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DF Suggestions / Stepladder Uses Suggestion
« on: June 06, 2015, 09:24:13 pm »
Now that we have stepladders in game, why not let dwarves use them to move from from one z-level to another? I imagine it would act as a virtual up/down ramp or stairs pair once picked up by a dwarf. I imagine it would be useful for constructing outdoor structures, especially in the roofing department.

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Other Games / Looking for a game
« on: May 17, 2015, 10:56:21 pm »
It's been a while since I've last been on, and I can't find the Looking for a Game thread so I suppose I'll make a new topic.

In any case, I recall seeing a 2d isometric fantasy citybuilder kickstarter project that looks to be along the lines of RimWorld or Dwarf Fortress. Does anyone remember what it is?

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Creative Projects / Bien's Less Than 500 Meter Starships!
« on: December 16, 2010, 10:05:40 am »
So, I've been a little bored after school. I drew up some concepts in my head and transfered them into 3ds Max. These are still WIP, as I'm thinking of adding turrets and textures and such.
Here's the Dreadnought class, which is around 495 meters long.

And her top silhouette:

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   “What the hell are we doing on this rock anyway?” The marine at the back of the formation whined, boots kicking up dust, “There’s nothing but rocks and dust… and more dust!”
   “Shut your fucking mouth, Colins!” The sergeant at the front waved a gauntleted hand at the marine, “Command wants us to check this shithole for anything interesting, like your mother.”
   The whiner shut up and continued walking, protected from the heat of the burning sun by his matte black powered armor. They all wore the same Mark-12 Powered Infantry Armor; only it was configured differently for the sergeant and his specialist troops. Their sniper for instance, had advanced optics and targeting systems built into his helmet and linked to his Linear Accelerator Rifle, while the sergeant had extra detection and communications gear built into his ‘backpack’.
   The pointman passed by a particularly large rock and froze, holding a palm upwards as he looked at something.
   “I’ve found a body… unknown armor system, unknown IFF. I don’t think it’s any of ours.”
   “Markings?”
   “Yes sir. The armor’s all blue… serial numbers and a pinup of some sort on the shoulder plate.”
   “Cause of death?”
   “There are spines of some sort embedded in his chest, they look organic.”
   “Ouch. Alright, everyone be on guard. There’s no telling if the killers are still around.”
   “Contact! Seismic sensors are on the fritz!”
   The ground shook faintly as yellow contacts popped up on the small sensors window on Colins’ HUD. A worm of sorts burst from the ground, swinging the wickedly curved scythes tipping each of its arms at him. Colin ducked under the scythes and lifted his rifle, firing a short blast at the creature’s armored carapace. A beam of cerulean energy lanced from the rifle’s accelerator housing and burned its way through one of the arms. The beast screamed in agony and brought its remaining scythe down on top of him. The blade sparked against his defensive shielding, causing it to flare.
   “Fuck!” Colins said, rolling under the next swing.
   Another beam speared into the mouth, vaporizing the creature’s spinal column and brain stem. The body hit the dust. And then everything dissolved into chaos, dozens upon dozens of four legged creatures dug their way out of the ground, stabbing at the surprised marines with the claws mounted on their backs. Colins vaporized a few by setting his rifle from ‘pulse’ to ‘beam’ mode and panning it across a swathe of flesh and carapace.
   The sergeant ordered everyone to retreat onto the rock, giving them a better firing position. Spines sailed above Colins’ head as he turned around, one such projectile sparked against his shields, depositing a thin layer of corrosive liquid on the energy barrier. Colins spotted the source of the projectiles, it was one of those worm things.
   “Atlava! Toss a few detpacks into this Charlie Foxtrot!”
   “Sir!” The demolitions specialist unclipped a set of detonation packs, no bigger than her fist, and tossed them into the swarm.
   A second later, vibrant azure explosions leapt up as plasma and thermite were released into the air, reacting explosively as they clung to carapace and flesh. A sizable chunk of the horde was knocked out around the rock; their numbers were beginning to thin. Everybody unleashed streams of charged particles at the rapidly dwindling numbers, switching from beams to pulses as soon as circumstance allowed.
   The last of the four legged creatures was put down by the sniper, a hypervelocity gauss slug tearing it into a dozen pieces while still retaining enough energy to convert to plasma upon impacting with the ground. And finally, everything was still. The scorched and trampled dust was littered with craters and gouges, splashed with blood and gore, and shot to hell by more firepower than an average Terran Marine could shake a gauss rifle at.
   “Stealthed contact!” The sniper warned.

