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« on: December 27, 2008, 08:42:06 am »
Heavy Flak: yours is an excellent story. I'm impressed by several things about it, but mostly your dedication to the story after so long, the frequency and length of all your posts, and your ability to keep the story consistently interesting. I'm so impressed that I want to be a part of it, and so I registered.
Might I request a dwarf?
Name: Hikan if male, Nakih if female.
Profession: Aryn's personal guard.
Stock character most representative of what I want his personality to be like: Dirty cop.
He should basically be a total mook, hired muscle, a grunt, Aryn's stooge, and all other synonyms for a minion. Later, if 't please you, I think it would be neato if he started using his position as Aryn's guard to engage in organized crime. Protection schemes, witness intimidation, bribery, evidence tampering, theft of confiscated money, etc., etc....
And make him a bastard. The worst kind of bastard. The manipulative, cunning, pathologically lying bastard. The kind of character that makes you sick to your stomach.
I remember several pages back there was mention of a member of Aryn's personal guard whose name was Riddlewire. If so, I want that dwarf if he/she doesn't have brain damage, because of the awesome name. If not, any other member of Aryn's guard will do.