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Setsurou finds that the food is.....off. Not poisoned off, but it feels stale, as if it's several days old. Perfectly serviceable for Yusuke and the others to eat, but...

He also sees Rin surreptitiously doing....something to a small spoonful of food, her Gnosis faintly glowing. Her eyebrows scrunch slightly, coming to the same conclusion as him.
"Well? Come on, quit givin' Yamada bedroom eyes and eat up already, Tsubouchi!"

422
Street Group (Mildred, Akihiko, Shiro, Jin)
Shiro finds that, as she tries to hotwire the motorcycle, she doesn't need to.

The moment she makes to do so, the motorcycle begins to change at her very touch, rounded contours changing to silvery plate resembling her Kaijin's form, plates covering the rim and even a scabbard at the side for her to place her sword in. The moment Shiro revs it up, it roars to life, as if powered by her Kaijin status.

Akihiko takes one look at Mildred, then at the bike.

"....maybe we try that first."

Popular Group (Aika, Mori)
"N-no. Why? Do you think he poisoned me? Oh god."

Mori receives a response very quickly from Saya.
Huh? What's going on? Is everything okay? I can come over now if you need help.

423
Hell, the forum almost went a whole year without anyone getting banned.
That is, until, someone didn't react well to being 'excluded' from a forum game.

I don't know where I'm going with this line of thought
This actually proves the strength of the system. Most of the bans aren't even on FGRP, they're over on GD over the political threads.

It takes being egregiously terrible, to other players, constantly, to actually get people to exclude you from roleplays collectively; generally people will either let it slide if you're chill or if enough time has passed and you aren't so terrible, and especially if you show the desire to at least learn how not to be terrible to your fellow man.

424
Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence.

If you refuse to provide any sort of evidence that FGRP isn't an open community with smaller sub-communities, and instead demand that we trust your insistence that we are opposed to outsiders of any type or kind, we are not obligated to believe it or even lend credence to it.

For my part, at least, the FEF community is generally welcoming to anyone who wants in, and I've never had any issues entering other forum game communities if I saw fit, nor do I see any reason that I would. (I rarely do so anymore, granted, because I'm a lot more comfortable running FEFs, but if the interest strikes...)

425
-snip-
As a veteran GM on this section who's had to deal with more than his fair share of drama from players who turned out to be massive issues leading directly to trashfires, I wholeheartedly agree. A GM has a duty to his players to curate his players if he feels that letting someone in would be more detrimental than not. If a player already proves to be an issue even during selection, then you're ultimately going to cause more problems letting them in and making your players uncomfortable than putting your foot down and telling him "No".

As for gathering on a Discord to play games, as one of the peeps moderating the FEF Discord, I see no real issue with this; most everyone uses Discord nowadays, it's easier to moderate against potential issues, easier to further subdivide what would originally have been covered by OOC threads and so forth. Not that there's anything particularly wrong with the traditional way of doing things, either, but if you're gonna want to do the same things we used to through PMs here or on separate IRC chats (as FEF used to and I know for a fact a lot of DND campaigns used to do here), might as well do it on an interface everyone uses. If you don't want to be part of a community that gathers around a Discord, that's not on them for being clique-y IMO, but simply wanting to use existing infrastructure and wanting to share their interests with people who are also interested.

426
Second Review

Anyone we've already cleared will be excluded from this, so we'll be reviewing a bit less. Next review will be on the 1st of October, shortly before selection. We'll be reviewing you for both story and mechanical stuff.

notquitethere/Kaya Hawa
-snip-
Good to go.

IcyTea31/Fujiwara Takeshi
-snip-
Finish this.

TricMagic/?
-snip-
Finish this.

SirAston/Kogen Mochizuki
-snip-
Good to go.

ctsun/Yayoi Shichimiya
-snip-
Good to go.

427
At that, Thanatos lets out a throaty laugh, and plants his own staff in the ground.

"I bow to no weakling, least of all one who appears to have scarcely vacated kindergarten, let alone vanquished Hellrealm!"

The wind blows, dispelling the shadows from his face.

