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Who is the best character(s) in this story?

Jervous (ratman)
- 7 (43.8%)
Slimdus
- 2 (12.5%)
The Ratmen
- 1 (6.3%)
El Ele'phant'ai
- 2 (12.5%)
Leechman Brown
- 3 (18.8%)
That Demon
- 0 (0%)
Nightwing
- 1 (6.3%)

Total Members Voted: 16


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Author Topic: Journey of a Man. A Ratman. Chapter 3 Complete. Ratty is back.  (Read 71930 times)

Jervous

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Re: Journey of a Man. A Ratman. Chapter 3 Complete. Ratty is back.
« Reply #480 on: August 30, 2010, 09:07:40 am »

You prepare to swoop down, but all the ratmen run towards the meat pile. You know you'll catch them, but suddenly you come face to face with a familliar sight..

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El Ele'phan'tai moves into your swooping path, charges toward you, and grabs you with it's trunk as it charges out of the cave and towards the wall surrounding it. It slams you once into the wall with blinding speed, then starts slamming you into the ground with it's trunk. It really hurts!

(goddamn chargers, the one-armed bastards)
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Labs

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« Reply #481 on: August 30, 2010, 11:33:19 am »

Bite! Claw! Gnaw!
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I like to slip into bear caves around midnight and gently caress the carnivore inside before leaving a small cut of fresh fish and sneaking out.

Armok

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« Reply #482 on: August 30, 2010, 11:52:51 am »

Try to get away! Fly out of reach!
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Jervous

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« Reply #483 on: August 30, 2010, 12:26:03 pm »

You try to get a bite on the trunk as the elephant slams you, but to no avail. You flap your wings, either trying to scratch or fly away, but the elephant has too strong of a grip. You drift off to unconsiousness...

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You are inside a cell with only one of your slaves. You assume the monstrous, hideous beasts have already butchered your others.


(Just a question, what can I do to spice up this forum game? More plot? Railroading? Stay as the ratman?)
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Armok

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« Reply #484 on: August 30, 2010, 01:56:56 pm »

I say you need more time shenanigans, more mating, and have some more well developed and likeable characters be the team of the one we're controlling.
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OmnipotentGrue

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« Reply #485 on: August 30, 2010, 05:18:01 pm »

In my honest opinion, I liked it a whole lot better when we were Jervous.
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« Reply #486 on: August 30, 2010, 05:22:49 pm »

In my honest opinion, I liked it a whole lot better when we were Jervous.

Same.
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OmnipotentGrue

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« Reply #487 on: August 30, 2010, 05:26:52 pm »

Nevertheless;

Converse with Nightwing slave.

      "Damn, I guess we're trapped in here. Want to have sex?"
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Armok

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« Reply #488 on: August 30, 2010, 05:28:24 pm »

well, yea, BECAUSE that had more developed characters and fanservice.
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Jervous

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« Reply #489 on: August 30, 2010, 05:52:06 pm »

I changed the characters a lot to develop them more for the plot. All of the characters have been introduced, but I guess Ratman is the most likeable of all so I'll try to just stick with using him as the main character.

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You try to speak with your slave, but she says nothing in return. You think the rock that hit her head must've really messed her up. You instead go and lay on the ground to get some sleep, and you finally black out...

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You are now the ratman again. Your head hurts and you feel woozy, but that won't stop you from interrogating this son of a sparkler. What do you want to question him about? Or maybe you'd prefer some torture?
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Armok

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« Reply #490 on: August 30, 2010, 06:00:21 pm »

Question him about local geography and entities!
Question him about nightwing stuff!
Question him about completely useless extremely embarrassing and personal things, during torture!
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Jervous

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« Reply #491 on: August 30, 2010, 06:05:57 pm »

You chat him up a bit. First of all you ask him about what he knows about the surrounding lands. He doesn't say anything important, infact he just babbles nonsense. He sounds really stupid. So, instead, you ask him about Nightwings, since that should be something he would actually know about.

He tells you about how they need blood to satiate their hunger, and everytime they suck the blood of a virgin, they turn into a nightwing and become bound to the nightwing that sucked their blood. After that nightwing dies, the virgin is no longer bound to that nightwing and may go about their own way.

You start asking him some very embarassing and personal things, but all he does is start talking about how nice life was back at home with the 'batmen'.

What an annoying guy.
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« Reply #492 on: August 30, 2010, 06:09:41 pm »

Set him on fire. Use the excuse that he is an abomination of nature.
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I like to slip into bear caves around midnight and gently caress the carnivore inside before leaving a small cut of fresh fish and sneaking out.

Jervous

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« Reply #493 on: August 30, 2010, 06:15:31 pm »

Tired of the Nightwing's bullcrap, you grab a log from the fire and try to set him on fire through the cell door bars. You miss, and hit the slave, which promptly catches fire. The Nightwing laughs and pushes the slave against the celldoor, which also catches on fire and breaks. You run as fast as you can in the other direction as the slave chases after you while on fire, in a berserk rage. Smoke quickly fills the hallway!

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oh god oh god
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« Reply #494 on: August 31, 2010, 12:30:56 am »

Get El Ele'phant'ai to block the corridor, then run outside and inspect approaching humans.
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