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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: June 10, 2013, 03:10:51 am »
As Max gets down from the podium, he’s stopped by two familiar ponies.

“Maxwell Yellowfeather, Lighting has just confessed that you’re the one who told him to take my bolts from me and give it to you. by the laws of the Meandering Gloss, you are now under arrest for murder, Sabotage and thievery. Come quietly or I’ll have to use force.” The small, pregnant and very undangerous-looking captain of the guards mare threatened.

Flamberge stands nearby, watching. He was ready to leap to Crosshair's defence should things turn violent, but was otherwise happy to let the guard do their job.

Max smiles. “Oh? And so how hard did you twist the hoof screws to to get Lightning to say what you want to hear like that?”

“You have the rights to remain silent, everything you said will be used against you in court. If you refuse to come then I will add a resist arrest charge aswell.” Continued the mare, ignoring Max’s questions.

Max rolls his eyes. “This is ridiculous.”

Crosshair takes out a pair of shackles to try and cuff the griffin without further words. Knowing that saying anymore won’t do any good.

Max looked away dismissively. Almost uninterested. “Sure. Fine. I’ have nothing to hide.” He puts his hands out. And was effectively cuffed by a much smaller pony. It looked kind of funny, really.

Flamberge is surprised to see Max go peacefully and moves to follow him as Crosshair leads the prisoner out.

“So, what’s the plan, Flamberge, interrogate me, lock me up, throw away the key?” Max asked in almost a banal, bored manner.

Flamberge responds blandly, "That isn't up to me. The Captain of the Guard and the Lady Mayor will decide your fate."

Max cocks a brow. “Not even going to admit you w’ere even hoping to see me in cuffs at the end of this month? Are you not’ even going to make this honest? For a single second?”

Flamberge decides to keep the bird talking, maybe he'd slip up and say too much, "And why would I have wanted that?"

“Simple, you’ve wanted me gone since my hospital stay. I think you said, and I quote, “One more slip up and i’ll run you through bird.’ Let me guess. You can’t find the killer. But you’re never one to pass up mak’in lemonade out of a situation. So you’re cuffing me.”

Flamberge moves to face the griffin and says loudly, and plainly, "Lightning Runner has gone on record that he stole the murder weapon to give to you, before the death of Sergi. For that reason, and that reason only you are being taken in for questioning. Crosshair, get him out of here."

The small mare nods and tugged Max along to follow her, holding the chain with her mouth. It was almost silly to look at and is obvious in every way that he could’ve just easily fly away and there’s not a thing the pregnant mare can do to stop something that’s nearly three times her size.

Max goes along without a hesitation.

Several minutes later, Max was sitting in a prison cell, next to Lightning Runner’s. Flamberge was sitting at Crosshair’s desk, leaning back, his rear hooves propped up on the table, while the mare in question stood near the bars looking at the prisoner.


Max leers from left to right as he taps in the interrogation table with his claw rhythmically.

Crosshair entered his cell with other guards waiting outside to make sure that the bird doesn’t do anything funny. “So! Max. I’m going to cut to the chase and ask you now, what do you know about the Murder?”

“I know I had nothing to do with it. I know I have no probable cause. Killing one of my own? what are you? Dense?” Max says, taking a long look at his handcuffed claws.

“Alright, then tell me. Why did you have Lightning Runner steal weapons for you? Weapons such as my personal bolts, to be precise. The ones that we found on the dead griffin.” Crosshair pressed on.

“I think the proper question is why would I have asked Lightning Runner to steal weapons for me?” He asks in a rhetorical tone. “What’s my motive? What would I have to gain from all the theft, detective?”

“Well.” Crosshair begin “I’m not sure if you have any ulterior motives or not, but the obvious reason would be because Flamberge killed your lover. Whom from what I understand, been with you for many, Many years. So it’s no doubt you’d love some revenge. And of course, what other way would be better than framing Flamberge’s mare, get her dishonorably discharged, hoping that he’ll get the flak of it as well and suffer a strain in his record for the rest of his life? Perhaps you even plan to kill me a swell in the end to get even with him.”

Max’s feathers flare. He leans in. “Little mare, if you think you’ even amount to an infinitesimal little pawn ta’ either Flamberge or I, you are more naive than a could have even thought possible.” Max leans back. “Yeah. It’s true. The revenge part. I do. And I try to get it. By defending Lighting and his wife from you, I get a little revenge. By holding rallies and shining a light up to this whole farce, I get a little revenge. By staying calm, in these cuffs and proving how desperate you two really are at covering the tracks of who really murdered Sergi, I get a little revenge as well.”

Flamberge rolls his eyes from the desk, at the absurd notion that they would have any reason to murder the soldier.

“Protecting Lightning Runner by turning him into a thief which ends up getting him shot and locked up behind bars.” Crosshair snorted “I’ll be sure to never ask for your help, then. But do tell me, if you weren’t involved in this, then why would Lightning Runner say that you are?”

Max massages the brook of his beak. “Since, when have ponies who babble in their sleep and teleport corpses into their cells become reliable, dependable sources, Crosshair?”


“Oh I’m certain that Lighting Runner have no way of teleporting corpses into his cell. And you’d be surprised how desperation can make a pony very truthful about something.” Crosshair pressed on. Not giving up.

“Desperation can also make a pony lie through their teeth and say anything to lighten their prison bail and ditch town.” Max interjects. “So I had the bolts in the end is what you’re getting at?”

“Where were you when the murder took place?” Asked Crosshair.

“What day in particular was tha’, exactly? Refresh my memory.” Max asked curtly.”It was so ordinary I can’t even remember. I was flying around, checking the roofing on the apartments. I remember a faint shattering of glass, but paid no mind. It was probably something innocent. Turns out it wasn’t, I later found out.”

“On 26th Malachite, 272 At five before noon. It’s understandable that you can’t remember all of it, but did anyone else see you that day to vouch for you that you were somewhere else when the murder happened?”

“Redhat, Prodd, and Temperance.” Max answered, an ace up his sleeve. “Redhat, who was flying over the apartments as well, watched for Intruders, he saw me, he can vouch.” Max glances at the two. “As you both can easily verify, as you set the flight schedules yourselves. Redhat can prove I was nowhere near the crime scene. Twenty minutes before the crime? I was helping Prodd. Twenty minutes after I was calmly reading a law book in Temperance’s office. Honestly, I challenge you to find somth’in sinister about me.”

Flamberge stands up, "Twenty minutes before and after means nothing. The town is small enough you could get from any one place to any other in that time. Crosshair will, I’m sure, be asking Redhat about seeing you, when he returns, and we'll certainly mention this to Temperance, but don't think you are anywhere near off the hook."

Max chuckles. “It won’t do you no good Flamberge, you know that.”

Flamberge glares at the murdering bird, trying to figure out what he had planned, but has no words to add.

“Lock me up? Temperance or Convalescence will set me right back out when the griffon caravan form Canyontalon arrives. Amnesty laws. Look them up.”

Flamberge look at Max for several seconds before saying, “Do you know what the Griffion’s do to traitors? It isn’t pretty, and you, a griffion yourself, murdered one of your own.”

Max lays back cooly. “I’m not talking to another pony other than Convalescence this point forward, Berge. Good luck collecting a’ actual physical shred of evidence to give Canyontalon in the midterm. Carpe diem. Better yet, have fun convincing the griffon ambassadors their alliance with you isn’t shaky to undependable now at best.”Max cocks his falcon head wryly. “Perhaps father was right afterall, Flamberge. Just- Just couldn't cut it, could you?”

As Max says that, Flamberge loses his cool completely, he roars with rage and flies forward slamming a forehoof through the bars at the birds beak, only to immediately be pulled back and away by Crosshair and the other guards.

Max takes the horseshoe to the beak with a grunt. He rubs his chipped, bleeding beak with almost a pride. “See? The lunatics are running the asylum. All it takes is the right push.” His chuckle was deep and low; the cruel laugh resonating down the cobblestone dungeon.

Flamberge huffs, and struggles, then when Crosshair moves in front of him, he realizes where he is and what he just did, he stops resisting and says "Let me go." He then pulls free from the guards, as they let him go and then storms toward the door, he stops and gives Max one last look, one of intense and deep hatred before leaving the cell block slamming the door behind him.

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: June 02, 2013, 12:01:27 am »


The Duskfields Chapel was a solemn place now. The pews were empty and had a light coat of dust. The stained glass windows depicting the equestrian gods cast an eerie sepia tone glow upon the place. The altar stands alone, silent. Max stands at the foot of the altar, his hands clasped together in prayer.

"Hi Amug. It's been awhile." Max muttered to the altar. "I know they ain’t no real reason to listen for my voice, when there are so many others crying out there; but if My life have ever been caught in a twilight, it would be now, Amug. Gods, it would be now."

Max sighed sighed and began his prayer.

"Amug, grant me the strength to fight through these dark times, to pierce the shade enshrouding me. Guide me to th’e sunrise again."

"Thebil ToastDumpling, I beg you to allow the ponies to see what have I seen. Feel as I feel. I beg you to favor me, and in doing so, let the will of Duskfields stand behind me. I ask you to put my actions in the history books favorably when all is said and done."


"Aval, the goddess of generosity, spare me any more ill luck!” Max drawled. “My plan hangs in the edge of a knife. Buck me over once? Fine. Twice? I doubt yer’ impartiality. Buck me over again? I will personally kick your throat in when I ascend from this good earth."

“Favos?” Max cocks a brow. “Favos, you were always an odd one. Mosquito god. I pray Duskfields doesn't get any droughts any time soon. That’s the one thing this town has going.”

 “Gasis,  goddess of love, I need not explain why i’m doing this to you, you know this has to be settled.”

“Nozkam, keep your valor. There’s nothing valorous about this, this is just good old fashion revenge. I  knew whose side you were playing for the - the second that medal was pinned on Flamberge’s chest I cursed your name. Sod you. If it weren’t for you, Carn would still be alive.”
At that, Max turned heel and walked away from the altar.

18th Galena


Max returns to the altar, this time backdropped by red banners, waving idly in the breeze. Max came up to the altar with the intention to say a few words.

He leered around at his audience sitting in the pews. “So, it’s come to this.” Max uttered. “A body found in the hospital. An assassination.  With no leads, Except for a family pony with no criminal history.”  He gives off an aggravated sigh. “Duskfileds, we’re better than this.”  He moans, letting  every pent up piece of frustration he had about Duskfields seethe through his voice. “ “I, for one, can’t stand it any longer.” He grips the sides of the podium. “For how much Flamberge has spent of defending Duskfileds, who here really feels safe?” He asks, an open question to all. “Have the discordant attacks lessened at all over the months?  Have any of you truly felt safe?” Max asks.  Max points to himself. “I for one, as’a griffon and a citizen, am not so certain of his ability to keep us safe. Neither should any of you.” He gives an aggravated sigh. “Are we truly going to ignore the fact Crossbow’s signature was on the bolts that pierced Private Sergi’s heart? Are we truly going to ignore the fact That the bolts were in Flamberge’s possession both before and after the crime, as both convalescence and  Redhat can attest?” Max slammed his fist. “Are we truly going to ignore the facts and pursue this obviously contrived witch hunt? This Farce? I am going to restore what was lost here, Duskfields; Sanity. You’ll all be pleased to know I’ve sent a letter to both talontranced and canyontalon offering to be temporarily titled baron, a mutual mutual diplomat for both parties until this is all sorted. Also, I’m asking politely, Flamberge,  let Lightning go. He has a wife. He is obviously not a killer. And lastly?” Max Smirked. “I’m offering five thousand bits to the pony who would hand Flamberge’s ‘badge of Valor’ into my claws. That is all.”

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: June 01, 2013, 11:57:44 pm »


Max perches on his apartment bed, tucked in feathered ball and his head tucked under his wing. He snores quite loudly for a bird thing with such small nostrils.

It was the early morning right and the sun was still rising. Red had just left her house and was making a B-line for the bird’s house, with her pet wolf being right behind her. If she was going to have to head out in the wilds, she was going to need to find someone to take care of bonnet. Once he got to the bird house he knocked the front door.
 

Max lazily stirs as he hears a knock at his apartment door. He groans, and shifts himself out of bed. What could it possibly be now? He opened the door and hears the familiar Redhatted Stallion and his pet bonnet. “ Uh, hello, Redhat.” He shifts his groggy eyes up and down the apartment hall. “Do you know how early it is?” He yawned.

“Well, I’d like to apologize for this inconvenience but I need to leave the fort in a few hours and need someone to take care of my dog, and furthermore I need to talk to you about something...” The blue maned pony looked around a little. “and do so somewhere more private..”

