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Author Topic: Mong Kima - The Nation of Pearls (DF 0.47.05)  (Read 236527 times)

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Re: Mong Kima - The Nation of Pearls
« Reply #1050 on: July 15, 2018, 05:08:18 pm »

My pleasure really :')

I hope you guys are ready for the massive "screw everything" update of autumn 142
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« Reply #1051 on: July 17, 2018, 04:45:22 pm »

Alright, it is now time for "happy chill virtual kingdom : everyone dies edition". Brace.
OK that took me a long long time and it's far to be finished, but...well. It will one day.

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Tetzobsha (Brokenbronze) is the first real fortress made by the Nation of Pearls, and was funded in 125.
Altho it relied on experimental and now vastly outdated technology, it is still considered to be the father of all pearlite fortresses, and its success in keeping order in the western subcontinent is what inspired Queen Uzu to order the fundation of Thomocemir, five years later.
This is where the earliest soldiers of the country were trained, but altho where the architectural style of the whole country started to bloom.

Even if now Tetzobsha is an aging fortress, widely surpassed in technology and defensive power by Thomocemir, it remains the sturdier stronghold and has been tasked, for 17 years, to insure the security of all the pearlite settlements in the western side of the Land of Oak. And this is where our story begins.




11 September 142 at Tetzobsha
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As the attack took place in autumn, there would be a long time before officials from the kingdoms would notice Tetzobsha had gone silent.


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Six days earlier, 5 September 142, north of the central settlements
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The central settlements always had been a prime target for bandits, especially deserters from Osme Empire. Until 130, where troops from Tetzobsha were sent and thinned heavily their ranks, this area was among the most insecure places in the kingdom.
Defeated bandits, however, left a lot of stashed loot everywhere in the north of the settlements. However shunned, the profession of looter suddently became a viable one for the local farmers.

6 September 142, Lehmuhqihu, central settlements




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Lady Gisu and her husband, Lord consort Ulet, are the landlords of Lemhuhqihu, and are quite a peculiar bunch.
Lord Ulet, specifically, had been a bounty hunter for his younger years, hunting down criminals that would infect the southern cities.
He married Gisu during his travels, in 107 and soon after had their first child, but the man didn't stopped his profession as a hunter.

Two years later, in 109, he challenged a bandit leader, axeman called Hustra, who had already claimed the lives of two previous hunters sent against him. The two men fought for a long time, and Ulet cut one of his hands during the fight.
However, Ulet was defeated and had to retreat - but the wound he inflicted to his foe would later lead to his capture and execution, in 113.

The same year, they had a second child, that history will remember, as he would grow to become the sword teacher of Thomocemir, and be known as "Captain Thrathnu"

Gisu became the lady of Lemhuhqihu in 117, replacing the previous lord Thur, who died the year prior in the battle of Kostupu.

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7 September 142, Gicastenna, central settlements





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« Reply #1052 on: July 18, 2018, 02:31:47 am »

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« Reply #1053 on: July 18, 2018, 02:46:26 am »

Quite fitting

I hope you guys appreciate the format tho.

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« Reply #1054 on: July 18, 2018, 03:36:27 am »

It's a very nice way of formatting the story. It moves on between scenes quickly, although the old occasional comments on the characters internal feelings was nice too.
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« Reply #1055 on: July 18, 2018, 06:14:57 am »

That was pretty awesome!
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« Reply #1056 on: July 18, 2018, 01:08:38 pm »

Epic as always.

Do you have a roadmap/ideas for the next stories?
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« Reply #1057 on: July 18, 2018, 04:57:47 pm »

Thanks so much guys ;A; It took me efforts
As plans are concerned, the project should do 100-ish pages. More or less. I can't really draw a satisfying comic on an important event under 20 pages, and I have three happenings I want to tell. After that, it's free for all, the story as I played it stops at the new year 143

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« Reply #1058 on: July 19, 2018, 04:49:04 pm »

Wow, I haven't finished reading yet.  I'm cramped for time, but I've realized I can't just plough through it: this is a whole comic book and deserves full attention.  Fantastic.
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« Reply #1059 on: July 19, 2018, 04:53:51 pm »

Yep, 25 pages. This is litterally a comic book :') And it's not done yet

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« Reply #1060 on: July 21, 2018, 01:00:01 am »

Yep, 25 pages. This is litterally a comic book :') And it's not done yet
thank you cathar for the quality of your work.
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« Reply #1061 on: July 21, 2018, 02:55:40 pm »

My pleasure, it helps me to improve so I'm getting something out of that exercice ^^
Next update in... a few months (sorry)

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« Reply #1062 on: July 22, 2018, 01:10:46 am »

My pleasure, it helps me to improve so I'm getting something out of that exercice ^^
Next update in... a few months (sorry)
its okay as long as you don’t burn yourself out
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« Reply #1063 on: July 22, 2018, 02:51:27 am »

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« Reply #1064 on: July 22, 2018, 06:14:26 am »

Ptw. Much art. Such wow.
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