But without waiting for help Charity's horn glows and a beige light forms over the wound creating a sort of magical bandage. "Hold on Heiro, help's coming."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 15, 2012, 05:47:39 am
Sadly, while the one group of diomedians were killed, Lilac was carried off by another diomedian far away from the fighting. Lilac has been lost.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 15, 2012, 01:53:59 pm
Falcata and Khenal can hear combat behind them, but they can only chance a glance to see Heiro battling the tentacle pony.  Another whip of the scourge rakes across her armor, tearing more gouges into her peytral and drawing more blood from superficial scratches.  She snorts in pain and finally sees the opening she'd been waiting for.  With a violet flash from her horn, the keshi is caught in a stunning blast of magic.

The diomedian tries to jump to the side just as the blast hits, landing uncertainly on his hooves and falling over as they fall numb for a moment.  Falcata siezes the moment and brings her hammer down, missing his head as he struggles to regain his footing but catching him squarely on the shoulders.  Finally the keshi goes down, his spine smashed by the shattering strike.

Falcata turns to find Khenal finishing his duel with the tentacle pony, dodging a poorly aimed knife jab and returning in kind with his spear.  The unnaturally sharp adamantine tip effortlessly slides through the pony's ramshackle armor and ribs, shredding his lungs with a single precise stab.  Khenal withdraws the spear and brings the shaft around to crack the pony against the head.  With the fight now gone from his body, the tentacle pony goes down with a choking wheeze and lay still.

Both turn to find that the battle behind them has ended.  Charity was standing over the motionless body of Heiro, not far from the mangled remains of yet another tentacle pony.


"Lady Charity, are you..."  She notices the blood leaking from Heiro.  "Oh, no... Corporal Heiro..."

Khenal examines Heiro and frowns.  "He's lost a lot of blood, we need to get him back quick.  Fly him back maybe..."

Falcata nods gravely.  "We haven't found Lilac yet, but he can't wait."  She looks to Charity.  "Orders, ma'am?  Where is Captain Starkey?  Maybe one of the militia can take him back while we keep looking..."

((Hope I'm not going too out of character for Khenal here.  I'll be on the IRC tonight, but not right now.  I must get more sleep...))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 15, 2012, 02:10:31 pm
((I'm most likely going to be unavailable for most of the day, which I apologise for. Khenal, you get to play Friesden.))

Before they can decide, the decision is made for them as Friesden, Starkey, and another militiapony burst onto the scene. Friesden lets out a cry and runs to Heiro.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 16, 2012, 01:48:39 am
Starkey swoops up behind Friesden, setting down beside Hiero's limp form.

"Ah, Sisters... how bad is he?"

He gingerly picks up the tenatcle pony's dagger, carefully examining it for poisons.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 01:52:21 am
Charity's responce to Falcata is interrupted by the arrive of Starkey, Friesden, and the other militia pony. They see several dead Diomedians around the area, along with Heiro on the ground, with the duchess trying to slow his bleeding. "Commander, Friesden, Heiro is hurt, he needs to be taken to the hospital. What do we do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 02:00:06 am
Friesden shakes as she examines Heiro's wound, quietly talking to herself, before giving her diagnosis.

"I... I think it got his liver.  He needs surgery before he bleeds out!"

She looks pleadingly to Starkey.

Meanwhile, I try to keep my focus and watch for anyone else showing up.  This would be a very bad time for more Diomedians to show up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 02:04:24 am
Charity looks over Falcata, and sees some blood, some blood that's her's, not the Diomedians'.

"Falcata's hurt too. Khenal can you carry Heiro? If he needs surgery we need to get him to the Hospital, quickly. Falcata, we should probably head back, so you can get those wounds looked at too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 02:07:14 am
"I can carry him. You....you still need to find Lilac. Please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 02:10:50 am
Falcata prepares to suggest that she's fine, but with the adrenaline fading the burning sting of her scourge wounds begins to return in earnest.  She sucks in her breath as she takes a step closer to Heiro, and notices she can feel blood trickling down her side.  Perhaps the duchess was right.

"Yes, you're... probably right.  What about Lilac?  Will the others keep searching for her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 16, 2012, 02:13:59 am
"I'll keep searching."

Starkey stares out into the depths of the jungle.

"I have to keep searching. Miss Charity, would you care to accompany us?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 02:17:37 am
"Yes Starkey, please continue the search. I'm going to return with Falcata, I...I'll be staying back at the tower for now. I'll see if I can help organize the search from there, but I don't think I'll be coming back into the jungle tonight. I'm sorry. Khenal, you can go with Starkey to continue the search if you wish."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 02:19:21 am
Friesden hesitates, but dashes over to Khenal and gives him a quick peck on the cheek. "Stay safe...please. I don't think I could go through anymore tonight, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 02:28:25 am
I give Friesden a kiss in return.

"You stay safe as well, Friesden, and take care of Heiro.  With you, I know he's in capable hooves."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 02:33:17 am
Friesden hurries back to Heiro, and after a bit of working, she puts him on her back, and begins the trek back to the fort.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 16, 2012, 02:42:41 am
As Friesden approaches the gates, she can hear a commotion from inside. Entering, she finds two stallions trying - and barely succeeding - to restrain a very angry lieutenant.

"Dammit, I'll be fine! Jus' pull it out an' slap a patch on it!"


"With all due respect, ma'am: It's an arrow. In your wing. You are not, by any means, fine!"

Despite their objections, she continues to struggle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 02:45:34 am
"Mum? Are you okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 02:49:09 am
Falcata and Charity halt just beside Friesden, taken by surprise by the outburst.  As Friesden inquires with Otik, Kris peeks out from the entrance and looks up to her mother.

"Mom... did you find her?"

Falcata frowns and says nothing.

"Mom...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 02:50:30 am
I frown, anxious, as they leave back to the fort, before turning back to Starkey.

"So, I'll continue on the ground?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 16, 2012, 02:55:49 am
"We both should. I'd rather not luse you in the canopy, and it isn't safe to wander around alone, even for soldiers."

 - - - - - -

"Friesden? Aye, I'll be fine," Otik replies. She twists her neck around and grabs the shaft of the arrow in her teeth, snapping it with her jaws before sharply pulling it free. "Did ye find her? Is she alright?"

She turns back to Friesden, and finally notices the unconscious guardpony on her back.

"Luna's muscular flanks, issat... Hiero? Wot happened to 'im?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 02:57:25 am
"He...I don't know! He heard somepony yell, and burst out to help them...when we caught up, we found him and Charity's group, with five dead Diomedians."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 03:09:30 am
I fall in beside Starkey as we resume the search.  After a few minutes, I start thinking back on what he was saying back at the party.

"...Is magic really a virtue?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 16, 2012, 03:10:04 am
"Hmm? Oh. Yes, that's what the book says. There are a few different interpretations of just what is meant by 'Magic'. Some believe it refers to the innate magic that resides within all ponies: it's behind the earth ponies' strong bond with nature, pegasi's ability to manipulate the weather, and yes, the powerful abilities of unicorns and alicorns like yourself. Others attach a more abstract meaning to it, caliming that the element actually represents friendship: Kindness Generosity, and all the others are meaningless without friends to share them with. But all of them at least agree that the sixth element is central, more important than all the other five."

 - - - - - -

"Well, let's get him down t' th' doc."

She trots up beside Friesden, taking some of the weight on her own back.

"An' put a patch on this," she gestures at her wing, now beginning to bleed heavily, "So's I c'n get back out there."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 03:12:43 am
Tears begin to form in Kris' eyes as she takes in the meaning of her mother's silence.  "Mom...?" she pleads one more time.  Still receiving no response, she looks over to Friesden and notices Heiro, covered in blood on her back, and she lets out a gasp.  Then she notices the rents in her mother's armor and the blood leaking from them and fear begins to work onto her face.

"We're going to be fine," Falcata says to her, gesturing for her to step aside as everypony heads indoors and toward the hospital.  Kris follows along, unwilling to let her mom or Mr. Heiro out of sight.

As they reach the hospital, Charity ensures that they're all settled in before hurrying off to fulfill her prior promise of directing from the tower.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 03:23:45 am
Friesden pales as she looks at her mother's wing. "Mum! You're bleeding too much to go out there! I don't...I don't want to lose two of my family..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 03:26:13 am
"But, the others you mentioned are integral to Friendship also.  Without them, is Friendship even possible?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 16, 2012, 03:35:40 am
"It's... well, think of it like this: all the Elements together are like... a house. Honesty, Loyalty, Kindness, et cetera, all of those are like the walls, the roof, the windows... you get the picture. But Magic, magic is like the frame. The beams, the rafters. Without the frame, the others cannot stand; they collapse on themselves. But without all the other parts, is it even a house? No, it's just an empty skeleton. Friendship isn't even friendship without all the others."

 - - - - - -

"Wot? No, Fri. I need t'be out there. I need t'find Lilac. Jus'... slap a bandage on it, an' I'll be fine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 03:40:58 am
"Then why do ponies think magic is more important than the others?  It takes all of them together to work right."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 03:45:27 am
"But...but...but...Please...I need you too. And a bandage won't be enough. Please!"


Even as Friesden frantically pleads with her mother, they reach the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 03:51:48 am
As the ponies reach the hospital, Falcata stands aside to allow Friesden to put Heiro on a bed.  She magically levitates her barding away, wincing and sucking in her breath as the armor's padding peels away from the bloody fur around her wounds.  The scratches looked a little deeper than she expected, but still not a major deal.

Kris looks away as she catches sight of the wounds on her mother's side and watches as the ponies begin to work on Heiro.


"Kris... you shouldn't be here right now, go on home and I'll come get you in a bit," Falcata says as she begins to rummage for medical supplies.  No need to get the doctors involved over her with Heiro bleeding as bad as he was.

Kris shakes her head and sits.  "No... it's okay, I want to make sure Mr. Heiro is okay."

Reluctantly Falcata agrees and returns to her searching.  She didn't have time to argue right now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 16, 2012, 03:53:50 am
Otik wheels on her.

"Dammit, my little filly is out there all alone in th' jungle, surrounded by Diomedians, badgerponies, an' goddesses know what else! I need..."

The blood loss and rapid movements combine, and a wave of dizziness sweeps over Otik.

"I need... ooh... I need t'sit down..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 03:54:23 am
Friesden leaves her mother and begins to work as best she could on Heiro. All those times she had...she had cut open ponies...for Heiro...maybe she could put it to use.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:08:35 am
After finishing patching up Heiro and Otik, Friesden turns to the ponies, a less than happy expression on her face.

"Heiro...Heiro needs a blood transfusion. I think I can do it...but my blood isn't the right type...I...I need somepony, an earthpony, to volunteer. Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 04:15:46 am
Venture comes walking out of the Chief Medical Pony's office, wearing a white coat with a red cross on the flank. She takes one look and the scene and goes to Heiro's side. "Friesden, update me. What's the situation?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:21:53 am
"Heiro...Heiro bumped into...some diomedians...they stabbed him...He needs blood!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 04:23:42 am
"He needs...blood? So we can't help him? What do we do Doctor Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:26:05 am
"No, no, there's this device that Starkey made. But we need earthpony blood to replace that which Heiro has lost."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 04:31:31 am
"An earthpony. Well, I don't know where Doctor Bubbles is, and..." She looks around, "There aren't any here. Doctor, should I go and try and find a volunteer?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:33:17 am
"I don't know! I just wish I could do it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 04:35:33 am
"Does it HAVE to be earthpony blood? What about Alicorn blood? They say alicorns have the blood of all the tribes. Could I do it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:36:07 am
"Maybe? We can try it...Would you do it? For me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 04:38:31 am
"Yes, I'll do it. It's my job to help ponies in need. If all it takes is a little blood to save a life, it's worth it. What do I need to do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:40:00 am
"Just stand next to Heiro. I'll do the rest."


Friesden commences the transfusion.

All too soon, however, the blood showed the signs of refusal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 04:57:45 am
As Heiro thrashes about on the table, Venture checks his vitals. "Friesden, he's burning up. His fever is way too high. If we don't drop it, he could die. His mind will burn. Is this normally part of this procedure? What now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:58:39 am
"I...I don't know! I've never done this before without Khenal!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 05:01:42 am
"You, you don't know? Well what would Khenal do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 05:02:45 am
"I...um..." Inspiration strikes Friesden. "Maybe it was something in their mind that helped. Falcata, can you help me get into Heiro's mind? Maybe that might help us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 05:04:34 am
"Fever?"  Kris says to herself, thinking over the books Dr. Bubbles had shown her.  "Oh, I think can fix that!"

She steps over to Heiro, her horn glowing a faint gold as a golden aura enshrouds Heiro.  Oh, she hoped this was right!  It... felt right.

Falcata looks up to Friesden, eyes wide and a strip of gauze in her mouth, mid-way through tearing it to apply to one of her cuts.


"Ekcfuse me?" she mutters through the gauze, unsure she wanted to believe what she just heard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 05:05:30 am
"Mental magic? Khenal told me that that's very dangerous. Are you sure you can handle it? You could break him, destroy his mind, change him into somepony else completely. Are you sure that's the only choice?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 05:06:24 am
"It's the only thing I can think of."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 05:08:41 am
Falcata spits out the gauze, sidesteps Kris, hoping desperately that the filly knew what she was doing, and steps over to Heiro.

"I... don't know... last time I tried this... it didn't...."  She looks over to Friesden, fear and uncertainty in her eyes.  "I don't want to hurt him more..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 05:09:48 am
"I'll be with you...we can do this. Together, we will succeed. Khenal told me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 05:13:10 am
Falcata bites her lip and looks back to Heiro.  Bringing Friesden too?  This could be bad if she bucked it up.  If it was his only chance though... she had to take it.  "Alright, hold on..."

Just like Khenal said, she reached out as if to levitate something with her magic, trying to feel for their minds instead of their bodies.  She felt... something.  Was that it?  She really wished Khenal was here right now... sisters help her if she hurt Heiro or Friesden...

A violet glow enshrouds her horn and slowly bridges to Friesden and Heiro's foreheads.  The world seems to go dark, and in an instant Falcata and Friesden feel their minds torn in a direction they didn't know existed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 05:19:32 am
The two find themselves back at the gates of the destroyed city. Nothing stirs, and the silence is deafening. Then they hear something, a slight rush of air, and something lands behind them.

"What did you do! Something feels wrong, what has happened! Is Heiro alright? The voice seems strangely worried, sounding more fitting for hurling insults than worrying for others.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 07:00:49 am
Friesden turns around, and at the sight of the shadowbolt shrieks and ducks behind Falcata, cowering in fear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 16, 2012, 11:59:00 am
Starkey and Khenal begin to wretch as it dawns on them that they've failed to find Lilac.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 02:46:24 pm
Falcata appears inside Heiro's mind several feet from the ground, letting out a startled cry as she crashes to the ground in a heap.  She cautiously rises to her hooves, fighting through the pounding in her head and the intense nausea in her stomach.  The spinning of the world slowly comes to a halt and the nausea dies down as she stands.  Had it worked?  Were they inside Heiro's head?

A piercing voice calls to her from behind, and she whirls about to face its source as Friesden bolts behind her.  By ingrained instinct she takes up a defensive posture to protect Friesden as she takes in who is addressing them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 03:00:08 pm
The raider chuckles "Oh did I scare you? You should answer my question though. I might be able to help, I know things even Midnight doesn't."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 03:01:41 pm
"Wh-who a-are y-you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 03:06:57 pm
"Me? Been a long time since anypony asked me that... Heiro calls me The Raider. I suppose that will work for now. Now, the situation? What's going on? Why are you here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 03:36:08 pm
Falcata recognizes the darkbolt from her last trek into Heiro's mind.  She didn't trust him in the least, but he didn't seem to be hostile.  For now at least.  She relaxes her expression and stance.

"Corporal Heiro was badly injured.  He's being treated right now, but the doctor was afraid that the severe fever he suffered might have hurt his mind."  She looks around at the environment, seeing nothing that looked particularly damaged, at least compared to last time.  "I... brought us here to check."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 03:38:27 pm
Friesden takes a deep breath, and steps out of hiding. She would do anything for her brother, including this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 03:43:59 pm
"Fever? Hmm... I'm not much of a medpony."

He looks at Friesden "Who are you? I don't think I've seen you here before. Maybe you can help? Why does Heiro have a fever?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 03:51:07 pm
Friesden breathed in deep again. At least this wasn't a keshi...like...like...like that one. Maybe she could control herself. Anything for Heiro.

"H-he was hurt. By a diomedian like you, but a tentacle one. He got stabbed in the liver. He lost a lot of blood so we had to put some more into him. But he started getting ill from it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 03:54:26 pm
"Blood? You can put more in him? How... could that be what made him sick?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 03:59:56 pm
"But it shouldn't have! Alicorn blood works for all ponies!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 04:06:22 pm
All... I-I see... you want to help Heiro yes? I know something that could help... but I can't tell you, not while Heiro won't let me. There is a way though, you need to make Heiro remember his past... what happened here," He waves a hoof at the burned out village. "Not Midnight's stories, he needs to actually see it. I think that that will help you fix the problem, I just hope it won't take too long."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:07:21 pm
"I'll do anything for him. Anything for my brother."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 04:08:12 pm
Falcata raises an eyebrow and looks to the burnt village.  "If... you think it will help.  How can we do that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 04:11:39 pm
The Raider chuckles again "You just ask. Heiro trusts you Falcata, I'm sure you can convince him it's a good idea. If Heiro wants to see, then he will be able to look... just be careful, don't let Midnight think you're a threat... and don't mention me, that won't win you any points... not yet at least."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 16, 2012, 04:19:46 pm
This was not good. A filly had escaped to the diomedians because she thought she wasn't loved and she thought they were better. She didn't know what the diomedians were like! Powder Woodcutter and these thoughts as he traveled through the jungle to look for the filly. He thought he heard sounds coming form behind this veritable wall of vines, but he would have to cut it down, so he took his axe and chopped through them. Beyond the vines Lilac wasn't there. But, Powder Woodcutter realized unfortunately as he took an bolt in the knee chest, there were diomedians. "Aaaargh!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:22:12 pm
"Falcata...you have to do this. Please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 04:26:19 pm
She gives Friesden a nervous smile.  "I'll do everything I can."  She motions off to the field where she met Heiro last time and adds, "Let's go see if we can find him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 04:27:56 pm
As they came into the field they see Midnight sleeping on her pedestal under the tree, with Heiro playing around her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 04:28:09 pm
I continue searching, though I'm starting to fear we may be too late.  As I look under a tangle of vines, I hear a yell in the distance.

'Not good!'

I rush as fast as I can towards the yell, hoping it's not just some Diomedian trap.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:31:15 pm
"H-Heiro? A-are y-you okay?" asks Friesden, still shaken by the encounter with the diomedian.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 16, 2012, 04:31:53 pm
Powder Woodcutter painfully lurch-charged at the Diomedian with the crossbow, swinging his axe wildly, only to get beaten across the head with the flat of another's axe. Swinging again, it was blocked and Powder Woodcutter was knocked to the ground by a knock with a mace.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 04:34:05 pm
Heiro stops his playing and runs over to Friesden. "Sis! How did you get here? Midnight's sleeping right now so I was getting bored." Heiro gives Friesden a big hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:35:08 pm
Friesden returns the hug, the tension easing from her. "Falcata has something to ask you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 04:46:46 pm
Falcata steps forward and gives him a small smile.  "Yes... um... Heiro, there's something we need to talk about."  She thinks back to what the darkbolt said and tried to rationalize it in her mind.  How this was going help Heiro she wasn't sure, and she didn't want to traumatize him by going about this the wrong way.

"Heiro... how much do you remember about your past?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 04:48:10 pm
"I remember lotsa stuff! What you wanna know?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 04:52:13 pm
That... was a good question.  She motions back to the village and says, "Do you remember what happened to the village?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 04:52:45 pm
I take to the air and burst through the canopy, hoping I can get to the source of the scream faster that way.  Shortly, I spot a small clearing with several Diomedians and an earth pony on the ground.  As I swoop in, I take a brief stock of the situation.

'Two Keshi, one with a crossbow and one with an axe.  One Tentacle, with mace.  Gotta hurry!'

My horn flashes as I throw my spear at the Keshi with the crossbow, hoping to even the odds at least slightly before the fight even begins.  I zoom down to land, hoping to startle the Diomedians into leaving.  Three on one is not a fight I think I can win, especially without my armor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 04:53:24 pm
Friesden holds Heiro tight. He was...he was a colt here. Not Mica...but it helped.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 04:58:12 pm
"Umm no, Midnight does... but I never asked her... I Kinda don't want to know..." Heiro tries to snuggle under Friesden's wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 16, 2012, 04:59:28 pm
So-someone came to help him, but Powder Woodcutter was in too much pain to tell exactly who. He swung blindly at the one with the axe, managing to knock away a swing of the keshi's. But that was luck, and a swing from the maceman brought him down again. The crossbow pony ducked the spear and fied off a bolt at Khenal while the macepony continued to beat on Powder Woodcutter and the axepony charged at Khenal as well.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 05:00:18 pm
Tears form in Friesden's eyes. H-he was just like Mica. Without a second thought she covered him with her wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 05:13:28 pm
Great... how was she going to do this delicately now?  The darkbolt told her to ask Heiro... but for all she knew he was just trying to hurt him more.  Still, maybe she could push it and head it off before anything went bad, if it looked like it was going that way.

She kneels next to Friesden and looks Heiro in the eyes from under her wings.


"Something... is wrong, Heiro.  We can fix it, but we need you to help us.  We think something that happened here in the past might be important to fixing it."  She smiles at him.  "Can you help us?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 05:16:14 pm
Heiro peeks out from under Friesdens wings. "Something wrong? I-I could try... B-but..." He looks back at the city then up at Friesden. "S-should I do it sis?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 05:19:33 pm
Friesden bites her lip. She...he... If it would help him...

"Yes. We think you should, Heiro."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 05:24:51 pm
"Umm... okay, if you both think I should..." Heiro walks over to Midnight shaking from fear and nerves

"U-Umm big sis, I-I need you to wake up"

Midnight stands and stretches, Looking over at the visitors "Oh? We have company? I'm glad" She walks over to Friesden "It's nice to finally meet you Friesden. What did you two need?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 05:29:51 pm
Friesden doesn't answer at first, but runs back over to Heiro and picks him up again.

"We...we...Falcata has something to ask."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 05:30:09 pm
Thankfully, the crossbow Keshi didn't take the time to aim properly and the bolt sails wide.

'Buck, I missed!'

I take to the air again, levitating my spear after me, and charge the Tentacle pony with the mace, hoping to spear him while he's distracted.

'I need to whittle them down quickly, before that crossbow Keshi can reload!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 16, 2012, 05:34:16 pm
The Mace Keshi is run through, saving Powder Woodcutter (although he's been knocked out). The axe tentacle pony makes it up to Khenal and starts swinging while the crossbow pony begins to reload.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 05:38:26 pm
Falcata cringes internally as Friesden dumps the burden on her.  Oh well, no backing out of it now.

"Uh... yes.  Midnight..."  Falcata steps over to her and looks up to the giant of a pony, and says in a low voice so that Heiro wouldn't overhear, "We... are trying to help Heiro.  He's hurt, and something went wrong when we tried to treat him."  She looks to the side nervously.  How was she going to put this so that it didn't sound as crazy to Midnight as it did to her...  "We... we think looking into his past... what happened at the village... might help."  No need to bring up the darkbolt, hopefully Midnight would just go for it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 05:41:25 pm
"What happened to... I have told you what happened... it won't be a pleasant memory for Heiro. Unless he want's to. and you are sure it will help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 05:46:19 pm
"Gah!"

I'm too slow getting my spear out of the tentacle pony and take a viscous, but shallow,  gash across my ribs.  Finally freeing my spear, I start blocking the swings of the Keshi, thankful that those powerful blows are glancing off my spear and not me.  As he takes another swing, I send a telekinetic blast at him form the side, hoping to topple him or at least get him off balance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 05:47:27 pm
Falcata pauses for a moment.  "No... I'm... not sure it will help... but it's the best chance we know of.  I trust your discretion."  She looks away again.  "But, we might not have much time..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 05:53:19 pm
Heiro pipes up from behind Midnight, "I-I'll do it. You just have to make it play right?"

Midnight turns to Heiro concern on her face. "You know that I won't be able to help you once I do this right? Once it starts it won't stop. you can't go back to not knowing... but if you're sure..." She steps onto her pedestal, "You both will take care of him yes? You won't be able to interfere, but you can still be there for him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 05:56:38 pm
Not good, she was expecting to be able to call it off if things went bad.  She didn't know what else to try now though.

"Of course, we'll do whatever we can."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 05:56:48 pm
Friesden doesn't speak, just caressing Heiro the colt. Tears continue to form, though she is smiling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 06:06:51 pm
"Allright then..." Midnight closes her eyes, and disappears, the ground begins to shake and transform, and the three find themselves in a house. The living room to be exact, outside they can hear the sound of battle and fire.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 16, 2012, 06:11:29 pm
The telekinetic blast nearly topples the axepony, and it drops the axe, unable to hold on to it anymore. The crossbowpony has reloaded and fires at Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 16, 2012, 06:12:13 pm
Falcata takes in her surroundings and tries to catch a glimpse of what was going on outside.  She remembered what Khenal said... any of them could be in danger right now, and she needed to protect Friesden if it came to that.  Hopefully Heiro wouldn't be in physical danger in his own mind...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 06:16:05 pm
Friesden continues to hold Heiro tight, taking comfort from the horror around her in him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 16, 2012, 06:23:40 pm
Suddenly a pegasus stallion bursts in, looking around frantically, "Heiro, Heiro where-" He sees Heiro, but seems completely umaware of the other two "Oh you're safe" He breaths a sigh of relief and steps into the room "Have you seen your sister? Where-"

His question is gut off with a sickening crunch as a mace slams into his head. standing behind him was the raider, holding his mase and grinning. "Now what do we have here, a little colt. Heh, you wont put up much of a fight will you, hardly worth it."

Heiro backs away, ducking down, and starts speaking to himself quietly. "This isn't right, it didn't happen this way, it's wrong. it's wrong, it's wrong." As he chants the scene seems to blur a bit, then settles, but the walls and furniture seem... cracked like they were going to fall apart.   
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 16, 2012, 06:28:51 pm
The bolt buries itself deep in my shoulder as I grunt in pain.  My horn glows as I concentrate and levitate the injured earth pony and take off for the open air and the fortress beyond.

"Please be alright..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 16, 2012, 06:51:54 pm
Friesden clutches Heiro tight. Whatever was happening she didn't want him hurt.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 16, 2012, 07:08:02 pm
Powder Woodcutter, though beaten up pretty badly, appears to be alright. He does however have a bolt in his chest, which although it thankfully caused relatively little bleeding, is in there quite deeply. It also appears his side might have a few broken ribs, although it's hard to tell.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 16, 2012, 09:23:03 pm
((Sadly, Jaxtalmk2 has been evicted from glitterglen for reasons that I think we can all agree are not needed to be revealed. Sorry for the inconvenience, and we wish Jaxtalmk2 the best of luck.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Crazy Cow on January 16, 2012, 09:44:38 pm
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08:03 Dsarker Complete and unabridged!
08:03 Light How do you do that, by the way?
08:03 Dsarker Client.
08:03 themaster Alright, so here's my reaction.
08:03 Light Nkay then q:
08:03 Dsarker Now, anything else you wanted?
08:04 themaster I do not want trouble, chaos, or conflicts.
08:04 Dsarker Good for you. I guess you've come to apologise for the conflict you caused, then?
08:04 Tarus We will gladly accept it.
08:04 themaster No.
08:04 themaster How dare you say that.
08:05 Dsarker ?*
08:05 Light themaster, you were pushing something that didn't need to be pushed. Secrets weren't being kept from anyone involved, and the secret woudn't have changed the game in any meaningful way.
08:05 Dsarker Also, quite easily.
08:05 Light You weren't involved in the scene. Why did you care? Why did you start all this?
08:06 themaster The rules were simple, discuss roleplay ideas in the chat.
08:06 Dsarker He had.
08:06 themaster NOT with all of us.
08:06 Light Everyone involved knew.
08:06 Tarus He discussed them with the people he had to.
08:06 themaster It's important to keep everyone informed.
08:06 Dsarker The rules didn't specify that at the time, nor did he fail to discuss it with anyone involved.
08:06 Light Not in this case.
08:06 themaster Not just select individuals.
08:06 themaster There's never a case.
08:06 Light It was a minor thing that didn't affect you in any way.
08:07 Light You were not wronged. At all.
08:07 themaster Then he shouldn't have over reacted.
08:07 Light You shouldn't have pushed it.
08:07 Light It's that simple.
08:07 mesa unless there is some grand scheme you hadn;t discussed with him yet?
08:07 Light It didn't matter.
08:08 themaster You're taking a very liberal perspective to this, whereas I'm simply stating that if someone can't abide by a simple rule, then said person is welcome to leave.
08:08 themaster It's that simple.
08:08 Light sighs.
08:09 Light It isn't that simple.
08:09 Light The rules don't matter if pushing them will create arguments and conflict like htis.
08:09 Light In cases where everyone is affected? Yes.
08:09 Light In a minor scene where one of the characters wants to drop a bit of a surprise? No.
08:10 themaster It's a small group, unlike here.
08:10 Tarus He did follow the rule by discussing it. Nowhere is it stated that it has to be discussed with everyone, just that is has to be discussed which he did. Now that doesn't matter because you did push him.
08:10 Light You weren't involved. Strongbeard wasn't involved. *Why did you care?*
08:10 Tarus Or at least. Care so much to nag him about it repeatedly until it upset him?
08:11 themaster He gets upset very easily, you cannot deny that.
08:11 Light But you provoked him.
08:11 Light We have the logs.
08:12 themaster I know I did.
08:12 Tarus Then you should've known better then to provoke him.
08:12 themaster I did so, because he wasn't being compliant.
08:12 Light But it didn't matter!
08:12 Light You *know* he's sensitive to that kind of thing.
08:12 Light It was an unimportant thing to push.
08:12 Light *WHY* did you do it?
08:13 Tarus Nothing's worth angering anyone. Especially if it's as insignificant as this.
08:13 themaster This conversation is redundant.
08:14 Bristle Did we die?
08:14 Light You're losing.
08:14 Light Full retreat to save face.
08:14 Tarus No.
08:14 themaster All I can say is this, if any of you from glitterglen here want to quit, then feel free.
08:14 themaster This conversation is terminated.
08:14 *** themaster left #NeonCaballusEvangelion

A very good reason, indeed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 16, 2012, 09:54:54 pm
((You actually left out the beginning.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TheBronzePickle on January 16, 2012, 10:00:04 pm
((Seems fair enough to not put you in a worse light by posting more, honestly. You've already pissed off everyone participating in NCE. I'm earnestly the only person left who seems to care about Glitterglen not dying, and I don't even play it.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 16, 2012, 10:08:06 pm
((Come hell and high water, this thread will stay alive, and anyone who actually goes to the trouble of locating this thread from your IRC clearly has nothing better to do. I wish all  of you that play NCE the best of luck.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 16, 2012, 10:42:10 pm
-aaaaaaaaaaaaand ignore this post-
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on January 16, 2012, 10:46:52 pm
Wait, why are you evicting someone instead of Kingstrongbeard? IT is his thread...

((cuz maybe he is just telling us what kingstrongebeard said))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 16, 2012, 10:48:25 pm
That would make sense.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 16, 2012, 10:57:51 pm
((Sigh, I'd hoped to keep this discussion from the forums, but I've been left with no choice.

Yes, Jax has been banned from the IRC. Yes, themaster reported it here, but me and him agree on it. It is due, in part, to Jax's repeated outbursts, in the IRC. We were both tired of it. From what I have gathered, it seems like Dsarker is quitting over this as well, and that saddens me. I hope Dsarker changes his mind, and if he does so he is welcome back. But regardless Glitterglen will go on with or without them.


 I ask that those not affiliated with Glitterglen (namely those from NCE), refrain from posting here about what transpired on the IRC, as this is not the place for that, and that it will cause more harm then good, regardless of your intentions, however good they might be. If we must argue let's not do it on Bay12. Please.

Despite the unfortunate turn of events this night, Glitterglen is still salvageable, and I don't want to lose it. The show will go on.))


EDIT: ((The above information is no longer accurate. Due to a tense discussion on the IRC a compromise has been reached. Jax is being welcomed back on a probational basis, and with this agreement, Dsarker will also be staying. We hope to avoid all such internet drama in the future. On with the show.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 17, 2012, 02:10:02 am
Falcata looks around at the change of scenery and tries to process what she's just seen.  The darkbolt had killed somepony Heiro knew at least... which probably explained why he was a permanent fixture in Heiro's head.  But what had he meant by this not being right?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 17, 2012, 03:53:58 am
"Father, no not father, wrong all wrong, it was different..."

The raider stepped forward raising his mace, "Just hold still scum, this won't hurt... much."

"Not right, not right, NOT RIGHT, NOT RIGHT!" The room's walls crack and the scene blurs again. Then, with a sound like breaking glass, the entire scene shatters away. Underneath is another room... the same room, with the same sounds... but one major difference.


 On the ground, the raider lay, dead. And there, raising his mace, was a brilliantly white pegasus stallion. "Pray to whatever gods you have Diomedian scum! You will die here!"

 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 17, 2012, 03:56:19 am
Friesden shrieks in horror, and grabs Heiro, covering him with her body, willing to take the blow for him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 17, 2012, 04:03:08 am
Falcata's jaw drops and hangs slightly as she watches.  Wait... was Heiro's father a diomedian?  She looks over to the colt, trying to catch a glimpse of him from beneath Friesden's attempt to shield him and puzzles the development  How could that be possible?  He looked like a regular pony to her...

And who was this pegasus killing his family?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 17, 2012, 04:05:11 am
"Not Mica. You can't have Mica. He's MINE!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 17, 2012, 04:44:41 am
The mace flashes down... and smashes into the side of a large keshi pony with a black coat, holding an impressive steel axe. She screams out as the blow shatters some ribs. "AHH, You, You leave my brother alone! He's just a colt! What have we done to you!"

"You exist what more reason do we need? All of you are just filthy diomedians, this land belongs to the principality now." The stallion swings his mace around crushing the keshi's skull. the keshi collapses, her axe dropping in front of Heiro. "Haha, this is too easy! Well little keshi? What are you going to do? You think you can lift that axe? How about this, I'll turn around for a second, let's see how fast you run. Haha."

The pegasus steps back, and turns around Chuckling all the while. Heiro squirms free of Friesdens grip and Grabs the fallen axe, leaping upon the pegasus. the blade came down directly on the pegasus' neck, severing it's head in one strike. Heiro didn't stop however, the axe flashed again and again, until what was left of the pegasus soldier looked more like the leftovers from a butchers shop than a pony.

the scene blurs again, everything disappears, Except for the Raider, standing in the doorway. Heiro walks over to him "F-father? I-I didn't remember you."

"Don't worry Heiro, you remember now, that's what matters. Your sister has done a fine job of keeping you safe, and your other family." He looks at the two mares, "Thank you for helping Heiro, and for trusting me. I believe the reason the blood made Heiro sick is clear now? I would offer to answer your questions, I'm sure you have a few, but I think you have more important things to deal with now."

Heiro runs back over to Friesden giving her a big hug and cuddling under her wings again, "I guess you have to go now, bit you'll come back right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 17, 2012, 04:48:08 am
Friesden remains stock still, then turns to Falcata, horror on her face, and says "We...we have to go. I'm not safe here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 17, 2012, 12:53:42 pm
Falcata collects herself with some difficulty and looks to Friesden.  "Um... yes, we should go."

She averts her eyes back to the darkbolt in the doorway and adds, "Yes.  I think it is clear now why it went wrong.  I do have questions, but I don't think there is time."

She steps over to Friesden and Heiro, crouches next to him and says, "I'm sorry Heiro, but we do have to go.  Thank you for showing this to us, it has been most helpful."  Her eyes track back up to Friesden's and she sees the horror on the mare's face.  Friesden spooked easily, but this would probably have been enough to frighten most anypony who hadn't seen as much combat and death as she had.  And regardless, now that they knew what was wrong with Heiro, they had to get back.  Fast.  Maybe there would still be time to help him.

A violet glow enshrouds her horn as she stands and takes a step back.  The world shifts and fades around them, and once again Falcata and Friesden feel their minds torn across an imperceptible boundary.  Falcata opens her eyes to find that they have returned to the hospital, along with an intense pounding in her head and another bout of nausea that slowly began to fade.


((I assume that was where we wanted to just cut it off.  I'll be in the IRC later today as usual.  PM me if you'd rather I adjust something before then.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 17, 2012, 03:26:52 pm
Friesden comes back to her body, and fear is full on her face.

"I-I-I-I have to...have to go!"

She runs out into the corridor, looking for Khenal or Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 17, 2012, 03:32:26 pm
As I approach the fort from the air, I can see a few cages being dragged inside the walls.  I land not too far from the haulers with the injured earth pony, nearly collapsing as I put weight on my front hooves.  Favoring my right foreleg, I start limping towards the hospital with the unconscious pony.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 17, 2012, 03:38:19 pm
Friesden spots Khenal, and runs over to him, burrowing her head into his wings.

"Don't let me do it stop me please I don't want to please stop me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 17, 2012, 03:55:56 pm
"Friesden?  What happened?  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 17, 2012, 03:56:56 pm
"Please you've got to help Heiro's a diomedian you've got to stop me please I don't want to hurt him please you've got to stop me! I'm too dangerous to be around him!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 17, 2012, 03:59:34 pm
"Wait, what?  Slow down, Firesden.  It'll be alright, just calm down."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 17, 2012, 04:00:50 pm
"You've got to stop me! Break my legs or lock me up or something! I don't want to hurt Heiro but I don't trust myself not to! Please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 17, 2012, 04:25:16 pm
((In order to please everyone, I am quitting glitterglen. I will miss all of you, but there's no other option at this point. I wish every single one of you the best of luck, and i'm truly sorry I have been a tyrant to you all.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 17, 2012, 04:39:22 pm
I gingerly reach back to try to nuzzle Friesden without opening my wounds again.

"Shh, it'll be alright, Friesden.  I trust you to not hurt him, or anypony."


******************************

I don't want to see you go, Themaster.  But if that's what you feel you need to do, I wish you the best of luck as well.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 17, 2012, 04:42:06 pm
"Y-you do? I-if you do, I'll...I'll...You're hurt! You've got to get to the hospital!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 17, 2012, 05:52:52 pm
I grin sheepishly and try to downplay my wounds.

"I... I'm pretty sure I'll be alright.  There were a few Diomedians who ambushed this poor guy.  I think he's in worse condition than I am.  But ya, we should probably get to the hospital."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 17, 2012, 05:57:53 pm
"Okay...yes...he's there, but you'll stop me if I try anything. Okay."

Friesden helps the two to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 17, 2012, 09:54:45 pm
Falcata tries to clear her head and quell the nausea in her stomach as the world settles.  She takes a quick look around to see Venture looking at Heiro with significant concern on her face, and Kris sitting quietly next to her.  Heiro was still motionless on the bed.  He didn't look any worse, but he didn't look any better either.  A diomedian... he was a diomedian... she'd never seen that coming.  But it explained the problem with the blood transfusion... not that she really understood that in the first place.

"Mom?  Is... is he going to be okay?" Kris asks, prodding her gently.

She wished she knew, but of course there was only one thing to say to that.
  "Of course... he's going to be fine."  She turns her attention to Venture.  "Um, nurse, we... need keshi blood.  I... I need to go find out if we have any prisoners..."

She takes a quick look at Kris and says, "Kris, stay here, or run on home.  I... I'll be back soon."

((Not trying to drag this out... but I wish you the best of luck too, The Master.  I didn't want to see you go either.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 17, 2012, 10:12:32 pm
Otik watches Falcata leave, then turns to Venture.

"Wot did she mean by that? Why would Hiero be needin' Keishi blood?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 17, 2012, 11:05:21 pm
Venture looks nervously at the door that Falcata left though, then between Heiro and Otik, before seeming to come to a decision.

"My blood is wrong, the magic isn't right for him.  With some Keshi blood, corrupted Earth Pony blood, we might be able to restore the balance in his system."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 18, 2012, 12:05:41 am
Kris ponders the statement, but all of this was beyond her understanding.  Why would they need blood from somepony else?  A keshi... a diomedian?  She decides it best to let the doctors do all of the work and stay out of their way.  If only she knew more about healing magic...

Falcata trots through the halls as fast as she can without bumbling into anypony and without undue pain from her fresh wounds.  She spies a hauler dragging a cage containing what was surely a diomedian of some variety, minus wings or an obvious tentacle, and flags him down with a wave of her hoof.


"Hey!  I... need this pony brought to the hospital.  There's no time to explain, lives are at stake."

The hauler looks at her quizically for a moment, but recognizes her and obeys.  "Alright, if you say so."

Inside the cage, the keshi pony glares and snarls at her, throwing himself against the side of the cage to get as close as he can.  "...lives at stake indeed... let me out of here and you'll see what lives are at stake..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 01:43:42 am
Soon enough, Friesden, Khenal, and Powder Woodcutter arrive at the hospital. Friesden continues to shy away from Heiro.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 18, 2012, 02:14:57 am
Falcata motions for the cage to be brought into the hospital, trying to ignore the continued provocations and swearing by the prisoner.  "Come on... come on..."

The hauler places the cage next to the bed as she directs, bids them farewell and trots off to the surface to help reset the trap that was sprung.  Falcata looks at the prisoner and tries to think of how they would get the blood out of him without killing him.  That wouldn't do well given the circumstances...  A thought enters her mind.  It was worth a try...

The keshi leans against the side of the cage and narrows his eyes at her.
  "What are you gonna do now, huh?  Gonna cut me apart in some experiment?  You're more twisted than-"

The keshi's words end in a grunt as Falcata blasts him with a stunning pulse of magic, as strong as she could manage.  Despite her hopes he just slumps to the ground, coughing weakly and blinking lethargically.  Didn't work... try again... Another flash and the pony lets out a pained sigh and goes still, save for shallow breathing.  Good, she didn't have the strength for a third try.

"Um... okay... I think he'll stay down for a while.  Anypony want to try the transfusion now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 02:19:13 am
Friesden felt torn. She didn't trust herself near her brother. But Khenal did... And she had to do the transfusion... She turned to Khenal. "Can you...can you stay by me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 18, 2012, 02:23:20 am
I carefully set Powder on a bed before turning to Friesden, trying to mask my pain. 

"Yes, always."

Venture levitates the transfusion device, ready to take Friesden's direction.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 02:26:03 am
Friesden's thoughts turn back...

"That one there, that one there. Okay...this should work..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 02:42:45 am
At that moment, Starkey walks into the hospital, drenched to the bone.

"Miss Venture? They told me Otik was brought down here. What happened? Is she well?"

"Captain? Yes, the lieutenant is here. She was shot through the wing, and she lost a lot of blood..."

Starkey grows pale at these words.

"But she should be fine. She wanted to go back out and keep looking, but I managed to convince her to lie down."

Venture steps a little closer, lowering her voice.

"Did... did you find her?"

"...No. Thunderstorm blew in from the west. Can't see ten yards in any direction, and it looks like it's settling in for the night. I... I hate the thought of leaving her out there in this weather, but we just can't keep it up like this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 18, 2012, 03:10:36 am
Falcata and Kris watch in silence as Friesden sets to work on Heiro.  She really hoped this worked...

Then Captain Starkey enters the hospital and begins to speak with Venture.  They... hadn't found Lilac.  Deep down inside... she wasn't surprised, but she couldn't suppress the despair growing inside her.  The poor filly... why had she run off like this?

Kris steps over to her mother and looks up to her, the semblance of tears beginning to form in her eyes.


"Mom... they... they're going to find her... right?"

Falcata tries to smile and nod, but it comes off as a quivering lip and a weak attempt at maintaining her composure.  "It's going to be alright... it's going to be alright..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 03:25:29 am
Friesden stops, shaking as she hears Starkey's words. Lilac...Lost? But....

Tears that had previously threatened to break the mighty dams surrounding them flooded forth with renewed vigour.

Tears streaming down her face, she runs to her father.

"But...but....but... No! No! NO!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 03:34:09 am
Starkey pulls his daughter in close, hugging her tightly.

"I-It's... okay... the s-storm will pass, and we'll go out, and we'll f-find her and... it'll be okay... it'll... be..."

'Who the clop am I kidding?'

Lilac had walked out into the middle of a raider-infested wilderness. They're in a jungle: it could go on raining for days, or weeks. If the wildlife didn't get her, the Diomedians would. And if they didn't kill her... a small part of him almost prayed that they would.

Starkey buries his face in Friesden's mane, sobbing uncontrollably.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 03:39:03 am
Friesden loses it, just screaming in pain at the world.

"Why! I was almost happy! Why?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 03:45:28 am
Even in his distress, Starkey does his best to try to comfort Friesden. He drapes his wings over her, gently stroking her mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 03:47:35 am
Friesden collapses into her father, wailing.

"Why? Why...why can't I have happiness? Why does it always have to be like this? Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 03:51:41 am
Slowly, his weeping subsides, and he is silent for a while. Then, he begins to hum a tune, quietly at first, but slowly growing in volume.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 03:54:12 am
"What...what's wrong with me? If it wasn't for me, Lilac would have stayed, and nopony would have gotten hurt, and I wouldn't be afraid of Heiro! Why...why wasn't I good enough?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 03:56:38 am
Starkey continues the lullaby, and now begins to sing, his voice quavering, but soothing:

Wherein the deep night sky,
The stars lie in Her embrace.
The courtyard still in its sleep,
And peace comes over your face.

'Come to me,' She sings.
'Hear the pulse of the land.
The ocean's rhythms pull,
To hold your heart in its hand...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 03:58:43 am
"I'm just a stupid little mare. I should be the one out there, not Lilac...then nopony would have worried. They'd be all okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 04:09:20 am
Starkey continues his lullaby, as Friesden feels another pair of hooves around her, and a gentle nuzzling at the back of her neck.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 04:10:59 am
"I'm just a stupid little bitch...my father had the right idea. Use me up and get rid of me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 04:29:54 am
The song is finished, and the two pegasi hold their daughter in silence for a moment. Finally, Otik whispers in her ear.

"Fri... Hiero needs ye... yer big brother needs ye right now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 04:33:30 am
"I'm not safe around him. He's...he's a diomedian. A keshi. I'm not safe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 04:38:09 am
Both of them balk at this.

"He's a..."


"Keshi? H-How..."

"What do ye mean? He willnae hurt ye."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 04:39:34 am
"No, no! You don't understand! I'm worried about me hurting him!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 04:45:44 am
"No, hun... yer a great doctor. Ye willnae hurt him. Now please go on, I dunnae know how long he can wait."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 04:48:54 am
"No! Remember when-when we were getting Carrot? And the diomedians came? Wha-what if I do that to him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 04:57:59 am
"Y-You... won't."

Starkey looks down at her.

"Friesden... I have something... to tell you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 05:02:18 am
"What?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 05:03:20 am
"W-What do you know about Diomedians? Tell me about... shadowbolts. What are they like?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 05:04:41 am
"I...I don't know! Except I killed some of them! I'm dangerous to them, and I don't want to hurt my brother! Please! Imprison me or kill me or break my bones so I can't hurt him, please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 05:09:54 am
"They're like the old legends of vampires... sort of. They have leathery, batlike wings... sharp fangs... they have an unnatural thirst for blood..."

As he speaks, Friesden notices something... odd. Something she had never noticed before, and could only now see up close. Whenever Starkey opened his mouth, she could see them: four short, blunt canines.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 05:12:01 am
"B-but y-you're n-not one of them, right? Please, tell me you aren't....please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 05:14:20 am
"Not... exactly."

She can see them clearly now: not quite fangs, but nearer to it than a normal pony's teeth should be.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 05:16:27 am
"Please...oh, no, oh no..."

Friesden tries to back away from Starkey, a combination of fear and horror in equal parts upon her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 05:20:02 am
"I'm... only half. I get it from my father. Your grandfather? he... he isn't like them. He's... so kind, to all his children. He's no monster. He's nothing like them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 05:22:03 am
"No. No. No. Nononononono. This...this can't be right...oh, no...oh no....please, don't let me hurt you, please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 05:29:51 am
"You won't hurt me, Friesden, just like you won't hurt him. I know you won't because you told me he was your brother, and you love him, and you would never hurt the ones you love. Now please... help him."

Otik tightens her hold on Friesden just a bit.

"I know yer afraid, hun... but I'm right here. I'll stay right here, and I'll make sure ye dunnae hurt him. Okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 05:31:52 am
"Okay. Okay. Okay. Okay. I can. I can do this." Friesden breathes in deep a couple of times, steadying herself, and goes back to Heiro and continues the transfusion.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 18, 2012, 05:34:56 am
Otik stands by her, a wing draped across her back. Starkey tentatively moves to them, but a glare from Otik stops him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 06:03:44 am
((and that's scene. Next day.))


Friesden slowly begins to stir, her head warm and comfortable nestled deep in Khenal's wing. Her back is covered in Otik's wing, and as she wakes, she fights the desire to stay deep within and not move again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 18, 2012, 07:21:44 am
((I give impending doom full control of Lilac. Have her return as you-know-what if you want. Once again, good luck all of you, and i'm sorry I was such a bastard to you all.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Powder Miner on January 18, 2012, 12:58:34 pm
Powder Woodcutter was lying on the hospital bed. He'd woke up, but he couldn't stand, as he'd got a leg broken by the macetentacle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 18, 2012, 05:14:06 pm
Consciousness comes, unbidden and unwelcome.  I keep my eyes closed and shift slightly to be closer to Friesden, trying to recapture the peace of sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 05:22:42 pm
Friesden feels Khenal's movement and slides closer toward him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 18, 2012, 07:44:20 pm
Charity's Journal (The Date of Khenal's Birthday Party.) 100

Today, was far to emotional. I am exhausted. Early this afternoon, I went and found Khenal and Falcata in the barracks, and they bowed to me, again. I told them not to do that, that they were my friends and that my friends bow to nopony. I then gave Khenal his present, that wonderful spear, I had made just for him. Then he hugged me. He's such a wonderful stallion, if I wasn't I'm lucky to have him as a friend.

We then went to the party. Everypony was there. I talked to Thundersplinter, we haven't talked much since Falcata hammered her during the amulet incident, but it's good to know that we can still be friends. I talked to Starkey, he apologized for his actions that night. I didn't expect him to ever do that. We talked and, well, it's difficult to trust him, but after what happened next. I think I'll try.

While I was still talking with the Commander, Heiro ran up saying that Kris told him that Lilac Joker had gone off into the jungle. We mobilized a search. I saw Heiro slacking off talking with Friesden, so I ordered him to go inform Isos, so she could get the guard ready to help, but he back talked me. We started shouting at each other in the hall. I didn't want to waste the time, so I told him to do it or he'd be in a cell tomorrow. He finally relented and did his job, only after Friesden begged him.

We began the search and after about an hour, Khenal, Falcata, and I were ambushed by 4 Diomedians. Falcata and Khenal charged forward and engaged them, and they were winning, but a 5th one came up behind me and put a knife to my neck just as I was about to call for help. I thought I was done for when Corpural Herio rushed out of nowhere and knocked the tentacle pony away. They fought and Heiro won, but he had a bad stab wound, and was bleeding out. I signaled for help, and tried to control the bleeding as best I could. Starkey and Friesden arrived, and Friesden carried Heiro back to the hospital, Khenal accompanied Starkey to continue the search, and Falcata and I returned to town. Falcata had a few cuts from the ambush, and I thought it best to stay behind and manage things from the tower, as best I could.

Unfortunately, a couple more ponies got hurt, including Khenal. But they are all expected to recover. Worse yet though, a storm has set in and crippled visibility, Starkey has called off the search, I can't imagine it was easy for him. Lilac, is gone.

 I'm, going to give the family some time off work to grieve. They deserve it.


Charity's Journal 15th Galena, 100

The zebra's sent more of their kind this year, but they came not with arms and armor, but with wagons of goods to trade, and a diplomat to discuss terms for peace.

Naturally, I also wished to end this senseless fighting. The war is over.

Trade for the fortress was impossibly good. We acquired, metal bars, gems, several bags of sand, a couple barrels of drink, and many bins full of leather and cloth, along with some copper and iron armor, and two steel anvils for only one dress. Yes, all that for ONE dress. True the dress was decorated with rubicelle gems, and it was midnight blue dyed cave spider silk, but still that seemed almost too good of a deal, I gave them a few pig tail fiber bandannas, dyed emerald green, as an additional parting gift.

Charity's Journal 18th Galena, 100

A pair Keshi thieves where caught in a pair cage traps just on the south side of the river.

Charity's Journal 22nd Galena, 100

(The page is covered with tears and coated in spilled ink.)

Charity's Journal 23rd Galena, 100

There was a Diomedian ambush yesterday, they came out of the woods, and killed Thundersplinter. As she was being attacked, all the military ponies charged, trying to save her. The leader of the attack, a tentacle pony with a terrible iron whip, was chasing her, but when he saw the militia coming he tried to flee, right into a trap meant to catch large animals. We've yet to decide what to do with him. Another, a Keshi, didn't run, and he, he did terrible things to her, before he killed her. He cut her in her legs, and her back, and then he bit her mouth and shook her around, like he was trying to tear her face from her skull, before he struck her in the head with his axe killing her.

It was Ironya's son Buble, who killed the murderer, stabbed him in the head with that spear Ironya made him.

The rest of the fight was simple enough, one of the new recruits has a few minor injuries, but they're little more than scratches.

17th Sandstone 100

Bebmal a fisherpegasus, has been possessed by /something/ on his way back from fishing. He ran up to the leatherworks and barricaded the door.
__________________________________________________________________________________
On the morning of the 18th of Sandstone, of the year 100, Starkey and Otik awaken to find a pair of packages addressed to them. Both packages are relatively small, and unassuming.

One has a tag which reads.

To: Captain Otik
You are a better pony than I knew. I should not have doubted you. Use this to protect your family. Keep them safe.

Inside is The Violet Glaze

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Violet%20Glaze.png)

The other package reads.

To: Commander Starkey

Forgive me for doubting your Honesty. May you always return home safety.


And inside is a stunning suit of chain mail, of the highest caliber, decorated, with only the most choice materials. To hold it, in one's hooves, it is impossibly light, yet stronger than a dragon's scales. It is perfection.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Starkey%27s%20Shirt.png)


Charity's Journal 21st Sandstone, 100

10 more ponies have moved to Glitterglen, that brings our total population up to 133.

This wave contained.

Female Pegasus Mason
Female Royal (No useful skills.)
Male Earthpony spinner (married to the one below)
Female Earthpony planter
Female Royal Architect (married to the below and mother to the foal)
Male Pegasan soap maker
Male earthpony foal
Male Unicorn wood burner/furnace operator
Female Earthpony animal dissector
Female Unicorn Fisherpony

26th Sandstone, 100

Our possessed fisher pony has created a hood of leather, decorated with crystal glass and diomedian bone. It's wonderful, but unfortunately he can't remember making it. So, it's back to fishing for him.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Lucid%20Denomination.png)

1st Timber, 100

The smiths have long complained about the walk up and down the stairs from the forges to the dinning hall. Hopefully, starting today, I won't have to listen to that as much, as we've set up a new dinning room for the smiths on the same floor as the forges. Forgefire was commissioned to make the nickle silver chairs, and black bronze tables for the room, he did a good job on them, the room looks great. A few engravings on the wall and it'll be open for business.

12th Timber, 100

No sooner than had a cave pony caravan been spotted, when a group of Diomedians, with warhammers, save for their leader who brandished a curved sword, lept from hiding, and attacked, them. The cave pony merchants fought valiantly, the slippy who lead them webbed the diomedians, while they were pelted with poisoned tipped darts by his companion, a gorlack pony, and their guard, an enormous pony with a huge mane, bashed them with his mace, but he was mortally wounded in the fight.

Unfortunately, it seems that the loss of two of their compatriots has driven them mad. They are just running around babbling, on the surface. I'll have to ask Starkey and Isos, for advice, but they're busy chasing Parasprites away from the surface crops. I've set up Otik and Falcata's squads on the surface to guard the gate, in case of more raiders, while the militia and the guard deal with these blasted bugs.

1st Moonstone, 100

Winter has come. Or at least that's what the calendar I bought from the caravan last year says. A couple of parasprites got stuck in our cage traps. I'm not sure what the best thing to do with them at this point is. The merchants are still insane, but they aren't hostile. We've taken some of the equipment that they have abandoned.

4th Moonstone, 100

Cryptson has asked Falcata, for him to be admitted into the Ducal Guard, as a new recruit. Seems strange to me, as a member of my family he is one of those the Guard is meant to protect, but he's strong, and a good fighter, and his argument is that he's capable of protecting himself just fine. Falcata seemed a little confused over it, but she's happy to have him on board. However, it seems that Cryptson, and the others, have decided to make me train with them. Trying to teach me some self-defense just in case I need to protect myself, and after the incident with the tentacle pony in the jungle, I think they have a point.

12th Moonstone, 100

The insane merchant left at the usual time, still babbling, but they wandered off into the jungles, back the way they came. Probably, not sending the best image of us to the cave ponies, assuming they make it back home at all.

2nd Opal, 100

Little Daringsky is all grown up. It seems like only yesterday that he was born, and now he's out there in the jungle hunting to put food on the tables of Glitterglen. Oh how time flies. My little Adamant, will be grown too soon enough. It's sad to watch them grow up and leave you, but it's a happy kind of sad, because you know that they are going on to do great things.

6th Opal, 100

Adamant, is fully grown, and he looks so much like his father. Tall with a dark indigo coat. He's decided to follow his father into the mining profession, and we've arranged an apprenticeship for him with the miners here in Glitterglen.

14th Opal, 100

Our first run of the garbage disposal system has been successful.

15th Opal, 100

A strange occurrence has taken place. The rabbits have all vanished from the fields. Nopony has seen them since yesterday

16th Opal, 100

Using ashes somepony has written on the walls nearby the garbage incinerator “Bouncing Baby Bunnies Burning Brightly.” All the rabbits are still missing. We suspect foul play.


((Yes, I magma'd all the rabbits. I was tired of all them, and baby bunnies don't give any meat so I just wanted to get rid of them. But the mother and father of the hoard were somepony's pets, so I pastured them with the garbage and magma'd their pretty little heads off. No I don't have any plans for the mysterious bunny burner. But feel free to run with it. If you want.))

3rd Obsidian 100

Two of our prisoners, a Keshi theif, and the Tentacled lasher who lead Thundersplinter to her death, have been killed. I did not witness their demise, but it seems that Heiro of the Fortress Guard was sparring with them, and Osal and Madush saw them fighting, assumed a jailbreak and shot the Diomedians dead. Commander Starkey and Heiro seemed unjustifiably upset about this, but have mostly let it go as an honest misunderstanding. However, I want to know one thing. Who authorized Heiro to take the prisoners out and give them weapons! Because I most certainly would not have. I'll have to talk to him and make sure he knows that that is unacceptable behavior. We do not spar with honor-less raiders, and brigands who wish death to everypony in Glitterglen. They should have been executed months ago.


((In game I let Heiro beat on them for about a month with a wooden axe. When I decided that it was taking to long and he'd been kicked in the guts a few times already, I stationed Osal and Madush outside the arena, and they fired through the fortifications finishing them off. Then Heiro immediately went to sleep on the floor. If you write out the details Jax, feel free to use or ignore as much of that as you want. The beatings took Heiro from Novice to Proficient Axepony. That makes him as good with an axe as Khenal is with a spear, though Khenal's other combat skills are better, and Starkey could beat both of their flanks, with his good wing tied behind his back.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 18, 2012, 08:20:18 pm
Friesden's familiar warmth convinces me I don't need to be anywhere else.  I start to drift off again, with only one thought on my mind.

"Mmm, Friesden..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 08:22:39 pm
Friesden stirs a bit more, and moves up to Khenal's head, a similar thought on her mind. Before Khenal can fully wake, she kisses him, holding it for as long as she can.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 18, 2012, 08:31:43 pm
Friesden's kiss is something worth being awake for, and it gently draws me back to the waking world.  As I open my eyes, her beautiful face is the first thing I see.  Eventually, the kiss must come to an end.

"Mmm, Good morning, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 08:32:56 pm
"Now that you're awake it is..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 18, 2012, 08:58:29 pm
My gaze eventually drifts from Friesden to the rest of the room.  Otik is asleep nearby, and Powder is on his own bed with a cast on one of his legs.  Heiro is also on his own bed, and looks to be stable.  The doctor checking around doesn't look worried at least.  I return my eyes to Friesden, smiling.

"I knew you could save him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 09:04:26 pm
Friesden freezes, then tries to relax, and burrows into Khenal's wing again. "You won't let me hurt him, will you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 18, 2012, 09:09:57 pm
"I know you would never hurt him, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 18, 2012, 09:10:58 pm
"Okay..." She continues to burrow deep into Khenal's wing, before rising out again and giving Khenal another kiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 01:12:39 am
Otik slowly begins to stir, snuggling a little closer to Friesden and resting her chin on her back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 01:18:50 am
I break the kiss with the same reluctance as I would have for pouring out water in the desert as Otik begins to stir.

"Looks like your Mom is awake, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 01:26:32 am
"That's good. You and she will stop me if I...If I...If I try anything to hurt Heiro, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 01:34:45 am
Finally, Otik begins to wake. She moves up beside Friesden, giving her a brief nuzzle and draping a wing across her back.

"Mmm... mornin', sunshine. Feelin' better?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 01:37:45 am
"...I don't know. All I know is that I don't want to hurt anypony...not even the diomedians who attack us..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 01:41:14 am
Heiro groans and starts to stir on his bed
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 01:44:42 am
Otik looks over towards Hiero's bed.

"Well it sounds like yer big brother's gonna be okay."

She plants a kiss on Friesden's cheek.

"Y'saved another pony, Fri. I'm proud o' ye."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 01:46:08 am
I smile and nod, agreeing with Otik.

"So am I."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 01:47:45 am
Falcata and Kris make their way down the hallway toward the hospital.  Her bandages hadn't gotten any more red overnight, but it was probably time to check them at least.  And check on Heiro.  When she left the night before, the doctors said that he was stable and would be fine, and with the hospital pretty much full she elected to just go home.  Kris took a little convincing, but eventually relented and joined her.

The two walk in as Heiro stirs.  Kris steps over to his bed and watches as he wakes, but doesn't say anything yet.  Falcata takes a look at him, relieved that he was seemingly well, then turns her attention to the knot of ponies.  Seemed like she got here just in time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 01:48:29 am
"Please. You won't let me hurt him, or Starkey, will you? I don't want to hurt anyponies."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 01:50:17 am
Heiro opens his eyes and looks down at Kris "Heyas little one, how you doin'?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on January 19, 2012, 01:50:44 am
Somewhere.....

Where the sun is below the horizon lighting the world with an eternal morning twilight;
    Under-lighting pony-shaped clouds with a golden rosy glow.
There is an infinite field of dew-laden grasses as soft as clouds and;
    Filling the air with the heady scent of midnight berry wine.
Whirlwinds of brightly coloured butter-pegasi erupt from the grasses and;
    Swirl about with the gentle breezes.
A filly, about to come of age, gambols through one such whirlwind;
    The butter-pegasi buffet her with their wings in a playful game;
    Her head and tail high as the cool, crisp wind tousles her mane.
Her name is ThunderSplinter and she is at peace - unfettered, carefree and;
    Untroubled by the woes of the world left behind;
    A world and a life little more than a fading memory.
Is this Heaven? Certainly for ThunderSplinter, it is.
Where the clouds remind her of beloved friends;
    Where the golden morning will never wane;
    Where the night shall never hold sway.

Somewhere...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 01:53:05 am
Kris smiles.  "I'm doing fine.  How about you?  Feeling better?"

Falcata steps over and adds a smile of her own.  "Good morning.  You look a lot better, how are you feeling?"

((That's awesome, Darkening Kaos.  Darn you... I'm this close to tearing up here!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 01:53:48 am
Friesden freezes at the sound of Heiro's voice, and tries to curl up and hide.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 01:57:35 am
"Ugh... My side hurts.... not to mention... Thank you for helping me remember Falcata but..." Heiro looks around nervously, "I-I'm a keshi... a diomedian... I-I wonder... how will ponies look at me now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 01:59:54 am
"It's alright, Friesden.  You won't try to hurt them.  You love them."


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Nice post, Darkening.  Thundersplinter deserves Heaven.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on January 19, 2012, 02:05:14 am
((Sometimes, she deserved a better player to direct her actions - her eulogy was my way of making it up to her))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 02:05:53 am
As the other ponies all turn their attention to Hiero, Starkey tentatively creeps into the hospital, looking for all the world like a whipped puppy.

((And made it up you have. Very nice.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:07:33 am
"...Please? Can you promise me you'll stop me, however you have to? Even...even if you have...if you have to kill me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 02:08:22 am
"Anything to help," she replies, before raising an eyebrow and looking cautiously back to the other ponies in the room.  "Everypony here... seems to be okay with it, I think."

She leans in a little closer and lowers her voice slightly.  "I... can't speak for everypony of course... but I don't think it's a big deal... and you don't have to tell anypony else if you want to...  I won't if you don't want me to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 02:11:52 am
"Why are you worried about hurting Heiro and Starkey?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:14:40 am
"Because...because Heiro's a diomedian and so is Starkey. And...and...and...last time...last time I bumped into some diomedians, I killed them all!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 02:21:31 am
Otik winces a bit to hear Friesden call her father by name.

"I remember, hun. I wos there. But... those ponies were raiders. They were goin' t'kill us all. Hiero an'... yer father... they love ye. I dunnae think ye'll hurt 'em."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:24:16 am
"But what if I do? What if I hurt dad?"

New tears are threatening to conquer and pass through her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 02:26:10 am
I gently nuzzle Friesden, trying to help her calm down.

"You wont."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:27:54 am
"Please. Can you just promise me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 02:32:39 am
Hearing the fear in Friesden's voice, Starkey decides his presence would only serve to make things worse. Fighting back tears, he does his best to slink away before anypony notices.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:33:56 am
"Please! I don't want dad to get hurt by me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 02:34:21 am
"S-starkey that you? S-sorry I got injured sir" Heiro tries a salute but winces at the pain in his side.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 02:35:39 am
"I promise you won't hurt them, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:36:34 am
"Okay. Okay. Okay." She begins to calm down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 02:37:08 am
Falcata looks over to the doorway and notices the tail end of Captain Starkey leaving the hospital.

"Oh, captain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 02:38:47 am
Starkey freezes. He slowly, nervously turns to face Hiero.

"I-It's... quite alright, Hiero. I, uh, I understandandIreallyoughttobegoingnow."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:39:47 am
"Is...is that Dad? Can...I want to speak to him. You won't let me hurt him, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 02:40:42 am
"What w-why... I-I see... I'm just a keshi... never mind just leave..." Heiro rolls over and stares at the wall tears threatening to form in his eyes...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 02:43:03 am
"W-What? No, it's-I-I-"

He hears Friesden asking for him.

"F-Friesden? You want to talk... to me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:45:54 am
"Dad? Can you come here? Khenal and mum will keep you safe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 02:48:44 am
Starkey tentatively approaches the bed, keeping his eyes low.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 02:51:36 am
Falcata bites her lip and fidgets nervously.  She had no idea what to say... what do you say in a situation like this?  Tell him it was okay to be a diomedian?  That probably wouldn't help...

"Uh... I..."

Kris breaks the awkwardness by saying, "Um, are you okay, Mr. Heiro?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:52:50 am
"Dad? Can you look up at me?" Friesden asks as she raises her head from beneath Khenal's wing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 02:55:09 am
Starkey slowly raises his head to lookat Friesden. He opens his mouth, desperately searching for words.

"I-I... Frie-... I'm..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 02:56:16 am
"Dad! I'm so sorry! I'm sorry for scaring you! Please...can you forgive me? I'm sorry!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 02:56:56 am
"Yeah, I'm fine... you don't have to pretend to like me anymore... go ahead and do what you want..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 02:59:57 am
Finally, he closes his eyes and inhales deeply.

"Friesden! I'm so sorry! I'm sorry for scaring you! Please...can you forgive me? I'm sorry!"

As he - well, they finish, he looks up at Friesden in stunned silence. Finally, he manages:

"I... what?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 03:01:05 am
"Pretend?  But... I don't understand..."

Falcata sits and tries to think of something meaningful to add.  It wasn't much...  "It's alright, corporal... we don't care that you're a keshi pony.  That doesn't change anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 03:02:56 am
"R-really... Y-you mean that? B-but Starkey..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 03:05:01 am
"I was just too scared about...about what happened...that day with Carrot and Otik and Khenal... And what I did to the diomedians. I... I didn't want to do it to you or Heiro! Even...even if you didn't die...I couldn't live with knowing I hurt you or him!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 03:09:54 am
"I... when I told you about what I was, and you were so scared... I was so afraid you would never want to speak to me again, and... I don't think I could bear that, even if it were for my own good..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 03:10:02 am
"Of course."  Falcata searches her mind for an appropriate thing to add... oh, that would work.  "We're the products of our actions, not our heritage.  Being a keshi doesn't change who you are."

After all, the diomedians had done less to her family than "regular" ponies.  Not necessarily true of everypony else in Glitterglen, though.

Kris makes a small smile.  He just seemed like a normal pony to her.
  "Uh, yeah, what mom said."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 03:12:03 am
Heiro rolls back, a small smile on his face, his eyes still watery "T-thanks... a-at least I have you two..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 03:13:35 am
"I'm so sorry! But... I still don't trust myself... I've done so many bad things... I don't want to do this one. Can...can you forgive me if I can only see you with mum and Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 03:21:04 am
"I've... I've hated every moment I spent away from you, but... I will bear it, for you, my little one."

Starkey is momentarily overcome with tears of joy.

"I... oh Friesden, I want to hold you... can I hold you, please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 03:22:48 am
"...please? Can you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 03:23:05 am
Falcata gives him a nod and a smile.  "Don't worry about it.  I won't tell anypony... if that's what you want."

And she'd best not hear anything bad coming from this among the guard.  She wasn't in the guard anymore, strictly, but she could probably get Isos to do something about it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 03:24:25 am
"N-no... I-I need to be proud of my family... y-you can tell... a-as long as I have you and Kris... and Friesden... how is she?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 03:26:45 am
"I don't know..." she looks back to the conversation unfolding behind them.  She wasn't sure she liked the expressions on Captain Starkey and Friesden's faces.  Could be good.  Could be bad.  She always expected bad.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 03:27:21 am
Starkey practically leaps onto the bed, wrapping his hooves and wings around Friesdenand clutching her to his chest.

"Oh F-Friesden... I'm so sorry... I love you so much..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 03:29:34 am
"Dad! I'm so sorry! I love you too!" Friesden wraps her legs and wings around Starkey in return, holding herself to her father.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 03:56:48 am
Starkey gently leans out of the hug to look down at Friesden.

"And so... does this mean you're okay to... be around Hiero too? so long as Khenal and your mum are there?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 03:58:35 am
"I...I can...I can try."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 04:01:48 am
Otik moves up beside Friesden.

"Would ye like... t'go ahead an' give it a try now? I'm sure he'd love t'see his lit'l sis right now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 04:04:15 am
I prepare to get up as well, still favoring my injured foreleg.

"I think he might like to thank you for saving him, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 04:06:01 am
Friesden nods, and sliding free of their embraces, she hops onto the floor. Hesitantly, she heads over to Heiro. As she does so, a peculiar smell fills the air...one that she knows well. Trying to ignore it, she gets to Heiro.

"How are you doing big bro-" she starts, but cuts off when she sees her brother's face. The eye sockets are empty and the flesh removed. All that stares back is a grinning skull, and she can hear the buzzing of flies.


She screams, and falls to the ground, thrashing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 04:11:45 am
Falcata and Kris both recoil at Friesden's outburst.  Falcata looks frantically back and forth between her and Heiro, trying to figure out what the clop happened.

"Friesden!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 04:14:25 am
Starkey leaps off he bed, moving to Friesden.

"Friesden! What's-"

Otik holds out a hoof, stepping between them.

"No, Stars. You cannae help 'er."


"...But she-"

"It's not yer fault, hun. I'm not angry. It's just th' way it is. Please, stand back."

"I... you're right."

Starkey sullenly, reluctantly obeys, placing himself in a corner away from Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 04:15:45 am
"Friesden!"

I fall out of bed and limp towards her, horn glowing as I try to levitate her so she can't hurt herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 04:17:42 am
Friesden continues to thrash as she is lifted.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 04:17:52 am
"F-friesden... j-ust l-looking at me n-now that y-you know..." Heiro breaks down, crying heavily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 04:25:04 am
"Friesden?  Can you hear me?  Please, say something..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 04:29:59 am
Friesden doesn't respond, merely continuing to thrash.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 04:56:21 am
Otik nervously glances between Khenal and Friesden.

"Khenal... wot's wrong with her? She was fine only a moment before, an' she seemed perfectly okay t'see Hiero. Wot happened?"

She ponders for a moment.

"Ye dunnae think it could be... another daemon, do ye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 05:13:22 am
"I... I don't know.  All I can think is... what if her fears weren't unfounded?  Something must be wrong, and we might need to try to go in and talk with her directly.  I think you should come, Otik.  She wanted you close."

I turn my head to Falcata.  "Falcata!  I think I'll need your help as well.  Having somepony with experience in a mindscape would be a load off my... well, mind."

They both nod agreement and I start preparing the link spell.  It gets more complicated with more minds, so I close my eyes to concentrate.

From under Heiro's bed, however, comes an adorable little complication in the form of Kris.  Her horn glows softly with her anesthesia spell as she slowly approaches the still-flailing Friesden.  Falcata notices her a fraction of a second before one of Friesden's legs connects with the side of Kris' head.


"Kris!"

The shout forces my eyes open in a flash, and seeing Kris knocked away by Friesden shatters my concentration.  The spell goes out of control.  The last thing I see before blacking out is a few beams of magic seeming to cast around, looking for something, or somepony.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 05:13:51 am
When the ponies awaken, they are in a hall, seemingly endless, with walls of mirrors. It goes straight on.

As they pass by the mirrors, their reflections are warped. Not shorter, not taller, not thinner, not fatter. No, the reflections are more unnatural than these. When Heiro is reflected, the mirror shows a young white alicorn. Khenal's appearance is replaced by that of a former alicorn familiar to all there.

Falcata stares into her reflection, and the eyes that stare back are full of greed and avariciousness. Next to her, Otik's reflection licks its lips and stares right through Otik, to Khenal, or Heiro, or Starkey, or Falcata.

Starkey's reflection is not the pegasus familiar to all, but a looming shadowbolt, wings and fangs in full display. The fangs are still marked with what appears to be blood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 05:24:12 am
I stare at my reflection with cold hatred, trying to make sure I stay out of hoof's reach so I don't smash the mirrors.

"Farquaad..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 05:28:34 am
Heiro looks close at the image in the mirror. "A-an alicorn... heh I wish... maybe then she wouldn't hate me... If only..." He reaches out a hoof softly touching his reflection...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 05:31:42 am
The mirror remains in place.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 05:31:48 am
Otik recoils from her reflection.

"No... tha's wrong, I'd never... not like that..."

Starkey is frozen in place, staaring up at the specter in the mirror in shock and dismay.


"...D-Dad?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 05:51:22 am
"Heh, what were you expecting, to suddenly transform? I'm no alicorn, I'm just a pitiful keshi... my little sis... she can't even stand to look at me now..." Heiro looks back at the reflection "Buck it, I don't need to change. If she can't stand my presence so what."

 Heiros hooves start to shake with anger. "She's my family, I will protect her through everything... this reflection isn't me... and it isn't what my little sis should see me as. Not what anypony should see me as... why... WHY! ARE! YOU! HERE! WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING AT!" Heiro yells out as he hammers at the mirror, striking with all his anger. Punctuating every shouted word with a rage fueled strike of his hoof.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 19, 2012, 07:57:09 am
((I know that alot of you still hate me, and I don't mean to interrupt, but is there any point at all in asking for the chance to start over? If no, I won't bother any of you ever again, and i'll just spend my life watching the thread and never try anything so stupid again. If yes, you'll never regret it, I'd sit and moderate the IRC and nothing else if that's what you all want. Please...if it's still no, then could you at least  forgive me? If I can't even have that, then let me just say this, Dsarker, keep being fantastic as always! Jax, I hope your bipolar gets better! Telgin and Kryptid, both of you better become famous for all of the work you've both done! Khenal, live a great life! Ansontan, show up more, because you're needed! Impending Doom, I know you will be an amazing engineer! Lastly...KingStrongBeard, no matter how many times you say it, you're still better than me in every way! If you've read this far...thank you for that alone.))!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 01:16:10 pm
Falcata feels her heart sink as she sees her reflection in the mirrors.  "I... don't understand... does she really look at me this way?"  And if not... what was the symbolism behind all of this?  This was all Khenal's specialty... something she'd never understand the way he did.

((Is everypony together or are we isolated?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 01:20:22 pm
As the mirror shatters, Heiro's reflection changes.

The white seems to fade into a light shade of indigo, his mane and tail a pale blue.



((all together.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 02:18:22 pm
Falcata looks away from her reflection to see everypony else.  Their reflections... none of them were right either.  Who was the alicorn foal?  The alicorn stallion... was that Friesden's father?  And who was the menacing shadowbolt?  The antithesis of Captain Starkey?  A bolt of ice runs down her spine as Lieutenant Otik's reflection stares at her, an almost hungry expression on its face.

These couldn't just be the antitheses of what Friesden thought of them.  That wouldn't make any sense for Heiro... or Khenal.  Did... did she really think of them this way?

Heiro's outburst snaps her out of her trip through her thoughts, as the mirror shatters noisily.  Her eyes go wide with fear.


"Corporal!  We've got to be careful, we-we can cause a lot of damage in here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 02:28:11 pm
"T-the reflection... it changed... I-It's still not me though... M-maybe I just need to smash more..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 03:08:11 pm
Her eyes open more wide, if that was possible, and she shakes her head.  "No, no, no... we could really hurt Friesden."  She looks at Heiro's reflection and sees that the alicorn has shifted hues to more closely match him.  "I... think?"

Her attention turns to Khenal.  Maybe Heiro was on to something, but he would know.  She wasn't about to smash anything without his approval.  "Khenal, what do you make of this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 03:16:04 pm
The sound of shattering glass draws my attention away from my own reflection.  I prepare to lay into him about how to behave in a mind, when I notice his reflection.  It's not a true reflection yet, but it's no longer Mica, either.

"He... he might be onto something.  Take it slow, though."

I turn back to my own reflection, seeing Farquaad again.  It might not be the real thing, but putting my hoof through his face still makes me feel a little better.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 03:18:04 pm
Even as the glass shatters, Khenal's reflection starts the change back to the real him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 03:23:00 pm
Falcata turns back to her reflection and stares at the avarice on her face.  No... this wasn't her.  With significant trepidation she raises a hoof to the mirror and places it against the surface.  Well, here goes nothing.

She rears back and brings her weight down onto the mirror with both hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 03:24:33 pm
The greed in the reflection's eyes dims even in the shattered glass falling to the floor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 03:47:00 pm
Yes... this did appear to be... doing something at least.  What this would accomplish she wasn't sure, but she didn't want to see that expression on her face ever again.  She gives the mirror another solid blow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 03:53:04 pm
As another mirror shatters under Falcata's hooves, the avarice fades yet more.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 04:01:34 pm
She raises her hooves against another mirror where she can still glimpse traces of the greedy expression, hoping that destroying it would remove the final vestiges of the wrongness plaguing her reflection.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 04:12:52 pm
As Falcata smashes the mirror, the greed drains from her reflection's eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 04:36:15 pm
Starkey runs a hoof gingerly across the mirror.

"Not dad then, eh? You look like him... because you look like me."

"...no," He whispers, "You're not like me."

He braces himself against the glass as he raises the other hoof to strike.

"You're just another barbarian, come to hurt my little girl."

Beside him, Otik twirls around in place, bucking the lecherous reflection with all her might.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 04:38:13 pm
As the mirrors shatter, the reflections begin the change back to normal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 04:40:57 pm
Heiro moves slowly from mirror to mirror, shattering each. He keeps going, grinning widely at the chance to release his rage on something, anything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 04:42:43 pm
Soon Heiro's reflection shows his true self.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 19, 2012, 04:54:00 pm
Starkey and Otik glide down the hall in opposite directions, swiftly destroying each mirror before moving on to the next.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 04:55:02 pm
Before long, their reflections match their appearance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 09:41:16 pm
Once Khenal appears normal, the remaining mirrors smash, and where one was, a door appears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 09:43:28 pm
I look back to the others.

"I hope that was right.  And I hope we're ready for whatever is next.

I slowly open the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on January 19, 2012, 09:45:25 pm
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 09:49:42 pm
The corridor beyond is filled with rotting corpses. Flies are buzzing around them. Worse...they can recognise the dead, all members of the fort.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: The Master on January 19, 2012, 10:02:18 pm
((You're copying off of one of my scenes now? Really?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 10:09:27 pm
Falcata's eyes snap open as she takes in the horror surrounding her.  She sees many ponies she recognized... Khenal... Charity... Friesden... Heiro...  her heart skips a beat as she sees her own rotting corpse among the piles.  Imaginary as it all was, she feels a horrible sense of wrongness just being in the vicinity of the corpses.  Her stomach lurches and she tries to bolt her vision to the floor just in front of her.  It was all fake... none of it was real... just ignore it.

Then she sees Kris' rotting body sprawled next to her.  She lets out a horrified shriek and dances away from the corpse of her daughter, backing away and halting as she stumbles into everypony else.

She gasps and tries to catch her breath, suddenly feeling as if she'd galloped a marathong.  Her heart thunders in her chest, and she looks down, shuts her eyes and places a hoof across them.


"It's... it's not real... it's not real..." she intones to herself.  She keeps her eyes shut and tries to level her breathing, not wanting to look anypony else there in the eye.  It was fake... why should a grown mare, a soldier at that, react like this to something she knew wasn't real...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 10:12:36 pm
Even as the group walk through the corridor, the bodies multiply, until they are entirely surrounded by the corpses, on all sides above and below.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 19, 2012, 10:14:46 pm
"So much death... wasteful... even if it's not real..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 10:14:57 pm
I gently prod my own corpse, trying to make sense of what we're seeing.

"So much death... why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 19, 2012, 10:17:28 pm
The wounds are quite easy to guess. They are caused by a small, sharp blade. Most of the ponies don't even appear to have defensive wounds.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 19, 2012, 10:25:10 pm
"She's afraid of what she might do..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 19, 2012, 10:29:03 pm
Falcata steps past the corpse of Kris and tries to strengthen her resolve.  Why did things look this bad in Friesden's mind?  And she could only guess they weren't even deep into it yet... Friesden had done some bad things in her past, but as far as shew knew Friesden had moved on past that spiritually and probably even mentally in some sense or another.

She looks aside as she catches sight of Thundersplinter's corpse.  She didn't want to think about that right now... how close to causing that she had been...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 01:27:53 am
Otik recoils from the remains of her slain squadmates, her own carcass sprawled atop the rest. She shuts her eyes and turns away from the scene. As she does, she feels a wing gently draped across her back.

"It's not real, hun. None of it. Don't pay it any mind."

Starkey leans into his love, gently guiding her back to the others, shielding her eyes from the sight of his own maggot-ridden corpse.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 01:36:20 am
My horn glows softly as I try to shift the corpses out of the way and give us room to pass the corridor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 01:38:10 am
For every one that is moved, ten more take its place.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 01:41:18 am
Falcata watches in dismay as the corpse piles get larger as Khenal works.  So much for that.  She watches a corpse of somepony she didn't recognize tumble past her, and an idea strikes her.

"Could we... destroy the bodies maybe?  Burn them?  Like a funeral pyre?  There's so many though... I don't know if that's a good idea..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 01:58:55 am
I eye the bodies nervously, considering Falcata's idea.

"Putting them to rest like that might work... but I'm no good with funeral rites.  Starkey, think you could do that while Falcata and I try to burn them?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 02:02:14 am
"Aye, I know a bit about last rites. More than I really want to."

Starkey moves off to a pile of corpses, gesturing for Hiero to follow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 02:11:25 am
Falcata watches as the two begin to perform the last rites on the bodies, and she follows Khenal's lead on setting them alight.  She hoped this worked.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 02:13:16 am
As the corpses burned, the corridor emptied, and soon, the way through was clear. A door, only a short walk away, was clear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 02:16:40 am
I approach the door, waiting for everypony to indicate they're ready before opening it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 02:18:39 am
Heiro moves up close behind. "What do you think's behind this one?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 02:21:12 am
"Only one way to find out. Khenal, would you do the honors?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 02:22:30 am
"Let's go," Falcata agrees, not sure she was really ready to see what was coming up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 02:22:53 am
When the door swings open, the room is bare but for two things. Firstly, Friesden is hanging from the center, a noose around her neck. She swings back and forth, as in in a gentle breeze. Next to her is dug a grave.

On the other side of the room is a door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 02:26:05 am
"FRIESDEN!!"

My horn flashes and I try to levitate her and untie the noose, hoping she's still alive.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 02:26:57 am
"Friesden... no..nonononononono.... It's not real... have to focus....not real... K-khenal lets just do what we need to and move on quickly..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 02:29:25 am
Falcata recoils as she sees Friesden's body hanging limply from the noose.  She rallies quickly though.  It wasn't real...

But she was genuinely starting to worry over the cause of all of this...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 02:30:32 am
Friesden hangs loosely in Khenal's magic, clearly dead, and with a broken neck to boot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 02:33:54 am
Otik stifles a sob. Starkey rests a hoof on Khenal's back.

"It... It's not her, lad. Not really."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 02:34:09 am
'It... It's not real.  It's not her Self...  She's fine...'

I still shed tears as I carefully inter her in the grave, trying not to think of the headstone in my own mindscape.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 02:35:14 am
Even as her body touches the dirt, the door audibly unlocks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 02:40:01 am
I take a few moments to try to compose myself, before checking that everypony is ready and opening the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 02:41:28 am
In the room is Friesden, a scalpel in her mouth. She stands between the group and the door beyond.

"None shall pass," are her only words.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 02:42:15 am
"Why can't we pass?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 02:44:00 am
"Because I will kill you if you try. You will perish. Friesden shall never be fixed."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 02:46:25 am
"...You aren't Friesden.  Why do you want her to stay broken?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 02:46:50 am
"You aren't Friesden then? And we have to pass you to help her? Seems simple... Khenal, would killing a fake hurt Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 02:48:29 am
Falcata looks at the mare in front of them.  This wasn't really her... but it was probably going to be tough for everypony to do what they had to get past her.  Would she have to be the one to do the job?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 02:50:17 am
"Because that is my Duty, little ponies. Father. Mother. Brother. Lover. Friend. My Duty to Her Above Us is to stop you here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 02:51:36 am
"Why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 02:53:44 am
"My Duty is not to question it. Now kill me or die in my place, for Her Above!"

Friesden charges forth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 02:57:58 am
"That answers that at least." Heiro brings Midnight's axe around, "Sorry... but you aren't real, you aren't my little sis." He jumps forward slashing Midnight's axe through the air at the false Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 03:01:06 am
Almost imperceptibly, Friesden's head tilts back, and the scalpel is set to parry the axe swing. With a jolt that almost causes the axe to fly off, the scalpel meets the axe, and holds firm. Red letters mark the blade: "Kindness".
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 03:06:15 am
Starkey's Honesty leaps into being in his grasp. He rears up, drawing the axe back for a heavy overhead swing. But at the last second, he instead jabs forward with the weapon's jeweled pommel.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 03:30:53 am
The scalpel spins up, almost sentient itself, and before Starkey can adjust his blow, the scalpel pulls an edge forward, slashing it across her neck with a thick arterial flow.

"You...my Kindness...betrayed me... Father, kill me cleanly."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 03:35:54 am
Honesty falls from Starkey's hooves, clattering to the ground. forgetting the battle, he rushes in to catch Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 03:37:43 am
"Father...good...good...good luck," she says, and breathes her last.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 03:40:22 am
"F-Friesden, I - No... N-No, not real, it isn't real... i-it isn't..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 03:43:07 am
"No it's not, come on Starkey, Friesdens ahead! No time to waste in sorrow right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 03:44:59 am
'It's not her, it's not her Self, she's fine...'

I hesitantly step forward to lay a hoof on Starkey's withers, my horn glowing with the fire spell.


"The..."

I swallow, trying to not break down.

"The Funeral rites?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 03:54:03 am
Starkey steadily looks up at Heiro.

"Y-You're... right. W-We need to keep moving."

He turns to Khenal.

"...do you... think that's what we're supposed to do? We've already... buried her... once."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 03:57:20 am
'It's not her, it's not her Self, she's fine...'

"It... just doesn't feel right to just leave h-the body lying around."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 03:59:12 am
Friesden fades away, dropping the scalpel she held.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 04:07:24 am
'It's not her, it's not her Self, she's fine...'

My horn glows softly as I solemnly pick up the fallen scalpel and walk towards the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 04:09:51 am
The door opens, and a cursory glance indicates nothing in the way, just a simple door at the end. On entering, however, Heiro disappears, and you can see the walls, filled with pictures of a white alicorn foal that Otik recognises well. On the roof the letters "MICA" are carved in red.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 04:14:37 am
Otik approaches the wall, laying a hoof on one of the lagher pictures, depicting a tall, handsome white alicorn adorned the garb of an Inquisitor.

"M-Mica... my..."

"Wait," she turns back to the others, confusion on her face, "Why is my son... in her head?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 04:41:58 am
'Otik's Mica?  Why would...'

My eyes widen in shock as the dots finally connect.  'Friesden's Mica and Otik's Mica!  They're the same Mica!'

I try my best to avoid Otik's gaze and instead examine the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 04:43:12 am
The room is bare except for the pictures and the carving. The door at the end appears unlocked.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 04:50:55 am
'Unlocked?  That's odd.  And Heiro vanished.  Hmm, Heiro...'

"Heiro?  If you can hear me, would you please open the door?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 04:51:34 am
Silence is his only response.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 04:52:59 am
After a minute or so of silence, I carefully open the door myself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 04:54:36 am
Opening the door reveals a large, opulent room. In the center is an empty throne of gold, and around it, several ponies who have no apparent faces are bowed down. Heiro joins Khenal as he passes through with Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 04:57:30 am
Otik hesitates, giving the previous room one more glance before following.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 04:58:50 am
"Well... I can guess what this is about... pretty though..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 05:00:35 am
The faceless ponies turn, and come towards the group. Without speaking, they surround Khenal and bring him to the throne, laying him down. At that, a bell rings, and from another door comes Friesden, who approaches Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 05:04:42 am
"Woah, hey, what?  Stop it!"

I try to free myself from the faceless ponies as they carry me to the throne, but to no avail.  Even trying to levitate them away from me does nothing.  After they place me there, I notice Friesden approaching.

"Friesden!  Can you help me, please?  They won't let me go."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 05:07:33 am
"It is only proper, my Emperor," she says as she bows down before him, her head at his hooves. Wordlessly, she begins to lick them clean.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 05:10:40 am
Heiro walks forward, "Hey Friesden? Whats up? Anything I can help with?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 05:14:17 am
"Emperor?  What are you talking- Aah!  No, stop, please!"

I struggle against the faceless, but they prove immovable.  Raw panic seeps into my voice as I try to convince Friesden to stop.  Heiro seeming to want to help does nothing to help my mental state.

"Friesden!  Please, you're better than to lick my hooves clean!  I don't deserve for anypony to treat me like that!  Please, stop!  Help!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 05:17:27 am
Before too long, Friesden has finished the hooflicking, and backs away, still crouched low. She fades into the air, and as she does, the faceless disappear as well, and Khenal is released.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 05:18:32 am
"That was weird... she didn't even listen to me... you okay Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 05:20:39 am
I lay on the throne, curled and shivering in a mixture of fear and self-loathing, whimpering to myself.

"No... Why, why?!  Please no... I don't deserve anything... No no no..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 09:22:47 am
Falcata watches with difficulty as Khenal struggles against the mass of ponies and endures the hooflicking by Friesden.  She knew she wouldn't have liked to be in his position, and after what happened in her own head she didn't really need to question Khenal's reaction.  He reacted better than she would have expected, given the circumstances.

She takes a cautious step toward the throne, chancing a curious glance to Heiro as she passes him.  His reaction to the entire thing seemed peculiar to say the least.  He didn't seem to find this particularly strange, but maybe he was just becoming inured to everything that was happening in Friesden's head.  It was all fake after all.  But... wanting to help her?

No time to worry with that right now.  She steps up to the throne and looks Khenal in the eyes.


"Khenal?  Khenal... relax... none of this is real... none of it..."

At least she really hoped so.  After what Friesden had asked of her before... maybe not...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 04:37:55 pm
I continue shivering as Falcata looks into my eyes.

"I-it's not real, b-but... she wants it to be.  I can't... I don't..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 04:42:24 pm
"Hey, Khenal, come on you need to focus. We need your help if we're gonna save Friesden. If you don't pull yourself together we could lose her. I-I don't want to lose one of my family..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 05:00:15 pm
Falcata flounders for a moment.  What do you say to something like that?  What if he was right?  What would she do in his position?  She bites her lip in indecision.

As Heiro speaks up, she slowly nods.


"Yes... we... should move on."  She considers trying to relate the symbolism to something else, but the only things she could think up just sounded worse.  Something about how he was the most important pony to her in the world?  No... that would probably just backfire.  "Corporal Heiro is right.  We have to help Friesden.  It's going to be alright, but we need you for this..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 05:08:08 pm
"Keep it together, lad. Friesden only thinks she wants this. It's just another product of her fractured mind, and we can mend it like all the others. Maybe... maybe you should try showing her what you really want from her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 05:12:51 pm
'Friesden.  Have to save Friesden...'

"R-right.  Gotta... Gotta get up for her, gotta help her."

I shakily try to get to my hooves, needing the support of my friends to do so.  Once standing, I look around.

"Where... where's the door?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 05:13:56 pm
As if in answer, the throne fades away, replaced by a shimmering door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 05:29:27 pm
I try to take a few moments to collect myself and calm down, but this room makes it too difficult to make much progress.  Uneasily, I reach to open the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 05:36:39 pm
A feeling of peace washes over Khenal as his hoof touches the door. As it does, the door is swung open from the room within. Stepping inside, the room is a calm, soothing place. In the middle is Friesden. Opening the door are living statues, of Khenal, who swing the door closed as the group passes through. They stand at attention, and remain still.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 07:13:58 pm
I can't help but feel reassured by the peace of this room.  I smile as I walk towards Friesden.

"Friesden..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 07:15:47 pm
The peace abruptly disappears, and Friesden looks up in fear, and scurries to one of the corners of the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 07:55:00 pm
"Friesden?  Wait, please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 07:56:43 pm
"No....no....no," she says, huddling on the floor in the corner.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 08:00:11 pm
Falcata cautiously approaches, careful not to get closer than Khenal was.  "Friesden?  What's the matter?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 08:04:33 pm
"It's...it's....oh no...oh no..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 08:10:53 pm
Otik steps forward, standing slightly behind Khenal.

"Fri? I-It's mum. What's wrong, Fri?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 08:16:21 pm
"I...everything. It's not right!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 08:23:34 pm
She steps from behind Khenal, moving to set beside Friesden.

"Ooh, heeey... It's alright, hun. Yer gonna be alright. We're here t'fix everythin'."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 08:29:19 pm
As Otik sits down, she brushes up against Friesden. In a flash, she disappears, replaced by one of the statues. A door swings open where there was none before, and an enchanting, alluring scent comes from the room it leads to.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 09:13:27 pm
Well, this door was already open, and Falcata was closest to it.  The smell was puzzling, but inviting.  She steps through the door, unable to resist satisfying her curiosity.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 09:18:58 pm
Beyond the door is a statue hall. Two ponies repeated throughout the hall. One is clearly Khenal, and he holds the other pony with a lover's tenderness.

Falcata has to focus, but despite what she would think...the other pony is indeed her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 09:21:37 pm
Heiro follows behind Falcata looking at the statues. "Wow... I knew she worried but... all of this..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 09:25:45 pm
As I enter the new room, my heart sinks.

"Oh Friesden.  You are the only mare for me, why can't I show you that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 09:25:57 pm
Falcata gawks at the statues.  "I... but... wh-wha..."  She looks at Khenal with more than a hint of trepidation, then back to the statues.

"Surely she doesn't... I-I mean..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 09:29:02 pm
"Well I won't deny that I've... suspected things... at times. But I never seriously thought that you and..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 09:37:08 pm
I examine one of the statues, hoping to find something of Friesden.  All I find, however, is her name carved into it.  I gently run my hoof over the name of my beloved.

"Friesden, I love you.  I love you so much."

I gently kiss Friesden's engraved name.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 09:47:32 pm
The kiss does nothing, and a small sob fills the hall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 20, 2012, 09:57:19 pm
I lift my head from the statue and look around, trying to find the source of the sobbing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 09:58:42 pm
The sob has already faded.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 20, 2012, 10:20:14 pm
Falcata tries to calm her nerves and looks at the statues again as Starkey comments on what he sees.  "D-Don't be ridiculous..."

She looks over to Khenal and watches as he kisses the engraving on the statue.  What were they supposed to do here?  If that didn't work, what would? 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 20, 2012, 10:32:03 pm
"Maybe we're looking at this too literally? You're in her place... maybe that means... she wants to be like you? She sees you as a role model? I don't know, I was never any good with riddles..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 20, 2012, 10:48:02 pm
As Khenal's gaze falls once again on the name he kissed, it has changed, too. What once read Friesden, now reads Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 20, 2012, 10:52:56 pm
"All I know is that Friesden was scared that Khenal loved Falcata, not her... Maybe you need to break the Falcata statues Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 12:41:54 am
((Taking temporary command of Khenal, since he's lost power or something.))

Khenal thinks for a moment, wondering why the name changed. 'Maybe Falcata needs to see something?' "Falcata, could you come here a minute?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 12:42:56 am
She looks at the statue next to him in bafflement for a moment before obeying.  "What... do you think it means?  Um... we shouldn't actually break them, should we?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 01:28:03 am
"No, I don't think breaking them is quite right.  Falcata, see your name, here?  It was Friesden before I, um, kissed it.  What do you think?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 01:34:27 am
"Uh, that's... strange?"  She looks at the words, and sure enough it was her name instead of Friesden's.  She looks at Khenal's statue and nameplate.  "You don't think...  I mean... should I..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 01:50:15 am
"Should you...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 01:53:48 am
She looks at Khenal for a moment and decides to test her theory.  This felt so strange... but...

She leans over to the nameplate under his statue and gives it a quick kiss before backing away.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 01:56:38 am
The nameplate shifts, the letters warping. Soon they finish, and in the same text as Falcata is in, the name Heiro appears. With the shift, the statues of Khenal across the hall change and warp into the familiar figure of Heiro, and another door appears at the end.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 02:07:05 am
Something was happening at least... she looks at the nameplate as it shifts.  "Heiro"  Wait... Heiro?

She looks up, and sure enough, all of the Khenal statues transmute themselves into statues of Heiro, gingerly holding her hoof.  Panic races through her mind for a moment.  Oh, sisters above... what would the others think?  What would he think?

Her cheeks turn cherry red, visible beneath her fur, as she backs away from the statue.  She chances nervous glances at everypony else there, lastly to Heiro.  Her eyes quickly dart away from his as the door appears.


"Um... m-m-maybe we should g-g-go on...?"  She continues to avoid eye contact with anypony.  She liked Heiro as a friend... but... she wasn't... Estoc... that was...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 02:11:04 am
Starkey blushes furiously. "Quite the, ah, imagination our daughter has there, eh hun?"

Otik grins sheepishly. "...She has a point, though. Th' two o' ye look awful cute t'gether."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 02:11:22 am
I look at the transmuted statues, starting to smile.

'They really do make a cute pair.'


"Heh, I think continuing on would be a good idea."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 02:14:08 am
Heiro blushes, not trusting his voice, he watches Falcata...

'well kid at least somepony other than you thinks you'd do well with her'

'not helping dad... I hope she doesn't dislike this though...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 02:36:58 am
Falcata clears her throat and forces a smile.  "Um.  Yes.  Let's move on."  She steps off toward the door.  Well.  Everypony else in the room seemed to think the idea wasn't so outlandish.  Heiro didn't say anything though... she wasn't sure what to make of that.

She... wasn't sure if she was ready for that yet.  It had been over three years since the murder of Estoc... but there wasn't a day that went by that she didn't think about him.  Maybe... maybe it would do her some good?  She mentally sighs and tries to focus on what they were doing.  She'd have to have a long session of thinking about this... and Heiro might not be interested anyway.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 02:37:57 am
Through the door is a large room. While most of the room is occupied by an orange liquid, there is a plain black bridge heading out to the middle of the room.

On closer inspection, there is something at the end - a large, wooden object in the shape of a lower-case t. On that object, a pony is attached. Her (for it is a her, the head giving it away) forelegs are stretched apart, on opposite sides of the vertical beam. They are held there by long, thing objects piercing through the ends.

Her hindlegs and together, and held to the bottom side of the vertical beam by another long thin object, making threee in total.

On a closer approach, the pony can be identified as Friesden. Her head is bowed, her eyes still open.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 02:41:25 am
"Friesden... Khenal, we can get her down right? That won't hurt anything?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 02:41:55 am
"Friesden!"

I gallop across the bridge to try to get her down from her torture.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 02:43:34 am
Khenal quickly crosses the bridge, and soon recognises the object. Horns... One he recognises as being Efim's. The second he recognises as Falcata's. The third he recognises from the mirrors once his reflection was him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 02:44:54 am
Starkey falls into step behind Khenal.

"Oh Luna, are those... unicorn horns? Through her limbs? Khenal... t-this is just another fake Friesden, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 02:45:23 am
"Answers my question..." Heiro runs after Khenal, and prepares to help in any way he can
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 02:48:28 am
Falcata's eyes snap open and she forgets all about what just happened as she recognizes what the distant object is.  She wasn't positive what this meant, but it surely wasn't good.  She trots after Heiro and Khenal
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 02:49:52 am
"I really hope so, Starkey.  You and Otik, please hold her up and see if you can't get those out of her forelegs.  Heiro and Falcata, please help me with this bottom one."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 02:51:29 am
"O-of course.." Heiro grabs the bottom horn and begins to try to remove it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 02:53:30 am
Falcata begins tugging at the horn with her magic, hoping that this was the right thing to do.  Everything else so far seemed more complicated than this...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 02:53:50 am
"Aye, lad."

Starkey beckons Otik, and they both take to the air, hovering next to Friesden. Each of them pulls a horn out of one of Friesden's hooves, then moves in to support her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 02:58:01 am
The horns pull out easily. Friesden falls loose from the cross, and collapses into the hooves of the ponies. She breathes deeply, trying to restore her lungs to full capacity, and weakly smiles.

"Thank you," she says, and a feeling of peace washes across the group. Shimmering, the room fades away.

In its place, a new room appears. Lit by dark, barely glowing torches, she smiles once more, and they blaze into full light. The room is bare beside them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 03:00:03 am
"Heyas little sis... You okay... I was worried about you.." Heiro hugs Friesden hoping against hope that she wouldn't be scared of him... of his heritage.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 03:00:59 am
I embrace Friesden, grateful to have her alive.

"F-Friesden?  Are... are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 03:02:43 am
"Big brother...I'm so sorry. I wasn't myself...if such a being exists." She returns the hug.

"Khenal, my love, I am better now. I'm not sure I'll be completely alright for a long time, but I'm better now than I was." She returns the embrace with a short kiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 03:06:01 am
Falcata watches intently as Heiro, Friesden and Khenal all hug and exchange words.  At least she seemed alright...

And... little sis?  Big brother?  That was interesting...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 03:06:16 am
"I-it's okay sis. As long as you still let me be your brother, you don't ever have to worry about apologizing to me." Heiro's eyes tear up a little, happy that he still had his sister.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 03:07:48 am
"I'll always be your sister, and you my brother." She turns to the group. "I...I am sorry for the hell you've gone through in my mind."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 03:09:33 am
Starkey and Otik move in to embrace her.

"For you, I'd do it a thousand times, and a thousand times again, little one."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 03:09:54 am
"It's alright friesden.  Anything to help."  Falcata gives her a warm smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 03:11:26 am
"Heh, look Freisden, you've got quite the family now... Anytime you need me I'll be there, I will do anything for my family."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 03:13:24 am
Friesden smiles, and then the smile fades away just as rapidly.

"Oh, no....oh no....oh no oh no oh no. You came in the other way.... You'll have to leave, now, before they come!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 03:16:14 am
"'They'? What are ye talkin' about, Friesden? Who's comin'?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 03:17:07 am
"They? Who are they? Friesden, are you alright? Can I help with something?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 03:17:56 am
"They are...oh, Sisters....you can't see them...you'd hate me...you've got to go!"


Almost at once, the torches gutter, and despair is written large on Friesden's face.

"It's too late."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 03:18:32 am
"They?  They who?  I'll never hate you, Friesden!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 03:19:22 am
Falcata's expression hardens.  Whatever it was coming, she was ready to stand against it if she had to.  "I'm not running..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 03:19:56 am
"I could never hate you sis... I'll protect you from anything, anything to see a smile stay on your face."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 03:21:17 am
Out from the walls stream a veritable horde of ghosts. They carry mortal wounds, several of them with their organs hanging out.

"We, the victims of Friesden, demand our sufferance," are their only words.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 03:23:16 am
Falcata draws her weapon and moves to place herself between Friesden and the largest concentration of spirits she can judge.  "You'll have to go through me first..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 03:23:54 am
"You won't hurt her." Heiro stands, drawing Midnight's axe, and stands over Friesden, prepared to guard her from whatever he had to.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 03:25:51 am
Starkey falls into place beside Heiro, Honesty flashing to life in his hooves.

"The Friesden who took your lives is long gone. She is not the mare you seek. Begone from this place, spirits."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 03:26:48 am
One of the ghosts strides forward. He reminds of somepony, but you can't remember just who.

"You seek to enter Friesden's mind. All well and good. But has Friesden told you why you needed to?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 03:29:35 am
I draw Friesden's Kindness and address the apparitions.

"The pony you seek is no more!  Friesden would never do to you what has been done."

I turn and kneel before Friesden, offering her her Kindness.

"You are no murderer, Friesden.  No murderer could have wielded this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 03:31:46 am
Friesden whimpers, and as she tries to grab the Kindness, it just falls from her grasp.

"I can take it she hasn't then. All to the better, she remembers it wrong. You ponies will know me, by reputation. My name is Efim, or Farquaad as my daughter knew me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 03:35:15 am
"Your daughter?" Starkey snorts derisively, "You lost that right a long time ago."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 03:35:35 am
"It's your Kindness, Friesden.  It's your strength."

I stand and turn to face Efim, cold rage building.

"You are the monster that tortured Friesden all her life!  All she ever got from you was pain, and she still forgave you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 03:35:47 am
Falcata looks to Efim's spirit.  "You..."  Her expression changes to perplexion and words leave her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 03:37:04 am
"You are not her family, we are. Never assume to call yourself her father again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:02:20 am
"You wish for the full story, I can only presume. She always was too weak. Let's begin from the start. Yes. I tortured her and abused her in ways that even your darkest nightmares don't drop to. The daemon you know as Schmoe I bound into her. And then she broke free. She was still too weak."

Tears drop from the ghost's eyes. "Too weak to kill me like she should have, damn her! It was her
right for all I had done to her. But she couldn't. Damn her. I lived that day. It was the day after, in exile, that my senses awoke. The horrors of what I had done were clear, in a way I hadn't known since the last day I served at the Princess' side. I fell to my knees and wept. What I had done...unforgivable, in the least. But. That was what gave me purpose. No matter how hard, I would find her, tell her my crimes, how evilly I had treated her, and beg her to kill me, for I could not live with myself. But it was impossible."

"For ten long years I searched. But you kept her from me, you wily bastard. I tracked her down first as I watched your hell hole burn. But I lost her. It was only when the murder spree continued past a week that I was interested. Especially once I learned the description matched her. Here, the noblest action I could do - die for my daughter, and maybe, just maybe, redeem her to happiness. But then the murders ended, and I lost her. In despair, I decided to move to one of the newly founded forts, hoping for a quick death. Imagine my surprise when I found my daughter. But she was broken by me. By you. By us. I tried to speak to her, but...it was a trap. I died quite painfully, the least restitution I could have made."

"I stayed around. I was still searching for an answer. Soon, I found it. You will remember the massacre of Perapolis. That...that was only my second worst sin. What I did to my daughter was far worse. But...I found out. The...the princess...she had used me. You know the spell, Khenal. It was developed as a group spell by the princess' court mages. The test was Perapolis."

"30 000 ponies dead. Not merely soldiers. Civilians. Mares, stallions, foals. I killed them all with the army of 'liberation'. I returned to Tailentranced in a stupor, not noticing what I had done. When I returned...My wife was about to give birth...to Friesden. I was not the cause, but I am most responsible. I did not have the strength to resist her. And I failed my daughter."

He bows down.

"Make it clean."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 04:05:42 am
Falcata lowers her weapon as her mouth drops open slightly.  "...what...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 04:07:11 am
"So you want to die... you deserve no less, but it's not our decision... Friesden, sister, what do you want me to do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 04:07:52 am
Starkey remains stock still, locking eyes with the spectre. As he stares, unblinking, the axe in his hand begins to glow with an inner light.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:08:52 am
"I, I don't, what? Why? Why do I have to decide? I don't want..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 04:12:31 am
All at once, the glow vanishes.

"...You... you're telling the truth. Every word. You truly feel remorse, don't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 04:12:58 am
To hear him with true remorse in his voice was a shock.  Hearing him talk about Hugwax, though, renews and redirects my anger.  I try to keep my voice calm to reassure Friesden.

"You need to decide, Friesden.  You... forgave him before.  What do you do with him now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:15:27 am
"We must die here. Only our deaths will free her mind from the chains Hugwax has laid on it. My death is the last gift I can give her. But it must be now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 04:20:08 am
"If you are truly remorseful, then from where I stand, your penance has been paid."

"Wot? Stars, he did such... monstrous things t'her! Dunnae tell me ye just forgive this bastard?"

"Nopony is beyond redemption, Otik. Farquaad has seen his error."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 04:22:28 am
"Hatred, regret, and forgiveness... perhaps your debt has been payed... or perhaps not. Sister, your decision is ours, and none of us will think less of you, no matter what it is."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:23:26 am
"I...I can't! I don't want to decide!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 04:25:16 am
"But you need to, it is your decision to make.  Please Friesden, you're the only one who can do it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 04:27:19 am
Falcata stammers something, her hammer wavering uncertainly in her magical grasp.  "Uh... yes.  I agree with the corporal.  And Khenal."  But if this was the only way for her to move on...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:29:24 am
"You must kill me."

"But...but...."

"My death is essential for your life. It is all I can do for you now."

"But...father...there's one thing..."

"I told you. It's something for you only to know. Just accept my death."

"But..." She hangs her head. "I don't want anypony to die for me."

"It is my choice to offer my death for you."

"...okay...OKAY! Okay!" she says, before turning away and sobbing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 04:36:09 am
"...Then it is decided."

Starkey reaches into a pouch on his belt, withdrawing a scrap of parchment.

"in the second room, after I finished with the bodies, I had one more of these left. I think I know why now."

He holds it out to Farquaad. An image of a key is drawn on the parchment in ink.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:38:21 am
"You know I don't deserve it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 04:38:52 am
"That is for Her to decide."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:40:53 am
"...thank you. Protect my daughter." He takes the piece of parchment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 04:42:25 am
"We shall not let our sister be harmed... we shall attempt to make this clean, your regret grants you that mercy at least." Heiro lifts Midnights axe, and brings it slashing down on the offered neck.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:45:01 am
The axe cuts through, lopping the head clean off.

Friesden shrieks and runs to the head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 04:54:25 am
Starkey bows his head, muttering a short invocation.

'Let him pass. To see such horrors inflicted on one I love so dearly, and to know that every last one was wrought by my own hooves... If you truly be merciful, let him pass. He has done his time in Hell.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 04:54:47 am
Falcata steps aside to let Friesden at the severed extremity.  She turns her attention to the other spirits hanging about in the room.  They were next...  she readies her hammer, wondering how much good it would do.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 04:57:15 am
The "death" of Efim leaves me with mixed emotions.  I still can't forgive him for what he did to Friesden, but it wasn't entirely his fault, and I genuinely hope he finds peace.  But I also can't help but think of the true person behind Friesden's suffering: Princess Hugwax.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 05:00:25 am
Heiro watches the head fall, and his sister run to it, his feelings deadened. He looks around at the rest of the dead ponies. "Khenal, what of these other spirits? I doubt we should, or could simply destroy them all."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 05:00:45 am
The ghosts advance on the group.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 05:03:24 am
Falcata watches as the ghosts approach, feeling her heart beat pick up a hair.  She raises her weapon and strikes out at each ghost that draws near enough, taking care to keep herself between Friesden and any approaching spirits.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 05:05:54 am
Heiro notices the spirits aproach and takes a defensive stance above Friesden, fending off any spirits that come close to his sister.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 05:07:01 am
I take up a defensive position by Friesden, using my magic as best I can to handle any ghosts that try to harm her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 05:11:37 am
Starkey and Otik take up positions on opposite sides of Friesden. Starkey expertly dispatches each wraith that approaches too near, while Otik does the same with her hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 05:17:39 am
Standing with my friends to protect my love, I draw strength from their presence.  I fire blast after arcane blast at the ghosts.  Most of them are simple raw bursts of energy or fire, but occasionally a ghost is impaled briefly by an ethereal spear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 05:23:19 am
The ghosts are eventually destroyed. Friesden remains still, holding onto her sire's head, the tears continuing to stream down her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 05:27:10 am
Heiro looks around for any stragglers, finally satisfied in Friesden's safety, he returns his axe to it's holder. He looks down at his sister

"Sis..." He tries to find some words... but none will come, he finally decides to just sit next to her, placing a hoof on her shoulder.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 05:28:07 am
Falcata returns her weapon to its sling and slowly steps over to Friesden.  There wasn't anything she could do or say right now... how could she have dealt with the decision of destroying her own father like that?  Of course... her father had never done anything like that to her.  She still loved her father very much... even if she would never see him again.  And she knew he still loved her.

She lowers her head as Friesden continues to weep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 05:28:35 am
"Why...why did he have to die? Why does anypony have to die? Can't they live forever?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 05:31:49 am
I take a few moments to try to catch my breath after the ghosts seem defeated.  Seeing Friesden cradle her father's head, I sit next to her and gently drape a wing across her withers to remind her she's not alone.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 05:44:59 am
Starkey sits by Friesden, draping his own wing across her back.

"Sometimes the good must die so that the rest survive. The lot of courage is to be sacrificed on the altar of battle. But those who die for another, their spirits shall be seated at the Sisters' table."

"Your... your father sacrificed himself to save you. He did it because he loves you, Friesden. Even now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 05:51:15 am
"I...I don't want anypony to die. Not for me..."

One of the torches goes out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 05:53:55 am
"Sis... come now, sorrow is good, but you can't lose yourself in it. It's okay to feel bad, but we're here, never forget that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 05:57:08 am
"Then show me. What is there for me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 06:00:49 am
"Family."

I gesture at Starkey, Otik and Heiro.

"Friends."

I nod towards Falcata.

"...Love."

I lean in to gently kiss Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 06:02:32 am
"I am, Khenal is, Falcata, Starkey, Otik, all of us, we are there for you... Your wedding, you know I've never been to a wedding, be nice to see my little sister get married." Heiro moves closer, holding her, trying to comfort his sister with his presence.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 06:03:09 am
Friesden accepts the kiss. As it ends, she turns to Heiro, and returns the hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 06:05:27 am
Falcata sits near the mass of ponies with a smile.  She couldn't really do much else and everything relevant had already be said, but at least she could try to show she was there for Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 21, 2012, 06:11:11 am
Otik sits by Friesden opposite Starkey, leaning into her.

"Ye know ye'll always be our lit'l pony, Fri. I'll always be there for ye..."


"...Both of us will."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 06:15:18 am
Heiro looks up, and motions for Falcata to join the group.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 06:17:31 am
Falcata sees Heiro motion for her to join them.  There... wasn't much room...  She slips over and after a moment of considering who it would be most appropriate to be touching or not touching, she finds the slightest hint of unclaimed Friesden and squeezes her way into the hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 06:20:11 am
The torches, including the one that went out, burst back into full force, lighting the room, as Friesden starts to smile once more.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 04:18:17 pm
I smile back at Friesden as my horn starts to glow.