Max looks a little perplexed but also more than willing to try and rectify whatever Red had on his mind. “Yes, of course, sure.” Max nodded. “Let me, uh, put on some pants.” He said while looking back into the apartment.

“Um... very well. carry on.” Red just nodded and waited for him to close the door.

Max closes the door and the a lull for a few minutes, until Max pushed the door wide again, this time clothed. He walks and talks with Redhat. “Alright, Shoot.”

Red nodded and came into the house. “Well, I know what happened to lightning...” He gave him a rather pissed look and closed the door behind him. “Now tell me... is that the second pawn in your grab for power who you’ve thrown away?”


“What happened to Lightning is Lightning’s own fault.” Max said in an agitated, hushed tone. “He offered his services as a thief by trade. He didn’t even allow himself ta’ take my money for the deed. I assure you I am doing everything I can to help him, he is a pawn that still has much tactical worth to me, even this late in the game.”

“... Whatever bird. I feel sorry that he’s being put up for the murder you committed for your own gain, but that’s not the issue at hand.” Red moved closer to Max being rather intimidating. “I’m not some pawn you can throw away. I know you’ve killed someone just for your selfish needs for revenge, and I fully expect you to do something equally horrible to anyone who get’s in your way, or becomes a liability and I just want you to know, that if you ever try to give me the short end of the stick, I’ll put my stick right through your spine.”


Max gives a long, low chuckle. “He he he, Well say good bye to your estate then. If you even get out of this alive after sticking that blade in me. Tell me, How long do you expect to survive under Flamberge’s wing, hmm? How many more assaults do you think your and your dog will weather?”

“I expect to leave this ship long before it sinks. And, I’m simply saying if you dare try to put a dagger in my back, I’ll put a spear in yours...” the pony backed off a little. “As for being under his wing... I’ll walk out of this all alive no matter what abomination I must fight.”
 
Max closed his eyes solemnly. “Brave words from a foolhardy Pegasus. Listen. I was not so different, I thought I was invincible once, too.” Max gained a smile.

“You see... I’ve already lost everything...” She frowned as at his creepy little grin. “But I like to think over the years, and all the discordants I’ve put down and all the experience I gained I’ve grown more adept at survival.”

“You can never survive without the proper tools.” Max takes out two bright, smooth stones from his pant pocket. “Here, I want you to take these.”

She looked down at them, but didn’t take them. “Max, I need to know something before take a favor from you...”

“I’ll try to answer best I can at this juncture.” Max responded.

“Okay then... do you plan to throw me into the fire the moment you think I’m a liability?”

“Rather ... direct. Of course I would.” Max told him simply. “ I have A diamond dog on call, who can deal with this Flamberge business for a lot cheaper than a hundred grand. That’s plan ‘B’.” Max continued casually walking. “I have thought of all angles to this, even the unlikely ones. Do you blame me?” Max asks. “I genuinely hope I don’t have to enact these ‘what if’ scenarios though.”

“... I’m not surprised... I honestly expected this much out of you... but again, I will put you down if you ever try to double cross me.”

Max gives an aggravated sigh.” I honestly can't understand how you suppose to to gain so much in so little time without a little risk. Come now. You’re intelligent. You know how this game is played.”

“If you make a deal with the devil, you should at least have a plan to fall back on if things go sour.”

Max looks her in the eye. “Glad we’re in agreement. Now, about the rocks?”

“what are they for?”

“You’ll see, in time. Just keep them on you and your friend at all times.”

“If I may ask, what do they do?”

“They’ll keep my investment safe.”

“... fine...” Red took the rocks, even though she had the slightest idea what they did.

“So, did you want me to take care of something else for you, or was this purely a temporary loss of nerves and your dog?”

“Well, so long as you know how to take care of bonnet and where to get her some meat, I’m quite finished here.”

Max looks at the aging dog. “ I did always have a soft spot for this dog. Does he need any medicines?”

“I usually try to talk to case about getting some pain medicine if we aren’t low on supplies... and remember she can hardly walk.”

Max looks back to the dog with a dry expression. “Riiight.”

“... I would never take a narcotic without a medical professional's consent. Ever sense that ogre mangled her, she’s had back problems, okay?”

Max whistles to Bonnet. “C’mere boy, you’re going to live with ol’ Max for awhile.”

“It’s a she.”

Max looked at Redhat incredulously. “As if the wolf knows the difference.”

“You do though, so treat Bonnet with dignity.”

Max laughs. “All right miss Bonnet, you’re staying with me for awhile.”

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DF Suggestions / Re: Adventurer Written Books
« on: May 24, 2013, 06:06:27 am »
Found this in the DF: Adventurer World thread:

Just finished reading all this:

I like the idea of secret game logs.
- If an adventurer dies they don't post their journal until someone finds their body.
- Crimson knight is awesome.
- If a fortress falls (all dead, not abandoned) then history only posted if adventurer finds it and gets to another town.

Is there anything in fortress mode that we could designate as "the official book of history"?
It would have to be semi-easy to recognize.
A cloth image comes to mind, not sure how often people make those to sell to caravan though.

Finally, lots of mini-forts with a bridge/tunnel for crossing the larger rivers would come in handy.

Just another reason to slip this one in before the release ...

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DF Suggestions / Re: Storytelling mode
« on: May 24, 2013, 05:50:35 am »
*Quirks brow*

Dwarf Fortress can already do what you're already asking - I should know, I got lazy one night DM'ing and outsourced all that pesky 'Worldbuilding' to DF. It made a great starting point, and generic enough it was easy to fill the fantasy holes.

I think what you are really asking for is a sandbox mode - Arena mode, but on a world scale and unisolated. This may very well happen as a by-product from Toady de-bugging adventure mode. Maybe. It'll never be an intentional bullet point on the dev log, but if the developer also needs to know what would happen if a troll attacks a hamlet, or what would happen if variable X or Y were raised or lowered he would make the tools. Whether you should get even get them is another question.

To quote Yatzee from Zero Punctuation;

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But then again, part of the appeal of building is the effort required to gather materials. That eighty-foot golden c##k and balls wouldn't be so satisfyingly turgid if it weren't for the entire continent you had to turn upside-down to find all the ore. And that's what sets it apart from other creativity toys like Garry's Mod. If you can just clap your hands and summon fifty explosive barrels to pile ragdolls around, then the spectacle is as fulfilling as eating your own snot.

Dwarf Fortress is a responsible parent. It knows you'll swiftly get bored of your golden c##k and balls if it just gives you one, so it pays you five dollars a week to wash its car so you can save up and gain an appreciation for value. And when you finally have your golden c##k and balls, you'll love it all the more. Until Dwarf Fortress sends the goblins to demolish it, because you also need to learn that sometimes life will just s##t on you. As it will when your boss finds out what you spent your entire workday on.

You See, If you invent a 'gimmie everything' mode, what's the incentive to play on anything else?

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: May 20, 2013, 01:55:30 am »


Max walks into the makeshift prison, only to be stopped by one of the guards, Swift Quiver. “Sorry Max, no civilian allowed down here. Convalescence’s orders.” The pony told him. Max sneered at the inconvenience.  “Swift, I‘m not a mere civilian, I’m here to be Lighting’s attorney. As every accused pony is allowed to receive by law.”

“You’re a defense attorney? “ Swift balked.

“Closest one this town’s got.” Max retorted. 

Quiver shifts around, uneasy. “I - I guess that’s an acceptable reason ... Alright make it quick.”

“I’m going to need you to leave the room, too. For confidentiality reasons.”

Quiver cocked his head, his gullibility stretched to near breaking point. “I’m not leaving more than twenty feet. Sorry.” He retorted.

“That’s good enough.” Max eased back. He had a feeling he could haggle no more than that out of him, and left it at that. He walked  to Lightning's cell. “Hey Lightning.” Max grumbled. "How’s your week been?”

Lightning opened his eyes to see Max standing by the bars of his cell “What? Oh Amug... Max what do you need?”

“Okay, first off, how did you get in this jail, and second, what story did you tell them?” Max asked. “It’s not what I want, Light, it’s about how I can help you, now.”

“Well if you want that let me go over the whole ordeal!” Lightning said, rolling his eyes “Some griffon got killed with those bolts I stole, they suspect me. I told them that and when they asked me who I gave them to, I just said it was somepony out of town. Now, let me ask you,” he took a breath “,Why do you think you can help me? I’ve been convicted of murder, no matter how hard I try afterwards, this is what I’ll be remembered for.”

Max exhaled with a contrite but impatient tone. “I never intended you to get caught. I thought you were a professional and had your end handled, and for that i’m sorry. You're probably running light on reasons to not turn me in, probably with justification. Let me give you some. I intend to be the leader Duskfields needs. Mayors and Barons can pardon convicted murderers. With some time I can and will pardon you of this. It’s the least I owe you.” His sympathetic tone hardened up.

“As to why there’s a dead griffon with a bolt in his throat in the hospital? For that, we’re gonna  need a primer on Revolutions.”Max gestures as if he was lecturing. “There has been no revolution in history that’s been waged peacefully. Find me one, if you can. Make no mistake, I am at war with Flamberge, and this war will not go on without it’s fair share of martyrs. With the whole animosity toward the dragon skull on the gate, I knew the was a powder keg forming, and my window of opportunity was coming. I just ... Lit it.”

“First off, most of my thievery was done in my foalhood, I bestowed myself with professional for... ego reasons. Second, they knew I stole the bolts apparently, Temperance confronted me just as I left the hospital room. Third, you plan on being Mayor? That is interesting. I imagined you just being content to disemboweling your enemies and running.... also thanks, if succeeds and I’m not killed instead of..” He took an angrier tone “, Wait, you killed that griffon? I'm in jail due to your doings! You're lucky I'm not calling the guard to turn you in”

Max raises his arms in a ‘come at me’ gesture. “Go ahead. Do it, foal. Desperate pleas of a convict in denial. I have just as small a reason to end that griffon spy ” Max puts a heavy emphasis on the spy part. “ -As you did. If not less. Crosshair is content on letting you take the fall; It means less work for her. You may be in prison because of my doings, but trust me when I say, I'm the only friend you have invested in getting you out.”

“Fine, but the minute you do not achieve your promises. I will be the bringer of your imprisonment the next time they decide to speak to me” Lightning said seeing no point in angering him any further.

“Duly noted.” Max acknowledged. “Well, I got in here on the promise I’d give you legal advice, so I’ll bestow some. I do keep my promises. This somepony you alluded to, twist it into ‘some creature’. Diamond Dog would be a good one. The ponies love to hate Diamond dogs. It simply fits the narrative.”

“What narra- Nevermind, sure, couldn’t hurt. Now I couldn’t help but overhear you said something about being my attorney? Is that going to be kept as well?”

“Sure. I can’t think of anypony else who’s qualified to do it or read through nine volumes of Equestrian Law recently. And, I’d like to keep up on your case without arousing suspicion.” Max continued to say in a hushed tone, knowing Quiver was still around.

Lightning nodded “Alright then.”

A gray pegasus trotted hastily within a few feet of the griffon. Clearing her throat, she questioned the hybrid, “Excuse me, but how did you get back here? We’re under orders not to allow any visitors. I’m afraid I’m going to have to ask you to leave, Max.”

Max waved her away dismissively. “I’ll be gone soon ... Yari, right? I’m his Legal guidance at this time and -”

The mare cut him off mid-sentence, “I’m sorry, but I have strict rules to go by. If you need permission to speak with Lightning, then you should seek to acquire some from Temperance. Until you can provide such proof, you’re going to need to go.” Yari remained unemotional but firm in her stance as she pointed towards the exit.

Max growled with contempt. He put up his claws defensively. “Fine, have it your way. I’m going.” He turned to Lightning. “Stay strong, Lightning. Remember always, you are innocent. Don't ever forget that no matter what they tell you.” Max backed up and headed towards the prison exit.

Quiver walked up to Yari. “He - he wasn't supposed to be in here?” He asked.

She twisted her mouth in disappointment, “You do remember what we were told, don’t you? Nopony may come down here unless they have proof of authorization. Please try to be a little more discerning next time.”

His eyes shifted around, conflicted. “Sorry, Yari. It’s just - between Crosshair’s bolts at the crime scene, picking up this random pony ... interrogating him day in and out,  I don't know who to really let in anymore. “

The red-eyed female sighed, “Well from now on, unless it’s Temperance or another one of the guards, you should ask to see some documentation before allowing them to pass. Try not to forget that. We don't need any kind of compromising situations when murder is on the table.”

“If you ask me, this murder is getting more and more shady every day.” Quiver said with a bit of cynicism. “But I’ll be tighter on the security next time, I promise.”

“It may be, but I'm trying to reserve my judgements until all of the evidence is in...and yes, you do that...”