"If you desire my servitude, twin-tailed alazon..."

"...then take it with your strength, for that is the rule of Hellrealm!"

428
Street Group (Mildred, Akihiko, Shiro, Jin)
Nene just stands there, clearly terrified.
"What am I supposed to do? I can't....I didn't think an Akuma..."

The area ripples from time to time. The Kaijin can feel Kitakawa behind those ripples, like water underneath which a shark is lurking.

"Shinomiya, get the hell out of here!"
"Where can I run? He's already here....."

"Good choice, Shinomiya. You can keep Fuu-chan company."

Suddenly, the floor behind Nene opens up.

"You shouldn't have helped her run."

Fast as lightning, Kitakawa shoots up, arms grabbing Nene. The girl visibly struggles, but with his wiry strength, she cannot break loose. His cape opens up into an unnatural blackness, and Kitakawa yanks her into it. Nene disappears from sight, no longer visible.

"Exactly what I needed. Thank you for bringing her to me."
"Let her go, dammit!"

Akihiko rushes towards him, fist surging with flames, but before he can reach him, Kitakawa springs upwards, landing on the roof of the building with a mocking salute.

"Now, for Fuu-chan...I'm sorry. You'll all just have to wait."

With that, he sprints away, across the rooftops of Mishima. Akihiko  looks back towards Mildred and Shiro.
"He's heading for Hermelin. We need to get there first. Damn it!"

Mildred is keenly aware of a pair of motorcycles parked nearby. If there's a faster way of getting to Hermelin....

Popular Group (Aika, Mori)
Mori gets no reply. This could mean one of two things. Either his phone is off....or he's in Kaijin form and is busy fighting for his life. One hopes it's the former.

"I can't say for sure, Yagami-senpai, but....as long as Sawatari and I are here, you have nothing to fear."
"What's your plan? Where are we going?"

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Street Group (Mildred, Akihiko, Shiro, Jin)
At that, Kitakawa lets out a raw, dry laugh.

"...you think I'm scared?"
"Letting Jack out....is the best feeling in the world."

The ground beneath Kitakawa suddenly begins to change form, asphalt and concrete giving way to rain-stained brick and stone. Once again, you feel the air around you thicken, the colors around you intensify, the textures around you feel wrong and off. You almost expect Onibi to attack you, here.

Once again, you feel surrounded by a Domain, despite being firmly in the real world.

Before you can do anything, the ground opens beneath Kitakawa, and he slips below. Akihiko is the first to try to dash for him, but it's no use; the last thing you see of Kitakawa is the twisted rictus of his face before he slips underneath, the ground closing above him and returning to the asphalt.

Unlike before, however, where the atmosphere of the Domain disappeared the moment Kitakawa did, the area still feels like a Domain. Akihiko stays alert, fists clenched. Somehow, some way, you can still sense Kitakawa nearby.

"....never seen a Kaijin pull that off before. What the hell...."

Your eyes are suddenly drawn to Nene, having emerged from the metalcraft store. She stands there, visibly shocked.
"...Kaijin? Here?"
"Stay back! There's still a monster nearby! You'll get hurt if you get in the way!"

Popular Group (Aika, Mori)
"N-no but....what? Do you mean to say there's an Akuma after me?"


Club Group (Saya, Riku, Yui, Misa)
Koga nods.

"I see. Nanjou, I think we might have records on the students. I'd normally avoid opening those, but this is an emergency situation."
"...okay."

Nanjou stands up without a word, and heads into the other room to look for the records.

"Is there anything else we should know about this?"

430
Street Group (Mildred, Akihiko, Shiro, Jin)
Akihiko ducks a swipe from Jack, Jack's long spindly limbs putting Akihiko off balance. In the distance, you can see people running away from the fight, some people staying at what might be a slightly too-close distance to take videos for YouTube.

"Honda! What the hell is this guy?!"
"So many of you....you don't get it!"

Kitakawa swipes at Akihiko again, but this time, Akihiko is ready. He parries the swipe with a flaming fist, the strength behind it almost shoving Akihiko to the ground. Fortunately, Akihiko only has to hold for a few seconds.