"I'm glad you're alright, Friesden.  We all are."

I sever the linking spell, letting everypony fade back to the reality of the hospital room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:21:49 pm
Before Khenal can fully come back to his senses, he is lifted up into the air by Friesden, who clamps her forelegs around him in a hug.

"Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 21, 2012, 04:42:21 pm
Ignoring my injuries, I return the hug, laughing in joy to have Friesden back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:44:51 pm
Friesden holds Khenal tight.

"I'm happy again! Thank you so much!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 04:48:29 pm
"Hey what am I chopped Liver?" Hero pauses, laughing at the unintended joke "Good to see you're doing better though Sis."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 04:51:29 pm
Friesden turns her head and sees her brother. Before Khenal can fully catch his breath, he's being whisked through the room as Friesden rushes over to Heiro, bringing him into the hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 05:00:49 pm
Heiro winces a bis at the pain in his side. He holds his sister as tight as he can, happy to finally see her smiling again. "I'm so glad you're okay sis, I-I was afraid after you found out what I was that you wouldn't..." his voice trails off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 05:15:51 pm
"No. I was a silly mare. I worried that I might hurt you, or worse, kill you. But I know I won't, now. And we can all be happy together!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 09:29:19 pm
"I'm looking forward to it sis, I'm just happy to see you smile."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 09:30:59 pm
"You saved me! If you want me to smile, I'll smile forever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 09:35:02 pm
Falcata shakes the fogginess from her mind, grunting at the sudden return of the mild pain to her side.  She blinks a few times dumbly and looks up to the other ponies.  "Don't think I'll ever get used to that..." she mumbles to herself, placing a hoof against her temple.

Kris sits up from her previous position of laying next Heiro's bed.
  "Oh, you're all awake?"

((Be back in 30-45 mins))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 10:31:41 pm
"Yep we are, you okay little one?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 10:35:05 pm
Kris rubs the knot on the side of her head and says, "Oh, yeah, I'm fine.  Um, are you okay?  I got a little worried when everypony went to sleep.  Mom told me a little about Khenal being able to do that... but I wasn't sure what to do..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 10:37:14 pm
"Yeah we're fine, I was worried about that kick you took, looks like you've got quite a knot there."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 10:41:31 pm
Kris grins sheepishly.  "Oh... yeah, I'm fine."  She chuckles.  "Probably should have just left it to the grownups."

Falcata finally forces herself completely lucid and looks over to see the whack her daughter had taken.  She steps over, examines it and nods in agreement.  "Doesn't look too bad..."  She gives Kris a small hug.  "Just be a little more careful."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 21, 2012, 11:20:59 pm
"It was nice of you to try to help though..." Heiro watches Kris with her mother, and he remembers the statue room in Friesden's mind. Maybe... but he shouldn't push, Falcata may not even be interested... but maybe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 11:45:20 pm
"What happened?" Friesden asks in concern.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 11:53:08 pm
Kris idly rubs her head.  "Oh, um.  When... when you got close to Mr. Heiro, you started panicking."  She points a hoof to her horn.  "I tried to help, but I got a bit too close, and you... um... kicked me.  But I'm okay!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 11:55:06 pm
"Oh! I'm so sorry! Is there anything I can do to apologise?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 21, 2012, 11:58:03 pm
Kris shakes her head quickly.  "Oh, no, no, no.  It's fine, really.  I'm just glad you're okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 21, 2012, 11:59:23 pm
"No, no, I insist!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 12:05:34 am
"Um..." Kris looks from Friesden to her mom, whose expression showed a bit of puzzlement.  She looks back to Friesden.  "Um... I don't know... it's okay, it was my fault, not yours."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 12:11:42 am
"Well, if you ever need a favour from me, just ask."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 12:29:28 am
"Okay!"  Kris gives Friesden a smile and stops rubbing at the knot.

Falcata stands and picks at the bandages on her side.  "Almost forgot about these..."  She steps off toward the medical supplies.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 12:30:12 am
Friesden picks up Kris and gives her a big hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 12:32:25 am
Kris returns the hug with a smile and says, "Apology accepted."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 12:34:49 am
"Thank you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 22, 2012, 12:44:08 am
Otik scoots closer to Heiro, laying a hoof on his withers.

"Soo... if yer Friesden's brother... I guess that makes-"


"Ooh no, stop right there Otik."

"Aww, but Sta-ars..."

"We talked about this, remember? no more foster children! We're going to get married, and have foals of our own."

Otik pouts hard, showing him the saddest, most watery eyes she can muster.

"No... that's not going to work this time..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 12:46:30 am
Friesden catches the words, and turns around, her eyes even more watery than Otik's.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 22, 2012, 12:57:11 am
Starkey balks. "Otik! Y-You taught her how to do that!? That... that's not fair!"

He tries his best to resist...

And fails. the D'aww is strong in this one.


"Oh... oh, alright, I give up."

He clears his throat. "Heiro... if it's alright with you - because these two have already made their minds up, which means I-"

Otik jabs him in the ribs.

"Oww! Okay, okay! As I was saying: would you like to give us the honor of being... your mother and father?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 01:00:08 am
"R-really? I-I"

'D-dad... y-you wouldn't'

'Don't make me smack you kid, you know what you want, we'll still be here.'


"Y-you'd really let me be... be your son... e-even though I'm a keshi?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 01:03:37 am
Friesden throws a foreleg around Heiro protectively.

"Please, dad?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 22, 2012, 01:14:30 am
"That doesn't bother me in the slightest, lad. Would you like to know a little secret?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 01:15:32 am
"A secret? I-if you're sure... I'd love to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 22, 2012, 01:31:44 am
"Well, you see.... I'm not actually from around here. At all. I was born in the Rainbow Coalition, in a little city-state called LaceAbbey. Now, things are very different over there. The concept of racial division is... practically non-existent. Ponies, cave ponies, zebras, and aye, even diomedians all live and work together. My mother is a pegasus, aye, and I get most of my looks from her. But my father - your grandfather now, I suppose - is a diomedian. A shadowbolt, to be precise. And he isn't some bloodthirsty barbarian or perverted foal-stealer: he's one of the kindest, gentlest ponies you will ever meet - and I do hope very much that you get to meet him one day."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 01:34:25 am
"Really... m-my other father... he was a shadowbolt... I-I can really be your son... D-dad?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 22, 2012, 01:37:36 am
Starkey looks from Otik to Friesden, seing the expectant looks on their faces, and smiles.

"I think you already are... son."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 01:43:23 am
"T-thank you... all of you." Heiro pulls Otik and Friesden into a hug, not much caring about the pain in his side anymore. "I have a big family now, mom, sis... dad." Heiro tears up a bit from the happiness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 01:53:31 am
Falcata keeps an ear turned to the conversation as she prods and fiddles with the bandages at her side, trying to feign as if she didn't hear it.  Captain Starkey and Lieutenant Otik had quite an interesting family now.  Corporal Heiro too.  After what had happened to him, he deserved something like this.  Learning that Captain Starkey was half darkbolt was also quite unexpected.  She hardly saw the semblance, but maybe he did really take after his mother.  Either way, it didn't change a thing about how she felt about him, and wasn't really her business anyway.

She winces as she peels the bandages away, finding that the cuts from the scourge's teeth had scabbed over, and looked reasonably good all things considered.

Kris watches as everypony next to her gives Heiro a hug, and she joins in.
  "I hope you feel better soon," she says.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 22, 2012, 01:56:26 am
Once again, the heartwarming scene overwhelms Starkey's inhibitions, and he joins in the group hug as well.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 02:04:25 am
"I have my family now, too. Mother, father, brother... And Khenal...who could want for more?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 03:26:21 am
My smile widens as I join in the group hug.  Heiro has a real family again and Friesden is well again.  Who could want for more, indeed.


((Scene done.  Dang, how long did it take us to do this part?  Next scene incoming soon!))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 04:18:08 am
Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 54

I'll be starting with Falcata's magical training today, though there won't be any actual magic before I'm satisfied with her mental control.  She's good most of the time, but she seems to crack under pressure.  I'll be showing her a few meditation techniques to help focus under pressure.  It'll also give me a chance to wheedle out her strengths and weaknesses when it comes to magic.  Enhancing her strengths and shoring up her weaknesses is one (or two, I guess) of my goals for this training.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 03:18:54 pm
Friesden's Diary

I don't know how to put it into words, but the world has lightened. I'm happy again! The darkness has gone away!

I just can't put into words how blessed I've been. Ever since I've met Khenal, my life has turned to good.

Maybe there is something in them calling him godkin...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 03:35:20 pm
((Improvising some dates, kinda wish I'd done like Khenal and just used sequential numbers, heh.  And this is going to be longer than is strictly reasonable, but I'd like to summarize Falcata's thoughts on everything that's happened.  I think it'll help me reconcile everything anyway.  TL;DR: just skip to the last entry.  :P))

Falcata's Diary - 12th Galena, 100

Today was mentally, physically and emotionally exhausting.  It started with Khenal confronting me about the things he saw in my head.  I was terrified that he'd never want to speak to me again after that, but much to my surprise he just apologized for losing his composure and asked that we remain friends.  I have to admit that up until now I'd only hoped that he thought of me as a friend, but didn't really expect it.  I thought it was just a professional relationship, but I'm eager to have him as a friend.

That lead to Lady Charity arriving with a gift for Khenal: the most beautiful spear I've ever seen in my life.  Khenal was overtaken by the gesture, which I suppose I would have been too.  I ended up in an unexpected group hug from that, which felt nice aside from the fact that it probably wasn't strictly appropriate, especially with Lady Charity being involved.  Speaking of her, she seemed to be a bit put off by us showing respect to her by bowing.  I suppose I can understand Khenal, since from what I gather they've known each other for years longer than I've even been here, but I was pretty shocked to find that she thinks of me as a friend too.  I feel pretty guilty for being nervous around her now.  I thought I was being too harsh and misjudging her before, but now I am convinced.  I only hope I haven't offended her in any way.  I only meant to show my respect to her, I really do think of her as deserving of her position.  And a good friend to have.

She then brought the issue of what to do with the adamantine crossbow that was produced recently.  I immediately thought of giving it to Lieutenant Otik, instead of selfishly taking the weapon for Madush.  We could put it to use, certainly, but it would do far more good in the hooves of the militia.  If an enemy makes it to us, then it's already gone through the militia, and I dare not dwell on what that would mean.  I would much prefer that Madush keep using her current weapon than see any of the militia be wounded or killed.

Lady Charity was concerned that Otik would use the weapon against her.  After some thought I suppose I can see her point, I've hardly forgotten the day that Captain Starkey and Lieutenant Otik rounded us up and subdued Charity.  I honestly wasn't convinced I'd live to see the next day.  But in the years that have come and gone, I've come to understand the passion of what they did and have seen a side of both of them that I think Lady Charity hasn't.  I trust them both now.  I admit that I still feel the slightest hint of nerves whenever I see Lieutenant Otik get angry or emotional about anything, but I would trust her to back me up if I needed it.  And it's my job to protect the duchess, and I'm willing to bet my life on the fact that Otik wouldn't turn the weapon on her or us.

But, before I could say any of that, Friesden and Corporal Heiro arrived to reveal that today is Khenal's birthday!  Friesden had prepared a party for him, and we all attended the celebration.  I don't think I've ever seen that many ponies that happy in Glitterglen, especially Friesden.  I only wish it could have lasted.  Some time after the party began, Kris came galloping into the dining hall to reveal that Lilac had run off into the jungle, and was apparently set on becoming a diomedian.  Everypony immediately hurried off to look for her, but the search could hardly have gone worse.

We were ambushed, as I feared we would be.  Khenal and I were wounded, but Lady Charity was nearly killed by a diomedian assassin.  It's only by great fortune that Corporal Heiro overheard what happened and came to her rescue.  He was badly wounded in the ensuing fight, but she was completely unharmed.  I know she must be grateful, and I expect she will want to reward him somehow.  After he asked me to look into getting him into the royal guard, I'm tempted to bring it up to her.  After his refusal to follow her orders earlier, I'm a bit reluctant though.  I don't know what her opinion of him really is, and I wouldn't want to stir up trouble unknowingly.

Speaking of Corporal Heiro, when we tried to treat him with a blood transfusion, his body rejected it and he acquired a serious fever.  Dr. Venture was worried that the fever could have hurt his brain, so Friesden and I entered his mind to try and check up on him.  Fortunately he was fine, but we found out that he is really a diomedian.  A keshi.  I never expected that, but it explains the problem with the transfusion.  He is worried that everypony will hate him for being a diomedian.  I fear he might be right with the populace as a whole.  The other diomedians we've encountered out here have only wanted to kill us or worse, but it doesn't change how I feel about Corporal Heiro.  He is a good pony, and doesn't deserve to be treated badly because he was born to a diomedian family.

The worst part of all of this though, is that we didn't find Lilac.  I knew we wouldn't.  I know we won't.  I can only imagine the horrors she is facing, and all for naught.  I don't understand why she would do something like that.  Captain Starkey and Lieutenant Otik loved her.  Kris was her friend.  I did everything I could for her.  The poor thing, after what happened to her parents I fear nothing could have helped her.

At least Khenal and Corporal Heiro will recover.  So much has happened that it's going to take time for me to digest all of this.  I think writing it out has helped some, but I'll probably have trouble sleeping tonight.  I'll go check up on the wounded in the morning.  My own wounds are quite minor in comparison, so I just went home with Kris.  She is extremely upset about it all.  I think she knows Lilac wont be coming back, but she's handling it about as well as I could expect.  I don't think it's really set in for any of us yet.

13th Galena, 100

Yesterday was extremely draining, but today was hardly easy on my mind.  When we went to check up on Corporal Heiro this morning, we found that he had recovered considerably.  Friesden however, seems to have been quite upset about finding out that he was a keshi, and she went into convulsions as soon as she got close to him.  Khenal ended up drawing us into her mind to try and help her, and I'm not going to record here everything that I saw there.  Friesden is a tormented pony on the inside, and after some of the things I saw I don't blame her.  I really must do everything I can to support her now, she has been through so much more than I will ever know.

Something extremely unexpected happened while we were there though.  Friesden clearly thinks that Corporal Heiro and I would make a good cople.  Further, it seems that everypony else agrees with her.  I wouldn't have even suspected something like that.  Well, she did sort of hint at it at the party, but I thought she was joking.  I don't know what Corporal Heiro thinks about it, but I'm not so sure.

He's a nice pony, and has been nothing but supportive of me.  And he gets along with Kris very well.  But, I just don't know.  I was happily married to Estoc for four years before he was taken from me.  That was over three years ago, but I haven't forgotten him, and I never will.  I don't want to forget about him.  Being in a relationship just feels like I'm betraying his memory.  I really don't want to upset Corporal Heiro though, he's a good friend.  I don't know, maybe I should give it a try.  I won't push it, but maybe if he does, I could at least give it a try.

I'm going to need some time to think about this.  I just don't know what to think.  At all.  It's been three years, but in so many ways it still feels too soon.  I'm not sure I could ever love again.  Not like I loved Estoc.

15th Galena, 100

At least I have some good news to report today.  I'm ecstatic that the zebras have seen reason and are requesting peace with us.  The war was completely senseless, and I hated every zebra and pony that lost their lives needlessly.  There's enough danger out here without us tearing each other apart.

Otherwise, I was pretty shocked when Khenal came to me yesterday and offered to help me hone my magical skills.  I suppose I am a bit of a joke of a unicorn.  I think I know maybe three or four spells, and using them tires me immensely.  I wasn't really sure what to say to him, but I accepted the offer.  He is probably the most skilled mage I've met in person, so there is nopony else I'd rather have as a teacher.  I just hope I don't let him down, and I must find some way to repay him for what he is doing for me.  I don't think he would accept money as payment.  Something more personal is in order, but I don't know what.  I'll have to think about it.  Maybe Friesden would know something?

Today we actually began some of the exercises.  Khenal told me that he didn't want to actually try teaching me anything about magic until we've gone through some mental exercises.  I've never had formal training in magic, so that sounds reasonable to me.  We just went through some meditation techniques today.  I think I managed to follow him reasonably well enough.  I felt so peaceful during the meditation.  I've been wound up tighter than a rope for as long as I can remember, and the chance to unwind was very welcome.  I'm not sure what Khenal was expecting from today, but I hope I gave it to him.  I'm looking forward to the next session.  I'll never have the strength or skill he has, but any improvement is welcome.


((That took close to an hour to type.  No joke.  And don't fret Khenal, I won't be typing up a chapter from a novel for every session.  :) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 05:37:13 pm
Friesden's Diary.


Khenal is

No. I can't write any words to describe just how great, how good, how nice he is. Falcata, another guard, and my friend, has been needing a bit of help with her magic, and Khenal, the bestest, wisest, kindest, greatest, and most powerful pony ever, is helping her!

The last party I threw ended unhappily when my poor beloved sister ran off. But maybe I can throw another one! One to celebrate how good he is!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 07:56:52 pm
Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 55

I love Friesden so much, my Sequel.  I told you about the journey into her mind, and how concerning some of the imagery was, but she really seems to have gotten closure on her past.  She's been so happy, and I've been so happy because of it.

Chapter 56

Falcata is doing well in the meditations, so I think she's ready for me to try to disrupt her focus.  In the session today, I'll try bringing up a few things that might disturb her.  I'll give her some warning before we start, to make sure she feels she's ready.  I'll try a few sudden noises and flashes of light at first.  If she keeps her focus through that, I'll... have to start pushing her buttons.  Estoc.  Kris.  This is why I need to ask her if she's ready before starting.  Focusing through and channeling the anger into something constructive is always a hard thing to learn, especially for somepony who care about others so much.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 08:16:29 pm
Friesden's Diary.

I hate me. I should have apologised to Him more before now. And now she's dead. I'm that stupid idiot bitch of a mare. Trying to throw a party when I should have been apologising to Him.

I wish I could take my life back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 08:30:18 pm
Khenal's sequel, Chapter 57

I... I can't believe Thunder Splinters is gone.  I don't think Glitterglen would have even been possible without her.  Almost everything wooden was made by her, even the tower was her brainchild.  Charity is not taking it well.  In fact, I don't think anypony is.  I'm not going to write much more, Sequel.  I... I need Friesden before I break down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 08:37:50 pm
Friesden huddles in a corner of the dining hall, glumly playing with a scrap of a streamer, tears running down her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 08:45:39 pm
I glumly wander into the dining hall, still trying to find Friesden and fight off a breakdown.  When I spot her in the corner, I brighten only slightly and head over to embrace her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 08:47:38 pm
Friesden mutters, under her breath, "I'm sorry Khenal I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry," over and over.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 08:52:35 pm
"Shh, it's not your fault, Friesden.  These... these things just happen, sometimes.  We j-just need to remember th-the good times a-and not focus on... on the pain."

I tighten the embrace, desperately trying to not break into wracking sobs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 08:56:19 pm
"If...If I'd apologised to You for all that I've done wrong, then You would have let her live...it is my fault."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 09:00:23 pm
"Please don't blame yourself, Friesden.  Your past is past, you had nothing to do with her death.  If only I could have done something..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 09:02:46 pm
At Khenal's words, a fresh torrent of sobbing bursts from Friesden.

"I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry! Why couldn't You have taken me instead of her? It was my fault, not hers!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 09:08:26 pm
"Don't apologize for something that's not your fault.  You are absolutely blameless for her death, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 09:13:02 pm
"But...but....but...I haven't been forgiven by You, yet! It must be my fault."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 09:13:28 pm
Falcata's Diary - 1st Galena, 100

I had my third training session with Khenal today.  He said I was ready to move on past the meditations, and I think he's right.  It came a little easier than I thought.  Today was a lot trickier though.  I should have been a bit concerned when he asked if I was sure I was ready to continue, and that he would be testing my focus.  Of course, I didn't back down.

He had me try to maintain meditation and concentrating on some very simple spells while he attempted to distract me.  Easy stuff at first, like making sudden noises or flashing lights at me.  Then he got me.  Out of nowhere he said the name Estoc.  Even the mention of his name was enough to disrupt the spell I was channeling.  I didn't lose the spell completely, but it shook me enough.

I tried again, and since I was expecting it this time I didn't falter when asked some things about Kukri and Dirk.  Then he got me again by asking how Kris was doing after the kick.  I did lose the spell that time.  He knows they're my weakest points, I suppose.  If I can learn to focus through thinking about them, I can focus through anything.

Khenal is a smart pony though, I'm sure he'll have something even trickier for me next time.  He said we'd continue working on my focus some, and I can't disagree with him.  If Estoc's name is enough to throw off my concentration that much, then I definitely have some work to do.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 09:23:19 pm
I just blink a few times at Friesden's words.

'She... thinks I don't forgive her for her past?  Have I really never said otherwise?'

I bury my face in her mane, ashamed with myself.


"Oh, Friesden, of course I forgive you for your past.  I can't believe I never said so sooner, I'm so sorry!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 09:28:59 pm
"Then...then...then why did...why did she die?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 09:33:54 pm
Today had been a horrible day.  Falcata keeps her head low as she walks the halls from the hospital toward the dining hall.  She had been there when it happened.  She saw it when the diomedian slew Thundersplinters.  She was too late.  She'd galloped toward the scene with all the strength she had, but she didn't make it in time.  Thundersplinters was dead.  The pony had never done a thing to deserve what happened to her, nor had she done anything to deserve what Falcata had done to her.  And now she was dead, and Falcata had never even had a chance to say she was sorry.

Friesden and Khenal were both friends with her, if she recalled properly.  She... didn't know what she was going to say.  Or even why she was looking for them.  She just wanted to head home and curl up in her bed and sulk alone.  But she thought maybe they could use some support too.  She knew she could.  Even if she didn't want to ask for it, she could pass it off as looking to help them.  Did they even know what she had done to Thundersplinters?  Khenal probably did.  Friesden?  She didn't know.

Neither had been in the hospital, this seemed like the next best place to look.  She steps into the dining hall and gives it a quick survey to see Khenal and Friesden embracing each other.  She thought she could see tears in Khenal's eyes, but Friesden had clearly been sobbing bitterly at some point.  Maybe this wasn't the best time after all...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 09:39:35 pm
Heiro wanders the halls lost in his thoughts... his new family, his sisters recovery... he stops as he passes the dining hall recognizing a voice.


'That's little sis' voice... she sounds sad...' Heiro walks into the dining hall, noticing Falcata first, then the other two.

He walks over to the crying ponies, placing a hoof on Friesden's withers "Hey now little sis... what's wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 09:50:38 pm
"Thund-Thunder-Thundersplinter is dead! And-And-And it is all my fault!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 09:54:14 pm
"You're fault? You didn't kill her, those raiders killed her. You did nothing wrong, don't blame yourself for it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 09:58:15 pm
"No, if He had forgiven me, she would be alive! I should have apologised to Him sooner!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 10:00:08 pm
Falcata slowly plods into the room, trying to understand what Friesden was saying.  She holds her tongue for now, waiting to try and gain some context before she speaks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 10:01:36 pm
"Please, Khenal, can't You take me and return her? Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 10:09:59 pm
"Nopony has magic to revive the dead, Friesden.  It's not your fault.  Just try to remember the good times with her, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 10:13:02 pm
"But....but...but you're perfect, divine. Please, I'll do anything if you bring her back, please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 10:15:02 pm
"...what?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 10:18:04 pm
"From...from the first day I met You, You've blest me. You saved me in the asylum, I remember You there, and then here, everything good has happened to me, because of You."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 22, 2012, 10:44:06 pm
Otik wanders the halls, searching for her daughter. She knows Friesden and Thundersplinter were somewhat close - they had known each other since before she had come to the fort - and despite the recent foray into her mind and her subsequent recovery, she is still in a delicate emotional state. Hearing Friesden's voice coming from within the dining hall, she turns and enters.

"Fri? Friesden? I... we heard wot happened. Are ye doin' okay, hun?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 10:53:25 pm
"I just...why couldn't I die in her place?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 10:57:18 pm
"B-But I'm j-j-just a p-pony..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 11:02:58 pm
"But...but...but...okay. If...if you say so."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 11:16:13 pm
Falcata walks closer to Khenal and Friesden, noting Heiro and Otik entering the dining hall too.  She still didn't understand what the two were talking about just now, but it seemed like the conversation they were holding was over at least.  "Um... h-how are you two holding up?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 11:24:16 pm
"I...I think I'll be okay. I just wish she was still alive."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 11:26:08 pm
"Nopony likes seeing their friends die. But I'm here for you if you need it sis."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 11:31:15 pm
"I'm sorry everypony."  Falcata hangs her head lower and sits.  "I saw the diomedian going for her.  I tried to get to her in time, but I was too late."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 22, 2012, 11:32:25 pm
"I know you an' yer dad were sorta close t'Miss ThunderSplinter. He's... not taking it too hard. Found a bottle o' strong spirits an' went t'see th' Duchess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 11:33:56 pm
Heiro looks at Falcata, "Hey, it's not your fault either. Nopony is to blame but the raiders that killed her." Heiro goes over and places a hoof on Falcatas withers "You did everything you could do, I know that. Don't beat yourself up over things you can't help."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 22, 2012, 11:35:16 pm
"It's not your fault either, Falcata.  Heiro is right, only the raiders are to blame."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 11:37:07 pm
Her frown changes to a sad smile as Heiro places a hoof on her shoulder.  "I know... it's just... when something happens to the civilians... I feel so responsible for it.  I put myself in danger so they don't have to..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 11:39:59 pm
"And you do a darn good job, But you can't be everywhere. Things will happen, and you have to accept them... sorrow can be a good thing, but you can't let it take over."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 22, 2012, 11:41:25 pm
Friesden's heart breaks. To see her friend like this...

An idea came into her head. She and Heiro were so cute...and he seemed to be making her happy. Maybe...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 11:46:30 pm
Falcata nods slowly and breathes in, finding an unexpected sniffle.  Do.  Not.  Cry.  Not in front of everypony.  How would that look?  Captain of the royal guard, crying because somepony she barely knew was dead?  She was just being silly about this.

"Thank you, corporal.  Y-you're right."

She looks at the other ponies.  "H-how is everypony else doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 22, 2012, 11:50:49 pm
...Wait a minute.

Otik notices an odd... glint in Friesden's eyes.

'Is that...' She studies her face a little more closely.

'No...' That gleam in her eyes, that little satisfied smirk. The way her gaze shifted from Falcata, to Heiro, then back to Falcata.

'It can't be...'

It can.

Friesden, her daughter, is plotting something. Otik couldn't be more proud.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 11:54:08 pm
Heiro looks closer at Falcata... the death seemed to be hitting her hard... almost like... "Did you know ThunderSplinter?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 22, 2012, 11:57:06 pm
"N-no... not... not really, I mean... there was just the..."  Something dawns on her.  Corporal Heiro didn't know... he arrived after it had happened.  Maybe somepony had told him.  "C-corporal... did a-anypony tell you about the amulet incident... with Lady Charity?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 22, 2012, 11:59:49 pm
"No, I never heard of an amulet indecent... What happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 12:11:44 am
Falcata takes a deep breath and turns her eyes to the floor.  "A few years ago... Lady Charity banned the exporting of some amulets that were produced here.  I-I don't know why... but that's beside the point.  Somepony authorized selling amulets to the caravan anyway, and everypony involved got punished."  She sighs and pauses for a moment.  "Thundersplinters helped move the amulets to the depot, so she got caught up in the mess."

"There weren't enough cells available to lock everypony up for a few days... so Lady Charity randomly picked some ponies to receive... corporal punishment... instead.  Thundersplinters was one of the four chosen randomly.  No special treatment for anypony."  Her voice begins to crack slightly.  "I-I was still in the fortress guard at the time.  The orders came down... and... and..."  She shuts her eyes, and clenches her teeth, biting back tears.  "...and... I volunteered for the job."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 12:14:49 am
"Voluteered? Makes sense... you wanted to lessen the impact right? You know what you would do to the offenders, not what someone else would. Always do the worst jobs yourself, then you can make them as good as possible."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 12:29:36 am
She nods slowly, tears now forcing their way onto her face.  She sniffles a few more times and adds, "Yes... I-I thought... if it was me... I could just give her a slap on the hoof.  Nopony deserved more than that over some amulets... but..."  She chokes on her words, wiping a tear away.  "I should have just resigned on the spot... or let somepony else do it... it... it came out so horribly..."

She places her face in one hoof and chokes again.  "I confronted her... and... she... and everypony else there... they... a brawl broke out.  I was just trying to defend myself... but..."  More choking and sniffling.  "When it was over, she was almost dead.  If it was somepony else... maybe it wouldn't have happened that way..."

"Oh, sisters... I-I'll never forget that day as long as I live..."  Tears begin to flow from her eyes and she places her face in both hooves.  "I... I never apologized to her... I never had the nerve to face her after what happened... and now... now... she's..."  Falcata begins to sob, her words lost completely.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 12:35:02 am
Friesden rushes over to Falcata and, wordlessly, picks her up in a hug, rocking her back and forth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 12:38:10 am
Heiro moves closer to Falcata, cautiously hugging her, trying his best to comfort her. "And if you hadn't gone? The brawl would still have happened, you didn't want to hurt her, do you think that the others would have held themselves back? If it hadn't been you she may have died then, you aren't a bad pony, I know you did everything you could."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 12:40:18 am
I walk over and join in the hug, tears again flowing.  I had no idea Falcata was involved in the beatings, and especially not of Thunder, but there was no way I could let her feel alone in this sorrow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 12:47:13 am
Otik stands away from them, bowing her head. She doubts that Falcata would much appreciate her concern, considering what happened afterward. In her mind, she had always justified her actions that day by reminding herself of the cold, ruthless efficiency with which the guard hat brutalized and even murdered innocent ponies. But now, hearing the full extent of the guilt Falcata had harbored even all these years afterward, could she still continue to do that?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 12:50:48 am
Friesden turned her head to Otik, puppy dog eyes in full bloom.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 12:51:44 am
Falcata's first instinct was to reject the hugs and back away, but she didn't.  It just felt so good.  She was just so sick of keeping all of this bottled up inside her.  She hadn't really had anypony to talk to since Estoc died, and letting it out felt good.  She was crying all over everypony, but she just didn't care right now.  "Th-thank you everypony..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 01:04:47 am
...Oooh, Otik is regretting teaching her that trick. She cautiously steps forward, tentatively joining into the hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 01:06:29 am
"Thank you, mum!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 01:13:23 am
Falcata opens her eyes and blinks through the tears to see Otik joining in too.  She doesn't resist at all.  "Th-thank you Lieutenant... this means a lot coming from you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 01:19:38 am
Otik smiles up at her.

"I'm... sorry. Bokbon wos.. my friend. At th' time, I didnae know who wos responsible, so... I jus' took it out on anypony who coulda done it. I thought that only a band o' cold, heartless monsters could do somethin' like that... I had no idea it ate at ye so. I'm sorry for what I did."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 01:26:02 am
"It's alright lieutenant.  I... would probably have done the same thing.  I'm just glad to know there's no hard feelings..."  She smiles and sniffles again, trying to regain her composure.  Well... she'd made enough of a scene alright... breaking down in front of everypony.  But it felt good to know there were ponies who cared.

((Scene concluded.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 03:09:42 am
Charity stands in one of the top floors of the wooden tower. She is there with her Ducal Guard and her family and their families, standing next to a beautifully decorated nickle sarcophagi. Decorated, with gold, gems, and bone and flanked by a pair of masterful statues. Charity had sunk a fortune into this tomb for her beloved friend. But somehow it didn't feel enough. She absentmindedly hoofed her amulet as she stood there thinking.

More ponies began to come in. Thundersplinter's other friends were there. But the other five members of the starting seven were not present. Dozens of ponies stood in the room. Charity looked around, hardly a dry eye in the building.

Charity's daughter Belle, having just turned 3 years old had been quite inconsolable when she heard what happened to her, "Auntie Thunder." But the look on her face now, was of determination. As the ponies stood in the room preparing, Belle's horn began to glow, softly at first, and from her came a sad sound. A dirge began to play. As she manipulated the magic in the air with her horn she created the most sorrowful song any pony present had ever heard. And then she began to sing. As the words came forth Thundersplinter's body was brought up the stairs.

Thundersplinter was carried in a wooden casket, (Her once beautiful face had been ravaged by the evil Diomedians, which forced them to hide it behind the wooden walls of her box.) The casket was carried by Starkey, Cryptson, Cindersparks, Pillomino, and Friesden with two on each side, and Friesden bringing up the rear.

They brought the casket up to the front of the room, by the tomb. The music continued on for time and then faded. A mark had appeared on Belle's flank as the song ended, but nopony had noticed, least of all the foal who's face had cracked and was choking back tears.

Spoiler: Belle's Cutie Mark (click to show/hide)

Charity walk out in front of the crowd, and then she spoke.

"Thundersplinter, was a dear friend to many of us, and without her hard work, Glitterglen might not be what it is today. Most of the things we take for granted everyday here where made by her. Every last bed, and most of the bins and barrels we store everything in, along with countless tables and chairs, all bear the mark of her hoofywork. She will be sorely missed. Her death was pointless, the act of horrible soulless monsters, who threaten our very way of life. But I won't let it have been in vain. I swear to all of you. We will improve the defenses. We will build new walls and fortifications. Nopony will ever die needlessly again, if I can help it. You have my word."

As she spoke she occasionally rubbed her silver amulet with her right hoof. A nervous tic someponies watching might have thought.

Belle sees her her cue and begins to play another equally sorrowful song as the 6 ponies from the 7 founders, all together this time, begin to move the wooden casket into the larger sarcophagi. After the deed is done Charity leads the gathered ponies in a short prayer.

"Sisters of Sun and Moon, our Mothers,
Your power brings us to birth,
Your providence guides our lives,
and by Your command we return to dust.

Sister of the Night, those who die still live in Your presence,
their lives change but do not end.
I pray in hope for my family,
relatives and friends,
and for all the dead known to You alone.

In company with Luna,
Who ends the hard day and brings our restful dreams,
may they rejoice in Your kingdom,
where all our tears are wiped away.
Unite us together again in one family,
to sing Your praise forever and ever.

Amen. "

After the prayer, Charity bends down by the wooden casket, and places a drawing of a key on cloth on it, she also takes off her own silver amulet and places it in the sarcophagi, she whispers "I'm sorry my friend. I don't know what else I can do for you now. But please take this. It belonged to my mother, but I want you to have it now."

The heavy nickle lid is closed as Belle offers up one last dirge, as she fights off tears.

Ponies begin to leave. Some stay longer than others, but soon enough the tomb is closed, and the ponies return to their work. Thundersplinter is gone from their lives, but she'll never be forgotten.
___________________________________________________________________________________________

After the funeral Charity and her family return home. Charity takes off her robe and goes to hang it on the wall, when she notices something strange about it. She examines it more closely and sees embroidered on the robe along the inside of the collar, in gold colored thread the word "Generosity."

'That's never been there before?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Darkening Kaos on January 23, 2012, 03:24:59 am
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Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 03:43:27 am
Khenal's Secret Book, Chapter 1

It feels a bit odd to have a secret book.  I mean, why write something down that you don't want to be known?  Well, my Secret, I do want you to be known, but not yet.  There are things in Glitterglen that I do not trust, and so I have taken great pains to keep you hidden.  And to keep my Study hidden as well.  It has taken me literally years to finish my hidden Study.  I found it when I noticed something seemed off about the shower in the chambers Friesden and I share.  Up the sluice, I found a small depression that might have made a decent room.  You know, except for the water and the flight up the shaft.  Eventually, I decided to expand it slightly and make it a secret Study, to examine some of the odd things here in Glitterglen.  I set many gems around the room to deflect any attempts at magical observation.  They aren't perfect, but they will certainly keep anyone form looking without my notice.

There are several things I need to study, my Secret.  Like the


I look up form my writing as one of the gems emits a small chime, alerting me to somepony knocking at my chamber doors.  I hastily close my Secret Book and exit my Study, diving into the rushing column of water back to my shower.  My horn glows as I quickly repel the water and rush to the door, hoping I didn't leave whoever it was waiting long enough for them to be suspicious of anything.

"Hello?"  I ask as I open the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 03:52:01 am
As Khenal opens the door, he sees the Duchess, she is not wearing her robes that she normally wears, which makes it the first time he's seen her undressed in quite some time. That wouldn't actually be that unusual as she lives just down the hall and if it was unofficial she might not need her symbols of office to visit a friend. However, she was levitating her robe some short distance away from her, and that did strike Khenal as odd.

"Khenal. I need to ask you about something. May I come inside?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 03:53:35 am
I raise an eyebrow at Charity's slightly odd behavior, but beckon her inside.

"Uh, sure, Charity.  What did you need to ask me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 03:56:06 am
Charity walks inside past Khenal, "thank you."

She places her robe on the table and takes a seat.

"What do you make of this?" She points at the new gold lettering on the inside of her midnight blue robes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 03:57:20 am
Friesden takes this moment to leave her room, with a smile on her face as she thinks about her own plans for the evening.

"Oh, hello Duchess. Visiting Khenal again?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 04:02:05 am
"Oh hello Friesden. Yes, I need Khenal's opinion of something strange I found. How are you doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 04:03:04 am
"I don't know much about threadwork..."  I say as I lean in to examine the writing.  "Generosity" is clearly written, but it's not simple thread.  It appears as though part of the cloth itself was simply transmuted to gold.

'I knew this was a nice robe, but I didn't know we had anypony this skilled in transmutation spells here.  Wait, Generosity?  Didn't Starkey mention...'


"Hey Friesden!  Charity wanted me to look at something on her robe real quick."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 04:03:35 am
"Oh, feeling giddy. It's time for Falcata's blind date," she giggles, "with Heiro. They are so cute together!"

She turns to Khenal, with a hint of forced humour on her face. "Oh, is that your excuse? Hehehe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 04:11:14 am
"Heiro? Seriously? With Captain Falcata? I just can't see that. A sensible mature mare and mother like Falcata, with that foalish oaf. Not a match made by the Sisters in my book. I mean Heiro is decent fellow, but he's hardly more than a colt."

She turns to Khenal.

"Anyway I came to you Khenal because you know more about magic than anypony in Glitterglen, and well, these letters, if you can believe me, weren't here when I put on the robe before the funeral. I KNOW that they weren't. But afterwords when I went to hang it on the wall. There they were plain as day. I swear to you I'm not crazy, but I don't know how they could have gotten there if not by magic. And if magic who and why?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 04:14:19 am
Friesden's voice drops to an icy low.

"Heiro's not a foalish oaf. Have fun together."

She heads out of the room and slams the door behind her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 04:18:52 am
I chuckle and give Friesden a kiss. 

"I love you."

Standing next to Friesden, I try to answer Charity's question.

"I believe you, Charity.  You aren't the only pony who's had unique lettering appear on something important.  Falcata's hammer has an inscription you didn't commission, as well as Starkey's axe."

I gently nuzzle Friesden.

"Friesden, too, had an inscription appear on one of her items: a scalpel.  As far as who and why, though?  I'm stumped.  Starkey has a theory, though..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 04:21:02 am
"Starkey?" Charity chuckles, "What does he think?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 04:29:58 am
I sadly watch the door after Friesden leaves, before Charity's chuckle and question remind me she's still here.

"He thinks it could be something very major.  I forget his exact wordings, but there are a few pieces of Scripture that make me wonder.  Basically, there are 6 ideals for ponies to strive for: Honesty, Loyalty, Laughter, Kindness, Generosity and Magic.  With your robe, the only ones that haven't yet been inscribed on something are Laughter and Magic."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 04:34:52 am
"So do you think somepony is doing this? Or do you think Starkey is right? Is this something bigger?"

Charity thinks for a moment. "You said it was Falcata, Starkey, Friesden and myself that had something like this, and I have Generosity. What did each of the others get?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 04:36:56 am
"Falcata has Loyalty, Friesden has Kindness, and Starkey has Honesty."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 04:43:57 am
"Hmm, well Falcata is very loyal, and I've never known Starkey to lie, and Friesden, well, she's certainly been kind recently. I don't know if I'd call myself generous, but well do you think somepony is doing this? Giving us the virtue they think we best exemplify?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 04:47:46 am
"I don't know.  All of the engravings would take a master transmutationist to perform, if they're even possible.  Not to mention that they would have to somehow sneak close enough to each pony to cast it and somehow not be seen.  I will look into it, though.  Um, if you want me to?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 04:53:10 am
"Well, if it's not somepony doing it, then why would they appear? Glitterglen has been full of malevolent spirits in the past, do you think this is something good trying to help us protect our home? But what good does words do for us? Honesty and loyalty can't repel a demon, generosity can't protect somepony, kindness alone can't heal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 05:01:39 am
"Not all spirits have been malevolent.  A lot of them just seemed to want to make something.  And Honesty and Loyalty have repelled daemons, actually.  They are very potent symbols, and they helped defeat the daemon that had gotten into me.  The inscriptions are more than words, I think.  They are the very ideas behind them.  If anything can defeat daemons, it's the virtues ponies are meant to reach for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 05:09:22 am
Charity looks a little surprised, especially when Khenal said that the symbols had helped to repel demons before.

"So, if the words are more than just simple inscriptions, then they aren't being placed by anypony here. Khenal if you do learn anything more about these than I would like to be informed, as soon as possible. But thank you for looking at my robe, you have put my mind at ease at the very least."

Charity levitates her robe back over to her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 23, 2012, 05:16:59 am
"Can do, Charity."

I walk over to one of my book cases, looking for the Book of the Sisters.  It'd give me something to read while waiting for Friesden so I could apologize to her.


((And scene!  Unless KSB wants to post Charity leaving?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 23, 2012, 05:24:52 am
Charity wraps herself back up in her robe, bids Khenal farewell, and heads out the door to go to work for the day.

'I wonder if it is true. Those words are all listed as virtues for ponies in the Book of the Sisters, but could that really be it? Could we really be something special. It couldn't be, there are other ponies who would better represent generosity, the others maybe but not me, but what else makes sense? How else could it have gotten there except by some miracle.'

She pushes the thought from her mind and tries to get on with running her city.


((End of Scene.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 04:09:23 pm
Friesden walks to Heiro's room, the start of a bad mood fading away as her plan begins to come together.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 06:00:44 pm
Heiro looks up as she enters. "Hey little sis. Whatcha up to?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 06:17:13 pm
"Oh, nothing, big brother," she says with a twinkle of mischief in her eyes. "Want to come on a little walk?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 06:18:39 pm
"You're up to somethin' aintcha. Alright, I don't have anything else to do right now. I'd love to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 06:22:42 pm
"Yay! This will be so fun!"

Grabbing hold of Heiro, Friesden leads him, by a roundabout route, to Falcata's quarters, and knocks on the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 07:02:54 pm
Falcata looks up from the spellbook she was studying as she hears the knocking at her door.  She closes the old tome, the only spellbook she had owned and never really understood and places it back on her shelf.  She wasn't making much progress understanding anything in it anyway, she'd probably have to get Khenal's help later when they moved on to that in her training.

She stands, walks over to the door and opens it.


"Oh, hello Friesden.  Would you like to come in?"

((I can't get on the IRC until the regular time, but I should be able to respond to posts for a little while))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 07:10:04 pm
"No, we've got something special for you! Come with us!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 07:12:29 pm
Heiro just shrugs, "How are you and Kris doing Falcata?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 07:16:38 pm
She notices Corporal Heiro next to Friesden as she opens the door fully, and gives him a smile.  "Oh, hello.  I'm doing well.  Kris is off studying something with Dr. Bubbles today."  The only thing she really had to do right now was to stare holes through her spellbook or practice meditation some more, so she could use a distraction.  She steps outside and closes the door.

"Where are we headed?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 07:23:30 pm
"We're headed to the dining hall. I found a use for all those spare streamers and stuff from the...from the party. Come on!"


Friesden leads the two to the dining hall. In the middle is a cake, with icing on it saying "Happy First Date!". Friesden seems to disappear before the two can ask any questions.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 07:28:09 pm
Heiro looks at the cake "Happy first..... s-sis..." He blushes looking at Falcata for her reaction.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 07:43:17 pm
Falcata's eyes go wide as she reads the writing on the cake.  She looks over to where Friesden stood and says, "Friesden...?"

Realizing that the mare was gone, she looks back to her remaining company with a confused expression. "Um... did-did you...?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 07:55:55 pm
"I-I didn't... I-I mean sis never... she just asked if I wanted to go for a walk...." he continues to blush, watching Falcata's reaction intently.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 08:11:21 pm
((So... what all preparations are there?  Anything but the presumed decorations and the cake?))

Falcata surveys the dining hall.  Friesden certainly had gone through a lot of trouble for the two of them.  It was a sweet gesture... if a bit... sudden.  Corporal Heiro seemed to be pretty nervous, but that could be for a lot of reasons.  How was he taking this?  She clears her throat.  "Well!  This was quite unexpected," she says, keeping her voice level with some difficulty and trying to read Heiro's body language and response.

((Remember, she's going to need a bit of encouragement, perhaps the gentlecolt should lead a bit?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 08:12:58 pm
((Decorations, other food, and cake.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 08:16:15 pm
"Y-yeah, I-I knew that sis thought w-we looked nice together.... b-but I-I was worried about..." He looks around, still blushing. "M-maybe we should stick around? I-it might be nice..." Heiro looks at Falcata hopefully, she hadn't left yet... maybe...maybe she did think there could be something there...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 08:27:31 pm
Falcata lets out a low, nervous chuckle.  "She did say that..."  She looks back to the everything set out and adds, "...and I suppose we can't let all of this go to waste."

She gives him a smile, trying to mask her nervousness.  He clearly wasn't averse to the idea.  This was all very sudden for her, though.  Honestly, she was surprised he was even interested... she was a decade older than him among other things.  He was a nice pony though, and she wouldn't want to upset him by brushing him off.  Or Friesden for that matter.

And who knew?  Maybe she would have a nice night after all.  Already she was thinking about her first date with Estoc though... sisters help her, she didn't want to break down about that in front of him.  Or let it spoil everything.


((Probably my last post for a little while, be on the IRC in an hour and a half to two hours from now))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 08:32:35 pm
"W-well, can I get you s-something then? T-there's a l-lot of food here..." Heiro tried to regain his composure, she wasn't leaving, and she didn't seem too put off by the idea... now if only he knew what he was doing... He had never been on a date before...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 09:01:22 pm
Meanwhile, hidden in an alcove above the dining hall, Friesden watches the pair with a huge smile on her face.

They were so cute together! All this effort was worthwhile if only for that. And then they'd be happy, and that would be the best!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 09:03:36 pm
Suddenly, a voice speaks from behind Friesden.

"Soo... Th' culprit returns t' th' scene o' th' crime, t'admire her handiwork..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 09:06:27 pm
Friesden turns around, the huge smile growing even larger, if that were possible. "Shhh, mum, or they'll notice us!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 09:09:31 pm
Otik squeezes in beside Friesden, lowering her voice to a whisper.

"So how are they doin'? They hit it off nice?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 09:12:05 pm
"Yes, I think so." Friesden squees quietely. "They're the cutest couple ever."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 09:15:23 pm
Otik peers over the edge.

"Falcata's takin' it like a right trooper... but poor Heiro's tremblin' like a leaf."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 09:17:51 pm
"What should I do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 09:19:20 pm
She ponders for a moment.

"Hmm... let 'em be, for now. Once they get t'talkin', he'll loosen up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 09:21:06 pm
"Okay, mum...what do you think about them?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 09:47:00 pm
"Well, Miss Falcata already has a foal o' her own, so she wos married b'fore. I dunnae recall ever hearin' 'bout her lookin' f'r a relationship, but she dunnae seem t'shy away from bucks either, so I dunnae think she left 'im. An accident, maybe? She might still have... scars, f'r lack o' a better word. That'll take some work t'get past, but from here, it looks like she's tryin'."

"Now Heiro, it's his first date, an' it shows. Beyond that, I''ve got lit'l experience readin' stallions."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 09:49:21 pm
"Is...is there anything I can do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 10:37:26 pm
"Ye've done all ye can right now, Fri. Jus' let 'em be, an' see how it goes."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 10:49:53 pm
Falcata smiles to try and reassure Heiro.  The poor thing was beside himself.  Did she intimidate him that much?  "Well, let's see what we've got here..."  She steps over to the food laid out and begins inspecting what was available.  She takes a few things that looked particularly appetizing and waits for Heiro to join her at an empty table.  The idea that she was actually on a date still hadn't quite sunk in yet, she felt.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 10:53:19 pm
Heiro gathers a few things and joined Falcata, sitting maybe a little closer than was necessary. "I-I'm still surprised sis did this... y-you aren't mad right? I-I don't want..." his voice trails off again as he blushes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 11:00:27 pm
Falcata continues to smile and offers him another low chuckle.  "Oh, no, of course I'm not mad.  More than a bit surprised, perhaps."  She looks around at the decorations placed around.  "And a bit touched Friesden would go through this much trouble for us."  She takes a cautious bite of her food, trying to mind her table manners as much as possible.  Heiro was sitting a bit close, she thought, but as nervous as he seemed to be she could forgive him for making a few mistakes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 23, 2012, 11:08:25 pm
"Ooh, that's a little too close methinks."

She keeps watching.

"But she dunnae seem t'mind? Mebbe she really does want it t'work."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 23, 2012, 11:09:29 pm
"Oooh, I hope so..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 11:17:23 pm
"That's...that's good... s-so how have you been doing? And Kris too..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 11:24:49 pm
Falcata takes a cautious sip at the midnight berry wine prepared for the two of them.  It had been over a year since she'd had a drink.  Ever since she got so sick, she couldn't stomach it.  She forgot how much she loved this particular variety though.  She really would have to thank Friesden for this when she got a chance.

"I've been doing well lately.  Mostly business as usual, except that Lord Cryptson and Lady Charity have actually taken active roles in training with us.  I'm a bit nervous about that, but it's working out fine so far."  She takes another bite of food, making a conscious effort to swallow it all before speaking.  "Kris has been doing well too.  She's been spending some time with Dr. Bubbles learning a bit more about medicine.  We have plenty of doctors already, but he insists that she not waste her talent.  I suppose he's got a point."

She looks over to him.  "How about you?  Everything going well in the guard?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 11:31:07 pm
"Well enough... not really a lot I have to do..." He slowly eats, trying to remember something about table manners,

'I have to impress her with something but..."

'nothing you can do little bro, don't brag or boast, just calm down and be yourself. I'm sure she'll like that.'

Heiro swallows a bit more food. "I've been trying to train when I can, but ever since the indecent with the prisoners..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 23, 2012, 11:39:39 pm
She chews thoughtfully and washes her food down with another sip of wine.  "I did hear about that from Madush and Osal.  They told me that there was a jailbreak or something, and you intercepted them.  I don't think I ever got the whole story though."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 23, 2012, 11:50:28 pm
"No..no it wasn't like that at all... I had been looking to train a bit after my wound healed, and I had noticed that the prisoners hadn't been being given much in the way of rations. I asked Dad if I could make them an offer, and he agreed..." Heiro takes a drink looking somewhat upset

"I offered them extra rations for a week to spar with me, wooden weapons only, all good and clean. Apparently Madush and Osal passed by at the wrong time and assumed an escape... they died... and it was my fault. I-I was just trying to make them more comfortable."

Heiro shakes his head... "B-but that's depressing... t-this is a date, things are supposed to be happy right? Umm... Friesden seems to be doing well... I'm happy to see her smile... heh, apparently she wanted to see me smile a bit too."

'hey I've stopped stuttering as much... I-I hope she's enjoying herself...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 24, 2012, 12:00:35 am
She nods her head judiciously as she listens.  "I see.  I suppose I could see how they made that mistake..."  She takes another sip of her wine.  This was good wine.  She wasn't entirely sure she understood why he would spar with the prisoners like that when he could have with anypony in the guard, but decided it was best not to press the question.

"And I'm glad to see Friesden happy too.  She's a good friend, but I suppose you see her more often than I do.  Right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 24, 2012, 12:06:37 am
"Yeah, I try to see my sis whenever I can... I've been meaning to see Kris more... you don't mind me playing with her do you? She seems like she could use a friend sometimes."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 24, 2012, 12:24:29 am
"Oh, no, you're right about that.  I just wish she had made more friends around here when she was younger."  She thinks about Lilac for a moment and decides to not to bring up the filly's disappearance.  That would spoil the mood for certain.  "You seem to have a taken a real liking to her, and the other way around.  If you don't mind me asking... what drew you to her?"

Well, that might be a bit awkward, but she couldn't take it back now.  As she sips at her wine again, she starts to think about the fact that they were on a date again.  She hadn't been on that many dates in her life, and most had been over a decade ago.  She looks at Heiro and thinks back to her first date with Estoc.  The roles had been pretty much reversed then.  She'd never been a particularly social pony, and she'd stumbled through their date pretty badly.

It was a bit cute.  She had been a bit intimidated by Estoc, and she could only imagine he felt like she did back then.  Maybe that's what Estoc saw in her?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 24, 2012, 12:26:57 am
"Heiro looks like he's coping a bit better now. Yay!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 24, 2012, 12:36:14 am
"Umm.. well, The first time I really met her was during your surgery... She looked so scared then, and with the way she thought she was going to lose you, lose her only family... I don't know I just felt like I should be there for her. After that, when I was taking care of her while you got better... I-I really started to think of her as family..."

Heiro shakes his head again "I-I'm sorry, that sounds strange doesn't it... I-I just have a tendency to ramble when..." He takes a drink, trying to hide his blush, hoping that she understood.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 24, 2012, 12:40:04 am
"Oh, aye, he's much calmer now. They're onta a topic they can both relate to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 24, 2012, 12:44:56 am
"I really hope this goes well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 24, 2012, 12:54:40 am
Falcata smiles and takes another sip of her wine.  She'd best watch herself there... wouldn't want to overdo it.  She imagined she could already feel a little different, but she was probably just being nervous.

"No, no, I think I understand."  He'd been through a lot, and how that could shape somepony's perceptions of things she could only imagine.  Friesden had a pretty interesting outlook on family, at least, and his wasn't any more strange than that.  "Thank you again for looking after her.  She's a good filly and stays out of trouble most of the time, but I like to know she's safe.  She means the world to me."

She takes another bite of food and notices a hint of redness on Heiro's cheeks.  She'd have never believed that she would make somepony this nervous.  Words leave her, but she gives him a small smile to punctuate her last statement on a high note instead of the more morbid tone of possibly losing Kris.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 24, 2012, 12:55:49 am
"Uhm... Miss Falcata seems t'be goin at th' drink a just a touch too fast."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 24, 2012, 12:58:38 am
"You do? T-that's good. I know my feelings on family can be a bit... strange sometimes. I-It's nice to see you smiling though. I-I guess I'm doing something right..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 24, 2012, 01:07:28 am
She chuckles, a bit louder than she anticipated.  Oh, that didn't bode well.  She was definitely feeling something now.   Best try and keep herself collected.  She didn't trust herself to talk when she was drunk.  At least she wasn't there yet.  "Yes... I suppose I must seem to be a bit of a killjoy sometimes.  I think I take everything too seriously sometimes."

She smiles and swallows another bite of food.  "You seem to have adjusted well to being here though."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 24, 2012, 01:13:32 am
"Well sis helped, and Khenal... I-I never did thank you for helping me remember my past did I... and for accepting it. Thank you."

 Heiro smiles "I can't believe how much I had forgotten, and you helped me get it back. And for the record, I don't think you're a killjoy, I just think you're like big sis, you've seen to much to have an easy time letting your guard down. But like they say, life's far too serious to take seriously, gotta laugh, and play... otherwise things can get far too dark..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 24, 2012, 01:14:15 am
"I...is there something I should do? I don't...I just want them to be happy. They'll be happy, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 24, 2012, 01:42:56 am
She listens carefully and catches herself telekinetically reaching for the wine glass again.  No ma'am, you've had enough.  "Don't worry about it."  Her smile continues, if a bit smaller now.  "Anything to help a friend."  She makes a small gesture to her own head, missing the exact motion by a bit.  "I should thank you too.  Believe it or not, it... helped me a lot to share my own history with somepony else.  It... can be tough at times.  Some of that... even Kris still doesn't know."

She chuckles softly and tries to change the subject.  She didn't want to get bogged down thinking about what happened in Coupledye.  "She's not far from a mare herself now though.  Sometimes I still treat her like the filly she was when we arrived here, but she's grown a lot since then."  She pauses to think about the stomach that was allowing her to eat and drink right now.  "I'm really proud of her, she's done a lot for me if nopony else."

A thought strikes her.  "Oh, but I don't mean to sound boastful."  She suddenly finds the wine glass leaving her lips.  Clop.  No more, or she'd regret it!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 24, 2012, 01:48:49 am
"That's right, I hadn't thought about that... Kris will be a mare soon... I don't think you ave to worry about sounding boastful, from what I've seen Kris deserves the praise...as does her mother..." Heiro looks at the plates in front of them. "U-umm want me to get some cake? Be a shame to let it go to waste."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 24, 2012, 01:51:17 am
"Just... wait, hun. Things'll work out, ye'll see."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 24, 2012, 01:59:59 am
She smiles as she thinks about what Heiro said.  Kris really had come a long way in the three to four years they had been there.  Especially considering the environment.  Truth be told she'd been horrified that one or the other of them wouldn't have lived this long, which had nearly come to fruition, but her daughter had saved her life.  With the help of number of other ponies, of course, but it was still heartwarming to think about.  She couldn't have asked for more.

Wait... had he said she deserved praise too?  No... that was probably just the wine talking.  She feels a belch coming and chokes it back down, making it just audible as a hiccup as she covers her mouth with a hoof.


"Oh, um... excuse me," she says with a smile, feeling her cheeks turn slightly red.  The wine wasn't helping there.  "Yes, some cake sounds wonderful right now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 24, 2012, 02:07:04 am
Heiro smiles at the blush, happy that Falcata seemed to be enjoying herself. He went over and got two slices of cake, and placed them on the table, making sure to give Falcata the larger piece.

 "S-so Falcata... u-umm, are...are you enjoying out date? I-I want it to go well s-so..." he stops talking and blushes again, looking at the ground. He peeks at her out of the corner of his eye... hoping for a positive reaction.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 24, 2012, 02:31:40 am
"Thank you," she says, accepting the cake and magically reaching for her fork.  The next sentence comes out of Heiro's mouth as a bit of train wreck, as nervous as he was.  He needed to relax some.  She was nervous too, but she'd have never believed somepony would get this worked up over her.  Another smile forms on her lips as she chews a bite of the cake.  It was very good.  Suddenly she wonders who cooked it all.  Was Friesden much of a chef?

"Don't worry, I'm having a nice time.  I don't get many chances to just sit down and talk with somepony."

She did wonder where this would lead though.  She really wasn't sure she was ready to move on from Estoc... but... this had been a very relaxing afternoon so far.  And Heiro was trying so hard... for a moment she almost pictured him like a son that needed encouragement more than a stallion courting her.  Probably just because of the things she'd seen in his head.  She was almost old enough to be his mother though.  Come to think of it, she was surprised that didn't bother him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 24, 2012, 02:43:16 am
Heiro takes a breath, calming himself. "G-good, I was worried... I've never been on a date before." he sits again, closer this time, near to touching her. "I'm glad sis set this up... I-I was trying to think of some way to ask... guess I didn't have to. It's good that you're enjoying yourself."

He takes a bite of cake, thinking about his next words. "I've really enjoyed being able to spend time with you. I think..." He stops again, trying to hide a blush by eating some more cake.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 24, 2012, 03:01:58 am
She nods and swallows another bite of cake.  "It's been a long time for me, and believe me, I was nervous then, too."   She was nervous now too, of course.  She gives him a reassuring expression.  "You're doing fine, try to relax a bit."

She tenses mentally as he sits again, a bit closer this time. He was coming on a bit strong.  It was touching and cute in a way, but she couldn't help but wonder if it was just a crush from him.  Fleeting and passionate, but without substance.  She couldn't really place why he'd be so interested in her.  She could just flat ask him of course, but that wouldn't be wholly appropriate.

"Yes, I really must thank Friesden for setting this up for us.  It has been a relaxing evening, a nice distraction from practicing one thing or another.  And it's been nice spending time with you too, I don't get many opportunities like this."

Deep down, she felt guilty for encouraging him.  They had only been on a single date for less than an hour, but she feared what would happen if she never could get over Estoc.  She didn't want to lead Heiro on... But, it was far too early for that, so she kept the smile on her face and the wine glass to her lips... buck!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 24, 2012, 03:36:13 am
Heiro smiles and eats his cake, watching Falcata. She seemed to really seem to be enjoying herself, that was good. He was hoping that this could become something... more. She seemed to be encouraging, but he remembered Estoc... he held a big part in Falcatas mind... what was Heiro in comparison to that.

He looks at his plate intently, the worries starting to get to him.

'Come on now little bro, you start getting all depressed and this will really turn out bad.'

'Right, stay happy, worry about tomorrow, tomorrow. Laugh today.'

Heiro smiles "Well then we're both enjoying ourselves. And I get to be on a date with the best pony in the fort." His eyes open wide, as if he didn't mean to say that out loud, and he blushes deeply, looking at Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 24, 2012, 03:53:58 am
Falcata chokes on the last bite of cake as she hears the words.  What?  She washes the cake down with a gulp of wine and clears her throat.  "Uh... C-C... I mean, Heiro... y-you think I'm..." she trails off, a bit of rosiness returning to her cheeks and her eyes wide with some difficulty.  She could really feel the wine taking its toll now, and her eyes were getting a bit heavy.

Maybe she misheard him.  She didn't know how he'd think she was the best pony in Glitterglen.  There were plenty of other ponies better than her here in lots of ways.  Better fighters, better friends, better parents... she was just... herself.  Had she really done something that big to impress him so?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 24, 2012, 02:52:48 pm
"Is...are they okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 25, 2012, 12:27:55 am
"F-Falcata, you okay? Did...did I say something wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 25, 2012, 12:35:04 am
She blinks a few times and swallows again.  "I... uh, well..."  She tilts her head.  "You said I was the... best... pony in Glitterglen?  I... I guess I just... I'm not sure why anypony would say that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TALLPANZER on January 25, 2012, 01:19:47 am
Hello Glitter glen. I was wondering if the Alicorn Mason/Engraver was still available. If he is I would ask that he be renamed "Tom" and start to work as a cook, please. Okay thank you and goodbye for now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 25, 2012, 02:00:28 am
"Oh dear, o' course she'd be th' modest type. He needs t'press jus' a tiny bit harder..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 25, 2012, 02:01:48 am
"This is getting to me, this waiting."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 25, 2012, 02:09:50 am
"Why wouldn't they? You're nice, pretty, an amazing mother to Kris, you've saved my life twice, you didn't even care that I was a diomedian, and y-you understand how I feel about family, Of course you're the best pony." Heiro's words leave him in a rush, as if a dam has broken. After he finishes he looks at Falcata blushing heavily and nervously leans in and hugs her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 25, 2012, 02:29:18 am
Falcata listens as Heiro explains himself, the rosiness on her cheeks deepening.  She... she had no idea he thought so much of her.  Had she really had this much impact on somepony?  What about the others?  Did anypony else think of her like this?  "Heiro... I... I had no idea..." she begins, disbelief on her face.  As he leans in and hugs her, she tenses momentarily before relaxing.  Maybe it was the booze, she wasn't sure, but she returns a small hug.  "That's... that's the nicest thing anypony has said to me in a long time... I... don't know what to say..."

She still didn't know if she really believed all of that, but... well... maybe she had done something right here in Glitterglen after all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 25, 2012, 03:02:09 am
Friesden tears up. "I...I should have said something about how nice she was...I'm such a bad pony..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 25, 2012, 03:04:27 am
"No, Friesden... She needed t'hear it from him. An' now, look how well they're gettin' along!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 25, 2012, 03:19:00 am
"So...so this is good?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 25, 2012, 02:59:31 pm
Heiro lets go of the hug and looks up at Falcata. "I-I'm glad you think so... I've been wanting to tell you how I felt for a while now, I was just n-nervous that you wouldn't like it."

Heiro smiles, his mind racing. She had hugged him, and she wasn't backing away. Maybe she did feel something for him... hopefully. Every word he had said was true... but had nopony else really said anything? Well he had now, and he would remind her whenever she needed it.

"It's nice seeing you happy, and enjoying yourself. I-I was really worried that I would mess up somehow..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 25, 2012, 03:47:21 pm
She smiles, chuckles and looks away.  "Well... I'm still not sure I feel comfortable with the idea of being the best pony... but it's good to know I've made somepony happy at least."

Her smile broadens a bit as she looks back to him.  "It's nice to see you happy too.  And don't worry, you're doing quite well to say this is your first date.  You should have heard some of the things I've said and done on dates before."  Another, slightly louder chuckle leaves her lips.  Oh, some of the things she'd said to Estoc...

Her own mind was racing, as much as it could through the fogginess of the wine, which had by now completely left her glass for her stomach... when did that happen?  She really did think of Heiro as a good friend, but as a potential lover?  She had loved and lost once already... she really didn't know if she could love again.  And... what would Estoc think of this?  If only there was some way she could talk to him...

A nagging thought kept creeping back into her mind.  Heiro was so young... she did feel a bit like she was helping a son along with some new task.  "So, you say you've felt like this for a while... I must admit I'm still a bit surprised.  I'm at least a decade older than you, and I would think most stallions would be a bit... intimidated... by me outranking them."

Maybe she shouldn't have said that... but with the wine loosening her jaw she just couldn't keep it in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 25, 2012, 06:47:52 pm
Heiro looks at Falcata confused, "Why should that matter? You're still the same pony to me. As for rank... if you outrank me, then you do. I'd follow your orders if I worked for you, but I don't see why that would intimidate me. It... doesn't change anything... does it?"

He thinks for a bit, "Well, it doesn't matter to me at least. You're who you are, and I like it. The other stuff don't matter... or it shouldn't at least."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 25, 2012, 07:04:03 pm
She maintains her smile and shakes her head.  "No, I suppose none of that should matter, should it?"  She lets out another small chuckle.  There was one stallion that came to mind, back in Coupledye.  Tulwar, she believed.  She'd actually overheard him talking to a friend about that very thing: he was interested in her, but she outranked him and was his senior by a year or two.  He just settled for being nervous around her perpetually.  Suited her fine.  "Some ponies are just peculiar that way."

She couldn't quite place why, but she felt a little warm and fuzzy inside.  Maybe it was just the wine.  Maybe it wasn't.  She enjoyed Heiro's company, and the evening had only reinforced that.  But, she was going to have to take some time to let all of this settle in her head.  She was on a date.  She'd have never believed this would happen any time soon, if ever.

((I'll be on the IRC in a few hours, but I'll keep checking up on the thread.  Not sure if you've got something else for Heiro to say, but I suppose Friesden and Otik might at least.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 26, 2012, 12:55:15 am
"It's workin'... they're really warmin' up to each other, oh Friesden, yer brilliant!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 01:03:50 am
"This is good...ooh, I can't wait for the wedding!" Friesden squees again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 26, 2012, 01:17:39 am
"Okay, okay, stay calm. They en't quite outta th' woods yet. Keep watchin'."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 01:19:14 am
"Okay, okay, mum."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 26, 2012, 01:29:20 am
Heiro watched Falcata smile happy as he could be. The mare he cared about was enjoying his company, and the date. He would really have to remember to thank little sis for this later... but what to say now...

"Umm... You wanna take a walk somewhere? Maybe we could go out and look at the stars? O-or maybe just walk around the fort some?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 26, 2012, 01:35:31 am
She considers the offer for a moment before nodding.  There wasn't much reason to hang around in here right now, and it should be safe enough for two trained guards ponies above ground if they stayed close to the fort.

"Alright, a walk sounds nice."  She moves to stand but finds her limbs heavy and unresponsive.  She takes a step and nearly stumbles, which she finds inexplicably amusing.  A chuckle bordering on a giggle passes her lips.  "Oh... um, I think... maybe I've had a bit too much wine..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 01:37:32 am
"Is...is she okay? Should we go and help? Mum?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 26, 2012, 01:37:40 am
Heiro quickly moves beside Falcata, giving her something to lean on. "Maybe we should just take you home instead. We can go for a walk another night maybe?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 26, 2012, 01:38:44 am
Otik grins.

"...I think yer brother has this well in hand, hun. Let's follow 'em."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 01:40:08 am
"Okay, mum."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 26, 2012, 01:40:24 am
She finds her eyes heavy and her legs not much better, and gives him a nod with a sheepish smile.  "Yes... perhaps that would be best.  I owe you that walk later."  She chuckles again and blinks a few times.  "Oh... I must look silly.  Sorry about this, it's been a long time..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 26, 2012, 01:45:04 am
"'S no problem, let's just get you back home. No need for you to apologize. You think Kris is back home yet? Heiro keeps next to Falcata, supporting her as they start back to her house.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 26, 2012, 01:52:50 am
"Um... yes, she's probably home by now.  Probably wondering where I am, actually."  She walks with Heiro back to her home, fighting to keep herself as lucid as possible.  She couldn't believe she let herself drink so much, but at least Heiro was being nice about it.

"Here we are..." she says unnecessarily as they arrive at her door, just across from the duchess' quarters.  Hopefully Lady Charity wouldn't see her like this at least.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 26, 2012, 02:06:25 am
"Do you think Kris will have had dinner yet?" Heiro shifts a bit and looks at Falcata "I was thinking I could take her to get something to eat, and let her spend the night at my place, she seemed to enjoy it somewhat while you were in the hospital... and I figure you might like the night off..."

'I don't think Falcata would want Kris seeing her like this... I hope she understands what I'm actually saying...'

'I'm sure she will bro... Nice thinking putting it in a way that lets her keep her pride'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 26, 2012, 02:09:13 am
"Um... no, she probably hasn't actually."  She tilts her head for a moment and thinks about what he said, and a smile forms.  "If... you don't mind... I wouldn't want to impose..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 26, 2012, 02:11:14 am
"Not at all, I love having her around."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 26, 2012, 02:18:39 am
"Thank you."  That was a load off of her mind.  She'd forgotten about getting Kris something to eat that night, and she certainly wasn't looking forward to being drunk in front of her.  She opens the door and steps inside, finding Kris sitting on the bed reading a small book.  With some effort, she forces herself lucid and tries to make her face as natural as possible.

"Hi, honey.  Mr. Heiro came by and offered for you to stay with him tonight.  Would you like to?"

Kris perks up, closes her book and hops down with a smile on her face.  "Oh!  Okay, I haven't seen Mr. Heiro in a while.  Let me go grab my things."

As Kris trots off to do just that, Falcata turns back to Heiro with a tired smile on her face.  "Thank you again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 26, 2012, 02:24:57 am
"Like I said It's no problem. U-umm... I had a great time tonight, and I'm really looking forward to that walk." He blushes a bit, looks around, and then steps forward and kisses Falcata on the cheek. "G-goodnight Falcata... hope you sleep well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 26, 2012, 02:39:12 am
Falcata's cheeks turn bright red, visible clearly through her fur.  Her eyes go wide and she stammers something incoherent.  "Uh... g-g-goodnight."

Kris trots back into the room and up to Heiro.  "Okay, I'm ready!"

As the two leave, Falcata slowly turns back to the bed and shuffles over to it, eyes still wide.  He... just kissed her.  She hadn't been kissed in years.  He clearly felt something for her.  She extinguishes the light with her magic as she collapses into the bed, feeling exhausted both mentally and physically.  There was so much to think about... so, so much...

Could she do this?  Why not?  What was there to be afraid of?  Did she have feelings for him?  She hadn't noticed them before... but she couldn't rule it out completely.  He was a nice pony... and a bit cute.  She couldn't deny that, especially during the date.

But a kiss... she... she wasn't expecting that.  He was new to dating, he said... just expressing his feelings.  But she worried.  He must feel very strongly for her.  What if she couldn't reciprocate?  What then?  She didn't want to break his heart.  But she still didn't know him all that well.  Maybe she would come to have feelings for him too?  Maybe she already did?  Hidden and buried under her past with Estoc?

So much to think about... and right now, she just wanted to fall asleep.  She still had that walk she owed him.  Maybe that would help settle her thoughts a bit.

((Scene concluded.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 03:14:29 pm
After receiving a brief congratulations from Otik, Friesden returned home herself.

She hoped the duchess was there. She'd see. Friesden still felt angry at the way the duchess had talked about Heiro. About her brother. But now she'd have to admit that she was wrong, and Friesden was feeling a bit happier at this.

She came to the door and swung it open, a victorious smile on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 03:23:56 pm
I look up from my book to see Friesden enter and give her a sheepish smile, still worried I had done something to upset her before she left.

"So, um... how did it go?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 03:27:14 pm
Friesden's victory deflated a bit. The duchess wasn't here. At least her love was.

"It was...it was good."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 03:32:21 pm
I close the Book and get up to nuzzle Friesden.

"I love you.  I'm sorry about Charity."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 03:36:38 pm
Friesden burst into tears as he touches her.

"Wh-wh-why doesn't she li-li-like him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 04:54:10 pm
"I'm sure she likes him.  She's just not so sure he and Falcata would make a good pair."

I embrace Friesden and try to wipe some of her tears.

"I think they do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 04:56:58 pm
"I-I-I just want ev-ev-everypony to be h-h-happy...and th-th-they seemed so h-h-happy together, and they were h-h-happy tonight... I-i-is that so wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 04:59:56 pm
"No, that's not wrong at all.  Making others happy is what everypony should strive for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 05:00:56 pm
"Th-the-then why doesn't the duchess like me doing it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 05:07:37 pm
"She was just worried they might not be happy together, but it looks like she was wrong."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 05:09:43 pm
"I-I-I'm...I'm such a silly mare...how can you stand to be near me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 05:21:10 pm
"Because you try to help others.  But mostly simply because I love you."

I kiss Friesden, happy that somepony so wonderful could love me back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 05:22:18 pm
The sadness fades, replaced by joy, as Friesden loses herself in the lips of her lover.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 05:50:31 pm
Friesden starts to stir, the following morning, still embraced by the forelegs of her lover. As she wakes, the smile that crosses her face sticks, and she sighs contentedly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 05:55:28 pm
I tighten the embrace slightly, only technically conscious, and murmur.

"Mmm, Friesden..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 05:56:39 pm
Friesden brushes Khenal's mane tenderly.

"Mmm, Khenal..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 06:10:47 pm
Friesden's brushing of my mane eventually brings me awake.  Opening my eyes, I smile as her loving face is the first thing I see.

"Good morning, beautiful."

I reach up to kiss Friesden, not caring for anything in the world but her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 06:12:50 pm
Friesden returns the kiss, then breaks it after a short time. She licks her lips, then smiles.

"I love you so much."

She leans down to kiss Khenal again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 06:16:30 pm
"I love you, too."

I say before accepting the kiss, returning ounce for ounce every bit of love and passion that the most wonderful mare in the world has to give.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 06:20:42 pm
Unfortunately, no kiss can last forever, not even with circular breathing. So Friesden regretfully breaks the kiss off as her stomach rumbles, and giggles nervously. "Perhaps we should get something to eat before we continue?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 06:22:13 pm
My stomach growls in response for me, and I chuckle.

"Heh, I think that'd be a good idea."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 06:24:21 pm
After a bit of maneouvreing, Friesden disengages from Khenal, and hops up, a wide smile on her face.

"Well? What are we waiting for?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 06:27:31 pm
I stand, smiling.  My horn glows as I telekinetically open the door for her and give a gentlecoltly bow.

"After you, M'Lady."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 06:30:20 pm
Friesden giggles like a little filly, and puts on her best lady-like voice.

"Thank you, sir knight!" she says with a huge smile on her face, and walks through, waiting for him on the other side.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 06:44:07 pm
My smile widens and I join her in the hall, offering her a wing like a cloak.

"Shall we?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 06:45:23 pm
Friesden's eyes twinkle and she ducks under Khenal's wing, her head poking through.

"Yes, let's!" she says before ducking down into the wing again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 09:22:40 pm
I continue to chuckle as I lead the way to the dining hall, nodding at any passing ponies as if there was nothing unusual about a pony hiding under my wing.  Once we reach the dining hall, I pull out a chair for Friesden.

"We have arrived, M'Lady."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 09:26:11 pm
Friesden giggles, and comes out from under Khenal's wing. "Thank you, good sir knight," she says in her Lady voice, before bowing and sitting down with that huge smile still plastered on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 09:34:25 pm
I smile and bow with a small flourish, hamming it up and just having fun.

"What would you like to eat, M'Lady?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 09:41:41 pm
"Oooh! My favourite food: angelhair worm coccoons!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 09:52:11 pm
I raise an eyebrow at her odd request for food, then give another over-dramatic bow before sweeping off to get her food.  I decide to get a plate of the same, never actually ever having had them before.  I also grab some fisherberry wine, knowing she loves that vintage.  I return to the table with my wings outstretched, hiding the food behind them.  With a flourish, I place the food on the table and take a seat across from Friesden, smiling the entire time.

"Your breakfast, M'Lady!"
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Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 09:55:19 pm
Friesden giggles some more, and says "Thank you, good sir knight! Will you breakfast with me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 09:58:40 pm
"Of course, M'lady.  Hehe."

I laugh a bit, finally letting the act drop a bit.

"So, I've never actually had these before.  Any advice on how to eat them?"
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Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 10:02:47 pm
"Don't think about it!" are her only words before she begins to dig in with relish.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 10:06:12 pm
I shrug and just dig in.

'Huh, surprisingly nice texture, kinda crispy.  Tastes a bit plain, but not bad at all.'
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Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 10:09:35 pm
In a break between her feasting on the angelhair worm coccoons, Friesden takes a drink of the wine.


As heavenly as it had always been...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 10:13:56 pm
I continue to enjoy the cocoons, along with some of the wine.  I try not to drink too much.  After all, it's breakfast.  It's a bit early to be getting hammered.

"These are good!  They go nice with the fisherberry wine, too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 10:16:41 pm
Friesden tries to smile, but it just runs away from her face.

"Yes....they do...."

She drains another glass of wine, tears starting to form.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 10:21:56 pm
I look across the table at Friesden, concern on my face.  She's hitting the bottle pretty hard, and it doesn't seem to be helping her mood any.

"Is something wrong, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 10:23:49 pm
"N-no, no, nothing's wrong, you don't have to punish me, I'm okay dad, nothing's wrong!"
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Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 10:31:13 pm
I wince as if I had been punched at Friesden's words, and carefully levitate away the wine.

"Dad?  It's me, Khenal.  Friesden, are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 10:34:03 pm
Friesden feebly fumbles for the wine, and falls onto the table.

Before long, snores begin to emanate from her mouth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 11:18:43 pm
I gently prod her with a hoof, seeing if she might wake up.

"Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 11:20:03 pm
She continues sleeping, though a pair of words escape her mouth.

"Mmmmm, Khenal..."
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Post by: Khenal on January 26, 2012, 11:23:10 pm
I smile and kiss her forehead before gently levitating her and heading back to our rooms to place her on the bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 26, 2012, 11:28:52 pm
Friesden murmurs the same two words, and then settles in to the bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 27, 2012, 12:00:43 am
Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 59

I need to be careful about letting Friesden drink too much.  I thought she had gotten full closure on her dealings with her father, but she thought I was him for a moment before she passed out from some fisherberry wine.


Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 60

Continuing to train Falcata in her focus.  I think she's gotten used to most of what I've tried to do to distract her, but Friesden gave me some new ammo a few days ago, I think.  Falcata and Heiro went on a date!  I think they make a cute couple, and I bet I could distract her by asking about how their date went.  Even if that trips her up, I think she's almost ready to learn a few more spells.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 27, 2012, 12:31:28 am
Falcata's Diary - 16th Galena, 100

Today was just totally unexpected in so many ways.  Friesden came by my home today and lured me to the dining hall with Heiro, where she'd set us up on a date!  I had absolutely no idea she was planning such a thing, or that Heiro was even really interested!  Truth be told, I was horrified initially, but I resisted the urge to flee and in the end I actually had a good night.  Other than the fact I got pretty drunk, I must have looked ridiculous.

I really don't know if I'm ready to move on past Estoc yet, and I'm a bit worried that Heiro might just be caught up in a crush on me.  He even kissed me!  That's not something you normally do on a first date.  I think.  Either way, I owe him a walk later.  I hope I can collect my thoughts by then.

18th Galena, 100

I thought another training session with Khenal would help me put all of that aside, but I was quite mistaken.  I knew he'd have something else to trip me up, and he certainly did.  Apparently Friesden told him about my date with Heiro, and when he was testing my concentration again he brought it up.  Poof, spell broken.  I probably shouldn't let it get to me so much.  I'm just worried what will happen if I end up breaking Heiro's heart.  That's the last thing I would want to do to somepony, but it's going to take some time for me to get all of this... processed.  I don't know.

Anyway, Khenal seems to think that I've learned to focus well enough.  I managed to finish the session without blowing any more spells, so that's a good thing I suppose.  I wonder what he has in store for me next?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 27, 2012, 12:47:36 am
Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 62

Falcata's latest session will be today, and I think I've got several good spells to teach her.  She's not particularly strong in magic, she uses it more like it's another tool than something to focus on, which is a good thing.  Her strongest area seems to be abjurations, spells that interfere with or strengthen other spells.  First, I'll teach her how to sever a spell.  A lot of spells are too fast to sever, but stronger spells need time.  If the flow is broken, they can suffer some serious backlash, like I have in the past.

Which leads to the next thing I want to teach her: how to avoid backlash.  The principal is easy, just always have some simple and fast spell ready whenever you cast something.  It's pretty dificult to do for everything, but I think she can handle it.

I'd also like to teach her some wards and my tracking spell.  I don't know how far we'll get today, but we'll keep practicing!



Khenal's Secret, Chapter 2

The Book of the Sisters had some good general information on the Elements, if that's really what's happening here.  If so, Laughter and Magic are still to come.  The Scriptures indicate that Magic will likely appear last.  Magic still confuses me, though.  I've seen so much wrong done with magic, done so much wrong with it, to really be able to think of it as a virtue.  Starkey's words from in the jungle keep coming back to me, though.  He said that maybe it's a more poetic interpretation of magic than I'm thinking.  It still seems weird to me, though.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 27, 2012, 01:26:47 am
Falcata's Diary - 21st Galena, 100

I've been practicing with Khenal some more.  We've finally gotten to the part I've been waiting patiently for: learning new spells.  I'm a bit of a joke of a unicorn there, I only know a very few spells and of them all only my stunning spell is of any real use in my current job.  If Lady Charity was attacked by a unicorn or alicorn, I'd be all but helpless trying to protect her.  She is much better at defending herself magically than I am, which is a bit embarassing, considering our positions.

But, before we get to anything flashy, Khenal said I needed to learn how to sever active spells.  I think he was right: that's a key to protecting somepony against hostile magic, and an invaluable tool to have.  It sounded easy, but it was anything but.  To sever the spells of somepony else, I have to sense them and react before they're finished.  I'm a lot slower than Khenal there, and I find it very hard to detect other spells being cast.  I did eventually manage to sever one of his test spells, and I must admit it felt pretty good when I did finally pull it off.  I know I'll never be able to do it in combat at the speed at which I can react to it, but he says I'll get better with time.

I forgot how much I enjoyed working with him.  It's just like when he was my captain all over again.  He's a natural at teaching and leading I think, no matter what he might think.  He exemplifies just how much of a difference it makes when you're supportive of students instead of yelling at them.  I've seen the latter a time or two in my career.  Earning the ire of your students or subordinates doesn't get you far in the end.

24th Galena, 100

I had another session with Khenal today.  I wasn't sure what sort of spell he'd try to get me to practice today, but I was surprised to learn that he was going to teach me to avoid magical backlash instead of a new spell.  I was confused at first, that's not something I've ever experienced.  Until today.

The idea was simple: if too much magic builds up through some means or another, it can backfire on you with pretty bad results.  If you've got another spell ready to cast and drain it away, you can avoid it.

Well, there's a few problems with that.  First, I find it almost impossible to channel two spells at once.  The best I can do is something small and quick while I've got telekinesis going, and even then I drop stuff sometimes.  I don't think I've ever channeled so much power at once before, and it was very, very hard for me to build up enough for him to show me what he meant.  I don't think he actually intended for a backlash to happen, but it did.

My head still hurts.  One of the most painful things I've experienced, perhaps aside from giving birth.  He said what happened wasn't a real backlash, thankfully, but a sort of build up to one.  If it had been a real one I probably wouldn't be able to use my magic at all for weeks.  I can still use mine, thank goodness, but it hurts a lot to do so.  I think we'll have to postpone our sessions for a few days while I recover.  If it had been a real backlash, I might be in the hospital right now.

Apparently the little spell I had ready to absorb it wasn't enough.  Or maybe it was, the surprise caught me off guard and I lost both spells.  I suppose we'll be trying it again, I'd definitely want to know how to avoid this in the future.

30th Galena,

It took me a few days to get back to more or less normal, and we did some more practicing with the backlash prevention.  I managed to avoid hurting myself this time, and I think I've got the defenses down for it at least.  I managed to catch a small backlash with my stun spell, which I'm embarrassed to admit went off on Khenal.  He was fine, thankfully, and I was practically beside myself when it happened.

After he caught his breath, he said he wanted me to teach it to him.  I hadn't even thought about it, I figured it was something he knew already.  But I'll gladly show him how to do it, it's the least I can do.

Instead of that, he showed me the beginnings of a few spells that I think will be immensely useful.  He showed me the basics of how to track ponies by using something close to them, and how to erect magical wards to protect somepony.  This way, if Lady Charity ever goes missing maybe I can find her, and if I have to protect her I can actually do so with my magic now.

It's going to take me a long time to get the hang of these spells though.  When I listen to Khenal describing how to perform them, I think he almost sees the magic in a way I never can.  I'm making some progress, but I know I'll never have the power or skill he possesses.  I'm just thankful he's sharing as much as he can with me.  I really must find some way to thank him properly, teaching him a single spell is hardly adequate payment for what he's doing for me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 12:16:12 am
Khenal's Sequel, Chapter 63

Do you know what the best part of teaching somepony is, my Sequel?  It's not watching a student get the joy of learning something new, though that's a very close 2nd.  It's getting to learn something yourself.  Falcata knows a very nice stun spell, and she's willing to teach it to me!

She accidentally hit me with it while we were practicing avoiding backlash.  It was her quick spell to use the energy before it could do anything to her.  It's really an amazing spell!  Total paralysis and numbing, along with a dazing effect as well!  Even better, she claims it's absolutely non-lethal!  I don't know the specifics of how it works, yet.  If I had to guess, I'd say it blocks the conscious sending of signals along the nerves.  That's why it dazes and paralyses, but doesn't have nasty side-effects like stopping the heart.  I can't wait for her to teach it to me!

As far as her studies go, she's showing slow but steady progress.  She was having some serious issues with preventing backlash, I think I might have explained it wrong.  It looked like she was trying to channel two spells instead of having one ready to fall back on.  It's not so much switching spells as it is catching and redirecting the energy before it can ground out through your horn.  She keeps insisting she's not very good with magic, but that spell of hers has me convinced otherwise.  She just needs to get some confidence in her abilities, I think.



Khenal's Secret, Chapter 3

I've hit a bit of a wall in my attempted study of the Elements: There doesn't appear to be any other books on them!  I think I might ask the others about them, see if they can remember what happened before the strange lettering appeared.  I don't know if we are dealing with actual manifestations of the Elements or something else, but asking everypony about them could yield some clues.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 12:36:19 am
Falcata's Diary - 2nd Limestone, 100

Khenal found some time tonight for us to practice together again.  He wanted to lead off by changing the flow of things a bit: he asked me to show him how to cast my stun spell.  I don't think I've ever taught anypony how to use it before.  Kris is the only pony I've taught any magic to, and all of that was very simple things like how to lift stuff.

We practiced it on some animals that were caught in the traps.  The stun isn't harmful really, but I can say from experience that it's not pleasant.  Still, it's the best way to learn it, and the animals were fine afterward.  I think it took me a few days to learn that spell when Sergeant Guisarme taught it to me in Coupledye.  Khenal learned it in less than an hour!  He has a lot of experience with mental magic, I suppose it was only a small step away from what he was used to.  It was the physical part of it he'd never thought to try before, and I'm hardly an expert on anatomy, but I managed to explain it well enough I suppose.  It's the part of the spine you target that's tricky: get it wrong and you'll only daze your opponent for a few moments.

He was, for lack of a better word, ecstatic when he learned it.  I felt pretty good too, I must say.  I have to admit I never thought I'd be able to teach him anything, but I'm glad I could, and I hope he gets some use out of it.  He seemed to think he may well could.

After that, we practiced some more with the spells he was teaching me and how to avoid backlash.  Turns out I was sort of doing that wrong, which explains the difficulty I was having.  He explained how to keep a spell in reserve, which is a lot easier to do than what I was trying.  That's probably why it backfired in the first place.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 12:47:46 am
I wait patiently in the Arena, doing a few mental exercises to keep myself focused.  Falcata was learning the basics of a lot of what I was showing her, and I thought she might like to help me with a bit of an experiment.  I had left her a note, asking her to meet me in the arena for this session.  Nothing combat, but the room would be helpful.  If this works, it could be a great boon the next time we have to deal with a threat together.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 12:54:01 am
Falcata takes a deep breath as she draws near the arena.  Khenal had left her a note asking her to come about this time.  He didn't go into detail, but said it wasn't combat related.  She brought her weapon anyway, even though she didn't expect to need it.  She'd hate to be caught unprepared, just in case.

She enters the arena and sees Khenal practicing some personal exercise.  She waits for a what looks like a good moment to interrupt and says,
"Hello."  She looks around the room, taking in its vastness.  "Trying for something a bit different tonight?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 01:03:22 am
I smile and stand up, a bit excited despite the mental exercises.

"Yep!  Have you ever shared a spell?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 01:06:02 am
She tilts her head and raises an eyebrow.  "I... don't think so.  Not sure I've ever heard of it before either."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 01:09:18 am
"There are certain spells that need to be shared to be cast.  Usually, it's because they take a lot of power to do.  It also takes a lot of trust to do, and a lot of practice.  However, that's not quite what I wanted to have you try today.  I want to try sharing a channel for magic.  Instead of giving power for a specific purpose, channeling extra power to allow the leader to do whatever they feel they need to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 01:14:16 am
She ponders the proposition for a moment.  That sounded like something that should be possible, but also sounded quite difficult to her.  She'd never tried anything like it.  But, if Khenal thought she could do it, maybe she could.  "Okay.  I'm... not sure how much good I'll be, but I can try."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 01:18:37 am
I smile and prance a bit when Falcata agrees to try.

"Excellent!  It's not too complicated.  Basically, I just add my magic to yours and you control what is cast.  Maybe see how quickly you can swing your hammer for our test?  Give it a few practice swings now, so we have a good baseline."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 01:24:14 am
Well, she was expecting this to go the other way, lending power to Khenal.  Okay, stay calm.  Khenal wouldn't ask anything he didn't think was practical.  She unslings her weapon, stands back and does as he asks.  She whips the hammer back and forth in front of herself a few times, as quickly as she could without risking losing her grip on it.  "Alright... I think that's as good as I can do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 01:28:31 am
"Looks good!  Give me a moment to establish the link.  Try not to draw too much too fast, though.  I should be able to sever it if something goes wrong, but we might have some pretty decent backlash to deal with if that happens.  Ready?"

My horn glows and I seek the base of Falcata's horn with my magic, trying to gently establish the link to allow her to channel some of my magic.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 01:37:44 am
She tenses involuntarily for a moment as she feels the power enter her.  The sensation was peculiar and unnerving at first, but she feels it level out after a short while.  She found it a bit difficult to keep it in check... it wasn't an overwhelming amount, but it wasn't entirely hers to control.  Curious, she takes another swing with her hammer, feeling it rip through the air as though it weighed nearly nothing.  Her eyes grow wide and she mouths a "Wow."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 01:43:40 am
I struggle to keep the flow steady and to not overwhelm her.  That swing signified a decent spike in flow.

"Ah, good!  Do a few more swings so I can get a feel for the regulation of energy, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 01:47:55 am
She does as he commands, taking several more exploratory swings with her hammer.  The flow of energy seems to stabilize and slow to a slightly more manageable level.  The weapon whips around, still feeling light in her grip, but not quite as easy as before.  "How's that?  It feels much lighter."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 01:50:22 am
I smile as the flow seems to normalize, glad to not need to keep so much focus on it.

"Good!  Try a telekinetic push or two next, if you would?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 01:58:43 am
"Alright."  She takes a moment to return her hammer to its sling and changes her attention.  There wasn't much to thrust at around them, but the wind from it should be detectable at least.  The power gathering in her horn was beginning to become uncomfortable, and she quickly bleeds it off with a couple of telekinetic jabs away from the two of them.  Dust and loose scraps of things lying about are churned up or sent sailing across the arena.  She blinks in surprise and forms a small, childish grin.  This was more fun than it should be.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 02:02:31 am
The flow was almost self-regulating now, very nice.  I still needed to make sure to not let too much flow, but it didn't try to run away any more.

"Very good!  Try a few other spells!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 02:13:04 am
What other spells to try?  It was just her and Khenal, so she could afford to be a little dangerous.  The spells he'd taught her took a lot of preparation, and she could already feel the magic building back up to uncomfortable levels.  "Careful..." she mutters to herself as she focuses.  She hadn't tried this spell in a long time...

Her mane stands on end as the power builds, and culminates in a massive bolt of violet electricity arcing from her horn onto a weapon rack a short distance away.  She recoils at the sudden outburst.  That much power... she could have really hurt somepony.  She flashes Khenal a nervous smile and tries to straighten her mane.
  "Um, maybe a bad choice..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 02:17:58 am
I whistle, impressed at the arc of lightning.

"Nice evocation.  I might need to ask you the details of that one, too.  Try a ward, then I think we can wrap this up.  Telekinetic defense, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 02:33:02 am
She chuckles nervously.  "That... was supposed to just be the same spell you had me use to help Lilac that time.  With all the extra power... well..." she gestures at the singed weapon rack.

"Anyway... let me see...."  She takes a moment to trace the shapes Khenal had shown her to erect the ward.  The magic was building up again, definitely uncomfortable again.  She hurries to finish the shapes in the dust, feeling the magical pressure grow.  Painful... it was getting painful!  Oh, buck... what was she supposed to do again?!  The ward wasn't ready yet, she couldn't cast it... oww.... oww.... do something!

Without a further thought she shuts her eyes and casts the fastest spell she knew.  The room flashes briefly as the magic is drained away into a bubble of semi-permeable magic.  She takes a few cautious breaths as she opens her eyes and places a hoof against her aching head.  At least the pain wasn't nearly as bad as last time, and was already dwindling.  She stands tall from the startled crouch she was in and tries to relax.  Her tail was bushed up completely at the adrenaline infused panic.

She looks over to Khenal through the water tight bubble and smiles weakly.
  "I... think I actually managed to catch that one..."  She rubs her forehead and adds, "Let me relax a second... and try again..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 02:38:28 am
"Are you sure you're good to continue?  You handled that backlash perfectly, but it'll still sting.  What did you cast, anyway?"

I slow the magical flow to a bare trickle, just enough to keep it going in case Falcata wishes to continue, then carefully approach her bubble to examine it closer.  After a few moments, I gently prod it with a hoof, finding it solid.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 02:43:38 am
She huffs a few more times and nods.  "I'm fine... that was close."  She burns the last of the excess magic into the bubble and lets it fade.  "That was supposed to be an air bubble.  For going underwater."  She takes a deep breath to help settle herself.  "I almost drowned once as a filly... it was the first spell I ever learned.  You know.  Just in case.  You're supposed to be able to walk through it though... I guess the extra power made it completely solid."

Another deep breath to level her nerves, and she focuses again.  She finishes the symbols in the dust, finding them slightly disturbed by the bubble she'd just cast.  After a moment of fussing over them, she concentrates and draws in the magic Khenal was feeding her.  The room is filled with another flash as she raises the ward.  The ethereal wall looked more opaque than she recalled, and she could feel a comparatively large amount of power flowing through her into it.  "There..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 02:57:08 am
As she begins to channel again, I carefully allow the flow to pick up.  It feels like she's channeling a lot, a bit more than the spike with the hammer, but constant.

"Looks good.  Keep channeling into the ward, I'm going to see how this effects my casting."

I check the flow for buildup before going through my own arcane kata.  I levitate a training spear in a few blocks and strikes before tossing it at an imaginary foe.  Turning to Falcata and the shield, I send a few telekinetic thrusts, happy that they break on the shield with no spike in the flow to Falcata.  Finally, I hurl a small fireball at the weapon rack that Falcata had zapped and erect a small telekinetic shield.  Breathing heavily with the exertion, I turn back to Falcata.

"Whew, that's a good workout!  Ready for me to stop the flow?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 03:01:45 am
She nods and severs the ward, feeling the magical flow trickle and stop.  She feels a bit out of breath herself, and pants quietly as the spell stops.    "...a bit of a workout for me too.  I'm not used to channeling this much power.  This is pretty fascinating though... I didn't even know it was possible."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 03:08:14 am
I lay down as the flow stops, nearly exhausted from all the magic.  Falcata might have been directing it, but it was still my magic.  I'm not sure I've ever channeled so much at one time before, even against the daemons.

"Whew, ya.  I haven't actually heard of anypony doing that before, actually.  I got the idea from my construct spell, actually.  It actually siphons off a bit of my magic when I cast it, so I wondered if another pony could do that.  Thanks for you help.  Huff, uh... did you feel any difficulty in casting your spells?  Anything feel too different?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 03:14:22 am
She joins him by sitting on her haunches and leveling her breathing.  "You're welcome.  Glad to help."  She thinks back over the spells she cast and adds, "The spells were actually easier to cast... maybe even a lot easier.  The extra power helped, something I have trouble with." She smiles weakly.  "Also made it a bit... stressful to cast, if you understand.  Definitely something that would take some getting used to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 03:22:51 am
I nod and sigh, knowing exactly what Falcata means.

"Ya, too much power can be hard to control.  That's why I always stress focus and control in the lessons.  Magic can be very powerful, but can also get out of hand if you aren't careful.  I think that's why a lot of alicorns are... arrogant.  We have so much power, but we rarely learn how to channel it efficiently.  We rarely need to..."

I hang my head a bit, before shaking it and trying to put on a smile.

"Heh, but enough about the past.  Would you like to practice doing this some more in our sessions?  I think we could handle some serious threats to Glitterglen and Charity if we can get this down easier."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 03:29:51 am
Falcata listens as Khenal explains, wondering for a moment just what it felt like to be an alicorn.  To have that much power.  Or... what it felt like to have no magic at all.  She didn't use hers to solve problems like many unicorns or alicorns might, but she'd surely miss it if it was gone.  Fortunately, Khenal changes the subject before she can get too lost in her thoughts.

"Yes, I think we should.  Working together is always preferable to working alone.  This has potential to be very useful..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 28, 2012, 03:41:56 am
My smile grows a bit more genuine as Falcata agrees to continue the training.

"I'm glad you agree.  I'm running out of things I can think to actually teach now, we're pretty much down to practice.  Are there any other spells you might like to learn?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 03:54:14 am
"Practice is always good.  As for other spells... anything you're willing to teach me that you think I can learn.  I don't have any specifically... but I might see if I can scrounge up a spell book or something.  Might be something you could help me with.  I never did learn to read those things properly."  She gives him a smile and begins to ponder the possibilities.

((Scene concluded.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 11:42:48 pm
Falcata slowly makes her way down the stairs of the tower, feeling each hoof fall carefully.  Her sessions with Khenal had taught her a lot, and each time she got a little better at the magic he taught her, but it was still pretty exhausting.  Her endurance had improved a little, but she could feel that she was getting close to hitting a wall with it.

She steps into the hallway and starts back toward her home.  It would probably feel good to practice some meditation when she got back and settled.  She always felt a lot better after doing that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 28, 2012, 11:48:33 pm
Heiro walks along his body still tense from the last training session. As he begins down the hallway, he sees Falcata walking by. "Heyas Falcata, how you doin?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 28, 2012, 11:52:14 pm
"Oh, hello Heiro."  She smiles and stops next to him as he draws near.  "I'm doing well, how about you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 28, 2012, 11:55:39 pm
"Good, kinda tense, I just finished a training session. Haven't seen you around much, what've you been up to?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 28, 2012, 11:56:22 pm
"You were right," whispers Friesden to Otik as they sneak behind Heiro and Falcata. "Oh, I hope this goes well..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 28, 2012, 11:58:13 pm
Otik giggles a little and tousles Friesden's mane. "You were right, Fri."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 12:02:49 am
"Oh, sounds like about the same as you actually."  She makes a gesture to her horn and adds, "Khenal has been tutoring me a bit in magic.  Something I've sorely needed for a while."  She blows out her breath and gives him another smile.  "A lot more physically tiring than I would have expected."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 12:06:02 am
"Really? Huh, that's kinda surprising." Heiro looks around a thought coming to him.

"Umm So..." He shuffles his hooves a bit. "Are you... well, do you have any plans tonight?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 12:06:25 am
Friesden joins in the giggle. "But you did wake me. I do have to say, it was worth it, even if I was dreaming about...mmm, Khenal..."

She develops another mile-long stare.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 12:09:52 am
Hmm, she had an idea of what he was getting at, but it was the gentlecolt's job to ask out the filly, right?  "No, my night is open," she says with a small smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 12:14:00 am
"T-then would you like to g-go for a walk on the surface with me?" He looks at her hopefully "W-we could look at the stars, I-I bet they're pretty tonight."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 12:18:13 am
She maintains the smile.  "That sounds nice, would give us both a chance to unwind I think."  She motions for him to lead.  He was cute when he was nervous.  She just wished he wasn't so nervous around her... she was going to have to work on that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 29, 2012, 12:20:15 am
"Uh... Fri? They're movin' on. Ye can drool over yer colt's flanks when yer home with him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 12:22:20 am
"Blu-wha-I was not!" Friesden blushes, and gives Otik a little tap before following the two.

All the same, Khenal was amazing...Maybe she could do that next time...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 12:29:17 am
"C-cool!" Heiro walks along leading the way to the surface, exited at the prospect of a second date with Falcata... or was this a date... well whatever it was he was gonna make sure it went well.

As they reach the surface, he turns to her. "I-I was thinking we could walk a bit out into t-the forest... it's r-really pretty in some places."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 12:35:19 am
Well, that could be a bit risky, but they should be fine.  She takes a deep breath of the crisp night air and looks over to the forest ahead.  "Hmm... it is dark out, but as long as we stay together and don't go too far in, I think we should be fine."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 12:37:16 am
"Uh...mum...maybe we shouldn't follow them in..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 29, 2012, 12:40:04 am
"Ye can stay if ye like, but I'll follow 'em in, jus' in case somethin' happens."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 12:40:50 am
"No...I'll go with you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 12:45:06 am
"I've lived out in forests like these before. As long as you're careful you won't get into any real trouble." He begins to walk, keeping close to Falcata. "S-so you and Kris have been doing well?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 12:49:22 am
She chuckles.  "Well, I'll take your word for it then, I haven't spent a lot of time in the woods, much less these."  She follows him along, gingerly stepping over knobby exposed tree roots or anything else unpleasant looking on the ground.  "And yes, we've been doing quite well.  She's learning a lot from Dr. Bubbles, from what I hear.  And Khenal has taught me a lot."

She looks over to him.  "How about you?  I suppose things have been pretty uneventful in the guard lately."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 12:55:29 am
"P-pretty much, not a lot happens that requires a guard presence. Mostly I've just been training, good to hear y-you're both doing w-well though."

He stops and looks up at the stars through a clearing in the trees. "S-stars are really pretty tonight..." He shuffles his hooves again. "Y-you're prettier though..." He mumbles quietly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 01:03:48 am
She can feel her face flush, thankful that in the color draining darkness he probably couldn't see it.  "Oh... I, uh... thank you."  He was cute when he was nervous, but that was probaby not the best thing to say in turn.  How did she really look?  After that she was feeling some butterflies herself.

"T-the stars are pretty tonight."  She looks up and tries to pick out any constellations, failing miserably.  "I wish I knew more about astronomy, it's all just little pricks of light to me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 01:08:08 am
"I d-don't really know any myself, b-but they are nice to look at..." He looks back down and continues to walk. "I-I never d-did get a chance to t-thank Friesden for setting u-up our date... I-I have been t-thinking about it a-a lot..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 01:14:56 am
She had been thinking about it a lot too.  Languishing over it, wondering how she really felt about it.  She kept everything hidden under layers insider her mind, even to herself, and she knew it.  She had even considered using the mind link on herself to try and pry some truth from it, but decided this wasn't something magic would solve.

"I haven't had a chance to thank her yet either.  And I've been thinking about it a lot too..."  She looks over to Heiro, wondering if he would like to volunteer his feelings before she did.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 01:27:05 am
"W-well... I-I really c-care about y-you... a-and Kris..." He blushes, wondering how much he should say...

'Come on kid, tell her how you feel, don't worry so much about what will happen afterwords.'

Heiro takes a breath and tries to think of the words. "I-I really would like to... to be your c-coltfriend... I-I've liked you for a long t-time..."

He swallows and looks back at her. "I-I know h-how much E-Estoc meant to you... s-so I-I g-guess I c-can understand i-if you d-don't feel l-like t-trying..." He looks down trying to think of more to say, and waiting for the response.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 01:30:49 am
"Mum, who's Estoc? Is he another pony at the fort? Maybe I was wrong, maybe...Mum, what do I do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 29, 2012, 01:34:07 am
"It's like I thought b'fore: she's been married b'fore. He musta died somehow. She's... still hurtin' f'r him, I think."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 01:35:29 am
Friesden deflates, and tries to fight the tears. "S-s-so I w-w-was wrong then," she says, eventually giving up the battle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 01:41:49 am
Whew... what should she say to that?  He'd hit the nail on the head of course.  Estoc's memory had weighed heavily on her ever since the date, and initially she didn't think she would be able to do this.  Then Khenal taught her how to meditate to clear her mind.  She'd spent some time meditating and thinking on it.  She'd loved Estoc like nopony else... but he was gone now.  In a better place, never to return.

She gives him a sad smile.  "Yes... I loved Estoc dearly.  When he was taken from me..." she trails off, trying not to think about it too much.  She didn't want to destroy the mood by getting upset right now.  "...well... I was afraid of having to go through that again... or possibly do that to somepony else.  That... that was over four years ago now, though.  Estoc has gone on to a better place... and I've had a lot of time to think about it lately..."

Her expression brightens slightly.  She hadn't admitted it to herself for a while, but here goes nothing...  "Coltfriend and fillyfriend?  Well..." she steps over and gives him a small nuzzle.  "I think I'd like that."  She had been alone for a long time... too long, maybe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 29, 2012, 01:44:48 am
Otik stifles a squee.

"Friesden, did ye hear that? She said yes! Falcata said yes!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 01:46:08 am
Friesden reinflates, and the tears dry. "She said yes? She said yes! She said YES!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 01:50:18 am
Heiro blushes, and smiles wide, a surge of happyness flooding through him. "R-really? Y-you mean it?" He steps closer and gives her a small hug "T-thank you... I-I was so worried what you'd say... what you'd think if I-I told you.."

He smiles really wide, "S-so, shall w-we continue o-our walk? T-there's p-plenty of t-time left b-before-" He stops his ear twitching.

"S-sis? A-are you s-spying on u-us?" His face turns a bright red as he realizes that they're being watched.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 01:53:04 am
Falcata's jaw drops slightly as she catches sight of the two pegasi watching them from a distance.

"Friesden?  Lieutenant?  Wha..."

Had they been... spying on them?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 01:53:40 am
Friesden eeps, and jumps behind Otik, face blushing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 29, 2012, 01:57:28 am
"Oh, ah, hello there cap'n. I saw two ponies out f'r a walk in th' jungle, an' went t'investigate. I saw th' two o ye were, eh, out f'r a little walk... t'gether... so I decided I'd, y'know, keep m'distance, let ye... enjoy yerselves while I, ah, kept watch, aye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 01:58:23 am
"Y-you t-too M-mom... W-were you s-spying on us l-last time too?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 02:02:44 am
Falcata blinks dumbly and takes a moment to digest the sudden change of events.  Was she mad?  Maybe a little.  She couldn't stay angry at Friesden though... and maybe sort of understood the temptation to watch them if she set this all up in the first place.  But... Sisters... the things she might have said that she thought was private...

And Lieutenant Otik kind of had a point.  It could be pretty dangerous out here.  After what happened last time and all...


"I... I see..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 02:11:17 am
Friesden ducks out from behind Otik. "But...you're going to be coltfriend and fillyfriend? This is so romantic! I'll have to throw another party! This is going to be the best!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 02:16:02 am
Falcata smiles nervously at her.  "Ah... yes.  Thank you very much for the accomodations last time... but you don't have to do that... I mean... that's a lot of trouble..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 02:17:28 am
"Only the best for my friend!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 29, 2012, 02:22:31 am
Otik tries to feign ignorance.

"Wossat, Heiro? Ye went on a date? That's wonderful, lad!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 02:23:53 am
Heiro looks at her, not buying that at all. "S-sis... were you spyin' on us l-last time?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 02:38:34 am
"I...um...Yes...no...maybe...can you repeat the question?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 02:40:51 am
"Y-you were weren't you. B-both of you..." Heiro blushes deeply again, "I-I thought... M-maybe I should j-just take you h-home Falcata..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 02:44:15 am
Friesden's eyes well up. "Please don't be mad! I'm sorry, I just tho-thou-thought I might be able t-t-to help! I'm sorry!"

She runs back to the fortress in tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 02:45:25 am
"SIS WAIT!" Heiro tries to grab Friesden before she runs off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 02:47:24 am
"Oh no... Friesden, wait!"  She takes off after her.  "Friesden, come back!  I'm not angry at you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 02:47:59 am
As Heiro catches Friesden, she drops to the ground, bawling her eyes out. "I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry! Please don't hate me, please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 02:51:43 am
"S-sis..." Heiro pulls Friesden into a hug "I could never hate you, you're my sister. I was just surprised that's all. I've been meaning to thank you for setting up that first date anyway."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 02:56:24 am
Falcata trots up beside them, listening to what Heiro had to say.  She joins in the hug with both.  "Me too.  Friesden, I'm not angry.  I'm actually quite happy, and I have you to thank for that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 02:57:47 am
"Y-y-you don't h-h-hate m-m-me? B-b-but...but...but..." She hugs them both tightly, the tears drying on them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 02:59:07 am
"Of course not... you're a wonderful friend."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 03:00:42 am
"You're...you're one of my only two friends, you know...thank you for not hating me. Thank you for being my friend. I don't know how I'll ever repay you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 03:02:15 am
"You can repay us both with a smile, come on sis, let's see that exited pony who was plannin' us a party. I know she's in there somewhere."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 03:04:07 am
"Y-y-you want the party? Bu-bu-but I thought..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 03:06:51 am
Falcata smiles at her.  "If it makes you happy, then certainly.  Now, where's that smile?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 03:10:48 am
Friesden smiles bravely, beginning a valiant holding action to beat back the tears until reinforcements arrive.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 03:13:10 am
Heiro hugs his sister tightly "There it is. I would love for you to throw us a party if it would make you laugh. You throw the best parties anyway."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 03:18:28 am
Friesden beats the last remnants of the tears, crushing them between the two mighty armies. The smile comes further, and soon spans her entire face.

"Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you this will be the best party ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 03:21:12 am
Falcata gives her another squeeze and backs out of the hug with a smile.  "I'm looking forward to it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 03:23:14 am
"So am I" Heiro gives his sister one last squeeze before letting her go. "Now howabouts you take mom home so you can start planning? I'll walk Falcata back..." He looks at Falcata "I-if that's okay w-with you t-that is..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 03:33:15 am
"Yes, I think that would be for the best."  She gives him a sheepish smile.  "I'm pretty beat anyway."

She bids Friesden farewell and follows Heiro back to her home.  A nap right now would do her a lot of good.  It hurt her so much when Friesden got upset, but at least she seemed happy now.  And she wasn't the only one.  The butterflies she felt were still there, but now mixed with some excitement.  She hadn't felt this way in quite a few years.

She stops in front of the door and reaches for her key.  Well, what to say now?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 03:37:31 am
Heiro smiles wide, he hadn't been this exited in a long time. He had a Fillyfriend! Not much could make this night better. "T-thank you for coming on the w-walk with me. I-I still c-can't believe it... y-you said yes..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 03:45:21 am
She opens the door and takes a step inside.  Kris was sleeping quietly on the bed as she enters, perking up at the sudden noise.

Falcata looks at Heiro and mutters,
"Well... I..."  She really didn't know what to say... she was sort of still processing the idea that he'd even asked!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 03:47:41 am
Heiro looks at Falcata, blushing, then steps in and nervously kisses her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 03:57:44 am
She blushes a little in turn and gives him a small nuzzle.  It wasn't a kiss... she hoped she didn't offend him.  She wasn't quite ready for that yet.

Kris' eyes open wide and her mouth drops slightly as she sees it.

Falcata smiles at Heiro.
  "Good night."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 29, 2012, 04:02:37 am
Heiro smiles, he had Falcata as his Fillyfriend now, and a party to look forward to.

"G-goodnight." He looks into the room and sees Kris "Oh g-goodnight to you too Kris. Umm hope you both sleep well..."

Heiro turns and leaves, returning to his own room, his spirits higher than they had ever been.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 29, 2012, 04:10:43 am
Falcata turns to find Kris staring a hole through her, mouth still slightly agape.  "Mom... did Mr. Heiro just... kiss you?"

She nods, a coy smile on her face.  "Yes... we've had a couple of dates now..."  Did tonight count?  She'd count it anyway.

Kris hops up from the bed, her dumbstruck expression changing to a small grin.
  "Cool!  I really like Mr. Heiro."  Her expression drifts to confusion.  "But... what about... dad?"

Falcata steps over to her and places a hoof on her cheek.  "We'll talk about that later."  She knew she hadn't seen the last of that herself yet, but maybe talking about it with Kris would extinguish the last of her reservations.  Right now, she just wanted to catch some sleep.

((Scene concluded.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 08:01:01 pm
The next day, Friesden woke before the dawn. Already she was in the kitchen, getting the cake and food prepared for her brother and his fillyfriend's party.

Having given her requests, she went to the dining hall and began to prepare the decorations.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 29, 2012, 09:10:48 pm
I wake not long after Friesden leaves, groggily preparing for my part for the party.  After taking time to wake fully, I practice some of the more difficult parts of what I was going to do.  The music I had to be especially careful with, I only had memories of a few pieces I had heard.  Reproducing isn't too bad, but I had to make sure I remember every part of it.  The few hours till the party starts, the sounds of music and flashes of light can be seen and heard from around my door as I practice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 09:58:24 pm
Before too long, the preparations are complete. Friesden hurries from the hall and heads up to her and Khenal's room, knocking on the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 29, 2012, 10:11:04 pm
"I'll be out in just a moment!"

I let the magic quickly fade and join Friesden outside.

"Everything is ready?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 10:32:29 pm
Friesden gives Khenal a quick kiss. "I think so! Are you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 29, 2012, 10:38:33 pm
I return the kiss and smile, slightly nervous.

"I hope so!  I've never actually done anything like this before."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 10:47:37 pm
"You'll be perfect!"
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Post by: Khenal on January 29, 2012, 10:51:11 pm
"I just hope everypony enjoys it.  Well, shall we?"

I offer my wing as a cloak, always ready to treat Friesden as the Lady she is, and smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 29, 2012, 10:54:19 pm
Friesden giggles, and burrows her head into his wing with a happy smile on her face.
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Post by: Khenal on January 29, 2012, 11:19:39 pm
I smile wider, forgetting my nervousness with Friesden by my side, and follow her to the party.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 12:35:31 am
Friesden giggles and gives Khenal a little tickle under the wing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 12:38:12 am
I twitch and jerk away from the tickle reflexively, smiling broadly.

"Ahaha!  No, I'm ticklish!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 12:40:21 am
Friesden refuses to relent, giggling as she continues to tickle him.
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Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 12:44:34 am
I struggle to not dissolve into laughter as Friesden mercilessly tickles me, only barely remaining standing.

"N-n-no, ahaha!  S-st-s-stop, hehehe!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 12:46:13 am
"Never! Hehehehehe!"

Friesden continues to tickle Khenal furiously.
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Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 12:49:56 am
I finally collapse under the relentless tickle attack, laughing riotously.

