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Dear Journal
   I have been having nightmares of that day in that frozen hell, when the doors shut locking Professor Lloyd outside with the undead. But instead of rushing down to the safety of the fortress, I’m pushed out to the cold with the Professor. Rotten and blood thirsty corpses swarmed the Professor from all sides, only to be blown away by ethereal light leaving smoldering bodies. Then they stopped and a man made of dark metal... No a dwarf, with what looked to be a half mask covering its eyes leaving a mouth stuck in a creepy fixed smile.

   It and the Professor fought but even when it seemed like the Professor won, the metal dwarf simply killed him. Then it turned its head to me, in which I was now back in the fortress before the portal of when it pointed at the wagon and stared at me with its glossy masked eyes. Who is this dwarf?


OOC:
Might as well update the thoughts of David, as now hes being dragged through the seven hells and having all those close to him killed. And ideas for the Metal Dwarf and the Newcomer for me to draw are wizzing through my head. But since I can't grasp one, I can't draw

MUUUY MYSTERIOSO!!!  :D I lieks it!!!

Oh, and, I'd like to request an ingame character please:

Name: Jason Wincloft
Type: Warrior
Gender: Male
Profession(s): Just militaristic
Bio:_____ (optional)

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Legend of Lagdon
« on: November 04, 2011, 06:09:29 pm »
(cont'd)
“Don’t move,” I said. “Or you’ll regret it.”
The figure froze. Then, slowly, the figure turned to me.
It was an elf. A girl elf.
I didn’t recognize her face. If I’d seen it before, though, I would’ve definitely remembered it. Her face reminded me of the moonlight. It seemed to shine even brighter as she turned to look at me. But what told me that she was an elf were the eyes. Her eyes were like twin pearls.
She appeared surprised to see me. For a second, fear flashed across her face. She turned to run.
“Wouldn’t do the if I were you,”
She froze, turning slowly towards me, a look of recognition on her face. “Orrin?” she asked in a whisper.
I lifted my sword. “Yes, how did you know my name?”
She smiled then, not a seductive grin, but a disarming innocent smile. I was stunned. But only a bit. I continued: “Who are you, and why are you following me?”
“I’m not following you,” she said. “nor am I trying to bring harm upon you.”
“Really. So, then, tell me, who are you?”
“I am Elena Heilie, daughter of Rhea, the Deity of the Moon. I am also your sister.”
I laughed. “No, no way. You must be mistaken. My mother was no Rhea. She killed herself a long, long time ago.”
She smiled again. “No, not killed herself. You never saw your birth mother before, Orrin. The ones whom you so think so strongly are not your parents. Not at all, nor will they ever be. And certainly not while both of your true parents remain alive.”
I’d been though a lot of deceiving. Tricks, lies; the whole carpet on top of me. Hell, I’d had my own best friends killed in front of me by other tricks. I hadn’t been able to see through them before. Not until now, now, when Oblivion, dressed as Vorak, had killed my one master Goul Das Harlingway. There was absolutely no reason for me to trust this mysterious beautiful figure in front of me now.
But, you know what? I did.
“What are you doing here?” I asked.
“What is it you want to do?”
That question puzzled me. Ever since I’d started the journey from Teurein to the ruins of Lagdon, I had only one thought in mind: to get there. I’d thought about neither what I was going to do there, nor what I wanted to do there. Now that she’d brought that question up into the light, my mind went blank.
“Do you want to fight Oblivion?” she asked.
“I want to find out who I really am.”
She smiled again. “You won’t have to wait for long; your answer is just ahead.”
I stared at her. Why didn’t I feel suspicious of her? Why did I have that feeling that she was telling the truth?
But I decided to trust my feelings. “Alright,” I said. “What do you want me to do?”
Her smile faded. “That…alright, follow me.”
I couldn’t believe how easy it was. But I followed her, leaving Jax sleeping inside the tent.

