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Creative Projects / Re: Ψ (Psi) - A (possibly) Epic Tale
« on: March 17, 2009, 07:54:47 pm »But, hey MCPO is a valid naval rank. And it would be worse if his name was John.
And Armok, some of the Tech is based slightly off of Peter F. Hamilton's work, which is terribly unrealistic.
My god, his stuff is acctually amazing. Unrealistic yes, but he makes it believable. Good stuff this. I like where its going. Buuut, one problem you seem way to much focused on the environment rather than the people... way too much info for all these things, guns, supercomputers etc. etc.
Oh, and yeah I have to agree with Shadow there, tapping off someone elses work is quite bad. But theres not a great deal of evidence you've done it here, so thats all good

(P.s what books have you read from Peter F. Hamilton? I've just finished the 'Reality Dysfunction' and started on another one... damn forgot the name of it lol... its in the another series, one about the Dyson Pair of stars or something?)
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With the proper equipment it can be a lot safer than going down a bone dry single trail at the same angle.