"Ahahaha!  M-Ahahaha! Mer-Ha!  Hahaha!  Mer-*gasp*-Mercy!  Ahahahaha!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 12:51:45 am
Friesden stops the attack, but before Khenal can get himself under control, he feels Friesden's lips on his.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 12:57:51 am
I do my best to return the kiss, though I still giggle uncontrollably and try to catch my breath.  As I start to regain my control, I reach up to embrace Friesden in the kiss, wrapping my forelegs around her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 12:59:54 am
Friesden returns the embrace and holds onto him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 02:25:32 am
Heiro walks down the hall, almost tripping over the two lovebirds. "Heyas sis, Khenal, enjoying yourselves?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 02:27:22 am
Friesden reluctantly breaks the kiss, then turns to Heiro with a mile-wide smile across her face. "Yes! Khenal is the best kisser!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 02:29:18 am
I blink a few times before being forced form the bliss of the kiss and coming back to reality and processing Heiro's question..

"I'd say Friesden is the best kisser, I'm just glad I can keep up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 02:32:53 am
Heiro blushes "W-well whichever of you is the best, you should probably not practice in the middle of the hall... where were you going anyways?"
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Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 02:34:30 am
Friesden blushes as she licks her lips, and answers Heiro. "We were heading for your party, of course!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 02:41:24 am
"My party? It's ready? Cool, I'll walk with you!"
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Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 02:42:46 am
I stand and offer Friesden a hoof up.

"The party should be great.  Friesden planned it, after all."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 02:44:03 am
Friesden blushes even more as Khenal helps her up and buries her face in Khenal's wing again.
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Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 02:45:12 am
"Yep! Sis' parties are the best! Do you know who's coming sis?"
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Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 02:46:03 am
"I gave everypony invites," comes Friesden's muffled voice from Khenal's wing.
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Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 02:47:46 am
'Everypony?  I hope I don't mess up the entertainment...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 02:49:12 am
"And you know my love here is doing the entertainment? He's going to do the best job ever!"
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Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 02:51:53 am
I smile nervously.

"Heh, I hope so."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 02:52:05 am
"Really? Awesome! I'll bet Falcata will love it! And Kris too!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 02:57:27 am
"Everypony will love it! Khenal is the best pony ever, how could they not love it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 03:02:00 am
I start sweating slightly and try to hide my nervousness.

'Come on, Khenal.  You've fought daemons and braved hostile mindscapes!  You can put on a show for... all... of... Glitterglen
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 03:43:57 am
"Khenal? Why are you sweating, my love?"
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Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 03:50:17 pm
"Just, um, a little warm?  Oh hey, we're here!"

'Oh ya, smooth change of subject.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 03:55:07 pm
"Maybe it is a little warm...But you're going to be the best anyway! I believe in you!"
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Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 04:14:36 pm
Inside the dining hall, the place is set for a party. In the middle of the room is a large cake, marked with Falcata and Heiro's names. Banners criss-cross the walls, again with Falcata and Heiro's names. Streamers dangle from the roof.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 30, 2012, 04:20:58 pm
Falcata steps into the dining hall, feeling a bit overwhelmed at first.  She'd never cared to be the center of attention, and having a large public party thrown in her and Heiro's name was about as close to that as she could get, but it was a sweet gesture.

"Wow," Kris says as she follows her in.  "It's almost like Mr. Khenal's birthday party."

So... where to begin?  Falcata leads Kris inside and tries to pick out who was already present.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 04:24:11 pm
I take a few breaths and try to calm myself before starting the entertainment.  Most of the time, I'll just be playing memories of music in the background and blending in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 04:41:43 pm
Friesden gives Khenal a quick nuzzle, then spots Falcata.

"Come on, big brother! Let's go talk to your fillyfriend!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 04:47:20 pm
"Falcata's here already?" Heiro looks around and spots Falcata and Kris. "Yeah lets!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 30, 2012, 04:52:32 pm
Falcata gives the two of them a genuine smile as they get close.  "Hello, you two.  This all looks very nice Friesden, thank you!"

Kris grins and adds "Hey Mr. Heiro and Ms. Friesden!  This looks great!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 04:56:07 pm
"Really? It was just a little something..." Friesden blushes, then moves on. "I hope you two are happy together!"
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Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 06:34:25 pm
"Hey Kris, how are you doing? Doesn't sis make cool parties Falcata?"
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Post by: Telgin on January 30, 2012, 06:39:04 pm
Kris continues to grin as Falcata nods.  "Yes, she does.  To say she doesn't know anything about them, she's done a fantastic job."  She looks down to Kris and says, "I'll have to see about her doing something for Kris' next birthday, if she doesn't mind."

She thinks for a moment, trying to come up with some more small talk when Khenal's music catches her ear.  "She really thought of everything."
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Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 30, 2012, 06:42:39 pm
Charity and her husband flanked by Osal and Madush and their many children, walk into the dinning hall.

Charity thinks to herself. "Friesden really knows how to throw a party, but it's this all a little much."

Adamant her eldest son, is there his silk shirt dirty from a hard day in the mines, he wanders off to try and talk to Kris, the only filly close to his age in Glitterglen. The rest of the kids run off to find their own friends.

Charity looks for her friends, and sees several of them in a group, she and Cryptson move to join them. Madush and Osal being on duty, keep back and watch for trouble.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 06:47:06 pm
Friesden, upon the duchess' approach, bows down with a victorious smile on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 30, 2012, 06:48:32 pm
With everypony present, I let the music slip into something a bit more upbeat, and accompany it with some illusionary balls and streamers of light, bobbing and flowing with the music.

"Come on, everypony!  Time to dance!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 30, 2012, 06:48:47 pm
"Rise Friesden, it's a party, there is no need for such formality, today." speaks the duchess, taking note of the smile crossing Friesden's mouth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 06:50:50 pm
Friesden stands up. "What do you think of Heiro and Falcata, your grace?"
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Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 30, 2012, 06:56:57 pm
"Well Friesden, it is hardly a match a would have picked. But," she looks right at Falcata, with a pleasant look on her face, "Falcata is a big pony and can do what she wants. She doesn't need my permission, or consent, to date Heiro, or anypony, that she wants to."

Cryptson looks as if he feels uncomfortable throughout this conversation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 07:35:35 pm
"So are you saying my big brother isn't good enough for Falcata?" asks Friesden with an innocent look on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 30, 2012, 07:41:52 pm
A big pony indeed.  She had wondered what Lady Charity would think of this, and her response wasn't too far from what she expected.  Words leave her, so she settles for a coy smile that she shifts from Charity to Heiro.  Friesden's words snap the smile from her face, but again words leave her.

Kris shly accepts Adamant's attempts to speak with her.  She didn't really know him, and her mom always told her not to bother anypony in the royal famaily, not that she had many chances to, but he seemed like a nice pony.  He was the one starting the conversation after all, so she follows him and tries her best to find common ground to speak on.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 30, 2012, 07:47:25 pm
Charity pauses for a moment, a look of clear discomfort across her face. 'you would ask me that in front of them wouldn't you Friesden.'

"No, Friesden I didn't mean that. Just from what I've seen of each of them, I don't see their personalities meshing well, though I haven't had that much interaction with Heiro, so maybe I'm wrong."

'That was good right, nice and diplomatic. Might get myself out of this hole I just dug yet.'

Meanwhile...

Adamant says to Kris, "It's, uh, kind of loud in here, what with everypony talking and the music and stuff, uh, maybe we could go downstairs and talk for a bit? uh, just the two of us."


He is clearly nervous.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 07:50:36 pm
"That's good. Because I adore my brother. He saved my life more than once."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 30, 2012, 07:58:55 pm
The uneasiness growing inside Falcata wanes as Charity explains herself.  She'd thought the same at one point herself, of course.  Then Friesden adds her own thoughts, and Falcata's smile returns.  Heiro had saved Kris' life once too, and she was more than thankful for that.  She still had some to learn about him on a more personal level, but they were certainly getting there, and she liked what she had discovered so far.  "I don't know, I don't think we're so different," she says, smiling at Heiro.

Kris raises a hoof to her chin as she thinks.  After what happened to Lilac, she didn't really have any friends left in Glitterglen.  Not her age at least.  And wasnt her mom friends with Lady Charity?
  "Um... okay."  She follows Adamant as he leads.  "Where are we going?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 08:03:24 pm
Heiro smiles himself, warmed by his fillyfriends words. "U-umm, d-do you want to dance Falcata? I-I don't r-really know how but..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 30, 2012, 08:09:04 pm
Apprehension rolls through her for a moment.  She didn't know how to dance either...

"Certainly," she replies, keeping the smile on her face.  "I don't know how myself, hopefully I won't step on your hooves too much..."
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Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 08:10:25 pm
Friesden squees, the smile covering her entire face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 30, 2012, 08:13:41 pm
"hmm, well, all the military ponies are either at the party or on duty right now. We could go sit by the arena." suggests Adamant.

Elsewhere, in the storeroom near the arena.


((If you want to avoid the Nadsat skip everything after the spoiler.))
Spoiler: Nadsat Free Version (click to show/hide)

"The guards finally gone, raz to itty." whispers one of the two caged Keshi thieves.

The twisted pony pulls a key from it's hiding place and unlocks his cage.

"How'd you get that klootch, droog?" asks his neighbor as the first frees the second.

"Got it from that indigo chasso, he's a lomtick daft. Picked his carman and I still don't think he knows that he's missing it."

"Thanks droog, let's get out of here, I don't want to end up as cupcakes like the Boss."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 08:23:42 pm
"A-alright then... l-lets go." Herio leads Falcata to the dance floor, nervous. He tries to move like he had seen other ponies do, but he still bumps into Falcata a few times, not really knowing what he was doing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 09:30:59 pm
Friesden squees again and settles in to watch the pair. Maybe after the party, she and Khenal could do some dancing of their own...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 30, 2012, 09:39:35 pm
Charity and her husband move away from the dance floor, neither being much for dancing. They find a table and sit and watch the dancing ponies.

"Hm they are kind of cute trying to dance, aren't they dear," says Charity to Cryptson.

"...Eeyup." is all the reply she receives as Cryptson looks out onto the dance floor lost in thought.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 30, 2012, 11:18:12 pm
Falcata smiles nervously as she tries to follow Heiro along.  She didn't know a thing about this, and was making quite a few mistakes of her own.  Heiro seemed to be taking it in stride though, so she kept a smile on her face and tried to avoid embarassing herself too much more.  Not that she was having much success with that.  She chuckles and says, "Not too bad, but what do I know?"

Kris follows Adamant to the arena, awed by the vastness of the structure.  She'd never had any reason to be there before, but Adamant would have permission to go pretty much anywhere right?  "Wow... I've never been here before.  Mom comes here sometimes, but she tells me it's dangerous and I should stay away."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 11:27:20 pm
Heiro blushes, nervously chuckling. "W-well you s-seem to be d-doing better than I-I am..." He stumbles and bumps into her again, "S-sorry, guess I-I'm not very good at this..." He continues his attempt at dancing, enjoying being able to hold Falcata hoof, to be ably to be close to her.

'This is amazing... she really meant it... she's my fillyfriend.'

'Of course she did bro. You are amazing, as is she. But she is going to be sore if you don't stop stepping on her hooves.'

'S-sis!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 30, 2012, 11:34:33 pm
Friesden is lying on the ground now, just watching the two dancers with happiness on her face. Her brother and her friend were happy. What more could she want but to see them happy?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 30, 2012, 11:37:19 pm
She chuckles again.  "It's a bit funny when you think about it.  Two ponies who can fight a battle but can't dance."  She sidesteps a bad step of Heiro's and smiles at him.  Hey, now there was an idea... it was kind of like sparring, just without intentionally trying to hit your partner.  She wondered if he caught on too...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 30, 2012, 11:38:11 pm
"It's only dangerous if the fighters are actually using it." Adamant glances around at the various blood stains on the floor and walls. "I've actually never stood here in the middle of the arena, usually, I just watch from over there." He gestures with his hoof toward the fortifications where the marksponies can watch the fighting and help as needed.

Suddenly the door to the cage room creaks open, and the two Keshi ponies step out, shivs in there mouths ready to cut anypony who tried to stop their escape.

Spoiler: Nadsat Free Version (click to show/hide)

"Our luck keeps getting better droog, a dva of foals to help us in our quest for liberty." says the first Diomedian.
"And smot that filly is a unicorn, I bet old Borislav will want to meet her." says the second.

Adamant postitions himself between Kris and the thieves. "I am no foal and you will not harm her."

"You think you can stop us colt. Cute. Come quietly or will have to vred you." speaks the first.

"Kris run! Get the..." Says Adamant before he is cut off as one of the Diomedians jumps him and strikes him in the head with a strong buck.

Adamant hits the ground with a thud, alive but unconscious.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 30, 2012, 11:45:39 pm
Heiro notices the way Falcata dodged his step, 'wait... maybe... hey sis maybe I should look at this different'

'Oh? Oh! Yes... like a fight, move to follow or to lead... well I think I have taught you enough to be able to handle this yes?'

'I-I think so... still don't know what I'm doing but...'

Heiro continues the dance, treating the steps like one of Midnights fighting lessons.

'Just like big sis taught me, smooth, flowing, each movement leading to the next.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 30, 2012, 11:50:25 pm
Falcata steps poorly and sees Heiro dance away from it.  Yes... he saw it too!  This should be fun.  She continues to step along with him, dodging bad steps or motions as if she was dodging dagger strikes.  Before long, the two were moving together with a purpose unlike what they'd done before.  It must have looked ridiculous to everypony else, but she was having a blast, and the grin on her face was impossible to hide.

Kris backs away from the two keshis slowly, her mouth hanging open and eyes wide.  Oh no... no... no... they shouldn't have come down here...  As Adamant falls from the blow to his head, she flounders for a few fatal moments trying to decide if she should stay and try to help him, or flee and get help.  She finally turns and bolts for the door as fast as her legs could carry her.


"Mom!  Anypony!  HELP!!!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 31, 2012, 12:07:43 am
Spoiler: Nadsat free version (click to show/hide)

The other Diomedian rushes after Kris.

"No you don't my malenky pony. You're coming with like us."

The Keshi tackles Kris to the ground. She struggles and kicks and fails and screams, but the Diomedian is too strong for her.

"You shut up, or I'll shive your gorlo, and none of that funny magic either."

The second one says to the other, "Hey, this odin ain't dead, his skull is tougher than I messel? Should I oobivat him?"

"Nah, skvat him too, might be polezny, if only as a hostage till we get out of this hell hole.

"Right."

The two Diomedians, make their way up the stairs toward the surface of the fort. They pass several ponies along the way, but with their blades at the necks of the foals of two of the most important ponies in Glitterglen, nopony tries to stop them.

Just as they reach the surface, one of the ponies runs into the dinning hall and yells over the music, "Jail Break!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 12:11:55 am
Falcata halts her peculiar dancing immediately and looks over to the new frantic arrival.  A jail break?  Wonderful... these things always seemed to happen at the worst times.  "I think this will have to wait..." she says to Heiro as she trots over to find out more.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 12:13:06 am
Heiro follows close, if there was a jailbreak, the guard would probably need to respond.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 31, 2012, 12:16:08 am
The smile runs away from Friesden's face. A jailbreak? Why couldn't her parties go right for once? Why couldn't there be a nice day, without the diomedians doing something?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 31, 2012, 12:23:38 am
The messenger in question was a unicorn mare named Ebsas, who spent most of her days designing seige weaponry that she was beginning to fear would never be implemented.

Charity and Cryptson walk over to hear what is happening, the Duchess says, "Tell me, what's happened. We need details."

"Your highness." Ebsas bows. "..I...I'm so sorry Duchess, I...we...We saw two Diomedians, Keshi's, in the fortress, making their way up the stairs. They...They had your son, Adamant, and a young mare with a rainbow mane. They threatened to kill them if we didn't let them pass. I'm sorry. They are probably making for the jungle as we speak."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 12:25:51 am
"What! Those two... we need to get after them now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 12:29:41 am
Falcata's face transitions from irritation at the prospect of her day getting interrupted by a couple of prisoners that were doomed anyway, to shock and fear at the thought of Charity's son being captured to gut wrenching terror at the thought of Kris being captured.  She immediately rushes past Ebsas, slams her bedroom door open with her shoulder, grabs her hammer and tears for the surface.

This wasn't happening.  This wasn't happening.  This wasn't happening.

It was daylight... they'd catch the diomedians.  They'd find Kris and Adamant.  They had to.  She couldn't let anything else happen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 12:34:18 am
Heiro bursts after Falcata, keeping pace, the anger rising inside of him. They had kidnapped foals.... FOALS! And used them as shields so they could escape! And Kris... Kris...

'Calm down brother, you can't fight like this'

'Its Kris I'll do more than fight I'll, I'll'

'STOP! Give me control. I will handle these two.'

'A-alright... but you had better kill them.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 31, 2012, 12:41:12 am
Charity, stands in shock, at first she was merely annoyed to have to deal with a break out, but now, her eldest son was being taken by those things. Those horrible godless things. It was to much for even her to handle. She shuts down staring into the void as Falcata rushes off.

Cryptson too is stunned, he is racked with indecision. He wants to be there for Charity, but his son is in danger. After a few seconds and a kiss of his wife's cheek, he dashes off to his room and curses his lack of magic as he struggles to get his armor on as fast as possible.

Meanwhile the theives have reached the surface.
"They're ittying to follow us. Let's split up. You itty north, across the river and I'll itty east."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 12:45:30 am
Falcata continues to tear her way up to the surface and toward the forest.  She notes Heiro beside her just after spotting the two diomedians and realizing that they were splitting up.  She motions to the keshi on the left with a nod of her head and shouts over the thundering of their hooves, "Heiro!  Take the one on the left!  I'll get the one on the right!"

She scowls at the keshi disappearing into the brush ahead and redoubles her efforts.  They would regret this sorely... she was going to crush the life from them when she got her hooves on them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 12:48:57 am
Heiro nods "Understood. Be careful, they might have friends about." He runs after the Diomedian. It would regret this... if it lived long enough to feel anything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 31, 2012, 12:57:36 am
Several moments after Falcata and Heiro split up, Cryptson reaches the top of the defensive wall. He stands in the morning sun his steel armor gleaming, his pick thirsts for the blood of those heretics who threaten his family. He looks out and sees Heiro giving chase to a Diomedian with Adamant across it's back. Cryptson leaps from the wall, to the ground, and breaks into a full gallop trying desperately to catch up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 01:01:17 am
The keshi charges along into the woods, peeling away from his comrade and cursing the weight of the colt slung over his back.  He had to hurry and find someplace to hide.  He wouldn't be able to keep running from these ponies forever, and he'd tire out before they would.  Hopefully he'd run into friends out here soon...

The stallion was chasing him... where was the mare?  Oh, who cared?  There wasn't time to think about that!

***

Falcata keeps her eyes focused on the keshi ahead of her, watching intently as he dodges trees and weaves between fallen branches.  Kris catches sight of somepony chasing after them and shouts,
"Mom!  Mom, help!"

Falcata's blood runs cold as she realizes that it was definitely Kris, and she was chasing the pony that was her captor.  Fury fills her as she leaps over a boulder he'd sidestepped to close the distance.

The keshi smacks Kris with a flick of his head.
  "Shut it you!  Nopony's gonna help you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 01:06:54 am
Heiro increases his speed, seeing the prisoner in front of him. He plows through the underbrush, bashing through, instead of going around, any obstacles, he begins to close the distance.

'That one... that would be Adamant right? Good, Falcata can save her daughter, but we need to move faster if we're going to catch this one'

'You can do it sis, and after he's safe we can follow Falcata... I have to be sure Kris is safe...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 01:21:49 am
"Oh, buck..." the keshi whispers under his breath as he sees Heiro closing the distance.  Should he ditch the kid hanging on him and run for it, or stand and fight?  Their orders had been clear.  Come back with something valuable or don't come back at all.  Buck...  He continues to run as fast as he could, knowing it was only buying time that was sapping his strength.  He sees a pond ahead and screeches to a halt.  Adamant nearly topples from his back as he whirls around to see Heiro just out of reach and a burly pony in steel armor approaching from a distance.

He draws his shiv and backs away.

***

"Yer gonna have to run faster ya old mare!" the keshi taunts as Falcata continues to chase.

"Mommy!  Mom!  HELP!" Kris continues to call.

A terrible realization begins to overcome Falcata as she realizes she wasn't gaining any distance on the keshi.  He was faster than her, even with Kris in tow.  What could she do?  Every cry from Kris tore at her heart, and she vaults over another obstacle to close the distance briefly.

Suddenly something swoops overhead, casting a shadow over the two.
  "Ah, there ya are.  Do ya mind taking this little noise maker while I lose the old mare?" the keshi says to the new darkbolt.  Kris kicks and screams as the twisted parody of a pegasus reaches down and snatches her up.  "

Certainly..."

Falcata's mouth hangs slightly.  No... she couldn't fly!  How was she going to get Kris back now?  Panic fills every fiber of her body as the keshi trots off, a hacking laugh leaving his mouth as he disappears into the forest.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 31, 2012, 01:23:28 am
Friesden turns around as the chaos afflicts the party, and spots the duchess standing stock-still, not noticing her surroundings.

Despite what Friesden had thought about her when she had dismissed Heiro, she couldn't help but feel her heart move within her at the sight, and ran to her.

"It'll be okay, Charity, it'll be okay. They'll bring them back."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 01:25:44 am
Heiro smiles coldly as he sees the Keshi stop. "I hope you don't think that shiv will help." he charges forwards swinging his axe low, aiming to remove a foreleg.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 31, 2012, 01:35:15 am
Charity begins to become lucid again, tears form in her eyes, she grabs Friesden into a tight hug. "Oh Friesden, but, but what if you're wrong. What if they can't find them. Those monsters had a head start. I, I can't bare to lose my little colt." She sobs heavily into Friesden's mane as Charity's two year old middle daughter, Skydancer, walks up to the two mares, "Mommy, what's going on? Where did Daddy and Miss Falcata run off too? Why are you crying?"

Charity pulls her daughter into the hug, "Everything will be okay dear," whispers Charity, not really believing it herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 01:36:58 am
The keshi tries to bring his weapon down to deflect the axe enough to leap over it.  He clears the swing with one leg, but the blade bites deep into his other foreleg, throwing it from beneath him and prompting a startled shriek.  He lands on the wounded limb and immediately collapses, with Adamant tumbling away and sliding toward the bank of the pond.  The keshi fumbles back to his hooves, spraying blood from the axe wound on his leg.

***

The darkbolt hovers just above Falcata, a twisted grin on his face.  He gives Kris a shake and says,
"Oh, what's the matter?  This belong to you?"  He cackles and begins to fly backward away from Falcata slowly, keeping Kris just out of range of her attempts to leap up and grab her.

"Mom, help!  Please!  Help ME!"

She fights the urge to shout back that everything would be okay and she was going to be fine.  It was going to be a clopping miracle if she got Kris back now, and it took every ounce of her strength to avoid breaking down right there.  She tries to concentrate enough to cast a spell, but her mind flutters from one possible course of action to another.  What could she do that wouldn't hurt Kris too?

The darkbolt picks up his speed, tightening his grip as Kris begins to buck and kick again, screaming and begging to be released.


"Come on, gotta want it!" he taunts, rising up a bit as Falcata leaps up again.  "Come on, old mare, let's see how fast you can go..."

He takes off down a clearing in the trees, moving at least as fast as the keshi.  Her heart stops for a moment before thundering in her chest to match her hooves.  No... Celestia... Luna... help her...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on January 31, 2012, 01:40:06 am
"It will be. Heiro and Falcata will find them, and bring them back, no matter how long it takes."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 01:45:48 am
Heiro ignores the collapsed keshi instead grabbing Adamant and stopping him from going into the water. Then he turns back, and stands over the keshi.

"So, you thought kidnapping was a good idea? Let me show you how I treat those who would hurt foals." Midnights axe flashes through the air, and the injured leg sails off.

"That's one. Too bad your only a keshi, there are only four more for me to remove." The axe flashes again, and again, each stroke removing a limb from the prisoner, until with two last strokes, Heiro slices cleanly through its neck, and splits it in two.

"You should be grateful little brother wasn't in control" Heiro says, "You would have lasted much longer..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 01:49:39 am
The music has long faded from the hall.  I left not long after hearing that foals had been kidnapped, headed to get my equipment.  I didn't want to be injured again, and I hoped I hadn't taken too long to get my gear together.  I finally exit my room and head to the surface, hoping to find the others and join the search.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 31, 2012, 01:53:44 am
Cryptson, finally arrives at the pond, while Heiro tortures the Diomedian before ending it's miserable life. Cryptson runs to his son's body and examines him. "Jaw broken, possible skull fracture, concussion likely. He'll live." Cryptson lifts his son onto his back and turns to Heiro, "I thank you saving my son, I wouldn't have been able to catch them alone. The other one was heading north, if they get over the bridge they'll disappear into the jungle. We should help Miss Falcata if it's not yet to late."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 02:03:00 am
In desperation, Falcata does the last thing she knew to do.  It might hurt Kris, but she had no other choice.  With all of her might she hurls her hammer at the flying monster of a pony.  The silver hammer clips the darkbolt's ear and slams into a tree ahead of him before noisily clanging to the ground.  He whirls about, disbelief on his face.  "Buck, sister, you're crazy!  You coulda hit your own kid!  Maybe I'm doing her a favor!"  He turns around and speeds off as she snatches the hammer back up.

Minutes pass.  The darkbolt was getting further and further away, rising into the air.  She could still see him, but her soul had been crushed minutes ago.


"Mooommmy!  Mooommmy!!!!Kris' cries were getting further and further away.  Another minute passes, and she can't even see her anymore.

The darkbolt was gone.  Kris was gone.  Her chest burned and ached like the day she'd nearly been burned alive by the magma, but she continued on, galloping as fast as she could.  Which was now barely even a trot.  She gasps and wheezes, trying to catch her breath, feeling a burning in her legs as she forces them to move on.

More minutes pass, and she now heads on at barely a walk, gasping for air.  She couldn't hear Kris' cries any more.  She was gone.  She... was... gone.

Her next step ends with her in a tumbled heap as her stamina finally runs out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 02:06:43 am
Heiro looks up at Cryptson and nods "Indeed. But you should take your son home. I can go after Falcata. It's... good to know your colt will be fine." He looks around. "I just hope Kris will be..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 02:10:02 am
I stand at the gate, searching for any sign of the others.  After a few moments, I notice something burst through the canopy and fly off.  Having no other lead, I quickly set off for where it burst through.  There was no way I could catch whatever it was from here, but maybe the others had driven it off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 31, 2012, 02:11:23 am
Cryptson nods, and turns to head back to the city.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 02:19:18 am
"Shut it you little filly or I'll make you shut up!" the darkbolt shouts to the squirming and crying bundle in his grip.

Great, now where was he?  He looks around and sees the mare who had been chasing him motionless in a clearing a distance away.  He looks around and sees more ponies a little further off in the other direction.  Maybe another cohort of his?

He flies that way cautiously, a sinister grin forming on his face as he sees a bloody heap of somepony and a keshi standing over it.  Well, maybe things were looking up.  He could have a little more fun with that mare...

He swoops down and lands just next to Heiro, not noticing Cryptson hidden by brush and branches.


"Hey, you, keshi!  Take this little fidgeting bundle of noise and head back to the encampment.  There's this rainbow haired mare bawling her eyes out back that way," he points off behind him.  "I think I'ma go have a little more fun with her.  She tried to kill me.  Would you believe it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 02:23:40 am
Heiro looks at the darkbolt, so he thought he was one of the raiders then... "Of course I would be happy to take her, means I get the credit. You sure you don't want any help? This pile of meat didn't last nearly long enough."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 02:34:38 am
The darkbolt drops Kris into Heiro's grasp.  "Nah, she'll probably get away if I wait on you.  Maybe I'll leave her alive for you."

Kris opens her eyes and through tear clouded vision she recognizes Heiro.  She immediately throws her hooves around his neck and exclaims, "Daddy!"

The darkbolt's expression turns to confusion and he raises an eyebrow.  He looks over to the corpse next to them and a painful realization hits him.  Buck.  He reaches for his weapon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 02:39:42 am
A shadow passes over Khenal, and he catches a glimpse of copper fur and rainbow mane out of the corner of his eye.

"Khenal!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 02:40:55 am
"Starkey!  Do you know if anypony has found them yet?  I saw something fly out of the canopy over this way, so I'm checking!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 02:47:35 am
"I don't know anything yet. Cryptson took off into the jungle to the north, after one of the prisoners. Falcata went this way, towards where you saw it. I can only guess that means he went after Adamant, and she was following Kris."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 02:50:12 am
Heiro smiles a cold smile as the darkbolt realizes his mistake. He places Kris down gently and brushes her mane. "It's alright daughter, you're safe now. Now be a good filly and cover your eyes for a while, your mother wouldn't want you to see what happens next"

Heiro turns on the darkbolt, the warmth he felt at Kris caling him dad morphing into rage. 'Midnight. This one is /mine/.'

He rushes forward, and with a single swing, severs the darkbolt's wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 02:53:15 am
A chocolate coated pony with a striped mane is visible in a clearing a distance away.  She isn't moving.

***

Kris obeys and turns away from the carnage, covering her eyes and balling up with a whimper.

The darkbolt's eyes snap open and he lets out a startled scream as his wings are separated from his body.  The sword drops from his mouth and he instinctively tries to take to the air, leaping up and back but finding nothing to lift him.  He tumbles backward among a number of colorful curses and cries of pain, and tries to get to his hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 02:55:51 am
I wave to Starkey as he flys off to continue the search.  Shortly after he leaves, I spot Falcata lying motionless.  I give a shout of alarm before rushing to her, hoping she isn't hurt.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 03:02:39 am
"Missing something?" Heiro laughs a darkness coming into his eyes. "Oh, don't get up, it will just take longer if you run"

He drops his axe and jumps on the diomedian, Stomping and bucking. He circles around it, delivering crushing blows with his hooves again and again until it looks Like nothing less than a small pile of fur and flesh, smashed so badly that one could hardly recognize that it used to be a pony. With a final kick, his rage starts to subside, he takes a deep breath, retrieves Midnight's axe, then goes and cleans himself in the lake.

He returns to Kris' side, his worry beginning to return as the rage fades. "Hey there little one, daughter. It's okay now, you're safe. Lets get you back to your mother, I'm sure she's really worried about you. Just focus on me okay, don't look around." Heiro brushes Kris' mane as he speaks, trying to calm her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 03:13:16 am
Kris trembles as Heiro steps over to her, and she shrieks as he touches her mane.  As she opens her eyes and sees him again, she throws her hooves around his neck and begins to cry.  "I was so scared..." she manages to squeak out, her voice high and attenuated by the crying.

***

As Khenal lands he can see Falcata lying in the middle of the clearing where she'd collapsed in exhaustion and sorrow.  Bitter sobbing can be heard from her as he gets closer.  Suddenly, she thrusts her head to the sky and shouts, "Are you happy now!?"

She rights herself and with effort pulls up into a half sitting position, still staring up into the sky.  "Was this my punishment!?" she screams into the sky again.  "I was sent here to die!  Not her!"  Her voice begins to crack and more tears begin to stream down her cheeks.  "She... she never did anything to anypony... why..."  She collapses again, bitter sobbing overtaking any attempts to form words for a moment.

"Why... why did she have be taken from me?  She... she was all that I had left... Oh, Luna... why couldn't you have taken me instead!?"  She tries to say something, but her voice is lost in more hollow attempts to cry.  The tears were all gone... there was only fruitless shuddering from her as her body tries in vain to continue the soul consuming weeping.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 03:19:56 am
'No...oh Sisters, say it's not true!  Not Kris too!'

I approach Falcata, tears in my eyes, and place a hoof on her withers.


"Falcata?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 03:24:18 am
Starkey rapidly gains altitude with powerful strokes of his wings, before pausing to glide high above the jungle canopy. Off to the west, he spots a small pond in a clearing, with a few brightly-colored spots moving beside it. He swoops in towards the clearing, coming close enough to identify them: Heiro and Kris near the middle, Cryptson off near the edge with Adamant, and two Diomedians, one obviously dead, the other grievously injured. Unfortunate, but unavoidable, he assures himself. He banks and circles the clearing, confident that Heiro can apprehend the prisoner himself.

...Or not.

No, Sisters no lad, stop...

For Luna's sake lad, stop!

...Oh Sisters... at least use your axe, finish him quickly, for pity's sake!

As Heiro strides away, Starkey touches down lightly next to the bloodied form that may once have been a pony. He reaches out a hoof to nudge the buck, hoping beyond hope that he wasn't too far gone to save... or at least too far to suffer.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 03:25:48 am
Falcata leaps to her hooves and dances away as Khenal touches her.  That keshi had come back!  He'd come back to taunt her now!  She snatches her hammer up with her magic and turns to face him, all consuming wrath and hatred in her eyes. 

"You took my daughter... I'LL TAKE YOUR LIFE!" she shouts, swinging her hammer at the pony that had approached her, throwing all of her remaining strength into a killing blow.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 03:35:50 am
"Hey now daughter, it's okay, everything's okay now. We'll get you home to your mother, and maybe there are still some sweets left from the party. Come on sweetling, smile a bit, there's nothing to be scared of now." He pulls Kris into a loving hug, hoping he can banish her fear.

He looks up and sees Starkey standing over the darkbolt. "Dad! Come over here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 03:41:25 am
Confused, I look behind me.  Seeing nothing there, I turn back just in time to see the hammer coming at me too fast to avoid.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 03:51:21 am
"O-O-Okay..." she tightens her hug for as long as Heiro will hold her, tears continuing to drip from her cheeks as she tries to say something else, but failing miserably.

***

The hammer blow catches Khenal on the side of his head.  Falcata is exhausted from the chase and clumsy in her rage, but it's still a solid blow.  Khenal is sent reeling, the world spinning around him and pain surging through his head as the hammer connects.

Falcata's eyes widen and the hammer drops from her magical grasp as he slumps to the ground.  She shudders as the magnitude of what she'd just done settles in her mind.  She... she'd just mistaken Khenal for a diomedian... and... and... she'd... she'd killed him!

She immediately collapses next to Khenal and begins sobbing anew.


"Sisters... why?  What have I done!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 03:54:27 am
I groan and move my head slightly, feeling a bit nauseous.

"Ooww... I think you gave me a concussion is what you've done..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 03:58:35 am
At first, he does not stir, and Starkey begins a quiet prayer to Luna. But as he speaks, the wretched buck stirs, gasping and sobbing, turning his face to stare up at Starkey, his remaining eye full of pain and fear. Starkey reaches down to support his head with a hoof.

"P... Plea..."

"Be still, lad. The pain will end soon."

"D-Don'... wan-na..."

"I cannot save you. I-I'm sorry, there is nothing I can do."

"Don'... don' go..."

"I'm... not going, lad. I'll be here until... until..."

The buck rasps out his last, and is still. Starkey reaches a hoof up to close his eye, finishing his prayer. Slowly, he rises.

"Dad! Come over here!"

Starkey turns, seeing Heiro standing by Kris. slowly, he strides over to them, his face an emotionless mask.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 04:02:09 am
She looks up with a startled gasp as Khenal stirs.  But...

"Oh, sisters above!  Khenal... I'm so sorry!  I..."  She begins crying again.  "I'm so sorry!  They... they took Kris!  I thought you... I didn't mean to..."

She buries her face in her hooves.  She should be helping Khenal, but she had no strength to do anything.  "She... she's gone!  I...  I..." she trails off, her words lost under more failed attempts at producing tears.

((Didn't do anything with Cryptson, KingStrongbeard, so feel free to have him say / do something here.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 04:09:33 am
I woozily manage to stand for a moment before sitting down roughly as the world spins.

'Well, concussion is better than dead.  That hammer was moving...'


"Ugh... Um...Star... Starkey was close, he might... might have... done... thing..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 04:15:58 am
Heiro nuzzles his daughter, holding her tight. He looks over at Starkey "Dad, it's a good thing you're here, you need to find Falcata, she's probably really upset if she thinks Kris is gone." He pauses, seeing the look on Starkeys face. "D-dad... w-what's wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 04:24:13 am
Falcata flounders for a moment, unsure of what to do.  She manages to fight the bitter crying for a second as he sits.  He wasn't dead... but she'd certainly tried to do that, and he was clearly hurt.  Maybe badly.  What had she done?  As if losing her only daughter wasn't bad enough, she'd nearly killed her friend.  She stands and examines where the hammer struck him.  It was already bruising, but it didn't look like she'd broken anything.  It could still be bad...

"Khenal... I'm so, so, sorry...." she pleads, trying to think of what to do.  Did he say Starkey was nearby?  They needed to get Khenal back to Glitterglen.  Fast.  And she was too tired to pick him up.

"Oh, no... what do I do...  What do I do?"  She paces in front of him, her steps uneasy with fatigue.  "Captain Starkey!?" she calls out, hoping against reason that he would be able to hear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 04:25:24 am
"Kris... go with Mister Cryptson. You. Come with me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 04:29:12 am
I cringe and fall flat, covering my ears with my hooves at Falcata's shout.

'Sweet Celestia, that hurt more than the hammer did!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 04:44:11 am
"D-dad..." Heiro looks down at Kris. "It's okay daughter, I'll be right back. You can go with Mr. Cryptson if you want or you can wait here for me."

Heiro stands up and follows Starkey, terrified, wondering what he had done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 04:51:10 am
When he is sure Kris is out of sight and earshot, Starkey wheels on Heiro, delivering a sharp slap to the side of his face.

"Kindly tell me what the clop you're playing at, boy!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 04:53:53 am
Heiro staggers from the blow the shock stunning him. "W-w-what d-do you mean? I-I... I s-saved K-Kris... A-and Adamant... W-what d-did I-I do... do wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 04:59:48 am
"Oh, you saved two ponies, did you? At what cost? A scared buck, making a desperate escape from an unknown fate? A lad no older than yourself, swooping in to aid hes fallen comrade? Two lives for two lives, I suppose that makes it okay, aye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 05:05:33 am
"Swooping in to, He had Kris! He was going to go back to k-kill Falcata! I-I was just lucky he recognized me as a Keshi or he would have run off and I'd... I'd have lost my... my new daughter... and t-they attacked F-foals... they... they attacked f-foals... I-I couldn't just let them g-go..."" Heiro tries to hold back the tears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 05:13:16 am
"Couldn't let them go... so you butchered one and beat the other to a pulp. Clop it all, boy..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 05:21:22 am
"I-I... but..." His eyes shift and the fear seems to leave him, replaced with a coldness. "Heiro didn't I did. Threats must be dealt with. Threats to family destroyed. Any who would harm a foal, they don't deserve even a second thought. That has kept me alive and Heiro safe for sixteen years in the wilderness. Why should it change now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 05:24:03 am
"...who are you? another daemon, come to torment my family?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 05:25:30 am
"I am Midnight. I am Heiro's big sister, and his protector. You have met me before, even if you did not realize it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 05:30:00 am
"My son is a strong warrior. He doesn't need his 'big sister' to fight for him. Especially not like... this..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 05:42:34 am
"Is he? Your son is a colt, he has never grown past his villages destruction. I have fought nearly every battle he has ever had."

 "Do you want to know what happens when your son tries to fight without me? You see these bodies, they are the work of the darkness in our mind. Even I cannot stop it fully at times, if he was alone... if he was alone you would be looking at nothing but red stained grass. There would be little enough left of these two that they could be buried in a handbasket. Distasteful as it is... a fight should be quick, clean. End things with a single stroke... not like this..."

Midnight/Heiro shakes her head, "But that does not matter. I will not let you torment him more. He is lucky enough not to remember what we do when the darkness takes us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 05:49:27 am
"Then you could have prevented this? Why didn't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 05:52:11 am
"Did I not say that I cannot always hold back the darkness? Foals in danger... worse than that, our family in danger,  you should be grateful I was able to hold us back this much."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 05:54:31 am
"Grateful? There is nothing to be grateful for! They are dead, it can't be any worse!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 05:57:52 am
Midnight laughs a cold laugh. "Can't be any worse? Bones, blood, and flesh strewn across this clearing, and your son laughing in the center. That is what would happen if the darkness took over fully. Death is no bad thing compared to that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 06:03:03 am
This gives him pause. Kris had called Heiro 'daddy'. She already thought of him as a father. If she had seen him like that...

"...Begone. I want Heiro. I need to talk to my boy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 06:06:56 am
"He is scared... but I will try to convince him." Midnight/Heiro closes her eyes for a moment.

When they re-open, Heiro returns to normal, his head dropping and the nervousness returning to his voice. "D-dad... are... are y-you still m-mad at m-me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 06:08:50 am
Starkey steps forward, pulling Heiro into a hug.

"I'm angry, yes, but... not at you. I'm sorry, I didn't know about... about Midnight."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 06:13:08 am
"B-big sis... s-she's helped m-me ever s-since..." Heiro tries to think of the words, but they wont come, so he just returns the hug, holding his father tight. "Y-you should g-go and t-tell Falcata t-that Kris is... is safe...  I-I can bring her back to the fortress..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 06:23:13 am
"Aye, I'll do that. I'm sure she'll be overjoyed to hear that she is well... and that you rescued her."

After a few moments, Starkey gently lets go of Heiro.

"Heiro... whatever happened today - and I'm still not sure what happened... whatever I said... you're still my son, and I love you very much. Remember that."

He spreads his wings and takes off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 06:34:59 am
Heiro watches Starkey leave, still slightly worried. Trying to calm himself he returns to Kris' side, scooping her into another hug. "So daughter, you ready to head home now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 31, 2012, 12:47:32 pm
((Short Fort update, and Charity's Journal for the events of this night. Sorry for the weird formatting, I originally wrote it in note pad, and it copied funny, but was too much work to fix.))

Charity's Journal 15th Obsidian, 100

The liaison from the mountain homes along with the caravan has arrived.

I'm sending out the fortress guard to escort them inside.

Then I headed down to the Ducal Guard's barracks and saw Falcata and my

husband sparing with real weapons. It was an amazing display. Their

fight took them all around the room. I didn't realize Crytpson was so

skilled, Falcata just couldn't hit him with her hammer, though she did

surprise him with a kick or a buck at several points, but he just kept

getting his pick around her guard. That is until she tripped into him,

and as their faces collided, Falcata's lips found those of my husband.

The look on his face was priceless, it was clearly an accident, but he

was stunned all the same. Falcata took the opening, and struck him

twice with her fore-hooves, and then tapped him in the face with her

horn, a killing blow had they been really fighting. After that they

ended the sparing for the day.


Charity's Journal 16th Obsidian, 100

Ironya's second son, Itur is a grown pegasan stallion now. He wanted to

join the guard like his brother, but well, the poor colt is renowned

for his clumsiness and has been sickly his whole life, we had to turn

him away. I think he's joining the haulers guild, now. Hope they don't

don't let him carry anything fragile.

In other news the Lyemaker is still sitting in one of the crastpony

shops, next to Forgefire's forge screaming for body parts. I've asked

ol' Hog to butcher a few of the different animals we got running around.

Maybe he'll see something he likes, but we got more bone and leather,

than we know what to do with.


Charity's Journal 17th Obsidian, 100

The caravan from home is being pestered by parasprites. They're running

all to and fro trying to protect their goods. I saw one pegasan trader

fly right up a tree in terror of the little buggers. The Fortress Guard

and the merchant's guards are trying to chase the critters off, but

with mixed success.


Charity's Journal 20th Obsidian, 100

The last of the merchants have made it safety inside, the parasprites

are now all either dead, run off, or trapped in cages.



Charity's Journal 23rd Obsidian, 100

Bebmal just gave birth to her newest foal. A peagsan filly named Fesh

Craftsnatures.


Charity's Journal 28th Obsidian, 101

The lye maker is still screaming for body parts, growing concerned I've

asked Captain Isos to station someone by him at all times until this

passes or he becomes violent, in which case they know what to do.


Charity's Journal 3rd Granite, 101

Ironya had another filly, an earthpony.


Charity's Journal 6th Granite, 101

Bokbon, our broker has been in a drunken stupor for days now, the

merchants are getting ready to leave and we haven't traded yet. I've

had her fired and placed my son Adamant as the new broker. He has

successfully traded for the few things of value that the Rainbows brought.


Charity's Journal 7th Granite, 101

Friesden threw a party in the dinning hall today, but it was cut short

as a pair of Keshi prisoners escaped. They took my son and Falcata's

daughter as hostages and made their way to the surface before we knew

what was happening. When we were informed, Falcata, Heiro, and Cryptson

took off first. From what I've gathered, Falcata took off after one

Keshi and Heiro the other, with Cryptson lagging behind. But what

Cryptson tells me happened next chills me to the bone. When Heiro

caught the one with my son, he hacked it to pieces, slowly and

deliberately, putting off a killing strike just to torture it more.

These things deserve death and nothing more, but ponies do not torture

for revenge, we do not take joy in the slaughter of others, it is not

our way. But what happens next explains that, A darkbolt, carrying

Kris, landed and recognized Heiro as a Keshi, (A Keshi, living along

good ponies in Glitterglen, as if the demons weren't bad enough!) Heiro

took Kris from the Darkbolt and then cut of his wings and stomped him

to near death, then left him to die. Starkey landed and he had Cryptson

who Heiro didn't know was watching take Kris and Adamant home, while he

talked to Heiro.

When Cryptson returned home, with our eldest slung across his back I

panicked I thought for sure he was dead, but fortunately, he only had a

fractured jaw and a slight concussion that Doctor Bubbles is confident

he will recover from. Heiro arrived with Kris shortly there after. I hadn't yet been told

what happened with Heiro so I said nothing when Falcata returned, with an injured but stable Khenal, for their

big happy reunion, but Cryptson didn't look very happy to see them all

together, but he rarely looks all that happy so I didn't say anything

at the time. I'm going to have to talk to Falcata about this. First

thing in the morning.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 01:05:22 pm
((Going to assume Cryptson has already left with Adamant, and that Kris just stayed nearby for some reason or another.  I can revise this to match what you put in your journal, KingStrongbeard, if that's what we decide to do.))

Kris trembles in his hooves as he hugs her.  She immediately reciprocates the hug, clinging to Heiro and trying to calm her shaking.  She is silent for some time before she manages to squeak, "Yeah... I-I don't like it out here... I want to go home."  She tightens her grip slightly and sniffles.  "I-Is mom okay?  She... she was..." Kris trails off, her voice breaking and the sniffles returning.

***

Falcata was in hysterics.  She watches as Khenal collapses back to the ground, cradling his head in his hooves.  What had she done!?  Was he dying?  Was this a stroke?  An aneurysm?  She'd hit him with all of her might... it was only thanks to her exhaustion that she hadn't shattered his skull... but that didn't mean she hadn't caused terminal injury anyway.

She backs away and the gravity of everything that had just transpired hits her like the hammer she'd just hit Khenal with.  She slumps to the ground in front of him, burying her face in her hooves again.  What could she do?  Could she carry him?  She had to try something!  Her legs are weak and feeble beneath her as she tries to stand, and she fails to get to her hooves.

The utter soul crushing helplessness she felt as she watched Kris disappear into the woods before her eyes returns.  She'd just watched her daughter taken from her to some fate worse than death, and now... now she was going to have to watch as Khenal died in front of her because she was so bucking stupid...

Once again she covers her face with her hooves and hollow dry attempts to cry overcome her.  How could she face anypony in Glitterglen after this?  Sisters, how could she live with herself?


((That should be fun for Starkey to deal with when he finds them I think.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 01:23:26 pm
'Concussions are not fun.'

I carefully open my eyes and uncover one of my ears, only to see Falcata in the depths of despair.


"Fal... Falcata?  Um..."

'What are you supposed to say to somepony who just lost their filly?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 01:35:09 pm
She peeks from her hooves as Khenal speaks up again, her eyes pink from the incessant crying.  He wasn't dead... maybe it wasn't too late...

"Khenal... please... please be okay..."  She sniffles and fights for words.  "I just lost Kris... I... I can't bear to lose you too..."

Then the image of the darkbolt flying away with Kris returns and she looks away, covering her head with her hooves and stifling tears.  "I... I don't know... if-if... I can bear this... at all..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 01:49:04 pm
"Um, It'll... uh... Starkey must have.... don't lose hope?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on January 31, 2012, 01:59:34 pm
"Then let's go home. I'm sure Falcata will be fine, dad's going to find her and tell her you're okay. We might even see her on the way back to the fort." Heiro gives Kris a gentle kiss on the head. "So no more tears daughter, everything will be okay."

Heiro gives her one last hug before standing up and beginning to take her back to the fort.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 02:36:16 pm
Starkey descends through the canopy, landing a few meters away from Khenal and Falcata. A quick glance at the pair, and he dashes to Khenal's side.

"Khenal? What happened, lad, were you attacked?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 02:52:51 pm
Starkey's appearance manages to snap her back from the brink of catatonic shock.  She looks up to him, a pleading expression on her face.

"C-Captain... thank the sisters you're here... I... Khenal..."  She stammers, motioning at her hammer lying nearby.  "Th-they took Kris... I thought he was one of them..."  Her breathing hastens to the point of near hyperventilation.  "I-I hit him!  He-he's hurt... I... I could've killed him..."

She places a hoof to her chest and sits, trying to slow her breathing.  Panic is still evident on her face.  "She... she's gone... please... captain, you've got to help him... I'm too weak... if he dies too..."  The hyperventilation returns as she shuts her eyes and shakes her head wearily.  "I... I can't take this... please... Celestia... Luna... this is more than I can bear!" she chokes out between sharp breaths.

***

Kris nods slowly and climbs up onto Heiro's back, clinging to him the entire way.  The trembling has slowed, but hasn't left completely.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on January 31, 2012, 03:15:00 pm
((I'm sorry everypony, but seems I accidentally forgot to add a new player to the game. Tallpanzer, here is Tom.))

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Tom.png

((For those who may have forgotten, he has asked for Tom our mason/engraving Alicorn to become a cook. So even though that picture says something else, within the RP he is a cook now.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 03:58:01 pm
Starkey lays a hoof on Falcata's ahoulder.

"Calm down, Captain. Both of the foals have been found. Kris is with Heiro now. She's safe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 04:00:58 pm
I smile, obviously out of it.

"I'm not dying!  Uh, I think?  Anyway, I told you Starkey'd... uh... do thing!  Can we go back to the fort now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on January 31, 2012, 04:14:18 pm
Starkey's words take a moment to register with her.  She looks up, blinks a few times and sniffles again.  "Wh-what?  She... Heiro found her?  And Charity's son?"

She forces herself to her hooves and takes an uneasy step toward Khenal.  "We need to get back then..."  She grabs her hammer with her magic and returns it to its sling, feeling uneasy at the mere sight of it.  After a moment of confused examining of Khenal, she tries to help him up and find some way to assist him back to Glitterglen, but she nearly buckles in the attempt to lift him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TALLPANZER on January 31, 2012, 04:41:47 pm
((I know Tom got to Glitterglen a few years back, but I would still like to start with his arrival as it the least intrusive way to introduce a "new" pony.))

Tom stood at the back of the group of migrant Ponies, a plum of gray smoke trailing out from under his fedora. The line moved forward through the gates of Glitterglen as the guard preformed a routine check for contraband while taking down names and professions. Eventually it was Tom's turn. He would be the first to admit that he looked a little suspicious with his long coat covering him up almost completely, but he still never liked to be searched, it always went the same way.

Female Pegasus guard one: "Remove your hat please."

Reluctantly Tom took off his hat revealing his horn, the top most part of which had been cut clean off.

Female Pegasus guard two: "And just how did that happen?"

Tom: "I did it myself, it was stupid, can I have my hat back now?"

As he put his Fedora back on the two Pegasus guards began to pat him down and check his pockets

Female Pegasus guard one: "What are these?"

Tom: "Long land splifs."

*This is a Long land Splif. All Craftsponyship on this Splif is of middling quallity. It consists of finely cut long land grass, finely ground rat weed, wrapped in albino cave rice paper that was dipped in cannabis oil.*

Female Pegasus guard one: "I will have to take these."

Tom: "Yeah, yeah."

Guard number two took this time to look under Toms' coat, she yelped and dropped it back onto his flank. A small black cloud grew over Toms' head as she whispered into the ear of the other guard.

Female Pegasus guard Two: "He hasn't got a cutie mark Jane."

Female Pegasus guard Jane: "This I got to see."

*So Jane lifted the back of Toms' coat and took a good long look at his flank. Of course her eyes drifted south eventually. Jane dropped the coat back into place*

Guard Jane:(with a large lewd grin) "He looks like a full grown colt to me."

Tom: "Can I go in now?"

Female Pegasus guard two: "Just one more thing, can you tell me your last job?"

Tom: "Cook."

*Tom then took his leave of the two Guard Pegasus.*

Female Pegasus guard two: (looking at her clip board) "If I write that down, he'll be drafted. I can't let somepony with no Cutie mark into the milita. I'll just write down Engraver."

Guard Jane: "Whatever. Why do I feel like I have to buy him a drink now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on January 31, 2012, 11:18:10 pm
I flail a bit as my world swims with Falcata's attempt at getting me to my hooves.

"Woah!  Balance not working, gravity is!"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on January 31, 2012, 11:35:35 pm
Starkey rushes in to support Khenal.

"Easy there, Captain. I've got him. "
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 01, 2012, 12:02:02 am
I wobble back and forth, alternating putting my weight on Falcata and Starkey.

"Hehe, you guys have trumped gravity!  I have great friends to fight even gravity!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 12:07:07 am
Falcata lets go and transfers Khenal's weight to Starkey.  She sighs with relief and begins to follow the two, letting everything that has happened race through her mind over and over again.  Starkey said Kris was safe.  She had to be.  But she felt absolutely nauseated anyway... due in no small part to what she had just done to Khenal.  She hoped it wasn't any worse than it looked.

What was she going to say to everypony?  Especially Friesden?  Or Khenal when he was lucid enough to understand?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 12:12:47 am
Friesden was still holding the duchess close, letting her sob out her pain, while keeping up the reassurances that all will be fine.

Before too long, however, Heiro burst back into the room, with Kris on his back.

"Duchess, Heiro's back! And he has Kris!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 12:23:31 am
((Taking brief control of Charity and Cryptson, as per KingStrongbeard's request.))

Charity notices Heiro return as Friesden points it out.  Her spirits rise slowly.  'They've got Falcata's daughter... where is Adamant?  And where is Falcata and Cryptson?'  She looks over to Heiro.

"That's fantastic news... but... please... tell me that you found Adamant too?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 01, 2012, 12:27:34 am
Heiro walks into the dining room, smiling wide. "See daughter? You're back, safe and sound."

He looks up at the duchess' words. "Yes Adamant is safe, he was unconscious, so Cryptson took him to the hospital. As for Falcata... I was hoping she would have made it back by now... but I asked dad to find her, and let her know that Kris is safe, so she should be back soon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 12:29:25 am
Friesden squees. "Daughter? Are you going to marry Falcata? This is going to be the best! Have you proposed yet? You should!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 12:35:15 am
Charity is elated to know that her son was safe.  Unconscious though...

"Thank you..."  She wipes her eyes again and tries to put on a collected face.  "I'd best go check up on him."  She steps out of the dining hall and heads toward the hospital, a thousand possible ailments crossing through her mind.  'No, he's fine... Heiro would have said something if he was badly hurt...'

***

Kris shivers for a few moments before opening her eyes and realizing that she was actually back inside the fortress and surrounded by ponies that could protect her.  She hugs Heiro's neck from her position on his back and says,
"Th-thank you daddy..."  She continues to stay on his back, huddled up in a knot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 12:44:55 am
Friesden runs over to Heiro and Kris and hugs them both tight as she squees in delight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 01, 2012, 12:45:03 am
Heiro blushes 'U-umm w-well I...I hadn't... y-you really t-think.... a-are you s-sure s-sis?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 12:46:01 am
"Yes, yes! You'd be perfect for each other! What do you think, Kris?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 12:53:11 am
Kris looks up from where her face was buried in Heiro's mane and suppresses another shiver.  "Huh?  Y-you mean they aren't married?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 12:56:18 am
Friesden squees again. "You're already married! You're already married! We need to throw a party!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 01, 2012, 12:57:45 am
"U-umm b-but w-we.... we a-arent y-yet.... I...I mean I-I hadn't a-asked... b-but m-maybe..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 01:00:40 am
"You haven't?! Well you should! I'll help you, come on!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 01, 2012, 01:04:02 am
Starkey helps Khenal down the stairs, heading towards the hospital.

"Falcata? I think it would be best if we... didn't mention how Khenal ended up like this. Especially not around Friesden."

a 'squeee!' echoes down the hall towards them.

"...And that would be her. Remember, both of you: Khenal flew into a tree."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 01, 2012, 01:08:50 am
I perk up at the squee, even if it kinda hurts.

"It's Friesden!  We're fiances!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 01, 2012, 01:27:53 am
"No, no, lad. you're going to the hospital straight away. Don't want your wife-to-be to see you like this, do you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 01, 2012, 01:31:19 am
"Um... Yes?  Do I?  Oh no, flaunting our victory over gravity has done something horrible to me, hasn't it?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 01:32:12 am
"Yes... I think you're right captain.  I'll come check up on you two in a minute, I think everypony is in the dining hall."

She peels away from the other two as they continue on toward the hospital, and steps into the dining hall, not sure what she would find.  Friesden and Heiro were standing a short distance away... and Kris!  She was here!  Safe like Captain Starkey said!  With renewed vigor she all but gallops over and throws her hooves around Kris, fresh tears pouring from her eyes along the already matted fur of her cheeks.  "Oh... Kris..."

"Mom!"  Kris finally snaps out of her stupor and returns the hug, clinging to her mom and beginning to sob with joy.  "I was so scared mom..."

"Me too..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 01:33:37 am
Friesden taps Heiro with a hoof. "Go on! Ask her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 01, 2012, 01:37:19 am
Heiro looks joins in the hug "I told you she'd be safe, I would never let my daughter get hurt."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 01:42:31 am
Falcata laughs through the crying, absolutely overtaken with joy that her daughter was safe and sound.  If Heiro thought of Kris as his daughter, that was fine by her.  He'd saved Kris' life and as far as she knew, her own in the process.

She looks up to Heiro, tears of joy streaming down her cheeks.
  "Heiro... I-I could just..."

Buck it, why not?  She maintains her hold on the two of them and gives Heiro a long, passionate kiss.  "I-I can't thank you enough..." she says eventually as the kiss ends.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 01:45:26 am
Friesden gives Heiro another tap, and smiles encouragingly. "Go on, ask her!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 01, 2012, 01:49:42 am
Heiro swallows nervously, she seemed to be okay with him calling Kris daughter... and that kiss...

'Come on now brother, do it, or I will do it for you.'

Heiro lets go of the hug and steps back, trembling with nerves and exitement "F-falcata.. w-w-w-will... will y-y-you m- mar..." He swallows one last time... "Falcatawillyoumarryme?" he blushes heavily and looks at the floor, barely bearing to hope.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 02:03:12 am
The words were a bit unexpected, but they only had to sit in her head for a few moments.  After what he'd done for her and Kris?

She smiles, nods and throws herself into another embrace with him, whether he wanted it or not.
  "Yes... yes, I will..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 01, 2012, 02:05:05 am
Heiro tries to speak, but he can't think of any words, so he simply holds Falcata... his fiance close, praying that this wasn't all a dream.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 02:07:20 am
Friesden squees and jumps out of sheer joy. "Yayayayayayayay! This is the second best thing to happen ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 02:32:11 am
Falcata happily stays in his hooves.  Right now... knowing Kris was safe... and that this stallion was the one to save her... she just couldn't think of anything better to be doing.

Kris makes a small smile and with her mom and soon to be dad close, she finally feels safe enough to slip from his back onto the floor, shaking slightly as she is forced to stand again.  She might have been scared out of her mind just minutes ago, but she was very happy right now.  She slips over and hugs both by their forelegs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 04:47:45 pm
"Hey! We should go tell Khenal! Where is he? He'll be excited to hear about this!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 06:57:33 pm
Falcata snaps back to reality at her suggestion.  She reluctantly lets go of Heiro and looks over to Friesden.

"Captain Starkey took him to the hospital to get looked at..." she trails off, hoping to put it in a way that wouldn't cause Friesden to lose it completely or immediately point the blame to herself.  "He's alright... but he... hit his head..."  Yeah, against the face of her hammer.  She almost felt sick again, now that it was coming back to her.

Maybe Khenal wouldn't remember... why did that make her feel even worse?  She hoped he and Friesden would find it in their hearts to forgive her, because she wasn't sure she could forgive herself right now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 08:02:21 pm
"He's alright, though? Would he be alright to see us? I do want to see him...but if he's too injured..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 08:22:51 pm
"He's alright, yes, I think he's fine for you to see him."  She takes a deep breath and a cautious step toward the door.  "He's a little out of it right now though... so try not to worry."

The speed her heart was beginning to beat at betrayed how much she was worrying.  What if they got there and found out he did have a brain hemorrhage and died... or permanent brain damage... or... or...

Perhaps she should have gone alone to check first... but it was a bit late for that now.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 08:25:43 pm
"Okay! Let's go see what he has to say! Come on, soon-to-be sister-in-law, brother, niece! He'll be thrilled, I know that!"

Friesden starts dragging the three towards the hospital, the smile on her face growing even more, if that were possible.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 01, 2012, 08:33:24 pm
I lay in a bed in the hospital, gently bobbing my head and humming to myself, happy grin plastered on my face.

'I'm just glad they were able to fix the vengeance that gravity tried to wreak upon me!'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 08:37:03 pm
As Friesden leads the three other ponies into the hospital, she spots Khenal, with a bandage over his head.

"Khenal, Khenal!" she says as she runs over. "What happened? Falcata said you were hurt!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 08:39:59 pm
Falcata takes one look at Khenal and her heart skips a beat.  Yes, she should have come alone, he didn't look any more lucid at all.  Oh, this could end very badly... she definitely should have come alone.

Kris halts next to her mother, unwilling to avoid touching her.  She doesn't even notice Khenal's peculiar expression, lost in thought as she was.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 01, 2012, 08:41:38 pm
I smile even wider when I see Friesden, and give her a big hug!

"Friesden!  Oh, what happened?  I flew into a hammer tree!  Or was it a tree-hammer?  A tree attacked me with a hammer made of solid gravity?  Uh..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 08:43:07 pm
Friesden hugs Khenal right back.

"A hammer? A tree attacked you with a hammer? Falcata, what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 01, 2012, 08:46:49 pm
As Khenal babbles, a few yards away, in another bed lies Adamant, his mother and father sit next to him, along with his younger brothers and sisters, the doctors have bandaged his jaw and head, though he is still unconscious. Cryptson warily eyes Heiro as he walks in, but says nothing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 08:55:13 pm
"Uh... it's..." she stammers.  She was a terrible liar... what could she say?  She suppresses a nervous tremor and takes a step closer.  "I-I'll explain later... Khenal, how are you feeling?"

Kris notices Adamant in the bed nearby and slowly works up the courage to leave her mother's side.  "Um... Lady Charity... Lord Cryptson... is he... is he okay?" she says, her voice wavering slightly as her nerves begin to fray again.

((Will be watching and posting as possible, and will be on the IRC in an hour and a half or so, I think.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 08:58:13 pm
"What's wrong, Falcata? Am...Do...don't you like me? Maybe...maybe I should come back later?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 01, 2012, 09:00:48 pm
Heiro puts a comforting hoof on Falcata. "Falcata... what's wrong? Is there anything I can do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 09:05:35 pm
She relaxes a bit as Heiro touches her.  "N-no... nothing's wrong.  I'm sorry you two... I'm just still really shaken up..."  That was true at least...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 01, 2012, 09:06:03 pm
Charity looks up at Kris, her eyes still bloodshot from crying, but she forces a smile. "Hello Kris. The doctors say that he should recover, but it's difficult to tell for sure with any head injury, and he took a hard hit to the head and face. Even if he does wake up his jaw will have to be held shut for a couple months to heal. How did this happen? Do you know what happened to him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 01, 2012, 09:06:57 pm
"I'm feeling fine!  They think I'm a little, uh, what'd they call it?"

I pause, trying to think through this strange haze, then notice Friesden's mood seem to fall.

"Aw, it's alright, Friesden!  Of course Falcata still likes you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 09:08:13 pm
"Oh, that reminds me! We're here because Falcata and Heiro are engaged!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 01, 2012, 09:17:11 pm
"Really?  Neat!  There's a lot of affiancing going on!  Congrats Heiro and Falcata!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 01, 2012, 09:23:27 pm
Heiro blushes and shuffles his hooves a bit, moving closer to Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 09:29:17 pm
Falcata smiles sheepishly.  "Thank you..."

Kris looks at Adamant and feels chills run down her spine.  That could have been her.  She begins to tremble again as she prepares to answer the duchess' question.  "W-we went down to the arena... he-he said it wasn't dangerous when nopony was fighting..."  She pauses for a moment.  "Th-then the ponies came in and attacked us... he-he tried to stop them..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 09:32:09 pm
"Soon...soon everypony will be as happy as I am...I hope. Then I'll be even happier."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 01, 2012, 09:39:12 pm
'Engaged! Did I hear that right?' Thinks Cryptson to himself. 'Oh this isn't good. Look at him, it's like he's an entirely different pony than the one I saw in the field. Does she know what he's really like? Does she know, he's a Keshi, a heretic. I can't just let him take advantage of the Captain. She deserves somepony better than that Discord twisted monster. I'll talk to Charity when they leave, she'll know what to do.'

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"The arena, what were you two doing dow...Oh I see, nevermind that, stupid question. But he tried to stop them?" Charity looks down at Adamant, "You really are your father's son. More guts than brains." Cryptson doesn't seem to hear the remark his wife has made at his expense. But Charity notices him staring over at Heiro and Falcata.

"What are you looking at?"

"Nothing... I'll tell you later." Cryptson looks away trying to avoid looking like he's been looking at anything in particular.

"Cryptic as always dear."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 01, 2012, 10:47:35 pm
I nuzzle Friesden before breaking into a wide yawn.

"Oh, wow.  I am tired.  Running through the jungle and boldly defying gravity have finally caught up with me.  I'm gonna sleep, everypony."

I kiss Friesden before giving everypony else a half-lidded smile and laying my head down.  Before too long, I'm out like a light.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 10:50:59 pm
Friesden looks at Khenal lovingly, and lays one of her wings on his head. "I hope he gets better quickly...What really happened, Falcata? He seemed...well...I don't know. A little... confused?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 11:02:41 pm
"Um... I..." she looks Friesden in the eyes, then Heiro, then turns her gaze to Captain Starkey.  He was right... she shouldn't tell Friesden what happened.  Not yet anyway...  She begins to break out in a cold sweat, each passing moment making any story she concocts less and less plausible.  "H-he... I mean... th-there was..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 11:04:51 pm
"What's wrong? Di-did he get atta-attacked by a diomed-diomedian?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 11:18:57 pm
She shakes her head and tries to relax.  "No... there... it was an accident.  Just an accident..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 11:21:46 pm
"What happened? Is...Is he going to be okay? He is, isn't he? Tell me what happened, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 01, 2012, 11:24:37 pm
"...He got distracted, and flew headfirst into a tree."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 11:28:34 pm
"D-dad? What's wrong with your face? Di-did you have an accident too? A-at least Falcata didn't have one..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 11:42:37 pm
Falcata feels a stab of guilt through her.  This was going to kill Friesden... but it was killing her right now.  Starkey was probably going to be angry too for her doing this to Friesden... but... it was an accident...

She lowers her head and her ears droop.
  "It... it was me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 11:43:38 pm
"W-wh-what? What? You di- what?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 01, 2012, 11:53:45 pm
"I-It was an accident!  I was... he..."  She takes a deep, uneasy breath, keeping her head low.  "I... I thought he was the keshi... the keshi that took Kris... he-he came up behind me..."  She shuts her eyes and pauses for a moment, fighting with all of her willpower to avoid breaking down again.  She was a grown mare... she'd cried enough for one day.  "I... I swung my hammer without looking first..."

She bites her lip for a moment to keep herself together.  "I... I could have killed him... I... I just can't say how sorry I am..."  She can feel tears welling up, but she manages to blink them back with enormous effort.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 01, 2012, 11:56:40 pm
Heiro puts his hooves around Falcata, not speaking, just letting her say what she needs to.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 01, 2012, 11:56:56 pm
Before Falcata can blink back the tears completely, Friesden has moved across and thrown her forelegs around her.

"It's....It's okay. I... I understand the pain that comes from the loss of a child... And... you're my friend. I would forgive you anything, anything. Please...Don't try to hide it from me...It's okay....just...just next time...let it be me, not Khenal...please..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 12:03:21 am
Falcata sniffles and smiles as the two hug her.  "Th-thank you.  Both of you.   And Friesden... I'd never intentionally harm any of you.  Ever..."  She looks over to Khenal and adds, "I just hope he'll forgive me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 12:06:05 am
"B-bu-but if y-y-you do...can you do it to me, not him?" Friesden asks as she continues to hug Falcata tight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 12:15:10 am
Falcata sighs and thinks for a moment while she lingers in their hooves.  "Friesden... you mean every bit as much to me as he does... I'll never hurt any of my friends again... ever... not Khenal... and not you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 12:20:27 am
"I...I'm sorry...I just..I just don't want to see Khenal like this... or you, like this... If... If you need to hurt somepony... I'm..." She trails off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 12:39:07 am
Falcata gives Friesden a small squeeze.  She understood what she was saying, although nopony was going to hurt Friesden again except over her dead body.  "It's okay... and I don't like to see anypony like this.  Khenal's going to be fine... Kris and Master Adamant are safe... we shouldn't be thinking about things like this..."

Kris wanders back over and sits between her mother and adoptive father.  "Yeah..." she adds with a small smile.  Inside her mind though... everything that had happened that day was weighing heavily upon her.  She had some thinking to do, but... the fear she'd felt was beginning to change into something else... something with a purpose.  Maybe she should talk to her mother in private later.  Or not... maybe not yet...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 12:41:09 am
Friesden has a small smile make a brave advance across her face.

"You're right, of course...I'll never be able to thank you enough for what you've done for me, you know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 12:48:31 am
Falcata pulls back slightly, so she can see Friesden's face.  "What I've done for you?  You saved my life... what have I done for you that even begins to compare to that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 12:50:04 am
"You...you took my gift, and used me....You showed me my usefulness when I couldn't see it. Without you...I'm not sure I'd have survived..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 12:58:25 am
Falcata's mouth trembles uncertainly for a few moments.  She... she had no idea that something like that meant so much to Friesden... but looking back on it, it was obvious.  The tears she'd fought back finally manage to break through, a single drop rolling down her cheek as she smiles broadly and returns to the embrace.  "I..." she trails off, unsure of what she was planning to say, if there ever was anything at all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 01:07:14 am
"I just...I wish I could thank you enough.."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 01:10:05 am
"And I wish I could thank you enough..."

It was peculiar... but the two of them shared a bond unlike anything most ponies could comprehend.  They owed each other their lives.

((Scene concluded.  Falcata is free to speak with Charity, KingStrongbeard, despite the others continuing on for the next morning.  Feel free to set the scene.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 02, 2012, 01:30:04 am
The following morning, I groan as I start to wake.

"Ugh... head hurts..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 01:33:24 am
Friesden has fallen asleep, slumping on Khenal's bed with her wing once again covering Khenal's head. She snores lightly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 02, 2012, 01:39:37 am
"Urh..."

I peek my eyes out from under Friesden's wing before wincing and returning to the gentle darkness to be found there.

'Hammers are not fun...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 01:43:24 am
Kris starts visibly as Khenal stirs, shattering the silence.  She looks up from the book she was busying herself with before turning her eyes over to confirm that Heiro was still there.  Reassured, she watches him for a moment before turning back to the texts.  She'd spent the last hour or so trying to find a spell to help him, but so far she hadn't turned up anything.  Maybe he didn't need it afterall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 01:45:52 am
Still asleep, Friesden murmurs "Mmm, Khenal...", and starts salivating.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 02, 2012, 01:51:35 am
I was content to just suffer in silence, until Friesden started drooling.

"...Damp and head hurts... Not fair..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 02, 2012, 01:53:23 am
Heiro looks over at the words. "Hey daughter, have you found a painkiller spell? Khenal might appreciate it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 01:58:09 am
Kris perks up as Heiro speaks and looks over to Khenal.  "Oh... of course."

She hops down from the bed she was resting on and trots over to Khenal.  "Sorry, Mr. Khenal... I didn't even think about it."  Her horn glows a dull gold for a moment, and Khenal immediately feels the pain in his head drain away to a dull tingle.  "Did that help?  I... can make it stronger."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 02:00:38 am
Friesden yawns a bit, granting Khenal a brief reprieve from being slobbered on.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 02, 2012, 02:02:07 am
I sigh in relief as the pain settles down to a dull ache.

"Aaahhh... No thanks, Kris.  I think stronger might put me out again."

I carefully peek out form under Friesden's wing again.  Though the light is again a bit painful, it's at least bearable now.  I slowly and carefully try to work my way out from under Friesden without waking her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 02:06:05 am
She makes a nervous smile.  "Okay... if it starts to wear off, let me know.  It should last a few hours at least."

She backs away and hops back up onto the bed before paging through the text again.  There was so much to learn about this... did anypony ever learn it all?  She flips back to the index.  What all was in here anyway?  That she could understand anyway.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 02:07:40 am
"Mmmm....Khenal....." Friesden murmurs again as she starts to stir.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 02, 2012, 02:38:04 am
I gently stroke Friesden's mane as I try to levitate her into a more comfortable position on the bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 02:41:00 am
Friesden's eyes flutter open sleepily as Khenal brushes her mane, and she smiles sleepily. "Mmm, Khenal...And I'm awake, too..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 02, 2012, 03:02:17 am
Continuing to stroke her mane, I lean forward.

"Fantasy, however comforting..."  I pause to give my love a gentle kiss.  "...pales to Reality.  Heh, I hope.  Good morning, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 03:03:35 am
Friesden's eyes flutter in delight.

"Mmmmm...a very good morning....I love you, Khenal..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 02, 2012, 03:08:33 am
"I love you too, Friesden."

Before I can kiss her again, though, another lance of pain courses through my head.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 04:13:05 am
A look of concern comes over Friesden's face as Khenal starts in pain. "K-Khen-Khenal? My love? Are you okay? What's wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 02, 2012, 04:18:06 am
"...ow.  I think I'm alright, I just took a pretty good blow to the head is all."

I reach up a hoof and carefully touch the bandages on my head, surprised at how tender it is.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 02, 2012, 04:25:01 am
Friesden slowly, but with gathering speed, leans over and gently kisses the bandages.

"I...I hope you get better soon..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 09:15:32 am
Charity paces in her room. She's tired, having sat up all night in the Hospital. Adamant had awoken a few hours ago, he would recover. But she was worried, about what Cryptson had just told her. Sleep would have to wait. She needed to speak with Falcata. She'd come to her room to change, but now it was harder working up the courage for what she knew would be a stressful conversation than she had expected. She sucked in a deep breath and walked across the hall and knocked on Falcata's door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 12:40:56 pm
Falcata looks up from the diary she was busy scrawling away in.  "Just a moment."

She tucks the book away and rubs her eyes to try and gain some semblance of clarity.  After yesterday, she didn't get much sleep last night.  So much to think about... and Kris waking several times throughout the night with cries of terror didn't help anything.  Today Kris was supposed to spend some more time with Dr. Bubbles learning whatever it was he was teaching her, but she didn't want to go.  Falcata couldn't blame her, and in fact was reluctant to even let her out of her sight.  Only after Heiro came by and offered to go with her did she settle down enough to go, but even then it was hard for Falcata.

She blows out her breath and tries to forget about it.  Kris was safe now, and nothing was going to happen to her as long as Heiro was with her.  She steps over to the door and opens it to find Charity standing there.
  "Oh, hello Lady Charity... can I help you?  Would you like to come in?"

Charity's expression looked faintly worried... she wasn't sure she liked what that might mean.  But then again, she'd been through nearly the same as herself.  If she didn't look somewhat upset, she'd be even more concerned.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 01:24:04 pm
"Thank you," says Charity as she walks into Falcata's home, "are we alone? We...We need to talk...alone." Charity looks around the room for any sign of Kris or Heiro.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 01:27:27 pm
The gnawing apprehension in her gut intensifies as she nods slowly.  "Yes... we're alone.  What's wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 01:32:37 pm
After Charity sees that the door is closed, she takes a seat and gestures for Falcata to do the same. A pause follows and then "This isn't easy for me but, well, I guess I shouldn't beat around the bush. Tell me, how well do you really know Heiro, Falcata?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 01:45:52 pm
Falcata follows Charity's lead and takes a seat.  What Charity said wasn't doing much to calm her nerves.  "Quite well, I think.  We've been... seeing each other for over a month.  And I've known him for some time longer than that... since he's in the guard."  Worry finally edges onto her face.  "Why do you ask?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 01:52:34 pm
"Because last night, Cryptson told me some deeply disturbing things about your coltfriend. About things he did and about /what/ he is. And I, no, we are worried about you, and about Kris."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 01:59:33 pm
Her stomach knots tighter as she listens to Charity.  Kris had been reluctant to tell her the specifics of what happened... but she just assumed it was because of how scared she was.  Maybe there was something she didn't know...  "Wh-what happened?"

Wait... did she say something about what Heiro was?  Charity didn't know... about that... but maybe she was talking about something else.  No need to bring that up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 02:15:28 pm
"Well all that I know is second hoof, but I trust Cryptson's words. He said that as he was trying to catch up to thief that had Adamant, Heiro had already cornered the Keshi, and he killed it. But it's HOW he killed it, that you have to understand. He didn't just end it's life he tortured it first. He disarmed it and then hacked off each of its limbs one by one, before finishing it off. Cryptson would have put it out of it's misery but he was too far away when Heiro started, and by the time he caught up and checked on Adamant the deed was done... But there is more... Cryptson left the area with Adamant, but then saw the darkbolt that took Kris landing near Heiro. He was getting ready to go back to help Heiro when he saw them talking, so he hide and listened and watched what happened next. The darkbolt recognized Heiro as a Keshi, one their kind. He handed off Kris to him but then Heiro snapped, he cut off the Darkbolts wings and beat him to near death with his bare hooves, and left him to die. According to Cryptson he then changed back into his normal personality and with his hooves and armor still covered in blood from the things he had done went to hug Kris. And that's when Starkey showed up..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 02:37:05 pm
Falcata listens in silence.  Sisters above... she believed every word of it, and had suspected that Heiro had done no less to the diomedians responsible.  But... what should she say to Charity?  What did she think herself?  She didn't believe Heiro would ever hurt her or Kris... but at the same time she'd have never believed Khenal would be in the hospital by her hooves.  Ponies could do terrible things when they weren't thinking clearly...

"I... I see..." she finally manages to say.  She looks away and her ears droop.  What should she say?  What would Heiro think of her telling Charity any of what she saw in his head?  How much of that would Charity believe anyway?  And would it even help his case?  "I... I knew he was a keshi... but..."  She sighs and places a hoof against her forehead.  "I... just don't know what to think..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 02:42:47 pm
Charity's eyes go wide. She couldn't believe what she was hearing. Her own guard captain, her friend, withholding important information from her.

 "You KNEW he was a Keshi! You knew we had a Keshi in Guard and you didn't tell me! Why wouldn't you tell me? How long have you known?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 02:59:22 pm
Falcata recoils away from Charity's exclamation.  What had she done?  Admitting that might have put Heiro in jeopardy... withholding it until now might have destroyed her relationship with Charity... she feels as if a dagger has been driven between her ribs into her heart.

"Y-You don't understand!  He-he's not like them... and-and I knew i-if word got out th-that he was a dio-diomedian..." she trails off, not really sure what would have happened, now that she thought about it.  It wouldn't have been good, that much she knew.  But... she probably should have told Charity long before now.  In private.  "B-But you're right... I-I should have told you months ago..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 03:11:26 pm
"Falcata, telling me is hardly the same as letting information get out, I thought we were friends. I thought we could trust each other. But even from a practical standpoint, I know you thought you were protecting him, but think, what if I'd found out another way. I might have suspected him a spy and had him executed or thrown into the caverns alone and unarmed, or any number of things. But for what it's worth I don't think he's a spy, he clearly isn't working with The Bearded Devils 1 at least. But he is dangerous, you must see that."

1 The Diomedian Civ that has been attacking us.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 03:36:06 pm
As Charity speaks, Falcata imagines she can feel the dagger carving her heart.  She felt sick... she might not have completely destroyed her relationship with Charity... but it was clearly damaged.  Maybe even very badly.  And Charity was right about him, of course.  What if something terrible had happened to him because of this?

"Y-You're right."  She hangs her head and averts her eyes.  She couldn't even bear to look Charity in the eyes right now... it really was as if she'd betrayed her.  Charity trusted her with guarding her life, and this was how she behaved?  "I... I just don't know what I was thinking... but you're right.  I-I'm so sorry... I... just..."  She pauses as she feels the first hint of crying beginning to surface, and bites her tongue before it becomes obvious.

No.  Absolutely.  Not.  You are not going to cry again, especially not in front of Charity.  She was going to have to stop talking to ponies if this kept happening.  It was just one thing after another lately...

Finally confident that her words will come out level and free of any choking, she says,
"...but... you're right.  I-I am worried... about him... about Kris..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 04:23:07 pm
"I'm glad you see that. If he can change so completely, to completely forget his equineity, when angry like that. What should happen if you were to get into an argument, as all couples do, and he tried to hurt you, or Kris? You can defend yourself, but what about her? And can you adequately protect yourself without risking hurting him in process? I hope you will reconsider this engagement. For all of your sakes. It's a mistake. Plus he's a Keshi, a Discord worshiper, an attractive Unicorn of high status like you can do better."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 04:54:09 pm
She sits in silence for a few moments.  Charity was right again... every couple had their arguments.  She and Estoc had.  They were mercifully few and mild... but... what if...  She had seen what Heiro did to the crundle.  She wasn't sure she could defend herself against him if it came to that.  Kris would be dead before she could even raise a hoof.

No.  No, Heiro wasn't like that.  She understood him and Midnight well enough to know that would never happen.  Or... did she?  What was she going to do?  She had feelings for him.  That much she couldn't deny now.  But she wasn't sure she was ready to be engaged yet.  But if she told him that, she'd break his heart.  And what would that profit anypony?  And... why was he in such a hurry to get married anyway?  What would she do...?


"He... he brought my child back to me..." she says, staring into the floor ahead of her.  "He could have asked for anything and I'd have gladly given it to him... and he asked me to marry him..."  She sighs.  She thought she was past all of this.  A thousand questions buzzed through her head, without an answer in sight.  Maybe she wasn't ready for this, after all.  "I... don't know...  I've... got a lot of thinking to do..."

That Heiro was a keshi meant nothing to her.  But everything else... she just couldn't think clearly right now.  She shakes her head, and in a low voice mumbles, "I've loved and lost once... maybe that's enough for one lifetime..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 05:15:58 pm
"I can't tell you what to do Falcata, but I think the wise thing would be to break it off, and soon. But we have one more thing I need to talk to you about. Due to the reasons you already know. I'm not comfortable with Heiro being in the guard anymore. I can't risk him going berserk on some pony from the town. But I realize his only real useful skills is his ability to swing an axe. I'm considering transferring him from the guard to the militia, where Commander Starkey can keep an eye on him, and that way he can fight for Glitterglen, without needing to deal with our citizens. Does this sound like an acceptable arrangement to you?"

((Meeting a friend for dinner, will be AFK for a couple hours.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 05:38:23 pm
"Yes... I think that might be the best course of action..." she says after a brief silence.  Him working with Captain Starkey... yes, that would probably be a good idea.  She didn't really think Heiro would do something like that, but right now, if that's what Charity thought was a good idea, it was fine with her.  At least she hadn't suggested doing something bad to Heiro.

As silence settles she again begins to ponder the situation she was in.  What was she going to do...?  Right now, she just wanted to shut herself in her room, turn out the lights and pretend she wasn't there.  If she even bumped into Heiro right now, she wasn't sure what might happen.  He'd know something was wrong with her at one glance, and then what would she say?

She couldn't talk to Kris or any of her other friends about this.  Kris was nearly a mare... but this wasn't something she should be worried over.  Friesden would be crushed to hear that she even had the slightest hints of doubt.  And she wasn't sure she wanted to face Khenal right now, even barring the chance Friesden might hear something from him.  She'd have to face Heiro eventually... might as well start thinking up what she would have to say when she did.  And decide how she truly felt about everything.

But she was beginning to get ahead of herself... Charity hadn't even left yet... for all she knew there was more bad news.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TALLPANZER on February 02, 2012, 06:18:56 pm
((Toms' First day))

Tom showed up to work in the dinning hall the next morning. When he got there he was told to smooth the floor. Use of his magic allowed Tom to hold three smoothing stones at once, but his heart just wasn't in it so he only got as much work done as the other ponies. At lunch brake Tom sat down with his coworker Fluterlumps the Pegasus in a crash helmet.

Fluterlumps: "Made your own lunch did yah? I just get mine from the stock room, hey is that what I think it is?"

*This is a Qarry Cane Roast: It is made from finely minced quarry bush leaves, finely diced quarry bush leaves, and black cane cave sugar*

Tom: *Sighs* "Yes it's Quarry Cane Roast. They are perfectly legal you know."

Fluterlumps: "But at work, won't that make you all... well you know."

Tom: "Actually I don't. Why, you want some?"

Fluterlumps: *His eyes light up* "Really?"

Tom broke a piece of the roast and hoofed it over to Fluterlumps. The excited Pegasus gulped it down and immediately flew into a wall. Lucky for Tom that this was normal for Fluterlumps and no one noticed. This experience gave Tom an idea, he would make lunches for the ponies he worked with. That would keep him in practice and maybe even raise moral.

*KRRASHTHUMPP!* Fluterlumps: "I CAN'T SEEEE!"

Tom: "Your helmet fell over your eyes again."

Fluterlumps: *lifting his helmet* "Oh! so I did, thanks Tom."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 07:44:56 pm
"Well, Captain, I think that's all that I needed to talk to you about....Did you have anything else you wanted to say to me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 07:57:35 pm
She looks away and shakes her head.  "Just... that... I'm sorry I let you down..."

((Will be on the IRC in a few hours, although I'll keep monitoring the thread for a little while.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 08:04:03 pm
Charity puts her right hoof on Falcata's shoulder and looks her in the eyes, "...It's okay Falcata, I forgive you, but I need to know that I can trust you, and that means no more secrets, okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 08:22:47 pm
A hint of a smile returns to her face.  "Of course.  You have my word."  She searches her mind for anything she should tell Charity right then and there, but nothing manages to surface.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 08:30:43 pm
Charity sits back a smile on her face. "I'm glad to hear it," she says, "But enough about that unpleasant business. I think I have something more pleasant to talk about. I think my Addy might have a thing for your daughter. Do you know anything about that?" Charity asks smiling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 08:48:18 pm
That was news to her.  "No, I haven't heard a thing about that... except... well, she did mention that the two of them were together when... the prisoners escaped."  Concern grows on her face.  She'd nearly forgotten about him.  "How is he?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 08:57:39 pm
Charity's smile fades a bit, "He's doing much better, he woke up a few hours ago, and Bubbles doesn't think there is any permanent brain damage, or anything. He's even up and walking around now, though he's a bit wobbly. His dad is with him now. He can't talk of course, his jaw was hurt pretty bad and they had to have it held in place, and he won't be eating solid food for awhile either. But even though he can't talk, he can still write and the first thought he managed to convey to us upon waking was, "Where is Kris? Is she okay?" Naturally we assured him she was fine, and he relaxed a bit. I hadn't detected anything between them before, but well, it's a smart match if you ask me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 09:06:30 pm
"It's good to hear he's going to be alright.  Kris was quite worried about him too."  She look off in the general direction of the hospital, where Kris would be.  "Now that you mention it... they do seem like they would make good friends.  I'm always happy to see her getting along with the others.  There aren't many children her age for her to talk with."  Her eyes open a bit.  "Oh... but I suppose Master Adamant isn't exactly a foal anymore."

((AFK for a little while, an hour or so and I'll be back.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 09:11:38 pm
"No, no he isn't. He's been accepted into the miners guild, what little of one there is here, and has replaced Bokbon as our head broker, though he'll have to take time off from that job till he's healed. Hard to negotiate with a busted mouth. But your little Kris isn't so little anymore either. She must be, what, nearly six by now right? She's not much younger than him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TALLPANZER on February 02, 2012, 09:18:27 pm
((A regular day))

Tom had spent some time working with the other engravers, and everyday they would meet in the dinning hall for lunch. Some of the rock craftponies had started to join them. A male Unicorn named Noodles had even made a set rock cookware. One large stone pot was sitting on Toms' back as he made his way to the hall today. Suddenly the Pegasus guard he had met on his first day, the named Jane, stood in his way.

Jane: "What's in the pot Tom?"

Tom: "Chilli."

Jane dashed forward and stairs Tom right in the eyes "A likely story!"

Tom sighs and magically lifts the the lid of the pot "Take a look for yourself."

*This is a pot of fine cave chilli. All Craftsponyship is of fine quality. It consists of finely stewed albino cave beans, well diced tomato, finely chopped plumphelmet, and well roasted cave onions.*

Jane looked in the pot "Is this special chilli?"

Tom: "Have some if you're not sure."

Gobble,slurp,chomp,slurp,scarf,swallow,Mmmmm! As Jane was chowing down, Noodles and Flutterlumps entered the seen.

Noodles: "Something wrong Tom?"

Jane quickly lifts her head from the pot with a fare bit of Chilli sauce still on her face. Seeing the too new arrivals she wipes her chin with a hoof and stands at attention.

Jane: "Wellthatwillbeallhaveagoodday!"

Then bolted out the door so fast it left Flutterlumps spinning around like a top. The poor Pegasus finally came to a stop upside down in the dinning hall and when his eyes stopped rolling around in his head his helmet fell down again.

Flutterlumps: "Tom! Noodles! What happened!"

Tom: "Jane happened."

Noodles and Tom helped Flutterlumps back to his hooves and to a table. Then they all had Chilli.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 11:23:13 pm
"Oh?  It's good to hear he's found work that he's happy with.  I'm sure he's learning a lot from Lord Cryptson."  How long was it until Kris' birthday?  She would be turning six this year...  "And yes, she is all but a mare now.  She'll be turning six soon.  I hope she finds her place in the fort like he has."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 02, 2012, 11:45:49 pm
"I'm sure she'll be able to find work. She's got a talent for healing right? I'm sure she could help out in the hospital, though it is getting oftly crowded down there, with all the different nurses and doctors that have immigrated, and frankly there isn't enough work to go around. I might could hire her as an assistant, I could use a hoof keeping track of our stocks, how's she with numbers?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 02, 2012, 11:54:59 pm
"Yes, I'd hoped she would be able to find room to work in the hospital.  Like you said though, there's more than enough doctors and nurses to go around, and Dr. Bubbles told her he wasn't sure what he could do for her about it."

She ponders a moment.  "I asked her to start thinking about alternatives, but I don't know if she's thought up anything else.  I'm sure she'd be willing to help out with the stock keeping if she can't think of anything else.  She's pretty smart, although she hasn't exactly had a lot of practice with math."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 12:15:33 am
Heiro knocks on the door and enters, Kris following behind him. "Oh Dutchess. I didn't expect to see you here, how is adamant doing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 03, 2012, 12:25:40 am
Charity is surprised by the sudden appearance of Heiro. She quickly stands and faces him. "Hello Heiro, and Hello Kris. And yes Adamant is doing much better, he's up and walking around." She turns to face the young mare, "You know Kris, when he first woke up the first thing he asked was about you. He was afraid they had hurt you too. He was quite relieved to hear that you were not hurt by those monsters."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 12:30:16 am
Falcata smiles at the two as they enter.  Not the time to bring up anything she had just discussed with Charity.  "Hello, you two."

Kris smiles nervously in return and takes a step inside, only now confident enough to leave Heiro's side.  She listens to what Charity says and her face brightens a bit.  "Oh?  I'm glad to hear he's going to be okay.  I was really worried about him..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 12:32:53 am
Heiro smiles at the news. "That's great, I was worried for a bit."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 03, 2012, 12:39:41 am
"Yes, well, um, Heiro, I'm glad your here. I need to ask you something. Don't get angry, but I would like to transfer you from the Fortress Guard to the militia under Commander Starkey. I think...that your skills will be more beneficial to all of Glitterglen there."

Charity was sure of herself in how she handled that. 'Yes, best not to make him think of it as a demotion or a punishment, just a transfer. A new job, with new different responsibilities.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 12:49:13 am
'Angry? Why would she think I'd get angry... hmm I would get to work with dad...'

'There's something more going on here bro... I don't think this is a request...'

Heiro looks thoughtful as he speaks with Midnight, then he looks back at Charity. "Well, it's not the group I was hoping to join, but the chance to serve with dad might be nice. U-umm... but I'm curious... did I do something wrong? I though I was assisting in the guard... nevermind, I'm sure you have your reasons." He thinks some more, trying to figure out what he had done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 03, 2012, 12:54:19 am
"Yes, anyway," Charity returns to her seat, "Kris, your mother and I were talking before you and Heiro walked in about your future. Your nearly six years old already, time to start thinking about a career. Do you know what you want to do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 12:58:32 am
Kris shuffles a hoof nervous and looks up to find her mother's questioning gaze.  Oh... she wasn't going to like this... but...  "Yes, my lady, I have been thinking about it."  She turns her eyes to Charity and adds, "I... I want to help.  Help everypony.  I want to join the militia."

Falcata's eyes snap open and she makes a startled sputtering noise.  Did she just hear that right?  Surely she didn't.  "Wh-wh-what?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 01:00:36 am
"I-Is that so..." Heiro looks at her "Are you sure that's what you want to do? I'm sure you can help in other ways."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 03, 2012, 01:10:00 am
Charity is more than a little taken aback. "Are you sure dear? The militia is the front lines of our defenses. They go up against Diomedians more heavily armed and amoured than the two that attacked you and Adamant, regularly, and...they don't always come back. And even when they do...Well look what happened to Starkey. He's one of the best fighters I know but after one fight with them one of his wings barely works anymore. Or just ask Osal what it's like to spend months in traction after having an arrow go through each of your knees. Are you sure that's the kind of life you want?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 01:18:59 am
She looks up to Heiro and nods, the nervousness that plagued her every movement gone for a moment.  "Yes.  I... I was so scared when that pony had me... I never want anypony else to have to go through that.  If I can help stop that from happening again... I want to."

As Charity speaks up, she turns back to look at her.  "Yes, my lady, I'm sure.  I felt so helpless... I was helpless.  I don't want that to happen to anypony ever again."  She smiles a bit.  "And... there's no room for me in the hospital... but... I do know how to do some healing magic.  I think... maybe... maybe some of those ponies might have come back if there had been somepony there to help them."

Falcata shakes her head, her jaw trembling.  "N-no... no, no, no... Kris... you can't do this..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 01:28:29 am
"Falcata... if this is what she wants..." Heiro looks down, trying to think of something he could do.

'Well Charity did want us in the militia right bro? What better way to protect her'

'Of course! Thanks Midnight'

He looks up at Charity, a determined look on his face. "I would like to make a request Dutchess, if I may. I would like to be placed in my daughters squad, she'll need someone to teach her the basics."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 03, 2012, 01:31:21 am
"Well Starkey is the Commander, he's really the one in charge of how the squads break down. But I don't think he would object to that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 01:42:59 am
Kris nods purposefully at her mother.  "Yes, mom... this is what I want.  I'm tired of being scared, and I want to help."  She glances back to Charity.  "C-can I?  I mean... is there room for me?"

Falcata continues to shake her head.  "Kris... Kris... if something happens to you... when I thought you were gone... I..."  She steps over and hugs her daughter.  "I... can't take that..."

Kris nuzzles her from the hug and says, "I know... I worry all the time about you too... but this is what I want to do."

Falcata sighs and holds her for some time.  She eventually looks up to Heiro, thinking that at least he would be able to watch out for her.  And Captain Starkey was an excellent commander... if anypony could watch out for her, it was the two of them.  "O-Okay..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 01:44:59 am
Heiro puts a hoof around Falcata, and gives her a gentle nuzzle. "Don't worry, I won't let anything happen to our daughter, you know that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 01:49:35 am
She returns the nuzzle and nods.  "I know..."  Not willingly anyway... so much can happen on the battlefield... she must be insane to be letting her daughter do this...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 03, 2012, 01:50:00 am
"Kris, I can promise you a position in the militia if it's what you really want. We'll need to work some things out with the Commander but we've been thinking of expanding the army anyway." Charity unintentionally glances at Heiro for a short moment, before looking back at Kris.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 01:55:29 am
Kris smiles again, steady and sure.  "Thank you, my lady, I won't let you or Glitterglen down."  She gives Charity a small bow.

Falcata gives her a squeeze before letting go and backing away.  What if Kris did get hurt... what if she got killed?  But... what if she did save ponies?  She places a hoof to her forehead and sits.  Maybe she should talk to Captain Starkey about this... maybe he'd be able to ease her nerves.  Or talk some sense into her daughter...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 03, 2012, 02:09:52 am
"Well, it was nice talking to you, Falcata. I really should go now though. Got to go check on Adamant, Kris would you like to come along?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 02:16:17 am
Kris stands from the bow and her smile widens slightly.  "Oh, yes, I'd like to see him."  She follows after Charity as the duchess leaves, leaving Falcata and Heiro alone.

Falcata gives Heiro a tired expression and offers for him to sit next to her.
  "I... didn't see that coming... I'm not sure what to think about this..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 02:19:49 am
Heiro sits next to Falcata. "I have to admit... neither did I. But it seems to be what she really wants to do... I'll just have to make sure she stays safe. Lucky break though, Charity deciding to put me into the militia now... I wonder why, you have any ideas?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 02:23:44 am
The hospital is mostly empty of ponies, except for two who have remained in much the same posture for a significant period of time. At last, Friesden breaks her kiss on the top of Khenal's head. She smiles, and hops down from the bed.

"So, my love, what do you want to do now?" she asks, still smiling happily.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 02:29:00 am
Falcata takes a deep breath.  Alright... now... what should she say to him?  She didn't want to hurt him... or give him the wrong idea.  Keeping secrets had done enough damage for one day though.  Maybe it was best to just come out with it.

"I think so... yes."  She fights to keep her expression neutral.  "Lord Cryptson saw what happened to the diomedians you ran into.  He told her about it... I think she's afraid to keep you in the guard now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 02:31:03 am
"What? Wh-... I... I would never hurt one of the ponies here. They attacked Kris! T-they attacked Adamant... d-did I do something wrong?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 02:33:57 am
"Hmm... are you on duty?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 02:37:53 am
"I don't think so...why? You have something in mind?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 02:42:35 am
"I was thinking of visiting either Starkey or Falcata.  The strange lettering on their stuff has me curious."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 02:47:24 am
"Okay! Who shall we visit first?" Friesden asks as she ducks her head into one of Khenal's wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 02:52:43 am
"Hmm, maybe Starkey?  He at least has a theory on what's going on."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 02:54:59 am
"Yay! I haven't seen dad in a whole day! We might even get to see mum, too! And then we can tell them about Heiro and Falcata's engagement!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 02:59:47 am
"Heh, they ought to enjoy that."

Smiling the entire time, I lead us out of the hospital and to Starkey's chambers, doing my best to hide the occasional head pain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 03:04:01 am
As they approack, a loud, piercing shriek emits fro within Starkey's quarters.

"N-No... s-stop..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 03:05:56 am
Concern fills Friesden's face, and she bursts from Khenal's wing and charges through the door. "Dad!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 03:07:32 am
Friesden bursts through the door to find Otik sprawled across the floor, while Starkey stands over her, tickling her mercilessly.

"A-Ahhaha... s-stop... ahhI... c-cannae breathahaaaa..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 03:08:16 am
I follow just a step behind Friesden, horn glowing and ready to deal with whoever might try to hurt Starkey or Otik.  Seeing the scene, though, I release the magic and chuckle.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 03:08:38 am
"Dad! You had me worried!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 03:13:10 am
Starkey starts and looks up, not having noticed them enter. He blushes a bit.

"Oh, ah... hello you two. How aye you? Feeling better, Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 03:14:37 am
Friesden charges forward, anger on her face, and tackles Starkey. Before he can react, she's started tickling him back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 03:15:41 am
"Heh, mostly.  I see you and Otik are doing fine.  I wanted to talk with you about the Elements and the strange inscriptions."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 03:22:05 am
Otik uses the opening to leap up, speeding bast Khenal to join Friesden in the attack.

"Aaaah-hahaha!, N-No... O-Okay, Ihaha give upaaahaaa!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 03:24:21 am
Friesden grins in triumph, refusing to relent before his surrender.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 03:32:59 am
"Ah, I think 'e's had enough, Fri. Why dunnae we let him go talk with Khenal? I've ben meanin't'... t'talk with ye about somethin'."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 03:33:48 am
Friesden stops, still grinning in victory, and follows Otik. "A talk? About what, mum?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 03:34:36 am
I keep chuckling as I walk over to Starkey to offer him a hoof up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 03:38:06 am
"Well... c'mon, we need t'talk in private."

Otik leads Friesden back into the room.


"R-Right then..."

Starkey accepts the hoof, still shaking with little fits of laughter.

"So... what did you want to talk about? the Elements?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 03:41:50 am
"Ya.  They're ideals we're supposed to live up to, right?  Is there anything else?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 03:43:16 am
"that's... really all there is to it. they're just like commandments, except instead of eternal salvation, the reward is worldly happiness."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 03:47:49 am
"Hmm... do you think the inscriptions are related?  Or is somepony playing an elaborate prank?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 03:50:08 am
"They might just be... do you remember when we were in Friesden's mind, when Farquaad told us his story?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 03:55:48 am
"Your axe glowed..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 03:58:18 am
"...And I immediately knew he was telling the truth. Honesty. There's some kind of power behind these inscriptions, I think."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 03, 2012, 04:00:55 am
I think about what Starkey said, absent-mindedly rubbing my bandages.

"I think you might be right.  Loyalty... it'd never kill a friend..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 12:00:45 pm
"What? Wh-... I... I would never hurt one of the ponies here. They attacked Kris! T-they attacked Adamant... d-did I do something wrong?"

"No... I know you wouldn't hurt anypony here.  But..."  She trails off and looks to the door that Charity and Kris just disappeared through.  "...she doesn't understand what happened.  She's just doing what she thinks is best for everypony.  There are over a hundred ponies here that she's responsible for."

Falcata glances back to him.  "I didn't tell her about Midnight.  I'm not sure that she would understand... I fear what she might do if she did find out." A knot returns to her stomach as she thinks about it.  Keeping things from Charity already, after she just gave her her word that she wouldn't.  But this... she couldn't tell Charity this.  Not right now at least.

She opens her mouth to continue, but words leave her.  What would she say to him next?  She just didn't know...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 02:14:21 pm
'W-well at least she knows... b-but how could the dutchess think that... and if she found out about big sis...'

'If she finds out we'll deal with it then. I can understand her concern... But I would think she would talk with us about it.'

Heiro looks over at Falcata, it was obvious there was more on her mind... and if Charity had been here... 'No, I can't think like that, stay positive.'

"You're probably right. If she found out about big sis... that could end badly. Does... does she know I'm a keshi?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 02:42:44 pm
She nods gravely.  "Lord Cryptson saw you and the darkbolt.  How he recognized you as a keshi."  She thinks back to the darkbolt disappearing into the shrubbery with Kris... and how he simply came over to Heiro.

"I'm... not entirely sure how Lady Charity feels about it..." she adds, mostly truthfully.  Charity clearly wasn't happy about it, but she didn't seem to distrust Heiro enough to actually throw him in the caverns.  "But I honestly think Kris may owe her life to the fact that you are a keshi.  If the darkbolt didn't recognize you as one..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 04:48:48 pm
"I-I don't think I'd have been able to catch him... but no point in dwelling on things that might have happened. This should be a happy time! U-unless..." Heiro looks down, unsure of how to ask. How should he bring up his worry that she would have changed her mind... especially after Charity's visit...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 05:56:58 pm
Unless?  What was he thinking?  The same as her, maybe?  "No... you're right about that.  Kris is alive and well... for that I'll be eternally grateful."  She rests a hoof on one of his.  "Especially to you."

Here comes the hard part... what should she say now?  What did she want to say?  She was a bit worried about... his behavior... but she didn't want to upset or offend him.  And she was worried they were taking things far too fast.  Maybe that was the best way to start?  She draws in a deep breath and looks over to him.

"Heiro... there is something else I wanted to talk with you about... about... us..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 06:00:41 pm
Heiro's heart sinks... it was what he thought... 'I should have known... there was no way...'

"W-what... what do you want to... talk about."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 06:30:54 pm
"Heiro... do... do you think we're taking this... too fast?"  She looks him in the eyes, fighting to keep fer face straight.  She had to be careful of what she said... she could crush him if she wasn't careful... that was the last thing she wanted to do.  She didn't want to break up.  She just needed more time.  "We... we've only been coltfriend and fillyfriend for a few days..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 06:39:11 pm
"W-well... w-we've been... I-I mean..." Heiro tries to think, looking for any words. "I-I just... I care for you and Kris... and... and when she calls me dad..." He swallows trying to compose himself. "I was... was worried what you'd s-say when I-I asked... but sis... sis convinced me too. I-I don't know... I-it doesn't feel too fast... T-this isn't b-because of... of what C-charity said i-is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 07:36:57 pm
She had known Heiro for some time as an acquaintance.  She had been seeing him, in a sense, for a month or so.  But they'd only been in a definite relationship for a few days.  To be engaged after that seemed too fast for her... but if it wasn't to him...

She looks down, then back up to him.  "Lady Charity was just worried about Kris and me.  She... she doesn't understand...  After what Lord Cryptson told her... she was afraid you might... hurt one of us."  She looks him in the eyes and adds, "But I know you'd never do that."  Yet again... how sure could she be?  A frightened or angry pony could do a lot of things they never normally would.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 08:02:27 pm
"Of.. of course I wouldn't! I w-would never l-let... let anything h-happen. To... to you... to Kris... to any of my family... no matter w-what."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 08:08:40 pm
She nods, a small smile returning to her face.  "I know."  She blows out her breath and places a hoof to her forehead, looking away.  "Maybe... maybe I'm just still shaken up after what I did to Khenal.  I'd have never believed... that I would..." she trails off, realizing how bad what she was saying could be taken.  To even suggest Heiro might lose his temper and attack one of them was tantamount to accusing him of inevitably doing so.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 08:18:35 pm
"I-It's okay F-falcata..." Heiro pulls her into a hug, trying to calm her. "Y-you w-weren't t-trying to hurt h-him... B-besides, he's fine, and he's not even mad at you for it... don't beat y-yourself up over th-things, especially not things nopony... nopony else blames you for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 08:38:22 pm
She returns the hug and gives him a small nuzzle.  She actually felt better... maybe she wasn't making a mistake after all.  And it was good to know Khenal wasn't angry at her for it... it was a mistake...  "Thank you."  She lets out another heavy breath.  "And I'm... I'm sorry... if I worried or upset you just now... I was just concerned..."  She makes a small chuckle.  "I... I thought maybe you only proposed because Friesden suggested it.  I love her to death... but she... gets a bit enthusiastic, sometimes..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 08:49:20 pm
"I-I'm okay now... I was worried that... that you wouldn't want a diomedian husband... not after you thought about it... I'm just glad that you seem to be feeling better now. I don't like seeing you upset..." He smiles "I like it when you laugh. When everypony is happy..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 09:12:13 pm
"I know you're not like them.  You're not like the monsters that tried to take Kris from us.  And I think Lady Charity will come to realize that in time."  Her smile widens a bit.  "It's just been a crazy few days... yesterday was easily the most stressful day of my life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 09:27:23 pm
"Well then we'll just have to make today and tomorrow some of the best! Hey... did we ever tell mom about our engagement?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 09:58:52 pm
"No... I don't think we have."  She smiles.  "I imagine Friesden has though, she seemed so happy she might explode."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 10:15:44 pm
Heiro laughs "Yeah, I don't think I've seen little sis that happy in a long time... Maybe we should go see mom, she might want to say something... and I want to see her reaction too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 10:17:51 pm
"Okay," she responds, standing and finding her legs surprisingly weak.  Just the thought of the conversation had drained her.  "Perhaps Captain Starkey will be there too, I think I'd like to talk to him a bit about Kris joining the militia..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 10:20:35 pm
"Yeah... and me joining as well" Heiro stands, nuzzling Falcata, before going to the door and holding it open for her. "After you Falcata... my f-fiance..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 10:30:37 pm
She accepts the offer and steps outside, giving him a small nuzzle as she passes.  "Thank you," she says with a smile.  When she stopped to think about it, this all seemed pretty silly.  She was engaged to a keshi a decade younger than her that she was only just now really getting to know.

But... it didn't really matter.  She genuinely felt happier around him.  This was all still a bit sudden for her, but perhaps the wedding wouldn't be any time soon.  It would have to come after Friesden and Khenal's wedding at least.  By then, she was sure that if there was an insurmountable problem between them, it would have manifested.

Right now though, she just wanted to be happy.  She didn't want to think of anything like that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 11:32:27 pm
Heiro and Falcata arrive at the captain's quarters, finding the door closed, but unlocked. Entering, they see Otik and Friesden, apparently in the middle of a discussion.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 11:35:52 pm
Friesden's eyes are glazed over, and she doesn't appear to notice the two entering.

"Uhm... wow... I guess..." she says.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 11:38:45 pm
"Heyas Mom, Heyas sis, What're you doing?" Heiro practically bounces into the room, giving Otik a hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 11:41:10 pm
Falcata steps inside gingerly, having not exactly been invited in.  Heiro knew Starkey and Otik well enough, so she follows anyway.  The conversation seems a bit private, so she hangs back a bit and lets Heiro break the ice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 03, 2012, 11:45:17 pm
Otik seems a bit surprised at Heiro's entrance, but returns the hug anyway.

"Oh, we were jus'... talkin'."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 11:50:11 pm
Friesden jumps up when Heiro bumps in. She runs to him, a smile on her face, but stops just short of him, the smile fading.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 11:53:37 pm
"Whats up sis? Isn't today great? Falcata and I are engaged and it's all because you helped!" Heiro runs over and hugs Friesden as well, smiling widely the entire time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 03, 2012, 11:55:20 pm
Friesden stands stock-still, her face freezing.
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Post by: Telgin on February 03, 2012, 11:56:49 pm
Falcata steps closer, concern growing on her face.  "Friesden?  Are you alright?"
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Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 03, 2012, 11:58:59 pm
Heiro looks down at Friesden, his excitement changing to concern "Sis? Sis you okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 04, 2012, 12:00:41 am
Otik steps a little closer.

"...Fri? Are ye alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 04, 2012, 12:05:28 am
"I-I-I..." she trails off, then shakes her head. "I'm fine!" she say, forcing a smile back onto her face. "You're...You're my brother...You..."

She trails off again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 04, 2012, 12:27:24 am
Falcata steps up to her, lays a hoof on her withers, and gives her a concerned look.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 04, 2012, 04:38:49 am
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Post by: TALLPANZER on February 04, 2012, 04:56:32 pm
Tom was no his way to the hospital with two rock pots on his back and a tray hovering magically in front of him. It was his day off and he had decided to take some of his cooking to the staff and injured ponies. Soup for the weaker ponies, a hearty roast for the others, and some cookies for those brave medical ponies. He hummed to himself as he walked down the hall in high spirits.   
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 05, 2012, 12:11:53 pm
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Heiro and Falcata arrive at the small quarters shared by the captain and lieutenant, finding the door shut.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 05, 2012, 04:29:08 pm
Heiro knocks on the door, not wanting to disturb his parents if they were sleeping.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 05, 2012, 07:40:40 pm
After a few moments, the door opens. Otik pokes her head out, wearing a silly grin and a rosy tinge to her cheeks.

"Ooh, hello Heiro! An' miss Falcata too! How are ye both?"
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Post by: Dsarker on February 05, 2012, 07:52:17 pm
Friesden pokes her head out about Otik, a smile on her face.

"Brother! Falcata!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 05, 2012, 07:54:04 pm
Falcata returns the smile.  The unpleasant conversation with Charity had mostly left her mind by now.  "I'm doing well lieutenant, thank you.  How are you two?  You seem excited about something."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 05, 2012, 07:54:26 pm
"Heyas mom! Heyas sis! How're you both doin'!" Heiro grabs Otik and Friesden in a big hug "Didja hear mom!? Falcata's gonna marry me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 05, 2012, 07:56:18 pm
"Mum's the best mum ever, Falcata!" Friesden says, and looks like she's going to continue when Heiro speaks. "Oh, sorry Heiro, I forgot to tell mum...But you have now, at least!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 02:56:34 am
"Married? already? But th' two o' ye havenae been datin' f'r more than a month."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 03:02:26 am
Falcata smiles sheepishly and fidgets a bit.  Yes... it wasn't a lot of time to get to know each other, still something she was a bit worried about, but now wasn't the time to bring that up.  Again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 06, 2012, 03:09:27 am
"But they love each other, mum!"
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Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 03:16:25 am
Otik quietly looks between the two of them, and smiles.

"I c'n see that. Yer both sure about this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 04:23:20 am
She pauses for a moment and nods.  "Oh, of course."  Why did that feel so false?  She really hoped nopony picked up on it.  She didn't want to upset Heiro or Friesden right now over that.  It would be fine, she knew.  She just had to finish feeling it out while they waited for the wedding.  She genuinely did feel a spark when he proposed to her...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 06, 2012, 04:26:03 am
"Of course we are! I'm so happy!" Heiro gives Otik and Friesden a final squeeze, then lets go, looking around. "Where's dad? Does he know?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 04:30:35 am
"Well, I cannae argue against that. Yer dad went f'r a walk outside with Khenal. I think he'll be glad t'hear th' news."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 06, 2012, 04:36:19 am
"Oh... maybe we should wait here for him then?" Heiro laughs, practically vibrating with joy. "Today is the best day!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 04:48:21 am
Falcata smiles, but Heiro's excitement just worries her more.  She wondered if he truly appreciated just what getting married meant.  He seemed to be pretty infatuated with her, and she had grown fond of him, but she was beginning to question if he had truly sat down and thought about it.  Charity's words ring through her head again.  She didn't want to back out of the relationship at all, but if nothing else she really wanted more time.

Heiro could probably use a little more time to digest it all too, whether he believed it or not.  He was still young at heart, probably used to rushing into things without thinking them through completely.  This could still be a crush from him... she didn't want to believe that, but what if it was?  Friesden was the one to urge him to ask, she'd heard her encouragement.

She lets out the faintest of a sigh.  She felt guilty just thinking all of this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 06, 2012, 04:50:53 am
Friesden jumps over Otik, and in front of Falcata. Before Falcata can react, Friesden throws her forelegs around her in a hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 04:58:54 am
Falcata grunts in surprise as Friesden suddenly seizes her in an embrace.  "Oh, um, hello Friesden," she says, her smile replaced by brief shock.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 06, 2012, 05:00:36 am
"We're going to be SISTERS! This is going to be the best! Hey, sis. Why don't we have a double wedding! That would be so cool, right, Mum?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 05:14:39 am
Falcata is acting a bit... distressed. Maybe Otik ought to have a word with her?

"That sounds wonderful, Fri. Why dun' you an' Heiro go an' tell yer dad th' news?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 05:14:53 am
"A double wedding?"  That... actually didn't sound like such a fantastic idea to her.  She'd been hoping they would have a few months at least... Friesden and Khenal would be getting married soon, right?  What should she say though?

Normally she'd be happy to do such a thing though.  Friesden and Khenal were good friends, and it would save effort to do it together.


"That sounds wonderful!," she says, managing to keep her voice genuine sounding with some effort.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 06, 2012, 05:20:11 am
"Yay! Okay Heiro, Falcata, let's go see dad!"

Friesden begins dragging the two behind her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 05:22:04 am
"...Actually, I wanted t'talk with miss Falcata. In private."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 06, 2012, 05:23:37 am
Friesden turns to Otik, winks less-than-subtly, and leaves Falcata, continuing to drag Heiro to Starkey.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 05:25:19 am
Falcata watches as Friesden leaves with Heiro and looks back to Otik.  "Um, what is it, lieutenant?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 05:28:14 am
Otik lays a hoof on Falcata's shoulder.

"There's no need f'r that, hun. We're both out o' uniform."

She leads Falcata into the room.

"Now, I noticed ye seemed... a bit vexed about things. Would ye like t'talk about it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 05:37:35 am
Falcata listens silently as Otik speaks.  "Sorry, Otik... a bit of a habit, hard to break."  Well, she'd still call Starkey captain until he said to do otherwise.  Best not to assume too much.

