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Do you think I should test the ailment staff formula change in this game? Specifically changing the formula to Staff%= Staff hit + [(User MAG - Target RES) * 3] + (SKL*2) -(Distance between user and target x5)

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I don't care or am not a player, but I want to see what the people who do care think.

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Author Topic: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors OoC Thread: Closed  (Read 16804 times)

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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #45 on: September 06, 2017, 08:30:08 pm »

Alright, time for the wednesday night sheet review.

Lorelei, Scavenger -> Wanderer (WIP, still need backstory)

There's no bio but the build looks fine at a glance and the personal skills are fine. NEXT.

"They'll never make it past me."

Spoiler: Viola Sonnen (click to show/hide)

Bio is a little unspecific in terms of where Viola is currently living and I already poo-pooed the counter crit ps. Also I don't really get a good sense for who she is beyond smug animu. Apart from the counter crit ps she's fine mechanically though. NEXT.


Overworld sprite is wip along with sheet's bio.

https://pastebin.com/yfkjk3Kc

Press the Advantage is only going to give crit to the second attack, so if you're sticking with that, please update the ps to reflect this. You also didn't apply bonus points to your stats.





Spoiler: Trickster (click to show/hide)

If you applied bonus points I can't tell because I don't have performer bases memorized and you didn't denote where you put them reeeeeeeeee

Apart from that everything is fine. NEXT.

-holy hell, snip snip snip-
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That's a lot of fucking bio.

I'm going to ask for a different PS because stillness only works half the time anyway and I feel like that's kinda weaksauce to halve it. By the same token I'm not going to allow Ghost of the Fens because it gimmicks just a little too hard for me. Growths and Bonus Points are in place so that's fine.

Bio seems cool. You have some misspellings and a word swap here and there. Not that minor grammar foibles are going to be factoring into the selection process, just thought you should know. NEXT.


Ah, a familiar face!

PF is going to need to at least be pumped up to B, considering C is the lowest support level you can have. You also don't have enough progression, either in total or in HP. Did you mayhaps skim the rule changes? Naughty. NEXT.

The pirate has docked.


Spoiler: Fey Rasparola (click to show/hide)

Pirate lady with green hair eh? I see what game you're playing.

Mechanical portion of the sheet seems to be good. Bio is a liiiiiittle strange considering the time in which Kalgar was actively using their magic research to fuck up everything was some time ago, but its still workable. Seems pretty good overall. NEXT.

Woo! Anna time! Combat Axe Troub activate! ((once we're out of trainee levels anyway ;~;))

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The Annas continue their invasion of the Outrealms.

Sheet seems fine mechanically, and the bio seems... Kind of out there to be totally honest. But its certainly within standards of reasonableness for FEF. NEXT.

"My godly talents.....are far stronger than these mongrels!"

And a smug animu boy. Incredible.

I'm not a huge fan of you targeting named enemies because it basically means you're going to be a designated boss killer, since they'll be the only ones who have names generally. Then again that means it'll only be triggering on one enemy per map so... Conflicted. The Man Who Walks Toward Heaven is... Strange but I think I'll choose to permit it (even if it make him sound like an 80s manga protagonist). So overall the sheet is okay mechanically.

Theodore would not have heard of the strike team formation as the existence of the team is top level security clearance. So unless he somehow is monitoring high level military intelligence, there is no way for him to know before being approached. Of course him being approached is well within the bounds of reason based on his (in universe at least) talents. So with that detail fixed everything should be set. NEXT.


Boy you weren't kidding. Uh, your growths and bonus points seem to be allocated correctly.... NEXT.

Spoiler: comrade cat (click to show/hide)

Not a lot to comment on here, but the Personal stuff seems fine. Bonus points and growths are fine too. NEXT.

-snip-

Your growths are wrong. You appear to have 290 Prog when you should have 320 due to having a cost skill. The rest of your mechanics seem fine. Like with Theodore it seems very, very unlikely that Elanee would just happen to hear about the strike team or their mission. Otherwise the bio appears fine. And we're done!

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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #46 on: September 06, 2017, 08:36:19 pm »

Alright, I think I fixed what you mentioned (even though you borked my section of the review list :P )

Remind me in chat tomorrow to get the bio posted; I really should be in bed at the moment.
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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #47 on: September 06, 2017, 08:59:04 pm »

UM, AKCHYUALLY, i'm switching to male right now, as we speak.

also fuk u a few points of HP is useful in trainee levels
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« Reply #48 on: September 06, 2017, 09:15:54 pm »

For the record, going Cavalier > Duke Knight, and male
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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #49 on: September 06, 2017, 10:19:07 pm »

well tbf i generally iron out exactly who a character is once we get IC, but i've expanded the bio a bit

edit: planning on Sage

edit 2: center, not ignis
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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #50 on: September 06, 2017, 11:02:38 pm »

Ftr Monk->Inquisitor, Female
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« Reply #51 on: September 06, 2017, 11:03:34 pm »

more like cutie -> patootie
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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #52 on: September 06, 2017, 11:56:03 pm »

Goin' for Steward, Maturity
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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #53 on: September 07, 2017, 01:29:22 am »



Spoiler: Evra Opus (click to show/hide)
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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #54 on: September 07, 2017, 03:28:37 am »

I won't have to time to make a sheet before tomorrow.

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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #55 on: September 07, 2017, 05:06:01 am »

Spoiler: Character Sheet; Done (click to show/hide)
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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #56 on: September 07, 2017, 04:48:19 pm »

Rule Changes have been updated. Please check the rule changes to ensure that your build hasn't been changed in any way you aren't comfortable with.

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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #57 on: September 08, 2017, 06:08:27 am »

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Re: Fire Emblem on Forums: Death to Traitors
« Reply #59 on: September 08, 2017, 07:05:14 am »

You have a stray pixel in the hair.

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