   November Annabella Terra, or “Nova” as she was known by her callsign watched the group of soldiers wearing strange armor march their way across the desert wasteland of Mar Sara, which had been reclaimed from the zerg yet again almost a year ago, following the defeat of the Queen of Blades by Raynor. She noted that the armor was rather thin looking compared to the CMC suits, however it looked to be light and maneuverable, and perhaps even comfortable as the soldiers seemed to exert no effort whatsoever as they trudged through the hot sun. She assumed that the armor was slightly more advanced than the CMC.
   She zoomed in on one of the soldiers, taking a close look at his kit. He was holding an advanced looking rifle with one hand. Grenades clung to his chestplate and thigh, as did the large caliber sidearm and combat knife. She quirked an eyebrow at the soldier’s equipment decision, as if a combat knife could slice through neosteel armor. They passed a rock and began inspecting the corpse slumped against it. Nova shifted her focus to what appeared to be the team’s sniper. The size and apparent firepower of the rifle he was holding made her jealous. She was broken from her observations by the appearance of a hydralisk in front of the soldier at the very back of the formation.
   “He’s dead.” She whispered to herself.
   She was wrong. The soldier ducked under the scythes with superhuman speed and fired his rifle. She expected it to be a projectile weapon, she was very wrong in that aspect. A cerulean beam lanced from the rifle and into the hydralisk’s armored carapace, doing serious damage to the zerg. Its scythe bounced an energy field, doing no further damage, she quirked an eyebrow. The other soldiers opened fire with their own energy weapons as zerglings and hydralisks emerged from their burrows. One of the soldiers panned his rifle across a clutch of zerglings, burning through them as he climbed onto the rock for a better firing position. They were fighting against a relatively small force compared to the swarms that had so often drowned Marines, Goliaths, and even Siege Tanks in blood. Fantastic blue explosions leapt up around the rock and engulfed the writhing mass of zerglings trying to make their way towards the unknown trooper.
   Bits of cooked flesh rained down upon the soldiers and everything fell quiet. And then the soldiers turned in her direction, too orderly to have been mere chance. She had been found.
   “Shit.”
   

Note that this will be updated weekly, this bit here's only a part of the prologue.
ED: What I meant with this is that I'll be moving forward a chapter every week.

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DF Dwarf Mode Discussion / A question about channels and ceilings.
« on: October 11, 2010, 08:59:43 am »
So, I've been using the dig channel designation to cut away overhanging stone that I do not want. However, it seems that the dwarves keep standing on the stone that they are about to cut away. I've used Restricted traffic areas set to 100 weight, but still they wish suicide upon themselves.

So how would I go about fulfilling my objective, while keeping my dwarves alive?

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Model finished. Want texturer, just PM me if you want in. ;)

FFM-182 Excalibur










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Creative Projects / Reclaiming Eden
« on: November 23, 2009, 04:40:38 am »
Prologue:
Paradise Under Siege

The battle was over, debris from the small Militia fleet in orbit around Eden V burned up in her atmosphere as the victorious Transhuman Empire fleets began falling into parking orbits. Two heavily damaged Militia Cruisers opened fire in defiance.

Boom! Boom! Boom! Three ship-to-ship rounds streaked from the first Cruiser's chin mounted turret. Two rounds were shot down by the Empire's point defense grid and the other smashed into the drive assembly of an Imperial frigate, crippling it.

Thwack! A miniature sun speared  into the Cruiser's CIC, globules of molten metal drifted into space. Thwack! Thwack! Two more suns lanced into her reactor chamber. The Cruiser vanished in a flash of light.

“Distress! If anyone can hear us, plea-” The second Cruiser fell under a tide of kinetic rounds.

And then the Imperials began their orbital bombardment. Kinetic rounds slammed into the planet's atmosphere and smashed into key military and civilian targets.


Down on the planet, Grigory Borislav looked into the sky to see several trails in the sky. They slowly resolved into massive, bus sized projectiles. They slammed into the shields covering the city with heavy thumps. Soon, the shields failed and the massive towers overlooking the city crumbled to the ground in thick plumes of dust.

People ran, screaming wildly and were torn apart by the shrapnel rounds that followed. A building near Grigory fell, blanketing him in smoke and dust. The city was falling, an explosion ripped into the air as fuel depots caught fire, thick plumes of smoke rose into the sky like deadly tentacles.

Imperial bombers flew down from orbit and slagged the defensive grids, leaving the city open. Fortresses and emplacements fell under the continuous barrage. Missiles rose from several buildings in columns of white smoke and reached for the enemy above. Several detonated in actinic explosions.

The smell of burning flesh assaulted Grigory as he ran for cover, and then shockwaves rippled out of the horizon as powerplants exploded, the city's lights flickered and died. The Capital Jurisdiction tower fell sideways into a block of civilian apartments, killing thousands.

More missiles rose into the sky, the columns of smoke branched and each individual missile headed for the bombers above. Miniature suns rained into the city with sounds like rolling thunder. Explosions added to the chaos as flaming wreckage fell from the sky. The shattered rear of a bomber slammed into the earth behind Grigory and threw him to the ground.

The last thing he would ever see would be the sun as it fell from the sky.


Sixteen Imperial troopships slammed into Eden's atmosphere, their hulls glowing a crimson red as they breached the upper layers. They leveled off and engaged their hover thrusters, finding suitable landing zones as they hovered above Eden's largest city, Frostguard.

Drop pods rained upon the city as massive shapes blocked out the setting sun's rays. Many contained troops and armor, while the rest were materials for field bases. Imperial troops soon wrestled control from the Confederate Militia's hands and began fortifying their defenses.

New fortresses rose over the rubble of their Confederate counterparts, a new administrative building loomed over the ruined city as people ran for their lives only to be rounded up inside detention camps and makeshift apartment complexes.

“Stay safe and follow our orders.” echoed into the streets from holographic signs “We are not your enemy, we are friends. We will help you reach the path to Enlightenment.”


Richard Lancier ducked behind a corner as Troopers rushed by, dragging men, women and children into a courtyard. There, robotic arms secured collars to their neck, making them as docile and easily led as sheep. He grimaced in disgust as they were loaded into trucks and driven off.

Two troopers dragged a woman out of her house. She tore free from their grasp before one of the troopers knocked her out with his rifle's butt.

“What do you wanna do with her?” he asked in a filtered voice.

