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Author Topic: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)  (Read 199106 times)

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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #690 on: August 12, 2019, 10:26:33 pm »

Yes, thank you as always Criperum :)
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You wake up in (suddenly) your room not somewhere Armok knows where. Travels in deserts and goblin forests turned up to be a dreams borned by procreation of your autistic imagination.

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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #691 on: November 06, 2019, 11:56:52 am »

Sweet Armok's tears, the translation is still going! Thanks Criperium, that's warming my heart you picked up.
Nice to see you areount too, CaptainLambcake, most loyal follower of the story hehe.
UPD.: I am no linguist myself nor too good in knowing English but I suggest you translate using Past simple, e.g. "You flinched" Instead of "You flinch" or "You stroke a menacing pose" instead of "You strike a menacing pose". That's just more accepted way for storytelling. Keep up the good work!
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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #692 on: November 06, 2019, 02:57:51 pm »

I actually tried both ways. First in past tense then in present. I understand that in Russian past tense storytelling is more used but i think here it won't give you any profit and it makes it harder to express things that happend in the past relatively to the main events. That's why I use present tense now.
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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #693 on: November 08, 2019, 04:22:16 am »

Ahem... why don't you continue?

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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #694 on: November 08, 2019, 10:07:11 am »

Aw heck, why not, I guess two translators are better than one, huh. Milage may vary.
Damn I remember nothing about preparing posts to look good. Let's roll anyway.
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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #695 on: November 08, 2019, 01:34:42 pm »

Let's do a few more
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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #696 on: November 08, 2019, 05:52:58 pm »

Here is some more
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This dialog sounds just as bizzare in original text, it's not me messing up translation, I swear.

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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #697 on: November 10, 2019, 09:48:29 am »

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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #698 on: November 10, 2019, 11:21:57 am »

Ahem... why don't you continue?

Because i'm a lazy shmuck.
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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #699 on: November 28, 2019, 02:39:55 am »



>Ask him if there's cave wheat cutlets with pasta on the menu
>Let's introduve our new friend to our mates
>Find out what's going on in the fortress
>Pretend we are local / ask where the soap workshops are

You raised your red eyes and sobbed:
- Do you have cutlets?
- Of course, - the dwarf nodded, - Made of plump helmet. Now we have everything made of plump helmet.
- Even the skies? - You got to your feet.
- Forget about the sky for good, - he put a hand on your shoulder and led you down the corridor. - You've been sitting there for a long time. Must be missed all the news?
You looked back at the wall. Armok was still there, winking about something to the dick. Then he caught your eye:
- You can go, we here must finish one little business.
The Idol smiled mysteriously and slowly closed the door. You decided not to focus on it:
- Is Republic all right? - you glared at your guide.
- For sure! The plan is put into effect, "goblin fodder" slays everyone who is against us up there, and then our Smoky Monster will choke them as well. Then it will remain to guard the upper halls from any intervention. Or maybe it’ll get out and leave - we don`t give a shit. What's matter is that we are now our own masters! No more nobles and their whores - queens. Only mines, narrow tunnels, dark caves! All treasures are for us! A bright future has come, brother! Hurry up and grab the pickaxe! Dig the adit!
You kept staring around:
- Do you make soap around here?
- why the hell would we? Soap is for kid-gloves like that damned Shorast Oninoagak, but we are hard workers, our calloused fingers are not for rubbibg tits, we dig up the womb of the mountain. We touch its very essence. Soap here is an absolutely superfluous attribute. Besides, it's the attribute of the nobility, and therefore undoubtly offensive! We wash ourselfs with clear water without any perfumes and poultices here. Got it? - he slapped you on the shoulder, and laughed.
You just came to the well where some dwarfess was washing her face.
- See ya, brother, till next time in the excavations. Don’t wander around here anymore, you've seen what shit might happen. So... the canteen upstairs already works by the way. Go glut yourself with all the plump helmet dishes, - he slapped you on the shoulder again and left down the corridor.
The woman looked up at you:
- Well, what was this all?
- This what? - You didn`t understand.
- What`s with your hair? Why is the beard white? "I’ll just drop one mug!", "Magma workshops and all stuff!" Told you not to go there - no, you got drunk like an animal. Where have you been all week? Drinkin booze to unconsciousness? Look at you - drank up to gray hair!
You stared at a stranger:
- Who are you?
- Hello there! - she threw up her hands, - I`m Sedil ... your wife.
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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #700 on: November 29, 2019, 09:40:21 am »

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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #701 on: December 02, 2019, 11:47:21 am »

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Edited as close as possible to keep the spirit of the original post. Basically that out-of-place piece is like almost any gaming video of russian youtube.
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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #702 on: December 09, 2019, 09:05:41 am »

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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #703 on: December 11, 2019, 10:14:57 pm »

looks like some images from previous pages are broken, do you mind if i rehost then on imgur?
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Re: Adventures of Likot Udendeb(SoapEater), illustrated (+video now!)
« Reply #704 on: December 12, 2019, 09:55:38 am »

looks like some images from previous pages are broken, do you mind if i rehost then on imgur?
Oh yeah, go ahead! I've seen some of them but it seems fellas who posted them are long inactive mostly. If you need any of the images, I have almost complete archive of older threads.
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