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Author Topic: Onra Acath, the World of Prophecy  (Read 1307 times)

Mohreb el Yasim

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Onra Acath, the World of Prophecy
« on: August 27, 2008, 02:38:55 pm »

Onra Acath, the world of Prophecy, at 1050:
Rakust Palaceshort, the mayor of Semoredėm:
-You asked for me my queen?
Shorast Portalvise, the queen:
-You know one month ago Udil guarded my dream, and she show me bad things as she always does.
-With all my honor for you queen, and there you know i am not just talking, don't let nigthmares bother your nigth.
-Ah dear Shorast these are not just dreams, but belive me i send spys out to see how the outer-world going.
-And what are the reports?
-You know those kobolds, the Fribis?
-Yes i heard about them but since a hundred of years they haven't bothered us.
-And that is exactly the problem, they was attacked by those goblins and humans wich came from the north.
-I still dont understand why should we care about them.
-We migth be the next if we don't do anything.
-Should we prepare to figth?
-You know as well as me that we won't attac them befor they do, but i planed to set up a mission for training military for the case it is neaded.
-Where would you do thet my majesty?
-North from here in the swamps of Isrirbothon.
-But there is no montains.
-And that is the point, none will look for us there.
-Even if i belive you with all my hard, how could we train soldires, or even live in a so muddy place?
-Scouts reported a small layer of obsidian on the surface.
-And why not go we just to the montains of west, none is living there?
-So you don't see the picture, goblins will notice if we go west. But north, none will think dwarfs can live in a swamp even humans haven't bothered to conquer, we just make a small camp and slowly year by year we will arm those solders with our caravans. Humans wont even concider us until we have a hole army, and then no more civilisation will have the possibilite to defeat us.
-But what if they discover us befor?
-Elfs live next to those lands, and kobolds too, we migth eventualy ask their help. They all hate humans, and goblins too. But i dont think they will notice us, goblins and humans are figthing and humans and elves are figthing too we can just pass next to them and never been remarqued.
-I doubt that that an army of dwarf can pass next to human cityes withouth been remarqued.
-That is why we just send 7 of dwarfs, and the others will come later, and our trading caravans shell take them ores to make their wepons.
-Understod majesty, i will look for those 7 brave dwarfs.
-While waiting i will pray to Nirmek and Gärem for their succes.

OOC:
-later i will add locations and images, and some legend info ...
-please consider that this is my first ty for a story fortress (or a story world maybe), and also that i am more a slow player and writer too.
-at the moment place chosen, but not jet embarked. So it is a half intro :D

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« Last Edit: September 24, 2008, 05:28:55 am by Mohreb el Yasim »
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