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Reelya

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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10560 on: March 24, 2020, 07:24:50 am »

Looking at the concept of "beats" from scriptwriting could be useful.

https://www.studiobinder.com/blog/save-the-cat-beat-sheet/ *
(note that when they say "pages" here, they mean script pages, not book pages, if using this as a guide for writing a novel. Expand the rough page count for how much of your book this would cover).

A "beat" in that jargon is a plot-point, but in the abstract sense. It's the "why" in the sense of storytelling. So you can string a story together by having a rough guide to the reason for each major plot point or location, based on years of other writer's experience rather than trying to wing-it and hope the story turns out satisfying.

* Note: this widely-used system is called Save The Cat because that's a movie in-joke. A "save the cat" scene is one used to create sympathy for the protagonist: archetypically, saving a cat from a tree. It has no purpose for the plot but it's there to tell you something about why you should give a shit about this character.

Note, that a lot of scenes may serve no "plot purpose" but they're there to tell you something about the character, but they shouldn't be over-used. For example, with something like Raiders of the Lost Ark, a scene where you show Indy is scared of snakes makes him relatable, and you should revisit that plot point exactly once later in the story. So, the set up is to show that he's scared of snakes in general, and the pay-off for the audience is the scene later when he has to get through a room absolutely swarming with snakes. Both scenes are needed, at least in the first movie.
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10561 on: March 24, 2020, 08:32:26 am »

I believe Sanderson used the same example in the Writing Excuses podcast. You listen?
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10562 on: March 24, 2020, 12:19:25 pm »

My corona virus schedule amuses me.
1: Wake up
2: Go for run
3: Make lemon meringue pie
4: Write novel
5: Learn Norwegian
6: Learn French

At the very least I'll have come out of this with a rounder education!

My corona virus schedule amuses me.
1: Wake up
2: Wake up
3: Grab a brush and put a little makeup
4: Hide the scars and...
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10563 on: March 24, 2020, 12:27:36 pm »

My corona virus schedule amuses me.
1: Wake up
2: Go for run
3: Make lemon meringue pie
4: Write novel
5: Learn Norwegian
6: Learn French

At the very least I'll have come out of this with a rounder education!

My corona virus schedule amuses me.
1: Wake up
2: Wake up
3: Grab a brush and put a little makeup
4: Hide the scars and...
this is u finished, also wake up occurs twice, do your dreams usually involve waking up before you really wake up? Or is this some reference to something?
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10564 on: March 24, 2020, 12:43:04 pm »

Here's an easier one: https://twitter.com/i/status/1240524636510552069


Or is this some reference to something?

Yes. As explaining it ruins the joke (what little there is to ruin), I'll allow you to do your own search. It should be fairly easy, as I just fit it into the existing template.
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10565 on: March 24, 2020, 12:45:55 pm »

On a related note, though, I often have morning dreams where I repeatedly dream that I wake up, realise I am still asleep, then wake up again, over and over again.

Do anyone else do that?
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10566 on: March 24, 2020, 12:48:05 pm »

I had that happen one night, it doesn’t happen very often though, maybe, actually I end up going through part of the day before waking up IRL
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« Reply #10567 on: March 24, 2020, 01:11:59 pm »

On a related note, though, I often have morning dreams where I repeatedly dream that I wake up, realise I am still asleep, then wake up again, over and over again.

Do anyone else do that?

No. Now quit bringing it up, or I'll wake up and end this whole dream.
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10568 on: March 24, 2020, 02:14:40 pm »

On a related note, though, I often have morning dreams where I repeatedly dream that I wake up, realise I am still asleep, then wake up again, over and over again.

Do anyone else do that?

It happened a few times.

On a related note, though, I often have morning dreams where I repeatedly dream that I wake up, realise I am still asleep, then wake up again, over and over again.

Do anyone else do that?

No. Now quit bringing it up, or I'll wake up and end this whole dream.

"You're waiting for a train..."
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10569 on: March 24, 2020, 03:11:52 pm »

I had that happen one night, it doesn’t happen very often though, maybe, actually I end up going through part of the day before waking up IRL

When I was younger they lasted longer, and I went longer into my daily life (often As far as brushing my teeth). These days I often don't even to stand up out of bed before realising I am still dreaming and then get out of bed again (repeatedly).

Very very annoying. Anxiety-inducing, even.
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10570 on: March 24, 2020, 04:27:51 pm »

I think we need to have more big discussions about the olympics. Not because anyone does or should give a shit about them, but because their spokesperson is named Dick Pound, which is more entertaining than the olympics ever has been (which still isn't much).
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10571 on: March 24, 2020, 04:39:04 pm »

Pounded in the butt by Dick Pound during the Olympics

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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10572 on: March 24, 2020, 05:37:00 pm »

Someone needs to email our Lord and Savior Chuck Tingle and ask him to write a Dick Pound book.
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Re: Things that made you laugh today: 10101 bits and counting
« Reply #10573 on: March 24, 2020, 06:04:12 pm »

One more. This aged well.

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« Reply #10574 on: March 24, 2020, 06:05:58 pm »

Oh man.  I wonder how they came to that conclusion for the US.
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