“Dunno, take her to the education camps?” the other replied

“Let's have some fun with her first.” the two laughed

At that, Richard's grimace grew larger. A hovercam flew above and nearly shined its light onto him. He swiftly ducked inside the abandoned house and watched from a window. He saw a trooper secure another collar to her neck and she immediately rose from unconsciousness.

“Can you reprogram her?” the first one asked “I'm not in the mood for resistance.”

“Heh, sure.” The other responded and plugged a datapad into her collar.

The troopers and the woman disappeared into the house.

Richards stalked out of the house and armed his service pistol.

“Fuck them,” he whispered to himself “fuck them all.”

He crept beside the woman's house and peered into the window, where he saw the woman slowly undressing herself. The troopers removed their helmets and casually tossed them to the floor. Richards aimed his pistol and two shots rang into the darkening sky.

The first trooper fell to the ground, minus a head and the second trooper simply fell apart as his chest vaporized into a fountain of gore. The woman panicked as Richards walked in and picked up their rifles.

“Sorry. I wish I could save you.” He whispered apologetically as he aimed the pistol at her forehead, and then he pulled the trigger.

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So anyways, this is the Prologue for my new project, Reclaiming Eden. It will feature grit and gore.

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Creative Projects / Bien's 3D Renders.
« on: November 05, 2009, 06:38:13 am »

Here's a full view of the ship. Looks like the Hiigaran Destroyer has a cousin, eh?
Forgive the flat surfaces on the back, still need to do some detailwork.


Updated the detail on the back of the bridge.


A shot of the lower surfaces of the ship, still mostly unfinished since my graphics card is weak (displaying from Hardware).


Guns! Guns! Guns! Lasers and Slugs!

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Curses / Recruiting and Seduction.
« on: November 04, 2009, 06:22:23 am »
Now anyways, I was thinking that when recruiting. You should have an option to try and seduce the person/s you're recruiting for a larger chance but higher risk of getting them to join you.

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Creative Projects / Tales of a Confederacy: Triumphant Sun (MK.II)
« on: September 21, 2009, 12:08:19 am »
Prologue
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Nearly a century had passed since the conclusion of the Eradication Wars. A massive series of conflicts that engulfed the galaxy and threatened to rip the very foundations of society apart. Ended only with the loss of the Great Library--a massive collection of knowledge from all races--at the hands of the Confederacy of United Suns, an enigmatic collection of unions bound by the same basic laws.

Now, 82 years after the Great Intervention, war threatens to engulf the galaxy yet again! The Confederacy--having assumed the role of protector of less advanced empires—is now readying the massive Confederate Navy for the task it was given millenia ago, to defend the Confederacy and Her Allies.


Chapter One
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Kazimir Miroslav inserted a stylus into his datapad and pushed the rectangular projector screen away from him, he had just signed the contract that made him a trainee in the Confederate Armed Forces-Naval Wing.

“What if I die in a live fire accident?” he thought as a pang of uneasiness shot through him.

But he knew that it was his choice in joining the CAFNW. He could make working tactics and strategies on the fly, he had the wit and empathy to keep morale high. He was charismatic and sharp. He had demonstrated these at some time in his life.

Kazimir had worked as a junior-chef on a luxury cruise liner, the StarWeaver. When its rear capacitor bank malfunctioned, and exploded, it took out one of the backup generators and the FTL core, they were stranded for three days in the heart of a nebula. Three days was dangerous, even more so in a nebula. Everything from wayward comets and asteroids, to raiders and pirates could happen upon a defenseless liner.

There had been a crowd that was about to dissolve into a riot in the ship's gala room. The-then 16 year old-Kazimir had helped the Security Chief position the crowd control crews should the 'shit-hit-the-fan' and then promptly walked onto the stage with a microphone in hand and began cracking joke after joke, preventing the riot from boiling over.

“On vacation,” he had once said “I was eating some grainmeal that goes by the brand name of 'Falsarra Quakers'. An hour later, the house was hit by a tremor!”

The teen had done various routines every day, ranging from jokes to caricature sketching to even playing an instrument and conducting the band. Which was typical for those brought up in highly-artistic Milaslavos clan.

At the end of the third day, an Unyielding class Cruiser, the Sansip had docked with the StarWeaver and was taking on crew while the Oasis class Support Destroyer Medira was repairing the liner.

Kazimir had seen the Sansip and found his calling. He had completed his education and was eligible for work. Now, he was 22 years of age and old enough to be a candidate for enlistment in the CAFNW. Kaz had spent the past 8 years of his life painting and writing to pass the time, and had made a lot of money as a consequence.

The datapad beeped and Kazimir grabbed it, he was notified that CAFNHIGHCOM was sending him a data file. He took the stylus and tapped the accept icon and waited for the download to finish.

Seconds later and the download was complete, an automated decompression algorithm activated and extracted the contents of the file to a private directory; it contained several audiovisual files detailing how the training and screening process would be conducted, virtual tours and specifications on some of the smaller vessels and a small software simulation package. He had read on the forms that if you are accepted, a transport will arrive in a week’s time.

A Week Later

Kazimir’s mother, Laerauna Miroslav hugged her son with tearful eyes, his father, Gerson Mer Miroslav stood beside his mother, his eyes red and puffy. Once the mother and son had broken their embrace, Kazimir shook his father’s hand in farewell, before saluting the war veteran.

“We'll meet again mom,” Kazimir said “I'll promise that. And dad, my medals won't come posthumously.

“Through fire and ice,” Gerson replied “freedom will reign free, son.”

