One more 'accident' and we'll have his head on a pike or make a mug from his skull. Shame there's no way to do both.
This is gold.
And yeah... I really don't think Fischer would've written an infodump, as I said before. Even for the greenies. Honestly, I see Draignean more of a teacher than Fischer:
"Listen up, newbies. Let me relate to you the tale of when I tackled the Holistic Spawn King singlehandedly."
"Pop quiz! Everyone list my favorite ten kills, in order. I've provided you with more than enough information."
If you want someone who's flanderized, Xahnel, Draig is it.
But it's not a bad thing. It's a good thing, actually. And he started out like that, anyway.
Jack Magnus - if you wrote out some journals for Jack, that'd be awesome. lol Wordy or not.
@James: Yeah... Reudh gets taken down by an angry military.
I vote for this ending, too. (If we're voting.)
In other news... I'm adding all the new stuff onto the Spearbreakers PDF/Doc. Yayyyyy time for more brain fizzlefryburn.