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« on: March 17, 2012, 12:41:51 am »
You don't need to be an expert to see flaws in a business proposal. Any kind of written plan should be understood even if you aren't a professional in the field. You need to sell the idea to the person backing you up.
Lets see the problems here:
1. No solid idea, seriously. There are no solid foundations, it only asks for millions of different people what they want to put in it. Try asking the same with five creative people and see how well you do.
2. Spelling errors right there in the part where they ask for your money. It really kills any kind of credibility.
Those two are the most glaring problems that jumps out at me. If you do any kind of project planning in school, take this as an example of bad planning doomed to failure. Learn from it.