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Messages - Hanslanda

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I have a lot of engravings in multiple forts of Ettins laboring. I think I'm making Ettins my mascot.

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@Hanslanda:

I was sort of testing the waters, there... You can never really tell on the Internet :p  Some people seem nice and reasonable yet turn into screeching drama queens the second they hear something they don't like :p

I thought the fight scene was pretty good, actually*. There were a couple actions that should have been extended into multiple clauses** (one that really sticks out is where the last Spawn bowls the grappling duo off the bed*** -- it's written as one self-contained event even though it should have been something like 'the final spawn leaped forward and tackled the duo, bowling them off the bed').

*It's worth mentioning that, as a 120-pound weakling who's never been in any sort of physical altercation, I have exactly zero practical experience to back this up.
**"Clause" is the right word, right? I suck at technical-speak :-[
***...Right? Christ, I just read it 10 minutes ago and my memory's already spotty :-[ I'm too young to be senile!

There is no need to get upset at constructive criticism. People aren't being cruel and trying to demolish your writing when they say, 'This could have been better here and here.'  They're helping. :)

I like the smiley face Mitch, how'd you manage that?

Spoiler (click to show/hide)


Nothing nice happens to this guy. Around eight thirty my time tonight, I'll post the next segment in the story. :)

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See, that's why I don't fight. I'm young, strong, and rather tall. Several advantages. I also know that eyes are very delicate, throats are easily crushed, your hands are delicate flowers made of plasticine, and knees are hilariously easy to destroy with a snap kick, even though kicks are kinda useless otherwise. I don't want to get hurt/go to jail again, but I also don't want to kill or ruin someone for life and get sent to prison. Plus, fighting is dumb when lives aren't on the line. Hospitals are expensive.

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DF Adventure Mode Discussion / Re: What Annoys You?
« on: June 01, 2012, 12:27:19 am »
Stopping to cross a river.

Stopping to cross more than one river.

Stopping to cross a river, which is actually a deep cliff, with ice at the bottom.

Elven adventurers not getting free waterskins. Seriously, how can you even get them in adventurer mode?

Fortresses have backpacks AND waterskins AND buckets. Buckets are way better than waterskins. A fortress is an Outsider's BEST FRIEND. :)

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I almost always get a High Master of three professions in my fifth migrant wave.
Usually:
A Weaponsmith or Armorsmith (awesome)
Glassmaker (Kinda awesome)
A fisherdwarf or soaper/potashmaker/useless farming skill (not awesome)

I thank the RNG for shining on me.

10791
Hey, the first one took fifteen minutes, the second was merely a logical progression of events, and took less time as a result. Also, I LIKE Spearbreakers, and I'm not letting it get off the first page if I have ANY say in the matter.

And I appreciate the analysis, I knew there was some bits that didn't quite work, but in any 'real' writing situation there would be a stage of editing in between, so hopefully the awkward transitions and adjectives would be caught. Plus, I've never been in a 'real fight', so its kinda hard to judge how the action flows from a purely theoretical point of view.

10792
Ah, so it was ironic that Chagen was denouncing us for being attention lovers, when he himself was also an attention lover.

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Spoiler (click to show/hide)

I know there aren't any vampires in Spearbreakers, but I wanted something with a bit more to it than, "Grar! Shank the monster! Now shank the other monster!" Let's just assume that this is Urist's home fortress before he travels to Spearbreakers.

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I deliberately wasn't going to use ironic, because so many people use it incorrectly. I'd rather not use it, and remain correct than misremember the definition. Although thank you for the definition.
And also, I think loving attention is the basis of all human society, seeing as how we are social animals, and our big fancy brains evolved to allow us to love attention more.


Dwarves have to have a minimum amount of time a month they get to socialize, or they begin tantrumming. Then go beserk after two months.

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DF Dwarf Mode Discussion / Re: Because of Dwarf Fortress...
« on: May 31, 2012, 11:36:50 pm »
Because of Dwarf Fortress, or more accurately the Bay12 community, I have started watching My Little Pony, to my chagrin.
We expected nothing less. The thing hooks peoples interest whether they like it or not.

I have good internet and I simply refuse to watch My Little Pony out of misguided chauvinism.
So we watch a show we think is genuinely good and suddenly it is overzealous patriotism? ???

No, no, no... Please don't misunderstand. What I meant is that, regardless of its qualities as a show, I refuse to watch it because I have old-fashioned ideas of 'masculinity' and that it would violate them. I meant it more as a self-deprecating comment than anything else. I don't Complain About Shows I Don't Watch. I complain about my reasons for not watching potentially good shows. Sorry for the misstatement.

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My life goal is to be an author, so I greatly appreciate the compliments. :) Thanks guys. I knew some of the details on the spawn were off, but I kinda chalked it up to artistic license, plus I figured it would take a long time to find out what exactly I did wrong. I really enjoyed writing the martial trance.

And his name means Dagger Brokenspear, in Dwarven. I thought it was fitting. I'ma continue his story if ya'll want, and it doesn't get busy here for awhile.

Edit: And I seemed to recall someone mentioning tearing the brain and piercing the heart as their only weakness, so I rolled with that. What exactly are their weaknesses?

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DF Dwarf Mode Discussion / Re: Because of Dwarf Fortress...
« on: May 31, 2012, 11:13:25 pm »
Because of Dwarf Fortress, or more accurately the Bay12 community, I have started watching My Little Pony, to my chagrin.
We expected nothing less. The thing hooks peoples interest whether they like it or not.

I have good internet and I simply refuse to watch My Little Pony out of misguided chauvinism.

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DF Dwarf Mode Discussion / Re: Face Palm moments you had
« on: May 31, 2012, 11:12:19 pm »
Yes you can. Break every bone and joint in their body, gouge out everything, sleep. Lather, rinse, repeat, for days. Preferably in a lair. Slowly begin removing various fingers and toes. Continue until they are a limbless, broken and mutilated torso. A LIVING torso. Leave them in that state.

Sometimes, death is a mercy.
No, because the rabbits beat me to it.

Lol, my bad. You are right, they get themselves killed in worse ways than we can.

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Ugh, this thread started out funny, but then everyone thought "HERF DERR ILL POST A SUGGESTION THATS ACTUALLY PRETTY COOL AND ITLL BE FUNYNY BECAUSE OF THAT HUEHUE"

News flash, guys: you're not being ironic for posting a suggestion that's pretty interesting/cool/good in a joke thread. It just makes you look like a sad attention-lover.


This may or may not be ironic, I am not sure what the true definition is, but its goddamn funny.

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Step one, unknowingly run into the deer.
Step two, do minimal damage to its tail, leg, and lower body cuz your dumbass outsider thinks bashing with the spear is the best plan.
Step three, bask in the awesome fury of the horrifying Enraged Deer.
Steps four through twelve are the burial process.

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