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Lord Dakoth

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Short Story - The Mad Dwarf
« on: September 12, 2009, 05:24:44 pm »

Here is a story that I just wrote, on a whim. It's not that long, so please take the time to read it. Your comments are welcome, of course!

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Re: Short Story - The Mad Dwarf
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2009, 04:44:29 pm »

Very nice job I like you writing style.
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Re: Short Story - The Mad Dwarf
« Reply #2 on: September 25, 2009, 08:57:27 pm »

I approve.

Praise the Emperor that none of my dwarves have done the same!
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Re: Short Story - The Mad Dwarf
« Reply #3 on: September 26, 2009, 07:07:40 am »

Let it be known that that's a doubleplus extragood story. Nice characterization in the beginning.
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Re: Short Story - The Mad Dwarf
« Reply #4 on: September 27, 2009, 12:18:57 am »

Looks good. I'd like to know just what happened though...
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Re: Short Story - The Mad Dwarf
« Reply #5 on: September 27, 2009, 03:26:25 am »

She got possessed by the cat to make a statue that led her into a HFS?

Also... that's a really good story.
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Re: Short Story - The Mad Dwarf
« Reply #6 on: September 27, 2009, 02:19:33 pm »

I know that there is some ambiguity about what happened in the end of the story. I'll explain what actually happened. DO NOT READ if you haven't read it yet.

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Re: Short Story - The Mad Dwarf
« Reply #7 on: October 08, 2009, 09:38:43 pm »

Bump...  ::)
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