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DF Suggestions / Re: Adventurer Written Books
« on: May 12, 2013, 04:43:46 am »
This is my major problem. For player-created journals to exist, we should have NPCs' journals. Which means the AI will need to be taught how to write. Which means the AI will need to be taught about literature above a kindergarten level. Which means that there will probably be a lengthy Literature Arc before this gets added. And since the sum total of this is a pretty low reward, it's probably not going to happen for a while.
Sorry.

Man, does everything in DF's development have to be done in reverse? :P

Yeah, you could have a lengthy literature arc and painfully teach the NPCs to read and write first, I guess. Or, just hack together a simple Input/Output String storage interface and leave all that for another day.

Because DF totally doesn't have any outstanding unfinished features or anything .... [Cough] The Economy [/Cough]

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: May 12, 2013, 01:39:52 am »



FLASHBACK


It is a cool mid-afternoon when Max walks in to the bar. He strode in and gestures for his usual, a hard lemonade with ice. As he put his bits down on the table. He glances to his left, saw Red also at the bar.

Redhat had what seemed to be a bottle of fine wine, and had his dog sitting next to him, between him in the gryphon. He had been there for a while, just trying to relax after a long day.

Max was tired. Max was sore. Max frankly wanted to drink in peace.  But Max also always made a point to strike up a conversation. Especially with the exact pony he wanted to talk to. Max glances over his shoulder again and moves two booths over to Red and his dog. "Hey Redhat, how's life?" He opened up the conversation. "Not in the hospital, so I assume better than usual?"

“Well, I suppose I could be worse.” The dog limped over and gave max a loving little lick on his paws. “Ugh... why does my wolf always have to be so adorable...”

Max grins and scritches the wolf behind the ears. Bonnet closes her eyes in content bliss as the claws massage down on the hard to reach spots. "What a fun breed. You're very lucky, wolves don't pick just anybody."

“Well, I’d hope the poor thing would pick me after all i’ve done for her.” She gave bonnet a little pet on the ear.

"Guard duty still treating you fine? With the attacks increasing more an' more  ... Well lets say I hope the heat ain't getting too much to handle out there."

“If it get’s too much I’ll just get better. I can dispatch an entire squad of those brigands and intend on doing so again and again.”

Max sighed. "Sure glad I'm not out there. I - I still get a relapse from time to time from when that Discordant gutted me."

“Oh yeah... I had to make you go nini after that, right?”

Max squints at Red, trying to remember. "Were you in the hospital during that?"

“Yes, I was actually the one who put you under, you probably would have killed yourself if I hadn’t.”

He blinks with a surprised look. "I'll have to take your word for it, I can't remember the aftermath at all. It's funny to think the doc who worked on me is mayor now."

“Well, I suppose... you don’t mind if we change the top from hospital debauchery to something more appropriate ?”

Max looks up in the air. "Sure, though I can't really think of anything else off the top of my head."

“Well... I guess could talk about my most recent promotion.”

"Sure, in all ears. Tell me a bit about the military life."

“Well, Being captain isn’t all it’s cracked up to be.”

"Let me guess, Flamberge isn't easy to take orders from." Max probed, looking for ill will for his enemy like checking for uncooked raw pink in a unfinished steak.

“Aside from disregarding anything I say, I can hardly withhold my criticism from him. I say I one thing against his word, one comment it’s like shooting yourself in the foot. I’m a better warrior than some moraless shell of a stallion. The bastard lacks any kind of professionalism in the battlefield. He decapitates left in right, no finesse. When he slays, he doesn’t feel remorse, or pity. I can hardly listen to him for more than five minutes knowing he’s inferior.” The pony looks down at his crippled dog. “HE is among the reasons why this world is in a state of dec-. Excuse me, I got a bit carried away there. Just, I’m more skilled than him in every way when it comes to his role. If he hadn’t killed a dragon, I’d be giving him respite from his job.” He sipped some of his wine, “I suppose this seems prideful, but it’s not pride if it’s painfully obvious.”

Max grins wryly. Looks like we have a winner.

"It's true. He's truly a brute of the worst sort, isn't he? Wouldn't even give me a day  to grieve before barging into my hospital room and insulating me of high treason." He gave bitter laugh and looked at his drink. "It's not so much him I pity, but poor, poor Crosshair. Trapped in the middle of all this. Does she love him? Most definitely. But not vise versa. Not at all. Just another stepping stone, like every pony else here."

“It’s funny... she shows up with bruises, and he assumes we can’t tell. I know for sure that bastard is as harsh he is to those he smites as he is to those he loves... that is if demons can feel love...”

Max frowns and his eyes turn to slits. "They don't."

“I don’t think he’s a demon yet. I prefer to believe that in the beginning all of us try to do what we think is good... I know it isn’t true, but it’s my rule of thumb.”

"Hell is painted with good intentions..." Max quotes stoically. He couldn't remember from where or what though. " I agree. To a point. But then there has to be cause and effect. A reaction to an' action. A balance of the moral scales. Some justice. Take the crime Flamberge committed  just today for example ..." Max tailed off, hoping to reel Red's attention in.

“Please, listen to me. We all try for the best, but this world is corrosive, and it’s eats away at us all. Listen, a demon is nothing more than a shell of who they were. Something that’s a husk. It’s not a matter of if but when. We all are heading that way, there is no paragon of morals, everyone is willing to compromise and trade, until you’ve compromised who you are.” He looked at him. “Are you telling me that tragedy didn’t change you for the worse?”

"My tragedy is none of your damn concern." Max glared, the insinuation he could somehow dip to Flamberge's level put a sour taste in his mouth.
 
“So I’ll take that as a yes. please, understand you’re nowhere near as far gone as he is. He’s fargone, a zombie almost. I do believe ponies can be saved, either by care, or a spear... I prefer to believe in the beginning we’re all equal, and sometimes the only way to fix a ruined building is demolition before it collapses and hurts somepony.”

Max sighs. "Yes, perhaps. I'll admit, I ain't one for philosophy. I believe we can combat how far gone we are with a 'lil honesty. I'll start right now. I didn't start this conversation for a little idle conversation: I came to ask a favor."

“And what would you ask of me?”

Max smiles and continues into his sell. " Crosshair's been wandering all 'round town for a week looking for her bolts. I found them ... but in the oddest place; found them in Flamberge's office. Seems odd someone's lover would neglect to tell the other he'd borrow them for so long. Could you run them to Convalescence and not mention me? The relationship between Flamberge and I is rocky already, I don't need to be put on his kill list again. Maybe Crosshair can finally stop screeching around the fort when she gets her precious bolts back."

“... it’s rather peculiar to be asking me to deliver something like that in this of all places, and why would you have me do him a favor?”

Max's hard frown returns. " It doesn't matter, and I can make it worth your while if doing Flamberge a favor rubs your feathers the wrong way."

“I don’t believe your acting normal... but I won't protest further....” The pony didn’t know why the talking bird would suddenly get more cheery.. and ask him to help flamb in anyway... but he found it best to just let it slide for now.

"Thanks, and who knows, the small things may lead to big rewards."

Max looks at Red with a drunken, knowing smirk.





Two days after the events at the hospital



Two days later, at the same time in the bar, in he same seat of the bar, Max sat with another Hard Lemonade. The only difference was a very darkened set of sleepless eyes. He rotated the little umbrella in the drink around, waiting.

Soon, the door to the bar was open, and Red came in. He sat right next to the bird and waited to see how he’d react.

"So, can you believe what Flamberge has done?" Max asked, seeing if his lie was still holding up to scrutiny.

“Why did you set me up?” Red wasn’t going to have any of it.

"Why did I set 'us' up, Redhat. Why did I set 'us' up is the question you should be asking." Max said with a cool, unconcerned tone.

“Tell me right now why you did this, else I’ll kill you right now for treason.”

"I did it, because Flamberge needed a relief from duty. I know it, and deep down you know it too." He slowly glanced up with his blue eye. "You told me yourself, Red."

“I don’t frame somepony for murder. I have morals. It’s what keeps me from falling apart.” He gave the bird an angry look. “Now, please, why the hell was one of the gryphon’s dead?”

Max cocked his head and leaned back. "You don't understand what really at stake, do you? This is bigger than us and a dead Griffon now. I am wrestling this town out of Flamberge's destructive grip. And at this point, no option is off my table."

“Please tell me why the buck you’d have ME have him framed? and please, why is there a murdered gryphon, and why are you, trying to pin the heinous crime on him as opposed to another approach?” 

"Max blinks. "What other approach?" He said with a grimace."I have thought long and hard on any other approach There ain't no other approach." He looked him over. "And why you? You gave the most to gain out of all this. That's why you had him the buck framed. I need a pony who will be different than Flamberge in every way. I need a Militia Commander I can trust."


“Okay...” Red gave him an angry look. “I’ll consider not turning you in... but please... tell my why you killed the gryphon?” he was guessing now, but he was sure max had something to do with it.

"The Griffon was spying on us, as I was sure he was. A part of Flamberge's deal of selling Duskfields down river I'm sure. He was a dirty spy for the Griffon army, Redhat. I did nothing more than what you would have done - and twisted a death to my gain." Max winces at the words, but a certain tone of assuredness can be heard from them.

“I would never twist another’s death..” He paused for a moment though. “but what’s this about selling the fort?”

"Oh, you don't know?" Max asked. "Flamberge, he has his eye on the barony. He has no interest in us. A storm is coming and he intends to be long gone when it hits. Selling off the crops we promised to Coupeldeye? That's just the start. Soon, this whole place will be sold off to the devil if Flambege has his way."

“You do realize the gryphon I talked to at the depot was that this base is essentially here to drag out a force of discordants so our combined forces could crush one of their armies. He isn't going to sell this place... but what I don't get is why the hell we're not getting the forces needed to keep up our end of the bargain with the the gryphons.”

Max closes his eyes. "He simply doesn't care, Redhat. He is going to leave with Crosshair and leave us to die." He gestures around him. "This whole place? A trap, and we're the bait."

“... I figured as much...” he sighed heavily. He had a feeling that was the case, but didn’t want to admit it... “Okay... I won't turn you in..”

Max frowned. "Redhat, I just made you king of this place, and you don't even know it. With Flamberge gone, with Crosshair gone, no one can stop you from leaping up the ranks and and building a proper military; and you were going to turn me in?" He made a plaintive gesture. " 'Thanks' come in all shapes and sizes I suppose." He takes a gulp of his hard lemonade, and looks down at the glass. "You know... Last time... We had a talk about Demons ... not a matter of if but when ..."

“Stop right there. I'll have you know, ranks and titles mean nothing to me. There is really one thing I want.” He looked over to max, this time though he wasn't angry, he even seemed happy by now.

Max snaps his eyes to him. "Say the word and you will have it." Max gruffed.

“I want my freedom and I  want my birthright.”

Max cocked a brow. "That's a bit .... Cryptic. But I'll try as best as I'm able to accommodate. What, specifically, is your birthright? How are you enslaved?"

“My father has essentially left me with slightly less than two hundred thousand bits worth of debt, If I can’t pay in cash, I’m going to pay in blood, and I can’t reclaim my family county, which my birthwright,  until I’ve repaid that debt.”

Max steeples his fingers together. "T-two hundred thousand bits?" He exclaimed, his cool and confident air broken. "What, was he burning the money? How do you rack up -"  He gasped with astonishment.  Calming his shaky hands, he tried to negotiate. "Even if I put my cave and everything inside on the bargain table, it would only amount 'ta half of that." Max thinks hard. "I could set up pension for you that could add to a hundred thousand bits in a few short years, if ya' like. But, Amug doesn't even have that kind of coin."

“Well... the town has a some wealth... and those artifacts could sell for a pretty penny.” He leaned back in his chair. “I  see no reason why a few useless crafts couldn’t go for sale, I donteven think the last few “Legendary” items have even been used.”

Max’s cracks his neck, as if very uncomfortable. “ I could send a few artifacts to the Market... the original owners will not be happy about it  ... But that’s a possibility.”

“Are you sure? dont most of the Artifacts just rot in the stock piles?”

Max closes his eyes and rests his forehead on his steepled thumbs. “Yes, and that’s where the craftsponies put them, that’s where they expect them to be. I’ll try. I’ll try whatever it takes. l am going to set this place right, I’m going to turn this place around into a proper farming community and if  raising two hundred thousand bits is what it’s going to take? That’s just what it’s going to to happen.”

“Also, The debt is growing on compound interest.” The pony sipped some more wine. “Yeeeeaahhhh... It’s bollocks right?”

Max pinches the crux of his beak with his thumbs. “Alright, i’ll help you if you help me. That’ll be the deal.” He extends his claw out. “Do we have a deal, Commander?” He asked.