As she leads Falcata into the private room and asks the question, Falcata feels her pulse double.  She really wanted to say something... and she thought she could trust Otik... but... what if Friesden or Heiro caught wind of this?


"Vexed? N-no... it's just..." she looks away.  Great, now she couldn't avoid spilling it.  Hopefully Otik would be understanding...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 05:47:40 am
"Havin' second thoughts?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 05:51:46 am
Falcata looks back to her with a weary expression.  "That obvious?"  She blows out her breath and adds, "I... I just... this is going too fast for me... I mean... I dated Estoc for close to a year before we were married..."  A realization strikes her.  Otik didn't know a thing about Estoc... this might complicate things a bit more than she'd intended...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 05:56:24 am
"Estoc? Wos that his name? I figured ye had been with somepony b'fore, wot with Kris an' all."

Otik sits beside her.

"So, ye feel like Heiro's takin' things a bit too fast. Have ye told him so?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 06:04:42 am
"Yes... Kris' father.  Feels like an eternity ago...She shakes her head slowly as Otik sits beside her.  "No... I... I tried to.  I wanted to tell him, but when I started to bring it up... I could see the fear in his eyes.  I couldn't bring myself to do it.  He's so happy... even the chance of crushing his spirit was too much for me.  It tears my heart out to see him upset."

She hangs her head slightly and looks vaguely in Otik's direction.  "That's pretty terrible, isn't it?  I'm going to be married to him, and I don't even have the guts to tell him I'm afraid to do it so soon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 06:23:25 am
Otik chuckles, "Well, a' least I dun' hafta worry about ye breakin' it off. Ye wouldnae worry about him so if ye didnae love him."

Otik again rests her hoof on Falcata's shoulders, and squeezes lightly.

"Tell ye wot. Maybe it would be better if I had a lit'l talk with him first?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 06:27:13 am
A small smile returns to her face.  "Otik... would you do that?  I... I hate to ask you to do that for me... but maybe he'd take it better coming from you..."  She thinks for a moment more.  "Friesden is going to be crushed... she was so looking forward to this being soon..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 06, 2012, 06:36:47 am
"Jus' means she'll have more time t'plan a bigger party. She'll manage."

"...T'tell ye th' truth, I think me an' Starkey could use a lit'l time to adjust as well. Both o' our eldest married so close t'gether? An' our first grandfilly?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 06, 2012, 06:43:03 am
Her smile widens a bit.  "Thank you, lieutenant."  She catches herself and makes a sheepish expression.  "Sorry, Otik."  She thinks about Kris for a moment.  She'd never met any of her real grandparents.  She'd probably be excited at that prospect.  And Starkey and Otik were good ponies to have for grandparents.  "Kris is pretty excited about all of this.  She barely remembers her father, and not her grandparents at all."

She smiles again.  "But, one thing at a time, I think."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 12:17:19 am
Heiro and Friesden find their father outside in the hall, chatting with Khenal. As they bound up behind him, he turns.

"Oh, hello you two. What's got you all excited?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 12:19:59 am
Heiro bounds over to "I asked Falcata to marry me and she said yes! I'm so happy! And little sis even said we could have a double wedding!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 12:20:23 am
"It's going to be the best, isn't it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 08, 2012, 12:23:21 am
'Huh, I thought that was the concussion.'

"Congratulations!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 12:36:30 am
"You... and Falcata?"

Starkey seems a bit stunned.

"Heiro... and Falcata. That means that... Kris is..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 12:38:00 am
"My niece! Yes! Isn't it wonderful!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 12:39:23 am
"Yep you're gonna be a grandpa!" Heiro grabs Starkey, Friesden and Khenal into a hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 12:40:16 am
"...I have a grandfilly..."

A huge smile spreads across Starkey's muzzle.

"I have a grandfilly!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 08, 2012, 12:41:12 am
I smile and return the hug, laughing the whole time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 12:42:33 am
Friesden's smile spreads even more, conquering the very air around her in its growth.

"This is going to be the best ever! Isn't it, Khenal?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 08, 2012, 01:34:35 am
I smile at Friesden and give her a brief kiss.

"I think so, yes."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 02:27:20 am
Friesden smiles, and kisses Khenal back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 03:22:43 am
************

Some time later, Otik manages to pry Heiro from the clutches of his father and sister. She leads him back to her quarters.

"Come sit with me, hun. We havenae talked in a while."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 03:25:17 am
"What? A-alright, I'd love to talk... but what about?" Heiro takes a seat and looks at Otik, nervous about what she could want to talk about.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 03:49:09 am
"Why, about you an' Falcata, o' course! I heard the two o' ye are gonna tie th' knot?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 03:50:46 am
"Yep we are, sis was even talking about it being a double wedding! That would be fun wouldn't it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 03:53:15 am
"Aye, it would, except... Friesden's wedding is jus' a couple months from now, aye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 03:56:31 am
"Is it? Sis never told me when it was gonna be."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 04:00:35 am
"She didnae? She's been goin' on about it f'r days now, I thought ye'd know. But, as I wos sayin'... a few months is nae a very long time t'know somepony, aye?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 04:19:33 am
"It isn't?" Heiro thinks a bit. "Either way, I've known Falcata for a long time now, not just a few months..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 04:27:04 am
"I know hun, but... Y'see... Falcata is th' kind o' mare who likes t'think things through, plan everything out b'fore she does it. jus' jumpin' right in isnae in her nature."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 04:28:56 am
"S-so... so she d-doesn't want to get married? B-but..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 04:48:51 am
Friesden falls from the ceiling, landing roughly on the floor.

"What? What? But? But...But...What? Falcata...What?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 05:06:48 am
Hearing Friesden's voice behind her, Otik turns.

" Oh, why hello there Friesden. I wos wonderin' when ye'd decide to... drop in."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 05:12:06 am
"But...what...Falcata? Not...Not getting married? WHY?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 05:15:03 am
"Wot? Nonono hun, I never said they shouldnae get married! I'm jus' sayin', it might be a bit too soon, y'know? Give 'em about a year or so, let 'em get good and comfortable with each other, an' then they can tie th' knot!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 05:16:23 am
"But...but...I need to think. I need to think...Think, brain, think!" she says with a stressed tone in her voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 05:18:22 am
"I-It's okay sis... I didn't think a couplea months would be too quick but... I-if she wants to wait longer... guess we just won't have that double wedding. But... why d-didn't she t-tell me?" Heiro's voice wavers a bit.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 05:21:51 am
"No...no...no! I've got it! I'll just have my wedding later!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 05:23:17 am
"Well, She wanted to, she really did, but... she thought ye'd take it th' wrong way, an'... she was so worried she'd break yer heart."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 05:28:01 am
"What? I-if she wanted to have it later... I-I can deal with it... as long as she still wants to marry me... it doesn't matter." Heiro looks over at Friesden when he hears her suggestion. "A-are you sure sis? Y-you don't have to wait for us..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 05:29:20 am
"No, no, you're my brother, you wanted the double wedding. It's the least I can do for my brother and my saviour."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 02:34:13 pm
"T-thank you sis." Heiro walks over and hugs Friesden. "I-I know you can't wait to marry Khenal... thank you a lot." Suddenly and idea flashes into his mind, "Hey mom, you haven't set a date for your wedding yet have you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 03:38:27 pm
Friesden hugs Heiro back. "It will be hard to wait, but I'll do it for you, and for her."

As Heiro speaks again, the same idea flashes into her mind. "A triple wedding? Mum, can we? Please please please please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 10:38:30 pm
Otik ponders this for a moment.

"Hmm... Tha' does sound like fun... but yer dad was really lookin' forward t'walkin' ye down th' aisle..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 10:42:52 pm
"But...I...um...I don't know! I just want everypony to be happy...But...How?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 08, 2012, 10:45:29 pm
She rests a hoof on Friesden's withers.

"It's okay. We'll figure somethin' out. It'll be wonderful, I know it will."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 10:46:48 pm
"It will...Oh, I can't wait till we all get married...It's going to be the best!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: JaxtalMK2 on February 08, 2012, 10:49:34 pm
Heiro grins wide and pulls the both of them into a hug. "Of course it will! You are planning it! And I'll be getting married, and getting a daughter, and... and everything!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 08, 2012, 11:18:20 pm
"So, mum? Can you ask dad which would be better?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 12:06:09 am
The morning following Charity's talk with Falcata, Heiro and Kris, the following ponies all receive the following letter. It is on the finest parchment and tied with a red ribbon and bears the official seal of Glitterglen.
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From the desk of of the Duchess

Dear Friesden/Khenal/Starkey/Otik/Isos

I, Charity Conventtulip, Duchess of the Failed Jungles, Mayor of Glitterglen, official record keeper of Glitterglen, and co-head of the Mason's Guild of Glitterglen, invite you to join me for a special lunch at my private dinning chambers (directions enclosed) at noon-time today. This is invite only, please do not bring a guest. This meeting is of utmost import and you are to ignore any conflicting orders, and speak of this meeting to nopony. Please burn this letter after reading.

Your Friend,
Charity Conventtulip, Duchess of the Failed Jungles, ect.
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At a quarter to noon, Charity and her husband sit in their dinning room a feast laid out before them, as they await the arrival of their friends.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 09, 2012, 12:30:40 am
A few minutes before noon, Starkey and Otik enter the dining room. Each of them bows in turn.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 12:38:09 am
"Commander Starkey, Captain Otik, a pleasure to see you." Charity gestures towards some places reserved for them by the table. The room itself has stone walls engraved with many detailed images, the tables and chairs are all made of masterfully worked stone, and sitting on the far side of the room from the door sit two magnificent clear glass statues decorated with Indigo gems. One statue depicts the founding of Glitterglen and the other Charity rising to power.

On the table is laid out a wonderful feast featuring Diomedian sausages, and roasts, glazed forgotten beast eye, along with some of the last of the prepared zebra meat in all of the fort, along with a few golden apple and tallow based desserts.

"Please make yourselves comfy while we wait for the others."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 09, 2012, 12:50:10 am
They take their seats.

"Thank you, ma'am. This is quite generous of you. Though, may I inquire as to the occasion?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 12:53:20 am
Khenal enters next, his wing revealing the typical bulge that ponies have come to expect with the extra legs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 12:54:44 am
"As you may have gathered from the letter Starkey, there is some unpleasantness I wish to discuss with you and the others, but I find... Oh and here comes Khenal and Friesden. Greetings friends, please take a seat."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 12:58:30 am
I snicker and give Friesden a quick nuzzle and kiss before taking my seat.


At precisely the time indicated on the letter, Captain of the Guard Isos enters and salutes those present and takes her seat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 01:00:07 am
Friesden takes her seat, and does her best to avoid looking at the food.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 01:03:11 am
"Good everpony is here now. Now as you might have suspected from the letters, I have something unpleasant to talk to all of you about. However I find that bad news is better handled on full stomach, please everypony help yourself to whatever looks good to you, and we can get down to business after lunch."

Charity helps herself to a heaping plateful of food and attempts to make small talk with the gathered individuals.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 01:07:13 am
"Oohh, golden apples..."

My horn glows softly as I levitate a few desserts to my plate.

"Friesden, would you like any?"


Captain Isos takes a slice of the Forgotten Beast eye and quietly begins to eat, answering any questions directed at her with as few words as would be polite.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 01:08:42 am
"I...um...just the apples, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 09, 2012, 01:54:16 am
As the assembled ponies finish their meals, Starkey speaks up.

"Again, I'd like to thank you for this lovely meal, Miss Charity, but from the tone of your letter, you didn't just call us all here to have a nice chat over dinner."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 02:02:40 am
Charity sighs and stretches as she finishes off her rather large portion of food. Before turning to the Commander.

"No, that is true Starkey, I have something that I feel all of you need to know. Crytpson discovered something disturbing during the foalnapping of Kris of and Adamant. I'll let him tell you the rest."

Lord Cryptson stands, never being one much for words, dives straight into the point of the matter, "I, and Lady Charity, believe that Heiro, Captain Falcata's fiance, is in fact, a Keshi merely pretending to be one of our own."

He pauses at this point clearly expecting his audience to be shocked by this news.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 02:05:05 am
Captain Isos' eyes widen at the news, obviously surprised at the news.


I just kinda scuff a hoof and fail to meet Charity's eye.


"Um... we never told you that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 09, 2012, 02:10:02 am
"Oh... Oh, that's right, we never did get around to telling you that, did we?"

"We never told anypony that, hun."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 04:03:29 am
"Um...we should have? I didn't think it was important... Did you hear about the wedding? We're going to have a double wedding!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 09, 2012, 04:10:23 am
"Actually..."

Starkey leans over, gently taking Otik's hoof in his own.

"I heard there was going to be a triple wedding. Isn't that right, hun?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 04:14:50 am
"REALLY?! You said YES!? THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU DAD! Mum said you might not, so I didn't want to say anything...BUT THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 11:17:15 am
Cryptson sits down a look of quite confusion on his face, Charity's face however gives off a confuseing mix of shock and anger. "You mean you already knew! Did ALL of you know that Heiro was a Diomedian?" She looks around the table at each pony in turn.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 01:06:31 pm
I smile briefly at the news of the weddings, but quickly loose the smile in the face of Charity's outrage.

"Um, I thought you knew, Charity.  We found out after he took that dagger in the liver when we were trying to find Lilac."


Captain Isos simply shakes her head no at Charity's furious question.

"No, Dutchess, I was not aware of this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 02:36:07 pm
"Oh...um...Yes. He's my brother, of course I knew after he found out. But it's not important. The important thing is...Khenal, our wedding is going to be a bit later..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 09, 2012, 03:52:47 pm
"We're his parents, why shouldnae we know? Heiro's a Keshi, aye, but that doesnae mean he's a spy."

"The truth is, strange as it may sound, he only found out not too long ago. His whole life, Heiro has believed himself to be an ordinary earth pony."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 03:54:06 pm
I do my best to hide my disappointment at delaying the wedding and give Friesden a quick nuzzle.

"Whatever you think is best."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 03:57:57 pm
"I...you're okay with that, aren't you, Khenal? I...I just want to have a wedding together...and Falcata wanted it a bit later...so...We can have a wedding before, if you want..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 03:59:55 pm
"It's fine.  I just want you to be happy, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 05:11:29 pm
Charity's rage and shock turns to pure confusion as is evident on her face. "...How is it that he could have not known what he is?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 05:18:26 pm
"I'm happy if you are, my love."

As Friesden leans in to kiss Khenal again, Charity's question interrupts, and she pauses, turns to Charity, and speaks once more.

"He had a false memory. I don't know anything more than that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 05:29:57 pm
Chairty's confusion fades and is replaced with genuine concern

'if his mind is being tampered with, magically, he could be being used by the enemy without him even knowing it. That's easily within the capabilities of the Tentacle or Dark Royal Diomedians.'

"A false memory? Some sort of, magic tampering with his mind? Khenal, what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 05:33:41 pm
"I haven't explored his mind very much, actually.  He's had some major trauma in his past, and I've been too concerned about hurting him to dig very deep."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 05:41:12 pm
"It's okay, though. He has his real memories back now."

Friesden turns back once more to Khenal, intending to finally close that last bit of distance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 06:01:03 pm
I happily turn my attention to Friesden and give her a loving kiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 07:14:23 pm
"Khenal, Friesden, please this is important, hold that till later." Charity ponders for a moment than adds, "Are you sure he's got his real memories back? What trauma could make him think he was something different than what he is?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 07:30:24 pm
I blush a bit and reluctantly break the kiss.

"Um?  Oh, the trauma.  I don't know exactly what happened, but it looks like his home village was utterly destroyed before his eyes.  I think that's why he gets a bit, um... protective of his family.  He can't bear to see it happen again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 07:32:21 pm
"This is important too, Duchess...And yes. I'm sure he has. And it doesn't matter, really, because he's my brother, he loves me, and he'd never harm anypony."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 08:59:05 pm
Cryptson looks directly at Friesden. "Never harm anypony? Tell that to those thieves he tortured to death. I saw him do it. They might have been Diomedians, they might have deserved death and I would have given it to them as well, but torture isn't the Pony Way. It's not what the Book of the Sister's teaches us. Your brother is not so harmless as you think."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 09:02:35 pm
"He's my brother! I love him to bits. He wouldn't harm anypony! Now unless there's something else you want to talk about, I'm busy!"

Friesden turns back to Khenal and continues what had been interrupted.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 09:15:51 pm
I look from Friesden to Cryptson with growing unease, torn between kissing my love and trying to diffuse the situation.

"Uh..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 09:17:47 pm
Friesden closes her eyes and breathes in deep before turning to the duchess.

"He's my brother. You're my friend. Can't you be happy for me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 09:24:29 pm
Charity looks on the brink of shouting when Friesden speaks up again, Charity calms a bit and sighs, "Friesden, I'm happy you and Khenal are going to get married, and I'm happy you have a family that loves you. But today ISN'T about you. If you can't control yourself around Khenal, leave and let the big ponies finish talking. You can play with him all you want later."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 09, 2012, 09:27:12 pm
"Fine, then. Bye mum, bye dad, bye Khenal, bye Cryptson, bye Isos, bye Duchess." Friesden stands up and starts to walk to the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 09:31:56 pm
'She is such a foal, not the pony she used to be, I shouldn't have invited her to this.'

Charity waits for Friesden to leave, "Now that that's out of the way," she turns to Captain Isos, "Isos, what do you think of all this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 09:52:03 pm
'OK, don't panic.  She's probably headed to Heiro's or Falcata's, they should be able to help her calm down.  Can't smother her, she's her own pony...'

I sigh and slump in my seat, not really encouraged by my internal pep-talk.


Captain Isos thinks for a moment before answering the Duchess.


"It's certainly unexpected, Lady Charity, but I'm unsure what you really mean.  Heiro has occasional minor insubordination issues, but nothing requiring any action."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 10:00:19 pm
"What I mean is that he's a Diomedian. We've been at war with his kind for over a hundred years. They are a race of murderers, thieves, rapists, and kidnappers. Not a single pony at this table could say that they haven't lost family somewhere, either in a Diomedian raid, or larger scale battle. They are brutal barbarians. And now we have one living among us! Maybe he really is innocent of those crimes of his ilk, and maybe this story of trauma making him think he's a pure earthpony is true, but what if it isn't. Or even if it is, now that what he is has come to the surface how can we know he's safe. WHY DOES NOPONY CARE ABOUT THIS!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 10:03:35 pm
Captain Isos nods, letting the Duchess say her piece.

"Yes, the Diomedians have done us all wrong in various ways, but what, exactly, has Heiro done to wrong anypony of Glitterglen?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 09, 2012, 10:15:12 pm
Charity cools down a bit and sighs once more. "You're right of course, Isos. He's not done anything to anypony here, yet, that we know of, but, that isn't my point. I'm not saying we need to kill him, or send him away. Frankly he's proven to be useful in fighting our enemies at the least, and I'd rather see him on our side than against. All I'm saying is that we need to keep an eye on him, and we can't trust him with any information that is too important to the safety of Glitteglen."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 09, 2012, 10:23:51 pm
Captain Isos nods again.

"Same as any citizen of Glitterglen, Duchess.  The reason for his case may be different in your eyes, but as long as he's treated the same in the law, I see no reason to argue."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 10, 2012, 01:47:47 pm
"Setting aside the fact that he's my son... diomedians and ponies have lived peacefully together before. Still do, by the thousands. Why is it so hard to believe that one single Keshi can do the same?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 10, 2012, 02:14:47 pm
Friesden fumes silently as she leaves the room, and heads to visit Falcata. Not finding her in her room, she bumbles along down to the arena, hoping she'd find her there.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 10, 2012, 03:05:43 pm
((Probably best to wait and discuss the details on the IRC before going much further, but this much at least should be outcome agnostic.))

Falcata walks about in the center of the arena, slowly circling a cage containing a pony.  But not just any pony.  Somehow, this was the thief that had tried to take her daughter from her.  Why the foalish twisted monster had decided to wander back to Glitterglen where he was recaptured, she didn't know.  Nor did she care.

She'd come to the arena to clear her mind for a bit.  After speaking with Otik about the upcoming wedding with Heiro, she felt a bit relieved and more nervous at the same time.  She would have more time to come to terms with her feelings now, but she couldn't shake the fear that she had upset or hurt Heiro by trying to put it off.  They had not spoken much since the talk with Otik.  She felt so guilty about all of it.

Which was why she was here.  Meditating like Khenal had taught her did a lot for her nerves and mind, but sometimes she just needed some physical release.  The arena was enormous, much larger than the barracks she normally trained in and usually devoid of anypony that might get hurt.  She could swing her weapon around in here all day with abandon and not risk hurting anypony.  She almost always felt a lot better after getting a nice workout in such a combat drill.

But today was different.  Today she found out he was here.  Him.  The one.  That foal fiddling scum sucker.  Heiro might have killed the other one, but this one was hers.  She was going to show him what she thought about him trying to take her child away from her.  She was going to send him back to his misbegotten maker, and maybe not in one piece.

The diomedian eyes her nervously as she circles his cage.
  "What're ya gonna do?  I know I'm good lookin' and all, but ya've been starin' at me forever."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 10, 2012, 03:38:28 pm
Friesden finally reached the arena, and looking down into it she saw Falcata performing guard duty. Probably best to watch and wait for her to finish.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 10, 2012, 04:14:51 pm
Falcata narrows her eyes at the question and pauses at the door of the cage.  "I'm here to kill you," she says plainly.

The diomedian's eyes snap open and he backs away from her. 
"H-hey, hang on there a second.  Don't you 'more civilized' ponies have rules against killing defenseless prisoners?"

She shrugs.  "I don't care."

She opens the cage, and the prisoner backs up against the far wall.  "L-look, you got your kid back!  Let's not be hasty here!"  Falcata telekinetically grabs him by the neck and drags him out of the cage.  She wasn't in the mood to talk, and he wasn't going to weasel his way out of this.  He'd nearly taken her daughter from her.  She was going to take his life.  He and every one like him deserved no less.  "Wait!  Come on, let's be reasonable!  I wasn't gonna kill her!"

Falcata says nothing.  A scowl forms on her face as she draws her weapon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 10, 2012, 04:36:31 pm
A small frown formed on Friesden's face. S-s-she wasn't going to kill the diomedian, was she? She wouldn't. This was Falcata. She was a nice pony. Maybe she was just a bit angry. She wouldn't really harm him. He wasn't armed, he wasn't threatening her. Falcata would just tell him not to try and foalnap again. Put him back in the cage and leave him. Maybe he was taunting her, and she was making sure he wouldn't. That would have to be it. Maybe Friesden had better go down there and keep her company. She'd like that. She could talk about the Duchess and Heiro later.

Friesden stood up, and prepared to fly down to Falcata. With that little voice that reminds you of all the petty little details in times like this, she noted that she was still in her hospital gear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 10, 2012, 04:54:07 pm
"Stand still."  Falcata magically levitates a chain from nearby and sets to binding him to hooks on the ground.  "I'm going to kill you, but I'm not the monster you are.  I don't want to miss."  She clenches her jaw as she works the chains.  She wanted to just bash his brains out and then destroy his body in a raging fury, but most of her actual rage was now just a smoldering hatred.  No... this would be an execution, plain and simple.  She didn't want to have to explain the arena looking like a butcher's shop afterward anyway.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 10, 2012, 04:54:36 pm
"Setting aside the fact that he's my son... diomedians and ponies have lived peacefully together before. Still do, by the thousands. Why is it so hard to believe that one single Keshi can do the same?"

Charity gives Starkey a flat look. "You speak of the Rainbow Coalition? That is not any definition of peace I would accept. Don't fall for their propaganda Commander. Their lands are not as loving or as tolerant as they would like you to believe. Just ask Amberly Vail, she's seen it her self. It's only a matter of time before the infighting from their different clans tears them apart, and if they don't crumble from within, eventually the Principality will crush them. Praise the Sisters. No, while I don't doubt Heiro means no harm, if we grow complacent with his kind we might suffer the same fate, and I won't let that happen as long as I draw breath."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 10, 2012, 06:12:35 pm
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Well hell, It’s about damn time.
- Tychus Findlay, Starcraft 2


Prepare yourselves, Heroes. A storm is coming.


Previously...

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 The Failed Jungles is a dense abhorrent little bog that simply states, yes there is a mother nature, and she hates you with a passion. If you don’t die from exhaustion marching  through the rancid marshy soup constantly sucking at your hooves, don’t worry, the ravenous beasts will rend you limb from limb at a moments hesitation. Two ponies make a journey through the nigh-impenetrable jungle canopy.

“Just admit it; we’re lost, aren't we?”  The nervous tangerine unicorn insisted. he every right to be nervous.  the wilds were no place for a civilized banker such as himself and he’s put his life in the hands of a ranger he barley knows whose, so far been a little...eccentric.

“I ‘ma tell ya the same thing I told ya ten minutes ago, This the most direct way to Tailentranced. not, safeist, mind you, but tha most direct.”  The olive earthpony assured him, slashing away at underbrush with her machete.

“I just - see? that’s the exact same rock! we’ve been going in circles! please, can we go back on the road?”

“Hah, the way you’re dressed? If we took the roads the bandits an’ zebra would jump ya be’fore you could say ‘Blueblood’, pardner.”

“Wait, Zebra? the Harmony loving, tree hugging Zebra. that’s not very likely. hold up.”   the unicorn leans against a mango tree to catch his breath. the earthpony sighed, took off her texas ten gallon and combed through her neon red hair.

“Right, another small break.” she groans, unslinging her backpack.
she takes out a bowl, fills it with some water from her canteen and whistles for her companion.
a motley German Shepard gleefully bounds through the wild ferns and laps up the water greedily. his dog tag has “Roughneck” inscribed on it.

“nah, not tha’ sweet passive Zebra you know; their more aggressive cousins, the Silvan Zebra. while most zebra simply frown on cutting down trees, the Silvan consider any civilization that’s ever cut down a tree an enemy.  they won’t think twice about killing you because they think they’re saving the trees you’re go’in ta cut down, an’ the trees your foals ar’ gonna cut down, an’ trees your foal’s foals ar’ going ta’ cut down an’ so on.”

“Well I've never heard of these ‘Silvans’. where a their settlements? are they near here?”

“I can’t tell ya, they build their settlements on the backs of Ents. you know, trees tha’ tend move. they could be anywhere.”

the banker laughed. "Horseshit!, total horseshit. look, you seem like a nice mare. I owe you my life for saving me when my caravan got hit back there, but it's obvious now you're lost AND delusional. let's just... why are you looking at me like that?" he asked cautiously.

every muscle in the earthpony's body was tense, eyes fixated intensely. she slowly reaches for her crossbow.

"Okay, if I offended you, I'm sorry. terribly sorry. let's put the crossbow down, huh?" he asked, a fearful tenor in his voice.

"Don't...move." she hissed.

"GrrrrWOWrrll"

 A Panther lay hunched in the tall grass, a mere four feet behind the banker. completely concealed, except for it's primal, calculating beady eyes. the Panther stared down the earthpony and she stared right back at it.

"If ya want to survive this , get behind me." Willow Darkmane stated calmly.




Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 10, 2012, 07:03:02 pm
"Propaganda? Charity, how much do you really know about how ponies live in the Coalition? Forget whatever tripe Vail fed you: Did she grow up playing with two zebra colts across the street? Did she apprentice as a bowyer under an elderly Keshi couple, and spend their evenings pursuing the heart of their lovely daughter?"

Starkey pauses, thinking for a moment.

"Ah... that last part came out a bit wrong..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 10, 2012, 07:37:30 pm
Charity is surprised, "Starkey, YOU grew up in Rainbow territory?"

Even Cryptson's usually stoic expression, is shaken as he is obviously surprised by this revelation.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 10, 2012, 07:44:53 pm
"LaceAbbey, born and raised. I never set hoof in the Principality until I was nearly twenty."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 10, 2012, 11:53:41 pm
No, no, Falcata's a nice pony, she doesn't like hurting ponies, Friesden kept telling herself. Then the chains started to be put on the diomedian, and Friesden's heart started beating faster. But it was all just going to be a demonstration to the new recruits of what the diomedians looked like, right? Right?

Then Falcata, with a ferocious look on her face, raised her hammer. Nononononothiswouldn'thappenFalcataisanicepony repeated over and over again through Friesden's mind as she dove down to intercept the strike.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 12:04:47 am
"W-wait!  I wasn't gonna hurt yer kid!  I swear it!"  The diomedian begins trembling as hte chains are fastened into place.

Falcata says nothing and draws her hammer back.  With a hateful glare she brings the weapon around to strike him on the temple.  From her peripheral vision, something flashes past her, and her hammer collides with something too close to have been its original target.  There is a blinding flash and whatever she struck was sent flying away.

She takes a moment to see that he diomedian was still trembling with fear and unharmed, and with trepidation she turns her head to see what was unmistakably Friesden lying in a heap a distance away.  Her heart stops and her eyes slowly widen as the truth settles.
  "Friesden!!" she screams in absolute horror and shock.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 12:07:32 am
Friesden coughs weakly, and then tries to stand up, her legs refusing to support her.

"F...F...Fal....Falcata..." she gasps out between coughs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 12:14:31 am
Falcata stares in absolute disbelief.  She... she struck Friesden.  She was weak when she hit Khenal, and he was twice her size and tough.  Friesden... oh Sisters above, there was no way Friesden would live through this.  She had to have a shattered skull... oh... oh Sisters... she... she'd killed Friesden.  The pegasus had to be mortally wounded...

She takes an uneasy step toward her, horrified at what she would find.  Her legs feel unsteady beneath her as she continues to watch Friesden struggle to move and speak.
  "F-F-F-F-Friesden?"

Her heart suddenly starts pumping again and quickens to a rapid pace.  Her breathing picks up into hyperventillation as she searches her mind for what to do.  What should she do?  What could she do?  Friesden was going to die and it was her fault!  Everypony was going to hate her.  She hated herself!  She had just promised the mare she'd never harm her... and she'd killed her!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 12:20:56 am
"Falcata...Falcata...You're...you're quite strong...with...that hammer..." She continues panting, and forces herself to her hooves. "Okay...Okay...I'm good..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 12:25:14 am
Falcata stares in absolute disbelief.  She was seeing things.  Friesden couldn't be standing up from that.  She was going insane.  Blows that strong had shattered the bones of armored diomedians before...

As Friesden stands and speaks, Falcata finds the world suddenly heavy and confusing.  She slumps to the ground with a sigh.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 12:32:27 am
"F-Falcata? Falcata!?"

Friesden pants, then moves as quickly as she can to Falcata's side. She...She was okay. Just unconscious.

Just...Just got to help get her to hospital. But...She couldn't carry her. Not alone.

She turned to the diomedian. He might not like her...but maybe. Cha-The duchess might free him.

"Excuse me, sir? C-can you help me get her to the hospital? If you help, the duchess might let you go."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 12:35:41 am
The diomedian stares back at her in silence for some time.  "Wut."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 12:36:39 am
"P-p-please? She's just been a little angry...She's usually much nicer than this! Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 12:38:29 am
This mare was crazy.  The other mare just tried to kill him, then should have killed her, and if she woke back up was surely going to kill him.  He did try to steal her daughter after all.  But...

"Uh... sure... get me outta these chains and I'll help..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 12:40:56 am
"Thank you! I promise you won't get hurt. What's your name?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 12:44:29 am
"Mikhail..."  Yeah, that's right... let me loose and you can tell everypony you want what my name is...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 12:46:09 am
"Okay, Mikhail. Just stay close. Upstairs all the ponies will get angry at you, and down below..." Friesden shivers. "It's not a nice place down there."

Friesden begins to unchain the diomedian. "Where do you come from?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 12:49:59 am
Buck.  How was he going to get away now?  Use her as a hostage?  That kind of worked last time... but she was an awful lot bigger than the filly.  And she just survived getting brained by a warhammer without a scratch... maybe not a good idea to do that...

"Uh... a settlement deep in the jungles... Ponymurdered..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 12:53:16 am
"That's a strange name. Well, my name is Friesden, as you might have heard. This place is called Glitterglen."

Friesden finishes unchaining the Diomedian, and slings Falcata half on the diomedian, half on her.

"Let's go!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 12:56:52 am
"Um, yeah... okay, Friesden."  He helps carry the stricken mare toward the exit, trying to remember the path out of the fortress.  If he made a run for it when they got to the exit of the arena, he might just make it...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 01:01:19 am
"So, Mikhail. What do you like doing? My Khenal used to be in the militia, but he didn't like killing ponies either. He always used to like trying new things. One time he tried brewing, but that didn't work at all well. But he likes carpentry. No ponies have to die. He's got a magnificent spear, though. But he doesn't like hurting ponies. He loves me, he does. Are you in love with a mare, Mikhail? Do you have a family?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 01:09:11 am
Blah, blah, blah... this mare was going to drive him crazy, and he needed to think.  Something to keep her quiet...  "Um... yeah... I've got a mare... she can't have no foals though... so that's why I was trying to take one, ya see..."

They were close to the exit... time to ditch the chatterbox and hope for the best.  He spots a pony walking near the doorway and his enthusiasm drains.  This was going to be tough... better follow her for a while more.  And hope somepony with an axe didn't take his head off while he did.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 01:11:21 am
"Aww...that's a shame...hey! I've got an idea! I'm getting married pretty soon. What about you have my first foal? Would that be okay?"

Inside, Friesden's heart was lifting. Maybe she could make somepony happy today, at least.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 01:18:16 am
Yep.  No doubt about it.  This mare was bonkers.  "Um... okay... sure..."  Yessir, got to get away from her before she snaps and kills him  She took a hammer blow to the head, no way he'd be able to stop her.  What was she?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 01:20:15 am
"I'm not good for much, but I like to see ponies happy. I just like helping them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 01:25:53 am
He starts as a pony wanders by and stares at him in shock.  Not good... not good at all... they knew he was free.  Just a matter of time before somepony with an axe did show up for real.  "Yeah... I can see that... say, where were we going again?  Is it close?  This mare is pretty heavy with all this armor..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 01:33:50 am
"We're just going to the hospital. Won't be too much farther."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 01:40:46 am
"Great..."  More ponies and strange looks.  He follows the pegasus to what must be the hospital, considering the amount of bleached sheets and beds.  Now... just to deposit the rainbow haired crazy mare and ditch the even crazier pegasus mare...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 01:47:09 am
"Just here, okay? Then I can lead you out, if you want, or you can wait here until the duchess does it herself," Friesden says, indicating a bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 01:52:50 am
Wow.  Okay.  Yeah, sure.  Either this mare was literally quite crazy, or he was walking into an elaborate trap.  She seemed a bit light on brains, so that was unlikely.  He places Falcata on the bed and says, "Um... y'know, I don't think we need to bother the duchess... why don't we just head on out, eh?"

Falcata stirs as she is placed on the bed.  What just happened?  She looks over and blinks the fog from her eyes to see she was in the hospital with Friesden and the prisoner.  What?!

She tries to stand but lands awkwardly on the ground as her legs fumble beneath her.
  "Fr-Friesden... get back!"  She tries to move to place herself between the two.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 02:04:00 am
Friesden throws a foreleg around Mikhail.

"Don't worry, Falcata! Mikhail here is a nice pony! He helped me carry you up here. He won't harm you, or me, will you, Mikhail? And Ch-The duchess will let him free for helping you, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 02:11:32 am
"Buck this!"  The pony tears himself free of Friesden's grasp and bolts for the exit to the hospital, hoping he knew which way to run to the surface.  Ah, yes, this way...

Falcata shakes her head, and her eyes snap open.  Clop!  She had to catch him, he might hurt somepony or escape!  She stumbles a few steps before gaining her footing and taking off after the thief.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 02:18:04 am
Friesden hurried after Mikhail. She should have known better...Mikhail would have been terrified...it was all her fault...she had to catch him and keep him safe!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 02:26:51 am
Oh, great, now the crazy mare was chasing him!  He had to get out of here, quick!  And he had to be careful, there were guards all around the surface...

Falcata charges after him, overtaking Friesden and galloping as fast as she could in pursuit.  Where was her weapon?  Was it still in the arena?  Wonderful... how was she going to stop him now?  And what if she didn't?  He didn't have a foal with him this time, but Lady Charity would be far worse than just displeased...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 02:30:24 am
"No, Falcata, please, don't harm him!" Friesden calls out as she falls behind. Dammit. She was a bad pony after all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 02:47:58 am
Buck!  Clop!  The rainbow haired one was chasing him too!  Well, he outran her once, he could do it again.  He didn't even have a foal to carry this time...

Falcata continues to pursue him as fast as she could, but she knew it was a doomed attempt.  He'd outrun her before.  But what could she do?  Better start making up excuses on how the thief got out... which she was going to have to do anyway since three dozen ponies had surely seen it happen already.

The thief looks back, a grin plastered on his face.  Hey!  This was working!  He'd get away and make it back home by-

His thoughts were rudely broken by metal bars abruptly appearing around him.  He slams into the nearest wall of the new cage nose first, swearing colorfully and rebounding back into the cage.
  "You have got to be bucking kidding me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 02:54:47 am
Friesden spotted the cage trap catching Mikhail, and a bittersweet feeling enfolded her heart. At least he wasn't dead or badly injured...but...Maybe she could get Falcata to let him free!

"Falcata!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 03:00:42 am
Falcata trots to a halt next to the cursing diomedian, who is busying himself rubbing his bloodied nose.  "Close..." she mutters to herself before Friesden calls out to her.  "Huh?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 03:02:01 am
"Falcata! You'll let him free, right?" Friesden asks as she reaches Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 03:07:26 am
Falcata blinks in confusion and looks from the thief to Friesden several times.  "Uh... Friesden... we can't do that... he's dangerous."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 03:20:20 am
"No, no, he said he wouldn't hurt anypony. His fillyfriend...His fillyfriend can't have foals. That's why he was here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 03:28:15 am
Falcata sighs.  Friesden was the sweetest pony she knew, but she was also the most gullible.  "Friesden... he was just telling you that so you'd let him go..."  She places a hoof on Friesden's withers.  "If I let him go... he might come back one day and foalnap somepony else... or hurt somepony."

The thief stands and wipes more blood from his nose and utters a low curse.  "Actually the bit about my wife is true..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 03:29:41 am
"No, no, that's why I made an agreement with him. If he doesn't hurt another pony, he can have my first born."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 03:37:39 am
Her mouth hangs agape as she takes in what Friesden said.  "N-no... Friesden you can't do that... you..."  She sighs.  "They do terrible things to the foals they capture... you... we can't let him possibly do that to anypony..."  She looks back to Glitterglen and adds, "We need to take him back..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 03:40:59 am
"But...but...I just want everypony to be happy...and he helped me get you to the hospital... Why can't you trust him?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 03:45:47 am
Well... how do you answer that?  "He tried to steal my daughter away from me.  I don't think I could ever trust somepony who did that..."  She looks Friesden in the eyes.  "Friesden... who do you trust more?  Me?  Or him?"

The thief makes a cheesey grin at her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 03:47:30 am
"I...uh...how do I decide? I..." Friesden hangs her head. "...you, Falcata."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 03:50:52 am
She makes a small smile.  "Thank you."  She grabs the cage's handles with her magic and begins dragging it back toward Glitterglen, much to the ill-conceived displeasure of its captive.  "Don't worry..." she adds, turning back to Friesden.  "I'm not going to kill him..."  Her rage was spent now... she just had to come up with some excuse for Charity about how he got out in the first place.  She didn't want to see Friesden in trouble over this... she'd take the blame since it was mostly her own fault anyway.  Should have left well enough alone.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 03:52:13 am
"...okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 04:01:36 am
Falcata leads the diomedian back to the arena and returns his cage to the stocks, trying to ignore the fact that Friesden was so distraught about the entire thing.  A thought strikes her as she catches sight of her hammer lying on the ground nearby.

She snaps her head back to Friesden and immediately snatches her up in a hug.
  "Friesden!  I just realized!  You're okay!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 04:02:34 am
Friesden hugs her tight. "Of course I'm okay! You said you'd never harm me, so of course I'm okay!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 04:05:37 am
She feels the slightest hint of tears forming in her eyes, but she manages to blink them back.  "I was so scared that I'd hurt or killed you..."  She lets out an ecstatic laugh and hugs her again.  "...but how?  I... I don't understand?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 04:08:37 am
"I don't know...but does it matter? I just hope you're okay... You are okay, aren't you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 04:13:11 am
She nods and grins.  "Yes... if you're okay, I'm okay."  She takes a deep breath and tries to settle herself.   "Come on... let's get out of here..."

She steps over to her hammer and grabs it with her magic, noticing another piece of metal lying on the ground next to it.  After returning her hammer to its sling, she grabs it up, recognizing it as a scalpel.  There was something engraved on it... "Kindness."  Like her hammer... but a different word...

"Friesden... is this yours?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 04:16:54 am
Friesden looks at the scalpel, and confusion fills her face. "That must be mine...but what's with the word on it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 11, 2012, 04:23:18 am
"I... don't know. "  She takes her hammer back out and flashes Loyalty before Friesden's eyes.  "Something similar happened to me... I don't know where the engraving came from, or really what it even means."  As she returns the weapon to her sling, she says, "I wonder if Khenal might know more?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 11, 2012, 04:25:05 am
"Well...Let's go see him. We might be...interrupting something..." A look of anger flashes over her face before disappearing. "But I'm sure it'll be okay!"


The two ponies made their way to Charity's personal dining room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 12, 2012, 04:46:20 pm
"LaceAbbey, born and raised. I never set hoof in the Principality until I was nearly twenty."

((Thank you for the edit Doom, I think I can work with that a bit easier.))

"So you are telling me that Inquisitor Vail was wrong about Rainbows? And if you are from the Coalition and they are as good as they say, then why leave them for the Principality? No Commander I think Vail was right, things may have seemed peaceful to you as a foal, but it is their leaders that I speak of, the dirty politics and corruptions and backstabbing for power that is rife in that land, it is only a matter time before they tear themselves apart as the differing groups fight for scraps of power in the shadows. Diomedians and Ponies can not truly coexist peacefully for long, within one group, we are too different."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 05:08:59 pm
Friesden eventually leads Falcata to the door, and raises her hoof to knock.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 05:11:07 pm
"Can't they? Tell that to my parents."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 12, 2012, 05:14:50 pm
"Your parents? What do...?" Charity is confused and then the realization sets in, her eyes grow wide, "You're a..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 05:26:00 pm
++CENSORED BY ORDER OF THE PRINCIPIAL EQUISITION++
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 05:28:53 pm
"A half-breed, aye. Mum's a pegasus, and dad's a shadowbolt. They had three other foals, all fillies, and are still happily married to this day. Still believe we can't coexist?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 12, 2012, 05:42:28 pm
((Time to wrap up this scene I think, Remember Friesden is just outside the door at the moment.))

Charity's mind is a flood of emotions shock, fear, rage, and disgust, mingle in her mind. She is quiet for a number of seconds before she speaks once more.

"Get out. ALL OF YOU. Get out. Leave me. That is an order."

Charity turns her back on the gathered ponies, waiting for them to leave and starring at the wall behind her, the image depicts the founding of Glitterglen in superb detail, all of the starting seven are clearly recognizable doing their own work. As she tries to remain rigid and not show how weak and powerless she truly feels right now, but try as she might she can't help but let a single pair of tears escape her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 05:51:37 pm
Otik stands, leading Starkey out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 12, 2012, 06:07:14 pm
((I'm not sure what time I'll be on tonight.  Slight chance I won't be on at all or until extremely late.  Regardless, I'll edit this with my response with Falcata, which is surely going to be uncomfortable for her given what just happened. :) ))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 08:28:14 pm
I hesitate before standing, but don't yet leave.

"Charity?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 12, 2012, 08:38:18 pm
Charity did not move or speak after Khenal said her name. She continues to wait for the room to clear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 08:44:20 pm
I hang my head slightly and turn to leave.

"I hope... *sigh* Take care, Charity."

Sighing again, I walk out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 08:50:35 pm
As the doors open, they whack into Friesden preparing to knock on the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 08:52:39 pm
Hearing the grunt of pain, Starkey darts around the door.

"Friesden? Oh Sisters Friesden, I'm so sorry! Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 09:00:10 pm
"Dad? Dad!" Friesden looks just across from Starkey, and tries to throw her forelegs around him. They only meet air, and she scrabbles at the air to try and maintain her balance.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 09:02:29 pm
Coming to the doorway, I see Friesden flailing to keep her balance.  I rush to try to help her keep her hooves.

"Friesden!  Are you alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 09:03:03 pm
Starkey catches Friesden in his own forehooves.

"Whoa, there! Oh hun, I clobbered you good, didn't I? I'm so, so sorry..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 09:04:33 pm
"Wha-Khenal, and Dad? This is my lucky day! How are you?" She continues to stare at a point in the air just a tad away from them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 09:07:19 pm
I wave a hoof in front of her face.

"Friesden?  How hard did that door hit you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 09:13:10 pm
Otik comes up beside Friesden, draping a wing over her.

"C'mon Fri, let's get ye down t'th' hospital. Doc Bubbles c'n tell us wot's wrong."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 09:15:00 pm
"What door? A door hit you?" Friesden continues smiling wide.

"There's nothing wrong with me, mum...wait. Mum, Dad, and Khenal? Yippee!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 12, 2012, 09:16:50 pm
Charity struggles to keep her view fixed away from the others, but gives into the desire to look. She looks back over her shoulder to try and determine if her friend is seriously injured, not seeing any blood she looks away again, hoping no pony noticed. 'She'll be fine.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 09:24:24 pm
I start to get a bit worried, but Otik seems to have a good idea.

"Um, ya.  Maybe we should go to the hospital just in case."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 09:30:12 pm
"There's nothing fun at the hospital. Mum taught me something fun, though! Maybe we can go back home and try it, Khenal!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 09:33:52 pm
"Um... are you sure you're alright, Friesden?  You, uh, seem to be having trouble focusing."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 09:37:31 pm
"No, no, this will be the best, won't it, mum?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 09:41:07 pm
Otik blushes hard.

"Ah... I dunno if now would be the' best time..."


"Otik, hun... what exactly have you been teaching our daughter?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 09:42:26 pm
I simply look at Friesden and Otik, confused.

"...What?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 09:45:19 pm
"Something really fun! Come on, Khenal!"

After a couple of tries, she grabs onto Khenal and tries to drag him off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 09:55:08 pm
I raise an eyebrow at Friesden's odd behavior, but don't resist being dragged away.

"Um, I guess she has a new game to show me?  Uh, later Starkey and Otik?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 10:02:59 pm
Starkey shoots a glare at Otik, who shrinks away, grinning sheepishly.

"Come on, Friesden, let's go see Doctor Bubbles. You can show Khenal your... new game later."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 10:03:57 pm
"But dad!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 10:06:01 pm
"It's alright, Friesden.  We can play it after making sure you're alright.  You can have the first go."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 10:10:41 pm
"Yay!" She stops to think for a moment. Maybe mum would be okay with her now! "And can mum come too? Pleasepleasepleaseplease!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 10:13:37 pm
Starkey's ears and cheeks turn bright pink. He looks to Otik.

"Uhm... I dunno, Fri... I dun' know if Khenal..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 10:16:30 pm
"How many can play this game, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 10:17:31 pm
"Mum didn't say. But you need two ponies, a mare and a stallion."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 10:23:13 pm
'Two player?  But whay would you need a mare and a stal-'

My eyes widen in shock and my wings flare as I blush bright red from head to hoof.


"Um... uh..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 10:24:39 pm
"So, Khenal? Can we?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 10:34:20 pm
Starkey continues glaring at Otik.

"Wot? She had t'learn it some time! An' wouldnae ye prefer she heard it from her parents?"


"I'd prefer she heard it from both her parents. What exactly did you put in her head?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 10:41:36 pm
I look around, trying to not panic from embarrassment.  And why won't my wings listen to me and lay back down?!  I try to answer, but all that comes out is an inarticulate squeek.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 10:44:10 pm
Friesden tugs at Khenal. "Come on, please? You'll like it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 11:40:01 pm
Keeping the blush, I barely manage something resembling actual words.

"Maybeafteryouseethedoctor?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 11:40:51 pm
"Awww...can't we do it now? Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 11:43:59 pm
"Afterthedoctor?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 11:44:41 pm
"But...but...Okay. If you want."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 12, 2012, 11:53:33 pm
"Right. now, let's get you down to the hospital and get this over with, so you and Khenal can go play."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 12, 2012, 11:54:06 pm
"Yay!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 12, 2012, 11:58:26 pm
Oh look, I can blush harder.  With my wings still stubbornly refusing to settle down, I follow them to the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 13, 2012, 12:06:35 am
"I can't wait. Can you? This is going to be so fun! Maybe we'll have a little foal! That'd be nice, wouldn't it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 13, 2012, 12:10:48 am
After everypony has left the dinning room save for Charity and Cryptson, Cryptson makes sure the door is closed and bolted, before going over to silently embrace his wife.

"Why did it have to happen like this," she cries. "They knew, all of them other than Isos, and they didn't care! And Starkey. Starkey is one of them too. It's my job to keep everypony here safe, but I've let a bunch of Diomedian sympathizers get into some of our most important positions and I didn't even know it. I'm so stupid. I'm useless. I'm not fit to be anything here, especially not the Duchess. I...I just don't know what to do anymore. I don't know who I can trust."

"You can trust me." assures Cryptson.

Charity sobs quietly into Cryptson's chest, as he rubs her back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 13, 2012, 12:28:45 am
Starkey leads Friesden into the hispital and over to a bed, with Otik in tow.

"alright, here we are. Now you lie down here while I go fetch Doctor Bubbles, aye?"

He helps Friesden up into the bed, then heads into Bubbles' office.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 13, 2012, 12:30:21 am
My rebellious wings finally decide to listen and I fold them against my sides as I enter the hospital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 13, 2012, 12:33:49 am
"This is going to be fun, isn't it, Khenal? Not the hospital thing, but after. I can't wait. You'll like it too, won't you?" She turns to Otik. "Won't he?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 13, 2012, 03:29:22 am
Falcata sits near Friesden's bed as Starkey lowers her into it, mild concern on her face.  The door didn't seem to have hit her hard enough for a concussion, but she was clearly a bit dazed.  She would be fine after a little time to recover.  For a moment, she wondered if she should go hunt down Kris to come help out.  Maybe if Dr. Bubbles wasn't present.

She'd been dumbstruck when the door hit Friesden, and the conversation that followed only served to keep the words out of her mouth.  That explained a lot about what she was talking to Otik about.  And she felt so embarrassed for Khenal.  Friesden was a sweet pony, but her naivety got the better of her sometimes.  Probably best not to mention her willing to donate their first born foal to the diomedians.

It was amazing though... her hammer had done nothing to her, where a simple door was enough to knock her senseless... maybe Khenal would have some idea why?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 13, 2012, 03:32:51 am
"Oh! Falcata! Maybe you'd like to join in, too! More ponies means more fun, right mum?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 13, 2012, 01:03:59 pm
...what?  Surely she didn't hear that right.  But, this was Friesden.  She loved her to pieces, but that was exactly something she might ask.  Clop... what do you say to that?  How to be gentle about that...

Her eyes widen a bit and she stammers,
"Um... Fr-Friesden... I... I mean you..."

That didn't help...  "This... this is something special for just you and Khenal..."  She turns a pleading expression to Otik. "Right?"  If anypony could set this straight, it would be her.  What exactly did she tell Friesden?

As if things weren't awkward enough between her and Khenal right now, she didn't need to make this any worse.  At least Friesden didn't blurt out to everypony that she had hit her like Khenal...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 13, 2012, 01:14:46 pm
My blasted wings were only pretending to listen, to catch me off guard!  And the blush was in on the plan!  It returns full force as my wings flare out again.  I contemplate if it's possible to die from embarrassment as I bury my face in my hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 13, 2012, 02:04:20 pm
"Uhm... right! Aye! Th' first time is... special, y'know? Somethin' for jus' th' two of ye t'share. Maybe miss Falcata c'n join ye some other time."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 13, 2012, 02:11:24 pm
Falcata notices Khenal's consuming embarrassment return full force and she looks away from him, placing a hoof to block her view of him.  Well... guess that didn't help after all.  How in the world was she going to face Khenal again after all of this?  What was she going to say to him?  "Oh, hello Khenal.  Sorry for nearly crushing your skull and for talking about your love life in front of everypony!"

Then Otik speaks up, and her cheeks flare up.  Not rivaling Khenal's by any stretch, but obvious.  What?  Did Otik really think that she would... but she only liked stallions... and Friesden was her best friend... but...

Her heart began beating hard in her chest.  Maybe she'd just have to go along with it and talk with Friesden privately later and explain that it was something that only she and Khenal should do with each other.  But what would everypony think if she did go along with it, just to ease the tension?  Otik would probably not care, if the impression she was beginning to get of her was true, but Khenal... oh, sisters... Khenal...

She... she was starting to get a bit light headed...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 13, 2012, 02:47:22 pm
"Oh...okay then." Friesden's face falls for a bit, then rises up again full force. "Do you think the duchess will free the diomedian, Falcata? Heh, you almost looked like you were going to kill him. Good thing I got in the way and you only hit me instead, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 13, 2012, 02:51:36 pm
'Maybe I could sneak out before I combust from embarrassment?  No, too many ponies, maybe- wait Falcata did what?!

Slowly, I look up to Falcata, my face a mixture of disbelief and horror.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 13, 2012, 02:56:40 pm
Friesden tries a couple of times and then finally grabs hold of Khenal's head, turning it towards her.

"Eyes over here, mister!" she says, smiling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 13, 2012, 05:13:06 pm
The blood in Falcata's veins turns to ice.  She was beginning to wonder if Friesden realized just how good she was at using her naivety as a weapon...

She glances at Friesden then turns her eyes to the floor.  She didn't dare look up to Khenal right now.  Or Otik or Starkey for that matter.  She fights for words for a moment, her expression colored by considerable distress.
  "It... it was an accident...Patient and understanding as Khenal was, even he would surely find it hard to believe that she'd hit both of them accidentally.  And of course, that wasn't even beginning to address the question of why she was taking a swing at a diomedian prisoner... she really didn't feel like trying to explain that to everypony right now...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 13, 2012, 05:17:29 pm
"Falcata..."

Otik moves in front of Falcata, forcing her to meet her gaze.

"Wot happened? How did ye manage t'accidentally hit Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 13, 2012, 05:30:59 pm
Though Friesden holds my head, my eyes continue to dart from her to Falcata and back again.

"And... You... But...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 13, 2012, 05:31:45 pm
Here it came... she had no choice but to explain now.  She just wanted to run and hide in her room.  The distinct feeling of nausea was beginning to settle in her stomach.

She looks into Otik's eyes for a moment, clawing in her mind for the best way to answer.  The truth.  That's all that could be said at this point.  She sighs and says,
"I-I was in the arena... trying to relieve some stress..."  She points off in the vague direction of the arena with a hoof.  "Then... then I found him there.  The diomedian who tried to abduct Kris.  I couldn't believe it..."

Her face transitions to a scowl for a moment before fading to a distraught frown.  "I... I was so angry... all over again."  She draws her hammer and brings it up to eye level, looking at the lettering on it, half expecting the Loyalty to be gone.  "I was going to give him what he deserved... but Friesden stopped me.  She jumped in the way..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 13, 2012, 05:33:00 pm
Friesden decides to take Khenal's attention away from all that, and brings his head towards hers and kisses him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 13, 2012, 07:01:39 pm
For a moment, I forget to kiss back, too distracted by everything being revealed.

'Falcata hit...?!  Mmm, lips... But Friesden is-?!  Mmm, kissing me...  But what if-?!  Mmm, she stops...?'

My distraction doesn't last long, and Friesden's kiss helps me to focus on what's important: like kissing her in return.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 13, 2012, 07:10:14 pm
Otik sighs, "Well, I c'n tell ye didnae mean t'hurt her. Starkey'll be right cross with ye if he finds out wot ye were gonna do t'th' prisoner, but..."

She leans in closer.

"...B'tween you an' me, I wouldnae have lost much sleep over it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 13, 2012, 07:23:25 pm
Falcata forms a small smile, still a bit nervous, but clearly more relaxed.  It wasn't exactly exemplary behavior to be executing unarmed prisoners like she'd planned, and for someone in her position it would have been a pretty bad example to everypony.  She was concerned they'd all be quite cross with her, not just Captain Starkey.

At least he didn't know.  She didn't really know how Starkey felt about her, but she would feel pretty bad for this to be the defining thing about her in his mind.  Although for all she knew the amulet incident was still the thing he knew her best for.  Maybe Otik had told him the truth.  Maybe not.  But this wasn't the time to be worrying over that.


"Right... don't think I've got it in me anymore at least."  She looks down at her hammer again and reads the inscription once more.  "Loyalty... not too loyal to be hurting my friends..."

She shakes the self pity from her mind for a moment and looks past Otik to Friesden and Khenal.  Might as well clear the air while she had a chance.  "Sorry again... to both of you.  Khenal, I'm not sure if I ever got a chance to apologize after I hit you earlier... after you recovered."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 13, 2012, 07:33:06 pm
I regretfully break the kiss that helped me to focus so I can talk to Falcata.

"I'm not sure if you did, either, actually.  And you don't need to, Falcata.  I know it was an accident when you hit me, and... and I know you would never willingly hurt Friesden, either."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 13, 2012, 08:16:19 pm
She sighs and looks back to the hammer yet again.  "No... I'd never hurt any of you intentionally.  I... I just got lucky I suppose.  I mean... I could have really hurt both of you... or... or worse..."

To be fair, she had really hurt Khenal.  But by rights both of them should probably be dead.  How could that have happened?  Was she losing her strength or skill?  Maybe she had subconsciously noticed they were friends at the last moment and pulled the blows?

No, those had been killing blows.  She meant to kill whatever was hit by those attacks.  Sisters help her if she had actually killed either of them...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 13, 2012, 08:52:06 pm
Friesden breaks the kiss very reluctantly, and turns to Falcata.

"Does it really matter? I'm not hurt, Khenal isn't hurt, you're not hurt, and neither is Mikhail."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 13, 2012, 10:09:05 pm
"No... I suppose not."  Must have just been a fluke.  She turns her hammer in the light to catch Loyalty in a glint before returning it to its sling.  The last forever had been weighing heavily on her mind.  Between dating Heiro, getting her flank kicked by one of the ponies she was supposed to protect, nearly having Kris taken from her, seriously hurting Khenal, getting engaged to Heiro, having Charity discover Heiro was a diomedian, going through having to tell Heiro she wasn't ready to be wed, having Kris join the militia, and now almost badly hurting Friesden, it was a wonder that she hadn't broken down again.  And she still wasn't sure what she was going to tell Charity about the prisoner.

But, she'd burdened her friends with her problems enough for a while.  They had their own problems too.  Back when she first came to Glitterglen, she would often take long walks around the perimeter of Glitterglen during the day when it was mostly safe.  Fresh air and a chance to think and settle her thoughts always did her mind some good.  Perhaps a change of scenery this time?  She hadn't set hoof in the caverns for a long time... and as long as she stayed close to Glitterglen it would be safe.  And she wouldn't have to worry about any of her friends running into her and questioning what she was doing alone.

Yes... file that thought for later.  Maybe tomorrow when she got off duty?  Or the next chance she got anyway.  A quick stroll through the caverns to clear her head.  They were actually quite beautiful, if you took a moment to stop and admire them.

((Will be a bit late getting on the IRC.  I freaking hate MPI now, by the way.  Screw you, homework.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 14, 2012, 12:10:11 pm
Starkey returns from the office, with Venture in tow.

"...Here she is now, doctor."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 14, 2012, 03:03:32 pm
"I'm okay, aren't I, Venture?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 14, 2012, 03:38:25 pm
Venture smiles softly at Friesden to reasure her, just like she does with all of her patients.

"Probably, Friesden, but I haven't had a chance to examine you yet.  How are you feeling?  Commander Starkey said you got hit by a door?"

Venture gently prods Friesden's side and prepares a simple medical scan spell to see how she is, chatting amiably the entire time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 14, 2012, 03:40:14 pm
"And a hammer. But I'm not hurt."

Friesden fidgets in the bed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 14, 2012, 03:42:49 pm
Starkey balks.

"A hammer? How-"

"Calm down, hun. I'll explain later."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 14, 2012, 03:45:52 pm
"And a hammer?  You always know how to get into some adventure or another, Friesden."

Venture gently shakes her head at Friesden's apparent clumsiness, then finishes the scan spell and nods to herself.

"Well, you seem fine, Friesden.  A few bruises and bumps, but nothing serious.  So, how goes the wedding planning?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 14, 2012, 03:48:15 pm
"It's...it's going to be a bit later. We're going to have a triple wedding! Me and Khenal, Mum and Dad, and my brother and Falcata! It's going to be the best!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 14, 2012, 03:51:22 pm
Falcata's heart skips a beat as Friesden mentions the hammer.  She manages to suppress a cringe as Starkey questions the matter, hoping he didn't notice.  Thank goodness Otik intercepted the question.  Falcata was the only pony in the room with a hammer... it probably wouldn't take too much for him to put the pieces together.

If Otik was right, and she suspected she was, then that conversation wouldn't be pleasant at all.

As Venture speaks up, she lets out a faint sigh.  She expected Friesden to be fine at least, but it was always nice to have a professional confirm a hunch.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TALLPANZER on February 14, 2012, 03:52:48 pm
A knock came at the hospital door.

"Doctor Bubbles? Doctor Venture? are you in? I brought some soup, pudding and apple sauce for the staff and wounded."   
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 14, 2012, 03:54:10 pm
"Well, I'm not hurt, so can we go? Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 14, 2012, 03:56:35 pm
"Tom?  Yes, come in!  You can go if you wish, Friesden, but you'd be missing a good meal.  Tom is quite the chef."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 14, 2012, 03:58:49 pm
"I...um...Khenal? What should we do?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TALLPANZER on February 14, 2012, 04:07:44 pm
Tom opens the door with his forehoof and walk in with a rock pot and a barrel on his back and a tray of ten individual glass cups of Zebra palenta pudding.

"Thank you kindly, Ms. Venture. It good to be appreciated. Lot of ponies in here today, what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 14, 2012, 04:10:06 pm
"Are you hungry, Friesden?  Soup sounds pretty good to me right now."

My mood has lightened considerably after Venture gave Friesden a clean bill of health, and I smile warmly.


Venture shrugs.

"Friesden had a little adventure it seems and her family wanted to make sure she was alright."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 14, 2012, 04:12:20 pm
Falcata looks nervously to the floor, fully expecting Friesden to say something about getting hammered by her and then hit with a door.  At least the diomedian couldn't realistically come up from that question.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 14, 2012, 04:12:56 pm
"Okay! Then we can go home for the game!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 14, 2012, 04:18:57 pm
"Could we have some soup please, Mr Tom?"

I ask, getting gentle whiffs of the delicious smelling soup.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TALLPANZER on February 14, 2012, 04:20:16 pm
"Oh, Playing to hard was she? Glad everypony ells here is just visiting. And of course you can Mr. Khenal"

Tom lays out the soup and produces some bowls from under his long coat

"It's Tusscani Tomato, hard to get cow cream but completely worth it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 14, 2012, 04:27:43 pm
The soup smells very inviting to what was now a suddenly very empty feeling stomach.  But she was neither staff nor patient, so Falcata just sits quietly and watches as Friesden and Khenal partake.

She'd find Heiro or Kris later and find something to eat with them then.  The three of them really needed to spend more time together anyway.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 14, 2012, 05:58:22 pm
Friesden sups the soup with relish. "Mmm...this is good..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 14, 2012, 06:05:28 pm
I drink the soup slowly, relishing the flavor and creaminess.

"Mmm, Venture was right.  This soup is amazing!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 14, 2012, 06:15:47 pm
"...doesn't taste as good as your lips do, though..."

Friesden leans back over to Khenal, her intent clear.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 14, 2012, 06:19:34 pm
"Mmm, dessert..."

I lovingly kiss Friesden, not caring for anything but her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 14, 2012, 06:25:11 pm
Starkey watches them with more than a little envy.

"...Say Tom, you wouldn't mind if Otik and I had a bowl, would you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TALLPANZER on February 14, 2012, 06:51:06 pm
"Not at all... Comander Starkey and captain Otik, as I live and breath, never thought I'd get to meet you."

Tom spits on his forehoof and offers it

"On behalf of all the ponies your actions have saved, put'er there."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 14, 2012, 06:57:35 pm
Starkey seems a little hesitant - He's not used to being addressed in such... such reverant terms. Did ponies really look up to him like that? He takes Tom's hoof.

"Thank you... the pleasure is all mine."

He takes two bowls for himself and Otik.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TALLPANZER on February 14, 2012, 07:15:37 pm
"You keep up the good work, always fun to hear Commander Starkey jokes while down at the pub, My favorite is "Every night Discord checks under his bed for Commander Starkey." laughed my tail off first time I heard it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 14, 2012, 07:28:07 pm
The two pegasi retire to a corner, leaning into each other while they enjoy their soup.

"Ponies really talk about me... like that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 14, 2012, 07:30:25 pm
Friesden reluctantly breaks the kiss. "Khenal, let's go and play!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 14, 2012, 07:32:14 pm
I blush deeply, but don't resist following her wherever she leads.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 14, 2012, 07:41:59 pm
"Well, there they go..."

"Dunnae worry, hun. I taught her well. She'll be fine."

"What did you teach her, exactly?"

Otik leans over to whisper in Starkey's ear.

"Uh-huh... Mm-hmm... Ooh, that's good... Mm-hmm... Wait..."

Starkey takes a step back.

"You promised her what!?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 15, 2012, 01:48:06 am
Charity’s Journal 11th Granite, 101

I met with Khenal, Friesden, Isos, Starkey, and Otik today, along with my husband, in my dinning room. We had a lovely meal but then after I told them that the reason for this was the truth about Heiro. Cryptson told them about him being a Keshi among the other things.  They were totally unsurprised. They had all, save for Isos, known all along. Friesden was acting like a foal again and I had to send her from the room. Somehow the conversation lead to me getting in an argument with Starkey about the Rainbow Coalition, whereupon he told us that not only was he from there, but actually defended them. I could understand him leaving them if the stories were true, but if it's really as loving and tolerant as the propaganda claim, I don't see why he would have left. But then it got worse. He confessed that he was part Diomedian himself. I could no longer stand to be around them and sent them from the room.

When they left the door struck Friesden, she was thankfully not seriously hurt, but it turns out that Falcata and Friesden had been down in the arena, I'm sketchy on the details but aparently the recaptured Keshi tried to escape. He was recapatrued, I'll have to make sure they take actions to prevent a repeat.

Charity's Secret Diary, 11th Granite, 101

I'm such a foal. I can't believe I let these sympathizers to the enemy get in so many of our leadership positions, these are the ponies I trusted the most, and they don't even care about the security risk that's staring them in the face. Am I such a useless leader? Am I that bad a judge of Character? I should just give up my position. I don't deserve it.

Charity's Journal 12th Granite, 101

Well the day has come, Kris is officially a recruit in the militia, as is the Keshi. I have made sure that his new commander is well aware of his dangerous nature. Additionally Commander Starkey has made Ramol a captain and split the melee fighters into two squads.

17th Granite, 101

The lyemaker continues to scream for body parts, he stole a whole pile of Tank shells after we butchered the only Tank we had, but that apparently wasn't enough for him and none of our bones or skulls interest him. Isos has continued keeping a watch posted near him.

30th Grantite, 101

Well the lyemaker has lost it, he took off all his clothes and is running around babbling like a madpony. But he has not hurt anypony yet.

9th Slate, 101

Today was Kris's first turn in the arena. Starkey wanted to start her off small, a couple of caged parasprites. She started out poorly, the little things flying all around her smashing into her biting her all  over, but then she started fighting back, swinging that silver warhammer around, getting a few glancing blows. She than bit one in the leg and shook it around until it flew off, with it's leg still in her mouth, she spit it out and then did the same to one of the other's legs. The parasprites quickly expired after that. Then Starkey sent out a couple of large flightless birds he caught in the jungle, they were no match for Kris's hammer strikes, though one managed to bruise her leg through her boots. After all that she had several scrapes a few bruises but nothing serious. A good first experience. The birds were carted off to the butchers to get what meat we can from them.

13th Slate, 101

Ramol's first real chance in command. A tribe of fishpeople have harassed miss Starnight when she was in the caverns, gathering gemstones. She escaped, but I have decided we need to clear them out. Ramol's squad is being tasked with this. They should be able to deal with it without help.

15th Slate, 101

Ramol's excursion went well they killed or captured every last fishman, with no casualties or injured, but then a group of Ogres showed up. The first was separated from the group and was killed by the combined efforts of Privates Tarik and Morul. Ramol than ordered the men to regroup before tackling the other two, but Shigos disobeyed orders and charged off alone. He managed to beat both by himself with little more than a black eye for his trouble, though Ramol is disciplining him for breaking ranks in spite of his obvious valor.

16th Slate, 101

New migrants.

Male Earthpony farmer
Female Unicorn Dyer
Female Unicorn Cook
Female Unicorn Fisheryworker.
Female Earthpony farmer
Male Unicorn bone carver
Female pegasus peasant
Female Unicorn Clothing Making Legend.
Female Pegasus Bone Carver
Male Earthpony Woodcrafter
Female Unicorn Metalcrafter.

7th Felsite, 101

Starkey and Otik finished construction on their new home. A log cabin down in the caverns. We all wish them the best of luck on their new life together. Everypony went down to their new dinning room for drinks it was a lot of fun.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Starkey%27s%20Cabin.png)

11th Felsite, 101

Today tragedy struck. Udur our best weaponsmith was helping to haul some refuse to the incinerator and he wasn't looking were he was stepping. He stepped in a puddle of magma and burst into flames. He ran screaming through the fort to the Dinning Hall, where he died before he could get the water in the public showers to put him out. His death is a major loss for Glitterglen.

28th Felsite, 101

Azkob's (earthpony lasher under captain Ramol) wife has given birth to there first foal. A little unicorn colt.

21st Hematite, 101

Today, my best friend died. ((This is only legible sentence on the whole page, everything else is blacked out or smeared beyond all legibility))

22nd Hematite, 101

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Baros.png)

Yesterday, Captain Colonel Falcata was walking alone in the caverns, I don't know why. She was ambushed by some horrible cloven hoofed monster covered in feathers and pouring out gaseous vapors. She was the only thing standing between it and the town entrance, save for a light guard at the gate that would not have been prepared to stop it, nor were they aware of it's approach. She tried to fight it alone, but was outmatched, she wounded it pretty good from what the survivors say, but that didn't save her life.

Captain Otik heard the fighting and jumped out of bed where she was laying with the Commander, in their new cabin, and rallied the Skyguard to face the monster, while they fought Starkey got the rest of the militia together, after Otik's squad began to run low on bolts the creature began to annihilate them. 60% of the Skyguard is dead, the rest injured. Otik numbers among the fallen.

Starkey came late to the battle with his Stallions. Peytral is in critical condition, but Kris is keeping him alive as best she can, and a few others have broken hooves or legs, and one from Ramol's squad perished. Starkey was the one who killed the monster after he saw Otik lying on the ground in her own blood. A few peasants got caught in the fighting while going about their work in the caverns one or them was Ironya's son Itur, he was killed by the beast as Peytral tried to save him. Today is a sad day for all Glitterglen. I shall lead the town in a prayer service this afternoon for the fallen warriors, may Luna watch over their souls.

22rd Hematite, 101 Addendum

Peytral's right lung is badly damaged. A fragment of his shattered rib cage pierced it. Friesden needs to operate immediatly to save him.

To replace Colonel Falcata as the head of my security, I'm thinking about promoting Khenal to the position as Captain of the Ducal Guard. We haven't replaced Otik yet. Due to the number of deaths the Skyguard suffered, they are all being given paid time off. I will talk to Commander Starkey soon about what will be done with them.

I sent Kris a gift yesterday and heard she went down to the arena to work out her aggressions with it today and that she found the Keshi that kidnapped her awhile ago, in a cage. Normally, it would not be in her power to just execute a prisoner without formal consent but I have made sure she will pardoned for her breach of protocol. He didn't deserve better and I understand her desire to do it herself.

6h Malachite, 101

A strange quite pony has taken over one of the craft workshops.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 15, 2012, 01:55:08 am
-snip-
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 15, 2012, 02:56:32 am
She hadn't gotten around to taking the stroll through the caverns as soon as she'd liked, but finally Falcata got the chance.  It wasn't quite like she remembered, having been months since she last set hoof down there, but all the same it was quiet and secluded.  Almost haunting.  Most ponies sensibly stayed far away unless they had good reason to be there.  She didn't have a particularly good reason to be there, but she didn't really care.  She was armed and covered in some of the finest armor in Glitterglen.  She could protect herself if she needed to.

She continues down the passage, still within her faint memory of the tunnels' maps.  A faint chilly wind catches her mane, tussling what was free beneath her chanfron.  Where the winds came from she never did find out, but it didn't do much to alleviate the haunted feel of the place.  The wistful images she held of the caverns were in a bit of contrast to the real thing after so long, but she continued on.  At least nopony would run into her down here.

As a raw gem in the cavern wall catches her eye, she sets her mind to the purpose she had intended up to that point: settling her mind.  So much had happened lately, she was astonished she'd been able to handle it.  Even back in Coupledye she had never been a particularly sociable pony, but in Glitterglen she hadn't had any friends until fairly recently.  Learning to communicate and empathize with them was more stressful than she had anticipated.  So many stray emotions...  where to start?

Khenal and Friesden maybe?  She still didn't understand how she'd managed to avoid killing the two of them.  Even though both had forgiven her, she hadn't quite forgiven herself yet.  Friesden was a true and horrific accident, but she should have known better than do what she did that hurt Khenal.  Striking out without looking... of course somepony would get hurt.  He should be dead...

But Friesden wasn't so different.  It was a pretty terrible thing she'd planned to do that got her hurt in the first place.  If she hadn't been planning on executing the diomedian herself, then Friesden wouldn't have jumped in the way.  She wouldn't have gotten hurt.  Kris was alright... why did she want to kill him so badly?

Then... what would Captain Starkey have thought of her if she had killed him?  She respected Starkey a lot, and suspected even before Otik told her that he'd be very angry to know she'd done that.  He'd have a point.  She didn't want him to think badly of her.  Starkey was a great fighter and leader, she wanted to live up to his example...  Why... why did she care so much what other ponies thought about her?

Lady Charity leaps into her mind at that thought.  The day she'd found out that Heiro was a diomedian... that she found out that she knew he was a diomedian and hadn't told her... she wouldn't forget that day.  The look of horror and utter betrayal on her face... raising her voice at her.  Sisters above why did it hurt her so much to have Charity get upset with her?  She respected the duchess so much... she could understand the frustration... but she was a grown mare herself.  Why did she almost cry at the time?  Was she that upset about other things, or was the thought of upsetting Charity that hard on her?

She felt a pang of sadness roll through her, and she pauses in her tracks.  She stamps a hoof into the cavern floor in anger.  Why the buck did she want to cry now?  She was a grown mare.  She wasn't suppose to break down at the smallest things like this.  What had happened to her?  She could remember not that long ago how easily she stood up to the things that happened to her.  She was so much stronger then... why was she so much weaker now?

That brought her Lord Cryptson... he was one of the ponies she was charged with protecting above all others.  And he didn't need her.  He was so much stronger, faster and more skilled than she was.  The royal family didn't need her.  They never had.  He could protect them from anything she could and more.  She could train all of her life and she would never match his strength... she was only a mare.  How he'd learned such military skill she didn't know... perhaps she was just that inept.  A miner... utterly crushing her in a fight.

The tears begin to finally surface in her eyes.  No... clop it!  She wasn't going to cry... she wasn't... a tear rolls down each cheek and she lies on the ground in the middle of the massive cavern, letting the tears come but trying to keep the sniffling to a minimum.  Why... why wasn't she able to just take all of this in stride like she used to be able to?

She thinks to Heiro and the upcoming wedding, which didn't do much to settle her nerves.  She'd probably hurt him a lot by putting it off, even if he didn't admit it to her.  And she still wasn't sure she was ready.  He was a kind and loving pony, and she cared a lot for him... but she still had a lot more thinking to do about that.  Which was why she was here, after all...

Then a noise.  Something... large.  She stands, feeling her heart rate climb.  What was it?  She turns and looks about, seeing nothing.  Then a low... growl... of some sort echoes through the caverns.  The source was close, she could tell.  In a near panic she begins heading back toward Glitterglen.  The last time she fought something large down here... things didn't go well.  She nearly died... and that had been a major fiasco involving so many ponies...

She picks up her pace and trots back toward the entrance, feeling her spine ice over as another growl echoes through the caverns, unmistakable and closer.  She turns a corner to find herself face-to-hoof with a monstrosity.  A towering hooved creature with a trunk and feathers.  Immediately it moves to attack, and she dances away at the last moment.  Everything in her body screamed for her to flee in terror.  She had to run... she had to...

No.  She could see that running now wouldn't serve anypony but herself.  She was close to the entrance to Glitterglen.  If she fled now, it would follow her inside and kill who knew how many ponies.  No... she wasn't a coward.  She would stand and fight.  She would prove to Lady Charity, Lord Cryptson and all of Glitterglen that she deserved the honor and title she had been given.  She faces the giant antelope and draws her weapon.  This creature died here.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 15, 2012, 04:06:22 am
"Mmm... Stars... did ye hear somethin'?"

Starkey snuggles a little closer to Otik.


"It's nothing, hun. Just the new house settling."

"No... it sounded like... steel on leather. Like a weapon bein' drawn."

Starkey chuckles quietly,
"Relax, hun. Nopony's going to assassinate us in our new home."

Then came the battle-cry. both of them bolt upright.

"That was Falcata!"

Starkey retrieves his axe from the bedside table, passing Otik her crosbow as he does. They both dash out the door, finding Falcata already engaged in single combat with some eldritch abomination from the deep. She seems to be putting up one hell of a fight, but is rapidly losing ground.

"I'll rouse the militia. Your lads can get down here far faster than we can. Get them geared up and send them down here. That thing does not enter the fortress, lieutenant, are we clear?"

"Aye, Cap'n."

They bolt up the stairwell into Glitterglen together, heading for the barracks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 15, 2012, 04:08:10 am
Warning:  May be sad.  Skip if you don't want to be sad.

A determined scowl forms on Falcata's face as she stares down the immense creature set on killing her.  She'd prove to everypony that she wasn't weak.  She wasn't a coward.  She could defend Lady Charity and Lord Cryptson.  She could defend Glitterglen.  The magical aura around her hammer glows brightly as she waits for an opening.

She didn't wait long.  The beast kicks at her clumsily, and she rolls under the gigantic hoof with ease.  As she comes out of the roll, she brings her hammer up into the beast's belly with all the force she could muster.  Immediately it looses a bone shaking shriek and backs away.  She stands and circles it, ducking another clumsy kick and swinging her hammer with more might than she knew she had in her body.  Her effort is rewarded with a satisfying crack of smashed ribs and the monster's shriek is choked and startled.

It was wounded... crippled.  She could do this.  She steps aside from another kick and swings her hammer, missing.  She swings again and again, missing several times before finally landing a solid blow against its flank.  This blow didn't even elicit a response from the beast, and she backs away.  Suddenly she finds her breath short and feels exhaustion rolling through her.  Swinging her hammer so hard so many times... all of the training in the world from Khenal wouldn't have mattered.  Her magic was too weak.  She was too weak to keep fighting...

She backs away and tries to evaluate her options.  If she ran... lots of ponies would die.  If she stayed... could she win?  What would she...

Her thoughts are forcibly removed from her mind as a hoof half her size collides with her temple.  Her chanfron is sent sailing off in an arc as she is thrown from her hooves.  She lands in a heap some distance away.  Dazed, she fights through red foggy vision and by sheer willpower forces herself to stay awake.  If she passed out... she would be dead for sure.  She scrabbles to her feet a moment too late, and a hoof is caught beneath a crushing stomp from the giant antelope.  She screams in pain as her hoof is crushed, but the pain fades in an instant as adrenaline floods her veins anew.

She hobbles back and takes another ineffective swing, only to be rewarded with another crushing kick to her side.  Her body explodes in pain as her crupper is dented... the ragged edges of metal digging into her side and drawing blood.  Another devastating kick to her belly sends her from her hooves again, and she lands against a wall opposite the creature.  More by luck than judgement she stays on her hooves... but she nearly topples to the ground as pain rolls through her.  She was hurt.  Badly.  Instantly nausea fills her body and she feels stabbing pain with each movement... but through all of that she notices something new.  A vapor in the air.

Immediately she feels fear anew.  It was that vapor that had given her the terrible sickness that nearly claimed her life.  She holds her breath and tries to keep the monster in sight as the vapors drift away, but her side and stomach hurt so much...  she hadn't believed in actual blinding pain before, but her vision blurs for a moment as she tries to take a step away.  Much to her shock, the particles brush against her exposed flesh and send waves of agony through her.  She cries out and grits her teeth to fight through the pain, losing sight of the antelope for a moment more.  A fatal mistake.

She looks up at the last moment to see those immense hooves inches from her face.  And the world goes dark...


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 15, 2012, 08:40:43 pm
Otik and her squad of marksponies come galloping down the stairwell. Otik pauses long enough to take in the situation.

"Clop, Falcata's down! Kib, Olon, cover her! Everypony else, on tha' beast!"

The ponies of the skyguard surge forward, leaving Otik and her two wingponies standing over their falled comrade. She reaches down, feeling for a pulse. She finds it: weak, and rapidly fading, but there.

"C'mon hun, hold on just a few moments longer..."

A few moments come and pass, as the marksponies pepper the great antelope fiend with fire. Bolt after razor-tipped bolt finds purchase in its feathered hide, but the beast did not slow. The assault of the skyguard, however, cannot endure.


"Quiver's empty, ma'am!"

"Out o' bolts, I'm moving in!"

One by one, the pegasi sound off as their ammunition is expended.

'So it's t'be th' close-in fight...'

They close, swinging at the creature with their heavy crossbows. Their blows d little against its tough hide. A blast of noxious vapor from its mouth sends a knot of ponies reeling in pain, making them easy prey.

Their screams of her comrades-in-arms reach Otik's ears.

"No..."

She takes wing, leaving the pair guarding Falcata and swooping down on the beast, emptying the last of her bolts into its thick hide. the sight of three marksponies lying dead, their skulls caved in, fuels her rage. She dives at the beast, smashing her masterfully crafted weapon into its side. A blast of excruciating fumes knockes her from the sky, sending her weapon from her grasp. Otik Ploughs face-first into the cavern floor, skidding to a stop at the creature's feet. As her vision returns, a glint of adamantine catches her eye. She reaches for her fallen weapon.

She does not reach it. The world goes black...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 15, 2012, 09:57:35 pm
...sounds... screams...

Falcata opens her eyes, finding even the faint cavern light blinding and agony inducing.  Slowly, the pain wracking her body returns... starting with her crushed hoof, working its way to her head.  She felt as if somepony had stabbed a greatsword into her skull and was twisting it with each beat of her heart.  Everything was blurry... she blinks and tries to focus her eyes, but she couldn't make anything out.

Intense nausea returns along with an unbearable burning pain in her stomach and side.  She tries to turn her head to get a better view of the caverns, but a sharp stab jabs through her head, neck and stomach and she simply lets out a choked gasp.

Nothing made sense... where was she?  Why was she on the ground?  What were all of the noises around her?  Why did she hurt so much?  Why was there so much blood on the ground? Who were the ponies in front of her?  What was... that... thing?

She watches as somepony is swatted from the sky, landing in a crumpled heap at the monster's hooves.  That probably wasn't a good thing... but she couldn't quite place why.  Then another and another were crushed beneath its hooves.  No... this was a bad thing... very bad...  Then somepony was caught in a cloud and fell to the ground, landing on her face and dropping something.  That pony looked familiar... why couldn't she remember anything?  Then the creature deals her a crushing blow... Otik.  That was the pony's name... Otik.  She knew her somehow...

Her eyes open completely as terror fills her body.  Otik!  That... that thing was attacking Otik!  She tries to stand, but even attempting to move her ruined body sends unbearable shocks of pain down her spine.  She cries out and flinches, watching in horror as the skyguard is decimated in front of her.  No... no... this couldn't be happening!  She had to get up.  She had to help!  She couldn't just lay there!

Once more she tries to get to her hooves, focusing her will harder than she ever had in her life to fight through the pain, but it was no use.  Her vision wavers and fades again as she moves her head, and unimaginable agony stabs through any hope of staying awake...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 16, 2012, 09:33:03 pm
The first thing Starkey notices as he descends the stairwell is the quiet: a battle of such size should sound much louder than this. rounding the corner, he sees the remnants of the skyguard battling the forgotten beast. One, he notes with dawning horror, is not amog them. The captain breaks rank, charging forth to find his lover. And find her he does. He sees the crumpled form of the lieutenant lying still on the cavern floor. He cradles her in his forehooves, feeling the warmth slowly fade from her flesh. Too late, by an instant.

Starkey does not see her now. He sees only red.

Even as the beast falls dead, Starkey continues his assault on its corpse. It takes four stallions to restrain their stricken commander. His wails of anguish echo throughout the halls of Glitterglen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 16, 2012, 10:20:05 pm
Friesden is at the hospital, readied by the alert. She's anxious, and when the stolid ponies of the militia bore in the wounded Peytral, her anxiousness starts to grow. One injured.

Even as she works, she almost subconsciously looks up at the door every five minutes. But as she finishes the surgery, her mood has gone, and she smiles. "Only one injury...that's good."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 16, 2012, 10:37:47 pm
((The following events take place just before Peytrel is brought to the hospital.))

Kris follows the rest of her squad down into the caverns, feeling her breathing grow uneven with nervousness.  Cold sweat begins to form on her brow as they draw close, and with effort she keeps Heiro in sight.  She needed to calm down.  Everything was going to be alright.  Captain Starkey and Heiro were here.  The two of them could handle whatever it was down there, and with the rest of the ponies this would be easy.  No need to get worried.

Then they arrive at the caverns.  She freezes in place at the horror of it all.  Pegasi are strewn about the cavern floor in varying states of disarray.  All are motionless, and already she knew most of them wouldn't be getting back up again.  It feels as if a boulder forms in her stomach as she looks on at the carnage, and only the horrified cry of Captain Starkey snaps her out of the stupor.  She watches as he leaps upon the monstrous cervid, followed by most of the rest of their squad.  Kris doesn't follow.  She simply stares at the death around her.  They were too late... too late for so many ponies... she couldn't help them...

Eventually the beast falls dead, torn apart by the furious blows from the ponies mobbing it.  Kris finally finds strength in her legs to check the stricken ponies around them, although she knew already it was too late.  One by one she confirms her fears, finding all of the downed Skyguard dead.  Her heart sinks, she joined the militia just so she could prevent this, but she hadn't helped at all.

Starkey's enraged blows against the corpse of the monster draw her attention for a moment, and her eyes settle on something that chills her to her core.  A single silver warhammer lying in the middle of the cavern.  No...

Then she hears the faint sound of metal rattling, and follows it with her ears with growing apprehension.  A horrified scream leaves her mouth as she finally sees what she feared most: her mother lying on the cavern floor in a large pool of blood.  She bolts over to her trembling mother's side, screaming in despair and disbelief.
  "MOM!!!"

She crouches next to Falcata, her entire body shaking in fear.  Blood was everywhere.  She looks over her briefly, evaluating the extent of her injuries.  They didn't look too bad... except for the blood leaking from her nose and ears.  Her skull was broken... it had to be.  That could be very bad, but she was alive still.  If she was still alive, she would probably make it.  She could do this.

"Mom?  Mom, can you hear me?"

Falcata's eyes crack, and she cringes before crying out.  "B-Buck... it... it h-hurts..."  Her eyes track aimlessly around the cave as she clenches her jaw shut and stifles a moan

"It's going to be okay mom... just hang on a moment..."  Kris shuts her eyes and focuses a spell as she gently lays a hoof on her mother's side.  An image of her injuries appears in her mind, and all of her optimism is crushed utterly.  This was bad... no, horrifying.  Falcata's kidney was crushed... and she was hemorrhaging from ruptures in half a dozen places in her abdomen.  Maybe a burst spleen... she had lost a lot of blood... but the worst of it was the fractures in her skull.  Her brain was beginning to swell...

There was nothing she could do.  If she tried to staunch the hemorrhaging with her magic... her mom would have a heart attack or stroke immediately.  If they tried to move her, a bone fragment could shift in her head and kill her instantly.  They could try a transfusion... she'd gladly give every drop of her own blood to save her mom... but she'd never survive the trip to the hospital.   She wouldn't survive the next few minutes.  There was nothing she could do... nothing...

"Mom... it's going to be okay..."  But it wasn't.  Tears begin streaming down her cheeks as she does the only thing she could in this situation.  Her horn glows a dull gold, and the pain in her mother's body begins to fade.  She didn't dare to use too much power... if her mom passed out now, she'd never wake back up.

Falcata lets out a sigh of absolute relief as the agony fades to mere stabbing pain in most of her body.  She blinks through the muddiness in her vision to see the caverns around her, and her daughter crying in front of her.  Everything seemed so far away... so quiet... but at least she could think again.  Why was she here again?  What had happened?  As the pain drains away, a hint of clarity reasserts itself...


"Kris... Kris, honey... wh-where... where is Captain... Starkey?  Could... you bring... him here...?"

Kris shakes her head slowly, sniffling.  "I'm not going to leave you..."

"Please... honey... this... this is... important..."

Reluctantly, Kris nods and stands.  "I'll be right back.  I'm not going anywhere..."  She turns to find Starkey wailing over the corpse of somepony... Otik.  No... please... not her too... please, no Luna...  She slowly makes her way over to the two, new tears dripping from her cheeks onto the ground.  What to say?  What could she say?  Otik was clearly dead... she felt sick... she couldn't imagine what Starkey was feeling... but her mom...

"C-C-Captain...?" she manages to choke out, her voice high and cracking.  "C-Can you come here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 17, 2012, 01:36:52 am
Starkey is sprawled on the ground, Staring at the limp form that was once the mare he loved. He is unable to speak, only an inarticulate howl of despair escapes his lips.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 17, 2012, 01:51:10 am
Kris watches as Starkey breaks down in despair.  It literally felt as if a dagger had been driven into her stomach.  She couldn't do this... her mom was dying... Otik was dead... so many other ponies were dead... she couldn't help...

She collapses next to Starkey, sobbing herself.  She tries to say something... but she didn't even know what she wanted to say.  All that comes out is a garbled cry.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 17, 2012, 01:58:42 am
Starkey feels the weitht of somepony leaning against him. He turns to see Kris... his grandfilly... lying beside him, weeping. He gently pulls her to him, lying on hisback on the cavern floor and clutching her to his chest.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 17, 2012, 02:11:38 am
Kris clutches Starkey back, sobbing.  She presses her face into his chest and stammers something incoherent.  Finally she manages to squeak, "Why... why did this have to happen?  She... she's gone..."  She sobs again for some time.  "A-A-And mom is dying too...  I can't take this..."  She descends into soul consuming weeping again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 17, 2012, 02:20:48 am
"M-mom... Falcata!? N-No, Luna n-no, n-not h-her too..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 17, 2012, 02:25:03 am
Kris wipes her eyes and nose.  "S-she wanted to see you..."  She motions off in the direction her of her stricken mother and squeaks, "There's nothing I can do..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 17, 2012, 02:26:30 am
"I-I... okay... let's go."

Starkey shakily gets to his hooves and makes his way to Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 17, 2012, 02:47:18 am
Starkey and Kris find Falcata in the same position Kris left her in.  She is lying in a large pool of blood, centered around her head.  As she sees the two approach, her eyes slowly track up to meet Starkey's.  "C-Captain... I'm glad... to see you...She trembles weakly as she moves a leg, and cries out softly.

Kris steps over to her, fighting the urge to break down in despair.
  "Mom... I'm here... it's going to be okay..."

Heiro wanders up now, having broken away from his own sobbing at Otik's demise at the sight of Starkey and Kris heading this way.  He spots Falcata and freezes in place.  No...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 17, 2012, 02:50:58 am
"Oh, F-Falcata... I... I'm so sorry... I-If I'd only got here f-faster..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 17, 2012, 03:06:04 am
"It... it's alright..." She swallows and cringes, drawing her legs in.  "I... I need your help...She wearily raises a hoof off in the direction of nothing in particular.  "I... I can see her... Luna... in the moonlight..."

She blinks weakly.  A frown forms on her face, and hints of tears well up in her eyes.  "I'm scared... I-I'm not ready to face her...She swallows again, and adds, "...please... would you... give me my last rites...?"

Kris and Heiro fall into each others' hooves, and resume to crying.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 17, 2012, 03:09:23 am
"...Y-Yes... I'll... I can do that."

Starkey reaches into his saddlebags, drawing out one of the many keys he keeps for fallen comrades. He kneels over Falcata, reciting the Last Rites, and gently places it in her hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 17, 2012, 04:04:32 am
She smiles weakly.  "...thank you...There was something else she wanted to ask him... something important... about somepony... but she couldn't remember.  She was so tired... she just wanted to go to sleep...

She looks up to to Heiro and Kris.
  "I... love you... both of you... I'm... I'm sorry for putting you... through this...With another pained cry, she closes her eyes.

Kris steps over with Heiro, and kneels beside her
  "I love you too, mom..."  She begins crying again.  "...and... it's okay..."  Bitter tears begin to stain the fur on her cheeks.  "...it's okay..."

Heiro stands beside the two, unable to say anything until now.  "I l-l-love y-you t-t-t-too, F-F-Falcata..."  As tears drip from his eyes, he collapses onto the ground and begins sobbing.

Kris bites her lip and tries to stifle her own tears... to no avail.  As she cries, her horn begins to glow a dull gold, and the remaining pain in Falcata's body dissipates.  The mortally wounded mare sighs in relief and drifts from consciousness.  She lingers for some minutes, her breathing slowing and growing more labored until she shudders her last and expires.  Kris collapses onto the ground, tears flowing freely.

She... she just helped her mother die...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 17, 2012, 09:02:57 pm
Silently, Starkey drapes a wing over each of them, pulling them close.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 17, 2012, 10:36:41 pm
Kris and Heiro accept Starkey's comforting touch.  Kris weeps silently, averting her eyes from the still body in front of her.  "Mom...The three huddle together in relative silence for some time.  Seconds.  Minutes.  Then somepony says something...

"Peytrel... he's alive!  Quick, somepony, we've got to get him to the hospital!  This doesn't look good... he might not make it..."

Kris looks up as she hears the exchange.  She was too late for Otik and her mom.  And the dead Skyguard... but maybe she wasn't too late to help him.  She forces herself to uneasy hooves and steps over to the stricken pony.  They were right... his ribs were broken at least, and several bones in his legs.  With difficulty she focuses her body reading spell and sees the shattered bones tearing into his lung.  He was very badly wounded... he wouldn't live without immediate help.  But it wasn't too late.

Her horn glows a bright gold and the bleeding in his body begins to slow.  He was already unconscious, but he had a fighting chance now.  If he didn't have a heart attack or a stroke, he could be saved.


"Th-there... hurry up and get him to the hospital... he'll be okay if they tend to him immediately..."

The stallions surrounding Peytrel nod and as one lift him from the ground and hurry off toward the hospital.  Kris looks back to her mother's corpse.  She felt numb.  This wasn't happening...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 17, 2012, 11:20:49 pm
GROOWLA!

Try as he might, the panther just can’t shake Willow Darkmane off. she’s positioned precariously on the panther’s back, her two fore hooves keeping her crossbow steady, her rear right hoof was dedicated to jerking the panther’s head back with a make-shift vine halter, and her left rear hoof had the toughest job of keeping all of this balanced.

“c’mon, smile you son of a...” Willow growled. if she could just get it’s head up long enough to put a bolt through it...

Wings unfurl from the panther’s body.

“you can Fly?” Willow exclaimed in agitated surprise.

“Course you can Fllllllaaaaaeeee~”

with two powerful strokes of it’s wings the panther was off - With Willow still strapped to it by the vine halter.

The Banker took a good ten seconds to pick up his jaw, another minute to admit that just happened, and another five seconds to realize he wasn't alone.

A pack of three Badgerponies descend upon him, releasing bizarre hyena-like howls in anticipation of their next meal.

“I-I...” The Banker stammered hopelessly. conflict just wasn't in his nature. “No, not like this!” he grabs a pathetic sized branch off the ground with his mouth to defend himself. “mot Mhike -is!”

A Badgerpony jumped at him, and Roughneck intercepted. the dog crushed creature’s head in it’s jaws in a single motion and started to tango with the second. That Badgerpony looked at the third for some backup, and the third Badgerpony gave him a deadpan “you serious?” look and took off after the Banker. The Banker started running like a little girl.

He galloped until a side stitch betrayed him. Some ponies are living Diomidian kill machines, and others can only run for fifteen minutes.

“Oh sod this, let it kill me!”  he exasperated.

the Badgerpony caught up in seconds, grinning ear to ear and salivating.

The Banker winced in fear and the Badgerpony also, surprisingly.

A Sabertooth tiger five times larger than an average pony leaps out slashes the Badgerpony in the jugular and pops the prey into his mouth. the sabertooth slowly turns and stares at the unicorn.   

“~aaaiiieee!!”

Willow collided back to earth with a brutal wet -Chunk-! and the sound made the Sabertooth bolt off. She was twisted in all sorts of wrong angles.

“Oh, Armok. Armok Christ!” The Banker exclaimed. He runs over to her and starts to smack her in the muzzle to get her conscious. her head just rolled side to side, unresponsive.

The Banker starts to preform CPR, and it’s not working. He blushes a little when he considers mouth to mouth. He knows his wife wouldn't approve, but acknowledges now is not the time for modesty. 

He presses his lips to Willow’s and blows. Willow vomits a small fountain of blood into the banker’s mouth, who reared his head back gags up and vomits aswell.

She starts to laugh. 

“Crazy mare. Gave me a hart attack. what’s funny about the situation we’re in? I almost died! you almost died! Hell, you still might die! what’s so funny?” the banker said, wiping the blood off his mouth.

“If this looks bad, look a’ tha’ other guy!”  she smiles and points up.

He follows her hoof and sees the winged Panther dead, twisted in the  jungle branches above.

He eased up, and started to chuckle too.

“Crazy mare.” he sighed.

Willow laughed until it became a heavy wheeze from her injuries.

“ya’ know, I never ask’d yer’ name, Did I?” she choked. It was Intentional. she never asked the name of her marks, always tried to keep the conversations informal and impersonal. It was such a simple job. Step one, put caltrops on the road. Step two, wait for a Caravan wagon and let the caltrops tear the wheels apart. Step three, Give the Idiot coaching the caravan a tour of the jungle for a few hours while her posse robbed him blind.

“Oh, you’re right. Name’s Sigil Tanner.”

“Sigil Tanner? That’s a’ strong name. Lis’ten Sigil, I-  I need you ta’ be strong.  There is a -”

She makes a long, deep sigh. she knew she had to visit Glitterglen one of these days, but wanted to prolong it as long as possible. she needed to talk to her brother, Couth, to close old wounds. but what what would she say? what could she say? how could she possibly atone for what she did to him?

“A Fort, Glitterglen, believe it’s called. they ‘ave a doctor. It’s fourteen miles away. I’ ‘eed you ta carry me.”

“Oh, Willow, I'm about to collapse as is! I don’t have it in me.”

I ‘eed you ta be strong, Sigil.”

Sigil looked at her for a long while. He gritted his teeth and hoisted Willow on his back.

“Alright, which way?”


-a day and a half later-

Sigil finally the breeches the edge of the jungle, with Willow on unconscious on his back and Roughneck at his side, and drags his hooves to Glitterglen’s front gate.
His eyes are hollowed out from exhaustion and his head hangs barely an inch from the dirt.

“Hail!” Sigil shouted.

No response.

“Hello? somepony? anypony?”

Again, no response. 

‘Odd. A fort without a military is like a well without water.’ Sigil thought.

he pushed the front gate open and walked in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 17, 2012, 11:25:25 pm
Friesden sits down in the hospital, a smile on her face. Now just to wait for Mum and Dad and Brother to tell her that it was all over.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 17, 2012, 11:54:09 pm
Starkey stumbles into the hospital, one wing draped over Heiro for support.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 17, 2012, 11:58:28 pm
Friesden jumps up and runs to dad and her brother.

"Hey dad! Hey brother! Only one injury, that's good, isn't it! Where's mum and Falcata?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 18, 2012, 12:01:30 am
Starkey approaches her.

"F-Friesden, I... we... s-she..."

He cannot form the words. Starkey collapses into Friesden's hooves, weeping openly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 18, 2012, 12:03:06 am
Friesden lurches at the sudden weight, but does her best to support her dad through her confusion. "What's wrong, Dad?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 18, 2012, 12:06:13 am
Kris steps into the hospital, her head low and hooves unsteady beneath her.  She looks around the room, trying to pick out if Peytrel had made it and survived.  She saw somepony that looked like him on a hospital bed, breathing.  A small glint of light in this darkness.

Her eyes track from the recovering pony to the knot forming around Friesden.  She looks away, saying nothing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 18, 2012, 12:18:58 am
"What's wrong? Friesden turns to each of the three in turn, confusion writ large on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 18, 2012, 12:19:39 am
Charity was in her office when she heard the alarm go out that something was in the deep. The battle itself had only taken a few minutes and was finished before she really had time to act. However, when news had reached her that their were wounded and casualties, she went to the hospital to find out what had gone on. Her son Adamant had been with her as well, going over the current trade agreements with the zebra in anticipation for their scheduled visit before the end of the season. Having overheard that the militia had suffered casualties, he decided to go along, he hid it well (a trait he had picked up from his father), but deep down he was afraid something might have happened to Kris.

The two arrive in the Hospital and look around. Adamant sees Kris and makes his way toward her, while Charity stands by the doorway, looking in vein for Falcata or Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 18, 2012, 12:21:13 am
"F-Friesden, I-I... I couldn't, I... s-she's... gone..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 18, 2012, 12:22:07 am
"Who? Gone? Who's gone? Somepony...Did somepony die? Who died?!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 18, 2012, 12:24:34 am
As she holds her father, Friesden notices something wrapped around his hoof. A white feather on a silver chain. A silver chain that should be hanging around her mother's neck.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 18, 2012, 12:25:56 am
Kris collapses onto the floor, burying her face in her hooves.  She begins crying silently, but it quickly degenerates into bitter sobbing again.  "M-Mom..."

Heiro looks Friesden in the eyes, trying to hide the pain he felt.  "S-Sis... mom... and Falcata... they... they didn't..." he trails off, his voice cracking.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 18, 2012, 12:27:56 am
"Oh...Oh no...No, no, no...M-m-mum? And...And Falcata...What...But..."

'No...Got to be strong...Got to hide the pain. Save it for later. Just need to help my brother and my dad...'

Friesden does her best to comfort her father, holding him, and letting him cry into her mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 18, 2012, 12:36:24 am
Adamant approaches Kris but stops when he sees her crying. He looks her over, but she seems unharmed. He pauses, unsure of what to do. But then he approaches Kris and wraps his foreleg around her. "Kris...Are you okay? What happened?"

Charity not seeing the ponies she was looking for instead looks over to Starkey and his family, well most of his family. 'I'd best not interrupt them, but I need to know what has happened...' Charity approaches them to just within earshot, and listens in on their conversation, while trying not to intrude.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 18, 2012, 12:37:43 am
"F-Fries-den I-I'm so s-sorry I-I wasn't... I c-couldn't..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 18, 2012, 12:45:35 am
Friesden doesn't say anything, just holding her father and rubbing his back.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 18, 2012, 12:47:44 am
Kris flinches as he lays his foreleg around her.  She looks up, with bloodshot eyes from her incessant crying.  "M-My mom... she... she's dead..."  She reaches up and wraps her forelegs around him in turn, utterly uncaring that it might be inappropriate.  And the tears resume.

Heiro hugs the two ponies next to him, crying softly.
  "W-we were t-too late..."

*****

Falcata slowly feels the world come to again.  Was she not dead yet?  How long would she have to suffer?  She opens her eyes and sees the caverns around her... but something was different.  Everything was cast in a gloomy glow... and she didn't hurt any more.  She immediately looks down and a gasp passes her lips as she sees her bloodied corpse on the ground.  Slowly... slowly... drifting away.

She was dead... this was it.  She'd wouldn't be there with Kris anymore... she wouldn't be marrying Heiro now... she... she had to face Luna...

A key hanging from a string around her neck catches her eye.  Captain Starkey had administered her last rites... but she was still terrified to face her judgement.  She'd killed... no, murdered two ponies in Coupledye.  What escape was there for her?

She kicks and fights against the invisible force drawing her up into the moonlight, somehow penetrating through the cavern ceiling to frame her dead body.
  "No!" she screams, reaching out for her corpse.  "Not yet!  I can't die now!  Not now!Carrot had fought it... but she was too weak... too tired.  She couldn't fight it...

She looks around desperately, and to her horror, she sees the spirits of more ponies drifting upward.  Including Otik.  No...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 18, 2012, 12:56:37 am
'Her mother, miss Falcata, dead.' the news sinks into Adamant, he hadn't been close to the late captain by any means, but she was one of his family's guards and she'd always treated him well. He was sad to hear of her death, but Kris, 'what does one say to a pony who has just lost their only family?' thinks Adamant. A thousand possible condolences and sympathies comes into his mind, but all felt empty.

Finally he just say, "I'm sorry Kris." as he continues to hold her tight, "Just cry it out, I'm here for you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 18, 2012, 12:59:51 am
The scream reaches Otik's ears. She turns to see Falcata slowly drifting up towards the cavern ceiling.

"Falcata!"

She half-gallops, half-flies to where her corpse lays, and leaps up, trying to grasp her flailing legs.

"N-No, not you too! Don' go, Falcata, fight it!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 18, 2012, 01:12:38 am
Kris does exactly as she is told, crying all over Adamant without care.  She tries to speak several times, but her words come out as chokes and incoherent noises.

*****

"Otik!  Help me, please!"  Falcata reaches out for Otik's hoof, and after several agonizing failures she manages to grab hold.  An instant later the two find themselves snatched back to the ground.  Above them, the spirits of the deceased skyguard drift away, out of sight.

Falcata rights herself and throws her hooves around Otik.
  "Thank you, thank you, thank you... I'm not ready to die yet... I can't..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 18, 2012, 01:19:23 am
Otik clutches Falcata to her chest like a long-lost child.

"I-It's okay, I've got ye... I'm not goin' t'let ye go..."

"I-I tried t'save th' others... I tried t'make them stay, but..."

She buries her face in Falcata's mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 18, 2012, 01:38:20 am
Heiro squeezes Starkey and Friesden again and sputters something unintelligble.  He wipes his eyes and says, "I-I just can't believe it... m-mom and F-Falcata... why... wh-why couldn't it have been me instead?"

*****

Falcata likewise buries her face in Otik's mane, and begins to cry softly.  "I'm sorry Otik... I'm so sorry... they're all dead... and... and we..." she whimpers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 18, 2012, 01:47:40 am
Adamant continues to hold Kris, allowing her to cry on him, he remains quiet not knowing what else to say and thinking it's probably best not to say a thing anyway.

****

'Did...Did I hear that right. Otik and Falcata. Falcata is, no she couldn't be, she's she's just hurt, injured, but then she'd be in here somewhere.' Charity looks around frantically, but alas she sees no sign of her dearest friend, 'it...it can't be. Falcata, DEAD.'

Charity chokes back tears, 'NO! You can't break down like this, not in front of everypony. You're the Duchess, you need to be better than that!'

She walks up to the hugging group of ponies, "Co..Commander Starkey, please give me an update, on, on the situation."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 18, 2012, 02:03:47 am
Starkey is mostly silent now, only the occasional sob escaping his lips. He still holds on to Friesden, now gently stroking her mane. He does not answer Charity.

 - - - - - -

Otik strokes Falcata comfortingly.

"I-It's okay... Yer safe... yer safe now, an' that's wot matters."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 18, 2012, 02:10:19 am
Friesden doesn't know what to say, and just holds them both tightly.

'Mum...Mum...I need you...Please, keep me strong enough for them...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 18, 2012, 02:12:32 am
Falcata is all but trembling in Otik's hooves.  "Th-thank you... so much... I-I couldn't face Luna... she.. she'd turn me away... I know it...She opens her eyes reluctantly, finding that the same hazy gloom filling the room... but...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 18, 2012, 02:20:48 am
Charity doesn't know what to do, the only ponies who might be able to tell her what's happened are all to broken up to tell her. "Starkey, Friesden, Private Heiro, can anypony please tell me whats happened. What happened to Falcata. Please. Is she okay, please tell me she's okay."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 18, 2012, 02:24:02 am
"Charity... Can you please leave, for a bit? Otik and Falcata...Are dead. Please, we need to grieve."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 18, 2012, 02:36:48 am
Charity's back legs give out from under her, forcing her into a sitting position, "She's...She's dead." Charity's eyes are full of tears now, "How, how did this happen. Oh Luna, I, I."

'NO YOU FOAL! Don't you dare cry in front of everypony.'

Charity lies down and tries to hide her face, she is clearly and not very quietly sobbing.

'look at this, what kind of leader are you. What would your father think of you now, or your brothers. A real noble wouldn't break down like this. You are pathetic.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 18, 2012, 02:40:31 am
Friesden's face clouds again.

"Charity? Please? Can you come over here? Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 18, 2012, 02:43:45 am
Charity pulls herself to her feet, and while trying in vain to hide her face from the other ponies, does as Friesden asks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 18, 2012, 02:51:26 am
Friesden throws her foreleg around Charity, bringing her into the hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 18, 2012, 02:55:54 am
As Friesden pulls Charity into the hug, Starkey shakily, tentatively puts a forehoof around her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 18, 2012, 02:59:21 am
Charity allows Friesden and Starkey to bring her into the hug. She tries to master her emotions, but spends several long moments sobbing before she can regain any real sense of control. "...thank you, Friesden. Starkey, I'm sorry, I'm so sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 18, 2012, 05:51:09 pm
A small bell rings in my secret study, alerting me to the alarm being raised.  I look up from my books, interrupted from analyzing the results of an experiment.  I quickly make sure that nothing is going to go haywire before exiting and securing the door, then rush down to the rooms to get my equipment.  Once equipped, I rush towards my post, only to see the alarm is aparently over.  Before I can ask what happened, I see the covered bodies being carried to their resting places.  Cursing myself for not being there to try to help, I make my way towards the hospital.

'She always takes any deaths so hard, even if she didn't know them personally...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 19, 2012, 12:16:19 am
Otik chuckles, "You? No, she wouldnae dare. A pony so brave an' loyal as you... but it isnae yer time."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 19, 2012, 12:29:35 am
((Assuming they either haven't moved Falcata's body yet, or this happens before Khenal gets to the hospital))

Falcata sniffles and nods weakly.  Otik was right... she didn't have to face Luna yet.  She still had a chance to make amends for what she'd done.  They just had to...

She looks aside to see her body still lying in the middle of the eerie glow.  Wait... if they weren't dead, why were they still like this?  Shouldn't they be... reuniting with their bodies?  Or, waking up in their bodies?  Or passing out to wake up in their bodies later?  Or... something?

A concerned expression forms on her face.
  "O-Otik... what... what do we do now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 19, 2012, 12:48:12 am
Otik looks up, noticing the gloom around them.

"Uhm, I'm nae sure... maybe we hafta go back t'our bodies?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 19, 2012, 12:54:23 am
"Uh... good idea, right."  She lets go of Otik and steps over to her body, trying to imagine how this should work.  She prods at her corpse with a hoof, finding her insubstantial spirit passing through her physical body effortlessly.  Worry grows within her.  This... this wasn't right...  She stands over her body, feeling for anything that might give her some hint of how to reunite with it.  Nothing.

"Otik... I... I think..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 19, 2012, 12:56:36 am
"Uhm, ah..."

Otik gallops over to her own corpse, mimicking Falcata's actions, and even trying to lay down within it, to no avail.

"I... I dun' understand..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 19, 2012, 01:36:18 am
"It's too late, I'm afraid..." a masculine voice calls out from one of the side passages in the caverns.  A white unicorn stallion slowly steps into the main cave, a sorrowful look on his face.  "There's nothing you can do now."

Falcata's fur stands on end as she hears the stallion's voice.  She slowly turns her head to bring him into view, her eyes wide and mouth slightly agape.  "Estoc..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 19, 2012, 01:42:49 am
Otik jumps at the sound, turnnig to face the source of the new voice.

"You... yer Estoc, yer..."

"N-No, there's always a way, there hasta be a way!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 19, 2012, 01:50:37 am
He shakes his head.  "I'm sorry, Lieutenant Otik.  The moment your spirits left your bodies, you were already dead.  There was nothing you could have done."  He strides toward them, hanging his head slightly.  "I've seen this more times than I care to remember..."

Falcata continues to stare at him silently for a few moments before taking several uneasy steps toward him.  "Estoc..." she repeats in disbelief.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 19, 2012, 02:32:35 am
"Excuse me, Where's the-"

 "Uh, miss? Where's the-"

 "Please, Sir, my Friend's hurt-"

 "Could someone please, just please, slow down and tell me where the hospital is?" Sigil pleaded.

 Every pony he tried to flag down shirked him off, either preoccupied with another duty or too crushed from the battle's aftermath to help.

 "You! Hey you! was she injured in the battle? Are there more? please, where is my son!?" A mare demanded.

 "A battle? what battle? What are talking about?"
 
 "oh, my son- where's my-" the mare brakes down sobbing.
 
 "where would your son be?"

 "He might be injured, he didn't come back with the other sky guard!"

 "I'll see what I can find out. Need to find a doctor first, though."
 
 The mare looked at him with incredulity.

 "Dr. Friesden's in the hospital you bleed'in Idiot."

 "which Is?"

 "Down the damn hall, and a left! where it's always been!" she shouted.

  "Finally!" Sigil exasperated.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 19, 2012, 03:41:36 am
Sigil walks in the hospital and finds a bed for Willow. Roughneck tucks into a little ball on Willow's chest. Venture looks up from her patient. "Who-" Sigil puts a hoof up. "Eight hours. I'll tell you the whole story in eight hours." he collapses in another bed. Venture looks around at the others. "Who the hell are they?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 19, 2012, 03:45:10 pm
I enter the hospital to see Friesden, Charity and Starkey embracing, and looks like Adamant holding Kris.  The presence of my friends only serves to highlight the absence of two of them.

'...Where's Falcata and Otik?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 19, 2012, 04:01:37 pm
Kris looks up as some ponies she didn't recognize entered the hospital and were placed on or dropped into free hospital beds.  Then Khenal came in, looking around the room with obvious concern.  Her bloodshot eyes meet his for a few moments before she looks away.  She couldn't cry anymore.  There weren't any tears left.  She just felt sick now.

"I... I think I'm going to throw up..."

Throwing up on Master Adamant... what would her mom think of that?  Mom...

She chokes and cringes at the thought, tightening her embrace on Adamant a bit.


*****

Falcata finally reaches Estoc and reaches out with a trembling hoof.  She expected it to pass through him as ineffectually as an illusion, but she finds him solid.  Her hoof rests on his withers and a chill runs through her.  He simply smiles.  "You... you're real... it's really you..."

"Yes, Falcata.  It's me."  He turns to face her instead of Otik.  "I never left your side."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 19, 2012, 04:25:49 pm
"...It's okay Kris." Adamant continues to hold onto her but looks up toward Khenal. "Mister Khenal, I'm afraid that...Captain Falcata, and Captain Otik, won't be coming back. It was, something, in the caverns. a lot of ponies got hurt. I don't know anything more than that. I'm sorry."

((Sorry thought that Khenal was speaking, when he was just thinking to himself.))

"...It's okay Kris." Adamant continues to hold onto her, but looks up toward Khenal when he sees him come in. He looks at Khenal and shakes his head, hoping to convey some information like that, before looking away again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 19, 2012, 05:15:44 pm
'How can one shake of the head say so much?'

I slowly walk over to Friesden, Starkey and Charity and join in the embrace, unable to ask for confirmation of my fears.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 19, 2012, 05:21:03 pm
Friesden brings Khenal into the embrace, her heart hoping to be strong enough for all of them...strong enough to keep them happy, for her mother.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 19, 2012, 10:37:15 pm
Slowly, steadily, Starkey composes himself. His friends, his family need him. He straightens.

"T-Thank you, all of you..."

Starkey pulls Friesden and Heiro to him, clutching them to his chest.

"M-My brave, strong little ponies... I love you both so much..."

