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[Akhier the Dragon hearted]

   For those interested I have it posted now though if anyone still wants to take a look and tell me if anything is wrong that would be great. Will probably use this thread when I need another post checked.

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   So I decided to start a programming blog (not my first blog but the other had like 3 divergent subjects and kinda died) and I am about to post my first post about programming. I have the post here on Github for the moment. While I am mostly looking for basic proofreading of the words and what not if someone happens to know C++ and wants to look at the code as well that would be nice. I just learned SDL2 so I did the post on making a simple wrapper for it.

[Arx]

'Lets' takes an apostrophe after the 't' when it's a contraction of 'let us', as is the case most of the time in your article.
The second image under 'Start of Actual Code' (the one headed Projects/targets options) has 'where' instead of 'were'.
After the snippet of the window-creation code you spelled 'aesthetics' as 'esthetics'.
Two paragraphs later, you have a double capital 'AS for it staying...'
"This is beyond the scope of the current project though so later date won't be in this post." Consider revising? I'm not sure what you're saying.
"To note I will be..." Perhaps you meant 'Do note'?

That's about it that I noticed.

[Akhier the Dragon hearted]

Thank you, I fixed what you suggested. As for the line you said to consider revising I just deleted it as it really did serve no real purpose. Probably was just me being up too late.

[Akhier the Dragon hearted]

   For those interested I have it posted now though if anyone still wants to take a look and tell me if anything is wrong that would be great. Will probably use this thread when I need another post checked.

[hermes]

Cool, ptw.  I love this kind of thing, will keep an eye on this just in case I go back to C++ someday.  Presentation is very clear and I like the detail with which you explain each step.

[Akhier the Dragon hearted]

   Thank you, I will note that it isn't specifically a C++ blog. It just happens that I am currently working with C++. When I go to learning another language that will show up as well. Though I do admit I am probably going to be focusing on C++ for at least this summer barring interesting circumstances.