 “Fine, but I hope you know, I only plan on backing this place until I’m no longer needed and can return to my dutchy.”

Max retracts his hand. “I’m not raising that much coin on a limited investment. Five years minimum, then you can leave for your Dutchy. Or, I could leave you to the wolves and you’ll never get out of debt. Your choice.”

“Fine, but I best be living like a king while I stay here.” He smiled and took another sip of wine. The deal was only getting better.

“Alright.” Max extended his hand again.

He smiled and extended his hoof to Max. “It seems to be a fine deal.” and then he shook it. “So, What’s your plans?” 

Max sighs. “Now? Now I’m going to make a speech. Denounce Flamberge. Make sure nothing like what he did to Carn never happens again.”
 
“Would you at least keep him in the army? If this place is really a bear trap set for the discordants, then we’ll still need his lowly arse.”

“Leave Flamberge to me.” Max said simply while shaking on the deal.

“And when he’s out, how will keep this place prepped”{?”

You will keep this place prepped!” Max said. “That’s what I’m paying two hundred thousand bloody bits for. What, did you think all that money came with no responsibility?”

“Very well then... but i’ll expect you to back me up on this...”

“Everything in my soon to be power.” Max confirmed for him.

“Very well then...” The pony rose his glass. “Cheers!”

Max grinned. “To a’ better future.” The two clinked glasses.

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: May 02, 2013, 09:28:17 pm »

    Max mentally ticked of the passing seconds in his head as he strode towards the hospital wing. He had a small window, a blind spot for but the briefest moment as the guard changed rotation. As he opened the door to the building, he took a look back, for but a moment. Then he steeled himself and walked in.  He stalked past Convalescence and Case Study's offices with not even the smallest whisper of a sound. turning the corner into the patient room hallway he shadowed the wall until he came to the right numbered door.  It was the door to the hospital room where the griffon from the caravan had been put to rest. He slowly turned the knob and to his severe displeasure it made a rouge rusty, loud creak.

Max's feathers stood on end as he looked around. Would anyone else have had heard that? With a  couple tense seconds, he felt comfortable enough to continue.
The griffon inside the room looked up from his bed. His eyes were green and his feathers were a lighter tone of beige than Max's. The tips of his feathers were red as well. To Max's astonishment, he knows exactly who this griffon is.

"Sergi?" Max called out with a mundane surprise.

"Maximilian!" Sergi said with a gregarious grin. "Or are you still going by your pony given name, Maxwell?"

"Heh, good to see you Sergi. Still just plain 'ol Max." Duskfield's griffon said in a friendly but guarded tone.

The caravan griffon lets out a belly laugh. "Figures the pony lover would be around. Amug's sake, Am I glad to see you!"

Max winces. Ten seconds in the conversation and yes, there it was already. There's the reason why he never sticks around other griffons very long. Griffons, they can't wrap their head around the fact of his adoptive pony parents. It bothers them, and like a sore at the back of the mouth, they kept antagonizing it, causing the issue to flare up something fierce almost unconsciously. "I'm surprised to see you here, Sergi. Never pinned you for the soldier type."

"Yeah, well. Probably because I never thought I’d be a soldier.” He laughed. “Oh, but you know how it is ‘round the Griffon lands.” 

Max laughs. "Yes, do I know how that system works. Never about where you want to be ..."

“... Always where you need to be!” Sergi finished. “Yes, that is de motto.”

“Quite the system setup.” Max added.

“Yes, It’s going to lead  to a true utopia one day.” Sergi chimed with a prideful boast.

“Everyone gets their fair and due share. The banks are all centralized, the means of production are all controlled. Citizens are placed to their ability, the world is perfect, and shared equally.”

“An’ everything is free to boot!” Sergi grinned.
  Max cocked a worried brow at him. “Free? Not free by a longshot. It's all free at the cost of freedom, Sergi.  The police patrol the skies relentlessly, the point to keep you grounded."

"Yes, so better to make sure no one griffon takes advantage to rise above the other. So we all slowly rise  into prosperity together! As equals."

"So tell me, friend, where does the individual competitive spirit come in to your perfect system? When does that -” Max makes a jab in the air and makes a *umf*, putting some feeling into it. “- strive for achievement kick in? To outdo the other guy? The very thing that creates the greatest strides of productivity in common life? The most creative pieces of art? The most steeled an' hardened public figures?  It’s suppressed. No reason to strive. Who would want to live like that?”

“All coming from the Griffon who felt he was above chipping in ...” Sergi lashed bitterly.

“Was never allowed in, actually. ‘Cause of my adoptive parents I was never able to become a citizen.” Max corrected for him. 

 “Then you have no idea what you are talking about. It’s funny how you speak as if your system is perfect.” Sergi scoffed.

“No, by gods it’s not.” Max shook his head. “But it doesn't have to be. Just less backwards than yours.”

“Fine. We’ll agree to disagree then.” Sergi dropped the subject. “Why are you here?”

“Me? I’m here to make you feel more at home while you’re on the mend.” Max said with a dishonest smirk.

“Well, you’re doing a poor job.” Sergi retorted. “How does starting a argument over politics exactly make me at home?”

He shrugs. “Because that’s all we ever did back on the road.”

Sergi crossed his arms.  “Well, we’re not on the road right now.  Can we talk about something else?”
Max cocks his head with a slight frown. “Sure. Let’s talk about why you’re here, Sergi.”

“What’s to say?  I was part of the merchant caravan’s escort.  That and I was foolish enough to get into a fight with discordant ponies without Captain Pankov and the others with me.”
Max shakes his head. “No, Sergi. I want to know why you’re really here.”

Sergi raises both claws.  “I’ve told you all I know.  If you want to know why we are here, you’ll have to talk to the captain.  I don’t get told anything but where to march and how fast.”

“Well I can’t ask the captain, now can I?” max asked in an agitated tone. “They left. Even though the Griffons never leave their own behind.”

Sergi looks alarmed.  “Wait, they left?  But-but I can’t make it back to Canyontalon on my own!  Why would they leave?”  He shakes his head frantically.  “This must be a mistake.”

Max looks to the left dismissively. “Said something about collecting you next year. Griffons just don’t do that. And merchants just don’t come to trade armed head to paw in plate armor. You can fool the ponies but you can’t fool me, Sergi. What are you playing at?”

“I’m not playing at anything!” Sergi pleads.  “Look... okay, look, this can’t leave this room, alright?  I didn’t actually talk with the major, but word spread down the ranks.  Rumors always do.  As far as anyone can figure, we’re working with the pony army for something.  Supposed to provide this place with some weapons, and they give us food since we can’t grow much in Canyontalon.”

Max’s eyes light up with an intense sheen. “And I assume Flamberge is heading this deal with the Griffons at Canyontalon? Any other key players?”

“I don’t know.”  He clasps a claw across his face.  “It’s probably a good thing the captain left me... if he found out I told you that he’d wring my neck.  Look, I don’t know, okay?  I don’t know who Flamberge is, or what Major Rykov is doing, or anything.  Like I told you originally, I was just sent as part of the detachment to guard the caravan out here.”

“Uh huh. You want to know what I think?” Max walks over to the Griffon’s bed table and opens the drawer. “I think Canyontalon has an ulterior motive. I think the trade caravans were really a scouting party posing as a trade caravan.”

“What’re you talking about?  We’ve been at peace with the ponies for generations.  Why would we be

‘scouting’ out this little farm out in the middle of nowhere?”
The griffon starts shuffling aggressively through Sergi’s belongings in the nightstand.

“Hey, what’re you doing now?”  Sergi tries to sit up and stop Max, but catches halfway.  “You know what?  Fine, look at whatever you want.  It’s just what little I brought with me other than my gear.”

Max pauses his investigation, and grins. He raises up a letter, clutched between his fingers. It had big red letters that read ‘For your eyes only!’ “Like I said, you can fool the ponies ...” He opened the letter and read aloud. “Duskfields: Military armament. Twenty to thirty odd soldiers. A mix of crossbows, a mix of close combat weapons. Wood palisades. Goes on and on ... Been spying on us, Sergi?”

The wounded griffon grimaces.  “Quit playing.  Is that my letter back to Anfisa?  That is personal.  Give it back.”

 Max quirks a brow, still reading. “Your sweetheart is an army Major, and military stats on opposing armies drive her wild? How bizarre. Or, it could be a report, written by a plant, taking advantage of an accident.”

Sergi’s grimace fades.  “Max... please give it back.”
the griffon’s eyes flick up to Sergi’s. “This is a capital offence ‘round here, you know.”
Sergi nervously props up in bed and inches back.  “Good thing I’m a griffon and not a pony then, right?  Max... just give it back, please?  I’ll destroy it.  Like it never even happened.  Captain Pankov didn’t ask for it.  Major Rykov didn’t ask for it.  I-I just thought maybe it would be something useful to note...”

Max’s face eased with a smile and he shredded the document. “Don’t worry Sergi. This will be a secret. Just between you and me.” He assured him.

Sergi looked slightly relieved.  “Thanks.  I was pretty dumb to do that anyway.  The captain, I bet he’d wring my neck over that too.”

Max let’s out a big, wild chuckle. “All’s forgiven my friend. I mean, it doesn't even fit the narrative! Can’t have that!”

Sergi makes a weak chuckle and raises an eyebrow.  “Ah, right.  Uh, what ‘narrative’?”

Max grabs one of Crosshair’s signature bolts out of the quiver strapped to his back, twirled it around in his claw and punctures Sergi’s throat with a stab. “You have to look faultless when I pin your death on Flamberge.” He said solemnly.

Sergi clutches the bolt sticking from his throat, and gasps.  His eyes snap open as he stumbles out of the bed, choking and making a number of other unpleasant gurgling noises.  He finally looks back up to Max, backing away into a corner and desperately holding a claw to his profusely bleeding throat.
Max steps back a bit as Sergi stumbles around. He leans backwards to the door, and locks it. He casually unslings his crossbow and loads a bolt.  “You see, Sergi? If you want to get something done,  ya’ need to get a little dirty, get a little blood on your hands. You have to commit everything you have!  Even when you know it’s going to lead down a path you never wanted to follow  ...”

 Sergi frantically looks around the room for an exit.  He spots the window on the far side of the room and spreads his wings.  He tries to take off, but in his panic and wounded state, he only manages to accomplish staggering two steps forward before collapsing onto the floor.  His entire body tenses in a cringe as he looks back up to Max with a pleading expression.
He points the crossbow at Sergi’s head, the stirrup pressing down on the top of his beak. “ ... You probably find this twisted and sick. Probably thinking 'How can I?' But Sergi, trust me when I say this is the least disgusting event to happen in the last few months. What's really disgusting? Is how little Duskfields deserves a griffon like me.” Max pulls the trigger with conviction.
There is the snap of the crossbow’s string releasing, and the crunch of the bolt tearing through Sergi’s skull.  The griffon twists aside as the bolt snaps his head back, and he convulses on the ground for a few moments, spraying the floor with even more blood.  He grows still.

Max lowered the crossbow and took a long dragged out breath. He was astonished he did it. He actually did it. He took the first step to avenging Carn. Why did it feel so awful?

  He backed away from the body, suddenly unnerved to the core. He always had a curiosity, as everyone does; a little dark fantasy, put away in the back of the mind where we dare not broach in casual conversation. He always wanted to ask a grizzled soldier how it felt one day. He didn't know it would make a griffon feel so hollow inside. Max knew the gods were in his favor, but would that be enough? Enough to look himself in the mirror when all was said and done here? Max's face hardened into a scowl. "Now's not the time to start moralizing, Max." The griffon said to himself. Not the time. Not while he still had holy work to do. He examined himself. He had a blood stain here and there, nothing a little water can't fix.

Max heard a light tap on the other side of the door. Somepony checking in on their Griffon guest. Max leered at the window and with a headlong start jumped through it with a smash. He took a short dive and went airborne into the sky.

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: DF2013: The Succession World?
« on: April 27, 2013, 10:05:10 pm »

The Twelfth Bay?


I likey The Twelfth Bay alot.

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: April 25, 2013, 01:32:32 am »
and

Temperance nodded at Plastron.  “Alright, thanks.  If you see anything, just let me or Crosshair know.”  He waved the pony off and continued making his way around Duskfields, hoping to let a few more key ponies know about the bolts going missing.

Lightning was finishing up an entry in his journal, he looked up from the book and saw Temperance nearby. He quickly shoved the book back to where he kept it “Hey Temperance! How are ya doing?”

“Hello Lightning,” Temperance replied, making no note of him stowing the book away.  “I’m doing alright.  How about you?  Do you have a minute?”