After much walking, I realized Elena was leading me into the ruins of Lagdon. I drew my sword, but Elena said: “Put it away; you’ll need it for later.”
As I followed her through the ruins, I recognized much of the torn-down, battered structures. One of them appeared to be the Magician’s Guild. I felt a sickening feeling deep down in the pit of my stomach as I recalled months ago when Baidr, Jax, and I had walked to the tower, in search of the book to incantations.
Elena led me down the gravel stairs, leading me through a narrow passageway into the wall of the stairs. I’d never seen that passageway before, but I kept my mouth shut. We walked through the narrow way for a few minutes, and then entered a large chamber. I recognized it as the town center, for the benches and tables were still there. But, now, a large glass dome had been built around it. Wooden stairs had also been built, leading up to an elevated platform. And, in the center, was the crystal.
My eyes froze as I looked at the legendary prison Starfire. Red flames seemed to flicker around it; swirling into the night sky. The air seemed to vibrate and pulse around it. But I felt a strong presence as well; something living inside the prison. I squinted my eyes harder into the red glare.
And saw a huge serpent stare right back at me.
“He is here,” I heard Elena say. “I have brought him.”
Then I saw a tall dark shadow rise out of the platform. And, in the glare of Starfire, I saw him, his tall dark figure wrapped in a jet-black cape, and his eyes red like fire.
Oblivion.
“Good work,” he said, addressing Elena.
“And my mother…” she began.
“Is also here,” Oblivion said, gesturing at a glowing light radiating off of the tunnel we’d just came out of. I turned as the light became brighter and brighter.
A tall, beautiful woman with white hair and long flowing white robes stepped out. I couldn’t speak; I could only stare at her. This was her. Rhea, the Deity of the Moon. And I, her…
“Son.” Rhea spoke, as if she knew my mind.

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Never Fear I feel we will be around for a long time yet, so hop aboard whenever you got the time.
And Kisame I will be editting this post to place the save's DL, I don't think any new features are in, but they lurk in the raws. And like I said they are not that important, but I doubt The use of the doctor's desk will be useless (I can fix that if noone can get it to work) hopefully I didn't accidently create any bugs :O

EDIT: Here is the save

EDIT2: Also I will be updating the sidestory after Kisames first update, I'd like to think that our dwarves are still in the same world reguardless of a failed save.

THANKS! :D I may not be able to go through a whole year though   :'(
But anyways good luck! My best wishes to kisame! May Amorak be with you!!!  ;D

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HUGO if you ever do manage to conjure up a sidestory pleeeaaase notify me when you post it! I want to read it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!  :D
Can do Hazael, also you should read this entire crazy tale. because...
Spoiler: SIDE STORY SPOILER (click to show/hide)
also don't mind our random ramblings through out the pages :P personally it adds excitement to the whole story :D

I Am also genning a World with the newest (untested) version of Regeneration.
Spoiler: concerns (click to show/hide)
My plans was to use the side story to invoke the transition of a new area within the badlands, but Kisame had asked if he could write the move. So I will instead I will throw some stallers for out sidestory friends.

Now the embark location I will take for Votes for, say like a swamp and what features (clay, sand blah, blah, blah...)
Personally I'd vote for a deseart or badlands, As I like making a fortress in inhospital areas. I'd prefer Clay and sand.

But in all fairness Since Kisame never got to have a chance to do his turn I could turn over the world and thus he picks were we go.

I should have the world up 2morrow, and then a sidestory once I get home.

Also this should be filled out as well unless profession and a name for your dwarf is all you like:

Name:_____
Type:_____ (options are: Normal, Warrior, Hunter, Priest)
Gender:_____ (Male/Female respectively)
Profession(s):_____
Bio:_____ (optional)

AWESOME! Unfortunately (as sad as I am  :'() I can't take part in the series, as I've finished Lagdon and am moving on to Sehirian history. (a new empire who conquers the world of Klymaestra)

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In SOVIET FORTRESS, KITTEN adopts YOU!!  :P

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HUGO if you ever do manage to conjure up a sidestory pleeeaaase notify me when you post it! I want to read it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!  :D

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Birth of an Artifact
« on: November 03, 2011, 06:46:13 pm »
You, SirHoneyBadger, have succeded in making me jealous of my little story of Lagdon compared to the sheer awesomeness of your story.  >:(

In all seriousness though, I do bid you good luck on your next mod! Hope you also can find enough time to continue the story!  :P

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Legend of Lagdon
« on: November 03, 2011, 04:57:23 pm »
But of course.  ;) There's only so much hours in a day.

