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[TheBronzePickle]

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Twilight Sparkle smiled. It was a beautiful day in the beautiful land of Equestria, and Celestia's warm sun showed brightly overhead. She was happy to be allowed to gain knowledge from the many books Celestia so graciously provided her using the light from the sun that Celestia kept perched overhead in her love for Equestria. She had earned the privilege to read by judiciously cleaning the numerous records of the lies of things like darkness and night in Celestia's glorious name.

She looked out upon the amazing town in which she lived. Ponyville was blessed with clear skies and infinite sun, as was every town and city in Equestria. As she looked over the bookshelves, she spotted the many friends who she had become especially close to during her stay here.
Rainbow Dash laid upon the small, soft cloud she had earned as the glorious protector of the skies, keeping them clear of any evil thing that could block Celestia's light. Of course, it laid humbly upon the ground. Not even a personal servant of Celestia had the right to block Her sunlight.
Rarity sat designing new and beautiful clothing that showed vividly under Celestia's light, demonstrating its amazing capacity for beauty. The clothing was small, as Rarity would never wish to cover too much of a pony and prevent them from getting all of Her light.
Fluttershy led the many creatures blessed by Celestia's sun. She was the one who taught the winged creatures the wonders of walking so they would not block out the light.
Applejack tended to the plants which bore Her strength. She was a master of tending to the mighty trees, showing them the way to block very little of Celestia's light while still providing the sustenance that Her children needed.
Twilight's eyes finally reached Pinkie Pie. Pinkie had been a very disturbed girl, and Twilight had originally come to Ponyville to show her the way of Celestia's light. Now she did very little. Most of her time was spent gazing upon Her sun. She always had something to say when Twilight walked over, however, and Twilight enjoyed speaking with Pinkie.

Pinkie stared into the sun, keeping her eyes wide despite the pain. It was the last thing she could think of. A way to prove that Celestia's light was not pure. Her sight was a small sacrifice in the name of the truth. She would reveal the wrongs that Celestia had done to the world, to her own sister. The sun beat down upon her weary eyes.

Never actually read 1984, so I have no idea if this is anything like it. It's probably pretty far-flung from it, but it's what I thought up.

[Flying Dice]

I honestly think it would fit a bit better with "Brave New World". Hell, the Everfree is practically a reservation as it is, and the cutie marks and races are rough equivalents to the enforced social classes. The ponies all act as if they're on Soma, too.

You've got the Elements of "Community, Identity, Stability".

"And that," put in Celestia sententiously, "that is the secret of happiness and virtue-liking what you've got to do. All conditioning aims at that: making ponies like their inescapable social destiny."

"What pony has joined, nature is powerless to put asunder."

Re: Cupcakes: "One cubic centimeter cures ten gloomy sentiments."

I mean really, I just pulled some of the more famous quotes and they all fit perfectly.

[TheBronzePickle]

Haven't read that either.

I don't think I'm quite prepared in the literary department to make such a fanfic, now. I'll let someone else take the ball and roll with it.

[Dsarker]

I'll pull out a short part for 1984 RE Ponies in a bit.

[Flying Dice]

I just watched The Best Night Ever after EqD in Polish after EqD pointed out that Spitfire has a male VA in it. The whole episode. It was strangely alluring.

[Dsarker]

It was a bright cold day in Spring, and the clocks were striking thirteen. Twilight Sparkle, her head turned down in an attempt to escape the vile wind, slipped quickly through the glass doors of Victory Mansions, though not quickly enough to prevent a swirl of gritty dust from entering with her.

The hallway smelt of boiled cabbage and old rag mats. At one end of it a coloured poster, too large for indoor display, had been tacked to the wall. It depicted simply an enormous face, more than a metre wide: the face of a mare of about forty-five, with multicoloured, translucent hair and alluringly beautiful features. Twilight made for the stairs. It was no use trying the lift. Even at the best of times it was seldom working, and at present the electric current was cut off during daylight hours. It was part of the economy drive in preparation for Hate Week. The flat was seven flights up, and Twilight, who was thirty nine and had a varicose ulcer on her right ankle, went slowly, resting several times on the way. On each landing, opposite the lift shaft, the poster with the enormous face gazed from the wall. It was one of those posters which are so contrived that the eyes follow you about when you move. BIG SISTER IS WATCHING YOU, the caption beneath it ran.

Inside the flat a fruity voice was reading out a list of figures which had something to do with the production of pig-iron. The voice came from an oblong metal plaque like a dulled mirror which formed part of the surface of the right-hand wall. Twilight turned a switch and the voice sank somewhat, though the words were still distinguishable. The instrument (the telescreen, it was called) could be dimmed, but there was no way of shutting it off completely. She moved over to the window: a smallish, frail figure, the meagreness of her body merely emphasised by the blue saddle which was the uniform of the Party. Her mane was very dark, her face naturally sanguine, her hide roughened by coarse soap and the cold of the winter that had just ended.

[Dsarker]

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[Drago55577]

-|random question|-



whats your favourite pony/ponies in MLP?

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Rainbow Dash and fanfic one TechHorse

[Dsarker]

Fluttershy is best pony.

[Drago55577]

but shes so shy, well she talks to animals...Rainbow Dash!

what i thought of TechHorse

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it was good, im nearly done but a few things were bad in it, the teleporter cannons for humans? magic and humans dont go together and the robots were cylinders with 2 red eyes on tank treads with a tube that was a teleporter cannon. But the part that i didnt like a little was *read next spoiler*

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well il tell you if you wanna, i dont wanna ruin the story

[Trapezohedron]

Seriously guys, Spike is Best Pony.

/trollface

[Dsarker]

Rainbow Dash couldn't even get herself et by a dragon.

[Drago55577]

et?

but shes cool and here is the spoiler to techhorse read at your own something

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The part was when Rainbow dash said she liked(or loved i think) TechHorse but TechHorse said he loved Twilight Sparkle instead

[Fniff]

Fun idea for fanfiction.

Mane six go to a little known country named Russmare on a diplomatic mission to make friends! Then it turns out that Russmare is a Soviet dictatorship with a huge fantasy of killing everyone in Equestria and extremely advanced technology, up to and including nuclear weapons. Then a civil war breaks out between two sides who equally hate Equestria in different ways and what little order remained is completely gone. The Mane Six have to escape Russmare and warn Celestia before any of the two sides start a war against Equestria using their highly advanced technology. Gets worse from there, ends with one pony surviving, the rest being broken before killed horribly.

[Neyvn]

Girlfriend and I are up to Episode 23....

She is starting to get into it, I am just loving the comedy. Not Broney, but still finding it funny...