“Doin’ alright, Mist has-surprisingly-been good-for a foal and all-and yes I do have a moment.” Lightning trotted over to Temperance “What is this about?”

Temperance raised an eyebrow at the way Lightning worded his reply, but shrugged it off mentally.  “Nothing much, it’s, uh, just that we’ve had something go missing around town and I was hoping to get a little help looking for it.”

“What’s gone missing, all I know of that’s been missing is some bolts from Crosshair’s house” Lightning said “I could help search around ya know, I do have some skill with a lockpick. I could snoop around a bit”

Temperance raised both eyebrows.  “Wait, what?  Lockpick, no... why would...”  He shook his head.  “No, no, I don’t want anypony just systematically searching homes or anything.  But, yes, this is about the crossbow bolts.”  He looked behind himself, wondering which pony he’d spoken to that would have had time to run into Lightning already.  “Have you already spoken with Crosshair about it?”

“No, I have heard from... sources, that bolts did go missing and somepony broke into her house. Me? I would never break into someponies house for something that I can get just by asking” Lightning said, not noticing his disposal of self incriminating information

Temperance nodded slowly, keeping one eyebrow raised.  “Uh... right.  That’s, um, good to know.”  He scratched the back of his head.  “So, I guess you know what’s missing then and don’t have any idea where the bolts are?  I’m still hoping they weren’t stolen so much as misplaced.  Haven’t seen them around anywhere?”

“I did hear of some badger pony sneaking in and snatching something, though I wouldn’t say that is the definite answer” Lighting lied “And I’m sure whoever stole them will get found out eventually.”

“A badger pony?  That’s strange, I didn’t hear anything about that,” Temperance said, trying to keep his face neutral.  “And again, I’d love nothing more for the bolts to just be found,” he said, looking at Lightning at a slight angle.  “I’d hate to know we had a thief here.  I don’t know what we’d have to do if that was the case.”

“Th-Thief? I’m no thief okay.” Lightning said nervously at the mention of it “I would never stoop so low as to steal what isn’t mine, Amug commands that I mustn’t take what isn’t mine and I never will.”

“Whoa, whoa, slow down,” Temperance said, raising a hoof.  “I didn’t say you were a thief!  I just want the bolts found, okay?  Crosshair is pretty concerned about it.”  Inside, he frowned.  A lot.  Was he really reading this pony right?

“Sorry, I just get... uncomfortable with that word... I don’t like to talk about it much...” Lightning calmed down. Mentally, he began realizing everything he has said pointed this to him, though he was sure Temperance wouldn’t lock him up without evidence.

“Right, right, sorry to get you so worked up,” Temperance said, taking a probing step backward.  “That’s, um, everything I needed to say.  So, I’ll let you get back to what you’re doing, alright?”

“Sure, and it isn’t your fault really” Lightning turned around and trotted back to the wall he was standing next to. He got back to his shift of guarding the gate... for hours.



and

Maxwell was leaning back in Temperance’s chair, in Temperance’s office. He has reading glasses on and he was glossing over a book from Temperance’s bookshelf, Equestrian Law Vol. IV . The door to Temperance’s office creaks open and he glances up.

Temperance was planning on just throwing himself into his chair the moment he got back to his office, where he could ponder why on earth Lightning Runner would steal the bolts.  He discovers it’s currently full of griffon however.  “Uh, Max?” he asks, not really able to make any other sentence come together.

“Hello, Temperance.” He said, his attention obviously divided. “I hopped in and borrowed a book of yours, hope you don’t mind. Door was unlocked.” He got up, never peeling his eyes away from the book, and sat in another seat in the office.

“Well, no, I don’t mind if you borrow it,” he replied.  He immediately recognized the thick tome.  “Is there something I can help you with about that, exactly?” he added, making for his now vacant chair.

“I’m glossing over a’ few things. The Equestrian Mayor electoral process, mostly.” He said gruffly.

Mayoral elections?  Why would he need to know about that?  “Oh, I see.  Well, there’s a few thousand tiny little details about that, mostly locale specific laws.”  He shrugged.  “Most of that doesn’t apply here, since nopony has really established anything about it here.”

Max’s eyebrows raise up in surprise. “Yeah I’ve noticed. Here, I’m looking mainly for being disbarred to run for being non-equestrian anywhere.”

So, that was it.  “Being a pony isn’t a requirement, really.  It’s more of a problem of being a citizen.”

Max licks his thumb, creases the corner of his current page in a triangle and closes it with a thud. “I’m not going to lie Temperance; I’m scared.” He says casually.

“Scared?”  Temperance stops daydreaming about the unholy amount of crap he was going to have to deal with related to Lightning Runner stealing from Flamberge and Crosshair.  He looks at Max.  “Why?  Did something else happen?”

“No. I’m scared about what’s going to happen. What road Duskfields is going down.” Max said with a small but noticeable twinge of anger. Max wondered how Temperance was going to react during this little conversation. A bit of relief? A little bit of fear? Choices, choices ...

Max wasn’t the only one worried about the road Duskfields was going down, but that wasn’t something Temperance wanted to admit yet.  For a moment, he wonders if Max had seen Maize’s rotting corpse parading around town too, but dismisses that.  “So... you’re hoping to put it back on track then?  As mayor?”  This couldnt possibly end well.

“I’m hoping to at least put a wrench in Flamberge’s fast-track to running this town. I’ll be happy if I can get that much done. But yes.” Max muttered. “See, unlike him? I believe in Duskfields. I believe you’re better than slaughtering the locals and mounting their heads as barbaric decour. By gods, I should not. But I do.”

Temperance looked away.  An awkward silence fell.  “That makes two of us,” he replied finally.

Max nodded to Temperance graciously for understanding. “ I know you do. I know almost everyone here does. Almost.” Max pauses, and leans forward. “Look, I know you never asked for any of this ... It would be unfair for me to ask you to pick a side. But all I can say is, I look at you as a capable pony, and  I’d treat you like any other. Even after what happened. Even after I should have a grudge with you about a mile long. Can the ‘other’ guy say the same?”

Temperance continues to look to the side uncomfortably.  There really was no good answer to that question.  Well, if they weren’t going to elect him as mayor, he could still at least try to support the democratic process.  He sighs.  “If it came between you and Flamberge, over civic matters I’d side with you.”

“Good.” Max smiled. “There’s good money to be made as a campaign adviser, ya’ know. If you’re interested.”

Temperance made a weak chuckle.  “If I was in this for the money, I’d still be an accountant back in Coupledye.”  He finally looked back up to Max.  “If you really want to run for mayor, I think I can help.”  Oh, he could see Flamberge wanting to snap both of their necks already.

“We’re going to have to get Flamberge out of the picture.” Max said, as if reading Temperance’s mind.

“You were honest with me, so I’ll be honest with you,” Temperance replied.  His eyebrows fell into a glower.  “Flamberge is a good soldier and probably the only reason we’re still alive.  But despite that, I’m pretty much terrified of him.  I don’t want him getting any more power than he absolutely needs.”  He shrugged and slumped back into his chair.  “I don’t know.  Maybe if somepony with a spine was mayor it would help.  Not that Convalescence hasn’t done a good job as a whole.”

“I have a plan.” Max said quietly, distantly. “ I have a plan to reduce him into nothing but a hauler, to completely break him. Inverse his life so quick he won’t even have the time to let his jaw drop.” Max continued smugly.

“Part of me tells me I really shouldn’t be hearing this,” Temperance said.  He wanted to slump further back into his chair, but there was nowhere left to go.  “But, you’ve got my attention.”

“And you won’t.” Max said dismissively. “All you need to hear is part one: Trust me. Implicitly. I’m not going to lie, this isn’t going to happen over night an’ this isn’t going to be bloodless. But! This is Duskfield’s freedom we’re talking about. It’s just worth it.”

The worried, uncertain look on Temperance’s face returned.  “Max... Max, you know I can’t just consent to that.  I want Duskfields to thrive and ponies, and everyone, to not have to worry about looking over their shoulders constantly for fear of their lives.  But... to solve it with violence... I can’t do it.”  He raised a hoof to his forehead.  “Look... I’ll pretend I didn’t hear that part.  If you want to run for mayor, I can make that happen.  If you get voted in, I’ll take that as enough faith from the populace that you’re the right one for the job.”

Max closes his eyes and smiles. “That’s all I’m asking, Temperance. All i’m asking is for you to be mute. When Flamberge’s little introverted world comes crashing down ... I need you ta’ stand strong and silent when he looks to you for rescue. I’m not asking anything but that.”

Temperance wonders briefly if he was conspiring to murder Flamberge.  If he was seriously doing that.  No, he wasn’t.  He didn’t like the stallion for a dozen reasons, but he wasn’t going to just stand there and let him die, or try to actively kill him.  If Max kept it to something less than that, maybe.  “I... I can’t make any promises, Max.  You’ve got my support for the mayoral election.  But what you do after that... I...  I won’t interfere, unless I must.”  That was all Max was getting out of him.

Max tries put his fears to rest with a laugh. “What? What do you think I’m advocating murder here? I assure you, no equestrian citizen is going to be harmed because I want to run for Mayor. I’m just preparing for tha’ dirty politics. Flamberge is going to fling every punch he has to stop me. I need to hit harder in the end is all.”

Temperance pauses at the emphasis on ‘equestrian citizen.’  “Alright.  As I said, you’ve got my support.  I don’t know how you’re going to convince him to run against you though.”

“All part of the plan.” Max assured him.  “Right, before we talk about running, let’s talk about walking. Am I or am I not a documented citizen of Duskfields?” Max asked.

“Formally?”  Temperance shook his head.  “No.  I was going to offer it to you since you’ve been such a huge help here, but when you said you were planning on, uh, leaving, I never brought it up.  If you’re planning on staying though, well, I can still do it.”

“Right, what do I have to sign?” Max slides Temperance’s ink jar towards his side of the table and plucked a feather out of his forearm. He dabbed the makeshift quill in black slick ink.

Temperance fished through a chest next to his desk for a few moments.  “A couple of things, actually...”

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: April 22, 2013, 01:37:16 am »


It is midday in Duskfields, the sun sets with a brilliant auburn glow on the crossbow training range. There, Max was training with his crossbow. Like most days recently.

Max takes aim, and fires a bolt. He scores a hit in the red second ring on the hay bale target. He looks to his right. Looks like Crosshair and Lightning were coming to get some practice in as well. He made space and lined up another shot. “Good evnen’ ” Max said to them both quietly.

“Evening” Lightning replied, trotting over to where he kept his crossbow ~I still wonder why I never take this home~ He thought, picking it up in his mouth, then trotting over to his target.

Crosshair seems to be in her usual good mood today, humming something under her breath like a pony should “Morning Max!” She chirped as she trots over to her own target. “Need any help with training?” she offered.

Max gave her a weary smile. “Actually, I could, thanks for offering. I don’t use weapons much.” Max gave Lightning a glance. One that said ‘Do it just like we practiced.’ 

Lightning nodded “Soo Max, you need help with anything in particular?” He trotted over to his side, the one closer to Crosshair’s house, something hidden under his wing

“Yeah, the knock back on this crossbow is a real son of a bitch.”Max says, rotating his left shoulder. “I might be doing something wrong.” He gestures Crosshair to come closer with his wing. “How about you fire some? Show me the best way to do it.”

“Sure thing!” Said Crosshair as she trots over with her crossbow. Putting the edge into the dirt and hold it down with a hoof as she draw the strings back with her mouth, locking it in place and putting a bolt in there before lifting it up again. “That’s one of the ways to reload quickly, as for firing..” The small mare stands up on her hindlegs as she bring the crossbow up and aim down the sights, using her wings to level herself. Pressing the Crossbow’s stock against her shoulder, then flick her hoof at the trigger. Sending the bolt straight into the center of the target. “You’ve got to keep the pressure at the hoofguard up, so that the recoil that tries to push it down won’t mess up your aiming!” Chirped the little pony.

Max admired the whole process. “You know I never did understand why you adopted the crossbow of all things. It’s much more suited for the Griffons and Diamond Dogs and the more -” He puts up his left claw and wiggles the digits. “Dexterous creatures of the world.”

Crosshair giggled at that, smiling as she reloads her crossbow again in just the matter of seconds. “Well, the alternatives are Bows, which are even more unwieldy, lower accuracy and stopping power, then there’s blow guns which are absolutely useless to armor, then javelins. Which cost too much and doesn’t have enough for a prolonged fight. Besides, anyone could just pick it up and throw it back at you.” Answered the Captain of the guard “But Crossbow? It’s not exactly the most comfortable of things, but it’s simple to use with a little training. And it’s got enough stopping power to punch through metal even with wooden bolts! Easier to use than bows, MUCH more stopping powers than blowguns and you can shoot really far with one if you practice enough like me.”