“Come on guys.” Kazimir said, “It’s not like it’s the last time you’ll ever see me again.”

“Kaz,” one of his brothers said “you're an idiot, but you've got what it takes.”

“Same as always, Jared.” He replied with a smile “Keep mom safe.”

“'Course I will.” Jared said, hugging his brother.

The loud thrum of medium-class anti-grav pods was heard outside.

“I guess it’s time for me to go.” Kazimir said “Jera ‘kai!” Farewell

Kazimir took his belongings from his sister’s hands and stepped outside. The day was bright and sunny, the deep blue sky was absent of clouds and far to the north, an aurora danced, complimenting the beautiful sight of Nova Armeston’s twin moons; Charity and Piety. A drab gray military transport contrasted the beautiful sight, it’s paint was chipped and scratched while dents and armor patches covered its abused shell, the mass of metal hovered a foot above the neatly groomed grass lawn of the Miroslav Family Mansion. The frigid winter winds blew on his face and made him shiver.

Kazimir waved goodbye to his family, which returned the favor through the window, he also greeted the gardener a good morning and climbed into the transport. The dimly lit rear of the vehicle was dank and smelled of dried vomit, blood and sweat. The uncomfortable looking plastic seats were chipped and broken. The vehicle had obviously seen some action before being sent to pick them up. Kazimir placed his things in an overhead storage bin and sat down. Ten other people were in the transport, they were silent, and seemed depressed. Kazimir looked at their eyes and saw a lust for vengeance combined with sorrow, they had obviously lost someone to the war. He had seen that look all too many times in his friend's eyes.

The trip to Lookout Point, a military spaceport took only 30 minutes. Freighters and dropships lifted off from numerous gantries and hangars or touched down on black Quicksphalt landing pads. Fighters patrolled the skies, leaving white trails in the serene blue dome.

Kazimir saw a ribbon of Quickspahalt pass through a mobile checkpoint, drab gray Army vehicles squatted along the road, their turrets scanning the area. A soldier in powered armor stopped the transport and pointed a scanner at his eye. And then the soldier told the driver something and the rear door slid open. He stole an uneasy glance at the checkpoint and looked at the soldier that was motioning for them to come out.

The group flashed their datapads and had their irises scanned. Kaz saw the faint shimmering of a repulsor-field ahead of him, one of the soldiers tapped an icon on his datapad and a small section of shimmer faded. The group advanced into the dome and were briefed by a man in black naval uniform.

A sleek shuttle dropped from the sky before firing its VTOL thrusters and touched the ground lightly with extended landing skids. The shuttle powered down with a fading whine and  a door slid open on its sides. A thin Iala ladder extended to the ground, and Kaz followed the group into the shuttle's bay.

In contrast to the dark and smelly interior of the battered transport, this interior was clean, brightly lit and smelled faintly of pine. The seats looked only slightly more comfortable than the ones in the transport. They switched over to a frigate and from there; they were deposited at the Desert Moon Boot Camp on Kerberos; a barren, windswept moon orbiting an equally bleak looking planet.

Training wasn't bad; as long as he avoided pissing the drill officers off, he had it safe. After four months of boot, he was sent off to the Naval Academy on Exa Armeston. There he had a schedule that was a far cry of bootcamp's drab, monotonous routine.

Kazimir yawned as he half-listened to his professor, an old Great War veteran who was getting a little too senile for his own good. He ranted on-and-on about 'The Old Days', when only men held flag positions, when antimatter cannons were common even amongst frigates and other nonsense.

Soon, the trainee found himself setting his datapad to 'record' mode so that he could catch any important information--if there was any--that he could have missed and opened an art suite. Soon, he had drawn a massive battle between Confederate Navy and Oortimi Hegemony warships. He tapped a save icon and closed the suite, deftly avoiding the vet's scanning eyes by fractions of a second.

Kaz looked at the main holoscreen, which now read 'Analyze a historical battle of your choice and write a 30 megabyte report which will be submitted at 2200 Hours Standard Military Time.'

However, the veteran had spotted Kazimir's datapad and commented:

“That's a fancy one these days son,” he said “but in the old days, those were common!”

Kaz pretended to be engrossed in his review of the Battle of Elsima, and soon found himself truly interested in the battle itself. He called up an audiovisual simulation of the battle, noting the maneuvers  and tactics that the commanders on both sides used.

He had also noted that technology seemed to have degraded in the past half-millenia since the conclusion of the Eradication Wars.

Soon, he had an essay, several video clips and even a report on things that could have been done to avoid the Pyrrhic victory that the Confederates gained at the cost of several million personnel, the planet and its shipyards and the near loss of Theta, Gamma, Omega, Epsilon and even Alpha fleets. All of this had been submitted 6 hours early, breaking the previous record by 30 minutes.

He had spent the rest of his day drafting the interior of the fabled Notani Varra'gn, a massive warship that existed only in the textbooks and rumor-mills of the Academy.

The day afterwards, he had not only turned the tides of a simulated Battle of Elsima in the Confederacy's favor, but made it turn out a total victory with a loss ratio of 3 Confederate Captial Ships per 11 Oortimi Capital craft. The rest of the day was spent receiving accolades from his instructors and colleagues, as the battle had been broadcasted onto the Academy's holoscreens.

Elsima Orbital Shipyards

1100 Hours, SCMT (Standard Confederate Military Time)

SVN-0031 Saa'mer Class Sovereign Boundless Triumph


“Evasive maneuvers!” Kazimir yelled, mentally cursing the AI-Helm for its incompetence “Just motherfucking avoid those fucking suicide AM Haulers!”

