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« on: March 16, 2012, 05:38:33 pm »
(I'm not sure what your level of expertise/knowledge is, so if you need me to clarify anything I will)
EDIT: made a comment about drums that was due entirely to my mistakes not the song lol
Some ideas:
-add more percussion, gradually. I know you said you were lacking though, so that may be the cause. If you can, some syncopated rhythms would be great.
- The second half is a bit odd, feels rather empty. There may be too much space between the hits (experiment with it) and maybe make the chords bigger. Some strings added to the brass in the upper and lower registers could make it feel bigger - the brass alone feels kind of thin right now.
- If you want tension, more complex, dissonant chords in the first half could help. Again, you can gradually build up to that starting simple and getting more complex. Some higher parts, like violins or woodwinds if you can, moving quickly in runs or arpeggios could add to the excitement.
As for samples, decent free stuff is a bit hard to find. Sonatina Symphonic is one I found recently, just looking at what was out there, it seemed to be alright, though not without it's problems. Not sure how much percussion it has with it but you might check that out.
Overall I like the potential here, keep working at it man.