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Author Topic: PLEASE help me with grammar on the wiki!  (Read 2423 times)

goblolo

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PLEASE help me with grammar on the wiki!
« on: November 08, 2012, 05:32:24 am »
I've wrote a short article to the wiki, but I'm afraid that my english is bad and I surely made a lot of mistakes.
Please, can someone check spelling of the flamethrower bunker section and edit it/post right version here/pm me with right version (or just errors i made)?
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Quote from: Asra on November 25, 2012, 08:02:16 pm
The first small thing that made me feel awesome was my indoor waterfall. A few minutes later though, it started flooding my fort so I felt less awesome.

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Re: PLEASE help me with grammar on the wiki!
« Reply #1 on: November 08, 2012, 09:54:23 pm »
I quickly read it and only spotted ne obvious mistake :

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Usefulness: The dragon Will

I don't have an account there though so haven't edited it.
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Re: PLEASE help me with grammar on the wiki!
« Reply #2 on: November 08, 2012, 10:02:16 pm »
No, I don't see anything.  Just that accidental capitalization.  Your English is correct (to be honest, it's better than what I see from native speakers).
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goblolo

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Re: PLEASE help me with grammar on the wiki!
« Reply #3 on: November 09, 2012, 12:18:35 am »
Quietust helped a lot by reworking the article and moving it to proper position.
Thank you guys.
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Quote from: Asra on November 25, 2012, 08:02:16 pm
The first small thing that made me feel awesome was my indoor waterfall. A few minutes later though, it started flooding my fort so I felt less awesome.