He felt the ship tilt as the hundred-kilometer long Sovereign tilted upwards, its shields just grazing the leading edge of the last hauler. A thin white beam of energy lanced from one of her portside turrets and cut the ship's drives in half, crippling it while a graviton beam caught the hauler and chucked it at an approaching Oortimi super-capital ship, bringing its shields down and scorching its black and maroon hull.

Morev-damnit!” Kazimir hissed as the ship lurched from a strike from three Kinetic destroyers. “Is everyone on this damn bridge deaf and dumb? I've told AI and humanoid alike to keep those damn things from messing with our aim!

Morev was the Armestonian goddess of the Arts, war included. She was sometimes portrayed as a woman in full combat gear cradling an ancient stringed instrument in her arms.

The fury around him was almost palpable as he viciously tore weapons authorization from the WEPSCOM officers and re-routed it to his command chair. At his command, energy beams annihilated the enemy destroyers with impunity.

“Boarding parties inbound!” the AI-DACON officer yelled.

“Who in Morev's name decided to pull the point defense guns from the 'grid?!” Kaz yelled at the DEFCOM and WEPSCOM officers.

“I- I- I did sir.” one of them stammered “I th- thought the m-main guns would be-be benefit from the extra energy.”

An exact repeat of the last line uttered by the Boundless Triumph's bridge crew before everything dissolved into static. Kazimir's more aggressive maneuvering had apparently spared the ship the damage its non-simulated counterpart fared.

Kazimir slapped his face and reconnected the PD guns to the 'grid after he had executed a hard turn to port, slamming the bloated boarding pods against her silver, maroon and violet hull. The thumping that reverberated through the ship suddenly decreased in intensity.

Kazimir--who had taken control from DEFCOM (Defense Command), WEPSCOM (Weapons Command), CACOM (Combat Air Command) due to their incompetence—was now using his neural  command interface to manage the battle that raged around the Trumph.

Explosions peppered the area around her, frigates and smaller vessels were swatted out of the skies by focused point-beam fire as Kazimir lapsed into total sensory-deprivation. The only thing keeping him alive (and in the simulation) was the failsafe built into his NCI.

The trainee was turning the battle in the Confederacy's favor with his thinking 'past the book', as his reasoning was that if it's written down in a book somewhere, someone's already made a counter to it. In the original battle, the Confederates had formed a massive wall of ships firing broadside. Now they circled the enemy or 'jousted', thrusting into the Oortimi formations, flipping over and repeating the maneuver.

He let out a curse that made even the Rear Admiral who was observing the battle flush a deep red. The Oortimi had managed to blow off one of the engine pods of a nearby battlecruiser, sending it flying towards the Triumph in such a way that it threatened to knock her off course... again.

And then she vanished in a flash of light, allowing the rogue engine pod to slam into an Oortimi frigate that had just dropped from slipspace. A flash of light added to the chaos as both were destroyed.

The Triumph reappeared behind the Oortimi formation, inside one of the massive orbital shipyards that orbited Elsima. He heard several disdainful sighs waft from the rest of the fleet as they saw her disappear. Kaz tilted the ship upwards, her bow missing the top of the cavernous bay by just a few centimeters. Now, the ship was upside-down and ready for battle. She righted herself and a blue glow began to form in the split, condensing into a sphere where it ended.

A blue-white beam of energy lanced from the ship, blowing through the blast doors and causing them to shatter outwards like a pane of glass that had been hit by a brick. An Ettmer'va class Dreadnought dipped as the beam approaced, allowing it to continue on into the massive, obelisk-like Oortimi flagship. With a sheer stroke of luck, its shields were already down and the launch bay was open.

The beam's contact point vanished in a brilliant burst of light, the hull buckled, folded and cracked. Radiation suddenly flooded the ship's corridors as the slug-like Oortimi died with agonized screams, blisters forming on their skins. More energy was pumped into the beam, destabilizing the antimatter containment fields near the contact point. The cohesive antimatter beam suddenly widened near the antimatter reaction, causing even more damage to the flagship.

The beam brightened in intensity until it was impossible to  look at directly, and then faded. The ruined flagship sat there, a massive hole burnt into its broken hull. It no longer fired, crew and electronics had both died in the attack. And slowly-agonizingly-the ship fell apart, glimmering shards of armor plate broke free as the ship slowly split in half with a tortured groan.

Taking this to heart, the rest of the fleet fired whatever antimatter weapons they had. Space suddenly became not-so-dark and then returned to normal. The attack had caught the enemy off-guard, and they paid dearly for their mistake. Most of their fleet was annihilated in the sudden move, whatever enemies remained were blown apart by concentrated energy weapons fire or jumped out in a bid to save their hides.

A light beeping came from everywhere in the bridge and Kaz suddenly found himself sitting in a water-filled reclining chair, a NCI cable running from the three ports at the base of his head. He checked the chrono. It read 0105 Hours, a timer under it showed that two days had passed since the beginning of the simulation.

Kaz was exhausted and nearly fell over from trying to stand up. In fact, two people already had. Rear Admiral Parker approached him and patted him on the back.

“Nice thinking, son.” he said “The methods you used are out of the box, and your report showed us that we didn't have to do everything by the book. You have the day off-”

Chapter Two Point Zero One: Shenanigans!
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Kaz promptly collapsed into unconsciousness at the mention of those words. When Kaz woke up in the medbay, he had on his shoulders the silver crescent moon and stripe of an ensign.