“I agree, even with my wings to hold lets say a bow, I can’t see myself holding a bow” Lightning said, slowly trotting towards the area where Crosshair keeps the bolts that were initially brought on the journey... supposedly... ~Crosshair probably booby trapped the area, so I’ll have to proceed slowly once in~

“So, like this?” Max said while purposefully getting his crossbow firing posture all wrong.

Crosshair face-hoofed herself. Which is just as painful as it sounds. Before getting over to him to help adjust his posture slightly. “Your legs are too close, need to spread them a little more to brace yourself, your elbows are too slack, and you’re not even looking down at the sights!”

“Ah, thanks.” Max straightens up, suddenly showing a very practiced pose. He takes careful aim and almost lands a bullseye. “What do you know.” Max laughed. “Looks like i’m a natural.”

Lightning takes the thing he was hiding under his wing out, a small lock pick set rolled up in a cloth bag. ~Been awhile since I’ve done this, but I should be able to~ He began work on picking the lock.

Crosshair rolled her eyes and chuckle slightly. “Oh you.”

“So, I know things got a little tense back there. In the hospital room.” Max said with a frown while starting to reload.

Crosshair nodded “Mmm yeah, Personally I didn’t want to post any guards there. But it’s also for your own safety, I wouldn’t want some ponies with the wrong idea to sneak in and slit your throat in your sleep.”

A satisfying click sounded from the lock ~Still got it~ Lightning opened the door just enough to get in and shut it as soon as he got in, he immediately began looking around for where Crosshair stored those bolts.

Max’s head swerved back in surprise at that. “Gods, who would do that? I’m liked by most around here. Smoothblock, Redhat, Temperance, Prodd, Lightning .... who were you thinking of that would go and do something like that? Your hubby? That’s the only one I can think of.” He lined up another shot.

Crosshair shrugs slightly. “You can never be too careful.”


Lightning began looking in any nook and cranny in Crosshair’s home, hoping that Flamberge wasn’t waiting in the shadows, ready to jump him and possibly put an axe to his head ~If Flamberge is here, I will be dead twice over~

“Heh, looking out for me.” Max smiled. That did him in. He couldn't hold up the act anymore. “And putting Carn’s head on the top of the damn fort gate!? Also looking out for me, I guess?” Max suddenly spattered with vitriol, turning on her.

“Wasn’t my decision.” Crosshair said in defense. “And I know full well how mean it is for you. Really.”

Lightning looked under the bed to find a hatch ~In floor safe, interesting~ he got out his lockpick kit again and got to work on the lock

Max cocked a brow. “Oh really? So you weren't an advocate for keeping the skull up? that’s a different story from what I heard from Lightning. I heard you chewed him out for it’s removal, even though you had no proof he even did it! I heard you wanted to put it back up again! I heard he’s hanging in your living room!” Max shouted, tightening his grip on the crossbow.

Lightning faintly heard what Max had yelled “- --ard -ou ----- -- -ut it ba-k u- --a-n I he-a-d it’- -anging -n -our living r-om” is what Lightning had heard ~It?~ Lightning stopped his progress with the lock and looked around ~It...It...It... It! The dragon skull? Why is it here and not buried outside of town walls!~ Lightning thought, staring at the eyesore of an ornament “Why is this eve-” He put a hoof over his mouth, hoping if anypony was home, nopony heard him.

Crosshair frowned “I didn’t chew out Lightning because the skull was taken down, I chewed  him out because the gate was taken down! The skull is one thing, I understand that! But breaking down the gate because of the skull endangered everypony in the town!”

Max cocked his head with a bitter grin. “So it was a security issue. Solely a security issue. Not because you husband Flamberge had his authority undermined. Not because for a second, you realized your power had limits. And it scared you. Of course.” Max growls “ I want Carn’s head back. It’s the least you could do, for the Griffon who built the place it’s currently in.”

“I know that my powers have limits, Max. I have nothing against you, And besides, it was a vote we put up for the majority of the ponies. And if they wanted the skull down, they could’ve done the same vote and take it down without breaking one of the things that’s standing between everypony and the blood thirsty discordians.”

“The vote was rigged!” Max shouted. He pointed the crossbow at Crosshair. “It had to have been. Had to. If it wasn't?” Max glared at her sadly. “Then I have no idea what you ponies really are. Not the ponies I knew. In my eyes the difference between discordants and ponies are growing thinner, and thinner.” He looked at her with a pleading. “Please tell me it was rigged.”

 Lightning went back to his work on picking the lock on the floor safe under the bed. After a good five minutes he heard yet another satisfying click ~Good now lets see what we have here~ Lightning pulled a box out of the floor safe [i[~Self Portraits... A family portrait... recent. And it seems I found the gold here~[/i] Lightning pulled out a quiver, with metal arrows filling it, about twenty-five, dust filled the air ~What would Max want with these?~ Lightning began putting the things back into the box, making sure they weren’t damaged as-if he were found out-Crosshair would be pissed to Tartarus. Lightning began creeping towards the door, making sure he didn’t leave anything out of place from when he came in.

Crosshair frown at that. “It wasn’t... Max, listen to me. As much as it seems disrespecting to Carn.. Would it not be at least something to let a part of him live on, benefitting those around him as we take care of that part, looking after it and might even be honoring it, letting ponies and people everywhere remember him in their hearts instead of dumping into a hole in the dirt and just forget him like he was nothing? Is it not better for him and all of us that, even in death, he still means something more than a piece of bone in the dirt?” The little mare tried to reason.

Max’s beak curled up in disgust. “If you’re going to make my Carn into a sick art exhibit you better get my bucking grace first you flying harpie.”

“We’re not turning him into some sort of an Art Exhibit! But ... You know what? He’s your Dragon. I suppose it’s only fair you decide what we do with the rest of him. If you want to dig him a hole and dump him in there, Fine. I’m not going to stop you from that. I only wanted what helped the community. But I will respect your choice, Max.” Crosshair huffed.

Lightning opened the door, the light-at least what light there was-flooding the room. He put his lockpick kit into the quiver-as it was small enough to fit-and positioned it under one of his wings. He attempted to get Max’s attention before continuing towards the two.

Max glared at Lightning and nodded. “I expect Carn’s head out of your house by Sunday.” He twirled the crossbow in the direction of the haybale target and blind fired it with a single claw. He scores a respectable hit on the outer ring. “Do not make me come in there and take it.”

Crosshair furrow her brow at that. “You’ll have to come pick it up, Max. We’ll take it down and take it out but unless you tell us where to put it ... Besides, I think you’d prefer to bury it yourself ...”

Lightning galloped off out of sight, waiting for Max to come over. ~This better be worth it, If I get caught, I’m as good as dead~

“Sunday.” Max walked away and let Crosshair sputter, dropping the crossbow. The two walked back to the apartments. “So, did you get them?” Max asked Lightning.

“Does this answer your question?” A quiver fell from under his wing

Max’s eyes widen. “One bolt would have done, Lightning. A whole quiver?”

“A thief, regardless of their skill, doesn’t go ‘one bolt’ they go ‘All of it’ as, incase you haven’t lived like me, is a lot more than just the one... plus if you fail whatever with the one bolt, you’ll have at least twenty-four more bolts.” He said, picking up his bag of lockpicking tools “Also, if you get caught, my name is not mentioned at all.”

Max closed his eyes. “Of course. And a single quiver isn’t that conspicuous. Things get misplaced ‘round here all the time. A job well done.” He starts to take out a bag of gold.

“Your welcome, have a nice day Max, hope my deeds are put under the covers soon enough, no pay necessary” Lightning turned around, prepared to head back to the archery range.

Max grinned. “Alright. Remember, a revolution is coming. Things are gonna change around here, I promise.”

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: DF2013: The Succession World?
« on: April 20, 2013, 04:42:05 pm »
How'd I'd make a skull fortress.

First, take a look at the common dwarf skull. Eight pixels horizontally, roughly twelve pixels vertically. Let's take the bottom amount of pixels and assume that as the y axis as well to keep it simple.



SO, take the base foundation of the project space, make it a square number, and double the amount of blocks height wise, shave the outmost top and bottom ring of blocks and you have the basic skull shape.

Add lava eyes. 

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: April 20, 2013, 03:56:15 am »
Three days ago ...


     Tulik the badger pony grinned from ear to ear, his face bathing in the dull metallic sheen of gold. He was shuffling as much gold as he could carry into a sack with feverishly quick paw swipes. This was Tuliks eleventh haul up and down the mountain today! He was on the verge of passing out from stealing everything not bolted down in this cave, but it didn't slow him down a second. As far as Tulik was concerned the dog days are over once he's done here. Just one more bag and he'll never have to scrounge again. Just one more. Why were the dog days over for Tulik here? Well, what the badger ponies lacked in intellect they made up in craftiness, you see. The badger ponies had long known about the dragon cave; but none but the absolutely suicidal dared to try such a heist while the dragon was still alive.  In the background, Tulik and his clan waited. Tulik and his clan kept an ear to the ground. Watching like a rabid set of spectators the dramatic theater play that was unfolding in the past months. Tulik and his clan saw the founding of Duskfields, and their hopes soared. Other clans, foolhardy clans, couldn't see the bigger picture like Tulik and his friends, the Diamond Dogs. They tried to steal from the town itself, and paid the price for their impatience. Thulik was a smart one! He listened to Diamond Dogs. They told Thulik ponies and Dragons no mix. They fight. Either cave or town ready for looting after. When the dragon fell out of the sky the band of thieves got the windfall they were praying for. The badger ponies did not waste a second to scramble up the mountain, too greedy to wait even a week of the aftermath.

They knew of the tales. Every badger pony has heard of the fairy tale of dragon hoards. But they had no words in their language for the sheer volume of valuables. They hollered and cheered  and shed tears of joy! The dog days were over.

Looking around he sees the two other badger ponies stealing voraciously as well. There used to be two more. Ardat and Skyx, they tried to get clever, too. They tried to off every badger pony to get larger shares. They fiddles with the trap levers, which were broken. They were getting no shares now, which made Tulik ecstatic. The Badger pony may be a simple creature, but it was not beyond fractions. Bigger top number and smaller bottom number means happier Tulik!

 There were two badger ponies chipping off the gold finish off one of the pillars on a makeshift thrown together wood scaffold. There were two badger ponies outside. There was a Diamond Dog pair, arguing as usual. Too much, Tulik thought. Why fight? These are good times! Less talking, more grabbing!


“ ... I’m saying there were two, and we have no idea where the other one is.” the female Diamond Dog stated.

The male Diamond dog balked at her. “Alexei, dear sister, give me a little credit. I’ve done my research here. There aren’t two dragons living here. ”

She shakes her head. “No, Alex, I’m not saying that. I’m talking about the griffon, here.”

Alex crosses his paws and shrugs. “Him? He’s dead. Has to be. He hasn’t come back here in months. The farm town is probably using his bones for bolts right now.”

“And if he does come back? To us ransacking the place?” Alexei said quizzically. “It’s dilutes a simple plan. I don’t like that a bit.” 

“Then we’ll solve the problem like we usually do in these types of conundrums; We’ll stab him until he’s dead.” Alex stated bluntly.

The brown and black furred Badger pony had got his fill of coins,to the point of the bag bursting. He strides up to the Diamond Dogs with a waggly tail. 

“Hey, hey, mister Diamond Dog, I has a’ nother bag of loot!” Tulik said exuberantly.

The two paused the conversation and looked over to the Badger pony, rolling their eyes. Alex bends down to the badger pony’s level. “Very good! Make sure to put it in the wagon like everything else!” He enunciated slowly, clearly patronizing him.

“Yes! Yes! I forget that lot’s of times. I’ll remember this time!” The Diamond Dogs were so smart, Tulik thought as he walked to the mouth of the cave. That’s why Thulik kept them in his master plan! Everything was going so well! And then Thultik be king one day with all this gold! Away from Diamonds dogs! Then the dog days will be over!”

Alexei groans and puts a paw over her face as the badger pony hops away. “When do we off them and take their shares?” She uttered quietly.

‘Soon’ Alex mouthed silently.

Thulik hummed to himself. Nothing could bring him down. He shielded his eyes from the light of the cave entrance, the sudden burst of sunlight catching his eyes with glare. “Dwibble? Sharn? Gold!” He called out to the two guard ponies ecstatically. He took a double take. As his badger pony friends were laying in a pool of crimson.Tulik took a sudden step back, The badger pony's head whipped around fearfully. What happened here? His breath became short, his eyes darting around in every direction. “Badger pony no like bashin’, Badger pony no like bashin’!” The pony felt a tremble in his spine. He runs to Dwibble and shakes him. “Dwibble, get up! Please get up!” Dwibble turns over lifelessly.Three long gouges ran down his throat. “Diamond Dogs! Diamonds dogs have to know about this!” He sputtered.