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Legend of Lagdon
« on: November 02, 2011, 08:30:14 pm »
(cont'd)
Vorak laughed again. “That’s my name, don’t wear it out.”
The tigerman gritted his teeth. “Why are you here?”
Oblivion grinned. “For the key. For Horizon. Where is it?”
“Fight me!”
He laughed dismissively. “You are a lying snake in the grass. I can’t be bothered by such.”
But Goul stood his ground. “Oblivion, do you draw? If you won’t draw, then you deny the morality of your undertaking! You deny that your purpose here to release the forgotten ones is just. You accept the fact that you’ve been living under a lie!”
“I’ll have none of you,” Oblivion growled, the grin gone. “Prepare to die!”
Then, they fought. The tigerman slammed into Oblivion, who roared and grabbed him by the neck. Goul slashed his sword in an uppercut towards Oblivion’s chest. Oblivion roared again and tore away his sword from his grasp, as if it were made of paper. Goul grabbed his large hand, struggling to pull himself out of the chokehold. I was too stunned to do anything; to draw my sword and stab Oblivion. I was frozen; my feet refused to move. Oblivion grasped the tigerman’s sword by its handle and thrusted it straight into his body.
Instantly, the tigerman stopped moving. His body became limp, and Oblivion tossed it aside, as if it weren’t important. The blood of Goul was stained on his shirt. I was horrified beyond speech. Oblivion started for the exit of the library.
Fury flowed through my veins. Oblivion had first destroyed my home, and now had killed my teacher utterly.
I let out a cry and charged straight at Oblivion, my sword pointed in front of me. He instantly shifted to the side, but I’d been expecting that. I slashed into his arm, and he let out a bellow in pain. Instantly, I thrusted my sword into his back. With another bellow of pain, he swung his arm around and smacked me into the doors of the library, and out onto the street. My sword landed right by me. Instantly, I reached for it, but his foot kicked it away. Suddenly, from out of nowhere, Oblivion’s face was in my view.
“Don’t make the same mistake that other fool did,” Oblivion said, pulling me up to my feet. “Live long and well; don’t make enemies of people far more powerful then you.”
And, with that, he was gone.

Jax helped me bury Goul. I felt an overwhelming pain as I looked upon my former master for the last time. But I kept silent.
We packed our possessions, and headed eastward. We said nothing; I knew what I had to do. Oblivion had Horizon, the legendary key to unlock Starfire, in his possession. And he was going to ruin the world with it.
I had to stop him.
I knew where he would head next. I knew where Starfire was located.

One night, the night before we’d arrived to Lagdon and while we were travelling through the forest, something different happened. I was sleeping, when, all of a sudden, I heard a sound of feet shuffling. Instantly, I drew my sword, fully awake. I stepped towards the sound.
A figure was hunched behind a roseberry bush. It didn’t see me, nor did it show off any indication that it sensed I was there. I crept up to it, and put my sword by its neck area.
“Don’t move,” I said. “Or you’ll regret it.”
The figure froze. Then, slowly, the figure turned to me.
It was an elf. A girl elf.
I didn’t recognize her face. If I’d seen it before, though, I would’ve definitely remembered it. Her face reminded me of the moonlight.

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Legend of Lagdon
« on: November 02, 2011, 07:59:31 pm »
(cont'd)
“Alright,” I said. “Kabloids sound easy enough. Where can I find them?”
“Simple,” Goul replied. “Be alone during the middle of night and the Kabloids will find you.”

“This is different,” I whispered. “Why are we standing at the gate?”
“I saw one here today,” Goul replied. “There’s bound to be more. Kabloids usually hunt in packs. There could be a hundred out there for all we know.”
I grinned, eager with anticipation. “Then let’s start frying.”
And then we waited. And waited. Minutes dragged by, then hours. My eyelids became heavy. Vorak was asleep, but Goul was still wide awake and perched on a stone column.
Then, suddenly, I saw something move in the darkness. “What!” I yelled. “A Kabloid!”
Vorak instantly got to his feet; Goul helped him gather his weapons. But I was looking at the figure, straining my eyes against the darkness to spot it.
Then, I saw another one. And another one. And another one.
“Oh, my…”
The words died in my throat as I saw the massive amount of dark figures against the sky. There they were; all one thousand of them.
“The battle will be epic,” I whispered.
Vorak frowned. “Wait a minute…those aren’t Kabloids.”
“No, not at all,” Goul said. “Those are goblins.”
I heard a shout on the walls above us.
“GOBLIN SIEGE!”
Oh dear.

