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DF General Discussion / Dwarf Fortress anthem
« on: October 26, 2010, 12:38:32 pm »
A few days ago I came up with this anthem for minecraft. Now, I like minecraft, but DF deserves an anthem too, ripped off of something a bit more dwarfy than America the Beautiful, which is fine for minecraft's expansive landscapes but too peaceful for df. So to continue on the theme:
The Blood-spattered Hammer
O! say can you see by the dawn's early light,
What so proudly we hailed at the twilight's last gleaming,
Whose strong swipes and bashes through the perilous fight,
O'er the ramparts we watched, were so gallantly swinging.
By the magma's red glare, goblins bursting in air,
Gave proof through the seige that Urist was still there;
O! say does that blood-spattered hammer yet wave,
O'er the fort of the free and burrows of the brave?
Written after a bookkeeper, Francis Keyscotts watched the successful defense of his fort from a goblin seige by a lone legendary hammerdwarf, Urist.
Edit: constructive criticism is welcome, some of the verses could use a little work
The Blood-spattered Hammer
O! say can you see by the dawn's early light,
What so proudly we hailed at the twilight's last gleaming,
Whose strong swipes and bashes through the perilous fight,
O'er the ramparts we watched, were so gallantly swinging.
By the magma's red glare, goblins bursting in air,
Gave proof through the seige that Urist was still there;
O! say does that blood-spattered hammer yet wave,
O'er the fort of the free and burrows of the brave?
Written after a bookkeeper, Francis Keyscotts watched the successful defense of his fort from a goblin seige by a lone legendary hammerdwarf, Urist.
Edit: constructive criticism is welcome, some of the verses could use a little work