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Creative Projects / Six Shot Chaos
« on: January 26, 2012, 03:48:29 am »
So I've been doing this little creative project for a few months now that is leaning towards becoming a comic, and I have gotten to the point where I am actually starting to make stuff but I am having limited success in getting any critical assessments from friends and family. Now seeing how the bay12ers are a creative bunch I thought you all would be a great group of people to ask for your point of view.
The story is a standard western yarn. Gunslinger hero, living in the west off rattlesnake venom and his wits, comes to a little down-on-its-luck mining town who through a series of events crack his rough gritty exterior to show the big damn hero he truly is. Throw in a love interest and some paranormal Lovecraftian hijinks and there you go. Six Shot Chaos.
I have two things that I want help with. One is the image below. Its a rough sketch-up of the potential cover. I'm not looking for art advice as it is clearly wip, but before I go about putting an extended amount of time going into detailed drawing I was wondering what you might have to say about the placement, action, lighting, imagery, etc. that strikes you.

The image is of our hero facing off against some sort of shadow-creature gun drawn. Shadows clearly play a large roll in the image. There are also cacti and a rising/setting sun. all images are simply there because they are more useful then simply placing rectangles on the page with the word "Cactus" or "Hero guy" in them.
My other question is a bit more specialized, I have a villain character that I am using who is having name issues. His current working name is Clause Fukuoka. Problem is I have extremely limited understanding of Japanese and have very little way of knowing what it meant and if it would work in the context I was using it in. His previous name was going to be fukumu, while the meaning of the word would work, the actual usage as a name, or even on its own like that might not work or make any sense whatsoever. Japanese written forms are beyond my ken and I just want to get it right, or at least acceptably close to it, the few times I will be using it in my story.
I look forward to your advise and hope to be posting more SSC things soon.
The story is a standard western yarn. Gunslinger hero, living in the west off rattlesnake venom and his wits, comes to a little down-on-its-luck mining town who through a series of events crack his rough gritty exterior to show the big damn hero he truly is. Throw in a love interest and some paranormal Lovecraftian hijinks and there you go. Six Shot Chaos.
I have two things that I want help with. One is the image below. Its a rough sketch-up of the potential cover. I'm not looking for art advice as it is clearly wip, but before I go about putting an extended amount of time going into detailed drawing I was wondering what you might have to say about the placement, action, lighting, imagery, etc. that strikes you.

The image is of our hero facing off against some sort of shadow-creature gun drawn. Shadows clearly play a large roll in the image. There are also cacti and a rising/setting sun. all images are simply there because they are more useful then simply placing rectangles on the page with the word "Cactus" or "Hero guy" in them.
My other question is a bit more specialized, I have a villain character that I am using who is having name issues. His current working name is Clause Fukuoka. Problem is I have extremely limited understanding of Japanese and have very little way of knowing what it meant and if it would work in the context I was using it in. His previous name was going to be fukumu, while the meaning of the word would work, the actual usage as a name, or even on its own like that might not work or make any sense whatsoever. Japanese written forms are beyond my ken and I just want to get it right, or at least acceptably close to it, the few times I will be using it in my story.
I look forward to your advise and hope to be posting more SSC things soon.



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