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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The 7 crystals
« on: October 03, 2009, 10:51:08 am »
Here comes another chapter from the 7 crystal series



Sigum open his eyes, stunned, he sees Udib gathering some firewood to feed the campfire, he wake and asks what happened;After some explanation, Sigum says that they need to turn back and go to mountainhalls to kill the beasts.
_ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!?
Exclaimed Udib, Sigum looks to the starry night, Udib talks with Sigum.
_I know that... your parents are... dead... But there's nothingwe can do aginst that.If we go back to Febser, we will die.Do you want Revenge?
Sigum shakes his head positively.
_Ok, I will go to the human town to work there, you will need to go to the Urist dojo, it's far away from the human town that I am going, if you want to go there to train, we will need to separate...
Sigum answer:
_I know, I will settle off to that place right now.
Sigum points to north and asks:
_It's that direction?Right?
Udib don't answer, they both stand up and hug.
Sigum start to move, just a child, a ten years old child, against a wild and dangerous world.
After some hours walking, Sigum was by a road, he takes that way, after walking a bit more, a strange green creature jumps from a shrub, The creature has a dagger and a bag.
_W...Who are you?
_OBMSKAITREASD!!!
The creature says something impossible to understand, and run in Sigum direction, trying to slash the boy with his bloody dagger.Sigum falls in the ground, dodging from the green man's attack, when he stand up, he ran to the oposite direction that he was going...When he cannot see the creature, he stop running, look back, and continue walking.
After a long walking, Sigum Reaches a town with unbearded tall people, Sigum know that they are the humans, and know not too much language, but know the basics.Sigum sees various buildings and shops, with some coins in his wallet, he runs toward a delicious and irresistible smell of food, when he arrives in the place, he sees a fat woman with several dishes of cooked plump helmets, when he gets to the counter, a beautiful girl asks what he wants, and he just answer:
_Food...
The woman keep looking at his face by a couple of seconds, and them screams:
_Moe, bake some cat biscuits now
After some minutes, the girl bring the biscuits and give to Sigum, that starts to eat then frenetically, the girl asks for the money, he gives 2 cooper coins, that's all he got, then the girl says that it costs 7 coins, he look at his wallet and see no more money, The girl asks a big guy,to beat Sigum, Sigum Understood that nothing good will happen, and then run from the guy, some other people that was in the inn start to chase Sigum too...



What will happen with our little hero in thee next chapter???

See in the next part of the story, coming soon

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The 7 crystals
« on: October 02, 2009, 11:34:53 pm »
I'm really liking the way you describe everything, but you migth want to use a spell check, there are alot of errors.

hehe, sorry, i'm brazilian, and i'm not fluent on english, so, that spell check is a in some site, is a program, or anything else?Give me the link, I'll be thankful!



As seen in the previous part, Sigum have seen the miner running, like fleeing from something...

What will happen with our little boy?

Sigum looks to the miner face, that looks scared, someone asks the miner what happened.
_Blue ore!Strange Chamber!Glowing pit!!!!
No one understood what the scared miner said, and more screams came from the deeper room of the fortress, followed by terrifying urges...A deafening silence takes the craftdwarves room...from the hallway, a sound of footsteps, something with giant claws was approaching.Everyone was ready to run if necessary...And when no one expected, a giant figure comes from the shadow , A winged, horned creature appears and start to makes his victims, followed by other smaller creatures, slightly like frogs, and some other creatures with numerous tenctacles. The panic take all the place, everyone start running around, Sigum take his sword, and pull Udib's arm, start looking for his parents.Udib says that they need to go, that's too late, but Sigum didn't give up, and when they saw, they ran into a hideous creature with tentacles coming out of his back, horns and fangs.When The little child try to run, the demon hold his clothes, then, Sigum pulls his sword and  cut off the creature slimy tentacle, the creature twitches, Sigum and Udib run away...
Sigum arrives in the dinning hall, The floor was covered in blood, and beetween a pile of corpses, Sigum recognizes his father and his mother's faces, an inexplicable felling strikes Sigum, he drops on knees in front of the corpses and starts crying, and because of strong emotions he fainted, and Udib carried Sigum on his back out of the fortress, to far, far away.