Two of his friends saluted him and Kazimir returned the salute with a wild grin. Suddenly, his bareeda burst into the room, congratulating him for his new rank. One uncorked a bottle of Appelion's Speed--a low-alcohol, but very strong drink—by tapping the mouth on the side of the table.

Kazimir laughed uproariously as he stood up, pointing at the cake Brynna—a childhood friend--was attempting to shove into the door without damaging it. She shot him a glare that could melt cometary ice in deep space and returned to trying to get her burden in.

Cheers erupted in the recovery room as Kazimir tossed his Academy stripes into the waste bin, several of his friends clapped him on the back and punched him on the shoulders.

Kaz took the uncorked Speed and took a hearty swig, and then downed it in two gulps as fire ran his throat and into his stomach.

“Vic,” Kazimir said with a smile “Speed, as much as you can in 30 seconds. No spilling.”

Kaz took another bottle of speed and downed it in two gulps, Victor was downed one with three, and nearly sputtered as a bubble caught in his throat.


Soon, both men were nearly drunk. Vic found himself being tickled by Brynna and attempting to keep his drink in, but alas. Victor spat his Speed out and doubled over in laughter as she doubled her efforts.

“Cheater,” Victor accused “you like Kaz don't you?”

Brynna stole a look at Kazimir, who had a wild grin on his face, which to her mind, complemented his slightly delicate jaw and small-yet-strong nose.

“I don't.” She lied while slapping Victor across the face.

“C'mon,” Victor teased “stop lying.”

“Actually,” Kazimir interrupted “she doesn't-” he paused, making Brynna breath a sigh of relief “not like me. Hells, she kissed me yesterday.” he said to cheers and whoops.

Brynna kicked Kazimir in the shin, unfortunately eliciting more cheers from his friends.


A Month Later

Nor'Taan Qa Asteroid Field
2409 Hours SCMT
CUS FFG/M-1971 Stormbearer Class Missile Frigate Inevitable Retribution


Kazimir hissed a curse as the ship jolted, making him bite his tongue.

“More asteroid fragments inbound!” Brynna yelled from her Sensors station.

“Brace for impact!” DACON officer Sara Retton said over the comms.

The ship bucked again as a pair of electromagnetically propelled asteroids slammed into the Retribution's forward hull.

“Weapons free! Weapons free!” Kazimir ordered “The mission's become Fucked up beyond Morev's recognition!”

Point defense guns began tracking any stray object that got close, capacitors warmed up and entered full charge in the ship's main cannons. Missiles were loaded into their tubes with satisfying clunks and armed.

Two Echelon class Frigates entered sensors range bearing the white and black of a pirate clan, Brynna watched kinetic rounds stream from numerous small turrets on their hulls. Particle guns rumbled and the rounds winked off the sensors grid.

Kazimir gave authorization to launch the missiles and a series of roars answered him as missiles left their launch tubes, their AI guiding them towards one of the Echelons. Two exploded as particle bolts filled the space separating the predator from prey. The AI began to move the missiles erratically, lessening the chances of another burst hitting something.

Brynna watched in grim satisfaction as a localized antimatter reaction eradicated one of the pirate's missile pods while a particle lance crackled through space and tore into the enemy ship.
Another barrage of missiles turned the drive assembly into a heap of twisted metal. The pirate ship listed and spun into an asteroid, rending a gash into its starboard side.

The Retribution focused her fire on the other frigate and it vanished in a flash of light, all that remained were twisted lumps of irradiated metal.

Just then, a full Empire Invasion Fleet jumped in and opened fire on the Inevitable Retribution.

---

Kazimir awoke to a wiling banshee. Groaning, Kazimir smashed a holographic icon on the chrono, silencing the device. He noticed that the Inevitable Retribution was not a pile of scrap metal as he shook the grogginess away.

“Fuck,” he said “that's almost better than being stuck on patrol duty.”

He stood up and changed into a new set of fatigues before trudging into the corridor, the door behind him sliding shut. The commander walked into the mess hall and fell in line.

Kazimir ordered a sandwich and some coffee before plopping down on an unoccupied table. Suddenly, a woman with shoulder-length blonde hair, freckles and sparkling green eyes walked in front of him. The silver ring of ocular inserts close to her pupils, signifying that they were inactive.

“How's it going Kaz?” she said

“Just fine Brynn,” Kazimir replied “patrol is fucking boring!”

Just then, his datapad pinged. Kazimir took a small silver square and unfolded it into a paper-thin sheet, the side facing him turned black and icons popped up on the surface.

A window opened and displayed a condensed version of the sensor readings. Five contacts were just near the edge of detection range, they were pinging Hostile Identification.

“Shit!” Kazimir cursed “To the bridge.”

- - -

“Fire! Fire!” Kazimir barked as three of the contacts grew closer, manifesting into the needle-like shapes of Imperial frigates. These however, did not match any known ships in the database.

Missiles were tossed out of their tubes and activated, white trails reached for one of the contacts and engulfed it in massive bursts of energy. When the blinding light faded, the enemy frigate was snapped like a twig. Large chunks of metal tumbled into space, sunlight glinting harshly as they drifted away from the wreckage.

The other enemies closed in and fired, white-hot bursts of plasma washed over the Retribution's shields. The the crew retaliated by firing her particle guns at full output, the shields on one of the enemy frigates failed. Its nose was snapped off by artificial lightning slamming broadside into the craft.

