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[VoxelMush]

Hello everyone!

I've started writing a DF story where each chapter is a historical report of the events of the past two weeks of The Eternal Planet, a world I generated just for this story. It's written in the perspective of a human scholar working for the Human Geographical and Historical Society, which publishes this report biweekly to make sure everyone is up-to-date on recent events!

If you were to read the story and give me your feedback, it would be much appreciated, thank you!

Here's the link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12422390/1/Historical-Reports-of-The-Eternal-Planet

[FallacyofUrist]

Neat. But short.

I'd suggest adding length by adding first-hand accounts of events.

[VoxelMush]

Neat. But short.

I'd suggest adding length by adding first-hand accounts of events.

Thank you for the reply! And yes, I'll include that somehow for the next chapter.