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« on: September 20, 2012, 01:09:58 pm »
"I would suggest you do Mr. Make-a-scene. Be sure to apologize to our hosts would you? I will wait outside." Cloaking once more he made his way outside barely containing a chuckle. WHile a bit cliched for him it always made him happy to walk away while cloaked. Finding a decent bench he waited for the others to exit the cafe.
[Why 3 hours? Why did you pick such a large time-frame? I'm also pretty sure we didn't answer all questions yet.]
[@Dwarmin oh unbelievably so for my tastes. Maybe make her less astounding. I suggest removing audio-manipulation simply to stop The Shadow from being redundant [He's already the weakest guy here TT_TT which makes me laugh so hard. His only useful power is being rich.] but if you must keep that get rid of some of the training she has. Or maybe remove the impossibility of detecting her. I don't know ask the others. I am of the persuasion that super-heroes shouldn't be too over-powered. It's just personal taste though.]