“Wait a minute!” I cried. “They can’t be here already!”
Goul nodded. “Goblins are horrible scouts. They’d only come if someone had brought them here.”
My eyes became wide. “But the only people who know where the key is are Vorak, you, me, and…”
Jax.

I knew where he was. Jax had excused himself that day, the day I met Vorak, and had gone to the city library. He said he wanted to search for a book to read.
We found him by the fountain. He was writing on a folded sheet of paper rapidly, glancing about his shoulder as if he were afraid someone would catch him writing. I stepped right behind him. He didn’t seem to notice me.
“And, who might you be writing to, Jax?” Goul asked.
Jax gritted his teeth. “We have a traitor…”
“Of course we do. And I think I know who it is…”
“Jax, I can’t believe you would do such a thing.” I said. “Why? Why did you lead the goblins over here?”
Jax stood up and backed away slowly, raising his hands. “I didn’t do it! I swear! It was him!” He pointed an angry accusing finger right at Vorak.
“Jax, please, we’ve had enough of-”
“Yes,” Goul said. “Yes, you’re right. You brought the goblins here!” He drew his sword and pointed it at Vorak. “Why? Because you’re not his uncle, are you?”
Vorak grinned. “For a man as thickheaded as yourself, you do make an excellent observation.”
What? I couldn’t believe it. First Baidr, and now Vorak? I didn’t know whom to trust now. Everyone seemed to be betraying me. It’s a difficult thing to distinguish the good from the bad.
“I knew there was something wrong about you,” Goul said. “Oblivion!”
Vorak laughed again. “That’s my name, don’t wear it out.”

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Legend of Lagdon
« on: November 02, 2011, 07:25:55 pm »
(cont'd)
He laughed. It was the same hearty laugh I’d heard all those years before of working with him. And here he was! Alive! And an ELF! And my uncle! I always believed that life was full of surprises, but this was one of the best ones I’d received so far. I didn’t know why, but I felt honored, in a way, to have Vorak as my uncle.
“Orrin; my nephew! Look at you!” he exclaimed, clapping his hands on my shoulders, as though I were a long lost child. “Look at the size of you! How you’ve grown! After all those years-”
“We had best get inside,” Goul warned. “I sense a coming danger.”
Vorak nodded. “I sensed it too. He is near.”
“What?” I asked, looking to Vorak. “What is he talking about?”
“Come,” Vorak gestured to an open door near the end of the tunnel. “We have much to discuss.”

