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Cryxis, Prince of Doom

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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #1290 on: March 27, 2015, 05:32:57 pm »

Ya, partner is having his bookworm mom look through it and is going to revise it. I just felt like putting it here cause I typed all of that version and felt like I haven't posted anything here for awhile.

I'll get the edited copy on Monday.
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« Reply #1291 on: March 27, 2015, 10:00:03 pm »

I'll be posting some "literature" as a supplement to my world-building project (Tsust) here.

This first one is an excerpt from the Teachings of Sa-Ko, a "Walking-God" who preached in Kubo about 5000 years before the present day. He is currently one of the gods of Kubo.

Spoiler: The Sermons of Sa-ko (click to show/hide)
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« Reply #1292 on: March 30, 2015, 12:31:37 pm »

This is an excerpt from a "textbook" written by a prominent scholar of magic from the University of Theasta (the largest university in Tsust).

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« Reply #1293 on: March 30, 2015, 11:45:29 pm »

I'm torn between actually posting something and simply lurking around this thread
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #1294 on: March 31, 2015, 02:56:36 am »

Post away!
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« Reply #1295 on: March 31, 2015, 04:09:21 am »

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« Reply #1296 on: March 31, 2015, 04:24:57 am »

Preferably after spellchequing, but we can do that too!

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« Reply #1297 on: March 31, 2015, 06:24:54 am »

Oh jeez. Do I just...write a lil story?
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #1298 on: March 31, 2015, 07:00:10 am »

When Object has some time, he'll finish off this round of the standing competition and the winner will post two prompts. Alternatively,

Prompts for the Bored!

A tale about peace and a dungeon delver.
Listen closely to the whispering.

Shamelessly ripped from a number of prompt generator sites. Hopefully I'll write something on them. Or finish that thundered story I was supposed to finish sometime... last year?
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« Reply #1299 on: March 31, 2015, 03:01:48 pm »

Oh jeez. Do I just...write a lil story?
Or a poem!

Let's not forget the poems :P
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« Reply #1300 on: March 31, 2015, 03:05:50 pm »

well no edits were made to the story by my partner sooooo
Any comments on the story outside of grammar errors, maybe suggestions for how to continue the story, comments on the plot as a whole, maybe something in the plot that makes it a bad story or something that I do that might hurt the story telling as a whole besides the grammar.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #1301 on: March 31, 2015, 03:59:49 pm »

I've been lurking around here for quite a while as well. I've considered submitting something for quite some time now, I've just never done it.

Just like I've been staring at the poetry thread for six months trying to will myself to post some of my writings.  :-[
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« Reply #1302 on: March 31, 2015, 04:06:36 pm »

Seems there's never a big demand for poetry :/

Still, you're more than welcome to post whenever you feel like it! :P
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« Reply #1303 on: March 31, 2015, 04:12:54 pm »

More prompts for the bored:

Space-age journalist/investigative reporter

"No still lightning"
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #1304 on: March 31, 2015, 06:01:42 pm »

Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Oh, could y'all not quote anything I write? Just in the vain hope that I may ever want to submit it to anything, so I don't have to ask people to wipe their quote before I can submit.

Thanks!
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