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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #1785 on: June 01, 2017, 03:43:24 pm »

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Keeping the oral tradition alive by telling stories over Discord, apparently. This is a traditional folk tale, but I've forgotten which African culture it's from. ;_;

Apologies for the weird formatting. Like I said, story told over Discord. :p
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« Reply #1786 on: June 07, 2017, 06:29:13 pm »

Nice story!

I came here for some advice on story structure. How should a scene/chapter be laid out? I've never had any instruction in story lore, so suspect my efforts are similar to those of a child gambolling through a field of wheat.

A la May, I suppose.
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« Reply #1787 on: June 08, 2017, 08:37:00 am »

The most important thing to remember is that everything ought to move the story forward in some way. It could be as little as a scene providing insight into a character's personality, or as big as a chapter bringing the world to the edge of destruction, but the key to writing a readable story is pacing, and the key to pacing is not wasting the reader's time.

As for me, I tend not to write in explicit chapters when I go through a story for the first time. If it's long enough to warrant them, I'll go back and add the breaks during the first edit. There are usually obvious places to put them, and in my experience, it's very hard to read a story for pacing and chapter splits as you're writing it.

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« Reply #1788 on: June 08, 2017, 10:08:53 am »

So the microstucture, as it were, isn't something like the macrostructure of the book? Always have conflict leading to resolution type thing?
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« Reply #1789 on: June 08, 2017, 10:15:10 am »

Not necessarily. I'd say the classic SF&F novel works on a model of rising tension on the micro scale, until the end. That said, one problem whose resolution leads to a bigger problem whose resolution leads to a bigger problem is a classic story structure, and that has the fractal aspect you were talking about.

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« Reply #1790 on: June 08, 2017, 10:21:45 am »

Nice story!

I came here for some advice on story structure. How should a scene/chapter be laid out? I've never had any instruction in story lore, so suspect my efforts are similar to those of a child gambolling through a field of wheat.

A la May, I suppose.

Any sub-unit of storytelling, I.E. a scene, sequence, chapter, et al. is usually defined in the same way its parent story is. Assuming you're writing off the more practically-oriented 3-act structure, a scene is laid out roughly the same way.

basically:

Character wants something -> obstacle -> apparent success or failure -> complication of problem -> pivotal moment (the character may or may not get what they want--that's up for you to decide.)

To speak to pacing, it's ultra important. A good metric is to follow is that depending on how large your story is (A novel can meander much more than a short story or screenplay can) every chapter/sequence/scene should reveal:

1.) The character's personality/their "character" for a lack for a better word.

2.) The world. World-Building is incredibly important, the environment should reflect the characters' emotions, the obstacles, the mood, etc. You can really do anything and everything when you properly reveal the world to the reader.

3.) Advance the plot or otherwise pile on the obstacles, problems, and misery for your characters. Forcing your characters into action in the short term to keep us reading, and increasing the tension in the long run--the combination of wanting to find out how a scene ends, and whether or not it will all work out for our protagonist at the end of the story is a winning combination.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #1791 on: June 23, 2017, 04:17:09 pm »

Hello everyone, I actually wrote something I'm happy enough to publish (on reddit, but that's kinda-sorta publishing)!

https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/6j40ok/oc_rescue_of_sargon_1/

It's about 1700 words, pack of mercenaries planning a rescue mission in a sci-fi setting.

Anyone wants to comment or critique it at all, I'd definitely appreciate it.
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Re: ___/The Writer's Apprenticeship\___
« Reply #1792 on: October 12, 2017, 05:21:36 pm »

Doing a creative writing course once a week for a month and a half just for the fun of it.

First homework (A place familiar to you):

The grass is green along the verge, while above the heavens are scattered with orange, red and gold. The colours of autumn are played against the sky’s vast screen, and apples, sweet and hard and small, litter the ground. It is an orchard. Here, I have often gone, for there is a silence present amongst the branches and boles which is lacking elsewhere; a sense of Eden, from which the first fruit tree sprang.

A path winds, weary with wear from many feet, overgrown now with weeds and wilderness, between the brownness of those boles. It bears the promise of adventure in its deep groove, a knowledge that here could become there. Such possibility is a spice added to the dim rustle of leaves, the scratchings of animals. Close your eyes, and you will see – the orchard bears more fruit than apples.

But it is also alive at night. Above, the moon keeps the stars company, and the light of the house seems by far more distant. A quiet breath, a deep inward breath, blows over all, and the trees speak to one another in soft, cellulose voices. Leaves trail the ground in deep drifts, for winter comes, and they must shed their clothes. There, in the darkness of that night, a wooden pallet structure hides, covered in briar and bramble; a childhood haunt, with trapdoor in the back, fashioned from my own young hands for some never-needed escape.

In a way, the orchard itself has become that escape. Never truly needed, but still there; safe, present, and waiting.
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« Reply #1793 on: October 16, 2017, 11:09:34 pm »

While not a new piece of work, I thought that I'd mention that all of my (self) published works are available for free - and will be until Friday the 20th.

Take this opportunity to read my finest (or at least most edited and polished) works!

Amazon Reviews/Ratings (especially good ones - although I'd honestly rather get honest feedback than pats on the back) appreciated!

Links are in my signature.

Note to self: Get back to writing! It's been nearly a year since you last really put some time into writing new stuff!
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