“So I’m an elf,” I said. “I know that much already. But I’ve got one question-”
Vorak waved me off. We were sitting at a circular wooden table; one which seemed to at one time have been the dining area for several dwarfs. I even saw the marks of beer mugs that were smashed into the table’s surface. Must’ve been one rowdy group who’d last lived here.
“That will be answered! But, for now, come! Show me what you’ve learned.” There was an eager look in his eyes, as he picked up his axe in one hand.
I hesitated. “I’m not…”
“Go on,” Goul said. “Show him what I’ve taught you.”
“Alright.”
Vorak grinned. I stepped out onto the center of the room. Still facing him, I slowly started to circle him. I remembered all that Goul’d taught me; to look for my enemy’s weakness. Except this wasn’t my enemy. Therefore, I was going to have to make an except-
Vorak’s axe swung out of nowhere and nearly brained me. With a yelp, I barely managed to escape it.
“Come on, child,” Vorak chided. “You’re not even trying!”
Okay, okay. I got my head back together, and readied to face him again; him and his large axe of doom. I could see the many scars of battle that crossed it. Maybe…
Then, he swung at me again. Only this time, I was expecting it. This time, I leapt to the left, parrying his swing with a slash to the right. I’d been carefully watching his axe blade, and noticed something.
A very distinctive crack, yet somehow visible only when he swung at me, stretched across his blade. It was very deep; not at all a hard place to hit, if you were aiming for that particular spot. However, it’s location on the axe made it the hardest to reach by accident. But I could see it. And I could hit it.
He brought up the axe again and unleashed a series of cuts and swipes at me. Parrying each of the attacks, I moved myself into position. This was going to hurt. He swung in a wide arc straight for my midsection. At the last second, I slashed my sword in the direction adjacent to the handle of his axe; directly to the axehead.
Boom!
Vorak’s axe instantly shattered; the blade flying in three parts straight into the wall of the room we were in. The handle itself remained fully intact; however the axe blade was decimated.
Vorak stared at it in shock. I grinned at him. Seeing my grin, an knowing that I hadn’t done that by accident, he gave a laugh of delight and clapped me on the shoulders with his hands again, nearly crushing me to pieces.
“You did it!” he exclaimed. “You-how did you do-nevermind. Goul taught you well, didn’t he! Now you’re ready!”
“I know a man by Lake Springs,” the tigerman said. “He often spoke of a Kabloid entering his bounds. Yesterday, two men were missing. I have a feeling that the Kabloids are back.”
“Kabloids?” I asked. “What are the Kabloids?”
“Dangerous mystic creatures,” Vorak replied. “Dark, dark, wicked creatures of the night. They are shaped like coffins. Coffins made of swirls of blue and shadow. They have the heads of skeletons, and are often seen in packs. They have no arms or appendages, and float simply in space. However, anything that touches them instantly starts to disintegrate.”
“Then, how do I kill them?” I asked.
Vorak grinned. “The best way is to just burn them up. Or blow them up. Either will do.”
“Kabloids are not as tough as people think,” Goul said. “They will only attack you if you’re alone. If you’re not alone, they’ll simply stay away until they outnumber you at least two to one. But killing them is easy, if one knows their weakness. The only way one could actually kill you would be if you didn’t see them coming.”
“They get to you,” Vorak said. “They come from all directions; in the darkness. Most people die simply because they don’t know how to kill Kabloids. The others are all who’ve lost courage when facing one of the beasts and giving up hope and surrendering to death.”
“I’ve killed one already,” Goul said. “During the night after we arrived, I spotted one by the gateway to the city. He was obviously trying to spy on us. The two guards didn’t seem to notice him, and he’d made a big hole in the wall already. I didn’t think twice when I threw the torch at him.”
“And he didn’t dodge it?”
Vorak chuckled. “Well, you see, Kabloids don’t know that fire can burn them up. There have been numerous incidents in the past when Kabloids have been known to, ah, accidentally burn themselves up, leaving a large dark scar in the earth. I’ve stumbled over such areas where Kabloids have dwelled recently. They especially like to come out during thunderstorms. There were burn marks all over the place near the plains of Jekka. You’d think that a whole army had fought a war down there before you’d arrived!”

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Legend of Lagdon
« on: November 02, 2011, 06:45:02 pm »
Originally, that was the plan. But then I got lazy and decided to just add my adventures in adventure mode into the story; ran out of moments. :P
I'm planning SPOILERS to have an epic battle near the end where Oblivion, Orrin, and the four forgotten beasts, as well as another deity SPOILERS battle it out. The battle will be LEGENDARY. :D

