Thanks for reading, everyone, and the compliments!
I know it's just a bit of trim-and-paste, but your photo editing is excellent. So is your storytelling.
That's probably my favorite pic, actually. I got lucky with the "It is noon" announcement.
For a while now Thob had noticed the light getting dimmer; he had thought it was just his eyes adjusting, until he noticed that the bright thing had almost completely disappeared behind the western mountains. The blue dome overhead was darkening, and everything was taking on the dark subtle hues of the caverns. It was also getting noticeably colder. The sudden change was a surprise to Thob, but a welcome one. Whatever the bright thing had been, it was gone now, and the surface looked a lot more like home in the darkness. Thob realized now how the ancient dwarves had been able to live up here: it was probably that bright thing’s appearance that caused the dwarves to go underground.
He found himself feeling tired—he’d walked the whole length of the valley, almost. There were no beds about, but the green fungus was decently soft in places. He found a good spot and dozed off.
He was awakened by the awful light again. That bright thing was back, hovering over the eastern mountains this time. Thob sighed, but picked himself up and trudged on.
Nearby was a large cluster of stone buildings, small towers and pyramids, in front of a much taller structure rising from the sand. There didn’t seem to be anyone around, so Thob decided to go check it out.
The smaller buildings were open, and abandoned. Thob looked into one little pyramid, but there didn’t seem to be much inside. It was probably just some old house—maybe this was once a dwarven surface-city?
The main tower was an irregular, imposing structure. Cautiously Thob went inside. The interior was a maze of small rooms and hallways, full of table and chairs but not much else, except for several books and scrolls. They were very old and dusty, but mostly intact. Thob picked up a few and scanned them.
Most of them were about the place itself, which they called “Brightbrand.” They were all in the same hand and signed “Mosus Presentracks.” But they didn’t tell him much about what the place was, or had been.
He thought he’d look around the other structures a bit more. He went over to the nearest one, a boxy building a few stories tall, and looked inside. He saw, to his astonishment, some piles of stuff on the floor, in chests and bags. He crept over to investigate: all the goods were of quality dwarven craftsmanship, and made of good material. This must be a treasury! Since no one seemed to live here Thob thought he’d help himself.
He found, to his excitement, a fine iron pick and a nice iron buckler, which might help against dangerous animals. There was more to the place, and Thob was searching eagerly through the fine goods, when suddenly…
With a rusty rattle of mechanisms a bronze pike shot up from the floor: Thob jumped away just in time to avoid a skewering. The weapon was heavily decayed, but would still have made a mess of his insides if it had hit. Somewhat shaken, Thob decided to leave the rest of the treasures alone; he took his new gear and left the building, and the strange complex, behind.
Ahead was nothing but sandy wasteland. Thob knew he could follow the mountains east to Stoneclasped, but it was a long way off and the land looked forbidding. Still, he had to try. It was his best chance of finding some alcohol.
At last he approached the old fortress, nestled in a corner of the mountains. He hoped there was food as well as booze inside—he’d eaten the last of his rations on the way.
There was another temple to Doren inside the top cavern—she must have been a popular deity with the old dwarves. The temple was partially collapsed in the center, but among the rubble Thob saw something glinting in the faint light. He turned over a few blocks, and found two masterfully-worked swords!
He recalled that Osmod, in Dawngloves, had mentioned some dwarven artifacts at Stoneclasped, and these matched their descriptions. He stowed the swords in his pack: maybe if he got them back to Dawngloves, the king would be more likely to listen to him, and help him out.
There was a trade depot here full of goods, and (more importantly) food. Thob took a few rations for the return journey. But the tavern was another disappointment: all the casks were empty, and had been for a long time. Not even the smell of alcohol remained.
He took a look around the lower fort as well, though he didn’t expect to find any booze.
He didn’t find any, but there was plenty of other good stuff around. The old dwarves had left a sizeable hoard down here. Among it Thob found some armor, made of the best dwarven steel: a breastplate, helm, and some mail leggings, along with a pair of iron boots and bronze gauntlets. The stuff was heavy, but you couldn’t ask for better protection. He was in a new world, and who knew what dangers lay in wait for a lone dwarf?
As if to drive the point home, when he came back to the surface several strange creatures had gathered around:
a gray, scaly thing with a knobby trunk paced through the sand;
on top of the fort sat a fat, one-eyed black creature with bat wings;
and among the rock fields nearby stood a couple small, scaly things with bug-like mandibles, whose skin seemed to let off a dense smoke.
None of the things bothered him, though they watched him warily. Still, he hefted his iron pick and kept a close eye on them. He really hoped the king would help him find something to drink: he couldn’t wait to get back to the caverns.