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[Wyrdean]

Could A Raws Wiz help me add, fix, Review and otherwise further my goal for the Cause of !!Science!!?
Two Head Are Better than one After all!


The Creature:

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[CREATURE:Wyrdean]
[CREATURE_CLASS:ALL_CREATURES][DESCRIPTION:A gigantic guardian statue made of Torivorian Steel. The guardian can defeat most megabeasts with ease and is immune to almost all effects.]
[NAME:Wyrdean:Wrydean:Wyrdean]
[CASTE_NAME:Wyrdean:Wyrdean:Wyrdean]
[CREATURE_TILE:'W'][COLOR:0:0:0]
[FANCIFUL][FREQUENCY:0]
[NOPAIN][EXTRAVISION][NOBREATHE][NOSTUN][NONAUSEA][NOEMOTION]
[NOTHOUGHT][NOEXERT]
[NO_DIZZINESS]
[NO_FEVERS]
        [LARGE_PREDATOR]
[NO_DRINK][NO_EAT][NO_SLEEP]
[NOT_LIVING]
[CANOPENDOORS]
        [EQUIPS]
[NOFEAR]
        [PREFSTRING:percieved invincibility]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:STANDARD_BIPED_GAITS:900:300:200:100:1900:2900]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:STANDARD_CLIMBING_GAITS:900:300:200:100:1900:2900]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:STANDARD_SWIMMING_GAITS:900:300:200:100:1900:2900]
[APPLY_CREATURE_VARIATION:STANDARD_CRAWLING_GAITS:900:300:200:100:1900:2900]
[NATURAL_SKILL:MELEE_COMBAT:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:RANGED_COMBAT:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:WRESTLING:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:BITE:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:GRASP_STRIKE:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:STANCE_STRIKE:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:DODGING:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:MISC_WEAPON:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:AXE:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:SWORD:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:DAGGER:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:MACE:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:HAMMER:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:SPEAR:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:CROSSBOW:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:SHIELD:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:ARMOR:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:SIEGECRAFT:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:SIEGEOPERATE:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:BOWYER:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:PIKE:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:WHIP:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:BOW:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:BLOWGUN:16]
[NATURAL_SKILL:THROW:16]
[USE_MATERIAL_TEMPLATE:POISON:CREATURE_EXTRACT_TEMPLATE]
[STATE_NAME:ALL_SOLID:Touch of Doom]
[STATE_ADJ:ALL_SOLID:Touch of Doom]
[STATE_NAME:LIQUID:Touch of Doom]
[STATE_ADJ:LIQUID:Touch of Doom]
[STATE_NAME:GAS:Touch of Doom]
[STATE_ADJ:GAS:Touch of Doom]
[PREFIX:NONE]
[ENTERS_BLOOD]
[SYNDROME]
[SYN_NAME:Doom]
[SYN_AFFECTED_CLASS:GENERAL_POISON]
[SYN_IMMUNE_CREATURE:Wyrdean:ALL]
[SYN_INJECTED]
[CE_NECROSIS:SEV:1000:PROB:100:BP:BY_CATEGORY:ALL:ALL:START:30:PEAK:60:END:1200]
[NOBONES]
[BODY:HUMANOID:4ARMS:2EYES:HUMANOID_JOINTS:5FINGERS:5TOES]
[NO_THOUGHT_CENTER_FOR_MOVEMENT]
[TISSUE:Torivorian Steel]
[TISSUE_NAME:Torivorian Steel:Torivorian Steel]
[TISSUE_MATERIAL:INORGANIC:Torivorian_Steel]
[MUSCULAR]
[FUNCTIONAL]
[STRUCTURAL]
[RELATIVE_THICKNESS:1]
[CONNECTS]
[TISSUE_SHAPE:LAYER]
[TISSUE_LAYER:BY_CATEGORY:ALL:Torivorian Steel]
[BODY_SIZE:0:0:1000000000]
[BODY_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:HEIGHT:90:95:98:100:102:105:110]
[BODY_APPEARANCE_MODIFIER:BROADNESS:90:95:98:100:102:105:110]
[ATTACK:PUNCH:BODYPART:BY_TYPE:GRASP]
[ATTACK_SKILL:GRASP_STRIKE]
[ATTACK_VERB:punch:punches]
[ATTACK_CONTACT_PERC:1000]
[ATTACK_FLAG_WITH]
[ATTACK_PRIORITY:MAIN]
                [SPECIALATTACK_INJECT_EXTRACT:LOCAL_CREATURE_MAT:POISON:LIQUID:100:100]
        [ITEMCORPSE:STATUE:NONE:INORGANIC:Torivorian_Steel]
[ITEMCORPSE_QUALITY:6]
[DIURNAL]
[FIREIMMUNE]
        [CAN_SPEAK]
        [MEGABEAST][DIFFICULTY:100]
[PARALYZEIMMUNE][WEBIMMUNE]
[SELECT_TISSUE_LAYER:ALL]
[TL_HEALING_RATE:1]
[SWIMS_INNATE]
        [CAN_LEARN]
[OUTSIDER_CONTROLLABLE]
        [CASTE:GENERIC]