Atmosphere rushed from the exposed cabins, sucking men into the void where they died horrific deaths.

By then, the Retribution had been too distracted to do anything about the third frigate, which had begun to accelerate towards her.

“They're attempting to ram!” Kazimir said over the comm “Brace for impact!”

The ship shuddered as the sharp point of the enemy frigate found a nick in her armor and stabbed into her innards. Gunners fired at the enemy ship, hoping to dislodge it from its hold. Unfortunately, attempting to do so was futile as there was not enough firepower mounted on her lower surfaces.

“Decompression alert in Deck C-2,” the ship's voice reported “sealing bulkheads now.”

The distant thunks of one-ton slabs of Iala composite slamming into the floor plating could be heard.

“Boarding action in Deck C-1. Initiating counter-ops.”

Several turrets popped out from hatches along the ceiling, walls and floor in the corridors and cabins of C-1.

“Security teams,” Kazimir said “move into defensive positions around corridors Atton and Sestor.”

   ---

The thunder of man-made lightning filled Private Grigori Anatoliy's ears as he fired his particle rifle, making several of the Imperial soldiers dive to the deck in a bid to save their lives. One poked his head up as Grigory stopped firing, then his face vaporized as the squad's sniper-Corporal Lina Pelsat-fired her rifle.

Grigory advanced, his HUD marking the positions of his squadmates. A soldier in powered armor marked 'Pvt. P. Ericson' moved to cover his back, his rifle panning the area. Lina adjusted her rifle and froze, her armor blending into the tree.

The squad's sergeant-Aleksei Somtov-took up a position under Lina's tree and propped his heavy particle gun on the deck.

Grigori's HUD highlighted more enemies charging into the morale area, the soldier tensed and drew a bead on one of them.

Lina spotted an enemy creeping around the Whiskey Tango Foxtrot, the bar that took up an entire quarter of the morale area. She aimed for a gap in the impassive gray armor and held her breath. Her rifle bucked as she tapped the firing stud.

Grigory frowned as the soldier's torso was blown apart in a shower of gore.

Paashol v'chorte!” Grigory whispered, a smile creeping onto his face “You stole my kill, Lina!”

Yob tvoyu mat!” Lina answered back in surprisingly fluent North-Eastern Armestonian, also barely holding back a snigger.

“What?!” Paul's voice suddenly exploded over the transmission.

Tebya ne ebut,” Grigory said, barely able to contain a laugh.

Ti ne podmakhivai!” Lina continued, now sniggering.

“They mean 'You're not being fucked, so stop wiggling your ass!'.” Somtov interrupted, laughing at Paul's misfortune “Govniuk!

Paul fell silent.

“Ah anyways,” Somtov continued “let's flush these boarders out!”

“Hoorah!” the squad yelled.

Grigory tossed a grenade into their cover and several of the soldiers ran, the enemy were either tossed around like ragdolls by the grenade or were cut down by Aleksei's 'Lightning Storm of Incomprehensible Recycle-Rate', as he had once described.

The boarder's cover were greeted by a bloody mess that had once been their comrades. And then they themselves were cut down.

---

Can I has comments plz?

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Creative Projects / Bien's Nebulae
« on: May 05, 2009, 04:51:54 am »


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Creative Projects / Tales of the Confederacy: Triumphant Sun
« on: April 21, 2009, 04:00:00 am »
Okay. 'Psi' will be on hiatus because my muse threatened to hit me over the head and delete my files if I don't stop writing the 'horribly cliche'd, poorly written story with a bunch of half-assed characters'

I am currently writing this instead.
Tales of the Confederacy: Triumphant Sun

It is a prequel to the prequel of a Halo Crossover story (Halo: The Intergalactic Wars, which is pending a rewrite of the earlier chapters), the story chronicles the military life of the main character of TIGW.

Should I or should I not post individual chapters here on this thread?

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Curses / Um, a game suggestion.
« on: March 21, 2009, 07:34:53 am »
So, I was playing LCS the other day, and I wondered 'why not have a city map, so that you can break into other people's houses'.

So let's say, I press Alt-M to bring up a more complex list of locations or a map with shapes representing peoples' houses and such. And you use the arrow keys to select houses, with enter to go there. And when let's say, you select a building, it will show an information box in a corner somewhere that will say "This is the residence of a Judge.", the Info box should only display information that you know, and you need sleepers to update that information.

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Creative Projects / Ψ (Psi) - A (possibly) Epic Tale
« on: March 03, 2009, 09:29:20 am »
Chapter One: Ψ-Α (Psi-Alpha)

Pain, a blinding white light, and the sensation of floating in a liquid. That was what I felt, waking up in a strange tube. I shut my eyes again, listening to the pumps cycling and the valves regulating my air supply open and shut. I tried to move my arms, but something was holding them back. I opened my eyes again, this time slowly. I blinked as my eyes adjusted to the light, then I was able to get a good look around me. I was in a transparent tube of sorts, probably a modified Cryogenic Suspension Chamber. There were straps around my knees, ankles, waist, wrists and elbows. Whoever kidnapped me wanted me really secure. My vision blurred and I blinked again, my eyes re-focused on an insignia on the far wall. It took me a second to recognize it, then realization hit me like a sledgehammer. The insignia was that of the Confederate Military Science and Technology Advancement Division, CMSTAD. Or Cemstad as it is pronounced. The insignia consisted of six three-pointed stars with five-pointed stars inside them surrounding the Arketainian glyph for knowledge. All of which contained within a shield with two crossed swords.