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Legend of Lagdon
« on: November 01, 2011, 09:03:26 pm »
(cont'd)
“I see now,” I said. “So, now, since he won’t listen to reason, I’ll have to use force?”
The tigerman nodded. “That is it. Oblivion strictly believes that anyone who opposes even a single little detail to his goal is his enemy. Right now, you are in his way. Only you can find that key. He will beat you until you stop bleeding. But if he doesn’t find that key, you won’t be able to die.”
“But why? Why me?”
“Every key has a gatekeeper. And, right now, I am the gatekeeper. I cannot die until I pass the location of the key on to someone else. Then, and only then, will I die.”
“I understand.”
“However, there will come a time when I will give you the location of the key. It is your only hope of survival against Oblivion, who has long ago gone corrupt.”
I nodded. “Okay. So you’ve told me this. But how can I overcome this forgotten beast?”
“You need not worry. I will train you.”
“Okay, so, when do we start?”
The tigerman grunted. “Now.”
 “Alright! What do I do?”
“Simple.” He pointed to the hut. “Make that hut collapse. With your little finger.”
I blinked like I hadn’t heard. I wasn’t sure I’d heard him correctly. “Excuse me?” I said. “You said break it down, right?”
“That’s right.”
“With my, um, little finger?”
“Right again.”
I shifted my feet uneasily. “I, um, don’t know how to…”
“Don’t know how to? Or do you just think you don’t have the strength to do this?”
“I don’t have the strength for this.”
“Wrong.”
As if to prove his point, the tigerman stood up, walked up to the edge of the hut, and tapped a particularly rotted part of the wooden frame. Instantly, the entire hut collapsed. I stared in amazement as a cloud of dust swept up into the air, scattering the birds and bits of wood in a mini dust storm. How could he have done it? I always knew Goul was capable of performing wonders on a regular basis, but I was still taken aback by the physical abnormality of the situation.
“Strength is a key point to success on the battlefield,” Goul said, stepping away from the debris. “However, strength alone cannot combat knowledge. You can’t destroy a whole entire building with just strength. No, you need the analysis and the thinking of the architect who designed the building. The one who knows its secrets. Its weaknesses.
“In order to defeat Oblivion, or any powerful foe in particular, you can’t rely on your own strength. However, if you can exploit their weaknesses, you will be able to bring them to the ground in one blow. Just like the hut.” He gestured towards the pile of rubbish.
Alright.
“But what if their skin is made of iron?” I asked.
“Drown them. Or melt them. Or suffocate them. All living things require air.”
“And if they’re already dead?”
“Burn them.”
“And if they’re dead and have a layer of iron skin?”
The tigerman snorted. “Melt them. I told you, everything has a weakness, no matter how you look at it.”
“And what if they’re immortal and invincible?”
The tigerman grinned. “Only God himself has such a power. The rest are all perishable.”
“But immortal on earth, I mean.”
“As I said before…”
He’d gotten me. I was trapped by my own words.
I shrugged. “Okay, fine. But how do I exploit their weaknesses?”

Training was a tough and long time for me. For a whole week, on the journey to Teurein, Goul taught me how to use my “sixth” sense. It was a power that blind and deaf people had easier way of obtaining. After hours and hours of non-stop training, I finally learned the art of “Reaching.” As its name implies, Reaching is a skill obtained mostly by dedicated swordsmen and magicians. It is the power to “see beyond sight,” and to “hear beyond hearing.” I instantly began to develop my sixth sense after I found out how to use it. I had no choice. Every night, Goul made me wander around blindfolded; looking for an inanimate object he’d carefully hidden somewhere. Sometimes he hid it in the ground. Other times, he hid it in a cave with water flowing through it. Each and every time, I found the object. I couldn’t believe it, but I always found the object. And, every time I did find the object, Goul would instruct me to find another object blindfolded. We would do this every night, and during the day I’d sleep for about five hours.
When we finally got to Teurein, I was so tired from the lack of sleep that I hit the ground of the hotel room we stayed in and slept for a whole twenty-four hours.
After I’d gotten up, I turned to Goul for further instructions. I was so used to taking orders from him now, and reported automatically to him every morning. It was completely habitual now.
“What’s our plan for today?” I asked.
The tigerman shook his head. “Exercise is cancelled for today. Let’s go for a walk around the city.”