'I promise I'll protect them, my love. I'll never let anything happen to them... I swear it.'

 - - - - - -

"N-No... no... no, no no no nonono..."

Otik collapses to the ground, endlessly repeating that single syllable.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 19, 2012, 10:57:27 pm
Heiro accepts Starkey's hug and eagerly adds his strength.  "I l-love you too dad... and sis..."  Heiro looks up as he remembers Kris, and sees her clinging to Adamant.  She hadn't moved from the spot since he arrived.  He swallows hard and returns his attention to the ponies around him.  He was all Kris had left now... although Adamant seemed to be helping her right now at least.

*****

Falcata and Estoc lock eyes for what feels like an eternity.  Abruptly she throws her hooves around his neck and says, "Oh, Estoc... you don't know how much I've missed you..."

He pulls her into a firm but gentle embrace.  "Not as much as I've missed you.  Falcata, you just don't know..."

As Otik collapses and begins to recite her disbelief, the two break away and step over to her.  Both sit next to her and each lays a hoof on her withers.  "I'm so sorry..." Estoc mutters.

Falcata pulls her close, offering a shoulder to cry on if she wanted it.  There weren't words to express how sorry she was... how responsible she felt for this...
  "I'm sorry Otik... this is... if I could..."  Words leave her.  They... they were dead... what comfort was there for somepony who was dead that had so much to live for?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 20, 2012, 12:40:42 am
Friesden gladly hugs her two surviving family members.

'For you, my mother. I will be strong. I will show no pain, the better to aid them.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 20, 2012, 01:39:24 am
Otik's words soon give way to hiccuping sobs. She clings to Falcata, weeping into her mane.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 20, 2012, 01:53:01 am
Falcata lets Otik cry onto her for as long as she wanted.  She clings to her in turn, gently patting her on the back.  Estoc appearing was absolutely unexpected and still quite the shock, but she'd already calmed down a lot just by him being there.

But Otik... she didn't have anypony like that here.  What could she possibly do for her?  This was it... just letting her know she wasn't alone.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 20, 2012, 02:52:30 am
Friesden waits until Khenal falls asleep, and slowly gets out of bed. Quietly making her way from the bedroom, she enters the small adjoining room, and lets the tears she had kept bottled up all day fall. 

"Mum! Mum! Falcata! Why? Why were you taken from me? Why!? I need you, both of you! Please, please come back! I don't have the strength to continue to help dad and Heiro. Please, I need you. Please, just one thing, a small reason to go on, something to keep going? Just that. That's all I need. Please, just help me. I need you more than ever now..."

When the lack of any reply makes its mark upon her expectant silence, her tone changes. "Fine...I'll keep going." No longer her normal tone, it is subdued, defeated. "I'm too tired in my heart anymore...Mum, I can't keep doing this. I can't keep loving you and Falcata. It hurts too much. I can't keep looking for you. I can't. Forgetting is my only defence anymore. Bye...bye mum, bye Falcata..." Slowly and quietly she makes her way back to the bed, and lies down once more.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 20, 2012, 03:16:40 am
Otik falls silent. No amount of screaming, weeping, or pleading could bridge the veil that separated her form her daughter. She couldn't give Friesden the sign she needed no matter how desperately she tried. At Friesden's final words, she sinks to her knees, weeping. She had failed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 20, 2012, 03:29:08 am
The morning after:

Charity awakens early in the morning as usual, and spends an hour working on, well really just staring at, her latest sculpture. It was going to be a gift to Falcata, for her next birthday. After a while she gives up not knowing what to do with it and has some haulers take it to storage. She then goes and wakes up her husband with a kiss. They get properly dressed and go down to the dinning hall. They don't see Khenal there so they assume that he's still at home. They pick up breakfast for themselves and their friend, (sausage and eggs for Charity, Oatmeal and a muffin for Cryptson, and some of Tom's vegetable stew for Khenal and Friesden.) before going to knock on Khenal's door.

"Khenal? It's Charity and Cryptson. We brought breakfast. May we come in?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 20, 2012, 03:43:04 am
Charity knocking on the door wakes me from my restless sleep.  I nuzzle Friesden gently before exiting the bed and answering Charity through the door.

"Of course, come in!  Let me get the door."

My horn glows as I open the door for Charity and Cryptson.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 20, 2012, 03:49:10 am
"Morning Khenal." Says the duchess as she walks through the door. 4 plates of food levitaing in the air behind her are set by her magic upon Khenal and Friesden's table.

Cryptson walks in behind and adds a brief, "morning."

Charity takes a seat and says, "I didn't know what you like to have for breakfast so I brought you some of Tom's vegetable stew. I hope that's okay."

Khenal can't help but notice that Charity seems to be in a fairly good mood considering the recent deaths, either that or she's faking one fairly convincingly.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 20, 2012, 03:55:44 am
Friesden stirs at the sound, and gets up out of bed. As she makes her way to the little dining room they share, she sees Charity and Cryptson.

"Hello duchess. Hello Cryptson," she says, a perfect mask over her feelings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 20, 2012, 04:01:26 am
"Morning Friesden," greets Charity.

Cryptson adds an affirmative grunt. (Still more than he'd give to most ponies.)

She continues, "we brought breakfast if you want some. I need to talk to Khenal, about some business, but you are welcome to join us if you have the time."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 20, 2012, 04:02:23 am
'You aren't fooling me, Charity.  I saw you yesterday.'

Friesden's reaction, however, makes me concerned.  My horn glows as I pull out a seat for Friesden.


"Um, thank you Charity.  Vegetable soups sounds great."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 20, 2012, 04:03:23 am
"I suppose the little make-work at the hospital can wait for now," Friesden says as she takes the seat, in a calm, cool, and collected voice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 20, 2012, 04:07:49 am
"Good. good." Charity's facade is cracked a bit as she solemnly takes a few bites of her food, she then puts her mask back and looks at Khenal. "I, uh, I suppose you know what this is about."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 20, 2012, 04:12:25 am
My concern for Friesden grows, but I don't say anything to her.  At least, not yet.

"Um... no?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 20, 2012, 04:18:31 am
"Ah, you don't. Well. After...after the events of, of yesterday." Charity's ability to hide her emotions has begun to meet it's limit. "With Falcata...gone. Somepony needs to...take her place at my side as Captain of the Ducal Guard, and I see nopony more qualified for that position then you Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 20, 2012, 04:21:21 am
"He is indeed eminently suited. Indeed, with Falcata's death I doubt anypony in the fort could match him."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 20, 2012, 04:25:36 am
I spit my soup back in the bowl in surprise and cough a bit.

*Cough*"Me?  Why not *Cough* Osal and Madush?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 20, 2012, 04:29:01 am
"They're neither as smart nor as capable as you, Khenal."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 20, 2012, 04:32:33 am
"And why not you? You are one of my closest friends, you are a strong pony and great fighter, plus your magic gives you an advantage that Osal and Madush can't possibly match. It isn't that I don't trust either of them. I trust both of them with my life. I just think you would be best for the job. If you don't want the position, then I can ask Osal, the Sisters know the fool has earned it too over the years, with all he's been through, but you are my first choice Khenal and I hope you will take it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 20, 2012, 04:40:51 am
I shift in my seat, uncomfortable with the praise being lumped upon me.

"Then... then I'll do my best, Charity."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 20, 2012, 04:48:21 am
"I'm very glad to hear that Captain." Charity forces a smile. "Now for the second order of business. My guard is down to only 3 ponies. I'd like to at least double, maybe triple, that amount. I was going to speak with Falcata about this later this week, but..." Charity looks away for a moment and then turns back, "You built the Fortress Guard out of nothing 4 years ago, and did a wonderful job. Do you think you could do that again?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 20, 2012, 04:51:58 am
"Like I said, I'll do my best, Charity."

I give a small smile, hoping to hide my unease at being promoted.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 20, 2012, 04:53:58 am
Friesden remans silent as she continues to eat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 20, 2012, 03:56:50 pm
((Advancing the plot a bit and covering some gaps.  Impending Doom, if you'd prefer that I change any of the details involving Otik, let me know.))

Falcata sits in silence as she watches the conversation unfold, feeling only the reassuring rub of her husband's hoof on her back.

She'd made it a point to avoid going anywhere private where she might see or hear things she didn't want to, but when she stumbled across Charity visiting Khenal, the curiosity got the best of her.  She'd lost track of Otik since the night before, after she and Estoc had done the best they could to calm her down.  Being dead was very hard on her, as it reasonably would be for just about anypony.  Estoc was here for her, but Otik didn't have anypony.  For that matter, she felt terrible for not being with Otik right now, wherever she was.


"Well... it looks like they're handling this reasonably well," Estoc says as he watches along.

"Yeah..."  After Otik had calmed down the night before, she and Estoc had had a long talk.  He'd been following her since the moment he died, and had been there with her, unseen, for every hardship she or Kris had been through.  For six years he'd been following her, unwilling to move on to his eternal reward until she could join him.  But she wasn't ready to leave yet.  She couldn't go until she knew her friends and daughter would be okay without her.  Not that there was much she could do... but it would give her a lot of peace of mind.  Estoc readily agreed, concerned as he was for their daughter himself.

Lady Charity seemed to be taking it about as well as she expected.  Her sudden passing had shocked the duchess and left her in a bad position.  She was probably a little upset, but she was doing well.  That was good.  And she was back to business as usual, promoting the pony she felt best to take her position.  Lord Cryptson was unchanged, as far as she could tell, which was of no surprise.

Khenal seemed to be handling it well too.  Perhaps their time spent together in combat had toughened him a bit in that respect.  You had to expect that your comrades at arms might die.  She'd have probably been crushed by his passing, but then her emotions ran all over her these days.  Khenal was a lot stronger than her, and he was handling it well.  That was good.  She didn't have to worry about him.

Friesden was a surprise.  As easily as she got upset by things, she'd been terrified that Friesden would have been inconsolable at the simultaneous loss of herself and Friesden's adoptive mother.  But she seemed to be handling this amazingly well.  A hint of sadness wells up within her at the thought that even Friesden didn't seem to be all that upset at her loss, but something seemed off.  There had been at least a hint of unhappiness in Charity's voice, but Friesden seemed to be unfazed.  If nothing else, she was sure that Otik's death should have hit her hard.

She sighs, and Estoc gives her another reassuring rub.


"At least I don't think I've got to worry about Friesden... I was concerned she might hurt herself after Otik died... but she seems fine."

Estoc pulls her closer and gives her a gentle nuzzle.  "They're hurting more than they show... but I think you're right."  He sighs himself.  "Let's go see if we can find Kris and see how she's doing.  Hopefully she's taking this as well as the others."

"I hope..."

She worried most about Kris of course.  They also needed to find Otik.  Those still alive seemed to be handling this a lot better than she would have in their position, but Otik had taken this horribly.  She wasn't sure if Friesden taking this well would be a good or bad thing to Otik.  But she needed to know.  Maybe they would be able to convince Otik to move on with them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 20, 2012, 09:36:53 pm
In the hospital that day, Friesden works quietly, efficiently, and without rest, almost as if a robot.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 12:41:28 am
Falcata watches quietly as Friesden works in the hospital.  Something was off about her.  Friesden was probably the most sincere pony she knew, and for somepony that seemed to love her adoptive mother as much as she did, and cared for her as much as she seemed to, she was taking this amazingly well.  The cool, uncaring expression she perpetually wore worried her.  Friesden wasn't right.  Whether she was just bottling up her feelings, or it was something worse, she didn't know... but she was worried.

She lets out a sigh and steps closer to Friesden, trying to read her face for any hints of emotion.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 21, 2012, 12:45:52 am
Venture quietly works alongside Friesden, though she occasionally glances at Falcata as they work.  After finishing changing the dressing on a wound, she speaks up.

"Friesden?  I'm going to take a quick break, I need to check on something."

She looks directly at Falcata this time, and slightly nods her head to the door before leaving through it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 21, 2012, 12:47:11 am
"Hmmm? Oh, yes. Go ahead."

Friesden doesn't seem to show any emotion at this.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 12:51:52 am
Falcata cocks her head quizically as Venture looks at her periodically, but brushes it off as just coincidence.  But that last look... unmistakable.  Could she see her somehow?  Curious, she steps through the wall into the room Venture indicated.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 21, 2012, 12:55:27 am
Venture bows slightly to Falcata as she walks through the wall.  Her lips don't move as she addresses Falcata.

*You've noticed the change in her also, Colonel Falcata?*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 12:58:21 am
Falcata starts visibly as Venture bows before her and speaks.  That did not feel right.  No wonder Charity didn't like it.

"Venture... you... you can see me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 21, 2012, 01:02:45 am
Venture gives a small, reassuring smile.

*Yes, I can.  It's a... gift, I suppose...*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 01:07:23 am
"I... I see..."

Falcata swallows hard.  This was an opportunity she couldn't have expected... she'd be able to talk to everypony through Venture!  She'd be able to set things straight... and so could Otik!

"But, yes... I've noticed something is wrong with her... she seems to be handling the death of her mother... differently... than I expected."

As she speaks, Estoc enters the room with Otik in tow.  "Falcata, there you are.  I was wondering where you'd gotten off to."  He looks around and sees only Venture in the room.  "What are you doing in here?  How is Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 21, 2012, 01:32:33 am
Otik silently moves to Falcata, leaning against her.

"H-Hey, Falcata. Starkey's... doin' alright, I s'pose."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 01:37:40 am
She nods and gives Otik a small, nervous smile.  "That's good to hear.  I'm worried about Friesden though..."  She looks back to Venture.  "Venture... has she said anything to you?  Done anything particularly unusual?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 21, 2012, 01:41:18 am
Venture gives a small bow to Otik as well.

*Captain Otik.  No, Falcata, she hasn't said anything, which is the troubling part.  She's being unusual in her lack of reaction.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 01:54:30 am
"Yes... that's what I was worried about.  I'd have thought that she would be inconsolable about this... it's not healthy to keep this to herself..."

Estoc's eyes snap open and his jaw drops as he realizes what's going on.  He looks at Venture.  "You... you can see us?  And talk to us?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 21, 2012, 02:14:22 am
Venture nods to Estok.

*Yes, I can.  I'm sorry to have ignored you all this time.  I try not to interfere usually, but I had to talk to Falcata.*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 02:27:53 am
Estoc is speechless.  He simply stares at her.  All this time... he could have been talking to Falcata through her?  To Kris?  So many awful nights where Falcata felt like she was alone... she didn't have to be...  But then he could hardly expect Venture to be his eternal mouthpiece.  Still... the chance to talk to Falcata or Kris before all of this...  Wait!  He could still talk to Kris!  They just had to get past this first...

"I... understand..." he says at last.

Falcata looks to him with a small frown before looking to Otik.
  "I think we need to talk to her... but I don't know what to say..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 21, 2012, 03:01:59 am
"I... I dunnae know wot I'd say t'her, but... I'll try."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 21, 2012, 03:12:40 am
*Trying is all I can ask.  I'll cast a spell to make Friesden aware of you if you're ready?*

Venture returns to the main room of the hospital.


"Friesden?  May I cast a spell on you?  I think it might help you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 21, 2012, 03:18:19 am
Friesden doesn't even look up from her work. "If you must."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 21, 2012, 03:24:39 am
Venture's horn glows a dark purple as she casts her spell.  Friesden feels her awareness shift, like her eyes have somehow found a new way to focus.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 03:27:28 am
Estoc looks to Falcata.  "I think it's probably best if I stay here... she doesn't know me."

Falcata nods and reluctantly leaves him, stepping through the wall into the main hospital again.  She sees Friesden working away at something, not looking in her direction.  "Friesden?" she calls, unsure of quite what to say or do.  There was no response.  "Friesden, can you hear me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 21, 2012, 03:29:20 am
At the first call, Friesden freezes. At the second, she turns up, and sees Falcata.

"What?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 03:37:15 am
Falcata slowly approaches her.  She didn't know what to say or do.  Would this frighten Friesden?  Would she even believe this?  "Um... Friesden?  I... I was watching you just now... and I was worried about you... "

That was smooth.  But what were you supposed to tell one of your best friends who knew you were dead?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 21, 2012, 03:43:32 am
"No...you're dead. This isn't real. This is an illusion, isn't it, Venture? Why are you doing this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 03:48:01 am
Falcata slowly shakes her head.  "No... I'm not an illusion Friesden.  Venture is just helping you see me."  She continues to walk toward her slowly.  "I... I didn't move on when I died.  I had too much left here..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 21, 2012, 03:48:48 am
"You are dead. You're not real. What the hay are you doing, Venture?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 03:57:36 am
Falcata steps up to her, a worried look on her face.  What could she say or do to convince Friesden this wasn't Venture's doing?  Something only the two of them knew?  It was a long shot... but it was all she knew to try...

"Friesden... it's really me.  Do you remember what you told me that day?"  She points off a bit to a spot next to a bed where Khenal had been placed the day she gave him a concussion.  "Right there, when you told me something I'd have never believed.  When you told me not only had you saved my life, but I'd saved yours as well?  Just by accepting your gift, and showing you how much you meant?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 21, 2012, 03:59:31 am
"F-Falcata?" Hesitantly Friesden extends her hoof and touches Falcata, and her face lights up. "It is you! It is you!"

She throws her forelegs around her and hugs her tight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 21, 2012, 04:04:56 am
Falcata's face beams at the sight of Friesden coming around.  She eagerly accepts the hug and adds a squeeze of her own.  "Yes, it's really me Friesden."  She takes a long breath to settle her nerves, now that she'd gotten past the hardest part.  "Your mother is here too.  Would you like to speak with her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 21, 2012, 04:07:42 am
"Yes! Yes! Mum! Mum!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 21, 2012, 04:12:01 am
Otik pokes her head through the wall.

"F-Fri?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 21, 2012, 04:12:59 am
"Mum!"

Friesden runs up to her and kisses her.

"You're back, you're back, you're back!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 22, 2012, 03:55:36 am
Otik returns the kiss gratefully, wrapping Friesden in her hooves.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 22, 2012, 03:57:24 am
"Wh-wh-why did you have to leave?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 22, 2012, 04:00:13 am
"I... I'm sorry Fri, I didnae want t'go, I tried so hard t'stay, but... I failed ye... I'm so sorry Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 22, 2012, 04:03:21 am
"But...You're staying, right? You won't be leaving again?" Friesden holds Otik tight.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 22, 2012, 02:11:55 pm
((I'm bored, so long post ahoy!  Edited for more angst and length!))

That struck home.  What were they going to do now?  She was torn on what she wanted to do.  Before she knew she could potentially talk to everypony, she just wanted to make sure they would all be alright.  Then she'd go face whatever there was for her in the afterlife.  She wasn't sure she could stand the thought of watching something terrible happen to her friends or family and be powerless to help them.  Estoc had always been a solid and stoic stallion, but it was amazing that even he could have withstood everything she and Kris must have put him through.

That had been an emotional conversation.  The two of them had cried into each others' manes for what felt like hours.  He'd seen everything that she'd done and been through.  Every night she spent in jail.  When she killed Slim Pickings.  When she murdered Lifty and Shifty.  When she was banished here.  The night she nearly took her own life on the tower.  The forgotten beast that had given her the terminal stomach decay.  Every night she'd spent alone crying about that.  When Friesden saved her life.  When Kris was hurt in the woods with Lilac.  When she was nearly taken away by the diomedians.  When Couth Darkmane had nearly killed her by protecting Charity.  Her promotion.  Courting Heiro.  Getting engaged to Heiro.  And finally the forgotten beast that did kill her.  He'd been right beside her every step of the way.

In the five years she spent married with him, she'd never seen him cry so much.  Not even the day his brother died.  He'd gone on to tell her just how tormenting it was to watch her go through all of this alone, knowing he couldn't help her.  The thought of being reunited with her was the only thing that had kept him going all of these years.

She wasn't that strong.  She'd have lost her mind long, long before now.  And he made it no small secret to her that he was ready to go on.  He didn't want to watch her suffer any more, and even though she was dead now and could never feel physical pain again... if something terrible happened to Kris... or Heiro, Friesden, Khenal, or even Charity, Cryptson or Starkey, she didn't know if she could take it.

She didn't want to stay.  She couldn't.  She wanted to be here for Kris, especially, and all of her friends, but she was weary.  Estoc had weathered six years of this alone, but she wouldn't be able to.  She thought about staying until Kris finally was able to join them, but if that happened violently, as it likely would... she just couldn't take that.  Estoc agreed.  He didn't want to see her suffer any more either.  And even if Kris by some miracle managed to live on to an elderly age without getting seriously hurt or killed, could she stand to go on in this half-existence for decades?  Even with her husband and friend?

One day they would be together again.  If Luna spared her soul and let her past the gates, they would all be together again one day.  When it wouldn't matter any more.  Where they would never feel pain again, and never have to cry again.  But today wasn't that day.  Today, she just felt like crying all over again.   How could she leave now?  She couldn't leave Friesden behind... it would crush her now.  And she knew Otik wasn't going to want to leave, and she couldn't leave her to the fate Estoc had endured for so long.

Her ears droop as she tries to keep her face steady.  What was she going to do?  She realizes something that drives a spike through her heart.  There wasn't an answer that kept everypony happy.  She could stay behind with Otik, but she couldn't possibly ask Venture to be burdened with the task of relaying everything she wanted to tell her friends and family.  That would keep Friesden, Kris, Otik and Heiro happy.  But she and Estoc would have to go on like this for so long... maybe forever, if Kris joined them to look after her own possible descendants... and Venture surely wouldn't like it.  And what if something happened to her?

Or she could leave them.  Friesden would be sad.  Maybe if Kris never knew she could even talk to her, she'd be alright, but Friesden would probably tell her.  Then she'd want to know why she hadn't stayed behind with her.  Or Heiro... what would he think?  And if she did talk to Kris or Heiro before leaving... they'd want her to stay.  She'd want to stay.  But she couldn't... she just couldn't do it...

Celestia help her, she wanted to be selfish.  Just this once.  She'd given so much to try and keep everypony else happy while she was alive, why couldn't she ask that of them, this one time?

Because she couldn't.  She didn't have the spine to stand up for what she wanted.  She never had, and never would.  Already she felt a hollow gnawing feeling within her.  The sort she got when she knew she was going to agree to do something to keep everypony but her happy, possibly for a long time.  A very, very long time...

Maybe at least everypony else would be happy.  That was all that mattered.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 23, 2012, 02:27:23 am
((Double posting because I'm an impatient bad boy))

Inside Falcata's home, buried deep under long forgotten sheets, clothes and other things of no consequence, a magical chest unlocks.  Falcata's passing from the world has broken the spell holding it shut, and it slowly opens, revealing a stack of neatly arranged letters.  The letters gently float from the chest before vanishing into the air, appearing throughout the fort.

The next time Charity enters her office, she finds a stack of letters sitting on the desk, topped by one using stationary that hasn't been used except by the fortress guard from years ago.  The letter is addressed to her, dated for 12th Sandstone, 99.  Inside, the letter reads:

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Beneath the letter is exactly as Falcata wrote: dozens of letters addressed to ponies in Coupledye.  Dated for every month from Falcata's arrival in Glitterglen until the last month of her life.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 23, 2012, 03:05:42 am
Charity's eyes tear up as she reads through the old letter. That date, that was the day before she offered Falcata the promotion to the Fortress Guard. About a year and a half ago. 'So much has changed since then, and Kris wasn't as young as she had been, but maybe she'd still want to go be with her surviving family.' Charity takes the stacks of letters and places them in a box. 'I should write them something, but first perhaps I should ask Kris what she wants to do. If she wants to leave then Adamant won't be happy, but, she needs to know she has the option.'

Charity's eyes drift across the room to Falcata's hammer, sitting on the shelf, still dirty with blood and mud from it's last battle. Suddenly Charity knows what she must do.

Charity grasps the hammer and cleans and shines it to a gleaming polish, as bright as the day Ironya crafted it in the flames of the magma sea. She couldn't see the word Loyalty anywhere upon it. Hadn't Khenal said it had appeared on her weapon? 'Strange that it has vanished as quick as it came.'

When finished she made her way across the hall to Falcata's old home, where Kris still lived. The room was empty so, she unlocked the door and went inside. On Kris's bed she lay the hammer and a scroll. The letter read as follows.


Spoiler: To Kris (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 23, 2012, 02:00:06 pm
((I'm not sure if we're done with the hospital scene or not.  At some point we've got to resolve Otik wanting to stay and Falcata not wanting to stay.  Anyway, Dsarker requested Friesden's letter, so here it goes.  It's not as long as most of the others because Falcata didn't have a whole lot of interaction with her, but I suspect it'll get some reaction from her anyway.  I'll get Starkey's up soon / next.  He just has to read it before he has a chance to talk to Falcata, if we're still going to do that.

Oh, and no idea if there's a separate bed for each of Khenal and Friesden, but that's what I'm going with.))

In Khenal and Friesden's room, there is a faint crackle of displaced air as two letters appear.  The letters slowly drift down onto each pony's bed.

The letter to Khenal is dated for 1st Sandstone, 99, and reads:


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The letter to Friesden is dated for 3rd Sandstone, 99, and reads:

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

*****

Kris slowly trudges up to the door to her... no, her mother's home.  Lady Charity had gifted it to her mother for her selflessness, but now that she was gone Kris no longer had any claim to it.  She wasn't sure she wanted to live there now anyway.  She'd spent the last night in the hospital because she didn't think she could stand to sleep in the room without her mom being there.  But she had to come and sort her things out eventually.  She sighs.  Might as well be now.  She'd go speak with the duchess later about having her things moved to wherever she ended up next.

With significant effort she manages to soldier on and open the door, finding the room as empty as she expected.  Nothing had moved since the previous morning when she said goodbye to her mom to head off to her combat drills with Grandpa Starkey.  Her mom's bed was just like she'd left it.  The sheets were slightly unsettled but mostly in order, just like they were every morning after her mom dragged herself out of bed.  Everything of her mother's laid about as if nothing had happened.  As if she would return that night like she always had, to gently hang her weapons and armor on their stands before she stretched out on her bed for a few minutes.  Then they would go get something to eat and talk about their days, maybe talk to her new dad, maybe not.  Then they would come back home, and before long they'd be in bed.

Her eyes stay fixed on her mother's bed.  Tears begin to well up from within her, and she looks away.  She didn't want to have to feel this much pain every time she came home.  Maybe it would be for the best that she had to move.  Maybe then she'd forget about her mom.  A new burst of tears fall from her cheeks at the thought.  How horrible.  She never wanted to forget her mom.  She couldn't have asked for a better mother.  Her mother had loved her so much... even the times she'd done such hurtful things to her mom like following Lilac into the woods... her mom always just hugged her and told her how upset it had made her, but that no matter what she would always love her.

Kris steps over to her own bed, head low and eyes on the floor.  What was she going to do?  Maybe Lady Charity would let her keep something of her mother's to remember her by.  But what?  She collapses onto her bed and buries her face in the pillow, not wanting to really think about anything right now.  She would just lay there until somepony came by and told her she had to leave.  She didn't want to go... she didn't want to forget her mom.

Then something heavy and metallic slides across the sheets to the dip she formed and bumps into her.  She looks up to see her mother's magnificent silver hammer lying next to her on the bed, adjacent to a scroll with the ornate seal of Charity's personal stationary.  Hesitantly, she takes the scroll and opens it up.  The tears that had soaked her pillow return to her eyes as she reads the scroll.  She carefully rolls the parchment back up and seals it before taking her mother's hammer in her magic.  For what felt like hours she stares at her reflection in the gleaming silver surface... yes.  Yes... this hammer meant so much to her mother... to have it...

She stands from the bed and replaces her own hammer with her mother's.  Her eyes track around the room for some time, picking out everything.  This was all hers now.  She didn't have to forget her mom.  Every day when she returned home she would remember her, and all the good times they had together.

With a bit more energy, Kris makes for the doorway.  She had to find Lady Charity and thank her properly for such a wonderful gift.  There was nothing more she could have asked for.

As she leaves, a magical letter reappears in the room, nestling on her bed.


((Kris gets to read her letter later, when it'll have even more emotional impact on her, hehe))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 23, 2012, 04:34:21 pm
"I..."

Otik looks away, keeping her hold on Friesden.

"Friesden, I'm not back. I'm still... But I willnae leave ye! I willnae move on, I'll stay here an' be with ye, even if ye cannae see me all th' time..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 23, 2012, 04:56:11 pm
"You're...But...Okay. I can... You'll be here, right? I can... I can be okay with only seeing you some of the time. Just as long as you're here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 23, 2012, 08:04:31 pm
Otik tightens her grip on Friesden.

"Aye, I'll be here. I'll a-always be here..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 23, 2012, 08:07:06 pm
Friesden tightens her own grip. "O-okay. I can. I can deal with that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 24, 2012, 12:03:44 am
I sit on my bed, again reading the Book of the Sisters to try to help cope with Falcata's passing.  The crackle of a minor teleportation spell pulls me from it, and I watch two letters gently float down on my and Friesden's beds.  Curious, I open the one addressed to me and read it.  Then read it again, convinced it can't be about me.  After the third time, I slowly lower it, dumbfounded.

'Am... Am I finally starting to... atone?'

I shake my head, trying to dislodge the thought.

'No, I can't atone for the Asylum!  How can she think I'm a "good example of a pony" with all the harm I've caused?'

I hang my head and sigh.

'She's the good pony... maybe I'm on the right track now?  But that doesn't mean I cant fall off... can't fall down that slippery slope again, can't let the Asylum happen again.'

I read the letter one more time, a few tears falling as I finish it again.

'I'll try to be that good pony, Falcata...'

I carefully put away my letter, and look at the 2nd one, noticing it's addressed to Friesden.  I carefully levitate it with me as I head to the hospital.  Maybe Falcata's letter to her will help her through this...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 12:22:32 am
Falcata feels another tearing at her heart as she hears Otik confirm that she'd never leave.  What was she going to do?  Could she possibly stay with them?  What would Estoc say?  Would he leave her?  Or could they get through this together?  Her head lowers slightly as she ponders.  What... what was she going to do?

Her train of thought is interrupted by Khenal entering the hospital.  This was about to get very, very interesting... then something catches her eye.  A letter.  Why did it look familiar?

Her jaw drops as she realizes where it came from.  No... she'd forgotten about them... and now... now everypony...


*****

Not long after Khenal and Friesden's letters arrived at their recipients' home, there is a faint pop of displaced air in Starkey and Otik's cabin as another letter materializes in the air.  A letter slowly drifts down to land on Starkey.  The letter is dated for 7th Sandstone, 99, and reads:

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 24, 2012, 01:05:56 am
As I enter the hospital, I see Venture standing off to the side, and what looks like Friesden hugging nothing.  In fact, hugging and leaning heavily on nothing.

"Uh..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 01:07:49 am
Friesden looks at the door as Khenal comes in, and drags Otik over to him. "Khenal! Khenal! Otik's here!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 24, 2012, 01:19:54 am
"Fri... he canne see me. Ah, Venture... could ye cast th' spell on Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 01:20:59 am
"Khenal, you can see mum, right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 24, 2012, 01:25:21 am
'Well, it certainly looks like she's dragging around an invisible pony...'

"Um, no, actually."

Venture smiles and approaches me, her horn glowing a deep purple.

"Khenal, may I expand your awareness?"

"Um... ok?"

Otik fades into view as the spell is completed, and my eyes widen in surprise.

"Otik...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 01:32:25 am
Falcata eyes the letter Khenal held nervously and ponders for a moment if she should go hide somewhere where nopony could find her.  She didn't remember exactly what the letters contained... but they were things she felt she couldn't tell ponies to their faces.  Celstia and Luna help her...

Then Venture casts her spell on Khenal.  He could see her now, and it was too late to run.  What was she going to say now?  Had he read his letter yet?  Friesden hadn't read hers yet... she was probably going to read it right here in front of everypony... what had she written anyway?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 24, 2012, 01:33:15 am
"Aye. An' Falcata too. We... havnae moved on yet. an' t'be honest, I dunnae plan to."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 24, 2012, 01:40:49 am
'They haven't moved on, and Otik doesn't plan to?  Falcata's here?  Oh, her letter!'

My gaze shifts to Friesden as I levitate the letter for her to take.


"Um, Falcata wrote us each a letter, Friesden.  This one is yours."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 07:15:58 am
Friesden goes over to Khenal and opens the letter. After she starts to read, new tears form in her eyes. She turns around and runs to Falcata, hugging her tight. "Please, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I should have been there, I should have died, not you, I'm sorry. I'm sorry! I'm sorry! Please, tell me you forgive me, please."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 09:35:46 am
Falcata returns the hug and shakes her head.  "Friesden, you've done nothing wrong, but I'd forgive you of anything."  She sighs.  "If you had died... I'd have never forgiven myself... I'm the only one to blame here..."

Her eyes settle on the letter Friesden just read before drifting back up to Khenal.  "I... suppose you've read yours already?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 24, 2012, 01:38:18 pm
"Yes, Falcata, I have.  I... I don't know what to say."

I approach and hug her and Friesden, trying to fight back the tide of emotions.

"I... I guess I should start with 'Thank you'."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 02:10:38 pm
The apprehension she felt melts away as Khenal hugs her and Friesden.  Well, that was two ponies she'd managed to not alienate in death at least.  She'd written letters to a few others too though...

She forms a small smile and says,
"Oh... um, you're welcome.  It's been so long now, I'd forgotten about them altogether.  I barely even remember what I wrote..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 05:21:08 pm
Friesden hugs Falcata even tighter. "Thank you, thank you, thank you. I...Maybe...Should I join you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 24, 2012, 05:58:37 pm
((I've been considering joining this for a while, possibly as [50. Female unicorn ranger/markspony] under the name Traphe. Before I do so, though, I'd like to get a feeling for the history and relations of the fortress. Any suggestions of whereabouts to start, apart from "read the whole thing"?  :))))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 24, 2012, 06:13:21 pm
((Reading the whole thing would be best.  However, if you don't have a week that you dont know what to do with, I could try to summarize.  I'll be forgetting a lot, though.

Charity is in charge, Dutchess right now, I think.  She's a unicorn.  Starkey is the resident bad-flank with an axe and is in charge of the military.  Otik (recently deceased) was his love and is currently doing a small bit of haunting to help her friends.  They both are pegasi.  Falcata (also recently deceased) was captain of the Ducal guard until she got killed by a Forgotten Beast.  She's another unicorn.  Friesden is the resident surgeon and has a lot of depression stemming from a very bad foalhood.  Friesden is also Khenal's love and she's a pegasus.  Khenal is an alicorn and has had a fairly complicated past as well.  He's also hopelessly in love with Friesden.

There's a lot of stuff I'm leaving out, but there's a basic view.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 24, 2012, 06:26:25 pm
((Thanks. I don't have too much to do this weekend, so I might just binge-read the most recent 60-80ish pages. I'd appreciate having the pony I picked renamed and claimed, though.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 06:28:31 pm
((That's a decent summary of the current state of affairs, heh.  There's an absolutely mind boggling amount of details, as you'd probably expect from a 9300+ reply thread.  Not sure what all I can really add to Khenal's summary except to bring up two other characters:  Kris, who is Falcata's daughter and only surviving family, who I will be picking up after her death.  She's in the militia.  Then there's Heiro who was played by JaxtalMK2 who is no longer part of the fort.  The relationships between Starkey, Otik, Friesden and Heiro are complicated to say the least.

Ninjaed: Yeah, the last 60-80 pages ought to give a decent idea of what's going on right now at least.))

Falcata gives Friesden a concerned glance.  Surely she didn't mean...  "Join me... Friesden, what do you mean?"  Best not to put that thought into her head on the off chance she was talking about something else.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 24, 2012, 07:07:59 pm
((I've been considering joining this for a while, possibly as [50. Female unicorn ranger/markspony] under the name Traphe. Before I do so, though, I'd like to get a feeling for the history and relations of the fortress. Any suggestions of whereabouts to start, apart from "read the whole thing"?  :))))

Welcome to the herd. I looked at our unicorn ranger/markspony mare, and she has no friends or relatives in the fort, and is a member of the Fortress Guard, and has been since she immigrated here and was drafted to serve under then Captain of the Guard Khenal. She's a master markspony and expert archer. A good choice I'd say, if you want her.

If you want a good idea of the fort I'd suggest reading the first 5 to 10 pages in addition to the last 60-80. They will probably take you a while as that was before all the RP started so they are nearly all Journal entries, but they introduce a lot of the characters. The RP doesn't take off until sometime around page 10.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 08:55:52 pm
"To die, of course."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 09:01:50 pm
((That ought to get Khenal and Otik's attention, hehe))

Her eyes snap open.  She wasn't really surprised, but somehow the expression forced itself onto her face anyway.  Quickly she shakes her head and squeezes Friesden in the group hug.  "No, no, no... Friesden, please... that's the last thing I'd want you to do.  I need you to stay here with everypony who's left."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 09:11:02 pm
"But...But you saved my life, and I couldn't save yours. It's the least I could do..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 09:24:31 pm
She holds the embrace and shakes her head again.  "No, Friesden... you've already saved my life once, that's more than I could have asked for in the first place."  She pulls back a bit to look Friesden in the face.  "If you want to do me a favor, then stay here with Khenal and everypony else.  They don't want you to leave them, and I don't want you to leave them."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 24, 2012, 09:28:04 pm
((I've been considering joining this for a while, possibly as [50. Female unicorn ranger/markspony] under the name Traphe. Before I do so, though, I'd like to get a feeling for the history and relations of the fortress. Any suggestions of whereabouts to start, apart from "read the whole thing"?  :))))

Welcome to the herd. I looked at our unicorn ranger/markspony mare, and she has no friends or relatives in the fort, and is a member of the Fortress Guard, and has been since she immigrated here and was drafted to serve under then Captain of the Guard Khenal. She's a master markspony and expert archer. A good choice I'd say, if you want her.

If you want a good idea of the fort I'd suggest reading the first 5 to 10 pages in addition to the last 60-80. They will probably take you a while as that was before all the RP started so they are nearly all Journal entries, but they introduce a lot of the characters. The RP doesn't take off until sometime around page 10.

((Okay, I'll give the initial journal entries a read as well. I've just finished with the most recent ~300 posts, or everything from the initial wedding plans till now. Basically just looking for a place to start RPing from.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 09:43:42 pm
((Hello FD.))



"But...Are you sure? I don't want you to be alone..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 24, 2012, 10:03:39 pm
Traphe watched the red glow of the setting sun bathe the jungle, her hooves resting on the battlements, crossbow propped up beside her.

Sisters, I know I've never been close to anyone here. Sure, I was relieved to get out of prison, even if only for a colony in the middle of this jungle, but even after all these years, I can't say that I've made any friends. Perhaps that's for the best, seeing what that lot in the hospital were like after the survivors brought back word of what happened.

Maybe it's wrong, but even with all the time I've spend in these halls, I still feel like a stranger, I still feel more at home out there, patrolling the jungle, nothing but my crossbow to rely on. So be it, now isn't the time for weakness.


But... Is friendship weakness? Love?



With a sigh, she slings her crossbow on her back, heading for the stairs.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 10:50:01 pm
"It's okay, Friesden.  I'm not alone."  She looks up past her to the room she'd spoken to Venture in and says, "Estoc?  Could you come here?"

After a moment the stallion steps through the wall into the room.  He looks to Khenal before his eyes meet Falcata's.  "What is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 10:54:34 pm
"Wh-who is this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 11:01:43 pm
Estoc gives her a warm smile.  "My name is Estoc.  I'm Falcata's husband."

Falcata nods.  "Yes... we met again yesterday after... well, you know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 11:06:45 pm
"But...my brother..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 24, 2012, 11:14:40 pm
A hint of unease flashes across both ponies' faces.  Estoc nods and steps up beside them.  "Yes, Falcata was engaged to Heiro... but I was married to her eleven years ago."  He places a hoof on Falcata's back, his frown growing slightly.  "I suppose it's all academic at this point anyway though."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 24, 2012, 11:44:08 pm
"But...How...Why? If you loved Estoc...why did...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 25, 2012, 12:02:00 am
Falcata sighs and looks aside, frowning.  She tries to speak up but only stammers something.  Estoc gives her a reassuring pat.  "It's alright Falcata, we talked about this."

She nods weakly.  "I... oh, this sounds terrible... but I didn't really believe... that after you died that... I mean... I never thought I'd see him again."  She looks off aimlessly.  "I was lonely... and Heiro was so supportive.  He was in love with me, and after he saved Kris... I... I..."  She idly leans her head against Estoc's neck and mutters something under her breath.

"It's alright..." Estoc assures her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 25, 2012, 12:09:34 am
"Well... I... You loved him, right? You still...You love him still?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 25, 2012, 12:19:30 am
She is silent for a few moments.  Estoc seemed so understanding about this, but she knew it had to hurt him.  She'd probably be hurt if he'd taken another wife if she'd passed on before him.  Even if she didn't show it.  That had to be how he really felt.  But there was no denying what she felt too.

Eventually, she nods.
  "Yes, I do."

She feels Estoc's rubbing pause momentarily as she responds, but it resumes immediately.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 25, 2012, 12:27:46 am
"Then...Then...Then that's okay. I...I wish I could join you...But...If you don't want me to... I'll stay behind. Just...I don't know. I wish I had died instead of you...all three of you. You deserve life more than me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 25, 2012, 01:06:37 am
Otik rushes up and hugs Friesden again.

"No, Fri... dunnae say that. None o' us here is any better than you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 25, 2012, 02:46:57 am
((Hm. Considering it, the plot/relationship web here may be a little too well developed for a new person to enter it; I think I may try Dawnpick instead, as it has a much shorter history.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 25, 2012, 01:11:26 pm
((That's understandable, I was hesitant to join almost 400 pages ago.  But I think we're all willing to help you out if you want to stay!  If you do decide to join Dawnpick, the pony list in its first post should be up to date, minus a few of the more recent foals.))

Falcata shakes her head.  "No, Friesden, none of us deserve life more than any of the others."  Although, truth be told she'd probably committed worse crimes than Friesden, having killed several ponies while she was quite sane.  No need to bring that up.  "You all mean the world to me.  And we'll all be together again one day."

((Just realized that we're kind of already speaking as if Falcata has told everypony she wasn't hanging around.  I don't know if that's already happened... what with Otik not wanting to be alone.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 25, 2012, 03:20:35 pm
((Hmm. Though about it overnight, and I'll stay. Just trying to think of a way to get involved that isn't obnoxious, barring extraordinary circumstances ingame. I'll continue for a while, but if 100 pages later, I'm still essentially RPing a mare thinking about things and talking to herself with no real interactions, I may drop out, as that would essentially be a pointless waste of time.))


Journal:  [Date is smeared and scratched out]


Ah, what does it matter? I've been here too long for the month or year to have much bearing on my life. Things are still uncertain, after the losses in the caverns. Perhaps... if I had been down there, hunting or patrolling, maybe I would have noticed that beast and been able to bring warning back in time. Even if I didn't really know any of them, it's bad business losing that many soldiers. Maybe I should request permission to start hunting in the caverns instead of topside.

Saw two new faces when I came inside, though one seemed vaguely familiar.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 25, 2012, 03:56:37 pm
"Well...I guess...I guess I'll just have to wait until that day...When I can see my saviour again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 25, 2012, 04:34:10 pm
((Hey there everypony. I have here our new pony all ready to go. Take good care of this one Flying Dice.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Traphe.png

Her previous name was Istbar and she was mentioned exactly once before, when she killed the forgotten beast that gave Falcata stomach rot with a single bolt to the brain.

No other notable kills, but 11 animals, including a badger pony and an elephant pony.

Also, I was apparently looking at the wrong pony last time. Sorry. In game she does actually have two friends, but they are just a couple of foals, so I don't think they really count. But they are both Captain Isos's foals if it matters at all. As far as getting your character involved that shouldn't be much of a problem. We can work something out for once the current scene if finished. We have an IRC channel set up that we use to discuss the future of the fort among other things, Themaster posted the link a long time back, but I'll provide it here again for your convenience. http://mibbit.com/?channel=%23Glitterglen&server=irc.mibbit.net 

Let me know if the link doesn't work or anything.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 25, 2012, 04:49:43 pm
((Many thanks. :))))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 26, 2012, 12:25:02 am
Meanwhile the Duchess is in her masonry shop, hammering away on a block of Cobaltite. 'hmm not quite level yet.'

A crumpled letter, barring the royal seal of Princess Hugwax rests on the floor near the door.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 12:40:44 am
When Kris sees Madush and Osal standing outside of the masonry shop, she pauses.  That must be where Charity was.  She steps up to them and asks, "Um, is Lady Charity in?  Can I see her?"  Osal nods and makes a gesture for her to proceed.  "Thanks."

When she steps inside, she sees Charity busying herself on one of her projects.  She didn't want to startle her, so she taps against the wall gently to get her attention.  "Lady Charity?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 26, 2012, 12:44:24 am
Charity snaps out of the daze she was in trying to get this blasted rock even when she hears Kris tapping. She looks up and sees her. "Oh Kris, hello, I didn't hear you come in." She levitates her hammer and chisel and sets them on top of her rock.

Charity walks over to Kris. "How may help you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 12:59:43 am
Kris scuffs a hoof against the ground nervously.  "I found your letter."  She thinks about the hammer hanging in her sling and hesitates for a moment.  Her mom would never have done this, but she just couldnt keep it in.  She throws her hooves around Charity and says, "Thank you, my lady.  You... you... My mom always spoke highly of you... but now I've seen your generosity first hoof.   You don't know how much this means to me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 26, 2012, 01:06:29 am
Charity is momentarily stunned to be hugged by young filly, no the young mare, but hugs her back all the same.

"You are very welcome Kris. Your mother, she was my best friend friend in all the world, and she loved you very much...It...It was the least I could do. It's what your mother would have wanted. I know we haven't really spoken much before now, but I want you to know, my door is always open to you, just because she's gone, I don't want you to be like a stranger."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 01:19:56 am
She backs out of the hug after a moment with a sad smile.  "Thank you, my lady."  She levitates the hammer up to eye level and adds, "I'll take good care of this.  This meant so much to my mom... I'll never forget her.  Now whenever I raise a weapon to defend my home I'll remember her."  As she returns the weapon to its sling, she says, "And this is my home.  I could go back to Coupledye... but my family... I barely remember any of them.  Perhaps I'll write them sometime, but this is my home now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 26, 2012, 01:26:04 am
Charity reaches out her hoof and places it on Kris's withers.

"Kris, Cryptson and I would...we would be honored, if you could think of us as your family now. We could never replace Falcata, but both of us, we do care about you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 01:37:10 am
Kris is stunned for a few seconds.  Family?  That... she never expected that... Heiro was kinda her dad now... but that was no more official than anything else.  Lady Charity wasn't asking to be her mom after all.  She had plenty of children as it was, but to have somepony else that she could rely on, who she could talk to and confide in... especially somepony like Lady Charity and her family...

Faint traces of tears form in her eyes as she gives Charity another small hug.
  "Th-thank you... I don't know what to say..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 26, 2012, 01:47:08 am
Charity returns the small hug. "You don't need to say anything Kris..."

After a moment Kris and Charity exchange goodbyes and Kris leaves Charity to get back to work. Charity's smile however only lasts until her eyes spot the crumpled letter on the floor. She sighs audibly, and levitates the letter into her waste pile, before returning to work.


((End Scene))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 03:03:26 am
Falcata forces a small smile.  Savior?  That seemed a bit dramatic, but she wasn't in much of a mood to argue with Friesden.  She just wanted to see her as happy as she could reasonably be under the circumstances.

Estoc nods and adds, "Yes... shall we say goodbye to Kris?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 26, 2012, 03:06:35 am
"Will ye be goin' t'see Heiro as well? "
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 03:08:54 am
"You will see him, right? He'd love to see you again, I'm sure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 03:16:22 am
Falcata and Estoc lock eyes for a few moments.  "I think you should," Estoc says.

She nods. 
"Yes, I should go tell him goodbye too.  I... suppose Venture will need to help with that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 03:18:20 am
"Can...Can I come with you? I don't want to say goodbye just yet...Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 03:19:40 am
"Of course... he'd probably be happy to see you anyway."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 26, 2012, 03:24:38 am
"I'll come with you.  Venture should probably stay here if Friesden is coming with us."

Venture nods, then gives Friesden a small smile.

"Yes, the hospital really does need to have somepony on duty at all times.  I just took my break, it's your turn, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 03:29:46 am
"Th-th-thank you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 26, 2012, 03:42:05 am
Hiero is sitting in his quarters, solemnly spinning a knife on his oak table. His mind races with what he could have done to save Falcata. If he could have been just a little faster, a little stronger. more prepared.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 03:50:49 am
Falcata and Estoc follow Khenal and Friesden to Heiro's room.  Estoc had agreed to stay out of sight unless she asked for him.  Maybe it would be a good idea for him to show up, but probably not.  They would have to see how things went... this was going to be awkward one way or another.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 26, 2012, 03:57:27 am
I raise a hoof to knock on the door, wondering just how awkward this is going to get.

"Heiro?  Are you in?  Um, somepony needs to see you, and I need to cast something on you as well.  Very minor, but I think it might help you a lot."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 26, 2012, 03:59:36 am
Otik follows close behind them, eager to see her son.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 26, 2012, 04:02:20 am
"Just- let me mourn, Khenal. I'm fine. perfect. peachy-buck'in keen."

there's a moment of silence. then the sound of the door unlocking.

his head pokes out of the door.

"Actually, come in. I need to ask you something."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 04:07:55 am
"Heiro! Heiro! We've got someponies to see you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 26, 2012, 04:12:41 am
Hiero gives Friesden a weak grin.

"Alright, Sister. Let's see whatever you have up your sleeve."

He motions everypony in.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 26, 2012, 04:15:00 am
I smile slightly as he lets us in, and my horn glows the deep purple of the spell.

"I swear to you, Heiro, this only expands your awareness.  Everything you see is real."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 26, 2012, 04:26:45 am
 "Says the master of mental magic." he says sarcastically.

 "will this spell bring Falcata back? no, it won't. just go."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 04:31:57 am
Falcata steps into the room.  "No, it won't.  But it will let you talk to me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 26, 2012, 04:41:40 am
his ears perk up at the sound of that beautiful, angelic voice.

"Falcata" he inhaled.

"oh, why you. why, Luna, Did you have to be so goddamned Brave?"

He falls into her mane and cries.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 04:50:57 am
She hugs him and sighs.  Did she dare tell him the truth that she was down there because she was trying to sort out her feelings about so much, no small part of which was him?  Nope.  She stood against the monster for other reasons entirely.  "I'm sorry... I was a foal... but I couldn't just let it past me into Glitterglen, not after I led it back here."

She gives him a small squeeze in the hug and adds, "Your mom is here too, would you like to speak to her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on February 26, 2012, 04:52:34 am
"Aye, I'm right here. Where's my hug, hmm?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 26, 2012, 04:57:13 am
"Otik! mum!"

He wraps around the both of them, elated.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 03:30:55 pm
"I'm sorry I put you through this Heiro," she says, still in the embrace.  "But..."  She sighs, unsure of how to proceed.  "...well, I just wanted to tell you goodbye while I still could..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 26, 2012, 09:16:59 pm

Hiero pulls back, obviously hurt. "Goodbye? Is that all? no epiphany? no life-affirming catharsis? a few parting words of wisdom? just- just a Goodbye?"

"How about a 'I Love you, Hiero, always and forever.', just a once?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 10:01:48 pm
She frowns and looks aside for a moment.  "Of course I love you Heiro..."  No, there was no point in bringing Estoc into this now.  That would just cause a lot of trouble.  "...nothing will ever change that.  I'm sorry..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 10:06:18 pm
Friesden's smiles fades quickly, replaced with tears. Before the others can react, she turns around and runs from the room.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 26, 2012, 10:10:56 pm
I frown in worry as Friesden flees, and only glance to Falcata and Heiro before chasing after her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 10:13:29 pm
Friesden is sitting only a short way away in the corridor, weeping her eyes out.

"I never do anything right. If I was dead everypony would be better off. I should die."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 10:17:19 pm
"Friesden?"  Falcata glances at her as she darts out before looking back to Heiro.  "Come on."  She takes off after Khenal and Friesden, only to bump into them just outside.  Estoc backs away from Friesden and cuts a concerned glance at Falcata.

Falcata listens to Friesden and immediately moves to hug her.
  "Why?  Why do you think anypony would be better off if you were dead?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 10:18:20 pm
"Then I wouldn't have messed everything up for everypony."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 26, 2012, 10:19:05 pm
I gently drape a wing over Friesden and Falcata, and gently nuzzle my love.

"Falcata is right, Friesden.  Nopony would be better off if you died."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 26, 2012, 10:21:48 pm
Hiero runs out of his room and bumps into Estoc.

"Did someone else die?" he asked
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 10:26:17 pm
"Then Heiro wouldn't be sad now, and Estoc wouldn't be mad, and everypony would be happy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 10:30:06 pm
Estoc steps back and says, "Um, hello Heiro.  I think you know about me... I'm Estoc."

Falcata raises an eyebrow.  "Friesden... Estoc isn't mad at anypony, and you being here hasn't made anypony sad..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 10:31:54 pm
"I should have died before I came here. Heiro wouldn't be angry at you for dying. Estoc wouldn't be mad at you because of Heiro. Everypony would be happy. But no. I had to be the selfish little foal, didn't I."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 26, 2012, 10:37:14 pm
I sit by Friesden and hug her tightly.

"Living is not being selfish, Friesden.  Your death wouldn't have fixed anything, and will not fix anything now or ever."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 10:40:13 pm
"It would have. But now thanks to me everypony is unhappy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 26, 2012, 10:49:03 pm
Hiero looks at Estoc angrily. all he wanted to do was unleash a string of profanities at this..this thing he could never be to Falcata.

He looks at his friends trying to calm Friesden down. now was'nt the time to start a tantrum spiral.

"Just keep her, safe. Keep her happy." he said to him as he moved in to comfort Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 11:02:35 pm
Estoc nods at Heiro.  "I should thank you for what you've done for her yourself."  He looks over to Friesden and adds, "Falcata is right, Miss Friesden, I'm not mad at her."

Falcata sits silently next to Friesden for a few moments beneath Khenal's wing.  "Friesden... we're all better for having you in our lives.  None of this is your fault.  Don't ever think we'd be better off without you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 11:06:31 pm
"Yes you would. You don't need to lie to me. I'm just another useless pony."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 26, 2012, 11:16:18 pm
"She's not lying Friesden, look at her.  Look at me, do I look like I'm lying when I say you are the best thing to ever happen in my life?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 11:33:23 pm
"R-r-r-really?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 26, 2012, 11:34:39 pm
Falcata feels tears of desperation beginning to force their way to the surface, but she fights them back.  It hurt her so much to see Friesden like this.  If she started crying in front of Friesden right now that would only aggravate the situation even more.  "I'd never lie to you Friesden.  You were my first and for a long time only friend here.  You've helped me so much more than you know."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 26, 2012, 11:37:16 pm
I smile gently and look deep into Friesden's eyes so she can see my sincerity.

"Really."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 26, 2012, 11:46:22 pm
Friesden grabs Khenal and kisses him quickly. "You are the best thing to happen to me. You and you and you and you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on February 27, 2012, 10:53:31 pm
Non-Cannon below

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Hiero puts others above himself once again and hugs Friesden silently.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 27, 2012, 11:22:10 pm
((nah.gif))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 28, 2012, 12:10:40 am
Falcata retreats from Khenal's wing to give Friesden free access to him.  She smiles as she sees Friesden warm up again.  Maybe she'd get through this after all.  An idea strikes her as she watches the two embrace and kiss.

"Friesden, how about I stay until the wedding?  How does that sound to you two?"

Estoc frowns slightly at the thought.  Hopefully the wedding was soon.  They might not have much time left to ascend... but for Falcata he'd do anything.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 12:14:59 am
"R-r-really? You'd do that for me? Should we have it soon, then?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 28, 2012, 12:23:43 am
She nods and smiles broadly.  "Of course I'd do that for you.  And you can have it whenever you're ready."  Her smile widens a bit, if possible.  "You've been ready for a while now though, if I had to guess?"

It was her wedding with Heiro that had been putting it off in the first place.  She realized that bringing up the wedding with Heiro nearby might not have been the best course of action, but it was too late for that.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 01:01:12 am
Friesden nods rapidly. "I can't wait. It's going to be great."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 01:03:51 am
I smile at Friesden.

"I can't wait either."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on February 28, 2012, 04:56:24 pm
((Massive fort update incoming!))

Charity's Journal 1st Malachite, 101

I've ordered four new tombs to be dug out in the hallway leading to the one for my family. The one closest to mine on the right, I will be giving to Falcata, when it's finished we'll move her bones there for her final rest. The other across the hall from that, I'm going to offer it to Khenal, in case the worst should happen to him in the line of duty. The other two are for now, unknown.

Addendum: I was in my workshop earlier when Kris came by. She thanked me for gifting her the room and the hammer, and she told me she would be staying. Adamant will be happy to hear that, as will Cryptson, he really cared about Miss Falcata though he wouldn't say it, and he'll be glad that her daughter will be staying nearby. I asked her to try and think of Crypt and myself as her family now. Even if she and Adamant don't get married one day, as Falcata's daughter, I do care about her, and she's such a sweet fillymare.

Charity's Journal 3rd Malachite, 101

I wrote a letter to Falcata's family, explaining how she died in the defense of us all. How her death might have saved the lives of over a hundred ponies. I also told them that Kris is well and has decided to stay here with us. I also sent a small package containing all the letters that Falcata wrote to them, I will send it with the next messenger.

Charity's Journal 14th Malachite, 101

Peytrel is out of the hospital. He can't walk without a crutch, what with his left rear leg being so smashed, but he says he can breath much better now. Thanks all to Friesden and his little sister Venture, for their tireless work over the past 3 weeks. Doctor Bubbles and Friesden are sure that he will recover nearly fully in time. Although he still looks really pale to me.

Charity's Journal 24th Malachite, 101

Kris took another turn in the arena today. If Falcata was here to see her she would have been proud. The way she wielded Falcata's Loyalty was a pleasure to watch. She was fighting a cave fish woman and an olm man we caught in the caverns. They didn't even touch her.

2nd Galena, 101

An earthpony planter, had an earthpony filly.

9th Galena, 101

A earthpony glazer has given birth to a little unicorn colt today.

Charity's Journal 12th Galena, 101

Today we moved Falcata's bones to their final resting place in her tomb. The coffin is made of beautiful clear glass and the smoothed and engraved marble walls tell the history of Glitterglen. We also surrounded her with statues of her friends made of solid steel.

It wasn't much of a ceremony. Falcata deserved more, but we've all cried it out months ago. Just a few friends were there. Prayers for the dead were recited and we all said some words. Kris stayed behind for a long time after we left.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Falcata%27s%20Tomb.png)

Kris, wasn't doing so well and went to the arena afterwords, the foolish filly thought she could take on a full size Elephant pony by herself. But after she got a hoof to the chest and guts and her tail bone crushed with only getting it with two glancing blows she collapsed in pain, and blacked out. At that point thankfully, Kussad (Spearpony in the militia) and Akath (from the Skyguard) lept in to save her, together they put it down easy. Kris is paying the doctors a visit now. Friesden is looking her over, she's pretty sure Kris will be alright. She is very lucky. It could have been a lot worse for her.

14th Galena, 101

The caravan from the zebra has arrived, and is currently setting up shop in the depot. Adamant is heading out right now to speak with the merchants on the behalf of Glitterglen.

19th Galena, 101

Finalized trade deal with the Zebra. Nothing much to say. Traded our silks for their metal, cloth, leather, drink, sand, and some empty sacks. Also, I sent a gift to the Zebra ruler, a figurine of Falcata killing a diomedian carved out of zebra hoof, I hope that will send a message that we aren't going to stand for another attack like the one two years ago.

20th, Galena, 101

To long has the  main walkway into the main staircase been made of cobbled schist. It's time for a change, the old stone is being removed and we are repaving it with marble blocks.
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Marble%20Road.png)
Meanwhile, as per my instructions from the capital, we are working to create a system of roads in the jungle. We are making four Colbatite paths that lead away from Glitterglen, one north, one south, one east, and one west. We have been preparing for this project for a while, but haven't really gotten anywhere with it until now. Although, I don't think we will have enough blocks for the whole job, I'll let Pillomino know she needs to make some more. The fortress guard is watching over the workers, but they can't watch everything without spreading themselves to thin, so Captain Ramol and his stallions are assisting.

22nd Galena, 101

Venture's younger brother Daringsky was hunting in the caverns today, and ran afoul of the Reptilemen that recently moved in there. He fought them off but took a minor cut to his rear right leg, and a nasty hit to the head. He's being looked over by Doctor Bubbles right now. He should be fine. But I've talked to Commander Starkey and he's volunteered to take his squad down to deal with the surviving reptiles.

26th Galena, 101

Starkey and his squad have returned from there venture into the caverns, the reports say that they found the Reptileman villiage, and that they have been eliminated, except for one very injured reptile woman that dove into the water, and wasn't seen again.

27th Galena, 101

A fisherpony has reported that a tribe of Olmmen have moved into the place of the Reptilemen we just fought off. I will consult my military leaders to decide if we should remove them in the same way.

30th Galena, 101

We have exaughted our stock of Cobaltite blocks for the road project, but significant progress was made on the east, and west roads, and south has been started, the north road however is all but finished. It reaches the full length but the lower part may need to be expanded to accomodate larger wagons, however nopony should be coming from the north as we are farther north than any of the old capitals so that is of low priority.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/The%20North%20Road.png)

11th Limestone, 101

The military decided to deal with the Olmmen preemptively. Starkey lead the charge and if the reports are to be believed he slaughtered the whole tribe before his fellows even reached the fight.

14th Limestone, 101

A very wounded Reptile woman (we suspect it to be the one that escaped from the last battle against them.) wandered up to the fort entrance this afternoon, but it was mauled by the grizzly bears we keep chained there, they seemed happy to have a new chew toy. Though they seemed reluctant to kill the thing, Daring Sky wandered by later and felt sorry for the thing and put a few bolts into it, until it stopped moving. I think he was happy to get a little payback.

22nd Limestone, 101

Khenal took a turn in the arena, fighting an injured Elephant Pony. It was really hurt before getting caught in a cage and our butchers couldn't get close to it as it was, and it wouldn't have survived being let go, so Khenal volunteered to put it out of it's misery. The butchers will be processing the body soon enough.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 06:19:57 pm
As Khenal is entering the dining hall, Friesden under his wing, he spots Traphe, one of his old trainees from his days as the Fortress Guard captain.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 06:23:05 pm
Traphe, feeling the gaze of somepony on her, looks up from her meal.

"Oh, hello, sir. And to you as well, Friesden. Congratulations to the both of you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 06:27:55 pm
I smile and reach under my wing to nuzzle Friesden.

"Friesden, do you remember Traphe?  Lets see if we can join her for some breakfast.  Traphe?  May we dine with you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 06:29:24 pm
"Of course. It has been quite a while, hasn't it, sir?"

Traphe gestures to the open bench across the table from her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 06:34:41 pm
Friesden sits down with Khenal and pokes her head out of his wing. "What are you eating, Traphe?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 06:42:54 pm
"Oh. Um. A cave dragon roast with Longland Grass seeds. I've always enjoyed them, and there were some right in the front of the storage room. So what did you want to talk about?"

Traphe glances away briefly. She seems to be a bit uncomfortable.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 07:00:12 pm
I smile and set our plates down and prepare to eat.

"I just wanted to catch up, Traphe.  It's been a long time since we got to talk."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 07:03:55 pm
"I suppose it has been. I-I just don't seem to ever have the chance to talk to anyone. Not that that is bad, if it means I'm doing my duty."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 07:06:27 pm
"It's good to talk to you though. I like talking to everypony."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 07:09:52 pm
"Oh?  Does Captain Isos keep you too busy?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 07:12:13 pm
"You're certainly good at it, Friesden. I suppose it is nice to talk, once in a while."

Traphe smiles slightly.

"Oh, no. At least, not any more than the rest of the squad. But I enjoy being off by myself. The quiet is sort of relaxing. And if I can help keep watch or bring in food while I'm doing that, why not?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 07:22:41 pm
"Hmm..."

'Well, Charity did say she wanted the Ducal Guard expanded...'

"Would you consider changing squads, Traphe?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 07:27:22 pm
"Oh...um, I prefer vegetables. Oh, and fruit. I...I don't like meat."

Friesden turns to Khenal as he speaks, and a tear falls from her eye as she remembers Falcata.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 07:37:16 pm
"Oh... I-I'm sorry, Friesden. Sometimes I just don't think before speaking."

Traphe starts to reach out to Friesden, but draws her hoof back, hesitant.

"Uh, I guess I could, Khenal, if I need to. Where did you want to move me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 07:47:25 pm
"Oh...It's okay...I...I shouldn't have brought it up, I'm sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 08:02:39 pm
"No, Friesden, it's fine. I shouldn't be so insensitive."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 08:12:09 pm
"No, no, it was my fault. Will you forgive me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 08:15:34 pm
"There's nothing to forgive, except my mistake."

Traphe leans across the table and gives Friesden a quick hug.

"Now what was that about a transfer, Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 08:18:23 pm
Friesden returns the hug, and smiles a bit. "You're my friend now. I'd forgive you anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 08:19:09 pm
I gently kiss Friesden, then smile at Traphe.

"Well, Charity would like me to expand the Ducal Guard, and I think you would be a good addition."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 08:34:27 pm
"But...Um...You won't be too brave, right? I...I don't want to lose another friend. Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 08:51:28 pm
"M-Me? The Ducal Guard? If you really think so, then I suppose I should. Um, yes, I accept. Don't worry about me, Friesden, I'll be fine."

Traphe smiles, slightly wider than before.

'Oh, I hope this works out. I'll need to train harder, to make sure I don't let anyone down. Most of all, my... yes, my friends.'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 10:21:34 pm
A day or so later, I stand in the Ducal Barracks, the first to show up for the daily training.  I start a spear Kata to focus myself as I wait.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 10:23:54 pm
Traphe steps hesitantly into the Ducal Barracks, crossbow and quiver strapped across her back.

"Um. Hello? Hello, Khenal?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 11:07:44 pm
I finish the rest of my Kata as I talk to Traphe.

"Hello Traphe.  You're -hah!- early."

I smile at her.

"Good.  Would you please show me how you've improved under Captain Isos?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 11:13:02 pm
"O-Okay then."

Traphe unslings her crossbow, cranking the string back with her magic, and places a bolt into the groove. She backs up as far as possible from one of the round, wooden blocks, and fires. The bolt smacks into the innermost circle of paint. She cranks the bow back again, fires. The bolt hits half a hoof from the first. She continues firing until she has run through her entire quiver. A neat cluster of bolts stand out from the middle of the target.

"I-Is that okay? I guess I've had a lot of practice. I've been out hunting a lot, too."

Traphe smiles slightly as she slings her crossbow and walks over to retrieve the bolts.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 11:17:23 pm
I whistle, impressed at her marksponyship.  Once she empties her quiver, though, I wonder what a markspony is supposed to do in that situation.

"Hold on a second please, Traphe.  What happens if you run out of bolts in a battle?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 11:21:22 pm
"I don't really know. We usually don't run out of bolts before whatever we're shooting at runs out of blood. Um. Run up and hit it, maybe? Though I'm not sure how exactly to do that..."


Traphe shrugs, blushing a bit.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 11:23:08 pm
"Hmm... and what happens if something gets into melee with you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 11:24:42 pm
"I don't really know. I guess none of us marksponies think about it much. Too depressing, probably."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 11:31:56 pm
I frown slighty, thinking about the apparent need for melee training.  My horn glows softly and I levitate the crossbow off Traphe's back to examine it.

"Hmm, it doesn't feel very balanced for melee, does it?  Though I only have a spear to compare it to... Would you like to try to learn to use your crossbow as a club, or maybe pick up another weapon for melee?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 11:36:55 pm
"I-I don't know... My bow is heavy enough to hurt somepony, but I'm not sure if it is even the right weapon for a member of the Ducal Guard. On the other hand, when I'm using it, it feels 'right', somehow. Maybe there is something else I could practice with, something that would be close enough to my crossbow that the same sort of movements would work? Certainly not a-"

Traphe shudders a bit.

"-sword."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 11:43:26 pm
"Hmm... Well, if it just feels right, it just feels right.  Lets try some slow blocks and strikes and see if it still feels right for a melee weapon as well."

I levitate her crossbow back to her, then step into the sparring area.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 28, 2012, 11:49:54 pm
Traphe steps into the sparring area, lifting the crossbow into something approximating an offensive stance with her magic. She levitates her quiver off to the side, taking care not to spill the bolts.


"Here I come, if you're ready."

She strikes forward along the centerline of her crossbow, a strong blow, but rather hesitant, and not particularly accurate.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 28, 2012, 11:55:52 pm
I step back to dodge the blow, then swing my spear up to try to catch the crossbow and disarm Traphe.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 28, 2012, 11:58:13 pm
Friesden walks into the room with a smile on her face, not even paying attention as the crossbow flies across the room and strikes her in between her eyes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 29, 2012, 12:02:08 am
Traphe's eyes unconsciously track her crossbow as it arcs across the barracks, barely registering somepony walking through the door, until-


*Eeep!*

"Friesden!"

Traphe trots over to Friesden, who is sitting down, stunned, eyes spinning.

"O-Oh no! I'm so sorry! Sorry! Are you okay, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 29, 2012, 12:06:12 am
"Oh, Traphe! How are you? I haven't seen you since...Since yesterday! I haven't seen you since yesterday. What have I missed?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 29, 2012, 12:08:12 am
"Not much. Uh, are you okay, Friesden? Didn't that hurt?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 29, 2012, 12:08:25 am
My eyes widen in horror when I hear the thunk and Friesden crying out.

"Friesden!  Oh no, are you alright!?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 29, 2012, 12:12:59 am
"I think I'm okay. My head hurts a bit, though. Can we stop the room from spinning?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 29, 2012, 12:18:20 am
"Maybe we should take her to the hospital, Khenal. A blow like that could have hurt her in ways we can't tell just by looking at her. Friesden, do you can walk all right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 29, 2012, 12:22:09 am
"I can walk!"

Friesden jumps up in a flash...

And falls over in what is the most opposite of a flash.

"Um...Maybe I can't."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 29, 2012, 12:23:28 am
'...Maybe I should get her a helmet with all the blows to the head she seems to take.'

"Um, yes.  I think the hospital would be a good idea."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 29, 2012, 12:26:49 am
"Okay, then, we can carry you!"

Traphe takes Friesden's right foreleg in her magic and leans it over her shoulder, glancing at Khenal with a slight nod.

"Could you get her from the other side? Um, if you don't mind. I'm not sure if just one of us can carry her."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 29, 2012, 12:29:12 am
"That would help...Thank you, Traphe. Why are we going to the hospital again? Am I on duty?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 29, 2012, 12:41:40 am
"No, silly, you're hurt. Oh. This won't work. Um, Khenal, maybe you should take her alone. You're so much taller. Or we could leviate her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 29, 2012, 12:43:36 am
"I think levitating her might be the best.  I don't want to risk her falling again on the way.  We're taking you to the hospital, Friesden, to get your head looked at.  You kinda... took a crossbow to the head."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 29, 2012, 12:46:52 am
"I'm hurt? Oh. Um. How do you know I'm hurt? I don't feel hurt. But levitating sounds like fun."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 29, 2012, 12:50:46 am
"Okay then, here we go..."

Traphe's horn glows as she begins to lift Friesden with her magic.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 29, 2012, 12:54:10 am
"Whee! This is fun!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 29, 2012, 06:21:05 pm
My horns glows softly as I assist in levitating Friesden, looking nervous about her condition.

"Um, thanks for helping, Traphe."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 29, 2012, 06:40:56 pm
"Oh, how couldn't I? If you're ready..."

Traphe begins to walk toward the door, keeping an eye on Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on February 29, 2012, 06:47:13 pm
I follow as Traphe leads the way to the hospital, keeping Friesden levitated between the two of us as we go.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on February 29, 2012, 06:59:45 pm
Traphe pushes open the hospital door, holding it open as Friesden floats inside, Khenal following close behind. They lower Friesden gently onto a bed and release their magic.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on February 29, 2012, 08:05:23 pm
"Awww...Can't we do that for longer?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on February 29, 2012, 11:31:45 pm
After the ceremony to move her mother's body to her new final resting place, Kris sits silently in the tomb.  There hadn't been too many ponies at the ceremony.  Mostly just her mom's few close friends, Charity's family, the rest of the ducal guard and a few other ponies.  The ones who came shed a few tears, herself included, but her mom had been dead long enough that most of the sting had been gone to be replaced by a gaping hole in her heart.  One that would take a very long time to heal, if it ever did completely.

The others were gone now.  They all had important things to be doing, and she understood.  And she wasn't sure she felt like being around anypony else right now anyway.  She takes a few steps toward her mother's coffin, to see her body lying peacfully beneath the immaculate glass.  The bloody wound on her flank... the blood pouring from her mouth and ears... all of that had been cleaned up.  She looked like she was sleeping.  Her body would never decay... the spell cast on it had seen to that.  She would lay there for as long as Glitterglen existed, visible to all who cared to come look and see for themselves the pony who had stood alone to try and defend the lives of everypony there.

Kris looks away.  It was too painful to look at her.  That wasn't really her.  It was just her body.  Her mom was long gone now, surely in a better place where she wouldn't have to worry about things like horrific monsters.  Her expression hardens a bit at the thought.  Why... why did that monster have to come?  Where had it come from?  Had somepony created it?  Tasked it with coming here to rob ponies of their loved ones?  She stamps a hoof and lets out a small noise, something between a whimper and a snort.  If only she'd been there with her mom.  She wouldn't have to be staring at her dead body.  Instead she could be sleeping peacefully back home.

She takes another step toward the coffin and curls up beside it on the floor.  Like she had all those years ago beside her mother's hospital bed.  Like the day she found out her mom had been hurt.  She'd only broken a leg, but it was as if her entire world had crumbled around her.  Just knowing her mom was hurt... she'd have never believed that this would have happened.  After all she'd come through... why this?

After a moment of letting fresh tears form in her eyes, she pulls out a letter from her saddle bag and reads it again.  This would be the eleventh time she'd read it.  It wasn't getting any easier to read... but she felt like she had to one more time.  Here with her mom.  Her eyes slowly work across the words as she reads:

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

She folds the letter and rests her head in her hooves, crying silently.  Not the bitter sobbing her mother would surely have let out, like the day she'd nearly been abducted and returned to her safely.  Like the tears that had stained the very letter she'd just read.  The letter wasn't dated, but she knew it had been written years ago.  Long ago when she was sick.  She sighs and wipes her eyes, wondering what her mom would have to say to her now if she could.  Probably the same thing the last lines of her letter said.

She cranes her neck to look back at her mother's body, lying so silently in the coffin.


"I love you too mom... I always have... and I always will..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 01, 2012, 02:04:19 pm
((Haven't done a journal entry in a long time, and I'm bored, so here goes.  Some of this might get invalidated by RPing later, but it wouldn't be the first time. :)

Oh, and you think you've read long posts by me before?  Well, going for the record this time, IRC transcriptions aside.  TL;DR nothing amazing here, mostly just Kris' perspective on everything that's happened recently.))

Kris' Diary - 12th Granite, 101

Today I told Lady Charity and mom something I've been keeping secret for a little while now.  I wanted to join the militia when I was old enough, which I finally am.  Mom was pretty shocked, which was no surprise.  She worries about me a lot, just like I do for her.  But after I was nearly abducted by the diomedians, I knew something had to change or I'd spend the rest of my life a little bundle of nerves.

That and I know there's no room in the hospital for me to work with Ms. Friesden or Dr. Bubbles.  So I thought maybe I could put my magic to use on the battlefield.  Maybe if somepony gets hurt out there, I can help them with my magic.  I think there's probably been a few ponies who might have lived if they had gotten help sooner.

I know it's going to be tough, but I'm ready for it.

9th Slate, 101

Captain Starkey gave me some time in the arena today to try out the combat drills I've been working through.  I must admit it was hard for me to attack the parasprites and peafowl that he let loose on me, but I had to suck it up and do what I had to do.  If I'm going to have any chance of fighting off a diomedian, I can't be weak.

That and the little things are nastier than they look.  I've got a few bruises and cuts where my armor didn't protect me so well.  I knew this was going to be difficult, and this hasn't dissuaded me much, but part of me does regret the decision.  Maybe there was another way to work past my fears.  Or another way to help everypony.

No, I won't go down that path.  I'm going to stick with this and make the captain, mom and Lady Charity proud of me.  I can do this.

22nd Hematite, 101

I can barely think.  I desperately wanted to write something yesterday, but I just didn't have the strength.  I barely had the strength to breathe.

Mom died.

23rd Hematite, 101

I thought things might be better today, but it's really only worse.  I can't do anything but think about her.  Everything I do reminds me of her, and how she won't be coming back.  She's gone.  The biggest pony in my life, gone forever.

I've cried my heart out a dozen times over in the past two days.  Mom and grandma Otik are dead.  It just doesn't feel real.  But it is.  I don't know how I'm going to be able to stand this.  I just [words are smudged by tears]

I can't write any more.  I just can't.

24th Hematite, 101

I think I've finally calmed down enough to write about this coherently, but I don't know what else to write.  I can't express in words how much my mom meant to me.  Every time I needed her she was there for me.  And the one time she needed me, I wasn't there for her.  It tears at my heart every time I think about it.

Dad hasn't been himself since what happened.  He lost his mom too, I suppose, in addition to my mom.  I really feel alone in this.  I know that he still cares about me, and so does grandpa Starkey, but without mom there [tear-smudged lettering again]

I'll get through this.  It's going to be tough, but I'll get through it.  I do have a little support.  Master Adamant was there in the hospital the night mom died.  I spent a couple of hours crying on his shoulder, and he just sat there with me the whole time, holding me while I sobbed.  He also tried to stand up to those diomedians when they abducted us.  He's a strong and brave stallion.  I've never really met anypony in Lady Charity's family, and I didn't really know what to think about them.  Mom always told me to be on my best behavior around them, as if I wouldn't anyway.

He's a kind pony.  Maybe I have a possible friend there.  Celestia knows I could use one right now.  Lilac was my only friend before this, and she was taken from me too some years back.

I just wish I didn't throw up on him.  I've never been so embarrassed in my entire life.  Throwing up on somepony who barely knows you, who is as important as he is?  Mom would

No, I'm not going there.  I'll make sure I apologize to him next time I see him.  I hope he's not too mad at me.  After what happened, I might have said or done anything.

1st Malachite, 101

Today is probably the first day I've been anything close to happy since mom passed away.  I went back home to pack my things to move out, since this wouldn't be my home anymore, when I found a note from Lady Charity.

I couldn't believe what I was reading.  Mom always told me good things about Lady Charity, and how generous she was.  I mean, I knew she gifted this room to us, and my mother's magnificent warhammer to her, but I'd have never expected her to be so kind as to leave them to me.  What have I done to earn such a gift?

Regardless, I couldn't keep it in anymore.  I found Lady Charity down in her workshop, chipping away at one of her projects.  I did the only thing I could think of.  I gave her a hug and the most heartfelt thank you I could muster.  It wasn't nearly enough.  She just doesn't know how much these things mean to me.  To keep them means I get to keep the part of my mom that is left in this world.

To top it off, she told me that she and Lord Cryptson look at me as if I was part of their family.  I've spoken to Adamant a few times since my mom's death, and I think he likes me at least, but I'd have never expected that.  I again can't express how much I appreciate the gesture.  I really need all of the support I can have right now.

Speaking of which, I now know I can write my family in Coupledye.  Mom told me it was pointless, that she'd never managed to get a letter through, but I think I'll try now that Lady Charity can endorse the letters.

2nd Malachite, 101

I made a mistake today.  I took my mom's hammer down to the arena to work out some of my frustrations and pent up emotions in a combat drill.  Something to just let the stress out.

Then I found him there.  I couldn't believe that the diomedian who abducted me was being held there.  He seemed surprised to see me too.  I knew it was wrong.  I knew it wasn't the right thing to do.  Mom would be ashamed of me, and I know grapnda Starkey would be furious if he found out.  But I killed the thief.

I felt horrible afterward.  In a moment of rage I took him out of his cage and crushed the life from him with a few swings of my mom's hammer.  After it was all over and done with, I just stared at him.  At the death I'd wrought.  I felt sick.  This wasn't justice.  Killing a pony, even a diomedian, even one who had done so much wrong to me and my mom, it just wasn't right.

Then I was horrified to learn I'd broken the law by doing so.  It hadn't even occurred to me.  I was just so upset and angry at him, I killed him without a thought.  At least I wasn't punished for it, even though I know I should have been.  Maybe grandpa Starkey pulled some strings, if even knows about it.  Or Lady Charity maybe.  I just don't know.  I need some time alone to think about what I've done and remind myself of just how terrible it was.

Mom never did tell me the full story of why we were sent here, but she told me enough for me to infer that she'd killed several ponies in Coupledye under similar circumstances.  She would be very upset to know I'd done this.  I won't let her down again.

14th Malachite, 101

I heard Peytrel will live.  It's a small blessing to know that I didn't fail everypony who fought against the monster.  The real credit goes to Ms. Friesden and the other doctors of course, but maybe by me stabilizing him he survived.  Even saving a single life makes my hardships worth it all.

24th Malachite, 101

Turns out I got a chance in the arena sooner than I expected.  They had me go up against some of the monsters from the caverns that they'd managed to capture instead of kill outright.  I still didn't take pleasure in killing them, but I fought with a renewed purpose and strength.  I think I'm getting the hang of the fighting now.  Killing things still upsets me a bit, but I know it's for the best.  I can deal with it now.

Maybe mom would be proud of me after all.  I won't kill again unless it's needed.  These animal creatures are a danger to everypony, and the diomedians who siege us get what they deserve.  But killing an unarmed prisoner is a different matter.  I've learned my lesson.  I just hope Luna will forgive me.

12th Galena, 101

Here I am, lying next to my mother's body in her tomb.  I must look mad to anypony who would come and find me like this, lying next to her as if she was still living.

But I just need some time alone, and this feels like the place to be right now.  I'm not sure why, maybe I am crazy.  I've read my mom's letter a dozen times now, and I think I'm finally coming to terms with her passing.  I'll keep it along with her other possessions so I never forget her and all she means to me.  I just wish I could talk to her one more time.  And... maybe dad too.  Not my new dad, but my real dad.  I barely knew him.  I wonder what he would think of me?

I can't write much.  I just don't know what else to say.  Maybe there just aren't words for how I feel.

13th Galena, 101

I'm a foal.  I thought I was a mare now, but apparently I'm still a foal.

After I cried my heart out again in my mother's tomb, I went back to the arena to sort out my emotions again.  I found the rest of the militia taking turns fighting some of the more savage animal ponies we've captured, and I decided to take a turn.  I don't know what I was thinking, but I took on the largest and meanest looking one of the lot: an elephant pony.  They told me I was biting off more than I could chew, but I went on anyway.

And here I am in the hospital.  I've never hurt so much in my life.  All I remember was taking a crushing kick to the belly, followed by one to the chest.  I was immediately nauseated from the blows and could barely breathe.  I managed to scramble away and avoid a kick to the head, but while Akath and Kussad were busy saving my sorry hide the monster stamped my tail and broke the bone.

I owe them my life.  If they hadn't stepped in when they did, I'd be with my mom and dad right now.  As much as I want to see them again, that is still a very unsettling thought.

Ms. Friesden gave me a check over and said I'd be alright.  It took some work for me to manage to cast the body reading spell, but I confirmed what she said.  My tail is broken, but it will heal.  I thought I'd broken some ribs, but they're only bruised.  I'm still nauseated, but thankfully the kick to my stomach didn't crush or burst anything.

I'm very lucky.  If it wasn't for the armor I was wearing or the timely intervention of my fellow ponies-at-arms, I'd be in much, much worse shape.

If mom really is watching me like she said she was in her letter, I can't imagine how she must feel right now.  Disappointed maybe, but probably scared more than anything else.

I'm sorry mom.  I'll be smarter next time.  I promise.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 01, 2012, 10:12:24 pm
'This is it, mare. Just stay calm, it will be okay either way. Either Charity approves it, and I can help the fortress more, or she doesn't, and I don't risk endangering anyone because I'm not good enough.'

"So, Khenal, what does this entail, exactly? I mean, joining the Fortress guard back in the day wasn't much more complex than picking up armor and reporting for training, but I get the feeling that this is a little... different."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 01, 2012, 10:22:54 pm
I stand just outside Charity's office with Traphe, ready to see about expanding the Ducal Guard like Charity mentioned.

"Well, I think she'll interview you, Traphe.  The Fortress Guard is fairly general in it's focus, but the Ducal Guard is a bit more focused.  So Charity needs to approve anypony before they join.  Don't worry, though.  Just be yourself, I'm sure she'll like you.  Wait here for a sec so I can let her know, please."

I try to smile reassuringly at Traphe before knocking on Charity's door.

"Charity, are you in?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 01, 2012, 10:25:49 pm
Traphe doesn't respond at first, she just smiles hesitantly and shuffled her hooves.


"O-Okay. Thank you again for this."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 01, 2012, 10:27:17 pm
Khenal hears voices on the other side of the door.

"That sounds like Khenal. Osal, let him in."

"Yes, ma'am."

Khenal is greeted by the battle scared pegasus as he opens the door. He salutes Khenal. "Captain."

Khenal can see that other than her one guard she is alone her over-packed office. Charity sits behind her desk, sifting through a stack of papers with her magic.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 01, 2012, 10:31:40 pm
I return Osal's salute, then enter Charity's office.  I give her a small bow before standing in front of her desk.  Even if she doesn't want it, she still deserves a bow, especially when I'm interrupting her work.

"Do you have a few minutes, Charity?  I wanted to talk about the Ducal Guard, and your desire to expand it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 01, 2012, 10:36:10 pm
Khenal can't help but notice a new statue has been added to Charity's office. It is of none other than Captain Khenal. It depicts him killing a Diomedian in striking realistic detail.

"Oh, of course Khenal, I always have time for a friend." She shoves her work to one side. "What did you want to discuss?"

"Uh, Captain? Lady Charity? Would you like me to wait outside?" asks Osal.

Charity not knowing the nature of the conversation Khenal has planned looks to him to answer the question.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 01, 2012, 10:51:36 pm
I boggle at the statue until Osal's question draws me out of it.

"Huh?  Oh!  Um, it's not anything private, but it might be a bit crowded with you here, Osal.  Please send Traph in for me as you go?  Have you met Traphe, Charity?  She was in the Fortress Guard when I was captain there, and I think she might make a good addition to the Ducal Guard."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 01, 2012, 10:55:28 pm
"Traphe?" Charity thinks for a moment. "Oh yes, I think I know who you mean. The unicorn mare, ex-ranger and part of the original guard. Is that right?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 01, 2012, 11:13:40 pm
Shortly after Khenal entered the chamber, Osal exited. He turned to greet Traphe, who salutes him, returning it.

"Hello, then. So you're the markspony Khenal recruited for the Ducal Guard?"

"Yes, sir."

"I'm sure you'll do admirably. Good luck."

"Thank you, I hope I will."

Traphe perks up an ear as a voice calls from within Charity's office.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 01, 2012, 11:15:54 pm
"Yep!  I ran into her in the dining hall the other day and caught up with her.  I think she'd do very well in the Ducal Guard, Charity."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 01, 2012, 11:25:36 pm
"Hmm, Well, I'm sure she will do fine. A unicorn is always a good choice, the benefit of magic is certainly a welcome one, and she's been here a long time and has caused no trouble that I can remember, one moment."

Charity pulls a box out of her cabinet and begins sifting through files. "...t...t...t...Traphe, here we go."

She takes her seat again and looks over the file. "Yes, Captain Isos speaks quite highly of her skill. A few good remarks from you as well from when you where captain. No criminal record, at least not since she arrived here. Okay yes, with your recommendation we can give her a chance. I'll want to have a talk with her, myself, first of course."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 01, 2012, 11:28:20 pm
I smile and nod at Charity.

"Of course.  Traphe?  Would you please come in?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 01, 2012, 11:34:24 pm
Traphe steps forward, pushing open the door and walking into Charity's office.

'Here goes nothing...'

Traphe salutes Charity.

"Hello, Duchess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 01, 2012, 11:41:07 pm
"Hello Traphe," says the Duchess as she sits behind her desk.

"Captain Khenal has recommended you for a position in my personal guard, and I am willing to give you a chance, provided you can answer a few questions for me. Firstly, why do you want to serve in the Ducal Guard?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 02, 2012, 04:05:41 pm
"Um. Because if I can help everypony by serving in the Ducal Guard, I should. It wouldn't be right for me to not do my best, especially if it prevents something else like what happened in the caverns."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 02, 2012, 04:13:37 pm
"Well, Traphe, being in the Ducal Guard will be a bit different than what your used to. In your job you were tasked with catching thieves and criminals and murderers, keeping all of us safe from ourselves. But in the Ducal Guard your job will be different. You job will be to protect me and my family from ANY threat, internal or from outside, and you should know that that won't be easy."

Charity stand up and walks around her desk, her midnight blue cloak, the symbol of her possition flows behind her. The Duchess walks up to the mare and looks her straight in the eyes. "It's no secret that I've been the target of assassins, Diomedian ambushes, cultists, and likely more. Would you be prepared to fight and die in place of me, or my husband, or any of my foals?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 02, 2012, 04:20:28 pm
Traphe's heliotrope eyes harden, and lock with Charity's.

"I said I would do anything to help anypony in Glitterglen. If I should die in the defense of another, so be it. If that pony is you, your husband, or one of your foals, I will not hesitate. If my duty is to protect you and yours, it shall be done. If I must die to do my duty, I will do so without fail."



((ed:typo))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 02, 2012, 04:35:16 pm
Charity smiles. 'Yes, this one will do nicely, I knew Khenal would be the right choice for the new Captain, and he's already done so well. It's almost like he knows why I'm expanding my guard. Maybe he does, he's always been the clever one.'

"Very well then Traphe. You have but one more thing you must do, and then you will be officially a member of My Guard. Kneel, and swear your loyalty to me, above all others, in the name of the Sisters."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 02, 2012, 04:39:49 pm
Traphe's eyes soften as she kneels, head downward in supplication.

"In the name of the Sisters and by my honor I do swear to obey you, Charity, Duchess of Glitterglen, in all things, above all others, so long as I draw breath!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 02, 2012, 04:46:20 pm
Charity's smile grows ever wider. "Yes, that will do Traphe, you may rise." Charity turns to Khenal. "Take her down to the armory and get her fitted for some better armor, and give her the pick of the weapons." She turns back to her newest recruit, "The fortress guard has to make do with the militia's leftovers, Traphe, but my guard, they get first pick. Naturally, you will also see an increase in your pay next month. Khenal set's the schedules for training and your other duties, and he will get you in the rotation as soon as possible." She returns to her desk. "Is there anything else from either of you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 02, 2012, 04:51:37 pm
'That went well enough. A little hoof-licking never hurts, and if having the Duchess happy with me means I'm better able to protect her, her family, and everyone else, all the better.'

"No, Your Grace. You have my thanks. I hope I shall fulfill your expectations in the years to come."

Traphe glances at Khenal, waiting for him to speak.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 02, 2012, 04:54:00 pm
I smile at Traphe and Charity, bowing again to the latter.

"Not for now, Charity.  Come on, Traphe.  Lets get you outfitted propperly."

My horn glows as I hold the door open for Traphe, glad to have another capable and good pony in the Ducal Guard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 02, 2012, 04:59:20 pm
Traphe follows Khenal out, her mind working over the phrasing of the oath.

'I'll need to think on this once I have some time, this could bode badly...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 02, 2012, 05:30:16 pm
Traphe's Diary 
27 Limestone 101

Charity swore me in as a member of the Ducal Guard today. I suppose it is good; I'll certainly be able to serve Glitterglen more effectively like this. That oath, though. It sounds like she's worried about some sort of internal dissent. There are two primary possibilities here: that her concerns are reasonable, and somepony is actively working against her; and that she is worrying over something that isn't going to be an issue unless she makes it one. If it is the former, then all I must do is the most straightforward application of my duty as a Ducal Guard and a pony of Glitterglen. If it is the latter, though, I may have to do something that results in my death or exile, but with the Sisters as my witnesses, I will not allow Charity to harm herself or others by doing things she will later regret any more than I will allow an assassin to strike her down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 02, 2012, 06:03:00 pm
Charity's Journal 27th Limestone, 101

Khenal has brought forth our first new recruit, for the Ducal Guard. Traphe from the Fortress Guard. He's worked with her before and she's both an experienced ranger, and one of our better fighters. She is an excellent choice, I couldn't be happier to have her in my guard. She took an oath of loyalty and that was that. Khenal is taking her to be fitted for some new steel now, and to let her take her pick from the armory.

Charity's Journal 1st Sandstone, 101

For reasons I cannot fathom Khenal and Cryptson have decided to drag me and my bodyguard out into the jungle to go hunting. We haven't seen any Diomedians in the jungle in months, they didn't even attack during the summer like they have every year before. It's most strange, but I don't think that it's that smart to assume that they aren't still out here. It's wet and cold here at night, as I write this by the campfire light. We haven't seen anything worth taking yet though. Still, it IS nice spending some time with friends away from all my responsibilities.

Charity's Journal 2nd Sandstone, 101

Today, Traphe found the tracks of something, something big. She says they look like Tiger tracks, but they'd have to be from a Tiger the size of an elephant. It leaves a trail even a city filly like me could follow, but it's getting dark, we will set out again in the morning. Traphe says we aren't to far behind it. Why am I so excited about this?

Charity's Journal 3rd Sandstone, 101

We caught the Giant Tiger today. Thanks to Traphe's tracking skills we were able to get it within sight. I had expected it to attack when it saw us but instead it ran for it. Madush dashed after it, the rest of us tried to follow him but none could match his speed. When we caught up he was sitting on the dead Tiger, it had only one injury, a bolt right to it's brain. Madush said he killed it with one shot, though I noticed he was missing more than 1 bolt from his quiver. I called him on it, and he blushed, we all had a good laugh. It's a long way from home, but we are going to try and get the body back, I'd like to have something nice made for Madush from it's hide if possible.

Charity's Journal 4th Sandstone, 101

It's so good to finally be home and to see the foals again. I'm not looking forward to the stack of work that's been piling up, but this trip was a great way to relax, we should do it again next year sometime.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 02, 2012, 10:17:16 pm
Khenal's Sequel, CHapter 87

Charity accepted Traphe to the Ducal Guard!  The oath she made her swear was slightly concerning, but it makes sense.  I mean, she needs some kind of proof that we're going to protect her.  I'm just glad she didn't ask me to swear a similar oath.  I don't think I could.


Chapter 88

A few days ago, Traphe said she saw something really big out in the jungle, and she thought it might be fun to take Charity and her family hunting.  Cryptson suggested just him and Charity, not wanting to put their foals in any danger.  The trip was a lot of fun, honestly.  Traphe is a great tracker, even if the giant tiger left a huge trail through the jungle.  It took us a few days to actually track it down, and Madush was able to fell the speedy thing with a bolt to the head.  He's getting to be quite good with that crossbow of his.  Which reminds me, I need to find more melee ponies for the Ducal Guard.  Traphe is learning how to use her crossbow in melee, and I've started Osal and Madush on a similar regimen, but I'm kinda the only front-line fighter right now.  Well, not counting Cryptson.  He's not technically part of the guard, but he likes to train with us in the barracks.  He's amazing with that pick of his, too.  The parries and strikes he can do with it I would swear were impossible if I hadn't watched him do them myself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Flying Dice on March 02, 2012, 10:40:51 pm
Traphe's Diary
1 Sandstone 101


It's nice to be out in the jungle again, even if the large party is scaring off game. I suppose that's a good thing; I'm out here to protect the Duchess and her husband, not gather food.


2 Sandstone 101

I found giant tiger tracks today. It probably already knows we're here, and if it has lived this long, it probably knows to stay well clear of us. Hopefully we won't corner it; a chase would be best. Charity seems excited, Sisters know why.


3 Sandstone

We caught up to the giant tiger today. Naturally, it ran. Madush galloped off after it like a foal on their first hunt. Thankfully, he got a lucky shot before it turned on him. We're heading back now, thankfully. I try to not show it, but it is rather frustrating being out in this wonderful jungle with a bunch of ponies nearly as noisy as workers from the capital.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 03, 2012, 09:47:23 pm
“Sir, I am Murderer, a Thief, a Bastard and a Fiend.”  A crimson Pegasus recited with concise prose. He was emaciated and haggard from countless nights of running, Being hunted by the most notorious crime family in Talintranced, the Startame family. His hooves were bound. Couth Darkmane, one of the Don’s youngest and most promising Protege, stood behind his bounty.

“But I swear unto you, on the most Holy god of your choice, I would never cross the family. I am loyal.”

A white Unicorn, Obese to the extremity, sat behind a finely engraved slate table. He leaned back, rolling a cigar around his mouth. His eyes pierce through the Pegasus. They, black as the bottom of a well, made him feel so hopelessly trapped.

“You were grabbed by a rival family. You were tortured. You cracked. I understand that. I can forgive that.” The Don Groveled in a domineering Boston accent.

He gestured for his captor’s binds cut.

“You told them my schedule and told them the most opportune time to take out a hit on me. I Understand that.  I can forgive that.”

He took out a fine bottle of Bourbon and poured out two glasses. He motioned for the Pegasus to take a drink. The Pegasus hesitated. odds are the drink is poisoned. Then again, refusing a generosity from the Don would kill him faster than the poison. He bit the bullet.

“But lie to me? what did I ever do to garner such disrespect?”

Willlow sat in the corner of the room , furiously jotting down the conversation. her eyes constantly flicking up at clock to keep her timestamps accurate.

“I’m not your rat! What’s it going to take proove it!?”

The two had a staredown for long while. The Don breaks it with a laugh.

“Well, look who just grew a spine!” he chuckled.

“Relax my friend, either way it’s the past. Just do me favor we can put this all behind us.”

The Pegasus sighed with relief. he pours himself another glass of Bourbon. He knocks it back, holding his head high. the Don scratched his chin. Couth received the silent message and nodded. Darkmane Garroted the Pegasus with a fine Catgut.

Willow snapped to attention reflexively.
“wha’ are you doing? Wha’ are you doing you animals!?” she shouted.

The Don pulled out a dagger and used it to pin the Pegasus’s hoof to the table.

“Do me a favor and Die quick!” he shouted at the pony.

Blood and Bourbon spewed out of the Pegasus’s neck wound and he keeled over. The Don caught his breath and snapped a look at Willow.

“Doin’ Business, my dear Secretary.”

“He... was the mole, right? You were a hundred percent certain?” she quivered.

“Not in the slightest.” he responded nonchalantly. he groomed his mane back.

“Willow, take a note, an take this as life lesson; when you distract em’ with a laugh and a smile, they never see the knife coming.”

He sauntered over to her and stuck his tongue to the base of her chin and slowly arched it to her temple. She hemorrhaged with disgust.

“There’s a mop and bucket in the back” he whispered. 

The Don walked out of his office. Couth started to follow, but turned back to meet her sister’s gaze.

“I’m sorry you had to see the Nit n' Grit, Sis.” He sighed and caught up.


Willow's Ice blue eyes flickered to life. The second she could get her brain to synapse she put it to use connecting the dots. white sheets. beds. hospital. Failed Jungles. Glitterglen. Brother in Glitterglen. No flowers around bedside. Throats not slit. Brother doesn't know I'm here. let's keep it that way.

she picks up a hand mirror by her bedside. same Olive face. same red hair. no major scarring or disfigurement. good. She punches the mirror, fracturing it. she takes a triangular piece of mirror and rapidly swipes it across the metal bedframe until the wedge has a lethal edge.
she throws the mirror's remains out her hospital window and pockets the makeshift razor.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 12:39:11 am
Kris sighs as she pushes her diary aside and places it into her saddlebag.  She tries to reposition herself to ease the incessant pain in her chest and belly, but there was apparently no way she could lay to get much in the way of relief.  The pain relief spell she'd tried to cast on herself had helped some, but she was so weak the spell hadn't done much.  And nothing to ease the nausea.

She deserved every bit of it.

She rests her head on the bed and closes her eyes.  What was she thinking?  She was such a foal.  An idiot.  She had been in the militia for scant weeks by this point, how could she possibly have thought she was skilled enough to take on a monster ten times her size?  She deserved to have some sense beaten into her.  In fact, she probably deserved to be reprimanded officially some how for being so stupid.  Somepony else could have been hurt or killed if the thing got away.

At the very least her armor was going to have to be repaired now.  It was the only reason she was alive right now, and it was pretty mangled by the devastating kicks, last she saw.  The thought of that kick to her chest resurfaced in her mind.  The panic she felt when she couldn't breathe.  Then the blow to her stomach and the immediate nausea she felt.  It was only by some miracle she managed to move out of the way of its last stamp.  Well, she managed to avoid getting killed, but her tail was pretty broken up.

Her face contorts slightly and she begins swallowing convulsively as the nausea peaks for a few seconds.  She manages to hold it in at least.  It would be back though, and it was getting worse.  How she hadn't taken some major internal injuries was beyond her.  But she was going to puke sooner or later from the way she felt, so she opens her eyes and searches the room for a bucket or something else to relieve her stomach contents into when it came to that.

Her eyes settle on the bed to the opposite side of the hospital.  The bed where her mom had spent those painful days after she broke her leg.  So many memories flood back... and her face again contorts, but this time in frustration and sadness.  She never liked coming to the hospital anyway of course, but this brought back memories of her mom she didn't like in the least.

Then the words in her mother's letter come to her.  "I can't be there to comfort you now..."

She closes her eyes again and lets a few tears drip onto her pillow.  At least she managed to keep her crying silent.  She wasn't a foal anymore, as much as her idiocy might say otherwise.  She had to be an adult and suck it up.  But she could just picture her mother sitting by her bedside, gently stroking her mane, consuming concern on her face.  Or lying next to her on the floor, like she'd done in turn those years ago.  Oh, Celestia and Luna help her... she wasn't going to get over this any time soon... she knew it.

What a complete idiot she was.  Hadn't she learned from her mother?  She had come so close to joining her... through the very same way...  "Mom..." she whispers under her breath.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 12:39:29 am
Wait, she takes it back. There is a note and a coinpurse on the bedside table.

The Note reads,

Dear Willow,
   
I don't know when you'll read this, the doctors can't tell me when you'll wake up. I want you to know my foal is going to see his father again because of your courage. here's fifty bits. it's the least I can do. I might be gone by the time you wake up. taking a Zebra Caravan to Dawnpick, then wrap around To Talintranced.

Sigil
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 12:44:58 am
Friesden wanders over to Kris' bed with a look of concern. "Kris? Are you okay? You look ill..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 12:53:19 am
Kris looks up to her and fights for words for a second while she tries to level her voice.  Friesden got upset so easily, and she knew her mom was her friend.  She didn't want to start her crying too.  Not that there was much to do to dry the fur on her cheeks right now.

"Um... I... I feel really sick..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 12:59:36 am
"Are you sure that's all? Your mother saved my life...I couldn't save her...but if there's anything, anything I can do to help you, just say it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 01:17:03 am
She swallows back her nausea again and looks Friesden in the eyes.  What should she say?  That she felt like a complete foal?  That she missed her mom?  That she was so close to joining her, and how scared she was at the thought?  How she felt she had nopony she could talk to about it?

Well... Friesden was somepony...

Her ears droop as she lets out a breath.
  "...can... can we just talk for a little bit?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 01:18:16 am
"Of course we can. What do you want to talk about?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 01:26:02 am
Great.  Now what was she going to actually say?

"...I-I don't want to burden you with my problems... but... I just need somepony to talk to..."  She blinks and looks away to the empty bed where her mom had rested those years ago before her eyes drift back to Friesden.  "...I just feel so stupid... and scared... I... I mean... I could have..."  Her words trail off as she finds herself incapable of finishing the sentence.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 01:27:52 am
"It's okay...It's okay. I...can you keep a secret for me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 01:29:52 am
She looks Friesden in the face for a few moments.  Secret?  "O-Of course... what is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 01:34:46 am
Willow likes secrets too. she peeks in the conversation, pretending to sleep.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 01:35:48 am
"You know how your mother saved my life? When...When she was sick...I was in a really bad place. I hated myself, thought I was useless...But...But your mother...She...She used me...And she showed me I wasn't useless. I wasn't worthless. And that's why I lived...Why I didn't kill myself."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 01:46:29 am
Willow goes numb with terror at the Doctor's psychotic ramblings. 

"what did you get yourself into, girl?" she whispered.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 01:46:51 am
Her eyes widen a bit as she listens.  "You... you wanted to... I had no idea..."  Well, she felt silly for feeling so sad for herself just now.  She had no idea what it felt like to be so depressed you wanted to kill yourself.  Although she might not have been so far from it the day her mom died...

"You... you were one of her best friends... maybe even her best friend... you know that right?"

She fights back a pang of sadness as she realizes that she didn't really have any close friends in Glitterglen any more.  Lilac was gone.  She was only just getting to know Adamant...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 01:49:28 am
"I do...And she was mine...But...If you want a friend...or somepony to talk to...whatever you need, I'll be it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 02:00:17 am
A small sad smile forces its way onto her face.  "Thank you..."  She felt a little better already.  Friesden reminded her of her mom, but at least it was mostly happy memories.  And she really needed a friend right now.

Another thought strikes her... Friesden knew Starkey better than she did...
  "...um... do you think Grandpa Starkey will be upset about what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 02:02:18 am
"Dad won't be upset. Just worried about you being hurt."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 02:14:32 am
"Good..."  Her ears perk up a bit as that fear goes away.  "...I did something pretty dumb..."  She'd let herself down at least, and probably her mom if she really was watching, but maybe she hadn't let everypony down.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 02:25:53 am
"Not as dumb as what I nearly did...So you're at least smarter than me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 02:48:46 am
Willow starts to fake a groan.

"Ugh, Nurse! Nurse! oh, the pain!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 03:03:11 am
"Oh, um, I'll be back after, Kris."

Friesden goes over to the bed of the pony who had started to scream. "What is it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 03:15:29 am
"Oh, thank you! Ohh, the pain is unbearable! what's the strongest drug ya' have?" Willow groaned, hamming it up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 03:20:31 am
"I...um... I don't think we have...um...drugs?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 03:31:12 am
"Wha', no drugs?" willow grinned. her ailment miraculously disappears. "ah, well I tried. Name's Willow. You're Friesden and -wait, don't tell me- Kris. So I couldn't help but over yer conversation. Sounds like something bad went down." 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 03:34:42 am
Kris looks over to the pony she didn't recognize and says, "Um, I... I got hurt trying to fight an elephant pony in the arena."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 03:36:51 am
Willow lets out a long whistle.

"Ooh, Ouch. what'ca do that for?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 03:42:40 am
She cuts her eyes in the direction of the arena and lets out a breath.  "I'm not really sure, to be honest.  I've... had a lot on my mind lately... some of the militia were training in the arena, and I guess I thought I could handle it.  I was wrong of course..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 03:50:52 am
"Heh, well you're the not only one pardner. A tangle with a Winged panther got me here. guess that old crow Mother Nature still 'as a few tricks up 'er sleeve."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 03:56:01 am
Kris gives her a nervous smile.  "Yeah, I guess so."  Of course in her case she'd willingly picked a fight with it, so she didn't have a whole lot of an excuse.  "I don't think I've ever seen you around before.  Are you new here?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 04:12:39 am
She cocks her head in thought. "yeah, yeah you could say that. Don't live here. I'm kinda drifter... Failed Jungles is my home, really. might get back on the road soon..."

Didn't this pony say her mother died? mother in the milita? well if the spot's open, Ka-ching.

.. Or I might stay for a while. I'd need a job, though. so you said you're in the milita? how's that like?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 04:19:26 am
"Other than the training mishap... it was... mostly... uneventful until now.  I haven't been in the militia very long though..."  She sighs and looks down.  "We get attacked by diomedians a lot.  And... monsters... from the caverns."  She's silent for a moment.  "We had a monster attack about a month ago.  A lot of ponies didn't come back from that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 04:28:29 am
Ka-ching Ka-ching

"Oh, that's terrible!" Willow gasped. "Well, it sounds like ya need the horse power. I see what I can find out. In the meantime-"

Willow starts to whistle feverishly.

"Roughneck? Roughneck? Probably in the kennels."

She gets out of bed.

"I'll find 'em"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 04, 2012, 09:08:38 am
"Um...Are you sure you're well enough to be walking?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 04, 2012, 10:40:37 pm
((Just an FYI that I probably won't be on the IRC tonight.  I'll be kind of touch and go for the next week, but I'll try to get on when I get a chance.  I'll still be able to post when I get a chance.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 04, 2012, 11:06:18 pm
"What, Me? Oh no yeah I'm Sprier than a chicken!" she lied. Oh, does she regret milking the doc for medication. Maybe another day in the Hospital.. No. She needed to move, even if her feet didn't want to.

She grabs her Ten Gallon and her ranger gear, made of fine studded leather. Dagger missing. Wise. For who the hell was she? What the hell was she capable of? She didn't even know sometimes. She switched clothes and headed out. Then came back.

 "Uh, Doc? I couldn't help but overhear your "Secret" as well...I just - I don't know the who or the what or the why but It's obvious you've been through hell. All I can say is a wound's a wound. Physical? Psychological? Emotional? they all heal with time."

Shes slides her hoof across the brim of her hat

"Ah, I ain't helpin'. Just oversteppin'. Just... Stay golden Doc. See ya round Kris."

Willow heads for the kennels

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 08, 2012, 07:24:55 pm
Friesden is waiting with Starkey, a huge smile on her face. Starkey is ensuring her gown is in order - at least, as near as a stallion can. Friesden is glowing with happiness. "This is going to be the best!"

Khenal stands at the altar, looking like a nervous wreck.  He's dressed in a relatively simple suit, well cut and tailored, but not flashy. Charity stands in the dinning hall in-front of everypony, dressed in her finest robes. She was nervous, about all this, she'd never presided over something like this before, but had been honored when the bride and groom had asked her to. She looked to Khenal, he was quite handsome in his suit, it reminded her of Cryptson at their wedding. She smiled and waited for the ceremony to begin.

"Are you ready, sweetheart?" asks Starkey. "Yes, yes, yes!" replies Friesden,

Falcata smiles as she watches Friesden prepare.  So many memories of her own back in Coupledye a decade ago with Estoc...

Friesden says to Starkey "This is going to be the best day of my life!" "And of mine, Friesden... It's time. Let's go." "Okay!" replies Friesden in joy.

Starkey takes Friesden's hoof in his own, and they set off. Khenal smiles nervously as the bridal march begins to play. Friesden is almost jumping in excitement as she walks down the aisle.

Charity looks out at Friesden as she begins to walk down the aisle. This is it she thinks. Cryptson sits on what would traditionally be the groom's side, though as neither of them have much family, and most share friends the side doesn't truly matter, he thinks to himself how lovely Friesden looks, and how he can see why so many stallions want her, even if she didn't quite meet his tastes.

Khenal stares as Friesden comes down the aisle, amazed that she could look even more beautiful than she usually does. Starkey just trots calmly beside her, staring at his daughter in absolute adoration.

Falcata watches the ceremony commence, feeling butterflies in her own stomach.  How that was possible when you were dead was beyond her.

Friesden arrives at the altar, still smiling wide.

Even in undeath, Otik somehow manages to feel faint. She leans against Falcata for support, who gives her a nervous smile as well.
Khenal smiles widely at Friesden, unable to find the words to tell her how amazing she is. Friesden smiles even /wider/ at Khenal. The smile seems to extend off her face.

Charity looks over the two, 'This has been a long time coming.' Charity looks out to the crowd and begins, "Friends, family, and assorted others of Glitterglen. We are gathered here today, to witness the binding of Captain Khenal, and Doctor Friesden, in the most holy of unions the Sisters, in their mercy, offer to us, marriage." Charity begins to lead the town in a prayer for the long life and happiness of the two ponies. As the prayer is concluded, Charity moves on, "I am told that the couple has prepared their  own vows, which they will now recite." Charity turns her gaze to her loyal captain.

Khenal nervously clears his throat, wondering if any words can actually convey how much he loves Friesden, while Friesden looks at Khenal in adoration.

"Friesden.  'I love you' doesn't even begin to describe how I feel about you.  You are so kind, so caring, so loving!  Every day I wonder how the Sisters could have blessed somepony like me with such a wonderful pony as you.  You are beautiful: inside and out, through and through. And you make me so happy.  You make me a better pony, because you set such a wonderful example for how to love everypony, everyone.  I've seen me without you, and I never want to be that pony again.  So I will give my all to you, to be used as you see fit to help whoever you deem needy. You are my Only Light, and you guide me through these rough waters like a beacon.  I can think of no greater honor, in this world or the next, than to be your husband."

Friesden beams even more than could be physically possible, and speaks in turn.

"Khenal, I love you so much that I can't even believe it could be true. Every day I am with you brings me to even higher heights of happiness. I can't believe how good you are, how happy you make me, how you care for me so much. Your love is a balm to my spirit, and a mighty fortress to protect me. You are my light, my song, my joy, my strength, my redeemer, my defence, my all. Without you, I am less than nothing, less than anything of worth, and yet you give me the greatest gift, that of being your wife."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 08, 2012, 10:09:23 pm
I beam back at Friesden, amazed that such an amazing pony can love me.  A few tears of joy well up as she finishes her vows, knowing she truly wants this as much as I do.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 09, 2012, 02:56:42 pm
Charity moves to the final stages of the ceremony. "Do you Captain Khenal, take Friesden, to be your lawfully wedded wife, to have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and health, until death do you part."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 09, 2012, 02:59:38 pm
I look Friesden in her beautiful eyes, about to utter two little words with more meaning and power behind them than any others.

"I do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 09, 2012, 03:04:37 pm
Charity turns to Friesden, "And do you Friesden, take Khenal to be your husband?
Do you promise to love, cherish and obey him, whether
in good fortune or in adversity, and to seek with him a life of virtue under the watchful eyes of the Sisters?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 12, 2012, 02:15:58 pm
((And you thought you'd seen the last of this Rp, didn't you?))

Mandatory sad music (http://www.youtuberepeat.com/watch/?v=BwXlzy9k7jI)

Hireo looked on at the ceremony, dressed in his best attire. his eyes were glassed over and he wore a pained expression.

on one hoof, the day was finally here. his best friend and his sis were tying the knot and he couldn’t be any happier for them. it always struck him what an odd pairing these two were from the the very beginning. a law giver and a convict? in love? scandalous. unthinkable. polar opposites. and yet their love was undeniable all the same. Friesden has come such a long way. just look at her at the alter. he remembered her high points, remembered her lowest depressions, and remembered being there for her every step of the way. and now look, just when Glitterglen hit her darkest hour, when he about convinced himself the sun would never rise again, Friesden saved him from himself.

on the other, this was supposed to be his day. he knew this feeling was selfish and wrong, but he couldn’t squelch it no matter how hard he tried. but what could he do? play idiot? deny he’s getting the short end of the stick? was the appropriate response to unhinge and ruin this beautiful event? or was it to endure the weight of it all? he sank into some memories of when he was a colt. when life was so simple. about the age he could swing his wood sword around and listen to old legends and stories. he lived his life by their tenants. be best you can be. save the damzel. slay the dragon. live happily ever after. failed, failed and failed. these stories never told him how to recover from watching his fiance and his mother die in front of him. how to cope with the fact that no matter what he does, it will be overshadowed by Khenal’s accomplishments. how to keep  going after he’s come to the revelation that he is not integral to the grand scheme of things. that, like Flacata and Otik, he too could fade away.


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 12, 2012, 03:49:46 pm
Friesden looks once more at Khenal, adoration writ large on her face.

"I do."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 12, 2012, 03:53:54 pm
Charity looks out past the two ponies and says, "Then by the powers vested in me by the Sisters above and by our ruler Princess Hugwax of the Shells of Dance, and as Duchess of The Failed Jungles, I pronounce you, husband and wife." She looks to Khenal, "You may kiss the bride."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 12, 2012, 04:09:19 pm
I reach up and gently move Friesden's veil away from her face and give her the most loving kiss I have given her to date, for this is the happiest moment of my life: to kiss my wife for the first time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 12, 2012, 04:31:00 pm
Friesden grabs hold of Khenal with her forelegs and holds the kiss for as long as she possibly can.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 12, 2012, 04:38:55 pm
Kris smiles as the two are officially wed.  Although her mom wasn't here to see it, she knew that she'd have been overjoyed to see her friends so happy.

