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I love how later Akagi slams on the table to knock Soga's drawing tile off, that's awesome.

HMM HMM HMMMMM

It's a really old Akagi!  So I suppose Fukumoto started Akagi as a huge backstory for him, that's cool.

Also less important but still neat AKASHI GETTING EATEN BY THE DEMON ARMY

Hello sprite we only see like, twice for two lines.  I assume they die in the earthquake, sure.


DOUSHITE


:O

You are the Kikai


Splat


wait slow down why is this happening



Shut up Kerkan I have a walkthrough


Ice burn.  He stole your catch phrase Gii!!


...dunno...
(the last we see of these two, great I love uncertain fates lets chalk them up as Ati Custos)


I'm not actually entirely purple

Unconcealed.

Also stairs joke.


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I have to say, Gii's ultimate strategy in fighting the final big bad, Grimm Grimm, was quite a spectacle.

Given that his solution was to...I don't know...

DENY EVERYTHING AS ILLUSIONS

LITERALLY FUCKING POOF HAPPY END

Well I enjoyed it more than Chaos;Head's last chapter train-wreck at least.  (that was a chapter 10 I believe?)

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I can't die everything is illusions

sorry Porshion I know you saved me a lot but you're totally just a figment of my imagination, also, the player



Pretty


LAST SCENE IS LEMURE LEMURE BEING REVIVED

I TAKE BACK EVERYTHING

10/10

Weren't there orphans being sent to the Upper Tier at one point?  That was never addressed again?  Maybe I'm missing the deeper meaning

1.  Rewrite the climax battles to be more interesting beyond the first chapter, or better yet, have something else happen besides the copy and paste boss fight.
2.  I liked Chapter 8 a lot, I think that was my favorite chapter overall, everything just worked and flowed well (well enough anyway).  They needed to keep the pacing CH8 had.
3.  MAYBE SOME ENDING CLOSURE?  What happened afterwards?  Frankly not as bad as Remember11 but still aggravating.
4.  Who's Salem?  Who's Dorothy?  Who's Magdall?  Who's Kurtz?  Who's Sara?  I really thought we'd get to see those guys more after their appearances, the only real example was Ruaha and I liked that.  Salem died but was at least mentioned a few times.  Magdall is completely forgotten.  That may be part of Kerkan's powers but THIS IS NEVER POINTED OUT.  Joshua is mentioned more for crying out loud!
5.  Black-Clad Girl and the old lamb's grandpa kind of flew the coop.  I know she was probably dependent to that chapter but don't leave the readers so confused!
6.  I would have liked if like...cut the copy and paste scenes and do something refreshing, fully voice all the characters (I know they have the FVR version now), write scenes to develop those characters you drew so well and left to ignore.
7.  ...too slow
Don't cry.