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AtomicDragon

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A Family tale
« on: December 10, 2008, 11:09:56 am »

Initially, the plan was to have a hermit with other dwarves rotating in long enough to have a strange mood before being 'liquidated' to make room for the next one.  But lo, my initial two dwarves fell in love and got married, and soon the pitter patter of little feet were heard running the halls.  Life was mostly peaceful, the dogs kept the thieves away, and their little home was of no interest to anyone but the passing traders. 

Soon, with enough of everything stockpiled against hard times, it was time to start the first project.  The young mother had always wanted a waterfall in the dining room, and father was willing to provide.  A system of pumps was designed leading from the well pit to above the dining hall.  Drains were built leading back into the same pit and a waterwheel was connected directly to the whole system.

As the last nail was driven into the waterwheel the entire system began to run.  A fine mist began to drift down into the family living quarters and mother squealed in glee at her lifelong dream.  Father brushed the sweat from his brow and smiled at his beaming wife.  Life was truly good.

Bliss quickly turned to shock however, as water began to flow up from the grates in the floor!  Mother grabbed the two children and fled to the safety of the bedroom.  Father quickly went to check the drainage system, but was forced back by a sudden gush of water erupting from the family well.  Why oh why hadn't he installed a safety switch in the pumps!  The machines were pumping as if possessed, drawing on the limitless supply of the nearby stream and feeding right into their small home. 

Wading back out through the dining room, Father quickly visualized the system in his mind.  The drainage system was clear, but the pumps were far more powerful than he had intended, unable to cope with the massive flow.  If he could disable the topmost pump, the water should be contained in the pump shaft untill some additional drains could be constructed.  The splash of water interrupted his thoughts.  He had easily outpaced the growing flood in the dining room, but why was water coming in the front door? 

Father was shocked at what met him outside.  The entire hillside was covered with water flowing down from above.  The carefully crafted pump system was pouring a flood down the mountain from an unanticipated leak in the upper pump chamber.  A quick look at the torrent was all it took to dash any hopes of reaching the pump.  Father dropped to his knees in dispair, his thoughts inescapibly centered on his wife and children.  The bedroom doors were watertight, but the dining room was now completely flooded and there was no other exit.  His family was doomed to a slow death from hunger or, ironically, dehydration.

Fathers hand tightened on his pick.  He would not be responsible for the death of his own family!
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AtomicDragon

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Re: A Family tale
« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2008, 11:31:01 am »

Father knew that to save his family, he would have to attack the problem at it's source, the waterwheel would have to be destroyed.  The maintenance tunnels were flooded, but he had built those tunnels with his own hands, and he could build more!

With a newfound superdwarven strength, father tore into the side of the mountain.  Stone flew away before his onslaught like kobold thieves in the jaws of his wardogs.  Wet stone only encouraged him to dig faster, untill soon he could hear the roar of the cursed contraption through the thin wall of remaining stone.

Taking a deep breath, the brave dwarf made his last swing.  As the wall fell away, Father was greeted with a chaotic hell of splashing water and whirling wooden blades.  The deafening racket of the overpowered machinery filled the tunnel almost as quickly as the deadly water.  The new tunnel was swiftly being flooded and he was driven back, away from the whirling demon.  Father pushed towards the waterwheel, but the flood in the tunnel was fierce, and pushed him back repeatedly.  Thinking only of his wife and children, trapped forever behind the doors of their home, brave father dwarf flung himself at the dangerously spinning blades and thrust his pick at the gears.

With a roar of cracking stone and breaking boards, the waterwheel collapsed into a pile of twisted wreckage.  As the water stopped surging and began to flow gently back into the drainage channel, Father lay still in the dark, catching his breath.  His family was saved from his own folly.  They would survive this disaster, and be able to recover, and that was a lot more chance than most Dwarves ever got.

The actual events of my family challenge game last night.
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DeadorK

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Re: A Family tale
« Reply #2 on: December 10, 2008, 06:39:13 pm »

This is getting pretty interesting, I like it.
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Re: A Family tale
« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2008, 08:17:33 pm »

That was awesome!  You're a great storyteller.  Is this a one-shot thing or will you be writing more?
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AtomicDragon

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Re: A Family tale
« Reply #4 on: December 11, 2008, 10:16:24 am »

One shot for now, although I will definitely add to it next time something interesting happens.
I was actually starting to panic when Father kept cancelling the job due to dangerous terrain with the rest of the family trapped.  It was surprising how attached I could get to the little guys.
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AtomicDragon

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Re: A Family tale
« Reply #5 on: December 11, 2008, 04:35:12 pm »

No action here today, just some setting and character building

Several days later, Father woke up hanging perilously off the edge of the bed that he shared with his wife and two children.  He supposed he would miss the family closeness someday, but now he was eagerly anticipating the day their children would move into their own rooms.  Gingerly arising so as not to wake the others, he grimaced at the sound of his feet squishing in the mud that had so recently become such a major feature of their home.  His office was clean, and thankfully so were the workshops, farms, and the hall of records where he had began carving the history of their family into the stone walls, but the cooking and living areas had all been coated with a fine layer of mud.

Father chuckled briefly at an idea of how to use molten magma to clean up the mess.  Perhaps not so soon after the waterfall fiasco...

Grabbing a biscuit from one of the barrels that had protected their food supply, as well as the precious beer, Father stepped carefully around the sleeping cats that seemed to be everywhere these days.  Mother loved the stupid pests, and they were breeding like nothing but cats could.  He had stuffed as many as possible into cages, thinking gleefully of the prices he would be able to get from those human traders who had wanted new leather backpacks so badly, but Mother refused to lock up any of her favorites, so they continued to run everywhere.  She had been devastated by the death of one who had drowned in the recent accident, the only casualty fortunately.

Stepping out of the fortress doors guarding home Father tripped and began to swear at the inevitable cat, but he stopped when he saw the obstruction at his feet.  He absentmindedly scratched the ears of one of the two dogs chained at the fortress enterance as he considered the mangled creature before him.  Another kobold thief had tried to sneak in and been stopped by the ferocious war dogs.  Father loved the dogs.  They bred almost as fast as the cats did, but the cats never brought him dead kobolds.  He dragged the corpse over to the makeshift dump where the body could rot until the bones were bleached and ready to be made into crossbow bolts.  Grabbing the copper knife the stupid creature had hoped to use against the dogs, Father tucked it into his belt to add it to his melt pile later.  These mountains were filled with coal and iron, but so far he was relying on the generosity of the kobold thieves dying at his door to be able to make steel.

A short jaunt around the hill and Father surveyed the results of his most recent labors.  A long trench ran from the top of the hill down to the stream.  The small pools of water still slowly drying on the mountainside bore testament to how important this simple ditch was.  The new waterwheel was disconnected from the pump system by a complex gear-and-lever system in case of emergency, but this new runoff chanel was what should release enough water back into the stream to give them a nice mist indoors instead of another disaster.  Father had not been pleased to add another opening, another weak point, to their secure little home, But if experience was any indicator it would take a colossus to navigate that channel once the pumps were activated.

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Re: A Family tale
« Reply #6 on: December 11, 2008, 11:39:07 pm »

This is entertaining, and it's nice to see a fort where the player actually gets attached to the dorfs.
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Re: A Family tale
« Reply #7 on: December 12, 2008, 01:10:07 am »

I agree. This is quite unique.
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