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[Daren Kazzarch]

Curent state:

There was a landing sqare, just not a very visible one. Should i put it back?
Is the new addition recognizable as a dart board?

[RoseHeart]

Yes!

Wishlist?...

create an opening for the stairway(or is it already? my eyeballs can't tell)

row of stools in front of bar, scooting table for room

In general scooting everything in/zooming in. Storage room more to left.

Also, what do you imagine to be providing light?
You could pretend there is a fireplace on an "unseen" wall.

[Daren Kazzarch]

...uhh 'Yes!' to what exactly?
The opening is there, otherwise the railing would directly connect to its shadow.

Curently i just try to light it, so everything is visible. Haven't thought about it yet.

edit:
As for the lighting, i will probably put the light sources in places where there could be torches and whoever finnishes it up would have to draw them in, as i am incapable of rendering a convincing flame what so ever.

[RoseHeart]

Yes = Fuck yeah, dart board/benches brilliant

[Daren Kazzarch]

That's good to hear.
How about the stairs? Leave as is or turn back so they are more visible?

[RoseHeart]

Without rails looks better against the wall.

[Daren Kazzarch]

YOU MADE ME DO THIS!!!!!

[RoseHeart]

YESSSS

With the speed of your work, you may be able to make Fiverr work well for you.

I used to design logos, but the time-to-profit wasn't worth it. Just don't undersell yourself.

[RoseHeart]

Table/Lighting suggestions

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Medieval taverns tend to have these long tables. So just 2 normal ones connected.

[Daren Kazzarch]

edit: wrote this before i saw your last post

I am honestly a little stumped. What i have demonstrated so far are skills anyone could learn within a week. But thanks for the suggestion non the less, i will consider it.
Here is some more ambiance lighting.. If you imagine torches on the walls and a candle on the front right table.

[RoseHeart]

Let's pause

Currently I like your first one most of all.

I like that close shot, and what it shows. I also really like the lighting.

The tables are really dynamic.


New stuff I like.

Stools by bar.

Staircase

Dart and Trophy area.


Then, perhaps move mission board

To F2, trophies scooted down, perhaps . * . * . * zigzag for space. I can draw it.

Here

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[RoseHeart]

bump(edit)

I'm going to invite my friend Imic, for mideival knowledge.

[Daren Kazzarch]

Here you go:

The wood isn't as shiny as it was in the original, do ya want that back?

The lighting from outside generaly doesn't work too well, especialy near the ground, because then everything throws shadows all over the picture. Maybe if i was better at this, but sadly i am not.

edit: here is an camere angle closer to the original
edit edit: raisedtrophy plates over railling

[Imic]

I am here ifyou need information or advice.

[Daren Kazzarch]

I gues wathever sugestion to make it more medival tavernish without making it to cluttered would be welcome.

edit:
Just took a look at Fiverr and wow... i would be so out of my leage, it almost wouldn't be funny.