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SigurnFonShnaps

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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #165 on: April 12, 2018, 11:19:48 am »

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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #166 on: April 18, 2018, 05:29:52 pm »


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Th4DwArfY1

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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #167 on: April 18, 2018, 05:30:40 pm »

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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #168 on: April 29, 2018, 08:32:36 pm »

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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #169 on: May 20, 2018, 02:27:21 pm »

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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #170 on: May 24, 2018, 02:38:46 pm »

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« Reply #171 on: May 29, 2018, 11:55:46 am »

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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #172 on: May 29, 2018, 02:43:34 pm »

Please correct me (text if it sounds incomprehensible or strange) if you have  wish and time. I am use Google translator.
I hope, in time, this story will acquire interesting moments.
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« Reply #173 on: June 02, 2018, 10:00:50 am »

Please advise (if there is time and / or desire), how can I write speech in elevated tones (speech in elevated tones, excited speech, swearing) to make it sound natural.
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Cathar

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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #174 on: June 02, 2018, 11:41:08 am »

So, some advices (I am not a professional ; that is just my opinion) :

Limit the talk to a minimum. Use pictures to convey the story. Dialogs should (ideally) be totally skippable
Use body language to set the tone for the talk ; I think you do it very well
It is better to do two versions (one in english and one in russian) than doing a bilingual comic

Again it is just my opinion
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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #175 on: June 02, 2018, 02:10:40 pm »

Thank you so much. I'm just a beginner (in comics). Any advice is very important.
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Re: Draw Fortress
« Reply #176 on: June 08, 2018, 12:36:25 pm »

Your colour pieces are pretty! Congratulations. I also like the overall expressiveness, your recent portraits convey a certain personality, even if it's just vaguely.

Keep up the amazing work!
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