Mildred's lamppost smashes into Kitakawa, the lamppost buckling and bending upon contact. The gangly demon stumbles aside, shaking his head as Akihiko follows up Mildred's attack with a roundhouse kick to the ribs, smashing him into the curb. Kitakawa crawls backwards, trying to get distance between him and the three Kaijin.

"So many demons....he didn't tell me there would be so many of you..."

Popular Group (Aika, Mori)
At this, Yagami's eyes visibly widen.
"Y-you're....a Kaijin?"

Mishima seems....entirely unsurprised.
"...."

Club Group (Saya, Riku, Yui, Misa)
At that, Koga's expression visibly tenses.

"A stalker? Do we know who it is? Is there anyone else we need to call? Nanjou, write that down."
"..."
Nanjou quietly and dutifully writes it down.
"Who else knows?"

431
"Yes, my queen!"
Shoes' troops take position as Shoes walks forward.

Today, the true Queen of Battle would take her throne.

"So! You are the horse demon that took down my lord! The pretender to the throne of Hellrealm! I will not yield so easily, horse demon that names thyself after footwear!"

A robed figure appears before the gathered troops and Shoes, a gnarled staff in hand, as they float in the air.

"Who now comes to make me, Thanatos Morta Chrysanthema, Master of Death, Deliverer of Souls, Lord of the Netherrealm, yield?"

432
"Your guess is as good as mine.

On a lighter note....how are you all enjoying the tournament? I understand you defeated Class 3-C."


Theodora blinks.
"...I....don't really have that many friends. I have...Andreas and Kaede, but....."

433
Street Group (Mildred, Akihiko, Shiro, Jin)
"If being passionate is crazy, then-"

Kitakawa doesn't get to finish his sentence, on account of a massive shelf being smashed into him. He tries to brace himself, leaving deep rends in the floor as the shelf bends and buckles pushing him into the side, before shattering entirely. The shelf is immediately followed up by a blast of light smashed directly into his bony gut, courtesy of Shiro, sending him doubling over in pain.

Kitakawa's head snaps upwards, tilting, and you almost swear his grin has turned ever so slightly malevolent, if it wasn't already.

"Enoughenoughenoughenough! I won't let you get between me and Fuu-chan!"

The world seems to ripple around Shiro and Mildred. The air seems to change around you, and you feel, somehow, that you have entered a Domain. Yet behind you is the real world, right?

Backing away from them, Kitakawa places a hand to the wall, only for the wall, at the point of contact, to warp and weft into what appear to be grimy bricks and mortar, like something out of a Victorian period piece. The wall parts, just wide enough to admit Jack, and Jack throws himself through, as the wall closes up behind him, leaving only a hole small enough for his grin to be seen.

"I won't be stopped so easily, stupid peons. Something important from Fuu-chan.....heheheh...."

The last bricks fall down, and if Shiro and Mildred were to try to follow through the wall, they would find that it has reverted to painted concrete and shelves. The feeling of the area being like a Domain has also faded, and you now sense you are fully back in reality. Yet....you can still feel Kitakawa in the area.

At least, until a loud crash sounds, down the street.

Specifically, where Kasuga went.
....
Akihiko shakes his head, trying to regain his bearings, as he pulls himself off the road, briefly surveying the shattered window he'd been thrown into.

It had happened so quickly. One minute, he was following someone into the bookstore with a red jacket, asking them if they were Kitakawa - before realising that they were a) a woman and b) a young teen - certainly not the kind of profile he was looking for.

The next, a giant thing had crashed through the wall, and Akihiko had barely managed to pull her out of the way of danger before being thrown out into the road. He suppressed a sigh of relief as he could see the person he'd followed, the young woman, fleeing down back the road where he'd came.

Back to the task at hand.

"What the hell-agh!"

A foot in tattered leather shoes smashed down on Akihiko's chest, as the giant thing gazed down upon him.

"You were looking for me, weren't you? Stupid! Stupidstupidstupid! I'll teach your friends-"
"Give me a damn break with this crap! Henshin, Ibaraki-douji!"