“Shit,” I thought “I was most probably kidnapped by some Black-Ops guys while I was asleep.”

“That is most correct.” a female voice echoed through the room. “You were kidnapped by some Black-Ops agents, but only because,” she paused “we need you to help us.”

I mentally face-palmed myself. I somehow knew I was going to get into this mess sooner or later.

“So why me?” I mouthed

“It's because you have the most control over your Psi powers.”

“What do you mean by that?”

“Of all of our candidates, you exhibited the most control over it.” she said “Let me show you.”

A holoscreen flickered to life on the far wall. The images being shown were taken from various cameras within the lab. One showed a girl, about 19 years of age, she was restrained to a similar looking tube. The only thing missing was the liquid. When told she was kidnapped, and taken to the lab. The floor and walls began to bend and buckle, cracks appeared on the ceiling as slabs of ubercrete began floating into the air, they seemed to be disintegrating, dust falling slowly to the floor. Then the room exploded outward in a burst of energy. Leaving half of the room intact. The girl was floating in mid-air as flames began forming on her palms. The flames shot out, hot enough to actually melt the ubercrete, and the underlying Hubnesterium supports. The walls caved in and the image dissolved into a haze of static. I winced at what happened, then the static was replaced by another video, and then another. The videos stopped and the screen flickered off again.

“How come I don't see myself there?” I mouthed

“Look to your left.” the voice said bluntly.

I looked to my left and to my horror, I saw a man impaled on the wall by a spike of ubercrete. Blood still trickled from the massive wound. I grimaced in disgust at the sight and looked away.

“I did that?” I thought

Apparently, the woman read my thoughts again.

“Yes. It happened while you were unconscious.”

“Damn.” I thought “So why am I in this liquid?”

“The liquid is a Psi-Inhibitor, it actively blocks Psi energies. And if we drain the tank, your powers, as well as your implants will go back on-line.” she added “Don't ask about the liquid, the details will just bore you.”

I decided not to ask.

The straps holding me in place detached, allowing me free movement. Then the liquid began to drain, as soon as my face was clear. My ocular implants came back on-line. Lines of diagnostic text scrolled across my vision, then the zoom function was tested, as well as the IR and Light-Amplification functions. The liquid dropped to my waist and I felt my skeletal and muscular enhancement implants turn back on, and then my regeneration implants. Soon the liquid was absent from the tank.

“So are you going to let me out?”

“Yes, but a problem has arisen. The locks are jammed, and they're made of pure Hubnesterium. The tube is made of Sycanium. Both will take days to cut through, and an antimatter torch is not available to us And if it was,” she said “ the radiation burst will probably kill you.”

“So can't we just remove the back of the tank?”

“No, it will take at least a day.” she said “And I doubt you will be eager to wait that long.”

“So any other options?” I asked, my military training kicking into gear

“Yes, you will have to use your Psi to crack the tube open.”

“Fine.”

I began concentrating on the tube walls, imagining it cracking and breaking, then exploding outwards. Nothing, I tried harder, my eyes squinting and my fists clenching. I closed my eyes. When I opened them again, the tube remained the same.

“A word of advice, you simply have to believe. Some actions might also help.” the voice said.

“What?” I thought

Yes, I was skeptical. The videos shown to me a while ago could have been just CG. But then, something in the far corners of my mind told me that it was all real. I let that part of my mind take control.

So I tried again. I imagined the tube cracking, then shattering. And to prevent injury to myself, I imagined the tube shattering outwards, the shards floating slowly to the floor before dissolving into dust. I also imagined it all taking place when I touch the tube. I put all my effort into concentrating, then I touched the transparent glass like metal with a finger. As soon as my fingertip made contact with the cold metal, a spiderweb crack radiated outward, then it grew until the front of the tube was like a deadly mosaic. I made a pushing motion with my hand stopping a centimeter from the surface and the tube exploded outward.

“Good!” the voice cheered “You have completed the first part of your training.”

I looked dumbfounded

“Training?” I asked, confused.

“Yes, the locks weren't really jammed. But that doesn't matter. You have shown control over the Psi.”

I was irritated, really irritated. The floor rippled slightly, then before it became worse. I stopped myself.

“You have completed the second part of your training.” the voice said, she sounded happy.

“And what was that exactly?”

“Learning to control it while being affected by emotion.” she said “There are clothes for you in the locker to your right.”

I looked to my right and I saw a door recessed into the wall, I entered it and I saw a Confederate Navy uniform. I put it on along with the boots, I was tempted to give them a spit shine, but I put it away, there was no telling if the woman was going to pull another prank on me. I exited the walk-in locker and I just waited around.

“So what am I going to do now?” I asked to myself.

The voice responded

“Go out of the room. I'll be outside to give you a formal introduction to the rest of the team.” she added “And by the way, I am also Psychic.”

I sighed and walked towards the door. It slid open as I neared, then it closed behind me. I walked into a corridor with one door besides the one that had just closed behind me. I walked into the other door and I was greeted by at least ten different people.

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Curses / Some suggestions for LCS.
« on: October 19, 2008, 09:06:57 am »
Okay, so I was thinking. Why not have let's say a police cruiser crash into another 'chaser' when the driver is killed. Or have a driver loose control of the car when both arms or legs are blown off. And have a random chance in which the passengers of a car are not able to take control of the vehicle when the driver is killed.

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