It's "Flesh":

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[INORGANIC:Torivorian_Steel]
[USE_MATERIAL_TEMPLATE:METAL_TEMPLATE]
[STATE_NAME_ADJ:ALL_SOLID:Torivorian Steel]
[STATE_NAME_ADJ:LIQUID:molten Torivorian Steel]
[STATE_NAME_ADJ:GAS:boiling Torivorian Steel]
[DISPLAY_COLOR:0:0:0]
[BUILD_COLOR:0:0:0]
[MATERIAL_VALUE:1000]
[SPEC_HEAT:7500]
[MELTING_POINT:25000]
[BOILING_POINT:50000]
[ITEMS_WEAPON][ITEMS_WEAPON_RANGED][ITEMS_AMMO][ITEMS_DIGGER][ITEMS_ARMOR][ITEMS_ANVIL]
[ITEMS_HARD]
[ITEMS_METAL]
[ITEMS_BARRED]
[ITEMS_SCALED]
[ITEMS_SOFT]
  [SOLID_DENSITY:2500]
[LIQUID_DENSITY:2000]
        [MOLAR_MASS:55845]
[IMPACT_YIELD:10000000]
[IMPACT_FRACTURE:10000000]
[IMPACT_STRAIN_AT_YIELD:0]
[COMPRESSIVE_YIELD:10000000]
[COMPRESSIVE_FRACTURE:10000000]
[COMPRESSIVE_STRAIN_AT_YIELD:0]
[TENSILE_YIELD:10000000]
[TENSILE_FRACTURE:10000000]
[TENSILE_STRAIN_AT_YIELD:0]
[TORSION_YIELD:10000000]
[TORSION_FRACTURE:10000000]
[TORSION_STRAIN_AT_YIELD:0]
[SHEAR_YIELD:10000000]
[SHEAR_FRACTURE:10000000]
[SHEAR_STRAIN_AT_YIELD:0]
[BENDING_YIELD:10000000]
[BENDING_FRACTURE:10000000]
[BENDING_STRAIN_AT_YIELD:0]
[MAX_EDGE:10000000]
[DEEP_SPECIAL]
        [STATE_COLOR:ALL_SOLID:BLACK]

[Putnam]

I don't in particular see anything wrong. IDs having spaces and non-capital letters is a bit weird, but I don't actually think that's a problem.

[Grimlocke]

Use

Two Head Are Better than one After all!

[BODY:HUMANOID_2HEAD:4ARMS:2EYES:HUMANOID_JOINTS:5FINGERS:5TOES].

[Wyrdean]

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I don't in particular see anything wrong. IDs having spaces and non-capital letters is a bit weird, but I don't actually think that's a problem.

Oops I have to fix that if only to make it look regular
Thanks!

Use

Two Head Are Better than one After all!

[BODY:HUMANOID_2HEAD:4ARMS:2EYES:HUMANOID_JOINTS:5FINGERS:5TOES].

Thanks
 

[Godlysockpuppet]

Look at some of Putnam's or Meph's stuff. Afaik, at least I haven't played around much since 34.xx, the most invincible enemy is one with a single bodypart (no severing possible, and no brain, organs or blood makes it immortal) that is made of a superhard material (Slade is best, makes it even more lethal in combat). Give it the dust interaction for more fun

[Putnam]

I'm a cheater, so my stuff tends not to be so good as an example.