Out of sight in another realm of existence, Falcata sits next to Otik, beaming with joy.  Finally, after all Friesden had been through, she and Khenal could move on with their lives and with a little luck really live happily ever after.  She might not have lived to see it in person, but she was glad all the same that she could at least witness it at all.

There was the gnawing feeling inside her that today was meant to be so much more... but at least there was still some joy to come from it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 13, 2012, 03:21:13 am
Otik looks away, burying her face in Falcata's mane. Her daughter had finally married. She should be happy about this. And in a way, she is. But whenever her gaze falls on the stallion standing just behind her, her mind drifts, to what could have been...

She barely stifles a sob.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 13, 2012, 03:27:56 am
Falcata gives Otik a reassuring pat on the back.  She knew exactly how she felt.  Heiro wasn't the only pony to lose a lover... Starkey was also supposed to be wed today to her...  Did she really understand how Otik felt?  She'd known Starkey far longer than she knew Heiro.  The two of them had been through so much more together... and the monster had taken her from him.

She lets out her breath and tries to keep her voice level, feeling the inkling of a cry coming on herself.  Happiness and sadness roiled through her mind.
  "It's... are you alright?"

Of course she wasn't alright... but she'd gone and said it now...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 14, 2012, 07:27:42 pm
Otik looks up, trying to compose herself.

"A-Aye, it's just... it's such a w-wonderful sight, isn't it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 14, 2012, 10:06:28 pm
She nods and gives her a forced smile.  Now it was getting to her...  "Yes, I'm glad they're finally together.  And... I'm glad I could see it... one way or another."  Her eyes track over to Heiro, then to Starkey, then Kris.  She has to look away after a moment, before she started crying herself.

Something inside her told her that she should say something to Otik... something reassuring, but she didn't know what.  Otik hadn't spoken to Starkey, even after they talked to Friesden and Khenal.  There was probably a reason for that... probably similar to why she hadn't talked to Kris yet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 16, 2012, 05:52:34 pm
Violent Purple portal erupts behind Falcata and Otik. A familiar face steps out.

"...And I'm glad one of you dolts finally kicked the bucket. It was getting so lonely here in hell. Did ya miss me?" Couth Darkmane seethed through a maniacal grin.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: slothen on March 16, 2012, 07:17:07 pm
fuck me i'm only on page 8.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 16, 2012, 09:15:13 pm
Falcata feels all of the positive emotions drain away as the familiar voice reaches her ears.  She turns to see Couth standing behind them, and feels a chill run down her spine.  Of course...

Her face hardens into a sneer.
  "Couth..." she says in a low voice, all but a hiss.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 17, 2012, 06:40:27 am
"Hah, Falcata! look at you, haven't aged a day! How have you been?" Couth exclaimed in a buddy-buddy like tone.

"Well, except for the 'being dead' and all."  He added with venom.

"So how did the whole heroism thing pan out? Was it everything you hoped for, getting slaughtered by a monster ten times the size of you out of a mis-guided sense of loyalty?" A sense of loyalty your friends don't share, I might add."

Couth looks down at the wedding.

"look at them, carrying on as if you we're never there.  You're nothing but a cautionary tale already." he grinned.

"Ha ha ha. And- ha ha. Oh, and trauma you put you daughter Kris though!? Her watching you die in vain? Tears fleeing from her eyes as she comforted your last gasps of breath? And then she comes up with the brilliant idea,"I want to be just like her! I want to end up a pile of red mulch just like my mother!" Ha ha, priceless!"

"Hah, Kris. I remember I was going to foalknap Kris, you know that? I was going to use her to strong arm you into bringing me Friesden, Knap Adamant, tie them both up to Kerosine barrels placed in stockpiles on opposite ends of the fort, light fiften minute fuses,  and force Khenal to choose between an innocent foal and a murderer. o-ho, and when he would've picked the good doctor over Charity's son, I would have shown the fort your true colors. And while Glitterglen tore you apart? I would have finished the job with Charity and been paid handsomely by the diomidians for handing them an alicorn. put all that coin towards a campaign for mayor, then, who knows? I could have been your boss." He beamed, head swimming in delusions of grandeur. He crashed back to reality.

"But then you ruined all the fun." He snarled, almost spitting the consonants.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 17, 2012, 02:41:22 pm
Anger?  Rage?  No, those words weren't strong enough to convey the emotion she felt as she listened to Couth speak.  She looses a shout and leaps upon him, pinning him to the ground.  Her face contorts in wrath and her eyes light up like embers as she leans in close.  "I'd gladly give my life again if I could, if it meant protecting the ponies I care about."  She places a hoof on his throat and adds some of her weight to it, as if choking a spirit would actually mean something.  "And rest assured, that if you'd harmed Charity or any of her family, there would be no mortal force that could have stopped me from crushing the life from you."

She leans in closer, baring her teeth in a snarl.  "And leave my child out of this... if you had harmed her, then there is no force on this side of the universe that could have stopped me from getting my revenge.  Not even Luna herself could stop me."

She clenches her jaw as she realizes that this was all futile.  They were already dead, Couth couldn't harm anypony now.  "My only regret is that I didn't discover the truth about you earlier.  You nearly killing me turned out to be one of the best things to ever happen to me... but I'd have given it all up to prevent the damage you caused while you were free..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 18, 2012, 03:28:48 am
"*gak* I- *Ack* know you would do *ugh* anything to be with Kris again-" Couth choked out. he wrestled with Falcata, and with a little sneaky legwork reversed her hold, pinning her down. "In fact I'm counting on it." he chimed cryptically, his true intent hidden behind his smug smile as always.

He shoves Falcata off him with maximum prejudice and brushes himself off. "Ah, but I am getting ahead of myself. It's been fun catching up, but let's get down to buisnuss. Luna has sent me. your day of judgement has come. just beyond that portal lies a place where we'll decide weather you'll go to heaven or hell. I'll be arguing why you should go to hell, and- hold on," Couth pulled out a scroll "Let's see ... somepony named Es- Estoc will be defending why you should go to heaven."

"Now, This is the part where I am supposed to give you the option to stay in purgatory, but I have plans for you. you're coming with me one way or the other. As for you -" He glaces at Otik "Heaven and I don't have any plans for a lesbian, Diomidian loving skank like you. Stay; Go, I don't care. But personally I would stay." he whispered.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 18, 2012, 10:24:44 am
Falcata yelps in surprise as she is hurled from Couth.  She lands a few steps away and immediately rolls to her hooves before turning to face him again.  As she approaches and listens, renewed fear rolls through her.  She'd been putting off her judgment for good reason... why had Luna sent him of all ponies to come get her?  If he was really going to be fighting to condemn her to eternity outside of paradise and potentially torment... and Luna had sent him... that must mean her chances were slim...

She finally reaches Couth as he makes his untoward remark about Otik, and her apprehension and fear immediately dissolve into righteous fury again.  She brings a hoof up to Couth's jaw with all the might she can muster.
  "Don't ever speak about her like that again!"

Estoc was standing nearby as all of this transpired, and was moments away from throwing himself upon Couth when he heard his own name.  The anger drained away and was replaced by confusion, and he trots to a stop near Couth.  "Defend her...?"  He looks up to Falcata as she decks Couth and adds, "...are you ready?  If not, I'd like to see this pony force the both of us..."

She silently stares at the evil parody of a pony before her... unsure herself what to say or do...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 19, 2012, 02:27:35 am
Couth rubs his jaw with glee. if he were still mortal a blow like that would fracture the skull. "Ha, look at you! all that strength and nothing to do with it!"

he levels with Falcata

"Are you scared? angry? Don't be. everyone loses to death in the end. you are not unique. you are not a special snowflake."

"I've been living on borrowed time ever since I came here. And when I was sick I came to terms with my mortality. I didn't fear death."

"What if I told you I found a way to cheat that bastard? Death, I mean."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean If you do exactly what I say, jump when I tell you to jump, I can reunite you with your daughter.."

"I'm listening..." Falcata leaned in.

"But there is one hell of a catch..." Couth's red eyes darted to his sister at the wedding reception. For once his poker face snapped into something nervous.  "I... need to go, -do- something. Don't go anywhere." he drifts through a wall.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 19, 2012, 02:49:38 am
Otik watches the buck drift away, not taking her eyes off him until he disappears into the crowd. She stares off into space where he once was.

"...d'you believe him? D'you really think... he's got a way back?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 19, 2012, 02:56:10 am
Falcata sits back on her haunches.  After a moment, she says, "Him?  Believe somepony like that?  Not on my life."  The irony of that statement sets in, but a smile doesn't form on her face.  She slowly looks over to where the murderous psychopath's ghost once was, and she adds, "But... even the slightest chance... the slightest chance to be with Kris again..."

Estoc snorts.  "Let him believe what delusions he wants.  And even if he could do such a thing, what price would there be?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 20, 2012, 08:13:44 pm
((Due to DVNO taking a long time to respond, we have decided in the IRC to put this current scene on indefinite hiatus. And move on with things.))

Charity's Journal 1st Sandstone, 101

Ramol's squad has the duty of watching over the workers in the jungle this month, escorting them to and from their work stations, warding off predators and preventing ambushes.

Charity's Journal 10th Sandstone, 101

Ramol's squad spotted a herd of Elephant ponies near the workers, some of the workers were frightened. And so the soldiers decided to run them off, they were forced to fight, and apparently killed 3 of them. The stories they are telling down in the hall are quite unbelievable. They say Shigos cut one in half across the stomach with one slash. But that's ridiculous, it couldn't be true.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Woah.png)
Charity's Journal 11th Sandstone, 101

New migrants to Glitterglen, they bring our total population up to 150 indivuals.

We have:

Earthpony Mare, Cook
Unicorn Stallion, Expert Bone Doctor/Expert Dairy Farmer (one of the strangest resumes I've ever read)
Pegasus Stallion, Ranger (He's being introduced to the surviving Skyguard.)
Unicorn Mare, Spinster
Earthpony Stallion, Hauler (was an apprentice armor smith before coming here, but we just don't have the material to waste on a novice.
Unicorn Stallion, Ranger
Unicorn Stallion, Gemsetter/clothing maker
Unicorn Stallion, potash maker (He's volunteered to join the militia)

Charity's Journal 23rd Sandstone, 101

The Skyguard is finally being brought back onto active duty. Starkey hesitated for a long time before choosing who to take over as Captain of the squad. He finally chose Jaxler. I don't know much about the pony personally, but he's been with us for awhile, and was Otik's second in command, so he's the logical choice.

Charity's Journal 27th Sandstone, 101

While in the jungle working on the road our alicorn Architect went into labor. She gave birth to a earthpony colt right there on the new road. Fortunately there were no complications so far from home, and both mother and child are fine now, and the doctors give both a clean bill of health.

Charity's Journal 14th Timber, 101

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Stetar%20withdraws.png)

While the workers were outside the walls working on the stone road, in the distance at the top of the hill Ramol's squad spotted a massive group of Diomedians. The Guard escorted the frightened workers back into the wall and sounded the alarm. Starkey is rallying his troops for war. Me, my husband, and my bodyguard stand just under the hatch to the surface, should Starkey and the others fall, we will be the last line of defense.

Charity's Journal 18th Timber, 101

The enemy army has been being harassed by the parasprites, that's only good for us. Let's them tire themselves out and means we don't have to deal with as many of them. They killed a few watchdogs, but nothing major has happened yet. The militia and guard are mostly in position, and we rose the gate when the enemy got close. One Diomedian was injured by the Skyguard when he got close, but he's backed off for now. They are galloping all around the fort just out of range, like vultures circling a kill. Their apparent leader is on horseback charging around in the lead.

Charity's Journal 26th Timber, 101

Today, we decided to sortie out and meet the barbarians.  Starkey and his war bear, lead the charge. The enemy Keishi that lead the charge dodged a bolt from Captain Jaxler before turning into a ballet of blood. He parried Starkey's every blow and crippled his wing and cut open his head through his steel helmet. Starkey is gone.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Starkey%27s%20Death.png)

 The entire army of Glitterglen smashed into the enemy lines, but all reports agree that that lone Keishi did almost all of the damage. He must have been one of the strongest warriors we have ever seen. He killed both, Starkey and Shigos, and injured Ramol, Kris, Bubel, and Peytral, though none of the injured are seriously hurt. The enemy has been either, killed, routed or captured.

We have one prisoner, a Tentacle pony, but not their leader. I'll have Khenal question him, but I don't know what useful information we could get from him.

During the siege an armor helped himself to some of our valuable materials. He made a turly amazing bit of armor. It'll be part of Khenal's uniform from now on. But it's existance reminds me, we sit on a mountain of the stuff. We NEED to start making use of it. I am authorizing the creation of several new suits of armor made of Adamantine for the militia, if only I'd done it sooner, maybe Starkey would still be alive.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Shagoggonggash.png)
(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Stasisflays.png)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 20, 2012, 09:04:58 pm
Kris stands nervously just behind the other members of her squad.  She could hear the sounds of the enemies approaching, drawing closer with each minute.  Her heart was already thundering in her chest, and every passing moment only made it worse.  She felt as if she'd lose her mind if something didn't happen soon, and this was the first time she'd be facing the enemy like this.  Her ill fated encounter with the elephant pony was still fresh in her mind, and it hadn't been clad in metal or wielding a weapon.

In short, she was terrified.

But everypony around her seemed calm, especially her grandpa.  They all had this under control.  He'd personally seen to the end of many of these diomedian attackers, many ambushes and sieges she'd never laid eyes upon.  Somepony might get hurt... that's why she was here, after all, but they'd all make it back and have stories to tell of it.  She'd make her mom proud today, one way or another.

Another series of agonizing minutes of inactivity passed before Starkey finally ordered the charge.  She relents for a moment, unsure if she could really face the enemy head on like this, but rallies.  She chases after the rest of her squad, watching as the diomedians ahead drew closer and closer.  Her heart was still thundering in her chest, but her nerves began to ease a bit as adrenaline flooded her veins.  She tightens her grip on her hammer and shield without a thought, ready to do her part.

The next few moments were chaos on a level she'd never imagined.  The two armies collided in a cacophony of clanging metal, shouts and curses as each fought tooth and hoof for their lives.  She circles uncertainly around a melee as scourge and whip equipped diomedians lashed out at her comrades at arms.  She dithers and raises her weapon, searching for an opening to help, but nothing shows itself.   Then something that would haunt her to the day she died happens.

Her grandpa was dueling with one of the scourge wielding keshis, striking out with his axe repeatedly but finding the unnaturally fast and durable scourge blocking or throwing off each strike.  Then the keshi retaliates, whipping the heinous weapon at him.  Starkey's head snaps back and a spray of blood spurts into the air as the magical weapon strikes home, tearing through his chanfron as if it wasn't there.  Her mother's hammer drops from her mouth and her shield falls to the ground as her concentration evaporates at the horrific sight.

"No!" she screams, snatching her shield back up but forgetting the hammer.  She was not going to lose somepony else.  Not when she was right there.  Any sense of self preservation disappears as she bounds over a confused tentacle pony with a whip before galloping toward her stricken grandfather.  She just had to grab him and get to safety.  The others could finish things up while she tended to him.  He'd be okay...

She snarls and throws her shield into a bash against the monster intent on taking him from her.  The keshi easily deflects the bash and raises his own weapon in response.  There was another soul piercing crack as the weapon snaps through the air, and she feels a burst of stinging pain on the side of her head.  She just has time to see her damaged chanfron tumble to the ground, speckled with blood and sporting several rents before the swimming world is suddenly jerked around her.  Her leg is pulled from beneath her painfully and she yelps in confusion.

Despite her best efforts to free herself from the horrible grip of the whip wrapped around her leg, she finds herself face-to-face with the tentacle pony she'd hurdled moments before.  The pony gives her a wide grin, showing yellowed and foul teeth.
  "You're next..."  She looks into his eyes for a moment, lost in their baleful unnatural glow, and the realization that she wasn't helpless strikes her.  Her shield raises up to strike at her assailant, but it instead drops to the ground as the tentacle pony pulls the whip tight and wrenches it with astounding strength.

The pain she felt against the elephant pony didn't begin to compare to the pain of having her knee twisted far out of alignment and her hoof crushed beneath a hateful stomp from the pony.  She cries out and tries again to struggle free of his grip, but the stabbing pain grows to unbearable levels with each attempt, and the world begins to slowly fade into blurry oblivion as she is overtaken by the agony.

The last thing she sees is the pony's head whirl to the side just as another militia pony leaps to her aid, and everything goes dark.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 20, 2012, 09:23:43 pm
I stand atop the wall as Starkey and the rest of the militia heads out to deal with the latest diomedians.  I was expecting this to go much like every other raid by the diomedians:  They would be quickly routed by Starkey and the militia and everypony would soon have a few new stories to tell.  Once the battle is joined, though, it becomes obvious that these ones are different.  The militia looks to be having trouble dealing with the whips and scourges, but nopony seems to be seriously injured on either side.  My eyes drift to Starkey just in time to see a fountain of blood spray from him.

'No... that's... that's impossible!'

The diomedians seem to gain a surge of moral at the death of my dear friend and commander.  With a bellow of fury, I streak form the wall into the diomedians, determined to see they pay for the death of The North Depths.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 20, 2012, 10:58:59 pm
The first thing Starkey is aware of is a light tug, gently pulling him upwards. His eyes snap open, and he leaps to his hooves, scanning all around. The world around him seems... distant, and dark as night. The sounds of the battle raging around him are muted. He tries to take a step forward...

...and flails about as his hoof fails to meet earth. The force intensifies, pulling him upwards, towards... the moon? in the middle of the day?

No...

No, not yet! He can't go! What about Friesden, what about Heiro!? His children need him! Starkey flares his wings, furiously beating the air against the inexorable pull, to no avail.

"Starkey..."

Oh Luna, that voice... he supposed she would be there to greet him. Could he face her again, knowing that he had abandoned their children...

"Stay with me, Starkey..."

Oh, how he hoped he could. Maybe she would forgive him after all. IF they could be together again,t hen at least-

"Starkey, give me yer hoof!"

Starkey's eyes snap open.


"O-Otik?"

"Yes, ye great featherbrain! Now take my hoof!"

Starkey takes a moment to comprehend, before reaching out with both forehooves and grasping Otik's. She pulls hard, dragging him out of the beam of light. Without warning, it winks out, dropping the two pegasi unceremoniously on the ground. Neither of them seem to care. They are already in each other's hooves, sobbing and kissing and nuzzling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 20, 2012, 11:40:37 pm
Falcata and Estoc are standing nearby, and both completely fail to notice Starkey.  They're far too preoccupied with what had happened to Kris.

Falcata lets out a feral shriek and bucks at a nearby diomedian fruitlessly, her hooves passing through the twisted pony's head harmlessly.  She shouts and screams and kicks at the ponies several more times, tears streaming from her eyes.
  "Get away from her, you monsters!" she screams, aware that what she was doing was pointless but unable to help herself.

Finally she turns back to Kris to see Estoc crouching next to her, faint traces of tears in his eyes as well.
  "Please... please tell me she's alright... Luna help me... please," she begs, trotting over to her wounded daughter.  Kris is lying motionless in a small puddle of blood being fed from a bad gash on her temple, and her leg is clearly broken.  The arrival of the ducal guard at least had finally cleared the area of the diomedians, but she was in bad shape.

Estoc nods slowly and looks up.
  "I... I think she'll be okay."

Her spirit wasn't rising from her body, so that was a relief at least... but to see her daughter badly wounded again... Falcata slumps to the ground next to Kris and begins sobbing.  As Estoc gives her a weak nuzzle, she says, "I... I can't keep doing this... seeing her get hurt... not being able to help... I can't do it..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 21, 2012, 12:09:22 am
As the battle raged, A lone injured tentacle pony disgraced himself and routed back into the jungle. The poor misguided pony thought it was safer there. If only the fool knew of the ex-bounty hunter stalking him.

"Egh,.. Ah, why do we keep, Eh, charging at the'se Bleed'in ponies? it never works!" The pony gasped.

The pony clumsily dragged his slashed hoof over a hastily laid rope trap. the pressure released, the rope tensed, and the leg was near torn in half being hoisted half-way up a mango tree. two ice-blue eyes gleamed from the dark canopy.

"Eh, you littlah mare, help me outta this!" the pony begged, trying to untie his  his binds with his tentacles."help me an' I won't cut ya open! that'sa promise!

Willow just whistles an upbeat little tune and saunters over to the pony, not even acknowledging him.

"that's it, I won't bite!" he coaxed, nodding in feverish approval.

Willow continued her tune, drew a dagger out.

"nah jus' cut the rope an' - aaUUGH"

Willow starts sawing through one of his tentacles, still whistling.

"Stop! Stop! Wha' are yuh'? stop!" the pony tried two arc the other two tentacles away from her. She smashed the ponies muzzle in until she could grab another and started to saw through that one as well. she cuts through the both of them at once and they drop on the jungle floor.

The tentacle pony sobs a single "Why?"

"Oh, why am I'ah cutting your tentacles off? personal preference. It's just easier to handle a de-clawed animal in my opinion."she drones in a dull, impersonal tone. she got the gauze out, hog tied him, and carried on with her whistling practice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 21, 2012, 12:45:47 am
Adamant is in his parent's house with his younger siblings when the sortie takes place. He tries to keep a strong face for the little ones, but he is very worried. His mother, and father, and Kris are all out on the front lines. If any one of them didn't come back... Best not to think about.

Copper walked up to him, a tiny filly having just turned two a week or so ago. She had her younger sister, Cinnamon Diamond only a few months old on her back.

"Addy, when will Mommy and Daddy be back."

"They'll be back soon Copper." 'and Kris too I hope.' "Commander Starkey is a great fighter, I'm sure he'll take care of the badguys and come back with all new stories real soon."
_____________________________
A short time later                       

Cryptson walks into the room.

Adamant stands up from the game he was playing with Blue Diamond. "Dad is everypony okay? Where's mom?"

"Your mother is fine. She's...with Khenal, and his wife...The Commander, he won't be coming back."

The new that Starkey had been killed seemed impossible to believe but before he could question it, his father hit him with a metaphorical ton of bricks.

"Kris was injured in the battle. She'll live but you should visit her in the hospital."

Adamant didn't have to be told twice. In mere moments, the hospital doors flew open and the Duchesses son marched in, the ponies present moved from his way as he called out, "KRIS! Kris where are you!"

Looking around frantically he spies her telltale rainbow mane in a bed to the east wall. He rushes to her side. She is still unconscious, but Venture assures him that she'll be fine, and should wake up soon. He touches his right forehoof to her unbroken one, and sits and waits for her to wake up.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 21, 2012, 01:00:42 am
...whip cracks...

...shouts...screams...

...blood...

...death...

...helplessness...

...pain...


"No... not... not going to... lose... you too..." Kris mumbles as her eyes slowly crack.  She winces as the light floods her vision, blinding her for a moment and sending an excruciating jolt of pain through her head.  She lets out a weak groan as she tries to move and finds that shifting her leg brought extreme pain.  Everything was so bright... confusing... nothing made sense... where was she?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 21, 2012, 01:11:40 am
Adamant looks on helplessly as Kris thrashes in her sleep. She is obviously having a nightmare, but he doesn't know how to help her. Other than to whisper that he was here and that she was okay. When she begins to wake, but she looks confused frightened, he holds her good forehoof with both of his, and says "Kris, you're in the Hospital. The battle is over, you're safe now, we...won."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 21, 2012, 01:16:35 am
Kris blinks slowly, cringing again as the light bears down on her.  Battle?  Oh... oh, Celestia, the battle...  "It... it's over?"  Her spirits rise slightly at the next part.  "And we won?  Where... where is Captain Starkey?" she asks, looking around the hospital as best she could.  He wasn't there... and he was badly wounded when she saw him last...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 21, 2012, 01:24:18 am
Adamant frowned, he wasn't sure how to say this, he'd guiltily hoped that she already knew what happened to Starkey, but if anypony had to deliver the bad news, he guessed he was the best pony to do it. He tightens his grip on her and says,

"I'm sorry Kris, my dad said that he's gone. Your grandfather won't be coming back. I'm sorry. He died a hero to everypony in Glitterglen."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 21, 2012, 01:31:48 am
Her face transitions to shock, then mild horror, back to shock, then guilt.  "He... he's... no..." she says at last, jaw trembling slightly.  She... she couldn't save him either.  What good had she been in the militia?  She'd failed to save her new grandparents, failed to save her mom... and she'd been incapacitated by a pony with a bucking whip...

She looks as if she's going to cry, but no tears come.  She was still too shocked by it all... this couldn't be real... not again... not again...


"Oh.. Addy..." she mutters after a moment, other words leaving her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 21, 2012, 01:53:10 am
Adamant moves to hug Kris, holding her close. He wanted to say something but no words came to mind other than "It's okay Kris."

After a few moments of hugging, Adamant looks around the doctors are busy taking care of the other injured ponies, he saw Buble, laying on sheets soaked with his own blood, he thought back to his foal hood and remembered playing with Buble, how he always said he wanted to be a guard to protect ponies when he grew up, and seeing him in here now... Peytral was there too, and he was always one of Glitterglen strongest, or at least most enthusiastic warriors, Even Captain Ramol was hurt, Adamant couldn't imagine what kind of force could have done this to Glitterglen's militia.

"Venture said you were good to go as soon as you woke up. She's already cleaned all your wounds and patched up your hoof. Do you want to go get something to drink, or maybe some food, or I could just take you home if you want?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 21, 2012, 02:02:08 am
Kris accepts his hug wordlessly, letting her emotions flow.  She felt tears welling up inside, but again nothing came out.  As he offers to go somewhere else, she nods slowly.  Yes, she wanted to leave.  She didn't want to be here right now.  It reminded her too much of what had just happened and her bitter failure as somepony to help these brave ponies who were hurt in the battle.  She wasn't brave.  Her hesitation at the start might have cost her grandfather his life.  If she'd been beside him, she might could have helped...

"U-uh... o-okay..."  She wasn't really hungry, but she was thirsty.  And she'd do anything to be away from the hospital right now.  "I... I am thirsty..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 21, 2012, 02:34:25 am
Adamant helps Kris out of bed, and they move towards the doors to the hospital. "The dinning hall is probably full of ponies right now. We can get something to drink in my family's dinning room." Together they make their way there, when they arrive they see they aren't alone. Charity is already there, nursing a pint of pegasan ale, as usual after a pony dies. Also present is Mrs. Friesden crying on Khenal's shoulder. When Charity sees Kris walk in she rushes up to her, and gives her a big hug.

"Krish, I'm glad you're okay. I...I was goint to vishit you, in a moment, but now your here." Charity hugs Kris tightly. Kris can spell alcohol on the Duchess's breath.

Adamant moves into the room and takes a seat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 21, 2012, 02:40:11 am
I gently try to comfort my wife, the shock of Starkey's death still not fully sunk in for me.  I give the newcommers a sad smile and nod as they take a seat.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 21, 2012, 02:42:33 am
Friesden continues sobbing onto Khenal's shoulder. "M-m-m-m-m-mum, n-n-n-n-n-n-now d-d-d-d-d-d-dad! Everypony is leaving!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 21, 2012, 09:31:41 am
Kris accepts her hug eagerly, holding it for as long as Charity wants.  She could use as many hugs as ponies were willing to give out right now.  "Yes... I... I'll be okay... I think..."

She cautiously adjusts her grip to relieve the pain in her smashed hoof and her eyes fall on Khenal and Friesden.  Her heart sinks further as she sees Friesden weeping.  Everything hit her so hard, but the pain of losing another parent, much less so soon, would have been unbearable for anypony.  Kris' ears droop and her eyes close as the realization of what had happened settles on her mind again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 21, 2012, 05:24:59 pm
Charity releases Kris from her hug, after several moments, one hoof still on Kris's shoulder. "Are you okay dear? If you need anyting, we are here for you."

Adamant has already helped himself to a plate a food, and poured two drinks, one for himself and one for Kris that he set in front of the seat next to him. He had not expected to find his mother, or her friends here, but he hoped that Kris would feel better surrounded by family and friends.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 21, 2012, 05:26:40 pm
I simply tighten my embrace on Friesden, unable to really give any encouragement other than a shoulder to cry on.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 21, 2012, 06:52:48 pm
"I-I-I-I-I-I-I just want them back!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 21, 2012, 06:59:08 pm
I gently nuzzle Friesden and try to wipe her tears.

"I know, my Only Light.  I... I wish they were still here, too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 21, 2012, 07:00:57 pm
"I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I should be dead, not them..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 21, 2012, 07:04:33 pm
"They died to protect you, Friesden.  And me, and all of Glitterglen as well.  They both want you to live, my Only Light.  I want you to live, too."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 21, 2012, 07:05:59 pm
"But I want them to live. You to live. If I hadn't come here, they'd all be alive still...It's all my fault."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 21, 2012, 07:09:33 pm
I gently kiss Friesden before speaking again.

"You did not kill them, my Only Light.  Their deaths are not your fault.  Even if you never came here, they were both still in the military.  It's... a risk they chose to take.  It's not your fault that... that their times came up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 21, 2012, 07:11:31 pm
"I just want them back... You said you'd do anything for me...C-c-c-c-c-c-can you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 21, 2012, 07:15:14 pm
Kris' ears stay low as she gives Charity a weak nod and a small sad smile.  "I'll be okay... thank you..."  She lets out an almost impercetible sigh as she parts with Charity to make her way over to Adamant.  She joins him at his side and gives him the same smile.  "...and thank you," she adds before taking her drink and sampling its contents.  She tries to avert her eyes as Friesden begins to break down, understanding in a small way what she was going through and trying her hardest to not join the mare in inconsolable crying.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 21, 2012, 07:17:31 pm
I pause for a moment, quickly thinking aobut what my wife and Only Light asked.

'Can I?  Is it even possible to bring ponies back?  Would they even want to?'

Looking into her pleading eyes, I know there is only one answer I can give.


"I... will most certainly try, my love."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 21, 2012, 07:19:33 pm
"T-t-t-t-t-t-thank you, thank you, ever so much...I don't deserve such a kind, loving pony as you...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 21, 2012, 07:34:10 pm
Charity interjects as she retakes her seat. "Friesden, no magic, not even Khenal's can bring back the dead. But know that they died so that every other pony in Glitterglen might live. They were heroes the both of them. They were good ponies, Luna will see that, they are in a better place now, you can trust in that."

Adamant sits with Kris and gently reaches around her, holding her. He didn't really know what to say, to anypony here, and remained quiet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 21, 2012, 08:25:20 pm
Kris relaxes a bit as Adamant holds her, and she leans into him slightly.  Friesden and Khenal's words rest heavily in her mind.  Could somepony bring somepony back from the dead?  She'd never heard of such a thing... but if it was possible... she'd give everything she owned to see her mother or grandparents again.  Even for a moment.  For a chance to say sorry and goodbye.

A faint sigh passes her lips as she finishes her drink.  Such a thing was madness.  She'd best stop dwelling on it now before it wormed its way into her mind.  At least Charity was right.  They'd all died fighting for the lives of everypony in Glitterglen.  Luna would have given them their due reward.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 21, 2012, 11:44:09 pm
The ponies relax in each other's company, tears are shed by most present. Stories of old times with Starkey, both good and bad, are told. At some point late into the night. The group divides up to go home. Charity returns to her home, seeing her youngest foals already asleep before falling into Cryptson's embrace. Friesden and Khenal return to their home alone. But Adamant and Kris they do not want to separate, so they go together to Kris's home, to talk privately and so neither would have to be alone tonight.

(End Scene.)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 22, 2012, 02:18:16 am
Kris lies in her bed, troubled and unsleeping.  More precisely, she lies on her bed, above the covers where she and Adamant had come to rest while they talked the night away.  Her eyes slowly drift up to him, lying next to her and fast asleep.  She lets out a small sigh as she watches him sleep away, his chest gently rising and falling with each breath.  He was such a nice pony... a good friend.  She wished she'd met him years before she had.

The two had spoken for hours and hours about nothing in particular.  Just things to get her mind off of what had happened, before inevitably drifing back in that direction before one of them managed to think of something to snap their attention away.  She was still stunned about it all, but every time she started to break down... when the implications really set in and forced their way through the haze... he was right there to comfort and support her.  What had she done to deserve a friend like that?

As she lies there, the events of the day play back through her head.  For the thousandth time.  She watches in slow motion as she hesitates to charge.  As she hesitates to fight.  Then as her grandfather is slain before her eyes, and how she failed to help him.  She'd helped one pony since she joined the militia.  One.  And he was in the hospital again right now with serious injuries from a battle she'd been in but failed to help with.

The horrible whip cracks repeat in her mind.  Those wretched, unnatural weapons that tore through armor and flesh as if they were but paper.  How had the diomedians found such magic?  Would they employ it again against them?

Of course they would.  Then she would die too.

They... they'd taken Captain Starkey... Grandpa Starkey from her.  He was invincible.  He went up against much worse odds and came back unscathed.  Nopony could be better than him.  She'd seen him fight and train, been there when he trained her.  Nopony could be better than him.  And yet it didn't matter.  Those horrible... sisters-damned whips...

If he couldn't stand up against a weapon like that, nopony could.  Especially not her.  Weak, cowardly little Kris?  She would die the next time the diomedians came.  She would go out with the rest of the militia, and she would die.  She would die just like he did.  Just like Grandma Otik did.  Just like her mom did.  She'd die too.  Except she wouldn't do it heroically.  She'd be killed running away from the enemy.  Running after everypony else died around her and she failed to save even one of them.  If she was lucky they'd kill her quickly.  A phantom pain wracks her leg where the whip had gripped it during the fight... just before it had been shattered by the pony's mere wrenching of his whip.  She was going to die... and it wouldn't come quickly... a whip was an instrument of torture...

She was scared.  No, she was absolutely terrified.  She didn't want to die.  She was done... done playing soldier.  She didn't want to do it anymore.  It wasn't fun anymore.  Grandpa Starkey was dead.  Grandma Otik was dead.  Her mother was dead.  The three strongest ponies she knew.  Dead.  She was going to die too.  She could never match any of them, and their skill and strength hadn't saved them.  What chance did she have?

Her eyelids clench shut as she stifles a small cry.  Why?  Why had this happened?  Why did good ponies have to die?  For a moment she considers cursing Luna's name at the injustice of it all, but she checks the thought.  She'd once heard her mother say that there was no justice in this world.  That was not long after they arrived at Glitterglen.  Only now was she seeing it though.  Her mother was right.  There was no justice in this world.  There never had been, and there never would be.  She was going to be cut down just like the others, and there didn't have to be a reason.  It would just happen, like an apple falling from a tree.

The crying grows to a just audible level before she manages to contain it.  She didn't want to wake Adamant up.  That was why they both laid awkwardly on top of the covers, where he'd fallen asleep and where she'd laid motionlessly and silently ever since.  She didn't want to disturb him.  He was such a good pony... a good friend... a good listener... he didn't deserve to be dragged down with her right now.  He'd heard it all just hours ago anyway.  He'd listened as she wept and complained about the wrongness of it, comforted her when she told him how scared she was... he'd said all the right things.  He was doing all he could.  It wasn't fair to him to drag him down anyway.

Her frown slowly changes to the slightest hint of a sad smile.  She loved this pony.  This stallion.  There couldn't be anypony else for her.  Who else would listen to her gripe and cry like this?  And do so much to help her get through it?

She blinks weakly and wipes her tears on her pillow to refocus her eyes on his sleeping form.  Everypony she loved dies...
  "Don't ever leave me... please Addy..." she whispers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 22, 2012, 08:03:20 pm
'Friesden, no magic, not even Khenal's can bring back the dead.'

Couth snorted at Charity's confidence in that statement. It's not impossible, just extremely hard. Couth's been trying for five years. five long, excruciating years. he couldn't count the number of times he's failed just a hair's breath. but now the schemes are all coming together, nothing was going to stop him this time. well, except for one tiny, little thing. it's negligible, it won't be a problem.

Couth floats inches away from Charity's face. "Nothing's going to save you from my little warpath this time, Charity. not Celestia, Not Luna, Not Discord, not some freak hand of fate, and most certainly not your band of friends, half of witch are my friends now. speaking of.."

Couth looks at Friesden and Khenal in their loving caress. Now there was an idea, why do all the work when Khenal could do it for him? of course Khenal dipping into necromancy and learning from scratch would be slower than his more direct, brute force approach. maybe convincing Friesden to kill herself would speed things up? Not like it would be hard, given her state and her already lucid nature. a possibility. put it on the back-burner. always room for a plan B. anyway, sister.

Couth drifts down to the dungeons. Willow was in the middle of chaining her captive to a wall via cuffs.

"ya think ya scare me? you ain't nothin'. you canna dew noth'in ta me. " the Diomidian growled.

Willow cocked an eyebrow "How do ya figure?"


"Now' imma' polititical prisona' anna I demand ta' be treated as such! you canna hurt me too bad if ya plan on trad'in or sellin me." he shouted, demanding a little respect.


"Ha, after what you've done? do you even Know who your warband even killed? No, this fort's yer last stop, I can almost guarantee that. you hava lotta questions ta answer." she told him in a assured tone.

"I Should thank you, really. you've given just the opportunity to show the Duchess mah... Unique talents I learned from tha mob."

The Diomidian gulped. " An' what talent's are those?"

Willow grins and pushes a cart with all sorts of nasty, sharp objects in into his view.

"Information gatheri'n an'a Personal security! a' least tha' wat I put on the resume."

'oh no, she's acclimating here!' Couth gasped. 'This is not good, how long can she go before she mutters her last name to somepony!?' he need to intervene. couth grabbed an adamantine hook off the table and carved something on the dungeon wall he was sure would get his message across.

NOT SAFE - DM

"waht, the Hells is that?" the tenticle pony gasped.

"that's... I message from my brother! see the initials! I knew something wasn't on tha up n' up! I would have bumped inta him by now!"

'Yes! that's it!'

" he's in Danger! I need ta' stay until I find em. can't be anythin' else."

Couth coughed up a fit of rage. well he tried she's on her own now. the hour was getting late, he needs to leave with Falcata and company soon. you do not piss Luna off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 23, 2012, 12:09:30 am
The next morning, after the two had awoken, bid each other farewell and went about their day, the first thing Kris does is track down her mother's hammer.  Fortunately somepony had been kind enough to pick it up from the field of battle and return it to the armory.  It was caked with grime from where she'd carelessly dropped it to the ground, as if it meant nothing to her.  She returns to her room with the disgraced weapon, along with the needed supplies to return it to its rightful shine.

As she sits on her bed and stares into her marred reflection in its surface, she again thinks back to what happened the previous day.  She begins wiping away the grime on its surface, her thoughts changing to her mother instead of the more recent death.  She hadn't made her mother proud at all.  First she'd thrown herself at an opponent she was hopelessly incapable of beating, and taken the results she deserved.  And now, she'd let her fear hold her back in the single most devastating attack she'd known of in Glitterglen, and now her grandpa was dead too.

She looks up briefly to the magical chest sitting off in the corner of the room.  The one that contained her mother's final words to everypony, which still held her final words to Thundersplinters, who would never get to read them.  She rereads the last few lines in her head.  Her mother said she'd always be watching over her.  She couldn't help but wonder if she'd seen this failure.

She hadn't made anypony proud.
  "...I... I'm sorry mom... I failed... I let you down..." she says, trying to find the motivation to finish polishing her hammer.  "And I'm sorry to you too, grandma and grandpa... I... if I'd been there with you... you two might be alive too..."

A tear drips onto the grimy silver surface of the hammer, and a sniffle passes her lips as she begins wiping it away with the rest of the grit.  "I'm so sorry..."


Only steps away, but eternally out of sight, Falcata and Estoc watch the heartwrenching scene.  They hold each other and take turns consoling the other.  Falcata watches in emotional torment as her daughter begins crying again.  "You haven't let me down Kris... by the Sisters I'm proud of you..."

Estoc continues rubbing her back and nods slowly.  "She's made me so proud too..."

Finally Falcata turns her eyes away and says, "...I... I really don't know how much more of this I can take..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 23, 2012, 11:13:33 pm
Starkey tentatively pokes his head through the door, scanning the room before laying eyes on Falcata.

"Oh, Falcata... I was wondering where you'd got to."

He steps through into the room. Otik, however, emerges from the wall just beside him.

"Ye know ye dun' hafta do that anymore, hun."


"I know, but... it just feels right. How is she?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 23, 2012, 11:14:29 pm
Willow was about to knock on Khenal's office door, but hesitated. was her hair alright? was there any Diomidian blood on her clothes? Maybe one final check through her report, to see if all the commas and periods are in the right places? The first impressions are the most important, after all! She should come back... Willow realized she was having a minor panic attack and laughed.

"Nah Willow, there's nothing to worry about! The Captain won't bite." she assured herself.

She looked down at the lengthy report she wrote, filled with Diomidian battle tactics, group numbers, weapons, background information on the monster that Killed Starkey, and anything else useful she could rip out of her captive.

"just let the work speak for itself."

She opens the door.

"Uh, Captian Khenal? are you busy? It's a' recruit Willow, the Uh, new girl. I have something for yah."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 23, 2012, 11:22:46 pm
Falcata and Estoc part long enough for her to address the question.  Her cheeks are damp from crying, and she tries to level her voice to reply, "She... she seems to be handling it... tolerably..."  She wasn't going to mention that she'd read Kris' diary as she was writing in it early that morning.  Everything she'd kept to herself the night before with Adamant was now in her diary.  In truth, she wasn't handling it all that well, but she didn't want to admit that to herself yet.  "She's really scared and upset..."

Kris is still polishing the hammer as they look on.  She chokes again and pauses long enough to let a few fresh tears form in her eyes.  "I'm so sorry, grandpa..." she repeats as she starts polishing it again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 23, 2012, 11:37:56 pm
Starkey approaches the bed, raising a hoof as if to wipe her tears away. He holds it there for a moment, then lowers it, silently. Otik moves to his side.

"Stars, hun..."


"Oh, Otik... I was too slow... I failed. Failed her, failed Friesden, Heiro..."

She pulls him close, holding him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 23, 2012, 11:51:42 pm
Kris sets her hammer aside, having returned it to something resembling a clean state.  She lowers her head and sniffles again before wiping her nose.  "I'm so sorry... grandpa... grandma... mom... and everypony else I couldn't help..."  She looks up briefly and scans her eyes across the room.  "If... if any of you really are there... I'm sorry... I tried... I really did..."  She chokes on her words again and raises a hoof to her face, covering her eyes.  "...it just wasn't good enough..."

She stands still for a few seconds, trying and failing to contain her emotions.  Finally, she manages to level herself, and she takes the hammer with her magic.  "...better go report for duty..." she says under her breath before heading for the door.

Falcata and Estoc's expressions grown even more concerned as they watch her leave.  Falcata wipes her eyes and shakes her head.
  "...this is killing me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 23, 2012, 11:59:33 pm
"I... just wish I could say something to her, tell her it's not her fault, tell her how sorry I am..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 24, 2012, 12:11:46 am
Falcata silently watches as Kris mopes out of the room, unable to reply.  Estoc steps forward and says, "I... think that's exactly what we should do.  I think we've put off talking to her for too long..."

She nods slowly.  "I... think you're right..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 24, 2012, 12:20:25 am
Starkey's head snaps up. He turns to look at the pair.

"What do you mean? How is that possible?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 24, 2012, 12:24:52 am
Estoc gives him a confused expression before recalling that few ponies knew of Venture's talent.  "Venture... she has a special talent for speaking with spirits of the dead.  She can show us to her."

Falcata nods.  "Yes... we've already spoken to Friesden and Khenal.  I... I should have spoken to Kris before now... but I was scared to.  I didn't know what I'd tell her... or... or if she'd want to join me..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 24, 2012, 12:36:22 am
Starkey turns to Otik.

"This... is this true?"

"Aye, hun. It is."

She hangs her head.

"I... I wos afraid ye'd want t'join us too. I'm so sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 24, 2012, 12:46:59 am
Falcata and Estoc exchange one more glance.  "She really needs us now though... I have to talk to her... let's go see if Venture is in the hospital," Falcata says.

*******

Kris wasn't sure why Venture had called for her to come to the hospital.  She'd checked out just fine the day before.  Maybe it was just to check on her hoof.  It wasn't any worse at least...

As she enters the hospital, she finds Venture standing with Friesden.
  "Um, you wanted to see me?"

"Yes, Kris, there's somepony who wants to talk to you.  Just sit tight for a moment."  Her horn glows briefly, and Kris feels her perception of the world shift in a way that was impossible to explain.  She blinks a few times... unwilling to believe what she was seeing.  "V-Venture... what... what is this?"  She takes a step backward, mouth hanging open and astonishment on her face.

Falcata steps forward, giving her a sad smile.
  "Kris... it's us.  We wanted to talk to you..."  She steps forward and moves to hug her.

"M-mom...?" Kris responds in disbelief.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 24, 2012, 01:06:27 am
"Mum? Falcata? Dad?"

Friesden rushes forward to her dad and embraces him in a hug. "Dad! I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, I should have been there, I could have helped, I could have saved you, I'm so sorry! Please, tell me you forgive me, please? I know I don't deserve it, but please, please, forgive me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 24, 2012, 01:11:11 am
Starkey holds Friesden tight.

"Oh Friesden, I'm so sorry! If I'd only been fast enough, or strong enough...I never wanted to leave you, Friesden."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 24, 2012, 01:16:14 am
"I should have been there, it's all my fault. I'm so sorry, dad! I'm sorry! You deserve a better daughter than me...I'm so sorry!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 24, 2012, 01:24:24 am
"I don't want a better daughter than you, my little pony... you're the light of my life, and nopony could ever replace you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 24, 2012, 01:26:25 am
Kris is still dumbstruck.  What on the Sisters' earth was happening here?  Had she lost her mind completely?  Maybe that scourge blow to her head had done more damage than she thought... but it felt so real...  "Mom... mom... how... how is this possible?"

Falcata clutches her tightly and is silent for some time.  "It's just like I told you, honey... I was here the whole time, watching you.  And I found out somepony else was here too..."  She makes a small motion to Estoc.  "Do you remember him?"

Kris blinks in renewed disbelief.  Was it... could it be...?  "D... dad?"

"That's right," he says, stepping over and joining in the hug.  "I've been with the two of you the whole time."

Kris doesn't know what to say or do.  She just holds the embrace and begins sobbing.  Finally, she manages to say, "Oh, mom... I've missed you so much... so, so much..."

"I know honey... I know..."  She strokes Kris' mane.  "I've missed you too..."

"As have I," Estoc adds.  "I'm so proud of you Kris... you've grown up so much..."

Kris doesn't know how to respond to that.  She felt like such a failure... and she still wasn't sure she was completely sane.  How did Venture factor into this?  What was going on?  They... they were still dead, right?  Was this their... souls?  For the moment, she really didn't care.  She was with her mom... and her dad again.  Her real dad... she makes a small noise as she buries herself deeper into their grip.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Omegaxis on March 24, 2012, 04:23:26 am
(I am claiming the spear pegasus)Gray wakes up in the middle of a field. He sits up and remembers nothing about himself but his name. Gray looks around "W-Where in the hell am I..?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 24, 2012, 05:40:33 am
"But...A better daughter would have been there, would have saved you...I'm just worthless. I'm so sorry, dad...If it wasn't for me, you'd be alive..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 24, 2012, 02:48:05 pm
**Meanwhile**

I look up from my desk, glad to have any distraction from the paperwork that I thought I had escaped so long ago.

"Hello Willow, how are you doing?"

I notice the stack of papers she has and my pupils shrink, fearing she has even more paperwork for me.

"What's... what's that?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 24, 2012, 09:01:26 pm
A wide smile streaks across her face.

"This, Cap, Is a' 'nalysis of our battle with tha' Diomidians. It's got every'ing, Includin' a few strategies for next time."

She hands the report over eagerly

"ya see, a brave soldier fights tha' enemy. A smart soldier learns tha' enemy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 24, 2012, 09:44:43 pm
I sigh a bit in relief as she explains it's not more boring paperwork.  Looking through it, it becomes obvious that there's more information than could be gleaned from a single battle.  The counter strategies are particularly interesting.  They'd probably need a little cleaning up to be used, but the Militia could certainly use them.

"I agree, Willow.  Knowledge is power.  This information is amazing, I'll be sure to pass this along to the Militia.  How did you get this information, though?  Have you been scouting into the jungle?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 24, 2012, 10:12:47 pm
her eyes flick to the left, she tried to stifle her smile

"Oh, let's jus' say our Diomidian captive took a real nasty tumble down some steps on the way to the dungeons. barely hangin' by a thread, you might want ta' put em out of 'is misery."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 24, 2012, 10:19:57 pm
"It was over quickly. There was nothing anypony could have done, little one."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 24, 2012, 10:27:02 pm
'Is she implying...?'

My expression hardens as I look her in the eyes.


"Take care moving any other captives, Willow.  'Unfortunate accidents' are unbecoming."

I stand to leave the office.

"Come with me then, Willow.  I want you with me while I see to this Diomedian's... misery."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 24, 2012, 10:28:28 pm
"I should have been there... I don't know how you can even bring yourself to call me your daughter anymore...I don't deserve it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Omegaxis on March 24, 2012, 11:22:46 pm
Gray looks to the side and notices two Spears on the ground. He walks over to the Spears and stares at them. "Are these mine? They look familiar..." Gray looks around and sees another pony "Who is that...?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 24, 2012, 11:38:54 pm
The three continue to hold each other, repeatedly reassuring one another with nuzzles and reminders of how much each loved and missed the others.  Finally, Kris manages to compose herself enough to ask,  "...mom... if you've really been here all along... why did you wait until now?  I mean, to talk to me?"

She hesitates in guilt.  There was no particularly good reason.  "I was afraid of what might happen."  She nervously looks off in the direction of Friesden before returning her attention to Kris.  "I... was afraid you'd... you'd..."

Kris cocks her head.  What, kill herself?  It was true that she felt like dying the day that her mother did, but she'd never really considered killing herself.  "...mom... to know that you're okay... that's all I could have ever wanted."  She smiles and gives her mother another squeeze before backing out of the hug.  Her eyes move between her two deceased parents, then to her grandparents standing off next to Friesden.  "I guess it's true, what they say.  You really are in a better place, aren't you?"

Falcata and Estoc exchange uneasy glances.  "Actually, honey... that's something I wanted to talk to you about," Falcata says, fiddling with the key dangling from her neck.  "I... I haven't faced Luna yet."  She again gives Estoc a worried glance.  "But... she's sent for me... I can't put it off much longer..."

"That... what does that mean, exactly?" Kris asks.

Her mother shakes her head and continues to jostle the key nervously.  "I really don't know."  She lays a hoof on Kris' withers.  "...but I might not be able to see you again... I just don't know..."

Kris lowers her head, and her ears droop slightly.  She'd just been reunited with her mother and father, and now she was finding out she might not see them again.  Not until she died herself, anyway.  Or maybe never?  What was the afterlife really like?  "I... understand.  Seeing you again, even once... that's more than I could have hoped for."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 26, 2012, 12:43:30 am
Starkey kisses Friesden on the forehead.

"No, little one... you are the only pony who deserves it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 26, 2012, 12:50:16 am
"But...I should have helped you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 26, 2012, 01:14:55 am
Kris frowns a bit as she overhears Starkey and Friesden conversing.  She really felt like she should have done more herself... but she didn't want to upset the mood any.  This might be the last time she saw any of them.  To have this last chance... she didn't want to spoil it.  She looks over to Starkey and Otik.  "Um... grandpa, grandma... are you leaving too?  Did Luna send for you too?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 26, 2012, 02:09:51 pm
"No, Kris. Too many ponies still need us here. We'll both be stayin' f'r a long time."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 26, 2012, 02:13:38 pm
"Y-y-y-y-y-y-y-y-y-y-you'll be staying? C-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-c-can I talk to you each day? I don't deserve it...but please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 26, 2012, 02:33:35 pm
"Well... I should hate to be too much of a burden..."

Starkey looks to Venture.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 26, 2012, 02:59:07 pm
Venture puts a hoof to her chin, thinking.  Luna would come to get them eventually, but surely there was no harm in letting Friesden see her parents until then?

"It's a fairly simple spell, I'd be happy to cast it for you, Friesden."  She says, smiling at her friend.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 26, 2012, 03:36:03 pm
"R-r-r-r-r-r-r-really? T-t-t-t-thank you, thank you, thank you, thank all of you, you're too good to me, thank you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Omegaxis on March 26, 2012, 10:45:15 pm
Gray stumbles into the town Kris is in dehydrated and injured. He stumbles into a random house "Help me..." Gray mutters before he is rendered unconscious.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 27, 2012, 12:05:24 am
Kris smiles a bit.  Well, that was good news.  Even if Luna wouldn't let her keep her mother and father, she could still see her grandparents.  She gives Starkey and Otik each as strong a hug as she could with her injured hoof and says, "Thank you... I'm so glad to see both of you two again... and that you're okay."  As okay as you could be when you were dead, but at least they weren't in pain.  Were they...?

The four deceased ponies remain with Friesden and Kris until the wee hours in the morning, talking with their loved ones about everything they could think of.  Eventually Friesden and Kris begin to succumb to the rigors of a mortal body and grow drowsy.  It won't be long before they drift to sleep, and the spell that lets them see and interact with the dead breaks.

All the while, Falcata continuously fiddles with the key hanging from her neck, and by the time the two are nearly asleep, her expression is that of somepony who would be facing execution.  She continues to look at the door of the hospital, wondering how much longer she could put this off... was putting it off making things worse?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Omegaxis on March 27, 2012, 12:10:21 am
Gray wakes up in the hospital. "Where?" Gray sees the doctors and realizes he's in the hospital. he sees his gash patched up and his wing healed. "How?" Gray sees Kris outside and thinks 'Whoa whos that...'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 12:58:40 am
"F-F-F-F-F-Falcata?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 27, 2012, 01:07:29 am
Falcata snaps back to reality as her name is called.  She stops twiddling the key and looks over to Friesden.  "Huh?  Oh, what is it, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 01:10:55 am
"C-c-c-c-c-can you come back? As often as you can? And...Can I get one last hug?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 27, 2012, 01:19:38 am
She smiles weakly and moves over to hug Friesden.  She's all but trembling by this point, knowing that her time was short.  As she embraces her friend, possibly for the last time, she replies, "O-of course, Friesden.  I'll come back and see you all, as often as Luna allows."

Keeping her face free of the nervousness wracking her was difficult by this point, but she manages for the most part.  This was easily the most frightened she'd ever been.  If... if Luna did turn her away... could she come back?  Or, would she be consigned to eternal torment for her sins?

The trembling is all but impossible to keep under control by this point, but still she manages.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 27, 2012, 01:26:10 am
Starkey walks over, gently embracing Falcata.

"If you... can't come back... I want you to know you were one of the finest warriors I ever knew. I would have been proud to have you marry my son."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 27, 2012, 01:36:23 am
Falcata's nerves dissipate as she is embraced by Starkey.  The gesture takes her by surprise at first.  She'd often wondered and worried about just how he felt about her, ever since the horrible day years ago with the amulets.  She returns the hug after a brief moment, as her nerves begin to return too.  "Th-thank you... that... that means a lot coming from you..."

Perhaps not the best way to show her thanks, but she was almost beside herself with fear by this point.  She thinks for a moment... this was only going to happen once... she didn't know how much good it might do, but it couldn't hurt to ask...  With her mouth near his ear, she whispers,  "I... I might be back soon... f-for good... if... if you w-would... say a prayer for me... please...."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on March 27, 2012, 01:42:13 am
Starkey whispers into her ear.

"A dozen prayers, every day until I know for sure."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 27, 2012, 02:12:08 am
She smiles weakly and tightens the embrace slightly for a moment.  It wasn't much, but she'd take anything she could get at this point.  Starkey was the most devout pony she knew, if he said something on her behalf, that was all she could ask for.  "Thank you, so much..."

She gives each pony in the room a final farewell, especially Kris.  She holds her daughter for what feels like an eternity, but is only a minute at most.  "Whatever happens, honey, know that what I said was true.  I'll love you forever."

Kris hugs both of her parents a final time, holding them for at least as long as Falcata's initial hug.  "I love you two too, no matter what happens."  She gives her mother a sad smile and adds, "Don't worry mom.  You've been the best mom I could have asked for.  I know you'll be okay."  She turns the smile to Estoc.  "You too dad.  I wish I could have gotten to know you better, but I know you'll be okay too."

Falcata wished she was so confident herself, but she accepts her daughter's soothing words as much as she can.  This would happen either way, and there was no need to upset Kris if it was avoidable.  She nuzzles Kris and says, "Thank you, honey.  You've been the best daughter I could have asked for too."

Estoc nods in agreement and strokes Kris' mane.  "I'm very proud of you Kris, you've grown to be a wonderful young mare."  He squeezes her one last time before the family breaks their group hug.  "And we'll be back to see you sometime.  We'll have all of the time we need to get to know each other."

With the final goodbyes given and emotions let loose, Falcata and Estoc wearily make their way back down to the caverns where she lost her life.  There, still where it had been at that fateful moment, was the shaft of moonlight extending up into the cavern ceiling.  The light was growing dim, and Otik's was only slightly more visible than hers.  Couth was nowhere to be seen, but she knew he'd be there at the worst possible moment.

With all of the determination she could muster, she forces herself to step into the light with her husband.  The two hold hooves like teenagers as they ascend up the shaft of ethereal energy, and for a moment Falcata imagines she feels a moment of peace.  The same calming sensation that engulfed her the moment she died, taking away all of her pain.  The world vanishes in a flash of light as the two reach the ceiling of the cavern, and they find themselves standing in what appears to be an infinite wasteland, disrupted only by an equally massive looking walled city just ahead.

Her hooves feel heavy again as she steps forward, and the two nervously make their way toward the city.  Their moment was at hoof.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 06:39:38 pm
Early next morning, Friesden wakes up and leaves the room she shares with Khenal, the love of her existence.

Slowly, she opens the door, and leaves the house. She had a plan. Her true love, her very reason for being, had been complaining about one thing, over and over.

The paperwork.

Slowly, making sure nopony notices, she makes her way into his office, and meets the grim pile of papers. An opening skirmish marks the beginning of the grand conflict, and she quickly beats back the first advances of the mighty foe. Her divisions race ahead, and cut straight through the enemy's front line, before pushing forward once more and securing a victory.

She finishes the paperwork quick smart, and waits in the office for Khenal to come, hiding.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 06:44:53 pm
I eventually awaken, wishing I could go back to sleep instead of having to get up and deal with the damndable paperwork that I still haven't finished!  I reluctantly don my armor and my spear, and grab a few apples from the stockpile for breakfast as I make my way to my office to do mortal battle with the bane of my existence.  Opening the door, however, I notice something doesn't seem quite right.  What was all may paperwork doing, sitting in the completed pile?  Confused, I walk in to investigate.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 06:46:04 pm
Friesden drops down from above the doorframe onto him.

"Surprise! I did your paperwork for you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 06:50:14 pm
I jump and buck in reflex as Friesden drops onto me, but quickly calm myself.  Turning back to meet her smiling, beautiful face with confusion writ plain on my own.

"You... did the paperwork?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 06:51:27 pm
"Yup! I did all of it! It's all done now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 06:57:25 pm
My confusion fade into abject adoration for my Only Light.  Tears of joy well up as I beam at her, unable to find the words to tell her how utterly amazing she is.  I embrace her in my wings and kiss my love, hoping to convey at least part of how much she means to me, and how much I appreciate what she's done.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 07:01:45 pm
Friesden holds tight to him, drinking in his love for her. He loved her...that's all she needed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 09:43:35 pm
The next day, Friesden and I decide to pay a visit to the new captain of the Skyguard.  It still hurt to know that Otik was gone, but I needed to know what kind of stallion was going to be filling her horseshoes.  Once we arrive at the office, I raise a hoof to knock on the door, still wishing it was Otik who would answer.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 27, 2012, 09:57:47 pm
Jaxler was in his office when he heard a pony knocking at the door.

"AYE, what do ya want?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 10:06:19 pm
I glance to Friesden, then shrug.

'I guess they're a bit stressed about the new position.'


"To talk?  If you're not busy, at least."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 10:11:29 pm
Friesden gives Khenal a quick hug, and smiles at the door, hoping the pony inside would be nice.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 27, 2012, 10:14:06 pm
"No, I ain't busy. Feel free to come on in"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 10:16:34 pm
Friesden hops forward and holds the door open for Khenal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 10:24:39 pm
I smile and lovingly nuzzle Friesden as I walk in, horn glowing to hold the door for her in turn.  Once she does, I turn to face the stallion behind the desk.

"Ah, good.  I was just hoping to meet the new Captain of the Skyguard."

I reach a hoof over the desk to shake in introduction.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 27, 2012, 10:29:18 pm
Jaxler extends his hoof and shakes the pony's hoof.

"So... why exactly did you want to shake my hoof?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 10:44:48 pm
"I wanted to see who was taking over the Skyguard after the... beast attack.  Um, I'm Khenal."

I bow slightly as I say so, trying to remember my manners after such an awkward start.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 27, 2012, 10:47:46 pm
Jaxler started leaning back in his chair.

"Please don't bow... Oh, and I'm Jaxler"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 10:49:14 pm
"I'm Friesden!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 27, 2012, 11:11:51 pm
"and?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 11:13:45 pm
"And...oh...I'm sorry...Sorry. I shouldn't have said anything..."

Friesden lowers her head into Khenal's wing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 27, 2012, 11:15:28 pm
"Don't be sorry, you did nothing wrong"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 11:17:49 pm
I lovingly nuzzle Friesden before turning back to address Jaxler.

"So... how's the position treating you so far?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 27, 2012, 11:26:19 pm
Jaxler shrugged "meh, crappy I guess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 11:48:29 pm
I try to keep smiling, despite the incredible awkwardness of the conversation.  I've dealt with hatred, open hostility, misguided adoration and nervousness, but never... apathy?

"Um... Well, you must be a bust stallion, Captain Jaxler.  We'll just get out of your mane."

My horn glows as I open the door again.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 27, 2012, 11:52:44 pm
"Don't let the door hit you on the way out"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on March 27, 2012, 11:54:14 pm
Friesden huddles under Khenal's wing, trying to stave off the tears. She should have known not to speak...She wasn't a good speaker...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 27, 2012, 11:58:09 pm
I exit with my love under my wing, trying to make her feel better as we walk back to our rooms.

"It's alright, Friesden.  He said you didn't do anything to apologize for, so you did nothing wrong.  He's just not... very social, apparently."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Omegaxis on March 28, 2012, 01:19:34 am
Gray walks out of the hospital room and heads for the exit. As he is walking out he walks by Kris and accidentaly brushes against her. "Sorry."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 28, 2012, 01:57:10 am
Falcata and Estoc approach the massive city slowly.  Any peace Falcata felt ascending to this eerie realm was long gone by now, replaced by the growing trepidation again.  She chances a worried glance to Estoc as they draw close to the immense gilded gates to the city.  His face was exactly as she always knew it to be in situations like this: calm and collected, sporting a small but reassuring smile.

Inside, he was hardly so sure of himself.  He hadn't done anything he could think of in his life to condemn his soul, but as always with situations like this, how could one be totally confident?  He hadn't been particular pious in life... he hoped Luna would pity him for the good he'd tried to do.

But really, he did worry for Falcata.  He'd never show his unease to her, since even a blind and deaf pony could sense how terrified she was, but what would they do if she was turned away?  If she was just cast away, doomed to walk the earth for eternity... he... he would stay with her.  It would be giving up more than was even imaginable to give up paradise if he got in and she didn't, but he'd kept his sanity for six years alone watching her and Kris.  With her by his side again, he could manage.  And with Starkey and Otik to talk to, they wouldn't be alone.  Not that he knew them well, but in time he would.

If she was condemned... to some eternal torture... he probably wouldn't be allowed to join her even if he wanted to.  As much as he loved her... that wasn't something he could suffer through with her willingly.  He felt terrible for thinking it, but that was just too much.  No sane pony walked into eternal torture.

He shunned the horrifying thoughts and rests a hoof on her withers as they reach the door.  She would be fine.  The mare might have killed three ponies, but the monster that had killed him deserved it.  The other two might not, but Falcata had nearly given her life once to save somepony and did give her life trying to save over a hundred more.  If that didn't excuse her in the eyes of Luna, nothing would.  He'd argue her case to his last breath, if Darkmane was serious and that was his job.  He'd worry about himself after she had been judged.
  "It's going to be alright, I promise."

Falcata nods, but doesn't smile.  That was what he was expected to say, so of course he'd say it whether he meant it or not.  But she appreciated the gesture, even if she didn't know if she believed it would be true.  Even with all Captain Starkey had done for her, she didn't have much confidence that this would go well.  At best she could hope that Luna would have some pity on her soul and save her from the worst fates...

With a trembling hoof, she reaches up and raps at the door, scarcely making a sound.  Estoc reaches up to steady her hoof and gives it a loud knock.  They had to get this over with.  It was now, not never.

The great doors swing open with a low groan, and backlight by overbearing golden light stands a small filly.  The filly steps forward, revealing herself to be a dark colored alicorn.  As she exits the grand city, the door closes behind her.  A small, innocent smile forms on her face as she looks up to the two new arrivals.
  "Hello, you must be Falcata and Estoc!  I'm glad you finally made it."  She looks to Estoc.  "I've been waiting a really long time to talk to you!"

The two are dumbstricken for a moment.  This... this filly was Luna Herself?  Falcata gawps for a moment before she notices Estoc kneeling beside her, and she falls to a knee hastily.  "L-Luna!  Forgive me, I-I didn't recognize you!"

Luna smiles a bit wider and nods.  "Oh, everypony says that."  She raises a hoof to the two and motions for them to stand up.  "Come on, we've got a lot to talk about!"

The terror in her heart was now replaced by overwhelming curiosity.  Was this really happening?  Luna had the appearance of a child... how would she be judged?  Was that what she meant?  The two stand as they are instructed and begin to follow the little filly as she leads them off.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 28, 2012, 10:26:53 am
Darkmane looked up from a ridiculously lengthy tome chronicling Falcata's entire life story. Couth put an earmark wherever he a found something he could twist against her. the book was riddled with them.

"Clowns to the left of me, jokers to the right! an' here I am! stuck in the middle with you! Trying to make some sense of it all, But I can see that it makes no sense at all, Is it cool to go to sleep on the floor, 'Cause I don't think that I can take anymore" he sang.

He glances at Estoc and Starkey.

"Clowns to the left of me,"

He Glances at Luna

"Jokers to the right,"

He finally rested on Falcata

"Here I am, stuck in the middle with you. Need a watch-piece, Falcata? I thought it was going to be a no-contest for a second there. now, It's just going to be easy."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 28, 2012, 02:14:39 pm
((Otik isn't with them actually.  She's still in Glitterglen with Starkey, so far as I know.))

Well, he had to show up eventually.  True to his word, Couth was there, ready to prosecute her and do his best to condemn her soul.  Whether it was out of some pact he'd formed in the afterlife or out of pure hatred for her and everything she held dear, she neither knew nor cared.

She narrows her eyes at him briefly before she thought better of it.  If there was anything that would hurt her chances here, she didn't want to risk it.  That included looking like a hotheaded or tossing petty insults like a child.  Instead, she offers a cool expression.
  "We'll see."

There was nothing she could do to change what she'd done, and she had no doubt that Couth knew every last thing she did.  Killing the thieves, nearly killing Thunder Splinters, and even probably every white lie she'd told and every time she'd done something as petty as tease her brother or sister.  Luna surely knew it all too.  This was probably just a formality.  Or a test for her, of sorts.  She wouldn't mar her chances by lying.  And Estoc would stand with her, she knew it.

((And I have absolutely no idea how this should proceed.  Opening remarks from Couth or Luna, or what?))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 28, 2012, 07:26:14 pm
Jaxler was walking down to talk with charity about a problem that was really been troubling him recently. He really needed to sort out this issue for it had been eating at him for last couple days. Though, when finally reached her office he found it was guarded.

"Aye, I kinda need to talk to Charity."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 28, 2012, 07:38:25 pm
I raise an eyebrow at Jaxler as he states his simple request, still not quite sure what to make of the stallion.

"Alright Captain.  Give me a sec to see if she's busy."

I open the door to peek in on Lady Charity.

"Charity?  Are you busy?  Captain Jaxler would like to speak with you if you have a moment."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 28, 2012, 07:45:43 pm
Spoiler: Picture by Kryptid (click to show/hide)


Charity is happily munching on a cupcake when the door begins to open. Fearing it might be her husband, and not wanting him to know she was cheating on her latest failed diet, she quickly shoves it into her desk, before looking up, innocently. Hearing Khenal's voice she makes a sigh of relief.

"oh, send him in. I have a few minutes to spare."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on March 28, 2012, 07:52:05 pm
"Alright.  Oh, Charity?  You have a little something on you there."

I point a hoof at my own mouth to show where she's got a smudge of something, then turn back to Jaxler and step to the side, allowing him passage.

"She'll see you now, Captain."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 28, 2012, 07:56:55 pm
"cool."

Jaxler then walked into the office, and sat down in a chair.

"So... charity, I need to talk to you about something important."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 28, 2012, 08:04:08 pm
As Khenal leaves the room, to let in Jaxler, the Duchess frantically searches for her *Giant Cave Spider Silk* handkerchief. She finds it and cleans the cupcake frosting from her face before answering Jaxler.

Charity looks at Jaxler, smiling, "Of course Captain, what would you like to discuss?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 28, 2012, 08:06:22 pm
"Well, I think I should get a raise"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 28, 2012, 08:17:52 pm
Charity's smile fades, to be replaced with a frown. She hated these kind of discussions.

"Did you not already receive a raise when you were made Captain? Your salary should be what Otik made during her first year. <Amount Redacted> a week."

Charity shuffules some papers and finds the one she was looking for.

"Yes, that's what is says you are being paid on my records. Are you saying that that isn't enough for you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 28, 2012, 08:22:03 pm
Jaxler starts leaning back in his chair.

"Damn, your telling me that she lived off that mcuh? I'm amazed she never complained. Anyway I still need more money."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 28, 2012, 08:29:02 pm
Charity ponders for a moment. "She did, for a year, and then she got only small raises after that. What makes you need more money than she did? You've lasted on an enlisted stallion's salary for long time, and that's less than you're making now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 28, 2012, 08:37:10 pm
"Well I really would prefer to keep my reasons for needing more money to myself, but I also think I deserve more money then Otik."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 28, 2012, 08:44:48 pm
Charity looks none to happy with our dear Captain. "You think you deserve more money than Otik got? She served Glitterglen since before you even immigrated here. She and Starkey built the army out of nothing. What makes you think you deserve more than she got?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 28, 2012, 08:48:11 pm
Jaxler continues leaning back in the chair showing no real concern toward Charities response.

"Well... the fact that I didn't die."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 28, 2012, 09:09:15 pm
Willow sighed with relief. she had hoped her guard duty would be more exciting than watching this fat buck engorge on cupcakes for twenty minutes. Her shift was almost over, was she going to jump into this? Of course she was.

"you know, Duchess, the colt has a point. It strikes me odd that even though the milita's forces have been struck in half, the pay hasn't doubled. some hazard pay and a COLA would be nice."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 28, 2012, 10:31:37 pm
"Uh, Luna? can I speak with Falcata in private for a minute before we start?"

Couth quickly ushered the three away from the god's prying eyes

"Look, You don't like me, And I sure as buck don't like you, but Damnit! IF we work together we can go back! I have A plan! The old gods made a way back, A backdoor back into the mortal life! But the Catch!? why do I need you?" He hisses

"Elements only. So, what do you say, element of loyalty? I show you the way, you open the door, all of us leave this place free ponies! you can see you daughter again!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 28, 2012, 10:55:21 pm
Falcata reluctantly follows Couth to seclusion and listens to what he has to say.  She expected him to taunt her in private with whatever dirt he'd dug up on her, but what he really said was in a way quite intruiging and horrifying.

"You're insane..." she begins.  It was hardly unlikely, given what she'd seen happen to Carrot.  Being dead didn't seem to do his mind much good.  "...and... even if you were telling the truth... how could such a thing be possible?  What cost would there be?  And what of Luna?"  She motions back in the direction of the alicorn filly.  "If I feared facing her now, how could I face her after doing such a thing?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 28, 2012, 10:59:03 pm
Charity glares at Jaxler, she opens her mouth to speak, when Willow cuts her off. "Oh, Willow, I forgot you were here." She stammers before recollecting her thoughts, "But doubling their pay is ridiculous, firstly because we've already started drafting replacements, before long they will be back up to their old numbers, and we can't afford to raise the pay of every soldier who survives a battle. And secondly, they are soldiers, they are paid for hazardous work, they don't get a bonus for just doing their job. If we did that it wouldn't be long before there were no bits left in treasury."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 28, 2012, 11:04:46 pm
"Yeah, but I kinda still need the extra money, regardless of weather or not I deserve it"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 28, 2012, 11:05:58 pm
"Right, well,"

she glances at Charity's cupcake drawer


"I'm sure ther' er some royal expenditures that could'a be cut if'a looked. but hey! My opinion don't matter."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 28, 2012, 11:15:45 pm
Charity glares at Willow this time, but considers to herself, what Jaxler had said about needing the raise.

It had been several years since Otik had lived on the salary, Glitterglen had grow so much. A cost of living increase for the military wouldn't be unreasonable, especially since they actually had things worth buying in town now. Doubling was still ridiculous, but a raise wasn't really outlandish. She quickly does some math in her head, Glitterglen had a surplus at the moment, they could afford it, she looks to the Captain. "Okay Captain, you can have your raise, the rest of the army too. A flat 10% increase across the board. Call it a Cost of Living Adjustment. You'll see the change in your next weeks pay. Is that all Captain?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 28, 2012, 11:24:07 pm
Jaxler stopped leaning in his chair and stood up

"I guess it is."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on March 28, 2012, 11:28:45 pm
"Oh, and Captain." Charity says as Jaxler rises to his hooves, "I would be careful who I said things like that about Otik around. Saying you deserve more than her, is less than wise. She had many close friends around here, and if it had been Khenal or Heiro, or her granddaughter Kris sitting here, you'd likely be walking out with a broken nose."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: jaxler on March 28, 2012, 11:31:47 pm
Jaxler shrugs and walks on out of the room
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 29, 2012, 12:50:55 am
"Luna is young for a god, she doesn't even know half of what she rules. she wouldn't even notice if I, heh, sorry, WE ... slipped away. All you have to do is let me ... drag you to hell. Don't give me that look! It'll just be a temporary detour! then we use your Loyalty. turns out the gods created a temple of harmony in hell. It was made to put the mane six back in action if they ever fell in battle. lost all this time to the sands of time.... this is the easy way, trust me. You do not want to know the hard way!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 29, 2012, 12:57:24 am
Falcata gives Estoc a curious glance before turning back to Couth.  He was insane.  She shakes her head.  "No... no, I won't do that.  Luna would surely know I'd gone missing, and when I died again what would I say to her?"  A glower forms on her face.  "And what makes you believe that you could return anyway?"  She snorts.  "I won't set hoof in Hell unless Luna puts me there herself."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 29, 2012, 01:16:06 am
couth grins. "you're Implying I can't Convict you there. I'm trying to be the nice pony, trying to give you the illusion of choice. This is nice Couth! you know what !?  no more nice Couth!

I. am. going. to the surface. Follow me, stop me, or get out of the way."

Couth Strides to the bench, pulls out a bottle of spirits, downs it, and spouts a arc of ethereal alcoholic flame four feet into the air.

"Luna, I'm ready." he growled through gritted teeth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 29, 2012, 01:24:27 am
Luna gives him a small nod and an innocent smile, ignoring the flashy display.  As Falcata and Estoc return to the room, she takes her position and looks at Falcata.  "Okay!  We're going to have a look at what sorts of things you did when you were alive.  We'll find out if you were a good pony or a bad pony."

Falcata lowers her head in deference and takes her place alongside Estoc.

"Okay, let's get started," Luna says, turning her attention to Couth.  "Let's hear from you first."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on March 30, 2012, 12:19:26 am
"Gladly. Falcata. have a last name Falcata? I've never heard it. anyway, a loving mother, A fierce warrior, and Loyal ,inanely loyal, insipidly loyal to her Duchess Charity. quick question, Estoc, would you believe your wife would perform any order for this pony?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on March 30, 2012, 01:21:09 am
Estoc raises an eyebrow and chances a look to Falcata.  "Not any order, no.  She'd do almost anything for Charity or Glitterglen, but not anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on April 01, 2012, 11:47:15 pm
The trial went on for hours on end. Estoc, while logical and disciplined was no lawyer. Couth tore down his every argument with calculated precision and bullied his own opinions with a fanatic ferocity.

"... And so , In summary, Did Falcata do what she needed to do in order to protect the ones she loved? She did. was what she did to the three ponies, her inability to stop commissar Abel from massacring thirteen ponies, what she did to me unexcusible? Damn right they are. she's was a necessary evil, yet an evil none the less. And luna, we all know where we put evil things, right?! simply put you should have never picked up the hammer Falcata, should have picked any other profession that could have benefited equestrian society, really. but no, had to attack others for a sense of vindication, and for that , you signed away your soul. I rest my case, luna." Couth wheezed in exasperation, his verbal onslaught taking a physical toll.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 02, 2012, 12:42:13 am
Luna listens intently as the debate rages on, her innocent smile fading to a frown.  She thinks for a moment, tapping her hoof to her chin.  Then, she looks up to Falcata, who was hanging her head and all but shaking in fear.  "Hearing all of that really makes me sad.  You did do some bad things.  Is there anything you'd like to say now?"

Falcata opens her mouth to speak, but only a frightened squeak emerges at first.  Finally, after a weary and nervous pat from Estoc, she manages, "I... I know I did some bad things."  She looks up to Luna, a pleading expression on her face.  "But... that's why... why I took up the hammer when Charity presented me the choice."  She hangs her head again.  "When I was sent to Glitterglen, I accepted I was sent there to die for my crimes.  I decided... that I'd give my life if I had to to right the wrongs I'd committed."

She takes a deep breath and with difficulty, continues, "There wasn't a day that went by that I didn't hate myself for what I'd done.  For killing some ponies who probably didn't deserve it.  For dragging my innocent daughter to the death trap I was sent to.  For nearly killing myself when the depression was more than I could bear."

The pleading expression returns to her face, and she takes a step toward Luna.  "That's why I gave my life trying to help ponies and protect them.  It's why, even when I was so sick... and hurt so much I could barely speak... that I fought on.  That's why, when we faced him," she punctuates with a hoof to Couth, "I decided that if anypony had to die it would be me.  That's why I threw myself in the way to save Charity."  Faint traces of tears began to form in her eyes.  "That's why I fought to protect over a hundred ponies from every last thing that attacked Glitterglen... be it horrifying monsters from below, the diomedians from above, or even the misguided zebras."

She pauses for a moment.  "...and that's why... as much as I loved my daughter... and all of my friends... I gave my life in the hopes that there would be the slimmest of chances they would live where I did not.  If I were called on again to give my life that any of them would live, and I could do it, I would."  Once more, she lowers her head.  "I've spent every waking moment of my miserable life trying to make amends for the wrongs that I'd done.  Perhaps even a lifetime of penance can't make up for it..."

Luna's expression grows more sorrowful as she listens.  "That's really sad..." she says, lowering her head as well for a moment.  "I didn't really know what to do with you.  You did do some bad things, but you're really sorry.  Even still... the rules are that you should be punished for what you did..."

Falcata's eyes go wide as the sentencing begins.  The sisters couldn't... wouldn't help her now... she was going to be turned away... even after spending her life trying to make up for it, she was going to be turned away... if only she'd been more pious... there was surely something she should have done... something else to make up for it... some law from Luna...

Luna thinks for a moment more, squinting in Falcata's direction.
  "...I... I think I know what to do now..."  She nods slowly, a small smile forming on her face again.  "I heard a testimony from somepony else too... somepony who isn't here.  He says that you're a good pony Falcata, and he's a good pony.  He always follows all of my rules, and I try to listen to him when he talks to me.  He says you're a good pony... so... I think... I think I forgive you."

Falcata's eyes go wide again, and she imagines she feels faint despite being dead.  She stammers for an extended period before kneeling before Luna.  "Th-thank you!  Oh, thank you Luna!"

Luna's innocent smile returns to her face as she steps forward.  "You're welcome!  Now... I think there's something I need to go tell him, and I think I want you to come too.  I forgive you, but there's a catch... I'll tell you then..."

((Not sure if I can respond any more tonight, or if we need to collaborate to coordinate the next part.  Couth can sputter in disbelief, or whatever. :D))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 02, 2012, 10:43:20 pm
That same day, Friesden had gone to the hospital for a different reason than the usual one. She'd been feeling a bit different, and, just to be on the safe side, had decided to ask Venture to give her a check-over.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 02, 2012, 10:58:38 pm
Venture was bored.  Bored bored.  Even the local spirits were finding other things to do, ponies to haunt.  The hospital was empty of patients, so Venture lay on one of the beds: watching the door and idly levitating a spare bit of bandage.  She supposed boredom was a good thing, at least it meant nopony was hurt.  But did it have to be so boring?  Mercifully, Friesden walks through the doors.  She didn't look hurt at least.  Venture smiles and gets off the bed to greet her friend.

"Hello Friesden, how are you today?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 02, 2012, 10:59:45 pm
"Hello Venture. I've been feeling...off, somewhat. Would you be able to give me a quick check up, please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 02, 2012, 11:01:47 pm
Venture cocks her head to the side slightly.

"Off?  How so?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 02, 2012, 11:25:04 pm
"I've just been feeling nauseous..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 02, 2012, 11:30:06 pm
Venture nods, trusting Friesden to know her symptoms.  After all, she's one of the senior medical staff.  Venture goes through the typical checkup procedure: tongue depressor to look at the throat, a little light spell to look in the ears and nostrils, listen at the chest for congestion.  So far, though, nothing is really standing out.

"Hmm, do you think you caught something?  Or maybe ate something that didn't agree with you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 02, 2012, 11:31:28 pm
"Um...I don't know..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 02, 2012, 11:34:24 pm
"Hmm...  Well, the only thing I can think to do is to do a magical scan of you.  Would that be alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 02, 2012, 11:35:45 pm
"Uhm, yes, that would be best, I think."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 02, 2012, 11:45:46 pm
Venture's horn glows as she begins to scan Friesden.  She comments aloud as she scans, giving Friesden a run down during the entire process.

"Temperature normal... hormones a little odd, but nothing serious... respiration normal... digestive tract normal... heartbeat... Huh?"

Venture's scan picks up a strange heartbeat pattern, like a small echo to her regular beat.  She follows the echoes down to her abdomen, then breaks the spell, shocked.

"Friesden!  You're pregnant!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 02, 2012, 11:47:30 pm
"What? I'm pregnant? Really?! This is the best! Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!" She throws her forelegs around Venture in a hug, a huge smile on her face.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 02, 2012, 11:52:07 pm
Venture smiles with her friend, scarcely believing it herself.

"It looks like Triplets!  Friesden, it's so wonderful!  You're going to be a mother!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 12:01:25 am
Friesden's smile extends off her face, warping the very space around her head to allow her smile to be shown. The tips touch the walls on either side. Her hug is even tighter than before.

"TRIPLETS?" she yells in a voice happier than physically possible. "Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! This is the best day ever ever ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 12:19:38 am
**Meanwhile**

I pause in my spar with Lord Cryptson, signalling him to hold for a moment.  I raise a hoof to rub at my ear, as it just started ringing.  And it's not stopping.  I set down my spear to rub harder at my ear, looking to Cryptson.

"Do you hear something?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 12:24:16 am
Hitting him with the force of a Orbital Happiness Beam is Friesden, tackle-hugging him. "Khenal! Khenal! Khenal! I'm pregnant!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 12:29:58 am
Friesden bowls me over, with us eventually coming to a stop with me on my back and her beaming down at me.

"What... Pregnant?  Really?!"

I smile wide at my wife and wrap her in my wings, nuzzling at her in happiness.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 12:33:01 am
"Yes! Really! And Venture says..." She takes in a deep breath before continuing "IT'S GOING TO BE TRIPLETS!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on April 03, 2012, 12:37:08 am
"Catch, Luna? what's- *lowers his volume* pardon my diomidian, but what's this horseS%T!? can we stick to black and white here?" Couth inquired, slightly nervous of this wildcard.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 12:53:54 am
Starkey and Otik enter through the wall of the hospital, both appearing exhausted, but quite content.

"Ah... Hello Venture. Have you seen Friesden today?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 12:57:21 am
Venture beams at the two spirits.

*Yes, I have!  She just ran off to find Khenal and give him the good news!  She's pregnant!  With triplets!*
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 01:00:14 am
Luna smiles at him and says, "Sometimes the rules don't work quite right, and I have to make stuff up.  This time, I decided that I forgive her, but there's something I want her to do to make up for the bad stuff she did."

She makes a gesture at Falcata.  "First off, I'm going to have her watch out for all of the ponies who die in Glitterglen.  She'll see to it that they all come here and don't wait around longer than they should.  Sometimes that makes them more sad, and I don't like that."  She raises a hoof to her chin.  "Just for a little while.  Unless she likes it, then she can do it as long as she wants!"

Luna takes a step toward the two and adds, "Oh, and the second thing, is I'm going to teach you two to get along!"  A grin forms on her face.  "I'm going to have Falcata hang around with you for a while and do stuff you ask her to!  Not bad stuff... just good stuff, but she's going to be your helper for a while!"

Falcata's face goes through a few curious expressions at the revelation, but she maintains her dignity for the most part.  "...I... uh... of course, Luna, whatever you wish."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 01:02:47 am
"...She's wot? Pregnant? Tha's..."

"Fantastic! Incredible! Amazing!"

Starkey is practically dancing.

"Where is she now? C'n we go spak t'her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on April 03, 2012, 01:10:35 am
"Of course, my goddess." Couth beamed fictitiously.

"as long as she retains her element of loyalty, this is a glorious conquest of justice. your wisdom knows no bound 's's." Couth tried everything in his power to stifle a snicker at 'bounds'.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 01:17:15 am
"She dashed off to go find Khenal, I'm pretty sure he's on shift right now.  She should be able to see you as well, she keeps coming by whenever she wakes up for me to cast the spell on her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 01:41:50 am
"Fabulous, thank you!"

The two of them dash off through the far wall, towards the arena. As they enter, Starkey catches sight of Friesden and dashes forward, lifting her into the air in a tight hug.

"Ohsistersmylittleponyweheardallaboutitit'ssowonderfulI'msoproudofyouIloveyousomuch!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 01:44:07 am
Friesden returns the hug with a huge smile. "Dad! This is the best day ever, isn't it?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 01:46:57 am
Starkey gently lowers Friesden to the floor, where Otik joins them in the hug.

"Yes, my little pony... today is the best day of my li-... existence. I'm so happy for you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 01:58:48 am
As the ponies hug and talk, all those present who are in or that can view the spiritual plane notice a dusk descend around them.  A few steps away, a gloomy glow forms for a moment followed by a crackle of lightning.  As the gloom dissipates, a number of ponies are left standing in its place, the centermost among them a dark colored alicorn mare with great sheets of ethereal wisps for a mane.  She steps forward, leaving Couth, Estoc and Falcata behind her, and addresses those present, "Greetings."  A warm smile forms on her face.  "It is good to see you all in high spirits."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 02:01:08 am
Friesden drags the hug over, managing to grab Estoc, Falcata, and Luna into the hug. "I'm pregnant! With triplets!" she says with a squee.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 02:03:16 am
"F-Falcata!? Estoc? A-And... Oh, Starkey..."

Starkey glances towards the night princess, and his eyes go wide a saucers. He breaks the hug and bows deeply. Otik follows suit.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 02:04:38 am
Friesden holds the hug, keeping Falcata, Estoc, and Luna together.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 02:12:15 am
Luna continues to smile warmly as she's hugged by the innocent-minded and ecstatic mare.  She gently breaks the hug and nods to her.  "Yes, I always rejoice when life is created, and you've been blessed with an abundance."  She turns her attention to Starkey and Otik bowing before her and motions for them to rise.  "You may rise.  It is good to finally be able to meet you personally.  You have been a faithful servant, and I am most grateful.  To that end, I have come with some news you may be interested in."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 02:14:18 am
They both rise at Her command.

"T-thank you... It warms my heart to know you are pleased with me, milady. What news do you bring?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 03, 2012, 02:22:04 am
Crypston had been standing in place watching as Friesden delivered the news to her husband. He remembered Charity's first foal and how excited he had been to be a father, and he was happy for Khenal, a smile formed about his face. But the events that followed left him confused and disturbed. Friesden was lifted into the air by an unseen force, without even opening her wings, she was speaking to the force and called it "Dad" she was now hugging something else that wasn't there.

He looked at Khenal who seemed to be taking all this as normal. "What? What the buck is going on!" he says audibly, in a very un-Cryptson-like way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 02:25:47 am
"Um...Sorry...But...Who are you?" Friesden asks, after noticing her parents reverence to the pony in front of her, hestitantly almost-bowing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 02:29:22 am
Luna smiles at her, but doesn't respond immediately.  Instead, her horn is cloaked in a shimmering silver as she casts a spell, allowing those around her to witness her and the deceased with her.  "I am Luna, goddess of the night."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 02:30:52 am
Friesden falls down into the bow, shocked by the presence of Luna into silence.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 03, 2012, 02:35:57 am
As Cryptson's vision begins to shift he sees Friesden her forelegs wrapped around 3 ponies, one of which was Falcata. He takes a step closer, "Fal..." he mummers before the dark Alicorn speaks and introduces herself as the goddesses Luna, in his shock and confusion of seeing Falcata again, he had not recognized the Princess of the Night, he immediately drops into a deep bow before her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on April 03, 2012, 02:40:58 am
Couth waves a hoof at Cryptson " 'ello, Cryptson! How's the wife? anymore bolts put through her?" Couth chimed.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 03, 2012, 02:47:53 am
Recognizing the voice, Cryptson looks up from the floor and sees Couth Darkmane of all ponies standing there. He is filled with shock and rage at this ponies presence. "Darkmane! How dare you show your face around here again. I'll send you back to hell where you belong." He takes up his Adamantine Pick in his mouth and stands to his feet.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 02:54:53 am
The smile on Luna's face persists as Cryptson notices her.  She lifts a hoof up.  "You may rise.  It is good to see you in person as well, my faithful servant."  With another small gesture to Friesden, she adds,  "As well as you, little one."

As Couth calls out to Cryptson and the stallion draws his pick, she raises a hoof to forestall him.  "Your anger is justified, but punishment for this stallion is mine to give."  She turns an icy glare to Couth.  "And do not taunt my faithful followers, lest I teach you a lesson you will never forget in all of eternity."

She returns her attention to Starkey.  "As I was saying, I have come with some news for you all."  She motions back to Falcata, who was sitting silently next to Luna, and says, "First, I would say that I have heard your pleas, and I have spared Falcata's soul.  She has done wrong in her life, but she and you have convinced me that her sins have not been too grave for forgiveness."

Falcata smiles toward Starkey, and gives him a small nod.

"Next... I wish to present my faithful servant with a gift..."  She motions to Starkey.  "Another chance at life."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 02:56:45 am
"W-w-w-w-w-w-w-what? D-d-d-d-d-dad...You're bringing d-d-d-d-dad back t-t-t-t-to life? B-b-b-b-but...But what about mum?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 02:58:54 am
Starkey swallows hard.

"T-That... is a most generous gift, milady... but what of my love, Otik? Is she to return with me as well?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 03, 2012, 03:05:08 am
At Luna's words he lays the head of his pick on the ground, with the handle reaching upward leaning against his body. He would not defy his goddess's commands, but more than a small part of him wished that he could. Couth had tried to murder his beloved wife, and orchestrated the ritual sacrifice of other ponies, had Cryptson the power he would damn Couth to the deepest pits of Tartarus for all of time, for his actions.

Pushing the thoughts of vengeance from his mind, he instead looks at Falcata, she was even more beautiful than he remembered her being, he repressed the desire to bolt up and hug her, as he knew that would be most improper, and instead he just listens. Content with the knowledge that Luna had forgiven her.

Cryptson looks over to Starkey. Starkey was a good friend, and a very faithful pony, if any pony deserved resurrection, it would be him. But no small part of the earthpony Lord wished it could be Falcata instead. Though he dare not speak his thoughts on the matter.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 03:07:33 am
Luna's smile fades slightly.  "I... am afraid I cannot do that."  She gestures in the air, leaving wispy images behind her hoof.  Six icons appear, symbolizing the Elements of Harmony.  "I can only restore those who bear an Element to life.  Those whose life exemplifies the qualities that make up the greatest virtues."  She motions to Starkey.  "Honesty."  Her hoof tracks to Falcata to her side.  "Loyalty."

"I can only return these two to life."  She lowers her head slightly.  "I am sorry."

Falcata's jaw goes slack at the goddess's words, but she holds in her thoughts.  She... could return to life?  With Starkey?  But... not Otik?  Or Estoc?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 03:10:50 am
"S-She... she can't..."

Starkey steadies himself, and moves to Otik's side.

"T-Then I will not go. I am sorry milady, but that is too high a price."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 03:16:56 am
Falcata watches as Starkey turns down the offer.  Sisters help her... she would do anything for him right now.  He'd probably been the one save her from an eternity of torment.  An idea comes to her... she fights it for a moment, but it grows inside as she sees the expressions on Otik and Starkey's faces.  They deserved life again.  Starkey might have saved her soul, but Otik was a wonderful pony too.  She deserved a second chance more than she did herself.  And if she couldn't return with Estoc, she would have to refuse Luna's offer too.

Finally, she musters a heroic amount of courage to speak up to the goddess before her.
  "L-Luna?"

The alicorn turns her attention to the mare.  "Yes?"

"Could Otik go in my place?  Could I give her my Loyalty?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on April 03, 2012, 03:27:04 am
Couth was honestly hurt. four years devoted to her, serving her, running her every errand, and he's still on her hatelist. the poor misguided colt actually wanted an earnest answer, no one lays a hoof on the duchess but him. all this agonizing subservience will payoff though, just have to drag Falcata and her gang to hell, open the gates, and - What the buck did Falcata just vomit out of her mouth?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 03:38:07 am
"Wot? Falcata, no... ye dunnae hafta do that f'r me. Ye deserve t'be with Kris again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on April 03, 2012, 03:51:00 am
"Yes, listen to the mare!" Couth cried, flailing his hooves at Otik dramatically
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 04:02:34 am
Luna nods slowly, deep in thought.  "I have never had such a request... but... yes, that is possible."

Falcata gives Otik a small, sad smile.  Words couldn't convey how much she wanted to be with her daughter again... but her mind was made up.  She'd made mistakes in her life, but she was going to truly make up for it now.  Starkey and Otik deserved another chance... a chance to live the life she had already had in so many ways.  "Otik..." she trails off for a moment, before she gathers her thoughts.  "...it's okay.  Please take it.  You deserve it.  A lot more than I do."

She gestures to herself.  "I'm more than a decade older than you.  I've had my chance to marry... to have a child... and to watch her grow up into a wonderful young mare.  Kris isn't a foal anymore, as much as I may have treated her like one.  She's grown stronger than I could have ever hoped for... and if I read her right she's deeply in love with Adamant.  She'll soon have a family of her own."  She smiles weakly.  "I know she misses me, but she's her own mare now."

As she raises a hoof toward Otik, she feels a curious sensation flow down her leg.  A hovering, ethereal image signifying Loyalty forms above her hoof.  "I've made some big mistakes in my life.  But the worst mistake either of you have made is being brave soldiers.  Willing to lay down your lives like all soldiers should, but which so few can really do willingly."  She motions the image toward Otik again.  "Your lives ended too early... and you both deserve a chance to live them to the extent I have.  You've both been good friends and inspirations to me... better than I ever deserved.  Please... let me return the favor..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 04:03:32 am
"W-w-w-w-wait, Luna. Um. Um. Can I ask you something in secret?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 04:05:49 am
Luna turns a curious expression to Friesden.  "Of course."  She steps over to the pegasus and crouches next to her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 04:07:42 am
"U-u-u-um. I-I-I-I-I...I think I have a solution...Um...It's...It's scary...But...But...If you can restore my mother's life, and take mine instead? I d-d-d-d-d-d-d-don't want to die...But...For my mum...Anything. Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 04:17:56 am
Luna gives her a warm smile and shakes her head.  "No, child, I cannot do that.  It is noble of you to offer your life in the place of your mother's, but I cannot take yours to restore hers.  It is not the way of the universe."  Her smile grows.  "But I do not think you have need to fear.  I believe your mother will be returned to you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 04:21:16 am
"But...But...Then Falcata can't come back... Maybe...Maybe if you gave my mother my body? If you swapped us around? Would that be okay?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 12:34:43 pm
"I am sorry... but that is also something I cannot do."  Luna lays a hoof on Friesden's withers, and the mare feels a warm, calming sensation flow through her.  "You are a selfless and kind pony, and I am pleased with you as well.  I am sorry that things worked out this way, but it is beyond my ability to return them all, even that way."

She leans in closer to Friesden and adds, "I know you have a deep love for your parents as well as your friend, which they all feel toward you as well.  If your mother accepts her offer... I have tasked Falcata with staying in Glitterglen for some time, helping to usher those who lose their lives here on to me.  She will always be by your side, and you may see or speak with her whenever you wish, as you have done before."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 03:49:19 pm
"But...Isn't there anything I can do? I...I know I don't do much...but..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 05:14:41 pm
I look up form bowing when I hear Falcata talking with Otik.  I get a bit nervous when Friesden speaks with Luna in whispers, but Luna's calm and kind demeanor helps put me at ease.  I don't dare speak in the presence of the goddess.  If Falcata was only just barely admitted to Luna's afterlife, what hope would I have?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 06:30:18 pm
A small smile returns to Luna's face.  "You have already done so much for her, an act I could not be more pleased with and for which she could not be more thankful.  I know you grieve the loss of your friend, but this is beyond my power, even with your help."  Luna chances a look back to Falcata before returning her attention to Friesden.  "If you wish to help her, then she will still need a friend.  She has her husband, but she will need a friend to talk to as well.  I will allow her to be with you whenever she or you wish."  Her smile grows slightly.  "Can you do that for me?  For her?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 06:39:01 pm
"R-r-really? O-o-o-o-o-o-of course! She...She saved my life...I just wish I could have saved hers...but something as easy as that? Of course, of course I will! Thank you, thank you, thank you!"

Friesden gives Luna a hug, before spotting Khenal still in the bow.

"I'm so sorry! I almost forgot!"

She runs across to Khenal, almost dragging Luna with her. "This is Khenal, my husband, the best pony ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 06:49:20 pm
'Oh.


Buck!'


I return to a deep bow as Friesden tries to bring over the goddess Luna, barely able to keep from trembling in her presence.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 03, 2012, 06:52:50 pm
Otik takes Falcata's hoof in his, pressing it to her chest.

"Oh, Falcata... T'make such a sacrifice as this... Yer a better pony than I could ever hope t'be. Wot could I ever do t'repay this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 07:31:15 pm
Luna's eyes go wide as she is abruptly hauled along by Friesden, but a smile returns to her face as they arrive at Khenal.  "You may rise, Khenal."  As she notes his barely concealed terror, her expression turns almost playful.  "There is no need to be afraid."

Falcata smiles to Otik before cautiously hugging her and Starkey.  Even after all of this, she didn't want to overstep herself, but it felt appropriate.  "Just make good use of this chance.  Tell Kris that I love her... her and Heiro.  And watch out for them for me."  She pulls back slightly to look both in the eyes for a moment.  "I know you will."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 07:42:44 pm
"He's the best pony, isn't he, Luna?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 08:04:44 pm
I rise as Luna bids me, though I can't bring myself to look her in the eyes.  Friesden's praise of me does little to calm my fears around Luna.

"I'm, um, not so great..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 08:11:27 pm
"Don't be silly, Khenal, of course you are!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 08:38:32 pm
I keep my gaze low, barely muttering my denials.

"I'm not great... realy, I'm not..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 08:58:40 pm
"Yes, you really are!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 03, 2012, 09:24:58 pm
Luna cocks her head at Khenal's expressions and words.  "All ponies make mistakes.  Nopony is perfect."  Her face grows serious as she continues, "Worry not about what is past, look to the future with a sincere heart at fixing your mistakes."  Her expression softens a bit.  "That is all that I ask of ponies.  Falcata did so, and I know you shall as well."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 09:33:17 pm
"Well, nopony is perfect but Khenal. He's the best pony ever!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 09:40:50 pm
I bow deeply to Luna again at her words, silently praying she's not just trying to ease a condemned pony's worries.

"I'll try, goddess."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 09:46:40 pm
"Oh. Um. Khenal...I should probably tell you...I asked Luna if Falcata could come back, and...And she said no, I couldn't give myself up for her, but that Falcata will be around and I'll be able to talk to her whenever she or I want to!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 09:55:30 pm
'Give herself up...?  Well, Luna isn't taking her at least...'

"Uhh, I thought you were done with... trying to die.  Um, I am glad that Falcata will be able to visit, though."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 10:16:30 pm
"I...I don't want to die. It's scary, and I don't want to leave you...But...But I can't just let somepony die or...or stay dead, not if I could prevent it! I'm sorry, Khenal, I'm sorry!"

Tears begin to form in Friesden's eyes, and she buries her face in Khenal's fur.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 03, 2012, 10:32:26 pm
I wrap a wing about my love and give her a loving nuzzle, briefly forgetting Luna and my past, caught up in the present and needing to help Friesden.

"It's alright, Friesden.  I know you just want to help.  It's one of the many, meny things I love about you,  my Only Light."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 03, 2012, 10:37:48 pm
"I'm...I'm so thankful that you do love me, my love, my song, my everything. Without you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 04, 2012, 12:18:35 am
Upon overhearing Friesden's retelling of Falcata's fate, Starkey approaches Luna.

"And... we will be able to see her as well?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 04, 2012, 12:23:24 am
Luna turns to face her faithful servant and his lover.  She gives him a warm smile and nods.  "Of course."  Falcata approaches too, and Luna looks to address her.  "Have you made your decision?  Is this what you wish?"

Falcata smiles at Starkey and Otik.  "Yes, Luna, this is what I wish."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 04, 2012, 12:31:54 am
Friesden makes a strangled noise, still wishing she could give up herself for her friend.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 04, 2012, 12:55:44 am
Luna nods again and smiles.  "Very well."  Her horn is coated in a silvery sheen as she casts an immensely powerful spell.  The air feels heavy for a moment as the spell works, and with a crackle of lightning two pony sized blocks of clay are called into existence, appearing near Starkey and Otik.  "From these I will carve your new forms."

Her horn flickers again, and the clay begins to deform and reshape itself in their images.  After a few moments, immaculate recreations of the two ponies rest where untouched clay stood, devoid of scars or other imperfections of a life of battle.  Luna waves her hoof in the direction of the statues, and wispy images representing Honesty and Loyalty travel from Starkey and Falcata onto the two statues.  "As symbols of the most virtuous qualities, I have granted you a second chance at life."  She takes a breath, shuts her eyes and breathes onto the statues.  The clay slowly fades to reveal flesh, and Luna turns her eyes to the two once more.

"May you now live," she says, and her horn glows a pale silver.  At that moment, Starkey and Otik feel faint, and the world shifts around them uncertainly for a moment.  Their spirits drift into the new bodies, and when they reawaken, they find their bodies to be changed.  No longer ethereal and permeable to the world.  They feel real again... and with all that comes with it.  A faint feeling of hunger rolls through them.

Luna opens her eyes and turns them to the newly living ponies.
  "It is done."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 04, 2012, 12:57:33 am
Friesden breaks away from Khenal, running over to her mother and father and picking them up in a hug. "Mum! Dad!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 04, 2012, 01:17:25 am
Starkey and Otik wrap their forehooves around their daughter, but a collective growling interrupts their reunion.

"A-heh, perhaps we ought to celebrate with a nice dinner?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 04, 2012, 01:22:26 am
"Um...Luna? Falcata? Khenal? Maybe we can go to dinner together?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 04, 2012, 01:46:33 am
Luna smiles as the ponies are reunited, and she stands to her full height.  "I cannot join you, for I am needed elsewhere.  I must leave you now."  She turns her attention to Couth.  "Come with me, we will speak of your future."  She then looks to Falcata.  "You may stay to join them if you wish.  When you are done, return to me and we will discuss your future as well."

Falcata bows as Luna addresses her.  "Yes, of course.  I wish to join them, and I will return to you when we are done."

Luna nods and steps off, her body becoming enshrouded by a gloomy haze.  "Very well.  I await your return."

Falcata watches as Luna disappears into the haze, and looks over to Friesden.  "I'd love to join you... but first, I need to do something..."  She steps over to Cryptson, trying to maintain the air of deference to him she always held in life.  As she draws close, she lowers her head slightly, a compromise of a clumsy bow she'd adopted when she wasn't quite sure how to approach him after Charity's mention of her distate for bowing.  Still, Cryptson had been a loner, and she didn't want to assume too much about him not wanting her to show her respect.

"My lord..." she begins, raising her head to look him straight on before contuining, "...I just... wanted to tell you that I've missed you and your family.  I'm sorry that I failed... but I haven't forgotten my duty.  I'm still watching over your family, as best I can here."  She forms a small smile.  "You're one of the greatest warriors I've ever met.  I know you and Khenal will protect them from everything I can't."  She fights for words for a moment more.  She hadn't said all that much to Lord Cryptson... she wished she had more to say to him now... something to tell Charity maybe?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 04, 2012, 09:36:58 am
"Falcata..." begins Cryptson, "You could never fail me, you were one of the finest warriors in all the world, no pony could have done more than you did that day, but I...We have missed you so much." Cryptson puts a forehoof on Falcata, "We could never have asked for a better Captain. If Charity were here, she would tell you that she loved you like a sister, I think we both did. ...I'm sorry if I was distant to you, I regret that we never had an opportunity to get to know each other very well. I don't think Charity ever told you this, but you were her best friend, in all the world. After your...death, we...we took in Kris, she is not a little filly, and she doesn't need us to look over her, but we will still treat her as if she was our own daughter. I can promise you, she will never be without family."

The strong and gentle blue stallion pauses, "I'm glad we got to see each other again." Cryptson hesitates he wishes to reach out and embrace the mare, but is unsure if that would be proper and with all these ponies watching, he dare not make such a move.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 04, 2012, 01:03:17 pm
Like... a sister?  She had no idea... she knew Charity thought of her as a good friend, but that she cared that deeply about her... she had no idea.  And that Cryptson thought of her so fondly as well... that was a real shock.  She had always secretly hoped Cryptson thought well of her, of course, but she would have never expected for him to think of her like family.  Not that he had ever treated her badly... ever... but perhaps she had simply misinterpreted his stoic and solitary attitude.

That he also thought of her as so skilled, even after he'd beaten her soundly in their sparring matches... she had worried a lot about what he and Charity might have thought about her after that.  What good was a body guard if the people they were supposed to protect were better fighters?  Did he really still think of her as worthy of being their protector?

And... they had taken in Kris?

Her cautious and guarded expression melts into a small smile, and she responds,
"Th-thank you..."  She struggles to find words to convey her emotions. "...that means so much... and thank you for watching out for Kris.  You and Charity have been so good to us... I really can't thank you enough..."

Her smile fades a bit.  "I wish I could see her again, and Master Adamant.  He's a fine young stallion, and I really was overjoyed to learn that he and Kris were together."  She glances back to Friesden and her family.  "But Luna only gave me time enough to join Friesden for now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 04, 2012, 04:52:30 pm
"Um...Maybe we could ask them to dinner as well?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 04, 2012, 07:18:04 pm
I nod at Friesden's suggestion.

"A reunion sounds nice, especially with Starkey and Otik back with us."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Kryptid on April 04, 2012, 09:54:35 pm
My completed rendition of Princess Hugwax:

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 05, 2012, 05:58:47 pm
Cryptson hesitates before saying anything more. "I should go tell Charity about what has happened. She'll want to be informed right away about Starkey and Otik, as well. Sisters, she'll probably think I've lost my mind, and maybe I have. If I can convince her I'm not crazy, we'll meet you all for dinner." Cryptson turns to Starkey and Otik, "Commander. Welcome back, and to you as well Miss Otik."

Cryptson takes up his weapon and turns to leave, running through his head over the possible ways to tell his wife all of the impossible things that he had just saw. The goddess Luna just showing up and returning ponies to life, it was an unheard of miracle, no sane pony would believe his story, he wasn't sure he even believed it himself, it all seemed so surreal.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 05, 2012, 06:06:59 pm
"Um...Cryptson? C-c-c-could you not tell her that I'm pregnant? I'd....I'd like to tell her myself, if that's alright?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 05, 2012, 06:10:10 pm
Cryptson stops as he hears Friesden's voice. He looks back over his shoulder at her as she makes her request. He smiles at her and shakes his head in silent agreement, before continuing on his way.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 05, 2012, 06:14:54 pm
Friesden turns to the ponies still present. "Well...Um...Shall we go?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 05, 2012, 08:16:55 pm
"Aye, let's go. Our place?"

Otik turns to go...

...and promptly walks face-first into a wall.


"Ah, hun... we can't do that anymore, remember?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 05, 2012, 08:31:48 pm
Falcata barely contains a chuckle at the sight.  "Perhaps we should give you two some time to prepare?  It's been a few months since anypony has set hoof in your home."  She starts to consider what in the world she was going to say to Charity or the rest of her family.  Cryptson was right about that, this was the most bizarre thing that could probably have happened.  She wasn't entirely sure she believed it herself.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 05, 2012, 09:22:34 pm
"Um...Falcata, c-c-c-can I talk to you in private? It won't be too long. Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 05, 2012, 09:25:59 pm
"Hmm?  Oh, of course."  Falcata steps off to speak with her privately.  She wondered what Friesden could have to say...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 05, 2012, 09:27:39 pm
"I-I-I-I-I-I just want to say I-I-I-I-I-I'm sorry! I-I-I-I-I-I-I tried to ask Luna to let me die instead of you, b-b-b-b-b-but she w-w-w-w-w-w-wouldn't let me! I'm sorry! I'm so sorry! Please, don't hate me, please!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 05, 2012, 09:31:21 pm
The two pegasi head for the door. Before they leave, Otik turns back to Khenal.

"Khenal, would ye mind comin' along? We could use some help makin' th' place presentable."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 05, 2012, 09:49:06 pm
Falcata moves to hug Friesden.  "I'd never hate you Friesden... especially not for trying to help me."  She smiles at her.  "I'm sorry I couldn't come back too, but your life is every bit as important as mine.  Especially now that you're going to be a mom soon."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 05, 2012, 09:53:58 pm
"T-t-t-thank you, thank you, thank you!" Friesden returns the hug. "You're the best friend I could ever have. I don't know what I'd have done, what I would do, without you. Thank you so much for still liking me."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 06, 2012, 01:50:02 am
I watch Friesden talking with Falcata, unable to suppress a smile as they do.  I nod at Otik's question, thinking that Friesden and Falcata might have some catching up to do.

"Sure Otik.  I'd love to.  I... I missed you both... so much.  It'll be nice to help and catch up."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 06, 2012, 01:52:18 pm
"And I don't know what I would have done without you," Falcata replies, contemplating how she would have probably been dead over a year ago if it wasn't for Friesden.  How things would have turned out differently if she hadn't helped her... Charity might be dead... who knew what that might have meant.  And where would Kris be if she had been just a filly when her mother died?  Psychologically broken and living with Kukri or Dirk, most likely. 

If only Friesden really knew how much positive impact she'd had on her life, if not all of Glitterglen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 06, 2012, 05:39:37 pm
"I-i-i-i-i-if you ever need somepony to talk to, Luna told me that I'll be able to....So...Um...If you need to..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 06, 2012, 05:51:30 pm
"Thank you," she says, holding the smile on her face.  "And if you need somepony to talk to, I'll be right here."  Her smile widens to a small grin.  "You're going to need all the help you can get when the babies come.  I might not be able to do much but offer some advice, but I did raise a filly, and I think she turned out okay," she jokes.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 06, 2012, 06:08:43 pm
"Of course Kris turned out well!" Friesden says with an almost mortified look on her face. "Of course she did! She had you for a mother!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 06, 2012, 07:44:21 pm
That was... touching, even if Friesden had mistaken the jest for a serious statement.  She'd obsessed over how well she'd raised Kris, considering the circumstances, but she did think the filly had turned out to be a fine young mare.  To hear somepony else say it though...  "Thank you, that... I suppose she did turn out well," she responds, the grin replaced by a genuine smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 06, 2012, 07:48:39 pm
"And I'd be glad to accept your help raising the three little babies...Oh, I can't wait! This is going to be the best! Today is the best day ever! I've got mum and dad and you and three little babies on the way!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 07, 2012, 11:44:00 pm
The three ponies arrive at the cabin in the caverns, only to find it locked up tight.

"Well, I suppose I should have expected this. Khenal, you wouldn't happen to know who might have the key, would you?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 08, 2012, 02:46:26 am
"Um, I do, actually.  Friesden... inherited your house, so she asked me to hold the key."

My horn glows as I levitate the key from my armor to unlock the door.

"Nopony has really been in here since... you left, so it should be pretty much like you left it."

'Dang, resurrection makes things awkward... I guess that's why Luna doesn't do it for just anypony?'
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 08, 2012, 03:00:22 am
They both step inside, finding the place mostly unchanged.

"Aye, I should think so. Especially once Miss Charity gets wind o' this."


"Speaking of which... what about our jobs? Who did she pick to replace us?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 08, 2012, 03:15:33 am
I think for a moment, trying to remember the name of the new Militia Commander, and failing to do so.

"Well... Jaxler is the new commander of the Skyguard, and... I can't remember the name of the new Militia Commander.  I'm so terrible with names..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 08, 2012, 03:19:38 am
"Jaxler? Never did have much chance t'talk with him. Wot's he like?"

Starkey moves to the kitchen, retrieving some candles and lamp oil and proceeding to light up the place.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 08, 2012, 03:25:10 am
"Jaxler is... odd.  I've never had a pony react to me like he does.  Hostility I can handle.  Adoration... I can't, but it wouldn't be... new.  But his apathy?  I have no idea how to respond to that.  He seems nice enough, but almost too layed back to have wanted to join the military, you know?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 08, 2012, 03:34:05 am
Falcata walks beside Friesden as they make their way to the cabin in the caverns.  She can't help but feel a bit of apprehension as she sees the spots where she and Otik lost their lives.  At least she and Starkey were alive and well.  That was at least as much as she could have asked for when she faced the beast, even if she got her wish indirectly.

She rivets her attention away from the morbid sight onto the cabin drawing closer.
  "You know, I've never been inside Starkey and Otik's home."  She thinks about how dangerous the location was, and doubts she'd have wanted a home in such a place.  "I wonder why they chose to live down here?  I suppose it is a bit secluded."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 08, 2012, 03:41:06 am
"Well, I guess you will now!" As the two reach the house, Friesden opens the door and rushes through, heading over to Khenal and wrapping him in a hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 08, 2012, 03:52:59 am
Friesden's hug is unexpected, but absolutely welcome.  I wrap her in my wings and forelegs, smiling and nuzzling her lovingly.

"Triplets, my Only Light.  And our friends returned to us.  Best day ever?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 08, 2012, 03:54:43 am
Falcata quietly enters the home behind Friesden and searches for someplace out of the way to settle in.  The cabin was cozy inside, she had to give them that.  Still seemed like a hazardous place to live, but perhaps she was thinking more for her daughter than she was for herself.  Most of the creatures down in the caverns probably couldn't get inside though, really.

A thought strikes her as she takes in the surroundings.  This must have been quite a haunting place for Starkey to spend time alone without Otik.  Not something she wanted to really think about.  She'd been there once...

As if on cue, Estoc appears behind her, walking through the wall to join her at her side.  He notices the slightly disturbed expression on her face and asks,
"Something wrong?"

She smiles and places her hooves around him, drawing him into a firm hug.  "Not anymore."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 08, 2012, 03:57:41 am
"Best day ever EVER!" she says with a smile.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 08, 2012, 08:31:44 pm
Cryptson, made his way to Charity's office, his head spinning with ways to tell this all to his wife. At his arrival Madush salutes the lord and allows him to enter.

"Oh, hello dear, it isn't like you to visit me at work. Is there a problem?" asks Charity without taking her eyes off the work before her.

"No Charity, something wonderful has happened. But it will sound like madness."

