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BearsAndBrews

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Sling Lure, the saga of a surface fortress in a terrifying land
« on: November 22, 2023, 10:17:44 am »

Greetings fellow dwarflings,

I decided to tell the story of my latest of fortress in a short youtube series, appreciate any feedback!

episode 1: https://youtu.be/llR3zvggnKU

episode 2: https://youtu.be/EDTfodzzxtg

PS: the editing and filming gets better in episode 2
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Maloy

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Re: Sling Lure, the saga of a surface fortress in a terrifying land
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2023, 10:31:52 am »

Ah hype! Love more youtube dwarf fortress people! I'll come back to this later!

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« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2023, 01:06:14 pm »

The third and final episode is out, now with human narration, no more text-to-speech!
https://youtu.be/pSFT5PR6Nmo
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Maloy

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« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2023, 01:57:28 pm »

I like your set up a lot.I really enjoy how you will dig through peoples stories and picked a nice challenging biome with a lot of surface activity!

I'm inbetween on text versus actual voice. Text isn't as good as your actual voice, but your mic quality is struggling to really properly record your voice.
Just to clarify: Your actual voice sounds better I'm just talking about mic

Liking your series!

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« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2023, 03:51:54 pm »

yea, the microphone is not great, it is why I used AI voice in the first place.
But I`ll see what I can do,
Thank you for the feedback!
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« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2023, 07:14:59 pm »

I started a new series, using all I learned, hopefully the audio is much better, did the best I could.
Appreciate any feedback

https://youtu.be/34oG1Wd6Rk4
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