Yeah, my lack of description was me trying to convey the atmosphere. The two characters are in the dark and can't really see the setting or each other that well. I wanted to make more emphasis on sound, but ended up forgetting to do that. I got a little caught up in the flow of the idea.
the ending eluded me. Then the analogy sunk in 
Did you mean the ending was confusing? I wanted it to be a little bit until the image on the artifact was shown. Then I was hoping readers would figure out what happened without me needing to say more. I wanted the reader to have that same moment of realization as the character.
If this works like any of the other Guild threads I'd say that you can feel free to critique the writing.
While I did like the idea of the story, you didn't develop your characters until near the very end. You didn't explain how they knew what they knew, or why they were there. I spent half the writing trying to figure out what race they were since they knew about both elven and dwarven craftsmanship without explanation. While my own writing could use more, you need to describe your characters appearance to give a better mental image of the two.
The same goes for your dungeon. It's called a catacomb, and it's dark, but what do they see? You need to describe the room in general, and not just the important things they're running up to.
Another thing is that while your paragraphs work, they don't show emphasis. Several of the paragraphs where people aren't talking can be combined with either the paragraph above or below, because sometimes it's better to reserve single line paragraphs for something with an impact.
I hope I wasn't too harsh, because I actually did enjoy the story.
Yeah, I realized I didn't give them enough characterization part of that was story length. I wanted to have them casually chat about their search for the orb and deepen their characters, but I also didn't want to make the story too long. I also had the initial idea of two silhouettes in the dark, so for the bulk of this that was what they were.
I also wanted to give more details to the catacombs but not much more. Though I guess I subconsciously left that out.
Thanks for the critique both of you. It wasn't harsh at all. The point of this thread is to get practice and criticism. I had a good deal of fun writing this.