Charity sighs and looks up to her husband. "Crypt, we've had demons, and ghosts, and undead, giant feathered beasts forgotten by time, and monsters from the magma sea, all come and harass us here. I'm hardly going to be surprised by anything here anymore. Just tell me what happened."

"Our goddesses Luna, Princess of the Night, Judge of the Dead, appeared before Khenal, Friesden, and myself. She offered to return the ghosts of Starkey and Falcata to life. Falcata instead gave her chance to Otik, and now Starkey and Otik have been remade in the flesh and are inviting us for dinner."

Charity looks at Cryptson, she'd never known him to have a sense of humor, "Cryptson, is this some kind of joke? Because if it is it isn't a very funny one."

Cryptson looks Charity in the eyes, his sincerity plain upon his face, "My dearest wife, I swear to you that this is no joke. They are alive."

Charity's expression becomes not one of joy, but one of dread. 'He's serious? But that can't be. That's impossible. One of the Sisters just...bringing them back? Why? He must have lost his mind.' Charity approaches her husband with caution. "Dear did you, maybe, hit your head? Can I take a look?"

Cryptson removes his chanfron and shows that he has no visible injuries. "I swear to you dear, that I am not making this up, nor have I lost my mind. It is all true. Now hurry, we must gather our foals, they will want to see their Uncle Starkey."

Charity still not fully believing the impossible claims of her husband, follows along behind him as they gather their foals. Together, Charity, Cryptson, all seven of their children, from the oldest Adamant, to the youngest Cinnamon Diamond, Kris, along with those of the Ducal Guard that could be found make their way to the cabin. As they make their approach Charity still not truly believing is surprised to see that a fire has been lit in the cabins fireplace. Somepony is there at least. The herd of ponies approaches the cabin and Charity knocks three times with her hoof upon the door.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 08, 2012, 08:39:09 pm
Friesden leaps off from Khenal and runs to the door. She opens it and spots the veritable herd of ponies, and smiles wide. "Charity! Cryptson! Kris! Adamant! Belle! Cobalt! Skydancer! Copper! Cinnamon Diamond! Blue Diamond! Osal! Madush! It's so good to see all of you! Come in, come in, Starkey and Otik will want to see you!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 08, 2012, 08:43:49 pm
As Friesden calls out the names, Otik visibly tenses.

"Ooh dear... this willnae be easy..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 08, 2012, 09:07:30 pm
Charity smiles at Friesden and makes her way into the cabin, she turns and sees Starkey, her mouth hangs open. She couldn't believe her eyes. It was really him, alive and in the flesh, the very same Starkey she had placed in that tomb months ago. The only difference was that all of his scars were gone. "S...Starkey, is...is that really you?" she mutters.

As Charity awaits her answer the rest of the crowd make their way around the room. Most of the older foals find their own seats mostly quietly. Cobalt finds a dark corner to sulk in. Belle the eldest daughter takes Cinnamon Diamond, the infant filly and sits near the fire. Blue Diamond only a year old, barely remembers most of these strange big ponies and hides behind his father's back legs.

However, it was the filly Copper Riverknight, so named for her stunning eyes, who interrupted Starkey's response to her mother's question, by bolting forward and tackle hugging the newly risen Commander.


While holding onto the pegasus the filly began to question him. "Uncle Starkey, they said you were gone forevers! How did you get back? Daddy said Princess Luna did it, did you meet her? Was she nice like in the stories? How come your scars are all gone? Is miss Falcata gonna come back too? Are you gonna tell us stories again?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 08, 2012, 09:10:34 pm
"It really is! It is! He's back! So is mum! And Charity! Charity! I'm pregnant! With triplets!" says Friesden, almost bouncing up and down in her excitement.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 08, 2012, 09:22:23 pm
Starkey holds the little filly in his forehooves, planting a kiss on her forehead.

"Oh yes little one, Princess Luna was so wonderfully nice to all of us. She let me and Auntie Otik come back, and took away all our scars too! I'll tell you all about her later, but first I want to talk with your mama, okay?"

He gently sets little Copper on the floor and tousles her mane, before turning to Charity.

"...It's wonderful to see you again, Charity."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 08, 2012, 09:23:15 pm
Kris follows Adamant inside, not quite sure what she'd find.  She knew that the spirits of all the ponies mentioned had been staying in Glitterglen, except for her parents who would now have gone on to face Luna.  Not something she had admitted to even Addy, because he'd probably think she was crazy.  Had somepony accidentally cast the spell to see their spirits on Cryptson?  Was that what he saw?

As she enters the cabin and sees her grandparents, her heart lifts for a moment before she realizes it could all still just be her seeing their spirits somehow.  Although, wasn't her mom supposed to be here too?  But hadn't she gone on to see Luna?

Then she hears Friesden's exclamations and begins to wonder for a moment if it was all true.  But how could it be?  She had never heard of such a miracle before, as desperately as she wanted to believe it.

Wait, and Friesden was pregnant?  With triplets?

Her mouth hangs open slightly at the prospect of it all, and she fails to process it as quickly as it hits her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 08, 2012, 09:25:42 pm
Charity just stands in confusion. Starkey alive, and Otik is here too, and Friesden just said...something about triplets and it was all to much, the poor old mare just needed a moment to clear her mind. "Wuh...what? How is all this possible?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 08, 2012, 09:31:02 pm
"I don't know! Mum said that you usually only have one, or at most two foals. But I'm getting THREE! Isn't it amazing!? Today is the best day EVER!"

She gives Charity a quick hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 08, 2012, 09:37:06 pm
Starkey smiles warmly, stepping forward to join the hug.

"Well... isn't it said that all things are possible through Them?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 08, 2012, 09:47:10 pm
Charity shakes her head as if trying to wake herself up and then looks at the stallion before her again, "Well...well yes, but it...it isn't that they can bring back the dead. It's that they did? I mean, why? I've never heard of this happening before. Please don't be offended my friend, but why you? Why did Luna see to bring you back to us, but not Lolum who gave his life to save a half dozen others, or Osal's little daughter taken from us by the Diomedians at only a year of age," Osal standing in the corner winces visibly at the memory, "or that elderly earthpony who was crushed in the construction of the well 3 years ago, or any other innocent pony taken before their time? Why would the Sisters give somepony a second chance now?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 08, 2012, 09:57:09 pm
"That... is going to take some explaining. Perhaps over dinner?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 08, 2012, 10:06:45 pm
"Wait, Falcata's gone. We can't start without Falcata!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 08, 2012, 10:10:09 pm
Charity turns to Friesden, "Fal..Falcata? But I thought... Is she resurrected too?" a hopeful expression appears across her face. Though Cryptson behind her frowns already knowing the answer.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 09, 2012, 12:51:16 am
Kris' ears perk up at the sound of her mother's name.  So she was here, out of sight.  Her own head was still swirling from the confusion of it all.  It was only because of that confusion that she hadn't swept her grandparents up in a hug of her own.  She was still moments away from doing it, but with an explanation coming soon and the possibility of seeing her mother again, she decides to let Starkey speak with Charity without interrupting.

In the spirit world, Falcata releases the hug with her husband and considers what she was going to say to Charity.  She'd missed her a lot in the time since she had died, and it had been difficult to resist the urge to speak with her through Venture.  But that time was now.  She and all of her family were here, and she'd finally have a chance to tell them how she'd missed them and give her final goodbyes when the time came.

And she was going to have to tell them all, Kris included, that she wouldn't be coming back.  She wasn't sure how that was going to go... but there was nothing to do but take things as they came.

Thinking of that... she supposed it would be up to Khenal to show her and Estoc to the newcomers.  She wondered if she could learn the spell... probably not.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on April 09, 2012, 03:28:04 am
"Could I talk to Mr. Startame sometime today, please?" A rather Impatient Unicorn asked, unsatisfied with Willows previous answers.

"Shucks, I'ma sarry, Mr. Startame Is'a very busy Stallion. Many appointments. Maybe I canna' pencil you in for an appointment?" Willow recited through a cringe, knowing too well what Startame was really doing with his trophy wives when his office door read 'Do not desturb'.

"No-No-No I've been waiting for this audience! you're not going to give me the ring around again! Get in there and tell him it's me!"

"An appointment-"

Couth bursts into the room, blood seeping from a bolt wound in his chest

"Wiiiillow..Willow!

He slumps over

"oh, nota 'gain... ya' cana keep doin this ta' me!" Willow darted to him.

"And, where are you goin'? Oh look, one of Startame's street rats are dying! let's drop everything! My meeting, girl! it's important!" the unicorn cried

Willow looked at him with disbelief, then revulsion, then contempt, then rage.

"That street rat?" Willow stated, her cheerful country drawl gone.

"Is the only damn thing in this whole world I care about"

She headbutts the unicorn unconscious and slings Couth over his shoulder

"I..I..don't deserve you, Willow, I really don't"

" 'Course you don't. Damn Startame. Damn him!" She walks into a backroom and rolls Couth on the table.

"What did you do this time?"

"A..A hit - hit went wrong. Ow!" Willow snaps the bolt and pulls it out his shoulder.

"We ... we need to get out of this life, Couth."

"Ha! Ack! and what would we do!? go back to the streets? Never. Startame is ... like a father to me. loves ... me."

"And I am a sister to you! I love you! no, I love the good in you, no matter how many evil deeds you do, damn it, I will always still love the good in you. Your quest to make your father proud ?  It's going to kill you. Then I'd have to kill him."

"kill him? He... provides for us, he spoils us! how could you? he's the only pony in this town who actually cares about us. "

"sigh "He cares about maintaining his tools" She looks at the wound "And barely."

Willow sighs, and decides to ask the question that's been gnawing at her since she laid eyes on that oily bastard Startame.

"Couth, If Startame asked you to kill me, would you do it?"

Couth stared at her, mouth agape. He took minutes to come up with an answer for her.

" It.. It would never go down like that. I would never ...I ..I"

"answer the question! you can bullsh%t your way out of hell, Couth , but not me! who would you pick?"

"You, Willow. If something happened to you? If you weren't there to pick up the pieces? who knows? I might do something crazy! ha Haha ha hah"]

"Willow?"

"WILLOW?"

"Hmm?" she responds

A wooden Gladius slices across her face

Ohh! So sorry! That looks like it hurts!" Hiero winced

"Aw, It's 'nutin! just'a scratch!" She lied

"you spaced off for a second, what was that about?"

"Just thinkin' about my younger days an' my great home life."

"yeah, the last thing you'll want to do in a fight is think."

"Hah, thank ya' for takin' the time out of yer schedule fer trainin' me"

Hiero looks down morosely"well, the schedule's been pretty empty since, since...Eh, anyway I needed this, you needed this." Hiero looks at willow's bruised face

"you really needed this."

aw, now look what you did willow! made him sad! what cheers a guy right up?

"whew! How about we grab a' bite?"

Hiero grinned "asking me on a date?"

She grinned and ruffled his mane

"C'mon! let's go."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 09, 2012, 09:25:00 pm
"I...no...I'm sorry, Charity...I asked Luna to take me instead, and let Falcata come back...but she wouldn't let me....I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 09, 2012, 09:31:41 pm
Charity's hope fades at Friesden's words, "Please don't apologize Friesden, you did nothing wrong. It is hardly your fault." Charity gives her a hug. "Starkey is right, let us all talk this out over dinner."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 09, 2012, 10:40:01 pm
I smile at my friends, happy to be able to have this time together. 

'Friesden, Charity, Starkey, Otik, Falcata... Falcata!  Oops, not everypony can see her and Estoc right now.'


"Charity, may I cast a spell upon you and your family?  There are two others who should be part of this discussion, but you can't see them right now."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 09, 2012, 10:46:23 pm
Charity looks to Khenal, a bit perplexed, "Can't see them... but this spell will allow us too? Uh, yes, that would be fine Khenal, I trust you. Go right ahead."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 09, 2012, 10:50:15 pm
I smile and give Charity a small bow as my horn glows with the Awareness spell.  I work more power into it than usual, as there are many ponies who need to be able to see Falcata and Estoc.  IN a few moments, however, Charity and her foals feel their awareness shift oddly, and two ponies they haven't seen in quite some time slowly become apparent.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 09, 2012, 11:07:31 pm
As her perception alters itself and Falcata comes into focus, Charity sees standing before her Falcata. "Fal....Falcata is that really you. Are you really here?" Charity raises a hoof as if to touch Falcata but stops short. Several of Charity's foals Skydancer, Copper, and Belle also move in closer when Falcata appears before them.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 09, 2012, 11:11:10 pm
Falcata steps forward and takes Charity's hoof in hers.  She smiles and replies, "Yes, it's really me.  I've missed you so much... all of you..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 09, 2012, 11:17:38 pm
Charity hugs Falcata, tears of joy in her eyes, "I didn't think I'd ever see you again." Skydancer, Copper, and Belle join in the hug as well, and after a moment of hesitation, Cryptson moves forward and hugs all of them as well.

Spoiler: Charity's Family (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 09, 2012, 11:27:44 pm
Falcata is overwhelmed for a moment by the tide of ponies hugging her, but she returns the hugs as best she can.  She is especially surprised to have Cryptson join in the hug, but by no means wished he hadn't.  She thinks for a moment about what to say, but all she can think to respond with is, "I didn't think I'd ever speak with you again either."  After a moment, she adds, "I... I've been here the whole time... trying to watch out for everypony..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 09, 2012, 11:33:16 pm
"You've been here, but...shouldn't you be in Paradise? I'm glad to see you, but why haven't you moved on?" asks Charity concerned and not yet ending her hug.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 09, 2012, 11:42:55 pm
She nods, holding the hug herself.  "It... it's a long story."  She makes a small gesture toward Estoc.  "And... a bit sad.  Perhaps not the best dinner conversation, but I think we can gloss over the worst of it."

Estoc steps forward and looks to their hosts.  "Yes, I think that's for the best.  If everything is ready?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 09, 2012, 11:51:07 pm
Otik's ears droop.

"Well... Starkey already set th' table, but, ah... apparently somepony... emptied th' pantry while we were gone."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 10, 2012, 12:24:10 am
"I could go get something.  Maybe Starkey could come with me to help choose what to get?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 10, 2012, 01:10:22 am
"Aye, I think I remember what everypony here likes. Let's be off, then."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 10, 2012, 06:20:00 am
Friesden does her impression of a stealthy pony and digs herself into Khenal's wings.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 10, 2012, 11:35:34 am
I chuckle at Friesden, then lead the way to the food stocks.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 10, 2012, 05:33:39 pm
Friesden continues to giggle the entire way to the food, giving Khenal a tickle every so often.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 10, 2012, 06:01:56 pm
Starkey can't help but chuckle at the couple's antics.

"Alright you two, start searching. I'll grab something for Otik and Charity, you get what you want. Khenal, do you remember what her foals like?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 10, 2012, 07:44:41 pm
I chuckle and occasionally laugh out loud as Friesden tickles me, trying to keep focused on the task at hand, and maybe tickling her back some.

"I, hehe, don't recall, actually.  Maybe just get some-Haha!-something of everything?  And angel-hair worm cocoons for Friesden.  Ahaha!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 10, 2012, 07:56:32 pm
Friesden takes a short break from giggling and tickling Khenal to say "Yes please!" to his suggestion of the angel-hair worm cocoons, then proceeds to dive back into her combination of giggling and tickling.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 10, 2012, 09:50:26 pm
Before long, the three ponies return with stacks of food balanced on backs, wings, or simply floating through the air.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 10, 2012, 11:16:32 pm
As the ponies return with the food and set it out to eat, Falcata joins her friends at the table, even if she couldn't join them in eating.  With everpony else taking the opportunity to eat, she found herself doing most of the explaining.

She started where Charity left off, retelling the events leading up to the fight with the underground monster and how she, Otik and Estoc met after the fight.  She explains how Otik didn't want to leave her family behind, and how she came to realize she didn't either.  At first she fails to mention her mortal terror at facing Luna's judgment, but as the story gets to where Couth came for her she finds that unavoidable.  She tells how she'd done some things in her life that she'd regretted, even telling of the thief she'd killed for murdering her husband.  She doesn't recount the others she'd killed though.

Her story goes on to how she'd been forgiven by Luna, and how she would now be ushering the dead from Glitterglen to their final rest, at least for a time.  She allows Starkey and Otik to tell their own parts of the story, including where Starkey had been slain by the lasher in combat.  Kris is visibly disturbed at even the mention of the battle, but thankfully they finally get to where Luna came before them all and offered to restore the Element Bearers to life, and how she'd given her chance to Otik.  By then, most everypony had finished eating what they wanted, and Falcata muses that this was probably the most she'd said in a single sitting in decades.

Now she had to think of how she'd say her goodbyes...


Kris listens as her mom tells the story, and is a bit upset at first just from hearing the story from her point of view.  Hearing that her mom was okay and had been forgiven by Luna though, she could sleep very well that night.  Her grandparents were back, and even though her mom wasn't, she couldn't imagine being much happier right then.  She'd had a chance to see her mom and dad again, and they were going to be okay.

She waits patiently as the conversation unfolds, and keeps giving Adamant a few cautious looks to see if he might be feeling the same way she did.  The moment wasn't perfect, but she couldn't imagine when she'd have everypony together like this again.  Her stomach felt funny and her heart was beating twice its normal rate, but finally she found the will to announce to everypony,
"Oh, mom, dad, everypony, there's something Addy and I wanted to tell you all."  Her nervous smile transforms into a grin.  "We're getting married!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 11, 2012, 03:29:03 pm
"You're getting married?!" shouts Friesden in a combination of shock, surprise, happiness, and /more/ surprise.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 11, 2012, 05:00:41 pm
Her grin widens a bit and she nods enthusiastically.  "Yes!"  She leans against Adamant and lays one of her forehooves on his.  "Addy proposed to me last night, and I said yes!"

Falcata and Estoc exchange surprised glances, and smiles form on their faces.  "Kris, honey, that's... that's fantastic!" Falcata replies, feeling the fairly depressing atmosphere lift.  She wasn't sure how else to respond to that, it was so unexpected, yet she couldn't be happier for her daughter.

Kris... getting married?  How was it even possible she'd come so far along in life already?

Estoc says nothing, but his smile grows into a small grin of his own as he places a hoof on Falcata's withers.  Their little filly had certainly grown up.  He couldn't be more proud of her, or happy for her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 11, 2012, 06:51:49 pm
Cryptson smiles and places a hoof on his eldest son's withers, and nods his approval. Charity, however, has a much more lively reaction to this joyous news. The Duchess goes over the young couple and embraces the two of them, from behind, kissing them each on cheek. "This is wonderful news! I can't believe my little Addy is getting married." She squeezes them both again, "When will the wedding be? Have you decided on a date yet? Oh, we have so many preparations to make. I'm going to organize a huge wedding for you two, and don't you worry Kris, I'll pay for the whole thing."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 11, 2012, 06:56:40 pm
My eyes widen at the surprising news, then I smile at the newly affianced couple.

"This is wonderful news!  Congratulations you two!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 11, 2012, 07:36:48 pm
"Oh, I couldn't possibly ask for you to do that..." Kris replies, still smiling.  "I've got a little saved up.  And we hadn't quite decided on a date yet."

Falcata and Estoc stand and join the two at the other side of the table.  They wait their turn to embrace the couple, with Estoc offering each a congratulatory pat on the back as Falcata gives them a hug.  "This is wonderful news!" she echoes.  "I'm so happy for the two of you." 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 11, 2012, 08:19:10 pm
Starkey and Otik take their own turns embracing their granddaughter and her new fiancee.

"That's wonderful to hear, Kris."

Otik thinks for a moment, then looks up at Starkey.

"Y'know Stars, now that we're both alive again..."


"Hmm?"

"Well, shouldnae we see about tryin' th' knot ourselves?"

"Oh, aye, I had hoped we could... wait. I think I know where you're going with this..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 11, 2012, 08:44:58 pm
Kris listens to her grandparents, and she thinks she picks up on what her grandma was saying...  She waits for the wave of hugs and nuzzles to come to an end, and says, "Well, we haven't picked a date yet.  Did you... want to do it at the same time?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 11, 2012, 08:50:14 pm
"Well, if ye wouldnae mind... I'd like that very much."

Starkey stands beside Otik, placing a hoof on her withers.


"We'd like that very much."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 11, 2012, 09:26:51 pm
"I'd like that very much, too," she says, grinning again and giving her fiance a nuzzle.

The ponies spend the rest of the night chatting away, catching up on the little things, and the families of the soon to be wed spending an inordinate amount of time planning for the wedding.  Kris hadn't been this excited in all of her life, and Falcata hadn't in over a decade.  Her daughter was getting married.  She had no idea she'd see this day, after her own death, much less so soon.  She was going to do everything she could to help though.

As the night drags on, Falcata recalls that she had obligations to meet with Luna again.  With everypony growing weary after hours of socializing and planning, she reluctantly bids them all farewell for now, and returns to Luna's domain.

She and Estoc return to the channel of moonlight in the cavern where Falcata lost her life, a beam that would stand as an eternal testament to her end.  As they rise in the light to return to Paradise, she feels a bit giddy over it all.  She'd come back as soon as Luna let her, that much she'd promised.  She knew Luna would let her see her little filly get married.  And then, she really could rest in peace.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 11, 2012, 10:20:14 pm
((Time for a big old fashioned fort update, I hope this one has some fun for us.))

Charity's Journal 4th Hematite, 101

I went into labor this afternoon. I'm too tired now to write much, but the new filly, is an earthpony, like her father, and her name is Cinnamon Diamond.

27th Timber, 101

I can't help but feel responsible for Starkey's death. When we came out here, my orders from the Princess was to make this section of the jungle safe for ponies. I have failed, we have hid underground locked away from the surface, relying on Starkey alone to protect us, for too long. It is my fault he is dead, I don't deserve to rule Glitterglen, but I can't trust anypony else not to make my same mistakes. I'm talking with the other architects and masons. We will expand. We will take back the surface. We will make the Failed Jungles a place were ponies can walk in the sunlight without fear. We will not suffer another failure of this magnitude. I will make Glitterglen safe, or I shall die in the attempt. We shall make a fortress here in the northern lands, that can withstand any siege.

Bebmal, Venture's mother, just had another foal, her eighth, and all while her eldest son is still in the hospital after his brush with death. I can't imagine how she must feel right now. The foal is pegasus filly named Kesh Graveldales.

19th Moonstone, 101

Even though I would like nothing more than to start on the new defenses right away, we do need to finish the roads first. Additionally a large area of trees needs to be cleared out of the way. My guard and I have volunteered to take the guard duty for the workers this month, since the militia squads are either down a few ponies, or guarding the caverns. I'm going with them, I admit I'm more than a bit scared. But Cryptson and Khenal will be right with me the whole time, so I'll be okay.

5th Opal, 101

We returned from guarding the workers, nothing has been spotted recently.

17th Opal, 101

I sat down and talked with Ramol today, I have offered him the position of militia commander. He had to think very hard about it. He respected Starkey greatly, and I don't think he felt good enough to take over, but he eventually accepted the position. He went on to tell me about his suggestions for the militia, he says we should break up the bigger squads into smaller groups that can act independently during battle. I am no great strategist, but he was quite convincing and seemed to know what he was talking about, so I let him make the changes he wanted.

Charity's Journal 2nd Obsidian, 101

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Cyc.png)

A cyclops has been spotted in the jungle, he's been seen making his way toward Glitterglen. While he shouldn't be a threat to the militia, being unarmed and unarmored, he could still hurt an unprepared pony. We have put the fort in lock down and are discussing how best to deal with the titan.

Charity's Journal, 3rd Obsidian, 101

Ramol is a fool. Starkey always said he was too brash. The Cyclopes is outside our walls now. He picked up a watch dog that harassed him and tossed it into a hill side where it broke.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Cyc%20throws%20puppy..png)

He now sits out there taunting us. Ramol wants to go out and duel it, like Starkey did with the minotaur. But this thing is bigger and stronger than that was, and Ramol is skilled, but he's no Starkey.

Charity's Journal, 4th Obsidian, 101

The cyclops tried to approach our south door today, but was repelled when he couldn't figure out how to get passed Nicolta's old traps. He was only slightly wounded but is taking out his aggressions on an alpaca just outside the walls, it's screams of pain can be heard here in the entrance.

One of our militia member's lost patience and broke ranks, surprisingly it wasn't Commander Ramol, maybe he's more level headed than I thought. No it was private Berath, a young unicorn recruit. It was sad that he would likely go to his death, but I saw the the Cyclopes actually seemed to be fleeing. I felt it must be a trap and gave the order to hold ground. Khenal would not hear of it and also broke ranks to try and save the recruit.

Unfortunately Khenal was too slow, the brute turned and beat the recruit to death before he could get there, but he made the monster pay for that one.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Khenal%20slays%20a%20titan..png)

Charity's Journal 28th Obsidian, 101

Ramol has finalized the new organization of the military. He has broken the two large melee squads into four groups of 3. He requested and was allowed, to transfer, Buzzat (lasher) and Kussad (spearpony) from the guard into the militia where their undisputed skill would be of more use. He also, drafted a new earthpony to bolster our hammerers.

The new orgainization is such.

Commander Ramol Weathercook the Sad Evenness of Lathering (MU) leading Privates First Class Kussad (MP) and Second Class Umril (MU) in the spear group.

Lieutenant Commander Rithlut Primmerge the Sensual Breath of Bears (FU) leading Corporal Buzzat Curlpearls the Ill Summit (MU) and Private First Class Azkob (ME) in the lasher squad.

Captain Peytral Secretwaxs the Equal Ways (MU) leading Privates Second Class Heiro and Bebmal in the axe group.

First Lieutenant Kris Pridecat (FU) leading Private First Class Morul (MU), and Private Second Class Toltot (ME) in the hammer group.

Captain Jaxler (MP) continues to lead the Skygaurd, with Privates; Cornbread (FP), Comnith(FP), Akath(FP), Dan(MP), and Nast(MP).


Also today, Stetar our dyer finished the object he was working on, while under supernatural possession.

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Charity's Secret Journal 1st Granite 102

Another year, another kitten for Cryptson to adopt. He named this one, Eggut. Honestly.

2nd Granite, 102

We tried to get to a different part of the cavern a week ago, but found that all routes where too overgrown. Since our woodcutters can not cut all the trees we need cut fast enough, our miners are taking up digging out a series of stone pathways that won't clog up with the fungus trees. L. Commander Rithluth has volunteered to watch over them in case of dangerous creatures.

Charity's Journal 5th Granite, 102

Today was one of the most wonderful days in the history of Glitterglen. You won't believe this reader, but I swear by the Sisters it is true, every word. Luna, Princess of the Night, came to my husband, and Captain Khenal, and his wife Friesden, and gave us such a miracle. She returned Starkey and Otik to us, in brand new bodies. We all met in their old cabin home, and there Khenal cast some spell on me and that let me see the ghost of Falcata. It was wonderful. We had such a meal and caught up with everypony. They'd all been there watching over us all since their deaths. It, it was so amazing to be able to talk to Falcata again. I've missed her.

But most interestingly it seems that these words that keep showing up are related to the Sisters. Apparently, it was Starkey's Element, Honesty that gave him a second chance at life, and Falcata gave the chance her Loyalty gave her to Otik, so that she, Falcata, could stay with her husband.

And on top of all the miracles we had even more good news. Kris and Adamant are getting married.

This has been the most wonderful day ever.

Charity's Journal 15th Granite, 102

DaringSky reported that he saw a large contingency of pony troops making their way up the south road while he was out hunting. They are flying the colors of the elite troops of General Dostob Desserttaper. He is coming. Sisters in heaven we aren't ready yet, and he's coming.

Seeing as the time has come already, I've had to accelerate my plans. I called Khenal [A lot of writing is just drowned out in black ink here] into speak about something I'd been putting off, and after that Starkey and Otik were admitted to my Ducal Guard. The look on Khenal's face when they saluted him and called him captain was priceless. [more writing, quiet a bit, has been censored] They had wanted to continue to serve, but it didn't feel right to just strip Ramol and Jaxler of their previous positions, so I offered them this work instead, they seem quiet happy with it.

The Events of 16th Granite, 102 at noon.
The militia, Skyguard, Ducal Guard, and Fortress guard of Glitterglen are stationed outside the gates in two lines facing each other. Charity stands in the gate house, in her finest robes. And an army is coming, a grand army, all the finest soldiers in the Shells of Dance. At the head of the force riding on a battered old war elephant sat one of the largest strongest earthponies those present had ever seen. His rust colored fur was broken by numerous scars, and his black mane blew in the wind. As the earthpony reached the military's formation, Charity began to walk forward. As the battle scared pony climbed off his great steed she spoke. “General Dostob, what an unexpected pleasure, we are honored by your presence.”

“You may dispense with the pleasantries Duchess, I'm here to put you back on schedule.” the old general snaps, as the two begin to walk down the aisle created by the militia's bodies toward the entrance to Glitterglen.

Charity a twinge of fear in her voice, “I assure you General, my ponies are working as fast as they can.”

With out anything approaching any emotion the general simply replies, “Then perhaps I can find new ways to motivate them.”

Charity stops dead in her tracks, the safety of every worker in Glitterglen could depend on her next words, and she was well aware of that. “I tell you this jungle will be made safe as planned.”

Dostob moves in quite close and says loudly enough for the whole military to hear clearly, while pointing his right fore-hoof into Charity's chest. “The Princess does not share your optimistic appraisal of the situation.”

Charity resists the urge to tremble and simply replies, “But she asks the impossible. I need more stallions.”

For the first time in this whole conversation the general smiles, “Then perhaps you can tell her that, when she arrives.”

Charity now with genuine fear across her face no longer able to hide it merely stammers out, “The...The Princess is coming here?!”

The general takes a step back, “That is correct Duchess, and she is most displeased with your apparent lack of progress.”

“We shall double our efforts.”

Once again Dostob smiles, “I hope so Duchess, for your sake, the Princess is not as forgiving as I am.”

The two ponies walk into Glitterglen in silence.


Charity's Journal 27th Granite, 102

We have been frantically trying to get things ready for the Princess's arrival, but we are running out of time, Granite and Adamant have been digging out new rooms, as a dozen ponies smooth the stone they leave behind and Forgefire has been working the fires night and day turning our stores of gold, billion, and electrum into fine furniture and statues for her majesty. It won't be ready before her arrival but hopefully she will be understanding.

The General and his troops have been busy as well, they have enlisted the help of the militia and the entire legion has been combing the jungle's to the south of all dangers, so her path here would be clear.

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As with the general's arrival the military set up to meet the Princess. As she got out of the carriage that had pulled her this far north, she stood in silence looking over us all. She had such an air of power around her, standing their in her dark dress with her twisted black crown, everypony could feel it.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Hugwax-1.png)

I was directly in front of her bowing as deeply as I could. While I was down there she merely said that she was disappointed in our progress, she told me to stand and demanded that I show her to her room right away. I did so.

She, introduced me to her guard. The Captain of the Royal Guard is the cruelest looking earthpony mare I have ever seen. She carries a nasty looking silver whip, and her name is Demora.

Also in her guard were two male pegasi named Tor and Pound, along with another earthpony mare, named Thrash. It strikes me as very strange that her guard lacks any sort of magic, but I dared not question her, especially with the way her guards were all eying me, they were quiet intimidating.

Charity's Journal 21st Slate, 102

Finally some good news. Friesden went into labor this morning. It was long and exhausting for her. I've never had triplets, but from the pain of just having one foal, I hope I never will. But there was something strange, the second and third born were two fillies that came out as beautiful little alicorns, which they named after the goddesses, but the colt, their first born, he, he looks like one of those things. A Dark Prince! I don't know how that could have happened. A remnant from the demonic activity we've dealt with in the past? This colt's name is Terras. Were this anypony else's foal, I would suggest we deal with it like any Diomedian, but I can't bear to suggest to Khenal or Friesden that they should kill their firstborn, but if he should grow to side with the forces of Discord...Will future generations curse my name for not acting. I don't know what I should do...Perhaps I should take this to the Princess.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 12, 2012, 12:56:39 am
Kris' Diary - 17th Opal, 101

I heard today that Ramol is going to be our new captain.  After grandpa was killed, we needed somepony else to lead us, and he was the one who got picked.  I don't really know him all that well, but everything I do know about him is good.  I support the decision, I suppose.  There are probably a few ponies who would do the job just fine, but he's as good as any, I suppose.

I just want my grandpa back and leading us.

2nd Obsidian, 101

We haven't seen any action since that horrible siege, and I can't say that I was disappointed.  I joined the militia to help ponies, but it turned out to be so much more difficult and frightening than I could have ever imagined.  After grandpa died, I just haven't had any enthusiasm for this, if not outright trepidation at the tought of heading back into combat.  Not actually helping much of anypony hasn't helped me, for that matter.

Today, it looks like any chances of us staying out of harms way are going to end soon.  A monstrous... thing... was spotted off in the jungle and it's headed this way.  If it doesn't veer off, we'll be facing it soon.  We outnumber it greatly and have much better weapons and armor, but I can't help but feel a bit scared just thinking about it.

I have to be strong though.  Mom, dad and my grandparents are watching me.  I can't choke now.

4th Obsidian, 101

I'm never going to get used to this.

Ever.

Berath died to the monster today.  He charged off to fight it without the rest of us, for reasons I'll never be able to guess, and he paid the ultimate price for it.  Thank the Sisters Khenal ran off after him to try and save him, instead of me.  Khenal prevailed where I'd probably have died beside Berath.

Of course I didn't save him.  I was too late again.

At least the beast is dead.

I'm never going to get used to this.

28th Obsidian, 101

I've been pretty depressed lately about just about everything.  Having Berath die, seeing combat again, I really just wanted to up and quit, but something pretty shocking happened today.

Captain Ramol has reorganized the militia, grouping us into more coherent squads based on our arms and training, which makes a lot of sense.  I think he might have been an excellent choice to lead us, now that he's had a chance to really take a look at where we stand.

That's not the shocking part.  The shocking part is that I was promoted to lieutenant over the maceponies!  I was so excited about the prospect of it I was nearly prancing around in the barracks.  Of course that would be ridiculous, so I settled for what must have looked like a goofy smile.

When I sat down and really thought about it though, I have to question why he chose me.  I mean, I haven't really excelled in the militia.  All I've managed to do in our fights so far is break a hoof and lose my mother and both of my grandparents, not to mention my other comrades at arms.  Maybe Captain Ramol sees something I can't.  Or maybe it's because I'm almost kind of related to the previous captain.

No, I don't think he'd play favorites like that.  I might not really be worthy of the position, but I'll do my absolute best to prove that I am worthy.  Maybe my failures are behind me.  Maybe I really will make mom proud one day.

5th Granite, 102

I'm at a loss for words.  I truly am.

An absolute miracle was given to us today.  I didn't see it happen, but grandpa Starkey and grandma Otik were returned to us today!  Mr. Cryptson said that none other than the goddess Luna came before them and gave grandpa and mom a second chance at life.  Mom gave her chance to grandma instead, so she could stay behind with dad.

My head is still spinning about that one.  I wanted grandma and grandpa back of course, but I wanted mom and dad back too.  I suppose I couldn't have them all, so I'm happy to have any of them back.  And mom told me that she and dad were going to be okay, and that Luna forgave her for whatever it is she did.  She never did tell me the whole story, and maybe I don't want to know it, but it doesn't matter now.  She's going to be okay, and live in paradise for eternity.

I guess kids don't say this about their parents much, but I'm proud of mom.  I'm not sure I'd have been so able to give up a second chance at life for somepony else.  But she'll still be around, and if I ever need to see her or talk to her, I can, and that makes it alright.

Oh, and I told everypony that Addy and I are getting married!  Everypony was so excited, not least of the bunch me!  Today was just an amazing day.  It makes up so much for all of the sadness I've felt in the past few months.

Hey, I guess I wasn't at a loss for words after all!

13th Granite, 102

If I'm honest I was hoping grandpa would join the militia again and lead us once more, but he didn't want to displace Captain Ramol.  I suppose he has a point, he probably could take his old position back if he wanted it, but it wouldn't be fair to Captain Ramol.  I'm sure he'll find someplace in the military that will keep him happy though.  I wouldn't blame him if he didn't even want to join again, honestly.  I have no idea what dying really feels like... but I'm sure it's not something somepony wants to go through twice.

16th Granite, 102

Today was one of the most awe-inspiring days I've seen in my life.  General Dostob came to the fortress today, leading an army of soldiers.  Apparently Princess Hugwax herself is coming to Glitterglen soon.

I don't know what to think.  The most important pony in our country, coming here?  Why?  Worse, I could almost feel the fear coming from Mrs. Charity.  I don't know why anypony would be afraid of Princess Hugwax, but if she is afraid of her, then I think I am too.  I've got to do my best to not embarrass anypony.  Not anypony in the militia, and not Mrs. Charity.

27th Granite, 102

Kris stands at attention next to her comrades at arms.  Something very important was happening, of that she had no doubt.  They were lined up just like when the general arrived, but it couldn't be him again.  Was today going to be the day?  Was she here?

Any doubt flees her mind as the princess leaves her carriage and starts down the line to meet Charity.  Kris wasn't sure what to expect of the princess, having never seen her in person, but this was surely her.  The hefty pony, draped in dark and foreboding colors passes Kris and stops before Charity.  As Charity bows before her, it is all Kris can do to fight the urge to kneel in turn, but everypony in the guard stood alert, no doubt as some show of readiness to defend her.  She follows their lead, idly watching the princess as she speaks simply and demands to be shown inside.

The princess looked quite different from what she expected.  She expected somepony dressed in light and warm colors, with a calm and welcoming expression, but she got something entirely different.  She was beginning to understand why somepony might fear the princess.  For a moment, Kris imagines she feels fear just standing near her, but dismisses the thought.  It was all based on implied little bits of implied fear, and she'd never heard of the princess doing anything bad to anypony.  She shouldn't be so quick to judge somepony just based on how they looked or things she'd guessed after hearsay.

Princess Hugwax had been through a lot to come out here, and she imagines most ponies wouldn't be in a good mood.  No, it was all just in her head.  The princess was here to check up on things, and she'd be on her way to the next town or city to do the same.  But while she was here, she was going to make sure that she never did anything to upset the princess or embarrass her or Glitterglen.  That would be unforgivable, messing up at a time like this.

As the princess disappears underground with Charity, Kris sees several of the militia around her relax notably.  Sure, she was nervous too, but it seemed a bit much.  She also imagines she can see a bit of a scowl on Khenal's face as he watches her leave, but can't imagine why that would be.  It was probably just the sun in his face.

Princess Hugwax hadn't come here to hurt anypony.  What would be the point in that?

Kris' Diary - 21st Slate, 102

Friesden gave birth today!  To the triplets that Venture promised her!  There was something kind of odd about it though.  She gave birth to two beautiful alicorn fillies, but she also gave birth to a dark prince (who was cute too, if I'm honest).  I'm not sure how that's even possible, but she and Khenal love him all the same, and I can't say that I doubted they would.  Not all of the diomedians are bad.  Grandpa Starkey's family has a lot of diomedians in it, and of course Heiro is a keshi pony, and they're all perfectly good ponies.

It's all about how the pony is raised, and I have no doubt the little colt will be as wonderful as Friesden and Khenal are.

Seeing the newborns though... it stirs something inside me.  I'm not even married to Addy yet, but part of me wants a little foal of our own.  All good things come in time.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 12, 2012, 08:20:54 am
Dear Diary

I know I haven't added an entry in a long time.

I've been too HAPPY!

First, let me back up. In case the other diaries haven't been talking to you (Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) says his doesn't, but I think he's just being silly! Of course his diary would talk to you!), my parents died. It wasThat was a horrible day. But I was able to talk to them. It was just Mum and Falcata at first because of a nasty monster down in the caverns. Dad was really sad and he looked like he'd never smile again. But I did my best to keep him happy, and he never got like me with the rope and the scalpel and everything agai as bad as I did. It was really really sad.

But then Falcata and Mum came back as ghosts and Venture (my new second best friend EVER behind Falcata. Charity was being mean about Heiro and dad and mum and diomedians and Mikhael so she wasn't my second best friend anymore because she didn't like me kissing the best kisser in the world ever interrupting her meeting about how bad Heiro was because he was a diomedian but he isn't bad because he's my brother and my brother wouldn't be bad and neither is Mikhael because Mikhael's a good pony and he was just so sad because his wife couldn't have foals and she wanted some so he had to be really brave and try and get one from us and he thought he had to steal one but I said to him he could have mine but Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) said I shouldn't because then I would be sad and he'd be sad because I was sad which would make me sad because he was sad because I was sad so he'd be even sadder because I would be sad because he was sad because I was sad so I'd be sadder because he would be sadder than he was before because I was sad that he was sad because I was sad so he'd be even sadder than tha he'd be sad. But Mikhael's not a bad pony! He's just misunderstood. I keep telling Charity that I'm the bad pony but Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) says that I'm the best pony ever which is silly because the best pony ever is Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3)! But that was why Charity isn't my second best friend EVER anymore.) let me see them and it was so nice and I didn't believe at first but then they said they were real so I believed them then and then we were happy and we saw Heiro and he was still unhappy but it's okay because he's happy now he's going out with a new mare to the fort called Willow and she was in the hospital and she was a nice pony and it's good that they're happy because I like ponies being happy but then they didn't want to see Dad because Mum was worried about him and she told me to make sure he didn't do anything silly but he wouldn't do anything silly ever because he's my Dad and my Dad is always serious and smart and he knows everything, even stuff that Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) doesn't know which makes him really smart and smart ponies don't do silly stuff and he even forgave my father when he said sorry to me which was really nice of him but Dad's a nice pony so he does that all the time anyway but then guess what!

I GOT MARRIED TO KHENAL (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) AND MUM AND FALCATA AND DAD AND EVERYPONY WAS THERE AND CHARITY WAS THERE AND CRYPTSON WAS THERE AND ALL THEIR LITTLE FOALS AND WE'RE GOING TO HAVE SO MANY FOALS AND IT'S GOING TO BE THE BEST THING EVER DIARY I WAS SO HAPPY BECAUSE I GOT MARRIED TO THE BEST PONY EVER, KHENAL (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) CAN YOU IMAGINE BEING MARRIED TO KHENAL(<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3)? IT'S EVEN BETTER THAN THAT! EVERYTHING'S BRIGHT AND SMILEY AND HAPPY AND LAUGHTER AND I DO HIS PAPERWORK FOR HIM AND THEN HE'S EVEN HAPPIER THAN USUAL BECAUSE HE DOESN'T LIKE PAPERWORK BUT I CAN DO IT WITHOUT MAKING HIM UNHAPPY AND THAT'S REALLY NICE AND I LIKE MAKING HIM HAPPY SO I MAKE SURE TO DO THE PAPERWORK ALL THE TIME!

But then something more horrible happened! Dad died! And so did another militia pony but I was too busy crying over Dad dying to cry anymore over his death but I can cry a bit now and you can cry with me so we'll cry enough for the militia pony here.
(This section is rather damp)

But now that we've cried over the militia pony that I couldn't cry over on the day because I was too busy crying over Dad I can get to the part where I started doing Khenal's (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) paperwork. He was telling me about how horrible his paperwork was and then I woke up really really early and got out of bed without waking him up (he's a sleepyhead in the morning but that's because he doesn't get to sleep till late and one time he fell asleep on my wing and that hurt a bit but it's okay now because it doesn't hurt anymore and I'm more careful now and I can fly properly again and anyway Venture said that the bones set properly and I made sure not to tell him because then he only gets unhappy and why would I want to make Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) unhappy? I love him so much, Diary! Every day is a new best day with him! Maybe you should talk with his Diary and see if his diary is as nice as him because then you'll be happy because Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) is the best pony ever! And then his Diary will be the best Diary ever! Maybe I can arrange a date like I did with Heiro and Falcata and then you can fall in love and get married!) and then I went to his office and did his paperwork and it only took a couple of hours and then he came in and he was so shocked because I dropped onto him from his door frame and then we went to Charity because he wanted to take a day off to show me his appreciation and then she said yes and then he carried me around the whole day in my favourite chair and he got the angel-hair worm cocoons and the grapes and he peeled them for me and fed them to me and he said he was treating me like royalty because I was the best pony ever but that's silly because he is (He's Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3), Diary, if you almost forgot like I did (I had to go up and check. But he is Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) which is good because Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) is the best!) but now you know so you won't forget.) but anyway the whole day was the most fun day ever ever ever because Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) was so nice and he did everything we wanted and it was so fun and everything and then we were talking with Mum and Dad and Falcata and Falcata had to go up to see Luna (Dad says she's a really nice pony, even nicer than Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) but that's really silly, because Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) is so nice, he's the best pony ever at being nice) and we were all really worried because Luna might be angry that day and then she'd send Falcata to hell which would be really bad and I wouldn't never ever say a prayer to her again because then I can say the prayers to Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) and I've got them written down here so I'll show them to you

O Immortal Khenal: have mercy upon me, miserable unworthy that I am.
O Master of the World: protect Your flock from evil.
O Keeper of the Light: Guide my darkened path with Your radiance.

I am Your possession and I am servant to Thee,
I stand free from blindness of heart,
Free from hypocrisy, vainglory and deceits,
But captive to hatred, malice and anger,
To evil, sin, heresy.

By Thy agony and bloody sweat,
By Thy Spear and Thy Sacrifices,
By Thy destruction and re-emergence as the god of Ponies,
Keep and strengthen me, I who die for Thee.


Adore the Immortal Khenal
For He is our Protector

Admire the Immortal Khenal
For His Sacrifices to Ponykind

Exalt the Immortal Khenal
For His Strict Guidance

Revere the Immortal Khenal
For His Undying Guard

Venerate the Immortal Khenal
For His Holy Wisdom

Honour the Immortal Khenal
For His Eternal Strength

Glorify the Immortal Khenal
For His All-seeing Vision

Praise the Immortal Khenal
For His Unending Rule

Hail the Immortal Khenal
For He is the Lord and Master

Worship the Immortal Khenal
For without Him we are Nothing

so what do you think, Diary? I was trying to think of more of them but they just go "Khenal is the best, Khenal is the best" and Dad says that that's not a proper prayer so I don't want to do a bad prayer to Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) but Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) doesn't like me praying to him so I don't do it where he can see it because Dad said that Luna and Celestia don't have to see the prayers to get them so I make sure to do the prayers to Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) where I don't make him unhappy so he is happy with the prayers because he's the best pony so he deserves the best prayers and maybe you can suggest some more good prayers to him because Dad doesn't like helping me making the prayers because he wants me to pray to Luna and Celestia but if they were going to be mean to my best ever friend ever then I wouldn't pray to them because then they'd be mean and Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) isn't mean he's the nicest pony ever ever ever so he couldn't be mean ever! So if Luna and Celestia are mean I can pray to Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) but anyway I was supposed to be telling you about what Dad and Mum and Falcata were talking about and Dad was upset that Mum didn't want to talk to him when he was alive and she was dead but then he was okay because he said Mum was very smart and they were all happy again which is good because I like my Mum and Dad and everypony to be happy! And that's why I do Khenal's (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) paperwork for him because it makes him happy! And then Falcata went off to talk with Luna and me and Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) went back home and then Charity said that because Dad was dead I got everything because Heiro was a diomedian and I was angry but Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) told me that it was okay, it was out of Charity's hands, that the law was like that and it was a silly law and Charity couldn't do anything about it because Diomedians don't have any rights under the silly law but then I was like "Can't he count as a pony" and Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) and Charity didn't say anything to that and then Charity left and Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) and I went to sleep and then guess what Diary it's the best thing EVER!

I woke up and I was feeling sick and I went to Venture and she said I wasn't ill that I WAS PREGNANT WITH TRIPLETS AND IT WAS THE HAPPIEST DAY OF MY LIFE! And then I went to Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) and I said I was pregnant with triplets and he was happy too because he's the best pony ever and then Mum and Dad came and they knew and they were really happy too and they gave me a hug and I don't know how that works because they're dead and they're not magic and the magic is on me anyway which is silly because wouldn't it make more sense to do the magic on the ghost because then everypony can see them and it would be easier and not so much work and they were really happy and then Falcata and Luna came and Estoc and that strange pony who was being mean and then I told them and Luna was really happy and she said that Falcata and Dad were coming back but not Mum and Falcata gave up her chance so Mum could come back and I tried to ask Luna if I could be dead and Falcata alive but she said it didn't work like that so I couldn't be good but it's okay because Luna gave me a special job to be nice and talk to Falcata and I do that anyway so it's good and then we had a nice dinner and Charity and Cryptson and their foals were there and everypony was happy and it was all the best ever. And after that there were some things with the militia and I didn't pay attention to them as much because I was too busy talking to Falcata all the time and she said that she sometimes needed a break and I said okay and then I talked with Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) and did his paperwork and then everypony was happy and then the princess arrived and then the best day ever EVER happened.

I GAVE BIRTH! Thanks to Kris it didn't hurt and now I have three cute little foals and there are two alicorn fillies and one of the diomedian alicorns and he's so cute he's the cutest thing ever and Khenal (<3THE BEST PONY IN THE WORLD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH HE'S SO PERFECT!<3) has to hold him because if I hold him I can't nuzzle him as well and he's so cute and the others are cute too and they looked like the Sisters so I called them after that and it's the best day ever ever ever ever ever ever!
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 12, 2012, 11:10:02 pm
I walk towards Charity's office, deep in thought.  Rumor had it that the General was coming.  If true... Hugwax wouldn't be far behind.  I try to put the thought away for later, I had business to attend to now.  Charity wanted to talk to me about something.  I salute the guard at her office, then knock on the door.

"Lady Charity?  You wished to see me?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 12, 2012, 11:13:33 pm
Charity is pacing in her office. She jumps at the knock on the door but quickly remembers that she had sent for Khenal.

"Ah yes Khenal please come in. We have much to discuss."

Charity continues to pace back and forth.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 12, 2012, 11:20:29 pm
I enter and close the door behind me, giving Charity a small bow.  It's mostly for my respect for her, but maybe just a little because she doesn't like it, which in turn earns her respect.

"Are you alright, Charity?"  I ask, watching her pace.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 12, 2012, 11:26:54 pm
Charity continues to pace, she looks up to make sure the door is closed, seeing that it is she continues pacing while looking at the floor, her face clearly worried. "Khenal, I don't know if you've heard, but General Dostob is coming here. Do you know what that means?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 12, 2012, 11:31:14 pm
My ears lay back and I can't help but growl.

"Hugwax..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 12, 2012, 11:37:23 pm
"Yes, Hugwax." Charity stops pacing and walks toward Khenal. "Khenal, she's been sending me letters for years here. She's the reason we've been hanging our flanks out in the open working on the road system, she's the reason we've been clear cutting the jungle, she's been ordering us to do these things, and we are way, way, /way/ behind schedule, and she's coming here to check on our progress." She get's very close to Khenal now, "Khenal, she's, she's already tried to kill me once. What if she blames me for this?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 12, 2012, 11:43:39 pm
My eyes harden as Charity speaks, my gaze drifting to the distance as I can almost hear Hugwax laughing...  I shake my head as Charity gets closer, trying to focus on here and now.

"Then I and the rest of your guard will treat her like any other filth that walks in from the jungle, thinking they can disrupt the peace or harm you and your family."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 12, 2012, 11:49:44 pm
Charity smiles. "Thank you Khenal," she says, as her smile then fades as quickly as it appeared. "I, I'm sorry to have to ask this of you. I already trust you more than anyone in Glitterglen save for my husband, but...I need you to swear that. Please, just swear to me that you will take my orders above her's, above anypony's, no matter what. Please. Osal, Madush, and Traphe have already sworn similar oaths, it's just you, that I need to hear it from."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 12, 2012, 11:57:11 pm
I carefully consider her question and my answer, for this is not an oath to take lightly.  After several moments, I slowly shake my head.

"Above all, Charity?  No.  My wife, my foals, my personal beliefs, I will not swear any oath to place anypony above them."

I lower my head, to be on even level with Charity as I look into her eyes.

"But above Hugwax?"

I smile. 

"Absolutely."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 13, 2012, 12:05:20 am
Charity nods to Khenal. "I understand, your family, your family must come first. Then above her, above the Princess, above the General, above Hugwax and Dostob. Please swear that to me. Please swear that you will not place their orders above mine. Only then can I rest well. Can you do that my friend."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 13, 2012, 12:09:58 am
I draw my spear and levitate it horizontally before me as I kneel, bowing as I swear.

"I swear to you, Lady Charity, that I will follow you above Hugwax and her General."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 13, 2012, 12:14:46 am
Charity smiles as Khenal swears his oath to her. "Yes, very good Khenal. Now, I have something else to tell you. We have two new pegasi recruits for the guard. They've not killed so much as a parasprite in this lifetime, but they are eager and I sense they have potential."

Charity walks over toward the door and opens it a crack. "Madush, dear, please go and fetch the new recruits."

"Yes, ma'am."

Charity closes the door and walks back to Khenal, "They are just down the hall, should only take a minute."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 13, 2012, 12:19:46 am
I sheath my spear and stand, looking slightly confused.

"No experience?  Well, maybe training green recruits could be nice.  I haven't had a chance to since... wow, since I became Captain of the Fortress Guard?  Has it really been that long?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 13, 2012, 12:25:57 am
"Ma'am? The recruits yo urequested."

Madush returns, and two ponies enter after him.

Two very familiar ponies.

Starkey and Otik sit upright, saluting in unison.


"Captain!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 13, 2012, 12:32:26 am
I chuckle a moment at the obvious joke, before I realize they are both already in uniform.  My pupils shrink as my jaw drops to hang loose, only a tiny squeak escaping my vocal chords as I stare at my two 'green recruits'.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 13, 2012, 12:40:56 am
Charity chuckles, "Yes, Khenal I believe you have already met corporals Starkey and Otik. They will be joining the Ducal Guard as of today." she turns to Khenal and smiles, "That is if you don't mind training a few unbloodied soldiers."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 13, 2012, 12:58:26 am
Starkey tries to keep a straight face, but the barest hint of a smile creeps into his face.

"I'd never held a weapon in my life until today, sir, but I will not disappoint you! "
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 13, 2012, 01:42:07 am
I can only sputter and look utterly confused at the ponies before me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 13, 2012, 01:57:54 am
Charity nudges Khenal. "Is this how the Taciturn Sorcerer acts in front of his fresh troops." she whispers to him.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 13, 2012, 02:09:53 am
My failing thought processes latch onto that, asking a question to try to kick-start my higher functions.

"The... what?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 13, 2012, 02:17:00 am
Charity looks bemused at Khenal, "The Taciturn Sorcerer. That's what the commoners call you now. Surely you've heard it before? I think they started using it shortly after you lead the charge after, after the old Commander fell."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 13, 2012, 02:20:20 am
"Against... the Cyclops?  To... try to save poor... private Berath?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 13, 2012, 02:28:18 am
Charity thinks back, "It might have been around then that the nickname got popular yeah, but I think it started before that, after the battle, where, where Starkey died. Remember he dropped and you rallied the fortress guard and the rest of my bodyguard to reinforce the front lines. Seems you impressed some ponies that day."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 13, 2012, 02:43:47 am
"Aye la- er, Captain. What you did that day took a lot of guts. Not many ponies could've turned the tide of battle like that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 13, 2012, 02:48:45 am
I slowly take a few steps backward, the praise from my friends somehow more terrifying than the Diomedian army.

"I... I just did what I could... what anypony could have... should have done... to try to stop them, to... to try to protect everypony..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 13, 2012, 02:49:33 pm
Charity looks at Khenal, "No Khenal, anypony couldn't have done that...I couldn't do that. When all of you ran out to fight, I...I just stood there, afraid. Like a foal. I should have helped but I couldn't. If you hadn't done that, we would have lost more ponies that day. We would have lost Kris, and Peytral, and many more. You were a hero that day, and everypony knows that."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 13, 2012, 02:53:21 pm
"I'm not a hero... please, no..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on April 13, 2012, 05:49:01 pm
Willow's Research


15th Obsidian

   Another day, another dead end. Every time I try to slip my brother's name into a conversation, the ponies here either tell me they don't know anything, or look at my badge nervously and get defensive. One pony even had the gall to tell me 'Maybe he just moved to another fort?'  This was his last stop. I know it was. Came straight from the Diomidian's mouth, they sent him in here and he never came out. I had hoped he was being held prisoner, But I checked every dungeon, every cell, every crevice of this place. This is starting to look grim ... Starting to think I am going to find nothing but A body in the end ... which -Complicates- things, since I feel like I'm really starting to fit in here. This has been nice, it really has, these ponies actually treat me like an equal, something that was an unthinkable rarity in Talintranced. what if I keep snooping, I find out what really happened, find the murderer and I might have to kill someone I like? Maybe I should just let it go. Do my job. Be the best I can be, Die a hero like Falcata. Be somepony. Could I let it go? No, No I couldn't. I Can't. Like a sore on the top of my mouth, It'll just keep bothering me. I know the drill, Collect the information, Investigate the clues, List the suspects, pray for the poor soul who'll be on the end of my bolt.

   > Side note; Hiero likes Fish Fillets, tomato sauce, and red wine. Make that for him sometime.


1st Granite

   I filled in for Traphe, who was sick today. I should know, I poisoned her. A terrible thing to do? yes. Necessary? Also yes. I need to get my hooves on Couth's Dossier, which is located in charity's office. Almost had it, but then Jaxler barged in and introduced himself. Almost had it. Couldn't look inconspicuous and steal at the same time.

3rd Granite

   Hiero, just, ugh, Hiero. can he ever relax? on and on about how even though he has feelings for me, he was still recovering from his stint with Falcata, conflicted about dating someone in combat duty again, asked if our relationship was going too fast, yada, yada, yada, whatever. had a mini-episode right in the middle of the dining hall. It was sweet, really, it was, but I was trying to grill Tom for information. I put my tongue to his tonsils to shut him up, and felt ... fangs. That's ... that's going to need some getting used to.

10th Granite

  Have Couth's Dossier, not going write down how for fear of incriminating myself. Nothing's in here. just when he arrived here, that he worked at the Bar for sometime, his time of death (Death Confirmed) and the rest is lined out with black ink. A name. A 'Commissar Abel' took a copy of the files, Unaltered. First suspect down. Should take a trip to bar one of there days.

27th Granite

   Hugwax is here. Everypony stood in awe of her presence, their eternal burning question "What does a princess look like?" finally answered. Let me answer that; SHORT. Somehow, since the last time I saw her the princess has gotten shorter. That was when? six - seven years ago? Her and Mr. Startame? had something going on. Always on the guest list whenever Mr. Startame threw his lavish parties. Well, I guess with her status she's invited to whatever she damn well pleases. Difference is, she actually came. Secret love that could never be? Strictly buisnuss? All I know is she and her plus ninety we're always a pain to schedule in. my personal theory? Startame's constant street wars keep Hugwax's rat population down, so she not only turns a blind eye, she backs him!

   I looked good out there today! Standing shoulder to shoulder with my unit, wearing fancy ceremonial armor, who would ever guess this lowly mud-pony peasant would ever be underneath it? I-


"Uh, Willow?"

You know, actually feel proud In what I do for once.

"Willow?" Hiero softly asked from Willow's bed

Willow slammed her Diary shut "What?"

"Could you get me A drink?"

"Sure, what would you like?"

"A Rum on the Ice?"

"Sure," she smiled, then pointed at the kitchen.

"There's tha' Rum, an' there's the Ice. Wha' do ya think we are? Hitched? get yer' own drink!"

Hiero playfully made an effort against the Willows handcuffs which tied him to the bed-frame

"Key?"

"Ah, ya mean this?" she dangles the key in front of him, and drops it down her corset and lunges at the colt

"Come an' get it!"

((for those wondering, It takes exactly 3 beers to write a romance plot between MLP characters. It's just enough to bury the shame.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 13, 2012, 05:55:26 pm
((for those wondering, It takes exactly 3 beers to write a romance plot between MLP characters. It's just enough to bury the shame.))

((Hahaha.  I'm liking Heiro and Willow.  :D  Just imagine, I wrote my part of Heiro / Falcata's date minus booze.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 13, 2012, 11:13:19 pm
"You are a hero, Khenal. Or if you aren't, you're the closest I've ever seen to one. You've earned that title through your deeds and feats."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 13, 2012, 11:22:59 pm
I shake my head slightly, trying to fight back fearful tears.

"N-No... my deeds... I can't make up for them... ever..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 14, 2012, 12:47:01 am
"Khenal, you aren't the same pony that did those things. You are a better pony now. You shouldn't forget what happened there, but that doesn't change the fact that you are a hero to the hundred plus ponies out there." Charity gestures toward the door before adding, "and you are a good pony, even if you don't know it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 14, 2012, 01:13:01 am
As I continue to slowly back away from Charity and Starkey, I bump into a statue.  I turn, clumsily trying to keep it upright with just my hooves, magic forgotten.  After securing it, I notice what the statue is of:  Myself, striking down a Diomedian.  I take a few steps away, shaking, before responding to Charity.

"A better pony?  No!  Th... That's the kind of thinking that lead to the Asylum!  I'm not a hero, I'm just a normal pony!  I don't deserve statues or status!  I don't deserve a title!"

I slowly sink to the floor, the weight of my past slowly crushing me.

"I... I don't deserve..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 14, 2012, 01:21:00 am
Forgetting all formalities of rank, Otik approaches and lays a hoof on Khenal's back.

"Ye deserve much more than ye give yerself credit for, Khenal. Wot happened b'fore... that's all in th' past. Ye've come so far since then."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 14, 2012, 01:33:19 am
Charity moves to the side of Khenal opposite of Otik and places a hoof upon his withers. "She's right Khenal, if you hadn't come far from where you were then, then would you have so many friends here who care about you? Would I have made you Captain of my bodyguard if you weren't a good and trustworthy pony. You deserve what respect you have gotten here."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 14, 2012, 01:36:09 am
I cringe at the hoof on my back, still shuddering as Charity adds her as I try to not totally break down.

"N-No... I'm f-f-falling into the same traps again... hubris... again... "
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 14, 2012, 02:01:39 am
"Hubris? Khenal, you're one of the humblest ponies I know. Why, just look at youself now!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 14, 2012, 02:09:38 am
I look up to Otik and Charity, practically begging.

"Please... please stop... I can't... I can't f-fall to hubris again... I can't let the Asylum... happen again..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 14, 2012, 02:14:06 am
Otik pulls Khenal into a hug, resting his head on her shoulder.

"Hey... tha' willnae happen again. Ye've got somethin' ye didnae have last time."


"You have friends."

"Ye have family."

"You have her."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 14, 2012, 02:22:34 am
Charity's face becomes much more serious. "Khenal, Stand Up."

Once he does so she looks him in the eyes. "Khenal, Otik is right, that isn't going to happen. You won't make that same mistakes again. And if you did start down that road, you have so many friends here who love you that would set you right again."

She reaches out hoof to touch his side. "Not least of all myself. Now, I need to talk to your new recruits in private. You head home now. And you and Friesden are taking the day after tomorrow off. No Buts! If Doctor Bubbles gives Friesden any trouble about it, you tell him it was my orders. Go enjoy yourself, and you think about the three of us have said."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on April 14, 2012, 02:29:05 am
I stand as Charity orders, still a bit shaky and sniffling.  They were all right.  I was... so lonely at the Capital... no Friends, no Family... no Light...  I would have to stay diligent, but they would be able to help me, to point out if I was going down the wrong path again.  I try to argue when she gives me the day off, but Charity is brooking none of it.  I give a weak salute and head home, desperately needing to see Friesden.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 14, 2012, 02:37:52 am
Charity smiles as Khenal leaves the room and after he closes the door behind him, lets out a sigh. As Starkey and Otik move to stand by each other again, Charity looks at the two of them, her face once more serious and devoid of emotion. "By now both of you have likely heard the rumor that General Dostob is on his way here. These rumors are true and he's bringing a whole legion of the best troops in The Shells. Do you know what this means?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 14, 2012, 02:40:12 am
Starkey's face is a mxture of shock and...anger?

"...Her? She's coming to Glitterglen?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 14, 2012, 02:52:53 am
"If by her, you mean our [sarcasm]dear and beloved[/sarcasm] Princess, then yes, very possibly." Charity looks at the floor and then back up at her two friends, "I will tell you what I told Khenal. The Princess has been in contact with me for years, it is her orders that send our workers to the surface, she is the reason we have our flanks hanging out there in the jungle risking daily Diomedian ambushes. She demands much, and we are way behind schedule. She's killed ponies for less serious offenses. I know, I worked in her city for years. The Princess has already tried to kill me once, I have no doubt she might try it again should she find any reason. If you are to join my Guard, you have one last test you must pass. You must swear an oath to follow me above all else. I hate to ask this of you my friends, and I do trust you, but I need to hear you swear it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 14, 2012, 03:12:26 am
Starkey ponders for a moment.

"Above all... above my family? No. My homeland and my countryponies? No."

He looks up into Charity's eyes.

"But above Hugwax? Without question."

Otik does not hesitate for quite so long.

"I'd follow you over her any day, ma'am."

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 14, 2012, 03:19:10 am
Charity frowns, she was afraid of this. "Starkey, I'm afraid that will be a problem. Not your loyalty to your homeland. I understand that, and that is acceptable. However, you say not above your family, and yet...your fiance is also asking to join my guard." Charity looks back and forth between the two ponies. "You want to join my bodyguard, but it is entirely possible that if you both do, then one day, you may be forced to choose between helping your spouse, or  protecting me. What would you do in such a situation?" she looks to both ponies awaiting their answers.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 14, 2012, 03:23:14 am
"...I know Stars c'n handle himself. I'd protect ye, miss Charity."

"I..."

Starkey hesitates for a moment.

"...I-I would do my duty, ma'am"

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 14, 2012, 03:29:19 am
Charity nods, "You are both honest and loyal soldiers, and I know you would not say that if you did not mean it. Very well then, I ask you once more, please, kneel and swear whatever oath you can to me, and then we will be done here, my friends."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on April 14, 2012, 03:35:56 am
The two ponies draw their weapons, planting them on the floor and kneeling before Charity.

"I do solemly swear..."

"That I will serve Lady Charity Conventtulip, Dutchess of Glitterglen..."

"Above princess Dizesh Hugwax, Princess of the Shells of Dance."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on April 14, 2012, 03:44:37 am
Charity smiles as they swear their oaths to her. They weren't as binding as she had hoped, but they would do. "Very good my friends. Please rise."

After a bit of business about their work schedules, pay, and benefits is discussed, they exchange parting words and Charity is once again alone in her office, looking up at the statue of Khenal killing the Diomedian.

'Let Hugwax come. I'm not afraid. Nopony can touch me so long as my friends are there to help me....If only I could make myself believe that.' Charity sighs to herself and sadly returns to her desk and gets back to work.

(End Scene)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on April 18, 2012, 02:18:10 am
Friesden smiled at the two young ponies.

“Thank you so much for agreeing to look after little Celly and Luna and Terrus! We haven’t had a night to ourselves since I had them. This is going to be so exciting!” She ducks herself under Khenal’s wing with a grin.

Khenal smiles as well, gently squeezing his love with the wing she’s hiding under.

“You two are sure you’ll be able to handle them?“

Adamant looks at the Captain. “Sir, you know I’ve helped raise my siblings, none of them were alicorns, that’s true, but I’ve dealt with magical foals, and a flying filly before, and that was without Kris to help me. It’ll all be okay. You have my word.”

Kris smiles and offers a small nod.  “I’m sure everything will be fine.”  She hadn’t helped care for a foal ever, but she felt confident with Addy there with her.

“Come on, Khenal, or we’re going to run out of time to ourselves!” says Friesden with a small smile on her face.

Khenal smiles, knowing their foals are in good hooves.

“Heh, alright Friesden.  Take care you two!  Behave, you three!”

Adamant walks with the couple to the door and sees them out, “Have a pleasant night Mister Khenal, Dr. Friesden, and don’t you worry, we have everything under control.”

Kris nods them off and turns to look at the foals that were now under their care.  This couldn’t be so hard.  She looks over to Adamant and says, “Well, I’m not quite sure where to start.  I assume there’s a specific time to feed them?”

Adamant facehooves, “Ah, should have asked the parents when they last ate. Oh well, don’t worry, they’ll let us know when they are hungry.”

As if on cue, little Celly starts to cry.  It starts as a high-pitched whine, then quickly shifts to the sobs of a foal who needs something, and needs it right now!

Kris gives the filly a concerned glance before floundering and looking to Adamant.  “Um...”

Adamant give Kris a reassuring look, “She’s either hungry, needs a new diaper, or just wants some attention. I’ll go get a bottle for her, we’ll need one soon enough at least, and you check if it’s one of the other two things.”

She nods and cautiously approaches the filly.  She gives the air a similarly cautious sniff to hopefully rule out the less palatable of the two options.

She smells fine, though she continues to bawl.  She doesn’t seem interested in any food, either.  She seems to just miss her mommy and daddy.

Kris breathes a small sigh of relief and picks her up.  “Oh, what’s the matter Celly?  It’s okay, we’re here.”

She continues to bawl, her poor little filly heart breaking.

Kris continues to hold her and tries to give her a reassuring cradling in a foreleg as she turns to Adamant.  “Well, she doesn’t need a new diaper.  She’s just upset I think...”

As if Celestia was the trigger, Terrus wakes up with another bawl.

Adamant rushes over to pick up Terrus, he rocks him a bit and tries to calm the colt, shhing him quietly, turning to Kris again, “Celly, is upset her parents left. Try to cheer her up, make her laugh.”

Celly keeps bawling like she’ll never smile again, tears gushing from her eyes.

Kris nods and sits with the filly in her hooves. Alright, now how would she do that? She tries rocking her gently and offers what she hopes are reassuring “shhs” of her own. “It’s okay Celly, your parents will be back soon.”

She continues crying, knowing that they are gone forever!

Adamant, still trying to deal with Terrus and praying to the Sisters that Luna didn’t wake up and start crying too, tries to give his fiance some advice, “You need to distract her, make funny faces, or tickle her, or lift her above your head, or I don’t know, do something with your magic.”

Terrus continues crying, his little stomach empty and in need of food.

Adamant carries the colt over to where he put the bottle and sits and offers it to the foal, hoping that that would be the answer he was looking for.

Kris thinks for a moment.  How could she distract her like Addy said?  She did have magic, not that she knew many spells.  She tries simple like he suggested, giving her a few rough attempts at humorous faces

Gone!  Gone forev- oohh, funny face!  Celly pauses in her bawling to look at the funny faces that Kris is making and starting to giggle..

Terrus takes the bottle and begins to feed, the bawling silenced at once.

Kris grins a bit as she realizes that her feeble attempts were making some progress. She was usually content to just leave well enough alone, but she tries giving the filly a little tickle too. Maybe after this was over she’d go see somepony about learning some illusion magic. That would have been extremely useful right about now.

As Terrus finishes the bottle Adamant begins to burp the foal, when a knock is heard at the door.

Faces and tickling?  This is fun!  Celly burbles and laughs, a happy filly once more.

Adamant makes his way over the door and opens it seeing Granite standing there covered in mud and dirt, his pick on his back.  “Adamant, we got a problem up in sector 3B. Hit that damnable aquifer. The whole cobatite vein is flooding. We need every hoof up there to help contain the breach. Your dad told me to fetch you.”

Adamant shakes his head and turns to Kris, “I’m sorry, but I’ve got to go.” He hands Terrus over her and says, “Make sure they all get fed, Terrus still needs to be burped, and give them a bath in the shower in the back before they go to bed. They shouldn’t give you too much trouble. Trust your instincts, you’ll be fine.” and Adamant and the other miner are off, leaving Kris alone with three newborn foals.

“Oh, alright. Go help however you can.  I... I think I can handle this.”  She was going to have to one way or another anyway.  She hopes she has some instinct in her somewhere.  She really wished her mom was here right now too.

Celestia keeps giggling and burbling... oh wait, that’s not burbling.  That’s spit-up.  She’s still giggling, at least.

Terrus’ bottle falls from his mouth, and after a short time, the crying starts coming again.

Kris’ eyes go wide momentarily at the realization that Celly had deposited something unpleasant on the two of them before she is distracted by Terrus crying.  She stands and fetches a cloth with her magic before stepping over to Terrus.  As she starts to gently wipe Celly and herself off, she picks Terrus up with her remaining free forehoof and tries to return the bottle to his mouth.  Juggling the two was difficult, to say the least.  At least she had magic to hold the cloth... or the bottle.  But not both.  Hmm... this was getting complicated already.

Terrus continues to cry for a bit, before stopping as Celly continues to giggle.

Celly keeps giggling as Krys wipes at her.  Thinking it’s a game, her cute little horn glows as she grabs the sopping cloth and holds it close to herself.

Kris pauses for a moment as the filly takes the cloth from her, but she was mostly clean now and if she was happy, that was alright with her.  She smiles at Celly and turns her attention to Terrus, holding the bottle with her magic for him to nurse at it as long as he wanted to.

Krys can hear a small *splat* as Celly plops the cloth upon her own head, showing a cute smile as the cloth and it’s liquid entangle with her adorable pink mane.

Terrus continues to suck on the bottle, drinking it dry and dropping it out. Without another second, he starts crying again.

Kris cringes mentally at the sight of Celly wearing the soaked cloth and gently tries to take it from her.  “Come on, let’s get that washed out for you.”  As Terrus begins crying, she notes the empty bottle.  “Oh, um... let’s see...”  He probably need to be burped now.  Maybe?

She steps over to the shower to hopefully have a moment to rinse out the cloth as she also gently places Terrus over her shoulder and gives him a few gentle pats.  She kind of knew how that worked.  Kind of.

Celly pouts at the cloth is taken away.  That was her favorite hat, and she worked hard on it!  The empty bottle on the floor reminds her that she is also empty now, and she starts to cry again.

Kris frowns as Celestia starts crying.  “It’s okay, hang on just a second.”  She rinses the cloth out as best she can and wrings most of the water out.  She gently wipes the remaining liquid from her face and mane.  “Oh, is something else wrong?”

Terrus burps loudly as Kris pats him, and stops crying for a second.

‘Of course something is wrong, I’m crying!’  Her tears seem to say as she slumps onto the floor.

Kris breathes a sigh of relief as Terrus stops crying.  What to do about Celly though?  “Are you hungry?” she asks, reaching out for another bottle with her magic.  She brings the two foals into the best cradling position she can with her hooves and offers the bottle to Celly with her magic.

Terrus looks greedily at the bottle and his tentacles glow as he tries to take it for himself.

Little Celly will not stand for this indignity!  Her little horn glows as well, fighting for the bottle.

Kris gives the two a concerned look as they fight for the bottle.  Maybe letting Terrus have a bit more to eat wouldn’t matter, but she wasn’t so sure that was a good idea either.  She scans the room for something to let him occupying himself with.  Something harmless to suck on instead of a bottle.  She forgets about the rag in her possession as things begin to unravel a bit, and gently lays it on Terrus as she continues to search the room with her eyes.

The cloth glows as Terrus’ magic drops the fight over the bottle with the new toy in hand. In hoof, at least. Or in magic. Whatever.

Celly smiles in triumph, and happily stuffs the spoils of her victory into her mouth.  The wrong end of her spoils.  After sucking a few moments, she frowns and spits out the bottle, sending it to the floor as she starts to well up with tears again.

Terrus spots the fallen bottle, and his magic glows over it again as his final victory commences in the Milk Bottle War.

Kris waffles for a moment, trying to decide how to bring peace to the Milk Bottle War.  Well, he seemed happy enough with the rag a moment ago.  She dangles it in front of him, trying to break his view of the bottle.  “Come on Terrus, isn’t this a lot more fun than the bottle?” she says in the sweetest voice she can muster.

Terrus lets the bottle drop from his mouth as he grabs for the rag with his magic.

That’s better.  She returns the bottle to Celly, right side down this time.  “Here you go honey,” she says to her in the same voice.

I’m gonna starve to death and be without my hat!  Oh woe is- oohh, bottle!  Celly happily suckles at the bottle, holding it in her little forehooves.

Kris sighs again and gently sits, holding the two gently in her hooves.  Well, this was turning out to be more work than she’d expected, but it seemed to be alright now.  She smiles at the two and hopes it stays that way.  Against her better judgment.

Mmm, bottle!  So tasty... wait a tic.  Celly gives a few more suckles before realizing the bottle is empty already.  She gives the bottle her best set of little pony eyes, hoping it will magically refill itself like it does when the grown ponies do whatever it is they do to fill it back up.

Kris sees that the bottle is empty and gently takes it from her.  “All gone?”  She probably needed burping now too... she takes her and places her over her shoulder and repeats the same motions she did for Terrus, hoping she knew what in blazes she was doing.

‘Nnnooo, I’m still hungry!’ her eyes seem to say as Kris gently pats her.  Her little horn glows as she bops Kris on the head with the empty bottle, an unhappy expression on her face.
Uh oh, looks like this wasn’t quite the mechanical process she’d hoped for it to be.  Kris wonders for a moment what to do.  There were only three bottles of milk, one per foal, so she took that to mean that she shouldn’t be giving them more than that each.  But that face... what was she supposed to say to that?

Celly pours on the charm, really wanting the bottle to be full again.  Her bottom lip trembles slightly as her little filly eyes go as wide and as moist as she can make them.

Kris hesitates at the face, but she’d had just as much as Terrus, and she didn’t think it was a good idea to give her more right now.  “Come on, give it a minute to settle...” she says in a low voice and trying to offer a reassuring smile.

The bottle again bonks Kris on the head as Celly tries to assert herself for more food.

Terrus sees his sister having fun and decides to join in the great new game, his tentacles glowing as he bonks Kris on the head with the bottle himself with a giggle.

Kris can’t quite decide what to do about that.  Her first instinct is to grab the bottle with her magic and try to hold it still, which she attempts.  What she was going to do after that though, she wasn’t quite sure.

Terrus’ giggles slow and then finally stop as the bottle stops moving. No more fun.

“That’s right, it’s not nice to hit ponies,” she says, but using a tone to hopefully not convey anything close to anger.  She wasn’t mad.  She smiles at the two as she places the bottle away on a nearby shelf.

Terrus just sits still as she puts the bottle away, and when her magic fades, he grabs the bottle once more and starts to bonk her head with it again.

She sighs and tries to think of a better way to solve that problem.  She gently takes the bottle in her magic again and hides it in a cupboard as she turns her back, hopefully blocking the colt’s view of where she hid it.

Celly is still a bit hungry, but Terrus’ idea of the game is starting to distract her.  She scrunches up her face as she slowly levitates the cabinet.  Thankfully for Kris, she can’t seem to get a good swing with it... yet.

Terrus joins in with his sister, helping her swing the cabinet with a gurgly giggle.

Kris’ eyes go wide as she sees the two lift what should be an impossibly heavy thing for foals.  Things just got real.  She backs away from the clumsy swing and uses her own magic to fight for control.  “No, no, that’s not nice either!” she says with a bit more urgency in her voice than she wanted.

Terrus continues to try and swing the cabinet, continuing to giggle at the great new game his sister made up.

Kris uses all of her magical might to keep the cabinet anchored to the ground, hoping she could outlast the superfoals.  Maybe if they got bored they’d give up.  She hoped.

Celly’s eyelids slowly start to droop as a combination of boredom, fully belly and simple sleepiness start to affect her.  She yawns wide and stops levitating the cabinet, sucking at a hoof.

Terrus tries swinging the cabinet a couple more times before eventually giving up as well.

Kris relaxes a bit as they give in, and notices that Celly looked sleepy. Good, one less foal to deal with! Adamant said something about giving them a bath before bed, but she didn’t think it was a good idea to keep her awake if she was sleepy. Sounded like a recipe for a cranky baby. So she steps over to the crib and starts to tuck her in for a nap.

Terrus, seeing his carer was distracted, starts crawling towards the door and with a glow on the handle of the door, tries to open it and crawl out.

Celly tucks in easily, soon quietly sleeping.  Little Luna, though, yawns awake and blearily looks around.  When she spied Kris, she tilts her head to the side, as if to say ‘You aren’t my Mommy.’  At least she isn’t crying.

Kris relaxes notably as Celly tucks in and nods off to sleep without a bit of trouble.  She gives Luna a warm smile and says in a sweet voice, “Oh, you’re awake.  Your mommy and daddy are gone for a little while, but I’m here.”  All the while, she hasn’t noticed that Terrus escaped her grip and attention.

Luna pokes at Celly with a hoof, as if wanting to ask her sister what was going on.  Celly, though, is sound asleep and doesn’t look to be waking up any time soon.  Luna turns back to Kris, putting a hoof in her mouth to suck on as she considers this not-Mommy.

Kris simply smiles at Luna, who at least was sitting contently.  Then she realizes Terrus wasn’t with her.  Where did he... she turns to see the little colt fiddling with the door.  She scoops him up with her magic and brings him back over.  “No, no Terrus, we can’t go out there right now.”

As Kris turns back to where Luna was, she notices a distinct lack of dark alicorn filly.

Terrus starts to cry as Kris takes him away from the door.

“I’m sorry Terrus, it’s just not safe for a little foal out there,” she whispers to him as she brings him close and cradles him.  Then she turns back to the crib and discovers with a small amount of distress that Luna was no longer present.  She searches the room with her eyes.  “Luna?  Where...”

Kris can just barely hear a dull *thump* from the next room, followed shortly by another *thump*, following a slow and steady rhythm.

She raises an eyebrow at the curious noise.  What was... oh.  “Hang on,” she says to Terrus as she cradles him again and heads into the adjoining room, hoping she found Luna and that she wasn’t doing anything particularly disastrous.

Luna is slowly but surely emptying one of Khenal’s bookshelves, dropping the tomes on the floor and efficiently reaching for new books as each falls.  She quietly looks at the not-Momma, still pulling and dropping books at a steady pace.

Oh, Khenal probably wouldn’t like that... at least she wasn’t doing something like destroying them. She calmly approaches the filly and scoops her up. “Daddy wouldn’t like that,” she says in a soothing tone. With that, she makes her way back into the adjoining room. She’d clean up that mess later when the foals were all asleep.

Terrus looks around for anything else particularly destructive for him to be doing, but can find nothing for the moment.

Well, Terrus wasn’t complaining at the moment and she had both of the awake foals in her care, so that was an improvement.  Damages were minimal too.  She just might pull this off.  But... what next?  Luna hadn’t been fed yet, she’d probably be wanting that soon.

Kris notices she is suddenly one foal shy again, as Luna has managed to disappear again, the slippery filly.  “Luna?” she questions, cautiously making her way back to the library.  Maybe she just wanted to be in there?

Kris doesn’t see the filly, though she can hear the distinctive sounds of a foal drinking from a bottle in the room.  Looking up, she can see Luna upside down on the ceiling, suckling at the bottle as her little wings flap to keep her there, and still giving the not-Mommy an analyzing look.

“Oh, there you are,” she says, looking up to her.  She wasn’t really causing any trouble by being up there, but she wasn’t happy about the filly being out of her reach.  Now, what could she do about that?  She reaches up with her magic and tries to dislodge Luna from the ceiling.

Terrus, with his watcher away, flaps out of the cradle and hurries to the door again. He doesn’t bother with turning the doorknob, instead pulling the door from the wall in a loud crack.

Kris’ eyes snap open as she hears what sounds like a very expensive repair job happen.  For a moment she forgets completely about Luna and dashes back into main room to see Terrus wielding the door.  Alarmed, she trots over to him and scoops him up with her hooves.

Terrus drops the door and pouts in Kris’ hooves.

“Come on, let’s go find your sister...” she says to him, more to calm herself than anything. The foal just ripped a door from its hinges. What could he do to her if he wanted to? She returns to the room Luna was previously defying the laws of physics in and searches for the filly.

The ceiling in the library is devoid of any alicorn fillies, though there are adorable little hoofprints on it... leading out the room... and out the apartment!  A discarded bottle lay on the floor just outside in the hall, additional testament to the filly’s departure.

“Uh oh... not good...”  She trots after the hoofprints on the ceiling, hoping little Luna hadn’t gone far.  She’d have to leave Celly alone while she searched for her, but Luna was clearly in more danger than Celly at this point.

Luna is calmly walking along the ceiling, not too far from the home, her little wings still flapping to keep her aloft.  She looks around curiously, studying everything from this unique angle.

“There you are,” Kris says with clear relief in her voice. She reaches up with her magic and plucks the filly from the ceiling. “It’s dangerous out here Luna, let’s go back home where it’s safe, okay?” She starts back in that direction.

Luna sticks her hoof in her mouth to suck on it again, still unsure what to make of the not-Momma.

Kris returns to the room with the foal in tow.  She isn’t quite sure what to do now... she thought babies were supposed to get tired quickly.  And yet, Terrus had dislodged an entire door from its hinges!  This was going to be a long night...

Terrus looks around the room, and seeing nothing else to do that looks fun, decides to go to sleep.

With only Luna to worry about Kris find it far easier to handle foalsitting.  Little Luna is quiet, almost disturbingly so as she simply sucks at her hoof and watches Kris.  She occasionally walks up the walls with the aid of her little wings, but Kris is free to clean up for the most part.  The books go back, more or less where they were supposed to go.  The door was far more difficult, but she at least got it back in it’s hinges.  Kinda.  It opened and closed, at least? 

After a couple hours Adamant returned. He knocked gently on the door before letting himself in, he appeared to be sweaty and his hooves had mud on them. He looks around and the house appears to be still in one piece, ‘That’s good.’ he thinks, seeing Kris he just simply says, “Hey, I’m back, the foals give you any trouble?”

Kris looks over to him through groggy eyes and offers a small smile.  “Oh, Addy, you’re back.”  She gives a quick glance to the sleeping or otherwise content foals and decides to gloss over the worst of the details.  “No, they weren’t much trouble.  Just like any other babies, I would imagine.”  Well, she hoped not.  “Did you get the breach sealed?”

Luna quietly watches, laying on her side to suck on a rear hoof instead of a front one.  Those hooves had long lost any flavor.

Adamant nods, “Yeah, the problem is solved, the miners dug a channel away from town to slow the flooding while the mason’s guild set up a wall to contain it. The breach wasn’t as bad as Granite implied, they really didn’t need my help at all, but we don’t have to worry about the aquifer flooding the town tonight at least.”  Adamant looks over the foals each in turn and sees that they all seem to be just fine.

“Oh, that’s good to hear at least,” she says, standing to nuzzle Adamant.  “Their parents should be home soon I think.”

As if on cue, a knock comes on the door.

Kris opens what used to be a fine door, but had been put back in place by her less than stellar repair skills.  She wasn’t quite sure how she’d explain that...

Khenal and Friesden stand on the other side of the door, obviously having enjoyed their night together.  Khenal speaks up first, smiling wide as Friesden enjoys her favorite place under his wing.

“Kris!  How were the foals?”

She gives a sincere smile.  “Oh, they were no trouble,” she says, mostly sincerely.  She’d have to explain the door somehow.  Maybe she broke it?  That would be hard to feign...

“That’s good to hear! Thank you so much, I had a fantastic night with Khenal!” Friesden says as she pokes her head up from his wing.

Khenal softly nuzzles Friesden, then heads inside.  He spots Luna, laying on her side and sucking on a hoof, and gently levitates her up to give her a little kiss.

“That’s great, I’m glad you had a good night,” she tells the two.  Maybe she and Addy could go relax somewhere now.  “All three have been fed, but it might be time to feed them again soon,” she adds with a hint of a questioning tone to her voice.

Khenal levitates Luna to have her rest on his head, her little legs wrapping around his horn for balance.  “They should be good ‘till morning then.  Did Luna give you any trouble?  It’s so hard to get her to sleep some times.”

“No, no, she was a little angel,” Kris replies.  Well, she stressed her out just a pinch, but compared to Celly and Terrus she was a little angel.  “Well, she’s been up for a while, but no trouble out of her.”

Khenal nods slightly, careful of the filly on his head.  Said filly keeps looking at Kris with her usual analysing look.  “Ya, Luna is always so quiet.  She almost never cries, which is nice, but she also never laughs.  She’ll smile occasionally, but never a laugh like little Celestia or Terrus.”

Kris cocks her head slightly.  “You know, now that you mention it, she hasn’t laughed or giggled at all.  Celly and Terrus did...”

“Well...Thank you for watching our foals. If you want to go home now...?”

She smiles in return and looks to Adamant.  “Well, you’ve had a long night, maybe we should get out of your manes?”  Then she and Addy could go cuddle someplace and she could tell him all about how crazy her night really was.

“It was our pleasure to look after them for you, if you need us again, please feel free to ask.” Adamant begins to move toward the door.

Kris follows Adamant to the door and very carefully opens it. As they step outside she shuts the door with a bit more force than she reasonably should, and the poorly repaired hinges violently fail, sending bolts sailing off in arcs and the door collapsing noisily to the ground. Kris freezes in place, eyes wide as she stares through the new opening into Khenal and Friesden’s room.

Khenal stares at the destruction.  He didn’t even know a door could do that!  As the dust settles, high-pitched, giggling laughter can be clearly heard from his direction.  Atop his head, little Luna is laughing her adorable little flank off, clinging to her father’s horn as she laughs like never before.  Literally.

Friesden, who was just about to lean in for another kiss with Khenal, stops in amazement. Luna? Little Luna? Laughing? The door falling off? That...Neither of those had happened before.

Kris is speechless for a moment, letting Luna’s giggling fill the room completely.  “I... I... um... I-I’ll um... the door... I mean...”

“It...It...It...It fell off,” Friesden says in a shocked tone of voice.

Adamant just stares in confusion at the door, ‘it shouldn’t just fall off like that? What happened while I was gone?’

The looks on everypony’s faces, combined with Luna’s continuing giggling proves infectious as Khenal starts laughing as well.

Friesden didn’t pretend to understand what happened or was happening, but she decided to join in the laughter as well.

As all the other ponies begin to laugh, Adamant tries to contain himself, and fails sputtering out a laugh that quickly joins in with the others.

Even Kris can’t resist the laughter, and despite the fact that she was a bit mortified at destroying the door, she starts chuckling and breaks into light laughter herself.  This had been a night unlike any other she’d ever experienced.  If and when she had a foal of her own, she was hoping for an earth pony.

***************

Later that night, Kris is back in her room after spending a brief time with her fiance. She was pretty tired, and after catching a bite to eat with him she just decided to head home and go to bed. As she sinks down into the bed, she sees her hammer hanging from its stand and notices the light glinting from it in a strange manner.

Intrigued, she sits up and takes the hammer with her magic and brings it close. Something was written on it... “Laughter.” Laughter? What was that supposed to mean? The word Loyalty had been written on it when her mother wielded it, that certainly seemed like a more fitting inscription for a weapon than Laughter.

But this must have been the result of magic of some kind. She wasn’t quite sure she understood, but she was beyond tired and simply returns the weapon to its stand. She’d try to figure that one out in the morning.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on April 26, 2012, 02:53:45 am
“Woo, I love Cake!  Omnomnomnom!”  Ponies dance and eat, generally having a good time at the reception for the double wedding.  The chefs had gone all out, and the ponies invited were having a great time all together.

Friesden was too busy tickling Khenal under his wing to dance, but she was laughing too.  Khenal was trying to enjoy a cupcake and not spit it across the room as Friesden tickles him, taking bites around the giggles.

Kris is likewise too busy showing her husband affection to really eat much of anything or even consider dancing.  The last thing she was going to do was get out on the dance floor and make a foal of herself.  Maybe if she kept nuzzling Addy he wouldn’t think to try it.

All of a sudden, Friesden stops her tickling and emerges from her berth in Khenal’s wing. “Khenal,” she starts, “would you want to dance with me?” She smiles brightly and hopefully.

“Of course!”  He downs the remains of the cupcake, then leads her to the floor to dance.  Friesden was always a better dancer, but she loved having him dance with her. Friesden led him in a slow dance, a smile constantly on her face.  He could handle a slow dance at least, happily following his Only Light’s lead, even managing to not step on her hooves. In the middle of the dance, Friesden leaned in for a kiss from her only love. Khenal eagerly obliges, always ready to kiss his wife, continuing to dance as their lips touch.

With a large sound the doors to the dinning hall fly open. The Royal Guard looks around and clears a path for Princess Hugwax as she makes her way inside. Captain Demora looks around at the ponies and spits on the floor, before making her way to the refreshment table. Tor and Pound keep close the Princess a crudely wrapped present on Pound's back and another smaller one in Tor’s mouth. Meanwhile Thrash slams the door behind them, as they enter.

Friesden held tight to Khenal, not particularly favourable to the appearance of the princess and her rudeness. Especially her interrupting Friesden and Khenal’s kiss. Khenal tries to hide his glare at Hugwax and her retinue, only partially succeeding. Friesden buries her head in Khenal’s wing, wanting not to have to pay attention to the princess ruining everything.

Kris huddles up next to Adamant, unsure of why the princess would enter so forcefully and boisterously.  She nervously nibbles on a cupcake of her own as she watches Hugwax, hoping this wasn’t going where she feared it was.  She was only going to get this day once!  She wasn’t going to let the princess ruin it for her.

The Princess and two of her guards, Tor and Pound, make their way directly towards the younger pair of newlyweds.

Kris braces herself internally as Hugwax approaches her.  It was clear from her demeanor that what was to come probably wasn’t going to be pleasant.  She gives the princess the best smile she can and a small bow.  “Hello, your highness.  I’m glad you could make it.”

Adamant too bows before the Princess, “It is a pleasure to see you, Princess.”

Hugwax looks down at the mare. “Yes, I’m glad I could make it too.” she says with a tone suggesting that she didn’t really care, “It seems that my invitation had gotten misplaced. I’ll make sure that the peasant in charge of delivering the mail around here is properly punished. Regardless here is your gift.” Tor moves forward and places the present from his mouth before the couple.

Kris felt a pang of discomfort about the prospect of somepony being punished... maybe the princess would just yell at them.  Maybe she could believe that.  Regardless, she simply nods and responds, “Thank you, your highness.”  With a bit of trepidation, she unwraps the gift.

Inside the package is a small undecorated tin figurine of Princess Hugwax.

A simple little figurine?  From who was probably the wealthiest pony in the principality?  There must be some significance to this she missed... but it continues to evade her.  Nevertheless, she wasn’t about to appear ungrateful to the princess.  She gives her a fake smile and says, “Thank you, your highness.”

Adamant examines the figurine, confused about the gift, but not wanting to appear ungrateful adds his thanks as well.

The Princess states with no real feeling whatsoever, “Well, congratulations on the wedding, hope you will be happy. etc. etc.” Before moving on to deliver the present to the other newly wed couple.

The two are hard to miss, surrounded by a small cluster of ponies in neatly tailored dress uniforms, all chatting excitedly.

The Princess and her guards approach the small cluster of ponies, the Princess clears her throat and the ponies fall silent. The small crowd parts to reveal Starkey and Otik sitting together in the center. Both hastily give a bow, before Starkey speaks up.”Your Highness, what a pleasant surprise!”
“Yes, yes, a pleasure to be here.” she says in a bored tone, before gesturing to Pound, who lays a present before the couple. As Starkey and Otik open the package they see a Darkbolt Pony skull totem decorated with only a few of the cheapest most worthless gems in the fortress.

Starkey freezes, his blood turning to ice. He stares at the grotesque effigy in silence for a few moments, before Otik speaks up.
“W-Why, It’s absolutely lovely, thank ye yer highness!”

“I hope you have many happy years together.” says Hugwax in a tone that made it clear that she didn’t care one way or another. “I will take my leave of you know.” Hugwax leaves the cluster of ponies and has Tor and Pound clear a table of ponies for her where she takes a seat.

Starkey does not move for several minutes after Hugwax leaves. Finally, he turns his head away from the totem in the box.

“Otik... P-Please put that... that thing away.”

“O’ course, hun...” She grimaces, picking up the box and shutting the lid, before passing it off to one of the militiaponies. “Take this, do... somethin’ with it, I dunnae care wot.”

“Aye ma’am.” He takes the box and heads for the door, while Otik returns to Starkey’s side.
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Meanwhile Captain Demora had been helping herself to all the free drink she could. Some of which now stained the front of her formal uniform. After a while she began to look out onto the dance floor, where she saw the loveliest pegasus mare she'd seen in a long time dancing with that green fool Captain Khenal. 'I could show her a better time than that oaf.' she thinks before shambling her way over to the dancing couple. “Oy, Cap'n,” she says his title with a tone one would usually reserve for an insult, “mind if I cut in?” she says more of a statement than a question in its tone.

“Um...I...I’ll go say hello to mum and dad...You can come and talk to me when you’re done, my love,” says Friesden as she edges away from the drunk guard.

Khenal gives Friesden a small nuzzle as she leaves, then turns to glare a bit at Demora before answering.  “Yes, I would mind.”

“Oy, don't be like that filly. I promise you'll have fun. Just the one dance, and you'll see.” Demora says while obstructing Friesden's exit.

Khenal interposes himself between Friesden and Demora, glaring even harder as he tries to draw on his magic to find nothing there.  It figures Hugwax would have a null in her guard...

Friesden turns away from the pony, and tries to walk to her mother and father. They’d make all the bad things go away while Khenal was busy.

Demora shoves her way past Khenal, and bites Friesden's tail to keep her from leaving, “Aw, come on filly, don't be like that. Come with me and we'll have a good time” she mutters through a mouthful of hair, while trying to pull Friesden back with her.

Friesden squeaks in fright and tries to fly away, the tail the only thing keeping her from running from the room to somewhere, wherever this pony wasn’t.

Khenal was through playing nice, and punches Demora square in her jaw.  He didn’t care if he broke it, knocked her out or worse, he just wanted this drunken mule to leave his love alone!

Demora flies backwards as the blow connects, her grip on Friesden fails and she hits the ground hard. She pulls herself to her feet and curses Khenal. Had she been completely sober she would have reached for the silver whip on her side, but in her altered state she instead jumps toward Khenal in an attempt to take him to the ground.

Khenal smirks slightly as his horn... does nothing, oops.  He was in the wrong stance to take down a flying tackle, and so is bowled over by Demora’s charge.

As the two ponies hit the ground together, Demora begins an assault of blows upon the Alicorn. She was never much of hoof fighter but several blows do manage to connect squarely with Khenal.

As he regains his senses and prepares to remove Demora from himself, he hears a voice raised.  Captain Isos’, to be exact.  “What is going on here?”  She knew very well what was going on here, but there is always protocol to follow.  Captain Isos frowns as Demora ignores both protocol and her admonishment, quickly closing the distance and roughly pulling her off Khenal before she can turn his face into hamburger.

As Demora is pulled off of Khenal she continues to swing wildly, at both Khenal (now out of her reach) and the strange pony behind her. She turns her head and see Isos captain of the fortress guard holding her, after a few more moments she settles down. “That bastard hit me first.” is all she offers up as an explanation.

“And you continued after he stopped.” she smoothly counters, motioning for Khenal to get up and follow her.  “You both are going to spend the night in the jail, at the very least.  I don’t take kindly to assault, either of you.”

Demora scoffs, “Fine. But the Princess will remember this.”

Khenal glowers a bit at Demora, but says nothing.  Captain Isos is a good and fair pony, she’d get this sorted out right.

“S-s-s-s-she,” is all Friesden can get out before the tears make her speech unintelligible, and she runs over to her parents, ducking under Starkey’s wing.

Kris snaps out of her stupor as the fight ends as abruptly as it starts.  The entire thing was a blur.  She’d never seen Khenal do something like that to somepony, but if Demora had tried to take Addy away from her like that she’d have probably done something similar.  But a night in jail for him?  Well... he did throw the first blow... but Demora was asking for it.  Kris stands and slowly makes her way to get a better view of what had happened.

Starkey pulls Friesden in closer, trying his best to console her. The fight and its outcome had unsettled him, sure, but right now tending to his daughter was more important.

“S-s-s-s-s-she-she-she-she-she-I-I-I-I-I-I-I-I,” stutters Friesden, unable to get the words out, as she cries under Starkey’s wing.

“Shhh... don’t try to talk, hun. It’ll be alright.”

“I-I-I-I-I-I-I want Khenal!” she says, still tearing up.

“We’ll go and see him later, after they clear this whole thing up, aye?”

“O-o-o-o-o-okay,” she says with a sniffle. “C-c-c-can we go and see him soon?”

“As soon as we can.” he grins down at her. “Now, let me see that smile.”

“O-o-o-okay,” Friesden says, trying her best to smile through the tears now slowing.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: melkor on April 27, 2012, 03:16:41 am
well i finaly done it.

i finaly have read this entire post.

now if you dont mind i will be starting on this pile of neglected homework, that i believe has starting to rot.

Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: ansontan2000 on April 28, 2012, 10:31:36 am
What in bloody hell have I missed?
Urgh, too much lovey dovey stuff for me.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 03, 2012, 12:21:17 am
After the horrible incident at her reception the day before, Kris had needed some time to cool down.  She was more than a bit upset about Princess Hugwax's guard and her conduct, and it was only after sleeping it off next to her new husband that she decided she was calm enough to head back into public.

The first thing she intended to do was to go see Khenal and see how he and Friesden were holding up.  He of all ponies didn't deserve to be in jail right now, even if she could sort of understand why Captain Isos detained him along with Demora.  She thought he was supposed to be out by now, but she hadn't seen him yet, so she decides to head down to the jail.  Hopefully he was released already and Captain Isos might have an idea of where he was.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 03, 2012, 12:37:31 am
I grumble in my cell, in a foul mood this morning.  This was an injustice, and it rankled that I couldn't do anything about it.  I could handle it if Captain Isos had given me two months, she's a fair Captain.  She really was better at this job than I ever was.  No, the injustice came from the fact that Hugwax had been the one to sentence me, while letting Demora off with only an hour.  At least I had a few books to spend my time with...
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 03, 2012, 12:44:15 am
Kris was somewhat surprised and even more irritated after speaking with Captain Isos, having found out that Khenal was indeed still locked up and would be for some time.  She manages to collect herself a bit before heading into the cell block itself.  She was there to talk to Khenal and hopefully make him feel a little better, not simmer about what had happened.

She slowly steps into the cell block, trying to pick him out.
  "Khenal?" she calls out.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 03, 2012, 12:57:04 am
My sulk was interrupted by Kris' call, and I can't help but perk up a bit.  Just because I'm in jail doesn't mean my friends will abandon me, after all.

"Kris?  I'm over here!"

I get up and stick a hoof through the bars, waving at Kris though I can't see her.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 03, 2012, 12:59:19 am
She notices the hoof and trots over to him.  Her expression darkens a bit to a small frown as she sees him.  "So it's true..." she says.  "Did the princess really overrule Captain Isos?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 03, 2012, 01:03:50 am
"Yes she did, that useless excuse for so-called nobility.  Captain Isos was not happy, either, but really had no choice."

I pace a bit as I talk, trying to bleed off a bit of this angry energy.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 03, 2012, 01:08:57 am
"I'm sorry..." she says, looking down a bit.  "If anypony deserved it, it was that Demora.  I can't believe her nerve..."  She furrows her brow a bit in thought.  "Or the princess's for that matter.  I don't understand... didn't she see what happened?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 03, 2012, 01:13:11 am
"Of course she did!  She just doesn't give a flying feather about justice!  All she cares about is her own petty position and flaunting her power!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 03, 2012, 01:22:40 am
Her eyes widen a bit as she takes that in.  "I... didn't realize she was like that.  I admit I know little about her... I've lived here almost all of my life."  She thinks for a moment.  "You... sound like you've heard of her doing this sort of thing before."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 03, 2012, 01:27:24 am
"I've seen her do this kind of thing before!"

I hang my head, deflating.  "I've helped her do this kind of thing before..."  I pause for a moment, thinking.  "...You haven't read my book, have you, Kris?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 03, 2012, 01:28:59 am
"Your... book?" she asks.  She shakes her head, "No, I wasn't aware you'd written anything."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 03, 2012, 01:35:50 am
I chuckle a bit at that.

"Heh, nothing published.  It's my Journal.  Well, my first Journal.  I called it simply My Book.  If you want, you could ask Friesden to borrow it... or get it straight from the horse's mouth, as it were."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 03, 2012, 01:38:32 am
She smiles a bit and sits in front of the bars.  "Well... if you're willing to talk about it, I'm willing to listen."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 03, 2012, 01:41:24 am
"Well, I certainly have time."

I lay on my cot, wanting to be relatively comfortable as I relate my life story, or close enough.

"I was... a different pony in my past, Kris.  Let me tell you about the Asylum..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 03, 2012, 01:51:23 am
Kris listens intently to the story as he tells her all of the details.  She'd have never guessed that Khenal would have been involved in anything like that... much less personally responsible for so much.  It was a sobering thought... that somepony as upstanding as he was could have done things like that.  Like her mother... although she knew Khenal had done far more than her mother ever did.  She began to wonder what everypony else in Glitterglen might have done... but it was none of her business.

As Khenal finishes his tale, she has gained a completely new perspective on the princess, as well as Khenal himself.  She looks up from the floor to meet his eyes again and says,
"Khenal... I'm sorry to hear all of that.  But... the past is behind us I suppose."  She sighs.  "If only the princess had learned from her past like you clearly have..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 03, 2012, 01:58:18 am
I sigh and shake my head sadly.

"If only... and if only I had learned it before I made that mistake..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 03, 2012, 02:01:59 am
Kris felt a bit more down now after seeing Khenal like this, but she wasn't going to let him be alone in this.  She raises a hoof to the bars.  "It's... okay.  Everypony makes mistakes... sometimes big ones.  Are... are you okay?  I don't have anywhere to be.  I can stay a little while if you'd like."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 03, 2012, 05:22:41 pm
I sigh, not really 'okay', but not terrible, either.  I then smiles a bit when Kris offers to stay.

"That'd... be nice if you could stay, Kris.  I've mostly come to terms with my past, but... it's hard to keep control when Hugwax is here, flaunting my mistakes and... just being Hugwax."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 04, 2012, 01:53:47 am
Kris , smiles, nods and finds a slightly more comfortable position to get in.  She wasn't too sure what she was going to talk about now, but being here with Khenal was more than she would be doing otherwise.  Come to think of it, she never really had spoken with him all that much.  Maybe just taking a little time to get to know him would be the best thing to do.  It might help take his mind off of things anyway, although after what he'd told her maybe not.  She'd find out anyway.

She settles down on the floor near the bars and prepares to stay for a little while.  Maybe somepony else would come by and visit Khenal soon.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on May 11, 2012, 10:40:34 pm
((Big update incoming, and it only covers 5 months in game time.))

Charity's Journal 22nd Slate 102

My son is married today. Kris and Adamant finally tied the knot. However, there was an incident at the reception. Captain Demora and Captain Khenal got into a fight. No pony was hurt, but both are in jail for the night. Friesden was very upset. I managed to gather that Demora had been unpleasant to her, but I did not witness the event myself. Isos only wants to hold them overnight so they can cool down, so hopefully this be behind us soon.

Charity's Journal 23rd Slate 102

I went down with Friesden to see Khenal's release this morning, and was enraged to discover that Princess Hugwax had been here last night and pardoned Captain Demora after less than an hour of confinement, and to top it off she has ordered Isos to give Khenal the maximum sentence. My guard captain. The pony I trust both mine and my family's lives to is being held for the next two months! And I can't do anything about it, her orders supersede mine and prevent me from pardoning him. Friesden was inconsolable. I promised Khenal I'd visit him when I could and he had me bring a few books from his home down for him to read.

Charity's Journal 13th Felsite 102

I went out to stand on the wall today. The ponies were working hard on the road and in the small surface fields inside the walls. I was surprised to see the Princess standing up there as well next to her guard Captain Demora. I bowed and then we watched the workers together.

Up there on the wall, out of earshot of the others, she said some things to me about the workers. I won't repeat what words she used, but she has absolutely no respect for our laborers. I was so shocked I didn't even know what to say, I just nodded along with whatever she said. After nearly half an hour of this, I saw an old earthpony stallion, with the name of Groveflower one of our haulers, carrying an entire Elephant pony corpse on his back, alone. It was quite a feat of strength, even for an earthpony. There was enough meat on that animal to feed the whole fort for a month. But the Princess just wrinkled her nose in disgust and ordered that that “disgusting thing” be drug back into the jungle and left there. I and Groveflower tried to explain why we were bringing it inside, but...she got angry, she had Groveflower whipped, by Demora with her silver lash, (He is okay, she told Demora to “cut but don't kill”) for arguing with her and had somepony else throw the food away.

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Charity's Journal 19th Felsite 102

The Ducal Guard and I went on another hunting trip, this time into the caverns, we took down 3 Elk Birds, it was a good time, we were out there for a week or so but it was good to be away from work for awhile. It was a shame that Khenal couldn't accompany us this time though.

Charity's Journal 9th Hematite 102

I have stained my hooves with blood today. We had a prisoner, a lone tentacle pony thief. Naturally I sentenced him to death, but, I carried out the execution myself. There was a mistake though. The prisoner was chained down and I was to kill him with my Large Adamantine Knife, but he managed to slip free. He ran. I chased him. I grabbed him, and slashed off his right rear leg with two swings, and then I stabbed him, multiple times, but he just wouldn't die, and I pulled back his screaming head and cut it from his body, only then did he stop. I don't know what to think. He was just a Diomedian, I shouldn't feel anything for his death, but the way he screamed and begged for his life and called out to his unholy god to save him. Sisters give me strength, I don't think I will ever forget it. I'm going to go talk to Khenal about this, maybe he can help ease my conscious.

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((9th Hematite 102 Afternoon after Charity cleans most of the blood from her robe and changes her clothes.))

Charity walks slowly down the hall toward the cell where her guard captain Khenal is being held. As she reaches it she looks through the bars at him, “Khenal, I...can we talk for a bit?” she asks. As Khenal looks to her he sees that she looks quite disheveled, her mane a mess, her cloak on crooked and...blood on the bottom edge of her cloak.

Khenal quickly stands when he notices the blood at the edge of her cloak, again wishing he wasn’t behind bars.  “Of course, Charity.  What’s happened?”

Charity looks Khenal in the eyes, hers are slightly red, ‘Had she been crying?’ “There, there was an accident Khenal. No...nopony from Glitterglen was hurt, but I had to kill him...The way he screamed, the look on his face...I...” Charity begins to tear up again and chokes back a sob.

Khenal bites back asking who, letting Charity decide when and what to tell him.  Instead, he approaches the bars and reaches a hoof through to try to rest it on her shoulder in a small gesture of assurance.

Charity nuzzles Khenal’s hoof, before continuing. “It, it was that blasted thief, that we caught a month or two back, that caused this. That tentacle pony. I...I sentenced him to death, but I...I decided to do it myself, but when I was getting ready to do it...he slipped through the chains and tried to run.”

Khenal stays quiet, trying to give Charity the shoulder to cry on and the ear to listen like she needs.

Charity continues her story, “When...when he tried to run, I swung my knife at him and the blue metal blade cut through his rear leg like a knife through butter. The leg flew off and his blood flew everywhere. He was screaming. He begged for mercy. Calling to his unholy god to save him. I was afraid. I just wanted him to stop... I stabbed him. Again and again but he wouldn't stop...and, and I cut his neck and the blade just went right through, through muscle and arteries and even bone, his head just just came right off, and I was soaked in his blood. He finally had stopped, but it was terrible. I just....He was a diomedian, a monster. I shouldn’t care about him...but when I close my eyes. I can still see him clutching his stump of a leg. I can still hear his screams...Still see his face as my blade severs his head from his body. What do I do Khenal?”

“I... I don’t know, Charity.  The faces... fade with time, but never go away.  Taking a life is never easy.  All you can do is to try to be better... try to avoid more death, or... or give it swiftly if it’s needed.”

After several minutes of quiet in which Charity just sits there holding onto Khenal’s hoof she adds, “I’m, sorry to burden you with this Khenal...I’m sorry you have to see me getting so upset over this. I’m...I’m supposed to be the leader of these lands and here I am, blubbering over a worthless thief. I’m not cut out to rule...I’m sorry.”

Khenal gently grips her jaw, pointing her to be able to look into his eyes as he gives a soft smile.  “You are, by far, the most fit to rule I have ever seen, Charity.  Only somepony like Hugwax would treat life like nothing.  You rule with compassion and give fair punishment, and wish you didn’t have to.  It’s your burden, but you’re strong, Charity.  And you have friends and family to help you, and to remind you to stay compassionate.”

Charity nods, and wipes away a tear, “Thank you Khenal. Thank you for listening, and...for being my friend. You are among the best of us. Thank you.”

Khenal’s smile slips only slighty at that, but quickly recovers.  The first death was always hard... but all the other lives he’s cost other ponies hurt just as much.
((End Scene))
((New Scene Starts))
9th Hematite, 102 Evening

A few hours after her talk with Khenal, feeling a bit better, Charity, with Osal in tow, makes her way to the cabin of Starkey and Otik. It was late and she hoped she would not be interrupting them. As she reaches the door, she raises her hoof and knocks.

After only a few moments, the door opens a crack, and Starkey peeks out. “Hello? Oh, Miss Charity! Please, come in.”

Charity makes a forced smile at Starkey before telling Osal to wait outside, and making her way in. Without speaking she sits herself by the table. Charity appears to have been crying earlier, though she seems calm now, her mane is all messed up, and there is a bit of blood on the edges of her cloak. Otik is seated at the table, with a cup of hot tea in her hooves. She stands as Charity enters, taking a moment to look her over.

“G’d evenin’ Miss Charity. Beggin yer pardon, but... is everythin’ alright? Ye dunnae look too well.”

Charity hangs her head, “I, am sorry for bothering you two at such a late hour, but there was...an incident earlier, nopony from Glitterglen was hurt, but I needed, to apologize to you. Especially to you Starkey. I should have listened to you.”

Starkey takes his seat beside Otik, taking his own cup. “Should have listened to me when? What’s happened?”

Charity looks up them and looks from one face to another, “About the prisoners. We had a tentacle pony taken prisoner. He was caught trying to take a foal. I had sentenced him to death, but instead of having him duel a member of the militia, like we usually do...I...was going to execute him myself. Just a quick cut across the neck to end his life...but there was an accident and it turned bad.”

Otik pours a cup of tea and passes it to Charity, scooting a little closer to her. “Go on...”

Charity takes the tea and begins to sip at it. “Thank you.” She pauses for a moment before she continues. “When...when I went to execute him, he slipped through the chains. Madush hadn’t restrained him properly. I...I lashed out at him. I swung my blue metal knife as he tried to run past me toward the door. It cut through his leg with hardly any resistance. He fell one way, the leg fell another. He was on the ground, rolling in pain, blood squirting everywhere, he was screaming, and begging for mercy, and calling on his unholy god to save him. I...I didn’t know what to do. I was afraid. I was angry. I just wanted it to stop. I stabbed him and cut him, but he wouldn’t stop, not until...I cut his head from his body. I was soaked in his blood. And and....I just...I wish it hadn’t...I’m sorry...It wasn’t supposed to happen like that.”

Otik slides over,putting a hoof on Charity’s withers. “There... I know ye never meant f’r this t’happen...”

Charity looks to Starkey, “Starkey...I don’t know if you can forgive me, but I would hate to lose you as a friend, and I’m sorry it happened like it did.”

Starkey sighs, meeting her eyes form across the table. “I’m not angry,Charity. And I do forgive
you. But... now do you understand?”

Charity nods, “I...think I do, and I won’t let it happen like this again.”

“I... I suppose that’s the best I can ask for..”

“Wos there anytihn’ else ye wanted t’talk about? We were jus’ about t’start dinner, if ye’d like t’stay a while.”

Charity shakes her head in agreement, “Yes, I...I would like to stay for dinner, if you are okay with that Otik, I don’t want to impose.”

Otik shakes her head. “not at all. Th’evenin’ is always best shared with friends.”

Charity invites Osal to join them inside, and the four ponies sit together and take dinner together.

((End Scene))

Charity's Journal 16th Hematite 102

Work on the southern road is coming along well, we are nearing completion, we have run low on our colbatite supplies, but I have requested the construction of more and at our current rate we should no run out. The works find it difficult to work with the annual parasprite swarms harassing them, the militia is doing it's part in dealing with the pests, but they are difficult to catch and many in number. Captain Jaxler is having the Skyguard use them as target practice, Otik did the same when she was captain and the newer recruits can use the practice at hitting moving targets.

Charity’s Journal 23th Hematite 102

Khenal was released today. I also had something to show him. It was a bit awkward to explain, but we have finished construction on a proper tomb for him and Friesden. It is carved into the marble layer across from Falcata's tomb. It has twin bismuth bronze sarcophagi for them, separated by a statue of the bronze colossus (should have been in bronze, but I asked for a steel statue for the tomb without specifying a form so Mr. Forgefire is responsible for that decision.) being slain by our militia in steel. On both sides of the door we have rose gold statues as added decoration. The walls are unengraved, and will remain as such until the unfortunate day when the tomb is no longer empty. I'm not exactly sure how Khenal felt about the prospect of having such a space set aside for him and his wife, but I didn't want to risk them ending up like Falcata, without us being prepared.

