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Author Topic: Dwarven poetry (bad is the new good)  (Read 22807 times)

TurnpikeLad

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Re: Dwarven poetry (bad is the new good)
« Reply #60 on: April 14, 2023, 07:18:45 pm »

One more that I love.

"Autumn's breeze,
Leaves dance, like honeybees,

Stillness rests in the bare-limbed trees.
"

My only edit was to add "the" to make the syllable count correct. I'm impressed by how well it orchestrates the meaning of the three lines. It's quite profound.
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