A burst of crimson flames enshrouds Akihiko as he assumes his Kaijin form, the strongly muscled arms of Ibaraki-douji wrenching themselves around his assailant's foot and shoving him roughly into a nearby lamppost, denting it as the giant Kaijin (Akuma? Akihiko couldn't get a read on him, and it was giving him the damn creeps) tripped over, barely managing to stay standing.

Without missing a beat, Akihiko pushes himself to his feet, assuming a fighting stance, looking around. Shinomiya was, at least, safe for the moment.

But as for Akari and Honda....

He was really, really hoping Akutagawa was on his way.

Popular Group (Aika, Mori)
"There's no cameras in here, and no webcams. Why do you ask?"
"This better be good, Sawatari."

Club Group (Saya, Riku, Yui, Misa)
"Y-yeah. We should tell Koga-senpai. Come on, let's move!"
.....
As the party arrives at the Student Council room, they find Koga and Nanjou, quietly working away.

"Oh. Hello. I didn't expect you guys to come back so quick."
"..."

434
First Review

Alllllriighty. Let's see what we got here. Next review will be on the 25th of September. We'll be reviewing you for both story and mechanical stuff.

notquitethere/Kaya Hawa
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Story-wise, a little thin. I'll be wanting a little more than that. A few things you might want to think about:
- What was his relation to Hanako and Satoshi?
- How did he react to the whole thing?
- What was his role in the friend group?
- What's he been up to in the two years since Hanako's death?
- What was he like two years ago? And now?
 Give both me and your fellow players something to work with. Some of the other bios provide a decent example of what I'm looking for with regards to biographies.

Mechanically....
- Your Character Skill section is wrong. Those are your Class Skills, which are not unique to your character but belong to the class you selected (aka, Thespian). You need to select a Character Skill from the approrpriate sections (i.e. Luna, Colossus, Charisma, etc.). Also, Act does not provide refreshes.
- Your Personal Fault and first Personal Skill are invalid. While I list Talk as a separate "action" of sorts, in reality it's just a formal way of saying "you can roleplay your way through some parts of the fight and if you do it well, I will reward you with EXP and items". As such, you cannot have Personal Faults or Skills based on Talk.
- Your second Personal Skill needs to be changed entirely, as this would stack a RIDICULOUS amount.

IcyTea31/Fujiwara Takeshi
-snip-
Leaving this for now. It's clearly unfinished, so I won't bother you too hard this time around.

Smoke and Mirrors/Minato Date
-snip-
Good to go, barring any numerical errors I might have missed (which I'll handle when I get to selection.)

SeriousConcentrate/Takeo Nagase
-snip-
Good to go.

TricMagic/?
-snip-
Leaving this for now.

SirAston/Kogen Mochizuki
-snip-
Story-wise, the only thing I would say is that Kogen would have to already have been in Iwatodai when she receives the call. Otherwise, you're good.

Mechanically, her PF would almost never trigger before Promotion. Please change this.

Gaterhyme/Ran Sasagawa
-snip-
Good to go.

435
Popular Group (Aika, Mori)
"I'm just surprised I was that easy to find. I'm sorry, Mishima....I know you tried to help."
"Don't apologise to me."

Futaba sighs.

"Mishima and I go way back. We met when Afternoon and she were at a publicity thing, us to advertise our new album, her to promote Tomorrow with You when it was first airing. We kept in touch and she used some of her connections to keep an eye on me when Kitakawa started stalking me."
"When Yagami fled, I....may have pulled some strings. Changed her appearance, gave her a new identity. Made sure that Kitakawa couldn't follow her everywhere."
"Someone had to have told him. There's no way...."
"The only people who knew were myself and Shinomiya-senpai. I wouldn't have, Shinomiya-senpai views you like a sister....a question like that, I think Kasuga or Kaname would be more suited to find the answer to."

Futaba - no, Yagami - stares out the window.
"Is he here? On campus?"
"Hopefully, Kasuga and the others can get to him first."

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