Tulik ran back into the antechamber to find an apocalypse ensuing back in the cave hall. The Badger ponies on the scaffolding were lining up their crossbows at some intruder! The Diamond Dogs were stabbing at it with their copper short swords. “I told you the Griffon would be a problem!” Alexei shouted. “Duely noted!” Alex shouted back. The two were whirling their lanky gray arms wildly, barely taking aim with their strikes. The griffon evades the blows deftly.  Max glares up to the scaffold,  grabs Alexei by the wrist and twirled her around. The bolts pincushion the Diamond Dog with a crunch. He threw her body at the flimsy structure, sending it crashing down on top of them. One Badger pony was impaled on a upright piece of wood, the other badger pony instantly breaks his legs when he hits the ground. “Alexei! No!” the diamond dog picked up his sister’s sword and went at the Griffon with both at once. Max kicked a silver rapier laying in the dragon hoard up into his hands and parried the blows. The two took a stunted step back from the clash, and circled around each other while they waited for the other to make a move. The dog lost his calm and took a hack. The griffon juked himself to the left, leaving the over extended Diamond Dog open a mile wide.  He took a downward swipe and hacked off his hands. With a shout of pain the dog doubles over into the griffon. Max drops the sword and grabs the dog by the neck with one claw, his waist with the other and with a wing aided jump he breaks the dog’s spine on his knee.  *gak!* the dog sputtered, spitting blood. Max dropped the broken mass of fur to the floor. His blue eyes turned to Tulik, the glare obviously hinting he had nothing but murder on his mind. 

Max strode up to the quivering badger pony and took the bag out of his mouth. “Where did you put the rest of it?” Max asked with a quiet calm that unnerved Tulik more than any shouting ever could. “I - I I can’t remember!?!” Tulik realized in a panic. Where was the wagon? Where was it!?

“That’s a shame.” Max caid in the same ice cold tone. He reached out for a lever in and pulled it. Thulik was skewered apart by ten spears from a spike trap in the ground. “Okay, not everi’thing in this  place is broken.” Max admitted in a bit of dark humor. He closed the circular door the ponies left open and started his investigation.

He took a look at the gold pile. About half of it was gone, stolen either by the ponies from Duskfields or these thieves, probably a combination of both. Max didn’t care a bit about the theft at this point. He was used to this situation sliding into a worse one by now.  He put a claw on the broken pillar. Judging by the pillar, he could get a good guess at where Carn was standing. Using that information as map key of sorts, he started to piece together the battle. The first conclusion he came to was there wasn’t one; There was little to no blood anywhere near the cave. He could tell there was a volley of crossbow bolts fired. He looked up to the ceiling hole, and followed through it. He took a long sweeping glance around the landscape. It seems there is a storm was coming.  He saw a clearing in the forest, A clue leading the way. Max looked away despondently for a moment. That was the path, but did he really want to follow it? What he might find may destroy his view of the ponies irreparably. He may never be able to look at Temperance the same again. His face steeled itself into something resolute. Yes. What was the alternative? He turn away? Lie to himself and let the blissful mercy of his imagination re-write the grim truth? Pretend it’s all fine and normal externally while he dies inside? No. He had to find Carn. As much as it killed him, It’s the least of his responsibility. He ... he had to say a few words.


He swooped down into the forest clearing. He surveyed the place, he found claw marks leading into the untamed woods. Max felt he wasn’t alone. His eyes jutted to their corners as he heard the shuffling of leaves. There’s a crack of thunder and the rain comes. He pensively follows the trail.

Over the pattering of the rain against the leaves around him, Max hears what sounds like a voice.  A very familiar voice.  “I told you so... Max...”

Max closes his eyes solemnly as he followed the trail. “I know you did,” Gods, he could hear his voice even now. “I know. I bucked this up. I bucked this up for us both so hard.” He said quietly, as if talking to someone intimate.

For some time there is only the boom of thunder and continuing rain.  After a weak clap of thunder, a deep voice continues, just audibly, “...you trusted them too much.  But they couldn’t be trusted...”

Max raked a claw through the tangerine feathers on his head. “ ... Temperance, his jackal smile, I thought I knew exactly who those ponies were ... For Laltur’s sake, please believe me ...”

The voice returns immediately this time.  “It’s not your fault, Max... Temperance is a fool who is blind to that which is happening around him.”

Max stops and looks down pensively. “Yeah, yeah that does sound like the case.” He looks back up and forces his shaking legs to keep moving down the foreboding trail. There was blood following along the track marks now. Lots of it. His breath shortened up now. He was getting closer. “Carn? Help me. Please. I need you now more than I ever did before. What should I do?”

 “Come... come...” the dragon’s voice intones, sounding as if it was in his ear now.  The darkness of the woods seems to fade away in a faint red glow ahead of him, beckoning him onward.

Max’s solemn eyes widen at the glow. His pace quickens to a dash, feeling a hope. His heart leaps out of his chest as he runs at the chance to escape the consequences of what he has done. Could Carnith still be alive?

“Come... see what they’ve done to me...” the voice says again as Max enters a clearing.  Before him, sits Carn, bathed in a faint red from which there appears no source.  The dragon appears unharmed, and is wearing a completely neutral face.  “Hello, Max.”

The griffon drops to his fours. He gasped in relief. “Carn ... I knew Temperance was a liar. You had gotten away ... I-I knew ... this whole time it wasn’t true.” He looked around. This was the place. This was the spot where they watched the sun set. He knew he would be here. Max flew up and hugged his neck. “We are leaving here right now, you understand? Not going to lose you ever again.” He whispered, a catharsis overtaking him.

Max feels something wet in his claws.  Something red, dripping from the back of Carn’s neck.  “Temperance is a liar.  They’re all liars, Max.”

Max pulls back, horrified. “Wha- What?”

“They used you, Max.”  Carn scowls and flares his wings, revealing the shredded and ruined membranes between the digits.  “Used us...”

“I was trying to build a better life for us!” He cried out, tearing up. “ Tried to cement the foundation for a better home!”

Carn reaches up and coaxes Max away from his neck.  Crossbow bolts were evident jutting from dozens of deep wounds along his arm.  “And now you know the price of trusting the ponies.”

“It was Flamberge! He turned the ponies into something lethal! He frenzied them all I - I didn’t know!” Max floated horizontally backwards on his wings. “Price? What price? You’re alive, Carn!”

Carn lets out a low chuckle.  “Flamberge... he’s the one.”  Max feels something wet drip down on him.  Clear tears drips from one eye, but fresh, bright blood flows from the other.  Carn looks down at Max, revealing the tooth impaled through his eye.  “He’s the one who did this to me, Max...”

Max put his head in his hand, quivering. “No - not again - don’t put me through it all again.”

“He’s the one, Max...” Carn insists, his voice taking on an almost decibel-breaking shrill tone.  “...destroy him, Max. Laltur demands retribution and you must be her sword!  Destroy him for what he’s done to us... him, and that liar Temperance...”

“Carn, what are you saying? We have to be better than him! We have to rise above his level!” He shakes his head. “I do want to kill him. More than anything. It would be easy. So easy.” He gestured to Carn, trying to placate him. “ But If I kill him he truly wins! You taught me that! I know you want justice, but I can’t ... Crosshair ... Crossbow .... It’s not - I can’t -”

“Why show them mercy?”  Blood continues to flow from the wound in Carn’s eye.   As he speaks, the scales on his face begin to flake away in patches.  He bares his teeth.  “They didn’t show me any mercy, Max.”  His teeth were now visible through his cheeks where the flesh stretched thin and tore.  “They didn’t show you any mercy.”

He stretches his arm out to distance himself from the griffon in his claws.  Max can now see that nearly all of the flesh had sloughed off the bones of his forelimbs.  Blood slicked claws held him tightly as Carn added, “When they murdered me, when Temperance told them about us?  None of it mattered, Max.”

The tooth finally falls from his decrepit eye socket, leaking black, clotting blood, and he rears back on his hind legs, which too were now nothing but skeleton.  He takes a deep breath, stretching tattered, taut skin across his partially exposed ribs.  “The ponies did this to us, as if we are just animals.  The months you spent building up their town?  None of it mattered.”

He pulls Max in close to his face.  “It’s time to repay the favor, Max.  Flamberge murdered me, and wants to hang you as an apology.  You nearly lose your life building walls in that little town, and Crosshair stationed guards to keep you in prison.  You fixed Temperance’s office, and he stands idly by while you’re persecuted for what they did to you.”

“...everything in my power...” Temperance’s voice whispers from the woods.

Carn’s voice takes on an otherworldly tone.  “Give them what they deserve, Max...”

"No! Don't do this to me again!” Max cried out, tears steaming down his face.

In an instant, Max finds himself standing in the clearing again.  The red glow is gone, but Carn is still there.  Or, what’s left of him.  The headless corpse lies motionless in an enormous pool of bloody mud.

“...destroy them...” an almost inaudible voice whispers in the wind.

Max scrambled around fearfully as he tried to piece together what was happening. Then he slowly saw the body. Cocked his head to the side pitifully. "No..." He takes a  distrested double take. "No, no!" He falls back to his fours and vomited at the sight. He clasped his shoulders with his claws, a cold sweat overcoming him. He took a wild look at Carns body again. "No!" He gasps. He took a swing at the base of a tree, slamming it over and over again. "Graaagh! No! No, No!" He punched the tree until he dented the heart wood, until his knuckles were raw. He kept at it until he was exhausted. With a long pained breath, he collapsed on his side.With heavy gasps, he looked up to the raining sky, helpless.


Three days later, current day.


Max stumbled into the bar covered head to toe in mud, exhausted, and physically emaciated. He hasn't eaten, or slept, or had a drink of anything in three days. Wouldn't allow it. Not until he finished his job burying Carnith.

"I'm going to need a drink, Pony." He said quietly.

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DF Community Games & Stories / Re: Duskfields (My Little Fortress)
« on: April 17, 2013, 03:10:13 am »


The day after Flamberge’s talk with Temperance, he finally convinces Crosshair he was well enough to be up and about. His first action was to go and pay a visit to Max Yellowfeather. He arrives, with Crosshair at his side, he dismisses Redhat and Prodd, who were currently the ponies assigned to guard duty, and takes a seat by the bed containing the bird.

Max refuses to look in Flamberge’s direction as he walks in. “Hello, Mr Flamberge.” He said with an ill kept contempt. He instead, kept his attention focused on the window in his room.

Flamberge looks at the griffin and exhales fully, after refilling his lungs, he says, “Maxwell Yellowfeather, I assume you know why I am here.”

He shakes his head. “No, I honestly don’t know why you would be a hundred feet around me ‘bout now.” He glared with an intensity, still looking out the window.

"To put it simply," begins Flamberge, "you are known to have been aware of that dragon's existence long before it's attack, and you kept that a secret. I am here to decide whether or not you are to be held criminally responsible for your actions, as a conspirator against Duskfields. What do you have to say in your defence?"

“Yeah, how about you can go to hell.” Max’s intense glare snaps to Flamberge. “So, kennal mannaðr, you dreyrugr mórðvíg?”

[Gryphonic Translation: So, feel accomplished, you blood-stained murder?]

Crosshair rubbed her temples with a hoof and let out a tired sigh.

Flamberge glares at the birdbrain, "Look, you aren't doing yourself any favors Maxwell. You have Temperance convinced that you are faultless here, but I am the one who will decide your guilt. The beast is dead, whatever it had planned is over, if you tell the whole truth, it will save your neck. Now tell me, did the dragon have any allies besides you? Do I need to be preparing for griffin attacks next?"

“Carnith was a pacifist for Nirmek’s sake!” Max cried out.

"That is seriously the story you are going with, after I watched him slam Temperance into the ground, unprovoked?" replies Flamberge disbelievingly.

“What do you want to hear? That - that Carn and I were conspiring to raze Duskfields? Some sort of a’ vindication fer’ your actions? You won’t find one, no matter how hard you press the screws.”

Flamberge shakes his head slowly and says, "The fact that he was a dragon, near our town was all the reason I need for what I did, Max. Regardless what you or Temperance say, he was a threat. What I want now, is a reason not to hang you for keeping him a secret, and you aren't giving me one."

Max looked unfazed. “You think I’m not secretly wishing for that right now? After what ya’ did? We were a pair, you idiot. Of course I hid him away. Out of fear that you would do exactly what you did!”