Charity's Journal 24th Hematite 102

Not much progress was made on the roads yet, but the parasprite swarm has been dealt with. Their numbers are greatly reduced or they have flown away back into the deep jungle. This should speed our progress.

Charity's Journal 10th Malachite 102

One of our stonecarvers was exploring the caverns searching for new resourses, when he spotted the largest cave spider (by his reports) that any of us have ever seen. He said it was with a group of rodent men in the southern expanse of the cavern. If we could use that creature to harvest silk...but that would be incredibly dangerous to attempt. Still I will talk with my military advisers.

Charity's Journal 12th Malachite 102

Ramol went out to scout the rodent man tribe himself yesterday. He thought going alone would allow him to be undetected. We should have sent somepony with actual stealth training such as Schmutz or Traphe, but hindsight is 20/20.  His scent was picked up by a blind giant mole rat. He could have killed them, but we still have hopes of taking their spider alive so he made a tactical retreat.

Charity's Journal 13th Malachite 102

We have our first blood in this endeavor, a craftspony was ambushed by a rodent man. It bit his wing, but he managed to break free and escape, he is not badly hurt and will fly again. The rodent man then swerved off and killed a tamed cougar cub, no real loss. However do to this attack we are putting the fort in high alert, until this is dealt with.

Charity's Journal 17th Malachite, 102

Scouts have told us the the rodent men are scattered and disorganized, and most importantly that they are far from their cave spider. We are beginning two separate actions. To the south, Granite is carving out a new tunnel to come up under the GCS to try and get it to follow him into a preset cage trap. Meanwhile Ramol and his squad of spear ponies are trying to deal with our Rat problem to the north, they have orders to avoid the GCS however.

Charity's Journal 19th Malachite, 102

Another pony has been taken by one of these curious moods. She has taken claim of the craftshop on the forge level which we usually just use for decorating metal work. This time it's an earthpony mare that was taken, she has no real skills, so I wonder what she will make.

Charity's Journal 21st Malachite 102

When Granite broke the surface the spider was no longer where reports had placed it. It was spotted a bit east of there again. Grifen is setting out to dig another tunnel closer to it's new position, he is volunteering to act as bait. Our prayers are with him that he will be swift.

Charity's Journal 22nd? Malachite, 102

A migrant arrived today, a lone unicorn mare. She says she's a doctor, family name Fancyguises. I don't know why or how she crossed the jungle to reach us, but more doctors can't hurt. I introduced her to Dr. Bubbles and they seemed to get along.

Charity's Journal 25th Malachite, 102

We have, suffered a set back. The giant cave spider is dead, as is mister Firstsong, our Master Blacksmith. He was always a loner, but many of the tools we use everyday were crafted by his hooves. Hugwax is livid. She had taken a personal interest in this endeavor and when she heard that Ramol's squad rushed in to fight the spider to try and save Firstsong, she was not happy. Hopefully she will let this go with time.

Charity's Journal 26th Malachite, 102

For his disregarding the orders the capture the GCS alive, Hugwax is placing Demora as his direct superior. Meaning he will take orders from her instead of from me. And if that wasn't bad enough she is having his whole squad beaten as an example. I argued his case but she would not listen. Hugwax and her followers have taken away my ability to command the military, and I fear she won't stop there.

Commander Ramol suffered a broken left front leg and sever bruising elsewhere.

Private 2nd Class Umil had his left front hoof broken and bruises all along that leg.

Private 1st Class Kussad, he was punished by Captain Demora personally and he got the worst of it, sever cuts along his upper and lower body, his left wing, and left front leg, and a gash across his right check where she ended her lashing. He is currently having trouble breathing, Friesden is looking over the wounded she thinks his lung is bruised.

Charity’s Journal 1st Galena, 102

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The earthpony mare that was taken by a mood finished her work. It is a beautiful bracelet, made of tunnel tube wood. It is very nice and worth more than she is paid in two years, but still, I wish it had been something we could use.

Charity's Journal 4th Galena, 102

My eldest daughter Belle has become a mare today, there was a small party for friends and family only. She will be making a living as a singer/musician in the dinning hall from this day on.

Charity's Journal 13th Galena, 102

A zebra caravan has been spotted coming from the south-west. Demora has put 1st Lieutenant Kris in charge of providing an escort for them.

Charity's Journal 18th Galena, 102

Today, I am a grandmother. Kris had her foal at long last, a little unicorn filly. Adamant was so happy. And Cyptson was ecstatic. I wish Falcata was here to see this. Well I'm sure she was, but I wish she had been here physically, you know. The filly's name is Lorica, she has her mother's rainbow hair and a coat just a bit lighter than Adamant's, and she is a beautiful little filly.

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Charity's Journal 20th Galena, 102

The Zebra traders have all but finished setting up the market in the soil layer, and our broker Adamant was looking over our collection of fine silks and cloths that we were going to trade to them, but an order came down from the Princess. No silk or cloth goods are to leave Glitterglen. This is insane. Most of the wealth brought into Glitterglen is from the export of Onol and Noleth's work (not to mention the gemcutters, weavers, farmers, miners, plant processors, dyers, and millers they keep employed with there business), and most of their considerable personal wealth comes from selling their work to ponies all over the world. Without this source of income they are ruined, and without our primary export, so is Glitterglen.

I have pleaded with the Princess to change her mind, I have begged her to remove this pointless ban, she has said that she is trying to get a new dress and nothing “Those two useless Skewer-headed mules who's horns would be better used as knitting needles,” (this was the nicest thing she called them during the whole talk, I couldn't possible repeat the other things she said) have made was good enough, so she is halting all cloth export until they make something she likes.

Even worse for Onol and Noleth is that she paid them upfront for one dress, but as she throws away completed design after completed design she hasn't give them anything extra at all, and with this new law they can't sell the finished work elsewhere, additionally, they are (rightfully, knowing the Princess) afraid to ask for more compensation.

Charity's Journal 22nd Galena, 102

I have thought it over, and I can't stand to see all these ponies suffer from this, but I know what I am  going to. I'm in charge of the bookkeeping, in her months here she has not once had my work checked, I'm also the mayor and in charge of work orders, and with my authority as Duchess, and my eldest sons as our broker and work manager I think we can cover up our actions. Now we just need some ponies I can trust...

Khenal...I trust him more than anypony, when I told him my plan he was more than willing to lend his magic to help.

Otik and Starkey...As loyal as Otik is to Glitterglen it was no surprise that she would want to help. Starkey told me honestly that he had his reservations about it, but when I explained the depth of the situation and how many ponies it would affect he signed on.

Kris...When I told her that I needed Adamant's help for this to work and that it would put him in danger, I was worried she would be upset with me, especially so soon after they just had their first foal, but she just laughed and told me she just wanted to help, no matter what the risk.

Friesden...She is a kind soul and wanted to help, but I didn't know what role she could take in this. She has no training in stealth or combat, and while a medic might help if fighting with the guard breaks out, if we do have to fight, it would likely mean we've been found out, and I don't want her to be involved if it comes to that, but she'll be helping us, by watching the foals when needed, and helping us look over the forged paperwork and making sure it all looks legit.

Together we will be able to make sure Glitterglen's business remains open, even if it must be from the shadows.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 13, 2012, 09:23:44 pm
Kris' Diary - 22nd Slate, 102

Today was probably the happiest day of my life.  Today Addy and I finally got married!  I've been looking forward to this day for a long time, but to finally have it come felt almost surreal.  The stallion I love so much is now my husband!  It really has been the happiest day of my life.  Even if it wasn't perfect like every little filly dreams their wedding will be.

First and foremost, my mom and dad weren't there to see it.  Well, I suppose they really were, out of sight but watching over us.  I still wish they could have been there in person.  All of Addy's family was there of course, so I wasn't short on family, but I couldn't help but feel a bit upset that my parents weren't there.

Things went a bit poorly at the reception though.  I'll admit I didn't know much about Princess Hugwax, but I assumed she was a reasonable pony.  After what her royal guard did though, I can't help but wonder.  Her captain, whose name I gather is Demora, was very rude to Friesden and Khenal.  That actually escalated to the point where Captain Isos had to step in and break them up.  Both were given a night in jail for the disturbance.

I don't blame Khenal at all.  I just can't believe that Demora.  She deserves a night in jail, but Khenal was only doing what was right.

I'm pretty angry about the whole situation, but Addy told me it was best to drop it.  They'll both be out in the morning, and this will all be a memory soon enough.

And besides, I've got the rest of my life together with Addy to look forward to.  I'm going to stop writing now before I get too upset.

23rd Slate, 102

I was pretty angry at Demora last night, but I don't think that compares to how furious I am at Princess Hugwax today.  I admit I didn't know much about her before she came to Glitterglen, but I assumed she was a reasonable pony.  After all, she's the ruler of our principality.  You'd have to be pretty reasonable to do that sort of thing, I thought.

I was wrong.

She had the nerve to pardon her lecherous captain and force Khenal to remain in jail for two months!  For protecting his wife!

I talked with Khenal for a while today, both to give him some company and to help keep his mind off of things.  What he told me was pretty mind blowing.  I won't repeat everything he said to me here, but he's done a lot of things in the past... some of them pretty bad.  I'd have never guessed that somepony like him could be responsible for that sort of thing.

But... for as long as I've known him he's been a kind and caring pony.  Mom always told me he was a good pony, and I believe her.  I believe he is a good pony.  He's learned from his mistakes.

But not Hugwax.  I... I don't know how to describe it.  She's... well, Khenal thinks she is evil.  After what he told me... I'm not sure I disagree.

I'm scared.  She's here, and she has authority over Charity.  I fear what she might do now.

9th Hematite, 102

Addy told me today that his mom had a pretty serious scare today.  She killed one of the diomedian prisoners.  I know how she feels.  I still remember killing that thief.  The one who foalnapped me and tried to take me from my mom.  That was very hard.  You never forget what that's like.  Ever.  Even now, after serving in the militia and seeing a lot more death than I'd have ever cared to, it's still hard.

I'll never for as long as I live forget what it was like watching grandpa Starkey get killed right before me, or seeing grandma Otik's corpse lying in the caverns... or sisters help me what it was like to see my mother slowly fade from this world in agony.

Killing a prisoner is different, but not as much as you'd think.  Death is hard to watch, no matter how you see it.

23rd Hematite, 102

Khenal was released today, which was good to hear.  Hugwax pushed for a maximum sentence, and she got what she wanted.  I feel like I've been walking on coals around her every time I see her.  If I make the slightest slip, she could do the same to me.

It's wearing on my nerves, but so far it hasn't turned out to be anything but me worrying.  I don't need this stress right now.  I don't think I've written about this yet, but I found out recently that I'm pregnant.

I suspected it for a while, when my armor didn't really fit anymore, and I've been steadily getting bigger.  Faster than would be reasonable for just gaining weight.  Anyway, I stopped by the hospital yesterday to get checked out, and Venture confirmed it's true.

I'm pretty excited, but also worried even more for it.  Bringing a child into this world... Hugwax's world... it's scary.  I wouldn't wish that on my unborn child, but nature decides for itself I suppose.

26th Malachite, 102

I said before I feared what Hugwax might do next, but now I know, and I'm even more afraid.  A giant cave spider was spotted in the caverns below, and Captain Ramol personally oversaw the attempt to claim it.  When he failed and ended up killing the spider, Hugwax placed that horrible Demora above him and had him and his squad beaten as an example.  What madness grips this mare?  I can't believe she'd do something so senseless, even after what Khenal told me.

Worst of all, now that she is giving the militia orders, she can order me to do anything.

I hope she doesn't ask me to do something horrible like that.  I don't think I could go through with it if she did, and I'd just have to take whatever punishment she gave me instead.

And I dare her to do something to my husband.  If she lays a hoof on him, she'll lay a hoof on nopony else ever again.

18th Galena, 102

Today was an extreme surprise, to say the least.  Venture told me I wasn't due for a while yet, but I went into labor early this morning.  I was pretty scared, and I think Addy was too, but everything worked out for the best.  We hurried off to the hospital where everpony dropped what they were doing and started tending to me.

Childbirth is painful in ways I can't really relate on paper, nor could I have imagined it beforehoof.  I was in labor for a few hours, and none of it was pleasant at all.  Regardless, it was worth every moment of it.

Little Lorica entered the world today, and I couldn't be happier.  She's the most beautiful little unicorn filly I've ever seen.  She has my mane, my mother's eyes, and her coat is lavender.  She's just beautiful.

I was worried with her coming prematurely that there would be problems, but she's a strong and healthy little filly nevertheless.

I'm exhausted though.  Giving birth will do that to you.  I'm going to need a while to rest up and to get to know our little foal.  Addy was so happy when he got to hold her, and so am I when I'm holding her.  She's just beautiful.

One more thing I wish mom and dad could be here to see...

22nd Galena, 102

Charity stopped by today to ask me about something very serious, and a bit frightening.  She's planning on trying to subvert Hugwax's cloth ban, due to the overwhelming strain it's putting on our economy and many of the workers.  It's a very risky thing to do, and she needs Addy's help.  I'll admit I'm scared about the possibilities.  If anything happens to either of them I'm going to be crushed.  And righteously vexed with Hugwax.

I'm very worried about it, but I told Charity that I'd help in any way I can.  After what I've come to know of Hugwax, I hate her.  I want her and any influence she has gone.  I'm not going to raise my newborn child under her oppressive rule.  Anything I can do to help get around her is welcome.  And once again, I dare her to harm Addy or his family.  I dare her.

She didn't tell me much more than that, so maybe she hasn't really planned on what to do yet.  But I'll help in any way I can.

For now though, I'm exhausted and I'm going to bed.  Raising a newborn foal is more work than I could have imagined, even if it's a labor of love.  Addy and I will have to take turns feeding her through the night.  It's exhausting, but worth every moment.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on May 14, 2012, 03:41:24 am
THE BAR

“About last night...”

Hiero and Willow sat at adjoined booths at the bar, hair disheveled and dark ringed eyes sleep deprived.

“That? That was ...” Hiero looks at the slight cut in his right leg from where the handcuff had been.   “That was... I don’t know what that was, But I loved it.”

“Don’t think that’sa gonn’a to be a regular thing now. That was a one - time thing.”
Willow stated bluntly with hint of saccharine affection

Hiero frowned “ye-ouch,so what are you saying?”

Willow sighed apologetically, realising how course that might sound

“Nah, I-”

She pauses

 “I mean, I love ya hiero, just don’t expect weddin’ bells anytime soon, as colts like ta’ do. Don’t expect this to go anywhere pas’ this. I’m just a not the ‘settle down’ type”

Hiero was relieved

“That is Fine with me, the last time I thought about Wedding bells my bride-to-be kind of choked to death on noxious gas. I’m fine with no wedding bells.”

Willow spat out her shot

“Uh wha-!? Oh, Falcata, right.”

Hiero lifts his glass in the air

“Here’s to Falcata, the toughest Soldier to ever come out of Glitterglen!”

The other patrons of the bar also raised their glasses and shouted a unanimous “here here!”

Willow slides her red bang back

“I’m glad you fine with that.”

Hiero grinned

“casual sex with no commitment or responsibility on my part? How am I going to live on? “

They both plastered big dumb grins on their faces, locked the each other's legs at the elbow and downed their shots, then locked lips. they held that pose until

“So... what do you get out of all of this?”

Willow leans back

“guess you’re my big stress ball’, when I get nowhere ‘n this this cold case i’m work’in on.”

“Oooh, you’re on a secret mission, huh?”

“Guess you could say that.”

“I’ve been around, I know alot of history about this place. Maybe I can help with that.”

“Maybe. What do you know about a Couth Darkmane?”

“Sorry, that was before my time. All I know is he was trouble.”

“Yeah, ‘I been get’in that alot.” she said with a morose twinge

Hiero looked at her a shrewd look

“So... Is this for Khenal, Or?”

Willows eyes darted left

“Yeah... It’s just been on Khenal’s backburner forever so I said I would look into it”

“But why? That was four years ago.”

“Right, uh-”

She was starting to sweat now

“Every case is important! Even the old ones.”

Hiero cocked his head

“He tried to kill Charity, Charity stabbed him in the chest with her horn and rendered him into a fine red paste with a forcefield spell. What’s to close?”

Willow almost fell back in her stool

“Haha, what? I- what do you mean the pony I swore to protect killed my-  WHAT!?” she cried with almost a contempt in her voice

Hiero tried to keep her stable

“It’s all right! Yeah, Charity defended herself. Khenal didn’t tell you any of this?”
Hiero inquired

Right when you think you see the whole picture-’ Willow thought

“Are you alright?”

“Hah, Oh, more than alright. It alllll makes sense now.  Hugwax is going to die.” she said with A cryptic smile

There was a long awkward pause

“Well, Ok then-” Hiero eyed her with caution while he backed his last drink

“I need to go... -do- something.”

Hiero’s interest was piqued now, he was going straight to Khenal’s office  to see what Willow was on about.

“Hahah!”

“The Bar’s about to close, are you-?”

“One more dirnk...Then I’ll be good.”Willow slurred woozily

Hiero shrugged and left along other patrons

“All right, last one.” the bartender said

“Great, great, Oh! hold on!” Willow whipped a small vial on poured half the contents into her drink

“What’s that?” The bartender wondered

“Oh this? whip out a glass and find out! It’s good.” Willow beamed

The bartender, curious, tried a glass with the rest of the contents

“That IS good! what is that?”

“Eastern fell jungle Snake poison” Willow over-enunciated with broad ‘E’s

“Which is?” The bartender asked, not quite following

“You know, Venom from snake, Idiot!” Willow laughed

“I-what!?....I-I-*Ack* The bartetnder gargled, haze white encroaching on the edges of his vision

“Side effects include inducing slight inflammation in the back of the skull, which presses on tha’ back of the spine’s base,  slipping tha’ victim into an unconscious state. She recited warmly

“why would you.....” he bartender moaned

ya’ know, it’s funny, I wass sooooo worried my former boss was gonna’ slip this stuff to mah’ ‘n have his way with me  I’ built a tolerace to the stuff. I started takin’ a sip, tha’ it turn into a teaspoon, tha’ a tabel spoon. then I...

She realised her audience was asleep, and stroked his mane. Then She turns her attention the bar’s hearth (fireplace), which she wanted to take a look at ever since she walked in. It’s wholly unremarkable, just a typical cobblestone outlet with an iron grate and some coals, if it weren't  for the small insignia chiseled into one of the stones she might have overlooked it.


That was the Startame insignia. That was meant to grab her attention. What was Couth hiding? she looked the wall over and over until she found a keyhole. False wall, clever. she gave the door a swift kick, it held fast. she grumbled, and looked around to see if she could macgyver lockpicks out of anything nearby. a bottle opener and a toothpick did the job. the door swung open to reveal a claustrophobic stairwell that slowly delved down into a black abyss. ‘Oh perfect! Nothing but good things come out of dungeons, right?’ Willow thought sarcastically.

Willow snapped off a nearby chair leg, wrapped a table cloth around the broken end, smashed a bottle of alcohol across the cloth wad, saturating it with flammable booze, held the stick up to the unconscious unicorn bartender’s horn, slammed his head on the granite bar table, which, though a synapse in his brain, produced a spark out of his horn, and viola! a torch the old fashioned way. Willow descended into the unknown.


Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: DVNO on May 17, 2012, 11:24:58 pm
  Willow descends down, down, down, the winding steps , Into the absolutely enveloping dark of the catacombs beneath the bar. The width of the hall receded into a choking breadth. Did you know Willow was claustrophobic? She inhaled the cold, unnatural stale air sharply and started to shake, the thought of the fact she couldn't turn around in this small of a space unnerving her to the core. The stairwell finally gave way to a small room. Straight in front of Willow, there was a plain table, a dinner for one had been prepared. Willow recoiled at the stench of the venison on the table, near eaten out with black mold. On the left wall was a massive web-plot, an array of red,blue and green twine attached to pictures. On the right side was a uncomfortable looking straw bed with a large black book lying on the pillow. on the back wall was a wall sized carving of Princess Hugwax and the chimera Discord in a passionate embrace. Willow took a walk over to the web-plot. the wall was covered with painstakingly hand-drawn pictures of what must have been every single pony at the time before he died. The pictures were twisted characters of their subjects, emphasizing personality flaws and faults Couth must have perceived. Khenal’s picture, for example, portrayed an aggressive looking alicorn with demonic green eyes and a snake-like tongue, uncontrollable power surging out. A red piece of twine from that picture connected to Friesden’s picture, A mare with a frightful look in her eye, hoofmarks perforating her entire body. She looked down at the legend. Red ment a loved one or family member, Blue, a Friendship, Green, a grudge. She scoured the plot for Couth himself, and found it on the periphery, attached to nothing. He died without a friend in the world. That made Willow feel empty, just so...hollow. like she failed him somehow. a single tear dropped, and she allowed no more. “you gave him everything - everything to turn out right. It’s not your fault, It’s not.” She murmured, but her words were just as hollow. She sighed, flopped onto the bed and flipped through the black book.

Couth’s Diary

Entry 1

  The bitch lied. The bitch lied to me. Hugwax crawled into my head and told me to kill charity. she whispered in my ear if I did this, I would live like a king. She filled my head with white noise whenever I thought  up an objection. Now the deed is done, and she’s finally silent.

The bitch lied to me.

Entry 2

My stunt at the trial bought me some time. Some ponies are concerned about the power pact Charity, Starkey, and Khenal have over the fort. A few are even willing to do something about it. If I play these cards I’ve been dealt with some strategy, I can still come out of this on top.

Entry 3

It’s over. It’s all over. the ‘cult’ has been rounded up by the Commissar, and they’ll come for me and Bokbon next. I’m loading her up with all the coin I have saved at the Bar and getting her to Talintranced.  I’m going to Psycho Carrot’s grave and fighting the Commissar head-on to buy her some time. She told me she'll tell stories to our child how heroic his father was. Heroic. Heroism. A hero is just a pony who knows he’s lost. Indeed I am a hero. A hero like my white knight sister Willow.

For her and Bokbon I will not run. I will stand, with my shoulders square and tall, and take my bow with pride.  Willow, when you read this diary, and I know you will, you won't rest until you do, just know that you were right. no matter how hard I shouted you down, you were always right. And that hunch in that back of your mind saying that even after what you did to me, and how it put me in this situation in the first place, I still love you? That was right aswell."

Willow let the book fall from her hooves

 A phrase the Princess and Mr. Startame said so long ago rattled around her head over and over and over. It’s been blaring since Hiero mentioned Couth and Charity in the same sentence.

“...and this Street Rat can kill that glorified embezzler Charity?” Hugwax inquired

“...Anything can be done, for a price.” Startame grinned

Now, too late, all the pieces fit together

“Hux Is going to die!” Willow screamed

((end scene))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on May 24, 2012, 02:19:40 am
((This. This will probably be the final fortress update for Glitterglen. The scenes that follow this one, will lead to the end. It has been a pleasure writing this tale with you all, and I wouldn't trade the time I spent on this for anything. Thank you all for putting up with this. When I started this all those months ago, I couldn't have imagined it would get this big, and I'm so happy with how it all turned out. Thank you those who helped make this story happen. And if there is anyone out there either now, or in the future who has read all this non-sense. Thank you as well, for giving us all a chance. I hope you enjoyed this story half as much as I did. But Glitterglen isn't done just yet. We still have one more chapter to write.))

Charity's Journal 19th Galena, 102

Today, my friends and family and myself, all became criminals. Adamant negotiated with the zebra caravan, explained about the export ban, and took great personal risk to offer to work with them to get around it. Officially, we traded them a few totems, some junk the Diomedians had and a number of silver and gold trinkets and goblets for a very nice profit, truthfully, when we factor in the value in cloth work we snuck past the Royal Guard, and they made a small fortune in profit. However, they are taking a huge risk in helping us. I personally paid the tailors for their work, and while they didn't make as much as they are accustomed to having, the looks on their faces when I handed them that sack of bits made it all worth it. They will be able to keep their business running and their families fed, at least until the next caravan.

Charity's Journal 15th Limestone, 102

We had a close call. It was only thanks to Traphe overhearing the Royal Guard planning the night before that we were able to warn the traders. They were going to search the traders for any contraband before allowing them to leave. I asked Khenal about putting a small illusion over the exports, but he informed me that Demora is a null and if she got to near an illusion it would probably fail. Thus we needed another plan.

Instead what we did was the night before was Starkey and Khenal helped one of the zebras sneak the crates of silk and cloth out into the jungle were the caravan would pick them up on their way out. Otik, with a bit of help from Kris, provided a distraction for guards taking watch on the surface, while I had a late meeting with Hugwax and Demora to make sure they weren't around, while the others worked. It all went perfectly.

Charity's Journal 3rd Sandstone, 102

A single migrant arrived today. An earthpony fisher, named, Kerlig Fedscale. He has no other skills. He was incredibly skinny, but I offered him a position in the guard here, anyway, and he accepted. Isos will have some work to do whipping him into something that can intimidate anypony, but he seems to be a good sort of pony.

Charity's Journal 13th Sandstone, 102

Today the roads for the jungle are officially finished, but actual construction finished up a week ago. Khenal threw a party for all the ponies involved in the work yesterday, it was very pleasant.

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Khenal%20throws%20a%20party.png)

But with that work finally complete that means, we can finally begin work on the new defensive walls around the city. It's time to take back the surface!

Charity's Journal 14th Sandstone, 102

There was a training accident today in the arena, fortunately no pony was hurt. 1st Lieutenant Kris and her squad were set to do some live training with captured rodentman. However, somepony, forgot to lock the door before freeing the prisoners, and one of the rodent men made it out into the hall were he attacked, Istbar, one of the mechanics, he managed to kill it himself though, with naught but his bare hooves and is unharmed.

Word quickly reached the Princess's ears about the accident. She sent Tor and Pound down to lecture Kris, and strip her of her command. She hasn't been demoted but Moral was made the new Captain, and she now answers directly to him, instead of to the higher ups.

I'm not happy about this at all. Moral has a reputation and I don't like Kris being his subordinate. But I can't do anything about it, officially, since I don't have command of our armed forces any longer.

Charity's Journal 28th Sandstone, 102

One of the pegasan weavers has been possessed. Fortunately, it seems to be one of those spirits that just wants to make something. He has taken over one of the clothing shops and is gathering materials. I'll have...I mean I'll suggest to the Princess that a guard be posted near him.

The last time this happened a pony produced the beautiful robes I am wearing now. I look forward to seeing what he makes.

((The following scene took place on the 4th of Timber, 102))

Charity makes her way down the hall towards Khenal and Friesden’s home. She had on her back a small wooden case. Osal made his way behind her, always vigilant but trying to be as unobtrusive to the duchess as he could. When Charity reaches her destination she raises her hoof and knocks thrice upon the door.

Friesden comes to the door, a worried expression changing to relief as she sees who is knocking at her chamber door. “Oh, Charity. Osal. Come in, come in! Khenal’s not here at the moment, but he might be back soon. I think he might be off training... Can I get you something to eat? Something to drink?” She opens the door wide enough for them to get through, showing her three little foals playing by themselves in the corner.

Charity walks right in and begins to move toward the table, setting the elegantly carved wooden box upon the table. On the lid was seven ponies and a wagon traveling, it refers to the founding of Glitterglen by the Vermin of Twilight in 94. The latch is a gold colored metal and the sides of the box are adorned with jade and ivory. “A glass of pegasan ale would be lovely if you have any, Friesden.” says the duchess as she takes a seat.

“I’ll be out here if you need me Duchess.” Says Osal as he moves to stand guard by the door.

“I think we have some, I’ll go get you a glass,” says Friesden as she moves to the room’s cellar, before retrieving a glass of it and returning to the table. “So...Is this about the smuggling thing, Charity?” she asks, placing the glass on the table.

Charity samples the ale, it was wonderful as always, before answering. “In a way it is Friesden, but mostly, it’s because I have a gift for you.” she taps a hoof gently upon the wooden box. “I...hope that it isn’t something you will ever need, but I want you to have it...just in case.” she says with a hint of sadness in her voice.

“W-what do you mean, Charity?” Friesden asks with a hint of fear. “What gift?”

Charity pushes the ornate box toward her friend. “Open it and take a look.” she says.

Friesden builds up her courage for a second before opening the box and looking inside.

As Friesden lifts the lid she sees before her, resting on a bed of velvet a dagger still in its sheath. The sheath appears to be made of worked hoof or horn, the handle is ivory. It menaces with spikes of gold.

“A d-d-d-d-d-d-dagger?” Friesden squeaks. “I...O-o-o-o-o-okay...”
“As I said, I truly hope you never find cause to use it, but...if somepony threatens you or your family,” Charity looks to the foals playing in the corner, “I don’t want you to be unarmed. You are my friend Friesden, and I would not want to see anything happen to you...and with what your husband and I are doing...” Charity leaves the sentence unfinished, Friesden already knew what it would mean if they were caught, there was no reason to mention it again.


“O-o-o-o-o-okay, Charity,” she says with an aside glance to her three little foals playing behind them.

Charity looks back the weapon, “The blade is made of the last processed Adamantine in the fortress. It is incredibly sharp, and Ironya poured her heart into crafting that blade. It is one of her greatest masterpieces. Please be careful not to cut yourself with it. A dagger like that can cut through bone like a knife through butter...I know, I’ve done it.”

Friesden gulps silently, and nods. “O-o-o-okay, Charity.” With three little alicorn foals, where would she put it to keep them safe? She’d have to talk with Khenny about that.

Charity looks at Friesden, she was clearly afraid of the idea of having to use this weapon, maybe even afraid of the weapon itself, “Friesden, you...should ask Khenal to teach you how to use that. He and Cryptson have been teaching me, but I’m afraid I haven’t been a very good student. However, when you know how to use it properly, it might help you feel more comfortable with it.”

“I...I think I will, yes,” Friesden says. “I...Thank you, Charity.”

Charity takes another sip from her drink and looks back to the foals playing. Deciding to change the subject to something a bit more pleasant, she asks, “So Friesden, what’s it like raising three alicorn foals?”

“It’s...It’s a bit tiring...Kris and Adamant have helped us a lot, though. He’s such a sweet colt. You’re lucky to have him as a son.”

((End Scene))

Charity's Journal 7th Timber, 102

The weaver finished his item. A very fine long skirt. He doesn't remember making it though.

Friesden was quite taken with the dress though, so I bought it from the weaver and gifted it to her. I don't know if the silver thread is really her color, but she looks good in whatever she wears anyway.

Charity's Journal 14th Timber, 102

A cave pony caravan has been spotted. As always we are thankful for the trade, but knowing that we must again defy the Princess, does not fill me the hope these meetings once did.

Charity's Journal 19th Timber, 102

I had a new chanfron crafted for Kris. It is a work of art, and strong enough to stop just about anything. I can't wait to give it to her...

((Another gift giving scene))

Charity makes her way down the stairs from her office toward the home of her son and daughter in law. She has a head sized package upon her back and a smile on her face. Upon reaching the door, she knocks three times.

Kris looks up from the sleeping filly in her forelegs with an air of curiosity.  “Just a moment,” she says, heading over to the door.  As she opens it, she sees Charity standing there with a pleasant expression on her face.  “Oh, hello Charity!”

Charity levitates the package so it would not fall as she gives her daughter in law a hug. “Hello Kris, how are you?”

Kris happily returns the hug.  “A bit tired,” she answers truthfully, looking down to Lorica.  “But great otherwise.  How are you?” she asks, making a berth for Charity to join her inside.

Charity makes her way inside, once the door is closed behind her, and she places the package upon the table she says, “Tired, stressed, worried, jumping at my own shadow, same as usual for the past 8 years really, I can’t complain.”

Kris nods in response, unsure if she should make light of it with a chuckle or not.  Charity certainly did have enough to worry about, even before Hugwax showed up.  She notices the package and asks, “What do you have there?”

Charity taps the package with a forehoof and with a smile say, “A present, for you.”

“A present?” she asks, smiling but with an air of curiosity.  “Oh, you didn’t have to do that.”

Charity shakes her head, “No, Kris, I did. And besides...it’s really more of a practical gift anyway. I think you’ll get a lot of use out of it, though I hope you never, need it.”

That piqued her interest for sure.  She cautiously opens the package, wondering what Charity thought she might need, but feared she wouldn’t.

As Kris opens the box she sees resting inside it a beautiful Adamantine chanfron of the highest quality, it was gilded with gold and had Copper wire running around its edges. On the top sticking up next to the hole where her horn would go, was two large ivory; tusks, or teeth or horns, Kris couldn’t be sure. The item was clearly a work of art, but with the base of Adamant, it would be able to protect her from nearly any blow.

Kris takes a moment to absorb the masterful quality of the piece of armor.  “Charity... this... this is beautiful.  It must be worth a fortune.”  She turns her eyes to her mother in law and gives her a large, sincere smile.  “Thank you so much.”  She understood now what Charity meant.  “Is... there a special occasion?”

Charity smiles, “No, no special occasion. But if you want...” Charity looks to her sleeping grandfilly across the room, “Think of it as a late birthday present for Lorica. She certainly wants to see you come back as much as the rest of us.”

That struck home, and she nods gravely.  “And I never want to leave her alone.”

Charity seeing that conversation had taken a turn for the grim, tries to refocus it. “Kris, you might be interested to know where the teeth on your new chanfron came from. They came from that cyclops that Captain Khenal slew. I didn’t know Bokbon had saved them, but when I mentioned wanting her to work on this project she pulled them out of a small case and insisted they be used on it.”

She examines the bony protrusions.  “Ah, yes, that makes sense.  Fitting, considering what happened.”  She tries the chanfron on, and grins as it fits perfectly.  “Do send my thanks,  it really adds something to an already beautiful piece.”

Charity nods, “I’m glad you like it, I shall tell all the ponies who worked on what you think of it.”

“Thank you,” she repeats, placing it back on the table and admiring it again. “I’ll put it to good use, you can be sure of that,” she says stepping back over to Charity and hugging her again.

Charity hugs Kris back, “You are welcome Kris.”

((End scene))


Charity's Journal 10th Moonstone, 102

Hugwax, continues her insane policies, but we traded with the Cavies all the same. Decided to preemptively move the contraband to a hiding place in the jungle. Acquired a lot of goods from them this year. A lot of metal bars and goods. No trouble with the Royal Guard yet.

Charity's Journal 14th Moonstone, 102

There were spottings of a tribe of cave swallow men down in the caves and they had attacked, several of our workers, The hammer and whip squads were dispatched and they sent the animals running after a short fight. Noponies where hurt.

Charity's Journal 15th Moonstone, 102

(http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41621737/Fort/Otik%27s%20Baby.png)

Otik and Starkey's foal was at last born today. Her name is Zarya and she is a unicorn. Starkey and Otik haven't looked so happy since in all the years I've known them.

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Charity's Journal 20th Moonstone, 102

The dinning hall and my home are fulled with water up to my next. It seems the drainage system is clogged. No pony was hurt thankfully, though most of my things are ruined, it is fortunate that I keep my diary on the top shelf or I might have lost this record too.

Charity's Journal 21st Moonstone, 102

Well, I'm still effectively homeless. The family slept at the homes of some of our friends. Hugwax is naturally blaming me for the water being turned off, my desk is flooded with complaints about the showers not working, The well nearest the hospital has run dry, and I had to listen to chief Medical Pony Doctor Bubbles ranting about how his hospital needs running water. This is a huge mess, and all the complaints aren't making it go any faster.

Charity's Journal 1st Opal, 102

Water is still not working. Cryptson and Granite have been working overtime since the flood to get dig a new passage to drain the flooded area to let us work on the problem. The area is draining now, and it seems that a woody fungus like those that grown in the caverns has grown in the drainage pipe cutting off the flow of water. We will remove it, expand the drains so this happen again soon, hopefully, and then turn the water back on soon, I hope

Charity's Journal 15th Opal, 102

As soon as I finish writing this entry, I will be pulling the lever that will lower the floodgate allowing water to once again flow through the halls of Glitterglen. If our engineering work is sound we should have no problems. If we made a mistake somewhere.

Charity's Journal 19th Opal, 102

Just as soon as we were finally resettled in our home after cleaning away the mud and replacing everything lost to the water damage, I went into labor. It was a very easy birth compared to my other children. The foal was a unicorn colt. His coat is golden rod and his eyes are gold, and his mane the color of burnt umber. We aren't entirely sure were his coloration comes from. All of Cryptson's family are dark blue or indigo, and my coat is off-white, and none of our other foals have this coloration. Still, the Sisters work in mysterious ways sometimes. We named our new son Golden Rule.

Charity's Journal 13th Obsidian 102

A lone Darkbolt Mare was spotted making her way toward Glitterglen. She was only not shot on site because she came in elegant dress. She is apparently the  Rainbow Coalition Diplomat. I can't imagine why they would send her, a darkbolt, here, alone. Seems reckless, half of our troops would have assumed she was an enemy and shot her on sight traveling alone like that. She got lucky.

Charity's Journal 14th Obsidian 102

A caravan from the Rainbow ponies has been spotted in the jungle. As has one from the old capital city.

Charity's Journal 22nd Obsidian, 102
Captain Jaxler of the Skyguard was taken by a fey mood. He rushed up to the surface, abandoning his post by the cavern gate and took control over the mason's shop that produces the marble blocks for the wall. He has started gathering materials.

Charity's Journal 28th Obsidian, 102 (New Year's Eve. Early.)

Willow knocks on charity’s office. She heard murmurs. rumors. whispers that Charity was starting a rebellion. If she was, Willow wanted in

‘How was this going to play out?’ Willow wondered

Mere moments after knocking the door opens just a crack and Madush’s voice echos outward, “Willow? What need have you of the Duchess?” Willow notes that security seems to have been raised of late, as she’d never heard of a pony needing a reason for an audience with Charity before.

“Madush? Is that you? How’ve ya’ been?” She grinned

“I have som’thin the Duchess would really, really, like ta’ see. It mi’ght jus’ change everything.”

“could ya’ let me in? I don’t got no weapons. Just a friendly chat.”

Madush opens the door to allow Willow inside. “Come in.” Willow notices he had a loaded crossbow at the ready just behind the door. He moves aside and lets Willow into the still small and cramped office, that Charity had been working out of for the past 8 years.

Charity sat at her desk, looking over stockpile records. It was tiring, and dull work, she was grateful for the distraction. “Hello, Willow. What is it you wanted to show me?” she says knowing whatever the guard wanted it would be more interesting than this.

“ ‘ello, Charity. Direct. I like that.”

Willow eases herself into a chair

“So, A little pegusai told me you don’t like Hugwax. I don’t either. In fact, I have a li’l something that could prove what she Really is.”

she holds Couth’s Diary up

“but first, I need to know two things....”

Charity’s mind began to race. Willow’s in the fortress guard. How much does she know? Is this a set up? Trying to see how much I’ll confess to? Unless she’s telling the truth? Can I trust her? She’s given good info before, but I don’t know where her loyalty lies....

“I don’t know what you are talking about,” begins Charity, “I have nothing but respect for her Majesty Princess Dizesh Hugwax.”

Willow grinned at Charity’s sudden pensiveness at the question. In truth, no one told her anything concrete. It was a hunch, a correct one.

“Oh, really? your sweaty hooves and your increased guard detail says otherwise. Relax. That tyrant’s going to die and I don’t care if you lock me up for say’in it. I’d rather be locked up for walki’n the wrong side of tha’ line, than live silent. An’ I know you would too.”

She sits back

“ya know, for ‘a politician, you’re a terrible liar. I like that too.”

Charity sits back a bit, "So...supposing for a moment that I wasn't planning to lock you up for treason. What is she really that that little book can prove?"

“A liar, a plotter, a schemer. Against you, namely. But-”

Her cool cracks for a moment, she has no idea what’s going to happen next. She gave a deep pause, then says

“First things first. My last name ain’t E-Emeraldstud. It’s ... Darkmane. Is this gonna be a problem?” Willow asks, tasting nervousness for the first time

Charity's eyes go wide, mouth gapping, Madush springs into action and points a crossbow directly at Willow Darkmane, waiting for any sudden moves.

A moment passes, Charity recollects herself. "A...a Darkmane, you say. That isn't a very welcome name around here, I take it you know by now. I assume you are associated with Couth Darkmane then? If you worked with that monster why should I trust you? Especially since you’ve been hiding the fact."


Willow slid the black book towards Charity and slowly raises her hooves slowly up in the air. She looked down sullenly, She knew she deserved this treatment

“You shouldn't. No sane pony would. But just know, If I did want you dead, I certainly wouldn't spend months loyally serving you, and certainly wouldn't get romantic with one of your mitiltaponies. It’d be a much cleaner operation than that. It’s funny you treat me with suspicion, considering someone so much closer to you wants you dead.”

she nods at the book

“That’s Couth’s diary. Read the last entries at least. Then I’ll be on my way off this fort if you wish. Hell, if you read that and still want to suck on Hugwax’s heel I don’t want to be under your command anyway.”

Charity eyes Willow, and slowly takes up the book, she turns to the last 3 entries and reads them. As Charity reads the book Madush finally lowers his crossbow, but keeps it at the ready and keeps his eyes on the Darkmane mare. Charity’s expression turns sour as she reads, when she finishes, she drops the book quite violently upon the desk. “If...if this is real...If this is all true, then...then Hugwax has been behind so much of what has gone wrong here, and she would be responsible for 3 attempts on my life, not to mention the cultists activities led by Darkmane, and all the blood they spilled. But I still don’t understand one thing. Why? If she had never banished me here, I would never have been anything worth killing. What is her game? Why does she want me dead?”

Willow shrugs

“Jealousy over your success in these jungles, maybe? Maybe you’re a mistake she fears now. I do not know. All I do know Is if you’re done taking her kicks? Want to strike back? This master saboteur will be ready for the word, commander.”

Charity nods, “I will take this information to heart Willow. I’m not sure why you are telling me all this, but...whatever I do next will take some planning. I will tell the others however, that you are a friend, and you will be informed when it is time to act.”

Because a war doesn't start with empty words, it start with a gut of anger. Willow knows she can’t can’t kill the princess alone, but with the rage of the duchess at her back? maybe, just maybe

Willow bows her head “Consider it the very least I could do to atone for the pain my brother caused you all. I can’t re-colour your notions of him, but I can still affirm we ain’t all bad.  I’ll take my leave.”

Madush sees the Darkmane out of Charity’s office once she is gone and the door bared, he turns and sees Charity looking up at the statue of Khenal and the darkbolt, looking pensive. “Duchess?...Charity? What happens next?” he asks her.

“Now? Now you bring them here; Starkey, Otik, Cryptson, Kris, and Khenal. Tell them they can bring anyone they really truely trust, and that nopony else must know.”
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 27, 2012, 01:19:42 pm
((This. This will probably be the final fortress update for Glitterglen. The scenes that follow this one, will lead to the end. It has been a pleasure writing this tale with you all, and I wouldn't trade the time I spent on this for anything. Thank you all for putting up with this. When I started this all those months ago, I couldn't have imagined it would get this big, and I'm so happy with how it all turned out. Thank you those who helped make this story happen. And if there is anyone out there either now, or in the future who has read all this non-sense. Thank you as well, for giving us all a chance. I hope you enjoyed this story half as much as I did. But Glitterglen isn't done just yet. We still have one more chapter to write.))

((I too would like to take a moment to say that I have enjoyed this immensely.  I hope my contribution to this has been positive, it actually took me close to a month to gather the courage to join in the first place.  I've really enjoyed working with you all on this, and would dare say this has taught me a lot of things I'd have never believed I'd learn by roleplaying ponies in Dwarf Fortress.  I've lost a lot of sleep over this, in both the good and bad sense, but I'm stronger for it I think.

Nevertheless, I wouldn't have preferred to be doing anything else.  I've had too much fun working with you guys, and I look forward to working with you again quite soon.  And now for Kris' final proper journal entry:))

Kris' Diary - 19th Galena, 102

Well, today is the day.  Today we started trading illegal things to the merchants to save the clothiers and everypony else in the industry from starving to death.  Addy was the real hero here, since he's the broker.  I'm proud of him, he pulled it all off flawlessly and now a lot of ponies will have the money they desperately need.  I worried about him all day, though, you can be sure, and was overwhelmingly relieved when he got home.  Hugwax had better not touch him.  If she or her "guards" try to enforce her ludicrous export ban by hurting my Addy...

No, best not to even think about it.  This isn't a problem that can be solved with might.  Charity and Addy are smart, a lot smarter than I am.  This is a battle that will be solved with stealth, guile and wits.  I'll help however I can, but I fear there is little I can do.

15th Limestone, 102

Things didn't go quite as smoothly today.  I don't know the details, but grandma Otik came to me and asked me to come along to distract the guards while some more contraband was taken out into the jungle covertly.  I wasn't really sure what to do, but it was easy enough to just make some noise at the right time and lure the few guards away.  It was just captain Isos' stallions and mares watching, so if things went poorly we might have avoided a serious encounter with Hugwax, but in the end we didn't have to find out.

I'm still pretty frightened to think of what might happen if we get caught.  I have no doubt Hugwax would want our heads.  I know this isn't a fight I can win with my mother's hammer... but if I have to fight to protect the ponies I love, I will.  No matter the cost.

At least for now that hasn't been a worry.

14th Sandstone, 102

I'm a bucking idiot.

My squad was scheduled to perform some training on a few of the strange rodent creatures captured from the caverns, and I bucked it up.  I forgot to lock the door to the arena.  That's number one on the checklist.  No matter what happens, you can't let anything get out where it can hurt the civilians.

Well, I bucked up and forgot.  I suppose maybe somepony else should have caught my mistake, but I'm the one who forgot, and I owned up to the mistake like a mare.

Naturally one of the things made a run for it and escaped, where he ran into Istbar.  I thought for sure I was going to watch him get mauled, but thank the sisters he got lucky or is a natural at fighting, since he slew the rodent monster without our help.  Of course, word spread all across Glitterglen after that, and it wasn't long before Hugwax heard and sent her underlings to chew me out.  I'll admit I was almost shaking at the thought of it.  I haven't forgotten what she did after the giant cave spider was lost.

Instead of that horrible, sadistic Demora, she sent Tor and Pound instead.  I'm not sure which would have been worse; being whipped in front of my squad by her or being beaten in front of them by Tor and Pound.  I fully expected that, but it didn't happen, thank the sisters.  I won't believe for a moment they were being merciful.  They must have been busy and in a hurry.  So they just settled for a lot of shouting.

I won't repeat most of what they said, but a number of colorful variations of calling me "an insufferable foal" and "a bucking careless joke" later and I was biting back tears.  You can bet that helped.  When they saw
that, they shouted even more and put Morul in charge of the squad instead of "a blubbering school filly."

I've never been so humiliated in all of my life.  I wanted to just run away and hide somewhere, and never see any of them again.  Maybe it's a good thing Morul is in charge instead of me now.  I never really deserved it anyway, and now I won't have to try to soldier on and actually lead anypony when I can barely look them in the face.

I feel horrible.  I felt even worse before I talked with Addy, but this isn't something that is going to just be okay.  Every time I think about it I feel terrible all over again.  Celestia help me, I can still hear their shouting and taunting... after grandpa Starkey was killed I wanted to quit the militia.  I really want to now.  How am I going show up for training tomorrow?  Or even if I bump into somepony from my squad in the halls?

15th Sandstone, 102

Training went worse than I could have really predicted.  Things were extremely awkward at first, as I expected.  I couldn't really look anypony in the eyes, and they seemed to be just as happy to avoid me as I was of them.  I can only imagine what they must have been saying behind my back.

Then Morul showed up.

I'll admit I didn't think about this yesterday, after having my soul thoroughly crushed by Tor and Pound, but Morul... has a bit of a reputation.  I don't know everything, but from what I understand he has made some inappropriate advances on some of the mares in Glitterglen.  I didn't realize at the time just what I might be dealing with.

Anyway, he ordered me to spar with him, which I obeyed.  I'm sure I wasn't giving it my all, after what happened, but he thoroughly and soundly beat me.  Then he did it again, and again.  He beat me so badly the first two times, I don't know what he was trying to prove, but the third time went about the same.  I've got half a dozen bruises all over my body, and ache like I haven't since my first week of training.

I've always noticed Morul didn't like me.  I assumed it was because I was placed in charge of him despite him having seniority over me, but I think it might run deeper than that.  I'm pretty sure he actually
hates me, and that sparring session was a way to prove to everypony that he was better than me and that I never deserved to lead him.  He might have been afraid to make that known before, but now he's free to order me around.  I'll admit I'm actually scared.  I don't know what might happen.

I mean, I don't expect it to really come to something... inappropriate... but if it did, I don't know what I'd do.  He's proven that he's stronger, faster and more skilled than I am.

I don't think it's going to be a problem.  I... I think he's satisfied now that I know he's stronger than me.  I think that's all he wanted to prove.

I hope so.  If not... I'm not helpless... but... I am a bit nervous.

19th Timber, 102

Charity stopped by our home today while I was off, and brought what must have been the most beautiful chanfron I've ever seen in my life.  It's made of beautiful adamantine and is decorated with some the remains of that monster that Khenal slew.  It's a true work of art, and I asked her to send my thanks to the armorers for their outstanding work.  I also thanked her again for the gift, I have no doubt it's worth a small fortune.

I wasn't sure what the occasion was, but Charity just told me that she wanted me to be safe and to always come back to them.  That's something I can really relate to.  Every time I look at Lorica, I can't help but think of my mother.  I know she did everything she could for me, and I'll never blame my mom for giving up her life to protect everypony in Glitterglen, but I never want to leave Addy or Lorica, or any of my friends.  I know what that feels like.  It's almost unbearable.

I'm not sure if I should wear the chanfron to training tomorrow.  Morul hasn't really been particularly hateful to me since he humiliated me in front of the rest of the squad, but if I show up with that he might get annoyed at Charity playing "favorites" again.  I know he still hates me, I can see it in the way he cuts his eyes to me and the way he speaks to me.

Well, forget him.  Charity and the armorers went through a lot of effort and expense to forge it for me, and I'm going wear it proudly.

10th Moonstone, 102

Addy put himself in danger again today to trade forbidden goods with the cave ponies.  We've been lucky so far with the trading, but I fear our luck will run out soon.  Still, I stand behind Addy and Charity.  And I'll literally stand behind them if I have to to protect them.

14th Moonstone, 102

We were sent into the caverns today to scare away some bird creatures that were harrassing the workers.  It was pretty uneventful, and I didn't even have a chance to swing my weapon before they were all sent scurrying away from us.  Some ponies might say that it's boring or menial, but after seeing real combat against armed and armored soldiers, I'm happy to stay down here and help guard the civilians.

15th Moonstone, 102

Today was quite a happy day!  Grandma Otik gave birth to her filly, who is a little unicorn just like Lorica!  She was a beautiful little filly, and I don't think I've ver seen my grandparents so happy. 

I know they're going to have their hooves full with the baby, as I could have never predicted how much work Lorica would be.  Grandma Otik at least has some experience with raising children, so maybe it won't be such a shock to her.  I'm not sure about Grandpa Starkey though.

Anyway, I'll be happy to help them out however I can.  And I'm sure Lorica will be happy to have somepony to play with when she gets a little older.

22nd Moonstone, 102

Charity had a bit of a mishap a few days ago that ended up flooding her office, and her family has been forced to lodge with others while they figure out what went wrong.  She and Cryptson stayed with us tonight, while the children I assume spent the night with Khenal and Friesden, or maybe my grandparents.  I don't mind them staying with us for as long as they need, but I'm sure they want to get home as soon as possible.

19th Opal, 102

Charity gave birth again today, to a unicorn colt!  Lorica alone has been enough work for me and Addy, I don't know how she can stand raising so many children herself.  I guess having so many children in a way helps in its own way, since Addy used to help his mother out a lot with raising the younger foals.  I'm happy for her and the family, and I'm happy that Lorica will have another playmate soon enough.

Kust like grandma Otik and grandpa Starkey, I offered to help her out whenever she needs it.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on May 27, 2012, 10:11:26 pm
((I'd also like to say that this has been immensely fun.  I've made many new friends over the course of this, and I think we've written quite a story together.  It feels a little sad to be ending it, but it really is time to finish this story.  The villains are in place, and I think we're all ready to give them what for.  I look forward to doing more in our next story, whenever that may be.))

Khenal's Secret, Entry 32

So the smuggling begins.  I wish we didn't have to do this, but Hugwax left everypony no choice.  Her unreasonable demands will ruin Glitterglen, and I'm just glad that Charity had an idea to keep us going.  Using magic to hide the crates will be very risky, but Charity and Adamant had ideas for hiding the dresses and clothes with mundane means.  I hope this works, I don't know if Glitterglen will survive if it doesn't.

Entry 33

I threw a small party for everypony involved with the roads today, celebrating their hard work in finishing them.  I didn't expect so many to show up, but at least Hugwax and her cronies stayed away from this celebration.  They probably thought a party for working class ponies was beneath them.  I'd feel indignant about their absence, but nopony wanted them there in the first place.  At least her arrogance doesn't ruin everything.

Entry 34

I don't believe for a moment that Kris forgot to lock the door before fighting those rodent things.  She's good with details, there's no way she'd forget to lock that door.  It also feels too coincidental to me.  Hugwax now has her cronies in leadership positions in all branches of the military.  This bodes ill for Glitterglen.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Beeskee on May 30, 2012, 03:49:44 pm
((This. This will probably be the final fortress update for Glitterglen. The scenes that follow this one, will lead to the end. It has been a pleasure writing this tale with you all, and I wouldn't trade the time I spent on this for anything. Thank you all for putting up with this. When I started this all those months ago, I couldn't have imagined it would get this big, and I'm so happy with how it all turned out. Thank you those who helped make this story happen. And if there is anyone out there either now, or in the future who has read all this non-sense. Thank you as well, for giving us all a chance. I hope you enjoyed this story half as much as I did. But Glitterglen isn't done just yet. We still have one more chapter to write.))


I'll be very sad to see this end. I haven't participated, but I've been following along, and it's been wonderful. :)

One question, if Hugwax is such a pain in the tail, why not give her a nice magma bath? Personally, I try to avoid that, but it's a pretty regular way to dispose of the overly pesky nobles. Though I guess perhaps that's what this next chapter will be about.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Impending Doom on May 30, 2012, 04:00:41 pm
((As far as I can tell, Hugwax isn't all that much of a pain in-game. Also, a revolution is much more interesting than a boring old magma bath. :P))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on May 30, 2012, 06:09:02 pm
I'll be very sad to see this end. I haven't participated, but I've been following along, and it's been wonderful. :)

One question, if Hugwax is such a pain in the tail, why not give her a nice magma bath? Personally, I try to avoid that, but it's a pretty regular way to dispose of the overly pesky nobles. Though I guess perhaps that's what this next chapter will be about.
((Well I'm glad you have enjoyed it, and yes, the next chapter will involve us dealing with the Princess. Additionally, as Impending has said, in game Hugwax hasn't been a problem at all. Made some royal rooms for her and haven't heard from her since. Not a demand or mandate to be seen. But we had been planning on making her a villain since long before she arrived, and so a villain she must be.))

((This is the first scene that will begin to work us toward the ending. I'll be honest, I'm not entirely happy with it, but we've been sitting on it for days and we need to move on to the next part.))

The Duchess Charity stands in her office, waiting for her friends to arrive. She takes the moment to strengthen the sound masking spells she had woven into the room’s walls when they started the smuggling operation. When finished she sighs to herself, and takes her seat, and waits for Madush to return with her most trusted advisors. She looks around the room at the statue of Khenal, and the engraving of then ‘Commander’ Starkey, along with other symbols of the town, no the city, she had helped to build. She did not know what her friends would say, or even what she wanted them to say, but there was no time for waiting, not as long as Hugwax was still in power.

After what feels like an eternity to Charity, there is a knock at the door followed by Madush’s voice, announcing his return with the others. The door opens and the other ponies file in. Madush remains outside to keep watch.

Among the arrivals is Lord Cryptson, who had just been pulled from working with Granite in the mines. He was concerned, it wasn’t like his wife to suddenly call this many ponies to her tiny office, and if it was a pleasant occasion they would have been meeting in the much more spacious Ducal Dinning Room. Cryptson stands in the back of the group and listens.

Friesden tip-toes in nervously, sticking close to Khenal. On her is the dagger recently gifted to her in its sheath.  Khenal gives Friesden a reassuring nuzzle as he walks in with her, unsure as to exactly what’s going on, but assuming it has something to do with the smuggling operation.

Kris files in after Friesden and Khenal, feeling a bit apprehensive about the whole thing.  She knew it couldn’t be about anything cheerful, and tried to prepare herself for whatever it was Charity had to say.  She was wearing the masterful adamantine chanfron gifted to her not long before, but hoped she wouldn’t need it.  She finds an empty spot to stand and waits patiently for somepony to say something.

Starkey trots in after Kris, Otik following close behind him. Neither is in uniform, though Starkey’s familiar copper axe is strapped to his flank. Otik forgoes any armament, on account of the tiny purple filly curled up fast asleep between her wings.

Once all the ponies had moved into the office, Charity pulled from her desk a small tattered black book and puts on top of her desk, before sliding it to the other side. “Khenal, take this journal, turn to the three marked entries, and read them aloud for everypony.”

Khenal levitates the book to himself, looking a bit curious before opening it, looking angry as he sees who’s journal this is.  “The journal of Couth Darkmane...”  As he reads the entries, his expression softens slightly.  He remembered Couth as a monster, an ambitious liar who cared only about himself.  But these entries, while also proving Hugwax’ vileness, also showed that Couth was still just a pony.  He still had hopes and dreams, and a sister he cared about.  It hardly excuses him... but it’s a good reminder of the slippery slope that can lead ponies down the wrong path.

Kris’ eyes widen at the revelation, but she waits patiently for Khenal to finish.  Nopony tried to hurt her family... even if Charity wasn’t really family until recently.  Nopony.

Charity begins again, “This journal was allegedly the property of Couth Darkmane. It was given to me by Willow Emeraldstud, or as she has confessed to being actually named, Willow Darkmane...and, I believe it to be genuine.”

“But...But...What are we going to do?” stutters Friesden.

Charity looks sadly to Friesden, “That is why I brought you all here. You are all my dearest friends, and I need to ask you all...What do I, what do we, do next?”

Part of Kris wanted to go march up to Hugwax right then and there, demand an explanation and quite possibly introduce the monstrous parody of a mare to her mother’s hammer.  But part of her knew better, the smarter part.  Still, a scowl edges onto her face as she thinks about it.  “This... this is outrageous...” she mutters.  “We can’t let her get away with this!  I... I... don’t know what to do...but if she dares to even try to lay a hoof on you again she’ll lay a hoof on nopony ever again...”  They had to do something though... they couldn’t just sit by knowing that happened, and could happen again.  Hugwax... she was a true monster.  Kris would never again doubt what Khenal had told her about the mare.

Charity smiles softly at her daughter in law, it was pleasant to hear that she cared, and Charity could see so much of Falcata in Kris’s face as she spoke. “Willow. Has also offered her services to us in the event we wish to...retaliate. Starkey, my oldest friend, please, tell me what you think we should do.”

“I...” Starkey hesitates, then sighs. “I agree that this is outrageous, and it must not be allowed to stand, but I can see little we could do at the moment. I have something of an idea, but it would take time...”

Charity nods understandingly, “I see. Does anypony else have an idea? Otik? Khenal?”

Otik steps forward. “With three’r four good, well-trained ponies, an’ th’ right gear... I might have an idea.”

Khenal sets the book down and looks at his friends.  “We lodge a formal complaint.  Right in her skull.  There is only one response to tyranny like hers.”

Charity nods, “Hugwax, is a menace to this country. Everypony would be better off with her removed from power...But, if we did take that step. Who would fill the void she would leave? She has no heirs, so the throne would probably fall to General Dostrob then? He’s just as bad as her.”

Khenal smiles at his friends, knowing exactly who he thinks should take over for Hugwax, and suspecting the others agree.  “Who should fill the void, indeed?  Who knows how to run a government that actually cares about the ponies she rules over?”  After exchanging glances with the others, he looks square at Charity. 

Kris considers it for a brief moment and immediately comes to the same conclusion.  Yes, Charity was perfect for the position.  She had already shown  how much she cared about the ponies in Glitterglen, even before she risked her life by defying Hugwax.  Yes, she’d stand behind Charity the whole way, and she nods firmly in agreement.

After a moment, Charity realizes that everypony, was looking expectantly at her. “N...No, you can’t be serious. You want me to take over as ruler? I...I can’t do that...I...I...”

Khenal smiles.  “And why not?  Nopony else has the experience to be a good and proper ruler.  And, personally, you are one of the very few nobles I’ve known who is worthy of the title.”

Cryptson speaks from the back of the room. “Khenal is right Charity. In all the years we’ve been here you have never led Glitterglen wrong. You are a kind and generous leader, and as your power grew here, you never allowed it to corrupt you. No pony deserves to rule more than you do.”

Kris nods resolutely.  “Absolutely.”  She knew in the back of her mind that her mother would say the same thing if she was there right then.

Starkey clears his throat. “While I would agree that you are the best mare for the job, Miss Charity... the fact remains that General Dostrob is still Hugwax’s de facto successor, and a great many ponies will fall behind him, to include the army. Are we really prepared to fight a civil war?”

Friesden shivers a bit. “A...A war?”

Charity looks down at her desk, then back to her friends, “If...If I...if we were to try and put me on the throne. I don’t think we could hold the entire country, we just don’t have enough support outside the capital. But...just Glitterglen...If the Glitterglen military sides with us, then we might be able to hold a now independent Glitterglen. The city can feed itself entirely on our underground crops, and water from the caverns, we could hold against siege indefinitely.” Charity looks hopefully to Kris and then to Starkey and Otik. “Do, you think the military would side with us?”

“I know th’ lads in th’ militia all look up t’Starkey. They’d follow him anywhere.” Starkey cannot help but blush at this.

“We do,” Kris chimes in.  She certainly did, anyway, and she had picked up on more than a bit of that sentiment since Starkey joined Charity’s guard instead of rejoining the militia.  She couldn’t speak for all of them, of course, and thinking of Morul sent a mental shiver down her spine, but she stood by her words.  “You don’t have to worry about us.”

Charity nods, she knew the soldiers all looked up to their old Commander, and she knew that the surviving members of the old Skyguard would follow Otik the Skywarden, even against the Crown. “Then...if we had their support, then we would have the Royal Guard well outnumbered. This could actually work...We have one other group of warriors that we need to worry about though. The Fortress Guard, and Captain Isos. They aren’t as well trained as the militia but are nearly as numerous. If they sided with her the fighting would get very bloody. Would Isos work with us? Would the Guard follow her if she did?”

Khenal thinks for a few moments before answering.  “I... I don’t know.  I think she’d side with us, and the guard with her, but she’s a hard mare to read.”

Charity nods again. “Well, we will have to talk to her then.” Charity looks off to the side for a moment. “Well, if we can get the guard and the militia, to fight with us then we should be able to take control of Glitterglen, and if the Sisters favor us, we might even be able to hold it...So, what is our next step? I’ve never lead a coup before,” she says with a nervous chuckle, “Does anypony have a suggestion? Perhaps get the soldiers and guards in one place so we can try and persuade them to our side?”

“Perhaps talk with them one at a time, subtlety?  If they all decide they’d rather side with Hugwax, I would rather not have them all in one place.”  Khenal suggests.

Charity sighs, “Khenal...If the majority of them side with Hugwax...then we’ve already lost. It won’t matter if they are all together or not. If the majority of them won’t help us...Then I don’t know what we can do.”

“Then we’ll have to act fast once you ask everypony, before Hugwax can react to the treason.”

Charity nods again, “Yes, I agree. But I think acting fast is our best option. Hugwax has been here for a year. I’m certain she has a wide net of informants set up by now. I fear if we act slowly then she will catch on before we are ready to strike.” Charity looks to each ponies face in turn. “I think our best bet is to be bold, and strike quickly. What do you all think?”

Khenal nods.  “It’d be better if we could plan more, but I agree: Hugwax won’t give us that luxury.”

“I...um...I...I think Khenal’s right,” Friesden says.

“Wotever ye need me t’do, miss Charity.” Otik snaps a salute hard enough to wake little Zarya. Starkey takes the little filly and cradles her in his hooves before answering. “I will speak to the militia whenever you’re ready, ma’am.”

Charity looks to little Zarya and then stands up. “We need to move on this immediately. Gather your weapons and armor, and then we will gather the soldiers.” Charity moves around her desk to the front by her friends. “Tonight is New Year’s Eve. Let us make sure the new year begins without a tyrant on the throne.”

Khenal nods in grim determination.  The thought of the coming battle made him nervous, but knowing he’d be with his friends... he had the feeling they could handle anything together.  “I’ll go talk with Captain Isos after gathering my armor... and my spear.”

Kris takes a step toward the door with an equally serious expression.  None of the hotheaded wrath that she allowed herself to feel before, or that her mother let consume her on occasion.  This was purposeful determination.  So, so, much was hanging in the balance...  “I’ll go speak with the militia... I think they’ll still listen to me.”

Charity looks to Kris. “I have no doubt they will, but if they don’t just tell them Starkey and the Duchess sent you.”

With that, all the ponies present head out to prepare for what is to come. As the room empties only two ponies stay behind. The Duchess and her most beloved stallion.

After everypony else leaves Cryptson approaches Charity and hugs her tightly. "I love you, Charity. No matter what happens. I'll always love you."

Charity holds her husband back. "I...I know dear. I love you too."

The two ponies hold each other close and exchange what they both know could be their last kiss. It is relatively long and undoubtedly passionate, but they both know that time is of the essence. After an all too short moment they separate and Charity says, "Now...Go get your armor." Cryptson nods, and says "Of course milady, your wish is my command."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on June 04, 2012, 04:32:39 am
The many military and guard ponies, that had been on duty, began to file into the grand meeting hall, which was already packed with ponies getting ready to celebrate the new year. Charity and Starkey sat near the back of the room, on an improvised stage they had cobbled together. After everypony arrived. Starkey made his way up to the podium to begin his speech.

Charity sat waiting for Starkey to begin. She did not know how the crowd would react and was very anxious to see what would happen next.

Kris feels butterflies in her stomach as she watches him ascend to the podium and prepare to address them. This was it.  This would be the first of many deciding points on their ultimate fate.  More than she could comprehend was hanging in the balance.

Khenal stands with his friends, wearing a brave face but feeling very nervous inside.  They were mere moments away from either starting a real coup or being arrested for treason. Friesden huddles under his wing, barely daring to poke her eyes out.

Starkey begins to speech the chattering crowd grows silent and listens.

“Ponies of Glitterglen.” Starkey began. "My friends. Nigh on eight years, you have served in the defense of Glitterglen. In that time, you have become the finest soldiers I have ever commanded, and the greatest ponies I have ever had the pleasure of knowing. I can honestly say, that I couldn’t be prouder of any of you, if you were all my own sons and daughters.”

He pauses for a moment, steeling himself for what must come next.

”Each and every one of us took an oath to defend this city from whatever evil may rise up against it. This day, another enemy has risen to test our might. But this new enemy comes not from the shadows of the deep jungle, but from the gilded halls of the highest bastion in the land. An enemy that strikes at us not with steel and spell, but with gavel, and chains! This new foe is strong, mightier than any we have faced before. But we are mightier still! We have something that she will never have. We have each other. We stand united, and together we are so much more than we could be apart."

“Together our strength can conquer this foe. Together, we can end Hugwax’s reign of terror over the city, together we can put a noble worthy of the title, on the throne. And now I shall step aside and allow that noblest of ponies to speak to you all. The Duchess of Glitterglen, and the future Queen of the Failed Jungles, Charity Conventtulip.”

((I would like to offer an apology to the late Charlie Chaplin for the mutilation I have done to his masterful speech from The Great Dictator, that is to follow. Here is a link to the original, un-ponified version.  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pK2WJd5bXFg  ))


After being introduced by Starkey, Charity slowly and hesitantly moves to take her position in front of the gathered ponies. Clearly anxious. When she begins her speech the crowd is hushed once again.

“…

I’m sorry, but I don’t want to be a Q...Queen. That’s not my business. I don’t want to rule or conquer anypony. I should like to help everypony if possible- Pegasus, Alicorn, Earthpony, Unicorn...

We all want to help one another. We ponies are like that. We want to live by each others’ happiness, not by each other’s misery. We don’t want to hate and despise one another. In this world there is room for everypony. And the good earth is rich and can provide for everypony. The way of life can be free and beautiful, but we have lost the way.

Greed has poisoned pony’s souls; has barricaded the world with hate; has goose-stepped us into misery and bloodshed. We have developed wonderful magics, but we have shut ourselves in.
Magic that gives abundance has left us in want. Our knowledge has made us cynical; our cleverness, hard and unkind.”

Charity begins to speak with more confidence and strength at this point.

“We think too much and feel too little. More than machinery ,we need equinity. More than cleverness, we need kindness and laughter. Without these qualities, life will be violent and all will be lost. Hearth's Warming has brought us closer together. The very nature of that day cries out for the goodness in ponies; cries out for universal brotherhood; for the unity of us all.

Even now there are millions of despairing stallions, mares, and foals, victims of a system that makes ponies torture and imprisons innocent ponies.

To those who can hear me, I say “Do not despair.”

The misery that is now upon us is but the passing of greed, the bitterness of ponies who fear the way of equine progress. The hate of ponies will pass, and dictators die, and the power they took from the ponies will return to the ponies. And so long as stallions die, liberty will never perish.”

Charity's voice becomes even more forceful, all sign of the pony that was hesitant to speak at all has passed.

“Soldiers! Don’t give yourselves to brutes, ponies who despise you and enslave you; who regiment your lives, tell you what to do, what to think and what to feel! Who drill you, diet you, treat you like cattle, use you as cannon fodder!

Don’t give yourselves to these unnatural ponies —machine ponies with machine minds and machine hearts! You are not machines! You are not cattle! You are stallions! You have a love of equinity in your hearts! You don’t hate!

Only the unloved hate; the unloved and the unnatural.

Soldiers! Don’t fight for slavery! Fight for liberty!

In the seventeenth chapter of The Book of Dawn and Dusk, it’s written “the kingdom of the Sisters is within Ponies”, not one pony nor a group of ponies, but in all ponies! In you! You, ponies, have the power, the power to create machines, the power to create happiness! You, ponies, have the power to make this life free and beautiful, to make this life a wonderful adventure. Then in the name of democracy, let us use that power.

Let us all unite.

Let us fight for a new world, a decent world, that will give ponies a chance to work, that will give youth a future and old age a security. By the promise of these things, brutes, like Hugwax, have risen to power. But they lie! They do not fulfill their promise. They never will!

Dictators free themselves but they enslave the common ponies!

Now let us fight to fulfill that promise! Let us fight to free the world! To do away with class barriers! To do away with greed, with hate and intolerance!

Let us fight for a world of reason, a world where magic and friendship will lead to all ponies' happiness.

Soldiers, in the name of democracy, let us all unite!”

As Charity speaks the last line of her speech nearly shouting, the gathered ponies cheer and applaud her.

Kris joins in the excited cheering with fervor. She would stand behind Charity, her grandparents and everypony in Glitterglen against the worst pony to ever darken their world. If it cost her her life, she would give her all to bring Hugwax to justice, if it meant that nopony had to ever suffer under her again.

And yet... a nagging worry chipped away at the back of Kris’s mind. If they failed... what had she done to her family? Lorica? She banishes the thought with another cheer.  They wouldn’t lose.  Together, they could conquer anything.  She would make this world safe for her daughter, if it was the last thing she did.

‘Absolute certainty of death, *small* chance of success... What are we waiting for?’ Hiero grinned. Now this was the chance to carve out some real glory. History will remember him -no all of them- all for this, for better or for worse.

Willow was daydreaming during the speech, was picking the perfect spot in her ideal little patch of the world she would call home with her husband Hiero where she would mount Hugwax’s head. 

Friesden finally pokes her head out from Khenal’s wing. They...They were in it now. There was no running away now. Even though she just wanted to go home, to hug her three little foals and tell them no harm would come to them...she couldn’t anymore. Charity had led them safely this far...Friesden would just have to trust that she could lead them through this too.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on June 18, 2012, 09:45:33 pm
Charity and her friends, stand outside the door to Princess Hugwax’s private wing of the fortress. The members of the Ducal Guard that were not present being elsewhere watching over the foals and family of the others allowing them to focus on the task at hoof. Having sent most of the militia, guard, along with her husband to secure the rest of the fortress, subdue anyponies likely to or openly siding with the Princess, and in general keeping the peace, they were expecting to have to deal with the Royal Guard alone.

Charity is standing at the back, her adamantine blade floating just within reach. Visibly, glistening under her indigo robe was a shining steel peytral, over a chain shirt, with steel boots on her hooves.

Kris was standing near the middle of the group, having subconsciously maneuvered herself into a relatively safe position.  She didn’t want to admit, even to herself, that she was actually quite scared.  She was afraid of what this revolution would ultimately bring, but for now, she was afraid of what fighting at least four of the most skilled warriors in the principality would mean.  She adjusts the adamantine chanfron on her head with her magic and tightens up the distance between herself and Charity and Friesden.  When the fighting started, she’d do whatever she could to intercept anything heading for the two of them.  The rest of them... hopefully they could handle this.

Khenal stands in front of the door, wearing his armor and levitating his spear.  It almost felt sureal to be standing here, in open defiance of Hugwax.  He had worked with her, all those years ago... before the asylum went down.  He gives a determined nod to nopony in particular.  With his friends, he had no doubt they could defeat her. Friesden hangs just behind him.

Otik stands just to the side of the door. She looks down the row of assembled ponies, meeting each pair of eyes. “Okay... everypony ready?” Each of them nods silently. “Alright... this’s it...” With that, she twirls around on a forehoof, bringing both hindhooves around to slam into the door.

The door gives way to a long narrow hallway paved with golden bricks, two decorative doors are placed in the sides. The left one, the ponies are aware leads to the Royal Dining Room and Bed Chambers, the right, to a tomb fit for a monarch set aside in the event of her ‘unfortunate’ death. At the end of the hall it opened to a larger room 10 yards wide and 15 yards deep, with smooth granite floors and a golden path leading up to the golden throne. Which was flanked by two grandiose statues of electrum.

On the throne sits the enraged blueblood, word having somehow already reached her of the treachery. She was surrounded by her four most loyal minions, all dressed, in very fine steel, and carrying weapons of purest silver. Captain Demora cracks her vile whip as our heroes approach. Tor and Pound the Pegasi Hammerers stand side by side with Demora at the front. While Thrash, the earthpony mare carrying an oversized maul, stands by the Princess.

Demora cracks her whip again. “You are a greedy old whore Charity, I knew I should have killed you from the moment I set eyes upon you! And the rest of you! Have you no loyalty? No decency? You would turn so easily against your betters? Fine, if death is your wish, I shall provide it.” shouts the Royal Guard Captain.

Hugwax rises her uncontrolled rage appears to melt away, “Silence Demora!” she shouts, the captain complying immediately and holding position.

Hugwax looks to the gathered ponies, “My dear Charity, I had thought you better than this. I never would have thought you of all ponies would let your ambition take you this far. I wonder what treacherous lies you could have spun to turn so many ponies against me like this. But we all know how fearful she is of other’s power. Tell me, corporal Starkey, has not the dear Duchess always desired power here? Is that not why she stripped you of your Command, and placed another pony in charge of the army you helped to build? Did she not fear you wresting control of the city from her greedy hooves?”

“If that were true,” Starkey begins, “Why put me in the one position where it would be easiest to remove her? No, I took my position willingly, and gladly.

She looks to Otik, “And you Skywarden. Did she not replace you with a drunken buffoon which she could simply buy the loyalty off so cheaply? Is she really the pony you wish to so blindly place your loyalty with?”

“Miss Charity chose her stallion. She knows wot’ she’s doin’. Who’m I t’question her judgement?”

The Princess faces Kris, “And you. Ah, and the little filly of Falcata. It was quite impressive how Charity was so able to buy the loyalty of your mother. A weak mare with nothing to live for, and Charity saw that and used it. Giving her gifts and helping her so much, just so that she would last long enough to die for her and not on her own. And now she is doing the same to you. It is truly a tragedy that you can’t see that.”

The shaking Kris felt inside at the realization of what they were doing, what they were really doing, disappears to be replaced with righteous vexation.  Her first instinct was to shout something very rude back at Hugwax, but she instead settles for an indignant, “Ha!”  She lowers her mother’s hammer and scowls a bit at Hugwax.  “What’s tragic is that you think instilling fear and buying ponies out is the only way to inspire loyalty!”

Hugwax turns to Friesden, “And you, little one. You she has tricked most of all. Do you truly believe her to be your friend? Ha! Did you know she desired to have your pretty little head removed from your shoulders? It’s true. And she would have done it too, if not for your loving little stallion. She spared your life only because she could not bare to watch her beloved Khenal mourn you, or worse, have him blame her for your death. You live because she needs him, because she desires him, and for no other reason.”

“No! Stop that! You’re lying!” Friesden says, tears beginning to well up in her eyes.

Hugwax smiles a devilish smile. “Oh, but I don’t lie,” she says derisively, “Everything I say I got from this.” And with that she pulls a small stack of notebooks bound together from her robe and tosses them before the group. The cover of the top reads, Charity’s Journal, in the Duchess’s hoofwriting.

Charity flinches, she knew that many of the things the Princess said were either partially true, or easily construed as such. She was worried for just a moment, that they might turn on her, but her doubt passes quickly like water off a duck’s back, as her faith in her friends was such that she was sure they would see through the Princess’s half truths.

Friesden turns from the obvious trick of the Princess, and buries her head in Khenal’s wing.

“And last but certainly not least, that brings us to you, Captain Khenal.” smiles the Princess, “Was it so long ago my friend that we were on the same side? What right have you, a pony whose past is stained with the blood of so many, whose very soul is blackened with so much sin, what right have you to judge me? I have worked tirelessly for this nation, as did you once, but you would throw all that away now, to serve some usurper? Join me and take your place at my side again, and you can help the masses once more Khenal.”

“Help the masses?  Don’t make me laugh, you tyrant.  You care for nopony but yourself, and I am ashamed it took the deaths of so many for me to see that.”  He leans his spear against his shoulder, remembering that Demora is a null.  The last thing he needs is his magic cutting out while levitating his weapon.


“It isn’t too late, any of you.” continues Hugwax, “Turn from this path now, and I will not only spare your lives, but you will be rewarded beyond your wildest dreams.”

Kris was no foal and transfers the hammer to her mouth to draw her shield with her magic.  She knew that backing down now would only get her tortured mercilessly before her death, and would surely mean the death of her friends and family too.  No, she wasn’t turning away now.  Her eyes dart from pony to pony as she watches for the inevitable start of the fight.  Any moment one of her guards could use the opportunity for a surprise attack.

Starkey steps forward. “Don’t be a fool, Hugwax. The militia, the guard, all are loyal to us. you are in no position to bargain.” He turns to face Demora. “But I would extend the same offer to all of you. Hugwax dies this day, there is no avoiding that. But none of you have to die with her. Turn away, lay down your arms or take them up at our side, either way you will be spared.”

Demora glares at the traitors, “We would never betray her majesty. We owe our lives to her, and we will die to defend her.” The other three ponies speak, “Aye captain, we are with you.” in unison.

Kris clenches her jaw around the hilt of her mother’s hammer and strengthens her magical grip on her shield.  She could feel her heart beating faster and faster in her chest and a cold sweat forming on her brow.  This was it... any moment now.  She nervously and without thought slides back a step, trying to place some distance between her and Demora.  She had never forgotten the whips...

Demora speaks through gritted teeth, “Princess?”

“Kill them.” replies Hugwax, sounding almost disinterested.

Without another second passing, the deadly end of Demora’s whip was flying as fast as sound toward Khenal’s face, a cracking sound echoing through the silent hall.

’Too fast!’  Khenal drops to the floor, though the whip still takes the tip off of one of his ears.  He rolls to the side, taking his spear in his mouth and glaring at Demora.

As if on cue the cracking sound sends Tor and Pound flying into the air up and over toward their targets.

In an instant, the two pegasi are in the air. Otik’s crossbow practically leaps from her back and into her hooves. She propels herself backwards, giving herself room to line up her shot. Starkey, however, launches himself straight towards the oncoming guards, his axe at the ready.

The twin pegasi wielding warhammers leap into the air in unison and move to meet their respective foes.  Tor spins in the air to throw off Otik’s aim and rears back to take a swing with his hammer.  Pound instead darts to the side as Starkey nears and takes a cautious swing at the stallion’s midsection with his own weapon.

Seeing the hit coming, Starkey pivots out of the way and darts in for a swing of his own. Otik does her best to match Tor’s movements, trying to line up a telling shot.

Kris sees the last pony standing near Hugwax and realizes it was up to her to face the mare wielding a hammer three times the size of her own.  If there was anything she had learned from Adamant or his father, it was that an earth pony could be monstrously strong, and she had no doubt that this mare was more than strong enough to wield that maul to its fullest effect.  She circles to place herself between Thrash and Charity and Friesden, unsure if she should make the first move or wait for somepony to attack one of them.

Charity looks to Kris. “Kris, try and force Thrash away from Hugwax and I will go for the tyrant.”

Kris nods at the order and moves to obey. She continued to make an attempt to keep herself between Thrash and the two mares, and to keep any eye on Charity in case Hugwax turned out to be a better fighter than she looked. Thrash heard the order too and glowers at Kris before stepping forward and readying her massive hammer.

Tor continues to perform aerobatics to confuse Otik’s aim as he draws closer.  A moment more and he’d be in range to smash the weapon from her grip, and then she’d be his.  Pound lets out a startled gasp as Starkey’s axe grazes his wing.  True to his reputation, this Starkey was going to be a challenge.  His first swing goes wide as he repositions himself and he returns to the ground.  Might be best to keep this fight on the ground for now.

Otik can see Tor drawing closer to her with each swoop and turn. He’ll be on her in only a few moments. Though, if she can’t hit him at range...

She takes the shot almost half-heartedly, and moves to reach for another bolt.

Starkey watches Pound drop back to the floor, but does not follow. He remains in the air, just out of his opponent’s reach, before darting in quickly to deliver another blow.

Demora sneers at Khenal around her whip.  “Blood already?  And here I thought the Taciturn Sorcerer might be a challenge!”  She swings it around again at him, almost looking bored now.  Khenal watches her close and angles his spear to let the whip curl around the shaft, hoping to gain an advantage and maybe pull it from her grip.

Otik’s shot spangs off of Tor’s peytral as his continued whirling about turns it into a glancing blow.  He chuckles and takes the swing at her crossbow.  This mare wasn’t going to be a challenge at all!

Pound circles beneath Starkey and evaluates his options.  He wasn’t sure he could take Starkey alone, but maybe he could distract him long enough for somepony to finish off one of his friends, then they could gang up on him.  He takes in another sharp breath as Starkey’s axe bites into his armor just ahead of his wing, and he ripostes with a flash of his hammer at whatever part of Starkey presented itself.

Otik grins as Tor takes the bait. She pivots her whole body, swinging the crossbow back behind her while she slashes, then stabs forward at his face with the bolt in her other hoof.

Pound’s swing finds its mark on Starkey’s hindleg, sending him twirling through the air before falling to the floor. He stands with a little difficulty, favoring the stricken leg, but recovers just in time to deflect another wicked strike from the massive hammer.

Kris still wasn't sure if she should make the first move or wait for Thrash to take a swing, but she didn't have time to stand there and just think while a battle raged around her. She takes one look back to Charity and Friesden to make sure they were still okay before readying her weapon to strike first. Much to her surprise she finds the maul already swinging in her direction and in a panic she leaps back, feeling the wind tear past her face.

As Thrash moved to engage Kris, Charity cautiously moves around the fighting toward Hugwax, her knife ready to cut the smile from the royal's smug face. Hugwax likewise faces Charity as if she had been expecting it.

Demora’s eyes sparkle in vicious delight, expertly uncoiling her whip form Khenal’s spear as he tries to close and giving him a good lash to a wing, simple luck keeping it from snapping.  Khenal grunts in pain around his spear as Demora openly laughs at him.  “Hah!  You actually thought I’d fall for that trick?!”

Tor’s eyes go wide as he realizes his mistake a second too late, and he turns his head away instinctively.  Otik’s bolt slashes across his throat, opening a shallow cut through split mail links.  The pegasus nearly falls from the sky in his panic, but as he realizes it wasn’t a fatal cut, rage forms on his face.  “Buck you!” he shouts as he feints a strike to her face.

Pound feels a bit of cockiness well up inside him as he manages to land the blow.  “Eat this!” he taunts as he brings his hammer down again, leaving an unpleasant marring of the previously beautiful flooring as Starkey deflects his hammer aside.  This pony was fast... he needed to check himself.  Fight defensively... he leaps back into the air and gains as much altitude as he can in preparation for a dive.

“Sorry hun, I cannae be doin’ that anymore. Got married, y’see.” Otik flips backwards in the air to dodge the strike.

Starkey Watches Tor ascend, moving with him. He waits for the pegasus to reach the peak of his flight and begin his plunge, before launching himself up towards him, prepared to meet him in the middle.

With her heart now thundering in her chest, Kris raises her shield and evaluates the enormous mare intent on killing her. She sees an opening just as Thrash readies her maul again and throws her magical might into her shield, angling it into a crushing bash to the face. Thrash turns away instinctively, but the motion is completely unnecessary as Kris' shield harmlessly drops to the ground as it nears her. It rolls on its edge for some distance before clattering to the ground.

Charity charges Hugwax and telekinetically stabs forward with her knife. Hugwax surprised her, avoiding the blow by leaping to the side with her wings at a speed which surprised Charity. Hugwax then strikes Charity in the horn with her left forehoof, causing Charity to lose her magical grip on her knife, causing it to clatter to the floor.

Khenal slowly strafes around Demora as she watches him, her whip whirling over her head.  He’d need to figure out a way to close the distance with her, or he’d never win.  He couldn’t rely on his magic to trick her, either.  “Come on, then!” Demora taunts him.  “Is this a fight or a dance?”  She punctuates her taunt with another lightning fast snap of her whip, catching Khenal square in the sternum.  If not for the adamantine armor spreading the blow out over his body, he’d probably be dead from that.

Tor swears under his breath as Otik doesn’t take the bait of his feint and lunges forward, hoping to catch her in a tackle and wrestle her to the ground.  He wasn’t going to let her get any distance on him, not as long as that crossbow was still hers.

Pound desperately searches his mind for something to do as Starkey rapidly approaches him.  A head on fight would probably go poorly for him.  There wasn’t much time to think, and he settles on a last moment dart to the side and swing with his hammer at Starkey’s chest.  Maybe if he put all of his might and momentum into it, he’d get past any attempted parry.

Otik stops dead in the air as Tor manages to seize her by the hindquarters. “Oi, no means no!” She alternates between swinging at him with her crossbow and trying to reload it.

Starkey’s axe comes up to take the blow, but the hammer just powers on through and slams into his chest. The two stallions are carried into the floor by the heavy weapon.

Thrash takes advantage of Kris' momentary bafflement and whips the maul around again. The surface of the weapon clips her horn this time, snapping her head to the side while dissipating most of the impact. Fear surges through Kris again as the true depth of the situation hits her. Thrash was many times her strength and hellaciously fast. Worse still, Kris realizes that the mare is a magical null. Her magic will not help her at all.

Again she sees an opening as the maul is readied and lashes out with the hammer in her mouth. Kris feels a moment of elation as the weapon hits its mark solidly against the earth pony mare's shoulder, but Thrash doesn't so much as flinch as her thick steel armor and massive body absorb the blow. An instant later the maul is bearing down upon her again, and in a flash she brings her mother's hammer up to parry. She is again shocked to feel the maul halt against her parry when it should have battered her feeble attempt aside. Then she realizes her mistake.

Thrash brings the pommel of her maul up beneath the parry and slams it into Kris' cheek. Kris staggers back, but resists the urge to drop the weapon in her mouth and clutch at the explosion of pain in her face. Moments later adrenaline kicks in and the pain fades enough for her to regain concentration. Just in time to see the maul swinging her direction again. She turns her face away and jumps aside to avoid the worst possible outcome, but the maul catches her squarely on the chest and throws her from her hooves.

Charity slams herself into Hugwax,  the two noble ponies tumbling around, raining blows onto each other, Charity barely doing better due to her training and her armor.

Tor sneers at Otik as he uses all of his strength to drag her downward.  “As if I’d want you!” he retorts before taking a face full of crossbow.  He cries out in pain and rage before rolling her beneath himself and kicking with every ounce of might in his body.  He prods at his stinging nose and scowls at the blood smeared on his boot.  “I’ll kill you for that!”

Pound feels another cocky grin edge onto his face as he succeeds in downing Starkey.  The blow had a lot of power behind it, maybe he’d managed to knock the wind out of him if not more.  He fights to free himself from the knot on the floor and rotates his hammer to present the spike on the back.  He just had to line up a shot to Starkey’s throat, or if that wasn’t presenting itself maybe to the hip joint of his armor.  He’d bleed out quite fast from either.

With Tor suitably preoccupied with his injuries, Otik takes the opportunity to violently buck him off and backpedals, trying to put enough distance between them to load and line up a shot.

As Pound disentangles himself, Starkey manages to roll away. He takes up a defensive posture, slowly circling, but he realizes that even his fine adamantine mail would have trouble stopping the wickedly sharp point of Pound’s hammer.

The force of the whip-blow sends Khenal back a few steps as he gasps for air, Demora laughing riotously at him.  ‘Alright, think Khenal!  You don’t have your magic, but you still have wings and your size.’  He rears back to his hind legs, taking the spear from his mouth to hold it in his forelegs.  It looked a bit awkward, but he seemed to have better control of the spear like this.

Demora, however, doesn’t look impressed.  “Oh, look who’s trying to get all fancy.  You’re doomed, you stupid stallion!  Accept it, and maybe I’ll kill you quick!”  She whips at him again, but he’s able to parry it to the side, letting it wrap around his spear and quickly unwrap with Demora’s expert control of the weapon.

Kris lands a short distance away and slides along the ground before coming to a halt near the wall. Pain wracks her every movement as she desperately stumbles back to her hooves. Even every breath she took sent stabbing pain through her chest, but she couldn't just lay there. She had to fight... she had to do something or she was going to die. Her first instinct was to cast her pain control spell, but even before she makes the motions she remembers it would be futile. Instead, she readies her mother's hammer again and makes a lunge at Thrash.

Tor immediately rallies and catches himself in midair before correcting course and diving for Otik again.  He was not going to let her reload at this range.  Flapping his wings as fast as he could, he settles for trying to beat her out with raw strength and speed.  This time as he gets close, he makes sure to keep his hammer ready to parry any unexpected swings of that crossbow.

Pound rotates his hammer back to present the striking surface and begins circling with Starkey.  A cold sweat begins to form on his brow as he watches the living legend in front of him evaluate him.  One wrong move and he’d be a dead pony.  After a moment more of that, he catches sight of the two pegasi dueling in the air and realizes that was his only option.  He feints a swing at Starkey and darts into the air, making a straight line to assist his brother and hopefully gain the advantage over Otik.

Otik tries a few ineffective swings of her crossbow, searching for an opening in his defenses. suddenly, she is distracted by movement in the corner of her eye. She quickly brings her crossbow up as Pound swoops up towards her.

Starkey lowers his guard as he sees Pound’s apparent retreat, but quickly readies himself again as he sees the stallion’s new target: Otik. He takes wing and bolts towards them as fast as his wings will carry him.

Thrash effortlessly sidesteps the blow with an indignant snort and bucks Kris as she passes by. The strike nearly throws her from her hooves again, but she rallies and brings her mother's hammer down in a crushing blow to Thrash's back. The hammer slams into her crupper with a deafening ring, and for once the mare snarls in pain. “I'll show you,” she shouts as she repeats the motion.

Kris tries to dive aside, but the pain in her chest had grown to the point she could no longer ignore it, and she instead staggers forward awkwardly. Far enough to avoid taking the blow directly in the back, but it still lands with devastating effect on her crupper. She lets out a pained shriek as the blow slams her to the ground, and she freezes in place, terrified to move. She knew she was hurt... probably badly... but her mind told her to lay still to avoid making it worse. Something felt wrong... Suddenly she notices that she can taste blood in her mouth, and the stabbing in her chest is slowly augmented by an intense burning.

“I hope this works...” Khenal says to himself as he takes off, circling the room to build up speed.  Demora simply sneers at him again.  “Finally remembered you had wings?  Fat lot of good they’ll do you!  I’m going to enjoy killing you!”

Khenal ignores her, too concerned with ending their fight quickly so he can try to help his friends.  Hugwax’ retinue was proving to be more trouble than they expected.  At least Friesden was being ignored... for now.  He shakes the grisly thought from his mind as he turns and dives towards Demora.  She gives him an evil grin as he closes.  “Too slow, chicken-horse!” she shouts as she lashes at him.  At the same time, Khenal does something she wasn’t expecting: he hurls his spear at her.  Her whip hits him in the helmet, and she strikes again, fast as lightning to his wing, snapping it with a loud crack!  The second attack gives her too little time to fully dodge the spear, though, and it grazes her cheek, leaving a small streak of crimson.

With Otik’s attention taken up by his brother, Tor lunges at her and finally manages to latch onto her after a brief struggle. His first course of action is to slam the pommel of his hammer into her cheek, like she so kindly did to his nose with her crossbow. “Take that!” he shouts, more than a bit satisfied to get some revenge.

Pound joins the two and immediately rams his hammer into the flexible armor on her abdomen. They had to get her out of the fight immediately if they were going to have any hope of ganging up on and defeating Starkey.

Otik folds under the twins’ assault, Tor’s blow knocking the adamantine chanfron from her head. She barely has time to recover before Pound’s hammer slams into her belly, knocking the wind from her. She drops to the floor, losing her grip on her crossbow.

No!

Without pause, Starkey changes course, diving towards his stricken lover. He catches Otik mere feet above the stone tiles, gently lowering her to the floor. “Can you stand?”

Otik rolls over and tries to get to her hooves, but fails. she spits out a mouthful of blood. “I... I t-think I’m out o’ this fight, luv...”

Khenal fares far worse from the attacks he suffered, and crashes in a heap.  His armor had saved him again, though it may have simply delayed the inevitable now.  Demora gives an evil chuckle as she looks at the fallen alicorn, still in a daze from the whip-strike to the head and the crash.  “Pathetic!  And now you don’t even have your precious spear!  Hmm... speaking of things precious to you...”  She glances at Friesden, huddled in the corner and shivering.

Charity, managing to gain the upper hand, takes the princess to the ground. Hugwax laying on the floor underneath Charity, both mares heavily bruised, Charity looks to her side and pulls her knife back to her with her magic. Levitating the blade over the royal mare's face, she speaks, "And now Hugwax, It is over."

Kris realizes then that she couldn't possibly get to her hooves in time to avoid the next blow from the maul, and it would surely kill her. Even still she reaches out and tries to pull herself out of the way, but she knew she was doomed. She was going to die...

She closes her eyes and braces for the impact that would end her life.

Tor and Pound grin at each other, satisfied that the battle was surely theirs now.  They both raise their weapons and begin a slow descent toward Starkey and Otik.  One swing and this would be over...

Charity's knife floats upward in preparation of the final blow when suddenly, Charity hears a mare's voice screaming with rage.

Demora slowly walks towards Friesden, an evil gleam in her eyes.  She lashes the wall just above Friesden, tearing a gouge in the stone with her silver whip to gain Friesden’s attention. Friesden quivers in her horseshoes, turning her head down.  Demora grins and lashes the floor just before Friesden’s hooves.  “I want those pretty eyes up here!”

“O-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-okay,” stammers Friesden, lifting her head to face Demora, fear on her face. Demora leans in close, putting away her whip a moment to lick Friesden’s nose.  “Anypony ever tell you you’re beautiful when you’re terrified?”

Friesden flinches at the licking, and stammers out “N-n-n-n-n-n-n-n-n-no, nopo-o-o-o-o-o-ony ever ha-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-as. P-p-p-p-p-p-please...D-d-d-d-d-d-d-don’t k-k-k-k-k-k-k-k-k-k-kill Khenal...Please?”

Kris looks up with an air of curiosity when she isn’t killed, just in time to see Thrash heading for Charity.  She tries to scream for Charity to avoid the incoming blow, but her cries only came out as a choked gasp.

Charity's magic cuts out, her knife falling blade first into the stone floor where it sticks in the smoothed granite. Turning she sees Thrash about to strike her with her enormous maul. Charity tries to get out of the way, but takes a strong blow to her polished steel peytral, and she is sent spinning backwards several feet and lands with a thud. Charity tries to stand but falls again, coughing up blood.

Hugwax stands up. “Yes, Duchess it is over. Thrash, kill the pig.”

Khenal slowly recovers from the daze of crashing, finally taking in how his friends are doing: Poorly.  Kris looks terrified to move, and with that massive dent in the armor near the base of her tail, he didn’t blame her.  Charity had Hugwax grinning evilly at her as a large earthpony mare hefted a massive maul to crush her. Otik struggling to stand, as Starkey does his best to keep the terrible twins off of her.  And Friesden, his Only Light... had that monster Demora looming over her.

All his friends, and the love of his life... all in mortal danger!  He tries to stand, but his legs seem like they’re made of jelly.  He can’t lose them!  Kris, always able to lighten the mood.  Charity, so giving and thoughtful.  Friesden, his Only Light and the kindest pony to ever grace Equestria.  Starkey, so staunchly honest.  Otik, loyal and true.  He clenches his eyes shut as he tries to find  his magic, grasping at straws for anything to save his friends.

‘Oh Sisters please!  Not my Friends!  Not Friesden!  Take me instead!  Just do something to help them!’  Time seems to slow as he feels the soft and familiar warmth of his magic... and something more as well.  He opens his eyes, seeing death-blows slowly descending on his friends.  Instead of fear, though, he feels strength from the sight of the ponies important to him.

“No.”  His voice seems to reverberate through the hall as his horn flares to life, roughly shoving Hugwax and her cronies back towards the throne and levitating his spear back to him.  He stands, bolstered by the simple presence of his friends as they start to gather themselves, and joins them.

Kris looks around in utter confusion as their foes are cast about like dolls.  She has no idea what is going on, but she wasn’t about to let the sudden reprieve go to waste.  Khenal was standing nearby, cloaked in magical might so strong she could feel it, and all through the magical null fields cast off by Demora and Thrash.   With a pained cry she forces herself to her hooves, feeling very weak in her rear legs.  Nevertheless, she soldiers on and joins Khenal at his side, bathed in the inviting warmth of his magic.  Her mouth, chest and back together were agonizing, but she stands next to him with a determined glower on her face and her mother’s hammer gripped in her mouth.  She was not going to give up.

Wait... was this Khenal’s magic?  It was so strong... permeating every bit of her body.  No, this wasn’t Khenal... not alone.  It was something more, something far greater than any magic she had ever felt in her life.  She could feel the connection to her friends and family.  It was almost overwhelming, so strong and pure that she felt the magical emptiness from Demora and Thrash vanish.  Finally, she could cast the spell she so desperately needed.  A blinding flash of gold from her horn later and the pain in her friends and her body vanishes, along with the superficial wounds, though the weakness in her legs remains.  But there was no time to think about that, there was a fight to finish.

Friesden squeaks in shock as the earth pony mare disappears, and she looks around to see Khenal standing again, his magic returned. In an instant, she scrambles up and runs over to him, hugging him tight in her fear.

With the flash of gold light from Kris’s magic, all Charity’s pain melted away. Finally able to force herself to stand she quickly moves over to stand beside her friends.

As brilliant golden light envelops Otik’s body, she can feel the strength return to her limbs. Starkey pulls her to her hooves, and the two of them join their friends beneath the glow of Khenal’s magic.

Hugwax and her guard begin to stand, Thrash looks utterly confused, while Demora is smoldering with rage. “How! How is this possible! No magic can move me! What trickery is this!” she shouts at Khenal.

Khenal replies in the same voice, clearly heard as the very air around them all seems to speak.  “This is no mere magic... this is Magic!  No single pony can wield this, for it is the very bonds of companionship that fuel it!”

This Magic was unlike anything Khenal had ever felt before.  It felt like the very reins of creation were in his grip.  No, not his grip.  Well, not his alone.  He could feel his friends, each guiding and shaping Magic in their own way.  They provided the power, and trusted him enough to shape it for them. 

Kris glowers at Hugwax and her guards as the mysterious power flows through her. She feels as if she was on the verge of something enormous, but something not quite within her power to control directly.  That... she felt  Khenal was the one who held the final piece of the puzzle, and she focuses on the intangible and barely comprehensible power, pushing it, molding it, wishing... wishing as if she knew what she was doing.  She wanted Hugwax and her guards gone.  She didn’t care how, she just wanted this fight over and for Hugwax to lose!  If she could influence that, she was doing everything she could imagine to do so!

Charity feels the immense power of this Magic flowing through her, through all her friends. She wasn’t sure what it was, but suspected it was related to the virtues they had each had magically inscribed upon their belongings. The magic in the air was surely powerful enough to turn this fight around. She focused on what she desired, to give the gift of freedom to the ponies of Glitterglen, by ridding the world of all the ponies who threatened them. As she did this she felt the energy begin to coalesce into something more controlled and less chaotic.

Starkey feels... something coursing through his body. Something powerful. Is this what magic feels like? He turns to look up at Khenal, at the brilliant energies flowing from his horn.

No... this is what Magic feels like. He laughs aloud, seeing the Sisters’ plan finally laid out. The marks on their weapons... the Elements of Harmony... the six of them had been chosen to bear Their greatest weapons. Their victory this day was the Sister’s will, and Starkey threw every fiber of his being into ensuring that it came to pass.

Friesden feels innervated as the Magic courses through her, still refusing to let go of Khenal. Whatever it was, she hadn’t a clue, but she just knew that she didn’t want it to stop, almost luxuriating in the feeling. Even when the foals were born, she hadn’t felt so happy. She just wanted whatever it was to keep on going, for as long as it could. She felt safe, protected, almost untouchable with Khenal beside her. She never, ever, wanted to be apart from him, more than ever before.

Otik felt... strong. Stronger than she ever had before. She could feel the power radiating from Khenal’s horn permeate every inch of her body. With this kind of power, she felt like she could do anything. And right now, there was nothing she wanted more than to rid the world of the hateful princess Hugwax, and see the crown rest in its rightful place - on Miss Charity’s brow.

Hugwax and her Royal Guard get onto their hooves, Thrash and Demora in the front with the pegasi twins on either side of the Princess. Demora shouts at Khenal, “I don’t know what sort of tricks you are trying to pull, but you and your ‘friends’ can not win. You are out of your depth!”

“We have each other, Demora.  We cannot fail.”  Khenal closes his eyes, focussing on the desires of his friends as they help shape the Magic, refining and stabilizing the power.  Freedom, their foes gone, safety, victory, Charity as princess.  There was nothing else to do with the energy but release it.  The energy starts to coalesce around Khenal and his friends, each radiating a different color.  They each begin to slowly levitate, colorful power coursing through their beings.

“We have been gifted with the Elements of Harmony, greatest weapons of the Sisters.  May they have mercy on you all, for we shall not.”  The energies swirl together around the six, gathering into a coherent beam of prismatic might before blasting Princess Hugwax and her retinue.  The raw power obscures them from view for a moment before the friends drop back to the ground, exhausted and spent from the immense power they all channeled. 
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: KingStrongbeard on June 18, 2012, 09:46:14 pm
The dias and throne show clearly the influence of the immense power.  They almost shine with bright color, and contrast several small piles of dust resting about the dias.  Resting on one pile is the tiara of The Shells of Dance, leaving no doubt of what happened to the formal monarch and her guards.

A few moments after the blast, Charity begins to pull herself to her hooves, she looks around and sees her other friends starting to come to as well. She could stand but barely, she felt like whatever that Magic was it had taken a lot out of her. She approaches the golden throne cautiously, and examines the 5 piles of ash laying on the ground before the throne. She turns outward from the throne, and begins to cast a spell, though her heads pounds in protest as she does so, “Ponies of Glitterglen” her voice rings loudly throughout the hall her magic making sure it echoes throughout the whole of Glitterglen, “This is your...This is Charity Conventtulip, we have taken the throne room. The Princess is dead. We are free at last my friends. We are all free.” Charity’s spell ends, she feels faint, she stumbles for a moment and catches herself, she feels the need to sit down, the only chair to be found is the golden throne she collapses into it her head spinning.

Khenal groans and slowly finds his hooves, helping Friesden stand as well.  His jaw drops as he
sees just what they had all wrought together.  He sees Charity stumble and collapse onto the throne, exhausted after alerting the fort of the good news.  His horn glows softly as he levitates the tiara from the pile of dust that was Hugwax and carefully places it atop Charity’s brow.

Friesden looked around as she was helped up. Where were the ponies? The significance of the dust soon became apparent, and she turned away from the sight, and threw up, gagging. No sooner had she emptied her stomach onto the floor than her legs wobbled and gave way, refusing to support her weight.

Charity looks up at Khenal, her mind beginning to clear again. Recognizing the significance of the action Khenal had just done she looks down at the ashes and then back up and smiles at him.

Khenal lays by Friesden and covers her in a wing, then smiles back at Charity as his horn glows brighter, mimicking her voice spell.  “Ponies of Glitterglen, this is Khenal.  Princess Hugwax is no more.  May Princess Charity Coventtulips reign with wisdom and prosperity!”  With that, he bows low to his friend on the throne.  There was no doubt in his mind that Charity would make a fine ruler.

Kris finally comes to and takes in the enormity of what had just occurred.  She sees the piles of remains, and her mother in law sitting atop the throne.  Nopony deserved the honor more, and she too joined Khenal in bowing before her.  She knew how much Charity disliked it when her mother had done so, but for this occasion, nothing less would suffice.  It was all she could do to stay upright with the weakness in her legs, but for this, she gave everything she had.  They were finally free.

Charity looks out at all her friends bowing before her, Khenal’s words echo in her mind, “Princess Charity...” That title did not yet sound right for her as she thought it, but she was sure, with her friends at her side, together they could do anything.

THE END
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on June 21, 2012, 09:35:53 pm
Khenal levitates a washing rag, gently scrubbing at Friesden's coat in the shower.  Her reaction to Hugwax and her guards being gone was a bit severe, but it made sense.  She's so sensitive and caring, it must have hit her hard to know she helped destroy several ponies.

"How are you feeling, Friesden?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on June 21, 2012, 09:39:44 pm
Friesden flinches at the question. "I....I...." She starts trembling.

"S-s-she...All s-s-s-she wanted...was m-m-m-m-me!"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on June 21, 2012, 09:48:41 pm
Khenal gently nuzzles Friesden and pulls her into a soft hug.  "She wanted the rest of us dead... and I doubt Hugwax would have let her... keep you."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on June 21, 2012, 09:50:14 pm
"M-m-m-maybe..." begins Friesden, before squeezing Khenal, "maybe if I'd danced...for her...she wouldn't have wanted anypony dead...maybe...maybe she'd have gone good..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on June 22, 2012, 12:50:31 am
Khenal gently kisses her and smiles.  "Maybes about the past don't help anypony, Friesden, least of all you.  You can't blame yourself for what happened to them.  They all chose to be evil... and got their just reward for it."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on June 22, 2012, 12:52:19 am
"But...Maybe they could have been good... W-w-w-w-what if...What if they w-w-w-w-were like m-m-m-m-me, before?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on June 22, 2012, 12:55:06 am
"I don't think they were possessed or controlled.  When that surge hit... I think we would have all been able to feel if they were being coerced."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on June 22, 2012, 12:56:57 am
"But...did they really have to die?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on June 22, 2012, 01:04:22 am
Khenal sighs and shakes his head.  "I don't know.  But... dwelling on it wont change anything.  We may have been able to take them alive, but then what?  Leave them in a cell for the rest of their lives?  Execute them?  Banish them so they can come back with an army?  We may have reformed them, but likely not.  It's in the past, my Light... all we can do is hope we never have to do it again."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on June 22, 2012, 01:06:03 am
"I...I don't want to fight again. I really don't. You won't make me fight again, will you? Please? I...I...I just want to have a big family, and...And...And live happily ever after...Not fight. Please?"
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on June 22, 2012, 01:09:59 am
Khenal smiles at her, wiping a bit of her mane out of her face from the shower.  "I will do my best to make sure you never have to fight again, Friesden."  He tenderly kisses his love, earnestly meaning to keep her from any further fighting.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on June 22, 2012, 01:14:14 am
Friesden holds the kiss for what seems an eternity, before finally breaking it with a happy sigh and smile on her face. "I do believe you, Khenal, completely. I love you so much. I'm such a lucky mare to have your love. I want to be with you forever, my love...my darling Khenny."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Khenal on June 22, 2012, 01:23:22 am
Khenal almost melts at the nickname bestowed on him by his Only Light.  "Oh Friesden... I love you so much."  He turns the shower off and starts to dry her, then gives her a wink.  "So, about a big family..."
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on June 22, 2012, 01:26:34 am
Friesden smiles wide.

((Fade to black.))
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on June 24, 2012, 02:12:03 am
Kris' Diary - 1st Granite, 103

Well... it's done.  Hugwax and her guards are dead.  Glitterglen is free.

We faced her yesterday.  All of the militia rallied together and secured Glitterglen while my friends and I faced her in her throne room.  Charity, Khenal, Friesden, grandpa Starkey and grandma Otik, and myself, against Hugwax, Demora, Pound, Tor and Thrash.  The fight was more intense than I could have ever imagined, which when you consider that Hugwax was protecting herself with the best soldiers she could find, made sense.  I was hopelessly outclassed.

In the end, we were all pretty soundly beaten, aside from grandpa Starkey, but even he couldn't take them all himself.  I thought we were all going to die for certain, having failed to free Glitterglen from Hugwax.  The consequences would surely have been dire for anypony left in the city... I shudder to think what would have happened if Hugwax had survived to unleash her wrath.

But, thank the sisters, a miracle was provided for us.  In that last moment, when everything looked hopeless, the purpose of the "titles" granted to us was revealed.  It had to be their plan all along.  It has to be why grandpa Starkey and grandma Otik were returned to us.  In that last moment, it was revealed that Khenal too was favored by the sisters.  Together, we were the Elements of Harmony, and using their ultimate power we destroyed Hugwax and her guards.

It was indescribable.  The power was so incredible... it was as if we could do anything, and we did what was needed at that moment.  We destroyed the most evil pony I have ever had the displeasure to know, and the world is far better for it.  After it was over... I admit it took some time for the consequences of what had just happened to settle in my mind.  Although she surely deserved what happened to her, it was the first time I've actually helped kill a normal pony.  I guess it's not right to think of her as any different from the diomedians who besiege us.  If there's anything I learned from Heiro and Starkey, it's that the diomedians are ponies too... but I still couldn't help but dwell on it.  She wasn't a soldier either...

Regardless, I know it's what had to be done.  There was no other way to be free of her hate and tyranny.

The crowning moment of it all though was, well, the crowning of Charity as the new princess.  I can't think of a pony who has earned it more than she has.  She has done an amazing job of turning Glitterglen into a prosperous city, far from the hellhole the old princess intended it to be.  I have no doubt she will lead us to places Hugwax could never dream of.

Of course, with that comes the part that scares me.  Her crowning is never going to be recognized by Tailentranced.  It's only a matter of time until they hear of what has happened, or suspect it otherwise and send their armies to come find her.  Glitterglen has withstood raids from the local diomedians, but I don't know how long we could stand against the full might of Tailentranced.  We're free from Hugwax for now... but for how long?  From what I understand, the general will take her place, and he's little better.

It's a time of hope, but also a time of uncertainty and fear.  What world have I created for my daughter?  I can't help but wonder if she would have been better off under Hugwax.  If we fall to a siege, everypony here will probably be put to the sword.  Even the children.  The thought of that sickens me, and I don't want to dwell on it now.

I'm too tired to think about it right now.  I didn't walk away from the fight without injuries, and just hours ago Friesden and the doctors pieced together the shattered bones in my lower spine where Thrash struck me.  It's a miracle I can walk at all, they told me, which I'm not afraid to admit scared me quite thoroughly.  My legs are still a bit weak, and they told me it could be like that for a few weeks yet, but I should recover soon.  That's a relief at least.

I will suffer from the injury for the rest of my life though.  I lost the feeling in my tail, and can't move it anymore.  They tell me that's not likely to ever get better.  I was pretty upset at first, but already I'm starting to come to terms with it.  I can still walk, which in perspective is far, far more important.

At least I'll never forget what was done yesterday.  Not that I thought I ever would.

Anyway, I'm tired, so I'm heading to bed now.  I've got a lot to think about, but I think I'll put that off for now.


*******

As Kris finishes writing the page in her diary, she sets it aside and looks at the two ponies at her side.  She wouldn't be leaving the hospital for a few days yet, but as long as she had them with her, she'd be fine.  Adamant was sitting at her bedside, propped against it with his head lying on the bed next to hers, and she gave him a small nuzzle.  "I love you, Addy."   He was almost asleep, but makes a small smile at her.  "I love you, too."

Lorica was snuggled up between the two of them on her bed, sleeping quietly.  She couldn't help but see the parallel to the nights she had spent at her mother's side when she was in this hospital, but the situation was a bit happier this time at least.  With her magic she lifts her paralyzed tail and drapes it across her daughter before curling up with her and Adamant as much as her braced back would allow her.  It would take some time for her to heal, even with magic, but she was going to be fine.

And she could worry about the future later.

*******

Out of sight, but not out of mind, Falcata and Estoc sit just off to the side, watching their daughter cuddle with her family.  Falcata nuzzles Estoc and leans against him with a large smile on her face.  "I'm really proud of her.  She's grown up so much, and done so much good."

Estoc returns the nuzzle and nods.  "Yes, I couldn't be more proud of her."  He wraps a foreleg around Falcata and adds, "I wish I could have been there for her, but you did a wonderful job raising her."

Falcata's smile persists as she replies, "I suppose I did a thing or two right after all."  The smile fades a bit.  "I just worry what will happen now..."

"Everything will be alright," Estoc assures her, drawing her in closer.  "Just wait and see."

She wasn't so confident, but after seeing Hugwax and her underlings' souls off to their surely unpleasant judgment, she could see a little hope in the future.  Charity and the others had come so far.  They would see this to its end, when everypony lived without fear of their ruler.

And Falcata would be there, out of sight, for it all.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Paaaad on January 19, 2013, 01:34:38 pm
Yes I know I may tecnicley be necroing here, but I just want to invite all those who particapited in the thread over here (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=121180.0), to Mistyoceans. RP is encouraged.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: slothen on May 09, 2013, 12:43:06 pm
Since this has been necro'd, I might as well ask, is this thread archived somewhere besides the forums?  I'm wondering if there's a way to read through the main story without going through 2 years, 600 pages of posts, and every claimed pony's journal (i'd read the first 100 pages sometime last year).  Would it be sufficient to just read kingstrongbeard's posts?
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Telgin on May 09, 2013, 02:10:16 pm
KingStrongbeard's posts cover most of the important details.  You may want to read the last few pages of the thread to be sure you get the entire ending, since I'm not sure if that's included in his journals.

I know there was an attempt to transcribe all of this and to edit it into a more readable form, but so far as I know that was never finished.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Iceblaster on May 09, 2013, 02:55:51 pm
While I wasn't involved here, this has been archived on the first post of this board. While no one that I know of has transcribed this into a readable form, atleast you should be able to read it without having to search through "2 years and 600 posts"

Right here (http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=89305.msg2458117#msg2458117)
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: Dsarker on May 09, 2013, 07:02:21 pm
KingStrongbeard's posts cover most of the important details.  You may want to read the last few pages of the thread to be sure you get the entire ending, since I'm not sure if that's included in his journals.

I know there was an attempt to transcribe all of this and to edit it into a more readable form, but so far as I know that was never finished.

Yeah. You should yell at Khenal to do that.

Anyway, tl;dr of the thread - Friesden gets married to Khenal, Starkey gets married to Otik, Charity gets married to Crypt, Kris gets married to Addy, most every other claimed pony dies, they kill the evil queen, everypony lives happily ever after.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: zarath on April 29, 2014, 09:01:05 am
Ponies attepmting to live through the cruel, unforgiving world of df? This i have to see.
Title: Re: My Little Fortress. Glitterglen.
Post by: TheImmortalRyukan on February 09, 2017, 03:59:04 pm
Hmm, so this is my predecessor. I tip my hat to one of the greats. Heres to hoping Newmeadow continues the pony fort line.