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Scood

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Dungeon keeper ami
« on: May 05, 2012, 11:01:15 pm »
So I was wondering if anyone here reads Dungeon Keeper Ami. It's kind of a Sailor moon/dungeon keeper fanfic. It's a fairly good one at that. Of course i'm referring to the branch written by pusakuronu
for those that don't know here's a synopses i pulled from someone else.
heres a link to the fanfic http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/frecent.php?tag=Dungeon+Keeper+Ami


"A portal accident during a raid against the Dark Kingdom leaves Ami (Sailor Mercury) stuck on another world, smack dab in an abandoned Dungeon Heart with a very irate Horned Reaper looking for its own freedom, eventually leading to it convincing Ami to activate it. What follows is Ami accidentally losing her soul to the Dark Gods, the world she's on viewing her as Evil with a Capital E, and a series of fights against both the other Keepers, and the forces of Light, leading from whats starts as a desperate fight for survival to what is basically world conquest. "
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Re: Dungeon keeper ami
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2012, 07:32:24 am »
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Read it for a while, up to something about the sunken staff bit. Good example of an author who's very good in the technical sense (grammar, spelling, ability to describe things, etc) but absolute [CENSORED][CENSORED][CENSORED] at overall narrative, tension, worldbuilding, balance, etc. The result is fairly egregious Mary Sue fanwank Deus Ex Swiss Family Robinson style bullshit written by someone who actually knows how to write.

As an added bonus for me personally, it's also by far the longest Dungeon Keeper fanfiction I'm aware of. Damn you.
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Re: Dungeon keeper ami
« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2012, 08:45:50 am »
What you're trying to say is that it's a masterfully-crafted piece of crud?

I should avoid it.

Keep away.

Not peek at it.

Hopefully.
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Re: Dungeon keeper ami
« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2012, 10:18:11 pm »
Quote from: Scood on May 05, 2012, 11:01:15 pm
wondering if anyone here reads Dungeon Keeper Ami.

...actually...yes. Sort of. I read the whole thing as far as it went....several years ago, I think. Quite a long time. The way I remember it what I read hadn't been updated in a long time and I assumed it was abandoned. I didn't realize it was still being worked on.

I found it amusing.
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