Now, when I first entered the city, I paid it no mind, because it was already night and I was deadened by my lack of sleep. But now, with the sun up high in the sky and people all around, I finally got the feeling of awe which I’d been missing out on that other day.
Teurein was a port city. It wasn’t like Lagdon. It didn’t have the “fortress” look which Lagdon portrayed. It didn’t have that rough mixture of people from all over the world.
It was almost like one whole massive village.
There were markets everywhere. People were selling what they could sell and buying what they could buy. Merchants and traders set up shops and tents all over the “city.” But what struck me wasn’t the amount of people or the size of the city.
It was the people.
They were the friendliest people I’d ever met. I’m not even exaggerating. I must’ve received over forty “good-morning’s” or “how are you’s.” It seemed like I was a family relative of everyone; people talked and started up conversations with me wherever I walked.
It took Goul and me about three hours to finally get to the market Goul’d been looking for. It was an old closed-down market put up for sale, except only no one was buying it. The area the building was built on was very unattractive; no merchant would even go near it.
“Inside,” Goul gestured to the old worn-down wooden door. I followed him inside. There were a few broken tables and chairs lying about, but other than that the place was empty. Goul went to the center of the room, and kneeled down on the floor, as if searching for something. Then, I heard a loud click. Instantly, a panel in the floor swung inwards, leading into a small room lighted only by the fire of two torches. I followed him down into the room. On the far side of the room, I saw an opening to a tunnel. The smell of death hit me almost as soon as I saw the opening.
“Here it is,” Goul said, pointing down the tunnel.
I blinked several times, trying to see beyond the veil of darkness. I tried using my sixth sense, but I could detect nothing beyond what my own eyes could see.
Goul, however, gestured into the tunnel again. “Inside.” He said.
I followed him down into the tunnel. The tunnel seemed to stretch on for miles and miles through the darkness. The fog was very thick and heavy, and the musty air began to clog my nostrils. The only light from the torches flickered and then went out. Silence around us. All but the pattern of our footsteps as we descended further into the tunnel.

“That’s strange,” A guard whispered. Night had descended upon the city, and all was calm. The two soldiers who stood guard by the gateway were inspecting a large hole in the wall; one big enough for one large man to come through. That was strange, because the two soldiers had been standing around all day, and had never seen or heard anything out of order, and they’d only just discovered the hole.
The other soldier nodded. “Look at the edges! No hammer or pick could make such an entrance into even a cottage in so short an amount of time.”
The first one glared at it. “I suspect sorcery. Should we report this?”
“Nah. Let’s wait until Garrison gets back first. He’ll know what to do.”

“I don’t understand,” I whispered quietly, surveying the plains of darkness around us. “Where are we-?”
“Hang on,” Goul said suddenly, shifting forward as if ready to pounce on someone. “There’s something out of place.”
“Where?” My eyes inadvertently darted ahead of me. Squinting into the fog, I could make out a small figure at the far end of the tunnel. Goul started forward slowly. I followed behind him, my heart pounding. I didn’t know why, but sweat dripped from my forehead. And as we drew nearer, the figure appeared to grow larger and larger, into the shape of...
I hesitated to go any further. The figure remained still. And then he spoke.
The hairs on the back of my neck stood as I recognized the voice.
“What took you so long Goul?” Vorak asked. “Did you bring my nephew along like you said you would?”
“Aye. That I did.”
I rubbed my eyes. I couldn’t believe what I was seeing. Here was the same Vorak; the Vorak whom I’d known all those years before. And now…and now…
“I never knew you were an elf too,” I said.
He laughed. It was the same hearty laugh I’d heard all those years before of working with him. And here he was! Alive! And an ELF! And my uncle! I always believed that life was full of surprises, but this was one of the best ones I’d received so far. I didn’t know why, but I felt honored, in a way, to have Vorak as my uncle.

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Legend of Lagdon
« on: November 01, 2011, 06:12:50 pm »
Haha, yes! The SUSPENSE. Thanks for mentioning it! :) I can't take all the credit, though, for thinking it up. One of my friends suggested that I make Oblivion a good guy with good intentions gone bad. The other-Lagdon being an elf-I got it from reading off of Eragon. ;) It was a GREAT book; the whole time I was writing this story, I pictured these scenes from the series with Orrin as Eragon and Goul as the late Brom. The twists and turns are, in fact, actually based upon twists and turns in the series, as you will later find out. :P

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: The Legend of Lagdon
« on: October 31, 2011, 08:13:22 pm »
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Just a quick reminder; I am open to all suggestions and improvements especially! Feel free to tell me of anything nonlinear or any mistakes or how I can improve my story to fit your standards! :)

Also, you've probably recognized it by now, but the story shifts from fortress mode to adventure mode. The fortress is all true; I did have a fortress called Lagdon, and it did get wiped out entirely by a goblin army. Also, as I checked the legends mode of the game, there was a goblin fortress nearby whose deity was Oblivion. And, in the adventure mode, I started out somewhere in the vincity of Lagdon and did hire several followers, one of whom was Goul and another Jax.

Anyways, thanks for reading again! :)

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