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Dakk

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« Reply #630 on: September 21, 2009, 07:44:16 pm »

And more cape and maul.
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« Reply #631 on: September 21, 2009, 08:18:18 pm »

i decided against the maul, since ingame cacame uses a warhammer, the cape is there, right next to his legs and feet... chosing the warhammer was my doom, cuz i never got it right and that's the major reason i got bored of this drawing

might still do a maul, though, the hammer is too much even for my mad skilz

and for the angry look, you guys are fools not to be afraid, that is some serious murderous hate in his eyes

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« Reply #632 on: September 21, 2009, 11:49:59 pm »

damn that's nice

lookin forward to seeing it finished!

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« Reply #633 on: September 22, 2009, 01:49:09 am »

I agree, I can see the barely-restrained rage there. It's very awesome, I'd love to see it finished.

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« Reply #634 on: September 24, 2009, 07:29:00 am »

Sava 2004 cancels read article : Making an engraving.
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« Reply #635 on: October 05, 2009, 06:46:22 pm »

A few days have passed from the time of the last post... but I hate the idea of letting this fall into shadow. -Dun dun dun- But yeah... I feel like writing a story about this guy... namely the first time the dorfs saw him and him leading to king, maybe... If its terrabad it can always be forgotten.
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« Reply #636 on: October 05, 2009, 06:55:55 pm »

I demand stories of cacame killing things.....  Hammering for the first dwarf I see who has not met my demands, oh there's one GET BACK HERE!!!!
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« Reply #637 on: October 05, 2009, 07:56:35 pm »

Who's Ironblood?
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« Reply #638 on: October 05, 2009, 07:58:33 pm »

*Points to DF Community And Stories*
He's the most badass dwarf ever since. From a Succesion/Community fort.
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« Reply #639 on: October 05, 2009, 08:03:09 pm »

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

A few notes...
-I did not think the dwarves would refer to themselves as "Marksmen"...
-This is a first draft, I have not really read over it and fixed things so yeah...
-I probably got allot wrong, I am new to the Dorf-Fort world.
-I did not name the commander dorf. I am no good at it, give me ideas.

EDIT: Added an ending by the Scribe.
« Last Edit: October 05, 2009, 08:06:38 pm by Scribe »
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« Reply #640 on: October 05, 2009, 08:08:50 pm »

Very, very good. You chose a fitting name for yourself.  :D Only things wrong i see are just a few grammatical errors, but thats okay.

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« Reply #641 on: October 05, 2009, 08:13:49 pm »

Grammar is my main issue. If I team up with a Grammar Nazi to fix my writing I would be unstoppable. *Insert evil cackling here*
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« Reply #642 on: October 06, 2009, 12:05:34 am »

That's pretty good.

Someone recently contacted me about doing a Wesnoth campaign about Cacame. So maybe that'll happen soon.

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« Reply #643 on: October 06, 2009, 04:43:23 am »

Scribe that is damn good, sent shivers.
i hope to see more of your writing, on this and other stories :D
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« Reply #644 on: October 06, 2009, 07:39:04 am »

Reading over my story very briefly I already found a few issues that need to be fixed. *Ka-shrug* I will probably get around to that sometime later today or tommorow.
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