"If you loved him, and that was the only reason to hide him, you would have just left here months ago." replies Flamberge, "There is more you aren't telling us, now spill it featherbrain."

“We wouldn’t have done what we did if you’d tell us earlier that you have a Dragon lover nearby, honestly. Temperance would probably tell us not to mess with him. But we can’t go back and change the past now, I really don’t want to punish you more than what you’ve already got, Max. You’ve lost a lover and to me, that’s already too much. But we’ve got a law to follow and I want to hear you say something to keep you safe. Alright?” Crosshair said, reasonably.

Max cocked a disgruntled eye at Crosshair. “I’m already safe. Lying isn’t a crime under equestrian law. I don’t need to justify anything to you.”

Flamberge raises an eyebrow at Crosshair as she spoke of possibly not having chased the dragon off, then turns back to Max and says, “It is actually when you are in court. Perjury. We don’t have a proper courtroom, but we are trying to ascertain your guilt, so it would apply if you are lying here, but that is irrelevant. You're being accused of aiding the enemy, but I am willing to look the other way if you tell me what it was it wanted here, what the two of you were up to, why you waited as long as you have to leave if what you said before was true. And if you were coerced into it all, I'll let you go free from here, that's all I want from you. I am being more than reasonable."

Max sighs, giving up. He was too emotionally drained at this point. If re-counting everything Flamberge already knew would get them out of his room faster, than fine. The griffon could not even guess how little time was left before his self-restraint gave out, and in a rage he decked out the cocksure GI blowhard. He knew full well that course of action would surely end his life or put him in prison for life. So, he kept spurting words instead of spurting his blood all over these white hospital walls. Barely. “Fine. Carnith came down here looking for me. Having my guts spilled, it - He didn’t know. He came in to - to get me out of here. As why we were here? We were here, first, if you recall. And we waited,” Max fumes. “We waited so long because I had faith you ponies were better than this. That things could turn out ideal for everyone. I trusted you. That’s my true crime.”

"Then you were a fool Yellowfeather, Carnith was a monster, that nopony would suffer to let live," answers Flamberge, "But, say I believe your tall tale, what do you plan to do next? Leave?"

“Leave? You would like that, wouldn't you.” He chuckled grimly. “Leave to where? It’s not so easy to leave now.   No. I intend to stay. I intend to hurt you, somehow. I intend to hurt you in a way where all your strength means nothing. Not by force, not by any avenue you'd expect - I’m not going to raise a single claw against you. I’m going to ruin you with just an open palm. That’s my next plan. And when it’s over, I dare you to look me in the eye and tell’ me wasn't karma commin’. ” Max stated with conviction, daring Flam to try something. He was begging for an excuse to whip out the knife like claws and ’defend’ himself.  To slit out that evil tongue which had the audacity to call Carn a monster in front of his face. Max’s humble nature reached just about the end of it’s fuse.

Crosshair frowned “I don’t think threatening the commander here really is going to help you at all, Max.”

Redhat, Prodd!” Max shouted out the room. “Can you escort these two unwanted guests out of my room? I believe Temperance said for no one to come in unless it was life or death. These two are not doing that any favors.”

“Belay that Redhat,” adds Flamberge, “Bird, if you want to threaten me, you are deeply mistaken. I should kick you out of town, and never to suffer your presence again, let you fend for yourself in the wilderness with the discordians...”

“Sir, I apologize in advance for interrupting... but I’m kinda going to side with Max here...” Prodd spoke as he entered the room when he heard his name called. “It’s just... if the dragon was here for so long... why didn’t he attack us earlier?”

Flamberge rubs his forehead with a hoof and says, “I don’t know private, that’s what I wanted to find out, but he isn’t telling me anything.”

Red walked into the room, “You do realize when we got to that cave, temp was fine. It’s not like we didn’t provoke it to attack.”

“And foalnapping one of us doesn’t count as provoking us first? Anyway you slice that Redhat, it initiated conflict, but that isn’t what this is about. This isn’t about the dragon. This is about you Maxwell. About you not letting us know about a major threat to our safety. About you not even telling us to let that thing up in the cave know if something happened to you. You put everypony here at risk. I do however, believe that it is due to your utter incompetency, more so than maliciousness, and that will save your neck today.” Flamberge stands up.

“I don't believe the act of foalnapping is a crime that warrants death.” said red.

“How true you are. Thank you Redhat, for bringing some sense to obvious this inquisition.” Max said, Getting up from bed. He sorely stood up and took two steps closer to Flamberge. “I’m a fool, I know. But I am a’ fool with rights. Something you’ve forgotten in yer’ megalomania, possibly?”

"Megalomania! I am trying to keep these ponies safe! I am doing my duty! I have more than sufficient cause to suspect you of all sorts of things, and yet you sit here at say he was nothing more than your lover? That he was a pacifist who would never harm anypony? You are either the dumbest bird I've ever met, or the greatest actor, but I suspect the first." Flamberge turns to Crosshair, "We're leaving."

Flamberge heads towards the door, "You're off the hook this time Yellowfeather, but you stick one talon out of line again, if you are anything less than the model citizen, I will not hesitate to have you banished from our land. I'll be watching you bird." Flamberge exits with Crosshair, slamming the door behind him.

“A model citizen is exactly what I intend to be.” Max said with an exhale, collecting himself. “I’m going to be a reflection of exactly what you aren’t. That’s what Carn would want.” He looks to Redhat and Prodd. “Thank you both for standin’ up. I appreciate it. Redhat, we need to talk.”

“About what exactly?”

Max sighs. He walks over to Redhat and firmly puts a claw on Redhat’s shoulder. “I want to say, I understand. There ... there was nothing you could do. A dragon flew off with Temperance and you had to make a call. I don’t blame you.”

“Well... um... thanks...” red gave an awkward smile.

“I mean, you had a superior officer looking down at you, a career in jeopardy,  I understand. Don’t beat yourself up over this.”

“Well... i’ll try not to...” he patted max on the shoulder, in an even more awkward way.

“If there’s any fault to blame, it’s purely mine.” Max says stoically, hanging his head low. He was tearing apart inside.He knew this was all squarely his fault.Sure, he could point at Flamberge all he wanted and say “There’s the enemy. There is where I should pour my hate.”, but was that anger all in the right place? What was Flam other than an effect to a cause? His cause. His   own arrogant cause to show Carn he had nothing to fear from his friends below. He was so aimlessly naive, it burned inside. His heart was broken evenly to thirds by a self-loathing, a loss, and a betrayal. He barely touched the food brought to his bed anymore. He couldn't imagine even living on just yet, hasn’t quite grasped the concept. Could he even fly and carve out another hole without Carn? What was the point? The guilt would still be stained into his soul. If Redhat was feeling even a tenth of what he felt ...

 It was too much anypony deserved to bare.

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After slamming the door Flamberge exits the hospital in a huff, slamming it’s door as well after Crosshair makes her way through, She was worried of the commander’s tempers. “Now now, try to calm down, Commander.” she tried.

Flamberge turns to Crosshair, his emotions running high, he thinks for a second then flares out his wings and says, “Follow,” before flying off and away.

Crosshair quickly followed him, even when he’s angry and flying fast, the little mare had no problem catching up.

Once the two are outside the town, Flamberge slows down and has Crosshair fly next to him, so that she can hear him over the wind, “I don’t understand this Crosshair. How can Temperance, and Prodd, and Redhat, put so much faith in what that griffin says. Redhat’s an imbecile, so I can understand that, but Temperance is a smart stallion, why can’t he see that this doesn’t add up.”

Crosshair was thoughtful for a moment, before suggesting “Perhaps it’s something the dragon said and convinced him? Legends always says that Dragons are a creature of gods. Some claim to be gods even, I wouldn’t be surprised if this one have the ability to convince anypony with it’s words.”

Flamberge thinks for a few moments after that, “That... is certainly possible, and I seem to recall it trying to convince me to let it walk away. If that’s true then I’m even more sure that killing it was for the best, that kind of power would be incredibly dangerous. It would also explain why the griffin was so convinced the flesh eating monster was a pacifist, that loved him.”

Crosshair nodded agreeingly. “I have no doubt that a dragon would have an ability to make even a discordian pony look like somepony who you’d put in a nursery.”

Another moment of silence follows before Flamberge says, “Crosshair, what do you think I should do? I told Max he was off the hook for now, but, I’m still concerned that there might have been more going on then he claims, if the dragon was just manipulating him to whatever ends, then, fine, the threat is gone, but if he’s here to stir up trouble, if that back there was an act, and he was the one goading that monster to strike, then this might not be the end of it. I’d like to exile him to stay on the safe side, but I feel that too many of the ponies would not understand, and resent me for it. What do you think?”

“I think he’s been around without causing trouble for a while already. I think we should just wait and see if he’ll do anything else. If he’s not causing any more trouble then I don’t see why we can’t have him stay around still. But when he starts making trouble, then we’ll have all the more reason to exile him.” Crosshair gave him her input.

Flamberge nods, “Yes, but that’s the thing, after this, I’m not sure he hasn’t been causing trouble. He could be sending information back to the griffin kingdoms, or getting more beasts to attack us. If he was behind the dragon, then how do we know he wasn’t behind that Ogre a few months back, the one that thrashed Bonnet.”

Flamberge sighs, “You’re right though, we’ll just have to keep an eye on him.”

Crosshair nodded “It’s the best we can do right now without making any harsh moves”

Flamberge flies for a few more minutes in silence, then points down into a clearing, saying, “There it is.”

Flamberge flies downward and lands beside the corpse of Carnith the dragon, which, having had a few days to start decomposing, had begun to smell quite terrible.

Crosshair scrunched up her nose. “Ugh.. why are we here, Commander?”

“Because,” says Flamberge as he draws his sword, “Duskfields killed this thing, and I want everything that might try and attack us again to know it.”

“Woah woah, wait, Didn’t Temperance says we’re going to bury the thing whole? Besides. what if it cursed it’s remains? I don’t want you to risk getting cursed just because you want some head on our walls. And we’re not like those Discordians are we?” Crosshair tried to reason.

“Temperance did say that, but this thing’s skull belongs over the gate, if it convinces even one thief to try some other town instead of ours, isn’t it worth it? And, I don’t believe it’s remains are cursed, aren’t the old stories filled with artifacts made from dragon bones and hide?” counters Flamberge, “and if Temperance is so soft as to want to give this thing a funeral, then he is welcomed to the rest of it.”

Crosshair frowned slightly. “As much as I want to scare thieves off with the head of a dragon over our gate, I don’t think it’ll please many ponies.. It’s better to fight threats from outside than the ones from inside is it not?”

Flamberge looks at the decomposing dragon, then turns back to Crosshair, “And what ponies would object to it? Other than Temperance and those two morons back in the hospital? Max’s story sounds insane, I doubt he’ll convince many others that the dragon was any more than ravenous beast that threatened our livelihoods, and why should they care about disrespecting such a monster?”

“Because it might make us look like those Discordians?” Tried Crosshair again.

Flamberge sticks his sword in the ground, “But would it?!” he questions, “The discordians are disorganized rabble, they have no cities, no towns, no civilization, they could not do what we have done. I couldn’t have killed that thing without yours and Praetorians, and every other pony’s help. We did a grand thing, and showing that to the world, showing that we are a force to be reckoned with, is that really that wrong?! If we put that creature’s skull on the wall, then every merchant, every trader, every traveler, that comes through here will know what we did, and they will tell ponies, in other places. Duskfields will grow, WE will grow, our names will be known everywhere. But if we bury it, out here,” he makes a sweeping gesture with his hoof at the forest surrounding them, “no one will know, no one will believe it, it’s wasted potential to just let it rot here.”

After giving that a long hard thinking. Crosshair nodded. “Alright.. I suppose that makes sense. But since the head will rot away anyway and that we’ll only just get the skull. I think we should at least go back to the town and ask around if ponies wanted the skull on the gate or not.. you know? Casting votes? And if more ponies wanted it there to give us all the benefits like you said more than the ponies that doesn’t, then we’ll have it up. How’s that sounds? Plus temperance can’t give you flak for doing something harsh because it’s what the majority of ponies want!”

Flamberge thinks for a moment, then picks up his sword again, brushes of the dirt and sheaths it. He walks up to Crosshair, a serious look in his eyes, he then kisses her briefly on the cheek, pulls back smiles and says, “You are right, Love, I’ll put it to a vote. That should work out for the best.”

Crosshair beamed happily from that and give his muzzle a loving nuzzle. “Of course.. I want the best for both of us afterall.”

Flamberge nods, “Alright then, let’s head back to town, it stinks of dragon here.”

And with that the two ponies spread their wings and soar back to town.

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