That's the end of the first "episode" of the story...
Waiting for your comments

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DF Suggestions / Re: Boats/ships/rafts.... ect
« on: October 02, 2009, 10:28:14 pm »
I didn't want to f*** your topic one more time, but I already suggest it...

sorry...

¬¬

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DF Community Games & Stories / The 7 crystals
« on: October 02, 2009, 08:23:13 pm »
The night is stormy. I can fell the evil crawling for his entrance to the main tower.They're one step to the sacred plane, the mana flow is really weak...
I.. can... Feel...

Febser MontainHalls, Granite 27th

The little boy, Sigum Lish,wake up, look around as he usually do when wake, then he go to cabinet to dress, when he open the door, he hears the morning noises, the ones that he usually hears, the sound of his living comunity, all the dwarves living prosperous, everyone working happily.
Sigum goes to Udib's workshop, the craftman that promised to Sigum that will carve stone shortsword, When the boy approaches, Udib exclaims:

_Little Sigum, I worked all the night along in your sword, Look!

A Masterful crafted obsidian sword, menacing with spikes of Microline, encrusted with a claro opal.
The boy high-pitched voice had any words to say to the craftsdwarf creation.
_and... how much does it cost?
_Don't worry, that's a gift.I know that you are planning to settle out from our comunity to have adventures, take it as token of our friendship!
Crying, Sigum ruged Udib.Them, a loud scream comes from the deep of dark hallways, and a miner comes running from that direction...

TO BE CONTINUED...

(In about some hours)

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DF Gameplay Questions / Re: Moody dwarf wants block
« on: October 02, 2009, 05:32:28 pm »
he already get his silk cloth... I just want to know about the block, but they use metal in clothier workshop?(sorry, I forgot to say the workshop)

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DF Gameplay Questions / Moody dwarf wants block
« on: October 02, 2009, 02:41:32 pm »
I started a fortress some hours ago, my craftdwarf goes moody(secretive) and then he "Sketches Pictures of Stacks of cloth" and "Sketches pictures of square blocks".
I have so many blocks, rock blocks, wooden blocks, (one) glass block, and lots of clothes, he already get the cloth , but didn't get any of the blocks,
please, answer me soon as possible!

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DF General Discussion / Re: The future
« on: September 28, 2009, 06:02:24 pm »
I already seen some topics about "DF Future", i think the people should stop creating these topics, but DF are the cooler game right now, and in about some years will be coolest!

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Look in the list  "Future of the Fortress", you can see that toady are working a lot with squads and military, and when the next version release, we will be one step closer of the Army arc

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I want to send my troops trough the world and conquer everything!!!!
I can imagine, the succession fortresses will be too much fun!
I think that the magic stuff arc will be on in about some years :=(

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We need the caravan arc, before can start working on army arc, and after the army arc we can have the county arc(that will be the funniest)
I WANT TO DESTROY ELVEN RETREATS!!!!

Edit: There should be a emotion improvement arc, with upgraded emotions...

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My favorite ones are County arc, Army Arc, Combat arc, Wound Handling arc and Burrow arc
That's the most interesting arcs in the game!

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DF Suggestions / Re: Multi-tile creatures
« on: September 26, 2009, 06:31:02 pm »
A multi-tile dragon would be fun too, the dragon eat you and then you need to open your exit through his guts!

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DF Suggestions / Re: companies
« on: September 26, 2009, 04:18:01 pm »
It would be cool in both modes!(but in Adventure mode wold be cooler)

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DF Suggestions / companies
« on: September 26, 2009, 03:49:57 pm »
my suggestion this time, is to our dwarves start big entrerprises, like have more than one shop, and buy more shops in different towns, and create new brands, like "Dwarv'os, your Dwarven morning cereal!", and so, they can own the workshop where they produce his products(the player choose what workshop will be buyable), and them, some of our dwarves can turn into tycoons, with  really big quantities of money in account!

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DF Suggestions / Re: Discussion: Liquid and Gasseous Enemies
« on: September 25, 2009, 02:49:52 pm »
Would be cool if the liquid or semi-liquid(slimy) creature could create bodyparts, like a hand or a head

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