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« Reply #15 on: December 21, 2013, 12:02:16 pm »

Added some content into the last chapter (2.18) to flesh out what happened on stage.
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« Reply #16 on: January 01, 2014, 01:14:09 pm »

Chapters 3.1 and 3.2 are up.

Horrible tense badness and several inconsistencies fixed in Chapters 1.1-1.5

I'm alternating writing new chapters and fixing older chapters, because a bunch of chapters in the first book were terrible mishmashes of present and past tense narration.
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« Reply #17 on: January 05, 2014, 01:47:55 am »

Chapters 3.3 and 3.4 are up
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« Reply #18 on: January 09, 2014, 05:50:52 pm »

Chapter 3.5 and 3.6 are up
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« Reply #19 on: January 09, 2014, 05:52:35 pm »

Ah, time to start reading this again!
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« Reply #20 on: January 14, 2014, 04:19:49 pm »

Chapters 3.7, 3.8, and 3.9 are up.  Decided to do 2 chapters today.
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« Reply #21 on: January 14, 2014, 04:20:24 pm »

Nice!
Sorry for lack of reviews. I'm terrible at it.
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« Reply #22 on: January 18, 2014, 06:58:42 pm »

Chapters 3.10 and 3.11 are up
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« Reply #23 on: January 19, 2014, 07:59:10 am »

Added about 2000 words to chapter 3.11 - I was rushed to publish it earlier, and when I reread it, it didn't do anything close to what I wanted, so I added a lot.
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« Reply #24 on: January 22, 2014, 10:20:28 am »

Chapter 3.12 and 3.13 are up
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« Reply #25 on: January 25, 2014, 05:10:09 pm »

Chapters 3.14 and 3.15 are up
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« Reply #26 on: January 29, 2014, 03:09:52 am »

Chapters 3.16 and 3.17 are up.  Sometimes you get answers you didn't really want.
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« Reply #27 on: February 04, 2014, 06:25:46 pm »

Chapters 3.18, 3.19, 3.20, 3.21, 3.22 are up.  Book 3 is complete, but might get some serious rewriting in a couple chapters.
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« Reply #28 on: February 06, 2014, 04:03:51 pm »

Meh, I needed to add another chapter 2.23  Book 3 is now really finished.
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« Reply #29 on: February 12, 2014, 10:24:01 pm »

Chapter 4.1, 4.2, 4.3 are up.  World building in Books 1, 2, 3 have hopefully given me a solid foundation to build on.




From Book 4 on, the stories are going to be noir-type fiction.
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