It was good. Better than a few others.
But there were still a few iffy things, I say.
If I misinterpret it, it is because I skimmed parts of it.
The Elf Druid is drunk. Very drunk. And the Princess. Yet they don't seem to be drunk. I mean, I guess it is different with everyone, but usually they slur their words. Or soemthing like that.
And I know the druid is crazy, but when he tells Itho to go on the quest, it seems very sudden. Its just like this:
Oh no, Forest god thing is dead.
YOU MUST GO ON A QUEST FOR REVENGE. HAHAHAHAHA I AM CRAZY.
Well, not exactly like that, but you get what I mean.
Itho seems to realize it was his brother very fast. And we never get a mentioning of his brother. It just seemed very strange. Maybe adding something of his grief for his brother's sudden and tragic disappearance, just before his marrying or whatnot to the princess. That could have tied a few things together.